Class notes on shots, Thursday, 6/1

• Raise girl's eyes more. Her eyes need to look into grandpa's eyes more directly.
• When girl is looking at grandma, the grandma should stare at grandpa at that moment.

• When girl walks out of the scene at the end, her arms are a little stiff. Need more shoulder and torso movement.
• Unfold her fingers when embracing herself, or put one arm over the other.

• Girl should turn first before leafman tries to walk in front of her.
• Slow down leafman's spinning somewhat.
• Girl should react to leafman with excitement rather than being shocked to show she's not scared.

• Girl's posture looks too good after she stops running and starts walking. Have more secondary shoulder movement independent of torso.
• Need shoulder movement when turning her head.

• Tree could move a little when girl touches it.

• Girl drags her left foot a little more than needed. Need minor adjustments.

• Girl's shoulder movement should look more like a breath, not a shrug. Reduce shoulder movement so it's very slight and subtle.
• Timing is perfect.
• Girl could move head a little backwards while breathing. Move camera back a little to show it more.

• Move camera back a little to match shot 19.
• Reduce girl's shoulder movement also.
• Too much pause between closing her eyes and her moment of resolve.
• Eyebrows should move faster at the end. Also, she flares her teeth at that time, which shows her breathing (make it more obvious?), but could be timed differently (low priority).

• As girl pets feather, left arm should start moving up sooner (as soon as it's seen).
• Girl should feel the feather upwards rather than downwards.

• Other than elbow pops, looks great.
• Extend her holding the amulet by 2 seconds.

• Show more weight, and represent pressure of hand on clay better.

• If we take out the title tree, we could put in rocks embedded in the ground.