A 100
- do whole shot with Oyon happy (no hint of sickness)

A 300
- don't move head down at end (keep head up)
- Oyon can finish her breath, just don't collapse chest
- don't put hand on chest, use breathing/expression to sell the beginning of pain

A 500
- more 3/4 view like the story reel so we can see Oyon's face
- start with one hand (left) on chest, put second hand on chest at beginning of shot
- sickness/pain is mostly internal, as Oyon is stoic - don't make melodramatic but make it clear
- see Robert for reference:
- 1) no jolts of pain/heaving motions
- 2) two poses: one sick, one a a little more extreme, but not past the pose you see in the storyboard
- 3) expression: use Gary Faigin's pain expression, but no more than 30% intensity

A 600
- let's just not see Oyon in the background (reframe shot)

A 700
- don't look up at Mei in the end of the shot, have both hands on chest