Motion Feedback:

M 500
- render front and back arms on different planes (->Rob)
- frame 52-56: take away linear spline
- fix left arm going through yurt
- three really similar poses starting at ~50, take a couple away
- poses at about 42 and 46, weight shift needs to be more to the left (moreso on 42)
- try to get it so the dress doesn't go through the boots
- move whole body in wave, overlap on arm

M 700
- focus on two/three-step hug (not getting all pieces into position one part at a time)
- ~frame 75 starting pose
- put beginning of galloping hors in
- main motion in squeeze, focus on that first and foremost

oyon_walk
- SPEND AN HOUR ON IT (already reads from a distance)
- hip, shoulder movement, kind of stiff now
- head down, sad

A 650
- Oyon: pigeon like motion on head (forward head movement, backward body movement)... eliminate: more follow through by tilting head down instead of forward

D 800
- get rid of stepped hand movement (POP) - frame 89/90
- take out the mouth motion (no open)

U 200
- make door motion 1.5 times slower
- parent log onto hands

U 1500
- no head shake
- neutralize mouth

U 1700
- slow-in slow-out
- rest of body needs to move with the head
- neutralize mouth in order to avoid "ape mouth" and/or "duck mouth"

D 1900 - note: please change body motion as well
- mouth can open but don't shut it, hold on the open mouth
- do moving hold after pose on frame 52, don't move Mei back
- move quicker into pose on frame 52

A 1000
- more of a pointing pose in beginning of shot on Mei hand
- trace path, angle hand in the direction of the path
- tracing the path could go faster
- Oyon's hand should hold the cup fully from the beginning, fingers shouldn't tighten around it as it moves into frame
- bring Oyon's hand in a little earlier (10 frames?)

I 900
- add about five seconds of Mei baby crying in to the beginning of the shot


Facial Expressions:

A 1100 -> Elizabeth

A 400: done!

D 1300: done!

U 1300: done!

A 650: done!

A 1300:
- close eyes in hug

G 200:
- closed mouth fake smile

A 300:
- wait till render

D 900:
- end shot after shock, do moving hold
- need white on eyes
- eyebrows start lower, go higher on shock (right now it's the other way around)
- see robert_ref.tif in iteration file