A 800 green lit U 300 - arch in Mei's back too extreme, looks broken - move from hips - check extension of shoulders (weight painting, back movement?) U 600 - time motion out - timing at end too fast - watch the arc of Mei's hand as she goes to pick up the scissors - work on getting the scissors into her hand slower, and make sure the hand doesn't go through the floor - hesitation is robotic U 900 - slow down Mei's over the head motion, specifically from about frame 75 to frame 90 slow the arms down - smooth out scarf motion, a bit twitchy - try to line up the scarf removal in frames 27-34 with Mei's hand U 1000 - see previous notes for moving/posing the hands - arms should move even less - do the hands first, then the scarf U 1500 - head shake is pretty good, just need to smooth out motion (looks a bit robotic now, see Robert)