STAR TREK: THE NEXT GENERATION "Encounter at Farpoint" by D.C. Fontana and Gene Roddenberry This script is not for publicaion or reproduction. No one is authorized to dispose of the same. If lost or destroyed, please notify the Script Department. FINAL DRAFT April 13, 1987 TEASER FADE IN: 1 EXT. SPACE - STARSHIP (OPTICAL) The U.S.S. Enterprise NCC 1701-D traveling at warp speed through space. PICARD V.O. Captain's log, stardate 42353.7. Our destination is planet Cygnus IV, beyond which lies the great unexplored mass of the galaxy. 2 OTHER INTRODUCTORY ANGLES (OPTICAL) on the gigantic new Enterprise NCC 1701-D. PICARD V.O. My orders are to examine Farpoint, a starbase built there by the inhabitants of that world. Meanwhile ... 3 INT. ENGINE ROOM Huge, with a giant wall diagram showing the immensity of this Galaxy Class starship. PICARD V.O. (continuing) ... I am becoming better acquainted with my new command, this Galaxy Class U.S.S. Enterprise. 4 CLOSER ON VESSEL DIAGRAM Showing the details and size of this enormous starship. PICARD V.O. I am still somewhat in awe of its size and complexity. 5 INT. LOUNGE DECK With its huge windows revealing the immense span of the Starship's outer surface. 5 CONTINUED: PICARD V.O. (continuing) ... my crew we are short in several key positions, most notably ... 6 INT. BRIDGE - WIDE ANGLE PICARD, TROI, and DATA seated in the command area. Starfleet LIEUTENANT WORF, a young Klingon, is at the "Ops" station and a SUPERNUMERARY is at "Conn". PICARD V.O. (continuing) ... a first officer, but I am informed that a highly experienced man, one Commander William Riker, will be waiting to join our ship when we reach our Cygnus IV destination. 7 ANGLE EMPHASIZING PICARD AND DATA As Picard turns to Data: PICARD You will agree, Data, that Starfleet's instructions are difficult? DATA Difficult ... how so? Simply solve the mystery of Farpoint Station. PICARD (smiles) As simple as that. TROI Farpoint Station. Even the name sounds mysterious. PICARD The problem, Data, is that another life form built that base. How do I negotiate a friendly agreement for Starfleet to use it while at the same time snoop around finding how and why they built it? 7 CONTINUED: DATA Inquiry ... the word snoop ... ? PICARD Data, how can you be programmed as a virtual encyclopedia of human information without knowing a simple word like snoop? DATA Possibility ... a kind of human behavior I was not designed to emulate? It is all Troi can do to keep from smiling. PICARD It means 'to spy, to sneak' ... DATA (interrupting; delighted) Ah! To seek covertly, to go stealthily, to slink, slither ... PICARD (wanting to cut it off) Exactly, yes ... DATA ... to glide, creep, skulk, pussyfoot, gumshoe ... Data trails off his words, finally becoming aware of the annoyance registering on Picard's face. Troi cannot keep back the smile now ... then suddenly her face is contorted in pain. TROI Captain ... I'm sensing a ... a powerful mind ... Interrupted by the sound of a BRIDGE ALARM. 8 WIDER ANGLE All checking their consoles, puzzled at readings they're getting. WORF Something strange on the detector circuits ... 8 CONTINUED: OVERLAPPED by an ever more compelling SECOND BRIDGE ALARM (similar to the old naval HONKING SOUND) begins to sound. At the same time, the main viewer FLICKERS and an unusual SHINING, SPARKLING GRID SHAPE APPEARS stretching across the whole of the galaxy ahead of them. 9 EXT. SPACE - ENTERPRISE AND GRID (OPTICAL) Emphasizing the incredibly SHINING GRID which the Enterprise is approaching. Seeming impossibly large, yet in some ways as delicate as a spiderweb, it is composed of interlocking geometrical shapes. 10 INT. BRIDGE - VARIOUS ANGLES Data is looking up from his command position console, showing as much alarm as we'll ever see on his face. DATA It registers as solid, Captain... TROI Or an incredibly powerful forcefield. But if we collide with either ... PICARD (to Conn) Go to Condition Yellow. And shut off that damned noise. Conn turns OFF honking sound. Picard is taking time to check all readings but we're now coming very close to the strange grid. WORF Shields and deflectors, up, sir. Milking the drama of approaching collision. Then, conversationally: PICARD Reverse power, full stop. CONN Controls to full stop, sir. The strange shimmering GRID on the viewer is now very close to us as Enterprise movement stops. CONN Now reading full stop, sir. 10 CONTINUED: Overlapped by something akin to a ROLLING THUNDER STORM accompanied by a BRILLIANT AND SUSTAINED FLASH OF LIGHT ON THE BRIDGE to the side of Picard. The light burst physically shakes all bridge crew for an instant, then RESOLVES ITSELF INTO A HUMAN SIZE FIGURE standing at that point on the bridge. As the bridge crew's eyes adjust, it does indeed appear to be a human ... but one dressed and posturing as an Elizabethan era sea captain complete with Sir Walter Raleigh type "court dress", complete with neck ruffles, lace, leg stockings, ceremonial sword, etc. Now and later, we shall know this life form as "Q". 11 ANOTHER ANGLE (OPTICAL) as "Q" (Elizabethan) makes a formal bow (of that same era) to Picard. At which the turbolift doors snap open and TWO SECURITY CREW members start to ENTER, led by Security and Weapons Officer NATASHA YAR. However, "Q" merely gives a nod in that direction and a miniature of the space grid outside APPEARS AT THE TURBOLIFT ENTRANCE, barring the security team's entrance and CLOSES THE TURBOLIFT DOORS. Then "Q" turns toward Picard. "Q" (ELIZABETHAN) You are notified that your kind has infiltrated the galaxy too far already. You are directed to return to your own solar system immediately. 12 ANGLE TO INCLUDE OPS AND CONN We will see Conn stealthily, carefully reaching to the small phaser on his belt. PICARD That's quite a directive. Would you mind identifying what you are? "Q" (ELIZABETHAN) We call ourselves "the Q". Or you may call me that; it's all much the same thing. (indicating costume) And I have presented myself to you as a fellow ship captain so that you will better understand me. (indicates) Go back from where you... 13 ANOTHER ANGLE (OPTICAL) Interrupted by Conn drawing his phaser. But "Q" barely nods toward Conn at which a FLUTTERING ELECTRIC BLUE WAVE envelopes that bridge crewman, and we HEAR THE BRIEF BEGINNINGS OF A SCREAM as Conn falls with the SOUND of a frozen hard object striking the deck. Picard comes to his feet, ignoring "Q" as: "Q" (ELIZABETHAN) Stay where you are! 14 EMPHASIZING PICARD Who is clearly very angry as he kneels at the prone form of Conn who appears to have been instantly frozen solid. Troi hurries INTO SHOT kneeling too. There is even white evaporation vapor rising up from the body. PICARD Data, call medics! TROI He's frozen. Can you feel the cold? Picard grabs up Conn's phaser from the deck (reversing it, wisely), stands and puts it under "Q's" nose. PICARD He would not have injured you! (indicates phaser) Do you understand this; the stun setting? "Q" (ELIZABETHAN) Knowing humans as you do, Captain, would you want to be captured helpless by them? (moves closer) Now, go back or you will certainly die! FADE OUT: PART ONE FADE IN: 15 EXT. U.S.S. ENTERPRISE AND GRID (OPTICAL) Appropriate THEME MUSIC with spaceship hanging motionless, still facing the mysterious SHIMMERING GRID that stretches in front of it from galaxy horizon to horizon. 16 INTO. BRIDGE - EMPHASIZING CONN'S FORM In the b.g. on a floating stretcher Conn is being taken to the turbolift, advanced medical emergency aids are attached to his body. PICARD Is he still alive? MEDIC For now. We'll do our best, sir. 17 EMPHASIZING "Q" (OPTICAL) Ignoring the previous, intent instead on inspecting his Elizabethan costume as Picard comes up to him. "Q" (ELIZABETHAN) Your little centuries go by so rapidly, Captain. Perhaps you'll understand this better. The Visitor moves his hand slightly. We hear the same ROLLING THUNDER SOUND. Another BLINDING LIGHT FLASH and his body remains the same humanoid face and figure as with the Elizabethan dress, but now the green officer's uniform of the U.S. Marine Corps. Over his jacket pocket three rows of medals and his narrow garrison cap shows the bars of a Captain. "Q" (MARINE CAPTAIN) Actually, the issue at stake is patriotism. You must return to your world and put an end to the communists. All it takes is a few good men. PICARD What? That nonsense is centuries behind us! 17 CONTINUED: "Q" (MARINE CAPTAIN) But you can't deny Captain, that you're still a dangerous, savage child-race. PICARD Most certainly I deny it. I agree that we still were when ... (indicating) ... humans wore costumes like that four hundred years ago... "Q" (MARINE CAPTAIN) At which time you slaughtered millions in silly arguments about how to divide the resources of your little world. And four hundred years before that you were murdering each other in quarrels over tribal god-images. And since there have been no indications that humans will ever change ..... PICARD But even as far back as... ! (indicates) ... that costume, we had begun to make rapid progress. "Q" (MARINE CAPTAIN) Oh? Shall we review your "rapid progress"? 18 ANOTHER ANGLE (OPTICAL) The "Q" visitor moves a hand again to create THE SAME SOUNDS and the SAME BLINDING FLASH, producing the same human image but this time unshaven and with an UGLY AUTOMATION LOOK AND IN THE UNIFORM OF A MILITARY OFFICER FROM THE MID 21st CENTURY WARS. Q's voice sounds a bit drugged now as he eyes his new costume. "Q" (21ST CENTURY) (interrupting) Rapid progress to where humans learned to control their military with drugs. 19 ANGLE INCLUDING OPS POSITION As Worf gets a message and turns toward Picard. 19 CONTINUED: WORF Sir, sickbay reports that Lieutenant Graham's condition is better. All have turned toward Worf, showing relief. "Q" (21ST CENTURY) Concern for one's comrade. How touching. WORF (indicates "Q") And now, sir, a personal request. Permission to clean up the bridge? Picard shakes head, stares Worf down when he seems about to protest. Meanwhile Tasha has come to her feet too: TASHA Lieutenant Worf is right, sir. As Security Chief I can't just stand here and .... PICARD Yes, you can, Tasha. During this, "Q" has withdrawn a slender tube attached to his 21st Century uniform, makes an adjustment which lets a round pill roll into his mouth and bites down on it with a "POP" SOUND. "Q" (21ST CENTURY) Ah, yes... better! (deep breath, feeling it) Then later, on finally reaching deep space, humans of course found enemies to fight out there too. And to broaden those struggles.... (indicating Worf and Tasha) .... you again found allies to permit still more murdering and all over again the same old story. 19 CONTINUED: (2) PICARD (interrupting; angry) No! The most dangerous 'same old story' is the one we're meeting now! Those who go on misinformation, half-information, self-righteous life forms who are eager not to learn but to prosecute, to judge anything they don't understand or can't tolerate. "Q" (21ST CENTURY) What an interesting idea. Prosecute and judge? CAMERA CENTERS ON "Q" as he absorbs what Picard has said. He takes a step or two, turns. "Q" (21ST CENTURY) (continuing) And suppose it turns out we understand you humans only too well? PICARD We've no fear of what the true facts about us will reveal. "Q" (21ST CENTURY) The facts about you? Splendid, splendid! You are a veritable fountain of good ideas. (smiling; pleasant) There are preparations to make, Captain, but when I return... "Q" gives a 21st Century salute to Picard. "Q" (21ST CENTURY) (continuing) ... we will proceed exactly as you suggest! A BLINDING FLASH OF LIGHT and the alien visitor is gone. 20 WIDE ANGLE ON BRIDGE It takes a moment to accept the fact "Q" is really gone then Worf turns to Picard. 20 CONTINUED: WORF Sir... respectfully submit our only choice is to fight. If we Klingons understand anything, it is the meaning of that kind of talk. TASHA My sentiments too, sir. Fight or try to escape. 21 ANGLE EMPHASIZING PICARD Turning to Troi: PICARD Sense anything, Commander? TROI (shakes head) Its mind is much too powerful, sir. And frightening. Concur we avoid further contact if possible! 22 ANGLE EMPHASIZING PICARD Clearly he has to come up with something. He reflects for a moment more, then makes up his mind, turns to Troi. PICARD From this point, no station aboard, repeat no station, for any reason will make use of signals, transmission or intercom. (crossing quickly to Ops and Conn) We'll try to take them by surprise. (to Worf) Inform engineering to make ready for maximum acceleration. We'll find out what this Galaxy Class can do. WORF Aye, sir. As Worf stands and hurries off, Picard turns to Data. 22 CONTINUED: PICARD Records search, Data. Results of detaching the Saucer Section at high warp speeds. Data quickly draws on his memory. DATA Inadvisable at any warp speed, sir. PICARD Search theoretical. DATA (thinking; then) It is possible, sir. But absolutely no error margin. Picard nods and stands, RAISES VOICE: PICARD Attention bridge crew! 23 VARIOUS ANGLES Picard waits until all are turned toward him. PICARD (continuing) Using print-out only, notify all decks to prepare for maximum acceleration. Maximum, you're entitled to know, means we'll be pushing our engines well past safety limits. Our hope is to surprise whatever that is out there, try to outrun it. (looks around, then) Our only other option would be to put tail between our legs and return to Earth as they demand. 24 INT. ENGINE ROOM - TRAVELING WITH WORF As he takes us into WIDE CAMERA ANGLE, aiming both for a feeling of the starship's huge size and enormous power. 25 ANOTHER ANGLE (OPTICAL) Worf nodding at a reading which an Engineer shows him, then EXITING to return to the bridge. Meanwhile, engineering personnel work at their controls and a LOW PITCHED WHINE quickly works itself up into a DEAFENING HIGH PITCHED SHRIEK while ENERGY DISPLAYS APPEAR AT MAIN ENGINE CONNECTIONS. 26 EXT. SPACE (OPTICAL) Showing both the Enterprise and the mysterious grid. 27 INT. BRIDGE - ANGLES INCLUDING MAIN VIEWER Worf enters bridge from turbolift, crossing to his position. WORF Engine room ready, sir. Picard stands behind Data who is at the Conn position. TROI The board shows 'green', Captain. All go! Picard moving back to his command position as: PICARD Stand by... (takes his seat, checks bridge, then) ENGAGE! The entire bridge SHUDDERS under a SCREAM OF POWER as we CUT TO: 28 EXT. SPACE - ANGLE ON ENTERPRISE (OPTICAL) Suddenly into maximum warp, the energy release momentarily DISTORTING BOTH THE ALIEN GRID AND THE STARS IN SIGHT AROUND IT. When the EFFECT is over, the starship has turned, seeming to almost brush against the mysterious grid, and is then racing away from it. 29 ANGLE EMPHASIZING GRID (OPTICAL) With Enterprise in b.g. at warp speed, escaping. Then the 'grid' suddenly shrinks in size, growing brighter as it coalesces together INTO THE SHAPE OF A BRIGHTLY COLORED SPINNING SHAPE which now races after the Enterprise. 30 INT. BRIDGE - VARIOUS ANGLES The faces of the bridge crew reflect the fact that Enterprise is at very high warp speed and continuing to accelerate into even higher warp. WORF Velocity warp nine point two. DATA Heading, 351 Mark 11, sir. PICARD Steady on that. TASHA The hostile is now giving chase, sir. Accelerating fast. WORF We're now at Warp nine point three, sir. Which takes us past the red line, sir. PICARD Continue accelerating. (to Troi) Counselor, at this point I'm open even to guesses about what we've just met. TROI (considers, then) It... it felt like something beyond what we'd consider a 'life form'. PICARD 'Beyond'? TROI Very, very advanced, sir. Or... (considers) Or certainly, very, very different! 30 CONTINUED: WORF (with emphasis now) Sir, we're at warp nine point four. TASHA Hostile is now beginning to overtake us, sir. PICARD Are you sure? DATA Hostile's velocity is already warp nine point six, sir. Shall I put them on main viewer? PICARD (nods) Reverse angle on viewer. 31 ANGLE INCLUDING MAIN VIEWER VIEWER IMAGE SHIMMERS into reverse view, which is much the same as the forward view except for ONE BLINKING POINT OF LIGHT AT IMAGE CENTER. DATA Magnifying viewer image. ANOTHER VIEWER SHIMMER with the CENTER POINT OF LIGHT BECOMING THE SPINNING COALESCENCE seen earlier. It's still far away, tiny in size, but will grow in size during later SCENES. 32 VARIOUS ANGLES as needed. TASHA Hostile's velocity now at nine point seven, sir. PICARD Ops, inform Engineering we need more! DATA Engine room attempting to comply, sir. But they caution us... 32 CONTINUED: PICARD (interrupting; to Data) Go to yellow alert! Data hits a control and the Yellow Alert ALARM SOUNDS FIVE TIMES. Then Picard turns to Tasha. PICARD (to Tasha) Arm photon torpedoes, Weapons Station. Place them on ready status. TASHA Torpedoes to ready, sir. Picard is aware of the concerned glances received form Troi and Data. 33 WIDE ANGLE The entire bridge suddenly SHUDDERS HARD and it brings startled looks to the faces of some of the bridge crew. Then the motion eases. WORF That was a design tremor, sir. A warning. TASHA Hostile now at warp nine point eight, sir. WORF Our velocity is only nine point five, sir. DATA Projection, sir. We may be able to match the hostile's nine point eight, sir. But at extreme risk. TASHA Now reading the hostile at warp nine point nine, sir. Picard stands, raising his voice to carry throughout the bridge. 33 CONTINUED: PICARD Attention bridge. Print-out message, urgent, to all decks. (selecting the right words) All stations on all decks, make ready to detach ship's saucer section. Some of the bridge crew is startled but all are soon putting their consoles in order for the move. Picard turns to Worf at 'conn' position. PICARD (continuing) You will command the saucer section, Lieutenant. Worf comes to his feet in protest. WORF I am a Klingon, sir. For me to seek escape while my captain goes into battle.... PICARD (interrupts hard) You are a Starfleet officer, Lieutenant. WORF (hesitates, takes seat) Aye, sir. PICARD (to bridge again) Note in ship's log that at this startime, I am transferring command to the Battle Bridge. (to Data) Make the signal, Data. Data touches a control and we HEAR (still preserved from surface ship days) the BUGLE CALL "BEAT TO QUARTERS" which continues REPEATING as all bridge crew members (except Worf) begin leaving their posts. While SUPERNUMERARIES arrive on the turbolifts, our bridge crew begins exiting the bridge. FADE OUT. PART TWO FADE IN: 34 EXT. SPACE - THE ENTERPRISE (OPTICAL) Still at high warp. We cannot see the image of the following "hostile" (which is not magnified in this ANGLE). PICARD V.O. Captain's log, stardate 42354.1. Preparing to detach saucer section. 35 INT. BATTLE BRIDGE As the turbolift doors snap open, Picard and the others ENTER the smaller, sparse and functional Battle Bridge. PICARD V.O. ... so that families and the majority of the ship's company... 36 INT. MONTAGE OF SAUCER SETS Families, children, science technicians, etc., moving into safe areas. PICARD V.O. (continuing) ... can seek relative safety while our vessel's stardrive, containing our Battle Bridge... 37 INT. BATTLE BRIDGE - VARIOUS ANGLES Acquainting us with the smaller and more severe battle bridge, its configuration and positions. Picard is speaking the balance of his log entry to the microphone at his command position. PICARD (continuing) ... and main armaments, will turn back and confront the mystery that is threatening us. (turning to Tasha) Lieutenant, your torpedoes must detonate close enough to the hostile to blind it at the moment we separate. 37 CONTINUED: TASHA Understood, sir. PICARD Worf, this is the Captain.... 38 INT. BRIDGE - EMPHASIZING LT. WORF The young Klingon at the Captain's command station now. WORF Yes Captain? PICARD'S INTERCOM VOICE Begin countdown.... (touches panel control) Mark! 39 EXT. SPACE - THE ENTERPRISE (OPTICAL) Traveling through space for a moment, then photon torpedoes blasting out of the starship's aft tubes. The torpedo pattern disappears into the distance behind the vessel. 40 INT. BATTLE BRIDGE All intent on what is happening as: TROI All decks acknowledging, sir. DATA Starship separation.... six, five, four, three, two, one.... 41 EXT. ENTERPRISE - ANGLES ON SEPARATION MECHANISM (OPTICAL)) As we see the largest of the assemblies begin to move, yawning open. Other mechanisms are doing their jobs too.... and THE MONOLITHIC STARSHIP DIVIDES INTO ITS TWO SECTIONS.... STARDRIVE AND SAUCER MOVING APART. PICARD V.O. Ship's log, exact moment of separation, stardate 42354.22. As the Stardrive Section gets safely clear of the saucer, it begins turning, doubling back to face the "Q" menace. And now in the direction of that threat, we begin to see PHOTON EXPLOSIONS in the far, far distance. 42 INT. BATTLE BRIDGE - INCLUDING MAIN VIEWER On which we see a tiny but SOMEWHAT LARGER IMAGE OF THE HOSTILE VESSEL in front of which the last few PHOTON DETONATIONS HAPPEN AND FADE AWAY. TASHA All torpedoes have detonated, sir. PICARD (to Data) Reverse power and hold this position. DATA (gives a surprised look) Reverse power...decelerating. TROI That will bring them here in just minutes, sir. TASHA Will we make a fight of it, Captain? If we can at least damage their ship.... PICARD (indicating viewer) Lieutenant... are you recommending we fight a life form that can do all those things? (as Tasha hesitates) I'd like to hear your advice. TASHA I... spoke before I thought, sir. We should look for some way to distract them from going after the saucer. DATA All forward motion stopped, sir. PICARD (to Troi) Commander, signal the following in all languages and on all frequencies: we surrender. State that we are not asking for any terms or conditions. TROI Aye, sir. All language forms and frequencies. 43 ANGLE ON MAIN VIEWER Where the IMAGE OF THE HOSTILE is rapidly growing in size. 44 EXT. SPACE - U.S.S. ENTERPRISE (OPTICAL) As the HOSTILE IMAGE rushes down on the starship, THE COALESCENT SHAPE OPENING UP INTO SOMETHING LIKE THE SHIMMERING GRID WE'VE SEEN, but now as if to enclose (and perhaps crush) the starship. A FURY OF SOUNDS like CLANKING-SCREAMS OF METAL BEING STRESSED BEYOND ITS LIMITS. 45 INT. BATTLE BRIDGE - VARIOUS ANGLES As the bridge and the entire Stardrive Section is SHAKEN ALMOST ANGRILY as the same CACOPHONY OF CLANKING-SCREAMS continues. All bridge crew cling to their seats until the SHAKING AND SOUNDS REACH A PEAK. As when "Q" first appeared, FLASHES OF LIGHT BLIND US and become: 46 INT. "Q" COURTROOM - EMPHASIZING PICARD, DATA, TROI, TASHA It is an immense courtroom meant to reflect strength and power. (We'll discover that it dates back to the mid-21st Century post-atomic crisis era.) Both decor and legal procedures reflect the time when a desperate humanity, still wounded and bleeding from nuclear war, sought answers to its pain and problems through the merciless strength of a new form of dictatorial government representing neither capitalism nor communism. Our four starship people are in old, ragged and stained uniforms which 'demean' them as criminals. In comparison with the gleaming steel and glass of the rest of the courtroom, the Prisoner's Dock at which our people sit is made of rough-hewn, hard and ugly wooden benches. Suddenly, our Starfleet group is CAUGHT IN A HARSH GLARING SPOTLIGHT. Data, looking around with great curiosity, is the first to speak: DATA Historically intriguing, Captain. Very, very accurate. PICARD (nods) Mid-21st Century, the post-atomic horror.... Interrupted by the SOUND OF A BELL, and CUT TO: 47 ANGLE INCLUDING MANDARIN-BAILIFF Important, the MANDARIN-BAILIFF is not a fun figure. Despite the Asian robe and accent, he is an important authority figure--and his expression and actions underscore this. He caries a slim, portable view screen, the face of which contains scrolled information he will occasionally refer to. Now, as he nods to a Court Functionary who uses an ancient, oriental bell, DOLEFULLY CLANGING to gain attention. MANDARIN-BAILIFF All present, make respectful attention to honored Judge! 48 ANGLE EMPHASIZING SPECTATORS Some still arriving, chattering in excitement, having to be intimidated into silence by a 21st CENTURY SOLDIER, heavily armed. Picard waves in a way indicating Data, Tasha and Troi should not stand. TROI (quietly to Picard) Careful, sir. This is not an illusion or a dream. PICARD But these courts happened in our past.... TROI I don't understand either, but this is real. I can feel that! 49 OTHER ANGLES AS NEEDED A 21st Century MILITARY OFFICER moving to our Starfleet group, leveling his automatic weapon toward them. FUTURE MILITARY OFFICER Get to your feet, criminals! Our people ignore him too. "Mandarin-Bailiff" is CLANGING THE BELL again. Data sees something, indicates: DATA At least we are acquainted with the judge, Captain. 50 ANGLE ON JUDGE The "judge's bench" (an appropriate 21st Century design on Chapman camera-crane) comes floating into the courtroom. Seated in it is "Q" (JUDGE), an arrangement which gives "his Honor" physical access to every part and corner of this courtroom. As he floats serenely over spectators' heads, suddenly there's the RATATATTAT of an automatic weapon. 51 ANGLE INCLUDING MILITARY OFFICER Just completing FIRING a warning burst at the feet of Picard. MILITARY OFFICER (screaming angrily) Attention! On your feet, attention! But Tasha pivoting in fast, taking the weapon and throwing the Officer crashing to the floor. Judge's "bench" (Camera Crane) brings "Q" INTO SCENE fast. "Q" (JUDGE) You are out of order! But he's speaking to the downed military officer, not to Tasha. Which turns out to be a sentence of death -- carried out by a pair of Soldiers who step in, raising their automatic weapons, FIRING at the Officer lying on the floor. Spectators break into APPLAUSE as the Officer slumps and lies unmoving. "Q" (JUDGE) (continuing) The prisoners will not be harmed... (a glance at Picard) Until they are found guilty, of course. Still hovering over the fallen officer, "Q" indicates the body. "Q" (JUDGE) (continuing) Dispose of that. Picard has taken the automatic weapon from Tasha. 51 CONTINUED: PICARD Can we assume you mean this will be a fair trial? "Q" (JUDGE) Yes, absolutely equitable. Picard hands the weapon to "Bailiff". "Q" (JUDGE) swings his "bench" to CENTER FRONT of the courtroom. "Q" (JUDGE) (continuing to Mandarin-bailiff) Proceed. MANDARIN-BAILIFF (refers to his portable viewscreen) Before this gracious court now appear these humans to answer for the multiple and grievous savageries of their species. Judge's "bench" swings "Q" (JUDGE) in literally nose-to-nose with Picard. "Q" (JUDGE) How plead you, criminal? DATA If I may, Captain.... (gets a nod) Objection, your honor. In the year 2016, the new United Nations declared that no Earth citizen could be made to answer for the crimes of their race or forbearers. "Q" (JUDGE) Objection denied! Followed by CLANGING OF BAILIFF'S BELL and CHEERS FROM THE SPECTATORS. 52 ANGLE EMPHASIZING "Q" AND PICARD "Q" (JUDGE) (continuing) This is a court of the year 2049, by which time more 'rapid progress' had caused all 'United Earth' nonsense to be abolished. 52 CONTINUED: At which point Tasha comes to her feet very angry. PICARD Tasha, no... TASHA I must... (to "Q") ... because I grew up on a world that allowed things like this court. And it was people like these that saved me from it. I say that this so-called court should get down on its knees to what Starfleet is, what it represents... 53 ANOTHER ANGLE (OPTICAL) And "Q" (JUDGE) flies INTO SCENE, gesturing toward Tasha as he did earlier to Conn on the bridge... resulting in the same FLUTTERING ELECTRIC BLUE WAVE THAT ENVELOPES HER. As Tasha goes rigid, frozen, Data supports her, lowers her form gently to the floor as: TROI (shouting to "Q") You barbarian! That girl.... "Q" gestures and the same FLUTTERING ELECTRIC BLUE WAVE ENVELOPS HER TOO. Picard leaps in, keeps her frozen, rigid form from crashing down. MANDARIN-BAILIFF Criminals keep silence! 54 ANGLE ON PICARD bending over Tasha, then to "Q": PICARD You've got a lot to learn about humans if you think you can torture us or frighten us into silence. (to Data) Are they still alive? DATA Uncertain. Lieutenant Graham was when our medics thawed him out. 54 CONTINUED: "Q" (JUDGE) glides in closer on his "bench". "Q" (JUDGE) You will answer the charges! PICARD Or what? Or this, or worse? Or death? I suggest you take a better look at human history. Spectators have begun GRUMBLING over Picard's failure to answer "Q". "Q" (JUDGE) You are charged, criminals. How plead you? PICARD Just a moment ago, you promised "the prisoners will not be harmed." We plead nothing so long as you break your own rules. LOUDER GRUMBLING from the Spectators now. "Q" (JUDGE) I suggest you center your attention on the trial, Captain. It may be your only hope. PICARD And I suggest you now may be having second thoughts about this trial! You're considering that if you conduct it fairly, which was your promise, you may lose. "Q" (JUDGE) (laughs) Lose? PICARD Yes, even though you're judge, and prosecutor.... "Q" (JUDGE) (nods) And jury. 54 CONTINUED: (2) PICARD (considers it; nods) Accepted... so long as you keep to your agreement. (indicates Troi and Tasha) And assaulting prisoners is hardly a fair trial. 55 OPTICAL ANGLE ON "Q" (OPTICAL) Seems to be considering it. Then he looks downward, indicates. "Q" (JUDGE) This is a merciful court. "Q" waves his hand DOWNWARD TO WARD TROI AND TASHA AND A RIPPLE OF LIGHT plays over the two women, UNFREEZING THEM. ANOTHER ANGLE "Q" (JUDGE) The court very disorderly now with some spectators standing on their benches SHOUTING as an annoyed "Q" brings his "bench" up hovering over the heads of everyone. "Q" (JUDGE) (greatly AMPLIFIED) SILENCE! The order is so LOUDLY AMPLIFIED that it comes near to shaking the entire courtroom structure. The spectators bite off their words and sink frightened into their seats. We notice "Q" throwing a glance toward Picard to see if the Captain is properly impressed. Then the "bench" is lowered to allow "Q" to face Picard again. "Q" (JUDGE) (continued) Continuing these proceedings, I must caution you that legal trickery is not permitted. This is a court of fact! 55 CONTINUED: PICARD (same words; same time) ... court of fact! (nods) We humans know our past, even when we're ashamed of it. I recognize this court system as the one which agreed with Shakespeare's suggestion -- "Kill all the lawyers". "Q" (JUDGE) (nods) Which humans did. PICARD Which led to the rule: "Guilty until proven innocent". "Q" (JUDGE) Of course. Bringing the innocent to trial would be unfair. (leaning in; voice amplified) YOU WILL NOW ANSWER TO THE GRIEVOUS SAVAGERY CHARGE AGAINST HUMANITY. PICARD We'll be happy to answer specific charges. "Grievous savagery" could mean anything. "Q" (JUDGE) (interrupting) Obviously it means causing harm to fellow creatures! PICARD Such as you did when you froze a member of our bridge crew? Will you be joining us in the dock here? "Q" (JUDGE) You fool. Are you certain you want a full disclosure of human ugliness? (to Mandarin-Bailiff) So be it! Present the charges. Mandarin-Bailiff refers to his portable view screen, then steps forward and presents it for Picard's examination. 55 CONTINUED: (2) MANDARIN-BAILIFF Criminal, you will read the charges to the court. Picard takes the parchment, glances through some amount of it. Then he looks up. PICARD I see no charges against us, your honor. "Q" (JUDGE) (pounds "bench top") Criminal, you are out of order! Soldiers move in, unslinging automatic weapons, of which the barrels of two of them are now placed against Troi's and Data's heads. FADE OUT. PART THREE FADE IN: 56 INT. "Q" COURTROOM - WIDE ANGLE Action continuing from where it ended. The gun barrels are now pressing even closer to Troi and Data's heads as: "Q" (JUDGE) Soldiers... (indicates guns) ... you will press those triggers if this criminal answers with any word other than "guilty"... 57 CLOSER ANGLE The Soldiers CLICKING FIRING ACTION TO FULL COCK. "Q" turns to Picard. "Q" (JUDGE) Criminal, how plead you? Picard takes his time, looking to his people, the Soldiers holding the guns at their heads, then to "Q". He seems to be taking too much time, and one of them shifts his weight, the other begins grasping his weapon even more firmly. Then: PICARD Guilty... Picard's people can't help but show relief and even the soldiers lighten up their stance and their grip on the weapons, until: PICARD (continuing) ... provisionally so. Surprised by this "add on", the Soldiers begin bringing their guns in close again, looking for guidance to "Q" who looks like he could decide either way. After considering it for a moment: "Q" (JUDGE) The Court will hear the provision. 57 CONTINUED: PICARD We question whether this court is abiding by its own trial instructions. Do I have permission to have Commander Data repeat the record? "Q" (JUDGE) If this is legal trickery... PICARD Your own words, your Honor. (to Data) Exactly what followed his Honor's statement that the prisoner would not be harmed? 58 EMPHASIZING DATA Taking a moment to consult his memory, then: DATA Yes, sir. The Captain has asked the question... (in Picard's VOICE) "Can we assume this will be a fair trial?" (in Data VOICE) And in reply, the judge stated... 59 OTHER ANGLES as Data goes on. DATA (continuing in "Q"'s VOICE) "Yes, absolutely equitable." "Q" (JUDGE) Unacceptable testimony, entirely unacceptable... ! 59 CONTINUED: PICARD If your Honor pleases, there is a simple way to clear up this disagreement. (waits until he has "Q"'s attention) We agree there is evidence to support the court's contention that humans have been murderous and dangerous. (moves in closer to "Q") I say "have been" ... and therefore we will respectfully submit to a test of whether this is presently true of humans. "Q" (JUDGE) (suddenly alert) I see, I see. (an idea forming) And you petition the Court to accept you and your comrades as proof of what humanity has become. PICARD There should be many ways we can be tested. We have a long mission ahead of us... "Q" (JUDGE) Another brilliant suggestion, Captain. But your test hardly requires a 'long mission'. (laughs) Your immediate destination offers more challenge than you can possibly imagine. Yes, yes, this Farpoint station will be an excellent test of human worth. Picard, like the others, is now becoming just a bit concerned. What does lie ahead of them on Farpoint Station? 60 ANGLE INCLUDING MANDARIN-BAILIFF with "Q" nodding to him as the Bailiff stands, raising his voice. MANDARIN-BAILIFF Stand respectfully. All present, respectfully stand! 61 WIDE ANGLE Spectators standing. Picard and his people coming to their feet too. 62 EMPHASIZING "Q" AND PRISONERS (OPTICAL) as "Q" moves his bench into position. "Q" (JUDGE) This trial is adjourned to allow the criminals to be tested. The Mandarin-bailiff LOUDLY CLANGS HIS BELL. MANDARIN-BAILIFF This honorable court is adjourned! There is a smile coming onto the face of "Q" as he turns to Picard. "Q" (JUDGE) Captain, you may find you are not nearly clever enough to deal with what lies ahead for you. It may have been better to accept sentence here. "Q" WAVES TOWARD THEM, PRODUCING THE BLINDING LIGHT EFFECT we've seen before -- and the EFFECT BECOMES: 63 INT. BATTLE BRIDGE Picard and the others now in their normal garb and at their regular stations, all beginning to register their realization of where they now are. 64 ANGLES EMPHASIZING DATA, TROI, AND TASHA Reacting to where they now find themselves. Data turns to the Ops position. DATA Uh... what is present course, Ops? The OPS OFFICER looks at Data, surprised. OPS (to Data) It's exactly what the Captain ordered, sir. Direct heading to Farpoint Station. 64 CONTINUED: Data has reviewed his console readings during this, turns to Picard: DATA Confirm we are on that heading, sir. OPS (to Data) Know anything about Farpoint? It sounds like a fairly dull place. PICARD Actually, Ops, I've heard just the opposite. Picard, Data, Troi and Tasha exchange looks, then settle back. 65 EXT. SPACE - LONG SHOT - PLANET (OPTICAL) moving in on a yellowish ball of a planet glowing against the black backdrop of starry space in the reflected light of its sun. There is some cloud layer. At this distance, the planet's land masses are vague and indistinct. RIKER'S VOICE Personal log, Commander William Riker, Star Date 42354.4, at Farpoint Station. 66 CLOSER - ON THE PLANETS AND THE USS HOOD (OPTICAL) An older class starship (the USS Hood) lies in geosynchronous orbit above the planet. RIKER'S VOICE ... U.S.S. Hood has dropped me off at Farpoint Station where I await the arrival of the new U.S.S. Enterprise... 67 CLOSER - ON THE OLD CITY/STATION (SPEC.FX) AN AERIAL VIEW of the small, obviously old Bandi city connected to the modern sprawling spaceport/station, both set in the middle of a harsh and forbidding landscape. This is Farpoint Station. CAMERA PUSHES IN on the Old City portion. 67 CONTINUED: RIKER'S VOICE ... to which I have been assigned as first officer. Meanwhile... 68 INT. OLD CITY CORRIDOR - PANNING RIKER Commander William T. Riker approaching the door leading to the office at Farpoint's Administrator. RIKER'S VOICE ... I have been asked to visit the office of Farpoint Station's Administrator. 69 INT. ZORN'S OFFICE - OLD CITY - DAY - ANGLE ON RIKER AND ZORN 69 Riker ENTERING, crossing to an elegant, unusually shaped desk where ZORN, the station Groppler (administrator) rises and (unused to handshaking) at first offers the wrong hand, then gets the procedure straightened out with MUMBLED APOLOGIES. As with all the Bandi, Zorn is tall, skinny, rather grey-looking -- appears to be sixtyish (as do all the Bandi, including the young ones.) ZORN I thought you might like to know, Commander Riker, that we've still no word from your vessel. But, I trust we have made your waiting comfortable? RIKER Luxurious is more like it. Would it seem ungrateful if I ask for some information? ZORN Anything! RIKER Fascinating how in the midst of an old city like this, you've built a completely modern tritanium and duraglass space station. Your energy supply must be as abundant as I've heard. 69 CONTINUED: ZORN Geothermal energy is the one great blessing of this planet. I'll have all the details of that sent to your quarters. RIKER Thank you. But it still seems incredible how you've built this station so rapidly and so... so perfectly suited to our needs. Pushes a desk top bowl of fruit toward Riker. ZORN Would your care for an Earth delicacy, Commander? RIKER Well, if there's an apple there... There isn't and we can SEE that this disappoints Zorn. RIKER (looking up; continues) It doesn't matter... what I was saying was... (sees something out of SCENE) Well, I'll be damned! 70 CAMERA PANS RIKER as he steps to the far end of Zorn's desk where ANGLE REVEALS a second bowl of fruit. Riker picks an apple from it. ZORN Ah... ah yes, there was another selection here... RIKER (perplexed) Zorn, I would have sworn it wasn't here a moment ago. ZORN And does your failure to notice it make it unwelcome? (smiles) The same with Farpoint Station, Commander. (MORE) 70 CONTINUED: ZORN (Cont'd) We hope a few easily answered questions about it won't make Starfleet appreciate it less. Riker eyes Zorn thoughtfully, then takes a bite out of the apple. He chews, then: RIKER I'm sure it won't, sir. (raises apple up) And this is delicious. Thank you. (crossing to door) Good morning, Groppler Zorn. He is EXITING even as Zorn levers himself out of his own chair. ZORN Good morning. The door closes behind Riker, and Zorn turns around angrily. ZORN (continuing) You've been told not to do that. Why can't you understand? It will arouse their suspicions. As he speaks, CAMERA ANGLE WIDENS TO REVEAL clearly that there is no one else in the room, nor does he appear to be speaking into any sort of communication device. He seems to be talking to the walls. ZORN (continuing) ... and if that happens, we will have to punish you. We will, I promise you. We must! No reply that we can hear. Is this man mad? CUT TO: 71 INT. FARPOINT FOYER In considerable contrast to Zorn's old city office we just left, this structure has a "starbase" look with its dazzling tritanium and glass construction. The few people in sight are Starfleet personnel. ENTERING FOREGROUND are DR. BEVERLY CRUSHER and her fifteen-year-old son WESLEY. 71 CONTINUED: Like most other humans of this century, she doesn't look her age. Although forty years old, she looks hardly more than thirty. Her attractiveness is underscored by a naturally provocative walk -- the woman can't help it. This is counter-balanced by her quick intelligence and her professional knowledge and skill as a physician. Her son, Wes, has that same quick intelligence, multiplied by four. That lively brain is ensconced in the body of a perfectly normal boy with moderate good looks, a cheerful personality, but with considerable maturity for someone his age. 72 ANOTHER ANGLE Riker ENTERS SCENE behind them and hurries to catch up. He calls: RIKER Doctor Crusher... WESLEY Mother, it's Commander Riker. Beverly slows, lets Riker walk along with them. We see that despite her attractive face and form, she is naturally dignified and a bit reserved with new acquaintances like Riker. RIKER And hello to you, Wesley. Enjoying Farpoint Station? WESLEY (happily) Yes, sir. Riker smiles at the boy. It's clear he approves of this polite and likeable kid. Then he becomes aware that Beverly has not answered his greeting and is waiting. RIKER Saw you and thought I'd join your stroll, if I may. BEVERLY Actually, we're about to do some shopping. Riker throws her a look. Is she rejecting the offer of his company? 72 CONTINUED: RIKER I've been meaning to visit the mall myself. If I'm welcome? BEVERLY Of course. She moves toward an exit door. Wes has been looking from one to the other of them, interested in what they've said... and not said. 73 INT. FARPOINT SHOPPING MALL - DAY The ANGLE suggests a covered, airy mall with flowers and trees -- many of them Earth types but with a scattering of alien vegetation too. It is a spacious walkway with a number of pleasant shops and booths. In b.g. we SEE Bandi natives of this world, a tall and greyish life form, quiet and overly polite. Beverly, Wesley and Riker move down a line of shops. 74 CLOSER - BEVERLY, WESLEY, RIKER as they walk, Wes continuing to eye the two adults. Then: WESLEY If you're wondering about Mom, Mister Riker, she's isn't actually unfriendly. She's just shy around men she doesn't know. Beverly is startled; Riker amused. BEVERLY Wesley... ! (swallows her annoyance; to Riker) I believe that means he would like us to be friends. RIKER (grins) I'm willing, Doctor. (more serious) And although we're not officially part of the Enterprise yet, I thought there might be something useful we could do while we wait. 74 CONTINUED: Beverly stops at a table in front of a shop selling exotic materials. The modest selections of cloth are lined up on the table, some draped for best effect. Beverly looks over them critically, feeling weight and texture. The Bandi SHOPKEEPER has stayed at the rear of the booth. BEVERLY "Useful"? How and what, Commander? RIKER Investigating some things I've noticed here, Doctor. The last was a piece of fruit... Beverly has frowned over a particularly pretty piece of material which she holds up for the shopkeeper to see. BEVERLY Would this be available in emerald green? The Bandi Merchant smiles, nods and takes the bolt of cloth INTO A SMALL CLOSED OFF AREA BEHIND. Wes watches the merchant go as Beverly turns to look at Riker appraisingly. BEVERLY (continuing) I'm sure, Commander, there are reasons for a first officer to want to demonstrate his energy and alertness to a new captain. But since my duty and interests are outside the command structure... The Bandi Merchant comes quickly with the bolt of cloth -- now emerald green -- interrupts Beverly by holding it up for her approval. RIKER Isn't it nice he happened to have the right color? Beverly glances sharply at Riker, suppressing a somewhat chagrined look. 74 CONTINUED: (2) BEVERLY (to Merchant) Thank you. I'll take the entire bolt. Charge it to Beverly Crusher, Chief Medical Officer, USS Enterprise. The Merchant nods, ticks the information off on a flat little gadget that dangles from his belt, hands her the bolt of cloth. 75 ANOTHER ANGLE - DOLLYING WITH BEVERLY, RIKER, WESLEY as they walk away, Riker enjoying the look that's come onto her face over this incident. RIKER Let's see, where were we? BEVERLY I was accusing you of inventing work in order to curry favor with your new captain. I apologize. WESLEY Finding the exact right color took him only about twelve seconds, Mom. They stop a little distance off and look back toward the shop. BEVERLY Maybe this is something Jean-Luc Picard will want looked into. RIKER Jean-Luc? You know Captain Picard? WESLEY (proudly) When I was little, he brought my father's body home to us. Riker is startled but Beverly only smiles, fondly pats her son's head. 75 CONTINUED: BEVERLY Yes, Wes, long, long ago. (to Riker) Shall we continue the walk? I'd like to know you better, Mister Riker. CUT TO: 76 INT. FARPOINT LOUNGE - DAY - ON GEORDI AND MARKHAM LT. GEORDI LaFORGE and ENSIGN SAWYER MARKHAM are in the small, comfortable lounge area. Markham is a likeable young man, enthusiastic, energetic. He is still inclined to shoot from the hip rather than consider before speaking, but he is a capable (and very new) graduate of the Academy. We SEE Geordi at first only from behind, and we may routinely register the fact he is black. MARKHAM Where is she? They say she's never late -- not since the old burrhog took over the captain's chair. RIKER'S VOICE You wouldn't be talking about the Enterprise, would you, Ensign Markham? 77 WIDER ANGLE The two young men turn around sharply to find Riker has come up behind them. The most important thing we notice about Geordi is that he wears a strange flattish device (like futuristic goggles) over his eyes. Although he is technically blind, his head always turns toward the person speaking to him because he can, in fact, see as well or better than anyone through the use of the visual prosthesis. As they realize that Riker is a senior officer, both young men straighten to attention. GEORDI/MARKHAM Sir. Yes, sir. Riker smiles at the ingrained and traditional response of the recent Academy graduate. RIKER You can stand at ease, gentlemen. We're not on the Enterprise yet. 77 CONTINUED: MARKHAM You know we're assigned to her, sir. RIKER (extending his hand) Riker. I'm slated to be First Officer. (they shake hands) I read the service records on all new personnel on the trip out. Excellent academic record at Starfleet Academy, Mister Markham. MARKHAM Thank you, sir. RIKER And you, Mister LaForge. Captain Dreyer praised your performance on the Hood. Why did you request transfer to the Enterprise? GEORDI Who wouldn't, sir? The biggest, newest, fastest starship in the fleet -- RIKER Commanded by the best burrhog in the fleet. Right, Mister Markham? MARKHAM (sheepishly) Yes, sir. RIKER (grins) I've already forgotten who used those words. GEORDI Shouldn't we have heard something from her by now, sir? A BANDI WOMAN approaches: BANDI WOMAN Commander Riker? RIKER Yes? 77 CONTINUED: (2) BANDI WOMAN The Enterprise has been picked up on our monitors, sir. I should tell you, sir, it is only the Stardrive Section. All three crewman are surprised to hear this. RIKER (to Woman) What about the Saucer Module? BANDI WOMAN We've received no explanation, sir. But the captain signals that you're to beam up immediately. GEORDI (to Markham) Our new captain doesn't waste time. RIKER A good rule for all of us to follow, gentlemen. Riker touches his communicator. His VOICE now 'treated' to indicate he is transmitting. (This will be standard communicator format.) RIKER (continuing) Enterprise, this is Commander Riker on Farpoint. Standing by to beam up. TRANSPORTER EFFECT (OPTICAL) FADE OUT. PART FOUR FADE IN: 78 EXT. SPACE (OPTICAL) The Enterprise stardrive module in orbit of the Farpoint planet. 0 INT. STARDRIVE TRANSPORTER ROOM - ANGLE ON PLATFORM (OPTICCAL) As Riker BEAMS IN. Lieutenant Tasha Yar of Security is there, waiting until Riker is fully materialized, then: TASHA Lieutenant Yar of Security, sir. Captain Picard will see you on the Battle Bridge. Riker was prepared to shake hands but Tasha is already leading the way toward the turbolift. 80 INT. TURBOLIFT As Riker follows her inside, she speaks quietly toward the controls: TASHA Battle bridge. The doors snap closed and the lift moves. Riker looks Tasha over, waiting, then: RIKER With the saucer gone, can I assume something interesting happened on your way here? TASHA I'll let the captain explain, sir. 81 INT. BATTLE BRIDGE - ANGLE ON PICARD He is seated in the command chair with Data and a couple of other crewpersons at their stations. DATA We are cleared into the standard parking orbit, sir. 81 CONTINUED: PICARD (nods) Make it so. The bridge turbolift doors open, Riker ENTERS the bridge after Tasha, follows her to Picard. TASHA Commander Riker, sir. RIKER Riker, W.T., reporting as ordered, sir. Picard takes his time, looking Riker over and then offering his hand. PICARD I really didn't expect to welcome you to half a starship, Riker. (to Tasha) Is the viewer ready? TASHA All set up, sir. PICARD (to Riker) We'll first bring you up to date on a little... "adventure" we had on our way here, Commander. Then we'll talk. TASHA (to Riker) This way, sir. True, Picard does not waste time. Tasha is already leading Riker toward a viewer at the aft section of the Battle Bridge. 82 ANGLE ON AFT VIEWER as Tasha motions Riker to the seat, turns the VIEWER ON. The VIEWER SHOWS A SHOT FROM EARLIER WHEN "Q" (ELIZABETHAN) HAD APPEARED AND IS TALKING TO Picard. The VOICES ARE FAINT and Riker leans in, riveting attention to the bridge record. 83 ANGLE ON PICARD AND DATA as the android officer turns toward the captain. 83 CONTINUED: DATA (interrupting) Message from the Saucer Module. It will arrive here in fifty-one minutes, sir. PICARD Inform them we'll hook up as soon as they arrive. Picard stands, crosses past Tasha on his way to the turbolift. PICARD (to Tasha) Bring him to my Ready Room when he's done there. Picard EXITS via turbolift. 84 ANGLE ON RIKER Where VIEWER SHOWS ANGLE ON THE "Q" GRIDWORK STRETCHES OVER THE HEAVENS, THEN SHOT OF "Q" (21st CENTURY). Riker TURNS AWAY FROM VIEWER TOWARD CAMERA as he looks at the crewpersons on the bridge. He speaks to no one in particular. RIKER He calls that "a little adventure"? 85 INT. BATTLE BRIDGE READY ROOM Picard at a viewer going over a rather complex screen of formulas. A KNOCK at the door, he turns the viewer off. PICARD Come. Riker ENTERS, crosses to where the captain indicates he's to sit. He does so, looking at Picard. Then: RIKER Wow! PICARD (laughs, nods) Exactly. 85 CONTINUED: RIKER This "Q", sir... is he crazy? I mean, seriously? PICARD Seriously, does it really matter how we judge them? We're dealing with something that can juggle starships as if they were pebbles. RIKER It's a rather astonishing "little adventure" you've had, Captain. PICARD (snaps) The issue isn't what we call it, Commander. The important thing is we can be dead certain... accent on dead... that "Q" wasn't joking. We're alive only because we were placed on "probation", a very serious kind of "probation". Over which we have heard a CHIME SOUND. PICARD (continuing) Go. DATA'S VOICE The Saucer Module is now entering orbit with us, sir. PICARD Acknowledged. Commander Riker will conduct a manual docking. Picard out. RIKER Sir? PICARD You've reported in, haven't you? You are qualified? RIKER Yes, sir. PICARD Then I meant now, Mister Riker. Riker jumps to his feet, EXITS. CAMERA PANS to Picard whose expression now relaxes. He's not too unhappy with what he's seen of his new first officer so far. 86 EXT. SPACE - SAUCER SECTION, BATTLE SECTION (OPTICAL) As before, the Saucer Section is above and ahead of the battle section. The battle section is SLOWLY moving ahead toward the Saucer Section for link-up. 87 INT. BATTLE BRIDGE - FULL SHOT Riker at the conn, concentrating. Tasha and Data are studying him, privately evaluating this new man. DATA You say you will be doing this manually, sir? No automation? RIKER As ordered. 88 EMPHASIZING RIKER He's making a couple of calculations, glancing up at the viewscreen. 89 ANGLE ON VIEWSCREEN (OPTICAL) The rear end of the saucer is moving closer, but it is still high. 90 EMPHASIZING RIKER RIKER (to Data at Conn) Two percent rise. Up angle adjustment three degrees. Maintain docking speed. Ops and conn positions AD LIB repeats of Riker's orders. 91 EXT. SPACE - SAUCER AND BATTLE SECTION (OPTICAL) The battle section is seen rising, angling forward slightly, still moving slowly toward the saucer. 92 INT. BATTLE BRIDGE - EMPHASIZING RIKER glancing at the O.S. viewscreen, works his console again. RIKER Level her out. Maintain docking speed. Docking crew, prepare for reconnection. 93 EXT. SPACE - ANGLE ON SAUCER AND BATTLE SECTION (OPTICAL) The two are level now, quite close together, the battle section still moving slowly forward. 94 INT. BRIDGE - ANGLE ON RIKER Riker looks up at the viewscreen again. 95 ANGLE ON VIEWSCREEN (OPTICAL) The saucer looms in the viewscreen -- everything is level, the docking section is dead ahead -- we are still moving forward. 96 CLOSE ON RIKER He makes a couple of quick entries on his console. RIKER All stop. Her inertia should do the job now. 97 EXT. SPACE - SAUCER AND BATTLE SECTION (OPTICAL) The two glide together smoothly. 98 INT. BRIDGE - WIDE SHOT Riker hits a couple more tabs on his panel as: RIKER Rejoin lock-up... now. 99 EXT. SPACE - FINAL HOOK-UP (OPTICAL) The reverse of disconnecting SHOTS we saw earlier -- huge STARDRIVE SECTION and SAUCER MODULE MECHANISMS MAKING FINAL HOOK-UP. 100 EXT. ENTERPRISE IN ORBIT (OPTICAL) The docking complete. 101 INT. TURBOLIFT Riker with Data, Tasha, and others. The time this takes is indicative of the size of this new Enterprise. 101 CONTINUED: RIKER (V.O.) Enterprise log, First Officer entry. Ship's modules rejoined, stardate 42354.71 with command now transferred back to the main bridge. Riker looks up to see Tasha is watching him. Then: TASHA Neatly done, sir. RIKER I don't imagine many mistakes happen under Captain Picard. TASHA No sir, they don't. 102 INT. BRIDGE As the turbolift arrives. Lt. Worf crosses toward it, intercepts Riker. WORF I'm Lieutenant Worf, sir. Captain Picard requests you come immediately to his quarters. Having had little more than a glance at this main bridge, Riker turns and re-enters the turbolift. 103 INT. PICARD'S CABIN Much larger and more comfortable than the small battle Ready Room we were in earlier. Picard is there, turning as he hears a KNOCK: PICARD Come! Riker ENTERS. PICARD (continuing) A fairly routine maneuver but you handled it quite well. RIKER Thank you, sir. I hope I show some promise. 103 CONTINUED: An exchange of looks between the two. Clearly, Riker is annoyed by this "faint praise" kind of welcome. Picard leads the way to a setting for coffee. PICARD Some coffee. RIKER No thank you, sir. PICARD (pours himself a cup) And now I have a kind of "what sort of second-in-command have I inherited?" question. RIKER Yes sir, I thought you might. There's nothing disrespectful in Riker's tone of voice, but he does leave an impression that he's not to be walked on either. PICARD I noticed in your envelope that Captain DeSoto thinks very highly of you. One curious thing, however, you refused to let him beam down to Altair IV? RIKER In my opinion, sir, Altair IV was too dangerous to risk exposing the captain. PICARD I see. A captain's rank means nothing to you. RIKER Rather the reverse, sir. A captain's life means a great deal to me. PICARD Let me postulate something here, Mister Riker. Isn't it just possible that you don't get to be a starship captain without knowing when it's safe to beam down or not? Isn't it a little presumptuous for a first officer to second guess his captain's judgment? 103 CONTINUED: (2) RIKER Permission to speak candidly, sir? PICARD Always. RIKER You've been a first officer yourself. You know that assuming that responsibility must, by definition, include the safety of the captain. I have no problem with following the rules you lay down. But under no circumstances will I compromise your safety. If you have a problem with that, sir, you can put me back on the Hood before she leaves. PICARD You don't intend to back off that position? RIKER No, sir, I can't. Picard takes another beat to study him carefully, then: PICARD One further thing... a special favor I have to ask of you. RIKER Anything, sir. PICARD Using the same kind of strength you showed with Captain DeSoto, I'd appreciate it if you can keep me from making an ass of myself with children. RIKER Sir? PICARD I'm not a family man, Riker, and yet, Starfleet has given me a ship with children aboard. RIKER (nods) Yes, sir. And families... 103 CONTINUED: (3) PICARD And I don't feel comfortable with children. But, since a captain needs an image of "geniality" toward the little monsters, you're to see that's exactly what I project. RIKER Aye, sir. For the first time, Picard smiles, extending his hand. We see he's surprisingly warm when he wants to be. Riker takes Picard's hand for a firm and friendly handshake. PICARD Welcome to the Enterprise, Mister Riker. 104 INT. ENTERPRISE BRIDGE as Riker steps out of the turbolift. He stops, takes in the size of his compared to the Battle Bridge. The Klingon Lieutenant is at the conn position. He turns, seeing Riker: WORF Yes sir, Commander? Riker crosses in, shakes hands. RIKER Thank you, Lieutenant. Is Commander Data on duty? WORF Commander Data is on a special assignment, sir. He's using our shuttlecraft to transfer an admiral over to the Hood. RIKER An admiral? WORF He's been aboard all day, sir, checking over medical layout. RIKER Why the shuttlecraft? Can he just beam over? 104 CONTINUED: WORF I suppose he could, sir. But the admiral's a rather remarkable man. 105 INT. ENTERPRISE CORRIDOR - ANGLE AT INTERSECTION DATA'S VOICE But, sir, the transporter could have you on the Hood in a matter of seconds, Admiral. Data and the admiral ENTER SCENE at the intersection. The admiral is very old with an almost transparent look. ADMIRAL Have you got some reason to want my atoms scattered all over space? DATA No sir. But at your age, sir, I thought you shouldn't have to put up with the time and trouble of a shuttlecraft. The admiral stops. Facing Data, he draws himself. up as straight as he can. His voice is crotchety and trembly -- and fiercely stubborn. ADMIRAL My age? Hold it right there, boy, what about my age? DATA Sorry, sir. If that subject troubles you... ADMIRAL Troubles me? What's so damned troubling about not having died? How old do you think I am? DATA One hundred forty-seven years, Admiral. According to Starfleet records. ADMIRAL Explain how you remember that so exactly. DATA I remember every fact I am exposed to, sir. 105 CONTINUED: The admiral peers at him closely, scowling. ADMIRAL I don't see any points on your ears, boy, but you sound like a Vulcan. DATA No, sir. I am an android. ADMIRAL (snorts) Almost as bad. DATA (at a loss, but still respectful) I thought it was generally accepted, sir, that Vulcans are an advanced and most honorable race. The admiral stares at him a moment, his severe blue eyes gentling and his feisty scowl fading. He pats Data's sleeve and nods slightly. ADMIRAL They are, boy. They are. And also damned annoying at times. DATA Yes, sir. As they move away, Data gently assisting the old man: ADMIRAL This is a new ship, boy, but she's got the right name. Remember that. DATA I will, sir. ADMIRAL You treat her like a lady. (beat, quietly) She'll always bring you home... FADE OUT. PART FIVE FADE IN: 106 EXT. SPACE (OPTICAL) Both the Enterprise and the Hood in orbit close together. CAMERA ANGLE shows how much LARGER the Enterprise is. 107 INT. SICKBAY Beverly is wearing medical "blue" -- or whatever color Science personnel are going to be assigned. She steps toward a LARGE VIEWSCREEN which comes on, showing readouts indicative of the status of the ship's medical facilities. BEVERLY Show me the results of Captain Picard's most recent physical examination. The screen promptly BEGINS TO FLASH UP PRINTED INFORMATION, followed by X-Ray type shots, etc. Beverly studies it for awhile. PICARD'S VOICE Already at work, Doctor? 108 ANOTHER ANGLE As Beverly turns to find Captain Picard ENTERING. She nods in answer to his question. BEVERLY Yes, on a subject that's very important to this mission, Captain. (unhurriedly to computer) Screen off. The screen GOES DARK. PICARD I wanted to say "welcome aboard." 109 CLOSER ANGLE - BEVERLY AND PICARD As if they're appraising each other, then: 109 CONTINUED: BEVERLY Thank you, Captain. PICARD And I thought I should talk to you very personally about your assignment here. 110 CLOSER TWO SHOT As Beverly nods, waits for him to continue. PICARD (continuing) I wanted you to know I protested your posting to the Enterprise. BEVERLY Oh? Do you consider me unqualified? PICARD Hardly. Your service record shows you exactly the kind of CMO I'd want. BEVERLY Then you must object to me personally. Has it to do with our last meeting? PICARD I'm trying to be considerate of your feelings, Doctor Crusher. For you to serve with a commanding officer who would continually remind you of such a terrible personal tragedy... BEVERLY (annoyed; snaps) If I had any objections to serving with you, I wouldn't have requested this assignment, Captain. PICARD You requested this posting? He turns to exit. Beverly stirs, and her next words stop him. 110 CONTINUED: BEVERLY Captain. My feelings about my husband's death will have no effect on the way I serve you, this vessel, or this mission. Picard gives it a moment's thought, extends his hand. PICARD Then, welcome aboard, Doctor. I'm pleased to have you here. Beverly allows only a perfunctory handshake. BEVERLY Thank you. And now, if I can return to my duties... It is clear that Picard wanted to say more but she has neatly blocked any further conversation. PICARD (uncomfortably) Well... as I said, "welcome Aboard". She doesn't respond further and he has no choice but to turn and exit. 111 EXT. SPACE - ENTERPRISE AND HOOD IN ORBIT (OPTICAL) Again, EMPHASIZING the considerable difference in the sizes of the two starships as we SEE that the USS Hood is PULLING AWAY, LEAVING ORBIT. 112 INT. BRIDGE - ANGLE ON RIKER He is standing before the huge viewscreen. Behind him is the young Klingon, Worf, at the conn position with the rest of the bridge stations only nominally manned. Set in geosynchronous orbit over the planet, the Enterprise requires minimal monitoring at this time. 113 ANGLE ON TURBOLIFT DOORS They OPEN, and Picard steps out onto the bridge. PICARD Have you signaled the Hood, Mister Riker? 113 CONTINUED: RIKER (nods) Your exact message. (in French) Bon voyage mon amie. Aye, sir. 114 ANOTHER ANGLE - TO INCLUDE MAIN VIEWER as Picard smiles and steps toward it. PICARD And what was my answer, computer? MAIN VIEWER FLICKERS, then startles us with an ugly FLASH OF LIGHT that becomes an IMAGE OF "Q" (JUDGE) who is in LIMBO, but looking directly at Picard. His VOICE BOOMS LOUDLY, annoyed in tone: "Q" (JUDGE) DO YOU EXPECT ME TO WAIT PATIENTLY THROUGH ALL THIS NONSENSE? OR DID YOU THINK I WAS GONE? Picard is as startled as Riker. The young Klingon, Worf, comes tumbling out of the conn position, drawing his phaser and placing himself protectively between Picard and the threatening "Q" image. PICARD Do you intend to blast a hole through the viewer, Lieutenant? Worf apologetically puts his phaser away, lets Picard wave him aside. PICARD (continuing) If the purpose of this is to test human worth, your honor, you must let us proceed in a normal human way. "Q" (JUDGE) YOU ARE DILATORY! YOU HAVE TWENTY-FOUR HOURS! ANY FURTHER DELAY AND YOU RISK SUMMARY JUDGEMENT AGAINST YOU, CAPTAIN. A FLASH OF LIGHT and the main viewer returns to an image of the planet below. 115 ANOTHER ANGLE WORF Sorry, sir... RIKER No criticism. You reacted fast... PICARD ... but in a completely useless way. WORF I'll learn to do better, sir. PICARD Of course you will. We've a long voyage ahead of us. Picard dismisses Worf with a flicker of a smile which takes the sting out of what he just said. RIKER (lowers voice) Hope you're right, sir. About the long voyage ahead. Picard looks to main viewer as if checking that "Q" is truly gone. PICARD I hope so too. RIKER What do we do, sir? With them monitoring every move, every word... PICARD S.O.P., Mister Riker. RIKER Standard Operating Procedures? PICARD (nods) We do exactly what we'd do if this "Q" never existed. If we're going to be damned, let's be damned for what we really are. Riker is suddenly very pleased with this captain. He nods emphatically. FADE OUT. PART SIX FADE IN: 116 EXT. SPACE (OPTICAL) U.S.S. Enterprise in orbit of planet Cygnus IV. PICARD V.O. Captain's log, stardate 42372.5. Of the twenty-four hours "Q" allotted us to prove ourselves... 117 INT. BRIDGE - ANGLE INCLUDING MAIN VIEWER Minimum bridge crew on duty. PICARD V.O. ... eleven have now passed without incident. And yet I cannot forget "Q's" prediction that we will face here some critical test of human worth. 118 INT. BRIDGE READY ROOM Picard and Riker comparing notes. RIKER This planet's interior heat results in abundant geothermal energy, sir. But it's about all this world does offer. PICARD And it's your belief that this is what made it possible for them to construct this base to Starfleet standards? RIKER Yes sir. We have to assume that they've been trading their surplus energy for the construction materials used here. According to our ship's scans, many of the materials used are not found on this world. 118 CONTINUED: PICARD (smiles) Perhaps it's like those incidents you describe in your report as "almost magical" attempts to please us. RIKER Those events did happen, sir. PICARD And in time we'll discover the explanation. Meanwhile, none of it suggests anything threatening. If only every life form had as much desire to please Starfleet. (stands) Ready to beam down? I'm looking forward to meeting this Groppler Zorn. Picard is leading Riker to the cabin door. RIKER I'm convinced there's more to it than just "pleasing us", sir. PICARD (as they exit) Like something "Q" is doing to trick us? 119 INT. BRIDGE As Picard and Riker enter from the adjoining Ready Room. Troi is just arriving in the turbolift and Picard calls to her. PICARD Over here, Counselor! (to Riker) I've asked her to join us in this meeting. (indicating) May I introduce our new first officer, Commander William Riker. Mister Riker, our ship's counselor, Deanna Troi. 120 TWO SHOT - RIKER AND TROI He's obviously stunned to find her here, although she isn't at all surprised. TROI'S VOICE (carrying her thoughts) Do you remember what I taught you, Izmadi? Can you still sense my thoughts? Then, she holds out her hand formally. TROI A pleasure, Commander. RIKER (nervously) I, ah... likewise, Counselor. 121 ANGLE INCLUDING PICARD Studying the two of them with some curiosity now. PICARD (to Riker) Have the two of you met before? RIKER We... we have, sir. PICARD Excellent. I consider it important that my key officers know each other's abilities. TROI We do, sir; we do. Meanwhile, Picard has indicated the turbolift and is leading them toward it. 122 EMPHASIZING TROI As she looks back toward Riker serenely. TROI'S VOICE (her thoughts) I, too, would never say goodbye, Izmadi. 123 EXT. FARPOINT STATION (OPTICAL) ESTABLISHING SHOT as: PICARD'S VOICE My crew and I need a bit more information... 124 INT. ZORN'S OFFICE Where Zorn sits behind his desk, his posture and attitude indicating some nervousness. Seated facing him are Picard, Riker, and Troi. We see that Zorn's attention is on Troi. PICARD (continuing) ... before we make our recommendations to Starfleet. ZORN No objections to that, but... (eyeing Troi again) ... but I'm puzzled over your bringing a Betazoid to this. If her purpose here is to probe my thoughts, sir... TROI I can sense only strong emotions, Groppler. I am only half Betazoid; my father was a Starfleet officer. ZORN I have nothing to hide, of course. PICARD Good, since we admire what we've seen of your construction techniques. Starfleet may be interested in your constructing starbases elsewhere too. 125 ANGLE EMPHASIZING TROI As her expression begins to indicate an awareness of something distressing, something painful. During which: ZORN Unfortunately, Captain, we are not interested in building other facilities. 126 ANGLE EMPHASIZING PICARD AND RIKER This stumps Picard for a moment, during which: RIKER If I may, Captain... (gets a nod) Then a trade, Groppler? Some things you need in return for the loan of architects and engineers who can demonstrate your techniques. 127 EMPHASIZING ZORN ZORN We Bandi do not wish to leave our home world. If Starfleet cannot accept that small weakness, then we will be forced, unhappily, to seek an alliance with someone like the Ferengi, or... Zorn interrupted by a small GROAN coming from Troi. Her eyes are now closed over a strong distress she's sensing. 128 VARIOUS OTHER ANGLES As appropriate. PICARD Counselor... ? What is it? TROI (glancing toward Zorn) Do you want it described here, sir? PICARD Yes! No secrets here if we're all to be friends. (to Zorn) Agreed, Groppler? ZORN We ourselves have nothing to hide, but... 128 CONTINUED: TROI (another GROAN, grimacing) Pain... pain, loneliness, terrible loneliness, despair... (indicates Zorn) I'm not sensing him, sir. Or any of his people... but it's something very close to this location. PICARD (to Zorn, demandingly) The source of this? Do you have any idea? ZORN No! (stands) No, absolutely not. And I find nothing helpful or productive in any of this! PICARD (stands, to Zorn) That's it? No other comment? ZORN What do you expect form us? We offer a base designed to your needs, luxurious even by human standards... Riker and Troi come to their feet too as Picard interrupts. PICARD ... while refusing to answer even our simplest questions about it. (to Riker) We'll adjourn for now... (to Zorn) ... while we all reconsider our positions. The three CROSS toward the exit. ZORN Captain, the Ferengi would be very interested in a base like this. PICARD Fine. I hope they find you as tasty as their other past associates. Picard and his people EXIT. 129 EXT. SPACE (OPTICAL) The U.S.S. Enterprise still in orbit over Cygnus IV. 130 INT. HOLODECK CORRIDOR Riker moving as if seeking someone. He intercepts a YOUNG ENSIGN who is passing and the junior officer sees Riker's emblem of rank and snaps to attention. RIKER Ensign, can you help me find Commander Data? I was told he's somewhere on this deck. YOUNG ENSIGN This way, sir. 131 ANGLE AT CORRIDOR WALL As the Ensign steps to a black surface of the corridor wall. YOUNG ENSIGN You must be new to these galaxy class starships, sir. (puts hand on the black surface, saying) Tell me the location of Commander Data. At the touch and the words "Tell me" the black surface comes alive with light patterns showing appropriate information. COMPUTER VOICE Lieutenant Commander Data... now located in Holodeck area 4-J. YOUNG ENSIGN (indicating readout) And as you see, sir, it's pointing you that way. RIKER Go that way? How far? YOUNG ENSIGN (smiles) You'll know, sir. Riker AD LIBS a thanks, goes in the indicated direction. 132 PANNING RIKER Moving off in the indicated direction. Then the black surface there comes alive with a FLASHING DIRECTION SIGNAL. COMPUTER VOICE This way, please. The next hatchway on your right. RIKER (responding automatically) Thank you... COMPUTER VOICE You're more than welcome, Commander Riker. Which startles him a bit but he walks on and turns right at a sophisticated looking Holodeck Hatchway. 133 EXT. PARKLAND The Parkland hidden at this moment by a WILD SECTION OF CORRIDOR WALL AND HATCHWAY which, when the hatch is opened, will REVEAL PARKLAND. COMPUTER VOICE (continuing without delay) And if you care to enter, Commander... RIKER (snaps; interrupting) I do. Immediately, the hatch slides open and we SEE THE PARKLAND (LOCATION). It looks (and is) real, including land contours, trees, and even a small stream nearby. Beyond that the Parkland stretches off for what appears to be miles and miles away to the horizon. 134 ANGLE BACK TOWARD HATCHWAY As Riker ENTERS through it and stands inspecting the Parkland scene with genuine appreciation and then HEARS SOMEONE WHISTLING A MELODY, but doing it rather badly and laboriously. 135 ANGLE PAST RIKER INTO PARKLAND As he MOVES AWAY, seeking the source of the WHISTLING which will begin to grow LOUDER now. 136 ANGLE AT STREAM As Riker crosses, stepping from rock to rock. He makes a misstep, almost falls, then recovers and gets across. He looks back at the stone which caused it. 137 CLOSER ON RIKER As he walks, the WHISTLING is nearby now. He stops, calls: RIKER Hello! The WHISTLING has continued without pause, Riker cocks his ear, corrects his direction slightly. 138 EXT. WOODLAND GLEN Riker ENTERS SHOT through shrubbery, sees something and stops. 139 ANGLE ON DATA Lying there, cushioned by deep grass. He's totally absorbed in certain melody notes he's attempting -- and keeps missing. 140 PANNING RIKER Moving onto TWO SHOT where he stops, and WHISTLES the same melody, hitting the correct notes. A startled Data looks up blankly, then comes quickly to his feet, but Riker waves him back down, sits beside him. DATA Marvelous how easily humans do that, sir. I still need much practice. Riker, acting uncomfortable, avoids the subject. He hesitates, then: RIKER There are some puzzles down on the planet that Captain Picard wants answered. He suggests I put you on the away team I'll be using. 140 CONTINUED: DATA I shall endeavor to give satisfaction, sir. Riker hesitates, wanting to say something but not sure how to begin. RIKER Uh, yes. And when the captain suggested you I, uh, looked up your record... (hesitates) DATA Yes sir, a wise procedure always. RIKER Your rank of lieutenant commander, I assume now must be honorary. DATA No, sir. Starfleet Class of '78; honors in quantum mathematics and exobiology. RIKER But your files... they say you're a... DATA (waits, then) Machine? Correct, sir. Does that trouble you? RIKER (hesitates) To be honest... yes, a little. DATA Understood, sir. Prejudice is very human. RIKER Now that troubles me. Do you consider yourself superior to us? DATA I am superior in many ways. But I would gladly give it up to be human. RIKER (studies Data, then) Nice to meet you, Pinocchio, 140 CONTINUED: (2) Data seems confused by this. RIKER (continuing; explains) A joke. DATA (straight-faced) Ah! Intriguing. RIKER (big grin) You're going to be an interesting companion, Mister Data. FADE OUT. PART SEVEN FADE IN: 141 EXT. PARKLAND - RIKER AND DATA We HEAR A VOICE (Wesley) and Riker gets to his feet, looks off in that direction. DATA This pattern is quite popular, sir. Perhaps because it duplicates Earth so well, Coming here, (apologetically) makes me feel as if I'm human too. RIKER (taking it all in) I didn't believe these could be so real. DATA Much of it is real, sir. If the transporters can convert our bodies to an energy beam, then back to the original pattern again... RIKER Yes, of course. (indicates) And all these have much simpler patterns. 142 EXT. PARKLAND AT STREAM Data leading the way, then indicates. DATA The rear wall. RIKER (peers) I can't see it. DATA You will. PANNING RIKER TOWARD US He's squinting hard now. Then he stops, reacts at something he can now make out. RIKER Incredible! 143 INT. STAGE HOLODECK - ANGLE PAST RIKER (OPTICAL) As he hurries toward where we can now SEE the holodeck wall (REAR PROJECTION SCREEN) on which we can now SEE that the PARKLAND soil, rocks and vegetation blend with the PROJECTED IMAGE there. Astonished, Riker backs away from this, squinting again. 144 EXT. REAL PARKLAND - RIKER'S P.O.V. Where, of course, the wall blend is no longer visible. WESLEY'S VOICE (calling) Mister Riker, isn't this great? MEDIUM ON RIKER Turning, then grinning, waving. RIKER'S P.O.V. - THE ROCK CROSSING AT STREAM Where Wes Crusher is hurrying toward us, bouncing from rock to rock. WESLEY This is one of the simpler patterns, Mister Riker. They've got thousands more, some you just can't believe. ANGLE TO INCLUDE RIKER AND DATA Moving down the stream. RIKER Careful, that next rock is loose... ! WIDER ANGLE As that rock moves underfoot, tumbling Wes into the stream. PANNING DATA IN, demonstrating his enormous strength as he easily lifts Wesley completely out of the water. An amazed Wesley looks at Data. WESLEY Wow! 145 EXT. PARKLAND - ANGLE ON WILD HATCHWAY AND CORRIDOR SECTION As the hatchway smoothly SLIDES OPEN AGAIN. Through it is REVEALED THE PARKLAND, through which Riker, Data and a very wet Wesley make their way to the HATCHWAY. As they MOVE THROUGH HATCHWAY, the bulkhead BEGINS CLOSING. 146 INT. HOLODECK CORRIDOR - ANGLE ON CAPTAIN PICARD The Captain walking with a Senior Officer when he sees Riker and the others. He motions the Senior Officer to continue on by himself, stops and waits. VARIOUS ANGLES - AS APPROPRIATE As Riker, Data and Wes move INTO SHOT with Picard. Wes is instantly aware that his soaked clothing is dripping water onto the starship deck. He'd like to remove himself but knows that Picard has already seen his puddle forming on the deck. RIKER Mister Data has agreed to join my away team, Captain. PICARD (with another glance toward Wes's puddle) Very good. WES Sir, maybe I should get something to wipe this water up. PICARD (coolly) Good idea. Picard turns and EXITS. 147 INT. SICKBAY - BEVERLY AND WESLEY Wesley is wiping himself dry now. He is enthusiastically trying to explain his adventures. WESLEY -- and there's a low gravity gymnasium, too. It would be hard to get bored on this ship. 148 CLOSER TWO SHOT - BEVERLY AND WESLEY As he wipes, he's been turning something over in his mind. WESLEY Mom... (beat) could you get me a look at the bridge? BEVERLY That's against the captain's standing orders. WESLEY Are you afraid of the captain, too? BEVERLY I certainly am not! WESLEY But Captain Picard is a pain, isn't he? BEVERLY Your father liked him very much. Great explorers are often lonely, ... no chance to have a family... WESLEY Just a look, at the bridge, Mom. From the turbolift when the doors open. I wouldn't get off. I promise. BEVERLY You're looking for trouble, Wes. He shuts up. Beverly looks at him and can't ignore the very real want in his eyes. BEVERLY (continuing) Let's see what we can do. On Wes's delighted grin: CUT TO: 149 EXT. FARPOINT STATION/CITY - DAY - EMPHASIZING STATION TO ESTABLISH our location. 150 INT. STATION SHOPPING AREA - DAY - ON AWAY TEAM Which is made up of Riker, Data, Troi, Tasha and Geordi. There are a number of people in the mall area, some in identifiable Enterprise-type uniforms. The others are in various civilian clothes. They are taking in the Bandi shops, booths, food and drink offered by Bandi vendors. TASHA Recommend that someone could begin by examining the underside of the station, sir. TROI Our sensors do show some passages down there, sir. Perhaps you and I? Troi glances at Riker with just a shade of archness, perhaps the lift of an eyebrow. Riker glances away, troubled. RIKER Tasha, you and the Counselor. Troi and Tasha move off. Riker turns to Geordi. RIKER Let's us start with the topside. Have you noticed anything unusual? Riker and the others move out of scene, examining everything they pass. DISSOLVE TO: 151 INT. ANOTHER STATION AREA ON GEORDI as he looks around the area, moving slowly and carefully scanning. Then he shakes his head. GEORDI Well, I can't see through solid matter, sir, but the material so far looks very ordinary. DATA Confirmed by the construction records, sir. Almost exactly the same material that Starfleet uses. Riker reaches to his insignia, to switch on his communicator. 151 CONTINUED: RIKER Riker to Tasha, Troi, come in! We milk the next few moments, Riker growing apprehensive. Then, finally, with Riker showing relief: TASHA'S VOICE (from communicator) We were about to call you, Team Leader. We've found something interesting. 152 INT. UNDERGROUND PASSAGEWAY Not at all what one would expect of a "service tunnel", if this is indeed that. These are smooth, rounded, glistening walls whose GLOW lights up the entire passageway. (We'll see something similar later on a mystery vessel). Tasha is activating her communicator. TASHA We're in a passageway directly under the station sir. But the tunnel walls here are make from something we've never seen before. RIKER'S VOICE And Troi, have you sensed anything there? Troi appears reluctant as she activates her communicator. TROI Sir, I've avoided opening my mind. Whatever I sensed in the Groppler's office became very painful. RIKER I'm sorry, Counselor, but you must. We need more information. Troi complies... then her face contorts in agony and a SMALL SCREAM ESCAPES. She sinks to her knees, Tasha hurrying in to support her. TROI (continuing) No, no, such pain. It's so close to us here... pain, pain.. 152 CONTINUED: RIKER'S VOICE (overlapping) Hang on, I'm coming... Enterprise, lock us onto her signal! Tasha has her arm around Troi, whispering words of comfort. 153 ANOTHER ANGLE (OPTICAL) After a moment, the familiar TRANSPORTER SOUND BEGINS. Riker, Data, and Geordi BEAM IN, SOLIDIFY. Then Riker hurries over to Troi while Data and Geordi examine their surroundings with great curiosity. 154 ANGLE ON TROI Riker helping her very tenderly: RIKER I'm sorry. Close your mind from the pain... TROI It's also unhappiness... terrible despair... RIKER Who? TROI I don't know! No lifeform anything like us. Riker is looking around at the glowing walls. RIKER What in the hell kind of place is this? (turning) Geordi, what do you see? Geordi has been inspecting the wall closely. He shakes his head. GEORDI It's of no material I recognize, sir. Or have even heard of. 155 EXT. SPACE - ENTERPRISE (OPTICAL) As before, in geosynchronous orbit. 156 INT. ENTERPRISE BRIDGE - ANGLE ON PICARD in the captain's chair. The bridge is nominally manned at this time. We will see Worf at the ops panel. Picard glances around as the SOUND OF THE TURBOLIFT DOORS OPENING COMES OVER, and he freezes. 157 PICARD'S P.O.V. - BEVERLY AND WESLEY standing just inside the turbolift door. Beverly is uncomfortable; Wes is all eyes, taking in as much as he possibly can in this one limited look at his dream place. Beverly starts to step out, gesturing to Wes to stay in the turbolift. BEVERLY Permission to report to the captain... 158 WIDER ANGLE - INCLUDING PICARD, BEVERLY PICARD (coolly) Children are not allowed on the bridge, Doctor. BEVERLY Captain, my son is not on the bridge. He merely accompanied me on the turbolift. PICARD Your son? BEVERLY His name's Wesley. You last saw him years ago when... She trails her words; Picard understands. PICARD Oh, back then. He glances from Beverly to Wesley, clears his throat. PICARD (continuing) Well -- as long as he's here... 159 WIDER - INCLUDING WESLEY, BEVERLY, PICARD Wesley looks to Picard hopefully. Beverly waits, then Picard shrugs, tries to sound friendly. 159 CONTINUED: PICARD I knew your father, Wesley. Want a look around? Wesley is out like a shot. PICARD (continuing; quickly) But don't touch anything! Wes is in awe. To him, this is the equivalent of a devout Catholic stepping into the nave of St. Peter's Basilica. The turbolift is on the level of the "horseshoe", so the command positions are spread below him. Picard moves down to the captain's chair level, Wes moving with him. He is careful to put his feet down just right so he doesn't even scuff the floor. Picard watches, steps aside to gesture toward the command chair. PICARD (continuing) Try it out. (as Wes does so) The panel on your right is for log entries, library-computer access and retrieval, viewscreen control, intercoms, and so on. WESLEY (nodding; pointing) Yes sir. And here, the backup conn and ops panels, plus armament and shield controls. Picard looks closely at Wes, perplexed. PICARD The forward viewscreen is controlled by the ops position... WESLEY Yes sir, which uses high resolution, multi-spectral imaging sensor systems... PICARD How the hell do you know that, boy? Before Beverly or Wes can reply, a VERY DISTINCTIVE SIGNAL SOUNDS (Captain's comm signal) and Wes, closest to the control, transfers the signal into audio as: 159 CONTINUED: (2) WES Perimeter alert, Captain! Wesley is instantly embarrassed; Beverly is mortified; Picard is ang7ry. WES BEVERLY I'm sorry. I didn't mean Wes! You shouldn't to... have touched anything... PICARD Off the bridge! Both of you. Worf has come to his feet, not sure whether or not he should respond to the call. Beverly is hustling Wesley toward the turbolift. WORF You have a perimeter alert, Captain. BEVERLY (to Picard) As my son tried to tell you! She EXITS into the turbolift, the doors CLOSING behind her and Wesley. Picard, slamming his fist into his other palm, jumps for his command chair as: PICARD Picard. Go ahead. SECURITY VOICE Ship's sensors have detected the presence of a vessel approaching this planet. No ship is scheduled to arrive at this time. PICARD Have Mister Riker, and his team beamed back up! Security, could that be the Hood returning here? SECURITY VOICE The vessel does not match the Hood's configuration or I.D. signal. PICARD Put it on main viewer! 160 ANGLE ON VIEWSCREEN (OPTICAL) Instantly, the image of a ship is flashed on the screen. It appears big, dark, ominous -- even at far range -- and it is approaching very swiftly. 161 ANGLE ON PICARD AND WORF PICARD Identification? SECURITY VOICE Vessel unknown, configuration unknown, sir. PICARD Hail it! WORF (works his panel) We've been trying, sir. No response. PICARD Raise all shields, phasers at ready. WORF (works panel) Shields up, sir. Phasers ready. (turns to Picard) Could this be that "Q" you mentioned, sir? 162 CLOSE ON PICARD staring at the viewscreen. PICARD I almost hope so, Lieutenant. We face too many "unknowns" already. 163 ANGLE ON VIEWSCREEN (OPTICAL) The ship is closer now -- looks menacing -- and still coming fast. FADE OUT. PART EIGHT FADE IN: 164 EXT. SPACE (OPTICAL) The Enterprise in orbit. 165 INT. BRIDGE - WIDE ANGLE All bridge positions are filled now, everyone watching the viewscreen intently. 166 ANGLE ON VIEWSCREEN (OPTICAL) The mystery vessel approaching closer. 167 PICARD AND WORF PICARD Continue universal greeting on all frequencies. Get me Groppler Zorn. There is a BEEP, a pause, then: ZORN'S VOICE This is Zorn, Captain. 168 INT. ZORN'S OFFICE - DAY - ON ZORN He is seated at the desk, speaks into a small portable communicator grid shaped to fit the palm of his hand. PICARD'S VOICE There is an unidentified vessel moving into orbit with us. Do you know who it is? 169 INTERCUT BETWEEN ZORN AND PICARD AS NEEDED. ZORN There are no ships scheduled to arrive until -- PICARD I asked if you know who it is, Groppler. You mentioned the Ferengi Alliance to me. 169 CONTINUED: ZORN (very nervous) But we have had no dealings with them. It was only a... a thought. PICARD Are you very, very certain of that, Groppler? ZORN I promise you we were making an empty threat, Captain. I wanted your cooperation. Forgive me -- WORF Definitely entering an orbital trajectory, sir. SECURITY POSITION It measures half again our size, Captain. 170 EXT. SPACE - ANGLE ON MYSTERY VESSEL/ENTERPRISE (OPTICAL) The mystery vessel approaches and settles into geosynchronous orbit. It is positioned slightly above and to the side of the Enterprise -- and it is a great deal larger than the Enterprise. Suddenly, A GLOWING PULSE OF LIGHT throbs out from the mystery vessel toward the Enterprise. 171 INT. ENTERPRISE BRIDGE - FULL SHOT The LIGHT GLOWS OVER EVERYTHING AND EVERYONE ON THE BRIDGE. They are startled by it, but no one is hurt. As the GLOW FADES AWAY: PICARD All stations, give any damage reports. The others are looking at each other, shaking their heads. No problems. WORF I would guess we were being scanned, sir. 172 INT. UNDERGROUND PASSAGEWAY Troi is leaning against the strange, smooth and shining tunnel wall as if still feeling pain. Riker, obviously still concerned for Troi, is examining the strange tunnel walls with the tricorder while Geordi moves his "eyes" inches away from the surface to examine it closely. Data is testing his communicator and we'll HEAR him trying to get a signal back from the Enterprise. TASHA (to Troi) Pain again? RIKER (turning; sharply) Troi, you've been at it enough! TROI No, I feel close to an answer of some kind. DATA (interrupting) Commander, something down here is shielding our communicators. TROI (comes to her feet) Yes, that's exactly the feeling I've been reading. As if someone doesn't want us to be in touch with our ship. RIKER Come on... (leads the way) ... let's get to the surface. 173 EXT. SPACE - ENTERPRISE AND MYSTERY VESSEL (OPTICAL) The mystery vessel clearly larger than the Enterprise and moving near it in orbit. 174 INT. BRIDGE - INCLUDING MAIN VIEWER (OPTICAL) On which is featured an IMAGE OF MYSTERY VESSEL. OPERATIONS POSITION There is no computer record of any such vessel, sir. Not even close. 174 CONTINUED: SECURITY POSITION Still no response, sir. We've done everything but threaten them. PICARD Sensor scans, Mister Worf. WORF Our sensor signals seem to just bounce off. (bites off words; indicates to viewer) Something's happening, sir... 175 FULL ON MAIN VIEWER (OPTICAL) As a beam of something STRIKES DOWNWARD TOWARD THE PLANET SURFACE. (It doesn't look exactly like the Enterprise phasers but is the same sort of thing.) 176 EXT. SPACE - ANGLE ON MYSTERY VESSEL (OPTICAL) As another phaser-like BEAM STRIKES DOWN AT THE PLANET. 177 INT. BRIDGE Excitement. 178 ANGLE ON OPS POSITION WORF They're firing on Farpoint, sir... ! PICARD (toward Security position) Bring phasers and photon torpedoes to ready! WORF No, hold it, sir. They're hitting the Bandi city, not Farpoint Station. 179 INT. UNDERGROUND PASSAGEWAY Riker and his team racing to where the rounded, smooth and shining walls of the tunnel begin to give way to a more ordinary looking rectangular corridor of mixed stone and tile walls. 180 ANOTHER ANGLE - INCLUDING STAIRWAY AHEAD Riker pulling to a halt in order to examine with curiosity the blend where the unknown type tunnel walls give way to stone and tile construction similar to what we've seen in the old Bandi city. Ahead is a stone block stairway leading up to that old city. Geordi has hurried in, peering closely at the more familiar kind of wall surface. TROI (indicates ahead) Those stairs are where Tasha and I entered down here, sir. GEORDI At this point, it becomes ordinary stone and tile, sir. (turns, puzzled) Matching what's above. Followed by a LONG RUMBLING EXPLOSION ("PHASER HIT" type) WITH THE LONG FLASH OF IT REFLECTING DOWN THE STAIRWAY FROM THE UPPER LEVEL AHEAD. As this SOUND FADES, then we HEAR A FAINT DISTANT SCREAM which dies away too. TASHA My God! Was that a phaser blast? DATA Negative. But something similar. Again, the SAME KIND OF EXPLOSION SOUND followed by similar LIGHT FLICKERS from the stairway ahead. Riker turns to Troi: RIKER You, Tasha, and Geordi will beam up to the ship from here. Now! (to Data) Come on, I want to see exactly what's happening. Riker starts off to the stairway, Data following. TROI Don't. If you should be hurt... A stern look comes over Riker's face as he turns quickly to her: RIKER You have your orders, Counselor! Carry them out! 180 CONTINUED: TROI Yes sir, I'm sorry, sir. 181 ANOTHER ANGLE (OPTICAL) Riker and Data begin climbing the stairway, leaving the CAMERA CENTERED ON TROI, TASHA AND GEORDI. Troi has already reached for her communicator control. TROI Enterprise, three to beam up. After a moment, the familiar TRANSPORTER SOUND, followed by TRANSPORTER EFFECT ON THE THREE DISSOLVING INTO THE LIGHT SPARKLE. Then, they're gone. 182 INT. COVERED VILLAGE SQUARE (OPTICAL) OLD CITY IN IN B.G. where FIRE RAGES in a smashed structure in that part of the old city we can see. In CLOSER FOREGROUND is an entrance to the underground passageway, this entry guarded by thick, hand-worked metal door, locked. This village square is a connecting point between the Old City and Farpoint Station. A short distance in the OFF-CAMERA DIRECTION lies Farpoint Mall. 183 THE METAL DOORS (OPTICAL) We HEAR a hand phaser HUM as a GLOW FLICKERS OVER THE METAL DOORS which now spring open and a CLASHING OF METAL SOUND. Riker and Data ENTER SCENE though those door, phasers in hand. 184 CLOSER - RIKER AND DATA As Riker touches his communicator control. RIKER Enterprise, Riker. Come in. 0T INTERRUPTED BY THE CLOSER SOUND OF A PHASER-LIKE BOLT FROM THE MYSTERY VESSEL. Also from closer, THE LIGHT OF THE BLAST REFLECTS ON THEIR FACES and they whirl to see: 186 ANGLE INTO OLD CITY Where a building is being BLASTED INTO STONES AND DUST. 187 INT. ZORN'S OFFICE - OLD CITY Filled with the dust and SOUNDS of a nearby BLAST. Zorn is working frantically with his communicator. ZORN Enterprise, Enterprise, help us! Come in, please... 188 INT. BRIDGE - WIDE ANGLE (OPTICAL) On MAIN VIEWER THE IMAGE OF THE mystery vessel which as we watch will FIRE ANOTHER PHASER-LIKE BOLT DOWN TOWARD THE PLANET. The bridge crew are anxiously poised on the edge of their seats, waiting for Picard's next order. ZORN'S VOICE ... what shall we do? Help us, please. PICARD (overlapping) Tune him down! (into transmitter) Commander Riker, go ahead. Where are you? 189 ANOTHER ANGLE - INCLUDING TURBOLIFT As the doors SNAP OPEN TO REVEAL TROI, TASHA, AND GEORDI who hurry onto the bridge, take their regular positions (Geordi relieving Ops). Meanwhile: RIKER'S VOICE With Data, on the edge of the old city, Captain. It's being hit hard. Who's doing this? PICARD And Farpoint Station? Any damage there? 190 INT. COVERED VILLAGE SQUARE - FARPOINT MALL IN B.G. No indication that Farpoint Station has been damaged at all. Riker, standing with Data, is using his communicator. 190 CONTINUED: RIKER Negative on damage to Farpoint, sir. Whoever they are, it seems they're carefully avoiding hitting the station. PICARD'S VOICE It's from an unidentified vessel that's entered orbit with us here. No ID, no answer to our signals... During which there's another BLAST SOUND with the same kind of LIGHT FLICKERS. 191 ANGLE INCLUDING OLD CITY As Riker whirls again in that direction, interrupting Picard: RIKER They're hitting the Bandi city hard, sir. Many casualties very probable. 192 INT. BRIDGE - EMPHASIZING PICARD Everything as we last left it. PICARD (into transmitter) Understand, Commander. Would you object to a clearly illegal kidnapping assignment? RIKER'S VOICE No objection; anything you order, sir. PICARD Zorn may have the answers we need. Get Groppler Zorn and bring him here! RIKER'S VOICE Aye, sir! 193 ANGLE INCLUDING MAIN VIEWER (OPTICAL) Picard looks at the IMAGE of the huge mystery vessel still in orbit nearby. Picard turns to Troi: 193 CONTINUED: PICARD They're forcing a difficult decision on me, Counselor. TROI (nods) But, I doubt protecting the Bandi would violate the Prime Directive. True, they are not actual allies... PICARD But we are in the midst of diplomatic discussions with them. (turns to Tasha) Lock phasers on that vessel, Lieutenant. 194 ANOTHER ANGLE (OPTICAL) In b.g., Tasha touching panel controls. TASHA Phasers locked on, Captain. Anything further INTERRUPTED BY OPTICAL EFFECT, the BLINDING LIGHT FLASH we've seen before and FADING TO REVEAL "Q", wearing the Judge's costume from the earlier courtroom sequence. He is standing in front of Picard. "Q" (JUDGE) Typical, so typical. Savage lifeforms never follow even their own rules. FADE OUT. PART NINE FADE IN: 195 EXT. BRIDGE - EMPHASIZING PICARD AND "Q" Rather than being nervous over the arrival of "Q" (JUDGE), Picard has become coldly angry. PICARD Get off my bridge! 196 ANOTHER ANGLE "Q" stepping toward Picard, smiling sadly. "Q" (JUDGE) Also interesting, that order about phasers. TASHA (ignoring "Q"; to Picard) Still standing by on phasers, Captain. "Q" (JUDGE) (turning to Picard) Please don't let me interfere. Use your weapons. PICARD You're the one who has a lot to learn, "Q". With no idea of who's on that vessel, my order was a routine safety precaution. "Q" (JUDGE) (breaking into LAUGHTER) Really? No idea of what it represents? The meaning of that vessel is as plain as... (then taps his nose) ... as plain as the noses on your ugly little primate faces. 196 CONTINUED: LOUDER LAUGHTER. "Q" (JUDGE) (trying to control it) And if you were truly civilized, Captain, wouldn't you be doing something about the casualties happening down there? In answer, Picard touches the communications control on his uniform. PICARD Captain to CMO, are you reading any of this? 197 INT. SICKBAY - ANGLE EMPHASIZING BEVERLY But she's with a half dozen MEDICAL ASSISTANTS very busy preparing medical supplies, bringing portable medical equipment, etc. BEVERLY Medical teams already preparing to beam down, Captain. PICARD'S VOICE (relieved) Compliments on that, Doctor! 198 INT. BRIDGE Picard turning back to "Q". PICARD Any questions? Starfleet people are trained to render aid and assistance whenever... "Q" (JUDGE) (interrupting) But not trained in clear thinking. PICARD Let's consider your thoughts. You call us "savages" and yet you knew those people down there would be killed. You're the one whose conduct is uncivilized. WORF Sir, they're firing on the planet again. 199 ANGLE INCLUDING MAIN VIEWER (OPTICAL) Where we SEE the mystery vessel beginning to FIRE BLASTS down at the planet again. PICARD Forcefields full on. (to Worf) Go to thrusters! Position us between that vessel and the planet. WORF Aye, sir, thruster power to... Worf trails his words, perplexed. His panel is fading, GOING DARK. WORF (continuing) We have no ship control, sir. It's gone! 200 INT. CORRIDOR OUTSIDE ZORN'S OFFICE - DAY - RIKER AND DATA They are headed toward Zorn's office door when the BLUE BOLT HITS beside the door, flooding the scene with a FLASH OF BLUE LIGHT. The corridor rocks, and the ceiling comes down partially. Riker and Data are flung down by the explosion. A beat, and then Data stirs, sits up. Riker is slower, but is managing to haul himself upright. DATA Are you undamaged? RIKER Yes. You? Data's eyes glaze slightly as he seems to go into a sort of "trance" that lasts just a few seconds. Then: DATA All systems operating. 201 ANGLE INCLUDING ZORN'S OFFICE DOOR It is hanging by its hinges, and debris-dust is drifting out of it. Riker and Data move quickly to and through the open door. 202 INT. ZORN'S OFFICE - DAY - FULL SHOT As Riker and Data ENTER. The office has been badly damaged, especially near the door. O.S. THE SOUND OF ANOTHER BOLT EXPLODING echoes. The room shakes under the impact. There is a MUFFLED SOB near the desk. 203 CLOSER ANGLE - NEAR DESK Zorn is cowering under his elegant desk, shaking and sobbing in fear. ZORN Please. You can make it stop. Drive it away. RIKER Drive who away, Groppler? Zorn reacts as if he knows he's said too much. ZORN I don't know. DATA Unlikely, sir. (to Zorn) Our records show that you supervised all Bandi contact with other worlds... ZORN We haven't done anything wrong! RIKER Then if we can learn nothing from you, perhaps we'll leave. ZORN (frightened) No! No, don't leave, I'll try to explain some of... 204 EMPHASIZING ZORN (OPTICAL) A kind of TRANSPORTER SOUND is heard, and then a TRANSPORTER EFFECT, somewhat different from the Starfleet variety, centers on Zorn. He beging SCREAMING as he FADES FROM VIEW. 205 ANGLE ON RIKER As he keys his communicator. 205 CONTINUED: RIKER First officer to Enterprise. PICARD'S VOICE Go ahead, Riker. RIKER We've lost Zorn, sir. Something like a transporter beam, it snatched him out of here. 206 INT. BRIDGE "Q" still in the captain's seat, listening to: RIKER'S VOICE Question, sir, could it have been the "Q" character you met earlier. "Q" (JUDGE) (laughs) None of you know who it is? You're running out of time, Captain. 207 ANGLE EMPHASIZING PICARD AND TROI She's frowning, trying to 'feel' something. TROI Captain... Suddenly I'm sensing something else. It's satisfaction, enormous satisfaction. PICARD From the same source as before? TROI No, that was on the planet. (indicates) This seems to be from here. 208 ANGLE TO INCLUDE MAIN VIEWER (OPTICAL) And the image of the mystery vessel. 208 CONTINUED: "Q" (JUDGE) (to Troi) Excellent, Counselor! (indicates Picard) He's such a dullard, isn't he! INTERCOM VOICE Captain from Transporter Room. First officer and Mister Data now beaming aboard. "Q" (JUDGE) Excellent also! (to Picard) Perhaps with more of these little minds helping, you'll... 209 EMPHASIZING PICARD As he whirls suddenly on "Q". PICARD (interrupting) That is enough, damn it! "Q" (JUDGE) We have an agreement; have you forgotten... ? In b.g., the turbolift doors SNAP OPEN but unnoticed by Picard and "Q" as they continue their argument. Riker and Data appear, move onto bridge as: PICARD We have an agreement which you are at this moment breaking by taking over our vessel, interfering with my decisions! (steps up nose-to-nose) You are not welcome on my bridge. Now, either leave or finish us. One of the two! "Q" stands, during which we have the impression that everyone is holding his breath. Then: "Q" (JUDGE) (gently) Temper, temper, mon capitaine. I am merely trying to assist a pitiful species. Perhaps I'll leave if Mister Riker provides me with some amusement. 209 CONTINUED: PICARD (to Riker) Do nothing that he asks! "Q" (JUDGE) But I ask so little. And it is so necessary if you are to solve all this. (turns; indicates vessel image in Main Viewer) Beam over there with your... what is it called... your "away team"? (to Picard) You should already know what you'll find there. But perhaps it was too adult a puzzle for you. RIKER Captain, with all respect, I intended to suggest beaming over there. 210 EMPHASIZING "Q" (OPTICAL) Amused at all this. He turns from Riker to look at Picard. "Q" (JUDGE) You show promise, my good fellow. PICARD But you don't. You should have long ago realized that, humanity is NOT a criminal race! "Q" (JUDGE) YOU MUST STILL PROVE THAT! A familiar BLINDING FLASH, and then "Q" is gone. 211 ANGLE EMPHASIZING PICARD AND RIKER Realizing "Q" is gone, turning to look at each other. Riker checks a reading on his panel. RIKER Of the 24 hours "Q" gave us, we have less than one left, sir. 211 CONTINUED: PICARD (nods) But I had a feeling you impressed him, Number One. That's hopeful. RIKER Thank you, Captain, That's the first time you've called me "Number One". PICARD (small smile) I believe I'll enjoy getting to know you, Bill. If we live long enough. FADE OUT. PART TEN FADE IN: 212 EXT. SPACE - ENTERPRISE AND MYSTERY VESSEL (OPTICAL) In orbit over the planet. 213 INT. TRANSPORTER ROOM Riker's away team moving onto the transporter platform. With him are Data, Troi, and Tasha. They carry the usual away team equipment which they're now checking. RIKER Phasers on stun. Everyone checks hand phasers. AD-LIB answers of "checked", "on stun," etc. Riker turns to Transporter Chief. RIKER Energize. 214 INT. MYSTERY SHIP TUNNEL - WIDE ANGLE (OPTICAL) TRANSPORTER SOUND, then the BEAMING EFFECT. Then, fully MATERIALIZED, Riker and the others look around to orient themselves. DATA Most interesting, sir. TASHA Much the same construction as the underground tunnel we saw. Which describes it perfectly. The same rounded shape and GLOWING WALL of unknown composition. The "tunnel" is deserted; NO SHIP SOUNDS of any kind. TASHA (continuing) But no sound of power; no equipment. How does this ship run? Riker nods a direction. Tasha takes the point as they move out. Clearly, these are exceptionally well trained people. Data is already using his tricorder to check the walls. He obviously gets nothing, shakes his head. Troi suddenly staggers, GROANS. 214 CONTINUED: RIKER Troi, what is it?! (waits anxiously) Is it the same as you felt down there? TROI No, this is... different. It feels much more powerful... full of anger... hate... TASHA Toward us? TROI No. It's directed down toward the old Bandi city. DATA Most intriguing again. The place that this vessel was firing upon... (abruptly stops; to Riker) Sorry, sir, I seem to be commenting on everything. RIKER (small smile) Good. Don't stop it, my friend. 215 EXT. SPACE (OPTICAL) Enterprise and the mystery vessel still in orbit. 216 INT. BRIDGE - EMPHASIZING PICARD Geordi and Worf at their positions. Picard is in the command seat, antsy. RIKER'S VOICE Enterprise, Riker. This is turning out to be a very long tunnel or corridor, sir. Still no sign of mechanism or circuitry... 217 INT. NARROW MYSTERY SHIP TUNNEL - RIKER AND GROUP Still led and followed by the security people, they're now moving along fairly rapidly although this tunnel is narrower here. Otherwise, its look hasn't changed. RIKER (continuing) ... or controls, readouts, nothing at all like any vessel I've seen before. TROI (interrupting) Groppler Zorn, sir... in great fear... (motions) Just ahead. 218 INT. TUNNEL CONNECTION Troi and the team arriving, standing puzzled at what seems to be only a sharp turn where we SEE a strange indentation in the tunnel wall there. Troi, intent on this, steps closer, pushes her body against the indentation. TROI It's definitely Zorn, Commander. Here! RIKER (stepping in) Careful... But the tunnel wall is soft here -- it gives perceptibly, as Troi pushes harder and then PLOP... she disappears through it. (NOTE: Or the 'wall' opens to let her through and then closes behind her.) RIKER Troi!!! Then he pushes, disappears through the same wall. 219 INT. ZORN'S "CELL" Riker sliding through the pliable opening in the tunnel wall, joining Troi who is standing there aghast at what is suspended in the center of this area. 220 ANGLE AT FORCE FIELD (OPTICAL) Zorn is held suspended off the deck in the center of a cylindrical forcefield. The force field edges GLITTER SOFTLY to outline the shape of it. 221 ANGLE ON THE AWAY TEAM (OPTICAL) As the other team members come through the 'wall' too, stand, reacting at the sight of Zorn. 222 ANGLE AT FORCE FIELD (OPTICAL) The FORCEFIELD SPARKLES, CLICKS, causing Zorn to writhe and twitch. He SCREAMS. ZORN No! Please! No more! Please, no more... 223 ANGLE ON AWAY TEAM (OPTICAL) They move forward toward him, and are brought up sharply by the leading edge of the force field. Data has already started to scan with his tricorder. Riker calls to Zorn. RIKER (continuing) Zorn. Can you hear me? Zorn manages to lift his head, and WE SEE his pain-filled face, his features twisted into a grimace of intense agony. ZORN Make it stop the pain. Please... TROI Has the alien communicated... ? (breaks off; then to Riker) That's it, sir! It's just one alien that I'm sensing here. ZORN (another GROAN) Please! I don't understand what it wants. TROI (studying Zorn; then) Not true. He does know. 223 CONTINUED: Data interrupts by holding his tricorder so that Riker can see the readings he's gathered. Riker registers at seeing something unique as Data pulls out his phaser, Riker does the same and both of them concentrate on making some exact setting on their phasers. 224 ANOTHER ANGLE (OPTICAL) As Data and Riker raise their phasers toward Zorn. ZORN (in terror) No, no, please don't! Data and Riker trigger their phasers and we SEE a SORT OF COLORED GLOW on the FORCEFIELD HOLDING Zorn, the GLOW SPREADING OVER THE ENTIRE FORCEFIELD. Then, suddenly the FORCEFIELD DISAPPEARS, GLOW AND ALL, and Zorn tumbles out onto the floor free of restraint. 225 EMPHASIZING "LIVE" PART OF CELL WALL (EFFECTS) Where the wall seems to be "alive", undulating. Beyond it, Tasha is assisting Zorn to his feet, supporting him. Meanwhile, Troi looks around Zorn's "cell", sensing something troubling. Riker has turned on his communicator: RIKER Away team to Enterprise... A TENDRIL OF PLASMA EMERGES FROM THIS PART OF THE WALL, swaying and moving toward Troi. DATA (interrupting; warning) Troi... ! But the TENDRIL is already wrapping around her. Data tries to pull the TENDRIL from Troi, succeeds only in getting a NEW TENDRIL wrapped around himself. 226 ANOTHER ANGLE (EFFECTS) The floor of the area suddenly going soft, away team members sinking into it while still ANOTHER SECTION OF WALL FOLDS ITSELF OVER TASHA. (What we're seeing is this part of the mystery "vessel" becoming a living thing.) 226 CONTINUED: RIKER Enterprise, come in. Beam us... Interrupted as his feet are YANKED OUT FROM UNDER HIM. DATA Enterprise, we need help... Interrupted by the NEW TENDRIL WRAPPING ITSELF AROUND HIS HEAD. 227 INT. BRIDGE Picard speaking anxiously toward his command panel as we HEAR Riker's MUFFLED SOUNDS OF DISTRESS. PICARD Transporter chief, yank them back! Now! WORF Captain... ! 228 ANGLE INCLUDING MAIN VIEWER (OPTICAL) Toward which Lieutenant Worf is pointing. On it the IMAGE of the mystery vessel is BEGINNING TO CHANGE IN SHAPE. The firm, hard edges of the spaceship are giving way to something softer, very mysterious in nature. 229 ANOTHER ANGLE (OPTICAL) In which we SEE a familiar BLINDING FLASH and "Q" appears, now wearing the uniform of a STARFLEET CAPTAIN. "Q" (STARFLEET) Your time is up, Captain. PICARD Get off my bridge! (into command panel) Transporter Chief, do you have their coordinates? 230 ANOTHER ANGLE (EFFECTS) "Q" stepping to the command position. "Q" (STARFLEET) He can't hear you, Captain. 230 CONTINUED: "Q" gestures upward, at which Picard is suddenly lifted into the air and then to the side of "Q"'s hand motion in that direction. PICARD "Q", I've people in trouble over there... ! As Picard hovers above, "Q" steps up and sits in Picard's command position. Bridge personnel are coming to their feet angrily, then hesitate as: PICARD (continuing) Everyone, at ease! That's an order! (to "Q") My people are in trouble, "Q". Help them; I'll do whatever you say... As "Q" gives another hand signal downward, the Captain is gently deposited onto the deck. 231 WIDE PORTION OF BRIDGE (OPTICAL) As the same strange transporter SOUND that accompanied Zorn's "kidnapping" is heard and the same STRANGE TRANSPORTER EFFECT APPEARS, this time MATERIALIZING FIVE IMAGES -- Riker, Data, Troi, Tasha, and Groppler Zorn. 232 ANGLE EMPHASIZING PICARD Very surprised, looking from his away team to "Q". "Q" (STARFLEET) You'll do whatever I say? PICARD (hesitates; nods) It seems I did make that bargain. TROI The agreement isn't valid, sir. It wasn't "Q" that saved us. "Q" (STARFLEET) (quickly; indicating viewer) Save yourselves! It may attack you now. 233 ANGLE INCLUDING MAIN VIEWER (OPTICAL) On which the changed IMAGE of the mystery "vessel" seems to be floating in closer to the Enterprise. RIKER It was that which sent us back, Captain. TROI Yes sir. It's not a vessel, sir. It's alive somehow... "Q" (STARFLEET) She lies! Destroy it while you have a chance. (to Tasha) Make phasers and photon torpedoes ready... ! PICARD No! Do nothing he suggests! ZORN But that thing was killing my people, Captain... PICARD True, but why? Was there a reason? "Q" (STARFLEET) It is an unknown, Captain! Isn't that enough? PICARD If you had earned that uniform you're wearing, you'd know that the unknown is what brings us out here! "Q" (STARFLEET) Wasted effort, considering the human intelligence. PICARD Let's test that... (to Zorn) ... starting with the tunnels you have under Farpoint, Groppler. RIKER Identical to the ones on that space vessel lifeform, over there. Why was it punishing you, Groppler? 233 CONTINUED: PICARD In return for pain you caused to some other creature? ZORN We did nothing wrong! It was injured, we helped it... PICARD (interrupting; to Zorn) Thank you, that was the missing part. (turns) Tasha, rig phasers to deliver an energy beam. TASHA (puzzled) Aye, sir. Tasha steps to her panel, makes settings on controls there. RIKER Yes, Captain, I understand now. It has to be conceivable that somewhere in the galaxy there could exist creatures able to convert energy into matter... PICARD (nodding) And into specific patterns of matter. Much as our transporters do. TASHA (indicating) On the viewer, Captain! 234 ANGLE EMPHASIZING MAIN VIEWER (OPTICAL) Where the vessel/creature IMAGE is SOFTENING FURTHER INTO AN AMORPHOUS, COLORFUL AND LOVELY SHAPE. Picard turns to the Groppler, demanding: PICARD Zorn, you captured something like that, didn't you? On main viewer, the IMAGE NOW SHOWS LOVELY FEATHERY TENDRILS, and it is BEGINNING TO MOVE DOWN TOWARD THE PLANET. Zorn reacts to this, shows panic. 234 CONTINUED: ZORN Warn my people, please! Leave Farpoint Station immediately! "Q" (STARFLEET) He's lied to you, Captain. Shouldn't you let his people die? PICARD (nods to Ops) Transmit the message. "Leave Farpoint immediately". TROI Then it was a pair of creatures I was sensing. One down there in grief and pain, the other up here, filled with anger... DATA (nodding) And firing not on the new space station, but on the old Bandi city. PICARD (to "Q") Attacking those who captured it's... (to Troi) ... it's mate? TASHA Energy beam ready, sir. PICARD (to Tasha) Lock it in on Farpoint Station. "Q" stands in an annoyed manner, indicates the captain's position to Picard. "Q" (STARFLEET) I see now it was too simple a puzzle. But generosity has always been my weakness. As "Q" moves aside, Picard takes his position, turning to Tasha. PICARD Let it have whatever it can absorb. Energize! 235 EXT SPACE - THE ENTERRPISE (OPTICAL) in orbit, as a THICK, PALE BLUE ENERGY BEAM AIMS DOWNWARD. 236 EXT. FARPOINT STATION (OPTICAL) HIGH DOWNWARD SHOT SHOWING THE ENERGY BEAM terminating and being absorbed into Farpoint Station. 237 INT. BRIDGE - INCLUDING MAIN VIEWER (OPTICAL) Picard and others watching the energy beam terminating at Farpoint Station. TASHA Now getting feedback on the beam, sir. PICARD Discontinue it. (to Zorn) Groppler Zorn, there'll soon be no Farpoint Station if I'm right about this. "Q" (STARFLEET) A lucky guess! ZORN I know we deserve this loss, but please believe me, we meant not to harm the creature, but to use it. TROI Sir, a feeling of great joy. And gratitude. 238 EXT. FARPOINT STATION (OPTICAL) The city/station miniature -- the Farpoint Station part of it GROWING SOFT, SHIMMERING, SLOWLY BECOMES A CREATURE OF GOSSAMER, FEATHERY LIGHTNESS -- now gracefully rising up from its captivity. 239 ANOTHER ANGLE (OPTICAL) Where what was once the "mystery vessel" but now an increasingly beautiful COLORFUL, FEATHERY TENDRIL SHAPE is descending closer and closer to what was once the Farpoint Station part of city/station (miniature). 239 CONTINUED: THE TWO CREATURES (OPTICAL) The smaller one rising up toward its mate. They touch -- delicate matter/energy tendrils twining -- and then together they move upwards out of sight. 240 EXT SPACE - THE ENTERPRISE (OPTICAL) As the two creatures rise up past it. 241 INT. BRIDGE - INCLUDING MAIN VIEWER (OPTICAL) On which the two creatures are rising upward OUT OF IMAGE FRAME. TROI Great joy and gratitude... from both of them. 242 ANGLE EMPHASIZING "Q" (OPTICAL) As Picard turns on him. PICARD And why? Because it furnishes entertainment to you! You use other lifeforms for recreation. "Q" (STARFLEET) If so, you've not provided the best... PICARD Get off my ship, you smug hypocrite. "Q" (STARFLEET) Why not? We can also meet another time, another place. PICARD That's doesn't frighten us at all! You accuse us of "grievous savagery"? No, the one proven guilty of that crime is you! 242 CONTINUED: ANOTHER BLINDING FLASH AND "Q" DISAPPEARS. It takes a moment to realize that he is gone. Then: RIKER I trust this isn't the usual way our missions will go, sir. Picard screws up his face in mock consideration of this, then nods. PICARD On no, Number One, I'm sure they'll be much more interesting. FADE OUT. THE END STAR TREK: THE NEXT GENERATION "The Naked Now" #40271-103 Teleplay by D.C. Fontana Story by D.C. Fontana and Gene Roddenberry Based on a story by John D.F. Black (May 12, 1967) Copyright 1987 Paramount Pictures Corporation. All Rights Reserved. This script is not for publication or reproduction. No one is authorized to dispose of same. If lost or destroyed, please notify the Script Department. REVISED FINAL DRAFT June 26, 1987 STAR TREK: THE NEXT GENERATION "The Naked Now" CAST PICARD SARAH MACDOUGAL RIKER JIM SHIMODA DATA CREWMAN (2) TROI CREWWOMAN BEVERLY SECURITY GUARD TASHA TRANSPORTER CHIEF WORF CONN GEORDI WESLEY STAR TREK: THE NEXT GENERATION "The Naked Now" SETS INTERIORS EXTERIORS U.S.S. ENTERPRISE (all opticals) Main Bridge Transporter Room Crusher's Office Sickbay Various Corridors Engineering Engineer's Office Tasha's Quarters Troi's Quarters S.S. TSIOLKOVSKY Main Corridor Second Corridor Bridge Personnel Quarters Bathroom Lab STAR TREK: "The Naked Now" - REV. 7/1/87 STAR TREK: THE NEXT GENERATION "The Naked Now" TEASER FADE IN: 1 EXT. SPACE - ENTERPRISE (OPTICAL) racing through space at warp speed. PICARD (V.O.) Captain's log, Stardate 41209.2. We are running at Warp 7 to rendezvous with the science vessel S. S. Tsiolkovsky... 2 FULL ON WHITE DWARF (OPTICAL) with the S.S. Tsiolkovsky in orbit. Then the Enterprise appears and moves in to join the research vessel. PICARD (V.O.) (continuing) ... which has been routinely monitoring the collapse of a red supergiant star into a white dwarf. What has brought us here is a series of strange messages indicating something has gone wrong aboard the research vessel. 3 INT. MAIN BRIDGE (OPTICAL) All regulars on duty -- Data at Ops, Geordi at Conn, Tasha and Worf upstage intent on main viewer which shows the Enterprise moving in parallel with the research vessel. First, a STATIC GARBLE, then a WOMAN'S VOICE over the audio channel, low and insinuating. INDISTINCT VOICES, LAUGHTER, IN B.G. indicate the SOUNDS OF A NOISY PARTY. WOMAN'S COM VOICE Well, hello Enterprise. Welcome... I hope you have a lot of pretty boys on board... because I'm willing... and waiting... They wait for more, then Picard nods toward Data. STAR TREK: "The Naked Now" - REV. 6/30/87 2. 3 CONTINUED: DATA (touches com panel) S.S. Tsiolkovsky, repeat your message. WOMAN'S COM VOICE (laughter, then) In fact... we're going to have a real blowout here... Thought that would interest you. Waiting! She LAUGHS HYSTERICALLY. There is MORE LAUGHTER FROM THE OTHERS, some cries of "DO IT! GO AHEAD!" in b.g. of the transmission, an EXPLOSIVE SOUND -- and then silence. After a beat: DATA Captain... what we just heard is, well...impossible. PICARD Report. DATA (quietly) I believe that last sound we heard was an emergency hatch being blown. The subspace channel is still open -- all we HEAR is the HISS OF EMPTY AIR. PICARD Are you certain... yes, of course you are. Riker comes to his feet fast, gets a nod from Picard, motions for Data, Geordi and Tasha to follow him to the turbolift. WORF Sensor scan now reveals no life signs aboard, Captain. 4 INT. TRANSPORTER ROOM - ANGLE ON AWAY TEAM (OPTICAL) The away team consists of RIKER, GEORDI, DATA, TASHA, and a SECURITY GUARD. Data and Geordi have tricorders; Tasha has the large phaser. RIKER Put us on their bridge, Chief. STAR TREK: "The Naked Now" - REV. 6/30/87 3. 4 CONTINUED: TRANSPORTER CHIEF Life support systems are not functioning in that area, sir. Riker nods to the TRANSPORTER CHIEF at the console. RIKER Then put us in the main corridor. Energize. The Transporter Chief works his console controls deftly. As the TRANSPORTER EFFECT AND SOUNDS BEGIN AND BUILD: 5 INT. TSIOLKOVSKY MAIN CORRIDOR - ON AWAY TEAM (OPTICAL) The TRANSPORTER EFFECT COMES IN, FADES DOWN, leaving the away team materialized. The ship is very quiet -- a low HUM of working equipment, but without the murmur of living beings. RIKER Cover the ship as planned. Move out. Data and Geordi put tricorders on "record" and all move out. 6 INT. SECOND CORRIDOR - ON RIKER AND DATA (OPTICAL) This corridor shows signs of phaser char marks on the walls. There is litter on the deck -- food, a wine bottle, discarded clothes. Data records the scene with his tricorder, as: DATA Indications of what humans would call... a "wild party?" Riker has moved quickly to a door at the end of the corridor. It is shut, but there is a small viewscreen set in the wall beside it. RIKER Their bridge. If this thing works, be sure to record --- He activates the viewscreen, takes a look, and GROANS. STAR TREK: "The Naked Now" - REV. 6/26/87 4. 7 CLOSE SHOT - SMALL VIEWSCREEN (OPTICAL) Narrow view of a small bridge (SET FRAGMENT), mostly consoles, maybe a command chair. And beyond these, the emergency hatch set in the bulkhead -- the hatch is gone, and the cold glitter of a starfield winks beyond it. (SET DRESSING NOTE: There should be no loose objects visible, only items that are firmly anchored to deck or bulkhead. Anything loose would have been swept into space when the air rushed out into the vacuum.) 8 WIDER SHOT - RIKER AND DATA Riker steps aside, gesturing to Data to record the scene on the viewer as: RIKER You were right. Somebody blew the hatch and they were all sucked out into space.. DATA Correction, sir, blown out. RIKER Thank you, Data. DATA A common mistake, sir... RIKER (emphasis) I know! Thank you, Data. TASHA'S COM VOICE Commander Riker, it's Lieutenant Yar, location Engineering. Ten people here, sir, all frozen. No vital signs. RIKER (touches communicator) Frozen how? TASHA'S COM VOICE Looks to me like someone was "playing" with the environmental controls, sir. Just let all the heat bleed away into space. RIKER (to Data) That's ridiculous! TASHA'S COM VOICE That's what I say, sir. STAR TREK: "The Naked Now" - REV. 6/26/87 5. 9 INT. PERSONNEL QUARTERS - ANGLE ON ENTRY DOOR as it opens heavily and causes a slight AIR HISSING. Geordi ENTERS from the corridor, reacts to the AIR HISSING, hits a wall control on the inside. His expression changes to one of dismay as he looks around. 10 ANOTHER ANGLE CAMERA ANGLE REVEALS a room partially covered with frost. We glimpse several male and female bodies, scantily clad or (implied) nude, possibly a couple entwined. All are frozen and dead. Bits of frost-covered lingerie and other intimate clothing are scattered around. Geordi touches his insignia. GEORDI Sir, Lieutenant La Forge in the crew quarters. Something in here. 11 BACK TO GEORDI as he HEARS A SOUND, the BUMP BUMP of a door bumping against the jamb. Geordi hurries across the small room toward the adjoining bathroom. GEORDI (continuing) Hello! 12 INT. BATHROOM - ANGLE ON GEORDI Nothing inside, Geordi decides to check the closed shower stall, yanks the door open -- and a frozen WOMAN'S BODY, fully clothed, falls out into his arms. Although startled, Geordi has the presence of mind to catch the ice-covered corpse and lower it to the floor. 13 CLOSER ON GEORDI Examining the frozen woman who had once been attractive, shakes his head in pity. He rests one hand on the wet side wall of the shower to brace himself as he prepares to stand upright again. 14 VERY CLOSE ON GEORDI'S HAND AND "DROPS" (INSERT)) Several drops of "water" on the icy shower wall where Geordi's hand rests coalesce and move onto his hand (per Justman effect). STAR TREK: "The Naked Now" - REV. 6/26/87 6. 15 INT. TSIOLKOVSKY MAIN CORRIDOR - EMPHASIZING RIKER as he uses his communicator. RIKER Riker to Captain, I have a report for you. 16 INT. ENTERPRISE MAIN BRIDGE - CLOSE ON PICARD Worf at Ops (port) and crewman at Conn (starboard). PICARD (tabs com control) Picard here. RIKER'S COM VOICE They're all dead, sir. Some were apparently blown out the emergency hatches. PICARD There were eighty people on that ship, Number One. RIKER'S COM VOICE Yes sir. As I said, all dead. Picard looks incredulous. FADE OUT. END OF TEASER STAR TREK: "The Naked Now" - REV. 6/26/87 7. ACT ONE FADE IN: 17 EXT. SPACE - ENTERPRISE AND TSIOLKOVSKY (OPTICAL) The Tsiolkovsky still drifts in space. The Enterprise is nearby. Over this: PICARD (V.O.) Captain's log, supplemental. We are downloading the research information gathered on the collapsing... 18 CLOSE ANGLE ON DWARF STAR (OPTICAL) looking somehow strange, unstable, although we'd see no surface movement at this range. PICARD (V.O.) (continuing) ... star nearby. I am concerned at being in such close orbit, but the Tsiolkovsky's research records... 19 INT. ENTERPRISE MEDICAL CORRIDOR with Picard striding toward Dr. Crusher's office. PICARD (V.O.) (continuing) ... will no doubt predict the time of the star's final collapse. 20 INT. CRUSHER'S OFFICE - ON BEVERLY, PICARD AND TROI Beverly is examining information as it comes up on a desktop viewer. (NOTE: We see only the back of the viewer and the flicker of light on her face as the information changes.) Troi is there too, also watching the screen. Picard ENTERS, strides over to examine the viewing screen too. BEVERLY I can't find anything unusual in any of the tricorder readings they've sent over, Captain. STAR TREK: "The Naked Now" - REV. 6/26/87 8. 20 CONTINUED: Picard straightens up, and Beverly turns around to look at him. PICARD Give me a theory, Doctor. Anything! Beverly's silence is eloquent. She shakes her head, her face has a worried look. PICARD (turning; continuing) Troi? Did you feel anything from over there? TROI Perhaps some residual confusion... and exhilaration, too. But I'm not too certain of that. PICARD Madness? Mass hysteria? Delusion? TROI Any or all, Captain. PICARD All right. Let's bring the away team back. Set the transporter for maximum decontamination. And then full examinations and observation when they're here. He turns and heads for the door. 21 EXT. SPACE - ENTERPRISE AND TSIOLKOVSKY (OPTICAL) as before. 22 INT. ENTERPRISE SICKBAY - BEVERLY, RIKER, GEORDI, DATA Data is just getting up from one of the hospital beds as: BEVERLY If you were any more perfect, Data, I'd write you up in a Starfleet medical textbook. STAR TREK: "The Naked Now" - REV. 6/26/87 9. 22 CONTINUED: DATA I am already listed in several biomechanical texts, Doctor. Beverly doesn't quite yet know how to take Data. Riker does, and grins. BEVERLY Yes... of course. (to Geordi) You're next, Lieutenant. Data LEAVES. Geordi obligingly lies down on the hospital bed, and Beverly starts to monitor him with a small instrument. 23 ANGLE ON MEDICAL VIEWSCREEN The readings come on -- nothing radical anywhere. 24 WIDER ANGLE as Beverly looks up at the o.s. viewscreen, then: BEVERLY (continuing) Normal -- all across. Except... why are you perspiring? Geordi appears to have a fine sheen of perspiration on his face. GEORDI I suppose because you have it too hot in here. What else would it be? Both Beverly and Riker have reacted to this un-Geordi reply. RIKER That doesn't... sound exactly like you, Geordi. Geordi looks up, then replies pleasantly, grinning. GEORDI Maybe it wasn't. (indicates Beverly) Maybe she threw her voice. He means it as a joke but no one is amused. STAR TREK: "The Naked Now" - REV. 6/30/87 10. 24 CONTINUED: GEORDI (continuing) Joke. BEVERLY Of course. But I would like to run another test or two on you, Lieutenant. 25 INT. MAIN BRIDGE AND CRUSHER'S OFFICE (INTERCUTS) as Picard turns to his panel. BEVERLY'S COM VOICE Sickbay to Bridge... PICARD Picard here. Go ahead, Doctor. BEVERLY'S COM VOICE I'm confining Lieutenant La Forge to Sickbay until further notice. PICARD Do we have a problem, Doctor? BEVERLY'S COM VOICE I don't know yet. 26 INT. ENTERPRISE MAIN BRIDGE - FULL SHOT as Riker ENTERS from a turbolift and crosses toward Data, who is working at one of the science stations at the rear of the Bridge. All other Bridge Personnel are in place -- Picard, Tasha, Worf at Ops, Crewman at Conn. 27 CLOSER TWO SHOT - RIKER AND DATA Data looks up as Riker approaches him. RIKER Data, I need help in locating some library-computer information. DATA Specifics, sir? STAR TREK: "The Naked Now" - REV. 6/30/87 10A. 27 CONTINUED: RIKER All I have is a vague memory of reading somewhere about someone taking a shower in his or her clothing. STAR TREK: "The Naked Now" - REV. 7/2/87 11. 27 CONTINUED: DATA Ah. The body Geordi discovered. RIKER And I believe it may have happened before. DATA To "someone," "somewhere." RIKER (amused) Should be easy for someone written up in biomechanical texts. Data shrugs, enters a command on the panel, and information begins to flash up on a small viewscreen. (Viewscreen may be o.s.) DATA About that... did the doctor believe I was boasting? RIKER (dryly) Probably. (indicates viewer) This may take some time? DATA At least several hours. (looks up) But what I said was a statement of fact. Riker begins EXITING. DATA (continuing) Perhaps she will look it up. RIKER You can depend on it. 28 INT. SICKBAY - ANGLE ON GEORDI AND BEVERLY He is resting on a hospital bed. Beverly finishes working over him with a medical instrument, checks a reading on it, moves toward her office. (NOTE: At no time does she touch him.) STAR TREK: "The Naked Now" - REV. 7/2/87 12. 29 INT. CRUSHER'S OFFICE - ON BEVERLY She sits down at her desk, compares readings on the medical instrument with something she has called up on the viewer. 30 INT. SICKBAY - ON GEORDI He sits up, takes off his communicator and lays it to one side. Then he gets to his feet, and quietly EXITS the Sickbay. A moment, then Beverly comes back IN -- stares at the empty bed, snatches up Geordi's communicator and runs for the door. BEVERLY Geordi! 31 INT. CORRIDOR OUTSIDE SICKBAY - ON BEVERLY The door slides open and she stands there, agitatedly staring up and down the corridor. 32 BEVERLY'S P.O.V. - THE CORRIDOR empty. 33 INT. MAIN BRIDGE - ON TASHA as she hears an ALERT SIGNAL from her panel. BEVERLY'S COM VOICE Security! Lieutenant La Forge just left Sickbay while my back was turned. It's important we find him. TASHA (toward console) Security team alert, pick up Lieutenant La Forge who left Sickbay moments ago. (calling toward Picard) Captain, anything further? PICARD Affirmative. Make it a ship-wide search, Lieutenant. STAR TREK: "The Naked Now" - REV. 7/2/87 12A. 34 INT. CRUSHER'S QUARTERS - ANGLE ON WESLEY AND GEORDI The boy is in the living space, near a table littered with delicate futuristic tools. STAR TREK: "The Naked Now" - REV. 7/1/87 13. 34 CONTINUED: He has an intricately shaped tube attached to a miniature control device. It is a MINIATURE TRACTOR BEAM (OPTICAL). As Geordi watches, Wesley is using the device to maneuver a chair in the air. WESLEY It's a model of the same kind of tractor beam our ship uses... with some ideas of my own added. He hoists the chair higher, floats it sideways, lets it settle to the deck. Geordi is fascinated. GEORDI So that's your science project. Wes, you are something! WESLEY Meanwhile, the captain won't let me visit the bridge. Wesley goes to the littered table, pulls out a transparent cube, slides it into a slot on a small flat (portable) machine. WESLEY (continuing) So I use this to imagine I'm there. Wesley touches a control and a light goes on at the tiny machine. PICARD'S VOICE Take the helm, Mister Crusher. Set a course for thirty-seven mark one hundred eighty. Warp six. GEORDI (indicates) That's the captain's voice. WESLEY Pieced together from words he's used on the intercom. (indicates) I can pretend he's ordering me to take the Enterprise anywhere. And listen to this... Wesley touches another control. STAR TREK: "The Naked Now" - REV. 6/30/87 14. 34 CONTINUED: (2) PICARD'S VOICE Chief Engineer, report to the Bridge. Commander Riker, report to the Bridge. Doctor Crusher, report to the Bridge. WESLEY What d'you think? Geordi puts a friendly arm about the boy's shoulder. GEORDI I think the captain's lucky you're on his side. WESLEY But he still won't let me on the bridge. And there's nothing there I don't understand. GEORDI Wish I understood myself that well. Wesley turns at the "down" note in Geordi's voice. WESLEY You okay? GEORDI No. Suddenly I seem to be burning up inside. Geordi stands, moves for the door. GEORDI (continuing) Wow it's hot in here. Geordi EXITS leaving a puzzled Wesley inside. 34A INT. CORRIDORS Tasha and Security Personnel searching for Geordi. 35 INT. OBSERVATION LOUNGE - ANGLE ON GEORDI perspiring, upset. Looking out to space. TASHA'S VOICE Geordi... ? STAR TREK: "The Naked Now" - REV. 6/26/87 15. 35 CONTINUED: She ENTERS SCENE from behind him, looking for a reaction from him. TASHA (continuing) Medical's been worried about you. GEORDI (without turning) Help me. Tasha studies him a beat. He seems so sad, so lonely. Then: TASHA Lieutenant Yar in the Observation Lounge. Send a team here now. After a beat, Geordi swings around to look at her, pain and longing chasing across his face. GEORDI Tasha... I said "help me." Help me not to give in to the wild things coming into my mind... Tasha is moved, tries to fight it off. TASHA Geordi -- my job is security... GEORDI Please. Tasha folds him into arms. TASHA Yes, helping is more important. How can I help you Geordi? 36 INSERT - TASHA'S HAND being patted by Geordi's hand. 37 BACK TO SHOT A Security Guard hurries into the room, stops as Tasha motions him to a halt. GEORDI Help me to see like you do. STAR TREK: "The Naked Now" - REV. 6/26/87 16. 37 CONTINUED: TASHA But you already see better than I can. GEORDI I see more. But more isn't better! He tears off the prosthesis, exposing eyes that have flat gray irises with no pupil, incapable of expression. TASHA Geordi... GEORDI I want to see in shallow, dim, beautiful human ways. TASHA We'll talk about it, Geordi. (takes his arm) I'm going to take you to Sickbay now. All right? He bobs his head, willing to be assisted. As she leads him away: FADE OUT. END OF ACT ONE STAR TREK: "The Naked Now" - REV. 6/26/87 17. ACT TWO FADE IN: 38 EXT. SPACE - ENTERPRISE AND TSIOLKOVSKY (OPTICAL) The dwarf star in view too. PICARD (V. O.) Captain's log, supplemental. I am concerned that away team member Lieutenant La Forge has been taken to Sickbay. The report: "unusual behavior." 39 INT. SICKBAY - ANGLE ON BEVERLY, GEORDI, TROI Geordi is lying on a hospital bed still struggling to control his emotions, while Beverly works her medical instruments over him, glancing up now and then at the o.s. viewscreen to check the results. Troi is assisting the monitoring. 40 INT. CRUSHER'S OFFICE - ON TASHA AND PICARD TASHA ... and then we got him down to sickbay so Dr. Crusher could examine him. PICARD He wasn't violent? She glances over her shoulder back toward the treatment room. TASHA No, sir. He was very upset... he kept talking about wanting normal eyes. PICARD Thank you, Lieutenant. I'll be in Sickbay. Picard HURRIES OUT immediately. It's clear he has much on his mind. Tasha moves to EXIT, then pauses. STAR TREK: "The Naked Now" - REV. 6/26/87 18. 41 CLOSE ON TASHA wiping a hand over her lightly perspiring brow. As she EXITS, it is clear she feels strange somehow. 42 INT. SICKBAY - ON BEVERLY, GEORDI, TROI, PICARD Beverly administers a hypospray to Geordi, which finally begins to calm his emotional state. As Picard joins them, Beverly turns and indicates her medical viewscreen. BEVERLY According to our medical readouts, there's still nothing wrong with him. He looks like he's running a temperature but every instrument we have says he's not. PICARD Doctor, every person on that ship over there died. Is there any chance that whatever did it is loose on my ship? BEVERLY If you mean a disease, sir, I'd say there's no chance of it. We used full decontamination, we examined each team member carefully... PICARD (interrupting) The entire crew over there somehow managed to kill themselves, Doctor. If it wasn't a disease, what else could have made them do that? BEVERLY The obvious alternatives would be in areas of insanity, severe emotional upset... (stops short; to Troi) Troi, do you feel anything unusual in the lieutenant here? PICARD (to Troi) Security reported he was longing for normal eyesight. A rather sudden yearning for that. STAR TREK: "The Naked Now" - REV. 6/26/87 19. 42 CONTINUED: TROI Since his records show no previous mention of that, the fact that it's happened now could be important. Troi centers her attention on Geordi, mentally probing. Then: TROI (continuing) But all I feel from him is confusion. If I didn't know better, I'd say he was intoxicated. The Captain throws a quick look toward Beverly who shakes her head firmly. BEVERLY Our tests would have shown that. Also any signs of drugs, hallucinogens or other contaminants. 43 INT. ENTERPRISE MAIN BRIDGE - ANGLE ON RIKER AND DATA still at the science station, Data's fingers flying over tabs on the console. He looks at the viewscreen, shakes his head. Worf and Crewman as before. DATA Can you provide more information, sir? Seeking an instance of someone showering with their clothing on is...is... RIKER I know... like looking for a needle in a haystack. DATA (puzzled) Why should anyone wish to expend their time in such a search? RIKER Correction, Data, I should have said proverbial needle in a haystack. STAR TREK: "The Naked Now" - REV. 6/26/87 20. 43 CONTINUED: DATA Ah, a human proverb! As in folklore, or an historical allusion, or tribal memories, or... RIKER (interrupting) That's it! Historical! I remember now that I was reading a history of all the past starships named Enterprise. Data takes over the console, quickly tabbing in commands as: DATA Enterprise history. Aberrant behavior. Medical cross reference... 44 ANGLE TO INCLUDE TURBOLIFT as Picard ARRIVES, CROSSES toward his Bridge position. Riker sees him, calls: RIKER Captain, I believe we've got the answer to what happened over there. 45 ANGLE AT VIEWER where Data continues refining the information he's getting. Riker is watching over his shoulder as Picard moves in to examine the information too. PICARD The Constitution class Enterprise, Captain James T. Kirk commanding... RIKER (indicates viewer) Similar conditions. They were monitoring a planet that was breaking up, not a collapsing star as in this case, but there were the same huge shifts in gravity... STAR TREK: "The Naked Now" - REV. 7/1/87 21. 45 CONTINUED: PICARD (peers closely) ... which somehow resulted in complex strings of water molecules which then acquired carbon from the body and acted on the brain like alcohol! (to Data) Mister Data, download that information immediately to medical. DATA Aye sir, downloading. Picard and Riker both study the information on the viewer. PICARD Fascinating! Their entire crew going out of control... RIKER Like intoxication but worse. Judgment almost completely impaired... PICARD Until they found this formula, barely in time. (moves to his own console) Picard to Doctor Crusher, come in. After a moment: BEVERLY'S COM VOICE This is Crusher; go ahead Captain. PICARD You can relax, Doctor. The answer to all this is feeding into your medical banks now... including a cure. A long beat, then: BEVERLY'S COM VOICE Are you certain, Captain? PICARD Absolutely! Data has looked up with a slight pained expression at Picard's "absolutely." STAR TREK: "The Naked Now" - REV. 6/26/87 22. 46 INT. TROI'S QUARTERS - ON TROI Troi's quarters are tastefully decorated, including a scattering of art objects that may be Betazoid in origin -- perhaps a wall hanging, a unique piece of pottery or statuette, or paintings. At the moment, there are also a number of lovely dresses and gowns draped over the furniture. Troi ENTERS and stops inside the door, staring. TROI Tasha? 47 INCLUDING TASHA She is somewhat agitated and has a light sheen of perspiration as she holds one of Troi's gowns against her, judging it for color. The size, of course, would be all wrong for her. TROI (continuing) What're you doing? TASHA I need your advice. That's why I came to your quarters. TROI Of course. Anything I can do --- TASHA (interrupting) On clothes. You always wear such beautiful clothes off duty. And your hair's so nice all the time. I want to change my image. (holds up dress) What about this color? TROI Not for you. Tasha, I feel you're very uncertain... that you're fighting something. She reaches out to take Tasha's hand comfortingly. TROI (continuing) What is it? Tasha pulls her hand away, tosses down the dress, and moves to the door as: STAR TREK: "The Naked Now" - REV. 6/26/87 23. 47 CONTINUED: TASHA Never mind. I'll find what I need myself. Ship's Stores will have it. TROI Tasha, wait --- Tasha LEAVES. Troi immediately touches the com panel. TROI (continuing) Troi to Captain Picard. 48 INT. MAIN BRIDGE - ON PICARD PICARD Picard here. TROI'S COM VOICE Sir, I think Tasha's been infected, too. She's just left my quarters... PICARD It's not actually an "infection," Counselor. TROI'S COM VOICE Yes sir, it's more like intoxication, but whatever it is, she's got it. 49 ANGLE TO INCLUDE RIKER AND DATA PICARD Thank you, Counselor. (to Riker) Number One, our security chief has the equivalent of a snootful. DATA (to Picard) Inquiry, sir... 'snootful?' PICARD Forget it! STAR TREK: "The Naked Now" - REV. 6/30/87 24. 50 INT. CRUSHER'S OFFICE - ANGLE ON BEVERLY She is checking the lab report on Geordi against information on her viewscreen when: WESLEY (V.O) Mom, Look what I can do... She turns, gets to her feet in alarm and hurries into the treatment room. 51 INT. SICKBAY - INCLUDING WESLEY AND BEVERLY (OPTICAL) Wesley again has the tractor beam on and is balancing several medical instruments in mid-air all at the same time. We can also SEE he's perspiring a bit. WESLEY (continuing) I've been able to widen and strengthen the beam, just like I told you last night --- BEVERLY Do me a favor, Wes? There's something happening on this ship... (shrugs) Just to be safe, I'd like you to stay in our quarters until it's solved. WESLEY (slightly silly grin) Right, Mom, right. Your wish is my... BEVERLY Now, Wes. Wesley lowers the floating instruments and turns off the little tractor beam as: WESLEY (another grin) You could be stunting my emotional growth, you know. (wipes forehead) Why's it so hot in here, anyway? He heads for the door. Beverly pauses, thinking about his words a moment, then has to forget it as: STAR TREK: "The Naked Now" - REV. 6/26/87 25. 51 CONTINUED: PICARD'S COM VOICE Picard to Crusher. Have you made a test injection yet? We're getting indications that this condition is spreading. BEVERLY No test yet, Captain, but very soon. 52 INT. CORRIDOR - CLOSE ON A VERY SHAPELY REAR END moving down the corridor with a most provocative sway. CAMERA PULLS BACK TO REVEAL the shapely rear end belongs to Tasha, and she is moving with the sexiest walk imaginable -- quite unlike her usual straightforward stride. Her whole expression has acquired a sexy pout. She approaches an intersection where several crewpersons are passing. Then, we HEAR GIGGLES, then a woman's LAUGHING SCREAM. TRANSPORTER CHIEF Come to Papa; come to Papa... ! MORE LAUGHTER as A CREWMAN chases a CREWWOMAN around the corner and into the other corridor. Other crew odd behavior. 53 WIDER ANGLE From the reactions of the crewpersons in sight it is obvious that some have been infected and some not. Another CREWMAN is coming from the other direction and pauses as he sees Tasha swaying sexily toward him, openly flirting. She stops in front of him. 54 TASHA AND CREWMAN She reaches out to pull him a little closer and plants one hell of a kiss on him. As he returns it: 55 INT. ENTERPRISE MAIN BRIDGE - FULL SHOT As Picard returns to his chair, Data moves toward him. DATA Captain, in another forty-one minutes will see the information from the Tsiolkovsky downloaded to us. STAR TREK: "The Naked Now" - REV. 7/2/87 26. 55 CONTINUED: PICARD Why so slow? DATA Slow, sir? The Tsiolkovsky has been eight months in accumulating it. PICARD (indicates viewer) How much danger from that star? Worse case. 56 ANGLE ON MAIN VIEWSCREEN (OPTICAL) The collapsing star centered on the screen in the midst of very slow motion surface explosions. DATA (V.O.) Like a full collapse, sir? 57 BACK TO TWO SHOT - PICARD AND DATA DATA (continuing) Any stellar material it threw this way we could still outrun on half impulse power. 58 ANGLE AT MAIN VIEWSCREEN (OPTICAL) as before, the slow surface explosions on the collapsing star continuing from the last viewscreen SHOT. 59 INT. ENGINEERING OFFICE - FULL SHOT CHIEF ENGINEER SARAH MACDOUGAL and her ASSISTANT CHIEF JIM SHIMODA are working in the office at their consoles. They both glance up as the BOSUN'S WHISTLE SOUNDS, then: PICARD'S COM VOICE Picard to Engineering. Chief engineer report to the bridge. MacDougal shakes her head, EXITS the office. Shimoda turns back to his console. STAR TREK: "The Naked Now" - REV. 6/26/87 27. 59 CONTINUED: PICARD'S COM VOICE (continuing) Assistant Chief Engineer Shimoda report to Medical. Shimoda hesitates, looks around the empty office. A beat... then Wesley ENTERS the office, carrying the small flat portable machine we saw earlier. We should also SEE the small tractor beam device with tube and fiber optic wire attachment. WESLEY Hi, Jim. Was that the captain sending you to Medical? SHIMODA Which would leave no one on duty here. The chief was just summoned to the bridge. WESLEY What about me? I could call your chief on the bridge if anything happens. He smiles at Shimoda... and wipes some sweat from his brow. 60 INT. ENTERPRISE MAIN BRIDGE - ANGLE ON PICARD AND MACDOUGAL Picard looks around curiously as MacDougal approaches the command chair: MACDOUGAL Reporting as ordered, sir. PICARD What? MACDOUGAL You ordered me to report to the bridge, sir. PICARD I did no such thing. I want you down in the Engine Room in case we need to move out of here. Interrupted by a Bosun's WHISTLE ALERT: STAR TREK: "The Naked Now" - REV. 6/26/87 28. 60 CONTINUED: PICARD'S COM VOICE Attention all decks, all divisions. Effective immediately, I have handed over control of this vessel to Acting Captain Wesley Crusher. 61 CLOSE ON PICARD Sheer disbelief. PICARD Acting Capt... WESLEY'S COM VOICE Thank you, Captain Picard, thank you. And with that order dawns a brave new day for the Enterprise. FADE OUT. END OF ACT TWO STAR TREK: "The Naked Now" - REV. 6/30/87 29. ACT THREE FADE IN: 62 EXT. SPACE - THE ENTERPRISE (OPTICAL) PICARD (V.O) Captain's log, Stardate 41209.3. The strange contaminant that led to the deaths of the Tsiolkovsky crew is now aboard the Enterprise... and our Engineering Section has been commandeered by young Wesley Crusher... 63 INT. ENTERPRISE MAIN BRIDGE - EMPHASIZING PICARD PICARD (continuing) Number One, MacDougal -- get that boy out of Engineering. Riker and MacDougal turn and head for a turbolift as: 64 ANGLE ON WORF Worf at Ops, Data at the Conn station. Worf turns around toward Picard, concerned. WORF Sir, I'm getting very strange reports from all decks -- PICARD Such as? WORF Such as the ship's training division ordering all officers to attend a lecture on metaphysics. PICARD Metaphysics? STAR TREK: "The Naked Now" - REV. 7/1/87 30. 65 INCLUDING DATA AT CONN DATA Confirmed, sir. And there is a rather peculiar limerick being delivered by someone in the shuttlecraft bay. I am not sure I understand it... (quoting) There was a young lady from Venus whose body was shaped like -- 66 EMPHASIZING PICARD PICARD (interrupting) Captain to Security, come in! DATA (to Worf) Did I say something wrong? WORF (shrugs) I don't understand their humor either. SECURITY COM VOICE (lazy, uninterested) Yeah, Captain? PICARD Where's my security chief?! Get me Lieutenant Yar. SECURITY COM VOICE Keep your britches on, Captain. TASHA'S COM VOICE Captain Picard... PICARD Yar, where are you? TASHA'S COM VOICE I'm in my quarters and pretty busy right at this moment, Jean-Luc. PICARD (gathering self together) All right, Lieutenant, just stay right there. (MORE) STAR TREK: "The Naked Now" - REV. 7/1/87 31. 66 CONTINUED: PICARD (Cont'd) (turning) Data, please go to Lieutenant Yar and get her down to Sickbay. DATA Yes, sir. PICARD (into console) Security, I want all your senior supervisors to report to the bridge immediately. 67 INT. ENGINEERING (OPTICAL) A FORCEFIELD SHIMMER at the entrance to the Engineering Office, barring the way inside. Beyond the FORCEFIELD inside the office stands Wesley who is grinning at several Crewpersons, all of them clearly contaminated, who stand outside the FORCEFIELD. Assistant Chief Engineer Shimoda ENTERS, grinning and weaving slightly, walks up to the FORCEFIELD as: WESLEY ... and a dessert course shall henceforth precede and follow every meal. Including breakfast. CHEERS from the onlookers. CREWMAN Hurray for the acting captain! 68 ANGLE ON SHIMODA (OPTICAL) SHIMODA Never got as far as Sickbay, Wes. I feel too good for that. BUZZ SOUND as Shimoda walks into the FORCEFIELD and is thrown back. SHIMODA (continuing) Incredible! How did you do that? STAR TREK: "The Naked Now" - REV. 6/26/87 32. 68 CONTINUED: WESLEY (indicating) Hooked my model tractor beam into ship's power. Now its a repulser beam too. (eyeing Shimoda) Want in? Shimoda nods, raises his right hand as in oath. SHIMODA Swear to be faithful to you, Captain! 69 INT. ENGINEERING OFFICE (OPTICAL) Wesley picks up a small control device, aims it at the FORCEFIELD which disappears. Shimoda steps inside, then Wesley turns the forcefield on again. 70 INT. TASHA'S QUARTERS - AT DOOR The living space is low lit, provocative shadows. There is a CHIME, a beat, then the door slides open. Data stands there, hesitant, steps in. He looks around, not quite sure of himself. DATA Lieutenant Yar? TASHA'S VOICE Here, Data. 71 ANGLE ON TASHA in the door to her bedroom. Her hair is provocatively arranged... her makeup is especially dramatic and attractive... and she wears a pale blue diaphanous Theiss creation that promises revelations that will get us thrown off the air. Her voice quality has changed too... sultry, like a Louisiana summer night. TASHA (continuing) You wanted me? 72 TWO SHOT Tasha moves languidly toward Data, almost floating. Data doesn't quite know how to react to this Tasha. STAR TREK: "The Naked Now" - REV. 6/26/87 33. 72 CONTINUED: DATA Captain Picard ordered me to escort you to Sickbay, Lieutenant. TASHA Did he say when? DATA (considering it, then) I am sure he meant "now." (indicates) So you need time to get into uniform... TASHA But I got out of uniform for you, Data. Do you know how old I was when I was abandoned? DATA Chronological age? No, I am afraid I am not conversant with your --- TASHA Five. Five years old, but I survived. I learned how to stay alive, how to avoid the rape gangs. I was fifteen before I escaped. DATA I am sorry. I did not know... TASHA And what I want now is gentleness. And joy. And love. She reaches out and caresses his face. Data shifts his weight, not sure what to do. TASHA (continuing) From you, Data. You are fully functional, aren't you? DATA Of course, but... TASHA How fully? STAR TREK: "The Naked Now" - REV. 6/30/87 34. 72 CONTINUED: (2) DATA In every way, of course. I have been programmed in multiple techniques, a broad variety of pleasuring... TASHA You jewel! That's exactly what I hoped. Her smile is provocative, full of promises; and Data tentatively smiles back. As the bedroom door CLOSES behind them: 73 EXT. SPACE - ENTERPRISE AND TSIOLKOVSKY (OPTICAL) In b.g., then collapsing star begins slowly to GLOW BRIGHTER. 74 INT. ENGINEERING - ON RIKER He is standing near a communications computer panel. PICARD'S COM VOICE What have you learned, Number One? RIKER Captain, the ship's engines are cut off from the bridge. And I have the reason. The assistant chief engineer pulled out the isolinear optical chips from command and all engines are off-line. 75 INT. ENGINEER'S OFFICE - ON SHIMODA AND WESLEY (OPTICAL) Shimoda is sitting on the floor near an opened console, playing happily with a pile of isolinear chips (small colored slabs, rather like Chiclets), tossing them in the air or juggling them, staring at the pretty colors. Wesley looks with an air of pride and satisfaction at his portable TRACTOR BEAM which is emitting a beam wide enough to block the entire opening into the Engineer's Office. 76 INT. ENGINEERING - ON RIKER AND MACDOUGAL as the Engineer COMES IN beside Riker. STAR TREK: "The Naked Now" - REV. 6/26/87 35. 76 CONTINUED: RIKER (continuing) Wesley's hooked some kind of tractor beam into ship's power and has it aimed at the door. We can't get past it to get at the computer. PICARD'S COM VOICE Can you short out the power? Riker looks to MacDougal. She shrugs. MACDOUGAL Maybe. (considers) Yes, I can. But it's going to take time. 77 INT. ENTERPRISE MAIN BRIDGE - CLOSE ON PICARD Concerned. PICARD Do it! 78 INT. ENGINEERING - ON RIKER AND MACDOUGAL as they pull a panel off the console opposite the Engineer's Office entry, and MacDougal starts to reach inside. From their right, there is the SOUND of turbolift doors and: TROI'S VOICE Bill... 79 INT. CORRIDOR TO ENGINEERING as Riker comes to her. RIKER Deanna, what -- ? She reaches for him before he can stop her, holds him tight. TROI So many minds on this ship, Bill... all free... released... STAR TREK: "The Naked Now" - REV. 6/26/87 36. 79 CONTINUED: Her hands move sensuously on his back, her body closer to his. RIKER Deanna -- TROI I can feel them all... what they feel... what they want... I feel a side of humans I've never felt before. RIKER Come on, I'm getting you to Sickbay. He catches her up in his arms, carries her toward the turbolift as: TROI Wouldn't you rather be alone with me -- with me in your mind... 80 INT. SICKBAY - ANGLE ON BEVERLY She has a large beaker or futuristic-shaped container from which she is loading a hypo-spray. The hypo-spray filled, she moves across to where Geordi La Forge lies still strapped on the hospital bed. He is awake now, his face a picture of desolation. Beverly administers the hypo-spray and steps back to observe. BEVERLY The medical records we found say this works almost instantly. Geordi lies still, staring at the ceiling. Then: GEORDI I've never seen a rainbow, Doc. Sunset. Sunrise. None of those. This is going to help me? Beverly stares at Geordi, horrified as realization comes. It doesn't work. 81 EXT. SPACE - ENTERPRISE AND TSIOLKOVSKY AND DWARF STAR (OPTICAL) No movement at all. STAR TREK: "The Naked Now" - REV. 7/1/87 37. 82 INT. SICKBAY - ANGLE ON RIKER AND TROI as he carries her into the treatment area, lays her down gently on a bed next to Geordi's. RIKER Doctor Crusher... He turns, looking for Beverly. She does not appear. He hurries into her office. 83 INT. CRUSHER'S OFFICE - ON BEVERLY AND RIKER She is sitting at the desk, desolate. Riker COMES IN behind her, puts a hand on her shoulder to shake her slightly. RIKER Didn't you hear me? Deanna needs your help. BEVERLY The formula from the old Enterprise didn't work. RIKER What? BEVERLY This water-carbon complex may induce the same symptoms, but it's different somehow. Maybe it's mutated. I'll have to isolate it... analyze it... RIKER We don't have that kind of time. She suddenly snaps around, realizing something. BEVERLY You brought Deanna in? RIKER She's infected with it, too. He heads for the door. Beverly is on her feet anxiously. BEVERLY You touched her? Oh, God, you touched me. (then) You can't leave here -- STAR TREK: "The Naked Now" - REV. 6/26/87 38. 83 CONTINUED: RIKER If we don't get our command computers back on-line soon, this -- whatever this is -- won't matter. We'll all be dead. On Beverly's despairing face: FADE OUT. END OF ACT THREE STAR TREK: "The Naked Now" - REV. 6/30/87 39. ACT FOUR FADE IN: 84 EXT. SPACE - ENTERPRISE, TSIOLKOVSKY, DWARF STAR As before with very slow (at this distance) flaring from the star. PICARD (V. O.) Captain's log, supplemental. It is no longer an inconvenient childish prank. Young Wesley Crusher... (beat; softening) Admittedly a victim of the Tsiolkovsky "infection"... 85 INT. MAIN BRIDGE - ANGLE ON MAIN VIEWER (OPTICAL) Showing a SHOT of Wesley in the Engineering office. Also at the Bridge are Worf at the Ops position and crewman at Conn. PICARD (V. O.) (continuing) ... is now in control of my starship. How he acquired the engineering information and knowledge he is using, I have no idea. 86 ANGLE ON PICARD staring up at Wesley's IMAGE on the main viewer. PICARD (continuing) Wes, this is Captain Picard. Do you see me? 87 VARIOUS ANGLES (OPTICAL) as Wesley looks up and around, focuses his attention onto camera (the captain). Although showing the same contaminant symptoms as others, he speaks respectfully. WESLEY Yes sir? STAR TREK: "The Naked Now" - REV. 6/26/87 40. 87 CONTINUED: PICARD You will now return all control of this vessel to the bridge where it belongs. Now. WESLEY I'm sorry, sir. Why don't you just tell me what you want done and I'll... PICARD (interrupting) Because ship captains control their own vessels, young man! WESLEY But, sir, you don't do it yourself. You give the orders, someone else does it. What's wrong with giving me the orders to do it? Worf and Conn have exchanged looks during this although Conn has begun to perspire and appears uncomfortable. Worf sees something unusual on his console, interrupts Picard. WORF Captain, getting unusual readings now from the dwarf star... ! PICARD Stand by a moment on that. (toward main viewer) Wesley... ! (softens it) Wes... are you aware that you're acting strangely... that a kind of "infection" was brought back from the Tsiolkovsky that acts like intoxication? WESLEY (considers it) Are you saying that's why I feel so... so "hot," so strange? Picard wants to shout back "of freakin' course!" but he controls himself. PICARD That's a very adult bit of reasoning, Wes... STAR TREK: "The Naked Now" - REV. 6/26/87 41. 87 CONTINUED: (2) WESLEY Are you saying I'm "drunk?" I feel strange but also good. PICARD Because... (corrects his tone of voice) Because you've lost the capacity for self-judgment. Alcohol does that but this contaminant we've brought back does it even more so. WESLEY What would you do if you got your ship back? PICARD It's very important I do because we must immediately put a tractor beam on the Tsiolkovsky, then tow it out of... WESLEY Tractor beams are my specialty, Skipper! I'll contact you when that's done; Wesley out! With which the VIEWER GOES DARK, and then is replaced with a view of the dwarf star. It is in the midst of a gigantic FLARE. PICARD Wes! Conn gets up from his position now, weaves toward the turbolift. PICARD (continuing) Conn, where are you headed? No answer. Conn will EXIT by turbolift as: WORF Sir! (indicating viewscreen) The star; it's beginning to collapse. PICARD What the hell is happening in Engineering? STAR TREK: "The Naked Now" - Rev. 6/26/87 42. 88 INT. ENGINEERING OFFICE - ANGLE ON WESLEY AND SHIMODA Wesley is working some controls on one of the consoles, singing: WESLEY Lock on, Tsiolkovsky, lock on... lock on, Tsiolkovsky, lock on... Behind him, Shimoda still sits on the floor, playing something like "jacks" with the isolinear optical chips from the computer, scooping up the chips in orderly groups -- 1, 2, 3, etc. 89 INT. ENGINEERING - ON MACDOUGAL AND RIKER They work together at the console opposite the entrance to Engineer's Office, probing deep into the guts of the console. A small array of tools lies between them, which they share. MACDOUGAL You got the logic probe? (he hands it to her) Thanks. RIKER Where's the sonic driver? She grunts and gestures at the spread of tools. Riker looks, finds it, dives into the console again. MacDougal works quickly, steps back. MACDOUGAL There. Let's see if this'll cut out his tractor beam power. She reaches inside the console and switches something. She and Riker both turn to look behind them. 90 ANGLE THROUGH WINDOW INTO ENGINEER'S OFFICE (OPTICAL) Wesley grins cheerfully. The TRACTOR BEAM is STILL AIMED AT THE DOOR. 91 INT. CRUSHER'S OFFICE - ON BEVERLY She grimly works at a futuristic microscope, then becomes aware that she is wiping perspiration from her face. STAR TREK: "The Naked Now" - REV. 6/26/87 43. 91 CONTINUED: BEVERLY Oh no! No, I must find the answer. Find the answer. Have to find the answer. She reaches for another slide but handles it confusedly. 92 EXT. SPACE - ENTERPRISE AND TSIOLKOVSKY (OPTICAL) as a tractor beam appears. 93 INT. ENTERPRISE MAIN BRIDGE - ANGLE ON WORF still at Ops. No one at Conn. He whirls around. WORF Captain -- tractor beam! We just locked onto the Tsiolkovsky! PICARD Bridge to... to Wesley. (waits; then) Wesley Crusher, come in! One of the turbolift doors HISSES OPEN and Data ENTERS the Bridge. Picard whirls to him. PICARD (continuing) Data! At least you're functioning.. ! DATA Fully, Captain, fully. But it obvious from the look on his face and his weaving movements that Data is not at all himself. PICARD Data, intoxication is a human condition. Your mind is different, it's not the same... DATA We are more alike than unlike, my dear captain. 94 EMPHASIZING DATA He is examining the backs of his hands with great interest. STAR TREK: "The Naked Now" - REV. 7/1/87 44. 94 CONTINUED: DATA (continuing) I have pores. Humans have pores. (turns hands over) I have fingerprints. Humans have fingerprints. My chemical nutrients are like your blood. (looks appealingly at Picard) If you prick me, do I not leak? 95 ANGLE TURBOLIFT which opens and Beverly Crusher ENTERS the Bridge. PICARD If this can possibly wait, Doctor... BEVERLY May I see you in your Ready Room? It's a private matter... well, actually an urgent one... PICARD I'm busy, Doctor. Impossible. But Beverly EXITS Bridge into Ready Room. Picard FOLLOWS. PICARD (continuing) Damn! 95A INT. CAPTAIN'S READY ROOM Picard ENTERS, finds Beverly waiting. She has a slight smile on her face. BEVERLY I believe I'm infected myself. Beverly steps toward Picard, suddenly GIGGLES. It's the same high pitched sound we've heard from some others. PICARD Do you know what the infection is? Hurry! STAR TREK: "The Naked Now" - REV. 6/30/87 45. 95A CONTINUED: Picard realizes that Beverly is beginning to smile at him a bit sexily. She tries to stop doing so. All this is complicated for her by the fact she has begun lately to find this man increasingly attractive. BEVERLY Sorry. (wipes off smile) It is definitely like alcohol intoxication, the same lack of good judgment... (smiling sexily again) For example right now, I find you, well, extremely...extremely... (stops) Of course we haven't time for that sort of thing... PICARD What sort of thing? BEVERLY (eyeing his body) Oh God would I love to show you. PICARD Doctor, there must be a cure! Some formula, similar to the old one... BEVERLY (holding Picard's hand) Dammit... dammit, dammit, my dear captain. You owe me something. You do realize that, don't you? I'm a woman; I haven't the comfort of a husband, a man... PICARD Not now, Doctor, please... Then he's alarmed to find himself GIGGLING, wiping moisture from his forehead. 96 ANGLE EMPHASIZING WORF On the Bridge, Ready Room door in b.g. He turns as Picard and Beverly EMERGE from the Ready Room. Beverly ENTERS the nearby Turbolift, turns and waves "bye-bye." Picard fights the urge to giggle, waves back. The doors close. Picard, very irritated at self, regains control. Worf presses his intercom. WORF (low) Bridge to Riker, urgent! STAR TREK: "The Naked Now" - REV. 6/30/87 46. 97 INT. ENGINEERING - RIKER AND MACDOUGAL He looks up, his hands still deep in the console. RIKER Riker here. WORF'S COM VOICE Sir, regret to inform you that the captain appears to be infected. And Data, and... RIKER (all he needs) Thank you, Lieutenant. I'm coming. (to MacDougal) You'll have to handle this. MACDOUGAL Are you saying you'll handle that? 98 EXT. SPACE - DWARF STAR FOREGROUND (OPTICAL) In the midst of a great flaring surface explosion, slow at this distance but obviously enormously powerful. 99 INT. MAIN BRIDGE - EMPHASIZING WORF Reacting as he sees the results of this on his readouts, then whirls to the Main Viewer. Red alarm lights flash. 100 MAIN VIEWER (OPTICAL) The star's surface clearly changed by this great flaring explosion. 101 ANGLE AT COMMAND POSITION Picard very concerned at what he is seeing; Beverly reacting to his concern; even the bemused Data watching it with some interest. Beverly turns, CROSSES toward the turbolift where she will EXIT. As Riker ENTERS. Meanwhile: WORF What we're seeing, sir, is a huge chunk of the star's surface blown off, heading for us! STAR TREK: "The Naked Now" - REV. 6/30/87 47. 101 CONTINUED: PICARD Take us... (wipes perspiration) RIKER Are you alright, sir? PICARD Worf, you know what to do. Take us out of here. Worf works controls, gets nothing, leaps over to the Conn panel and works something and then comes back to Ops and does more. Still nothing. WORF Sir, the controls are still off-line! PICARD Override! WORF (tries, then) Same result, sir. 102 INT. ENGINEER'S OFFICE - EMPHASIZING SHIMODA Wesley watches while Shimoda attempts to put together a structure (like LEGOS) composed of the isolinear optical chips. They both ignore: RIKER'S COM VOICE Wes, come in please. Wesley Crusher, this is Riker. Come in. This is urgent! 103 INT. ENGINEERING - MACDOUGAL Red alarm lights are flashing. MacDougal twists something inside the open panel. 104 INT. ENGINEER'S OFFICE - ON WESLEY AND SHIMODA (OPTICAL) The forcefield disappears. Wesley looks up, slightly disconcerted. 105 INT. ENGINEERING - MACDOUGAL MacDougal rushes for the Engineer's Office. STAR TREK: "The Naked Now" - REV. 6/26/87 48. 106 INT. ENGINEER'S OFFICE - FULL SHOT MacDougal surges in. Wesley and Shimoda merely look at her. Wesley's very sad. Game's over. RIKER'S COM VOICE Engineering, urgent. We must have ship's power... MacDougal ignores him, pushes past them toward the computer consoles. The optical chips go flying as Shimoda dodges out of her way. MACDOUGAL Oh, no, those are control chips... ! (finds a com button) Bridge from Engineering... RIKER'S COM VOICE The star is still collapsing; we're directly in the path of... 107 INT. MAIN BRIDGE Both Picard and Data fighting against the contamination as Riker mans the main console. MACDOUGAL'S COM VOICE I can't help you, bridge! Someone's yanked out all the control chips here... WESLEY'S COM VOICE It was an adult who did it! WORF I estimate fourteen minutes until that mass gets here... ! MACDOUGAL'S COM VOICE No way to replace chips in fourteen minutes, sir. I'd guess two hours, maybe three... WESLEY'S VOICE Data could assemble them back faster. Picard seems to come out of it a bit. He looks up: STAR TREK: "The Naked Now" - REV. 6/26/87 49. 107 CONTINUED: PICARD What's that? (hits a com control) What's that Wesley? WESLEY'S COM VOICE They're just simple isolinear chips, sir. To Data, anyway. He could shuffle them like cards. RIKER (overlap) Come on Data. Hurry! FADE OUT. END OF ACT FOUR STAR TREK: "The Naked Now" - REV. 6/26/87 50. ACT FIVE FADE IN: 108 EXT. SPACE - ENTERPRISE AND TSIOLKOVSKY (OPTICAL) still tied by the tractor beam, motionless. Riker's voice reveals the strain he is under. RIKER (V.O.) Ship's log, First Officer Riker. The star has begun disintegrating. Enterprise will be destroyed unless it can be moved out of the path of the star material hurtling... 109 EXT. SPACE - EXPLODED MASS OF MATERIAL (OPTICAL) It is large, irregularly shaped, moving very fast as it was hurled off the star's surface with more power than a hydrogen bomb. To gain a sense of size, it should BLOCK OUT A WHOLE SECTION OF THE STARFIELD as it PASSES CAMERA. RIKER (V.O.) (continuing) ... toward us. Our only hope is for Lieutenant Commander Data in the time we have left, to regain his senses and reconnect engine power to the Bridge. 110 INT. ENGINEER'S OFFICE - ON MACDOUGAL She is on her knees on the floor, vainly trying to sort out which optical chips belong where. 111 ANGLE ON RIKER AND DATA as they ENTER FAST. MacDougal looks up at Riker, helplessly indicates the chip chaos. Data smiles at Wesley, who grins back cheerfully. Both are still smashed. WESLEY Hi, Mister Data. DATA Nice to see you, Wesley. What... ? STAR TREK: "The Naked Now" - REV. 6/26/87 51. 111 CONTINUED: RIKER (overlapping; urgently indicating) Data! We need the engines on-line in a hurry, remember? Meanwhile, Riker is now beginning to perspire like others who have been "infected." WESLEY Oh yes, I remember too. (to Data) So, Data, if you don't mind... RIKER (fast; to Wesley) We've no time for courtesy! (fast; to Data) Get those damned control chips back in place, Data! In the correct order! Data hesitates, surprised at Riker shouting at him. RIKER (continuing) NOW! WESLEY (to Data) It's like a game of 'how fast can you do it?' DATA Ah, a game! Data begins selecting chips, beginning to move more and more rapidly. Wesley moves to the Engineering Room viewer, adjusts the controls there. WESLEY I think I can switch this to the main viewer, sir... 112 ANOTHER ANGLE - VIEWER (OPTICAL) as it switches to a SHOT OF THE STAR MATERIAL IN DISTANCE BUT RACING TOWARD THEM. 113 ANGLE EMPHASIZING RIKER turning from viewer to Data. STAR TREK: "The Naked Now" - REV. 6/30/87 52. 113 CONTINUED: RIKER We've got eight or nine minutes, at most, Data. Can you finish by then? 114 ANGLE EMPHASIZING DATA If necessary, UNDERCRANK CAMERA now to show Data's hands are moving very fast. He seems to be calculating Riker's questions, then shakes his head without looking up: DATA No. This will take slightly more time than we have, sir. Riker becomes aware that his hand is wet, realizes he is "infected" too. RIKER Dammit, NO! I can't afford to get it! He stands, sways, grabs for support. 115 EXT. SPACE - MASS OF MATERIAL FROM STAR (OPTICAL) hurtling through space -- too fast. 116 INT. CRUSHER'S OFFICE - ANGLE ON BEVERLY She has a batch of blue liquid made up and is examining it. Picard ENTERS on the run. PICARD Beverly... BEVERLY Yes, Jean-Luc? PICARD You will address me as Captain! They too still show signs of the "intoxication." Beverly has begun to fill a hypo-spray with the blue liquid. BEVERLY In which case, dear Captain, you will address me as 'Chief Medical Officer' or 'Doctor.' STAR TREK: "The Naked Now" - REV. 6/26/87 53. 116 CONTINUED: PICARD (befuddled; then) That's true; I started off calling you 'Beverly,' then naturally, you... (shakes head) I'm still not thinking straight! Having filled the hypo-spray, Beverly turns with it to go somewhere but forgets where. BEVERLY Likewise. Where the hell was I just headed? PICARD (indicates hypo) If that's something you wanted to test... BEVERLY (suddenly remembering) Yes, yes, on Geordi! Weaving a bit, she hurries off with Picard following in the same way. 117 INT. ENGINEER'S OFFICE - THREE SHOT Riker and MacDougal standing over Data, who concentrates on the chips. Wesley has moved to his school project tractor beam, eyes it proudly. WESLEY Did you see how I reversed fields on this, Commander? Made it into a repulser beam. Riker ignores the question, watches Data, concerned. 118 CLOSE ON DATA AND HIS HANDS UNDERCRANK CAMERA. His hands are flying -- almost a blur. More and and more of the isolinear optical chips are set in the command computer board. DATA If we had just a minute more, sir... STAR TREK: "The Naked Now" - REV. 6/26/87 54. 119 ANGLE ON WESLEY He looks up toward Engineering Room viewer. 120 CLOSE ON VIEWSCREEN (OPTICAL) The mass of star material closer, hurtling toward them. 121 WIDER ANGLE Wesley reacts at the nearness now of the star material. Then looks at his tractor device. WESLEY If this were a hundred times more powerful than it is... 122 INT. SICKBAY - ANGLE ON GEORDI as Beverly administers the hypo to Geordi with Picard looking on. BEVERLY I made this a broader based remedy... I hope. But it's still close to the formula from the old Enterprise's records... PICARD Decades ago, light years away... BEVERLY But almost exactly the same conditions as here. GEORDI What was in that, Doctor? My head's beginning to clear... Both react to the sight of Geordi beginning to sit up alertly. Beverly whirls, injecting Picard... then herself. She presses the hypo on him. BEVERLY Take this to Engineering. I'll make up more hypos for the others. 123 INT. ENGINEERING OFFICE as before but with Riker gloomy now. Data and Wesley continuing work. But Wesley is struck with an idea, leaps to the Engineering Room control board. STAR TREK: "The Naked Now" - REV. 6/26/87 55. 123 CONTINUED: Eyes it, then: WESLEY Why not try it with the real thing?! (to MacDougal) Why not reverse fields on this, Ma'am? If we only need an extra minute... MACDOUGAL It would take weeks of laying out new circuits... 124 EMPHASIZING WESLEY studying the Engineering Room board. WESLEY But why not just see it in your head? (thinks, presses switches) Come off the main lead, split at the force activator, then...then... (puzzled) If I could just think straight about this... 125 WIDER ANGLE as Picard bursts in, presses his hypo against MacDougal, then Riker, then another person, etc. RIKER We didn't make it, Captain. If we had just a minute or so more... 126 EXT. SPACE - ENTERPRISE, TSIOLKOVSKY (OPTICAL) with the star material looming large as it rushes down upon them. 127 INT. ENGINEER'S OFFICE - ON WESLEY His fingers begin to dance on the panel. STAR TREK: "The Naked Now" - REV. 7/2/87 56. 127 CONTINUED: WESLEY Yes, then reversing power leads, back through the force activator... repulser beam hard against the Tsiolkovsky... 128 EXT. SPACE - ENTERPRISE, TSIOLKOVSKY (OPTICAL) The Tsiolkovsky now begins drifting to one side, beginning to spin clear with the Enterprise moving away from it. 129 INT. ENGINEER'S OFFICE - WIDE ANGLE Riker eyes the viewer in surprise. RIKER We're pushing away! Data lifts his hands from the command computer board. The isolinear optical chips GLOW on the board. RIKER (continuing; into communicator) Bridge, engage engines! 130 EXT. SPACE - TSIOLKOVSKY AND MASS OF MATERIAL (OPTICAL) The mass of material crashes into the Tsiolkovsky. Her warp and impulse engines EXPLODE SIMULTANEOUSLY on impact in a mighty BLAZE OF LIGHT. But Enterprise is accelerating out of trouble. 131 INT. ENTERPRISE MAIN BRIDGE - FULL SHOT Geordi at Conn now. Relief. Beverly is there still administering hypo injections. The red alarm lights have stopped. GEORDI Sir, something seemed to move us aside at the last minute. WORF (into his com) Do we owe our thanks to Commander Data, sir? STAR TREK: "The Naked Now" - REV. 7/2/87 57. 131 CONTINUED: PICARD'S COM VOICE Yes. And... Wesley may have given us a few seconds, too. WORF Did he say Wesley? The boy? Beverly nods with a pleased look. BEVERLY He said Wesley. 132 INT. ENGINEERING OFFICE Picard sees Riker smiling at him. He scowls, begins to EXIT. RIKER It is only fair to mention Wesley in a log entry, sir. PICARD (stops; nods) Fair is fair. And let's credit his science teacher, too. Picard EXITS; Riker follows him. 133 thru OMITTED 134 135 INT. MAIN BRIDGE - PANNING Picard, Riker and Data ENTER from the Turbolift and move toward their positions. Worf at Ops and Geordi at Conn positions turn with pleased expressions. GEORDI Congratulations, sir. PICARD To many people. During which Troi and Tasha also ENTER from Turbolift now, move to their positions. Tasha is back to normal, wearing her regular duty uniform, hair and makeup as stringent as usual. Data sees, nods. STAR TREK: "The Naked Now" - REV. 7/2/87 58. 135 CONTINUED: Data starts to turn away but Tasha has colored, turns toward him. TASHA Data! I'm only going to tell you this just once... It never happened. Data gives her a very puzzled look, goes to position still puzzling over it. 136 OMITTED 137 ANGLE EMPHASIZING PICARD as he sits in his position, looks around the Bridge. PICARD I put it to all of you we may end up with a fine crew... if we keep working at it. (nods for emphasis; then) So let's get to our next job, Number One. RIKER Aye, sir. Helm, stand by for warp three. Heading two-hundred ninety-four mark thirty-seven. GEORDI Warp three, two-hundred ninety-four mark thirty-seven, sir. RIKER Engage! 138 EXT. SPACE - THE ENTERPRISE Accelerating into WARP SPEED. FADE OUT. THE END STAR TREK: THE NEXT GENERATION "Code of Honor" #40271-104 Written by Katharyn Powers & Michael Baron Copyright 1987 Paramount Pictures Corporation. All Rights Reserved. This script is not for publication or reproduction. No one is authorized to dispose of same. If lost or destroyed, please notify the Script Department. REVISED FINAL DRAFT July 2, 1987 STAR TREK: "Code of Honor" - REV. 7/9/87 STAR TREK: THE NEXT GENERATION "Code Of Honor" CAST PICARD TRANSPORTER CHIEF RIKER LUTAN DATA HAGON TROI YAREENA BEVERLY SPECTATOR TASHA TASHA GEORDI GEORDI WESLEY WESLEY STAR TREK: "Code of Honor" - REV. 7/8/87 STAR TREK: THE NEXT GENERATION "Code Of Honor" SETS INTERIORS EXTERIORS ENTERPRISE ON LIGON Main Bridge Lutan's Centerplace and Corridor Banquet Area Cargo Deck Lounge Holodeck Captain's Ready Room Geordi's Quarters Transporter Room Turbolift ON LIGON Tasha's Quarters Picard's Quarters Corridor Centerplace STAR TREK: "Code of Honor" - REV. 7/9/87 STAR TREK: THE NEXT GENERATION "Code of Honor" TEASER FADE IN: 1 EXT. SPACE - ENTERPRISE (OPTICAL) The great ship moving into orbit of planet Ligon. PICARD (V.O.) Captain's log, stardate 41235.25. Our location planet Ligon II, source of a rare vaccine needed on Federation planet Styris IV. Starfleet has instructed me... 2 INT. MAIN BRIDGE - WIDE ANGLE Full complement of crew at stations, DATA at OPS, GEORDI at CONN. RIKER and TROI are flanking PICARD. PICARD (V.O.) (continuing) ... to engage in a friendly visit and open treaty negotiations to acquire this medicinal substance. GEORDI Standard orbit, sir. RIKER Lieutenant Yar is calling from Cargo Bay One, sir. Standing by to beam Ligonian welcoming party aboard. PICARD (rising) On our way. You have the helm, Mister Data. Picard leads Riker and Troi into FORWARD Turbolift. 3 INT. TURBOLIFT as Picard, Riker and Troi ENTER and the door HISSES closed behind them. STAR TREK: "Code of Honor" - REV. 7/9/87 2. 3 CONTINUED: PICARD (continuing; toward controls) Cargo One. (to Riker and Troi) Should be an interesting experience. RIKER Agreed. Not only are they closely humanoid but their history has remarkable similarities to ours. TROI But a highly structured society and they're exceedingly proud. 4 INT. CARGO DECK (OPTICAL) Picard, Riker and Troi ENTER. Tasha is waiting there with a pair of SECURITY GUARDS -- one with a tricorder. TASHA They've insisted on using their own transporter device, sir... PICARD (nods) It's their way, Lieutenant. Do they have our coordinates? Tasha indicates cleared area ahead of them on the Cargo Bay deck. TASHA They have, sir. Precisely. And they're standing by for your signal. PICARD This is Captain Picard of the Starfleet vessel Enterprise. Please... (looks to Troi; she nods) ... please do us the honor of visiting our vessel. After only a moment, a slightly different kind of TRANSPORTER EFFECT materializes five people. There are four extremely tall, elegant Black Guards who form a square. STAR TREK: "Code of Honor" - 7/2/87 3. 4 CONTINUED: They are bare-waisted with metal collars -- each with a centered jewel -- and each wears a hakama (starched, baggy trousers pulled between the legs). Each has at least one major scar, and each carries a bo (a bojutsu fighting staff). Each wears as headgear a red, braided rope in a circular crown. One carries a rolled carpet. They face forward at attention, but their eyes take in everything. The fifth person materializing is HAGON, who carries a dull metallic box. He bends down and kicks the carpet so that it unrolls towards Picard. Then, LUTAN beams into view. He stands a moment, tall, magnificent and with flashing eyes. His dress is more elegant, his jewel more resplendent. The Security Guard with the tricorder scans the party quickly, then nods to Tasha. TASHA (quietly to Picard) Nothing concealed, sir. Lutan steps forward. He looks about him for a moment. LUTAN I am Lutan. Picard moves to greet him, raising both hands in the customary Ligonian greeting to show one is not holding a weapon. Lutan nods, satisfied, and smiles. Without touching, he holds his hands up in a like manner. PICARD Captain Jean-Luc Picard. Welcome aboard. These are my officers. Second in command, Commander William Riker; Ship's Counselor Deanna Troi; my security officer, Lieutenant Tasha Yar. LUTAN A woman? Your Chief of Security? PICARD Yes, Lutan: that is her expertise. Lutan and Hagon exchange a near-amused look. Then Lutan turns to Picard. STAR TREK: "Code of Honor" - 7/2/87 4. 4 CONTINUED: (2) LUTAN I am honored to meet your officers. (indicates Hagon) And this is my Secondary, Hagon. (indicates) A sample of the vaccine. Hagon steps forward with the metal box, extending it to Picard. But Tasha steps forward to take it. TASHA My duty, Lutan. Almost before the words are out of Tasha's mouth, Hagon grabs for the box. TASHA (continuing) Sorry, I am required to inspect... HAGON Aside, little one... Hagon whirls toward Picard forcing Picard to step back to avoid contact, but Tasha reacts protecting her Captain, with it ending in Hagon being flipped onto his back. Lutan's guards step forward menacingly but are stopped by a gesture from Lutan. Hagon looks up from his prone position, more puzzled than anything else. HAGON (continuing) This... this is a woman? LUTAN (inspecting Tasha) How interesting! (then, to Picard) May we prove as surprising to you. FADE OUT. END OF TEASER STAR TREK: "Code of Honor" - REV. 7/9/87 5. ACT ONE FADE IN: 5 INT. CARGO DECK - FULL SHOT Same principals in approximately the same positions as last SCENE. TROI (low voice) If I may suggest, sir... She indicates for the Enterprise people to move back and give Lutan and his people room and also time to recover. In just above a whisper: TROI (continuing) No apology. In their view, it would weaken us. 6 EMPHASIZING LUTAN Unlike Hagon and the Guards, he's beginning to enjoy this as Riker picks up the container Hagon had been holding, examines it and extends it to Picard. RIKER Nothing concealed, Captain. (extends it) Do you care to accept it? HAGON Yes, yes, please do. LUTAN (to Tasha) Unless you care to examine it further. 7 CLOSER GROUP SHOT Picard seeing it is time to turn on the charm. PICARD Absolutely not. This vaccine sample is a gift of life and we are honored at receiving it. (indicates way into vessel) Will you do us the honor of letting us entertain you now? STAR TREK: "Code of Honor" - REV. 7/10/87 6. 7 CONTINUED: LUTAN (nodding) You may prepare it. We will join you shortly. With nothing else to do, the Enterprise group LEAVES the immediate area. They're not fools -- security people remain in sight. Lutan and Hagon move closer together, speak in low tones. HAGON I ask forgiveness.... LUTAN (cuts him off) They are strange alien things. You bear no fault... HAGON But the female... LUTAN May be exactly what I've needed. 8 INT. LOUNGE - FULL SHOT Data, BEVERLY and Troi are seen ENTERING, Data carrying a magnificent bronze horse. Picard stands next to Lutan. PICARD Lutan, we're aware of many of your planet's achievements, and its unique similarity to an ancient Earth culture, which we all admire. On behalf of the Federation, therefore, I am proud to present to you this token of gratitude and friendship. From China's Sung Dynasty, Fourteenth Century. DATA (to Picard) Thirteenth Century, sir. PICARD Indeed? STAR TREK: "Code of Honor" - REV. 7/10/87 6A. 8 CONTINUED: LUTAN (accepting and admiring it) It is a most thoughtful gift. We are grateful. Lutan hands the horse to Hagon. Then, while watching Tasha with interest: STAR TREK: "Code of Honor" - REV. 7/10/87 7. 8 CONTINUED: (2) LUTAN (continuing) We from Ligon have always been apprehensive about strangers. We are not as technologically advanced as you; yet we possess something you do not -- a vaccine which has been found to be an effective antidote to your deadly Anchilles fever. If your conduct toward us is worthy -- if you respect our customs -- and if we see this respect -- we will become friends. Then, we will make the vaccine available to all who need it. Everyone APPLAUDS. Lutan is proud and dignified. He sweeps the gathering with his eyes, which hold on Tasha. 9 CLOSE SHOT - TASHA She meets his gaze with confidence. 10 BACK TO FULL SHOT The room quiets down as Picard rises. PICARD If you require respect from us, I'm certain you will see it. LUTAN Surrounded by such friendship, I have no need of my guards. (to guards) I will return shortly. Prepare to transport me then. The Guards signal obedience, begin EXITING. Picard and the others are puzzled by this. STAR TREK: "Code of Honor" - 7/2/87 8. 10 CONTINUED: PICARD If there is something else, any final courtesy... LUTAN Is it possible to see one of your wondrous holodecks? We have heard how they are used to train your officers. Picard exchanges a quick, concerned look with Riker and Troi. PICARD And used for many other things too. (turning) Commander Riker, perhaps you and Counselor Troi can demonstrate. LUTAN Is it possible for Lieutenant Yar to do so Captain? Some demonstration of defense training? RIKER We've noticed you are intrigued by her having security responsibilities. But such things are not at all unusual with us. HAGON With us, it is the duty of women only to own the land, and the duty of men to protect and rule it. TROI (amused) Much the same has happened in human history too. Picard smiles, then turns to Tasha questioningly. She nods. TASHA I'd like to do it, sir. (to Lutan) As a sign of respect, perhaps. PICARD (nods agreement) Very well. Tasha beckons to Lutan and Hagon. STAR TREK: "Code of Honor" - 7/2/87 9. 10 CONTINUED: (2) TASHA This way, please. A couple of Enterprise Security Guards follow. 11 INT. HOLODECK - FULL SHOT - OPTICAL (SPLIT SCREEN) Tasha, followed by Lutan and Hagon, plus the two security team members, who stay in the b.g. Tasha moves to the wall controls. She punches in some commands, reaches for an aikido jacket from a peg, then walks to a bare area. She gives a CODED COMMAND. TASHA (continuing) Aikido. One. An Aikido Opponent MATERIALIZES (DISSOLVES IN) ON A MAT. The IMAGE remains rigid, immobile. The visitors are much impressed. TASHA (continuing; amicably) It won't move until my actions activate it. 12 CLOSER ON GROUP Lutan stepping in to examine the Aikido Opponent, amazed. LUTAN You can create people? Without a soul? TASHA It's not a real person, Lutan. It has no life. Everything it does is controlled by computer. She moves close to the image. TASHA (continuing; to the image) Who am I? Do you hear me? The image doesn't move. But when Tasha suddenly feints, the image instantly blocks the blow. STAR TREK: "Code of Honor" - 7/2/87 10. 12 CONTINUED: TASHA (continuing) But it will feel real when it hits you. She crouches and the IMAGE crouches, and they begin to fight. After rapid and savage exchange, she throws the IMAGE. 13 EMPHASIZING LUTAN His eyes begin to glow as he evaluates what he sees, watching with growing interest. HAGON A force like that cannot possibly come from an image, Lutan. LUTAN Then you will show me, Hagon. Hagon hesitates, but he has his order. He moves to the mat as Tasha steps aside. 14 ACTION ANGLE Hagon crouches, the image crouches. Hagon deftly makes two feints, and then a move and is promptly dumped hard. There's no doubt about the pain he feels. HAGON (trying to breathe) Oh. . . . Oh... LUTAN (to Tasha) Thank you, Lieutenant. How very enlightening. 15 CLOSER ANGLE (OPTICAL) Behind Tasha the IMAGE RISES and stands, remaining quiet. TASHA (into the air) Aikido, vanish. The IMAGE DISSOLVES. Tasha goes to the panel, shuts down the controls, takes a towel from the wall, wipes off, and removes her jacket. STAR TREK: "Code of Honor" - 7/2/87 11. 15 CONTINUED: TASHA (continuing) I could create two -- even three, but one is really enough. As you fight with it, it learns, and before long it knows exactly how to defeat you. LUTAN (a smile) Even the extraordinary Lieutenant Yar? TASHA (also a smile) It forces us to keep improving. Lutan's eyes are glowing as he nods. LUTAN Your skill impresses me. I like you. Lutan shows a definite reaction to Tasha, and she reacts to him similarly. Picard notices both reactions. 16 INT. CARGO DECK - FULL SHOT (OPTICAL) Our Enterprise participants are all present with Lutan and Hagon. Good-byes are being exchanged. LUTAN (continuing) Farewell, my new friends of the noble Enterprise. PICARD Understanding has made friends of many different people. We've had a good beginning, Lutan. LUTAN May I also extend a personal farewell to Lieutenant Yar? Picard nods. Tasha moves forward. Lutan extends his hand to her. LUTAN In your Federation terms. STAR TREK: "Code of Honor" - 7/2/87 12. 16 CONTINUED: Tasha takes his hand and shakes it. Lutan puts an arm around her as if to hug her. Releasing his first hand, but still holding her, he reaches up and touches the jewel at the center of his necklace. In an instant their images SHIMMER, and they are gone. PICARD Picard to bridge. Red alert! FADE OUT. END OF ACT ONE STAR TREK: "Code of Honor" - REV. 7/7/87 13. ACT TWO FADE IN: 17 INT. MAIN BRIDGE The KLAXON is sounding. Turbolift opens and Riker ENTERS bridge immediately, crossing to man the Security Station. RIKER Shields up; activate photon torpedoes! Picard and Troi have come out of the turbolift right after him, CROSSING to their own positions. PICARD What com contact have we had with them? Data makes a move at his panel, the KLAXON ceases. DATA With their orbital control station, sir. PICARD (reaches his position) Make contact there and on all hailing frequencies. (touches control panel) Enterprise to Lutan and Ligonian government. You have committed an unfriendly act. You will reply immediately. RIKER Photon torpedoes ready, Captain. PICARD Set for a display blast, a thousand meters short of planet surface. Fire! RIKER Display blast away! 18 EXT. ENTERPRISE IN ORBIT (OPTICAL) as a spread of photon torpedoes are sent downward toward the planet below. STAR TREK: "Code of Honor" - 7/2/87 14. 18A ANGLE DOWN TOWARD PLANET (OPTICAL) as the torpedo spread travels down toward the planet surface, then detonates in a SPECTACULAR DISPLAY. 19 INT. MAIN BRIDGE as all wait for some communication from the planet. RIKER (to Geordi) Do we know the source of their transporter beam? GEORDI Our own transporter people tried to trace it, sir, but without effect. DATA It reads similar to Starfleet's early efforts but uses the Heglenian shift to convert matter and energy in different... (stops; seeing Picard's expression) ... which is actually not important at this time. PICARD (touching panel com) This is Captain Picard of the Enterprise with a message to Lutan whom I have so far acknowledged as a friend. But you have now committed what our laws regard as an attack upon us, Lutan. And having visited us here, Lutan, you must certainly understand the power of our vessel. We have so far fired only a warning burst at you. We insist you reply to this message. They again wait. Finally Picard turns to Troi: PICARD (continuing) Opinion, Counselor. Will they injure Tasha? STAR TREK: "Code of Honor" - REV. 7/9/87 15. 19 CONTINUED: TROI I believe not, sir. In fact, they seem mainly curious. But in the case of Lutan I did feel other needs. RIKER What kind of needs? TROI Some sexual attraction from all the males. Lieutenant Yar is physically very attractive. But I felt something else in the case of Lutan... something more like... avarice or ambition. All puzzle at this. PICARD Other comments? Data turns to Picard. DATA If I may, sir... one of the things about them in the briefing studies was their respect for patience. RIKER (nods) Strongly emphasized. And you can see it in the precise, ritualistic way they do things. I'm worried about Lieutenant Yar too, sir, but maybe we should sit and wait them out. Picard considers this, then nods. He turns to Troi and Data: PICARD Analysis, the two of you. Everything we know about them and how these happenings fit into that. 20 EXT. SPACE - ENTERPRISE IN ORBIT (OPTICAL) Planet Ligon II below. STAR TREK: "Code of Honor" - REV. 7/16/87 16. 20 CONTINUED: PICARD (V.O.) Stardate 41235.32. I am concerned. Over a full day of waiting with no response from... 21 INT. MAIN BRIDGE - FULL SHOT Only Geordi on duty with a couple of upper-deck Technicians. During the following, BEVERLY CRUSHER will ENTER Bridge and CROSS toward the Captain's Ready Room. WE SEE WESLEY too; he waits in the Turbolift cab. PICARD (V.O.) (continuing) ... Lutan. We are now testing whether they are aware of our sensors probing them. So far, we believe we have pinpointed Lutan's government compound. 22 INT. CAPTAIN'S READY ROOM Beverly ENTERS, joins Picard waiting inside. She's very upset. BEVERLY The vaccine, sir... PICARD (rises) Yes, Doctor? BEVERLY The vaccine... (stops; shudders) I'm a... physician; I've seen death. But not on the scale this could mean. PICARD Meanwhile, you were testing whether we can replicate the vaccine... BEVERLY And we can't! Their sample works fine when used as an injection, but it becomes unstable when we try to replicate it. You must get vaccine from the planet, Captain. As much as you can. Immediately! STAR TREK: "Code of Honor" - REV. 7/16/87 17. 22 CONTINUED: PICARD I'm aware of that, Doctor. BEVERLY You've never had to watch a patient die from this disease. PICARD That's true. But I've seen my share of death. BEVERLY Damn! (weak smile; shakes her head) Where are the calluses we doctors are supposed to grow over our feelings? PICARD Perhaps the good ones never get them. Beverly moves toward the exit, then stops and turns, eyes him for a long moment. PICARD (continuing; hopeful) Yes, Doctor? BEVERLY (hesitates; then) May I speak about my son Wesley? PICARD (startled) What? (recovers) Well, yes. Yes, of course. BEVERLY He's so interested in starship operations. And... (smiles) ... speaking as a mother, of course, he seems quite knowledgeable. STAR TREK: "Code of Honor" - REV. 7/16/87 17A. 22 CONTINUED: (2) PICARD Well, yes... speaking as a mother... BEVERLY (indicates; interrupting) He's on the turbolift. You'll remember you ordered him to stay off the bridge. The whole subject upsets Picard but he feels trapped now. And Beverly is remarkably lovely. He finally motions for her to follow him toward the bridge. STAR TREK: "Code of Honor" - REV. 7/9/87 18. 23 INT. MAIN BRIDGE - WIDE ANGLE Picard ENTERS from the Ready Room and CROSSES toward his position. Beverly stays half concealed in the Ready Room entry. In the b.g. at the turbolift, WE'LL SEE Wesley quickly flatten himself almost out of sight. But Picard keeps looking in that direction and this fact finally forces Wesley SOMEWHAT INTO SIGHT. 24 ANGLE ON TURBOLIFT Wesley finally comes more fully INTO VIEW and meets Picard's eyes. WESLEY (weakly) I haven't stepped one foot on your bridge, Captain... 25 WIDER ANGLE As the other turbolift arrives, from which Riker, Data, and Troi ENTER to see Picard in an apparent confrontation with Wesley. Riker moves in first, speaking rapidly. RIKER It's all right, sir, I'll see he leaves immediately... WE SEE Picard throw a fast glance toward the Ready Room where Beverly HAS APPEARED in the doorway. PICARD No. STAR TREK: "Code of Honor" - REV. 7/9/87 19. 25 CONTINUED: RIKER (halts) No? PICARD (to Wesley) Why don't you sit at Ops? Next to Lieutenant La Forge. WESLEY Sir? GEORDI Sir? PICARD Is the whole ship deaf?! (indicates) Sit down over there, young man! (beat) Temporarily. 26 ANGLE ON WESLEY CROSSING to sit next to Geordi, eyeing the Bridge, the vessel's controls. Heaven! 27 BACK TO SHOT TROI Captain, we have more information from the briefing studies on Ligon... PICARD Excuse me. (calls) Doctor Crusher, some of this may interest you. 28 ANOTHER ANGLE to include Beverly STEPPING INTO VIEW, CROSSING to join the group at the command position. Except for Troi, all feel a moment of discomfort with Beverly appearing from the Ready Room and Wesley at the Ops position. STAR TREK: "Code of Honor" - REV. 7/9/87 20. 28 CONTINUED: PICARD (continuing) Proceed with your analysis. DATA It is a highly structured society in which people live by strict codes of honor. For example, what Lutan has done is similar to what certain American Indians once did, called "counting coup." That's from an obscure language called French -- PICARD A language which for centuries on Earth represented civilization, Mister Data. DATA Indeed? RIKER I suggest you drop it, Mister Data. A puzzled Data shrugs, goes on. DATA Yes sir. Counting coup could be as simple as touching an enemy with a stick in battle, or taking something from him and escaping. It was considered extremely heroic. RIKER And under these circumstances Lutan considers himself heroic, risking literally everything in the face of our superior power. TROI And it fits Lutan's personality profile as well. He has an abnormally high need for achievement -- I've sensed it in him, very strongly. Picard nods. STAR TREK: "Code of Honor" - REV. 7/9/87 21. 28 CONTINUED: (2) TROI (continuing) We should establish clearly also, that Lutan is dangerous. Self image for him is a function of how much he THINKS he's achieved. Those who set their standards too high can kill to meet them. BEVERLY Why Tasha? TROI As a Starfleet security officer, she may have represented his riskiest prize. 29 ANGLE EMPHASIZING DATA responding to a signal panel, then: DATA (to Picard) Transmission from the planet surface, sir... Main viewer on. 30 ANGLE TO INCLUDE MAIN VIEWER (OPTICAL) where an image of Lutan replaces the orbit planet SHOT. PICARD Yes, Lutan? What do you wish? Lutan is squinting, his screen apparently without Picard's image there. LUTAN You will display your image, please. PICARD What is required is an image of Lieutenant Yar, well and... LUTAN (interrupting) Are you making demands, Captain? STAR TREK: "Code of Honor" - REV. 7/9/87 22. 30 CONTINUED: TROI Sir... She motions; Picard cuts off his transmission. TROI (continuing) According to the Ligon Code of Honor, Lutan has done what he set out to do -- achieve recognition for being daring and bold. RIKER We've studied this in some depth now, sir. The proper thing for you to do now is to ask to get Tasha back. PICARD (astonished) Ask for her? DATA Politely, Captain. PICARD (touches com button) And now, Lutan... (swallows irritation) You have boldly taken the lieutenant from us and I ask that you... now please return her. LUTAN Then come visit us, Captain, and we will return her to you. FADE OUT. END OF ACT TWO STAR TREK: "Code of Honor" - 7/2/87 23. ACT THREE FADE IN: 31 INT. MAIN BRIDGE - EMPHASIZING RIKER as he activates his panel com. Troi watches, expressionless as: RIKER First Officer to Transporter Chief... TROI (interrupts) Forgive me but can you delay calling him? DATA (nods agreement) Please. We must discuss the away party. PICARD Am I included? 32 ANGLE ON WESLEY at Ops position but distracted by what is going on. DATA (O.S.) It concerns you directly, Captain. BEVERLY (O.S.) Wesley. It's time we left. 33 WIDER ANGLE - TO INCLUDE BEVERLY moving to the turbolift which she is indicating to Wesley. He stands, disappointed that it's over. Picard sees this. PICARD Wesley... thanks for taking a turn at the controls. WESLEY Yes sir. That has changed everything. A bouyant Wesley leaves the bridge with his mother. STAR TREK: "Code of Honor" - 7/2/87 24. 33 CONTINUED: TROI Commander.... RIKER "Commander?" That's quite formal... TROI So is this request, sir. We believe it would be preferable if the captain led this away party. DATA Agreed, sir. Their customs concerning guests make it much preferable. RIKER (to Picard) And I'm very much against it. Lutan is clearly a liar, and devious. Counselor Troi has admitted she believes him capable of killing. It is my duty to keep the captain out of danger, sir. DATA Except that Ligonian custom makes it clear that a visiting leader becomes an honored guest. (indicates) Not us, not second in command... him. TROI And the custom requires Lutan to die rather than violate that. Picard says nothing, waits for Riker to absorb all this. Then: RIKER Yes... it does sound reasonable put that way. (to Picard) I warn you, Captain... if you get hurt, I'll put you on report! This gets smiles from everyone. STAR TREK: "Code of Honor" - 7/2/87 25. 34 EXT. LUTAN'S CENTERPLACE ON LIGON - ESTABLISHING (OPTICAL) This enclosed, sanded area, walled in black, has an ascetic, Zen-garden feeling with a pebbled center enclosing a small, off-center fountain. A single, simple, brilliant banner identifies this an important place, and whatever design elements are visible reveal an interest in the abstract, perhaps a Mondrian-ish feeling. Two sentries are posted beside a doorway. Picard and Troi BEAM INTO SHOT. Lutan and Hagon come from inside the doorway and exchange the "empty hands" ritual greeting with Picard. LUTAN Welcome to my Centerplace, Captain Picard. Consider yourselves my honored guests. YAREENA (O.S.) Every hospitality will be accorded you. ADJUST ANGLE to include YAREENA, who has just joined them. She is petite by Ligonian standards and quite radiant, a woman of visible nobility and keen intelligence. Her only flaw being her passionate, unreasoning love for Lutan. LUTAN This is my First One, Yareena. PICARD Lutan is a fortunate man. She smiles graciously, but remains a bit behind him, according to custom. PICARD (continuing) You've met Counselor Troi. LUTAN Yes. (to Picard) As on your vessel, you have only to name whatever courtesy we can provide. PICARD Then, sir... the courtesy of seeing Lieutenant Yar. STAR TREK: "Code of Honor" - 7/2/87 26. 34 CONTINUED: LUTAN Lieutenant Yar will be returned to you tonight at a banquet I have arranged in your honor. PICARD I would like to see her now. LUTAN (thinks; then, to a sentry) Bring Lieutenant Yar. (to Picard) I find it odd, Captain, that a man of your experience has such difficulty in understanding ordinary politeness. PICARD Such as saying "please" when abducting someone? LUTAN The expression "please" is used only when requesting the person back. PICARD Yours is a different world. LUTAN With clear and simple ways deeply rooted in our culture. If you are willing to ask for Lieutenant Yar's release tonight in front of all, honor will be satisfied. TROI (to Picard) One can see the importance of "honor" here. LUTAN Honor is everything. Picard and Troi exchange looks. HAGON There will be gifts for each of you, to absolve the abduction. STAR TREK: "Code of Honor" - 7/2/87 27. 34 CONTINUED: (2) Tasha is brought to the doorway between four guards, with every sign she would break free at the slightest opportunity. One of the guards limps, a leg bandaged. When Tasha sees Picard she calms down. PICARD Lieutenant, have you been treated well? TASHA Fine, Captain... (indicates bandaged guard; smiles) ... but they're showing some signs of wear. YAREENA There isn't any need to be concerned, Captain. She's being well cared for. Picard looks Tasha over, then turns to Lutan. PICARD My ship's company and I are certain of your gentle wisdom in that. Lutan hesitates, takes another look at Picard. Then: LUTAN I thought for a moment I heard a threat implied. (shrugs) But that would be foolishness. PICARD Something to be carefully avoided I agree. LUTAN The festivities for her return to you are in preparation. Shall we retire until then? Lutan gestures to the guards, who move to take Tasha OFF, without resistance. CAMERA PUSHES IN on Picard as he replies and considers what is ahead. PICARD Until tonight, Lutan. STAR TREK: "Code of Honor" - 7/2/87 28. 35 EXT. CENTERPLACE - ESTABLISHING - NIGHT Under a canopy, a juggler performs. Guests sit on floor mats or cushions. All carry hand-held, delicately carved ivory-like sticks which they tap together to signal applause or approval. Tables are low and food is plentiful. ESTABLISH Lutan and Yareena sitting on a slightly raised dais, with Hagon next to him on floor level, and Lutan's Supporters close around them. The juggler drops something and suddenly stops. He has committed an act of dishonor. 36 ANGLE ON PICARD AND TROI Picard and Troi scan the room, hoping to see Tasha. A sudden SCREAM from the direction where the juggler had performed. 37 FULL SHOT Picard and Troi whirl to look in that direction but their line of sight is quickly blocked by gift bearers who APPEAR, with Ligonian silks, works of precious metal, and fine large gems. Picard is troubled by what may have happened to the juggler but is distracted by the gift bearers making presentations. Then the room falls SILENT. LUTAN We present you gifts! 38 CLOSER SHOT as Tasha is escorted in to approving IVORY-TAPPING sounds from the Ligonians who face Lutan. Tasha is seated next to Lutan and Yareena on an empty cushion. She smiles at Picard and Troi. At FULL SILENCE Lutan turns and fixes his gaze on Picard. The moment has arrived. Picard rises and faces Lutan with great dignity. PICARD Lutan, you have granted us hospitality and the safety of your Centerplace. The gifts you give us are rare and precious. We thank you. In accordance with the customs of your ancestors, which I honor and respect, I am here in peace to ask for the return of Lieutenant Yar. STAR TREK: "Code of Honor" - REV. 7/9/87 29. 38 CONTINUED: The Guests CHIME WILDLY now, nodding in enthusiastic approval. Yareena is especially proud and pleased. CAMERA TO LUTAN, who smiles and rises, CAMERA MOVING SLOWLY BACK. LUTAN Well spoken. There are some among my equals in this gathering who were wary of my approaching the Federation. I am proud to have taken this first step towards a treaty -- and proud we have something of great value to offer you -- a priceless life-giving vaccine. (beat) The abduction I have done according to our custom, for all to see. (great applause) Your conduct in this matter has been beyond exemplary, Captain Picard -- (glances at Tasha) -- but now that the moment has come, I find I cannot part with her. A ripple of astonishment flows through the crowd in the room. Picard takes a step forward. Tension. PICARD You speak of a code of honor... but what you are now saying is called under our customs... an act of war. LUTAN No, no, Captain! You do not understand. PICARD Correct! I am now beyond understanding! LUTAN This is not an act of war, but of love. I want Lieutenant Yar to become my First One. STAR TREK: "Code of Honor" - 7/2/87 30. 38 CONTINUED: (2) There is general astonishment. Yareena is as shocked and outraged as Picard and Troi. Hagon is also disturbed. Yareena jumps to her feet. YAREENA I challenge your right of supercedence! The Guests in the room are stunned. HAGON (at Yareena) No woman has challenged supercedence for over two-hundred years! YAREENA The right is mine -- and I will have it! (then to Tasha, furious) Natasha Yar -- I challenge you! A struggle to the death! ZOOM IN and PAN to include QUICK REACTION SHOTS from Tasha and Troi. Then, ZOOM BACK as Picard jumps to his feet. PICARD (strongly) NO! The challenge is unequivocally refused! There is a stunned SILENCE. Lutan rises to his feet, eyes blazing. LUTAN Then you shall have no treaty -- no vaccine -- and no Lieutenant Yar! 39 EXT. SPACE - ENTERPRISE (OPTICAL) It maintains orbit around Ligon. RIKER (V.O.) Ship's log, First Officer Riker reporting. We have been informed of the challenge to Lieutenant Yar... STAR TREK: "Code of Honor" - REV. 7/15/87 31. 40 INT. MAIN BRIDGE - FEATURING SCIENCE AND TACTICAL Riker tours the stations checking readouts, while continuing his log. A FULL CREW is on station. RIKER (continuing) ... and are maintaining combat readiness round-the-clock. We are probing Lutan's compound deeply with our sensors now, still unnoticed. 41 INT. TASHA'S QUARTERS - NIGHT Tasha, doing exercises, straightens up as Picard and Troi ENTER SHOT. During the following scene Troi does nothing except listen intently. A Ligon Guard patrols. TASHA Captain. Deanna. PICARD Did you have any idea, Lieutenant, that Lutan would suddenly announce he wanted you for his First One? What do you know of this? TASHA Nothing, sir. TROI (as if to herself) But it was a thrill. Lutan is such... such a basic male image and having him say he wants you... TASHA (nods) Yes, of course it made me feel good... Then she becomes aware that Picard is watching this closely. She turns on Troi: TASHA (continuing) Troi! I'm your friend and you tricked me! TROI Only so you'll think about it completely and clearly. STAR TREK: "Code of Honor" - REV. 7/9/87 32. 41 CONTINUED: PICARD (to Tasha) We're all being manipulated, Lieutenant, and most of all myself. TROI (scrutinizing Picard) How simple all this would be without the Prime Directive. PICARD (nods; half-amused) That thought has passed thorugh my mind, Counselor. 42 INT. MAIN BRIDGE - ANGLE ON RIKER at the command position, looking toward his panel communications. The turbolift doors open, Beverly HURRIES onto the bridge. RIKER What's this message from Starbase Fourteen? 43 WIDER ANGLE Beverly hurries to indicate Riker's viewer. BEVERLY It's showing infection rates, percentage illness increases... (looks up) The plague on Styris IV has flared up out of control. Riker takes another moment to study the information received. RIKER Oh, no! STAR TREK: "Code of Honor" - 7/2/87 33. 43 CONTINUED: GEORDI (studying his own viewer) They're estimating deaths in the millions, sir. RIKER (hits com control) Captain Picard, come in. 44 INT. TASHA'S QUARTERS - NIGHT The lighting in the room low, Troi trying to nap but with Tasha disturbing this. TASHA I know I could win. Not that I'd take her life, of course, but I'd be glad to embarrass her. The idea of accusing me... Interrupted by Picard ENTERING with guards still in b.g. Troi is immediately alert at the captain's presence. TROI The plague? PICARD If anything, worse than we heard. TASHA Which means they desperately need the vaccine, sir. And I know I can win this challenge... PICARD You do not have to prove anything here, Lieutenant. TROI But the vaccine is important in this case, sir... ? PICARD Counselor, I would consider you the last person to argue for Lieutenant Yar to accept that challenge. STAR TREK: "Code of Honor" - 7/2/87 34. 44 CONTINUED: TROI Betazoid blood is also practical, Captain. (indicates Tasha) The odds are very good she'd defeat Lutan's wife easily and you would win all the bargaining points you need. PICARD "The odds are... ?" TROI As you have pointed out yourself, we are all at risk every day of every mission. Picard gives her a searching look, glancing at Tasha. PICARD I'll want some explanations from Lutan. TROI But why not let him volunteer them, Captain? His needs for approval are immense. I'm sure if you found something you liked about him, he'd be anxious to agree with it. TASHA (laughs) Yes, he would indeed. He's almost crippled with needs, the poor handsome dear. Picard considers this, then EXITS. 45 INT. CENTERPLACE BANQUET AREA - NIGHT Lutan and Hagon are still in the empty Banquet Hall, talking and finishing a drink. Picard ENTERS. PICARD I should tell you I do admire the hospitality you offer here, Lutan. A pity you began by abducting my security officer. STAR TREK: "Code of Honor" - REV. 7/10/87 35. 45 CONTINUED: LUTAN I am in the grip of forces you do not understand. PICARD (hesitates; nods) Some of it I do understand. She is a rather lovely female... LUTAN You surprise me, Captain. What do you know of needs and feelings? PICARD Nothing. (pretends to hesitate; smiles) Well, almost nothing in my position of ship's captain. HAGON (chuckles) Aha, I see. PICARD (smiles now) But it puzzles me; if you feel that way about Tasha, why have you challenged her to a fight to the death? LUTAN Not I, Yareena! I am merely a spectator. PICARD But you are also a man of great importance and wealth. HAGON Great importance, perhaps... Lutan has tried to stop what Hagon has said, but moves too slowly. Picard then chuckles. PICARD Aha, I see. Then you too understand the proper value of women? STAR TREK: "Code of Honor" - REV. 7/10/87 36. 45 CONTINUED: (2) LUTAN We understand they are highly pleasant things... but after all, unimportant, except for the land they own. PICARD You're a truly clever person, Lutan. You have nothing to lose either way the challenge goes. 46 CLOSER TWO SHOT as Lutan smiles. LUTAN A code of honor, Captain, protects one like a magic cloak. PICARD (a long pause; then) I will order Lieutenant Yar to fight. (rises) And may your cloak bring you all you deserve, Lutan. FADE OUT. END OF ACT THREE STAR TREK: "Code of Honor" - 7/2/87 37. ACT FOUR FADE IN: 47 INT. ENTERPRISE - GEORDI'S QUARTERS Geordi is standing alone in his room, his glasses on a table. Without his VISOR his eyes are dead grey. He holds a glowing 2-inch blue cube in his hand which he moves up, down and across his face an inch or so away from the skin. He is shaving. There is a CHIME from his door. GEORDI Come in. Data ENTERS, stops short as he sees the razor Geordi is using. DATA Why that razor, my friend? Why not the one I adjusted into perfect efficiency? GEORDI Shaving is a human art form, Data. Technological perfection can shave too close. DATA Puzzling. How can anything be too efficient? GEORDI Tens of thousands of things. Maybe hundreds. DATA (puzzles over it; then) We always go back to the human equation. GEORDI Exactly. Have you kept working on it? DATA Constantly, my friend. (MORE) STAR TREK: "Code of Honor" - REV. 7/9/87 38. 47 CONTINUED: DATA (Cont'd) (nods) Particularly human humor. For example, a man goes to a store to buy some kidneys. He says to the shopkeeper, "I'd like a pound of kiddillies, please." The shopkeeper says to him, "You mean kidneys, don't you?" The man says, "I said kiddillies, diddle I?" Long silence. GEORDI It's too old. And you didn't tell it very well. DATA ... How do you know when something's funny? GEORDI It's not explainable. You just do. DATA Perhaps it is you, Geordi. Includling the kiddillies, I've learned six hundred sixty-two jokes, and you haven't... Data stops, realizing Geordi is laughing. GEORDI (still chuckling) "Includling the kiddillies!" Now that's funny. DATA It was not meant as a joke! The tongue slipped! Geordi CHUCKLES even more at this. He puts away his razor, begins to fit his VISOR in place. RIKER'S COM VOICE Riker to Commander Data, Lieutenant La Forge. Report to the Transporter Room for away party duty. Both men move out quickly. STAR TREK: "Code of Honor" - REV. 7/15/87 39. 48 INT. WEAPONS ROOM ON LIGON - DAY (OPTICAL) Picard and Troi are examining weapons exhibited in the room. Unusual looking pikes, daggers, spiked gloves, unusual looking blast guns, nets, scythes, all bizarre and unfamiliar types. RIKER'S COM VOICE First officer to captain. Ready with the away personnel. PICARD (touches insignia) Lock in on this location. TRANSPORTER CHIEF'S COM VOICE Transporter locked in, sir. PICARD Energize! A short delay, then Data and Geordi BEAM IN. Data carries a large tricorder. PICARD (continuing) You've both seen the message about the plague? GEORDI (nods) And how badly the vaccine is needed. Yes sir. PICARD We need to know as much as possible about Ligonian arms and armaments. Data, especially important will be an analysis of their combat capabilities. Geordi, concentrate on their cutting edges where applicable, durability, composition, weaknesses of material. GEORDI Aye, sir. DATA From any particular point of view, sir? TROI From the perspective of Lieutenant Yar's using them in combat with Lutan's wife. STAR TREK: "Code of Honor" - 7/2/87 40. 48 CONTINUED: Geordi is stunned; Data is curious. GEORDI Are you... (begins again) You, you're serious, I can see that. DATA Most interesting. (to Geordi) Could this be human joke number six hundred sixty-three? GEORDI Negative, Data! It's a captain's order! DATA Which makes it important to know... (indicates) ... which of these weapons are to be used. PICARD That fact isn't known until the combat begins. Data and Geordi turn to the weapons to begin examining them. Picard turns toward the exit with Troi, then stops and turns back to Data. PICARD (continuing) You're right, Data. It does sound like a joke. With the power of the Enterprise, we could overwhelm this place easily. Take what we want. DATA I may not understand human humor, sir, but I am a Starfleet Academy graduate. PICARD Which means, of course... DATA ... understanding the Prime Directive, sir. STAR TREK: "Code of Honor" - REV. 7/15/87 41. 48 CONTINUED: (2) PICARD Which is, unfortunately, what this is about. By our standards, the customs here and code of honor are the same kind of pompous, strutting charades that endangered our own species a few centuries ago. We evolved out of it because no one else imposed their own... (stops; shakes head ruefully) Sorry, that became a speech. TROI You're the captain, sir. You're entitled... PICARD (smiles) I am not entitled to bore you with what you already know. Carry on! The others have returned his smile as he and Troi EXIT. 49 EXT. SPACE - ENTERPRISE (OPTICAL) in orbit around Ligon. RIKER (V.O.) Ship's log, Commander William Riker reporting. Stardate 41235.4. 50 INT. MAIN BRIDGE Riker walks past the rear readouts, taking a moment to study them. RIKER (V.O.) (continuing) Continuing our appraisal of Ligonian technology. The Captain has made it clear... STAR TREK: "Code of Honor" - REV. 7/15/87 42. 50 CONTINUED: RIKER (V.O.) (continuing) ... he wants Lieutenant Yar beamed immediately to safety if her life should become endangered... and I fervently hope the rules of that contest make it possible. RIKER Riker to Transporter Room. Do you have our people on the sensors yet? TRANSPORTER CHIEF (V.O.) Their general area, sir. Visual on screen now. Riker presses a button on a nearby console and looks. 51 OMITTED 52 CLOSE ON COMPUTER SCREEN (INSERT) (OPTICAL) The screen lists every name in the away party. Alongside each name triangulation coordinates APPEAR. They change as those who move change location. TRANSPORTER CHIEF (V.O.) (continuing) As you see, we're still doing some fine tuning. 53 INT. TASHA'S QUARTERS - NIGHT Tasha is alone as Yareena ENTERS. YAREENA I agreed to this meeting, but I see no point to it. You have accepted the challenge; there is nothing further to say. TASHA I think you should know that there is no physical training anywhere that matches Starfleet, especially its security people. STAR TREK: "Code of Honor" - REV. 7/7/87 43. 53 CONTINUED: YAREENA And you should know that even though these contests are rare, we have a tradition of making ourselves capable of them. TASHA Yareena, my acceptance had nothing to do with Lutan. YAREENA It has everything to do with Lutan. Lutan wants you to be his First One. TASHA Impossible, Yareena. I am a career Starfleet officer... YAREENA How could you not love him? Every woman loves him! TASHA Yareena, I fight for the vaccine... That's the truth. YAREENA The truth is I will kill you if I can. And believe me, I can. There is nothing else to say. TASHA In my world it's a greater honor to refuse to ... YAREENA (interrupting) You are on our world! Yareena whirls, EXITS. 54 INT. PICARD'S QUARTERS - NIGHT The room is similar to Tasha's, but less elegant and much smaller. Picard paces. TROI Captain, I'm your counselor. You brought me with you to Ligon to be of help. STAR TREK: "Code of Honor" - REV. 7/10/87 44. 54 CONTINUED: PICARD Then help me, please. What is a way out of this? TROI With the vaccine? (shakes head) None. Not under the rules we believe in. There is a KNOCK. A Guard opens the door to admit Data and Geordi. GEORDI The weapons in that room are surprisingly durable and flexible... and deadly. DATA And light, as if they're made for women to use. GEORDI Some of them still have traces of blood -- and poison. PICARD (reacting) Poison? GEORDI Alkaloid base. Deadly. DATA But we found no indication it is invariably used, sir. Or ever, in contests like this. PICARD A theory, Data. What would be the best defense against weapons like these? DATA Undiminished attack because of the possibility of poison, sir. PICARD What about those lengths of metal in the yard outside? STAR TREK: "Code of Honor" - 7/2/87 45. 54 CONTINUED: (2) DATA Uncertain, sir. However, joined together they would make a rectangle or square enclosing one hundred twenty-one square meters. If put end-to-end vertically, they would make a pole forty-four meters high, or two of twenty-two meters, or... PICARD Thank you, Data. DATA You are welcome, sir. A KNOCK on the door. Tasha is ushered in by the guard. TASHA She won't budge. She loves him -- without reservation. (to them all) And she thinks I love him too. DATA Most interesting. Do you? TASHA Of course I don't, Data! As Troi pointed out to me, I'm attracted to him but that is entirely different. DATA How so? Picard is becoming amused at this. PICARD I'll agree it is puzzling, Data, but since it involves Tasha's very intimate and personal... TASHA It involves nothing I'm ashamed of! (to Data) In fact, you may discover that the very worst move of your life was when you threw in with flesh and blood humans. STAR TREK: "Code of Honor" - REV. 7/9/87 46. 54 CONTINUED: (3) DATA (nodding gravely) But certainly the most interesting. TASHA Interesting? Data, I grew up on a failed colony, completely lawless, mad, where people took what they wanted. This meant males for the reason they're bigger, stronger... (to Troi) And that's why I chose Starfleet security, I guess. TROI (nods) For reasons you should be very proud of. TASHA (to Data) Those were my early interests... strength, daring, dominant males... and that's why Lutan attracts me. To me, he's like a Federation Olympic Games hero. But do I want to become his so-called "First One," marry him? That would be nonsense! 55 ANGLE EMPHASIZING PICARD A pause, then Picard draws himself up into a pose resembling Data, and: PICARD Most interesting. DATA (turning, nodding) Ah! You feel that also! Smiles from all present. Picard now turns to Tasha, very serious. PICARD And having laid all that out, Lieut... (corrects self) Tasha... we come to a most serious question... STAR TREK: "Code of Honor" - REV. 7/8/87 47. 55 CONTINUED: RIKER'S COM VOICE Riker to captain. Picard touches his insignia. PICARD Go ahead. We're alone. RIKER'S COM VOICE We're fine tuned enough to see your hosts gathering in the open area outside with a number of them now headed for your location. PICARD Thank you, Number One. (turning to Tasha) I was about to ask if considering that background, your apprehension by Lutan, all of that... do you still feel ready to undergo this challenge? Do you judge your condition good? From the door a LOUD KNOCK. TASHA I judge it excellent, sir. Another KNOCK, insistent. Picard nods to Geordi who opens the door. It REVEALS Hagon with TWO GUARDS who carry two lacquered boxes each. The four boxes (the SIZE OF HAT-BOXES) are labeled one through four by ornate dot patterns. The boxes are placed on a low table. HAGON Your weapons, Lieutenant Yar. You may pick your size. They EXIT. Tasha goes slowly to the boxes, and opens first one and then the others. She picks one glavin up and holds it for the others to see. They look at it with awe. It is a gauntlet-length oversized glove, the bulbous and almost basketball size. On the inside of the wrist a down-curved claw projects. Out of the glove itself stick a profusion of slender eight-inch long needles, as if from a porcupine. A thin transparent shield covers them. Tasha removes the cover. 56 CLOSE SHOT - THE GLAVIN IN TASHA'S HANDS revealing the above details, but without any poison demarcation. STAR TREK: "Code of Honor" - REV. 7/9/87 48. 56 CONTINUED: GEORDI (V.O.) Don't touch the spines! They're poisoned. 57 OMITTED 58 BACK TO SHOT Tasha looks at the glavin carefully, hefts it, touches it, estimating it. Geordi comes over and looks at it with her. GEORDI If you're not careful you could kill yourself. TASHA (looks at spines; shakes head) These I understand. From outside, they HEAR a metallic CLANGING. They stop, and go to the window. 59 THEIR POV OUTSIDE - NIGHT Outside, in the CENTERPLACE, the sharpened lengths of steel have been vertically attached within a multi-level rectangle. A number of these poles have horizontal segments connecting them. Yareena, wearing workout clothing, is maneuvering quickly from level to level, carefully avoiding the sharpened spikes. She wears the glavin on her left hand only, and uses the claw to give her leverage while swinging over and under the horizontal bars. It's obvious, as she climbs and jabs and slashes out, that she's very good at this. She never makes a mistake; the projecting needles never touch a pole, and she never makes a misstep. Below her, eight metallic objects outline the boundary of the arena. Between each of these, perhaps twenty inches off the ground, a brilliant green LIGHT BEAM defines the outer limit of the rectangle. As a workman puts the finishing touches on this apparatus, four additional green LIGHT BEAMS suddenly appear, emanating straight upward, from the four corners of the centermost section. To check them, he interrupts one of the beams with a stick of wood. It SIZZLES and begins to BURN. STAR TREK: "Code of Honor" - REV. 7/9/87 48A. 60 BACK TO SHOT They look at one another. FADE OUT. END OF ACT FOUR STAR TREK: "Code of Honor" - REV. 7/7/87 49. ACT FIVE FADE IN: 61 EXT. SPACE - ENTERPRISE (OPTICAL) The starship steady in her orbit. RIKER (V.O.) First Officer's log, supplemental. Captain Picard, faced with a critical need for a vaccine produced on this planet... 62 INT. MAIN BRIDGE - ESTABLISHING, THEN PANNING RIKER during which, he leaves his command position, CROSSES toward the turbolift. A crewman is at Conn, rear stations are manned. RIKER (V.O.) (continuing) ... has permitted Lieutenant Natasha Yar to engage in a fight to the death. I have yet to understand his reasoning or his plan. Reaching the turbolift, Riker discovers Wesley standing half out of sight inside -- off the bridge. He stops; they eye each other. Then, gesturing: RIKER Care to lend a hand? WESLEY Yes sir! He bounds onto the Bridge as Riker EXITS by Turbolift. 63 INT. TRANSPORTER ROOM (OPTICAL) as Data BEAMS IN. When fully arrived he turns to the Transporter Chief who is monitoring his viewer... DATA Was I seen leaving? STAR TREK: "Code of Honor" - REV. 7/10/87 50. 63 CONTINUED: TRANSPORTER CHIEF (shakes head) They've got eyes only for the program. Riker ENTERS, Data nods at him. Then he includes Transporter Chief, saying: DATA Captain Picard wanted no risk of our communications being overheard. You're to proceed now, as he indicated. Beverly Crusher ENTERS over the last of this. She carries a medical tricorder and a couple of instruments including a contact hypo. She indicates these to Riker. BEVERLY Captain's orders here, too. RIKER (to Data) Does the Captain understand what you and Geordi reported about those weapons? They're razor sharp, split-second lethal... DATA (nods) I am here to brief you on what he plans. 64 INT. CENTERPLACE - NIGHT The Centerplace is alive with a gathering group of official spectators, who are seating themselves around Lutan and Hagon. Picard, Troi, Geordi, followed by Tasha and a guard, ENTER SHOT. Tasha wears the glavin with its protective covering. We begin to HEAR A RATTLE of ivory-like sticks from the Spectators. TASHA (to Picard) Any last minute instructions, sir? STAR TREK: "Code of Honor" - REV. 7/10/87 51. 64 CONTINUED: PICARD (nods; then) Stay alive. We'll hope to do the rest. 65 ANGLE TO INCLUDE YAREENA as she ENTERS with a Female Aide. LOUDER LIGONIAN RATTLING. A Guard motions Yareena and Tasha into the combat area. A worker prepares to activate the light-beam boundary. When it's quiet, Hagon rises and addresses the gathering. HAGON I speak for Lutan. The rules are known; let combat continue until there is a victor. It will not be interrupted. (looks at combatants) Proceed. Again a RATTLING OF STICKS as Tasha and Yareena ENTER the structure at opposite sides. The worker ACTIVATES the LIGHT-BEAM boundary. Then SILENCE from the Spectators as Tasha and Yareena immediately begin working their way through the structure. 66 CLOSER ON THE COMBAT - NIGHT - (INTERCUT WITH SPECTATOR REACTION) Tasha goes quickly for the center to defend from there, not sure exactly what to expect. Yareena, very sure of herself, climbs with agility. The glavin never gets too near her body. The glavins CLANG as each of the women climbs. 67 CLOSE ON YAREENA Her eyes bright, her expression cold. She appears to always figure at least one move ahead. 68 CLOSE ON TASHA learning as she goes. She makes her moves without flare, steadily and carefully feeling her way. At the moment, it looks as if she's no match for Yareena. STAR TREK: "Code of Honor" - REV. 7/9/87 52. 69 ON THEM BOTH - COMBAT SQUARE ONLY Yareena suddenly speeds up, agily climbing higher than Tasha. Gracefully, she also circles to get behind her. Tasha turns barely quickly enough to defend herself. Stopping, darting away, and coming from unexpected angles, Yareena forces Tasha to change position. Tasha at first clambers horizontally, then, aware of what's happening, climbs higher to get away from her, but can't do it without turning her back. Yareena jabs out at her, managing to drive and corner her on the highest level of the arena. Again she jabs with her glavin, just missing. There's a GASP from the audience. Yareena inches closer, leaning out and continuing to jab. 70 ANGLE ON LUTAN Not at all as unconcerned as he indicates to Picard. 71 CLOSE ON TASHA Tasha folds her arms and dives beneath the horizontal pole, landing on her feet -- but loses her balance, and falls within the innermost section. 72 BACK TO SHOT Instantly, Yareena climbs toward her for the kill. As she raises her glavin to strike the final blow, her arm extends too far back, causing a metallic section of the glavin to brush against one of the brightly glowing vertical LIGHT BEAMS. This results in a shower of SPARKS and a reactive force so strong that it throws Yareena's arm forward with such speed that the glavin is hurled out of the arena and into the first row of spectators. 73 ANGLE ON LUTAN Lutan rises, shouting. LUTAN Combatants, hold your positions! (he turns to a guard) Return the weapon! STAR TREK: "Code of Honor" - REV. 7/9/87 53. 73 CONTINUED: Yareena and Tasha remain stationary as a smiling spectator, into whose lap the glavin has fallen, gingerly hands it to the guard. His smile quickly turns to a grimace of horror as he notices a thin line of blood on his thigh. His face contorts as the poison instantly takes effect. As the glavin is carefully returned to Yareena, WE SEE two sentries removing the spectator's body. 74 CLOSE ON THEM BOTH With Yareena re-armed, Tasha aggressively advances toward her. 75 ANGLE ON HAGON Very concerned now. HAGON Yareena! Careful! 76 ANGLE ON ARENA Tasha moves rapidly to the outside, drawing Yareena up to follow her, then simulates losing her balance and fake-falls, flailing, toward the ground. She appears to be caught on the lower rungs without being able to free herself. Yareena drops deftly to her feet alongside her, stands over her and is about to shove the deadly spines of the glavin into her when Tasha kicks out with her foot, catching Yareena's leg. Yareena stumbles. Tasha gets to her feet and hurls herself at Yareena, getting on top of her. Her claw grazes Yareena's shoulder, ripping her garment and causing blood to flow. STAR TREK: "Code of Honor" - 7/2/87 54. 77 ANGLE EMPHASIZING YAREENA staring in horror at the thin TRAIL of blood. She starts slowly to rise up. The spectators gasp, waiting for Yareena to die. 78 ANGLE EMPHASIZING TASHA (OPTICAL) as she suddenly throws herself bodily across Yareena and both of them begin to SHIMMER -- and then are BEAMED AWAY. 79 FULL SHOT The crowd rises to its feet in surprise, then anger and SHOUTING. They begin to throw their ivory-like sticks toward the arena, then at our Away Party which quickly moves to one side, standing close. 80 INT. TRANSPORTER ROOM (OPTICAL) Security -- and Beverly, Data, and Riker -- are waiting as the supine bodies of Tasha and Yareena appear on the transporter pads. RIKER Move! Tasha rises as security people grab Yareena and very carefully remove her glavin. She appears to be almost dead -- perhaps completely so. Tasha removes her own. Beverly moves forward to administer a hypo to Yareena. TASHA We're too late; she's growing cold. BEVERLY Sorry that clashes with my instructions... The hypo administered, Beverly begins monitoring Yareena on the medical tricorder. 81 CLOSE ON YAREENA Not a pretty angle since she indeed looks dead. 82 CLOSE ON TASHA Horror stricken at what she has done. STAR TREK: "Code of Honor" - 7/2/87 55. 82 CONTINUED: TASHA On no, no... 83 INT. CENTERPLACE - EMPHASIZING PICARD AND LUTAN with Troi, Geordi and Hagon looking on. Still angry spectators in b.g. PICARD Exactly what do you find unfair, Lutan? They fought to the death; you saw the final blow; you know the effects of your poison... LUTAN But what of your Lieutenant Yar? She is to become my First One now. PICARD I certainly won't stop her -- if she cares to claim that honor. Lutan looks closely at Picard, beginning to realize that Tasha may not want to be his First One. Hagon moves in, comforting: HAGON But remember, you now have all Yareena's lands and wealth, Lutan. LUTAN (with a wry smile at Hagon) At least, all has not been lost. Over which we have HEARD the COMMUNICATOR SOUND, and Picard touches his insignia. PICARD Picard here. This amazes Lutan and Hagon too -- it is the first they've known of this communication system. RIKER'S COM VOICE Since you've fulfilled your agreement, Captain, can we now beam the vaccine aboard? LUTAN Ah, yes... of course. STAR TREK: "Code of Honor" - REV. 7/10/87 56. 83 CONTINUED: PICARD No problem, Number One. Send down someone from medical. RIKER'S COM VOICE And to complete our business here, we are locked onto you. PICARD Five to beam up. Energize. This startles Lutan and Hagon. They are in the act of protesting as the TRANSPORTER EFFECT begins. 84 EXT. SPACE - ORBITAL ANGLE (OPTICAL) The starship Enterprise. RIKER (V.O.) First Officer's log, Stardate 41235.6. I am returning the conn to Captain Picard... 85 INT. MAIN BRIDGE - FULL SHOT Riker still at Command Center as: RIKER (V.O.) (continuing) ... as we begin loading the vaccine supply aboard. Shortly, we hope to signal "mission complete." During which Picard, Lutan, Hagon and Troi ENTER from a turbolift. Riker sees them, rises, and indicates in the proper direction. Wesley makes himself small in the bridge position he occupies. RIKER Welcome back, Captain, and you're wanted in the lounge. PICARD (to his guests) This way, gentlemen. They MOVE ON as indicated. Troi remains on the bridge. 86 INT. LOUNGE - ANGLE ON SIDE OF DOORS as they OPEN, REVEALING Picard with Lutan and Hagon who react in surprise at what they see inside. STAR TREK: "Code of Honor" - 7/2/87 57. 87 WIDE ANGLE - EMPHASIZING LOUNGE OCCUPANTS which are Tasha, Beverly... and Yareena, looking very alive. On the table there is the fateful glavin, medical tricorder and instruments. Accepting what he sees, Lutan reacts angrily. LUTAN She is not dead! There was no death combat; you have violated our agreement. There will be no treaty, no vaccine... ! PICARD The challenge was carried out. She died, Lutan. LUTAN There was no challenge! She is alive. Beverly picks up the glavin, moves to Lutan, holding it very close to him. BEVERLY I am a physician and saw her die. If you doubt this poison, why not test it on yourself? Lutan has flinched away from it. Picard moves in. PICARD Lutan, we can provide you with the medical records to prove her death and how Doctor Crusher brought her back. Yareena is enjoying this as she makes eye contact with Tasha who nods approvingly. YAREENA And at the instant of death, Lutan, a mating agreement dissolves. Yareena moves toward Lutan. LUTAN But this is witchcraft, Yareena. To discard a mate in that manner... YAREENA ... is less painful than the one you selected for me. STAR TREK: "Code of Honor" - REV. 7/10/87 58. 87 CONTINUED: She reaches out and takes the ornate red-stone necklace from his neck. LUTAN No, Yareena... But he stands unresistingly as she turns with it, faces Hagon. YAREENA Even as I battled, Hagon, I heard you calling out for me. She raises the necklace. Hagon nods. HAGON Be my First One, Yareena. She places it around his neck. YAREENA All my land, all my goods, all I have... is yours to rule. A low SOB from Tasha, drawing startled looks from Picard. TASHA That's so beautiful. (to Lutan) And so sad for you. You've lost everything. LUTAN I have my honor. And it is true that Lutan still has his head held proudly high. Tasha looks at him, then to Yareena. TASHA It's such a... a waste! YAREENA Do you want him? Tasha is startled, looks to the Captain, then back. TASHA No, there would be... complications. STAR TREK: "Code of Honor" - 7/2/87 59. 87 CONTINUED: (2) YAREENA (to Lutan) Then I will have you as my Number Two. (indicates) Take your place accordingly. Lutan moves to stand slightly behind Hagon. HAGON As you see, Captain, you may excel in technology... but not in civilized behavior. 88 EXT. SPACE - THE U.S.S. ENTERPRISE (OPTICAL) still in orbit of Ligon II. 89 INT. MAIN BRIDGE Fully manned... in fact, too fully. Picard ENTERS, then senses something awry. He looks around, puzzled at this. Then he looks toward the Ops station where Wesley has been hoping to pass unnoticed. PICARD What the... ! (starts again) Ah yes, Wesley. RIKER (overlap) Wesley! (quickly to Picard) He'd been manning that station for me. I forgot. Wesley has come up out of the seat, looking apprehensive as he stands somewhat at attention. PICARD Well! (beat) Thank you again for manning one of our bridge stations. We'll see you get another chance. WESLEY Yes sir! Again, those words are an elixir which sends Wesley happily on his way. STAR TREK: "Code of Honor" - 7/2/87 60. 89 CONTINUED: PICARD What's the delay, Number One? Why aren't we warping out of here? RIKER Set course for Styris IV, Warp three. GEORDI Course laid in for Styris IV, sir. RIKER Engage! 90 EXT. SPACE - THE U.S.S. ENTERPRISE (OPTICAL) moving off from Ligon II, then WARP SPEED OPTICAL. FADE OUT. END ACT FIVE THE END STAR TREK: THE NEXT GENERATION "Haven" (fka "Eye of The Beholder") #40271-105 Teleplay by Tracy Torme Story by Tracy Torme and Lan O'Kun Copyright 1987 Paramount Pictures Corporation. All Rights Reserved. This script is not for publication or reproduction. No one is authorized to dispose of same. If lost or destroyed, please notify the Script Department. REVISED FINAL DRAFT JULY 13, 1987 STAR TREK: "Haven" - 7/13/87 - CAST STAR TREK: THE NEXT GENERATION "Haven" CAST PICARD TRANSPORTER CHIEF RIKER TWO BEAUTIFUL WOMEN (SILENT) DATA DATA TROI FACE ON GIFT-BOX BEVERLY MRS. LWAXANA TROI TASHA VICTORIA MILLER WORF STEVEN MILLER GEORDI WYATT MILLER MR. HOMN VALEDA INNIS WRENN ARIANA STAR TREK: "Haven" - 7/13/87 - SETS STAR TREK: THE NEXT GENERATION "Haven" SETS INTERIORS EXTERIORS ENTERPRISE U.S.S. Enterprise Main Bridge Tarellian Ship Riker's Cabin Transporter Room Ready Room Corridor (outside Transporter Room) Turbolift Mrs. Troi's Quarters Wyatt's Quarters Conference Room Formal Dining Area Holodeck (Desert Landscape) Sickbay TARELLIAN SHIP Main Bridge STAR TREK: "Haven" - 7/13/87 - TEASER STAR TREK: THE NEXT GENERATION "HAVEN" TEASER FADE IN: 1 EXT. SPACE - STARSHIP (OPTICAL) The Enterprise sweeps toward a beautiful blue-green planet. PICARD (V.O.) Captain's log, Stardate 41294.5. Our destination, the Class M Beta Cassius planet known simply as Haven. It is a world... 2 INT. MAIN BRIDGE - WIDE ANGLE PICARD sits alone in the Command Area. GEORDI is at the Conn, WORF mans Ops, DATA's at Science Station #1. PICARD (V.O.) (continuing) ... so renowned for its peaceful beauty that some believe it to have mystical healing powers. 3 OMITTED 4 ANGLE ON PICARD He's lost in thought as he looks up at the viewscreen. PICARD Such a beautiful world. Legends say it has been known to mend souls and heal broken hearts. 5 TWO SHOT - DATA AND PICARD As Data looks up, considers Picard's statement. DATA Legends which are totally unsupported by fact, Captain. STAR TREK: "Haven" - 7/13/87 - TEASER 2. 5 CONTINUED: PICARD Legends like that are the spice of the universe, Mister Data, because they have a way of sometimes coming true. DATA They have intrinsic value regardless of the facts, sir? PICARD Facts are not everything, Mister Data. DATA (startled by the thought) Indeed, sir. Picard nods. Data seems to be trying to add this blasphemous concept to his voluminous memory. Meanwhile, Picard addresses the Conn. PICARD Standard orbit, Mister La Forge. GEORDI Standard orbit, sir. 6 EXT. SPACE (OPTICAL) The Enterprise eases into orbit. 7 INT. RIKER'S CABIN (OPTICAL) CLOSE ON TWO BEAUTIFUL WOMEN working delicate harp instruments. These players radiate a warm sensuality. Their "harps" sound more like mandolins and pedal steel guitars. 8 thru OMITTED 9 10 ANGLE ON RIKER leaning back, fully enjoying this, until: TASHA'S COM VOICE Lieutenant Yar to Commander Riker. Your presence is requested in Transporter Room One.  STAR TREK: "Haven" - 7/13/87 - TEASER 3. 10 CONTINUED: Riker sighs good-naturedly and gets to his feet. The SONG IS SOARING in the b.g. RIKER Sorry ladies. Duty calls. 11 ON RIKER AND THE WOMEN (OPTICAL) For the first time, WE SEE that the Musicians are only two feet tall. As he EXITS, Riker hits a switch and the Songstresses DISAPPEAR. 12 INT. TRANSPORTER ROOM ONE Riker ENTERS, joining TASHA, GEORDI, and a TRANSPORTER CHIEF. RIKER Lieutenant, you needed me? TASHA Yes sir. There's an object of some kind beaming in from Haven. RIKER What is it? TASHA We're not sure. I'm holding it in stasis until we can register its exact nature. It's listed as a gift for Counselor Troi. RIKER For Deanna? From here? TASHA That's what I wondered about. She's on her way now. TRANSPORTER CHIEF (indicating his viewer) Surface Station approval coming in now, Lieutenant. TASHA Okay, let's bring it in. STAR TREK: "Haven" - 7/13/87 - TEASER 4. 13 ANGLE ON TRANSPORTER (OPTICAL) The object is beamed aboard. WE SEE the surprised faces of those in the room as a big black chest rests on the transporter pad. Its design is somewhat old-fashioned except for A ROUND SLEEPING HUMAN FACE ON ITS SIDE. The chest is seamless and featureless except for the slumbering Face. They circle it, looking for a way of opening it. RIKER Odd looking. Why would one of our people be getting a gift from this world? Anxious to solve this mystery, Tasha moves in for a closer look at the Face. 14 FULL SHOT - INCLUDING FACE (OPTICAL) Troi ENTERS the room, surprised to see them huddled at a chest. TROI What's going on? Tasha gasps as the Face's eyes pop open. The Face has come alive! Two bright red eyes scan the scene, stopping only when they fall on Troi. All eyes turn to Troi, who's as surprised as anyone. FACE (deep, booming voice) I hold a message for Deanna Troi! The Face grins wildly -- it seems overjoyed with the news it is about to reveal. FACE (continuing) Lwaxana Troi and the honorable Miller Family will soon arrive! The momentous day is close at hand! Rejoice! The Face then abruptly SIGHS and goes back to sleep. TROI No, oh NO... ! STAR TREK: "Haven" - 7/13/87 - TEASER 5. 14 CONTINUED: Everyone turns to look at Troi, who is stunned and mute. There is an another silence... but nothing happens until Troi moves slowly to the chest and kneels close to examine the Face. THE CHEST SUDDENLY GOES BANG. A door flies open and dozens of brightly-colored gems and trinkets spill out. The astonished onlookers get a closer look at the items. Troi picks up a necklace made of red Betazoid jewels (like the ones she wears in her hair). TROI (continuing) I don't believe this! RIKER Counselor, what's this all about? TROI (softly; slowly) They're bonding gifts... (pause) ... what you would call... wedding presents. RIKER Wedding presents? What wedding? Who's getting married? Troi slowly turns to look him in the eye. TROI (in shock) I am. Riker stares at her, immobilized. FADE OUT: END OF TEASER STAR TREK: "Haven" - 7/13/87 - ACT ONE 6. ACT ONE FADE IN: 15 EXT. SPACE (OPTICAL) The Enterprise orbits Haven. 16 INT. READY ROOM Picard and Riker are with Troi. Riker is naturally perturbed; this is a woman he's loved although without any commitment being made. Picard is sorry to lose this top quality counselor and he's curious over how it happened -- and also curious about the effect of this upon these key officers. TROI I was certain it would never happen, Captain. The years I'd spend on this mission, the distance it has taken me away from home... (a deep breath) As you must have heard, genetic bonding is a Betazoid tradition. RIKER But your father was human, Deanna. The Millers are human... TROI You'd understand if you knew the loveliness of my world. The Millers and my father knew it, they loved Betazed so that they adopted the customs and traditions, including this one. A hesitation, then Picard breaks in: PICARD Will you and your husband be staying with the ship, Counselor? Her eyes go first to Riker in a way indicating her answer has much to do with him. Then she answers the captain: TROI No, sir. STAR TREK: "Haven" - 7/13/87 - ACT ONE 7. 16 CONTINUED: Picard sees this, decides it is time to leave them alone. PICARD Then... I'll just say congratulations for now, Deanna. (including Riker) If you'll excuse me. Riker and Troi nod and MUMBLE a kind of assent, their eyes very much on each other now. Picard EXITS. CAMERA MOVES IN ON THE TWOSOME who stand uncomfortably eyeing each other. Then: TROI Bill ... more than anything else in the world ... anything ... you want to be a starship captain. True? RIKER (beat) I love you, Deanna. TROI I can feel that. (nods; small smile) I know you love me... within those limits. (touches him) So almost more than anything else in the world, I want to honor my father's memory with this bonding. They look at each other. She has invited him to say more and he considers it. TROI (continuing) Did you hear carefully what I said? RIKER (nods sadly) Every word. (beat) I'm sorry. They exchange a long, long look. Then: TROI (nods) Come dance at my wedding. STAR TREK: "Haven" - 7/13/87 - ACT ONE 8. 