A 1000
- punctuate motion (too floaty/underwater)
- arcs

I 1100
- get silhouette of the grab down
- pull should be fast
- try revert to smaller scarf or a medium scarf

A 1100
- whole body needs to move from the hips (don't just move the head!)
- slow in to the second pose
- see storyreel for facial expressions

A 1200
- start Mei turning at the end of the shot, see next shot for continuity
- arc too extreme on turn, just slow in to second pose (no follow through/bob motion)
- "still motion" on Mei before turn

G 100
- see own notes

D 100/150
- profile of Mei, not head on
- make pose closer to storyreel (sitting too high up currently)

D 1000
- push hand on ground later

C 300
- hold jar in a fist, hold close to Mei's waist (arm straight down)
- down opening too slow
- need to show door has weight

M 500
- stepped mode only
- first step out needs work

M 600
- camera: don't move in!  too perspective... on zoom only use focal length... CW characters need to be flat
- Oyon motion better, continue work on run



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I 500
- give way more time to this shot, let Oyon/Mei swinging motion complete, closer in on this
- hide cloud under Oyon/baby yurt

G 200
- Oyon's wave should be more solemn/goodbye-ish

G 600
- start with 3321 pose in may 26 motionmatic
- most emotion contained in facial expressions
- end of shot, show Oyon's private depressed face

D 500
- turned more toward the camera, both feet off the edge of the bed

C 200
- shorten (cut after the third step)
- add birds in

C 900
- needs more time for the tears to drop into frame

U 200
- Mei should just be pulling to door open (not hitting open)

M 100
- start with NO wind, then gust

M 200
- look more toward the horse, notice it earlier, facial expressions