Brian

C 200
- see own notes

C 600-900
- see Andrea feedback

I 500, D 1100, D 1200, D 1300, D 1600 - no update



Elizabeth

A 400, A 800 - no update



Happy

I 1400, A 1000, D 2000 - no update



Daren

M 100
- see previous notes

U 400,D 2100, M 200 - no update



Jimmy

I 300, I 400, U 1800, D 1800, U 1600 - no update



Ryan

D 900
- don't pull Oyon back at all, shoulder motion is nice (make subtler though)
- expressions: surprise/shock, then fear (see reference in facial expressions book)
- should be communicated mostly through the face
- transition to shock should be short

C 800
- need to see with facial expressions
- hide mountain tip
- needs the birds in there, set up motion paths
- try not to put the bird flying in front of Mei's face
- more inbetween frames
- Marianne: light slowly moving down (simulate sunset)

C 900
- Oyon should already be sewed on the quilt and Mei is missing her
- have Mei trace the edge of Oyon's figure with her index finger, hand pose relaxed, light touch
- both hand and cloth figure should be bigger
- Brian is responsible for making sure that we have stitches in the shape of CW Mei, see Brian for shape

I 200, D 600, U 700 - no update



Andrea

C 700
- follow through on tail
- body should move a bit in the cycle
- head has to lead, body follows, then tail follows through
- flaps faster
- bird forward movement should correspond with the flaps - quick in the beginning, then more of a swoop (on glide)
- end of the bird motion should stay in frame (join other birds in circling)



Marianne

M 600, C 300, I 1000, I 1200 - no update