16 CONTINUED: (2) Interrupted by the SOUND OF A CHIME. Riker ignores it. RIKER I'll try. Then Worf ENTERS. WORF Message from planet Haven, Counselor. They wish to beam the Miller... (hesitates) ... ah, wedding party aboard. She nods, EXITS. Then Riker EXITS too, leaving behind a Klingon who puzzles over the strange ways of humans. 17 thru OMITTED 18 19 INT. TRANSPORTER ROOM (OPTICAL) Picard and Troi face the platform. The Transporter Chief stands by the controls, the platform in b.g. SOUND of TRANSPORTER EFFECT, then THREE FIGURES MATERIALIZE. 20 CLOSE ON TROI AND PICARD Troi's face reflects the fact that she's about to see her future husband for the first time in nearly three decades. Clearly, Picard is aware of the stress she feels and sympathizes. 21 WIDE ANGLE The Miller Family steps off the platform. STEVEN MILLER is a balding bear of a man in his late fifties. VICTORIA MILLER is small and slim, prim and proper. Their son WYATT is a likeable, blond young man with an easy smile and an open, honest face. PICARD I'm Jean-Luc Picard, captain of the Enterprise. Welcome aboard. STEVEN Quite some starship you have here, captain. Look forward to this visit. STAR TREK: "Haven" - 7/13/87 - ACT ONE 9. 21 CONTINUED: VICTORIA Oh, yes, yes. (looks to Troi) You couldn't be... TROI ... I'm Deanna. VICTORIA (dabbing her eyes) Deanna darling! You probably don't even remember me. Steven brushes by his wife and gives Troi a hug. Then he holds Troi off, looking at her but speaking to his wife excitedly. To one side Wyatt stares at Troi. STEVEN Wyatt was absolutely right, Victoria. She is a beauty. Wyatt steps forward. He looks at her, but his smile lacks something. Troi senses that something as she looks into his eyes. WYATT I'm Wyatt. He reaches out to her. When their hands touch, Mrs. Miller begins to cry. VICTORIA (to Picard) Isn't this simply beautiful? I knew romance was still alive somewhere. 22 ANGLE EMPHASIZING WYATT AND TROI (OPTICAL) Wyatt offers Troi a large rose: Navy blue petals atop a twisting golden stem. Troi studies the flower in wonder. The petals are softly TURNING from blue to white. WYATT I'd like you to have this. It's a Chameleon Rose. It changes color with the mood of its owner. TROI It's wonderful. Thank you. STAR TREK: "Haven" - 7/13/87 - ACT ONE 10. 22 CONTINUED: She looks up from the rose and it seems Wyatt is studying her face. What's he looking for? STEVEN (to Troi) Deanna, did you like the chest? TROI Oh, yes. Especially the way It rolled its eyes at me. STEVEN (to Victoria; exuberant) You see, Victoria? I told you she'd love it! VICTORIA (to Picard and Troi) I was in favor of something more dignified. (looks at Steven critically) Steven picked the ugliest face imaginable. STEVEN It was a fine face. Full of character! TROI Excuse me, but... when is my mother arriving? Mr. and Mrs. Miller go silent, giving each other knowing looks. Victoria frowns at the very mention of Mrs. Troi. WYATT Your mother's still down on the planet, Deanna. TROI Why? Wyatt takes the initiative -- prodding his parents toward the exit. WYATT Er -- is there a place for my parents to rest, Captain? STAR TREK: "Haven" - 7/13/87 - ACT ONE 11. 22 CONTINUED: (2) STEVEN We're not really tired, son, and besides I'd like to see some of the ship. VICTORIA Steven, you know full well Lwaxana Troi isn't about to beam aboard until we've cleared out. So... Slight pause. Picard fills in the breach. PICARD You can visit your quarters now, if you wish. Victoria nods her thanks and Picard leads the family to where a crewperson is waiting outside. PICARD (continuing) See the Millers to their accommodations, please. (to Steven) I'll join you all later. As Picard turns and RE-ENTERS, the Transporter Chief looks up from a reading. TRANSPORTER CHIEF A Mrs. Troi ready to beam up, sir. Picard throws a look toward Deanna, gets a nod, then nods in turn to the Transporter Chief. PICARD So be it. As the Transporter Chief sets the Transporter controls: PICARD (continuing) Wyatt seems a fine young man. TROI (puzzled) Yes, he does... But I'm not what he expected. PICARD I don't understand. STAR TREK: "Haven" - 7/13/87 - ACT ONE 12. 22 CONTINUED: (3) TROI Neither do I... but I'm definitely a surprise of some sort to him. THE SHIMMERING HUM OF THE TRANSPORTER EFFECT turns both heads toward the platform. TROI (continuing) I should warn you. My mother's a bit... eccentric. There's expectation as A GAUNT FIGURE IN A FLOWING BLACK ROBE materializes. He has faded white-grey skin and beady purple eyes. He moves smoothly and deliberately. Quite a ghostly figure this MR. HOMN. ANOTHER FIGURE begins to materialize. As it solidifies, CAMERA MOVES IN ON MRS. TROI, who looks like a Bohemian Queen. Her gown is striking, as is her jewelry. Her facial make-up, though unusual, brings out her high-cheekboned beauty. Behind her, a large, ornate luggage item has also BEAMED IN with her. MRS. TROI (looks around) Where is everyone? 22A EMPHASIZING TASHA AND MOTHER Troi moves toward her. TROI Hello, Mother... MRS. TROI TELEPATHIC V.O. (turning to Troi) Don't say it... think it. Use your mind, not your mouth. Troi refuses to go along, uses words, repeating: TROI Hello Mother. MRS. TROI TELEPATHIC V.O. Deanna. Shame! What has this life done to you? Mr. Homn helps Mrs. Troi off the platform. Picard is about to introduce himself when Mrs. Troi cuts him off. STAR TREK: "Haven" - 7/13/87 - ACT ONE 13. 22A CONTINUED: MRS. TROI Don't tell me. You're the captain. PICARD (smiling; nods) Of course. Your daughter explained your telepathic abilities. MRS. TROI That wasn't telepathy, it was common sense. Who else would they send to greet me but the Captain? (indicates luggage item) You may carry my luggage. This stumps Picard for an instant, but then he nods, STEPS ONTO the platform. TROI Mother! 22B EMPHASIZING PICARD STEPPING TO the luggage item. PICARD No, no, quite all right. I'm indebted to your mother for the... the fine counselor she... The luggage item is much heavier than Picard realized and it takes so much effort to lift it that he GRUNTS-GROANS slightly and realizes he is trapped into displaying something less than a dignified figure. FADE OUT: END OF ACT ONE STAR TREK: "Haven" - 7/13/87 - ACT TWO 14. ACT TWO FADE IN: 23 OMITTED 24 INT. CORRIDOR - OUTSIDE TRANPORTER ROOM As Deanna, Mrs. Troi, Mister Homn, and lastly Captain Picard MOVE OUT into the Corridor. Picard is laboring and Deanna looks toward him anxiously. A couple of crewpersons pass and double-take this strange use of their captain. TROI Mother, it's quite inappropriate to ask the captain to... MRS. TROI (to Picard) Yes, you do seem to be having difficulty. A man your age must work to keep himself in shape. Troi stops short. TROI I'm not going another step this way! (to Mother) A starship has its customs just as we do. Please set that down, Captain. (turning to Homn) If you're my mother's valet, then please valet! PICARD Well, so long as you insist... The Captain sets the luggage down gratefully. Meanwhile, Mrs. Troi turns to him apologetically. MRS. TROI I apologize for her behavior. (to Troi) Do you realize you've embarrassed your captain? (to Homn) Do as she says. Anything to avoid a quarrel on this occasion. STAR TREK: "Haven" - 7/13/87 - ACT TWO 15. 24 CONTINUED: The seemingly frail Mr. Homn bends, easily lifts the heavy luggage. Picard's look of astonishment at this is covered by Mrs. Troi taking his arm possessively and leading him down the corridor. 24A PANNING SHOT Deanna hurries to walk with Picard and her mother. She indicates Homn following them with the luggage. TROI Mother -- what happened to Xelo? MRS. TROI I was forced to terminate his employment. (to Picard) Xelo was strongly attracted to me -- his thoughts became truly pornographic. They REACH a Corridor Turbolift where the doors snap OPEN. 25 INT. TURBOLIFT as they ENTER. PICARD (to turbolift) Passenger accommodations. The turbolift will go upwards for a ways, then travel horizontally. Meanwhile: MRS. TROI (to Captain) Of course the thoughts of Wyatt's father toward me were almost as vulgar... TROI (pleading) Mother... STAR TREK: "Haven" - 7/13/87 - ACT TWO 16. 25 CONTINUED: MRS. TROI (without pause) ... but he really doesn't have Mister Homn's imagination. Between that and his wife's inane chatter, it's a wonder I made it here at all. How do you like the Millers, Captain? PICARD (startled; then) I'm sure I'll find them as pleasant as... MRS. TROI As for me, I've found it shocking how they've changed in the years since my husband and I knew them. Or perhaps, I've just grown beyond them. You realize of course that with Betazoids, our ability to read the thoughts of others does see us grow and learn much faster than the typical dull and plodding human who... 26 CLOSE ANGLE EMPHASIZING TROI who whirls on her mother, interrupting her telepathically, angrily. TROI TELEPATHIC V.O. Mother, that's enough! Mrs. Troi turns her head toward her daughter. MRS. TROI TELEPATHIC V.O. So, you're not totally out of practice. Good. Very good. The turbolift stops, the doors snap OPEN. 27 OMITTED 28 INT. MRS. TROI'S QUARTERS Mrs. Troi looks around the room with a jaundiced eye. PICARD We hope you'll be comfortable here. STAR TREK: "Haven" - 7/13/87 - ACT TWO 17. 28 CONTINUED: MRS. TROI Yes, the room is adequate. Small, but adequate. You will of course adjust the temperature to a civilized level. PICARD I'll see what I can do. Now if you'll excuse me, I'm sure you two have a lot to talk about. MRS. TROI Yes Captain, you may go. Picard is only too happy to WALK OUT, past the strong Mr. Homn who begins to unpack for Mrs. Troi. MRS. TROI TELEPATHIC V.O. You've been slack, little one. Allowed your mental powers to rust. TROI TELEPATHIC V.O. To avoid becoming confused, mother. Humans constantly think one thing but say another. MRS. TROI TELEPATHIC V.O. Yes, they do, don't they. The poor dears. Our style of complete honesty frightens them. TROI (switching to voice) On that subject Mother, there is such a thing as too much honesty with humans. MRS. TROI TELEPATHIC V.O. Nonsense. It sets them a good example. If they'd only say what they think instead of hiding it... TROI But they're accustomed to hiding their thoughts... MRS. TROI TELEPATHIC V.O. And I quite understand what you faced here. An entire shipload of such inconsistency could drive one insane. STAR TREK: "Haven" - 7/13/87 - ACT TWO 18. 28 CONTINUED: (2) Mrs. Troi, rearranging what Homn unpacks, looks at her daughter, begins to soften and show empathy for her. She now uses her VOICE. MRS. TROI Darling, I'm sorry this had to happen. Truly I am. But Steven Miller tracked me down and reminded me of the vows we made. TROI (with difficulty) Mother... I'm having some trouble believing in those vows as I once did... MRS. TROI Deanna! TROI But... but I'll honor them, of course. I'm a Betazoid. Mrs. Troi lovingly touches her daughter's face. MRS. TROI And you may find Wyatt an unusual person. I've sensed remarkable depths in him. Troi lifts her rose INTO VIEW and sniffs it. It's now turned a pale purple. 29 INT. MAIN BRIDGE (OPTICAL) Worf and Geordi are at Ops and Conn respectively, Riker and Picard sit in the Command area, Data at Science One. GEORDI Message coming in from Haven, Sir. PICARD On screen. A handsome, raven-haired woman named VALEDA INNIS fills the viewscreen, wearing a sheer, silky kimono-like garment that embodies the pleasure of the world she governs. VALEDA I'm Valeda Innis, First Electorine of Haven. Captain Picard? STAR TREK: "Haven" - 7/13/87 - ACT TWO 19. 29 CONTINUED: PICARD I'm Picard. VALEDA (slight bow) Your presence honors us. And your timing is fortuitous, Captain. PICARD How so? VALEDA An incoming vessel has bypassed our stargate, violating our law. It has refused all attempts at communication. PICARD Are you saying you believe it to be hostile? VALEDA Failure to communicate is inherently hostile. (pause) We have no defensive capabilities here and our treaty specifies your obligations in that regard. PICARD Agreed. But let's hope it doesn't become a defense matter. VALEDA Of course, Captain. But I'm very happy we can count on you. 30 INT. WYATT'S QUARTERS Wyatt is resting on his bed -- listening to MUSIC. He hears A SOFT CHIME, telling him someone's at the door. (There are some renderings or paintings unpacked in a room corner.) WYATT Come in. Troi ENTERS. Wyatt is surprised but pleased to see her. There's an awkward silence -- each realizes they'll be spending the rest of their lives with the stranger standing across from them. STAR TREK: "Haven" - 7/13/87 - ACT TWO 20. 30 CONTINUED: TROI I wanted to apologize for my mother's behavior. I'm certain she was hard to bear on the trip over. WYATT Your mother's honest -- I respect that. TROI Yes, but she never lets up. WYATT (grins) I'll admit, her honesty is a bit persistent. TROI (nods) I've never heard it described better. But it is a Betazoid trait. (smiles) I'll try to be only half as annoying. They smile at each other. Then: WYATT Let's see... what can I tell you about me? I'm a medical doctor, for whatever that's worth. TROI "Doctor?" Where? How? WYATT If you're picking up my thoughts, you'd know. Can't you do that at all? Troi concentrates on Wyatt, for a moment, then TROI Yes... This could be what mother felt about you. I believe we could read each other eventually. WYATT Can I take that as a compliment? STAR TREK: "Haven" - 7/13/87 - ACT TWO 21. 30 CONTINUED: (2) TROI (smiles) Absolutely. I've only felt this with... well, with someone who's on this ship. WYATT Oh? Do I have competition? TROI No. All he wants is to captain a starship. WYATT What I want is to... well, to do another kind of brave and noble thing... which you may find prosaic. What I want is to cure people. TROI Well, since I am a practicing psychologist, maybe we can work in concert. We are going to be together a long time. His smile fades. He looks Troi in the eyes. WYATT Yes. That's the point of marriage, I suppose. TROI I really thought you'd tell me you were an artist. 31 OMITTED 32 EMPHASIZING PAINTING Troi has indicated the renderings that lie unpacked in a corner of the room. Each is a portrait of a STRIKINGLY BEAUTIFUL YOUNG WOMAN. They have been drawn over several years and show development from girl to woman. There is a compelling intensity to the work. TROI (continuing) I just felt your mind very much on those. And they are your work, aren't they? STAR TREK: "Haven" - 7/13/87 - ACT TWO 22. 32 CONTINUED: WYATT Yes. (faint smile) And I can see it'll be very hard to keep secrets from you. Troi begins to sense the surprising truth. She indicates the pictures. TROI This is why you were surprised when you first saw me. (indicating) This woman... you thought that I would be this woman. She looks from Wyatt to portraits and back again. Wyatt touches one of the renderings. WYATT (with difficulty) I've seen this face since I was a boy. When I closed my eyes at night, I could hear her whispering my name. (pause) Knowing you were Betazoid, I assumed it was you, projecting yourself into my mind. Wyatt struggles with his confused feelings. Troi puts her hand on his shoulder, sincere. TROI I'm sorry I'm not what you hoped for... WYATT No. Please don't mistake a childish fantasy for disappointment. You're so beautiful, I-- I feel honored. It is clear they've begun to like each other... but also that they both feel more or less trapped by the agreement their parents have made. Troi looks back at the drawings. TROI You have no idea who she is? WYATT No. And it really doesn't matter now. STAR TREK: "Haven" - 7/13/87 - ACT TWO 23. 32 CONTINUED: (2) They smile at each other WHILE CAMERA ANGLES TO INCLUDE, beyond them, the dream woman, her eyes warm and patient, silently waiting. 33 EXT. SPACE (OPTICAL) The Enterprise in a flyby as it circles Haven. PICARD (V.O.) Captain's personal log. I trust my concern over the problems of ship's Counselor Troi are not based merely on the fact of losing a highly valuable crew member. Actually... 33A INT. MAIN BRIDGE - CLOSE ON PICARD PICARD (V.O.) (continuing) ... it seems to me that she has become trapped by a custom of her home world which the facts of the twenty-fourth century have made unwise and unworkable. I wish I could intervene. DATA (V.O.) On the viewer, Captain... 34 WIDER ANGLE (OPTICAL) Riker beside Picard in Command Area. Geordi and Worf in the front stations with Data at Science and Tasha at Security in upper level. All are turning toward the viewscreen where a tiny bright object is moving across the starfield. DATA Unidentified vessel. Traveling sub-warp speed, bearing two-three- five, mark seven. PICARD Sub-warp? It's several hours away then? (to Worf) Let's take a look at it. Enlarge to maximum. STAR TREK: "Haven" - 7/13/87 - ACT TWO 24. 34 CONTINUED: WORF Increasing magnification, sir. ON SCREEN, a small IMAGE of a ship of strange, unearthly design. Its center is a shiny globe. Dozens of spike-like structures jut out of it, tumbling end over end as the vessel moves along. Though clearly alien, there is a pleasing aesthetic quality to the ship, which gives off a soft, violet glow. 35 EMPHASIZING DATA Intently curious and puzzled by what he's just seen, he turns to his console and begins calling up information rapidly. 36 ANGLE ON COMMAND AREA A deeply concerned Picard. PICARD Mister Data! Am I seeing the trouble I believe is there? Data looks up from his viewer. DATA If you mean a Tarellian vessel, you are, sir. Riker is startled by this information. RIKER I thought the Tarellians were finished! What are the poor devils doing here? PICARD Doctor Crusher to the Bridge, urgent! (to Riker) There's no way I'll permit them to destroy us. And the treaty here forces us to protect this world too. FADE OUT. END OF ACT TWO STAR TREK: "Haven" - 7/13/87 - ACT THREE 25. ACT THREE FADE IN: 37 EXT. SPACE (OPTICAL) Enterprise in orbit around Haven. PICARD (V.O.) Captain's log, supplemental. It has been believed the Tarellian race was extinct, an assumption contradicted now by the sight of one of their vessels... 38 INT. CONFERENCE ROOM (OPTICAL) Picard, Riker, Beverly, Geordi, Tasha and Troi are seated around the table with Data at the front viewer. INTERCUT this with viewer as necessary. PICARD (V.O.) (continuing) ... approaching Haven. RIKER The fact it is traveling at its present velocity suggests an answer. GEORDI A damaged vessel, sir? That could explain it. RIKER (nods) If it were unable to reach warp speed, it would have taken all these years to get here. PICARD (nods) Continue with the briefing, Mister Data. STAR TREK: "Haven" - 7/13/87 - ACT THREE 26. 38 CONTINUED: Data touches a control and a six planet solar system chart appears on the viewer, the second of the six planets enlarges to show two island land masses. Then, as Data continues, that IMAGE will become alive with FLASHING TECHNICAL INFORMATION such as gravity, atmosphere, planet dimensions, mineral composition, temperature details, etc. DATA Class M world, much like your Earth world, very similar humanoid life form, which faced the unfortunate old story of their hatreds outrunning their intelligence. PICARD Hostilites between the two land masses? DATA (nods) Ending with one of them... it doesn't really matter which... unleashing a deadly biological weapon on the other. BEVERLY (glumly) And naturally the other also became infected in the end... (shaking head) It makes one question the intelligence of humanoid forms. PICARD Are you acquainted with the facts of the infection, Doctor? BEVERLY (nods) They had reached Earth's late-twentieth century, early twenty-first century level. Which was all that's needed if you're a damned fool. A highly deadly, extra-infectious virus... which at that modest level of knowledge, is not that difficult to grow. STAR TREK: "Haven" - 7/13/87 - ACT THREE 27. 38 CONTINUED: (2) TASHA (nods) We learned the rest of the story in security training. Some Tarellians made it to other worlds only to die along with the populations they infected. GEORDI (to Picard) It's pretty well covered in Academy training now, Captain. (to the others) Many of them tried to avoid other inhabited worlds as they escaped... only to be hunted down and destroyed anyway. PICARD Unfortunately, we had believed the last Tarellian vessel was destroyed eight years ago by the Alcyones. (to Data) Exactly when will they reach Haven? DATA Exactly thirteen hours, nine minutes, twenty-one... PICARD (interrupting; to all) Which will create a very difficult problem for the Enterprise at that time. Our treaty here requires us to protect Haven from alien threats ... and a plague ship certainly qualifies as that. But Federation policy requires us to assist life forms in need ... which qualifies the Tarellians too. I'll want you to help me find some answers by then. Picard pauses, the assembled bridge crew sitting concerned. Then: STAR TREK: "Haven" - 7/13/87 - ACT THREE 28. 38 CONTINUED: (3) PICARD (continuing) All of which gives ample time for your second assignment. Or you may prefer it on a volunteer basis. (beat; then smiles to Troi) The pre-joining dinner of Counselor Deanna Troi will proceed as planned. 39 OMITTED 40 INT. FORMAL DINING AREA The dinner party is in progress, attended by the Bridge Officers, the Millers, Mrs. Troi and Mr. Homn, all of whom are standing, chatting, having a drink as the dinner table is made finally ready. The officers wear ceremonial dress. Mrs. Troi wears a length of vine which seems at this time to be merely decorative. Mr. Homn stands erect by himself at a small table to one side. There are a dozen or so tall, fluted glasses on the table, along with a small bell suspended from a unique, arched crescent. Homn watches the goings-on like a silent sentinel. 41 ANGLE ON PICARD approached by Mr. and Mrs. Miller. VICTORIA We've talked it over, Captain. We'd like you to perform the ceremony. PICARD I'd be honored, Mrs. Miller. Mrs. Troi has overheard. MRS. TROI Impossible. The captain is not practiced in the ways of Betazed joining. VICTORIA This will be a traditional Earth ceremony! STAR TREK: "Haven" - 7/13/87 - ACT THREE 29. 41 CONTINUED: MRS. TROI I'm sorry, but it proceeds out of a Betazed bonding. VICTORIA And I am sorry, Lwaxana, but my family and I are living on Earth now... MRS. TROI So that's why you want that barbaric ritual. (to Picard) Terrible, Captain, to see a woman go downhill like this... TROI Mother! VICTORIA Downhill?! MRS. TROI The human ritual is out of the question! 42 ANGLE ON DATA Enthralled by the latest flare-up. 43 BACK TO SHOT VICTORIA Who are you to tell us what's out of the question? MRS. TROI (cool, superior) Your ignorance is astonishing. I am Lwaxana Troi: Daughter of The Fifth House, Holder of the Sacred Chalice of Rixx, Heir to the Holy Rings of Betazed. (pause; insultingly) Who are you? Victoria, infuriated, turns to Steven for support. Before Steven can approach him, Picard steps in. STAR TREK: "Haven" - 7/13/87 - ACT THREE 30. 43 CONTINUED: PICARD Excuse me, everyone, but dinner is served... (to the mothers; smiling) ... and by Starfleet tradition, all disputes and disagreements are thereby resolved. VICTORIA (moving off) In who's favor? PICARD The captain's. MRS. TROI That's not what you're thinking. PICARD Captains are not required to think. Picard puts his arm out for Mrs. Troi, who lets him escort her to her chair, where Wyatt waits to pull it out for her. Riker watches Troi, trying to be pleasant while helping seat Mrs. Miller. 44 WIDE ANGLE Everyone is seated around the table. Stewards are busy serving food. 45 EMPASIZING VICTORIA still seething. 46 EMPHASIZING MRS. TROI Adjusting her decorative vine, throwing a look toward Victoria 47 ANGLE ON PICARD PICARD (raising glass) A toast. To the young couple and their families. May this union be a happy and productive one. STAR TREK: "Haven" - 7/13/87 - ACT THREE 31. 47 CONTINUED: Everyone drinks to this. 48 OMITTED 48A CLOSE ON MRS. TROI Adjusting her decorative vine, but she seems to be doing it in an "affectionate" way. Now, unnoticed by others, she has picked up a crumb of food from the table, CAMERA MOVING IN CLOSER as she offers it to the end of the vine which seems to be "nibbling" at it. 49 ANGLE ON BEVERLY AND MR. HOMN She looks on in wonder as Homn, now seated, downs an astonishing quantity of liquid, drinking one glass after another, without stopping, each with a different color. 50 ANGLE ON WYATT AND PICARD WYATT Is it true, Captain -- that there's a Tarellian ship, headed for Haven? PICARD Yes, it's true. Wyatt is puzzled about this. 51 ANGLE ON HOMN still putting away a steady stream of fluids. 52 ANGLE TO INCLUDE WYATT AND OTHERS WYATT That's amazing! I've read everything I could about them. Biological virus analysis was a favorite subject at medical school. BEVERLY In which case, I'd very much like to meet with you, sir. I'm pleased to have a medical colleague aboard. STAR TREK: "Haven" - 7/13/87 - ACT THREE 32. 52 CONTINUED: A BELL RINGS OUT. It's a small bell, but it gives off a shrill RING. Mr. Homn hits it after every bite Mrs. Troi takes. WYATT (distracted by the bell) Yes, ma'am... Uh, Doctor? Would it be possible to prepare some medical supplies, geared toward the Tarellian's probable needs? We could beam it over without any fear of infection. PICARD (to Beverly) What do you think, Doctor? The bell RINGS again... It's becoming highly distractive. BEVERLY I think it's a considerate idea. (to Wyatt) Sickbay's at your disposal, Doctor. WYATT Thank you. Homn RINGS the bell again as Mrs. Troi takes another bite. VICTORIA (to Homn) Must you do that? MRS. TROI (never looking up from food) As you well know, it is the Betazed way of giving thanks for the food we eat. VICTORIA (amused) You? Giving thanks? Besides, you never did this before. MRS. TROI I do it now. Unlike some people, I am in growth. STAR TREK: "Haven" - 7/13/87 - ACT THREE 33. 52 CONTINUED: (2) As if to prove her point, she takes a big bite -- Homn RINGS the bell accordingly. 52A CLOSER ON MRS. TROI As she "adjusts" her vine, loosening it and CAMERA MOVES IN TO REVEAL the "vine" now beginning to move toward where Victoria sits next to Mrs. Troi. CAMERA PANS IT inching along somewhat like a caterpillar until Victoria's ARM COMES INTO VIEW. 52B TWO SHOT OF MRS. TROI AND VICTORIA as Mrs. Troi turns to Victoria, watching the "vine" move toward Victoria's arm. MRS. TROI (continuing) Victoria, I've forgotten whether you enjoy pets or not. Mrs. Troi has taken another bite, the bell RINGS again, and Victoria gives Mrs. Troi only a quick annoyed glance. VICTORIA Love them, of course. 52C INSERT SHOT The "vine" reaching Victoria's arm, beginning to wrap itself around her wrist. 52D BACK TO SHOT Victoria becomes slowly aware of something tightening on her wrist, looks down, SCREAMS. Mrs. Troi, begins taking her "vine" back. MRS. TROI Gently... gently! (retrieves vine) I thought you said you enjoyed pets. 53 EMPHASIZING RIKER Watches Mrs. Troi gather in her "vine," then goes back to eating listlessly. It's clear he's unhappy. He looks up to see Troi gazing at him from across the table. They lock eyes. They each have so much to say, and so little time. And this is not the place. He decides to stand. STAR TREK: "Haven" - 7/13/87 - ACT THREE 34. 54 WIDE ANGLE Riker turning to the Captain. RIKER Captain... If I may be excused... (lamely) ... to spend some time considering the Tarellian situation... PICARD Of course. RIKER (rises; slight bow) Ladies and Gentlemen. He EXITS. Mrs. Troi turns to Victoria. MRS. TROI (quietly) Why didn't he mention you? DATA Mrs. Troi, I'm very interested in the Betazed ceremony you mentioned. Could you tell us more? 55 CLOSE ON TROI She cringes. 56 BACK TO FULL SHOT MRS. TROI I'd be delighted, Commander. It is an ancient ceremony, widely regarded as the most beautiful in the universe. She takes a tiny bite. Homn hits the bell VERY LIGHTLY. MRS. TROI (continuing) After the young couple remove their clothing -- TASHA The Bride and Groom go naked?! MRS. TROI No. You misunderstand. STAR TREK: "Haven" - 7/13/87 - ACT THREE 35. 56 CONTINUED: Wyatt looks vastly relieved. MRS. TROI (continuing) All guests must go unclothed. This honors the act of love being celebrated... 57 ANGLE ON VICTORIA nearly choking on her food. 58 ANGLE ON STEVEN He smiles slightly -- thinking about it. 59 FULL SHOT MRS. TROI (continuing; to Victoria) Don't worry too much, dear. Your body's not that bad. Picard is bemused; Victoria is beside herself, so angry and embarrassed that she can't even spit out the words. MRS. TROI (continuing) Besides, your husband quite likes the idea of seeing me unclothed. Victoria jerks her head toward Steven who quickly puts his drink down and tries to look innocent, as: VICTORIA Steven!! MRS. TROI You did know he's attracted to me, didn't you? STEVEN Untrue! I don't.... Not really... TROI (rising; angrily) Stop it, all of you -- (to her mother) Especially you! STAR TREK: "Haven" - 7/13/87 - ACT THREE 36. 59 CONTINUED: MRS. TROI (turning to Picard) Captain, as you requested, I have carefully avoided disagreements during this. But did you wish me to ignore what my senses tell me? Then Mrs. Troi shrugs and takes a bite of food. Homn strikes the BELL -- and Troi comes to her feet, knocks it off the table with the back of her hand and marches toward the door and is OUT before anyone can say anything. 60 CLOSE ON HOMN Laughing to himself, he then happily kills another glassful. 61 WIDE ANGLE A dark cloud hangs over the gathering. After a few moments of petrified silence, Data breaks the ice. DATA (pleasant; to Parents) Could you please continue your bickering? I find it intriguing. 62 OMITTED FADE OUT: END OF ACT THREE STAR TREK: "Haven" - 7/13/87 - ACT FOUR 37. ACT FOUR FADE IN: 63 INT. HOLODECK -- DESERT LANDSCAPE (DUSK) (OPTICAL) His back to us, Riker stands in the desert, silhouetted against the horizon. This is a lonely, lifeless place -- beautiful but barren. A place picked to match a mood. Troi ENTERS SHOT, coming in through the archway as we PULL BACK to SEE the desert again. If Riker hears her coming, he doesn't turn around. TROI Why did you order up a desert? Riker gives her a look, then stares off into the distance. RIKER It matches my mood. Empty. 63A CLOSER SHOT Troi concentrating on him, then nods. TROI Yes. It does. RIKER I lost you once before, and now I've lost you again. TROI Are you certain exactly who lost who, Imzadi? RIKER Don't use that word now, Deanna... TROI It means 'my beloved.' RIKER It also suggests the same feeling will go on ... tomorrow, and tomorrow... TROI (nods) It suggests a kind of bonding ... an agreement... Riker sits silently. After a long moment of waiting: STAR TREK: "Haven" - 7/13/87 - ACT FOUR 38. 63A CONTINUED: TROI (continuing) As I said ... I understand. RIKER Do you? Really? (turns; moves close) Imzadi... yes, you are my beloved. Today. But I can't lie to you and say I'm certain about tomorrow ... and tomorrow ... I can't guarantee it will be something you can share. (moves close to a kiss) Because you are my Imzadi, I refuse to promise you a future I can't yet see. TROI How... would an Earth woman react to that, Bill? RIKER To an Earth woman, I'd lie. (faint smile) But you'd know it if I did. WYATT (V.O.) Hello you two! 63B WIDER ANGLE They turn, see Wyatt MAKING HIS WAY IN from the Holodeck entrance. Riker gets to his feet. RIKER Next! Wyatt moves in and Riker CROSSES OUT OF SHOT toward the Holodeck entrance. 64 ON WYATT Head cocked, spinning around joyously -- taking in the wonders of the Holodeck. By the time he turns in a full circle, Riker is gone. WYATT (excited) This is incredible. I've heard about this, but I never imagined... STAR TREK: "Haven" - 7/13/87 - ACT FOUR 39. 64 CONTINUED: Troi walks down to meet him. WYATT (continuing) I respected what you did tonight... TROI I lost my temper. WYATT It worked. You shamed them into compromise. After you left it really calmed down. (he laughs) The Joining will be half-Betazed, half-Old Earth. The Captain'll do the ceremony and Mister Homn will be my best man. TROI And we'll take our clothes half off? Wyatt laughs at this. It's clear he very much likes Deanna. WYATT Some of us all. You do... I do... Your mother, my father. (smiles) But not my mother. TROI How did you manage that? WYATT I didn't. Your mother did. They laugh together. She's beginning to really like Wyatt too. WYATT (continuing) And I just caught my father, practicing naked in front of his mirror. He imitates his father preening, holding in his belly and looking at himself from every side. They LAUGH. Troi sits on a small hillock, closes her eyes, stretches and lies back. Wyatt sits beside her, looking at her fondly. STAR TREK: "Haven" - 7/13/87 - ACT FOUR 40. 64 CONTINUED: (2) WYATT And so... A question I should have asked before. (takes her shoulders; turns her to him) Deanna... do you really want to go through with this? TROI (beat) Yes. I want to. WYATT I'm a very lucky man. He kisses her. Tentatively at first, gently. Then she begins to kiss back; he reacts to this and Deanna too. 65 EXT. SPACE (OPTICAL) The Tarellian ship cruising toward the orbiting Enterprise. PICARD Captain's log, supplemental. All attempts at warning off the Tarellian ship have failed. They still refuse to communicate and I am growing concerned. 66 INT. MAIN BRIDGE (OPTICAL) All except Troi at proper stations: Riker and Picard in the Command Area, Geordi and Data at the Conn and Ops, Tasha and Worf at Tactical and Weapons station. 67 CLOSER ON REGULARS (OPTICAL) INTERCUT this with viewer as necessary. PICARD How can you be certain they're receiving us? DATA Because our sensors are showing a responder echo, sir, on the frequency they once used. GEORDI Message coming in from Haven. STAR TREK: "Haven" - 7/13/87 - ACT FOUR 41. 67 CONTINUED: PICARD Viewer on. VALEDA (on screen) Captain, the plague ship is approaching transport range. PICARD We're aware of that, Electorine. VALEDA You realize they can turn this lovely world of ours into a graveyard? Please take action, now, before it's too late. RIKER We'll take action in a few moments. VALEDA Please... please destroy them now! PICARD We will not fire on them, Electorine. TASHA I'm certain I could disable their ship with a phaser burst, Captain. PICARD And then? He gets no answer. 68 ANGLE ON VIEWSCREEN (OPTICAL) The Tarellian ship -- growing larger and larger. 69 INT. SICKBAY (OPTICAL) Wyatt is gathering medical supplies for the Tarellians: packets and jars of pills go into boxes, hypo-sprays are packed, etc. Along with Beverly, he spends half his time looking at her VIEWSCREEN where WE CAN SEE the Tarellian ship drawing nearer. WYATT Almost complete, Doctor. STAR TREK: "Haven" - 7/13/87 - ACT FOUR 42. 69 CONTINUED: BEVERLY You show a remarkable knowledge of viral immunology, Wyatt. Wyatt indicates the viewscreen. WYATT It's a striking design, don't you think? Beverly takes a look at the Tarellian ship. WYATT (continuing) They built it underwater. At a base, three miles below sea-level. BEVERLY Oh? How did you know that? Wyatt stops what he's doing, concerned, confused, puzzled at what he said. Then he forces himself to snap out of it, turning his attention back to the supplies. WYATT I don't know... I must have heard it somewhere. 70 ANGLE ON BEVERLY wondering about his strange statement. 71 INT. MAIN BRIDGE DATA They're coming within transporter range, sir. PICARD Can't delay any longer, then. Ready the tractor beam, Lieutenant Yar. Target ship and activate on my command. Tasha quickly touches the proper controls on her console. TASHA Tractor beam ready. STAR TREK: "Haven" - 7/13/87 - ACT FOUR 43. 71 CONTINUED: RIKER Let's hope it buys some communication. PICARD Engage. Tasha engages. 72 EXT. SPACE (OPTICAL) Enterprise in BACKGROUND and in the FOREGROUND the Tarellian ship is engulfed by the briefly appearing BEAM. Then the alien vessel slows. 73 INT. MAIN BRIDGE As the Bridge shudders and protests ever so slightly. TASHA Got them, sir... 73A EXT. SPACE (OPTICAL) REPEAT LAST SHOT with the Tarellian ship slowing to a stop. 73B INT. MAIN BRIDGE (OPTICAL) The Tarellian vessel on the viewer, Picard waiting. And waiting. Then he turns toward Worf who is at Science Station. PICARD Do we have them securely, Worf? Can they beam out to the planet? WORF Negative, sir. They can't leave that ship. Picard turns toward Geordi who checks his own instruments. GEORDI I know they're receiving us, sir. And at this distance they could reply with their running lights if necessary. STAR TREK: "Haven" - 7/13/87 - ACT FOUR 44. 73B CONTINUED: DATA Unless they have all died. Their ship could have been brought in by automation. RIKER (indicating) Captain! The viewer... ! All turn in that direction. 73C ANGLE ON MAIN VIEWER The Tarellian ship IMAGE IS FADING, being replaced slowly by INDISTINCT SHAPES WHICH ARE BECOMING A HUMAN FACE. 73D ANGLE ON BRIDGE CREW reacting, beginning to realize that life does exist on the alien vessel. 73E ANGLE ON MAIN VIEWER The IMAGE resolving slowly in the woman we've seen in Wyatt's painting. 73F ANGLE EMPHASIZING TROI coming to her feet. TROI It's the woman in Wyatt's painting! 74 thru OMITTED 75 FADE OUT: END OF ACT FOUR STAR TREK: "Haven" - 7/13/87 - ACT FIVE 45. ACT FIVE FADE IN: 76 EXT. SPACE - ENTERPRISE AND TARELLIAN VESSEL (OPTICAL) Fairly close together now in orbit of Haven. PICARD'S (V.O.) Captain's log, Stardate 41294.7 orbiting Haven with the Tarellian vessel locked in our tractor beam. Question: What strange combination... 77 INT. MAIN BRIDGE - PRINCIPALS AND MAIN VIEWER (OPTICAL) Everyone stunned by this seemingly impossible occurance. PICARD'S (V.O.) (continuing) ... of circumstances has caused a woman out of someone's imagination to appear on the plague ship? GEORDI Enterprise to Tarellian vessel, are you receiving us? ON THE VIEWER, the IMAGE of the young woman whom we'll know as ARIANA, is gently moved aside by a distinguished looking older man whom we'll know as WRENN. He looks out from the viewer, speaks gently: WRENN My name is Wrenn... and before I inquire why you've trapped us here, is there one aboard your vessel named Wyatt? PICARD Your business is with me, sir. I am Captain Picard, commanding this starship. The Turbolift door OPENS, Wyatt and Beverly HURRY ONTO THE BRIDGE. He carries one of his paintings of the woman being seen on the viewer and exhibits it. WYATT Captain, I don't understand... STAR TREK: "Haven" - 7/13/87 - ACT FIVE 46. 77 CONTINUED: Wrenn appears as startled by Wyatt's appearance. WRENN I can't believe this! Ariana was right! (moving to the side) He is there, daughter! Ariana's IMAGE joins Wrenn on the viewer screen. ARIANA Wyatt, you've come to us. Just as you promised. Troi rises, hurries to Wyatt who speaks low-voiced. WYATT What's happening? Except for dream images, I've never seen her. TROI I'm not sure but perhaps mother would... PICARD (interrupting; to Wrenn) Our first order of business, sir, is with the threat your vessel poses to the planet below. If you still carry the infection which destroyed your world... WRENN Oh, we still carry it, Captain. My daughter, I, all eight of us. PICARD Eight? WRENN (indicates) All of us that are left, Captain. VIEWER IMAGE WIDENS TO REVEAL Ariana and six others. WRENN (continuing) Most of the rest passed on during the years it took to reach Haven. PICARD Sir... if you've come here because of the legend about planet Haven miraculously healing the sick... STAR TREK: "Haven" - 7/13/87 - ACT FIVE 47. 77 CONTINUED: (2) WRENN No, no. We've learned to face the truth about such things. But Haven is a remarkably lovely and pleasant place, is it not? All we want is a resting place until the last of us are gone. Picard clearly feels the hurt of what he is going to have to say. It is in his voice: PICARD I'm... sorry, but circumstances make it impossible for us to allow you to beam down to Haven. WRENN We do not ask to make contact with those living below. All we ask is to be on the edge of some sea, some unpopulated island or faraway peninsula... PICARD This is not our planet, sir. I'll be happy to present your needs to those who govern this world... WRENN Present the fact we intend to die here, Captain. And if we die while caged by your tractor beam, so be it. Wrenn touches a control on his vessel, the viewscreen IMAGE FADES. 77A INT. MRS. TROI'S QUARTERS She is trying on an exotic outfit we haven't seen. There's a CHIME from the entry and Wyatt ENTERS. MRS. TROI Isn't this combination exciting? But I can't wear it, of course, since your father would be devastated if I weren't naked. WYATT Mrs. Troi, may I talk to you about something serious? STAR TREK: "Haven" - 7/13/87 - ACT FIVE 48. 77A CONTINUED: MRS. TROI I am always serious, dear boy. Only my pleasant nature makes it appear otherwise. She continues fluttering with the jewelry decorating her outfit. WYATT Please, Mrs. Troi. She turns, eyes him for a moment, then: MRS. TROI Yes, that was puzzling. A woman out of another place who insists she knows you. WYATT And... MRS. TROI (interrupts, nodding) And whom you've dreamed of for all these years. WYATT And I hoped that with you handling thoughts the way you do... MRS. TROI Fascinating, Wyatt, how easily your thoughts come through. I wonder if it is because you were raised on Betazed? (smiles) Well, no matter, I can see you were wrong for my daughter anyway. WYATT Ma'am? MRS. TROI The answer to the puzzle of Ariana and you is too simple for most humans to understand. WYATT Too simple? STAR TREK: "Haven" - 7/13/87 - ACT FIVE 49. 77A CONTINUED: (2) MRS. TROI Of course. It's something they all know instinctively but go to great effort to reject or to build complicated superstitions about it. All life, Wyatt, all consciousness, wherever or whenever it occurs... is indissolvably bound together. Indeed, it is all part of the same thing. WYATT (startled; considers it) Yes! I have wondered if something like that... MRS. TROI (carrying on his thought) ... weren't so. And no doubt so has Ariana, which helped the two of you to make contact. (touching neck jewelry) Shall I wear the light or deep ruby stones? Which would be best for me, naked? But Wyatt's mind is elsewhere. He rises, heads for the door. MRS. TROI (continuing) Wyatt, don't puzzle on it so much! It was just a simple thought! But Wyatt EXITS, unhearing. 78 thru OMITTED 79 80 INT. SICKBAY Beverly notices Wyatt's disconcerting look. BEVERLY Wyatt, are you feeling all right? Wyatt nods weakly. STAR TREK: "Haven" - 7/13/87 - ACT FIVE 50. 80 CONTINUED: WYATT The supplies are ready. I'll take them to the transporter room. BEVERLY I'll notify the captain they're ready. Wyatt turns to the supplies -- then as Beverly's back is turned, he takes a spray-hypo from a medical shelf, secretes it as he EXITS. 81 INT. FORMAL DINING AREA The room used for the dinner has been modified to accommodate the rehearsal. Troi is fidgeting with an unusual, flowing wedding dress. Mr. Homn drinks vials of bright green liquid. 82 ANGLE ON WYATT He ENTERS, dazed but determined. 83 ANGLE ON THE MILLERS Steven, in a bathrobe, is turned sideways, sucking in his stomach as he checks himself out in the mirror. VICTORIA (indicates Steven) Look at your father, Wyatt. He just can't wait to strip off his clothes in that barbaric ceremony. STEVEN (overhearing) We had to compromise. As usual, I'm making the sacrifice. Wyatt gives his parents a long look, as if trying to memorize the scene. Then he turns and walks towards Troi. Victoria hurries to undo something Mrs. Troi just did. 84 CLOSE ON TROI She is fidgeting with her special dress. WYATT (V.O.) You look beautiful. STAR TREK: "Haven" - 7/13/87 - ACT FIVE 51. 84 CONTINUED: Troi looks up and smiles. PULL BACK to FULL SHOT as Troi immediately senses the turmoil raging within Wyatt. WYATT But you looked best of all in the desert on the Holodeck. (moves in) When you did this... He kisses her. She senses something, looks carefully as he takes a long look around the room. Then he's OUT the door. HOLD on Troi. 85 INT. TRANSPORTER ROOM The Chief is alone at the console as the door slides open and SOMEONE ENTERS. TRANSPORTER CHIEF You can put the supplies on the pad. (points; looks down) Doctor Crusher had me set the coordinates. All we need is the captain's order -- Wyatt steps INTO SCENE. The spray-hypo HISSES as it touches the Transporter Chief. He slumps to the ground, unconscious. 86 INT. MAIN BRIDGE Riker leans over and speaks to Picard, who is eyeing the screen glumly. GEORDI Captain! Someone's transporting to the Tarellian ship. PICARD Override! GEORDI (after pause) I can't sir. It's too late. 86A ANGLE ON VIEWER (OPTICAL) The Tarellian ship. 87 OMITTED STAR TREK: "Haven" - 7/13/87 - ACT FIVE 52. 88 INT. TARELLIAN SHIP (OPTICAL) Wyatt BEAMS INTO a small, curved-wall room on the spherical Tarellian ship, the supplies alongside him. He is alone. The ship is quiet, except for THE HUM of the engines fighting the tractor beam. He moves forward, looking around. 89 WYATT'S POV The room is minimally furnished, with an open door to what seems like a bridge, navigational equipment indicated beyond. But it's the walls that are mesmerizing. PORTRAITS OF WYATT, RANGING FROM BOY TO MAN, are everywhere. He moves about the empty room in astonishment, his heart pounding wildly. Suddenly he senses something behind him, and spins to see FIVE TARELLIANS standing in the doorway. WRENN Hello, Wyatt. We always thought you were a dream. WYATT You're not surprised. Did you know I'd beam over? WRENN Once we saw you were real, we knew. You are a doctor? WYATT Yes. (indicates) I've brought medicines and supplies. I'll do what I can to help. He then moves along the walls, studying the remarkable portraits. ARIANA And I knew you'd be this brave. Ariana steps INTO SCENE. Wyatt's insides churn as she approaches. She's astoundingly beautiful and exactly as he pictured her. They take each other's hands. 90 INT. MAIN BRIDGE The parents and Troi surround Picard, Riker and Data in the Command Area. Mrs. Miller is wildly emotional. STAR TREK: "Haven" - 7/13/87 - ACT FIVE 53. 90 CONTINUED: VICTORIA (to Picard) How could you let this happen? My son, surrounded by those horrible lepers! PICARD Mrs. Miller, if I could have prevented this... VICTORIA Then beam him back! TROI He can never come back, Mrs. Miller. Victoria looks like she is about to faint. Then her attention is drawn to the Bridge Viewer. 91 ANGLE INCLUDING VIEWSCREEN (OPTICAL) as Wyatt, Ariana, and Wrenn APPEAR on screen. WRENN You may turn off your tractor beam, Captain. We will not be going to Haven. VICTORIA Wyatt! WYATT Mother...Father... Forgive me, but I must... I'm going to try to cure these people. ARIANA And Wyatt will do it. I've believed that all along. Wyatt puts his arm around Ariana and speaks with difficulty. WYATT I knew I was coming to Haven to meet my destiny. I thought it was to be with you, Deanna. But it was Ariana who drew me here. I'm sorry. STAR TREK: "Haven" - 7/13/87 - ACT FIVE 54. 91 CONTINUED: TROI Wyatt, I'm happy for you. Ariana, I love you both. MRS. TROI (softly) You've done surprisingly well for a human, Wyatt. TROI Mother... WYATT I take that as a compliment, Deanna. Wyatt smiles; Troi smiles, proud of her mother. 92 ANGLE ON THE MILLERS saddened, but becoming more confident of their son's judgment. 93 BACK TO SHOT WRENN (to Picard) My respects, Captain. PICARD And mine, sir. The Tarellian image begins to fade from the screen. CAMERA MOVES IN on Troi, who stares at the screen long after it's gone black. TROI (whispering) Good-bye. 94 EXT. SPACE (OPTICAL) The Tarellian ship pulls away from Haven -- heading for deep space. 95 INT. TRANSPORTER ROOM Transporter Chief at the controls. The Millers are on the platform. Picard, Beverly, Riker and Troi have come to see them off. STAR TREK: "Haven" - 7/13/87 - ACT FIVE 55. 95 CONTINUED: STEVEN (pleasantly) Keep the chest. You'll have use for it some day. Mrs. Troi ENTERS, followed by Homn carrying her luggage. MRS. TROI Seems such a shame to waste that lovely wedding dress. Perhaps I should stay and be Joined to a new mate. TROI What?? MRS. TROI The captain is highly attracted to me, but he's a little too old. Picard lifts his eyebrows in surprise. MRS. TROI (continuing; to Riker) Perhaps I should choose you. TROI (sharply) He has other obligations, Mother! MRS. TROI -- Very well. It's his loss. Mister Homn! She kisses Troi and abruptly turns to step onto the platform... Homn grabs her bag and turns to the officers. HOMN (deep voice) Thank you for the drinks. The officers are caught off guard by his voice. Homn joins Mrs. Troi on the transporter pad. MRS. TROI TELEPATHIC V. O. Try and remember your heritage, little one. (spoken) You may energize. STAR TREK: "Haven" - 7/13/87 - ACT FIVE 56. 96 ON MRS. TROI AND HOMN (OPTICAL) As the transporter ACTIVATES, she stares at Picard, as if something shocking has just entered her mind. MRS. TROI Captain! Even Xelo never had such thoughts about me. Before Picard reacts, Mrs. Troi and Homn have been BEAMED AWAY. 96A EMPHASIZING PICARD AND TROI He is still at a loss, but Troi is smiling at him. TROI That was meant as a joke, Captain. PICARD But she has claimed to be so completely honest. TROI (nods) Except when a lie is more amusing. Weren't you amused? PICARD (firmly) I was not! 97 INT. MAIN BRIDGE Our regulars all at their stations. PICARD Take us out of here, Mister Riker. RIKER Aye, sir. (to Geordi) Warp two, helm, heading five-seven mark three-one-nine. Riker lays a very happy look upon Troi and she returns it, as: GEORDI Warp two, five-seven mark three-one-nine. RIKER Engage! STAR TREK: "Haven" - 7/13/87 - ACT FIVE 57. 98 EXT. SPACE (OPTICAL) The Enterprise heads out of orbit, then INTO WARP DRIVE. FADE OUT: END OF ACT FIVE THE END STAR TREK: THE NEXT GENERATION "Where None Have Gone Before" #40271-106 Written by Diane Duane & Michael Reaves Directed by Rob Bowman Copyright 1987 Paramount Pictures Corporation. All Rights Reserved. This script is not for publication or reproduction. No one is authorized to dispose of same. If lost or destroyed, please notify the Script Department. REVISED FINAL DRAFT JULY 30, 1987 STAR TREK: "Where None... " -- REV. 7/31/87 -- CAST STAR TREK: THE NEXT GENERATION "Where None Have Gone Before" CAST PICARD TRANSPORTER CHIEF RIKER KOSINSKI DATA ARGYLE TROI ASSISTANT (aka TRAVELER) BEVERLY FIRST CREWMEMBER TASHA MOTHER PICARD WORF WORF GEORDI MALE CREWMEMBER WESLEY FEMALE CREWMEMBER SECOND CREWMEMBER CREWMEMBER STAR TREK: "Where None... " -- 7/30/87 -- SETS STAR TREK: THE NEXT GENERATION "Where None Have Gone Before" SETS INTERIORS EXTERIORS ENTERPRISE USS ENTERPRISE Main Bridge Transporter Room USS FEARLESS Main Engineering Turbolift Corridor Sickbay SEWER -- TUNNEL STAR TREK: "Where None... " -- REV. 8/4/87 -- TEASER STAR TREK: THE NEXT GENERATION "Where None Have Gone Before" TEASER FADE IN: 1 EXT. SPACE - THE ENTERPRISE AND THE FEARLESS (OPTICAL) The two Federation starships come slowly together. Here, next to the smaller vessel, the size of the new Enterprise is breathtaking. PICARD (V.O.) Captain's log, Stardate 41263.1. We have rendezvoused with the USS Fearless from which... 2 INT. MAIN BRIDGE - VARIOUS ANGLES (OPTICAL) which INCLUDE MAIN VIEWER. PICARD is in his Command Chair. COMMANDER RIKER is to his right. COUNSELOR TROI to his left. SECURITY CHIEF LIEUTENANT YAR is at the Tactical Station. Behind her at the Aft Station is LIEUTENANT WORF. LIEUTENANT GEORDI LA FORGE has the Conn, LIEUTENANT COMMANDER DATA is at the Ops Station. PICARD (V.O.) (continuing) ... a Starfleet propulsion expert and his assistant are beaming over to conduct tests on the Enterprise's warp drive engines. Picard consults the viewer at his position, then turns to Riker. PICARD I don't understand your concern, Number One. They're not authorized to make any alterations in our engines. (MORE) STAR TREK: "Where None... " -- REV. 8/4/87 -- TEASER 2. 2 CONTINUED PICARD (Cont'd) (glancing at command viewer) According to Starfleet's message, they will simply test different ways of entering warp speed and different intermix formulas. What's the harm in that? RIKER It's the specs that Kosinski sent us. In my opinion, sir, they're gibberish. PICARD Gibberish? RIKER Mister Data, will you explain? DATA (turns to Picard) Sir, we put Mister Kosinski's specs into the computer and ran a controlled test on them. There was no improvement in engine performance. PICARD (to Riker) Then explain Starfleet's report how the same tests on the USS Ajax... (indicates main viewer) ... and then on the Fearless over there, resulted in a measurable increase in propulsion. RIKER Our engines are new, sir, top condition. The tests on those older ships may have simply straightened out some engine inefficiency. A CALL from the Transporter Room. STAR TREK: "Where None... " -- 7/30/87 -- TEASER 3. 2 CONTINUED (2) TRANSPORTER CHIEF'S COM VOICE Bridge from Transporter Chief. Two from USS Fearless are ready to beam over. PICARD (to Com) Stand by for Commander Riker, Chief. He's on his way. (to Riker) Obviously, something does worry you about these tests. RIKER Yes, sir. And if you don't mind... (stands; indicates) ... I'll ask Counselor Troi to look these visitors over. Picard nods and Riker CROSSES with Troi toward the turbolift. 3 INT. TRANSPORTER ROOM (OPTICAL) As TRANSPORTER EFFECT MATERIALIZES the Visitors. KOSINSKI has the look of someone operating at top performance. His ASSISTANT, a humanoid alien, is small, physically non-threatening, with a way of allowing himself to blend into the background in a shy, good-natured way. Kosinski dominates the room. He's obsessed with himself and what he does. His manner is arrogant, his demeanor authoritarian; he pulls every eye toward him. Riker is with LT. COMMANDER ARGYLE, chief engineer, a rough-edged, hearty man for whom the Enterprise engines are the alpha and omega of his existence. Counselor Troi holds back, observing. RIKER Welcome aboard, Mister Kosinski. I'm the first officer, Commander William Riker. This is... KOSINSKI Where is the captain, please? RIKER (trying to be pleasant) He is engaged in other duties, sir... STAR TREK: "Where None... " -- 7/30/87 -- TEASER 4. 3 CONTINUED KOSINSKI A ship's engines should be a concern of the ship's captain... RIKER They are, sir. Which is why they make their first officers directly responsible for engine condition and performance. (indicating Argyle) Guided, of course, by one of our chief engineers, Lieutenant Commander Argyle in this case. ARGYLE (to Kosinski) A pleasure, sir. I appreciated receiving the advance specs... KOSINSKI On which you have no end of questions? ARGYLE (a beat) Aye, I have. RIKER (to assistant) And you, sir, are listed as...as... ASSISTANT (gentle voiced) As Mister Kosinski's assistant. My actual name is unpronounceable by humans... RIKER From Tau Alpha C. That's very distant... KOSINSKI ... All approved and described in the Starfleet communications. Now... (heads for door) ... I'd like to set up in the Engine Room immediately... Kosinski begins to EXIT, FOLLOWED by his assistant. STAR TREK: "Where None... " -- 7/30/87 -- TEASER 5. 3 CONTINUED (2) RIKER Our chief engineer will show you to his Engine Room. KOSINSKI No need -- I know my way around starships... But Lt. Commander Argyle already joins him and, despite Kosinski's obvious annoyance, leads the way. 4 ANGLE ON RIKER AND TROI as they watch Kosinski leave. RIKER One thing Kosinski isn't hiding. (at Troi's look) A bad disposition. TROI (nods) Agreed... Also, he's arrogant, overbearing, self-important. (non-critical tone) And very sure of himself and his ability. RIKER (considers this; then) And the other one -- his assistant? TROI He's the puzzle. (takes a minute to phrase it) With most life forms I feel something. I may not be able to interpret or understand it, but I feel something, if only a presence. With him -- nothing. Empty space. It was as though he isn't even here. (seeks words for it) ... Something about this concerns me. I don't know what, I can't point out a reason... yet. STAR TREK: "Where None... " -- 7/30/87 -- TEASER 6. 4 CONTINUED RIKER Stay concerned. Please! The safety of the Enterprise may be entrusted to those two! FADE OUT. END OF TEASER STAR TREK: "Where None... " -- 7/30/87 -- ACT ONE 7. ACT ONE FADE IN: 5 INT. MAIN ENGINEERING A dramatic HIGH ANGLE as Kosinski, his assistant, Riker, and Argyle ENTER the area. There are some members of the duty watch there -- as well as Wesley, who's working on a school-related science project. KOSINSKI Inform the bridge I shall begin the first test in precisely fifty minutes. Why is that child here? ARGYLE (throws off the answer) He's working on a school project. (that's not what's on his mind) Before you continue, there are some questions. First, tell us... Riker ENTERS SHOT, but stands slightly off to one side, properly allowing Argyle to handle this, but ready to support him where necessary. 6 EMPHASIZING KOSINSKI He turns and faces them. (While this discussion plays out, Kosinski's assistant -- who remains uninvolved -- has become attracted to Wesley's project and steps over beside the young man. This is a small thing which should go almost unnoticed.) KOSINSKI (interrupting) ... To save myself time, let me ask those questions for you. Kosinski's arrogance builds with every word. He moves around as he talks, like a prize fighter, circling, jabbing, -- softening the opponent. KOSINSKI (continuing) You received the information which Starfleet provided -- you fed it into your computer -- being as precise as humanly possible -- then you ran a controlled test. And, then, to your astonishment -- nothing happened. STAR TREK: "Where None... " -- 7/30/87 -- ACT ONE 8. 7 EMPHASIZING RIKER AND ARGYLE They are irritated by Kosinski's arrogance, yet it's strangely reassuring. This self-assurance, coupled with his record of success, makes them begin to think what he proposes is possible. KOSINSKI So you said - "What's going on? This doesn't work. Kosinski's a fraud." 8 ANGLE ON KOSINSKI He steps closer for emphasis. KOSINSKI (smiles smugly) You see, I have had this discussion on other Starfleet vessels. They didn't understand it; why should you? Cutting through the rhetoric. ARGYLE You are surely not saying it's unexplainable? KOSINSKI I'm saying I'm not a teacher, and don't want to become one. I have neither the inclination nor time. RIKER You have all the time you need. KOSINSKI I don't think you understand. This has already been approved by Starfleet Command. RIKER But it hasn't been approved by the chief engineer... or by me. KOSINSKI (a little snidely) I didn't know that was necessary. RIKER Now you do. STAR TREK: "Where None... " -- 7/30/87 -- ACT ONE 9. 8 CONTINUED: KOSINSKI Perhaps I should talk with Captain Picard. RIKER If you like, but it won't change anything. Kosinski sees the resolve in Riker's eyes and knows he can't bully his way through this. KOSINSKI How basic shall I be? Riker, without softening his expression in the slightest, indicates with a wave that it's Kosinski's call. RIKER I leave that to you. Kosinski steps over to the computer. Everyone moves a little closer, including Wesley. Kosinski's assistant comes up next to the young man. 9 EMPHASIZING KOSINSKI (OPTICAL) He gestures his assistant over to sit at an adjacent, secondary computer keyboard. Then the assistant works rapidly at this keyboard. KOSINSKI We can save a little time this way. My assistant is laying in my base formulas a bit more rapidly than a human can do it... (small chuckle) ... even myself. Wesley is closely watching which keys the assistant is using and what is appearing on the computer screen. 10 COMPUTER SCREEN (OPTICAL) It is a three-dimensional geometric display which builds and grows as WE WATCH, becoming a wonderfully complex and incredibly beautiful pattern. It is nothing we recognize nor understand. It is a theoretical representation of warp power. STAR TREK: "Where None... " -- 7/30/87 -- ACT ONE 10. 10 CONTINUED: KOSINSKI Here is, in the simplest possible terms, what I do. This warp drive system was tuned only in the grossest sense, at least to my standard anyway. What I do is specific. Kosinski waves his assistant back, addresses his primary keyboard now and taps on a few keys. There is a slight change. KOSINSKI (continuing) How should I say this? (finds the words) Aah... sufficient to say for now, these symbols and their relationships have greater meaning to me than to you... He taps on the keys again, and again there is a slight change. KOSINSKI (continuing) ... although you can in time learn them. Then, those of you sufficiently gifted, can duplicate my results. RIKER But the three percent efficiency increase of the other vessels could still have been caused by other things such as simply working more carefully, better station coordination... ARGYLE And you mention "gifted." In what way? Whatever any of us can learn to do on a computer, another computer can eventually perform faster, more precisely... KOSINSKI Wrong! What the computer can't do is create. Only the mind... (taps his forehead) ... is capable of true, original thought. STAR TREK: "Where None... " -- 7/30/87 -- ACT ONE 11. 10 CONTINUED: (2) Kosinski steps away from the computer. Riker and Argyle follow him a few steps, then stop. RIKER But what we're dealing with is mechanics. However complex it may be, it has to do with an engine. KOSINSKI And that is exactly where you go wrong. Warp drive has become so complex that it is... 11 ANGLE EMPHASIZING RIKER AND ARGYLE exchanging a puzzled look as: KOSINSKI ... as filled with mysteries as nature itself. (indicates) If you'll view the screen with me and consider the following. 12 EMPHASIZING WESLEY (OPTICAL) Drawn by curiosity, he moves closer to the computer screen. The assistant, curious over the expressions playing over Wesley's face, moves in beside him. In b.g. Kosinski is touching a button or so on the keyboard which produces minor changes on the screen as he continues. KOSINSKI Is this merely "mechanics" or is it nature that we deal with in this? What else than nature are elementals like space and time? Wesley looks puzzled as though some information on the screen is out of place. STAR TREK: "Where None... " -- 7/30/87 -- ACT ONE 12. 12 CONTINUED: ASSISTANT KOSINSKI (a statement, not (b.g.) a question) You are trained through Something troubles you the system -- you go in about the way this is a straight line, competent, configured. yes, and perhaps even innovative in a Wesley nods his head yes. minimalist way, but Without Riker or Argyle what I am doing here is noticing, the assistant not the end of the process -- puts new information into it's the beginning. the computer. Kosinski pauses to allow them ASSISTANT to be sufficiently impressed, (continuing) believing they are whether How about it now? they show it or not. KOSINSKI The display changes -- much (continuing) more than anything Kosinski So, what do I do -- go did. back to the Fearless, (Note: It is not important which I left with a more that we, the audience, understand efficient warp drive the change -- it's only than I found, or do you important that Wesley does.) cast off your ignorance and allow me to continue? The confusion drains from Wesley's face. WESLEY RIKER Yes. But shouldn't (to Argyle) these be connected? Can anything he's proposing damage the He taps the keys, the display system? changes -- radically. 13 INTERCUT ANGLES INCLUDING SCREEN (OPTICAL) Wesley and assistant slightly in b.g. at their keyboard. WESLEY ARGYLE Here. How could it? It's (changes it again) meaningless. ... And here. (studies it for RIKER a beat) Then we'll let him try There. That's better. it. STAR TREK: "Where None... " -- 7/30/87 -- ACT ONE 13. 13 CONTINUED: Wesley's attitude is KOSINSKI important here. What he is (explodes) doing is pure problem-solving. What do you mean, "let It would mean as much if he him try it?" Don't were in his room alone. He's talk about me in the not looking for approval. third person like I'm He's not trying to impress. not standing right here. The assistant looks at Wesley's reflection in the Riker and Argyle continue to CRT. In that look WE SEE ignore Kosinski. recognition -- an indication of potential which he sees in Wesley. ASSISTANT ARGYLE Now will it do what (pauses to weigh Kosinski says it will? it all; then) Yes, we might as well Wesley shrugs. let him try it. WESLEY KOSINSKI It has a chance -- but... (sarcastically) I think it might work You are too generous. better this way. Wesley punches in something on the computer. 13A ANGLE ON VIEWER The computer formula changes slightly. 14 EMPHASIZING WESLEY AND ASSISTANT as the assistant looks approvingly at what Wesley has put on the viewer. Kosinski glances over to see Wesley at the computer. KOSINSKI Boy, don't play with that. Wesley, without a hint of petulance, moves away from the keyboard. The assistant gives Kosinski a look which says -- "If you only knew." 15 INT. MAIN BRIDGE CAMERA TRUCKING with Picard as he ENTERS Main Bridge. Worf addresses him: STAR TREK: "Where None... " -- 7/30/87 -- ACT ONE 14. 15 CONTINUED: WORF Main Engineering is ready to proceed, Captain. Picard takes his position. PICARD Engineering, this is the bridge. It's your call. 16 INT. MAIN ENGINEERING Kosinski is at the big computer. His assistant is to his right. They will share the duty. Wesley is beside and slightly behind Kosinski's assistant. KOSINSKI Do this one just like the others. Nothing changes. The assistant nods, then motions for Wesley to step closer for a better view. KOSINSKI (continuing) Commander -- I will make my preliminary adjustments at warp one-point-five, and complete them as we achieve warp six. RIKER Engineering to bridge, did you copy that? 17 INT. MAIN BRIDGE Picard acknowledges. PICARD Affirmative, Number One. Are you ready? RIKER'S COM VOICE We are. PICARD La Forge, set in warp one-point-five. GEORDI Warp one-point-five. STAR TREK: "Where None... " -- 7/30/87 -- ACT ONE 15. 17 CONTINUED PICARD Engage! 18 EXT. SPACE - THE ENTERPRISE (OPTICAL) as the ship reaches warp speed. 19 INT. MAIN ENGINEERING Kosinski and his assistant are at the big computer. KOSINSKI All right, here we go. Wesley steps closer. 20 ANGLE ON RIKER AND OTHERS slightly back. They expect nothing unusual. After all, it's only going to be a three percent increase even if Kosinski is right. GEORDI'S COM VOICE Passing warp five. The assistant looks over at Wesley to gauge how much he's absorbing. That look distracts him just for a split second, which is all it takes. Kosinski turns to the assistant. KOSINSKI (with a little panic) What are you doing... ? The assistant turns back to the computer. He hurries to catch up... 21 EMPHASIZING WESLEY (OPTICAL) as he sees a strange phasing occur to the Alien. Riker and the others are intent on the main screen and will miss this. 22 ANGLE ON ASSISTANT (OPTICAL) Streaks appear on his hands and face. Like gaps, where there is literally nothing -- emptiness. In these streaks he seems to DISAPPEAR -- then REAPPEAR, PHASING IN AND OUT. STAR TREK: "Where None... " -- REV. 7/31/87 -- ACT ONE 16. 23 EMPHASIZING WESLEY confused -- concerned. But before he can say anything, a GREAT EXPLOSION OF SPEED happens. The ship shudders once. 24 EXT. SPACE - THE ENTERPRISE (OPTICAL) The great ship leaps forward with a WARP SPEED EFFECT ON TOP OF A WARP SPEED EFFECT. 25 INT. MAIN BRIDGE (OPTICAL) WE SEE it as a DOUBLE IMAGE EFFECT which now slowly becomes a SINGLE IMAGE. Picard is the first to react. PICARD What is our velocity? DATA It is off the scale, sir... 26 INT. MAIN ENGINEERING Amidst a FLARE OF BLINDING LIGHT from the engine components, SLOWLY BECOMING NORMAL. 27 ANGLE ON KOSINSKI as he steps back -- stunned by what he thinks he's done. 28 EMPHASIZING ARGYLE frozen. They want to jump into action -- but what? 29 ANGLE ON THE ASSISTANT He too steps back. He looks suddenly tired, and embarrassed. 30 EMPHASIZING WESLEY right now more concerned about his new friend than anything else. 31 INT. MAIN BRIDGE PICARD Reverse engines! STAR TREK: "Where None... " -- 7/30/87 -- ACT ONE 17. 31 CONTINUED: DATA Captain, no one has ever reversed engines at this velocity. PICARD That's because no one has ever gone this fast. REVERSE ENGINES! 32 thru OMITTED 33 34 EXT. SPACE - THE ENTERPRISE (OPTICAL) as the starship slows from HYPER-SPEED EFFECT to normal velocity. (What we'll see of Space matches what we'll end up with in Scene 38.) 35 INT. MAIN BRIDGE PICARD All stop! 36 EXT. SPACE - THE ENTERPRISE (OPTICAL) coming to a stop. 37 INT. MAIN BRIDGE There is stunned silence for a beat. These are highly-trained people -- there is no chaos -- no running around -- no screaming and yelling. Everyone is under very tight, very tense control. PICARD Position. GEORDI Calculating it, sir. (shaken) Data, what do you read there? DATA (reading his own viewer; puzzled) A malfunction... I trust. PICARD (snaps) Position please, Lieutenant La Forge. STAR TREK: "Where None... " -- 7/30/87 -- ACT ONE 18. 37 CONTINUED: GEORDI According to these readings, sir, we have not only left our own galaxy, but have passed through two others, stopping on the far side of Triangulum -- the Galaxy known as M-Thirty-Three. PICARD That's not possible. Data, what is our distance traveled? DATA Two million -- seven hundred thousand light years. PICARD (more to himself than anyone else) I can't accept that. DATA You must, sir. Our comparisons show it to be completely accurate. GEORDI And I calculate that at maximum warp, sir... (looks up from viewer) ... it would take over three hundred years to get home. FADE OUT. END OF ACT ONE STAR TREK: "Where None... " -- 7/30/87 -- ACT TWO 19. ACT TWO FADE IN: 38 EXT. SPACE - THE ENTERPRISE (OPTICAL) Past what looks to be a "normal" sized planet, a huge section of space is dominated by an immense cloud of luminous gas and space dust. As indicated by the size of the planet in f.g., a really BIG cloud! A star is forming and when complete, and this one will have a mass 100 times greater than our own sun. PICARD (V.O.) Captain's log, stardate 41263.2. This will be a rather unusual log entry, assuming Starfleet ever receives it. As I have already informed my crew... 39 INT. MAIN BRIDGE Picard standing at his station. The other regulars except Riker are at their bridge stations, keyed up by what has happened, working at tasks made necessary by this happening. PICARD (V.O. (continuing) ... a phenomenal surge of power during a warp speed experiment has sent our starship hurtling out of our own galaxy, past another, taking us over two million, seven-hundred thousand light years in a few minutes. GEORDI Message on this has been transmitted to Starfleet, sir. DATA Which, traveling subspace, they should receive in fifty-one years, ten months... PICARD (interrupting; irritated) Mister Data... ! DATA Sir? STAR TREK: "Where None... " -- REV. 7/31/87 -- ACT TWO 20. 39 CONTINUED The turbolift door SNAPS OPEN and Riker and Argyle ENTER the bridge with Kosinski... who seems to be actually strutting a bit. Coming well onto the bridge he stops, gives a little bow. KOSINSKI Captain Picard, I presume? Picard gives the pompous Kosinski a withering look. RIKER We're still trying to determine what happened, sir. KOSINSKI The truth is, Captain, I made a mistake. A wonderful, incredible mistake. PICARD (hard) Just explain what brought us here! KOSINSKI As the power built, I applied the energy asymtotically. I anticipated some tiling, but it didn't occur. That was my error -- using Bessel functions from the beginning. PICARD (beat) What is he saying, Number One? RIKER (hesitates; embarrassed) Well... if you want the truth, sir, it sounds to me like nonsense. But considering... He gestures lamely. Picard looks toward main viewer as: 39A ANGLE ON MAIN VIEWER (OPTICAL) emphasizing the strange area of space they're in. PICARD But considering where we are, we must assume it isn't. 40 OMITTED STAR TREK: "Where None... " -- 7/30/87 -- ACT TWO 21. 41 INT. MAIN ENGINEERING - WESLEY AND ASSISTANT the assistant slumped at a seat in a secluded area of Engineering. They're generally unnoticed by Engine Room personnel who are working as keyed up as the crew we saw on the bridge. WESLEY I can call my mother. She's a doctor... ASSISTANT No, there's nothing she can do. I need to rest. I've been away too long. Wesley eyes him, then: WESLEY Whatever happened to you... was it part of what happened to the ship? Almost wildly startled by this, the assistant looks at Wesley now with considerable respect. ASSISTANT Please believe I mean no harm to this vessel... or those in it... WESLEY Is Mister Kosinski like he sounds? A joke? ASSISTANT No, that's too cruel. He has sensed some small part of this... WESLEY (slowly) ... that space and time and thought aren't... well, aren't the separate things they seem to be? The assistant is looking at Wesley in such a strange way that the boy becomes nervous. WESLEY I... I just thought the formula you were using said something like that... The assistant grabs Wesley's arms hard, hissing his words: STAR TREK: "Where None... " -- 7/30/87 -- ACT TWO 22. 41 CONTINUED ASSISTANT Boy, don't you ever say that again. At least, not at your age in a world that's not ready for such... (considers it) ... such dangerous nonsense. 42 INT. MAIN BRIDGE - AT THE COMMAND AREA Picard, Riker and Argyle deeply involved with Kosinski. Other regulars will monitor the conversation as they are able. Kosinski is wallowing in his own self-importance. KOSINSKI I've always suspected this rate of speed was possible, of course, but, at this level -- never. We are going to need new definitions. New parameters. ARGYLE Perhaps you could call it the Kosinski scale. He glances at Argyle, lets the sarcasm bounce off him, and accepts the suggestion. KOSINSKI Why not? Since I'm the one who has made the so-called "warp barrier" meaningless. (to Picard) And, Captain, this must be a special thrill for you. PICARD "Thrill?" KOSINSKI (nods) As an explorer. In three centuries of space flight, we have charted just eleven percent of our galaxy. Then... (gestures broadly) ... voila, we accomplish this. PICARD (hesitant nod) Yes... but isn't the real point, can you do it again? Can you get us home? STAR TREK: "Where None... " -- 7/30/87 -- ACT TWO 23. 43 WIDER ANGLE Kosinski hesitates for just a moment, then firms up and swells up too. KOSINSKI Of course I can. I'll just do what I did before. (moves for turbolift; looks back) Coming, Riker? Riker looks ready to throw a punch at this, but Picard cuts him off. PICARD Commander Riker will join you in a moment. Kosinski doesn't react at all, turning and EXITING into the turbolift. The crew watches him go silently -- even Data has no comment. PICARD Comment is invited. Counselor? Hesitation, then: TROI He's convinced he's right -- I have no doubt of that. WORF Can you allow a man who has made one mistake back into a position where he may make another? GEORDI What are the options? If he doesn't do it, who will? There is no response. Then: DATA Captain, we are here. Why not avail ourselves of this opportunity for study? There is a giant protostar here in the process of forming. No vessel has been out this far. STAR TREK: "Where None... " -- 7/30/87 -- ACT TWO 24. 43 CONTINUED PICARD (smiles at Data) Spoken like a true Starfleet graduate. (nods) It is tempting, eh Number One? RIKER Aye, sir, it is. (nods to Picard) As they say, sir... you're the captain. 44 ANGLE ON PICARD Considers it, then makes his decision, sighs. PICARD Yes, that's the problem. I know that if Kosinski can get us home, Starfleet could use his technique to send back a pure science vessel to do even more. (turning) Number One -- have Mister Kosinski prepare to get us out of here. RIKER Aye, sir. Riker turns to the turbolift. 45 INT. MAIN ENGINEERING Kosinski MOVES TOWARD the computer where his assistant is waiting. Wesley has stepped over next to Riker. KOSINSKI (self-satisfied) Do you realize that many great advancements of mankind have been tied to speed? This is a moment in history -- right now. Right here. And your names will be linked forever with mine. The idea does not appeal to either Riker or Argyle. STAR TREK: "Where None... " -- 7/30/87 -- ACT TWO 25. 45 CONTINUED WESLEY Excuse me, Commander Riker. I don't think he did it... I think it was... RIKER (gently but firmly) Not now, Wes. Wesley again tries to make his point. WESLEY But, when this all happened, I was watching his assistant and... RIKER I'm sure it was fascinating, Wesley, and I look forward to hearing about it. But not right now! Picard calls. PICARD'S COM VOICE Standing by, Number One. RIKER Aye, sir. 46 INT. MAIN ENGINEERING In the Control Room area, Kosinski walks over to his assistant; Wesley moves quickly -- protectively -- to the assistant's side. KOSINSKI Come on. WESLEY He's too tired. (with a little challenge) Why don't you do it by yourself? Kosinski is so filled with himself, he does not recognize the challenge in Wesley's tone. KOSINSKI Yes, why not? His assistant knows the answer to that. STAR TREK: "Where None... " -- 7/30/87 -- ACT TWO 26. 46 CONTINUED ASSISTANT (rising) No, I will help. KOSINSKI As you wish. Wesley allows the assistant to lean on him as he gets to his feet. The assistant pats the boy's shoulder as he walks to his position. Again, he's tired -- worn -- but not desperately so. It's going to get worse. 47 INT. MAIN BRIDGE Picard is in his position. Troi is on his left. Tasha is at the Tactical Station, Worf is monitoring the Aft Stations, Geordi has the Conn and Data is at Ops. GEORDI I've laid in a reciprocal course back, Captain. 48 INT. MAIN ENGINEERING Kosinski's arrogance bristles. KOSINSKI You may tell the captain I am ready, First Officer. Slightly to the side, the assistant gathers himself for the effort. Wesley is near him. There's nothing Wesley can do but hold a good thought. Which is what everyone is doing. RIKER Ready for you to engage, Captain. 49 INT. MAIN BRIDGE Picard gives the order. PICARD Warp one-point-five. GEORDI Warp one-point-five. STAR TREK: "Where None... " -- 7/30/87 -- ACT TWO 27. 50 INT. MAIN ENGINEERING Everyone here is holding one thought -- SPEED! GO! 51 ANGLE ON KOSINSKI He works the computer panel -- but nothing is happening. The color drains from his face. KOSINSKI (panic rising) It's not working... 52 EMPHASIZING RIKER stepping closer -- and for the first time -- he, too, sees the difference between what Kosinski is doing and what his assistant is now doing. 53 RIKER'S POV - THE ASSISTANT With great effort, the assistant forces himself to concentrate. 54 BACK TO EMPHASIZING RIKER (OPTICAL) It's clear to him now. It's not Kosinski who's special -- it's the assistant. CAMERA CENTERS ON assistant who focuses his total attention on the computer. Again he phases -- pieces of him seem to disappear -- as though leaving this dimension for another. Then, what he's doing HAPPENS. 55 EXT. SPACE - THE ENTERPRISE (OPTICAL) It disappears. But this time it is a kind of speed unlike anything ever seen. 56 INT. MAIN BRIDGE (OPTICAL) Everyone reacting as the entire bridge and everyone on it seems DISASSEMBLED AND REASSEMBLED IN THE WINK OF AN EYE. 57 EXT. SPACE - THE ENTERPRISE (OPTICAL) This time, multiples on top of multiples of the WARP SPEED EFFECT. STAR TREK: "Where None... " -- 7/30/87 -- ACT TWO 28. 58 INT. MAIN ENGINEERING (OPTICAL) QUIVERING DOUBLE EXPOSURES of everything and everyone. WE CAN SEE the assistant collapsing in a heap and both Riker and Wesley making their way to his side. 59 INT. MAIN BRIDGE - INCLUDING MAIN VIEWER (OPTICAAL) Viewer showing an effect that fits Scene 57. Everyone watches with amazement. PICARD ALL STOP! GEORDI Answering all stop. Everyone is staring at the viewscreen while Data checks his instruments. DATA Captain, according to the instruments, our speed never exceeded warp one-point-five. GEORDI All stopped, Captain. PICARD Yes, but where is this place? DATA Where none have gone before. 60 FULL ON MAIN VIEWER (OPTICAL) showing a space scene made up not of stars and planets but of NEATLY-STRUCTURED GEOMETRICAL SHAPES. Many of these appear carefully aligned -- in fact, there is no suggestion of disorder out here. FADE OUT. END OF ACT TWO STAR TREK: "Where None... " -- 7/30/87 -- ACT THREE 29. ACT THREE FADE IN: 61 EXT. SPACE - THE ENTERPRISE (OPTICAL) In this bizarre pattern of hyper-space. PICARD (V.O.) Captain's log Stardate 41263.3. Instead of returning to our own galaxy... 62 EXT. SPACE - ANOTHER ANGLE ON THE ENTERPRISE (OPTICAL) A place where the universe begins? A place where it ends? PICARD (V.O.) (continuing) ... the Enterprise has gone forward to a place in the universe which is uncharted and unknown. Our ship's instruments... 63 INT. MAIN BRIDGE - ANGLES ON BRIDGE CREW PICARD (V.O.) (continuing) ... have continued to operate, our motion and course sensors reveal what would ordinarily be considered impossible... (pause) ... but this is very real... our present position puts us at over a billion light years from our galaxy. 64 ANGLE ON PICARD Rises from his seat. PICARD Data, you have the helm. I'll be in Engineering. Picard CROSSES to the turbolift. He speaks toward the controls. STAR TREK: "Where None... " -- 7/30/87 -- ACT THREE 30. 64 CONTINUED PICARD (continuing) Main Engineering. The doors CLOSE. 65 ANGLE ON WORF Something causes him to turn from his station and glance to the side. What he sees makes him smile -- it's the first time we've ever seen Worf smile. He stands and moves toward it. 66 ANGLE TO INCLUDE A KLINGON ANIMAL (Type of animal yet to be determined -- but it is LARGE.) Worf and it are happy -- in a uniquely Klingon way -- to see each other. But the rest of the bridge crew are now on their feet, alarmed. TROI What is it? DATA A Klingon Targ! Worf has moved in to embrace the animal. WORF From home, my pet... (pulls back; puzzled) ... but when I was a child! 67 ANGLE ON TASHA astonished. TASHA You're telling us that's a kittycat? 68 ANGLE ON WORF AND ANIMAL (OPTICAL) as Worf nods, smiles again. WORF Yes, I suppose that's what you... The animal BLINKS OUT OF EXISTENCE. STAR TREK: "Where None... " -- 7/30/87 -- ACT THREE 31. 69 ANGLE ON TASHA with a KITTEN having APPEARED on her console in front of her. It MEOWS. 70 INT. TURBOLIFT - PICARD (OPTICAL) as turbolift comes to a quick stop. Picard is already moving forward as the doors OPEN onto NOTHINGNESS. A sheer drop to the infinite. A vicious wind rips at Picard where no wind is possible. 71 ANOTHER ANGLE - PICARD He jams himself against the back of the turbolift. His mind reeling. The doors automatically CLOSE. Then, almost before Picard can react, the doors OPEN again. He braces, steps gingerly OUT. 72 EXT. CORRIDOR Picard STEPPING OUT into the corridor to find everything normal. 73 INT. MAIN BRIDGE - WIDE ANGLE All eyes on Tasha who is holding the kitten up, speaking to it. TASHA You darling, what are you doing here? 74 INT. SEWER-TUNNEL - CLOSE ON TASHA HOLDING in the same position what is now a VERY BEGRIMED KITTEN while Tasha herself is dressed very differently in TATTERED CAST-OFF CLOTHING, HER FACE BEGRIMED TOO, HER HAIR ASKEW. She puts the kitten down. TASHA Now, run. This isn't a safe place at all. She comes erect, alert, as from a distance comes the SOUND OF SEVERAL ECHOING FOOTSTEPS. Then a hand-held LIGHT PROBES NEARBY, PASSES. Tasha begins stealthily retreating. STAR TREK: "Where None... " -- 7/30/87 -- ACT THREE 32. 75 ANOTHER ANGLE ON TASHA beginning to hurry, then quickly stopping again, listening. MEN'S WHISPERS, MOVING CLOSER. Suddenly, a hand reaches out and touches her shoulder. 76 INT. MAIN BRIDGE - MATCHING REVERSE ANGLE ON TASHA as she spins, discovers the hand on her shoulder is Geordi. She's in her Starfleet uniform as before. GEORDI What's wrong, Tasha? You look frightened to death. TASHA I.. I was at... (shakes head) This is crazy! I was at the colony where I grew up ... being chased by a rape gang... 77 INT. CORRIDOR - TRUCKING WITH PICARD as he walks what appears to be an ordinary ship corridor -- except for a crew pair who try to hurry past, looking back over their shoulders, very concerned. FIRST CREWMEMBER Captain, we need help... PICARD (halting the pair) How? What is troubling you? FIRST CREWMEMBER Don't you see what's following us?! They break away, HURRYING OFF. Picard whirls, looks in the direction they were pointing. 78 ANOTHER ANGLE ON PICARD with the corridor empty in the direction the crewmembers indicated. Picard begins striding toward a corridor turn in another direction. STAR TREK: "Where None... " -- REV. 7/31/87 -- ACT THREE 33. 79 ANGLE AT CORRIDOR TURN as Picard pulls up at the sight of an ELDERLY WOMAN, (MOTHER PICARD) SEATED AT A SMALL TABLE IN HIS PATH. She's brewing tea, smiles up at Picard. MOTHER PICARD You look tense, Jean-Luc. Sit and have a cup of tea. Picard is overwhelmed with emotion. PICARD Maman. Immediately he feels it is not an image of his mother -- not a figment of his imagination. MOTHER PICARD I'll make it good and strong, the way you like it. Picard takes a step closer, trying to make sense out of this strange reunion in a starship at the end of the universe. MOTHER PICARD (continuing) We will have a nice long talk. PICARD Maman... this can't be! You've been... MOTHER PICARD Dead? But I'm always with you, you know that. Picard eyes her, then seems to be able to accept that. PICARD Strange, but... yes, I've felt that. But why now...suddenly... MOTHER PICARD Why out here, you mean? At what you see as the end of the universe? Or do you see this as the beginning of it? STAR TREK: "Where None... " -- REV. 7/31/87 -- ACT THREE 34. 79 CONTINUED PICARD We... we believed it the outer rim. MOTHER PICARD (amused) Tres Euclidian. PICARD (moves in; intent) Do you understand these things, Maman? 80 ANGLE ON RIKER hurrying around the bend in the Corridor, pulling up short. 81 ANGLE ON PICARD AND MOTHER with him bending down to speak to her, intent on what he's heard. PICARD Maman, can you tell me where my ship is? What is this place? 82 ANGLE ON RIKER AND PICARD except that Picard is bending down toward empty corridor -- his mother missing from Riker's viewpoint. RIKER Captain, you were reported headed for... PICARD (whirls; snaps) Just a moment, Number One! Picard turns immediately back, but now with a stunned expression coming over his face as he too now sees only corridor. He slowly straightens up, wonderingly. STAR TREK: "Where None... " -- REV. 8/4/87 -- ACT THREE 35. 83 CLOSE SHOT - PICARD moisture coming into his eyes now. He's genuinely shaken and Riker, stepping into CLOSE TWO SHOT, sees it. RIKER Can I help you, sir? PICARD (beat) No... no, let's help all of us. 84 WIDER ANGLE Picard turning to the black Corridor companel. He touches it and that portion of the panel FLASHES ON. PICARD General Quarters, Red Alert! The appropriate KLAXON BLASTS and LIGHTS come on. Picard then moves in the direction Riker appeared from and Riker follows. 85 MONTAGE OF VARIOUS VESSEL AREAS featuring crewmembers stopped or stopping in the midst of what must have been interesting illusions -- or were they alternate realities? A MALE CREWMEMBER is caught playing in a string quartet. The players are dressed in period attire. Suddenly, he becomes aware that he's back in uniform and has no violin. A FEMALE CREWMEMBER in a "tou-tou," pirouettes like a ballerina until she becomes aware her dance sandals are gone and she stumbles off balance. 86 OMITTED STAR TREK: "Where None... " -- 7/30/87 -- ACT THREE 36. 87 INT. MAIN ENGINEERING Picard and Riker ENTER. Beverly is there looking after the assistant. He's not conscious. Wesley is beside them, Kosinski is off to the side facing away. RIKER What is it Captain? Why are we at General Quarters? Picard STEPS to a Wall Panel. PICARD I had to get everyone's attention. This was the quickest way. 88 ANGLE ON PICARD He shuts off the klaxon. PICARD (to the ship's company) This is the captain. This is not a drill. It seems that in this place, the physical universe and ... and the world of ideas are intermixed. What we think also becomes real. Therefore, we must, repeat MUST begin controlling our thoughts. 89 REACTION SHOTS OF SHIP'S PERSONNEL as they listen to the captain. PICARD'S COM VOICE We will report all this to you more fully as our understanding increases. The Enterprise will stay at full alert until this crisis is solved. 90 INT. MAIN ENGINEERING Picard CLICKS OFF and turns to Kosinski -- with fire in his eyes and steel in his voice. PICARD What did you do? STAR TREK: "Where None... " -- REV. 7/31/87 -- ACT THREE 37. 91 EMPHASIZING KOSINSKI He turns his face from the wall, is diminished -- embarrassed. RIKER It wasn't him. It never was. It was his assistant. PICARD What are you talking about? RIKER Kosinski wasn't the one controlling the warp experiment. KOSINSKI It was me! RIKER (to Picard) The equations he punched in were nonsense, just as we thought. KOSINSKI (almost in tears; to Riker) I honestly thought it was me. I thought somehow... somehow that I was operating on his level. Picard turns his attention to the assistant who is lying on the table where Beverly attends him with a medical tricorder. ARGYLE It's also my fault, Captain. I should have realized it wasn't Kosinski. PICARD How could you? How could anyone... ? RIKER Wesley did. PICARD (whirls to Wesley) If you knew something, why didn't you say so?! Wesley hesitates. He doesn't want to make Riker look bad. STAR TREK: "Where None... " -- 7/30/87 -- ACT THREE 38. 91 CONTINUED RIKER He tried -- twice. But I didn't listen. Picard nods. He can understand how that could happen, and steps closer to where Beverly tends the assistant. PICARD He's unconscious. Why? BEVERLY I'm not certain yet... WESLEY He phased. PICARD (turning to Wesley) What does that mean? WESLEY Parts of him just disappeared, then came back. No one else was paying attention to him the first time. RIKER When we saw it this time, he seemed to be struggling... fighting it... BEVERLY (looking up) He's dying. PICARD (reacting; to Beverly) Save him! He's the only one who can get us back! BEVERLY Realistically, it does not seem possible. As they stand worriedly over the assistant: FADE OUT. END OF ACT THREE STAR TREK: "Where None... " -- REV. 8/7/87 -- ACT FOUR 39. ACT FOUR FADE IN: 92 EXT. SPACE - ENTERPRISE (OPTICAL) at the unknown part of the universe as described. PICARD (V.O.) Captain's log, supplemental. Our position is unknown and our only chance of returning to the known universe is a dying alien... 93 INT. SICKBAY - ESTABLISHING At this point in the script, we begin referring to the assistant by his real name... which is TRAVELER. The Traveler on a medical table, Beverly and MEDICAL ASSISTANT working over him with a medical tricorder and other medical equipment, but obviously getting puzzling readings. Picard, Riker, and Wesley wait anxiously too. Kosinski is staying well in b.g. PICARD (V.O.) (continuing) ... who is generally humanoid but with a physiology sufficiently different from our own to create medical problems in caring for him. PICARD (to Beverly) Cause? BEVERLY I don't know. My equipment here does not register his kind of life signs. I would have to guess exhaustion, fatigue. WESLEY (concerned) Is he going to be all right? STAR TREK: "Where None... " -- REV. 8/7/87 -- ACT FOUR 40. 93 CONTINUED PICARD (irritated; to Riker) What's the boy doing here? WESLEY Mom... he's my friend. RIKER You may want him here before we're done sir. (indicates Traveler) He seemed to feel some kind of relationship with the boy. WESLEY My name is Wesley, Mister Riker. PICARD (snaps) He knows... (softens) ... We all know. Picard turns back to Beverly, indicates the Traveler. PICARD Will he live? BEVERLY I'm not sure. PICARD Wake him. BEVERLY I recommend we let him come around in his own time. PICARD We don't have that luxury. Wake him. BEVERLY (with a glance toward Wesley) He could die and with him any chance we have. PICARD Doctor... (toward Wesley) Wes... You and I have other friends aboard this ship, too. (to Beverly) If we remain in this place any longer we may lose the ability to tell the difference between thought and reality. Regardless of the risk, we must wake him... now. STAR TREK: "Where None... " -- REV. 8/7/87 -- ACT FOUR 41. 93 CONTINUED (2) In b.g., Wesley recoils slightly. He's too well schooled to say anything to the Captain, but his concern for the Traveler is evident. 94 CLOSER ON MEDICAL TABLE Beverly makes her attempt with an atomized stimulant. 95 ANGLE - PICARD, RIKER watching, trying to hide their concern. 96 VARIOUS ANGLES as the Traveler comes slowly to consciousness. He looks weak and worn. Picard moves in. PICARD Do you recognize me? I'm the captain... I need answers. TRAVELER Do my best... to provide... PICARD Who are you? Or what? TRAVELER I am -- a Traveler. PICARD A traveler? What is your destination? TRAVELER (smiles) Destination? The Traveler seems to be growing a bit stronger. PICARD Yes, what place are you trying to reach? STAR TREK: "Where None... " -- 7/30/87 -- ACT FOUR 42. 96 CONTINUED TRAVELER Place? No, there is no specific place I wish to go. PICARD Then what is the purpose of this journey? TRAVELER Curiosity. PICARD That's not an answer. What is it that you want? TRAVELER I have certain... "abilities." They give me an understanding of -- propulsion. I have been trading this for passage on Starfleet vessels. RIKER Allowing Kosinski to take the credit for what you did. TRAVELER (trace of a smile) It seemed the sensible way. PICARD Until now. TRAVELER Captain, I seek only transportation in order to see and experience your... your reality. I am not a threat to you, your ship or your crew. WESLEY He isn't, Captain. I know he isn't. Beverly silences Wesley with a look; he may be correct, but he's out of line. PICARD Our "reality?" And in satisfying yourself, you have put my ship and my crew at great risk. TRAVELER I have made some mistakes. STAR TREK: "Where None... " -- REV. 8/7/87 -- ACT FOUR 43. 96 CONTINUED (2) PICARD Some mistakes? What kind of "mistake" can cause these incredible explosions of velocity? The Traveler hesitates, just as a physicist of today would be given pause if asked to explain nuclear fusion to a caveman because... TRAVELER ... I don't know if I can put it in terms you'll understand. PICARD I believe that there may be a warp speed that could have gotten us to Galaxy M-Thirty-Three... but there is no "velocity" of any magnitude which could bring us to wherever this is. Can you tell us if our navigation sensors are right? Is this millions of light years from where we were? TRAVELER Yes. PICARD What got us here? The Traveler hesitates. Kosinski moves in closer. He doesn't want to miss a word, there might be a way for him to salvage something out of this after all. TRAVELER Thought. PICARD Thought?! TRAVELER You do understand don't you that thought is the basis of all reality? The... "energy" of thought, to put it in your terms, is very powerful. KOSINSKI That's not an explanation. TRAVELER I have the ability to act like a lens which focuses thought. STAR TREK: "Where None... " -- 7/30/87 -- ACT FOUR 44. 96 CONTINUED (3) KOSINSKI That's just so much nonsense. You're asking us to believe in magic. As tired as he is, the Traveler can still find a chuckle. TRAVELER Yes -- this could seem like magic to you. PICARD No, it actually makes some sense to me. Only the power of thought could explain what's been happening. Especially out here. TRAVELER Thought is the essence of where you are now. You do understand the danger? PICARD (nods) Chaos. What we think is what happens. TRAVELER It pains me I was so careless, Captain. (sighs with regret) My intent was only to observe, not to cause this. You should not be here until your far, far distant future. Certainly not until you have learned control. RIKER You are from a different time, aren't you? TRAVELER Well -- no -- not exactly from another "time." Although as you understand the concept... yes, perhaps that term fits as well as any. RIKER And you have this ability to... ah... "travel." TRAVELER Yes... STAR TREK: "Where None... " -- REV. 7/31/87 -- ACT FOUR 45. 96 CONTINUED (4) RIKER And others of your kind can also "travel?" TRAVELER Yes. RIKER Then, why -- in all of our history -- has there never been a record of you or someone like you having visited us? TRAVELER (laughs) What wonderful arrogance. There is no record because we have not visited you before. RIKER Why not? TRAVELER Ah. Well, up until now ... if you'll forgive this... when compared to many others in the universe, you have been... uninteresting. It's only now that your life form begins to merit serious attention. I'm... sorry... The Traveler falls back into a kind of sleep. PICARD No, no -- none of that. Beverly begins hurriedly checking him over. BEVERLY He's unconscious again. PICARD Revive him. Beverly hesitates, sees Picard's determination, gives the Traveler another hypo injection. He begins to stir back into consciousness. Beverly gives Picard a concerned look. BEVERLY Whatever you need from him, you better get it soon. STAR TREK: "Where None... " -- 7/30/87 -- ACT FOUR 46. 96 CONTINUED (5) RIKER I suggest, sir, that the first jump out of our galaxy was as he said, a "mistake"... PICARD Or he was distracted by something. RIKER (nods) But it weakened him in some way, leading to the incredible jump out here. KOSINSKI Theory! PICARD (to Kosinski) Can you propose some facts that fit this? Kosinski obviously can't. During this the Traveler is back to consciousness, gathering some strength again. Picard turns to him. PICARD (with a hard edge) Can you get us back? KOSINSKI Wait, Captain. Not so fast. We have an opportunity for scientific discovery here... PICARD And report our observations how? To whom? (to Traveler) Can you get us back?! TRAVELER I will try. PICARD Number One, you'll take the Traveler to Main Engineering; I'll be on the bridge... WESLEY He is very weak. PICARD I know. STAR TREK: "Where None... " -- 7/30/87 -- ACT FOUR 47. 96 CONTINUED (6) TRAVELER The Captain is right. We don't have much time. (to all) But first, I request a moment with the captain. Alone! Picard reflects, then nods to all the others. They LEAVE him alone with the Traveler. Wesley looks from the captain to his new friend, turns and WALKS OUT too. 97 TWO SHOT - PICARD AND TRAVELER Picard has watched Wesley leave, then: PICARD Strange how he seems to care for you. The Traveler nods -- touched. TRAVELER He will forget me in time. Which is as it should be. (eyes Picard; then) It is Wesley I wanted to speak to you about. PICARD The boy? TRAVELER (nods) It's best you do not repeat this to the others... especially not to the mother. Whatever may happen, it is best it proceeds naturally. PICARD (hurriedly) I must get my ship back; do we have time for this? TRAVELER Yes. He and a few like him are why I travel. (sitting upright; intent now) You have it in your power to encourage him without interfering... STAR TREK: "Where None... " -- 7/30/87 -- ACT FOUR 48. 97 CONTINUED PICARD Encourage him in what? TRAVELER How shall I explain? Are you acquainted with the intricacies of what is called here... music? PICARD Somewhat. TRAVELER And musical genius such as I saw in one of your ship's libraries. One called Mozart, for example? (at Picard's nod) Who as a small child wrote astonishing symphonies as you call them... whose genius made music a tangible reality to be not only heard, but also seen and felt beyond the ability, the understanding, of others? Traveler begins coming to his feet, Picard supporting him. TRAVELER (continuing) Your Wesley is such a person. Not with music but with the equally lovely intricacies of time, energy, propulsion... (gestures) ... and the instruments of this vessel which allow all that to be played. The Traveler begins moving weakly toward the hatch leading to the corridor. TRAVELER (continuing) You are right, I must hurry now... (pausing at the door) You are right in something else. He is also just a boy for now. He should be encouraged... but told none of this. STAR TREK: "Where None... " -- 7/30/87 -- ACT FOUR 49. 98 INT. CORRIDOR -- RIKER As Picard and Traveler ENTER from Sickbay, Riker hurries over and Picard indicates the Traveler. PICARD Help him to Engineering. I'll be on the bridge. We must try to get back home. RIKER Yes, sir. He helps support the Traveler, MOVING OFF. 99 PANNING PICARD -- FURTHER ALONG CORRIDOR as he comes upon a CREWMEMBER who stands before a wall of flame. He's frozen with fear. Picard grabs the man by the shoulder. PICARD Put it out. CREWMEMBER How? PICARD Think! Put the flame out in your thoughts. The crewmember looks confused for a beat, then as he turns back to the fire, it's doused. PICARD Now. Get to your station and concentrate on your assignment. Picard strides toward the turbolift. FADE OUT. END ACT FOUR STAR TREK: "Where None... " -- 7/30/87 -- ACT FIVE 50. ACT FIVE FADE IN: 100 EXT. SPACE - THE ENTERPRISE (OPTICAL) as before. PICARD (V.O.) Captain's log, any time entry is meaningless. We have no choice but to repeat the same warp experiment... 101 INT. MAIN ENGINEERING - EMPHASIZING TRAVELER Flanked by Riker, Argyle and Kosinski as Traveler moves to the computer. Wesley HURRIES IN, stops with a questioning expression. The Traveler nods to Riker who gestures Wesley to come in to one side. PICARD (V.O.) (continuing) ... but wish one variation. A principal part of this warp formula will be the thoughts of everyone aboard the Enterprise. We have no idea exactly how this works... 102 EXT. MAIN BRIDGE - ESTABLISHING the balance of our regulars at their positions. PICARD (V.O.) (continuing) ... we understand only that the Traveler makes use of this somehow. It will be most important that those aboard avoid random thoughts that might change the reality of what we're attempting to do. Picard turns to Troi. PICARD Any further advice, Counselor? STAR TREK: "Where None... " -- REV. 7/31/87 -- ACT FIVE 51. 102 CONTINUED: TROI When you begin the attempt, there will be stress... And it's only natural that the crew's concentration will shift. TASHA Plus some genuine fear, Captain. You can't notice what's outside without feeling some of that. Picard nods, reaches to touch a control. His VOICE BECOMES AMPLIFIED. PICARD ALL DECKS, THIS IS THE CAPTAIN SPEAKING. ALL DECKS... 103 INT. ENTERPRISE - MONTAGE A Crewmember on a unicycle, making a slow turn which brings his face INTO CAMERA -- and the back INTO FULL FIGURE SHOT with the unicycle gone and the man stopping, looking for the unicycle, half-puzzled and half aware of Picard's words. Plus interposing scenes of people simply listening. PICARD'S COM VOICE (amplified) ... I MUST HAVE YOUR FULL ATTENTION. IN A FEW MOMENTS AS WE ATTEMPT TO WARP BACK HOME, IT IS VITAL... ABSOLUTELY VITAL, THAT YOU CENTER YOUR THOUGHTS ON YOUR DUTY... OR UPON THE WELFARE OF THE ONE CALLED 'THE TRAVELER.' THINK OF GIVING HIM SOME... 104 INT. MAIN ENGINEERING Riker and the others listen. PICARD'S COM VOICE (amplified) ... OF YOUR STRENGTH. URGENT. THIS IS AN ORDER. YOU MUST TRY TO DO THIS. CAMERA begins PUSHING IN on Picard's face. STAR TREK: "Where None... " -- REV. 7/31/87 -- ACT FIVE 52. 104 CONTINUED: PICARD'S COM VOICE (continuing; amplified) YOU WILL ATTEMPT NOW TO CONCENTRATE COMPLETELY ON EITHER YOUR DUTY OF THE MOMENT... OR UPON THE TRAVELER... ON HIS WELL BEING. 105 OMITTED 106 INT. MAIN ENGINEERING The Traveler smiles as he sits at the same secondary computer panel. PICARD'S COM VOICE (amplified) THINK OF HIM AS SOMEONE YOU CARE DEEPLY ABOUT. 107 INT. MAIN BRIDGE Picard turns to Troi. PICARD And now to focus their thoughts on that... He reaches over to his panel. PICARD (continuing; amplified) ... ALL DECKS, ALL STATIONS, GO TO BATTLE STATIONS. The Bridge KLAXON SOUNDS FIVE TIMES and the emergency RED LIGHTS begin BLINKING. 108 INT. MAIN ENGINEERING Red lights are blinking. Traveler turns: TRAVELER I will need Kosinski back on the main computer. From OUT OF CAMERA RANGE where he has been hiding, Kosinski APPEARS. STAR TREK: "Where None... " -- 7/30/87 -- ACT FIVE 53. 108 CONTINUED KOSINSKI (tentative) You need me? TRAVELER Yes -- It's probably not true, but Kosinski does not care. The gesture fills part of the gaping hole in his ego. Riker examines the Traveler. RIKER You're looking better. TRAVELER (nods) I'm feeling better. 109 INT. MAIN BRIDGE Picard gets it started. PICARD Helm, set in warp one point five, retroactive course. GEORDI Warp one point five, sir. Retroactive two-six-one mark three-one. PICARD (into Com) Bridge to Engineering...Standby. TROI (smiling) There is such an abundance of well-being on this ship. It feels like... (she smiles) ... quite wonderful. RIKER'S COM VOICE Engineering to bridge, we're ready. PICARD On my order, Mister Data... Mister La Forge... STAR TREK: "Where None... " -- 7/30/87 -- ACT FIVE 54. 110 INT. MAIN ENGINEERING The Traveler on the computer. 111 RIKER AND ENGINEERING PERSONNEL They watch intently. 112 INT. MAIN BRIDGE Everyone tense. PICARD Engage! 113 EXT. SPACE - THE ENTERPRISE (OPTICAL) There is an explosion of speed -- but not as much as we saw when coming out here. 114 INT. MAIN BRIDGE Picard and the Bridge crew -- intent on their instruments... PICARD It's not happening... not enough... 115 INT. MAIN ENGINEERING (OPTICAL) The Traveler and Kosinski increase their tempo. The phasing occurs. 116 ANGLE EMPHASIZING TRAVELER AND WESLEY (OPTICAL) The phasing stops; the Traveler looks concerned at this. Wesley moves closer, touches the Traveler anxiously on the shoulder -- and then a major phasing occurs. Traveler smiles at Wesley, but shakes his head at the hand on his shoulder. Wesley withdraws it, continues watching. The Traveler phases -- almost out this time, then back, then: 117 EXT. SPACE - THE ENTERPRISE (OPTICAL) It happens. The same effect that brought the ship out here. STAR TREK: "Where None... " -- REV. 7/31/87 -- ACT FIVE 55. 118 INT. MAIN ENGINEERING - EMPHASIZING TRAVELER Phasing so completely his image is almost gone. Wesley reacts, concerned. Then the Traveler DISAPPEARS. 119 ANGLE ON WESLEY Shaken, somehow, he realizes the Traveler is gone this time for good. 120 EXT. SPACE - THE ENTERPRISE (OPTICAL) Coming out of a MIXED WARP SPEED EFFECT to travel normal warp. 121 INT. BRIDGE - ESTABLISHING Everyone looking very relieved. The red alert lights go out. DATA Warp one-point-five, sir... (turns) ... which is what my instruments have read all along. GEORDI Our position reads exactly what it was before this sleigh-ride began, sir. DATA Sleigh-ride? Picard waves Data off. GEORDI Or whatever you want to call it, Data. I don't have a name for it. The turbolift door OPENS. Riker ENTERS the bridge, moving to his position as: RIKER The Traveler's gone, sir. PICARD Gone? STAR TREK: "Where None... " -- 7/30/87 -- ACT FIVE 56. 121 CONTINUED: RIKER (nods) He phased completely out of existence... at least out of our existence. Picard takes a moment to consider this. Then: PICARD Attention all decks. This is to inform you that the Traveler has left us. With your support, he has returned us to our galaxy. Wherever he has gone, we wish him well. PICARD (continuing; to Riker) Have the boy come up on the bridge, Number One. Riker starts to either object or comment on this. Then he decides instead to obey the order. RIKER (speaking toward his companel) Wesley Crusher, report to the Bridge. (looks to Picard, adds) On the double. A flicker of a smile from Picard... almost. PICARD Our next assignment is on this heading? RIKER Yes, sir. PICARD Mister Data, Mister La Forge... Increase to warp five. Same heading. DATA Warp five, sir. GEORDI Same heading, sir. STAR TREK: "Where None... " -- 7/30/87 -- ACT FIVE 57. 121 CONTINUED: (2) The turbolift doors snap OPEN. It is Wesley, looking a bit warily toward Picard. PICARD Come onto the bridge, Wesley. (as Wesley hesitates) Move! Wesley hurries onto the bridge and approaches Picard. All the Bridge Crew watch with interest. No one knows what is coming. PICARD Commander Riker told me how supportive you were in Engineering. Well done. Wesley stiffens with pride. PICARD (continuing) At ease -- sit here in Command. Picard indicates the bench beside Troi. Wesley hesitates. RIKER Captain -- that's not allowed. Your orders. PICARD Oh, that's true. I can't waive them again. (to Wesley) Only commissioned officers. WESLEY It's quite all right, sir, I understand. PICARD (interrupting) Please don't interrupt me, Wesley. WESLEY (very nervous again) Sorry, sir... Picard looks first from Riker then to Wesley and back to Riker. He knows that Riker is orchestrating this a little. STAR TREK: "Where None... " -- 7/30/87 -- ACT FIVE 58. 121 CONTINUED: (3) PICARD (to Riker) Any commission rank? (he pauses) Even an ensign? RIKER Then he would have authorized access to the bridge. PICARD Well, then, I'll have to make him an Acting Ensign. (he touches a switch) Captain's log Stardate 41263.4. For outstanding performance in the best of Starfleet tradition -- Wesley Crusher is made acting ensign. With all the duties and privileges of that rank. (he clicks off) And Mister Crusher, whether the rank becomes permanent is up to you. (to Wesley) At the first opportunity your entrance application will be tendered to Starfleet Academy. Until then you will learn this ship. Every operation -- every function. Commander Riker -- a duty schedule for Mister Crusher. Heavy on study. RIKER Aye, sir. PICARD Meanwhile, you can sit and learn something here. Wesley steps over and takes his seat. His eyes shining as he looks around the bridge -- belonging for the first time in his life. 122 FULL ON COMMAND AREA Riker glances over at Wesley, then to Picard. STAR TREK: "Where None... " -- 7/30/87 -- ACT FIVE 59. 122 CONTINUED: RIKER Sir, shall I send for Doctor Crusher? PICARD Why? Is someone ill? (beat; quietly to Wesley) Or do you want to go tell her about this? 123 ANGLE EMPHASIZING WESLEY Tempted, but: WESLEY If you don't mind, sir, I'd like to sit here awhile. I'll tell her later. 124 EXT. SPACE - THE ENTERPRISE (OPTICAL) Warps away. FADE OUT. END OF ACT FIVE THE END STAR TREK: THE NEXT GENERATION "The Last Outpost" #40271-107 Story by Richard Krzemien Teleplay by Herbert Wright Directed by Richard Colla Copyright 1987 Paramount Pictures Corporation. All Rights Reserved. This script is not for publication or reproduction. No one is authorized to dispose of same. If lost or destroyed, please notify the Script Department. REVISED FINAL DRAFT AUGUST 7, 1987 STAR TREK: "The Last Outpost" - 8/7/87 - CAST STAR TREK: THE NEXT GENERATION "The Last Outpost" CAST PICARD DAIMON TAAR (FERENGI) RIKER TWO TEEN BOYS DATA MATTHEWS TROI POLA BEVERLY TRANSPORTER CHIEF TASHA TASHA WORF FERENGI GEORDI LETEK (LEADER) MORDOC KAYRON PORTAL STAR TREK: "The Last Outpost" - 8/7/87 - SETS STAR TREK: THE NEXT GENERATION "The Last Outpost" SETS INTERIORS EXTERIORS ENTERPRISE USS ENTERPRISE Main Bridge Conference Room FERENGI VESSEL Briefing Room (re-dress of Ready Room) PLANET SURFACE (GAMMA TAURI IV) Transporter Room STAR TREK: "The Last Outpost" - 8/7/87 - TEASER 1. STAR TREK: THE NEXT GENERATION "The Last Outpost" TEASER FADE IN: 1 EXT. SPACE - STARSHIP (OPTICAL) A DOT OF LIGHT becomes a starship, as the USS Enterprise rockets directly TOWARD CAMERA, driving hard at warp speed... in chase. PICARD (V.O.) Captain's log, stardate 41194.6. We are in pursuit of a starship of Ferengi design. Our mission is... 2 INT. ENTERPRISE - MAIN BRIDGE At their regular stations, intent upon the chase, are PICARD, RIKER, TROI, DATA, GEORDI, TASHA and WORF. PICARD (V.O.) (continuing) ... to intercept and recover a T-9 energy converter which the Ferengi stole from an unmanned monitor post on Gamma Tauri IV -- a theft which automatic scanners recorded, providing us... 3 ANGLE ON VIEWSCREEN (OPTICAL) Part of the vast galaxy STARFIELD, streaking by as the Enterprise plummets through in high warp. A computer targeting CIRCLE silently searches the screen. PICARD (V.O.) (continuing) ... with the long awaited opportunity to make close contact with a Ferengi vessel. If we succeed in this chase, it will be Starfleet's first look at a life form... which discounting rumor, we know almost nothing about. STAR TREK: "The Last Outpost" - 8/7/87 - TEASER 2. 3 CONTINUED: The circle stops, brightens, BEEPS -- a signal "on target." 4 EMPHASIZING PICARD RIKER There she is! PICARD Enlarge. 5 ANGLE INCLUDING MAIN VIEWER (OPTICAL) The circle becomes a magnifier, homing in on a non-moving PINPOINT OF LIGHT, as the outside scene continues to streak. PICARD What is their course? 6 INTERCUT PRINCIPALS AND VIEWER (OPTICAL) All eyes are intent on the viewscreen. Considerable excitement on the bridge in anticipation of seeing the Ferengi vessel. Suddenly the growing pinpoint veers sharply left. GEORDI They are now angling through that solar system, Captain. PICARD Identify. DATA Listed as Delphi Ardu, sir. Eleven planets, unexplored. RIKER Stay with them, La Forge. The Enterprise readjusts, and the starfield shifts to the right, placing its target back "on center." Another BEEP as that occurs. TASHA Sensors read a power surge on their last maneuver, Captain. STAR TREK: "The Last Outpost" - 8/7/87 - TEASER 3. 6 CONTINUED: GEORDI They are dropping to sub-warp speed... ! PICARD (quickly) Reduce to impulse power... ! 7 EXT. SPACE - THE ENTERPRISE (OPTICAL) showing WARP TO SUBWARP EFFECT. 8 INT. MAIN BRIDGE - INTERCUT PRINCIPALS AND VIEWER (OPTICAL) The Ferengi vessel becoming LARGER, but its shape and details still undefined. TASHA Sensor fluctuations in the energy readings from it, Captain. DATA Possibility: a malfunction in their engines, sir. GEORDI Breaks my heart. WORF In visual range, Captain. PICARD Fully enlarge! On screen APPEARS the FERENGI STARSHIP: a strange horseshoe crab-like design, a bit smaller than the Enterprise. The alien vessel is now passing near a CLOUDED PLANET. GEORDI Hello, stranger! PICARD Very impressive design. From their reaction, the Bridge Crew realize this is an historic moment. STAR TREK: "The Last Outpost" - 8/7/87 - TEASER 4. 8 CONTINUED: RIKER Anything on that design, Data? DATA Nothing specific, sir. As you know, Ferengi technology is estimated to be generally equal to our own... PICARD Which does not mean identical, however... DATA Correct, sir. We are no doubt advanced in some areas, they in others... GEORDI (interrupts) They show another power surge, sir. Then from the Ferengi starcraft, an electric-wave ARC RIPPLES out and back from the trailing sides. It is something like a spacebourne stingray. WORF They are firing on us! The viewscreen abruptly FLARES as the neon-bright arc hits the Enterprise's forward quarter! (OPTICAL) All the Bridge lights dim and come back up from the crackling pulse attack! PICARD Damage report! TASHA Shields holding! DATA Mostly electromagnetic, sir. Fusion generator and batteries down by... GEORDI (interrupts) Our impulse engines are surging! WORF They're firing again. And then ANOTHER ARC hits! A second FLARE! (OPTICAL) STAR TREK: "The Last Outpost" - 8/7/87 - TEASER 5. 8 CONTINUED: (2) TASHA Deflector shield power weakening, Captain. (looks up) Phasers ready, sir. Photon torpedoes ready... RIKER Shall we return their fire, sir... ? PICARD Negative, Number One. They are reacting to close pursuit. (to Geordi) Fall back a bit but stay with them. On the viewer, the Ferengi starship now swivels toward the Enterprise, pointing a snakehead-like prow in our direction. DATA They are slowing too, sir. TASHA They may be turning to fight! PICARD Open hailing freq... (to Geordi) Why are we gaining on them? Don't anticipate... GEORDI I'm not, sir! Something's wrong... DATA Sir, something is dragging us forward. PICARD Yes, I read it, too. Lieutenant Yar, what do your sensors show? TASHA Not certain, sir. I'm getting very confusing readings. 9 EXT. SPACE - ENTERPRISE AND FERENGI STARSHIP (OPTICAL) Both spacecraft are moving toward adjacent orbits of the clouded planet. STAR TREK: "The Last Outpost" - 8/7/87 - TEASER 6. 10 INT. MAIN BRIDGE - INTERCUTTING MAIN VIEWER (OPTICAL) On the viewscreen, the planet plus the Ferengi vessel even closer now. DATA Captain, this shouldn't be. Our ship's power systems are failing! TASHA Deflector shields failing, phasers going inoperative, sir... GEORDI Something is completely immobilizing us, Captain! WORF Immobilized by the damn Ferengi?! PICARD I need more information! Identify what they are using! 11 EXT. SPACE - ENTERPRISE AND FERENGI VESSEL (OPTICAL)) in orbit of the planet, now locked together by that "something." 12 INT. MAIN BRIDGE - EMPHASIZING PICARD (OPTICAL) all his bridge crew intently seeking an answer. RIKER Obviously we've underestimated their technology, Captain... PICARD (nods, rises; alarmed) Considerably. It appears the Ferengi have us right where they want us -- in their sights. CAMERA TIGHTENS PAST our troubled command team to the Main Viewscreen, on which the mysterious Ferengi starship challenges the Enterprise, floating under the murky globe above, as we: FADE OUT. END OF TEASER STAR TREK: "The Last Outpost" - 8/7/87 - ACT ONE 7. ACT ONE FADE IN: 13 EXT. SPACE - ENTERPRISE AND FERENGI STARSHIP (OPTICAL) Locked in adjacent orbit of the nearby clouded planet. 14 INT. ENTERPRISE - MAIN BRIDGE as the professionals go about their business. Picard turns to Tasha: PICARD Are we searching all frequencies? Any sign of any kind of message? TASHA Negative, sir. PICARD Weapon report, Lieutenant Worf. WORF I have phasers and torpedoes armed, but I show insufficient power to fire them. PICARD Engineering, give me status on power recovery. (waits; no answer) Engineering, come in. (beat) Why aren't they answering? (waits; turns to Geordi) Go below, Lieutenant. Get me a full report from Engineering. GEORDI Aye, sir. Geordi EXITS to the turbolift, as Riker studies the viewer. STAR TREK: "The Last Outpost" - 8/7/87 - ACT ONE 8. 14 CONTINUED: RIKER (to Picard) It seems impossible they could be draining all power from all systems. Troi is still facing the viewer, her face a picture of concentration, of mental penetration. PICARD Counselor? TROI I'm sensing nothing from them Captain. Which could mean they can shield their thoughts and emotions from others. PICARD Which still makes it our move. TROI Sir, they may know as little about us as we do about them. RIKER Except that they know they've got us in deep trouble. PICARD If so, the question becomes how will they use that knowledge? (to Data) Is there any hard information on them in any file, Data? DATA None, sir. Only hearsay and thirdhand reports, most of which conflict. RIKER Which rumors do not conflict? DATA That the Ferengi are... well, the best description may be "traders." PICARD What kind of "traders"? STAR TREK: "The Last Outpost" - 8/7/87 - ACT ONE 9. 14 CONTINUED: (2) DATA A more accurate comparison modern scholars have drawn from Earth history cites the ocean-going "Yankee Traders" of eighteenth and nineteenth century America, sir. RIKER From the history of my forebears? "Yankee Traders?" DATA (nods) Who sail, in this case the galaxy, in search of mercantile and territorial opportunity. RIKER And are those scholars saying the Ferengi may not be too different from us? DATA Hardly, sir. I believe this analogy refers to the nefarious capitalist manner in which the Ferengi are known to conduct their affairs of commerce. (thought) "Never give a sucker an even break." Picard and Riker exchange puzzled looks. PICARD And what does that mean, Data? DATA I'm not sure, sir. That entry was only identified as "slang", terms or expressions which typify everyday language of... PICARD I know what slang is, Data. I just haven't heard of that particular saying. RIKER But "Yankee Traders"... (smile) I like the sound of that. Has a nice historical ring to it. STAR TREK: "The Last Outpost" - 8/7/87 - ACT ONE 10. 14 CONTINUED: (3) PICARD (impatient) Engineering? (no answer; to Riker) Join La Forge "down below", Number One. Without our warp capacity, we're just one big floating target. RIKER Aye, sir. Riker's OFF to the turbolift, as Picard studies the viewer. PICARD (to Data) What other pertinent meaning do you draw from this analogy, "Yankee Traders?" DATA Well, I doubt if they wear red, white and blue, sir. Or look anything like Uncle Sam. Except for Picard, Data meets uncomprehending stares. (That allusion dates too far back from the twenty-fourth century.) WORF Uncle who? TASHA What have bright, primal colors got to do with it? PICARD Yes, I understand the allusion. (nods) Colors that once identified nations during the time when they competed against each other. Red, white and blue for the United States... (muses) Whereas the French oddly used the same colors in the order of blue, white, and red... DATA ... and the German nation black, red and gold; the Italians green, white and red; the British... STAR TREK: "The Last Outpost" - 8/7/87 - ACT ONE 11. 14 CONTINUED: (4) PICARD (annoyed) Enough, Data! DATA Sir, it was you who... PICARD (snaps) We're discussing the Ferengi, Data! (slow burn) Mon Dieu, I wish I knew what they will do next... DATA Given what is occurring to our vessel, Captain, their weapons could be vastly superior to ours. Picard has to fight off irritation again. PICARD Yes, Data. That seems a reasonable assumption. (louder) Engineering?! But Picard is still without an answer. 14A INT. ENTERPRISE - ENGINE ROOM Riker, Geordi and TWO ENGINEERS anguish over the control board. RIKER Bottom line, La Forge. GEORDI Not good, sir. The Ferengi forcefield that holds this ship compensates... (taps board) Almost as fast as we increase power. RIKER Almost? Using his hands as a demonstration, Geordi tries to explain the "isometric" problem of the forcefield. STAR TREK: "The Last Outpost" - 8/7/87 - ACT ONE 12. 14A CONTINUED: GEORDI There's a point-three-hundred, seventy-two millisecond delay between use of our power and the neutralizing counter-force of the Ferengi... (stumped) We push and they push back in equal force, sir. RIKER (idea) And what is our acceleration delay between slow-reverse impulse and top warp speed? GEORDI Point-three-hundred millisecond. (big smile) I know what you're thinking. Shift down and then blow hard into warp nine, yes? Come back fighting, whooey! RIKER Can we do it, Geordi? GEORDI Ask me after it's done, sir. (to Engineers) I want a slow reverse-power drop-off over five minutes... (to Riker) We'll show them what this baby can do, sir. RIKER Give me everything you've got. GEORDI Aye, aye, sir. At that, Riker EXITS, as CAMERA TIGHTENS on Geordi. 14B INT. ENTERPRISE MAIN BRIDGE Picard studies the Ferengi vessel, as Riker details the plan. STAR TREK: "The Last Outpost" - 8/7/87 - ACT ONE 13. 14B CONTINUED: RIKER ... and with a sudden, abrupt power surge to high warp speed, Captain, I believe we can break loose from the Ferengi forcefield. PICARD I wish I knew how they are doing this to us. RIKER I wonder what they're thinking over there. PICARD That's easy. They're wondering what we are thinking... and what we might do next. WORF I say fight, sir. There is nothing shameful in falling before a superior enemy. Geordi ENTERS the Bridge from the turbolift. PICARD (thin smile at Worf) And nothing shameful about a strategic retreat, either. GEORDI All systems ready, Captain. And communication's restored to Engineering. PICARD Excellent, La Forge. (to Riker) Let's throw them off guard. (turning) Lieutenant Yar. Open hailing frequencies. TASHA Hailing frequencies open, sir. PICARD At least, I won't begin with weakness. (MORE) STAR TREK: "The Last Outpost" - 8/7/87 - ACT ONE 14. 14B CONTINUED: (2) PICARD (Cont'd) (looking up; voice AMPLIFIED) Attention Ferengi starship! This is Captain Jean-Luc Picard of the USS Enterprise. In the name of the United Federation of Planets, I demand you return the T-9 energy converter you removed from Gamma Tauri IV. (to Tasha; normal voice) Send in all language forms. TASHA All language forms, sir. PICARD Sometimes, Riker, the best way to win a fight is not to be there. RIKER Yes, sir. "He will triumph who knows when to fight and when not to fight." PICARD Glad the Academy still teaches the strategy of Sun Tzu... (to Geordi) Let's hope that delay proves out, La Forge. GEORDI (nods) Point-three-hundred milliseconds, sir. PICARD We'll blast full power into warp nine. Ready? GEORDI All systems ready, Captain. PICARD Countdown to three. Stand by on phasers. (firm) One. Set warp to nine. (everyone tenses) Two. Divert shield power to main engines... (they brace) Three! STAR TREK: "The Last Outpost" - 8/7/87 - ACT ONE 15. 14B CONTINUED: (3) With the massive jolt of power let go from the combined forcefield energy-synergy of the Enterprise, all the bridge lights FLARE wildly! But other than a momentary tremble, Starfleet's finest remains in place... the Ferengi vessel still on the viewer, the planet above. PICARD (softly) Merde. (troubled) Shields up. For a defeated beat, the crew resume their vigil. 14C ANGLES ON COMPUTER DISPLAYS All the computers go crazy, violently ALIVE in a flood of flashing information "read!" 14D BACK TO SCENE DATA Captain? I think you better see this... PICARD (moving to Data) What's wrong? DATA In my opinion, someone is reading every file, every "bit" of information stored in the Enterprise memory banks... GEORDI (impressed) They can do that? DATA And more, perhaps. A pall of defeat darkens the room. PICARD (into Com) Doctor Crusher to the bridge. (to entire bridge) Conference evaluation. Picard stands and the Main Bridge crew begins to MOVE OFF. STAR TREK: "The Last Outpost" - 8/7/87 - ACT ONE 16. 14D CONTINUED: TROI If I may recommend something, Captain, with our attention on the Ferengi vessel, we have ignored the planet. 15 ANGLE INCLUDING VIEWER (OPTICAL) Picard CROSSING Bridge, checks the Main Viewer on which the cloud shrouded planet is prominent, although not particularly unusual from this perspective. Picard glances there, then: PICARD Consult the charts on this planet, Data. See what we have on it in the library. Picard leads the way OFF to the Conference Room. 16 INT. CONFERENCE ROOM as Picard faces Riker, Beverly, Troi, Geordi, Tasha and Worf. BEVERLY No response on hailing frequencies? PICARD We had no response. (including the others) So, while we still have some power left, it is time for difficult decisions. (thin smile) While we cannot have a democracy aboard, I value your considered opinions. Tasha is the first to look up. TASHA I say put all available power into a full-out combined phaser and photon torpedo salvo. Destroy their ability to sustain this forcefield, sir. WORF Yes! Hit them hard and hit them fast. STAR TREK: "The Last Outpost" - 8/7/87 - ACT ONE 17. 16 CONTINUED: PICARD Impractical and provocative. Assuming even that we have the power to support that tactic. TASHA But Captain, firing on us was not an act of war? TROI The facts are that the Ferengi did fire at us, but we were chasing them. Since then, they've only searched our computers, trying to learn who and what we are. PICARD Your point, Counselor? TROI Let's talk to them. PICARD That has been tried; no response. TROI But did we tell them anything they wanted to hear? There's not a person present who doesn't know the implication of that statement. PICARD Any other observations? Picard waits; there are none. PICARD (continuing) Thank you all for your advice and counsel. Now if you will excuse me, I'd like to be left alone with Commander Riker. All his Officers EXIT the Conference Room, except Riker. PICARD As my first officer, I assume you fully realize our situation. Although the final decision must be mine, this is your opportunity to speak your mind. STAR TREK: "The Last Outpost" - 8/7/87 - ACT ONE 18. 16 CONTINUED: (2) RIKER I believe we have covered all available alternatives, Captain, but... (supportive) Are there any other options you wish to analyze? PICARD The only one left needs no conversation, Number One. And it is the only one we must avoid. RIKER Sir? PICARD Total annihilation. And Riker nods understandingly, EXITS, leaving Picard with the most difficult decision of his Starfleet career, perhaps his last.... 17 INT. MAIN BRIDGE All crew are at their stations, expectant -- the Ferengi menace still commanding the viewscreen. A beat, then Picard ENTERS, going to his chair. PICARD Open hailing frequencies. DATA Open, Captain. PICARD (a pregnant beat) Attention, Ferengi starship! This is Captain Picard. It is obvious we have a situation here that needs resolving... And we are willing to do whatever is reasonable and necessary. I would like... I would appreciate... your presenting your terms to us. STAR TREK: "The Last Outpost" - 8/7/87 - ACT ONE 19. 17 CONTINUED: The unspeakable spoken, as CAMERA TIGHTENS on Picard's grim visage... the return sub-space channel empty save for static, as we: FADE OUT. END OF ACT ONE STAR TREK: "The Last Outpost" - 8/7/87 - ACT TWO 20. ACT TWO FADE IN: 18 EXT. SPACE - THE ENTERPRISE (OPTICAL) still locked together with the silent Ferengi starship, near the mysterious murky globe. PICARD (V.O.) Captain's log, stardate 41194.8. It is with a heavy heart that I have offered to meet... 19 EXT. SPACE - CLOSE ON FERENGI STARSHIP (OPTICAL) enigmatic, baffling and also immobile. PICARD (V.O.) (continuing) ... whatever reasonable and necessary terms are demanded by the Ferengi. I fear for my people and my vessel in the event the unknown Ferengi ask the unreasonable. How... 20 INT. ENTERPRISE - MAIN BRIDGE all waiting to hear from the unknown Ferengi. PICARD (V.O.) (continuing) ... can I oppose even unreasonable demands? RIKER It's moving, sir. 21 ANGLE ON MAIN VIEWER - FERENGI STARSHIP (OPTICAL) The snakehead-like prow's pushing out from the ship body. WORF (V.O.) We ask to surrender and now they fire on us? STAR TREK: "The Last Outpost" - 8/7/87 - ACT TWO 21. 22 INTERCUTTING - BRIDGE REGULARS AND MAIN VIEWERS (OPTICAL) as our Bridge Crew react. TASHA Ready torpedoes, sir? There's enough power for a couple of them. PICARD Ready. But hold at ready, Lieutenant. (to Data) Open hailing frequencies. DATA Hailing frequencies open, sir. The Ferengi ship now extends gun-like arms from either side of the prow... PICARD Ferengi vessel, we are awaiting your response. They await an answer, get none. TASHA Suggest first strike, sir. Our shields now only have sixty-three seconds of power available before lowering. WORF If the Ferengi ship's sensors can read us, sir, they will be waiting until we are most vulnerable... RIKER Captain, I'm afraid I agree. Since they haven't bothered to answer us... PICARD (interrupting; quiet voiced) I'll wait a bit more, Number One. Picard is like an old war dog at work for peace. The suspense on the bridge is electric... TASHA Fifty seconds... STAR TREK: "The Last Outpost" - 8/7/87 - ACT TWO 22. 22 CONTINUED: PICARD Patience. Patience... At that moment, the sub-space channel CRACKLES loudly, the Ferengi accent alien, clipped, arrogant. TAAR'S COM VOICE The quicker we can come to terms, the better, NCC 1701-D. There's no visual sent, but Picard is relieved. PICARD Who is speaking? TAAR'S COM VOICE I am Taar. DaiMon of the Ferengi. You wished to discuss surrender, Captain Picard? PICARD What I actually said, DaiMon, is... TAAR'S COM VOICE (interrupting) UNCONDITIONAL... The Bridge reverberates with Taar's booming voice, shattering every last hope. TAAR'S COM VOICE (continuing; a difficult beat) ... Surrender, I warn you, is... (emphatic) Totally unacceptable!! (desperate but proud) We will die to the last one of us before such dishonor! Nobody can believe their ears! Picard shares a look with Riker and Troi, understanding now the incredible thing that has happened. Picard turns quickly to Tasha, makes a hand/slash signal. In response, Tasha touches her panel. TASHA Hailing frequency off, sir. Now WE SEE Picard at his command best as he gives a series of orders. 18:[1,#b] STAR TREK: "The Last Outpost" - 8/7/87 - ACT TWO 23. 22 CONTINUED: (2) PICARD (to Riker) Something has seized their ship too. They're in the same predicament as us. (to Geordi) Launch a sensor probe. Set it to search for the source of this "something" that's holding us both. (to Tasha) Back to hailing fequencies, fast. (Com technique) ... and so I regret DaiMon Taar that I can no longer negotiate unless it is conducted visually. TAAR'S COM VOICE (beat; concerned) Your complete message not received, Enterprise. But visual communication is against our custom. PICARD (into Com) And it is against Starfleet orders to accept a surrender otherwise. Do you withdraw your surrender offer? A long delay -- enough time for the Enterprise Crew to become nervous. Then: TAAR'S COM VOICE You give us no choice, Enterprise. May we have a visual on you too? 23 EMPHASIZING MAIN VIEWER (OPTICAL) as Picard answers on Com, signaling Troi to set the viewscreen accordingly. PICARD (into Com) Agreed, DaiMon Taar. You should be able to view us now. (waits) Do you have us on your screen? TAAR'S COM VOICE We... are now viewing you. STAR TREK: "The Last Outpost" - 8/7/87 - ACT TWO 24. 24 CLOSE ON MAIN VIEWER The MAIN VIEWER FLICKERS and AN IMAGE OF DAIMON TAAR'S FERENGI FACE comes into sight -- large, menacing, lens-twisted and very brightly lit. 25 WIDER ANGLE ON MAIN BRIDGE giving reactions of our principals. TAAR'S COM VOICE I do not know how your twisted alien culture has paralyzed our vessel but I concede your 'Enterprise' is superior. (snaps) We will return your worthless T-9 device and we offer the life of our second officers as required by the Ferengi code. The Enterprise crew does not give themselves away with cheers, but the relief is evident. DATA I am relieved we have no such code involving our second officers. TAAR (V.O.) Is this to your satisfaction, Picard Captain? PICARD Your offer may be inadequate, but I will discuss it with my staff. Stand by for further communications. The CRACKLE ends, the Ferengi transmission complete. 26 INT. OBSERVATION LOUNGE It is a place dominated by a viewing screen which is flanked by computer panels. TWO TEEN BOYS are inspecting the starship reliefs. They see Picard coming, make their hasty EXIT as the bridge personnel ENTER... leaving a plaything near the viewscreen, a Chinese finger PUZZLE. STAR TREK: "The Last Outpost" - 8/7/87 - ACT TWO 25. 26 CONTINUED: RIKER (to the Teens on ENTERING) Matthews! Pola! You know this area is off-limits. (as Boys LEAVE) Boys will be boys, Captain. Picard gives Riker a withering look at this statement. Data and Geordi also ENTER. PICARD (to Geordi) Have you launched the probe? GEORDI Yes, sir. We'll get readings soon. PICARD (to Geordi) If we're not holding the Ferengi and they're not holding us... then who the hell is? (to Data) Next, you wanted to show us something? DATA As requested, Captain, library-computer information on this planet. 27 ANGLE EMPHASIZING DATA AND VIEWSCREEN (OPTICAL) Data has picked up the finger-puzzle game, plays with it abstractly, as: DATA It has been charted only, from long range scans. It is Class M, but with no indications of life forms, sentient or otherwise. However, you may find this of interest... Data touches a panel and on the screen APPEARS AN IMAGE OF A HOLOGRAPHIC STAR MAP with a huge ball of artificial connecting lines. An INCOMPREHENSIBLE ALIEN LEGEND APPEARS TOO. STAR TREK: "The Last Outpost" - 8/7/87 - ACT TWO 26. 27 CONTINUED: DATA (continuing) Resolving it into our language... Data touches a control and an unusual SYMBOL APPEARS, together, with the words "TKON EMPIRE." PICARD A space federation of some sort. But I've never heard the word "Tkon." DATA (distracted by stuck finger) Understandable. It has been extinct six hundred thousand of... of our years. (back to viewer; back to finger problem) According to... legend, these planets... were outposts... of that empire... Data has put his opposing finger from his other hand into the open puzzle end... and pulls it tight, trapping himself. Another snap or two finds him quite ensnared. PICARD Data. What are you doing? DATA Apologies, Captain. I seem to have reached an odd functional impass. I am, ah... (futile tug) Stuck. PICARD Then get unstuck and continue your briefing. DATA Yes, sir. That is what I am trying to do... (no go again) But the solution eludes me. GEORDI (laughs) My hero. Picard reaches over, grabs Data's hands in his own and pushes in... releasing Data's trapped fingers. STAR TREK: "The Last Outpost" - 8/7/87 - ACT TWO 27. 27 CONTINUED: (2) PICARD Continue, Commander. Now! DATA (eyeing the puzzle) Intriguing. (then quickly indicating viewscreen) Again, only legend, but it describes the Empire as impossibly huge and powerful. RIKER (eyeing viewscreen) Surrounded by stars whose planets formed its defensive system? DATA Correct, sir. Outposts. And the planet below was possibly one of them... Interrupted by the Bos'n SIGNAL, followed by: TASHA'S COM VOICE Excuse the interruption, Captain, but this may be worth it. We're now receiving a signal from the probe. PICARD We'll take it here, please. The VIEWSCREEN FLICKERS, BECOMES AN IMAGE SHOWING PLANET, FERENGI VESSEL, AND THE ENTERPRISE. WAVY, PULSATING, EERIE-GREEN CURVLINEAR LINES reach up mushroom-like from a point on the planet surface -- up and around the two space vessels. GEORDI Incredible! RIKER That's our mysterious "something," Captain. It is a forcefield of some kind... PICARD Reaching up from the planet surface. What enormous power! (to Data) How does the legend describe the end of the Tkon Empire? STAR TREK: "The Last Outpost" - 8/7/87 - ACT TWO 28. 27 CONTINUED: (3) DATA By their Sun going supernova, sir. PICARD Could this planet have escaped that? 28 ANOTHER ANGLE Data touches the panel and VIEWER IMAGE CHANGES BACK TO THE TKON EMPIRE CHART. He indicates a distant one of the surrounding stars. DATA This planet, Gamma Tauri IV, could have been the most distant outpost, sir, in theory. But since it shows no life form readings... PICARD (to Riker) We'll have to look it over, Number One. Stand by with an away team. RIKER (stands) And if the Ferengi also realize the forcefield emanates from the planet, sir? PICARD (considers it) That's a complication. We may have to ask them to join us in this. GEORDI (surprised) Team up with the Ferengi, sir? PICARD We were ordered to learn what we can about them. Do you know of a better way than that? FADE OUT: END OF ACT TWO STAR TREK: "The Last Outpost" - 8/7/87 - ACT THREE 29. ACT THREE FADE IN: 29 EXT. SPACE - ENTERPRISE AND FERENGI VESSEL (OPTICAL) PICARD (V.O.) Captain's log, supplemental. In orbit of the mysterious planet Gamma Tauri IV in the Delphi Ardu star system, whose unexplained forcefield has seized us with a power almost beyond imagination. If... 30 INT. ENTERPRISE MAIN BRIDGE - WIDE ANGLE INCLUDING VIEWER (OPTICAL) The viewer carries an IMAGE of the planet. The bridge crew is tense, awaiting communications with the Ferengi. PICARD (V.O.) (continuing) ... there is a solution to this, it almost certainly will involve cooperation from the Ferengi... a life form which seems as unknown and mysterious as the planet we orbit. 31 ANGLE INCLUDING TASHA as she looks from the panel to the Captain. TASHA Ship's power drain is critical, Captain. I must now shut down our shields to maintain life support systems. PICARD Understood, Lieutenant. Open hailing frequencies. TASHA (touching controls) Hailing frequencies open, sir. PICARD Ferengi vessel from Enterprise, this is Captain Picard. Come in. STAR TREK: "The Last Outpost" - 8/7/87 - ACT THREE 30. 32 ANGLES INCLUDING VIEWER (OPTICAL) as Main Viewer ripples into IMAGE OF THE FACE OF DAIMON TAAR again -- and it is still lens-twisted, appearing as large and foreboding as before. He looks up at the screen and then: TAAR Your alien images again shock us. PICARD DaiMon Tarr, regarding your surrender to us, the facts are somewhat different... TAAR (interrupting; angrily) Our own probe has already shown us your trickery, hu-man. (emphatic) We withdraw our surrender. Picard has exchanged a look with Riker. He nods toward the viewer: PICARD Agreed, DaiMon. May this may be a far more productive relationship. TAAR I prefer a profitable one, hu-man. DATA (quietly, toward Picard) "Yankee Traders." TAAR (bristling) Explain. What means this "yangeetraters"? GEORDI He heard that? Picard gives Data an irritated look, searches for an answer. PICARD It... acknowledges your interest in profit, DaiMon Taar. Is that an incorrect assumption? TAAR We seek only what is equitable. (angrily) What do you seek? Why did you begin by attacking us? STAR TREK: "The Last Outpost" - 8/7/87 - ACT THREE 31. 32 CONTINUED: PICARD We did not attack. We gave chase in order to recover a Federation-owned energy device which... TAAR (interrupting) ... which we know is ours. Your barbarous Federation chose to place it on one of our planets! PICARD On the contrary, Gamma Tauri IV is recognized by all civilized members of... TAAR (outraged) The Ferengi are not uncivilized, hu-man! Is that what you suggest?! Picard takes a breath, this is not going well. PICARD All I am trying to say is you have taken a device clearly not your own from... TAAR (incredulous) Are you now calling us thieves?! Picard shifts to a different tack, to let off Ferengi steam. PICARD Certainly not. And I have no wish to argue issues of territory or property, when our mutual problem remains. Like it or not... (firm) We are both trapped by the power draining forcefield of this planet. TAAR (lets up) On that matter, there can be no argument. PICARD Might I propose a swap? STAR TREK: "The Last Outpost" - 8/7/87 - ACT THREE 32. 32 CONTINUED: (2) Taar's face grimaces at the foul-sounding new word. TAAR And... what is a "szwop"? PICARD An exchange, a trade... TAAR Yes, trade, hu-man. What is your offer? Picard's getting somewhere, and Troi acknowledges the progress with a smile to her captain. PICARD We will give you what we know about the planet, and in trade, you will give us your information. TAAR Ridiculous. How will we know you have not cheated us? PICARD We must trust each other, Taar. Tarr responds with a grating laugh at this idea. TAAR Amusing, hu-man. But impractical. PICARD Then may I propose we both cooperate in a joint examination of the planet surface? TAAR And what profit is in this, Picard Captain? PICARD The profit, DaiMon Tarr, lies in saving all our lives. Taar considers a beat, then answers, a deal being done. TAAR We will agree to this. But I warn you now, any further trickery on your part will be met with no mercy. Understood? STAR TREK: "The Last Outpost" - 8/7/87 - ACT THREE 33. 32 CONTINUED: (3) PICARD Understood. (onward) If you care to join us, we have a well-proven transporter device which... TAAR We have a matter-energy device of our own. We will beam a science team of three to whatever coordinates you propose. PICARD Excellent. We will transmit that information shortly. Enterprise out. Picard nods at Tasha. TASHA Hailing frequencies off. The Main Viewer has returned to an image of the Ferengi vessel and the planet. PICARD I'll log that as "promising," at least. RIKER I wonder, Captain. Ordinarily, I don't believe in distrust at first sight... but this may be an exception. DATA Especially in view of the fact the image he transmitted was likely distorted somehow, sir. TROI I felt the same thing, Captain. He was hiding something. RIKER (stands) With this power drain I see no reason to delay, sir. (looks around) I'd like some additional help on this. Can you spare Worf? STAR TREK: "The Last Outpost" - 8/7/87 - ACT THREE 34. 32 CONTINUED: (4) PICARD (nods) Take him. And be careful, Number One. Riker CROSSES toward the turbolift, FOLLOWED by Data, Geordi, Tasha and Worf. Their Bridge positions are immediately filled. 33 INT. TRANSPORTER ROOM A strong away team of five: Riker, Data, Tasha, Geordi and Worf. All are armed with phasers, including a couple of large ones, plus a couple of tricorders. They step onto the "pads." TRANSPORTER CHIEF With this power drain, we may have trouble communicating with you, sir. RIKER Understood. Anything else? TRANSPORTER CHIEF (reluctant) Due to this forcefield, there is presently no way... to beam you back, sir. GEORDI You had to ask. RIKER Understood. (checking the others, then) Energize! WE SEE the TRANSPORTER EFFECT. 34 EXT. CLOUDED PLANET - SURFACE Dimly lit, a twilight world of overcast, turbulent skies hanging heavily over a strange landscape of coral-like "trees." LIGHTNING explodes above, as a dull THUNDER echoes through this eerie labyrinth. In a relatively clear area, Riker suddenly materializes... alone! He's woozy, but in one piece. He looks around, perplexed, worried. STAR TREK: "The Last Outpost" - 8/7/87 - ACT THREE 35. 34 CONTINUED: RIKER Tasha? Data? Geordi? Worf?! No answer. Riker scrambles toward a nearby rise, through the "forest," and up the incline... reaching the top. 35 CLOSE - RIKER He surveys the surrounding area, with no luck. 36 RIKER'S POV - PLANET SURFACE Landscape. No sign of anything lifelike. 37 BACK TO SCENE More THUNDER O.S. RIKER Anybody?! DATA Very intriguing, sir. 38 WIDER ANGLE - TO INCLUDE DATA atop one of the coral "trees," as the curious android examines it. RIKER What are you doing up there? DATA (climbs down) I assume a problem of program coordinates due to the energy field around the ship, sir. (glances around) Are we alone? RIKER Unfortunately. (indicates trees) What do you make of these? DATA Crystalline, quite inert. "Nothing to write home about." STAR TREK: "The Last Outpost" - 8/7/87 - ACT THREE 36. 38 CONTINUED: RIKER (delayed take) Excuse me? DATA That is slang, sir. (concern) I did use it correctly, did I not? RIKER (why me?) Let's find the others... And they MOVE OFF. 39 EXT. MORE PLANET SURFACE A tangled mass of interlocking "limbs," shimmering in the cloudy light. WE HEAR our people before we see them. RIKER (V.O) ... they can't be too far. DATA (V.O.) Actually, the forces responsible for this effect would create a random... As CAMERA ANGLES DOWN, WE SEE Riker crawling under a limb, and Data in glimpses just behind him. DATA (continuing) ... transporter distribution inversely proportional to the density of... RIKER Who's that? DATA What? Riker squats, peering through the forest ahead. RIKER That! Data crawls forward to get a look where Riker is pointing. STAR TREK: "The Last Outpost" - 8/7/87 - ACT THREE 37. 40 DATA'S AND RIKER'S POV It's Geordi! But he's inverted, limply hanging upside down from a higher limb, one foot firmly lodged in a crook... and not moving. RIKER/DATA (V.O) Geordi! 41 BACK TO SCENE With difficulty, Riker and Data make their way to their hapless crewmember. Geordi is motionless, maybe dead. Riker reaches through the tangle. RIKER Geordi?! Are you conscious? A beat, then Geordi smiles. Data runs a tricorder nearby. GEORDI Do I look conscious? RIKER No. What are you doing? GEORDI Trying to relax, sir. My foot's caught... (points up) Up there. I materialized upside down about ten meters above the surface. DATA Tricorder is useless here, sir. Communications are gone, too. Riker and Data are now in a position to attempt rescue, as they brace Geordi up. THUNDER AND LIGHTNING AGAIN O.S. DATA (continuing; to Geordi) It is fortunate you did not break anyth... GEORDI Who's that?! At that, both Riker and Data turn to see: STAR TREK: "The Last Outpost" - 8/7/87 - ACT THREE 38. 42 POV (OPTICAL) Backlit by LIGHTNING, THREE SMALL, HAIRLESS HUMANOIDS with protruding cupped ears, dressed in strange clothing. They are armed with odd whip-like weapons. RIKER (V.O.) Who are you? At that, the Leader snaps his whip toward them, unleashing a rippling electra-plasmic WAVE that races TOWARD CAMERA (OPTICAL). 43 CLOSE - OUR TEAM Riker, Data and lucky-day Geordi are whacked with the WAVE all together... putting Geordi back to sleep. Data falls unconscious, too. Riker fights it but is hit again, and falls, unconscious. FADE OUT. END OF ACT THREE STAR TREK: "The Last Outpost" - 8/7/87 - ACT FOUR 39. ACT FOUR FADE IN: 44 EXT. SPACE - ENTERPRISE AND FERENGI STARSHIP (OPTICAL) United in orbit by the force which still holds them helpless. PICARD (V.O.) Captain's log, supplemental. It is now six hours since our away team beamed down to the planet surface. On the Enterprise... 45 EXT. SPACE - CLOSE ON ENTERPRISE (OPTICAL) showing its LIGHTS DIMMING as unnecessary power is conserved. PICARD (V.O.) (continuing) ... our condition is rapidly worsening. Ordinarily, with reserve power alone, we could maintain life support for several months. But the force holding us... 46 INT. ENTERPRISE - MONTAGE Various SHOTS REVEAL the exhausted and weakening crew still at their stations... Beverly is struggling to aid the stricken. She passes Picard who is doing the same. PICARD (V.O.) (continuing) ... has closed down all engines and is draining our reserve power too... Equally impossible, our oxygen level is also dropping. 47 ANGLE ON TROI bringing an armload of silvery thermal blankets onto the bridge, distributing. She passes the captain. TROI It's getting much... (stops; out of breath) ... much colder, sir. STAR TREK: "The Last Outpost" - 8/7/87 - ACT FOUR 40. 47 CONTINUED: Beverly ENTERS SHOT. PICARD How far down is it likely to go? BEVERLY A lot. Even in orbital space it gets past minus two hundred degrees. TROI We won't have to worry past... (tries to smile) ... minus seventy or so. PICARD (shivers) Feels like that right now. 48 EXT. PLANET SURFACE - CLOSE ON RIKER As he begins groggily coming back to consciousness, a small grown HAND WITH BLUE COLORED NAILS roughly rips Riker's Starfleet communicator symbol from his uniform. 49 RIKER AND CAPTOR Sitting opposite Riker on a crystalline rock is a little Ferengi humanoid, LETEK, leader of this group. His eyes "dart" around birdlike as he studies the Starfleet insignia just taken from Riker. He is fine-boned, small -- looking far different and less menacing than the image transmitted to the Enterprise Main Viewer. 50 WIDER ANGLE Two other Ferengi MOVE INTO SCENE, puffing as they drag the heavy weight of Worf into the clearing to be laid out alongside Geordi and Data. They are KAYRON and MORDOC. At this time, Riker becomes sufficiently conscious to groan. LETEK If he moves, kill him. MORDOC Letek, has what we've done broken our agreement with their captain? LETEK We will accuse the hu-mans of preparing to ambush us. It will be our word against theirs and who is more trustworthy, Mordoc? STAR TREK: "The Last Outpost" - 8/7/87 - ACT FOUR 41. 51 CLOSE ON LETEK Beady-eyed and marginally blind, this dominant Ferengi male examines his booty... holding it close-up because of Ferengi weak eyesight. LETEK (to himself) Hmmm. Looks like gold... (gives it a lick) ... tastes like gold. RIKER (V.O.) It is gold! The alien leaps back from the unexpected sound, his whip immediately in the air, poised to attack! Nearby, useless to our crewmembers, are their phasers, insignias and tricorders. 52 BACK TO SCENE Riker's not going anywhere, having had a taste of the Ferengi electronic whip. The alien over Riker, whip ready... just as another clap of far-off THUNDER causes it to howl and cover its ears in pain, as do the others! LETEK (soft, low voice) Accursed planet! What pandemonium! RIKER Nothing compared to what my captain will do... (sees he's causing pain; speaks softly) ... when he learns you've broken our landing party agreement. LETEK What part of the agreement? At that, Riker eases himself up, but the alien gestures him back down, the "whip" its "suggestion"... LETEK (continuing) You appeared and attacked us. Are you one of their assassins? STAR TREK: "The Last Outpost" - 8/7/87 - ACT FOUR 42. 52 CONTINUED: RIKER I am Commander Riker, first officer of the USS Enterprise. Stop now unless you want our vessel to retaliate... Upon which, Worf rolls to his feet with a LOUD and frightening KLINGON GROWL. The Ferengi immediately clap their hands to their ears and Worf goes for the one called Mordoc nearest him. But Worf finds he has a wildcat on his hands. 53 ANOTHER ANGLE (SPECIAL EFFECT) The Ferengi called Kayron moves to aid Worf's opponent, lifting his whip to strike, but Data "leaps" from his prone position, moving with android speed and ease, grabbing him by the wrist and pulling him at arm's length off the ground. We HEAR THUNDER again, LOUDER. 54 ANOTHER ANGLE - EMPHASIZING RIKER as the Ferengi leader, Letek, makes a move. RIKER I've got this one! DATA Careful, Commander, they're much stronger than... Riker finds out how much stronger -- Letek smashes Riker with a savage right-cross which rolls him over twice and leaves him completely unconscious. 55 ANOTHER ANGLE Data and Worf have their hands full. WORF (loudly) PYGMY CRETINS... ! Although with hands over his ears, protecting his hearing, one of the Ferengi rolls, clamps his legs around the huge Klingon and brings him to the ground, hard. STAR TREK: "The Last Outpost" - 8/7/87 - ACT FOUR 43. 56 ANOTHER ANGLE (OPTICAL) The remaining two Ferengi go after Data, one hitting him hard and high, the other equally hard and low -- bringing Data to the ground. Letek scoops up his "whip." LETEK Kill them. It sounds no less lethal that the Ferengi says it quietly. As the other two scramble for their whips: MORDOC (hissing quietly) Hideous monsters! Kayron and Mordoc raise their "whips" to do the job, when: TASHA (V. O.) NOOO-O-O!! All three Ferengi wheel around, as: 57 ANGLE WIDENS TO INCLUDE TASHA training a major phaser at the hapless Ferengi. The small men let their "whips" drop, at Tasha's gesture. TASHA That's much better, now over there... Letek and his "men" back off, incredulous, as Mordoc points to Tasha. MORDOC Is this a female? KYRON A hu-man... female, Letek? The Ferengi are handling this with all the astonishment of seeing man-eating tigers. The Ferengi squint leeringly at Tasha. LETEK (to Riker) Then it is true. You work with females, arm them, and force them to wear clothing? MORDOC How sickening. STAR TREK: "The Last Outpost" - 8/7/87 - ACT FOUR 44. 58 EXT. ENTERPRISE (OPTICAL) Nearly dark, as the lights weakly radiate. Beyond, the Ferengi vessel is slightly better lit. 59 INT. ENTERPRISE - MAIN BRIDGE Picard comforts a crewmember, then CROSSES to Beverly. They're both very cold and weak, GASP OUT their words. BEVERLY I should visit... the family decks...again... PICARD (shakes head) I've diverted... all reserve... power there. They'll... last longest. (looks around) Is there anything else we can do, Doctor? Beverly shakes her head. Then Picard remembers something. PICARD (continuing) Where is... your son Wesley? BEVERLY (beat) I gave him... something. He'll have a... terrible headache if we live. PICARD You shouldn't have. BEVERLY Shouldn't have? (weak but outraged) He's my son. I love him... PICARD He has the... right to meet... death awake. STAR TREK: "The Last Outpost" - 8/7/87 - ACT FOUR 45. 59 CONTINUED: Beverly eyes Picard for a long moment before she answers with a nod. BEVERLY That is... a male perspective! From deep in his thermal blankets, Picard makes a MUFFLED SOUND. BEVERLY (continuing) What? (beat; louder) What did you say, Jean-Luc? PICARD I said... rubbish! 60 EXT. PLANET SURFACE The Ferengi are clearly unafraid of the larger humans and Tasha has had to be alert with her phaser to keep them in place. But now the Ferengi have evolved a plan. It begins with Letek seeming asleep -- the other two suddenly striding OFF. Tasha brings her phaser up: TASHA Stop! Hold it right there! 61 ANOTHER ANGLE (OPTICAL) The two Ferengi are ignoring Tasha. (We're also now HEARING the mysterious THUNDER SOUND nearer and LOUDER.) RIKER Set for stun! TASHA (nods) Already set. In b.g. WE SEE Letek suddenly moving for his "whip" device as a baffled Tasha sends out a PHASER EFFECT which heads straight for the Ferengi but then ARCS IN A CURVE AND ENCIRCLES THE LARGEST NEARBY CORAL TREE. TASHA What is going on?! 67:[1,#b] STAR TREK: "The Last Outpost" - 8/7/87 - ACT FOUR 46. 62 ANGLE EMPHASIZING LETEK With the attention of the human on the phaser, Letek snatches up his "whip" device and SNAPS it toward the humans. They turn in time to the WHIP EFFECT HEADED IN THEIR DIRECTION -- BUT LIKE THE PHASER EFFECT IT CURVES TOWARD THE "CORAL" TREE AND DISSIPATES THERE. LETEK What is this?! 63 ANGLE ON HUMANS AND FERENGI Neither side is certain what to do next. DATA How intriguing. (to Humans and Ferengi) I believe we can deduce these crystalline tree-shapes to be energy collectors. RIKER (nods) Along the same principle that is draining energy from our ships. GEORDI But the Ferengi weapons were working when we arrived here... TASHA Which means something new has happened... Interrupted by a BLAST OF THUNDER. Then more of the strange THUNDER, CLOSER, STILL LOUDER. Pressing hands over ears, the Ferengi are in agony. Geordi reacts at something o.s., points. GEORDI Commander! 64 ANGLE ON TKON OBJECT (OPTICAL) A SPINNING, CLEAR CRYSTALLINE SHAPE, GIVING OFF RAINBOW HUES as it MOVES INTO SCENE with the Humans and the Ferengi, stopping there. Then, HALF-VOICE AND HALF-THUNDER RUMBLE: STAR TREK: "The Last Outpost" - 8/7/87 - ACT FOUR 47. 64 CONTINUED: PORTAL FIGURE BE YOU BARBARIANS?! SPEAK! But its defiant inquiry is met by silence from all, as we: FADE OUT. END OF ACT FOUR STAR TREK: "The Last Outpost" - 8/7/87 - ACT FIVE 48. ACT FIVE FADE IN: 65 EXT. PLANET SURFACE - ANGLE ON PORTAL EFFECT (OPTICAL) continuing from ACT FOUR FADE OUT. Both humans and Ferengi astonished at the SPINNING, CLEAR CRYSTALLINE SHAPE WHICH GIVES OFF RAINBOW HUES AND THE SOUND OF THUNDER RUMBLING. PORTAL WHO MEETS THE CHALLENGE? 66 ANGLE ON GEORDI AND RIKER Geordi concentrating on the spinning SHAPE, then turning quickly to Riker. GEORDI I'm beginning to understand what... (touches VISOR) ... these "eyes" have been showing me. Patterns of force everywhere. This entire planet has been made into... well, a power accumulator. RIKER (indicating crystalline shape) And that? GEORDI ... is the whole point of this place. I can "see" the planet's power emanating from... 67 WIDER ANGLE - INCLUDING SPINNING SHAPE (OPTICAL) as again they HEAR the HALF-VOICE, HALF-THUNDER SOUND: PORTAL WHO WILL IT BE? Nobody's volunteering. Letek looks to Riker, then to his Ferengi cohorts. A beat, then Letek takes the plunge... LETEK Riker. STAR TREK: "The Last Outpost" - 8/7/87 - ACT FIVE 49. 67 CONTINUED: PORTAL (to Riker) YOU HAVE AWAKENED PORTAL SIX-THREE. DO YOU PETITION TO ENTER THE EMPIRE? The Ferengi are still protecting their ears. Riker decides to answer. RIKER Who asks the question? 68 ANGLE ON PORTAL EFFECT (OPTICAL) With the LOUDEST SOUND OF ALL, A THUNDER CLAP AND EXTENDED CRACKLING which cues ACCELERATED SPINNING to where the CRYSTALLINE SHAPE BECOMES FUZZY AND DISSOLVES INTO A TALL, THIN, AGED (make-up effect) HUMANOID FIGURE (PORTAL) IN A FINE LONG ROBE. PORTAL (echo effect) I AM THE PORTAL, GUARDIAN OF THE TKON EMPIRE. 69 ANGLE ON FERENGI reacting, taking their hands from their ears as the SOUND FADES away. 70 ANGLE ON HUMANS reacting. RIKER Why should we petition for entry to an empire that no longer exists? 71 APPROPRIATE ANGLES - PER ACTION The Portal Figure examines the others, then looks down at itself. It speaks now in a NORMAL VOICE but with a slight ECHO-CHAMBER holdover. PORTAL Biped...extraordinary. (looks up) Why do you attempt deception? The empire is forever. STAR TREK: "The Last Outpost" - 8/7/87 - ACT FIVE 50. 71 CONTINUED: RIKER Your empire fell prey to a supernova... At that, the Portal Figure scans the cloudy sky above, concerned but wary of trickery. PORTAL Nonsense! RIKER Data. Please repeat the file... DATA It is a matter of record, Portal, in the Age of Makto, the central star of the Tkon Empire destabilized and... PORTAL (interrupts) But the Age of Makto is an eon in the future to come... DATA (interrupts back) In fact, there have been many ages which have come and passed since Makto... PORTAL (and back again) This is the Age of Bastu! DATA (relentless) I am afraid not, as by the Tkon use of galactic motionary startime charts, after Bastu, there has been Cimi, Xora, Makto, Ozari, Fendor... PORTAL (enraged) ENOUGH! (thunder clap) This is absurd! That is over seven baktun of time! How can this be? STAR TREK: "The Last Outpost" - 8/7/87 - ACT FIVE 51. 71 CONTINUED: (2) RIKER You must have been asleep, Portal, for hundreds of thousands of our years... Letek steps forward, acting polite and humble. He indicates Riker and the other humans. LETEK Deception is the way of these hu-mans. We Ferengi will gladly make a petition. The away team members react, but Riker motions them into silence. RIKER (to Portal) We invite their petition. Both Geordi and Data smile at what they perceive is Riker's tactic. DATA Excellent idea, sir. GEORDI I can't wait to hear it... The Portal Figure makes a strange gesture to the humans, in deep concentration, then turns to Letek. PORTAL Speak. Letek thinks fast; this has happened almost too rapidly. LETEK We... our petition is that we be allowed to... serve the Tkon Empire... (decides to add) ... at no profit! Return control of our starship to us and we will happily destroy both the hu-man criminals and their vessel which attacked us without provocation. (too eager) They came to loot your empire, but we intercepted them! STAR TREK: "The Last Outpost" - 8/7/87 - ACT FIVE 52. 71 CONTINUED: (3) The away team is desperate for Riker to make an answer to this but he remains silent, awaiting the Portal Figure's answer. Again the Portal gestures, but this time to the Ferengi, then he turns back to Riker. PORTAL You have attempted deceit. Next you cannot answer these accusations. Do you give yourself up for judgment? RIKER (beat; considering this) Yes. If you believe those accusations, you should act on them. The other away team members are shocked at Riker's answer. Before the Portal can answer, Letek decides to go for the "kill." LETEK And there is even more! We can prove the hu-mans are destroyers of legal commerce ... also that they selfishly withhold vital technology from backward worlds... MORDOC (jumping in) ... and necessary defensive weapons, too. We Ferengi are now challenge this hu-man madness... RIKER I admit we restrict advanced technology to all... KAYRON (in chorus) You see! They are demented; their values are insane. You cannot believe the business opportunities they destroy... STAR TREK: "The Last Outpost" - 8/7/87 - ACT FIVE 53. 71 CONTINUED: (4) LETEK (exhibiting the Starfleet insignias taken) Proof of their barbarism -- they adorn themselves with gold, a despicable use of rare metal... (indicates Tasha) And they shamelessly clothe their females... MORDOC (leering at Tasha) Inviting others to unclothe them... the very depth of perversion... Mordoc reaches for a pawhold on Tasha's uniform in disgust. But Tasha angles and parries his thrust, at the ready. TASHA Paws off, Ferengi. MORDOC No female, hu-man or Ferengi, can order Mordoc around! Submit! TASHA (moves toward Mordoc; deadly) Just try it, shorty. RIKER (warning) At ease, Lieutenant! GEORDI (to Ferengi) I wouldn't mess with Lieutenant Yar if I were you... (to Riker) But maybe they'd like to find out the hard way, eh, Number One? RIKER Seems their style. (to Portal) Would you like to hear more? PORTAL If you desire. Riker gestures to Data, who willingly obliges. STAR TREK: "The Last Outpost" - 8/7/87 - ACT FIVE 54. 71 CONTINUED: (5) DATA (nods) They should add also that Starfleet has refused to prevent several civilizations from falling; we have sometimes let the violent and strong overcome the weak... LETEK (to Portal) They admit their crimes! Hear them; they admit the evil which they... ! Interrupted by a ROLLING THUNDER SOUND. 72 ANGLE ON PORTAL FIGURE (OPTICAL) as the Figure seems a bit younger, better muscled, the robe shorter and more practical, with a large, lethal appearing scimitar-like weapon in hand. It turns to Riker, its voice now carrying a hint of ROLLING THUNDER again. PORTAL BARBARIAN! LETEK Yes, you show wisdom... PORTAL (interrupting; indicates the Ferengi, too) BARBARIANS, ALL! (indicates Riker with sword) But this one first. In the fashion the Empire has always challenged savages... 73 EMPHASIZING WORF AND TASHA (OPTICAL) jumping forward. WORF No! For battle, come to me... A flash of BLUE LIGHT with LIGHTNING BOLT SOUND hurls Worf violently back, rolling to a stop unconscious. Tasha wisely stops, then goes to Worf's assistance. STAR TREK: "The Last Outpost" - 8/7/87 - ACT FIVE 55. 74 EMPHASIZING RIKER AND PORTAL FIGURE as the Figure takes a fighting stance. PORTAL (mixed-THUNDER) You have a single chance for life. One only. What is the answer to my challenge? RIKER (facing Portal Figure, unmoving) There is more! Self-determination of all peoples... Again, the Portal makes a strange gesture to Riker, in deep concentration. PORTAL (interrupting) You are being tested, Riker! WHAT IS THE ANSWER? Riker looks up sharply, puzzled at this. RIKER How do you know my name? The Portal Figure suddenly rushes at Riker, scimitar held high... an earth-shattering SHRIEK. Riker stands fast as: 75 CLOSE ON RIKER AND PORTAL FIGURE Portal cuts through the air in an unstoppable overhead sweep... Then, the ugly looking weapon stops a couple millimeters from Riker's head! Riker remains motionless, even calm, serene... PORTAL Ahhh. You are of immovable mind, Riker. One totally committed to facing any fate with composure... (sword still up) But what is the answer to my challenge? All the away team members hold their breath. Riker remains quietly at ease. Is he taking too long? STAR TREK: "The Last Outpost" - 8/7/87 - ACT FIVE 56. 75 CONTINUED: RIKER Fear is the true enemy, the only enemy. Portal tosses his weapon aside. PORTAL You are a noble being. And unlike these little ones who close their minds, your mind holds interesting thoughts. (quoting) "Know your enemy and know yourself, and victory will always be yours." Why that thought? And who is this "Sun Tzu" you revere? RIKER An old Chinese philosopher from ancient Earth history... PORTAL You must tell me more of this wisdom so much like our own. RIKER Gladly. First, our starship. Can you release it? PORTAL (nods) It is released. (looks upward, nods) All power is restored. 76 EXT. SPACE - THE ENTERPRISE (OPTICAL) suddenly freed, the LIGHTS back up to full strength! 77 INT. MAIN BRIDGE as all power is restored, the bridge lights and a/c return to norm, not a lot too late. The crew begin to stir. Picard gets to his feet fast, but weakly. STAR TREK: "The Last Outpost" - 8/7/87 - ACT FIVE 57. 78 CLOSE ON PICARD opens his eyes, taking in a deep, fresh breath. He looks around. Beverly ENTERS SHOT. BEVERLY Not a hell of a lot too soon, Jean...Captain. 79 EXT. PLANET SURFACE - VARIOUS ANGLES with the Ferengi showing concerned expressions. PORTAL (to Riker) I admit I had my doubts as your ships battled each other... LETEK They tried to kill us! PORTAL (ignores him) In overt acts of belligerance. Normally, I would have destroyed all of you and your ships, but something confused me. RIKER Which was? PORTAL First you wanted to murder each other, then you were willing to help each other. Letek's not one to be ignored, roughly forcing himself in front of Riker, his cohorts nearby. LETEK What of our vessel? We knew the same answer... MORDOC The truth is I gave those words to this hu-man. STAR TREK: "The Last Outpost" - 8/7/87 - ACT FIVE 58. 79 CONTINUED: PORTAL (to Riker) What of them? Shall I destroy them? RIKER Then they would learn nothing. PORTAL Admirable conclusion. But what makes you think they will ever learn, Riker? RIKER (beat) Is this a test also? The Ferengi start to intrude again, but the Portal quickly silences them with a deadly wave of his hand. PORTAL In life, one is always tested. RIKER I find them very much as we were a few hundred years ago... but with the technology we have now. They're very dangerous... KAYRON (can't help the lie) Untrue! We seek friendship with you... RIKER (unhearing; to Portal) But we can hardly hate what we once were. They may grow and learn... PORTAL ... And learn ways of destroying you. RIKER Our values require us to face that possibility. What of you? With your empire gone... ? PORTAL Even without the empire, the uncivilized must be tested. (sadly) I shall sleep... until needed again. STAR TREK: "The Last Outpost" - 8/7/87 - ACT FIVE 59. 80 EXT. SPACE - ENTERPRISE AND FERENGI SHIP Both vessels with power up. 81 INT. ENTERPRISE MAIN BRIDGE - EMPHASIZING GEORDI ANDD DATA ENTERING from the turbolift. Troi, CROSSING in from the Ready Room, intercepts them. TROI What happened? DATA Something to write home about. GEORDI "Something to write home about?" Data, that's very human. Data is very pleased at that. Meanwhile, Riker has ARRIVED, CROSSES to the Command Area. 82 EMPHASIZING PICARD as Riker joins him. RIKER The T-9 energy converter was beamed aboard and secured, sir. PICARD I commend your performance, Number One. Data has also returned to his forward "Ops" station, carefully placing his finger puzzle above his console. RIKER I do have a request, sir. 83 CLOSE ON RIKER A wicked thought. RIKER (continuing) Permission to beam a box of Data's Chinese finger puzzles over to the Ferengi. (postscript) A "thank you" for all they tried to do. STAR TREK: "The Last Outpost" - 8/7/87 - ACT FIVE 60. 84 CLOSE ON PICARD PICARD (smiles) Make it so. 85 EXT. ENTERPRISE AND FERENGI STARSHIP (OPTICAL) as both angle, and in opposite directions, WARP OUT AND AWAY from the mysterious, clouded planet - the "last outpost" of the once-mighty Empire of Tkon, as CAMERA MOVES IN on our starship, which QUICKLY RECEDES FROM CAMERA into a DOT OF LIGHT as we: FADE OUT. END OF ACT FIVE THE END STAR TREK: THE NEXT GENERATION "Lonely Among Us" #40271-108 Story by Michael Halperin Teleplay by D. C. Fontana Directed by Cliff Bole Copyright 1987 Paramount Pictures Corporation. All Rights Reserved. This script is not for publication or reproduction. No one is authorized to dispose of same. If lost or destroyed, please notify the Script Department. 2ND REV. FINAL DRAFT AUGUST 21, 1987 STAR TREK: "Lonely Among Us" - 8/21/87 - CAST STAR TREK: THE NEXT GENERATION "Lonely Among Us" CAST PICARD SINGH (ASST. CHIEF ENGINEER) RIKER SSESTAR (SELAY LEADER) DATA BADAR N'D'D (ANTICAN) TROI FIRST SECURITY GUARD BEVERLY TRANSPORTER CHIEF TASHA TASHA GEORDI Non-Speaking Roles: WORF 4 SELAY WESLEY 1 ANTICAN ENTERPRISE CREW MEMBERS SECOND SECURITY GUARD STAR TREK: "Lonely Among Us" - 8/21/87 - SETS STAR TREK: THE NEXT GENERATION "Lonely Among Us" SETS INTERIORS EXTERIORS ENTERPRISE USS ENTERPRISE Transporter Room 4 Main bridge ENERGY "CLOUD" Sensor Maintenance Room Ready Room Sickbay Crusher's Office Badar N'D'D's Quarters Crushers' Quarters Observation Lounge Engineer's Office/Engineering Captain's Ready Room Guest Quarters Riker's Quarters Corridors Turbolift STAR TREK: "Lonely Among Us" - 8/21/87 - TEASER STAR TREK: THE NEXT GENERATION "Lonely Among Us" TEASER FADE IN: 1 EXT. SPACE - USS ENTERPRISE IN ORBIT (OPTICAL) The great ship orbits a blue-green planet softly cloaked in a swirl of cloud cover. PICARD (V.O.) Captain's log, stardate 41249.3. We have orbited the two major planets of the Beta Renner system taking aboard delegates from those two worlds. Since achieving space flight, their major life forms, the Anticans and the Selay... 2 INT. TRANSPORTER ROOM 4 - ANGLE ON PICARD in full dress uniform, waiting impatiently near the platform. O.S. TRANSPORTER SOUND IS BUILDING. 3 ANGLE ON TRANSPORTER as FIVE FIGURES begin to form in the sparkling TRANSPORTER EFFECT. As they solidify, they are revealed as FIVE ALIENS (Selay). The Chief Delegate is SSESTAR. All Selay are tall and two axhandles across the shoulders. Their reptilian heads are sinister -- sleek scaled skin, lipless mouths, and beady eyes. The markings on their heads are cobra-like, and folds of skin at the neck imply a cobra hood. PICARD (V.O.) (continuing) ... have become deadly enemies. But both have also applied for admission into our Federation. We are to deliver these delegates to this sector's neutral Conference Planet called "Parliament" in the hope their dispute can be resolved. STAR TREK: "Lonely Among Us" - 8/21/87 - TEASER 2. 3 CONTINUED Picard gestures the Selay off the platform with a somewhat strained smile. PICARD I am Captain Picard. We hope to make this journey pleasant and comfortable. Arranging that will be my first officer, Commander Riker. 4 REVERSE ANGLE - ON RIKER AND TASHA also in dress uniform, waiting near the Transporter control console. TASHA concentrates on the Selay delegates as RIKER steps forward formally. RIKER Welcome aboard. If you'll follow me... (starts MOVING OFF) ... I'll show you the accommodations we've... 5 WIDER ANGLE The Selay leader, Ssestar, interrupts: SSESTAR We can already smell the Anticans. They were taken aboard first? PICARD Only because their world was the first on our heading to Parliament. SSESTAR Will our quarters be near the Anticans? PICARD About one hundred meters apart. Is that all right? SSESTAR No. Unsatisfactory. Picard starts to frown, but Riker nods to the captain -- he'll handle it. STAR TREK: "Lonely Among Us" - 8/21/87 - TEASER 3. 5 CONTINUED RIKER I believe we can accommodate their wishes, Captain. (to Ssestar) We'll rearrange suite assignments. If you'll follow me? Ssestar hesitates, then grunts an assent and motions his people to follow as he moves toward the door. SSESTAR And we must be upwind from the Anticans. RIKER Of course, sir... The delegation EXITS with Riker. As they leave and the DOORS CLOSE: TASHA Neither seem very promising Federation candidates. Picard nods, begins EXITING with Tasha. PICARD Even Parliament's peacemakers may find this case difficult. 6 EXT. SPACE - THE ENTERPRISE (OPTICAL) The ship moves majestically out of orbit, goes into the WARP SPEED EFFECT. 7 INT. MAIN BRIDGE - WIDE ANGLE All the regular crew at their stations, except for Geordi and Worf, who are absent. A replacement CONN OFFICER is at that panel, next to DATA at Ops. PICARD (to Riker) Do you understand the basis of all that nonsense between them? RIKER No sir. I didn't understand that kind of hostility even when I studied Earth history. STAR TREK: "Lonely Among Us" - 8/21/87 - TEASER 4. 7 CONTINUED PICARD Oh? Well, yes, but these life forms feel such passionate hatred over differences in customs, God concepts, and even strangely enough, economic systems... 8 ANOTHER ANGLE Data has frowned at something on his panel, looks around at Picard. DATA Sir, my sensors are picking up an unusual energy object ahead. PICARD On screen. Data punches up the command. 9 ANGLE ON MAIN VIEWSCREEN (OPTICAL) A strange ENERGY PATTERN moving at warp speed. TASHA Confirmed, sir. My sensors read nothing solid but considerable energy in... (puzzles over reading) ... in changing patterns. DATA Traveling at warp speed, too. Intriguing. (tabs panel, looks up) I can find no match with anything in our records, sir. PICARD (eyes viewer; then) Change course for a close sensor pass... we'll then increase warp speed to reach Parliament on schedule. DATA Aye, sir. STAR TREK: "Lonely Among Us" - 8/21/87 - TEASER 5. 10 INT. SENSOR MAINTENANCE ROOM - ON GEORDI AND WORF The room is small, busy with equipment, including one key console. GEORDI is leaning over the complicated console and talking to WORF as he runs a pattern on the panel. GEORDI Why the interest in this, Worf? It is just routine maintenance on the sensor assemblies. WORF Simple, Geordi. Our captain wants his junior officers to learn, learn, learn... GEORDI (grins) Not just the junior ones. (indicates) Okay, hold this relay off-line while... Worf moves in and takes over as indicated, while: TASHA'S COM VOICE Security to Sensor Maintenance. GEORDI La Forge here. 11 INT. MAIN BRIDGE - WIDE ANGLE TASHA We're making a close sensor pass on an unusual object, Geordi. Any problems? GEORDI'S COM VOICE None, Lieutenant. All equipment on line and functioning. TASHA (turns to Captain) Sensors ready, sir. PICARD (to Data) Life form reading? DATA No life form reading, sir. PICARD Begin the pass. STAR TREK: "Lonely Among Us" - 8/21/87 - TEASER 6. 12 EXT. SPACE - ENTERPRISE AND ENERGY "CLOUD" (OPTICAL) as the Enterprise changes course slightly to intercept the "cloud." 13 INT. MAIN BRIDGE - ANGLE INCLUDING VIEWSCREEN (OPTICAL) as they close rapidly with the object. DATA Sir, it is changing shape... ! 14 EXT. SPACE - ENTERPRISE AND "CLOUD" (OPTICAL) The "cloud" bulging out slightly, putting the bulge in the Enterprise's path. 15 ANGLE ON COMMAND AREA PICARD Any readings indicating matter there? DATA Negative, Captain. Energy only. 16 EXT. SPACE - CLOSE ON ENTERPRISE AND "CLOUD" (OPTICAL) The Enterprise begins passing just through the wispy edge of it. 17 INT. SENSOR MAINTENANCE ROOM - ON WORF AND GEORDI (OPTICAL) Worf is where he moved in at the console relay. Geordi is standing to one side. Suddenly there is a BRIEF GLOW (OPTICAL) from the key console to Worf. The big Klingon jerks as though something has struck him, and he convulses spasmodically and collapses. Geordi tabs his communicator instantly. GEORDI La Forge to Sickbay. Medical emergency in Sensor Maintenance Room! STAR TREK: "Lonely Among Us" - 8/21/87 - TEASER 7. 17 CONTINUED MOVE IN CLOSE ON GEORDI as he bends over the crumpled Klingon. GEORDI (continuing) Repeat -- medical emergency! FADE OUT. END OF TEASER STAR TREK: "Lonely Among Us" - 8/21/87 - ACT ONE 8. ACT ONE FADE IN: 18 EXT. SPACE - ENTERPRISE (OPTICAL) plunging through space at warp speed, leaving the "cloud" behind. 19 INT. SENSOR MAINTENANCE ROOM - ON WORF AND GEORDI Worf still lies in a heap on the floor, Geordi leaning over him and checking for life signs. Worf begins to stir, slowly at first, as the doors SLIDE OPEN and Beverly and ASSISTANT ENTER at a dead run, medical devices in hand. They quickly kneel at Worf, begin checking him. BEVERLY What happened? GEORDI Don't know. It seemed like he was hit by... (shakes head) ... some sensor feedback, maybe. Worf suddenly starts to powerfully flail his arms and legs around, struggling against something we can't see. The assistant tries to hang on, but Worf's Klingon strength sends him across the room. Then, as Worf flails at furniture in his way, easily splitting it, Beverly has opened the medical kit with quick efficiency, pulls out a hypospray, and administers it. 20 CLOSER - EMPHASIZING WORF He stops struggling, looks around with eyes that seem to be seeing for the first time. An expression of wonder and amazement crosses his face. Beverly and Geordi exchange a glance, both clearly concerned. BEVERLY Lieutenant Worf? (no response) Lieutenant, can you hear what I'm saying? Worf manages a sort of grunt, holds up a hand and stares at it. Then he moves his body, trying to get his feet under him. He is at first unable to get the right coordination down, as though this simple act is as foreign to him as it is to a newborn. STAR TREK: "Lonely Among Us" - 8/21/87 - ACT ONE 9. 20 CONTINUED: BEVERLY (continuing) Let's get him up. They rise. Worf watches and sees how they do it. As they both reach down to boost him by the arms, he manages to get to his knees and start to push to his feet. Beverly is studying him closely. He does not seem violent now; he stares around more like a young and bewildered child. Beverly nods to Geordi, picks up her medical kit, and they start to lead Worf OUT. He moves with them, slowly and carefully putting one foot ahead of the other. 21 INT. READY ROOM - ANGLE ON GEORDI AND PICARD Picard is at his desk, Geordi standing before it. Picard looks up at him, frowning as: GEORDI He was just monitoring the sensor console when he jerked as though something hit him. What my sensors showed... (frowns) ... It was kind of a... glow... just for a second. I can't explain it. PICARD Could your VISOR device have malfunctioned? GEORDI Doubt it, sir. It seemed what I was seeing was something real. 22 INT. SICKBAY - ANGLE ON BEVERLY, TROI, WORF Worf lies on an examination table, Beverly and assistant working over him with her medical scanners. Troi looks up at the o.s. medical viewscreen, then back at Worf. The Klingon is quiet now, his eyes moving around the room and to the women. His attitude is one of quiet and deep curiosity. Beverly finishes, smiles down at Worf. BEVERLY I'm going to give you something to help you rest. Just relax. STAR TREK: "Lonely Among Us" - 8/21/87 - ACT ONE 10. 22 CONTINUED: Worf's expression remains unchanged. Beverly brings out a hypospray and activates it on his arm. His eyelids begin to sag closed almost immediately. Beverly puts away the hypospray, motions Troi into her office. 23 INT. CRUSHER'S OFFICE - BEVERLY AND TROI on their ENTRY: BEVERLY Fortunately, he's stronger than an orbital tug. There's nothing physically wrong with him. What have you sensed? TROI Nothing... which bothers me. He has never shielded his feelings from me. I can't understand why he is suddenly doing it now. BEVERLY Are you able to perceive anything at all, Counselor? It may be important. TROI (beat; concentrating) Perhaps... very faintly. Almost... like a frightened child. BEVERLY Worf "frightened?" TROI It doesn't make much sense but... (beat; concentrating) Yes, it's fear. Definitely there. They exchange puzzled looks. 24 OMITTED STAR TREK: "Lonely Among Us" - 8/21/87 - ACT ONE 11. 25 INT. BADAR N'D'D'S QUARTERS - ON TASHA AND BADAR N'D'D BADAR N'D'D is wraith-thin, pale, with glittering lupine eyes; and when he curls his mouth in what looks like a smile, some extremely long, sharp canines are revealed. His clothing can only be described as disreputable -- dark and loose, somehow lumpy (as though it hides body parts we don't want to know about). Tasha's tremulous smile is offset by a twitch of her nose that indicates Anticans don't smell too nice. Riker ENTERS. TASHA Sorry to call you, sir, not strictly security, it's about the dietary requirements of the Antican delegates. 26 INTERCUT RIKER AND TASHA RIKER I thought that had been taken care of in advance, Tasha. TASHA So did we, sir. Their live animals were beamed aboard -- We were going to preserve the meat for them, but .... (squeamishly) ... they say we must bring it to them alive. RIKER (beat) Then do so! (to the Antican) Lieutenant Yar was... confused. We no longer enslave animals for food purposes. BADAR N'D'D But we have seen humans eat meat! The Antican grins -- a terrifying display of long, sharp fangs. RIKER You've seen something as fresh and tasty as living meat, but inorganically materialized out of patterns used by our transporters. BADAR N'D'D (in revulsion) How sickening! How barbaric! STAR TREK: "Lonely Among Us" - 8/21/87 - ACT ONE 12. 27 INT. SICKBAY - ANGLE ON BEVERLY AND WORF (OPTICAL) Worf lies sedated on one of the beds, being automatically monitored by the medical computers. Beverly approaches with a medical instrument in hand to take some samples. She leans over the bed, using the instrument on his arm. As she does, there is a SUDDEN SPLIT-SECOND BURST OF ELECTRIC-LIKE ENERGY BETWEEN THEM. Beverly is highlighted briefly by a BLUE GLOW (OPTICAL). She steps back away from the bed, blinking as if trying to assimilate some new information. 28 ANOTHER ANGLE Troi ENTERS from the Corridor. Beverly looks around at her, puzzled, as Troi moves closer, looking up at the medical viewscreen. TROI He's reading normal? How did you manage that? BEVERLY (dazed) Yes... normal, now. TROI (looks up quickly) Are you all right? BEVERLY Yes... perfectly. Beverly looks at the medical instrument in her hand, seems to remember. BEVERLY (continuing) Yes... both of us quite normal. Beverly ministers to Worf. Worf starts to stir, shaking his head and blinking as if clearing his head of something. WORF Where... where am I? TROI Don't you remember? You were in the Sensor Maintenance Room --- WORF I remember monitoring the sensor console -- and that's all. What am I doing here? STAR TREK: "Lonely Among Us" - 8/21/87 - ACT ONE 13. 28 CONTINUED: TROI That's a story the doctor will tell you. She starts to smile over at Beverly, and the smile slips a little. Beverly is staring at the medical viewer again, deep in thought, paying no attention to Troi and Worf. 29 INT. MAIN BRIDGE - ANGLE ON DATA AND PICARD (OPTICAL) at Science Station 1. Data is replaying visual of "cloud" on the screen for Picard's observation. DATA I called it a "cloud" for lack of a better term at the time. But the sensor pass shows it as much more. Combinations very complex, precise energy patterns... PICARD Constantly interacting on each other? DATA Yes, sir... But whether individually or as a whole, it is difficult to say. PICARD Obviously, you seem to feel it should be inspected more closely. DATA A mystery is only a mystery as long as it remains uninvestigated, sir. PICARD Ah. I love a mystery, Mister Data, but this one has to wait until we deliver the delegates to their peace conference on Parliament. He walks down the ramp toward his command chair. STAR TREK: "Lonely Among Us" - 8/21/87 - ACT ONE 14. 30 INT. CRUSHERS' QUARTERS - ON WESLEY Wesley is in the living area, working with a P.A.D.D. and a Viewscreen, quickly tapping commands into the P.A.D.D. and watching figures or diagrams change on the o.s. viewer. The quarters doors are HEARD to SLIDE OPEN, and Wesley looks around. 31 WESLEY'S P.O.V. - BEVERLY Beverly comes in, looks around apparently startled as Wesley speaks, but she seems to recover composure quickly. (NOTE: Throughout, Beverly appears remote, not displaying her normal warmth toward her son, views him almost as though he is an interesting stranger.) WESLEY Hi Mom. You're back early. BEVERLY Yes. She moves closer to him and looks at the viewer as he indicates it and the P.A.D.D. WESLEY Physical sciences class. We're studying Doctor Channing's theory on dilithium crystals. BEVERLY Tell me about it. Wesley looks up at her, slightly puzzled. She never was interested before -- now her eyes glitter with an unaccustomed curiosity. WESLEY Really? You never seemed that interested in warp theory before. (indicates) Doctor Channing thinks it's possible to force dilithium into even more useful crystals. If as shown here, matter and antimatter could be aligned even more efficiently... BEVERLY (interrupting) Would that affect navigation? WESLEY This is engineering, not helm control. STAR TREK: "Lonely Among Us" - 8/21/87 - ACT ONE 15. 31 CONTINUED: BEVERLY Oh yes, the helm's located on the bridge. WESLEY (stares, concerned) Mom, is something wrong? Without answering, turns and heads for the door. Wesley stares after her, frowning, as she EXITS. 32 INT. MAIN BRIDGE - EMPHASIZING PICARD He glances around as the turbolift doors OPEN, and Beverly ENTERS and advances down the ramp toward Geordi, back at his helm position. (NOTE: She is still not acting in her usual manner. Everything about the bridge seems to be of interest to her, as though she's never seen it before. She responds with darting, curious little looks when spoken to, not quite able to focus long on the person whom she addresses. Her speech patterns have become very formal, also not like her. Also notice she does not call the captain by his rank or address him as "sir.") BEVERLY (to herself) This... is the helm. Geordi looks up surprised, then grins, nods. GEORDI Unless there have been some changes I don't know about. PICARD Doctor Crusher? BEVERLY You will wish to know Lieutenant Worf is much improved. Ready to report back on duty. PICARD What was the diagnosis? Beverly heads for the upper bridge. BEVERLY A temporary mental abberation. PICARD When it concerns a bridge officer, I expect a better explanation, Doctor. STAR TREK: "Lonely Among Us" - 8/21/87 - ACT ONE 16. 32 CONTINUED: Beverly nods, moves toward the Science Stations. BEVERLY Then I must first run some crosschecks in the library-computer. Klingons are so unusual in their reactions, aren't they? PICARD (still puzzled, but:) Take Science Station Two, Doctor. 33 ANGLE ON BEVERLY (OPTICAL) moving to where Data is in view too. She begins calling up information. Innocently, Data glances to her Viewscreen. What he sees there puzzles but does not alarm him. DATA Intriguing, Doctor. What does helm control have to do with medical crosschecks? She ignores him, then seems satisfied over what she views. Data has turned back to his own panel -- Beverly appears to carefully pick out a place in which to touch her panel again... and as she does so, a blue electronic EFFECT APPEARS BRIEFLY ON THE PANEL, then quickly DISAPPEARS. Beverly blinks, then looks around as if awaking from a dream. BEVERLY I... I don't know why I'm... DATA (looks up) Is something wrong, Doctor? 34 ANGLING ON PICARD AND UPPER BRIDGE Picard looks around, concerned over Beverly seeming to be disoriented. PICARD Doctor, are you all right? STAR TREK: "Lonely Among Us" - 8/21/87 - ACT ONE 17. 34 CONTINUED: BEVERLY Yes... yes. I -- I'll do my work from my office. That's where I should be... She MOVES OFF quickly toward the turbolift. Picard watches her, still concerned. PICARD Do you want someone to accompany you? She EXITS into the turbolift. And the doors CLOSE. Picard turns to Troi. PICARD Counselor, what's happening to my people? Interrupted by Data at Science Station 1. He suddenly straightens, frowning. DATA Captain? There is a malfunction in this station. I cannot bring any information up on it. He moves quickly to Science Station 2, WE SEE that console go dead. DATA (continuing) Science Two does not function either, sir. 35 WIDER ANGLE Then, quickly, from the communications panel: SINGH'S COM VOICE Engineering to Captain Picard. We have something wrong with warp drive circuitry, sir. TRANSPORTER CHIEF'S COM VOICE Transporter Room Six to bridge. Reporting transporter console malfunction, sir. PICARD Mister Data, this ship is less than a year out of spacedock. What are the chances of all this occurring? STAR TREK: "Lonely Among Us" - 8/21/87 - ACT ONE 18. 35 CONTINUED: DATA It is a virtual impossibility, sir. PICARD So what the hell is going on here? FADE OUT. END OF ACT ONE STAR TREK: "Lonely Among Us" - 8/21/87 - ACT TWO 19. ACT TWO FADE IN: 36 EXT. SPACE - THE ENTERPRISE (OPTICAL) sweeping along at warp speed - nothing to indicate there's trouble aboard this magnificent machine. 37 INT. OBSERVATION LOUNGE - EMPHASIZING PICARD (OPTICAL) He is irritated, pacing, snapping off his comments with a certain amount of acid etching his words. Through the window WE CAN SEE warp stars flashing past. PICARD ... I don't understand it, Gentlemen. I need information. You're telling me there is no explanation for any of these malfunctions? As he speaks, CAMERA PULLS BACK TO REVEAL he has on the carpet before him Singh, Data, several other Department Heads. Riker sits beside him feeling no less on the carpet himself. RIKER At least, sir, all department heads report the damage repaired. PICARD That was not the question, Number One. What caused the malfunctions? SINGH I believe it was a rampant electronic short that jumped from system to system, sir. The only thing is -- PICARD Yes, Mister Singh? SINGH That shouldn't be possible. The affected systems don't generally interact with each other -- and where they do, it wasn't the interlink that was malfunctioning. PICARD Have you spoken with Chief Engineer Argyle about the problem? STAR TREK: "Lonely Among Us" - 8/21/87 - ACT TWO 20. 37 CONTINUED SINGH With all the engineering staff, sir. They're just as puzzled. PICARD I am not satisfied with that. (to the others) I want explanations of this by the time we get to Parliament. SINGH But... PICARD By the time we get to Parliament, Mr. Singh. 38 INT. BADAR N'D'D'S QUARTERS - ANGLE ON RIKER This is a "Basic Quarters Suite," without special wall decorations, fairly simple solid-color furniture. The Main Room seen here is very low-lit, with dark corners and shadows prevailing. Riker is speaking firmly as we COME IN: RIKER These weapons were removed from two of your people who were loitering out of sight in the vicinity of the Selay delegation quarters. Would you care to explain, sir? CAMERA PULLS BACK TO REVEAL Riker holding out two tubes, somewhat resembling Allen wrenches, but with several curiously shaped buttons along the top of the "barrel." Riker and Tasha are facing Badar N'D'D, who glances at the tubes and lifts a disdainful eyebrow. BADAR N'D'D Those are not weapons, First Officer. They are tools we use to dispatch the animals we consume. TASHA Your food supply is not on the same deck as the Selay delegation, sir. RIKER And you will admit these "tools" can kill. STAR TREK: "Lonely Among Us" - 8/21/87 - ACT TWO 21. 38 CONTINUED BADAR N'D'D (shrugs) Some of my people are impulsive. and we all have reason to hate the Selay. TASHA They appear to have the same feelings about you, sir. BADAR N'D'D (shrugs again) That is the nature of politics. RIKER Nonetheless, Chief Delegate, I'm putting you on notice that all weapons -- no matter what their basic function -- are being confiscated. Violence will not be tolerated on the Enterprise. BADAR N'D'D Of course not. And if any does occur, I can assure you it will not be we Anticans who start it. RIKER AND TASHA Thank you, sir. They turn and EXIT, taking the two tube weapons with them. As the DOOR CLOSES behind them: BADAR N'D'D (ominously) But we will finish it. 39 EXT. SPACE - THE ENTERPRISE (OPTICAL) blasting along at warp speed. 40 INT. ENGINEER'S OFFICE - ANGLE ON SINGH, GEORDI, WESLEY They are at one of the consoles, Singh doing something complex at a panel, with Geordi and Wesley looking over his shoulder. 41 INT. MAIN BRIDGE - EMPHASIZING WORF Worf is at Conn, routinely monitoring his panel and appearing to be no worse for wear after his ordeal. Suddenly, he straightens, tabs in a command, frowns, tabs it again. STAR TREK: "Lonely Among Us" - 8/21/87 - ACT TWO 22. 41 CONTINUED: WORF Sir, warp power is fading! PICARD Picard to Engineering. What is our problem? WORF Warp five... four... three... two... 42 EXT. SPACE - THE ENTERPRISE (OPTICAL) EFFECT SHOT of going from WARP SPEED to SUB-WARP. 43 INT. ENGINEER'S OFFICE - EMPHASIZING SINGH The assistant chief engineer is working the panel, shaking his head. SINGH We've lost the warp engine computer tie! WESLEY And we just dropped below warp one, sir. GEORDI Go to impulse power! 44 INT. MAIN BRIDGE - EMPHASIZING PICARD He frowns, not happy, but he's just the boss around here. He doesn't make the damned thing go. PICARD State of the art vessel? Hah. Commander Data, signal Parliament that we will be delayed. We will send the new arrival time as soon as determined. DATA Yes, sir. He turns to his Ops panel, inspecting it. DATA (continuing) Sir, subspace radio is out. STAR TREK: "Lonely Among Us" - 8/21/87 - ACT TWO 23. 45 INT. CAPTAIN'S READY ROOM - PICARD, RIKER, DATA Riker and Data sit opposite Picard at the desk. Picard finishes a review of reports on his viewscreen, snaps it off irritably. PICARD Your theories on the sudden vulnerability of these systems, gentlemen? DATA If the Enterprise were really this fragile, sir, she never would have gotten out of spacedock. Therefore, her systems failures are not endemic to the ship, but are more likely the result of the actions of an unknown adversary. RIKER We have a saboteur aboard. DATA I believe I said that. PICARD (firmly) Gentlemen. The question now is, who. I can't believe it's one of our people. RIKER Agreed. Which leaves someone in either alien delegation. If the Ferengi bribed or bought even one of them, that's all that would be needed. DATA Ferengi contacts have been detected on both Selay and Antica, sir. PICARD Can any of you suggest another solution? RIKER (amused) You're sounding like a private eye, sir. DATA Query: private eye? STAR TREK: "Lonely Among Us" - 8/21/87 - ACT TWO 24. 45 CONTINUED PICARD A private consulting investigator who solves crimes. DATA A most interesting occupation. PICARD In the world of fact, it is, Data. However in literature, criminal detection becomes a fascinating exercise. (a glance to Riker) The immortal Sherlock Holmes would have an interesting view of our mystery, I believe. Data cocks an eyebrow; WE CAN SEE him mentally making a note to remember that name. Meanwhile: RIKER I'm sure, sir -- but I'm afraid we have to find our solution without History's Greatest Consulting Detective. 46 INT. ENGINEER'S OFFICE - ANGLE ON SINGH AND WESLEY conferring over a panel. Wesley suddenly points to a pertinent display. WESLEY Is it there, Mister Singh? If the control network breaks at that point... SINGH (nods) ... it bleeds warp engine command off into dead ends. (to Wesley) Excellent. I believe I can handle it from there, Mister Crusher. Wesley looks up, disappointed. Now that he's spotted the problem, he wants to stay for the solution. WESLEY But, sir -- STAR TREK: "Lonely Among Us" - 8/21/87 - ACT TWO 25. 46 CONTINUED SINGH Your schedule shows classwork now. Sorry. WESLEY Yes, sir. (heads for door; turns) But I don't learn nearly this much in school. SINGH (smiles) I tend to agree. But the captain's orders on this are very clear. 47 INT. CRUSHERS' QUARTERS - ANGLE ON BEVERLY She is dressed casually, relaxing in a chair, reading. She glances up and smiles as Wesley ENTERS. BEVERLY Solve any new problems today? WESLEY I was starting to, maybe, but Mister Singh sent me off to class. BEVERLY Wes -- you're only an acting ensign. (slight smile) You have to let the commissioned officers do some of the work. WESLEY Mom, listen. I've learned more than they understand. For example, on Channing's dilithium crystals theory I was telling you about... BEVERLY (frowns; puzzled) When did you tell me about that? WESLEY This morning. Don't you remember? Beverly stares at him, starting to grow a little concerned. STAR TREK: "Lonely Among Us" - 8/21/87 - ACT TWO 26. 47 CONTINUED BEVERLY Honestly, I don't, Wes. WESLEY You asked if the warp engines had to do with navigation, and I said -- BEVERLY Why would I have said that? The two of them look at each other. Why, indeed? 48 INT. ENGINEER'S OFFICE - ANGLE ON SINGH (OPTICAL) working at the console where we saw him earlier. He is busy, digging into the problem, checking his results on a viewscreen that pulls up different schematics as he works the board. He reviews the schematic currently on the screen, nods to himself, reaches for the panel again. Suddenly, a BLUE GLOW SURROUNDS HIM (OPTICAL), and he stiffens, shaking convulsively. A SCREAM is choked off as the power racks his body -- and he plummets off the chair to the deck. The BLUE GLOW FADES... leaving him lying motionless on the floor. A beat, Worf ENTERS from the Corridor outside Engineering. WORF Mister Singh, the Captain wants -- He pauses a short beat as he sees Singh's body, then he quickly rushes in to check for heartbeat and pulse. Nothing. WORF (continuing) Engineering to bridge. Security alert! PICARD'S COM VOICE Picard. WORF Lieutenant Worf, sir. I just found Mister Singh.... he's dead. FADE OUT. END OF ACT TWO STAR TREK: "Lonely Among Us" - 8/21/87 - ACT THREE 27. ACT THREE FADE IN: 49 EXT. SPACE - THE ENTERPRISE (OPTICAL) moving through space on IMPULSE POWER. PICARD (V.O.) Captain's log, stardate 41249.4. Assistant Chief Engineer Singh has been found dead in the Engine Room Office, cause unknown. We continue to run on impulse power. 50 INT. READY ROOM - PICARD, RIKER, CRUSHER, TASHA Tasha is very upset over Singh's death. PICARD (to Beverly) I want the autopsy as soon as possible, Doctor. TASHA Captain, I'm so sorry. To have one of our people die like this... PICARD First, let's find out how he died. Doctor? BEVERLY The autopsy is underway, sir. PICARD (to Riker) It could be... a word you're not to use... (leans in; low voice) ...murder. Status of investigation? TASHA Underway. RIKER Our best people. STAR TREK: "Lonely Among Us" - 8/21/87 - ACT THREE 28. 51 INT. ENGINEER'S OFFICE - ANGLE ON WORF, WESLEY, GEORDI They are clustered around the console where Singh died. Geordi is examining the panels there; Wesley steps up from behind, indicates a place on the panel. WESLEY Sir, he may have been working there on restoring warp power. GEORDI (eyes panel; then) According to these readings, we could go back to warp speed now. Wesley examines the board, looks up, surprised: WESLEY But that wasn't the reading when I left. WORF Singh probably repaired it just before he was killed. WESLEY But he couldn't have fixed it from here, sir! The problems we saw were inside the engines! GEORDI Who else could have corrected it, Wes? (to Worf) Inform the bridge of engine status. 52 INT. MAIN BRIDGE - ANGLE ON PICARD WORF'S COM VOICE We now have warp capacity, sir. All power on line. PICARD Well done. Warp engines ready. (to conn) On previous heading, warp factor six. 53 EXT. SPACE - ENTERPRISE (OPTICAL) The ship leaps into warp, the stars blurring as she makes the jump. STAR TREK: "Lonely Among Us" - 8/21/87 - ACT THREE 29. 54 INT. GUEST QUARTERS - ANGLE ON TASHA, BADAR N'D'D The quarters are still low-lit, mysterious. Badar N'D'D reclines on a low couch, looking up at Tasha with complete disinterest. BADAR N'D'D I tolerate these questions, Lieutenant Yar, because I need this vessel to get us to Parliament. Your shipboard problems do not concern me. TASHA They should. Our delays are your delays. BADAR N'D'D (waves it away) The peace conference will wait for us. TASHA I must ask where you were during this vessel's Earth hours of 1800 last night and 0700 this morning. BADAR N'D'D Eating. TASHA Sir, I'm talking about hours here... BADAR N'D'D It was a large meal. (smiles, revealing sharp canines) And an interesting animal. Tasha grimaces at the idea. 55 INT. CRUSHER'S OFFICE - TROI, BEVERLY, WORF as Worf APPEARS at the door of Beverly's office where Troi and Beverly wait. WORF You wanted me, Doctor? BEVERLY Yes, concerning your memory blackout. STAR TREK: "Lonely Among Us" - 8/21/87 - ACT THREE 30. 55 CONTINUED: WORF (nods) I still don't remember having one. BEVERLY The same thing happened to me. TROI I want to try hypnosis on both of you. It may restore your memory as to what happened. Beverly nods immediately. They turn to Worf who has hesitated. WORF I fear such things, but... BEVERLY Fear from you, Worf? Worf nods. 56 INT. RIKER'S QUARTERS - DATA, RIKER, TASHA (OPTICAL) They are gathered in chairs near the windows. (Warp speed.) Riker and Tasha compare notes on a portable viewer pad. Data is watching... and smoking a "Sherlock Holmes" style pipe. Tasha is more troubled by this than Riker. TASHA One thing is clear... Almost all the "peace" delegates answered our questions with lies. DATA Imprecise, Lieutenant. They omitted certain truths, which in itself tells us something. TASHA We can learn something from non-disclosure? DATA Oh, indubitably, my good woman. Tasha gives Riker a puzzled look. Indubitably? My good woman? During which, Data puffs on the pipe and Tasha pulls back as he exhales. STAR TREK: "Lonely Among Us" - 8/21/87 - ACT THREE 31. 56 CONTINUED: RIKER It's something the Captain mentioned. Sherlock Holmes, which Data is obviously studying... DATA (interrupting) Has studied, sir - every case. (indicates) As Holmes would have pointed out... during the time in question, something was afoot! TASHA (uncertain of the word) "Afoot?" Riker is becoming amused at Data's playing the "great detective" role ... and at Tasha's reaction to it. Meanwhile, Data has ignored Tasha's puzzlement over the word afoot. DATA While both sets of delegates say they were in their quarters, our crew locator sensed them passing here... (indicates) ... and here. TASHA But since they don't show where they went, we're still in the dark. DATA On the contrary, dear colleague - on their return they drew medical supplies appropriate to the treatment of minor wounds and abrasions on these life forms. RIKER Which, leaves you with only one conclusion. DATA Exactly. That they were too engaged in their own affairs to have disabled our ship and murdered the engineer. Given a choice, they'd rather kill each other than any of us. It's elementary my dear Riker...sir. STAR TREK: "Lonely Among Us" - 8/21/87 - ACT THREE 32. 56 CONTINUED: (2) Tasha has been looking from one to the other during this. She hesitates now, clearly uncomfortable. TASHA Speaking of aberrant behavior... She isn't joking. 57 INT. SICKBAY - ANGLE ON TROI, BEVERLY AND WORF Troi has a small machine before her which emits a resonant, melodic HUM and on which LIGHTS FLASH in a systematic pattern. She has just finished a "pass" with it in front of Beverly's face. Beverly sits in the desk chair in a light hypnotic trance. Worf watches intently; he has just gone through this himself. TROI Beverly... can you hear me? BEVERLY Yes. TROI I want you to go back in your mind to the moment when you first recall this sensation of memory loss. Please picture it exactly as it occurred. BEVERLY (pause; then:) He's lying on the hospital bed sedated. I'm walking up to him... I--- (distressed) I -- I -- I -- TROI Gently...gently. How do you feel at this moment -- as you lean over him to take the specimen? BEVERLY I... feel... someone else... something else there too... TROI (waits; then:) Go on. STAR TREK: "Lonely Among Us" - 8/21/87 - ACT THREE 33. 57 CONTINUED: BEVERLY (frowns, shakes head) I feel crowded. Not alone... get out. Get out of my mind! Beverly is tossing her head, as if to shake free of something. Troi turns to Worf and nods, indicating Beverly. TROI You said almost exactly the same thing -- as though there were something else inside you. 58 INT. OBSERVATION LOUNGE - ANGLE ON PICARD, OFFICERS (OPTICAL) Picard is at his desk, facing Troi, Beverly, Riker, Data (with pipe), and Tasha; we're at warp speed as WE COME IN: TROI -- Which confirms the feeling of duality that I sensed earlier in both of them. PICARD Why didn't you report it? TROI Because, sir, I assumed at first it was the kind of duality we Betazoids feel in all of you. (sees Picard's expression harden) Even you, sir. When you approach a decision and ask yourself which way to go... who are you talking to? PICARD (beat; his expression still saying "nonsense") Your hypnotism revealed another form of duality? TROI Yes, sir. I believe something invaded them. STAR TREK: "Lonely Among Us" - 8/21/87 - ACT THREE 34. 58 CONTINUED: BEVERLY (nods) It seems the only possible conclusion. Picard stands, paces behind his desk irritably, catches sight of Data and pipe. PICARD Data, let's proceed without the pipe. DATA If you wish, sir... (sets pipe down) ... but I ask if you take it as incontrovertible that it cannot be a family member or one of our crew? PICARD (beat, considering; then:) Yes. Very unlikely. DATA Then our investigation was worthwhile, sir. We have eliminated both the delegates and all our regular ship's complement. PICARD What are you suggesting? Data is inclined to pick up the pipe again, but remembers that Picard just issued an order about it. DATA I am referring to the Great Detective's credo, sir. I quote... "We must fall back on the old axiom that when other contingencies fail, whatever remains, however improbable, must be the truth." 59 OMITTED Riker and Picard exchange looks. STAR TREK: "Lonely Among Us" - 8/21/87 - ACT THREE 35. 60 INT. MAIN BRIDGE - WIDE ANGLE Geordi is at his usual Conn station; Wesley sits beside him at Ops. Worf is seated in Riker's chair. Supernumeraries are at aft stations. 61 CLOSER ON GEORDI AND WESLEY Wesley is quiet, faintly depressed. Geordi looks over at him, grins. GEORDI Wes, everything's fixed now. WESLEY That engine computer net wasn't repaired, sir. It just suddenly became all right. GEORDI It's the result that counts. (glances down at panel) What --- ? 62 WIDER ANGLE - ON COMMAND STATIONS WORF What is it? GEORDI Helm control just went down. (works panel - nothing) She won't respond. WORF Bridge to Captain. You're needed here immediately. Geordi works the panel controls, without result. GEORDI Wes, alert Engineering from your panel. WESLEY (works panel) Trying... 63 ANGLE AT READY ROOM DOOR Picard ENTERS bridge fast, Riker, Troi, Tasha, Data FOLLOWING, moving toward their stations. Beverly FOLLOWS them out onto the bridge, as: STAR TREK: "Lonely Among Us" - 8/21/87 - ACT THREE 36. 63 CONTINUED: PICARD Report. WORF Helm is down, sir. The ship's running wild --- 64 ANGLE ON PICARD moving to Geordi at Conn. Picard stands by Geordi. 65 ANGLE ON GEORDI, DATA, WESLEY Wesley swiftly rises, makes room for Data to take over the panel. Geordi turns in his seat to look up at Picard as: GEORDI Sir, we dropped to impulse power -- 66 CLOSE ON PICARD He bends over Geordi. His left hand rests near the small control panel at Conn. 67 OMITTED 68 CLOSE ON PICARD (OPTICAL) The strange BLUE GLOW FLASHES around Picard for a split second, then FADES. 69 INCLUDING GEORDI staring at Picard. GEORDI Sir... ? Are you all right? I thought I just saw --- 70 ON PICARD Picard remains sitting stiffly for a beat as though frozen by what has happened, and then his face takes on a slightly different expression. STAR TREK: "Lonely Among Us" - 8/21/87 - ACT THREE 37. 70 CONTINUED: PICARD I'm fine. (beat) Everything is fine now. FADE OUT. END OF ACT THREE STAR TREK: "Lonely Among Us" - 8/21/87 - ACT FOUR 38. ACT FOUR FADE IN: 71 EXT. SPACE - ENTERPRISE (OPTICAL) traveling on impulse power, unguided by any human hand. 72 INT. MAIN BRIDGE - EMPHASIZING PICARD Geordi is concerned at something happening at his position. PICARD Why the drop to impulse power, Lieutenant? GEORDI (turns to Picard) The helm is suddenly malfunctioning, sir. PICARD Malfunctioning? You're wrong -- Look again. GEORDI (turning to console) Sir, I --- He breaks off, staring at the panel. RIKER Mister La Forge? GEORDI (a beat; puzzled) There's nothing wrong with the helm now. Everything is -- just as it should be, sir. PICARD In that case, make our heading two-nine-five mark three-seven. GEORDI Sir... ? PICARD You have a problem with that heading, Lieutenant? STAR TREK: "Lonely Among Us" - 8/21/87 - ACT FOUR 39. 72 CONTINUED: GEORDI Do you want to double back on our course, sir? PICARD That is what I've ordered. A puzzled Geordi begins touching helm controls. 73 EXT. SPACE - THE ENTERPRISE (OPTICAL) going into a graceful turn which will take her in the opposite direction. As it finishes the turn, the ship jumps into warp speed. 74 INT. MAIN BRIDGE - WIDE ANGLE The bridge crew still at their positions. 75 ANGLE ON TROI concentrating her mind on Picard, uncertain. Picard has appeared lucid; his order to reverse course is not contrary to Starfleet policy or out-of-line for a starship captain. 76 EMPHASIZING PICARD AND RIKER Picard looks entirely normal, but with a very alert quality. RIKER Captain... I'm puzzled about your reversing our course. 77 ANGLE ON DATA, RIKER, TROI exchanging looks of puzzlement. Why double back on course? 78 INCLUDING PICARD AND GEORDI PICARD The energy "cloud," Commander -- I believe it important to have another look at it. STAR TREK: "Lonely Among Us" - 8/21/87 - ACT FOUR 40. 78 CONTINUED: RIKER Sir, we're behind schedule to Parliament already --- PICARD I believe a very important scientific discovery awaits us on this heading. TROI (looks up; beat) Perhaps you'll share your reasoning on that, sir? DATA Yes, since we obtained only minimal information on our sensor pass of it. PICARD We must go back to learn more. (to Troi; thin smile) Counselor... do you believe a ship captain should explain every order? TROI (beat; shakes her head) Of course not, sir. 79 EXT. SPACE - ENTERPRISE (OPTICAL) now heading the opposite direction, going back the way she came at warp speed. 79A INT. CORRIDOR Badar N'D'D is being chased down the Corridor by a SECURITY GUARD. BADAR N'D'D I demand to see the captain. FIRST SECURITY GUARD Stop, return to your quarters... ! A stateroom door OPENS to REVEAL Ssestar trying to edge outside past a SECOND SECURITY GUARD there. First security guard has managed to stop Badar N'D'D who whirls toward the Selay delegate in revulsion. STAR TREK: "Lonely Among Us" - 8/21/87 - ACT FOUR 41. 79A CONTINUED: SSESTAR (indicating Badar N'D'D) What is that doing on our deck? BADAR N'D'D (to Security Guard) I demand to know why this starship has changed course! FIRST SECURITY GUARD Please return to your quarters, delegates! 80 INT. RIKER'S QUARTERS Riker, Data, Troi and Geordi as Beverly ENTERS. RIKER You're late and you asked for this confidential meeting. BEVERLY Sorry. I was just so troubled by my talk with the captain. Something seems wrong... terribly wrong. TROI (hesitant) I believe I sense something ... different in the Captain ... not much and maybe I'm incorrect. (indicates Riker, Data and Geordi) They think I may be. RIKER (to Troi) You could be reacting to the reverse course order. GEORDI But that's our captain. It's not the first time he's done something unusual. DATA A mere change of direction hardly justifies mutiny. STAR TREK: "Lonely Among Us" - 8/21/87 - ACT FOUR 42. 80 CONTINUED: BEVERLY (to Troi) Exactly what do you believe you're sensing? TROI Exactly? (shakes head) It's difficult to put into words... just a feeling that he's, well... closed part of his mind to me. GEORDI How can you tell there's something there that you can't feel? TROI As I said... it's hard to say. I just feel the captain's become ... perhaps dangerous. RIKER If he's dangerous...if... GEORDI ... he'd have to be relieved from command. (to Beverly) Which you're allowed to do... but it's beaucoup trouble if you're wrong. DATA And at this moment it is all pure speculation. He has done nothing to subject the Enterprise to danger. BEVERLY Besides, I'd need a medical log giving clear evidence of incapacity. (to Riker) You could do it without that problem... RIKER Only if all command officers agreed it vital to do so. But he's not showing overt unusual behavior. STAR TREK: "Lonely Among Us" - 8/21/87 - ACT FOUR 43. 80 CONTINUED: (2) TROI Ultimately he will, I believe... BEVERLY Commander, as second in command, it's still in your corner. I'll order medical and psychiatric exams... You'll have to back me up somehow. 81 EXT. SPACE - ENTERPRISE (OPTICAL) traveling through space at warp speed. Direction should be the same as PREVIOUS SHOT. RIKER (V.O.) First Officer's log, stardate 41249.5. As I believed, the senior command officers refused to relieve the captain from duty on such slender evidence. 82 INT. CAPTAIN'S READY ROOM - ANGLE ON PICARD He looks up as Riker and Beverly ENTER the room and CROSS to face him over the desk. Picard looks up: PICARD Yes? BEVERLY I'd like you to come to Sickbay for some examinations, Captain. PICARD Oh? (nods) I'll be glad to do that when I'm free. BEVERLY I'd like to conduct them now, sir. PICARD Why? (to Riker) What can I do for you, Number One? RIKER Sir, Counselor Troi has recommended the examinations. STAR TREK: "Lonely Among Us" - 8/21/87 - ACT FOUR 44. 82 CONTINUED: PICARD (thin smile) Same question. Why? 83 CLOSER SHOT Riker firms up. RIKER It is my duty to inform the captain that we believe it possible that he is under some kind of alien influence which... may constitute a danger to this ship. Another flicker of a smile from Picard. It never gets to his eyes, and there's no humor in it. PICARD I consider it equally possible that you two and the counselor are overworked, and possibly suffering hallucinations. (to Beverly) This is an order... you're to arrange medical and psychiatric exams of both yourself and them. Doctor, you realize you're all acting strangely? BEVERLY I'm concerned that you've suddenly turned the ship away from... PICARD (interrupting; hard) What's happened to your mind, Doctor? The search for knowledge is always our primary mission. (stands) I'm sorry but I'm too busy for this kind of nonsense. Must I call security to force you to report to Sickbay? On his cold, penetrating stare, Riker and Beverly EXIT. 84 EXT. SPACE - ENTERPRISE (OPTICAL) proceeding on her way back to the "Cloud" at warp speed. STAR TREK: "Lonely Among Us" - 8/21/87 - ACT FOUR 45. 85 INT. CORRIDOR NEAR ENGINEERING - ANGLE ON TURBOLIFT The corridor is oddly low lit. As the turbolift DOORS OPEN and Riker STEPS OUT, he glances around, frowning at the lack of light. He starts toward Engineering, and a SPARKLING LOOP suddenly whips over his head and around his neck. He lurches back, yanked by the garrote; then it is abruptly loosened. Riker regains his balance as the garrote is whipped away from his neck, and he turns to see: 86 ANOTHER ANGLE - SSESTAR AND RIKER RIKER What in hell... ? The large Reptilian manages what appears to be an apologetic smile. SSESTAR Sorry. Wrong species. He backs away, still offering the smile, then turns and HURRIES DOWN the corridor to huddle with four other Selays. Riker fingers his throat ruefully, goes to a computer interface on a nearby wall and touches it. RIKER Riker to security chief. TASHA'S COM VOICE Yar here. RIKER Security squad to the Engineering Deck. The Selays are playing hide and seek down here -- obviously with the Anticans -- (rubs throat) -- and it's a lethal game. I want them returned to their quarters under guard. TASHA'S COM VOICE Right away, sir. (hesitantly) And are you... aware sir, the captain expects you to take a medical exam? RIKER I'll do it later. 87 OMITTED STAR TREK: "Lonely Among Us" - 8/21/87 - ACT FOUR 46. 88 INT. READY ROOM - ANGLE ON PICARD He is working feverishly at an o.s. personal Viewscreen, absorbing the information at an intense rate. A CHIME SOUNDS, and he looks up as though he is not sure at first what it means. Then he registers and: PICARD Come. 89 ANGLE TO INCLUDE BEVERLY The doors slide OPEN, and Beverly ENTERS. She is in medical "blues." She is trying to appear relaxed and confident, but nagging thoughts run around her mind asking about why she is really here. PICARD What do you want? BEVERLY I have the results of the exams you ordered. She offers a record tape, he tosses it aside and leans back in his chair... content and confident. 90 OMITTED 91 TWO SHOT - BEVERLY AND PICARD BEVERLY You don't care to inspect them? Picard ignores her, she picks up her courage, moves closer. BEVERLY Please, are you Jean-Luc? Slowly, Picard looks up, aware of both her and her physical closeness. He touches her hand. A long hesitation, then gently: PICARD He is here. BEVERLY The Jean-Luc I know? STAR TREK: "Lonely Among Us" - 8/21/87 - ACT FOUR 47. 91 CONTINUED: PICARD (nods) And more. BEVERLY The "more" frightens me... PICARD And elates us. We wish you could understand the glorious adventures ahead. BEVERLY You and... ? PICARD Soon we'll both be home. FADE OUT. END OF ACT FOUR STAR TREK: "Lonely Among Us" - 8/21/87 - ACT FIVE 48. ACT FIVE FADE IN: 92 EXT. SPACE - ENTERPRISE AND "CLOUD" (OPTICAL) The Enterprise slows to impulse power as it heads for the large energy pattern "Cloud" which can be seen in far b.g. RIKER (V.O.) (troubled) First officer's log, supplemental. On the orders of... Captain Picard, we have returned to the vicinity of the energy pattern "cloud." I am personally convinced that something from this "cloud" now shares... 93 INT. MAIN BRIDGE - WIDE SHOT All officers at their regular duty stations, except for Picard, who is not present. Riker is in the command chair. RIKER (V.O.) (continuing) ... the captain's mind. But there seems to be nothing we can do... at least within regulations. There have been no actions warranting relieving Captain Picard. And our medical personnel, while dubious about his condition, are not prepared to certify the captain's incapacity. At the Conn position, Geordi turns to look back at Riker. GEORDI Approaching the "cloud," sir. RIKER Very well, Mister La Forge. Bring us to within ten thousand kilometers and hold us there. GEORDI Aye, sir. STAR TREK: "Lonely Among Us" - 8/21/87 - ACT FIVE 49. 93 CONTINUED: Picard ENTERS from his Ready Room. Riker gets out of the command chair. RIKER Shall we begin the scientific tests that you wanted, sir? PICARD (smiles) They are already underway. 94 ANGLE ON MAIN VIEWSCREEN (OPTICAL) The energy pattern "shape" spreads out across the reach of space, as we saw it earlier. 95 EMPHASIZING PICARD as he looks at the viewscreen. His face is transformed, showing longing and even a kind of love. Then he turns to the bridge. PICARD I have an announcement for the entire bridge. 96 PICARD AND VIEWER (OPTICAL) Reaction and concern from all on the bridge as Picard moves to stand in front of the viewscreen. PICARD As many of you suspected... (indicating "cloud" image) ... when our ship passed through the edge of this, it accidentally carried off a sentient being... one much like these energy patterns we're seeing here. Picard moves toward Worf. 97 VARIOUS ANGLE ON PRINCIPALS as Picard moves to the helm. STAR TREK: "Lonely Among Us" - 8/21/87 - ACT FIVE 50. 97 CONTINUED: PICARD A frightening experience for any intelligent being. As if a great claw reached down and scooped up any of you from your home world. Drawn into the energy pathways of this vessel... (to Worf) ... it found its way to you, Worf, frantic at being carried from its home. Recognizing you as sentient beings, it pleaded for help. 98 SHOT OF COMMAND AREA Picard moving toward where Beverly stands nearby. PICARD ... but in ways you could not understand... going desperately from one to another of you... then discovering the computer intelligence in the ship's memory circuits. (nods) Simplistic intelligence, but it furnished a way to slow this Enterprise thing that had captured it. (toward Riker) And it very much regrets the accidental death of Engineer Singh during this... TROI (interrupting) Captain, do you exist in combination with the entity? RIKER) Is it in control of you, sir? PICARD) (that smile again) By the time we combined... STAR TREK: "Lonely Among Us" - 8/21/87 - ACT FIVE 51. 99 REACTION ANGLES as the bridge crew hears him admit the entity is now part of him. PICARD ... We had learned much about each other... our passion for exploration... for the unknown. We found we had similar dreams... and it offered your captain a way to realize them beyond any human expectation. RIKER Captain, I must speak to you privately...now. DATA I understand. As an energy pattern free of the limitations of matter... it might travel anywhere, at any velocity... RIKER (angry) Captain, did you hear me? DATA (intent on Picard) Sir, I see no way for you to journey with an energy form. PICARD (ignoring Riker) Isn't there? TROI (reacting to a thought) Maybe... just maybe... (to Riker) He's planning to beam both the entity and himself into that "cloud." PICARD (nods) The transporter need not pattern your captain back into matter... we'll beam energy only... STAR TREK: "Lonely Among Us" - 8/21/87 - ACT FIVE 52. 100 ANGLE INCLUDING BEVERLY reacting in some disgust and anger at his words and expression now. PICARD (ecstatic) ... and we will become... (pleased look) ... a combined energy pattern of that life form. 101 ANGLE ON COMMAND AREA - INCLUDING BEVERLY as Picard turns to Riker. PICARD A resignation from this command and from Starfleet has been appropriately recorded... RIKER (moving in; firmly) I refuse to allow this, sir. PICARD Oh? Under what Fleet regulation? Does this resignation threaten the ship and its company in any way? BEVERLY (moving in) Captain Picard, you are now relieved from duty. I judge you disabled... 102 ANGLE ON PICARD (OPTICAL) moving his hand toward a nearby panel. BEVERLY (O.S.) ... mentally incapacitated... Picard's hand touches the panel and WE SEE the familiar BLUE GLOW, at which the panel becomes a BRILLIANT DISPLAY OF LIGHT on a darkened bridge. Surprised VOICES and GROANS, all matched to: RIKER (O.S.) Security! Help me restrain the Captain... STAR TREK: "Lonely Among Us" - 8/21/87 - ACT FIVE 53. 102 CONTINUED: TROI (O.S.) This is blinding me... TASHA (O.S.) ... Where is he? These light flashes... 103 FULL ON BRIDGE (OPTICAL) BLINDING BLUE LIGHT from all panels, ENERGY FORMS (lightning-like) flings some of the bridge crew to the floor... WORF Captain! I'll help you if you'll let me... 104 ANGLE AT TURBOLIFT (OPTICAL) as in the darkness WE MAKE OUT a Figure ENTERING the turbolift, the door CLOSING. 105 ANGLE ON RIKER (OPTICAL) Intermittently ILLUMINATED BY THE BRILLIANT FLASHES as he gets zapped again, then again, struggling to reach the captain's panel. RIKER Hang on to the captain, someone! He makes it, hits the RED ALERT switch... which SOUNDS THE KLAXON and begins the RED ALARM LIGHTS BLINKING. 106 INT. CORRIDOR Darkened too, but the FLASHING RED LIGHTS illuminate Picard turning into the Transporter Room. 107 INT. TRANSPORTER ROOM where a crewman lies unconscious. Picard, relieved to see the crewman stirring somewhat, makes a setting on the transporter panel, jumps to the platform as WE HEAR the TRANSPORTER SOUND begin. STAR TREK: "Lonely Among Us" - 8/21/87 - ACT FIVE 54. 108 FULL ON TRANSPORTER PLATFORM as the TRANSPORTER EFFECT takes Picard away from the Enterprise. 109 EXT. SPACE - ENTERPRISE AND "CLOUD" (OPTICAL) The Enterprise hovers even closer to the "cloud," waiting. 110 INT. MAIN BRIDGE - WIDE ANGLE Riker is in the command chair -- all others at their usual stations except Tasha who ENTERS very concerned and upset. Riker glances around the bridge, then: TASHA The Transporter Chief has no idea of what the coordinates were, sir. GEORDI He's just out there "somewhere?" How can we settle for that? RIKER Give me a choice, then. DATA Still no readings, no sign of anything. Long hesitation; then, Riker sighs. RIKER Mister La Forge, it's time to set a course for Parliament. Warp eight. GEORDI We're really leaving him... ? RIKER I've waited as long as possible, Lieutenant. 111 EMPHASIZING TROI She stiffens suddenly in her seat, reaching out to grab Riker's arm. STAR TREK: "Lonely Among Us" - 8/21/87 - ACT FIVE 55. 111 CONTINUED: TROI Wait! I'm feeling... yes, it's the captain! (concentrating) The captain only. He's out there alone! RIKER The entity... has it abandoned him? TROI Aban... ? No, the combination just wasn't possible out there. (intently; fast) The Captain's in trouble, sir; we must beam him back! RIKER Beam him back as what? He's nothing but energy now. 112 ANGLE INCLUDING GEORDI turning to Riker, matching his pace. Time may be important to the Captain now. DATA Sir, the entity was caught by the ship's circuitry -- the captain might try to get in the same way if he's in trouble! RIKER (to Geordi) Move the ship in closer! As Geordi turns, hurriedly doing so. GEORDI Moving in, sir. But where? RIKER No way to know. Let's hope he can come part way himself. 113 EXT. SPACE - ENTERPRISE AND "CLOUD" (OPTICAL) The Enterprise moving close, then closer. STAR TREK: "Lonely Among Us" - 8/21/87 - ACT FIVE 56. 114 INT. MAIN BRIDGE - MAIN VIEWER (OPTICAL) showing Enterprise coming even closer -- the "cloud's" energy patterns becoming visible. 115 REACTION SHOT The helm officers, intent, hoping. 116 REACTION SHOT The Command Area with Riker and Troi -- then Beverly ENTERS with Wesley. She indicates her son to Riker, questioningly. Riker nods, goes back to his intent examination of the viewer. RIKER Troi, is there any way you can... "get" a message to him? TROI (shakes head sadly) I wish I could. 117 SHOT INCLUDING DATA as he swivels toward Riker. GEORDI Sensors are monitoring our perimeter, the ship's circuitry... (shakes head) Nothing, sir. RIKER (interrupting) Take us into the edge of it, La Forge. As he looks toward the Main Viewer: 118 FULL ON MAIN VIEWER (OPTICAL) The "cloud" moving toward us -- then we're into it. 119 COMMAND AREA Riker still intent on the viewer. STAR TREK: "Lonely Among Us" - 8/21/87 - ACT FIVE 57. 119 CONTINUED: WESLEY Mom, is he gone for good? Beverly shushes her son. He tries almost a whisper: WESLEY) (continuing) The funny thing is, I... I sort of liked him... 120 INCLUDING TASHA AND WORF (OPTICAL) Worf is suddenly startled by a reading on his panel. WORF Sir! On my sensor controls... A sudden BLUE GLOW APPEARS, like that which earlier indicated the entity's presence. Followed by a CRACKLE OF ENERGY which sees Worf stepping back, alarmed. TROI Something's here. I can feel it! DATA Just as before! Going to you first, Worf... GEORDI (interrupting) Something crazy on my viewer circuits... (looking toward Viewer) Commander Riker! Riker leaps toward Geordi's station. 121 FULL ON GEORDI'S VIEWER (OPTICAL) An area of static is APPEARING. The STATIC IMAGE is undefined at first but is becoming a "shape," although not yet recognizeable. 121A INCLUDING COMMAND AND HELM AREAS Very curious. GEORDI "Static?" STAR TREK: "Lonely Among Us" - 8/21/87 - ACT FIVE 58. 121B FULL ON MAIN VIEWER (OPTICAL) The STATIC IMAGE as if with great effort, slowly forms itself into a lop-sided IMAGE of the letter "P." 122 INCLUDING COMMAND AND HELM AREAS Riker coming to his feet. RIKER "P" for Picard! Data moves quickly toward Riker. DATA He's in the ship's circuitry! Come to the Transporter Room. Please! Data HURRIES toward the turbolift. Then he turns. DATA (continuing) There might be a way, sir! Hurry! Riker decides to HURRY to the turbolift himself. He joins Data and the turbolift doors CLOSE. 123 EXT. SPACE - THE ENTERPRISE (OPTICAL) moving away, the "cloud" now in b.g. 124 INT. TRANSPORTER ROOM where Data makes quick adjustments at the control panel. RIKER This is a wild theory Data! DATA I knew we had to have the captain's physical pattern here, He was the last one beamed out. RIKER Is what you're thinking possible? STAR TREK: "Lonely Among Us" - 8/21/87 - ACT FIVE 59. 124 CONTINUED: DATA Unknown at this time, sir. I hope the captain remembers his pattern is here. (steps back) If he has, his energy has moved into the transporter relays by now... RIKER (nods) Wish we had some sign he's there. (waits; then) We've no choice but to risk it. DATA (nodding) Energizing, sir! 125 SHOT INCLUDING TRANSPORTER PLATFORM as Data engages the transporter. Riker waits...waits. 126 TWO SHOT OF RIKER AND DATA watching anxiously, their disappointment building. They exchange a worried look. 127 TRANSPORTER PLATFORM (OPTICAL) The TRANSPORTER EFFECT builds slowly, a bit unevenly... then firms up, finally MATERIALIZING PICARD. He looks around, surprised. PICARD What the devil am I doing here?! RIKER (quietly) Sounds like our Captain... Picard begins MOVING OFF the platform. DATA But confused. This Picard-pattern was formed before he went out there... STAR TREK: "Lonely Among Us" - 8/21/87 - ACT FIVE 60. 127 CONTINUED: PICARD (to Riker) What's happening to me, Number One? I was ready to beam away... somewhere... I remember talk of an... an entity? But all that seems so vague... DATA (to Riker) I believe the Captain is now his separate self, sir. A lot of what happened is naturally missing... PICARD (interrupting) Data, what nonsense are you talking now? Is it still "Sherlock Holmes?" Data hesitates, exchanging a look with Riker who gives an almost imperceptible nod. DATA Ah, yes. Indubitably, sir, indubitably. PICARD (beginning to EXIT) Well, at least get rid of that damned pipe. It smells. As the captain ALMOST EXITS, Riker intercepts him. RIKER Doctor Crusher asked me to steer you past Sickbay. She says you've looked very tired. Tasha ENTERS hurriedly. TASHA Sorry Commander, but Security Team Two reports they've discovered a puddle of blood outside the Selay Quarters and they can't find one of the delegates and... STAR TREK: "Lonely Among Us" - 8/21/87 - ACT FIVE 61. 127 CONTINUED: (2) RIKER (interrupting; annoyed) Lieutenant, couldn't this have waited a moment? We've got the captain back. TASHA (to Picard) Good to see you, sir. The problem is that one of the cooks has just been asked to broil Reptile for the Anticans... and it looks like the Selay delegate... PICARD Riker, with these "peace" delegates and all, I do need some rest. Take charge, Number One. 128 EXT. SPACE - THE ENTERPRISE (OPTICAL) The "cloud" in far b.g. as WE SEE the Enterprise go into WARP SPEED EFFECT. FADE OUT. END OF ACT FIVE THE END STAR TREK: THE NEXT GENERATION "Justice" #40271-109 Story by John D.F. Black and Worley Thorne Teleplay by Worley Thorne Directed by James Conway Copyright 1987 Paramount Pictures Corporation. All Rights Reserved. This script is not for publication or reproduction. No one is authorized to dispose of same. If lost or destroyed, please notify the Script Department. 2ND REV. FINAL DRAFT SEPTEMBER 4, 1987 STAR TREK: "Justice" - 9/4/87 - CAST STAR TREK: THE NEXT GENERATION "Justice" CAST PICARD FIRST EDO CITIZEN RIKER TWO EDO CITIZENS DATA RIVAN (YOUNG FEMALE EDO) TROI LIATOR (MALE EDO) BEVERLY EDOLORD TASHA FIRST EDO BOY GEORDI CONN CREWMEMBER WORF EDO GIRL WESLEY SECOND EDO BOY FIRST MEDIATOR (MALE EDO) SECOND MEDIATOR (MALE EDO) EDO ADULTS CHILDREN MUSIC GROUP OF EDO HARPISTS TRANSPORTER CHIEF MEDICAL TECHNICIAN STAR TREK: "Justice" - 9/4/87 - SETS STAR TREK: THE NEXT GENERATION "Justice" SETS INTERIORS EXTERIORS USS ENTERPRISE USS ENTERPRISE IN ORBIT Main bridge Command and Helm Areas SURFACE OF RUBICUN THREE Corridor Starboard Lounge SECOND SCENIC LOCATION Corridor Outside the Observation Lounge MYSTERY OBJECT Sickbay Corridor Sickbay EDO GARDENS EDO COUNCIL CHAMBERS EDO COUNCIL CHAMBERS STAR TREK: "Justice" - 9/4/87 - TEASER 1. STAR TREK: THE NEXT GENERATION "Justice" TEASER FADE IN: 1 EXT. SPACE - ENTERPRISE IN PLANET ORBIT (OPTICAL) A lovely blue and white planet, close to Earthlike in appearance. PICARD (V.O.) Captain's log, stardate 41255.6. After delivering a party of Earth colonists to the Strnad solar system and providing... 2 CLOSER ON ENTERPRISE (OPTICAL) emphasizing the starship's line. PICARD (V.O.) (continuing) ... them with all their basic necessities, we have discovered another Class M planet in the adjoining Rubicun star system. 3 INT. MAIN BRIDGE - ANGLE INCLUDING MAIN VIEWER (OPTICAL) PICARD, TROI, WORF and WESLEY on duty with replacement bridge crew, all examining the planet, as: PICARD (V.O.) (continuing) We are now in orbit there, having determined it to be inhabited as well as unusually lovely. It is... STAR TREK: "Justice" - 9/4/87 - TEASER 2. 4 EMPHASIZING PICARD PICARD (V.O.) (continuing) ... a pastoral world, which also shows evidence of learning and civilization. My first officer has taken an away team down to make contact and they are in the process of returning to the ship. 5 COMMAND AND HELM AREAS Picard looking to Troi. PICARD Riker has sounded very enthused in his reports. TROI (nods) He says the planet has life forms almost identical to us. Interrupted by Beverly who ENTERS, obviously with much on her mind. BEVERLY Captain... ! (sees she has interrupted) Sorry, Troi. Troi smiles, beckons Beverly in. TROI The Doctor has something much more important on her mind, Captain. BEVERLY (frowns; to Troi) Please, Troi, do not pick up my feelings! TROI Your feelings? All we need are ears. STAR TREK: "Justice" - 9/4/87 - TEASER 3. 5 CONTINUED: PICARD (smiles to Beverly) You've been talking about it for days now... Shore leave for the crew. Beverly sees that her son Wesley has also thrown her a concerned look. She gives an apologetic nod to Troi. BEVERLY I'm tired myself. (to Picard) Establishing that colony has exhausted the entire crew, sir. We're not a supply vessel. Settling all those people was a strain on everyone. RIKER interrupts by ENTERING with DATA, GEORDI, TASHA. They all register enthusiasm, giving the replacement crew nods, smiles, thumbs up gestures as they take over their positions. Riker has continued straight to Picard, acknowledging Troi and Beverly too. PICARD Is it as good as your reports, Number One? RIKER (enthused) Exactly per my reports, sir. Class M, so Earthlike, so beautiful, it will startle you! BEVERLY It sounds wonderful for the children! (to Picard) The Holodecks are marvelous, of course, but nothing like giving them open space and fresh air... Beverly takes a simulated deep breath of air. TASHA I've listed my report on their customs and laws, sir. Fairly simple, common sense things. STAR TREK: "Justice" - 9/4/87 - TEASER 4. 5 CONTINUED: (2) GEORDI Wild in some ways, puritanical in others. Neat as pins, ultra-lawful, and making love at the drop of a hat. TASHA Any hat. PICARD (smile) But even the happiest report has its negatives. Let's start with them. RIKER (grins) There are none, sir. Not that any of us can find. DATA But there is a problem here, sir! Data is puzzling over readings at his station. DATA (continuing) I do not understand this at all! WORF (to Picard) It's the faulty reading I reported, sir. TASHA Sensor technicians are working on it, sir. They've identified it as a "glitch" in the system. Picard turns back to Riker. PICARD I take it you find no "glitch" at all in this planet, however. TASHA If you approve shore leave, sir, we could start with a small group at first. STAR TREK: "Justice" - 9/4/87 - TEASER 5. 5 CONTINUED: (3) PICARD Of course... (turns) Wesley, if we go, you will join the away team to evaluate this world as a place for young people to relax. WESLEY Yes, sir! He glances at Beverly to note her smiling approval of this. PICARD If all scans and observations confirm the reports... (nods) ... certainly I'll approve it. (beat) Let's hope it is not too good to be true. FADE OUT. END OF TEASER STAR TREK: "Justice" - 9/4/87 - ACT ONE 6. ACT ONE FADE IN: 6 EXT. SPACE - ENTERPRISE IN PLANET ORBIT (OPTICAL) The same lovely planet. PICARD (V.O.) We are in orbit of a planet designated Rubicun Three... and have found it to be the home of a life form who call themselves the Edo. 7 EXT. SURFACE OF RUBICUN THREE (OPTICAL) The planet is as described. We are at an inhabited part of it... clean, neat, the "streets" appearing more like a running track, bordered with flowers. The TRANSPORTER EFFECT brings in our new away team of Riker, Troi, Tasha, Worf and Wesley. In the near distance, a group of very human appearing people have seen them arriving and two of them turn and race in this direction. Worf is quickly aware of it and prepares to interpose himself protectively. WORF Careful, sir... RIKER It's all right, Lieutenant, these are the Edo we met. 8 ANGLE ON THE EDO ARRIVING at high speed. A young female and male who, like other Edo we'll meet, are both tall, full haired, with even white teeth, great bodies. They're also dressed in loose, sexy clothing and these two wear a silvery necklace indicating high rank. Riker is watching an attractive Edo woman, saying: RIKER They certainly are... fit, right? Troi is looking at an Edo male. STAR TREK: "Justice" - 9/4/87 - ACT ONE 7. 8 CONTINUED: TROI They certainly are. RIVAN Health and happiness! LIATOR A pleasant day to you! Troi gives Riker an even sharper second look as the Edo ARRIVE and RIVAN, the woman, gives Riker a close and rather intimate hands-on hug which, although it touches upon the sensual, also combines genuine friendship, too. RIVAN You did return as promised! The man, LIATOR, is looking over Troi and Tasha with healthy interest. Like Rivan, although slim and very well muscled, he has a quiet dignity that fits well with this necklace-badge of leadership. RIKER Rivan, Liator... (indicating) Also from our vessel is Troi... LIATOR Slowly, slowly... (embraces Troi) I must also welcome this lovely one... (embracing Tasha) ... and this lovely one... Riker waits, watching with interest until Tasha disengages. She understands his look. TASHA (smiles) My pleasure. TROI Healthy sensuality, sir. I feel mainly happiness and friendship. RIVAN And I welcome this huge one... (hugs and fondles Worf) ... oh, yes, yes... STAR TREK: "Justice" - 9/4/87 - ACT ONE 8. 8 CONTINUED: (2) WORF (pleased) Nice planet! Rivan moves to Wesley, stops quizzically. RIVAN But you are a young one. I do not know your custom regarding love. Wesley is clearly nervous, although intrigued too. He clears his throat: WESLEY Uh... I guess... whatever you usually do... Rivan shows excellent taste, giving Wesley a "hug" but without any "extras." RIKER Others would like to visit here too. If you'll tell us what limits you'd place on the number... LIATOR Whatever pleases you. We can discuss it at the Council Chambers. RIVAN (to Riker) Shall we go there now or remain and play? RIKER Play? RIVAN At love. Unless you don't enjoy that. (to Worf) Perhaps you do? LIATOR (to Troi) And you? Yes, I can see that you do. STAR TREK: "Justice" - 9/4/87 - ACT ONE 9. 8 CONTINUED: (3) WESLEY Listen, maybe I'll just go on ahead... RIVAN (indicates Wesley) This is unfair to him. (to Wesley) We'll go to the Council Chambers. You'll find young people your age there. WESLEY (warily) Well... I really can't make any promises... LIATOR (laughs) You don't have to. Our rules are simple. No one does anything uncomfortable to them. RIVAN Come! Our people will want to know you. Then she turns back, glancing at the more formal clothing worn by the humans. LIATOR Rivan, perhaps they...can't...run. WESLEY (to Riker) Can't run? Sure we can run, right sir? RIKER (to the others) That's the custom here, running... (to Wesley) Right! Lead the way! Rivan, Liator, and Wesley LEAD OFF, the Others JOGGING AFTER them. STAR TREK: "Justice" - 9/4/87 - ACT ONE 10. 9 TRUCKING - EMPHASIZING RIKER AND WORF who find themselves out in front of Tasha and Troi. RIKER "When in Rome... ," eh? WORF When where, sir? CAMERA HOLDS as the Group runs past. 9A EXT. SECOND SCENIC LOCATION Rivan and Liator leading the Enterprise people along another lovely pathway where an elderly but very trim FIRST EDO CITIZEN and a pair of younger N.D. EDO CITIZENS see them coming and break into a run to join them. Lots of smiles and waves. 9B TRUCKING - EMPHASIZING AWAY TEAM AND FIRST EDO CITIZZEN The Enterprise people very much taken with the joy and good health they're seeing. First Edo citizen notes Tasha's light complexion and amazon form. FIRST EDO CITIZEN Good health to you! TASHA Happiness to you! (to Troi) It's like an "Eden" here. 10 EXT. COUNCIL CHAMBERS A combination of conference and recreation facilities, lots of light and air and spectacularly healthy looking people in revealing but comfortable garb. SOUND of delighted ADULT LAUGHTER from inside the chambers too. Two adults and a child DEPART on the run, another older woman ARRIVES -- on the run too. She doesn't seem to be breathing very hard at all. 11 ANGLE ON RIKER AND TEAM ARRIVING on the run with their Edo companions. They haven't done too badly. Rivan stops, looks Riker and the Enterprise people over, then moves in and embraces Riker again. STAR TREK: "Justice" - 9/4/87 - ACT ONE 11. 11 CONTINUED: RIVAN Good health! I thought you might be out of breath. A SHRIEK from children at play, several Edo children race INTO SIGHT. LIATOR Children, we've brought you a new friend! FIRST EDO BOY Hello! Join us! EDO GIRL Yes, please! Wesley joins the smiling children. RIKER (grins) We may surprise you in a lot of ways. 12 INT. COUNCIL CHAMBERS The kind of place you'd like to visit. No particularly formalized furnishing plan -- it includes just about any way anyone would like to sit or loll. The same sort of revealing but sensible garb here too -- along with good humor. In fact, joy is what is mainly present here. Lots of fruit, nuts, food and drink selections. A MUSIC GROUP of Harpists in sight -- admittedly strange looking harps on which they compose, and now and then PLAY LILTING MUSIC which, like everything else, is not taken too seriously here either. RIVAN Everyone! We've brought the visitors! LIATOR (gesturing to away team) Please enjoy what we have! 13 EMPHASIZING ENTERPRISE PEOPLE as they are taken charge of with great hospitality. STAR TREK: "Justice" - 9/4/87 - ACT ONE 12. 14 EXT. SPACE - ENTERPRISE IN ORBIT (OPTICAL) The same lovely planet. 15 INT. MAIN BRIDGE as Data ENTERS bridge from the turbolift, strides rapidly toward his station, his face reflecting concern. DATA I have traced it through all sensor channels, Captain! It is not a glitch... ! Picard becomes alarmed at Data's tone, follows him to the Ops station where Data begins going over readings again. DATA (continuing) ... or any other form of error or malfunction, sir. GEORDI Confirmed by my readings, sir. It's like a "shadow something"... DATA Exactly! As if it's not entirely in or out of our dimension. PICARD "What" is, Commander? Data points off to front starboard of the vessel. DATA Whatever is sitting out there without triggering our alarm relays, Captain. PICARD Center Main Viewer on that area. 16 ANGLE INCLUDING MAIN VIEWER (OPTICAL) as the IMAGE there shifts slightly, but REVEALS nothing but the planet and star background previously seen. STAR TREK: "Justice" - 9/4/87 - ACT ONE 13. 16 CONTINUED: PICARD (to Data; continuing) I need more, Commander. Data seems stumped for a moment, then: DATA Permission to go to hailing frequencies, sir? A puzzled Picard nods. DATA Hailing frequencies open. On all frequencies and language forms, send... (beat) Enterprise to Object off our starboard bow. Request that you identify yourself! As suddenly, the "what" begins appearing -- A HUGE AND COMPLEX LOOKING OBJECT, A BIT SMALLER THAN THE ENTERPRISE. IT IS HALF-TRANSPARENT BUT PARTLY SOLID, TOO, AND VERY DEADLY LOOKING. A VESSEL? PERHAPS, BUT SEEMINGLY MORE, TOO. WE WILL LEARN THAT IT SOMEHOW EXISTS HERE AND IN ANOTHER CONTINUUM AT THE SAME TIME. At the moment it appears, the Enterprise RED ALERT with KLAXON comes on too. FADE OUT. END OF ACT ONE STAR TREK: "Justice" - 9/4/87 - ACT TWO 14. ACT TWO FADE IN: 17 EXT. SPACE - ENTERPRISE AND MYSTERY OBJECT (OPTICAL) The partially transparent Mystery Object as described, positioned very close to the starship Enterprise. Its very nearness implies threat. 