Age 300 good job. check render for mouth motion. Age 500 Looks very good death 1900 end the expression at the mouth open. Don't shut the mouth.   Work on hair -- too floaty and show.. goodbye 200 -- expressions look good more? we don't see any other expressions to review. age650 age 1300 age 300 age 500 death900 death800 Happy goodbye 200 -- get rid of pops -- Robert work with Happy** age 200 -- After the needle drop, relax the left hand fingers and then retract in pain. Age 1000 For the first one -- we need to see the texture to see what is really going on. Can you render it out for tomorrow so that we can see it? The hand in the beginning looks kind of floaty but it may just be that I can't see what you see. Goodbye 400 bring the last wave toward the head back slower -- let the mouth expression change and then bring the hand down. Death 200 take motion out of the arms. replace with slight weight shift.. fix feet pop. Smooth POp in head turn... Death 300 Move the left  arm down to the elbow. remove abrupt back shift back. Plant feet.  Make sure that there's very little motion except the slight head turn. Second version with no smile... Death 500 Lean back to pillow... scoch her back to pillow. wrist slightly slower and not as rotated. put needle in... Death 700 Remove the head up and replace with continuing with the head down in the same position.. bring smile back to neutral at end of shot. Goodbye 200, just have the wrist follow the elbow. You are probably better off being too stiff than too loose on the waving motion at this point. Hopefully you can find a happy medium where the motion of the wrist doesn't look like the forearm is broken. Good luck with this. For 400, we had a plan that sounded good to me -- bring the wrist down while rotating it so that it looks less robotic and unnatural. You will need to bring the arm down faster -- right now it looks quite floaty.  The facial expressions look really good! It's definitely looking much better. Death 100 File crashes...  someone needs to let her load the file from another account. Ryan is game :-) Ryan Death 900 let jaw drop slightly during death surprise. remove head forward. Chat with Jason about getting the expression to read. Age 1200 Magic 600 add one more inbetween do hair and scarf follow through.. strobing? render the middle one -- no srobbing age 1200 too zombie --in beginning.. use either another  blink or slight squint on Oyon. clothworld expressions INtro 900 mouth lines go inside the geometry -- show Jason. INtro 1100 motion on the scarf... motion too smooth?remove far cheek... mouth closer to the edge.  fix scarf and hair Magic 400 Brian's Age 1300 Oyon s head too far forward? Expressions Goodbye 100 touch up hands.. timing slower?