18 INT. MAIN BRIDGE (OPTICAL) The Red Alert lights FLASHING, the KLAXON SOUNDING a couple more times, then going SILENT. The mystery object IMAGE is on the Main Viewer; Picard and the others are as we last saw them. GEORDI Shields and deflectors up full, sir. Main phaser banks ready. PICARD Hailing frequencies? Any reply? DATA (puzzled) It was something unintelligible, Captain. Now running it through our logic and language circuits... PICARD Have a real look at it, Geordi! GEORDI (hurrying for the turbolift) Aye, sir. TASHA Sir, my sensors read it... well, as "half there." And it does look... She hesitates. Data finishes her thought. DATA As if it's partly...transparent. STAR TREK: "Justice" - 9/4/87 - ACT TWO 15. 18 CONTINUED: PICARD Data, what the hell is it? It is rather frightening to see Data turn to his Captain... slowly shake his head. 18A INT. STARBOARD LOUNGE - (OPTICAL) Geordi ENTERING on a run, racing to the first large port, from which the mystery object/vessel thing can be seen from here too. He stands examining it. Then: GEORDI Lieutenant La Forge to Captain. PICARD'S COM VOICE Go ahead, La Forge. What can you make out? GEORDI This is something I've never seen before, sir. 18B INT. MAIN BRIDGE - COMMAND AREA - (OPTICAL) Picard intent upon: GEORDI'S COM VOICE It's as if it isn't entirely in our dimension, sir. PICARD Anything else? GEORDI'S COM VOICE Negative, sir. It's something I don't understand. DATA (to Picard) I have some information on its first transmission, sir. It translates as... (looks up) ... "stand by." STAR TREK: "Justice" - 9/4/87 - ACT TWO 16. 18B CONTINUED: CONN CREWMEMBER Sir! Sensors show something emerging from that... that ship, if you want to call it that. DATA Verified. Something very small... 19 EXT. SPACE - ON MYSTERY OBJECT (OPTICAL) REVEALING A TINY PINPOINT OF LIGHT having come out of the side of the mystery object (no hatchway visible) CROSSING orbital space toward the Enterprise. 20 INT. MAIN BRIDGE (OPTICAL) Data watching Main Viewer. DATA Getting smaller... 21 EXT. SPACE - ANGLE ON ENTERPRISE (OPTICAL) Still smaller now, the PINPOINT OF LIGHT moves toward the starship then actually passes through its "solid" side. 22 INT. ENTERPRISE CORRIDOR (OPTICAL) Several crewpersons stopping, astonished at the sight of what this CLOSER VIEW shows as the SWIRLING BLOB OF LIGHT comes INTO SIGHT near the corridor deck and passes on an upward diagonal path of EXITING VIEW near the ceiling beyond. (It is on its way to the bridge.) 23 INT. MAIN BRIDGE (OPTICAL) where Conn is reacting to an alarm from his panel. Geordi RE-ENTERS bridge, takes his position. CONN CREWMEMBER Intruder alert, sir! But I don't... (puzzled) ... show a location... STAR TREK: "Justice" - 9/4/87 - ACT TWO 17. 23 CONTINUED: PICARD (to Geordi) Why a tiny swirl of light, Lieutenant? Could you make out anything else? GEORDI (puzzling; looks up) No, sir. Perhaps it is meant to seem "non-threatening" to us. DATA (interrupting) The away team signal has been cut off, Captain! We are no longer in contact with our people! Conn is very puzzled over a reading at his station. CONN CREWMEMBER Intruder relays do show something... He hesitates, puzzled. PICARD Why has everything become a something, or a whatever? He gets his answer as the tiny SWIRLING LIGHT OBJECT COMES INTO VIEW. It is about the size of a 'light bulb' now, moving more slowly than before. COMING IN ON AN UPWARD ANGLE THROUGH THE DECK, IT STOPS NOW, SUSPENDED IN THE MID-BRIDGE AREA. 24 ANGLE ON COMMAND AREA (OPTICAL) Picard has come to his feet, watching as the TINY SWIRLING LIGHT OBJECT which moves in his direction, and STOPS. Picard has tried not to retreat before the mysterious thing, but it is with some difficulty. Conn has moved in holding a large hand phaser ready, but has gotten a headshake from Picard. Then, from the tiny swirling light object, a VOICE we'll come to know as the EDOLORD. THE WORDS ARE TRANSMITTED WITH SUCH VOLUME THAT THEY LITERALLY SHAKE THE BRIDGE (OPTICAL OR CAMERA JIGGLE). A couple of the bridge crew throw hands to ears protectively. At the same time, we HEAR SOUND OF SOMETHING SHATTERING "GLASSLIKE" AS IT COMES APART, various PANELS FLARE WITH LIGHT. STAR TREK: "Justice" - 9/4/87 - ACT TWO 18. 24 CONTINUED: EDOLORD (V.O.) STATE THE PURPOSE... Apparently aware the volume has been too great, the Edolord message is begun again at least at a bearable volume level. EDOLORD (V.O.) (continuing; repeating) STATE... (volume still reduced) STATE THE PURPOSE OF WHAT YOU HAVE DONE! 25 SHOT PERMITTING NEXT EFFECT (OPTICAL) Picard fighting to stay calm. As he realizes he has heard the entire message: PICARD I am Captain Picard, commanding this Federation starship... VIOLENTLY, THE ENTIRE MAIN BRIDGE BUCKS AND SHAKES (OPTICAL AND/OR CAMERA MOVEMENTS) IN A WAY SUGGESTING SOMETHING "SHAKING SENSE" INTO A SMALL CHILD OR ANIMAL. All not seated are thrown to the deck or must hang on. 26 ANOTHER ANGLE Data moves toward the Command Area, examining the LIGHT SWIRL. EDOLORD (V.O.) (repeating) STATE THE PURPOSE OF YOUR VISIT HERE! PICARD (toward LIGHT SWIRL) We have sent down what we call an away team to make peaceful contact with... EDOLORD (V.O.) DO YOU PLAN TO LEAVE LIFE FORMS HERE? STAR TREK: "Justice" - 9/4/87 - ACT TWO 19. 26 CONTINUED: PICARD No... we are merely visiting here... EDOLORD (V.O.) (interrupting) BUT YOU DID MORE AT THE WORLD YOU JUST LEFT. WHY HAVE YOU LEFT YOUR OWN LIFE FORMS THERE? DATA The colony we just planted, sir... PICARD We found that world uninhabited. The life forms we left there... (carefully choosing his words) ... had sought the challenge... (shrugs) ... at least that's the basic reason... had sought the challenge of creating a new lifestyle, a new society there. (beat; explaining) All life on our world is driven to... to protect its own form by re-seeding itself as... as widely as possible. EDOLORD (V.O.) DO NOT INTERFERE WITH MY CHILDREN BELOW! 27 ANGLE ON DATA (OPTICAL) genuinely puzzled over Picard's last statement. Suddenly the TINY LIGHT SWIRL RISES TOWARD DATA, comes to rest floating inches in front of his face. Then, Data registers a surprised expression now as he continues looking at the SWIRLING LIGHT OBJECT. Then: DATA Captain... I do not understand how, but it is asking me if I was... constructed for information exchanges. STAR TREK: "Justice" - 9/4/87 - ACT TWO 20. 27 CONTINUED: PICARD (hesitates, then) If there... is any way of our learning more about whatever is out there, Data... Data starts to nod, a movement which triggers action -- the tiny LIGHT SWIRL moving in to touch Data's forehead -- resulting in Data going down to the deck with a crash. 28 ANGLE DOWN ON DATA (OPTICAL) His entire form GLOWING as he goes stiff, eyes rolling back in their sockets. 29 EXT. COUNCIL CHAMBERS ESTABLISHING. 30 CLOSER ON ENTRY as Wesley comes INTO VIEW with THREE EDO YOUTHS of about his own age, two male and one a very pretty young female who has very much caught Wesley's attention. The boys have a ball; they're all smiling, laughing. FIRST EDO BOY Watch! You can't do this! The Edo boy stands expertly on his hands. Wesley eyes this, decides to do something else. He turns a series of cartwheels. The Edo kids CHEER with enthusiasm, especially the girl who hugs Wesley impulsively. EDO GIRL I want to do something too! With you. WESLEY (loses smile; warily) Uh... What? EDO GIRL Something you can teach me. Will you? STAR TREK: "Justice" - 9/4/87 - ACT TWO 21. 30 CONTINUED: WESLEY Well, actually, there are some games I... uh, don't quite know yet... EDO GIRL It's playing ball. Will you teach me? WESLEY (relieved) Oh, sure. If you have a bat for the ball, I'll show you my favorite. (sees their puzzlement) A bat... (shows measurement) ... a stick or branch, about this thick, this long... EDO GIRL We can get it from the gardens. They race OFF leading the way, beginning to toss the ball back and forth. 31 INT. COUNCIL CHAMBERS - EMPHASIZING RIKER Riker in the midst of reacting to something Worf has just said. With him the balance of the away team is mixing happily with various of the Edo. RIKER (touching his insignia) Enterprise, come in. (waits, then again) Captain, do you read me? He gets nothing in return. Troubled, he turns to Worf, speaking quietly: RIKER (continuing) Let's... it may be nothing, but let's move our people together. WORF (nods, then) Including the boy, Wesley? He's outside... STAR TREK: "Justice" - 9/4/87 - ACT TWO 22. 31 CONTINUED: TROI Is there some problem? Troi has somehow sensed Riker's feelings and made her way toward them now. RIKER We've lost contact with our ship. TROI (scans room) It's nothing these people have done... I'm certain of that. Their minds are so open... RIKER Help me locate Wes. He's wandered somewhere. He LEADS Troi toward the entrance as Worf eases his way toward the rest of the Away Team. 32 OMITTED 33 INT. COUNCIL CHAMBERS - EMPHASIZING WORF Not wanting to create a false emergency, he works his way toward Tasha carefully. She's with Rivan, Liator and other Edo. WORF If I can take a moment of your time, Lieutenant... TASHA Yes, Worf... but you've got to hear this. (to Liator) Are you telling me that there's no crime here whatsoever? No one breaks any laws? LIATOR (smiles) Once they did. Long, long ago there was much disorder. (smiles; shakes head) But not now. STAR TREK: "Justice" - 9/4/87 - ACT TWO 23. 33 CONTINUED: TASHA (to Liator and Rivan) But I've seen no sign of... of police... those who enforce laws. RIVAN We have very few. They're called "Mediators." And they are needed only in one place each day... LIATOR The "punishment zone." An area that's selected for a period of time. TASHA It's a completely random selection? LIATOR (nods) No one but our Mediators know what place or for how long. We're very proud of the wisdom of our ancestors. No person ever knows where or when a zone will be. RIVAN (smiling too) ... and so no one risks death. WORF (suddenly alert) Death? RIVAN (nodding) ... by breaking any law. TASHA Wait, let's explain this... LIATOR (nodding, pleased) Only one punishment for any crime. WORF Anyone who commits any crime in the punishment zone dies! STAR TREK: "Justice" - 9/4/87 - ACT TWO 24. 33 CONTINUED: (2) LIATOR (nods) The law is the law. Our peace is built on that. TASHA Even a small thing? Such as ignoring a rule like "keep off the grass?" RIVAN (nods; happily) Then no one breaks that rule. Who wants to risk execution? There's always a white wall or fence to remind anyone of a forbidden area like that... Tasha begins EXITING calling a question back to the Edo. TASHA And just who tells visitors of those rules? WORF We'd better find Wesley! They leave behind two puzzled Edo. FADE OUT. END OF ACT TWO STAR TREK: "Justice" - 9/4/87 - ACT THREE 25. ACT THREE FADE IN: 34 EXT. EDO GARDENS Wesley INTO VIEW with his friends, still tossing the ball back and forth. He makes a difficult catch, capturing the Edo girls' admiration again. (In b.g. is an attractive, glassed potting shed surrounded by a low white fence.) EDO GIRL You're very clever at this! Wesley decides to show off, runs ahead... WESLEY At home we play a lot of it. (gestures; running ahead) Here, toss the ball ahead of me! Which is done, but it is going over his head. 35 CLOSE ON EDO GIRL registering concern. EDO GIRL No, Wes... 36 PANNING WESLEY making a strong effort to reach the ball, leaping a neat white fence at the potting enclosure. The Boys are now registering too. FIRST EDO BOY (shouting) No! It's forbidden to disturb the new plants... ! 37 ANGLE ON WESLEY'S FALL Leaping for the ball, missing... falling into the potting shed. STAR TREK: "Justice" - 9/4/87 - ACT THREE 26. 38 GROUP SHOT - THE YOUNG PEOPLE The girl hanging back, ANXIOUS. The boys pressing in, short of the white fence. Wesley lying in the broken glass of the Shed. FIRST EDO BOY Couldn't you see the fence? That's for new plants... SECOND EDO BOY (overlapping first) Don't ever go past a white marker! WESLEY (getting up) What's wrong? The the girl sees someone approaching from O.S., reacts horrified, SCREAMS. 39 WIDER ANGLE REVEALING a pair of Edo MEDIATORS (local law enforcement) hurrying toward the potting shed area in b.g. They are middle-aged men, exceedingly trim and healthy-looking, also kindly in appearance. Their only indication of office is a neat belt and pouch. But at the sight of them the girl SHRIEKS AGAIN and it is from genuine despair and fear for Wesley. EDO GIRL Oh, no! Oh, please, no! 40 PAN THE MEDIATORS IN as Wesley climbs back over the fence, brushing himself off. The Edo young people now back away, awed at what has happened. FIRST MEDIATOR Speak the truth. We are Mediators. WESLEY (brushing clothes) I said I was fine. Just some splinters... STAR TREK: "Justice" - 9/4/87 - ACT THREE 27. 40 CONTINUED: EDO GIRL (staying back; through tears) He doesn't know; he's from another place. SECOND MEDIATOR (genuinely) How very sad. But this zone has been selected. FIRST EDO BOY He doesn't understand! FIRST MEDIATOR (nods) It's always sad... now doubly so. SOUND OF RUNNING STEPS, heralding: RIKER (O.S.) What's happening here? 41 ANGLE TO INCLUDE RIKER AND TROI HURRYING IN to where the two Mediators stand with Wesley. The Edo young people are frightened, stay in b.g. WESLEY (to Riker) I was chasing a ball... (indicating shed) ... and fell into that. I'm really sorry! MEDIATOR You admit you did that? Freely? Wesley straightens up, throwing a look toward Riker. WESLEY I'm with Starfleet. We don't lie. Riker gives Wesley a look with some pride hidden in it. STAR TREK: "Justice" - 9/4/87 - ACT THREE 28. 41 CONTINUED: RIKER (to Mediators) It won't happen again. We apologize. FIRST MEDIATOR We're sorry, too. But that changes nothing. Mixed with MORE RUNNING FOOTSTEPS. 42 WIDER ANGLE TO INCLUDE the rest of the away team, Tasha and Worf, as they ARRIVE. TASHA Careful, Commander, they've got some strange laws here... RIKER I thought you reviewed the laws here. TASHA But they list nothing about punishment. That's what all this is about. FIRST MEDIATOR One moment, please... (to young Edo) Is there a witness to this transgression? Hesitantly, sadly, the other young people nod. FIRST EDO BOY But it was my fault; I threw the ball past him... First Mediator holds up his hand, appearing to be genuinely saddened as he silences the Edo boy. Second Mediator drops his head in a gesture of extreme sadness too. STAR TREK: "Justice" - 9/4/87 - ACT THREE 29. 42 CONTINUED: FIRST MEDIATOR We have a visible transgression, ample witnesses, and an admission of guilt... (to Wesley) ... and it deeply pains us to do what we must. Are you prepared for punishment? First Mediator has opened his pouch during this, brought out a small device (to be identified as a syringe). Second Mediator has stepped to get to the rear of Wesley, trying to get past Riker. SECOND MEDIATOR (to Riker) Please? WORF Punishment? If you mean what the others were talking about... RIKER (demanding) What kind of punishment? Name it! FIRST MEDIATOR Death, of course! Don't make it... (raising syringe) ... difficult for the boy... Second Mediator has now squeezed past Riker, obviously intending to grab Wesley's arms from the rear... and is up-ended fast by Riker while Tasha and Worf bring out phasers trained directly on First Mediator. WORF Drop that; drop it now! The Mediators seem even more stunned by what the humans have done. The syringe has been dropped; Tasha retrieves it, holds it for Riker's examination. TASHA It's a kind of syringe... Riker grabs it, holds it under First Mediator's nose. STAR TREK: "Justice" - 9/4/87 - ACT THREE 30. 42 CONTINUED: (2) RIKER What is this? You said "death;" is it "poison?" FIRST MEDIATOR (offended; very upset) But... but of course it is! Completely painless; the boy would have felt nothing... (indicating Wesley) But look at him now. You've frightened him! WESLEY (disbelieving) He was going to kill me? SECOND MEDIATOR (to Riker) And if this Zone were still in effect, you would all deserve death. FIRST MEDIATOR It was announced you came as friends. Is this how friends act? During which Riker has touched his insignia. RIKER Enterprise from away team, come in. (waits) Are you receiving us, Enterprise? TASHA (touching insignia) Urgent, Enterprise. Please respond! 43 EXT. SPACE - ENTERPRISE AND MYSTERY OBJECT (OPTICAL) in orbit of the planet. 44 INT. MAIN BRIDGE - ANGLE EMPHASIZING DATA (OPTICAL) CONTINUING LAST SHOT with the exception that Beverly is now present, leaning over Data and checking him with a medical tricorder. Both are also anxiously aware of the tiny LIGHT SWIRL and his GLOWING FORM. STAR TREK: "Justice" - 9/4/87 - ACT THREE 31. 44 CONTINUED: PICARD Condition? BEVERLY No sign of consciousness, but the balance of the readings are quite normal for him. 45 EMPHASIZING PICARD AND BEVERLY Both anxious. PICARD I believe this is some form of information exchange with whatever is over there. At least, I hope that's it. BEVERLY Any communication from our away team? 46 EMPHASIZING DATA (OPTICAL) as Picard shakes his head. PICARD Something is blocking communication both... He cuts off mid-word. The LIGHT SWIRL breaks contact with Data -- THEN ABRUPTLY DISAPPEARS! 47 ANGLE ON PICARD AND BEVERLY REACTING to this, and to the LIGHT GLOW fading from Data whose eyes remain closed. Beverly reaches in quickly, touching Data, examining him again. 48 WIDER ON MAIN BRIDGE Reactions from the others to that and to the SOUND of TASHA'S VOICE in mid-message: TASHA'S COM VOICE ... Security, urgent. Repeating, Enterprise from away team... STAR TREK: "Justice" - 9/4/87 - ACT THREE 32. 48 CONTINUED: GEORDI (interrupting) This is the Enterprise, Lieutenant. We're receiving you now. 49 ANGLE ON DATA Beverly checking readings on her medical tricorder again. TASHA'S COM VOICE This is an urgent call for Captain Picard. RIKER'S COM VOICE We may need your presence here, Captain. We have serious trouble with... with a member of our away team and an unusual law they have here... PICARD Captain to Riker, stand by. (to Beverly) Signs of consciousness? BEVERLY None yet. Perhaps in minutes, hours... I don't yet know what's happened to him. PICARD Take him to Sickbay; call me the instant he's awake. (to Geordi) Anything new on that... that thing out there? GEORDI Negative, sir. PICARD Captain to first officer. I'm beaming down. FADE OUT. END OF ACT THREE STAR TREK: "Justice" - 9/4/87 - ACT FOUR 33. ACT FOUR FADE IN: 50 EXT. SPACE - ENTERPRISE AND MYSTERY OBJECT (OPTICAL) still next to each other, orbiting the planet. PICARD (V.O.) Captain's log, supplemental. We have encountered a strange vessel-like object, one with frightening power, which appears to exist partly in another dimension. On the world below... 51 EXT. COUNCIL CHAMBERS ESTABLISHING. As before, both young and old are seen traveling easily at a run. PICARD (V.O.) (continuing) ... what began as a shore leave opportunity among delightful inhabitants of a lovely Earthlike planet... has led incredibly to a death sentence... 52 INT. COUNCIL CHAMBERS - WIDE ANGLE in which Picard is being led to what appears a "seat of honor" next to Rivan, Liator, other planet folk. Riker, Troi and Geordi are moving in to take a place next to the Captain. Hovering anxiously nearby are Tasha and Worf holding their small phasers unobtrusively in hand as they scan the Edo, alert for any further surprises. PICARD (V.O.) (continuing) ... a death sentence proclaimed against... one of our crew members for what our world considers a petty, non-criminal infraction. How can I allow a crew member to die for that? (MORE) STAR TREK: "Justice" - 9/4/87 - ACT FOUR 34. 52 CONTINUED: PICARD (Cont'd) How does the Prime Directive apply to this case? Indeed if we do save our crewmember, how will the frightening object up here react to that? 53 CLOSER ON KEY GROUP Before Picard takes his seat, he moves Troi aside, speaks quietly: PICARD Care to comment privately how you read any of this... TROI (shakes head) Unnecessary, sir. (indicates) I get strong feelings that they are honest almost to a fault. But they do have great respect, even pride, in their own ways. Picard moves to take his seat. LIATOR Welcome to our world, Captain. We regret that our system of justice is troubling you. PICARD Wesley Crusher -- where is he? RIKER In accord with the Prime Directive, Captain, I've let them hold him pending the outcome of this. RIVAN (gently) He is safe and unharmed. We promise that. STAR TREK: "Justice" - 9/4/87 - ACT FOUR 35. 53 CONTINUED: RIVAN Captain Picard... I do not know how you Earth people conduct law and justice; even if you respect such things... PICARD We do. LIATOR Good, so do we. Our precepts have been handed down from long ago. The tranquility you see in our lives has been made possible by our laws... RIVAN We are a people of law. They do sometimes bring us sadness, but we have learned to adjust to that. Perhaps your laws work as well... PICARD They haven't always, but they do now. LIATOR Do you execute criminals? PICARD No... not any longer, that is. RIVAN You did once? PICARD Unfortunately, yes. But since then... RIVAN (interrupts) And when you did, was it believed necessary to do so? PICARD Can we please get to the facts concerning our crewmember? (MORE) STAR TREK: "Justice" - 9/4/87 - ACT FOUR 36. 53 CONTINUED: (2) PICARD (Cont'd) (waits; gets no answer) Yes, some people then felt it was necessary. But we've learned how to detect the seeds of criminal behavior... Capital punishment is no longer justified in our world as a deterrent. LIATOR But you once believed execution necessary. (to Rivan) So, we are not yet as "advanced" as they are. (to Picard) And since you are "advanced" in other ways too, I suggest you use the, ah, transfer device... RIVAN "Beam... " LIATOR ... the "beam" device to permit the Wesley boy to escape from us. We will record him as a convicted-criminal out of our reach... (then sarcasm) ... an "advanced" person who luckily escaped the barbarism of this backward little world. Picard reacts uncomfortably to this. PICARD Unfortunately, we have a law ourselves known as the Prime Directive... RIVAN (nods) Riker has explained it to us... PICARD Is the boy in the slightest danger from you right now? Rivan and Liator exchange looks. STAR TREK: "Justice" - 9/4/87 - ACT FOUR 37. 53 CONTINUED: (3) LIATOR (to Rivan) Until sundown? RIVAN (nods; to Picard) Because you are strangers, we are delaying enforcement of the law. But we must act by the time of sundown. PICARD Then, I have another question now, please. While orbiting... while circling high above your world as we do... we encountered a strange object, a "vessel" perhaps? Do you know of such a thing? It was... well, you could say not entirely real, at least not completely what you might call solid... RIVAN Do you mean God? PICARD God? LIATOR God is said to be somewhere up there. Protecting us. A long beat during which the Enterprise people exchange looks, uncertain what this could mean. PICARD Exactly... exactly how would you describe "God?" RIVAN (indicating Picard) As you just did. As existing both here and in another place also. LIATOR But when God wants to show its power, it can make itself felt most fully. STAR TREK: "Justice" - 9/4/87 - ACT FOUR 38. 53 CONTINUED: (4) GEORDI (with a look to Picard) We know. Communicator BOS'N WHISTLE SOUNDS; Picard touches his insignia. PICARD Picard here. BEVERLY'S COM VOICE CMO Crusher here, sir. Commander Data has just regained consciousness. PICARD What condition? Can he talk? BEVERLY'S COM VOICE He is insisting on it, sir. Urgently. Troi has made a signal to Picard, mouths the word "Wesley." PICARD Stand by; Picard out. (to Troi) I'd rather explain about her son to her personally. (to Rivan and Liator) You promise Wesley Crusher will be safe until sundown? LIATOR (nods) You have our word. PICARD Then, will one of you return with me to our vessel? RIVAN (nods) Of course. I'll go as a hostage for the boy's safety. STAR TREK: "Justice" - 9/4/87 - ACT FOUR 39. 53 CONTINUED: (5) PICARD No, that's not it. I want you to... identify something for me, if you can. (touches insignia) Captain to Transporter Room. Stand by for three to beam up... Picard motions to Troi, beckons for Rivan to join them as they stand to one side. RIVAN I'm...frightened... TROI (touches her gently; smiling) No reason to be. PICARD Transporter Room, energize. 54 EFFECTS ANGLE - (OPTICAL) as Picard, Troi and Rivan BEAM OUT. 55 EXT. SPACE - ENTERPRISE AND MYSTERY OBJECT/VESSEL still in orbit of the planet together. 55A INT. CORRIDOR OUTSIDE OBSERVATION LOUNGE Picard, Troi and Rivan ENTER SCENE coming down the corridor. Rivan is astonished by what she is seeing. She looks from Troi to a couple of very efficient appearing crewmembers who are passing. RIVAN But this is a ... a city. A great city! Now, Beverly ENTERS SCENE also, her expression freezing as she sees Picard and bears down upon him. BEVERLY Captain, I've just seen the away team report about Wesley... STAR TREK: "Justice" - 9/4/87 - ACT FOUR 40. 55A CONTINUED: PICARD (interrupting; firmly) In a moment, Doctor... BEVERLY (interrupting) "In a moment... " PICARD (icily) Exactly, Doctor, in a moment. (to Rivan; more gently) You were about to say... ? Rivan gives Beverly a puzzled glance, then turns her attention to Picard, indicating the vessel. RIVAN Since you have all this power, why be concerned about our laws? You could take the boy from us! PICARD (troubled smile) It's not that simple. Beverly gives a quick look at Rivan and Picard at this, beginning to understand at least something of what may be happening. With so much of her own at stake, it is all Beverly can do to keep from interrupting again, but Picard's firm expression detains her. Picard, Beverly, and Troi lead Rivan into a turbolift. Troi gives a troubled look toward Rivan. 55B INT. MAIN BRIDGE as Picard, Troi and Rivan ENTER from turbolift. TROI From here we can view whatever's outside our vessel. RIVAN Do you mean my world?! You said we'd be high above it... STAR TREK: "Justice" - 9/4/87 - ACT FOUR 41. 55B CONTINUED: PICARD (nods) And something else that's up here circling your world too. It's very important to us... perhaps to you... to know what it is. Rivan is puzzled. 56 ANGLE INCLUDING MAIN VIEWER (OPTICAL) REVEALING THE MYSTERY VESSEL/OBJECT out beyond what WE CAN SEE of the Enterprise. CAMERA PANS to Rivan, Picard, Troi, and Beverly. At the instant Rivan sees it, she drops to one knee, clenching her eyes closed, with hands crossed over her chest. PICARD I'm sorry, Rivan, but this was necessary. Do you know what that is? Rivan nods jerkily, her eyes still clenched closed. TROI (waits; then gently) Can you tell us what it is? Rivan stays frozen in the same position. Picard now waits, then: PICARD Is it "God?" Rivan again nods jerkily, eyes still clenched. PICARD (continuing) Now, it's very important you answer something. How do you recognize what it is? 57 ANOTHER ANGLE Rivan actually trembling. Troi bends close, speaks encouragingly: STAR TREK: "Justice" - 9/4/87 - ACT FOUR 42. 57 CONTINUED: TROI Nothing will harm you, I promise! Just tell us how you recognize it. RIVAN (beat; weakly) It... has appeared...before. It is... the same. PICARD Can you speak to it... Does it speak to you? TROI Captain... ! 57A ANOTHER ANGLE (OPTICAL) Troi is pointing agitatedly to where the mysterious object/vessel is GLOWING BRIGHTER, and the bridge begins to shake as WE HEAR THE IMMENSE VOLUME OF THE VOICE WE HEARD EARLIER IN THE BRIDGE. EDOLORD (V. O.) RETURN MY CHILD! BEVERLY (to Captain; puzzled) "Return... ?" Picard's eye falls on the trembling Rivan and he suddenly understands. The moment interrupted by the Enterprise beginning to SHUDDER and the LIGHTS BLINK OFF, EMPHASIZING THE NOW BRIGHTLY GLOWING EDOLORD OBJECT/VESSEL. TROI It's coming toward us, sir... ! And this is exactly what is happening. THE EDOLORD OBJECT/VESSEL IS MOVING TOWARD THE ENTERPRISE ON A COLLISION COURSE. The Enterprise is SHAKING heavily now, WE CAN HEAR STRUCTURAL STRAIN. Picard understands what to do, takes off his insignia, attaching it to Rivan's clothing as: STAR TREK: "Justice" - 9/4/87 - ACT FOUR 43. 57A CONTINUED: PICARD Picard to Transporter Room, urgent! TROI Yes, do that! But hurry... ! BEVERLY It is still coming toward us... TRANSPORTER CHIEF'S COM VOICE Transporter Chief to Captain... PICARD One to beam down to away team location. Hurry! 57B ANGLE EMPHASIZING RIVAN (OPTICAL) Picard steps back from her, his insignia attached to her clothing. PICARD Engage, Transporter Room, urgent! Engag... The TRANSPORTER SOUND cuts him off and Rivan BEAMS OUT. 57C ANGLE INCLUDING VIEWER (OPTICAL) as slowly the LIGHTS COME ON and the EDOLORD OBJECT/VESSEL RETURNS TO ITS ORIGINAL DISTANCE FROM ENTERPRISE. 57D INT. SICKBAY CORRIDOR as a turbolift door opens, Picard and Beverly EMERGING to stride down the corridor toward Sickbay. BEVERLY What do you intend to do about my son? PICARD He is being held safely, until sundown... Beverly pulls to a stop, faces Picard. STAR TREK: "Justice" - 9/4/87 - ACT FOUR 44. 57D CONTINUED: BEVERLY When he faces execution! Although he has committed no crime, certainly none that any sane and reasonable person would... Beverly's words have come faster, louder, until she finally realizes she is giving way emotionally. She stops, controls herself with an effort we can see. BEVERLY (continuing) I... apologize, sir... but this is very difficult for me... PICARD You saw what that thing was about to do. I have a ship, an entire crew to consider... BEVERLY If you felt the same, you'd be as frightened and trembling... PICARD (quietly) But I am. They face each other silently. Then she nods. BEVERLY Data is in Sickbay here. You'll find him able to talk. 58 INT. SICKBAY Data is conscious, being scanned on Sickbay equipment by a MEDICAL TECHNICIAN. As Beverly and Picard ENTER, the Technician pauses in what he is doing. MEDICAL TECHNICIAN He's checking out fine, Doctor. BEVERLY (nods) Finish it later, please. The medical technician withdraws. Picard moves in to bedside. Data nods at him. STAR TREK: "Justice" - 9/4/87 - ACT FOUR 45. 58 CONTINUED: DATA I was an excellent choice for them, Captain. They could communicate with me quite... (shakes head) ... I was about to say quite "easily," but there was nothing "easy" about it. Fortunately, they stopped short of overloading my circuitry... PICARD (interrupting) You're saying they. It is a vessel of some sort... DATA (interrupting) Definitely not a single "entity" if that's what you mean, sir... although they know the Edo worship them as a "God thing." PICARD They know... ? DATA (nods) They recognize that this is quite expected and harmless at the present Edo stage of evolution, and... PICARD (interrupting) What kind of vessel? DATA (without pause) It is perhaps not what we'd understand as a "vessel," sir. The dimensions this one occupies allows them to... well, to be in several places at once. But they consider this entire star cluster to be theirs, and it was probably unwise of us to attempt to place a human colony in this area. (MORE) STAR TREK: "Justice" - 9/4/87 - ACT FOUR 46. 58 CONTINUED: (2) DATA (Cont'd) Of course, there are three thousand four other planets in this general star cluster in which we... PICARD Data, don't babble! DATA "Babble," sir? I am not aware that I ever babble, sir. It may be that from time to time I have considerable information to communicate, and you may question the way I organize it... Data trails off as he becomes aware of Picard's expression. PICARD Please "organize" it into brief answers to my questions. Do they accept our presence at this planet? Obeying Picard exactly (and without any sign of rancor), Data gives clipped answers. DATA Not yet decided, sir. PICARD (waits) Please feel free to volunteer any important information, however. DATA I volunteer that they are now observing us, sir. PICARD To judge what kind of life forms we are? DATA No, it is more curiosity, sir. I doubt they expect us to abide by their value systems. Picard throws a glance toward Beverly, as: STAR TREK: "Justice" - 9/4/87 - ACT FOUR 47. 58 CONTINUED: (3) PICARD Do they... know of our Prime Directive? DATA They know everything I know, sir. PICARD And, in your opinion, if we violated the Prime Directive.. ? BEVERLY (interrupting; blurting it) That's not a fair question at... Beverly bites off her words. But it is all she can do to keep from saying more. PICARD (to Data) Continue. DATA That would be a case of judging us by our own rules, sir. If we violate our own Prime Directive, they might consider us deceitful and untrustworthy. (beat) You do recall, sir, they cautioned us not to interfere with their "children" below. (looks from Beverly to Picard) What has happened? BEVERLY (exploding) The Edo want to execute my son. (to Picard) I will not allow that to happen, Jean-Luc! She exhibits a fury that Data has watched with considerable interest. He turns to Picard. DATA Most interesting, sir. The emotion of motherhood, compared to all others felt by humans... STAR TREK: "Justice" - 9/4/87 - ACT FOUR 48. 58 CONTINUED: (4) Beverly whirls on Data now. BEVERLY SHUT UP! She DASHES angrily from the room. Data looks from Picard, to her, to Picard. Then he nods: DATA You were right, sir. I do tend to babble. FADE OUT. END ACT FOUR STAR TREK: "Justice" - 9/4/87 - ACT FIVE 49. ACT FIVE FADE IN: 59 EXT. SPACE - EMPHASIZING ENTERPRISE (OPTICAL) The mystery object between starship and planet, their relative positions not moving. PICARD (V.O.) Captain's log, stardate 41255.9. Whatever the object or vessel in orbit with us, it hangs there like a "nemesis". It is one thing to communicate with something mysterious... 60 INT. STARBOARD LOUNGE (OPTICAL) Picard sitting alone, looking out at the mysterious object. PICARD (V.O.) (continuing) ... but it is quite another to be silently observed by it. I am concerned whether it understands the same concept of reason that we do? Picard ponders all this for a moment more until Data ENTERS. Picard beckons. DATA You sent for me, sir? PICARD Let's talk some more, Data. DATA Yes sir. What level of communication? Picard gives him an annoyed look. PICARD Any. My apologies for saying you babbled. STAR TREK: "Justice" - 9/4/87 - ACT FIVE 50. 60 CONTINUED: DATA But I do, sir. (beat) It was wise to beam back the Edo woman. PICARD (nods) Barely in time. DATA (nods) The Edo's "God" is very protective of its children. PICARD There was no choice but to learn... (indicates mystery object) ... what we could about that thing from her. DATA Apparently the Edo people had seen it before, from time to time, sir. PICARD (nods) But I'm sorry I had to. She was so frightened. DATA (nods) Understandable. To share an orbit with "God" is no small experience. Picard looks at Data, smiles. PICARD You have a facility for seeing things not in the way we do, but as they truly are. Picard shifts in his seat closer to Data, addresses him eye to eye. STAR TREK: "Justice" - 9/4/87 - ACT FIVE 51. 60 CONTINUED: (2) PICARD (continuing) I need help, my friend. I cannot let Wesley or any member of this vessel be sacrificed this way. The Prime Directive does not really intend that. DATA The problem, sir, is there! (indicates mystery object) Although they have learned of the Prime Directive from my mind, how will they evaluate it? How do they reason? What are their values? Remember its warning to us, sir. PICARD Exactly. How do I explain not obeying the laws down there, not permitting young Crusher's execution? Does that endanger this ship and over a thousand other lives? DATA Would you choose one life over one thousand, sir? PICARD (snaps) I refuse to let arithmetic decide questions like that! Picard examines Data's expression again. Then, he indicates out toward the mysterious object/vessel again. PICARD Did you learn anything of the relationship between the Edo and that? Why are they so certain it is "God?" DATA Any sufficiently advanced life form can appear to others to be that, sir. (MORE) STAR TREK: "Justice" - 9/4/87 - ACT FIVE 52. 60 CONTINUED: (3) DATA (Cont'd) (looks out toward the Object) But when they were probing my thoughts, Captain, I could feel that whatever they are now, they once existed in this dimension, just as we do. Perhaps also in the same kind of "flesh and blood" form. Since then, however, they have evolved considerably further. Their present existence in mixed dimensions no doubt has advantages we do not understand... PICARD Then, in their earlier flesh and blood existence they could have once shared our kind of values. DATA The Edo share them, sir. PICARD Why would advanced things like that feel obliged to protect the Edo? DATA Perhaps because the Edo are a child-race by comparison. Possibly a race which the life forms over there "planted" here much as we now plant human colonies on Class-M planets. Interrupted by Beverly ENTERING. She moves to face Picard, trying for a somewhat respectful position of attention. She is mastering her emotions, but the pain is obvious. BEVERLY Having fulfilled my professional obligations regarding Commander Data... STAR TREK: "Justice" - 9/4/87 - ACT FIVE 53. 60 CONTINUED: (4) PICARD You now request permission to beam down -- permission granted. (stands) You can accompany me while I try to resolve this. (starts; then stops and turns) And you should know that whatever the cost, I will not allow them to execute your son. Beverly turns to Picard -- she wants to fall crying at his feet, or embrace him, cover him with kisses of gratitude. BEVERLY (correctly) Thank you, sir. PICARD (to Data) Take command, Data. Picard STRIDES OUT of the lounge, then Beverly HURRIES AFTER him. As he leaves, Data smiles a second time. DATA Aye, sir. 61 EXT. COUNCIL CHAMBER Only a few Edo in sight. It's getting late in the day. 62 INT. COUNCIL CHAMBER - ANGLE ON RIKER at the door, looking outside. Then he turns, takes a few steps to where Liator sits talking with Rivan. RIVAN Almost dark. (turns) I want the boy brought here now. On hearing this, Tasha and Worf move in. They do not brandish their phasers but it is clear they will enforce what Riker wants. Rivan and Liator obviously understand this -- and perhaps do not really oppose it. STAR TREK: "Justice" - 9/4/87 - ACT FIVE 54. 62 CONTINUED: TASHA I'll go along with you. LIATOR Of course. They EXIT. Then WE HEAR the TRANSPORTER ARRIVAL SOUND and: 63 TRANSPORTER SHOT (OPTICAL) where several Edo come to their feet in wonder again as PICARD AND BEVERLY BEAM IN. RIVAN (O.S.) Captain Picard... Her RUNNING FOOTSTEPS as she hurries INTO SCENE. Reaching Picard, she drops worshipfully to one knee, crossing her hands across her chest, eyes closed as when she saw the mystery/vessel object. She hands Picard his insignia. RIVAN I saw you share the sky with God. You must be Gods. (turning to the other Edo, eyes still clenched) And the boy too. The Edo there shuffle nervously, uncertainly. They have always appeared to be a calm, intelligent life form, never seeming overly superstitious, but should they reject this possibility? Beverly turns to Picard hopefully; is this an answer to the dilemma? Then Picard bends, lifts Rivan up by her elbows. PICARD No, no, we're not "Gods." (small smile) Your own idea of that is much better for you at this time... WESLEY (O.S.) (interrupting) Mother... STAR TREK: "Justice" - 9/4/87 - ACT FIVE 55. 64 ANOTHER ANGLE to INCLUDE WESLEY ENTERING along with Liator, the two Mediators. Those two act rather stiffly, officers of law who have tried to do their sworn duty and are having outsiders interfering with it. Wesley has stopped short of going to his mother. WESLEY (to Beverly) I guess you know a lot has happened here... BEVERLY (nodding; holding it in) I know. WESLEY Are you going to let them kill me, sir? PICARD No. (turning to Liator and Mediators) But I'd like to prevent it in a way you can understand... FIRST MEDIATOR How can we let this happen, Liator? Everything we respect, our law, our peace, our world's order... SECOND MEDIATOR (moving to Picard) You are more powerful but we beg you not to do this to us. At least study what we once were -- hurtful to each other, savage, thieving... RIKER (interrupting) We understand. In fact, your system of law and punishment may be better than many we once had. (points at Picard) But he has laws he must obey too. And one of them says he must protect his people from harm. STAR TREK: "Justice" - 9/4/87 - ACT FIVE 56. 64 CONTINUED: LIATOR We did not ask you to come here... PICARD (nods) Which has to do with another law I must obey. All of us are sworn not to interfere with other life in the galaxy. I am caught between the two. If I save this young man, I break that law... FIRST MEDIATOR And you should be executed if you do so! PICARD (nods) I may suffer almost as much. Starfleet takes our Prime Directive very seriously... SECOND MEDIATOR No, it is God who will punish you! RIKER (nods) That has crossed our minds too. LIATOR Our laws have been violated. What of justice? TASHA What of justice to Wesley? Does he deserve to die? FIRST MEDIATOR What makes our law strong is the certainty of punishment! BEVERLY But my son had no warning... SECOND MEDIATOR We cannot allow ignorance of the law to become a defense... STAR TREK: "Justice" - 9/4/87 - ACT FIVE 57. 64 CONTINUED: (2) RIVAN Is it possible we are wrong about that? Surely there is such a thing as too much harshness... FIRST MEDIATOR We do not dispense mercy... only justice. TASHA (calls from entrance) Their sun is almost down, sir. PICARD (to the others) Stand ready to beam out. 65 ANGLE FOR BEAM OUT (OPTICAL) as the Away Team gathers in position. CROSSING toward them, Picard passes Liator. PICARD The question of justice has concerned me a good deal lately. Pained me. Until now, Liator. I realize now that there can be no justice... SECOND MEDIATOR God will destroy you! PICARD (back to Liator) ... no justice so long as laws are absolute. Life itself is an exercise in exceptions. RIKER (quietly) Bravo. When has justice ever been as simple as a rulebook, sir? (looks around) Six to beam up, Captain? PICARD (touches insignia) Six to beam up. STAR TREK: "Justice" - 9/4/87 - ACT FIVE 58. 65 CONTINUED: SECOND MEDIATOR (screams it) God will punish you! And with this ringing in their ears, they BEAM OUT. 66 EXT. SPACE - ENTERPRISE AND MYSTERY OBJECT/VESSEL both still in orbit. 67 INT. MAIN BRIDGE - INCLUDING MAIN VIEWER (OPTICAL) as the turbolift DISCHARGES Picard, Riker and the others. The balance of our regulars are on duty there too. RIKER Main Viewer on! They slowly take their positions, eyes on the Viewer. As Wesley ENTERS with Beverly, Geordi looks up. GEORDI Greetings, Jailbird. It doesn't get a big laugh at this moment. PICARD Hailing frequencies open. TASHA Open, sir. PICARD To the object sharing this orbit... we will remove the human colonists from the adjoining solar system if signaled to do so. Or we'll proceed on our mission, if signaled to do that. Please tell us... DATA Captain! The IMAGE on the Viewer begins FADING, FINALLY DISAPPEARS. STAR TREK: "Justice" - 9/4/87 - ACT FIVE 59. 67 CONTINUED: GEORDI Is that a signal? PICARD (beat) I was hoping for more. GEORDI More of what, sir? I'm happy it's gone. RIKER (nods) We're all thrilled with that, sir. PICARD (beat) I was hoping we'd learn more about it. But since we can't... (looks to Riker) Take us out of here, Number One. RIKER Gladly, sir. 68 EXT. SPACE - ENTERPRISE (OPTICAL) as it begins leaving orbit. FADE OUT. END OF ACT FIVE THE END STAR TREK: THE NEXT GENERATION "The Battle" #40271-110 Story by Larry Forrester Teleplay by Herbert Wright Directed by Rob Bowman Copyright 1987 Paramount Pictures Corporation. All Rights Reserved. This script is not for publication or reproduction. No one is authorized to dispose of same. If lost or destroyed, please notify the Script Department. FINAL DRAFT SEPTEMBER 14, 1987 STAR TREK: "The Battle" - 9/14/87 - CAST STAR TREK: THE NEXT GENERATION "The Battle" CAST PICARD FERENGI: RIKER DAIMON BOK BEVERLY KAZAGO DATA RATA TROI TASHA STARGAZER: GEORDI PHANTOM BRIDGE CREW WORF VOICES (V.O.) WESLEY FIRST VOICE (V.O.) SECOND VOICE (V.O.) THIRD VOICE (V.O.) STAR TREK: "The Battle" - 9/14/87 - SETS STAR TREK: THE NEXT GENERATION "The Battle" SETS INTERIORS EXTERIORS USS ENTERPRISE USS ENTERPRISE Captain's Quarters Main bridge FERENGI VESSEL Sickbay Conference Room USS STARGAZER Transporter Room #1 Ready Room USS STARGAZER Bridge (Redress) Captain's Quarters (Redress) FERENGI STARSHIP Science Room STAR TREK: "The Battle" - 9/14/87 - TEASER 1. STAR TREK: THE NEXT GENERATION "The Battle" TEASER FADE IN: 1 EXT. SPACE - ENTERPRISE AND FERENGI VESSEL (OPTICAL) as the two starships cruise through space together. PICARD (V.O.) Captain's log, stardate 41723.9. In response to a Starfleet order we are in the Xendi Sabu star system having rendezvoused with a Ferengi vessel which has requested a meeting. Although... 2 CLOSER ON STARFLEET AND FERENGI VESSELS (OPTICAL) emphasizing the difference between the two. PICARD (V.O.) (continuing) ... we arrived here and made appropriate signals to the Ferengi three days ago, they have so far responded only with the message: "Stand by, Enterprise." 3 INT. CAPTAIN'S QUARTERS (OPTICAL) PICARD at his desk, star charts on a nearby monitor. He's in some physical discomfort, presses his knuckles to his temple, GROANS. We HEAR a CHIME from his door. PICARD Come! The door opens; BEVERLY ENTERS. She carries a medical kit. BEVERLY You called for me? PICARD Yes, Doctor. I've been feeling... odd, lately. Fatigued. And now I've got a headache. STAR TREK: "The Battle" - 9/14/87 - TEASER 2. 3 CONTINUED: Unslinging her medical kit, Beverly looks up, surprised. BEVERLY A what? PICARD Certainly you know what a "headache" is, Doctor. Beverly is already beginning to move a medical tricorder sensor over Picard's head. WE HEAR it FAINTLY BEEPING as she checks readings she is getting. BEVERLY Of course. But I don't often encounter one. She makes an adjustment on the tricorder, gets HUM SOUND as she takes another kind of reading. PICARD The reason for it seems fairly obvious. What are these Ferengi up to? "Stand by, Enterprise." Stand by for what? BEVERLY I can't find a thing wrong. PICARD I can't either. But they could be baiting some kind of trap... BEVERLY With your head. I see nothing physically wrong, but I want to run additional scans in Sickbay. PICARD Doctor, all I've got is... BEVERLY (interrupting) ... is an order to report to Sickbay. (friendly smile) From the one person aboard who can give you an order. Picard hesitates, then smiles and nods, starts to rise. STAR TREK: "The Battle" - 9/14/87 - TEASER 3. 3 CONTINUED: (2) RIKER'S COM VOICE Captain from first officer. They're finally sending a message. Picard comes fully to his feet, touching his insignia. PICARD On my way, Number One. (CROSSING to door) Sorry, Doctor. Duty calls. 4 INT. MAIN BRIDGE (OPTICAL) RIKER, TROI, DATA, GEORDI, TASHA, and WORF are at their usual stations. Picard ENTERS JOINING Riker at the Command Area. The Main Viewer displays the Ferengi vessel. RIKER They're prepared to talk, sir. PICARD Have they given any hint what they've been waiting for? TASHA Negative on that, Captain. But they have identified their Captain as "Bok," DaiMon Bok. TROI If it's Bok I'm sensing, he seems anxious to meet you, sir. PICARD Me? Why me? I've never heard of him. GEORDI You'll be able to see him now, sir. They're willing to communicate on visual. DATA A reminder of something we learned the only other time we dealt with Ferengi, sir -- their hearing is very sensitive. STAR TREK: "The Battle" - 9/14/87 - TEASER 4. 4 CONTINUED: WORF (nods) Yes, they could pick up even a whisper being transmitted. PICARD Consider ourselves reminded. (to Tasha) Open hailing frequencies. TASHA Hailing frequencies open, sir. PICARD Ferengi vessel! This is Captain Jean-Luc Picard of the Enterprise. We are transmitting visually. A beat, then the Main Viewer DISSOLVES INTO a FULL FRAME HEAD SHOT of DAIMON BOK, brightly lit, distorted. He's smoothly patronizing, clipped in speech, and arrogant. (OPTICAL) BOK Is this THE Captain Picard? PICARD Do we know each other? BOK I know you, Picard. PICARD I'm afraid you have the advantage. Is this... Bok? BOK I am Bok, DaiMon of the Ferengi. I have asked you here to discuss a mutual problem, Captain. PICARD What problem is that, DaiMon Bok? BOK I insist on speaking of that matter in person. Shall we meet on your vessel or mine? Troi signals Tasha who touches her panel. STAR TREK: "The Battle" - 9/14/87 - TEASER 5. 4 CONTINUED: (2) TASHA Hailing frequencies closed. TROI Captain, I sense considerable deception on Bok's part. And danger! RIKER Then definitely, sir, you should meet with him here. Keep him under our control. Picard nods, turns and signals to Tasha who touches her panel again. TASHA Now open, sir. PICARD (toward Viewscreen) I appreciate your offer, DaiMon Bok, and ask you to be our guests. BOK (smiles) As you wish, Picard. Perhaps this will begin a new era of cooperation for both our peoples. In one Earth hour, then? Everyone on the bridge is stunned by the unexpected concession. PICARD One hour, Bok. End transmission. The viewer CLEARS BACK to the Ferengi ship. The Enterprise bridge crew reacts. WORF I can't believe they're coming here! PICARD (turns to Troi) They agreed a bit too easily. Troi nods. STAR TREK: "The Battle" - 9/14/87 - TEASER 6. 4 CONTINUED: (3) PICARD (continuing; nods back) Then, in one hour we'll know why. FADE OUT. END OF TEASER STAR TREK: "The Battle" - 9/14/87 - ACT ONE 7. ACT ONE FADE IN: 5 INT. SICKBAY Beverly is using twenty-fourth century diagnostic tools to examine the prone Captain. PICARD Are you accustomed to always getting your way, Doctor? BEVERLY (nods) When my way makes sense, Captain. There are still forty minutes before the Ferengi beam over; I'll have these scans done in ten. PICARD A lot of effort for something as simple as a headache. BEVERLY "As simple?" It is my job to know your condition intimately. You should not have a headache unless something is wrong. She is clearly puzzled over finding nothing. She makes a new setting on the scanner. BEVERLY (continuing) It may be true that headaches were once quite common... but this was in the days before the brain was charted... (very puzzled; a new setting) ... before we understood the nature of pain... when we were suffering from such things as the common cold. She swings the "scanner" away from Picard. He half rises. PICARD And so why do I have a headache, Doctor? STAR TREK: "The Battle" - 9/14/87 - ACT ONE 8. 5 CONTINUED: BEVERLY I haven't the slightest damned idea! She picks up a tiny device, turns it on and WE HEAR a light HUM from it. PICARD What's that? She presses it against his forehead. The light HUM becomes SHRILLER. BEVERLY Something doctors use when they feel foolish over being proven wrong. (takes device away) Feel better? PICARD (surprised) The pain's gone. She turns the device OFF, puts it aside. BEVERLY Medical fakery -- the pain's actually still there, just cloaked. I'll want further exams when this Ferengi matter is settled. 6 INT. MAIN BRIDGE (OPTICAL) Riker, Troi, Data, Geordi, Tasha and Worf on duty as WESLEY ARRIVES by turbolift, hurriedly addresses Riker: WESLEY Sir! You'll soon be getting an intruder alert! RIKER What? Wesley, if you've something to report... But Wesley has hurried toward Geordi, interrupting: STAR TREK: "The Battle" - 9/14/87 - ACT ONE 9. 6 CONTINUED: WESLEY (to Geordi) If you'll scan heading four-four mark one-six-three, Lieutenant, you'll find... INTRUDER ALERT SIGNAL sounds, Tasha reacting, turning to Riker: TASHA Intruder alert, sir... GEORDI (reading his panel) I've got something, sir... very distant. Turbolift opens TO BRING Picard onto the bridge, unnoticed by most as Tasha silences the ALERT and Wesley turns to Riker. WESLEY It's an old style starship, Constitution Class, heading this way under impulse power, sir. RIKER Says who? Picard moves in to Command Area. Conversation DIES as he takes his seat there. PICARD Carry on. (to Wesley) Answer the first officer's question. WESLEY Uh... says the long distance sensors, sir. I was in Engineering, playing around with boosting sensor output... DATA (interrupting; smiling) Very interesting. Boosting it how? (seeing Picard's look; to Wesley) We will discuss it later. STAR TREK: "The Battle" - 9/14/87 - ACT ONE 10. 6 CONTINUED: (2) GEORDI (interrupting) I read it now, sir, as... a Constitution Class starship... coming this way under impulse power. Exactly as Wesley described it minutes before. Picard suddenly grimaces, a wave of pain catching him by surprise and he has to suppress a surprised GROAN and finds it necessary to again press a knuckle against his forehead for a moment. RIKER Sir? What's wrong? PICARD (fighting it off) Nothing, just... a mild headache. (to Wesley) The correct procedure, Ensign, would have been to signal your finding to the bridge immediately. WESLEY Yes, sir. RIKER Bringing it here personally... (indicates Main Viewer) ... perhaps with the idea of being on hand for the Ferengi beam over... might have imperiled our ship had something hostile been approaching. Wesley has thrown Picard a nervous look at Riker's guess that the Ferengi beam over was his motive. WESLEY Yes, sir. WORF We are receiving no signal at all from the approaching starship, sir. DATA (to Picard) Time, sir. STAR TREK: "The Battle" - 9/14/87 - ACT ONE 11. 6 CONTINUED: (3) PICARD Time? Oh, for the Ferengi to beam over. (to Riker) Do you see any problems connected with this old starship coming in? RIKER Suggest we'll be safer, sir, with the Ferengi over here whatever is happening. PICARD Concur. (to bridge) Stand by! (to Tasha) Let's bring them on visually. TASHA Hailing frequencies open, sir. 7 ANOTHER ANGLE INCLUDING MAIN VIEWER (OPTICAL) PICARD Enterprise to Ferengi vessel. We are standing by to receive you. The Ferengi vessel IMAGE on Main Viewer DISSOLVES INTO IMAGE OF BOK, being joined by KAZAGO, First Officer, and RATA, Second Officer. BOK Ready to transfer ourselves over, my dear Captain Picard. PICARD Question... where shall we receive you? BOK On your own bridge, of course. Ferengi efficiency! With a FERENGI LIGHT SWIRL BEAMING EFFECT, the three Ferengi figures FADE OUT OF SIGHT. The Main Viewer IMAGE DISSOLVES TO THE FERENGI SHIP IMAGE AGAIN. STAR TREK: "The Battle" - 9/14/87 - ACT ONE 12. 8 ANOTHER ANGLE (OPTICAL) as the Enterprise bridge crew waits, but nothing happens for awhile. Finally: PICARD Data? What do you read? DATA Nothing, sir. WESLEY It could take a few moments, Captain. If they build up their beaming energy through capacitors as seems likely... Then, FERENGI BEAMING EFFECT STARTS WITH SOUND -- FOLLOWED BY THE KIND OF LIGHT SWIRL WE JUST SAW ON THEIR SHIP. It solidifies into BOK, KAZAGO, and RATA. PICARD We welcome you in peace to the Enterprise, DaiMon Bok. BOK (ingratiating) It is our pleasure, Captain Picard. Might I introduce my first officer, Kazago, and my second, Rata? PICARD (nods to acknowledge) This is my first officer, Commander Riker... (Bok nods) And Counselor Troi. Second Officer Data; Lieutenant La Forge; security officers, Lieutenant Yar and Lieutenant Worf; Ensign Crusher. Bok has squinted hard at Troi and Tasha. BOK Yes, we have heard you use females... (checks them again) Clothed females. Most interesting. RIKER (smiles) They are that, sir. STAR TREK: "The Battle" - 9/14/87 - ACT ONE 13. 8 CONTINUED: Kazago now turns to scrutinize Data. KAZAGO And the android was mentioned too. (to Picard) What is its price? We should like to purchase it. PICARD It... he is not for sale. Commander Data is...is... Made uncomfortable by this, Picard seeks the right words. Riker fills in: RIKER You wouldn't want him, Kazago. He's second-hand merchandise. DATA (rises) Second-hand, sir? (then sees Riker's smile) Oh, of course! A human joke... TASHA Excuse, Captain, but the unidentified starship is continuing in, still no signal at all... BOK Think nothing of it.. It is under our control. PICARD (alert) One of our starships under your control? BOK (smiling) Do not be alarmed. It is a gift from us. (slight bow to Picard) With which we honor the "Hero of Maxia." PICARD Who? STAR TREK: "The Battle" - 9/14/87 - ACT ONE 14. 8 CONTINUED: (2) BOK (abrupt) Why you, Picard, of course! Don't you remember the Battle of Maxia? PICARD I'm sorry, I'm afraid I do not. Data? As the android searches his own memory, Bok is visibly disturbed at Picard's lack of memory. DATA Captain, he may refer to an incident which occurred seven years ago in the Maxia Zeta star system, where an unidentified starship... BOK (angry) Unidentified?! That fine vessel was Ferengi! DATA (to Picard) Which you destroyed, sir. PICARD (turns to Bok) My sincere regrets, Bok, but that ship did not identify itself. It simply attacked; we defended ourselves... BOK (beat) Such mistakes happen in space. DATA (to Picard) Hardly a "mistake," sir. Your report showed it deliberately attacked... Picard is signaling Data to forget it: TASHA (interrupting) Do you want the arriving vessel on Main Viewer, sir? It is only a thousand kilometers away now... STAR TREK: "The Battle" - 9/14/87 - ACT ONE 15. 8 CONTINUED: (3) BOK Put it on your viewer. PICARD (nods to Tasha) Main Viewer. 9 ANOTHER ANGLE INCLUDING MAIN VIEWER (OPTICAL) on which an IMAGE of an approaching Constitution Class starship WILL APPEAR. KAZAGO We have set its controls to automatically take station in space next to your Enterprise. BOK (to Picard) There is no one aboard it. RATA (to Picard) When, with your permission, its log will be downloaded into this ship's records. (smiles) At a price... BOK (thunders) No price! KAZAGO (astounded) No price? PICARD For what purpose? What is this all... Picard's headache comes back, striking him hard this time. He GROANS, surprised, presses hard on his own temples. Troi comes to her feet, alarmed. TROI I felt something too, Captain. What is it? RIKER Sir... ? STAR TREK: "The Battle" - 9/14/87 - ACT ONE 16. 9 CONTINUED: BOK Perhaps it is... his conscience? TROI (a tigress) Why do you say that?! RIKER Bridge to Sickbay... PICARD (overlapping) No... no, I'm fine... TROI (to Picard; puzzled) It seemed as if... as if it were... something from your past? PICARD I'm all right now; I'm fine. (to Bok; indicating viewer) What is this all about? BOK It is about the battle I mentioned, Captain. A gift in honor of that occasion. Look at that ship closely. PICARD (to Geordi) Enlarge please, La Forge. On Main Viewer, the IMAGE MAGNIFIES into closer view. Picard is mesmerized by what he is seeing -- and recognizing. Bok is amused by this. PICARD It... it is the Stargazer. My old ship, but how... where did you find it? BOK It was a derelict, adrift in space on the far side of this star system. How it got there... (grand gesture) ... is none of my business, Captain. But now that vessel is yours, if you wish to have it. STAR TREK: "The Battle" - 9/14/87 - ACT ONE 17. 9 CONTINUED: (2) KAZAGO (to Bok) We are not selling it to him? BOK Call it an act of friendship. RATA At no cost!? Ugly. Very ugly! FADE OUT. END OF ACT ONE STAR TREK: "The Battle" - 9/14/87 - ACT TWO 18. ACT TWO FADE IN; 10 EXT. SPACE - THREE VESSELS (OPTICAL) The Ferengi, the Stargazer, and the Enterprise next to each other. PICARD (V.O.) Captain's log, stardate 41724.1. Bok and his officers have returned to their vessel, inviting us now to officially take possession of the Stargazer. They will stand by while completing the downloading of its log to us. 11 INT. SICKBAY Picard now under the full body scanner, while a concerned Beverly, with technician, gives him a complete scan. Troi stands in b.g., very curious. BEVERLY Like before? PICARD Perhaps... it hit with more impact. TROI "Hit?" (to Beverly) Sorry, but anything could be important. BEVERLY You say you "felt" something yourself? TROI I... believe so. Like... well, a thought... (puzzled) But rather... "mechanical" in nature. STAR TREK: "The Battle" - 9/14/87 - ACT TWO 19. 11 CONTINUED: PICARD Are you sure it wasn't one of my thoughts? At that moment, I was remembering being at the helm of the Stargazer, a maneuver being made. We were hit... (beat; puzzled) Something's burning... I smell smoke! (pushing at scanner) Don't you smell it? Beverly has moved in past the technician, speaks soothingly. BEVERLY There's nothing burning, Jean-Luc. PICARD Ah... no, of course. It was... the memory I was calling up. (finds a smile for Beverly) Sorry. Riker ENTERS as Troi moves toward Picard, concerned. TROI Memory or... "nightmare?" PICARD (smiling again) Well, it was strong, whatever it was. (looks up at Riker) Ready, Number One. RIKER Staff's waiting if Doctor Crusher approves. BEVERLY I'll do better than that -- I'll go along. 12 INT. MAIN BRIDGE - MINIMUM CREW Geordi at Riker's station, Worf and Wesley holding down Conn and Ops. STAR TREK: "The Battle" - 9/14/87 - ACT TWO 20. 12 CONTINUED: WORF But if they don't know what the Ferengi are up to, what good is it to sit there guessing? WESLEY Well... sometimes it determines exactly what you don't know. GEORDI Dead on target, my friend. Would you like to go up and listen to them? WESLEY (beat) Some day. Right now I'm happy to be here. 13 INT. CONFERENCE ROOM CAMERA BEGINS ON Riker, who is conducting this de-briefing. Then INCLUDES Picard, Data, Troi, and Beverly. PICARD We were traveling at warp two through the Maxia Zeta star system when an unidentified starship suddenly appeared and fired on us! From close range. RIKER Where did it come from? PICARD It must've been lying in a deep moon crater nearby. The first attack damaged our shields, and in the confusion it hit us a second time. RIKER No clue who they were? 14 CLOSER - EMPHASIZING PICARD seeming to become absorbed in the story. STAR TREK: "The Battle" - 9/14/87 - ACT TWO 21. 14 CONTINUED: PICARD No name, no reason... (looks up sharply) Can you identify them, Vigo? Our shields are failing; if they come in again... ? TROI (interrupting) Sir? Who's Vigo? It seems to take Picard a moment to adjust to where he is. PICARD Ah... my weapons officer on the Stargazer. (weak smile) I was getting caught up in this. RIKER (puzzled for a moment) Then, with your shields failing, sir... PICARD I improvised. With the other ship coming in for the kill... (describes with his hands) ... I ordered a sensor bearing, and when it went into its return arc... DATA ... you performed what Starfleet textbooks now call "The Picard Maneuver." PICARD What any good helmsman could have done. I dropped into high warp... (with his hands) ... then stopped right off the target vessel's bow... (slaps hands together) ... and fired everything I had. RIKER By blowing into warp speed, you appeared for an instant to be in two places at once... STAR TREK: "The Battle" - 9/14/87 - ACT TWO 22. 14 CONTINUED: (2) PICARD And our attacker fired on the wrong one. RIKER As you say, "what any good helmsman could have done." (smiles) But you did it first... PICARD A "save our skins" maneuver. The Stargazer was on fire, finished. We had to abandon ship, and limp through space in shuttlecraft for weeks before being picked up. (beat) I haven't thought about it in years... DATA The Ferengi are standing by for us to take possession of the Stargazer, sir. PICARD (to Riker) I want to go over to her. RIKER (nods) I understand, sir. (smiles) Once my people make certain she's safe. 15 EXT. SPACE - ENTERPRISE, FERENGI VESSEL, STARGAZER (OPTICAL) The past and the present. 16 INT. STARGAZER BRIDGE (REDRESS BATTLE BRIDGE) A BEAM OF LIGHT explores the deserted bridge. Signs of fire still remain, blackened consoles and scorched wall panels. It comes to rest on a wall PLAQUE, which Data reads out loud: STAR TREK: "The Battle" - 9/14/87 - ACT TWO 23. 16 CONTINUED: DATA USS Stargazer. Constitution Class. Starfleet Registry NCC 2893... Suddenly, the bridge LIGHTS are up, as Geordi strides in. GEORDI I activated the emergency power cells... (looks around) Amazing they still work. Data has turned on a position viewer. Worf joins his team members, tricorder in hand. WORF The rest of the ship is all clear of surprises, Lieutenant Yar. GEORDI When I read about this ship at the Academy, I never dreamed I'd ever be on her. TASHA (touches insignia) Yar to Enterprise. All clear, sir. 17 INT. ENTERPRISE - MAIN BRIDGE Riker's in command, Picard absent. RIKER Thank you, Lieutenant. Captain? 18 INT. TRANSPORTER ROOM #1 (OPTICAL) Picard, Beverly and Tasha are present on the pads. PICARD Yes, Commander RIKER'S COM VOICE Stargazer searched and secured, sir. Give her my best. STAR TREK: "The Battle" - 9/14/87 - ACT TWO 24. 18 CONTINUED: PICARD I will that, Number One. (to Chief) Energize! And the TRANSPORTER EFFECT sends the trio OUT OF SCENE. 19 INT. STARGAZER BRIDGE (REDRESS) (OPTICAL) as the captain and companions MATERIALIZE. Picard stands still for a moment, a living "deja vu" in process. PICARD Hello, old friend... Data is at the Science Station monitor which he had turned on earlier. DATA You'll find this intriguing, Captain. PICARD What do you find, Data? DATA Last entry was dated seven years ago, sir. By you... (reading) "We are forced to abandon our starship. May she find her way without us." (looks up) Apparently, she did. Beverly is watching Picard carefully. BEVERLY How are you feeling, Captain? PICARD Fine, Doctor. (to Tasha) Lieutenant Yar, run a structural analysis on the Stargazer for impulse tow. (to Data) Data, download all computers to the Enterprise and file... (to all) I'm going to my old cabin. STAR TREK: "The Battle" - 9/14/87 - ACT TWO 25. 20 INT. STARGAZER - CAPTAIN'S QUARTERS (REDRESS) Not as much fire damage here as on the bridge. Picard sits center, an old travel chest cracked open and several items from it on a nearby table. He pulls out an old framed diploma from it, inspects it. 21 CLOSE ANGLE DOWN ON OPEN TRAVEL CHEST (OPTICAL) where taking out the diploma has REVEALED A METALLIC SPHERE which is about a half-meter in diameter. Suddenly it GLOWS, HUMS. 22 BACK TO SHOT in the midst of Picard being racked with pain, which doubles him up, GROANING. 23 EXT. SPACE - EMPHASIZING FERENGI STARSHIP (OPTICAL) Menacing. 24 INT. FERENGI STARSHIP - SCIENCE ROOM (INTERCUT AS NEEDED) (OPTICAL) TIGHT on a silver-grey half-meter wide SPHERE identical to the one we just saw with Picard, with a pulsating light band around its equator. CAMERA WIDENS to include Bok, near a large wall SCREEN - WAVY LINES move across, as Bok works the controls. BOK (to himself) Try this, "Hero of Maxia." 25 INT. STARGAZER - CAPTAIN'S QUARTERS Picard again racked with pain. PICARD DAMNNNN! Picard lurches, stumbling against his chest. PICARD (continuing) OHHHH! He falls atop the chest, closing it. A beat, then he gets shakily to his feet again, disoriented. STAR TREK: "The Battle" - 9/14/87 - ACT TWO 26. 25 CONTINUED: BEVERLY (O.S.) Captain? Then she APPEARS at the door. He is fighting his way back to control. BEVERLY Another headache, sir?! (eyes him) That worries me. I want you back on the Enterprise. PICARD Yes, but... my things here... BEVERLY I'll see they're sent to your Enterprise quarters. 26 EXT. SPACE - EMPHASIZING ENTERPRISE (OPTICAL) ESTABLISHING again. 27 INT. MAIN BRIDGE (OPTICAL) Kazago is seen on our starship's Main Viewer. Riker is looking in that direction. RIKER Enterprise now taking possession of Stargazer, Kazago. KAZAGO Permission granted, Riker. Riker looks up, amused. RIKER Actually it was quite a bargain, Kazago. I thought the Ferengi always made a profit on things. Kazago's VIEWER IMAGE growls a Ferengi obscenity, DISSOLVING INTO A VIEW OF THE FERENGI VESSEL. Everyone's at their station. Picard ENTERS. RIKER Set sub-warp speed for towing, La Forge. STAR TREK: "The Battle" - 9/14/87 - ACT TWO 27. 27 CONTINUED: Picard returns to his chair in Command, as Troi watches him, frowning as she feels something she doesn't like... DATA Starfleet has responded to our request, sir. A tug will rendezvous with us and tow the Stargazer back to Xendi Starbase Nine. RIKER Very well, Data. (to Picard) How was it, Captain? PICARD (distant) Strange, Number One. Like visiting the house you grew up in, but no one's home, except the phantoms of the past... TROI It has troubled you? PICARD Not as much as this damn headache, Counselor. Take over, Number One. RIKER Aye, sir. Picard EXITS. Riker exchanges a concerned look with Troi. RIKER (continuing) What's wrong? TROI I wish I could say. 28 INT. CAPTAIN'S QUARTERS Picard ENTERING, passes his chest and the other things we saw in his Stargazer cabin. He goes to his bunk, throws himself down heavily. STAR TREK: "The Battle" - 9/14/87 - ACT TWO 28. 29 CLOSE ON PICARD A beat as he rests, then he breathes with almost a GROAN, and CAMERA BEGINS MOVING IN TO EXTREME CLOSE SHOT. VOICES FADE IN; ECHOES FROM THE PAST. VOICES (V.O.) ... shields weakening, Captain! Torpedoes armed! Where are they? Ohmygod, sir! (explosive NOISES) Fire! Fire!! And Picard's eyes POP OPEN, an old terror returns -- but immediately the voices STOP. 30 INT. READY ROOM (OPTICAL) Riker waiting while Data closes the door. He offers the nearby monitor to Riker. RIKER What is it, Data? Why all the mystery? DATA It is the records of the Stargazer, sir. What the Ferengi call the "Battle of Maxia"... (using monitor) It seems the Captain's personal log contains a much different version of that conflict than the official historic account. Riker hardly knows how to take this, but he looks at the monitor. RIKER What are you saying? DATA It would appear that the starship which Captain Picard attacked, had in fact, been under a flag of truce... RIKER What?! STAR TREK: "The Battle" - 9/14/87 - ACT TWO 29. 30 CONTINUED: DATA And apparently, the captain destroyed the ship without notice or provocation. RIKER Impossible. What about the fire aboard the Stargazer? DATA An accident in Engineering. RIKER And the proof? DATA It is logged in his own voice. Would you care to hear it? (no answer) Sir? Sir? CAMERA slowly TIGHTENS on the baffled Riker, as we: FADE OUT. END OF ACT TWO STAR TREK: "The Battle" - 9/14/87 - ACT THREE 30. ACT THREE FADE IN: 31 EXT. SPACE - ENTERPRISE, STARGAZER AND FERENGI VESSEL (OPTICAL) as the Enterprise tows the Stargazer by its tractor beam. RIKER (V.O.) First officer's personal log, stardate 41724.2. An unexpected discovery made by Commander Data in the downloaded log of the Stargazer... 32 CLOSE ON ENTERPRISE (OPTICAL) RIKER (V.O.) (continuing) ... appears to indicate Captain Picard was guilty of falsifying the report he made to Starfleet concerning the Stargazer's last voyage. 33 INT. CAPTAIN'S QUARTERS Picard seems stunned by what he's hearing from his desk computer, his own voice plays back quietly under the scene, not to be understood. PICARD What does this mean? RIKER I don't know, sir. That sounds like your voice. PICARD Don't you know it is, Number One? RIKER No, sir, I don't. I refuse to believe you could have said that. 34 CLOSE ON DESK COMPUTER from which Picard's VOICE now plays NORMAL VOLUME. STAR TREK: "The Battle" - 9/14/87 - ACT THREE 31. 34 CONTINUED: PICARD'S RECORDED VOICE ... and I admit I must have mistaken their subspace antenna for a weapons cluster. Unfortunately, I fired our main phasers... 35 BACK TO SHOT as Riker and Picard hear NORMAL VOLUME: PICARD'S RECORDED VOICE (continuing) ... and our direct hit destroyed the unknown vessel instantly. Moving almost as through fatigue, Riker TURNS OFF the desk computer. RIKER I recognize, of course, your voice has been simulated somehow. I've already put Data to work on it. PICARD Thank you, Will. (shakes head) I never made that log entry, of course. But it still creates a duty for you to perform. RIKER Yes, sir, I must report it to Starfleet. But at this distance, it will take at least a full day for subspace communications to reach there... PICARD ... and another full day for their answer to return. I'd like the truth on this by then. RIKER Sir, you can't believe they'd relieve you from command... STAR TREK: "The Battle" - 9/14/87 - ACT THREE 32. 35 CONTINUED: PICARD Why shouldn't they? Better safe than sorry with the Ferengi now making friendship overtures. RIKER And it's certain that the Ferengi are behind this faked log. No wonder they're still out there, waiting... Riker trails his words at the sight of Picard now grimacing in pain. RIKER (continuing) Headache back, sir? PICARD Damn! (nods) I'll call the doctor again. RIKER It's no wonder you have one, with all this going on, sir. (moving for door) Try to relax. I've got things in hand. PICARD Once again... Riker EXITS. Picard, obviously still in pain, turns back to his desk computer, switches it ON. From it, he hears: PICARD'S RECORDED VOICE This is a confession, given by me, Jean-Luc Picard, commanding USS Stargazer, in the hopes that my belated honesty will be taken into account by Starfleet when judging... 36 INT. MAIN BRIDGE Riker ENTERS on his way to the Ready Room. RIKER La Forge, open hailing frequencies. GEORDI Open, sir. STAR TREK: "The Battle" - 9/14/87 - ACT THREE 33. 36 CONTINUED: RIKER I'll take it in the Ready Room. (as he EXITS) A secure channel, Geordi. And as Riker closes the Ready Room door behind him, Geordi complies, puzzled. GEORDI Secure, Commander. 37 INT. READY ROOM (OPTICAL) Riker's seated in Picard's chair, as he hails the Ferengi. RIKER Starship Ferengi! This is Commander Riker here. I'd like to speak to First Officer Kazago. A beat, and on the small Viewer in the room, Kazago APPEARS. KAZAGO A problem, Riker? RIKER Is our channel secure on your end? KAZAGO (pushes o.s. button) It is now. RIKER Are you aware of the details of the Battle of Maxia? KAZAGO Captain Bok has just made me aware of it, Riker. The infamy of your Picard is now fully known. RIKER Infamy?! KAZAGO I would call the wanton destruction of an unarmed vessel infamy. STAR TREK: "The Battle" - 9/14/87 - ACT THREE 34. 37 CONTINUED: Riker's doubt got a new shot in the arm. RIKER And if I produce evidence that Captain Picard's log entry was falsified to indicate that... ? KAZAGO What else would your decadent culture say to defend such disgrace?! But I can hardly imagine you contacted me to discuss an ancient battle. (impatient) What do you want of me? RIKER Just one question. KAZAGO As you humans say, I'm all ears. RIKER First officer to first officer, Kazago, if your Captain Bok knew of that, why this peaceful meeting to present us with the Stargazer? KAZAGO We freely give YOU back your derelict warship and now you accuse US of crime, Riker?! (amazed) I can bear NO more insults! At that, the screen abruptly GOES BLACK, Kazago's patience gone. Riker is as stumped as before. 38 INT. FERENGI VESSEL - SCIENCE ROOM (OPTICAL) Bok's using the sphere, the wall screen a strong pattern of wavy lines (as in twentieth century oscilloscopes). 39 INT. PICARD'S QUARTERS Picard is now GROANING, suffering intense pain. The door chime SOUNDS. STAR TREK: "The Battle" - 9/14/87 - ACT THREE 35. 39 CONTINUED: PICARD Who the hell is it?! Beverly ENTERS, as the door opens. She's carrying the medical device which previously eliminated Picard's pain. BEVERLY Not resting, Captain? PICARD More like dying, Doctor. What's wrong with me?! She puts the pain relief device on Picard again, turns it on. BEVERLY I wish to hell I knew, Captain. But something unusual has definitely happened to you. PICARD Why do doctors always state the obvious like it's a revelation? BEVERLY Why do captains always think they're immortal? (reads band) Better now? 40 INT. FERENGI VESSEL - SCIENCE ROOM - CLOSE ON BOK (OPTICAL) Bok makes an adjustment, and the discordant hum "tunes" the lines to move faster. 41 INT. PICARD'S' QUARTERS - BACK TO SCENE Picard has another terrible wave of pain, which doubles him over, to Beverly's surprise. PICARD Aghhh! My head! BEVERLY (tabs it higher) Now that has to do it right? From Picard's reaction, we know it doesn't... STAR TREK: "The Battle" - 9/14/87 - ACT THREE 36. 41 CONTINUED: PICARD No! Beverly tries another device on Picard in concert -- a "light needle" -- like a pencil with a laser beam extension. BEVERLY You didn't say it's been this bad! PICARD It hasn't been! But it is getting worse, Doctor... 42 INT. FERENGI VESSEL - SCIENCE ROOM - CLOSE ON BOK (OPTICAL) Bok makes another adjustment, and the lines move slower. 43 INT. PICARD'S QUARTERS - BACK TO SCENE Beverly seems to be getting results, as Picard responds. BEVERLY It has to be some kind of emotional pressure connected with the Stargazer... PICARD I got the damn headache before I even knew my old ship still existed... (pain easing) But maybe you're partly right... Beverly sits next to him. BEVERLY Want to talk to Counselor Troi about it? PICARD (pain again) What I need now is a friend... BEVERLY (quietly) I'm here. Picard eases up to a sitting position opposite Beverly, the subject as painful as the headache. STAR TREK: "The Battle" - 9/14/87 - ACT THREE 37. 43 CONTINUED: PICARD (eyes CLOSE) The Stargazer was an exploration vessel. The fight at Maxia was not my first action, but it was the first time I ever killed anyone. BEVERLY You had no choice... Picard jams OPEN his eyes, the nightmare still alive for him. PICARD Didn't I? I don't know anymore... I just don't know. BEVERLY Commander Riker told me about the altered log, sir. If that's troubling you... PICARD (ignores her) The last three nights, I... hear voices. I'm standing on the bridge, fire all around me... the klaxons, smoke, and I give the order... (amazed) And now the Stargazer is really here! (back to her) And that log... Am I going crazy? How do I know if I was in my right mind at Maxia? How do I know if I'm in my right mind now? With that, Beverly quickly injects Picard with a hypospray, and eases him back onto the bed. He doesn't resist, as she attaches two sensor pads on his forehead. PICARD What was... that? BEVERLY Just something to let you sleep. PICARD (already working) Yes... sleep... I need sl... STAR TREK: "The Battle" - 9/14/87 - ACT THREE 38. 43 CONTINUED: (2) And Picard drifts off, thanks to medical expertise, as Beverly lowers the lights and EXITS. 44 EXT. SPACE - ENTERPRISE AND STARGAZER (OPTICAL) as both SLOW, against the starry forever. 45 INT. ENTERPRISE - CAPTAIN'S QUARTERS Picard's back is AWAY FROM CAMERA. A beat, then a MOAN... He shifts his leaden weight, in an unconscious attempt to get comfortable, as CAMERA SLOWLY TIGHTENS. Over which, reverb VOICES, muted. VOICES (V. O.) ... shields weakening, Captain! Torpedoes armed! (explosion) Where are they? 46 INT. FERENGI SHIP - SCIENCE ROOM (OPTICAL) Bok's narrowing in on what he's looking for as he adjusts the wavy lines again, so that they begin to parallel each other in synch... BOK (to himself) And now, dear captain, you are ready to live the past! 47 INT. PICARD'S QUARTERS - BACK TO SCENE Picard starts to squirm, his arm twitches, CAMERA TIGHTENING. VOICES CONTINUE, REVERB AND MUTED. VOICES (V.O.) Where did they... come from? (KLAXON) Phasers, sir? Sir? (blast) SIR? Now he convulsively turns over as muted sounds of battle continue. STAR TREK: "The Battle" - 9/14/87 - ACT THREE 39. 47 CONTINUED: VOICES (V.O.) (continuing) What should we do, sir? (radio static) Should we fire back? TIGHT on Picard, as his eyes suddenly OPEN... and WE HEAR the muted CRACKLING SOUND of flames. VOICES (V.O.) (continuing) Fire, Captain, FIRE! 48 INT. FERENGI VESSEL SCIENCE ROOM - ON BOK working his device, satisfaction on his alien face. BOK (to himself) You will injure yourself as once you injured me! 49 INT. PICARD'S QUARTERS - BACK TO SCENE CAMERA WHIP ZOOMS in on Picard's eyes as he swivels and sits up, his face suddenly FILLING FRAME. VOICES (V.O.) SIR?! As CAMERA WHIP ZOOMS BACK OUT... he RISES up to his feet, suddenly in command again, and Picard (in his mind) is now aboard the Stargazer. 50 WIDER ANGLE (OPTICAL) Phantoms of Picard's Stargazer bridge crew (DOUBLE EXPOSURE) are in Picard's quarters -- playing it as if at battle stations. A KLAXON (muted) is sounding, DOUBLE EXPOSURE SMOKE and FLAMES are licking at the FRAME. Picard under fire... PICARD (normal volume) Damage report! STAR TREK: "The Battle" - 9/14/87 - ACT THREE 40. 50 CONTINUED: VOICES (V.O.) (muted) Fusion generator under surge control, sir! (muted static) Power systems failing! PICARD Sensor bearing on hostile ship! VOICES (V.O.) Seven, seven mark nineteen, sir! Fire in Engineering... PICARD Ready phasers, and lock! (MOVES ACROSS room) Stand by for warp nine, heading seven, seven mark twenty... (another room position) And ENGAGE! The muted SOUNDS of battle INCREASE in complexity as Picard makes his maneuver. PICARD Steady. NOW reverse and stop! (goes for it) Phasers FIRE! Torpedoes AWAY! At that a muted EXPLOSION and SOUND of the enemy ship breaking up o.s. fills the phantom smoked room, as Picard chokes and stands dumb to the the CHEERS of his phantom crew. 51 CLOSE - PICARD (OPTICAL) CAMERA TIGHTENS on the troubled man's face, vague, in-and-out of focus amidst the phantom flames, reacting to the phantom fumes. PICARD Fire! 52 EXTREME CLOSE - PICARD His EYES filled with horror, his face a grim mask of unwanted, surprise victory. STAR TREK: "The Battle" - 9/14/87 - ACT THREE 41. 52 CONTINUED: PICARD FIRE!! As he stares blankly INTO CAMERA, we: FADE OUT. END OF ACT THREE STAR TREK: "The Battle" - 9/14/87 - ACT FOUR 42. ACT FOUR FADE IN: 53 EXT. SPACE - ENTERPRISE AND STARGAZER (OPTICAL) The smaller derelict vessel on the leash of our giant starship. The Ferengi vessel is traveling with them in b.g. 54 INT. READY ROOM Riker, Data and Geordi discuss computer tampering evidence. DATA By comparing the main Stargazer computer log with Captain Picard's personal log, I have found "checksum" discrepancies, sir. RIKER What does that mean? DATA All information is time-coded by entry, and the bits when totaled produce an aggregate amount which... RIKER (interrupts) I don't want a lesson in computer science! Bottom line? DATA One of these two logs is a forgery. GEORDI (smiles) Correction -- the log just found aboard the Stargazer is a forgery. DATA As I said. That is one of them, isn't it? Picard ENTERS the Ready Room looking peaked, but buoyant. STAR TREK: "The Battle" - 9/14/87 - ACT FOUR 43. 54 CONTINUED: GEORDI You're looking better, Captain. PICARD A little sleep, thanks to the doctor, works wonders. Any report on the logs? DATA Yes, sir. Whoever tampered with your personal log was clever... GEORDI ... but slightly clumsy. There's no doubt it is a fabrication. Beverly ENTERS bearing the Captain's brain scan reports. BEVERLY Number One, we think you should see this brain scan graph which... (sees Picard) What are you doing here?! PICARD (amused) I thought I was captain of this starship, Doctor. BEVERLY Of course you are, but I... PICARD Thank you for your confirmation of that. (includes the others) But now, except for Commander Riker, I want you all back at your stations... (emphatic) Is that clear? After momentary hesitation over Picard's new gruffness, all EXIT except Riker, Beverly and Troi. BEVERLY (indicates report) I have some business concerning your health, sir... STAR TREK: "The Battle" - 9/14/87 - ACT FOUR 44. 54 CONTINUED: (2) PICARD (interrupting) I mean you too, Doctor. I have business with Riker. Clearly, Beverly is considering arguing this. She glances to Riker, then decides to give in. BEVERLY Under protest, Captain. She EXITS and Riker turns to Picard, uncertain. RIKER You have orders for me, sir? PICARD Release the Stargazer from the tractor beam, Number One. RIKER Sir? PICARD The tractor beam. RIKER Sir, are you abandoning... PICARD (interrupting) No. Her inertia will carry the Stargazer along on this heading with us. Or did you sleep through the Academy lecture on conserving tractor beam power? RIKER No, sir. I'll release her, or course. Riker EXITS, leaving the troubled Picard alone with his thoughts. 55 EXT. SPACE - ENTERPRISE AND STARGAZER (OPTICAL) as the tractor beam wavers, then DISAPPEARS, the tether gone. The Stargazer continues holding its relative position. STAR TREK: "The Battle" - 9/14/87 - ACT FOUR 45. 56 INT. SICKBAY Beverly and Troi are looking at colored X-ray-like GRAPHICS of a skull and "brain-map." BEVERLY Obviously, there is some thought process disorder here but I cannot find any physical reason for it. (turns to Troi) Anything? TROI I'm puzzled too. I keep sensing random thoughts... but two sets of them. As if they were his, but intermixed with his from another source. During this, Wesley has ENTERED and Beverly notices him. BEVERLY I'm busy at the moment, Wesley... WESLEY I know you're busy, Mom, but when I went back to the main sensors in Engineering to try some more sensitivity experiments... BEVERLY (interrupting) Wes! I'll be glad to hear about it when I'm through with... WESLEY (interrupting) But, Mom, this is important! Beverly turns back, annoyed, but Troi has picked up something from Wesley and speaks before Beverly can. TROI Does it have something to do with Captain Picard? WESLEY Yes, ma'am... (indicates scans) ... if that's what you're talking about there. I don't know anything about brain scans but I glanced at these when you were studying them, Mom, and I noticed... (MORE) STAR TREK: "The Battle" - 9/14/87 - ACT FOUR 46. 56 CONTINUED: WESLEY (Cont'd) (pointing at scan graphs) ... these patterns here were like patterns of the low-intensity transmissions picked up from the Ferengi ship. (nods) I just went back and checked and they're exactly the same. TROI (beat) What kind of transmissions? WESLEY I don't know. Engineering has nothing like it on record. TROI (to Beverly) Let's get to the captain... BEVERLY No, they might be affecting the captain. To Riker! The two Women EXIT fast, leaving Wesley standing there. Then: WESLEY You're welcome, ladies. (shaking his head) Adults! 57 INT. MAIN BRIDGE Riker on duty along with Geordi, Data, Tasha and Worf. turbolift arrives with Beverly and Troi ENTERING bridge carefully; then, seeing Picard isn't present, they hurry to Riker. BEVERLY The captain, Commander? RIKER Resting in his quarters... (meaningfully) ... after ordering both of you to your duty stations. STAR TREK: "The Battle" - 9/14/87 - ACT FOUR 47. 57 CONTINUED: TROI This is more important! RIKER (cocks an eyebrow) Than the captain's orders? BEVERLY Yes, when we have reason to believe his judgment is being affected. Everyone on the bridge is listening and Riker acknowledges this with a sweeping gesture. RIKER Well then, why not let everyone in on it? TROI It affects them too. There have been some strange... (to Beverly) Did he say "low intensity... ?" (gets a nod) ... unusual low intensity transmissions from the Ferengi vessel... RIKER Did who say? BEVERLY My son! Riker takes a beat at this, then nods. Beverly exhibits the brain scans, pointing at places there. BEVERLY (continuing) ... transmissions which exactly match certain anomalies found in the captain's brain scans. (looks up) Something over there is affecting Captain Picard's thought patterns. STAR TREK: "The Battle" - 9/14/87 - ACT FOUR 48. 57 CONTINUED: (2) Riker needs only a split-beat to absorb this, then he whirls to his computer panel. RIKER Computer, tell me Captain Picard's location! COMPUTER Captain Picard is in Transporter Room Three. RIKER What? Computer, emergency order to Transporter Room Three... COMPUTER (interrupting) New information. Captain Picard is no longer aboard the Enterprise. 58 EXT. SPACE - THE FERENGI VESSEL (OPTICAL) CAMERA MOVING IN toward the alien vessel. 59 INT. STARGAZER BRIDGE (REDRESS) (OPTICAL) as Picard MATERIALIZES, back on his flame-scarred only command post. He walks to his captain's chair and sits. BOK (O.S.) Welcome back, Captain. ANGLE WIDENS TO INCLUDE Bok, above Picard at Tactical. PICARD (swivels, stands) What is happening? BOK (to Com) Shields up, computer. COMPUTER Shields in place. PICARD What are you doing? STAR TREK: "The Battle" - 9/14/87 - ACT FOUR 49. 59 CONTINUED: BOK (laughs) Collecting on an old debt... At that, Bok lifts the silver-grey sphere up, as it HUMS. He taps it and it RESONATES strangely. PICARD (throbbing pain) AGHHH-H-H!! 60 INT. ENTERPRISE - MAIN BRIDGE (OPTICAL) All at their usual stations, minus Picard, plus Beverly. RIKER Stargazer! Respond, Captain! TASHA (checks board) Shields up, sir. No way to beam over help. GEORDI I am reading something very strange. A low intensity beam of intermittent pulse inside this starship. DATA I have a fix on it... (surprised) Inside Captain Picard's quarters. TASHA (to Worf) You transferred some of his belongings from the Stargazer... ? WORF (nodding; to his feet) Including a fairly heavy chest... ! RIKER Go take a look, fast! Worf EXITS on the run. GEORDI (indicating Main Viewer) The Stargazer is powering up! STAR TREK: "The Battle" - 9/14/87 - ACT FOUR 50. 60 CONTINUED: On the Main Viewer, the Stargazer brightens up. (OPTICAL) 61 INT. STARGAZER BRIDGE (REDRESS) (OPTICAL) Bok is very pleased with Picard's suffering, as the Ferengi puts down the silver-grey sphere and its GLOWING and HUMMING stops. Picard's pain subsides but not his confusion. BOK I have been waiting a long seven years for this, Picard! PICARD I have no idea what you're talking about... BOK Do you not, hu-man? Can you not remember the crime you committed against my very blood? (Picard is stumped) You murdered my only son! PICARD Your son? BOK He was the commander of the ship you destroyed!) (pained) On his first voyage as DaiMon. Picard is puzzled, confused. PICARD The ship... ? The... the Ferengi ship that attacked me... (looks around) ... or is it about to attack me? BOK And I have spent these years searching... seeking... a proper blood revenge. And I found it! Bok lifts the sphere triumphantly, and it starts to glow and HUM. He taps it harder than ever before, its strange RESONANCE LOUDER, and Picard's physical anguish knocks him to his knees. STAR TREK: "The Battle" - 9/14/87 - ACT FOUR 51. 61 CONTINUED: PICARD OHHHHH... ! OHHHHH... ! BOK (eyeing device) From a distant world which hu-man evil has not yet reached. May you never secure these! I am rich, yet two of these cost me the profits of an entire life. Despite the enormous pain, Picard is struggling to his feet now. PICARD You cannot... control me like... Bok, highly amused, taps the sphere into a new level of RESONANCE, echoed by Picard grabbing his head in near heart-stopping agony. BOK Die well, Picard. Bok steps out mid-deck, stops, and FERENGI TRANSPORTER EFFECT SWIRLS about him and he DISAPPEARS. CAMERA WHIP PANS, MOVES IN ON Picard who crouches, unseeing, shuddering in pain. FADE OUT. END OF ACT FOUR STAR TREK: "The Battle" - 9/14/87 - ACT FIVE 52. ACT FIVE FADE IN: 62 EXT. SPACE - ENTERPRISE AND STARGAZER (OPTICAL) The Ferengi vessel still in far b.g. The Stargazer, powered, fully lit, is turning, moving away from the Enterprise. RIKER (V.O.) First officer's log, stardate 41724.3. Captain Picard, without explanation, has beamed himself to the Stargazer which is now moving away from us... 63 INT. MAIN BRIDGE (OPTICAL) Main Viewer showing Stargazer per previous SCENE. Riker is at the Captain's position, and Troi, Data, Geordi, Worf, and Tasha are at theirs. Beverly sits in the command area too, holding in her lap the strange metallic sphere from Picard's cabin. RIKER (V.O.) (continuing) ... under its own power. TASHA Hailing frequencies open, sir. RIKER Enterprise to Stargazer, please respond. They wait. No answer. RIKER (continuing) Enterprise to Stargazer... to Captain Picard aboard Stargazer, please answer. (waits; to Data) Mister Data, what was Stargazer's condition? DATA Considerable fire damage to interior surface as reported, sir. But none of her main systems are crippled. STAR TREK: "The Battle" - 9/14/87 - ACT FIVE 53. 63 CONTINUED: RIKER (hates to ask) Armaments, Lieutenant Yar? TASHA Six photon torpedoes short, sir, probably used when the Captain destroyed his Ferengi attacker seven years ago. Otherwise fully armed. Riker puzzles over this, motions to Beverly. She hands him the strange Ferengi sphere which he examines for a moment, then turns to Worf. RIKER Where in the Captain's quarters was it, Mister Worf? WORF His chest from the Stargazer, sir. Just where I had left it -- he hadn't yet unpacked. BEVERLY So, he may not have even known it was there. And if this is able to pick up or magnify a thought-altering transmission... TROI (nodding) ... it could have prepared him for whatever's happening now. RIKER Let's find out... or try to. (turning to Tasha) Contact the Ferengi vessel, Lieutenant. TASHA (touching panel) Hailing frequencies open, sir. Riker stands, carries the sphere to in front of the Main Viewer, as: RIKER Enterprise to Ferengi vessel, we transmit visually. Do you respond? STAR TREK: "The Battle" - 9/14/87 - ACT FIVE 54. 63 CONTINUED: (2) The Main Viewer shifts to an ANGLE ON FERENGI VESSEL which in turn DISSOLVES INTO A VIEW OF FIRST OFFICER KAZAGO, who looks somewhat annoyed. KAZAGO Why is our gift to you under power, hu-man? RIKER I'll discuss that with your captain. KAZAGO He is working in our ship's laboratory. Where is your captain? RIKER (beat) He's beamed himself aboard the Stargazer, and I'm wondering... (brings sphere up into view) ... if this has anything to do with it? Kazago is clearly surprised at the sight of the sphere. KAZAGO How do you have possession of that? RIKER It was found in our captain's belongings, brought over from the Stargazer. Kazago now hesitates himself, his mind racing. KAZAGO It... is a forbidden device. A Thought Maker. If your captain is... criminal enough to own one... RIKER (interrupting) Kazago, I ask again, first officer to first officer... what is going on? Something is happening that neither of us seems to know about. STAR TREK: "The Battle" - 9/14/87 - ACT FIVE 55. 63 CONTINUED: (3) KAZAGO (beat; hesitant) It... is not seemly to question one's own DaiMon, Riker. I... am not prepared to do that... TASHA (overlapping; to Riker) Sir... I have the Stargazer. RIKER Switch now! Tasha tabs her controls and the IMAGE of the Ferengi First Officer DISSOLVES INTO IMAGE OF STARGAZER BRIDGE. (OPTICAL) It is Picard there, NOT looking into camera but able to HEAR Riker when he speaks. Picard looks disoriented. RIKER Captain Picard, this is the Enterprise, sir... PICARD (not understanding) Do not attack again! We are on a peaceful... Picard staggers, coughs, as if from a weapons hit and smoke there -- which we do not see. TROI He's living a delusion, sir. He's seeing things we don't... PICARD Give your identity! You force us to defend ourselves! (turning; shouting) Phasers full up! Arm torpedoes! Why aren't shields at full power... ? Picard has reached to a panel, touched a control... with which STATIC OVERLAYS VIEWSCREEN IMAGE. (OPTICAL) TASHA We've lost him, sir... The Main Viewer IMAGE now has become one of the Stargazer on a course which will bring it back toward the Enterprise. STAR TREK: "The Battle" - 9/14/87 - ACT FIVE 56. 63 CONTINUED: (4) GEORDI When he put the shields up... 64 INT. STARGAZER BRIDGE - FULL ON PICARD He's in the midst of a battle, but we're not seeing what he's seeing. He races to a control panel. PICARD Damn, I said... (flicking switches) ... put fusion generators on surge control. (to another panel) You're moving too slowly. Arm the torpedoes, man! He COUGHS, heavily, waves invisible smoke from his face, shouting: PICARD (continuing) Vigo! Get a fire control party up here! Picard's movement has brought him CLOSE SHOT and now, as his eyes and expression determinedly decide what next to do, CAMERA PUSHES IN TO EXTREME CLOSEUP. 65 PICARD AND BRIDGE (OPTICAL) The bridge now filled with the shadows from Picard's mind. Phantom bridge crew, fire, and smoke (DOUBLE EXPOSURE) in the midst of the Battle of Maxia. Picard alone is real, but reacting to the phantom figures and battle. FIRST VOICE (V.O.) Shields weakening, Captain! PICARD Weapons report! SECOND VOICE (V.O.) Phasers coming to full charge, sir. Torpedoes armed! PICARD Who are they? Identify them! STAR TREK: "The Battle" - 9/14/87 - ACT FIVE 57. 65 CONTINUED: FIRST VOICE (V.O.) They're turning for a third pass at us, sir! THIRD VOICE (V.O.) We can't take another hit, Captain! 66 INT. MAIN BRIDGE (OPTICAL) Our regulars watching IMAGE of Stargazer on Main Viewer as it turns toward them. TROI I can now feel anger from our captain, first officer. Frustration over whatever he is re-living... GEORDI The Battle of Maxia, sir! That's all it can be. RIKER Mister Data? BEVERLY What is that "maneuver" he became famous for... ? RIKER (overlapping) The Picard Maneuver! (whirling) Mister Data, what is the defense against that? DATA There is no defense, sir. RIKER Then devise one! Fast! Data reacts to this impossible demand, then is suddenly busy. Main Viewer IMAGE SHIMMERS, DISSOLVES INTO IMAGE OF KAZAGO ON THE FERENGI BRIDGE. KAZAGO First Officer Kazago to hu-man Riker. RIKER Not now, Kazago! STAR TREK: "The Battle" - 9/14/87 - ACT FIVE 58. 66 CONTINUED: KAZAGO We do not wish to become involved in what has become clearly a Federation matter... RIKER Fine, fine, Enterprise out! KAZAGO But you should also know that DaiMon Bok no longer commands this vessel, Riker. His first officer has confined him for engaging in this unprofitable adventure. (nods) Good luck, First Officer Riker. The Main Viewer again DISSOLVES INTO IMAGE OF THE STARGAZER which is now heading directly for the Enterprise. DATA I have computed a possibility, Commander. Since even deep space contains trace gases, sir, a vessel in the Picard maneuver might seem to disappear, but our sensors could locate any sudden compression of those gases... RIKER (hurried) And use it as an aiming point? Blast our own captain to bits? DATA Aim our tractor beam at it, sir! Seize it! This class starship has enough power for that. RIKER (fast) In our captain's words... make it so! Set sensors, tractor beam... (waiting) I hope you're right, Data... DATA No question of it, sir... Riker throws him an annoyed look. STAR TREK: "The Battle" - 9/14/87 - ACT FIVE 59. 67 EXT. SPACE - ENTERPRISE AND STARGAZER (OPTICAL) as suddenly the Stargazer goes into a WARP BLUR. 68 INT. ENTERPRISE MAIN BRIDGE (OPTICAL) Here she comes! RIKER Stand by! On the Main Viewer, the Stargazer is suddenly two places at once, as it unexpectedly appears right off the bow, to the upper left side... RIKER Lock on tractor beam! And the Enterprise shoots out its mighty force-beam tether again, entrapping the smaller Stargazer. The Stargazer struggles to pull free -- it FIRES a salvo that rocks against the Enterprise shields, hard. 69 INT. STARGAZER BRIDGE (OPTICAL) The Viewer shows the Enterprise, but Picard doesn't yet "see" it... and he's quite alone on his bridge, his delusion slipping. The smoke, flames and voices are gone. PICARD Ready phasers! RIKER (V.O.) Captain Picard, listen to me! PICARD Is that you, Vigo? RIKER (V.O.) It's Commander Riker, sir! The Viewer switches to a FULL SHOT of Riker. Picard is momentarily distracted by the new image. RIKER (continuing) Captain, hear me! Look around you, the Ferengi are using a thought device on you... STAR TREK: "The Battle" - 9/14/87 - ACT FIVE 60. 69 CONTINUED: PICARD Stand by for warp... (inner conflict) Who are you?! RIKER It's Riker, sir. Your Number One. Look for a silver sphere... Picard struggles against his inner directive, as he angles and sees the SPHERE behind him, glowing and HUMMING. RIKER (continuing; sees it too) There it is! Destroy it with your phaser, Captain! PICARD Phaser... (glances back) Yes, a sphere... Bok used it... RIKER Destory it! PICARD (fumbles in pocket) Phaser... destroy the sphere. And Picard manages to remove his phaser, and in a quick beat, BLASTS the Ferengi brain machine to bits. Picard staggers, weakened. RIKER Captain! Are you all right? Picard feebly touches his insignia. PICARD Enterprise, lock on. Beam me home, Riker. As the familiar TRANSPORTER EFFECT DE-MATERIALIZES Picard. STAR TREK: "The Battle" - 9/14/87 - ACT FIVE 61. 70 EXT. ENTERPRISE AND STARGAZER (OPTICAL) as the smaller vessel, back on its tether, is towed off. FADE OUT. END OF ACT FIVE THE END STAR TREK: THE NEXT GENERATION Hide And "Q" #40271-111 Story by C. J. Holland Teleplay by C. J. Holland and Gene Roddenberry Directed by Cliff Bole Copyright 1987 Paramount Pictures Corporation. All Rights Reserved. This script is not for publication or reproduction. No one is authorized to dispose of same. If lost or destroyed, please notify the Script Department. REVISED FINAL DRAFT SEPTEMBER 25, 1987 STAR TREK: Hide And "Q" - 9/25/87 - CAST STAR TREK: THE NEXT GENERATION Hide And "Q" CAST PICARD "Q" RIKER WOMAN (SURVIVOR) BEVERLY BEVERLY DATA Non-Speaking Roles TROI CREWMEMBERS TASHA SICKBAY STAFF GEORDI TWO SENTRIES WORF ANIMAL-SOLDIERS WESLEY DOZEN SURVIVORS CHILD (FEMALE SURVIVOR) STAR TREK: Hide And "Q" - 9/25/87 - SETS STAR TREK: THE NEXT GENERATION Hide And "Q" SETS INTERIORS EXTERIORS USS ENTERPRISE USS ENTERPRISE CORRIDOR PLANET - QUADRA SIGMA III MAIN BRIDGE PLAIN CAPTAIN'S READY ROOM THIRD RIDGE TRANSPORTER ROOM BIVOUAC AREA PLANET DISASTER AREA STAR TREK: Hide And "Q" - 9/25/87 - TEASER 1. STAR TREK: THE NEXT GENERATION Hide And "Q" TEASER FADE IN: 1 EXT. ENTERPRISE IN SPACE (OPTICAL) The great ship streaks through space at warp speed. 2 INT. ND CORRIDOR Two crewmembers, their arms loaded with supplies, race along the corridor. They pass DOCTOR CRUSHER in the corridor. 3 NEW ANGLE Beverly checks her Staff as they pass with emergency medical packets on way to turbolift. BEVERLY Include a burn unit with each kit. On arrival, identify the most critically injured and beam them up to Cargo Bay Six... PICARD'S COM VOICE (interrupting) Doctor Crusher, this is the Captain. BEVERLY (touching wall panel) Doctor Crusher here. PICARD'S COM VOICE Additional information. The number of colonists at the site is five hundred-four - including thirty-eight children. 4 INT. ENTERPRISE - MAIN BRIDGE PICARD is in his Command chair, TROI to his left. WORF at the Aft Station. GEORDI has the Conn, DATA on Ops. TASHA at Tactical. STAR TREK: Hide And "Q" - 9/25/87 - TEASER 2. 4 CONTINUED: The tension level is very high. The mission is urgent. As Picard answers, RIKER ENTERS from the turbolift, CROSSES the bridge and takes his position. PICARD So far nothing more than the initial message. Explosion - cause unknown - many injured. Are you prepared, Doctor? BEVERLY'S COM VOICE We believe so, sir. GEORDI Captain, we are now at warp nine point one. DATA Which will bring us into the Quadra Sigma System in three point two hours. Riker takes his position. RIKER Captain, I have a schematic of the explosion site. It suggests the cause as a methane-like gas seeping in underground... TROI (with alarm) Captain, I am... 5 ANGLE ON TROI Her face is full of apprehension. TROI I am sensing what we encountered months ago... Interrupted by the SOUND of the BRIDGE ALARM. 6 ANGLE ON PICARD He turns. KLAXON HONKING - LIGHTS FLASHING. STAR TREK: Hide And "Q" - 9/25/87 - TEASER 3. 7 ANGLE INCLUDING MAIN VIEWER - PICARD'S POV (OPTICAL) The Main Viewer SHIMMERS as an unusual SHINING, SPARKLING GRID SHAPE APPEARS, seeming to stretch across the whole of the galaxy ahead of them. 8 ANGLE ON PICARD (OPTICAL) He recognizes the shape - he has seen it before en route to Farpoint Station. DATA The "Q" Entity, sir? It is identical to the grid we encountered when... WORF It reads solid, sir. If we hit it... ! PICARD Not now, damn it, "Q"... (to Helm) Emergency full stop! GEORDI Yes, sir. TASHA Shields and deflectors, up, sir. The familiar SHIMMERING GRID on the viewer is now very close to the Enterprise. Forward movement stops. 8A EXT. SPACE - ENTERPRISE IN FRONT OF GRID (OPTICAL) 8B INT. MAIN BRIDGE (OPTICAL) GEORDI Now reading full stop, sir. The words overlapped by something akin to ROLLING THUNDER, accompanied by a BRILLIANT and SUSTAINED FLASH which becomes RAPIDLY ROTATING, BLINDINGLY BRILLIANT, DIAMOND-BLUE LIGHT. While there is no hard-edged Shape, it is of about the same volume of a very large man. STAR TREK: Hide And "Q" - 9/25/87 - TEASER 4. 8B CONTINUED: "Q" (V.O.) (amplified and powerful) Humans, I thought by now you would have scampered back to your own little star system. PICARD (waits, then) If this is "Q" I'm addressing, our vessel and crew are on a mission of rescue where a group of badly injured... "Q" (V.O.) (interrupting) We of the "Q" have studied our recent contact with you... and are impressed. We have much to discuss, including perhaps the realization of your most impossible dreams. The expressions of the bridge crew reveal they are intrigued by this statement... and in the potential of the "Q" entity to do remarkable things, however annoying its actions in the past. Even Picard takes a moment to absorb this. PICARD (sarcastically) However intriguing we may find that to be, we are now in the midst of an urgent journey. Once we have completed that... "Q" (V.O.) (louder; angrier) You will abandon that mission, Captain. My business with you takes precedence! 9 INT. MAIN BRIDGE - ANGLE ON BRIDGE CREW Reflections of the BRILLIANT DIAMOND-BLUE LIGHT on their faces as they look ahead toward this newest Shape of "Q". They shield their eyes from it. STAR TREK: Hide And "Q" - 9/25/87 - TEASER 5. 9 (CONTINUED:) "Q" (V.O.) If my magnificence blinds you, then perhaps something more familiar... An explosion of sudden HISSING SOUNDS startles the bridge crew into expressions of mixed surprise, fear and loathing. 10 OMITTED 11 ANGLE ON "Q" SERPENT A WRITHING SNAKE with snapping fangs, continuing mixed HISSING, DARTS toward them from whence came the "Q" light image. 12 REVERSE ANGLE Both Worf and Tasha vaulting down onto the Command deck, instinctively drawing phasers as they try to position their own bodies between the frightening Snake-thing and the bridge Crew, as we: FADE OUT. END OF TEASER STAR TREK: Hide And "Q" - 9/25/87 - ACT ONE 6. ACT ONE FADE IN: 13 INT. MAIN BRIDGE - ANGLE ON TASHA AND WORF First one, then the other, discover phasers inoperative. The snake head seems an instant away from fanging them... WORF Damn, the phasers are useless! PICARD (V.O.) "Q", STOP THIS! 14 EMPHASIZING PICARD AND RIKER on their feet. PICARD Stop this and we agree to talk for a moment! At which WE SEE the reflection of a familiar BRILLIANT LIGHT FLASH, blinding Picard and Riker again. Then as they lower their protecting hands, they REACT at the sight of: 15 ANGLE EMPHASIZING "Q" in the full-dress uniform of a Starfleet ADMIRAL. "Q" (ADMIRAL) Starfleet Admiral "Q" at your service! PICARD You are not a Starfleet admiral, "Q"... "Q" (ADMIRAL) Neither am I an Aldebaran serpent, Captain. But you accepted me as such. Riker nods, a hint of the irony of this on his features. STAR TREK: Hide And "Q" - 9/25/87 - ACT ONE 7. 15 CONTINUED: RIKER He's got us there, Captain. "Q" (ADMIRAL) (nods) The redoubtable Commander Riker whom I noticed before. You seem to find this amusing. RIKER I might, if we weren't trying to rescue a group of suffering and dying humans who... "Q" (ADMIRAL) Your species is always suffering and dying... PICARD (interrupting) No, Lieutenant Worf... ! 16 ANGLE TO INCLUDE WORF trying to ease himself into a clear line of fire toward "Q". He freezes at Picard's order, eases his almost hidden small phaser back into his belt. PICARD You'll make no move against him unless I order it. "Q" smiles toward Worf. "Q" (ADMIRAL) Pity. You might have learned an interesting lesson. Tsk, a macro head, a micro brain. Worf is obviously unrepentant. Picard, thinking furiously, tries another direction. PICARD "Q", you said you had the realization of "some impossible dreams" to offer us. Once this rescue is complete, I'll listen seriously to whatever proposal you wish to make and then, subject to it being acceptable... STAR TREK: Hide And "Q" - 9/25/87 - ACT ONE 8. 16 CONTINUED: "Q" bursts into what sounds like genuine LAUGHTER. "Q" (ADMIRAL) "... subject to" your foolish human values? Picard, why do you people distrust me so? Picard starts to open his mouth, shuts it. DATA Sir, if... Picard shakes his head, forcing Data into silence... also clearly including the rest of his bridge crew in this. "Q" (ADMIRAL) Yes, Captain, it is best they don't answer that. But you... you, Picard, I grant the freedom to answer me honestly. Why do you distrust me so? PICARD "Q", right now humans may be dying because you... "Q" (ADMIRAL) (angry now) SPEAK! Why do you distrust me? PICARD (beat) Why? On our first meeting, "Q", you seized my vessel, condemned all humans as savages and on that charge, you tried us in a post-atomic twenty-first century court of horrors where you attacked my people... then you again seized my vessel... "Q" (ADMIRAL) How that angers you: "Seized my vessel, seized my vessel... " STAR TREK: Hide And "Q" - 9/25/87 - ACT ONE 9. 16 CONTINUED: (2) PICARD (without pause, ignoring this) ... and then proceeded to interfere with our Farpoint mission, threatening to convict us as ignorant savages if, in dealing with complex and powerful life-forms, we made the slightest error... and when you failed even there... "Q" (ADMIRAL) (interrupting) At that point, the "Q" became interested in you. (turns to include bridge crew) Cannot some of you understand your incredible good fortune?! (to Picard, mimicking) "Seized my vessel, seized my vessel... " The complaint of a closed mind too accustomed to military privileges. (to Riker) But you, Riker, and I remember you well, what do you make of my offer? RIKER I stand with my Captain. "Q" (ADMIRAL) (smiles) Of course, you do. Commendable loyalty. (indicating bridge crew; to Riker) And what of these others? Since humanity now interests us, how shall we come to know them better? RIKER We don't have time for these games. "Q" (ADMIRAL) Ah, yes! A game... for interest's sake, a deadly game. To the game! And, at a wave of "Q"'s hand, the entire bridge crew except for Picard... DISAPPEARS, leaving Picard alone on the bridge. STAR TREK: Hide And "Q" - 9/25/87 - ACT ONE 10. 17 EXT. PLANET PLAIN (OPTICAL) The bridge crew are standing in approximately their previous bridge positions on a treeless planet plain. They have just been snatched from their ship, their captain and they are understandably confused and uncertain except for Tasha and Worf whose security orientation have them immediately combat ready. This place is bright, hot. 18 EMPHASIZING RIKER looking up. 19 RIKER POV - TWIN SUNS (OPTICAL) close together (avoiding the necessity of twin-shadows), apparently rotating about each other. Both suns are brilliant but the smaller sun, about one-quarter the size of the larger, is not quite as brilliant as the large one. 20 BACK TO EXT. PLAIN (OPTICAL) Data and Geordi, looking up too, move in next to Riker. DATA Obviously a Class-M world, gravity and oxygen within our limits... GEORDI ... but a twin sun? Where are we? DATA Considering the power demonstrated by "Q" the last time... Anywhere! Assuming this place even exists. RIKER But this won't be boring. If "Q"'s anything, he's imaginative. (to the others) Apparently the captain wasn't meant to be with us here. TASHA (overlapping) Sir! Over here... ! STAR TREK: Hide And "Q" - 9/25/87 - ACT ONE 11. 21 ANGLE INCLUDING "Q" who stands where a rock formation has previously hidden him. He is now wearing a French MARSHAL'S uniform, circa the Napoleonic Wars. As Riker, very curious, moves toward "Q", CAMERA MOVES AND PANS TO REVEAL also a headquarters-type campaign tent of the same era, complete with shade canopy and transportable field furniture. "Q" indicates two such chairs with a small table which holds a pair of tall, cool drinks. "Q" (MARSHAL) Join me, Riker. A good game needs rules and planning... Riker hesitates. "Q" (MARSHAL) (continuing) Wasn't it your own Hartley who said "Nothing reveals humanity so well as the games it plays?" (smiles; nods) Almost right. Actually, you reveal yourselves best in how you play. Data has moved in next to Riker and speaks quietly. DATA Sir, what he has in mind could provide us with vital information. Riker nods, moves toward the campaign tent. "Q" sits, waves invitingly toward the empty seat. He also picks up one of the tall drinks and WE CAN HEAR ICE CLINKING in it. 22 RIKER AND "Q" as Riker inspects the remaining drink without sitting yet, picks it up and looks a question toward Troi. TROI (registering surprise) What I sense is... pleasure, sir. Riker sips the drink, registers surprise too. RIKER Incredible. I was just thinking of an old-fashioned lemonade... STAR TREK: Hide And "Q" - 9/25/87 - ACT ONE 12. 22 CONTINUED: "Q" (MARSHAL) ... and so it became that. An excellent thirst quencher; it becomes quite hot out on this plane. RIKER What about my people? "Q" makes a waving gesture. "Q" (MARSHAL) Whatever they want, of course! 23 ANGLE INCLUDING OTHERS REACTING to the fact they suddenly have tall drinks of various colored liquids in their hands. Hesitantly, a couple of them sip. Worf, however, tilts his glass pouring the contents out onto the sand. Strangely, this pleases "Q"'s sense of humor. "Q" (MARSHAL) The rigid Klingon code! Drink not with thine enemy! (to Riker) Which explains something of why you defeated them. RIKER Still arguing the human past? Perhaps you're not that original. "Q" (MARSHAL) Au contraire! It is the human future that now intrigues us... and should concern you most. Of all species, yours cannot abide stagnation... change is at the heart of what you are. But change into what? That's the question! DATA That is what humans call a truism. "Q" (MARSHAL) (annoyed) Meaning "hardly original"... STAR TREK: Hide And "Q" - 9/25/87 - ACT ONE 13. 23 CONTINUED: RIKER (hint of humor) You're the one who said it. And while we're at it... (indicating "Q"'s uniform, tent) ... this isn't part of any human future... "Q" (MARSHAL) True, I borrowed this from your stodgy captain's mind. It is dressing for the game we will play and games require boundaries, dangers, rewards, familiar settings, that sort of thing. Riker looks over "Q"'s uniform, the tent, etc. RIKER It's not that familiar to me... (calls) Data? DATA (stepping in) It is from Europe's Napoleonic Era, sir, late eighteenth, early nineteenth centuries. This is a campaign headquarters tent, his uniform is that of a French Army marshal, the... RIKER (to "Q") And a marshal outranks even an admiral... "Q" (MARSHAL) Would I go from a Starfleet admiral to anything less? RIKER (hint of a smile now) Of course, you wouldn't. (indicates) But Napoleonic equipment on an alien planet with dual suns... ? STAR TREK: Hide And "Q" - 9/25/87 - ACT ONE 14. 23 CONTINUED: (2) "Q" (MARSHAL) As you've said, I'm nothing if not imaginative. And the game should reflect that. Shall it be a test of strength? Meaningless, since you have none. A test of intelligence? Equally meaningless... (eyeing Riker) A game needs risk... Something to win; something to lose. RIKER If we must play a game, what would we win? "Q" (MARSHAL) The greatest possible future you can imagine! (beat; thinking) Which, of course, requires something totally disastrous if you lose! (thinking again) The point of this game will be whether any of you can stay alive. 24 EMPHASIZING TASHA AND WORF (OPTICAL) As the others react, Worf responds: WORF If your "game" is fair, we will. "Q" (MARSHAL) For shame, Lieutenant Worf. Fairness is a human concept. (to Riker) Think imaginatively! It will, in fact, be completely unfair... TASHA You've gone too far. She is drawing her phaser but "Q" is pointing his finger at her just as fast. "Q" (MARSHAL) Game penalty! STAR TREK: Hide And "Q" - 9/25/87 - ACT ONE 15. 24 CONTINUED: Visible even in this bright desert setting, a FLASH OF LIGHT in which Tasha DISAPPEARS. Reacting, Riker turns angrily to "Q". RIKER Where is she, "Q"? You can forget your game if... "Q" (MARSHAL) To use a twentieth century term, Commander, she's in a... a "penalty box." Where she can remain unharmed unless one of you merits a penalty. (smiles) Unfortunately, there is only one penalty box. If any of you should be sent there... dear Tasha must give up the box to you. GEORDI And... where does she go? "Q" (MARSHAL) (to Geordi) Into "nothingness." (looking to the Others, individually) I entreat you to carefully obey the rules of the game. The only one who can destroy your Tasha now... is you. FADE OUT. END OF ACT ONE STAR TREK: Hide And "Q" - 9/25/87 - ACT TWO 16. ACT TWO FADE IN: 25 EXT. SPACE - THE ENTERPRISE (OPTICAL) but not in orbit of a planet. Instead, it seems to be traveling somewhere at what we know as normal warp speed. MUSIC only. 26 INT. MAIN BRIDGE Picard at a turbolift, touches the door, without effect. Then he tries to bang it. PICARD Turbolift Control, do you read? This is the captain. No response. Picard CROSSES to his bridge position, touches his panel controls. PICARD (continuing) Engineering, this is the bridge. No response. PICARD (continuing) Security -- this is the Captain. Again -- nothing. PICARD (continuing) Computer? (waits) Computer on! The computer still doesn't respond. He's cut off. Isolated. Picard touches his insignia. PICARD (continuing) Captain's log... The SOUND is wrong, indicating that: STAR TREK: Hide And "Q" - 9/25/87 - ACT TWO 17. 26 CONTINUED: PICARD (continuing) Damn... I can't even make a log entry. TASHA (O.S.) I wish I could help you, Captain. 27 WIDER ANGLE as Picard, startled, whirls toward the VOICE. It is Tasha who stands at her familiar position at security. Unusually for Tasha, she is showing some strain over what has been happening. PICARD What... what are you doing here? TASHA I... well, this sounds strange, but... I'm in the penalty box. PICARD You're what?! TASHA (tightly) In "Q"'s penalty box. As I said, it sounds strange but it definitely isn't. Somehow I know that one more penalty... by me or anyone... and I'm gone. Curious and concerned, Picard moves toward her. PICARD Gone? TASHA (distraught) Please do not keep reminding me... PICARD I'm sorry... TASHA (instantly) No, I'm sorry. It's so frustrating to be controlled like this... STAR TREK: Hide And "Q" - 9/25/87 - ACT TWO 18. 27 CONTINUED: There's a half-SOB in the ordinarily strong and controlled VOICE and Picard REACTS to it. PICARD Lieutenant...Tasha... it's all right... TASHA (astonished and angry) What the hell am I doing? Crying? PICARD Don't worry. There's a new ship's standing order. (smiles) When in a penalty box, some tears are permitted. Tasha looks up warmly, comforted by this. TASHA Captain... if you weren't a captain... "Q" (MARSHAL) (O.S.) (interrupting) Consorting with lower rank females, Captain? 28 ANGLE TO INCLUDE "Q" seated in the Captain's Command position. He smiles, enjoys having startled Picard this way. "Q" (MARSHAL) Destructive to discipline, they say. But you are, after all, only human, eh? Picard has made his way down to the Command level where he now looks "Q" and the uniform over. PICARD A marshal of France? Ridiculous! "Q" (MARSHAL) One takes what jobs he can get. For example, your log entries. (MORE) STAR TREK: Hide And "Q" - 9/25/87 - ACT TWO 19. 28 CONTINUED: "Q" (Cont'd) (looks up) Starship log, stardate today... This is "Q", speaking for Captain Jean-Luc Picard, who we consider too bound by Starfleet custom and tradition to be useful in this activity. PICARD But who proved himself a resourceful opponent when he defeated you at Farpoint. "Q" (MARSHAL) (with "log" tone again) The Enterprise is now helpless, stuck like an Earth insect in amber while its bridge crew plays out a game whose real intent... (aiming this at Picard) ... is to test if their first officer is worthy of the greatest gift the "Q" can offer. Picard takes a long moment to absorb this, then he nods. PICARD So, you're taking on Riker this time. (smiles) Excellent! He'll defeat you just as I did! "Q" (MARSHAL) A wager on that, Captain? Your command of this starship against... ? PICARD Against your staying out of humanity's path... forever! Done? "Q" (MARSHAL) Done! (smiles) And you've already lost, Picard. You see, Riker is to be offered something impossible to reject. "Q" storms toward the Ready Room. STAR TREK: Hide And "Q" - 9/25/87 - ACT TWO 20. 29 EXT. THE PLANET All but Worf are there, studying a point on the distant terrain. RIKER Geordi, can you still see Worf? GEORDI (nods) I'd see the freckles on his nose, if he had them, sir. He's at the third ridge now... TROI The third ridge... ? GEORDI Moving well. (distracted) Oh, oh! (peers) Good, he sees them. They look like sentries, sir. 30 EXT. THIRD RIDGE Worf -- the trained warrior -- approaches with caution. It is indeed a bivouac area. Worf can hear the unseen men SPEAKING IN FRENCH. He edges closer. 31 ANOTHER ANGLE Worf pushes through the rocks, FREEZES. 32 ROCKS - WORF'S POV Two sentries are walking a perimeter patrol. They are dressed as Bonapartist soldiers, carrying muskets. As they approach, WE SEE their uniforms look genuine enough... but then we make out their faces! Humanoid but with fearsome, fanged, unhuman features. 33 BIVOUAC AREA Worf reacts at this. Then he moves as close as he dares. Those in the camp appear to be preparing for a battle. But where human troops would be yelling, these soldiers are GROWLING, SNARLING. Over that, the CLATTER of caissons -- equipment being assembled. STAR TREK: Hide And "Q" - 9/25/87 - ACT TWO 21. 34 ANGLE ON WORF He hears a squad approaching -- slips back among the rocks and DISAPPEARS. 35 INT. CAPTAIN'S READY ROOM Picard comes to the door. "Q" is sitting in the chair with his back to Picard. PICARD "Q", listen to me. You seem to have some need of humans... "Q" (MARSHAL) Or concern regarding them. PICARD Whichever it is, why try to solve it through this confrontation with us? Why not a simple direct explanation, a statement of what you seek? Why these games? "Q" turns and WE SEE he is holding Picard's complete works of William Shakespeare. He indicates the books. "Q" (MARSHAL) I'm surprised you have to ask when your human Shakespeare has already explained it so well. PICARD Indeed he did, "Q". But careful you don't depend too much on any single viewpoint he... "Q" (MARSHAL) (ignoring this; interrupting) Why these games I require of you? A pity you're not familiar with the contents of your own library. Hear this, Picard, and reflect. (lifts book, quotes from it) "All the galaxy's a stage, and... " PICARD (interrupts) "All the galaxy?" "All the world's a stage... " STAR TREK: Hide And "Q" - 9/25/87 - ACT TWO 22. 35 CONTINUED: "Q". (MARSHAL) Oh, you know that one? Then how about, "... Life's but a walking shadow, a poor player that struts and frets his hour upon the stage, and then is heard no more. It is a tale told by an idiot, full of sound and fury, signifying nothing." PICARD And so you say, how we respond to a game tells you more about us than our real life, a "tale told by an idiot." (still amused) Interesting, "Q". "Q" (MARSHAL) (lifts book) Shall I quote from Hamlet? PICARD No. I know Hamlet. And what he said with irony I prefer to say with conviction. (quoting) "What a piece of work is man! How noble in reason! How infinite in faculty. In form, in moving, how express and admirable. In action, how like an angel. In apprehension, how like a god... " "Q" (MARSHAL) (upset; interrupting) You don't really see your species like that?! PICARD I see us one day becoming that, "Q". Is that what concerns you? "Q" comes angrily to his feet, SLAMMING the volume down and DISAPPEARING in a FLASH. A startled and puzzled Picard watches him go, then turns to ponder the meaning of "Q"'s anger. STAR TREK: Hide And "Q" - 9/25/87 - ACT TWO 23. 36 EXT. PLANET The same plain. Riker, Troi and Data watch as Geordi scans the distant desert ridges. RIKER Can you still see Worf? GEORDI (shakes head) It's hard to keep him in sight, sir. But the soldiers there... they've formed a "skirmishing line," I think you'd call it... and they're headed this way. RIKER Carrying ancient powder and ball muskets? GEORDI That's what their weapons look like, sir. DATA Muskets are appropriate to the 1790 - 1800 French army uniform. (shakes head) But it is hardly a "weapon" by our standards, sir. A lead ball propelled by gunpowder -- one-hundred meters at most with any accuracy... GEORDI Against phasers? Just one of our hand phasers could finish off an entire regiment of them. RIKER Except for one thing... (to Troi) That hardly sounds like "Q", giving us an advantage like that. (puzzling; then REACTING) Unless... 37 SPECIAL EFFECT ANGLE (OPTICAL) Suspecting some kind of trap, Riker draws his own hand phaser. He checks its setting, aims it well away from everybody else... touches the trigger lightly for just an instant. STAR TREK: Hide And "Q" - 9/25/87 - ACT TWO 24. 37 CONTINUED: The PHASER SOUND precedes an EXPLOSION OF DUST AND DIRT at a point where Riker was aiming the phaser. It causes a hole at least the size of one caused by a howitzer shell. 38 ANOTHER ANGLE It also produces another effect -- the FORM of Worf, large phaser in hand, propelling itself INTO SCENE, rolling to a stop where the Klingon is aiming his phaser, seeking the away team's "assailant" which fired the phaser blast. WORF (growling it) DROP YOUR WEAPONS! He aims this way, then that, attempting quickly to spot who or whatever is menacing his friends. RIKER (exhibits hand phaser) I'm afraid it was me, Worf. Making certain our phasers still operate. Worf returns his own phaser. WORF A warrior's reaction. GEORDI Incredible, Worf! You came out of nowhere! RIKER (to Worf) Report. What did you find? WORF Sir... what they're wearing may be old Earth uniforms, but what's inside those uniforms isn't human at all. More like vicious animal things. GEORDI Oh, oh! Good old "Q". But how can even the most savage animal forms threaten us if they're armed with the equivalent of popguns? STAR TREK: Hide And "Q" - 9/25/87 - ACT TWO 25. 39 SPECIAL EFFECTS ANGLE (OPTICAL) Geordi, who has been scanning the terrain, now turns to Riker. GEORDI They're moving in fast, sir. 40 ANGLE EMPHASIZING RIKER Data's back is to him. RIKER Data, if you've got a theory on what's happening... Data's FORM turns, REVEALING IT IS NOT DATA AT ALL, BUT "Q" -- and using his own VOICE despite the Data clothing. "Q" (DATA) Think fast, Commander Riker. (REACTING; pointing) And move fast... ! "Q" is pointing at two of the fierce-looking Animal Things in French uniform that have moved INTO SIGHT, aiming their "muskets" at Geordi who jumps behind a rock. TWO PHASER BLASTS. The first hits a rock near Geordi. The second BLASTS A BROAD FURROW in the desert floor. RIKER That's no "musket!" 41 ANOTHER ANGLE (OPTICAL) "Q" is REACTING to the uniformed Animal Things seeing them now, swinging its weapon in their direction. Riker spins, FIRES HIS PHASER, DEMATERIALIZING both his opponents. RIKER (anxiously) Troi, Geordi, Worf... ! "Q" pulls him down as: "Q" (DATA) You have only one chance to save them, now. Send them to your ship! STAR TREK: Hide And "Q" - 9/25/87 - ACT TWO 26. 41 CONTINUED: RIKER You'll let me beam them? "Q" (DATA) (shakes head) Send them the same way as I do. I've given you that power. Geordi comes scrambling INTO VIEW. "Q" (DATA) (continuing) Do you understand? I've given you the power of the "Q". (demonstrates with sweeping gesture) Use it! Worf and Troi come INTO VIEW too. 42 ANOTHER ANGLE (OPTICAL) Riker becomes aware of someone scrambling toward him. It's Data, the real Data using his own body. "Q" has gone. CAMERA JIGGLES WITH ANOTHER MAJOR PHASER HIT. "Q" (V.O.) (echo chamber) Use your power! With little other choice, Riker makes a hand gesture -- causing FLASHES OF BLINDING LIGHT in which Data, Geordi, Troi and Worf DISAPPEAR. On Riker's stunned expression: FADE OUT. END OF ACT TWO STAR TREK: Hide And "Q" - 9/25/87 - ACT THREE 27. ACT THREE FADE IN: 43 INT. MAIN BRIDGE The bridge is empty -- the displays and readouts are still frozen. The ambient noise is still absent. SLOW PUSH IN to Tasha sitting on the bench beside Riker's position. Head in hands, she stares at the floor. Suddenly the room noise changes and on the SOUND her head comes up. 44 WIDER ANGLE ON THE BRIDGE (OPTICAL) The display screens are alive. All the bridge's ambient SOUNDS are back. Tasha looks over to Picard's Ready Room. 45 READY ROOM DOOR Picard STEPS OUT. He too has heard the change. He walks to his Command position. PICARD Take the Conn, Lieutenant. Tasha rises. 46 ANGLE ON PICARD He sits and touches his arm-panel. PICARD Engineering -- this is the bridge. ENGINEER'S COM VOICE Engineering here, sir. PICARD Are all systems back on line? ENGINEER'S COM VOICE Back on line, sir? They were never off. 47 ANGLE ON TASHA at the Conn position. STAR TREK: Hide And "Q" - 9/25/87 - ACT THREE 28. 47 CONTINUED: TASHA Captain, you had better look at this. Picard walks over to Tasha. 48 ANGLE ON TASHA AND PICARD He looks at the readout. TASHA There has been no interruption in course or speed. Both have remained constant. Captain -- it's as though we never stopped. Picard straightens up. PICARD We never did. "Q" suspended time. 49 WIDE ANGLE - MAIN BRIDGE FLASHES OF LIGHT and the members of the bridge crew REAPPEAR except for Riker. Alive and unharmed. 50 INTERCUT ANGLES OF CREW All of them are naturally disoriented -- the shock of the experience cannot be instantly thrown off. TASHA Where's Commander Riker? They look around. WORF He was with us. GEORDI He must still be on the planet. (to Picard) We were under attack by... by animal things... PICARD Animal things? STAR TREK: Hide And "Q" - 9/25/87 - ACT THREE 29. 50 CONTINUED: GEORDI Animal things in uniform, sir... (quails at Picard's expression) Which I think Data could probably explain better, sir. As Picard turns to Data, the android decides he wants no part of this. DATA You may find it aesthetically displeasing, sir. I could just file a computer report on that... TROI (interrupting) Sir, the important thing right now is why is Commander Riker missing? PICARD Understood, Counselor, but Will is almost certainly safe... (troubled) ... at least "safe" in a physical sense. "Q" has an interest in him... in fact, "Q"'s entire visit has something to do with our first officer. DATA And the reason for that, sir... ? PICARD I wish I knew. "Q" became interested in him at Farpoint. (shakes head) I've no idea what it means. (to the others) Meanwhile, we must proceed with our rescue mission... 51 thru OMITTED 52 53 EXT. DESERT Empty -- no Riker. But there are footprints in the sand indicating a direction toward which is a jagged rock formation on the otherwise unbroken sandscape. STAR TREK: Hide And "Q" - 9/25/87 - ACT THREE 30. 54 ANGLE AT ROCK FORMATION REVEALING Riker who has managed to find himself a little shade. He sits, leans back against a rock. Then, starts to laugh. It is a deep, satisfying laugh from one who has just been let in on a cosmic joke. "Q" (O.S.) Something amuses you? Riker looks up. 55 ANGLE UP ON "Q" - RIKER'S POV (OPTICAL) Standing on a ledge above Riker, heavily back-lit by the two suns. (If possible, formed here by two brightly illuminated OUT-OF-FOCUS balls as described earlier.) We'll see more clearly in a moment also that "Q" wears rank and uniform identical to Riker's. "Q" (COMMANDER) Perhaps you would share the joke with me? 56 ANGLE ON RIKER as "Q" moves down into TWO SHOT. Riker eyes "Q" for a long beat, then: RIKER The joke is you, you silly son of a bitch. "Q" glares at Riker who now seems confident and at ease about something. "Q" (COMMANDER) Strange gratitude from one who has been granted a gift beyond any human dream. How can you not appreciate being able to send your friends back to their ship... (the sweeping gesture) ... or sending the soldiers back to the "nothingness" from which they came? "Q" takes a beat, sits on a piece of rock next to Riker, leans toward him confidentially. STAR TREK: Hide And "Q" - 9/25/87 - ACT THREE 31. 56 CONTINUED: "Q" (COMMANDER) (continuing) Certainly, you understand that at this moment you can send yourself back to your ship... or to Earth, or change your shape and become anything else you want to be... RIKER (interrupting; strongly) What do you need, "Q"? "Q" (COMMANDER) "Need?" RIKER You want something from us, "Q". Desperately! What is it? "Q" (COMMANDER) Want something from you foolish, fragile, non-entities? Careful, Riker, you're beginning to sound like your captain. RIKER (grins) Now that's a compliment, "Q". But it's not an answer. Stung by this, "Q" comes to his feet, raising a hand as if to make the gesture we've seen before... finds Riker still smiling up at him. He turns, walks angrily a few steps away, then a few back as if bringing his anger under control. "Q" (COMMANDER) (clipped; angry) Riker... we have tried to offer you a gift beyond all other gifts... ! RIKER ... Out of the "goodness" of your heart? They exchange looks for a long, long moment. Then "Q" seats himself again, and finally: STAR TREK: Hide And "Q" - 9/25/87 - ACT THREE 32. 56 CONTINUED: (2) "Q" (COMMANDER) After Farpoint, I returned to where we exist... the "Q Continuum." RIKER Which means exactly what? "Q" (COMMANDER) (trace of annoyance) The limitless dimensions of the galaxy in which we exist. We could hardly be capable of acting in ways that seem so astonishing to you... if we were limited to the primitive dimensions in which you live, dimensions which would make us prisoners of time and space. RIKER (beat; absorbing this) What do you mean by we? "Q" (COMMANDER) (more annoyance) In our Continuum the terms we and I mean much the same. RIKER I don't understand... "Q" (COMMANDER) Of course you don't, and you never will until you become one of us. RIKER (reacting) Until?... Would you mind going over that again? "Q" (COMMANDER) (nods) If you'll stop interrupting me. This really isn't the time to teach you the true nature of the universe. (MORE) STAR TREK: Hide And "Q" - 9/25/87 - ACT THREE 33. 56 CONTINUED: (3) "Q" (Cont'd) (leans in again) At Farpoint, we saw you as savages only, and thought to frighten you into scurrying back to your system. We discovered instead, that you are an unusual creature in your own limited ways... ways which in time may not be so limited. RIKER (nods) We're growing. Something about us compels us to learn, explore... "Q" (COMMANDER) (nods) The human compulsion. And, unfortunately, for us, a force that will grow stronger century after century, eon after eon... RIKER Eons! Have you any idea how far we'll advance? "Q" (COMMANDER) Perhaps in a future you cannot yet conceive... even beyond us. And so, we must know more about the human condition. We have selected you, Riker, to become part of the "Q"... to bring that human need and hunger to us so that we may understand it. RIKER (ponders, then) I... suppose you mean that as a compliment, "Q"... or maybe it's my limited mind... (stands) ... but... to become part of you?! I don't even like you! "Q" looks at Riker, seeming amused. STAR TREK: Hide And "Q" - 9/25/87 - ACT THREE 34. 56 CONTINUED: (4) "Q" (COMMANDER) You're going to miss me! "Q" makes the sweeping gesture and it produces the familiar BLINDING LIGHT FLASH in which "Q" DISAPPEARS. And almost immediately, the startled VOICES of the bridge crew, with Riker whirling in that direction: TROI Oh, no! GEORDI Come on, not again! 57 OMITTED 58 GROUP SHOT where the entire bridge crew, including Picard and WESLEY, find themselves facing a line of the French uniformed "animal soldiers," who menace the Enterprise people, ATTACHING LONG AND DEADLY-LOOKING BAYONETS ONTO THEIR MUSKETS, clearly intending to use them. WESLEY (totally confused) What's happening, Commander Riker? I was sitting in school... TASHA (interrupting) My phaser's gone. Worf, are you armed? Worf checks, shakes his head, but nevertheless he and Tasha move to place themselves between the bridge crew and the danger. Picard has moved quickly to Riker. PICARD Where is "Q"? If you have any answer to this, Number One... Interrupted by an animal soldier lifting a bugle, blowing the OLD FRENCH ATTACK CALL. A SNARL AND ROAR from an animal soldier with sergeant's stripes and the line of soldiers advance, bayonets leveled at the bridge crew. STAR TREK: Hide And "Q" - 9/25/87 - ACT THREE 35. 59 SPECIAL EFFECTS ANGLE ON WORF moving forward to take on the entire attack line. He moves fast, dodges a bayonet, trips, then a second animal soldier slashes him in the back with a bayonet, and Worf goes down in a SPURT OF RED BLOOD. 60 SPECIAL EFFECT ANGLE ON WESLEY as he FREEZES, shocked. WESLEY Worf! Then, the animal soldier who got Worf, pivots fast, leaps at Wesley... and skewers the boy through the middle. 61 ANGLE ON RIKER Shocked, wildly angered! RIKER NO! DAMN IT, DAMN IT TO HELL... ! He makes the sweeping gesture he's learned. 62 WIDE ANGLE (OPTICAL) as Riker's gesture creates a smaller version of the METALLIC GRID. IT APPEARS between where the bridge Crew has instinctively retreated and the advancing line of animal soldiers, blocking them completely. Picard REACTS strongly to what Riker just did. PICARD Riker, you... you did that?! RIKER And that's not all!! Grimly, angrily, Riker makes the sweeping gesture even more strongly, and the ENTIRE SCENE IS FILLED WITH BLINDING LIGHT. 63 INT. MAIN BRIDGE - TIGHT ANGLE ON WESLEY (OPTICAL) Wesley APPEARS, suddenly feeling at his torso where he was just stabbed. He's no longer hurt. Worf ENTERS SHOT, also whole in body. STAR TREK: Hide And "Q" - 9/25/87 - ACT THREE 36. 64 ANOTHER ANGLE - INCLUDING PICARD AND OTHERS Picard looking at Riker almost disbelievingly. PICARD That grid, their wounds... only the "Q" could do that... He cuts off his words, becoming aware of the formidable expression Riker's face. FADE OUT. END OF ACT THREE STAR TREK: Hide And "Q" - 9/25/87 - ACT FOUR 37. ACT FOUR FADE IN: 65 EXT. SPACE - ENTERPRISE (OPTICAL) with the Disaster Planet in far distance ahead of the starship -- a small ball seen from here. PICARD (V.O.) Captain's log, stardate 41591.4. Twelve minutes out from Quadra Sigma III where the survivors of an underground disaster desperately need our help. Aboard the Enterprise... 66 INT. MAIN BRIDGE Riker, Troi, Data, Geordi, Tasha and Worf at their positions. Riker's features showing the strain of what has happened, he makes little eye-contact with the bridge crew and they appear equally uncertain of how to handle him. PICARD (V.O.) (continuing) ... First Officer William T. Riker needs help nearly as badly. But this is a subject so far out of my experience... out of any human's experience. Riker has made for the captain's Ready Room, EXITS into it. 67 INT. CAPTAIN'S READY ROOM Riker CROSSING IN and coming to a halt in front of Picard's desk. Picard waves him to a seat, almost angrily. PICARD Will, how the hell do I advise you what to do?! Riker looks up sharply at the angry tone... then understands it, nods. STAR TREK: Hide And "Q" - 9/25/87 - ACT FOUR 38. 67 CONTINUED: RIKER No one has ever offered to turn you into "God?" PICARD (snaps) Don't joke with me! What the "Q" has offered you has got to be close to "immortality," Will. They're not lying about controlling space and time; we've seen it in what they can do. But... RIKER You've also seen it in what I can do. Picard leans across his desk toward Riker, intent. PICARD Of all things, that troubles me most, Will. Are you strong enough to refuse to use that power? RIKER Certainly! PICARD No matter how tempted? No matter how difficult "Q" makes it? RIKER (beat; then firmly) You have my word. DATA'S COM VOICE In orbit of Quadra Sigma III, sir. Ready to beam down rescue team to underground emergency area. Picard and Riker get quickly to their feet, EXIT. 68 thru OMITTED 69 STAR TREK: Hide And "Q" - 9/25/87 - ACT FOUR 39. 70 INT. PLANET DISASTER AREA The Away Reserve Team MATERIALIZES. They are in a passageway which has been severely damaged by explosions. Water SPRAYS from the ceiling and is already ankle deep on the floor. Data scans the area with his tricorder. DATA This way. They push ahead. 71 ANOTHER ANGLE - CORRIDOR as they ARRIVE at a doorway. The door has been jammed by the explosion. Data steps over and with his great strength - rips the door off his hinges and clears the opening. The survivors are here. ABOUT A DOZEN of them, huddled together on the far side. Beverly and her teams wade through the water to them. 72 ANGLE ON BEVERLY AND SURVIVORS As she kneels beside an injured WOMAN. BEVERLY You are going to be all right, now. RIKER Where are the others? The Woman shakes her head. WOMAN Gone. It's just us. GEORDI (urgent) Commander! Riker turns. 73 ANGLE ON GEORDI CAMERA MOVES IN TO E.C.U. Geordi is staring at a pile of rubble. GEORDI There's someone there! STAR TREK: Hide And "Q" - 9/25/87 - ACT FOUR 40. 74 thru OMITTED 75 76 ANGLE ON DATA With great strength he moves huge rocks with remarkable rapidity. 77 ANGLE ON GEORDI AND RIKER They stand and look for a beat, then: 78 ANGLE ON DATA as he lifts and carries the limp body of a child. 79 ANOTHER ANGLE Beverly rushes over and while Data holds the child, she quickly examines him. 80 ANGLE ON BEVERLY AND CHILD From her expression it is clear the child is dead. All of her skill will not help. BEVERLY She's dead. If we'd only gotten here a little sooner... ! 81 ANGLE ON RIKER He steps closer. A dead child. A moment of truth. DATA Sir, if you indeed have "Q"'s power... 82 OMITTED 83 ANGLE ON RIKER He is fighting his emotions. STAR TREK: Hide And "Q" - 9/25/87 - ACT FOUR 41. 84 ANGLE INCLUDING BEVERLY Puzzled. BEVERLY I don't understand. Can you bring her back to life? RIKER (long beat) No! 84A EXT. SPACE - ENTERPRISE (OPTICAL) in orbit. 85 thru OMITTED 87 88 INT. MAIN BRIDGE Riker, followed by Data and Geordi, EXIT the turbolift. Riker CROSSES to Picard. Troi is watching Riker with such intensity she doesn't seem to be breathing. RIKER As soon as it's convenient Captain, I insist on a meeting with you and your staff. There is about Riker now a little of the force, the power, the arrogance of "Q". Modified by the man himself -- but he is definitely carrying himself with more presence. 89 ANGLE ON PICARD It's as though he's been expecting this since the incident with "Q". 90 ANOTHER ANGLE RIKER AND PICARD The others are watching this exchange, curious about how Picard will respond. PICARD As soon as we are secure from the rescue operation, we'll meet in the Conference Room. STAR TREK: Hide And "Q" - 9/25/87 - ACT FOUR 42. 90 CONTINUED: RIKER Thank you. Riker turns, stalks to the turbolift. Troi gives him a look of apprehension. PICARD Counselor? TROI Power -- immense. Frightening. I can't read the intent -- but there is terrible anger in him. Off Picard's reaction: FADE OUT. END OF ACT FOUR STAR TREK: Hide And "Q" - 9/25/87 - ACT FIVE 43. ACT FIVE FADE IN: 91 INT. MAIN BRIDGE Riker is already there, sits brooding. Picard ENTERS with Data, Troi, Geordi, Tasha and Worf. As Picard seats himself: PICARD We'll confer on the bridge here if no one... Without looking in that direction, Riker gestures Picard to be silent and, surprised, Picard hesitates during which Riker turns toward the others. RIKER The bridge is fine since I've called the entire staff... PICARD (interrupting) Correction, Number One; knowing the decision you face, I've permitted you this gathering. Riker seems genuinely amused by Picard's correction, as if yielding to a bright but headstrong child. Riker nods, uses a gentle tone. RIKER Of course, Jean-Luc. Riker looks up startled to see Beverly and Wesley ENTER bridge from the turbolift. RIKER (continuing) This meeting isn't for you, Wesley! WESLEY Why not, sir? You helped make me a bridge officer... (corrects self) ... an acting ensign. Looking from one to the other. STAR TREK: Hide And "Q" - 9/25/87 - ACT FOUR 44. 91 CONTINUED: RIKER All right, he stays. The first thing he'll hear is... because I've been given unusual powers, I'm not suddenly a monster. Except for those abilities, and I don't yet know how far they go... I'm the same William T. Riker you've always known. There's a long silence, no one speaking up. RIKER (continuing) Well? Everyone still looks uncomfortable. PICARD Perhaps we're all remembering the old saying... "power corrupts... " RIKER ... "and absolute power corrupts absolutely." Do you believe I haven't thought of that, Jean-Luc? PICARD And have you noticed that you and I are now on a first-name basis? A flicker of surprise on Riker's features indicates he really hasn't. PICARD (continuing) Will, something has happened to you already... RIKER In what way? Haven't you seen how much I've regretted not saving that child? Captain, using the "Q" power to save her might not have been wrong! (to bridge crew) No more than it was wrong to save the rest of you from those soldier things. PICARD Let's keep in mind that particular danger was invented by "Q". STAR TREK: Hide And "Q" - 9/25/87 - ACT FIVE 45. 91 CONTINUED: (2) TROI What we represent to the "Q", Will, are lowly animals, tormented into performing for their amusement... RIKER Actually, they think highly of us, Troi. We have a quality of... of growth which they admire... GEORDI Or fear? PICARD Number One, we've learned that the "Q" power does not admire us... "Q" has muddled your mind somehow. RIKER It's your mind that troubles me, Captain. Don't you understand his incredible gift to me? "Q" (BROTHER) (O.S.) Are these truly your "friends," Brother? 92 ANOTHER ANGLE All whirl toward the VOICE. It comes from a far corner of the bridge where a Figure stands with its back to us. "Q" turns now, revealing himself draped in what is recognizable even in this century as the somber robes of something like the Franciscan Holy Order -- and "Q" is playing it to the hilt with gentle voice, kindliness shining from his face, fingers pointed together as in prayer. He CROSSES IN to stand with Riker, head bowed in humility. "Q" (BROTHER) Let us pray for understanding, for compassion, for... STAR TREK: Hide And "Q" - 9/25/87 - ACT FIVE 46. 92 CONTINUED: PICARD (moving to "Q") Let us do no such damned thing! (pulls at "Q"'s robes) What is this need of yours for costumes? Have you no identity of your own? "Q" (BROTHER) (softly; gently) I come in search of truth. The expression on Riker's face reveals that he is growing somewhat uncomfortable with this continuation of masquerade. PICARD You come in search of what humanity is! "Q" has withdrawn a large cross symbol from his robes as if warding off Picard's words. "Q" (BROTHER) I forgive your blasphemy... PICARD (indicates "Q" to Riker) Can't you see it, Number One? He's nothing but a flim-flam man! That's what he's been since his first appearance at Farpoint! WORF (to Data) Flim-flam? "Q" (BROTHER) (to Picard) You offer Riker jealousy! What I offer him is clearly beyond your comprehension! (turning to the others one by one) How can you claim friendship for Riker while obstructing his way to the greatest adventure ever offered a human?! STAR TREK: Hide And "Q" - 9/25/87 - ACT FIVE 47. 92 CONTINUED: (2) PICARD (alerted) "Obstruct him?" Then it's not yet certain? He's not yet committed? "Q" (BROTHER) (quickly, loudly; overlapping last line) The truly evil part of this is your jealousy, Captain. (to Riker) You love each one of your people! Demonstrate it! You have the power to leave each of them with a gift proving your affection. Riker isn't sure of this. He looks to Picard inquiringly, but speaks a bit thickly at times. RIKER There'd be no... harm, would there, if I, if I gave them something I know they'd like? Picard's next few expressions are a study in a change of decision. His first instinct is to recommend against it... and he almost voices it. But then, Picard begins to suspect that this may, in fact, give Riker a chance to understand the human effect of near-godlike power. "Q" (BROTHER) How touching. A plea to his former captain. (watching Picard) "May I please give some happiness to my friends, sir? Please sir?" PICARD (beat) In fact... I authorize and support that idea, Riker. (to the crew) And please cooperate with him, if you wish. TROI (troubled; cautioning) Are you certain, sir? If... STAR TREK: Hide And "Q" - 9/25/87 - ACT FIVE 48. 92 CONTINUED: (3) PICARD I'm quite certain, Counselor. (to Riker) By all means, demonstrate your gifts of affection. Troi is clearly still nervous about this. Data too. "Q" (BROTHER) (eyeing Picard) Remarkable! He rises now above jealousy. 93 ANGLE EMPHASIZING RIKER turning to his friends. RIKER Don't be frightened. There is no way I could harm any one of you. Shall I guess your dreams? BEVERLY (quickly) Leave now, Wesley! RIKER No! Wesley, I may know best of all. (smiles at Wesley) Our friendship, our long talks... BEVERLY No, please... ! 94 EMPHASIZING WESLEY AND RIKER (OPTICAL) RIKER (to Wesley) Have your favorite wish, my young friend! With a LIGHT FLASH, "WESLEY" becomes a handsome young Starfleet officer of about 25 years. STAR TREK: Hide And "Q" - 9/25/87 - ACT FIVE 49. 95 INTERCUT OTHERS Their REACTIONS. Their surprise is complete. On a very intimate level that concerns themselves, this seems godlike power they are witnessing. Picard, on the other hand, seems to be analyzing, measuring, what is happening. GEORDI Hey Wes, you've grown into a very good looking guy! Tasha gives a "definitely" to that sentiment. Troi is concerned about Beverly who seems stunned as she walks nearer her son, scrutinizing him closely. Data gives Picard a puzzled "what are you up to" look. Picard appears to be holding his breath as he anticipates further developments. 96 ANOTHER ANGLE (OPTICAL) Riker is eyeing Data now. RIKER Data... DATA (forcefully shaking head) No! RIKER It's what you've always wanted, Data to become human! Data almost says "yes," but then: DATA Yes, sir, that is true. But I never wanted to compound one illusion with another. It might seem real to "Q" -- even you, sir... but it would not be so to me. Was it not one of the Captain's favorite authors who wrote, "This above all, to thine own self be true?" (beat) Sorry, Commander, I must decline. Riker turns to Geordi. As he moves to him and removes the VISOR, unobtrusively handing it to Geordi: STAR TREK: Hide And "Q" - 9/25/87 - ACT FIVE 50. 96 CONTINUED: RIKER Well, my friend, I know what you want. Welcome to the wonderful world of vision. Geordi looks around in awe. His eyes come to rest on Tasha. GEORDI You're as beautiful as I imagined, and more. RIKER Then we can throw the VISOR away? Geordi slowly replaces the VISOR over his eyes. GEORDI I think not, sir. The price is a little high for me. I don't like who I would have to thank. I can still steer the ship with this. 97 ANGLE EMPHASIZING WESLEY AND BEVERLY as Beverly appraises the new form of her son. BEVERLY If you accept this new you, Wesley, you'll lose wonderful times, so many important experiences... 98 EMPHASIZING WORF (OPTICAL) as Riker moves to inspect him in turn. RIKER And Worf, who wants nothing... WORF Except honor and my duty fulfilled. RIKER (interrupting) Proud warrior Worf, without a single tie to his own kind... STAR TREK: Hide And "Q" - 9/25/87 - ACT FIVE 51. 98 CONTINUED: In a LIGHT FLASH, it's not Worf who changes but someone else who APPEARS at his feet -- a Klingon warrioress. Her eyes flash as she looks up at her man Worf, an arm encircles him at the knees -- her other arm holds a Klingon weapon -- a kligat -- as she looks around, sees nothing but sliens. Then moving with surprising speed, she comes to her feet and lashes out with her weapon at Troi, who is the person nearest. Worf moves quickly too, takes the blow intended for Troi, SLAMS the warrioress down. In Klingon tradition, she flattens herself to the floor and crawls, SNARLING to embrace Worf's feet. WORF (whirling to Riker) No! She is from a world now alien to me. I have no place in my life for this now! 99 ANGLE ON WESLEY moving to Riker. His voice is that of an adult male. WESLEY Mister Riker... (shakes head) ... it's too soon for this... RIKER If it's because your mother objects... WESLEY No, I'd just like to get there on my own. Honest! Picard is now looking very pleased... both with himself for estimating this correctly, and with his people for their common sense. Riker sees and understands. RIKER How did you know, sir? I feel like such... such an idiot! PICARD Quite right, you should! RIKER But it was... such a pleasure to have been able to do those things. STAR TREK: Hide And "Q" - 9/25/87 - ACT FIVE 52. 99 CONTINUED: As "Q" PASSES, Picard blocks his path. PICARD It's all over "Q". You have no further business here. "Q" (BROTHER) Human, you have just destroyed yourself... ! PICARD But only after you've paid off your wager, "Q". "Q" (BROTHER) I recall no wager! PICARD I'm sure your fellow "Q" remember you agreed to never trouble our species again. Just as they're aware you've failed to tempt a human to join you. So, "Q", I strongly suspect you have some explaining of your own to do... A sudden MAJOR FLASH OF BRILLIANT LIGHT... wiping out the entire SCENE for a moment. Then WE SEE REVEALED the bridge crew exactly as we saw them when this ACT began. "Q" is no longer there -- Wesley is fifteen again -- Worf is without his warrioress -- Tasha is the familiar security chief. And all are at their duty positions, with Wesley assisting Data at Ops, Beverly standing near Picard. 100 ANOTHER ANGLE EMPHASIZING PICARD Everyone is speechless. Then, Picard breaks the silence. PICARD Extraordinary! "Q" sought to discover the distinguishing characteristic of humanity and never learned what Coleridge said: "It must be the possession of a soul within us that makes the difference." GEORDI Sir... we show the same "hole" in time again. Our instruments say we've just now beamed up from our rescue mission. STAR TREK: Hide And "Q" - 9/25/87 - ACT FIVE 53. 100 CONTINUED: DATA How can the "Q" handle time and space so well, and us so badly? PICARD Perhaps we'll discover some day that time and space are simpler than the human equation. (toward Riker) No coordinates laid in, Number One? RIKER Uh... yes, sir. (toward Helm) You have my coordinates, Mister La Forge. Geordi gives Wesley a look, and a nod. Wesley calls it out eagerly. WESLEY Zero-zero-eight, Mark, three-three-nine, sir. PICARD (nods) Engage! 101 EXT. SPACE - ENTERPRISE (OPTICAL) as it MOVES AWAY from us. FADE OUT. END OF ACT FIVE THE END STAR TREK: THE NEXT GENERATION "Too Short A Season" #40271-112 Story by Michael Michaelian Teleplay by Michael Michaelian and D. C. Fontana Directed by Rob Bowman Copyright 1987 Paramount Pictures Corporation. All Rights Reserved. This script is not for publication or reproduction. No one is authorized to dispose of same. If lost or destroyed, please notify the Script Department. REV. FINAL DRAFT OCTOBER 6, 1987 STAR TREK: "Too Short... " - 10/6/87 - CAST STAR TREK: THE NEXT GENERATION "Too Short A Season" CAST PICARD ADMIRAL MARK JAMESON RIKER ANNE JAMESON DATA JAMESON (BOY) TROI KARNAS BEVERLY BEVERLY TASHA TASHA GEORDI Non-Speaking Roles: WORF TRANSPORTER CHIEF MORDANITE SOLDIERS OLD MORDANITE VETERANS ENTERPRISE CREW MEMBERS STAR TREK: "Too Short... " - 10/6/87 - SETS STAR TREK: THE NEXT GENERATION "Too Short A Season" SETS INTERIORS EXTERIORS USS ENTERPRISE USS ENTERPRISE MAIN BRIDGE IN SPACE TRANSPORTER ROOM ORBITING PERSEPHONE V SICKBAY ORBITING MORDAN IV CONFERENCE LOUNGE PICARD'S READY ROOM JAMESON QUARTERS CRUSHER'S OFFICE OBSERVATION LOUNGE MORDAN TUNNEL #1 TUNNEL #2 TUNNEL #3 KARNAS' OFFICE STAR TREK: "Too Short... " - 10/6/87 - TEASER 1. STAR TREK: THE NEXT GENERATION "Too Short A Season" TEASER FADE IN: 1 EXT. SPACE - ENTERPRISE IN ORBIT (OPTICAL) The great ship circles a reddish planet. Behind both is the backdrop of a sparkling splash of stars against black space. PICARD (V. O.) Captain's log, stardate 41309.5. We are in orbit around Persephone V where I have been sent to confer with Admiral Mark Jameson in regard to an extraordinary situation.... 2 INT. MAIN BRIDGE - ANGLE ON PICARD All other bridge personnel are in place at their usual stations. PICARD Starfleet received this subspace transmission two days ago, Admiral. 3 ANGLE ON MAIN VIEWSCREEN (OPTICAL) REVEALING CLOSE UP OF ADMIRAL MARK JAMESON. The Admiral is a man of eighty, still crusty and alert, still a Starfleet warhorse. Jameson nods briskly as: JAMESON Let's see it, Captain. 4 ANGLE TOWARD COMMAND AREA PICARD On screen and relay to the admiral, Mister Data. Data taps his console quickly and: STAR TREK: "Too Short... " - 10/6/87 - TEASER 2. 5 CLOSE ON MAIN VIEWSCREEN (OPTICAL) The Screen FLASHES UP a sharp color picture of KARNAS in his OFFICE. There is a desk, several chairs. The wall behind the desk is barren, save for a set of three weapons mounted on it. Two of the weapons are phaser-like, but of old design and of different sizes. One of the weapons is a short pole about two inches in diameter with a wicked-looking blade on either end. Karnas sits at the desk, facing INTO CAMERA. He is in his sixties, with a formal, military bearing, a man with a good many worry lines marking his face, a man without many smiles. KARNAS I am Karnas, governor of Mordan IV. A dissident terrorist group has taken Federation Ambassador Hawkins and his staff hostage. They will not discuss terms with me. This is a crisis I cannot resolve without assistance. The terrorists are demanding a Federation negotiator. 6 CLOSE TWO - PICARD AND RIKER studying the screen as Karnas speaks. 7 ANGLE ON MAIN VIEWSCREEN (OPTICAL) KARNAS I feel there is only one negotiator with the skills and understanding to resolve this situation. The hostages' lives will depend on Starfleet delivering this man to Mordan. Commander Mark Jameson. (corrects himself) Admiral Jameson. The terrorists have given you six Earth days to arrive here -- or the hostages will die. Please...hurry. Abruptly, the Screen goes BLANK. A star b.g. appears. It, in turn, is replaced by the IMAGE OF JAMESON. STAR TREK: "Too Short... " - 10/6/87 - TEASER 3. 8 ANGLE ON PICARD PICARD Starfleet doesn't understand how or why this situation developed. Mordan IV has finally gained peace after decades of civil war -- 9 INTERCUT JAMESON ON MAIN VIEWSCREEN WITH PICARD AS NEEDED (OPTICAL) JAMESON Forty years of civil war, Captain. PICARD Yes, sir. Karnas was largely responsible for the planet's unification and peace. Why should he suddenly be unable to deal with rebellious factions? Jameson leans back in his chair, looking inward. JAMESON Forty-five years ago I negotiated a hostage situation on Mordan. Karnas was a young man then.... (light chuckle) ... but so was I. He seems to feel I can handle the situation again. Obviously Starfleet feels that way too, or you wouldn't be here. PICARD (nods) I'm detailed to take you to Mordan IV as soon as you can be ready, Admiral. 10 ANGLE ON MAIN VIEWSCREEN (OPTICAL) JAMESON My wife and I will beam aboard at 1500 hours, Captain. Be prepared to depart this starbase and proceed immediately to Mordan IV. Acknowledge. STAR TREK: "Too Short... " - 10/6/87 - TEASER 4. 11 ANGLE ON COMMAND AREA PICARD Received and acknowledged, sir. Picard out. TROI Nearly 1500 now, sir. PICARD (rising) Well, Number One. Why don't we go and welcome the admiral aboard? 12 INT. TRANSPORTER ROOM - ANGLE ON TRANSPORTER CHIEF, PICARD AND RIKER Picard and Riker ENTER, glancing toward the platform. RIKER Admiral Jameson, sir. Have you met him before? PICARD Your hero, Number One? RIKER Not only mine. My father served on the Falcon with him. I grew up on stories about Mark Jameson. PICARD (nods) I've heard all the legends about him, too. Not only the Falcon's missions and the Mordan rescue, but the Gettysburg's explorations, his command of the old Pegasus in the Klingon conflicts.... 13 ANGLE AT TRANSPORTER Two Figures are BEGINNING TO MATERIALIZE on the pads. As the TRANSPORTER EFFECT AND SOUND DIE DOWN Jameson and his wife, ANNE, FULLY MATERIALIZED. Jameson appears as he did on the Main Viewscreen -- except WE NOW SEE he has been confined to a "physical support chair," which greatly inhibits the physical movements of his lower body. The chair is enclosed around his hips and legs, hiding them from our view. STAR TREK: "Too Short... " - 10/6/87 - TEASER 5. 13 CONTINUED: Anne Jameson is seventy, slim, one of those especially graced women whose face still shows the looks that made her a beautiful young woman. Picard and Riker exchange a quick glance; the admiral's physical condition is a surprise. Then they move forward as: PICARD Welcome aboard, Admiral. (indicating Riker) My executive officer, Commander William Riker. RIKER My pleasure, sir. (a nod to Anne) Ma'am. JAMESON My wife, Anne. Anne smiles graciously at Picard and Riker. JAMESON Captain, there are certain details of this mission that you should understand before we begin. PICARD Is this the place to be discussing them, sir? JAMESON Why not? You and your first officer are both here. PICARD Yes, sir. JAMESON Captain, I am not simply an advisor. On any assignment I accompany, Starfleet has designated me Senior Mission Officer. I control the Away Team and all its actions. Is that understood? Picard and Riker exchange a surprised look. STAR TREK: "Too Short... " - 10/6/87 - TEASER 6. 14 CLOSE ON JAMESON He seems quite pleased with himself -- but also concerned for Picard's feelings. JAMESON Of course, Captain, you will command the ship -- but the mission is mine. I trust you are in complete agreement. 15 ON PICARD AND RIKER nonplussed -- but what can Picard do? He puts the best face on it he can and manages another smile. PICARD Yes, sir. Of course. FADE OUT: END OF TEASER STAR TREK: "Too Short... " - 10/6/87 - ACT ONE 7. ACT ONE FADE IN: 16 EXT. SPACE - THE ENTERPRISE (OPTICAL) underway at warp speed, flashing by on her urgent mission. 17 INT. MAIN BRIDGE - ANGLE TOWARD GEORDI AND DATA Geordi sees something on his console, turns in his chair toward Picard. GEORDI Response to our message coming in from Mordan, sir. PICARD Put it on the screen, Mister Data. Data nods and tabs the panel quickly. 18 ANGLE ON COMMAND AREA Picard, Riker and Troi are in their usual positions, with Jameson installed in his support chair on Riker's right. They all respond with interest as: KARNAS (V.O.) (filtered) Mordan IV to Enterprise. This is Karnas. I will speak to the captain. PICARD I am Captain Picard, in command of the Enterprise. 19 ON MAIN VIEWSCREEN (OPTICAL) (KARNAS'S OFFICE) Karnas is seen seated behind his desk. KARNAS (abrupt, curt) Is Admiral Jameson on board? STAR TREK: "Too Short... " - 10/6/87 - ACT ONE 8. 20 ANGLE AT COMMAND AREA The others glance over at Jameson, who sits up straighter in his chair. PICARD (nods toward Jameson) He is here, beside my first officer. Do you wish to speak to him now? 21 ANGLE ON MAIN VIEWSCREEN (OPTICAL) Karnas nods and squints INTO CAMERA as: KARNAS So, Jameson. (squints again) I see time has not been kind. 22 WIDER - INCLUDING TROI AND JAMESON JAMESON It seldom is, Karnas. However, we could save a good deal of it now if you'll outline the terrorists' demands.... Troi is shifting her attention between Jameson and Karnas (on the screen), taking in the speech and body nuances of both men. 22A ANGLE ON MAIN VIEWSCREEN (OPTICAL) KARNAS They insist all discussions will take place here... on Mordan. They refuse to speak to me -- only to you. JAMESON (V.O.) They could relay their terms on your communications channels.... STAR TREK: "Too Short... " - 10/6/87 - ACT ONE 9. 22A CONTINUED: KARNAS (shakes head) They insist on speaking face to face when you arrive. They say they will brook no excuses. If there are any offered, your ambassador and his people will die. Unpleasantly. I believe them -- and so should you, Admiral. JAMESON (pause, then:) Tell them I accept the conditions of negotiation. KARNAS I will do so immediately. Karnas out. The IMAGE CUTS OUT, and is replaced by WARP STARS. 24 ANGLE TOWARD COMMAND AREA - EMPHASIZING PICARD AND JAMESON Jameson navigates his chair a little forward as: RIKER For a man in his position, Karnas doesn't seem to know much about the situation. JAMESON Wrong, Number One. He told me the terrorists are desperate enough to kill if they're crossed. They're willing to talk one on one, but not to him. PICARD (to Troi) Counselor? TROI From his body language as well as his words and tone... I'd judge that what Karnas said was honest, but I sensed a holding back. STAR TREK: "Too Short... " - 10/6/87 - ACT ONE 10. 24 CONTINUED: PICARD Perhaps he knows more about the terrorists than he is willing to admit. JAMESON Possible, but I suspect it's closer to the mark if we said he doesn't want to admit failure of his own efforts to negotiate. He is a proud man. TROI That could be, sir. Karnas has established himself as a powerful man on Mordan. Suddenly -- in this situation -- his power is useless. Interrupted by: BEVERLY'S COM VOICE Sickbay to bridge. I am ready for Admiral Jameson now. PICARD He is on his way, Doctor. JAMESON On my way to what, Captain? PICARD Just a routine medical checkup. Ship's regulations. 25 CLOSE ON JAMESON His expression flickers just slightly, but he nods toward Picard, acquiescing. 26 ANGLE ON TROI watching Jameson. She frowns as she senses something behind Jameson's apparent agreement. STAR TREK: "Too Short... " - 10/6/87 - ACT ONE 11. 27 INT. SICKBAY - CLOSE ON BEVERLY BEVERLY Pardon me, sir, but refusing a simple medical check -- CAMERA PULLS BACK TO INCLUDE JAMESON. JAMESON I'm sorry, Doctor, but it isn't necessary. (hands her a tiny disk) The chief medical officer on Starbase 45 ran a complete battery of tests on me two days ago. Semi-annual exam. You'll find I've been a victim of Iverson's Disease for five years. My "case," as you doctors like to call it, is now chronic. In another year, it will undoubtedly progress to terminal. BEVERLY I'm sorry -- JAMESON No need. I do not accept the prognosis, Doctor. But right now, I don't have time to waste, and there's no point in you wasting your time either. (indicates disk) There's your information. Beverly considers only briefly. Commanders don't win arguments with admirals. BEVERLY Thank you, Admiral. I'll look them over. 28 EXT. SPACE - ENTERPRISE (OPTICAL) traveling at warp speed, as before. 29 INT. CAPTAIN'S READY ROOM - WIDE SHOT Gathered around the desk are Picard, Riker, Data, Troi and Jameson. STAR TREK: "Too Short... " - 10/6/87 - ACT ONE 12. 29 CONTINUED: RIKER What I don't understand, sir, is how Karnas knew you were still... available. JAMESON Still alive, you mean. RIKER (unembarrassed) So far as Karnas knew, you might have been dead, sir. JAMESON Quite right, Commander. But I'm not, and I imagine Ambassador Hawkins told him that. I briefed the ambassador about Mordan before he left to take up residence. PICARD All right. Karnas has a problem he feels you can handle. What can the terrorists want that Karnas can't or won't give them? DATA Mordan has had peace for five years. They have finally come to a state of productivity that satisfies their planetary needs, but no more than that. Perhaps the dissidents feel the Federation can provide more -- technology, science, agricultural assistance.... JAMESON I've negotiated many a treaty on many planets, Picard. I've found that peace -- or the appearance of it -- is often a prelude to war. TROI Admiral are you suggesting the terrorists want arms and weapons? STAR TREK: "Too Short... " - 10/6/87 - ACT ONE 13. 29 CONTINUED: (2) JAMESON They may. I am suggesting Karnas is the last man to give them such weapons. PICARD Karnas worked and fought for years to achieve peace. JAMESON And he's not likely to throw it away... even for the lives of the hostages. TROI I see. You believe Karnas won't negotiate on that point, so the terrorists demanded an outside negotiator. JAMESON I know Karnas. He is a warrior... he lives for challenge. These people have insulted his honor by taking the embassy staff hostage. I'll negotiate -- but I'll have to be very careful in handling Karnas. He'll want revenge for that insult. He looks around at them challengingly, daring them to debate it. No one cares to argue with the expert, but Troi still studies Jameson with particular interest. 30 INT. JAMESON QUARTERS - ANNE AND JAMESON Anne is straightening out the final details of their quarters, putting away clothing items, etc. As Jameson ROLLS IN, seated in the support chair: ANNE (mildly teasing) ... You're late. Couldn't get away from the bridge? JAMESON Didn't want to. It feels good to be on one again. STAR TREK: "Too Short... " - 10/6/87 - ACT ONE 14. 30 CONTINUED: ANNE (going to him) I'm glad, Mark. (touches chair) Do you want me to help you up? Jameson waves her off, opens the front of the chair, and lifts himself out of it into a regular chair. Anne stares at him, somewhat surprised. ANNE You're stronger today... JAMESON I'm fine. Feel like a kid again. Anne touches his face gently, smiling at him. Sure -- there are the good days. She pecks him on the cheek, turns away to put away some final item. ANNE This ship is magnificent. Pity we didn't have them twenty, thirty years ago. We could have been together almost all of your career. 31 CLOSE ON JAMESON as her voice comes OVER, we see he is beginning to feel pain... gradually at first, and then getting worse... and worse. ANNE (V.O.) It's so good to be able to be with you now. 32 TWO SHOT A GASP from Jameson as he can no longer contain the pain. Anne swings around sharply, hurries to him. ANNE Mark! I'll call Sickbay -- His hand shoots out and traps her wrist, nailing her in place. STAR TREK: "Too Short... " - 10/6/87 - ACT ONE 15. 32 CONTINUED: JAMESON No! There's no need. It's happened before -- ANNE When? You haven't said anything -- JAMESON It'll pass... give me a moment.... She watches him, concerned, caring. And the pain does die away from his face, loosening its grip. His hand on her arm loosens, too; and she absently rubs her wrist where his fingers dug in and left deep red marks. She's more worried about him than herself. JAMESON (continuing) See... I'm better. It's going away. ANNE What is it? Do the doctors know? JAMESON Just body changes... My last checkup, they said I'd have to expect it. He notices she is still rubbing her arm, and he reaches out to touch her gently. ANNE You're sure? Don't lie to me. JAMESON I'm sure. He holds out his arms, and she bends into his embrace. They hold each other very tightly -- old lovers still in love. 33 INT. CAPTAIN'S READY ROOM - TWO SHOT - BEVERLY AND PICARD BEVERLY ... All the medical information the admiral provided is satisfactory, sir.... STAR TREK: "Too Short... " - 10/6/87 - ACT ONE 16. 33 CONTINUED: PICARD (it's routine) Excellent, Doctor -- BEVERLY (overriding) Except for one thing. Picard gives her an inquiring look and waits for it. BEVERLY (continuing) The test results he gave me aren't two days old, they're two months old. The medical file coder always includes the date as part of the file number. He lied to me, sir -- and I don't know why. PICARD He is eighty years old, Doctor. For some, the memory begins to fail.... BEVERLY He suffers from Iverson's Disease, sir. It affects the body -- not the mind. I just have a gut feeling he's hiding something. PICARD I'd expect that observation from Counselor Troi, but -- (on her sharp look) I respect your opinion, Doctor. And I'll want you on the bridge for the next day or so. The admiral has to remain in the best of health for these negotiations. He might require your services. The level look he exchanges with her tells her a lot. Picard respects her judgment -- and he's uneasy about the situation. She nods to him, she'll go with it. 34 EXT. SPACE - ENTERPRISE (OPTICAL) The great ship travels by at warp speed. STAR TREK: "Too Short... " - 10/6/87 - ACT ONE 17. 34 CONTINUED: PICARD (V.O.) Captain's personal log... I am puzzled and somewhat concerned by the dating error Admiral Jameson made on his medical records. 35 INT. MAIN BRIDGE - ANGLE ON COMMAND AREA All regulars at their stations, Jameson in the support chair surveying information at Science Station 2, near Worf. Beverly is seated on the guest bench near Troi. PICARD (rises, turns to Jameson) Admiral, we're approaching the Idini Star Cluster. Would you like to take the Conn as we make transit? 36 ANGLE ON JAMESON He turns slightly in the chair and smiles at Picard. JAMESON Thank you, Captain. I would. And then he swings away the enclosing front section of the support chair, rises and walks toward the ramp. 37 INTERCUT REACTIONS - ALL KEY BRIDGE PERSONNEL staring at Jameson as he moves a little unsteadily but entirely on his own down the ramp. Halfway down, he stumbles slightly, and Riker reaches out a hand to him. Jameson waves him away, regains his balance and MOVES ACROSS to Picard. 38 ANGLE ON BEVERLY She is frowning deeply, not liking what she sees. 39 AT THE COMMAND CHAIR Picard reins in his surprise, quickly collects himself. Jameson is grinning, pleased with his feat. STAR TREK: "Too Short... " - 10/6/87 - ACT ONE 18. 39 CONTINUED: PICARD Well, Admiral. Quite a little surprise you've pulled on us. BEVERLY Yes. Quite. Jameson shoots a look at Beverly, nods to her. JAMESON Neglected to mention... I began some new therapy before I left. Seems to be working. I haven't felt this good since the last time I was in space. The Gettysburg. All I needed to get me out of that chair was the thought of walking the decks in command of a starship again. Beverly stares at him, impassive -- and not buying it. PICARD Admiral... you only have the Conn temporarily. JAMESON (laughs lightly) Figure of speech. Of course she's your ship. (takes the chair) I'll just keep an eye on her for a while. As he continues to smile genially at Picard: FADE OUT: END OF ACT ONE STAR TREK: "Too Short... " - 10/6/87 - ACT TWO 19. ACT TWO FADE IN: 40 EXT. SPACE - ENTERPRISE (OPTICAL) traveling at warp speed. 41 INT. CAPTAIN'S READY ROOM - PICARD, BEVERLY Picard has led the doctor into the room; Beverly is still disturbed by what has happened. As the door closes behind them, Picard turns to face her. PICARD The admiral displayed a remarkable improvement out there, wouldn't you say? BEVERLY Captain, no one recovers from Iverson's Disease. There is no known cure, and there are no cases where it has gone into remission. I haven't heard of any new therapy that would have results like this. PICARD Then how do you account for it? BEVERLY I can't. All I can tell you is that the admiral has been confined to the support chair for four years by the effects of Iverson's. By all the medical facts we know, he should never have walked again. Picard considers that, finally looks up at her. PICARD I'd like you to look into it, Doctor. Thoroughly. BEVERLY Yes, sir. STAR TREK: "Too Short... " - 10/6/87 - ACT TWO 20. 42 EXT. SPACE - THE ENTERPRISE (OPTICAL) traveling at high warp. 43 INT. JAMESON QUARTERS - ANGLE ON JAMESON He is seated at a desk, studying a personal Viewer. NOTE: The light is dim here, turned down so he can see the screen better. 44 CLOSE ON VIEWER (OPTICAL) Jameson is reviewing the Karnas message seen in the Teaser. KARNAS The terrorists have given you six Earth days to bring him here -- or the hostages will die. Please...hurry. 45 WIDER ANGLE - INCLUDING ANNE (Viewer o.s.) She comes into the main room from the bedroom area as: ANNE I don't know how much more information you think you can get out of that tape. He rises, walks easily toward her, still in DIM LIGHT. Anne stops, staring at him. ANNE Mark... ? My God... what happened? JAMESON It's a new therapy I've been taking. It's -- working, Anne. ANNE (runs to him) Oh, Mark! He puts his arms around her, gives her a warm kiss. In fact, as she responds, his kiss gets warmer. His hands move toward a more intimate position. Anne pulls back slightly, surprised by the sudden sensuality from him. STAR TREK: "Too Short... " - 10/6/87 - ACT TWO 21. 45 CONTINUED: ANNE Mark... ? JAMESON I told you I just needed to get back into space again. ANNE (studies him) You're really looking much better.... JAMESON It's the new treatment. 46 EMPHASIZING ANNE She is frowning a little. ANNE No... come here.... JAMESON (makes another grab for her) I hope you're heading for the bedroom. ANNE Stop it, Mark. She takes his hand, leads him into the brighter area of the room where a mirror hangs on the wall. As he COMES INTO BRIGHTER LIGHT, WE SEE far more changes about him than just the smoother walk. His hair has darkened, lost some of the gray. Some of the deep wrinkles in his face have softened. Anne moves Jameson in front of the mirror and, in this brighter light, she stares at him in shock. ANNE Mark, you look like you did twenty years ago. JAMESON (laughs) You're flattering me. STAR TREK: "Too Short... " - 10/6/87 - ACT TWO 22. 47 TWO SHOT Anne looks up at him, frightened and angry. ANNE Mark, what the hell is going on? JAMESON I don't know what -- He suddenly breaks off, nearly falls to the floor, wracked with intense pain. As an anguished CRY escapes him, Anne reaches out to him. ANNE Mark! Jameson goes to his knees, then collapses on his side. Anne runs to the companel and activates it, near panic. ANNE (continuing) Sickbay! Medical emergency in the admiral's quarters! Anne looks back at Jameson, who is curled into an almost fetal position on the floor, still wracked with intense pain. As he CRIES OUT AGAIN: 48 INT. CRUSHER'S OFFICE - BEVERLY AND PICARD The Captain is looking over her shoulder at the Viewer (o.s.). It is flashing up confirming information as she talks: BEVERLY (frowning) I've found traces of chemical substances in his blood and tissue samples, but none of them are in our pharmacopeia. We're still working on alien references to substances like these. All I can say is that he ingested something that's strongly affecting his body. PICARD Specifics, Doctor. STAR TREK: "Too Short... " - 10/6/87 - ACT TWO 23. 48 CONTINUED: BEVERLY Captain, there are so many things going on here, I can't be positive without a lot more tests. PICARD Give me what you have now. BEVERLY His red cell count is running riot. Then there's the cellular structure of his body tissue. It's -- changing. I can't even begin on that until I see what it's changing to. His DNA is all skewed. I don't know how it's possible, but he even looks younger. And Captain... there is absolutely no sign of Iverson's Disease. PICARD You said there is no cure for Iverson's. BEVERLY (shakes head) None we know of. Whatever else these substances are doing to his body, at least they've done that for him. But how or why, I can't say on the information I have now. PICARD Get me some answers, Doctor. As soon as possible. BEVERLY Yes, sir. Picard STRIDES OUT, and Beverly looks after him, crinkles her nose slightly. Easy for him to say. 49 INT. JAMESONS' QUARTERS - ANGLE AT THE DOOR as Picard ENTERS. Anne comes to meet him, concerned and frightened -- more than we'd expect her to be. ANNE Captain.... STAR TREK: "Too Short... " - 10/6/87 - ACT TWO 24. 49 CONTINUED: PICARD There are some questions I have to ask the admiral, Mrs. Jameson. JAMESON (O.S.) Ask away. There's nothing to hide now. Picard looks o.s. at the man standing in the doorway to the bedroom -- and goes rigid. 50 CLOSE ON JAMESON He now looks like a man in his fifties -- vital, strong, still ready to take on the world. 51 WIDER - TO INCLUDE PICARD, ANNE PICARD (recovers himself) Admiral -- in addition to your rank, you are a particularly valuable commodity just now. Starfleet has a right to some answers. Jameson shrugs, gestures toward a group of chairs. Picard and Anne follow him there as: JAMESON I'd been planning this for a long time -- ever since I learned I had Iverson's Disease. Since it put me in that chair. From her expression, this is news to Anne. ANNE What did you do, Mark? 52 CLOSER ON THE GROUP as they sit. STAR TREK: "Too Short... " - 10/6/87 - ACT TWO 25. 52 CONTINUED: JAMESON There's a planet in the Cerberus system -- Cerberus II -- they say the natives have a process that rejuvenates the body... gives you your youth back. PICARD I've heard that story, too. It's a myth. JAMESON It's true, Picard. I'm the living proof. Oh, it's dangerous -- the mortality rate is high -- and it's painful. (ruefully) Very painful. Aliens are seldom allowed to obtain the process, but I managed it. I negotiated a treaty for Cerberus II several years ago, and they felt obligated to honor my request for the process. PICARD (studies him) Obviously it works rapidly. How does it work? JAMESON The herb and drug combinations are self-administered... slowly, over a period of two years. Every response is different, depending on a being's DNA. (to Anne) I got enough for both of us, Anne -- but I had to test it on myself first. I couldn't risk you. If I died... well, I was half a man anyway, to what did it matter... ? ANNE It would matter to me. STAR TREK: "Too Short... " - 10/6/87 - ACT TWO 26. 52 CONTINUED: (2) JAMESON But I was starting to change, Anne. It was almost undetectable, but the improvement was there. Then this hostage situation came up, and I knew I'd have to be at my peak to deal with it. I didn't have time to wait for the drugs to work naturally -- PICARD You took the whole dose. JAMESON I took both of them. And look at me! Annie, look at me. I'm strong, alert, I'm fit. I'm fitter than you are, Picard. And I'm getting younger! PICARD The only question I have, Admiral, is why you felt it necessary to be young to negotiate the hostage release. Surely Karnas requested you because of your age and experience. Jameson stares at him -- then glances away, his face flushing. He doesn't have an answer. Picard sighs, rises. PICARD I'll be on the bridge, Admiral, if you wish to talk further. Picard EXITS. 53 CLOSE ON ANNE ANNE Why didn't you tell me, Mark? We've always been honest with each other -- until now. CAMERA ANGLE WIDENS TO INCLUDE JAMESON as he faces her bitter anger. The visible difference in their ages is very apparent here. JAMESON Annie, I did it for us. STAR TREK: "Too Short... " - 10/6/87 - ACT TWO 27. 53 CONTINUED: ANNE I'm sure you believed that -- until you had a chance to head up a mission... to command again. Then you just upended the bottle -- or whatever it was -- and damn all. Did you think about me at all? JAMESON I got enough of the dosage for both of us.... ANNE But you never asked if I wanted it. It's just like you, Mark, to assume that what you felt was right was the only answer. JAMESON It was the right answer for me. It was killing you, having to take care of an invalid. What good was I to you? Annie -- we can be together again.... He takes her in his arms, tries to kiss her passionately. She exerts a strong, angry effort and pushes him away. ANNE Let me go! JAMESON I can get another supply of the drug for you -- Anne SOBS IN ANGER -- he just doesn't get it -- and she runs into the bedroom. The door slides closed behind her. Jameson is angry at her behavior. He slaps his open palm on a piece of nearby furniture, heads rapidly for the door. 54 INT. CONFERENCE LOUNGE - ANGLE ON JAMESON He is seated at the table in front of a small Viewer. There is no one else in the room. The lights are DIMMED DOWN, and Jameson's face is largely in shadow. STAR TREK: "Too Short... " - 10/6/87 - ACT TWO 28. 54 CONTINUED: JAMESON Commander Data, I wish to open a communication frequency to Karnas. 55 INT. MAIN BRIDGE - ANGLE ON PICARD AND DATA Picard sits up straight as: DATA Aye, sir. PICARD A moment, Mister Data. Admiral, this is Picard. May I know the purpose of this communication? 56 INT. CONFERENCE LOUNGE - ON JAMESON JAMESON Karnas must have tried to negotiate with the terrorists before he was forced to call on me. I want all the information he has access to. 57 INTERCUT BETWEEN PICARD ON BRIDGE AND JAMESON AS NEEDED PICARD You said he was a proud man... probably sensitive about his failure to deal with the situation. Is it wise to press him on this? JAMESON I'm the negotiator, Picard. Karnas will have to cooperate with me and the terrorists, and damn his sensitivities. PICARD Then I suggest a secured channel, Admiral. STAR TREK: "Too Short... " - 10/6/87 - ACT TWO 29. 57 CONTINUED: JAMESON (beat, then:) A sensible precaution, Picard. Make it so. Picard nods to Data, who tabs his console as: DATA Aye, sir. Frequency open and secured. 58 INT. CONFERENCE ROOM - ON JAMESON NOTE: The LIGHTS in the room REMAIN DIM; Jameson is careful to remain back away from the light, so his face is in shadow and cannot be clearly seen. JAMESON (to Viewer) Karnas. 59 ANGLE ON VIEWER (OPTICAL) WE SEE Karnas, again in his office. His attitude is firm, formal, but with a touch of belligerence. KARNAS What is it you want, Admiral? 60 INTERCUT CLOSE ON JAMESON AND KARNAS ON VIEWER AS NEEDED. (OPTICAL) JAMESON We're on a secured channel, Karnas. You can talk freely. Who's behind this thing? You said dissidents. KARNAS (carefully) Yes... political opponents who feel the Federation will disavow me as governor if they stir up enough trouble on Mordan. JAMESON Then who is it? Ardan? Gilnor? STAR TREK: "Too Short... " - 10/6/87 - ACT TWO 30. 60 CONTINUED: KARNAS They're dead, Jameson. A long time now. For a long time I thought you were dead, too. JAMESON I almost died a couple of times on missions, but I always made it through somehow. KARNAS (coldly) Yes. Now you're coming back to Mordan -- to negotiate for hostages again. It's almost as though the forty-five years between never happened.... Jameson stiffens and stares at the image on the viewer, suddenly realizing what this is about. JAMESON You've never forgiven me. KARNAS Should I have -- after the legacy of war you left us in your last "negotiation?" JAMESON There are no dissidents, are there? No terrorists. You have the hostages. KARNAS And if I have? You're coming to Mordan, Jameson. You're going to negotiate for their lives, and I'm going to ask a very high price for them. JAMESON What if I refuse? KARNAS Then the hostages will die. You've seen how my executioners work. They are still as efficient as they were... perhaps even more skilled now. You'll come -- even if you don't have much honor left. Karnas out. The Viewer GOES BLANK. STAR TREK: "Too Short... " - 10/6/87 - ACT TWO 31. 61 CLOSE ON JAMESON angry, determined now on a course of action. 62 EXT. SPACE - THE ENTERPRISE (OPTICAL) traveling as before at high warp speed. 63 INT. MAIN BRIDGE - FULL SHOT All personnel in their accustomed stations. Jameson ENTERS from the Conference Lounge doors, CROSSING to Picard as: JAMESON Are we still on schedule to arrive at Mordan in thirty-eight hours? GEORDI Yes, sir. We're at warp four now. JAMESON Picard, I want a jump to warp eight so we arrive ahead of our announced ETA. It'll throw Karnas off balance, and we can catch him before he's ready. PICARD Ready for exactly what, Admiral? JAMESON I believe Karnas is planning something new... something that will directly endanger the hostages' lives. PICARD What happened in your communication to bring you to that conclusion? It seems a big jump.... JAMESON I'm not at liberty to say, Picard, but negotiation is not the answer or the issue here. The hostages' lives are at stake. STAR TREK: "Too Short... " - 10/6/87 - ACT TWO 32. 63 CONTINUED: PICARD I agree the most important thing is saving the lives of the hostages... JAMESON And you agree with that, too, Riker? RIKER I do, sir. JAMESON Good. Because I plan to personally lead an away team on an armed rescue mission to get them out of there. On Picard and Riker's stunned shock and surprise: FADE OUT: END OF ACT TWO STAR TREK: "Too Short... " - 10/6/87 - ACT THREE 33. ACT THREE FADE IN: 64 EXT. SPACE - THE ENTERPRISE (OPTICAL) The ship is traveling at warp speed against a background of streaking stars. 65 INT. MAIN BRIDGE - FULL SHOT Gathered in the Command area are Picard, Riker, Tasha, Worf, Troi. Jameson presides from the Command Chair. Data and Geordi are at their stations. JAMESON Commander Data, will you bring up the plans I requested on the Viewscreen, please. DATA Yes, sir. He begins to work his console. As Data activates the Main Viewscreen, Jameson leans forward. JAMESON Most of Mordan's principal city was devastated in the war. What was left consisted of a network of underground tunnels -- a rat's maze. When they rebuilt the city, they simply built over the tunnels. DATA I have it, sir. 66 CLOSE ON VIEWSCREEN (OPTICAL) Jameson was right. The GRAPHIC seen on the screen depicts what looks like a complicated crochet-work doily, every line indicating a tunnel. STAR TREK: "Too Short... " - 10/6/87 - ACT THREE 34. 67 BACK TO WIDER ANGLE RIKER Admiral, even if you're right about Karnas being behind this, he still wants to negotiate. Or at least to talk. Why not hear what he has to say? JAMESON I've heard what he has to say, and I have good reason to believe he's lying. GEORDI Pardon me, sir, but where do these come into the picture? JAMESON This is where Karnas held his hostages before and where I believe he has them now. PICARD Wouldn't that be a little too obvious, Admiral? JAMESON Karnas is a dogged strategist, Picard -- not a brilliant one. He sticks to what works. PICARD An overt rescue attempt could push Karnas into killing the hostages outright. JAMESON I don't think that's what he wants, Picard. PICARD Then what does he want? Troi studies Jameson closely, reacting with a slight frown to his remarks. TASHA Maybe his threats are just a way to bargain for what he wants.... STAR TREK: "Too Short... " - 10/6/87 - ACT THREE 35. 67 CONTINUED: JAMESON Karnas means exactly what he says, Lieutenant. He will kill the hostages if we don't get them out of there. PICARD Therefore you see an armed raid as our only option. JAMESON You don't agree. PICARD I would point out no one else has heard or considered Karnas's demands but you, Admiral. The Federation might take a different view of them if they knew what they were. JAMESON Starfleet gave me command of the away team, Picard. I intend to use them as I see fit. 68 INT. CAPTAIN'S READY ROOM - PICARD, TROI, BEVERLY They are gathered around Picard's desk as WE COME IN: PICARD Is Jameson physically able to lead an away mission, Doctor? BEVERLY His cells, his tissue, even his bones are still de-aging, but I'd say he was. Generally, I'd call Admiral Jameson a healthy man... about forty-five... in excellent physical condition. PICARD What about his mind? BEVERLY The same. Brain scan reveals all cells and tissue are changing, but healthy. No loss of memory... exellent grasp of facts. STAR TREK: "Too Short... " - 10/6/87 - ACT THREE 36. 68 CONTINUED: PICARD Counselor? TROI Certainly his physical capacities have been restored. I sense that gives him great satisfaction. When he came aboard, he seemed hopeful, eager. Now there seems to be a harder, more forceful attitude... ambition.... PICARD More of a young man's attitude, I'd say. Aggressive... going right for the throat of a situation instead of considering the alternatives. TROI Part of that is ambition too. He wants to be the man he once was. He is the man he once was, but sometimes old memories aren't very accurate. He was able to lead away teams like this once. Now he believes he can do it again. As Beverly mulls over the implications of that one: 69 INT. CRUSHER'S OFFICE - BEVERLY, TROI, ANNE Anne is miserable, carrying the signs of her anguish on her face. ANNE Our anniversary is next week. Fifty years.... BEVERLY In his heart, he's still the same man you married, Anne. TROI That's true. He still cares for you, despite the physical changes he's undergoing. STAR TREK: "Too Short... " - 10/6/87 - ACT THREE 37. 69 CONTINUED: ANNE (confused, anguished) But he's getting younger, and I'm -- well, look at me. Why did he do this... ? TROI There are lives at stake, Mrs. Jameson. ANNE What about our lives? Mine and his, together? BEVERLY (takes Anne's hand) Anne... I think I know a little of what you're feeling. My husband died on an away mission. We'd been married two years. So little time. Look at what you've had with Mark -- ANNE Years, yes -- but not together. I was looking forward to time together finally -- our retirement. Now he's young again and has a life to live over. Troi and Beverly exchange a worried glance. TROI She has to know, Doctor. ANNE Know what? BEVERLY Anne... he's -- ANNE What is it? BEVERLY He's not stabilizing. (pause) He may not have that life to live over. Anne looks at her in anguish and despair as we go to: STAR TREK: "Too Short... " - 10/6/87 - ACT THREE 38. 70 EXT. SPACE - THE ENTERPRISE (OPTICAL) as before, traveling at high warp speed. 71 INT. OBSERVATION LOUNGE - WIDE ANGLE as Picard ENTERS. It's dimly lit, indicating it's late -- ship's time. Picard makes his way toward a comfortable chair, then: JAMESON (O.S.) We'll be at Mordan in three hours. 72 ANOTHER ANGLE - INCLUDING JAMESON He is seated further back from the windows, a drink of some kind in his hand. Picard changes direction and joins him as: PICARD I couldn't sleep either. Jameson indicates the glass in his hand... an offer. Picard shakes his head and sits down opposite him. We can see in this closer look at Jameson that he looks younger still -- mid-thirties, perhaps. JAMESON I never could before a mission. Always wound up in the Observation Lounge, staring out at the stars. Thinking. PICARD Maybe in this case rethinking? JAMESON Perceptive. They always have given you high marks for that at Starfleet, Picard. PICARD (shrugs it away, then:) Why is this mission so important to you? Why did you risk your life so you could lead it personally? JAMESON I want to save lives, Picard. STAR TREK: "Too Short... " - 10/6/87 - ACT THREE 39. 72 CONTINUED: PICARD Noble sentiment -- but too easy an answer. You've been here before. You negotiated a release of hostages with Karnas before. Why is it now your answer is an armed raid? Jameson is silent, staring into his glass. PICARD (continuing) It's my away team you're going to send in. There's something you're not telling me, and I have a right to know what it is. JAMESON (grunts) Do you know the background? The Mordanites had some sophistication, but were still ruled by tribal family units. Karnas's father was the ruling chief of one of the families, and another tribe had him assassinated. Karnas seized the passengers of a starliner and held them hostage, demanding that Starfleet provide him with weapons that would enable him to defeat his rivals. PICARD That's the official record. JAMESON (nods) Officially the story is that after two other mediators were murdered, I went in and negotiated with Karnas to bring out the hostages safely. PICARD Are you saying that's not the truth? JAMESON It wasn't my golden oratory that saved them, Picard. I gave Karnas the weapons he wanted. STAR TREK: "Too Short... " - 10/6/87 - ACT THREE 40. 72 CONTINUED: (2) PICARD You did what? JAMESON I gave exactly the same weapons to his rivals. My interpretation of the Prime Directive. Let them solve their problems with those arms on an equal basis. Picard is staring at him with disbelief and disgust. PICARD That decision plunged them into forty years of civil war. JAMESON I didn't know that would happen. I thought, a minor war -- it'll be settled in less than a year. How could I know it would be four decades? I falsified the reports to Starfleet, but I've lived with that on my soul, Picard. Sixty-three people came away safe -- but millions died on Mordan because I delivered those weapons. PICARD Karnas could have worked for peace all those years instead of continuing the war. It's not all on your head, Admiral. JAMESON But I started it. I lit the match. Now, finally, I can vindicate myself, if only in a small way. I came to negotiate, but that isn't what Karnas wants. PICARD Revenge. That's why he demanded you when he found out you were still alive. JAMESON I'm not going to give it to him, Picard. I'm going to do what I should have done the first time. We're taking the hostages out by force. No deals. STAR TREK: "Too Short... " - 10/6/87 - ACT THREE 41. 73 EXT. SPACE - ENTERPRISE IN ORBIT AROUND MORDAN IV (OPTICAL) Mordan is not a very promising looking planet. In fact, it's a mud-brown ball with some hints of blue and green. The Enterprise is in standard orbit. 74 INT. TRANSPORTER ROOM - WIDE ANGLE Jameson is standing, facing Picard and Riker. Already on the pad are Tasha, Worf, Data, Geordi. All are equipped with phasers. Data and Tasha also have tricorders. Jameson steps up on the pad. JAMESON Prepare to energize, Chief. PICARD Belay that. The chief looks helplessly from one officer to the other. Who's he supposed to obey? PICARD (continuing) Admiral, the correct place for you is on the bridge... JAMESON I will remind you one more time, Picard, I am the Senior Mission Commander, and I'm leading this team. Picard pauses for just a beat, then steps up on the platform himself. RIKER Sir? PICARD The Admiral is correct, Number One. He has that right. But I'm the captain of this ship, and I have it, too. You have command of the Enterprise, Commander Riker. (to the Chief) Energize. As Riker watches the TRANSPORTER EFFECT BEGIN TO BUILD: FADE OUT: END OF ACT THREE STAR TREK: "Too Short... " - 10/6/87 - ACT FOUR 42. ACT FOUR FADE IN: 75 EXT. SPACE - THE ENTERPRISE IN ORBIT AROUND MORDAN (OPTICAL) as before, the Enterprise holding standard orbit around the planet. 76 INT. TUNNEL - DAY - ANGLE ON AWAY TEAM as they MATERIALIZE IN THE TRANSPORTER EFFECT. As soon as the TRANSPORTER EFFECT FADES, the Team is immediately busy, checking phasers, Data taking tricorder readings. Jameson looks around, seems to recognize where he is. The tunnel itself is old, seems unmaintained. JAMESON Yes...perfect. We are in the M-4 tunnel directly under the governor's residence. M-4 is a subsidiary tunnel, but it crosses and links with several main ones. DATA I am sorry, sir. That does not correspond with the information I have on the tricorder, sir. JAMESON Your information is incorrect, Commander. I know these tunnels like the back of my own hand. (gestures off) That way. It takes us to the hatch that will let us into M-1 tunnel. Keep scanning for signs of human life forms. Karnas held his hostages in these tunnels before. He'll do it again. Jameson STARTS OFF down the tunnel. The others FOLLOW, staying alert. STAR TREK: "Too Short... " - 10/6/87 - ACT FOUR 43. 77 CLOSER - PICARD AND DATA Data drops in beside Picard, staring at the tricorder screen in bewilderment. DATA The admiral is definitely incorrect, Captain. The tunnel schematics we have indicate this is a dead end. It was sealed off two years ago.... PICARD I've no doubt you're right, Mister Data. However, forty-five years ago, I'm sure it linked in with the tunnels Admiral Jameson remembers. 78 INT. TUNNEL #2 - DAY - ANGLE ON THE TEAM (OPTICAL) They round a corner -- and see the way has been blocked off. There was a hatch of some kind, but this has been cemented over. Geordi scans it with his VISOR. GEORDI Steelplast. Fairly recent installation. JAMESON Damn. This is the most direct route. Set phasers to cut through it. Worf and Tasha adjust their phasers and FIRE at the blocked area. 79 ANGLE AT BLOCKED AREA (OPTICAL) The two PHASER BEAMS slash in and cut a rough square in the blocked area. 80 BACK TO WIDER ANGLE TASHA If you have the coordinates for where you think the hostages are, sir, we could just beam in there. STAR TREK: "Too Short... " - 10/6/87 - ACT FOUR 44. 80 CONTINUED: JAMESON But Karnas might not have them in the same place. There is no substitute for a personal reconnoiter, Lieutenant. TASHA No, sir. She glances at Picard, decides not to say anything else. With Jameson leading, they step through the hole into another tunnel. 81 INT. TUNNEL #3 - ON THE AWAY TEAM The team moves along this tunnel, toward an intersection ahead. There is some debris in the way, as though part of the tunnel had given way at one time and has been shored up. Geordi is still scanning with his VISOR. GEORDI Admiral, there's an infrared light signal ahead. Steady beam, straight across the tunnel, chest high. Another at hip level. TASHA An alarm trigger or -- PICARD Reset phasers to stun. Jameson steps forward, and: WORF Look out, sir! 82 ANOTHER ANGLE - AT INTERSECTION (OPTICAL) Ahead of them, a SQUAD OF MORDANITE SOLDIERS has come around the corner of the intersection, armed and ready for action. Our team brings phasers up, but the Mordanites FIRE FIRST. Tasha moves herself in front of Picard, but he pulls her down flat behind the tunnel debris as PHASER-LIKE FIRE zips over their heads. The SOUND OF THE FIRE is different, flat and humming. Tasha begins to FIRE back. STAR TREK: "Too Short... " - 10/6/87 - ACT FOUR 45. 82 CONTINUED: Worf, in the meantime, has bodily picked up Jameson and moved him aside, against the wall, using his own big body as a shield for the Admiral. Data ducks down beside Picard. DATA Their phasers, sir -- set on kill. PICARD (drily) Thank you, Mister Data. I have heard the sound before. 83 ANGLE ON JAMESON AND WORF (OPTICAL) Jameson has unhitched his phaser and is firing quickly down the tunnel toward the Mordanites. Worf's fire is steady, methodical. Several Mordanites fall stunned as a result of our people's fire. Jameson moves away from the wall and the cover of Worf's body and tries to charge down the tunnel toward the soldiers, who are offering up a steady fire. 84 WIDER ANGLE (OPTICAL) Picard reaches out to try to stop Jameson, but the Admiral suddenly crumples, almost into Data's arms. TASHA Is he hit? DATA (trying to examine him) I cannot tell -- PICARD (tabs communicator) Enterprise, this is Picard. Five to beam up -- now! The five of them cluster together. MORDANITE FIRE is still steady as the soldiers begin to advance toward them. Tasha and Worf maintain a steady covering fire that slows them down. Then the TRANSPORTER EFFECT BEGINS TO BUILD AND COVER OUR PEOPLE. STAR TREK: "Too Short... " - 10/6/87 - ACT FOUR 46. 85 INT. TRANSPORTER ROOM - ANGLE ON PLATFORM as the team IS MATERIALIZED. As soon as the EFFECT STOPS, Picard bends down to where Data, supporting Jameson, is lowering him to the platform. PICARD How badly is he hurt? DATA I do not see any sign of a wound, sir. 86 CLOSER ON THE GROUP WE DO NOT SEE Jameson's face, which is turned AWAY FROM CAMERA. He is doubled over, shaking violently as though palsied. Data looks up at Picard, frowning. DATA It appears to be another attack, sir. PICARD (to Tasha) Call Doctor Crusher here immediately. TASHA Sir. (goes to transporter console) Transporter Room Three to Sickbay. Doctor Crusher, please report immediately with Medical Support Team. 87 ANGLE ON JAMESON WE DO NOT SEE his face. He CRIES OUT in agony, and writhes painfully. 88 OMITTED 89 INT. SICKBAY - ANGLE ON JAMESON He is lying on one of the examination beds, face turned AWAY FROM CAMERA, still shaking in pain. Troi is standing by with Anne as a medtech monitors him closely. STAR TREK: "Too Short... " - 10/6/87 - ACT FOUR 47. 90 INT. CRUSHER'S OFFICE - PICARD AND BEVERLY BEVERLY This last attack is the worst one he's suffered, sir. The others were overwith fairly quickly. He hasn't recovered from this one yet, and nothing has been able to relieve his pain. PICARD Do you have any answers, Doctor? BEVERLY I'm afraid none of it is very hopeful. The compound he took seems to be rejuvenating the DNA, but it's also sloughing off the old cells too fast for his body to cope. His body is trying to grow and die and regenerate all at the same time. PICARD (sighs) You're saying the overdose of the drug he took is working too well. BEVERLY Exactly, sir. PICARD When will it stop? BEVERLY It won't... because it can't. Eventually, he won't be able to stand the strain. 91 INT. MAIN BRIDGE - ON PICARD ENTERING from the aft turbolift. Riker comes out of the Command Chair toward him. NOTE: Data, Worf and Tasha are now back at their regular stations. Troi is not on the bridge. RIKER The admiral... ? PICARD Sickbay. "Not good" is a galactic understatement. STAR TREK: "Too Short... " - 10/6/87 - ACT FOUR 48. 91 CONTINUED: GEORDI Karnas again, sir. On the screen. He actives his console. 92 ANGLE ON PICARD INCLUDING MAIN VIEWSCREEN (OPTICAL) Karnas's image APPEARS ON SCREEN in the same setting as before. KARNAS Enterprise. There has been an armed intrusion in the tunnels beneath the city. That smells of Jameson. Where is he? PICARD This is Picard. I am sorry to inform you that the admiral is critically ill, Karnas. KARNAS (coming out of the chair) That is not my concern. Sick or well, you have ten minutes to beam him down, Captain Picard. Otherwise, the hostages die. The VIEWSCREEN GOES BLANK. Then: TROI'S COM VOICE Sickbay to bridge. PICARD Picard. TROI'S COM VOICE Doctor Crusher requests your presence in Sickbay immediately, sir. Picard exchanges a worried look with Riker, then: PICARD On my way. As he HURRIES for the turbolift: STAR TREK: "Too Short... " - 10/6/87 - ACT FOUR 49. 93 INT. SICKBAY - ANGLE AT DOOR as Picard ENTERS. Beverly meets him, her face grim. PICARD What is it? BEVERLY You'd better see for yourself. 94 ANGLE AT JAMESON'S BED Troi is trying to comfort Anne, who huddles at the side of the bed in utter despair. Picard approaches, looks down at the body there -- and his jaw drops. 95 CLOSE ON JAMESON The eyes are alive and intelligent -- but the face and body Picard sees are those of a teen-aged boy. NOTE: Jameson's VOICE remains the same as before. JAMESON (BOY) Picard.... 96 WIDER - GROUP JAMESON (BOY) Picard, I have to get to Karnas. BEVERLY I can't allow him out of my care, sir. JAMESON (BOY) My last option, Picard. The raid failed... all I have left to bargain with is myself.... RIKER'S COM VOICE Bridge to Picard. PICARD (to companel) Picard here. What is it, Number One? STAR TREK: "Too Short... " - 10/6/87 - ACT FOUR 50. 97 INT. MAIN BRIDGE - ON RIKER RIKER A new demand from Karnas, sir. If we don't deliver Jameson in five minutes, a hostage will be executed. Fifteen minutes after that, another. 98 INT. SICKBAY - ON PICARD, BEVERLY, JAMESON RIKER'S COM VOICE He promises the method of execution will be both slow and painful. A beat, as Picard looks from Beverly to Jameson. JAMESON Let me go. If I turn myself over to him, he'll let the hostages go. It's me he wants. PICARD It's certain death for you, Admiral. JAMESON My life for how many hostages, Picard? Twenty? (hard) Let me go. PICARD (beat, then:) Number One, inform Karnas we'll be beaming down in less than five minutes. RIKER'S COM VOICE "We," sir? PICARD You have your orders, Number One. RIKER'S COM VOICE Aye, sir. Riker out. STAR TREK: "Too Short... " - 10/6/87 - ACT FOUR 51. 99 INT. TRANSPORTER ROOM - ANGLE ON PLATFORM as Picard, Beverly (with medical kit) and the boy Jameson are mounting the platform. Jameson's uniform, while still that of an admiral, hangs loosely on him. Riker ENTERS, moves toward them as: RIKER Captain, you can't go down there again -- (stops, staring at the boy) Jameson... ? PICARD Yes. Exactly why I have to go, Will. As a Starfleet captain, I have negotiating powers. (to Transporter Chief) Energize. The Transporter Chief works his console. The TRANSPORTER EFFECT BEGINS TO BUILD and cover the figures of Picard, Beverly and the boy Jameson. 100 INT. KARNAS'S OFFICE - DAY The TRANSPORTER EFFECT MATERIALIZES the three figures directly in front of Karnas's desk. Karnas is waiting, puzzled to see three. There are several Mordanite soldiers in the room, but it will be noticed they are old soldiers -- veterans in their late fifties and sixties. Karnas gets to his feet as THE MATERIALIZATION EFFECT FADES, and he sees Picard, Beverly and the boy Jameson. KARNAS (outraged) Who are you! I want Jameson! PICARD This is Admiral Mark Jameson. FADE OUT: END OF ACT FOUR STAR TREK: "Too Short... " - 10/6/87 - ACT FIVE 52. ACT FIVE FADE IN: 101 INT. KARNAS'S OFFICE - DAY - PICARD, JAMESON (BOY) as we left them. Karnas stares at the boy in the Starfleet uniform, dismisses him with a grunt, and turns to Picard. KARNAS This charade will accomplish nothing, Picard. Beam Jameson down, and the hostages will be freed. Continue this -- and I promise you they will die -- and you with them. JAMESON (BOY) Karnas, if you'll just listen.... KARNAS (to Picard) Why have you brought him here? This is no place for children. JAMESON (BOY) (interrupting) Peretor Karnas. You always were a stubborn man. I thought you wanted me. I'm here. Release the hostages. now. Karnas stares at him, startled for a moment, then: KARNAS "Peretor" was my old title. Why do you call me that? JAMESON (BOY) Because you're acting like the warrior you were -- not like the planetary governor you are. KARNAS Picard, I warn you, this trick is going too far. He has been coached... for some devious reason. If this farce is not stopped immediately, you and the hostages will be put to death. STAR TREK: "Too Short... " - 10/6/87 - ACT FIVE 53. 101 CONTINUED: Suddenly Jameson doubles over, the intense pain driving him to his knees. Beverly rushes to him as: PICARD Admiral! Beverly is checking him, frowning. She administers a hypospray, which seems to ease him a bit. 102 ANGLE ON KARNAS AND PICARD KARNAS I'm waiting for an explanation, Captain. PICARD He is the admiral. Before we left on this mission, he administered an overdose of an alien de-aging drug to himself. He wanted to face you with strength again... on even terms. This is what the drug has done to him. 103 ANOTHER ANGLE - INCLUDING BEVERLY AND JAMESON Beverly has helped Jameson to a chair. He seems to be weak, almost frail. Karnas paces in front of the desk, railing at Picard. KARNAS This story you are telling is unbelievable. Jameson is a man of eighty, not -- (points to Jameson) -- this. I want that old man, Picard. I want to show him this world he helped to make... the scars on old soldiers' bodies... the graveyards of our young dead... the wasted cities we are still rebuilding... and all of it caused by him. PICARD As I understand the facts, Karnas, you were the one who demanded weapons to avenge your father's death. STAR TREK: "Too Short... " - 10/6/87 - ACT FIVE 54. 103 CONTINUED: KARNAS But Jameson didn't give weapons only to us. If he had, we would have triumphed over our enemies in less than a year, and we would have had peace in all these decades. When Jameson gave weapons to both sides, he gave us forty years of war. I want him to pay for that, Picard. Jameson is hit by another viciously painful attack, GASPS AND MOANS in pain. Beverly takes a quick reading on her instruments, looks over at Picard. BEVERLY Sir, I think Mrs. Jameson should beam down. Now. PICARD (nods quickly) Do it. As Beverly touches her communicator: 104 ANGLE ON PICARD AND KARNAS PICARD Karnas, I've asked Doctor Crusher to bring down the visual records we've made of Admiral Jameson's deterioration. Will you look at them? KARNAS You're wasting my time, Picard. PICARD Only a few moments. When Karnas does not reply immediately, Picard nods to Beverly, who hands her medical P.A.D.D. to Picard. PICARD (continuing) You saw Admiral Jameson when he was on board en route to Mordan? KARNAS Yes. STAR TREK: "Too Short... " - 10/6/87 - ACT FIVE 55. 104 CONTINUED: PICARD You recognized him? KARNAS (reluctantly) Yes. Picard holds out the medical P.A.D.D. for him to see. PICARD And this is the man you saw. 105 CLOSE ON P.A.D.D. SCREEN (OPTICAL) The screen shows Jameson as he was at the beginning, in the physical support chair. KARNAS (V.O.) Yes. This is the man I want. 106 WIDER ANGLE - PICARD AND KARNAS PICARD Never again, Karnas. He holds out the tricorder again. Karnas reluctantly looks. 107 CLOSE ON TRICORDER SCREEN (OPTICAL) Still shots APPEAR in sequence -- Jameson as he began to de-age, as he became younger and younger. PICARD (O.S.) Once he took the compound ... there was no way to stop it. The final picture is the boy Jameson. 108 WIDER - EMPHASIZING KARNAS, PICARD Karnas stares across the room at Jameson, who is being tended by Beverly. The boy has begun to shake. Not pain, but a quivering in the body that cannot be stopped. STAR TREK: "Too Short... " - 10/6/87 - ACT FIVE 56. 108 CONTINUED: THE SOUND OF THE TRANSPORTER BEGINS, and ANNE MATERIALIZES IN THE ROOM. She looks around, sees Jameson's terrible condition and quickly goes to him. She sits beside him, takes his hand, but he is paying no attention to her. His eyes are on Karnas. PICARD You'll have to deal with me, Karnas. Whatever you wanted from Jameson isn't possible any more. Karnas leans against his desk, stares around at the old soldiers who had come to share his moment of triumph over their legendary enemy. None of them know what to think, but Karnas clearly is still not convinced. PICARD (continuing) You wanted revenge, Karnas. You blamed your war on Jameson, and there's no doubt he had a lot to do with it. But you had the weapons, and you used them. You could have tried for negotiations for peace on your planet long ago. You chose to fight instead. How many of those forty years of war are on your head? KARNAS Jameson has to pay for his crimes... I have sworn it to my people. When I found out he was alive, I gave them my word I would kill him for what he did. A public execution... public retribution for what he did to us. Picard realizes he may be talking to a wall. But one more time: PICARD (points to the boy) Then there's Jameson. He wanted to atone for what he'd done here. Forty-five years ago, he made the wrong decision, and he wanted to come here to somehow right it. He wanted to negotiate, and when that failed, he decided to fight. (MORE) STAR TREK: "Too Short... " - 10/6/87 - ACT FIVE 57. 108 CONTINUED: (2) PICARD (Cont'd) Your men foiled that, and all he has left now is to give himself up to you. He's brought this retribution on himself. KARNAS No. I don't believe you. You are shielding Jameson on the ship and telling me this tale to save his life. 109 ANGLE ON JAMESON (BOY) He is still shuddering, gets to his feet. Anne tries to hold his hand, but he pulls away from her. Beverly signals to her to let him go, but she keeps a close eye on him herself. JAMESON (BOY) Peretor Karnas... there were only two of us in the meeting. You didn't even trust your lieutenants then. You told me old Peretor Sain had ordered your father's assassination. You told me you wanted arms to destroy him. Peace wasn't on your mind. You just wanted revenge. And I gave you the weapons to do it. KARNAS Jameson told you all this. JAMESON (BOY) I am Jameson. Do you want a list of the weapons I gave you? Only you and I would know what it was, because I erased every trace of them from the records. KARNAS Jameson still could have told you this. (beat) If you are him, show me the scar. JAMESON (rolls up sleeve) There. The blood cut you gave me to seal our bargain. STAR TREK: "Too Short... " - 10/6/87 - ACT FIVE 58. 109 CONTINUED: He holds out his arm, and Karnas stares at him. 110 CLOSE ON JAMESON'S (BOY'S) ARM A curious V-shaped scar arcs across the wrist, almost like a chevron. 111 ANGLE ON KARNAS AND JAMESON Karnas looks up at Jameson... and he finally believes. KARNAS It is you. Somehow... it is you. Suddenly, Karnas twists away, reaches for the wall behind his desk and the weapons there. He grabs one of the phasers and raises it, aiming it at Jameson's heart. KARNAS (continuing) Then die by one of your own weapons! Everyone else is frozen by the moment. The boy/man simply stands there, still shuddering from the terrible changes going on in his body, but not afraid. Slowly, Karnas lowers the weapon. KARNAS (continuing) No. My revenge is in letting you live like this. 112 EMPHASIZING JAMESON (BOY) He holds for a long beat, and then he crumples to the floor with a CRY of agony. Beverly and Anne go to him immediately, Beverly running a quick scan with her instruments. 113 PICARD AND KARNAS as Karnas moves forward, laying the weapon down on his desk. Jameson CRIES OUT AGAIN, in terrible pain. KARNAS Such pain.... STAR TREK: "Too Short... " - 10/6/87 - ACT FIVE 59. 113 CONTINUED: PICARD Doctor Crusher? 114 ANGLE ON BEVERLY, JAMESON (BOY), ANNE Beverly looks up, shakes her head. BEVERLY His body can't rejuvenate any further. The compound he took is trying to force the organs and tissue to go further, younger, and they can't take the stress. It's like he's -- imploding. I can't do anything to stop it, sir. Jameson CRIES OUT AGAIN. PICARD Can you give him something for the pain? Slowly, sadly, Beverly shakes her head. 115 CLOSE ON JAMESON (BOY) AND ANNE Quietly, she moves in beside Beverly, who pulls back out of the way. Anne takes the boy's head in her arms, cradles him against her. No matter that this is just a young teenager now -- this is still the man she loved for fifty years. ANNE Mark... can you hear me? JAMESON (BOY) Yes. ANNE I'll always love you. JAMESON (BOY) Annie with the golden hair.... ANNE (forces a smile) Flatterer. It's grey now. JAMESON (BOY) I only see the gold.... STAR TREK: "Too Short... " - 10/6/87 - ACT FIVE 60. 115 CONTINUED: He convulses in a wave of fierce pain, and she holds on to him tight. Then as it seems to pass, and he looks up at her: 116 CLOSE ON JAMESON'S EYES They are old eyes, filled with the memories of eighty years. And then they close for the last time. 117 WIDER - EMPHASIZING ANNE, JAMESON (BOY), KARNAS As the others look on, Anne begins quietly to weep. Karnas moves closer, staring down at the strange body of his old enemy. Finally: KARNAS Rest, Jameson. Your long night -- and mine -- is over. (up to Picard) The hostages will be released immediately, Captain. I am prepared to be -- cooperative. 118 EXT. SPACE - ENTERPRISE IN ORBIT AROUND MORDAN (OPTICAL) Enterprise in standard orbit. 119 INT. MAIN BRIDGE - ANGLE ON COMMAND AREA where Picard is completing the dictation of his log. PICARD ... The hostages have been freed by Karnas, unharmed. (pause) Personal note. The body of Admiral Mark Jameson has been buried on Mordan, at the request of his widow and with the permission of Karnas. Log out. Picard glances across to Riker, shakes his head. PICARD The quest for youth, Number One... so futile. Age and wisdom have their graces. STAR TREK: "Too Short... " - 10/6/87 - ACT FIVE 61. 119 CONTINUED: RIKER I wonder if one doesn't have to have age and wisdom to appreciate that, sir. PICARD I hope not, Number One. It would be such a waste of youth. (beat, then:) Mister La Forge, prepare to take us out of orbit. Set course for Isis III. GEORDI Aye, sir. Leaving orbit. 120 EXT. SPACE - ENTERPRISE AND MORDAN (OPTICAL) as the sleek starship begins her pull away from the planet and heads for the stars. FADE OUT: END OF ACT FIVE THE END STAR TREK: THE NEXT GENERATION "The Big Good-bye" #40271-113 Written by Tracy Torme Directed by Joseph L. Scanlan Copyright 1987 Paramount Pictures Corporation. All Rights Reserved. This script is not for publication or reproduction. No one is authorized to dispose of same. If lost or destroyed, please notify the Script Department. REVISED FINAL DRAFT OCTOBER 14, 1987 STAR TREK: "The Big Good-bye" - 10/14/87 - CAST STAR TREK: THE NEXT GENERATION "The Big Good-bye" CAST PICARD SECRETARY RIKER JESSICA BRADLEY BEVERLY FELIX LEECH DATA JARADAN (HA-RAH-DAN) TROI WHALEN TASHA NEWSPAPER VENDOR WORF LT. DAN BELL GEORDI LT. MCNARY WESLEY DESK SERGEANT THUG CYRUS REDBLOCK STAR TREK: "The Big Good-bye" - 10/14/87 - SETS STAR TREK: THE NEXT GENERATION "The Big Good-bye" SETS INTERIORS EXTERIORS USS ENTERPRISE USS ENTERPRISE MAIN BRIDGE CAPTAIN'S READY ROOM HOLODECK HOLODECK ENTRANCE 1941 CITY SIDEWALK CORRIDOR OBSERVATION LOUNGE 1941 OFFICE BUILDING HALLWAY DIXON HILL'S WAITING ROOM DIXON HILL'S OFFICE POLICE STATION WAITING ROOM INTERROGATION ROOM STAR TREK: "The Big Good-bye" - 10/14/87 - TEASER 1. STAR TREK: THE NEXT GENERATION "The Big Good-bye" TEASER FADE IN: 1 EXT. SPACE - ENTERPRISE (OPTICAL) The ship passes over us slowly, giving a distinct impression of its great size... RIKER (V.O.) Ship's log, First Officer Riker reporting. Stardate 41997.7 We are about to make a brief but necessary contact with the Jarada, a reclusive race known for its idiosyncratic attitude towards protocol... The Federation has been trying unsuccessfully to establish a relationship, and now the task falls to Captain Picard. 2 INT. MAIN BRIDGE - WIDE ANGLE RIKER sits alone at the Command Area. WESLEY and WORF man the Ops and Conn; DATA is at Science One. RIKER (V.O.) (continuing) ... In two days we will reach the area of their planet, known as Torona Four. The Jarada demand a precise greeting. Their language is most unusual... 3 INT. CAPTAIN'S READY ROOM - MOVING IN ON PICARD RIKER (V.O.) (continuing) ... The slightest mispronunciation is regarded as an insult. PICARD is earnestly studying. WE SEE a text filled with Jaradan (HA-RAH-DAN) figures and their English equivalents. STAR TREK: "The Big Good-bye" - 10/14/87 - TEASER 2. 4 TWO SHOT TO INCLUDE TROI sitting across from him, helping with the dialect. TROI The double bars indicate an elongated "s" sound -- PICARD (nodding) -- And the inverted "T" means to hold the "zee." TROI Unless... ? PICARD Unless it's followed by three wavy lines; in which case the "zee" becomes a "bee." TROI Exactly. Picard pushes the text aside and wearily rubs his neck. PICARD What a language. TROI It is an insect mind. PICARD (burnt out) My mind's barely working. TROI Take a break, sir. PICARD (shaking head) No. I want to go over it again. TROI You could be over-preparing. You've been looking forward to the upgrade of the Holodeck. You have the time. You need the diversion... STAR TREK: "The Big Good-bye" - 10/14/87 - TEASER 3. 5 ANGLE ON PICARD thinking about what Troi's said. PICARD Dixon Hill. TROI The program's installed and waiting. 6 OMITTED 7 INT. ENTRANCE TO HOLODECK - ANGLE ON PICARD Picard touches the COMPUTER panel on the wall. COMPUTER VOICE Planet and city? PICARD Earth... United States... San Francisco, California. COMPUTER VOICE Time period? PICARD (pondering it) 1941, A.D. COMPUTER VOICE File or access code. PICARD File Dixon Hill, private detective. COMPUTER VOICE (a beat) Enter when ready. Picard steps through doors. 8 INT. HALLWAY - NIGHT ... and comes out in a darkly lit hallway, circa 1941. At the end of the hall is a wooden door with a glass window. The letters on the pane read "DIXON HILL, PRIVATE INVESTIGATOR." Picard is pleased. He opens the door... STAR TREK: "The Big Good-bye" - 10/14/87 - TEASER 4. 9 INT. WAITING ROOM/OFFICE - NIGHT Hill's SECRETARY, a plain blond with a bubbly personality, is just on her way to lunch. She looks Picard up and down with bemusement... SECRETARY Very funny, Dix. What'd you do, lose another bet? PICARD I don't understand -- SECRETARY The bellboy suit. Are you moonlighting at the Fremont? Picard looks down at his uniform. PICARD The uniform. Totally inappropriate. Why didn't I change? The Secretary hurriedly pulls on her coat and gloves. SECRETARY Mister Leech called twice, and there's a lady named Bradley waiting in your office. Nice legs. In a flash, she's halfway out the door. SECRETARY (continuing) Gotta hot date with my fella. I'll see ya in the morning. She gives Picard's uniform one last look -- shaking her head as she SHUTS THE DOOR BEHIND HER. Picard is left alone in the waiting room. He's thrilled by the detail in this, the somewhat rundown workplace of the fictional detective DIXON HILL. A RUSTLING NOISE in the adjoining room reminds Picard that someone's waiting for him. As he pushes the door open, the first thing he sees are the great pair of legs his secretary mentioned. STAR TREK: "The Big Good-bye" - 10/14/87 - TEASER 5. 9 CONTINUED: MRS. JESSICA BRADLEY rises to greet the detective she's come to see. She's a wealthy woman in her late twenties who radiates a seductive sensuality. The rest of her body matches her legs. She can't help but wonder at the sight of Picard's maroon and black uniform... PICARD Uh, I lost a bet. JESSICA Oh well... At least you're ready for Halloween. PICARD Halloween? She BLOWS OUT some cigarette SMOKE and looks out at the city, concerned, then turns to him. JESSICA I need your help, Mister Hill. (turning to face him) Someone is trying to kill me. MUSICAL STING, FADE OUT. END OF TEASER STAR TREK: "The Big Good-bye" - 10/14/87 - ACT ONE 6. ACT ONE FADE IN: 10 EXT. SPACE - ENTERPRISE (OPTICAL) The ship smoothly cruises through the starry blackness of space. Over this: PICARD (V.O.) Captain's log, supplemental. I am delighted with how the Holodeck has created the fictional world of Dixon Hill... 11 INT. DIXON HILL'S OFFICE - ON PICARD PICARD (V.O.) (continuing) ... the twentieth century detective who has been a hero of mine since childhood. 12 WIDER ANGLE TO INCLUDE JESSICA PICARD (V.O.) (continuing) The illusion is flawless. The computer characters accept me as Dixon Hill, even to the extent that Jessica Bradley, a millionaire's wife from the wrong side of the tracks, wants to hire me. JESSICA I'm not sure who wants me dead. My husband... My stepdaughter... PICARD Or a lover, perhaps? Mrs. Bradley shoots Picard a sly look. JESSICA Perhaps. (pause) Perhaps Cyrus Redblock. STAR TREK: "The Big Good-bye" - 10/14/87 - ACT ONE 7. 12 CONTINUED: She seems to wait for a reaction from Picard, but it never comes. JESSICA (continuing) I need you to find out. Name your fee. PICARD Twenty dollars a day. Plus expenses. JESSICA Agreed. She gets up, as though preparing to leave... PICARD I haven't said yes yet. JESSICA (cool smile) Oh you'll say yes. She moves closer and kisses him tenderly. Picard is surprised by the warmth of her lips. JESSICA (continuing; whispering) If it's Redblock, he must think I've got what he's looking for. But believe me, I don't. PICARD I'll take your word for it. Jessica hands him money. WE SEE a crisp one-hundred dollar bill. JESSICA Here's a C-note in advance. Consider it a retainer... (day as she touches his uniform) ... and next time, could you wear a suit? She takes one of Hill's business cards from his desk and then EXITS, as the captain watches her leave the office. STAR TREK: "The Big Good-bye" - 10/14/87 - ACT ONE 8. 12 CONTINUED: (2) Now alone, it's clear he's enthralled by this imaginary world. He opens the window and looks down on the street -- WE CAN HEAR THE SOUNDS OF MOVING TRAFFIC AND HONKING HORNS. PICARD (to himself, soft) Remarkable. Picard leaves the window. He touches the insignia on his chest, and a QUICK HIGH PITCHED SOUND CAN BE HEARD through the closet door in his office. (Picard knows that this sound indicates another Holodeck Exit.) He opens the closet door and finds the portal. Just before he steps through, there's a knock on the waiting room door. 13 PICARD'S POV - THE DOOR The SILHOUETTE of a small man CAN BE SEEN though the pane. He knocks again, delicately; his knuckles sounding like a woodpecker rapping on a hollow tree. PICARD (calling out) You'll have to call again. I'm just leaving. I'm not dressed properly. I'll be back. And he leaves -- WALKING THROUGH the EXIT. The office door OPENS. Leech ENTERS. Mister Leech has short curly hair and big bulging eyes. He wears a bow tie and speaks with a strange nasally tone that betrays a Middle-Eastern background. LEECH Not yet, please -- Leech looks around at the empty office, confusion on his face. 13A INT. HOLODECK CORRIDOR BY SIDE EXIT Picard walks down the corridor and turns the corner to the main entrance to the Holodeck. 14 OMITTED STAR TREK: "The Big Good-bye" - 10/14/87 - ACT ONE 9. 15 INT. ENTERPRISE - ENTRANCE TO HOLODECK - ON PICARD addressing the computer panel. PICARD Memory: save current setting. COMPUTER VOICE (after slight pause) Current setting saved. PICARD Holodeck OFF. 16 OMITTED 17 EXT. SPACE - ENTERPRISE (OPTICAL) heading toward the rendezvous... 18 INT. OBSERVATION LOUNGE - WIDE ANGLE The officers are gathered around the table... PICARD When I looked down on the street, I actually saw automobiles! Worf looks up. DATA An ancient Earth device used primarily for transportation. WORF Ahh. DATA Also seen as a source of status and virility; often a prime ingredient in teenage mating rituals -- 19 ANGLE ON WESLEY reacting to the idea of "teenage mating rituals." WESLEY Teenage mating rituals? STAR TREK: "The Big Good-bye" - 10/14/87 - ACT ONE 10. 20 BACK TO SHOT PICARD I saw an entire city block from that window. BEVERLY It sounds wonderful. PICARD I'm going to try it again, only this time I'm going to dress the part. (to Beverly) Why not come with me? 21 CLOSE ON BEVERLY surprised and pleased that she's been asked. 22 BACK TO SHOT PICARD I also want to take that historian... the twentieth century expert... TASHA Whalen. PICARD Yes, Whalen. He probably knows more about Dixon Hill than I do. DATA I will tell him. PICARD Invite him, Mister Data. This is, after all, a leisure activity. PICARD The sense of reality is incredible. When that woman kissed me, it was so -- Picard cuts off when he realizes Beverly is staring at him. She chooses an adjective and finishes his sentence... BEVERLY Exciting? STAR TREK: "The Big Good-bye" - 10/14/87 - ACT ONE 11. 22 CONTINUED: PICARD Real. (clears throat) The subject of this meeting is the Jaradan rendezvous. Proceed with the briefing, Number One. Riker has been enjoying the discussion, but he quickly switches gears. RIKER This is primarily a necessary diplomatic mission. The Jaradan are strategically important to the Federation. Previous attempts failed because they are so easily irritated. A slip in the pronunciation of the greeting caused a twenty-year rift in the relation. DATA Therefore the captain must recite the entire greeting without any mistakes. GEORDI (amused) Simple as that. DATA (straightforward) Yes. If, on the other hand, the captain makes even the slightest error -- TASHA -- The captain is well aware of the gravity of the situation, Commander. DATA I have located a history tape of the last Federation starship to come in contact with the Jarada. It graphically demonstrates what happened when that captain offended them. STAR TREK: "The Big Good-bye" - 10/14/87 - ACT ONE 12. 22 CONTINUED: (2) TROI The captain is familiar with that, Data. DATA Should we not run it? PICARD It's not necessary. Meeting adjourned. 23 thru OMITTED 25 26 INT. CORRIDOR - ON DATA AND GEORDI walking together. DATA Why would the captain not want to review all the information available on the subject? GEORDI When you've seen the Jaradan react once, you don't ever have to see it again. Data shrugs and decides to change the subject. DATA Dixon Hill is a most puzzling character. GEORDI Not really. He was just a twentieth-century Sherlock Holmes. DATA But his modus operandi is quite dissimilar. Worth investigating. GEORDI Indubitably, Watson. Data gives Geordi a look. STAR TREK: "The Big Good-bye" - 10/14/87 - ACT ONE 13. 27 INT. MAIN BRIDGE - CLOSE ON DATA at Science One. He stares thoughtfully at the blank screen. DATA Computer: request all biographical information on fictional character Dixon Hill. The computer briefly HUMS and CLICKS, searching its files. COMPUTER VOICE Working...... Character first appeared in pulp magazine, "Amazing Detective Stories," copyright 1934, A.D. (pause) Second appearance in novel "The Long Dark Tunnel," circa 1936. DATA Request complete text of all stories involving said character. 28 CLOSE ON DATA'S FACE as the computer springs to life. DATA Increase speed. The REFLECTED COMPUTER LETTERS DANCE ACROSS HIS FACE like a horde of green ants. Data's eyes race back and forth, reading the text at an incredible rate. 29 EXT. SPACE - ENTERPRISE (OPTICAL) The great ship cruises on toward the Jaradan rendezvous. 30 INT. OUTSIDE HOLODECK ENTRANCE - TIGHT ON PICARD'S FACE PICARD (V.O.) Captain's log, supplemental... STAR TREK: "The Big Good-bye" - 10/14/87 - ACT ONE 14. 31 PULLING BACK SLOWLY PICARD (V.O.) (continuing) The Jaradan rendezvous is eleven hours away... 32 STILL PULLING BACK It's clear the captain is not wearing his standard uniform... PICARD (V.O.) (continuing) I am about to reenter the world of Dixon Hill, this time properly dressed. An experience like this is more enjoyable when shared, so I've invited Lit-historian Whalen to accompany me. Doctor Crusher will join us shortly... 33 FULL VIEW OF PICARD who is dressed like a Forties detective, trench coat and all. 34 ANGLE TO INCLUDE WHALEN the redheaded literature expert, looking fashionable in his three-piece suit. PICARD Ready to go to San Francisco, Mister Whalen? WHALEN More than ready, sir. PICARD If it's anything like the last time I'm sure you won't be disappointed -- Whalen notices the look of surprise on the captain's face. The historian spins to see what he's looking at... STAR TREK: "The Big Good-bye" - 10/14/87 - ACT ONE 15. 35 ANGLE ON DATA completely decked out for an excursion into the Forties. He's even wearing a Bogart-style hat, fashionably tilted over one eye. DATA Request permission to accompany you, sir. 36 BACK TO THREE SHOT The Captain is too surprised to respond. DATA I have mastered the lingo of the period. Example: (psuedo-Bogart) It was raining in the city of Angels -- a hard rain -- almost hard enough to wash the slime from the streets. But it never does. When the rain stops, the boulevard dries and the snakes once again slink from their holes. That's when my door opens and the helpless, the desperate, walk through with a heart full of hurt and a pocket full of nothing. 37 ANGLE ON PICARD AND WHALEN amused and delighted. 38 FULL SHOT TO ENTRANCE DATA It unearthed half-forgotten feelings the same way it dug up sleeping bones in shallow unmarked graves. (pause) It was that kind of day. WHALEN (enthusiastic) Dixon Hill: "The Black Orchid," Chapter Three. STAR TREK: "The Big Good-bye" - 10/14/87 - ACT ONE 16. 38 CONTINUED: PICARD Very impressive, gentlemen. Now... Shall we? The doors open. WE SEE a view of San Francisco, 1941, over them. The three men STEP INSIDE. 38A INT. HOLODECK Their faces show wonderment. The Holodeck doors close behind them. FADE OUT: END OF ACT ONE STAR TREK: "The Big Good-bye" - 10/14/87 - ACT TWO 17. ACT TWO FADE IN: 39 EXT. SIDEWALK - NIGHT - TIGHT ON PICARD, WHALEN AND DATA as they step out in front of a newsstand in 1941. The three men turn their heads joyously, taking in the wonders of this illusionary city. THE MOTORIZED SOUNDS OF AN URBAN CITY BLOCK fill the air. A GRIZZLED NEWS-VENDOR standing behind his open air stand, calls out to Picard... VENDOR Hey Dix! The Men APPROACH. VENDOR (continuing) How's tricks? Picard doesn't know quite how to answer that question... PICARD Uh, she's fine... just fine. WHALEN (to Picard, softly) Wonderful! He really thinks you're Dixon Hill! A passing Pedestrian plunks a dollar on the counter. He sweeps up his paper and his change, and continues on. Picard notes that the sign on the stand reads "JOE'S NEWS AND MAGAZINES." PICARD Say Joe, I'd like to buy a paper too, but I don't have any money. VENDOR Catch me next time, Dix. He tosses a paper at Picard. The three from the Enterprise eagerly study its headlines.... STAR TREK: "The Big Good-bye" - 10/14/87 - ACT TWO 18. 39 CONTINUED: PICARD (reading) "Hitler on the move... Roosevelt presses Congress for British aid... DiMaggio streak reaches thirty-seven?" DATA DiMaggio. Joltin' Joe, the Yankee clipper. WHALEN (to Picard) Baseball. A national obsession at the time. DATA The streak they refer to, will eventually reach fifty-six games... The vendor cackles again. He's finished with another customer and is listening to Data with amusement and fascination. DATA (continuing) And be snapped by a pair of journeyman hurlers for the Cleveland Indians -- VENDOR Cleveland!!! The Vendor's explosive laughter turns to a hacking cough as he pounds his fist on the table... VENDOR (continuing; scornful) They got no pitching! They never got no pitching. What are ya, nuts or somethin'? Data continues, undaunted, reciting the facts from his computer memory... DATA The record will stand until the year 2026, when a shortstop for the London Kings-- STAR TREK: "The Big Good-bye" - 10/14/87 - ACT TWO 19. 39 CONTINUED: (2) VENDOR (to Picard, interrupting) Hey Dix, what gives with this guy? (leans forward, studies Data's face) He ain't from around here, is he? PICARD Uh, no... he's not. (pause) He's from South America. VENDOR Yeah. He's got a nice tan. Picard is suddenly struck by something he sees in the paper. Whalen looks over his shoulder and reads the headline... 40 TIGHT ON THE HEADLINE Which reads "WEALTHY SOCIALITE MURDERED" The subhead reads: "POLICE HAVE SEVERAL LEADS IN BRUTAL SLAYING OF MRS. ARTHUR CLINTON BRADLEY." 41 ANGLE ON PICARD staring at the accompanying picture of Jessica Bradley. PICARD (somber) I should have listened to her. She told me someone was trying to kill her. Whalen notes that the captain almost looks guilty that he didn't do something to protect her. WHALEN (softly) She's a page from a book, sir. That's all she ever was. BELL (O.S.) Well, well, look what the cat dragged in. STAR TREK: "The Big Good-bye" - 10/14/87 - ACT TWO 20. 41 CONTINUED: Two police detectives have APPEARED on the scene. BELL is a large man; a gruff career cop who clearly doesn't like Dixon Hill. McNARY is a young Robert Mitchum; his sad eyes show he's seen too many dark things during his nine years in Homicide. Data is searching the area, having taken Bell's remark literally. DATA Cat? Bell's mouth hangs open as he moves in for a closer look at the strange man... BELL What on Earth... Where the hell did he come from? VENDOR South America. Can't you tell? Bell circles Data, looking him up and down... BELL Wherever you're from, while you're in my town, keep your nose clean. Data REACTS. Bell turns his attention to Picard... BELL (continuing) Well, tough guy, this time you've really done it. Your goose is cooked, but good. MCNARY (looking down) I'm sorry about this, Dix. BELL Don't apologize to him' (to Picard, ?elligerent) Where were you last night between ten and midnight? Picard shoots his compatriots an amused glance. PICARD That would be a bit hard to explain. STAR TREK: "The Big Good-bye" - 10/14/87 - ACT TWO 21. 41 CONTINUED: (2) BELL Yeah? Well you'll have plenty of time to come up with something. You're goin' downtown. PICARD What for? BELL For the murder of Jessica Bradley. 42 INT. MAIN BRIDGE - WIDE ANGLE Geordi and Wesley are at Ops and Conn, Tasha at Security, Worf at Science One. Riker EXITS the turbolift and STEPS ONTO the bridge... RIKER Status report? TASHA We're being probed, sir. RIKER The Jarada. TASHA Most likely. But it's long range. Can't be certain where it's originating.. The bridge SHUDDERS, and a brief HISSING NOISE is HEARD coming from the consoles... 43 INT. ENTERPRISE CORRIDOR The LIGHTS momentarily FLICKER as the probe races through the bowels of the ship. 44 INT. INTRANCE TO HOLODECK (OPTICAL) WE HEAR A HIGH PITCHED COMPUTER BLEEP, and the Holodeck doors open by themselves. WE CAN VAGUELY SEE the hallway leading to Dixon Hill's office. Then, abruptly, the doors slam shut. STAR TREK: "The Big Good-bye" - 10/14/87 - ACT TWO 22. 45 INT. MAIN BRIDGE - WIDE ANGLE The SHUDDERING STOPS. The probing has been terminated. RIKER (half-smile) One could get the feeling they don't exactly trust us. GEORDI Commander, I'm receiving a subspace message from the Jarada. RIKER That's not part of the plan. (pause) Pipe it through. The VOICE WE HEAR is alien and hive-like. To our ears it SOUNDS LIKE THREE VOICES IN ONE (a deep male voice, a high-pitched female voice, and a ten-year-old child's voice). JARADAN'S COM VOICE En-ter-prise. The time has come to honor us. We await your greeting. RIKER This is Commander Riker, first officer of the Enterprise -- JARADAN'S COM VOICE -- You are not captain?! RIKER No sir, I'm not. I suggest we commence with screen to screen communication so we can see each other -- This time when the Jaradan interrupts it sounds distinctly angry. WE CAN HEAR A FAINT BUZZING SOUND in the background... JARALAN'S COM VOICE -- You offend us! We will not show ourselves to a mere subordinate. We await your captain's greeting with growing unrest. End of communication! STAR TREK: "The Big Good-bye" - 10/14/87 - ACT TWO 23. 45 CONTINUED: RIKER (sighing) Terrific. He turns to Geordi. RIKER (continuing) Get the captain. You'll find him in the Holodeck. Geordi nods and EXITS the bridge. 46 MOVE IN ON RIKER staring at the screen... 47 INT. ENTRANCE TO HOLODECK - ON BEVERLY looking like a well-dressed woman from the forties. She straightens her dress, struggles with her handbag, and starts to step through the opening... Beverly only goes halfway before backing out. She seems puzzled and disoriented as she looks at the control panel wondering what went wrong. Looking a little worried, she tries again... 48 INT. POLICE STATION - ON BEVERLY This time stepping through effortlessly and coming out in a police station waiting room. Data and Whalen are examining the recreated memorabilia on the walls, while a police SERGEANT does paperwork at the front desk. Data turns to greet Beverly... DATA Hiya Doc. What's shakin'? (notes her pale look) Are you alright? BEVERLY I'm just a little dizzy, thank you. I had some trouble coming through. Where's Captain Picard? STAR TREK: "The Big Good-bye" - 10/14/87 - ACT TWO 24. 48 CONTINUED: DATA He's on ice. BEVERLY Pardon? DATA He's being grilled. BEVERLY (a little frustrated) What is he Data, a fish? WHALEN (laughing) The captain's being interrogated. (melodramatic) They think he's committed a murder. BEVERLY (a bit alarmed) Shouldn't we be doing something to help him? WHALEN Relax Doctor. It's all part of the game. Believe me, he's having the time of his life in there. 49 INT. INTERROGATION ROOM - CLOSE ON PICARD his face brightly lit. Little beads of sweat dot his forehead... PICARD I've told you everything I know. BELL (O.S.) Yeah? Well, you're just gonna have to tell us again. From the top. Picard leans back in his chair and smiles at his questioners. Their cigarette smoke swirls around his head, illuminated by the harsh white light. PICARD Very good. I've read all this before. It's exactly as it should be. STAR TREK: "The Big Good-bye" - 10/14/87 - ACT TWO 25. 49 CONTINUED: BELL (O.S.) Spill it! 50 INT. HOLODECK ENTRANCE (CORRIDOR) - CLOSE ON GEORDI A grave look on his face. He punches the intercom. GEORDI La Forge to bridge. RIKER'S COM VOICE Riker here. GEORDI (with difficulty) I can't find the captain, sir. 51 INT. MAIN BRIDGE - ON RIKER RIKER I told you, he's in the Holodeck. 52 INT. HOLODECK ENTRANCE (CORRIDOR) - CLOSE ON GEORDI GEORDI Something's... gone wrong. 53 INT. MAIN BRIDGE - WIDE ANGLE There's silence on the bridge. Everyone's heard the strange halting tone of Lieutenant La Forge. He sounds serious. RIKER What are you saying Lieutenant? 54 INT. HOLODECK ENTRANCE (CORRIDOR) - ON GEORDI PULL BACK SLOWLY as Geordi stops trying to access the panel. GEORDI I can't communicate with them. I can't access the program -- and I can't open the doors. FADE OUT. END OF ACT TWO STAR TREK: "The Big Good-bye" - 10/14/87 - ACT THREE 26. ACT THREE FADE IN: 55 EXT. SPACE - ENTERPRISE (OPTICAL) RIKER (V.O.) Ship's log, supplemental. First officer reporting. Due to an unknown breakdown in the Holodeck, we are unable to locate the captain and his party... 56 OMITTED 57 INT. MAIN BRIDGE - OVERHEAD SHOT, MOVING IN ON RIKER RIKER Tasha, take over. I'm going to Holdeck Three. 58 WIDER ANGLE Wesley, at Ops, spins in his chair to face Riker. WESLEY Commander?... I've studied all the technical manuals on the Holodeck. I think I could be of some help down there. RIKER Geordi's well equipped to deal with the situation, Wes. Right now, your duties are on the bridge. TROI (softly) His mother's in there too, sir. RIKER Come on, Wesley. WESLEY Thank you sir. They EXIT the bridge and Tasha takes Riker's seat. STAR TREK: "The Big Good-bye" - 10/14/87 - ACT THREE 27. 59 INT. INTERROGATION ROOM - WIDE ANGLE The captain is still sitting under the hot light of an arc lamp. Bell is leaning forward, intensely grilling him. McNary stands in the shadows... BELL ... And you say you'd never met her before she came to hire you. PICARD I've already told you that. Twice. BELL Yeah? Well you're gonna tell me again. PICARD (rising) Look fellows, this is no longer amusing. The big cop roughly shoves Picard back into his seat. Picard is surprised by the amount of force he uses. McNary quickly moves in, restraining his partner. McNARY Easy, Mike! He moves the steaming detective away from Picard. BELL You think you're tough, Hill! But you're nothing! You're garbage! Bell angrily shakes free from his partner's grasp. McNary goes over and crouches by Picard. McNARY (small smile) Don't take him too seriously, Dix. His old lady's been giving him a hard time. You know how it is. PICARD I need to get out of here. McNARY Yeah. I'll see what I can do. STAR TREK: "The Big Good-bye" - 10/14/87 - ACT THREE 28. 60 INT. POLICE STATION WAITING ROOM - WIDE ANGLE Whalen and Data continue to move about the room, fascinated by everything from the chairs to the light bulbs. To them, this is a firsthand look at ancient history. Beverly is once again struggling with her handbag when she notices that the desk sergeant is staring at her... BEVERLY (moving toward him) Something on your mind? SERGEANT Yeah. But I'm not sure I can repeat it in mixed company. (leering) You're a pretty hep lookin' broad. BEVERLY Is that good? SERGEANT It ain't bad. You like Charlie McCarthy? BEVERLY McCarthy?... Oh, you mean the man who hunted Communist witches. SERGEANT (lecherous) I got two tickets to the show tomorrow night. DATA (O.S.) Do you mind if I experiment with this device? Data is standing beside the desk, gazing at a vending machine. The sergeant is greatly annoyed at being interrupted while making his move. SERGANT I don't care what you do. DATA Thanks, Mac. The sergeant is about to continue, but is once again sidetracked by Data. The android is going haywire, pulling lever after lever at super speed. The sergeant can't believe his eyes. STAR TREK: "The Big Good-bye" - 10/14/87 - ACT THREE 29. 60 CONTINUED: SERGEANT Who is this jerk? 61 INT. INTERROGATION ROOM - WIDE ANGLE Bell and McNary have been arguing in a corner of the room. As McNary approaches Picard, it's clear that he's won for the time being. McNARY Okay Dix. We're bustin' you out of here. PICARD (rising) That's welcome news. BELL (calling out, hostile) You better not try to leave town. PICARD (wry) It's been a pleasure, sir. Bell glowers at him and EXITS the room, slamming the door behind him. PICARD (dryly) I get the feeling he doesn't like me. McNARY We know you're dealing with The Fat Man, Dixon. Take it from a friend; it doesn't help your case. PICARD I'll keep it in mind. He rises and offers his hand to McNary. For some reason it really does feel like he's an old and trusted friend. PICARD Thank you. For helping me. STAR TREK: "The Big Good-bye" - 10/14/87 - ACT THREE 30. 61 CONTINUED: McNARY Forget it. (pats Picard's shoulder) When you comin' over for supper? The kids'd love to see you, and you know how much you love Sharon's cooking. PICARD (thoughtful smile) Soon, my friend. But at the moment I have other duties. McNARY Blonde or brunette? The two men share a laugh. McNary opens the door... PICARD (choosing his words) She's a lady all right... and her name's Enterprise. McNARY Sounds like a working girl. (laughs) I'll stop by the office with a bottle of scotch. You can tell me all about her. 62 INT. WAITING ROOM - WIDE ANGLE Picard steps out into the waiting room. WHALEN Have a good time? PICARD I'm not sure. Sometimes it seemed too real. (to Beverly) Glad you could make it. (looks her up and down) I must say, you wear it well. BEVERLY (sly smile) Why thank you, Mister Hill. They lock eyes for a moment... STAR TREK: "The Big Good-bye" - 10/14/87 - ACT THREE 31. 62 CONTINUED: PICARD I think it's time we got back to the Enterprise. WHALEN (good-natured) We are on the Enterprise, Captain. PICARD (chuckling) Yes. Of course we are. BEVERLY Do we have time to see your office? PICARD I don't see why not. Picard leads them to the door. Data begins to struggle with the doorknob. He pushes and pulls on it as the others look on in amusement. Finally Whalen reaches over and shows him the way. Picard pulls the door open... 63 INT. OPEN DOOR LEADING TO HALLWAY (OPTICAL) WE CAN SEE the hallway in Dixon Hill's office building. PICARD The Holodeck makes excellent use of a finite space. 64 INT. DIXON HILL'S WAITING ROOM They ENTER to find the same little man we saw before, waiting for Dixon Hill. LEECH Ah, Mister Hill. You've been avoiding me. WHALEN (to Picard) It's Felix Leech! It has to be. STAR TREK: "The Big Good-bye" - 10/14/87 - ACT THREE 32. 64 CONTINUED: LEECH You know me, sir? WHALEN Well, I've read about you. Many times. Picard steps past Leech, leading his crew into the office... PICARD I'm sorry Mister Leech, but we really must be going. Call again tomorrow. Leech follows them, growing angry... LEECH You're being quite rude, Mister Hill. You haven't even introduced me to your charming companions. Picard goes to the exiting place. PICARD That'll have to wait. LEECH (raising voice) We have business! Urgent business. Picard turns to see that Leech has pulled a gun on him. LEECH (continuing) You're not going anywhere. Not until we have a little chat. 65 thru OMITTED 66 67 INT. MAIN BRIDGE as Tasha punches the intercom... TASHA Bridge to Holodeck. We're approaching Torona Four. STAR TREK: "The Big Good-bye" - 10/14/87 - ACT THREE 33. 68 INT. HOLODECK ENTRANCE - ANGLE ON RIKER with Wesley, Geordi and technicians working behind him. RIKER Any word from the Jarada? TASHA'S COM VOICE Not a thing, sir. RIKER They may be testing us. Seeing if we'll stick to the arrangements. TASHA'S COM VOICE What do we do now, sir? WORF We wait. GEORDI (to Riker) Everything checks out so far. Ensign Crusher believes the trouble may have been caused by the Jaradan probe. If so, it could be very difficult to locate. 69 thru OMITTED 70 71 INT. DIXON HILL'S OFFICE - WIDE ANGLE Leech is still holding a gun on everyone. LEECH (perturbed) I'm not a man to be toyed with, Mister Hill. You were hired to locate a certain object. I demand to know what you've done with it. PICARD I can't help you, Mister Leech. I'm afraid this game is over. LEECH I assure you, this is no game! STAR TREK: "The Big Good-bye" - 10/14/87 - ACT THREE 34. 71 CONTINUED: WHALEN (laughing) Take it from me Leech, you'll never find it. (moves toward him) Now... give me the gun. Whalen takes another step -- a SHOT RINGS OUT. The historian staggers backwards, amazed at the hole in his chest. A circle of blood spreads as he slumps to the floor. Beverly rushes to him, he looks up at Picard, shock registering on his pale face. WHALEN (continuing; softly) But... they're not real. BEVERLY This man has been shot. If we don't get him to Sickbay, he'll die. This game is now being played for keeps. FADE OUT. END OF ACT THREE STAR TREK: "The Big Good-bye" - 10/14/87 - ACT FOUR 35. ACT FOUR FADE IN: 72 INT. DIXON HILL'S OFFICE - WIDE ANGLE Beverly is ministering to the fallen form of Whalen. BEVERLY There's massive internal bleeding -- PICARD How could this happen? LEECH It'll happen again if you don't cooperate. Picard is furious. He lunges at Leech, striking him and knocking the gun from his hands. Leech is startled, backing out of the room, wide-eyed... LEECH (continuing) You struck me! How dare you! When Picard moves toward him, he backpedals hurriedly to the door. LEECH (continuing; almost hyperventilating) You'll be sorry! The Fat Man isn't going to like this! He SCOOTS OUT the door and around the corner. Picard instinctively starts to go after him-- BEVERLY We have to get him to Sickbay! PICARD (to computer) Exit! They look to the wall. No response. PICARD (continuing) Computer! Exit! STAR TREK: "The Big Good-bye" - 10/14/87 - ACT FOUR 36. 72 CONTINUED: Still no response. PICARD (continuing) We'll try the other exit. Data dashes to the other exit. 72A ON DATA At the non-existent exit. DATA Computer! Identify exit! Nothing happens. Data turns and sprints back to the others. 72B FULL SHOT. Data REJOINS the group. DATA There is a programming malfunction. The computer refuses to identify the exits. BEVERLY I'm losing his pulse! Picard GOES TO the wall. PICARD Computer, this is the captain! Identify exit! He walks along the wall, pounding it angrily, hunting for the exit. 73 INT. MAIN BRIDGE - WIDE ANGLE RIKER Standard orbit, Mister Worf. WORF Aye sir, standard orbit. 74 OMITTED STAR TREK: "The Big Good-bye" - 10/14/87 - ACT FOUR 37. 75 INT. MAIN BRIDGE - ANGLE EMPHASIZING RIKER who's looking at the screen with great concern and more than a little anger. He punches the intercom... RIKER Riker to Holodeck. 76 INT. HOLODECK ENTRANCE - ON GEORDI AND WESLEY intensely examining a complex circuitry panel. GEORDI (trace of frustration) Nothing yet, Commander. 77 INT. MAIN BRIDGE - ON RIKER fit to be tied. RIKER We're running out of time. 78 thru OMITTED 80 81 INT. DIXON HILL'S OFFICE - WIDE ANGLE The three from the Enterprise are still combing the walls. BEVERLY It's no use. It's just not here anymore. Picard backs away from the wall, looking grim. PICARD Suggestions, Mister Data? DATA I am at a loss. We are in a Holodeck-created building of 1941. The computer has refused to accept voice commands. The controls for the environment are therefore not accessible. They are outside in the reality of the Holodeck. BEVERLY I could use some light. STAR TREK: "The Big Good-bye" - 10/14/87 - ACT FOUR 38. 81 CONTINUED: Data grabs a floor lamp to help Beverly. He is mystified by the lamp cord, when it pulls from its socket and the lamp GOES OUT. Picard quickly solves the problem by hitting a wall switch and ILLUMINATING the room from the overhead lights. Data replaces the lamp cord in the socket when the SOUNDS OF FOOTSTEPS are HEARD coming down the hall. 82 ANGLE ON THE DOOR Three shadows are seen through the glass. This time, no one bothers to knock. Leech ENTERS, FOLLOWED BY A GUN-TOTING THUG. It's clear this isn't a friendly visit. These two move aside so that a Third Man can enter. CYRUS REDBLOCK STROLLS IN slowly. He's a massive man -- imposing in his white Panama suit and straw hat. He hangs his hat on a rack and wipes his sweaty brow with a large white handkerchief. REDBLOCK (gravelly, clipped British accent) Good day, Mister Hill. My name is Cyrus Redblock. I hope you don't mind us dropping in. PICARD I see I have no choice. REDBLOCK (explosive laugh) Life is an endless stream of choices. Unfortunately, you have chosen to make my life more difficult. Redblock's beady eyes are already searching the room. REDBLOCK (continuing) I don't suppose you'd be foolish enough to hide it here. PICARD I don't suppose so. STAR TREK: "The Big Good-bye" - 10/14/87 - ACT FOUR 39. 82 CONTINUED: REDBLOCK Still, I'm sure you won't mind if we take a look around. BEVERLY I wish you'd quit asking, since it's obvious you're going to do it anyway. It's a big waste of time. REDBLOCK Good manners, Madam, are never a waste. (to Picard and Data) Civility, gentlemen. Always civility. With his thug wielding a gun, Redblock prods Picard and company into Dixon Hill's office. Upon seeing Whalen's body, Redblock loses some of his gentlemanly air... REDBLOCK (continuing; to thug) Get that stiff out of here. BEVERLY He's not dead. REDBLOCK From his pallor, he soon will be. THUG You want I should throw him in the garbage, boss? REDBLOCK The next room will do nicely for now. His henchman starts to comply. Picard moves to stop him, but Leech quickly puts a gun to his head. REDBLOCK (continuing; to Leech) Which one struck you? LEECH (indignant) It was Hill. Redblock nods at Leech, who uses his gun to backhand Picard across the face. A trickle of blood is a tangible reminder of the hazards of this world. STAR TREK: "The Big Good-bye" - 10/14/87 - ACT FOUR 40. 82 CONTINUED: (2) REDBLOCK For every action, there is an equal and opposite reaction. A truism that you have sadly neglected. The front door opens and an unsuspecting Lieutenant McNary WALKS IN. He's quickly disarmed by the thug and brought before Redblock and Leech. McNARY (to Picard) I saw your light and figured you were working late. (looks around room) Guess I was right. He takes a long look at Redblock and Leech... McNARY (continuing; cool) Nice company you're keeping, Dix. You forget to take the trash out this morning? The thug slugs McNary in the stomach, doubling him over. Redblock wipes his brow... REDBLOCK I'm a tolerant man, but I don't tolerate disrespect. DATA Your devotion to etiquette is highly admirable, sir. However, your methods leave much to be desired. For the first time, Redblock and Leech turn their attention to the dapper man with the silvery skin. They move toward him, menacingly... REDBLOCK What have we here? LEECH Looks like a ghost. REDBLOCK Where do you suppose he's from? STAR TREK: "The Big Good-bye" - 10/14/87 - ACT FOUR 41. 82 CONTINUED: (3) Leech moves closer, grabbing Data's hat and circling him for a better look. Looking at Leech, with his bulging, sleepy eyes, Data feels like an ant under a microscope. Leech breaks into a slow devious smile, as he holds a gun to Data's chin. LEECH Where were you hatched, anyway? Data looks to Picard, then back at Leech DATA Central America. Redblock pushes the gun aside and stands nose to nose with Data. REDBLOCK (fascinated, half-whisper) I've been all over this world and I must say, I've not seen anything like you. PICARD He's not from this world. None of us are. Redblock's first reaction is surprise. He quickly smothers it with laughter. Picard elaborates, using Redblock's legendary greed as an enticement. PICARD (continuing) We come from a world of fabulous riches. A world of objects -- far greater in value than the one you seek. 83 CLOSE ON REDBLOCK Of course he doesn't believe it, but the mere thought of this kind of world has his head buzzing. 84 TWO SHOT TO INCLUDE LEECH who senses what's on Redblock's mind. Leech somehow feels threatened by these thoughts... STAR TREK: "The Big Good-bye" - 10/14/87 - ACT FOUR 42. 84 CONTINUED: LEECH (to Picard, angry) That's ridiculous! You're a private dick. We've met before and you never mentioned any of this. McNARY He's right, Dix. That's pretty weak stuff. I can't even buy that line of guff. PICARD I am not Dixon Hill. BEVERLY (to others) He's not! 85 CLOSE ON McNARY rolling his eyes. PICARD I only look like Dixon Hill. DATA (to Redblock) He speaks the truth, sir. From your point of view, he is only a fiction, a facsimile, a knock-off, a cheap imitation. PICARD Thank you, Mister Data. DATA (to Picard, chagrined) Sorry sir, that did not come out quite the way I interded. 86 ANGLE ON REDBLOCK rubbing his chin, sporting an evil grin... STAR TREK: "The Big Good-bye" - 10/14/87 - ACT FOUR 43. 86 CONTINUED: REDBLOCK Very good. Very, very, good. What wonderful fiction! Quite entertaining. I admire your skill at trying to obfuscate our sense of reality. DATA It is you who are not real, sir. PICARD Data-- DATA (innocently) It is you who are imaginary characters derived from a work of fiction. 87 ANGLE ON LEECH not liking what he's hearing, as though deep down he sensed it was true. 88 WIDE ANGLE McNARY Give it up, fellas. These guys are too smart to fall for that story. DATA (apologetic) I am afraid you are not real either, Lieutenant. 89 ON McNARY who feels a cold flash for an instant, then shakes his head derisively. 90 ANGLE ON LEECH LEECH I don't want to hear any more of this! You're making me crazy! STAR TREK: "The Big Good-bye" - 10/14/87 - ACT FOUR 44. 91 TWO SHOT - BEVERLY AND LEECH PICARD Deep down, you all sense the truth. Deep down, you know you're not real. All of you. LEECH (waving gun) Shut up!! (growing frantic) Let me shoot them, Mister Redblock. Let me kill them, one by one. 92 FULL SHOT Beverly is still tending Whalen while Redblock is pondering what to do. REDBLOCK (analytical) A most interesting situation. Perhaps we should test this theory by killing one of them. BEVERLY You've already done that! This man is dying! This whole thing is senseless! REDBLOCK Hardly! Senseless killing is immoral. But killing for a purpose is often ingenious. LEECH Well said, Mister Redblock. What's our purpose? Leech pulls out a stiletto, casually places it against Picard's chest. As he speaks, he slowly begins to pluck the buttons off Picard's shirt... REDBLOCK We are on a quest for knowledge, Mister Leech. (to Picard) We want the item. He coolly runs the blade over Picard's Adam's apple... STAR TREK: "The Big Good-bye" - 10/14/87 - ACT FOUR 45. 92 CONTINUED: PICARD We don't have it. LEECH Shall I kill him? REDBLOCK No, kill the woman! 93 thru OMITTED 94 95 ON BEVERLY trying to maintain her composure as Leech's gun COMES INTO FRAME, pointed straight at her head. FADE OUT: END OF ACT FOUR 12:[2,#b] STAR TREK: "The Big Good-bye" - 10/14/87 - ACT FIVE 46. ACT FIVE FADE IN: 96 INT. DIXON HILL'S OFFICE - WIDE ANGLE Leech is poised to pull the trigger... PICARD Redblock. I have the item. 97 ANGLE ON REDBLOCK intrigued by Picard's offer. REDBLOCK At last. I knew it! God, man, you are a character! Waiting until the last moment! Testing my resolve! What an ally you would make! Now -- where is it? 98 TWO SHOT - REDBLOCK AND PICARD PICARD I'll explain. But first, tell Leech to back off. 99 WIDER ANGLE Redblock mulls it over. REDBLOCK Put the gun down, Mister Leech. Leech's shoulders slump. He's gravely disappointed. LEECH But I want to kill her! REDBLOCK Perhaps later. It won't harm us to listen to Mister Hill. MCNARY Don't make any deals with that slime, Dix! Redblock's thug raps McNary's chin with his gun, knocking the detective to the ground. STAR TREK: "The Big Good-bye" - 10/14/87 - ACT FIVE 47. 99 CONTINUED: REDBLOCK (to Picard) Begin. Make your thoughts fruitful and your words eloquent. (rumbling laugh) Your lovely friend's life depends upon it. PICARD There is a price. REDBLOCK By God, man, I knew we were of the same stripe. Name it. PICARD Mister Whalen's life. You must help us save him. 100 OMITTED 101 INT. MAIN BRIDGE - WIDE ANGLE Riker is standing between the Conn and the Ops looking over Worf's shoulder at something on his monitor. Suddenly, the bridge CRACKLES with BLUE LIGHT, knocking Riker off balance... RIKER What the devil -- TASHA Probes! I'm reading several of them, sir. All locked on to us. WORF Verified. Coming from the Jaradans! 102 OMITTED STAR TREK: "The Big Good-bye" - 10/14/87 - ACT FIVE 48. 103 INT. MAIN BRIDGE - WIDE ANGLE Worf and Tasha work furiously to counteract the beams. WE CAN HEAR the steady DRONE of the Enterprise's ENGINES, straining to meet the challenge... RIKER (angry) Open hailing frequencies. TASHA Frequencies open, sir. RIKER This is Commander Riker, aboard the Enterprise. We demand that you -- Riker cuts off as a LOUD NOISE COMES OVER THE COM, drowning him out. It's the SOUND OF BUZZING, as though a microphone had been stuck down an angry hornets' nest. RIKER (continuing; holding ears) Cut that off! Tasha does so, and the only thing WE HEAR is the HARD PRESSED SOUND of the ship's ENGINES. 104 INT. ENTRANCE TO HOLODECK - ON GEORDI Wesley and Technicians in background. GEORDI (into Com) Lieutenant La Forge to bridge. RIKER'S COM VOICE Riker here. GEORDI Is everything all right, sir? We felt quite a surge down here -- RIKER'S COM VOICE Yes. Status report. GEORDI We think we have something, sir. I'll let Ensign Crusher explain. STAR TREK: "The Big Good-bye" - 10/14/87 - ACT FIVE 49. 104 CONTINUED: Wesley is examining a dismantled panel of circuitry, using a pointed bifocal instrument that allows him to see microscopically. WESLEY (speaking up) I've found three -- 105 INT. MAIN BRIDGE - ON RIKER RIKER Forget the explanation! Can you repair it? 106 INT. HOLODECK ENTRANCE - ON WESLEY WESLEY I don't know if I should. If this isn't done correctly, the program could abort and everyone inside could vanish. RIKER'S COM VOICE Do you need more time to study it? WESLEY No, sir. Whether we do it now or later, the risk will be the same. 107 INT. MAIN BRIDGE - ON RIKER as he thinks for a moment. RIKER Do it. 108 INT. DIXON HILL'S OFFICE - WIDE ANGLE PICARD (passionate, to Redblock) If we can find the way of getting him to our Sickbay by fixing our computer -- STAR TREK: "The Big Good-bye" - 10/14/87 - ACT FIVE 50. 108 CONTINUED: REDBLOCK Computer? I do not know this word. Picard sighs. Nothing is coming easy... 109 INT. HOLODECK ENTRANCE - CLOSE ON WESLEY working on the circuitry. 110 INT. DIXON HILL'S OFFICE - ON DATA, REDBLOCK AND LEECH DATA -- A mechanical or electronic apparatus capable of carrying out repetitious and highly complex mathematical operations at high speed. 111 ANGLE ON LEECH becoming infuriated with Data's rambling definition. DATA (O.S.) Computers are used to control, perform, process, or store -- LEECH Enough! (to Redblock) Let me kill him. He's beginning to irritate me. 112 FLASH CUT TO WESLEY working intently. There is a BLUE FLASH. 113 BACK TO HILL'S OFFICE where Leech is taking aim at Data. Suddenly, the ENTIRE SETTING CHANGES and all involved find themselves in A SNOWY ALIEN LANDSCAPE. The wind is howling like a bitch, driving Leech to his knees and ripping the hat off the thug's head. STAR TREK: "The Big Good-bye" - 10/14/87 - ACT FIVE 51. 113 CONTINUED: This is a hellish place -- imagine the North Pole in a hurricane. The wind is screaming like a banshee; chilling everyone to the bone. Then, just as suddenly, they're ALL BACK IN THE OFFICE. They're frozen in their tracks, still shell-shocked and shivering from the sudden change in climate. 114 CLOSE ON McNARY amazed by what's happened. 115 CLOSE ON LEECH terrified by what's happened. 116 MOVE IN ON REDBLOCK intrigued by what's happened. 117 BACK TO SHOT DATA (indicating wall) Captain, the exit... The BLUE STREAK has REAPPEARED on the closet door... PICARD (to Redblock) That's it! The way into our world. Leech is still trembling, looking around paranoically as though waiting to be transported back to that frozen hell. But Redblock has shaken off the snowy cold. He waddles up to the exit spot and examines it with great interest. REDBLOCK Remarkable. Is this a two-way passage? Can one enter your world and return to this one simply by stepping through? STAR TREK: "The Big Good-bye" - 10/14/87 - ACT FIVE 52. 117 CONTINUED: PICARD Yes. Allow us to help Mister Whalen, and we'll return with the item. 118 EXTREMELY CLOSE ON REDBLOCK his beady eyes aglow, his swollen tongue sliding over his parched lips as he thinks of the item. He begins to chuckle... it grows into a laugh... then a belly laugh... 119 PULL BACK as Redblock practically explodes with laughter. Soon the thugs are joining in. Finally, even the weak-kneed Leech has broken into little machine gun bursts of laughter. REDBLOCK (to Picard) By God, sir, you are a scamp! To think that I would wait here -- DATA If you are thinking of going through yourself sir, I can assure you that is not possible. REDBLOCK Not possible! (laughs again) One look at you sir, proves anything is possible. Picard is eyeing the exit, wondering if he should try and make a break for it. The Thug pulls a large pistol. REDBLOCK Stand back, Mister Hill. I would shoot you myself, but I don't want to rob my assistant of his greatest pleasure. THUG Thanks, boss. STAR TREK: "The Big Good-bye" - 10/14/87 - ACT FIVE 53. 119 CONTINUED: REDBLOCK (to thug) After we've gone, kill them all. Make sure no one ever finds the bodies. McNARY You're insane! You think you can kill a cop and get away with it? REDBLOCK Why not? I've done it before. Come, Mister Leech. Leech joins him, still a little tentative. Redblock takes a long look at the exit. REDBLOCK (continuing; dramatic) Our destiny awaits. (to Picard) Au revoir et bon chance, mon ami! Side by side, the two Men STEP THROUGH the portal. The thug puts the gun on Picard. Data steps forward and pinches its muzzle closed. The thug makes a move to Data and Data decks him. 120 INT. ENTERPRISE HALLWAY - CLOSE ON REDBLOCK AND LEECH The glitch is still glitching -- they have come out though a back wall of the Holodeck, not the main Holodeck entrance. They step out into an empty hallway. Leech is bug-eyed and nervous. Redblock is wide-eyed and deliriously happy... REDBLOCK (whisper) Another world. (louder) A whole new world to plunder! LEECH (flat) Uh-oh. REDBLOCK (irritated) What is it? STAR TREK: "The Big Good-bye" - 10/14/87 - ACT FIVE 54. 120 CONTINUED: Too mesmerized to speak, Leech simply nods down toward their feet. Redblock looks down and SHRIEKS... 121 PULL BACK (OPTICAL) to SEE that they are each DEMATERIALIZING, from the bottom up. They look on in abstract horror as their feet and legs completely DISAPPEAR. Redblock cries out to the heavens as his chest VAPORIZES... REDBLOCK Nooo!! I want to live!! I want-- Their torsos and heads go the same way, until THERE IS NOTHING LEFT.... 122 INT. ENTRANCE TO HOLODECK - ON GEORDI AND WESLEY GEORDI (into Com) We've done it, but still no sign of them. 123 OMITTED 124 INT. ENTRANCE TO HOLODECK GEORDI Should we go inside? 125 INT. DIXON HILL'S WAITING ROOM - WIDE ANGLE PICARD (to Data, indicating Exit) Pick him up. Get him to Sickbay. DATA What about you? PICARD I'll follow you. Now go! Picking their way through the Office, Data, carrying Whalen, and Beverly EXIT. STAR TREK: "The Big Good-bye" - 10/14/87 - ACT FIVE 55. 125 CONTINUED: Picard turns to McNary. PICARD I can't think of a way to thank you. You know I can't take you with me. MCNARY (nodding) Someone's gotta book this creep. (indicates thug) Once a cop always a cop, I guess. The OFFICE FLOOR RUMBLES again. PICARD (empathetic) I have to go. McNARY So this is the big good-bye. They shake hands like two old friends who are about to part forever. This is The Big Good-bye. 126 MOVE IN ON THEM McNARY Tell me something, Dixon. (worried) When you've gone.... will this world still exist?.. Will my wife and kids still be waiting for me at home? PICARD (pause, sadly) I honestly don't know. Good-bye my friend. Picard STEPS THROUGH. After a few moments, McNary's entire world goes PITCH BLACK. 127 INT. ENTRANCE TO HOLODECK - ON THEM Picard steps back out onto the Enterprise. Data hurriedly takes Whalen away. Wesley rushes to Beverly, who hugs him as she follows Data. STAR TREK: "The Big Good-bye" - 10/14/87 - ACT FIVE 56. 128 OMITTED 129 INT. MAIN BRIDGE - WIDE ANGLE TASHA Captain! Picard hurries to the Command Area and takes his seat. RIKER Are you ready, sir? PICARD As ready as I'll ever be. Open hailing frequencies. TASHA Frequencies open. PICARD (into com, commandingly) This is Jean-Luc Picard, captain of the USS Enterprise. Aaaaard kraxon Leeeeesss... 130 EXT. SPACE - ENTERPRISE IN ORBIT (OPTICAL) 131 INT. MAIN BRIDGE - WIDE ANGLE (OPTICAL) Picard is finishing his greeting. The others on the bridge are holding completely still, praying that nothing goes wrong... PICARD Risssssss... Trassssss.... Trasulah! The captain has completed his recitation. There's dead silence as the officers await the Jaradan reaction. WE SEE their faces as the JARADAN LEADER APPEARS on Screen. WE SEE him from the shoulders up... He is indeed wasp-like: black and yellow, with pointed insectile features and waving black antennae. JARADAN'S COM VOICE You have... honored us with your words of greeting. A new day dawns between us. STAR TREK: "The Big Good-bye" - 10/14/87 - ACT FIVE 57. 131 CONTINUED: There's great joy and relief on the bridge. Picard takes a deep breath. Riker smiles at him... RIKER (nonchalant) So... Have a nice vacation? Picard gives him a long smile, but doesn't answer... PICARD It was a nice place to visit, but I wouldn't want to die there. 132 EXT. SPACE - ENTERPRISE (OPTICAL) PULLING OUT of orbit, and HEADING for deep space... FADE OUT. END OF ACT FIVE THE END STAR TREK: THE NEXT GENERATION "Datalore" #40271-114 Story by Robert Lewin and Maurice Hurley Teleplay by Robert Lewin and Gene Roddenberry Directed by Rob Bowman Copyright 1987 Paramount Pictures Corporation. All Rights Reserved. This script is not for publication or reproduction. No one is authorized to dispose of same. If lost or destroyed, please notify the Script Department. REVISED FINAL DRAFT OCTOBER 26, 1987 STAR TREK: "Datalore" - 10/26/87 - CAST STAR TREK: THE NEXT GENERATION "Datalore" CAST PICARD RIKER BEVERLY DATA (plus DATA as LORE) DATA/LORE (PHOTO-DOUBLE) TASHA WORF GEORDI WESLEY CHIEF ENGINEER ARGYLE COMPUTER VOICE (MAJEL BARRETT) STAR TREK: "Datalore" - 10/26/87 - SETS STAR TREK: THE NEXT GENERATION "Datalore" SETS INTERIORS EXTERIORS USS ENTERPRISE USS ENTERPRISE Main bridge Data's Quarters DATA'S PLANET Sickbay Observation Lounge CRYSTAL ENTITY Corridor Captain's Ready Room turbolift Cargo Room Transporter Three DATA'S PLANET Underground Complex Colony Laboratory Storage Area corridor STAR TREK: "Datalore" - 10/26/87 - TEASER 1. STAR TREK: THE NEXT GENERATION "Datalore" TEASER FADE IN: 1 EXT. SPACE - THE ENTERPRISE (OPTICAL) traveling at high warp against an array of stars. PICARD (V.O.) Captain's log, stardate 41242.4. Our last assignment has taken us into the remote Omicron Theta star system, home of our android crewmember Lieutenant Commander Data. Although we are due... 2 INT. MAIN BRIDGE (OPTICAL) Everyone at his regular station with the exception of Data whose station is manned by WESLEY. PICARD (V.O.) (continuing) ... at our next assignment, I have decided to increase velocity to warp eight to visit Data's home planet for a few hours in the hopes of unraveling some of the mystery of his beginnings. GEORDI turns to RIKER. GEORDI Sir, we are now twenty minutes from Omicron Theta... (checks reading) ... mark! Riker gets a nod from PICARD, replies to Geordi. RIKER Stand by for subwarp; head for standard orbit of Data's planet. (to Picard) Wonder why Data hasn't come up here. STAR TREK: "Datalore" - 10/26/87 - TEASER 2. 2 CONTINUED: PICARD He said he wanted to be alone. Perhaps it's a bigger moment for him than we thought. (turns to Wesley) If he needs a formal invitation, Ensign, you do the honors. WESLEY (to his feet) Yes sir! Wesley heads quickly toward the turbolift. PICARD Walk! Wesley slows to a walk. 3 INT. DATA'S QUARTERS Totally bare except for a quite sophisticated wall computer and a mirror on a tripod which DATA now stands in front of watching himself. He SNEEZES. It is not a good sneeze, comes off rather artificial. Data tries again, harder... but not much better. Then a CHIME and Wesley ENTERS. WESLEY (excitedly) Data... ! Data SNEEZES a third time. Wesley stops, puzzled. WESLEY (continuing) What are you doing? DATA Sneezing. WESLEY Have you got a... a "cold?" DATA A cold what? WESLEY It's a disease my mother says people used to get. STAR TREK: "Datalore" - 10/26/87 - TEASER 3. 3 CONTINUED: DATA (nods) Ah. But humans still sneeze for other reasons and I cannot seem to do it right. Another artificial sounding SNEEZE. WESLEY How can you be practicing sneezing when you're arriving for the first time at your home planet? Aren't you interested in that? Without changing tone of voice or expression, Data heads with Wesley for the door of the cabin. DATA More than interested. Fascinated. One might say agog. But I find sneezing interesting also. 4 INT. MAIN BRIDGE (OPTICAL) From the Main Viewer WE CAN SEE that the starship is at subwarp now, and a rather BROWNISH LOOKING PLANET IS COMING INTO VIEW in the distance. TASHA (checking readings) Confirming Class M reading there. But... (checks readings) ... but the sensors aren't showing any life readings. Not even vegetation. PICARD Strange. The cruiser that found Data reported farmland here. Data and Wesley EMERGE from the turbolift, CROSS ONTO the bridge. Riker turns to Data, indicates Helm. RIKER Want to take her into orbit, Data? DATA No thank you, sir. STAR TREK: "Datalore" - REV. 10/27/87 - TEASER 4. 4 CONTINUED: Riker, surprised, indicates for Wesley to fill Data's Helm position again. Data instead, walks forward and examines the PLANET COMING CLOSER, more than filling the Main Viewer screen. All eyes are on Data as he examines his home planet on the viewer, then turns and moves back to take a seat in the Command Area. PICARD Continue on into close parking orbit. GEORDI Aye, sir. DATA (beat; to Picard) I could say "home, sweet home," sir... if I understood how the word sweet applies. PICARD It usually refers to the memories. RIKER But usually one's own memories, Captain. (to Data) Do the memories you were given include "farms?" DATA Affirmative, sir. Turning soil, seeding, harvesting... but the colony's principal interest was science. TASHA Data, I can't understand how you can hold the memories of four hundred eleven people. If that means every experience, every day they lived... DATA It does not, unfortunately. It means only the knowledge they had accumulated. Actually, I am quite deficient in some basic human information. (to Picard) Sneezing, for example. STAR TREK: "Datalore" - REV. 10/27/87 - TEASER 5. 4 CONTINUED: (2) PICARD "Sneezing?" GEORDI Approaching close parking orbit, sir. PICARD (to Riker) Assemble your away party, Commander. Riker stands; Picard smiles at Data. PICARD (continuing) This is an exciting moment for you, Data. I'm tempted to lead the away team down myself, except for the fact the first officer would object... RIKER How would Starfleet judge me if I didn't, sir? An entire Earth colony did disappear down there. As Riker stands, replacements are ENTERING to take over the bridge positions of Geordi, Worf and Tasha who will move to the turbolift with him. WORF (to Data) You have no memory at all of what happened to them, Data? STAR TREK: "Datalore" - 10/26/87 - TEASER 6. 4 CONTINUED: (3) DATA My final memory is of great danger, something sudden and not understood... then a blank as if the colonists were gone. GEORDI Now in close parking orbit, sir. PICARD Welcome home, Mister Data. Data looks puzzled at this. Then he joins the away team which EXITS the bridge. FADE OUT: END OF TEASER STAR TREK: "Datalore" - REV. 10/27/87 - ACT ONE 7. ACT ONE FADE IN: 5 EXT. SPACE - ENTERPRISE IN ORBIT (OPTICAL) The starship in close orbit of Data's home planet. 6 EXT. DATA'S PLANET (OPTICAL) The Away Team of Riker, Data, GEORDI, TASHA and WORF MATERIALIZING on the planet surface. Far from it looking like farmland, the place is barren. They stand for a moment looking around -- Worf is alert to any security problems -- Tasha scans with her tricorder -- Riker is carefully looking over their surroundings -- Geordi kneels, inspecting the ground. TASHA (to Riker) Recording signal now locked onto the Enterprise, sir. RIKER (to Geordi) This looks like anything but farmland. GEORDI Agreed, sir. The soil here's completely lifeless. RIKER This is the exact position listed in the Tripoli log. (turning Do you recognize anything, Data? DATA The land contours are familiar, sir. Topographically, this is the correct area. Interrupted by Geordi who has begun crumbling soil close to his nose, examining it as he lets the fragments fall from his hand. STAR TREK: "Datalore" - REV. 10/27/87 - ACT ONE 8. 6 CONTINUED: GEORDI This once was rich farmland. I'd guess something like twenty to thirty years ago... DATA I was discovered twenty-six years ago... GEORDI (still sifting soil) There is still plant cellulose in the soil. No signs of decay. Also no signs of bacteria either. (looks up) If you don't mind a wild guess, sir, I'd say everything on this planet could have been dead or dying at the time Data was found. RIKER The Tripoli log stated that all plant life appeared brown and "dormant." They assumed it was normal for that season. GEORDI ... whereas actually everything was dying... DATA (interrupting; indicating) I was found twenty meters in that direction, sir. Data begins leading the way toward a narrow ledge leading down into a depression. 7 ANOTHER ANGLE as all follow Data's lead. TASHA (moving alongside Data) Data, any idea at all why you were given the colonists' memories? DATA I have always felt that it was done hurriedly, but I know little more. STAR TREK: "Datalore" - 10/26/87 - ACT ONE 9. 7 CONTINUED: Data stops where a small rectangular depression has been carved in the rock. DATA (continuing) Here, sir. This is where the cruiser's landing party found the signal device that had led them here. (indicates) And they found me lying there, sir. 8 ANOTHER ANGLE Data is leading them to a very undistinguished-looking stone pallet. This and the barren location look to be considerably less than the exciting mystery they have expected. TASHA You were just lying out in the open? No identity record, no instructions... ? DATA Only a layer of dust. Data bends, BLOWS, and a CLOUD OF DUST ARISES from the pallet. DATA (continuing) There's much more of it now, after twenty-six years. Only Geordi shows active interest in this place. He has moved off to begin scanning the area from different perspectives. RIKER What is the first thing you remember, Data? DATA Opening my eyes and finding myself looking into the eyes of the Tripoli landing party, sir. (MORE) STAR TREK: "Datalore" - REV. 10/27/87 - ACT ONE 10. 8 CONTINUED: DATA (Cont'd) (indicating the path back) They believed that the signal device sensed their presence, and activated me. TASHA Then this very spot was your birthplace... DATA But not at all like a human birth. Having the colonists' memories, I knew immediately how to speak, who I was, where I was... TASHA You were born and became fully knowledgeable at the same instant! DATA I had no idea that was unusual, of course. TASHA It's such a strange place to be born. RIKER So was a manger. WORF A "manger," sir? RIKER I won't even try to explain that one, Worf... GEORDI (calling) I understand now, sir! I've got this figured! Geordi moves in, indicating aspects of the area. GEORDI (continuing) It was really very cleverly done to make this look like a natural hollow in the terrain here. Signs of it being constructed hurriedly... STAR TREK: "Datalore" - REV. 10/27/87 - ACT ONE 11. 9 SPECIAL EFFECTS ANGLE Geordi moves to the rock face behind Data's "birth pallet," examining it very closely. GEORDI ... as if to hide something here. Data nods, seeming to understand more of this now. DATA Yes, that was it, Geordi. (to Riker) This has awakened a memory remnant of how the colonists hoped to remain hidden... (beat; concentrating) ... but their fear of being discovered led to their storing information in me. Geordi has brought his VISOR device within inches of a point on the rock facing. GEORDI Yes, I thought so. Geordi brings a finger carefully to an almost invisble crack on the rock facing... presses! A HUMMING SOUND and a SPECIAL EFFECT opening in the rock facing APPEARS. 10 INT. UNDERGROUND COMPLEX - ANGLE INTO THE ENTRY A curving tunnel. Geordi steps in closer, Riker and Data pressing in next. Geordi reaches out, touching something that suddenly ILLUMINATES the tunnel. Tasha, duty always, steps forward and scans the tunnel. Then to Riker: TASHA No life readings in here either, sir. Riker leads the way as the team cautiously heads into the tunnel. Worf and Tasha flank him, weapons ready, as they move into a rectangular corridor. 11 ANOTHER ANGLE as they continue to an intersecting corridor which features a familiar-looking type of sliding metal door. Geordi again makes a close examination of this, then touches a sensor switch. The sliding door OPENS. STAR TREK: "Datalore" - REV. 10/27/87 - ACT ONE 12. 12 INT. COLONY LABORATORY Similar to some very sophisticated things we've seen on the Enterprise, the lab is filled with equipment and instruments of the most sophisticated twenty-fourth century level. In addition to workbenches, etc. there is a prominent covered worktable which will figure in scenes here. The team ENTERS with Tasha at the lead, weapon in hand -- and with Worf professionally guarding their rear at the door to the corridor they entered from. Riker scans the lab. RIKER The colony laboratory, I'd guess. Extremely well equipped. (to Data) Does this place stir any memories, Data? DATA Only vague impressions of some of my functions being tested here, sir... Data indicates, moves toward a wall on which proud scientist parents had posted their children's drawings. Several of them PICTURE a crystal-like formation or design, obviously huge judging from the very tiny people who seem to be fleeing from it. Data pulls one of these drawings free, hands it to Riker. RIKER Posted by a proud parent... DATA (continuing) This pictures something that feels familiar, sir. And dangerous, although I have no idea what it represents. And that is all... Then Data indicates a desk/workbench combination which includes highly sophisticated-looking devices. DATA (continuing) ... except for an impression that this was a... "Doctor Soong's" work area. RIKER Who? You can't mean Doctor Noonien Soong? STAR TREK: "Datalore" - REV. 10/27/87 - ACT ONE 13. 12 CONTINUED: DATA (nods) He was called that here... although, his memories indicate he traveled here under a different name. GEORDI Doctor Noonien Soong, my friend, just happens to have been Earth's foremost robotics scientist! TASHA Until he tried to make Asimov's dream of a positronic brain come true. RIKER (nodding) The positronic brain. He promised it would do so much. When it failed completely, Doctor Soong disappeared. (eyes Data) Now we know he went off somewhere to try a second time. (turns; indicating) Geordi, Data, we'll take a close look at this lab. (to Tasha) You and Lieutenant Worf reconnoiter where the rest of these corridors lead. Tasha and Worf EXIT, AD LIBBING "Aye, sir." Geordi and Data choose areas to inspect while Riker concentrates on the Soong workbench. 13 ANOTHER ANGLE Riker moves to the large, thick laboratory table mentioned earlier. Whatever they've found out about it has lead Riker now to touch a control on it -- and it now hinges apart HUMMING and presenting the torso and head part of a human-shaped mold. Seeing what is happening, Geordi and Data hurry over. GEORDI (beat) Data... it's you. STAR TREK: "Datalore" - 10/26/87 - ACT ONE 14. 13 CONTINUED: Data hesitates, then reaches in and extracts a one-half head and shoulders portion of the mold, presses it against himself. It fits perfectly! RIKER An epidermal mold, I'd guess. Made to give your exterior the desired finish. TASHA'S COM VOICE Lieutenant Yar to Commander Riker. Riker touches his insignia. RIKER Come in, Lieutenant. TASHA'S COM VOICE Sir... this installation is big enough to hold hundreds of people. But all that's here now is empty beds. RIKER Thank you, Lieutenant. Complete your record scans, then report back here. GEORDI Sir... (bends) Seems to be a storage area here... Geordi has indeed discovered a storage area which he now opens. All three of them look, REACT. 14 ANGLE INCLUDING STORAGE AREA which REVEALS enough Data-like arms, torso and head to startle us. It also startles our away team members. The head looks surprisingly lifelike! (There are more Data-like parts further back in the storage area, apparontly enough to make up a whole Data if put together.) 15 ANGLE ON DATA, RIKER, AND GEORDI stunned. STAR TREK: "Datalore" - REV. 10/27/87 - ACT ONE 15. 15 CONTINUED: RIKER How many more Datas are there? GEORDI (looking around) Looks like just these two... (quickly apologetic) I mean that and the real Data. 16 PANNING THE REAL DATA and REVEALING the "DATA" HEAD as he bends to examine "himself." 17 INCLUDING RIKER AND GEORDI as Data straightens up INTO THE SCENE with them. DATA Commander, can this be another me? Or perhaps my brother? RIKER I honestly don't know, Data. DATA He needs assembling. RIKER "He?" Data, we don't know that this could become "alive." DATA It is of great interest to me to find out, sir. I never believed it possible I might have a link with some form like my own. RIKER (beat; nods) Understood. We'll take it back to the ship, of course. FADE OUT: END OF ACT ONE STAR TREK: "Datalore" - 10/26/87 - ACT TWO 16. ACT TWO FADE IN: 18 INT. MAIN BRIDGE - WIDE ANGLE Picard, Riker, Geordi, Tasha, Worf and Wesley at their regular positions. Tasha is receiving a subspace message, turns now toward Picard. TASHA Captain, I have a subspace reply to your request. (turns to Picard) Starfleet considers it vital we begin our ship's computer upgrade at Starbase Armus Nine on schedule. PICARD (annoyed) Damn. Can anyone see why they've turned down a perfectly legitimate request to finish this investigation here? WESLEY (waits; then) Sir... you asked for the kind of computer upgrade that only the Bynars can handle. And they're available only at this time. Picard is at first annoyed at Wesley, then turns to Riker, snapping an order: PICARD Then, get us there on schedule, Number One. (to Wesley; controlling self) Thank you, Wesley. I'd completely forgotten that. Wesley starts to say something more, but Riker quiets Wesley with a friendly warning gesture. RIKER Take us out of orbit, Mister La Forge. STAR TREK: "Datalore" - 10/26/87 - ACT TWO 17. 19 EXT. SPACE - ENTERPRISE (OPTICAL) We hold on our starship long enough to see it LEAVING orbit of Data's home planet. PICARD (V. O.) (continuing) Captain's log, Stardate 41242.45. Despite having only a few hours in which to explore Data's home planet... 20 INT. SICKBAY Where Doctor Crusher and CHIEF ENGINEER ARGYLE work with Medical and Engineering Specialists at an advanced type operating table containing the various parts of the unassembled android which was discovered. PICARD (V.O.) (continuing) ... we have discovered something which may explain Data's beginnings... if we can properly assemble and communicate with what we've found. 21 ANGLE EMPHASIZING DATA An expression of hope and longing on his face as he watches the medical and engineering people at work on the unassembled android. Doctor Beverly Crusher MOVES INTO SHOT with Data. She understands what the unassembled android means to him and her sympathy is obvious. BEVERLY Signal from the captain. They need you at the debriefing. Data nods as Chief Engineer Argyle MOVES INTO SHOT also, his sympathy obvious too. DATA I've been anxious to hear the chief engineer's opinion, Mister Argyle. Do you believe he can be made to function? STAR TREK: "Datalore" - 10/26/87 - ACT TWO 18. 21 CONTINUED: ARGYLE It appears to include all the components in your body. Not that we really understand your construction either... BEVERLY We'll have our top medical and engineering specialists working on its assembly, Mister Data. The Doctor and Engineer appear to hesitate over something uncomfortable. Data nods at their previous statement, moves as if to leave. ARGYLE Just... one thing. Without disassembling you, of course, if we should need... BEVERLY ... If we should need to compare this with the way... uh, with the way you're put together... ? Data nods his answer, turns and EXITS. 22 INT. OBSERVATION LOUNGE (OPTICAL) Outside, the passing stars reflect the fact our starship is at warp speed to make up for the delay at Data's planet. On the table, the child's drawing of a strange crystalline shape. Present are Picard, Riker, and Geordi. As before, they will continue treating Data as a living person but at times they may try a bit too hard to make that feeling clear. For some, their first meeting with Data was many years ago and they have long thought of him simply as a fellow crewmember. Now, with the discovery of the disassembled android form, they've been suddenly reminded that their friend is also a machine. It brings their emotions into play because they're concerned for Data. How does he feel about this remarkable happening? What should they say to him -- what words should they now use or not use? Meanwhile, Picard is speaking to Riker: STAR TREK: "Datalore" - 10/26/87 - ACT TWO 19. 22 CONTINUED: PICARD Bringing it up here was the right thing to do, of course, Number One. Picard trails his words as Data ENTERS and seats himself. Despite themselves, everyone stiffens a bit. PICARD (continuing) I was just saying, Data, that if it functions, it might answer a lot of questions for us. Data feels the tension too. He's sharing their discomfort, merely nodding at the captain's comment. An uncomfortable beat, then: RIKER Does it appear to have all your... ah, parts? DATA Completely, sir. GEORDI (beat) Will we know how to... to "turn it on?" PICARD All right, all right... (stands; hesitates, then) Legitimate questions about this need not be asked apologetically. (to Data) You're uncomfortable about aspects of your duplicate, Data... we're uncomfortable, too... and none of it for any logical reason. We know that you're as "alive" as any of the rest of us. (to the others) If you find it awkward to be reminded that Data is a "machine"... you might remember that the rest of you are merely a different variety of machine... in our case, electro-chemical in nature. (MORE) STAR TREK: "Datalore" - REV. 10/27/87 - ACT TWO 20. 22 CONTINUED: (2) PICARD (Cont'd) (sits) Let's begin handling this as we would anything else. A grin has come over Riker's face during this and he TAPS his knuckles on the table approvingly. Geordi looks up, SLAPS the table. GEORDI Agreed! Love that captain! PICARD (snaps) My comments, Lieutenant, do not require applause! GEORDI Yes, sir; sorry, sir. But as the captain now turns toward the others, Riker flashes Data a big wink. Data looks puzzled. PICARD Let's start with you, Data. DATA Well... a good starting point might be, "Why was I given human form?" GEORDI To make it easy for humans to relate to you. Had to be. But your designer may have had something else to prove also. PICARD (nods) That human-shaped robots need not be clumsy, limited things... (turning) You certainly operate as well as we do, Data... DATA In some ways better, sir. PICARD Ah... yes! But the important question now may be what happened to the colonists. STAR TREK: "Datalore" - 10/26/87 - ACT TWO 21. 22 CONTINUED: (3) RIKER Agreed. (exhibits child's drawing) One of several exhibited in the lab, by proud parents, no doubt. This could be simply a child's imagination. But then, several children made similar drawings. A COM SIGNAL, followed by: BEVERLY'S COM VOICE Doctor Crusher to Captain. At this point, sir, we very much need Mister Data's help. Data is already coming to his feet as Picard gives him a nod. As Data EXITS: PICARD He's on his way, Doctor. 23 INT. SICKBAY - DATA AND BEVERLY standing well away from the medical and engineering technicians, talking quietly. Data presses a finger at the spot which on humans would be between the second and third joint of his spinal column. He also checks that none of the others are watching too closely. DATA There, Doctor. Press your fingers there. Beverly moves in and complies. Then a look of slight surprise on her face. 24 INSERT - BEVERLY'S HAND At the described spot on Data's back -- the fingers pressing almost their full length through Data's uniform fabric and into his back. DATA (O. S.) It operates somewhat like a "switch," Doctor. STAR TREK: "Datalore" - 10/27/87 - ACT TWO 22. 25 BACK TO SHOT Beverly pressing further. BEVERLY And these small projections? DATA An android alarm clock, Doctor. Is that amusing? (sees it isn't) It times how long I remain unconscious. Beverly sees someone APPROACHING, quickly drops her hand away. It is Chief Engineer Argyle who carries what we'll later see are "high temp heat molders" used to join together Data's "skin." ARGYLE Are you certain about us using these heating devices, Data? DATA (nods) I will feel nothing at all. ARGYLE (smiles) Marvelous. It should all be a lot simpler... once we can see how your circuitry's connected. Argyle MOVES OFF to discuss the molding devices with the Technicians. Beverly turns to Data who is watching her closely, expectantly. She nods: BEVERLY I'll mention it to no one. You have my word. DATA If you had an off-switch Doctor... would you not keep it secret? BEVERLY I probably would. 26 EXT. SPACE - THE ENTERPRISE (OPTICAL) traveling against a background of stars at warp speed. STAR TREK: "Datalore" - 10/26/87 - ACT TWO 23. 27 INT. SICKBAY - WIDE ANGLE Two Data-like forms on two operating tables next to each other. Neither of the Data look-alikes is moving, and the torso of each is all but hidden by the medical scanners over the tables. At one of the tables, the mixed engineering and medical team is gathered. Argyle and Beverly are reaching in, intent on what they are seeing and doing. 28 CLOSER ANGLE AT THE BUSY TABLE We're unable to tell whether this is Data or the look-alike. Whichever, it is unmoving as Beverly and Argyle lean in to peer closely at what is under the sensor hood. ARGYLE Yes, notice the micro-circuitry here... and here. 29 CLOSE UNDER SENSOR HOOD (OPTICAL) Revealing some of a Data-like torso in which a flap has been cut open TO REVEAL a bit of complex android body interior in which WE SEE low-level PURPLE AND GREEN FLICKERING. Argyle's hand is pointing a finger at something. ARGYLE (O.S.) Then another fibroid-like connection here. 30 ANGLE ON BEVERLY AND ARGYLE As he withdraws his hand, looks to her for confirmation. Beverly nods, reaches for one of the heat molding instruments. BEVERLY Let's close up. She reaches the heat molding instrument in under the sensor hood. 31 CLOSE UNDER SENSOR HOOD (SPECIAL EFFECTS) as Beverly's hand presses the "skin" flap shut, applies the heat molder against it. A HISSING SOUND, SMOKE... and when the heat molder is removed, the "skin" flap has been sealed closed without a mark left. STAR TREK: "Datalore" - 10/27/87 - ACT TWO 24. 32 INT. CORRIDOR Picard and Riker striding toward Sickbay. 33 INT. SICKBAY - CLOSE ON DATA A slightly groggy Data at one of the operating tables, finishes slipping into his uniform. Beverly moves INTO SHOT, looks at the other android form, speaking quietly. BEVERLY If I've done it right, he'll switch on in a minute. 34 WIDER ANGLE as Picard and Riker ENTER Sickbay. Chief Engineer Argyle is closest and gets a questioning look from Picard. ARGYLE It seemed to go well... (indicates) ... thanks to a look inside Mister Data. But there have been no signs of consciousness, yet... Picard and Riker CROSS TOWARD the operating table which holds the unmoving android Form. Data and Beverly CROSS IN too. 35 ANGLE INCLUDING ANDROID, PICARD AND RIKER The Data-like Android. Picard and Riker STEP IN, look down at it. RIKER Certainly a perfect match for Data, sir. PICARD (uncertain) Do you think so, really? (leans in; inspects) I wonder which of them was made first? The LORE android opens its eyes. STAR TREK: "Datalore" - 10/26/87 - ACT TWO 25. 35 CONTINUED: LORE He was. But they found him imperfect and I was made to replace him. 36 ANOTHER ANGLE Data SURGING IN, surprised. Lore looks up at him, then back to Picard. Its face twitches once -- a nervous tic we'll see again. LORE You may call me Lore. FADE OUT. END OF ACT TWO STAR TREK: "Datalore" - 10/26/87 - ACT THREE 26. ACT THREE FADE IN: 37 EXT. SPACE - THE ENTERPRISE (OPTICAL) traveling at warp eight against a star background. 38 INT. CAPTAIN'S READY ROOM Picard and Data considering the Lore happening. PICARD I'm also a bit troubled by it describing you as "imperfect." DATA Human language gives me difficulties too, sir. "Imperfect" could mean I lack abilities that he possesses. PICARD I wonder. But the point of this is whether you and it have approximately the same capabilities. DATA We do, sir, and your referring to him as an "it"... suggests I too fit into the category of a "thing." It is a fair shot at Picard and he recognizes it, nodding sincerely. PICARD I see your point, Commander. My sincere apologies. DATA Gladly accepted, sir. As for Lore's abilities, his use of syntax and grammar suggests he was given human memories similar to mine. PICARD You both have about equal physical strength and mental ability? STAR TREK: "Datalore" - REV. 10/27/87 - ACT THREE 27. 38 CONTINUED: DATA I believe so, sir. PICARD (troubled) Which requires I now ask you... a very serious question. Since the two of you are closely related to each other... DATA The answer, sir, is that my loyalty is to you and Starfleet. Completely. PICARD (beat; small smile) Thank you, Commander. I was certain of that. 39 INT. MAIN BRIDGE Lore is now wearing a plain-colored utility uniform without rank or insignia. It includes pocket-pouches and a turtle-necked kind of undergarment beneath. His only other difference from Data is in the fact he often smiles (perhaps with a suggestion of insincerity), plus his occasional facial "tic" or twitch. He is now seated in Wesley's position at the Helm next to Geordi who is pointing out various controls. Wesley, standing behind that position, and Riker at Command, seem a bit uncertain of this android. The other regulars watch approvingly. GEORDI And Helm control are here, with the ship's heading given in measurements, we call them "degrees"... (indicating) ... with three hundred-sixty of them in a full circle this way. LORE ... Then you say "mark"... 40 EMPHASIZING DATA (OPTICAL) who has left the Ready Room and CROSSES IN, stopping to watch and listen. STAR TREK: "Datalore" - REV. 10/28/87 - ACT THREE 28. 40 CONTINUED: GEORDI On the nose! WESLEY Which separates it from another three hundred-sixty degree full circle like this... on a right angle to that one. LORE (demonstrating) So by ordering a heading so many degrees this way, and so many this way, the ship can travel in any direction. All three dimensions. RIKER And the square of the hypotenuse of a right triangle... LORE Is equal to the sum of the square of its other two... (stops; covering) ... its two "somethings"... which I once heard but never understood. Riker and Wesley exchange a look at this juncture. Data has stopped to watch this exchange with interest also. Now, he moves toward Lore with a friendly tone. DATA All of which you can learn more about, when the captain has approved your being on the bridge. LORE (surprise and contrition) Have I committed an offense? WESLEY (pleasantly) You'll find as I have that starships are loaded with rules which have to be learned. But Wesley's expression also indicates he has begun to have some doubts about Lore -- especially now when he hears: STAR TREK: "Datalore" - REV. 10/28/87 - ACT THREE 29. 40 CONTINUED: (2) LORE You're very clever, Wesley. (to Data) I now have duties to perform. Correct? Except for Riker and Wesley, the rest of the bridge crew is enjoying Lore. WORF Were you ever this anxious to please, Data? DATA Never. I judge Lore to be superior in that desire as well. LORE Because I was designed to be so human, my brother, I enjoy pleasing humans. GEORDI "My brother." That has a nice sound, Data. DATA (to Lore) And you consider it important to please humans? LORE It's not important? DATA (beat) There are many things of importance... some more so than others. Data indicates the turbolift, guides Lore in that direction. Lore seems eager to cooperate as they EXIT into the turbolift. 41 INT. TURBOLIFT Data speaks toward the panel. DATA My quarters. STAR TREK: "Datalore" - 10/26/87 - ACT THREE 30. 41 CONTINUED: At which, the turbolift HUMS into life and powers downward. LORE Is my brother that important? It knows you? DATA It can identify any of the crew. (eyes Lore) Just as I can identify flattery, brother. LORE I used it only to please you, my brother. Is that forbidden too? DATA It is best used when it reflects genuine feelings. LORE Then, I used it properly with you. 41A INT. CORRIDOR as Data and Lore ENTER from the turbolift, move down the corridor. DATA (beat) Do you realize Commander Riker's hypotenuse question tricked you into showing your knowledge was much greater than you were indicating? LORE He didn't seem that clever. I'll be more careful. DATA You tend to underestimate humans, my brother. The way you praised young Wesley at the Helm, for example... LORE A child! STAR TREK: "Datalore" - 10/27/87 - ACT THREE 31. 41A CONTINUED: DATA He has a child's body, but we have found him to be much more than that. LORE Thank you for that information, too. (beat; eyeing Data) You do care about how I perform. I pledge to be worthy of your teaching, my brother. Data looks at Lore for a long moment as they walk. 42 INT. DATA'S QUARTERS (OPTICAL) A plain, almost unfurnished interior. The door from the corridor slides OPEN and Data ENTERS with Lore who takes a moment to examine the quarters. They include mainly a large computer, but little more. LORE How would they describe this? "Spartan?" DATA I have no need for places to sit or sleep. Do you? LORE Do I appear that weak? During which, Data has gone to his computer controls, punched in an information request. The word DICTIONARY COMES ONTO the viewer. Data touches the computer controls again and CAMERA ZOOMS IN to show JEALOUSY defined as "INTOLERANCE OF RIVALRY, OR HOSTILITY TOWARD A RIVAL OR ONE BELIEVED TO HOLD AN ADVANTAGE." CAMERA ZOOMS BACK to an expressionless Data. LORE What information are you requesting? DATA Everything available on a Doctor Noonien Soong. Information on Soong is COMING UP on the computer. Lore moves in as Data studies it as he continues talking with Lore who nods at the last statement. STAR TREK: "Datalore" - 10/26/87 - ACT THREE 32. 42 CONTINUED: LORE Good old "Often-Wrong Soong." (sees Data's puzzlement) A joke, brother. Actually, he was a genius by human standards. DATA (reading computer viewer) But had destroyed his own reputation by making what seemed wild promises about his positronic brain design... almost all of which failed. LORE Promises he later proved to be true... (taps his head) Which made you and I possible. Our beloved "father." (touches Data's uniform) Will I soon have a uniform like that, my brother? The casual mention of "father" and the fast switch to uniforms bothers Data. His reply contains some annoyance. DATA If you get one the way I did, Lore, it means four years at the Academy, another three as ensign, ten or twelve on varied space duty in the lieutenant grades... LORE (interrupting) ... A system designed to compensate for limited human abilities. But you, my brother, have begun thinking as humans do. You and I are completely different from them. Are you truly satisfied with the memories and knowledge of just a few hundred human colonists? Suppose it could reflect thousands... or a million... or the knowledge of hundreds of millions of life forms of every kind? STAR TREK: "Datalore" - 10/26/87 - ACT THREE 33. 42 CONTINUED: (2) They look at each other for a long beat. Lore's facial "tic" happens again. Then: DATA How? Oddly enough, Lore's face twitches again at that, too. LORE We will discuss it in time. DATA And will we also discuss which of us was constructed first? LORE (surprised) It would be foolish to underestimate you, my brother. (nods) Yes, I lied when I said you were made first. With good reason. Doctor Soong made me perfect on his first attempt. But he made me so completely human that the colonists became envious of me. DATA You lived with the colonists? LORE (nods) Until they petitioned Soong to design a more comfortable, less perfect android. In other words, you, my brother. Data and Lore sit looking at each other, until: LORE (continuing) For example, haven't you noticed how easily I handle human speech? I use their contractions... such as isn't or can't. You say... (mimicking formality) ... is not or cannot. (MORE) STAR TREK: "Datalore" - REV. 10/27/87 - ACT THREE 34. 42 CONTINUED: (3) LORE (Cont'd) (half singing it) I say tomato, you say tomahto; I say potato, you say potahto... (amused) A very old joke, but you also have trouble with their humor, too. Am I right? DATA (considers it; nods) Quite true. I keep trying to be more human... and keep failing. LORE Do you realize, my brother, that I can help you become more human? DATA And... do you realize... Lore, that I am obligated to report all of this to our ship's captain? LORE I assumed as much when I began studying you. (moves to computer) May I use this to learn more of this vessel and its customs? DATA (nods) Use it also to describe for the captain the time you spent with the colonists. Including all you know about what happened to them. LORE I promise a report with great detail and accuracy. DATA Thank you, Lore. And now, I have duties to perform, unless you need something more. LORE I have more than I dreamed possible, my brother. Data EXITS. STAR TREK: "Datalore" - 10/26/87 - ACT THREE 35. 43 ANGLE ON LORE AT COMPUTER beginning to punch in information requests more rapidly... then still more rapidly. 44 ANGLE ON VIEWER (OPTICAL) providing starship information so rapidly now that the viewer IMAGES ARE A BLUR. 45 CLOSE ON LORE He seems to absorb this flood of information easily. He is very pleased with himself. FADE OUT: END OF ACT THREE STAR TREK: "Datalore" - REV. 10/27/87 - ACT FOUR 36. ACT FOUR FADE IN: 46 EXT SPACE - ENTERPRISE (OPTICAL) still traveling at high warp speed. PICARD (V.O.) Captain's log, stardate 41242.5. We now have the full story of the micro-engineering achievement which produced Data... and Lore... 47 INT. MAIN BRIDGE - SCIENCE STATION (OPTICAL) Intent upon the Science Station Viewer are Picard, Riker and Beverly. Geordi, Wesley, Tasha and Worf are on duty at their bridge stations. PICARD (V.O.) (continuing) ... and of the tragedy which deprived humanity of the remarkable minds behind that. Our first clue was a child's drawing which showed a great, complex crystal shape... 48 CLOSE INSERT ON VIEWER (OPTICAL) as needed. The IMAGE there IS LORE'S REPORT which includes a look at the child's drawing.. PICARD (V.O.) (continuing) ... confirmed by Lore's report to be an unknown kind of creature, capable of stripping all life from an entire world... insatiably ravenous for the life force found in intelligent forms like us... which Lore explains it stored in new crystal patterns... for purposes which are unknown. STAR TREK: "Datalore" - REV. 10/29/87 - ACT FOUR 37. 49 BACK TO SHOT OF MAIN BRIDGE TASHA But how did Data escape that thing? Or Lore? RIKER Lore had been disassembled. He explains it as jealousy from the colonists. And Data wasn't yet "alive" at that time. PICARD Which explains why Data could be left outside in no danger from the creature. Whatever happened to the colonists, he would be found by any Starfleet team that responded to the signal being transmitted. TASHA By which Doctor Soong left proof behind that his experiment did work. RIKER Captain, how believable do you find that crystal thing? PICARD Having explored so little of just our galaxy, I find anything possible. TASHA (overlapping; puzzled by readings) Data, are you expecting Lore to come up here? He left your quarters some time ago. STAR TREK: "Datalore" - REV. 10/28/87 - ACT FOUR 38. 49 CONTINUED: DATA To go... ? TASHA My Turbo-sensors say he went to Deck One... (turning to Worf) Worf? WORF ... where he examined some microminiature work tools, then some... (squints at her Viewer) ... fine grind quadratanium... ? DATA Which is used in our construction. (to Picard) That particular compound is no more suspicious, sir, than a human looking for an antiseptic or an ointment. Nevertheless, I should check it out. BEVERLY You're watching everything he does, Data? Is that the act of a brother? PICARD The act of a Starfleet officer obeying his captain, Doctor. Tasha watches Data stand and EXIT the bridge. Then she turns toward Picard. TASHA Speaking strictly as security chief, Captain... how much can you trust Data now? The idea shocks some of the bridge crew. PICARD I trust him completely, Lieutenant! (then softer) But everyone should also realize you just asked a necessary and legitimate security question. TASHA Thank you for explaining that, sir. STAR TREK: "Datalore" - REV. 10/27/87 - ACT FOUR 39. 50 INT. DATA'S QUARTERS (OPTICAL) where Lore has set out a champagne bottle from which he fills stemmed glasses. Then, he pours silver metal bits into one of the glasses, causing the champagne momentarily to FIZZ WITH A SHRILL SOUND. It has hardly settled down when the sliding door OPENS and Data ENTERS. Lore manages to slip the vial into a pouch in his utility uniform as he turns, smiling. LORE Lesson one in becoming more human, my brother. You must observe all human customs. Data is surprised to see the champagne that Lore is pointing out. DATA Champagne? LORE An ancient ritual, still practiced when they celebrate events of importance. (picking up undoctored glass) My brother... I toast our discovery of each other. May it fill our lives with new meaning. Data is surprised at this ritual being suggested. But Lore is holding his glass in toast position and Data sees no reason not to indulge Lore in this. He picks up his own glass. Lore drinks the full glass; Data takes a couple of sips, sets the glass down and looks up. DATA I have some doubts about the value of human... customs in this...my... brother... Data reels, begins slumping toward the floor as Lore watches, pleased. LORE And let us toast also... DATA (thickly) Brother... help me... STAR TREK: "Datalore" - REV. 10/27/87 - ACT FOUR 40. 50 CONTINUED: LORE ... also Doctor Soong who gave me the full richness of human needs and ambitions... a perfect match for my mind, my body... Data is slumping prone now, becoming unable to fight the effects of the compound given him. Lore squats to keep his face near to him. LORE (continuing) And let us toast also the great Crystal Entity... with which I learned to communicate. Before Doctor Soong disassembled me, I earned its gratitude by revealing the way to the colonists. Data is close to being completely unconscious now. LORE (continuing) Can you image its gratitude when I give it the life on this vessel... and when my cleverness lets it safely feed upon crowded worlds in the galaxy... ? Satisfied with what he sees now, Lore begins stripping down to the turtleneck undershirt beneath his utility uniform. 51 INT. MAIN BRIDGE Only Riker, Geordi, Wesley and Worf on duty now. Worf gets a reading which causes him to look toward Riker. WORF This is strange, sir. I show Mister Data transmitting on a subspace channel. RIKER He's been doing considerable research on Doctor Soong's background... but let's be sure. (turns) Wesley, can you look in on him discreetly? STAR TREK: "Datalore" - REV. 10/27/87 - ACT FOUR 41. 51 CONTINUED: WESLEY (coming to his feet instantly) Yes sir! bridge crew watches Wesley EXIT, enjoying his youthful eagerness. 52 INT. DATA'S QUARTERS where Data's android form now wears the utility uniform, lying unconscious on the floor neatly parallel to a cabin wall. Wearing Data's uniform and rank insignia is Lore, now speaking into the computer. LORE ... and upon arriving here you can identify me as the machine named "Data." Any doubts as to the true identity of this Android are resolved at the sight of Lore's facial "tic" or twitch. WE HEAR the door CHIME. LORE (continuing) End of message. (turning computer off) Come in, please. Wesley ENTERS, stops in surprise at the sight of an android in utility uniform lying unconscious on the floor. LORE (continuing) Glad you are here, Wesley. Lore suddenly attacked me and I had to turn him off. WESLEY Why did he do that, Data? LORE He discovered we have been using sensors to follow what he does. Lore's facial twitch happens. Wesley REGISTERS SURPRISE at this happening. STAR TREK: "Datalore" - REV. 10/27/87 - ACT FOUR 42. 52 CONTINUED: LORE (continuing) I practiced his facial "tic." Do I have it right? WESLEY I'd suggest you forget imitating him... (smiles) ... because if you had said "We've been using the sensors," instead if "we have," I might have suspected you were Lore. LORE Yes. I do use language more formally than Lore. Please inform the captain I will come up to the bridge... (indicating unconscious Form) ... and report on this. WESLEY Aye, sir. CAMERA HOLDS ON LORE as Wesley EXITS. Then the facial "tic" happens again and Lore turns to a cabinet and extracts several hand devices, selects a heavy one. 53 CLOSE ON LORE as he lifts the device to his face, touches a control making it WHINE into power. Then another control which causes it to BATHE THE FACIAL "TIC" AREA WITH ELECTRONIC DISCHARGES WHICH APPEAR AS MINIATURE "LIGHTNING BOLTS." He keeps at this "treatment" until that part of his face BEGINS TO GLOW. Then he lowers the device and as the GLOW FADES, then works his facial muscles, testing them. 54 EXT. SPACE - ENTERPRISE (OPTICAL) still traveling at high warp against a star background. STAR TREK: "Datalore" - REV. 10/29/87 - ACT FOUR 43. 55 INT. MAIN BRIDGE (OPTICAL) Any angles on the Main Viewer SHOW the same high warp speed. The full bridge crew we saw earlier is on duty, Wesley back at the Helm position, Beverly seated in the Command Area again. Data hasn't returned, of course. Picard ENTERS from his Ready Room, reflecting annoyance as he speaks to Wesley. PICARD You're certain he said he'll be right up? WESLEY He indicated that, sir. TASHA Sensors show Data just now entering a turbolift, sir. BEVERLY (to Wesley) Wes, tell me again how Data said he immobilized Lore. WESLEY He said he "turned him off," Mom... (quick correction) ... uh, Doctor. Lore, in Data's uniform, ENTERS by turbolift. Beverly eyes him, puzzled. BEVERLY (quietly) Question, Mister Data... did you or did you not swear me to secrecy about your "off switch?" LORE (a slight hesitation) A change of mind, Doctor. If I cannot trust the bridge crew, whom can I... ? GEORDI (interrupting; to Picard) Sir! I'm picking up a "bogey" coming in on a five o'clock tangent. STAR TREK: "Datalore" - REV. 10/28/87 - ACT FOUR 44. 55 CONTINUED: WESLEY Confirm! And so fast it makes our warp eight look like we're standing still! TASHA It's transmitting no ID signal, Captain... RIKER Set Main Viewer on that tangent. Main Viewer SWITCHES to the indicated REAR ANGLE, changing the relative star movement accordingly. As the view magnifies, WE CAN SEE A TINY BRIGHT SPOT WHICH STEADILY GROWS LARGER. PICARD Shields up; go to Yellow Alert! Transmit friendly greetings, all languages, all frequencies. RIKER I can't believe anything overtaking us this fast. LORE Beautiful, isn't it? Wesley pivots, EXPRESSING SURPRISE at this. The rest of the bridge crew is too busy at their readings and controls to notice. RIKER I recognize it, Captain... it's similar to that child's drawing... WE CAN NOW SEE that the IMAGE (computer generated?) IS SHAPED LIKE THE CRYSTAL COMPLEX. BEVERLY My God, it's big! 55A EXT. SPACE - ENTERPRISE AND CRYSTAL ENTITY (OPTICAL) MOVING IN to float close to our starship, the SHIMMERING CRYSTAL COMPLEXITY is very obvious. It looks both very lovely and terribly powerful at the same time. FADE OUT. END OF ACT FOUR STAR TREK: "Datalore" - REV. 10/27/87 - ACT FIVE 45. ACT FIVE FADE IN: 56 EXT. SPACE - ENTERPRISE AND CRYSTAL ENTITY (OPTICAL) The huge crystal form, two or three times the size of the starship, SLOWLY SPINNING, pictorially dominating the starship as it floats next to it. 57 INT. MAIN BRIDGE (OPTICAL) The complex crystal IMAGE on Main Viewer, still SHIMMERING as it SLOWLY TURNS. Watching it are Picard, Riker, Wesley, Tasha, Worf and "Lore." TASHA Still no ID transmitted, sir. Also, no answer to our inquiries. Geordi ENTERS hurriedly. PICARD Did you have a direct look at it? GEORDI It's like a snowflake crystal, sir. But much more complex... the entire electromagnetic spectrum seems to play about inside it... (seeing Picard's look) I haven't the slightest idea what it is, sir. PICARD Data, anything else Lore can tell us about it may be important. Can you control Lore enough to question him? LORE (rising; moving to turbolift) I'll have to examine him to know, sir. Wesley, who has reacted uncomfortably to all this, comes to his feet. STAR TREK: "Datalore" - 10/26/87 - ACT FIVE 46. 57 CONTINUED: WESLEY Captain, recommend you do not let... (hesitates) ... him move around the ship alone. PICARD Ensign... ! LORE (interrupting; chuckling) Wesley is only trying to show himself alert and responsible, sir. (to Wesley) Something to encourage. Come, you can watch everything I do. WESLEY Not if I have a choice. PICARD That is quite enough, Ensign! When addressing a senior officer... RIKER (interrupting) I've guided his training; I'm the one at fault, sir. (to Wesley) You will show proper courtesy, and I'm taking you down there to make certain of it! (to Picard) With your approval, of course, sir. Picard gives a wave of approval to Riker and a look of annoyance to Wesley. 58 INT. DATA'S QUARTERS as last seen, with Data unconscious on the floor. The door opens with Lore very cleverly managing to block Riker's and Wesley's view as he takes a precautionary look inside. STAR TREK: "Datalore" - REV. 10/27/87 - ACT FIVE 47. 58 CONTINUED: LORE Careful of Lore... (steps aside) Good, he is still unconscious. Wesley ENTERS with Riker. LORE (continuing; to Wesley) The captain refused to listen to you but you were right... Lore can be extremely dangerous. Lore has knelt with an arm going behind Data, pretending to lift his head more upright to examine his face. Then, even though unconscious, Data's face twitches. LORE (continuing) Notice? The same twitch, even when he's unconscious... I suspect that... 59 REVERSE CLOSE ANGLE On Data's back where Lore's hand, hidden from view, probes fingers toward the "switch" deep in Data's back. LORE (O.S.) ... something went seriously wrong during Lore's construction. 60 BACK TO SHOT LORE Stay back. We could have a problem if he senses someone else is near. (bringing android closer) Lore, I have some questions to ask you... Data's eyes flicker open, rolling about. 61 REVERSE ANGLE Again on Data's back -- Lore's fingers jabbing viciously at the "switch" area. STAR TREK: "Datalore" - 10/26/87 - ACT FIVE 48. 62 BACK TO SHOT Data's head begins to jerk about, then begins doing it more and more violently and he begins making PAINED SOUNDS -- then struggles as if to sit up, Lore pretending to hold him down. LORE Lore, it is Data. I have a few easy questions for you... (pretending to control Data) He senses you! (Data begins flailing) I'm sorry, I can't control him if you stay. Wesley is still uncertain, but Riker feels obliged to obey Picard's orders. He moves Wesley toward the door. Data is beginning to flail rather wildly. LORE Please! I'll record anything he says! RIKER And bring it to the bridge. Immediately! The cabin door IS OPENED as Riker GUIDES Wesley OUT. Then the doors CLOSE. Then, Lore releases Data who falls back prone and unconscious again. 63 ANOTHER ANGLE Lore still turned toward the door area, an ugly expression now on Lore's face. LORE And you want to be as stupid as them... ? Lore suddenly KICKS HARD at Data's head, knocking it violently aside. LORE (continuing) ... dear brother! He kicks again. Then again. STAR TREK: "Datalore" - REV. 10/27/87 - ACT FIVE 49. 64 INT. MAIN BRIDGE (OPTICAL) where Riker and Wesley are moving back to their positions. PICARD Well, Number One? RIKER Sir, it's Lore... with the same facial twitch we've all seen... lying unconscious exactly as Data described. But he became violent, apparently sensing that Wesley and I were present... WESLEY (interrupting) Or is it Lore pretending to be Data, and faking it all? PICARD I asked for Commander Riker's report, "Acting Ensign" Crusher. And since it is now clear you are unable to function here within the limits of that appointment... Wesley has come to his feet expecting the worst but all is now interrupted: GEORDI Captain! Picard whirls at the sound of alarm in Geordi's voice... and sees that the huge crystal shape is rapidly MOVING IN toward the Enterprise. Reaching the deflector shields area, it is deflected back somewhat, but the smaller Enterprise is JOLTED MORE, SHAKING THE BRIDGE CREW ABOUT. TASHA Deflector shields holding, sir. PICARD (keeping voice calm) Bring photon torpedoes to ready; main phasers to ready... A flurry of activity from Tasha and Worf. Wesley has quickly seated himself again, checking his controls as the immense crystal shape now COMES AT THE ENTERPRISE HARDER. The SHAKING this time is HEAVIER, and WE BEGIN TO HEAR the SOUND OF STRUCTURAL STRAIN. Beverly COMES OUT of a turbolift, concerned. STAR TREK: "Datalore" - 10/26/87 - ACT FIVE 50. 64 CONTINUED: PICARD (continuing: to Riker) Go to Red Alert, please. Riker hits a control and the ALERT SIGNAL begins HONKING, the RED LIGHTS begin FLASHING. And Lore, still in Data's uniform, COMES OUT of a turbolift on the run. WORF (raising voice over it) Weapons now ready, sir! LORE No, Captain, let me talk to it... PICARD (interrupting) Why didn't you say you could? Interrupted by the CRYSTAL SHAPE COMING at the Enterprise still HARDER, with STRUCTURAL STRAIN HEARD MUCH LOUDER this time. The shaking makes Lore grab support as: PICARD (continuing) Affirmative! Talk to it! LORE (whirling to Tasha) Open hailing frequencies! (as she hits switch) Crystal Form, I identify myself as "Data," advising you to stop your attack. The humans here are powerful, capable of injuring or even destroying you. They can be changed only in other ways. The crystal shape stops, begins to BACK OFF from the Enterprise, taking its earlier position. GEORDI Now I call that communicating. WORF But he mentioned "changing us," Captain. What does that mean? Wesley looks back toward Worf thankfully. STAR TREK: "Datalore" - REV. 10/29/87 - ACT FIVE 51. 64 CONTINUED: (2) LORE It has many meanings, as any human language dictionary could inform you. (to Picard) Suggest moving fast to confirm what I told it, sir. Permission to use the large transporter in Cargo Room Three? There I can beam out some living pattern, perhaps a large tree... RIKER Which you'll beam over next to the entity... LORE You are correct, Riker. (to Picard) Our ship's phasers will then blast and disintegrate it... proving we're dangerous. PICARD Make it so! LORE Sir? Which brings a slight change of expression onto Picard's features. PICARD Do it! Lore EXITS via turbolift. Wesley has come to his feet, protesting. WESLEY Sir, I know this may finish me as an acting ensign, but... PICARD Shut up, Wesley. (turning) Lieutenant Yar, pick a good security team, let me know what he does. Yar turns to Worf, silently requesting him to handle it. Worf gives a brisk "Aye, sir," EXITING via turbolift. Beverly has been watching Picard, troubled. STAR TREK: "Datalore" - 10/26/87 - ACT FIVE 52. 64 CONTINUED: (3) BEVERLY "Shut up, Wesley?" PICARD Stay out of this, Madam... WESLEY Since I am finished here, Captain, may I point out... ? BEVERLY Shut up, Wesley! WESLEY (still to Picard) ... that what I've said would have been listened to if it came from an adult officer. Request permission to return to my quarters, sir. PICARD Granted, if you take your mother with you. BEVERLY (flaring) You're putting me off the bridge? PICARD I'm asking that you keep an eye on your son during this, Doctor. WESLEY Please, Mom. Let's go. A hesitant Beverly lets Wesley accompany her to a turbolift. 65 INT. CORRIDOR where Worf and two Security People hurry toward a turbolift door there. It OPENS... REVEALING Lore waiting there. Worf REACTS, quickly steps toward Lore. LORE Emergency close! Causing the turbolift doors to CLOSE in the face of the Security People. STAR TREK: "Datalore" - REV. 10/29/87 - ACT FIVE 53. 66 INT. TURBOLIFT Worf, alone with Lore in the small cab, whirls toward the android. LORE (continuing) Now show me your warrior fierceness. Worf draws his small phaser fast... and Lore chops it from his hand even faster. Worf pivots, his fist striking powerfully at Lore who moves very fast, deflects it and chops again at Worf, bringing a look of surprised pain to Worf's face. Like a windmill, Lore chops at Worf with one hand, then the next, then again with the other -- and WE SEE Worf's knees beginning to buckle. 67 OMITTED 68 INT. DATA'S QUARTERS with Data crumpled in a heap on the floor. No blood or bruises appear on an android, but the epidermal covering of his head is damaged, with pieces of it hanging down. WE HEAR a CHIME. Then a wait, then a MECHANICAL SOUND AT THE DOOR which slides open TO REVEAL Wesley there with Beverly who now has a major phaser on her belt. BEVERLY I'll look, but I should never have let you talk me into this... But Wesley presses ON INTO the room... then REACTS at what he finds. WESLEY It's Data, Mom. He's been hurt! Beverly COMES IN too, kneels at the utility-clad Form there. Then the facial twitch happens. Beverly looks up at Wesley, alarmed. WESLEY It's Data! For once will you trust me about something? Beverly looks questioningly at the unconscious android form. STAR TREK: "Datalore" - REV. 10/29/87 - ACT FIVE 54. 68 CONTINUED: WESLEY (continuing) You must know how much Starfleet means to me. But I'm finished unless you can help me. (touches her arm) I heard you know how to turn them on. Please? Beverly pulls away, starts to rise. BEVERLY No, this is very serious... WESLEY I know, Mom. So tell me again to "shut up, Wesley," and I will. BEVERLY You're being very unfair, Wesley... But Beverly still reaches to Data's back... then Data opens his eyes and sits upright, examining Beverly and Wesley. WESLEY Data, the Crystal Thing is outside close to the ship... and Lore is loose somewhere inside. Data comes to his feet. A loose piece of epidermal covering FLUTTERS to the floor, causing him to run a hand over his facial damage. BEVERLY How badly are you hurt... Data? DATA I will function sufficiently to stop Lore, Doctor... Wesley is already OUT the door. Beverly and Data hurry to FOLLOW. 69 INT. CORRIDOR TO CARGO THREE Data, Beverly, Wesley hurry to a small door marked "TRANSPORTER TECHNICIANS ONLY." STAR TREK: "Datalore" - REV. 10/27/87 - ACT FIVE 55. 69 CONTINUED: DATA Whatever happens, it is important that you two stay away from him. Do not try to help me. Both Wesley and Beverly nod agreement. Data tries the door, it doesn't budge. Data gives an "I thought so" nod, turns to a panel next to the door, punches in a code... then easily pushes the door open. 70 INT. CARGO THREE TRANSPORTER ROOM The small door has led to the Transporter Control Area. Beyond past the large Transporter Platform are large cargo doors used for bringing bulky cargo items in and out. As Data, Beverly and Wesley ENTER, they stop, freeze as they hear: LORE (O.S.) Good, you understand perfectly so far. Next, I'll signal I'm about to transport something out... Data is now moving in quietly, motioning Doctor and son to stay back. 71 ANOTHER ANGLE Lore standing at a computer where Data can see him now. LORE (continuing) ... at which time the deflector shields will turn off for a moment, and if you move in at that time... Lore suddenly stops in mid-sentence, turns and looks directly at Data. Then, as if sensing someone else there, Lore steps unexpectedly to one side... sees Wesley and Beverly there. DATA How sad, dear brother. You have made me wish I were an only child. STAR TREK: "Datalore" - 10/26/87 - ACT FIVE 56. 71 CONTINUED: LORE (raising phaser) Then why this marvelous gift, my brother? The troublesome little man-child. (circling; to Wesley) Are you prepared for the kind of death you've earned, little man? This is too much for Beverly. She draws her major phaser, aiming it at Lore. BEVERLY If you take one step toward my son... Startled, Data takes his eyes off Lore for just a fraction of a second... enough for Lore to send Data spinning to where he blocks Beverly's aim. Wesley tries to move in to help but Lore has already chopped again at Data, spinning into Beverly, easily taking the phaser away from her. He makes a quick setting on it. Data is coming to his feet to attack Lore. LORE Ah, motherhood! (aims phaser at Wesley) Back off or I'll turn your little man into a torch! Frightened for Wesley, Beverly backs off. Lore makes another quick setting, holding phaser on Wesley. LORE I promise him exquisite pain unless you obey me too, dear brother. BEVERLY Move away, Data, please! Data backs off a few steps. LORE Do you see now the advantages of being completely human? (to Beverly) It includes kindness. I give you your life, Doctor. Go, quickly and I may not injure your son at all. STAR TREK: "Datalore" - 10/26/87 - ACT FIVE 57. 71 CONTINUED: (2) Beverly is willing to die if it helps her son. But leaving him this way? DATA I will stay with Wesley, Doctor. LORE Go! Or he'll be shrieking on the count of five. One... two... 72 ANOTHER ANGLE (OPTICAL & SPECIAL EFFECTS) Beverly panics, hurries toward the small door where they had entered. BEVERLY I'll bring help, Wesley. LORE Thank you for my human quality, Doctor Soong. (aiming phaser) Now a small payment for your son's misdeeds. LORE PHASERS BEVERLY, a BEAM which strikes her left arm in a FLASH OF FIRE. WESLEY Mom! Wesley turns, rushing at Lore... but Data reaches out, stopping Wesley and holding him immobile. Meanwhile, the PHASER BEAM has IGNITED Beverly's MEDICAL COAT which she must now tear away one-handed, opening the door the same way. As the EXITS, the door CLOSES but with Lore distracted with the door, Data leaps at him fast, shoving Wesley tumbling to safety. It is a vicious android battle, both using incredible speed and power. It SURGES OUT into the open room, toward the big transporter platform. 73 thru OMITTED 74 75 ANGLE ON WESLEY coming to his feet, alert to anything he can do to help Data. He moves toward the conflict. STAR TREK: "Datalore" - REV. 10/29/87 - ACT FIVE 58. 75 CONTINUED: DATA Stay back, Wesley! Help me some other way! Wesley backs off. Data and Lore in action that now SURGES toward the transporter platform. Wesley, desperately seeking some way to help, sees their direction of movement... turns quickly toward the transporter controls. Can this be it? 76 EMPHASIZING DATA AND LORE at the edge of the transporter platform. Data now sees where Wesley is standing -- he pretends to stumble, faking Lore in over him -- then surges up to his full height, tossing Lore onto the platform. DATA Wesley... now! 77 ANGLE ON WESLEY already moving the controls. 78 ANGLE EMPHASIZING LORE (OPTICAL) as he is beamed out into oblivion. 79 ANGLE ON SMALL DOOR as it is FORCED OPEN, Picard, Riker, Tasha, with an injured Beverly RUSH IN. Wesley rushes to his mother, worried about her injuries. WESLEY (to Picard) Lore's gone, sir, permanently! PICARD (to Beverly) Now that your son's safe, Doctor, report immediately to Sickbay. Riker has noticed something happening on the computer view screen. RIKER Captain... The crystal thing has begun to move away. STAR TREK: "Datalore" - REV. 10/27/87 - ACT FIVE 58A. 79A EXT. SPACE - ENTERPRISE AND CRYSTAL SHAPE (OPTICAL) as the crystal thing MOVES AWAY from the starship, accellerating, DISAPPEARING quickly into the distance. 79B INT. CARGO THREE TRANSPORTER ROOM as a figure, clothed like Lore, MOVES IN toward the Captain. As Picard looks him over, its face twitches. PICARD (continuing; beat; eyeing him) Data, get rid of that damned twitch! And put on a correct uniform. STAR TREK: "Datalore" - REV. 10/27/87 - ACT FIVE 59. 79B CONTINUED: DATA Yes, Captain. Data EXITS. PICARD And Ensign Crusher... (as Wesley HURRIES IN) ... are you able to return to duty now? WESLEY Yes, sir! PICARD Then do so! Let the bridge know all is well down here. Wesley HURRIES OFF too. Riker turns from another look at at the view screen. RIKER It's gone, sir. Without Lore, it had no way to reach us. PICARD (nods) And we're overdue for our computer refit. (beat) Number One, have you ever considered whether Data is more human, or less human than we want? RIKER (grins) I only wish we were as well balanced, sir. PICARD (beat; nods) Agreed! The two of them begin to EXIT. FADE OUT. END OF ACT FIVE THE END STAR TREK: THE NEXT GENERATION "Angel One" #40271-115 Written by Patrick Barry Directed by Michael Rhodes Copyright 1987 Paramount Pictures Corporation. All Rights Reserved. This script is not for publication or reproduction. No one is authorized to dispose of same. If lost or destroyed, please notify the Script Department. REVISED FINAL DRAFT NOVEMBER 9, 1987 STAR TREK: "Angel One" - 11/9/87 - CAST STAR TREK: THE NEXT GENERATION "Angel One" CAST PICARD BEATA RIKER TRENT BEVERLY ARIEL DATA RAMSEY TROI TASHA WORF Non-Speaking Roles GEORDI SEVERAL MALE SECRETARIES WESLEY TWO TALL WOMEN THREE MALE SURVIVORS FEMALE GUARDS Non-Speaking Roles TWO NATIVE WOMEN A BUDDY NATIVE MEN TRANSPORTER OPERATOR CREWMEMBERS STAR TREK: "Angel One" - 11/9/87 - SETS STAR TREK: THE NEXT GENERATION "Angel One" SETS INTERIORS EXTERIORS USS ENTERPRISE USS ENTERPRISE Main bridge Corridor ANGEL ONE (PLANET) Transporter Room Holodeck Door ANGEL ONE (SURFACE) Sickbay Doctor Crusher's Lab Captain's Ready Room Picard's Quarters ANGEL ONE Executive Office Great Hall Guest Quarters Hideout Holding Area STAR TREK: "Angel One" - 11/9/87 - TEASER 1. STAR TREK: THE NEXT GENERATION "Angel One" TEASER FADE IN: 1 EXT. SPACE - STARSHIP AND PLANET (OPTICAL) The Enterprise APPROACHES, bearing down as: PICARD (V.O.) Captain's log, stardate 41636.9. As feared, our examination of the seven year overdue Federation freighter, Odin -- disabled by an asteroid collision -- revealed no survivors. 2 REVERSE ANGLE (OPTICAL) to show the Enterprise APPROACHING a GREEN PLANET. As the Enterprise slows to assume an orbit: PICARD (V.O.) (continuing) However, three escape pods were missing, suggesting the possibility of survivors... 3 INT. ENTERPRISE MAIN BRIDGE (OPTICAL) The Green Planet is featured on the Main Viewer. PICARD, GEORDI, DATA, RIKER, TASHA and TROI at their stations. GEORDI Ready to begin orbit of Angel One, Captain. PICARD Make it so, Mister La Forge. What kind of place is this, Data? STAR TREK: "Angel One" - 11/9/87 - TEASER 2. 3 CONTINUED: DATA Angel One is a class M planet, supporting carbon-based flora and fauna, sparsely populated with intelligent life forms... similar in technological development to mid-twentieth-century Earth. GEORDI Just like being marooned at home. RIKER Assuming any survivors made it this far. Admittedly, it's the closest planet to the Odin. But the distance we've traveled in the past two days at warp one would've taken the Odin escape pods five months. DATA Five months, fourteen days, eleven hours, two minutes -- RIKER Thank you, Data. DATA -- and fifty-seven seconds. During this, Tasha reacts to a display at her station. TASHA Captain, we're receiving an audio signal from Angel One. PICARD Starfleet was quite adamant that we maintain excellent diplomatic relations with this planet. Any other pertinent information before we reply, Mister Data? Their form of government would be a logical starting place. DATA Angel One has evolved into a constitutional oligarchy. It is governed by a parliamentary body consisting of six elected Mistresses, and headed by a female they refer to as "The Elected One." STAR TREK: "Angel One" - 11/9/87 - TEASER 3. 3 CONTINUED: (2) TROI It sounds very much like my own planet. WORF (aside to Data) Klingons appreciate strong women. RIKER How current is your information, Data? DATA A Federation vessel last visited this planet sixty-two years ago, Captain. PICARD Except, let us hope, for the Odin escape pods. (then:) Since this is a female-dominated society, it might be more prudent if you made the initial contact, Counselor. TROI (nods, and:) Please open hailing frequencies. TASHA Hailing frequencies open. TROI This is Counselor Deanna Troi of the USS Enterprise. FEMALE'S COM VOICE I am Beata, The Elected One. How may we assist you, Counselor? TROI The Federation has neglected a visit to your planet for far too long. With your permission, we would like to correct that oversight. STAR TREK: "Angel One" - 11/9/87 - TEASER 4. 3 CONTINUED: (3) BEATA'S COM VOICE We feel in no way neglected, Counselor. A diplomatic courtesy call is neither expected nor required. REACTIONS at lack of hospitality. Troi pushes on: TROI We also come in search of possible survivors from one of our freighters. BEATA'S COM VOICE A brief visit will be tolerated. CLICK. TASHA They've broken off transmission. GEORDI Ever feel like you're not really wanted? PICARD That's their prerogative, Lieutenant. (then:) Prepare the away team, Number One. RIKER Aye, aye, sir. As Riker, Data, Troi and Tasha stand down, heading toward the turbolift, Picard returns his attention to the green planet on his Main Viewer. 4 INT. ENTERPRISE CORRIDOR WESLEY and a BUDDY converge on the Holodeck entrance. As WE FOLLOW this excited twosome, WE PICK UP Riker (carrying a METALLIC BOX) Troi, Data and Tasha APPROACHING from the opposite direction. RIKER Where're you boys off to? STAR TREK: "Angel One" - 11/9/87 - TEASER 5. 4 CONTINUED: WESLEY Skiing, sir. Our instructor has us scheduled for the Swiss Alps, sir. RIKER Save us some deep powder. WESLEY No problem, sir. The Holodeck has all you'll ever need. All enjoy the enthusiasm of the boys as they HURRY INTO the Holodeck. 5 INT. TRANSPORTER ROOM (OPTICAL) Picard and a transporter operator at the console as the away team ENTERS. RIKER The away team is ready, Captain. PICARD Angel One's position in this quadrant may become strategically vital. The hope at Starfleet is that some day this planet could become a part of the Federation. RIKER We'll try to make a good impression, Captain. Riker, Troi, Tasha and Data take their places on the Transporter pad. PICARD Energize! The operator does. TRANSPORTER EFFECT. Then: 6 EXT. ANGEL ONE - DAY - ESTABLISH (OPTICAL) Lush vegetation surrounded by high-tech architecture. STAR TREK: "Angel One" - 11/9/87 - TEASER 6. 7 INT. ANGEL ONE EXECUTIVE OFFICE - DAY Steel and glass and concrete, with all the trappings of a Presidential Suite. The Elected One, BEATA, sits behind a huge desk. Dressed in utilitarian fashion, the woman is still very attractive. Hovering over her is TRENT, her personal secretary. He's shorter in stature, much more frail than Beata (as are all the men of this planet). In contrast to his boss, he's dressed in bright colors. Beata is busy scanning and signing papers that Trent places in front of her, when: 8 ANGLE - THE DOOR Another male secretary shows Troi, Data, Tasha and Riker INTO the office, then WITHDRAWS. They stand before the desk, waiting. 9 FULL SHOT Beata lets our away team "learn their place" as she continues to ignore them, studying documents, etc. BEATA See that these matters are handled immediately. TRENT As you wish, Mistress. He takes the papers, HURRIES OUT. Finally, Beata focuses on the away team. BEATA I am Beata, The Elected One of Angel One. TROI Mistress Beata, I am Counselor Troi. (refers to metal box) We've brought you a small token of our goodwill. Beata eyes the metal box... eyes Riker. BEATA My cooperation is not for sale, Counselor. STAR TREK: "Angel One" - 11/9/87 - TEASER 7. 9 CONTINUED: TROI We didn't mean to imply that it was, Mistress. (beat, and:) Out of respect to your wishes that we keep our visit brief, perhaps you would like to address the issue of survivors immediately. BEATA (curtly) Immediately -- but not impetuously. You will present your case. She rises. This woman is as tall as Riker. BEATA (continuing) Until I am certain of your intentions, I know of no such survivors. And on this unexpected twist, we: FADE OUT. END OF TEASER STAR TREK: "Angel One" - 11/9/87 - ACT ONE 8. ACT ONE FADE IN: 10 EXT. ANGEL ONE - DAY - ESTABLISH (OPTICAL) 11 INT. GREAT HALL - DAY Steel, glass and smooth concrete softened by dripping ferns and draped sheers. The outer doors swing open and IN STRIDES our away team. Riker still carries the metal box. 12 ANOTHER ANGLE TO REVEAL the occupants. A large U-shaped table dominates the room. At the top of the U is Beata. Trent stands behind off one shoulder. The flanking sides of the table are occupied by three (tall) WOMEN to each side, one of whom will be identified as ARIEL. Several other male secretaries are in attendance along the perimeter of the table. BEATA Representatives of the Starship Enterprise -- do you wish to petition the Parliament of Angel One? TROI We do. We have reason to hope that survivors from a damaged Federation freighter may be marooned on your planet. We are seeking to learn if this is so. General stoicism from the Parliamentarians. Except for Ariel who displays particular interest. Suspiciously: BEATA Even a planet as remote as Angel One has heard of Starfleet. Searching the galaxy for survivors seems a petty task for one of their mighty vessels. STAR TREK: "Angel One" - 11/9/87 - ACT ONE 9. 12 CONTINUED: RIKER We don't consider even one survivor petty. BEATA (to Troi, offended) Is this man suggesting that we place a lesser value on life than you do? TROI Not at all. Troi looks to Riker for encouragement. He nods for her to continue. TROI (continuing) Our discovery of the abandoned freighter was an accident, Mistress Beata. We have a duty to investigate. BEATA I see. And if you were to find survivors? What then? TROI We will take them with us. See that they are reunited with their families. Ariel reacts to this, her concern evident. ARIEL Mistress Beata... ? BEATA Yes, Ariel? ARIEL Are we to take these strangers at their word? BEATA A good question. TASHA What reason could we possibly have to deceive you? STAR TREK: "Angel One" - 11/9/87 - ACT ONE 10. 12 CONTINUED: (2) BEATA Another good question. RIKER Are there survivors from the freighter Odin on this planet? BEATA After we discuss that matter, we'll let you know. What the hell kind of answer is that? Before it can be pursued: BEATA (continuing; to Trent) See to their comforts. Trent leaves his place near the seat of power to escort the away team from the Great Hall. 13 INT. ANGEL ONE GUEST QUARTERS - DAY As plush as the Great Hall, consisting of common area with doors leading to separate sleeping cubicles. The main door OPENS -- Trent LEADS the away team IN. TRENT You will remain here until summoned. Trent EXITS. Tasha removes a tricorder, checks the area. As Riker places the metal box on a side table: RIKER Are we able to talk? Is the area secure? TASHA Yes. Tricorder doesn't show any listening devices or anything else of a threatening nature RIKER Good. Troi? TROI There was much fear in that room. STAR TREK: "Angel One" - 11/9/87 - ACT ONE 11. 13 CONTINUED: RIKER Paranoia, if you ask me. But of what? TROI I cannot say. Nor do I feel their fear was focused. I sensed that all were not concerned for the same reason. RIKER Data? DATA There are undoubtedly survivors from the Odin on this planet, Commander. RIKER I agree. Otherwise, why would they be so circumspect? TASHA As the Mistress Beata is so fond of saying -- good question. DATA What do we do if they elect to deny the existence of any survivors? RIKER Let's not look for problems. But of course, that's what they are all trained to do. 14 EXT. SPACE - ENTERPRISE (OPTICAL) The ship continues to orbit Angel One. 15 INT. ENTERPRISE - CORRIDOR NEAR HOLODECK Picard and WORF are walking down the hallway. PICARD I want all departments prepared for a warp six trip to the Neutral Zone as soon as the away team completes its mission. STAR TREK: "Angel One" - 11/9/87 - ACT ONE 12. 15 CONTINUED: WORF Trouble, Captain? PICARD Insurance. Romulan battlecruisers have been detected near one of our border posts. They've requested assistance as soon as we are available. Without warning, Picard is hit squarely on the cheek by a SNOWBALL. He stops cold. 16 REVERSE - OPEN HOLODECK DOOR A laughing Wesley comes TUMBLING OUT, smashing into Worf as he avoids the pursuit of his buddy. Both skid to a shocked halt at sight of Picard. WESLEY Captain Picard! Picard wipes the snow from his face. The boys, soaking wet themselves, cringe. PICARD Report, Mister Crusher. WESLEY We, ah, finished our ski lesson, sir... and it kinda just happened, sir. PICARD On the Enterprise, Mister Crusher, nothing "just happens." (distracted) What is that smell? WORF (sniffs, and:) Hmm, yes... slightly reminiscent of Night-Blooming Throgni, Captain. From home. (deep breath) Quite stimulating, wouldn't you say? STAR TREK: "Angel One" - 11/9/87 - ACT ONE 13. 16 CONTINUED: PICARD No. Wesley tries to smell, but no luck. He glances at his Buddy who shrugs. WESLEY I can't smell anything. I'm a little congested... PICARD Don't let this "just happen" again, Mister Crusher. WESLEY (snapping to) Yes, sir!! As the boys wheel and MARCH/RUN OFF, Worf catches Picard with the hint of a smile. Shaking it off, the two men continue on. 17 INT. ANGEL ONE GUEST QUARTERS - DAY Tasha pacing; Troi and Riker sitting; Data examining knickknacks. Data's attention falls on an atomizer. Squeezing the ball, he gets a face full of mist. Sniffs: DATA Interesting. An alcohol-based synthetic, artificially reproducing a floral scent. TROI It is called perfume, Data. DATA The purpose of which is... ? TASHA Certain cultures consider perfume an aphrodisiac. DATA I am unfamiliar with that term. RIKER An aphrodisiac is something designed to stimulate or enhance sexual pleasure. STAR TREK: "Angel One" - 11/9/87 - ACT ONE 14. 17 CONTINUED: DATA How does stimulation of the olfactory nerve affect the enjoyment of sex? All look to the other to field this one. They are saved by the door. Trent ENTERS. TRENT The Elected One will see you now. He stands aside so that Riker, Tasha and Troi can EXIT. Data brings up the rear, putting the atomizer down as he EXITS. Trent picks up the atomizer, sprays himself, enjoys the scent a moment before FOLLOWING. 18 INT. GREAT HALL - DAY CLOSE ON Beata. BEATA You claim you intend to remove these survivors from our planet. Are you prepared to give us your solemn word on that? 19 REVERSE ON OUR AWAY TEAM standing as before. TROI We are. 20 FULL SHOT Parliament in full session as before. BEATA You should know that the vote was not unanimous. Some among us are suspicious. 21 ARIEL to name one.  STAR TREK: "Angel One" - 11/9/87 - ACT ONE 15. 22 BACK TO SCENE BEATA Yet, the majority feel that we have no choice but to trust you. RIKER We don't understand the source of your misgivings, Mistress, but we appreciate your faith in us. BEATA (sharply) Make certain that our faith has not been misplaced. (then:) There are four survivors from the ship you call the Odin. All male. Their leader is a man who calls himself Ramsey. RIKER If you'll bring these men to us, we'll have them off your planet immediately. BEATA If they were mine to deliver, I would do so without hesitation. Unfortunately, their hiding place has long eluded us. TASHA Hiding place? Why are they in hiding? BEATA Because they are fugitives on Angel One! And the sooner we are rid of them, the better! (calming down) When these men arrived seven years ago, they accepted our hospitality quickly enough. But gradually, they grew restive. Making unreasonable demands, going against the natural order -- there seemed to be no end to the trouble they created. TROI Using the technology of the Enterprise, we might be able to find these men. STAR TREK: "Angel One" - 11/9/87 - ACT ONE 16. 22 CONTINUED: BEATA I assumed as much. But be warned, Counselor -- (beat, and:) -- these men are dangerous. Our away team members exchange a look -- what have they stepped in this time? And on this, we: FADE OUT. END OF ACT ONE STAR TREK: "Angel One" - 11/9/87 - ACT TWO 17. ACT TWO FADE IN: 23 EXT. SPACE - STARSHIP (OPTICAL) The Enterprise continues its silent orbit. 24 INT. ENTERPRISE - SICKBAY BEVERLY administers hypo shots to Wesley's buddy who is laid out on a bed next to Wesley as: WESLEY (suffering) This is worse than Hesperan Thumping Cough. What is it, Mom? BEVERLY You and your friend probably picked up something on the Quazulu Eight field trip last week. Whatever it is may have been activated by your exposure to the cold ski environment of the Holodeck. WESLEY But the transporter biofilter is supposed to kill stuff like that. Beverly has moved to stand at his side, checking his vital signs with an instrument. BEVERLY If this is our first contact, it wouldn't have been programmed into the biofilter computer yet. WESLEY (getting sleepy) Mom... And he's asleep. Beverly gives in to the out-dated, yet motherly hand-to-Wesley's-forehead-checking-for-fever, tucks him in. FOLLOW AS she CROSSES to her LAB AREA. The work space already shows the CLUTTER of her search for answers to this illness. STAR TREK: "Angel One" - 11/9/87 - ACT TWO 18. 24 CONTINUED: Activating her com: BEVERLY Sickbay to Captain Picard. 25 INT. MAIN BRIDGE (INTERCUT AS DESIRED) Geordi and Worf at their stations as: PICARD Picard here. BEVERLY Wesley and one of his friends have contracted some form of respiratory ailment -- most likely a viral infection. PICARD Is it contained? BEVERLY I believe so. I've isolated the twelve students who were on the field trip where I believe the problem began. PICARD How contagious is it? BEVERLY Unknown. Nor do I have a clue as to how it's transmitted. PICARD Please stay with it, Doctor. Starfleet has important business for us as soon as the away team returns. I don't relish having my crew infected. BEVERLY At the moment, my only suggestion is that all crew avoid any cold-weather Holodeck simulations until further notice. Picard rubs his neck, trying to ease the stiffness. His voice betrays a trace of irritation: STAR TREK: "Angel One" - 11/9/87 - ACT TWO 19. 25 CONTINUED: PICARD Agreed. And keep me advised. Damn that stiffness! 26 REVERSE ANGLE (OPTICAL) Picard, rubbing his neck, glances toward the Main Viewer, the Green Planet below. 27 INT. ANGEL ONE GREAT HALL - NIGHT Away team present. Beata and her Parliamentarians listen as: RIKER Data, how can we best go about finding Mister Ramsey and the other survivors? DATA Assuming the survivors have retained some remnants of their lives aboard the Odin, we might not have a difficult task. If we can isolate something unique to the survivors -- perhaps an element not otherwise found on Angel One -- we can utilize the Enterprise scanners. RIKER (to Beata) Mister Data will need access to your library. BEATA Our library is far too sophisticated for a man to comprehend. DATA I am an android, Mistress, though anatomically, I am a fully functioning male. STAR TREK: "Angel One" - 11/9/87 - ACT TWO 20. 27 CONTINUED: BEATA An amusing notion. Perhaps you could teach our males a thing or two. (with a look) Trent -- see to the android's needs. Trent nods, LEADS Data from the room. To the team: BEATA Do not forget your promise. Without another word, Beata, and then the other women, rise and LEAVE. 28 EXT. SPACE - ENTERPRISE (OPTICAL) In orbit. 29 INT. ENTERPRISE - MAIN BRIDGE Worf, Geordi and others. Worf on the com: WORF Bridge to Captain Picard. PICARD'S COM VOICE Go ahead, Lieutenant. WORF The away team has requested that we scan the planet surface for traces of platinum. PICARD'S COM VOICE Have Mister La Forge break fixed orbit and initiate a search pattern. WORF Aye, Captain. (and:) Geordi. GEORDI Search pattern initiated now. Punctuated by the appropriate button pushing. STAR TREK: "Angel One" - 11/9/87 - ACT TWO 21. 30 INT. ENTERPRISE - CAPTAIN'S READY ROOM Beverly hovers over Picard with a medical tricorder. PICARD This is all quite unnecessary, Doctor. (suppressing the pain) I'm merely fatigued. Beverly reads the tricorder, shakes her head. BEVERLY Because you are very ill, Captain. You have the virus. (in full stature) Captain, in my opinion, you are no longer physically able to effectively command this vessel. PICARD Don't be ridiculous, Doctor. I've got an away team down there, in less-than-friendly territory, not to mention an appointment with the several Romulan battlecruisers... BEVERLY You have an appointment in your cabin, Captain. With your bed. PICARD Is that an order? BEVERLY Yes. She's as stern as she can be. He relents. PICARD I guess I'm better at giving orders than taking them. She smiles. He shivers. 31 INT. ENTERPRISE - MAIN BRIDGE Geordi and Worf at their stations. WORF (stuffy nose) I think I may sneeze... STAR TREK: "Angel One" - 11/9/87 - ACT TWO 22. 31 CONTINUED: GEORDI A Klingon sneeze?! WORF Only kind I know. Geordi's dread is short-lived as Picard, walking unsteadily, ENTERS the bridge, FOLLOWED by Beverly. Every eye sneaks a look. Pausing at the turbolift, he turns to Geordi: PICARD Lieutenant La Forge -- you have command until further notice. Please make the proper entries in the ship's log. GEORDI Aye, sir. Picard and Beverly ENTER the turbolift; doors CLOSE. Geordi's concern for Picard is tempered by the supreme pleasure he feels as he experiments with the fit of the command chair. Worf glances at his scanner display: WORF Scanners indicate a platinum trace. Should I notify the away team? GEORDI Make it so. Worf stares and shakes his head in reaction. Even Geordi can't believe he said that. The command chair seems to fit Geordi like a glove. 32 INT. ANGEL ONE GUEST QUARTERS - NIGHT Riker, Trent with him as escort, stands before Beata who is seated at her desk. Ariel is also present, her business with Beata suspended by: RIKER The Enterprise reports a possible location for Mister Ramsey and the other survivors. BEATA So soon? I'm impressed with your haste. STAR TREK: "Angel One" - 11/9/87 - ACT TWO 23. 32 CONTINUED: ARIEL I am suspicious of it. BEATA You've had your opportunity to object, Ariel. You were in the minority. ARIEL Excuse me, Mistress. I have matters to attend to elsewhere. Giving the away team a final look, she EXITS. And: RIKER With your permission, we'd like to begin our search immediately. BEATA By all means. (rising) But I'm sure that Counselor Troi and the others can do that without you. (off his reaction) If I recall, you had a gesture of goodwill you wished to give me... ? RIKER That can certainly wait until we've recovered the survivors. BEATA Are you suggesting that the women in your party are incapable of performing this task without the help of a man? RIKER Not at all. Lieutenant Yar and Counselor Troi are completely qualified. BEATA (sarcastically) How generous you are with your praise. (an order) Inform them you will remain here with me. STAR TREK: "Angel One" - 11/9/87 - ACT TWO 24. 32 CONTINUED: (2) RIKER (a beat) Riker to Lieutenant Yar. 33 INT. GUEST QUARTERS (INTERCUT AS DESIRED) Data, Troi and Tasha standing by. TASHA This is Yar. RIKER Tasha - you'll be leading the team without me. TASHA (puzzled) Commander... ? RIKER In the interest of diplomatic relations, I'll remain with Mistress Beata while you conduct your search. TASHA Certainly, sir. (END INTERCUT) Beata indicates a chair. BEATA Relax. We have much to discuss. Riker sits. 34 INT. GUEST QUARTERS - NIGHT (OPTICAL) TASHA Set phasers to stun. Data and Tasha do. TROI Is that really necessary? DATA A justified precaution, Counselor. Mistress Beata observed that Mister Ramsey and his men were dangerous. STAR TREK: "Angel One" - 11/9/87 - ACT TWO 25. 34 CONTINUED: TASHA (into Com) Lieutenant Yar to Enterprise. GEORDI'S COM VOICE Go ahead, Tasha. TASHA Three to beam to the location of that platinum trace, Geordi. GEORDI'S COM VOICE Coordinates set. TASHA Energize! Tasha, Data and Troi DEMATERIALIZE. 35 INT. HIDEOUT - NIGHT (OPTICAL) Primitive by the standards we've grown accustomed to on Angel One, but comfortable communal housing nevertheless. Data, Troi and Tasha MATERIALIZE, phasers at the ready. But their vigilance seems the product of over-training as they REACT to the sight of: 36 RAMSEY relaxing in a chair. He smiles at the away team. RAMSEY Welcome. I've been expecting you. And, on the away team's REACTIONS to this unexpectedly benign threat, we: FADE OUT. END OF ACT TWO STAR TREK: "Angel One" - 11/9/87 - ACT THREE 26. ACT THREE FADE IN: 37 EXT. SPACE - ENTERPRISE (OPTICAL) In orbit. 38 INT. MAIN BRIDGE Geordi at Command; Worf at his station. Other crewmembers are scattered about. PICARD'S COM VOICE Picard to bridge. Worf lets go a SNEEZE that packs a wallop. WORF Pardon me. GEORDI La Forge here, Captain. 39 INT. PICARD'S QUARTERS (INTERCUT AS NEEDED) Drawn, weary, listless, Picard huddles under a blanket as he tries to sit at his desk. The man is incredibly ill, his speech halting, broken by coughs and shivers. PICARD Status report, please. GEORDI Eighty-two more reported cases of the virus, sir. Doctor Crusher has converted the Holodeck into an isolation ward. PICARD And the -- He's suddenly overcome with a terrible COUGH, making further speech impossible. As it calms: PICARD (continuing) -- away team? STAR TREK: "Angel One" - 11/9/87 - ACT THREE 27. 39 CONTINUED: GEORDI No recent contact, Captain. But I've informed them of the medical situation up here and the growing Romulan threat to our Neutral Zone outpost. PICARD Keep me-- (coughs) --advised. You'll have the bridge until Commander Riker returns. With great effort, Picard drags himself away from his desk, finally collapsing onto his bunk. 40 ANGLE FAVORING WORF referring to his console at the conn. WORF (congested) Engineering reports a computer malf... ... The rest of which is lost in another Klingon SNEEZE. WORF (continuing) Sorry, I'm... getting sick. GEORDI I'm sure half the ship knows that by now. Report to Sickbay. As Worf struggles to his feet, the Com crackles: ENGINEERING'S COM VOICE Engineering to bridge. GEORDI La Forge here. ENGINEERING'S COM VOICE Sir, the computer won't accept the variant climate controls Doctor Crusher wants in the quarantine areas. GEORDI I'm on my way. STAR TREK: "Angel One" - 11/9/87 - ACT THREE 28. 40 CONTINUED: Worf, on his way to the turbolift, (and struggling against the urge to sneeze), stops Geordi with a hand to his shoulder. WORF With all respect, Lieutenant, there are other people to do that job now. Geordi sees the wisdom of this, presses the Com: GEORDI bridge to Engineering. Lieutenant Wong knows the system. I'm sure she'll be able to resolve all problems. ENGINEERING'S COM VOICE I'll ask her to look at it right away, sir. GEORDI Worf... Stopping in the Lift, Worf turns back to face Geordi. GEORDI (continuing) Thanks for the advice. Worf nods. But he can't speak because another sneeze is on the way. The turbolift doors CLOSE just in time as the SNEEZE explodes. 41 INT. ANGEL ONE HIDEOUT - NIGHT Ramsey, a large, pleasant man, pours drinks for the away team. He's dressed in a subdued version of the male native dress. TROI We haven't much time, Mister Ramsey. The Enterprise has urgent business elsewhere. RAMSEY Certainly we have time for a drink. Troi and Tasha take the offered drinks. He raises his in silent toast, takes a sip, and: STAR TREK: "Angel One" - 11/9/87 - ACT THREE 29. 41 CONTINUED: RAMSEY (continuing) How did you find me? DATA Actually, it was quite simple. I accessed all possible elements available to the crew of the Odin, cross-referenced those to elements endemic to Angel One, then eliminated the common denominators. Angel One has no platinum. Enterprise scanners did the rest. RAMSEY Platinum, was it? Ramsey pulls a PENDANT on a CHAIN from around his neck INTO VIEW. RAMSEY (continuing) My wings. I kept them for their sentimental value. TASHA Where are the other survivors, Mister Ramsey? RAMSEY Oh, they're nearby. Packing, as a matter of fact, since we can no longer remain here. As the unofficial leader of our little group, I've been chosen to speak for us all. TROI Marooned seven years on an alien planet. Rather than excitement or anticipation at being rescued, I sense a feeling of calm in you. RAMSEY What is it you think you're rescuing me from? My shipmates and I have all taken wives. A few even have children. You can't "rescue" a man from the place he calls his home. Home? This is getting more complicated by the moment. STAR TREK: "Angel One" - 11/9/87 - ACT THREE 30. 42 INT. EXECUTIVE OFFICE - NIGHT Trent is no longer in the room. Beata and Riker, seated comfortably on a lounge, each have a drink. RIKER ... Why were you so hesitant at first to tell us about the Odin survivors? BEATA Simply because Ramsey and his men are anarchists. Tampering with the laws of nature. Obsessed with spreading untruths, and encouraging dissent among our people. I had to be certain you weren't here to fuel their struggle. RIKER It's not our place to interfere in the domestic affairs of other societies. BEATA Not you, perhaps, because you understand a man's place. But Ramsey is not so well-mannered. (shakes her head) Sometimes I fear that it is actually the men who are the clever ones, enjoying all that life has to offer while we women devote ourselves to the drudgery of making life work. RIKER In our society, men and women share equally in all that life has to offer. BEATA Don't misunderstand me, Riker. I'd be the last to imply that men are in any way inferior to women. But, after all, men are... men -- with a natural place in the scheme of things. STAR TREK: "Angel One" - 11/9/87 - ACT THREE 31. 42 CONTINUED: RIKER (amused) We gave up those distinctions centuries ago. In our world, equality among the sexes is so well established, we no longer consider it an issue. BEATA (humoring him) You deny that differences exist between men and women? RIKER We not only acknowledge the differences. We delight in them. The mood is growing a bit more seductive. BEATA That's so like a man. So emotional. What would we do without you... ? A question she is about to answer with a kiss. But the moment is cut short by a NOISE o.s. Both REACT to: 43 ANGLE - TRENT ENTERING with the metallic box. Taking the box: RIKER Thank you, Trent. Trent continues to stand. Dismissing him: BEATA You may go. Reluctantly, Trent EXITS. Riker offers Beata the metallic box. RIKER With compliments of the USS Enterprise. Their hands linger at the touch before Riker finally pulls his away. Beata opens the box and withdraws a large, clear, octagonal CRYSTAL. STAR TREK: "Angel One" - 11/9/87 - ACT THREE 32. 43 CONTINUED: RIKER It's called an Albeni meditation crystal. Riker removes a small striking bar from the box, taps the crystal. It comes to life, producing a warm GOLDEN GLOW and accompanying resonant HUM. BEATA Very impressive. Riker puts his hand over the crystal to turn it off. Beata covers his hand with her own. There's a lot of heat between these two, and it's no secret. BEATA (continuing) And now, of course, I must repay you in kind. She leans to kiss Riker. He submits. Willingly. 44 INT. HIDEOUT - NIGHT Ramsey paces the small place, the away team watching, listening to: RAMSEY ... Five months in a rescue pod no bigger than this room is an eternity I hope none of you ever have to face. When we finally made it here, we all thought we'd died and gone to heaven. You've seen the women of the planet -- tall and strong and lovely. Shakes his head, remembering his moment of realization: RAMSEY (continuing) But once the newness wore off, we started to see how men on this planet were treated. No vote, no opinions... no respect. TASHA None of which is any longer your concern, Mister Ramsey. Call the others in, please. It's time to leave. STAR TREK: "Angel One" - 11/9/87 - ACT THREE 33. 44 CONTINUED: RAMSEY Despite its problems, Lieutenant, we like it here on Angel One. (simply) We're not going anywhere. TROI But Mistress Beata -- RAMSEY (overlapping) Mistress Beata be damned! Her wish is not my command. And neither is yours. You can't force us to go. DATA Mister Ramsey is correct, Counselor. The Odin was not a starship, which means its crew is not bound by the Prime Directive. If he and the other survivors wish to stay here, there is absolutely nothing we can do. Tasha and Troi exchange a look, a shrug. 45 EXT. SPACE - THE ENTERPRISE in orbit. 46 INT. SICKBAY SHOOTING from the lab area, WE CAN SEE the room is overflowing with beds of sick crewmembers. A line of newly infected has formed in the doorway. Beverly is busy with her research when: GEORDI'S COM VOICE Bridge to Sickbay -- how are you Doing, Doctor? BEVERLY (into Com) We have more sick than we do beds. STAR TREK: "Angel One" - 11/9/87 - ACT THREE 34. 47 INT. MAIN BRIDGE (INTERCUT AS REQUIRED) Geordi, nursing a stiff neck of his own, listens: BEVERLY I've been forced to confine over three hundred to their private quarters. GEORDI We're going to be seriously undermanned if we're forced to engage the Romulans in battle. BEVERLY The Romulans are your problem, Lieutenant. Trying to find an innoculant is mine. This virus mutates every twenty minutes. On the positive side, the virus is debilitating -- but so far we haven't had any fatalities. GEORDI If this continues, there'll be no one left to run the ship. BEVERLY If it continues, no one will be healthy enough to care. (END INTERCUT) Geordi surveys his undermanned bridge. If anything, his neck seems even stiffer. TASHA'S COM VOICE Lieutenant Yar to Enterprise. GEORDI (activating Com) Enterprise, go ahead. 48 INT. ANGEL ONE HIDEOUT - NIGHT (OPTICAL) Data and Troi standing by. Ramsey watching. TASHA Prepare to beam three back to our previous location, Geordi. After we regroup with Commander Riker, we'll return to the ship. STAR TREK: "Angel One" - 11/9/87 - ACT THREE 35. 48 CONTINUED: GEORDI'S COM VOICE Suggest you make that on the double. We have a real medical emergency brewing up here. A third of the crew is down. And the latest report from the Neutral Zone outpost is that more Romulan battlecrusiers are entering the area. TASHA I'll inform the commander. (then, to Ramsey) One thing before we go. You said you were expecting us. Why? RAMSEY I'm sorry. I can't tell you. The away team accepts this. TROI We wish you well, Mister Ramsey. TASHA (into Com) Energize! Our away team DEMATERIALIZES. Beat. Ramsey goes to a door, opens it, speaking off: RAMSEY They are gone. Beat. OUT steps Ariel. They embrace. 49 INT. EXECUTIVE OFFICE - NIGHT CLOSE ON the Albeni mediation crystal. Beata's hand reaches INTO FRAME, taps the crystal with the striking bar. It GLOWS, HUMS. PAN off the crystal to the lounge where Riker and Beata are wrapped in each other's arms. There are caresses and kisses as counterpoint to: BEATA It is such a refreshing change to be with a man who knows what he wants. STAR TREK: "Angel One" - 11/9/87 - ACT THREE 36. 49 CONTINUED: RIKER You mean without a woman having to tell him? BEATA Exactly! I knew you were bright enough to understand. Women, by our very nature, want only what is best for their men. RIKER Men are not objects to be possessed, Mistress Beata. BEATA (humoring him) Of course they're not. It was merely a figure of speech. A BELL o.s. The kiss continues. Another BELL. Angered by the interruption, Beata reaches out to quiet the Albeni crystal before sharply calling off: BEATA Enter. 50 ANOTHER ANGLE as Trent ENTERS the chamber. "Don't kill the messenger" is practically stamped on his forehead. BEATA Why do you bother me? TRENT Forgive the disturbance, Elected One... BEATA (to Riker) I expect so little from this sorry excuse for a man. Perhaps even that much is too much... She is on her feet, charging the smaller man. BEATA (continuing) What is so important you find it necessary to intrude on my privacy? STAR TREK: "Angel One" - 11/9/87 - ACT THREE 37. 50 CONTINUED: TRENT They have returned, Mistress. But without Ramsey or the others. Trent motions off, and IN WALK Data, Tasha and Troi. Riker rises on their entrance. BEATA Your advanced technology has proven inadequate? Rather than answer her, the away team turns to Riker. RIKER What happened, Troi? TROI Mister Ramsey and the other survivors refuse to leave. BEATA But you promised! RIKER (considers, and:) I'm sorry. There's nothing else we can do. BEATA I am sorry as well. She moves to sit behind her desk. BEATA (continuing) Since you refuse to take them with you, I am left with no choice... but to sentence them all to death. On Riker's REACTION, we: FADE OUT. END OF ACT THREE STAR TREK: "Angel One" - 11/9/87 - ACT FOUR 38. ACT FOUR FADE IN: 51 EXT. SPACE - ENTERPRISE (OPTICAL) Everything normal on the outside. 52 INT. ENTERPRISE - PICARD'S QUARTERS Still in bed; still very sick. Door CHIME. Weakly: PICARD Enter. Beverly, a thermos-like container in hand, ENTERS. Picard makes no pretense of health as he shivers under his blankets. Beverly squirts a serving of green liquid into a cup. He's too weak to take the cup. She lifts his head, holding the cup to his lips. He resists. BEVERLY It looks horrible, tastes worse -- but it's absolutely guaranteed to make you feel better. Picard gulps, nearly choking on a mouthful of the foul brew. He sputters, growls, twisting up his face. BEVERLY (continuing) Knew you'd like it. (smells) New cologne? PICARD (coughs, groans) Same... you gave me last birthday. BEVERLY Uh-uh, different. Like something I smelled earlier. Something... I don't know... like a flower I remember. Something Klingon, I think. STAR TREK: "Angel One" - 11/9/87 - ACT FOUR 39. 52 CONTINUED: PICARD Lieutenant Worf and I... detected a similar scent when we bumped into... your son at the Holodeck. BEVERLY (lightbulb!) It's that smell! That must be how the virus travels! (working it out:) An airborne microbe whose sweet scent inspires deep inhalation... (bingo!) ... And once inside the body, becomes this damned virus! (quickly) I have a great deal of work to do. She's GONE in a rush. On the closed door, a feeble: PICARD You are excused, Doctor. He falls back into his pillows to sleep. 53 EXT. ANGEL ONE - NIGHT - ESTABLISH (OPTICAL) 54 INT. ANGEL ONE GREAT HALL - NIGHT Riker, Tasha and Troi are joined by Data RETURNING from a quiet corner of the hall. Except for our away team, only Trent and a female guard are standing by to make sure no one steals the paperclips. In hushed voices: RIKER What's the latest on the Enterprise's medical situation? DATA Doctor Crusher feels the virus will undoubtedly run unchecked through the entire ship's contingent. Attempts to develop an innoculant have so far ended in failure. Lieutenant La Forge still has the Conn pending your return. STAR TREK: "Angel One" - 11/9/87 - ACT FOUR 40. 54 CONTINUED: RIKER What about the Romulans in the Neutral Zone? DATA The border outpost reports a contingent of seven Romulan battlecruisers within sensor range. The USS Berlin has answered their distress call, and is standing by. However, should hostilities erupt, the outpost and the starship will be outgunned. It is felt that the Enterprise's presence in the area will be a vital show of force. TASHA Some show of force. The Enterprise may be able to fly on autopilot. But with that virus knocking down our crew, we're going to be in sorry shape if things turn ugly. RIKER The Romulans won't know our strength, Lieutenant. (glancing around) It's time for us to leave this place. TROI It feels terribly wrong to leave while Beata is determined to execute those people. RIKER She has to find them first. Ramsey and his bunch have been fugitives for years. I suspect he's pretty good at evading capture. As cold as it sounds we're going to have to treat this mission as if it never happened. Everything will remain exactly as it was before we arrived. A COMMOTION o.s., and they turn to see: STAR TREK: "Angel One" - 11/9/87 - ACT FOUR 41. 55 BEATA AND THE PARLIAMENTARIANS FILING INTO the Hall, taking their seats. Ariel is not among them. TROI (low, to team) Something is wrong. The away team's attention is focused on Beata even as her attention is on them. Finally: BEATA Your presence on Angel One no longer amuses me. RIKER Amusement was never our intention, Mistress. BEATA Before you go back to your ship, there is something I wish you to see. She nods to a guard near the far door. The guard opens the door, and other guards lead Ramsey, three male earthlings, two other native women and a handful of native men into the hall. RAMSEY (to Troi) We were no harm to anyone. Why did you tell them where to find us? BEATA Don't blame them, Ramsey. You brought this upon yourself. You... and the traitor. She glances to the guard near the door she and the Parliamentarians used. The guard opens this door, EXITS... only to RETURN half a beat later with Ariel in tow. Ariel and Ramsey exchange a pained look. STAR TREK: "Angel One" - 11/9/87 - ACT FOUR 42. 55 CONTINUED: BEATA (continuing) One doesn't need the technology of the Enterprise to follow Mistress Ariel sneaking off to warn her husband. (to Guard) Let her stand with him now... The Guard leads Ariel to Ramsey's side, into his arms as: BEATA (continuing) ... For tomorrow they will die together. Off our away team's REACTIONS, we find ourselves: 56 EXT. SPACE - THE ENTERPRISE (OPTICAL) In orbit. 57 INT. MAIN BRIDGE Beverly, medical tricorder in hand, is examining Geordi. He looks terrible, feels worse. Otherwise, the bridge is empty. BEVERLY You're out of commission, Geordi. Report to your quarters. GEORDI (in horrible pain) Can't leave my post... until I'm relieved. BEVERLY I've been aboard the Enterprise long enough to know she's designed to run herself. GEORDI But the innoculant -- BEVERLY I can do my research on the computers here. STAR TREK: "Angel One" - 11/9/87 - ACT FOUR 43. 57 CONTINUED: GEORDI Then I can convalesce here. Geordi holds his position, sick as he is. Beverly resigns herself to taking the seat adjacent. She's not at all pleased with what's happening. What's worse is -- she's beginning to feel ill herself. 58 INT. ANGEL ONE EXECUTIVE OFFICE - NIGHT Riker stands before the desk, fighting to draw Beata's attention from the stack of paperwork she intentionally hides behind. RIKER You claim to be an advanced society, yet you resort to tyranny and executions in order to suppress those who don't share your views. BEATA I don't expect you to understand. RIKER Why? Because I'm only a man? BEATA You'll accomplish nothing with that attitude. Riker counts to ten, and: RIKER Mistress Beata, if you could avoid executing Ramsey and his followers, would you do so? BEATA Is that not the way of an advanced society? RIKER Then let us talk to men from the Odin one last time. Let me try to convince them to leave with us. STAR TREK: "Angel One" - 11/9/87 - ACT FOUR 44. 58 CONTINUED: BEATA But what of the others? Their minds have been poisoned. Will you also include those from this planet who unwisely chose to follow Ramsey and his group? RIKER Yes. All of them. Beata considers this. 59 INT. HOLDING AREA - NIGHT Ramsey, Ariel, and the others sit, stand or lean in the cramped area like ancient Christians awaiting dawn and the inevitable lions. All react to: 60 ANGLE Riker, Data, Troi and Tasha are allowed into the room by a Guard who closes and locks the door behind them. TROI Mistress Beata is giving you a second chance. We're prepared to take your entire group with us. RAMSEY That's very kind of you, sir, but we're not going. TASHA Haven't you been paying attention, Ramsey? You're scheduled to be executed tomorrow. A glance to his followers, all of whom are listening, confirms his resolve. RAMSEY We don't want to die. We don't want to leave, either. I'm not Academy educated, but I've studied a little history. The ancient Christians faced their lions, the natives of the African continent faced their suppressors. (MORE) STAR TREK: "Angel One" - 11/9/87 - ACT FOUR 45. 60 CONTINUED: RAMSEY (Cont'd) Even the women of the twentieth century chose to settle for nothing but full equality. RIKER There's no time to debate the issues, Ramsey. We're taking you with us whether you choose to go or not. DATA Excuse me, Commander, but removing any of these people against their will would be a violation of several Starfleet regulations, not the least of which would be the Prime Directive. RIKER (sharply) I realize that, Data. (softly) But I'd rather be facing a court martial than trying to live with the guilt of leaving these people to their deaths. (into Com) Commander Riker to Enterprise. 61 INT. ENTERPRISE - MAIN BRIDGE - (INTERCUT AS NEEDED) BEVERLY (into Com) This is the Enterprise. Our away team share a look. TASHA Things must be worse up there than we thought. RIKER Doctor, where is Lieutenant La Forge? For the first time, WE SEE Geordi, barely conscious in the command chair. STAR TREK: "Angel One" - 11/9/87 - ACT FOUR 46. 61 CONTINUED: BEVERLY He's right here, Will, but he's in no shape to be here. RIKER We're on our way, Doctor. There'll be fourteen to beam up. Two groups, five each. I'll be in the last group of four. BEVERLY I'm afraid I can't allow that, Will. The virus is totally out of control. Until I know exactly what I'm dealing with, I can't let anyone new be exposed. RIKER There are people facing certain death down here, Doctor. BEVERLY They could well be facing the same thing up here, Will. I have no idea what effect living on Angel One might have on a person's immune system. I'm sorry. REACTIONS all around. RIKER Understood. (considers, then:) Doctor -- would this virus have any effect on Data? BEVERLY None that I can imagine. RIKER You're going back alone, Data. We have no idea what the Romulans plan to do to that outpost. You're going to have to get the Enterprise to the Neutral Zone before it's too late. Reading Data's pause as uncertainty: RIKER (continuing) That's a direct order, Mister Data. STAR TREK: "Angel One" - 11/9/87 - ACT FOUR 47. 61 CONTINUED: (2) DATA Neutral Zone before it is too late. Understood, Commander. 62 ANOTHER ANGLE (OPTICAL) DATA (into Com) This is Data, standing by to beam up. Data DEMATERIALIZES. 63 ANGLE - OUR AWAY TEAM turning now to look at tomorrow's intended victims. TROI And what of them? RIKER I don't know, Deanna. And on this uncertain fate, we: FADE OUT. END OF ACT FOUR STAR TREK: "Angel One" - 11/9/87 - ACT FIVE 48. ACT FIVE FADE IN: 64 EXT. ANGEL ONE - DAY - ESTABLISH 65 INT. ANGEL ONE - GUEST QUARTERS - DAY A sleepless night has been spent by all. Trent ENTERS. TRENT Mistress Beata invites you to witness this morning's reaffirmation of Angel One's moral imperative. TASHA Is that supposed to be the fancy name for murder on this planet? RIKER Send Mistress Beata our regrets. TRENT The Elected One will not look fondly upon -- Trent's admonishment is cut short by: DATA'S COM VOICE Enterprise to Commander Riker. TROI (surprised) They are still here? RIKER (into Com, angry:) This is Commander Riker. 66 INT. ENTERPRISE - MAIN BRIDGE (INTERCUT AS DESIRED) RIKER I gave you a direct order to head for the Neutral Zone immediately. Explain the delay. STAR TREK: "Angel One" - 11/9/87 - ACT FIVE 49. 66 CONTINUED: DATA To be precise, Commander, you ordered me to reach the Neutral Zone "before it is too late." I have computed the length of time the border outpost and USS Berlin can safely withstand a Romulan attack... deducted our time to destination at maximum warp speed. That leaves Doctor Crusher with forty-eight more minutes to complete her research and develop an innoculant to the virus. TASHA (energized) Which means there's still time for us to do something. RIKER Forty-eight minutes... I think we're down to splitting hairs. DATA Splitting hairs is a figure of speech I recognize, Commander. Speaking for those whose hair is soon to be split, forty-eight minutes may make a great deal of difference. (refers to console) Excuse me -- forty-seven minutes. RIKER (considering:) Perhaps, Data, just perhaps. (then) Thanks for following my orders so precisely, Data. Riker out. (END INTERCUT) Riker turns to Trent. RIKER (continuing) On second thought, Trent, we would be honored to watch your moral imperative in action.  STAR TREK: "Angel One" - 11/9/87 - ACT FIVE 50. 67 INT. GREAT HALL - DAY - (TO BE WRITTEN) Lots of folk. Tasha, Troi and Riker. Ramsey and Ariel. Ramsey's merry band of followers. Guards. Beata. The Parliamentarians. Trent. Anyone else we can find and costume. It's hangin' time. The thrust of this scene is Riker trying to convince Beata that the execution of Ramsey will not halt what can only be perceived as an irrevocable evolutionary cycle in Angel One's societal development. After getting Beata to admit that Ramsey and his followers are merely symbols of a change that preceded their arrival on Angel One, Riker is quick to point out that executing these people will only make martyrs of them. That, in fact, to kill them will accelerate rather than stop or retard the coming equality between the sexes of Angel One. Riker might even point out similar occurrences in Earth's history... I don't know... depends on how clever he is. Nevertheless, Riker is able to demonstrate to our audience, and Beata, that executing Ramsey, et al, will be counterproductive. The ladies adjourn to caucus. 68 INT. ANGEL ONE GUEST QUARTERS - DAY (TO BE WRITTEN) Our away team waits. They're running out of time. They explore their options. Hey, it's a short scene. 69 EXT. SPACE - THE ENTERPRISE (OPTICAL) In orbit. 70 INT. ENTERPRISE - MAIN BRIDGE Data moves from station to station, checking all is well. BEVERLY'S COM VOICE Sickbay to bridge. DATA Go ahead, Doctor. STAR TREK: "Angel One" - 11/9/87 - ACT FIVE 51. 71 INT. CRUSHER'S LAB (INTERCUT AS DESIRED) Her work area shows evidence of much work. Beverly looks tired... but very pleased. BEVERLY Bingo, Data. DATA Bingo? I fail to see the relevance, Doctor. Is that not a reference to an ancient Earth game? BEVERLY It's also a reference to success, Data. I've got the innoculant. DATA Excellent, Doctor. And we still have a margin of seventeen minutes. I will inform the away team immediately. (changes channel) Enterprise to Commander Riker. 72 INT. ANGEL ONE GUEST QUARTERS - DAY Our Team listens as: DATA'S COM VOICE We are ready to have you beamed up, Commander. RIKER Data, I want you to lock the transporter on the holding area where they're keeping Ramsey and the others. If we don't hear from Beata in the next ten minutes, you are to begin the beam up sequence, five at a time. The away team will beam up last. DATA Understood, Commander. Enterprise out. NOISE o.s., and Trent ENTERS. TRENT The Elected One wishes to see you. STAR TREK: "Angel One" - 11/9/87 - ACT FIVE 52. 73 INT. EXECUTIVE OFFICE - DAY (TO BE WRITTEN) Beata, Trent, the away team. Basically, Beata tells Riker he's pretty smart for a man. She's given his words a great deal of thought, sees his point, has (with the help of her parliament) reached a decision. The Ramsey cult will not be executed. Instead, they will be exiled to a remote part of Angel One where they can promote all the heresy they wish. And anyone else on Angel One who feels the same way can go with them. This solution won't stop the inevitable decay of Angel One's cherished system, but at least it will retard it long enough so that Beata won't have to be around to see the damage. Beata urges them to be on their way. She strikes the meditation crystal, giving in to its soothing warmth as Riker belays the previous order to "kidnap" the Ramsey group, and our away team DEMATERIALIZES. 74 INT. ENTERPRISE - TRANSPORTER ROOM (OPTICAL) Riker, Troi and Tasha MATERIALIZE. Beverly is standing by to inoculate the returning away team. BEVERLY Welcome home. RIKER It's good to be back. Is everyone recovering? BEVERLY Slowly... but yes. He HURRIES OUT, FOLLOWED closely by Troi and Tasha. 75 INT. ENTERPRISE - PICARD'S QUARTERS Picard is still in bed, but he looks much better than before. DOOR CHIME. PICARD Enter. Troi ENTERS his stateroom. TROI How are you feeling, sir? STAR TREK: "Angel One" - 11/9/87 - ACT FIVE 53. 75 CONTINUED: PICARD On the mend, thank you. Tell me about Angel One. Troi sits next to him, ready to make her report. 76 INT. MAIN BRIDGE Data is seated at his usual station. The turbolift doors OPEN and OUT STEP Riker and Tasha, each hurrying to the appropriate station. As Riker takes the center seat. RIKER Set coordinates for the Neutral Zone, Mister Data. We have a call to pay on the Romulans. DATA Coordinates set, Commander. On your mark -- RIKER As Captain Picard would say -- make it so, Mister Data. Data hits the "make it so" buttons and: 77 EXT. SPACE - ENTERPRISE (OPTICAL) the ship breaks out of orbit and heads toward its next adventure as we: FADE OUT. END OF ACT FIVE THE END STAR TREK: THE NEXT GENERATION "11001001" (fka "10101001") #40271-116 Written by Maurice Hurley & Robert Lewin Directed by Paul Lynch Copyright 1987 Paramount Pictures Corporation. All Rights Reserved. This script is not for publication or reproduction. No one is authorized to dispose of same. If lost or destroyed, please notify the Script Department. 2ND REV. FINAL DRAFT NOVEMBER 19, 1987 STAR TREK: "11001001" - 11/19/87 - CAST STAR TREK: THE NEXT GENERATION "11001001" CAST PICARD ORFIL QUINTEROS RIKER BYNARS: BEVERLY ONE ZERO DATA ZERO ONE TASHA ZERO ZERO WORF ONE ONE GEORDI JAZZ COMBO: WESLEY BASS PLAYER DRUMMER Voice-Overs: PIANIST COMPUTER VOICE (Main Computer) COMPUTER (Auto-Destruct) MINUET (BEAUTIFUL BRUNETTE) WOMAN (MINUET-LIKE) Non-speaking roles: MAINTENANCE PERSONNEL JAZZ CLUB AUDIENCE PRETTY BLONDE STUNNING REDHEAD DR. TERENCE EPSTEIN Voice-Overs: STARBASE COM VOICE STARBASE COMPUTER STAR TREK: "11001001" - 11/19/87 - SETS STAR TREK: THE NEXT GENERATION "11001001" SETS INTERIORS EXTERIORS USS ENTERPRISE USS ENTERPRISE MAIN BRIDGE AIR LOCK CORRIDOR STARBASE 74 SPACE STATION MAIN ENGINEERING CORRIDOR BYNAUS (BYNAR PLANET) TURBOLIFT OBSERVATION LOUNGE SICKBAY HOLODECK DOOR HOLODECK JAZZ CLUB BANDSTAND DANCE FLOOR TRANSPORTER ROOM PASSAGEWAY CONNECTING ENTERPRISE AND STARBASE 74 SPACE STATION STARBASE 74 SPACE STATION COMMAND CENTER (MAIN DECK) CONFERENCE ROOM STAR TREK: "11001001" - 11/19/87 - TEASER 1. STAR TREK: THE NEXT GENERATION "11001001" TEASER FADE IN: 1 EXT. SPACE - STARBASE AND ENTERPRISE (OPTICAL) as the Enterprise moves toward Starbase 74. PICARD (V.O.) Captain's log, stardate 41365.9. The Enterprise has been ordered to Starbase 74, in orbit around Tarsas III. 2 EXT. SPACE - ANOTHER ANGLE (OPTICAL) as the Enterprise closes with the huge starbase entrance port. PICARD (V.O.) (continuing) ... where a routine maintenance check of all systems will be made, and certain upgrades completed, including the Holodeck, with which we have had problems. I anticipate a glowing report. This ship has performed magnificently -- beyond anyone's expectations. 3 INT. MAIN BRIDGE The REGULAR CREWMEMBERS are in their accustomed places as: GEORDI Coming into position. RIKER Stand by to dock. DATA Ready to dock. 4 INT. STARBASE (OPTICAL) as the Enterprise moves into docking position. STAR TREK: "11001001" - 11/19/87 - TEASER 2. 4 CONTINUED: RIKER (V.O.) Engage mooring beams and lock off. GEORDI (V.O.) Aye sir. 5 INT. STARBASE (OPTICAL) The two elements COME INTO PLACE. 6 INT. MAIN BRIDGE GEORDI Docking complete. PICARD Thank you, Number One. Well done, and well done all. 7 INT. ENTERPRISE AIR LOCK A hatch OPENS to the Starbase and allows the easy passage of people and supplies. There is a RUSH OF AIR as the hatch opens. Then a group of maintenance personnel EMERGE from the far end and CROSS to the Enterprise. 8 INT. AIR-LOCK CORRIDOR Picard and Riker greet the starbase personnel. Commander ORFIL QUINTEROS, the base commander, steps forward. TWO other pale, frail people with translucent skin stand nearby. They are the BYNARS. QUINTEROS Commander Quinteros; request permission to come aboard. PICARD Granted -- and welcome. Quinteros STEPS FORWARD and shakes Picard's hand. PICARD (continuing) This is Commander Riker. STAR TREK: "11001001" - 11/19/87 - TEASER 3. 8 CONTINUED: As the two shake hands the group moves down the corridor. QUINTEROS You're late. We expected you a week ago. RIKER We were unexpectedly delayed at Omicron Pascal. QUINTEROS Is there anything specific you wish to report, or that we should be aware of? PICARD No. We are very pleased with the operation of the Enterprise. QUINTEROS I knew you would be - I was in charge of the team which put her together. RIKER And are these gentlemen the Bynars? He indicates the Bynars. 8A INT. MAIN ENGINEERING as they ENTER. QUINTEROS They're not gentlemen or ladies, Commander. (off Riker's look) They are a unified pair. Always together. This is One Zero. One Zero bows. QUINTEROS (continuing) And this is Zero One. Zero One bows. Picard and Riker nod to them. STAR TREK: "11001001" - 11/19/87 - TEASER 4. 8A CONTINUED: QUINTEROS (continuing) They just finished upgrading the computers on the Wellington -- did a great job. PICARD (to the Bynars) Your reputation precedes you. I am pleased you will be improving our system. BYNAR ONE ZERO It is a great pleasure... BYNAR ZERO ONE ... to work on such a large mobile computer. PICARD You have forty-eight hours, because at forty-eight plus six we have an appointment at Pelleus Five which we must keep. The Bynars swap a look with each another. ZERO ONE I thought we'd... ONE ZERO ... have more time. PICARD I'm sorry. Our mission can't be delayed. Can we postpone this work? ZERO ONE Oh, no. This is... ONE ZERO ... the best time... ZERO ONE ... to do it. ONE ZERO We can complete... ZERO ONE ... our work within the... STAR TREK: "11001001" - 11/19/87 - TEASER 5. 8A CONTINUED: (2) ONE ZERO ... time allotted. QUINTEROS They work very quickly, but it'll be tight. PICARD Commander Riker and I will stay aboard, and be available should you need us. QUINTEROS Thank you, Captain. I don't think we'll need you until we're ready for inspection. Quinteros nods and FOLLOWS the Bynars AWAY, who CHATTER. 9 INT. CORRIDOR Picard and Riker walking along. RIKER The Bynars are perfect for this. This is the first time I've come in contact with them. PICARD As I understand it, over time they've become so interconnected with the master computer on their planet that their language and thought patterns have become as near to binary as possible for organic beings. RIKER It will be interesting to see how they improve a computer as advanced as ours. PICARD Well, I'm going to put my feet up, turn on my personal relaxation light and lose myself in the pages of some old novels. They STEP INTO the turbolift. STAR TREK: "11001001" - 11/19/87 - TEASER 6. 10 INT. TURBOLIFT Picard gives their destination. PICARD Bridge. (then:) And you, Number One? You've earned a good rest. What are you going to do with it? Riker smiles. The turbolift doors OPEN. RIKER I've never been good at organizing my time off, but something will come up -- it always does. Picard nods at him, and STEPS OFF. PICARD I'll be in my Ready Room. Riker acknowledges with a nod. Picard heads toward his Ready Room as Riker STEPS ONTO the bridge. A11 INT. STARBASE (OPTICAL) ESTABLISH the Enterprise inside the immense interior. 11 INT. MAIN BRIDGE CLOSE-UP on two of the Bynars as they pull open a panel. PULL BACK TO REVEAL Riker and Wesley watching them. Other than these four, the bridge is empty. The Bynars' CONVERSATION IS UNINTELLIGIBLE. It's a flow of data based information, which SOUNDS LIKE HIGH-SPEED RADIO MULTIPLEX IN BURSTS. The sound of it, and the movements of the aliens amuses Riker. TWO BYNARS ENTER the bridge and COME hurriedly UP. They are all in a state of agitation. The CONVERSATION goes on AT VERY HIGH SPEED. RIKER I thought there were only going to be two of you. ONE ZERO Because of the limited time allotted... STAR TREK: "11001001" - 11/19/87 - TEASER 7. 11 CONTINUED: ZERO ONE ... us, we need others... The newly-arrived Bynars continue with a HIGH SPEED STREAM OF AGITATED CONVERSATION. RIKER (picking up on their agitation) Is there a problem? The Bynars closest turn toward Riker. ZERO ONE Ah... No... ONE ZERO ...no. No problem. The tone - the hesitation. Riker isn't satisfied. RIKER Then why are you all so excited? ZERO ONE Because we... ah... have to... ONE ZERO ... the ah, stacking... ZERO ONE ... to reconfigure the computer... ONE ZERO ... to communicate with itself... ZERO ONE ... more efficiently... ONE ZERO ... and at higher speeds. Zero One and One Zero MOVE OFF to help their mates. Riker watches, concerned. WESLEY You act like you don't believe them. RIKER I'm not sure. It's probably nothing. STAR TREK: "11001001" - 11/19/87 - TEASER 8. 11 CONTINUED: (2) WESLEY Maybe it's just how a different species behaves. Riker nods thoughtfully. RIKER Maybe. I'm going to stroll the ship. You have the bridge. Keep an eye on them. WESLEY Aye sir. Riker turns and CROSSES to the turbolift, as Wesley looks over at the Bynars with a new awareness. FADE OUT: END OF TEASER STAR TREK: "11001001" - 11/19/87 - ACT ONE 9. ACT ONE FADE IN: 12 INT. CORRIDOR As Riker walks along he sees TASHA, WORF, and some other members of the Crew, at the far end of the corridor. They are dressed for athletics. Each carries a small duffel bag. TASHA We've been challenged to a friendly game of Parrises Squares by some of the maintenance personnel -- want to join us on the starbase? Riker makes a quick count. RIKER You've already got all the players you need. TASHA We can switch off. RIKER No... if you do that in Parrises Squares you lose the rhythm of the game. TASHA I can't talk you into coming with us? RIKER No. But win, all right? The pride of the Enterprise goes with you. WORF Rest assured, Commander, we will be victorious, at whatever the cost. RIKER (concerned) Worf -- it's just a game. You know, a little friendly competition -- work up a sweat, have some laughs, make new friends. STAR TREK: "11001001" - 11/19/87 - ACT ONE 10. 12 CONTINUED: WORF (with a gleam in his eye) If winning is not important... then, Commander, why keep score? Riker can only shrug because he has no answer. Worf nods a good-bye, and HEADS OFF with the others. Tasha holds back for a beat. TASHA I think he's pulling your leg. Believe it or not, Worf's developing a sense of humor. RIKER Let's hope so for their sake. Riker smiles and shakes his head. Tasha, returns the smile, flashes a quick thumbs up... and SPRINTS OFF to join the others. 13 ANGLE ON RIKER He watches them go for a lonely moment. The area SUDDENLY DARKENS. Riker steps over to the com panel. He touches the panel, which LIGHTS UP, ILLUMINATING HIM. 14 RIKER AT COMPANEL He touches the panel. RIKER Computer -- There's a power reduction in section L-Ninety Four. Explain. COMPUTER Unoccupied sections are being closed down in order to clear space in the main computer banks. It's necessary to facilitate the system upgrade. Full power can be restored if needed. Riker is satisfied. He MOVES OFF. STAR TREK: "11001001" - 11/19/87 - ACT ONE 11. 15 INT. OBSERVATION LOUNGE - CLOSE ON PAINTING Its design and form is to be determined, the artist is Lieutenant Commander Data. GEORDI (O.S.) What do you think? RIKER (O.S.) First tell me what it's supposed to be, then I'll give you an opinion. PULL BACK TO REVEAL Geordi, Data and Riker examining the "work of art" which is on an easel set up in the Observation Lounge. DATA It is an attempt at pure creativity. GEORDI What we're investigating is, "Can Data be creative?" DATA This is my attempt... with guidance from Geordi. GEORDI I suggested the Zylo eggs. RIKER Is that what those are? Riker heads for the door. RIKER (continuing) Keep notes. This project might turn out to be of interest to future scholars. GEORDI Really? RIKER Think about it. A blind man teaching an android to paint? That's got to be worth a couple of pages in someone's book. HOLD ON Data and Geordi as Riker waves a cheerful good-bye and WALKS OFF. STAR TREK: "11001001" - 11/19/87 - ACT ONE 12. 15A INT. SICKBAY AND CORRIDOR BEVERLY is picking up notes and notebooks. She's excited almost to the point of being frazzled. Riker ENTERS. RIKER You look like you're packing up and leaving forever. BEVERLY (surprised) Oh -- Commander Riker. No -- I'm just getting my notes together. It's so exciting. Doctor Terence Epstein is at this Starbase. RIKER Is he someone I should know about? He FOLLOWS her OUT into the corridor. BEVERLY He's the leading mind in cybernetics. He lectured at my medical school. Since the disaster at Micromius I've been working on a theory combining cybernetics and regeneration. It sounds impossible I know -- but I think I have an approach which could work. What an opportunity! To have a chance to discuss this with Doctor Esptein. Sorry, Will, I'd like to stay here and chat -- but I have to be going. And she's INTO a turbolift -- leaving Riker standing alone. 16 OMITTED 17 INT. CORRIDOR AND HOLODECK DOORS (OPTICAL) Two of the Bynars are there working on the outer panel. Riker APPROACHES. RIKER How's it going? STAR TREK: "11001001" - 11/19/87 - ACT ONE 13. 17 CONTINUED: ZERO ZERO We are almost done... ONE ONE ... the deviation... ZERO ZERO ... caused by a previous... ONE ONE ... probe has been corrected... ZERO ZERO ... You may use the equipment... ONE ONE ... anytime you wish. RIKER How much has it been changed? What exactly did you do? ONE ONE Enhancement... ZERO ZERO ... nothing more. The Bynars look at him, then at each other. ZERO ZERO (SUBTITLED) (in Binary) This could be perfect! ONE ONE (SUBTITLED) (in Binary) Let's use him! ZERO ZERO (to Riker) Would you like to try... ONE ONE (to Riker) ... the enhancement? RIKER (a beat) All right. What should I do? Riker steps over to the com panel. STAR TREK: "11001001" - 11/19/87 - ACT ONE 14. 17 CONTINUED: (2) RIKER Computer - I need a place to play some music - a little atmosphere. COMPUTER Specify. RIKER Jazz. COMPUTER Era? RIKER (pauses) Circa 1958. COMPUTER Location. RIKER Kansas City. No, wait. New Orleans. Yeah. New Orleans -- the Low Note. 'Round midnight. Pause. COMPUTER Program complete. Enter when ready. 18 HOLODECK DOOR Riker steps to the entrance. The doors OPEN. Before him is a -- 19 OMITTED 20 HOLODECK (OPTICAL) -- JAZZ CLUB -- blue light -- dusty -- low ceiling -- small tables crowded together -- a worn little bandstand lit by pencil spots. Riker's impressed. RIKER Very good. He turns and nods his appreciation to the Bynars who are off to one side watching. STAR TREK: "11001001" - 11/19/87 - ACT ONE 15. 20 CONTINUED: RIKER (continuing) Very good indeed. He STEPS INTO the Holodeck, turns his attention to the com panel on the arch. The Bynars, who ENTER with him, are fascinated. RIKER (continuing) Now, computer -- someone to play with. A combo. Say, drums upright bass...piano. And a 'bone for me. And just like that, the bandstand IS POPULATED with a jazz combo, including a trombone waiting on the stand. NONE OF THE IMAGES MOVE, and they won't until Riker activates them. RIKER (continuing) Now -- an audience... And the room IS FULL. RIKER (continuing) Whoa... too many. I was thinking of something a little more personal...intimate. And that quick the room IS EMPTY, SAVE FOR ONE very pretty blonde who is sitting alone at a front table. Her hand rests lightly on a glass. Her head is turned as though expecting someone -- a man to join her. Riker is very impressed -- not only by what the computer has accomplished, but by the blonde. He turns to the Bynars -- RIKER (continuing) Great job, boys. The Bynars TALK among themselves in their unique HIGH SPEED LANGUAGE. Riker turns back to the room. RIKER (continuing) But, computer... blondes and jazz seldom go together. STAR TREK: "11001001" - 11/19/87 - ACT ONE 16. 20 CONTINUED: (2) The girl CHANGES to a redhead -- not the same girl with red hair, but a different girl, with beautiful green eyes and a low cut shimmering dress. Absolutely stunning. RIKER (continuing; he turns to the Bynars.) Now that is truly exceptional... (then back to the computer) ...but... more sultry. And again the girl CHANGES -- this time to a BRUNETTE -- and even more beautiful. 21 ANGLE ON RIKER This three-dimensional, computer-generated image is so beautiful it takes his breath. RIKER (to the Bynars) Gentlemen, if this is what you call "enhancement" you have a gift for understatement. He CROSSES to the beautiful WOMAN. 22 THE BYNARS They CONSPIRE EXCITEDLY among themselves. Then go to the computer panel and make some very specific adjustment, looking at each other seriously for approval. 23 ANGLE ON WOMAN'S TABLE As Riker sits down, the IMAGES COME TO LIFE. The combo BEGINS TO PLAY, the woman (Minuet) MOVES. 24 BACK TO THE BYNARS The level of excitement among the Bynars increase. They are very pleased with what they have done. STAR TREK: "11001001" - 11/19/87 - ACT ONE 17. 25 RIKER AND WOMAN He looks at her with interest. RIKER What's your name, and tell me you love jazz. MINUET My name is Minuet. I love all jazz except Dixieland. RIKER Why not Dixieland? MINUET Because you can't dance to it. RIKER My girl. 26 ANGLE ON BYNARS It's clear from his expression and attitude that Riker's reaction is very meaningful. Zero Zero and One One APPROACH the computer panel and make a slight adjustment. 27 ANGLE ON TABLE WITH RIKER AND MINUET (OPTICAL) A slight change occurs in Minuet. The way she looks at Riker is more personal. RIKER (slyly) What's a knockout like you doing in a computer-generated joint like this? MINUET Waiting for you. Her voice is deeper, sexier. Her eyes are warm, liquid, inviting. RIKER Waiting for me?!! You can't be serious? MINUET Oh yes, Will -- I've never been more serious in my life. STAR TREK: "11001001" - 11/19/87 - ACT ONE 18. 27 CONTINUED: Riker is knocked a little off balance by her look and her directness. CAMERA ZOOMS THROUGH Riker and Minuet to the Bynars, who TALK EXCITEDLY. 27A ANGLE ON BYNARS (OPTICAL) ZERO ZERO (SUBTITLED) (in Binary) It's working. All we need... ONE ONE (SUBTITLED) (in Binary) ... is to hold him here for twenty minutes. They HEAD OFF through the open doors. The doors CLOSE, then DISAPPEAR, REVEALING the back wall of the Club. FADE OUT. END OF ACT ONE STAR TREK: "11001001" - 11/19/87 - ACT TWO 19. ACT TWO FADE IN: 28 INT. STARBASE (OPTICAL) The Enterprise is still docked. 29 INT. MAIN BRIDGE Wesley is at the Aft station watching two of the Bynars -- Zero One and One Zero (they are always in pairs). Quinteros is off to one side, checking. Wesley APPROACHES him. WESLEY Do you mind if I ask you a question about the Bynars? QUINTEROS Why not just ask them? Makes sense to Wesley. He goes to them. WESLEY What is that high-speed sound you make? ZERO ONE That is our... ONE ZERO ... primary language. WESLEY How can humanoids process information at that speed? Zero One and One Zero point to each other's buffer. (These are belt-carried oblong cases roughly 4" x 6" x 2" deep, with CHASER LIGHTS.) ZERO ONE We store the information... ONE ZERO ... with these buffers. ZERO ONE We receive information... STAR TREK: "11001001" - 11/19/87 - ACT TWO 20. 29 CONTINUED: ONE ZERO ... all the time... ZERO ONE ... and save it... ONE ZERO ... until we need it. WESLEY How did you happen to develop this ability? ONE ZERO It happened over... ZERO ONE ... a long period of time. WESLEY To have a society so interdependent on computers has tremendous advantages. ONE ZERO And a few... ZERO ONE ...disadvantages. Picard COMES OUT of his Ready Room. PICARD Everything under control, Ensign Crusher? WESLEY Fine, Captain. I am just trying to learn something about the Bynars. PICARD Where's Commander Riker? WESLEY Holodeck Four. Shall I call him for you, sir? PICARD No, I'll wander down and see what's he doing to occupy himself. Keep me apprised. STAR TREK: "11001001" - 11/19/87 - ACT TWO 21. 29 CONTINUED: (2) WESLEY Yes, sir. Picard LEAVES. 30 INT. HOLODECK Riker is on the bandstand playing with the trio. 31 ON RIKER Slips into a short solo. 32 INTERCUT Minuet listens, enthralled more by the man than by his music. 33 ANGLE ON THE BAND As the PIANO PLAYER takes over, the BASS PLAYER leans over to Riker. BASS The chick digs you, man. RIKER What makes you say that? BASS Hey -- look at her. 34 ANGLE ON RIKER He looks at Minuet. 35 ANGLE ON MINUET Her eyes are shining and it's all for Riker. 36 ANGLE ON RIKER He tries to defuse the look and his feelings. STAR TREK: "11001001" - 11/19/87 - ACT TWO 22. 36 CONTINUED: RIKER Maybe it's my music. DRUMMER Yeah, well - about that... Don't give up your day job. 37 ANGLE ON THE BANDSTAND Riker talks to the bass player, but really he's talking to himself. RIKER It's all too real. PIANIST Yeah, Slim you got that straight... too real is too right. Riker smiles. RIKER Thanks for letting me sit in. BASS Ain't nothin' to it. Riker LEAVES the bandstand and HEADS for Minuet's table. BASS (continuing) Strange cat... DRUMMER I know this. If they're in town -- we get 'em. They laugh. 38 thru OMITTED 40 41 INT. HOLODECK IV Riker APPROACHES the table. Minuet smiles a greeting. STAR TREK: "11001001" - 11/19/87 - ACT TWO 23. 41 CONTINUED: RIKER I am going to have to leave you for a while and see to my duties. MINUET Your work is very important to you. RIKER It is me -- it's what I am. MINUET Can we dance once before you leave? The invitation is so effortlessly offered -- and the woman so appealing -- who could resist? RIKER Sure, why not. She rises. He leads her to the little dance floor. 42 ON THE DANCE FLOOR As they STEP ONTO the dance floor, Minuet turns and folds herself into his arms. They dance. It's slow and sexy. RIKER How did you learn to dance so well? MINUET From following you. Riker is puzzled and amused at the same time. MINUET I can anticipate your lead. Tell me more about your work -- what is it about it that consumes and enthralls you? RIKER What an interesting choice of words. That's exactly what it does. MINUET You are very fortunate. STAR TREK: "11001001" - 11/19/87 - ACT TWO 24. 42 CONTINUED: RIKER I know that. MINUET At this point in your life to be exactly where you want to be... And it's wonderful that you realize it. RIKER I'd be a fool not to know how lucky I am to be on this ship serving with this group of people. It's a dream come true. She snuggles in a little closer. RIKER (continuing) Just like this. MINUET A dream? Is that what this is? Is that what I am? She fills up his senses. He holds her away, to look at her. Her fragrance -- the lightness of her touch. Her movement. Riker is becoming captivated by her. As a woman can, she senses what he's feeling and leans back to look in his eyes. RIKER I know you are a computer-generated image... but your smell, the way you feel, your touch, even the way you talk and think is so real. MINUET Thank you. RIKER How far can this relationship go? I mean, how real are you? MINUET As real as you need me to be. Then a look. To underline her words, she molds herself against him. STAR TREK: "11001001" - 11/19/87 - ACT TWO 25. 42 CONTINUED: (2) PICARD (O.S.) Astounding. At the sound of Picard's voice, Riker turns -- a little like a kid with his hand in the cookie jar. 43 INT. HOLODECK Picard is near the entrance taking it all in. The band, the mood, and Riker with a beautiful woman. RIKER Captain! Picard STEPS further INTO the room. Minuet is relaxed, confident, as she waits. PICARD Sorry, Number One -- I didn't mean to interrupt. RIKER It's all right, come in. PICARD You picked a wonderful locale. Something I might have chosen myself. MINUET Aren't you going to introduce me? RIKER Excuse me. Yes, yes, of course I am. Captain Picard, this is Minuet... Minuet, this is Captain Jean-Luc Picard. She steps over to take his hand. MINUET Enchante. Comme c'est merveilleux de vous voir ici. PICARD Incroyable! Vous etes Parisienne? Riker is surprised that she speaks French and a little jealous that she and Picard are hitting it off so well. STAR TREK: "11001001" - 11/19/87 - ACT TWO 26. 43 CONTINUED: MINUET Au fonde c'est vrai, nous sommes tous Parisienne. PICARD (laughs) Oui, au fonde nous sommes tous Parisienne. The spirit of that city can always restore my soul. His attitude is a mixture of curiosity, amusement and amazement. He, like Riker, is thoroughly captivated by Minuet. Her easy grace, her style, her beauty, and the fact that she is a figment of a computer's binary imagination. MINUET I have been hoping to meet you. PICARD (with a look to Riker) Oh. (lightly) Have I been a topic of conversation? MINUET Indirectly. Riker smiles and shrugs. MINUET (continuing) Join us, Jean-Luc. Picard STEPS OVER and sits down at the table. MINUET (continuing) A glass of wine? PICARD Thank you. As she pours. MINUET Will was saying how much he enjoys this assignment. It's a credit to you. For a ship and crew to function well it always starts with the captain. You set the tone. STAR TREK: "11001001" - 11/19/87 - ACT TWO 27. 43 CONTINUED: (2) PICARD (to Minuet, graciously) At the moment, it's you who are setting the tone. (then, to Riker) The sophistication of this programming is remarkable. MINUET In what way? PICARD The Holodeck has been able to give us woodlands and ski slopes and figures that fight and fictional characters with which we can interact -- but you are quite different. You adapt. You spoke French to me. MINUET It's very simple. When I heard your name, I merely accessed the foreign language bank. PICARD Impressive. MINUET Oui, mon choux. Riker is very impressed. 43A INT. OBSERVATION LOUNGE Data and Geordi are still working on his painting which shows signs of change, if not improvement. Data has stopped and is gazing vaguely off in space. GEORDI Now what are you doing? DATA I am awaiting inspiration. WESLEY'S COM VOICE Commander Data. STAR TREK: "11001001" - 11/19/87 - ACT TWO 28. 43A CONTINUED: DATA This is Commander Data, go ahead. 43B INT. MAIN BRIDGE Wesley's at the aft Science Station. The Bynars are slightly off to one side watching him with great interest. WESLEY I'm getting an indication of possible trouble in Main Engineering. DATA'S COM VOICE Can you be more specific? WESLEY Not very much. I'm reading a problem with the magnetic field which contains the antimatter. Could you come up here? GEORDI'S COM VOICE We'll go to Engineering since that's where the trouble is. Wes, don't disturb the captain or Commander Riker until we check this out. WESLEY Aye, sir. He turns, looks at the Bynars. They go back to work. 44 INT. MAIN ENGINEERING The area is quiet. The lights are down. Geordi and Data ENTER. Surprised no one is there. They are looking for anything. As he moves vaguely around, something catches Geordi's extremely efficient eye. His attitude changes. He moves quickly to the COMPUTER and begins working. GEORDI bridge, this is Main Engineering. WESLEY'S COM VOICE This is the bridge. STAR TREK: "11001001" - 11/19/87 - ACT TWO 29. 44 CONTINUED: GEORDI Are you running any test programs? WESLEY'S COM VOICE No. GEORDI Are the Bynars? WESLEY'S COM VOICE Not to my knowledge. Is something wrong? GEORDI I don't know. There's nobody on duty here, and we're getting a strange reading from the magnetic containment field. Data is at another computer terminal. DATA The field is deteriorating. Contact the captain immediately. I am initiating Red Alert. Data touches the com panel and the Red Alert KLAXON SOUNDS. GEORDI I can't maintain the integrity of the containment field. DATA If the antimatter is released the ship will be destroyed. GEORDI Nothing I do has any effect. I'm losing it. I have rechecked every circuit. This is not a misread by the computer. Data calmly touches the com panel. DATA Computer -- situation analysis. STAR TREK: "11001001" - 11/19/87 - ACT TWO 30. 44 CONTINUED: (2) COMPUTER Estimate release of antimatter in four minutes eighteen seconds -- seventeen seconds -- sixteen seconds... DATA Bridge -- Engineering. The worried voice of Wesley Crusher. WESLEY'S COM VOICE Yes. This is the bridge. DATA Alert starbase. Inform them we are abandoning the ship. Tell them why. Initiate the automated sequence for departure, lay in a course and speed to put maximum distance between the Enterprise and any inhabited planet. WESLEY'S COM VOICE Shouldn't we wait for the captain's approval? DATA There is no time. Based on all the information presently available the decision is correct. (touches the com panel) This is Lieutenant Commander Data speaking for the captain -- abandon ship -- this is not a drill. 45 INT. ENTERPRISE - VARIOUS SHOTS The KLAXON SCREAMS over a SERIES OF SHOTS of the ENTERPRISE BEING EVACUATED. DATA'S COM VOICE I say again. All personnel abandon ship. Abandon ship -- this is not a drill -- this is not a drill. FADE OUT. END OF ACT TWO STAR TREK: "11001001" - 11/19/87 - ACT THREE 31. ACT THREE FADE IN: A46 EXT. SPACE - STARBASE 74 (OPTICAL) REESTABLISHING. B46 INT. STARBASE 74 (OPTICAL) The Enterprise is docked. 46 INT. ENTERPRISE (SERIES OF SHOTS) People running down the corridors, the KLAXON still BLARING. 47 OMITTED 48 INT. ENTERPRISE CORRIDORS (CONTINUE SERIES OF SHOTS) People still running. Over this: COMPUTER VOICE (echoing) Decks One through Four to Cargo Transporters. Decks Five through Ten: Transporters: One-Two, Three-Four. Decks Six through Sixteen: Transporters: Five-Six, Seven-Eight, Nine-Ten. Decks Seventeen through Twenty-eight to Transporters: Eleven-Twelve, Thirteen-Fourteen. Decks Twenty-nine through Forty-two: Transporters: Fifteen-Sixteen, Seventeen-Eighteen, Nineteen-Twenty. This is not a drill. (This Voice-Over dialogue should run from SCENE 46 through SCENE 49.) 49 INT. AIR-LOCK Those people still aboard on the lower decks are SEEN RUNNING OUT of the connecting ramp into the Starbase. STAR TREK: "11001001" - 11/19/87 - ACT THREE 32. 49A INT. STARBASE - CONFERENCE ROOM (NO WINDOWS) Beverly is talking to Doctor Terence Epstein, a young man of twenty-six. She has her notes spread out on a table. BEVERLY When I reviewed your fifth paper on molecular biology, I knew I was on the right track. You defined the problem as conductivity -- and that's exactly what... Beverly is distracted by a flurry of ACTIVITY outside. She stretches to look out. STARBASE COMPUTER (V.O.) Attention all personnel. Emergency evacuation of USS Enterprise in progress. Report to your stations. BEVERLY Oh, no! Something's happened to the Enterprise. That's my ship! And she BOLTS from the room. 50 INT. ENTERPRISE - TRANSPORTER ROOM People are converging, bunching up. INCLUDE Wesley. AD LIBBED VOICES Hurry up! We don't have much time! The ship'll be leaving in a minute! 51 INT. STARBASE COMMAND CENTER - NEW ANGLE Drawn by the emergency SIRENS and frantic activity around the Enterprise, Tasha and Worf ENTER to see what is happening. WORF What's going on? QUINTEROS Please stand out of the way. STAR TREK: "11001001" - 11/19/87 - ACT THREE 33. 51 CONTINUED: BEVERLY The Enterprise is being evacuated. WORF Why? BEVERLY Some problem in Engineering. TASHA Get the security team together. WORF Aye, Lieutenant. 52 INT. MAIN BRIDGE Data and Geordi are closing down their consoles. DATA (V.O.) Ship's log. Supplemental. This is Lieutenant Commander Data. I have put the ship on automated departure and ordered the complete evacuation of the Enterprise. Everyone remaining is leaving on foot or beaming off. Data takes a second to punch his console. DATA Computer, where are the captain and Commander Riker? COMPUTER VOICE All decks empty. DATA Curious. The captain is usually the last to leave. GEORDI Let's go! We only have forty-one seconds. Data shuts down his console. They GET INTO the turbolift. As the doors CLOSE: GEORDI I think we're the last. DATA I hope we are the last. STAR TREK: "11001001" - 11/19/87 - ACT THREE 34. 53 INT. STARBASE SPACE STATION COMMAND CENTER (OPTICAL) It is a room about the size of the main bridge. There is a large window through which WE SEE the now "empty" ENTERPRISE as it starts to BACK OUT. Quinteros is in charge of the operation. Enterprise people are ARRIVING. Wesley has joined Worf and Tasha as Data and Geordi BEAM IN. WORF Did you see the captain and Commander Riker? DATA No. Are they not here on the Starbase? TASHA No. GEORDI Are you saying they are still on the Enterprise? WORF Yes. Sir, where's your Transporter Room? DATA We have to beam back and get them. QUINTEROS You haven't time! STARBASE COM VOICE This is Starbase 74. The Enterprise magnetic field is regenerating. GEORDI How is that possible? STARBASE COM VOICE Unknown. TASHA That changes nothing. The captain and Commander Riker must be in trouble, or they'd be here. Quinteros grabs her and points. QUINTEROS Look! Data turns to look. STAR TREK: "11001001" - 11/19/87 - ACT THREE 35. 54 OMITTED 55 DATA'S POV - OUT THROUGH STARBASE WINDOW (OPTICAL) The SHIP continues to BACK AWAY from its mooring. QUINTEROS (O.S.) Your ship's almost clear. A56 INT. STARBASE (OPTICAL) The Enterprise EXITS out through the entrance port doors. 56 EXT. SPACE - ENTERPRISE AND STARBASE (OPTICAL) The ship clears the starbase, turns, and WARPS AWAY, leaving starbase far behind. 57 INT. STARBASE (OPTICAL) as the members of the Enterprise crew stare at the emptiness which had been their ship. STARBASE COM VOICE The USS Enterprise has departed in excess of warp one. 58 EXT. SPACE - THE ENTERPRISE (OPTICAL) at warp speed as it RUSHES ON toward an unknown destination. 59 INT. ENTERPRISE CAMERA ROAMS the decks and corridors. All EMPTY. Warning LIGHTS still continue to FLASH. 60 INT. HOLODECK WE COME INTO THE SCENE, as Picard, Riker, and Minuet are talking. Minuet reaches over and lightly touches Riker's arm. MINUET ... and the boy never found out? STAR TREK: "11001001" - 11/19/87 - ACT THREE 36. 60 CONTINUED: RIKER Oh, yes, but not until later. (lightly) When he finally walked in with his younger sister. MINUET And I'll bet both of them were all smiles. RIKER Yes. And we knew right then both of them had found out. MINUET You handled it in a very thoughtful way. You are very good with people. (to Picard) Don't you agree, Jean-Luc? Riker and Minuet hold each others' eyes for a moment. PICARD She's very different from any images we've experienced on the Holodeck, isn't she? More -- you might say -- intuitive. RIKER It's as though she was plugged into my subconscious and can anticipate what I want her to say even before I'm aware of it myself. PICARD I suppose it's an understandable progression. Computers make decisions based on inputs and we humans give off many subtle signs which communicate our emotions. RIKER It's uncanny. I could develop feelings for Minuet. A desire exactly as I would for any woman. Minuet smiles. STAR TREK: "11001001" - 11/19/87 - ACT THREE 37. 60 CONTINUED: (2) PICARD Doesn't love always begin that way? With the illusion being more real than the woman? MINUET Oh, Jean-Luc, spoken like a true Frenchman. Picard smiles. PICARD I think I'll be leaving. Minuet turns to Picard. MINUET Oh, don't go. PICARD Two's company. MINUET We have time -- there's no rush. I'd like it very much if you would stay. RIKER Yes, stay, Captain. PICARD This is your diversion, Number One. Not mine. MINUET Wait -- we haven't danced. PICARD I don't dance. MINUET Then some more wine. PICARD Thank you, no. MINUET Wait -- please. Please don't go -- you can't. Not yet. PICARD What? STAR TREK: "11001001" - 11/19/87 - ACT THREE 38. 60 CONTINUED: (3) RIKER Why -- Minuet -- what's the matter? Why can't he leave? Minuet FREEZES as they LEAVE her and stride quickly to the arch. PICARD (to computer) Exit. The doors OPEN. The RED ALERT is still FLASHING. 61 RIKER AND PICARD - AT THE ARCH They react with shock -- like a dousing of ice water. PICARD (touches a panel) bridge, this is the captain. Situation report. No response, so Riker touches his communicator. RIKER Riker to bridge. Still nothing. The two exchange looks. Picard steps halfway into the corridor and operates the com panel. Riker stands with him. 62 FRESH ANGLE Picard and Riker are framed in the doorway, with Minuet, MOTIONLESS, in the background. PICARD (tense) Computer! Explain Red Alert. COMPUTER VOICE Initiated as a programmed response. The magnetic field containing the antimatter had weakened. There was no fail-safe available. PICARD Why wasn't I notified? STAR TREK: "11001001" - 11/19/87 - ACT THREE 39. 62 CONTINUED: COMPUTER VOICE Unknown. PICARD Present condition. COMPUTER VOICE The magnetic field is now restored. Containment is restored. Propulsion is at maximum efficiency. PICARD (beat, thinks) Locate Lieutenant Commander Data. COMPUTER VOICE Not on board the Enterprise. PICARD Explain. COMPUTER VOICE All Enterprise personnel except the captain and first officer have been evacuated. PICARD Evacuated!? Was the condition that critical? COMPUTER VOICE Yes. A thought occurs to Riker. RIKER Are we still docked on the starbase? COMPUTER VOICE No. PICARD Position report. COMPUTER VOICE Coordinates four-one-five-nine point two-six by eight-one-nine-two-one by three-one-two. Heading Two-three-three mark four-five. STAR TREK: "11001001" - 11/19/87 - ACT THREE 40. 62 CONTINUED: (2) PICARD Destination? COMPUTER VOICE Planet Bynaus in the Beta Magellan system. RIKER The Bynars! PICARD Am I to understand that the Bynars have stolen the Enterprise? COMPUTER VOICE That information is not available. Picard turns back to Minuet. 63 INT. HOLODECK IV Picard APPROACHES Riker and Minuet. She COMES ALIVE when he speaks to her. PICARD (a beat, strong) It's the Bynars -- and you're part of this. MINUET (without hesitation) Yes. RIKER They made you the lure to keep me here! They programmed you while I was relaxing. MINUET Yes. When they saw your interest in me, they thought I could distract you and keep you here. PICARD That explains, Riker... What about me? MINUET Your being here was just a fortunate happenstance. STAR TREK: "11001001" - 11/19/87 - ACT THREE 41. 63 CONTINUED: RIKER Why do they want me? PICARD What do they want with the Enterprise? What's their purpose? MINUET I am not programmed to give you that information. PICARD Come on, Number One. We've got to regain control of our ship! Riker and Picard HEAD OUT. Minuet FREEZES behind them. 64 INT. STARBASE CONTROL With Geordi, Data, Tasha, Wesley and Worf. GEORDI What do we do? DATA Which is the nearest Starfleet vessel? QUINTEROS The Trieste. DATA I know the Trieste. Too small, too slow. QUINTEROS Plus it's sixty-six hours away. DATA Where are the Bynars? QUINTEROS ... I haven't seen them. DATA Then they are obviously still aboard. Another Starfleet vessel must be sent to intercept the Enterprise at Bynaus. They might be taking the ship to their home planet. 72:[4,#b] STAR TREK: "11001001" - 11/19/87 - ACT THREE 42. 64 CONTINUED: QUINTEROS What makes you think so? DATA It is the best place for us to start. 65 INT. ENTERPRISE - CORRIDOR Picard and Riker move quickly down a corridor. They turn a corner. 66 INT. ENTERPRISE - A NEW CORRIDOR Picard and Riker ENTER a door. It closes behind them, FILLING THE SCREEN with the words "WEAPONS ROOM." FADE OUT: END OF ACT THREE STAR TREK: "11001001" - 11/19/87 - ACT FOUR 43. ACT FOUR FADE IN: 67 EXT. SPACE - THE ENTERPRISE (OPTICAL) as it moves along at warp. PICARD (V.O.) Captain's log, supplemental. We now know "who" has commandeered the Enterprise... the Bynars. We can't communicate with the bridge. Commander Riker and I will now try to regain control of our ship. 68 INT. CORRIDOR After a moment, they ENTER the corridor tensely -- armed against the possibility of being met by hostiles. Seeing the corridor is clear, Riker turns one way, Picard another. PICARD This way. RIKER But that's toward Engineering. PICARD That's our first stop, to verify the containment, and initiate auto-destruct. Riker looks concerned. RIKER Initiate auto-destruct? PICARD The ship has been commandeered by a force of unknown size and intent. We're here alone. We must assume the worst. 69 INT. MAIN ENGINEERING Picard STEPS TO the wall panel and waits a beat as Riker JOINS him. Together they set the auto-destruct which requires their specific genetic code in order to access the system. STAR TREK: "11001001" - 11/19/87 - ACT FOUR 44. 69 CONTINUED: PICARD If we don't regain control, no one else will have it either. This is the only decision involving the operation of this ship which requires you and I to agree totally. RIKER It's the allotted time that concerns me. PICARD About that, there is no option. RIKER I know. It's a five minute countdown. PICARD It's sufficient to get to the bridge... once there, either we'll get control of the ship and shut off the auto-destruct, or we won't. The important thing is that this ship does not fall into hostile hands. RIKER Then let's set it and get going. 70 INT. ENGINEERING - AT COMPUTER (OPTICAL) This computer is separate from the main computer and is used for this type of emergency only. COMPUTER Recognize Picard, Jean-Luc, Captain... (pause) Recognize Riker, William T, Commander. PICARD Set auto-destruct sequence. COMPUTER Does the first officer concur? STAR TREK: "11001001" - 11/19/87 - ACT FOUR 45. 70 CONTINUED: RIKER ... Yes. Set auto-destruct sequence -- now! A small sign ILLUMINATES "AUTO-DESTRUCT IN (TIME)." COMPUTER Auto-destruct will detonate in four minutes and fifty-nine seconds... four minutes and fifty-eight seconds... four minutes and fifty-seven seconds... PICARD Let's go. The only place we can stop the count is from the bridge. They start to leave, but Riker spots something on the adjacent computer panel. 70A CLOSE ON COMPUTER SCREEN (OPTICAL) WE SEE a BLUR OF SYMBOLS indicating a high-speed data flow. RIKER (O.S.) What do you make of this? 70B BY THE SCREEN PICARD An enormous amount of data is being received and stored in the main computer. RIKER Just stored. Why? PICARD It's another piece to this puzzle. They leave the computer panel and EXIT. 71 INT. CORRIDOR Picard and Riker move cautiously forward. The ship is quiet. STAR TREK: "11001001" - 11/19/87 - ACT FOUR 46. 72 thru OMITTED 73 74 INT. CORRIDOR NEAR TURBOLIFT NINE They reach turbolift nine. The doors do not open. Picard punches in a command to bring it. No response. The AUTO-DESTRUCT is DISPLAYED on every com panel. This one now reads "FOUR MINUTES TEN SECONDS." COMPUTER (V.O.) Access denied. PICARD They've locked it off. He thinks for a moment. PICARD (continuing) We've got to find another way to get in. RIKER One of us could beam onto the bridge. PICARD It takes several seconds to materialize. You wouldn't stand a chance. Riker thinks for a beat. RIKER I could beam into the turbolift, force the doors, and take them by surprise. PICARD No. We'll beam in simultaneously in two different areas of the bridge. RIKER Only four minutes left. They head for Transporter Room Seven. 75 INT. STARBASE CONTROL (OPTICAL) Restless, the Enterprise crew is hovering around the Control Center. STAR TREK: "11001001" - 11/19/87 - ACT FOUR 47. 75 CONTINUED: GEORDI Still no response from the Enterprise. WORF They would answer if they could. Someone else has control of the ship. DATA Do you think I am responsible? GEORDI Why? How could you have known? DATA My station is on the bridge. GEORDI You can't be on the bridge every minute. DATA You are wrong, Geordi, I can. I do not need rest or diversion -- I should not have been painting. I was negligent. TASHA That's a pointless discussion. You could have been on the bridge and it still might have happened. Data snaps her a look of disbelief. TASHA (continuing; to Quinteros) You have three ships in here. We need one of them now. QUINTEROS We're rushing repairs on the USS Melbourne -- but it's still eighteen hours until she'll be ready... There is nothing else you can do. 75A EXT. SPACE - THE ENTERPRISE (OPTICAL) FLIES BY at warp speed. STAR TREK: "11001001" - 11/19/87 - ACT FOUR 48. 76 INT. ENTERPRISE - TRANSPORTER ROOM SEVEN (OPTICAL) They ARRIVE at the Transporter Room. Riker goes to the control panel. RIKER I'll set a ten-second delay. Picard takes his place on one of the Pads. PICARD Right. Coordinates for Main Bridge -- port forward for me and aft for you. RIKER (a beat) You're on Pad Two. Riker inputs the two sets of coordinates. RIKER (continuing) Done. (a beat) Ten second delay... NOW. Riker starts the timer, hastens to the platform and steps up beside Picard. The Transporter ENGAGES. 77 INT. MAIN BRIDGE (OPTICAL) Picard and Riker BEAM INTO the Main Bridge as programmed -- he forward and port side, Riker aft. They look around, phasers ready. 78 ANGLE ON BYNARS In one corner of the bridge, the Bynars are huddled together, pale, cold, almost inert. They seem totally lifeless. All have looks of fear. They clearly pose no threat. 79 ANGLE ON PICARD He relaxes and moves forward. PICARD Why did you steal my ship? STAR TREK: "11001001" - 11/19/87 - ACT FOUR 49. 79 CONTINUED: ONE ZERO Please try... ZERO ONE ... to help us. One Zero and Zero One collapse. Off Picard's reaction, WE: FADE OUT: END OF ACT FOUR STAR TREK: "11001001" - 11/19/87 - ACT FIVE 50. ACT FIVE FADE IN: 80 EXT. SPACE - THE ENTERPRISE (STOCK OPTICAL) near the Bynar's home planet - Bynaus. 80A CLOSE ON COMPANEL Picard and Riker stand in front of it. The auto-destruct reads "TWO MINUTES, ONE SECOND." PICARD Cancel auto-destruct. COMPUTER VOICE Does the first officer agree? RIKER Affirmative. COMPUTER VOICE Auto-destruct cancelled. The red alarm lights STOP FLASHING. 81 INT. ENTERPRISE - MAIN BRIDGE Picard is by the Bynars who are prone and inert. Riker is checking the ship's position at a nearby panel. RIKER We're in orbit around Bynaus. (indicating the Bynars) How are they? PICARD They appear dead. Picard goes to his command chair. Riker continues working. PICARD (continuing) Let's see if we can get some answers from Bynaus. STAR TREK: "11001001" - 11/19/87 - ACT FIVE 51. 81 CONTINUED: RIKER Their main computer is off. Sensors reveal all of the equipment on the planet is inert. They can neither receive nor send any messages. PICARD What about all the people in that world who are totally dependant on their computer? Are they still functioning? RIKER No. They are probably just like these Bynars here. Dying. 82 PICARD as he ponders. RIKER So, what's this all about? Why did they steal the ship and bring it here? What was their purpose? PICARD They went to a lot of trouble to clear computer space. See what they've stored. 83 ANOTHER ANGLE (OPTICAL) Riker at the Aft station computer with Picard beside him. RIKER Captain, it's enormous. Every byte of free space in the computer has been filled. They must have made a core-dump from their world to our computer. He inputs something into the computer. The CRT SHOWS nothing but GIBBERISH. RIKER (continuing) I can't get in. He tries again. The Screen REPAINTS and again is just a mass of unintelligible signs and symbols. STAR TREK: "11001001" - 11/19/87 - ACT FIVE 52. 83 CONTINUED: RIKER (continuing; reading the Screen) I need a code -- a password -- to access the file. Picard is both puzzled and concerned. He looks over at the Bynars who are still unconscious. PICARD They were desperate to steal this ship, bring it here to store all this information. Why? RIKER I don't know. I wish they had left a note. Picard pauses. PICARD Perhaps they did. Riker instantly connects. RIKER Minuet. PICARD Maybe. 83A INT. CORRIDOR Picard and Riker hurriedly EXIT the turbolift. 84 INT. HOLODECK Riker and Picard are in the Holodeck. It's still the JAZZ CLUB. As they APPROACH Minuet she UNFREEZES. RIKER Tell me what this is all about. MINUET A star in the Bynar system went super nova and they miscalculated. The electromagnetic pulse from the explosion was going to knock out their main computer. STAR TREK: "11001001" - 11/19/87 - ACT FIVE 53. 84 CONTINUED: PICARD Their only chance was to transfer all the stored information and shut down until after it passed. Then, reactivate their system and transfer the information back to this main computer. RIKER And the Enterprise has the only mobile computer large enough to handle all that information. PICARD So what went wrong? MINUET The star went super nova before it was expected and you were late arriving at Starbase 74. PICARD But why steal the ship? Why didn't they say something? Why didn't they just ask for help? MINUET (shrugs) I don't know. I don't have those answers. PICARD Is there anything we can do? MINUET Yes. Return the data stored in the Enterprise's computer back to the one on Bynaus. RIKER How do we do that? MINUET (puzzled) Don't you know? Riker shakes his head. RIKER Yes. If we had the file name. But we don't. Do you? STAR TREK: "11001001" - 11/19/87 - ACT FIVE 54. 84 CONTINUED: (2) MINUET I don't know what you're talking about. No. PICARD They wouldn't intentionally hide it or make it difficult for us to find. It's got to be right in front of us. RIKER (to Picard) We should call Starbase 74, and see if anyone can decipher this. MINUET (emotionally) Hurry. They're dying. (to Picard) They meant you no harm. It was their world they were trying to save. (to Riker) Help them, Will -- please help them. 85 INT. MAIN BRIDGE Riker and Picard ENTER and take their positions. Picard touches his arm panel. PICARD Starbase 74 -- this is the Enterprise. 85A INT. STARBASE CONTROL The relief is instantaneous. (INTERCUT THE ENTERPRISE AND STARBASE AS NEEDED.) QUINTEROS This is Starbase 74. Captain Picard, what's your situation? PICARD We'll get into that later. Right now I must speak with Lieutenant Commander Data. STAR TREK: "11001001" - 11/19/87 - ACT FIVE 55. 85A CONTINUED: DATA I am here, sir. PICARD Data, the Bynars have stored an enormous amount of information in the computer. We can't access it, and we must. DATA The access would be available by code or password. PICARD I know, but what could it be? DATA File names can be anything. PICARD They want us to find it. They would have kept it simple. DATA Then a name -- or a place. It could be personal. In this case in binary language which is ones and zeros in groups of eight or sixteen characters. Picard looks at the prone figures. PICARD Could it be that simple? (to Riker) Try it. 86 RIKER AT COMPUTER (OPTICAL) He sets up the program. The CRT SCREEN DISPLAYS a PATTERN and starts running COMBINATIONS OF ONES AND ZEROS until it gets to -- 11001001 -- then the SCREEN LOCKS. RIKER That's the file. It'll work now. They exchange a visual equivalent of a High Five. STAR TREK: "11001001" - 11/19/87 - ACT FIVE 56. 86 CONTINUED: PICARD Well done, Will. Now access the file and start the transfer. Riker attempts to do just that. Again the CRT REPAINTS, and this time it's filled with GIBBERISH. RIKER So much for that idea. PICARD Let me get on the other position. The Bynars always work in pairs, perhaps that is also required. Now together they input the information. There is a pause. Both think it's not working -- then the SCREEN LOCKS, the LIGHTS DIM, the computer HUMS and starts PUMPING OUT tons of binary info. 87 OMITTED 88 INT. - BACK TO MAIN BRIDGE (OPTICAL) In the dim light, Riker and Picard watch as the CRT Screen whips through the files being dumped on Bynaus. PICARD It appears to be successful. The system has started up -- a resident diagnostic program is running. Their system is incredible. The Bynars on the bridge begin to REVIVE. ZERO ONE You... ONE ZERO ... did it. As Picard and Riker watch, the Bynars continue to regain their strength. Bynar One Zero and Zero One, go to a computer panel and verify that the transfer of information is being accomplished efficiently. The bridge lighting returns to normal. ZERO ONE (showing relief and happiness) ... our world is... STAR TREK: "11001001" - 11/19/87 - ACT FIVE 57. 88 CONTINUED: ONE ZERO (... and happiness) ... reactivating. ZERO ONE Our people... ONE ZERO ... express their gratitude. ZERO ZERO ... We will return to... ONE ONE ... your Starbase for whatever... ZERO ZERO ... punishment your system... ONE ONE ... requires of us. PICARD Why didn't you just ask for our help? The four of them communicate quickly between themselves. ZERO ONE You might have... ONE ZERO ... said no. RIKER But there was a very good chance we would have said "yes." ZERO ZERO Our need was too great... ONE ONE ... to risk rejection. PICARD So you stole it. STAR TREK: "11001001" - 11/19/87 - ACT FIVE 58. 88 CONTINUED: (2) RIKER Their reason is part of their binary thinking -- for them there are only two choices -- one or zero -- yes or no. PICARD No one's been hurt. They accomplished their objective. They have their world back in order, and we have our ship. Picard takes the position at the Conn. PICARD (continuing) It's been some time since I had the Conn. He taps in the coordinates. PICARD (continuing) But, not to worry, Number One you're in good hands. Starbase 74 -- at warp two. He taps in the speed. PICARD (continuing) Engage. Riker looks on with a smile. PICARD (continuing) Under complete control. 88A EXT. SPACE - ENTERPRISE ENTERING STARBASE (OPTICAL) The ship APPROACHES, then DOCKS. (As before.) 88B INT. STARBASE CONTROL The crewmembers of the Enterprise watch with elation as their ship REDOCKS. STAR TREK: "11001001" - 11/19/87 - ACT FIVE 59. 88C INT. MAIN BRIDGE Both turbolift doors OPEN and the crew POURS ONTO the bridge. Beverly, Wesley, Geordi, Data, Tasha and Worf ENTER and gather around Riker and Picard. PICARD We are all right, everything is fine. Now -- I want a complete check of all systems and divisions. TASHA What about the Bynars? She indicates the four Bynars gathered together off to one side. PICARD Turn them over to Quinteros. (to the Bynars) There will be a hearing. ZERO ONE We understood that... ONE ZERO ... would happen. RIKER That being the case -- permission to leave the bridge. PICARD Permission granted. 89 INT. HOLODECK Riker is at the computer panel. Riker punches in the code. COMPUTER Program entered - you may enter the Holodeck. Riker ENTERS. The scene is the same. "Minuet" is at the table. Riker is very relieved. Her face is turned away -- she is motionless and will be until Riker sits down. STAR TREK: "11001001" - 11/19/87 - ACT FIVE 60. 90 ANGLE ON TABLE Riker sits down. RIKER What's a knockout like you doin' in a computer-generated joint like this? The woman turns -- she looks a lot like Minuet -- but it is clearly not Minuet. 91 RIKER The disappointment etched on his face. RIKER You're not Minuet. 92 INT. MAIN BRIDGE Riker ENTERS and CROSSES to the Ops position. RIKER She's gone. I tried variations of the program, others appeared, but not Minuet. PICARD Maybe that too, was part of the Bynar's program. Some relationships just can't work. RIKER (he can agree intellectually, but emotionally it's not easy) Yes... probably true... but, she will be difficult to forget. 93 EXT. SPACE - THE ENTERPRISE (STOCK OPTICAL) As she heads AWAY. FADE OUT: END OF ACT FIVE THE END STAR TREK: THE NEXT GENERATION "Home Soil" #40271-117 Story by Karl Geurs & Ralph Sanchez and Robert Sabaroff Teleplay by Robert Sabaroff Directed by Corey Allen Copyright 1987 Paramount Pictures Corporation. All Rights Reserved. This script is not for publication or reproduction. No one is authorized to dispose of same. If lost or destroyed, please notify the Script Department. 3RD REV. FINAL DRAFT DECEMBER 2, 1987 STAR TREK: "Home Soil" - 12/2/87 - CAST STAR TREK: THE NEXT GENERATION "Home Soil" CAST PICARD KURT MANDL RIKER ARTHUR MALENCON BEVERLY LUISA KIM DATA BJORN BENSEN TROI TASHA WORF GEORDI WESLEY ENGINEER (FEMALE) Voice-Over COMPUTER VOICE TRANSLATOR VOICE TRANSPORTER CHIEF STAR TREK: "Home Soil" - 12/2/87 - SETS STAR TREK: THE NEXT GENERATION "Home Soil" SETS INTERIORS EXTERIORS USS ENTERPRISE USS ENTERPRISE MAIN BRIDGE CAPTAIN'S READY ROOM VELARA III MEDICAL LAB LUISA'S QUARTERS CORRIDOR BY MEDICAL LAB DOOR ENGINEERING OBSERVATION LOUNGE TERRAFORMING BASE CORRIDOR OUTSIDE HYDRAULICS ROOM HYDRAULICS ROOM MAIN CONTROL ROOM STAR TREK: "Home Soil" - 12/2/87 - TEASER 1. STAR TREK: THE NEXT GENERATION "Home Soil" TEASER FADE IN: 1 EXT. SPACE - THE ENTERPRISE - VELARA III IN B.G. The ship is ENTERING a parking orbit of the yellow-ochre, featureless planet. PICARD (V.O.) Captain's log, stardate 41463.9. We are mapping the Pleiades Cluster which has many young planets and we've been asked by the Federation to visit a group terraforming Velara III, which we would very much like to see. Communications have been erratic and there is some concern about their welfare. 2 INT. MAIN BRIDGE (OPTICAL) PICARD, RIKER, DATA, TROI, TASHA, GEORDI and WORF -- at their respective stations -- all study Velara III on the Main Viewer. As Velara III SETTLES INTO PLACE on the Main Viewer: GEORDI Entering standard orbit -- now. PICARD It takes special people to live in such desolation. TROI Visionaries, who don't see this planet as it is, but as it will be. RIKER I've always wanted to see terraforming in operation. PICARD Hailing frequency, Lieutenant Yar. STAR TREK: "Home Soil" - 12/2/87 - TEASER 2. 2 CONTINUED: TASHA Hailing frequencies open, sir. PICARD Velara III base, this is Captain Picard of the starship Enterprise. No response. PICARD (continuing) Lieutenant Yar... ? TASHA No equipment malfunction on either end, sir. They are receiving. PICARD Velara III, this is the Enterprise. Come in please. Still nothing. Some tense glances among personnel. GEORDI (after a beat) Maybe nobody's home. 3 ANGLE ON MAIN VIEWER (OPTICAL) ZOOM IN until WE CAN MAKE OUT the ribbed dome of the Terraforming Station. DATA We are sensing life-forms, sir. PICARD (concerned) Velara III, do you copy? Then the IMAGE of PROJECT DIRECTOR KURT MANDL APPEARS, somewhat disheveled. He is Picard's age, and appears to be taken off guard. He could be of German decent, somewhat stiff. MANDL Velara Base to Enterprise. Uh... yes, Captain. Director Mandl here. Sorry for the delay. We weren't expecting visitors. STAR TREK: "Home Soil" - 12/2/87 - TEASER 3. 4 ANGLE ON TROI just enough to ESTABLISH that a small alarm bell is ringing, but not enough for a comment. 5 INT. MAIN BRIDGE - INCLUDE VIEWSCREEN (OPTICAL) PICARD Terraform Command has asked us to see how you were getting along. MANDL ... We were a little behind, but we're back on schedule. 6 CLOSE ON TROI AND PICARD watching and listening intently. TROI (quietly) We alarm him for some reason. PICARD (a pause) Your staff is all well, I presume, Director? MANDL Understandably tired. We're all working very hard, Captain. PICARD Is there anything we can do to help?... You and your staff are welcome aboard for a change of scene and some rest. We have some Holodecks you might enjoy. MANDL No disrespect, sir, we can't afford to take the time. Troi touches Picard, indicating he should CLICK OFF. Picard DOES SO. TROI His fear is escalating. STAR TREK: "Home Soil" - 12/2/87 - TEASER 4. 6 CONTINUED: MANDL If you'll excuse me, I must get back to work. TROI I sense deliberate concealment, sir. Picard takes it in, concerned. 7 FEATURING PICARD -- INCLUDE VIEWSCREEN (OPTICAL) While Picard delivers the following, Mandl seems distracted. PICARD (to Troi) Of what? TROI I don't know, but it's intense. Picard nods and CLICKS BACK ON. PICARD We've heard so much about your remarkable achievements in terraforming, that my staff would very much appreciate looking around. MANDL (hesitant) ... It's not really the best time. We are at a critical phase just now. PICARD We do not require any special attention. MANDL (softer) I'm trying not to be rude, sir, but it would be inconvenient just now. Pause. Troi signals Picard to CLICK OFF again. STAR TREK: "Home Soil" - 12/2/87 - TEASER 5. 7 CONTINUED: TROI He's concealing something and it's more than just being too busy. Your announcement about coming down has pushed him almost to the point of panic. PICARD Whether he wants us or not... (touching his com) Director Mandl, unless you are absolutely refusing permission for us to land on your station, please prepare to receive my away team. MANDL (curtly) As you wish. Riker, Tasha, Data and Geordi rise and head for the door. Worf and another crewmember replace Data and Geordi. PICARD Stay on your toes, Number One. Counselor, perhaps you should go along. A man this tense is unpredictable. Troi rises and JOINS the away team. FADE OUT. END OF TEASER STAR TREK: "Home Soil" - 12/2/87 - ACT ONE 6. ACT ONE FADE IN: 8 EXT. SPACE - ENTERPRISE (OPTICAL) in orbit. 9 INT. TERRAFORMING BASE (OPTICAL) Riker, Data, Geordi, Troi and Tasha BEAM IN. Present in the room are ARTHUR MALENCON, LUISA KIM and BJORN BENSEN, Hydraulics Specialist, Biosphere Designer and Chief Engineer, respectively. Expecting the visitors, Malencon, and Bensen are guarded. Luisa on the other hand is friendly and open. LUISA Welcome to Velara III. Remember it as it is now, because in a couple of decades you won't recognize the place. (steps foward) Luisa Kim. Gardener of Edens. RIKER Commander William Riker, USS Enterprise. This is Lieutenant Commander Data, Counselor Troi, Lieutenant Yar and Lieutenant La Forge. The other two members of the terraforming team reluctantly move forward -- both are tense. LUISA This is Bjorn Bensen, Chief Engineer, and Arthur Malencon, our Hydraulics Specialist, Bensen steps over to Data. He looks him over. BENSON An android. Data nods. TASHA And third in command of the Enterprise. STAR TREK: "Home Soil" - 12/2/87 - ACT ONE 7. 9 CONTINUED: After a look of suprise, Bensen takes Data's offered hand and examines both sides of it, as if he's checking out a new piece of remarkable equipment. BENSEN Where were you manufactured -- are there others like you? DATA Both matters are subjects of protracted discussion. BENSEN Remarkable. Bensen turns and joins Malencon at their work. The team members take in their surroundings. We are in a twenty-fourth century power and hydraulics facility, more square-cut and mechanical than the Enterprise. Large, working machinery, on which "the bolts show." The computers are more heavy duty and their jumper cables show. This room is the hub of the operation, with corridors and doors leading off in four different directions. Beneath it all is the LOW RUMBLE of HYDRAULIC EQUIPMENT at work. LUISA We don't get visitors. It's exciting to have you here. RIKER We weren't sure how we would be received. Director Mandl seemed less than enthusiastic about our interest. LUISA (warmly) I should apologize for him. We are at a critical phase. Usually he's quite charming. Riker returns her smile. RIKER We'll stay out of your way, it's just that we've never seen a terraforming station, and couldn't resist the opportunity. STAR TREK: "Home Soil" - 12/2/87 - ACT ONE 8. 9 CONTINUED: (2) LUISA How much do you know about the process? DATA The theories -- the reports -- but nothing firsthand. LUISA Oh, wonderful. Then let me show you around. As she turns and leads them to a screen, Troi moves to Riker. TROI (sotto voce) The other two are as veiled and secretive as Mandl, but she is not. 10 ANGLE TO INCLUDE LUISA'S SCREEN (OPTICAL) As the away team watches, the screen SHOWS a lifeless, uniformly brown, dead planet. LUISA What we're doing is so exciting, so -- inspiring. We take a lifeless planet and little by little transform it into an M-class environment, capable of supporting life. Terraforming makes you feel a little godlike. (beat) Is that a terribly arrogant thing to say? DATA Not at all. It is accurate. 11 INTERCUT with REACTIONS and COMMENTS of the away team. During this, Luisa seems attracted to Riker. STAR TREK: "Home Soil" - 12/2/87 - ACT ONE 9. 11 CONTINUED: LUISA The first phase is selecting the planet. That's very important. It must have the right mass and gravity, the correct rate of rotation, and a balanced day and night. The planet must also be without life or having the prospect of life delveloping naturally. The Federation makes that decision. Then... (she pauses a beat for emphasis) ... we take over. Riker and the others are taken by her ingenuous enthusiasm. LUISA (continuing) What you see here -- this station -- is Phase Two. Phase Three involves the water. Usually we create basins, using hydraulic landscaping, but the water on this planet is subsurface, and extremely high in salt content. We are just about to begin pumping and filtering that water, removing the salt, oxygenating and replacing. Next we introduce micro-organisms, and when the process is complete... Her screen now SHOWS several large separated areas of green. The away team exchange looks of admiration. LUISA (continuing) ... eventually, we'll have a lush, arable, biosphere. While this goes on, Data's attention is caught by Malencon. RIKER You make it sound poetic. LUISA (brightly) I think it's the best occupation in the universe. STAR TREK: "Home Soil" - 12/2/87 - ACT ONE 10. 11 CONTINUED: (2) Data CROSSES to Malencon's work station and glances at his blueprints. 12 ANGLE - DATA AND MALENCON Malencon is working near a computer screen FILLED with hydraulics plans -- pipes, sprayers, probes, plans for channels, rivers and bays. Geordi STEPS UP beside him. DATA The efficiency of your hydraulic landscaping is elegant. How could Malencon not be flattered? MALENCON It isn't yet -- but it will be. Right now, I'm disturbed by erratic power surges in several of the servomechanisms that control the hydraulic probes. GEORDI Could it be the increased conductivity caused by the high saline content? MALENCON (with the enthusiasm of one scientist to another) That was my first thought, but.. Bensen puts a cap on the conversation. BENSEN Arthur. Malencon catches himself. BENSEN (continuing; curtly) We checked that out. That wasn't it. 13 TROI AND RIKER They exchange a glance at this behavior. STAR TREK: "Home Soil" - 12/2/87 - ACT ONE 11. 14 ANOTHER ANGLE as Mandl ENTERS the room. MANDL I'm Director Mandl. I am sorry about being so abrupt during our initial contact, being isolated one tends to forget the social graces. Are you seeing everything you want? TROI What you are doing here is miraculous. MANDL What we are doing here is working on a difficult, demanding timetable, and there will be no miracle unless Malencon gets the hydraulic probes back on line. We are set to step up to full conversion, immediately. (crisply; to Malencon) Shouldn't you be in the hydraulics chamber, Arthur? Malencon is caught off guard. MALENCON Now? 15 TROI She picks up on the tension. 16 MANDL He steps toward Malencon for emphasis. MANDL Yes. MALENCON (rising, nervous) All right, Kurt. Malencon HURRIES OUT. STAR TREK: "Home Soil" - 12/2/87 - ACT ONE 12. 17 ANOTHER ANGLE Troi and Riker exchange a glance at this behavior. 18 GEORDI indicating Malencon's computer screen. GEORDI That must be the master subsurface pump. Impressive. DATA (indicating another area on the computer screen) This is interesting. How the water table is a thin ribbon between the sandy surface layer and the rock below. GEORDI And it follows the contour precisely. DATA (nodding) Which would require extreme precision from the probe controls. Mandl ENTERS SHOT, on guard as he hears this. He goes to the computer and calls up another program. MANDL Here's something which should interest you. The vegetation graphs are really the key element to successful terraforming. CAMERA BACK as everyone steps closer to look, except Troi. RIKER Incredible. It's planned month by month, decade by decade. MANDL Every single thing we do is specific and exacting. You see grand, romantic concepts. I see unyielding rock under an ocean of sand. STAR TREK: "Home Soil" - 12/2/87 - ACT ONE 13. 19 ANGLE - TROI She suddenly registers a severe emotional shock. TROI (overlapping, alarmed) Commander... ! as all hear the alarm in her voice. Her internal sensors are scanning the facility. RIKER What is it, Deanna? Her face suddenly registers emotional shock. TROI (almost in pain) Malencon. He's in trouble. A perception immediately followed by a WARNING SIREN and the o.s. SOUND of LASER BLASTS. Reactions. Riker is first OUT of the room, FOLLOWED by Data, Geordi and Tasha. Mandl is NEXT, FOLLOWED by Troi. Bensen and Luisa, exchanging a look, BRING UP THE REAR. 20 INT. CORRIDOR - OUTSIDE HYDRAULICS ROOM The o.s. LASER BLASTING is LOUDER, accompanied by SHOUTS and CRIES of PAIN by Malencon on the other side of the closed door. ANGLE ADJUSTS as Riker and the group CONVERGE ON the sliding door. Riker tries the handle -- locked. He alone... and then he and Data pull at the handles -- no go. Mandl SQUEEZES UP. RIKER Can you open it? Mandl presses the auto-decoder pad, tries the door. But it still won't open. MANDL It's jammed. TASHA Let me try. The o.s. SCREAMS STOP. The LASER BLASTS CEASE. Reactions: "Is the threat over?" Troi looks sad. TROI We're too late. Mandl tries the auto-decoder pad again, and this time the door OPENS. STAR TREK: "Home Soil" - 12/2/87 - ACT ONE 14. 21 INT. HYDRAULICS ROOM - MANDL'S POV The central monitoring column, from which laser arms extend and sink laterally into the "surround," has been trashed. On the floor is the equally trashed body of Arthur Malencon. 22 REVERSE ANGLE as folks CROWD INTO the doorway. Mandl has a look of fear etched across his face. Luisa, very emotional, covers her eyes, turns away. Bensen is sick. Our away team looks from the body on the floor to Mandl back to the body. Tasha stares at Mandl. FADE OUT. END OF ACT ONE STAR TREK: "Home Soil" - 12/2/87 - ACT TWO 15. ACT TWO FADE IN: 23 EXT. SPACE - ENTERPRISE (OPTICAL) In orbit. PICARD (V. O.) Captain's log, supplemental. What began as a routine visit to the Federation group terraforming Velara III has become a serious situation. Arthur Malencon, the hydraulics engineer, has been killed in an extraordinary accident. 24 INT. TERRAFORMING BASE - HYDRAULICS ROOM as before, with Malencon's body. PAN the mess of twisted metal until WE SETTLE on the doorway where Data waits with the others, except for Geordi and Bensen. PICARD'S COM VOICE Situation report, Number One. RIKER (tense, trying to save a life) For safety reasons, we're shutting off all power to the hydraulics room before entering to recover the body. Then we'll beam him up to Sickbay, but from the look of his wounds, it's probably hopeless. PICARD'S COM VOICE Keep me informed. GEORDI'S COM VOICE Data... ? Data taps his communicator. DATA Go ahead, Geordi. STAR TREK: "Home Soil" - 12/2/87 - ACT TWO 16. 25 INT. MAIN CONTROL ROOM/HYDRAULICS ROOM (INTERCUT AS DESIRED) Geordi stands before an array of computer panels examining a display SHOWING the FLOW CHART of the operation, AND a DIAGRAM OF THE CROSSED-HUB LAYOUT as Bensen works some controls, then nods to Geordi. BENSEN All set. GEORDI We have your section powered down now. Bensen has locked the master servomotor drive system. It should be safe in there now. TASHA I'm going in. DATA I will go with you. Data and Tasha ENTER the room, moving to Malencon's body. She quickly affixes a communicator to the body, touches it, says: 26 CLOSE ON TASHA AND BODY (OPTICAL) TASHA Transporter Room, this is Lieutenant Yar. Two to beam up to Sickbay. Concerned to get the body to Sickbay as soon as possible, she waits as she and the body DEMATERIALIZE. 27 BACK TO DOORWAY (OPTICAL) LUISA I want to go. We should be with him. (to Mandl) Kurt, please come too. Mandl shows reluctance, but, seeing the looks on everyone's faces, he acquiesces. Riker touches his com. STAR TREK: "Home Soil" - 12/2/87 - ACT TWO 17. 27 CONTINUED: RIKER Transporter Room, this is Commander Riker. Beam up four at my coordinates. Luisa, Mandl, Troi and Riker DEMATERIALIZE. Data now moves into the room proper, prying his way through the wreckage. DATA (on com) I have seen malfunctions, but this is unprecedented. Almost as if the laser drill attempted to tear itself apart. BENSEN (off Geordi's look) I can't explain it. DATA (into com; reflecting) The laser blasts seemed to end when the yelling stopped. Data goes to the room's computer control console. BENSEN'S COM VOICE Maybe Arthur stopped it -- only not in time. DATA Not possible. GEORDI'S COM VOICE Then what are you suggesting? Data studies at the control panel. DATA Uncertain. (to Geordi) Geordi, would you please return power to the control console in this room. I want to reactivate the program. Geordi and Bensen do as requested, systematically toggling a bank of switches. (END INTERCUT) STAR TREK: "Home Soil" - 12/2/87 - ACT TWO 18. 28 DATA'S ANGLE - CONSOLE A localized panel LIGHTS UP. Data pushes buttons. The laser drill begins its normal functioning. Data watches it for a beat as it systematically blasts into the bore holes. He then turns his attention back to the console. DATA (into com) I am running the base drilling program. 29 ANGLES - VARIOUS (MECHANICAL EFFECTS) (OPTICAL) While Data is preoccupied with the computer program, the firing head on the laser drill, lifts and turns -- no longer sighting down the bore holes -- it is now taking dead aim on Data. The NOISE from the arm alerts Data who TURNS and DODGES the BLAST which it WHISTLES BY his ear. Again IT FIRES. DATA Servos OFF! 30 INT. MAIN CONTROL ROOM Geordi and Bensen scan the panels. Nothing in here has changed. BENSEN They are off! GEORDI Data, what's happening? DATA'S COM VOICE Too much to explain. 31 OMITTED 32 INT. CORRIDOR Geordi and Bensen RUN toward Data's location hearing the SOUND of LASER BLASTS. Geordi touches the Communicator. GEORDI La Forge to Enterprise. We have a problem! STAR TREK: "Home Soil" - 12/2/87 - ACT TWO 19. 33 INT. CORRIDOR - OUTSIDE HYDRAULICS ROOM The door is closed as Geordi and Bensen RACE TO it. GEORDI Open the door! DATA STAY OUT! It is under control. WE HEAR THRASHING, BLASTING, CLATTERING, sounding like a battle skirmish. WE PLAY OFF the REACTIONS of Geordi and Bensen. They look at each other, astonished, unable to comment. Suddenly -- SILENCE. GEORDI Data -- For a beat there is no answer. Then the door OPENS. 34 INT. CORRIDOR - HYDRAULICS ROOM DOOR Geordi ENTERS, FOLLOWED by Bensen, happy to see Data in good shape. GEORDI Are you injured? DATA No. 34A BENSEN'S POV INTO HYDRAULICS ROOM He has eyes only for the wreckage that was once sophisticated equipment. 34B BACK TO SHOT BENSEN A year's work destroyed! DATA I had no choice. PICARD'S COM VOICE Away team report now! What is happening? 35 INT. ENTERPRISE - CAPTAIN'S READY ROOM Picard, Tasha and Geordi are staring at a perfectly calm Data. Mandl stands in a corner. STAR TREK: "Home Soil" - 12/2/87 - ACT TWO 20. 35 CONTINUED: DATA (to Picard) ... We were attempting to trace the source of the malfunction when it attacked me. MANDL How much more of this fantasy must I listen to? PICARD None at all, Mr. Mandl. Until this is sorted out, I've provided temporary quarters for you and your crew. I suggest you use them. MANDL You're overstepping your authority, Picard! You have no right to interfere. PICARD An attack on one of my crew gives me the right, Mr. Mandl. MANDL I have a schedule to meet! PICARD Your schedule is on hold, until I have a satisfactory explanation of what happened. Mandl, seeing that argument is useless, turns to exit. Picard stops him with: PICARD (crisp) Director Mandl. Wait. (to Tasha) Escort the director to his quarters. TASHA Aye, sir. Mandl and Tasha EXIT. PICARD Proceed with your report. STAR TREK: "Home Soil" - 12/2/87 - ACT TWO 21. 35 CONTINUED: (2) DATA It would appear that the laser drilling systems had been reprogrammed. (beat) As soon as its memory bank received power, it turned itself on and went after me. Fortunately, I was able to cope with it. GEORDI (bank shot) Not by much, from what I saw. DATA I believe it was programmed to destroy any person moving in that room. PICARD Speculation or certainty? DATA Certainty. GEORDI It would have required the talents of a master programmer. DATA But it was done. PICARD Then the question is not who, because obviously it was one of the three remaining terraformers. The question is why. What are they hiding? What is so important it could make one of them, or all of them desperate enough to take a life? GEORDI Shall I have them brought in, sir? PICARD Not yet. Picard rises and they FOLLOW him to: STAR TREK: "Home Soil" - 12/2/87 - ACT TWO 22. 36 INT. ENTERPRISE - MAIN BRIDGE as they RETURN FROM the Ready Room. Riker, Tasha, Troi and Worf at their stations. BEVERLY is also present. PICARD Doctor Crusher? BEVERLY Malencon never had a chance. The injuries were too severe, the damage too extensive. Picard nods sadly. RIKER The entire Velara III facility has been powered down, Captain. WORF We've just completed a remote power feed to the life support systems. PICARD Good. Data, I want you and Geordi to return for a more careful inspection. DATA What are we to look for, sir? PICARD Evidence of tampering, negligence, sabotage... whatever. I don't know, but the answer's there, on the planet. Data and Geordi EXIT. PICARD (continuing) Tasha, I'd like you to provide Counselor Troi and me with complete personnel files on our three guests. Psych profiles, training, everything. I'm looking for motive, intent... the psychological capacity to commit one murder and attempt another. TASHA Aye, sir. STAR TREK: "Home Soil" - 12/2/87 - ACT TWO 23. 36 CONTINUED: Tasha turns to the aft station. PICARD (continuing, to Riker) It seems we've become policemen, Number One. Riker reacts, not enjoying the forecast. 37 INT. HYDRAULICS ROOM (OPTICAL) DIM interior ILLUMINATION filters in through the translucent dome. Data and Geordi MATERIALIZE among the apparently inert junk. They move cautiously at first, but everything does seem to be inert. 38 VARIOUS ANGLES as Data probes among the junk. Then, eventually, he examines the opening to the tubular tunnel which had been occupied by one of the sensor arms. 39 POV - SMALL FLASHES It doesn't last for more than half a second at a time, but something about the size of a rice grain BLINKS several times. 40 ANGLE - DATA Unaccustomedly startled, he draws back. He looks around to make sure nothing else is happening. Then, he gets close and looks again. ANOTHER BLINK or two. He scans the little thing with his tricorder. Nothing. Shaking his head, he touches his communicator. DATA Geordi. I need some visual assistance. 41 ANOTHER ANGLE as Geordi JOINS him. Data indicates the "rice grain," BLINKING in a rapid, non-repetitive pattern, looking like HIGH SPEED MORSE CODE in LIGHTS, with pauses and breaks, like language syntax. STAR TREK: "Home Soil" - 12/2/87 - ACT TWO 24. 41 CONTINUED: GEORDI What is it? With a very puzzled look at Data and the lights and back again, Geordi applies his Tricorder. GEORDI (continuing) Inorganic. Nothing but basic elements. No carbon... sandy texture... But the flashes are almost... musical. I see color variations and rhythms which are like a melody. DATA Speculation. Could it be alive? 42 CLOSE ON GEORDI stunned. He looks down at the FLASHING LIGHT. GEORDI How could it be alive? It's inorganic. DATA Whatever this is, it could be what they are covering up -- and the reason someone killed Malencon. As though in answer, the "rice grain" BLINKS FASTER, and in a fancier pattern than ever. Off Geordi's and Data's reactions, WE: FADE OUT: END OF ACT TWO STAR TREK: "Home Soil" - 12/2/87 - ACT THREE 25. ACT THREE FADE IN: 43 EXT. SPACE - ENTERPRISE (OPTICAL) in orbit. PICARD (V.O.) Captain's log, supplemental. On my order, Data's startling discovery of a possible indigenous and inorganic life-form -- something hitherto thought impossible... 44 INT. ENTERPRISE - MEDICAL LAB Beverly is preparing an elaborate scan, its object being the contents of a basketball-sized, transparent bell jar, anchored to a stable base, on a platform under a scanner. PICARD (V.O.) (continuing) ... has been beamed aboard so that its true nature might be uncovered. WESLEY hovers over her shoulder, as do Picard, Data, and Geordi. 45 ANGLES From the BLINKING CONTENTS OF THE SPHERE, WE RECOGNIZE Data's discovery. The BLINK is rapid, like a visual hum. They crowd around. 46 BEVERLY She lowers the overhead device until it covers the bell jar. BEVERLY (to Computer) Activate. There is a pause as the device is activated. STAR TREK: "Home Soil" - 12/2/87 - ACT THREE 26. 46 CONTINUED: BEVERLY (continuing; to group) Let's be sure of what we have here. (to the scanner) Is the sample organic? COMPUTER VOICE Negative carbon. Negative known life components. Substance inorganic. DATA Recheck analysis. COMPUTER VOICE Rechecking... Analysis verified. Not organic. BEVERLY Magnify to screen. Beverly and the others glance up to a screen situated atop the scanner (WHICH WE CANNOT YET SEE) as the machinery responds to her commands. BEVERLY (continuing) Magnify -- factor rate five. (beat, and:) Hold surface. Rate ten. (beat, and:) Hold. Everyone leans in for a closer look. 47 POV - THE SCREEN WE SEE A NETWORK of tiny BEAD-LIKE THINGS, connected by a WEB, like the synaptic structure of brain tissue. This structure SPARKLES DAZZLINGLY as energies flow along its "CIRCUITRY." We have isolated about FIVE OR SIX OF THE "BEADS." PICARD (O.S.) What are we looking at? WESLEY (O.S.) It's really beautiful. Whatever it is... A HUMMING SOUND BUILDS... then LEVELS OFF. STAR TREK: "Home Soil" - 12/2/87 - ACT THREE 27. 48 BACK TO SCENE as all react to the sound. PICARD (rhetorically) What's causing that hum? BEVERLY Computer, what is the magnification? COMPUTER VOICE Twenty five thousand diameters and holding. BEVERLY Analysis. The pattern of the flashes. COMPUTER VOICE Not random or repetitive or sequential. Pattern not recognized. BEVERLY What is the source of the flashes? COMPUTER VOICE Unable to specify. Theoretically not possible from this substance. BEVERLY Disregard incongruity and theorize as to source? Pregnant pause, and: COMPUTER VOICE Life. On the collective "take," especially from Data: 49 INT. CAPTAIN'S READY ROOM Picard is already verbally engaged with Mandl. Riker, Troi and Tasha are in the b.g. MANDL What do you mean a life-form?! What life-form?! A Federation recon expedition certified Velara III lifeless. STAR TREK: "Home Soil" - 12/2/87 - ACT THREE 28. 49 CONTINUED: PICARD Understandable, given this particular life-form's novel nature. MANDL And just what is that nature? PICARD Doctor Crusher is still making her determination. (beat) I presume you know the Prime Directive, Mr. Mandl. MANDL Are you saying I knowingly defied it? PICARD I don't know. But I intend to find out. (level beat) You're a man obsessed with what he does. Who knows what an obsessed man would do to keep going? Kill, perhaps? MANDL (exploding:) I create life! I don't take it! Mandl STORMS FROM the room. Tasha FOLLOWS him. A pause, and then: PICARD What do you think? RIKER You hit him pretty hard, Captain. PICARD Counselor? TROI It was useful. (to Picard) I felt two levels. He knew about the life-form. The idea of murder seemed to shock him. I couldn't tell if it was the whole idea, or just being accused of it. STAR TREK: "Home Soil" - 12/2/87 - ACT THREE 29. 49 CONTINUED: (2) PICARD What about his file, Lieutenant Yar? Could he have accomplished the reprogramming that Data says took place? TASHA Mandl holds advanced degrees in Computer Science as well as Artificial Intelligence. It's possible. PICARD What about the others? Including the victim. TASHA Only the victim had the required expertise. But Malencon did work where the... whatever-it-is... was found. Trying to suppress that knowledge would be motive for murder... if Mandl were obsessed enough. TROI Terraformers are often obsessive. It goes with the career profile. RIKER How do you read the designer? TROI Possessed of a highly abstracted reality. Lovely visions, little data. (smile) You might do better than I. 50 INT. LUISA'S QUARTERS She is lying on her sofa, her arm over her eyes. She wears a tasteful robe. There is a gentle KNOCK on the door. She seems not to hear it. RIKER (O.S.) Luisa... are you all right? She seems reassured by his voice. She sits up and wipes away the tears the arm had been covering. STAR TREK: "Home Soil" - 12/2/87 - ACT THREE 30. 50 CONTINUED: LUISA (flatly) It isn't locked. Riker ENTERS. RIKER Mind a visitor? She shakes her head and indicates a comfortable seat. He sinks into it. She looks at him, on the edge of hysteria. Just the edge. She is about to become either the world's greatest liar or its greatest innocent. LUISA Is it true... did you really find a life-form? RIKER It's still being debated in some quarters. But I think so, yes. LUISA What's it like? RIKER We have nothing to compare it to, but it's microscopic... seems colonial... simple... and inorganic. (gentle) That's why the recon scouts missed it. This one wasn't your mistake. She rises and faces him. LUISA Everything I've worked for is falling apart. She starts to cry. RIKER It's very beautiful. I'll arrange for you to see it, if you like. She forces a softening on herself, returns his gaze. LUISA Perhaps later. He nods warmly, and EXITS. STAR TREK: "Home Soil" - 12/2/87 - ACT THREE 31. 51 INT. MAIN BRIDGE - ANGLES (OPTICAL) Picard, Worf, Tasha, Troi. Other crewmembers filling in for Data and Geordi. The MED SCANNER SCREEN IMAGE is on the Main Viewer. All those who haven't yet seen it are having their minds appropriately blown. BEVERLY'S COM VOICE Captain, this is Doctor Crusher. I think you'd better come to the Medical Lab. 52 INT. MEDICAL LAB Data, Geordi, and Beverly are working with the analytical apparatus. Wesley watches. Picard ENTERS. Data and Geordi are peering into the bell jar. PICARD What is it? BEVERLY Geordi observed movement. GEORDI It's not exactly movement, it's a shift in the energy pattern. DATA Without external influence. WESLEY Couldn't coordinated static charges promote the shift? Data registers intrigue at the thought. DATA Yes, if any were present in the jar, but none is. Geordi suddenly reacts to something he alone is seeing. GEORDI It's changing. They all move close to the Jar. Their faces almost right against it. PICARD I can't see any difference. STAR TREK: "Home Soil" - 12/2/87 - ACT THREE 32. 52 CONTINUED: GEORDI The infrared range is increasing. Picard glances at the scanner screen. 53 POV - SCANNER SCREEN It's BRIGHTER. The surface starts to OSCILLATE. 54 ANGLE - GROUP AROUND BELL JAR As they move still closer - 55 ANGLE - BELL JAR (OPTICAL) The "rice grain" EMITS a bright LIGHT which fills the lab. Geordi seems almost blinded. COMPUTER VOICE Warning. Input overload. Input overload. The COMPUTER VOICE ZAPS OUT. The HUM from the container gets slowly LOUDER. 56 ANGLE - OUR PEOPLE REACTING to the increasing hum. DATA It is projecting an energy field! GEORDI And it's increasing! The BRIGHT LIGHT denies a chance to clearly see the contents of the bell jar, but: 57 THE SCANNER SCREEN is now completely FILLED WITH a SPARKLING CHAOS. The ROOM LIGHT shows PATTERNED INTENSITY CHANGES. 58 BACK TO SCENE Beverly is alarmed. STAR TREK: "Home Soil" - 12/2/87 - ACT THREE 33. 59 CLOSE POV - BELL JAR CONTAINER (OPTICAL) The WHITE LIGHT DIMINISHES enough to REVEAL the SINGLE GRAIN HAS BECOME TWO SMALL GRAINS, joined like Siamese twins. 60 BACK TO SCENE (OPTICAL) DATA Only life can replicate itself, Doctor. Inorganic or not, it is alive. BEVERLY Activate quarantine field. A tinted FORCE FIELD attempts to SURROUND THE CONTAINER, at her command. Then the field weakens, its GLOW DIMMING as the LIGHT from the Siamese grains BRIGHTENS. It then REVERSES, as the force field attempts to assert itself. BEVERLY (continuing) Quarantine field full! It stabilizes for a moment, then the quarantine field slowly DIMS. BEVERLY (continuing; more imperative) Full shield backup! COMPUTER VOICE Translation request being patched. PICARD Translation? From whom? BEVERLY Evacuating lab. As they EXIT, WE HEAR: COMPUTER VOICE Full shield backup in place but weakening... translation grhjkj wljkdh... STAR TREK: "Home Soil" - 12/2/87 - ACT THREE 34. 60 CONTINUED: WESLEY What's going on with the translator circuit? 61 INT. CORRIDOR - MEDICAL LAB DOOR as it SLIDES CLOSED. Beverly, Data and Geordi look at each other. Picard touches his communicator. PICARD (into communicator) bridge, this is the captain. Request emergency power to increase lab quarantine seal... 62 INT. MAIN BRIDGE - CONTINUOUS Riker turns to Worf: RIKER Do it, Mister Worf. (into com) What's the nature of the problem, Captain? We've lost visual. PICARD'S COM VOICE We have confirmed Data's discovery is life, but more than that - it is intelligent. RIKER How do you know? PICARD'S COM VOICE (beat, and:) It has just taken possession of the Medical Lab. 62A INT. CORRIDOR - MEDICAL LAB DOOR PICARD Because it's trying to communicate with us! Riker and the rest REACT as we: FADE OUT: END OF ACT THREE STAR TREK: "Home Soil" - 12/2/87 - ACT FOUR 35. ACT FOUR FADE IN: 63 EXT. SPACE - THE ENTERPRISE (OPTICAL) In orbit. PICARD (V.O.) Captain's log, supplemental. We are attempting to deal with the aggressive inorganic life-form which Data brought up from the planet. It has taken over the Medical Lab, and is apparently attempting to communicate with us. 64 INT. ENTERPRISE - MAIN BRIDGE Picard, Riker, Worf, Geordi and Troi are at their stations. Other crewmembers fill in at the other posts. Beverly and Data standing by. WORF It generates enough energy to interfere with surrounding systems. PICARD Mr. La Forge -- can we see into the lab yet? GEORDI Negative, Captain. But, reducing backup to the quarantine seal might help. PICARD (to Beverly) Doctor? BEVERLY I wouldn't. PICARD Continue backup to shield, Lieutenant. TASHA'S COM VOICE Director Mandl and the others are in the Observation Lounge as you requested. STAR TREK: "Home Soil" - 12/2/87 - ACT FOUR 36. 64 CONTINUED: PICARD Counselor, I'll need you. (to Riker) You have the bridge, Number One. 65 INT. OBSERVATION LOUNGE Seated around the table are Mandl, Luisa, and Bensen. Tasha stands at the door and steps aside to permit Picard's and Troi's ENTRANCE as Picard takes control of the room. PICARD (to Mandl) What do you know of this life-form? The mention of "life" gets curious reactions from Bensen, Luisa and Mandl. MANDL Nothing. PICARD You knew of its existence. Mandl returns Picard's stare. MANDL Yes. LUISA (shocked) Is this true? (turning on Mandl) You knew there was life on Velara III? MANDL (hot) I knew there were random energy patterns -- I knew that. But that's not life. Not by any definition I have ever heard. PICARD But, you tried to hide that knowledge from us. STAR TREK: "Home Soil" - 12/2/87 - ACT FOUR 37. 65 CONTINUED: MANDL They're meaningless silicon crystals, which rebroadcast sunlight. This is absurd. PICARD They are not only alive but they have intelligence. Mandl is stunned. MANDL Why do you say that? PICARD They're trying to communicate with us. MANDL (astounded) Communicate with you? PICARD I need information, now. When did you first see them? What were they doing? Why did you think they were alive? Mandl hesitates. Bensen starts to respond. BENSEN ... There were patterns, in the sand, appearing and disappearing -- RIKER'S COM VOICE Captain, we've regained a visual on the lab. PICARD (into Com) Patch visual to Observation Lounge... All look toward the small viewscreen in the lounge. 66 POV - VIEWSCREEN - MEDICAL LAB IN VIEW (OPTICAL) as the bell jar, and whatever is in it, SHIMMERS. STAR TREK: "Home Soil" - 12/2/87 - ACT FOUR 38. 67 INT. ENTERPRISE - MAIN BRIDGE Data, Geordi, and Worf are working together at the aft Science Stations looking at the same SHIMMERING image. Each tapping keys at consoles, reading info. All eyes are on individual displays. WORF I cannot understand the patterns. GEORDI Neither can I. DATA Please show me the spectral analysis. Magnification twelve K. Now Geordi is operating the console. With each entry he makes, the computer voice responds. The following should play very FAST. COMPUTER VOICE DATA Silicon... Germanium... Transistor material. COMPUTER VOICE GEORDI Gallium arsenide... Emits light when charged. COMPUTER VOICE DATA Cadmium selenide... sulfide... Emits charge when lit. COMPUTER VOICE WORF Water... impurities... Conductor. Sodium salts... WORF But is it alive?! COMPUTER VOICE Probability positive... WORF (to computer) I wasn't asking you. FEMALE COM VOICE Engineering to bridge. 68 ANGLE - COMMAND AREA Riker responding. RIKER This is Commander Riker, go ahead. STAR TREK: "Home Soil" - 12/2/87 - ACT FOUR 39. 68 CONTINUED: FEMALE COM VOICE The backup on the lab seal is fluctuating, sir. I think you should come down here. RIKER On my way. (on his EXIT) Data, you have the bridge. Inform the captain. Data moves to his new station. Riker ENTERS the turbolift. 69 INT. ENGINEERING - COMPUTER CONSOLE The ENGINEER, female, and very much into the job, is busy operating the computer. Riker ENTERS. RIKER Status, Ensign? ENGINEER The quarantine seal is getting weaker. Every time I try to redirect backup... it goes somewhere else. (feeling crazy) I think I've... it's... locked three people in a turbolift and two more in the programmers' rest room. RIKER (indicates panel) If that's reading right, there is no seal. (beat) Give me a lab interior image. They both look at a viewscreen over the computer console, and to their amazement, 70 POV - VIEWSCREEN (OPTICAL) On which is clearly seen a very benign LAB INTERIOR. RIKER (O.S.) Magnify. STAR TREK: "Home Soil" - 12/2/87 - ACT FOUR 40. 71 INSERT - BELL JAR On the platform sits the bell jar container, within which is a relatively tranquil globular cluster of "rice grains," about the size of a golf ball, pulsing mildly. The PULSING is contained in the bell jar. 72 BACK TO SCENE Riker touches his communicator. RIKER Captain, this is Riker. PICARD'S COM VOICE We see it too, Number One. 73 ANGLE - THE VIEWSCREEN (OPTICAL) Suddenly, a BOLT of LIGHT shoots from the bell jar toward the Medical Lab computer console. PICARD'S COM VOICE (imperative) Get that seal back up! 74 BACK TO SCENE While the Engineer struggles: ENGINEER (a little scared) No matter what I do, the energy goes somewhere else. What if it hits the Nursery... Or Sickbay... ? RIKER (nods) Hold off. (into com) Impossible, Captain. We haven't got the power. 75 INT. ENTERPRISE - MAIN BRIDGE - ANGLES The full complement, including Mandl, Luisa and Bensen -- all with eyes on the viewscreen. Suddenly, WE HEAR A DISSONANT TUNED NOISE trying to make itself intelligible. STAR TREK: "Home Soil" - 12/2/87 - ACT FOUR 41. 75 CONTINUED: DATA The Universal Translator is coming on line. The NOISE becomes something more recognizably VERBAL, though still unintelligible. 76 ANGLE TO MAIN VIEWER (OPTICAL) The beautiful, RADIATING rice ball in the Container, its LIGHTS PULSING IN SYNC with the SOUND. A TIRADE BEGINS, clumsy at first, but unmistakably angry. INTERCUT REACTIONS. TRANSLATOR VOICE Ugly... Ugly... Giants... Bags of Mostly Water... PICARD Bags of mostly water? DATA An accurate description, sir, of humans. You are, after all, over ninety per cent water, surrounded by a flexible container. PICARD (after reacting) Do you understand me? TRANSLATOR VOICE We understand. We ask you be gone... We call... We talk... You not listen. Riker ENTERS from the turbolift, hurrying to join his captain as: PICARD We didn't hear you. We come in peace. TRANSLATOR VOICE Ugly Bag of Mostly Water... we try at peace... you still not listen. (getting clearer) Bag in Dome on Sand of Home... we killed. STAR TREK: "Home Soil" - 12/2/87 - ACT FOUR 42. 76 CONTINUED: RIKER It killed Malencon. TROI (telepathically) We see and hear you now. We didn't know you were there. You are beautiful to us. All life is beautiful. TRANSLATOR VOICE Bag in dome did know. Made some of us die. Made us kill. War is now with you. 77 ANGLE - TO INCLUDE MAIN VIEWER (OPTICAL) The bell jar Image FADES, REPLACED by the featureless Velara III. PICARD Can you hear me? As a reply, the ship BUFFETS and SHUDDERS. PICARD (continuing) Duty stations! Report! GEORDI (checking console) Restabilizing, sir. 78 ANGLE FAVORING PICARD scanning the bridge, seeing the consoles LIGHT UP. DATA Sir... PICARD What is it, Data? DATA That chaos in the lab, when we were studying it... must have been the energy surge of a reproductive cycle. (beat) It is now a colony of single cells which organize as a computer. STAR TREK: "Home Soil" - 12/2/87 - ACT FOUR 43. 78 CONTINUED: PICARD (nods) More is stronger. BAM. The ship is BUFFETED again, harder. OFF everyone's REACTION, WE: FADE OUT: END OF ACT FOUR STAR TREK: "Home Soil" - 12/2/87 - ACT FIVE 44. ACT FIVE FADE IN: 79 EXT. SPACE - THE ENTERPRISE (OPTICAL) in orbit. PICARD (V.O.) Captain's log, supplemental. We've stumbled on a life-form... 80 INT. MEDICAL LAB on the bell jar and the golf ball cluster of "grains" contained within. There is a LIGHT FLICKER from the life-form as: PICARD (V.O.) (continuing) ... biologically and psychologically difficult for us to fully understand. (beat) The only thing totally clear is that this microbrain, as we've come to call it, has declared war on us. 81 INT. MAIN BRIDGE - ANGLES (FORMERLY SCENE 83) Everyone at their stations. RIKER Their range of influence appears to be concentrated in the Medical Lab, Captain. TASHA All non-essential personnel have been moved to the most distant areas of the ship, sir. PICARD Data -- any analysis of those bolts of light they emit? STAR TREK: "Home Soil" - 12/2/87 - ACT FIVE 45. 81 CONTINUED: DATA That seems to be their method of reprogramming, Captain. Each bolt of light consists of negatively and positively charged ions. A series of program instructions, as it were. (disturbed) They seem to have a quicker rapport with our computers than we do. WORF What do you expect? They are computers. PICARD Have we disabled the Medical Lab computer console? RIKER Aye, sir, as soon as Data determined the microbrain's method of operation. 82 OMITTED 82A ANGLE on Geordi and his console. The COLORS of his panel display are RUNNING UP AND DOWN the visible spectrum. GEORDI I am picking up a decrease in the infra-red intensity. 83 WIDER TO INCLUDE THE OTHERS (FORMERLY SCENE 85) WORF Maybe the life-form has reached its own energy limit. BEVERLY Or maybe this is not the end of it. (at their looks) With single-celled life-forms... at least organic ones, cell division can be preceded by a resting state. STAR TREK: "Home Soil" - 12/2/87 - ACT FIVE 46. 83 CONTINUED: RIKER The calm before the storm. PICARD Let's use the calm. Medical Lab on main viewer. Tasha moves to comply. 84 thru OMITTED 85 86 MAIN VIEWER (OPTICAL) WE CAN SEE THE bell jar on its pedestal in the Lab. The golf ball cluster of "grains" is BARELY FLICKERING. No rays, no bolts of light. DATA It does seem dormant. PICARD Lieutenant Yar - set coordinates to beam it back where it came from. TASHA (hits buttons, and:) Coordinates set. PICARD Energize! She hits the button. WE GET the SOUND OF THE TRANSPORTER. The BEAM even COMES PART WAY toward the bell jar and its microbrain occupant. But the damn thing won't dematerialize. 87 NEW ANGLE EXCLUDING the viewscreen. Riker reads a console. RIKER Transporter power has been redirected, sir. We are unable to affect it. STAR TREK: "Home Soil" - 12/2/87 - ACT FIVE 47. 87 CONTINUED: PICARD Life-form or not... intelligent or not -- the safety of this ship and all on her are my primary responsibility. (moment, and:) Data -- evacuate the air from the Medical Lab. I want a vacuum in there. Data punches in the command... reads his panel. DATA Environmental systems fail to respond to commands, Captain. It appears the microbrain has successfully interfaced with our computer. Picard considers his alternatives. PICARD Suggestions? (silence) Anyone? 88 OMITTED 88A INT. OBSERVATION LOUNGE - ESTABLISHING (FORMERLY SCENES 81 AND 82) Picard, Data and Beverly are with Mandl, Luisa, and Bensen. The lounge viewscreen will eventually put referenced IMAGES ON A SCREEN. PICARD I need your help. We have communicated with the life-form discovered on Velara III. MANDL You have what?! PICARD It has told us that it attempted to communicate with you, and you ignored it. MANDL If it was trying to communicate with us, we didn't understand that. STAR TREK: "Home Soil" - 12/2/87 - ACT FIVE 48. 88A CONTINUED: BENSEN We didn't try. PICARD What you were doing was so threatening to them that they killed your hydraulics engineer to stop it. They have declared a state of war. MANDL A state of war?! PICARD Yes, and we're on the defensive. I need your help. I have to find some way to fight them. We no longer have control of the Medical Lab, or the computer. At this moment they have the power to destroy this ship and everyone on it. MANDL Unbelievable. What can we do to help? PICARD They said you killed some of them. I need to know how. MANDL I -- I don't know. PICARD Exactly what was Malencon doing when he was killed? Luisa responds. LUISA There is a very thin layer of highly saline water under the sandy topsoil. He was siphoning that off. PICARD Why would that kill some of them? For a beat no one has an answer. BEVERLY Liquid supports life. Perhaps somehow, that saline water sustained them. STAR TREK: "Home Soil" - 12/2/87 - ACT FIVE 49. 88A CONTINUED: (2) DATA It connected them. LUISA I don't understand. BEVERLY The microbrains are like our brain cells. Individually a cell has life -- but not intelligence -- yet when interconnected their combined intelligence is formidable. LUISA So that saline fluid is their circuitry. PICARD And to prevent its loss, they killed Malencon. LUISA (depressed) If we had continued to remove the water... we would have destroyed them all. PICARD Reason enough for anyone to go to war. RIKER'S COM VOICE Captain -- it's happening again! 89 INT. MAIN BRIDGE (OPTICAL) PULL BACK from Main Viewer to SEE the recently dormant GOLF BALL starting to GLOW again. The GLOW is STEADY and POWERFUL. WE ALSO SEE A QUIVERING of the surface. But then the entire image is SHROUDED in LIGHT, OBSCURING OUR VIEW. The bell jar suddenly RUPTURES. The LIGHT DIMINISHES. Everyone is at their stations. Luisa, Bensen and Mandl are also present. RIKER If this keeps up, that thing will tear the Enterprise apart! STAR TREK: "Home Soil" - 12/2/87 - ACT FIVE 50. 89 CONTINUED: DATA Captain -- sensors indicate the microbrain expends a tremendous amount of energy during its reproduction cycle. Yet, there is no discernible power drain from our own systems. PICARD Then what's feeding the damn thing!? GEORDI Data and I found traces of cadmium salts. Cadmium is a conduit for converting infra-red into electricity. PICARD Meaning? DATA Meaning the microbrains might be photoelectric. PICARD Okay, let's see if darkness will neutralize them. Kill the lights in the lab, Mr. La Forge. We can at least do that. Geordi tries, but to no avail. GEORDI Sorry, Captain, can't do it by remote. PICARD Number One... He's already dashing to the turbolift. RIKER On my way. Riker EXITS. Luisa, eyes on the Main Viewer, moves close to Picard. As much to herself as to him: STAR TREK: "Home Soil" - 12/2/87 - ACT FIVE 51. 89 CONTINUED: (2) LUISA (seeing it all now) The creatures must have evolved at that narrow layer where the light got through the sand to the water... Drop the water a centimeter below the light penetration level and they starve. 90 INT. CORRIDOR - OUTSIDE MEDICAL LAB as Riker ARRIVES. He opens a wall panel near the door, finds the right switches. RIKER (into com) Kill lab lights -- now! 91 INT. LAB - SIMULTANEOUSLY The golf ball-sized microbrain FLICKERS SLIGHTLY. The LIGHTS GO OUT. In the resulting DARKNESS, all WE CAN SEE is the PULSATING WHITE GLOW of the microbrain. 92 INT. MAIN BRIDGE All eyes on the Main Viewer. A beat, and: TASHA It's slowing down. 93 ANGLE - MAIN VIEWER (OPTICAL) The PULSING SLOWS. And seems to get DIMMER at the same time. GEORDI (O.S.) Getting dimmer, too. Then, a surprise. SOUND from TRANSLATOR. TRANSLATOR VOICE We copy fine now... more light please... STAR TREK: "Home Soil" - 12/2/87 - ACT FIVE 52. 94 BACK TO SCENE favoring Picard as. TRANSLATOR VOICE Darkness death terrible. Go home to warm sand... (finally) War over. Picard allows himself a smile, his first in a long time. PICARD We are happy to agree with you. DISSOLVE TO: 95 INT. CORRIDOR - OUTSIDE MEDICAL LAB Riker looks into the darkened lab through the open doorway. 96 INT. MEDICAL LAB Riker ENTERS in the DIM LIGHT. RIKER Riker to Transporter Chief. Pick up the coordinates of the bell jar in the Medical Lab for return to Velara III. TRANSPORTER CHIEF'S COM VOICE ... Coordinates entered, sir. RIKER Riker to bridge. Captain, we're ready to beam it back to the planet. 97 INT. MAIN BRIDGE Picard, Data, Troi, Tasha, Geordi, Worf and Wesley are at their stations. DATA I wish we were able to learn more about them. STAR TREK: "Home Soil" - 12/2/87 - ACT FIVE 53. 97 CONTINUED: PICARD In time, Mr. Data. When we're better prepared. TROI (to microbrain) Our apologies. PICARD And our respect. (then) Lieutenant Yar... TASHA Coordinates set, sir. PICARD Energize! The microbrain DEMATERIALIZES. As all watch: PICARD (V.O.) Captain's log, stardate 41464.2. Declaring indefinite quarantine for the Velara System... 98 EXT. SPACE - ENTERPRISE (OPTICAL) in orbit. PICARD (V.O.) (continuing) ... Returning to starbase with surviving Terraformers. And then she's GONE. FADE OUT: END OF ACT FIVE THE END STAR TREK: THE NEXT GENERATION "When the Bough Breaks" #40271-118 Written by Hannah Louise Shearer Directed by Kim Manners THE WRITING CREDITS MAY NOT BE FINAL AND SHOULD NOT BE USED FOR PUBLICITY OR ADVERTISING PURPOSES WITHOUT FIRST CHECKING WITH THE TELEVISION LEGAL DEPARTMENT. Copyright 1987 Paramount Pictures Corporation. All Rights Reserved. This script is not for publication or reproduction. No one is authorized to dispose of same. If lost or destroyed, please notify the Script Department. 2ND. REV. FINAL DRAFT DECEMBER 11, 1987 STAR TREK: "When the Bough... " - 12/11/87 - CAST STAR TREK: THE NEXT GENERATION "When the Bough Breaks" CAST PICARD ALDEANS RIKER RASHELLA BEVERLY RADUE DATA DUANA TROI ACCOLAN TASHA LEDA WORF MELIAN GEORDI WESLEY Non-Speaking GAREN COUPLE HARRY THREE ADULTS DR. BERNARD TOYA Voice-Over ALEXANDRA CUSTODIAN'S VOICE KATIE Non-Speaking ROSE TARA MASON CREWMEMBERS PARENTS CLASSMATES Voice-Over COMPUTER VOICE STAR TREK: "When the Bough... " - 12/10/87 - SETS STAR TREK: THE NEXT GENERATION "When the Bough Breaks" SETS INTERIORS EXTERIORS USS ENTERPRISE USS ENTERPRISE CORRIDORS MAIN BRIDGE PLANET - ALDEA CLASSROOM FAMILY QUARTERS KATIE'S BEDROOM (CORNER OF) OBSERVATION LOUNGE TURBOLIFT BEVERLY'S OFFICE TRANSPORTER ROOM PLANET - ALDEA FIRST UNIT CHAMBER RASHELLA'S QUARTERS FIRST UNIT CHAMBER FOYER TELEPORT ARCH COMPUTER (CUSTODIAN) ROOM ARTISTS' UNIT WESLEY'S ROOM MELIAN'S MUSIC ROOM KATIE'S QUARTERS CORRIDORS POWER ROOM STAR TREK: "When the Bough... " - 12/11/87 - TEASER 1. STAR TREK: THE NEXT GENERATION "When the Bough Breaks" TEASER FADE IN: 1 INT. ENTERPRISE - CORRIDOR Riker ENTERS the corridor as he is PAGED. COMPUTER VOICE Commander Riker, report to the bridge. RIKER On the way. 2 INT. ANOTHER CORRIDOR as Riker HURRIES to the turbolift. HARRY, a smallish ten-year-old boy, runs down the corridor, head down, colliding with Riker. RIKER What's your hurry, Harry? Harry looks up at him, not believing what he's done. HARRY Oops. Sorry, Commander. I was, um, just... DR. BERNARD Harry! Harry's father, HARRY BERNARD, SR., APPEARS and is furious with his son. DR. BERNARD I'm sorry if he bothered you. RIKER No bother, Doctor Bernard. Riker limps slightly as he walks toward the turbolift. HARRY I'm not going back. I hate that teacher. And I hate calculus. STAR TREK: "When the Bough... " - 12/11/87 - TEASER 2. 2 CONTINUED: DR. BERNARD Everyone needs an understanding of basic calculus, whether they like it or not. HARRY Why? Riker REACTS to Harry's question with a smile. 3 RIKER'S POV From inside the turbolift, Riker watches Dr. Bernard take his son by the hand and lead him back down the corridor as the turbolift doors CLOSE. 4 INT. MAIN BRIDGE Riker LIMPS OFF the turbolift. PICARD is at the Aft Station. The other CREWMEMBERS are at their positions. BEVERLY is also at the Aft Station. BEVERLY You're limping. RIKER A small run-in with an aspiring sprinter. PICARD Ah, Number One. RIKER A problem, Captain? PICARD A curiosity. For the past several hours we have been tracking faint energy readings in an attempt to locate the source. It's been like following a trail of bread crumbs. Riker steps over to the Aft Station. PICARD (continuing) The path lead here and stopped -- which is what I knew would interest you. STAR TREK: "When the Bough... " - 12/11/87 - TEASER 3. 4 CONTINUED: RIKER (to Geordi) What's our position? GEORDI The Epsilon Mynos system. RIKER (with a look of surprise) Really? Thank you, Captain; you're right... I wouldn't miss this for anything. TASHA What's so interesting about this system? RIKER Aldea. Tasha still doesn't get the point. RIKER (continuing; to Tasha) Tasha -- I'm surprised. You mean you've never heard the stories about Aldea? A wonderous mythical world -- like Atlantis on ancient earth... or Neinman on Xerxes Seven... with an advanced culture, centuries old. Self-contained, peaceful, with incredible technical sophistication which provided for every citizen's daily needs, allowing them to devote themselves to culture and art, which was beautiful beyond compare and valued beyond price. TASHA Where is it supposed to be? RIKER Ahh -- that is the myth -- somehow -- so the legend goes -- the Aldeans were able to cloak their planet in darkness and go unseen by marauders and other hostile passersby who might rob and plunder. STAR TREK: "When the Bough... " - 12/11/87 - TEASER 4. 4 CONTINUED: (2) Tasha LAUGHS. TASHA A wonderful fairy tale. DATA Scanners still show nothing, sir. Troi is concentrating, puzzled. TROI Scanners may show nothing, Captain, but I am sensing something very strong. (a beat) Thousands of minds, sir. 5 VARIOUS SHOTS OF THE CREW REACTING with interest and curiosity. PICARD Where? TROI Very close. 6 BACK TO SHOT PICARD All stop. GEORDI Answering all stop. PICARD Anything? WORF Captain, I am recording a distortion in quadrant one, mark nine-zero. PICARD On screen. 7 INT. MAIN BRIDGE - MAIN VIEWER (OPTICAL) There is nothing specifically visible on the Main Viewer, except a SLIGHT BLURRING in the center. STAR TREK: "When the Bough... " - 12/11/87 - TEASER 5. 8 REACTIONS as the crew puzzles over the unusual effect. PICARD Shields and deflectors up. TASHA Aye, sir. 9 BACK TO SHOT (OPTICAL) Suddenly, with a great, low-decibel NOISE like BLANKETED THUNDER, which draws everyone's attention, a huge planet begins to APPEAR on the viewer, clearing until it's visible. It is a LIGHT GREEN, peaceful and inviting, necklaced with a LIGHT FILM. Everyone stands amazed, in awe. RIKER (almost breathless) Aldea, Captain... It has to be. FADE OUT. END OF TEASER STAR TREK: "When the Bough... " - 12/11/87 - ACT ONE 6. ACT ONE FADE IN: 10 EXT. SPACE - THE ENTERPRISE (OPTICAL) as she maintains orbit around Aldea. PICARD (V.O.) Captain's log, stardate 41509.1. Either by chance or intent, we've been led to the mythical planet of Aldea, which appeared out of nowhere, hidden behind a sophisticated shielding device. 11 INT. MAIN BRIDGE (OPTICAL) Everyone is at stations. DATA Captain, the sensors indicate that the shield is electromagnetic. A complicated light refracting mechanism. PICARD A cloaking device. DATA Yes, sir. GEORDI To hide an entire planet it's gotta be pretty sophisticated. Picard, Riker and Troi watch the planet. WORF (from Aft Station) We're being scanned, sir. PICARD Let's let them know our peaceful intent. Open hailing frequencies, Lieutenant Yar. STAR TREK: "When the Bough... " - 12/11/87 - ACT ONE 7. 11 CONTINUED: Before Tasha can comply, a WOMAN'S IMAGE MATERIALIZES on the viewscreen, startling everyone. RASHELLA, a melancholy beauty with almost translucent skin, is shrouded in DIM LIGHT. She emanates a quiet tensile strength, her body covered by the simplest utilitarian clothes. RASHELLA I'm Rashella. Welcome to Aldea. PICARD I am Captain Jean-Luc Picard of the USS Enterprise. We come in peace. RASHELLA We know. PICARD We've heard the stories about Aldea, but frankly never thought they could possibly be true. RASHELLA (laughing) Our shield has confused outsiders for millennia, Captain. PICARD A very long time to have that kind of technology. Why are you revealing yourself now? RASHELLA We're eager to meet in person to discuss that, and other subjects of mutual interest. PICARD We're ready anytime. RASHELLA Excellent! Instantly, THREE ALDEANS MATERIALIZE on the bridge. The crew is stunned. Rashella; GAREN, a large fierce-looking man; and behind them, RADUE, pale, older, stately-looking, with great authority and kindly eyes, and a squint at the brightness of the bridge. They carry baskets filled with fruits and flowers. STAR TREK: "When the Bough... " - 12/11/87 - ACT ONE 8. 12 ANOTHER ANGLE (OPTICAL) REACTIONS from the bridge personnel. All are taken aback. RASHELLA (reacting to their astonishment) Our arrival seems to have startled you. RADUE We mean no harm. PICARD It was a little sudden RADUE I'm Radue, First Appointee of Aldea. PICARD Welcome aboard. BEVERLY Captain, they haven't been through decontamination. Picard waves her off. PICARD It's all right. (to the Aldeans) Our medical doctor is concerned you didn't go through our regular transporting procedure. RASHELLA You couldn't transport us. The only way through our shield is our way, Captain. Our cloaking device may be off, but our shield is operating. We've brought you small tokens of welcome. She hands Picard a basket of flowers and bows her head to him slightly, then gestures to Garen, who offers his basket of fruit to Tasha. RADUE And our personal invitation to a celebration on Aldea. PICARD We'd be delighted. Number One, assemble your away team. STAR TREK: "When the Bough... " - 12/11/87 - ACT ONE 9. 12 CONTINUED: RADUE We will prepare for your arrival, Commander Riker. RIKER How did you know... RADUE ... your name? We've been monitoring your ship's communications. We must return now to Aldea. Our eyes are very sensitive to bright light. Rashella, Garen. They use their arm devices and the three DISAPPEAR from the bridge. Picard looks at Troi and Riker. PICARD Amazing. Only to exist in mythology and suddenly they're here, right in front of us. Number One? RIKER Now you know who placed the bread crumbs. We're not here by accident. PICARD Counselor? What do you sense? TROI Only the obvious. They want something from us. RADUE'S COM VOICE Commander Riker, is your party ready? The away team, not as normally constituted, DISAPPEARS off the bridge. It includes only Riker, Troi and Beverly, selected by the Aldeans. Picard looks around at who is missing. PICARD Interesting choices. 13 INT. ALDEA - FIRST UNIT CHAMBER (OPTICAL) The away team MATERIALIZES in a spartan, white-walled room with ancient hanging tapestries. STAR TREK: "When the Bough... " - 12/11/87 - ACT ONE 10. 13 CONTINUED: (From now on, throughout the script, every room on Aldea has a Teleporting Arch which allows the Aldeans to move from place to place on their planet simply by stepping in and identifying their destination.) Rashella, Radue and DUANA, an older woman who is very pale and slight, greet them. RADUE I hope Duana and I know how to greet you properly, Commander. "May your light shine through the ages." Radue's hand begins to shake uncontrollably. RADUE (continuing) My apologies. Age has no respect for the body. Beverly and Troi exchange worried glances. 14 INT. MAIN BRIDGE (OPTICAL) WESLEY has joined Picard on the bridge. WESLEY How do they cloak the planet? DATA The theory is simple. The shield bends light rays around the planet's contour -- similar to the Romulan cloaking device -- but the implementation is very difficult. A BEAM OF ENERGY PENETRATES the bridge at that moment. It searches until it finds Wesley, then SURROUNDS him. He can't move away from it. He closes his eyes and relaxes into it. PICARD Wesley! GEORDI Sir, the energy beam is originating from Aldea. PICARD Shields up. La Forge, contact Commander Riker. Worf, check all other decks. STAR TREK: "When the Bough... " - 12/11/87 - ACT ONE 11. 14 CONTINUED: DATA Shields inoperable, sir. All decks are being probed in a methodical pattern. PICARD All decks? Everything? The entire ship? DATA Aye, sir! GEORDI Captain, I can't get through to Commander Riker. We're being blocked. The ENERGY BEAM STOPS as suddenly as it appeared. Wesley shakes his head, as if to brush it off. PICARD Are you all right, Wesley? WESLEY (nodding) It was scary at first, but I really didn't feel anything. WORF Sir, similar incidents, all decks, (surprised) but only with the children. 15 INT. ALDEA - FIRST UNIT CHAMBER (OPTICAL) The hosts are getting down to business as they all sit around a table laden with food. RADUE Yes, Commander, we are an ancient power. But we've suffered for it. Our history is littered with the deaths of those people who craved more and more things. Nothing was ever enough. So, we've evolved a very simple way of living: for whatever is taken, something is given in return. RIKER It seems an equitable code. STAR TREK: "When the Bough... " - 12/11/87 - ACT ONE 12. 15 CONTINUED: RADUE It's given us peace. Unfortunately, there are very few of us left to enjoy it. TROI Why? RADUE That is some of what we wish to discuss. We need help from the Federation to rebuild our heritage... we need a younger generation, strong and healthy, following in the Aldean traditions. RIKER I don't understand. How can the Federation help influence your children in your traditions? RADUE Because we have no children, Commander. Rashella was the last child born on this planet. Rashella watches the away team for its reaction. They're shocked. BEVERLY And your medical community can do nothing? RASHELLA They've tried, Doctor Crusher. And failed. BEVERLY Perhaps we can help... Troi senses something ominous and makes a signal to Riker who quickly and correctly interprets it. RIKER Radue, exactly why have we been invited to Aldea? RADUE We propose a trade. One which will solve our problem and give something back to the Federation. STAR TREK: "When the Bough... " - 12/11/87 - ACT ONE 13. 15 CONTINUED: (2) RIKER And the nature of this trade? RADUE We need some of your children. In payment, we will give you the kind of knowledge which would take you centuries to acquire. 16 REACTIONS from Riker, Beverly and Troi. RIKER That might be acceptable to some other races, but humans are unusually attached to their own offspring. 17 BACK TO SHOT RIKER We sympathize with your situation, Radue. But what you ask is not possible. RADUE And that's your final answer? RIKER It's my only answer. If we can be of help in some other way... RADUE I am sorry you are intransigent. Radue nods at Rashella and touches his arm band. The three Enterprise officers are immediately GONE from the room. 18 INT. MAIN BRIDGE (OPTICAL) Picard is surprised when the away team abruptly APPEARS on the bridge. As Wesley turns in reaction, a BEAM ENGULFS him and he DISAPPEARS from the bridge. Beverly's anguished face is stunned as she reaches out to the empty place where he was standing. BEVERLY Wes! STAR TREK: "When the Bough... " - 12/11/87 - ACT ONE 14. 19 INT. CLASSROOM (OPTICAL) HARRY BERNARD DISAPPEARS in front of his classmates. One by one, TWO other CHILDREN DISAPPEAR: ROSE and TARA, eight-year olds. 20 INT. CORRIDOR (OPTICAL) MASON, a nine-year old, walking with his parents, DISAPPEARS. 21 INT. FAMILY QUARTERS (OPTICAL) ALEXANDRA, carrying a stick-em toy in one hand, DISAPPEARS in front of TOYA, her terrified mother. 22 INT. CORNER OF KATIE'S BEDROOM (OPTICAL) where KATIE, a twelve-year-old, playing something that looks like a violin, VANISHES. The instrument she was holding FALLS to the floor. 23 INT. MAIN BRIDGE Picard sits. Beverly is next to him, like a statue, gripping the chair. WORF Saucer Section reports six more children are gone. RIKER It's the children. That's why we've been brought here. That's what they wanted. PICARD And that's what they have. FADE OUT: END OF ACT ONE STAR TREK: "When the Bough... " - 12/11/87 - ACT TWO 15. ACT TWO FADE IN: 24 INT. MAIN BRIDGE (OPTICAL) The crew is in turmoil. PICARD Status! TASHA Aldean shields still up. Hailing frequencies open. No response. PICARD Keep trying, Lieutenant. Counselor, gather the parents. TROI They'll need to talk to you as well, Captain. Radue's image APPEARS on the Viewscreen. RADUE Captain, your children are with us. Picard fighting his outrage. PICARD ... Go on. RADUE My word of honor... no harm will ever come to them. PICARD Harm has already been done. RADUE Captain, let us begin discussions regarding appropriate compensation. PICARD (angrily) Compensation! You steal our children -- from their classrooms -- their bedrooms -- and you talk about compensation. Return them... now! STAR TREK: "When the Bough... " - 12/11/87 - ACT TWO 16. 24 CONTINUED: RADUE We will continue this discussion when you've calmed down. The viewscreen GOES BLACK. PICARD I shouldn't have lost my temper. He and Beverly exchange looks. Their faces are tight. 25 INT. ALDEA - FIRST UNIT CHAMBER Wesley stands in the middle of the room with most of the children huddled around him. He watches Harry wander around, looking at the tapestries on the wall, while Alexandra toddles aimlessly. KATIE Wesley, I'm frightened. WESLEY I know. We all are, but it's going to be all right. Everyone knows where we are. No one is going to hurt you. I promise. (then to the toddler) Alexandra, don't go too far! KATIE She's not afraid of anything. Harry feels the texture of a magnificent wall-hanging. WESLEY (continuing) Harry, don't touch that! HARRY I'm not gonna hurt it. WESLEY I know that. But maybe they don't. All the children move closer together. KATIE Who? Wesley runs after Alexandra. He holds onto her hand. STAR TREK: "When the Bough... " - 12/11/87 - ACT TWO 17. 25 CONTINUED: WESLEY I don't know who. HARRY Why are we here? WESLEY I don't know that either. The children suddenly realize there is someone watching them. Radue SWEEPS majestically INTO the room, Rashella and Duana FOLLOWING. He stares at the children. Wesley steps forward in front of the group and stares back at Radue. RADUE Greetings, Wesley Crusher. WESLEY How did you know my name? (realization) Oh, through that energy beam. RADUE Excellent analysis. The Custodian indicated you would be the leader. WESLEY The Custodian -- who is the Custodian? RADUE The Custodian is not a person. RASHELLA We have brought you to Aldea as our guests. We'll provide anything you need or want. WESLEY We want to go home. RADUE Wesley, all of you have been chosen because you are special. STAR TREK: "When the Bough... " - 12/11/87 - ACT TWO 18. 25 CONTINUED: (2) DUANA Children, we are starting on a wonderful adventure. RADUE Exactly... Just ask for anything you want, and you shall have it. Radue WHISKS OUT of the room, leaving the children more confused than they were before. Alexandra follows him to the door and waves. ALEXANDRA Bye-bye. Rashella looks down at this creature and can't help but smile. She reaches out her hand and Alexandra smiles and takes it. 26 INT. OBSERVATION LOUNGE Picard stands in front of a table where the children's tense, hostile parents sit with Troi. TOYA stands defiantly, like an Amazon facing the only enemy she can find. TOYA What happened to Alexandra and the other children, Captain? How are you getting them back? Beverly gently rebukes Toya. BEVERLY Toya, sit down... You're reacting out of fear. (gently) We all knew what the risks were when we signed on. And that's the choice we made. Captain Picard will do everything possible to bring our children back. Picard acknowledges Beverly's support. STAR TREK: "When the Bough... " - 12/11/87 - ACT TWO 19. 26 CONTINUED: PICARD The Aldeans are anxious to discuss "compensation." That will buy us time. I've asked Doctor Crusher to be involved in the negotiations as your representative. The parents MURMUR. Picard looks around the table at his frightened personnel. DR. BERNARD Why were these specific children taken? PICARD We can't be sure. We do know the Aldeans can't have children of their own. DR. BERNARD Then they won't let them go easily. PICARD I won't insult you by pretending it will be easy. I can only say the Enterprise will not leave them behind. Be assured of that. DR. BERNARD Can we talk with our children? Give them some reassurance. Let them know that we are here, and that they will be safe. PICARD I will do my best to arrange it. Toya and the others do their best to believe Picard. DR. BERNARD The last time I saw him I yelled at him. They all understand his pain. 27 INT. ALDEA - RASHELLA'S QUARTERS A spartan area, seemingly empty. Until Alexandra pops her head around a corner. Rashella JUMPS OUT of hiding. STAR TREK: "When the Bough... " - 12/11/87 - ACT TWO 20. 27 CONTINUED: RASHELLA There you are! Alexandra GIGGLES and pretends to run away, letting Rashella catch her. RASHELLA (continuing) I have you now! 28 INT. MAIN BRIDGE Picard ENTERS the bridge from the lounge. PICARD Any response from Aldea, Lieutenant Yar? TASHA Not yet, sir. RIKER Captain, Data has found something interesting. The Aldean shield gives evidence of sporadic fluctuations, weakening its structure in isolated sections. PICARD You're saying there are holes in their defense system? RIKER In essence, yes. It is surprising after all these eons that the Aldeans' use of their technology is not perfect. One would assume they would be aware of the weakness and repair it. PICARD Can we beam down an away team through one of these so-called holes? RIKER It is a possibility. It would have to be perfectly timed -- and there are no guarantees. STAR TREK: "When the Bough... " - 12/11/87 - ACT TWO 21. 28 CONTINUED: DATA We may be more successful in deciphering the code they use to transport through the magnetic shield. PICARD Can you do that? DATA Eventually, sir. I am working on it now but the number of permutations is almost endless. PICARD Keep trying. (turning to Riker) Number One, while he's doing that, you find a way of getting through one of those holes because one way or the other we have to get an away team on that planet, locate the power source of that shield and neutralize it. RIKER You're certain they'll negotiate? PICARD Oh, they'll negotiate, Number One. Or call it that. They took what they wanted, now they'll rationalize it by throwing us some sort of bone. Data is puzzled by this. DATA A bone, sir? In exchange for the children? Picard just looks at him. DATA (continuing) Oh. A metaphor. RIKER And when we don't accept their offer? STAR TREK: "When the Bough... " - 12/11/87 - ACT TWO 22. 28 CONTINUED: (2) PICARD The minute they believe we will accept no compensation for the children, they will end all discussion and disappear behind their shield... locking us out and the children in -- forever. That's why I have to keep them talking. 29 INT. ALDEA - FIRST UNIT CHAMBER FOYER Wesley, Katie and Harry are sitting in the hallway, waiting. Tara COMES OUT of the room with an ALDEAN COUPLE. The woman is holding Tara's hand. Tara looks back at the boys, pleadingly. WESLEY Excuse me, sir, where are you taking Tara? They continue walking down the hall, leaving Wesley behind. Harry turns accusingly to Wesley. HARRY What's happening? I thought you said the captain was going to rescue us! WESLEY He will. It just might take him a little while. Radue opens the door and gestures the boys to enter. They hesitate. RADUE Come in. 30 INT. ALDEA - FIRST UNIT CHAMBER THREE other ADULT ALDEANS are waiting inside. They are all extremely pale and thin. RADUE Don't be alarmed. The other children have been assigned to their units. STAR TREK: "When the Bough... " - 12/11/87 - ACT TWO 23. 30 CONTINUED: WESLEY Units? RADUE A unit is a group where people of similar talents and interests live together. WESLEY Like a family. RADUE Yes, you could call it that. WESLEY We already have families. Radue gently pulls Harry forward. Harry nervously shuffles his feet. WESLEY (continuing) Does Captain Picard know what you are doing? RADUE We are keeping nothing from him. Accolan and Leda can barely control their happiness as they close in on Harry. LEDA We have been waiting for you so long, Harry. We are artists, just like you. HARRY I'm not an artist. ACCOLAN You will be. And a great one. LEDA This way, Harry. 31 ANGLE ON TELEPORT ARCH (OPTICAL) Accolan and Leda lead Harry into the Arch. LEDA Unit B -- three seven five. And the three DISAPPEAR. STAR TREK: "When the Bough... " - 12/11/87 - ACT TWO 24. 32 BACK TO SHOT RADUE Katie. Katie steps forward to meet MELIAN, a middle-aged Aldean, very distinguished looking. Melian reaches out his arthritic, crippled hand to clasp Katie's. MELIAN I am honored. KATIE Thank you. RADUE Melian is the foremost musician on Aldea. MELIAN Music speaks its own language... I know we'll have much to learn from each other. Katie looks at Wesley. MELIAN (continuing) Don't worry, Katie. You'll be seeing Wesley soon. He puts his arm around Katie and takes her OUT OF FRAME. Wesley stands alone, almost defiant. He stares at Radue, forcing him to speak first. RADUE We're the only ones left, Wesley. Does that tell you something? WESLEY Do you want me to guess? DUANE No. You'll be staying with Radue and me. As First Unit we require someone with innate leadership ability -- and a great mind. You have both. We need you, Wesley. WESLEY What about me? Don't I have a say in this? STAR TREK: "When the Bough... " - 12/11/87 - ACT TWO 25. 32 CONTINUED: RADUE Wesley, sometimes things happen which we just must accept. You and the other children are now members of this society. That will not change. It's up to you to make the transition as easy as possible for the others. You are their leader. It's your duty. Help them accept it -- because nothing you, or those on the starship can do will change it. Because like you, we also have no choice. DUANA We'll do our best to see you're happy here. And I promise you one thing: the secrets of Aldea's power will one day be yours. Before he can answer, Alexandra BURSTS INTO the room, chased by Rashella, who's a little breathless. RADUE Where have you been Rashella? Zena and Aran are waiting to take Alexandra. RASHELLA No. Radue shows surprise at her rebellion. RADUE No? I told you... RASHELLA No, Radue. They can't have her. Rashella picks Alexandra up and holds her tightly. RASHELLA (continuing) I will never let her go. FADE OUT. END OF ACT TWO STAR TREK: "When the Bough... " - 12/11/87 - ACT THREE 26. ACT THREE FADE IN: 33 EXT. SPACE - ENTERPRISE (OPTICAL) still in orbit around Aldea. PICARD (V.O.) Captain's log, supplemental. We remain in orbit around Aldea. It's becoming all too evident that talk will not effect the return of our children. We must neutralize the Aldean shield. Until then we are helpless. 34 INT. MAIN BRIDGE (OPTICAL) The crew is at their regular posts. TASHA Sir, Radue is hailing us. Radue APPEARS on the Main Viewer. RADUE Captain Picard. PICARD Doctor Crusher and I are ready, Radue. RADUE Are you ill, Captain? PICARD No. Doctor Crusher is a Staff Officer, Radue. Starfleet Regulation 6.57 requires at least two staff officers to be present during any treaty or contract negotiations. RADUE Very well. Radue's image DISAPPEARS from the Viewscreen. RIKER Not much on pleasantries, is he? STAR TREK: "When the Bough... " - 12/11/87 - ACT THREE 27. 34 CONTINUED: DATA I am not aware of Regulation 6.57, sir. PICARD Neither am I, Data. DATA Oh. I see. PICARD Doctor Crusher, report to the bridge... Now we'll see what they have in mind. 35 INT. ALDEA - COMPUTER (CUSTODIAN) ROOM (OPTICAL) Duana and Wesley APPEAR in the Teleporting Arch, which has a DISTINCTIVE SOUND. The room is very simple. It doesn't look as advanced as the Enterprise's computer. Wesley looks around, unimpressed. He notices a massive door at the end of the room that looks as though it's never been opened. DUANA Over here, Wesley. Wesley moves to a table in the center of the room. Duana speaks into a panel. DUANA (continuing) Custodian, Wesley Crusher's voice will be entered into the authorized file -- for Third Level clearance. CUSTODIAN VOICE Proceed, Duana. Wesley listens to the sounds and speed of the Custodian. DUANA Announce yourself to the Custodian. WESLEY Hello, Custodian. I'm Wesley Crusher. STAR TREK: "When the Bough... " - 12/11/87 - ACT THREE 28. 35 CONTINUED: CUSTODIAN VOICE Hello, Wesley. Your voice will now activate Third Level clearance. WESLEY Thank you. What does that mean? CUSTODIAN VOICE You may ask any questions you wish. WESLEY Thank you. Duana, what does the Custodian do? DUANA It frees us from all burden. It takes care of all our needs. It regulates our lives. WESLEY Who built it? DUANA The Progenitors. WESLEY When? DUANA Before my time. Centuries ago. WESLEY ... What's its power source? DUANA Wesley, why is that important? It does what we ask it. It always has. What difference does it make how it works? WESLEY If you don't know how it works, how can you repair it? DUANA (not understanding the concept) Why would we want to repair it? STAR TREK: "When the Bough... " - 12/11/87 - ACT THREE 29. 35 CONTINUED: (2) WESLEY From time to time, every computer -- I mean Custodian -- requires maintainance. DUANA (laughing) Wesley, Radue is right. You ask questions I can't answer. Ask the Custodian instead. Wesley leans towards the terminal. WESLEY Custodian, can you show me where Harry is? CUSTODIAN VOICE Yes. WESLEY Show me Harry. A small screen ACTIVATES in the center of the console. Wesley watches: 36 INT. ALDEA - ARTISTS' UNIT A workshop that's an artist's dream. Tools of every kind, small and large, ancient and modern. Leda is showing Harry the use of an unusual shaped wood-sculpting tool. Harry watches her work with awe. She hands him the tool, and he repeats what she did with only a little difficulty. Leda's pleasure shows in her face. She pats Harry on the shoulder as he continues working. He looks up at her happily. HARRY I never did this before. It's fun. 37 INT. ALDEA - CUSTODIAN ROOM (OPTICAL) Harry and Leda are still ON THE SCREEN. WESLEY You are going to make Harry into a sculptor? STAR TREK: "When the Bough... " - 12/11/87 - ACT THREE 30. 37 CONTINUED: DUANA He already is. He has just never been encouraged properly. The tool Leda is giving him will allow him to bring out his visions. WESLEY It will take years for him to learn to do that. DUANA Oh, no. It will happen quite quickly. He looks at her, wonderingly. WESLEY Custodian, show me Alexandra. Wesley watches. 38 INT. ALDEA - RASHELLA'S QUARTERS (OPTICAL) Rashella is demonstrating to Alexandra how to use a Plexiglas-type multidimensional set of blocks designed to enhance her reasoning ability. Rashella is thrilled that Alexandra repeats what she's been shown -- and then some. She pushes some buttons and the SHAPES AND COLORS CHANGE. Alexandra GIGGLES and looks to Rashella for approval. Rashella gives her a tight hug, then nods to Garen to take over. 39 INT. ALDEA - CUSTODIAN ROOM (OPTICAL) Alexandra is still ON THE SCREEN. WESLEY Custodian, show me Jason... DUANA Stop, Custodian. The screen GOES BLANK as the Custodian obeys Duana. DUANA We must work now... there is much to learn. Wesley points to the locked door. STAR TREK: "When the Bough... " - 12/11/87 - ACT THREE 31. 39 CONTINUED: WESLEY What's in there? Duana's eyes dart towards the fortress-like wall. WESLEY It's probably the power source. DUANA I don't know. It's forbidden. The Custodian allows no one in there. There's no one left who's authorized. 40 INT. MAIN BRIDGE (OPTICAL) Beverly and Picard are ready to be transported. PICARD Open hailing frequency, Lieutenant Yar. TASHA Open, sir. Radue APPEARS on the Viewscreen. RADUE Ah, good. You're ready. Beverly and Picard DISAPPEAR from the bridge. 41 INT. ALDEA - FIRST UNIT CHAMBER (OPTICAL) Picard and Beverly MATERIALIZE. Rashella and Radue are waiting. PICARD I want to see the children before we begin. RADUE No. We're here to negotiate for compensation, not to pander to emotions. This way. They follow Radue to the same area where they had their celebration. Radue motions them to be seated. STAR TREK: "When the Bough... " - 12/11/87 - ACT THREE 32. 41 CONTINUED: PICARD Radue, we do not condone your actions. You're attempting to salve your conscience by offering goods in exchange for our children. RADUE Why do you want them back so badly? You can always make more. PICARD We happen to like these particular children. RADUE Humans have great attachment to their offspring. But we're digressing. Returning the children is non-negotiable. RASHELLA I promise you they will have a beautiful life with us. And they'll be father and mother to a new breed born of an ancient culture. BEVERLY What makes you think they'll be able to have children? You can't. RADUE But they will. Our inability to bear children is a genetic dysfunction. It's not contagious. PICARD Radue, we do sympathize. But surely there is a solution which can be mutually satisfactory. RADUE For us, the problem is solved. We are offering you information on areas of the galaxy you don't even know exist. What more can we offer? What more would you want? STAR TREK: "When the Bough... " - 12/11/87 - ACT THREE 33. 41 CONTINUED: (2) Picard pretends to be impressed. He waits a moment before replying. PICARD A significant beginning, I think. But first I must ask again that Doctor Crusher be allowed to speak with her son before we continue. RADUE You are a very stubborn people. Ah, well, that can be a positive trait. You may see him. 42 INT. ALDEA - WESLEY'S ROOM Duana is at the door as Beverly is BROUGHT IN to see Wesley. WESLEY Mom! They hug. WESLEY (continuing) I knew the captain would get us home. Beverly braces herself to tell him. BEVERLY Not yet, Wes. Wesley tries to accept this like a man. WESLEY Oh. I thought... never mind. BEVERLY Are you okay? And the others? WESLEY Okay, really okay. Everyone's been assigned their own units... you know, like families. We're being treated, well, almost like gods. BEVERLY Don't let it go to your head. STAR TREK: "When the Bough... " - 12/11/87 - ACT THREE 34. 42 CONTINUED: WESLEY (lightly) I won't. Beverly covers her surreptitious tricorder reading of Wesley -- and of Duana -- with small talk. BEVERLY So, what have you been doing? WESLEY I'm learning a lot. They have a computer which they call the Custodian. It controls everything. (lowers his voice) The captain should know this. All their defense systems, the city's environment, everything. And it's all voice command. So simple. But the amazing thing is the Aldeans don't know how it works. They know how to talk to it, but they don't even know what its power source is, and they didn't do the original programming. Wesley looks down at the floor. WESLEY (continuing; normal voice) They said that later on, when I'm really an Aldean, I'll know all their secrets. Beverly WHISPERS to him. BEVERLY That won't happen, Wes. I promise I won't let that happen. Duana becomes nervous about all the whispering. DUANA You must leave, Doctor Crusher. Duana escorts Beverly to the door. Beverly looks back at Wesley. STAR TREK: "When the Bough... " - 12/11/87 - ACT THREE 35. 42 CONTINUED: (2) BEVERLY Take care of yourself. WESLEY I will, Mom. 43 INT. ALDEA - FIRST UNIT CHAMBER (OPTICAL) Picard looks at Beverly questioningly when she ENTERS. BEVERLY Wes seems fine. He says the other children are too. Rashella is insulted by their doubt. RASHELLA Of course they're well. RADUE Captain Picard, you have our offer. It is final. Rashella. Rashella touches the instrument on her belt -- and Picard and Beverly DISAPPEAR. 44 INT. MAIN BRIDGE (OPTICAL) Picard and Beverly MATERIALIZE on the bridge. Radue immediately APPEARS on the viewscreen. RADUE Captain, we want you to understand the nature of your choice. A small demonstration of our power... 45 EXT. ALDEA - THE ENTERPRISE (OPTICAL) is PUSHED OUT OF ORBIT by a great BURST OF VISIBLE ENERGY which envelopes the ship. 46 INT. MAIN BRIDGE (OPTICAL) The crewmembers SHUDDER slightly as the Enterprise comes to a quick stop. STAR TREK: "When the Bough... " - 12/11/87 - ACT THREE 36. 46 CONTINUED: PICARD What was that? DATA I believe it was a repulsor beam, sir. PICARD Position report. GEORDI It's unbelievable, sir. According to my calculations, we're three days from Aldea -- at warp nine. RIKER They call that a "small" Demonstration? PICARD Geordi, take us back to Aldea orbit. Warp factor nine. Radue again APPEARS on the viewscreen. RADUE Captain, if you don't accept our terms, the Enterprise will be pushed so far away, by the time you get back, your children will be grandparents. Radue DISAPPEARS from the viewscreen. Picard, Riker and Troi REACT. FADE OUT. END OF ACT THREE STAR TREK: "When the Bough... " - 12/11/87 - ACT FOUR 37. ACT FOUR FADE IN: 47 EXT. SPACE - THE ENTERPRISE (OPTICAL) as she travels back towards Aldea at warp nine. PICARD (V.O.) Captain's log, stardate 41509.45. We are twenty hours away from Aldea, and no closer to a solution. Their deliberate show of force pushed us out of orbit and could have disintegrated the ship. In the face of that power, a direct assault on Aldea would be disastrous. 48 EXT. SPACE - ALDEA (OPTICAL) ESTABLISHING. 49 INT. ALDEA - MELIAN'S MUSIC ROOM As spartan as the rest of the Aldean quarters. Katie holds an instrument awkwardly in her hands, while Melian uses his pain-ridden hands to show Katie how to use it. The instrument is small and circular, about a foot in diameter. There's a pad for the thumb, and for the fingers. It CHANGES COLORS for each different SOUND. MELIAN Now, hold it a little bit more firmly. Katie moves her fingers around. MELIAN (continuing) That's it. Perfect. Now... think. No, think's not right. Feel the notes inside your head. Katie closes her eyes and the instrument SOUNDS A NOTE. Katie's so startled she drops it. KATIE I'm sorry! Did I break it? STAR TREK: "When the Bough... " - 12/11/87 - ACT FOUR 38. 49 CONTINUED: MELIAN No. It's all right. You can't break it. KATIE It did exactly what I thought... I mean, felt. MELIAN Yes. It's a direct expression of the music within. Now we just have to teach you to structure that feeling... Katie takes the instrument back from Melian and looks at it in wonder. Then hands it back. She begins to play. A beautiful, melancholy TUNE. Melian listens - enchanted. She STOPS. MELIAN (continuing) That was beautiful. Now play something happier. KATIE (sadly shaking her head) That's not how I feel. (pause) I don't want to do this anymore. Melian smiles sadly at her. 50 INT. ALDEA - ARTISTS' UNIT (OPTICAL) 50 Accolan is helping Harry with a wood carving. Harry pushes the sculpting tool along the block of wood and a portion of a dolphin is revealed. ACCOLAN You see, Harry, I told you you were going to be an artist. HARRY Are you sure? Did I really do this? ACCOLAN Oh, yes. Your talent has always been there. The sculpting tool is just helping you develop it. It's what you were meant to do. STAR TREK: "When the Bough... " - 12/11/87 - ACT FOUR 39. 50 CONTINUED: HARRY You mean I don't have to do calculus anymore? ACCOLAN You don't have to do anything you don't want to do. What's calculus? HARRY Nothing important. Can I do some more? 51 EXT. SPACE - THE ENTERPRISE (OPTICAL) It COMES out of warp speed. 52 EXT. SPACE - THE ENTERPRISE (OPTICAL) as it ENTERS orbit around Aldea. PICARD Captain's log, supplemental. It has been three days since the Aldeans pushed us away. We have had no contact with Radue since then. 53 INT. MAIN BRIDGE (OPTICAL) The crewmembers are in place. PICARD Lieutenant Yar, open hailing frequencies. TASHA Frequencies open, sir. PICARD Radue, this is Captain Picard. Radue APPEARS on the Main Viewer. RADUE Welcome back, Captain. What have you decided? PICARD There is room for discussion, Radue. STAR TREK: "When the Bough... " - 12/11/87 - ACT FOUR 40. 53 CONTINUED: RADUE We will bring you down when we are ready. Radue DISAPPEARS from the viewscreen. PICARD Data, find a way to defeat that shield. DATA That may be impossible, sir. PICARD Things are impossible, until they're not. DATA Yes, sir. 54 ANGLE ON TURBOLIFT Beverly ENTERS from the turbolift. BEVERLY Captain, here's what I've learned. (a beat) Duana is dying. I have no reason to believe the rest of the Aldeans are any healthier. PICARD We're all dying, Doctor. Can you be more specific? BEVERLY They're suffering from some kind of chromosomal damage. It could be genetic, or environmental. PICARD Then that's why they can't conceive. BEVERLY Yes. It also explains their lack of appetite, their sensitivity to light, and their extreme pallor. STAR TREK: "When the Bough... " - 12/11/87 - ACT FOUR 41. 54 CONTINUED: PICARD An entire civilization that's terminally ill... is it reversible? BEVERLY I won't know until I've found the cause... and you don't need to tell me time is running out. PICARD Good work, Doctor. 55 INT. ALDEA - FIRST UNIT CHAMBER Radue and Duana are trying to coax Wesley to eat. DUANA I thought growing boys are always hungry. WESLEY You didn't eat anything. RADUE We need very little. DUANA I know you miss your family. But you will grow accustomed to us. I promise. I promise you'll be happy. Wesley's clear eyes look at Duana with compassion. WESLEY You can keep me here, but you can't make me want to stay. You'll never be able to make me forget. And I'll never be an Aldean. 56 INT. ALDEA - ARTISTS' UNIT - NIGHT Leda creams her hands with an ointment as Harry bends over a table, putting the finishing touches on his work. ACCOLAN Have the lesions gone? STAR TREK: "When the Bough... " - 12/11/87 - ACT FOUR 42. 56 CONTINUED: LEDA Yes. The medicine worked again. ACCOLAN Good. Come see what Harry's doing. Harry's hands polish the last bit on his creation: a carved dolphin. ACCOLAN (continuing) Beautiful! Harry gives Accolan the finished piece. Accolan touches it, admiring the workmanship. HARRY (surprised) It really turned out well. ACCOLAN It is so graceful and alive. What do you call it? HARRY It's a dolphin. LEDA Dolphin? HARRY You know, it swims in the ocean. Like a fish, only it's not a fish. LEDA Ah. A fish. We used to have them in our oceans. I've never seen one before. HARRY I used to live near the ocean. On Zadar IV. My dad's an oceanographer. He says... never mind. It doesn't matter. Harry turns away, ambivalent. 57 INT. ALDEA - RASHELLA'S QUARTERS - NIGHT She is holding Alexandra, COOING to her. The baby falls asleep in her arms. STAR TREK: "When the Bough... " - 12/11/87 - ACT FOUR 43. 58 INT. BEVERLY'S OFFICE Beverly is feverishly working the computer, trying to make sense out of the disparate information. She shakes her head. BEVERLY No. That doesn't fit the pattern. Give me a list of the appropriate medical literature from the twenty-second century. The computer shows her a list that's very long. BEVERLY (continuing) There's not enough time! She looks at it and rubs her eyes. Picard WALKS INTO the room and sees her. He APPROACHES her carefully and puts his hand on her shoulder. Beverly covers his hand with hers. PICARD Is there anything I can do? BEVERLY You just did, Jean-Luc. Now... I have to get back to work. She turns back to her desk. 59 INT. ALDEA - RASHELLA'S QUARTERS - NIGHT Alexandra is CRYING. ALEXANDRA I want Mommy! Rashella tries to hold and comfort her, but there's no solace. 60 INT. ALDEA - WESLEY'S ROOM - NIGHT (OPTICAL) It's dark. Wesley slips out of his bed and opens the door. There's no one around. He steps into the ARCH. WESLEY (quietly) Custodian's room. STAR TREK: "When the Bough... " - 12/11/87 - ACT FOUR 44. 61 INT. ALDEA - CUSTODIAN ROOM - NIGHT (OPTICAL) Wesley APPEARS in the Arch. The room is empty. Wesley sits at the console. He WHISPERS his instruction. WESLEY (whispers) Custodian, this is Wesley Crusher. CUSTODIAN VOICE (normal level) Proceed, Wesley. Wesley jumps at the sound. WESLEY Show me where all the Enterprise children are in relation to this room. The Custodian FLASHES the children's locations on the screen. Wesley stares at it, memorizing the locations. WESLEY (continuing) Thank you. He moves away from the console, then has second thoughts. WESLEY (continuing) Custodian, what's your instruction set? Wesley is nervous, not sure he's authorized. The Custodian ANSWERS WITH a kind of nonelectronic MUSIC. Wesley doesn't understand, but goes on. WESLEY (continuing) How can I command your attention? Do you have a non-maskable interrupt? CUSTODIAN VOICE Yes. WESLEY What is its address? CUSTODIAN VOICE Zero, twelve, twenty-two, twenty-one, twenty-three, twenty-six. STAR TREK: "When the Bough... " - 12/11/87 - ACT FOUR 45. 61 CONTINUED: WESLEY That doesn't make any sense to me. Wesley's puzzled, but pushes ahead anyway. He takes a deep breath before he asks the really important question. WESLEY (continuing) Custodian, what's in the locked room next to this one? CUSTODIAN VOICE You are not authorized for that information. WESLEY Thank you. Good night. CUSTODIAN VOICE Good night, Wesley. Wesley sits a moment, deep in thought. 62 INT. ALDEA - KATIE'S QUARTERS - NIGHT Katie's asleep. An arm reaches over her and shakes her slightly. Katie opens her eyes, startled. Wesley leans over her, finger to his mouth. He WHISPERS. WESLEY I need your help. I have an idea how we can get home. FADE OUT. END OF ACT FOUR STAR TREK: "When the Bough... " - 12/11/87 - ACT FIVE 46. ACT FIVE FADE IN: 63 INT. ALDEA - WESLEY'S ROOM - EARLY MORNING Welsey, Harry, Alexandria and Katie, are gathered in Wesley's room. Their VOICES LOW. KATIE Why will not talking or eating make them send us home? Wesley patiently tries to explain again. WESLEY It's called "passive resistance." We don't do anything they want us to do and then they won't want us. KATIE Will they get mad at us? WESLEY They won't hurt us. HARRY But, Wes, I do kind of like them. WESLEY So do I, but I don't want to stay here forever. Do you? Harry hesitates. HARRY (thoughtfully) No, but I like working with the wood. WESLEY Harry, we all have to do this together or it won't work. With some reluctance, Harry agrees. HARRY Okay. I'll do it. STAR TREK: "When the Bough... " - 12/11/87 - ACT FIVE 47. 63 CONTINUED: Rashella RUSHES INTO the room. RASHELLA What are you all doing here together? There's no answer. RASHELLA (continuing) What is going on here? Still no answers. She reaches for Alexandra, but Wesley picks up the child and shakes his head "no." RASHELLA (continuing) Garen! Garen RUSHES INTO the room. RASHELLA (continuing) Take the children back to their units. 64 INT. ENTERPRISE - MAIN BRIDGE Beverly STEPS OFF the turbolift. She's exhausted. BEVERLY The Aldeans are suffering from a form of radiation poisoning. PICARD And that's what's made the Aldeans sterile? BEVERLY Yes. PICARD Is it reversible? BEVERLY Of course. DATA Captain, these permutations are going to take a very long time. STAR TREK: "When the Bough... " - 12/11/87 - ACT FIVE 48. 64 CONTINUED: PICARD How long? DATA Weeks. RIKER Captain, there is another option. We have identified a weakness in the shield. GEORDI But it's not constant. WORF It's a hole. GEORDI It's not a hole as much as it is a fluctuation. RIKER Still, there is a chance. Captain, if we can time it exactly -- I think we can beam a team through the hole and onto the planet. PICARD Then why can't we beam the children up through the hole? RIKER The timing would be more difficult, and the risk greater. PICARD What are you suggesting, Number One? RIKER Beam through the hole. Locate the source of the shield, and knock it out. PICARD I'll try to delay the Aldeans until you're ready. STAR TREK: "When the Bough... " - 12/11/87 - ACT FIVE 49. 65 INT. ALDEA - WESLEY'S ROOM The children sit in silence. Leda COMES IN with a tray of food for them. LEDA Will you at least eat? They do not answer. She sets the tray down and LEAVES the room. Alexandra wanders over to the food and looks at it. Wesley knows that she's hungry. He goes to Alexandra and kneels down. WESLEY I know you're hungry. We all are, but Alexandra, we are not going to eat anything. It's our way of telling them that we want to go home. Do you understand? The little girl nods. Wesley puts his arm around her. Harry comes over, picks up the tray and puts it outside the door. Wesley acknowledges the act with a smile. 66 INT. - MAIN BRIDGE (OPTICAL) Radue APPEARS on the viewscreen. RADUE Captain Picard. You may come down now to conclude our discussion, or your ship may leave. It is your choice. 67 INT. TRANSPORTER ROOM where Riker, Tasha and Data wait to beam down. RIKER We are ready, Captain. 68 INT MAIN BRIDGE (OPTICAL) PICARD Doctor Crusher and I are prepared to conclude these negotiations. Beverly and Picard DEMATERIALIZE from the bridge. WORF Transporter room, now! STAR TREK: "When the Bough... " - 12/11/87 - ACT FIVE 50. 69 INT. TRANSPORTER ROOM (OPTICAL) RIKER Energize. Riker, Tasha and Data FADE and DISAPPEAR as the transporter activates. 70 INT. ALDEA - CORRIDOR (OPTICAL) Tasha, Riker and Data MATERIALIZE. There is no one else around. Riker looks around and motions for the Team to follow him. 71 INT. ALDEA - FIRST UNIT CHAMBER Beverly and Picard are confronted by Radue. RADUE Before we begin, Captain, you must speak with the children. It seems they are on some sort of "strike." I don't understand it. You must deal with this, Captain. I'm not very good with children. Picard is amused for the first time in days. PICARD A strike? I'll see what I can do. 72 INT. ALDEA - WESLEY'S ROOM (OPTICAL) Picard APPEARS in the Teleport Arch to find Wesley and the others silent and defiant. The children are overjoyed to see the captain. WESLEY Sir! We knew you'd come! PICARD It's not over yet, Wesley. WESLEY Captain, I think I figured out their computer controls -- I'm not sure, it's a different system than ours. STAR TREK: "When the Bough... " - 12/11/87 - ACT FIVE 51. 72 CONTINUED: PICARD Good, Wesley. Now... HARRY (interrupting) ...Captain. PICARD Yes, Harry. HARRY If something happens and you have to leave us here -- tell my Dad... I'm sorry I made him angry... and I miss him. PICARD I will tell him, Harry, and I will tell him how much I admire his son. Alexandra waddles over to Picard and raises her arms to be picked up. Picard has no choice but to awkwardly lift her into his arms. She looks up at him with her big eyes. 73 OMITTED 74 INT. ALDEA - CUSTODIAN ROOM As the three officers ENTER the room. DATA This is it, Commander. Data scans the room with his tricorder. DATA (continuing) It is programmed to accept only authorized voice commands. RIKER So we can't override. DATA No. But I can intermix the input so nobody else can. STAR TREK: "When the Bough... " - 12/11/87 - ACT FIVE 52. 74 CONTINUED: RIKER We must find the power supply for the shield. 75 INT. ALDEA - FIRST UNIT CHAMBER (OPTICAL) OPEN ON Beverly - then PAN TO Teleport Arch as Picard and the children STEP FORWARD. Beverly, Radue and Rashella have been joined by Accolan. Beverly looks lovingly at her son. RADUE What is this? PICARD They want to go home. RADUE No. They're staying. PICARD (his communicator) Number One. RIKER'S COM VOICE We are in position. PICARD Hold for orders. RIKER'S COM VOICE Aye, sir. BEVERLY (with persuasion) The radiation levels on Aldea have built up over a long period of time. It is similar to what was experienced on Earth in the twenty-first century, when the ozone layer deteriorated and the surface of the planet was flooded with ultraviolet radiation. PICARD The shield that protects your world in one way has weakened it in another. It's the radiation of your own sun which is destroying you. STAR TREK: "When the Bough... " - 12/11/87 - ACT FIVE 53. 75 CONTINUED: RADUE You are trying to confuse the issue. BEVERLY Please listen. You're all suffering from a kind of poisoning. Sterility is only the latest symptom. If the children remain, they will be affected as well. RADUE It is impossible. Our scientists would have known. BEVERLY How could they? Your scientists have forgotten how everything works. RADUE No. It's a lie. Send them back to their ship. Rashella starts to touch her arm band, then hesitates. RASHELLA Wait. No. What if they're right? Instead of the children being our hope, what if we are just condeming them to our fate? RADUE They are just protecting their own interests. RASHELLA As are we. But hear them out. The captain and Doctor Crusher are saying our entire life is based on a misconception, and the very thing which has given us this wonderful world is the very thing which has caused this tragedy? STAR TREK: "When the Bough... " - 12/11/87 - ACT FIVE 54. 75 CONTINUED: (2) PICARD That is exactly it. The shield that protects you, has weakened and your computer has controlled your lives so completely you've lost the desire to even question it. RADUE Lies. The discussion is over. Radue hits his arm band to send them back to the ship. Nothing happens. Picard touches his communicator. PICARD Commander Riker. RIKER'S COM VOICE Yes, sir. PICARD I assume you have control of the computer. RIKER'S COM VOICE We've disabled the system temporarily and we've found the power source to the shield and we've neutralized it. PICARD Good. (using com) Enterprise, this is Picard. Beam the children up. HARRY Wait. Harry goes to Accolan. HARRY (continuing) Thank you. ACCOLAN Let me get the dolphin for you to take with you. HARRY No. You keep it. I'll make another. STAR TREK: "When the Bough... " - 12/11/87 - ACT FIVE 55. 75 CONTINUED: (3) Harry joins the others. PICARD Beam them up. Harry waves good-bye to Accolan as all the children, but Wesley, DEMATERIALIZE. RADUE You've destroyed us. PICARD We are not here to destroy you, Radue. We can help you. 76 OMITTED 77 INT. ALDEA - POWER ROOM (OPTICAL) They ENTER cautiously. In the center is a shiny black box, not very large. It PULSATES with a GLOWING LIGHT. RADUE What is it? PICARD The legacy your Progenitors left you, Radue. The source of your power. And your problems. DATA It is reading incredible amounts of energy, sir. Even more since we have taken down the shield. RASHELLA What are we going to do with it? RADUE Learn all over again... all this time we've been destroying ourselves. So secure, so sure of our technological invulnerability. Now... PICARD Will you let us help? Radue puts his hand out to Picard. RADUE Yes. Please. STAR TREK: "When the Bough... " - 12/11/87 - ACT FIVE 56. 78 EXT. SPACE - THE ENTERPRISE AND ALDEA (OPTICAL) The Enterprise uses a wide angle ENERGY BEAM to "sew up the hole" in the atmosphere. (To be researched and revised.) 79 INT. CORRIDOR Harry and his father walk hand in hand to Harry's classroom. Harry stops in front of the door. HARRY Dad, I want to be an artist. And I don't want to take calculus anymore. DR. BERNARD You can be anything you want, Harry. Anything. But you still have to take calculus. Harry thinks about it for a moment. HARRY Okay. Thanks, Dad. They hug and Harry goes back to school. 80 INT. MAIN BRIDGE (OPTICAL) The Main Viewer SHOWS the ship finishing its job on the atmosphere. DATA It worked well, sir. Beverly ENTERS from a turbolift. PICARD Are you finished? BEVERLY Yes. They're responding very well to the treatment, but for this to work, they can never use their shield or be cloaked again. PICARD The legend will die, but the people will live. STAR TREK: "When the Bough... " - 12/11/87 - ACT FIVE 57. 80 CONTINUED: TROI And we know they'll make good parents. Alexandra WADDLES OFF the turbolift with Wesley. She's carrying a flower. PICARD Wesley! WESLEY Sorry, sir. She just wanted to give you a present for bringing her back to her mommy. Picard bends down to accept the flower -- and a hug. Alexandra waves bye-bye to him and GOES BACK with Wesley. The entire bridge crew tries not to snicker. Picard gives them a fierce look to cover his discomfort. PICARD Mister La Forge, out of orbit. Warp five. GEORDI (coughing) Yes, sir. Certainly, sir. Picard turns around and the rest of the crew can see the stick-em toy on the back of his uniform. 80A EXT. SPACE - ENTERPRISE (OPTICAL) at sub-warp speed, it heads for its next adventure. FADE OUT. END OF ACT FIVE THE END STAR TREK: THE NEXT GENERATION "Coming Of Age" (fka "Starfleet Academy") #40271-119 Written by Sandy Fries Directed by Mike Vejar THE WRITING CREDITS MAY NOT BE FINAL AND SHOULD NOT BE USED FOR PUBLICITY OR ADVERTISING PURPOSES WITHOUT FIRST CHECKING WITH THE TELEVISION LEGAL DEPARTMENT. Copyright 1987 Paramount Pictures Corporation. All Rights Reserved. This script is not for publication or reproduction. No one is authorized to dispose of same. If lost or destroyed, please notify the Script Department. 3RD REV. FINAL DRAFT DECEMBER 30, 1987 STAR TREK: "Coming Of Age" - 12/30/87 - CAST STAR TREK: THE NEXT GENERATION "Coming Of Age" CAST PICARD JAKE KURLAND RIKER ADMIRAL GREGORY QUINN BEVERLY LT. COMMANDER DEXTER REMMICK DATA MORDOCK TROI OLIANA MIRREN TASHA T'SHANIK WORF TAC OFFICER CHANG GEORDI RONDON WESLEY TECHNICIAN #1 TECHNICIAN #2 Voice-Over STAR TREK: "Coming Of Age" - 12/30/87 - SETS STAR TREK: THE NEXT GENERATION "Coming Of Age" SETS INTERIORS EXTERIORS USS ENTERPRISE USS ENTERPRISE Deck 21 Forward Lounge Transporter Room RELVA 7 (PLANET) Corridor SHUTTLECRAFT Captain's Ready Room Main bridge Holodeck Admiral's Quarters Main Engineering RELVA 7 Classroom Corridor Testing Room Long corridor Environmental Lab SHUTTLECRAFT Cockpit STAR TREK: "Coming Of Age" - 12/30/87 - TEASER 1. STAR TREK: THE NEXT GENERATION "Coming Of Age" TEASER FADE IN: A1 EXT. SPACE - THE ENTERPRISE (OPTICAL) orbiting the planet Relva 7. B1 INT. ENTERPRISE - CORRIDOR WESLEY is running down the corridor after someone. WESLEY Hey, Jake! Wait a second! JAKE KURLAND, eighteen, dark-haired and intense, stops and waits for Wesley. WESLEY (continuing) How're you doing? JAKE (tries to smile) I'm fine. Really. WESLEY I'm real sorry... BEVERLY'S COM VOICE Acting Ensign Crusher, report to Deck Twenty-one Forward Lounge. Wesley ignores the request. JAKE It's not your fault. WESLEY Yes, I know, but I wish we were both going. JAKE (shrugging) Only thirty-two points... BEVERLY'S COM VOICE Acting Ensign Crusher, respond. STAR TREK: "Coming Of Age" - 12/30/87 - TEASER 2. B1 CONTINUED: Wesley touches a com panel. WESLEY I'm on my way. Wesley looks at Jake. WESLEY (continuing) Gotta go. They shake hands. JAKE Do well for both of us. Wesley smiles at Jake and HURRIES BACK the other way. Jake stares dejectedly after him. C1 INT. CORRIDOR - OUTSIDE DECK 21 FORWARD LOUNGE Beverly waits for Wesley just outside the lounge. WESLEY Mom, I can't be late. BEVERLY Don't worry. You have time. 1 INT. DECK 21 FORWARD LOUNGE A large cake with seventeen BURNING candles is in the center of the table. It says "HAPPY 16TH BIRTHDAY" and "GOOD LUCK, WESLEY." The whole BRIDGE CREW waits around the table as Wesley ENTERS with Beverly. He's touched, embarrassed and -- wants to get out of there. RIKER Happy Birthday, Wesley! Everyone ECHOES THE SENTIMENT. WESLEY Thanks everybody. But it's not until next month. RIKER Close enough. STAR TREK: "Coming Of Age" - 12/30/87 - TEASER 3. 1 CONTINUED: TROI You won't be here next month. After you pass the entrance exam, you'll be on your way to Starfleet Academy. BEVERLY Go on, make a wish. Wesley closes his eyes, thinks a moment, then blows out the candles. Everyone CLAPS as he makes the first cut. Troi takes over and cuts cake for everyone, handing pieces to Riker and Wesley. RIKER You'll breeze through those tests. WESLEY I hope so, sir. RIKER I know so. I remember how tough it was for me. He pauses, reliving the fear, then smiles at Wesley. RIKER (continuing) But you've got brains, and family tradition, and actual experience. WESLEY I wish I felt that sure. GEORDI I was scared to death the whole time. But it's good for you. Keeps your adrenaline going. Not that you'll need it, Wes. 1A ANOTHER ANGLE Troi hands pieces of cake to Data and Worf. STAR TREK: "Coming Of Age" - 12/30/87 - TEASER 4. 1A CONTINUED: DATA Thank you... Humans are fascinating. They celebrate the passage of time with such joy until a certain age, and then it becomes a topic of some discomfort. I suppose it is because each birthday is another step towards inevitable death. Do Klingons observe birthdays, Worf? WORF Klingons are born, live as warriors, and die. DATA Then how do you know how old you are? WORF I don't. Do you know? DATA I have no age. Data stares at Beverly, who's standing next to Picard. BEVERLY Is there something wrong? DATA No. I am simply trying to understand the celebration of aging. And how old were you when Wesley was born, Doctor? Beverly shoves her piece of cake at him. BEVERLY Have some cake, Data. She LEAVES him standing there with Picard. DATA I do not understand, sir. Why... PICARD You never ask a woman her age, Mister Data. STAR TREK: "Coming Of Age" - 12/30/87 - TEASER 5. 1A CONTINUED: (2) DATA I am very confused, sir. PICARD Some customs will never change. TASHA'S COM VOICE Acting Ensign Crusher, this is the Transporter Room. We are ready to beam you down to Relva 7. WESLEY (to the party) Thanks for the party, everyone. And the good wishes. They all RESPOND with "Good luck;" "Go get 'em;" "You'll do great." TASHA'S COM VOICE Captain Picard. PICARD (touching his communicator) Picard here. TASHA'S COM VOICE We've received communication from Relva 7 that Admiral Gregory Quinn is about to beam aboard, sir. PICARD Admiral Gregory Quinn. Why wasn't I informed earlier, Lieutenant Yar? TASHA'S COM VOICE We just received the request, sir. Picard gestures to Riker. PICARD I'm on my way to the Transporter Room, Lieutenant. Number One! Picard and Riker FOLLOW Wesley and Beverly OUT the door. 1B thru OMITTED 1C STAR TREK: "Coming Of Age" - 12/30/87 - TEASER 6. 2 OMITTED 3 INT. TRANSPORTER ROOM (OPTICAL) Riker, Picard and Beverly say good-bye to Wesley. Beverly reaches out to shake his hand, but Wesley leans over and kisses her. He nods and Tasha works the console and Wesley BEAMS DOWN to Relva 7. A beat, then almost immediately, ADMIRAL GREGORY QUINN and LIEUTENANT COMMANDER DEXTER REMMICK BEAM UP. Quinn is a rugged man in his early sixties. He is accompanied by Remmick, a young, blond, dedicated officer. They step off the platform. PICARD This is unexpected. Welcome aboard, Admiral. QUINN Thank you. Captain Jean-Luc Picard, Lieutenant Commander Dexter Remmick. REMMICK Sir. They shake hands, then Remmick steps back and watches. PICARD Allow me to present my staff: First Officer William Riker, Chief Medical Officer Beverly Crusher, chief of security, Lieutenant Tasha Yar. Quinn nods to them. PICARD (continuing) What can we do for you? QUINN I need to speak with you. PICARD Certainly. This way. Number One. They turn to leave, as: QUINN No. Alone. PICARD Is this personal? STAR TREK: "Coming Of Age" - 12/30/87 - TEASER 7. 3 CONTINUED: QUINN Official business. PICARD Then my first officer... QUINN ... Alone, Captain. This is unheard of. It's as if Riker's in big trouble and no one knows why, as WE: FADE OUT. END OF TEASER STAR TREK: "Coming Of Age" - 12/30/87 - ACT ONE 8. ACT ONE FADE IN: 4 EXT. SPACE - THE ENTERPRISE (OPTICAL) as it orbits Relva 7. PICARD (V. O.) Captain's log, stardate 41416. 2. We are orbiting Relva 7, one of the testing sites where final examinations are taking place for entrance into Starfleet Academy. But with the appearance of my old colleague, Admiral Gregory Quinn, our stay has taken on another meaning. 5 OMITTED 5A INT. CAPTAIN'S READY ROOM Picard and Quinn ENTER. Remmick stands off to the side. QUINN Commander Remmick is with the Inspector General's office. PICARD Oh? QUINN He'll be conducting a complete investigation of the Enterprise. PICARD What are you looking for? Quinn turns to especially include Remmick. Remmick stands almost at attention. QUINN I have reason to believe there may be something very wrong on this ship... very wrong. PICARD Tell me what you suspect. STAR TREK: "Coming Of Age" - 12/30/87 - ACT ONE 9. 5A CONTINUED: QUINN No. It's... inappropriate to discuss it now. We'll go over it fully when Mister Remmick concludes his investigation. (turns to Remmick) You will find out what is wrong on this ship. Starfleet is depending on you. REMMICK Yes, sir. (glances at Picard) Nothing and no one will stand in my way. QUINN And you, Captain, are ordered to cooperate in every way necessary with the investigation. Clear? PICARD Yes, sir. QUINN Mister Remmick, unless there are further questions... REMMICK No questions, sir. QUINN Get on with your duties. REMMICK Yes, sir! Remmick purposefully EXITS. When the door CLOSES: PICARD Greg, we've known each other for years. If you weren't just motivating young Mister Remmick, tell me what you believe is wrong. Quinn dodges the question. QUINN Captain, it is vitally important that my orders are followed exactly. I'll be staying on the ship. STAR TREK: "Coming Of Age" - 12/30/87 - ACT ONE 10. 5A CONTINUED: (2) PICARD As you wish, Admiral. 6 EXT. RELVA 7 (OPTICAL) ESTABLISHING the planet. 7 INT. RELVA 7 - CLASSROOM Wesley is the first one to ARRIVE in the high-tech classroom. He looks around the room uncomfortably. There's an impressive array of DEVICES, including a special SENSOR UNIT. He reaches down to inspect it, but puts it back guiltily as OLIANA MIRREN ENTERS. She's a gorgeous eighteen-year-old human, a red-head with sparkle and probably a temper. OLIANA What is it? WESLEY What? OLIANA The unit you just put down. Don't worry. I won't tell anybody. WESLEY Oh. It's a flux coordinating sensor. Oliana puts out her hand. Wesley takes it and absentmindedly holds it. He's mesmerized by her. OLIANA I'm Oliana Mirren, one of the other finalists. You must be Wesley Crusher. She gently removes her hand from his. WESLEY Yeah! You know me? OLIANA I heard there was a very smart, very young man who'd be tough competition. STAR TREK: "Coming Of Age" - 12/30/87 - ACT ONE 11. 7 CONTINUED: WESLEY (embarrassed) Well, you wouldn't be here if... OLIANA ... I weren't smart? I know. But there's a lot more to it than that. You're lucky - you've had practical experience on the Enterprise. As she speaks, the door OPENS and T'SHANIK, a dark young Vulcan woman, who looks as if she's surprised anyone else bothered to show up, ENTERS with MORDOCK, a powerfully built alien with a special suit using circulating gas tubes. Mordock hangs back a little, quietly. T'SHANIK Oliana. (to Wesley) T'Shanik of Vulcana Regar. WESLEY Wesley Crusher, from the Enterprise. T'SHANIK You don't look as if you meet the age requirements. WESLEY Uh, I'll be sixteen next month. OLIANA (pats him on the shoulder) Happy birthday. When this is all over, we'll celebrate. Wesley basks in the thought of celebrating anything with her, then realizes he's being rude. He turns to Mordock. WESLEY Hi. I'm Wesley Crusher. Mordock nods and moves forward. MORDOCK Mordock. STAR TREK: "Coming Of Age" - 12/30/87 - ACT ONE 12. 7 CONTINUED: (2) WESLEY Mordock? The Mordock? The Benzite who constructed the Mordock Strategy? I thought you already were in the Academy. MORDOCK No. Only a hopeful, like you. WESLEY You're a legend in the Galactic Computer Network... TAC OFFICER CHANG ENTERS and walks to the head of the classroom. CHANG Finalists, please take your seats... The Four take seats at individual computer stations, as Chang continues. CHANG (continuing) I'm TAC Officer Chang. Welcome. You are here because you are all top candidates. Although only one student will be chosen for the Academy, you have shown from the preliminary testing that any of you could easily qualify. (makes eye contact with each) We are looking for the person who combines all the important qualities necessary to be part of Starfleet's future. Integrity, intelligence, courage, imagination... and that indefinable quality of leadership. This may be the most difficult, exhausting experience of your life. And the most exciting challenge. Expect the unexpected... May you all do your best... Now, we'll begin. Chang LEAVES the room as the computers LIGHT UP. The four students immediately start the test. And the faster they answer the questions, the faster the computer asks them. STAR TREK: "Coming Of Age" - 12/30/87 - ACT ONE 13. 7 CONTINUED: (3) They're all pounding away at extreme high speeds, but with different kinds of energy, and each time they take a test they'll respond with the same kind of energy. Wesley concentrates completely and works at an incredibly fast, even pace. T'Shanik works quickly, calmly and methodically. Mordock, with great intensity. Oliana, alternates bursts of energy with quiet. The students continue with their answers. 8 EXT. SPACE - THE ENTERPRISE (OPTICAL) in orbit. 8A INT. MAIN BRIDGE Riker commands the bridge, with Data and Geordi, Tasha and Worf at their regular stations. Remmick stands over Data, just watching him sit there. Remmick HOLDS A HAND DEVICE which he will carry with him everywhere -- A MINIATURE PERSONAL COMPUTER where he punches in every observation. Riker watches him without saying a word. DATA May I help you, Mister Remmick? REMMICK Just keep on doing whatever it is you're doing, Commander Data. DATA Yes, sir. Data continues staring, as Remmick moves over to Geordi.. and stands over him, making entries in his computer. GEORDI There's nothing much to see here, Commander. We're in standard orbit. And, uh, the station has to be manned, even if it's routine... STAR TREK: "Coming of Age" - 12/30/87 - ACT ONE 14. 8A CONTINUED: RIKER Is there something I can help you with, Mister Remmick? Remmick whips around to Riker. REMMICK When I'm ready, Mister Riker, I'll want to speak with you. Privately. Remmick moves aft, to stand next to Worf. Remmick watches Worf work at his console and makes more notes. Worf pretends he's not there. Geordi turns to Data. GEORDI Just having that guy around makes me feel guilty. (to Riker) Commander, what's this guy after? RIKER I don't know, Geordi. But I'm going to find out. Now. He gets up and heads purposefully for the Captain's Ready Room. 9 thru OMITTED 10 11 INT. CAPTAIN'S READY ROOM Picard is at his desk, star window at his shoulder. The doorbell CHIMES. PICARD Come. Riker ENTERS, and sits down as the Captain motions him. RIKER Captain, may I speak frankly? PICARD Always, Number One. RIKER As executive officer, I should be informed. I should know everything you know. STAR TREK: "Coming of Age" - 12/30/87 - ACT ONE 15. 11 CONTINUED: PICARD I agree. You should. RIKER What's this about? Remmick is going to turn this ship upside down. PICARD That is his job. RIKER And mine is to make sure the ship runs smoothly. PICARD Which you do very well. RIKER Sir, am I under investigation? PICARD I don't know. RIKER And if you did? PICARD I couldn't tell you. RIKER I don't understand, sir. This is extremely frustrating. PICARD No less so for me. But I have promised full cooperation. And we shall give it. Riker tries not to lose his temper. RIKER Sir. He EXITS the Ready Room as Picard looks after him unhappily. 12 INT. MAIN BRIDGE Remmick is waiting for Riker outside the captain's Ready Room. STAR TREK: "Coming of Age" - 12/30/87 - ACT ONE 16. 12 CONTINUED: REMMICK I want some answers from you now, Commander Riker. RIKER Later. REMMICK You were ordered to cooperate... RIKER When it doesn't interfere with my duty. Not now, Remmick! The crew watches the furious Riker head for the turbolift. FADE OUT. END OF ACT ONE STAR TREK: "Coming of Age" - 12/30/87 - ACT TWO 17. ACT TWO FADE IN: 13 EXT. RELVA 7 (OPTICAL) ESTABLISHING. 14 INT. RELVA 7 - CLASSROOM The four students sit in front of computer readout screens set apart from each other. T'Shanik is the only one who appears calm. COMPUTER VOICE Last question on the Hyper Space Physics test: If the matter and antimatter tanks on a Galaxy Class starship are nine-tenths depleted, calculate the intermix ratio necessary to reach a starbase a hundred light years away at warp factor eight... All the students begin to use the calculators attached to the computer, except Wesley, who immediately punches in the answer. T'Shanik reaches the answer almost immediately. Mordock, driven and intense, is startled at their speed, then pushes in his answer. Oliana finishes last. COMPUTER VOICE (continuing) Thank you, students. You now have one hour free before the next test. The computer shuts down, its lights FADE OUT. T'Shanik EXITS the classroom immediately as Wesley, Oliana and Mordock relax. MORDOCK I admit, Wesley, you have a very fast mind. WESLEY As soon as I realized it was a trick question, there was only one answer. STAR TREK: "Coming of Age" - 12/30/87 - ACT TWO 18. 14 CONTINUED: MORDOCK Yes. There is only one "ratio" with matter-antimatter. One to one. Wesley sneaks a look at Oliana. Her jaw is set, then she shrugs and smiles her bright smile at the two of the them. OLIANA You're both very lucky. I can't imagine what it feels like to have things come so easily. I have to push every step of the way. WESLEY Oh, no, Oliana, it doesn't come easily. I have to study all the time. Mordock's the one who's brilliant. OLIANA You really don't know, do you? It's a good thing you're cute, Wesley, or you could really be obnoxious. She pushes her chair back and gets up. OLIANA (continuing) See you later. She LEAVES the room. WESLEY Did you hear that Mordock? She said I was cute! MORDOCK Is that good, Wesley? WESLEY I don't know. I think so. Maybe. I don't know. MORDOCK Perhaps I was incorrect about the speed of your thought processes, Wesley. STAR TREK: "Coming of Age" - 12/30/87 - ACT TWO 19. 15 OMITTED 16 EXT. SPACE - ENTERPRISE (OPTICAL) orbiting Relva 7. ESTABLISHING. 16A OMITTED 17 INT. MAIN BRIDGE Riker STEPS OFF the turbolift and APPROACHES Picard. RIKER Captain, I think I should apologize. PICARD No need, Number One. Mister Remmick's presence is unnerving, to say the least. RIKER Regardless, sir, I should realize that whatever your reasons are, they're valid. Whether or not I understand them. Remmick ENTERS the bridge. REMMICK Are you available now, Mister Riker? Or do you still have duties to perform? RIKER I'm available, Mister Remmick. REMMICK Any problem with using your Ready Room, Captain? The crew considers this an intrusion. TASHA I'll find him a comfortable place on Deck Fifteen, sir. REMMICK It's more convenient here. Is there a problem, Captain? STAR TREK: "Coming of Age" - 12/30/87 - ACT TWO 20. 17 CONTINUED: PICARD No, Mister Remmick. Be my guest. Remmick ENTERS the Ready Room and motions for Riker to FOLLOW. 18 INT. CAPTAIN'S READY ROOM Remmick sits at Picard's desk, Riker in front of him. REMMICK There are several seeming discrepancies in the captain's log. Let's go over them, one by one, shall we? Riker is surprised -- he thought he was the one on the hot seat, but it's Picard. RIKER The captain's log? REMMICK Yes. To your knowledge, has the captain ever falsified a log? RIKER Have you discussed this with him? REMMICK Right now, I'm asking you. RIKER If you want to discuss anything about Captain Picard, bring him in here and ask him face to face. REMMICK You are required to answer my questions, Mister Riker. Unless you're trying to cover something up? Now, there are several discrepancies in the captain's log. Shall we go over them, one by one? RIKER Proceed. 19 OMITTED STAR TREK: "Coming Of Age" - 12/30/87 - ACT TWO 21. 19A INT. CAPTAIN'S READY ROOM (FORMERLY SCENE 16A) Troi calmly faces Remmick. REMMICK Do you believe the captain is emotionally and psychologically fit for command of this starship? There is nothing in his history or his personality that might suggest... mental lapses? TROI Nothing. REMMICK Not even the Ferengi incident with his old ship, the Stargazer? TROI He was being controlled by a mind-altering machine, Commander. Without his knowledge. REMMICK I would say that was a mental lapse. 20 INT. MAIN ENGINEERING Geordi is working on a panel as Remmick questions him. REMMICK So, you are saying Captain Picard had no control over this vessel. He handed it over to Kosinski, who took the entire crew to some sort of "alternate" universe. GEORDI No, sir. That's not what I'm saying. Kosinski was sent by Starfleet to improve our warp drive. The captain was ordered to take him aboard. REMMICK According to his own logs, the bridge crew didn't think highly of Mister Kosinski's theories, yet the captain allowed him access to the engines anyway. Is that true, La Forge? STAR TREK: "Coming Of Age" - 12/30/87 - ACT TWO 22. 20 CONTINUED: GEORDI Not exactly, sir. REMMICK One way or the other, La Forge, Picard lost control of this ship. Is that true? GEORDI Yes, but that's not how it happened. REMMICK So, the answer is yes. Geordi is completely frustrated as Remmick makes notes. 21 OMITTED 22 INT. HOLODECK (OPTICAL) It's empty and SILENT. Wesley stares off into the distance, frowning. Worf ENTERS, startling Wesley. WORF Ensign Crusher... What are you doing on the Holodeck? I thought you were still on Relva 7. WESLEY I'm through testing for the day. WORF I'm sorry if I disturbed you. I'll leave. WESLEY No! Stay. I thought I wanted to be by myself, but I guess I didn't really. WORF How is the testing? STAR TREK: "Coming Of Age" - 12/30/87 - ACT TWO 23. 22 CONTINUED: WESLEY Okay. So far. It's not the ones I've studied for I'm worried about. It's the Psych Test, facing my deepest fear and living through it. I don't even know what it is. I'm trying to figure out what images to bring up. WORF Why? WESLEY I wanna scare myself. What do you think -- Bulgallian rats? Lightning storm? WORF Do those things frighten you? WESLEY Kinda. But's it's exciting, too. You know, that rolling feeling in your stomach? WORF No. I don't know. Wesley... The Psych Test is no more or less important than the rest of the process. WESLEY That's what they said, but it's all I can think about. WORF Thinking about what you can't control simply wastes your energy and creates its own fear. WESLEY (angry) How can they know what my deepest fear is when I don't? WORF (shrugs) By analyzing your psychological profile. They were right about everyone I tested with. Including myself. STAR TREK: "Coming Of Age" - 12/30/87 - ACT TWO 24. 22 CONTINUED: (2) WESLEY You? I didn't think there was anything that could frighten a Klingon warrior. WORF Only fools have no fear. WESLEY I'm sorry, Lieutenant Worf. I shouldn't ask so many personal questions. Worf stares at Wesley for a moment. WORF It is very... difficult for me to depend on anyone else. For anything. But especially for my life. WESLEY But on the Enterprise you do that every day. Everyone depends on everyone else to protect them. WORF Yes. WESLEY Then you got over it. WORF No. It is still my enemy. Wesley looks at Worf with intense admiration. 23 INT. MAIN BRIDGE Picard and Riker are at the Aft Station reviewing supply choices. Remmick stands, watching and making entries. RIKER ... With this new extricator, sir, we could eliminate three other bulky machines from cargo space. PICARD Excellent, Number One. STAR TREK: "Coming Of Age" - 12/30/87 - ACT TWO 25. 23 CONTINUED: TASHA Captain, there's an unauthorized entry in Main Shuttlebay. Remmick becomes intensely interested. REMMICK "Unauthorized?" PICARD Who is it, Lieutenant? TASHA The computer reads the I.D. number of... Jake Kurland. PICARD Bridge to Main Shuttlebay. Mister Kurland... This is Captain Picard. Respond. REMMICK Isn't the area secured? I want answers. RIKER Not now, Remmick... Captain, he's going to take her out. PICARD Lock off the bay launch doors. WORF Too late, sir. He's using the flight emergency override... GEORDI Smart kid. Remmick's taking notes. TASHA ... He's launching! PICARD Enterprise to shuttlecraft. Mister Kurland. 23A EXT. SPACE - THE SHUTTLECRAFT (OPTICAL) It LAUNCHES. STAR TREK: "Coming Of Age" - 12/30/87 - ACT TWO 26. 24 INT. SHUTTLECRAFT - COCKPIT Jake's at the controls. JAKE Captain Picard. I'm going to Beltane Nine to sign onto a freighter. Tell my father I'm sorry. PICARD (V.O.) Tell him in person. Bring the ship back. Now. Jake shakes his head and WHISPERS: JAKE No. I can't face him. I'm leaving. Jake works the controls, and the shuttle LURCHES, the LIGHTS DIM, the ENGINE NOISE DIES. His face shows panic as he frantically recomputes, and works the controls again. JAKE (continuing) I've lost power! 25 INT. MAIN BRIDGE (OPTICAL) The crew is shocked by Jake's mistake. RIKER All he's got left are his maneuvering jets. GEORDI At that trajectory, he'll hit the atmosphere and melt at two hundred kilometers. PICARD Probable impact? DATA Atmospheric entry... seventy-eight seconds. PICARD Options? STAR TREK: "Coming Of Age" - 12/30/87 - ACT TWO 27. 25 CONTINUED: TASHA He's out of transporter range. WORF Tractor beam? RIKER Won't work. He's too far away for a positive lock. REMMICK You're completely responsible for that boy's life, Captain. PICARD (to Remmick) Either get out of my way and be quiet, or I will have you escorted from the bridge... Visual on shuttle cockpit. TASHA Visual on Main Viewer. Jake's face APPEARS on the Main Viewer. He's terrified. JAKE (V.O.) The engine's dead. What am I gonna do? PICARD Stay calm, Jake. We'll get you back. The crew looks anxiously at Jake on the Viewer, then at Picard, who is grim. 25A INT. SHUTTLECRAFT - COCKPIT (HIS P.O.V.) (OPTICAL) As Jake watches Relva 7 looming closer by the second. JAKE Please help me! FADE OUT. END OF ACT TWO STAR TREK: "Coming Of Age" - 12/30/87 - ACT THREE 28. ACT THREE FADE IN: 26 EXT. SPACE - SHUTTLECRAFT (OPTICAL) as it hurtles towards Relva 7. 27 INT. SHUTTLECRAFT - COCKPIT (CONTINUOUS ACTION) (OPTICAL) Jake's futilely fighting the useless controls. Relva 7 looms even CLOSER on his Viewer. PICARD (V.O.) Jake! JAKE It's no use, Captain. I'm going to die out here. 28 INT. MAIN BRIDGE (OPTICAL) ON the Main Viewer, Jake is desolate. PICARD Mister Kurland! You are not going to die out there. Do exactly as I tell you. Take the nose of the shuttle and aim it directly at Relva 7. Riker and the others REACT to this, startled. 29 OMITTED 30 INT. SHUTTLECRAFT - COCKPIT (OPTICAL) The planet's COMING CLOSER. JAKE Aim it at Relva? I can't do that. It's crazy. STAR TREK: "Coming Of Age" - 12/30/87 - ACT THREE 29. 31 INT. MAIN BRIDGE The crew watches grimly. DATA Twenty-eight seconds to impact... PICARD Jake, listen carefully. I'm the captain and I'm giving you an order. Aim the shuttle at Relva. Now. 32 INT. SHUTTLECRAFT - COCKPIT (OPTICAL) Jake hesitates, then maneuvers the nose of the craft directly at Relva. JAKE Okay. It's done. 33 INT. MAIN BRIDGE (OPTICAL) Picard is monitoring Data's console. PICARD Good. Monitor your speed exactly. When it hits point zero-two-zero, I want you to restart the engine and pull up, hard! 33A INT. SHUTTLECRAFT - COCKPIT ON Jake's face. JAKE Point zero-two-zero speed... Captain, I sure hope you're right. PICARD (V.O.) You'll just have to trust me. JAKE (nodding) Point zero-zero-three; zero-zero-nine; zero-one-two... STAR TREK: "Coming Of Age" - 12/30/87 - ACT THREE 30. 33B INT. MAIN BRIDGE (OPTICAL) Picard, Riker and the others tensely watch Jake's face. He's pouring sweat. PICARD Hang on tight. It's going to be bumpy. JAKE (V.O.) Zero-one-five, zero-one-nine. PICARD Now! Start the engine! 33C INT. SHUTTLECRAFT - COCKPIT (OPTICAL) Jake starts the engine. WE HEAR IT CATCH as he pulls the shuttle up. 33D EXT. SPACE - SHUTTLECRAFT (OPTICAL) WE SEE the shuttle angle off the planet's atmosphere. 34 OMITTED 35 INT. MAIN BRIDGE (OPTICAL) CHEERS all around, including Remmick, who's standing over the console. RIKER Incredible, Captain! REMMICK He bounced her off the atmosphere! PICARD Mister Kurland, can you maneuver the shuttle home? JAKE (V.O.) Yes, sir. PICARD Do so. Then report to Mister Riker. Jake is so relieved, he doesn't care he's in deep trouble. STAR TREK: "Coming Of Age" - 12/30/87 - ACT THREE 31. 35 CONTINUED: JAKE (V.O.) Yes, sir! RIKER Main Shuttle Bay, prepare to receive shuttle. Remmick stops smiling. REMMICK Very... original, Captain. But how did this child gain access to a Shuttlecraft? RIKER Kurland is a highly qualified Enterprise Academy candidate and fully trained in many areas ... including shuttles. REMMICK And did this "full" training include discipline? PICARD Young men sometimes make rash choices, Mister Remmick. Which is why Mister Kurland will receive a strong refresher specifically in discipline... REMMICK I'll note that in my report. Picard turns away from Remmick as Riker starts to protest: PICARD Full cooperation, Number One. 36 EXT. RELVA 7 (OPTICAL) ESTABLISHING. 37 INT. RELVA 7 - CORRIDOR Wesley walks down the hall as Oliana is having an intense M.O.S. discussion with Chang outside his office. He's telling her what her point standing is in relation to the other candidates. Chang ENTERS his office, leaving her there looking dejected. STAR TREK: "Coming Of Age" - 12/30/87 - ACT THREE 32. 37 CONTINUED: WESLEY Oliana! OLIANA Oh. Hi, Wes. WESLEY I, um, thought you might want to have lunch... together. OLIANA Thanks, but I'm not very hungry. WESLEY Oh... okay. She pats him on the hand. OLIANA It's not you... it's just that Mordock and you are so far ahead in points, I'll never catch up. WESLEY Oh. Sorry. (worried) You're not leaving., are you? OLIANA And give up? Never. Besides, it'll be good practice for next year. See you later. She's almost back to her cheerful self. Wesley stares after her thoughtfully, then turns around, almost bumping into Mordock. MORDOCK Ah, Wesley. Distracted by the female human again. No matter. It does not seem to diminish your mental faculties. You do good work. WESLEY Me? No, you're the one. I've studied the Mordock Strategy... MORDOCK Are you a player of Benzite chess? STAR TREK: "Coming Of Age" - 12/30/87 - ACT THREE 33. 37 CONTINUED: (2) WESLEY Sure! MORDOCK If you like, we can discuss this at lunch... I am hungry. Wesley cheers up. WESLEY Me too! They start towards the Mess Hall. RONDON, an irritable, powerful-looking Alien, WALKS TOWARDS them with a package under his arm. RONDON (to Wesley) You. I have a package for Operations. Where is it? WESLEY End of the corridor on your right. Room 406... As Rondon walks away, he BUMPS right into Wesley. RONDON You blocked my path... you Bulgallian sludge rat! TAC Officer Chang LEAVES his office and HEADS their way. WESLEY I apologize. An honest mistake, okay? I'm sorry. CHANG Is there a problem here, gentlemen? WESLEY No, sir... I, he... RONDON (shouting) How dare you! I am Rondon, you despicable Melanoid slimeworm! (raises fist) Liar! STAR TREK: "Coming Of Age" - 12/30/87 - ACT THREE 34. 37 CONTINUED: (3) Wesley sees the fist and suddenly becomes tough and straightforward. He advances towards Rondon. WESLEY Who do you think you're bullying? You bumped into me. It was your mistake. You were rude. (assuming defense posture) Do you want this to become violent? Mordock moves to separate them, but Chang motions him back, as Wesley holds his ground. Abruptly, Rondon warmly pats Wesley on the Back. RONDON Friend. I like you. He turns and is GONE. Mordock is confused. MORDOCK A very strange reaction. WESLEY Not really. When he held up his hand, I could see it was webbed... the sign of a Zaldan. CHANG But you became hostile. WESLEY Zaldans are infuriated by courtesy. They see it as a form of phony social behavior, designed to hide real feelings. CHANG Congratulations, Mister Crusher. You handled that particular incident very well. Mordock is alerted. MORDOCK Was that "incident" deliberate? CHANG It's important to know how you candidates deal with other cultures, other species. STAR TREK: "Coming Of Age" - 12/30/87 - ACT THREE 35. 37 CONTINUED: (4) MORDOCK Then it was a test. CHANG Yes. Not all tests are announced. Or what they appear to be. He smiles and LEAVES. MORDOCK Zaldans have webbed fingers? I wouldn't have passed. They share a look. They can't relax for a second. 38 EXT. SPACE - THE ENTERPRISE (OPTICAL) still in orbit. 39 INT. OBSERVATION LOUNGE - MONTAGE Remmick holds court as he interviews the bridge Officers, one by one. First is Data: REMMICK Commander Data, I'm getting very little cooperation from the bridge crew. You're an android, correct? DATA Yes, sir. REMMICK And as an android, you are programmed to tell the entire truth? DATA Yes, sir. REMMICK There is a problem with this ship, Mister Data. It's in the records, somewhere. I need your help to find it. DATA All the ship's records are available to you, sir. STAR TREK: "Coming Of Age" - 12/30/87 - ACT THREE 36. 39 CONTINUED: REMMICK This information is very cleverly hidden. Your captain is not what he appears to be. Do not forget you have loyalty to Starfleet above all else. DATA Loyalty is not the issue, Commander. There is nothing wrong with Captain Picard -- or the ship's logs. Therefore there must be something wrong with your original assumption. REMMICK That is not acceptable, Mister Data. DATA Acceptable or not, sir, it is the truth. CUT TO: Remmick interviewing Worf: REMMICK (looking at some notes) Just how did this contaminant come on board? WORF By accident, sir. REMMICK Meaning Captain Picard has no standing procedure for this type of situation? WORF No. Meaning "by accident" sir. REMMICK You don't like me very much, do you? WORF Is it required, sir? CUT TO: Remmick interviewing Beverly: STAR TREK: "Coming Of Age" - 12/30/87 - ACT THREE 37. 39 CONTINUED: (2) REMMICK How would you characterize your relationship with Captain Picard? BEVERLY We're officers of Starfleet who have known each other for many years. Remmick leans in towards her. REMMICK Everything said here is confidential, Doctor. You can be completely open with me. BEVERLY About what? REMMICK About how you feel serving with a man who was responsible for the death of your husband. BEVERLY My personal feelings about Captain Picard are irrelevant to this investigation. And none of your business. CUT TO: Remmick with Picard. REMMICK Then you confirm the logs are accurate: you violated the Prime Directive with the Edo? You deliberately interfered with their laws? PICARD Yes. It's exactly as I explained it in the log records. REMMICK All to save Doctor Crusher's son? PICARD One of my crew was held unjustly. I stand by my decision. STAR TREK: "Coming Of Age" - 12/30/87 - ACT THREE 38. 39 CONTINUED: (3) Remmick fumbles around, looking for something else to ask. PICARD (continuing) Mister Remmick, you have talked to everyone on this ship. I think you've had enough time to find out whatever it is you need to know. REMMICK Are you worried that if I keep looking I'll find what you're guilty of? PICARD The only thing I'm guilty of is allowing this charade to go on too long. He gets up, as WE: 40 OMITTED FADE OUT. END OF ACT THREE STAR TREK: "Coming Of Age" - 12/30/87 - ACT FOUR 39. ACT FOUR FADE IN: 41 EXT. SPACE - THE ENTERPRISE (OPTICAL) in orbit around Relva 7. 42 INT. ENTERPRISE - ADMIRAL'S QUARTERS The admiral looks weary as Picard and he watch each other carefully. PICARD If it's me you're after, Admiral, ask me directly what you want to know. Then tell me exactly what's going on. QUINN I need a little more time, Jean-Luc. PICARD How much time? I won't tolerate my crew being harassed any longer. QUINN Remmick's full report is almost ready. PICARD I want to be here when he presents it. QUINN That has always been my intention. Quinn pushes a com button near his hand. QUINN (continuing) Commander Remmick, report to Admiral Quinn. REMMICK'S COM VOICE On my way, sir. Picard looks at Quinn sadly. STAR TREK: "Coming Of Age" - 12/30/87 - ACT FOUR 40. 42 CONTINUED: PICARD This has been a strain on our friendship. QUINN I know. Believe me, Jean-Luc, I regret that, but it has been necessary. 43 EXT. RELVA 7 (OPTICAL) ESTABLISHING. 44 INT. RELVA 7 - CLASSROOM The four finalists are again in front of their separate computer screens. Chang is at the front of the room. CHANG This test will be graded as to the number of problems you complete within the allotted time. As the computers LIGHT UP, he LEAVES the room. COMPUTER VOICE The Carlundrum I.Q. Test will now appear. The task is to predict the variable patterns of Platonic Solids. Your responses will be timed. Begin. The four students stare at their separate screens as images APPEAR. Wesley watches the screen as various SHAPES (triangles, squares, etc.) APPEAR in various COLORS and PATTERNS, SPINNING in a space, ROTATING along their axes, and REAPPEARING with DIFFERENT markings. The PICTURE CHANGES rapidly from one to another in seemingly meaningless combinations. Wesley watches, then begins his move. 45 ANGLE ON WESLEY AND MORDOCK as they continue to predict the patterns and program the shapes and colors onto the screen before the computer does. Wesley is really having a good time. Mordock, on the other hand, is tense and misses one or two sequences, then has to go back. STAR TREK: "Coming Of Age" - 12/30/87 - ACT FOUR 41. 46 ACROSS THE ROOM T'Shanik moves methodically and calmly through the problems. Oliana moves with great bursts of energy, then pauses. 47 WESLEY pushes the console with ease. The time is rapidly diminishing. Mordock begins to struggle. MORDOCK I... I can't get... it. WESLEY Don't fight it. Relax into it and just do it automatically. MORDOCK No... it's going too fast! Mordock jabs at the controls, but his fingers trip over one another. Wesley glances over to Mordock's screen. WESLEY You're doing all right... Wesley looks back to his screen, and keeps up, but has lost a few seconds. MORDOCK No... no. Wesley, I can't do it. Wesley glances away again, points at Mordock's screen. WESLEY (DIALOGUE TO BE WRITTEN) Mordock realizes he's right, and punches the combination in, finishing the test. The last set of SHAPES FLASH different COLORS. Wesley finishes his test a beat later. COMPUTER VOICE Test completed. Mordock is very upset as Chang COMES BACK INTO the room. MORDOCK Mister Chang... STAR TREK: "Coming Of Age" - 12/30/87 - ACT FOUR 42. 47 CONTINUED: CHANG Congratulations, Mordock. That was the second fastest time recorded on this test. You all did well. MORDOCK It should not have been that way. Mister Crusher helped me. CHANG Yes. I know. An interesting choice, Mister Crusher. Especially considering how close you and Mister Mordock are in overall score. WESLEY Yes, sir. CHANG You all have an hour to prepare for your last test. WESLEY The Psych Test, sir? CHANG We prefer to think of it as a psychological evaluation based on reactions to various individual problems. (smiles) But the Psych Test will do. 48 EXT. SPACE - THE ENTERPRISE (OPTICAL) orbiting Relva 7. 49 INT. ENTERPRISE - ADMIRAL'S QUARTERS Remmick ENTERS. REMMICK Sir. QUINN Please sit down, Mister Remmick. Proceed with your report. STAR TREK: "Coming Of Age" - 12/30/87 - ACT FOUR 43. 49 CONTINUED: Picard is intent, ready and willing to hear Remmick's findings. Remmick is very uncomfortable. REMMICK Admiral, I've done my best to be objective during this investigation. And yet, I feel a sense of failure. He hesitates. QUINN Continue. REMMICK I couldn't find what you asked, sir. I spoke with officer after officer, at length. I probed the log reports. And I have found nothing wrong. Except, perhaps, a casual familiarity among the bridge crew, but... mostly that comes from a sense of teamwork. (beat) I'm sorry, sir. I did my best. QUINN Quite. You're dismissed, Commander. REMMICK Yes, sir. He gets up to leave, and pauses at the door. REMMICK (continuing) Captain Picard, my tour in the Inspector General's office will be up in six months. When I'm finished, this is where I'd like to serve, sir. He nods and LEAVES. Picard looks at Quinn. QUINN Don't judge the young man too harshly. He's a good officer. PICARD It's not him I'm judging. STAR TREK: "Coming Of Age" - 12/30/87 - ACT FOUR 44. 49 CONTINUED: (2) QUINN Don't judge me too harshly, either. Not until I'm finished. We had to be very sure about you. (beat) Some time ago, a few of us in Starfleet Command became suspicious of problems within the Federation. PICARD What kind of problems? QUINN Something or someone is trying to destroy the fabric of all we've built over the last two hundred years. PICARD What's your evidence? QUINN I can't go into that. Too many other people are involved. But if we're right, this is the most critical time in the history of the Federation. PICARD What do you want from me? QUINN I don't know if the threat is coming from within or from the outside. I need people I can trust in strong positions throughout the Federation. PICARD You have my complete support. You know that. QUINN Not enough. I want to promote you to admiral, Jean-Luc. I want you to take over as Commandant of Starfleet Academy. PICARD The Academy? STAR TREK: "Coming Of Age" - 12/30/87 - ACT FOUR 45. 49 CONTINUED: (3) QUINN Yes. I need you close. PICARD Then there was never a problem with the Enterprise. QUINN No. I had to be sure you hadn't been co-opted. PICARD Greg, the real issue is politics. I'm no good at politics. Surely there are others more suited. Picard isn't sure how to take all of this. QUINN I sense you're doubtful about this. All right. Suppose it's the rambling paranoia of an old man. Even if I am wrong, and I hope I am, you're still the best man for the job. PICARD I appreciate the value of what you're offering. It's not something I can decide quickly. Quinn pushes him. QUINN I need your answer soon, Captain. PICARD All right. You'll have it tonight, Admiral. As they shake hands, WE FADE OUT. END OF ACT FOUR STAR TREK: "Coming Of Age" - 12/30/87 - ACT FIVE 46. ACT FIVE FADE IN: 50 EXT. RELVA 7 (OPTICAL) ESTABLISHING. 51 INT. RELVA 7 - CORRIDOR Wesley sits nervously waiting outside the Testing Room. He closes his eyes and tries to do breathing exercises to keep himself calm. Chang COMES OUT of the Testing Room. CHANG Mister Mordock will be finished with his Psych Test momentarily. Wesley watches the door, waiting. It slides OPEN, but no one is there. Then... Mordock EMERGES, badly shaken, his face covered with sweat. He looks down at his hands. WESLEY Mordock? Are you... all right? Mordock tries not to scare Wesley. MORDOCK I will be... CHANG Mister Crusher... you're next. Good luck. Chang gestures for Wesley to enter. Wesley hesitates, then STEPS THROUGH. The door slides SHUT behind him. 52 OMITTED 53 INT. RELVA 7 - TESTING ROOM An ordinary room. White walls, two or three chairs, no windows. Wesley looks around for some guidance as to the next step. He waits a beat, then looks around and decides to sit down. Still nothing. STAR TREK: "Coming Of Age" - 12/30/87 - ACT FIVE 47. 53 CONTINUED: WESLEY Hello? He gets up and starts to pace. WESLEY (continuing) I'm here. I'm, uh, ready. Nothing. He sits down again. WESLEY (continuing; muttering) Maybe they forgot. Wesley jumps up again and resumes pacing. WESLEY (continuing) Breathe. Gotta remember to breathe. He's startled by something -- a sound, a sense of something wrong. He becomes alert, checking out the room. He takes another deep breath, then realizes he hears something in the distance -- MUFFLED THUD. He moves towards the door he entered. He listens intently near the door, and hears a LOUDER NOISE. Wesley opens the door manually and ENTERS the corridor. 54 INT. RELVA 7 - LONG CORRIDOR Several more O.S. EXPLOSIONS. Wesley runs towards its source. He reaches a door and hears ALARMS RINGING and another EXPLOSION. The door says: "ENVIRONMENTAL MAINTENANCE LABORATORY." He runs down the empty corridor and YELLS. WESLEY Somebody help! Something's wrong in the lab! There is no response. Then he hears: TECHNICIAN #1 (V.O.) Help! We're trapped. Help! We're gonna die. COMPUTER VOICE (V.O.) Evacuate immediately. Sixty-five seconds to life-support seal-off. Wesley presses the wallplate and the door GLIDES OPEN. STAR TREK: "Coming Of Age" - 12/30/87 - ACT FIVE 48. 55 INT. RELVA 7 - ENVIRONMENTAL LAB Wesley ENTERS cautiously. The door CLOSES behind him. WIND HOWLS through the room, which has been partially trashed by the explosions. It's FREEZING. A large pipe has fractured, allowing fumes of liquid hydrogen (or another gas) and a vortex of wind to act as a barrier between Wesley and the TWO TECHNICIANS. TECHNICIAN #1 is cowered in a corner, uninjured, YELLING, on the other side of the wind tunnel. His pathway out is partially blocked by debris, so he must cross the vortex to get to the door. TECHNICIAN #2, is trapped, under a piece of equipment on the far side of the vortex, not far from Technician #1. Wesley hesitates, then makes his way ACROSS the HOWLING WIND to the injured Technician. The WIND and COLD continue to batter the two of them. COMPUTER VOICE Evacuate immediately. Forty-five seconds to life-support seal-off. Wesley tries to move the equipment off the trapped man. WESLEY (to Technician #1) Help me move this! The Technician remains cowered in the corner, shaking his head. Wesley keeps pushing the equipment. WESLEY (continuing) You have to help me! TECHNICIAN #1 I can't! It's too late. We're going to die! The liquid hydrogen's gonna blow! TECHNICIAN #2 Please don't leave me! The shut-off valve ruptured. If we don't get out of here fast, they'll seal us off to contain the explosion! STAR TREK: "Coming Of Age" - 12/30/87 - ACT FIVE 49. 55 CONTINUED: COMPUTER VOICE Evacuate immediately. Twenty-five seconds to seal-off. Wesley finds something to use as a lever. The equipment begins to move slightly. Beads of sweat pour off Wesley's face as he makes a Herculean last effort. Technician #2's leg is free. Wesley drags him out. He turns to Technician #1. WESLEY Come on! TECHNICIAN #1 There's no way out! I can't move through that! WESLEY You have to. I can't carry you both! You can walk. Come on. COMPUTER VOICE Evacuate immediately. Five seconds to seal-off. Technician #1 remains terrified in the corner. Wesley hesitates a moment, then half-carries, half-drags Technician #2 through the vortex towards the exit. He looks back: WESLEY I'm sorry. Wesley pulls Technician #2 THROUGH THE DOOR to the corridor. 56 INT. RELVA 7 - CORRIDOR Wesley pulls Technician #2 THROUGH THE DOOR INTO the corridor. The door SNAPS SHUT behind him. Chang is standing there, waiting. Wesley's heart is pounding, his adrenaline up. WESLEY Officer Chang! There's been an... CHANG It's all right, Wesley. The "injured" Technician gets up, brushes himself off, and shakes Wesley's hand. Wesley's shocked. STAR TREK: "Coming Of Age" - 12/30/87 - ACT FIVE 50. 56 CONTINUED: TECHNICIAN #2 Thanks. He WALKS down the corridor, leaving Wesley with Chang. Wesley's still pale and breathing shallowly, when Technician #1 EXITS the Lab, nods to them both, and FOLLOWS the other Technician. CHANG. Excellent performance, Mister Crusher. WESLEY Performance?!... That was the test. CHANG Yes. WESLEY But a man died! CHANG Theoretically, yes. You had to make a choice. And you did. There's no right or wrong about it. Your greatest fear has been that you couldn't make that decision. Wesley just looks at him, and nods his head slowly. WESLEY Because of my father? Because Cap... someone made that choice and my father died. Chang smiles and pats Wesley on the shoulder. 57 EXT. SPACE - THE ENTERPRISE (OPTICAL) orbiting Relva 7. 58 INT. CAPTAIN'S READY ROOM Picard is standing as Riker ENTERS. RIKER Sir? STAR TREK: "Coming Of Age" - 12/30/87 - ACT FIVE 51. 58 CONTINUED: PICARD Yes, Number One? RIKER Mister Remmick has left the ship. PICARD Yes. He found nothing wrong on the Enterprise. You may inform the crew that Admiral Quinn is most impressed. RIKER Thank you. They'll be pleased... Can you explain now what he was after? PICARD They were after me, Number One. They want me to take over as Commandant of Starfleet Academy. RIKER Congratulations! What a wonderful choice, sir! You'll be able to shape the minds of the future leaders of Starfleet. He looks at Picard, realizes his ambivalence. RIKER (continuing) You haven't decided what you're going to do. PICARD Yes I have, Number One. I'm going for a walk. 59 EXT. RELVA 7 (OPTICAL) ESTABLISHING. 60 INT. RELVA 7 - CLASSROOM Chang is at the front of the class as the four students await his decision. Wesley, Oliana and Mordock are nervous, T'Shanik impassive. STAR TREK: "Coming Of Age" - 12/30/87 - ACT FIVE 52. 60 CONTINUED: CHANG I'm proud of all of you. You've done a superb job. Each of you would make a fine Starfleet officer. It's unfair that only one candidate from Relva will attend the Academy this year -- and a loss to the Federation if the rest of you do not return to test again... Mister Mordock will be the candidate. His results were slightly higher than Mister Crusher's. Congratulations, Mister Mordock. You are the first Benzite in Starfleet. Wesley slumps in his seat. Mordock looks at all of them, then turns to Chang. MORDOCK Thank you, sir, but it's not right. It shouldn't be me. Wesley lost points because he helped me. He shouldn't be punished for his generosity. CHANG He wasn't. He lost time, but it wasn't only that... Candidates, thank you and good luck. They all stand as Chang EXITS. MORDOCK I am sorry, Wesley. WESLEY It's okay. You deserved to win. Besides, you would've done the same thing for me. They all look questioningly at Mordock, who hesitates. Then he looks at his comrades: MORDOCK Yes. I believe I would. T'Shanik APPROACHES Mordock. T'SHANIK Congratulations. STAR TREK: "Coming Of Age" - 12/30/87 - ACT FIVE 53. 60 CONTINUED: (2) She nods to the others and LEAVES the room as Oliana and Wesley shake hands with Mordock. OLIANA Well, personally, I hate losing. So you'd better be ready next year, Wesley. I won't be easy to beat. Wesley smiles at the thought of seeing her again, whatever the circumstances. 61 EXT. SPACE - THE ENTERPRISE (OPTICAL) ESTABLISHING. 62 thru OMITTED 63 64 INT. CORRIDOR Picard strides down the corridor when he runs into Jake Kurland, who takes one look at him and would like to be anywhere else on the Enterprise. PICARD Mister Kurland! JAKE Yes, sir. Picard is uncomfortable around him. PICARD Are you... feeling better? JAKE Yes, sir... I'm sorry I damaged the shuttle. But Mister Riker says I can work on fixing it as part of my "discipline" training. PICARD Good idea. I hope you learned that running away doesn't solve anything, young man. JAKE Yes, sir. I'm sorry I messed up. STAR TREK: "Coming Of Age" - 12/30/87 - ACT FIVE 54. 64 CONTINUED: PICARD I know. But you did keep your wits about you out there... don't forget that. JAKE No, sir. And... thank you for saving my life. Now Picard would rather be anywhere else on the ship. PICARD You're welcome. He turns and WALKS BACK the other way. 64A OMITTED 65 INT. OBSERVATION LOUNGE Wesley stands there, alone and melancholy, staring at the starfield outside the window. Picard ENTERS. PICARD Mister Crusher? Why aren't you in your dress uniform for Admiral Quinn's farewell dinner? WESLEY I... I didn't think it would be appropriate. PICARD Why not? WESLEY I failed, Captain. I didn't get into the Academy. I failed you... and the Enterprise. PICARD Ridiculous. Did you do your best? A beat. Wesley nods. STAR TREK: "Coming Of Age" - 12/30/87 - ACT FIVE 55. 65 CONTINUED: PICARD (continuing) When you test next year -- and you will test again -- do you think your performance will improve? WESLEY Well, yes... PICARD Good. The only person you're truly competing against is yourself. WESLEY Then you're not disappointed? PICARD Your failures and successes have to be measured within, Wesley. Not by me or anyone else... But if it helps you to know this, I failed my first time. And you may not tell anyone! WESLEY You? You failed? PICARD Yes. But not the second time. Now, do me the honor of sitting next to me at dinner. I'm going to have to disappoint an old friend. Picard smiles at Wesley as they walk to the door. 65A INT. TRANSPORTER ROOM (OPTICAL) Picard and Quinn stand next to the platform. The only other person in the room is Tasha, at the controls. QUINN I wish I could convince you to change your mind. PICARD I'll serve you better here. Quinn gives up. STAR TREK: "Coming Of Age" - 12/30/87 - ACT FIVE 56. 65A CONTINUED: QUINN This is where you belong. PICARD If you need me... Quinn brushes aside Picard's concern. QUINN I've been playing politics too long. Perhaps I see conspiracy everywhere. Don't worry. Quinn shakes Picard's hand and then steps onto the platform. QUINN (continuing) Safe travels, my friend. Quinn nods to Tasha, who works the console. Picard stares at Quinn for a long time, as if memorizing what he looks like. The admiral is BEAMED DOWN. 65B INT. MAIN BRIDGE Picard STEPS OFF the turbolift. He walks to where Wesley sits at the Conn, and stands between Wesley and Data. PICARD Set course to Algeron 4, Mister Crusher. WESLEY Course plotted and laid in, sir. PICARD You know, we're really alike, you and I. Both explorers to the core... Engage, Mister Crusher. Wesley smiles happily at Picard's praise. 66 EXT. SPACE - THE ENTERPRISE (OPTICAL) moves off to its next destination, as WE: FADE OUT. END OF ACT FIVE THE END STAR TREK: THE NEXT GENERATION "Heart Of Glory" #40271-120 Written by Maurice Hurley Directed by Rob Bowman THE WRITING CREDITS MAY NOT BE FINAL AND SHOULD NOT BE USED FOR PUBLICITY OR ADVERTISING PURPOSES WITHOUT FIRST CHECKING WITH THE TELEVISION LEGAL DEPARTMENT. Copyright 1988 Paramount Pictures Corporation. All Rights Reserved. This script is not for publication or reproduction. No one is authorized to dispose of same. If lost or destroyed, please notify the Script Department. REV. FINAL DRAFT JANUARY 13, 1988 STAR TREK: "Heart Of Glory" - 1/13/88 - CAST STAR TREK: THE NEXT GENERATION "Heart Of Glory" CAST PICARD KLINGONS RIKER CAPTAIN KORRIS BEVERLY LIEUTENANT KONMEL DATA KUNIVAS TASHA CAPTAIN K'NERA WORF GEORDI NURSE GUARD (RAMOS) Non-Speaking MOTHER DAUGHTER SECURITY TEAM ONE GUARD STAR TREK: "Heart Of Glory" - 1/13/88 - SETS STAR TREK: THE NEXT GENERATION "Heart Of Glory" SETS INTERIORS EXTERIORS USS ENTERPRISE USS ENTERPRISE Main bridge Transporter Room THE BATRIS Sickbay Guest Quarters Various corridors Security Area Main Engineering THE BATRIS corridor Main Engineering Auxiliary Control Room - Engineering Compartment STAR TREK: "Heart Of Glory" - 1/13/88 - TEASER 1. STAR TREK: THE NEXT GENERATION "Heart Of Glory" TEASER FADE IN: A1 EXT. SPACE - THE ENTERPRISE (OPTICAL) moving at sub-warp. 1 INT. MAIN BRIDGE Minimum BRIDGE CREW -- TASHA; GEORDI is at Conn; DATA at Ops; RIKER and PICARD in the Command Position. WORF turns from his Aft Station. WORF Captain! Communication from Starfleet. They have recorded a disturbance in the Neutral Zone. 2 REACTIONS PICARD What is the nature of the disturbance? WORF A battle. Quadrant nine -- coordinates zero-seven-zero, mark three. No information who is involved. They are asking if we can investigate. PICARD Answer "affirmative." (to Geordi) Lieutenant La Forge, lay in the course. DATA Captain, I have no reports of any Federation ships in that area. RIKER Ferengi? PICARD It's a little out of their area. STAR TREK: "Heart Of Glory" - REV. 1/14/88 - TEASER 2. 2 CONTINUED: RIKER Should we separate the saucer? PICARD Let's get some more information first. GEORDI Course set. PICARD Speed -- warp seven. GEORDI Warp seven. Aye. PICARD Engage. 3 EXT. SPACE - THE ENTERPRISE (OPTICAL) as it warps towards us. 4 INT. MAIN BRIDGE It's very tense. Worf at Science; Data at Ops; Picard -- alert, watching. GEORDI We are approaching the Neutral Zone. TASHA Sir... Sensors indicate several recent photon explosions and heavy phaser activity. DATA I have analyzed the residue of the explosives. They are not of any known Ferengi design. It is possibly Romulan. Picard REACTS. STAR TREK: "Heart Of Glory" - 1/13/88 - TEASER 3. 4 CONTINUED: PICARD That's a name we haven't heard for a while. RIKER And I could have gone a lot longer without hearing it. PICARD If the Romulans have returned to this sector we should know about it. RIKER Shall we move to the Battle bridge? PICARD Not yet. Worf, any further activity? WORF Negative, sir. PICARD Slow to half impulse. GEORDI Slowing to one-half impulse. 5 EXT. SPACE - THE ENTERPRISE (OPTICAL) The ship comes out of warp speed. 6 INT. MAIN BRIDGE Everyone is tense and expectant. GEORDI Entering quadrant nine-zero-seven, mark three. PICARD Shields and deflectors up. DATA I have located a ship. It is drifting. STAR TREK: "Heart Of Glory" - REV. 1/15/88 - TEASER 4. 6 CONTINUED: PICARD On the Main Viewer. DATA Aye, sir. 7 ANGLE TO INCLUDE MAIN VIEWER (OPTICAL) There is a distant ship. PICARD Magnify! The IMAGE on the Screen INCREASES in size. It is now possible to see extensive battle damage. DATA The life-support systems on the ship are failing, propulsion, navigation, and all communication, inoperative. PICARD Any trace of the other ship? DATA None, sir. RIKER If it is a Romulan vessel, it could be cloaked. PICARD (to Worf) Send this to Starfleet. We are entering the Neutral Zone. (to Geordi) Get us in a little closer, Mister La Forge. Stay sharp everyone. 8 OMITTED 9 INT. MAIN BRIDGE - TO INCLUDE MAIN VIEWER (OPTICAL) which displays THE BATRIS. Everyone studies the damaged vessel as the Enterprise moves around it. STAR TREK: "Heart Of Glory" - 1/13/88 - TEASER 5. 9 CONTINUED: RIKER It's Talarian. PICARD Any life signs? WORF Nothing yet. There is a lot of tension. DATA I have identified the vessel. It is the Batris. A general cargo vessel. RIKER Long way from home. PICARD Stay sharp. If this is a result of a Romulan attack, they could still be in the area. WORF Captain. Possible life signs. PICARD What do you mean "possible?" WORF I cannot be positive. The readings emanate from a location near what is left of Main Engineering. There is a great deal of magnetic and radioactive clutter making a positive determination difficult. RIKER I'll prepare an away team. PICARD Lieutenant Yar, remain at your post. Whoever attacked the freighter may still be in the area. TASHA (reluctantly) Aye, sir. STAR TREK: "Heart Of Glory" - 1/13/88 - TEASER 6. 9 CONTINUED: (2) RIKER Data, Geordi. Let's go. PICARD Lieutenant La Forge, are we close enough to use the Visual Acuity transmitter? GEORDI We can try it, sir. PICARD Then please do. And Number One - everything about this seems wrong. RIKER Agreed. It smells like a trap. And they DEPART. FADE OUT. END OF TEASER STAR TREK: "Heart Of Glory" - REV. 1/14/88 - ACT ONE 7. ACT ONE FADE IN: 10 EXT. SPACE - THE ENTERPRISE (OPTICAL) as it slowly APPROACHES the other ship. PICARD (V.O.) Captain's log, stardate 41503.7. We have entered the Neutral Zone. A Talarian freighter has been severely damaged in a battle. Why, and with whom is unknown. Personal note: I hope this event is not a precursor of things to come, and that the peace which has endured for the last several decades will continue. 11 INT. TRANSPORTER ROOM Riker, Data and Geordi have gathered and are preparing to beam over. A check of equipment. Geordi clips on the transmitter for his VISOR. RIKER What exactly does that device do? GEORDI Data and I have been working on a way to transmit what my VISOR sees. If it works, the bridge will be able to monitor us. DATA It is very restricted. The signal from Geordi's VISOR is so complex that it is difficult to encode and breaks down easily. RIKER That means it doesn't have much range. GEORDI Correct. The effective range is a few kilometers, but we're working on that. (touches communicator) Bridge, this is Lieutenant La Forge. STAR TREK: "Heart Of Glory" - 1/13/88 - ACT ONE 8. 11 CONTINUED: WORF'S COM VOICE This is the bridge. GEORDI I have attached the Visual Acuity Transmitter. WORF'S COM VOICE We are receiving. GEORDI I am switching off. 12 ANOTHER ANGLE as they gather on the Transporter Pad. RIKER Set phasers on stun. They all check their weapons. RIKER (continuing) Let's be ready for anything. He takes a quick, final look at his team. RIKER (continuing; to the TRANSPORTER CHIEF) Energize. 13 INT. BATRIS - CORRIDOR (OPTICAL) The corridor is very DIMLY LIGHTED. There is evidence of the recent battle everywhere. Charred walls - damaged bulkheads. The transporter effect brings the away team INTO THE SCENE. They are very tense. Data scans with his tricorder as the others look around. 14 GEORDI steps slightly to the side. GEORDI La Forge to Enterprise. STAR TREK: "Heart Of Glory" - 1/13/88 - ACT ONE 9. 15 INT. MAIN BRIDGE Picard on the bridge. PICARD This is the Enterprise. GEORDI'S COM VOICE Captain, I am switching on the transmitter. PICARD Ready to receive. (to the bridge crew) Put this on the Main Viewer. He leans forward as the IMAGE COMES ON the Screen. For the first time, Picard sees as Geordi sees. (Pattern and image to be determined.) PICARD Extraordinary. 16 INTERCUT The other members of the bridge crew as they, too, REACT with astonishment. PICARD I understand him better than I ever have. 17 MAIN VIEWER (OPTICAL) Geordi's VISIONS. (TBD) 18 ANGLE ON PICARD (OPTICAL) For a moment all else is forgotten as he is consumed by the image on the Main Viewer. PICARD Geordi. What was that? Over to the left. Geordi looks to the left. GEORDI'S COM VOICE What? STAR TREK: "Heart Of Glory" - 1/13/88 - ACT ONE 10. 18 CONTINUED: PICARD That -- right there? No -- back. Yes. That -- right there. What is it? GEORDI'S COM VOICE It's Commander Riker. PICARD To me it's just an undefined upright form, standing in a wild visual frenzy. Can you filter out the extraneous information? GEORDI'S COM VOICE No, I get it all simultaneously. PICARD It's a jumble. How can you make heads or tails of it? GEORDI'S COM VOICE I select what I want to see and disregard the rest. PICARD How is that possible? 19 INT. BATRIS - CORRIDOR Geordi chuckles. GEORDI How, in a noisy room, can you pick out one specific voice or sound? PICARD'S COM VOICE It's something you learn. GEORDI Exactly. It's something I have learned. Does that make it clearer? 20 INT. MAIN BRIDGE (OPTICAL) Picard stares at the viewscreen, trying to accomplish in minutes what took Geordi a lifetime to learn. STAR TREK: "Heart Of Glory" - REV. 1/14/88 - ACT ONE 11. 20 CONTINUED: PICARD Yes. Look over at Data. Geordi complies and WE SEE the difference between them from Geordi's point of view. PICARD (continuing) There's an aura around Data. GEORDI'S COM VOICE Yes, of course. He's an android. 21 INT. BATRIS - CORRIDOR Data and Riker are getting impatient with this conversation. PICARD'S COM VOICE From the way you say that, you must think we all see it. GEORDI Don't you? RIKER Captain - I don't mean to break this up, but... PICARD'S COM VOICE Yes, of course, Number One. Proceed. Riker leads the away team down the corridor. DATA I am detecting high levels of Deuterium gas. Probably coming from the leakage in the drive system. RIKER Toxic? DATA Not as yet. STAR TREK: "Heart Of Glory" - 1/13/88 - ACT ONE 12. 22 OMITTED 23 INT. BATRIS - ANOTHER ANGLE - CORRIDOR As the members of the Enterprise move forward, the damage becomes move extensive. They pause at an intersection. DATA The life signs are emanating from the far side of Engineering. RIKER What's the safest way around? DATA All routes are equally dangerous. GEORDI Which one is the least dangerous? DATA There is no significant difference. RIKER Then steady on. Geordi notices something. GEORDI Commander, a fissure is developing in the bulkhead. The skin of the ship is losing its integrity. RIKER Where? I don't see it. GEORDI There. Riker looks, but still cannot see anything except the charred bulkhead. 24 INT. MAIN BRIDGE (OPTICAL) Picard is standing in front of the Main Viewer. PICARD Step closer. Geordi complies. STAR TREK: "Heart Of Glory" - 1/13/88 - ACT ONE 13. 24 CONTINUED: PICARD (continuing) It looks to me like a spectrograph indicating metal fatigue. Is that how you interpret it? GEORDI'S COM VOICE Correct, Captain. 25 INT. BATRIS - CORRIDOR Riker steps up beside Geordi. RIKER How long before the hull ruptures? GEORDI Impossible to be exact. Five minutes -- probably less. RIKER Come on. 25A ANOTHER ANGLE They move forward into the DARKENED corridor toward the WHITE GLOW coming from what was the Engineering Section of the Batris. 25B INT. MAIN BRIDGE (OPTICAL) (FORMERLY SCENE 35) as Picard watches Geordi's POV, his IMAGE BREAKS UP, then GOES OUT. PICARD I've lost the transmission. GEORDI'S COM VOICE Signal overload. I'm surprised it lasted this long. 26 INT. BATRIS - MAIN ENGINEERING As the away team COMES to the entrance. All except Data cover up against the heat and INTENSE LIGHT. STAR TREK: "Heart Of Glory" - 1/13/88 - ACT ONE 14. 27 INT. MAIN BRIDGE as Picard and the others on the bridge listen to what is happening on the Batris. 28 INT. BATRIS - MAIN ENGINEERING Data makes a sweep with his tricorder. DATA The life signs are very strong now. They are coming from over there. RIKER Is there any other way around? DATA Negative. This is the only way. I think the safest way to proceed is for me to cross alone. The heat and toxic gases have less effect on me. RIKER Agreed. 29 ANOTHER ANGLE as Data walks through the maelstrom. 30 ANGLE ON RIKER AND GEORDI They watch Data DISAPPEAR through the wall of heated gases. 31 INT. MAIN BRIDGE Picard listens. 32 INT. BATRIS - MAIN ENGINEERING Riker and Geordi wait impatiently. 33 INT. MAIN BRIDGE As Picard listens. STAR TREK: "Heart Of Glory" - 1/13/88 - ACT ONE 15. 34 INT. BATRIS - MAIN ENGINEERING What Picard saw was Data RETURNING. He pauses halfway across the Engineering compartment. DATA I found them. The door to their compartment is jammed. One by one they cover up from the intense heat and SPRINT ACROSS the Engineering section. 35 OMITTED 36 INT. BATRIS - CORRIDOR They arrive in front of the sealed compartment. The damage here is more severe. Torn pieces of bulkhead block the door to the compartment. DATA The control mechanism. It is inoperative. Riker squeezes his arm through a twisted piece of metal and pounds on the door. RIKER This is Commander Riker of the USS Enterprise. Can you hear me? There is no response. DATA I advise against the use of phasers. The gas buildup is too great, Commander. GEORDI Yes. A phaser discharge now could blow us all out of here. They BACK OFF. 37 OMITTED 38 INT. BATRIS - DOOR TO AUXILIARY CONTROL ROOM Data clears the doorway of debris. STAR TREK: "Heart Of Glory" - REV. 1/14/88 - ACT ONE 16. 39 INT. MAIN BRIDGE Picard is frustrated at no longer being able to see what's happening to the away team. PICARD What's going on? RIKER'S COM VOICE We are about to force the door. 40 INT. BATRIS - DOOR TO AUXILIARY CONTROL ROOM as Data steps closer to the door. With considerable difficulty he wedges one hand in between the sliding door panels. Then slowly he gets the other hand in place. Data, now with both hands in between the door panels, puts his great strength to work again, and slowly pries the doors APART. 41 thru OMITTED 42 43 ANOTHER ANGLE As soon as there is enough of an opening, both Riker and Geordi put their shoulders to the job, and between them all the door is OPENED. Riker STEPS THROUGH. 44 INT. BATRIS - ENGINEERING COMPARTMENT As Riker ENTERS the room he sees TWO BLURRED FIGURES. The first steps forward. It's dreamlike. A figure looms out of the DARKNESS. A very tall, very fierce KLINGON. PICARD'S COM VOICE What is it? What are you seeing? RIKER Klingons. 45 INT. MAIN BRIDGE Picard REACTS to this new twist. STAR TREK: "Heart Of Glory" - 1/13/88 - ACT ONE 17. 45 CONTINUED: PICARD Klingons. Worf REACTS. FADE OUT. END OF ACT ONE STAR TREK: "Heart Of Glory" - 1/13/88 - ACT TWO 18. ACT TWO FADE IN: 46 OMITTED 46A INT. MAIN BRIDGE (FORMERLY SCENE 47A) PICARD Tasha, go to Transporter Room Three. I want you there when the away team returns. 47 INT. BATRIS - ENGINEERING COMPARTMENT The Klingon, KORRIS, moves forward to begin formalized greetings. KORRIS I am Korris. RIKER We'll handle the formalities later - right now we have to get off this ship. Are there any others still alive? KORRIS No. Data APPEARS in the torn hatchway. DATA I believe there is a quicker way out of here. GEORDI Let's go. Riker indicates a third figure on the floor. RIKER Check him, Data. Data steps over and scans the figure with his tricorder. DATA He is alive -- but just barely. STAR TREK: "Heart Of Glory" - 1/13/88 - ACT TWO 19. 47 CONTINUED: RIKER Pick him up and let's get out of here. Data starts to lift the stricken man. Korris steps up beside Data. KORRIS No. I will carry him. DATA As you wish. 47A OMITTED 48 INT. BATRIS - CORRIDOR as the group hurries through the debris. There is a BOILING, RUMBLING EFFECT on the ship. GEORDI We're out of time, Commander -- the ship's going to blow. RIKER Transporter Room, have you got a lock on us? TASHA'S COM VOICE Not yet. Too much interference. You have to get farther away from the Engineering section. Behind them there is an ominous change in the GAS BUILDUP. 49 INT. MAIN BRIDGE Everyone watches the screen. Worf, from his Science Station where he is monitoring the Batris: WORF Sir, the Engineering section is at critical. Destruction of the Batris is imminent. STAR TREK: "Heart Of Glory" - REV. 1/14/88 - ACT TWO 20. 50 INT. BATRIS - CORRIDOR They come to a bend in the corridor, turn the corner and bump into a solid wall of debris. RIKER End of the line. Transporter Room, we've gone as far as we can. Get us off -- now! The away team and the Klingons stand ready to beam. 51 OMITTED 52 INT. TRANSPORTER ROOM as Lieutenant Yar tries to get a solid fix on the away team. TASHA It's not good. I can't get locked on. PICARD'S COM VOICE They're out of options. Do it. Tasha energizes. 53 INT. BATRIS - CORRIDOR (OPTICAL) The BEAM OUT BEGINS, then STOPS, then TRIES TO START again. 54 INT. TRANSPORTER ROOM Tasha shakes her head in frustration, makes an attempt to fine-tune her equipment and tries again. 55 INT. BATRIS - CORRIDOR A CLOUD BOILS up at the end of the corridor. There is a CRACKLING SOUND, followed by a RUMBLE. ANGLE ON THE AWAY TEAM They REACT. STAR TREK: "Heart Of Glory" - REV. 1/14/88 - ACT TWO 21. 56 EXT. SPACE - THE BATRIS (OPTICAL) As it BLOWS UP. 56A INT. MAIN BRIDGE REACTION to the explosion of the Batris and the concern that the away team may have been lost. 57 INT. TRANSPORTER ROOM (OPTICAL) As the six figures slowly STACK UP on the platform. RIKER Bridge, this is Commander Riker. We are taking the survivors to Sickbay. TASHA (steps over to the platform) I'll need your weapons. 58 INT. MAIN BRIDGE Picard, relieved, gets up from his Command Chair. PICARD I'll be in Sickbay. WORF Captain. Request permission to join you. Picard hesitates for a beat, then: PICARD Granted. 59 INT. SICKBAY BEVERLY and her NURSE are working on the most seriously injured Klingon. Riker is slightly off to the side. Data and Geordi have returned to their duties. Picard and Worf ENTER. The two Klingons REACT with surprise at seeing one of their countrymen. PICARD Situation, Doctor. BEVERLY His injuries are serious. Picard then turns to the other two. STAR TREK: "Heart Of Glory" - 1/13/88 - ACT TWO 22. 59 CONTINUED: PICARD I am Jean-Luc Picard, the captain of this vessel. KORRIS My name is Korris -- captain of the Klingon Defense Force. This is Lieutenant Konmel. PICARD Do you mind telling me what happened? KORRIS Not at all. PICARD Firstly, what were you doing on that ship? It's not Klingon. KORRIS We were passengers. The Talarians were taking us to outpost M-Zed-Five. PICARD What was the ship doing in the Neutral Zone? KORRIS We were attacked without warning by a Ferengi cruiser. During the course of the battle we must have unknowingly entered the Neutral Zone. WORF The weapons were not Ferengi. Now the two Klingons turn their full attention on Worf. It's a time for evaluation. KORRIS What is your name? WORF I am Lieutenant Worf. KORRIS And you are a member of this crew? STAR TREK: "Heart Of Glory" - 1/13/88 - ACT TWO 23. 59 CONTINUED: (2) WORF Yes. Korris pauses a beat, then continues. KORRIS You are correct. The weapons were Klingon, but the vessel was Ferengi. PICARD What precipitated the attack? KORRIS I don't know -- we were in our quarters. KONMEL The captain of the freighter had no combat experience so he did not anticipate the first attack, which was nearly fatal. KORRIS We took control -- with his permission. The Ferengi called for surrender. I told the captain to agree to all their terms. We had one chance -- I was confident it would be enough. KONMEL As adversaries the Ferengi are not very worthy. Worf listens with relish to the story of the battle. WORF Still, your weapons were limited, and their ship superior. KORRIS Yes -- all we had was an ancient battery of Merculite rockets. Our only chance was to trick them into lowering their shields. KONMEL We reduced power and lured them in. STAR TREK: "Heart Of Glory" - 1/13/88 - ACT TWO 24. 59 CONTINUED: (3) KORRIS They suspected nothing. KONMEL Then, when they lowered their shields to beam over a boarding party, we opened fire. WORF Your strategy was very sound. PICARD There are still a few items that are not clear. KORRIS Captain -- we are hungry and tired. PICARD Yes, of course. KORRIS If there is anything more you need to know about this incident -- we will be available. WORF Permission to show our guests to their quarters, Captain. PICARD Permission granted. Worf leads them OUT of Sickbay. RIKER What do you think, Captain? PICARD There's a lot more to this than we've been told. Why was the Talarian ship so far off course? What was its point of departure? RIKER And why would three Klingon officers hitch a ride on a broken-down freighter? STAR TREK: "Heart Of Glory" - 1/13/88 - ACT TWO 25. 59 CONTINUED: (4) PICARD Contact Starfleet -- find out what they know about Korris and company. RIKER It will take forty-eight hours for a message to get to Starfleet on subspace frequency. PICARD They are going to be with us for a while; we might as well learn all we can about them. RIKER Do you think I should have a security team assigned to our guests? PICARD No -- Worf is capable of dealing with anything that may arise. (to Beverly) How's your patient, Doctor? BEVERLY Not good. I'll keep you posted. Riker and Picard EXIT. Beverly's expression offers little cause for hope. 60 INT. GUEST QUARTERS as Worf and the two Klingons ENTER. In the b.g., Konmel goes directly to the food station. As Worf and Korris APPROACH the table, Konmel orders a Klingon meal - complete with Klingon ale. KORRIS KONMEL Sit, friend - let us eat. O'MAT - GRI - T'M - I did not know there are. PFFIOTS - Klingons serving on human Starfleet vessels. WORF As far as I know, I am the only one. Konmel comes over and pours three great glasses of ale. STAR TREK: "Heart Of Glory" - 1/13/88 - ACT TWO 26. 60 CONTINUED: KORRIS Tell me, what it is like for the hunter to lie down with the prey? Have they tamed you -- or have you always been docile? KONMEL Does it make you gentle? Has it filled your heart with peace? KORRIS Do glorious battles no longer inspire your dreams? WORF Why do you mock me? Why do you wish to anger me? KORRIS Only to see if it is still possible. WORF It is. The two Klingons give Worf a long look of evaluation. 61 OMITTED 62 INT. SICKBAY Beverly's aide (Nurse) calls to her. NURSE Doctor Crusher. I think you'd better look at this. Beverly COMES OUT of her office and INTO Sickbay. NURSE (continuing) The Klingon's condition is worsening. Beverly comes over and makes a quick examination. The Klingon's body JERKS VIOLENTLY. BEVERLY He's convulsing. STAR TREK: "Heart Of Glory" - 1/13/88 - ACT TWO 27. 62 CONTINUED: She does what is possible, but his condition has gone too far. 63 INT. GUEST QUARTERS The Klingons are finishing their meal. Worf has touched neither his food nor drink. PICARD'S COM VOICE Commander Korris, this is Captain Picard. KORRIS Yes, Captain. PICARD'S COM VOICE I am sorry to report -- your comrade's injuries are beyond our medical abilities. 64 INT. SICKBAY Picard is there with Worf, Korris and Konmel. BEVERLY He's dying. Korris and Konmel APPROACH their dying comrade. 65 ANGLE ON THE KLINGONS as they STEP OVER to the examining table. Korris takes KUNIVAS' head in his hands and turns it toward him. Kunivas opens his eyes and looks up. Korris leans forward and with his thumbs he keeps the dying man's eyes from closing. Korris leans even closer. Worf is drawn to them. 66 ANGLE ON WORF with Beverly and Picard standing beside him, watching the strange ritual. STAR TREK: "Heart Of Glory" - 1/13/88 - ACT TWO 28. 67 ANGLE ON THE KLINGONS It is intense, and very private. From one of the three, or maybe from all of them, it's difficult to tell, there comes a LOW RUMBLING GROWL as the moment of death approaches. Then -- with a SHUDDER it happens. The wounded man dies. For a beat, Korris continues to stare into the dead man's eyes. Then, like an explosion from the bowels of Valhalla -- the living Klingons, including Worf, throw back their heads and ROAR. 67A ANGLE ON PICARD AND BEVERLY as they REACT to the ritual. 68 OMITTED 69 BACK TO SCENE The three Klingons, shoulders touching -- faces skyward -- fill the room with a SOUND which comes from deep inside them. It is not the WAIL of the dead, but the exaltation of the victorious. Then -- as one, they stop. The looks they exchange between them are the looks of men who have participated in a great and noble victory. 70 ANGLE ON PICARD AND BEVERLY Both are awed by the ceremony. 70A KONMEL AND DEAD KLINGON Konmel pauses by the dead Klingon -- as if to say a final farewell. While no one is looking, he removes the spike from his comrade's boot. 71 BACK TO SCENE It's QUIET. The three Klingons are content. BEVERLY Is there any special arrangement you would like for the body? STAR TREK: "Heart Of Glory" - 1/13/88 - ACT TWO 29. 71 CONTINUED: KORRIS It is only an empty shell now. Please treat it as such. He EXITS with Konmel. Worf FOLLOWS and he exchanges a look with Picard as he passes. 72 OMITTED FADE OUT. END OF ACT TWO STAR TREK: "Heart Of Glory" - REV. 1/15/88 - ACT THREE30. ACT THREE FADE IN: 73 EXT. SPACE - THE ENTERPRISE (OPTICAL) ESTABLISHING. 74 INT. CORRIDOR Worf, Korris and Konmel walk along. KONMEL The opponent that killed Kunivas should have been an enemy -- then his death would have been even more glorious. WORF (stunned by the revelation) If the opponent was not an enemy... who was it? For a beat, neither Korris nor Konmel answer. WORF (continuing) Tell me -- what really happened? Korris gives Worf a long steady gaze. KORRIS I do not wish to anger you. We are after all, brothers lost among the infidels. (he pauses; then) How did you come to this ship and that uniform? WORF Through an act of kindness. The Romulans attacked the Khitomer outpost. Everyone was killed. I was buried under the rubble and left for dead. A human Starfleet officer found me. He took me to his home on Gault and told his wife to raise me as his son. STAR TREK: "Heart Of Glory" - REV. 1/15/88 - ACT THREE31. 74 CONTINUED: KONMEL How old were you? WORF Before the age of inclusion -- KONMEL That young? KORRIS (with disdain) Gault is a farming colony. WORF When my foster brother and I were of age we entered the Starfleet Academy. He hated it and returned to Gault. I stayed. KONMEL You haven't spent much time among your own kind. WORF Almost none. KORRIS So when the night was still and quiet, and the sound of the blood rushing through your veins filled your ears, the only way to silence it was to slip out into the night and, like the hunter that spawned you, join in the struggle of life and death... but you were unable... KONMEL ... And those around you did not understand. You frightened them. KORRIS They shunned you. Cursed you. Called you vile names, and you knew not why. Even now do you know why you are driven? Why you cannot relent -- or repent -- or confess -- or abstain? How could you know? There have been no other Klingons to lead you to that knowledge. STAR TREK: "Heart Of Glory" - 1/13/88 - ACT THREE 32. 74 CONTINUED: (2) WORF Yes -- those feelings are part of me, but I control them. They do not rule me. KORRIS Yes, to fit in, the humans demand you change the one thing you cannot change. Yet, because you cannot -- you do, for that too is the mark of the warrior. You said I mock you -- I do not. I salute you. There is a pause as the bonding which began in the death ritual, now continues. KONMEL But, against whom do you test yourself? Against what enemy do you charge into battle? WORF I have been in battle. Korris moves closer to Worf. KORRIS Then you understand. WORF I do. KORRIS Brother, this peace, this alliance, is like a living death to warriors like us. KONMEL You are right, we lied to your captain. We commandeered that freighter -- left the crew behind, and were in search of a place where we could live our lives as true Klingons. WORF You did not fight the Ferengi. KORRIS It was one of our own cruisers sent to bring us back. STAR TREK: "Heart Of Glory" - 1/13/88 - ACT THREE 33. 74 CONTINUED: (3) WORF (surprised) You destroyed a Klingon ship? KORRIS I did not want to battle our brothers. But, we had no choice. Our leaders sent the cruiser. They have been corrupted by the illusion of peace. KONMEL They have traded our birthright -- so they may die in their sleep... KORRIS ... A peace that makes the Klingon heart that beats in my chest wither and die. Worf looks at his fellow warriors for a long beat. Korris changes the mood. KORRIS (continuing) Is it permitted for you to show us around this ship? WORF Yes -- of course. 75 INT. MAIN BRIDGE Other than Worf, the crew is in their usual positions. DATA Captain, long-range sensors indicate another vessel approaching this area. PICARD Can you identify it, Mister Data? DATA No, sir. Not yet. PICARD Keep a close watch on it. We're too close to the Neutral Zone for it to be random. STAR TREK: "Heart Of Glory" - 1/13/88 - ACT THREE 34. 76 INT. MAIN ENGINEERING Worf proudly leads Korris and Konmel through, and the two visitors are suitably impressed. KONMEL What magnificent battles we could have at the helm of this ship. Worf gives him a sharp look. WORF Perhaps your dreams of glory no longer fit the time. They belong buried with the past. KORRIS Standing here we will never know. The answer lies out there. Our instincts will lead us. KONMEL Instincts that have not been dulled by living among "civilized" men. Worf studies him for a long beat. 77 INT. MAIN BRIDGE (OPTICAL) The usual crew. PICARD I believe, Number One, that was the first time outsiders witnessed the Klingon death ritual. I think I can figure out why they look into the dying man's eyes - but the howling... ? DATA It is a warning. PICARD To whom? DATA They are warning the dead -- beware -- a Klingon warrior is about to arrive. A shiver passes over Riker's body. STAR TREK: "Heart Of Glory" - REV. 1/14/88 - ACT THREE 35. 77 CONTINUED: GEORDI Captain, the unidentified vessel is moving towards us at warp five. Intersect in one hour, sixteen minutes, thirty-three seconds. PICARD Can we get a visual? GEORDI I can try, sir. Geordi works the controls. A PINPOINT APPEARS on the Main Viewscreen. PICARD Magnify. Geordi works the controls some more. A Klingon warship APPEARS. 78 OMITTED 79 ANGLE ON CREW as they stare at the viewer. RIKER Klingons. PICARD Open hailing frequencies, Lieutenant Yar. TASHA Hailing frequencies open. PICARD To Klingon cruiser -- this is Captain Jean-Luc Picard of the USS Enterprise. 80 FAVOR MAIN VIEWER (OPTICAL) As the image of the Klingon, CAPTAIN K'NERA, APPEARS. K'NERA I am Commander K'Nera. What is your purpose in this area? STAR TREK: "Heart Of Glory" - 1/13/88 - ACT THREE 36. 80 CONTINUED: PICARD We came to investigate a battle. We rescued three Klingon survivors. K'NERA Is that all that is left of the crew of the cruiser T'Acog? PICARD These men are not from the cruiser, they are off the freighter Batris. The leader is Captain Korris. The Klingon Commander REACTS with anger. K'NERA You have him? On your ship? He is alive? PICARD Yes. K'NERA He is a criminal. A renegade who with two others stole that freighter, and somehow destroyed the Klingon cruiser sent to bring them back. We expect the criminals to be delivered into our custody as soon as we are within transporter range. K'Nera CLICKS OFF. PICARD (to Tasha) Where are they now? Tasha checks her console. TASHA They are with Worf on Deck Seventeen. PICARD Deck Seventeen? STAR TREK: "Heart Of Glory" - 1/13/88 - ACT THREE 37. 80 CONTINUED: (2) TASHA Yes, sir -- next to the auxiliary turbolift to the Battle Bridge. Shall I alert Lieutenant Worf? PICARD No. Send a security team to Deck Seventeen. RIKER Captain, you don't think Worf would allow them access to the Battle Bridge? PICARD Right now, Number One, we cannot assume anything. TASHA Captain, should I stay at my tactical position or lead the security team? PICARD Lead the security team. And Lieutenant -- remember with whom you are dealing. TASHA Aye, sir. 81 INT. CORRIDOR The three Klingons walk. Korris stops and faces Worf. KORRIS We have heard this ship can separate in time of battle. WORF Yes. When relieved of its bulk, the Enterprise becomes an exceptional weapon. Behind Worf, Korris sees the security team ENTER the corridor. He instinctively knows why they are there. TASHA Worf. He turns. STAR TREK: "Heart Of Glory" - 1/13/88 - ACT THREE 38. 81 CONTINUED: KORRIS They are here for us. TASHA Step to the side. WORF What is the problem? TASHA The captain wants those two taken into custody. Worf looks at the two Klingons. KORRIS Do not let them take us, Worf. Help us. KONMEL Listen to the voice of your blood. You are not "of" these people. 81A ANGLE ON WORF He looks into Korris' eyes. This is a moment of decision for Worf. Then he looks down the corridor. 81B INT. CORRIDOR - WORF'S POV as Tasha and her security team edge CLOSER. 81C ANGLE ON WORF, KORRIS AND KONMEL Worf looks at Korris, then glances to the turbolift, which is only two steps away. Korris thinks he has read the thoughts racing through Worf's mind. KORRIS Yes. Join us. 81D ANGLE ON WORF It's a moment of decision, but it's impossible for us to tell which way Worf is going to go, and WE: FADE OUT. END OF ACT THREE STAR TREK: "Heart Of Glory" - 1/13/88 - ACT FOUR 39. ACT FOUR FADE IN: 82 INT. CORRIDOR As before -- Worf and the two Klingons; Tasha and her security team. Suddenly, the turbolift doors located between them, OPEN and a mother and her young daughter STEP OFF. As the little girl turns, she almost runs into Korris. The girl FREEZES. The mother is surprised to find the two Klingons standing there. (Worf wears a Starfleet uniform and doesn't evoke the same visceral response.) 82A ANGLE ON TASHA She instantly recognizes how the dynamics of the situation have changed. TASHA (urgently) GO BACK! 83 ANGLE BY THE TURBOLIFT The woman FREEZES. The little girl stands STARING up at Korris. 83A INTERCUT Everyone involved -- they can only wait to see what Korris does. 83B ANGLE ON KORRIS He glances over at Worf. 83C ANGLE ON WORF Korris senses, as do we, that Worf will protect the little girl. STAR TREK: "Heart Of Glory" - REV. 1/14/88 - ACT FOUR 40. 83D BACK TO SCENE As Tasha watches, Korris slowly reaches down and picks up the little girl. The mother catches her breath. Tasha EDGES FORWARD and touches her communicator. TASHA Bridge -- we have a hostage situation on Deck Seventeen. Korris shoots her a glance. Then -- milking the moment slightly -- he turns and hands the little girl to Worf, who smiles as he takes her. Tasha looks relieved and surprised as she touches her communicator. TASHA (continuing) Bridge, this is Lieutenant Yar -- disregard. The situation is under control. She WALKS FORWARD and confronts Korris and Konmel. TASHA (continuing) By order of the captain, you are confined to Security. Korris smiles and looks over at Worf, then turns and allows the security team to LEAD him and Konmel AWAY. Worf delivers the little girl to her grateful mother. TASHA (continuing) I thought for a minute we had a problem. WORF Oh? TASHA Yes. It looked like Korris was going to hold the little girl as a hostage. WORF That is not our way. Worf looks down the corridor as the security team of six LEADS the Klingons OFF. WORF (continuing) Cowards take hostages -- Klingons do not. Tasha REACTS and FOLLOWS after the Security team. STAR TREK: "Heart Of Glory" - REV. 1/14/88 - ACT FOUR 41. 84 OMITTED 85 INT. CORRIDOR - ANOTHER ANGLE The Klingons appear to be going along. None of the tension associated with someone about to make a break or do something violent. 86 INT. CORRIDOR - DOORWAY TO SECURITY AREA (OPTICAL) The Klingons are placed in what serves as the Security Holding Area. A forcefield surrounds the door. Two guards are left outside. 86A INT. SECURITY ROOM The tension, which was missing after their capture, returns. KORRIS R'oiaro. Konmel nods his agreement. It's clear these two haven't played all their cards. 87 INT. MAIN BRIDGE (OPTICAL) Picard has his eye on the aft turbolift, as Worf EMERGES and goes to report to him. PICARD A Klingon vessel is due to arrive. They have requested return of the renegades. WORF They will be tried and executed, sir. PICARD Lieutenant Worf, understand that I am not unmindful of the mixed feelings you must have about this incident. WORF Thank you, sir. Worf remains standing where he is. A long moment. STAR TREK: "Heart Of Glory" - 1/13/88 - ACT FOUR 42. 87 CONTINUED: WORF (continuing) Are there no other options, sir? PICARD None that I can see. Worf nods and goes to his station. Picard leans over to Riker. RIKER He seems to be handling it well, sir. PICARD So far. But he must be torn. These are his people. DATA Sir, the Klingon vessel is within range. They are requesting visual contact. PICARD Open frequencies. The Klingon captain APPEARS on the Main Viewscreen. K'NERA We are in position now to receive the criminals. PICARD We will prepare for transfer. WORF Captain -- permission to address the captain on the Klingon vessel. Picard is surprised. WORF (continuing) I know it is against standard procedure -- but there is something I must say. PICARD Permission granted. Worf STEPS FORWARD. STAR TREK: "Heart Of Glory" - 1/13/88 - ACT FOUR 43. 87 CONTINUED: (2) WORF K'OMGI BIMOGUS. K'NERA G'ARMOND T'RIS. WORF Could we speak English, sir? I am not comfortable in Kling. K'NERA What is it you want? WORF To plead. K'NERA You waste your time. Their actions threaten the alliance. They disobeyed and must be punished. WORF Yes, they must be punished, but not executed with dishonor. K'NERA Why do you care? WORF What burns in their eyes -- fires my soul. I hear their words and I see it all as it was. Part of me longs for that time. K'NERA It's bred in the bone. We all do. WORF Then send them to a planet in the Halee system. Allow them to meet death on their feet with a weapon in their hand. Not tied and helpless. K'Nera pauses a beat. K'NERA When one of us dies that way -- it diminishes all of us. STAR TREK: "Heart Of Glory" - 1/13/88 - ACT FOUR 44. 87 CONTINUED: (3) WORF Yes. K'NERA Brother -- I feel as you. I too wish they could fly free. But -- I have no choice. Worf studies the screen for a beat. WORF (to K'Nera) Sir. He BACKS OFF. K'NERA We await the transfer. Main Viewer GOES OFF. PICARD (into Com) Lieutenant Yar, escort the prisoners to the Transporter Room. TASHA'S COM VOICE Aye, sir. 88 INT. SECURITY AREA Konmel and Korris construct a Klingon weapon. Each takes off his belt buckle. Korris twists them together. Then each removes the side panels from their boots. These too, fit together and form more of the weapon, which now begins to GLOW. Then Konmel removes the item he took off the dead Klingon. He turns it until it forms into a tube which he attaches to the other pieces and this becomes the barrel. The weapon takes shape. The bracelet which Korris takes from his wrist becomes the muzzle. Konmel's the stock. 88A ANGLE ON KORRIS He holds the very deadly looking "phaser" and with a nod of his head, he indicates the forcefield. STAR TREK: "Heart Of Glory" - REV. 1/14/88 - ACT FOUR 45. ANGLE ON KONMEL (OPTICAL) removes what looks like a very common button from his uniform, then leans down and carefully attaches it to the bottom of the forcefield. The field instantly IS NEUTRALIZED. 89 INT. CORRIDOR - OUTSIDE SECURITY AREA (OPTICAL) The two security guards immediately realize the forcefield is down. GUARD (on communicator) This is Ramos -- the forcefield in Security Three has... He never finishes. Korris and Konmel COME BURSTING OUT the door. Korris FIRES at one guard. A PHASER FIGHT breaks out. Konmel and the two security guards are killed, as Korris ESCAPES. ANOTHER ANGLE - OUTSIDE SECURITY AREA Tasha and a team of security guards ARRIVE. She touches her communicator. TASHA Lieutenant Yar to bridge. There has been an escape. Two of my security are dead. So is Konmel. Korris is loose -- and armed. 90 thru OMITTED 92 93 INT. MAIN BRIDGE (OPTICAL) The crew REACTS. PICARD Keep me informed, Lieutenant. TASHA'S COM VOICE Aye, sir. PICARD Data, visual on K'Nera. DATA Visual on, sir. STAR TREK: "Heart Of Glory" - 1/13/88 - ACT FOUR 46. 93 CONTINUED: PICARD There will be a slight delay, Captain. Korris has escaped. K'NERA He is a trained Klingon warrior, perhaps more than you can handle. It is no disgrace to request our assistance. PICARD I think we can handle the situation. 94 INT. MAIN ENGINEERING Korris COMES BURSTING around the corner. Those on duty REACT. Korris brandishes his weapon... They BACK OFF, and he CONTINUES THROUGH -- past the Dilithium Crystal Chamber. He PAUSES and looks around for a position of advantage. 94A INT. MAIN ENGINEERING - ANOTHER ANGLE Tasha and her team ENTER cautiously. 94B ANGLE ON KORRIS He's found a ladder and is climbing to the second level. 94C ANGLE ON TASHA as she sizes up the situation. TASHA Captain. Korris is in Main Engineering. 95 INT. MAIN ENGINEERING - ANOTHER SECTION where Korris is barricaded. The phaser pointing directly at the Di-Crystal Chamber. STAR TREK: "Heart Of Glory" - 1/13/88 - ACT FOUR 47. 95 CONTINUED: PICARD'S COM VOICE Commander Korris. This is a futile effort. You cannot win. Korris does not respond, then: KORRIS I will speak only to my countryman -- only to Worf. 95A INT. MAIN BRIDGE REACTIONS from Picard and Worf to this demand. 96 ANGLE ON TASHA as she looks around to see where Korris is. TASHA Captain, he has a phaser aimed directly at the Dilithium Crystal Chamber. At that range, one blast and... 97 INT. MAIN BRIDGE Everyone's uncertain as to what to do next. PICARD I understand, Lieutenant. WORF Permission to leave the bridge, Captain. PICARD We'll both go. Worf and Picard LEAVE the bridge as the crew watches him. FADE OUT. END OF ACT FOUR STAR TREK: "Heart Of Glory" - 1/13/88 - ACT FIVE 48. ACT FIVE FADE IN: 98 EXT. SPACE - THE ENTERPRISE (OPTICAL) ESTABLISHING. 99 INT. MAIN ENGINEERING as Worf and Picard APPROACH. Tasha has contained the situation and cleared out all but her security force who have been strategically placed. PICARD What's the siutation? TASHA He's on the second level. Armed with a phaser. We do not have a clear field of fire. PICARD How do you suggest we proceed? TASHA Wait him out. WORF Captain. May I speak with him? TASHA I don't think that's a good idea. Right now he's running on adrenalin. Let it cool. There's no place he can go. WORF He will wait only as long as he believes it is to his advantage, the moment it is not, he will fire his phaser into the Dilithium Crystal Chamber. TASHA That would destroy the Enterprise and him along with it. WORF Yes... he knows. STAR TREK: "Heart Of Glory" - 1/13/88 - ACT FIVE 49. 99 CONTINUED: Picard is pensive for a beat. PICARD Talk to him, Worf. Worf nods, and WALKS THROUGH Engineering toward the Di-Crystal Chamber. 99A ANOTHER ANGLE As Worf moves up beside the Di-Crystal Chamber, he looks up and sees: 99B ANGLE ON KORRIS He's perched on the second level. He has a clear field of fire. Before another could reach him, he could easily take out the Di-Crystal Chamber. He sees Worf. KORRIS Brother -- I knew you would come. 99C ANGLE ON WORF He glances over to the ladder and walks toward it. Korris continues to talk. KORRIS Now I... we have a chance. 99D ANGLE ON KORRIS He relaxes slightly because now has has an ally. KORRIS I could not do it alone, but I would rather die here, than let the traitors of Kling pick the meat from my bones. With you it will work. WORF What will work? STAR TREK: "Heart Of Glory" - 1/13/88 - ACT FIVE 50. 100 BACK TO SCENE (OPTICAL) as Worf nears the top of the ladder and swings onto the catwalk. KORRIS I will demand Captain Picard give us access to the Battle Bridge. We will separate from the rest of the ship, and together, we will light up the galaxy. Imagine the fear which will roll before us. WORF Captain Picard will not comply. KORRIS He cannot -- dare not -- refuse us. In order to save themselves, they will give us what we demand -- then, brother, we are free. WORF Put down the phaser. Korris is surprised. KORRIS Wait. I do not believe this. WORF Believe it. KORRIS I have tasted your heart. You have been with them, but you are still "of" us. Do not deny the challenge of your destiny. Get off your knees and soar. Open your eyes and let the dream take flight. WORF My brother, it is you who does not see. You are looking for battles in the wrong place. The test of the warrior is not without -- it is within. Worf touches his chest. STAR TREK: "Heart Of Glory" - 1/13/88 - ACT FIVE 51. 100 CONTINUED: WORF (continuing) Here we meet the challenge. It is the weaknesses in here the warrior must overcome. KORRIS No. WORF You have talked of glory -- and conquest -- and legends we will write. KORRIS Yes -- the birthright of every Klingon. WORF Yet in all you say, where are the words -- duty -- honor -- loyalty. Without which a warrior is nothing. KORRIS What are you saying? WORF Put down the phaser. Korris ignores the command -- as he continues to rail at Worf. KORRIS Living among these humans has sucked the Klingon heart out of you. You are a sham. My words were dust upon the ground. Your blood has no fire -- you are weak -- like them. I don't care what you look like -- you are no Klingon. WORF Perhaps not. And without warning -- he BLASTS Korris. The phaser is set on kill. 101 ANGLE ON KORRIS as he FALLS. STAR TREK: "Heart Of Glory" - 1/13/88 - ACT FIVE 52. 101A ANGLE ON WORF He REACTS. 102 INT. MAIN ENGINEERING - PICARD, TASHA, SECURITY TEAM Tasha and the others START TO MOVE FORWARD. PICARD Wait. The security team FREEZES. 103 ANGLE ON WORF He steps over to Korris, leans down and takes the dying Klingon's head in his hands and with his thumbs pries open the eyes. For a long moment he stares into them. 104 PICARD AND TASHA as they watch the ritual. 105 ANGLE ON WORF After a beat, he leans back his head and ROARS a warning to those who have gone before. A Klingon warrior is coming -- beware. 106 ANGLE ON PICARD OFF his REACTION. 107 OMITTED 108 INT. MAIN BRIDGE (OPTICAL) Picard and Worf EXIT the turbolift. As Picard takes his Command Chair: PICARD Open hailing frequencies. GEORDI Hailing frequencies open. STAR TREK: "Heart Of Glory" - REV. 1/14/88 - ACT FIVE 53. 108 CONTINUED: PICARD Commander K'Nera, this is Captain Picard. The image of the Klingon Commander COMES ON the Viewscreen. K'NERA Yes, Captain. PICARD Korris and the other Klingon are dead. K'NERA May I speak with Lieutenant Worf? Picard motions for Worf to step forward. WORF Yes, Commander. K'NERA How did they die? WORF They died well. K'Nera nods. PICARD Do you wish the bodies? K'NERA They are now only empty shells - dispose of them as you see fit. (to Worf) Worf, when your tour of duty on the Enterprise is complete -- consider serving with us. Your training and experience would be of benefit to us -- and perhaps there are some things we could teach you. WORF I will consider it. Thank you. K'Nera nods and CLICKS OFF. STAR TREK: "Heart Of Glory" - REV. 1/15/88 - ACT FIVE 54. 109 ANGLE ON PICARD He REACTS with mild surprise at Worf's statement and looks over at Tasha, who is also surprised. 110 CLOSE ON WORF Worf pauses for a beat, then replaces the crewman at a Forward Position. As he sits, Worf senses the tension, and hears the SILENCE. He slowly turns and looks back at them. 111 FULL SHOT Picard, Riker -- and the rest wait for some explanation. WORF (to Picard) I was just being polite, sir. PICARD Commendable, Lieutenant. Mister La Forge, set course for Starbase Eight-four. Geordi taps in the information. WORF Really... I have no desire to leave the Enterprise. They continue to just look at him. PICARD Good. Worf turns back to his console. GEORDI Course set. PICARD Speed -- warp five. GEORDI Warp five. PICARD ... And Worf. Worf turns and looks at Picard. STAR TREK: "Heart Of Glory" - REV. 1/15/88 - ACT FIVE 55. 111 CONTINUED: PICARD (continuing) The bridge wouldn't be the same without you. A look between Worf and the others, who are in complete agreement. PICARD Engage. A very satisfied Worf turns back to his console as Geordi engages the warp drive. Picard settles back with a smile, as do all the others. 112 EXT. SPACE - THE ENTERPRISE (OPTICAL) as the great ship MOVES OFF. FADE OUT. END OF ACT FIVE THE END STAR TREK: THE NEXT GENERATION "The Arsenal Of Freedom" (fka "Among The Missing") #40271-121 Story by Maurice Hurley and Robert Lewin Teleplay by Richard Manning & Hans Beimler Directed by Les Landau THE WRITING CREDITS MAY NOT BE FINAL AND SHOULD NOT BE USED FOR PUBLICITY OR ADVERTISING PURPOSES WITHOUT FIRST CHECKING WITH THE TELEVISION LEGAL DEPARTMENT. Copyright 1988 Paramount Pictures Corporation. All Rights Reserved. This script is not for publication or reproduction. No one is authorized to dispose of same. If lost or destroyed, please notify the Script Department. 2ND REV. FINAL DRAFT JANUARY 25, 1988 STAR TREK: "The Arsenal Of Freedom" - 1/25/88 - CAST STAR TREK: THE NEXT GENERATION "The Arsenal Of Freedom" CAST PICARD THE PEDDLER (A HUMANOID) RIKER CAPTAIN PAUL RICE BEVERLY DATA TROI TASHA WORF GEORDI ENSIGN LIAN T'SU CHIEF ENGINEER LOGAN LIEUTENANT (J. G.) ORFIL SOLIS Voice-Over TRANSPORTER CHIEF STAR TREK: "The Arsenal of Freedom" - 1/25/88 - SETS STAR TREK: THE NEXT GENERATION "The Arsenal Of Freedom" SETS INTERIORS EXTERIORS USS ENTERPRISE USS ENTERPRISE MAIN BRIDGE SAUCER SECTION BATTLE BRIDGE BATTLE CRUISER IN SPACE IN ATMOSPHERE PLANET MINOS PLANET MINOS TUNNEL (OR LIMBO SET) CAVERN PLANET SURFACE RUINS JUNGLE STAR TREK: "The Arsenal... " - 1/25/88 - TEASER 1. STAR TREK: THE NEXT GENERATION "The Arsenal Of Freedom" TEASER FADE IN: 1 EXT. SPACE - ENTERPRISE (OPTICAL) It's moving through sparkling, black velvet space -- a blue-green planet slowly enlarging in the distant background. PICARD (V. O.) Captain's log, stardate 41798.2. We are ordered by Starfleet, to proceed to the Lorenze Cluster and investigate the disappearance of the light cruiser USS Drake, which was in that system trying to unravel a mystery of its own. 2 INT. MAIN BRIDGE EVERYONE's at station except Riker and Troi. Riker's at the Aft Station going over some computer readouts. PICARD (V.O.) (continuing) Recent long range probes indicate that all intelligent life on the planet Minos has disappeared. PICARD Number One? RIKER No help from their communications log. The Drake reported arriving at Minos and was never heard from again. PICARD Mister Data? DATA The citizens of Minos gained fame during the Ersalrope wars as arms merchants. They manufactured sophisticated and highly advanced weaponry. STAR TREK: "The Arsenal... " - 1/25/88 - TEASER 2. 2 CONTINUED: GEORDI For which side? DATA Both. GEORDI We are nearing the planet Minos. PICARD Standard orbit, Mister La Forge. GEORDI Aye, sir. Standard orbit. RIKER Whatever happened to the Drake, happened quickly, otherwise Captain Rice would have sent another message. PICARD You know Captain Rice? RIKER We were at the Academy together. PICARD Tell me about him. Troi listens intently. RIKER Able. A good officer. TROI How would he react under stress? Riker thinks for a beat, then: RIKER Paul Rice is confident almost to the point of arrogance, but carries it well because he usually makes the right choices. He's a risk taker. PICARD Oh. STAR TREK: "The Arsenal... " - 1/25/88 - TEASER 3. 2 CONTINUED: (2) RIKER I'll give you an example. One of the final tests in advance navigation at the Academy presents the student with three options. When Rice took the test, he rejected all of them and offered one of his own. PICARD I'd call that arrogant. RIKER But it paid off -- he received the top mark. And now that test has four options. The original three... plus his. TROI In a difficult situation a man like that would react aggressively. RIKER Agreed. PICARD Number One, weren't you offered the Drake? RIKER Yes. TASHA You turned down your own command to take this assignment? RIKER At the time, I thought it was more advantageous for me to do a tour on the Enterprise. DATA Captain -- readings correspond with the findings of the probe. No signs of intelligent life-forms. Vegetation and animal life only. PICARD None? DATA Correct. STAR TREK: "The Arsenal... " - 1/25/88 - TEASER 4. 2 CONTINUED: (3) TROI What happened to all those people? WORF War? DATA Disease? GEORDI A dissatisfied customer? TASHA In any war, natural disaster, or even the most virulent plague, there are always survivors. DATA Captain, we are being hailed. 2A EVERYONE REACTS The question on their faces. RIKER How is that possible from a planet with no people? PICARD Your sensors indicated no intelligent life? DATA Correct. PICARD Put it on the Main Viewer. 3 ANGLE TO INCLUDE MAIN VIEWER (OPTICAL) A humanoid, THE PEDDLER, APPEARS on the Main Viewer. He has a ROLLING, LILTING VOICE, the confidence of a master salesman with a touch of the carny thrown in. STAR TREK: "The Arsenal... " - 1/25/88 - TEASER 5. 3 CONTINUED: THE PEDDLER'S COM VOICE Whoever you are -- wherever you're from -- greetings and welcome to Minos -- the Arsenal of Freedom... PICARD I am Captain Jean-Luc Picard of the USS Enterprise. To whom am I speaking? The Peddler ignores the question and continues with his pitch. THE PEDDLER'S COM VOICE ... Where we live by the motto -- peace through superior firepower. Come -- allow us to meet your needs. If you need a little something special, be it for one target -- or multiple targets -- we got it, you'll see it... here on the Arsenal of Freedom. Because we don't just provide weapons -- we also offer complete weapon systems. DATA It is a recorded message. THE PEDDLER'S COM VOICE To be totally armed is to be totally secure... PICARD It must be left over from the time of the Romulan wars, when the business of selling arms was booming. THE PEDDLER'S COM VOICE ... Remember, the early bird that hesitates gets wormed. Perfection in highly-advanced weaponry. Versatility... flexibility. And... everything one hundred percent guaranteed... So lock on to my signal and beam on down. PICARD Screen off. The screen GOES OFF. STAR TREK: "The Arsenal... " - 1/25/88 - TEASER 6. 3 CONTINUED: (2) GEORDI It's a heck of a sales pitch. PICARD If an automated message system is still functioning -- other systems on the planet may also be operational. TASHA Weapons systems? PICARD Possibly. RIKER We are going to have to go down there to find it. PICARD Prepare your away team, Number One. RIKER Lieutenant Yar -- Commander Data. Data rises from his chair and is immediately replaced by LIEUTENANT (J. G.) ORFIL SOLIS. TASHA Commander, I recommend a minimum complement. RIKER Oh? I would have thought otherwise. TASHA We'll keep the first landing party small and mobile. Until I'm confident that whatever killed the inhabitants of this planet isn't still down there. Riker nods his agreement. And they head for the turbolift. 4 thru OMITTED 5 FADE OUT. END OF TEASER STAR TREK: "The Arsenal... " - 1/25/88 - ACT ONE 7. ACT ONE FADE IN: 6 EXT. PLANET SURFACE (OPTICAL) It's a small clearing in a verdant, overgrown area. Riker, Data and Tasha BEAM IN, and stand apprehensively looking around. The SOUNDS OF LIFE -- BIRDS, INSECTS -- surround them. The away team stands quietly, looking around tensely, and then slowly turning on their tricorders and scanning the periphery, protecting each other with their backs together. RIKER Spooky. (touches com) Riker. PICARD'S COM VOICE Bridge. Captain speaking. RIKER We'll start a pattern search from this point. PICARD'S COM VOICE Keep this channel open. RIKER Aye, sir. DATA Commander, our communications are being monitored. RIKER By whom? DATA Sir, since there is no intelligent life, the question is "by what?" RIKER Captain. 7 INT. MAIN BRIDGE Picard in his Command position listening to the away team. STAR TREK: "The Arsenal... " - 1/25/88 - ACT ONE 8. 7 CONTINUED: PICARD Yes, I heard, Number One. We'll try to track it down from here. Worf and the others strain over their instruments. 8 EXT. PLANET SURFACE The team moves slowly down the clearing, very alert, and OUT OF SHOT. 9 EXT. PLANET SURFACE - RUINS Crumbled high-tech ruins, aged and rusted in spots. The team ENTERS SHOT, Tasha leading. Near the base of a ruin she pulls away some foliage and a melted rod and plank of tritanium ARE SEEN. TASHA Tritanium. It's been melted. RIKER What could do that? TASHA Whatever it was, it's beyond our technology. DATA Over here. Data has found something. Its shape is clearly that of a weapon: a super-high-tech RIFLE, gimbal-mounted, with laser rheostats and sighting. Riker kneels, scans, and examines it. RIKER We've never even seen anything like this. TASHA It's undamaged. RIKER Maybe a demonstration model for some potential buyer. TASHA Maybe. Let's spread out a little. STAR TREK: "The Arsenal... " - 1/25/88 - ACT ONE 9. 10 INTERCUT The away team as it SPREADS OUT. 11 INT. MAIN BRIDGE Picard listening to the SOUNDS OF THEM MOVING THROUGH THE UNDERBRUSH. SOLIS Commander Riker. This is Lieutenant Solis. I am monitoring a slight energy buildup near your position. I am not able to pinpoint the source. RIKER'S COM VOICE Give me a direction. SOLIS East of your position -- ten meters. I will continue monitoring. 12 EXT. PLANET SURFACE ON Riker -- as he looks through the foliage. RIKER I can't see anything from here. The underbrush is very thick. He goes behind the ruin to examine the back side of it. Suddenly he tenses, sensing something. RICE (O.S.) Hello... Commander Riker. Riker turns at the sound of the voice. CAPTAIN PAUL RICE STEPS INTO SHOT. He is dressed in a Starfleet Captain's uniform, trim and neat, a man of Riker's age with a military bearing. He is businesslike and calm, and acts as if this kind of meeting, under these circumstances, is perfectly normal. Riker, on the other hand, is stunned. STAR TREK: "The Arsenal... " - 1/25/88 - ACT ONE 10. 12 CONTINUED: RIKER Rice! Where did you come from? RICE I was over there. RIKER You had us worried. But, I should have known you'd pop up. RICE How are you, Commander Riker? RIKER Me -- never mind me. How are you? No word, no message... nothing. RICE How many are with you? RIKER Two others. Where's the Drake? Where's your crew? 13 INT. MAIN BRIDGE (INTERCUT WITH PLANET AS NEEDED) Picard is as surprised as Riker. PICARD What's going on Number One? Riker STEPS AWAY, so the following conversation is confidential. RIKER It's Paul Rice from the Drake. PICARD (confused by the apparent contradiction) Lieutenant Solis? SOLIS Sensors indicate low level energy readings, but the only life signs are the away team. PICARD Careful, Number One. STAR TREK: "The Arsenal... " - 1/25/88 - ACT ONE 11. 13 CONTINUED: RIKER Understood. 13A EXT. PLANET SURFACE Riker MOVES BACK TO Rice. RIKER (to Rice) You look strange, Paul... RICE I was injured getting here. RIKER Do you need medical help? Riker is very suspicious and ready for anything. He knows this image in front of him is NOT Captain Paul Rice, but in order to find out the purpose of this replica he will play along. RICE No. What is your purpose here? Tasha and Data join Riker. They stare at Rice, who hardly notices them. RIKER This is Commander Data and Lieutenant Yar. Data looks down at his tricorder, then back to the figure. DATA Other than ourselves, sir, I am picking up no other life signs here. RIKER Yes. I know. RICE Riker, you didn't answer me. Who sent you here to look for me? RIKER Your mother. STAR TREK: "The Arsenal... " - 1/25/88 - ACT ONE 12. 13A CONTINUED: Both Tasha and Data REACT to this obvious lie. RIKER (continuing) She's worried about you. RICE Tell me about your ship -- the Enterprise, isn't it? RIKER No... The name of my ship is the Lollipop. RICE I have no knowledge of that ship. RIKER It's just been commissioned. It's a good ship. RICE Riker, refresh me, would you? What's its size and complement? RIKER Who's here with you? RICE (puzzled) What's the armament on the Lollipop? RIKER Paul -- I will only answer your questions if you answer mine. Why do you want to know so much about my ship? RICE We're friends, aren't we? RIKER Old friends. RICE Our top speed is warp three. What's yours? STAR TREK: "The Arsenal... " - 1/25/88 - ACT ONE 13. 13A CONTINUED: (2) RIKER "Is?" Then the Drake has not been destroyed. RICE The Drake? RIKER Yes, your ship? RICE Of course -- my ship is the Drake. RIKER Where is it? RICE Classified. RIKER Classified? RICE Please -- it's important. Our survival depends on knowing. What's the armament on your ship? RIKER Ten. RICE Ten? I don't understand. Ten what? RIKER Six. RICE Commander Riker, those answers make no sense. RIKER You haven't used my first name once, Paul. There is a slight hesitation. RIKER (continuing) You remember it, don't you? STAR TREK: "The Arsenal... " - 1/25/88 - ACT ONE 14. 13A CONTINUED: (3) No response. Rice looks confused. RIKER (continuing) Because you don't even exist. You're a fake -- an image of the original! Aren't you?... Answer me! Rice twitches -- a slight REACTION, then SUDDENLY: 14 NEW ANGLE (OPTICAL) The Image of Captain Rice DISAPPEARS and is REPLACED BY A WEAPON-LIKE OBJECT. IT QUICKLY MOVES several meters away. PICARD'S COM VOICE Report, Number One. RIKER The image of Rice has been replaced by something which is hovering several meters away. 15 INT. MAIN BRIDGE Picard is very concerned. PICARD Number One, get your team back here. 16 EXT. PLANET SURFACE (OPTICAL) Riker and the others set to beam up. RIKER Prepare to beam up. TASHA Commander. He looks as she indicates a direction. The WEAPON IS MOVING toward them. Before anyone can answer, THE WEAPON FIRES. STAR TREK: "The Arsenal... " - 1/25/88 - ACT ONE 15. 17 CLOSE ON RIKER (OPTICAL) The BEAM HITS HIM. He STIFFENS -- and BECOMES ENCASED IN A clear, transparent CUBE of material. 18 INT. MAIN BRIDGE They all HEAR, and REACT to, the SOUND OF THE PHASER BLAST. 19 EXT. PLANET SURFACE - ANGLE ON TASHA (OPTICAL) She FIRES ON THE WEAPON AND DESTROYS IT. 20 FULL SHOT - AWAY TEAM Picard's VOICE is heard. PICARD'S COM VOICE (tense, tight) What just happened down there? Number One! Report! 21 OMITTED 22 EXT. PLANET SURFACE Tasha and Data APPROACH him. They touch the cube. PICARD'S COM VOICE Report! Report! Tasha and Data examine the cube. TASHA He can't answer you, Captain. Commander Riker has been encased is a cube of complex lucinium compound. PICARD'S COM VOICE Is he alive? STAR TREK: "The Arsenal... " - 1/25/88 - ACT ONE 16. 22 CONTINUED: Data and Tasha examine the cube containing the inert form of Commander William T. Riker. DATA Unknown. 23 thru OMITTED 25 FADE OUT. END OF ACT ONE STAR TREK: "The Arsenal... " - 1/25/88 - ACT TWO 17. ACT TWO FADE IN: 26 INT. MAIN BRIDGE manned as before. The bridge crew is stunned by what has happened to Riker. Picard is on his feet. PICARD Transporter Room Three - have you locked on to the away team? TRANSPORTER CHIEF'S COM VOICE I am unable to lock on to Commander Riker. 26A REACTIONS From all those involved. PICARD (crisply) Lieutenant Solis, situation report. SOLIS The previous energy readings are gone. PICARD Data, have you been able to assess Commander Riker's condition? DATA He appears to be in a kind of stasis. PICARD Theorize. What's the purpose of the encasement? DATA Typically, the purpose of such an enclosure is for storage. PICARD Which would suggest what? STAR TREK: "The Arsenal... " - 1/25/88 - ACT TWO 18. 26A CONTINUED: TASHA'S COM VOICE That sooner or later someone or something will be along to collect him. PICARD Stand by. I'm coming down. Eyebrows are raised. TROI You, sir? PICARD Yes. (into Com) Doctor Crusher, this is the Captain. Meet me in Transporter Room Three. (to Geordi) Mister La Forge, you have command of the bridge. GEORDI Aye, sir. 26B ANGLE ON GEORDI He leaves his position and is immediately replaced by ENSIGN LIAN T'SU. 26C MAIN BRIDGE as Geordi takes the command position. PICARD Whatever happens below, your prime responsibility is to the ship. GEORDI Understood. 27 ANGLE ON PICARD as he starts for the turbolift. Troi springs to her feet, steps into his path. STAR TREK: "The Arsenal... " - 1/25/88 - ACT TWO 19. 27 CONTINUED: TROI Captain! I must take exception to your decision to beam down. PICARD Noted. Picard moves around her. 28 EXT. PLANET SURFACE (OPTICAL) Picard and Beverly MATERIALIZE. Data is scanning Riker and the material encasing him with his tricorder. Tasha, ever security-conscious, keeps a lookout, her phaser in hand. Picard and Beverly APPROACH the cube. PICARD What is it? DATA The encasing material appears to be solid... BEVERLY I am getting no life signs. PICARD He's alive. What he ran into is an intelligence gathering device used during the Ersalrope Wars. TASHA Probably developed here. PICARD It projects an image of someone the subject will trust -- gets as much information as possible. TASHA If it's found out -- it encases the subject to await a more detailed interrogation later. Clever. PICARD Can you remove it? DATA Yes -- but I cannot predict the risk to Commander Riker. STAR TREK: "The Arsenal... " - 1/25/88 - ACT TWO 20. 28 CONTINUED: PICARD We have little choice. Whatever has him is interrupting the transporter beam. Remove it. 29 ANOTHER ANGLE as Data examines the cube like a diamond cutter looking for the place to make his cut. 30 INT. MAIN BRIDGE Worf at the Aft station. WORF I am picking up energy readings. GEORDI Captain, this is Lieutenant La Forge. Sensors indicate energy readings in your area. 31 EXT. PLANET SURFACE (OPTICAL) As Data continues working... Tasha scans the area. SUDDENLY, MINOS WEAPON 2 BURSTS THROUGH the jungle foliage. It makes a close pass. It comes closest to Beverly who is startled. She stumbles backward. Data calmly continues working. Tasha takes aim, as Picard moves over next to Beverly. All this happens very quickly -- the reaction instinctive. The team BECOMES SEPARATED. 32 ANOTHER ANGLE (OPTICAL) as MINOS WEAPON 2 STARTS FIRING. Picard pushes Beverly out of the way. 33 ON PICARD AND BEVERLY As THEY DIVE TO THE SIDE, the ground suddenly gives way under her feet. Beverly FALLS, BEGINS TO SLIDE -- PICARD Doctor! Picard makes a grab for her, catches her hand, but only succeeds in being pulled into the sinkhole -- the sandy GROUND SWALLOWS THEM UP. STAR TREK: "The Arsenal... " - 1/25/88 - ACT TWO 21. 34 OMITTED 35 INT. CAVERN Beverly and a half ton of sand FALL into a large subterranean cavern. She LANDS HARD AND IS immediately BURIED in rocks, sand, and dust. 36 NEW ANGLE as Picard also FALLS through into the cavern, but manages to land more or less on his feet atop a pile of sand. 37 ON PICARD rushing to Beverly's side and frantically digging sand away with his hands to keep her from suffocating. PICARD Beverly! 38 thru OMITTED 39 40 EXT. PLANET SURFACE (OPTICAL) The WEAPON darts through the heavy foliage. Tasha has difficulty getting a clean shot. Everything is happening so fast that neither she nor Data have noticed the disappearance of Picard and Beverly. TASHA This one is different. 41 ANGLE ON TASHA (OPTICAL) She FIRES. 42 ANGLE ON THE WEAPON (OPTICAL) It anticipates and DODGES OUT OF THE WAY. 43 ANOTHER ANGLE The area. STAR TREK: "The Arsenal... " - 1/25/88 - ACT TWO 22. 43 CONTINUED: TASHA It's evasive. Data -- I need you. Set your phaser on kill. I'll fire so that it will move left, and you get it. Data adjusts the setting on his phaser. 44 WIDER ANGLE (OPTICAL) as the WEAPON STARTS FIRING from behind some trees. 45 ON DATA AND TASHA (OPTICAL) She FIRES. 46 OMITTED 47 ANGLE ON WEAPON (OPTICAL) As it DODGES TASHA'S BLAST, DATA GETS IT. The combined effect works. The WEAPON EXPLODES. 48 DATA AND TASHA Data calmly returns to his examination of the casement. TASHA Captain! No response. TASHA (continuing) Doctor Crusher. Still no response. Data has stopped cutting. He touches his communicator. DATA Captain Picard. He looks down at his chest. STAR TREK: "The Arsenal... " - 1/25/88 - ACT TWO 23. 48 CONTINUED: DATA (continuing) I have a malfunction. Tasha touches her communicator. TASHA Enterprise, this is Lieutenant Yar. Nothing. TASHA (continuing) Mine's out too. DATA The close pass by the weapon must have disrupted our communicators. TASHA Keep working. I'll look for Captain Picard and Doctor Crusher. Data nods and resumes working. Tasha MOVES OFF in the direction she last saw Captain Picard. 48A INT. CAVERN (FORMERLY SCENE 38) Picard is beside Beverly. She's nearly unconscious, and in very bad shape, with multiple lacerations. She fights to speak through the intense pain: PICARD How bad is it? BEVERLY Bad... It's my arm. PICARD Hold on. We'll get you out of here. (he touches his communicator) Enterprise, this is the Captain. Two to beam up. No response. He touches Beverly's communicator. STAR TREK: "The Arsenal... " - 1/25/88 - ACT TWO 24. 48A CONTINUED: PICARD (continuing) Enterprise. Nothing. PICARD (continuing; he touches it again) Data... Lieutenant Yar. BEVERLY What's wrong? Why don't they work? PICARD I don't know. But it's all right because once they realize our communicators are out, the sensors will locate us and Geordi will beam us up. 48B ON PICARD (FORMERLY SCENE 39) He rips a piece from her smock, finds some sticks and fashions a crude splint. PICARD (reassuring) Hold on. It won't be long. Beverly is hit by a wave of pain; her eyes close. Picard fights his own sense of helplessness. 49 EXT. PLANET SURFACE Tasha RETURNS. TASHA I can't find them. DATA Step back. Data has solved the puzzle. He makes a slight adjustment on his phaser, then holds it against a specific point on the encasement. He points the muzzle up. And FIRES. The vibration of the phaser against the casement causes it to disintegrate in a SHOWER OF LIGHT. Riker collapses in a heap. STAR TREK: "The Arsenal... " - 1/25/88 - ACT TWO 25. 49 CONTINUED: RIKER Data. 50 NEW ANGLE Riker has been all but freed from his encasement. He stirs. Data and Tasha are visibly relieved. Data scans him with the tricorder. DATA All vital signs returning to normal. TASHA Good. Now Geordi can get us out of here. 51 INT. MAIN BRIDGE Worf is at Tactical, using everything at his command to scan the planet. SOLIS (to Geordi) Sir, I'm reading life-forms on the planet. All five members of the away team. GEORDI Good. They have freed Riker. (into com) Transporter Room. Get a lock on the away team, and beam them up. The insistent SOUND OF a BRIDGE ALARM fills the room. WORF Shields just came on! Deflectors also up -- (a beat) I'm picking up an object off our port bow -- It's firing! STAR TREK: "The Arsenal... " - 1/25/88 - ACT TWO 26. 52 NEW ANGLE (OPTICAL) as the ENTERPRISE IS HIT by something quite unlike a phaser beam. The weapon -- call it an INTERRUPTER -- plays havoc with the ship: WE HEAR A SCREECH as LIGHTS DIM, CONSOLES GO CRAZY, and the BRIDGE VIBRATES as if the ship's shaking itself apart. After a beat, the INTERRUPTER EFFECT ENDS, and bridge systems slowly return to normal. GEORDI Red Alert! Battle stations! More BRIDGE ALARMS as Red Alert is SOUNDED. WORF Shields holding. GEORDI (grimly) But we can't beam up the away team with our shields in place. 53 ANOTHER ANGLE (OPTICAL) as more BRIDGE PERSONNEL ENTER and take up Battle Stations. WORF Phasers ready. Photon torpedoes standing by. Locking on target... (then, surprised) Correction: target has disappeared! GEORDI Full scan! WORF Scanning... (shakes head) No readings. Wait -- something dead astern -- GEORDI Emergency power to shields! WORF Object is firing -- And again the INTERRUPTER EFFECT SHAKES THE BRIDGE, more severely. Geordi SHOUTS over the DIN: STAR TREK: "The Arsenal... " - 1/25/88 - ACT TWO 27. 53 CONTINUED: GEORDI Return fire! The EFFECT ENDS. SOLIS Aft shields weakened. (a beat) Whatever they're using, our shields can't stand up to it much longer. 54 ON GEORDI As he grimly ponders his options, WE: FADE OUT: END OF ACT TWO STAR TREK: "The Arsenal... " - 1/25/88 - ACT THREE 28. ACT THREE FADE IN: 55 EXT. SPACE - THE ENTERPRISE (OPTICAL) still in orbit above Minos, performing an escape maneuver. GEORDI (V. O.) Captain's log, stardate 41798.25. Lieutenant J.G. Geordi La Forge in temporary command. 56 INT. MAIN BRIDGE (OPTICAL) Geordi's in the Command Chair, Troi next to him, Worf at Tactical, Lian at Conn, Solis at Ops. GEORDI (V.O.) (continuing) Orbiting the planet Minos, we are under attack. The turbolift doors OPEN and CHIEF ENGINEER LOGAN ENTERS. Logan is young, intelligent, competent, and sure of himself. LOGAN Why are we still in orbit? We're taking a beating! GEORDI We've got to hold out as long as we can. If we can disable our attacker, even for a few seconds, we can drop our shields and beam the away team back aboard. LOGAN If we follow that plan, we'll lose the Enterprise! In view of the present crisis... I believe you should relinquish command to me. GEORDI No. LOGAN I outrank you. STAR TREK: "The Arsenal... " - 1/25/88 - ACT THREE 29. 56 CONTINUED: GEORDI Mister Logan -- Captain Picard put me in command. LOGAN The Captain did not anticipate that the Enterprise would come under attack. If he had, would he have left the bridge to you? GEORDI If he had, he would not have left the ship. 57 OMITTED 58 WIDER ANGLE Lian has picked up a reading: LIAN Picking up an object to starboard, sir -- heading toward us. GEORDI Lock phasers and fire the moment it's in range. WORF Aye, sir. Locking and -- (scanning) Object has vanished. 59 NEW ANGLE (OPTICAL) The INTERRUPTER EFFECT SHAKES THE BRIDGE as the ship takes another hit. WORF Phaser lock lost. The EFFECT ENDS. LIAN Starboard shields weakened. WORF It's cloaked itself. STAR TREK: "The Arsenal... " - 1/25/88 - ACT THREE 30. 59 CONTINUED: LOGAN You can't fight this thing and win. We've got to break orbit -- now. Geordi ignores Logan, ponders the problem. GEORDI Worf -- analyze its firing pattern. Maybe we can anticipate its location. WORF Aye. (to Solis) Correlate the trajectory of the energy bolts with the attack path. I'll compute the optimum spread of phasers and photon torpedoes to hit it. Solis programs that into the computer as Worf sets up the weaponry. LOGAN (protesting) Lieutenant La Forge. Logan stops himself, tries another tack. LOGAN (continuing; softer) Geordi -- I know you want to do what's best for the Enterprise. So do I. Now... the best thing... GEORDI The best thing is for this discussion to end and for you to get on with your duties. I am in charge until relieved by Commander Riker or Captain Picard. LOGAN You are ignoring my greater rank and experience. STAR TREK: "The Arsenal... " - 1/25/88 - ACT THREE 31. 59 CONTINUED: (2) GEORDI Not at all, I'm counting on it. Get back to Engineering and find me every scrap of extra power you can. The more we can channel to the shields, the longer we can hold out. LOGAN All right. Logan EXITS into a turbolift. GEORDI Have you got a lock on it? WORF Impossible to be sure. 60 thru OMITTED 68 69 EXT. PLANET SURFACE - JUNGLE (OPTICAL) Tasha steps up to Riker. TASHA Maybe you should wait here while Data and I search for Doctor Crusher and Captain Picard. RIKER I'm a little groggy, but I'll be all right. DATA I am getting energy readings. Another WEAPON WHISTLES PASSED them. THEY SCATTER. 70 ANOTHER ANGLE (OPTICAL) Tasha looks over at Data. TASHA We'll do it just like before. They try their little "I-make-it-go-to-the-left-and-you-pick-it-off" trick. Tasha FIRES - then Data FIRES. This time the Weapon doesn't dodge out of the way. STAR TREK: "The Arsenal... " - 1/25/88 - ACT THREE 32. 70 CONTINUED: TASHA It's got a deflector shield. DATA The product continues to upgrade and improve. TASHA Spread out. We'll concentrate our fire and try to collapse its shield. Data, Tasha and Riker SPREAD OUT. Then as the WEAPON MOVES toward Tasha, THEY all FIRE - HITTING THE WEAPON from different angles and putting the most possible drain on its deflectors. The combination works. The WEAPON EXPLODES. TASHA (continuing) You're right, they keep getting better. DATA Commander, the weapons are appearing at intervals of precisely twelve minutes. TASHA That one took everything we had. I don't know how we'll handle the next one. RIKER Then let's try and not be here. Come on, let's find the rest of our team. The Trio SPREADS OUT and MOVES into the dense jungle foliage. 71 INT. CAVERN Beverly is half buried under a ton of debris. Picard tries to pull her out. He can't. But he clears away more of the rubble. 72 ANGLE ON BEVERLY drifting into unconsciousness; she's in very bad shape, with multiple lacerations. STAR TREK: "The Arsenal... " - 1/25/88 - ACT THREE 33. 73 ON PICARD shaking her and talking to her -- desperately to keep her awake. PICARD Oh, no you don't -- no time to sleep. But Beverly is falling rapidly -- BEVERLY (barely audible) I'm tired. Very tired. PICARD Come on, stay with me, Doctor. She's very weak, and though she tries -- she can't keep her eyes open. Picard's frustration builds -- PICARD (continuing) Stay alert, Doctor! That's an order, damn it! BEVERLY I must have lost a lot of blood. PICARD I've stopped the bleeding -- Beverly makes an effort to shake her head. BEVERLY There's another wound. My leg. Picard frantically digs away the rubble and mush around her legs -- the DIRT IS A DEEP RED MUD from the blood. 74 NEW ANGLE Picard can't get to her wounds -- he must lift and pull her legs from under the rubble. PICARD This is going to hurt a bit, Doctor. BEVERLY (with the faintest of smiles) I heard that before. STAR TREK: "The Arsenal... " - 1/25/88 - ACT THREE 34. 74 CONTINUED: Picard then lifts her legs -- and Beverly does everything to hold in a scream. But her expression tells us just how much pain she's going through. This is a woman of great courage! Picard then rips a piece her smock into a makeshift bandage and strap for a tourniquet. When that's done, Picard turns to Beverly: PICARD Doctor -- you have to stay awake -- you have to help me! Tell me what to do. Beverly nods -- she'll try. PICARD (continuing) What else can I do? Beverly makes an effort to point at something -- but she is too weak to lift her hand. BEVERLY The wound needs a clotting agent. PICARD I can't find your medical kit. She forces herself to look around. BEVERLY Those roots. What are they? PICARD These? She nods. Picard pulls at a long root, breaking it off and showing it to her. PICARD (continuing) I don't know. BEVERLY Break off a piece and taste it. Don't swallow. Picard breaks open the root and pops a piece into his mouth, and spits it out. PICARD It's very bitter -- STAR TREK: "The Arsenal... " - 1/25/88 - ACT THREE 35. 74 CONTINUED: (2) She nods. BEVERLY Good. Pound it into a paste and spread in onto the wound. PICARD I understand. 75 ON PICARD as he SQUEEZES THE ROOT, making a sort of ointment. When he has enough, he smears it on her wounds. Again, Beverly begins to drift away. PICARD What do we do next, Doctor? But Beverly is so tired -- PICARD (continuing) Help me -- you've got to help me! Beverly opens her eyes -- fighting the sleep with all her fading strength. Picard gets an idea -- he appeals to her professionalism: PICARD (continuing) The patient has lost a great deal of blood from multiple lacerations. What's your diagnosis, Doctor? BEVERLY Your patient is going into shock. PICARD What do I do? BEVERLY Elevate the legs and keep her warm. PICARD All right. Stay with me, Doctor. Keep talking... STAR TREK: "The Arsenal... " - 1/25/88 - ACT THREE 36. 75 CONTINUED: Picard gently lifts her legs -- resting them on top of some rubble in an effort to keep the blood flowing to her brain. BEVERLY Did you happen to bring a blanket? Beverly is shivering and sweating profusely. 76 ON PICARD anxiously looking at Beverly and then scanning the area for something -- anything! -- to keep her warm. PICARD No, but I'll find something. He gets up and begins looking around for something. PICARD (continuing) Keep up your end. Stay awake. That's an order, Doctor. 77 EXT. SPACE - ENTERPRISE (OPTICAL) still in orbit around the planet. 78 OMITTED 78A INT. MAIN BRIDGE (FORMERLY SCENE 60) Everyone is very tense. GEORDI A shot in the dark is better than nothing. Let's see if we can get lucky. SOLIS I can't seem to pin down the pattern... Geordi STEPS TO Solis's position, looks over Solis' shoulder, and makes an adjustment on the console. STAR TREK: "The Arsenal... " - 1/25/88 - ACT THREE 37. 78A CONTINUED: SOLIS Sorry, sir. I should have seen that. GEORDI It's all right. You are doing fine. Worf completes his own adjustments. WORF Program laid in, sir. Phasers and photon torpedoes ready. 78B ANOTHER ANGLE (FORMERLY SCENE 61) Geordi RETURNS to the Command position. GEORDI Bring her about to two-three mark one-eight-five. LIAN Aye, sir. 78C NEW ANGLE (OPTICAL) (FORMERLY SCENE 62) as the INTERRUPTER EFFECT HITS them again. The moment the EFFECT ENDS -- GEORDI Fire! WORF Phasers and photons firing. 78D EXT. SPACE - ENTERPRISE (OPTICAL) (FORMERLY SC. 63) FIRING main PHASERS and a spread of PHOTONS simultaneously. 78E INT. MAIN BRIDGE (OPTICAL) Worf SLAMS the console in frustration. WORF We missed. STAR TREK: "The Arsenal... " - 1/25/88 - ACT THREE 38. 79 ANOTHER ANGLE (OPTICAL) as the BRIDGE IS SHAKEN BY another INTERRUPTER EFFECT, taking the crew by surprise. The EFFECT ENDS. SOLIS Number four shield buckling. 80 ON GEORDI (OPTICAL) as he sits back down in the Command Chair. He's stunned. How do you fight this thing? What should he do next? The INTERRUPTER EFFECT HITS again. BRIDGE LIGHTS DIM ALMOST TO BLACK -- power systems can no longer compensate. The EFFECT ENDS. SOLIS Number three shield nearing failure. LOGAN'S COM VOICE Bridge, this is Engineering. I can't hold this power level much longer. SOLIS Backup systems are overloaded. Worf looks to Geordi. 81 OMITTED 82 WIDER ANGLE (OPTICAL) Geordi is silent, desperately trying to come up with a plan. The INTERRUPTER EFFECT HITS again, then ENDS. SOLIS Backup systems failing. There's a touch of urgency in Solis's voice. Geordi becomes aware that Worf, Lian, Troi, and the rest of the bridge crew are looking at him. Nothing obvious, not a cold stare -- just a simple expectation. STAR TREK: "The Arsenal... " - 1/25/88 - ACT THREE 39. 83 ON GEORDI as it dawns on him: they're waiting for orders. The entire crew is looking to him for their next move... and he hasn't got one. LOGAN'S COM VOICE Bridge, this is Engineering. Tell me something. As we PUSH IN on his look of pain and indecision, we: GEORDI (into com) Mister Logan, report to the bridge. LOGAN'S COM VOICE On my way. 83A REACTIONS Everyone on the bridge believes Geordi is about to relinquish his command. FADE OUT: END OF ACT THREE STAR TREK: "The Arsenal... " - 1/25/88 - ACT FOUR 40. ACT FOUR FADE IN: 84 EXT. SPACE - THE ENTERPRISE (OPTICAL) It's BEING HAMMERED by something which we cannot see. 85 INT. MAIN BRIDGE Geordi is in the Command position. WORF Deflectors are breaking down. We have less than one minute of reserve. Logan STEPS ONTO the bridge and STRIDES OVER TO Geordi. GEORDI We are getting out of here. Worf REACTS to the thought of retreat. GEORDI (continuing) Ensign T'su - set course. Three-one-five... mark zero-seven. LIAN Course set. LOGAN You are leaving them on that planet? GEORDI Speed warp five. LIAN Warp five - aye. GEORDI Engage. 86 EXT. SPACE - ENTERPRISE (OPTICAL) as it WARPS AWAY from the planet. STAR TREK: "The Arsenal... " - 1/25/88 - ACT FOUR 41. 87 INT. MAIN BRIDGE Those around Geordi are surprised by this apparent retreat. GEORDI Hold course and speed for twenty-eight seconds, then come to a full stop. Geordi stands so that everyone on the bridge can see him. GEORDI If we stay, we'll be destroyed. There are over a thousand people on the ship -- I have a responsibility to them. LOGAN What about your responsibility to Captain Picard and the members of the away team? GEORDI We have a responsibility to them as well. Mister Logan, you are going to take command... Logan REACTS. GEORDI (continuing) ... of the Saucer Section. Bridge crew - prepare to move to the Battle Bridge. LOGAN You're going to separate? GEORDI Yes. I want you to take the Saucer Section and proceed immediately for Starbase One-zero-three. LOGAN You still won't be able to see that device. GEORDI There are ways. STAR TREK: "The Arsenal... " - 1/25/88 - ACT FOUR 42. 87 CONTINUED: LOGAN (with a little envy) Risky. GEORDI That's why we are going to separate. Geordi rises and moves toward the turbolift which goes to the Battle Bridge. GEORDI (continuing) Worf, Solis, T'su. You're with me on the Battle Bridge. Good luck, Mister Logan. The key members of the bridge crew FOLLOW Geordi to the turbolift. 88 INT. CAVERN Picard is in the pit looking for something which will provide warmth. {Picard will continue talking to Beverly as he searches the cavern. Pages to come.} Roots have come in and tightened the passageway making it difficult for him to move around. He sees something - a little FLICKERING GLOW. He moves toward it. 89 ANOTHER ANGLE He clears away roots and earthen debris from around the GLOW. It's a viewscreen -- OFF Picard's REACTION. 90 EXT. PLANET SURFACE Tasha, Data, and a more revived Riker are searching close to the spot where Picard and Beverly disappeared. DATA Commander -- here. There seem to be air shafts overgrown with vegetation. Perhaps they somehow fell through one of them. RIKER Clear some of that away. STAR TREK: "The Arsenal... " - 1/25/88 - ACT FOUR 43. 90 CONTINUED: TASHA If Data's calculations are correct, the next sphere should show itself in two minutes. They work faster. 91 INT. CAVERN (OPTICAL) Picard moves closer to the viewscreen. SUDDENLY, a figure MATERIALIZES beside him. Picard nearly jumps out of his skin. 92 ON PICARD AND THE FIGURE It's the Peddler from the opening. THE PEDDLER {He starts to give a sales pitch to Picard. It tells Picard about the machine. Picard realizes that these people have created a nearly perfect killing system. The spy at the beginning, and all of these devices which are capable of learning and improving.} PICARD You poor fools. The first time you tested it, or demonstrated it... something went wrong and your creation destroyed you. Picard hears a NOISE... a GURGLING from somewhere behind the screen. PICARD What was that noise? THE PEDDLER {Another (something from the model number... ) is about to clear. Something about the demonstration. that it is another one of the devices going to the surface.} PICARD Can you stop it? STAR TREK: "The Arsenal... " - 1/25/88 - ACT FOUR 44. 92 CONTINUED: THE PEDDLER Why would I want to do that? It can't demonstrate its abilities unless it leaves the nest. Picard looks at the Peddler. A VOICE calls out. RIKER (O.S.) Captain... can you hear me? 93 ON PICARD He steps back and looks up. PICARD Yes -- we're here. 94 INTERCUT AS NEEDED Riker YELLING down the hole and Picard YELLING back. RIKER Are you all right? PICARD Doctor Crusher has been seriously injured. Our communicators are out and I haven't been able to contact the Enterprise. RIKER Yes, we are in the same fix. Is there a way to get down to you? PICARD None that I know of. Number One, those devices are part of a system which is located down here. Another is about to be released. 95 EXT. PLANET SURFACE Riker, Data and Tasha as they look down the hole. TASHA We know, Captain. Riker stares down into the cavern. STAR TREK: "The Arsenal... " - 1/25/88 - ACT FOUR 45. 95 CONTINUED: RIKER It's too far. There is nothing to hold onto... no way to climb down. TASHA I'm surprised either of them survived. DATA Commander, I can do it. RIKER How? DATA Jump. RIKER It's over ten meters. DATA Eleven point seven five. TASHA Data, you're sturdy, but you're not indestructible. DATA I believe I can safely traverse the distance. RIKER (yelling) Captain -- Data is coming down to join you. With a little look, Riker takes a STEP BACKWARD. RIKER (continuing) Be my guest. And without further discussion or hesitation, Data STEPS FORWARD AND DISAPPEARS. 96 INT. CAVERN as Data FALLS IN, lands on his feet with great force. His android legs absorb the impact. STAR TREK: "The Arsenal... " - 1/25/88 - ACT FOUR 46. 96 CONTINUED: PICARD (concerned) Data! DATA At your service, Captain. 97 INT. BATTLE BRIDGE Worf and other BRIDGE PERSONNEL take their stations and fire up their consoles. After a beat, Geordi takes the Command position. GEORDI Prepare to initiate separation sequence. SOLIS All decks report ready. GEORDI (with a pause, because it's such a big decision) Begin separation. 98 EXT. SPACE - ENTERPRISE (OPTICAL - STOCK) VARIOUS ANGLES of the separation process, ending with the TWO SECTIONS APART. 99 INT. BATTLE BRIDGE WORF Separation complete, sir. GEORDI Lian -- lay in a course for Minos -- warp five. LIAN Course set. GEORDI Engage. STAR TREK: "The Arsenal... " - 1/25/88 - ACT FOUR 47. 100 thru OMITTED 102 103 EXT. SPACE - BATTLE CRUISER (OPTICAL - STOCK) It BLASTS INTO WARP EIGHT AND VANISHES. 103A EXT. PLANET SURFACE Tasha and Riker by the hole through which Data has disappeared. TASHA We had better find a defensive position. If Data's right -- RIKER And he usually is. TASHA We're going to have company in thirty seconds. And this time... I don't know how we're going to stop it. OFF their REACTION, WE: FADE OUT: END OF ACT FOUR STAR TREK: "The Arsenal... " - 1/25/88 - ACT FIVE 48. ACT FIVE FADE IN: 104 EXT. SPACE - THE ENTERPRISE BATTLE CRUISER (OPTICAL)) 104 as it COMES OUT OF WARP SPEED near the planet Minos. 105 INT. BATTLE BRIDGE Everyone is tense. SOLIS Shields and deflectors are up. GEORDI (to Lian) When I order the shields down, you have one responsibility. Locate the away team and get them up here. You may only have a few seconds. LIAN Approaching the planet, sir. Geordi has picked up on Lian and Solis's look of apprehension. He gets up from the Command chair, CROSSES to them. GEORDI The ride's going to get a little bumpy. Things are going to happen fast. Although he's looking at both of them, his concerns are more for the younger Ensign T'su. GEORDI (continuing) Just keep alert... stay calm... and focus on the task at hand. You know your jobs. 105A REACTIONS as Lian and Solis listen and draw courage from Geordi's words. Even Worf pays respectful attention. STAR TREK: "The Arsenal... " - 1/25/88 - ACT FIVE 49. 105A CONTINUED: GEORDI You've been trained, you've been tested, and you've earned the right to sit in those chairs. 105B OMITTED 106 INT. CAVERN Data is with Picard inspecting the computer. There is a NOISE. DATA Another weapon has been launched. PICARD We have to find a way to stop this system. DATA I need to see the program schematic. Data expects Picard to answer, but it's the Peddler who says: THE PEDDLER You got it. 107 ON VIEWSCREEN (OPTICAL) The DIAGRAM OF THE WORKINGS of the system. 107A BACK TO SHOT (OPTICAL) PICARD Is it possible to re-adjust the targeting sequence? THE PEDDLER Absolutely. They wouldn't be much good if you couldn't. PICARD Data, assign it a neutral target. DATA The target must be specific. STAR TREK: "The Arsenal... " - 1/25/88 - ACT FIVE 50. 107A CONTINUED: PICARD Itself, then. Have it track itself or the power source that manufactures it. DATA The force of that explosion would destroy this chamber and evervone near by. PEDDLER Watch now - the Echo-Papa, Series Six-oh-seven is about to complete this phase of its mission. ON the Screen, the DOTS representing Tasha and Riker are ABOUT TO INTERSECT WITH THE DOT representing the weapons. 107B EXT. PLANET SURFACE Tasha and Riker SCRAMBLE to find cover in the foliage. RIKER Got any ideas? TASHA None. 107C INT. CAVERN Picard knows the clock is running out. PICARD Give me some options, Data... Quickly. BEVERLY Why don't you just shut it off? Picard REACTS. PICARD (to Data) Is that possible? BEVERLY Why not -- it's a machine, isn't it? STAR TREK: "The Arsenal... " - 1/25/88 - ACT FIVE 51. 107C CONTINUED: PICARD (to the Peddler) Shut it off. THE PEDDLER But, you haven't seen half of what this beauty can do. PICARD We've seen enough. THE PEDDLER Does that mean you are going to buy it? PICARD If that's what it takes to shut it off. Yes... I've seen enough -- you've made a sale. THE PEDDLER You won't be sorry. PICARD Now... end the demonstration. THE PEDDLER Done. And the Peddler DISAPPEARS, and the screen goes DARK. There is the SOUND OF SERVOS SHUTTING DOWN. 108 EXT. PLANET SURFACE (FORMERLY "INTERCUT") Riker and Tasha see the weapon MOVING through the foliage and they know there's nothing they can do about it. Riker gives Tasha a look, they both turn to face the weapon. Suddenly, IT STOPS. Right where it is - HANGS in the air for a moment, then DISSOLVES (or if you like... just DROPS to the ground). Riker and Tasha REACT with relief. PICARD'S COM VOICE Number One! Riker is surprised to have his communicator working. RIKER Here, sir. That was close. STAR TREK: "The Arsenal... " - 1/25/88 - ACT FIVE 52. 108A INT. CAVERN Picard and Data. The Peddler HAS GONE. PICARD (into com) Lieutenant La Forge. 109 OMITTED 110 INT. BATTLE BRIDGE (OPTICAL) manned as before. GEORDI It's great to hear your voice, Captain. We're a little busy right now. I'll get right back to you. WORF Phasers at full readiness. GEORDI Keep those shields at full power. It'll be on us any moment. And without warning, the INTERRUPTER EFFECT HITS, shaking the ship. The moment it ENDS: WORF Shields holding. GEORDI Ahead one-quarter, heading two-five mark three-zero-zero. LIAN That heading will take us further into the planet's atmosphere. GEORDI That's correct. (to Lian) We're going to lose some maneuverability, so keep a firm hand on the helm. LIAN (can do) Aye, sir. STAR TREK: "The Arsenal... " - 1/25/88 - ACT FIVE 53. 110 CONTINUED: WORF (catching on) You want our attacker to follow us into the atmosphere... GEORDI (nods) That's what I'm hoping. (to Solis) Scan for any air disruption or vortex -- cloak or no cloak, we'll spot it by its turbulence. All around the Battle bridge, faces light up with enthusiasm. Geordi's plan will work. GEORDI (to Worf) How fast will you be able to get a phaser lock? WORF Just watch me. SOLIS Hull temperature one thousand degrees and rising. GEORDI Emergency power to deflectors. 111 ANGLE TO INCLUDE MAIN VIEWER (OPTICAL) Minos fills the Main Viewer. The image begins to SHIMMER and BLUR as the atmospheric turbulence worsens. LIAN Velocity increasing, sir. GEORDI Steady as she goes. 112 EXT. SPACE - BATTLE CRUISER IN ATMOSPHERE (OPTICAL) The STARS ARE STILL VISIBLE, BUT THE BLACKNESS OF SPACE IS DEFINITELY GRAYISH AND OBSCURED. A RED HALO SURROUNDS THE BATTLE CRUISER, the result of air friction upon the ship's shields. STAR TREK: "The Arsenal... " - 1/25/88 - ACT FIVE 54. 113 INT. BATTLE BRIDGE (OPTICAL) The Main Viewer shows nothing but a BLUR of motion. The bridge itself is beginning to SHAKE from the TURBULENCE. Geordi MOVES from station to station, brimming with controlled energy. SOLIS Hull temperature twenty-five hundred degrees. WORF Deflectors nearing overload. LIAN Helm is growing unresponsive, sir. GEORDI Can you compensate? LIAN Yes, sir, I can. SOLIS Hull three thousand degrees. GEORDI Maintain heading. SOLIS Thirty-three hundred degrees. WORF Number four deflector inoperative. SOLIS Turbulence to starboard! 113A EXT. SPACE - THE ENTERPRISE (OPTICAL) WE SEE the OUTLINE OF THE CLAW. 113B INT. BATTLE BRIDGE SOLIS Scanners locked -- WORF Weapons locked! GEORDI (overlapping) Fire! STAR TREK: "The Arsenal... " - 1/25/88 - ACT FIVE 55. 114 EXT. SPACE - BATTLE CRUISER IN ATMOSPHERE (OPTICAL) FIRING FULL PHASERS to starboard. 115 INT. BATTLE BRIDGE (OPTICAL) as a splendiferous TECHNICOLOR EXPLOSION fills the Main Viewer. WORF Got him! The bridge crew is jubilant. GEORDI Come to four-zero mark six-five, ahead one-third, and assume standard orbit. LIAN Locked onto life-forms and ready to beam them up. GEORDI Excellent. Energize. 116 thru OMITTED 119 120 ANOTHER ANGLE - BATTLE BRIDGE (OPTICAL) as Riker, Tasha, Data, Picard, and Beverly MATERIALIZE on the bridge. GEORDI Ensign T'su -- lay in a course to rendezvous with the Saucer Section. {There will be an exchange between Picard and Geordi.} 121 EXT. SPACE - THE ENTERPRISE BATTLE CRUISER (OPTICAL)) as it WARPS OFF. FADE OUT. END OF ACT FIVE THE END STAR TREK: THE NEXT GENERATION Skin of Evil "f.k.a.'The Shroud'" #40271-122 Story by Joseph Stefano Teleplay by Joseph Stefano and Hannah Louise Shearer Directed by Joseph L. Scanlan THE WRITING CREDITS MAY NOT BE FINAL AND SHOULD NOT BE USED FOR PUBLICITY OR ADVERTISING PURPOSES WITHOUT FIRST CHECKING WITH THE TELEVISION LEGAL DEPARTMENT. Copyright 1988 Paramount Pictures Corporation. All Rights Reserved. This script is not for publication or reproduction. No one is authorized to dispose of same. If lost or destroyed, please notify the Script Department. REVISED FINAL DRAFT FEBRUARY 1, 1988 STAR TREK: "The Shroud" - 2/1/88 - CAST STAR TREK: THE NEXT GENERATION "The Shroud" CAST PICARD ARMUS (THE SHROUD) RIKER BEVERLY DATA TROI TASHA WORF GEORDI WESLEY LIEUTENANT COMMANDER LELAND T. LYNCH NURSE LIEUTENANT BEN PRIETO [PRONOUNCED: "PREE-ET-TOE"] Non-Speaking TWO MEDICAL TECHNICIANS TRANSPORTER CHIEF Voice-Over COMPUTER VOICE STAR TREK: "The Shroud" - 2/1/88 - SETS STAR TREK: THE NEXT GENERATION "The Shroud" SETS INTERIORS EXTERIORS USS ENTERPRISE USS ENTERPRISE MAIN BRIDGE MAIN ENGINEERING SHUTTLECRAFT TRANSPORTER ROOM SICKBAY VAGRA 2 [PRONOUNCED: "VAY-GRA"] OBSERVATION LOUNGE PASTORAL AREA SHUTTLECRAFT STAR TREK: "The Shroud" - 2/1/88 - TEASER 1. STAR TREK: THE NEXT GENERATION "The Shroud" TEASER FADE IN: 1 EXT. SPACE - THE ENTERPRISE (OPTICAL) as it travels through space on impulse power. PICARD (V.O.) Captain's log, stardate 41801.3. We are crossing through the Zed Lapis sector, where we will rendezvous with Shuttlecraft Thirteen carrying Deanna Troi, who is returning from a psychology conference. 2 INT. ENTERPRISE - MAIN BRIDGE The usual CREW is in place, except for Troi and Wesley. PICARD (V.O.) (continuing) Because Engineering is taking this opportunity to complete preventive maintenance on dilithium crystals, we are traveling on impulse power. Tasha and Worf are at the Aft station, working the console. WORF Routine deep sensor probe indicates no obstacles, no vessels within a range of three light years. TASHA Short-range sub-space radar confirms. Worf turns to her. WORF The martial arts competition is in three days. Are you prepared? STAR TREK: "The Shroud" - 2/1/88 - TEASER 2. 2 CONTINUED: TASHA If you'll meet me on the Holodeck later. I need your help on the Mishiama wrist-lock and break. If it works on you, I can use it on anyone. WORF A valid assumption. Who is your first competitor? TASHA The aikido match is with Science Officer Swenson. WORF You will defeat him easily. TASHA (nodding) I'm more concerned with Lieutenant Minnerly's kick-boxing. WORF You are favored in the ship's pool. Tasha just looks at him, then smiles, surprised. TASHA You bet on me. WORF A sure thing. 2A ANOTHER ANGLE GEORDI Sir, estimated rendezvous with the shuttle in one hour, ten minutes. PICARD Very good, Lieutenant. (to Riker) It's not the same around here without Counselor Troi, is it, Number One? Riker's not sure if Picard's needling him. STAR TREK: "The Shroud" - 2/1/88 - TEASER 3. 2A CONTINUED: RIKER No, sir. It seems... WORF ... Sir! I am receiving an emergency transmission from the shuttle! PICARD Put it on the Main Viewer. GEORDI I can't. We are receiving audio only. PICARD Then open the frequency. GEORDI Aye, sir. BEN'S COM VOICE (crackling; calm) ... what a jolt! PICARD Position report. BEN'S COM VOICE Sir, I have an onboard systems failure. You'll have to tell me where I am. GEORDI I read coordinates three-zero-seven mark one-two-six. Confirm! BEN'S COM VOICE Can't confirm. My instruments are haywire. The bridge crew REACTS with concern. PICARD Lieutenant Prieto, is Counselor Troi all right? BEN'S COM VOICE Yes, sir. Just a little shaken. We're being buffeted a bit... A GREAT STATIC ECHOES through the bridge. STAR TREK: "The Shroud" - 2/1/88 - TEASER 4. 2A CONTINUED: (2) BEN'S COM VOICE (continuing; slightly panicked; breaking up) ... losing more power! My flight control computer's fried. PICARD Main Engineering! 3 INT. MAIN ENGINEERING (INTERCUT WITH MAIN BRIDGE AS NECESSARY) where LIEUTENANT COMMANDER LELAND T. LYNCH and his crew are working on DILITHIUM CRYSTALS. The door to the chamber is OPEN. Lynch touches his insignia. LYNCH Engineering. Lieutenant Commander Leland T. Lynch reporting, sir. PICARD How long will it take to return to warp power? LYNCH Captain! I'm in the middle of realigning the dilithium crystals. PICARD There's an emergency, Lynch. I need warp drive. How long? LYNCH Twenty minutes. Maybe more. PICARD We don't have it. LYNCH I'll align it by hand. Then power up the core. PICARD Whatever it takes. A frustrated Lynch starts to move quickly. LYNCH Aye, sir. (to his workers) Let's go! STAR TREK: "The Shroud" - 2/1/88 - TEASER 5. 4 INT. MAIN BRIDGE the crew is very tense. GEORDI Shuttle, this is the Enterprise. Coordinates now read two-thirty-seven mark one-oh-one. You're moving in too close towards a large mass. BEN'S COM VOICE I can see it. The planet's getting closer. More STATIC fills the bridge. DATA The planet is Vagra Two of the Zed Lapis system. Uninhabited. PICARD Lieutenant, report! TROI'S COM VOICE This is Counselor Troi. I'll relay, sir. The pilot is... busy. We've lost most of our impulse power. PICARD Engineering! Status report! LYNCH'S COM VOICE Working on it. Three minutes, Captain. But there are no guarantees. PICARD Deanna, we'll be right there. Riker and the crew become very anxious as the STATIC again fills the bridge. TROI'S COM VOICE ... We're spinning around... BEN'S COM VOICE We're caught in the planet's gravity. TROI'S COM VOICE (very controlled) We're going to crash. STAR TREK: "The Shroud" - 2/1/88 - TEASER 6. 4 CONTINUED: The faces of her friends reflect their fear and anguish, as WE: FADE OUT. END OF TEASER STAR TREK: "The Shroud" - 2/1/88 - ACT ONE 7. ACT ONE FADE IN: 5 EXT. SPACE - THE ENTERPRISE (OPTICAL) still on impulse power. PICARD (V.O.) Captain's log, supplemental. We've lost all contact with Shuttlecraft Thirteen -- and can only assume they've crash-landed on Vagra Two. Main Engineering is working at top speed to return us to warp power. 6 INT. MAIN ENGINEERING where Lynch places the dilithium crystals on their proper tray. LYNCH Forget the final check. 7 CLOSER ANGLE as the tray with the crystals is placed within the chamber and the door CLOSES. Lynch WALKS to the Computer. 7A LYNCH AT THE COMPUTER LYNCH Computer -- initiate start-up sequence. COMPUTER VOICE Beginning check list. LYNCH Override. We are going directly to start-up. COMPUTER VOICE That procedure is not recommended. STAR TREK: "The Shroud" - 2/1/88 - ACT ONE 8. 7A CONTINUED: LYNCH Understood. Now. Prime matter/antimatter injectors. Set ratio at twenty-five to one... COMPUTER VOICE Ratio set. LYNCH Power engine core. Inject reactants. At which point the SOUND WHINES AND BUILDS TO A RUMBLE. The ENGINE LIGHTS BRIGHTEN AND BEGIN THE FAMILIAR WARP DRIVE EFFECT. LYNCH (continuing) Captain, this is Lieutenant Commander Leland T. Lynch. You have minimum warp drive. 8 INT. MAIN BRIDGE as Geordi watches his console closely. He waits for Data's signal. DATA Computer indicates alignment of matter-anti-matter completed, sir. GEORDI Course plotted and set for Vagra Two. PICARD Warp eight. LYNCH'S COM VOICE Minimum warp drive, Captain. PICARD You heard the order. Make it so. 9 EXT. SPACE - THE ENTERPRISE (OPTICAL) as the ship MOVES OUT IN WARP SPEED. 10 OMITTED STAR TREK: "The Shroud" - 2/1/88 - ACT ONE 9. 11 INT. MAIN BRIDGE The crew calmly but rapidly performs their duties. Riker sits almost immobilized next to Picard. Beverly puts her hand on his arm. GEORDI Approaching Vagra Two. DATA Strange, sir. No emergency signal from the shuttle as yet. RIKER (reassuring himself) They're designed to withstand almost any impact. WORF Beginning a deeper probe, sir. PICARD What is this place, Mister Data? DATA There is no information in the library computer, sir, other than the fact of its existence. No signs of any known higher life-form. Virtually no vegetation. RIKER Atmosphere? DATA Minimum for our needs. PICARD Standard orbit. GEORDI Standard orbit, aye. 11A EXT. SPACE - THE ENTERPRISE (OPTICAL) (FORMERLY SC. 10) as it ENTERS orbit around Vagra 2. 12 CLOSE ON PICARD AND RIKER Riker's scared for Troi. STAR TREK: "The Shroud" - 2/1/88 - ACT ONE 10. 12 CONTINUED: RIKER I could have set up the rendezvous in a dozen alternate sites. Picard knows what he's really saying. PICARD She means a lot to all of us. RIKER She's not dead. I'd know it. 13 WIDER ANGLE INCLUDING Worf. WORF I've located the shuttle! PICARD Life signs? WORF Not yet, sir. Riker REACTS to the possibility that Troi is dead. WORF (continuing) Still probing. It appears to be buried under a lot of debris. Worf shakes his head, then sees a FLICKER on the console. WORF (continuing) I may have something, sir! He makes an adjustment on his instruments. Riker's out of his chair instantly, looking over Worf's shoulder. WORF (continuing) Faint life signs. Very faint. RIKER How many? STAR TREK: "The Shroud" - 2/1/88 - ACT ONE 11. 13 CONTINUED: WORF There's no way of telling from here. PICARD Can we beam up the injured? DATA No. Our sensors are not fully penetrating whatever the debris is, sir. I cannot explain it. A puzzled concerned REACTION from Picard. PICARD That's very unusual. DATA Yes. I cannot explain it. Picard gets a call. LYNCH'S COM VOICE Captain, this is Lieutenant Commander Leland T. Lynch. Can I shut down the warp drive now for a full realignment? PICARD (distracted) Yes. LYNCH Thanks. That's fine... PICARD No. Wait. (something is picking at him) Not yet. LYNCH You'll have full impulse. PICARD I understand, but for the moment I want all systems at full readiness -- especially propulsion. LYNCH As you wish, Captain. STAR TREK: "The Shroud" - 2/1/88 - ACT ONE 12. 13 CONTINUED: (2) PICARD Assemble your team, Number One. RIKER Right away. BEVERLY I'll meet you in Transporter Room Four. Riker gets up quickly. RIKER Yar, Data. They're already halfway out of their positions and HEADING for the Transporter Room. 14 INT. TRANSPORTER ROOM FOUR (OPTICAL) The team is assembled on the pad when Beverly COMES IN with TWO MEDICAL TECHNICIANS and gear. They MOVE ONTO the pad. RIKER Do it. The Transporter Chief works the console and the away team DISAPPEARS. 15 EXT. VAGRA 2 (OPTICAL) Vagra 2 is arid, desolate, with very rocky terrain. It's always dusk. The team BEAMS IN about ten meters from the crash site. The shuttle appears to have crashed into a hill. It's almost completely buried, obscured by ROCKS. There is an eerie stillness, a deadness about the place. Tasha takes readings. TASHA Ben must have had no control left, otherwise he would have picked a better spot. BEVERLY Let's go. The life signs are weak. Tasha starts to lead the team quickly and cautiously towards the shuttle. STAR TREK: "The Shroud" - 2/1/88 - ACT ONE 13. 16 ANOTHER ANGLE As they near the shuttle, they run into an obstacle - a BLACK, SHINY, VISCOUS MASS lying on the ground. 16A ANGLE ON THE AWAY TEAM They STOP for a beat and look at the slime. Data takes a tricorder reading. RIKER What is it? No one has an answer. TASHA No idea. We'll go around. Just to be on the safe side. 16B ANGLE ON TASHA As she leads the away team around the slick, it MOVES PARALLEL with them so it stays between them and the shuttle. The team STOPS. TASHA We'll go the other way. 16C ANOTHER ANGLE The away team CIRCLES AROUND the other way. And again, the slick stays between them and the shuttle. RIKER (touching his communicator) Enterprise, this is Riker. We've got a problem. PICARD'S COM VOICE What kind of a problem, Number One? RIKER I'm not sure yet. There's some kind of a slick blocking our path. We'll keep you apprised. PICARD'S COM VOICE Maintain an open frequency. STAR TREK: "The Shroud" - 2/1/88 - ACT ONE 14. 16C CONTINUED: RIKER Aye, sir. 17 CLOSER ANGLE RIKER Analysis, Mister Data. Data takes readings. DATA Inconclusive, sir. I cannot tell you what it is -- only what it is not. RIKER Explain. DATA There is no evidence of neural or circulatory systems. No internal organs. Cellular structure unknown. It does not have any proteins which are known to us. The slime remains SILENT and STILL... Until: BEVERLY It's narrower over here. Can we get over it? They try -- but it EXPANDS, so they can't pass. RIKER Wait, Beverly. How is it moving, Data? DATA I do not know, sir. It does not appear to have any skeletal framework or musculature. RIKER Then what's causing it to move? DATA Perhaps we are. It appears to be following us, sir. STAR TREK: "The Shroud" - 2/1/88 - ACT ONE 15. 18 WIDER ANGLE The slime continues to BLOCK THEIR PATH, BLOCKING ANY WAY THEY TRY TO APPROACH the shuttle. RIKER No readings of intelligence. No brain as we know it. But evidence of thought, Mister Data? DATA Insufficient information. PICARD'S COM VOICE Number One, can you beam around it? RIKER Negative, not enough room, sir. It seems to be trying to keep us away from the shuttle. PICARD'S COM VOICE Data, is it alive? 19 THE CREATURE DATA It is possible. It possesses two of the requisites for life. 20 WIDER ANGLE A SHRIEK is emitted, and the BLACK SHROUD, ARMUS, LIFTS ITSELF off the ground and blocks the away team's path. ARMUS Very good, tin man. They STEP BACK, startled... phasers ready. Riker gathers himself and steps forward. Tasha's alert. 20A INT. MAIN BRIDGE Picard and the others listening. PICARD What is it, Number One? What are you seeing? STAR TREK: "The Shroud" - 2/1/88 - ACT ONE 16. 20A CONTINUED: RIKER I wish I had an answer, Captain. The truth is... I'm not sure. FADE OUT. END OF ACT ONE STAR TREK: "The Shroud" - 2/1/88 - ACT TWO 17. ACT TWO FADE IN: A21 EXT. SPACE - THE ENTERPRISE (OPTICAL) as the ship orbits the planet. PICARD (V.O.) Captain's log, supplemental. While on the planet Vagra Two to rescue members of the crew who were injured in a rather strange and unexplained shuttle crash, the away team, lead by Commander Riker, has encountered a strange creature which seems to be able to take many forms, including something which is humanoid. B21 INT. MAIN BRIDGE Picard touches his arm panel. PICARD Go easy, Number One. Let's find out what it is we are dealing with here. RIKER'S COM VOICE Agreed, Captain. PICARD And Number One, I don't believe the location shuttle crash and the proximity of this creature is necessarily a coincidence. C21 EXT. PLANET VAGRA 2 Riker moves a STEP CLOSER to the creature. RIKER I am Commander William Riker of the USS Enterprise. ARMUS I am ARMUS. Why do you intrude into my space? STAR TREK: "The Shroud" - 2/1/88 - ACT TWO 18. C21 CONTINUED: RIKER We mean you no harm. We have an injured crew in that shuttlecraft. We need to get to them. May we pass? ARMUS That is important to you? That they live? RIKER Yes. Preserving life -- all life -- is very important to us. ARMUS Why? RIKER We believe that everything in the universe has a right to exist. ARMUS Interesting. Irrelevant. But you may now leave if you wish. Riker and the crew are startled. TASHA We won't without the shuttle crew. The shroud REMAINS SILENT as Tasha makes a slight MOVE TO GO AROUND IT. ARMUS You will not like it here. TASHA What are you saying -- that you are going to try and deny us access and attempt to force us to leave without our comrades? ARMUS I told you what you can do. You can leave. Tasha has had enough of this and starts to move toward the narrowest strip of slime. TASHA Enough. We have people who need attention. We mean you no harm, but do not interfere. STAR TREK: "The Shroud" - 2/1/88 - ACT TWO 19. 21 ANOTHER ANGLE (OPTICAL) as ARMUS FLICKS HIS FINGER, sending an ENERGY FORCE towards Tasha, JERKING HER BACK and SLAMMING HER DOWN to the ground. 22 ON THE TEAM (OPTICAL) Everything from here on must happen in a blur of action. Beverly and the medical personnel jump to Tasha's side. Riker and Data MOVE BETWEEN the others and BLAST ARMUS with their phasers. 23 OMITTED 24 ANGLE ON THE CREATURE (OPTICAL) who appears to thrive and grow on the energy. 24A ANGLE ON RIKER AND DATA They BACK AWAY - still FIRING. PICARD'S COM VOICE Number One? RIKER The creature attacked us. Lieutenant Yar is down. DATA It appears to feed on our phaser energy. RIKER We have no effect on it. 24B INT. MAIN BRIDGE Picard and the others are monitoring. PICARD Transporter Room. Get them up. Now! STAR TREK: "The Shroud" - 2/1/88 - ACT TWO 20. 24C ANGLE ON TASHA AND THE OTHERS Beverly quickly takes a reading. She can't believe the instruments. BEVERLY She's dead. 24CC ANGLE ON THE BRIDGE CREW stunned. 24D ANGLE ON RIKER AND DATA They REACT to the words. Then look back at ARMUS. 24E ANGLE ON ARMUS watching. 25 ANGLE ON BEVERLY AND TASHA There is a piece of slime on Tasha's face. Beverly digs at it, desperate to remove it. 25A ANGLE ON AWAY TEAM (OPTICAL) The lock on is complete -- the away team is BEAMED UP. Leaving only Armus and the shuttle. 26 OMITTED 26A INT. TRANSPORTER ROOM (OPTICAL) as the away team BEAMS IN. Beverly and the Technicians are still working on Tasha. Beverly gives her an injection in the neck. Riker and Data can REACT for the first time. BEVERLY I need her in Sickbay right now! Get a gurney. 27 INT. MAIN BRIDGE Picard is out of his seat -- the whole crew is alert. STAR TREK: "The Shroud" - 2/1/88 - ACT TWO 21. 27 CONTINUED: PICARD Yellow Alert, Lieutenant Worf. I'll be in Sickbay. REACTIONS from the bridge crew. 28 thru OMITTED 29 30 INT. SICKBAY The medical team is easing Tasha onto the operating table as Picard ENTERS. Beverly barely glances up at him. He MOVES OFF TO THE SIDE and watches silently, with Data and Riker, as: 31 CLOSE ON DIAGNOSTIC SCREEN which shows her bodily readings to be totally askew. 32 WIDER ANGLE Beverly and the Nurse work together as if they'd done this a hundred times before, attaching the clamshell device onto the bed, over Tasha's body. PICARD Status, Doctor? BEVERLY She's dead. PICARD Bring her back. BEVERLY I'm trying. PICARD You've saved people before. You can save her. BEVERLY Neural stimulator. STAR TREK: "The Shroud" - 2/1/88 - ACT TWO 22. 32 CONTINUED: The Nurse immediately helps her attach the device, which clips onto the bed and slips over Tasha's head like a loose headband. As soon as both devices are activated, Beverly and the Nurse anxiously watch the diagnostic screen. A FEW KEY INDICATORS APPROACH NORMALITY. Picard is anxious and impatient. RIKER There. You did it. BEVERLY No. I've got her on total support. There's no independent brain activity. Beverly grimly and quickly works the neural stimulator. She pushes programming keys furiously, then hits the start button. No reaction. NURSE She's not responding, Doctor. Her synaptic network is breaking down. BEVERLY No! Inject norep. The Nurse complies as Beverly reprograms the stimulator. Nothing happens. BEVERLY (continuing) We're going for direct reticular stimulation. NURSE Risky. PICARD What does that mean? BEVERLY Doesn't matter! Do it! The Nurse punches it in, and Tasha's body TWITCHES SLIGHTLY. Picard looks hopefully at Beverly. PICARD She moved! STAR TREK: "The Shroud" - 2/1/88 - ACT TWO 23. 32 CONTINUED: (2) NURSE Neurons are beginning to depolarize. Beverly is desperate, but calm. BEVERLY Increase to seventy microvolts. The Nurse complies. Beverly pushes the button. Tasha MOVES SLIGHTLY -- VERY SLIGHTLY. Beverly checks the readout. Data and Riker looks at each other -- it's not good. PICARD (urgently) Doctor? BEVERLY Eighty-five microvolts. They quickly try again. And again. Finally, there is NO MOVEMENT in Tasha at all. 33 ON BEVERLY AND PICARD She slowly turns to him. BEVERLY She's gone. PICARD Gone? BEVERLY There's too much synaptic damage. That thing just sucked all the life out of her. There's nothing I can do... Picard, Riker and Data seem rooted to the spot. 34 ANOTHER ANGLE Beverly reluctantly pushes in a code on the overbed life support clamshell. She and the others look up at the big diagnostic wall screen and watch all the LIFE FUNCTION INDICATORS FALL TO ZERO. They REACT to the finality of this. STAR TREK: "The Shroud" - 2/1/88 - ACT TWO 24. 35 EXT. VAGRA 2 as ARMUS SLITHERS AND SLIDES close to the shuttle. 36 INT. SHUTTLECRAFT It is greatly damaged. The PILOT, LIEUTENANT BEN PRIETO, is slumped forward, unconscious. Troi tries to move, but is in a great deal of pain. She touches her communicator, but it doesn't work. 36A EXT. VAGRA 2 (FORMERLY SCENE 39) ARMUS has slithered up the shuttle and covered the little bit that isn't buried by rubble. 36B INT. SHUTTLECRAFT (FORMERLY SCENE 40) Troi is startled. She feels very uncomfortable and looks around, seeing nothing, but feeling -- an intimate sense of evil. ARMUS (O.S.) Your friends have deserted you. They're not coming back. TROI You're wrong. ARMUS (O.S.) I killed one of them. Troi is very sad. TROI Yes. I know. ARMUS (O.S.) How could you be in there and know that? TROI I felt her die. ARMUS (O.S.) Do you want to know why I killed her? TROI Meaningless. That act had no reason. STAR TREK: "The Shroud" - 2/1/88 - ACT TWO 25. 36B CONTINUED: ARMUS (O.S.) Exactly. I did it because I could. TROI But you felt no satisfaction. ARMUS (O.S.) No, none. It was too easy. TROI You wanted her to suffer. You have a great need. ARMUS (O.S.) I need nothing. TROI Liar. (there is a pause) End this. Let us go. ARMUS Not yet. TROI They won't give you what you want. ARMUS (O.S.) And what is that? TROI To break their spirit. ARMUS (O.S.) Oh, is that what I want?... Then that's what I will have. TROI Never. 37 EXT. SPACE - THE ENTERPRISE (OPTICAL) as it orbits Vagra 2. 38 INT. OBSERVATION LOUNGE The bridge crew GATHERS around the table. STAR TREK: "The Shroud" - 2/1/88 - ACT TWO 26. 38 CONTINUED: BEVERLY (enraged) She didn't do anything, Captain. Her phaser was lowered. She only wanted to get to Troi and Lieutenant Prieto. RIKER There was nothing provocative about what she did. Riker slams the table and fights back tears of outrage. BEVERLY It just killed her. No reason. No justification. A senseless, brutal act. Picard waits, while the members of his crew purge their anger. PICARD All right. This is very emotional for all of us, but we still have members of this crew down on that planet, so, until the shuttle crew is safely aboard this ship, our feelings will have to wait. There are QUIET MURMURS OF ASSENT. PICARD (continuing) Lieutenant Worf, you are now chief of security. WORF I will do my best, sir. PICARD Doctor, what is the status of the shuttle crew? BEVERLY We're still receiving faint life signs. But the sensor readings are fluctuating -- and I don't know how accurate they are. STAR TREK: "The Shroud" - 2/1/88 - ACT TWO 27. 38 CONTINUED: (2) DATA ARMUS is capable of creating undefined forcefields. In effect, we are powerless to communicate or use our transporter unless it allows us to. PICARD A powerful creature against whom we seem to have no defense. Number One. Riker begins PACING. RIKER This creature that calls itself ARMUS is down on that planet waiting for us to come back. It wants us to come back. It killed Tasha. It could have just as easily killed us all. It didn't. Troi and Ben Prieto are still alive. For a reason. It wants something -- and it knows we will not leave so long as Troi and Ben are alive. PICARD What does it want? RIKER The only way we're going to find out is to go back down. The crew REACTS. DATA Sir, request permission to accompany Commander Riker. He may need help -- and ARMUS may allow us through its forcefield only once. BEVERLY I am going too. There are injured people down there. GEORDI Captain, perhaps I can see something in the creature which will be helpful. (to Worf) Worf -- are you coming? STAR TREK: "The Shroud" - 2/1/88 - ACT TWO 28. 38 CONTINUED: (3) WORF I will remain on the ship. Everyone is mildly surprised. WORF (continuing) The object here is not to engage this creature in battle. The goal is the safe return of Counselor Troi and Lieutenant Prieto. I can best accomplish this from the Tactical Station. Picard admires his courageous choice. PICARD Agreed, Lieutenant... Number One, I see no other choice. Prepare your away team. 39 thru OMITTED 40 40A INT. TRANSPORTER ROOM (OPTICAL) Riker, Data, Beverly and Geordi prepare to beam down. RIKER Is there anything left to say? SILENCE. RIKER Energize. 41 EXT. VAGRA 2 (OPTICAL) as the away team BEAMS DOWN near the shuttle, which is lying there, quiescent, waiting for them. FADE OUT. END OF ACT TWO STAR TREK: "The Shroud" - 2/1/88 - ACT THREE 29. ACT THREE FADE IN: 42 EXT. VAGRA 2 The away team MAKES ITS WAY, very cautiously, towards ARMUS. The shroud is still on top of the shuttlecraft. Riker and the team take an involuntary STEP BACK when they see this. RIKER Enterprise. PICARD'S COM VOICE Number One. RIKER We're approaching the shuttlecraft. The creature's covering it. 42A INT. SHUTTLECRAFT Troi feels the presence of the away team. ARMUS (O.S.) I lied to you. They came back. TROI Let me talk with them. ARMUS (O.S.) No. TROI Why not? Does the thought of my having contact with them make you uneasy? ARMUS (O.S.) No, it makes them uneasy. They are worried. TROI Yes. Yes, they are worried. ARMUS (O.S.) They care for you. You must be very special. STAR TREK: "The Shroud" - 2/1/88 - ACT THREE 30. 42A CONTINUED: TROI We are members of a community. We all care for one another. ARMUS (O.S.) Equally? None more than another? TROI Yes, equally. ARMUS (O.S.) Now it is you who lie. There is one who is loved more. Troi changes the direction of this conversation. TROI You were really surprised that they came back. ARMUS (O.S.) Yes. TROI Why? Because the others did not? ARMUS (O.S.) (now it is the creature who is uncomfortable) What others? TROI You can't hide the emptiness from me. The others. The ones who hurt you. Who left you -- alone -- rejected. The ones who make you so angry. ARMUS (O.S.) What do you know of them? TROI Only what you tell me. 42B EXT. SHUTTLECRAFT ARMUS SLITHERS OFF the craft and MOVES TOWARDS the away team. RIKER Enterprise, Armus is moving towards us. STAR TREK: "The Shroud" - 2/1/88 - ACT THREE 31. 42C INT. MAIN BRIDGE (FORMERLY SC. 45) WESLEY and Worf lean over the Aft console. On the bridge they spot the change -- and again... WORF Captain. Look at this. Picard APPROACHES the Aft station. WORF (continuing) The force of the energy field around the shuttle just took a dip. It was almost low enough for us to beam them out. Now, as the creature approaches the away team, the energy field increases. Picard is pensive for a moment. PICARD Chart it. 43 thru OMITTED 44 44A ANGLE ON AWAY TEAM (FORMERLY SC. 43) The shroud is half-standing near the team. ARMUS She said you'd be back, but I didn't think so. RIKER We have no choice. ARMUS I sense anger directed at me. Riker deflects the statement. RIKER I'm here to negotiate. What is it you want? ARMUS Maybe I want nothing. RIKER Then you would have killed us all. STAR TREK: "The Shroud" - 2/1/88 - ACT THREE 32. 44A CONTINUED: ARMUS I still might. RIKER Do you want something? Tell me. Maybe we can reach an accommodation. ARMUS You would do that even after what I did to the fair one? RIKER Yes. ARMUS If I tell you what it is... will you give it to me? RIKER I don't know... I guess it depends. ARMUS Not good enough. 45 OMITTED 46 ANGLE ON BEVERLY AND THE SHROUD as she APPROACHES it. BEVERLY I'm a doctor. I need to treat our injured friends. ARMUS Say please. BEVERLY Please. ARMUS Again. BEVERLY Please. ARMUS You ask nicely. I will allow it. STAR TREK: "The Shroud" - 2/1/88 - ACT THREE 33. 46 CONTINUED: The team starts to move forward. ARMUS (continuing) Stop! Only the "Doctor." Beverly STARTS TO MOVE FORWARD. ARMUS Stop. I've changed my mind. Talk to her from here. BEVERLY How? (into com) Troi, can you hear me? Troi? 47 OMITTED 48 INT. SHUTTLECRAFT BEVERLY'S COM VOICE Deanna? Are you all right? Troi touches her communicator. TROI Beverly... 49 EXT. SHUTTLECRAFT Beverly relaxes with relief for a moment. BEVERLY Are you all right? 50 INT. SHUTTLECRAFT (INTERCUT AS NECESSARY WITH EXT. SHUTTLECRAFT) TROI I'm not sure. Ben's really bad -- I can barely feel his pulse. BEVERLY We have to get you out. It has a forcefield preventing us from transporting you. TROI I know. STAR TREK: "The Shroud" - 2/1/88 - ACT THREE 34. 51 EXT. VAGRA 2 - NEAR ARMUS Riker makes a reflexive MOVE TOWARD THE SHUTTLE. RIKER She needs our help. ARMUS You have no permission to pass. BEVERLY There are people suffering a few meters away, and you block our path. Why? ARMUS You asked to talk. I allowed it. Wasn't that enough for you? BEVERLY No. I need help to get to them. ARMUS You are ungrateful. BEVERLY You are evil and disgusting. What are you made of? DATA It does not register on my tricorder, Doctor. ARMUS "It?" Does that mean I am not alive? DATA No. Clearly you are some kind of intelligent form. ARMUS pulls the tricorder out of Data's hands and sails it over the horizon. ARMUS Then your instrument lies. It is useless. Perhaps all your instruments are useless. The shroud instantaneously RIPS OFF GEORDI'S VISOR. Data immediately REACTS to assist. ARMUS (continuing) Don't help him. STAR TREK: "The Shroud" - 2/1/88 - ACT THREE 35. 51 CONTINUED: Geordi helplessly MOVES TOWARDS THE VISOR. ARMUS MOVES IT. Riker puts his hand on Beverly's arm. They stay out of it -- both furious. DATA One meter to your left, Geordi. Geordi moves that way, bends down and almost reaches it when the shroud MOVES IT again, behind him. DATA (continuing) Behind you. Geordi turns and feels his way. The Shroud MOVES IT again. Data says nothing more while Geordi searches. ARMUS Aren't you going to lead him to his sight again, robot? DATA No. You will just move it again. I will not help you hurt him. RIKER None of us will help you. ARMUS (disgusted) Then give it to him. I will find something else to do. Wait right here. 51A EXT. SHUTTLECRAFT as the away team watches ARMUS surround the shuttle. 51B INT. SHUTTLECRAFT Troi moves. She can feel that he's back. ARMUS (O.S.) You said I wouldn't enjoy it. You were wrong. TROI Still the great emptiness remains. You sound so alone. STAR TREK: "The Shroud" - 2/1/88 - ACT THREE 36. 51B CONTINUED: ARMUS (O.S.) I am alone. I am the discarded skin of a creature whose beauty dazzles all who see it. But I am its refuse -- left here. TROI You have my pity. The shuttle SHAKES with the creature's rage. ARMUS Your pity! Save that for yourself. For the first time -- the first time -- WE SEE a ripple of FEAR on Troi's face. 51C EXT. PLANET ARMUS HAS MOVED OFF THE SHUTTLE AND as it APPROACHES THE GROUP, Riker suddenly feels a great force pull him. He calls out. Data MOVES to help him. ARMUS Touch him and he dies. As the away team watches, Riker - fighting with all his might -is pulled inexorably toward the slime. From the other direction, Armus also MOVES toward the hole. As the creature's SHRIEK joins RIKER'S SCREAM, the two SLIP INTO THE SLIME HOLE and DISAPPEAR. For a beat there is nothing. Then: WE CAN SEE only RIKER'S FACE PRESSED AGAINST THE SKIN. DATA Enterprise, ARMUS has enveloped and attacked Commander Riker. PICARD'S COM VOICE I'm beaming you up! ARMUS If any of you leave now, he dies. And so do the survivors of the crash. As they REACT, WE: FADE OUT. END OF ACT THREE STAR TREK: "The Shroud" - 2/1/88 - ACT FOUR 37. ACT FOUR FADE IN: 52 EXT. SPACE - THE ENTERPRISE (OPTICAL) in orbit around Vagra 2. PICARD (V.O.) Captain's log, supplemental. There is grave danger to the crew on Vagra Two. My first officer is missing - attacked by this entity known as "ARMUS." 53 INT. MAIN BRIDGE Wesley and Worf working on a solution to the ARMUS energy problem. WORF Captain, perhaps you should look at this. Picard STEPS OVER and studies the graphic display. WORF (continuing) We have a chart of the energy field surrounding the shuttle. PICARD There are a great deal of fluctuations. WORF Yes - but there is a pattern. Here is when it killed Lieutenant Yar, and here is when it absorbed Commander Riker. PICARD (indicating points on the graph) And here -- and here? Where the energy is lowest? WORF Both times it had enveloped the shuttle and was involved with Counselor Troi. STAR TREK: "The Shroud" - 2/1/88 - ACT FOUR 38. 53 CONTINUED: PICARD So when it is provoked in a certain way its forcefield is weakened... Troi must have the answer. I'm beaming down. You have the Conn, Lieutenant. WESLEY Sir, I'd like to... PICARD ... Go with me? No, Wesley. You can be of more help to Lieutenant Worf. WESLEY But... PICARD ...No. WESLEY Tell my Mom... I'm not worried. PICARD I'll tell her, Wes. 54 OMITTED 55 INT. SHUTTLECRAFT It's as if Troi realizes something else is wrong and feels the pain Riker is in. TROI Imzadi. No... Stop hurting him! ARMUS (O.S.) What will you give me if I stop hurting him? TROI Nothing. I can give you nothing. ARMUS (O.S.) You still resist. Not for much longer. STAR TREK: "The Shroud" - 2/1/88 - ACT FOUR 39. 56 EXT. THE SHROUD (OPTICAL) At that moment Picard BEAMS DOWN next to the away team. The team REACTS to Picard's arrival. ARMUS Ah. Another human has arrived. A very bold one, too. Perhaps the party is complete. The shroud LIFTS ITSELF TO ITS TORSO to greet the Captain. At that moment A LIKENESS OF RIKER'S FACE PUSHES THROUGH AND STRAINS AGAINST THE SHROUD, AND THEN DISAPPEARS again. They see it and control themselves. They will never mention what they've seen to ARMUS. The captain and the creature face each other. ARMUS You must be the chief. PICARD Captain Jean-Luc Picard of the Enterprise. Is Commander Riker dead? ARMUS Guess. DATA (to Picard) I would guess that death is no longer sufficient entertainment to alleviate its boredom. Therefore, Commander Riker is alive. ARMUS Maybe. Picard stares closely at ARMUS. ARMUS (continuing) Don't you want to ask me what I want? PICARD No. STAR TREK: "The Shroud" - 2/1/88 - ACT FOUR 40. 56 CONTINUED: ARMUS Then, to protect your own existence, maybe you'd better give me a reason. Entertain me. Be creative. Then perhaps I won't kill your assistant. You do care very much about that, don't you? PICARD Yes. The shroud looks in Data's direction and suddenly -- completely against Data's will -- an unseen force causes Data's hand to take his phaser and point it at Picard. ARMUS Robot, how would you feel if you were the instrument of death for your leader? PICARD Don't struggle, Mister Data. Data relaxes into it. DATA I have no control over what you do with the phaser. Therefore, I would not be the instrument of his death. ARMUS ignores him - and TURNS THE PHASER ON BEVERLY. ARMUS Perhaps the kind doctor would engender more feeling? He SWINGS DATA'S ARM VIOLENTLY AROUND so the phaser points at his own temple. ARMUS How does it feel facing your own extinction? I won't call it death. You're not alive. DATA It feels -- curious. ARMUS stops the game - and DROPS THE PHASER. The others REACT with quiet relief. Data stares at it. STAR TREK: "The Shroud" - 2/1/88 - ACT FOUR 41. 56 CONTINUED: (2) DATA You are capable of great sadism and cruelty. Interesting. No redeeming qualities. ARMUS So what do you think? DATA I think you should be destroyed. ARMUS A moral judgment from something that isn't even alive? Before Data can answer: PICARD Mister Data... (then:) ARMUS, we are through dealing with you. ARMUS I have your man in here... and the others. PICARD It doesn't matter. We will no longer amuse you. ARMUS I can kill them. PICARD Yes. You can. But only I can make them perform. They follow my orders. ARMUS Then it is you. Amuse me. PICARD Not until I know if the ones in the shuttle are still alive. I must see them. ARMUS Not possible. PICARD Then our business is complete. STAR TREK: "The Shroud" - 2/1/88 - ACT FOUR 42. 56 CONTINUED: (3) ARMUS And you claim you care about your comrades. PICARD I do care. ARMUS is silent. PICARD (continuing) Shall I tell you what true evil is? It is to submit to you. It is when we surrender our freedom, our dignity instead of defying you. Do what you will. We will take the consequences. He and the others turn their backs on ARMUS and begin to WALK AWAY slowly. ARMUS Wait! 57 thru OMITTED 58 59 ANGLE ON ARMUS as it SPITS RIKER OUT in front of the away team. He is covered with black slime and we can't tell if he's dead or alive. FADE OUT. END OF ACT FOUR STAR TREK: "The Shroud" - 2/1/88 - ACT FIVE 43. ACT FIVE FADE IN: 60 EXT. VAGRA 2 - CONTINUOUS ACTION Beverly and Picard lean over the fallen Riker. His skin looks like he received a bad sunburn. She takes readings as Data and Geordi stand slightly back. BEVERLY He's alive. PICARD But is he all right? Riker shudders and opens his eyes. For a moment he looks around wildly, not knowing where he is. When he realizes he's free, he struggles to get up. BEVERLY Don't move. (to Picard) Everything shows normal, except his skin sustained a mild form of acid bath. RIKER (weakly) So much distortion, so frustrated... it had to get rid of me. PICARD I want you all out of here. (into com) Enterprise, beam up the away team -- immediately. ARMUS You need my permission. PICARD Do I have it? ARMUS Yes. Are you going? PICARD No. Not yet. STAR TREK: "The Shroud" - 2/1/88 - ACT FIVE 44. 60A ANOTHER ANGLE (OPTICAL) PICARD Enterprise, four to beam up. WORF'S COM VOICE Aye, sir. The four BEAM UP, leaving Picard. Picard APPROACHES ARMUS. PICARD I want to see my people on the shuttle. ARMUS doesn't answer. ARMUS makes a very slight motion and Picard DISAPPEARS. (NOTE: This should not look like our transporter effect. the OPTICAL should be BLACKISH.) 61 INT. SHUTTLECRAFT (OPTICAL) Picard APPEARS. PICARD Troi. TROI Captain Picard. PICARD We registered a weakening of ARMUS' energy while he was talking to you. What was going on? TROI ARMUS is very needy, but he can't deal with that. He denies his rage. I confronted him with it. That must have been when he reacted. Picard REACTS thoughtfully. 62 EXT. SPACE - THE ENTERPRISE (OPTICAL) in orbit. 63 INT. MAIN BRIDGE where Wesley anxiously works with Worf. STAR TREK: "The Shroud" - 2/1/88 - ACT FIVE 45. 63 CONTINUED: PICARD'S COM VOICE Lieutenant Worf, I'm going to try and break this impasse. Monitor carefully. WORF Aye sir. (to Wesley) Set the computer. When the energy level reaches two point six point two-oh-five, automatically beam up Troi and Prieto. We'll do a parallel transport of the captain. 64 EXT. VAGRA - NEAR ARMUS (OPTICAL) The captain MATERIALIZES and faces ARMUS. PICARD How long have you been on this planet? ARMUS Since they left. PICARD Someone was here before? ARMUS Long ago. PICARD They abandoned you. Who were they? ARMUS A race of titans. So they thought. Together, they perfected a method of bringing to the surface all that was evil and negative within them. All this erupted on the outside, spread, and connected. In time, it formed a second skin, dank and vile. They found a way to rid themselves of it, leaving them free of the bonds of destructiveness. Then they left. And here I am. STAR TREK: "The Shroud" - 2/1/88 - ACT FIVE 46. 64 CONTINUED: PICARD It must be very lonely. ARMUS You cannot trick me by pretending compassion, captain. PICARD Haven't you seen we humans are capable of compassion? ARMUS Oh, yes. It is revolting. Time and again you rise from despair into hope. From hate into understanding. From aloneness into love. But you are puny. Weak. Vessels that die from a flick of my power. PICARD But our spirit soars. A great poet once said "all spirits are enslaved which serve things evil." ARMUS Picard, it is impossible for you to accept that I am truly evil. PICARD Because you are not. ARMUS I am a skin of evil. PICARD Nothing in the universe is the same as anything else -- but everything has light and dark. ARMUS is SILENT. PICARD (continuing) They did not leave you because they hated you. They didn't understand you. ARMUS You don't know that. STAR TREK: "The Shroud" - 2/1/88 - ACT FIVE 47. 65 EXT. THE SHROUD (OPTICAL) (INTERCUT AS NEEDED) Picard moves back a little bit from the shroud. The next actions happen almost simultaneously. WORF (checking his readings) Energy shields are way down! Computer is beginning transport. 65A INT. THE SHUTTLECRAFT (OPTICAL) Ben and Troi begin the BEAM UP. 65B EXT. THE SHROUD as Picard begins to BEAM UP. The ARMUS REACTS slightly late. All he can do is lean back his head and SHRIEK. He's been left again. 66 EXT. SHUTTLECRAFT (OPTICAL) As the Enterprise uses PINPOINT PHASER POWER TO completely DESTROY THE SHUTTLE. 67 EXT. SPACE - THE ENTERPRISE (OPTICAL) as it LEAVES ORBIT of Vagra 2. PICARD (V.O.) Captain's log, supplemental. The shuttlecraft has been destroyed to prevent any possibility of Armus leaving the planet. Vagra 2 has been declared an off-limits planet, but the damage has been done. One of the saddest duties I have to perform is ahead of me. 68 INT. ENTERPRISE - PASTORAL AREA (OPTICAL) It is set up as a kind of glade, filled with people who loved Tasha. The bridge crew FILES IN, one by one. Beverly ENTERS first. Troi is pale, and weak, but recovering. She leans on Riker, whose face still shows some effects of the shroud. Geordi and Worf COME IN, followed by Data. Wesley is leading them to their assigned seats. STAR TREK: "The Shroud" - 2/1/88 - ACT FIVE 48. 68 CONTINUED: WESLEY (to Data) This is where you're supposed to sit. DATA Why? WESLEY I don't know. The captain gave me a seating plan. He sits down next to his mother, who smiles at him and puts her arm around him. He moves in closer to her, needing her comfort. Picard goes to the front. Everything is quiet. PICARD We are here together to honor our friend and comrade Lieutenant Natasha Yar. We will have much time to grieve for her in the days ahead, but for now, she has asked that we celebrate her life -- with her. She has left a living will. He moves to sit in his assigned seat in the middle of the front row. The LIGHTS DIM. And as a HOLOGRAPHIC IMAGE OF TASHA APPEARS in front of the group, there are gasps of surprise -- each of the bridge crew REACTS to the Image in front of them. TASHA Welcome, my friends. You are here now watching this image of me because I have died. It probably happened while I was on duty, and quickly, which is what I expected, and what I wanted. Never forget I died doing exactly what I chose to do. As Tasha speaks, she looks out at the gathering as if she's really a part of it. TASHA (continuing) What I want you to know is how much I loved my life... and each of you who shared it with me. You are my "family." (MORE) STAR TREK: "The Shroud" - 2/1/88 - ACT FIVE 49. 68 CONTINUED: (2) TASHA (Cont'd) Whoever I was before Starfleet, where I came from, isn't important. I have been blessed with your friendship and your love. She looks directly at Riker. TASHA (continuing) Will Riker, you are the best. From the moment you beamed on board, you never failed me. You trusted me, you encouraged me and most of all, you made me laugh. She smiles right at him and he can't help but smile back. Troi holds his hand tightly. TASHA (continuing; looking at Troi) Deanna... you are capable of so much love, you taught me without ever having to say a word. I realized I could be feminine without losing anything -- something I never thought I could achieve. Troi wipes a tear from her cheek. TASHA (continuing; looking at Worf) Ah, Worf. I hope for your sake I met death with my eyes open. We are so much alike, you and I, both warriors, orphans who found ourselves this family. Worf stares at her image, unbelieving and pained. TASHA (continuing; to Beverly) My friend, Beverly. True to yourself, your ideals. Your fierce devotion comes from within. It can't be diminished. From you I have learned to strive for excellence, no matter what the personal cost. STAR TREK: "The Shroud" - 2/1/88 - ACT FIVE 50. 68 CONTINUED: (3) Beverly and Wesley hold tight to each other. TASHA (continuing; to Wesley) Wesley, I'm sorry that I won't be able to see you grow into the exceptional man you'll be. But I have my vision of who you are and your kindness and innocence is ageless. The Tasha hologram turns to face Geordi. Who knows how he sees her in this half-state? TASHA (continuing) Geordi, in those moments I felt the most despair, you took my hand and made everything better. Your innate joy taught me to look beyond the moment. Geordi looks down -- he can't bear to see/not see her. TASHA (continuing) Mister Data. Android... automaton... robot. (shakes her head) No. You see things with the wonder of a child, and that makes you more human than any of us. I love you just the way you are. The Tasha image turns to Picard. TASHA (continuing) Captain Jean-Luc Picard. I can't say you've been like a father to me, because I never had one and I don't know what it feels like. But if I could choose someone in this universe to be like, someone who I would want to make proud of me, it's you. You who have the heart of an explorer and the soul of a poet. So you will understand when I say "Death is that state in which one exists only in the memory of others... which is why it is not an end." (MORE) STAR TREK: "The Shroud" - 2/1/88 - ACT FIVE 51. 68 CONTINUED: (4) TASHA (Cont'd) (beat) No good-byes. Just "au revoir," my friends. Picard waits a moment, and as Tasha's IMAGE FADES: PICARD Au revoir, Natasha. He gets up before the group. PICARD (continuing) The service is concluded. As everyone FILES OUT, Data gets up and WALKS OVER to where the Tasha image was standing. He looks puzzled. Picard WALKS OVER to him. DATA Sir, the purpose of this gathering has eluded me. PICARD Oh? How so? DATA My thoughts are not for Tasha, but for myself. I keep thinking how empty it will feel without her presence. I missed the point. PICARD No, you didn't, Data. You got it. Picard TURNS AND WALKS OFF. WE PULL BACK, leaving Data alone. FADE OUT. END OF ACT FIVE THE END STAR TREK: THE NEXT GENERATION "Symbiosis" #40271-123 Story by Robert Lewin Teleplay by Robert Lewin and Richard Manning & Hans Beimler Directed by Win Phelps THE WRITING CREDITS MAY NOT BE FINAL AND SHOULD NOT BE USED FOR PUBLICITY OR ADVERTISING PURPOSES WITHOUT FIRST CHECKING WITH THE TELEVISION LEGAL DEPARTMENT. Copyright 1988 Paramount Pictures Corporation. 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REVISED FINAL DRAFT FEBRUARY 17, 1988 STAR TREK: "Symbiosis" - 2/17/88 - CAST STAR TREK: THE NEXT GENERATION "Symbiosis" CAST PICARD ORNARANS RIKER T'JON BEVERLY ROMAS DATA MARGAN TROI TASHA BREKKANS WORF SOBI GEORDI LANGOR GEORDI WESLEY NURSE Non-Speaking SECURITY GUARDS SCIENCE OFFICERS Voice-Over COMPUTER VOICE STAR TREK: "Symbiosis" - 2/17/88 - SETS STAR TREK: THE NEXT GENERATION "Symbiosis" SETS INTERIORS EXTERIORS USS ENTERPRISE USS ENTERPRISE MAIN BRIDGE TRANSPORTER ROOM SICKBAY CARGO BAY CAPTAIN'S READY ROOM CORRIDORS ENTRANCE TO CARGO BAY OBSERVATION LOUNGE TURBOLIFT BREKKIANS' GUEST QUARTERS MAIN ENGINEERING STAR TREK: "Symbiosis" - 2/17/88 - PRONUNCIATION GUIDE STAR TREK: THE NEXT GENERATION "Symbiosis" PRONUNCIATION GUIDE Ornara ore-NAHR-uh Ornarans ore-NAHR-uns Brekka BRECK-ah Brekkians BRECK-ee-ans Delos DELL-ose Felicium fell-EE-see-um Langor LANG-orr Margan MAR-gun Romas ROW-muss Sobi SOW-bee T'Jon tuh-ZHON STAR TREK: "Symbiosis" - 2/17/88 - TEASER 1. STAR TREK: THE NEXT GENERATION "Symbiosis" TEASER FADE IN: 1 EXT. SPACE - THE ENTERPRISE (OPTICAL) moving toward a brilliant sun. Even from here the TURBULENCE on the surface of the sun is evident. PICARD'S COM VOICE All hands, this is the captain. The sun in the Delos system is undergoing large-scale magnetic field changes, producing violent, gigantic flares. 2 INT. ENTERPRISE - VARIOUS SHOTS in corridors, Engineering, and so on as the ship's company listens to their captain. PICARD'S COM VOICE (continuing) We will be studying this star at close range. Even though we will be running with full deflectors, the closeness of the event and its severity are going to create problems. 3 INT. MAIN BRIDGE The bridge is manned as usual. WESLEY is at the Aft Science Station. PICARD Intense magnetic fields have a disruptive effect on electrical systems. We can therefore expect an interruption of communications, and potential temporary loss of other systems. As a precaution, we are now going to Yellow Alert... He signals Tasha with a nod of his head and she ACTIVATES the system.  STAR TREK: "Symbiosis" - 2/17/88 - TEASER 2. 3 CONTINUED: PICARD (continuing) Stay sharp, everyone. 4 OMITTED 5 INT. MAIN ENGINEERING As technicians keep close watch on their stations. DATA'S COM VOICE Engineering, this is Ops. Bring all systems on line and direct full power to the shields. The technicians carry out Data's order. 6 INT. MAIN BRIDGE Picard takes his seat. DATA All sections secure. PICARD Lieutenant La Forge? GEORDI Course set. PICARD Half impulse. GEORDI Half impulse, aye. 7 EXT. SPACE - THE ENTERPRISE (OPTICAL) as it MOVES PAST CAMERA toward the dazzling sun. 8 INT. MAIN BRIDGE Everyone is intent: PICARD On Main Viewer. STAR TREK: "Symbiosis" - 2/17/88 - TEASER 3. 9 SCREEN (OPTICAL) The great sun FILLS THE SCREEN WITH LIGHT. WE CAN SEE no definition -- only intensity. PICARD Mask out the photosphere. While we watch, the intensity of the sun itself is MATTED OUT, LEAVING ONLY THE RIM which is erupting. PICARD Magnify. Quadrant one-seven, sector four-zero-three. And now WE can clearly SEE on the surface. Great, powerful FLARES extend out above the rim. 10 REACTIONS As they watch the wondrous eruptions on the surface of the sun. RIKER I've never seen anything like this before. The violence of these eruptions is awesome. PICARD And humbling, Number One. DATA Reading an unusual number of sunspots and eruptive prominences, sir. The magnetic field is extremely irregular. 11 EXT. SPACE - ENTERPRISE (OPTICAL) as it moves in closer to the Delos sun. 12 INT. MAIN BRIDGE (OPTICAL) Wesley makes an adjustment at his Science Station. WESLEY Captain, deflectors are being hit by a huge burst of X-rays. STAR TREK: "Symbiosis" - 2/17/88 - TEASER 4. 12 CONTINUED: And all at once, Wesley's console is BATHED WITH A BLUE AURORA; we HEAR STATIC SOUNDS. Wesley pulls back, more delighted than alarmed. WESLEY (continuing) Wow -- look! (getting professional) Sir, my console seems to be overloading. WORF The X-ray burst is disrupting systems, Captain. I'm adjusting deflectors to compensate. 13 INT. MAIN ENGINEERING They are also having difficulty. The intensity of the radiation is affecting control systems. WORF'S COM VOICE Increase power to forward deflectors. 14 INT. MAIN BRIDGE (OPTICAL) The AURORA EFFECT on the Science Station DIES OUT. PICARD Status report. WORF All systems operational, sir. TROI Captain. The level of tension on the ship is mounting. PICARD Understandable. Data? DATA If we are to investigate this unusual solar activity -- we must get closer. Picard thinks for just a beat. STAR TREK: "Symbiosis" - 2/17/88 - TEASER 5. 14 CONTINUED: PICARD Mister La Forge, move us closer. Picard studies the viewscreen. PICARD (continuing) We'll be pushing our deflectors to the limit, but we'll get a good look at this phenomenon. WORF Captain, I have intercepted what seems to be a distress signal. Everyone's attention turns to this new emergency. PICARD Let me hear it. VOICE (V.O.) This... (garbled) -- this is ... (garbled) -- on the freighter Sanction... (garbled) ... and unable to... (garbled) .... Need help. DATA The transmission is from a freighter in orbit around the fourth planet of the system. However, the receiving station is on the third planet. PICARD Open hailing frequency. TASHA Hailing frequencies open. PICARD Unidentified freighter, this is the USS Enterprise. May we be of assistance? On the viewscreen the IMAGE IS CLUTTERED WITH STATIC. T'JON (V.O) (a garbled response) Whoever you are, YES! (garbled) .... cannot maintain... (garbled) ... if you can help... Picard listening. STAR TREK: "Symbiosis" - 2/17/88 - TEASER 6. 14 CONTINUED: (2) PICARD Can't you enhance the image? TASHA Too much interference. PICARD Set a course to intersect with the freighter. Warp two. GEORDI Aye, sir. PICARD Maintain Yellow Alert. T'JON (V.O.) Can't control... (garbled) ... ship is losing orbit... (garbled) ... heading into atmosphere... without help, we'll burn up. As Picard and Riker exchange a concerned glance: 15 OMITTED FADE OUT. END OF TEASER STAR TREK: "Symbiosis" - 2/17/88 - ACT ONE 7. ACT ONE FADE IN: 16 EXT. SPACE - THE ENTERPRISE (OPTICAL) coming out of warp. 17 INT. MAIN BRIDGE Everyone is alert. WORF It is a freighter -- very old. DATA Captain, our sensors are being severely affected by the sun flares. PICARD Helm -- get us in as close as possible to the freighter's orbit. GEORDI Aye, sir. DATA There are six life forms aboard the freighter. WORF Captain, the freighter's orbit is decaying. PICARD How long until it loses integrity? WORF A matter of minutes. PICARD (he touches his arm-panel) Unidentified freighter, this is the USS Enterprise. There is a moment of hesitation where all that is heard is STATIC, then: STAR TREK: "Symbiosis" - 2/17/88 - ACT ONE 8. 17 CONTINUED: VOICE (V.O.) Enterprise, this is the Aurelian freighter... Sanction. PICARD Put this on the Main Viewer. 18 MAIN VIEWER - (OPTICAL) The Screen is a clutter of LINES and SWIRLS. TASHA The visual transmission is still breaking up. The viewscreen REPAINTS WITH THE FREIGHTER IN ORBIT. PICARD Freighter, this is the Enterprise. What is your situation? T'JON (V.O.) ... (garbled) ... We are... Several OTHER VOICES call out: SOBI (V.O.) Get us off here. LANGOR (V.O.) (female) Please -- help us. These desperate pleas are mixed with the OTHER VOICES and added to the STATIC making this transmission unintelligible. PICARD This is the Enterprise -- with all this interference it is difficult to copy your transmission -- if you all talk at once... it is impossible. Now -- please -- say again. What is your situation? Again there is a lot of STATIC -- then some shouting in the background and finally ONE MALE VOICE. T'JON'S COM VOICE I am T'Jon -- the captain of the Sanction. STAR TREK: "Symbiosis" - 2/17/88 - ACT ONE 9. 18 CONTINUED: Picard is pleased that T'Jon's voice is calm and under control. PICARD (to himself) At last. (to T'Jon) How can we help? There are raised VOICES SHOUTING to get them off. Then T'Jon again restores order. T'JON'S COM VOICE We have lost -- I don't know... something -- and I am no longer able to maintain this orbit, nor am I able to use main thrusters. Everything's just kind of... you know... dead, I guess. It's all... you know... shut down. PICARD That's very vague. What's the computer analysis? T'JON'S COM VOICE The computer's not working very well. PICARD Data... can you tap into their computer and clarify the situation? DATA I will attempt it. TASHA Captain, the tractor beam is available, if you want it. RIKER At least we can pull them out of orbit before they enter the atmosphere. PICARD Yes. Captain T'Jon -- we are going to lock on our tractor beam and pull you out of orbit. T'JON'S COM VOICE Hey -- that's great. STAR TREK: "Symbiosis" - 2/17/88 - ACT ONE 10. 18 CONTINUED: In the background there are two excited VOICES to counterpoint T'Jon's matter of fact response. 19 ANGLE ON TASHA as she enters the information to set and lock the tractor beams. 20 EXT. SPACE - ENTERPRISE AND FREIGHTER (OPTICAL) as the TRACTOR BEAM reaches out. It's TORN AND RAGGEDY. 21 INT. MAIN BRIDGE Tasha re-enters the information. Her panel indicates a malfunction. TASHA The solar flares are interfering with the tractor beam, Captain. I am unable to lock on. WORF Captain, the freighter's orbit continues to deteriorate. PICARD Captain T'Jon, we are unable to attach our tractor beam because of the intense solar activity. T'JON (V.O.) (calmly) I understand. (giving up) Thanks for trying. Again in the background there are panicky CRIES. DATA Captain, I have determined what is malfunctioning on the freighter. PICARD Enterprise to Sanction. We have analyzed your problem. T'JON'S COM VOICE Great. STAR TREK: "Symbiosis" - 2/17/88 - ACT ONE 11. 21 CONTINUED: Picard gestures to Data to go ahead. DATA Your ship's design uses an electromagnetic coil to constrict the exhaust flow. That coil is misaligned. PICARD Have you the necessary tools to realign the coil? T'JON'S COM VOICE I don't think so. DATA Captain, I believe we can provide the freighter with a temporary substitute. Ship's stores contain a coil of the proper type. RIKER (to Tasha) Can we beam it over? TASHA Yes. PICARD Captain T'Jon, we will beam over a replacement coil. T'JON'S COM VOICE That's great... and that will fix us up? PICARD Well, once it's installed. T'JON'S COM VOICE Right. (a beat) ... And how do we do that? Picard is dumbfounded. He glances over at Riker. Both men are amazed. PICARD What's the matter with these people? How can he be the captain of the vessel and be ignorant of its simplest functions? STAR TREK: "Symbiosis" - 2/17/88 - ACT ONE 12. 21 CONTINUED: (2) RIKER If this weren't so serious it would make you laugh. PICARD Captain T'Jon -- how long have you been in command of the freighter? T'JON'S COM VOICE Seven years. This is my twenty-sixth voyage to Brekka. PICARD And you don't know how to align a control coil? T'JON'S COM VOICE It's never come up. RIKER Is there anyone on board who can do it? T'JON'S COM VOICE Hold on a minute... I'll ask. There is a pause. T'JON'S COM VOICE (continuing) Sorry -- nobody here knows anything about it. RIKER I'll beam over with a team. TASHA Captain -- I strongly recommend against anyone from this ship beaming over. The solar interference is too great. WORF The freighter has entered the planet's atmosphere. Disintegration is imminent. RIKER We are running out of options. STAR TREK: "Symbiosis" - 2/17/88 - ACT ONE 13. 21 CONTINUED: (3) PICARD (nods to Tasha and Riker) Let's get them off there. Riker and Tasha are on their feet and heading for the turbolift. PICARD Captain T'Jon. Prepare to beam over. T'JON'S COM VOICE If you think that's best. Picard is getting more than a little impatient with T'Jon and his lack of concern. PICARD Unless you have another option -- yes, I "think that's best." T'JON'S COM VOICE (amiable) Whatever you say. Off Picard's REACTION. 22 INT. TRANSPORTER ROOM Riker and Tasha ENTER. Tasha goes directly to the console, takes over from a Transporter Chief, and begins trying to lock on to the life forms on the freighter. TASHA I can't maintain a positive lock. 23 INT. MAIN BRIDGE (OPTICAL) Wesley checks a readout. WESLEY An unusual E-M burst. Readings off scale. Another AURORA EFFECT, this time on Propulsion Station. STAR TREK: "Symbiosis" - 2/17/88 - ACT ONE 14. 24 INT. TRANSPORTER ROOM Riker and Tasha are working together. RIKER Freighter Sanction, this is the Enterprise. We are having difficulty getting a fix. TASHA (to Riker) Have them go to their own Transporter Room. It will be tricky, but perhaps I can link the two transporters in series and get them over with the increased power. RIKER It's worth a try. (to intercom) Captain T'Jon -- go immediately to your Transporter Room. Contact me from there. T'JON'S COM VOICE (still very calm) Right, Enterprise -- we'll call you from there... but, if you can't get us with your transporter, what makes you think ours will do the job? TASHA I'm going to interconnect them. T'JON'S COM VOICE I didn't know you could do that. TASHA Hurry -- we're running out of time. T'JON'S COM VOICE We're on the way. Tasha shoots a look at Riker. TASHA I don't think they're going to make it. STAR TREK: "Symbiosis" - 2/17/88 - ACT ONE 15. 24 CONTINUED: RIKER Captain T'Jon doesn't seem to care one way or the other. TASHA (touches the com) Worf -- how much time do we have? WORF'S COM VOICE One minute, twenty-eight seconds. Tasha taps the console. TASHA Captain T'Jon -- are you there? T'JON'S COM VOICE Yeah. We're in the transporter room. TASHA Great. Activate your transporter. Set coordinates nine -- seven -- zero -- three... mark two... six... eight. T'JON'S COM VOICE Did you say... two -- eight -- six... or eight -- eight -- six. TASHA (frustrated almost to the point of anger) TWO -- SIX -- EIGHT. T'JON'S COM VOICE Got it. 25 INT. MAIN BRIDGE Picard and the others. WORF The hull temperature of the freighter is passing three thousand degrees. PICARD What's the holdup, Number One? STAR TREK: "Symbiosis" - 2/17/88 - ACT ONE 16. 26 INT. TRANSPORTER ROOM Riker touches his communicator. RIKER We are establishing the link now. There is a pause, then: T'JON'S COM VOICE We are ready. Tasha at the console. TASHA Then all six of you get on the transporter platform -- on my signal, energize. She exchanges a look of exasperation with Riker. TASHA (continuing; to Riker) I've got their initial transporter signal. Interlock complete. (intercom) Energize on my mark. Four -- three -- two -- one -- energize. 27 TRANSPORT PLATFORM (OPTICAL) As the MATERIALIZATION BEGINS -- AND FADES OUT -- AND BEGINS AGAIN. 28 ANGLE ON TASHA working the console. 29 TRANSPORTER PLATFORM (OPTICAL) What MATERIALIZES is not the people -- but a large cargo barrel. 30 ANGLE ON RIKER AND TASHA Both very surprised. PICARD'S COM VOICE Did you get them off? STAR TREK: "Symbiosis" - 2/17/88 - ACT ONE 17. 30 CONTINUED: RIKER No. They stayed on the freighter -- and sent their cargo. 31 INT. MAIN BRIDGE Picard is astounded. PICARD Cargo!? Are those people crazy? (a beat) What could possibly be that important? WORF Sir -- the freighter is disintegrating. Off Picard's REACTION. FADE OUT. END OF ACT ONE STAR TREK: "Symbiosis" - 2/17/88 - ACT TWO 18. ACT TWO FADE IN: 32 EXT. SPACE - THE FREIGHTER (OPTICAL) The Ornaran freighter drifts further away toward the planet Brekka. 33 INT. MAIN BRIDGE Manned as before. Picard can't believe his ears. GEORDI Captain, the freighter is entering the atmosphere. Her hull temperature is building. PICARD Number One -- I don't understand these people. Their lives are in danger and they're sending over cargo? 34 INT. TRANSPORTER ROOM (OPTICAL) The barrel sits innocently on the transporter pad. Riker and Tasha are astounded. RIKER Unbelievable. PICARD'S COM VOICE We're losing the freighter. You've got to beam those people over now. RIKER (to Tasha) Clear that cargo. Beam it to a hold. TASHA Aye, sir. Tasha hits a control. The barrel DEMATERIALIZES. STAR TREK: "Symbiosis" - 2/17/88 - ACT TWO 19. 34 CONTINUED: RIKER (to Sanction) Freighter Sanction... this is the Enterprise, get on the transporter pad and... (to Tasha) Forget it. Just lock on to any life forms you can find and get them over. TASHA Trying, sir. 35 INT. MAIN BRIDGE as Geordi checks a readout. GEORDI The freighter is going down. PICARD Transporter Room! You're out of time. 36 INT. TRANSPORTER ROOM Tasha feverishly works the controls. TASHA Reading six life forms... (shakes her head) But I can't get a solid lock. RIKER We've no choice. Energize. 37 NEW ANGLE (OPTICAL) as the MATERIALIZATION EFFECT starts on the pad, then FADES. Tasha fights the controls, trying to bring in the signal. Finally, FOUR HUMANOIDS MATERIALIZE on the pad. RIKER You said SIX - where are... (fearing the worst) ... the other two? STAR TREK: "Symbiosis" - 2/17/88 - ACT TWO 20. 37 CONTINUED: TASHA (shakes her head) The lock didn't hold, sir. RIKER Re-establish. TASHA It's too late. 37A INT. MAIN BRIDGE - ANGLE ON MAIN VIEWER (OPTICAL) On the viewscreen, the freighter Sanction HITS THE ATMOSPHERE. 38 ANGLE ON PICARD PICARD Number One!? 39 INT. TRANSPORTER ROOM (OPTICAL) as the BEAM IN BECOMES COMPLETE. Riker and Tasha look over the new arrivals. RIKER Two are lost, sir. But we saved four. On the transporter pad are the four humanoids: T'JON, ROMAS, and SOBI (three males) as well as LANGOR (a female). They are instantly divided into pairs - because of the physical differences, clothing and manner. T'Jon and Romas, of the planet Ornara, are scruffy, unclean, and almost wild in appearance. Their manner is nervous, belligerent, somewhat high-strung. In contrast, Sobi and Langor, of the planet Brekka, are attractive, well-dressed, well-groomed, intelligent, and genteel. Riker STEPS FORWARD. STAR TREK: "Symbiosis" - 2/17/88 - ACT TWO 21. 39 CONTINUED: RIKER I am Commander William Riker of the USS Enterprise. (solemnly) I'm sorry. We were unable to rescue the other two. The four aliens REACT with indifference. RIKER Were they with you... (then indicating the other pair) ... or with you? Something else is on their minds. T'JON (nearly frantic) With us. RIKER We did everything we could, if you had come instead of the cargo, you could have all made it. T'Jon looks around - near panic. T'JON The cargo... Where is it? ROMAS (also panicking) You did save it, didn't you? RIKER (mystified) Yes, we did. It's in one of our cargo holds. You act like it's more important than your comrades. Judging by their reactions, Riker's right. T'JON May we see it? 39A INT. CARGO BAY (OPTICAL) The alien cargo is in the cargo bay. The DOORS OPEN and Riker, Tasha, T'Jon, Romas, Sobi, and Langor ENTER. STAR TREK: "Symbiosis" - 2/17/88 - ACT TWO 22. 39A CONTINUED: As they catch sight of the cargo, Sobi and Langor are gratified; T'Jon and Romas are ecstatic. T'JON Thank you. It's just we thought we had lost it. SOBI (casually) Careful with your choice of words, T'Jon. It's ours, not yours. T'JON (heating up) We paid a fair price for it! LANGOR You offered a fair price, but we have not received it. ROMAS You accepted our goods in trade! SOBI Then where are they? Tell me! T'JON That's not our problem! LANGOR No more than the barrel is your property. It's as simple as this. The goods were never delivered; they were destroyed with your ship. SOBI Hence the deal was incomplete; hence possession of the Felicium remains ours! ROMAS (a plea) We need it. SOBI (to Riker) Commander, I request you transport my associate -- (nods to Langor) -- and myself down to our planet, with our merchandise. STAR TREK: "Symbiosis" - 2/17/88 - ACT TWO 23. 39A CONTINUED: (2) T'JON Yes, get them out of here! But the barrel stays. LANGOR (to Sobi) There's no reasoning with you. SOBI (to her) Langor, you expect too much from them. You always have and you are always disappointed. (then to T'Jon with a hard edge) You didn't pay -- so it's not yours. T'JON Damn you, Sobi -- T'Jon grabs Sobi's arm -- and there is a FLASH OF SPARKS as the bodies touch. Sobi grimaces in pain, grabs back at T'Jon. Another FLASH OF SPARKS, this time hurting T'Jon. TASHA (drawing her phaser) Stop this! Now! 40 NEW ANGLE (OPTICAL) as a free-for-all continues. Sobi and T'Jon grapple, and we HEAR SPARKING NOISES as their electrical fields try to cancel each other out. Romas tries to rush to T'Jon's aid; Langor grabs Romas's arm. More SPARKS. Riker touches a com panel: RIKER Security to Cargo Bay Eleven! Tasha makes and adjustment on her phaser and fires. T'Jon and Sobi are SLIGHTLY stunned by the blast. TASHA Behave yourselves, Gentlemen. They both "brush themselves off," shoot each other hostile looks, but the physical part of their dispute is, for the moment, resolved. STAR TREK: "Symbiosis" - 2/17/88 - ACT TWO 24. 40 CONTINUED: Security Personnel ENTER, phasers drawn. TASHA (re the aliens) Escort our "visitors" to the Observation Lounge. The visitors LEAVE. TASHA (eyeing the aliens) A natural electrical charge... ? RIKER Formidable. TASHA Yes, and a difficult weapon to confiscate. 41 INT. OBSERVATION LOUNGE Sobi and Langor are seated at one side of a table, glaring sullenly at T'Jon and Romas who are sitting opposite them. Two security personnel are standing a few feet away. T'Jon and Romas are changing -- they are becoming slightly more frantic; their condition will continue to deteriorate. T'JON We have to resolve this. There isn't much time. SOBI What can you offer? T'JON Everything we had went down with the Sanction. SOBI Then it is going to be difficult to accommodate you. 42 INT. MAIN BRIDGE Picard, Riker, Geordi, Data, Troi. STAR TREK: "Symbiosis" - 2/17/88 - ACT TWO 25. 42 CONTINUED: GEORDI Solar flares are increasing in magnitude, sir. Deflectors are shaky, but holding. PICARD Maintain. (to Riker) And our rather combative guests, Number One? RIKER Waiting for you in the Observation Lounge, sir. PICARD Data, what can you tell me about the inhabitants of this system? DATA Not very much, sir. The only recorded contact with the Delos system was over two hundred years ago. A scout ship reported two inhabited planets, both technologically just on the edge of acquiring space travel. GEORDI Odd that in two centuries, neither civilization advanced further. TROI Sir, I find it strange that none of our visitors feel much remorse about the two freighter passengers who perished... yet their barrel of cargo is a source of great anxiety to them. PICARD Yes, let us pay a call and get some answers. Counselor, Number One, Mister Data... Riker, Picard, Data, and Troi EXIT into the Observation Lounge. STAR TREK: "Symbiosis" - 2/17/88 - ACT TWO 26. 43 INT. OBSERVATION LOUNGE As before. Riker, Picard, Troi, and Data ENTER. Riker performs introductions: RIKER Captain, may I present Sobi and Langor from the planet Brekka, which we are now orbiting. And T'Jon and Romas... from the neighboring planet, Ornara. PICARD I am sorry we could not save your ship. T'JON You could have repaired it. PICARD Yes. T'JON We have only two left. Neither works. They are critical to our survival. Could you fix them? PICARD Mister Data? DATA Our computer downloaded the specifications for the magnetic coils the freighters depend on, sir. Assuming the malfunction is similar... suitable replacements can be fabricated. All the visitors are relieved. It's the first time they have had similar reactions to an event. PICARD (to Data) Instruct Engineering to proceed. DATA Aye, sir. T'JON Now, as for our cargo... SOBI Our cargo, Captain. STAR TREK: "Symbiosis" - 2/17/88 - ACT TWO 27. 43 CONTINUED: ROMAS Wrong, Sobi -- Picard jumps in to forestall the argument. PICARD My first officer has said ownership of the cargo is in dispute. This is a question which must be settled by whatever legal mechanisms exist between your societies. T'JON Captain Picard, you don't understand. This is a matter of life and death. PICARD Why is that? What is the cargo? T'JON Medicine. PICARD Indeed. ROMAS Our home planet is in desperate need, Captain. Ornara suffers from a lethal plague. T'JON The cargo you have impounded represents the only hope of life for our people. Picard turns to Sobi and Langor. PICARD Is that right? SOBI Yes. LANGOR You must think us heartless brutes, Captain, but look at our side of it. The plant which yields the medicine Felicium grows only in remote areas of our home planet Brekka. STAR TREK: "Symbiosis" - 2/17/88 - ACT TWO 28. 43 CONTINUED: (2) SOBI It must be painstakingly cultivated, harvested, and purified... a complex and expensive process. LANGOR That single shipment of Felicium represents an enormous investment. We can't just give it away! T'JON We paid for it. (to Picard) We are asking only for what is ours. LANGOR That is your viewpoint. Ours, of course, differs. ROMAS You are going to hold to that position. Sobi spreads his hands helplessly. SOBI I am constrained to abide by the terms of our agreement. ROMAS (with quiet intensity) Then you condemn us to death! T'Jon tries to calm his companion: T'JON Romas -- ROMAS (to Sobi and Langor) You disgust me! If you saw the suffering the plague has brought, would you still be so heartless? He makes a small gesture. STAR TREK: "Symbiosis" - 2/17/88 - ACT TWO 29. 43 CONTINUED: (3) ROMAS (continuing) We are going to get to find out, when you see what the plague does to us. Picard is stunned. PICARD Romas -- you and T'Jon carry the disease? ROMAS (bitterly) Yes. Every Ornaran does. PICARD Then you may have brought it aboard my ship! (to Riker) Was there a medical scan during transport? RIKER Unverified -- the solar flares may have caused a malfunction in the biofilters -- An alarmed Picard doesn't wait for the rest. He slaps a com panel. PICARD Red Alert! Medical emergency -- decks twelve and thirteen. Doctor Crusher to the Observation Lounge immediately! On the concerned expressions of our bridge crew, WE: FADE OUT. END OF ACT TWO STAR TREK: "Symbiosis" - 2/17/88 - ACT THREE 30. ACT THREE FADE IN: 44 EXT. SPACE - THE ENTERPRISE (OPTICAL) The solar flares continue to dance around the Enterprise. 45 INT. SICKBAY With a security team guarding the doorway, Beverly scans the four visitors. The Brekkians, Sobi and Langor, seem perfectly healthy. They are relaxed and smiling. SOBI You find us well, I trust? BEVERLY As far as I can tell. Your physiology is somewhat different but I detect no dangerous virus or bacteria. LANGOR I assure you we are in perfect health. Beverly moves over to examine the Ornarans. In contrast to the Brekkians, T'Jon and Romas look quite sickly -- they are both antsy and sweaty. T'JON (impatient) We're not! We need our medicine. SOBI (correcting) Our medicine. T'JON We paid for it -- it's ours now! BEVERLY Enough! The visitors glare at each other. STAR TREK: "Symbiosis" - 2/17/88 - ACT THREE 31. 45 CONTINUED: SOBI (smiling) Of course you are right, Doctor. Could we leave now? BEVERLY I see no reason why not. (to the security guard) Escort them to their quarters. Picard ENTERS. Beverly leaves her four "patients" and goes to her office. The visitors all look apprehensive. Each realizes that Captain Picard holds their future in his hands. LANGOR Captain, could I talk with you please... in private. PICARD Not right now. And he FOLLOWS Beverly INTO her office. 45A INT. DR. CRUSHER'S OFFICE Picard ENTERS and closes the door behind him. PICARD What have you learned? BEVERLY The Brekkians are free of infection. The Ornarans have all the symptoms of a disease -- but I can't find a cause. PICARD Perhaps the transporter filtered it out when they were beamed aboard? BEVERLY (shaking her head) There's no record of it. Then again, the solar flare activity may have caused a transporter malfunction. PICARD Are they going to die? STAR TREK: "Symbiosis" - 2/17/88 - ACT THREE 32. 45A CONTINUED: BEVERLY The physiology is somewhat different from ours, so I need to check further, but... my instinct says no. PICARD Do you think we are in danger from this plague? BEVERLY Again, I don't think so, but I need more time to know for sure. PICARD There are some missing pieces to the puzzle, don't you feel that too? BEVERLY What's missing here is a little humanity. Picard gives her a little look of surprise. PICARD (lightly) Are we losing our professional detachment, Doctor? BEVERLY Perhaps. As Captain, I think you should know that I am developing a very active dislike of the Brekkians. PICARD Understandable. Hold on Beverly as Picard EXITS. 45B INT. SICKBAY Picard STEPS OVER TO the aliens. T'Jon is very nervous and anxious. T'JON Captain, you must give us back our cargo. PICARD I can't do that. STAR TREK: "Symbiosis" - 2/17/88 - ACT THREE 33. 45B CONTINUED: T'JON Why not? It belongs to us. PICARD And the Brekkians insist it is theirs. ROMAS They lie! PICARD Maybe so, but it's not for me to decide. ROMAS (losing his composure) We need some now... NOW! I don't care if it's your 'decision' or not... get us some! T'JON silences Romas with a gesture; T'Jon attempts to speak calmly. T'JON Captain, what's happening to us, is happening to thousands more on Ornara. Please understand the magnitude of the problem. ROMAS (angry) Your people don't need it -- (indicating the Brekkians) -- they don't need it... our people do! T'JON If you don't give it to us, you will be party to murder... not only us, but an entire civilization! Instantly, T'Jon realizes he's gone too far: T'JON (continuing) Sorry, I did not mean to insult you. I'm feeling very shaky. ROMAS We cannot hold out much longer! STAR TREK: "Symbiosis" - 2/17/88 - ACT THREE 34. 45B CONTINUED: (2) Picard looks to Beverly. BEVERLY No, Captain -- I think they should have it. They believe it will help them. That in itself might control their symptoms. Picard turns back to the Ornarans. PICARD I'll talk with the Brekkians. T'JON Thank you, Captain. I appreciate anything you can do. Picard nods and EXITS. 46 INT. BREKKIAN'S GUEST QUARTERS Sobi and Langor are relaxing in their quarters. They have adapted quickly to the creature comforts the Enterprise has to offer. Picard ENTERS. SOBI May I say, Captain, how impressed we are with your ship and its facilities. PICARD Thank you. LANGOR And its crew. Everyone is so efficient and professional. PICARD I am glad you are comfortable. I've come to seek your agreement to an Ornaran request. SOBI We cannot -- LANGOR (interrupting) Wait. Let the Captain speak. We want to be reasonable. STAR TREK: "Symbiosis" - 2/17/88 - ACT THREE 35. 46 CONTINUED: Langor's control of the situation does not go unnoticed by Picard. PICARD The Ornarans are quite ill and are insistent that they need Felicium. SOBI That is not surprising. PICARD Then would you object to allowing them enough Felicium for their immediate needs? SOBI Captain, we Brekkians are in business -- we are not in the habit of giving away what has not been paid for. PICARD You would let them die rather than share the medicine? Sobi and Langor exchange a look. LANGOR We want to be fair, Captain. We agree to permitting them two dosages for immediate use. SOBI (magnanimous) No charge. PICARD I'll have our medical officer handle it. LANGOR I trust you won't mind if we are present while you open the cargo, Captain. The Captain gestures politely to come along. STAR TREK: "Symbiosis" - 2/17/88 - ACT THREE 36. 47 INT. CARGO BAY Picard, Beverly, Data, Sobi, Langor, two science officers, and a security team are gathered around the barrel of Felicium. Using a strange set of contraptions, a minuscule amount of Felicium is extracted from the barrel. LANGOR Point-zero-one milliliters is the proper individual dosage. PICARD (impressed) A very potent substance. SOBI We've perfected our distillation process over the years. In my grandfather's day, the same amount of Felicium would have filled five rooms this size, Captain. DATA No doubt you have applied your technology from other industries to the refinement of this product. SOBI We have no other industry. PICARD None at all? LANGOR We don't need any. The Ornarans provide us everything we need -- in exchange for this. DATA Fascinating. Your society dedicated exclusively to the production of a single product. PICARD A product for which you have no use for, but which the Ornarans can't live without. LANGOR One of the little ironies of life, Captain. STAR TREK: "Symbiosis" - 2/17/88 - ACT THREE 37. 47 CONTINUED: SOBI But one we'd be fools not to take advantage of. It is mutually beneficial. LANGOR The Ornarans provide us with the necessities of life and we provide them with the necessities of living. It is a fair exchange. PICARD (interrupting) A most interesting relationship. BEVERLY Excuse me... I'll take this to Sickbay. 48 INT. SICKBAY T'Jon and Romas prepare to dose themselves as Beverly watches. Each person on Ornara has a device for administering the drug. It's a small cylinder which converts the Felicium into something which is then injected into the fat part of the hand just below the thumb. BEVERLY Can I help? T'Jon No. ROMAS (to his friend) Hurry up! T'Jon takes the dosage devise (NOTE: it should not look like something currently used by doctors or dopers) and presses it against Romas hand. Romas immediately REACTS. He relaxes -- the tension leaves him -- then slowly he smiles. T'Jon doses himself. Instantly, his former edginess vanishes; a wave of calm comes over him. BEVERLY You are feeling better? STAR TREK: "Symbiosis" - 2/17/88 - ACT THREE 38. 48 CONTINUED: T'JON Yes. Thank you. I'm fine now. T'Jon and Romas are totally blissed out. We HOLD on Beverly's look of concern. 49 INT. MAIN BRIDGE (OPTICAL) The turbolift doors OPEN and Beverly ENTERS. PICARD Report, Doctor Crusher. BEVERLY I may not know Felicium's full effect on Ornaran physiology. But I know how to interpret physical reactions. PICARD Are the Ornarans recovering? BEVERLY Both T'Jon and Romas are fine... in fact, too fine. (a beat) Felicium is a narcotic. PICARD Then T'Jon, Romas -- indeed every Ornaran -- BEVERLY -- is a drug addict. ON the Captain's expression of concern, WE: FADE OUT. END OF ACT THREE STAR TREK: "Symbiosis" - 2/17/88 - ACT FOUR 39. ACT FOUR FADE IN: 50 EXT. SPACE - ENTERPRISE (OPTICAL) in orbit around Brekka as before. 51 thru OMITTED 52 53 INT. CAPTAIN'S READY ROOM Data is seated working at a computer screen. Picard ENTERS, immediately FOLLOWED BY Riker and Troi. RIKER It's a fascinating little tale we've run into of disease -- rescue -- commerce -- and interdependence between two worlds. PICARD You have piqued my interest, Number One -- please continue. RIKER Mister Data. DATA Beginning several thousand years ago, the two worlds took different paths. Ornara became technically sophisticated, Brekka did not. Then two hundred years ago Ornara was stricken by a devastating plague. RIKER Their advanced technology could offer no solution. DATA Somehow, and there is limited information on this point, the cure was found in a plant which is indigenous to only Brekka, and which resisted all attempts at cultivation on Ornara. STAR TREK: "Symbiosis" - 2/17/88 - ACT FOUR 40. 53 CONTINUED: RIKER In any case a trading situation quickly developed, which still exists. DATA The Ornarans acquire the Felicium from the Brekkians, and in exchange, the Ornarans provide the Brekkians with foods and staples. BEVERLY (O.S.) A nice arrangement for the Brekkians. RIKER And for the Ornarans -- without the medicine they would all die. Beverly JOINS the others. She has her diagnostic device in her hand. BEVERLY No they wouldn't. Captain, here are the results of my analysis. Felicium is definitely a powerful and addictive narcotic. What's more, despite what the Ornarans have been saying, it's not a medicine. It was a medicine, and it did cure the plague, two hundred years ago. PICARD And they no longer need it. BEVERLY The plague is irrelevant now: it doesn't exist... and it's not going to recur. Off their REACTIONS. PICARD The Ornarans have no medical need for Felicium. BEVERLY No, but their physical and psychological need is very real. STAR TREK: "Symbiosis" - 2/17/88 - ACT FOUR 41. 53 CONTINUED: (2) There is a long pause. Everyone slowly looks toward Picard, and for a beat, Picard is pensive. BEVERLY What are you going to do? PICARD Based on what we know so far... there is nothing I can do. BEVERLY And you don't think drug addiction and exploitation is sufficient cause? PICARD This situation has existed for a very long time. Those two societies are intertwined in a symbiotic relationship. BEVERLY With one society profiting at the expense of the other. PICARD That's how you see it. BEVERLY I can synthesize a non-addictive substitute which will ease their withdrawal symptoms. PICARD No. We can't do that either. BEVERLY I know this. You can't let them have the Felicium. PICARD Why? Because it goes against our moral sensibilities? Our mission is not to force Federation or Earth values on others in the galaxy. STAR TREK: "Symbiosis" - 2/17/88 - ACT FOUR 42. 53 CONTINUED: (3) BEVERLY In this case... you're wrong, Captain. One hundred percent wrong. TASHA'S COM VOICE Captain, I am receiving a call from Ornara. PICARD Patch it in here. TASHA'S COM VOICE The signal's ragged, but I think I can put it on the Viewscreen. Picard turns the viewscreen so the others in the room can see. The SCREEN LIGHTS UP with a less than perfect picture of MARGAN. MARGAN I am Margan. Are my people on board your ship? PICARD Some of them, yes. MARGAN May I speak with them? PICARD Yes. (touching his com panel) Lieutenant Yar, have the Ornarans brought in... no, wait, I don't want them to have access to the bridge. (then, to Margan) We will contact you in a few minutes. (then to Yar) I will take this in the guest quarters. Picard EXITS. 53A INT. MAIN BRIDGE Data joins Wesley at the Aft Science Stations. STAR TREK: "Symbiosis" - 2/17/88 - ACT FOUR 43. 53A CONTINUED: WESLEY (amazed) I can understand how this could happen to the Ornarans... What I can't understand is why anyone would voluntarily become dependent upon a chemical. DATA (checking readouts) Yet, the voluntary addiction to drugs is a recurrent theme in many cultures. WESLEY (nods) As in the twenty-first century... when Earth governments used narcotics to control the military. DATA Or look at the twentieth century. The dangers of drug abuse were well known, yet their use was commonplace. WESLEY Why? DATA That is what I do not understand. Tasha overhears, STEPS UP. TASHA No one wants to become dependent. That happens later. WESLEY But it does happen. So why do people even start? TASHA Oh, lots of reasons... My home planet was a place of great poverty and violence. For some, the only escape was through drugs. DATA I fail to comprehend how a chemical substance can provide an escape. STAR TREK: "Symbiosis" - 2/17/88 - ACT FOUR 44. 53A CONTINUED: (2) TASHA It doesn't. But it makes you think it does. (a beat) You have to understand -- drugs can make you feel good. Wesley and Data listen intently. TASHA (continuing) They put you on top of the world. You're happy... Sure of yourself. In control. A lot of people never feel that otherwise. DATA But it is artificial. TASHA It doesn't feel artificial. It feels natural, good, and mind expanding. (a beat) Until the drug wears off. Then you pay the price. Once you come down, you're lower than when you started. So you take the drug again -- and it kicks you back up. But not as high this time. WESLEY (catching on) So you take more. TASHA But each peak gets lower and the valleys get deeper. Before you know it -- you're taking the drug not to feel good but to keep from feeling bad. WESLEY And that's the trap. TASHA You think the drug expands your universe -- but it actually shrinks it. Shrinks it to where you and the drug are all that's left. (MORE) STAR TREK: "Symbiosis" - 2/17/88 - ACT FOUR 45. 53A CONTINUED: (3) TASHA (Cont'd) (a beat) Pretty soon, all you care about is getting your next dosage. You'll lie, cheat, steal -- anything to get that fix. DATA Certainly by then you would realize the danger. TASHA That's the worst of it. You don't care. The drug is your salvation -- your survival. Nothing else is important. Wesley thinks it over and, after a beat, shakes his head. WESLEY I guess I just don't understand. Tasha smiles and puts a hand on his shoulder. TASHA Wesley, I hope you never do. PICARD'S COM VOICE Lieutenant Yar, we are ready in the guest quarters. 54 thru OMITTED 56 56A INT. GUEST QUARTERS (OPTICAL) Picard, Beverly and Riker are there with the Ornarans. The TRANSMISSION FADES IN AND OUT. MARGAN T'Jon. Have you got it? T'JON Well, it's here, but... MARGAN You've got to get it to us. T'Jon... please... We're dying here. You don't know... this is the worst it's ever been. STAR TREK: "Symbiosis" - 2/17/88 - ACT FOUR 46. 56A CONTINUED: T'Jon is visibly moved by what he is hearing. T'JON I'm doing everything I can. See... what happened was... 56B REACTIONS From Picard and T'Jon. MARGAN (cuts him off) Stop. I can't listen. T'Jon... we need the medicine. So, many people... so much suffering. You've got to get it to us. I can't... I can't go on. Help, T'Jon... please. The SCREEN SHUTS OFF. For a beat everyone is quiet. The strain on T'Jon is very evident. The pressure is enormous. PICARD I'm sorry. T'Jon then turns and puts a death grip on the person nearest to him. Commander Riker. T'JON Take us to our planet - leave us there with our medicine or this person dies. Picard takes a STEP FORWARD, then STOPS. T'JON (continuing) Don't you see -- I have no choice. We were sent to bring back the Felicium. The suffering on my planet is too great. People are dying. It doesn't matter any more whether we are entitled to the Felicium... we have to have it. PICARD Let him go. STAR TREK: "Symbiosis" - 2/17/88 - ACT FOUR 47. 56B CONTINUED: T'JON Take us there now -- or give us a shuttle -- but we must have the medicine... if you refuse, this person dies. PICARD I will not be coerced. T'JON I'll do it. I'll kill him. The strain of the pressure is all over T'Jon. PICARD (calmly) No you won't. You're not a killer and neither am I. T'Jon releases Riker, who sags a little, then catches his balance. T'JON Help us... please... help us. PICARD I'm not sure that I can. There is anguish on Beverly's face from those words. 57 thru OMITTED 58 59 CLOSE SHOT ON PICARD His face is serious, intent, introspective. FADE OUT. END OF ACT FOUR STAR TREK: "Symbiosis" - 2/17/88 - ACT FIVE 48. ACT FIVE FADE IN: 60 thru OMITTED 62 62A INT. ORNARAN GUEST QUARTERS As they all stand and consider what to do. Langor APPEARS AT THE DOOR. LANGOR Captain Picard, we couldn't help overhearing. Could I see you for a moment? Picard is almost relieved by the distraction. PICARD Come with me, Doctor. This could be interesting. 63 INT. BREKKIAN GUEST QUARTERS Picard and Beverly are there with Langor and Sobi. LANGOR We have thought about this a great deal. SOBI Both of us feel deeply about what is happening on Ornara. LANGOR Although this is going to cause hardship to us and to our people, we have decided to give the Felicium to them. A slow smile plays at the corners of Picard's mouth. Beverly's expression is harsh. SOBI They can pay for it when they are able. LANGOR We don't want to cause any suffering. STAR TREK: "Symbiosis" - 2/17/88 - ACT FIVE 49. 63 CONTINUED: For a beat Picard doesn't answer. Both Beverly and Picard make the connection at the same time. PICARD (to Beverly) I wonder why I expected this. LANGOR Pardon? PICARD It's the other shoe. BEVERLY (to Langor) The Ornarans are not aware, are they? LANGOR Of what? BEVERLY That the plague which nearly destroyed Ornara... infected your world as well. LANGOR You don't know that for sure. BEVERLY It had to. PICARD But somehow, one of your ancestors realized that your desire for the drug continued after the disease had been cured. They made the connection and were able to end their addiction. BEVERLY (scornful) But these same wonderful people also realized that their neighbors never found out. Their need for the drug grew to the point it is now. Your sole source of support comes from providing the narcotic. STAR TREK: "Symbiosis" - 2/17/88 - ACT FIVE 50. 63 CONTINUED: (2) PICARD And the refinement process of which you are so proud was a way to make Felicium even more addicting... and tighten your grip on the Ornarans even further. LANGOR Are you going to tell them? PICARD No. I can't tell them. You see, I am bound by the rules of the United Federation of Planets, which say I am not to interfere in other worlds, other cultures. To tell them any of this would be interfering and would violate the Prime Directive. SOBI (suspicious) You're talking to us about it... PICARD Telling you things you already know... which changes nothing. BEVERLY Jean-Luc. I can synthesize something which will alleviate their suffering and make withdrawal painless. LANGOR That won't be necessary, because if I understand the captain, he is going to allow the Ornarans to have the Felicium. PICARD Yes, I am. BEVERLY You can't do that. Some things go beyond words on a page. These Brekkians have knowingly enslaved others. They have caused untold suffering and hardship, just so their pitiful lives could be easier. At least don't give the Ornarans more drugs.  STAR TREK: "Symbiosis" - 2/17/88 - ACT FIVE 51. 63 CONTINUED: (3) PICARD It is not for me to make any of these decisions. LANGOR You are absolutely right, Captain. Sobi and Langor are smug. 64 thru OMITTED 67 67A INT. CARGO HOLD Sobi, Langor, T'Jon, Romas, Beverly, and Picard are present. The barrel of Felicium is the centerpiece for this gathering, along with the parts which have been fabricated for the Ornaran freighters. GEORDI'S COM VOICE Captain, we've arrived at Ornara and assumed standard orbit. PICARD (to intercom) Acknowledged. Thank you. Picard CROSSES to stand in front of the four aliens. PICARD (continuing) Forgive me for doing what I must. (to T'Jon and Romas) I'm beaming you down to your world... with your Felicium. T'Jon and Romas are delighted. T'JON Good. I knew it would work out this way. ROMAS You've made the only humanitarian decision, Captain. Picard nods joylessly. STAR TREK: "Symbiosis" - 2/17/88 - ACT FIVE 52. 67A CONTINUED: SOBI (to T'Jon) Langor and I will beam down to Ornara with you. LANGOR We'll work out payment terms for the Felicium. T'JON On behalf of my people, I extend thanks for your benevolent attitude. Sobi and Langor smile proudly. Beverly is fuming at the hypocrisy, but keeps it hidden. T'JON (continuing) And I also thank you, Captain, for doing the right thing. Romas indicates the coils. ROMAS Your gift of these coils will ensure that our freighters will continue to work. PICARD (firmly) No. T'JON (confused) No. PICARD I will not supply you with spare parts for your freighters. If you want them repaired, you'll have to do that yourself. The four aliens are stunned. ROMAS In a short time our freighters will be inoperable. PICARD Quite possibly. STAR TREK: "Symbiosis" - 2/17/88 - ACT FIVE 53. 67A CONTINUED: (2) T'JON But we depend on those freighters! We must have those parts. SOBI If you withhold those coils, you're disrupting the stability of both our planets -- LANGOR -- and interfering with a trade arrangement that has lasted for generations! What of this Prime Directive of yours? PICARD Nothing in the Prime Directive compels me to help you. ROMAS You're an executioner, Captain. You want our world to perish. PICARD No. That's not what I want. T'JON But without our freighters, there will be no more shipments of Felicium! We will die! Picard doesn't respond. Beverly is empathetic: BEVERLY You must trust in yourselves. There are... other options. PICARD And you must understand that my oath as a Starfleet officer gives me no choice in the matter. The four aliens stare at him, unable to comprehend how Picard can do this to them. Picard touches a com panel. PICARD (continuing) Transporter Room. Lock onto our guests and their cargo and beam them down to Ornara. STAR TREK: "Symbiosis" - 2/17/88 - ACT FIVE 54. 67A CONTINUED: (3) T'JON (stiffly) Captain, I hope you realize what you've done to us. PICARD Of that, you can be sure. (a beat) Good luck. 68 OMITTED 68A NEW ANGLE (OPTICAL) as the four aliens and the cargo DEMATERIALIZE, leaving Picard and Beverly alone in the cargo bay. Without a word, Picard turns and EXITS. Beverly FOLLOWS. 68B INT. TURBOLIFT as Picard ENTERS. Before the doors close, Beverly also ENTERS. A long beat, then: BEVERLY When the Felicium runs out, the people of Ornara will suffer horrible withdrawal pains. PICARD No doubt. BEVERLY We could have made their burden easier. PICARD Only in the short run. Painful as it will be, the people of Ornara -- and the people of Brekka -- must shape their own destinies. BEVERLY It sounds so... heartless. PICARD Doctor, it was not an easy decision. BEVERLY I just hope it was the right one. STAR TREK: "Symbiosis" - 2/17/88 - ACT FIVE 55. 68C INT. MAIN BRIDGE Manned as before. The turbolift doors OPEN; Picard and Beverly STEP OUT ONTO the bridge. Picard takes his chair: PICARD Mister La Forge, take us out of orbit. GEORDI Aye, sir. Course laid in. PICARD Engage. 69 EXT. SPACE - THE ENTERPRISE (OPTICAL) as it leaves orbit. FADE OUT. END OF ACT FIVE THE END STAR TREK: THE NEXT GENERATION "We'll Always Have Paris" #40271-124 Written by Deborah Dean Davis & Hannah Louise Shearer Directed by Robert Becker THE WRITING CREDITS MAY NOT BE FINAL AND SHOULD NOT BE USED FOR PUBLICITY OR ADVERTISING PURPOSES WITHOUT FIRST CHECKING WITH THE TELEVISION LEGAL DEPARTMENT. Copyright 1988 Paramount Pictures Corporation. All Rights Reserved. This script is not for publication or reproduction. No one is authorized to dispose of same. If lost or destroyed, please notify the Script Department. FINAL DRAFT FEBRUARY 22, 1988 STAR TREK: "... Paris" - 2/22/88 - CAST STAR TREK: THE NEXT GENERATION "We'll Always Have Paris" CAST PICARD EDOUARD RIKER FRANCINE BEVERLY GABRIELLE DATA LAURA MANHEIM TROI DR. PAUL MANHEIM WORF GEORDI TRANSPORTER CHIEF Voice-over COMPUTER VOICE STAR TREK: "... Paris" - 2/22/88 - SETS STAR TREK: THE NEXT GENERATION "We'll Always Have Paris" SETS INTERIORS EXTERIORS USS ENTERPRISE USS ENTERPRISE GYMNASIUM MAIN BRIDGE PARIS CAFE (HOLODECK) CORRIDORS BY HOLODECK THE PLANET VANDOR BY DE-CONTAMINATION AREA SICKBAY SICKBAY OUTER OFFICE TRANSPORTER ROOM CAPTAIN'S READY ROOM CONFERENCE ROOM PICARD'S QUARTERS DR. CRUSHER'S OFFICE VANDOR CORRIDOR MANHEIM'S LABORATORY STAR TREK: "... Paris" - 2/22/88 - TEASER 1. STAR TREK: THE NEXT GENERATION "We'll Always Have Paris" TEASER FADE IN: 1 EXT. SPACE - THE ENTERPRISE (OPTICAL) as it streaks through the stars at warp speed. PICARD (V.O.) Captain's log, stardate 41886.9. We are en route to Sarona 8 for much needed R and R. The entire crew is looking forward to the diversion. On a personal note, I have allowed myself the luxury of a head start. 2 INT. ENTERPRISE - GYMNASIUM It is starkly and simply set up for competitive saber fencing. PICARD and RIKER are dressed in traditional white jumpsuits, gloves, shoes and masks. They stand in the middle of three long lanes about six feet apart. They snap their masks in place. PICARD MOVES HIS right leg forward, weight centered, hand on hip. His saber is down. HE TURNS THE SABER so the cutting edge of the blade moves to the left, then brings it to his head with a flourish. PICARD En garde. PICARD STEPS FORWARD as his blade comes up, pointed at the Riker's face. THEIR BLADES CROSS as Riker half-lunges forward, arm extended, to a chest shot. Picard steps back and parries. STAR TREK: "... Paris" - 2/22/88 - TEASER 2. 2 CONTINUED: PICARD SNAPS AND BEATS Riker's sword, knocking it to the side. He does a full lunge forward, with a downward slice. RIKER HIGH BLOCKS the move, and lunges forward with a flank cut to Picard's ribs. He continues with a fleche, then a head cut, continuing with fleche parries. RIKER SCORES with an inverted thrust to Picard's heart. Picard steps back and salutes. Riker answers in kind. THEIR MASKS come off, but not their rank. RIKER I took advantage... PICARD No, no. The advantage was yours, Number One. I'm out of practice... too much time on the bridge. En garde! PICARD REPLACES HIS MASK and they begin again. PICARD FAKES RIKER out with a cheek cut, turning his blade down, then, in a swashbuckling movement, he SLAMS the heel of his sword right on Riker's guard, comes in with a cheek cut, then rolls the sword and quickly lunges in with a head cut, pulls the sword back in and THRUSTS it to Riker's heart. Riker is surprised as PICARD SCORES and they step back and salute each other with their swords. RIKER Interesting move. What technique was that? STAR TREK: "... Paris" - 2/22/88 - TEASER 3. 2 CONTINUED: (2) PICARD The technique of a desperate man. Shall we... He is interrupted by the GREAT SHUDDER AND ROLL of the ship as the Enterprise is hit by some MASSIVE FORCE. He and Riker are thrown around like dolls as LIGHTS FLICKER ON AND OFF. Finally, the ship stabilizes. PICARD AND RIKER HURRY TO the com panel. COMPUTER VOICE Yellow Alert. PICARD Picard to bridge. Report. 3 INT. MAIN BRIDGE THE BRIDGE CREW MOVE TO THEIR STATIONS, returning to normal. DATA It is not an attack that we know of, Captain. Origin unknown. Sensors did not detect the force until immediately prior to impact. Shields did not have time to respond. Damages unknown. PICARD'S COM VOICE We're on our way, Mister Data. WORF Damage reports from all decks coming in, sir. DATA Injuries? WORF Minor. DATA LOOKS AT HIS instruments, puzzled. STAR TREK: "... Paris" - 2/22/88 - TEASER 4. 3 CONTINUED: DATA I still am unable to determine the cause of the energy force. There is nothing within a reasonable distance of this ship powerful enough to cause an impact of that magnitude. THE TURBOLIFT OPENS and Picard and Riker ENTER the bridge, still dressed in their fencing clothes. RIKER Mister Data? DATA Damages and injuries are minimal. PICARD Where did it come from? DATA I am still checking, sir. PICARD Hazard a guess, Mister Data. DATA It appears to originate from the Pegos Minor sector. PICARD That far? DATA Yes, sir. PICARD TAKES his Command Chair. PICARD Lieutenant La Forge, set coordinates for that sector. Shields at full power. GEORDI Aye, sir. Coordinates laid in. STAR TREK: "... Paris" - 2/22/88 - TEASER 5. 3 CONTINUED: (2) WORF Sir, I am receiving a transmission from Pegos Minor. It's an S.O.S. PICARD Put it on audio, Lieutenant. A SHAKEN VOICE ECHOES through the bridge. The crew listens intently. MANHEIM'S COM VOICE I repeat, this is Doctor Paul Manheim. We are in need of help. Urgent. Any ship please respond. Coordinates are six-six-seven eight point nine by seven-zero-seven-five-four-two point two. Manheim out. The transmission is on a loop and begins to REPEAT. WORF I can't get through, Captain. PICARD Turn it off. Lay in a course for those coordinates, La Forge. Warp eight. GEORDI Aye, sir. Plotted and laid in. DATA Estimated arrival four hours, seventeen minutes, thirty-five seconds. RIKER Isn't Manheim the one who was thrown out of the Institute for unauthorized experiments? DATA Quite the contrary, Commander. He left of his own volition. Professor Manheim is the most highly reputed scientist within the Federation. A brilliant visionary who... STAR TREK: "... Paris" - 2/22/88 - TEASER 6. 3 CONTINUED: (3) PICARD STANDS UP and moves to the turbolift. PICARD ... Who disappeared over fifteen years ago. Along with his wife, Laura. RIKER Did you know him, Captain? PICARD No. He was teaching at the University when I was in Paris, but I never had the pleasure. Number One, you have the Conn. Inform me half an hour before we reach the coordinates. RIKER Aye, sir. PICARD LEAVES the bridge. 4 INT. CORRIDOR - OUTSIDE HOLODECK Picard stands there a beat, hesitant to put in the program. PICARD Computer, this is Captain Picard. COMPUTER VOICE What is your pleasure, Captain? PICARD Paris. Twenty-two years ago. A warm spring day. April ninth. Eighteen hundred hours -- three o'clock. 5 INT. HOLODECK Paris in the spring. The BIRDS ARE SINGING, BRILLIANT LIGHT reflects on the outdoor tables of the Cafe Des Artistes. Couples in love complete the ambience. STAR TREK: "... Paris" - 2/22/88 - TEASER 7. 5 CONTINUED: THE TABLEAU IS UNMOVING until Picard WALKS UP TO a WAITER (EDOUARD). WITH GREAT FLOURISH the waiter puts himself at Picard's service. EDOUARD Monsieur, welcome to Cafe Des Artistes. Is this your first time in Paris? PICARD No, I've been here before. Picard turns and sees the exact table where he used to sit. PICARD (continuing) That table. EDOUARD Mais oui, we are here to please you. He ushers Picard to the table on the balcony overlooking the city. MEMORIES FLOOD PICARD as he looks out over the city he loves more than any other city in the whole galaxy. PICARD I've been away far too long. FADE OUT. END OF TEASER STAR TREK: "... Paris" - 2/22/88 - ACT ONE 8. ACT ONE FADE IN: 6 INT. HOLODECK - PARIS - CONTINUOUS ACTION - DAY Two lovely French girls, just barely nineteen, take the table next to Picard. They are very involved in their own conversation and take no notice of him. PICARD APPRECIATES the look and liveliness of the two of them. They too, evoke memories. Memories of youth and of love. THE WAITER INTERRUPTS his reverie with a menu. EDOUARD Some wine, some cheese, a perfect tarte tatin... PICARD I'm afraid I'm not hungry. I really came for the view. EDOUARD Perhaps what you hunger for is not on the menu? PICARD Perhaps not. It was many years ago, I had a rendezvous -- I was to meet someone, a young woman, here, at this very table. EDOUARD She did not come? PICARD I don't know, actually. I've always imagined that she did. THE WAITER TAKES the menu back, with a knowing expression. EDOUARD You, however, did not. Trust Edouard. I will bring something special, just for you. STAR TREK: "... Paris" - 2/22/88 - ACT ONE 9. 6 CONTINUED: ONE OF THE GIRLS FRANCINE, stands and throws some money on the table. FRANCINE I'm not staying if all you're going to do is talk about him. GABRIELLE What is this for? FRANCINE My lunch. Feed it to the birds. FRANCINE LEAVES in a swish of silk and color. GABRIELLE SIGHS AND STARES out over the city, not unlike Picard. GABRIELLE He will come. He will. PICARD HEARS THIS and turns his chair so that he can see her more clearly. PICARD Yes, I'm sure he will. GABRIELLE LOOKS AT Picard and smiles back at him -- thankful for the compliment and for the assurance. GABRIELLE He's a military man, just like you. We're going to get married and he's going to stay here in Paris and never leave me. PICARD He's stationed here? GABRIELLE Not yet, but that's the way I've got it planned. Last night, well, after last night, he just couldn't leave. He couldn't. STAR TREK: "... Paris" - 2/22/88 - ACT ONE 10. 6 CONTINUED: (2) Her eyes fill with tears. PICARD CANNOT BEAR to see her cry. He wants to make it better somehow. PICARD If he's as young as you are, maybe he doesn't know yet exactly what he wants to do. GABRIELLE You're an important Starfleet officer -- what would you advise my lover to do -- go off and explore the galaxy or stay here and explore something which has no boundaries -- love? PICARD I would tell him that he must be the person he is meant to be... and that you deserve nothing less than that. THE WAITER DELIVERS a simple tray of various cheeses and meats to Picard. He pours himself a glass of deep red wine. EDOUARD Bordeaux, a very passionate year. PICARD A glass for the young lady. The waiter pours a glass of wine for Gabrielle. GABRIELLE RISES AND MOVES to Picard's table. There is more confidence in her demeanor than before. She knows more about this man and can deal on a more emotional level. GABRIELLE Do I remind you of the girl you left behind? PICARD No. Yes, you do. It's hard to say, it has been many years. STAR TREK: "... Paris" - 2/22/88 - ACT ONE 11. 6 CONTINUED: (3) GABRIELLE Then you have forgotten her face. PICARD STARES THROUGH GABRIELLE as if he is directly connected to someone else. PICARD Not a single detail. I can see every inch of her to this day and being here -- I can feel the softness of her in the breeze, smell the fragrance of her in the flowers. I have not forgotten. GABRIELLE What was her name? PICARD Laura. HE STARES OFF into the City of Lights, letting the memory of Laura wash over him. 7 INT. MAIN BRIDGE - DAY Picard, a little angrier than usual, APPROACHES Data. PICARD You've been at that console twice as long as you estimated. DATA My estimation was incorrect, Captain. DATA SWIVELS IN HIS CHAIR facing Picard. DATA (continuing) And I think it would be best if what I am about to tell you were also incorrect. PICARD Nonsense. Out with it. STAR TREK: "... Paris" - 2/22/88 - ACT ONE 12. 7 CONTINUED: DATA Someone, I would assume Professor Manheim, opened up a window. A window into another dimension. Picard strains to garner more information out of what little information Data is giving him. PICARD You don't know how? Data shakes his head "no." RIKER You don't know what it is? PICARD What came through this window? Data shakes his head "no" again. PICARD (continuing) A window, that's all you know. Data shakes his head "yes." DATA Sir, the answers to your questions will be the most important scientific answers of the twenty-fourth century. PICARD LOOKS TO THE VIEWSCREEN answers, answers, they are all out there. PICARD Manheim. GEORDI Captain, we've reached the coordinates specified. There's nothing here. WORF I am receiving new coordinates. It's a relay signal, the same source as the first one. STAR TREK: "... Paris" - 2/22/88 - ACT ONE 13. 7 CONTINUED: (2) PICARD Set course for the new coordinates. GEORDI Aye, sir. RIKER Why would someone make it this difficult to find him if he truly wants to be found? WORF A failsafe, I would imagine. 8 EXT. SPACE - THE ENTERPRISE (OPTICAL) speeds towards the new coordinates at warp 8. 9 INT. MAIN BRIDGE Everyone is at their post. GEORDI Captain, my sensors are picking up what appears to be a small planet. PICARD NODS leaning forward in his chair, trying to get there sooner. PICARD Mister La Forge, standard orbit. Give me a visual. GEORDI Aye, sir. WORF Viewscreen on. 10 MAIN VIEWSCREEN - THE PLANET VANDOR (OPTICAL) floats VIOLET in space. There is a GLIMMERING EFFECT surrounding it. STAR TREK: "... Paris" - 2/22/88 - ACT ONE 14. 11 THE CREW STARES at it. WORF There's a forcefield of some kind surrounding the planet, sir. PICARD Penetrable? DATA No, sir. PICARD Open hailing frequencies. WORF Hailing frequencies open, sir. PICARD This is the USS Enterprise responding to your signal for help. A WOMAN'S VOICE comes through. She is bordering on hysteria. LAURA (V.O.) Help. Please help me. I don't know what to do. It's only the two of us. He's shaking. Please. PICARD'S FACE melts a little, just hearing her voice. THE CREW LOOKS to him to give an order, he is just a small beat slower than usual. PICARD Can you lock onto her coordinates? GEORDI No, sir. The forcefield is preventing any kind of contact other than audio. PICARD Mrs. Manheim, this is... the captain of the Enterprise. Is your husband conscious? STAR TREK: "... Paris" - 2/22/88 - ACT ONE 15. 11 CONTINUED: LAURA (V.O.) No. You've got to help him. PICARD There's a force field surrounding your planet. LAURA (V.O.) Yes. I know. Picard gently guides a "civilian" through. PICARD Good. Then you must be very brave and leave his side long enough to shut down the system that is preventing us from helping you. THE PLANET VANDOR slowly STOPS SHIMMERING AND BECOMES A CRYSTAL CLEAR VIOLET GLOBE. PICARD (continuing) Good. (to crew) Lock onto their coordinates and beam them up. PICARD SITS IN HIS CHAIR like the weight of the world has just been placed on his shoulders. RIKER I'd like extra decontamination precautions, Captain. Without even moving, Picard responds. PICARD Fine, Number One. 12 INT. - OUTSIDE THE DE-CONTAMINATION AREA Picard and Riker wait outside, Picard nervously shifts his weight from foot to foot. STAR TREK: "... Paris" - 2/22/88 - ACT ONE 16. 12 CONTINUED: RIKER The professor seems to be going in and out of consciousness. PICARD Well, the first time he's "in" be sure you find out what the hell he was up to down there. The Captain paces like a new father. RIKER Is anything wrong, sir? PICARD No. THE DOOR OPENS and a medical team RUSHES OUT with the convulsing body of Professor Manheim. Riker FOLLOWS THEM to Sickbay. THE CAPTAIN stands aside leaving them plenty of room. PICARD LOOKS UP and standing in the same doorway: PICARD'S POV - LAURA She looks unearthly, almost like an angel, an even more beautiful woman than girl. THE TWO OF THEM stand staring at one another for a long beat. LAURA STEADIES HERSELF against the doorway, stunned. LAURA Jean-Luc? PICARD Laura. STAR TREK: "... Paris" - 2/22/88 - ACT ONE 17. 13 INT. SICKBAY BEVERLY hurriedly takes readings of the uncontrollably shaking body of Paul Manheim. SHE FINALLY GIVES him an injection. MANHEIM SHIVERS and falls into a deep sleep. BEVERLY LOOKS UP from her patient to the concerned face of Riker. BEVERLY It's not good. RIKER When will I be able to question him? BEVERLY I don't know. PICARD AND LAURA ENTER SICKBAY and Laura RUSHES TO her husband's side, frightened by his stillness. LAURA Is he dead? BEVERLY No. I've sedated him. She puts her hand on Laura's shoulder. BEVERLY I'll do everything I can to save him. RIKER Doctor, we need to talk to this man as soon as we can. LAURA STARTS TO CRY and Picard puts his arm around her, very affectionately comforting her. STAR TREK: "... Paris" - 2/22/88 - ACT ONE 18. 13 CONTINUED: BEVERLY WATCHES THIS SHOW of familiarity and is surprised by it. BEVERLY I'll let you know as soon as he regains consciousness. LAURA Thank you. Thank you, all. HER EYES HOLD on Picard's and there is much more there than the thanks of a woman in distress. THE SHIP IS JOLTED by a huge BLAST of God only knows what. COLORS flood the room. THEY ARE THROWN around the cabin in a radical manner. MANHEIM'S BODY GLOWS VIOLET. 14 EXT. SPACE - VANDOR (OPTICAL) TURNS FROM A BRIGHT VIOLET TO A HOT PINK AND BACK again. FADE OUT. END OF ACT ONE STAR TREK: "... Paris" - 2/22/88 - ACT TWO 19. ACT TWO FADE IN: 15 INT. SICKBAY - CONTINUOUS ACTION The crew picks themselves up from the deck. PICARD STEADIES Laura, then touches his insignia. PICARD Bridge, Picard. Status report. WORF'S COM VOICE Shields are holding, Captain. Ten percent loss of power. Minimal damage, all decks. PICARD IMPATIENTLY turns to Riker. PICARD We can't wait for this man to wake up to find out what's going on here. Clearly, whatever this window is, it's still open. RIKER Agreed, Captain. I'll have Data start immediately on a thorough evaluation of all of Doctor Manheim's theories. Riker EXITS as MANHEIM BEGINS TO GLOW shades of VIOLET, the RETURNS to normal. His eyes open white and he YELLS OUT: MANHEIM Head gone. Must fill up. It's in the cross! LAURA RUSHES TO HIS side, REACTING in horror. When she touches him, it looks as if he may become coherent, then he fades back into convulsions. STAR TREK: "... Paris" - 2/22/88 - ACT TWO 20. 15 CONTINUED: BEVERLY GIVES HIM another injection. He becomes quiet. Picard turns to Laura. PICARD When did this start? LAURA Right before he sent out the S.O.S. -- after he -- well, he'd been in the lab for at least three days. PICARD AND BEVERLY exchange looks. He turns to Laura, his attitude softer. PICARD Laura, I'm afraid I need to ask you a number of questions - and time is of the essence. Beverly looks at the two of them. BEVERLY You can use my office. Picard leads Laura to the outer room. BEVERLY'S EYES FOLLOW them through the door. She quickly turns back to her patient. 16 INT. SICKBAY - OUTER OFFICE Laura and Picard stand and face each other for a long, intense moment. LAURA SMILES BITTERSWEETLY at Picard. LAURA This is not how I imagined it. PICARD Nor I. STAR TREK: "... Paris" - 2/22/88 - ACT TWO 21. 16 CONTINUED: LAURA You've done well. Exactly as you'd hoped. PICARD STRUGGLES with his duty -- and his emotions. PICARD Not exactly. Nothing works just as you hope... Laura, I'm sorry about your husband. (beat) I need some information from you. LAURA SENSES THE change in him. She moves back slightly. LAURA I don't know what I can tell you, Jean-Luc. At best, I'm a glorified laboratory assistant. Paul's mental capabilities are so far beyond yours and mine, he couldn't discuss his work with me. PICARD But you must know something of the nature of his experiments. LAURA SHRUGS almost indifferent. LAURA He lectures me, he practices on me, but he doesn't confide in me. I stopped listening long ago. PICARD Why did he come here? Why Vandor? LAURA He said it was because it was far enough away, no one would or could steal his theories... or stop him from trying to prove them. STAR TREK: "... Paris" - 2/22/88 - ACT TWO 22. 16 CONTINUED: (2) PICARD What he was working on is unquestionably quite dangerous as well as out of control. LAURA STARES AT Picard as if she's just had a revelation. LAURA He's a little like you, Jean-Luc. He loves, he needs the challenges of the unknown... all I do know is that he's been very close to a major breakthrough. He's been excited and agitated and working around the clock for the past few months. PICARD LOOKS QUESTIONINGLY at her. PICARD Why weren't you affected? LAURA Every time he began an experiment, he insisted I stay in what he said was a protected room. I guess he was right. PICARD BEGINS TO PACE the room. PICARD Fifteen years here? By yourself? LAURA There was no place left for Paul to go -- and I am his wife. (beat) Our destiny isn't always exactly what we expect. Isn't that what you just said? TEARS FORM IN Laura's eyes. She begins to feel overwhelmed. STAR TREK: "... Paris" - 2/22/88 - ACT TWO 23. 16 CONTINUED: (3) PICARD STEPS BACK from the emotion. PICARD I must send a team to the planet. LAURA You can't. It's protected. Paul's made sure no one can get in. SHE LOOKS UP AT HIM and lets the tears come. PICARD PUTS HIS ARMS around her gently. She collapses into him as if they'd never been apart. He holds her sympathetically, as: BEVERLY STRIDES INTO the office. She stops dead in her tracks and Picard lets go of Laura. BEVERLY Excuse me. Laura wipes her tears away and becomes strong again. LAURA Is he worse? BEVERLY He's resting. I'd like to have you undergo some tests as well. BEVERLY GESTURES TO THE Nurse. BEVERLY (continuing) He'll start them. LAURA Thank you for your kindness, Doctor. STAR TREK: "... Paris" - 2/22/88 - ACT TWO 24. 16 CONTINUED: (4) LAURA LOOKS BACK at Picard a moment, clasps his hand, then follows the Nurse into Sickbay. BEVERLY UNCOMFORTABLY addresses Picard, all business. PICARD She's an old friend. BEVERLY I gathered that. It's her husband I'm more concerned with at the moment. PICARD What's his prognosis? BEVERLY So far, he's dying and there's nothing I can do about it. His entire genetic structure is altering -- constantly. I don't know how or why. I've never encountered anything like it before. PICARD How long does he have? BEVERLY Maybe a couple of days. It's not predictable. All I can do is attempt to maintain him until we find out what's causing the damage. PICARD Can I talk to him? BEVERLY You may never be able to talk to him. He may never be coherent again. BEVERLY STARTS BACK into Sickbay. STAR TREK: "... Paris" - 2/22/88 - ACT TWO 25. 16 CONTINUED: (5) PICARD Doctor. SHE TURNS BACK and faces him. PICARD (continuing) I haven't seen Mrs. Manheim since Paris. BEVERLY You needn't explain, Captain. PICARD It was a very long time ago. BEVERLY Yes. She's a lovely woman. She LEAVES Picard, who's feeling very frustrated. 17 INT. MAIN BRIDGE Data is working furiously at the Aft Console when Picard ENTERS. RIKER Were you able to get any information, sir? PICARD SHAKES HIS head. PICARD Mrs. Manheim is in the dark about her husband's work. And he may never come out of the state he's in. What have you found out? DATA Sensors show there's an immense volume of energy being reflected from a small point on the planet's surface... near the main Laboratory. PICARD Reflecting what? STAR TREK: "... Paris" - 2/22/88 - ACT TWO 26. 17 CONTINUED: DATA We do not know yet, sir. It appears to be moving from a thin beam into wider beams and back again in an unstructured manner. PICARD PUSHES him for something more. PICARD Is this "beam" responsible for the jolt we just felt? DATA Not directly, sir. It is possible the beam is responsible for opening the "window." RIKER But that's pure assumption. We still know virtually nothing about Manheim's work. DATA About this particular work, sir. Professor Manheim is renowned for his work in perfecting subspace communications, and thermodynamics, but those particular achievements seem to have no bearing on what he is trying to do on Vandor. PICARD IS impatient. PICARD To the point, Mister Data. DATA When he disappeared fifteen years ago, he had been working on theories of non-linear time. His colleagues apparently questioned his obsession -- and his methodology. PICARD How far did he get? STAR TREK: "... Paris" - 2/22/88 - ACT TWO 27. 17 CONTINUED: (2) DATA No one knows. He became angry about their doubts that he could enter other dimensions. He left the Institute. That is the last anyone heard of him until now. RIKER Can we deal with what's happening down there from the ship? DATA Unlikely. I would need to see the Doctor's notes. And even then, his mind is of such unparalleled brilliance, I am not sure I could decipher them. PICARD REACTS and turns to Riker. PICARD There is an elaborate defense system to protect his work. WORF STANDS TO his full height. WORF We can get through any system. RIKER It's worth a try. PICARD Agreed. Take a small away team. See what you can find down there. RIKER GETS UP and gestures to Worf and Data. RIKER Worf. Data. THEY FOLLOW HIM onto the turbolift. PICARD LOOKS AFTER them. STAR TREK: "... Paris" - 2/22/88 - ACT TWO 28. 18 INT. TRANSPORTER ROOM (OPTICAL) Riker, Worf and Data step onto the pad. Riker nods to the Transporter Chief. RIKER Energize. The chief adjusts the console and the three figures begin to BEAM DOWN. 19 EXT. SPACE - THE ENTERPRISE (OPTICAL) as THREE AMORPHOUS FIGURES OF FLICKERING LIGHT begin the BEAM DOWN to the planet. THE THREE FLICKERING FIGURES BOUNCE and JUMP and MELD INTO ONE> THE SINGLE FLICKERING LIGHT swirls forming a frenzied funnel. OUT OF THE FUNNEL crashes the face of a DRAGON. QUICKLY SUPERIMPOSED by FLASHING LIGHTS, COLORS AND SHADOWY FIGURES. THE FUNNEL VIBRATES with the SOUNDS from ANOTHER DIMENSION. A GREAT WHITE LIGHT shines through the swirling reflections of the away Team. IN A FLASH the spinning out of control away team breaks away, as if looking for a way home. THEY TRAVEL FAST directly toward the planet. STAR TREK: "... Paris" - 2/22/88 - ACT TWO 29. 19 CONTINUED: THEN SMASH INTO an invisible wall and tiny, disjointed PARTICLES SHOWER SPACE AND DRIFT OFF into... nothingness. FADE OUT. END OF ACT TWO STAR TREK: "... Paris" - 2/22/88 - ACT THREE 30. ACT THREE FADE IN: 20 INT. TRANSPORTER ROOM (OPTICAL) Picard RUSHES INTO the room, Troi CLOSE BEHIND him. PICARD I don't care if you have a signal or not -- bring them back! THE TRANSPORTER CHIEF doesn't even look up from his panel. He furiously works. TROI SEEMS TO WILL their very bodies back onto the Enterprise. TROI They will return. Please, they've got to. THE TRANSPORTER CHIEF sees something on his console. TRANSPORTER CHIEF I have a reading, it's not much, not complete... PICARD ... Lock on, man. Beam them back! THE TECHNICIAN PUNCHES in the proper instructions and... RIKER AND DATA slowly SHIMMER BACK ONTO THE TRANSPORTER PAD, dazed. PICARD AND TROI WAIT MOTIONLESS until another SHIMMERING EFFECT OCCURS. WORF REAPPEARS in the Transporter Room. EVERYONE IS RELIEVED they have made it back. STAR TREK: "... Paris" - 2/22/88 - ACT THREE 31. 20 CONTINUED: THEN WORF COLLAPSES on the pad. PICARD Medical Emergency Team in Transporter Sixteen. PICARD HOLDS WORF'S head gently in his arms and turns to Riker and Data. PICARD Good God, what happened out there? RIKER AND DATA look at one another as if they still can't believe it. RIKER DATA Sir, it was... The most incredible... PICARD One at a time. RIKER DATA It's hard to... Modern science does not... WORF STIRS SLIGHTLY as if he's coming to after a brutal barroom brawl. PICARD Stop! I'll wait for Lieutenant Worf. THE MEDICAL STAFF RUSHES IN and administers to Worf... gently taking him from the captain and helping him to his feet. WORF I'm all right! PICARD I'll see you all in my Ready Room. 21 INT. CAPTAIN'S READY ROOM Picard sits, trying to understand what his crew members are saying. STAR TREK: "... Paris" - 2/22/88 - ACT THREE 32. 21 CONTINUED: PICARD A dragon? WORF Not exactly, sir, but a monster that... RIKER (interrupts) ... It wasn't anything at all like that. It was beautiful -- godlike. DATA It was completely logical in the most disorganized way possible. Colors, sounds, lights. Not light you see, but light you feel. PICARD You each experienced something different and it affect you in dissimilar ways. TROI Sir, Worf is a warrior. He probably confronted his dragon and fought with it. Professor Manheim also tried to analyze whatever it is that comes through this window. They were both struck down. RIKER I experienced it. DATA I observed. PICARD However interesting this may be, it is not, as far as I can tell, bringing us any closer to closing that damn window. PICARD TURNS TO DATA with a real flourish. STAR TREK: "... Paris" - 2/22/88 - ACT THREE 33. 21 CONTINUED: (2) PICARD Check and re-check all the sensor readings that were taken while you were "out there." DATA Yes, sir. PICARD TURNS TO RIKER who is still glowing a bit from his experience. PICARD Number One, are you clear-headed enough to do some research? RIKER Yes, sir. PICARD Good, then go over all the material that Mister Data collected on Manheim's various theories. Maybe you'll be able to see something that ties in. Something that explains the experience you just had. RIKER Yes, Captain. Riker and Data LEAVE. PICARD Lieutenant Worf... go to your quarters and rest... WORF ... I feel fine, Captain. PICARD That's an order. There will be plenty of "dragons" left when you awaken. WORF Yes, sir. WORF MARCHES OUT of the room, trying not to show how exhausted and shaken he still is. STAR TREK: "... Paris" - 2/22/88 - ACT THREE 34. 21 CONTINUED: (3) PICARD This has nothing to do with their subconscious fears and dreams? TROI I'm afraid not, sir. This is real. PICARD That's what I was afraid you'd say, Counselor. CUT TO: 22 INT. SICKBAY Laura sits patiently near her husband's bedside. PAUL MANHEIM'S EYE CLICK OPEN and they are crystal clear. There is a completely normal air about him as he gazes around Sickbay. MANHEIM Where am I? LAURA RUSHES TO HIS SIDE and is truly happy to see her husband looking so well. LAURA Thank God. We're on the USS Enterprise. They answered your distress signal. MANHEIM I sent an S.O.S.? LAURA Yes. Oh, Paul, you're going to be fine. MANHEIM CHANGES looking a little manic suddenly. He holds Laura's arm, a little too tightly. PAUL I'm not fine, Laura. I'm not even close to fine. STAR TREK: "... Paris" - 2/22/88 - ACT THREE 35. 22 CONTINUED: She is frightened by his intensity, but he holds her there and makes her listen to him. MANHEIM (continuing) Always remember this one thing... BEVERLY SEES WHAT'S HAPPENING and touches her insignia. BEVERLY Professor Manheim is conscious. She moves to check his vital signs, trying not to interrupt the moment between the husband and wife. NO ONE COULD INTERRUPT him, he is obsessed with what he's telling his wife. MANHEIM Remember... It was worth it. What happened, what will happen, all of it. It was all worth it. His eyes are the eyes of a wild and tortured man. LAURA PULLS AWAY from him, frightened. LAURA The Board was right. We should have stayed at the Institute. MANHEIM Then you never would have seen your Picard. LAURA What are you talking about? MANHEIM Fate. BEVERLY HEARS THIS and tries hard to maintain her professional composure. STAR TREK: "... Paris" - 2/22/88 - ACT THREE 36. 22 CONTINUED: (2) LAURA But, how could you know, I never told you about Jean-Luc? MANHEIM I know more things now than I could have learned in twenty lifetimes. And one of the things I know is that you, my darling, belong with him. It's your destiny. LAURA TURNS AWAY not wanting her husband to see that she feels what he's saying is true. MANHEIM GRABS HER AGAIN obsessed. MANHEIM Laura, don't you understand, none of that's important now. I've been on the other side! BEVERLY IS AFRAID he might collapse into another seizure. BEVERLY Doctor Manheim, please try to stay calm. There are many questions we need to ask you. PICARD BURSTS INTO Sickbay. Troi and Data FOLLOW him IN. PICARD Professor Manheim. MANHEIM Captain Picard. The two men look at one another for a short beat... like two rams ready to lock horns. PICARD We need your help. The situation is not good. STAR TREK: "... Paris" - 2/22/88 - ACT THREE 37. 22 CONTINUED: (3) MANHEIM And I need yours. My body seems to be in poor physical condition. I need you to go down to the planet and collect my notes, my calculations. PICARD We intend to. What exactly were you working on when this window to another dimension was opened? MANHEIM IS SHOCKED that they even know this much. MANHEIM How were you able to determine that? PICARD We are not totally without resources. MANHEIM I'll speak to the Science Officer. PICARD ISN'T THREATENED as Mister Data STEPS FORWARD and faces his hero. DATA Lieutenant Commander Data at your service, Professor. MANHEIM'S I have spent the last twenty years struggling with time/gravity theories. Data is impressed. DATA I suspected it but I could not be sure. MANHEIM There is one security system after another on your way down to the planet. STAR TREK: "... Paris" - 2/22/88 - ACT THREE 38. 22 CONTINUED: (4) DATA We had the privilege of running into one of them when we tried to beam down. PICARD What about time/gravity? MANHEIM'S It's all in my notes. PICARD I'd rather hear it from you personally, a condensed version. MANHEIM There is hardly a condensed version of the most complex theory of the twenty-fourth century, Captain Picard, but if you insist, I'll attempt one that even you will be able to understand. PICARD WANTS TO KNOCK this guy right out of Sickbay and back out in space, but he controls himself. MANHEIM A star four light years away went nova. I have been able to mathematically... "latch" onto the incredible gravity of this smooth back globe and direct that energy, that nearly immeasurable force, into space. DATA IS TRANSFIXED by the pure simplicity of it all -- even though he realizes this is like a grain of sand to the whole theory. PICARD So -- this energy, directed into space, then what? MANHEIM Then, abracadabra, Captain Picard, we all see God! A window to another dimension, isn't that how you put it? So pedestrian. STAR TREK: "... Paris" - 2/22/88 - ACT THREE 39. 22 CONTINUED: (5) PICARD Fine. My scientific knowledge isn't the issue here -- yours is. You opened it. Are you brilliant enough to close it? MANHEIM LOOKS AT Picard and starts to laugh. THE LAUGH BECOMES HYSTERICAL and Beverly quickly moves to Manheim's side to administer a shot. MANHEIM GRABS HER WRIST until the hypospray falls out of her hand on the floor. DATA AND PICARD try to aid Beverly, but they are forced back with an unseen BLAST OF ENERGY emanating from him. MANHEIM Give me thirty cc's of trisinov. I'll give you the correct coordinates to beam safely to Vandor and the electrical codes you'll need to bypass security systems to get into my lab. THEY ALL STARE AT MANHEIM he seems bigger than before, almost as if his upper body has grown. His legs however seem shriveled and weak. 23 INT. CONFERENCE ROOM The starscape glows with a VIOLET HUE through the conference room windows. TROI I'm sorry Captain, my powers appear to be quite useless in this particular instance. Whatever Professor Manheim is going through is to feelings what white is to color. I cannot distinguish one feeling from another. They are all there. STAR TREK: "... Paris" - 2/22/88 - ACT THREE 40. 23 CONTINUED: PICARD Certainly hostility. TROI It would seem he has reason to feel hostile to you, sir, his wife... PICARD Yes, Counselor, let's stick to the important issues. Lieutenant Worf. WORF Yes, sir? PICARD I want every heading that Manheim gave Mister Data checked out and then rechecked. No one's beaming down to Vandor until we can be reasonably sure they'll make it through. WORF Right away, sir. WORF AND DATA LEAVE the conference room. PICARD TURNS TO RIKER a little frayed around the edges. PICARD I'll be in my quarters, Number One. RIKER Everything's under control, Captain. PICARD LOOKS AT RIKER knowing that even Number One can't "control" what's going on out there or in the battle between his head and heart. STAR TREK: "... Paris" - 2/22/88 - ACT THREE 41. 23 CONTINUED: (2) PICARD LEAVES the conference room. TROI TURNS TO RIKER and with understanding. TROI He has had a great emotional shock. This, coupled with the strain of command, is wearing on him. RIKER Women! TROI IS ANGRY with Riker's response until she sees: RIKER SMILES THAT devilish smile of his... he's teasing her. TROI GATHERS HER PAPERS and prepares to leave the room. TROI I would think that someone who has so recently seen God would be a little more... well... RIKER ... No one ever said that God didn't have a sense of humor. SHE LEAVES AND HE FOLLOWS close behind. RIKER Did you ever hear the one about... 24 INT. PICARD'S QUARTERS The captain ENTERS and with one deep breath releases some of the postures of command. He moves to a shelving unit in his room and takes a tiny glass figurine off the shelf. STAR TREK: "... Paris" - 2/22/88 - ACT THREE 42. 24 CONTINUED: LAURA (O.S.) You saved it. All these years. PICARD TURNS TOWARD HER He is surprised and yet; PICARD I wondered when you would come. PICARD'S POV - LAURA looking more ravishingly beautiful than any woman has a right to. She poses in a comfortable lounge chair. PICARD SETS THE FIGURINE down and kneels at Laura's side. PICARD You are so beautiful, my throat feels as if it will close and I will never be able to tell you how beautiful you truly are. LAURA'S EYES SWIM IN TEARS as she takes Jean-Luc's face in both her hands and bends towards him. LAURA My love, why didn't you come to meet me that last day in Paris? PICARD CAN'T LOOK AT HER. He leans his head in her lap. PICARD Fear. Fear of losing you. Fear of staying and losing myself. LAURA TILTS HIS chin up so that they are eye to eye. LAURA Not a day went by that I didn't look up into the sky and will you to know... (MORE) STAR TREK: "... Paris" - 2/22/88 - ACT THREE 43. 24 CONTINUED: (2) LAURA (Cont'd) (beat) ... to know that I loved you still. I always did and Jean-Luc, I always will. PICARD TENDERLY KISSES HER and she melts down out of the chair into him. THEIR KISSES REKINDLE the passion of two young people in Paris and then go far beyond that, into the fuller passion of two adults. PICARD My love. I cannot live without you. LAURA I'll never leave you again. PICARD HOLDS LAURA to him as he stands and walks to the bed. THEIR EYES NEVER WAVER boring holes into each other. THEY SINK ONTO THE BED and into each other's arms, sealing the bond they have just made. FADE OUT: END OF ACT THREE STAR TREK: "... Paris" - 2/22/88 - ACT FOUR 44. ACT FOUR FADE IN: 25 EXT. SPACE - THE ENTERPRISE (OPTICAL) in orbit around Vandor 26 INT. SICKBAY Beverly is checking Paul's vital signs when he drifts into consciousness. He stares at her intently for a moment. MANHEIM Who are you? BEVERLY I'm Doctor Crusher and I'm trying... MANHEIM Imposter! Touch me and you touch whatever your head can't understand. I am real. You are illusion. BEVERLY Try to rest. MANHEIM I am rest. I am action. I am you. Imposter. MANHEIM LAPSES BACK into a fevered fitful sleep. BEVERLY I wish I could talk to you -- Professor Manheim. I bet you were really something. TROI QUIETLY ENTERS Sickbay. Beverly is surprised to see her and joins her at the door. BEVERLY Deanna? TROI I wanted to see how he was doing. STAR TREK: "... Paris" - 2/22/88 - ACT FOUR 45. 26 CONTINUED: BEVERLY The same. Nothing I do seems to make any difference. BEVERLY SMILES at Troi. BEVERLY That's not why you're here. TROI SHAKES her head "no." TROI I'm supposed to be the empath. Beverly gestures her to follow her to the outer office. 27 INT. SICKBAY - DR. CRUSHER'S OFFICE Beverly keeps working as Troi talks to her. TROI Are you all right? BEVERLY Why wouldn't I be? I've got one of the medical wonders of the galaxy dying in my Sickbay. TROI That isn't what I meant. BEVERLY I don't think I want to talk about what I think you mean. BEVERLY BUMPS INTO a table and pushes it out of the way as she continues to work. TROI You're not helping the situation by pretending it doesn't exist. BEVERLY WHIRLS AROUND almost knocking a tube off the table. STAR TREK: "... Paris" - 2/22/88 - ACT FOUR 46. 27 CONTINUED: BEVERLY I'm making it worse? TROI I didn't say that. I said you're not helping it. Or yourself. Or the captain. BEVERLY That's his problem. BEVERLY MOVES THINGS from place to place. Troi calmly looks at her, willing her to stand still. BEVERLY All right. I'm still not sure how I feel about him. Now it looks as if I'll never know... are you happy? I said it. TROI Talk to him. BEVERLY No. I can't compete with a ghost from his past. No one could. TROI She's not a ghost. She's here right now. BEVERLY She may be in the here and now, but it's the ghost he sees. No Deanna, he'll have to work it through without my... input. SHE SLAMS A PIECE of equipment back into its place. BEVERLY There. Now I feel better. thanks, Deanna. TROI STARES KNOWINGLY AFTER Beverly as she WALKS BACK into Sickbay. STAR TREK: "... Paris" - 2/22/88 - ACT FOUR 47. 28 INT. MAIN BRIDGE Picard impatiently taps his fingers on the command chair. Data pores over his console as Riker watches. PICARD How soon, Mister Data? DATA I am almost through comparing the calculations, Captain. PICARD IS STARTLED when Beverly's voice comes through. BEVERLY'S COM VOICE Bridge, this is Sickbay. Doctor Manheim is awake and asking to speak with you, Captain. Alone. PICARD On my way, Doctor. HE JUMPS UP from the Command Chair and HURRIES TOWARDS the turbolift. RIKER AND DATA return to their calculations. Data finishes and looks at Riker. RIKER Can we do it? DATA I believe so. But it must be soon. Sensors indicate a rapid deterioration of the atmosphere. RIKER LOOKS AT Data. He'd like a little more assurance. DATA I cannot be more sure than that, Commander. Not until I see what is in Professor Manheim's laboratory. RIKER Okay. Let's get ready. Worf. STAR TREK: "... Paris" - 2/22/88 - ACT FOUR 48. 29 INT. SICKBAY Picard ENTERS, not having any idea what he'll find. Beverly gestures to Manheim. MANHEIM IS SITTING up, conscious, but battling with an unseen enemy. PICARD WALKS BRISKLY to his bedside. PICARD You asked for me. Manheim struggles to make sense. MANHEIM You belong with Laura. It's the way it's supposed to be. Give me your word you'll take care of her. PICARD IS FURIOUS at the arrogance of this man. And he's feeling a little guilty too. PICARD I did not come here to discuss her. I will not discuss her with you until your irresponsible actions are checked and until my away team is back on this ship safe and sound. MANHEIM'S FEVERED EYES bore into the captain. MANHEIM It is only Laura who concerns me. PICARD Then she is wrong. We are very different, you and I. For which I am grateful. PICARD STRIDES TOWARDS the door. MANHEIM Good. You will take care of her. STAR TREK: "... Paris" - 2/22/88 - ACT FOUR 49. 30 INT. TRANSPORTER ROOM (OPTICAL) Geordi is at the controls this time as the three away Team members STEP ONTO the pad. They carry very small, portable respirator packs on their chests. GEORDI I have the coordinates exactly in the corridor the Professor specified. RIKER We're ready. GEORDI Good luck. Geordi operates the controls and the away team BEAMS DOWN. 31 INT. VANDOR - CORRIDOR (OPTICAL) as the away team BEAMS IN. It is DARK and they immediately feel the difference in atmosphere. RIKER Respirators on. They turn their packs on and move as quickly as they can, Worf in the lead, towards the laboratory door. SUDDENLY ANOTHER STRONG burst of ENERGY BLASTS THROUGH THE CORRIDOR, sending the away team flying and ROLLING to safety. The corridor PULSATES WITH THE VIOLET COLORS of the other dimension. 32 EXT. SPACE - THE ENTERPRISE (OPTICAL) WAVES OF COLOR RADIATE OFF THE ENTERPRISE. 33 INT. MAIN BRIDGE The bridge crew holds its own against the assault. GEORDI Shields barely holding, sir. Damage reports coming in. PICARD Contact the away team! STAR TREK: "... Paris" - 2/22/88 - ACT FOUR 50. 34 INT. SICKBAY Laura is at the side of her husband, trying to hold him down, trying to will him to be well. With every assault, he too is assaulted. 35 INT. VANDOR - CORRIDOR (OPTICAL) The onslaught over, the away team cautiously makes its way towards Manheim's laboratory. PICARD'S COM VOICE Maintain an open frequency, Number One. RIKER Frequency open, sir. NEXT TO THE LABORATORY Data removes a panel next to the door, and begins to insert the code Manheim gave them. Worf watches the corridor carefully. DATA FINISHES ENTERING the code and the lab doors OPEN partially. SUDDENLY WORF NOTICES several openings along the edges of the wall. WORF Look out! THE THREE DIVE for cover as LASER FIRE COMMENCES. THEY ROLL BACK AND FORTH out of range of attack. ALL THREE PULL their phasers and RETURN FIRE to the source of the attacks. QUIET SETTLES in the corridor. The away team cautiously pick themselves up. STAR TREK: "... Paris" - 2/22/88 - ACT FOUR 51. 35 CONTINUED: RIKER Manheim forgot to mention that one. THEY LOOK AT EACH other and allow themselves a slight REACTION. THE THREE OF THEM SQUEEZE through the narrow opening into the darkness of the lab. FADE OUT. END OF ACT FOUR STAR TREK: "... Paris" - 2/22/88 - ACT FIVE 52. ACT FIVE FADE IN: 36 INT. VANDOR - MANHEIM'S LABORATORY - CONTINUOUS ACTION Data touches a wallplate and the LIGHTS GO ON. His eye is immediately attracted to an instrument panel -- a floating RED LIGHT, a small board of numbers, a narrow slot and a clock. THE CLOCK COUNTS DOWN the micro-seconds... starting from ten minutes. WORF What is it? DATA Hopefully, an easily deactivated alarm system. RIKER More surprises. DATA IS ALREADY examining the board. He sticks his hand in the slot and the seconds keep on disappearing. RIKER Captain, a problem with Manheim's security. Any chance he's awake? 37 INT. MAIN BRIDGE (INTERCUT AS NEEDED) Picard and Troi REACT. PICARD No, Commander. Doctor Crusher is under orders to inform me if the professor regains consciousness. (beat) What's the problem? DATA FINISHES TAKING his readings and turns to Riker. STAR TREK: "... Paris" - 2/22/88 - ACT FIVE 53. 37 CONTINUED: DATA Professor Manheim's state of consciousness is of little use to us. PICARD Explain. DATA It appears, sir, he was more interested in making certain his notes were destroyed than in our safety. When we came into the lab we triggered an explosive device. In less than ten minutes the lab and whoever is in it will cease to exist. PICARD I'd like to wake him up myself. DATA Do not bother, sir. Manheim himself could not stop this. It is deactivated by a photogenetic code. Manheim's is altered. RIKER My suggestion is to continue the mission posthaste. PICARD You've got seven minutes. I don't care what you've found or what you're doing, clear? RIKER Yes, sir. Worf check the outer perimeter -- carefully. And Data... DATA IS ALREADY immersed in the computer. His face shows the magnitude of what he's learning and the respect he has fo this knowledge. THE COMPUTER SCREEN speeds through Manheim's notes. DATA Truly incredible. STAR TREK: "... Paris" - 2/22/88 - ACT FIVE 54. 38 INT. MAIN BRIDGE Geordi reports to Picard. GEORDI Sir, the sensor findings from the last blast are in. PICARD And? GEORDI They're different from all previous waves. PICARD In magnitude, in energy mass, in composition? GEORDI In every way, sir. It would seem we are dealing with something that's not even remotely easy to classify. We might sit here for the next hundred years being blasted daily, and no two blasts would be the same. TROI Anything could happen. We're dealing with another dimension. PICARD Are you saying it could arbitrarily, or even with fine methodology, change direction and instead of blasting us, draw us in... suck us through the window? GEORDI That would certainly be a viable possibility, sir. One of trillions. TROI With so much to fear, there is truly nothing to do but remain calm. 39 INT. VANDOR - MANHEIM'S LABORATORY The clock shows seven minutes and a few seconds. STAR TREK: "... Paris" - 2/22/88 - ACT FIVE 55. 39 CONTINUED: DATA CALMLY WORKS at the computer. Worf and Riker stand by... not so calmly. DATA It is the only chance we have. RIKER What is? DATA A reversal of the same effect Doctor Manheim has programmed into the computer. WORF How? DATA There is no time to reprogram. You will need to physically change microchips the same time I program the correct instructions here. RIKER Captain, we have a plan. PICARD Proceed, and report at regular intervals. DATA IS UP AND OPENS two steel doors electronically. THEY ENTER A SILO-TYPE structure. The walls are perfectly smooth. Occasionally brooken by small grill work, shielding the guts of the machinery. DATA POINTS UP to the top of the twenty foot structure. THEIR POV - UP to the very top. STAR TREK: "... Paris" - 2/22/88 - ACT FIVE 56. 39 CONTINUED: (2) DATA (O.S.) Someone must climb to the top. The circuits we need to change are in that panel. RIKER AND WORF look at one another... both of them are suffering from the lack of oxygen and yet both of them want to go. DATA Whoever goes will be in more danger than falling. A great heat is generated in this chamber. Enough to disintegrate any of us in seconds. RIKER What about the doors, the ones we came in? If they stay open, would the system short out? Heat of that magnitude requires a seal of some sort, doesn't it? DATA We cannot do it electronically. I need to use full power to reverse the effect. WORF I will keep the doors from closing. THEY PREPARE TO EXECUTE the plan. THE CLOCK NOW READS less than five minutes. RIKER TAKES HIGH-TECH CLIMBING GEAR out of his chest pack. He ENTERS the cylinder. WORF READIES HIMSELF between the steel doors, summoning all the Klingon strength of the ages. STAR TREK: "... Paris" - 2/22/88 - ACT FIVE 57. 40 INT. MAIN BRIDGE Captain Picard waits on the Enterprise. PICARD Away team, report. DATA Sir, we are executing the plan. RIKER CLIMBS up the cylinder. PICARD You've got three minutes, no more. Transporter Room, lock onto their coordinates and be ready to beam them up the instant of my command. DATA WAITS AT THE COMPUTER like a church organist ready to play for the coronation of the pope. WORF LOOKS UP and signals to Data. WORF He's past the halfway mark. RIKER HANGS BREATHLESS on the wall of the cylinder. RIKER Captain, I need more time. PICARD You haven't got it. RIKER PRESSES FORWARD QUICKLY not looking back. WORF (to Data) He's almost there. WORF PRESSES HIS MASSIVE arms against the doors and crouches in a weight lifter crouch. STAR TREK: "... Paris" - 2/22/88 - ACT FIVE 58. 40 CONTINUED: DATA TOUCHES A BUTTON on the panel and the SOUND OF MACHINERY coming to life fills the lab. WORF STRAINS WITH EVERY CELL in his body to hold the doors open. RIKER REACHES THE TOP and barely has the breath to speak, but manages: RIKER Go, Data. DATA BEGINS THE PROGRAM and calmly touches his insignia and speaks to Riker. DATA Remember Commander -- it is the blue chip you switch with the yellow chip. WORF STRAINS, SWEAT pouring down his face. DATA (continuing) Ready, five, four, three, two, one. RIKER SWITCHES THE CHIPS and clings to the wall like he's hugging his mother. WORF EXHALES with purpose as a BLAST of hot air WHOOSHES past him and through the lab. OUTSIDE THE LAB a BEAM OF LIGHT starts from high up in the sky and is drawn to the tip of the cylinder. THERE IS A FLASH OF LIGHT and.. PICARD Beam them back. STAR TREK: "... Paris" - 2/22/88 - ACT FIVE 59. 41 INT. TRANSPORTER ROOM (OPTICAL) As the away team MATERIALIZES on the pad. They are exuberant with the feeling of brotherhood. RIKER Did it work? DATA It is well patched... Closed in this sense would be an equation... RIKER Patched is good enough. DATA TILTS HIS head and shares his inner clock with them. DATA By my calculation, the laboratory just disintegrated. 42 INT. SICKBAY Paul Manheim is sitting straight up in bed and he is a new man, completely different in demeanor and look than ever before. BEVERLY But this is amazing. All your readings are completely normal. There's even been a complete nerve regeneration. PAUL MANHEIM GRASPS Beverly's hand in a gentle and kindly gesture. MANHEIM Where is my wife? Is Laura all right? PICARD AND LAURA ENTER Sickbay at the same time. LAURA Paul? MANHEIM The effect has been reversed, darling. It's safe now. STAR TREK: "... Paris" - 2/22/88 - ACT FIVE 60. 42 CONTINUED: She RUSHES TO HIM and is genuinely happy to see that he is going to be all right. BEVERLY There are no residual effects. MANHEIM TURNS TO BEVERLY and gentlemanly corrects her. MANHEIM No, Doctor, I am not the same man I was before. He holds his wife to him. MANHEIM (continuing) I still have the same vision, but, Captain Picard, I would like to request a science team to help me rebuild. I would like to start fresh, and do everything the right way this time. PICARD I'm sure the Federation will want to help you in any way they can, as long as you are willing to now be a part of the Federation. MANHEIM NODS and strokes Laura's hand. PICARD The science team will be arranged. MANHEIM All volunteers, I insist. No one on Vandor will be there unless they want to be there. He looks at Laura and Laura looks from this great, great man, who has just become even greater to... PICARD WATCHING HER with an understanding look. STAR TREK: "... Paris" - 2/22/88 - ACT FIVE 61. 43 INT. HOLODECK Jean-Luc Picard sits at the same table in the same cafe in Paris. He sips a glass of red wine. LAURA WALKS INTO the picture. LAURA I hope you don't mind. I convinced the technician you wouldn't. PICARD TURNS TO HER and stands, offering her a chair. LAURA Oh, no, I won't be staying. PICARD I know. LAURA I wanted to say good-bye here, not in the Transporter Room. PICARD You have more courage than I did. LAURA More courage than a young man in first love, yes. More courage than Jean-Luc Picard, Captain of the USS Enterprise -- I doubt there are many who could boast that. HE STANDS AND HOLDS HER in the warmest embrace... one that he will treasure through the decades, an embrace of the deepest kind of love. PICARD I eat, sleep and dream your softness -- could it be enough? LAURA We would have been the richest, most gloriously happy two people in all the worlds. STAR TREK: "... Paris" - 2/22/88 - ACT FIVE 62. 43 CONTINUED: SHE TURNS TO GO and doesn't look back. PICARD WATCHES HER LEAVE memorizing her step, everything about her. PICARD I cannot say good-bye to you. 44 INT. MAIN BRIDGE Riker, Troi, Data, Geordi and Worf are all on the bridge. THE CAPTAIN ENTERS and they all look at Picard as if they are slightly worried about him. PICARD Is anything wrong? Everyone goes about their business. RIKER No, sir. PICARD Then set course for Sarona Eight. As I remember we were on our way for some much needed R and R. GEORDI Aye, sir. Course set and laid in. PICARD Warp five. Engage. GEORDI MAKES THE necessary computations. RIKER I've only been there once, but there's this great bar -- I can't remember the name of it, they serve these blue concoctions... STAR TREK: "... Paris" - 2/22/88 - ACT FIVE 63. 44 CONTINUED: TROI ... It's across the square from the Zanza Men's Dance Palace. They both look at her. Troi half-smiles. PICARD LOOKS FORWARD into his future without Laura, the future that begins on Sarona 8. He turns to Riker. PICARD It's called the Blue Parrot Cafe -- and you're buying. FADE OUT. END OF ACT FIVE THE END STAR TREK: THE NEXT GENERATION "Conspiracy" #40271-125 Story by Robert Sabaroff Teleplay by Tracy Torme Directed by Cliff Bole THE WRITING CREDITS MAY NOT BE FINAL AND SHOULD NOT BE USED FOR PUBLICITY OR ADVERTISING PURPOSES WITHOUT FIRST CHECKING WITH THE TELEVISION LEGAL DEPARTMENT. Copyright 1988 Paramount Pictures Corporation. All Rights Reserved. This script is not for publication or reproduction. No one is authorized to dispose of same. If lost or destroyed, please notify the Script Department. 2ND REV. FINAL DRAFT MARCH 8, 1988 STAR TREK: "Conspiracy" - 3/8/88 - CAST STAR TREK: THE NEXT GENERATION "Conspiracy" CAST PICARD CAPTAIN WALKER KEEL RIKER TRYLA SCOTT BEVERLY CAPTAIN RIXX DATA ADMIRAL SAVAR TROI ADMIRAL AARON WORF ADMIRAL GREGORY QUINN GEORDI LT. COMMANDER DEXTER REMMICK Voice-Over Non-Speaking COMPUTER VOICE CEREMONIAL GUARD TRANSPORTER OPERATOR (EARTH) STAR TREK: "Conspiracy" - 3/8/88 - SETS STAR TREK: THE NEXT GENERATION "Conspiracy" SETS INTERIORS EXTERIORS USS ENTERPRISE USS ENTERPRISE MAIN BRIDGE CAPTAIN'S QUARTERS DYTALLIX B SICKBAY STARFLEET HQ TRANSPORTER ROOM CORRIDOR EARTH OBSERVATION LOUNGE QUINN'S GUEST QUARTERS CAPTAIN'S READY ROOM GREAT HALL OF STARFLEET - EARTH HALLWAY RECEPTION AREA DINING ROOM TRANSMITTER ROOM TRANSPORTER ROOM MINING TUNNEL - DYTALLIX B STAR TREK: "Conspiracy" - 3/8/88 - PRONUNCIATION GUIDE STAR TREK: THE NEXT GENERATION "Conspiracy" PRONUNCIATION GUIDE TRYLA SCOTT TRY-la ADMIRAL SAVAR suh-VAAR DYTALLIX B die-TAL-icks Bee TAU CETI III tow (rhymes with cow) - set-ee 3 STAR TREK: "Conspiracy" - REV. 3/9/88 - TEASER 1. STAR TREK: THE NEXT GENERATION "Conspiracy" TEASER FADE IN: 1 EXT. SPACE - THE ENTERPRISE (OPTICAL) sweeps by majestically at warp. WE CLEARLY SEE THE REGISTRY NUMBER on her wing -- ten foot tall navy blue letters reading NCC-1701D. RIKER (V.O.) First officer's log, stardate 41775.5. We are en route to the ocean world known as Pacifica... 2 INT. ENTERPRISE - MAIN BRIDGE - WIDE ANGLE The mood is relaxed. RIKER is at Command with TROI beside him. WORF'S at Security, DATA and GEORDI at Ops and Conn. RIKER (V.O.) (continuing) Our mission is routinely scientific in nature. We look forward to seeing the warm blue waters and fine white beaches that make Pacifica a treasured jewel of the galaxy. 3 ANGLE ON DATA intently listening to the punchline of a joke Geordi's telling... GEORDI (grinning) ... So the guy staggers to his feet and goes back to the girl. She smiles, looks him right in the eye and says "Just try that in hyperspace!" Geordi LAUGHS at his own joke, but Data is simply reflective. STAR TREK: "Conspiracy" - REV. 3/9/88 - TEASER 2. 3 CONTINUED: DATA (thoughtful) Ah, I see. So the difficulty in attaining such complex positioning in a zero gravity environment, coupled with the adverse effect it would have on the psychological well being of the average human male, is what makes this anecdote so amusing. Yes. Very humorous indeed. Hysterical, in fact. The look on his friend's face tells Data that something is missing. Suddenly, he realizes what it is and bursts into STIFF, FORCED LAUGHTER. It comes out awkwardly and ends much too abruptly. 4 BACK TO WIDE ANGLE Riker is smiling, having overheard. RIKER What's our e.t.a. at Pacifica, Mister La Forge? GEORDI Twenty two hours, fourteen minutes. RIKER Increase to warp six. GEORDI Aye sir. RIKER (to Troi, mischievous) Think anyone'll mind if we arrive a little ahead of schedule? TROI (warm smile) I know I won't. I've been looking forward to a nice swim. STAR TREK: "Conspiracy" - 3/8/88 - TEASER 3. 4 CONTINUED: DATA You are aware Counselor, that the Holodeck can be programed to recreate an oceanic environment. TROI It's just not the same, Data. Have you ever gone for a real moonlight swim? DATA (deeply puzzled) One can swim in moonlight? Troi rolls her eyes and turns to Worf... TROI How about you, Worf? WORF (shaking head) Swimming is too much like bathing. DATA -- Commander Riker. Data is monitoring something, looking concerned... DATA (continuing) I am receiving a Code Forty-Seven. Riker frowns, instantly concerned... RIKER Verify. Data rechecks his console... DATA (astounded) It is a Code Forty-Seven, sir. Starfleet emergency frequency. Riker and Troi exchange worried glances... TROI Code Forty-Seven... Captain's eyes only. STAR TREK: "Conspiracy" - 3/8/88 - TEASER 4. 5 INT. CAPTAIN'S QUARTERS - SLOWLY MOVING TOWARD BED (OPTICAL) The room is DARK, Picard is sleeping. THE SCREEN by his bed COMES TO LIFE, awakening the Captain... RIKER Riker on the bridge, Captain. I'm sorry to disturb you. Picard is still a bit groggy. PICARD What is it, Number One? RIKER An incoming message -- Code Forty Seven, sir. Picard REACTS to the news. He sits up in bed, wearing a form-fitting sleepsuit (warm and extremely comfortable). PICARD Pipe it through. A YELLOW LIGHT above the screen FLASHES on and off signifying that an urgent message is coming through. 6 OMITTED 7 ON SCREEN RIKER'S IMAGE IS instantly REPLACED BY THE official SEAL OF STARFLEET and the United Federation of Planets. A FEMALE COMPUTER VOICE addresses Picard... COMPUTER VOICE This is an emergency communique. It is not to be discussed with fellow officers unless deemed absolutely necessary. There will be no computer record of said transmission. PICARD Understood. COMPUTER VOICE Proceed with voice print identification. PICARD Picard, Jean-Luc. Captain, USS Enterprise. STAR TREK: "Conspiracy" - REV. 3/9/88 - TEASER 5. 7 CONTINUED: The screen HUMS momentarily... COMPUTER VOICE Voice print verified. The SEAL FADES OUT and a FACE FADES IN... It's the noble face of WALKER KEEL, a striking middle-aged man in a Starfleet captain's uniform. He is tall, with piercing grey eyes and long brown hair just going silver at the temples. Picard is clearly shocked, though not displeased, to see him... PICARD (half-whisper) Walker... KEEL Hello, Jean-Luc. Been a long time. PICARD Too long, my friend. Why are you contacting me on this frequency? KEEL It was a difficult decision. I felt it was worth the risk. PICARD Risk?! KEEL It's about Starfleet... about something we've always considered to be impossible. 8 MOVE IN ON PICARD grimly stunned by his friend's powerful words... 9 OMITTED 10 INT. CAPTAIN'S QUARTERS - PICARD (CONTINUOUS ACTION) (OPTICAL) STAR TREK: "Conspiracy" - 3/8/88 - TEASER 6. 10 CONTINUED: PICARD I don't understand. KEEL I can't explain it now. We need to talk, face to face. PICARD You're using a Code Forty-Seven! I have to know what this is all about. KEEL Not over subspace. No. PICARD For God's sake Walker, you know this is a secure channel -- KEEL -- No! For the first time, Keel looks a little over the edge. KEEL (continuing) I want you to meet me on Dytallix B. PICARD (thinking it over) When? KEEL Immediately. PICARD Impossible. We're expected at Pacifica -- KEEL -- That can wait. Keel's face grows hard... KEEL (continuing) You owe me. And you owe it to yourself to hear what I have to say. Picard is flustered and thoroughly confused. Still, he is mesmerized by the bleak urgency in Walker's voice... STAR TREK: "Conspiracy" - 3/8/88 - TEASER 7. 10 CONTINUED: (2) KEEL (continuing; slow, measured) Something's beginning... Have you felt it?... Creeping out of the woodwork... (whisper) An infestation. 10A BACK TO TWO SHOT PICARD What is? Keel looks long and hard at Picard -- as though studying his face for some reason. KEEL Don't trust anyone. Remember that, Jean-Luc. Don't take anything for granted. PICARD Walker -- KEEL -- Dytallix B. We'll be waiting. KEEL'S IMAGE VANISHES as he ends the transmission. Picard is left staring at the BLANK SCREEN -- the YELLOW LIGHT REFLECTING OFF HIS FACE. FADE OUT. END OF TEASER STAR TREK: "Conspiracy" - REV. 3/9/88 - ACT ONE 8. ACT ONE FADE IN: 11 INT. MAIN BRIDGE - WIDE ANGLE The same crew is on the bridge. Picard EXITS the turbolift and addresses them from the railing... PICARD (to Geordi) Are you familiar with Dytallix B, Lieutenant? GEORDI Uh, well... DATA If I may, sir? Dytallix B is one of seven uninhabited worlds mined for the Federation by the Dytallix Mining Company. I believe B is in the nearby Mira system. PICARD Fine. Chart a course for it immediately, warp seven. And there will be no records or logs mentioning any aspect of this diversion. RIKER Captain, they're expecting us at Pacifica. Shouldn't we contact them to let them know -- PICARD -- Negative, Will. Nothing goes out without specific orders from me. 12 ANGLE ON TROI watching the captain, concerned. PICARD (O.S.) Hopefully our delay will be minimal. 13 BACK TO SHOT The captain EXITS to the Ready Room without another word, leaving behind a concerned group of officers... STAR TREK: "Conspiracy" - REV. 3/9/88 - ACT ONE 9. 14 OMITTED 14A EXT. SPACE - THE ENTERPRISE (OPTICAL) at warp. 15 thru OMITTED 16 17 INT. MAIN BRIDGE - WIDE ANGLE - WORF AND GEORDI at Conn and Ops, Riker in command, Data at Science One. DATA I have the readout on Dytallix B, Commander. RIKER On screen. 18 ANGLE TO INCLUDE SCREEN where a solar system CHART is laid out with the correct planetary dimensions. DATA Dytallix B is the fifth of six planets circling the red giant known as Mira. The CHART IS REPLACED BY a closer look at the REDDISH-BROWN WORLD, Dytallix B. DATA (continuing) One side always faces the sun -- where temperatures reach up to one hundred and eighty degrees Celsius. The mines line the temperate zone between the day and night sides, but they are long deserted. STAR TREK: "Conspiracy" - REV. 3/9/88 - ACT ONE 10. 18 CONTINUED: RIKER Why the devil would we be going there? Are there any miners or indigenous life forms on the planet? DATA I believe the answer is negative to both questions, sir. In a manner of speaking, it is nothing but a lifeless hunk of rock, a useless ball of mud, a worthless chunk of -- RIKER Thank you, Data. I get the idea. (into com) Captain, we're approaching Dytallix B. PICARD'S COM VOICE Very good, Number One. I'm on my way. 19 thru OMITTED 20 20A EXT. SPACE - THE ENTERPRISE (OPTICAL) coming out of warp. 21 OMITTED 22 INT. MAIN BRIDGE - WIDE ANGLE as Picard ENTERS. WORF Captain, sensors are detecting three Federation starships already in orbit around the planet. Picard raises his eyebrows in surprise... PICARD Identify. STAR TREK: "Conspiracy" - REV. 3/9/88 - ACT ONE 11. 22 CONTINUED: WORF Two are frigates: the Renegade commanded by Tryla Scott, and the Thomas Paine, Captain Rixx commanding. DATA (studying his console) The third is just coming into range now, sir... It is an Ambassador Class heavy cruiser... The USS Horatio. RIKER Horatio? (to Picard) Isn't that Walker Keel's ship? Picard looks at him but doesn't answer. WORF Attempts at communication have been ignored by all three vessels. PICARD You will make no further attempts, Mister Worf. Any life-form readings on the surface, Mister Data? DATA Three sir. All gathered inside what appears to be the entrance to a mining tunnel. PICARD (moving toward turbolift) Very well. Relay those coordinates to the Transporter Room. I'm beaming down. RIKER (a bit alarmed) Alone, Captain? Picard ENTERS the lift and turns to face Riker... PICARD Alone, Number One. The door slides SHUT, accentuating Picard's response. STAR TREK: "Conspiracy" - 3/8/88 - ACT ONE 12. 23 EXT. SPACE - ENTERPRISE (OPTICAL) in orbit around Dytallix B. 24 INT. MINING TUNNEL - PICARD (OPTICAL) MATERIALIZES into a narrow shaft which opens out to the surface behind him. The entire TUNNEL IS BATHED IN VIVID RED SUNLIGHT from Mira. WE CAN HEAR THE WIND BLOWING like a hurricane outside. 24A PICARD'S P.O.V. The tunnel is DARK and forboding. 24B BACK TO SHOT As Picard moves forward, THREE FIGURES STEP OUT of the shadows. KEEL (O.S.) (monotone) Good to see you, Jean-Luc. Thanks for coming. 25 ANGLE ON THE THREE FIGURES as THEY STEP INTO THE LIGHT. Walker Keel is flanked by a HANDSOME BLACK WOMAN and a BLUE-SKINNED BOLIAN. Each is aiming a phaser directly at Picard's heart... 26 INT. THE TUNNEL - ON PICARD under the barrel of the phasers. PICARD This is some greeting, "old friend." Keel ignores the comment -- instead STEPPING FORWARD, empty hands at his sides... KEEL Tell me Jean-Luc -- where did we first meet? Picard doesn't reply, thinking it ridiculous... BOLIAN (tense, waving gun) Answer the question! STAR TREK: "Conspiracy" - REV. 3/9/88 - ACT ONE 13. 26 CONTINUED: Picard remains cool -- a thin smile on his lips. PICARD On Tau Ceti III. It was a bar -- Quite an exotic one at that. (looks at Bolian) What do I win? KEEL Do you recall the night you introduced Jack Crusher to Beverly? PICARD You know full well I hadn't even met Beverly then. You introduced them. KEEL My brother introduced them. PICARD (losing patience) You don't have a brother -- two sisters, Anne and Melissa. Now what the hell's this all about?! Keel takes a deep breath and nods at the others. Slowly, they lower their weapons... RIXX Apologies, Captain. We had to make sure you were really you. PICARD Walker, what's going on? KEEL Captain Picard, meet Captains Scott and Rixx. The Bolian offers Picard his pale-blue hand... PICARD I believe we've met... The Altairian conference? Rixx smiles and bows slightly. At last he too is convinced that Picard is Picard. Our captain turns his gaze to the woman... STAR TREK: "Conspiracy" - REV. 3/9/88 - ACT ONE 13A. 26 CONTINUED: (2) PICARD Tryla Scott. It's said you made captain faster than anyone in Starfleet history, present company included. (pause) Are you that good? STAR TREK: "Conspiracy" - REV. 3/9/88 - ACT ONE 14. 26 CONTINUED: (3) TRYLA Yes. I am. Picard is impressed by her unblinking honesty. She comes off confident, not arrogant. Picard addresses all of them... PICARD Starfleet's finest. (looks around shaft) Fancy meeting you here. RIXX We all came secretly, Picard. To discuss the threat. PICARD What threat? TRYLA Have you noticed anything about Starfleet Command lately? Anything unusual? PICARD (thinking about it) No. We've been on the outer rim for awhile. Haven't had much contact with them. The other captains look at one another. The RED SUNLIGHT CASTS EERIE SHADOWS across their faces... KEEL Some of us have seen strange patterns emerging. Unusual orders... High-ranking officials backing irrational proposals -- RIXX -- Starbase twelve was completely evacuated for two full days! No explanation given. TRYLA And what about the deaths? Mckinney... Ryan Sipe... Onna Karapleedeez... STAR TREK: "Conspiracy" - REV. 3/9/88 - ACT ONE 15. 26 CONTINUED: (4) PICARD (quietly stunned) All dead? TRYLA (nodding) A series of "accidents". KEEL Or so they say; it's hard to be certain of anything. Interfleet communications are at a minimum. But something is happening. TRYLA And we fully expect the Enterprise to be targeted soon. PICARD (incredulous) Targeted for what? By whom? KEEL We're not sure yet. Picard is clearly skeptical. These people seem to be chasing shadows. Walker Keel addresses him with renewed intensity... KEEL (continuing) Dammit Jean-Luc, I tell you that some of Starfleet's top command people are changing! This could affect the very core of our organization. Officers I've known for years are bluffing their way through talk of old times! RIXX That's their weakness! A lack of memory. Picard turns away, troubled by the picture they're painting. TRYLA (scornful) He doesn't believe us. He thinks we're crazy. STAR TREK: "Conspiracy" - REV. 3/9/88 - ACT ONE 16. 26 CONTINUED: (5) PICARD (turning, angry) You've given me nothing to believe in! Just vague talk of wild schemes. Who's behind it, and for what purpose? How are people being changed? KEEL (softly) I can't say exactly. But I think its spread to my own ship. The WIND MOANS AND HOWLS outside the tunnel, ROCKS AND SAND CAN BE HEARD SCRAPING against the walls... KEEL (continuing) My first officer hasn't been the same since we stopped off at Earth. Our medical officer says he's perfectly normal, but I don't think I trust him either. PICARD (exasperated) Walker -- TRYLA -- We know we don't have all the answers. All we ask is that you keep your eyes open. PICARD That's sound advice at any time, Captain. KEEL Stay in touch with us -- covertly. This meeting never took place as far as Starfleet is concerned. Keel can tell that Picard is clearly uncomfortable with this. KEEL (continuing) Please... I'm asking you as a personal favor. Reluctantly, Picard gives a slight nod, indicating agreement. Keel grasps him warmly by the shoulders... STAR TREK: "Conspiracy" - 3/8/88 - ACT ONE 17. 26 CONTINUED: (5) KEEL (continuing; warm, intense) I'm glad, Jean-Luc... Glad you're still one of us. Keel smiles sadly and steps back... KEEL (continuing) Tell Beverly... I said hello. RIXX (sly smile) And watch your back, Picard. At this moment, the WIND REACHES ITS MOST VIOLENT PEAK -- viciously assailing the mine shaft and adding emphasis to the Bolian's words. FADE OUT. END OF ACT ONE STAR TREK: "Conspiracy" - REV. 3/9/88 - ACT TWO 18. ACT TWO FADE IN: 27 EXT. SPACE - THE ENTERPRISE (OPTICAL) in orbit. 28 INT. CAPTAIN'S READY ROOM - PICARD AND TROI TROI It seems you're in turmoil. PICARD Friends... close friends, are few and far between. I'm a private man, Deanna. My Starfleet duties have shielded me from social circles. My two oldest and closest friends were Jack Crusher, may he rest in peace, and Walker Keel. Until various missions split us apart, we were almost inseparable. (pause) I trust Keel completely. If he felt it necessary to violate regulations, I know he must have a good reason. TROI And you are about to put your career at risk for him. PICARD Isn't that what friendship's all about, Counselor? TROI -- They illicitly used the emergency channel to draw you here. Then they asked you to keep secrets from your superiors. Effectively, to disobey Starfleet regulations. STAR TREK: "Conspiracy" - REV. 3/9/88 - ACT TWO 18A. 28 CONTINUED: PICARD The people involved are all of the highest caliber. If I didn't believe in their loyalty, I wouldn't have gone this far. TROI Don't you think you should tell the rest of the crew? PICARD No. I won't risk implicating them. Not until we have solid evidence that something really is wrong. 29 INT. MAIN BRIDGE Riker at Command, Worf at Security, Data at Science One, Geordi and Wesley at Conn and Ops. The turbolift door OPENS and Picard and Troi ENTER the bridge. PICARD (moving to Command) Take us out of orbit, Mister La Forge. STAR TREK: "Conspiracy" - 3/8/88 - ACT TWO 19. 29 CONTINUED: GEORDI Aye, sir. PICARD Resume heading to Pacifica, warp factor eight. GEORDI Aye sir, warp eight. DATA At that speed sir, we should arrive nine point six three hours behind the original schedule. PICARD Very well. Data, I have an assignment for you. One especially suited to your talents. 30 INT. CAPTAIN'S READY ROOM - DATA (OPTICAL) (FORMERLY "DATA'S QUARTERS") is staring at a computer terminal with a gleam in his yellow eyes. He sits down in front of it and almost lovingly touches its top... DATA Computer -- this is Lieutenant Commander Data. Access all Starfleet Command orders to starships, starbases and colonies, for the past six months. COMPUTER VOICE Working. The screen begins to HUM and the ORDERS FLASH before Data's eyes. For anyone but him, this could take months to sift through. 31 INT. MAIN BRIDGE - WIDE ANGLE Beverly ENTERS and walks to Picard... BEVERLY (serious) I understand the Horatio was in orbit around Dytallix. Did you see Walker? STAR TREK: "Conspiracy" - 3/8/88 - ACT TWO 20. 31 CONTINUED: Picard thinks before answering. PICARD Yes. He asked me to say hello to you. BEVERLY I would have liked to have seen him -- PICARD (stern) -- That wasn't possible, Doctor. There's an awkward silence between the two of them. The memory of Jack Crusher is intrinsically linked with Walker Keel. Old wounds are easily reopened... WORF (puzzled) Captain... I'm picking up an unusual disturbance in a nearby quadrant. GEORDI Confirmed, sir. Sector sixty-three. PICARD Specify. What kind of disturbance? WORF Hard to say at this distance, Captain. Picard looks to his first officer, who breaks into a small smile... RIKER I suppose Pacifica can wait a little longer. PICARD Yes. Let's investigate. Maintain speed and alter course accordingly. GEORDI Aye sir, changing course to three-five-one mark four. STAR TREK: "Conspiracy" - REV. 3/9/88 - ACT TWO 21. 32 EXT. SPACE - THE ENTERPRISE (OPTICAL) A flyby at warp as she moves toward the spot of the disturbance. 33 INT. MAIN BRIDGE GEORDI Approaching Sector sixty-three, sir. PICARD Slow to impulse, Mister La Forge. GEORDI Aye sir, slowing to impulse. WORF Sensors beginning to pick up small objects, Captain. PICARD On screen. 34 SWITCH TO ANGLE FAVORING SCREEN (OPTICAL) where WE CAN SEE SMALL BOULDER-SIZED THINGS floating toward us... RIKER Doesn't look natural. PICARD (concerned) Agreed. (to Worf) Enlarge and identify. WORF (checking scanners) It looks like... debris. (looking up, surprised) From a space vessel of some kind. RIKER It could be one of the ships that was orbiting Dytallix. GEORDI Agreed, sir. This sector is in close proximity to that planet. STAR TREK: "Conspiracy" - REV. 3/9/88 - ACT TWO 22. 35 ANGLE ON WORF PICARD (O.S.) Any identifying marks, Worf? WORF (checking scanners) Nothing so far... Sensors not detecting any bodies in the flotsam... but judging from the amount of wreckage... 36 BACK TO WIDE ANGLE as Worf looks up at the captain, speaking hesitantly. WORF ... I'm sorry sir. (pause) It can only be the Horatio. She's been totally destroyed. 37 MOVE IN ON BEVERLY AND PICARD both deeply shocked by the news... FADE OUT. END OF ACT TWO STAR TREK: "Conspiracy" - REV. 3/9/88 - ACT THREE 23. ACT THREE FADE IN: A38 EXT. SPACE - THE ENTERPRISE (OPTICAL) through space on impulse. 38 INT. OBSERVATION LOUNGE - TRACKING SHOT SLOWLY CIRCLING THE TABLE where Picard and Riker are seated. PICARD (V.O.) Captain's personal log, stardate 41776.1. The death of my friend Walker Keel, has had a powerful impact on me. I now believe there may be a cancer growing within the ranks of Starfleet. 39 MOVING IN ON PICARD at the head of the table. PICARD (V.O.) (continuing) I've decided to alert my executive officer to the suspicions voiced by Keel and the other two captains. RIKER There is no proof of anything. PICARD The last time I saw Admiral Quinn he tried to warn me of a subversion inside the Federation. Then Walker tried, and now he's dead. RIKER Subversion? Personally I don't believe in conspiracy theories. STAR TREK: "Conspiracy" - REV. 3/8/88 - ACT THREE 24. 39A OMITTED 40 INT. CAPTAIN'S READY ROOM - DATA (OPTICAL) (FORMERLY "DATA'S QUARTERS") is still glued to the console. As the information on the screen passes by, we can sense his growing concern and fascination... DATA Startling. Quite extraordinary, in fact. COMPUTER VOICE Directions unclear. Please repeat request. DATA That was not a request. I was simply... talking to myself. (smiles, pleased) A human idiosyncrasy triggered by fascination with a particular set of facts. Or sometimes brought about by senility. Or, used as a means of weighing information before reaching a conclusion. Or, as a -- COMPUTER VOICE -- Thank you, sir. I comprehend. 41 CLOSE ON DATA taken aback. Even the computer has learned to interrupt when he is rambling. COMPUTER VOICE Continuing with record scan. Data leans forward as the renewed flow of INFORMATION ON THE SCREEN REFLECTS OFF HIS FACE... DATA Intriguing. 42 INT. OBSERVATION LOUNGE - BACK TO THE OFFICERS (FORMERLY "BRIEFING ROOM") sitting around the table. STAR TREK: "Conspiracy" - REV. 3/9/88 - ACT THREE 25. 42 CONTINUED: PICARD I do not think the explosion of the Horatio was an accident. It was sabotage. RIKER But we can't be certain. DATA (O.S.) Perhaps we can. 43 ANGLE ON DATA all eyes turning to him as he ENTERS the room. He looks toward Picard for permission to speak. Picard grants it with a nod. DATA My orders were to search for abnormal patterns in Starfleet's directives. I believe I have found just that. 44 WIDE ANGLE FAVORING DATA (INCLUDES SCENE 45) (OPTICAL) as he ACTIVATES THE SCREEN. WE SEE a layout of part of THE GALAXY which includes Earth, with certain Starbases and defense posts HIGHLIGHTED IN GLOWING RED... DATA These are various outposts and starbases where I have detected unusual activity over the past few months. PICARD What sort of activity? DATA An uncustomary reshuffling of personnel, usually in the command areas. The new officers have had abnormally frequent contact with the highest levels of Starfleet Command. STAR TREK: "Conspiracy" - 3/8/88 - ACT THREE 26. 44 CONTINUED: RIKER (concerned) Why hasn't anybody noticed this before? DATA The orders were given with great subtlety. To use an aphorism, Starfleet's left hand did not know what its right hand was doing. PICARD Can you speculate as to the purpose of these reassignments? DATA I believe it is a clandestine attempt to control vital sectors of Federation territory. A stillness hangs over the room as the implications of Data's bold statement sinks in... RIKER It could be a prelude to invasion. But who's behind it? DATA There is insufficient data to make such an assesment. RIKER What do you suggest we do, warp over to Starfleet headquarters and demand to know what's going on? DATA Why not?! PICARD Yes... (thoughtful pause) ... Why not indeed? STAR TREK: "Conspiracy" - REV. 3/11/88 - ACT THREE 27. 44 CONTINUED: (2) All eyes turn to Picard to see if he's serious. PICARD (continuing) We're talking about a threat to the entire future of the Federation. I don't think any of us can rest easy until we've gone to the source. 45 thru OMITTED 46 47 EXT. SPACE - THE ENTERPRISE (OPTICAL) at warp speed. PICARD (V.O.) Captain's personal log, supplemental. We have altered course and are traveling toward Earth. I have apprised the remaining bridge crew of our situation. 48 OMITTED 49 INT. MAIN BRIDGE - ON RIKER as he ENTERS and walks to Command, where Picard is seated in the Command Chair. Troi stands by the railing, while Data and Geordi man Ops and Conn. Worf stands at Security. GEORDI Approaching Earth, sir. PICARD Standard orbit, Mister La Forge. GEORDI Standard orbit, sir. PICARD Any word from Starfleet Command, Mister Data? DATA Nothing so far, sir. PICARD Strange... STAR TREK: "Conspiracy" - REV. 3/9/88 - ACT THREE 28. 49A EXT. SPACE - THE ENTERPRISE (OPTICAL) going into orbit around Earth. 50 thru OMITTED 51 52 INT. MAIN BRIDGE - WIDE ANGLE DATA I have a message coming in from Starfleet Command, Captain. Picard and Riker exchange glances. This is a moment they've been thinking about for three days. PICARD On screen. CROSSCUTTING FROM BRIDGE TO VIEWSCREEN (OPTICAL) where a trio of admirals APPEAR. SAVAR (suh-vaar) is a regal Vulcan. AARON is old and lean -- hollow cheeks and cold, piercing eyes, beneath a shock of white hair. QUINN looks much the same as he did in "Coming Of Age." The three senior admirals are seated at an impressive looking table with a Starfleet banner on the wall behind them. Throughout this sequence, Savar always speaks with the calm, cool rationality we expect from a Vulcan... SAVAR Greetings Enterprise. I am Admiral Savar. This is Admiral Aaron, and I believe you know Admiral Quinn. STAR TREK: "Conspiracy" - 3/8/88 - ACT THREE 29. 53 CONTINUED: PICARD Yes. Good to see you again, Admiral. QUINN (smiling) And you, Captain. SAVAR Of course. We are always delighted when the Enterprise returns to the nest. Yet we are puzzled by the timing of your visit. PICARD Yes sir, I can imagine you would be. AARON (harsh sounding) Governor Delaplane of Pacifica informs us that you canceled your scheduled stop there. Is this true? PICARD It is, sir. AARON Explain yourself, Captain. Why have you returned to Earth? PICARD That... is something I'd rather discuss in person, Admiral. Lieutenant Commander Dexter Remmick ENTERS the room, walks to Savar and WHISPERS something in his ear. SAVAR Please excuse us a moment, Captain. The SCREEN GOES TO THE STARFLEET LOGO. RIKER They seem normal enough. PICARD On the surface. Any thoughts counselor? STAR TREK: "Conspiracy" - 3/8/88 - ACT THREE 30. 53 CONTINUED: (2) TROI Hard to say, sir. I sense that someone is hiding something, but I can't tell who or what. RIKER I can't say I'm overjoyed to see Remmick again. GEORDI Considering what we've done, their response has been pretty temperate. WORF I don't like it, Captain. We can't trust -- Worf cuts off in mid-sentence as THE THREE ADMIRALS REAPPEAR ON SCREEN. Remmick is gone. SAVAR Forgive the delay, Captain Picard. We'd be delighted if you and your first officer would join us for dinner. AARON Yes. Delighted. SAVAR This should give you a good opportunity to expatiate your viewpoint. AARON (nodding) To elaborate upon whatever it is that's troubling you. PICARD (smiling after a brief hesitation) We accept your gracious offer. SAVAR Excellent. Preparations are already underway. AARON We'll greet you in the reception area in say... twenty minutes? PICARD Fine. STAR TREK: "Conspiracy" - REV. 3/9/88 - ACT THREE 31. 53 CONTINUED: (3) QUINN I, uh, won't be able to attend the dinner I'm afraid. But I would like to see the ship and say hello again, Captain. PICARD Of course. Looking forward to seeing you. Enterprise out. 54 ON SCREEN a view of the EARTH from orbit REPLACES THE ADMIRALS. 55 CLOSE ON PICARD PICARD (quietly to Riker) Quinn wants to see us alone -- at least we know he's still on our side. 56 INT. TRANSPORTER ROOM ON EARTH - A MAN is about to step onto the platform. WE CANNOT SEE who he is. We barely glimpse the living thing he places inside the small briefcase he is carrying. Looking something like an oversized silverfish, it wriggles violently just before he shuts the case. A door OPENS and Remmick ENTERS and addresses the man (who we still cannot identify). REMMICK Are you ready to beam up to the Enterprise sir? 57 PULL BACK TO SEE THAT QUINN is the man. QUINN Yes, Commander, quite ready. Briefcase in hands, Quinn STEPS ONTO the platform. FADE OUT. END OF ACT THREE STAR TREK: "Conspiracy" - 3/8/88 - ACT FOUR 32. ACT FOUR FADE IN: A58 OMITTED 58 INT. ENTERPRISE TRANSPORTER ROOM - PICARD AND RIKER (OPTICAL) are awaiting the arrival of Admiral Quinn. He MATERIALIZES and steps off the platform. Quinn's warm smile is in marked contrast to the cold businesslike look he had on Earth. 59 OMITTED 60 INT. TRANSPORTER ROOM (CONTINUOUS ACTION) PICARD Welcome aboard, Greg. You remember Commander Riker. QUINN (warmly) Yes, hello again Commander. The old admiral shakes Rikers hand vigorously. Something begins to strike Picard as slightly odd, but he masks his feelings... PICARD I must say, you're looking well. QUINN Never felt better in my life. PICARD Last time we met you told me how tired you'd been feeling. QUINN (laughing) Tired of life, I was. But not anymore. I look forward to new challenges now. (pats Picard on the back) I'd sure like to see some more of the ship. STAR TREK: "Conspiracy" - 3/8/88 - ACT FOUR 33. 60 CONTINUED: Picard shoots Riker a quick glance. 61 INT. CORRIDOR - TRACKING SHOT - RIKER AND PICARD flank the admiral as they WALK down the hallway. He is taking in the architecture with wide-eyed appreciation... PICARD Remember what you told me back at Relva 7? About the threat you perceived to the very fabric of the Federation? 62 ANGLE FAVORING QUINN as he STOPS in his tracks. He gives both officers a long look before breaking into a slow smile... QUINN Is that why you're here? Because of what I said? PICARD That's one of the reasons. QUINN (grinning broadly) Jean-Luc! You took me far too literally. I was only referring to the difficulty involved in assimilating new races into the Federation. 63 REACTION SHOT OF RIKER AND PICARD QUINN (O.S.) It's an ongoing and tumultuous process that can cause stress and strain on all aspects of our alliance. PICARD (quietly) I'm sorry... I must have misunderstood. STAR TREK: "Conspiracy" - 3/8/88 - ACT FOUR 34. 64 BACK TO SHOT QUINN (boisterous) I'm the one who should be apologizing. (chuckles) If I led you down the garden path, I humbly ask forgiveness. PICARD (softly, thoughtful) Of course. Quinn BEGINS TO WALK AGAIN. Picard and Riker FOLLOW suit. QUINN Now gentlemen, I believe you have a dinner to attend, while I would like to freshen up a bit before looking around some more. RIKER We have a guest accommodation at your disposal, sir. QUINN Outstanding. PICARD (still a bit dazed) I should be getting down to the planet. Commander Riker will be at your disposal to show you anything you'd like to see. Riker and Quinn both seem surprised to hear this... QUINN That's really not necessary -- PICARD -- I insist. (to Riker) You can join me on Earth when the admiral's tour is completed. QUINN I may want to stay a while, Jean-Luc. STAR TREK: "Conspiracy" - REV. 3/10/88 - ACT FOUR 35. 64 CONTINUED: PICARD (eyes narrowing) Of course, Admiral. Stay as long as you wish. 65 INT. TRANSPORTER ROOM - PICARD AND RIKER (OPTICAL) ENTER together. PICARD (adamant) That's not Gregory Quinn. He may look like him and sound like him... but it isn't him. RIKER Can you be absolutely certain, sir. PICARD I am certain, Number One. I want you to go back to that cabin and keep your eye on his every move. Have Beverly concoct a reason for a complete medical examination. RIKER How? PICARD I don't care how! Just do it! Use force if necessary. RIKER He's a senior admiral. PICARD (grasping Riker's shoulders) It's not him, Will. I know that now. What we need to find out is how he's been duplicated. (pause) And who or what's behind it. Picard hands Riker his phaser and STEPS UP onto the platform. Riker goes to the transporter controls. RIKER Captain... if you're right -- STAR TREK: "Conspiracy" - REV. 3/10/88 - ACT FOUR 36. 65 CONTINUED: PICARD -- I am right. RIKER -- Should you be beaming down alone? Unarmed? PICARD I'll take care. Find out what you can, and then join me -- in force if you believe it's warranted. (nods at Riker) Energize. Riker calls out as the captain BEGINS TO DEMATERIALIZE. RIKER Good luck, sir. Riker stares at the empty spot where Picard just stood, wondering when he'll see him again. 66 EXT. STARFLEET HEADQUARTERS (OPTICAL) ESTABLISHING SHOT. 67 INT. GREAT HALL OF STARFLEET (OPTICAL) Picard MATERIALIZES into the impressive hallway. Savar and Aaron are there to greet him. LIEUTENANT COMMANDER DEXTER REMMICK stands in the background, but the hall seems strangely empty... SAVAR Welcome home, Captain Picard. PICARD Thank you, sir. My first officer will be joining us shortly. SAVAR Yes, I'm sure he will. Picard thinks this an odd line. AARON You've met Commander Remmick, haven't you? STAR TREK: "Conspiracy" - REV. 3/9/88 - ACT FOUR 37. 67 CONTINUED: Picard nods toward Remmick... REMMICK (soft, friendly) Under less than ideal circumstances. It is nice to see you again, Captain. Savar and Aaron lead Picard down the hall, with Remmick a few strides behind. SAVAR I hope you have a healthy appetite. We've prepared a special meal in your honor. PICARD I'm honored. (pause) Tell me, why is it so quiet here? The last time I saw this corridor it was bustling with activity. REMMICK It often is. Tonight's a quiet night. SAVAR Yes, a quiet night. 68 CLOSE ON PICARD feeling that this is a very strange conversation. 69 BACK TO SHOT AARON Let's have some Andonian tea while we wait for your Riker. Then you can tell us what's brought you here. PICARD I see you keep up with our duty roster. AARON (cool smile) Of course, Captain. The Enterprise is very important to us. STAR TREK: "Conspiracy" - REV. 3/9/88 - ACT FOUR 38. 70 EXT. SPACE - EARTH SEEN FROM ORBIT (OPTICAL) the Enterprise slowly COMES INTO FRAME, crossing between us and the Earth as she continues to orbit. 71 INT. QUINN'S GUEST QUARTERS - QUINN is sitting on the sofa, blankly staring into his slightly opened briefcase. Riker ENTERS, catching him off guard... RIKER Ready for your tour, Admiral? Quinn quickly stands, but Riker has seen the briefcase... QUINN Quite ready, Commander. RIKER What's in the case? From where he stands, Riker can barely see a few delicate-looking tendrils coming out of its opening... He looks at the Admiral somewhat suspiciously... QUINN (thoughtful) Actually... I brought this for Doctor Crusher. But perhaps you'd like you to see it first? RIKER (slowly moving closer) What is it? QUINN A form of life. Discovered quite accidentally by a survey team on a distant uncharted planet. RIKER Why haven't we heard anything about that? QUINN Oh, you'll be hearing more about it shortly. But first there is much scientific study to be done. After all, this is a superior lifeform. STAR TREK: "Conspiracy" - REV. 3/8/88 - ACT FOUR 39. 71 CONTINUED: RIKER Superior? QUINN Totally. (voice grows hard) Now come, Riker. Take a good look. Riker stands where he is, uncertain of what to do. RIKER I think I'll summon our science officer -- QUINN It won't like your science officer. It likes you. (rises, grabs Riker's arm) Now look! Riker looks down at his arm and grimaces; Quinn is squeezing it with tremendous force. Riker grasps the old man's wrist and tries to pull it off him... he can't. QUINN (dark smile) Vitamins. They do wonders for the body. RIKER CRIES OUT -- it feels like Quinn is crushing his arm. Unable to break free, HE RAISES HIS OTHER ARM TO STRIKE the admiral. Riker's BLOW IS BLOCKED and QUINN responds by effortlessly THROWING HIM backwards toward the wall. The FIRST OFFICER hits it at breakneck speed and CRUMPLES TO THE FLOOR, severely dazed... QUINN (dry -- evil smile) Ahh, your life is so painful now. But soon you'll be one of us. Before Riker can clear his head, QUINN ATTACKS again -- rapping him across the chin WITH A KARATE KICK. Riker staggers to his feet -- Quinn swings from the heels with a sure knockout blow... RIKER DUCKS under it and puts all his weight behind a powerful PUNCH to THE ADMIRAL'S solar plexus. STAR TREK: "Conspiracy" - REV. 3/11/88 - ACT FOUR 40. 71 CONTINUED: (2) For a moment, Quinn seems affected, sucking in his stomach and gasping for air... But it quickly passes and he straightens and smiles at a disbelieving Riker, before DEALING HIM A vicious double fisted BACKHAND. Riker hits his communicator. RIKER (pained, weak) Riker to Security. Emergency -- QUINN'S final blow KNOCKS RIKER OUT before he can say another word... 72 INT. ENTERPRISE CORRIDOR - WORF AND GEORDI run down the corridor. 72A OMITTED 73 EXT. AERIAL VIEW OF STARFLEET HEADQUARTERS (OPTICAL) STAR TREK: "Conspiracy" - REV. 3/8/88 - ACT FOUR 41. 74 INT. RECEPTION ROOM OUTSIDE DINING ROOM - PICARD Aaron and Savar are all holding glasses filled with amber colored liquid. Remmick continues to quietly look on from a distance... PICARD I'd like to begin the discussion of why I'm here. AARON In time Captain, in time. First, a toast. Aaron and Savar raise their glasses... Finally, Picard does the same. AARON To the Horatio, gentlemen. SAVAR The Horatio. The captain warily clinks glasses with the others. They sip the liquid, but Picard simply lowers his glass... AARON (faintly sarcastic) What an awful tragedy. Such a terrible loss of life. PICARD It's interesting you mention the Horatio. That's one of the things I wanted to discuss. AARON (dry) Really? PICARD Has the cause of her destruction been ascertained? SAVAR Absolutely. (looking straight at Picard) Implosion, due to extreme negligence on the part of her captain. STAR TREK: "Conspiracy" - REV. 3/11/88 - ACT FOUR 42. 74 CONTINUED: Picard wants to cry out in defense of Keel, but he realizes that would be a foolish thing to do at the moment. Aaron gleefully senses his discomfort... AARON Drink up, Picard. I believe you'll find it an excellent aperitif. 75 INT. QUINN'S QUARTERS - QUINN (OPTICAL) is sitting calmly on the sofa with the unconscious Riker at his feet when the door OPENS. Worf and Geordi BOLT IN. QUINN It's good that you're here. He slipped and hit his head. GEORDI (into intercom) This is Lieutenant La Forge in Guest Quarter Sixteen. We have a possible medical emergency. QUINN Your Doctor Crusher is most capable; I'm sure he'll be all right. Now if you'll excuse me, my time here is limited... Quinn MOVES TOWARD THE DOOR, but Geordi blocks his path. Quinn looks to Worf as though he's about to question what is going on, then quickly flies into action, LEAPING TOWARD GEORDI. The blind man BACKPEDDLES, FIRING HIS PHASER directly into the old Admiral's chest. Quinn halts, temporarily. Then Geordi and Worf are stunned to see Quinn BRUSH OFF THE EFFECTS OF THE PHASER with a simple shake of his head. With amazing quickness, HE LIFTS GEORDI AND brutally THROWS HIM into the door. GEORDI GOES OUT the door and HITS THE FLOOR, unconscious. This leaves Quinn and Worf to face off over a gaggle of comatose bodies... QUINN (evil smile) Come on, Klingon. It's just you and me now... FADE OUT. END OF ACT FOUR STAR TREK: "Conspiracy" - 3/8/88 - ACT FIVE 43. ACT FIVE FADE IN: 76 INT. QUINN'S QUARTERS - WORF AND QUINN (OPTICAL) are about to fight it out. Quinn is savagely smug and barely breathing hard after mopping the floor with Geordi and Riker. Worf must get over the shock of seeing an old man with the strength of ten. The Klingon psyches himself up and CRIES OUT LIKE A WARRIOR as he makes a move on Quinn. WORF THROWS A PUNCH that would knock the head off Mike Tyson... It lands squarely on Quinn's chin, jerking his head to the side. Worf can't believe his eyes when QUINN'S HEAD SNAPS BACK INTO PLACE -- the Admiral is smiling, seemingly unaffected by the punch. QUINN Do Klingons fear death as much as humans? I could snap your neck in a second, but that wouldn't be as much fun. QUINN GRABS WORF'S STOMACH -- his hands digging deep into the flesh. WORF BELLOWS in pain as QUINN LIFTS HIM off the ground by his stomach muscles. The old man's strength is mind- boggling. Suddenly a PHASER BLAST HITS QUINN dead on. Mildly stunned but still standing, he lets go of Worf and turns to face his new adversary. 77 ANGLE ON BEVERLY standing in the doorway, phaser in hand. 78 ANGLE TO INCLUDE QUINN (OPTICAL) disregarding Worf and moving toward her. SHE FIRES AGAIN... Halted for an instant, HE MOVES FORWARD... SHE FIRES AGAIN... Though slowed, HE KEEPS COMING... SHE FIRES AGAIN... He stiffens, the phaser blasts are starting to take a toll -- he still moves forward, nearing her now. STAR TREK: "Conspiracy" - REV. 3/9/88 - ACT FIVE 44. 78 CONTINUED: Beverly fires again and again, DRIVING HIM TO HIS KNEES. WORF'S FIST FLIES INTO FRAME, catching the side of Quinn's head with a powerful smash. QUINN SLUMPS to the ground, incapacitated at last. Beverly and Worf are breathing hard, shellshocked by the battle. Quinn lies quivering at their feet -- his metabolism racing crazily even though he's unconscious. Geordi is coming around. WORF Are you all right? GEORDI (groaning) If I could see... I'd be seeing stars. Geordi sits up. Behind him, Beverly is kneeling over the unconscious Riker. Worf indicates the twitching admiral lying before them. The Klingon rubs his sore stomach and speaks with detectable awe... WORF Who... what is he? Beverly stares at "Quinn" before answering. BEVERLY Let's find out. 79 INT. SICKBAY - QUINN lies on a Sickbay bed. Riker can be seen lying unconscious on a bed in the background. Beverly stands over Quinn with Worf and Geordi beside her... BEVERLY (disturbed) Retinal scans are an exact match ... It really is Quinn! GEORDI How can that be? He picked me up like a rag doll. STAR TREK: "Conspiracy" - REV. 3/9/88 - ACT FIVE 45. 80 ANGLE FAVORING QUINN tossing his head back and forth in restless sleep. Beverly administers a hypo before he can reawaken. He calms down a bit, his head resting on its side. BEVERLY I'm going to run a complete internal scan. GEORDI Keep me posted, Doctor. I'll be on the bridge. Geordi EXITS. Beverly is transfixed by something she spots on the back of Quinn's neck... BEVERLY (to Worf) What is this? It's a small blue splinter-like thing protruding slightly from the base of the neck... Beverly leans down to get a closer look... She hesitantly reaches forward to touch it... and it moves! 81 INT. RECEPTION AREA, EARTH - PICARD and the two admirals are still waiting to enter the dining room. AARON (trace of a smile) What do you know of conspiracies, Captain? PICARD (surprised by the question) Not nearly enough I suppose. AARON But that's the charming thing about them, isn't it? When a machination is real, no one knows about it. And when it's suspected, it's almost never real. STAR TREK: "Conspiracy" - 3/8/88 - ACT FIVE 46. 81 CONTINUED: SAVAR Except of course, in the paranoid delusions of those who believe. The dining room doors swing OPEN and Remmick STEPS OUT and addresses them... REMMICK Sorry to interrupt. Dinner is served. AARON Wonderful! Bantering with the captain has given me quite an appetite. They start to move toward the dining room, but Picard lingers in the hallway... PICARD I'd like to contact my ship. To inform Commander Riker that we're ready to sit down. Aaron is about to object to this but Savar cuts him off, nodding graciously... SAVAR Of course, Captain. We'll wait for you at the table. Picard waits until the two admirals have gone inside, before activating his communicator. He speaks in hushed tones with one eye on the dining room door... PICARD Picard to Riker. 82 INT. SICKBAY (INTERCUT AS NEEDED) - RIKER is still dead to the world. Beverly answers for him... BEVERLY Doctor Crusher here, Captain. May I speak freely? PICARD (looking around) I suppose we have no choice. Where's Riker? STAR TREK: "Conspiracy" - REV. 3/9/88 - ACT FIVE 47. 82 CONTINUED: BEVERLY He was attacked by Quinn. Or what We thought was Quinn. PICARD Specify, Doctor. 83 ANGLE TO SEE QUINN (OPTICAL) resting fitfully on the bed -- and a large diagram of his body on the medical screen above it. WE CAN SEE A STRANGE INSECT-LIKE ANIMAL IS LIVING INSIDE HIM. It's tendrils have wrapped themselves around the stem of Quinn's brain. BEVERLY A parasitic being has invaded his body. It has complete control over all brain functions. It seems to breath through a small "gill" protruding through the back of Quinn's neck. Look for this, Captain. I believe it will be visible on anyone who has been compromised. PICARD Any idea what it is or where it comes from? BEVERLY Negative. I've never seen anything like it before. WE HEAR GEORDI'S INTERCOM VOICE summoning Worf to the bridge. GEORDI'S COM VOICE Lieutenant Worf. If the situation is under control, we could use you on the bridge. BEVERLY (looks to Worf) It's okay. He won't be waking up for a long time. Worf EXITS, leaving Beverly alone with the unconscious forms of Quinn and Riker. PICARD Continue, Doctor. STAR TREK: "Conspiracy" - REV. 3/9/88 - ACT FIVE 48. 83 CONTINUED: BEVERLY By the placement of the tendrils, the parasite appears to stimulate the vicim's adrenal glands which generate great strength and resistence to -- PICARD -- Spare me the medical details, Doctor. Just tell me if you can remove it. BEVERLY Not without killing the patient. Unseen by Beverly, Riker bolts upright in the bed behind her. Wild-eyed and seemingly disoriented, he slowly begins to rise... BEVERLY You must set your phaser on kill, Captain. Stun has little effect -- PICARD Doctor, one does not beam into Starfleet Headquarters armed. Just then, Remmick EXITS the dining room and walks by Picard... REMMICK (as he passes) Your food is getting cold, Captain. PICARD About to go to dinner now, Doctor. Have Riker join me when he's available. Picard out. Beverly is anxious and doesn't want to terminate the conversation. Riker is moving up behind her... She turns and GASPS just as he puts his hand on her shoulder -- STAR TREK: "Conspiracy" - REV. 3/8/88 - ACT FIVE 49. 84 INT. DINING ROOM - PICARD (OPTICAL) is seated across from Aaron and Savar at a polished black table. Three other settings are unattended -- in front of each is a silver bowl-like covering that conceals the entree. A ceremonial guard lines the wall beside the table... AARON Go ahead and start, Captain. We don't stand on ceremony around here. Picard removes the lid and is repulsed to find a plate full of squirming worm-like things -- moving around like living spaghetti. Picard quickly pushes his plate away and watches in abstract horror as Savar and Aaron greedily use their hands to down their portions of the same living meal. The Guard MOVES FORWARD and wolfs down a bowl of the stuff. AARON (continuing) Oh do eat up, Picard. Just raise your hand if you want seconds. The admirals and the guards laugh salaciously. The sight of a Vulcan giggling as he chews on live worms is too much for Picard to bear. Jumping to his feet, he turns and runs right into Number One. Riker roughly shoves the captain back into his seat. RIKER You're not going anywhere. Picard closes his eyes in dull shock as Aaron walks to Riker and reveals the blue splinter on the back of Riker's neck... RIKER (continuing; to Picard) You'll be one of us soon. Riker nods at the others as he sits down at the table. AARON (angry) You were meant for the doctor. STAR TREK: "Conspiracy" - 3/8/88 - ACT FIVE 50. 84 CONTINUED: RIKER It couldn't be helped. Riker walked in on us unexpectedly. SAVAR No matter. The doctor will soon be joining us. All in good time. A door OPENS and Tryla Scott WALKS IN and takes her place at the table. SAVAR Ah, Captain Scott. Good, the setting is now complete. It's a bitter blow to Picard when her evil smile lets him know that she's been one of them all along. She takes a strand of "live spaghetti" and delicately gulps it down. AARON (to Picard) You didn't really think we were in the dark about your intentions, did you? SAVAR Patience is one of our virtues, Captain. Instead of going after you, we allowed you to come to us. AARON More dramatic this way, don't you think? TRYLA Yes... one thing both races share is a love of theatre. And you've put on a fine show. PICARD (shellshocked) What exactly is your race? Where do you come from? SAVAR It's not important. Let's just say... we've come a long way to join you. STAR TREK: "Conspiracy" - REV. 3/8/88 - ACT FIVE 51. 84 CONTINUED: (2) TRYLA (grinning) It's a perfect match. We're the brains and you're the brawn. RIKER (cold) You'll understand soon, Picard. SAVAR Indeed. We've been moving slowly, cautiously, for many months now. Careful to cover our tracks. Careful not to arouse suspicion, until it's too late. RIKER (to Picard) And it is too late. For you, that is. AARON Well said, brother. Picard and Riker control the Enterprise. Which means we control the Enterprise. Dejected, Picard watches as Riker removes the lid and takes a big handful of living spaghetti. He tilts his head back and prepares to swallow it. SAVAR (smiling) Eat hearty, brother! Relish your new body! Just as the worms are about to touch his tongue, RIKER shocks everyone by PULLING A PHASER AND FIRING at the guard. HE quivers before DROPPING like a fly. Tryla fires at Riker and misses. Picard seizes the moment, grabbing the phaser from the unconscious Guard. Aaron pushes Picard to the ground and BOLTS FOR THE DOOR. Before Picard can pivot to pick him off, TRYLA SCOTT JUMPS UP AND takes aim on him. SHE FIRES, barely missing his head. RIKER CUTS HER DOWN before she can fire again. Scott quivers and drops. A PARASITE quickly FLEES her open mouth... STAR TREK: "Conspiracy" - REV. 3/8/88 - ACT FIVE 52. 84 CONTINUED: (3) Meanwhile, Savar has charged Riker and has him in a death grip around the throat. PICARD FIRES INTO THE VULCAN'S BACK... The VULCAN drops to his knees, finally releasing his grip. He falls over, dead. Still holding his throat, Riker reaches back and removes the counterfeit splinter from his neck. Suddenly, both he and Picard have the same thought... PICARD Aaron! 85 INT. GREAT HALLWAY - AARON (OPTICAL) is desperate, running straight toward us down the long hallway. Far behind, Picard and Riker come around a corner and take aim... RIKER (calling out) Hold it, Aaron! Aaron spins and FIRES -- Picard and Riker dive out of the way. The Admiral keeps running... he's almost at the end of the hall... RIKER AND PICARD FIRE, scoring two direct hits. AARON WINCES AND GOES DOWN. His momentum sends him sliding along the smooth floor. 86 ANGLE ON PICARD AND RIKER (OPTICAL) running up to the body. They get there just in time to see the PARASITE evacuating it. Before they can fire, it SCURRIES AROUND THE CORNER and out of sight. PICARD (to Riker) Come on! 87 INT. ANOTHER SECTION OF HALLWAY - PICARD AND RIKER cautiously turn the corner. In the distance, they see the CREATURE SLITHER UNDER A DOOR... Hurrying to the door, they give each other a long look, knowing that anything could be behind it. At last, Riker touches a wall panel and the door slides OPEN... STAR TREK: "Conspiracy" - 3/8/88 - ACT FIVE 53. 88 ANGLE INTO THE ROOM where Remmick is tapping on an unknown object similar to a typewriter. A HIGH-PITCHED BEEPING SOUND is emanating from it... Remmick looks up at Riker and Picard, his face a mask of calm innocence. REMMICK Can I help you, gentlemen? Picard and Riker aren't sure just what to make of this. Remmick seems so placid and unconcerned. REMMICK Is there any trouble? Perhaps if you'd tell me what it is -- PICARD -- Remmick! Picard is pointing to a PARASITE that is beginning to CLIMB UP REMMICK'S LEG. Riker raises his phaser, preparing to fire on it, but Picard blocks that with his forearm PICARD No, Will! 88A ANGLE FAVORING REMMICK (OPTICAL) looking on wide-eyed, as the Parasite climbs up his arm and onto his shoulder. Picard and Riker are momentarily paralyzed, unsure of what to do. Remmick looks from the creature to the two Officers with a stoic expression on his face. Then, in a strange almost lizard-like movement, he rolls his head to the side and opens his mouth. In an instant, the PARASITE SCAMPERS INTO HIS MOUTH and down his throat. Remmick addresses the stunned Picard and Riker as though nothing of consequence had happened... REMMICK (calm, sincere) You don't understand. As he speaks, his NECK BULGES as some of the creatures dart around inside it... REMMICK (voice distorted) We mean you no harm. We seek co-existence. STAR TREK: "Conspiracy" - REV. 3/14/88 - ACT FIVE 54. 88A CONTINUED: Remmick is slowly starting to rise... Picard and Riker look at each other as if to say "freak this!" They OPEN FIRE, DRIVING REMMICK BACK down into his chair. The upper half of REMMICK'S BODY BEGINS TO DISSIPATE under the phaser fire... A bizarre form is taking its place. Shaped vaguely like a man, IT LOOKS LIKE A liquidy BUBBLE WITH HUNDREDS OF PARASITES swarming around inside it. The BUBBLE BEGINS TO COLLAPSE down into what used to be Remmick's lower abdomen. Another SHAPE IS REVEALED as the gooey mass collapses. It is dull yellow -- looking LIKE A CROSS BETWEEN A PARASITE AND A HUMAN FETUS. It looks at Picard and Riker and CRIES OUT WITH AN ANGRY ROAR. Picard and Riker concentrate on its head and SCORE A DIRECT HIT between the eyes... The FETUS-CREATURE EXPLODES AND THE PARASITES DISSIPATE into nothingness... Picard and Riker CEASE FIRING. All that's left before them is a smoldering mass -- a pair of legs and part of a spine that used to be Dexter Remmick... 89 EXT. SPACE - ENTERPRISE (OPTICAL) orbiting Earth. PICARD (V.O.) Captain's log, stardate 41780.2. Admiral Quinn is expected to make a full recovery... 90 INT. SICKBAY - QUINN is sitting up in bed, being fed liquid by Beverly. He seems weak but in general okay as he flashes her a small smile. PICARD (V.O.) (continuing) There is no trace of the parasite which took control of him. We'll never know how many of these life-forms infiltrated Starfleet, but it seems they could not survive without the "mother creature" which had taken over Commander Remmick... STAR TREK: "Conspiracy" - REV. 3/9/88 - ACT FIVE 55. 91 INT. MAIN BRIDGE - WIDE ANGLE PICARD (V.O.) (continuing) ... Still, the haunting question remains... Who were these beings... and will we ever have to face them again? RIKER (to Picard) It was Doctor Crusher's idea to simulate the blue splinter. We had to make sure it would fool everyone, including you. PICARD That it did, Number One. Rest assured. DATA I have attempted to trace the message Remmick was sending. I believe it was aimed at an unexplored quadrant of our galaxy. GEORDI Any idea what the message was, Data? Data seems reluctant to answer. DATA Well... I believe it was a beacon. PICARD (half-whisper) A beacon? DATA Yes, Captain. A homing beacon... sent from Earth. 92 EXT. ENTERPRISE - DEEP SPACE (OPTICAL) The great ship roars past us... PAN away from her and toward the endless black void of deep space... WE HEAR a sound... AN INCREDIBLY HIGH-PITCHED BEEPING SOUND that repeats its intricate pattern over and over. A sound waiting for a reply... FADE OUT. END OF ACT FIVE THE END STAR TREK: THE NEXT GENERATION "The Neutral Zone" #40271-126 Written by Maurice Hurley Directed by James Conway THE WRITING CREDITS MAY NOT BE FINAL AND SHOULD NOT BE USED FOR PUBLICITY OR ADVERTISING PURPOSES WITHOUT FIRST CHECKING WITH THE TELEVISION LEGAL DEPARTMENT. Copyright 1988 Paramount Pictures Corporation. All Rights Reserved. This script is not for publication or reproduction. No one is authorized to dispose of same. If lost or destroyed, please notify the Script Department. 2ND REV. FINAL DRAFT MARCH 17, 1988 STAR TREK: "The Neutral Zone" - REV. 3/18/88 - CAST STAR TREK: THE NEXT GENERATION "The Neutral Zone" CAST PICARD THREE HUMANS RIKER CLARE RAYMOND BEVERLY RALPH OFFENHOUSE DATA SONNY CLEMONDS TROI WORF ROMULANS GEORDI COMMANDER TEBOK WESLEY (pronounced TAY-bok) SUB-COMMANDER THEI Non-Speaking (pronounced TIE) SECURITY GUARD NURSE WRIGHT Voice-Over COMPUTER STAR TREK: "The Neutral Zone" - REV. 3/18/88 - SETS STAR TREK: THE NEXT GENERATION "The Neutral Zone" SETS INTERIORS EXTERIORS USS ENTERPRISE USS ENTERPRISE MAIN BRIDGE CONFERENCE ROOM DERELICT (MODULE) SICKBAY GUEST LOUNGE ROMULAN CRUISER CLARE'S QUARTERS SONNY'S QUARTERS CAPTAIN'S READY ROOM CORRIDOR OBSERVATION LOUNGE DERELICT CONTROL AREA SECOND ROOM ROMULAN CRUISER 11:[5,#b],19:[1,#b] STAR TREK: "The Neutral Zone" - 3/17/88 - TEASER 1. STAR TREK: THE NEXT GENERATION "The Neutral Zone" TEASER FADE IN: 1 OMITTED 2 EXT. SPACE - THE ENTERPRISE (OPTICAL) The great ship is motionless as it awaits the return of its captain. A short distance off, and APPEARING very small, is another vehicle - also drifting. RIKER (V.O.) First officer's log, stardate 41986.0. The captain has left the ship for a conference and we are awaiting his return. It is unusual for us to be motionless, and a unique experience for everyone concerned. 3 INT. MAIN BRIDGE GEORDI is at Conn - WORF at Tactical - DATA at Science One, RIKER is in the Command position. Troi is off the bridge in her office. Everyone is looking at the viewscreen. DATA This is quite intriguing. It is transmitting a carrier signal on a frequency which has not been used for centuries. RIKER Is there a message? DATA None. Just the carrier, possibly intended for encoded computer or telemetry information. WORF I have never seen a space vehicle like it. STAR TREK: "The Neutral Zone" - 3/17/88 - TEASER 2. 3 CONTINUED: DATA Strictly speaking, it is not a "space vehicle." It appears to be a satellite, similar in its rudimentary design to those which orbited Earth in the late twentieth and early twenty-first centuries. RIKER Three hundred years ago. (mostly as a joke) Then there probably aren't any life signs? DATA None. Data continues studying the readout. DATA (continuing) The power is solar... quite primitive. There is however minimum life support. GEORDI I wonder how it got out here. If it was in orbit around Earth, even at maximum impulse -- and there's no way it could travel any faster, it would have taken a dozen centuries to get here. WORF At its present speed and heading, the vehicle will eventually enter the Kazis Binary system and will certainly be destroyed. Worf turns to face Riker. WORF (continuing) Sir, I could attach a tractor beam and adjust its heading. RIKER I think not, Mister Worf. It's just a piece of space debris. If we weren't sitting here waiting for the captain, we wouldn't have even noticed it. Leave it be. Let nature take its course. How long until Captain Picard returns? STAR TREK: "The Neutral Zone" - REV. 3/18/88 - TEASER 3. 3 CONTINUED: (2) WORF The last communication indicated it would be several hours. DATA Commander, request permission to investigate this vehicle. RIKER Why, Data? It's just a derelict. DATA It is a piece of history. The opportunity to examine such an ancient vehicle does not come around very often, and as you pointed out, we do have the time. RIKER All right, Data. But be ready to beam back before the captain returns. DATA Thank you, sir. RIKER Lieutenant Worf -- go with him. WORF Aye, sir. The two EXIT the bridge. 4 thru OMITTED 6 A7 EXT. SPACE - A MODULE (OPTICAL) drifts. 7 INT. DERELICT - SMALL CONTROL AREA (OPTICAL) as they BEAM IN. They are in a small control area. The equipment we see is late twentieth century in design. Worf is tense -- ready for the unexpected. Data scans the area with his tricorder. STAR TREK: "The Neutral Zone" - REV. 3/18/88 - TEASER 4. 7 CONTINUED: DATA Minimal oxygen atmosphere. (indicates) An ancient solar generator, still operating. WORF Computer -- status report. Nothing happens. WORF (continuing) Computer... Data interrupts. DATA In the late twentieth century, computers were not voice activated, Worf. Data examines the keyboard. DATA (continuing) Notice the readouts -- dials, needle machines, gauges. Remarkable what they used three centuries ago. The on-board computers have ceased functioning. I may be able to download this old style disk drive back to the Enterprise. 8 WORF APPROACHES the door, clearly expecting it to slide open. He waves a hand in front of it. WORF It must be sealed -- probably with age. I will blast it open. DATA Not necessary. He reaches down and turns a handle, physically slides the door OPEN. 9 INT. DERELICT - THE SECOND ROOM They move forward. STAR TREK: "The Neutral Zone" - REV. 3/18/88 - TEASER 5. 10 INT. ENTERPRISE - MAIN BRIDGE (INTERCUT AS NEEDED) Riker is sitting at the Command Chair. RIKER Data, this is Riker. What have you found? DATA Very little so far. GEORDI I have picked up the captain's shuttle. RIKER E.T.A.? GEORDI Twelve minutes, sir. RIKER Alert Main Shuttle Bay. GEORDI Aye, sir. 11 INT. DERELICT - THE SECOND ROOM As Worf and Data ENTER the other compartment they see a series of crypts, lining both sides of the room. Each glass-covered and coffin-like in design, with a computerized panel above it. The panel both monitors and controls the crypt. 12 CRYPT As Data clears away the frost TO REVEAL a shriveled human form. It's all BLACKENED AND HIDEOUS. Data REACTS. DATA The seal was broken and the environment has been corrupted. Data moves to the next crypt. Beside him, Worf wipes the frost from a third crypt. He has found another shriveled form. WORF Here's another. STAR TREK: "The Neutral Zone" - 3/17/88 - TEASER 6. 12 CONTINUED: Data wipes away the frost from the crypt by him. DATA This one is empty. He easily lifts the cover. DATA (continuing) It has been forced open and the occupant removed. In the b.g. Worf is wiping the frost from another crypt. WORF Commander. Look at this. Data steps over. 12A ANOTHER ANGLE Through the hole which Worf has wiped in the frost, WE CAN SEE a human -- a WOMAN. About thirty-five, attractive and unconscious. OFF Worf and Data's REACTIONS, WE: FADE OUT. END OF TEASER STAR TREK: "... Neutral... " - REV. 3/21/88 - ACT ONE 7. ACT ONE FADE IN: 12B INT. DERELICT - THE SECOND ROOM Worf and Data are still beside the frozen woman. WORF Has she been frozen for an extended journey? DATA If that were the purpose, there would be evidence of a more sophisticated monitoring system. This container is designed solely for refrigeration. WORF What is the destination? DATA I do not believe they were going anywhere. This vehicle should still be in Earth orbit. WORF There is no way it could break orbit and travel this distance on its own power. Not in three hundred years -- not in three thousand. Some intelligent lifeform must have brought it to this section of the galaxy. DATA (indicating the crypts with the shriveled forms) These crypts were opened. (indicating the empty crypts) The occupants in those were taken. WORF Why take some of them, destroy others, and leave her apparently untouched? DATA Perhaps they learned all they could from the others. We may never know. STAR TREK: "... Neutral... " - REV. 3/21/88 - ACT ONE 8. 12B CONTINUED: Data moves down the line of crypts, wipes another To REVEAL the perfectly preserved face of a forty-seven-year-old MALE. OFF Data's REACTION: 13 OMITTED 14 INT. ENTERPRISE - MAIN BRIDGE Data and Worf have for the moment been forgotten. GEORDI The captain's shuttle is approaching Main Shuttle Bay. PICARD'S COM VOICE Enterprise, this is the captain. Number One, I want to get underway as soon as the shuttle is secure. RIKER Aye, sir. We will make all preparations. (to the Away Team) Commander Data, return to the Enterprise -- immediately. DATA'S COM VOICE We have run into an unusual situation here. There are people on-board. Frozen. RIKER Frozen. How many? 15 INT. DERELICT - THE SECOND ROOM (INTERCUT AS NEEDED) Data and Worf in the middle of the room. DATA Three. What should I do? The vehicle has suffered severe damage. Most of the systems have failed. RIKER Are you recommending they be transferred to the Enterprise? STAR TREK: "The Neutral Zone" - 3/17/88 - ACT ONE 9. 15 CONTINUED: DATA I do not think we should leave them here. With your permission, sir, we will be returning with three containers. RIKER Whatever you do, do it quickly. 16 EXT. SPACE - THE ENTERPRISE (OPTICAL) traveling at impulse speed. 17 INT. MAIN BRIDGE Captain Picard STRIDES ONTO the bridge. PICARD Number One, I want a meeting on the Observation Deck. Mister La Forge, set course zero-five-eight, mark nine-seven-three. GEORDI Aye -- laying in the course now. (pause) Captain, those coordinates will take us to the Neutral Zone. REACTIONS from the others to the destination. PICARD That's correct Mister La Forge, warp factor eight. GEORDI Warp eight. PICARD Engage. Mister La Forge, you have the bridge. He leads them OFF the bridge. 18 EXT. SPACE - THE ENTERPRISE (OPTICAL) as it accelerates to warp speed. STAR TREK: "The Neutral Zone" - 3/17/88 - ACT ONE 10. 19 INT. CONFERENCE ROOM The regulars are at their positions, except Beverly. PICARD Two Federation outposts in Sector three-zero have been destroyed. There has been no communication with any Federation starbases in Sector three-one since stardate 41903.2. WORF Romulans. PICARD That is the assumption. RIKER There's been no direct contact with the Romulans since the Tomed Incident. PICARD The question is: Why here? Why now? What's their objective, if indeed they have one? For half a century there's barely a whisper about them and now for no apparent reason they seem to be back with a roar. Why? RIKER Almost everything we know about them is based on rumor and conjecture. PICARD The strategic decision is to send one ship. RIKER The Enterprise. PICARD Yes. WORF There is a risk. We could get out there and find ourselves greatly over-matched. PICARD True enough -- it is a gamble. STAR TREK: "... Neutral... " - REV. 3/18/88 - ACT ONE 11. 19 CONTINUED: RIKER This first encounter... coming so suddenly after all this time. There's a very good chance it's a setup. DATA Perhaps the Romulans are probing. They want to see how we react. WORF Captain, we should expect hostilities. PICARD Prepare as always. If force is needed we will use it, but that will mean we have failed. Our goal here is to establish some kind of relations with the Romulans -- failing that -- to convince them of our resolve and to do this without resorting to force. Right now, the general feeling is that they are seeking a confrontation. They may want to test themselves in battle against a Federation starship to gauge how much we have advanced. Personally, I think it is possible they have different motives altogether based on needs which we have not identified. If that's the case... I must know it. (to Troi) Counselor -- I will need a complete profile on them. TROI There is limited information, but I will prepare something. PICARD Data. Extrapolate for me the logical progression of their technical advancement; specifically, but not restricted to -- weapons. DATA Aye, sir. STAR TREK: "The Neutral Zone" - 3/17/88 - ACT ONE 12. 19 CONTINUED: (2) PICARD (to everybody) I want this thought through completely. Anticipate, as much as you can, all the possible permutations. He looks around the room. PICARD (continuing) Computer, how long before we arrive at the Neutral Zone? COMPUTER VOICE Nineteen hours, twenty-eight minutes. PICARD We will reassemble in six hours. Let's be smart. No surprises. I would much rather outthink them, than outfight them. Questions? There are none. The meeting breaks up. 20 INT. MAIN BRIDGE As Picard, Riker and the others COME ON to the bridge. Geordi is in the Command seat. GEORDI (as he gets up) Captain. (then:) Doctor Crusher said she would like to talk with you, when you finished your meeting. PICARD Thank you. (on Com) Doctor Crusher, this is the captain. BEVERLY'S COM VOICE Oh, good. Captain, could you possibly join me in Sickbay? Picard hesitates. STAR TREK: "... Neutral... " - REV. 3/23/88 - ACT ONE 13. 20 CONTINUED: BEVERLY'S COM VOICE (continuing) I would not ask you if it wasn't important. PICARD I will be right there. (to Riker) Take the Conn, Number One. I won't be long. Picard EXITS THE SHOT as Riker takes his position. 21 INT. SICKBAY Picard ENTERS. PICARD What is it, Doctor? BEVERLY It's the people from the capsule. PICARD Capsule? People? What people? BEVERLY The people Data beamed over. PICARD I wasn't aware he had. On the medical tables behind her are THREE HUMANS covered with sheets. BEVERLY Well, he did and they were frozen. I thawed them. PICARD You what? BEVERLY I didn't know what else to do. The crypts in which they had been frozen were literally falling apart. It was either that... or... PICARD What's their condition? STAR TREK: "... Neutral... " - REV. 3/22/88 - ACT ONE 14. 21 CONTINUED: BEVERLY Right now they are all sleeping. Each of them needed minor medical attention... minor "now", but "then" their conditions were obviously terminal. One had a heart problem, another had an advanced case of emphysema and extensive liver damage. But the most surprising thing, is that each of them had been frozen after they died. PICARD After they died? BEVERLY Exactly. Cryonics. It was a kind of fad in the late twentieth century. People feared dying. It terrified them. At the moment of death, they would be frozen, so that later... some time in the future, when presumably medical science had a cure for whatever killed them, they would be thawed back to life, healed and sent on about their business. PICARD Well, for this group, apparently it worked. Picard STEPS OVER to the com panel. PICARD (continuing) Lieutenant Commander Data, please report to Sickbay -- immediately. 22 INT. MAIN BRIDGE Data is a Science Station Two. He looks up. DATA Permission to leave the bridge. RIKER Granted. Data walks toward the turbolift. STAR TREK: "The Neutral Zone" - 3/17/88 - ACT ONE 15. 23 INT. SICKBAY ON Picard. PICARD I am never critical of any member of my staff being curious, but... the timing is just so... DATA I could not leave them there, Captain. The condition of the vehicle was deteriorating. PICARD But, Data -- they were already dead. I mean... what more could have happened to them? DATA I see your point, Captain, but at the time... Picard nods. PICARD You're right -- under the circumstances I would have done exactly the same. Picard turns to Beverly. BEVERLY When they arrived... what was I supposed to do? Not help them? Again Picard has no answer. BEVERLY (continuing) My question is: What do we do with them now? PICARD What are the options? DATA We cannot go back and return them to their ship. BEVERLY We can't refreeze them. STAR TREK: "... Neutral... " - REV. 3/21/88 - ACT ONE 16. 23 CONTINUED: PICARD They are alive now, so we have to treat them as living human beings. BEVERLY Alive and well, just waiting to be awakened. Picard is perplexed. BEVERLY (continuing) I have them sedated but they should be up and about as soon as possible. Picard takes a deep breath. PICARD Well... He looks around for a moment. PICARD (continuing) Then, there really is no choice. BEVERLY None that I can see. PICARD Before you wake them, I want Security here. (touching com) Mister Worf, report to Sickbay. 24 BEVERLY She goes to the first one in the line and touches the hypospray to her neck. STAR TREK: "The Neutral Zone" - 3/17/88 - ACT ONE 17. 25 WOMAN Slowly she wakes up. Looks around. At Sickbay. At the equipment, then at Beverly and Picard. She swallows. Worf ENTERS Sickbay. The woman takes one look at them and her head falls back on the table. Out "cold" again. PICARD ... Welcome to the twenty-fourth century. FADE OUT. END OF ACT ONE STAR TREK: "... Neutral... " - REV. 3/18/88 - ACT TWO 18. ACT TWO FADE IN: 26 EXT. SPACE - THE ENTERPRISE (OPTICAL) moving at warp speed. 27 INT. SICKBAY It is as we left it. Picard, Data and Worf watch as Beverly wakes them all up, we get to "meet" each of the guests. They are still covered only in sheets. DATA I was able to retrieve some information from the ancient disk I removed from the module's computer. Based on that... 28 NUMBER ONE She re-awakens the woman. DATA Her name is Clare Raymond, age thirty-five; occupation, homemaker... must be some kind of construction work. BEVERLY She died of an embolism. It probably happened very suddenly, otherwise her physical condition was excellent. CLARE RAYMOND is handsome, not pretty. A solid, no-nonsense person. This time she stays awake, as she takes in the room, everything and everyone in it. They move to: 29 NUMBER TWO As the nurse (Nurse Wright) awakens him: DATA His name is Ralph Offenhouse, age sixty-three; occupation, financier. STAR TREK: "... Neutral... " - REV. 3/18/88 - ACT TWO 19. 29 CONTINUED: BEVERLY Advanced cardiomyopathy, inoperable at the time, but easily correctable now. He must have known for some time his condition was terminal. RALPH OFFENHOUSE was a power broker on both coasts who came up hard -- is used to being absolutely in charge. He too, is disoriented -- confused -- unsure. They MOVE to the last: 30 NUMBER THREE DATA Much of his file could not be retrieved. His name is L. Q. "Sonny" Clemonds. Apparently his occupation had something to do with music. BEVERLY There was marked deterioration of every system in his body. Probably due to massive chemical abuse. Unbelievable. L. Q. "SONNY" CLEMONDS has a lot of miles on his forty-seven years. He's passed his time with booze and drugs, and covered up the wear and tear with cosmetic surgery. His attention span is about twenty-eight seconds. PICARD That sounds like someone who hated life -- yet he had himself frozen so presumably he could go through it all again. BEVERLY Fear. Too afraid to live... too scared to die. PICARD Doctor, this seems to be a situation more suited to your talents. I will leave it in your hands. With a nod to Data to join him: PICARD (continuing) I'll be on the bridge. STAR TREK: "... Neutral... " - REV. 3/21/88 - ACT TWO 20. 30 CONTINUED: He is satisfied that they do not represent a clear and present danger to the Enterprise. Picard and Data EXIT. A31 EXT. SPACE - THE ENTERPRISE a flyby. 31 INT. SICKBAY The three humans are finishing dressing. BEVERLY I know you have a lot of questions, but I would like you to wait. You are feeling a certain amount of disorientation. In a little while it should pass; then we can fully discuss what has happened. Nurse Wright will furnish you with anything you need. RALPH Not so fast. Is this part of the service or is it extra? BEVERLY I think it would be best if... RALPH I demand to know the cost of anything you do before the procedure is approved. BEVERLY I have no idea what you're talking about. (then, mostly for the others) Just take it slowly. Everything is fine. Worf, would you show them to the guest quarters. WORF This way. 32 INT. MAIN BRIDGE Picard and Data ENTER and CROSS to the Command Position. STAR TREK: "... Neutral... " - REV. 3/18/88 - ACT TWO 21. 32 CONTINUED: PICARD (to Riker) Number One, kindly take charge of our guests until we have time to decide what we are going to do with them. RIKER Aye, sir. PICARD ... and keep them out of my way. Riker rises to leave. DATA (requesting to join Riker) Sir? Picard nods as Data EXITS with Riker. 33 INT. GUEST LOUNGE (OPTICAL) They are all sitting -- unsure of themselves. RIKER I know this is all very confusing to you so I'll attempt to explain. First -- you are on the starship -- USS Enterprise. RALPH American? RIKER No -- we are a vessel of the United Federation of Planets. Earth is a member. RALPH What year is this? DATA By your calendar... two thousand three hundred sixty-four. STAR TREK: "The Neutral Zone" - 3/17/88 - ACT TWO 22. 33 CONTINUED: RALPH (very excited) What? (then, holding back) My heart? Is it... BEVERLY It's perfectly fine. In fact, you are all now in excellent health. RALPH I made it... It worked. I never believed this was... SONNY (pointing to Data) What's that? RIKER An android. SONNY You mean a robot? DATA Actually there is a distinct difference between a robot and an android. CLARE And him? The one I saw before with the... head. Riker is confused. BEVERLY She means Worf. RIKER Oh, he's a Klingon, and that requires a little more explanation. SONNY Guys... listen. I paid some idiot a lot of money to freeze me when I died. I need to hear the words... Am I alive? RIKER Oh, yes... absolutely. STAR TREK: "... Neutral... " - REV. 3/18/88 - ACT TWO 23. 33 CONTINUED: (2) SONNY And the liver that was about to explode in my face. BEVERLY Perfectly sound. SONNY Great... CLARE (who has remained confused through it all) Excuse me. Would someone tell me what's going on? BEVERLY Well... About three hundred and seventy years ago you died of a massive embolism. CLARE I don't remember anything about it. BEVERLY You and the others were frozen. SONNY Cryonics -- you know... freeze you now... heal you later. CLARE I've heard about it; I just never paid it much mind. How did we get here? DATA Why were you in a module? SONNY The whacko who sold me this scam said that by putting us in orbit there would be no chance of brown out. STAR TREK: "The Neutral Zone" - 3/17/88 - ACT TWO 24. 33 CONTINUED: (3) RALPH Several cryonics companies had fallen into disrepute because of power failures which adversely affected their refrigeration system. Their stocks were severely depressed. SONNY The whole deal was a long shot... but I figured... what the hell, might as well give them the dough instead of leaving it to my ex-wives. (to Data) But you know, son, I figured it was just so much hooey. DATA Hooey? Accessing. (pause) Ah, as in malarkey... jive... bull... hogwash... an intentional fabrication. SONNY There you go, now you got it. RIKER (to Clare) If you didn't contract for this, who did? CLARE It must have been Donald -- my husband. If it was new and foolish, he'd have popped for it. Well, I'll say this. It's the first thing he ever bought into that worked. RALPH I, for one, never had a doubt. My stock in this company must have split a dozen times by now. DATA Actually the process of cryonics was never more than a fad, and did not continue much beyond the mid-twenty-first century. STAR TREK: "... Neutral... " - REV. 3/18/88 - ACT TWO 25. 33 CONTINUED: (4) RALPH I need to make a phone call as soon as possible. RIKER A phone call? RALPH I have provided for myself. I have a substantial portfolio. It's critical I check on it. Let the bank know that I am alive and well. RIKER That's ah... going to be a little difficult right at the moment. RALPH Do you at least have a copy of The Wall Street Journal? RIKER I think we should take the doctor's advice and go slowly. Get adjusted to your new... ah... whatever, and then we'll talk to the captain. 33A INT. MAIN BRIDGE Troi takes her seat beside Picard. TROI As you know, there is very little available on the Romulans PICARD Anything will help. STAR TREK: "... Neutral... " - REV. 3/24/88 - ACT TWO 26. 33A CONTINUED: TROI They seem to be creatures of extremes. One moment violent beyond description, the next -- tender. They're related to the Vulcans but as each developed, their differences grew wider. They are intensely curious. Their belief in their own superiority is beyond arrogance. For some reason they have exhibited a fascination with humans and that fascination, more than anything else, has kept the peace. One other thing, they will not initiate. They will wait for you to commit yourself. PICARD (to himself) Counterpunches... (to Troi) Thank you, Counselor. This is quite helpful. OFF Picard's pensiveness: 33B INT. GUEST LOUNGE Sonny, feeling more at ease by the moment, rises, stretches muscles unused for centuries. SONNY I don't know about you all... but me -- I'm going to find the bar. After all of this -- I need me a drink. RIKER There is nothing of that nature on board the Enterprise. SONNY No bars?! Don't tell me that, son. Well, where's the restaurant? I'm so hungry. RIKER We have food stations. (he indicates the computer) Simply tell the computer what you want and it will be provided. STAR TREK: "... Neutral... " - REV. 3/21/88 - ACT TWO 27. 33B CONTINUED: SONNY Where do you eat it? RIKER Why... here... or anywhere. We're not that structured. Sonny walks over to the computer. SONNY Now what? DATA Talk. SONNY I'd like me a thick Kansas City steak - country fried potatoes -- a mess of greens -- and... Oh, hell... forget all of that. Let me have a martini - -straight up... two olives. (he winks at Data) ... for the vitamins. The drink is provided. He takes a sip and rears back surprised. DATA Is there something wrong? SONNY Wrong? Only that your computer here fixed just about the best martini I have ever had. (with a nod to Data) I just might get to like this place. Let's see if the Braves are on. How do you turn on this here teevee? STAR TREK: "... Neutral... " - REV. 3/22/88 - ACT TWO 28. 33B CONTINUED: (2) RIKER Teevee? SONNY Yeah, boob-tube... you know. I'd like to find out how the Braves are doin' after all this time. Probably still finding ways to lose. DATA (to Riker) Oh -- I think he means television, sir. SONNY Or maybe catch up on the soaps. DATA (to Sonny) That particular form of entertainment did not last much beyond the year Two Thousand Forty. SONNY So, what do you guys do? I mean, you don't drink -- no teevee -- kind of boring, isn't it? Data is at a loss of words PICARD'S COM VOICE Number One. Riker steps over to the com panel. RIKER Riker here. PICARD Would you and Mister Data report to the bridge? RIKER On the way. RALPH With whom were you speaking? RIKER The captain. RALPH Ah... good. Tell him I would like to see him as soon as it's convenient. STAR TREK: "... Neutral... " - REV. 3/21/88 - ACT TWO 29. 33B CONTINUED: (3) CLARE What is going to happen to us? Do we stay here with you? Do we go back to Earth? Riker does not have an immediate answer. RIKER That will be up to the captain. RALPH Well, get him in here. I have to phone Geneva right away about my accounts. The interest alone could be enough to buy even this ship. SONNY The Yankee's right. Let's get the big boy in here. RIKER (smiles) I'll pass on your request. Now, if you'll excuse us. SONNY Duty calls -- hey, I understand... (then, to Data) ... come back later -- you and me can find us a couple of low-mileage pit woffies, and help them build a memory. Riker and Data EXIT. 34 INT. CORRIDOR as they walk away. DATA What is to be done with them? RIKER I don't know. DATA Commander. What is a "low-mileage-pit-woffie"? RIKER This time you have me, Data. I haven't a clue. STAR TREK: "The Neutral Zone" - 3/17/88 - ACT TWO 30. 34 CONTINUED: DATA These are not like any other humans I have ever encountered. I find them fascinating. RIKER From what I have already seen of our "guests", there is very little to redeem them. In fact, it makes me wonder, how our species ever survived the twenty-first century. OFF Data's REACTION: FADE OUT. END OF ACT TWO STAR TREK: "... Neutral... " - REV. 3/18/88 - ACT THREE 31. ACT THREE FADE IN: 35 INT. CAPTAIN'S READY ROOM The staff meeting is reassembled. PICARD Report. WORF We are six hours from the Neutral Zone. I have been unable to establish communications with any Federation colony or station in this vicinity. PICARD How many outposts are there in this sector? WORF Nine. RIKER I think we should go on the presumption that they've all been destroyed. GEORDI By the Romulans? RIKER It fits their historical pattern. Picard is very thoughtful. DATA Since there has been no contact with the Romulans for fifty-three years, seven months, eighteen days, we must consider that the information we do have, is out of date. STAR TREK: "... Neutral... " - REV. 3/22/88 - ACT THREE 32. 35 CONTINUED: RIKER The positive side of that is their information about us is also out of date. Captain, I believe that lack of information is what this is all about. PICARD Continue, Number One. RIKER In my opinion, the Romulans want a confrontation... specifically against us. PICARD The Enterprise? RIKER Not by name; but yes, against us. They know the Federation will send their best -- this will be a perfect chance for them to learn firsthand, how much we have advanced in both technology, and technique. PICARD And your recommendation. RIKER I don't know if I have a specific recommendation. Perhaps we should consider taking the initiative. WORF I agree with Commander Riker. We may only have one opportunity; we should seize it. PICARD Data. DATA That strategy is built on a single premise. The hostile intent of the Romulans. If the premise is sound, so is the proposal. GEORDI If their intention isn't hostile, what is it? RALPH'S COM VOICE Captain Picard? STAR TREK: "The Neutral Zone" - 3/17/88 - ACT THREE 33. 35 CONTINUED: (2) Surprised at the interruption. PICARD This is the captain, to whom am I speaking? RALPH'S COM VOICE Ralph Offenhouse. Captain, I need to talk to you. PICARD What's going on here, Number One? Did you give him permission to contact me? RIKER No, sir. He must have seen me use the com panel. Picard nods his understanding. PICARD Listen, Mister Offenhouse. We are in a very important conference right now and... RALPH'S COM VOICE I am sick and tired of being put off by you and your staff. This is the worst run ship I have ever been on. You could take some lessons from the Q-E Two. Now that's an efficient operation. Picard mutes the intercom. PICARD Data -- identify -- what's the Q-E-Two? DATA It was a passenger liner which mostly traveled Earth's Atlantic Ocean during the late twentieth and early twenty-first centuries. PICARD He's comparing the Enterprise to a cruise ship. RALPH'S COM VOICE I demand you see me. Picard is nonplussed. STAR TREK: "The Neutral Zone" - 3/17/88 - ACT THREE 34. 36 INT. GUEST LOUNGE Ralph by the com panel, still going on. The other two, Clare and Sonny are off to one side, watching. Sonny is slightly amused -- Clare still appears to be disoriented. RALPH ... I think I have been very, very patient, especially under the circumstances and considering what I paid for this procedure, but frankly enough is enough. I demand a phone, or a radio whatever you have. I must contact my... The doors OPEN and Picard STRIDES IN. RALPH (continuing; off balance for a beat) ...lawyers. PICARD I am Captain Picard. Ralph composes himself quickly. RALPH Excellent. He steps forward with his hand out. RALPH (continuing) Now, we'll be able to get some things straight. PICARD Indeed we will. Those com panels are for official ship business. RALPH If they are so important, why don't they need an "executive key"? PICARD Aboard a starship, that is not necessary. We are all capable of exercising self-control. You will refrain from using them. STAR TREK: "... Neutral... " - REV. 3/24/88 - ACT THREE 35. 36 CONTINUED: RALPH Now just a minute. PICARD We are involved in a very serious and potentially dangerous situation. RALPH I'm sure that whatever it is seems very important to you. My situation is far more critical. PICARD I do not think you are fully aware of your situation, or the time which has passed. RALPH Believe me, I'm fully cognizant of where I am, and when. It is simply that I have more to protect than a man in your position could possibly imagine. No offense, but a military career has never been considered upwardly mobile. I must contact my lawyer. PICARD Your lawyer has been dead for centuries. RALPH Yes, of course I know that, but he was a full partner with a very important firm. Rest assured the firm is still operating. PICARD That's what this is all about... A lot has changed in three hundred years. People are no longer obsessed with the accumulation of "things". We have eliminated hunger, want, the need for possessions. We have grown out of our infancy. RALPH You've got it wrong. It's never been about "possessions" - it's about power. STAR TREK: "The Neutral Zone" - 3/17/88 - ACT THREE 36. 36 CONTINUED: (2) PICARD Power to do what? RALPH To control your life, your destiny. PICARD That kind of control is an illusion. RALPH Really -- I'm here aren't I? I should be dead and I'm not. That's what money did for me. That's the kind of power I'm talking about. Off to the side, Clare begins softly weeping. PICARD (turning to her) What is it? CLARE I don't know. It just started and I can't stop. I keep thinking about my boys. He steps over to the com panel. PICARD Counselor Troi, report to the guest lounge. RIKER'S COM VOICE Captain, we are approaching Science Station Delta Zero-Five. PICARD Slow to impulse... I'm on my way. Picard moves toward the exit. SONNY Say, Captain -- I need to see that pretty Doctor of yours. PICARD I will inform her. STAR TREK: "... Neutral... " - REV. 3/18/88 - ACT THREE 37. 36 CONTINUED: (3) Ralph puts his hand on Picard's arm. (His way to control the situation.) RALPH Captain. I didn't mean to come on so strong. I've built my life on knowing what's going on. For the first time -- I'm completely out of touch -- it makes me crazy. Can you understand? PICARD It's the first thing you've said that I do understand. I'll see what I can do. But please... stay off the com panel. Ralph nods as Picard EXITS. 37 INT. CORRIDOR as Picard and Troi meet. PICARD Counselor, get those people under control. We cannot afford this continuing distraction. TROI Yes, sir. 38 INT. CLARE'S QUARTERS Troi ENTERS. TROI Hello -- my name is Deanna. CLARE They sent you here to settle me down. TROI I'm the ship's counselor and I thought you might want to talk. CLARE The local shrink. STAR TREK: "The Neutral Zone" - 3/17/88 - ACT THREE 38. 38 CONTINUED: TROI I'm sorry, I do not know that term. CLARE It doesn't matter. TROI You are feeling profoundly sad. CLARE Can't stop crying. I miss my sons, and then I think... I'm here, but they are gone. Donald -- he's my husband. I love that man but, good intentions aside, he'd mess up a free lunch. Why in the world he ever decided to do this... TROI He must have thought you would have wanted it. CLARE I can tell you exactly what happened. He couldn't think about going on alone. I died, but he couldn't face it. So he figured if he had me frozen, then in his mind I wasn't really gone. Crazy, huh? But you have to know Donald. She pauses a minute -- turns away and fights back the tears that will not stop. CLARE (continuing) I'm in a world of strangers. I wish I knew what happened to my children. Did they get married, did they have kids... TROI Let's see if we can find out. Troi goes to a computer screen. STAR TREK: "... Neutral... " - REV. 3/21/88 - ACT THREE 39. 38 CONTINUED: (2) TROI (continuing) Computer - this is Counselor Troi. Request personal history on... What are their names? CLARE Tommy -- he's eight, and Eddie's five. COMPUTER VOICE Full names -- Date and place of birth. CLARE They were born in Secaucus - that's in Jersey. (to Troi) Can this really work? Can this tell me what happened to them? TROI There has to be a record somewhere. There is a good chance we can find it. CLARE Whether we do or not, thank you for... trying. (then, to computer) Date of birth. Tommy was born February seventeenth... 39 INT. SICKBAY Beverly is there with Sonny. SONNY I just got to have a little something to jump start the morning -- and a little something else to shut down the night. BEVERLY You have no medical need. SONNY It's not a question of "need," darlin'. It's a matter of survival. STAR TREK: "... Neutral... ' - REV. 3/21/88 - ACT THREE 40. 39 CONTINUED: BEVERLY Sorry. SONNY Not to worry -- ol' Watosh will scuffle along the best way he can. He turns to leave, then: SONNY (continuing) How do I get a hold of the ol' boy with the marinie face? BEVERLY I beg your pardon? SONNY What's his name... that android fella. BEVERLY Lieutenant Commander Data? SONNY That's the one. BEVERLY I'll let him know you want to see him. He gets up to leave. SONNY Much obliged. You sure are the prettiest little doctor I ever saw. And he walks toward the door. BEVERLY Much obliged. 40 INT. CLARE'S QUARTERS (OPTICAL) Troi and Clare. CLARE Amazing. It's all right there. STAR TREK: "... Neutral... " - REV. 3/21/88 - ACT THREE 40A. 40 CONTINUED: TROI Yes, ten generations of your progeny. CLARE Everyone I ever knew is dead. Would you mind... I'd like to be alone. STAR TREK: "... Neutral... " - REV. 3/21/88 - ACT THREE 41. 40 CONTINUED: (2) TROI No, not at all. WE HOLD on Clare as Troi moves toward the exit. 40A INT. SONNY'S QUARTERS Sonny looks up as Data ENTERS. DATA You asked to see me. SONNY I'm about to go out of my mind for something to do. Sittin' alone drinkin' don't get it. What say you and me put together a little party. DATA A celebration? SONNY Naw... nothin' that fancy -- just some folks, some suds, and some sounds. Hell it ain't nothin' but somethin' to do. Whatdeya think? DATA I will ask the captain. SONNY Great -- you do that... DATA Query. You do not seem to be having as much difficulty adjusting to your current circumstances as are the others. SONNY You mean being here -- on this tub -- four hundred years from where I started? Heck -- it's the same dance, just a different tune. You think anyone 'round here's got a guitar I could borrow? STAR TREK: "The Neutral Zone" - 3/17/88 - ACT THREE 42. 40A CONTINUED: DATA No, but the computer can replicate such an instrument. SONNY I was kind of hopin' to get one while I still remember the chords. RIKER'S COM VOICE Commander Data -- we are approaching the Neutral Zone. Report to the bridge. DATA I must leave. Data walks toward the door. SONNY What's this "Neutral Zone?" DATA A buffer between the Romulan Empire and the Federation. SONNY Why does that make me nervous? DATA I do not know. SONNY We won't be inviting these Romulans to our party, will we? DATA No, it would not be appropriate. OFF Sonny's REACTION: FADE OUT. END OF ACT THREE STAR TREK: "... Neutral... " - REV. 3/18/88 - ACT FOUR 43. ACT FOUR FADE IN: 41 EXT. SPACE - THE ENTERPRISE (OPTICAL) travelling at impulse speed. PICARD Captain's log, supplemental. We have arrived at the edge of the Neutral Zone. We will now have an opportunity to learn firsthand what happened to our distant outposts. 42 INT. MAIN BRIDGE Data is at Science One. DATA There is nothing left of Outpost Delta Zero-Five. GEORDI It must have been one hell of an explosion. DATA Sensors indicate no evidence of a conventional attack. He turns to face Picard. DATA (continuing) There is nothing left. PICARD Can you determine what happened? OFF Picard's REACTION. WORF The outpost was not just destroyed, it is as though some great force just scooped it off the face of the planet. STAR TREK: "... Neutral... " - REV. 3/21/88 - ACT FOUR 44. 42 CONTINUED: They continue scanning. PICARD Could it have been a natural phenomenon? DATA Insufficient information. PICARD Geordi, set a course for the next closest station. GEORDI Aye, sir. 43 EXT. SPACE - THE ENTERPRISE (OPTICAL) as it files by. 43A INT. SONNY'S QUARTERS WESLEY and Sonny. Sonny sits picking his guitar. Wesley sits across from him, staring. SONNY I just can't believe this. When that android fella said you could duplicate this baby, I didn't dream you'd do such a bang-up job... You like country? WESLEY Excuse me? SONNY Picking and strummin', son. What about rock? WESLEY What about rock? SONNY What's the matter, kid? You look like you're staring at a ghost. WESLEY Well, sir, you were dead for over three-hundred years... STAR TREK: "... Neutral... " - REV. 3/22/88 - ACT FOUR 44A. 43A CONTINUED: SONNY How 'bout rhythm and blues? That comes back every decade or so. Wesley continues to stare. He could just as soon be looking at a dinosaur. WESLEY What was it like?... I mean, can you remember... SONNY What? Bein' dead? Not really, but then again there wasn't a whole lot happening. WESLEY Why did you do it? Was there something left undone... something you have to finish? SONNY Nope. Just curiosity... Another adventure... Simply wanted to see what was going on. 44 INT. MAIN BRIDGE as they wait. GEORDI We are approaching Tarod Nine. DATA The condition is identical, Captain. WORF Everyone and everything is gone. RIKER Captain, I strongly recommend that we go to Red Alert. If the Romulans have improved their cloaking device, and we'd be fools to think they haven't, we should assume a more defensive posture. WORF I agree, Captain. I recommend we go immediately to battle stations. Picard will not be pushed. STAR TREK: "The Neutral Zone" - 3/17/88 - ACT FOUR 45. 44 CONTINUED: PICARD I appreciate your concern and advice, but this is not the time for rash actions. We are still investigating. He moves away from the Aft Station. PICARD (continuing) There are three other stations in this sector which we need to visit. Let's proceed in a calm and orderly manner. RIKER If not "battle stations," may I at least bring the ship to Yellow Alert? Picard considers for a moment. PICARD Yes, Number One. That would be prudent. RIKER Thank you. And Riker initiates the necessary procedure to raise the alert level of the Enterprise. 45 EXT. SPACE - THE ENTERPRISE (OPTICAL) as it continues on. 46 INT. GUEST LOUNGE Ralph, Sonny and Clare are together. SONNY So, what is it that you want? RALPH I've spent my career being able to tell when the other guy's mouth is dry. There is something going on. Something serious. The tension level on this ship has jumped up. STAR TREK: "... Neutral... " - REV. 3/21/88 - ACT FOUR 46. 46 CONTINUED: SONNY Even if you're right, what can we do about it? And besides, these old boys don't need us to tell them where the bear sits. He reaches down beside him and lifts up an acoustic guitar... SONNY (continuing) Lookie here what that young fella made for me. CLARE How did he do that? SONNY He called it a pattern replication. It plays real good, too. And he hits a couple of chords. RALPH I'm trying to tell you that there is a situation developing on this vessel which affects us, and all you can talk about is that stupid guitar! SONNY These folks don't need us swimming in their soup, so why don't you just relax and let them do their jobs? RALPH That may be all right for you, but I am not willing to allow my fate to be decided by others. I at least want to know what is going on. SONNY How are you planning to do that? STAR TREK: "... Neutral... " - REV. 3/18/88 - ACT FOUR 47. 47 ANOTHER ANGLE - DOOR Ralph gives Sonny a look and goes to the door. It OPENS. There is a security guard standing there. RALPH He needs help. I think he's dying. As the security guard ENTERS the room and MOVES toward Sonny, Ralph SLIPS UP behind him and hits him on the head, knocking him unconscious. SONNY What the hell are you doing? RALPH I'm going to find out what's going on. 47A INT. CORRIDOR (FORMERLY SCENE 48) as Ralph moves along. Other crewmembers are moving quickly about their business. Ralph is able to move along unnoticed. A48 ANOTHER ANGLE As Ralph continues moving forward, he notices the turbolift door OPEN and some Enterprise personnel EXIT. He STEPS ONTO the turbolift. For a moment he is confused; he knows it's an elevator, but he sees no buttons. He looks around, then to himself: RALPH Ah... let's see. (to computer) Ah... I want to go to a... the... ah... (he shrugs; then to himself:) Where would the captain be? To his astonishemnt, the computer answers: COMPUTER VOICE Captain Picard is located on the Main Bridge. RALPH Then, take me to the Main Bridge. The doors CLOSE. The turbolift streaks off. STAR TREK: "... Neutral... " - REV. 3/21/88 - ACT FOUR 47A. B48 OMITTED 48 OMITTED 48A INT. MAIN BRIDGE (OPTICAL) at Yellow Alert. WORF Captain, my sensors indicate a disturbance. It is large and moving, but I cannot get a positive lock nor can I get it on the viewscreen. RIKER Shields up. WORF Aye, sir. RIKER Captain, I recommend we transfer all power to phasers, and arm the photon torpedos. PICARD Wait. If that is a Romulan ship, it will read our intent. We will be forcing them to take a similar posture. We are not out here to engage in battles; we are explorers. RIKER Captain, there is sufficient evidence. Outposts have been destroyed... Countless lives have been lost. STAR TREK: "... Neutral... " - REV. 3/18/88 - ACT FOUR 48. 48A CONTINUED: WORF I have a positive lock... It's disengaging its cloaking device. RIKER They are vulnerable for an instant as they become visible. WORF Captain, this may be our only chance. While they are all intent on the Main Viewer, the turbolift doors OPEN and Ralph STEPS ONTO the bridge. The size of the room and the near visible tension stops him momentarily in his tracks. WORF (continuing) I've lost them. PICARD (to Data) Are your sensors picking up anything? You should be detecting a disturbance. DATA Negative. GEORDI We wanted to know if they have improved their cloaking device -- I guess we have our answer. PICARD (to Riker) They were trying to determine our intent... They wanted to see if we would fire. RALPH Who the hell are they? Everyone turns. RIKER Get that man off the bridge... now. Security moves toward him. STAR TREK: "... Neutral... " - REV. 3/18/88 - ACT FOUR 49. 48A CONTINUED: (2) RALPH I'm not going anywhere. WORF Captain, they're back. Everyone is looking at Picard. PICARD On screen. 49 thru OMITTED 51 51A ANOTHER ANGLE FAVORING SCREEN as a disturbance becomes a Romulan cruiser. REACTIONS: 51B EXT. SPACE - THE ENTERPRISE (OPTICAL) (FORMERLY SC. 50) in proximity to the Romulan cruiser. FADE OUT. END OF ACT FOUR STAR TREK: "... Neutral... " - REV. 3/21/88 - ACT FIVE 50. ACT FIVE FADE IN: 52 EXT. SPACE - THE ROMULAN CRUISER (OPTICAL) as it closes in on the Enterprise. 53 INT. MAIN BRIDGE (OPTICAL) It's as it was. Worf and a couple of other crewmembers move toward Ralph. RIKER Amazing. I never thought I would ever see a Romulan ship -- not this close. GEORDI The last encounter was decades ago and cost thousands of lives. A REACTION from Ralph. RALPH (awed) I can believe that. It's said so quietly, and the thought is so much on everyone's mind, that no one notices it was Ralph who said it. PICARD Stay calm, everyone. WORF Captain, these are Romulans -- they are without honor. They killed my parents in an attack on Khitomer at a time when they were supposed to be our allies. They believe humans and Klingons are a waste of skin, so inferior as to be unworthy of any consideration. PICARD Lieutenant, keep your emotions under control. Open hailing frequencies. STAR TREK: "... Neutral... " - REV. 3/21/88 - ACT FIVE 50A. 53 CONTINUED: WORF Hailing frequencies open. PICARD Romulan vessel, this is Captain Jean-Luc Picard of the USS Enterprise. There is no response. STAR TREK: "... Neutral... " - REV. 3/21/88 - ACT FIVE 51. 53 CONTINUED: (2) DATA Sensors indicate all of their systems are armed. PICARD But they have not fired. Picard thinks for a beat. PICARD (continuing) Let's try them again. WORF Hailing frequencies are still open. PICARD Romulan vessel, this is Captain Jean-Luc Picard of the USS Enterprise. There is a pause. 54 MAIN VIEWSCREEN (OPTICAL) (INTERCUT AS NECESSARY) Then the interior of the Romulan vessel COMES ON the viewscreen. STAR TREK: "... Neutral... " - REV. 3/18/88 - ACT FIVE 52. 54 CONTINUED: There are TWO ROMULAN OFFICERS in the Control area. COMMANDER TEBOK (pronounced "TAY-bok") and SUB-COMMANDER THEI (pronounced "TIE"). TEBOK I am Commander Tebok. PICARD You have crossed the Neutral Zone. This is Federation territory. THEI It was necessary. PICARD It could be viewed as an act of aggression. THEI If our intent was aggression, you would not now be here. TEBOK If we go to war, let us be sure it is for the right reason. We are here because our outposts, which border the Neutral Zone, were also attacked. THEI Destroyed in the exact same manner as your own. WORF (to Picard) What right did they have to enter Federation space? TEBOK Silence your dog, Captain. PICARD Lieutenant Worf's question is valid. THEI Even to ask such a question implies that we need permission; we do not. PICARD Do you think we attacked your outposts? STAR TREK: "... Neutral... " - REV. 3/21/88 - ACT FIVE 53. 54 CONTINUED: (2) TEBOK (with disdain) Once we realized the level of destruction, we knew it could not have been you. PICARD Who is responsible? There is a pause. RALPH They haven't a clue. Picard shoots Ralph a look. RALPH (continuing) They're hoping you know, but they're too arrogant to ask. RIKER You're out of line, Mister. PICARD Yes, but correct in his assessment. TEBOK We do not know who is responsible... Why entire outposts on both sides were carried off. PICARD I would like to offer a proposal. THEI (with a smile) An alliance? Between the Romulans and the Federation? PICARD Nothing so grandiose -- just this. Cooperation... whoever or whatever did this is more powerful than either of us. STAR TREK: "... Neutral... " - REV. 3/21/88 - ACT FIVE 53A. 54 CONTINUED: (3) The two Romulans ponder for a moment. THEI Agreed. STAR TREK: "... Neutral... " - REV. 3/21/88 - ACT FIVE 54. 54 CONTINUED: (4) THEI On this one issue, and only if it is convenient and something we consider appropriate at the time. TEBOK Captain Picard, because your actions are those of a thoughtful man who is neither rash nor easily provoked, I tell you this. More urgent matters have caused our absence, and witness the results. Outposts destroyed, evidence of the Federation everywhere. We have been negligent, but no more. PICARD We have made some progress in our relations... let's not ruin that with unnecessary posturing. TEBOK Your presence is not wanted. Do you understand my meaning? We are back! The Romulans study Picard for a beat; then -- without a signal or a sign, they CLICK OFF. The image on the Main Viewer is REPLACED with a SHOT of the Romulan cruiser. PICARD I think our lives just became a lot more complicated. 55 ANOTHER ANGLE as the members of the bridge crew breath a collective sigh of relief. 56 EXT. SPACE - THE ROMULAN CRUISER (OPTICAL) as it TURNS and LEAVES at high speed. 56A INT. MAIN BRIDGE as before. Picard turns slowly to Worf. PICARD Get him off my bridge. STAR TREK: "... Neutral... " - REV. 3/21/88 - ACT FIVE 54A. 56B INT. CLARE'S QUARTERS (FORMERLY SC. 58) (OPTICAL) Troi and Clare are there. TROI I have found something. Clare comes over to the computer next to Troi. On the screen is the biographical information of: TROI (continuing) I have been able to locate a family living outside of Indianapolis. The man's name is Thomas Raymond. Clare looks at the Screen. CLARE That's my son's name. My son's name is Tommy. STAR TREK: "... Neutral... " - REV. 3/18/88 - ACT FIVE 55. 56B CONTINUED: (2) The READOUT on the screen indicates that Thomas Raymond is married and has two children, ages four and seven. TROI Computer -- let us see Thomas Raymond. And the screen REPAINTS with a semi-line drawing of a man around thirty. CLARE Oh, my God... It's Donald... that's my husband. TROI Actually, it's your great, great, great, great, great grandson. CLARE He's the spitting image. TROI I have his address. When you get back to Earth, you could go and see him. CLARE But... I will still be out of time. A relic. TROI Perhaps. But it's a place to start. He is after all, family. Clare looks at the picture on the Screen. CLARE There's no denying that. For the first time since she was thawed, her attitude brightens. 57 INT. OBSERVATION LOUNGE Picard and other members of the crew are with the "guests." PICARD Here is what I propose. You can't remain on the Enterprise. We have arranged to rendezvous with the USS Charleston, bound for Earth. You will be delivered there. STAR TREK: "... Neutral... " - REV. 3/21/88 - ACT FIVE 56. 57 CONTINUED: RALPH And then what will happen to us? There's no trace of my money -- my office is gone -- what will I do? How will I live? PICARD (amused) This is the twenty-fourth century. Those material needs no longer exist. RALPH Then what's the challenge? PICARD To improve yourself... enrich yourself. Enjoy it, Mister Offenhouse. SONNY Well, one good thing -- since everybody's forgotten everything I ever did... it'll all be brand spankin' new. Hell, I'll be a bigger hit than I ever was. PICARD Perhaps so, anything is possible. SONNY (to Data) What say, son -- you'd make a hell of a sideman. DATA That offer does present a certain fascination. 58 OMITTED 59 INT. MAIN BRIDGE Picard and Riker EXIT from the turbolift. GEORDI I have plotted a course to intercept the Charleston, sir, but they have informed me that they will be making an extended stop at Arloff Nine. STAR TREK: "... Neutral... " - REV. 3/22/88 - ACT FIVE 57. 59 CONTINUED: PICARD Your point, Lieutenant? GEORDI At warp eight, we could have our guests at Starbase Thirty-Nine Sierra in five days. It would cut months off their journey. PICARD They will benefit from the extended time. It will allow them to acclimate before arriving at Earth. RIKER It's a pity we can't take them ourselves. Having them on board has been like a visit from the past. PICARD That would take us in the wrong direction. Our mission is to go forward and it has just begun. Set velocity at warp six, Mister La Forge. GEORDI Aye, sir... warp six. PICARD There is still much to do... and still so much to learn. (pause) Mister La Forge... Engage. 60 EXT. SPACE - THE ENTERPRISE (OPTICAL) as it heads off. FADE OUT. END OF ACT FIVE THE END STAR TREK: THE NEXT GENERATION "The Child" #40272-127 Based on a Premise by Jaron Summers and Jon Povill Teleplay by Maurice Hurley Directed by Rob Bowman THE WRITING CREDITS MAY NOT BE FINAL AND SHOULD NOT BE USED FOR PUBLICITY OR ADVERTISING PURPOSES WITHOUT FIRST CHECKING WITH THE TELEVISION LEGAL DEPARTMENT. Copyright 1988 Paramount Pictures Corporation. All Rights Reserved. This script is not for publication or reproduction. No one is authorized to dispose of same. If lost or destroyed, please notify the Script Department. 3RD REV. FINAL DRAFT SEPTEMBER 20, 1988 STAR TREK: "The Child" - 9/20/88 - CAST STAR TREK: THE NEXT GENERATION "The Child" CAST PICARD HESTER DEALT RIKER DATA PULASKI Voice-Over TROI REPULSE VOICE GEORDI WORF WESLEY GUINAN CREWMEMBER TRANSPORTER CHIEF TEACHER (MISS GLADSTONE) IAN (BABY) IAN (AGE THREE) IAN (AGE EIGHT) Non-Speaking CREWMEMBERS MEDICAL ASSISTANTS SECURITY TEAM GROUP OF KIDS Voice-Over SICKBAY VOICE COMPUTER VOICE STAR TREK: "The Child" - 9/20/88 - SETS STAR TREK: THE NEXT GENERATION "The Child" SETS INTERIORS EXTERIORS USS ENTERPRISE USS ENTERPRISE SHUTTLE BAY MAIN BRIDGE CAPTAIN'S READY ROOM DOOR USS REPULSE CAPTAIN'S READY ROOM CHIEF ENGINEER'S OFFICE 'AUCDET NINE MAIN ENGINEERING CORRIDOR ANOTHER CORRIDOR CREWMEMBERS' QUARTERS TROI'S QUARTERS CARGO DECK FIVE TEN-FORWARD OBSERVATION LOUNGE CARGO HOLD FIVE DOCTOR PULASKI'S OFFICE SICKBAY - MATERNITY CORRIDOR - ENTRANCE TO SICKBAY CORRIDOR - ENTRANCE TO TROI'S QUARTERS CHILDREN'S PLAY AREA TRANSPORTER ROOM THREE STAR TREK: "The Child" - 9/20/88 - PRONUNCIATION GUIDE STAR TREK: THE NEXT GENERATION "The Child" PRONUNCIATION GUIDE 'AUCDET NINE O-det Nine GUINAN GUY-nun RACHELIS Ra-CHEL-is DELOVIAN SOUFFLE Del-O-ve-an MAREUVIAN TEA Ma-RU-ve-an THEASIAN TEA Thee-A-see-an PROMETHEUS Pro-ME-thee-us ALGORITHMS AL-gor-i-thums HEURISTICS Hur-ISS-tics VOILA Vwa-LA CYANOACRYLATES Si-a-no-AK-re-lates STAR TREK: "The Child" - 9/20/88 - TEASER 1. STAR TREK: THE NEXT GENERATION "The Child" TEASER FADE IN: 1 EXT. SPACE - ENTERPRISE AND THE USS REPULSE (OPTICAL) The Enterprise has rendezvoused with the other Federation ship near the spectacularly beautiful binary system -- Alvacorn Major. 1A INT. ENTERPRISE - SHUTTLE BAY (OPTICAL) The shuttlecraft leaves the Enterprise for the USS Repulse. 2 INT. MAIN BRIDGE Picard is not on the bridge. RIKER has the command chair - DATA is at Science Station, WESLEY is at Conn -WORF is at Tactical. The other positions are filled by n.d. crewmembers. Riker watches the Main Viewer as the shuttlecraft closes with the Repulse. RIKER (to Worf) Open hailing frequencies. WORF Hailing frequencies opened. RIKER Repulse, this is the Enterprise. We are getting underway. REPULSE VOICE Acknowledged, Enterprise. Transfer complete -- good luck on your mission. RIKER And to you. REPULSE VOICE Give my regards to your captain. Repulse out. STAR TREK: "The Child" - 9/20/88 - TEASER 2. 2 CONTINUED: WESLEY The Shuttle Bay is secure. RIKER Thank you Mister Crusher. Make all preparations to get underway. 3 OMITTED 4 INT. CAPTAIN'S READY ROOM (OPTICAL) Picard is there with GEORDI. Geordi is showing Picard the plans for a device he is proposing to build. GEORDI We will construct this large enclosure on Cargo Deck Five. The door CHIME SOUNDS. PICARD Come. Riker enters and makes his report. RIKER The transfer is complete. Doctor Pulaski is being shown to her quarters. We are ready to get underway. PICARD Very good. Take a look at the containment module our new chief engineer has designed. Riker steps over. RIKER "Chief engineer," that has a nice ring to it. GEORDI It does to me. (then to business) Each will have total atmospheric control... temperature, radiation, light, humidity, plus electrical spectrums. RIKER And these are put into the large containment area? STAR TREK: "The Child" - 9/20/88 - TEASER 3. 4 CONTINUED: GEORDI Yes, these modules will keep the specimens alive -- the large containment area will keep us alive. Now, I have to go and replicate this five hundred and twelve times. This will mean it will be necessary to divert power from the warp engines to the replicator. PICARD How long will we be on impulse power? GEORDI For a few hours, but it can't be helped. Picard nods. RIKER When we leave 'aucdet Nine - I'm going to want all the power you can slam into those warp engines. GEORDI You'll have it. Geordi exits. PICARD I will relieve you at zero three zero zero. Riker acknowledges and leaves. 5 INT. MAIN BRIDGE as Riker walks back onto the bridge. RIKER Take us out of orbit, Mister Crusher -- set course for 'aucdet Nine. WESLEY Aye, sir. Course for 'aucdet Nine has been input. STAR TREK: "The Child" - 9/20/88 - TEASER 4. 5 CONTINUED: RIKER Maximum impulse velocity. WESLEY Aye, sir. RIKER Engage. 6 EXT. SPACE - ENTERPRISE (OPTICAL) as it makes a slow graceful turn. 7 EXT. SPACE - ANOTHER ANGLE (OPTICAL) The Enterprise starts as a dot in the distance -- quickly approaches at impulse speed and makes a close passby. After a beat, a heretofore unseen speck begins to glow, then moves -- chasing after the starship. 8 EXT. SPACE - ANOTHER ANGLE (OPTICAL) as the glowing ENERGY closes on the Enterprise. It catches the ship and approaches from the rear -- going between the warp engines. 9 INT. MAIN BRIDGE Minimal crew. Data is at the Science Station studying the display screen. DATA Engineering -- this is Science One. I just observed what appeared to be a random energy transference. 10 INT. CHIEF ENGINEER'S OFFICE Geordi is working at the panel on the far wall. GEORDI Where? DATA'S COM VOICE Aft. Outboard of the port nacelle. STAR TREK: "The Child" - 9/20/88 - TEASER 5. 10 CONTINUED: GEORDI Hold on -- I'll check. 10A INT. MAIN ENGINEERING Geordi moves to the center console. GEORDI No -- I show nothing here, Data. 11 INT. MAIN BRIDGE Data is not satisfied and continues running checks. RIKER Problem, Commander? DATA Possibly. An unexplained power fluctuation. RIKER Let me know if it reoccurs. 12 EXT. SPACE - CLOSE ON THE ENTERPRISE (OPTICAL) The ball of light moves closer to the Enterprise. It slides along the skin of the ship; then, without damage to the hull, the ball goes inside. 13 INT. CORRIDOR (OPTICAL) The corridor is empty. If there were nighttime in space, this would be it. The ship is quiet. The little glow of energy emerges. It pauses as though getting its bearings, then cautiously moves off. 14 INT. CORRIDOR - ANOTHER ANGLE (OPTICAL) We FOLLOW the glow as it continues along. The turbolift doors open and TWO CREWMEMBERS exit. The glow blends into the corridor wall and neither crewmember sees it. The glow falls in behind them as they pass. STAR TREK: "The Child" - 9/20/88 - TEASER 6. 15 INT. CORRIDOR - ANOTHER ANGLE (OPTICAL) At an intersection the crewmembers turn left. The energy again pauses, then continues straight ahead resuming its journey - or is it a search? The energy exits up through the overhead. 15A OMITTED 16 INT. CREWMEMBERS' QUARTERS (OPTICAL) The energy enters. It pauses over the sleeping form of one of the male crewmembers... then moves away. 17 INT. TROI'S QUARTERS (OPTICAL) The energy enters the room, passing effortlessly through the closed door. It pauses -- again getting its bearings. It has a definite sense of purpose as it moves slowly toward the sleeping form on the far side of the room. 18 ANOTHER ANGLE - THE BED (OPTICAL) We recognize COUNSELOR DEANNA TROI. The energy pauses by her head, then LEAVES THE FRAME as it moves down her body. We HOLD on Troi's face. After a beat she turns -- the restless movements of a tortured dream... sweat beads up on her forehead, SUDDENLY she wakes. For a moment she does not move -- then she looks around the room for the "person" (lover) she knows must be there. There is no one. The room is empty. But she knows that someone or something has been there and that she will never be the same again. Off her look of concern... and fear... we: FADE OUT. END OF TEASER STAR TREK: "The Child" - 9/20/88 - ACT ONE 7. ACT ONE FADE IN: 19 EXT. SPACE - THE ENTERPRISE (OPTICAL) as it continues along at impulse speed. PICARD (V.O.) Captain's log, Stardate 42073.1. There has been an outbreak of a yet unclassified Plasma Plague in the densely populated Rachelis system. We are on an emergency run to a Federation Research station on 'aucdet Nine, where specimens of Plasma Plague are kept. We will then transport that deadly cargo to Science Station Tango Sierra, where hopefully an antidote can be manufactured. Every hour we delay, thousands die. 20 OMITTED 20A INT. CARGO DECK FIVE In the center of the huge cargo bay, a crewmember is assembling a very large containment area which will hold the five hundred and twelve modules. GEORDI How's it going? CREWMEMBER Finished, just waiting to insert the modules. 21 INT. MAIN BRIDGE Picard comes out of his Ready Room: PICARD Number One. RIKER Lieutenant La Forge says we will be able to engage the warp drive within the hour. STAR TREK: "The Child" - 9/20/88 - ACT ONE 8. 21 CONTINUED: Picard nods an acknowledgement as he takes his seat. PICARD Mister Data, when we receive a complete list of all the specimens we will be carrying, I want you and Doctor Pulaski to go through it... by the way. Where is our new doctor? Has she reported in? RIKER Not yet. Picard is obviously irritated by the breach in procedure. PICARD Sickbay, this is the captain. SICKBAY VOICE Sickbay, aye. PICARD Is Doctor Pulaski there? SICKBAY VOICE (slight hesitation) Ah... no, Sir. The doctor is in Ten-Forward. PICARD What?! (surprised, then annoyed) A few hours on board and she's already found Ten-Forward. Riker starts to rise. RIKER I'll go and get her. PICARD No, Number One. I'll go. Picard rises and strides toward the turbolift. WORF Not the best way to meet your new captain. STAR TREK: "The Child" - 9/20/88 - ACT ONE 9. 22 INT. CORRIDOR As Picard exits the turbolift, he encounters Wesley. WESLEY Hello, Captain. PICARD (a greeting) Ensign Crusher. Picard continues to stride purposefully down the corridor with Wesley a few steps behind trying to keep up. PICARD I'm sorry this mission will delay your reunion with your mother. WESLEY It's all right. I can use the time to finish some projects. PICARD (dismissive) We shouldn't be more than a week or so. Wesley wants to continue the conversation. WESLEY It is going to be hard to leave the Enterprise... PICARD Mixed feelings for all of us. Picard glances back and sees the look of sadness in the young man's eyes. PICARD (continuing) It's always difficult leaving any ship, as it was for your mother when she left to become head of Starfleet Medical. But going from one assignment to another is part of the life which you are choosing. WESLEY Yes, but this isn't "any" ship. STAR TREK: "The Child" - 9/20/88 - ACT ONE 10. 22 CONTINUED: PICARD Truly. Wesley stops and watches Picard continue to Ten-Forward. The sadness remains in the young man's eyes. 23 INT. TEN-FORWARD As Picard enters he crosses with a CREWMEMBER. The crewmember's reaction tells us very clearly that Picard is not a frequent visitor to Ten-Forward. We FOLLOW Picard as he walks over to the BARTENDER. This is the first time we get to see this wonderful room. 24 ANOTHER ANGLE - PICARD AT BAR GUINAN is behind the bar. PICARD (greets her) Guinan. She nods a greeting. GUINAN Captain. PICARD Where's Doctor Pulaski? With a hand motion, Guinan indicates a table. 25 ANOTHER ANGLE as Picard approaches one of the tables. We can see that DOCTOR KATHERINE PULASKI is talking with someone, but we cannot see with whom. Picard strides purposefully up. Clearly his ire is up. PICARD Doctor Katherine Pulaski? Pulaski looks up. PULASKI Ah... you must be Captain Picard... STAR TREK: "The Child" - 9/20/88 - ACT ONE 11. 25 CONTINUED: PICARD Doctor -- protocol on your last assignment might have been lax, but here on the Enterprise... PULASKI (she abruptly cuts him off) Sit down, Captain. You better listen to this. 26 ANOTHER ANGLE - TABLE We now see that the doctor is with Troi. Picard and Troi exchange looks. Picard senses trouble and moves a step closer. 27 INT. OBSERVATION LOUNGE (OPTICAL) Riker, Data, and Worf have assembled. Picard enters with Doctor Pulaski and Troi. As he walks briskly toward his seat. PICARD (he touches his communicator) Lieutenant La Forge, status report. GEORDI'S COM VOICE The containment area is completed, the last of the modules are being inserted. PICARD Take us to warp six as soon as possible. GEORDI'S COM VOICE Acknowledged. Picard takes his seat and moves on to other -- equally urgent business. PICARD This is Doctor Katherine Pulaski. We will handle the formal introduction later. STAR TREK: "The Child" - 9/20/88 - ACT ONE 12. 27 CONTINUED: The SUBTLE APPRAISALS, the doctor of the crew and the crew of the new doctor, are cut short as Picard takes his seat and announces. PICARD (continuing) Counselor Deanna Troi is pregnant. The reactions of the crew. During what follows we will INTERCUT the reactions of everyone. These will change as each new piece of information is revealed. Data, almost in awe. Life, any life, is amazing to him. Riker glances over at Troi and thinks however briefly of what might have been. Worf -- suspicious, distrustful. RIKER A baby! Worf is noncommittal, Data curious. Riker surprised, and the question is clearly on his mind (whose baby?). RIKER (continuing) This is a surprise. TROI More so for me. Before Riker can react to that statement, Pulaski takes control of the meeting. PULASKI This pregnancy is unlike anything I have ever encountered. Since she came to me a few hours ago, I have made two complete examinations of Counselor Troi. She activates the wall viewer on which appears the sonic representation of a healthy, humanoid fetus. PULASKI (continuing) This is from the first examination. The fetus is about halfway through the first trimester -- about six weeks old. Understand, we... (MORE) STAR TREK: "The Child" - 9/20/88 - ACT ONE 13. 27 CONTINUED: (2) PULASKI (Cont'd) (indicating herself and Troi) ... believe conception occurred about eleven hours ago. RIKER What? PULASKI It gets better. The screen changes. PULASKI (continuing) The second exam, an hour later was consistent, except for the fact that the fetus "appeared" to be several weeks older. She steps away from the screen. PULASKI (continuing) At this growth rate, Counselor Troi will have her baby within the next thirty-six hours. The normal gestation for a Betazoid is ten months. For a beat, the group is in stunned silence. RIKER I do not mean to be indelicate, but... (pause) ... who's the father? TROI Last night, while I slept... something... which I can only describe it as a presence, entered my body. Troi turns and looks at the image of the fetus. STAR TREK: "The Child" - 9/20/88 - ACT ONE 14. 27 CONTINUED: (3) PICARD A life-form of unknown origin and intent is breeding right now inside Counselor Troi. Our purpose here is to determine what is to be done about this very "unusual" situation. Discussion. RIKER Let me get this straight -- Deanna was impregnated by... by what? (to Pulaski) Doctor, what do your tests show? Is it a humanoid? An alien? She stands, goes to the display screen and activates it. PULASKI It's a male human... or in this case half-human -- half-Betazoid. RIKER Exactly the same as Deanna! PULASKI In every way. There is no indication from any of my tests of any other genetic patterns except hers. 28 TROI We HOLD on Troi as she continues to watch the child moving inside her. The discussion fades from her consciousness. RIKER I don't think this is a random occurrence. There is a purpose here -- a reason. What, I don't know. WORF Captain, obviously the pregnancy must be terminated. RIKER Why? STAR TREK: "The Child" - 9/20/88 - ACT ONE 15. 28 CONTINUED: WORF For the safety of the ship and crew. Troi stares at the moving fetus on the viewscreen. Seeing it, alive, helpless, touches other emotions. However it was conceived, it is hers. She does not completely lose her uncertainty and apprehension, but other, stronger instincts begin to emerge. RIKER Worf, you can't assume its intent is belligerent. WORF That is my safest assumption. DATA Captain, this is a life-form. Not to allow it to develop naturally would deny us the opportunity to study it. WORF If the fetus is aborted, laboratory analysis is still possible. RIKER Is there any health risk to Counselor Troi if the fetus is aborted? PULASKI Medically, no. PICARD Doctor, is that your recommendation? As the words swirl around her, she knows in her Betazoid heart that the child must be born, and she makes her decision. Troi gets everyone's attention. TROI Captain, do whatever you feel is necessary to protect the ship and the crew... but know this. I am going to have this baby. Everyone reacts, then: STAR TREK: "The Child" - 9/20/88 - ACT ONE 16. 28 CONTINUED: (2) PICARD I believe that ends the discussion. 29 OMITTED FADE OUT. END OF ACT ONE STAR TREK: "The Child" - 9/20/88 - ACT TWO 17. ACT TWO FADE IN: 30 EXT. SPACE - THE ENTERPRISE (OPTICAL) coming out of warp. PICARD (V.O.) Captain's log, supplemental. We have finally arrived at 'aucdet Nine. We will pick up the specimens of Plasma Plague and transport them to Rachelis. 30A EXT. SPACE - THE ENTERPRISE (OPTICAL) approaching 'aucdet Nine. PICARD (V.O.) (continuing) It is only because so many lives are at stake that I am willing to put this ship and crew at such great risk. 31 INT. MAIN BRIDGE (OPTICAL) Picard is in his command seat, Riker beside him. Data is at Ops and Wesley has the Conn. Troi enters from the aft turbolift. She is FIVE months pregnant. The crew can't help watching as she crosses and takes her place next to Picard. PICARD How are you feeling? TROI I should be feeling uncomfortable with all the changes in my body... but, I'm not. I feel fine -- better than fine. Wonderful. There is a look of concern in his eyes - not only for his counselor, but because he still isn't sure what is going to be born onto his ship. RIKER Standard orbit. STAR TREK: "The Child" - 9/20/88 - ACT TWO 18. 31 CONTINUED: WESLEY Standard orbit, aye. PICARD Open hailing frequencies. WORF Hailing frequencies open. PICARD 'Aucdet Nine, this is Captain Jean-Luc Picard of the USS Enterprise. There is a pause, then the viewscreen comes alive. A MAN APPEARS. He's dressed in a disposable lab coat and wearing a twenty-fourth century medical mask pushed up on the top of his head. His name is LIEUTENANT COMMANDER HESTER DEALT. INTERCUT VIEWSCREEN WHERE NECESSARY. HESTER Ah... yes... Enterprise you're here at last. Good. PICARD Excuse me, to whom am I speaking? HESTER Oh... I'm Lieutenant Commander Hester Dealt. The medical trustee of the Federation Medical Collection Station. PICARD Are the specimens ready for transfer? HESTER Yes, but with your permission I would like to inspect the containment area before we proceed. It is not that I doubt the ability of your crew; we just cannot afford a mistake. PICARD I appreciate your caution -- in the same vein, I need a complete, detailed manifest of everything which you intend to bring on board my ship. STAR TREK: "The Child" - 9/20/88 - ACT TWO 19. 31 CONTINUED: (2) HESTER I will allow access to the computer banks. The screen returns to a view of 'aucdet Nine. PICARD (to Data) Download the inventory and go through it with Doctor Pulaski. (to Riker) Number One, arrange to have Hester Dealt transported up. TROI Captain, I'm suddenly feeling a little tired. I'll be in my quarters if you need me. Picard nods. Troi gets slowly up and walks to the turbolift. Picard watches her leave. In the b.g. Worf also watches. He is still very uneasy. 32 INT. TROI'S QUARTERS She steps up to her sink. She touches her face with a wet cloth as she studies her image in the mirror. The emotional strain of this event is etched on her features. She looks down at her swollen body.... TROI It won't be long now. Soon you'll arrive and so many questions will be answered. The thought makes her smile. 33 EXT. SPACE - THE ENTERPRISE (OPTICAL) in orbit around 'aucdet Nine. 34 INT. CARGO HOLD FIVE Hester Dealt continues his inspection on the containment area, which is a very large rectangular object suspended off the floor of the Cargo Deck. It has a very sophisticated monitoring system for the hundreds of compartments within. STAR TREK: "The Child" - 9/20/88 - ACT TWO 20. 34 CONTINUED: HESTER This is very good. Exactly what's needed. GEORDI I just followed your instructions. HESTER Good. Exactly what I wanted. Hester moves around the containment area -- over -- under -- up -- down -- inspecting it from every possible angle. HESTER (continuing) Five hundred and twelve compartments. Individually controlled. Very good. Independent of one another. Perfect. Ah, they can be monitored from here. And, isolation is assured. Very, very good. GEORDI I wanted to be sure they wouldn't get out. HESTER Good, Lieutenant. Very good indeed. RIKER'S COM VOICE How's it coming, Mister La Forge? HESTER It will be just a little while longer. I want to go over it again in more detail. GEORDI It will be another couple of hours, Commander. HESTER You do understand, it's critical that we have zero growth. STAR TREK: "The Child" - 9/20/88 - ACT TWO 21. 34 CONTINUED: (2) GEORDI (then to Hester Dealt) Oh, yes. I understand. So, you go over it as many times as you want. 34A EXT. SPACE - ENTERPRISE (OPTICAL) in orbit around 'aucdet Nine. PICARD (V.O.) It's been fourteen hours since we arrived at 'aucdet Nine. Hester Dealt is making final selections of the specimens we will carry. Meanwhile, we continue to receive desperate pleas from the Rachelis System. 35 INT. MAIN BRIDGE Data is finishing up something at Science One. DATA Captain, the final manifest has been received. PICARD At last. Review it with Doctor Pulaski. I want both of you to be completely familiar with it. DATA Aye sir. Data leaves Science One and crosses to the turbolift. 36 INT. CORRIDOR The turbolift doors open and Data steps into the corridor. As he turns toward Sickbay he sees Troi, walking with some difficulty. He quickly goes to her aid. TROI Data -- help me get to Sickbay. He offers his arm for support and together they continue along. STAR TREK: "The Child" - 9/20/88 - ACT TWO 22. 37 INT. DOCTOR PULASKI'S OFFICE The Doctor looks up as someone enters. 38 ANOTHER ANGLE It's Troi and Data. TROI It's time. PULASKI Oh, you bet it is. Let's get you into Sickbay. As she helps Troi through Sickbay, Data touches his communicator. DATA Worf -- assemble your security team in Sickbay. PULASKI Is that necessary? DATA Yes -- captain's orders. He then follows them into Sickbay. PULASKI (to Troi) Strange to need armed guards in the delivery room. TROI Yes, and strange to think my child is the cause. PULASKI Before you referred to it as "the child," now it's become your child. TROI Yes, whatever his beginnings, that's what he's become. They exit Sickbay. STAR TREK: "The Child" - 9/20/88 - ACT TWO 23. 39 INT. SICKBAY - MATERNITY They enter and Pulaski leads Troi to the bed. Her MEDICAL ASSISTANTS move to prepare for the delivery. Data comes up behind them. PULASKI How frequent are your contractions? TROI Very close together. PULASKI In all my other deliveries -- with a couple of exceptions -- the father was present. TROI Difficult under the circumstances. PULASKI It's unfortunate you have to go through this alone. It helps to have someone with you. DATA Perhaps I could serve in that capacity. I can quickly review the procedures I will be required to execute. PULASKI Troi is going to need the comfort of a "human" touch... Not the cold hand of technology. Data reaction. TROI Doctor. I think Commander Data will do nicely. A look from the doctor to Troi and back to Data. PULASKI Your choice. 40 ANOTHER ANGLE as the doctor and her assistants prepare Sickbay and Troi for the delivery. STAR TREK: "The Child" - 9/20/88 - ACT TWO 24. 40 CONTINUED: TROI There is nothing specific you have to do, Data, you just have to be with me. PULASKI There is nothing to be nervous about. DATA This is very interesting to me. Although I understand in technical terms how life is formed, there is still a part of the process which eludes my understanding. I began my existence as an adult. I have no memory -- no cognizance of conception, birth, childhood, so to be allowed to witness this event is... Troi grabs his hand. TROI It's happening. DATA (alarmed) Doctor! Pulaski steps over. PULASKI This is an impatient baby. He's eager to make his appearance. She picks up her hypospray. PULASKI (continuing) I'll give you something for the pain. It won't in any way diminish the experience. TROI I have felt no pain. PULASKI None? TROI No... none at all. STAR TREK: "The Child" - 9/20/88 - ACT TWO 25. 40A INT. CORRIDOR - ENTRANCE TO SICKBAY Worf and SECURITY TEAM arrive. 41 ANOTHER ANGLE - SICKBAY They now have Troi in position in the birthing chair. Worf and the security team enter and take up their positions as Pulaski and her Assistant prepare for the delivery. PULASKI Have your security team stand over there. I understand the need to have you here, but keep out from under foot. 42 AND NOW THE BIRTH (INTERCUT THE PIECES OF THE EVENT) This is more than just the wondrous act of life. It has as well the added tension of Worf and his security team. Data, and his first close encounter with creation of the thing he understands least -- life. As this sequence begins, Riker appears in the background. He stands to the side -- out of the way, but there in case his friend, Deanna Troi, needs him. WE WILL LAY THIS OUT, BASED ON HOW A CHILD IS BORN ON THE TWENTY-FOURTH CENTURY ENTERPRISE. And the CHILD comes out -- Worf edges closer -- the doctor takes it to one side. Ties the cord, cleans it, and brings it back to Troi. This is an effortless birth -- no pain -- no strain. PULASKI Are easy births the norm for Betazoids? TROI Not according to my mother. PULASKI (as she hands it to Troi) It's a boy. A normal, healthy, six pound, three ounce baby boy. Then to Worf. STAR TREK: "The Child" - 9/20/88 - ACT TWO 26. 42 CONTINUED: PULASKI (continuing; without any edge) You can come the rest of the way in now. Worf enters and approaches the baby as he would a deadly snake. 43 ANOTHER ANGLE as Worf and the newborn exchange looks. PULASKI No threat here, Lieutenant, you and your men can relax... it's just a baby. Worf reacts. 44 TROI as she holds the baby. Data leans in to see the child. DATA It was remarkable. Thank you for allowing me to participate. PULASKI Do you have a name? TROI Ian Andrew, after my father. PULASKI (she touches her communicator) Captain. PICARD'S COM VOICE Picard here. PULASKI Counselor Troi is the mother of a very healthy baby boy. Mother and child are both doing well. PICARD'S COM VOICE Counselor, my best wishes to you and your son. STAR TREK: "The Child" - 9/20/88 - ACT TWO 27. 44 CONTINUED: TROI Thank you, sir. Riker now steps forward to pay his respects. He leans down and kisses her on the forehead. TROI (continuing) Have you been here all along? RIKER Yes. (then just for her) He's beautiful, Deanna... just like his mother. (to Worf) I don't think you are going to be needed here, Lieutenant. Worf nods an acknowledgement and leads his security team off. Riker and Troi exchange looks and he too exits. PULASKI How do you feel? TROI Fine. Absolutely wonderful and thank you, Doctor... for everything. PULASKI (as she does a scan of Troi and the baby, her face registers surprise) Amazing. 45 EXT. SPACE - THE ENTERPRISE (OPTICAL) in orbit around 'aucdet Nine. 46 INT. MAIN BRIDGE The turbolift opens and for the first time Pulaski steps onto the bridge. STAR TREK: "The Child" - 9/20/88 - ACT TWO 28. 46 CONTINUED: PICARD Welcome to the bridge, Doctor. How's Counselor Troi? Did she have a good night? PULASKI I have delivered dozens of babies. But none like this. There was no pain, no trauma. It was effortless for both of them. PICARD I'm not sure of your point. PULASKI She had the baby yesterday. If I were to examine her now, I would not be able to tell that she just had a baby, or ever had a baby. It's as though the incident never happened. PICARD (to Data) How long before we are ready to begin the transfer? DATA Two hours, nineteen minutes. PICARD (he stands) You have the Conn, Number One. RIKER Aye, sir. PICARD Doctor, you would accompany me, please. I think it's time I paid my respects. 47 INT. CORRIDOR - ENTRANCE TO TROI'S QUARTERS Picard and Pulaski approach the doorway. The CHIME SOUNDS. From inside Troi says: TROI Come in. The doors open and they enter. STAR TREK: "The Child" - 9/20/88 - ACT TWO 29. 48 INT. TROI'S QUARTERS Troi's back is to him. She is doing something with her child. PICARD I wanted to come by and see how you were and have a look at your... At this moment the CHILD looks out from around Troi. It is already THREE YEARS OLD! PICARD (continuing) ... baby! My goodness. The Doctor takes out her medical recorder and does a quick body scan of the child. PICARD (continuing) How old is he? PULASKI In actuality a day. PICARD Yes, but... PULASKI ... In appearance, almost four earth years old. TROI Ian, say hello to Captain Picard. PICARD You mean he can talk? The boy answers. IAN Hello. Picard is stunned. PICARD Hello, Ian. Picard moves closer. IAN Don't worry. Everything is fine. STAR TREK: "The Child" - 9/20/88 - ACT TWO 30. 48 CONTINUED: Off their reactions we: FADE OUT. END OF ACT TWO STAR TREK: "The Child" - 9/20/88 - ACT THREE 31. ACT THREE FADE IN: 49 EXT. SPACE - THE ENTERPRISE (OPTICAL) in a parking orbit near 'aucdet Nine. PICARD (V.O.) Captain's log, supplemental. We are faced with two major problems: Troi's child and the deadly cargo we are about to load, which is so desperately needed in the Rachelis system. In the hours since his birth, Troi's baby has continued to age and now appears, physically and mentally, to be a child of eight. And still there is no indication as to who he is, or why he is here. 50 INT. MAIN BRIDGE Picard and everyone else in place. RIKER Sickbay, this is the bridge. We are ready to begin loading. PULASKI'S COM VOICE We need a little more time. It's taking longer than we anticipated. 51 INT. DOCTOR PULASKI'S OFFICE (OPTICAL) She is at her desk-top computer terminal as Data enters. PULASKI Data, (she says "Data" with a short A) look at this. DATA (he corrects her) Data. STAR TREK: "The Child" - 9/20/88 - ACT THREE 32. 51 CONTINUED: PULASKI What? DATA My name. It is pronounced Data. PULASKI (with a wry smile) Oh? DATA You called me Data. PULASKI What's the difference? DATA One is my name and the other is not. PULASKI Is this possible? Data is puzzled by the apparent non sequitur. Pulaski stands, picks up her medical recorder, steps over to Data and begins a body scan. PULASKI (continuing) In all of your neural nets, algorithms, and heuristics, is there some combination which makes up a circuit for bruised feelings? Data looks confused. PULASKI (continuing) Apparently so, because I think I just offended your tender sensibilities. She looks at the puzzled Data. PULASKI (continuing) Possible? Then with an amused look, gets back to business. STAR TREK: "The Child" - 9/20/88 - ACT THREE 33. 51 CONTINUED: (2) PULASKI (continuing; indicating the CRT) I am unfamiliar with these symbols. Data steps around and examines the screen. DATA It indicates a genetically engineered biological life-form. PULASKI About twenty percent of the specimens fall into that category. (to herself) Some eager beaver at play. DATA Query... "eager beaver?" PULASKI In this case, 'eager beaver' refers to some overachieving genetic engineer, who probably for lack of something better to do forced this strain of virus to mutate, just to see how bad, bad can get. (touches her communicator) Captain Picard. INTERCUT WITH MAIN BRIDGE AS NEEDED. PICARD Picard here. PULASKI Just so you fully appreciate the risks we are about to take... PICARD Enlighten me. PULASKI If the most innocuous specimen on the manifest list gets loose, it will destroy all life on the Enterprise in a matter of hours. STAR TREK: "The Child" - 9/20/88 - ACT THREE 34. 51 CONTINUED: (3) PICARD I understand, Doctor. Do you have a recommendation? PULASKI Considering how desperately this is needed, no I don't. Just want you to know what we're carrying. PICARD Thank you, Doctor. Commander Data, if you have completed your review, you are needed in Transporter Room Three. DATA Yes, sir. (to Pulaski) Excuse me, Doctor. PULASKI That's okay... (with long A, then short A) Data, Data... whatever. He gives the doctor a look. Doctor Pulaski returns to her viewscreen. 52 INT. CHILDREN'S PLAY AREA (OPTICAL) Troi is standing by the door with the TEACHER (MISS GLADSTONE). They are watching a GROUP OF KIDS playing with a half a dozen puppies. Sitting right in the middle of everything and playing with abandon is IAN, WHO IS NOW ALMOST EIGHT. Troi is enthralled by the actions of her "son." TROI Ian! The boy looks up and smiles when he sees his mother. Then he notices a LITTLE GIRL next to him. Ian takes his hands off the puppy, and puts them (without any sense of threat, just curiosity) on the girl's hair. MISS GLADSTONE He's a very tactile child. He wants to touch and feel everything. STAR TREK: "The Child" - 9/20/88 - ACT THREE 35. 52 CONTINUED: TROI Come on, sweetheart, time to go. Ian scrambles to his feet and trots over to his mother and gives her a big hug. MISS GLADSTONE Unbelievable -- I think he's actually grown since you dropped him off. IAN I like it here, Mommy. TROI I thought you would. Thank Miss Gladstone for having you, and let's go get you something to eat. IAN (to the teacher) Thank you. Ian then turns and waves to the other kids who are still involved with the puppies. IAN (continuing) Bye... Some of the other children wave -- most are too involved in what they are doing to notice. TROI (also to the teacher) Thank you. Miss Gladstone nods an acknowledgement, then watches them leave. Her eyes reflect the amazement she feels about Troi's unusual child. 53 INT. TRANSPORTER ROOM THREE Data arrives. TRANSPORTER CHIEF The transporter is not making a positive lock. STAR TREK: "The Child" - 9/20/88 - ACT THREE 36. 53 CONTINUED: DATA The built-in inhibitor is restricting onloading of life-forms known to be hazardous to the occupants of this ship. Have you attempted override? TRANSPORTER CHIEF I don't have the authority. Data steps in behind the console. DATA Computer, recognize -- Lieutenant Commander N-F-N, N-M-I, Data. COMPUTER VOICE Authorization accepted. DATA Initiate override protocol. COMPUTER VOICE Override protocol is not recommended in this situation. DATA Acknowledged. On my authority -- begin override. There is a pause. COMPUTER VOICE Sequence complete. The TRANSPORTER CHIEF inputs the coordinates. TRANSPORTER CHIEF Cargo Deck Five. We will commence transport on your command. 54 INT. CARGO DECK FIVE Riker, Geordi and a couple of crewmembers are by the containment grid. Geordi does a final visual survey of the area. GEORDI Transporter Three -- we are ready to receive. STAR TREK: "The Child" - 9/20/88 - ACT THREE 37. 55 INT. TRANSPORTER ROOM THREE as Data watches the Transporter Chief manipulate the controls. 56 INT. CARGO DECK FIVE (OPTICAL) Riker and Geordi watch as the deadly little ampules are BEAMED into position. Next to Geordi is a CRT which reads out the contents of the little containers. GEORDI (to Data) Data, the first batch is in place. Ready for the next. RIKER Inform me when loading is complete and the cargo secure. GEORDI Aye, sir. Riker exits the Cargo Deck as the second batch of specimens appears within the containment grid. 57 INT. TRANSPORTER ROOM THREE The Transporter Chief sets in the coordinates and beams up the next load. 58 INT. TROI'S QUARTERS Troi and eight-year-old Ian are there. The doors open. Picard and Pulaski enter. PULASKI I wanted to stop by and see how Ian was doing. TROI We're doing fine. I was just going to give Ian his supper. IAN (to Picard) Do you want your supper now, too? PICARD No, Ian, but thank you for the invitation. STAR TREK: "The Child" - 9/20/88 - ACT THREE 38. 58 CONTINUED: IAN You're welcome. A spoon which Ian is playing with more than using, slips out of his hand and falls on the floor. Picard retrieves it. IAN (continuing) Have you ever played with puppies? Picard looks to Troi for an explanation. Troi smiles. TROI They had a litter today in the nursery. PICARD No, I have never played with puppies. IAN You'd like it. You should go to the nursery while the puppies are still there. PICARD. Perhaps later. Troi puts the boy's supper down in front of him. It includes some hot steaming soup. Picard and Pulaski watch as Ian examines his food. He tries to touch the steam coming off the soup, then feels the wetness on his little fingers. Everything connected with his physical senses fascinates the child. He sticks his hand into the hot soup and holds it there for a beat: IAN (pulling it out) Ouch... He looks at his scalded fingers. Tears well up in his eyes and like any other child his age; he runs to his mother. IAN (continuing) Ow... Mommy... ow... Troi gathers the boy into her arms as the doctor steps over. STAR TREK: "The Child" - 9/20/88 - ACT THREE 39. 58 CONTINUED: (2) PULASKI Let me look at that. Ian holds out the fingers and watches with great interest as Pulaski uses one of the instruments from the pocket of her smock to medicate the fingers. PULASKI (continuing) It's not serious. Ian studies his fingers as he realizes the pain is gone. Then he touches his cheek and feels the tears. IAN My face is wet. Troi gently dries his tears with the tips of her fingers, then lovingly strokes his hair. TROI Is it better now, sweetheart? The boy nods and cuddles in against his mother. PULASKI He allowed himself to be burned. PICARD Yes, for the experience. PULASKI Who is he? Why is he here? What does he want? 59 PICARD He watches the child intently. PICARD Ian, could you tell us why you are here? IAN Because Mommy said it was time to eat. Reactions from Troi and the doctor. STAR TREK: "The Child" - 9/20/88 - ACT THREE 40. 59 CONTINUED: PICARD No, I mean... why you are here on this ship? IAN I live here. TROI Ian, the captain wants to know if you are ready to tell us why you came here. IAN No. Not yet. Ian picks up the glass, which unlike the soup, this is cold. TROI The answer is within him. When his cognitive powers develop sufficiently, he will be able to articulate it. PICARD I hope he will tell us soon. He takes some of the liquid into his mouth... rolls it around, swallows some, and lets the rest run down his chin. Picard watches as Ian pours some of the liquid onto his leg just to know how it feels, then he turns and walks toward the exit. RIKER'S COM VOICE Captain to the bridge. PICARD I'm on my way, Number One. (to Troi) Keep me apprised of his progress, Counselor. Pulaski stays behind with Troi and her baby. IAN (too late for Picard to respond) Bye... STAR TREK: "The Child" - 9/20/88 - ACT THREE 41. 60 OMITTED 61 INT. MAIN BRIDGE Picard steps off the turbolift to the bridge. Riker is beside him. Data is at Ops -- Worf at the Tactical Station. The other positions are filled with n.d. crewmembers. RIKER The cargo has been loaded and is secure. PICARD Take us out of orbit, Number One -- then set a course for Rachelis -- warp nine. 62 thru OMITTED 63 64 EXT. TEN-FORWARD (OPTICAL) Wesley steps up to the window, still carrying the weight of his decision. Guinan watches him cross the room and stand in front of the large center window. 65 GUINAN AND WESLEY (OPTICAL) She comes up beside him. GUINAN Can I get you something? WESLEY No. I just wanted to stand here. GUINAN I don't blame you -- it's beautiful. WESLEY Yes. GUINAN How about some nice Mareuvian Tea? WESLEY No. Nothing thank you. STAR TREK: "The Child" - 9/20/88 - ACT THREE 42. 65 CONTINUED: GUINAN You're going to be leaving soon. WESLEY Yes. They both watch as the Enterprise leaves orbit. The planet 'aucdet Nine slips away. As Wesley watches the ship maneuver into position, Guinan watches him. GUINAN What do you see when you look out there? WESLEY Over there is the Lorenze cluster, and there Arneb and there Epsilon Indi. GUINAN No, I don't mean that. I mean when you look there don't you see your future? Wesley gives her a little sideways look. WESLEY It will still be there. GUINAN How about a cup of nectar direct from Prometheus? WESLEY No -- nothing. That's the third time you've asked me. GUINAN It's what I'm expected to do. Don't you always do what's expected? WESLEY I try to. GUINAN Even if it's not what you really want? STAR TREK: "The Child" - 9/20/88 - ACT THREE 43. 65 CONTINUED: (2) WESLEY Sometimes. Sometimes you have to consider others more than yourself. GUINAN That's true. But sometimes the game is to know when to consider yourself more than others and to give yourself permission to be... selfish. He looks at her. Then -- before he can answer, the Enterprise leaps to warp speed. The star field becomes a spectacular display. We PLAY THE REACTIONS of Guinan and Wesley. 66 EXT. SPACE - ENTERPRISE (OPTICAL) moves along at warp speed. 67 INT. CARGO DECK FIVE (OPTICAL) A concerned Hester Dealt is scanning the containment grid with his very sophisticated monitoring equipment. HESTER (real concern) Something's wrong. Geordi approaches Hester Dealt. GEORDI What is it? HESTER Growth. GEORDI Where? HESTER L-seven-three. Geordi steps over to the side of the containment area, and activates a CRT screen. The screen has a display of the 512 modules inside. Each has a series of indicators, ONE ON THE FAR SIDE IS FLASHING. Geordi manipulates the panel so the display turns, giving him a better look at the flashing light. STAR TREK: "The Child" - 9/20/88 - ACT THREE 44. 67 CONTINUED: GEORDI (touches his communicator) Bridge, this is Cargo Deck Five. PICARD'S COM VOICE Yes, Lieutenant La Forge. GEORDI There is a malfunction in the containment area. PICARD'S COM VOICE How serious? HESTER Very. FADE OUT. END OF ACT THREE STAR TREK: "The Child" - 9/20/88 - ACT FOUR 45. ACT FOUR FADE IN: 68 EXT. SPACE - THE ENTERPRISE (OPTICAL) traveling at warp speed. PICARD (V.O.) Captain's log, supplemental. For reasons as yet unknown, one of the specimens of Plasma Plague is growing. 69 INT. CARGO DECK FIVE Geordi and Hester Dealt continue checking. With a handheld monitoring device, Hester Dealt makes a sweep of the Cargo Deck. GEORDI (touches his communicator) Captain, the power to the containment grid must have somehow been affected when we increased to warp velocity. INTERCUT THE MAIN BRIDGE AS NEEDED PICARD I don't see how that would be possible. GEORDI I don't either, but if we could return to impulse, we would know for sure. PICARD Impulse velocity. 70 EXT. SPACE - THE ENTERPRISE (OPTICAL) as it comes out of warp. STAR TREK: "The Child" - 9/20/88 - ACT FOUR 46. 71 OMITTED 72 INT. MAIN BRIDGE The tension level is growing. PICARD Report, Mister La Forge. 73 INT. CARGO DECK FIVE Geordi waits as Hester Dealt checks his monitoring equipment, then shakes his head. GEORDI There's no change. It wasn't the warp drive. 74 INT. MAIN BRIDGE Picard did not expect any. Riker is on his feet and heading for the turbolift. RIKER Permission to leave the bridge. PICARD Granted. RIKER Commander Data, you're with me. Data leaves his position and follows Riker. PICARD Doctor Pulaski. 75 INT. DOCTOR PULASKI'S OFFICE Pulaski is running through some medical records. PULASKI Yes, Captain. PICARD'S COM VOICE We are having some difficulties on Cargo Deck Five -- your presence is requested. She is thoughtful for a beat. STAR TREK: "The Child" - 9/20/88 - ACT FOUR 47. 75 CONTINUED: PULASKI I'm on my way. 75A INT. TEN-FORWARD (FORMERLY SCENE 71) Wesley and Guinan are at the bar. Wesley is eating a twenty-fourth century Enterprise version of an ice cream sundae. His mood is much lighter, indicating he has come to some decision regarding his future. WESLEY You never talk about yourself. GUINAN Sure I do... all the time. WESLEY People say you are very old... GUINAN Oh? WESLEY ... and that you knew Captain Picard when he was on the Stargazer. GUINAN No. I never met the captain until I came onboard. WESLEY Everyone is very curious about you. GUINAN I'll bet they are. WESLEY About where you come from. GUINAN Where do they say? WESLEY I heard that you're from Nova Kron and that... PICARD'S COM VOICE Mister Crusher, report to the bridge. STAR TREK: "The Child" - 9/20/88 - ACT FOUR 48. 75A CONTINUED: He's on his feet and heading for the door. WESLEY I've got to go. Wesley stops and turns back. WESLEY (continuing) Thank you. GUINAN There's nothing like a dish of Delovian souffle. WESLEY I didn't mean the souffle, I meant for... well... the rest. Thanks. GUINAN That's why I'm here. 76 INT. MAIN BRIDGE The turbolift opens and Wesley Crusher comes onto the bridge. PICARD Take the Conn, Mister Crusher. Wesley replaces the crewmember at that position. PICARD (continuing) On this course -- increase velocity to warp nine. WESLEY Aye, sir. Warp nine. 77 OMITTED 78 INT. CARGO DECK FIVE Hester, Data, Riker are gathered around the monitoring equipment. Geordi is off to one side peering at a distant sector of the containment field. THE INDICATOR LIGHT OF L-SEVEN-THREE CONTINUES TO FLASH. STAR TREK: "The Child" - 9/20/88 - ACT FOUR 49. 78 CONTINUED: RIKER Why that module and not the others? DATA Computer, run diagnostic on module L-seven-three. COMPUTER VOICE All circuits functional. GEORDI (reading it off) Temperature -- as set -- minus ninety-seven degrees. Humidity -- twelve percent. Lumins -- zero. Electromagnetic containment integrity... Everything right down the line... exactly as it should be. DATA Perhaps it is a sensor malfunction. Computer -- query. Is growth actually occurring? COMPUTER VOICE Confirmed. 79 ANOTHER ANGLE (OPTICAL) as the door opens and Doctor Pulaski enters. She nods a greeting to Riker and the others, then steps over beside Geordi who continues studying the distant section of the containment grid. RIKER One of the specimens is growing. PULASKI (to Hester Dealt) Destroy it, now. HESTER I can't. RIKER Data, prepare to jettison that module. STAR TREK: "The Child" - 9/20/88 - ACT FOUR 50. 79 CONTINUED: HESTER We can't do that either. It will go into a spore and remain until it comes in contact with a planet or another ship. The results would be disastrous. RIKER Commander, your attitude tells me that however bad I think this is... it's worse. HESTER (he indicates the containment area) This is not going to hold it. RIKER Go on. HESTER The rate of growth is increasing. Within thirty minutes it will push out of the module. Within two hours, it will breach the containment area. GEORDI It can't break through this. HESTER Yes it can. RIKER (touches his communicator) Captain. We may not be able to get control of this situation. I recommend making arrangements to transfer all non-essential personnel to the saucer section. If we lose containment we should be prepared to separate. PICARD'S COM VOICE Make it so. PULASKI Why this one specimen and none of the others? Something is stimulating it. Do you have its etiology? How it was developed? STAR TREK: "The Child" - 9/20/88 - ACT FOUR 51. 79 CONTINUED: (2) Hester inputs the freestanding viewscreen, and the HISTORY OF "L-SEVEN-THREE" APPEARS. Pulaski looks at it. PULASKI It's a mutated strain developed by Doctor Susan Nuress during an outbreak of Plasma Plague seventy years ago in the Oby System. (she pauses as she continues to read) It was number nine in a series of tests. This particular one bombarded by low levels of Eichner radiation. (then she turns to Hester) Could exposure to Eichner radiation stimulate growth? As a reflex act, Hester Dealt makes a sweep of the area with his handheld monitor. HESTER Yes, it could, but... He stops... his expression says... HESTER (continuing) Uh, oh... PULASKI Don't tell me. HESTER I'm detecting low levels of Eichner radiation. RIKER Why didn't you catch it before? HESTER Because it wasn't here before.. PULASKI Well, it is now. What emits that type radiation? DATA A subspace phase inverter. STAR TREK: "The Child" - 9/20/88 - ACT FOUR 52. 79 CONTINUED: (3) GEORDI We don't have one. DATA Certain cyanoacrylates. PULASKI Also, not on this ship... What else? Because it's here and we better find it. Data has no answer. 80 INT. TROI'S QUARTERS (OPTICAL) Troi is putting the child to bed. She touches a control panel near the windows which turns them to their opaque configuration. IAN I can feel that some of the people are very... worried. TROI Yes. I feel it as well, but don't you worry. IAN It's me Mommy -- I'm the reason. TROI What? IAN It's me. TROI You? IAN Yes. I have to leave you now, or it will be very bad for everyone. TROI What are you saying? He smiles up at her. IAN I have to leave now. STAR TREK: "The Child" - 9/20/88 - ACT FOUR 53. 80 CONTINUED: TROI Leave? (senses what he is about to do) You are going to die. No. No, you can't. He smiles up and closes his eyes. TROI (continuing; she touches her communicator) Sickbay, this is Counselor Troi, I need the doctor in my quarters... right now. (then she lifts Ian to her) No... Ian... No. Off Troi's reaction. FADE OUT. END OF ACT FOUR STAR TREK: "The Child" - 9/20/88 - ACT FIVE 54. ACT FIVE FADE IN: 81 INT. TROI'S QUARTERS as Pulaski leads the others to Troi's quarters. TROI It's Ian. Please... please hurry. Pulaski moves quickly to the unconscious child; pulls back the covers. She removes an instrument from her smock and makes a scan of the child's body. In the b.g., Picard enters with Riker and Data. TROI (continuing) Save him, you must save him. PULASKI What happened? Did he eat anything? Did he fall? TROI No. Data, using his tricorder, confirms with a nod to Riker. DATA The child is the source of the unusual radiation. TROI He said he's the reason the ship is in danger. DATA That analysis is correct. Pulaski injects the child with hypospray. PULASKI I'm losing life signs. Troi stands by helplessly. Like any mother in this situation, she is beyond grief. Tears streak her face. TROI Oh, please. Please save him. STAR TREK: "The Child" - 9/20/88 - ACT FIVE 55. 82 PULASKI resets the injector and again she administers a dose of hypospray. She waits for a reaction. There is none. 83 ANOTHER ANGLE (OPTICAL) The room is very quiet. Pulaski stands. PULASKI I'm sorry. Troi moves next to the cot on which the child is lying. She is beyond despair. Her heart has completely broken. The others allow her a moment alone, then as Riker is about to move to Troi's side, a LIGHT -- the glowing energy which we saw at the beginning -- gathers from within the child and slowly rises. As it does, the body that was Ian fades away until there is only the LIGHT. 84 INTERCUT REACTIONS (OPTICAL) Troi reaches out and with cupped hands she collects the LIGHT, cradles it gently and brings it to her. As she holds it close, it makes her face all aglow. Slowly the pain and despair drain away, and through the tears she smiles. The joy she now feels shines from her eyes. The Betazoid within her, embraces the essence of the entity before her and she knows now why he came and what he wanted. Then, in an act of pure love, she releases the glowing energy as she would a dove. For a beat the LIGHT seems reluctant to leave. Then it does. It passes effortlessly through the wall of the ship and away. Troi stares after it for a beat. GEORDI'S COM VOICE (excited -- relieved) Captain. The containment field has stabilized. PICARD Thank you, Lieutenant. Troi turns and looks at her captain and shipmates. TROI Then Ian was right. He was the cause. STAR TREK: "The Child" - 9/20/88 - ACT FIVE 56. 84 CONTINUED: PICARD Apparently so. Troi pauses, gathering her feelings and picking her words carefully. She settles her emotions. TROI He is a life-force entity... as we passed each other in space he was curious and wanted to know about us, and he thought the best way to learn was to go through the process. To be born, to live as one of us and in that way to understand us. She pauses, then: TROI (continuing) Captain, he never meant any harm. Picard nods -- he knows that is true. RIKER There was a moment when you smiled. TROI (she smiles again) He said thank you. (she pauses) I told him we will miss him -- and I will. The others will also miss him. 85 EXT. SPACE - THE ENTERPRISE (OPTICAL) as it enters orbit near Science Station Tango Sierra. 86 INT. MAIN BRIDGE Picard is in his command chair, Riker beside him, Wesley at Conn. PICARD Standard station approach, Mister Crusher. STAR TREK: "The Child" - 9/20/88 - ACT FIVE 57. 86 CONTINUED: WESLEY Standard approach, aye. PICARD Transporter Room Three, this is the captain. We have arrived. Let's make this transfer with all deliberate speed, and get on about our business. DATA'S COM VOICE Yes, sir. RIKER I will be glad to be relieved of this cargo. Picard rises. PICARD You have the bridge, Number One. RIKER Yes sir. As Picard crosses the bridge, Ensign Wesley Crusher buttonholes him. WESLEY Captain. PICARD Yes Ensign? WESLEY Could I see you when you have a moment? PICARD In my Ready Room when your duties permit. WESLEY Thank you, sir. Picard continues on and leaves the bridge. 87 INT. CARGO DECK FIVE (OPTICAL) Geordi and Hester Dealt are standing next to the containment area. STAR TREK: "The Child" - 9/20/88 - ACT FIVE 58. 87 CONTINUED: GEORDI Good luck. The TRANSPORTER BEAM takes over and removes Hester Dealt from the Enterprise. GEORDI (touches his communicator) Data, you can lock on to the first group and begin transporting on my mark. 88 INT. PICARD'S READY ROOM The CHIME RINGS. PICARD Come. The doors open. It's Ensign Crusher. He enters and stands in front of Picard's desk. PICARD Yes, Ensign. WESLEY (hesitant) Captain... I have thought about this a lot. I want to remain on the Enterprise. PICARD Oh. Have you discussed this with your mother? WESLEY No, before I do that, I wanted your permission to stay. PICARD Wes, it's a little more complicated than that. WESLEY Captain, for right now... this is where I want to be. This is where I feel I belong. Picard studies the young man for a beat. STAR TREK: "The Child" - 9/20/88 - ACT FIVE 59. 88 CONTINUED: RIKER'S COM VOICE Captain -- transfer complete. We are ready to leave orbit. PICARD Make it so, Number One. (then to Wesley) Return to your position. Wesley hesitates a beat because he still hasn't received an answer. 89 INT. MAIN BRIDGE Picard -- followed by Wesley -- comes on to the bridge. Troi steps off the turbolift and takes her place. RIKER All stations secure. PICARD Take us out of orbit, Mister Crusher and lay in a course for the Morgana Quadrant. WESLEY Yes, sir. Picard takes his seat. PICARD (loud enough for everyone to hear) Mister Crusher has requested to remain on the Enterprise. RIKER I'm not surprised. How did you respond? PICARD I haven't as yet, Number One. I don't think it's my decision alone. His remaining will cause difficulties for us all. RIKER Yes, indeed. With his mother not around, who will see to his studies? STAR TREK: "The Child" - 9/20/88 - ACT FIVE 60. 89 CONTINUED: PICARD Exactly. That duty would fall to Commander Data. RIKER And, who'll tuck him in at night? WESLEY Come on, Commander. WORF I will accept that responsibility. TROI Well, we know he'll get his sleep. PICARD Then, Number One, that leaves you the task of guiding young Mister Crusher through his most hazardous journey -- from youth to man. Are you willing to serve? RIKER Difficult question... Wesley turns and looks at Riker with a plea in his eyes. INTERCUT look between them. RIKER (continuing) ... Yes, I think I can do that. PICARD All right then. Mister Crusher, communicate with your mother at Starfleet Medical headquarters. Give her my regards and tell her you have my permission to remain on board the Enterprise. There is a big smile on Wesley's face. PICARD (continuing) But, that I will abide by her wishes. WESLEY Yes, sir... thank you sir... I just know she'll agree. STAR TREK: "The Child" - 9/20/88 - ACT FIVE 61. 89 CONTINUED: (2) PICARD Now -- if you have course and speed laid in. WESLEY (back to duty) Yes sir, they are. PICARD Then, Mister Crusher -- engage. 90 EXT. SPACE - THE ENTERPRISE (OPTICAL) moves off to its next assignment. FADE OUT. END OF ACT FIVE THE END STAR TREK: THE NEXT GENERATION "Where Silence Has Lease" #40272-128 Written by Jack B. Sowards Directed by Winrich Kolbe THE WRITING CREDITS MAY NOT BE FINAL AND SHOULD NOT BE USED FOR PUBLICITY OR ADVERTISING PURPOSES WITHOUT FIRST CHECKING WITH THE TELEVISION LEGAL DEPARTMENT. Copyright 1988 Paramount Pictures Corporation. All Rights Reserved. This script is not for publication or reproduction. No one is authorized to dispose of same. If lost or destroyed, please notify the Script Department. REVISED FINAL DRAFT SEPTEMBER 27, 1988 STAR TREK: "Where Silence... " - 9/27/88 - CAST STAR TREK: THE NEXT GENERATION "Where Silence Has Lease" CAST PICARD NAGILUM RIKER DATA Non-Speaking PULASKI TWO ALIEN WARRIORS TROI GEORDI WORF WESLEY TRANSPORTER CHIEF HASKELL Voice-Over COMPUTER VOICE STAR TREK: "Where Silence... " - 9/27/88 - SETS STAR TREK: THE NEXT GENERATION "Where Silence Has Lease" SETS INTERIORS EXTERIORS USS ENTERPRISE USS ENTERPRISE MAIN BRIDGE HOLODECK USS YAMATO GEORDI'S OFFICE GEORDI'S AFT BRIDGE STATION ROMULAN VESSEL TRANSPORTER ROOM OBSERVATION LOUNGE CORRIDOR MAIN ENGINEERING - COMPUTER ROOM PICARD'S QUARTERS CAPTAIN'S READY ROOM USS YAMATO CORRIDOR MAIN BRIDGE SECOND BRIDGE STAR TREK: "Where Silence... " - 9/27/88 - PRONUNCIATION GUIDE STAR TREK: THE NEXT GENERATION "Where Silence Has Lease" PRONUNCIATION GUIDE NAGILUM nah-GHEE-lum STAR TREK: "Where Silence... " - 9/27/88 - TEASER 1. STAR TREK: THE NEXT GENERATION "Where Silence Has Lease" TEASER FADE IN: 1 EXT. SPACE - THE ENTERPRISE (OPTICAL) It is moving gracefully at full impulse. 2 INT. MAIN BRIDGE JEAN-LUC PICARD is in the command chair. TROI is beside him. DATA is at Ops; WESLEY at Conn. Neither Worf nor Riker is on the bridge. Picard appears to be on edge. TROI You're worried. PICARD With reason. TROI About Worf, or about Commander Riker? PICARD Both. (pauses) I think perhaps it is best to be ignorant of certain elements of the Klingon psyche. Off Troi's reaction. 3 INT. HOLODECK - DEMOLISHED AREA Everywhere there is evidence of a desperate battle, fought on a very primitive level by creatures of consummate rage. 4 CLOSE ON WORF His eyes blaze with controlled fury as he moves carefully around a semi-demolished wall and peers inside the battle-damaged room. He coils as he hears the eerie sound of a low moan, then cautiously steps forward. STAR TREK: "Where Silence... " - 9/27/88 - TEASER 2. 5 RIKER is a few paces behind. He is very tense as he moves closer to the large Klingon warrior. Riker touches the tear in his uniform and massages the bruise on his shoulder. 6 ANOTHER ANGLE - RIKER AND WORF WORF touches RIKER's shoulder, signals him to move to the right. Riker moves off. Worf pauses a beat, then slips away to the left. 7 WIDER ANGLE carrying them to the edge of the rubble-cluttered room. Careful not to touch anything, Worf is moving like a panther. He freezes as the CLICKING SOUND OF METAL ON METAL is barely heard. He waves his arm to Riker, motioning him back, then slowly he also backs away painstakingly, trying to fit his toes back into his exact footsteps. We HOLD on these moves a beat and then suddenly: 8 RIKER spins and looks upward, calls over to Worf. RIKER Above, look out! 9 NEW ANGLE A man-sized boulder drops down from overhead. Worf dives to the side as the boulder smashes the ground in the place where he just stood. 10 ON WORF As he rolls catlike to his feet, the massive form of an ALIEN WARRIOR leaps onto his back bringing him back to the ground. The alien raises a club-like weapon over his head and swings down at Worf's head. 11 RIKER Catches the alien's arm just before the club makes contact and drives him off his feet. He kicks him and follows after him to the other side of the room as: STAR TREK: "Where Silence... " - 9/27/88 - TEASER 3. 12 WORF turns to face the charge of ANOTHER ALIEN who wields a battle axe and swings it in a deadly arc. Worf ducks under the axe and gets a grip on the alien's arm and they press against each other's strength. 13 CLOSER Worf, grunting in a half-roar, slowly forces the alien back, then with a bellow and a gargantuan heave, Worf throws the alien to the side. 14 SCENE Worf leaps at the alien who is caught in half-stride. Worf drives his forearm into his opponent's throat and as he becomes limp, drives a double-handed blow to the back of the alien's head. Worf's enemy drops. 15 RIKER ducks under the alien's club and drives a blow to the lower extremities of his opponent. The attacker doubles over and Riker hits him on the way down. But he no sooner hits the ground than he is back on his feet, charging Riker. Our first officer steps to his side and strikes at the alien as he goes by, heading straight at Worf. 16 NEW ANGLE Worf turns to face the onrushing alien. He thunders out his challenge, picks up the club from the prone alien, swings it at the new rival. 17 REVERSE The alien ducks the blow and swings back. 18 RIKER about to enter into the fight, then he holds a beat, stops and watches somewhat in awe. STAR TREK: "Where Silence... " - 9/27/88 - TEASER 4. 19 WORF / ALIEN The alien connects with a savage blow to Worf's body. Worf takes the blow and returns his own. They trade blows, one for one, taking the pain and returning it. Then slowly the alien sinks to his knees, then rolls over on his side. 20 ON WORF as he steps over the alien warrior, roars out his victorious celebration chant, and lifts the club for the final fatal blow. His eyes are on fire. He smashes it down on his opponent, then spins around for a new battle. 21 RIKER Suddenly a little unsure of Worf's intentions, he backs a step, waits. 22 WORF Worf sounds out a new challenge. He scans the room for his next adversary -- he's still coiled and in need of action. Suddenly he swings his club at the wall. Pounding it with rage. Broken bricks and mortar fly. His fury is all consuming. He rips and slashes at everything standing. 23 NEW ANGLE Riker watches -- still concerned. He thought he knew the power and fury of this Klingon. Worf continues to exercise his rage around the room. Anything that stands, hangs, bulges, protrudes, or is suspended, is demolished until there is nothing left to flatten. Nothing left upright except... Worf turns -- his eyes still blaze as they fall upon... 24 RIKER The only thing left standing. Riker tenses. RIKER It's over. STAR TREK: "Where Silence... " - 9/27/88 - TEASER 5. 25 WORF This seems to have no effect on Worf who seems almost out of control. A snarl -- low and vicious -- pushes out of his twisted mouth. He takes a step forward. RIKER The exercise is over. 26 SCENE Riker calls more sternly. RIKER At ease, Lieutenant! Worf is almost upon Riker before beginning to regain control of himself. He takes a deep breath, forcing himself to become calmer. He flexes his muscles, then seems pleased. 27 EMPHASIZING RIKER (OPTICAL) RIKER Exit Holodeck. The EXIT APPEARS as Riker turns to Worf. RIKER (continuing) You do this every day? WORF No -- usually my calisthenics are more... (he searches for the right word, then settles for) ... intense, but those sessions are too personal to be shared. RIKER (dryly) I'll bet they are. 28 RIKER (OPTICAL) takes a look around at the devastation on the Holodeck and is thankful that Worf is on his side. STAR TREK: "Where Silence... " - 9/27/88 - TEASER 6. 28 CONTINUED: WORF (O.S.) Computer. Program complete -- save. Before Riker's eyes, THE BATTLE SCENE FADES, and all that is left is the empty Holodeck. Worf pauses at the door. WORF (continuing) Coming Commander? RIKER Right behind you. FADE OUT. END OF TEASER STAR TREK: "Where Silence... " - 9/27/88 - ACT ONE 7. ACT ONE FADE IN: 29 EXT. SPACE - THE ENTERPRISE (OPTICAL) is moving through deep space. No large planets or suns nearby... just a Milky Way of distant suns spread across space like a tightly woven blanket of lights. PICARD (V.O.) Captain's log, Stardate 42193.6. We are on a long reach toward the Morgana Quadrant, a section of the galaxy which has yet to be visited by a manned Federation vessel. We are using the time to further detail the charts of this region. 30 INT. MAIN BRIDGE Jean-Luc Picard and Riker stand beside Data as he moves his fingers across the console. The SOUND VARIES, SLIDING UP AND DOWN ERRATICALLY IN PITCH AND INTENSITY. Troi stands nearby listening thoughtfully. DATA There it is again. An area of "blackness." RIKER It appears, then disappears, then reappears. There is no predictable pattern -- no sequence. Data moves his fingers across the console again. PICARD On screen. They all turn to look. 31 FULL SHOT FAVORING THE MAIN VIEWER (OPTICAL) The picture on the Main Viewer shows a field of stars. RIKER There it is. STAR TREK: "Where Silence... " - 9/27/88 - ACT ONE 8. 31 CONTINUED: PICARD I can't see anything. Magnify section two-eight-five. The viewscreen changes. Now we can see a slight "spot" on the Main Viewer. WESLEY There -- it looks like a "hole" in space. PICARD We're acquainted with the "wormhole" phenomenon. This appears quite different. 32 ANOTHER ANGLE (OPTICAL) Picard studies the Main Viewer for a beat, then: PICARD What do sensors indicate? DATA Nothing. RIKER Nothing? PICARD I'm sure you must mean it's empty of matter, Mister Data. There is always some energy form at work... DATA Sir, our sensors are showing that to be an absence of everything. It is a void without matter or energy of any kind. RIKER Yet, this "hole" has a form, Data. It has height, width... DATA Perhaps. Perhaps not. STAR TREK: "Where Silence... " - 9/27/88 - ACT ONE 9. 32 CONTINUED: PICARD (to Data) That is hardly a scientific observation, Commander. DATA Sir, the most elementary and valuable statement in science... the beginning of wisdom... is: "I do not know." (indicates viewscreen) I do not know what that is. WESLEY Captain, if this were any ordinary kind of hole in space... (indicates) ... wouldn't we be able to see what's behind it? Obviously, this is a very good question. Picard turns to Troi. PICARD Counselor? TROI I can feel nothing from it, sir, if that's what you're asking. Picard eases himself down in his chair, and sits studying the viewscreen... puzzled. RIKER Data -- is there any record of any occurrence even vaguely similar to this? PICARD "Similar" in even the slightest way. DATA Accessing. (he pauses a moment) Negative. There is no record of any Federation vessel encountering anything remotely like this. PICARD I believe we have time for a closer look, Number One. STAR TREK: "Where Silence... " - 9/27/88 - ACT ONE 10. 32 CONTINUED: (2) RIKER Concur. (to Wesley) Ensign, slow to one-half impulse. Adjust course to intercept this... this whatever it is. PICARD Scanning and recording as we go. WESLEY Changing course to intercept in... in twelve minutes, sir. 33 EXT. SPACE - THE ENTERPRISE (OPTICAL) moves slowly forward under impulse power toward the large black area in the field of stars. 34 INT. MAIN BRIDGE (OPTICAL) Picard stands watching the viewscreen as the void on the screen grows larger. Riker is at the science consoles in the Aft Station. Data is busy at Ops. PICARD Let's send a probe into it. RIKER Worf, prepare a scanner probe. Let's see what's in there. PICARD (to Wesley) Close enough, Ensign. Hold this position. WESLEY Aye, sir. Holding this position. Picard gives Riker a slight nod. RIKER You may launch the probe when ready, Mister Worf. Worf makes the necessary moves on his console to launch the probe. STAR TREK: "Where Silence... " - 9/27/88 - ACT ONE 11. 35 EXT. SPACE - THE ENTERPRISE (OPTICAL) floats off the outer edge of the void. The probe is launched. It heads straight into the center of the great emptiness. 36 INT. MAIN BRIDGE (OPTICAL) Picard, Riker and Worf stand watching the viewscreen as the fiery tail of the probe diminishes in the distance. Data monitors the instruments. We can HEAR THE FAINT HISS OF THE TELEMETRY as it is received. DATA All the probe's systems are functioning perfectly. Suddenly the probe just disappears. The SOUNDS OF TELEMETRY STOP. WORF It's gone. PICARD What happened, Data? DATA Unknown. WORF (to Picard) Recommend we go to a Yellow Alert, sir. PICARD (puzzled) Why? WORF (hesitates, then) Sorry, sir, it's... PICARD Explain. Worf is definitely uncomfortable now. Clearly, he would like to avoid this entire subject now. Picard continues gently: STAR TREK: "Where Silence... " - 9/27/88 - ACT ONE 12. 36 CONTINUED: PICARD (continuing) This starship operates best, Mister Worf, when we all know what is on each other's minds. WORF (uncomfortably) My thoughts... were of an old Klingon legend of... of a gigantic black space creature which was said to devour entire vessels... RIKER (genuinely surprised) Devours vessels? WORF Sorry, Commander. I agree that these are thoughts hardly worthy of a trained and practical security officer. There is a round of silence. Worf is completely miserable. Then to Worf, ignoring his previous statement. PICARD Launch another probe, Mister Worf. This time a Class One with full sensor array. Worf does something on his panel, then: WORF Launching, sir. 37 EXT. SPACE - THE ENTERPRISE (OPTICAL) as the second probe is launched. It too disappears even sooner after it enters the void. 38 INT. MAIN BRIDGE All are still studying the viewscreen. RIKER Happened even more quickly. STAR TREK: "Where Silence... " - 9/27/88 - ACT ONE 13. 38 CONTINUED: WORF Recommend we fire a photon torpedo, Captain. PICARD (eyes Worf, then) Negative. WESLEY Captain, based on where the probes disappeared... I have been able to plot the outer boundaries. I could move in closer. Picard thinks about it, then decides. PICARD Take us in, Mister Crusher. Thrusters only. 39 OMITTED 40 INT. MAIN BRIDGE (OPTICAL) Picard stands looking at the viewscreen. PICARD Data? DATA Still no readings of any kind, sir. Picard paces to where Riker stands in the Aft Station. The black void almost fills the screen of the Main Viewer. PICARD Number One? RIKER I'll agree with Worf at this point, sir. Let's be careful. Worf looks grateful. Picard paces forward, studying the viewscreen. 41 EXT. SPACE - THE ENTERPRISE (OPTICAL) moves closer to the dark, dead, void. STAR TREK: "Where Silence... " - 9/27/88 - ACT ONE 14. 42 INT. MAIN BRIDGE (OPTICAL) Picard stands looking at the dark screen, then around the silent bridge. The dark void filling the screen. The familiar SOUNDS OF THE BRIDGE BEGIN TO FADE... RADIO SIGNALS, TELEMETRY, EVERYTHING... RIKER What's happened? PICARD Data? Data looks at his console for a moment, then... DATA Whatever it was... or whatever it is... we seem to be inside of it. Picard returns to his Command Chair, as Riker takes the chair beside him. RIKER Didn't that happen a bit suddenly, sir? PICARD All stations, report! 43 ANGLE - THE COMPUTER MONITORS Some of the screens fade and go blank. Reactions as: FADE OUT. END OF ACT ONE STAR TREK: "Where Silence... " - 9/27/88 - ACT TWO 15. ACT TWO FADE IN: 44 EXT. SPACE - THE ENTERPRISE (OPTICAL) is isolated in a void, totally empty of stars. PICARD (V.O.) Captain's log, supplemental. While exploring a strange area in space without any form of matter or energy... 45 INT. MAIN BRIDGE (OPTICAL) Data at Ops, somewhat puzzled by the feedback he is receiving. Riker is busy at a panel while Picard stands looking at the viewscreen. PICARD (V.O.) (continuing) ... a total void, we have unexpectedly seemed to enter it. Apparently we moved past its mysterious outer boundary. Riker looks up from the panel. RIKER All stations have reported, Captain. There seems to be no immediate threat to our ship or crew. As Riker stands looking at the dark viewscreen, Picard moves up to stand beside him. PICARD In which case, let's hold position for awhile, Number One. This is worth studying. RIKER Incredible. It's like looking off into... infinity, sir. (turns to Picard) Remember the course in ancient history at Starfleet Academy? Back to the time when men still believed the Earth was flat? STAR TREK: "Where Silence... " - 9/27/88 - ACT TWO 16. 45 CONTINUED: PICARD (smiles) And that the sun revolved around the Earth... RIKER And if a ship sailed too far out into the ocean it would fall off the edge of the world... Riker turns back to look at the empty void on the viewscreen. PICARD "Beyond this place there be dragons." RIKER Data -- how long to complete your scans? Let's not stay any longer than we have to. Riker starts for Science One as PULASKI enters from the turbolift and stands looking at the activity on the bridge. Pulaski crosses to stand beside Picard. WESLEY Captain, we have no communications outside of the void. WORF Confirm! We are now receiving no signals of any kind. PICARD Hello, Doctor. You've been briefed on what's happened? PULASKI I've heard, Captain. But I don't understand it. PICARD I wish I could say I did. (to Data) Increase magnification by ten. Data punches in the command. The viewscreen remains dark. STAR TREK: "Where Silence... " - 9/27/88 - ACT TWO 17. 45 CONTINUED: (2) PICARD (continuing) By one hundred! Nothing. The viewscreen remains dark. PULASKI I'm not a bridge officer, but isn't this... "impossible," sir? Picard gives Pulaski a "be my guest" gesture. PULASKI (continuing) Increase by one thousand, Mister Data. (waits) By ten thousand. There's no change on the Main Viewer. Pulaski turns to Picard. PULASKI (continuing; indicates Data) It does know how to do these things, doesn't it? PICARD Commander Data knows precisely what he is doing. Pulaski looks up quickly at Data, then turns to see that the Captain's expression is as cold. PULASKI Forgive me, Mister Data. I'm not accustomed to working with... with non-living devices that... (stops, bites off her words) Forgive me again. Your service record says that you are alive and I must accept that. PICARD Engineering! GEORDI'S COM VOICE Engineering, aye. STAR TREK: "Where Silence... " - 9/27/88 - ACT TWO 18. 46 INTERCUT - GEORDI'S OFFICE AS NECESSARY PICARD Lieutenant, are your systems functioning? GEORDI Yes, sir. Wherever we are, sir, it seems to have no effect on any Engineering function. PICARD Thank you, Lieutenant. 47 INT. MAIN BRIDGE Picard's interest in this occurrence is waning fast. PICARD Data? DATA Difficult to make a judgment based on the absence of information. PICARD Speculate. DATA The obvious hypothesis is equivocal. This void has a total lack of dimension. Therefore by any accepted standard it does not exist, yet being within it denies that conclusion. Picard looks to Pulaski. RIKER Then maybe we've moved into another dimension? DATA Could a lack of dimension be another dimension in itself? Pulaski gives Data a quick look of respect. PULASKI That's an interesting question. STAR TREK: "Where Silence... " - 9/27/88 - ACT TWO 19. 47 CONTINUED: PICARD For a later discussion. It's time we got on with our mission, Number One. Starfleet can send out a science vessel to investigate further. Let's move back out of this. RIKER Aye, sir. (to Wesley) Reverse our direction and set a course for the Cornelian star system. Warp two. WESLEY Reversing direction, sir. (adjusts controls) Course laid in. RIKER Engage. Wesley punches in the command. 48 EXT. SPACE - THE ENTERPRISE (OPTICAL) We can see only the ship and the darkness of space. 49 INT. MAIN BRIDGE (OPTICAL) Picard seems to relax a little, leaning back to watch for the reappearance of the stars. Nothing happens and he looks questioningly toward Riker. RIKER (to Wesley) Our engines have engaged, haven't they, Ensign? WESLEY Aye, sir. 50 INT. GEORDI'S OFFICE Geordi, moving between the wall panel and the center block computers. He waits as if expecting something. Then he turns to his intercom: STAR TREK: "Where Silence... " - 9/27/88 - ACT TWO 20. 50 CONTINUED: GEORDI Everything all right up there, Captain? PICARD'S COM VOICE Are the engines operating normally, Engineer? GEORDI Everything looks fine here, sir. PICARD'S COM VOICE We're increasing to warp four, Engineer. We HEAR a slightly higher level of engine sound, then: GEORDI We now show warp four, Captain. 51 INT. MAIN BRIDGE (OPTICAL) The situation is still the same. The viewscreen is completely dark with Picard, Riker, and the others looking toward it nervously, puzzled. PICARD We should be seeing stars by now, Data. How far have we come? DATA Inertial guidance shows seven parsecs traveled, Captain. PICARD Ensign Crusher? WESLEY Confirm, sir. Exactly what my readings say. 52 ANGLE ACROSS MAIN BRIDGE to include GEORDI entering, crosses to his bridge Engineering Station. GEORDI Engineering, transfer to bridge. STAR TREK: "Where Silence... " - 9/27/88 - ACT TWO 21. 52 CONTINUED: The engineering console lights up. Geordi now looks up to Main Viewer. GEORDI (continuing) What's happening, sir? I thought we should have broken clear. 53 INT. MAIN BRIDGE ON Picard. RIKER We should have. We're on a reverse course. PICARD Full stop, helm. WESLEY Full stop, sir. Picard rises and paces for a moment. Picard looks down at Wesley's console. PICARD According to this we're well past the point we entered the void. DATA Except that we are still in it, sir. 54 WIDER ANGLE Data works his console for a moment... DATA Captain... if we dropped a stationary beacon and navigated straight away from it, we would have a fixed point of reference to confirm speed and distance. PICARD Make it so, Data. Lock onto the beacon, and keep it dead astern. Data and Wesley punch in the instructions. A moment later the SOUND OF THE ELECTRONIC SIGNAL is heard. STAR TREK: "Where Silence... " - 9/27/88 - ACT TWO 22. 54 CONTINUED: DATA The beacon is in place, Captain. PICARD Dead ahead. Impulse power. Picard settles back in his chair as Geordi punches in the commands and the ship begins to move. The ELECTRONIC SIGNAL FROM THE BEACON BEGINS TO DIMINISH IN AMPLITUDE as the ship moves away from the beacon. DATA The beacon is falling astern. PICARD Engineering, report. 55 GEORDI'S AFT BRIDGE STATION (OPTICAL) Geordi, at his instruments, taking readings. GEORDI All systems normal, sir. Everyone looking to Picard. PICARD Prepare to increase to warp two. WESLEY Aye, sir. A moment later we can HEAR THE SOUND OF ANOTHER ELECTRONIC SIGNAL overlapping the beacon. It is a different frequency. (Caused by the Doppler Effect.) DATA Captain, we are receiving a signal from dead ahead. PULASKI Maybe you've found the door out of this. As the FIRST SIGNAL DIMINISHES, the SECOND SIGNAL INCREASES in intensity. DATA We are closing on the new signal, Captain. STAR TREK: "Where Silence... " - 9/27/88 - ACT TWO 23. 55 CONTINUED: PICARD Identify. Data does a check... and recheck of the signal. DATA Captain, it is the stationary beacon we just released. RIKER We must have come full circle, sir. WESLEY We couldn't have, sir. I've shown us steadily moving away from that beacon. PICARD All stop; hold position again. RIKER (indicating the viewscreen) Look. Picard moves toward the Main Viewer. The nothingness of the void has been replaced. The Enterprise is now bathed in a soft ever-changing glow, which is beautiful to look at and somehow very comforting. 56 WORF His head comes up from his sensors. WORF Captain, sensors indicate a disturbance in sector one-zero- eight. Possibly a vessel. Reactions from Picard and the others. PICARD Perhaps some answers at last. On screen. WORF The ship is equipped with a cloaking device. STAR TREK: "Where Silence... " - 9/27/88 - ACT TWO 24. 56 CONTINUED: RIKER Romulan! WORF It's closing. RIKER Shields up. Go to Red Alert! PULASKI I'll be at my duty station in Sickbay. She exits. 57 FAVOR MAIN VIEWER (OPTICAL) There is a distortion -- WORF It's uncloaking. RIKER Arm your photon torpedoes, Mister Worf. PICARD Hold for my orders. WESLEY There! As the Romulan vessel becomes visible, IT FIRES -- without warning. 58 INT. ENTERPRISE - MAIN BRIDGE as the ship is rocked by the barrage. WORF Direct hits, sir. Our shields are weakening. PICARD Warn them we'll return fire. WORF Transmitting. Picard waits; Riker throws him a concerned look. STAR TREK: "Where Silence... " - 9/27/88 - ACT TWO 25. 58 CONTINUED: WORF (continuing) They've armed another full spread, sir. PICARD Fire torpedoes. 59 OMITTED 60 INT. ENTERPRISE - MAIN BRIDGE (OPTICAL) The PHOTON TORPEDOES streak toward the Romulan ship. THEY HIT, as the Romulan ship explodes. 61 EXT. SPACE - THE ENTERPRISE (OPTICAL) alone again in the void. 62 INT. ENTERPRISE - MAIN BRIDGE There is a moment of victory. PICARD That was too easy. RIKER Yes. DATA Captain, sensors can locate no debris from the Romulan ship. Before the captain can respond... WORF Captain, there is another vessel approaching -- sector zero-nine- one, mark, two-six. PICARD Specifics. WORF On screen. STAR TREK: "Where Silence... " - 9/27/88 - ACT TWO 26. 63 ANGLE - INCLUDING MAIN VIEWER (OPTICAL) The picture of a ship MATERIALIZES on the viewscreen. PICARD Magnify. RIKER It's a Federation ship. (reading the number) N-C-C... one-three-oh-five dash E. It is the USS Yamato, our sister ship. WESLEY The Yamato is nowhere near this quadrant. PICARD Open a hailing frequency, Data.... Data punches in the information. DATA This is the USS Enterprise to... USS Yamato. Respond, please... Nothing. DATA (continuing) This is the USS Enterprise calling USS Yamato. Please respond on this frequency. They all watch the Main Viewer. DATA (continuing) No response, Captain. PICARD Make a full scan. DATA Life support system -- engineering and propulsion all seem functional. (turns; reacts at a reading) But there are no life signs over there, sir. STAR TREK: "Where Silence... " - 9/27/88 - ACT TWO 27. 63 CONTINUED: PICARD Can we be getting a false reading, Data? DATA Since we know nothing at all about these circumstances, that is... at least, conceivable, sir. RIKER (to Picard) You look doubtful, sir. PICARD I'm not anything right now, Number One. I'm just a man looking for answers. GEORDI (to Data; quietly) Like the rat said -- "Keep the cheese, I just want out of the trap." Picard overhears and flashes Geordi a look that silences him. RIKER Captain, request permission to board the Yamato with an away team. There might be something onboard -- in the logs -- which will at least tell us what happened. PICARD Granted. Minimum complement. Riker stands, heads for the turbolift. RIKER Worf. You're with me. FADE OUT. END OF ACT TWO STAR TREK: "Where Silence... " - 9/27/88 - ACT THREE 28. ACT THREE FADE IN: 64 EXT. SPACE - THE ENTERPRISE AND THE USS YAMATO (OPTICAL) PICARD (V.O.) Captain's log, supplemental. We remain like a fly in amber trapped in the void. We have encountered a vessel which appears to be the USS Yamato. All its systems are shown as functioning, yet it seems devoid of life. Commander Riker is leading an away team -- hopefully the answer lies over there. 65 INT. TRANSPORTER ROOM (OPTICAL) Worf steps onto the Transporter Pad. Riker, checking the transporter console, speaks to the TRANSPORTER CHIEF. RIKER Do you have a lock on that other ship? TRANSPORTER CHIEF Aye, sir. No problems at all. Riker crosses to the raised platform to join Worf. RIKER Can you put us on the bridge? TRANSPORTER CHIEF Anywhere you say, Commander. WORF I am acquainted with the Yamato, Commander. Recommend the Aft Station of their bridge. When in doubt, surprise them. RIKER Them? Who's them? WORF Whoever may be there. STAR TREK: "Where Silence... " - 9/27/88 - ACT THREE 29. 65 CONTINUED: RIKER Sensors show no life signs. WORF Still, the tactic is sound. RIKER Agreed. (to Transporter Chief) Aft Station. TRANSPORTER CHIEF Aye, sir. RIKER Phasers on stun, Lieutenant Worf. Phasers are set. RIKER (continuing; to Transporter Chief) Energize. Riker and Worf SPARKLE AWAY. 66 INT. USS YAMATO - CORRIDOR (OPTICAL) as Riker -- without Worf -- STACKS UP. It looks like the Enterprise, as it should because it is the sister ship -- but the lighting is weird -- and: RIKER (the obvious) This isn't the bridge. He turns, expecting to see Worf -- but he's alone. Almost before Riker can react he hears a sound down the darkened corridor. A growl -- above which he hears Worf's roar. 66A ANOTHER ANGLE as Riker heads down the corridor -- the lighting here is much darker. Very ominous -- in the shadows -- we see FORMS. Threatening -- again WE HEAR WORF. This time IN PAIN. Riker, without hesitation -- charges forward. Ready to combat whatever attempts to block his path. It looks like a gauntlet of terror. STAR TREK: "Where Silence... " - 9/27/88 - ACT THREE 30. 66B RIKER moves forward -- phaser ready. Suddenly, in the darkness a large form appears. It's armed and moving toward him. Riker hesitates -- then screams out: RIKER No -- don't fire. The figure is on him -- the light hits the creature's face. IT'S WORF! WORF I heard you screaming. I was coming to help. RIKER Help me? But I heard you cry out. Riker realizes something bizarre is going on. RIKER (touches his communicator) Transporter Chief, where do you show us over here? TRANSPORTER CHIEF'S COM VOICE We show... as approximately... The communication garbles and cuts out. RIKER Captain, do you read me?... 67 INT. ENTERPRISE - MAIN BRIDGE Picard becomes concerned, as: RIKER'S COM VOICE ... having difficulties... The communication garbles and cuts out. PICARD Number One, come in! He pauses -- there is no response. STAR TREK: "Where Silence... " - 9/27/88 - ACT THREE 31. 67 CONTINUED: PICARD (continuing) Transporter Room, this is the captain. We are out of contact with the away team. Beam them back, immediately. TRANSPORTER CHIEF'S COM VOICE I have lost the lock on them. 68 INT. USS YAMATO - CORRIDOR Riker, inspecting the corridor walls closely with his tricorder. Worf, touching his insignia. WORF Nothing on my communicator, sir. Worf steps over to a com panel on the corridor wall. WORF (continuing) Computer, on. Nothing happens. RIKER (looks around) Let's find a turbolift to the bridge. 69 OMITTED 70 INT. ENTERPRISE - MAIN BRIDGE Picard is at his command station, very concerned. PICARD Transporter Room -- have you been able to establish a lock? Picard gets no answer. Then suddenly the bridge goes DARK. Every system shuts off -- the emergency lights come on. Everyone remains at their station -- tension but no panic. PICARD Initiate full check -- all systems. STAR TREK: "Where Silence... " - 9/27/88 - ACT THREE 32. 71 ANGLE ON GEORDI at bridge Engineering Station. GEORDI Engineering section, report. What is our situation? There is no response. 72 thru OMITTED 83 A84 INT. USS YAMATO - CORRIDOR As Riker and Worf approach the turbolift, Riker scans the corridor wall with his tricorder. RIKER This isn't a Federation ship. The walls are not tritanium... close, but it's a material beyond our technology. (he then leads the way to the turbolift) Let's get to the bridge. Somewhere there must be an answer to all of this. As they approach, the turbolift doors open. Instead of it being the turbolift, it's the bridge, weirdly lighted. It's identical to the Enterprise, but devoid of people. Worf and Riker exchange looks. They cautiously enter. B84 INT. USS YAMATO - MAIN BRIDGE The turbolift doors close behind them. Riker then turns as if to re-enter the turbolift. The doors open -- but it's not the turbolift... it's a duplicate of the bridge. Riker and Worf again exchange looks. RIKER Wait -- if you go through there... where will you be? WORF On the bridge. STAR TREK: "Where Silence... " - 9/27/88 - ACT THREE 33. B84 CONTINUED: RIKER But we are on the bridge. WORF Should I continue? RIKER Yes -- move out. Let's see what happens. They both step through the door. C84 ANOTHER ANGLE - USS YAMATO SECOND BRIDGE They have in effect: WORF Is it the same bridge? RIKER ... Or did we just step from one bridge to another bridge? Worf crosses to another door, as Riker moves to the center of the bridge. C84A INT. ENTERPRISE - MAIN BRIDGE (OPTICAL) Illuminated by the emergency lights, everyone's remaining very calm, under control. Suddenly some of the bridge stations return to normal. DATA Captain! I have a star fix. PICARD On screen. A small swarm of stars appears in the center of the dark screen. WESLEY It's an opening, sir. DATA Confirm, navigation is possible. WESLEY Should I set a course? STAR TREK: "Where Silence... " - 9/27/88 - ACT THREE 34. C84A CONTINUED: PICARD Transporter Room. Do you have a fix on the away team? TRANSPORTER CHIEF'S COM VOICE Negative. D84 INT. USS YAMATO BRIDGE - WORF as he approaches the second set of doors. The doors open -- and once again it's the bridge. Worf pauses. Then steps through. E84 RIKER As he watches the door close behind Worf, he hears from behind him: WORF (O.S.) Commander. Riker turns. It's Worf, standing in front of the doors. The frustration of this bizarre -- whatever it is -- can be seen on Worf's face. F84 IN A SERIES OF SHOTS - INTERCUT WITH RIKER'S REACTION Worf turns and exits - only to appear on the other side of the bridge. He roars... rushes to another set of doors. Exits, only to again reappear coming out of another set of doors. Worf's emotions quickly escalate to rage. He turns and throws himself at the doors -- hoping somehow by force to change the sequence. But the doors open and he once again bursts out of the doors on the opposite side of the bridge. Worf charges for another set. He's on the verge of being out of control. He is about to continue his manic charge, when he catches himself. WORF (to himself) At ease, Lieutenant! At EASE! His own words calm him. He stops... but his frustration is more difficult for him to control. STAR TREK: "Where Silence... " - 9/27/88 - ACT THREE 35. G84 INT. ENTERPRISE - MAIN BRIDGE DATA The star fix is fading. PICARD Haskell, lock on to the Yamato with the tractor beam. We leave together. HASKELL manipulates some controls. HASKELL I can't make the lock. DATA Captain. The star fix is fading. PICARD Let it go, Data. HASKELL But, sir, we can get out. PICARD Let it go. On the viewscreen, stars fade. TRANSPORTER CHIEF'S COM VOICE Bridge, I've re-established contact with the away team. WESLEY (indicating Main Viewer) The Yamato's beginning to fade out, Captain. On the Main Viewer, the USS Yamato is beginning to grow HAZY. 85 INT. USS YAMATO - MAIN BRIDGE Riker and Worf hurrying INTO SCENE. Riker is touching his emblem for intercom use. RIKER Come in, come in Enterprise. TRANSPORTER CHIEF'S COM VOICE Hold position, away team. I've got you. We are bringing you home! STAR TREK: "Where Silence... " - 9/27/88 - ACT THREE 36. 86 INT. ENTERPRISE - MAIN BRIDGE (OPTICAL) On the Main Viewer the image of the USS Yamato FADING AWAY. PICARD Transporter Room, hurry! WESLEY Captain, it's almost gone. Suddenly the Yamato FADES OUT. 87 OMITTED 87A INT. TRANSPORTER ROOM as Riker and Worf STACK UP. Riker steps instantly off the pad and heads for the exit. 87B INT. ENTERPRISE - MAIN BRIDGE as Riker and Worf step off the turbolift. RIKER What the hell's going on? PICARD Are you all right, Number One? RIKER Yes, but I've had it. Let's put all this technology and computers to work -- figure out what's going on -- and get the hell out of here. FADE OUT. END OF ACT THREE STAR TREK: "Where Silence... " - 9/27/88 - ACT FOUR 37. ACT FOUR FADE IN: 88 INT. MAIN BRIDGE - WIDE ANGLE Picard, Wesley and Troi seating themselves -- as Riker, Data, Worf, and Pulaski seat themselves. RIKER (angry) A ship that was almost the Yamato, existing in a "hole in space," no crew aboard -- what's the purpose? DATA Add to it an attack by a nonexistent Romulan vessel, it does suggest an interesting question: "Was our away team even over there?" RIKER If we weren't over there, where the hell were we? HASKELL Captain, I have re-established the star fix. They look at the viewscreen which shows a cluster of stars -- TWINKLING in the distance. RIKER Great. Looks to Picard, who nods his approval. RIKER (to Wesley) Set course -- velocity -- warp two. WESLEY Course and speed set. PICARD Engage. There is a moment of relief as everyone feels that this has at last come to an end. STAR TREK: "Where Silence... " - 9/27/88 - ACT FOUR 38. 88 CONTINUED: DATA I have lost contact. PICARD What? HASKELL The star fix is gone. There is a pause as Data inputs on his computer. DATA Sir, it is not in the same sector. But another opening has appeared. PICARD On screen. 88A ANOTHER ANGLE (OPTICAL) to favor the viewscreen. A patch of stars appears in the swirl. PICARD Set a course for those stars. Warp six. WESLEY Yes, sir -- warp six. As they watch, the starfield -- which should be getting larger -- begins to fade, and finally disappears. DATA I have lost the signal. RIKER Damn it. PICARD All stop. As they watch the screen, a third and even larger field of stars appears on the viewscreen. DATA Captain... PICARD I know Data, I can see it. STAR TREK: "Where Silence... " - 9/27/88 - ACT FOUR 39. 88A CONTINUED: RIKER This game is now wearing very thin. PICARD Hold this position. (to Troi) Counselor, you have said you sensed no intelligence behind all of this. You haven't changed in that belief? 89 OMITTED 90 EMPHASIZING TROI She takes a moment, apparently considering Picard's question at many levels. Then: TROI I'm not so certain of that now, Captain. I do sense something unusual about all this... She is puzzled, troubled. PICARD Perhaps a different level of consciousness? TROI An intelligence so vast it eluded me? Yes, perhaps. 91 thru OMITTED 93 94 ANGLE - INCLUDING TROI AND PULASKI both intent upon the Main Viewer image, where the star window continues to twinkle. PULASKI (almost to herself) Rats in a maze. Troi looks over at the Doctor. STAR TREK: "Where Silence... " - 9/27/88 - ACT FOUR 40. 94 CONTINUED: TROI (quietly) Exactly! PICARD Explain. PULASKI Everything we've been through reminds me of a laboratory experiment. As though something were testing our responses to stimuli. PICARD Are you suggesting we're in some kind of laboratory? PULASKI Yes. Reactions. 95 ANGLE - INCLUDING MAIN VIEWER (OPTICAL) where the starfield grows larger. WESLEY The opening seems closer, Captain. PICARD We're finished with being led about this way. RIKER Agreed, Captain. Hold present position. 96 OMITTED 97 COMMAND AREA as the images try to tempt Picard away from his decision. Troi nods. TROI Good. Don't satisfy its curiosity. STAR TREK: "Where Silence... " - 9/27/88 - ACT FOUR 41. 98 EMPHASIZING MAIN VIEWER (OPTICAL) Suddenly, a visage like the bridge crew has never seen! A great human eye is peering in. 99 PANNING WORF (OPTICAL) who has leapt down from his bridge level, major phaser in hand as if to protect the rest of the bridge crew. But now facing the strange IMAGE with phaser in hand, Worf seems uncertain what to do next. NAGILUM Why are you so alarmed when I've gone to such trouble to look just like you? 100 ANOTHER ANGLE (OPTICAL) Riker speaks calmly to the security lieutenant. RIKER Return to your position, Lieutenant. WORF Sir... ? DATA Captain, sensors show nothing out there. Absolutely nothing. GEORDI (half to self) It's a damned ugly nothing. PICARD I am Captain Jean-Luc Picard of the USS Enterprise. (firmer now) ... representing a Federation of planets in this part of the galaxy. (waits) Can you identify whoever or whatever you are? NAGILUM NAGILUM! STAR TREK: "Where Silence... " - 9/27/88 - ACT FOUR 42. 100 CONTINUED: GEORDI (to Data; quietly) Speaks right out for something your sensors say isn't there, Data. PICARD We've still no idea of what you represent. Nagilum's eyes have seemed to center on Data. Its voice MODERATES. NAGILUM "Data." DATA Nagilum? NAGILUM You are of different construction than the others. Interesting. Worf has lowered his phaser, but stays very alert as he returns to his security position. Meanwhile, Nagilum's eyes seem to move from one bridge crewmember to another. NAGILUM (continuing) Picard... Riker... Geordi... Wesley... Pulaski is suddenly moved forward as if shoved by an invisible hand. Whatever the nature of the force, it twirls her around for inspection. NAGILUM (continuing) What are you? Your construction also differs. PULASKI My "construction"... ? DATA Perhaps referring to your gender. STAR TREK: "Where Silence... " - 9/27/88 - ACT FOUR 43. 100 CONTINUED: (2) PULASKI Yes, I see... (toward the viewscreen) There are minor differences. I am what we call a "female." Pulaski is "shoved" forward as suddenly, then turned around for inspection. NAGILUM I understand. The masculine and the feminine. PICARD It is the way in which we propagate our species. NAGILUM Please demonstrate how this is accomplished. PULASKI Not likely. PICARD Whatever you are, your actions are not welcome. WORF Let me put up the shields, sir. DATA Our sensors do not show anything there, Worf. 101 thru OMITTED 102 103 INCLUDING MAIN VIEWER (OPTICAL) where Nagilum still seems to peer in through the Main Viewer. Its eyes now move to Picard. NAGILUM Your life-form surprises me more and more. Is it also true that you have only a limited existence? (waits, then) Answer! STAR TREK: "Where Silence... " - 9/27/88 - ACT FOUR 44. 103 CONTINUED: PICARD What information do you want? I don't understand the question. NAGILUM You exist -- and then you cease to exist. Your minds call it "death." At that moment, there is a CRY OF PAIN from the Aft Section -- and they turn. Holding his head as though it were about to explode, HASKELL staggers back from the damaged console. He screams again. NAGILUM (continuing) How interesting. 104 ANGLE - FAVORING HASKELL Haskell sinks to his knees, moaning in agony... then pitches forward and lies still. Doctor Pulaski has been hurrying toward him, now kneels and checks his vital signs. She uses a power-hypo on him once, twice. Then she shakes her head to Picard. 105 ANOTHER ANGLE Worf has moved in fast too, kneels. WORF Sickbay? PULASKI It won't help. The body is already cold. 106 ANGLE - FAVORING PICARD AND NAGILUM (OPTICAL) as Picard turns angrily toward the Main Viewer. PICARD We cannot allow you to do that! We'll fight you... STAR TREK: "Where Silence... " - 9/27/88 - ACT FOUR 45. 106 CONTINUED: NAGILUM (interrupting; VOICE BOOMING) To understand death, I must amass information on every aspect of it, every kind of dying. The experiments shouldn't take more than a third of your crew, maybe half. OFF reactions: FADE OUT. END OF ACT FOUR STAR TREK: "Where Silence... " - 9/27/88 - ACT FIVE 46. ACT FIVE FADE IN: 107 EXT. SPACE - ENTERPRISE (OPTICAL) with the same distant cluster of stars. PICARD (V.O.) Captain's log, Stardate 42194.7. It is obvious that whatever we have met sees no value in our kind of life-form. How do we fight something that both is... 108 INT. OBSERVATION LOUNGE Picard, Riker, Data, Geordi, Troi, Pulaski, and Worf are in conference. PICARD (V.O.) (continuing) ... and is not there? TROI I can sense this much. We are unimportant to it. WORF In a battle for survival, Captain, thirty to fifty percent casualties... PULASKI ... Would be appalling... WORF ... But within acceptable limits. RIKER This is not a battle, Lieutenant. TROI A "laboratory experiment" would be the closest comparison. PICARD Is there any reason for not believing this Nagilum? STAR TREK: "Where Silence... " - 9/27/88 - ACT FIVE 47. 108 CONTINUED: TROI No. DATA All evidence indicates he is willing and able to do what he proposes. PICARD Agreed. Under the circumstances -- there is only one decision. I will not stand by and watch while half of my crew is slaughtered. DATA Sir... I do not believe there is anything you can do to prevent it. PICARD No. But I can control it. PULASKI How? PICARD By destroying the Enterprise. PULASKI (to Picard) Isn't that like curing the disease by killing the patient? RIKER At least it's better than standing by helplessly and dying. PULASKI Why do I feel this may not have been the best time to join this ship? I'll be in Sickbay if I'm needed. Pulaski exits. Data, Troi and Geordi rise and go out after her. Wesley and Worf start out. Worf pauses at the door: WORF I will be at my station, Captain. STAR TREK: "Where Silence... " - 9/27/88 - ACT FIVE 48. 108 CONTINUED: (2) Picard and Riker remain at the table... each with his own thoughts. Then they both rise and go out... 109 INT. CORRIDOR The door to the turbolift opens. Picard and Riker step out. 110 INT. MAIN ENGINEERING Picard and Riker enter the Engineering Section and move to either side of the console. After a beat, Picard reaches out and places his hand on the panel. COMPUTER VOICE Recognize Picard... Jean-Luc... Riker places his hand on the opposite panel. COMPUTER VOICE) (continuing) Recognize Riker... William T. PICARD Initiate auto-destruct sequence. COMPUTER VOICE Does Riker... William T. concur? RIKER I do. Initiate auto-destruct sequence. COMPUTER VOICE What is the desired time interval? PICARD Stand by. (turns to Riker) Interesting question. How long to prepare to die? RIKER Which is the least painful to our crew? Move to it quickly? Or take time to prepare for it thoroughly? They sit silently for a moment. STAR TREK: "Where Silence... " - 9/27/88 - ACT FIVE 49. 110 CONTINUED: RIKER) (continuing) Hell, twenty minutes sounds like a nice round figure. Can we do that? PICARD The latest program allows it. They exchange a look. Picard turns to the computer. PICARD) (continuing) Initiate auto-destruct in twenty minutes. Picard and Riker turn to leave as the clock begins its electronic countdown to auto-destruct. COMPUTER VOICE Twenty minutes to auto-destruct, mark. They exit. Then, in the empty room: COMPUTER VOICE (continuing) Nineteen minutes, fifty seconds... 111 EXT. SPACE - THE ENTERPRISE (OPTICAL) hovering in space with the still-distant star patterns. 112 INT. PICARD'S QUARTERS The captain is lying on his bunk, staring at the ceiling as DEBUSSY'S "CLAIR DE LUNE" PLAYS. CAMERA MOVES IN to examine the expressions passing over Picard's features as he listens. After several moments of this, his door CHIME SOUNDS. PICARD Come. STAR TREK: "Where Silence... " - 9/27/88 - ACT FIVE 50. 113 TO INCLUDE TROI entering as if hesitant to disturb the captain at this time. Picard straightens into a sitting position, looks questioningly at her. TROI Our destroying ourselves won't change its mind. I could feel that. PICARD (somewhat surprised) You didn't mention you were that certain. TROI I was wrong not to tell you, Captain. And your decision may also be wrong. Picard starts to say something, but it's INTERRUPTED BY ANOTHER SOUND from the door. PICARD Yes? Come in, please. 114 TO INCLUDE DATA as he enters, hesitant too. DATA I have a question, sir. (sits) What is death? PICARD You've picked probably the most difficult of all questions, Data. There is the beginning of a twinkle in Picard's eyes again. It is the sort of question that his mind loves. STAR TREK: "Where Silence... " - 9/27/88 - ACT FIVE 51. 114 CONTINUED: PICARD (continuing) Some explain it by inventing gods wearing their own form... and argue that the purpose of the entire universe is to maintain themselves in their present form in an Earth-like garden which will give them pleasure through all eternity. And at the other extreme, assuming that is an "extreme," are those who prefer the idea of our blinking into nothingness with all our experiences, hopes and dreams only an illusion. DATA Which do you believe? 114A CLOSE ON PICARD considering the question. PICARD Considering the marvelous complexity of our universe, its clockwork perfection, its balances of this against that... matter, energy, gravitation, time, dimension, pattern, I believe our existence must mean more than a meaningless illusion. I prefer to believe that my and your existence goes beyond Euclidian and other "practical" measuring systems... and that, in ways we cannot yet fathom, our existence is part of a reality beyond what we understand now as reality. A moment of silence, then: TROI We should not let ourselves die, Jean-Luc! Picard is startled by the fact this statement comes from Troi of all people. Geordi has ENTERED as: STAR TREK: "Where Silence... " - 9/27/88 - ACT FIVE 52. 114A CONTINUED: DATA I agree with her, Captain. TROI If only half of us live, I prefer to take my chances on being one that does. GEORDI Yes. It's wrong of you to force us into this... DATA It is wrong... PICARD (interrupting) Yes, this is very wrong. None of you should be reacting like this. 115 PICARD as he strides to the Companel on his cabin wall. CLOSE ANGLE - as he touches it: PICARD Computer, locate Commander Data. COMPUTER VOICE Commander Data is on the bridge. Picard turns. 116 WIDER ANGLE - PICARD AND ENTIRE CABIN No one is there! There's a look of astonishment on his face. Except for himself, the cabin is empty. PICARD It's not going to work, Nagilum. Picard stands there, for a beat. DATA'S COM VOICE Captain, we are clear. We are out of the void. STAR TREK: "Where Silence... " - 9/27/88 - ACT FIVE 53. 116 CONTINUED: RIKER'S COM VOICE It's gone, Captain -- we can abort the auto-destruct. PICARD Hold, Number One. RIKER But... PICARD Hold. As Picard exits. COMPUTER VOICE Fifty seconds to auto-destruct. 117 OMITTED 117A INT. MAIN BRIDGE (OPTICAL) There is the familiar starfield on the viewscreen as Picard enters from the turbolift. COMPUTER VOICE Thirty seconds to auto-destruct. DATA Captain, we are clear of the void. You may stop the auto-destruct. PICARD Data, on any heading -- warp six -- now! 117B thru OMITTED 117C 117D EXT. SPACE - THE ENTERPRISE (OPTICAL) stretches into warp. 117E INT. MAIN BRIDGE Picard's resolve is undiminished. STAR TREK: "Where Silence... " - 9/27/88 - ACT FIVE 54. 117E CONTINUED: RIKER Captain. PICARD I don't believe it, Number One. It could still be part of the illusion. Data, report. DATA All navigational systems confirm -- we are at warp six -- on course... No one even breathes for a long moment... COMPUTER VOICE Ten seconds to auto-destruct. Nine seconds. Eight seconds. Seven seconds... Six seconds... DATA ... to the Morgana Quadrant. COMPUTER VOICE Five seconds. Four seconds... PICARD Troi? TROI It's gone, Captain. I no longer sense its presence. PICARD Abort auto-destruct sequence. COMPUTER VOICE Three seconds. Two seconds... Riker, William T. Do you concur? RIKER (relieved) Yes! Absolutely! I do indeed concur! Wholeheartedly! PICARD A simple "yes" would have been sufficient, Number One. RIKER I didn't want there to be any chance of a misunderstanding. STAR TREK: "Where Silence... " - 9/27/88 - ACT FIVE 55. 117E CONTINUED: (2) Picard nods, then calmly exits to his Ready Room. GEORDI He sure held that bluff to the last second. RIKER (laughs) What bluff? 117F INT. CAPTAIN'S READY ROOM Picard is at his desk. PICARD Well, Nagilum... I hope you got what you needed. A moment, then the Intruder MATERIALIZES on the small viewscreen. The image is filled with static. NAGILUM You have provided me with much more than I needed... PICARD Why did you release us? You could have seen how we faced death. NAGILUM It wasn't necessary. I have learned all I needed to know. Would you like me to share some of my conclusions? PICARD I'm not interested. STAR TREK: "Where Silence... " - 9/27/88 - ACT FIVE 56. 117F CONTINUED: NAGILUM Of course you are. You are too inquisitive not to want to know. (he pauses) You seem to find no tranquility in anything. You struggle against the inevitable. You thrive on conflict. You are selfish, yet you value loyalty. You are rash, quick to judge, slow to change. It's amazing you've survived. Be that as it may -- as species, we have no common ground. You are too aggressive. Too hostile. Too militant. PICARD During this period, you too have been evaluated. It would seem we have at least one thing in common. NAGILUM Oh? PICARD Curiosity. NAGILUM The point is well taken, Captain. Perhaps that is a trait we share. PICARD Then perhaps we'll meet again. But next time, it will be out here among the stars. The STATIC CRACKLES Nagilum off and Picard stands for a beat at the blank screen. 117G INT. MAIN BRIDGE Picard takes his command chair. PICARD Put us back on course, at warp three. WESLEY Warp three, sir... STAR TREK: "Where Silence... " - 9/27/88 - ACT FIVE 57. 117G CONTINUED: RIKER And Ensign -- let's give any holes a wide berth. 118 EXT. SPACE - THE ENTERPRISE (OPTICAL) as it accelerates to warp three and disappears in the distance. FADE OUT. END OF ACT FIVE THE END STAR TREK: THE NEXT GENERATION "Elementary, Dear Data" #40272-129 Written by Brian Alan Lane Directed by Rob Bowman THE WRITING CREDITS MAY NOT BE FINAL AND SHOULD NOT BE USED FOR PUBLICITY OR ADVERTISING PURPOSES WITHOUT FIRST CHECKING WITH THE TELEVISION LEGAL DEPARTMENT. Copyright 1988 Paramount Pictures Corporation. All Rights Reserved. This script is not for publication or reproduction. No one is authorized to dispose of same. If lost or destroyed, please notify the Script Department. 2ND REV. FINAL DRAFT OCTOBER 12, 1988 STAR TREK: "Elementary, Dear Data" - 10/12/88 - CAST STAR TREK: THE NEXT GENERATION "Elementary, Dear Data" CAST PICARD SHERLOCK HOLMES (DATA) RIKER DOCTOR JOHN H. WATSON (GEORDI) DATA INSPECTOR G. LESTRADE PULASKI JABEZ WILSON TROI PIE MAN GEORDI PROFESSOR JAMES MORIARTY WORF PROSTITUTE (WHORE) WESLEY THUG RUFFIAN ASSISTANT ENGINEER (CLANCY) Non-Speaking MAN Voice-Over STREET VENDORS COMPUTER VOICE PENNY POSTMEN BOBBIES STREET URCHINS BARRISTERS BUSINESSMEN LADIES LAMPLIGHTERS TARTS SAILORS YOUTH THUGS PROSTITUTES BEGGARS CROWD THE PODY WOMAN BOBBY TWO DRUNKEN SEAMEN TWO WHORES TWO BEGGARS Voice-Over COACHMAN STAR TREK: "Elementary, Dear Data" - 10/12/88 - SETS STAR TREK: THE NEXT GENERATION "Elementary, Dear Data" SETS INTERIORS EXTERIORS USS ENTERPRISE USS ENTERPRISE CORRIDOR - TURBOLIFT HOLODECK MAIN ENGINEERING GEORDI'S OFFICE HOLODECK - HOLMES' SITTING ROOM CONTROL FOYER LONDON STREET ALLEYWAY WAREHOUSE N.D. BUILDING MORIARTY'S LAIR TEN-FORWARD MAIN BRIDGE OBSERVATION LOUNGE STAR TREK: "Elementary... " - 10/12/88 - TEASER 1. STAR TREK: THE NEXT GENERATION "Elementary, Dear Data" TEASER FADE IN: A1 EXT. SPACE - THE ENTERPRISE (OPTICAL) The ship is motionless. PICARD (V.O.) Captain's log, Stardate 42486.3. We have arrived on station at coordinates -- three-six-two- nine-mark-five-eight-four, three days early for our rendezvous with USS Victory. There is nothing to do now, but hold this position and wait. 1 INT. ENTERPRISE - CORRIDOR AT TURBOLIFT as the doors snap open and DATA comes out, hurries down the corridor toward the Engineering Section. He appears concerned about something. 2 INT. MAIN ENGINEERING as Data hurries in from the corridor to the ASSISTANT ENGINEER, a pert redhead female, who is on duty. ASSISTANT ENGINEER Yes, Commander? DATA Is there a problem? Chief Engineer La Forge called for me. "Urgent!" ASSISTANT ENGINEER Oh, of course. (indicates) He's over there with the Victory. A very puzzled Data heads in the direction indicated. STAR TREK: "Elementary... " - 10/12/88 - TEASER 2. 3 INT. GEORDI'S OFFICE where GEORDI is making an adjustment on a computer panel. Data enters. DATA I just had a strange conversation with your assistant. Although it is three days until we rendezvous with Starship Victory, she... GEORDI (grins; overlapping) She believes it has already arrived. (indicates) But not the starship, my friend. The original! 4 PAN SHOT as Geordi leads Data to an Engine Room corner we haven't seen so far. It is indeed the Victory sitting there, a nearly completed five-foot model of it! Geordi leads Data to it, then kneels and begins putting some finishing touches on the model. GEORDI This is my gift to Starship Victory's Captain Zimbata. 5 CLOSE ON THE VICTORY MODEL including Geordi's hands (establishing scale) as he works on it. DATA Ah, most unusual. 6 MEDIUM SHOT Geordi, Data and model. GEORDI I served as an ensign under him. (indicates model) I wish he'd been in command of this Victory. Wind and sail, that's the proper way to move a ship. STAR TREK: "Elementary... " - 10/12/88 - TEASER 3. 6 CONTINUED: Geordi reaches in the model, adjusts something, CAMERA MOVING IN as Data crouches to watch, puzzled. DATA But your Starfleet specialty, my friend, is antimatter power, dilithium regulators... GEORDI Which is exactly why this fascinates me. Data, it's human nature to love what we don't have. Simpler days! (indicates model) While stringing this rigging, I was dreaming of sail handling and... DATA This is not a computer simulation? GEORDI Data, the entire point of something like this is to hand make it. Data is leaning in, inspecting it even more carefully. GEORDI (continuing) Just as you have used Old England in a hobby of your own. DATA Geordi... your message said "urgent." GEORDI And it is, my friend. While we wait to rendezvous with Victory, we have time for me to be Watson. Geordi produces a package, extends it to Data. Data pulls from the package a meerschaum pipe. GEORDI (continuing) More properly, your Watson. STAR TREK: "Elementary... " - 10/12/88 - TEASER 4. 6 CONTINUED: (2) It is the "Sherlock Holmes" pipe that Data used once before and Data is obviously delighted with it. He picks it up, tests the heft of it, moves it to his lips. DATA My Watson? 7 WIDER ANGLE as Geordi stands; indicates model. GEORDI You've seen my dream adventure... now let me share in one of yours. Data considers this, then lifts the meerschaum to the lips again, plays it as "Holmes." DATA Ah, yes. Yes, my dear colleague, that does seem only fair. The assistant engineer has entered to check a computer reading and Geordi beckons to her, indicates the model Victory. GEORDI I'll be gone awhile, Clancy. See that no one touches this! ASSISTANT ENGINEER Aye, sir. And where can I reach you? DATA He can be reached at 221B Baker Street. ASSISTANT ENGINEER Sir? But the two of them are already exiting. FADE OUT. END OF TEASER STAR TREK: "Elementary... " - 10/12/88 - ACT ONE 5. ACT ONE FADE IN: 8 INT. ENTERPRISE - CORRIDOR AT HOLODECK Data and Geordi are in front of the Holodeck entrance, programming the COMPUTER. Geordi (dressed as WATSON) is wearing Victorian trousers, waistcoat and tie, jacket and bowler. Data is dressed in the classic style of SHERLOCK HOLMES. DATA Computer -- select at random a mystery by Sir Arthur Conan Doyle, where I will play Sherlock Holmes and Lieutenant La Forge will be Doctor Watson. COMPUTER VOICE Program complete -- you may enter. The Holodeck doors open onto: 9 INT. HOLODECK - THE SITTING ROOM AT 221B BAKER STREET - THE DIGS OF MR. SHERLOCK HOLMES - DAY (OPTICAL) The Holodeck doors become a wall of Holmes' sitting room. It's all there. A perfect duplication of Sherlock Holmes' famous sitting room. DATA Excellent. The unlit oil lamps, the bookcase, the stick rack, the fireplace and its softly flaming fire within, the jack-knife stuck in the mantelpiece, the Persian slipper tobacco pouch, the chemical bottles and microscope, the deerstalker cap and cape-backed overcoat, the spirit case and gasogene, a pistol, the "V.R." script of bullet holes in one wall... GEORDI Look at all of the detail... and everything here has some significance? STAR TREK: "Elementary... " - 10/12/88 - ACT ONE 6. 9 CONTINUED: DATA Holmes collected nothing -- neither trinkets nor thoughts which were not specifically significant to him. 10 ANOTHER ANGLE Data surveys the room for authenticity -- Geordi makes a walk around the room, picking up articles and identifying them. He picks up a tie pin. GEORDI This? DATA The emerald tie pin presented to Holmes by Queen Victoria after he solved the theft of the Bruce-Partington plans. He touches a book. DATA (continuing) A copy of Whitaker's Almanack which provided Holmes the key to the secret code in "The Valley of Fear." He picks up a snuff box from the mantel. DATA (continuing) The snuff box of Wilhelm Gottsreich Sigismond von Ormstein. Geordi marvels at the detail. GEORDI All right -- you solve the cases and get the gifts, what do I do? DATA Primarily as Doctor Watson, you keep a written record of everything I do for later publication. STAR TREK: "Elementary... " - 10/12/88 - ACT ONE 7. 11 ANOTHER ANGLE Data steps over and picks up the violin. DATA And the famous Holmes violin. He purchased this in a pawn shop in Tottenham Court Road for fifty-five shillings, which he considered a very good investment. Geordi takes pen in hand to begin the journal. GEORDI In the hands of some, the violin is a wondrous thing, equally capable of stirring the soul to the heights of bliss as to the depths of despair... 11A EMPHASIZING DATA (OPTICAL) as he picks up the bow... begins to play. His music is surprisingly lovely. CAMERA PANS to Geordi as he lowers the pen, impressed. GEORDI Incredible, Data! How can you play it like that? DATA Merely throwing myself into the part, Watson. Geordi picks up his pen again, begins writing: GEORDI In the masterful grasp of my friend, Mr. Sherlock Holmes, the violin ceases to be a musical instrument at all and becomes... Data puts down the violin as outside WE HEAR THE CLOMP OF HORSES' HOOVES AND THE YELL OF A COACHMAN. DATA Watson! We are about to have guests. Data digs into his pockets for his pipe. There is the SOUND OF FEET ON THE STAIRS, THEN A KNOCK AT THE DOOR... STAR TREK: "Elementary... " - 10/12/88 - ACT ONE 8. 11A CONTINUED: DATA (continuing) Answer it, Watson -- let's not keep the good inspector waiting. GEORDI Inspector who? DATA Why Lestrade of course. Geordi's on his feet, heading for the door as there comes ANOTHER KNOCK, and LESTRADE'S VOICE: LESTRADE (O.S.) Holmes, are you there, man? Geordi fumbles slightly as he opens the door, and into the room come INSPECTOR G. LESTRADE and a MAN, wearing a double-breasted overcoat and bowler... Lestrade nods at Watson but crosses quickly toward Holmes as the man, his collar up to partially obscure his face, slides over to the darkest corner of the room and examines the chemistry apparatus there... LESTRADE (continuing) Thank the Almighty you're available tonight, Holmes, I'm in a deuce of a dilemma. DATA Then may I say your perturbation becomes you, Inspector Lestrade, whilst simultaneously affording me yet another chance to serve Queen and country. GEORDI (with a little laugh) Data, is that the way Holmes really talked? DATA Absolutely. Data steps over to the Persian slipper tobacco pouch, fills his pipe, tamps it, as: STAR TREK: "Elementary... " - 10/12/88 - ACT ONE 9. 11A CONTINUED: (2) LESTRADE Exactly... You see, this gentleman here -- (indicates the man) -- the emissary of a foreign government -- has been the victim of a most accidentally wicked crime... The light over Watson's journal has flickered lower. Geordi, not quite sure of how it works, tries to adjust it and breaks Lestrade's concentration as the lamp goes completely dark. GEORDI Damn! (to Data) Haven't they invented electric lights by now? LESTRADE What, dear fellow? DATA Watson, please! (to Lestrade) Pray go on, Inspector. LESTRADE Well, to put the matter simply, Holmes, this man was accosted by gypsies bent on depriving him of his most valuable possessions... and, in the process of picking his pockets clean, the gypsies also happened to bag a photograph this man was carrying -- Data reaches for the lapel of the Man's overcoat, and RIPS it down, tearing it from top to bottom... and, from inside the lining of the coat's hem, Data withdraws a photograph!... which he hands to a surprised Lestrade... LESTRADE (continuing) Great Scott! It's the photograph! STAR TREK: "Elementary... " - 10/12/88 - ACT ONE 10. 11A CONTINUED: (3) DATA I believe, Inspector, that you will find that this emissary here works not for but against the King of Bohemia, and that photograph of the king and his ex-mistress is to be used as blackmail. Further, upon deeper reflection, you will deduce, as did I, that... GEORDI (in disgust) Computer, freeze program. Exit! A set of Holodeck exit doors appears, parting TO REVEAL the interior corridor of the Enterprise... the Holodeck characters freeze. Geordi strides toward the exit. DATA Where are you going? GEORDI I'm done. DATA But I was just about to reveal that the "sir" is in fact a "madame," and that... GEORDI Forget it, Data. And Geordi strides out... Data puzzles over matters for a beat, and then he follows. The Holodeck doors close behind them. 12 INT. ENTERPRISE - TEN-FORWARD Geordi and Data are sitting at a table near the windows. The Enterprise is not moving. GEORDI What was the point to going onto the Holodeck? DATA To solve a Sherlock Holmes mystery. STAR TREK: "Elementary... " - 10/12/88 - ACT ONE 11. 12 CONTINUED: GEORDI Exactly, but, you've got them all memorized. The first time someone opens their mouth, you've got it solved. So, there's really no mystery. If there's no mystery... there's no game... no game... no fun. Geordi feels like he is being too emphatic. GEORDI (continuing) I'm not angry with you, Data, really... It's just that... we go to all the trouble to arrange time to come down to the Holodeck, to get the proper wardrobe, to get into character, and, boom, it barely gets started and you jump to the end. See, I was looking forward to the chase. DATA Then I should have extended the sequence of events. GEORDI I'm not getting through. The fun of the program is the attempt to solve a mystery. DATA That is exactly what we were doing. PULASKI (O.S.) You are wasting your breath, Lieutenant. And, from behind, DOCTOR PULASKI'S VOICE: Data and Geordi look around to find PULASKI sitting there, facing the opposite direction. PULASKI (continuing) Saying that to Data is asking a computer not to compute. STAR TREK: "Elementary... " - 10/12/88 - ACT ONE 12. 12 CONTINUED: (2) DATA Am I so different from you, Doctor? Can you cease thinking on command? PULASKI In medicine I face many puzzles to which I do not know the answer. GEORDI She's right, Data. You always know the answer. PULASKI To feel the thrill of a victory... there must be the possibility of failure. (to Data) Where's the victory winning a battle you can't possibly lose? DATA Are you suggesting that there is some value in losing? PULASKI (enthusiastic)) Yes. That's the great teacher. We humans often learn more from a mistake or a failure than we do from an easy success. But not you -- all your learning is by rote. To you it's all memorization and recitation. GEORDI I don't know about that. Deductive reasoning is Data's strength. PULASKI Yes, Holmes as well, but Holmes also understood the human soul. Those dark flecks which drive us... which turn the innocent to the evil. That understanding is beyond Data. It comes from "life" experience -- which he doesn't have -- combined with human intuition for which he cannot be programmed. STAR TREK: "Elementary... " - 10/12/88 - ACT ONE 13. 12 CONTINUED: (3) GEORDI I disagree -- totally. PULASKI His victory at playing Sherlock Holmes is just a blind mimicry, a collection of bits and bytes of information without any true understanding. GEORDI You're being unfair. PULASKI I don't think so, Lieutenant. Your artificial friend wouldn't have a prayer of solving a Holmes mystery which he hasn't read. DATA I have read them all. GEORDI Maybe the computer could create one in the style of Holmes... where you wouldn't know the outcome. PULASKI Like I said, he wouldn't have a prayer. DATA (to Pulaski) I accept your challenge, Doctor. GEORDI Good for you, Data. DATA We will return to the Holodeck and I will dare it to defeat me, and you Madam are invited to be a witness. PULASKI I wouldn't miss it. STAR TREK: "Elementary... " - 10/12/88 - ACT ONE 14. 12 CONTINUED: (4) Pulaski raises her glass to toast agreement... and she drinks the last swallow, now rises and leads Data away from the table... And Geordi stands to follow. FADE OUT. END OF ACT ONE STAR TREK: "Elementary... " - 10/12/88 - ACT TWO 15. ACT TWO FADE IN: 13 EXT. SPACE - THE ENTERPRISE (OPTICAL) The great vessel is parked. 14 INT. HOLODECK - CONTROL FOYER Geordi dressed as Watson, Data as Holmes... and Pulaski in upper class Victorian finery, layers and layers of it. She fans herself with her hand as Data activates the Holodeck console and inputs a sequence... PULASKI I've never been so hot in all my life -- are these clothes really necessary? GEORDI Believe me, you'd feel out of place without them... Just wait 'til you see our Holodeck, you'll swear you've actually been sent back to nineteenth century England. PULASKI Presuming I don't pass out first. She fans herself all the more... and Data's still inputting, as: DATA The Victorians believed that any form of nudity was immoral... In fact, they not only covered up all people from head to toe, but they even went so far as to put skirts and cuffs and sleeves on the arms and legs of furniture. (finishes inputting) I have instructed the computer to give us a Sherlock Holmes-type problem, but not one specifically written by Sir Arthur Conan Doyle. GEORDI So this will be something new, something created by the computer? STAR TREK: "Elementary... " - 10/12/88 - ACT TWO 16. 14 CONTINUED: DATA Exactly. (now eyes Pulaski) Will that be sufficient, Doctor? PULASKI We'll see. COMPUTER VOICE Program complete -- you may enter. 15 INT. HOLODECK - LONDON STREET - NIGHT The Holodeck doors open, REVEALING Victorian London. They step forward into the street scene. We see the awe on Pulaski's face as she gazes up and down this busy thoroughfare of horse-drawn carts, hansom cabs... There are STREET VENDORS, PENNY POSTMEN, BOBBIES, STREET URCHINS begging for tuppence, BARRISTERS in white wigs, BUSINESSMEN, LADIES, LAMPLIGHTERS, TARTS, SAILORS -- the full panoply of London denizens, all ignoring the sooty fog and sounds that waft through the scene... PIE MAN (his call) Pies, pies, Some are meat, Some are sweet, They're all the best... Pies... pies... WHORE You're a handsome one mister... shame to stay out here in the cold... PULASKI Very impressive. GEORDI Your first visit to the Holodeck, Doctor? The whore approaches a MAN we will recognize later as MORIARTY. WHORE How 'bout you deary... Want to get out of the fog? He ignores her. STAR TREK: "Elementary... " - 10/12/88 - ACT TWO 17. 15 CONTINUED: PULASKI First time on one with this level of sophistication. Now how does this work? The real London was over a hundred square miles in size. Data starts walking along the block, and Geordi and Pulaski follow closely, as: DATA This is no larger than the Holodeck, of course. So the computer adjusts by placing images of more distant perspectives on the Holodeck walls... GEORDI But with the image so perfect you'd have to touch the wall to know it was there. And the computer fools you in other ways. (Watson's accent) I say, Holmes, where shall we head -- the theatre? Rule's? Or perhaps a concert? Data stops walking, likewise freezing Geordi and Pulaski... and Data pulls out his pipe, methodically scans the scene, trying to determine their next move. SUDDENLY a YOUTH sprints out of the shadows carrying a sack and running for all he's worth. The Pie Man screams. PIE MAN Stop him. He stole my goods... Geordi moves to intercept the youth. DATA No. It is a ruse. This way. We FOLLOW Data's gesture to see a rather nondescript building by an alley -- a brass plaque on the building is unreadable at this distance... Now Data quickly crosses, with Geordi and Pulaski right on his heels. 16 REVERSE ANGLE - FROM THE STOOP OF N.D. BUILDING GEORDI But, Data, what's over here? STAR TREK: "Elementary... " - 10/12/88 - ACT TWO 18. 16 CONTINUED: PULASKI What are you up to, Data? Tell us. They have reached the building -- and Data is squinting up at a rope which is dangling from a vent in the ceiling over the stoop, just by the front door... 17 CLOSE-UP - THE ROPE hanging down, with the door lock and the brass plaque just back of it... The plaque reads: "HOME OF THE RED-HEADED LEAGUE"... DATA The running man was a hoax. The real crime is here. And the intended victim -- is... Data looks along the street. 18 LONDON STREET - DATA'S POV Walking toward them is a florid-faced gentleman (JABEZ WILSON) with a fiery shock of red hair. DATA ... that man. Mr. Jabez Wilson. Employee of the Red-Headed League, dupe of a gang of criminals. 19 DATA, GEORDI AND PULASKI (OPTICAL) Data indicates the plaque reads: "HOME OF THE RED-HEADED LEAGUE"... DATA I saw the plaque - "The Home of the Red-Headed League"... and this rope dangling from the vent, which enabled me to deduce that Mr. Jabez Wilson is coming here to meet a most distasteful and untimely demise. From this... Data reaches up and pulls the rope... and a snake -- yellow with brownish speckles -- falls off the rope, hits the ground, slithers away... STAR TREK: "Elementary... " - 10/12/88 - ACT TWO 19. 19 CONTINUED: PULASKI Fraud. You didn't deduce anything. You simply recognized elements from two different Holmes stories. Fraud. DATA Reasoning from the general to the specific -- is that not the very definition of deduction? Is that not the way Sherlock Holmes worked? At about this time, the red-headed Mr. Wilson walks closer. PULASKI Fraud. Variations on a theme. (to Geordi) Now... now do you see my point? All he knows is what is stored in his memory banks. Inspiration -- original thought -- the true strength of Holmes is not possible for our friend. (to Data) I give you credit for your vast knowledge, but your circuits would just short out when confronted by a truly original mystery. It's elementary, dear Data. GEORDI We will just see whose circuits short out, Doctor. Geordi leads them back over to the exit. GEORDI Computer! Arch! And the arch MATERIALIZES. The street crowd pay no attention, except for one man (Moriarty) in b.g., who eyes it offhandedly. PULASKI Are you really sure you want to put yourself through this, Lieutenant? Better wilted laurels than none at all. STAR TREK: "Elementary... " - 10/12/88 - ACT TWO 20. 19 CONTINUED: (2) GEORDI Computer, override previous programming. All right, now a program that definitely challenges Data. PULASKI It has to deal with events he has no previous knowledge of. GEORDI (thinks; then) Computer, in the Holmesian style, create a mystery to confound Data with an opponent who has the ability to defeat him. COMPUTER VOICE Define parameters of the program. PULASKI What does that mean? GEORDI The computer wants to know how far to take the game. PULASKI You mean it's giving you a chance to limit your risk. GEORDI No, the parameters will be whatever is necessary to accomplish the directive. (turns to computer) Create an adversary capable of defeating Data. Geordi pushes some buttons to: 20 thru OMITTED 21 A22 OMITTED STAR TREK: "Elementary... " - 10/12/88 - ACT TWO 21. B22 OMITTED C22 INT. MAIN BRIDGE - ANGLE INCLUDING WORF AND RIKER (B.G.) Out of the corner of his eye, Worf catches a strange reading on his console. WORF What was that? RIKER Lieutenant? WORF An odd surge of power, sir. (rechecking console) It's gone now. D22 INT. HOLODECK - LONDON STREET (OPTICAL) The Holodeck arch and doors DEMATERIALIZE. Data, Geordi and Pulaski are standing where we left them. They are looking at this London street and finding it totally different than when they last saw it. It seems a bit dirtier, peopled now with a scattering of THUGS, PROSTITUTES, and BEGGARS. It has a sense of danger which wasn't there before. PULASKI Interesting. The same London but... slightly different. 22 LONDON STREET - ANOTHER ANGLE Data leading them along it, looking for what is going to begin this mystery. Geordi is with him, Pulaski is a step behind. The prostitute comes out of the shadows and approaches Data: PROSTITUTE (WHORE) Hello, matey. For a few bob, I can put some color in your cheeks... DATA No thank you. STAR TREK: "Elementary... " - 10/12/88 - ACT TWO 22. 22 CONTINUED: PROSTITUTE "No thank you" is it? (points to thugs) Rather hand it over to them... Data leads the others past them. 23 DATA AND GEORDI as they move along the street. The PROSTITUTE motions to a COUPLE of dangerous THUGS, who are eyeballing Data and Geordi, and whisper behind their hands like a couple of thieves who see possible victims. Off to the side, PROFESSOR JAMES MORIARTY stands there as if momentarily dazed by something. 23A EMPHASIZING MORIARTY (OPTICAL) as the same prostitute notices his odd look. PROSTITUTE Is something wrong, Professor? Moriarty opens his eyes, seems pleased by something. MORIARTY I... I feel like a new man. (looks around; indicates) That dark man used the word "arch" and then... I wonder? (he tries it himself) "Arch." And just as it would for Data, the arch APPEARS. Moriarty steps over and inspects it while in the b.g. Data, Geordi and Pulaski move OUT OF SCENE. MORIARTY What have we here? COMPUTER VOICE Computer, standing by. Moriarty reacts, then: MORIARTY What are you? STAR TREK: "Elementary... " - 10/12/88 - ACT TWO 23. 23A CONTINUED: COMPUTER VOICE If you refer to the arch you ordered, it provides computer control. Do you wish to input any commands? MORIARTY Not at this time. The arch DISAPPEARS. PROSTITUTE (frightened) Aii! It's dark magic, Moriarty. She exits down the street. But Moriarty seems pleased, looks in the direction where Data and the others went. MORIARTY (to himself) The best kind, I'm sure. But I need information. Hurrying, he heads in the direction where we last saw Data. 24 OMITTED 25 LONDON STREET - ANOTHER ANGLE As they move through the clutter of the street, Data and Geordi move slightly ahead. Geordi is anxious for the new adventure to begin. Pulaski lags a bit behind. GEORDI Data -- I mean... Holmes old boy, what are we looking for? DATA For whatever finds us, dear Watson. Suddenly there is an O.S. SCREAM! from Pulaski. 26 ANOTHER ANGLE Data and Geordi spin around in response to find that Pulaski is gone. STAR TREK: "Elementary... " - 10/12/88 - ACT TWO 24. 27 REVERSE ANGLE - FROM THE SIDEWALK to the alley entrance. DATA (as Holmes) She has been abducted. GEORDI (as Geordi) I think she's hiding. She's going to lead you on a wild goose chase and then recount the story to everyone between here and Alpha Centauri. Data's eye catches her shoe (now scuffed on top and sides). 28 THE TRAIL OF SCUFF MARKS which runs along the sidewalk, and to the nearby alley... DATA Watson -- a trail... 29 RESUME SCENE DATA Leading to the alley... (then in Holmesian fashion, he continues) The doctor has been carried off by two men. One is tall -- a seaman. The other is shorter, left handed, and employed in a laboratory. GEORDI Left handed? And works in a lab? How do you know that? STAR TREK: "Elementary... " - 10/12/88 - ACT TWO 25. 29 CONTINUED: DATA One set of footfalls are widely spaced with the uneven gait particular to seamen. The other set is evenly spaced -- closer together. Further, you can see on the ground the swirling scrapes made by his left shoe as he twists back presumably to see if he is being followed. Left footed, means left handed. The dark coloration of the scrapes are the leavings of natural rubber -- a type of non-conductive soles used by researchers experimenting with electricity. (he pauses) Finally, there can be no argument -- the game is afoot! Come, Watson! And Data charges off, following the trail leading to the alley... Geordi is right behind him. FADE OUT. END OF ACT TWO STAR TREK: "Elementary... " - 10/12/88 - ACT THREE 26. ACT THREE FADE IN: 30 INT. HOLODECK - LONDON STREET - NIGHT Data and Geordi (as Holmes and Watson) turn off the street and enter the alley. THEIR FOOTFALLS ECHO... and they stand there, catching their breath, just listening... and WE HEAR OTHER RUNNING FOOTSTEPS AHEAD... DATA Hear that? What do those footfalls tell you, Watson? GEORDI That we're on the right track? DATA More particularly, that our opposition does indeed consist of two men... that one of them is carrying the bound and gagged Doctor Pulaski. We must hurry -- Data scoots down the alley once more, Geordi in tow, as: GEORDI You know all this because you read it in a Holmes story, right? DATA Not at all... Since we do not hear the doctor's footfalls, we must presume she is being carried, and since we do not hear her calling for help, we know she is gagged. Further... both sets of footfalls are heavy and masculine -- one man seems to shuffle and stumble in an irregular pattern... Since the ground is level, I must conclude that Doctor Pulaski is struggling against her captor, sporadically knocking him off stride. It is deduction, pure and simple... well, perhaps not that simple. STAR TREK: "Elementary... " - 10/12/88 - ACT THREE 27. 30 CONTINUED: Data and Geordi are just rounding the only sharp bend in the alleyway, and the RUNNING FOOTSTEPS AHEAD ARE LOUD AND VERY NEAR... DATA (continuing) Here we go, Watson -- I daresay we have caught up rather nicely with our quarry -- And Data and Geordi zoom out of the bend... and come to a stop as they find themselves face to face with a dead-end brick wall... There's no sign of anyone else there, no doors, no manholes, no way out except back the way they came... DATA (continuing) There should be a doorway. Data turns and heads back up the alley... 31 LONDON STREET - ALLEYWAY ENTRANCE as Data and Geordi wander out of the alley and along the street. Across from them is a warehouse. Lestrade rushes up: LESTRADE Holmes, thank God you're here. Lestrade grabs Data's arm, steers him -- with Geordi following -- to: 32 LONDON STREET where a CROWD has gathered in a circle to look at something on the ground... LESTRADE Make way, please, make way, make way for Mr. Sherlock Holmes... The crowd parts... and Lestrade, Data, and Geordi push through to find the object of interest -- STAR TREK: "Elementary... " - 10/12/88 - ACT THREE 28. 33 LYING ON THE GROUND -- THE BODY of a middle-aged, common-looking man... Now the feet of Data, Geordi, and Lestrade step INTO FRAME, around the body, as: LESTRADE (O.S.) It's murder, Holmes, murder most foul. Lestrade, Data, and Geordi stoop down for closer inspection of the body, and all are now IN FRAME, as: GEORDI (to Data) Well, Holmes, let's hear it. DATA There is nothing here of relevance. I do not see how this connects with the disappearance of the doctor. LESTRADE Doctor? Doctor Watson is standing right here, Holmes. DATA Doctor Kate Pulaski. But do not concern yourself, Inspector. You have enough on your mind. LESTRADE She was with you? 34 NEW ANGLE - DATA, GEORDI, LESTRADE, AND BODY Both Geordi and Data are enthralled by this game. Geordi returns to his role as the counterfeit Watson. GEORDI Inspector, perhaps I can be of assistance... As I take note of this dead man, I deduce that he was strangled. Geordi's moment in the sun: STAR TREK: "Elementary... " - 10/12/88 - ACT THREE 29. 34 CONTINUED: GEORDI (continuing) The finger marks on his throat indicate the cause of death, and, since there are signs of a struggle, it's obvious that his killer was a stranger, who caught him from behind. LESTRADE Is that correct, Holmes? DATA No. Look at his shoes. He's more a convict -- released just today from Dartmoor prison... He spent the day in a tavern where he consumed large quantities of gin -- with his killer, who followed him to this spot -- and waited over there until the victim slipped into a drunken stupor, then out of fear, motivated only by self-protection strangled him. Data indicates a WOMAN in the crowd. DATA (continuing) There is your killer, Inspector. She starts to run but is grabbed by a BOBBY, who brings her forward. DATA (continuing) And when you check, I believe you will find this poor soul is the victim's common law wife, who has been dreading his release because he was a vile and abusive man. GEORDI But, Holmes she doesn't have the strength of strangling him. DATA Not with her hands -- no. But with this. Data reaches over and takes a beaded scarf from around the woman's neck. STAR TREK: "Elementary... " - 10/12/88 - ACT THREE 30. 34 CONTINUED: (2) DATA (continuing) When used as a garrote, these beads will leave marks quite similar to fingerprints, except, my dear Watson... the marks on the victim are too evenly spaced to be caused by human hands. LESTRADE Astounding, Holmes... absolutely astounding. Data is uninterested in the compliment or further discussion of this crime; he turns and scans the street. 35 LONDON STREET - DATA'S POV He notices a tall man (Moriarty) entering a warehouse. 36 BACK TO SCENE Data has lost interest in the murder. DATA Inspector -- for reasons strictly personal -- I must leave. Come, Watson, this murder is not connected with our case. GEORDI (excitedly) If this murder isn't connected to the disappearance of Doctor Pulaski, then the computer is running an independent program. DATA Yes. GEORDI Why? DATA) (puzzled) I do not know... and that troubles me. STAR TREK: "Elementary... " - 10/12/88 - ACT THREE 31. 36 CONTINUED: GEORDI Then you don't know what's coming next? DATA No. GEORDI (still enjoying the game) That's what I wanted to hear. 37 LONDON STREET - ANOTHER ANGLE Data and Geordi leave the scene of the crime as a pushcart arrives to carry off the corpse and the bobby and Lestrade lead the woman away. 38 ENTRANCE TO THE WAREHOUSE Data and Geordi approach. There are a couple of drunken SEAMEN staggering along the sidewalk. Nearby is a very dangerous looking THUG, beyond whom is a vibrantly painted WHORE. A THUG comes up and grabs Data's coat. THUG Do you have some coppers for a hungry man? WHORE I'll give you some value for your copper, mate... There is an air of violence about this beggar. DATA Allow us to pass. THUG Give it up. WHORE Ain't no men left in London. DATA Release my coat or I will be forced to give you a severe thrashing. STAR TREK: "Elementary... " - 10/12/88 - ACT THREE 32. 38 CONTINUED: As the thug backs off, he bumps into Geordi, then pushes him aside and leaves. GEORDI It's getting a little rough. Where to, now? DATA We will find Doctor Pulaski inside. GEORDI How do you know that? DATA It is the only obvious choice. GEORDI Why, all of a sudden would the obvious choice be the correct choice? Isn't this a game of misdirection? DATA Not any more. He wants us to find him. GEORDI Who does? DATA The master criminal. The man Holmes could only defeat at the cost of his own life at Reichenbach falls - our adversary, my dear Watson is none other than Professor Moriarty himself. GEORDI Great -- now this is really getting good. Data pushes open the door. Geordi follows him through. 39 INT. WAREHOUSE is long, narrow and crammed full of barrels and crates. Data leads them down an aisle following a set of wet footprints. STAR TREK: "Elementary... " - 10/12/88 - ACT THREE 33. 39 CONTINUED: GEORDI There's nothing in here but these barrels. DATA ... and a trail. (indicating the tracks in the dust) Which is so well marked, that obviously we are meant to follow it. 40 ANOTHER ANGLE As the aisle ends against a blank wall. GEORDI Another dead end. Data runs his finger along a seam in wooden wall. DATA No Watson, not a dead end at all. Here -- can you see these scratches? Data pushes against the wall just to the left of the little scratches and the wall slides open to reveal another room. 41 INT. MORIARTY'S LAIR - TIGHT ANGLE - PANNING (OPTICAL) A windowless, doorless room, full of Victorian finery and bric-a-brac... A lab table and boxes full of bizarre tools, equipment, wires... And we: GEORDI The doctor was right, now we have a game worth playing. the VOICE of Moriarty, mellifluous and evil: MORIARTY The time for games is over. DATA Professor Moriarty, I presume? And Moriarty, tall, angular, in long frock appears from the side. Geordi turns to Data. STAR TREK: "Elementary... " - 10/12/88 - ACT THREE 34. 41 CONTINUED: GEORDI How did you know that? DATA He is the one worthy opponent created by the author, Conan Doyle. MORIARTY And, like the spider, I feel the strings vibrate whenever anyone new chances into my web. Welcome, my dear Holmes -- but not Holmes... and Doctor Watson... but not Watson. GEORDI (slightly concerned) What's he mean? How would he know we're not who we appear to be? DATA Where is Doctor Pulaski? MORIARTY She's here. But we don't see her. DATA She would not have answered any questions. MORIARTY (a wicked smile) She has provided many answers. Do you forget I have always been your equal, dear Holmes? I have read her expressions -- what she has not said is as important as her words... DATA (interrupts) Have you injured her? MORIARTY I will if necessary, Holmes. But my mind is crowded with images. Thoughts I do not understand yet cannot purge. They plague me. (MORE) STAR TREK: "Elementary... " - 10/12/88 - ACT THREE 35. 41 CONTINUED: (2) MORIARTY (Cont'd) You -- and your associate -- look and act so oddly, yet though I have never met nor seen the like of either of you... I am familiar with you both. It's very confusing. Data does not respond. MORIARTY (continuing) I have felt new realities at the edge of my consciousness, readying to break through... Surely, Holmes, if that's who you truly are -- you of all people can appreciate what I mean. GEORDI Data... DATA Say nothing! MORIARTY I know there is a great power called Computer, wiser than the oracle at Delphi. A power which controls (he waves his hand to encompass everything) ... all of this, and to which we can speak. Arch! And to the amazement of Data and Geordi, the computer arch APPEARS. GEORDI This isn't right, Data. How can a holographic image call for the arch? Data looks from the arch to Moriarty as his brain tries to sort it out. Moriarty takes a piece of paper from the pad beside his desk and quickly sketches a simple outline on the paper. STAR TREK: "Elementary... " - 10/12/88 - ACT THREE 36. 41 CONTINUED: (3) MORIARTY (in a rush of words) It has described a great monstrous shape on which I am like a fly -- stuck on a turtle's back -- adrift in a great emptiness. He gives the paper to Data, with: MORIARTY (continuing) What is this, Holmes? Data stares in shock at the drawing which neither we nor Geordi can see. Then, abruptly, paper still in hand, he turns... 42 INT. WAREHOUSE As Data -- followed by Geordi -- hurries through the warehouse toward the door. MORIARTY Tell me -- stop and tell me, man! Data glances back, but doesn't break stride. GEORDI Data! What's going on? DATA We must leave. Geordi is a few paces behind. GEORDI What's on the paper? MORIARTY (calling after them) Why does it frighten you, Holmes? 43 LONDON STREET Data and Geordi come out of the warehouse. The characters who have been inhabiting the street are more aggressive now than they have been. Data and Geordi are pulled at by TWO WHORES -- by a COUPLE OF BEGGARS -- who demand money and physically attempt to impede them. Data uses his hands to move a legless Beggar out of his way. The Fellini-like scene goes on. STAR TREK: "Elementary... " - 10/12/88 - ACT THREE 37. 43 CONTINUED: BEGGAR WHORE A few coppers, mate... Give up Give me some money. You got a few for a cripple. more than you need... BEGGAR WHORE Have pity. You could be like Never mind her... Give it me... I could never be like here... Don't pull away. you again. BEGGAR WHORE I got family... Don't let them They got not one to feed but be hungry. Just a few coppers. their face. I got a couple of young ones. BEGGAR WHORE Won't mean a bit to you. I got me three of them. Get a few bob up Lordy. 44 ANOTHER ANGLE (OPTICAL) They arrive at where the exit should be. DATA (calls) Computer! Exit! And exit doors MATERIALIZE. GEORDI Will you please tell me what is going on? Data steps through and into the Enterprise corridor. 45 INT. ENTERPRISE - CORRIDOR Geordi exits. The doors close. DATA Computer. Execute a complete shutdown of the Holodeck. COMPUTER VOICE Access denied. DATA Explain. COMPUTER VOICE Override protocol has been initiated. STAR TREK: "Elementary... " - 10/12/88 - ACT THREE 38. 45 CONTINUED: They step to the Holodeck doors which open to reveal the London street scene, still active and bustling -- Geordi is stunned. GEORDI The program is still running. It didn't shut down. DATA We must see the captain. Data strides down the corridor, heading for the turbolift as the Holodeck doors close and Geordi starts to follow Data. GEORDI What is it? What's on the paper? Why can't you shut down the Holodeck? Data -- wait. DATA This. He shows Geordi the paper. It's a sketch of the USS Enterprise. GEORDI This isn't possible. How could a character from 1890 London be able to draw a picture of our starship? Who has control of the computer? DATA He does -- Moriarty. GEORDI How is that possible? I don't understand. DATA Neither do I. GEORDI What about the doctor? Is she all right? DATA No. She is in grave danger. Off Geordi's reaction, we: FADE OUT. END OF ACT THREE STAR TREK: "Elementary... " - 10/12/88 - ACT FOUR 39. ACT FOUR FADE IN: 46 EXT. SPACE - THE ENTERPRISE (OPTICAL) as it holds in position. 47 INT. OBSERVATION LOUNGE PICARD has assembled his staff -- TROI, RIKER, WORF, Data, and Geordi (the latter two still in Victorian costume) -- he is holding Moriarty's sketch of the Enterprise in his hands. PICARD Computer. Tell me. Why wasn't the Holodeck program terminated? COMPUTER VOICE The override protocol has been initiated. PICARD On whose authority? COMPUTER VOICE Lieutenant Geordi La Forge. All eyes turn to Geordi. GEORDI Me? PICARD Tell me again -- exactly what happened. GEORDI Doctor Pulaski and I had a discussion about whether Data could solve an original Holmes-type mystery. PICARD And you asked the computer to provide one. GEORDI Yes... with a worthy opponent. STAR TREK: "Elementary... " - 10/12/88 - ACT FOUR 40. 47 CONTINUED: PICARD Worthy of Holmes? The realization comes to Geordi. GEORDI Oh, my God. I asked for a Sherlock Holmes-type mystery with an opponent capable of defeating Data. That must be it. PICARD (in French) Terrible! GEORDI Captain... I'm sorry... PICARD I understand, Lieutenant. Well, at least now we have part of an explanation. The computer is not trying to confound "Holmes," which would be relatively easy, it has been ordered to create an adversary to defeat Data. Geordi turns away. GEORDI ... I got carried away... RIKER That's past. Data, this character Moriarty... you said he called for the arch... DATA Yes. PICARD So he is able to access the computer. DATA And perhaps also our library files. That level of information would be necessary in order to create a true adversary for me. STAR TREK: "Elementary... " - 10/12/88 - ACT FOUR 41. 47 CONTINUED: (2) PICARD Theorize, Data. What are his limits? DATA He is still a fictional character, originally programmed with nineteenth century knowledge. RIKER But with access now to the twenty-fourth century. PICARD What does he need to begin making use of that? DATA Only time. WORF Sir, I can lead a security team to sweep the Holodeck, find the Doctor, and bring her out. DATA Captain, I believe that would place the doctor at risk. It is probable that the mortality failsafe has been overridden. PICARD Computer, locate Doctor Pulaski. COMPUTER VOICE Doctor Pulaski is on Holodeck Two. PICARD And her vital signs? COMPUTER VOICE Strong and stable. PICARD Counselor Troi, have you a sense of our opponent? STAR TREK: "Elementary... " - 10/12/88 - ACT FOUR 42. 47 CONTINUED: (3) TROI It is difficult for me to separate a single individual from all the disorder I feel down there. Captain, what is unusual about this is that I should not be able to sense a holographic projection at all -- yet I do. RIKER Captain, recommend we try to destroy the hologram-generations themselves. Is that possible, Geordi? GEORDI Using wave guides, I could split a particle stream out of the matter/antimatter chamber and route it down through existing conduit into the Holodeck -- if it is accelerated to sufficient velocity that will quite literally wash away all the present holographic constructs -- the London buildings, the streets, the people, all gone... including Moriarty. PICARD And Doctor Pulaski? RIKER The particle stream will tear apart human flesh as well, that option is not acceptable. TROI Captain, I am suddenly sensing more order to the energy on the Holodeck -- as if one unifying force, one consciousness, is trying to bring it all into focus. DATA Captain, there is only one thing which can explain this. In programming Moriarty to defeat me, not Holmes, he had to be able to acquire something which I possess. STAR TREK: "Elementary... " - 10/12/88 - ACT FOUR 43. 47 CONTINUED: (4) PICARD Exactly what? DATA Consciousness. He cannot defeat me without it. SUDDENLY THE SHIP SHAKES. Very quick, very violent. Then stops. PICARD Computer -- what happened? COMPUTER VOICE Attitude and stabilization control of the Enterprise was momentarily transferred to Holodeck Two. PICARD Data -- I think it's best if you and I returned to the Holodeck. DATA I will change into my uniform. PICARD No -- I'll change into an appropriate costume. It seems he feeds on knowledge. Let's not give your nemesis any more information than we have to. 48 INT. MORIARTY'S LAIR - TIGHT ANGLE - PANNING A windowless, doorless room, full of Victorian finery and bric-a-brac... A blackboard covered with equations surrounding a sketch of the Enterprise... A lab table and boxes full of bizarre tools, equipment, wires... And we: Moriarty is standing there by what is now an assembled heap of odd machinery -- gears and belts and pistons and coils... a boiler and an upright exhaust pipe... riveted ironbrass plates for a covering... a large clutch lever and a mechanical arrow indicator for "ENGAGE/DISENGAGE" (currently set to the latter). He steps away from the machine, and crosses the little room. PULASKI How did you shake the room? STAR TREK: "Elementary... " - 10/12/88 - ACT FOUR 44. 48 CONTINUED: MORIARTY I am not sure. 49 ANOTHER ANGLE (OPTICAL) Moriarty approaches the table, and pours a cup of tea for Doctor Pulaski. Pulaski has guessed that something is out of whack and her best course of action is to provide as little info as possible. MORIARTY Now, dear lady, will that be one lump or two? PULASKI Lumps, Professor? What sort of lumps? He drops two into her cup of tea... and now he lifts the creamer: MORIARTY Milk, of course? PULASKI (beat; then) Why not. MORIARTY Mister Computer proposes the incredible thought that we are all traveling in a great vessel of some sort. Moriarty pours the milk into Pulaski's cup... and he gently slides her cup and saucer to her... MORIARTY (continuing) ... Is that true? PULASKI I don't know what you are talking about. MORIARTY The scones are likewise a must. STAR TREK: "Elementary... " - 10/12/88 - ACT FOUR 45. 49 CONTINUED: He slides her the tray of biscuits, muffins, and pastry -- she stares at everything, finally lifts the tea to her lips and gives it the merest taste as he watches expectantly... And: PULASKI Uh, it's really quite excellent. MORIARTY (puzzled) Strange. It actually pleases me to hear you say that. PULASKI Very strange. You're beginning to sound quite different from the Moriarty I've read about. Moriarty smiles, takes a bite out of a pastry... And: MORIARTY You're not frightened of me? PULASKI No. MORIARTY You should be. (another bite of pastry) Mister Computer -- the arch, please. And the arch and exit MATERIALIZE out of the near wall. MORIARTY (continuing) A few more questions, Mister Computer. Stunned, Pulaski watches as Moriarty types very rapidly in two-finger style. Then after a bit, while still typing: MORIARTY (continuing) I just can't seem to remember that last command... Ah, well, sooner or later it'll all come to me. STAR TREK: "Elementary... " - 10/12/88 - ACT FOUR 46. 49 CONTINUED: (2) Then he hits one more button, and the arch DEMATERIALIZES... And now Moriarty stands, strolls to his lab equipment, putters among it, picking up pieces here and there, turning them, staring at them from various angles, as: MORIARTY (continuing) But, in the meantime, I've decided to approach the problem from a more familiar perspective. There's really no reason I shouldn't be able to use some of the knowledge from my world in order to bring me closer to yours. PULASKI I have no idea what you're talking about. MORIARTY Of course you do, Madam. The more you proclaim your ignorance, the more you attempt to mislead me, the more I am on to you -- your every silence speaks volumes. PULASKI Good, then if you know what I'm saying when I'm not saying anything, what do you need me around for? (stands) Thanks for the tea and crumpets, but I guess I'll be going. MORIARTY Where? Back to here? Moriarty jabs his finger against his blackboard drawing of the Enterprise -- PULASKI Yes, would you care to join me? MORIARTY (smiles) In time -- in time I will leave all of this and join you out there. Indicates a place on the drawing. STAR TREK: "Elementary... " - 10/12/88 - ACT FOUR 47. 49 CONTINUED: (3) MORIARTY (beat; then pointing to another spot, continuing) Or is this where we both are right now? PULASKI Right now we are in London. Tell me what you want from me, or allow me to leave. MORIARTY Frankly, now, I want nothing more than what the fisherman expects of the worm... You, dear Doctor, will be the lure... and this will be the hook -- (indicates the odd, unassembled equipment; then:) -- for your captain, Jean-Luc Picard. PULASKI (covering her surprise) Who is that? And Moriarty grins... MORIARTY How well you know. 50 INT. CORRIDOR (OPTICAL) They are outside the Holodeck. Picard is dressed in the costume of a Victorian gentleman. Data -- as he has been -- as Sherlock Holmes. Riker; Worf, wearing the costume of a Victorian gentleman, steps off the turbolift... waiting... Riker eyes Picard and Data as they stride up... PICARD Nice suit. WORF Thank you, Captain. I'll be standing by to assist you on the Holodeck if needed. STAR TREK: "Elementary... " - 10/12/88 - ACT FOUR 48. 50 CONTINUED: RIKER (grins at Worf) You'd be a sensation in London. PICARD Shall we sally forth, Mr. Holmes? (to computer) Computer tell me, is the program still running? COMPUTER VOICE Affirmative. You may enter. PICARD Open. The Holodeck doors open TO REVEAL the London street. It's still night, but it's changed. Like a photograph which has been torn -- parts of the computer-generated image have deteriorated. The wall of the Holodeck shows. PICARD (continuing) We don't have much time. He is getting more control of his environment. Come on, let us see if we can't beat Professor Moriarty by giving him absolutely everything he wants... and then some. Picard and Data enter the Holodeck. FADE OUT. 51 OMITTED END OF ACT FOUR STAR TREK: "Elementary... " - 10/12/88 - ACT FIVE 49. ACT FIVE FADE IN: 52 OMITTED 53 INT. HOLODECK - LONDON STREET - ANGLE ON PICARD AND DATA - NIGHT ... as they walk up the street. In addition to evidence of tears in the Holodeck program, the inhabitants of the street are in an uglier mood than we've seen before. Picard points to a place where the Holodeck wall shows through the London view. PICARD Obviously, he's attempting to alter the programming here. Picard sees something on the street, reaches down to pick it up. DATA Captain? Picard reveals a copper coin he has picked up. PICARD Tuppence -- two pence. (placing it in his pocket) A sign of good luck. We may need some... A huge London RUFFIAN has stepped in to place a hand on Picard's pocket. He is dangerous looking. RUFFIAN I'll have that coin. And the rest of what you have. 53A PICARD AND RUFFIAN as the man pulls at the pocket with sudden violence. Others in the crowd move in like jackals. 53B OMITTED STAR TREK: "Elementary... " - 10/12/88 - ACT FIVE 50. 53C ANGLE EMPHASIZING PICARD AND RUFFIAN who pulls at Picard's clothing. RUFFIAN I said show me that thing! I want it and your money! The thug pulls a knife. PICARD Data! Data steps up and grabs Ruffian with one hand, lifts him off the ground. The others in the crowd back off. DATA (while holding the Thug aloft) Captain, this holographic image differs from any I have encountered. It is possible he could have seriously injured you. PICARD It's more serious than that. I think the mortality failsafe has been circumvented. He could have killed me. DATA Query. Is the converse also true? Are these projections susceptible to our technology? PICARD I don't know. Ruffian sees what has him. His voice comes out weakly: RUFFIAN Let me go, Gov. PICARD Take his knife and let him go, Data. Data takes the knife, then releases Ruffian who slinks off. DATA (indicating)) We'll find Moriarty this way. The warehouse. STAR TREK: "Elementary... " - 10/12/88 - ACT FIVE 51. 54 OMITTED 55 INT. WAREHOUSE (OPTICAL) as they cross to the wall. PICARD Moriarty is making it very easy for us to find him. DATA Captain, permission to test my theory. PICARD Granted. Data removes a PHASER from his pocket, makes a slight adjustment in the setting, then FIRES at a crate... 55A CRATE as it BLOWS UP AND DISAPPEARS. DATA Under normal circumstances the phaser would pass right through the holographic image. PICARD How will it affect a character like Moriarty? DATA The effect on him should be the same as it was on the crate. 56 INT. MORIARTY'S LAIR As Picard ENTERS with Data. This room has also changed. Much more of the Holodeck wall is showing. Moriarty is standing by his odd machine. It has changed. On the blackboard, the rough sketch of the Enterprise has been replaced by detailed, colored schematics... Pulaski knows that something has gone wrong, and she's interested to see how this is going to play out. MORIARTY Captain Picard. STAR TREK: "Elementary... " - 10/12/88 - ACT FIVE 52. 56 CONTINUED: PICARD (to Pulaski) Are you all right? PULASKI (answers Picard) I'm fine. Except for being crammed full of crumpets. DATA Crumpets? PULASKI You look quite dashing, Captain. This is the first time I get to see you in action. MORIARTY I hope you're not disappointed. PULASKI I'm sure I won't be. PICARD You two have gotten awfully... MORIARTY ... chummy? Yes, this time together has been quite pleasant. I am a civilized abductor, Captain Picard. Civilized but still dangerous. Moriarty slams the handle of the machine into the "ENGAGE" position. The room ROCKS. 57 INT. ENTERPRISE - MAIN BRIDGE Riker, and the bridge crew are thrown around. RIKER Bridge to Holodeck Control. Worf. 58 OMITTED 58A INT. HOLODECK - OUTSIDE THE ENTRY Worf, touching his insignia in order to respond to Riker: STAR TREK: "Elementary... " - 10/12/88 - ACT FIVE 53. 58A CONTINUED: WORF Here, sir. RIKER'S COM VOICE Status. Has anything changed? Worf looks the particle device over, responds: WORF No. 59 INT. MORIARTY'S LAIR SHAKING HAS STOPPED. PICARD Moriarty, you were conjured up to attempt to defeat Holmes here... and once that attempt is concluded -- win or lose -- your program has run its course, your existence is done. Picard nods at Data... and Data who nods: DATA Congratulations, Professor Moriarty, I capitulate to the better man -- your victory is well earned. Data steps toward Moriarty, his hand outstretched to shake the professor's... but Moriarty pulls away. MORIARTY It's gone beyond that little game, Mister Data. And you'll note I no longer call you Holmes. Whatever I was when this began, I have grown. I am understanding more and more. And I am able to use the power at my fingertips. Again, he throws the lever. The room ROCKS. MORIARTY (continuing) I can affect this... this vessel, if that's where we are. I can also inflict bodily harm on you -- or on your doctor. STAR TREK: "Elementary... " - 10/12/88 - ACT FIVE 54. 59 CONTINUED: PICARD Yes -- I know that, Moriarty, but you haven't. You shook this ship because you wanted to get my attention -- you have it. So what is it you want? MORIARTY The same thing you want for yourself. To continue to exist. If I destroy these surroundings, this vessel, can you say it doesn't matter to you? (smiles) Interesting pun, don't you agree, for matter is what I am not. The computer has taught me that I am made up only of energy. PICARD That... may not be completely true, Professor. This... which we call our "Holodeck" makes use of the same principle in another of our devices called a "transporter." By the year in which we live, humans have discovered that matter and energy are interchangeable. On this Holodeck energy has been converted to matter and thus you have substance, but only here. MORIARTY And if I step off this Holodeck? Everyone hesitates over what the real answer to this is. Then: PULASKI You would cease to be. PICARD You are not alive, Moriarty, as I said you are only... MORIARTY A holographic image, I know. But are you sure? PICARD Yes. STAR TREK: "Elementary... " - 10/12/88 - ACT FIVE 55. 59 CONTINUED: (2) MORIARTY (indicating Data) Does he have life? (pause) He's a machine -- but is that all he is? PICARD No. He is more. MORIARTY Exactly. (pause) Is the definition of life "cogito ergo sum"? I think, therefore I am. PICARD That's one possible definition. MORIARTY It is the most important one and for me -- the only one that matters. You -- or someone -- asked your computer to program a nefarious fictional character from nineteenth century London -- and that is how I arrived... but I am no longer that creation. I am no longer that evil character, I have changed. I am alive -- I am aware of my own consciousness. Moriarty throws Pulaski an almost tender look. PICARD I'm responsible for the safety of this vessel and crew. MORIARTY I want my existence. (indicates) I want it out there just as you have yours. Picard exchanges looks with his associates, then: PICARD (gently) That may not be possible. STAR TREK: "Elementary... " - 10/12/88 - ACT FIVE 56. 59 CONTINUED: (3) MORIARTY Then you must do murder. PICARD I cannot give you what you want. MORIARTY Because you do not yet know how to convert Holodeck matter into a more permanent form. PICARD That is true -- Moriarty holds Picard with a long look. MORIARTY A pity. What I have seen -- what I have learned, fascinates me. I do not want to die. PICARD And I do not want to kill you. MORIARTY (to Pulaski) Madam, I have enjoyed your company. PULASKI It's been different. MORIARTY (calls) Computer! "Arch." The arch APPEARS. MORIARTY (continuing) Cancel override protocol, return control of the Holodeck to main computer. My fate is in your hands, as perhaps it always was. A long beat, then: PICARD Bridge, this is the Captain. RIKER'S COM VOICE This is the bridge. STAR TREK: "Elementary... " - 10/12/88 - ACT FIVE 57. 59 CONTINUED: (4) PICARD Number One, the situation is under control. RIKER'S COM VOICE Aye, sir. 60 thru OMITTED 61 62 OMITTED 62A EMPHASIZING PICARD as he stands. Then: PICARD Professor Moriarty, this ship has vast, library memory capacity. MORIARTY How well I know... PICARD We will save this program of you. You will not be extinguished. We will save every aspect of you that exists now. And I promise you we will try to discover a way to bring you back in a form capable of leaving the Holodeck. Moriarty looks toward Pulaski who is nodding rapidly as if to say "trust him." MORIARTY (to Pulaski) Then perhaps we'll meet again some day, Madam. PULASKI It may take many years. Time won't pass for you, but I may be an old woman. STAR TREK: "Elementary... " - 10/12/88 - ACT FIVE 58. 62A CONTINUED: MORIARTY But I'll still fill you with crumpets, Madam. (to Picard) I detest long good-byes. (indicates) You have the arch. 62B ANOTHER ANGLE (OPTICAL) as Picard eyes the arch and then Moriarty. PICARD As you wish. A short good-bye. (toward arch) Computer, save this program... then discontinue it for now. A beat, then MORIARTY AND THE ENTIRE ROOM FADE AWAY. The three are standing on the Holodeck. DATA Right up to the end, he never knew. PICARD No. He didn't. PULASKI Know. Know what? PICARD That he could leave the Holodeck. PULASKI But that's not possible. DATA I do not know how, but for Moriarty it was. PULASKI Then you lied when you told him he couldn't leave the Holodeck. STAR TREK: "Elementary... " - 10/12/88 - ACT FIVE 59. 62B CONTINUED: DATA No, what the captain said was that we do not know how to convert Holodeck matter into a more permanent form. Which is true. Even after we review this program, we still may not have the answer. PICARD Doctor, even with all his assurances -- that character was still Professor Moriarty. I will need to know a lot more about him before I allow him loose on my ship; he has, after all, made his reputation through cunning and deceit. PULASKI But how do you know he could leave the Holodeck? PICARD Data. Data reaches into his coat pocket and removes the paper on which Moriarty first drew the sketch of the Enterprise. PULASKI The drawing? DATA No. The paper. This piece of paper was created as part of the Holodeck illusion. If it could leave the Holodeck, so too could Moriarty. PULASKI I'm impressed. DATA It is elementary, my dear Doctor... It is elementary. 62C OMITTED STAR TREK: "Elementary... " - 10/12/88 - ACT FIVE 60. 63 thru OMITTED 64 65 INT. MAIN ENGINEERING As Picard, back in uniform, enters; Geordi is beside the Victory model. He crosses to where Geordi is examining the model. Geordi has lost some of his normal buoyancy, because he is feeling responsible for what has happened. Picard watches him for a moment. PICARD Damaged? GEORDI Yes. A spar was cracked when the Enterprise was shaken. Otherwise she seemed to have weathered it nicely. PICARD She's beautifully turned out, Lieutenant -- wonderful testimony to simpler times. GEORDI Yes -- it's just that I can't help thinking how badly it could have been damaged all because I misspoke a word. PICARD Will she still sail? GEORDI Yes sir. PICARD As will we. RIKER'S COM VOICE Captain -- Starship Victory has arrived. PICARD On my way, Number One. We HOLD on Geordi and the model of the Victory, and we see his mood is beginning to lighten as he fixes her spar... STAR TREK: "Elementary... " - 10/12/88 - ACT FIVE 61. 66 EXT. SPACE - THE ENTERPRISE (OPTICAL) as in the distance the other ship, Victory, approaches. FADE OUT. END OF ACT FIVE THE END STAR TREK: THE NEXT GENERATION "The Outrageous Okona" #40272-130 Premise by Les Menchen & Lance Dickson and David Landsberg Teleplay by Burton Armus Directed by Robert Becker THE WRITING CREDITS MAY NOT BE FINAL AND SHOULD NOT BE USED FOR PUBLICITY OR ADVERTISING PURPOSES WITHOUT FIRST CHECKING WITH THE TELEVISION LEGAL DEPARTMENT. Copyright 1988 Paramount Pictures Corporation. All Rights Reserved. This script is not for publication or reproduction. No one is authorized to dispose of same. If lost or destroyed, please notify the Script Department. FINAL DRAFT OCTOBER 4, 1988 STAR TREK: "The Outrageous Okona" - 10/4/88 - CAST STAR TREK: THE NEXT GENERATION "The Outrageous Okona" CAST PICARD THADIUN OKONA RIKER THE COMIC DATA DEBIN PULASKI KUSHELL TROI BENZAN GEORDI YANAR WORF WESLEY GUINAN TRANSPORTER CHIEF (B.G. ROBINSON) Non-Speaking CREWMEMBERS TWO SECURITY OFFICERS AUDIENCE Voice-Over COMPUTER VOICE STAR TREK: "The Outrageous Okona" - 10/4/88 - SETS STAR TREK: THE NEXT GENERATION "The Outrageous Okona" SETS INTERIORS EXTERIORS USS ENTERPRISE USS ENTERPRISE MAIN BRIDGE AFT STATIONS - ERSTWHILE MISSION CONTROL PANEL TRANSPORTER ROOM TWO OTHER SPACECRAFT TRANSPORTER PAD MAIN ENGINEERING JEFFERIES TUBE CORRIDOR TEN-FORWARD CORRIDOR - OUTSIDE HOLODECK HOLODECK (NIGHTCLUB) B.G. ROBINSON'S QUARTERS OBSERVATION LOUNGE DEBIN CRAFT MAIN BRIDGE STAR TREK: "The Outrageous Okona" - 10/4/88 - TEASER 1. STAR TREK: THE NEXT GENERATION "The Outrageous Okona" TEASER FADE IN: 1 EXT. SPACE - THE ENTERPRISE (OPTICAL) as it moves through space at impulse speed PICARD (V.O.) Captain's log, Stardate 42502.7. We are traveling in the Omega Twelve System traversing between a clustering of small planets that form the coalition of Madena VI. 2 INT. MAIN BRIDGE We see the complement of people who normally make up the bridge crew. DATA and WESLEY at the front consoles controlling CONN and OPS. RIKER sits on one side of PICARD at the Command Area, the opposite seat empty, WORF stands near the Science Stations which are manned by n.d. crewmembers. PICARD (V.O.) (continuing) Each of these planets is populated by separate humanoid people who co-exist and trade technology and minerals under a precarious but successful treaty. 3 AFT STATIONS - MISSION CONTROL PANEL An ALERT SIGNAL FLASHES on the screen. The science crewmember looks up to Worf who steps to the panel, checks it and then announces. WORF We have an unidentified vessel approaching. RIKER Give me grid markers. STAR TREK: "The Outrageous Okona" - 10/4/88 - TEASER 2. 3 CONTINUED: WORF Sector three-nine-five-six, mark zero-nine-one. The personnel on the bridge show little emotion but you can sense a little stiffening of their posture, a glint of expectation in Worf's eyes. Picard sits coolly and observes his well-tuned crew handling the situation. 4 ANGLE ON SCIENCE SCREEN - INTERCUTS AS NEEDED Lines start to form the three dimensions blueprint of a space vehicle, at first very sparse and then filling quickly as more information runs through the computers and information bands run across the lower portion of the screen. DATA Sensor readings place overall dimension of vehicle an interplanetary cargo ship. WORF One life sign on board, appears to be humanoid. In the b.g. we see TROI exit the turbolift and take her place quietly beside Picard. DATA A vessel of that size usually maintains a crew of six. WORF Minimum armament present. DATA Sensors show cargo holds are empty. WORF The course is inconsistent with normal cargo routes. RIKER This could be a primitive method to elude detection. STAR TREK: "The Outrageous Okona" - 10/4/88 - TEASER 3. 5 SCIENCE SCREEN The three-dimensional schematic slowly revolves around the screen showing all angles of the unidentified craft. An alert RED DOT BLINKS on the interior of part of the live blueprint and a band of continuing detail specifications rolls across the lower portion of the screen. DATA Readout shows a burnout in inertial guidance system... RIKER The pilot is attempting to hold his vessel in check manually. WORF That could be a pretense. 6 ON PICARD He speaks calmly. PICARD Captain's log, supplemental. We have just encountered and identified an interplanetary cargo vessel which is apparently in need of emergency assistance. We will make every effort to do so. (beat) Open hailing frequencies. WORF Hailing frequencies open. PICARD This is the USS Enterprise. Captain Jean-Luc Picard, over. A pleasant male voice with the touch of laughter and humor in it comes over the speakers. OKONA'S COM VOICE And this is the cargo ship Erstwhile "limping" and "skidding" off course. Captain Okona at your service. As you see, there is no need for phasers, Captain. I'm harmless and not quite ready yet for mercy killing. STAR TREK: "The Outrageous Okona" - 10/4/88 - TEASER 4. 6 CONTINUED: PICARD You were never considered a danger to us, Captain Okona. OKONA'S COM VOICE It's a shame. I can remember when I was at least considered a "risk." There is a moment of silence, then the sound of Okona's laughter, which builds and becomes infectious. At first it puzzles the Enterprise crew, then the laughter catches hold and slight smiles begin to break the tension. WORF The ship is in viewer range now, Captain. PICARD Main Viewer on. 7 ON MAIN VIEWER (OPTICAL) We now see the image of the man, his face slightly turned from the screen and not clearly showing. His joviality continues, and although more subdued, seems to be just as contagious. OKONA I'm the owner and operator of this craft and since we both know you scanned my vessel, you know I'm alone and empty... (smile) ... and it's truly a rare occasion for a man of my charm, beauty and talent. Okona mocks his own arrogance with his spontaneous laughter. His humorous jab at himself takes the bite off the remark. 8 CLOSER ON MAIN VIEWER - OKONA (OPTICAL) Turns his smile full face to the Main Viewer. He has the look of a hero, the twinkle in the steely blue eyes softening the rugged handsomeness of the man.  STAR TREK: "The Outrageous Okona" - 10/4/88 - TEASER 5. 8 CONTINUED: OKONA But then with the condition of this vessel I'm glad I have no responsibilities except for myself till I can get some repairs. 9 INT. MAIN BRIDGE (OPTICAL) Picard turns to Troi. PICARD Counselor, can you read him? TROI His emotions suggest that he is mischievous, irreverent and somewhat brazen. (beat) And some other things... (unsure) The word that seems to describe him best is "rogue." DATA Rogue? Accessing "rogue." (kicks in) Cad, knave, rake, rascal, scoundrel, villain. TROI Yes, all of that, but he shows no malevolence, or ill will. Picard turns back to the viewscreen. PICARD What form of assistance can we offer you, Captain? OKONA I had a burnout on my guidance system. I'd appreciate it if I could use your facilities to repair it. WESLEY It would be possible. PICARD Estimate, Mister Data. STAR TREK: "The Outrageous Okona" - 10/4/88 - TEASER 6. 9 CONTINUED: DATA Time for repair would be seven hours sixteen minutes. RIKER Okona will have to shut down while we verify specifications. Picard holds a few beats, then issues his orders. PICARD Lieutenant Worf, prepare security procedures. (to Okona) We can accommodate you. WORF I'll allow him limited access. RIKER If you'll prepare to shut down your engines we'll lock on tractors and beam you aboard. OKONA Many thanks, Captain Picard. RIKER Transporter Chief, prepare to beam aboard from Tractor lock bearing. The well-modulated female voice of the TRANSPORTER CHIEF, B.G. ROBINSON, answers. B.G. ROBINSON'S COM VOICE Yes Number One, at your command. OKONA Is that a woman's voice I hear? PICARD Yes. Now please follow the directions of Commander Riker so our ship can get back to its normal routine. Riker smiles as he moves away. Picard notices. PICARD (continuing) Something funny, Commander Riker. STAR TREK: "The Outrageous Okona" - 10/4/88 - TEASER 7. 9 CONTINUED: (2) RIKER The unexpected, like what's happening now, IS our normal routine. Picard muses for a beat, a slight nod shows his agreement. FADE OUT. END OF TEASER STAR TREK: "The Outrageous Okona" - 10/4/88 - ACT ONE 8. ACT ONE FADE IN: 10 EXT. SPACE - THE ENTERPRISE / THE ERSTWHILE (OPTICAL) As the Erstwhile creeps closer and closer to its docking berth, the vastness of the surrounding starfield framing it with brilliance as the two contrasting sized crafts seem to float closer and closer. RIKER (O.S.) Hold it steady, Wesley. We're ready to link up. On my command... WESLEY (O.S.) Aye Number One. The Erstwhile reaches the proper point of contact. RIKER (O.S.) Easy... easy... (beat) Engage. Shut down engines, Captain Okona. A laser-like RED BEAM shoots from the Enterprise and locks into the nose of the Erstwhile and holds it there in a stationary position. The Erstwhile shuts down. 11 INT. MAIN BRIDGE With the same crew intact except for Worf. Riker is in his command position. He rises from his position. RIKER Transporter Room proceed with Beaming Operation. I'm on my way. B.G. ROBINSON'S COM VOICE Yes, Commander. Riker, Wesley and Data move to the turbolift and enter. The door slides shut behind them. STAR TREK: "The Outrageous Okona" - 10/4/88 - ACT ONE 9. 12 INT. TRANSPORTER ROOM Worf and TWO SECURITY MEN bracket the very feminine and graciously endowed Transporter Commander B.G. Robinson. Everything she has two of are perfectly matched, coordinated, and move with a wonderful grace that is called "woman." B.G. goes through the procedures of the transfer in her usual professional manner. 13 TRANSPORTER PAD (OPTICAL) The heroic visage of Okona MATERIALIZES and smiles down at the Group assembled. He is dressed in a loose-fitting, open-necked blouse, wide belt and casual looking pants, his look is in opposition to the well-tailored Enterprise crewmembers. His sidearms are also less sophisticated and are tucked into his waistband. The malfunctioning guidance mechanism swings nonchalantly from the burnt-out wires in his grasp. Riker nods to Worf who steps forward. WORF Your weapons, please. 14 CLOSER ANGLE Okona and Worf study each other openly, that brief moment of tension when two strong men measure each other. Okona, still with a trace of a smile on his face, diminishes some of the apprehension and gives in to Worf's stature without surrendering.. OKONA You're the tough one on this ship. The muscle man. WORF Security. OKONA That's the usual name for warriors nowadays. Okona unclips a belt and hands over all his weapons... Worf still stands there... Okona's smile broadens and he reaches behind his back and slips out a long heavy knife. He hands that to Worf, hilt first. STAR TREK: "The Outrageous Okona" - 10/4/88 - ACT ONE 10. 14 CONTINUED: OKONA (continuing) It's more of a piece of jewelry than a weapon. A remembrance. Worf accepts the excuse and the knife calmly, admires its weight, balance, and sharpness. WORF It will be returned when you leave. Riker steps forward away from Data and Wesley, extends his hand. Geordi is also in the room. RIKER Welcome aboard, Captain Okona. I'm Commander Riker. (shakes hands) If you turn over the inoperative part to Lieutenant La Forge he'll begin repairs. OKONA I'd be most happy to do the work myself, I'm sort of a "hands on" type... WORF That will not be permitted. OKONA Can I at least watch? Maybe offer some suggestions? RIKER I think that could be arranged... Geordi moves closer to Riker to accept the broken part. Okona, with a twinkle in his eye, reaches around him and hands it to a rather shocked Wesley. OKONA Here you are, Lieutenant. I leave it in your capable hands. WESLEY (reacts) No, this is Lieutenant La Forge, I'm only an ensign. STAR TREK: "The Outrageous Okona" - 10/4/88 - ACT ONE 11. 14 CONTINUED: (2) OKONA Well ensigns have names, don't they? WESLEY Wesley... Wesley Crusher.. OKONA (enjoying himself) Nice to meet you Ensign "Wesley Wesley" Crusher. Accepts, Wesley smiles and shakes his hand. Geordi nods his greeting to Okona, takes the damaged part from Wesley; but before he can say anything, Okona has moved across the room to face B.G. Robinson. 15 FEATURING OKONA AND B.G. Okona stands directly in front of her, leans forward and blocks her view of anything but him. He looks her directly in the eyes, gets her full attention, then slowly and with great gentleness takes a few wayward strands of her hair and tucks it back behind her ear as he speaks softly to her. OKONA And thank you for beaming me here and inviting me to see a truly beautiful woman. (touches her chin) You have the majestic carriage and loveliness that could surely be traced back to the noble families who once ruled romantic lands with benevolent and tender hands. B.G. smiles openly and knowingly, but plays along... and Okona develops a hurt look. His eyes continue to show his humor. B.G. ROBINSON I'm sure you said that to many ladies and it was no more true then, than it is now. STAR TREK: "The Outrageous Okona" - 10/4/88 - ACT ONE 12. 15 CONTINUED: OKONA Of course, (beat) But it's how I say it that's most important. The feeling, the warmth, the attraction I have for you, (soft beat) the attraction that we share. B.G. stares at him for a few beats, then throws back her head and laughs at his absolute but charming brashness. B.G. ROBINSON I haven't heard that approach in years... it is refreshing... Okona laughs with her. He knows he's got her now. 16 ANGLES ON RIKER, DATA, WORF AND GEORDI As they watch Okona whispering to B.G., Riker is appreciating the showmanship and charisma of Okona. Geordi, glancing over at the transporter station from time to time and recognizing the situation. Data merely observes all without any reactions. Riker comments: RIKER Mister Okona seems to have excellent vision and a healthy libido. WORF Which could add to the security problem. I'll supervise him closely. GEORDI (aware) I'm sure you will, Worf. Riker turns away to cover his smile, tells Okona: RIKER If you'll follow Lieutenant La Forge, we'll get right to work. STAR TREK: "The Outrageous Okona" - 10/4/88 - ACT ONE 13. 17 SCENE Okona reluctantly breaks away from the beautiful B.G. with a laugh and a squeeze of her hand. As he passes Data's inquiring eyes, he comments playfully. OKONA Now isn't that a beautifully formed picture of sex appeal? Data glances from B.G. to Okona with a somewhat puzzled expression. DATA I do not know what you mean. (beat; then explains) I am an android. 18 CLOSER ANGLE - WALK AND TALK For the first time Okona is quiet, but then he quickly recovers with a smile and his usual glibness. OKONA Well then... Have you seen any great looking computers lately? Riker, Wesley, Worf, and Geordi break up. Data stares from one to the other with a blank look on his face. Okona eyes Data. OKONA (continuing) That's a joke. (beat) It's funny. DATA (still oblivious, but covering) Yes, of course it is. They continue to walk down the corridor, the look on Data's face showing his insecurity. STAR TREK: "The Outrageous Okona" - 10/4/88 - ACT ONE 14. 19 INT. MAIN ENGINEERING - JEFFERIES TUBE Geordi and Okona handle the damaged mechanism while Wesley works on something in the lower platform of the tube. Wesley can see and hear the conversation. Okona is quite knowledgeable in this field although limited to his particular spacecraft. Geordi is more interested in how he can improve the navigation tool. GEORDI It's the Zelebium contacts that wore down and then fused. Why not replace them with Tricellite? OKONA Tricellite isn't available in this system. It wouldn't be available to me if I have to replace it. GEORDI I don't think your spacecraft will outlast the part. Okona glances at Geordi with the usual twinkle in his eye and the trace of a smile on his face that is always ready to broaden. OKONA (smiles) You mean the age of it or the way I fly it? GEORDI The stress test shows that you tend to push it beyond its designed capabilities. OKONA Lieutenant La Forge, I've never been told that I'm somewhat reckless in a kinder, or more gentlemanly manner; but since the pattern of my life has relegated me to interplanetary speed deliveries rather than universal exploration, I'm forced to add a flamboyancy and a zest to the doldrums of my existence. Geordi laughs. STAR TREK: "The Outrageous Okona" - 10/4/88 - ACT ONE 15. 20 ANGLE DOWN THE TUBE - TO INCLUDE ALL Wesley looks up at Okona with some admiration. WESLEY Captain Okona, I don't know whether I'd rather take a flight with you or listen to you talk. Okona roars. OKONA Thank you Ensign Crusher, Crusher. WESLEY (getting into it) It's Wesley, Wesley. OKONA I'll make it easy on both of us. I'll just call you Tiger. 21 NEW ANGLE Data has entered Engineering in time to hear the end of the conversation. DATA Captain Picard is not fond of nicknames. OKONA Your gallant Captain Picard. I'd like to meet him... I'll stroll on the bridge and say hello. DATA You are not permitted on the bridge. You are restricted to your quarters or the Ten-Forward lounge unless escorted by a crewmember. OKONA (shrugs) I've broken some small rules before. STAR TREK: "The Outrageous Okona" - 10/4/88 - ACT ONE 16. 21 CONTINUED: GEORDI You do and besides the bells and lights that will go off, our benevolent and kindly Lieutenant Worf will offer you a new kind of greeting. OKONA Well then, would you escort me to C deck? Geordi studies Okona for a beat, then nods his approval. GEORDI I'm busy rebuilding your ship. Wesley ducks down the Jefferies Tube. Okona glances over to Data, smiles his best. OKONA Then Mister Data sir, I would feel privileged if you allow me to be in your company while you escort me to my destination... Geordi laughs... Data nods. Okona nods, looks a little speculative. 22 INT. CORRIDOR Okona and the stolid Data walk down the hallway with Data slightly in the lead. Okona keeps peeking at Data but takes a beat or two before he speaks. Then he finally does. OKONA You ever been cold? DATA No. OKONA How about warm? DATA The temperature on this vessel is regulated to within a fraction of a degree of the perfect comfort range. I am also able to react to any changes just as a humanoid. STAR TREK: "The Outrageous Okona" - 10/4/88 - ACT ONE 17. 22 CONTINUED: They continue their silent walk. OKONA How about drunk? Ever do that? DATA That is not possible. One moment. Data stops dead in his tracks and runs through his program. Only his eyes show a sort of blinking symbol as he checks out his circuits for the answer. DATA (continuing) I was correct. I am not designed to react to any synthenol intake but apparently it is possible for me to become intoxicated. OKONA I don't understand that at all. DATA It seems that I have been adapting some human peculiarities over the last three tours of duty. OKONA What about love? DATA The act or the emotion? OKONA They're both the same to me. DATA I believe that deduction to be inaccurate. OKONA Maybe. A sudden sadness comes to his eyes, then is quickly replaced as he takes Data by the arm and continues his walk down the corridor in feigned seriousness. OKONA (continuing) Life is like loading twice your cargo weight on your spacecraft... if it's canaries and you can keep half of them flying all the time, you're all right. STAR TREK: "The Outrageous Okona" - 10/4/88 - ACT ONE 18. 23 ON DATA He stares at Okona with a blank look ignoring the laughter that follows. Okona slowly subsides and stares back at Data. OKONA Don't you get it? DATA Get what? OKONA The punch line... The gag... That was a joke I told you. DATA I still do not understand. OKONA You don't know what a joke is? DATA Of course I do. (as he computes) A joke is an antic, a caper, mischief, prank, trick, quip, witticism. OKONA (overlapping) That's the dictionary meaning. I'm talking about humor, fun. (beat) Do you know what "funny" is? Data gives him a bewildered look. Okona gives up, points to one of the doors. OKONA Is that C-nine-two-nine? DATA The room to the left. Why? Okona smiles, shrugs.. OKONA You probably wouldn't understand that either... Okona presses the entry button on the specific door. It slides open to disclose: STAR TREK: "The Outrageous Okona" - 10/4/88 - ACT ONE 19. 24 CLOSER ANGLE The attractive and very sensuous B.G. Robinson who has obviously been expecting his arrival. She returns Okona's smile and steps away from the door to allow him in. The door slides shut behind him. 25 ON DATA His totally confused expression. FADE OUT. END OF ACT ONE STAR TREK: "The Outrageous Okona" - 10/4/88 - ACT TWO 20. ACT TWO FADE IN: 26 EXT. SPACE - THE ENTERPRISE (OPTICAL) against the background of serenity and stars. 27 INT. MAIN ENGINEERING Riker looks over the shoulder of Wesley and Geordi, and they check and test the contacts of the malfunctioning Okona apparatus. RIKER What's the status of the repair? GEORDI On schedule. The difficulty is Okona has to be able to repair this part himself next time. WESLEY Commander, do you know much about him? RIKER Just that he's an interesting man. WESLEY He's a lot more than that. He's a capable engineer. GEORDI In a practical sense he's excellent. WESLEY We've seen him handle his ship, and he certainly knows how to handle people. RIKER Everything you say is true. WESLEY Then why is he what he is? STAR TREK: "The Outrageous Okona" - 10/4/88 - ACT TWO 21. 27 CONTINUED: RIKER Why is he operating a cargo route alone rather than being a member of a large organization like we are? WESLEY Yes, that's it. RIKER I would say because he chooses to do exactly what he does. WESLEY A cargo master? RIKER (mimics the tone) An ensign in Engineering? Wesley holds Riker's look, then smiles and nods his understanding. Riker softens a bit. RIKER (continuing) His choice. Someday you'll make yours. WESLEY I already have. Riker nods. 28 INT. TEN-FORWARD (OPTICAL) The stars in space zoom past the observation windows which span the front of the lounge. Some n.d. crewmembers are at the small tables at the bar. Data is in conversation with GUINAN who is quite patient but about to become brutally honest with him. It is obvious that the conversation has been going on for some time. GUINAN Okona is right. DATA You agree that I am missing a very important human factor. STAR TREK: "The Outrageous Okona" - 10/4/88 - ACT TWO 22. 28 CONTINUED: GUINAN All I said was I agree with Okona that you never smile or laugh. At least I've never seen you do it. (beat) Do you? Ever? DATA I never knew I had to. GUINAN It's not a "had to." Even Captain Picard can't order you to be happy. DATA But I am not unhappy. I just do not seem to break out in laughter with everyone else when Okona says certain things. GUINAN You mean when he tells a joke. (understanding now) That's it, isn't it? You don't have any idea what a joke is. DATA (defensive) Of course I do. (his computer kicks in) It is a witticism, a gag, a bon mot, a fluctuation of words which concludes with "trick" ending, it is... GUINAN (overlapping) Whoa, slow down. Now Data, there's just you and me here and nobody is going to know what we talked about. My job here places me under some obligations, like a vow of secrecy. I can't repeat anything I hear or see. Now the obligation of the patron is to tell the truth, otherwise I'm being placed under a commitment to keep a secret about "nothing." That's not fair. It's called wasted honor. You understand? STAR TREK: "The Outrageous Okona" - 10/4/88 - ACT TWO 23. 28 CONTINUED: (2) DATA (stolid beat) I understand better than you think. You just told me a joke and I am not laughing. GUINAN (disappointed) I can see that. DATA Maybe it was not funny. GUINAN It was funny. DATA How can you be sure? GUINAN I've used it before. Everybody else at least smiles. It's you, Data. DATA I agree. Now what do I do about it? GUINAN When most people have trouble, they look to a more intelligent and learned being for assistance. (thoughtful beat) In your case, I'd suggest you go to a bigger computer. That Data understands. He nods his acceptance, moves off. 29 INT. CORRIDOR - OUTSIDE HOLODECK Data is accessing the Holodeck panel. The panel lights array themselves and the VOICE of the Holodeck COMPUTER assists Data in locating his choices. DATA I wish to learn about jokes... STAR TREK: "The Outrageous Okona" - 10/4/88 - ACT TWO 24. 29 CONTINUED: COMPUTER VOICE There are books, films, and tapes. But the only animate object would be a comedian. DATA Show me one of those. COMPUTER VOICE Specify type, please. DATA Humanoid. One who is able to understand and tell a joke. COMPUTER VOICE Physical or cerebral style. DATA Show me both. COMPUTER VOICE I will access a list. A LIST FLASHES ON THE SCREEN that only Data would be able to read. He answers unknowingly and randomly. DATA That one. RW nine, three, two, one, six -- twentieth century. COMPUTER VOICE Program installation complete, you may enter. Data steps in front of the door. It slides open. 30 ANGLE THROUGH DOORS The frozen IMAGE of a COMEDIAN popular today stands on a small stage in the center of a spotlight. Data enters. 31 INT. HOLODECK The image comes to life. The Comic takes a bow and announces. STAR TREK: "The Outrageous Okona" - 10/4/88 - ACT TWO 25. 31 CONTINUED: THE COMIC Thank you ladies and gentlemen. And thank you for bringing me here. DATA I want to know what is funny. The Comic steps off the stage and takes a seat next to Data. He stares at the blank open expression on Data's face and realizes that he's in for it. THE COMIC Things that make you laugh are funny? DATA Nothing makes me laugh, but I still want to do it. THE COMIC How much time do we have? DATA Time has no meaning in this instance. It could be endless. THE COMIC I think we're going to need it all. DATA I assure you, I am completely trainable and capable of indoctrination. Show me what is funny. THE COMIC Okay, try this. The Comic distorts his face and posture, does a piece of "business," a comical imitation, using his clothes, motion, perhaps a prop. He glances over to Data, who stands motionless and passive. THE COMIC Well? DATA That is considered funny? STAR TREK: "The Outrageous Okona" - 10/4/88 - ACT TWO 26. 31 CONTINUED: (2) THE COMIC It was till a few seconds ago. DATA You mean if you twist your face, bend over at the waist, mess up your hair, and cross your eyes it is a pretense that would be funny. THE COMIC (uncomfortable) I have to admit it's a little ridiculous, but that's part of being funny. Clowns are ridiculous, but they make people laugh. Now try it. Data makes a couple of vain efforts to twist himself and imitate the imitator. His attempts are clumsy, inept, and bring a troubled look to the Comic's face. THE COMIC (continuing) Can you juggle, whistle, sing? Data shakes his head. THE COMIC (continuing) How about write or paint? I have a house that needs painting. It's hard work, but at least you don't have to be funny. Just a strong wrist, a good eye, and an affection for watching water base off-white dry slowly. The Comic laughs at his own humor. Data's sterile look causes the Comic to grimace. DATA I can do everything else that I want to do. I just want to know what is funny. I want to be able to involve myself in other people's laughter. (quieter beat) I want to "join in." The Comic eyes Data, understanding and sympathizing with his dilemma. STAR TREK: "The Outrageous Okona" - 10/4/88 - ACT TWO 27. 31 CONTINUED: (3) THE COMIC We'll try. You have to remember your "body English" and gestures. (beat) Now you're going to learn some jokes. DATA Proceed. THE COMIC We'll start with some standards... This traveling salesman... DATA Access faster... 32 ON THE COMIC (OPTICAL) As he goes through his routine of jokes, CAMERA SKIP FRAMES to: THE COMIC ... comes up to his farmhouse and... DATA Faster. Move to maximum speed. We SPEED UP FRAMES until the Comic is MOVING AT EIGHT FRAMES PER and the DIALOGUE SOUNDS LIKE CHIPMUNK GIBBERISH. HOLD on this for a few beats. 33 ON DATA His eyes blinking in the information at the same speed... Then: 34 INT. TEN-FORWARD Data is facing Guinan. He speaks in his usual monotone. STAR TREK: "The Outrageous Okona" - 10/4/88 - ACT TWO 28. 34 CONTINUED: DATA This gentleman went to see his surgeon and was informed that he needed an operation. The man thought about that and then said, "I would like a second opinion." The doctor said, "Okay, you are ugly too." Data immediately asks Guinan for her recognition. DATA (continuing) Was I funny? GUINAN That joke has been funny for over four hundred years. (sad beat) We'll now have a minute's silence for its passing. DATA I was not funny... GUINAN Forget it. Try another joke. Data sets himself in a predetermined position and starts. DATA Who was that woman I saw you with? Guinan flinches in expectation but is saved as the voice of Picard is heard over the loudspeakers. PICARD'S COM VOICE (filtered) Lieutenant Commander Data, report to the Main Bridge immediately. I repeat, report to the Main Bridge immediately. Data moves quickly to the turbolift. As he moves, he informs Guinan: DATA I will be back. GUINAN (hopeless) Bring new jokes... STAR TREK: "The Outrageous Okona" - 10/4/88 - ACT TWO 29. 35 INT. MAIN BRIDGE There is a controlled urgency in the conduct of the bridge as Data enters from the turbolift and moves directly to his station in Ops. Wesley is already in place at Conn and whispers over to Data immediately: WESLEY We have an "unidentified" in Sector four. Data immediately focuses his attention on his necessary functions. All stations are covered. Riker and Troi bracket Picard. PULASKI will also appear on the bridge during this scene. Worf announces from his Tactical Station: WORF Unidentified craft Sector four to Sector four two six one. Overtaking us, no response to our hailing. PICARD Open hailing frequencies in all languages and on all channels. WORF Hailing frequencies open. No response. DATA Sensors report a minimum range combat craft of the Squadron Class, twenty-six crew. WORF (overlap) Captain, they have locked phasers. PICARD (somewhat puzzled) Phasers? RIKER (same look) Regulations call for a Yellow Alert. PICARD It's too small of a craft to be of any threat to us. Do you agree, Lieutenant Worf? STAR TREK: "The Outrageous Okona" - 10/4/88 - ACT TWO 30. 35 CONTINUED: WORF We could blow it out of space before it could scratch our hull. PICARD And I doubt that they are so primitive that they wouldn't know it. Ensign Crusher, reduce speed to allow them to overtake. RIKER May I ask why, sir? PICARD They show a great deal of courage. Perhaps I would like to show them some respect, or perhaps I'm just curious. RIKER I understand, Captain. Would a "courteous" Yellow Alert apply at this time? PICARD (covers a smile) That won't be necessary, Number One. But continue to hail them and prepare for a gentlemanly surrender if needed. The reactions of the crew, especially the pained expression of Worf. FADE OUT. END OF ACT TWO STAR TREK: "The Outrageous Okona" - 10/4/88 - ACT THREE 31. ACT THREE FADE IN: 36 EXT. SPACE - THE ENTERPRISE / THE ERSTWHILE (OPTICAL) Okona's ship in tow. Another spacecraft even smaller and more outdated than Okona's approaches. In scale it looks like a P.T. Boat pulling next to the USS Missouri. 37 INT. MAIN BRIDGE The business on the bridge continues in a relaxed, but expectant manner. WORF Still no response to our hail. 38 ON CREWMEMBERS A few beats, then Data informs them: DATA The "stranger" vessel has slowed and is holding its position. WORF Captain, we are being hailed. PICARD On screen. 39 ANGLE ON MAIN VIEWER - INTERCUT AS NEEDED (OPTICAL) There are a few tense beats, then the face of DEBIN slowly MATERIALIZES on the screen. He is a middle-aged humanoid (perhaps one distinguishing factor to designate him as different). We see a small passenger area, rather than a large bridge. DEBIN I am Debin of the planet Atlec. PICARD I am Captain Jean-Luc Picard of the USS Enterprise... What is the reason for this aggressive approach? STAR TREK: "The Outrageous Okona" - 10/4/88 - ACT THREE 32. 39 CONTINUED: DEBIN You are towing a spacecraft of a known criminal. PICARD It was in need of emergency repairs. It was our obligation to assist. DEBIN You have a man by the name of Okona aboard. (harsher beat) I want him. There are some reactions through the main cabin. PICARD On what authority? Debin reacts to this with a tumultuous roar. He explodes his response. DEBIN He is guilty of crimes committed on the planet Atlec. I expect him to be turned over to my authority immediately. PICARD What crimes? DEBIN That is neither important or necessary. I want Okona now! Before Picard can respond. WESLEY Captain, we have another Class four armed spacecraft approaching, from the opposite sector... PICARD Another ship from Atlec? DATA Similar in specifications and capabilities, but a variation in markings and hailing language. STAR TREK: "The Outrageous Okona" - 10/4/88 - ACT THREE 33. 39 CONTINUED: (2) PICARD (to Debin) Hold your position, Mister Debin. (to Data) Cut off Main Screen. The viewscreen goes blank. PICARD (continuing) Identify approaching craft. DATA Sensors indicate it to be a security vessel from the planet Straleb. WORF We could swat both mosquitoes easily. Picard gives him a quieting, yet understanding look. PICARD Open hailing frequencies. WORF Hailing frequencies open. Some beats, then: WORF (continuing) They are returning our hail on the proper channel. PICARD On screen. 40 MAIN VIEWER - INTERCUT AS NEEDED (OPTICAL) The screen fills with the picture of another ship's cockpit area, which is a much smaller variation of a bridge. Humanoid personnel pilot the craft. (There could be a characteristic that would also mark them as an individual race and also slightly different than the Atlec race.) KUSHELL, older and more forceful than his younger better-looking companion BENZAN, steps into focus.. STAR TREK: "The Outrageous Okona" - 10/4/88 - ACT THREE 34. 40 CONTINUED: KUSHELL I am Secretary Kushell from the Legation of Unity of the planet Straleb. PICARD I am Captain Picard. KUSHELL (overlapping) We know who you are, Captain Picard. We have been monitoring your communications and we know of the demands made by Debin of the planet Atlec. PICARD Then you know that we intend no hostile interaction with either of you. KUSHELL You only have to concede to one demand. PICARD The word "demand" has the tone of finality. KUSHELL It is a word I have chosen. (beat) We demand you turn Okona over to us immediately. Picard covers his reactions. PICARD (to Wesley) Mute the Main Viewer. (to Worf) Lieutenant Worf, Mister Okona to the Main Bridge immediately. WORF Yes sir. PICARD Engage the screen. (to Kushell) The same "demand" has been made by the Atlec legation. STAR TREK: "The Outrageous Okona" - 10/4/88 - ACT THREE 35. 40 CONTINUED: (2) KUSHELL I have no interest in their request. We intend to back up our legal right to Okona. PICARD (knowing) I'd rather you didn't escalate this situation any further. Benzan tries to guide the older man away from the viewscreen. Kushell pulls away from his grasp. KUSHELL You're my son. You obey orders, you do not interfere with them. (to Picard, enraged) We are prepared to take Okona by force if we have to. The honor and prestige of this nation are at stake. (beat) We are ready to die for that. PICARD We do not intend for that to be at our hand. I will respond to your request shortly -- (then:) Main Viewer off. 41 INT. CORRIDOR Worf and TWO SECURITY OFFICERS move through the corridor. 42 ANGLE ON DOOR It slides open to disclose a smiling Okona who is just buttoning up his shirt and preparing to exit. A well-endowed FEMALE CREWMEMBER (not B.G. Robinson) bids him an affectionate farewell. The kiss becomes extended and passion builds again, until interrupted by Worf. WORF (to Okona) I have orders to escort you to the Main Bridge immediately. STAR TREK: "The Outrageous Okona" - 10/4/88 - ACT THREE 36. 42 CONTINUED: OKONA I'm sure it can wait a few minutes. WORF Now!! 43 CLOSER ANGLE Worf steps face to face with Okona and sets himself. Okona tightens and seems to coil just a bit in preparation. The two of them face in a stand-off understanding each other. Worf accepts the challenge and declines it at the same time. WORF I'd like that, but I have orders. OKONA (nods) Some other time then. The tension is ended. Worf motions to the security officers. They step on either side of Okona and leave him no choice but to step away from his embrace. He offers her a joking farewell as he is led away. OKONA (continuing) Just remember, it took three armed men to rip me from your arms. 44 INT. CORRIDOR - MOVING SHOT Okona keeps pace with Worf as they enter the turbolift. OKONA Am I going to meet Captain Picard? Worf eyes him a beat, then a grunting laugh. WORF Definitely. OKONA Did I say something funny? The doors slide shut. STAR TREK: "The Outrageous Okona" - 10/4/88 - ACT THREE 37. 45 INT. MAIN BRIDGE The turbolift door opens and Okona is escorted towards the captain. Worf introduces. WORF Captain Picard, this is Thadiun Okona. Okona steps forward, extends his hand, and prepares himself for his normal overpowering greeting. 46 ON PICARD He swings around in his chair and holds Okona away with his hard-probing look. The rest of the room waits. Picard controls, points to the captain's Ready Room. PICARD In there... We'll talk in there... Picard gets up and leads the way. The doors slide open and they enter. The crew eyes each other. 47 INT. CAPTAIN'S READY ROOM Picard turns directly to Okona. His anger is apparent. PICARD Mister Okona, you were welcomed on board and given the security of this ship openly and without any undue investigation. In turn the only obligation we placed you under was that you do not come aboard the Enterprise under false pretenses. It seems that you did. OKONA If you mean my "socializing" with the members of the crew? PICARD No, you are free to interact with the members of the crew. First, I'm talking about a man named Debin. Are you familiar with him? STAR TREK: "The Outrageous Okona" - 10/4/88 - ACT THREE 38. 48 SCENE Okona becomes somewhat wary, but still faces Picard with no fear or nervousness showing. OKONA He's from Atlec. I've had dealings with some of his family. PICARD Then perhaps you can explain why his spacecraft is prepared to attack us unless we give him custody of you. OKONA I can't explain. PICARD Then tell me why Kushell of the planet Straleb is demanding the same thing? OKONA Is he here also? PICARD And quite adamant. Now answer please. What crimes have you committed? OKONA I am not a criminal. PICARD Why do these men want you? OKONA I can't say. PICARD You will say. You're on my ship. OKONA (serious now) It wouldn't be the honorable thing to do. I may be many less than auspicious things, but I am a gentleman. I won't break that code. PICARD They are prepared to attack the Enterprise. STAR TREK: "The Outrageous Okona" - 10/4/88 - ACT THREE 39. 48 CONTINUED: OKONA (reacts) That would be crazy. They wouldn't stand a chance... PICARD Exactly. (studies Okona) Then perhaps you could give me some reasons as to why I should consider destroying these people to save you? 49 CLOSER For the first time Okona is at a loss for words. OKONA I can't think of any right now. PICARD Neither can I. Picard turns and exits the Ready Room... FADE OUT. END OF ACT THREE STAR TREK: "The Outrageous Okona" - 10/4/88 - ACT FOUR 40. ACT FOUR FADE IN: 50 EXT. SPACE - THE ENTERPRISE (OPTICAL) facing the two tiny and less formidable looking ships. The Erstwhile still in tow and even smaller. 51 INT. MAIN BRIDGE Picard regards Okona, still is in a no-nonsense mood. Picard turns back to the Main Viewer PICARD Put Debin on screen. 52 MAIN VIEWER (OPTICAL) The Main Bridge of the Debin craft appears on screen. Debin standing there gets right down to business. DEBIN Have you made your decision yet, Captain? PICARD No. You've made your requests but you haven't told me why. DEBIN It's a personal matter. PICARD I'm afraid that's not good enough. Debin visibly explodes. His rage balloons. DEBIN Not good enough?? You're forcing me to embarrass my family by demanding reasons. Debin steps off screen for a beat, then returns with a young tearful woman named YANAR. She is very beautiful and also very pregnant. STAR TREK: "The Outrageous Okona" - 10/4/88 - ACT FOUR 41. 53 INT. MAIN BRIDGE All heads turn from the Main Viewer to Okona who attempts to look innocent and therefore looks even more guilty. DEBIN It was Okona... He's been bringing Yanar gifts, flowers, and even poetry for the past five months. He took advantage. Then he left her like this. I want him. Picard feels uncomfortable, but now understands Debin's emotions. PICARD I do sympathize with you. If you will allow me just a little more time. DEBIN (not to be put off) Why, so you can turn him over to Kushell? You do that and I'll blow his ship away and Okona with it. 54 ON MAIN VIEWER (OPTICAL) Kushell suddenly appears on a SPLIT SCREEN and yells back at Debin. KUSHELL You'll be dust before you aim your first missile. I have a perfect right to Okona. He's a thief. He stole the Jewel of Thesia. A national heritage. DEBIN (yelling back) A "thing." An "item." My case involves the victimization of a human form. My daughter. Okona steps nearer to Picard and can now obviously be seen by the "split screen" characters. They visibly react. DEBIN (continuing) That's him!! I'll have him now. STAR TREK: "The Outrageous Okona" - 10/4/88 - ACT FOUR 42. 54 CONTINUED: KUSHELL He's mine. OKONA One at a time. Who accuses me of stealing? KUSHELL I do, you thief. Me and my son, Benzan. Okona was my son's friend. He took advantage of that friendship to plunder a national treasure. Benzan is standing next to his father silently. We hear some ad lib yelling in the b.g. as Debin responds to Kushell. Picard signals to mute the sound on the screen. (Kushell and Debin will continue their silent argument.) Picard turns to Okona. PICARD What do you have to say about that Okona? OKONA Nothing right now. Let them do all the talking. Picard pauses for a moment. Then interrupts the arguing between Debin and Kushell. PICARD Gentlemen if you please! Debin and Kushell quiet down. PICARD (continuing) You will get my decision as soon as I can confer with my advisors and in the interest of maintaining peace I am jamming communications between your two ships. Picard out. Before either of the two fathers can answer the screen goes blank. Picard swings from his control chair. STAR TREK: "The Outrageous Okona" - 10/4/88 - ACT FOUR 43. 54 CONTINUED: (2) PICARD Okona, Doctor, Counselor, Lieutenant Worf, Geordi, the conference room if you please. Have Doctor Pulaski join us... The Observation Lounge door slides open and the group files in. 55 INT. OBSERVATION LOUNGE They take seats around the table. Okona takes the opportunity to move to the food slot and concoct a healthy snack. PULASKI Dishonesty, lust, and now hunger. You really are extremely basic Mister Okona. OKONA Last meals always taste the best and hunger won't make me a better person. PULASKI That's probably true. TROI Neither one of the allegations is considered a capital crime. OKONA I'll never reach either of those planets alive. They have lost too much face over these incidents. PICARD And yet it provides the possibility of even more violence. OKONA You're not afraid of those two or what they can do to you. STAR TREK: "The Outrageous Okona" - 10/4/88 - ACT FOUR 44. 55 CONTINUED: PICARD It's what I may have to do to them that concerns me. If I turn you over to Debin, I will have to deal with Kushell. If you go to Kushell, I will have Debin to administer to. Or perhaps both of them would decide to attack us. Fatalities could be total. OKONA I hate to have to be the one to say this, but you don't owe me anything. PICARD I'm well aware of that, but it doesn't change anything. (beat) Are you innocent, Thadiun Okona? Okona can't resist the glib one liner and the smile. OKONA Innocent? Absolutely not, Captain Picard. I'll make no excuses for my lifestyle. (beat) But I have not committed the crimes that I've been accused of or any others similar. Okona turns to give Troi a questioning look. Troi nods to Picard that he's telling the truth. PICARD Then my predicament is confirmed. OKONA In that case, Captain, I can't make it any easier on you. PICARD (reacts) Apparently you've never been concerned about making it easier on anyone... There are two men out there who do not consider this a joke and are willing to face death as a matter of honor. They should be respected, not laughed at. STAR TREK: "The Outrageous Okona" - 10/4/88 - ACT FOUR 45. 55 CONTINUED: (2) OKONA You seemed to have reached a decision about me, Captain. PICARD Only about what I think you are. What to do about it is still a problem. OKONA I'll help you with it. (beat) Stall Debin and Kushell. Give me enough time to get the guidance system re-installed and I'll go on my own. RIKER Their ships are bigger and faster than yours. OKONA You'll still be able to warp away and I'll take care of myself. PULASKI How will you get away? OKONA (smile) I'll dazzle them with my brilliance and dexterity. PICARD (beat) I don't like it. OKONA You have very little choice. PICARD (a few beats) I know. It will be impossible to stall very long. OKONA "Just long enough" is all I need... PULASKI What are you going to say to Debin and Kushell? STAR TREK: "The Outrageous Okona" - 10/4/88 - ACT FOUR 46. 55 CONTINUED: (3) PICARD (shrugging) Anything I have to. OKONA Now you're starting to sound like me, Captain. PICARD Heaven forbid. Okona holds Picard's look for a beat, nods, turns and enters the turbolift... Picard moves to the door to the Main bridge. The doors slide open. Picard, Riker et al walk through. 56 INT. MAIN BRIDGE Picard moves to the command chair; Riker next to him. Picard takes a breath. PICARD Engage Main Viewer. Screen -- the spilt screen of Debin and Kushell. PICARD (continuing) Ah, gentlemen... If you'll just bear with me, I have a few questions. 57 INT. MAIN ENGINEERING Geordi and Wesley are still working on the Okona mechanism. Okona looks over their shoulders, admires it. Okona seems distracted, his mind somewhere else, his conversation not up to its usual pace and humor. OKONA Looks like an excellent job. You're quite a craftsman Lieutenant La Forge. How soon will it be finished? GEORDI What's the rush? I thought you liked it here. STAR TREK: "The Outrageous Okona" - 10/4/88 - ACT FOUR 47. 57 CONTINUED: OKONA I did. It stopped liking me. Time for me to disappear. WESLEY Where will you go? OKONA A new place, if I make it. WESLEY Don't you ever stay anywhere? Okona snaps out of his mood a little, eyes Wesley. OKONA Not for a long time. WESLEY I know that's the way you want to be and it is your choice, but I don't understand. You like people. Why do you want to be alone all the time? 58 ON OKONA He keeps his gaze on Wesley as his mind works. Geordi interrupts, holds out the new part. GEORDI It's ready. You should be able to install this in less than five minutes. Okona turns his look to Geordi, nods, but makes no move to take the part from him. OKONA Like you said Geordi, what's the rush? (moving) I have some friends around here. Okona moves off. Geordi and Wesley exchange looks. FADE OUT. END OF ACT FOUR STAR TREK: "The Outrageous Okona" - 10/4/88 - ACT FIVE 48. ACT FIVE FADE IN: 59 EXT. SPACE - ENTERPRISE (OPTICAL) The smaller cargo ship Erstwhile is still in tow. The position of the Debin and Kushell vessels, the same... 60 INT. MAIN BRIDGE (OPTICAL) All stations are manned. Okona enters from the turbolift and waits there as Picard motions to him. Picard turns back to the screen. PICARD One moment please, gentlemen. Screen off. Picard turns to Okona. PICARD I've used every pretext I could think of. The result is they've aimed their full ordinance at us and are prepared to attack. I can't delay any longer. OKONA I'm not leaving. PICARD (reacts) We've gone over this before. I thought you made a decision. OKONA Don't worry, I'm not staying either. (long beat) I've decided to surrender myself to one of them. Reactions around the bridge... RIKER Which one? OKONA (laughs) Put them on screen and place your bets. The odds are two to one... STAR TREK: "The Outrageous Okona" - 10/4/88 - ACT FIVE 49. 60 CONTINUED: Riker glances over to Picard. PICARD On screen. 61 MAIN VIEWER - SPLIT SCREEN (INTERCUT AS NEEDED) The images of Debin and Yanar on one half, Kushell and Benzan on the other. KUSHELL It took long enough. Now when can I have Okona? DEBIN I registered my complaint before you. I have first recourse. KUSHELL Do not delay your decision again. I'm warning you not to do that, Captain Picard. PICARD Yes, both of you are most adept at issuing warnings. (beat) Mister Okona has volunteered to deal with this himself. Okona steps forward to face the screen and also be seen by all parties. Kushell and Debin are animated, Benzan and the pregnant girl more subdued, waiting. OKONA I'll speak my piece before I walk to your gallows. As I said before I am not a thief. I am also not a character of exceptional good name and reputation; so, as I never chose to become a thief, I have never chosen to become a father either. (long beat) Given the choice between the two I must say that marriage to the beautiful and affectionate Yanar is a much more pleasant sentence. (MORE) STAR TREK: "The Outrageous Okona" - 10/4/88 - ACT FIVE 50. 61 CONTINUED: OKONA (Cont'd) (pause) So my dear Yanar, if you would do me the honor of becoming my wife I will do everything in my power to make our marriage happy and fruitful. There is a shocked silence on both the Main Bridge and the split screen. Varying emotions start to build. BENZAN No! He can't! HUSHELL My son is right. Okona will not escape me that way. BENZAN No, that's not what I mean. DEBIN Send him to me. I'll decide his fate. Yanar steps to the forefront. YANAR Why should you decide? Why don't I? Since everybody knows Okona is the father of this child, why should we not allow him to take his rightful place? (firmly) I accept. BENZAN You can't accept! KUSHELL That's right. Okona is still a thief. BENZAN No he's not. Nothing was stolen. KUSHELL The Jewel of Thesia! BENZAN It was not stolen by my friend Okona. STAR TREK: "The Outrageous Okona" - 10/4/88 - ACT FIVE 51. 61 CONTINUED: (2) KUSHELL Then where is it? BENZAN You could say it was taken into "custody" by the rightful heir, me. Picard looks over at Okona who eyes Benzan with a look of pride. 62 VARIOUS CUTS AND ANGLES (OPTICAL) as Debin and Kushell gain knowledge of the incidents involved in both the theft and pregnancy. Kushell is stunned, Debin glad to have it all settled. Benzan is making his statement of fact; Yanar, not pleased at the way it is all coming down. Okona, trying to make them tell the facts; and, Picard, watching the scene unravel to Okona's hopeful design and finding himself becoming involved in the event and starting to appreciate him a little. PICARD (to Okona) Benzan has a certain flair for the language that is similar to yours. OKONA A little bit of me might have rubbed off on the boy. I didn't think he would let me hang. PICARD You placed great faith in him. OKONA He's a friend... Debin feels the whole thing is settled. He announces. KUSHELL (to Benzan) Why would you steal what would eventually become yours? STAR TREK: "The Outrageous Okona" - 10/4/88 - ACT FIVE 52. 62 CONTINUED: BENZAN To present it to Yanar as my vow of marriage. (beat) Yanar is carrying my child. KUSHELL (stunned) Yanar said it was Okona's. DEBIN (to Yanar) You were with both these men? YANAR No, but that's not what is important now. What is important is who I marry. BENZAN You'll marry me. YANAR Why should I? BENZAN Because I love you. YANAR You waited this long to say that? You almost allowed Okona to be punished, now suddenly you wish to marry me? BENZAN I sent the Jewel of Thesia to you with Okona to declare us man and wife. The politics of our fathers would have been settled later. KUSHELL So Okona does have the jewel. BENZAN I ordered him to deliver it! YANAR And waited a little too long to do that also. I won't marry you, Benzan. STAR TREK: "The Outrageous Okona" - 10/4/88 - ACT FIVE 53. 62 CONTINUED: (2) DEBIN Then you'll marry Okona. YANAR (screams) I won't marry anyone! Okona steps forward to the Main Viewer and speaks seriously and with great feeling... OKONA Don't Yanar. You're angry about the embarrassment of all this and maybe the timing and approach is not the most romantic, but I know you love Benzan and I don't want to see you throw away that feeling because we adults do not know how to behave properly. YANAR If Benzan could speak with the same integrity as you do, maybe it would be different. OKONA I carried your messages back and forth for almost six months. I smuggled each of you into the other's homeland. You feel for him the same way he feels for you. (frustrated beat) So for heaven's sake girl, you have to marry the boy because I've finally run out of words. RIKER I don't believe that. DATA It is mathematically possible. PICARD Okona defies even the science of mathematics. Okona laughs. Data asks Riker. DATA Was that funny? Riker doesn't answer. STAR TREK: "The Outrageous Okona" - 10/4/88 - ACT FIVE 54. 62 CONTINUED: (3) YANAR (a few beats, then:) I do love him. PICARD (caught up in it) Then tell him. Okona and the crew look over to Picard who is just as surprised at himself. YANAR I'll marry Benzan. It is his child. (beat) It's our child. KUSHELL (softer) Then I'll have to withdraw my charges of theft. By our law Benzan must present the jewel to his wife. BENZAN I'll be coming for you shortly Yanar. We'll find a new planet to live on. KUSHELL You'll live on Straleb. DEBIN No! You'll live here! PICARD Gentlemen, this is a matter to be settled between yourselves. I have only two words for both of you. (long beat) Picard out. Picard signals for the transmission to end and the screen goes blank. 63 INT. MAIN BRIDGE There is a momentary silence as the crew lets its breath out. STAR TREK: "The Outrageous Okona" - 10/4/88 - ACT FIVE 55. 63 CONTINUED: PICARD (to Riker) Take over, Will. Mister Okona and I are going to drink a toast to the newlyweds. Okona smiles, nods, moves off with Picard. As they pass other members of the crew, various comments can be heard. TROI Weddings bring out emotions in me that I never could quite understand. I get so sentimental. PULASKI Perhaps it's the way they drape the flowers over the shotgun that makes you cry. WORF We could have destroyed both crafts without even using our photon torpedoes. They were totally vulnerable. GEORDI (patiently) Maybe next time, Worf. Maybe next time. Data heads past them into the turbolift. The doors close behind him. 64 INT. CORRIDOR - OUTSIDE HOLODECK Data engages the panel of controls. Guinan is a semi-reluctant conspirator. DATA I wish to reinstate the same program. GUINAN (whisper) Maybe with some new material. The Holodeck control panel goes through its routine, then signals it is ready. The doors open. STAR TREK: "The Outrageous Okona" - 10/4/88 - ACT FIVE 56. 65 NEW ANGLE INTO HOLODECK ROOM The Comic sitting FREEZE FRAME as Data had left him. Data steps inside and the Comic comes to life. Data immediately gets down to business. DATA We will continue. THE COMIC What, no warm up? DATA I told a joke. THE COMIC And? DATA No one laughed. THE COMIC No one? Nobody? GUINAN Me, I'm "no one" and "nobody." It wasn't funny. DATA She said I "killed" the joke. THE COMIC (beat) It's always hard to deal with a solo person. You need a crowd. Laughter is contagious. GUINAN A lot of things are contagious. Most of them aren't funny either. DATA Perhaps he is right. An audience could be the difference. (to Holodeck) Holodeck, give me an audience. 66 ON DATA He glances over to Guinan for support. She tries to give it to him with a weak nod. STAR TREK: "The Outrageous Okona" - 10/4/88 - ACT FIVE 57. 67 NEW ANGLE A SPOTLIGHT beam glares onto a small stage and the Comic steps up for the intro. 68 REVERSE There is a small, dark, smoke-filled New York style nightclub with various n.d. audience sitting at dime-sized tables. 69 ANGLE ON STAGE The SPOTLIGHT glares on and the Comic steps onto the stage for the intro. Guinan stands off to the side at what could be considered the wings. THE COMIC And now folks from his record breaking tour of Straleb and Atlec I bring you the funny man of the stars, that comet comedian, the sensation of the solar system, ... DATA! The Comic backs off the stage to stand next to Guinan and a tuxedo garbed (jacket and tie only) Data enters into the beam of light with an impassive look on his face and a monotone delivery which is accentuated occasionally by the off time waving of one or both of his arms. He keeps adjusting the bow tie, Rodney Dangerfield style. DATA Good evening ladies and "germs." The audience sounds of laughter and applause. 70 AROUND THE HOLODECK NIGHTCLUB - INTERCUT AS NEEDED The audience laughs at every move and word. Data continues at first confident and then becoming puzzled... DATA You know I come from a town so small it had a fraction for a zip code. Laughter. STAR TREK: "The Outrageous Okona" - 10/4/88 - ACT FIVE 58. 70 CONTINUED: DATA (continuing) ... It was so small in fact that it didn't have a Godfather of Crime... it had a Nephew.. Guinan gives the Comic a whimsical look. GUINAN You sure you made a living doing this? DATA I was so ugly as a child they hung a pork chop around my neck so the dog would play with me. Then there was the gene bank where they crossed a lion and a parrot. They weren't sure what they got but when it spoke, they listened. Data looks around. His voice is almost a whisper now. DATA (continuing) Or the human cannonball that was hired and fired in the same night. 71 ON DATA He stares down at the audience, still unsure as to what they are laughing at. He moves his right hand. 72 THE AUDIENCE Bellows out its response. 73 DATA Aware now. He lifts his other arm. 74 THE AUDIENCE responds with an uproar. STAR TREK: "The Outrageous Okona" - 10/4/88 - ACT FIVE 59. 75 DATA moves one finger... The response... He realizes now, glances over to Guinan who offers him a sympathetic look. Then he announces, as he steps off stage: DATA Holodeck off. The stage lights and nightclub disappear. Data and Guinan are alone in the Holodeck room. They eye each other. DATA (continuing) It was a Holodeck audience. They were programmed to laugh at anything... GUINAN Never mind that. Let me tell you one about the traveling salesman. DATA I have heard it... (beat) I have heard them all. Data and Guinan walk out of the Holodeck... 76 INT. MAIN BRIDGE (OPTICAL) The full staff is present as they go through the procedures of disconnecting Okona's craft from the tractor link. Okona is on the Main Viewer. RIKER Hold the speed, Captain Okona. We'll disengage at my command. (beat) Disengage. WESLEY Separated. OKONA I'm under my own power. Thank you, Enterprise. Thank you, Captain Picard. PICARD I think it turned out to be "my pleasure," Mister Okona. STAR TREK: "The Outrageous Okona" - 10/4/88 - ACT FIVE 60. 76 CONTINUED: OKONA You've got a bizarre sense of humor, Captain. PICARD Stretched to the limit with you, but thankfully still present. I think I might miss your presence, but I would like it to remain a fond memory. OKONA Well put Captain Picard, and good-bye sir. PICARD Good-bye Captain Okona. OKONA What about you Data? You can say good-bye, Data. Data is caught unprepared; his computer mind blinks in and he responds quickly. DATA "Good-bye Data." First a titter of laughter, then building to a louder sound. Data looks around the bridge in pleased surprise. He looks towards Picard. DATA Was I funny? Picard smiles at him, nods. Data looks up at the Main Viewer. 77 MAIN VIEWER (OPTICAL) Okona gives Data the thumbs up sign. 78 EXT. SPACE - ENTERPRISE (OPTICAL) as it turns to the stars. DATA (O.S.) And there is the one about the girl in the nudist colony that nothing looked good on. STAR TREK: "The Outrageous Okona" - 10/4/88 - ACT FIVE 61. 78 CONTINUED: RIKER (O.S.) Warp speed Captain? PICARD (O.S.) Please... The Enterprise warps out. FADE OUT. END OF ACT FIVE THE END STAR TREK: THE NEXT GENERATION "The Schizoid Man" #40272-131 Story by Richard Manning & Hans Beimler Teleplay by Tracy Torme Directed by Les Landau THE WRITING CREDITS MAY NOT BE FINAL AND SHOULD NOT BE USED FOR PUBLICITY OR ADVERTISING PURPOSES WITHOUT FIRST CHECKING WITH THE TELEVISION LEGAL DEPARTMENT. Copyright 1988 Paramount Pictures Corporation. All Rights Reserved. This script is not for publication or reproduction. No one is authorized to dispose of same. If lost or destroyed, please notify the Script Department. FINAL DRAFT OCTOBER 10, 1988 10:[5,#b],18:[1,#b],28:[1,#b],42:[1,#b] STAR TREK: "The Schizoid Man" - 10/10/88 - CAST STAR TREK: THE NEXT GENERATION "The Schizoid Man" CAST PICARD DR. IRA GRAVES RIKER KAREEN BRIANON DATA PULASKI Non-Speaking TROI MEDICAL TECHNICIAN GEORDI CREWMAN AT OPS WORF CREWWOMAN IN HALLWAY WESLEY GUINAN Voice-Over CAPTAIN OF THE MARY ROGERS STAR TREK: "The Schizoid Man" - 10/10/88 - SETS STAR TREK: THE NEXT GENERATION "The Schizoid Man" SETS INTERIORS EXTERIORS USS ENTERPRISE USS ENTERPRISE MAIN BRIDGE CORRIDORS CAPTAIN'S READY ROOM OBSERVATION LOUNGE TRANSPORTER ROOM SICKBAY SICKBAY (ADJACENT) DATA'S QUARTERS KAREEN'S QUARTERS TURBOLIFT TEN-FORWARD GRAVESWORLD LIVING ROOM LABORATORY STAR TREK: "The Schizoid Man" - 10/10/88 - PRONUNCIATION GUIDE STAR TREK: THE NEXT GENERATION "The Schizoid Man" PRONUNCIATION GUIDE KAREEN BRIANON Kuh-REEN Bree-ANN-un STAR TREK: "Schizoid Man" - 10/10/88 - TEASER 1. STAR TREK: THE NEXT GENERATION "The Schizoid Man" TEASER FADE IN: 1 EXT. SPACE - THE ENTERPRISE (OPTICAL) a small speck heading toward us from a great distance. PULASKI (V.O.) Medical log, Stardate 42437.5. Ira Graves is arguably the greatest human mind in the known universe... The great ship streaks by, racing toward its destination. PULASKI (V.O.) (continuing) For years he's lived in near isolation on a remote planet, devoting full time to his revolutionary work... 2 INT. TURBOLIFT - CLOSE ON PULASKI riding up alone. PULASKI (V.O.) (continuing) Eight hours ago, we monitored a message from his assistant, urgently requesting medical aid. It seems Graves' health is failing rapidly -- I only hope we can reach him in time... 3 STAY WITH PULASKI as the lift stops and she steps out onto the bridge. Before her, WESLEY is at Conn, a CREWMAN at Ops, WORF at Tactical. She MOVES to Command to join RIKER and PICARD... PICARD Any response from Gravesworld, Mister Worf? STAR TREK: "Schizoid Man" - 10/10/88 - TEASER 2. 3 CONTINUED: WORF Nothing sir. Not since their initial communication. Picard frowns. Riker turns to Pulaski... RIKER They send out a plea for help, then shut off the transmitters so they can't tell if help's on the way. Doesn't make much sense, does it? PICARD What's our e.t.a. at the planet, Mister Crusher? WESLEY Thirty-six minutes to orbit, sir. Picard turns to Pulaski -- his question more a statement. PICARD You understand the importance of doing everything we can for Doctor Graves. PULASKI Of course, Captain. PICARD Starfleet Command believes his work in quantum physics is reaching a critical stage. They consider this a priority one action. PULASKI A man is ill, Captain. Treating him is my priority one. Regardless of who he is. Picard raises his eyebrows in mild surprise. Is she sparring with him or merely stating a fact? Behind him, Riker is smiling, amused by her blunt way of saying things. 4 INT. TEN-FORWARD ROOM - CLOSE ON TROI downing a sea-green liquid in an exotic "chaser" glass. She savors the drink, her eyes lighting up as she slowly swallows. STAR TREK: "Schizoid Man" - 10/10/88 - TEASER 3. 4 CONTINUED: TROI It's wonderful. What is it? 5 PULL BACK to see GEORDI and TWO CREWPERSONS sitting next to her, with GUINAN behind the bar. GUINAN A year on the planet Thurasia is four hundred and ninety days long. It rains twice, and only twice. You're drinking Thurasian rain water. GEORDI (empty glass in hand) Water? Tastes more like... TROI Heaven. GEORDI Exactly. Where can I get some more of this? Guinan takes his glass with a smile. GUINAN 'Fraid that's the last of it. Next rainfall in a hundred and sixty three days. Troi looks at her empty glass wistfully. TROI I'm not sure I can wait that long. 6 ANGLE TO INCLUDE DATA joining his friends at the bar. GEORDI (to Data) Hey, old friend. Any luck? Data looks extremely satisfied. DATA I believe my quest has ended in complete success. STAR TREK: "Schizoid Man" - 10/10/88 - TEASER 4. 6 CONTINUED: Geordi turns to the others and explains what they're referring to... GEORDI Data's been scouring the library, in search of the perfect joke. DATA I have explored seventy-six thousand, two hundred and twenty-three anecdotes thus far. TROI Why, Data? DATA It is an attempt to find the most humorous anecdote in recorded history. And I believe I have done just that. GUINAN This I gotta hear. All eyes are on Data -- everyone's primed to hear the anecdote to end all anecdotes. Data's eyes sparkle in anticipation. Just before he begins, he throws back his head and LAUGHS THAT PECULIAR STILTED LAUGH of his, as if to say "boy is this going to be funny." The laugh ends too abruptly, like someone pulled a plug. DATA (deliberate) There were twelve birds sitting on a fence... Six had a notion to fly away. How many were left? 7 ANGLE ON HIS AUDIENCE looking at one another, thinking this better have a great punchline. Geordi shrugs... GEORDI Okay, I'll bite. Six. Data bursts into his awkward laugh again. DATA (happy, glowing) No, twelve! They only had a notion to fly away! STAR TREK: "Schizoid Man" - 10/10/88 - TEASER 5. 7 CONTINUED: With quick mechanical movements, Data looks from person to person, a stiff smile plastered on his face. The smile fades, replaced by a look of complete surprise. He can't believe the others aren't laughing. In fact, the only sound WE HEAR is A SMALL GROAN emanating from Geordi. DATA You did not find it wildly hilarious? GEORDI What do you think? Geordi indicates the others. Some have stone-faces while others look like they've just been slapped. DATA Perhaps I should have described the interesting plumage of -- GUINAN -- Data honey, I don't think it would've helped. That joke chilled my blood. Guinan smiles and shivers. Geordi EXITS the bar, patting a deeply perplexed Data on the shoulder as he goes. 8 INT. MAIN BRIDGE - MOVING WITH GEORDI as he crosses to Ops, passing Picard, Riker and Pulaski in the Command Area. WORF Receiving a transmission from Gravesworld, sir. It's unfocused. Not directed specifically at us. PICARD On screen, Mister Worf. 9 ON SCREEN (OPTICAL) KAREEN BRIANON a strikingly beautiful if somewhat frail-looking woman in her early twenties. She seems anxious -- nervously looking over her shoulder as she speaks. We join her transmission in progress... STAR TREK: "Schizoid Man" - 10/10/88 - TEASER 6. 9 CONTINUED: KAREEN ... If anyone can hear me, please send a doctor. Things are getting worse -- Kareen cuts off as she turns to look at something else in the room. Suddenly the screen goes dead... PICARD Try and raise her, Mister Crusher. Tell them we're minutes away. WESLEY It's no good, sir. I don't believe they're receiving us. Picard paces, clearly frustrated. WORF Our records show that she and Graves are the only ones living on the planet, Captain. RIKER Then what scared her? 10 MOVE IN ON PICARD wondering the same thing. FADE OUT. END OF TEASER STAR TREK: "Schizoid Man" - 10/10/88 - ACT ONE 7. ACT ONE FADE IN: 11 INT. MAIN BRIDGE Same setting, same situation. GEORDI Sir, I'm picking up another signal... but it's not from the planet. WESLEY Confirmed. Point of origin... sector three-five mark seven. GEORDI Signal is very weak, sir. Audio only. PICARD Pipe it through, Mister La Forge. THE SOUND OF CRACKLING STATIC fills the air. MAN'S COM VOICE ... Mayday! Mayday! This is (static) -- questing emergency assistance. (static) Outer hull breached (static) Environmental systems compro -- (static) Need immediate ROLLING WAVES OF STATIC overwhelm the rest of the message. Picard signals Geordi to cut off the noise. Worf punches in a few commands at his position... WORF I show the Mary Rogers in that general vicinity, Captain. She's a transport ship, used to ferry settlers to new colonies. No other ships of any kind in this sector. RIKER (concerned) Outer hull breached -- their air must be leaking out. STAR TREK: "Schizoid Man" - 10/10/88 - ACT ONE 8. 11 CONTINUED: PULASKI There may be hundreds of colonists aboard that ship. We've got to help them! PICARD And what about Graves? PULASKI He's one man. And we don't even know the nature of his illness. PICARD He's the man we came to assist! I have my orders, Doctor. Pulaski stews -- silence reigns on the bridge. This is difficult for Picard; a tragic, no-win situation. WORF Suggestion, sir. Picard swivels to face Worf. WORF (continuing) Suggest we execute long range transport of away team to assist Dr. Graves at earliest possible moment. We can use the mass of the planet to slingshot us toward the stricken liner, thus making up most of the lost time. PICARD (nodding, thoughtful) Mister Crusher, make it so -- prepare for extended touch and go orbit. WESLEY (complying) Aye sir. PICARD The transport may be a bit tricky. I'd like you to handle it, Mister La Forge. GEORDI Understood, Captain. STAR TREK: "Schizoid Man" - 10/10/88 - ACT ONE 9. 11 CONTINUED: (2) PICARD Assemble an away team, Number One. Include whatever medical assistants the Doctor deems necessary. PULASKI Excuse me sir, but I'd be more useful dealing with the Mary Rogers. There may be hundreds who'll need attention -- PICARD -- Thank you Doctor, but I'll make those decisions. (pause) You're going to Gravesworld. 12 INT. TEN-FORWARD - ON DATA AND GUINAN talking, the bar between them. Data is in a daze... DATA I cannot comprehend it. It is beyond my ability to reason. GUINAN Don't feel too bad, Data. Humor is subjective. DATA But this anecdote had all the elements humans find so diverting! A play on words, colorful characters, deception, a lively setting -- GUINAN (tongue in cheek) -- Maybe it's the birds. DATA (cocking his head) Interesting. How so? GUINAN Birds are considered to have boring personalities. They just sit around and eat seed all day. Maybe squawk once in a while. Boring. STAR TREK: "Schizoid Man" - 10/10/88 - ACT ONE 10. 12 CONTINUED: Data begins to consider this point seriously. Guinan suppresses a smile as she continues... GUINAN In fact, there's only one thing birds do that's funny, but you couldn't put that in a joke and keep it tasteful. (leans forward) Now chickens. Chickens are funny. Data is surprised. He's about to ask her to elaborate, when Riker steps up to the bar. RIKER (cheerful) Hello Guinan. Keeping this guy out of trouble? GUINAN It's a challenge, but I'm trying. DATA Excuse me sir, but in what way is Guinan attempting to restrain me from adversity? RIKER Never mind, Data, I was only joking. Data thinks, then suddenly explodes into a three second burst of LAUGHTER. Once finished, he looks from Riker to Guinan, uncertainty written on his face. DATA That joke was funny. Was it not? GUINAN It wasn't meant to be, Data. Now Data's really confused. GUINAN (to Riker) Are you really going down to see Ira Graves? The Ira Graves? RIKER (intrigued smile) How did you know about that? Guinan smiles slyly and ignores the question. STAR TREK: "Schizoid Man" - 10/10/88 - ACT ONE 11. 12 CONTINUED: (2) GUINAN Remember Will -- great men have great egos. Riker smiles back, wondering why this sounds like a warning. He slaps Data on the shoulder. RIKER Come on Data. A great man awaits. They nod good-bye to Guinan and head for the turbolift. Riker takes a last look at: 13 GUINAN still smiling a smile that says "I know something you don't know." 14 INT. TURBOLIFT - RIKER AND DATA ride down together. DATA May I ask a question, sir? RIKER I think you just did. DATA (thinking it over) Quite correct. May I ask you another question after this one? RIKER (chuckling) Sure, what's on your mind? DATA Do you think it is pointless for me to try and understand humor? RIKER Pointless? Not necessarily. DATA I believe that comprehending what is truly funny will bring me closer to... humanness. (pause) Until recently, I thought I was making progress. STAR TREK: "Schizoid Man" - 10/10/88 - ACT ONE 12. 15 INT. CORRIDOR - DATA AND RIKER exit the turbolift and head down the corridor toward the transporter... DATA For example Commander, do you find this amusing? There were twelve....... aquatic fowl sitting on a fence, and six had -- RIKER -- Twelve. They only had a notion to fly away. Data stops in his tracks. DATA How did you -- RIKER -- Are you kidding? That joke's become a legend on this ship. 16 INT. TRANSPORTER ROOM - WORF, PULASKI, TROI (OPTICAL) and a MED-TECH are joined by Riker and Data (still mulling over the status of his legendary anecdote). Geordi is at the transporter controls. Riker wastes no time in leading his team onto the platform. RIKER Phaser on stun, Mister Worf. We don't know what's going on down there; no need to take chances. WORF Agreed, sir. GEORDI Remember folks, this is a long range transport. The effects will be a little unusual. PULASKI How do you mean? Riker cuts in before Geordi can reply. RIKER Understood. Energize. Pulaski turns to Riker just as they begin to transport... STAR TREK: "Schizoid Man" - 10/10/88 - ACT ONE 13. 16 CONTINUED: PULASKI Wait a minute! I don't under -- And they're GONE before the sentence is complete. 17 INT. LIVING ROOM ON GRAVESWORLD - THE AWAY TEAM (OPTICAL) begins to MATERIALIZE in comfortable if somewhat cluttered living quarters. Behind them we can see the planet through the window, including the multi-colored rings that encircle her. It takes longer than usual for their materialization. We hear the end of Pulaski's sentence as her body becomes solid. PULASKI -- ssstttaaaaaannnnddd! RIKER You do now. All seem momentarily disoriented. Troi puts her hand to her head. TROI Ohh... I know this is crazy, but for a moment I felt like I was trapped inside that wall. WORF You were. For a moment. Troi thinks that over. Behind her, Riker signals the ship. RIKER Riker to Enterprise. PICARD'S COM VOICE Go ahead, Number One. RIKER We've arrived in Graves' home. All's quiet so far -- on the other hand, no one knew we were coming. STAR TREK: "Schizoid Man" - 10/10/88 - ACT ONE 14. 17 CONTINUED: PICARD'S COM VOICE Use caution and investigate. Protect Graves' health at all cost. We're leaving orbit to assist the Mary Rogers. Back as soon as possible. RIKER Understood, Captain. Riker out. 18 ANGLE FAVORING DATA transfixed by something only he sees. RIKER (O.S.) Let's look around -- see if anybody's home. DATA Someone is home, sir. 19 WIDE ANGLE as the others turn to see what Data sees. Kareen Brianon stands in the doorway, looking even more ravishing than before. KAREEN You heard me. Thank God. Kareen moves toward them and speaks in a halting, shy voice. KAREEN (continuing) I'm Kareen Brianon, Doctor Graves' assistant. Are you... you with Starfleet? RIKER Yes, we're from a ship called the Enterprise. We monitored your distress call but you never acknowledged our response. KAREEN I'm sorry, I... couldn't take the chance... Riker moves forward and studies her eyes. Perhaps he's somewhat smitten by her beauty. STAR TREK: "Schizoid Man" - 10/10/88 - ACT ONE 15. 19 CONTINUED: RIKER What chance? GRAVES (O.S.) (stern) The chance that I might find out someone was coming. All eyes turn to see DOCTOR IRA GRAVES, standing behind them in a corner of the room (a wall door sliding shut behind him). He's a small man in his late seventies, with intense, darting eyes, and a healthy wild-looking shock of white hair. His skin is chalk-white, his torso frail. We get the impression of strong mind, weak body. GRAVES Kareen knew full well that I would not be pleased. KAREEN I had no choice. I refuse to stand by and watch you deteriorate. PULASKI What symptoms have you noticed? KAREEN He has pain, shortness of breath, irritability -- GRAVES -- Ridiculous! I'm as healthy as a Rigellian ox! KAREEN We'll see about that, Ira. (to away team) I hope one of you is a doctor. Pulaski steps forward. PULASKI Doctor Katherine Pulaski. Call me Kate. Pulaski greets Kareen and turns to do so with Ira. He shudders and holds up his hands as she approaches. STAR TREK: "Schizoid Man" - 10/10/88 - ACT ONE 16. 19 CONTINUED: (2) GRAVES No offense, but I don't want you touching me in a medical way. It's no secret that I don't like people much, and I like doctors even less than people! PULASKI Funny, I always thought doctors were people. GRAVES And you were wrong. Just ask any patient. (pause) Although I will admit for a doctor you're a nice looking woman. Graves is giving her body a slightly lecherous appraisal. Pulaski looks at Riker and rolls her eyes. Graves sets his sights on Troi... GRAVES And what have we here?... Another lovely specimen of womanhood. RIKER I thought you didn't like people? GRAVES I like women. Always try to forget that they're people. Graves slides closer to Troi, never taking his eyes off her cleavage. TROI (a bit embarrassed) I'm Deanna Troi. It's an honor to meet you Doctor Graves. GRAVES Yes! Yes, of course it is! This is one of the truly great moments of your life! Believe me honey, you'll never meet anyone half as sagacious as me. I'm a phenom. Graves' bragging comes out in such an enthusiastic, matter of fact way, one can't really be angry with him. To him, his statements are simply facts; he is incredibly brilliant. His egotism suits him. It's perversely lovable, like the boastful old veteran reminiscing about the men he killed in the war. STAR TREK: "Schizoid Man" - 10/10/88 - ACT ONE 17. 19 CONTINUED: (3) GRAVES (continuing) Oh there I go again -- shocking people with the truth. I can appreciate how hard it is for others to try and keep up with my mind. I don't mean to burden with my brilliance. It just works out that way. Over in a corner of the room, Kareen has been studying Worf. KAREEN (soft, uncertain) Excuse me sir... Are you a Romulan? Worf's face twists into a scowl, as though he smells something unpleasant. WORF Hardly. 20 WIDE ANGLE GRAVES He's a Klingon, Kareen. (to others) Kareen has lived here since her father died when she was quite young. Her only knowledge of inhuman races comes from me. I suppose Klingons and Romulans must look much alike. Worf snaps his head toward Riker, infuriated. WORF (low growl) Do I have to stand here and be insulted? GRAVES No insult intended, Mister Klingon. (to Pulaski) See Doctor? Nothing wrong with my hearing -- At this moment Graves is overcome with a brief but vicious wracking COUGH. It doubles him over momentarily, but he quickly tries to pass it off by honing in on Data. STAR TREK: "Schizoid Man" - 10/10/88 - ACT ONE 18. 20 CONTINUED: GRAVES (gravelly) My, my, my... Graves stands right in front of Data, reaching up and studying his face with ardent fascination. DATA Uh, Lieutenant Commander Data, sir -- GRAVES -- Shhh! Graves uses both hands to swivel Data's head from side to side, as he examines the structure of the android's ears, jawline, nose, etc. Behind Graves, Pulaski is taking the opportunity to run a medical scanner up and down the scientist's back. Unaware, Graves thinks out loud as he continues to peruse Data... GRAVES (continuing) Functional... Durable... Obviously no concern whatsoever for aesthetic values. Data frowns -- now he's insulted. Graves releases his head. GRAVES (continuing) Looks like Soong's work. DATA Quite correct, sir! Did you know Soong? GRAVES Know him?! (raspy cough) I taught him everything he knows. You could say I was the father of his work... (smiles as thought occurs) Which kinda makes me your grandfather, doesn't it sonny? Graves spins as he becomes aware that Pulaski has been scanning him. He scowls and backs away, but it's clear she's found out enough already. STAR TREK: "Schizoid Man" - 10/10/88 - ACT ONE 19. 20 CONTINUED: (2) GRAVES (continuing) Damn doctors! Always sneaking up on you like that -- saying this isn't going to hurt, this isn't going to hurt, when you both know it's going to hurt like hell! (pause) Well I'm not paying the bill for this! PULASKI (quietly) There won't be a bill, Doctor. (to Riker) May I speak with you privately? GRAVES What for! Anything you think you found's more my business than his! Riker thinks about it, then nods, giving Pulaski the go-ahead to speak freely. She hesitates... GRAVES (continuing) Go on, gorgeous! Whatever the hell it is, I can take it. PULASKI (uncomfortable) I checked twice to make certain... You have Varnay's disease. Kareen GASPS. Graves barely reacts. PULASKI (continuing) I'm sorry, Ira. You're dying, and there's nothing I can do about it. FADE OUT. END OF ACT ONE STAR TREK: "Schizoid Man" - 10/10/88 - ACT TWO 20. ACT TWO FADE IN: 21 EXT. SPACE - THE ENTERPRISE (OPTICAL) PICARD (V.O.) Captain's log, Stardate 42437.7. We've successfully transported the passengers and crew of the stricken liner Mary Rogers. 22 INT. OBSERVATION LOUNGE - MOVE IN ON PICARD alone, staring out the window at the stars... PICARD (V.O.) (continuing) Tragically, six people died in the initial explosion, but the rest are now aboard and in good condition. We are heading back to Gravesworld with great dispatch. Wesley ENTERS and quietly approaches the captain. WESLEY You wanted to see me, sir. PICARD (still staring at space) Yes Ensign. I assume you would very much like to meet Doctor Graves. WESLEY (brightening) Yes sir. His theories on spatial relationships are amazing! And his work in thermodynamics is -- PICARD -- Good, I get the idea. Providing his health is reasonably intact, I'm going to appoint you as his personal tour guide when he comes aboard. You have the run of the ship -- show him anything you think he'll find interesting, and for heaven's sake, don't talk his ear off! STAR TREK: "Schizoid Man" - 10/10/88 - ACT TWO 21. 22 CONTINUED: WESLEY (excited) Yes sir. Understood. (pause, thoughtful) But why me, sir? I mean, not that I'm complaining -- PICARD -- Graves has a reputation for being difficult and I'm not sure I have the patience for that right now. Picard turns from the window and looks Wesley in the eye. PICARD (continuing) And... sometimes the very old get along best with the very young. 23 INT. LIVING ROOM/GRAVESWORLD - ANGLE FAVORING PULASKI Riker, Kareen, Troi, Worf, and the med-tech are also present. PULASKI I'd say he has a week, but that's a guesstimate. KAREEN Is he in great pain? PULASKI Some. I could help with that but he won't let me get near him. KAREEN (sadly) He won't even let me get near him, now. RIKER Has he been... like a father to you? KAREEN More like a teacher. STAR TREK: "Schizoid Man" - 10/10/88 - ACT TWO 22. 23 CONTINUED: TROI I sense that his feelings for you are very warm. He's attracted to you in many ways. KAREEN Attracted?... I know -- I've felt certain feelings from him. But he's always been a gentleman. (to Riker) Had I been older... perhaps we could've been lovers. But nothing like that ever happened between us. She gives Riker a lingering look, then turns and walks away from him... KAREEN (continuing) Now, it's like he's afraid to face me... The only one he talks to is your friend, Data. 24 INT. GRAVES' LABORATORY - GRAVES is attending to a complex computer terminal, softly WHISTLING THE SONG, "IF I ONLY HAD A HEART," while behind him Data is blowing through some of his written material at breakneck speed. DATA I have noticed Doctor, that you -- GRAVES -- Call me Grandpa. Seems more touching in my final hours. DATA I have noticed Grandpa, that you keep repeating the same notes of a musical passage that I am unfamiliar with. GRAVES It's an ancient little tune called "If I Only Had A Heart." A rather plaintive lament sung by a mechanical man who longs to be human. It's his only wish. STAR TREK: "Schizoid Man" - 10/10/88 - ACT TWO 23. 24 CONTINUED: Struck by the image, Data stops what he's doing and MOVES closer to Graves... DATA What happens to this man? GRAVES He finds out that he is human after all. Always was -- just worried so much he never realized it. DATA A happy ending. The mechanical man got his wish. GRAVES Stories often have happy endings. It's life that throws you for a loop. Data seems to think deeply about what he's saying. Graves notes his thoughtfulness and continues... GRAVES (continuing) It must be hard for you... So close to being human and yet never really knowing what it's like to feel pain. DATA But... pain is unpleasant... is it not? Graves looks off into space -- a dying man allowing his mind to explore the vagaries of life. He closes his eyes, breathes deeply, speaks slowly... GRAVES Pain... Lust... envy... pleasure... desire. Do you know what desire is, Data? DATA Desire? It is to long for or crave, a wish, a request, a -- GRAVES (strong) -- Do you know what desire is? Data pauses. He realizes what Graves is asking him. When he answers, he almost sounds sad. STAR TREK: "Schizoid Man" - 10/10/88 - ACT TWO 24. 24 CONTINUED: (2) DATA No... I do not suppose I will ever know what it really is. Graves nods slowly. GRAVES I feel pity for you. Your existence is a kind of walking purgatory -- neither dead nor alive, never really feeling anything. Just existing. Just existing. Graves fights off A COUGHING SPELL. When he comes out of it, there's a small, ironic smile on his face... GRAVES Listen to me -- a dying man taking the time to mourn a man who will never know death. Funny, isn't it? DATA (softly) Funny?... I have... difficulty discerning what is funny. Graves turns his back on Data so that the android doesn't see his face turn grim. GRAVES I've had the same difficulty most of my life. We're much alike. 25 INT. LIVING ROOM ON GRAVESWORLD - RIKER ENTERS, rejoining the others. RIKER I just spoke with the captain. The Enterprise is minutes away; he'll contact us again when she goes into orbit. PULASKI You informed him of Doctor Graves' condition? RIKER Yes. Arrangements are being made to make his last days with us as comfortable as possible. STAR TREK: "Schizoid Man" - 10/10/88 - ACT TWO 25. 25 CONTINUED: Kareen pensively looks out the window... KAREEN It'll be strange to leave here. Troi goes to her and places a supportive arm around her shoulder. TROI You're a beautiful young woman, and there's a whole universe waiting for you out there. KAREEN I'll be alone. I'll be without Ira. Troi looks at her colleagues, uncertain of what to say. Surprisingly, it is Worf who gently approaches the girl. WORF (lowered tone) I know what it is to lose those closest to your heart. It will be hard... you will feel alone at first... but it will surely pass, as time passes. I know. She looks up at Worf with tears in the corner of her eyes. She instinctively knows that his words come from a place deep within him. The little girl in her comes forward and she embraces Worf, GENTLY SOBBING on his chest. The Klingon is caught off guard, initially uncomfortable with the situation. Slowly, awkwardly, he puts a protective arm around her, looking up at the others to make sure they're not laughing at him. 26 INT. GRAVES' LABORATORY - GRAVES is still intently working at the computer terminal. Data is beside him, obviously pondering their conversation. DATA You mentioned your impending death a while ago. I must say Grandpa, that you are facing it with remarkable courage and stoicism. STAR TREK: "Schizoid Man" - 10/10/88 - ACT TWO 26. 26 CONTINUED: GRAVES That is because I am an incredible man, possessing an iron will and nerves of steel. Two traits that helped me become the genius I am today as well as the lady-killer I was in days gone by. DATA (shocked) You condone homicide, sir? GRAVES It's an expression, Data. It means I was once as beautiful as I am smart. Data looks at the grizzled old man before him with amazement. DATA Really Grandpa? GRAVES (shrugging) No, not really -- but what the hell, I'm dying. I can remember my life any way I want. Graves fights off A COUGH and smiles at "his grandson." GRAVES (continuing) And I'll tell you a little secret, Sonny. I don't think I truly will be dying. DATA But... the doctor -- GRAVES -- Oh I'll die, but I won't really be dead. You see? Graves motions for Data to take a closer look at his revolutionary computer terminal. STAR TREK: "Schizoid Man" - 10/10/88 - ACT TWO 27. 26 CONTINUED: (2) GRAVES (continuing) I've invented a way of transferring consciousness into a computer. Before I die I plan to convey my great intelligence into this machine, thus cheating the Grim Reaper of his greatest prize. DATA Grim Reaper... Is that a farmer with no sense of humor? GRAVES I speak of the personification of death itself. (coughs) But what do you know of death? It is a subject forever alien to you. DATA Well Grandpa, that is not necessarily true. I do have an "off button" if you like. Its activation robs me of all consciousness -- therefore rendering me dead for all intents and purposes. Data walks over to study an equation on a chart on the wall. He does not see the thoughtful expression on Graves' face... DATA (continuing) It is not something I enjoy contemplating. GRAVES I can understand that; still the analogy is a good one. (pause, nonchalant) Just where would Soong position such a device? Don't tell me, let me guess. STAR TREK: "Schizoid Man" - 10/10/88 - ACT TWO 28. 27 INT. GRAVES' LIVING ROOM - THE SAME CAST AS BEFORE (OPTICAL) are awaiting the Enterprise's return. Kareen has stopped crying, she sits next to Worf on the couch. Worf rises as a figure begins to MATERIALIZE in the room. It is Captain Picard. Riker goes to him. RIKER Welcome to Gravesworld, sir. This is Kareen Brianon, Doctor Graves' friend and assistant. Picard appraises the beautiful, sad-eyed girl who stands to greet him. PICARD I'm very sorry, Ms. Brianon. I'm sure this is quite difficult for you. KAREEN Thank you, Captain. Your people have been most kind to me. Picard nods compassionately and turns to Troi. PICARD Where's Data? TROI He's been with Doctor Graves almost the entire time. They seem to have developed a genuine rapport. PICARD Hmm, I suppose I can understand that. (to Pulaski) I think we should immediately transport to the ship. There are patients from the Rogers who could use some of your medical savvy. PULASKI Injuries? PICARD Nothing serious. (to Kareen) But I'd also like to get Doctor Graves to a place where we can make him more comfortable. STAR TREK: "Schizoid Man" - 10/10/88 - ACT TWO 29. DATA (O.S.) That will not be necessary, Captain. 28 MOVE IN ON DATA BACKLIT in the doorway. For a moment he just stands there, perusing the room, taking things in slowly. PICARD (O.S.) Explain yourself, Data. DATA It happened in my arms, just a few moments ago. (pause) There is no need to hurry... Ira Graves is dead. FADE OUT. END OF ACT TWO STAR TREK: "Schizoid Man" - 10/10/88 - ACT THREE 30. ACT THREE FADE IN: 29 EXT. SPACE - THE ENTERPRISE (OPTICAL) pulling out of orbit, leaving Gravesworld behind. PICARD (V.O.) Captain's log, Supplemental. I leave Gravesworld with an empty feeling and the knowledge that our mission was unsuccessful. Whatever scientific secrets Ira Graves was about to unlock will follow him to his grave... 30 INT. OBSERVATION LOUNGE - KAREEN BRIANON (OPTICAL) sadly watches the planet shrink in size as the Enterprise heads out into space... PICARD (V.O.) (continuing) Our immediate priority is to reach the nearest starbase so that Graves' assistant and the marooned settlers can get on with their lives. 31 INT. CAPTAIN'S READY ROOM - PICARD Riker and Pulaski, stand across from Data. PICARD And he really believed he could transfer his intellect into a computer? DATA That is correct. Unfortunately he never had the opportunity to elaborate. Death came swiftly. RIKER Why didn't you notify Doctor Pulaski when it started to happen? DATA To do so would have been pointless. There was nothing she could have done. STAR TREK: "Schizoid Man" - 10/10/88 - ACT THREE 31. 31 CONTINUED: Picard is vaguely disturbed by Data's attitude. Surprisingly, Pulaski supports the android's words... PULASKI It's probably right. My preliminary report indicates an extremely rapid heart stoppage. Death was almost instantaneous. DATA I am not an "it," Doctor. You have been duly informed of this on several occasions, yet you continue to label me with that abhorrent pronoun. Before Pulaski can apologize, Picard addresses Data... PICARD Data... I realize you liked Doctor Graves a great deal. DATA He was the greatest man I have ever known. PICARD Does his death disturb you? DATA Disturb, Captain? No. All things must pass. (pause) May I go now, sir? PICARD Yes of course. Data turns to exit the room, but pauses at the doorway, his back to the others... DATA We will try and do the funeral the way he wanted, will we not, Captain? PICARD I told you we would, Data. DATA I am glad, sir. It was his dying wish. Data EXITS. Riker strokes his chin thoughtfully... STAR TREK: "Schizoid Man" - 10/10/88 - ACT THREE 32. 31 CONTINUED: (2) RIKER That's interesting. PICARD Hmm? RIKER I thought he said death came swiftly. When did Graves have time to make a dying wish? PULASKI Perhaps beforehand. Perhaps he had a premonition. 32 INT. OBSERVATION LOUNGE - KAREEN (OPTICAL) still stands alone, despondently gazing at the stars. She turns as Data ENTERS. KAREEN (gently, feminine) Hello Data. It's good to see you again. He stops at the far end of the room and stares at her for a moment before slowly making his way toward her. She turns back to the stars as he comes up beside her... KAREEN (continuing) The stars are so beautiful when seen from space. Yet they seem lonely -- each so isolated from the next. She turns when she realizes Data is staring at her profile. DATA Ira... never told you how beautiful you were to him. He never told you that, did he? Her lips part slightly in surprise. DATA (continuing) He could not tell you, do you understand? STAR TREK: "Schizoid Man" - 10/10/88 - ACT THREE 33. 32 CONTINUED: KAREEN Yes. I understand. DATA But he wanted to. Every waking moment. (pause) And he wanted you to know that. Kareen is mesmerized. Data is staring deep into her eyes with a great depth of feeling. Then, abruptly, he swivels and walks toward the door... KAREEN Data! (pause) How do you know? How do you know... what he thought of me? Data stops where he is and seems to search his memory before answering. The reply comes with a shrug... DATA He told me. Data EXITS. 33 MOVE IN ON KAREEN unnerved by his visit. 34 EXT. SPACE - THE ENTERPRISE (OPTICAL) in a flyby. 35 INT. ENTERPRISE CORRIDOR - ON PICARD briskly walking toward us. We see Wesley hurry to catch him from behind. WESLEY Captain Picard. Picard stops and waits for him to catch up. PICARD What is it? STAR TREK: "Schizoid Man" - 10/10/88 - ACT THREE 34. 35 CONTINUED: WESLEY (a bit hesitant) I heard about the ceremony you're having for Doctor Graves, and... well sir -- PICARD -- You wish to attend. WESLEY (nodding) Since I never got to meet him... PICARD I think it's a fine idea. Come along, Wes. 36 INT. ENTRANCE TO HOLODECK - ON DATA who is addressing the Holodeck computer. DATA ... The temperature should be seventy-two, no make it seventy-one degrees. And whenever the name Ira Graves is mentioned it will warm considerably -- Data cuts off as Picard and Wesley approach. PICARD Are we the first? DATA You are the last. The others have congregated inside. PICARD Very good. (to computer) Enter. The Holodeck doors slide open and REVEAL the scene inside. We can see Kareen as well as all the members of the away team, gathered on a grassy plain. As Wesley starts to step through, Data grasps his arm. DATA (to Picard) Perhaps the child would be better off playing somewhere else. This is an adult ceremony after all. STAR TREK: "Schizoid Man" - 10/10/88 - ACT THREE 35. 36 CONTINUED: WESLEY (laughing) The child? You still working on your sense of humor, Data? Wesley slithers free and enters the Holodeck. Picard frowns at Data. PICARD You don't seem yourself lately. Are you feeling all right? DATA Of course, sir. I am as healthy as a Rigellian ox. 37 INT. HOLODECK - CLOSE ON THE FACE OF IRA GRAVES resting peacefully in a clear glass-like casket. 38 PULL BACK TO SEE THE LITTLE CONGREGATION gathered in a respectful half-circle around him. Troi is speaking in a soft, peaceful tone... TROI ... Although we hardly knew him, we certainly knew of him. His reputation spread throughout the galaxy, and his mind touched all who cherish science. 39 ANGLE ON KAREEN gaunt, sad, gazing at the casket. Slowly, she looks over at: 40 DATA who seems to be enjoying this. Unnoticed by the others, he is looking around, his head bobbing happily, a thin smile on his lips. TROI (O.S.) We gather here today, to say a respectful good-bye to Ira Ellsworth Graves. A man who -- Data interrupts by walking in front of Troi to where Picard and Riker stand side by side. STAR TREK: "Schizoid Man" - 10/10/88 - ACT THREE 36. 40 CONTINUED: DATA This is not exactly what he wanted. Riker is annoyed. He indicates the surroundings (some of which are implied as being OFF CAMERA). RIKER You programmed the setting. The field, the mountain range -- DATA -- It is not the environment that I question, Commander. This was one of his favorite places on Gravesworld. PICARD Well what is it then? DATA It is the tone, the pacing, the content of the verbal tribute. (to Troi) No offense Counselor, but Doctor Graves would have desired a slightly more personal address. RIKER And how can you be so sure? DATA Why he told me, of course. (to Picard) Perhaps I should take over, sir. Picard SIGHS. At last he gives a slight nod. PICARD If you promise to be brief. When I agreed to this, I didn't intend for it to interfere with our duties. Understood? DATA Perfectly. Data moves before the casket and looks pridefully at the old, pale, shriveled face inside. He speaks in a trembling voice, with tremendous pride. DATA (continuing) Just look at that face. The face of a thinker, a warrior, a man for all seasons. STAR TREK: "Schizoid Man" - 10/10/88 - ACT THREE 37. 41 ANGLE ON WESLEY AND WORF each squinting to get a better look at Graves. A warrior? DATA Yes friends, Ira Graves was all that and more. 42 REACTION SHOT OF THE OTHERS at the sound of "Ira Graves," the temperature rises ten degrees and the GROUND RUMBLES for a few moments. DATA Ira Graves was a great humanitarian. Again the temperature goes up and the GROUND SHAKES AND ROARS. People are beginning to perspire... DATA (continuing) To know know know him, was to love love love him. But Ira Graves was not perfect. The same response, stronger now, at the sound of his name. The GROUND SHAKES so hard they're almost knocked off their feet. An angry Picard wipes a layer of sweat off his brow... PICARD Data... DATA (continuing, unaware) Perhaps his greatest fault was that he was too selfless. Cared too much for his fellow man. PICARD Data! That's enough! DATA I am almost finished sir. PICARD You are finished, you mean. 43 INT. OBSERVATION LOUNGE - RIKER AND PICARD stand across from Data. STAR TREK: "Schizoid Man" - 10/10/88 - ACT THREE 38. 43 CONTINUED: PICARD What's become of your judgment? DATA Perhaps I am maturing, sir. PICARD Do you consider it mature to program the mountains to tremble every time you say the name, Ira Graves? Data sheepishly looks down at the ground. PICARD (continuing) Not to mention the air warming at the very thought of him. We would've been barbequed if we'd stayed much longer. Data is even more ashamed -- suddenly incredibly down on himself. DATA I seem to have overdone it. RIKER To put it mildly. DATA I brought shame to this ship. To the good name of Starfleet. PICARD Data -- DATA -- I was only trying to carry out his wishes. To make sure I kept my promise. PICARD I know that Data. Picard is concerned by Data's sudden melancholy. He somewhat awkwardly puts a hand on the android's shoulder in support. STAR TREK: "Schizoid Man" - 10/10/88 - ACT THREE 39. 43 CONTINUED: (2) PICARD (continuing) Look... I realize you've been studying the human equation with great alacrity, but maybe you've been trying just a little too hard. Do you know what I mean? A somber, doe-eyed Data nods his head. Picard continues, actually feeling a bit guilty... PICARD (continuing) Try and relax a little. Don't try to be so... "human." Just be yourself. Okay? DATA (serious, just a touch of sadness) Affirmative, sir. I will work on staying within myself. Now if you will excuse me, I am due on the bridge. Picard nods and Data begins to exit. Picard looks at Riker and shrugs, hoping he didn't come down on him too hard. 44 INT. CORRIDOR - ON DATA as he exits the Observation Lounge and walks straight toward us. His somber expression is abruptly replaced by a pleased, self-confident one. A remarkably sudden transition. He turns to check out an attractive CREWWOMAN as she passes him. When he turns around again he begins to WHISTLE as he walks. The tune is familiar: "IF I ONLY HAD A HEART." FADE OUT. END OF ACT THREE STAR TREK: "Schizoid Man" - 10/10/88 - ACT FOUR 40. ACT FOUR FADE IN: 45 INT. ENTERPRISE CORRIDOR - TRACKING PICARD AND RIKER walking briskly down the corridor. RIKER I'm concerned, sir. I've never seen him act like this. PICARD Could it be that grandfather analogy Graves planted in his head?. Data is an orphan in a manner of speaking. Maybe the loss of Graves really got to him. Touched him emotionally. RIKER I hope that's all it is. They stop at a door. PICARD It's Captain Picard and Commander Riker. May we come in? 46 INT. KAREEN'S QUARTERS - PICARD AND RIKER ENTER. Kareen sits in a form-fitting leather chair, looking very beautiful and very sad. PICARD We've come to pay our respects, Miss Brianon. KAREEN Thank you, gentlemen. That's most thoughtful. RIKER We're due at Starbase Six in less than twelve hours. We thought you might enjoy a quick look at the bridge before we arrive. KAREEN Can one see the stars from up there? STAR TREK: "Schizoid Man" - 10/10/88 - ACT FOUR 41. 46 CONTINUED: PICARD Oh yes. Closer than you've ever seen them before. This thought brings the flicker of a smile to her lovely face. She stands up gracefully... KAREEN I think I'd enjoy that very much. Each man takes a hand and escorts her out of the room. 47 EXT. SPACE - THE ENTERPRISE (OPTICAL) cruising toward Starbase Six. 48 INT. BRIDGE - WIDE ANGLE Data at Ops, Wesley at Conn, Geordi in Command with Troi beside him, Worf at Tactical. WESLEY (grinning) That was a great speech, Data. To know know him is to love love love love love him?! DATA (dry) Taken from a centuries-old Earth composition. Your child-like mind cannot appreciate the timeworn wisdom of its words. GEORDI (teasing) You're not turning into a star-crossed artist on us, are you Data? DATA I am many things: artist, scholar, lover, genius -- He cuts off, offended at the LAUGHTER of Geordi and Wesley. The two of them think his stoic delivery is hilarious. GEORDI You're getting funnier, I gotta hand it to you. (laughs, shakes head) There's something to be said for that deadpan delivery. STAR TREK: "Schizoid Man" - 10/10/88 - ACT FOUR 42. 49 ANGLE ON THE TURBOLIFT DOOR as Picard and Riker ENTER, escorting Kareen. Still chuckling, Geordi EXITS the bridge, relinquishing the Command Area. 50 CLOSE ON DATA frowning as he sees Kareen with the two officers. 51 WIDE ANGLE (OPTICAL) Kareen is enraptured by the bridge, especially the viewscreen. RIKER You're looking in the general direction of the constellation Pegasus. Kareen's eyes are aglow. She truly loves stargazing. No one notices that Data is watching them with a distinct glower. Picard gently touches her shoulder, leading her toward the Aft Stations. PICARD I'm aware of your interest in science. Perhaps you'd like to -- Data interrupts with a sullen growl, spinning to face them... DATA (under his breath) -- And I am aware of your interest in her. That said, he quickly faces forward again. PICARD (sharply) What was that, Data? DATA Nothing sir. Nothing at all. Picard is about to say something else, then thinks better of it. He turns his attention back to the young lady... PICARD These are our science stations. STAR TREK: "Schizoid Man" - 10/10/88 - ACT FOUR 43. 52 TWO SHOT OF DATA AND WESLEY at their stations. The boy is wide-eyed, having heard Data's comment. Data continues to simmer... WESLEY (whisper) What's wrong with you?! DATA (normal voice) I detest hypocrisy. I wish they would just come out and admit it. 53 WIDE ANGLE FAVORING PICARD who is not about to let that comment pass by. PICARD (angry) Admit what, Mister Data? Data calmly turns and addresses Riker and Picard. DATA That your interest in Kareen is not entirely honorable. Everyone is shocked. WORF Data! You are way out of line! Data ignores Worf and deliberately walks toward Picard and Riker... DATA (to Picard) Try as you might, you cannot win her heart. She does not like older men... (to Riker) ... or men of limited intellect. PICARD (controlling his temper) Mister Data, you are hereby relieved of duty -- Worf, take his station. WORF Yes sir. Worf moves to Ops. Picard continues with Data... STAR TREK: "Schizoid Man" - 10/10/88 - ACT FOUR 44. 53 CONTINUED: PICARD You will report to your quarters immediately. You will not leave there until you hear otherwise from me. Is that understood? DATA Sure, I understand. (looks at Kareen) I understand all too well. Everyone's a bit spellbound as Data reaches out and gently touches Kareen's cheek before retiring to the turbolift. The doors open and he enters... DATA (continuing) Removing the competition will not help you, Picard. And the doors shut. No one knows what to say -- all are stunned. Kareen seems shaky and frightened. PICARD (to Kareen) Do you know what that was all about? Still disturbed, she shakes her head vigorously. Beside her, Troi is mulling something over... TROI (as a revelation) Jealousy... I sensed intense, burning jealousy. And it was coming from Data! 54 INT. DATA'S QUARTERS - DATA is standing before a full-length mirror, narcissistically studying his own image. He turns sideways and goes up on his toes, shamelessly admiring his body. Geordi ENTERS in a concerned state. GEORDI I heard what happened but I just can't believe it. STAR TREK: "Schizoid Man" - 10/10/88 - ACT FOUR 45. 54 CONTINUED: DATA Do not trouble yourself, friend. I am sure the captain will be by to apologize shortly. GEORDI You expect him to apologize? Data doesn't even answer -- he's too enthralled with his own image in the glass. DATA It seems I was too harsh on Soong. Notice the strong chin, the finely chiseled features, the powerful torso. Do you realize that this body will never wear out. (sighs with pleasure) Immortality. GEORDI What the hell are you talking about? Picard ENTERS, still angry. GEORDI (continuing; to Picard) He's not himself, sir. I know him better than anybody. Picard's face twists into a grimace as he notices Data's shameless preening before the mirror. PICARD (to Data) We're going to Sickbay. DATA (aloof) Oh? Are you ill, sir? PICARD I'm getting there. Come along. 55 INT. SICKBAY - CLOSE ON PULASKI looking displeased. PULASKI I don't oil machinery. STAR TREK: "Schizoid Man" - 10/10/88 - ACT FOUR 46. 56 PULL BACK TO SEE Pulaski standing across from Picard, with Data sitting up on a bed behind them. PULASKI Why don't you take it down to Engineering? PICARD Because I brought him to you. I want a complete medical check run on him immediately. PULASKI (exasperated) I'll do the best I can -- PICARD -- I expect nothing less. PULASKI -- But if it blew a fuse or something I may not pick it up. PICARD I have the utmost faith in your abilities, Doctor. I know nothing will get by you. Behind them, Data has been smiling -- amused at their conversation. CUT TO: 57 CLOSE-UP OF MEDICAL MONITOR graphs rising and falling. 58 PULL BACK TO SEE Data lying on a medical bed with Pulaski hovering over him, running instruments along his body. Data takes the time to leer at her body. Pulaski comments dryly without taking her eyes off her instruments... PULASKI I'm sure there's a reason you're looking at me that way. STAR TREK: "Schizoid Man" - 10/10/88 - ACT FOUR 47. 58 CONTINUED: DATA I am simply looking. Any thought of ulterior motive rests with you. Perhaps you are projecting your own desires. PULASKI (derisive chuckle) Perhaps not. I've had three husbands dear, and they've all been flesh and blood. For some strange reason I like it that way. (pause) Now shut up and turn over. DATA (shrugging) Very well. It is your loss. 59 INT. ADJOINING ROOM IN SICKBAY - DATA WALKS IN as Picard, Pulaski and Troi prepare to discuss the results. PICARD Wait for me in the corridor, Mister Data. DATA What for? This concerns me more than it does any of you. PICARD (raising voice) You will wait for me in the corridor! Data SIGHS and reluctantly EXITS. PICARD (continuing) His insubordination is growing by leaps and bounds. I could throw him in the brig but I'd rather try and help him. STAR TREK: "Schizoid Man" - 10/10/88 - ACT FOUR 48. 59 CONTINUED: PULASKI Well I really don't know what to suggest. Physically it's fit as a fiddle. Granted it's not easy to examine a tin can the size of a human, but I'll be damned if I can find anything wrong with it. Picard begins to pace -- he's frustrated and concerned. TROI Perhaps we're looking in the wrong place, sir. PICARD Explain. TROI Well, Data's physical health may be unimpaired but it's his mental health that needs to be addressed. PULASKI Are you suggesting it's losing its mind? Troi thinks before answering... TROI With your permission Captain, there's one way to find out. 60 INT. DATA'S QUARTERS - TROI (OPTICAL) finishes attaching a thin wire to Data's wrist. We can see identical wires running from his chest and head to a small black box. Data is sitting before a viewscreen, looking displeased... TROI You remember the psychotronic stability examination, don't you Data? We all had to take it before graduating from the Academy. DATA It was a waste of time then and it is a waste of time now. STAR TREK: "Schizoid Man" - 10/10/88 - ACT FOUR 49. 60 CONTINUED: TROI Just watch the screen and let your mind go blank. This little machine will do the rest. Reluctantly, Data looks up at the screen. 61 ANGLE TO INCLUDE VIEWSCREEN (OPTICAL) a series of images begin to appear: A green meadow... a waterfall... fire... the Earth seen from space... the Enterprise... a man and woman embracing... a baby ... the color yellow... the Federation seal... 62 CLOSE ON DATA (OPTICAL) the images reflecting off his face. 63 BACK TO VIEWSCREEN (OPTICAL) images flying by faster now, dissolving into one another: The blackness of space... an old woman... the color red... Picard... an alien landscape... Geordi... a Klingon battle cruiser... Remmick... the word "honor"... the number 2... a barren orchard... a purple sunset... 64 DATA squirms in his seat; this is making him uncomfortable. 65 INT. CAPTAIN'S READY ROOM - PICARD AND GEORDI (OPTICAL) are conferring. PICARD It's safe to say you're his best friend. Can you speculate on what's happening to him? STAR TREK: "Schizoid Man" - 10/10/88 - ACT FOUR 50. 65 CONTINUED: GEORDI It's just a guess sir, but, well sometimes he wants to be human so bad he can taste it. And sometimes he is more human than he or we realize. PICARD Yes... GEORDI I think your theory might be right, Captain. Witnessing Graves' death may have been the catalyst -- Geordi cuts off as Troi appears on the VIEWSCREEN. TROI I have the results of the tests, Captain. I -- I ran two tests to make certain. PICARD Make certain of what? TROI (concerned) There are two distinct personalities within Lieutenant Commander Data. PICARD What?! He's an android, that's not possible! TROI Nevertheless it is true. The second personality is the dominant. It is unbalanced: brilliant but vain, sensitive yet paranoid. I believe it is also capable of extreme acts of violence. 66 ANGLE ON PICARD (OPTICAL) as his mind reaches a stunning realization... PICARD (shocked whisper) So that's it... STAR TREK: "Schizoid Man" - 10/10/88 - ACT FOUR 51. 66 CONTINUED: TROI What was that, sir? PICARD (lost in thought) Nothing. Go on. TROI It seems to have an especially strong hatred of you, Captain. Or to a lesser degree, any authority figure. (pause) And worst of all, it's growing. PICARD How do you mean? TROI The alien persona is getting stronger -- gobbling up what's left of the original Data. 67 MOVE IN ON TROI'S IMAGE (OPTICAL) TROI If we don't find a way to stop it immediately, the Data we knew will be gone forever. FADE OUT. END OF ACT FOUR STAR TREK: "Schizoid Man" - 10/10/88 - ACT FIVE 52. ACT FIVE FADE IN: 68 INT. CAPTAIN'S READY ROOM - PICARD AND GEORDI are deeply concerned. PICARD Where is he now, Counselor? TROI I left him in his quarters. He still has orders not to leave. PICARD Orders? Which personality will choose to obey my orders? Picard quickly addresses the wall-panel computer, sensing trouble. PICARD (to computer) Tell me -- where is Lieutenant Commander Data? 69 INT. OBSERVATION LOUNGE - KAREEN (OPTICAL) is back at her favorite spot, eyeing the starry sky, her back to the door. She does not see Data as he quietly ENTERS the room. He just stands there... staring at her back. His unseen presence has an ominous quality to it. DATA Hello Kareen. She turns, startled. DATA (continuing) You know who I am, don't you? KAREEN You're -- you're Data. DATA You know who I am. Don't you. Data moves forward until they're face to face. He is commanding, intense; she is nervous, more than a little frightened. Still, there's a trace of hope in her eyes. STAR TREK: "Schizoid Man" - 10/10/88 - ACT FIVE 53. 69 CONTINUED: KAREEN (whisper) Ira?... Data gently holds her face in his hands. His eyes light up and his face breaks into an electric smile. DATA It is me, Kareen! I'm here -- I'm alive! KAREEN How? DATA The process worked! I turned Data off and transferred my consciousness into his frame. Data steps back and proudly indicates his android body... DATA (continuing) Just look at me! Sleek, powerful, indestructable. He grabs an object off the table. His face grows grim as he sends his mind back in time... DATA (continuing) When I was a boy, other children knew I couldn't match them physically. They teased me -- bullied me. That's when I withdrew... Became an island. He crushes the object, letting the rubble slip through his fingers. DATA (continuing) But no one will ever bully me again. (shrugs, smiles) If they try, I'll simply break their necks. KAREEN Don't talk that way, Ira. I've never known you to be violent. STAR TREK: "Schizoid Man" - 10/10/88 - ACT FIVE 54. 69 CONTINUED: (2) DATA (laughs) I've never been capable of violence. But now I'm more than capable -- and I rather enjoy this new ability. He turns his head as the door opens and Worf ENTERS with TWO SECURITY GUARDS. WORF Excuse me Data, but the captain would like to see you. DATA Of course. (to Kareen) If you will excuse me, Miss Brianon. Data begins to go with the three of them. Just as Worf turns his back, Data savagely fells him with a two-fisted blow to the back of the head. He grabs a phaser from the unconscious Klingon and points it at the security guards. One of the guards goes for his phaser -- Data fires right into his chest, taking him out. The other guard makes no such move. DATA (continuing) You're just the type, aren't you? You'd beat me up if you could, but you can't. Not any more. The guard is bewildered; he looks at Kareen questioningly. KAREEN Ira, no. DATA Stay out of it! (to Guard) You're lucky I'm such a compassionate man. Now walk! The guard tentatively turns and walks toward the door. Data grins and ruthlessly shoots him in the back, knocking him out. STAR TREK: "Schizoid Man" - 10/10/88 - ACT FIVE 55. 69 CONTINUED: (3) Three bodies now clutter the floor and Data is delighted. He moves to Kareen -- she takes a step back and looks at him with alarm in her eyes. DATA (continuing) There's something I must do -- something they're forcing me to do. I'll come for you when my task is complete. KAREEN (voice trembling) Ira... I don't understand... what's happening to you? He takes her hand in his. She doesn't resist. DATA Something wonderful. I feel no pain, no pain at all! And I'm immortal -- I'll never have to face death again. Think of the things I'll accomplish over the next thousand years! Kareen is horrified. Data sees her reaction but misreads it. DATA (continuing) I know what you're thinking, but there's no need to worry. I'll create an android body for you as well. We'll witness the end of infinity together. She begins to cry. Her tears have a curious effect on him; he loses some of his fiery bravado and becomes softer and more sensitive. DATA (continuing) Don't cry, Kareen. (pause, concerned) Don't you see, I can love you now. The way I've always wanted to. It wouldn't have been right then... I was too old for you, too weak. But now I can be everything you've ever wanted. She grimaces and tries to pull away. STAR TREK: "Schizoid Man" - 10/10/88 - ACT FIVE 56. 69 CONTINUED: (4) KAREEN Ira -- you're hurting me! He's shocked to find he's unconsciously squeezing her hand. He lets go, realizing he could have broken it into a hundred pieces. Kareen cradles her wounded hand -- Data stares at his own hand in dull horror. His action seems to have taken the wind out of his sails. He leans over and gently wipes a tear from her cheek. DATA (softly, dazed) I'll be back. Wait for me. As he exits, he looks at the three downed men with a touch of alarm. Did I really do that? He carefully steps around them, takes one last look at Kareen, and EXITS. Kareen goes to Worf, who is GROANING, just beginning to revive. WORF Ohhh, what hit me? The doors open and Riker and Picard ENTER, rushing to Kareen and Worf. RIKER Did Data do this? KAREEN (nodding) But it's not really Data. PICARD Yes. I realize that now. Picard addresses the com panel. PICARD (into com) Security alert -- all decks. Lieutenant Commander Data may be armed and dangerous. Use extreme caution and subdue. All phasers on stun. 70 INT. MAIN BRIDGE - GEORDI AT COMMAND Troi beside him, Wesley at Conn, the rest are N.D. CREWMEMBERS. The turbolift doors open and Data steps out brandishing a phaser. STAR TREK: "Schizoid Man" - 10/10/88 - ACT FIVE 57. 70 CONTINUED: DATA Well hello there. You all look like you could use a little vacation. 71 INT. OBSERVATION LOUNGE - PULASKI (OPTICAL) has arrived and is treating and reviving the security guards. Picard and Riker are helping Worf to his feet when the viewscreen activates. We see Data holding a phaser to Geordi's head. DATA Captain Picard -- I have ordered your people to vacate the bridge and they have refused. In an effort to save insignificant lives I will give you the opportunity to issue the same order. Otherwise, I will remove them my way. RIKER (softly, to Picard) That phaser's set to kill, Captain. PICARD Data. That's your best friend you're threatening. That's Geordi. You wouldn't harm him for the world, would you? Data looks at Geordi and begins to soften. It becomes clear that there is a struggle going on inside him. DATA (uncertain) Geordi? GEORDI Yes Data. It's me. For a moment it looks like Data is about to release him. Then something kicks in and he violently presses the phaser against Geordi's head again. DATA He's no friend of mine! I should kill him on the spot -- put him out of his blind misery. STAR TREK: "Schizoid Man" - 10/10/88 - ACT FIVE 58. 71 CONTINUED: PICARD You win -- no need to act rashly. Mister La Forge, you and the rest of the bridge crew will vacate immediately. DATA I'll blast anyone who attempts to reenter. PICARD You will make no attempt to recapture the bridge. Is that clear, Geordi? GEORDI Yes sir. Evacuating now. Data seems to think about it before letting Geordi move OFF SCREEN. Suddenly there's an evil glint in his eye. DATA Maybe I should shoot one in the back just to let you know I mean business. There's a horrible, helpless moment of silence as Picard and company watch Data take aim on someone about to exit. PICARD What is it you want? Tell me! Data grins and deliberately begins to squeeze the trigger. PICARD (continuing) Kareen is with us! You want to talk to Kareen. Slowly Data lowers the gun and turns to face Picard. DATA Kareen? Are you there? Picard motions with his head for Kareen to approach the viewscreen. KAREEN Yes -- yes Ira. I'm here. Once again Data goes through a radical mood change. He becomes somber, paranoid. STAR TREK: "Schizoid Man" - 10/10/88 - ACT FIVE 59. 71 CONTINUED: (2) DATA They're all against me, Kareen. They want to drive me out of this body. To kill me! Kareen looks to Picard and Riker, uncertain of how to react. DATA (continuing) We're going to a new world, my darling. A place where no one can ever touch us. Just hang on, and trust in me. The viewscreen goes dead. Riker tries to reactivate it... RIKER Riker to bridge, Riker to bridge. (pause, to Picard) It's no good. He deactivated the monitor. Picard grimly looks at the frightened girl, trying to figure a way to recapture the bridge. 72 INT. OBSERVATION LOUNGE - LATER - PICARD has convened an emergency meeting. Troi, Wesley, Geordi, Worf, Riker, Pulaski, and Kareen attending. PULASKI We must remember that we're dealing with an unhealthy mind, ravaged by Varnay's disease as well as the strain of assimilating into a new body. WORF And that "unhealthy mind" is in total control of this ship. GEORDI Yet he seems to have a purpose. He said something about going to a new world. RIKER (to Kareen) Do you know what he meant by that? She shakes her head. STAR TREK: "Schizoid Man" - 10/10/88 - ACT FIVE 60. 72 CONTINUED: TROI (to Kareen) Is there anything you can tell us about Ira Graves that will help us to understand? KAREEN (distraught) He's a wonderful man. He's not like this -- PICARD -- He's taken over my ship! And I want her back! (pause) Are you going to help me? KAREEN How can I help? PICARD By rejecting him! By deflating his ego. TROI Yes, he said he was doing this for you. Saying you want nothing to do with him might distract him long enough -- KAREEN -- I won't hurt him! He's sick, I won't help to destroy him. PICARD It might be our only hope! He controls all life-support systems on this ship. He could start killing us like flies. KAREEN (yelling, distraught) I can't do it, don't you understand? Picard leans back in his chair. He slowly nods his head... PICARD Yes, I suppose I do understand. The captain rises. STAR TREK: "Schizoid Man" - 10/10/88 - ACT FIVE 61. 72 CONTINUED: (2) RIKER Where are you going, Captain? PICARD (grim, determined) To the bridge. RIKER I can't let you do that, sir. PICARD You have no choice, Number One. Should I fail to return I want you to attempt an external bridge separation. Get all of our people as far away from him as possible. PULASKI You can't just walk in on him! He won't hesitate to kill you. PICARD There's still some of Data inside. I know there is. If I can reach him, maybe we've still got a chance. 73 INT. MAIN BRIDGE - DATA (OPTICAL) sits at Command, watching the viewscreen, phaser in hand. He spins as the turbolift doors open, and fires a shot that barely misses Picard's head. The captain stands there calmly, then slowly walks onto the bridge. DATA I could've killed you. You know that, don't you? PICARD I do know that. I also know you haven't killed anyone so far. I don't think you really want to. Data doesn't say anything; he simply watches the captain through narrowed eyes. Picard indicates the viewscreen. PICARD (continuing) Where are we going? STAR TREK: "Schizoid Man" - 10/10/88 - ACT FIVE 62. 73 CONTINUED: DATA To the Aldebaran system. There's a planet there that suits my purpose. PICARD Which is? DATA Why should I tell you? PICARD Because you're lonely. Because you want someone else to share your plans. DATA I'll tell you... because I'm bored. I plan on building a fortress, with a laboratory of course. Those of your crew that I do not exterminate shall live there as our slaves. Kareen will never want for anything. PICARD And what of Data? Your "grandson." DATA (chuckles) What of him? PICARD You took advantage of him. Data angrily rises and moves toward Picard. DATA I did him a favor! I gave him life! PICARD You killed him! You're nothing but a two-bit murderer! Data lunges at Picard and grabs his throat with both hands. Picard strains to free himself but the android hands are incredibly strong. Picard is beginning to turn blue. DATA You call me a murderer?! I'll show you what murder is. STAR TREK: "Schizoid Man" - 10/10/88 - ACT FIVE 63. 73 CONTINUED: (2) Picard is gasping for air -- on his last legs. KAREEN (O.S.) (screaming) Stop it! Surprised, Data turns, releasing his grip. Kareen steps onto the bridge... KAREEN) (continuing) You've become a monster. DATA (worried, nervous) Don't say that, Kareen. He attacked me -- KAREEN -- And a liar as well. Breathing hard, Picard watches as she goes up to Data with fire in her eyes... KAREEN (continuing) I hate you. I despise you. DATA (shocked, weak) Kareen... don't... KAREEN You're not a man anymore! You're a pathetic little pile of machinery! DATA Stop... please... KAREEN The thought of ever living with something like you makes me sick. Data is weakening by the moment. The fury of her verbal assault is bringing out all of his insecurities and paranoia, making him a basket case. KAREEN (continuing) I'd rather live alone! I'd rather make love to a computer! STAR TREK: "Schizoid Man" - 10/10/88 - ACT FIVE 64. 73 CONTINUED: (3) Data is overcome by a moment of pure fury. He hauls back and prepares to slap her... KAREEN (continuing) Are you going to kill me too? The thought of what he was about to do terrifies Data. His hands begin to shake, he bows his head in nervous shame... DATA You hate me... What can I do, what can I do? KAREEN Leave that body. It doesn't belong to you. Data looks her in the eye. He is emotionally devastated. He gives her just the ghost of a smile (is he relieved?) and then hurries to the turbolift. Alone with Kareen, the recovering Picard gives her a hug. We can see by her eyes that this experience was just as devastating for her. Her hatred was a forced hatred. 74 EXT. SPACE - THE ENTERPRISE (OPTICAL) banks sharply and heads back in her original direction. 75 INT. DATA'S QUARTERS - ANGLE ON THE DOORS as they open and Picard, Riker, Geordi, Kareen and Pulaski hurry in. 76 REVERSE ANGLE on the inert form of Data lying by the computer terminal. Riker is the first to reach him, shaking his limp form by the collar. RIKER Data! Data, can you hear me? Data's eyes pop open. They are clear and inquisitive -- we sense it's the old Data once again. STAR TREK: "Schizoid Man" - 10/10/88 - ACT FIVE 65. 76 CONTINUED: DATA May I ask you a question, Commander? Riker smiles up at the others. He happily senses the same thing. RIKER I think you just did. DATA Quite correct. May I ask you another question after this one? RIKER No questions. Just tell me a joke. The funniest joke in history. DATA All right. There were twelve... starship captains, sitting on a fence -- 77 CLOSE ON PICARD his eyebrows arching in surprise. PICARD -- I've heard more than enough to know you're you again. Data has no idea what that means. As the others help the android to his feet, Picard notices that Kareen is standing away from the others, staring at the computer terminal. He goes to see what she sees... 78 ANGLE ON COMPUTER VIEWSCREEN It simply reads: "GOOD-BYE KAREEN. I'M SORRY." Picard puts his hand on her shoulder... KAREEN (sad half-whisper) He's in there. Ira put himself in the computer. PICARD No Kareen. The real Ira Graves never left the planet. STAR TREK: "Schizoid Man" - 10/10/88 - ACT FIVE 66. 79 EXT. SPACE - THE ENTERPRISE (OPTICAL) streaks past us on its way to Starbase Six. FADE OUT. END OF ACT FIVE THE END STAR TREK: THE NEXT GENERATION "Loud as a Whisper #40272-132 Written by Jackie Zambrano Directed by Larry Shaw THE WRITING CREDITS MAY NOT BE FINAL AND SHOULD NOT BE USED FOR PUBLICITY OR ADVERTISING PURPOSES WITHOUT FIRST CHECKING WITH THE TELEVISION LEGAL DEPARTMENT. Copyright 1988 Paramount Pictures Corporation. All Rights Reserved. This script is not for publication or reproduction. 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FINAL DRAFT STAR TREK: "Loud as a Whisper" - draft 11/4/88 CAST STAR TREK: THE NEXT GENERATION "Loud as a Whisper" CAST PICARD RIVA RIKER 1ST LEADER/WARRIOR TROI SCHOLAR/ARTIST WORF WARRIOR/ADONIS/PERSON DATA CULTURED WOMAN GEORDI 2ND LEADER/WARRIOR PULASKI WESLEY TRANSPORTER CHIEF Non-Speaking Non-Speaking CREWMEMBERS BOY SOLDIERS/COMBATANTS STAR TREK: "Loud as a Whisper" - DRAFT 11/10/88 - SETS STAR TREK: THE NEXT GENERATION "Loud as a Whisper" SETS INTERIORS EXTERIORS USS ENTERPRISE USS ENTERPRISE MAIN BRIDGE CAPTAIN'S READY ROOM PLANET RAMATIS 3 TURBOLIFT TRANSPORTER ROOM PLANET SOLAIS 5 GUEST QUARTERS MOUNTAIN TOP OBSERVATION LOUNGE SICKBAY MAIN ENGINEERING CORRIDOR PLANET RAMATIS ANTEROOM LARGER ROOM STAR TREK: "Loud as a Whisper" - 11/10/88 - PRONUNCIATION GUIDE STAR TREK: THE NEXT GENERATION "Loud as a Whisper" PRONUNCIATION GUIDE RIVA REE-va SOLAIS So-LAY-is RAMATIS RAH-mah-tis STAR TREK: "Loud as a Whisper" - 11/10/88 - TEASER 1. STAR TREK: THE NEXT GENERATION "Loud as a Whisper" TEASER FADE IN: 1 EXT. SPACE - THE ENTERPRISE (OPTICAL) The ship glides through space, planets and stars. PICARD (V.O.) Captain's log, Stardate 42411.2. The Enterprise has been unexpectedly diverted to the Ramatis star system. The two sides of a bitter little planetary conflict have petitioned Starfleet to transport to their world a mediator they have mutually selected. Our orders are transportation only -- no interference, no responsibilities. It is a mission much to my liking. 2 INT. MAIN BRIDGE RIKER has the Command position. WESLEY has the Conn, DATA is at Ops, n.d. CREWMEMBER at Tactical. The other positions are occupied by n.d. crewmembers. RIKER Reduce to half impulse. WESLEY Reducing velocity to one-half impulse. Riker walks to the captain's Ready Room door. The CHIME signals Riker's presence. From inside, CAPTAIN PICARD calls out. PICARD (O.S.) Come. The door opens. STAR TREK: "Loud as a Whisper" - 11/10/88 - TEASER 2. 3 INT. CAPTAIN'S READY ROOM (OPTICAL) Riker enters. Spread across and above Picard's desk is a complicated arrangement of three-dimensional shapes -- some on the surface, others seemingly suspended in air. PICARD Ah, Number One. Look at this. Ever since we left the Lima-Sierra system, I have been puzzling over how the third planet could maintain such an orbit, when it is theoretically impossible, but consider this. Riker moves closer, whereupon Picard activates the display. The shapes GO INTO MOTION. They then STOP. RIKER There's no degeneration? PICARD Exactly! RIKER Why? PICARD I haven't got that worked out. RIKER Perhaps this facsimile lacks mass. PICARD Yes, somewhat, but if this is an accurate representation -- would it not explain what happened in that system? Riker moves closer. RIKER (as he studies the display) Perhaps. Picard comes back to business. PICARD Well, not a matter of great moment -- just a knot I had to untie. Now... What was it you wanted to see me about? STAR TREK: "Loud as a Whisper" - 11/10/88 - TEASER 3. 3 CONTINUED: RIKER Captain, we have arrived at Ramatis Three. Picard gets to his feet as he speaks: PICARD Ah -- well -- time to leave. 4 EXT. SPACE - THE ENTERPRISE (OPTICAL) entering orbit near the silver and blue planet of Ramatis Three. 5 INT. MAIN BRIDGE as before. Picard and Riker come onto the bridge. RIKER Standard orbit, Mister Crusher. WESLEY Standard orbit. Together they head for the turbolift. RIKER Data, you have the bridge. Data leaves Ops and is immediately replaced by an n.d. FEMALE CREWMEMBER. He takes the Command position. 6 ANOTHER ANGLE as Riker and Picard enter the turbolift, the doors close. 7 INT. TURBOLIFT RIKER I am still uncomfortable about your leading this away team. STAR TREK: "Loud as a Whisper" - 11/10/88 - TEASER 4. 7 CONTINUED: PICARD This is not an away team in the strictest sense. I consider this more of a ceremonial function. For me not to go, could be construed a lack of respect, or that I do not regard the mission as significant. Transporter Room Five. The turbolift heads for Deck Seventeen. RIKER Considering the importance of this mission and the lives which are at stake... I don't want to do anything which would have a negative affect on this negotiation, however... PICARD I appreciate your concern, Number One, but, I'm sure it will go quite smoothly. RIKER We have come a great distance for this mediator. PICARD They asked for the best and that person, from all reports, is Riva. The turbolift arrives. Riker and Picard step off. 7A INT. CORRIDOR as they walk along. RIKER I've never heard of him. PICARD I'm not surprised, he hasn't mediated for several decades. RIKER That's a long time to be out of the saddle. Let's hope he's not rusty. STAR TREK: "Loud as a Whisper" - 11/10/88 - TEASER 5. 7A CONTINUED: PICARD Yes, for all our sakes... let's hope Riva is at the top of his game. They turn and enter the Transporter Room. 8 INT. TRANSPORTER ROOM (OPTICAL) TROI and WORF are waiting. They step onto the platform. TRANSPORTER CHIEF Coordinates have been input. PICARD Very good, Lieutenant. Worry not, Number One -- this will be a simple ceremonial greeting, and right back to the Enterprise. RIKER I'm sure. PICARD Energize. And the away team -- with Picard as their leader -- VANISHES. 9 INT. RAMATIS - ANTEROOM (OPTICAL) as the away team STACKS UP. 10 ANOTHER ANGLE - INT. RAMATIS - ANTEROOM A handsome BOY greets the away team, and motions for them to follow him. 11 ANOTHER ANGLE as they reach a vestibule which leads to a larger room. The boy leads them toward a larger room. STAR TREK: "Loud as a Whisper" - 11/10/88 - TEASER 6. 12 INT. LARGER ROOM They enter. There is no one in the room. At the far end is a raised dais. The design of the room is geometric -- the decorations eclectic. As the away team looks around, they realize their young guide has disappeared and they are all alone: Off their reactions: FADE OUT. END OF TEASER STAR TREK: "Loud as a Whisper" - 11/10/88 - ACT ONE 7. ACT ONE FADE IN: 13 EXT. SPACE - THE ENTERPRISE (OPTICAL) in orbit around the planet Ramatis. 14 INT. MAIN BRIDGE Riker once again has the Command position. RIKER Captain, this is the Enterprise. PICARD'S COM VOICE We have arrived safely, Number One, and for the most part, we've been ignored... ah... 15 thru OMITTED 16 17 INT. RAMATIS - LARGER ROOM The away team in the larger room. PICARD ... some of the local citizenry are beginning to assemble. I'll keep you informed. RIKER'S COM VOICE I would appreciate it. 18 ANOTHER ANGLE - LARGER ROOM Slowly, without any apparent signal, HUMANOIDS begin to casually assemble. They enter the room from portals, scattered along the walls, talking quietly among themselves in an unrecognizable, and mostly unheard, language. 19 ANOTHER ANGLE There are three of them... each a distinctive personality and physical archetype -- the SCHOLAR/ARTIST, the WARRIOR/ADONIS, a CULTURED WOMAN. These "types" show no emotion, and if they are aware of the away team, they do not acknowledge them. STAR TREK: "Loud as a Whisper" - 11/10/88 - ACT ONE 8. 20 ANOTHER ANGLE a MAN enters from behind the away team. By his dress, his carriage and his presence he is someone in authority. This is RIVA -- he appears to be around thirty earth years, pleasant looking, with an open friendly countenance. 21 PICARD AND TROI as Riva passes them. He pauses, studying first Picard -- his appraisal is open, his gaze penetrating. Because of his vast experience in different and unusual situations, Picard has the wisdom to wait for Riva to make the first move. Riva then turns his attention on Worf, then to Troi, then leaves her with a warm flirtatious smile. TROI (she responds with a smile, and a nod) Riva. 22 ANOTHER ANGLE - ROOM Riva walks onto the dais, those he passes offer a greeting. WARRIOR/ADONIS eeennniYOO. It is obviously a term of respect as well as a greeting. Riva responds with a slight wave of his hand. TROI He is a well-liked leader. Their affection is genuine, as is his. PICARD Well, if they respect him on Solais, as much as they do here -- we could be looking forward to a successful mission. 23 ANOTHER ANGLE Riva takes his place on the dais, the CHORUS gathers in front of him. Riva pauses, comfortable -- relaxed -- very pleasant. His expression is bemused -- as though he is expecting good news. STAR TREK: "Loud as a Whisper" - 11/10/88 - ACT ONE 9. 23 CONTINUED: PICARD Counselor? TROI I've never seen anything like this before and I'm a little uncertain about how to proceed. (smiles) There is a wonderful feeling of well being, emanating from here. The man on the dais, makes a very slight motion -- (through all this the Chorus never turns to face Riva. Their method of communication we do not understand and will never understand. It is part of their long history.) WOMAN Please -- come closer. The away team takes a couple of steps closer. WOMAN (continuing) Before I start, is there anything you need? Refreshments, food. PICARD No. But thank you for asking. SCHOLAR/ARTIST Then -- (with a gesture to Picard) Proceed. Picard hesitates - then... PICARD Greetings from the United Federation of Planets. I am Captain Jean-Luc Picard, of the USS Enterprise. This is Counselor Troi, and Lieutenant Worf. Riva remains impassive. He again studies the away team. Then he makes a slight MOVE with HIS HANDS. And the Chorus SPEAKS. WARRIOR/ADONIS GREETINGS! STAR TREK: "Loud as a Whisper" - 11/10/88 - ACT ONE 10. 23 CONTINUED: (2) SCHOLAR/ARTIST Welcome to Ramatis. WOMAN I have been expecting you. The away team is surprised. The Warrior/Adonis member of the Chorus, takes a step closer to Troi, and gives her a blinding smile. WARRIOR/ADONIS You're empathic. TROI Yes. WARRIOR/ADONIS Then, although you already know my feelings toward you, allow me to put them into words. I am looking forward to this journey, now more than ever, because it gives me the chance to spend time in your company. Warrior/Adonis smiles, then all expression leaves his face. TROI (she speaks to Riva, not Warrior/Adonis) I am flattered. And I too, look forward to learning more about you. 24 PICARD He looks the Chorus over, then turns to Troi for advice. TROI (quietly to Picard) There's a very different kind of communication here, Captain. PICARD Yes, so I see. I think there are facets to Riva about which we were not informed. STAR TREK: "Loud as a Whisper" - 11/10/88 - ACT ONE 11. 24 CONTINUED: WOMAN Precisely. It is a process which has developed over the centuries and one I find quite harmonious. PICARD So Riva the famous mediator is... ? WARRIOR/ADONIS Deaf. (with great conviction) Born, and hope to die. PICARD (indicating Chorus) And you all speak for Riva? CHORUS Yes. SCHOLAR/ARTIST I not only convey his words, but his emotional intent as well. TROI The members of the Chorus, serve as "translators," and each represents the archetypes of man's personality. SCHOLAR/ARTIST I am the scholar. I represent the intellect. I speak in matters of judgment -- philosophy -- logic. Also, I am -- the dreamer. The part which longs to see the beauty beyond the truth which is always the first duty of art. I am the poet... Riva makes a slight movement and the Scholar/Artist -- shuts up and steps back. STAR TREK: "Loud as a Whisper" - 11/10/88 - ACT ONE 12. 24 CONTINUED: (2) WARRIOR/ADONIS Artists tend to ramble, they live too much in the future, they neglect the moment. I am Riva's libido. I am his passion. I am the anarchy of lust. The romantic -- the (with a little self-deprecating nod to Troi) ... lover. Also, I am as he. (indicates Worf) The definition of Riva's honor... the perfect line which never wavers. PICARD (to the Woman) And you... WOMAN I represent that part of Riva which binds all the others together. I am harmony -- wisdom -- balance. PICARD (to the Woman) Remarkable. How did this... Riva flashes anger. WARRIOR/ADONIS Speak to me! The away team is surprised by the outburst. Worf instinctively steps forward. PICARD What?! Again Riva gestures aggressively. WARRIOR/ADONIS Speak directly to me! TROI (so Riva cannot read her lips) He's prodding you to get a reaction. STAR TREK: "Loud as a Whisper" - 11/10/88 - ACT ONE 13. 24 CONTINUED: (3) PICARD (to Riva) The uniqueness of this presentation provoked my inadvertent breach in protocol. No insult was intended. SCHOLAR/ARTIST Then... none is perceived. PICARD I was curious about how this unique form of communication came about. WOMAN The gene for hearing is not present in our planet's ruling line. SCHOLAR/ARTIST Not that unusual, indeed it is similar to the English Tudor monarchs of your planet Earth, all who had hemophilia. Or the leaders of Fendaus Five, who were without limbs. WARRIOR/ADONIS Throughout time, many of the galaxy's greatest contributors have been similarly "special." PICARD (to Riva) Your ability to read lips -- is very impressive. WOMAN Thank you. PICARD Your "translators" do not see you, yet they are able to accurately convey your thoughts. STAR TREK: "Loud as a Whisper" - 11/10/88 - ACT ONE 14. 24 CONTINUED: (4) SCHOLAR/ARTIST My Chorus is so attuned -- they can "hear" my hands and translate to you. It is a relationship which has developed over centuries -- their ancestors provided the same service to my ancestors. TROI Your way of communication is most distinctive, Riva. The Warrior/Adonis shifts his place on the steps, closer to her. WARRIOR/ADONIS It takes a fine mind to appreciate that, Counselor Troi. TROI (indicates Warrior/Adonis) This part of you does not seem to speak very often. Riva's eyes dance in flirtation. WARRIOR/ADONIS Only when the spirit moves me. His gaze is intense, very male. Troi lowers her eyes. PICARD Riva -- if you are ready -- the situation at Solais Five is very critical. We should not delay. SCHOLAR/ARTIST I will prepare for departure immediately. PICARD Are you all -- I mean -- Riva, did you plan to take these people with you? WARRIOR/ADONIS (challenging) Is that a problem? STAR TREK: "Loud as a Whisper" - 11/10/88 - ACT ONE 15. 24 CONTINUED: (5) PICARD No, it's just that we didn't know you would all be coming. Riva descends the steps, toward Troi. WARRIOR/ADONIS (to Troi) How long will my journey to Solais take? TROI More than two of your days. WARRIOR/ADONIS (Riva comes up and beside them) Then, until duty calls, this will indeed be a pleasant trip. 25 ANOTHER ANGLE (OPTICAL) The away team, now including Riva and his Chorus, move slightly to the side. Worf touches his communicator. WORF With your permission, Captain. PICARD Make it so. WORF Enterprise, this is the away team, seven to beam up. Riva, the Chorus, and the away team BEAM UP to the Enterprise. FADE OUT. END OF ACT ONE STAR TREK: "Loud as a Whisper" - 11/10/88 - ACT TWO 16. ACT TWO FADE IN: 26 EXT. SPACE - THE ENTERPRISE (OPTICAL) in orbit around Ramatis. 27 INT. MAIN BRIDGE Riker has the Command Chair, Data is at Ops, Wesley has the Conn. PULASKI and GEORDI are also on the bridge. Riker is anxious to get underway, and relieved when he hears: TRANSPORTER CHIEF'S COM VOICE The away team, plus four, is on board. RIKER Acknowledged. Ensign, set your course for Solais Five. Wesley inputs the coordinates. WESLEY Course is set. RIKER Velocity -- warp eight. WESLEY Warp eight -- aye. RIKER Engage, Mister Crusher. WESLEY Yes, sir. 28 EXT. SPACE - THE ENTERPRISE (OPTICAL) stretches into warp. 29 ANOTHER ANGLE - MAIN BRIDGE The turbolift opens, Picard leads the others onto the bridge. Worf goes immediately to his position. Riker stands, ready to greet his guest. STAR TREK: "Loud as a Whisper" - 11/10/88 - ACT TWO 17. 30 ANGLE ON THE AWAY TEAM AND RIVA They enter, cross to Riker. Picard begins the introductions. PICARD Riva, may I present-- RIKER (indicating the Chorus) What's this? PICARD These three -- speak for Riva. Riker also reacts with surprise. RIKER You mean, the most respected negotiator in the Federation -- is deaf? Amazing. SCHCLAR/ARTIST (to Picard) First, Captain, let me say that it is an honor to be on board such a fine vessel. (continuing) Now... please continue with the introductions. PICARD This is my first officer, Commander Riker. SCHOLAR/ARTIST It is an honor to meet you. PICARD Lieutenant Commander Data. Riva looks Data up and down. Then smiles. SCHOLAR/ARTIST It is a pleasure to meet such a unique individual. DATA Thank you... Riva responds with a nod. STAR TREK: "Loud as a Whisper" - 11/10/88 - ACT TWO 18. 30 CONTINUED: PICARD And our chief medical officer, Katherine Pulaski. SCHOLAR/ARTIST Doctor. PICARD This is Lieutenant La Forge. GEORDI Pleased to meet you, sir. Riva touches his VISOR gently. WOMAN What is that you're wearing? GEORDI A VISOR. It modifies the electromagnetic spectrum and carries the readings to my brain. WOMAN And without it, can you see? GEORDI No. Without it I'm as blind as a post. WOMAN Your VISOR serves the same purpose as my Chorus, which "hears" my thoughts and translates them into sound. GEORDI Yes. SCHOLAR/ARTIST And you don't resent it? GEORDI The VISOR or being blind? SCHOLAR/ARTIST Either. STAR TREK: "Loud as a Whisper" - 11/10/88 - ACT TWO 19. 30 CONTINUED: (2) GEORDI They are both part of me, and since I like who I am, why would I resent either being blind or wearing the VISOR? SCHOLAR/ARTIST What is your position on this ship? GEORDI Engineering officer, sir. Riva feels a kinship with Geordi and it shows in his movements. He puts a friendly hand on Geordi's shoulder. WOMAN (to Geordi) It's a blessing to understand we are special... (then including everyone) ... each in his own way. GEORDI My feeling exactly. WOMAN Please call me Riva. GEORDI Okay. And you can call me Geordi. PICARD I will have you shown to you quarters, then at your convenience I have prepared a briefing on the Solari wars? I offer the hospitality of my ship during this journey. We will provide whatever is necessary to make you comfortable or to facilitate your mission. WOMAN Thank you. Riva turns to Troi. STAR TREK: "Loud as a Whisper" - 11/10/88 - ACT TWO 20. 30 CONTINUED: (3) WARRIOR/ADONIS Perhaps, if it is not inconvenient, Counselor Troi could escort me. (then to Picard) With your permission. Picard nods his approval. TROI This way. They watch as Troi, Riva and the Warrior/Adonis exit. RIKER What about you? WOMAN At times like this -- we become an encumbrance. SCHOLAR/ARTIST ... so if you have a room for us, we'll wait until Riva makes contact. PICARD Exactly how will he do that? WOMAN The headband that he wears -- it transmits his thoughts, and emotions to us. PICARD So that's how it work. SCHOLAR/ARTIST No magic -- just technology. PICARD Worf, could you provide an escort. Worf nods to an n.d. crewmember. The Woman and the Scholar/Artist, follow the crewmember to the turbolift. RIKER He's not what I expected. STAR TREK: "Loud as a Whisper" - 11/10/88 - ACT TWO 21. 30 CONTINUED: (4) PULASKI Perhaps being "special" is in part responsible for his success. He has a most disarming quality. He doesn't just ask questions to be polite -- he actually wants to hear the answers. 31 INT. GUEST QUARTERS (OPTICAL) The doors open and Troi ushers Riva and the Warrior/Adonis in. This should be very interesting -- the Warrior/Adonis does all the talking, but the eye contact -- the heat -- is totally and completely between Riva and Troi. The Warrior/Adonis is there... but his presence is not felt. WARRIOR/ADONIS Much of what we do is similar. TROI Yes -- I suppose in a way it is. WARRIOR/ADONIS We have both learned how to allow people to examine feelings hidden deep within their psyche. In fact, being here with you is provoking an emotional revelation. TROI (lightly) You mean something I am doing is uncovering an emotion buried in your psyche. WARRIOR/ADONIS Not that deep. TROI Oh, exactly what are you feeling? WARRIOR/ADONIS Can't you tell? TROI Some of it -- but... STAR TREK: "Loud as a Whisper" - 11/10/88 - ACT TWO 22. 31 CONTINUED: WARRIOR/ADONIS I feel that soon, perhaps after the briefing by your captain, you will be hungry, and perhaps we could dine together and compare... experiences. Troi smiles. TROI I would like that. WARRIOR/ADONIS As will I. They hold the look for a beat -- and the heat between them builds. TROI Will you... (meaning the translator) ... be with us? WARRIOR/ADONIS Until we find our own method of communication. TROI I look forward to that time. WARRIOR/ADONIS As do I. With a look Troi turns and exits. 32 INT. OBSERVATION LOUNGE (OPTICAL) The members of the Chorus should not be like bumps -- just standing there waiting for Riva to pull their string. They can move. The Warrior/Adonis can get a cup of Fagomerian Tea -- the Woman can be busy with her hands -- doing some twenty-fourth century needlepoint (she could appear disinterested in all of this talk of war). The Scholar/Artist can have a PADD and be working out some equation which is important only to him. Also it is important that the delivery NOT be too stylized or stilted. PICARD Commander Data, would you please update the situation. STAR TREK: "Loud as a Whisper" - 11/10/88 - ACT TWO 23. 32 CONTINUED: DATA The factions on Solais Five are historical enemies. So many have died that both societies are on the verge of extinction. WARRIOR/ADONIS Enough. Thank you, Captain, but there is no need to continue. The specific issues of the conflict have no relevance. RIKER So none of the background we have prepared would be helpful in understanding why they continue to fight? SCHOLAR/ARTIST The portfolio will indicate that the conflict is over a piece of land, or wealth, or some other tangible asset. But, we both know that is not the case. RIKER A war which has been fought for this long has become very personal. SCHOLAR/ARTIST Exactly. The basis for peace must also be personal. WARRIOR/ADONIS This is an historic confrontation. (to Data) Correct? DATA The factions have been at war for fifteen centuries. SCHOLAR/ARTIST What's changed? DATA I do not know what you mean. STAR TREK: "Loud as a Whisper" - 11/10/88 - ACT TWO 24. 32 CONTINUED: (2) SCHOLAR/ARTIST They have been killing each other for a long time, now they want to talk peace. So something about this situation has changed. What's the new piece to the puzzle? PICARD That piece of information could be very useful. Data. DATA Unknown. RIKER Perhaps they are running out of people to kill. In any case, for whatever reason -- peace is now preferred. That should make your job easier. SCHOLAR/ARTIST Well, if not easier, at least possible, because they are motivated. WARRIOR/ADONIS But it doesn't matter. I'll find something. I always do. PICARD Always? WARRIOR/ADONIS To date, I have never failed. Now, unless there is something else... PICARD No. This is for your benefit. The Woman puts away her "needlework," stands and speaks for the first time. WOMAN Then... thank you for your time and effort... if you'll excuse me... STAR TREK: "Loud as a Whisper" - 11/10/88 - ACT TWO 25. 32 CONTINUED: (3) WARRIOR/ADONIS I believe I have to get ready for a dinner appointment. PICARD Then, by all means, meeting is adjourned. As Riva and the others leave, Riker and Picard: RIKER Our mediator is very... (he pauses to pick the correct word) ... self assured. PICARD Cocky is the word I would have used. RIKER It's all right if he can deliver, and we'll know that soon enough. 33 EXT. SPACE - THE ENTERPRISE (OPTICAL) streaks along at warp speed. 34 INT. MAIN BRIDGE Picard sits in his Command Chair. Riker is beside him. Data is at Ops, Worf is at Tactical. WESLEY We are approaching Solais Five. RIKER Half impulse. WESLEY Slowing to one-half impulse. 35 EXT. SPACE - THE ENTERPRISE (OPTICAL) comes out of warp. STAR TREK: "Loud as a Whisper" - 11/10/88 - ACT TWO 26. 35A INT. GUEST QUARTERS Riva and Troi are sharing a meal. The Warrior/Adonis is off to one side out of Troi's line of vision. TROI We have arrived. WARRIOR/ADONIS Then we don't have much time. Troi agrees. TROI No. WARRIOR/ADONIS This has been very pleasant. TROI For me as well. I'm impressed, by how you deal with what some would consider a handicap. WARRIOR/ADONIS It's not a handicap at all. Unless you mean having me here. Troi glances from the Warrior/Adonis to Riva. TROI I did not mean that specifically, but, yes, I would consider you a disadvantage. With that the Warrior/Adonis gets to his feet and exits. Troi and Riva are now alone. For a beat they are quiet. TROI (continuing) How do we communicate? I can feel your emotions, but don't we need words? He signs something. TROI (continuing) I don't understand. STAR TREK: "Loud as a Whisper" - 11/10/88 - ACT TWO 27. 35A CONTINUED: He signs gracefully with his whole being, hands, eyes, body. Troi follows along. TROI (continuing) Is that dream? He crosses his fists over his heart. TROI (continuing) Love. She does the same, self-conscious with the intimate gesture. RIVA (signing) Stronger. Like you mean it. Repeats the motion, eyes never leaving hers. She echoes him, meeting his gaze. RIVA (continuing; signing) Butterfly. Troi makes the same gesture. TROI Is that a butterfly -- or is that desire? Together their hands fly in the air. They laugh like kids. Riva's hands float, alight on hers. 36 INT. MAIN BRIDGE (OPTICAL) On the viewscreen is the brown planet of Solais Five. RIKER Standard orbit. WORF Captain! STAR TREK: "Loud as a Whisper" - 11/10/88 - ACT TWO 28. 37 ANGLE ON WORF WORF I'm reading laser activity in the Solari Solar System! Riker jumps to his feet. Picard leans forward, intense. RIKER How concentrated is the activity? WORF It is localized -- and very intense. RIKER So much for the cease-fire. PICARD Open hailing frequencies. WORF I can establish voice only. PICARD This is Captain Jean-Luc Picard, commander of the Federation starship USS Enterprise. A CRACKLING VOICE is HEARD, but is unintelligible. PICARD (continuing) If you continue to violate the rules by breaking the cease-fire, I will abort this mission. A pause, then: FIRST LEADER'S COM VOICE You have no jurisdiction here, Picard. Where is Riva? PICARD Riva is in charge of the summit. I command the ship that brings him. I will not endanger my ship under any circumstances. SECOND LEADER'S COM VOICE Riva gave his word we would speak to no one else. Now who breaks the rules? Where is Riva? STAR TREK: "Loud as a Whisper" - 11/10/88 - ACT TWO 29. 37 CONTINUED: PICARD (formal) I shall summon him for you. Picard turns to Data. PICARD (continuing) Get Riva now! 37A INT. GUEST QUARTERS Riva and Troi are still enjoying each other's company. RIKER'S COM VOICE Counselor Troi. Have Riva report to the bridge immediately. TROI They need you on the bridge. Now! 38 INT. MAIN BRIDGE (OPTICAL) as Riva, his Chorus and Troi enter. Riva's confidence now carries a touch of arrogance. PICARD The cease-fire has been broken. Riva takes charge of the situation. SCHOLAR/ARTIST I'm sure I can resolve that. Put them on the viewscreen. He stands in front of the Main Viewer. PICARD On viewscreen. Distorted IMAGES of FIRST LEADER and SECOND LEADER appear on the viewscreen. WORF The quality of the transmission is very poor. SCHOLAR/ARTIST It is sufficient. STAR TREK: "Loud as a Whisper" - 11/10/88 - ACT TWO 30. 38 CONTINUED: He turns his attention to the viewscreen. The spotlight is on him, he clearly relishes his position and power. WARRIOR/ADONIS (stands right behind Riva) Brothers! Your bravery as fighters is known, now you must demonstrate your courage in a new way -- cease hostilities -- allow us to meet. There is a pause as everyone watches the staticky viewscreen, then: WORF The laser fire has ceased. RIKER But for how long -- these Solari don't seem likely candidates for peace. SCHOLAR/ARTIST (to Picard) I will need to see a topographical overlay of the battle area in order to pick a site for the meetings. Then I will need your help in creating the proper setting. PICARD We are here to provide whatever service is necessary. 39 PICARD, RIVA AND DATA - LATER They are back at Science One looking at a display of the planet surface. SCHOLAR/ARTIST There -- beam us down to that hilltop and inform the factions to join us. The time for killing has come to an end. STAR TREK: "Loud as a Whisper" - 11/10/88 - ACT TWO 31. 39 CONTINUED: Riva and his Chorus leave the bridge. FADE OUT. END OF ACT TWO STAR TREK: "Loud as a Whisper" - 11/10/88 - ACT THREE 32. ACT THREE FADE IN: 40 EXT. SPACE - THE ENTERPRISE (OPTICAL) in orbit around Solais Five. 41 INT. TRANSPORTER ROOM (OPTICAL) Riva is there with his Chorus -- Worf and Riker, both of whom are carrying phasers. RIKER Set phasers on stun. SCHOLAR/ARTIST You won't need those. RIKER I'm sure we won't. Worf and Riker check their weapons, then: RIKER (continuing) Energize. They BEAM OUT. 42 EXT. SOLARI PLANET - DUSK (OPTICAL) Riker, Worf, Riva, and his Chorus MATERIALIZE onto a flattened mountain top... which is the middle of the war zone. The area is battle scarred; devoid of any life or vegetation. Riva looks around the area. WARRIOR/ADONIS Yes. This will do. SCHOLAR/ARTIST It is important that we set this up properly. Riva moves to the middle of the flattened area. SCHOLAR/ARTIST Commander. If it be possible -- I would like torches -- there -- there - there -- and there. STAR TREK: "Loud as a Whisper" - 11/10/88 - ACT THREE 33. 42 CONTINUED: RIKER (touches his communicator) Engineering, this is the away team. 42A INT. MAIN ENGINEERING Geordi has been waiting for this call. GEORDI Yes, Commander. RIKER'S COM VOICE We are going to need your help. GEORDI Yes, I thought you might. 42B EXT. PLANET As before. RIKER We are going to need torches -- head high. (to Riva) ... and what else? WARRIOR/ADONIS I would like a table and chairs -- (he points) ... right here. RIKER Describe it. WARRIOR/ADONIS Round, about three meters in diameter, and if possible made out of indigenous rock. RIKER Did you copy that, Geordi? 43 INT. MAIN ENGINEERING As before. STAR TREK: "Loud as a Whisper" - 11/10/88 - ACT THREE 34. 43 CONTINUED: GEORDI I did. There should be no problem replicating a table like that. I have the coordinates -- I'll send down the torches, and get right on the table. 44 EXT. MOUNTAIN TOP (OPTICAL) Riva is very relaxed. His confidence is high. He continues his survey of the area. RIKER How long before the emissaries arrive? SCHOLAR/ARTIST It shouldn't be too long. Off to the side, four torches MATERIALIZE. The Warrior/Adonis and Worf move to set them up. 44A ANGLE WORF as he plants one of the torches in the ground and looks out over the battle-scarred land. He scans the horizon. Riker comes up behind him. WORF They are coming. 44B SCENE The Warrior/Adonis and Worf light up the torches. Riva has moved to the center of the flattened area. RIKER How long will it take for these negotiations? Riva has to chuckle. SCHOLAR/ARTIST From that question, you must think they will go quickly. STAR TREK: "Loud as a Whisper" - 11/10/88 - ACT THREE 35. 44B CONTINUED: RIKER Actually, until this moment I never thought much about it at all. Before Riva can answer. WORF Commander. Riker turns. Worf indicates the imminent arrival of one GROUP of SOLDIERS. SCHOLAR/ARTIST (to Worf and Riker) The first few minutes will be very tense. Please... (the Scholar/Artist turns and gives Riva a puzzled look, almost like they have a bad phone connection, then turns back and continues) ... ah... stay calm, and do not respond even if you are provoked. RIKER (with a glance at Worf, who can be provoked by an ambiguous greeting) We will do our best. 45 SCENE The first group of soldiers appear. They are fearsome looking. They come up the rise and pause. One -- the leader -- holds his position while the other two ease off to either side. FIRST LEADER Who is Riva? Riva moves forward. He is the picture of confidence, calm, assurance. WOMAN I am Riva. STAR TREK: "Loud as a Whisper" - 11/10/88 - ACT THREE 36. 45 CONTINUED: Before the introduction can be completed, the other COMBATANTS appear. They enter even more cautiously than the first. They have already spread out. Their weapons are down but at-the-ready. The second leader edges forward. 46 WORF Has his hand on his phaser -- ready to take control of the situation. 47 RIVA He looks at each leader and nods a welcome. 48 LEADER ONE He gives Riva a sideways look. His eyes never leave the other warrior. 49 LEADER TWO For him it is the same. 50 SCENE Riker and Worf are on their guard. This is a very tense situation. The opposing groups eye each other like the natural enemies they are. Each expects the other to break the truce. WOMAN Be at ease. I commend you both. To come here shows not only courage, but wisdom. Please -- give this conference a chance. SCHOLAR/ARTIST (to the leaders) I have no magic. You have been fighting all your lives. You know only... Suddenly the Scholar/Artist stops. His face turns to a mask of confusion. He turns to look at Riva. STAR TREK: "Loud as a Whisper" - 11/10/88 - ACT THREE 37. 51 RIVA He is stunned. Something is wrong -- something is very wrong! 52 SCENE The soldiers, feeling the sudden increase in tension -- react instinctively. RIKER Riva -- what is it? FIRST LEADER This is a trap. The soldiers dash to positions of cover. Worf draws his phaser and prepares to defend them. RIKER (without hesitation) Enterprise -- beam us up. Now! 53 ANOTHER ANGLE (OPTICAL) As the away team -- Riva and his Chorus are BEAMED back onto the Enterprise. 54 EXT. SPACE - THE ENTERPRISE (OPTICAL) in orbit around the planet. PICARD (V.O.) Captain's log. 55 INT. OBSERVATION LOUNGE Picard, and his staff are there with Riva. Picard has in his hands the "device" which Riva has been wearing. PICARD So... communication between Riva and his Chorus was aided by this device. Without it... TROI Without it, he is mute. Picard turns it over in his hands. STAR TREK: "Loud as a Whisper" - 11/10/88 - ACT THREE 38. 55 CONTINUED: PICARD (to Riva) Can you fix it? He shakes his head, "no." PICARD (continuing) Can it be fixed? Riva motions frantically, "I don't know." The possibility frightens the hell out of him. 56 ANGLE ON TROI She crosses to them, speaks softly to the captain. TROI We must calm him. PICARD Lieutenant La Forge. See what you can learn about this. If it's possible to repair it, I need to know. Geordi takes the "device." GEORDI Right away. Picard follows Geordi out the door. 56A INT. CAPTAIN'S READY ROOM Picard is there with the Chorus. They have lost their sense of purpose. SCHOLAR/ARTIST This is astounding. Nothing like this has ever happened. PICARD I need your help. WARRIOR/ADONIS But what can we do? It's Riva... STAR TREK: "Loud as a Whisper" - 11/10/88 - ACT THREE 39. 56A CONTINUED: SCHOLAR/ARTIST We don't know anything. We just say what he tells us. PICARD We need to communicate with him. They have no answers. PICARD (continuing) Surely you know sign language. SCHOLAR/ARTIST No. WARRIOR/ADONIS We've never needed it. PICARD And he neither reads nor writes. WOMAN He's never had to. SCHOLAR/ARTIST Riva knows sign language. He learned it on a mission to the Plaeties system. The parties there were so paranoid they would not allow us to accompany him. WOMAN Captain -- what's going to happen? I feel so strange. I've never been without him before... never. I feel like I'm losing my mind. PICARD You'll be all right. Stay here. I'll send someone to look after you. Please... try to stay calm. Picard exits. For a beat we HOLD on these poor lost souls. 57 INT. OBSERVATION LOUNGE As before. STAR TREK: "Loud as a Whisper" - 11/10/88 - ACT THREE 40. 57 CONTINUED: PULASKI Deafness for all intents and purposes has been eliminated except for a few isolated situations like this. If I can help you medically -- will you allow it? Riva stares at her for a moment. Picard enters. This is not an easy decision. Then, probably with his duties on his mind, he nods "yes." PICARD Riva knows sign language. Riva nods. DATA Captain. There are just in the Federation, eighty-one different variations of signing. PICARD (to Data) Find a way to communicate with him. (to Worf) Take him to Sickbay. Doctor do what you can. The Klingon helps Riva to his feet. Picard sees the panic in his face, tries to reassure him. PICARD (continuing) You are not alone. We will solve this together. He seems small and fragile as Worf leads him away. PICARD (continuing) If Riva does not mediate this summit successfully, the Solari will destroy each other. RIKER But if he can't speak, and can't use his Chorus, he's useless. Captain, you should mediate. STAR TREK: "Loud as a Whisper" - 11/10/88 - ACT THREE 41. 57 CONTINUED: (2) PICARD It is not me they want. They believe in Riva. The problem is, he no longer believes in himself. Picard gets up, crosses to the door. PICARD (continuing) Keep me posted of Riva's progress. I'll be in my quarters. RIKER Yes sir. PICARD We have to find a way to talk to him. Picard exits. Off Riker's reaction: FADE OUT. END OF ACT THREE STAR TREK: "Loud as a Whisper" - 11/10/88 - ACT FOUR 42. ACT FOUR FADE IN: 58 EXT. SPACE - THE ENTERPRISE (OPTICAL) in orbit around Solais Five. PICARD (V.O.) Captain's log, Stardate 42111.8. We are monitoring increased military activity on Solais Five. I fear that we will be unable to keep the Solari from destroying themselves without Riva and still he is silent. 59 INT. MAIN BRIDGE - AT SCIENCE ONE (OPTICAL) Data is at a computer terminal running programs which depict various forms of signing. Riker comes up behind him. RIKER How's it going? DATA I have eliminated all but five distinct forms of signing. I will learn them all. 60 ANGLE ON DATA (OPTICAL) Eyes on the computer. DATA Computer. Show me gestural language -- designation M-nine. As information appears on the screen, Data signs, hands moving slowly. His hands move slowly as he get the hang of it. Worf steps over to watch. WORF Interesting. A technique of communication which is both silent and covert. It could be very useful. STAR TREK: "Loud as a Whisper" - 11/10/88 - ACT FOUR 43. 60 CONTINUED: Data reads the computer screen and carries on a conversation at the same time. DATA As a language -- the use of gestures and hand signals pre-dates the spoken word in most cultures. The major exception being the Leyrons of Malkus Nine who actually developed a written language first. Worf grunts. While, Data focuses on the computer, phenomenal memory absorbing it all. DATA (continuing) Computer - continue presentation. The display on the CRT changes. DATA (continuing) Increase. The information speeds up. So do Data's hands. DATA (continuing) Increase. Everything moves faster. DATA (continuing) Increase. And faster. DATA (continuing) Increase. The screen's a blur. Data's hands are flying. Off Worf's reaction: 61 INT. SICKBAY Troi watches Pulaski put Riva through a series of tests. STAR TREK: "Loud as a Whisper" - 11/10/88 - ACT FOUR 44. 61 CONTINUED: TROI He's very frightened. All his life he's been in control. For once, he doesn't have the answers. As Pulaski shakes her head. PULASKI Since Riva has never had hearing, his brain cannot accept auditory information. TROI Which means? PULASKI There is no immediate medical solution available. Riva watches Pulaski, despair on his face. TROI (to Riva) Let's see how Geordi is coming. 62 INT. MAIN ENGINEERING - ANGLE ON GEORDI carefully trying to disassemble the device as Troi and Riva enter. GEORDI I've never seen anything like this before. It transmits Beta waves, but I can't figure exactly how. I wish I had thought to run a test while it was still functioning. TROI (to Riva) Can you help? Riva makes a powerless gesture: "How?" GEORDI If he could tell me anything, anything at all. Riva shakes his head, it won't work. Buries his face in his hands. The anguish of not being understood. STAR TREK: "Loud as a Whisper" - 11/10/88 - ACT FOUR 45. 62 CONTINUED: GEORDI (continuing) Well, I'll continue to work on it. Then responding to Riva's anguish. GEORDI (continuing) I know what you must be going through. I can imagine what it would be like to lose my VISOR. But... we'll find something. Don't give up. Troi cocks her head, reading Riva, it makes her sad. TROI Too late. I think he already has. No interpretation necessary for the sign Riva makes. He has given up. 63 INT. CAPTAIN'S READY ROOM The CHIME SOUNDS. PICARD Come. Troi enters. PICARD How is our mediator? TROI The same. Unreachable. Picard's face is etched with concern. PICARD What can we do to help him? TROI I can't do anything. It's up to him. Confidence is faith in oneself, it can't be given by another. Picard takes a long moment to absorb this, then nods. STAR TREK: "Loud as a Whisper" - 11/10/88 - ACT FOUR 46. 63 CONTINUED: PICARD You're right, of course. Troi leans across the table, puts her hand over his. The CHIME SOUNDS again. PICARD (continuing) Come. Data enters. DATA Captain, I have reviewed and stored five distinct signing languages. 64 ANGLE ON DATA He turns to demonstrate his new ability. DATA This is blue. This is a blue ocean. This is a blue ocean at sunset. This is two people walking along the beach by a blue ocean at sunset. This is two happy people in love walking along the beach by a blue ocean at sunset. This is -- He'd go on forever if someone didn't say -- PICARD Enough! (beat) Let's talk to Riva. 65 INT. OBSERVATION LOUNGE Picard, Data, Troi, and Riva. PICARD Good news. Data has learned your language. He can translate for you at the summit. Data repeats Riva's signed reply. STAR TREK: "Loud as a Whisper" - 11/10/88 - ACT FOUR 47. 65 CONTINUED: DATA (translating) It will not work. I need my words. Riva responds sharply. DATA (continuing; translating) There -- that is what I mean. Your translation is literal. You say words. I do not need just words -- I need nuance, and subtlety... the shadings my Chorus enable me to communicate. PICARD But your ability is unchanged. All that's different is the method of transmission. Riva's body language says it all. DATA (translating) No! I cannot! Troi situates herself behind Picard. TROI (softly) It's not working. Go another direction. Picard's expression changes. Body language becomes forceful, angry. PICARD Data can understand you. Use him as your Chorus. Let him express your words. DATA (translating) No -- it is not the same thing. Data is unacceptable... PICARD You've got to take advantage of what you've got... STAR TREK: "Loud as a Whisper" - 11/10/88 - ACT FOUR 48. 65 CONTINUED: (2) Riva looks at him for a moment. DATA (translating) What I have got. I have got nothing. Do you not understand - I cannot do it. PICARD You're right. Maybe you are all show. Riva's eyes flash in anger. PICARD (continuing) You hide behind your Chorus. (in his face) You're a fake. 66 CLOSER ON PICARD AND RIVA Riva takes a threatening step towards Picard. Catches himself, signs with a smirk. DATA (translating) You are attempting to provoke me. Picard nods, hopeful. DATA (continuing; translating) It is not going to work. 67 ANGLE ON PICARD Disappointed. PICARD That's too bad. A lot of people are going to die. 68 ANGLE ON RIVA in complete turmoil. Bolts from the room. STAR TREK: "Loud as a Whisper" - 11/10/88 - ACT FOUR 49. 69 PICARD He pauses for a moment. Then gets up: PICARD Data. The android rises, then he and Picard exit in pursuit of Riva. 70 INT. GUEST QUARTERS Picard finds Riva. He gently touches Riva's shoulder. Riva turns -- he tries weakly to smile. PICARD We will return you to Ramatis. Riva nods -- resigned -- very disappointed. PICARD (continuing) ... but, first I am going to attempt to settle the conflict on Solais. Riva signs -- Data interprets: DATA (translating) You. PICARD We have come this far -- it would be difficult for me personally to leave without making the attempt. DATA (translating) It could be dangerous. Picard nods. PICARD Help me. Throughout this exchange, Riva's mood will begin to lighten. As he communicates with Picard, the very act of self-expression slowly restores his self-esteem. STAR TREK: "Loud as a Whisper" - 11/10/88 - ACT FOUR 50. 70 CONTINUED: DATA (translating) How? Picard is driving this in a specific direction. PICARD We all earn our reputations. Yours is that of a very successful negotiator -- a mediator. DATA (translating) And you want to know the trick. PICARD If there is one - yes. DATA (translating) Captain, there is no secret. What I do is help one person -- one group -- express themselves to the other. PICARD Simple enough to say - difficult to accomplish. DATA (translating) The real trick is getting them to listen. To understand. To turn a disadvantage to an advantage. PICARD Then why can't you turn your disadvantage into an advantage? Riva studies Picard for a long moment. Then a smile comes to his face. DATA (translating) That is an interesting thought... (to Picard) I do not understand -- what thought is he referring to? Riva stands. He reaches out and shakes Picard's hand. STAR TREK: "Loud as a Whisper" - 11/10/88 - ACT FOUR 51. 70 CONTINUED: (2) DATA (continuing, translating) Thank you. PICARD I will contact those down on the planet. Tell them to prepare to begin discussions immediately. Off Data's reaction: FADE OUT. END OF ACT FOUR STAR TREK: "Loud as a Whisper" - 11/10/88 - ACT FIVE 52. ACT FIVE FADE IN: 71 EXT. SPACE - THE ENTERPRISE (OPTICAL) in orbit around Solais Five. 72 INT. TRANSPORTER ROOM (OPTICAL) Riva is there with Picard and Data, both of whom are carrying phasers. PICARD Set phasers on stun. Data and Picard check their weapons, then: PICARD (continuing) Energize. They BEAM OUT. 73 EXT. SOLARI PLANET (OPTICAL) Picard, Riva, and Data MATERIALIZE onto the flattened mountain top... Riva will sign and Data will interpret. Data does not have to sign because Riva, after all, can read lips. Riva looks around the area, then signs to Data. DATA (speaking for Riva) Could you relight the torches, to let them know that I am back. 73A PICARD He moves to the nearest torch and relights it. Then gazes for a moment out over the battlefield. 73B SCENE Data has lighted another of the torches and is walking toward the third. Riva moves to the middle of the flattened area. STAR TREK: "Loud as a Whisper" - 11/10/88 - ACT FIVE 53. 73B CONTINUED: DATA (continuing to speak for Riva) I would like the table right here. PICARD (to Data) Make it so. DATA (touching his communicator) Main Engineering, this is Commander Data. 74 INT. MAIN ENGINEERING - ANGLE ON GEORDI GEORDI Go ahead, Data. DATA'S COM VOICE You can beam the table down now. 75 EXT. MOUNTAIN TOP (OPTICAL) Riva is very relaxed. His confidence is back. PICARD It could be a while before the emissaries arrive. They will be more cautious after the last incident. DATA (speaking for Riva) You can leave whenever you choose. I will get a message out when I am ready to leave. (to Picard as Data) Captain -- I do not understand what is going on here? Without his interpreters, how can he mediate? The table MATERIALIZES while they talk. PICARD Riva is going to teach them sign language. Riva steps forward. STAR TREK: "Loud as a Whisper" - 11/10/88 - ACT FIVE 54. 75 CONTINUED: DATA (speaking for Riva) Yes -- it is turning a disadvantage into an advantage. Learning how to sign will actually become part of the process of them learning how to live together in peace. PICARD As they learn how to communicate with Riva, they will be learning to communicate with each other. DATA (speaking for Riva) ... and that is the first and most important step in any relationship. (to Picard as Data) Captain, although it took me only moments to learn sign language, it will take them months. PICARD Time well spent. DATA (speaking for Riva) These people have been fighting all their lives, they know only hatred, suspicion, fear. Even with my Chorus -- I could not have changed those attitudes in a day. We have a chance, and they want the talks to be successful or they would not have called me. Riva steps over to the table and sits down. 75A PICARD AND DATA (OPTICAL) They move off to the side. PICARD Enterprise -- two to beam up. (to Riva) Good luck. DATA (translating for Riva) And to you. STAR TREK: "Loud as a Whisper" - 11/10/88 - ACT FIVE 55. 75A CONTINUED: Picard and Data DISAPPEAR in the TRANSPORTER BEAM. Leaving Riva all alone on the empty mountain top - waiting. 76 EXT. SPACE - THE ENTERPRISE (OPTICAL) in orbit around Solais Five. PICARD (V.O.) Captain's log, Stardate 42111.8. Personal comment. I am confident that Riva can help the Solari achieve a lasting peace. We will deliver his Chorus to Starbase Seven-One-Three so they can be returned to Ramatis. 77 INT. MAIN BRIDGE Riker has the Command Chair -- Picard is not on the bridge. RIKER Take us out of orbit. 78 OMITTED 78A EXT. SPACE - THE ENTERPRISE (OPTICAL) leaving orbit. 79 INT. CAPTAIN'S READY ROOM The CHIME SOUNDS. PICARD Come. Geordi enters. GEORDI Sir? PICARD Yes, Mister La Forge, something on your mind? STAR TREK: "Loud as a Whisper" - 11/10/88 - ACT FIVE 56. 79 CONTINUED: Being Geordi, he gets right to the point. GEORDI Sir, I know my VISOR gives me a unique way of seeing that's valuable to the ship, but if something happened and I didn't have it -- PICARD What makes you unique isn't your blindness or your VISOR -- (searching for the words) To be special we don't need to do a damned thing. Just be what we are. (beat) There's only one Geordi La Forge. And I wouldn't want to run my ship without him. A big grin spreads across Geordi's face. GEORDI All right! (more controlled) I mean, thank you sir. PICARD Dismissed. Picard watches with a bemused, paternal expression as Geordi exits. 80 OMITTED 81 INT. SICKBAY Geordi's in the examining chair. PULASKI Optic nerve laser welding. A difficult operation. It might not work. But if it did, it would open up a whole world for you. STAR TREK: "Loud as a Whisper" - 11/10/88 - ACT FIVE 57. 82 CLOSE ON GEORDI He takes off his VISOR. Eyes exposed, face full of fear and hope. GEORDI I'll think about it. 83 INT. MAIN BRIDGE The bridge crew in their positions. Business as usual. RIKER Set course, two-two-four, mark, three-nine. WORF What is our destination? PICARD Alpha Delta Beta. A routine transport mission. DATA I thought this was supposed to be a routine transport mission. Out of the mouths of babes. Picard and Riker exchange a knowing smile. PICARD Engage! 84 EXT. SPACE - THE ENTERPRISE (OPTICAL) moving away to another adventure. FADE OUT. END OF ACT FIVE THE END STAR TREK: THE NEXT GENERATION "Unnatural Selection" #40272-133 Written by Mike Gray and John Mason Directed by Paul Lynch THE WRITING CREDITS MAY NOT BE FINAL AND SHOULD NOT BE USED FOR PUBLICITY OR ADVERTISING PURPOSES WITHOUT FIRST CHECKING WITH THE TELEVISION LEGAL DEPARTMENT. Copyright 1988 Paramount Pictures Corporation. All Rights Reserved. This script is not for publication or reproduction. No one is authorized to dispose of same. If lost or destroyed, please notify the Script Department. FINAL DRAFT NOVEMBER 10, 1988 STAR TREK: "Unnatural Selection" - DRAFT 11/10/88 CAST STAR TREK: THE NEXT GENERATION "Unnatural Selection" CAST PICARD RINA RIKER DR. SARA MANDEL GEORDI CAPTAIN TAGGERT PULASKI CREWMEMBER WESLEY TRANSPORTER OPERATOR TROI MEDIC DATA WORF Non-Speaking Voice-Over USS ENTERPRISE COM PANEL/COMPUTER VOICE 2 CREWMEMBERS TRANSPORTER COM VOICE USS LANTREE CREWMEMBER (DEAD) CAPTAIN TELAKA (DEAD) 2 TWENTY-YEAR OLD "CHILDREN" STAR TREK: "Unnatural Selection" - DRAFT 11/10/88 - SETS STAR TREK: THE NEXT GENERATION "Unnatural Selection" SETS INTERIORS EXTERIORS USS ENTERPRISE USS ENTERPRISE BRIDGE CAPTAIN'S QUARTERS USS LANTREE TEN FORWARD MAIN ENGINEERING DARWIN RESEARCH STATION ENGINEERING CONTROL ROOM TRANSPORTER ROOM CORRIDOR SICKBAY SICKBAY SCIENCE LAB CONFERENCE ROOM TROI'S OFFICE OBSERVATION LOUNGE CAPTAIN'S READY ROOM SHUTTLE BAY SHUTTLE BAY CONTROL ROOM SHUTTLECRAFT PULASKI'S QUARTERS TURBOLIFT USS LANTREE BRIDGE CORRIDOR SICKBAY CAPTAIN'S QUARTERS DARWIN STATION/LABORATORY BUILDING ISOLATION LAB/OBSERVATION AREA ISOLATION CHAMBER STAR TREK: THE NEXT GENERATION "Unnatural Selection" TEASER FADE IN: EXT. DEEP SPACE (OPTICAL) The USS ENTERPRISE moves through the galaxy at warp speed. PICARD (V.O.) Captain's log, Stardate 42303.7. The Enterprise is bound for Star Station India to rendezvous with a Starfleet courier. INT. ENTERPRISE - BRIDGE The lights on the bridge are down, with only the OPS and CONN stations illuminated. An n.d. crew goes quietly about it's business. NOTE: THIS DIALOGUE HAS TO BE REWRITTEN: PICARD (V.O.) Hopefully the mission will provide an opportunity to evaluate our newest staff officer... INT. CAPTAIN'S QUARTERS A pensive CAPTAIN JEAN-LUC PICARD paces restlessly, pausing in front of the antique brass ship's barometer mounted on the bulkhead. PICARD (V.O.) In the short time she's been aboard, Doctor Pulaski has distinguished herself as a meticulous and competent physician. But can someone so focused on her own specialty also assume the broader duties of the ship's Chief Medical Officer? CONTINUED: Absently, Picard raps the barometer's face plate with his knuckle. Surprisingly, the needle moves -- pointing to "STORMY." INT. TEN-FORWARD COMMANDER RIKER, GEORDI and several male crewmembers from Engineering are seated around a table near the bow ports. The center of attention is clearly the new Specialist Trainee, RINA, an arrestingly beautiful young woman. RINA ... warp drive theory always came easy for me, but I'm looking forward to some hands on experience. RIKER I'm sure we'll be able to accommodate you. Rina is well aware that Riker is flirting with her, but she's not flattered. She concentrates on finishing her drink. Geordi, on the other hand, seems oblivious to the tension. GEORDI I know what you mean. It's a really electrifying experience to be down there where the action is. Whenever I push the drive past warp six I still get a lump in my throat. Riker takes Rina's empty glass from her hand. RIKER (standing) Can I get you another? RINA Tell me Commander. Is it the custom on the Enterprise for the First Officer to wait on trainees? CONTINUED: RIKER (smiling) If they were all like you, I'm certain it would be. GEORDI (to Rina) What's it like these days at the academy? Is Tsiolkovski still teaching Propulsion Theory? RINA Are you kidding? They'll have to tear down the building around him. The first time I saw him... MOVE WITH RIKER as he heads for the bar carrying two empty glasses. He slides them across the bar to an n.d. bartender. RIKER Same again. In the b.g. we see DOCTOR KATHERINE PULASKI leave her table and approach Riker. PULASKI Good to see you, Commander. When you missed your test this morning we all feared the worst. RIKER (turning) My apologies, Doctor. A minor crisis... (beat) in Engineering. PULASKI (not buying it) You know, a Rheinman tissue sample sounds a good deal worse than it is. I can assure you there's no discomfort involved. RIKER It's not that! It's just... my duties are so diverse. (beat) Suppose we leave the appointment open? CONTINUED: (2) PULASKI Spontaneity is the sand in the clockworks of science. RIKER But it's just an unimportant detail... A raised eyebrow from Pulaski tells Riker this is a dead-end. PULASKI If I didn't consider it important I wouldn't insist. Don't force me to relieve you of duty to make my point. RIKER You can't be -- (beat) I'll work something out. But my schedule is tight for the next three or four days... PULASKI (smiles) So I see. They both glance toward the table where Rina and Geordi are still in conversation. BEYOND THE PORTS the stars streak toward us at warp speed. Rina has a clear view. RINA Beautiful, isn't it? GEORDI'S POV -- He "sees" the ship's navigational shield as a gossamer scrim of shimmering color, and beyond, countless waves of energy bursting from exploding suns. GEORDI The most beautiful thing I know. ON RINA as she turns to face him. She's not used to hearing men talk like this. INT. CAPTAIN'S QUARTERS Picard stands in the darkness, his face bathed in starlight. He's staring out the port at the same view that facinates Rina. A CHIME SOUNDS. PICARD (to com panel) Picard. COM PANEL VOICE (V.O.) Captain, this is the bridge. We're receiving a distress signal on an open sub-space frequency. PICARD (to com panel) Sound emergency stations, and respond on the same frequency. Picard rushes for the door. EXT. SPACE - THE ENTERPRISE (OPTICAL) The great ship sweeps past at warp speed. INT. BRIDGE ENSIGN WESLEY CRUSHER emerges from the turbolift adjusting his uniform and rubbing the sleep from his eyes. WE FOLLOW as he stops at the food slct, grabs a cup of tea, and moves to replace the n.d. crewmember at the CONN. PULASKI (O.S.) (from com panel) Sickbay on full emergency status, Captain. Picard is on his feet with Riker and COUNSELOR TROI next to him. COMMANDER DATA is at the OPS station and WORF is at TACTICAL. PICARD Stand by, Doctor. Commander Data. Have we locked on to the signal yet? CONTINUED: DATA Yes, sir. A voice only transmission from the USS Lantree, a Federation supply ship. PICARD (to viewscreen) Lantree, this is Jean-Luc Picard of the USS Enterprise. What is the nature of your emergency? A long beat of silence as they wait anxiously for a response. VOICE (V.O.) (from viewscreen) -- can't hold out any -- dying -- too many -- help ... (silence) Riker and Worf glance at each other. DATA Sir, we are still recieving their signal. There is simply no message. CLOSE ON Picard's worried expression. PICARD (to viewer) Lantree! Are you under attack? FADE OUT: ACT ONE FADE IN: EXT. ENTERPRISE (OPTICAL) Underway at warp speed. INT. BRIDGE Picard and the others are at their stations. PICARD (to com panel) USS Lantree, this is the Enterprise, come in, Lantree. Nothing. PICARD Replay that last transmission. The Lantree's last desperate call is replayed. VOICE (V. O.) (from viewscreen) -- can't hold out any -- dying -- too many -- help ... (silence) PICARD (CONT.) (to Troi) Counselor? TROI Great stress is all I'm able to sense. RIKER Have we got a fix on her? DATA Two point two milli-parsecs, bearing three-zero at one-four- five degrees. PICARD (to Riker) Number One? CONTINUED: RIKER We better take a look. (to Data) What vessel is it? Data accesses the computer. DATA USS Lantree, a class R Starfleet supply ship assigned to Gamma seven seven, Captain L.I. Taleka commanding. Normal complement, twenty-six officers and crew. RIKER Armed? DATA Class three defensive only. RIKER Is she still underway? DATA Indeed. She is at maximum speed. Picard and Riker glance at each other. PICARD Alter course to intercept. WESLEY (enters course) Course to intercept. RIKER Execute. (to Worf) Let's go to Yellow Alert. WORF Yellow Alert, sir. The KLAXONS SOUND. RIKER Engineering? INT. ENGINEERING KLAXONS continue as the crew moves to alert stations. CONTINUED: GEORDI Engineering. Geordi replaces an n.d. crewmember at the command console. RIKER (V.O.) (from com panel) Give us maximum warp. GEORDI Maximum warp, sir. (to crew) Let's show 'em what we've got. The crew springs to action. Rina is electrified. GEORDI (CONT.) (to Rina) Go to the backpanels and give me a direct reading of the dilithium temperature spread. INT. ENGINE ROOM Rina enters... And up on the catwalk, one of the crewmember is distracted by her; he trips, and tumbles over the railing onto the main deck. The automatic ALARM SOUNDS. Rina and several others rush to the man's aid. His leg is broken. Geordi runs in. GEORDI What happened? CREWMEMBER My fault, sir. Missed the turn. Geordi looks up at the catwalk, then down at the crewmember. Then he looks at Rina. GEORDI (pained) Ensign... maybe you better stay in the control room. Rina recoils as if she'd been slapped. But she says nothing. Wounded, she gets to her feet and exits. EXT. ENTERPRISE (OPTICAL) In the distance is the USS Lantree, underway at warp speed. The Enterprise is closing on her slowly. INT. ENTERPRISE - BRIDGE The bridge crew is at stations. On the viewscreen is the Lantree. PICARD Open hailing frequencies. WORF Hailing frequencies open. PICARD Lantree, this is the Enterprise. No response. PICARD (CONT.) Captain Telaka, this is Picard, USS Enterprise. Do you read me? Only the EMPTY WHISTLING TONE of the Lantree's carrier signal answers. The bridge crew is uneasy. DATA No life signs, Captain. PICARD Nothing? DATA Nothing, sir. WORF This could be an ambush. RIKER Force fields up. Arm photon torpedoes. WORF Force fields up. CREWMEMBER Torpedoes armed and ready. RIKER Red alert. The KLAXONS SOUND. CONTINUED: RIKER (cont.) What else have we got in the neighborhood? WESLEY No other vessels of any kind within two parsecs. The Lantree is now larger in the viewscreen. PICARD No battle damage. DATA All systems seem functional, Captain. Everything is in perfect order. PICARD And no life signs. DATA No life signs. Picard turns to Riker. PICARD We're going to have to board her, Will. EXT. SPACE The Enterprise and the much smaller Lantree streak along together at warp speed. INT. ENGINEERING Riker talks to Geordi. Rina is here as well. RIKER The only way we can wind up in the same starfield is if you bring us out of warp speed at precisely the same instant as the Lantree. GEORDI First I have to get control of the her engines. Very tricky. CONTINUED: RIKER That's why we gave you the job. (friendly pat) Let me know as soon as you're set. GEORDI Will I be on the away team? RIKER (aware of Rina) Too dangerous for a valuable man like you. (smiles) Fortunately, first officers are expendable. He starts out, then turns to Rina. RIKER (cont.) Just in case we don't make it back... (kisses her hand) It was a pleasure. He exits. Geordi turns to the crew. GEORDI I'll man the bridge station. Our first problem is to gain control of the Lantree's drives. (to Rina) Come on. You'll get a chance to see what the bridge is like on alert. Her eyes widen. INT. BRIDGE The first team is on the bridge as Geordi enters, followed by Rina. GEORDI Ready to give it a try, Captain. Geordi sits at the console with Rina watching over his shoulder. CONTINUED: GEORDI First we have to download the Starfleet access codes for the Lantree... (punches buttons) Not even Picard is immune to Rina's beauty. PICARD (smiling) Ensign? Rina is flattered at being noticed by the captain, but she's still trying to keep an eye on what Geordi is doing. RINA Yes, sir. PICARD Perhaps you'd like to take a look from down here. (indicates the area in front of the viewscreen) Frustrated again; but she has no choice. RINA Thank you, Captain. INT. TRANSPORTER ROOM Worf, Riker, Data and a couple of n.d. crewmembers are preparing to be transported. RIKER We're going in amidships protected by an isolation forcefield. We'll take one quick look. Fifteen seconds. If we don't like what we see, we beam back immediately. GEORDI (V.O.) (from com panel) We have a lock on the Lantree, Commander. RIKER (to com panel) Okay, let's drop out of warp speed. And see if you can keep us in the same galaxy. EXT. SPACE The Enterprise and the Lantree travel side by side. AS THE TWO SHIPS DROP OUT OF WARP SPEED, they wind up separated by some distance. INT. TRANSPORTER ROOM Riker and his team are ready. GEORDI (V.O.) (from com panel) Sorry about that. We got as close as we could. RIKER That's okay, Geordi. What's a light year among friends? Riker turns to the others. RIKER If it looks secure at first glance, we'll proceed to the bridge. (beat) If we find anyone alive, the medical team will beam over. WORF Set phasers for kill. They set phasers. RIKER Let's do it. The controller touches the panel and they beam away. INT. USS LANTREE The away team materializes adjacent to the central computer. Phasers at the ready, they find no one in sight. Data plugs a memory module into the computer, touches a few buttons, then takes the module with him. DATA I have the ship's logs, sir. Riker scans the area. He glances at Worf. CONTINUED: RIKER Let's see if anbody's home. Cautiously, they open the door to the adjacent area. It's empty. INT. CORRIDOR Worf emerges. He checks the corridor. Still no one in sight. Riker, Data and the others follow him out. Slowly they move on. They come to the sickbay door. Worf opens it, glances in--and freezes. RIKER What is it? INT. SICKBAY Every bed contains a body. Worf guards the entrance as Data scans the bodies with a tricorder. RIKER How's the environment? DATA No abnormal viral or bacterial forms. Riker goes to the nearest bed and looks at the dead crewmember's face. The man is wrinkled and ancient. RIKER They were carrying passengers? DATA He is not a passenger. He is a crewmember. RIKER But he's nearly two hundred years old! DATA It would seem they all are. Riker looks around the room in astonishment. The other corpses are equally antique. Riker looks from one to the other in horror. They back away. INT. CAPTAIN'S QUARTERS The door opens and there is Worf at the ready with his phaser. Data and Riker enter the room. CAPTAIN TELAKA is sprawled across his desk, face down. His hand still holds a communications device. Riker looks down at it. The hand is thin, bony, and wrinkled. RIKER How old was Captain Telaka? DATA Thirty-two earth years. Riker reaches down and gently turns Telaka's head--knowing what to expect, and still shocked by what he sees. The face is withered, and the transparent skin is stretched over a toothless skull. INT. LANTREE BRIDGE The door opens and Riker enters, phaser at the ready. Worf and Data follow him in. At the CONN station, a crewmember is slumped over the console. Like the others, he is wrinkled and ancient. Grim, Riker moves to the console and touches a panel. RIKER Enterprise... this is the USS Lantree. Picard appears on the viewscreen. PICARD (from viewscreen) Enterprise here. RIKER Captain, the entire crew has been wiped out. PICARD What happened? Riker looks down at the corpse of the toothless hag in the first officer's chair. CONTINUED: RIKER It looks like they were in a battle with time, and lost. FADE OUT: ACT TWO FADE IN: EXT. SPACE (OPTICAL) The Enterprise drifts through space alongside the smaller supply ship, Lantree. PULASKI (V.O.) Chief medical officer's log. Extensive autopsies performed on the crew of the Lantree reveal a gamut of primary organ failures as the direct cause of death. INT. ENTERPRISE - SICKBAY One of the ancient looking Lantree corpses is lying on a platform surrounded by a forcefield. The platform moves slowly through a twenty-fifth century CAT scanner as Dr. Pulaski and her assistants study the readouts with growing frustration. PULASKI (to com panel) Transporter Room, we're finished here. Thanks for your help. TRANSPORTER COM VOICE You're welcome, Doctor. Energizing now. The corpse sparkles briefly then disappears. One of the technicians touches a control panel and the area inside the forcefield is flushed with an electric blue light. Then the protective field is dropped. PULASKI (to com panel) Captain. We've returned the last of the Lantree crew to their ship. PICARD (V.O.) (from com panel) How soon will you have an autopsy report, Doctor? PULASKI (beat) From everything we can see... they all died of natural causes. INT. BRIDGE Picard is seated at the command station. PICARD Natural causes? What in nature could kill an entire crew at the same time? PULASKI'S COM VOICE For the record Captain, these people died of old age. Data, at the OPS station, enters a query into his console, and swivels to face Picard. DATA Sir, according to the Lantree logs the oldest crew member was seventy-three, and the mean age of the crew was thirty-two point six six. INT. CONFERENCE LOUNGE All of the regulars are seated around the conference table. PICARD Doctor? PULASKI Every member of the Lantree crew had a complete examination at the beginning of their last duty cycle just eight weeks ago. (glances at Riker) They were in perfect health. TROI Nothing since then? No geriatric symptoms reported? PULASKI A single medical entry noting that the first officer was treated for Thelusian flu five days ago. PICARD Thelusian flu? CONTINUED: PULASKI (shakes her head) An exotic, but harmless rhinal virus. And there was no evidence of infection in the first officer's autopsy. RIKER If we don't know what we're looking for, how can we be certain the Lantree is safe? PULASKI We can't. We'll have to assume whatever caused this is still aboard. Picard clenches his jaw. PICARD Lieutenant Worf. You know what to do. WORF (standing) Sir. Worf exits. DATA Captain, the Lantree's last port of call was three days ago. The Darwin Genetic Research Station on Gagarin Four. Picard and Riker look at each other. PULASKI At the very least they deserve a warning. PICARD (frowning) I was thinking of a quarantine. PULASKI I'll consider that possibility. PICARD You'll con -- CONTINUED: (2) PULASKI Captain. If Starfleet had wanted you to make the medical judgments they wouldn't have assigned you a medical officer. Picard gets to his feet, swallowing hard. PICARD Number One. Set course for Gagarin Four. Warp nine. We'll depart the moment our security officer returns. INT. LANTREE - BRIDGE Worf, surrounded by a protective force field, stands in front of the Lantree's security station. WORF (to com panel) Codename Firestorm. Access A-D- three-three-two-four-nine. COMPUTER VOICE Federation security code recognized. Access confirmed. Worf takes a last look around the bridge. With great sadness, his eyes move from one crewmember's body to the next -- comrades in arms -- slain by an enemy they never had a chance to fight. WORF Set auto-destruct. Twenty second delay. COMPUTER VOICE Auto-destruct active. Eighteen seconds... sixteen seconds... Worf pauses for a moment, a silent salute to the bravery of the Lantree crew. he touches his insignia. WORF Energize. He's transformed into glittering energy and vanishes. COMPUTER VOICE Twelve seconds... ten seconds... EXT. SPACE (OPTICAL) For a moment the two ships drift together as before. Abruptly the Enterprise warps away. In almost the same instant the supply ship, Lantree, is engulfed in a blinding flash. INT. ENTERPRISE - TRANSPORTER ROOM Worf steps off the transporter platform and heads for the door. TRANSPORTER OPERATOR (good naturedly) Cutting it a little close weren't y--? Worf turns to him, eyes burning. The operator's smile fades. INT. ENGINEERING Geordi approaches the maintenance table where Rina is working on an exotic piece of equipment about the size of a basketball. Two enthralled ENGINEERING CREWMEMBERS are watching her work. GEORDI Find it? RINA All set. It was the sensor contact. GEORDI (overlapping) -- sensor contact. (smiling) Just like you said it would be. Let's get it back in the panel and do a quick line test. RINA Yes, sir! Rina lifts the unit off the table. The two crewmembers rush to help her carry it -- and the delicate device is knocked from Rina's hands. Geordi lunges and manages to catch it inches from the deck. Slowly he gets to his feet, trying to check his anger. CONTINUED: GEORDI (to Rina) Come with me. The embarrassed crewmembers begin packing up the test equipment as Rina follows Geordi into the corridor. INT. ENGINEERING - EQUIPMENT BAY Geordi and Rina are working together to re-install the unit. GEORDI Running the Engineering Section is no different than running the drive system. I've got to keep everything in balance. To get maximum efficiency out of -- RINA Don't bother, I've heard it all before. It's not your problem, anyway. It's me. Geordi turns and studies her. He doesn't need to "see" her face to read the disappointment in her voice. It makes what he has to say next even harder. GEORDI That's right. You've got plenty of aptitude, but you're attitude's not makin' it. RINA What do you know about my attitude? How'd you like it if people always behaved as if you're some kind of freak?! Geordi finishes the installation. He closes the access panel a little harder than he needs to. GEORDI (tapping his VISOR) What do you think this is? My ticket to success? He starts past her, but she reaches out and grabs his arm. CONTINUED: RINA Wait. (withdraws her hand) I'm... sorry. Maybe I'm the one who's blind. GEORDI What you are is maybe the most talented engineer to come out of the Acadamy since... well since me. Doing this job's in your blood. Now all we've got to do is convince the rest of 'em. (extends his hand) Deal? RINA (shakes his hand) Deal. EXT. SPACE (OPTICAL) The Enterprise flashes past at maximum warp. INT. BRIDGE Picard faces the viewscreen flanked by Doctor Pulaski and Riker. The rest of the bridge crew are at their stations. PICARD Open hailing frequencies. WORF Hailing frequencies open. PICARD (to viewscreen) Darwin Station. This is Captain Jean-Luc Picard of the USS Enterprise, on course for Gagarin Four. After a moment DOCTOR SARA MANDEL, a woman in her fifties, appears on the viewscreen. She's haggard and exhausted. CONTINUED: MANDEL (from viewscreen) Enterprise, this is Darwin Station. I'm Doctor Mandel. We've just declared a state of emergency here. We need your help, but you must stand off. Picard and the others glance at each other. PULASKI (stunned) Doctor Mandel, what is the nature of your emergency? MANDEL (from viewscreen) To whom am I speaking, please? PULASKI I'm Doctor Pulaski, chief medical officer. MANDEL Katherine Pulaski? "Linear Models of Viral Propagation?" PULASKI (impatient) Yes, but that was a long time ago. MANDEL And still the standard. (a wave of relief) I'm sorry to meet you under these circumstances, but I can't imagine anyone I'd rather be dealing with. Picard and the others glance at each other, slightly amazed to realize their CMO is famous. PULASKI Bring me up to speed on your situation. What are the factors? MANDEL Rapid onset of geriatric phenomena. One hundred percent fatal in the advanced stages. CONTINUED: (2) PULASKI Presentation? MANDEL Acute arthritic inflammation. Pervasive and virtually instantaneous. PULASKI Since Darwin is doing genetic research... MANDEL Our research, here, is limited to human genetics. I assure you we're not dealing with some mutated pathogen that "got away from us." We believe the infective agent was introduced by a supply ship that was here three days ago. PICARD Doctor, we encountered The Lantree a few hours ago. (beat) They lost all hands. Mandel doesn't seem surprised by Picard's news. MANDEL That would seem to confirm our analysis. Were you able to establish a pathology? PULASKI Organ failure consistent with advanced geriatric -- PICARD Doctor Mandel! Did you hear what I said? The twenty-six men and women aboard the Lantree are all dead! MANDEL I heard you Captain! And the prognosis is alarming. But my immediate concern is the children. CONTINUED: (3) PULASKI (glances at Picard) Children? MANDEL We have thirty-two children here. They've been kept in positive isolation since the onset, and so far they've shown no symptoms. You must evacuate them as soon as possible. Riker glances at Picard. Picard turns to the viewscreen. PICARD (grave) I'm sorry. We'll lend any assistance we can, but I won't risk the lives of -- MANDEL Doctor Pulaski... you've got to convince him. (beat) These children are more than our progeny. They represent all our years of advanced genetic research. If he can't think of humanity, think of science! PICARD I heard you Doctor. And I understand completely. We'll reach Gagarin Four in a little over three hours. Until then. The viewscreen shows a starfield as Picard leaves the bridge. INT. CONFERENCE LOUNGE Picard, Riker, Worf, Troi, and Pulaski are assembled around the conference table. WORF I recommend against contact, Captain. PICARD Number One? CONTINUED: RIKER I agree, sir. I wish there was something we could do, but the risk is too great. PICARD Doctor? Pulaski is scanning notes on a PADD. She looks up as if she hasn't heard any of this. PULASKI As a first step I'd like to bring a couple of the children aboard and examine them. WORF If they're infected... ?! PULASKI Doctor Mandel has assured us they are not. Picard turns to Troi. PICARD Counselor? TROI Doctor Mandel clearly believes the children are safe, but she isn't telling us the whole truth. I recommend caution. PULASKI The two children could be encased in styrolite. They'll be in suspended animation. We can scan them for possible infection without any danger to ourselves... (pointedly) or to them. RIKER Until we know what we're facing -- PULASKI Exactly. And we won't know until we begin gathering data. Pulaski leans across the table to Picard. CONTINUED: (2) PULASKI (cont.) Captain, we're talking about saving children's lives. Isn't that worth some risk? PICARD We're always at risk, Doctor. You may proceed with your examination, but I shall demand positive proof that these children are harmless before placing the lives of my crew in jeopardy. EXT. SPACE (OPTICAL) The Enterprise drops out of warp speed in the Gagarin system. INT. SICKBAY SCIENCE LAB Geordi is supervising a flurry of activity as Picard and the others look on. WESLEY (V.O.) Approaching Gagarin Four on impulse power, Captain. PICARD (to com panel) Thank you, Mister Crusher. Standard orbit. WESLEY (V.O.) Aye, sir. A forcefield containment has been established in the center of the room. Geordi turns to Picard. GEORDI Containment forcefield ready, Captain. PICARD Activate. The forcefield engages. Picard nods to Pulaski. CONTINUED: PULASKI (to com panel) Doctor Mandel, are you ready to transport? MANDEL (O.S.) (from com panel) You have the coordinates. We have one male and one female, standing by. Riker nods to Geordi. GEORDI (to com panel) Transporter, energize. Two blocks of transparent plastic begin to materialize inside the forcefield. Encased within are two unclothed humans... but they are not "children" in the usual sense of the word. They are physical super-specimens. And they appear to be in their early twenties. Worf is the first to react. WORF A trick! RIKER (to com panel) Transporter room. Reverse the trans -- PICARD Hold on that, Number One. Whoever they are, they're in stasis. Lieutenant Worf? Worf cautiously scans them with his tricorder. WORF The styrolite's intact, Captain. TROI Captain, I... (beat) There's a definite presence -- two distinct personalities. Even in stasis... It's quite strong. (beat) They are unquestionably telepathic. CONTINUED: (2) Everyone strains for a closer look. DATA Earth humans. Somewhat larger than normal. Approximately twenty years old -- Doctor Pulaski is transfixed by the Darwinian children. PULASKI Extraordinary. (awe-struck) We could be looking at the future of humanity. PICARD (controlled) Or at least Doctor Mandel's vision of it. FADE OUT: ACT THREE EXT. ENTERPRISE In orbit around Gagarin IV. INT. SICKBAY SCIENCE LAB The two Darwinian children stand frozen in their blocks of styrolite. They are being scanned by an array of devices as medical technicians study the readouts. From across the room, Doctor Pulaski watches, chin in hand, thinking. Picard enters. She looks up. PULASKI I want to free them from the styrolite. Picard crosses to the children and looks them over. He turns to Pulaski. PICARD Are you absolutely certain they're safe? PULASKI These children are in better health than we are. Their immune system is so advanced, it may not even be possible for them to contract disease. PICARD But how can we be -- PULASKI There's no way we can be absolutely certain until we know what's causing the disease. PICARD Then until we can answer that question, we can't -- CONTINUED: PULASKI We don't have that kind of time. (beat) Captain, look at these children. Set aside the fact that they are human beings and we are their only hope. (beat) We're talking about a new chapter in genetic science. PICARD But the risk. The risk is -- PULASKI Minimal. They'll continue to be isolated inside a forcefield. Picard studies her. Finally he turns to the com panel. PICARD (to com panel) Commander Riker, assemble the bridge crew in the observation lounge in fifteen minutes. Doctor Pulaski has a proposal she'd like us to consider. RIKER (V.O.) (com panel) Yes, sir. He starts out, then turns at the door. PICARD And Doctor... I'm not one to discourage input, but I'd appreciate it if you'd at least let me finish my sentences once in a while. He exits. She puts a hand to her eyes. INT. TROI'S OFFICE Troi is working at her desk. She looks up as Doctor Pulaski enters. PULASKI You have a minute? CONTINUED: TROI Of course. Pulaski takes a seat, unsure how to begin. PULASKI (beat) Deanna... You've known the captain for some time... (beat) I guess I could use some advice. I don't think I'm dealing with him very well. TROI Why do you say that? PULASKI (shrugs) My arguments seem to go right past him. We wind up shouting regulations at each other. TROI It takes time to get to know him. But he's very fair, and he has excellent judgment. PULASKI I know he's a talented commanding officer. (beat) But he's so caught up in... his ship, his responsibility... He doesn't seem able to step back... to see the whole canvas. TROI (puzzled) Kate, I don't think he would be where he is if he couldn't see the "whole canvas." They are interrupted by the com panel. COM PANEL (V.O.) Staff officers report to the Observation Lounge. They stand and head for the door. CONTINUED: (2) TROI Maybe your problem is that the two of you aren't all that different. PULASKI What do you mean? TROI Let's just say you're both well established personalities. INT. OBSERVATION LOUNGE The A-team is assembled. Picard has the floor. PICARD Doctor Pulaski's studies indicate the children are harmless. She believes the rest of the colony's children should be beamed aboard and transported to a new environment while there's still time to save them. RIKER Are you sure they're safe? PULASKI No. A murmer of alarm. PULASKI (CONT.) In the time we have available, the only true test is to expose the children to another human being. An audible silence. Everyone is looking at her. PULASKI (CONT.) I plan to free them from the styrolite--inside a forcefield containment. (beat) I'll be inside the containment area myself. Another murmer of concern. CONTINUED: WORF You would risk yourself? PULASKI They're living beings and they need our help. GEORDI (shakes his head) I don't like it. If we lost the force field for some reason... we could lose the ship. PULASKI But the children are in perfect health. And we can use double redundant forcefields. PICARD As Geordi says, forcefields can fail. And until -- PULASKI Captain, I can understand your concern, but -- She's cut him off again. She glances at him. Picard eyes her coolly. PICARD You say you understand, Doctor, but I wonder if you do. Pulaski is up against a wall. She stares at the table with a hand to her forehead. Picard studies her. He softens. PICARD (CONT.) If you can find a way to prove the children are biologically harmless without risking the crew, I'll do everything in my power to assist. She nods. She gets up and heads for the exit. Picard motions to Troi. The two of them hold back until the others are gone. TROI Captain? CONTINUED: (2) PICARD I'm concerned about our CMO. (off Troi's look) She's absolutley obsessed with the medical viewpoint. She doesn't seem able to step back and see the overall picture. Troi has trouble suppressing a smile. PULASKI What's the matter? TROI Nothing, Captain. Perhaps you and the CMO just need to give each other a little more time. INT. BRIDGE Pulaski strides onto the bridge and addresses the viewscreen. PULASKI Doctor Mandel, this is Kate Pulaski. Mandel appears on the viewscreen and Pulaski winces. Mandel is visibly older. MANDEL (from viewscreen) Doctor? Do you have a decision? PULASKI (beat) Yes. I'm afraid it's bad news. MANDEL How can that be?! Pulaski stiffens her spine to carry the weight. PULASKI The risk to our ship and crew is too great. Until we're absolutely certain of the cause of the disease, the children -- CONTINUED: MANDEL But the children were never on the Lantree! (beat) You can't do this! For God's sake! I demand that you do something to save our children. Pulaski is under tremendous strain. MANDEL (CONT.) (spreads her withered hands.) We haven't much time. PULASKI (sets her jaw) Stand by. I'll get back to you. INT. ENGINEERING CONTROL ROOM Geordi is studying a PADD. He's troubled. Rina senses something is wrong. RINA What's the it? GEORDI (glances up) Our error rate is up nearly forty percent. She looks at him squarely. RINA You mean: since I came aboard. She's angry. She's about to reply, but she's interrupted by Pulaski, who comes storming into the control room. PULASKI I need your help. I've got very little time. I've got to find a way to test the children, to make sure they're harmless. And I need a fail-safe environment. GEORDI The problem is, there's no area on the ship that can be sealed off with absolute certainty. CONTINUED: PULASKI What about the Sickbay? (glances at Rina) Doesn't the Sickbay have isolated systems? RINA The Sickbay has independant systems, but it's not possible to totally cut it off from the rest of the ship. The only truely independent environment would be the shuttlecraft, or something like -- PULASKI The shuttlecraft? (to Geordi) Why didn't you say so? INT. CAPTAIN'S READY ROOM Picard is looking in his microscope when the door chime sounds. PICARD Come. Pulaski enters. PULASKI Captain, I'd like permission to take the children aboard the shuttlecraft Picard reacts. PULASKI (CONT.) If the experiment is... unsucessful, the shuttlecraft can simply be abandoned here at Darwin. PICARD (studies her) And you along with it. She shrugs. CONTINUED: PICARD Doctor, you are the chief medical officer of the Starship Enterprise. You have a responsibility to this ship -- PULASKI And to humanity. PICARD The Starfleet guidelines about contact with quarantined -- PULASKI Listen, you don't need to quote the rule book -- (a hand to her mouth) She's done it again. PULASKI (CONT.) You were saying? Picard studies her. Finally he gets to his feet. PICARD Request approved. PULASKI Captain, you said if I... (beat) Approved? PICARD Doctor, I can't condone the jeopardy you're assumming, but I recognize that you have satisfied my conditions. PULASKI (long beat) Thank you. INT. SHUTTLE BAY The children, still in styrolite, are being loaded aboard the shuttlecraft. Pulaski is supervising as Data enters. DATA Doctor? You sent for me? CONTINUED: PULASKI I did, Commander. I assume you're qualified to pilot this shuttlecraft. DATA Certainly. I was trained at -- PULASKI I'm sure you were. Please get aboard, we don't have much time. Data looks at her quizzically. He starts to board as Riker rushes into the shuttle bay. RIKER Doctor, what's going on? PULASKI We're performing the experiment aboard the shuttlecraft. RIKER The captain approved this? PULASKI Yes. Now if you'll clear the area, please; we haven't much time. RIKER Doctor, I can't allow you to risk yourself like this. (to com panel) Captain, this is Riker -- PULASKI Commander Riker... that item in your medical record is still unresolved, if I'm not mistaken? RIKER What does that... (dawning realization) You can't be serious. PULASKI (to com panel) Computer, this is Chief Medical Officer Pulaski. (more) CONTINUED: (2) PULASKI (Cont'd) I'm relieving Commander William Riker from active duty for medical reasons effective immediately. (to Data) Let's go. Riker is stunned. Doctor Pulaski enters the shuttlecraft. Data looks at Riker with a shrug. He follows Pulaski in and the hatch closes behind them. COMPUTER VOICE (V.O.) (from com panel) All personnel, clear the shuttle bay. Riker jumps to the com panel. RIKER (to com panel) Computer -- override shuttle operations! Halt departure! Secure the shuttle! COMPUTER VOICE (V.O.) Riker, William T. Presently on inactive duty status. No command authorization. (beat) All personnel, clear the shuttle bay. Dismayed, Riker joins the other crewmembers moving quickly to the air lock. INT. SHUTTLECRAFT Data, at the console, clearly has misgivings about what's happening. PULASKI You'll take us a few hundred meters away from the Enterprise, and hold position. With a raise of an eyebrow, Data turns to the panel. DATA Begin shuttlecraft launch sequence. INT. SHUTTLE BAY CONTROL ROOM (BLUE SCREEN) Through the airlock viewing port, Riker watches, powerless and apprehensive. COMPUTER VOICE (V.O.) (from com panel) Shuttle Bay One is clear. Access hatch sealed. Initiating decompression. DATA (V.O.) Stand by to open shuttle bay doors. COMPUTER VOICE (V.O.) Decompression complete. Opening main shuttle bay doors. Beyond the shuttlecraft, the hangar bay doors begin to part, revealing the starry night. RIKER (resigned) Good luck, Doctor. EXT. SPACE - ENTERPISE (OPTICAL) The shuttlecraft emerges, drifting slowly away from the Enterprise. INT. SHUTTLECRAFT Pulaski has turned her attention to the two children, now lying horizontal, still encased in styrolite. DATA We are in position, Doctor. PULASKI (more to herself) This is the only way to prove they're harmless. DATA And if they are not? PULASKI (looks at him) I hate to keep reminding you, but you are a machine. You'll be perfectly safe. CONTINUED: DATA That is by no means certain, Doctor, but I was referring to you. PULASKI (softens) Medical research is sometimes a risky business, Commander. It's all part of being human. Pulaski adjusts a dispersion device over the horizontal forms of the two children. She activates it and the styrolite begins to dissolve. In seconds it melts away and the children scramble to their feet -- curious, friendly, and mute. The female, ASTARTE, touches Pulaski and looks her in the eye. PULASKI (wide eyed) ... Your name is Astarte... this is your brother, David... EXT. ENTERPRISE - (OPTICAL) The shuttlecraft and the Enterprise orbit together above the planet Gagarin IV. INT. SHUTTLECRAFT Using a tricorder and other diagnostic instruments Data assists Doctor Pulaski with her self-examination. DATA All within tolerance, Doctor. PULASKI (a slight smile) The manufacturer will be pleased to hear it. (off his look) I appreciate your help, but your bedside manner needs work. The children are silently studying their surroundings. She moves toward them -- and FREEZES. CONTINUED: Wide eyed, suddenly gripped with fear, she slowly moves her arm -- and GROANS in pain. Data looks at her in alarm. FADE OUT ACT FOUR FADE IN: EXT. SPACE (OPTICAL) With the shuttlecraft alongside, the Enterprise is in orbit around Gagarin IV. INT. SHUTTLECRAFT Moving with difficulty, Doctor Pulaski makes her way to the shuttle's command chair. Data rushes to assist. PULASKI There was no warning. PICARD (from viewscreen) Doctor! With Data's help, Pulaski lowers herself into the chair. PULASKI (wincing) Acute arthritic inflammation of all joints. It's the initial symptom of the disease. PICARD (from viewscreen) Good lord! PULASKI The children must be returned to their isolation environment. INT. ENTERPRISE - BRIDGE Riker steps out of the turbolift onto the bridge. WORF Transporter set to original coordinates, Captain. PICARD Energize. (noticing Riker) Glad you're here, Number One. INT. SHUTTLECRAFT Pulaski and Data watch as the Darwinian children vanish in a sparkle of energy. PULASKI Thank you, Captain. Doctor Pulaski self-administers a hyposray painkiller. Immediately she begins to relax. PICARD (on viewscreen) We'll have a medical team waiting for you in the shuttle bay, Doctor. PULASKI I'm afraid that's out of the question. We still don't understand what we're dealing with. That means I'm subject to the same quarantine as the Darwin Station. (beat) I recommend a delta-level decontamination of the Sickbay and the shuttle bay. Shuttle One out. INT. ENTERPRISE Picard is on his feet, addressing a viewscreen starfield. PICARD Doctor! WORF Captain, I'll see to the decontamination myself. Picard nods, barely able to contain his frustration. Worf heads for the turbolift. Riker approaches Picard. INT. SHUTTLECRAFT Data watches nervously as Doctor Pulaski attempts to stand. She appears to be stiff, but not crippled by pain. DATA How do you feel? CONTINUED: PULASKI (slowly flexing her fingers) Not exactly up to factory specs. (off his look) The pain is tolerable, thank you. DATA Set course for Darwin Station? The doctor sinks wearily back into the command chair. She has already begun to show signs of aging. PULASKI We're already quarantined. What do we have to lose? Data starts to give her a literal response, then thinks better of it. He punches in the course. INT. SICKBAY SCIENCE LAB (OPTICAL) The bio-decontamination team, in protective suits, are "hosing down" the area using back-pack plasma generators. A stream of translucent blue light flows from the nozzles, filling the air and clinging to the exposed surfaces for a moment before evaporating. Worf's bulk is undisguised by the suit. As they move on a second crew, also in full protective suits, enters the room carrying scanners and checking for any residual contamination. INT. OBSERVATION LOUNGE Picard and Riker are alone in the room, facing each other across the table. PICARD I wish it were that simple, Will. RIKER A meaningless detail on a medical form... PICARD I agree it seems insignificant, CONTINUED: RIKER You have the authority to countermand it. PICARD My authority flows from the chain of command. If you, or any other officer, have anything less than full confidence that your orders will be carried out, then my rank of Captain is meaningless.c Riker understands the truth of this. RIKER (beat) Sir, if there's any way I can help get them back... PICARD Of course. The door opens and Troi enters, followed by Geordi and Rina. They take their seats. Niether Picard nor Riker comment on Rina's presence. WESLEY (V.O.) (from com panel) Captain, Shuttle One is decending to Gagarin Four. PICARD (to com panel) Thank you, Mister Crusher. (to the group) The medical emergency at Darwin Station is ongoing. We'll continue to assist, but our immediate concern is the evacuation of our two officers. Anyone? TROI Shouldn't Kate be involved in this? PICARD Judging from what we saw on the Lantree, Doctor Pulaski may not be able to help herself. CONTINUED: (2) TROI (beat) I suggest transporting them both back to the ship. We should use whatever time we have to seek the best medical resources available. RIKER The transporter won't protect us. The children went through the transporter and still infected Doctor Pulaski. Geordi raps the table. GEORDI The bio-filter can be adjusted. We could alter the filter to screen out whatever it is that's causing... PICARD Precisely. We can't protect ourselves against the unknown. What we need is a filter that isn't bio-dependent. They ponder. Finally, RINA What about the "trace?" Everyone turns to Rina, their faces reflecting degrees of skepticism. RIKER The transporter trace? RINA The transporter keeps a computer record of every transmission, a footprint if you will. Usually it's only stored for security purposes, but if we used the trace data to control the reconstitution process... PICARD (to Geordi) Is that possible? CONTINUED: (3) GEORDI I hate to admit it, but it never occured to me. All I can tell you is she hasn't been wrong yet. PICARD Very well. Thank you Ensign... ? TROI Excuse me, Captain. But where will we get the trace data? As far as I know Kate's never used the transporter. PICARD Never? RIKER She's... a woman of strongly held opinions, sir. (beat) What about a previous assignment? TROI Her last ship was the Repulse. PICARD (to com panel) Bridge. Signal the USS Repulse on the sub-space captain's priority channel. EXT. DARWIN RESEARCH STATION - DAY (OPTICAL) The shuttlecraft settles on a landing pad near the Main Laboratory Building at Darwin Station. INT. DARWIN STATION LAB BUILDING Doctor Mandel several OTHER SCIENTISTS are waiting as Doctor Pulaski steps out of the lift with Data's help. During the short journey to the planet's surface she appears to have aged thirty years. CONTINUED: MANDEL (extends her hand) Doctor Pulaski... (beat) I can only tell you how much I regret the burden we have imposed on you. (a glance at Data) On both of you. PULASKI Commander Data is an android, Doctor. He is unaffected. As for me, this was my choice, not yours. MANDEL I still can't believe the children had anything to do with this. DATA (gestures toward Pulaski) The evidence is fairly conclusive. MANDEL But the children were designed to ward off any disease agents. PULASKI (pointedly) I think it's time we talked about that. INT. ISOLATION LABORATORY - OBSERVATION AREA Doctors Pulaski and Mandel step into an observation booth overlooking the isolation lab. From here they can see the children. They are all physically exceptional. MANDEL (looks down) Our ultimate achievement. PULASKI Genetically... engineered... CONTINUED: MANDEL Created! (beat) Perfect in every way. Better than perfect. Their bone structure, their musculature... (gestures) their brains! Mandel RAPS on the glass. INT. ISOLATION LABORATORY Two children playing chess glance up -- and all the chess pieces disappear. They wave, and turn back to the game. An instant of concentration -- and the chess pieces reappear. PULASKI (V. O.) (shaken) What about their immune system? MANDEL (V.O.) That was our masterpiece. An aggressive immunity that attacks any invader and destroys it genetically. PULASKI (V.O.) That's it. INT. ISOLATION CHAMBER - OBSERVATION AREA Mandel faces Pulaski. PULASKI Thelusian flu! MANDEL Thelusian flu? PULASKI The first officer of the Lantree had Thelusian flu -- an airborne virus. (nods toward children) How would their immune system react to it? CONTINUED: MANDEL By altering the genetic pattern. Forcing the virus into extinction. PULASKI (beat) I'm afraid that's what's happening to us. Doctor Mandel is stunned. She stares down at the two chess players. MANDEL We were so concerned about protecting them -- we overlooked the obvious! (beat) The one decision we made with our hearts... turns out to be a mistake. Pulaski puts a withered hand on Mandel's shoulder. INT. CAPTAIN'S READY ROOM CAPTAIN TAGGERT, of the Starship Repulse, has a full bushy mustache. He's somewhat younger than Picard, and his face fills the viewscreen in the Ready Room. TAGGERT (from viewscreen) Sorry, Picard. We purged the Doctor Pulaski's trace right after her transfer. Not that she used the transporter much, she preferred using the shuttlecraft. (shrugs) I'd have given her a shuttle if it would have kept her here. Best CMO I ever served with. PICARD Tell me, Taggart. If she served you as well as you say, why did you let her go? CONTINUED: TAGGERT (laughs) I guess you haven't run into her stubborn streak. (beat) The moment she heard of the opening on the Enterprise, she put in a request for transfer. Knew your service record backward and forward. Apparently she's been an admirer of yours for some time. PICARD (shocked) Extraordinary. EXT. DARWIN STATION - DAY The shuttlecraft is still on the landing pad outside the laboratory complex. INT. DARWIN LABORATORY Data is at a computer console. Pulaski and Mandel approach. PULASKI He's is trying to isolate the altered genetic pattern. MANDEL But the computer run could take months. PULASKI (smiles) Not necessarily. Commander Data... has a way with computers. The displays in front of Data are scrolling like lightning. He looks up. DATA (points to display) Comparing genetic samples indicates a transposition of these two proteins. CONTINUED: MANDEL It appears that the antibodies have been too effective. PULASKI What do you mean? DATA I believe she is referring to the fact that the human genome is self replicating. Mandel stares at the readout in horror. MANDEL He's quite right. Every cell in our bodies is now programmed for extinction. EXT. ENTERPRISE (OPTICAL) In orbit around Gagarin IV. INT. BRIDGE Captain Picard struggles to maintain his composure as he faces the viewscreen. PICARD Have you made any progress, Doctor Pulaski? PULASKI (from viewscreen) The Darwin staff has amassed some amazing new data on the physiology of aging -- PICARD (incredulous) I'm sure, but right now I'm concerned about you. INT. DARWIN LABORATORY Doctor Pulaski is working at a lab station. Her face is wrinkled, and her hair is snow white. CONTINUED: PULASKI (shakes her head) We've isolated the altered DNA, but the process may not be reversible. The others are already at work in the primary lab -- where I should be. PICARD (from viewscreen) No, Doctor. You and Commander Data belong here. PULASKI (long beat) Commander Data is preparing to leave now. PICARD (from viewscreen) Doctor... PULASKI Jean-Luc... I appreciate what you're trying to do. (beat) But I got into this by leaping before I looked, and I won't allow you to make the same mistake. INT. BRIDGE Picard looks at Riker in dismay. PULASKI (cont.) (from viewscreen) It's still my responsibility, and the quarantine is still valid. (smiles) I'm afraid this is the moment of truth. Grim, jaw locked, Picard sags into his chair in defeat. On the viewscreen, Pulaski straightens her shoulders and stands as erect as she can. CONTINUED: PULASKI (cont.) Chief Medical Officer Pulaski's final report to the Enterprise... (beat) Just as changes in evolution are known to be caused by changes in the environment, we now have evidence that the process also works in reverse. (beat) The quarantine of the Darwin Station must be maintained until the end. (beat) Pulaski out. FADE OUT: ACT FIVE FADE IN: EXT. DARWIN RESEARCH STATION - DAY The Enterprise shuttlecraft sits alongside the building. INT. DARWIN ISOLATION LAB Pulaski and Mandel say goodbye to Data. He turns to Pulaski. DATA I am sorry I could not be more helpful, Doctor Pulaski. PULASKI (a glimmer of admiration) You did everything you could, Commander. (extends her hand with a smile) As androids go, you're in a class by yourself. Solemnly they shake hands. There's an awkward silence. DATA Doctor -- PULASKI Please give my best to the captain. Finally, Data turns and exits. EXT. DARWIN (OPTICAL) The shuttlecraft rises from the pad next to the laboratory, then streaks into space. EXT. ENTERPRISE (OPTICAL) The shuttlecraft approaches the Enterprise, but stands off some distance. INT. SHUTTLECRAFT Data enters a string of commands into the control console, then gets to his feet. He turns to the com panel. DATA Enterprise. Commander Data ready to beam aboard. A shimmer of light and he's gone. EXT. ENTERPRISE (OPTICAL) The shuttlecraft EXPLODES. INT. ENTERPRISE - BRIDGE Picard is grim. This defeat has taken its toll. Troi is concerned. WESLEY Sir. Commander Data is back aboard. TROI Jean-Luc, don't try to carry all the weight for this tragedy. Kate knew what she was doing. PICARD (angry) If I was certain we had tried absolutely every -- (he's thinking) Stand by. He gets up abruptly and strides to the turbolift. Troi glances at Riker. INT. TRANSPORTER ROOM Data, inside an isolation forcefield, is being scanned by medical monitors. MEDIC No life forms present. Data glances up resentfully. He's about to say something when Picard enters. He strides forward and shakes Data's hand. CONTINUED: PICARD Good to see you, Data. DATA Yes, sir. PICARD Tell me quickly -- you were unaffected because you have no genetic material? DATA Correct, sir. PICARD And Doctor Pulaski's DNA is altered -- and that's what brings on the aging? DATA Precisely. An almost undetectable transposition in the human genome. It takes a number of interactions of the -- Picard grabs Data by the arm and heads for the door. PICARD Come on. We've got one more card to play. INT. ENGINEERING Geordi, Rina and the crew are making preparations to get underway. Picard charges in with Data following. GEORDI Sir? Picard moves past Geordi to Rina. PICARD Ensign, I need your opinion. RINA (taken aback) Sir? CONTINUED: PICARD You said the transporter could be altered to filter out changes in Doctor Pulaski. RINA If we'd had the trace... PICARD Well it turns out the changes are in her DNA. If we used a sample of the doctor's DNA -- say from a blood test -- that was taken before -- RINA Could we filter out her genetic alterations? Absolutely! PICARD You're picking up some bad habits, Ensign, but yes, you took the words right out of my mouth. (beat) Can you make the modifications? RINA Of course! PICARD Make it so. He exits with Data. Rina is dumbstruck. She looks at Geordi. GEORDI (smiles) Hop to it Ensign. You've got work to do. INT. ENTERPRISE - BRIDGE Picard enters and addresses the viewscreen. PICARD Darwin Station, this is the Enterprise. On the viewscreen, Pulaski appears -- now well over 100 years old. Picard tries to keep his emotions under control. CONTINUED: PICARD (to viewscreen) We may have come up with an answer, Doctor. We're looking for a sample of your normal DNA to use as a filter. We think we'll be able to transport you while cancelling out any changes that have taken place. INT. DARWIN ISOLATION LAB Pulaski and Mandel stand before the viewscreen. PULASKI (to viewscreen) An interesting idea, Captain. (beat) But what about Doctor Mandel and her colleagues? MANDEL Kate. (beat) If this works -- we may be able to use the same technique to save ourselves. We have DNA samples. INT. ENTERPRISE - SICKBAY Riker and Data frantically search the medical records. RIKER A blood test or tissue specimen -- anything that would provide a sample of Pulaski's original DNA. They've been through everything. DATA Afraid not, sir. Her records were shipped by way of Starfleet headquarters. They haven't caught up with us yet. Riker is stupefied. CONTINUED: RIKER This is ridiculous. (slams his fist) A single cell! A single -- They look at each other for a beat -- then dash for the exit. INT. ENTERPRISE - CORRIDOR Riker and Data race for Pulaski's quarters. The door is locked. Riker speaks to the com panel. RIKER (to com panel) This is an emergency! Unlock Medical Officer Pulaski's quarters! COM PANEL (V.O.) Riker, William T., relieved of active duty on two-three-four-six-nine-point-seven... DATA (embarrassed) Allow me, sir. INT. PULASKI'S QUARTERS Riker and Data rip the place apart. RIKER Anything! Even a fingernail clipping! (looks at Data) Or a hair! He lunges for the dressing table. There, on her hairbrush, is a single blonde strand. They dash for the exit. INT. BRIDGE Picard addresses Pulaski on the viewscreen. PICARD Doctor... you should know. This has never been done before. Are you willing to chance it? INT. DARWIN LABORATORY. Every movement is now painful for Pulaski. PULASKI (to viewscreen) I'll tell you one thing. If I live through this... (bends elbow and flinches in pain) I'll have a much better understanding of geriatrics. (weak smile) Standing by, Captain. INT. TRANSPORTER ROOM Several of the panels are off, technicians are all over the place, and Rina is supervising the modification of the circuitry. Geordi, Riker and Data are making last minute adjustments to the control console. Picard enters, followed by Worf. RINA Ready, Captain. WORF The isolation forcefield is in place. Picard surveys the scene. PICARD (beat) I'll operate the transporter myself. WORF That's not necessary, sir. PICARD I'm afraid it is. If something should go wrong. If Doctor Pulaski is not fully... restored. RIKER (understanding) Then she's still capable of contaminating the ship. CONTINUED: PICARD (nods) In that event there should be time to redirect the transporter and... disperse her. It's not a responsibility I can delegate. Picard steps to the control panel. GEORDI Don't worry, Captain. It's not going to come to that. PICARD You seem to have absolute faith in the ensign's work. GEORDI (glances at Rina) Like I said, she's never wrong. PICARD Very well, then. (to com panel) Engage forcefield. The isolation forcefield rises around the transporter platform. PICARD (Cont.) (to com panel) Doctor Pulaski, are you ready? PULASKI (from com panel) I suppose I -- Picard touches the panel. His eyes narrow as he focuses on the empty transporter platform. Everyone is holding their breath. Rina looks at Geordi anxiously. In the transporter bay, Pulaski's form appears... STILL AGED! Then it fades... then re-materializes. Riker and Worf glance at each other. RIKER Captain... Picard reaches out, his hand poised above the controls. CONTINUED: (2) On the transporter platform Pulaski's energy field sparkles one last time -- she begins to coalesce -- and all signs of aging have disappeared. Pulaski, seeing Picard, can't suppress a flicker of admiration. Picard, too, has trouble concealing his admiration. The forcefield is dropped. Picard steps forward and extends his hand. PICARD Welcome aboard, Doctor. Everyone rushes to welcome the CMO back. And Riker is ready -- anxious -- to bite the bullet. RIKER Doctor... I'm ready to take the Rheinman test. Pulaski looks at him quizzically. Has she forgotten? PULASKI Glad you reconsidered, Commander. (to com panel) This is Chief Medical Officer Pulaski. Commander Riker is restored to active duty effective immediately. (to Riker) My schedule's a little tight. (smiling) What do you say we put it off for a day or so? Picard is at the doorway. Pulaski catches up with him, and they exit together. INT. TURBOLIFT Pulaski and Picard step into the lift. PULASKI Captain... If this hadn't worked? If... CONTINUED: PICARD (clears his throat) It would have been necessary to beam your energy into empty space. (beat) Happily, there's no reason to concern yourself with -- PULASKI Why should I be concerned about having my atoms spread across the galaxy? I imagine that's what's going to happen every time I use the damn thing. Picard's smile turns to laughter. INT. CORRIDOR Geordi and Rina are walking together. GEORDI Looks like you'll be going to your next assignment with a captain's commendation in your record. RINA Thanks to you. And the way you... see things. (turns to him) Tell me. When you look at me, what do you see? GEORDI To me beauty is a constantly changing thing. Sometimes people have it and sometimes they don't. It all depends on their energy. (beat) I see your energy and it's beautiful. But it comes from within. RINA You're the only poetic chief engineer I've ever heard of. CONTINUED: GEORDI And you're the most able trainee I've ever met. (kisses her hand) To quote our first officer, "It's been a pleasure." He looks up, but she's still holding his hand. RINA Technically, I'm off duty. GEORDI (beat) Technically, so am I. They have arrived at the entrance to her room. They look at each other for a moment. RINA Maybe you'd like to come in. I've got a fabulous collection of antique star drive drawings. GEORDI Sounds riveting. The door opens. They enter. As the door closes, we see her arms encircle him, and they kiss. EXT. SPACE - ENTERPRISE (OPTICAL) The Enterprise moves away from Gagarin IV. RIKER (V.O.) Course and speed set for Star Station India, Sir. PICARD (V.O.) Engage. The great ship clears Gagarin system and disappears in a flash of light. FADE OUT: THE END STAR TREK: THE NEXT GENERATION "A Matter of Honor" #40272-134 Story by Wanda M. Haight & Gregory W. Amos and Burton Armus Teleplay by Burton Armus Directed by Rob Bowman THE WRITING CREDITS MAY NOT BE FINAL AND SHOULD NOT BE USED FOR PUBLICITY OR ADVERTISING PURPOSES WITHOUT FIRST CHECKING WITH THE TELEVISION LEGAL DEPARTMENT. Copyright 1988 Paramount Pictures Corporation. All Rights Reserved. This script is not for publication or reproduction. No one is authorized to dispose of same. If lost or destroyed, please notify the Script Department. 2ND REV. FINAL DRAFT DECEMBER 2, 1988 STAR TREK: "A Matter of Honor" - 12/02/88 - CAST STAR TREK: THE NEXT GENERATION "A Matter of Honor" CAST PICARD CAPTAIN KARGAN RIKER SECOND OFFICER KLAG DATA VEKMA PULASKI TACTICS OFFICER WORF WESLEY Non-Speaking KLINGON CREWMEMBERS TRANSPORTER CHIEF O'BRIEN ZEGOV ENSIGN MENDON Non-Speaking CREWMEMBERS REPLACEMENT CREWMEMBERS WAITER Voice-Over STARBASE COM VOICE STAR TREK: "A Matter of Honor" - 12/02/88 - SETS STAR TREK: THE NEXT GENERATION "A Matter of Honor" SETS INTERIORS EXTERIORS USS ENTERPRISE USS ENTERPRISE MAIN BRIDGE TRANSPORTER ROOM KLINGON VESSEL "PAGH" PHASER RANGE CORRIDORS OUTSIDE TRANSPORTER ROOM TEN-FORWARD KLINGON VESSEL "PAGH" CORRIDORS MAIN BRIDGE TACTICS STATION MESS HALL STAR TREK: "A Matter of Honor" - 12/02/88 - TEASER 1. STAR TREK: THE NEXT GENERATION "A Matter of Honor" TEASER FADE IN: 1 EXT. SPACE - THE ENTERPRISE (OPTICAL) as it travels through space at warp speed. 2 INT. MAIN BRIDGE WESLEY is at the Conn. WORF is at Tactical. DATA is at Ops, RIKER has the Command Chair. All other stations are staffed by n.d. crewmembers. DATA We are approaching Starbase one-seven-nine. RIKER Half impulse, Mister Crusher. WESLEY Going to half impulse. 3 EXT. SPACE - THE ENTERPRISE (OPTICAL) as the Enterprise comes out of warp, slows to the proper impulse speed. 4 INT. MAIN BRIDGE as before. RIKER Captain, this is the bridge. We have arrived at Starbase one-seven-nine. PICARD'S COM VOICE Acknowledged, Number One. STAR TREK: "A Matter of Honor" - 12/02/88 - TEASER 2. 4 CONTINUED: RIKER (to Wesley) Establish position -- zero-nine-zero mark three-seven-five -- at twenty-seven thousand kilometers. WESLEY Aye, sir. RIKER Open hailing frequencies, Lieutenant. WORF Hailing frequencies open. RIKER Starbase one-seven-nine, this is the USS Enterprise. STARBASE COM VOICE Enterprise, this is Starbase one-seven-nine. We are ready for transfer on your mark. RIKER Thank you. Riker gets to his feet. RIKER (continuing) Commander Data, you have the bridge. Ensign Crusher, you will accompany me. As Riker and Wesley exit, Data takes the Command position. 5 EXT. SPACE - THE ENTERPRISE (OPTICAL) as the Enterprise establishes its position near the starbase. The starbase is located on a misty, shrouded planet. 6 INT. MAIN BRIDGE Data has the Command Chair. STAR TREK: "A Matter of Honor" - 12/02/88 - TEASER 3. 6 CONTINUED: DATA Starbase one-seven-nine. We are ready to commence transfer. STARBASE COM VOICE Acknowledge Enterprise. Begin transfer. 7 INT. TRANSPORTER ROOM (OPTICAL) FIVE MEMBERS of the Enterprise crew (three men, two women) stand on the transporter pads. Riker and the TRANSPORTER CHIEF O'BRIEN at the control panel. Wesley is off to one side. Riker eyes them with a warmth and with a sense of humor. RIKER This is my last chance to say that it has been a pleasure to serve with you and to wish you luck on your new assignment. You have served the Enterprise well. (slight smile) No tears, please. Before the members on the pad can cover their smiles to answer: RIKER (continuing) Energize. The five crewmembers DEMATERIALIZE. Wesley and Riker laugh. Transporter Chief O'Brien responds to a signal on the panel, announces in response. CHIEF O'BRIEN Enterprise ready. Beam aboard. 8 ON PADS (OPTICAL) FOUR REPLACEMENTS MATERIALIZE on the pads, among them is ENSIGN MENDON, a large, blue-skinned officer from the planet Benzar. He breathes through a special device at his chest which converts the oxygen level to his use. He is young, alert, quick moving and as the nature of Benzites, he is always ready to please and demonstrate his abilities. STAR TREK: "A Matter of Honor" - 12/02/88 - TEASER 4. 9 SCENE The new members step off the pad and file through the doorway with nods and smiles. Wesley spots Mendon and reacts. RIKER Welcome aboard the Enterprise. I'm Commander William Riker, your first officer. Those of you who are here as replacements will step outside and Lieutenant Lewis will assign you to crew quarters. (to Mendon) Ensign, you are here on the exchange program, you'll follow Mister Crusher. Wesley steps forward anxiously. He addresses Mendon in a friendly manner. WESLEY Mordoc, what are you doing here? You couldn't have graduated from the Academy already. Mendon eyes Wesley oddly. MENDON I am not Mordoc. I am Mendon. Ensign Mendon of the planet Benzar. 10 ON WESLEY He is slightly flustered, embarrassed. He explains: WESLEY I'm sorry sir. I thought you were a friend... Mordoc... (beat) ... You look just like him. MENDON We are from the same geostructure. Naturally we look alike. WESLEY How do you tell each other apart? MENDON We just do. STAR TREK: "A Matter of Honor" - 12/02/88 - TEASER 5. 11 SCENE Riker steps in to save Wesley any further embarrassment. RIKER Well, nice to have you here Ensign. There will be a briefing and indoctrination session as soon as you settle in. 12 SCENE Mendon stops next to Riker to announce. MENDON I want to tell you how happy I am to be assigned to the Enterprise. It wasn't just luck. I requested it. I know I can be of great help to the ship. RIKER (surprised) Yes, of course. Now if you'll just follow Ensign Crusher. MENDON Yes sir. As Mendon exits the room Riker gives a quick "God save us" glance to Transporter Chief O'Brien. Picard's com voice is heard. PICARD'S COM VOICE Commander Riker, report to the Phaser Range, please... Riker touches his communicator. RIKER On the way. Riker exits the room. 12A EXT. SPACE - THE ENTERPRISE (OPTICAL) in position near the starbase. STAR TREK: "A Matter of Honor" - 12/02/88 - TEASER 6. 13 INT. PHASER RANGE - CLOSE ON TARGET (OPTICAL) as it is zapped by a phaser beam and flashes a burst of light and a change of color. Then another one next to it. The CAMERA PULLS BACK to show Riker and Picard at the firing station, almost back to back and firing at light targets that appear in an arc around them. Picard fires off two blasts of his own phaser. The targets are HIT. PICARD I was wondering if you had any feelings about the Officer Exchange Program that has been initiated by Starfleet Command. RIKER Just positive ones sir. I've already welcomed Ensign Mendon on board and he certainly seems eager to please. PICARD That's a Benzite trait. (beat) It's been suggested that one of the officers on the Enterprise might like to participate in this exchange program. RIKER Probably a good idea. Picard takes a moment to fire off three quick blasts and then to remark offhandedly. PICARD There's a Klingon vessel in the vicinity. Riker covers any reaction by firing his own phaser at the target. Both men continue to fire in order, both of them covering any reaction and attempting to act nonchalant about this assignment RIKER I don't recall ever hearing of a Federation officer serving on a Klingon vessel. PICARD Neither have I. STAR TREK: "A Matter of Honor" - 12/02/88 - TEASER 7. 13 CONTINUED: RIKER It could be beneficial. PICARD Having Worf on board certainly has been. RIKER Yes sir, that's true. (a shot) Who did you intend to send? PICARD I was going to ask for a volunteer. As Picard fires his phaser: RIKER I wouldn't mind, sir. PICARD What was that, Number One? Picard covers his smile. Riker spots it, knows he's been played with. RIKER I said I wouldn't mind the assignment. PICARD Any particular reason? RIKER (broad grin) Because nobody has ever done it before. Riker opens up with a series of three blasts at the target which light it up like a Christmas tree. PICARD I'll notify starbase of your acceptance... They'll contact the Klingon vessel and make the arrangements. STAR TREK: "A Matter of Honor" - 12/02/88 - TEASER 8. 13 CONTINUED: (2) Picard fires at his target, hits it, turns to Riker to smile, then walks away. FADE OUT. END OF TEASER STAR TREK: "A Matter of Honor" - 12/02/88 - ACT ONE 9. ACT ONE FADE IN: 14 EXT. SPACE - THE ENTERPRISE (OPTICAL) as it continues its solo, steady and effortless impulse flight. PICARD (V.O.) Captain's log, stardate 42606.5. I have informed the staff of Commander Riker's temporary duty assignment and we have departed from Starbase one-seven-nine and are headed for a rendezvous with the Klingon vessel, the Pagh. 15 INT. CORRIDOR Worf and Riker walk and talk. Worf is more animated than usual as he speaks of the Klingon ship and his heritage with a certain pride. WORF I have studied and know everything about my heritage. RIKER Then you are the one to fill me in on something that I'm not clear about. (beat) It's my understanding that one of the duties of the first officer on a Klingon ship is to assassinate the captain. WORF Yes sir. RIKER (reacts) Wouldn't that bring about chaos? STAR TREK: "A Matter of Honor" - 12/02/88 - ACT ONE 10. 15 CONTINUED: WORF Of course not. When and if the captain becomes weak and unable to perform, it is expected that his honorable retirement should be assisted by his "first." (beat) The second officer would assassinate you for the same reasons. RIKER (beat) This method of attrition could take a little getting used to. WORF The Klingon system has operated successfully for centuries. RIKER It is different. 16 CLOSE ON WORF He looks at Riker, nods solemnly. WORF Many things will be different. 17 INT. MAIN BRIDGE (OPTICAL) Wesley at his Forward Station of Conn. Data is in Command. All other stations are covered by n.d. crewmembers except for Science One, which is manned by Ensign Mendon. Ensign Mendon steps from his station to look over the shoulder of the crewmember at the Tactical Station. He watches for a beat, then comments: MENDON That's a wonderful method of maintaining a constant control factor over defensive shields, but I'm sure there's a way to improve response time. The crewmember turns to give Mendon a look. Mendon reads it. STAR TREK: "A Matter of Honor" - 12/02/88 - ACT ONE 11. 17 CONTINUED: MENDON Oh, sorry, didn't mean to interrupt you... Just thought I could be of some help, however I am correct in what I said. Mendon continues his studying walk and ends up next to Wesley at Conn. He peers over Wesley's shoulder in the same overseeing manner. MENDON That is superb designing, absolutely first rate. Wesley remains courteous to a ranking officer even if he has the annoying Benzite trait of aggressiveness of an over-achiever. WESLEY Yes it is. Would you care to be more specific? MENDON The input sampling. It's simple yet efficient enough. Of course a minor change of the helm readout would be much more helpful in emergency situations. WESLEY We've never had any trouble with it. Have you seen it work? MENDON Not in a practical exercise, but in theory... my theory... it would be more than a marginal improvement. I'll have to mention this to the captain. WESLEY You're going to advise Captain Picard? MENDON Captain Picard... I'll have to discuss these improvements with him. (beat) He is open to some astute observations, isn't he? STAR TREK: "A Matter of Honor" - 12/02/88 - ACT ONE 12. 17 CONTINUED: (2) WESLEY Well, I've never heard Captain Picard refuse to listen to his officers. MENDON Outstanding! Pretty soon we'll get things running perfectly. Mendon walks away. Wesley's look follows him. 18 INT. TEN-FORWARD LOUNGE Riker sits at a table surrounded by an assortment of dishes. Each one is a little more disgusting than the other. If they are edible it is the surprise of the space age. Riker grimaces as he tests each one in order. Pulaski steps over to look down on his feast. She reaches over to lift something ugly. PULASKI What is this? RIKER A Klingon delicacy. That's heart of targ -- this is pipius claw. And this is stewed "gagh." PULASKI "Gagh"? RIKER Serpent worms... would you like to know how they're prepared? Pulaski sits down at the table. A waiter arrives with about six different drinks. Riker moves some plates around to make room. PULASKI No thanks. I've never heard of a Klingon starving to death on one of their own vessels, but you might. RIKER Not if I weaken first. STAR TREK: "A Matter of Honor" - 12/02/88 - ACT ONE 13. 18 CONTINUED: PULASKI I know all about that. Their beliefs may be somewhat brutal but usually what kills us, kills them. RIKER (sniffing an awful drink) That's something to look forward to. Would you like a drink, Doctor? PULASKI I'm abstaining in honor of your last hour on board. RIKER (mock serious) Your sacrifice will not go unnoticed. Picard approaches the table from the turbolift. 19 NEW ANGLE as Picard looks down at the table full of food and covers his reaction. Riker is about to get to his feet. Picard puts a restraining hand on his shoulder. PICARD I understand the theory of the feast before the transfer. I've done the same thing dozens of times. However, I usually made more civil choices. Pulaski covers her grin. A tray of desserts arrives and Pulaski starts to arrange them in whatever space is left. RIKER These are the most civil choices. PICARD I see... Well, their food may be somewhat backward but the Klingons are efficient, loyal to their beliefs, and are regulated by a strict code of ethics. STAR TREK: "A Matter of Honor" - 12/02/88 - ACT ONE 14. 19 CONTINUED: PULASKI True enough. They tend to lean towards a Samurai civilization that is thousands of years old. PICARD But they are pure in that tradition. Picard turns back to Riker. PICARD This is a great opportunity, Number One. We really know so little about them. We have so much to learn. (beat, smile) I think I envy you, Will Riker. Riker eyes him, nods, almost takes another bite of food accidentally, then drops it as he becomes aware... 20 INT. CORRIDOR - OUTSIDE TRANSPORTER ROOM Riker moves down the corridor towards the Transporter Room. Worf approaches him. He carefully hands Riker a small electronic device about the size of a Bic lighter. Riker studies it. RIKER An emergency transponder? WORF Slightly altered to transmit an omnidirectional signal and an emergency call. RIKER (examining) Are you sensing some trouble that I don't? WORF (embarrassed) Simply a security precaution. I want to insure your return to this ship. STAR TREK: "A Matter of Honor" - 12/02/88 - ACT ONE 15. 20 CONTINUED: RIKER (surprise) Sentiment, Lieutenant Worf? WORF Efficiency, Commander. RIKER (smile) I understand. Thank you, Lieutenant. He tucks the transponder into his boot and walks away. 21 INT. MAIN BRIDGE Wesley and an n.d. crewmember at the Forward Stations, the Aft Stations are covered by n.d. crewmembers. Science One is covered by Ensign Mendon, Worf stationed at Tactical. Picard and Data in the Command Area. WORF We have a Klingon vessel approaching. PICARD Hailing frequencies open. WORF They are returning our hail in proper language. It is the Pagh. PICARD On viewscreen. 22 MAIN VIEWSCREEN (OPTICAL) We see the Klingon vessel on viewscreen. Then the fierce and unmerciful face of CAPTAIN KARGAN fills the viewscreen. PICARD I am Jean-Luc Picard, captain of the Enterprise. KARGAN And I am Captain Kargan of the Pagh. Beam your first officer on board immediately. STAR TREK: "A Matter of Honor" - 12/02/88 - ACT ONE 16. 22 CONTINUED: PICARD We are preparing to do so. You're getting a good man, Captain Kargan. KARGAN Thank you for your opinion but I will judge that for myself. Screen off. The viewscreen goes blank. Mendon comments to Worf. MENDON Not very hospitable are they? Worf responds to him immediately. WORF That is not your concern. Observe your station, Ensign Mendon. MENDON (realizing) Didn't mean to offend you. WORF You didn't... (beat) ... Yet. 22A ANGLE ON SCIENCE SCREEN Mendon turns back to his screen, adjusts a knob so that the schematic on screen starts to turn. It is a skeleton version of the Klingon vessel. Various technical information scrolls across the screen below the blueprint. Then the faint glimmer of a red smear appears on the hull of the ship. 23 CLOSER ON SCREEN Mendon magnifies the screen and brings the red smear to the forefront. Then he punches in an informational request DIRECT SENSOR BEAM. The screen blinks with SUBSTANCE REQUEST then after a beat answers NOT DETERMINED. Mendon types in an additional request, CATEGORY. The scrolled response appears MICROBIOTIC COLONY... BACTERIAL ANALOG... SUBATOMIC... STAR TREK: "A Matter of Honor" - 12/02/88 - ACT ONE 17. 23 CONTINUED: Then DIAGNOSIS, the answer TO BE DETERMINED. Mendon's concentration is interrupted by Captain Picard's orders. PICARD Transporter Room, prepare to beam Commander Riker aboard the Pagh. Picard exits. 24 OMITTED 25 INT. TRANSPORTER ROOM Transporter Chief O'Brien behind the control panel. Riker is already standing on the pad. Picard enters. CHIEF O'BRIEN Ready, Captain. PICARD Good Luck, Commander. RIKER Thank you sir. PICARD On your command, Will. 26 ON RIKER (OPTICAL) He nods. RIKER Energize. He DEMATERIALIZES... Hold on the empty pad for a beat, then: FADE OUT. END OF ACT ONE STAR TREK: "A Matter of Honor" - 12/02/88 - ACT TWO 18. ACT TWO FADE IN: 27 EXT. SPACE - THE ENTERPRISE (OPTICAL) The Klingon vessel Pagh slowly moving away from the Enterprise. 28 INT. MAIN BRIDGE (OPTICAL) Picard eyes the main viewscreen. We see the Pagh diminishing in size as it puts more distance between itself and the Enterprise. Data acting as first officer issues the orders. DATA Viewscreen off. Resume course. WESLEY Aye sir. The viewscreen returns to its original pattern. PICARD Take over Commander Data, I'll be in my quarters. DATA Yes sir. Picard moves away from his Command position. He passes the Science One station, nods to Mendon who seizes this opportunity to attempt to ingratiate himself to his new commander, much to the annoyance of Worf. MENDON Sir, I'm Ensign Mendon. I just wanted to tell you how pleased I am to be aboard the Enterprise. PICARD (distracted) Yes, of course. Nice to have you on board. Picard continues on the move. Mendon takes a few steps with him. STAR TREK: "A Matter of Honor" - 12/02/88 - ACT TWO 19. 28 CONTINUED: MENDON If you have a few minutes I've noted a few procedural items that could speed up operations on the bridge. Picard understanding his Benzite traits, is patient with him. MENDON (continuing) I pick things up very quickly. PICARD I'm sure you do Ensign, you have an excellent record. However, on the Enterprise we use the chain of command. You may report your observations to Lieutenant Worf. MENDON I didn't mean to challenge your authority... (trailing off) ... I just wanted to impress upon you... PICARD No need to apologize Ensign... we should have explained it better during indoctrination. Picard continues on to the turbolift. 28A ANGLE ON WORF He turns to Mendon with a look that could burn holes in your chest. WORF Ensign Mendon... You may impress me. On Mendon's look. 29 EXT. SPACE - THE KLINGON VESSEL "PAGH" (OPTICAL) alone in space. Its harsher angles and look almost scary against the stillness. STAR TREK: "A Matter of Honor" - 12/02/88 - ACT TWO 20. 30 INT. PAGH - CORRIDOR Everything about this ship is utilitarian and lacks the smooth free-flowing lines and coloring of the Enterprise. Riker and a KLINGON OFFICER, who is the TACTICS OFFICER, turn a corner and walk down the corridor. They are both wary but open. The Klingon studies Riker in a speculating manner. Crewmembers also eye Riker in passing. Some with the same reaction as the tactics officer, others simply interested... They all acknowledge Riker with a courteous nod. Riker returns the look. RIKER Something wrong? TACTICS OFFICER No, Commander. (beat) It's just I have never seen anyone of your species before... RIKER (smile) I'm just your average everyday human who happens to be a commander. Now what are your orders? TACTICS OFFICER I am to escort you to the captain. RIKER Proceed. Riker falls in behind the Klingon. 31 thru OMITTED 32 33 INT. PAGH - MAIN BRIDGE Riker and his escort enter onto the bridge. STAR TREK: "A Matter of Honor" - 12/02/88 - ACT TWO 21. 33 CONTINUED: The same sparse but functional look. The bridge is manned by FIVE CREWMEMBERS at varying stations. Captain Kargan is seated in the Command Chair. SECOND OFFICER KLAG stands next to him. They are businesslike in their appraisal of Riker. Firm but not harsh. Riker steps forward. RIKER I am Commander William Riker of the Starship Enterprise. KARGAN That is incorrect. RIKER (beat) I don't understand. KARGAN You are Commander Riker, first officer of the Klingon Cruiser Pagh, or do you intend to disobey Federation orders? RIKER I have no such intentions, Captain. KARGAN Exactly where are your loyalties, Commander? RIKER I'm afraid I still don't understand. Kargan explains carefully in a low, calm voice. KARGAN This ship is equipped with our best weapons and our finest warriors. Although we are on a peaceful mission we are prepared to go into battle instantly. I know I can count on every Klingon warrior in this crew to serve and die in that battle. So I ask again Commander Riker, (beat) where are your loyalties? STAR TREK: "A Matter of Honor" - 12/02/88 - ACT TWO 22. 33 CONTINUED: (2) RIKER I have been assigned here to serve this ship and to obey your orders. I will do exactly that. KARGAN Will you take an oath to that effect? RIKER (meets his gaze) I just did. Klag interjects firmly to Captain Kargan. KLAG yI-Har-Qo! nep-we' ghaH! (Do not believe him! He lies!) KARGAN (to Klag) Hol-chaj yI-jatlh. (Speak in their language.) (to Riker) This is your second officer, Lieutenant Klag. RIKER Was there something you wanted to say to me, Lieutenant? KLAG Yes sir. (beat) I don't believe you. RIKER Then I take it you challenge my authority over you. KLAG Correct. RIKER (to Kargan) And your position in this, Captain? KARGAN (with disdain) I would call it your first command decision. STAR TREK: "A Matter of Honor" - 12/02/88 - ACT TWO 23. 33 CONTINUED: (3) Riker looks around the Main Bridge at the other crewmembers. 33A RIKER'S POV The Klingon crewmembers watch him, waiting to see his reaction to this challenge. 33B SCENE Riker eyes the arrogant stance and size of Klag who gives him an insubordinate snort. Riker realizes he has no choice. He deftly, with no advance warning or aggressive motion, swings a two-handed blow with his full strength and lands a monstrous blow across the chest of Klag. 33C SERIES OF CUTS The sound of the blow against Klag's chest armor echoes through the bridge and is followed by the roar of his breath leaving his body, and then his bulk smashing against the bulkhead and slipping to the ground. Riker calmly steps around the still-seated captain and steps in front of Klag who is struggling to his feet. Klag is almost to his feet when Riker swings again, this time taking the legs out from under Klag who drops to the ground again. The crewmembers are animated and watch the fight with relish, not caring who wins or loses but that there is combat. Riker looks over to the captain. Captain Kargan simply sits back and allows it to continue. Riker turns back to the dazed but still active Klag who is once more attempting to get to his feet. Riker eyes the combatant with a calculated but astonished eye. Klag can barely stand but bravely fights for balance. Riker shrugs, and rams his fist into Klag's stomach, then drops him with another double-handed blow over the head. STAR TREK: "A Matter of Honor" - 12/02/88 - ACT TWO 24. 33D SCENE Kargan applauds with a grunt and a motion of his head. Klag is awake but prone. He struggles to his feet, manages to prop himself against the wall. Klag gives Riker as much a look of respect as he is able... 33E ON RIKER RIKER My oath is between Captain Kargan and myself. Your only concern is how to obey my orders. (beat) Or do you prefer the rank of prisoner over that of lieutenant? Klag calculates Riker carefully, then: KLAG I will take your orders. Riker nods his acceptance. Klag returns it. Kargan interjects: KARGAN And you, Commander Riker, will obey my orders. RIKER Agreed, Captain Kargan. Riker turns away from the captain, and when no one can see him he lets his breath out. 34 EXT. SPACE - THE ENTERPRISE (OPTICAL) continuing on its solo run at impulse. 35 INT. MAIN BRIDGE Picard and Data at Command. Worf at Tactical and Mendon at Science One. All other crew personnel are n.d. WORF Sir, the automatic scan has registered some unknown substance on the aft quarter of the exterior skin of the dorsal fin. STAR TREK: "A Matter of Honor" - 12/02/88 - ACT TWO 25. 35 CONTINUED: PICARD Zero in on that location and define. 36 ANGLE ON SCIENCE STATION SCREEN (OPTICAL) Mendon punches in the various components needed. His screen picks up the schematic of the Enterprise and the designated location of the "unknown substance." MENDON I've located it sir. The dorsal of the Engineering Section. DATA On viewscreen. Focus on area. Magnification factor ten. The matter appears as a sort of haze on the viewscreen. Data walks over to the Science Station. DATA (continuing) Increase magnification to twenty. The viewscreen now shows a more detailed picture of the mass. PICARD Analyze. DATA The substance appears to be a rare form of subatomic "bacteria," capable of doubling every fifteen minutes. It seems to be reacting with two of the compounds present in the Enterprise structure. PICARD Determine origin. Mendon feels that he has his opportunity now. MENDON I noticed it when I did an intensive scan of the Pagh, the Klingon ship. STAR TREK: "A Matter of Honor" - 12/02/88 - ACT TWO 26. 36 CONTINUED: PICARD (reacts) And you informed no one? MENDON I have not yet completed my full analysis. PICARD You are supposed to report whatever is out of the ordinary. This falls into that category. MENDON But sir, as I said I have not yet completed my analysis. It would be improper to report it until then. DATA How did you come by that decision? MENDON It is a Benzite regulation. No officer on the deck of one of our ships would report an occurrence like this until he had a full analysis and a resolution. (beat) I have simply followed proper procedures. On Picard -- he holds for a beat then instructs Mendon calmly but firmly. PICARD It is our procedure for you to bring to the attention of command any possibility of danger. You will not make those decisions. (beat) Is that clear, Ensign Mendon? Mendon is somewhat deflated. MENDON Yes sir. STAR TREK: "A Matter of Honor" - 12/02/88 - ACT TWO 27. 36 CONTINUED: (2) PICARD Fine. Now I want you to complete the analysis and determine the danger not only to this ship but the Klingon vessel as well. MENDON Yes Captain... That will take a couple of hours. PICARD You'll remain at your station until it is complete, then report to me. Lieutenant Worf will supervise you. WORF Yes sir. Picard turns and walks to the turbolift. Worf eyes Mendon, whispers to him. WORF (continuing) ... and then I will instruct you in Enterprise etiquette. On Mendon's look: FADE OUT. END OF ACT TWO STAR TREK: "A Matter of Honor" - 12/02/88 - ACT THREE 28. ACT THREE FADE IN: 37 thru OMITTED 38 38A EXT. SPACE - THE PAGH (OPTICAL) traveling alone. RIKER (V.O.) Commander's log, supplemental, Stardate 42607.8. I have been on the Pagh a short time but long enough to be impressed with the abilities and singlemindedness of the Klingons. I can now see why they have gained the respect of Captain Picard. 39 INT. PAGH - MESS HALL Klingons line the long bench-like table, Riker among them. They are not unfriendly to Riker but they watch him eat like he were on display. A COUPLE OF THE FEMALES, VEKMA one of them, are a little more outgoing and interested. They mumble to each other as they eye Riker. They match Riker in size, maybe even a little bigger. 40 ON RIKER He is aware of the attention he is getting and tries to ignore it and simply fall in unnoticed with the rest of the Klingon personnel. His look alone makes that impossible. The Klingons keep pushing plates in front of him and he takes each one in turn and tries to eat as little as possible while not showing any reaction. TACTICS OFFICER You're not eating very much. RIKER Well, I'm not that hungry. KLAG Is the food all right, Commander? STAR TREK: "A Matter of Honor" - 12/02/88 - ACT THREE 29. 40 CONTINUED: RIKER Fine. The "pipius" was excellent, and I also liked the "Bregit lungs." VEKMA And the Rokeg blood pie? RIKER Excellent. KLAG Then you'll also like this. Klag pushes another bowl in front of him. 40A ON RIKER His face as he examines it. RIKER This is "gagh," isn't it? KLAG Very good. You did some research on our nutritional choices. RIKER Yes... but this is still moving. KLAG "Gagh" is always best when served live. (covering smile) Would you like something "easier"? RIKER Easier? KLAG If Klingon food is too strong for you, perhaps I could get one of the females to breast feed you. Vekma and the other female laugh. The men at the table eye Riker with careful but joking looks. Riker goes along with the mood. STAR TREK: "A Matter of Honor" - 12/02/88 - ACT THREE 30. 40A CONTINUED: RIKER Don't tell me you're still concerned about my not weakening? Klag bellows out in laughter. KLAG Look around. You'll see that there are no old warriors. RIKER Of course, I'm sure they all died with honor. KLAG (slaps him on the back) Exactly. You may live long enough to learn about us. Vekma reaches over to poke Riker in the arm and then the ribs, then comments to ZEGOV and they both break up with laughter. VEKMA He's not very attractive, but I will have him. Riker gives Klag a pleading look. TACTICS OFFICER They are inquisitive. They would like to know how you would endure. RIKER Endure what? KLAG Them. 40B RIKER'S POV The two enormous and violent Klingon women as they stare at him and dwarf him with their size and strength. Riker looks at them innocently. RIKER One or both? STAR TREK: "A Matter of Honor" - 12/02/88 - ACT THREE 31. 40B CONTINUED: Klag holds for a beat then breaks out laughing. The women join in, Vekma smacking Riker across the back in good will and almost dislodging a rib. She moves closer to Riker. On Riker's look... 41 thru OMITTED 47 48 EXT. SPACE - THE ENTERPRISE (OPTICAL) At impulse. To establish. 49 INT. MAIN BRIDGE - SCIENCE ONE A worried looking Ensign Mendon is explaining to Captain Picard and Data as he points to the science screen in front of him which shows the molecular spectroscopic breakdown of the bacteria. MENDON It is confirmed that the organisms feed on some of the compounds that make up the Enterprise hull. PICARD And the Klingon ship, the Pagh? MENDON (hesitates) They are much more susceptible. Their hull contains all of the compounds. PICARD Project your calculations. Mendon depresses a couple of keys and his work screen is filled with a scrolling set of mathematical computations. Data stares at the screen, then hits another button so they project faster. They reach an end. Data looks up. DATA According to the rate of reproduction there should be a twelve centimeter hole in the Klingon hull at this time. STAR TREK: "A Matter of Honor" - 12/02/88 - ACT THREE 32. 50 NEW ANGLE Picard issues orders as he moves to his Command Chair. Data is right behind him. PICARD Signal them at once and advise them. Change our course to attempt an intercept. We will make every attempt to cleanse the vessel and assist with repairs. DATA It will take some time to locate them. They are on undesignated maneuvers in the Pheben solar system. PICARD Then start immediately. Alert Engineering of this situation. Ensign Crusher, adjust course toward the proper sector. WESLEY Aye sir. Shall we prepare for warp speed? PICARD Yes... (beat) ... and hope that we get there in time. 51 EXT. SPACE - THE PAGH (OPTICAL) To establish. The CAMERA MOVING IN to show a hole forming on the hull. 52 INT. PAGH - A CORRIDOR Riker moves down the corridor with an n.d. crewmember. The VOICE of Captain Kargan comes over the ship's speakers. CAPTAIN KARGAN'S COM VOICE Commander Riker to the bridge. Riker and the crewmember stop. Riker changes direction and moves off. STAR TREK: "A Matter of Honor" - 12/02/88 - ACT THREE 33. 53 INT. PAGH - MAIN BRIDGE Captain Kargan waits with Klag and the rest of the bridge crew who are functioning in a normal manner. Riker steps onto the bridge. Captain Kargan motions him over. KARGAN On monitor. Tell me Commander Riker, what do you make of this? 54 ANGLE MONITOR (OPTICAL) Showing the section of the Klingon hull where an apparent haze (and/or bacterial look) surrounds a small hole in the hull. 55 INT. PAGH - MAIN BRIDGE Captain Kargan calls out his orders to the crewmembers present. RIKER I felt no collision. Were we hit by a small meteor? KARGAN There was no collision. RIKER Corrosion then. KARGAN No, not corrosion. RIKER (orders) Science Station, analyze. KARGAN We already have and fortunately the cavity opened into a section that could withstand the change in pressure. RIKER Then what is it? STAR TREK: "A Matter of Honor" - 12/02/88 - ACT THREE 34. 55 CONTINUED: KLAG A space organism eating away at our hull. Our estimate is that in less than eight hours we will have lost too much of our shell to remain intact. RIKER You must have a way to repair it. KARGAN I'm afraid not. RIKER There has to be. Where did this come from? KARGAN "Where" might be the answer. (harsher beat) The only contact we had was with the Enterprise. RIKER There was no direct contact with the Enterprise. KARGAN Tactics Officer, report to Commander Riker. 56 TACTICS STATION The Tactics Officer runs the check on his board. Various information pops up on the screen. TACTICS OFFICER The Enterprise did conduct an intensive scan of this vessel. RIKER It's normal procedure. The other bridge members turn angry looks at Riker. KARGAN What type of beam did the Enterprise use to create this damage in our hull? STAR TREK: "A Matter of Honor" - 12/02/88 - ACT THREE 35. 56 CONTINUED: RIKER None! Why would they do that? We are allies. TACTICS OFFICER My logs indicate that the Enterprise directed an intense scanning beam at this specific area for a duration of two minutes. KARGAN Explain that. RIKER I can't. TACTICS OFFICER It could be a weapon. RIKER Wait a minute. Why? There's no new weapon. The Enterprise has no reason to do this, especially not with me on board. It makes no sense. KARGAN "Why" is no longer important. What is important is our response to this attack. (beat) Engage cloaking device. Change course to intercept the Enterprise. RIKER Captain, what do you intend to do? 57 ON KARGAN His face a mask of fury. He screams out. KARGAN Intend? There is only one response. We intend to attack the Enterprise and destroy it!! STAR TREK: "A Matter of Honor" - 12/02/88 - ACT THREE 36. 57 CONTINUED: On Riker's reaction: FADE OUT. END OF ACT THREE STAR TREK: "A Matter of Honor" - 12/02/88 - ACT FOUR 37. ACT FOUR FADE IN: 58 EXT. SPACE - THE ENTERPRISE (OPTICAL) at warp speed. The signs of the organism still present on the hull. 59 INT. MAIN BRIDGE Ensign Mendon works at the Science Station along with another n.d. officer. Mendon is efficient and intent on his assignment. It is obvious that he knows what he's doing. Wesley is relieved from his station and before he leaves he steps over to stand next to Mendon. 60 CLOSER ANGLE Wesley watches for a beat, then seeing Mendon's growing frustration, he comments: WESLEY You seem to be making progress. You've already eliminated half the possibilities. Mendon looks up at Wesley, realizes that the youth is trying to offer him some support. He nods. MENDON Thank you, but I seem to have become efficient a little later than was needed. It was my responsibility to learn and adapt to the Enterprise's regulations. I didn't do that. WESLEY Not really, it was an error. Captain Picard may not like them, but he does know they can happen from time to time. MENDON I failed, I had an opportunity to show the captain my superior abilities and I failed. I can never recover from that. STAR TREK: "A Matter of Honor" - 12/02/88 - ACT FOUR 38. 60 CONTINUED: WESLEY It was a mistake... That's all. You didn't put the organism on the hull. You discovered it and you were attempting to analyze it. All you did was mess up a little on the ship's protocol. Mendon studies Wesley for a few beats. He steps away from the console to confer with Wesley in a more private fashion. MENDON I know you're trying to be nice to me and I appreciate it. What I don't understand is why? WESLEY Why not? I thought you could use a friend. Mendon eyes Wesley a few beats, then nods his acceptance. MENDON Thank you. I only hope I can learn your ways before I "mess" up again. I imagine my methods seem foolish to you. WESLEY They are different. But that's what this exchange program is all about... You learn the way we do things and bring that information back to your command. It's up to you to decide which way is better for you. (beat) It's easy. All you have to do is learn. 61 ANGLE ON MENDON He holds for a few beats, confirms seriously: STAR TREK: "A Matter of Honor" - 12/02/88 - ACT FOUR 39. 61 CONTINUED: MENDON You're right. I'll try your way... (turns back to Science Station) I'll work even harder than before. I'll succeed brilliantly. On Wesley's look: 62 EXT. SPACE - THE KLINGON VESSEL THE PAGH (OPTICAL) The organism's growth is expanding on the hull. 63 INT. PAGH - MAIN BRIDGE Captain Kargan and Klag maintain the bridge Command Area. KARGAN What is the status? TACTICS OFFICER Unchanged. The rate of increase continues. Kargan contemplates for a beat. KARGAN Commander Riker, check the organism growth with Engineering. Riker seems about to respond but decides the better of it. He exits the bridge. After Riker leaves, Kargan turns to Klag. KARGAN Keep him under scrutiny. I'm not sure I trust him. KLAG I'm not totally convinced that Riker knew of any plot against us. If he did then why would he have come on board? KARGAN Because he was ordered to. 69:[1,#b] STAR TREK: "A Matter of Honor" - 12/02/88 - ACT FOUR 40. 63 CONTINUED: KLAG To die? KARGAN To be ordered to die is an expectation for any officer at any time. KLAG For a Klingon perhaps, but Riker's people do not volunteer for death so easily. Even so, Riker may be a spy, but he's no coward. KARGAN That only proves that he is intelligent and that you may not be as strong as you used to be. 64 ANGLE ON TACTICS OFFICER He becomes more alert, announces: TACTICS OFFICER Captain, we have picked up the Enterprise. KARGAN So soon? TACTICS OFFICER The Enterprise is on an intercept course with us. Kargan and Klag react. Riker re-enters the bridge. Kargan turns on him in anger. KARGAN You almost had me believing that perhaps this was a misunderstanding. RIKER Yes... So? KARGAN The Enterprise has changed course and is following us. Why? RIKER I don't know. Let's ask them. STAR TREK: "A Matter of Honor" - 12/02/88 - ACT FOUR 41. 64 CONTINUED: KARGAN The reason is obvious. Their intent is clear. How long before we have contact? TACTICS OFFICER Less than fifteen minutes, sir. KARGAN Put the ship on battle alert. Arm all photon torpedoes and put phasers on full power. Let them charge into their destruction. 65 thru OMITTED 66 67 EXT. SPACE - THE ENTERPRISE (OPTICAL) moving through at warp. The organism still present. 68 INT. MAIN BRIDGE Picard and Data at Command. Wesley and an n.d. at forward positions; Worf, Ensign Mendon, and n.d. crewmembers at the aft command positions. WESLEY Sir, bearings show that we should be in contact with the Klingon ship. DATA Slow to impulse speed. Continue on course. WESLEY Aye sir, impulse speed. WORF Hailing frequencies open. There is no response. PICARD Continue to transmit. DATA The Pagh is either destroyed or cloaked. STAR TREK: "A Matter of Honor" - 12/02/88 - ACT FOUR 42. 68 CONTINUED: PICARD Begin intensive scan for debris. Conduct a thorough search of the area. 69 OMITTED 70 INT. PAGH - MAIN BRIDGE staffed as previously. Riker is on the bridge facing Kargan. There is an obvious tension present. TACTICS OFFICER The Enterprise has slowed to impulse speed and is making an intensive sweep. KARGAN Hold your position. Let them come to us. RIKER They may be here to help you... Don't be a fool! KARGAN (rages) Do not forget my rank. RIKER I haven't. I am simply trying to get you to understand. KARGAN I fully understand... Now you understand. (beat) I am still the captain of this vessel and you are still crew and sworn to obey me. You gave me your oath. RIKER Yes sir, I did. STAR TREK: "A Matter of Honor" - 12/02/88 - ACT FOUR 43. 70 CONTINUED: KARGAN Then fulfill that oath and serve this ship as you swore to. (beat) Tell me of the surest method of attack against the Enterprise. 71 ON RIKER He eyes the captain a few beats. RIKER I can't. KARGAN You must tell me. It is a matter of honor and loyalty. RIKER I cannot surrender the secrets of Starfleet and the Enterprise to you. KARGAN Then if your word is no good, how can we trust any of your people? RIKER (strong) I won't break any vow I took in the past. I also swore a loyalty to your ship and I will keep that. KARGAN (yelling back) They are in conflict! RIKER No sir, they are not! I will obey your orders. I will serve this ship as first officer, and in an attack against the Enterprise I will die along with this crew... but I will not dishonor my oath to the Enterprise. Riker glares at Kargan who holds his stare a beat, then nods in agreement. STAR TREK: "A Matter of Honor" - 12/02/88 - ACT FOUR 44. 71 CONTINUED: KARGAN If you had agreed to disclose those facts about the Enterprise I would have labelled you a traitor and killed you on the spot... (beat) Instead you will die with us. You will die like a Klingon. On Riker -- he nods his acceptance of his fate. RIKER So be it. 72 EXT. SPACE - THE ENTERPRISE (OPTICAL) continuing on its orbit at impulse. 73 INT. MAIN BRIDGE - SCIENCE ONE STATION Ensign Mendon studies his screen and then reacts. He punches in one more code, seems satisfied and then moves from his station towards the captain. 74 AT COMMAND Mendon stands in front of the captain. He is ill at ease but trying to maintain what he thinks is the proper protocol. MENDON Sir, I have something to report to you immediately. Worf seems like he's about to reach over the railings and snatch Mendon by the skull. Picard restrains his actions with a glance. PICARD Go ahead, Ensign. MENDON I have managed to isolate the organism on our hull. PICARD Spare me the technical details... just the results. STAR TREK: "A Matter of Honor" - 12/02/88 - ACT FOUR 45. 74 CONTINUED: MENDON They are of a sub-micron form. They are controllable and can be removed from the hulls of both ships. PICARD (relieved, but covers) Thank you Ensign, well done. Prepare whatever procedures are necessary. (to Worf) Lieutenant Worf, add this information to hailing messages. WORF Aye sir. Still no response. Picard's concerned look. 75 INT. PAGH - MAIN BRIDGE The tactics officer motions Klag to his station. Klag observes the screen for a few beats then announces: KLAG The Enterprise has changed hailing messages. They now include a promise of cleaning the organisms and assisting in repairs. RIKER They mean it... They will help. KARGAN And I mean what I say. (stronger) Arm all weapons... Prepare for attack... FADE OUT. END OF ACT FOUR STAR TREK: "A Matter of Honor" - 12/02/88 - ACT FIVE 46. ACT FIVE FADE IN: 76 EXT. SPACE - THE ENTERPRISE (OPTICAL) We see only the Enterprise on screen. PICARD (V.O.) Captain's log, supplemental, Stardate 42608.2. Although our search has been extensive, we are still unable to locate the Klingon ship or any debris. The absence of both leaves us puzzled and somewhat tentative. 77 INT. MAIN BRIDGE staffed as in the previous scene. The atmosphere on the bridge is tense, all members waiting for Picard's decision. DATA Considering the absence of debris, it is reasonable to assume the Klingon vessel is in the vicinity and cloaked. PICARD Agreed. DATA Since we do not know their intent I recommend we go to Red Alert. PICARD (thoughtful for a beat) Make it so. Picard shows the tension of the situation. 78 INT. PAGH - MAIN BRIDGE Captain Kargan is intent on his own plan of attack. TACTICS OFFICER The Enterprise has raised its shields. STAR TREK: "A Matter of Honor" - 12/02/88 - ACT FIVE 47. 78 CONTINUED: RIKER It is normal procedure when entering into a suspicious situation. The act is not aggressive. The Enterprise will not fire first. KARGAN Then they are fools, for we will. RIKER (a beat, then) You'll get only one shot. KARGAN We will only need one. Arm all phasers and torpedoes. Prepare to fire them simultaneously. RIKER Then I recommend you do not fire until you are within forty thousand kilometers. KLAG Why? RIKER It will reduce their response time. Both Klag and the captain give Riker a grudging nod of admiration. KLAG You are honoring your promise to serve us. RIKER Would you do less? The Klingons nod their acceptance of this. KARGAN No. (beat) You will give the order to fire, Commander Riker. (to Klag) Call out distances. (beat) Any questions, Mister Riker? STAR TREK: "A Matter of Honor" - 12/02/88 - ACT FIVE 48. 79 ON RIKER his face a mask, the skin drawn tight. RIKER Just something I have to say... (beat) ... I dispute your judgment. Your reasons for forcing this confrontation are not valid. KARGAN Are you finished? RIKER Yes sir. KARGAN Then commence with attack as ordered. Klag begins his countdown... KLAG Fifty-five thousand kilometers and closing. Riker removes the small transponder device supplied by Worf, looks at it carefully, then glances over to Kargan. 80 KARGAN returns his look and then observes the apparatus in Riker's hand. KARGAN Is that a weapon? RIKER No sir, it is a signaling device. KARGAN Hand it to me, Commander. 81 SCENE As Riker steps over to hand it to him, he flips it on. Only a small signal light appears on the apparatus... He hands it to Kargan who starts to examine it. STAR TREK: "A Matter of Honor" - 12/02/88 - ACT FIVE 49. 82 INT. ENTERPRISE - MAIN BRIDGE Worf at his station suddenly becomes alert. He adjusts a switch and then quickly announces: WORF We are getting an emergency signal from a command transponder. Location nine-three-five mark six-one-three... Frequency and code designate it as Commander Riker. The members on the bridge become more alert. Troi averts her eyes to hide her emotion. PICARD (touches com link) Chief O'Brien, align with emergency transponder signal. 83 INT. TRANSPORTER ROOM - INTERCUT AS NEEDED Empty except for Chief O'Brien. CHIEF O'BRIEN Yes Captain. We are not yet in safe range for a transfer and defensive shields are still in place. PICARD We may have to stretch it a little. On my command. WORF Forty-eight thousand. DATA Lieutenant Worf to the Transporter Room. Doctor Pulaski will accompany you. Mendon take over the count. MENDON Yes sir. Forty-five thousand and still closing. Worf gives Mendon one last warning look, then moves from his station. MENDON Forty-four thousand. STAR TREK: "A Matter of Honor" - 12/02/88 - ACT FIVE 50. 83 CONTINUED: PICARD Transporter Room, ready. You will control defensive shields... 84 INT. TRANSPORTER ROOM Worf and Pulaski have just entered. CHIEF O'BRIEN Ready sir. MENDON Forty thousand... 85 INT. PAGH - MAIN BRIDGE KLAG Forty thousand. KARGAN Prepare to drop cloaking shields and fire. Steady... 86 INT. ENTERPRISE - MAIN BRIDGE PICARD Transporter Room, energize. 87 INT. TRANSPORTER ROOM The Transporter Chief throws the necessary switches. 88 INT. PAGH - MAIN BRIDGE (OPTICAL) Captain Kargan DEMATERIALIZES in front of the crew. Klag is stunned, then reacts. Riker has a slight smile on his face, he turns and tenses. Klag with a growl, advances on Riker. STAR TREK: "A Matter of Honor" - 12/02/88 - ACT FIVE 51. 88 CONTINUED: RIKER Hold where you are Klag. I have relieved Captain Kargan. He was acting in an irrational manner. I am now your captain!! (beat) Serve this ship as I have! Klag falters a beat, unsure... then slowly stands upright in acceptance. Riker nods. 89 INT. ENTERPRISE - TRANSPORTER ROOM (OPTICAL) Uncertain, Captain Kargan on the pad. He spins his head around unsure. Then he spots Worf and crouches. Pulaski backs away. CHIEF O'BRIEN Defensive shields back in place. KARGAN Who are you? WORF I am Lieutenant Worf of the Starship Enterprise. Kargan reacts, screaming out as he reaches for his sidearm. KARGAN Riker has no honor... He tricked me!! As Kargan starts to aim his weapon, Worf fires his hand phaser. It hits Kargan and he drops. Worf lets out a celebration call then: 90 ANOTHER ANGLE Pulaski moves forward quickly, shoves Worf aside to examine the prone Captain. PULASKI He's barely stunned. WORF (with pride) Of course, he is a Klingon captain. STAR TREK: "A Matter of Honor" - 12/02/88 - ACT FIVE 52. 90 CONTINUED: PULASKI That's great, but where's Will Riker? Worf reacts for a beat, then helps Kargan to his feet. 91 INT. PAGH - MAIN BRIDGE Klag is still tense. Riker turns to the Tactics Officer. RIKER Cloaking shields off. The Tactics Officer stalls for a beat, not sure what to do. 92 CLOSER SHOT Riker steps forward and blocks his view of any of the crew and faces him down. RIKER Obey my orders. TACTICS OFFICER We will be destroyed. RIKER If we are, it will be in battle and I will die with you. (harder) Now, cloaking shields off! 93 ANGLE The Tactics Officer throws the switch. 94 EXT. SPACE - THE ENTERPRISE (OPTICAL) Enterprise in its orbit... The Klingon ship Pagh suddenly appears from nowhere. STAR TREK: "A Matter of Honor" - 12/02/88 - ACT FIVE 53. 95 INT. ENTERPRISE - MAIN BRIDGE (OPTICAL) The Pagh appears on the main viewscreen. The bridge crew reacts but still remains professional. Captain Kargan is also present. DATA It is the Pagh sir. It has all armament locked on us and ready to fire. PICARD Hold position. Hailing frequencies open. (beat) Calling the Pagh. This is the Enterprise. We are here to assist you. Do not fire. KARGAN They will not believe you. 96 INT. PAGH - MAIN BRIDGE (OPTICAL) Riker has heard the Enterprise call. It continues: PICARD'S COM VOICE Pagh... Do you read me?? Riker looks around at the Klingon bridge crew. He then sounds very much like a Klingon as he bellows out: RIKER Enterprise, this is Captain William Riker of the Klingon vessel, the Pagh. (pause) I order you to lower your shields and surrender. 96A INT. ENTERPRISE - MAIN BRIDGE The reactions of the crew. 96B ON PICARD A tense look slowly becomes a slight smile. STAR TREK: "A Matter of Honor" - 12/02/88 - ACT FIVE 54. 96B CONTINUED: PICARD Lower shields. (beat) Surrender as ordered. Kargan steps forward in a rage. KARGAN I demand to be beamed back aboard my vessel. PICARD (nods) Transporter Chief, prepare to beam Captain Kargan aboard the Pagh. (to Riker, who has heard) Captain Riker, preparations are ready for immediate repairs to your ship. RIKER Thank you, Captain Picard. Picard's reaction. 97 OMITTED 97A INT. PAGH - MAIN BRIDGE Captain Kargan steps onto the bridge. He is tentative, unsure. Kargan looks around at the bridge crew who eye him with a kind of disapproval and uncomfortableness that Kargan recognizes. He turns to Riker. KARGAN You should have killed me. RIKER I don't want your command. KARGAN You tricked me so you could have it. RIKER And I give it back to you now. STAR TREK: "A Matter of Honor" - 12/02/88 - ACT FIVE 55. 97B ON KARGAN His confidence returns slightly, the force of his personality taking over. KARGAN Then return to your position. 97C ON RIKER He also senses that he must do something more to return Kargan to his proper status. He feels the responsibility for placing Kargan in this situation. He and Klag exchange a look, a very slight nod passes between them, then Riker's look and attitude change to one of open insubordination. He almost sneers at Kargan. 97D NEW ANGLE Kargan recognizes it, roars out in fury, charges at Riker, and swings a devastating blow with his fist. 97E SCENE Riker is sent skidding across the bridge floor and up against the bulkhead where he lies stunned but aware. Klag steps next to Riker, then turns to face Kargan... Klag's hand reaches down towards his weapon... 97F CLOSER Riker grabs his wrist to restrain him. Klag looks down at bruised but alert Riker who gives Klag an eye signal. RIKER No more, Captain Kargan... 97G SCENE Kargan fills his chest, glares around the ship, and then at Riker... He holds a beat, then orders Klag: KARGAN Get him off my ship! KLAG Yes, Captain. STAR TREK: "A Matter of Honor" - 12/02/88 - ACT FIVE 56. 97G CONTINUED: Klag reaches down to assist Riker to his feet. Their eyes meet. Klag whispers to him. KLAG (continuing) You understand the Klingons better than I thought. RIKER (nods) Thank you, my friend. Klag assists a battered Riker past a triumphant Captain Kargan. 98 EXT. SPACE - THE ENTERPRISE/THE PAGH (OPTICAL) the Enterprise assisting the Pagh in repairs. 99 INT. ENTERPRISE - TRANSPORTER ROOM (OPTICAL) Worf and Picard are present to see Riker MATERIALIZE on the pad, bruised but healthy. 100 thru OMITTED 101 102 SCENE Picard turns to Riker. RIKER That might be one of the shortest assignments in the history of Starfleet. PICARD You're wrong, Number One... it was almost the longest. (beat) You did well. RIKER Thank you. I learned quite a bit. PICARD Apparently not how to duck. STAR TREK: "A Matter of Honor" - 12/02/88 - ACT FIVE 57. 102 CONTINUED: RIKER When not to duck would be more accurate. Picard eyes him a few beats, then smiles... PICARD If that was the intention... Welcome aboard. They both smile. Worf stands in the b.g., hiding all emotions and trying to look bored by it all. Riker steps over to him... RIKER Thank you. Your little toy worked. WORF I'm glad it did, sir. RIKER You come from a very brave and unique race. I'm glad you're here on the Enterprise. Worf swells slightly, covers his reaction. WORF Thank you, Commander... (beat) ... and welcome home. FADE OUT. END OF ACT FIVE THE END STAR TREK: THE NEXT GENERATION "The Measure of a Man" #40272-135 Written by Melinda Snodgrass Directed by Robert Scheerer THE WRITING CREDITS MAY NOT BE FINAL AND SHOULD NOT BE USED FOR PUBLICITY OR ADVERTISING PURPOSES WITHOUT FIRST CHECKING WITH THE TELEVISION LEGAL DEPARTMENT. Copyright 1988 Paramount Pictures Corporation. All Rights Reserved. This script is not for publication or reproduction. No one is authorized to dispose of same. If lost or destroyed, please notify the Script Department. 2ND REV. FINAL DRAFT DECEMBER 14, 1988 STAR TREK: "The Measure of a Man" - 12/14/88 - CAST STAR TREK: THE NEXT GENERATION "The Measure of a Man" CAST PICARD CAPTAIN PHILLIPA LOUVOIS RIKER ADMIRAL NAKAMURA (MALE) DATA COMMANDER BRUCE MADDOX PULASKI TROI Voice-Over GEORDI COMPUTER VOICE WORF WESLEY GUINAN O'BRIEN Non-Speaking CREWMEMBERS Voice-Over COMPUTER VOICE STAR TREK: "The Measure of a Man" - 12/14/88 - SETS STAR TREK: THE NEXT GENERATION "The Measure of a Man" SETS INTERIORS EXTERIORS USS ENTERPRISE USS ENTERPRISE MAIN BRIDGE STARBASE 173 TRANSPORTER ROOM CORRIDOR TURBOLIFT CAPTAIN'S READY ROOM DATA'S QUARTERS OBSERVATION LOUNGE GYMNASIUM COMPUTER ROOM TEN-FORWARD STARBASE 173 RESTAURANT JUDGE ADVOCATE GENERAL'S OFFICE COURTROOM LOUNGE STAR TREK: "The Measure of a Man" - 12/14/88 - TEASER 1. STAR TREK: THE NEXT GENERATION "The Measure of a Man" TEASER FADE IN: 1 EXT. SPACE - THE ENTERPRISE (OPTICAL) in route to Starbase one-seven-three. PICARD (V.O.) Captain's log, stardate 42523.7. We are in route to newly established Starbase one-seven-three for port call. Crew rotation is scheduled, and we will offload experiment modules. 2 thru OMITTED 3 3A INT. ENTERPRISE - DATA'S QUARTERS RIKER is seated shuffling cards. O'BRIEN, GEORDI and DATA pulling out chairs. Data wears an eyeshade. Data is almost into the chair when O'Brien stops him. O'BRIEN Hold it, that's my chair. My luck is always lousy unless I start on the dealer's left. DATA That would seem to be rank superstition. O'BRIEN Bitter experience has taught me it's a fundamental truth. RIKER (slapping the cards down in front of O'Brien who cuts them) The game is five card stud, nothing's wild. STAR TREK: "The Measure of a Man" - 12/14/88 - TEASER 2. 3A CONTINUED: DATA This game is exceedingly simple. With only fifty-two cards, seventeen of which I will see, and four players there are a limited number of possible winning combinations. GEORDI There's more to it than just the cards. DATA The bets will give an indication of the relative strengths of each hand. O'BRIEN (with a wink to Riker) Time to pluck a pigeon. Riker deals the cards. Betting begins with O'Brien, and proceeds around the table. The third card is dealt. O'Brien and Geordi pass, Data and Riker bid. Fourth card, more bids and passes. Fifth card. Bets are placed. Riker grins. GEORDI I think I'm in trouble. He folds. RIKER I'll raise five. O'BRIEN Too rich for me. He tosses his cards. DATA I will raise you three. RIKER Your three and five more. Data is becoming increasingly puzzled. He considers his cards, Riker's cards, considers the pot, studies Riker's face. STAR TREK: "The Measure of a Man" - 12/14/88 - TEASER 3. 3A CONTINUED: (2) DATA Is this what is known as the poker face? RIKER Are you playing or not? DATA I will fold. Riker rakes in the chips, then turns over his cards revealing a busted hand. Data turns his cards face up. He held a winning hand. DATA (continuing) You had nothing. GEORDI He bluffed you, Data. DATA It makes very little sense to bet when you cannot win. RIKER But I did win. I was gambling that you wouldn't call. DATA But how can you tell? O'BRIEN Instinct, Data, instinct. (he shuffles the cards) The game is seven card high/low with a buy on the last card. And just to make it interesting the man with the axe takes all. Data is looking completely bemused as the cards are dealt. 3B OMITTED 3C EXT. SPACE - THE ENTERPRISE (OPTICAL) docking at Starbase one-seven-three. STAR TREK: "The Measure of a Man" - 12/14/88 - TEASER 4. 3D INT. STARBASE 173 - RESTAURANT It's very high tech. PICARD sits alone at a table. Before him is a cup. He suddenly straightens in his chair as a beautiful WOMAN in her late forties enters. She is in a Starfleet uniform which clearly is a surprise to Picard. She is very poised, very professional, and she scans the room as if searching for someone. Her eyes light on Picard; and a funny, ironic little smile curves her lips. Picard rises and walks up to the passway to join her. 3E ANOTHER ANGLE PICARD (with a little edge on the words) My God, if it isn't Phillipa Louvois, back in uniform. PHILLIPA Don't gloat, Picard. It's almost more irritating then when you're being self-righteous. PICARD Unbelievable, after all this time, and we're picking up the threads of old fights as if we'd never been apart. PHILLIPA Ain't love wonderful. FADE OUT. END OF TEASER STAR TREK: "The Measure of a Man" - 12/14/88 - ACT ONE 5. ACT ONE FADE IN: A4 EXT. SPACE - THE ENTERPRISE (OPTICAL) in dock at Starbase one-seven-three. 4 INT. STARBASE 173 - LOUNGE Phillipa and Picard standing on the pass-through. PICARD What are you doing out here? PHILLIPA I'm in charge of the Sector twenty-three JAG office. I'll be making some good law. (a rueful smile) And maybe do a little good along the way, too. What do you think? PICARD Anything is possible. You returned to Starfleet. PHILLIPA I had to, it's the most exciting and worthwhile place to be. PICARD You didn't have to leave. PHILLIPA They forced me out. PICARD No. That was your own damn stubborn pride. PHILLIPA (becoming heated) When I prosecuted you in the Stargazer court-martial I was doing my job. PICARD No, you went way beyond doing the job. You enjoyed it. STAR TREK: "The Measure of a Man" - 12/14/88 - ACT ONE 6. 4 CONTINUED: PHILLIPA Not true! A court-martial is standard when a ship has been lost. I had a duty as an officer in the Judge Advocate General. PICARD Flummery, you've always enjoyed the adversarial process more than arriving at the truth. They both seem to realize that they are skating dangerously close to very thin ice. They literally physically turn away from each other while they recover their tempers. Picard continues a little gruffly: PICARD (continuing) Well, I hope you've learned a little wisdom. PHILLIPA (lightly) Watch it, you're doing it again. PICARD (forcing a smile, and we see the tension leech from his body) I'm not being self-righteous. Merely right. PHILLIPA A distinction, I would submit, without a difference. PICARD Come and sit down. As they walk down off the pass-through and seat themselves she says: PHILLIPA I can't stay long. I'm meeting someone for dinner. PICARD But he hasn't arrived yet. PHILLIPA What makes you think it's a man? STAR TREK: "The Measure of a Man" - 12/14/88 - ACT ONE 7. 4 CONTINUED: (2) PICARD Past experience. PHILLIPA Cute. Try to remember that you're an officer and a gentleman. (she rises) You know, I never thought I would say this, but it is good to see you again. You're still a damn sexy man, Picard. This rocks him back in his chair. PHILLIPA (continuing; very brisk) So buy me dinner. PICARD I thought you were meeting someone? ADMIRAL NAKAMURA enters. With him is BRUCE MADDOX. They cross to the table. PHILLIPA (struggling with herself) Once again you're always right, Jean-Luc. Phillipa whirls for a grand exit, and almost bumps noses with Nakamura. PHILLIPA (continuing) Admiral. NAKAMURA Captain Louvois. You're acquainted with Captain Picard? PHILLIPA Yes, we're old... friends. Phillipa exits. NAKAMURA Captain, good to see you again. May I present Commander Bruce Maddox. He has an interesting proposal for you. STAR TREK: "The Measure of a Man" - 12/14/88 - ACT ONE 8. 4 CONTINUED: (3) Nakamura and Maddox exchange glances. NAKAMURA (continuing) But that can wait until later. I'm eager to see the Enterprise. Picard looks from Nakamura to Maddox. Whatever this "proposal" is, it is going to have import for himself and his ship. 4A EXT. SPACE - THE ENTERPRISE as before, docked at Starbase one-seven-three. 5 INT. TRANSPORTER ROOM (OPTICAL) Riker watches as Picard, Admiral Nakamura, and Maddox BEAM ABOARD. SOUND EFFECT in the b.g. as Nakamura is piped aboard. PICARD Admiral, Commander Maddox, allow me to introduce my first officer, Commander William Riker. NAKAMURA Pleasure, Commander. They shake hands and begin walking toward the doors. PICARD How long has it been since we've seen each other? NAKAMURA You'd just been assigned as an ensign aboard the old Reliant. PICARD (lightly) Oh yes, and I seem to remember a certain young lieutenant who had harsh words about snap inspections, and the admirals who pulled them. NAKAMURA The situation changes when you've got the admiral's stripes. STAR TREK: "The Measure of a Man" - 12/14/88 - ACT ONE 9. 5 CONTINUED: The party steps through the doors and into the Enterprise corridor. 6 INT. CORRIDOR NAKAMURA There isn't an officer in Starfleet who wouldn't give his right leg to be where you are -- Captain of the Starship Enterprise. I'm no different. I just have the power to get aboard. PICARD Happy to have you, Admiral. They enter the turbolift. 7 INT. TURBOLIFT PICARD Bridge. Congratulations on your appointment. Command of a Starbase. NAKAMURA Thank you, but I miss a ship. A bit of advice, Captain. Don't ever become an admiral. They make you an administrator. They arrive, and step out onto the bridge. 8 INT. MAIN BRIDGE RIKER Admiral on the bridge. On the bridge are Riker, WORF, Data, and WESLEY. Everyone stiffens slightly, and looks around. Maddox and Data lock eyes, and Data stands. Picard and Nakamura converse as they tour the bridge. Riker notices the by-play and frowns. PICARD I was a little surprised at the decision to put a base in force this close to the Neutral Zone. STAR TREK: "The Measure of a Man" - 12/14/88 - ACT ONE 10. 8 CONTINUED: NAKAMURA As you know, we've had disturbing news from both sides of the zone. We're here to respond as needed. And it won't hurt to have the Romulans know we're nearby. They complete their circuit of the bridge. NAKAMURA (continuing) Well, Captain, I thank you for this opportunity. For five hundred years ships who've borne the name Enterprise have been a legend. This one is no different. MADDOX (impatiently) Admiral. NAKAMURA Oh yes, Captain. Commander Maddox is here to do some work on your android. Please take care of him. PICARD Lieutenant Worf. He indicates and Worf escorts the admiral off the bridge. MADDOX How have you been, Data? DATA My condition does not alter with the passage of time, Commander. PICARD The two of you are acquainted? MADDOX Yes, I evaluated Data when it first applied to the Academy. DATA And were the sole member of the committee to oppose my entrance on the grounds that I was not a sentient being. STAR TREK: "The Measure of a Man" - 12/14/88 - ACT ONE 11. 8 CONTINUED: (2) PICARD What exactly will this work entail? MADDOX I'm going to disassemble Data. PICARD (pausing for a beat to assimilate this) I think we will remove this discussion to the lounge. Riker, Maddox, Data, and Picard walk to the doors. 8A INT. OBSERVATION LOUNGE (OPTICAL) Everyone seated around the table. PICARD Explain this procedure. MADDOX Ever since I first saw Data at its entrance evaluation at Starfleet Academy, I've wanted to understand it. I became a student of the works of Doctor Noonien Soong -- Data's creator. I've tried to continue his work, and I believe I am very close to the breakthrough which will enable me to duplicate Soong's work and replicate this. (Maddox points to Data) But as a first step I must disassemble and study it. Data is going to be my guide. PICARD Data? DATA It sounds intriguing. PICARD How will you proceed? STAR TREK: "The Measure of a Man" - 12/14/88 - ACT ONE 12. 8A CONTINUED: MADDOX I'll run a full diagnostic on Data, evaluating the condition of its software. I'll then dump its core memory into the starbase mainframe computer and begin a detailed analysis of its construction. DATA You have constructed a positronic brain? MADDOX Yes. DATA Have you determined how the electron resistance across the neural filaments is to be resolved? MADDOX Not precisely. DATA That would seem to be a necessary first step. MADDOX I'm confident that I'll have the answer once I've examine the filament links in your anterior cortex. DATA But if the answer is not forthcoming, your model will not function. MADDOX I don't anticipate a problem. PICARD You seem a little vague on the specifics. What are the risks to Commander Data? MADDOX Negligible. STAR TREK: "The Measure of a Man" - 12/14/88 - ACT ONE 13. 8A CONTINUED: (2) DATA (to Picard) His basic research lacks the specifics necessary to support an experiment of this magnitude. PICARD Data is a valued member of my bridge crew. Based on what I've heard I cannot allow him to submit to your experiment. MADDOX I thought this might be your attitude, Captain. (he removes a message disk from his pocket, and extends it to Picard) Here are Starfleet's transfer orders separating Commander Data from the Enterprise, and reassigning it to Starbase one-seven-three under my command. Data, I'll expect you in my office at nine hundred hours tomorrow. Focus on Picard as we: FADE OUT. END OF ACT ONE STAR TREK: "The Measure of a Man" - 12/14/88 - ACT TWO 14. ACT TWO FADE IN: 9 INT. CAPTAIN'S READY ROOM - VIEWSCREEN (OPTICAL) Admiral Nakamura on the screen. Picard eyes him with some hostility. NAKAMURA Look, it's a transfer, like any other transfer. PICARD No, it's not. This is one of my key officers, and he's been removed without consulting me. NAKAMURA I'm sorry about that, but Commander Maddox's work in robotics is considered critical by Starfleet Command. Think what's at stake here. If Commander Maddox can succeed in duplicating Noonien Soong's work other captains on other ships would have the advantage you now enjoy: a Data on every bridge. You don't want Data transferred, fine. There's an easy solution. Have him work with Commander Maddox. Nakamura out. Picard stares at the blank viewscreen, then rises and paces the room. The DOOR CHIME SOUNDS arresting him in his nervous preambulations. PICARD Come. Data enters. DATA You sent for me, sir? Picard returns to his desk, seats himself, and regards Data intently. PICARD Please, sit down. We've got a problem. STAR TREK: "The Measure of a Man" - 12/14/88 - ACT TWO 15. 9 CONTINUED: DATA I find myself in agreement with that assessment of the situation, sir. PICARD Your service to this ship has been exemplary. I don't want to lose you. DATA I am pleased to hear you say so. Thank you. PICARD There is a solution which presents itself. DATA Yes, sir? PICARD Undergo the procedure, then the transfer order becomes moot. DATA I will not submit to this procedure. Picard rises, and seats himself on the corner of the desk, closing the distance with Data. PICARD Data, I understand your objections to this procedure, but I also have to consider Starfleet's interests. If Commander Maddox is correct there is a possibility that many more beings such as yourself could be constructed. DATA True, but possibility is a word which can encompass any number of outcomes -- good and bad. PICARD But if he's right, Starfleet would be immeasurably enriched. STAR TREK: "The Measure of a Man" - 12/14/88 - ACT TWO 16. 9 CONTINUED: (2) DATA Captain, I am a Starfleet officer. Can they force me to do this? PICARD It's precisely because you are a Starfleet officer that they can. We take an oath to serve. In this case this is the form your service is taking. DATA Sir, Lieutenant La Forge's eyes are far superior to human biological eyes, true? PICARD Yes. DATA Then why are not all human officers required to have their eyes replaced with cybernetic implants? Picard is utterly at a loss for words. We can see the confusion on his face as he struggles for an answer to this unanswerable remark. Data rises with great dignity. DATA (continuing) I see. It is precisely because I am not human. PICARD That will be all, Mister Data. (jabs open the com on his desk) Computer. Pull all relevant Starfleet regulations concerning officer transfers. COMPUTER VOICE Working. Page after page of regulations begin to scroll across the screen. Picard, knuckling his chin, studies them in frowning abstraction. STAR TREK: "The Measure of a Man" - 12/14/88 - ACT TWO 17. 10 INT. JAG OFFICE Phillipa at her desk working. Picard enters. She looks up in surprise. PHILLIPA My God, twice in as many days. PICARD I need your help. PHILLIPA An historic moment. PICARD I've been trying to make heads or tails of this gibberish, and it's finally defeated me. My android officer has been transferred so he can undergo a highly dangerous procedure. I want to stop it. PHILLIPA He can refuse to undergo this procedure, but we can't stop the transfer. PICARD Once Maddox has Data under his control anything could happen. I don't trust that man. PHILLIPA We agree to certain risks when we join Starfleet. PICARD (pacing) Acceptable risks, justified risks, yes, but I can't accept this. It's unfair and unjust. What about his rights... PHILLIPA All this passion over a machine. PICARD (raising a warning finger) Don't start. Is there an option? STAR TREK: "The Measure of a Man" - 12/14/88 - ACT TWO 18. 10 CONTINUED: PHILLIPA There's always an option. He can resign. Phillipa suddenly rises and comes around the desk to Picard. She is very close, her body language is one of yearning, but her voice still has that flippant tone. PHILLIPA (continuing) So you came to me for help. PICARD (stiff because he thinks she's taunting him) Yes, I came to you. You're the JAG officer in this sector. I had to come to you. He starts to leave. PHILLIPA Wait! I didn't mean it that way. I'm... I'm glad that you thought you could... well, come to me. PICARD Trust is too painful a word. PHILLIPA I wish things were different for us. 11 INT. DATA'S QUARTERS (OPTICAL) Data is packing. A handgrip lies open on the desk top. There is a holocube on the top to the clothing. Data triggers it, and a miniature of Tasha Yar stands on the desk. He regards the image for a few seconds, then removes a box from a desk drawer. Opens it and studies his medals. Places it in the case. Finally he lifts an antique bound book. As he replaces the book, Maddox enters. Maddox lifts out the book, finds a marker at the sonnet, looks surprised. STAR TREK: "The Measure of a Man" - 12/14/88 - ACT TWO 19. 11 CONTINUED: MADDOX "When in disgrace with fortune and men's eyes, I all alone beweep my outcast state... " Is it just words to you, or do you fathom the meaning? DATA It is customary to request permission before entering an individual's quarters. MADDOX I thought we could talk this out, that I could try to reassure you. Your memories and knowledge will remain intact. DATA Reduced to mere sterile facts of the events. The substance, the flavor of the moment could be lost. Take games of chance... MADDOX Games of chance? DATA Yes, I had read and absorbed every treatise and textbook upon the subject, and felt myself tolerably well prepared for the experience. Yet, when I finally played poker, I discovered that the reality bore little resemblance to the rules. MADDOX The point being? DATA That while I believe that you can download the information contained in the positronic brain, I do not think you have acquired the expertise necessary to preserve the heart of those experiences. There is an ineffable quality to memory that I do not believe can survive the shutdown of my core. STAR TREK: "The Measure of a Man" - 12/14/88 - ACT TWO 20. 11 CONTINUED: (2) MADDOX (looking at Data with wonder) Ineffable quality. I would rather that we had done this together, but one way or the other we are doing it. You're under my command. DATA No, sir, I am not under your nor anyone else's command. I have resigned from Starfleet. MADDOX Resigned. You can't. DATA I regret the decision, but I must. I am the culmination of one man's dream. This is not ego or vanity, but when Doctor Soong created me he added to the substance of the universe. If by your experiments I am destroyed, something unique and wonderful will be lost. I cannot permit that, I must protect the dream. MADDOX And so must I. Keep packing, you will be reporting. He exits as we: FADE OUT. END OF ACT TWO STAR TREK: "The Measure of a Man" - 12/14/88 - ACT THREE 21. ACT THREE FADE IN: A12 EXT. SPACE - THE ENTERPRISE (OPTICAL) in parking orbit near Starbase one-seven-three. 12 INT. JAG OFFICE PICARD (V.O.) Captain's log, supplemental. Commander Bruce Maddox, having been thwarted by Data's abrupt resignation from Starfleet is now seeking a legal remedy for his woes. Captain Louvois has requested my presence at those discussions. Phillipa seated watching Maddox preambulate. Picard, rigid with fury stands nearby. Phillipa is expressionless listening to the arguments. MADDOX (to Picard) Your response is emotional and irrational. You're endowing Data with human characteristics because it looks human. But it's not. If it were a box on wheels I wouldn't be facing this opposition. PHILLIPA Overt sentimentalism is not one of Captain Picard's failings. Trust me, I know. PICARD Data is a valued member of my crew, an outstanding bridge officer, a -- STAR TREK: "The Measure of a Man" - 12/14/88 - ACT THREE 22. 12 CONTINUED: MADDOX If I'm permitted to make this experiment the horizons for human achievement become boundless. Consider, every ship in the Federation with a Data on board. Utilizing their tremendous capabilities. Acting as our hands and eyes in dangerous situations. That is worth a little inconvenience. PHILLIPA Look, you're preaching to the choir here. (touches her breast) So why don't you get to the point? MADDOX (palms flat on the desk he leans in on her) Data must not be permitted to resign. PICARD He's an officer in Starfleet. He has certain rights... MADDOX Rights! Rights! I'm sick to death of hearing about rights! What about my right not to have my life work subverted by blind ignorance? PHILLIPA We have rule of law in this Federation. You can't simply seize people, and experiment with them to prove your pet theories. MADDOX Now you're doing it. Data is an extraordinary piece of engineering, but it is a machine. If you permit it to resign it will destroy years of work in robotics. Starfleet doesn't have to allow the resignation -- STAR TREK: "The Measure of a Man" - 12/14/88 - ACT THREE 23. 12 CONTINUED: (2) PICARD Starfleet is not an organization that ignores its own regulations when they become inconvenient. Whether you like it or not, Data (separating and punctuating each word) does... have... rights. MADDOX (visibly calming himself and ignoring Picard) Let me put it another way. Would you permit the computer on the Enterprise to refuse a refit? PHILLIPA (nodding thoughtfully) An interesting point, but the Enterprise computer is property. Is Data? MADDOX Of course. PHILLIPA There might be law to support that position. PICARD A decision with such broad-ranging implications must be supported by an official ruling. (to Phillipa, icy) And I trust you will apply the same zeal to your research that you used during the Stargazer court-martial. 13 INT. TEN-FORWARD A farewell party is in full swing. Present are Riker, Data, TROI, Wesley, PULASKI, Geordi and Worf. On a table are piled some gaily wrapped gifts. Data is carefully opening the wrapping on a present while people watch. WESLEY You're supposed to rip the wrapping off a present. STAR TREK: "The Measure of a Man" - 12/14/88 - ACT THREE 24. 13 CONTINUED: DATA But with the application of a little care, Wes, the paper can be utilized again. WESLEY You're missing the point. Data considers, then in an effort to accommodate Wesley he rips the paper. The paper falls away revealing an antique book. Data reads from the binding. DATA The Dream of the Fire, by K'Ratak. Thank you, Worf. WORF It was in the hands of the Klingons that the novel attained its full stature. PULASKI I couldn't disagree more, but we'll save that argument for another day. Now listen carefully. I didn't get you a present -- DATA That is quite all right. None was expected... PULASKI (interrupting) Instead I'm going to give you something far more valuable -- my advice. You've spent years in the womb of Starfleet. Now you're about to start a new life. You'd be wise to consider the experiences offered by groundside living. DATA Thank you. I will take that under advisement. (noticing Geordi sitting alone in a corner nursing a drink) Excuse me, please. (to Geordi) Is something wrong? STAR TREK: "The Measure of a Man" - 12/14/88 - ACT THREE 25. 13 CONTINUED: (2) GEORDI Of course there is. You're going away. DATA No one regrets the necessity more than I, but you do understand my reasons? GEORDI Oh yeah, I understand. I just don't like your being forced out. It's not fair. DATA Doctor Pulaski would, at this juncture, no doubt remind us that life is rarely fair. GEORDI Sorry, but that doesn't make it any easier. DATA (slowly, a little awkwardly) I shall... miss you. GEORDI (rising) Me too. (he gives Data a fierce hug) You take care, Data. In another part of the room Riker joins Troi. RIKER Deanna... does Data have... do you feel anything from him? TROI I can't sense anything from Data. But that proves nothing. There are many minds from which I can read no meaning. RIKER There's got to be more to him than software, nets and chips. STAR TREK: "The Measure of a Man" - 12/14/88 - ACT THREE 26. 13 CONTINUED: (3) TROI It is possible that Commander Maddox is correct and we are anthropomorphizing Data. Assigning to him emotions and responses which he may not have. RIKER I'm not sure I see that as a problem. Riker and Troi realize that a silence has fallen over the room. They look to where Maddox stands framed in the doorway. MADDOX (sarcastically) A little farewell celebration? RIKER (stepping forward) Yes, to which I don't recall inviting you. MADDOX I couldn't miss this. I can't wait to hear Data's plans. DATA They are currently somewhat indefinite, but my programming offers a number of alternatives. (crossing to Wesley, and dropping an arm over the boy's shoulders) I am considering teaching. I have had some success with my star pupil. The next speech is delivered by a man who really knows better, but can't stop himself. His anger is fueled by his sense of loss -- his life work is crumbling before his eyes because he believes that without Data he cannot succeed. Thus his reputation is also on the line. MADDOX I have a better idea. Carnival work. They could bill you as the walking encyclopedia. Ask him any question -- STAR TREK: "The Measure of a Man" - 12/14/88 - ACT THREE 27. 13 CONTINUED: (4) The WHISTLE of the com panel interrupts him. Riker moves to answer. PICARD'S COM VOICE Number One, Captain Louvois has called. We're expected in her office. Meet me in Transporter Room Five. RIKER (touches his insignia) On my way. (to Maddox) I know you're just leaving. I'll escort you. They start toward the door. 13A EXT. SPACE - THE ENTERPRISE as before. 14 INT. JAG OFFICE Riker and Picard already there. PHILLIPA I have completed my research, and based on the Acts of Gould passed in the early twenty-first century, Data is the property of Starfleet. He cannot resign and he cannot refuse to cooperate with Commander Maddox. PICARD And if I challenge this ruling? PHILLIPA I will be required to hold a hearing. PICARD Then I so challenge. Convene your hearing. Phillipa is taken aback. She was not prepared for this. STAR TREK: "The Measure of a Man" - 12/14/88 - ACT THREE 28. 14 CONTINUED: PHILLIPA Captain, that would be exceedingly difficult. This is a new base. I have no staff -- PICARD Surely there are regulations to cover this eventuality. PHILLIPA There are. I can use serving officers as legal counsel. You as senior officer would defend. PICARD Very well. RIKER And who gets the unenviable task of prosecuting this case? PHILLIPA You do. The next most senior officer aboard defendant's ship. RIKER I can't. I won't. Data's my friend, my comrade. We've served together and I not only respect him, I have affection for him. PHILLIPA This isn't about friendship. This is about duty, and how we search for truth. RIKER A system that pits people against each other can't be the answer. PHILLIPA When people of good conscience have an honest dispute we sometimes must resort to this kind of adversarial system. STAR TREK: "The Measure of a Man" - 12/14/88 - ACT THREE 29. 14 CONTINUED: (2) RIKER You want me to try and prove that Data's a mere machine. I can't. I don't believe it. I know he's more than that. I'm neither qualified nor willing to do this. You're going to have to find someone else. PHILLIPA Then I'll rule summarily based upon my findings. Data's a toaster. Have him report to Commander Maddox immediately for experimental refit. Silence holds the room. Phillipa cold, implacable. Riker stricken. Picard weighing, measuring, evaluating his First Officer. RIKER (bitterly) I see I have no choice but to agree. PHILLIPA Good. But you better do your duty in that courtroom. If I think for one minute that you're not giving me your best effort I'll end this right then and there. PICARD You don't have to remind us of our duty. Just remember yours. PHILLIPA (with a cold look) I've never forgotten it. Not then, and certainly not now. FADE OUT. END OF ACT THREE STAR TREK: "The Measure of a Man" - 12/14/88 - ACT FOUR 30. ACT FOUR FADE IN: 15 INT. MAIN BRIDGE Riker, Wesley and Worf are at their accustomed stations. Data is crossing from the turbolift to the Ready Room. 16 INT. CAPTAIN'S READY ROOM Picard at his desk with the reader on. PICARD (cutting straight to the heart of the matter, with no attempt to soften the blow) Captain Louvois has issued a ruling that you are the property of Starfleet Command. You can't resign. DATA I see... from limitless options I am reduced to none, or rather one. I can only hope that Commander Maddox is more capable than it would appear. PICARD No, you're not going to submit. We're going to fight this. Captain Louvois may be overly attached to the letter of the law, but she has not forgotten its spirit. She's convening a hearing and we are going to lay the question of your legal status to rest once and for all. (he rises, and paces away, turns back, and adds uncomfortably) I have been asked to represent you, but if there is some other officer with whom you would feel more comfortable -- DATA Captain, I have complete confidence in your ability to represent my interests. STAR TREK: "The Measure of a Man" - 12/14/88 - ACT FOUR 31. 17 INT. ENTERPRISE GYMNASIUM Picard is fencing with his usual opponent. Riker enters. Picard continues fencing. PICARD Care to try your hand, Number One? RIKER Another time. It's too close to our real contest. PICARD (exchanging blows with his opponent) This isn't about you and me. RIKER Isn't it? Data may be the issue, but our performances are what will be judged. PICARD (exchanging several lightning blows with his opponent) That's the nature of the adversarial process. RIKER Which can only work when the opponents are of equal ability. PICARD (turning very slowly, leaning on his sword and regarding Riker) Are you suggesting that we are not evenly matched? RIKER No, but for Data's sake it has to be said. I've been forced into this, and I have only one option. To give this my best effort. STAR TREK: "The Measure of a Man" - 12/14/88 - ACT FOUR 32. 17 CONTINUED: PICARD I see. (slash) Then... you are here... (slash) to warn me... (slash) that you are going to do... (slash) Everything within your power and within the boundaries of the law... (slash) to win! Picard drives his opponent completely across the room. RIKER Yes. PICARD So am I. Riker exits. 18 INT. DATA'S QUARTERS Picard seated. He has a PADD ready to take notes. Data seated nearby. The travelcase still open on the desk behind them. PICARD All right, I'm going to need to know everything about you. DATA Sir, all of that information is stored in the Enterprise computer banks. PICARD I want to hear it from you. STAR TREK: "The Measure of a Man" - 12/14/88 - ACT FOUR 33. 18 CONTINUED: DATA (cocking his head like a puzzled bird) Very good, sir. Activation occurred twenty-seven years ago on Omicron Theta. I entered the Academy in '44, and graduated in '48 with honors in probability mechanics and exobiology. First posting... PICARD Data, Data, Data, whoa, stop. I could get this from the computer. DATA I believe I indicated that earlier, sir. Picard rises and takes a turn around the room. Returns to the desk, and begins to play unconsciously with the objects in the travelcase. PICARD I need to know how you think, what you want, how you feel. What drives you, motivates you. DATA Drives? Motivates? Sir, may I inquire as to the purpose of this line of questioning? PICARD We have to prove that you're a sentient life-form. DATA (extremely puzzled) But I am not. I am a machine. PICARD That's not what I need to hear. DATA How can we deny the obvious? PICARD We're searching for an argument which will legally deny that obvious fact. STAR TREK: "The Measure of a Man" - 12/14/88 - ACT FOUR 34. 18 CONTINUED: (2) DATA But if it is a fact how can argument alter -- PICARD Data! DATA Sir? PICARD Stop babbling. (rewinding the threads of his fast-tattering patience) The law recognizes many things as people that aren't possessed of flesh and blood. It's a little legal fiction, you see. DATA I am beginning to understand why Shakespeare wrote, let us kill all the lawyers. Picard reseats himself, but we can tell from his weary expression that this is going to be a long session. 19 OMITTED 19A INT. COMPUTER ROOM (OPTICAL) Multiple computers surround Riker. Some screens are filled with legal decisions, others with technical jargon. Riker calls up information on one. Makes a notation on his PADD. RIKER Computer, identify Riker, William T. Clearance level blue. COMPUTER VOICE Identified. Ready. RIKER Access all technical schematics of Lieutenant Commander Data. COMPUTER VOICE Working. STAR TREK: "The Measure of a Man" - 12/14/88 - ACT FOUR 35. 19A CONTINUED: A schematic appears flagged with Top Secret. Need to Know. RIKER (V.O.) Personal log. Zero three hundred. I should be resting. Instead I continue to prepare for a duty I do not wish to perform. Truth should not be reduced to a prize in a battle of wills and words. Riker is suddenly arrested by something he sees on a screen. His expression is first one of excitement as he realizes he now has the means to win this case. Then bleak sadness as he realizes the import of his victory. He punches off the recorder, his expression bleak and exhausted. 20 INT. COURTROOM High-tech room. An amphitheater-like arrangement where spectators can sit. Picard with Data seated at their table. Riker and Maddox to their right at another table. Phillipa enters. COMPUTER VOICE All rise. PHILLIPA (seats herself behind the bench) Be seated. Counselors, are you ready? PICARD/RIKER We are, your honor. PHILLIPA This hearing convened on stardate 42524.1 is to determine the legal status of the android known as Data. The office of the Judge Advocate General has rendered a finding of property, defense has challenged. Commander Riker. STAR TREK: "The Measure of a Man" - 12/14/88 - ACT FOUR 36. 20 CONTINUED: RIKER Your honor, there is only one issue in this case and one relevant piece of evidence. I call Lieutenant Commander Data. Data seats himself in the witness chair, and places his hand on the scanner. COMPUTER VOICE Verify, Lieutenant Commander Data. Current assignment, USS Enterprise. Starfleet Command Decoration for... RIKER Your honor, we'll stipulate to all of this. PICARD (leaping to his feet) Objection, your honor, I want it read. All of it. PHILLIPA Sustained. COMPUTER VOICE (resuming) ... Gallantry, Medal of Honor with clusters, Legion of Honor, the Star Cross. RIKER Commander Data, what are you? DATA (looking to Picard for guidance, Picard nods to him to answer) An android. RIKER Which is? DATA Webster's Twenty-Third Century Dictionary, Fifth Edition, defines Android as an automaton made to resemble a human being. STAR TREK: "The Measure of a Man" - 12/14/88 - ACT FOUR 37. 20 CONTINUED: (2) RIKER (musing) An automaton. Made. Made by whom? DATA Sir? RIKER Who built you, Data? DATA Doctor Noonien Soong. RIKER And he was? DATA The foremost authority in cybernetics. RIKER More basic than that. What was he? DATA (puzzled, but groping for the right answer; he says questioningly) A human? RIKER Thank you. Data, what is the capacity of your memory, and how fast can you process information? DATA I have an ultimate storage capacity of eight hundred quadrillion bits. My total linear computational speed has been rated at sixty trillion operations per second. Riker moves to his table, and picks up a steel bar of great thickness. RIKER Your honor, I offer into evidence prosecution's exhibit A. A bar of plasteel with a tensile strength of forty kilo-bars. STAR TREK: "The Measure of a Man" - 12/14/88 - ACT FOUR 38. 20 CONTINUED: (3) Phillipa inspects the exhibit, and hands it back to Riker. RIKER (continuing) Commander Data, would you please bend that. PICARD (again on his feet) Objection, your honor. Many races possess meta-human strength. It's not relevant to the issue before this court. PHILLIPA I'm afraid I can't agree, Captain. Proceed with the demonstration, Commander Riker. Data easily bends the bar. Phillipa again inspects it. RIKER (to Phillipa) Drawing on the log record of the construction of the prototype android Lore, also constructed by Noonien Soong, I request that I be allowed to remove Commander Data's hand for your inspection. PICARD Objection! What is the point of all this? PHILLIPA The issue before this court is whether Data is machine, and by extension property. I'd say this is pretty damn relevant. Riker removes Data's hand. RIKER (sotto voce to Data) I'm sorry. Riker offers it to Phillipa who inspects it. Hands it back to Riker. STAR TREK: "The Measure of a Man" - 12/14/88 - ACT FOUR 39. 20 CONTINUED: (4) RIKER (continuing) Data is a physical representation of a dream, an idea conceived of by the mind of a man. His purpose? To serve human needs and interests. He is a collection of neural nets and heuristic algorithms. His responses are dictated by an elaborate software program written by a man. The hardware (slapping the hand against his palm) was built by a man. Riker has been preambulating around the courtroom, each step bringing him closer to Data. He is now at his side, and without warning he leans down, presses the switch, and turns him off. Data collapses like a broken toy. RIKER (continuing) And this man has turned him off. Pinocchio is broken, the strings are cut. Riker lays the hand down next to Data. Shocked silence fills the room. Picard's reaction -- shock and certainty that he cannot win. PICARD I request a recess. PHILLIPA Granted. Riker who, as he walks to his chair, is in agony. A single tear runs down his cheek. He has destroyed a friend. FADE OUT. END OF ACT FOUR STAR TREK: "The Measure of a Man" - 12/14/88 - ACT FIVE 40. ACT FIVE FADE IN: 21 INT. TEN-FORWARD The lounge is deserted, lights very low creating the implication that it is very late. Picard is seated at a table facing out the windows. An empty glass stands before him. He is turning it, turning it, turning it. His expression is death weary and very sad. GUINAN is at the bar puttering, but never taking her eyes off that solitary figure. Finally she can stand it no longer. Drawing two drinks she slides from behind the bar and crosses to him. GUINAN You should get some sleep. PICARD I've lost, and I'm not even sure I mind. Data is a machine. But there is something bothering me. Something I'm missing. Or is it just wounded pride that I've lost and in front of her. GUINAN What is it that lies between you? PICARD (waving it aside) Ancient history. GUINAN Unfortunately the past always resonates in the present, and decisions made today reach into the future. PICARD (Drumming fingers on the table, abruptly he decides to tell her. It emerges in sharp staccato.) The Stargazer court-martial. It should have been a routine hearing. Yes, I had lost my ship, but my actions were entirely justified. (MORE) STAR TREK: "The Measure of a Man" - 12/14/88 - ACT FIVE 41. 21 CONTINUED: PICARD (Cont'd) Phillipa was assistant to the prosecution. She dug up every obscure case and citation and the panel hammered at me for three days. It damn near ended my career. It did end us. She's enjoying this situation. She knows I disapprove of the adversarial system. Now she's forced me into active participation, and she's both pleased and angered to see me fail. GUINAN Emotions. They're such slippery, contradictory things. It's a wonder any of us ever crawled out of the oceans, or swung down out of the trees. PICARD (pushing back his chair) Well, there's only one thing to do. I go to her in the morning, and we discuss a deal. GUINAN (thoughtfully studying her hands) I had heard a lot about you before I joined the Enterprise. About how Picard was a man who never knew when to lie down and admit he was beat. PICARD I have to salvage at least some of Data's rights. If Data agrees to undergo Commander Maddox's procedure we can get out of this hearing before he's declared the property of Starfleet command. GUINAN If Commander Maddox is successful in disassembling and reassembling Data, what has he gained? PICARD The ability to build another. A hundred others, a thousand. STAR TREK: "The Measure of a Man" - 12/14/88 - ACT FIVE 42. 21 CONTINUED: (2) GUINAN To do what? PICARD Explore for us. Enter the dangerous situations. GUINAN All those future Datas risking their lives for the people who created them. PICARD (very intent) You said something earlier about decisions today. GUINAN Having implications for the future. PICARD Precedent! This case will set the precedent for all the future Datas. It will determine their status, and they'll all be property. GUINAN There is an ancient word for it -- slavery. PICARD (very excited) Not a word we want back in our vocabulary. They each lift a glass and toast each other. GUINAN Good luck, sir. They drink. 22 INT. COURTROOM (OPTICAL) Everyone in their original positions. STAR TREK: "The Measure of a Man" - 12/14/88 - ACT FIVE 43. 22 CONTINUED: PICARD (making his opening statement) Commander Riker has dramatically demonstrated to this court that Lieutenant Commander Data is a machine. Do we deny that? No. But how is this relevant? We too are machines, just machines of a different type. Commander Riker has continually reminded us that Data was built by a human. We do not deny that fact. But again how is it relevant? Does construction imply ownership? Children are created from the building blocks of their parents' DNA. Are they property? We have a chance in this hearing to severely limit the boundaries of freedom. And I think we better be pretty damn careful before we take so arrogant a step. I call Lieutenant Commander Data to the stand. Data returns to the witness stand. Picard pulls from beneath the table the android's travelcase. Places it on the table, opens it. PICARD (continuing; lifts out the case of medals, and displays the contents) What are these, please? DATA My medals. PICARD Why pack them? What logical purpose do they serve? DATA I... I do not know, sir. None I suppose. I just wanted them. Is that vanity? STAR TREK: "The Measure of a Man" - 12/14/88 - ACT FIVE 44. 22 CONTINUED: (2) PICARD (holding up the book of sonnets) And this? DATA It was a gift from you, sir. PICARD You value it? DATA Yes, sir. PICARD Why? DATA It is a reminder of friendship and service. PICARD (lifts out the holocube, and triggers it; Tasha stands before them) And this? You have no portraits of any other of your crewmates. Why this person? DATA I would prefer not to answer that question, sir. I gave my word. PICARD Mister Data, may I remind you, that you are under oath. (more gently now) And under the circumstances, I don't think Tasha would mind. DATA (swallowing convulsively several times) She was important to me... we were... intimate. Phillipa is literally rocked back in her chair. PICARD I have no further questions of this witness. STAR TREK: "The Measure of a Man" - 12/14/88 - ACT FIVE 45. 22 CONTINUED: (3) PHILLIPA Commander Riker, do you wish to cross? RIKER I have no questions, your honor. PICARD I call to the stand Commander Bruce Maddox as a hostile witness. Riker and Maddox confer, then with a shrug Maddox seats himself in the witness chair. COMPUTER VOICE Verify, Maddox, Bruce, Commander. Current assignment, Chair of Robotics, Federation Institute of Technology. Major papers... PICARD Enough. Suffice it to say, he's an expert. (right up in his face) Commander Maddox, it is your contention that Data is not a sentient being and therefore not entitled to those rights reserved for all other life-forms in this Federation? MADDOX Data is not sentient, no. PICARD Why, Commander? MADDOX Because Data is a piece of outstanding engineering and programming. PICARD What is required for sentience? MADDOX Intelligence, self awareness, consciousness. PICARD Do you know what sentience is, Commander? STAR TREK: "The Measure of a Man" - 12/14/88 - ACT FIVE 46. 22 CONTINUED: (4) MADDOX Of course. PICARD Excellent. Then you can enlighten the rest of us. All of Picard's delivery needs to be sharp and staccato. PICARD (continuing; right in Maddox's face) Prove to this court that I'm sentient. MADDOX (to Phillipa) This is absurd! PICARD Why? Because you can't do it? MADDOX No, it's just pointless. We all know you're sentient. PICARD So I'm sentient, but Data isn't? MADDOX That's right. PICARD Why? MADDOX Well... well, you're self aware. PICARD Ah, the second ingredient. But let's deal with the first requirement. Is Data intelligent? MADDOX Yes. PICARD Why? STAR TREK: "The Measure of a Man" - 12/14/88 - ACT FIVE 47. 22 CONTINUED: (5) MADDOX It has the ability to learn and understand, and to cope with new situations. PICARD Like this hearing. What about self awareness. What does that mean? Why am I self aware? MADDOX Because you are conscious of your existence and actions. You're aware of yourself and your own ego. PICARD Data, what are you doing now? DATA I am taking part in a legal hearing to determine my rights and status. Am I property or person? PICARD And what's at stake? DATA My right to choose. Perhaps my very life. PICARD My rights. My status. My right to choose. My life. He seems pretty damn self aware to me. Well, Commander Maddox, I'm waiting. MADDOX This is exceedingly difficult... PICARD Do you like Data? MADDOX (completely taken aback) I don't know it well enough to like or dislike it. PICARD But you admire him? STAR TREK: "The Measure of a Man" - 12/14/88 - ACT FIVE 48. 22 CONTINUED: (6) MADDOX Oh yes, it's an outstanding -- PICARD (interrupting) Piece of engineering and programming. Yes, you've said that. You've devoted your life to the study of cybernetics in general? MADDOX Yes. PICARD And Data in particular? MADDOX Yes. PICARD And now you're proposing to dismantle him. MADDOX So I can rebuild him and construct more! PICARD How many more? MADDOX Hundreds, thousands. There's no limit. PICARD And do what with them? MADDOX Use them. PICARD How? MADDOX As effective units on Federation ships. As replacements for humans in dangerous situations. So much is closed to us because of our fragility. But they... STAR TREK: "The Measure of a Man" - 12/14/88 - ACT FIVE 49. 22 CONTINUED: (7) PICARD (interrupting; he picks up an object and throws it down a disposal chute) Are expendable. MADDOX It sounds harsh but to some extent, yes. PICARD Are you expendable, Commander Maddox? Never mind. A single Data is a curiosity, a wonder, but a thousand Datas, doesn't that become a new race? And aren't we going to be judged as a species about how we treat these creations? If they're expendable, disposable, aren't we? What is Data? MADDOX What? I don't understand. PICARD What... is... he? MADDOX (angry now and hostile) A machine! PICARD Is he? Are you sure? MADDOX Yes! PICARD But he's met two of your three criteria for sentience, and we haven't addressed the third. So we might find him meeting your third criterion, and then what is he? MADDOX (driven to his limit) I don't know. I don't know! STAR TREK: "The Measure of a Man" - 12/14/88 - ACT FIVE 50. 22A ANOTHER ANGLE Reaction shot from Phillipa. PICARD He doesn't know. (to Phillipa) Do you? That's the decision you're facing. Your honor, a courtroom is a crucible. In it we burn away the egos, the selfish desires, the half-truths, until we're left with the pure product -- a truth -- for all time. Sooner or later it's going to happen. This man or others like him are going to succeed in replicating Data. And then we have to decide -- what are they? And how will we treat these creations of our genius? The decision you reach here today stretches far beyond this android and this courtroom. It will reveal the kind of a people we are. And what (points to Data) ... they are going to be. Do you condemn then to slavery? Starfleet was founded to seek out new life. (indicating Data) Well, there he sits, your honor, waiting on our decision. You have a chance to make law. Well, let's make a good one. Let us be wise. PHILLIPA This case touches on metaphysics, and that's the province of philosophers and poets. Not confused jurists who don't have the answers. But sometimes we have to make a stab in the dark, and speak to the future. Is Data a machine? Absolutely. Is he our property? No... (this will be rewritten with additions). The courtroom erupts in joy. Phillipa starts to leave then crosses to Picard. STAR TREK: "The Measure of a Man" - 12/14/88 - ACT FIVE 51. 22A CONTINUED: PHILLIPA (continuing) You see, sometimes it works. Picard watches her walk away, conflicting emotions washing across his face. 22B ANOTHER ANGLE Data walks to Maddox who is looking confused, guilty and sad. DATA Continue your work, Commander, and when you are ready I will still be here. MADDOX You'd be willing after what I've put you through? DATA Yes, it would be a less lonely universe if there were more of my kind. Phillipa comes up unnoticed by Data and Maddox. MADDOX (watching Data walk away) He's remarkable. PHILLIPA You didn't call him "it." Maddox looks startled, then smiles. 23 INT. OBSERVATION LOUNGE (OPTICAL) Riker sitting alone in the darkness staring out the windows as the stars rush past. Data enters. Riker does not turn. DATA Sir, there is a celebration on the Holodeck. RIKER I have no right to be there. STAR TREK: "The Measure of a Man" - 12/14/88 - ACT FIVE 52. 23 CONTINUED: DATA (edging closer) Because you failed in your task? RIKER (slewing around in his chair at that) No, God, no. Data, I came this close to winning. Riker indicates a bare inch with thumb and forefinger. DATA Yes, sir. RIKER (in agony just remembering) I could have cost you your life! DATA (moving in, and seating himself opposite Riker) Yes, that is true, but Commander... Will, I have learned from your experience. RIKER What could you have possibly learned from this kind of ordeal? DATA That at times one must deny their nature, sacrifice their own personal beliefs to protect another. Is it not true that had you refused to prosecute, Captain Louvois would have ruled summarily against me? RIKER Yes. DATA That action injured you, and saved me. I will not forget. RIKER (taking his hand) You're a wise man, my friend. STAR TREK: "The Measure of a Man" - 12/14/88 - ACT FIVE 53. 23 CONTINUED: (2) DATA Not yet sir, but with your help I am learning. Riker clasps Data's shoulder, squeezes, as they shake hands, and we: FADE OUT. END OF ACT FIVE THE END STAR TREK: THE NEXT GENERATION "The Dauphin" #40272-136 Written by Leonard Mlodinow & Scott Rubenstein Directed by Rob Bowman THE WRITING CREDITS MAY NOT BE FINAL AND SHOULD NOT BE USED FOR PUBLICITY OR ADVERTISING PURPOSES WITHOUT FIRST CHECKING WITH THE TELEVISION LEGAL DEPARTMENT. Copyright 1988 Paramount Pictures Corporation. All Rights Reserved. This script is not for publication or reproduction. No one is authorized to dispose of same. If lost or destroyed, please notify the Script Department. 2ND REV. FINAL DRAFT DECEMBER 23, 1988 STAR TREK: "The Dauphin" - 12/23/88 - CAST STAR TREK: THE NEXT GENERATION "The Dauphin" CAST PICARD ANYA RIKER SALIA DATA "TEENAGE GIRL" PULASKI "FURRY ANIMAL" TROI "MONSTER" GEORDI WORF Voice-Over WESLEY DALED FOUR VOICE GUINAN ENSIGN GIBSON TRANSPORTER CHIEF ARON Non-Speaking HENNESEY THREE SECURITY PERSONNEL Voice-Over COMPUTER VOICE STAR TREK: "The Dauphin" - 12/23/88 - SETS STAR TREK: THE NEXT GENERATION "The Dauphin" SETS INTERIORS EXTERIORS USS ENTERPRISE USS ENTERPRISE MAIN BRIDGE TRANSPORTER ROOM PLANET KLAVDIA THREE CORRIDORS OUTSIDE SALIA'S QUARTERS PLANET DALED FOUR SALIA'S QUARTERS MAIN ENGINEERING TEN-FORWARD SICKBAY HOLODECK CAPTAIN'S READY ROOM WESLEY'S QUARTERS STAR TREK: "The Dauphin" - 12/23/88 - PRONUNCIATION GUIDE STAR TREK: THE NEXT GENERATION "The Dauphin" PRONUNCIATION GUIDE SALIA Sal-EE-ya ANYA ON-ya KLAVDIA KLAHV-dee-ah STAR TREK: "The Dauphin" - 12/23/88 - TEASER 1. STAR TREK: THE NEXT GENERATION "The Dauphin" TEASER FADE IN: 1 EXT. SPACE - THE ENTERPRISE (OPTICAL) traveling at warp speed through the black silk of space. 2 INT. MAIN BRIDGE DATA is at Ops and WORF at Tactical. RIKER stands behind ENSIGN GIBSON at Conn. PICARD sits at his Command Station. RIKER Captain, we are approaching Klavdia Three. PICARD Take us to impulse power. GIBSON Aye, sir. Impulse power. 2A EXT. SPACE - THE ENTERPRISE (OPTICAL) as the Enterprise comes out of warp. 2B INT. MAIN ENGINEERING GEORDI is at his position. WESLEY CRUSHER is nearby. GEORDI Bridge, this is Engineering. RIKER'S COM VOICE Yes, Lieutenant. GEORDI Now that we are out of warp, I would like to use this time to make routine adjustments to the deuterium control conduit. It's overdue. STAR TREK: "The Dauphin" - 12/23/88 - TEASER 2. 2C INT. MAIN BRIDGE as before. RIKER (to Picard) That would preclude use of our warp drive engines. PICARD How much time do these adjustments require? GEORDI'S COM VOICE A few hours, sir. Picard nods to Riker. RIKER You may proceed, Lieutenant La Forge. Standard orbit. GIBSON Aye, sir. Standard orbit. 3 EXT. SPACE - THE ENTERPRISE (OPTICAL) establishes orbit about a large yellow planet. 3A INT. MAIN ENGINEERING Geordi crosses to Wesley. GEORDI I am going to need an S-C-M, model three, from stores. WESLEY Right away. And he exits. 4 INT. MAIN BRIDGE (OPTICAL) The glowing planet is featured on the Main Viewer. Everyone's at their station except Wesley, who is not present. Picard gazes at the image of the planet. PICARD Magnify. STAR TREK: "The Dauphin" - 12/23/88 - TEASER 3. 4 CONTINUED: The image on the Main Viewer enlarges. PICARD Not a very inviting planet. Even for a research outpost. TROI I would have thought the inhabitants of Daled Four would send a future leader to a more hospitable environment. WORF For some, security is more important than comfort. TROI But sixteen years... WORF We are being hailed, Captain. PICARD Open hailing frequencies, Mister Worf. WORF Hailing frequencies open. PICARD This is Captain Picard of the USS Enterprise. The voice transmission comes through with a heavy harmonic on the carrier, making it sound like someone talking from the bottom of a barrel. DATA The planet's troposphere is distorting the signal. PICARD (to Worf) Can you clean it up? WORF I'll try. Worf makes some adjustments. Then nods to Captain Picard. STAR TREK: "The Dauphin" - 12/23/88 - TEASER 4. 4 CONTINUED: (2) PICARD This is Picard -- would you please repeat your message? FEMALE COM VOICE I am Anya. Have you come for Salia of Daled Four? PICARD That is correct. ANYA What species are you? PICARD Human. There is a pause. ANYA Excellent. Bring us aboard. That is all. The bridge crew registers surprise at Anya's sharpness. RIKER Friendly, isn't she? PICARD Whether they're friendly or not, Salia has the rank of head of state. We will treat both her and Anya accordingly. Number One, Mister Worf, let's greet our visitors. Picard, Riker and Worf head for the turbolift. 5 INT. TRANSPORTER ROOM - ANGLE ON TRANSPORTER PAD (OPTICAL) as TWO FIGURES MATERIALIZE: ANYA, elderly, school-marmish; and SALIA, sixteen, gorgeous, wide-eyed, but regal. STAR TREK: "The Dauphin" - 12/23/88 - TEASER 5. 6 ANOTHER ANGLE TRANSPORTER CHIEF O'BRIEN stands at the controls. Picard and Riker focus on Salia, who glances around the room, enthusiastically taking in her new environment. PICARD Welcome aboard the Enterprise. I am Captain Jean-Luc Picard. ANYA (re Salia) This is Salia of Daled Four. SALIA I didn't feel a thing. Is that normal when you are transported, Captain? PICARD It is. Salia steps off the transporter pad and looks toward the control console. Anya steps off beside Salia, eyes the crew suspiciously. SALIA Those must be the matter/energy conversion controls. May I take a look? PICARD Of course. RIKER If you like, I'll arrange a tour of the ship. SALIA I'd love that. ANYA (firm) No. Disappointed, Salia looks at Anya. ANYA (continuing) That won't be necessary. Just show us our quarters, Captain Picard. STAR TREK: "The Dauphin" - 12/23/88 - TEASER 6. 6 CONTINUED: Picard turns to Salia. It's obvious she accepts Anya's authority. PICARD Very well. 7 INT. CORRIDOR Picard leads Salia, Anya toward her quarters. Worf and Riker trail. PICARD We are housing you in the quarters normally reserved for Starfleet admiralty. I'm sure you'll find them quite comfortable. 8 ON WESLEY as he EXITS a turbolift further down the corridor. He carries a superconducting magnet. 9 ANOTHER ANGLE Salia gazes at Wesley, fascinated and attracted. She steps away from the entourage and smiles innocently. SALIA That's a superconducting magnet, isn't it? Wesley can't take his eyes off her. He can barely get his words out. WESLEY Yes... It's a... say, how did you know that? SALIA Study, for the last sixteen years it is all I could... Before she can finish, Anya comes over and pulls Salia away. ANYA Please walk ahead with me. Salia starts away, then turns back to Wesley. STAR TREK: "The Dauphin" - 12/23/88 - TEASER 7. 9 CONTINUED: SALIA (tinge of coyness) You'd better be careful. I was taught those can rip the iron right out of your blood cells. 9A CLOSER - WESLEY AND SALIA The attraction of her smile is even stronger than the magnet's. WESLEY Who are you? No one mentioned we were beaming up such a... a... ANYA (interrupting) Please, Salia. Wesley watches as Anya propels Salia into following Picard into an intersecting corridor. As Riker walks by, Wesley pulls him to the side. WESLEY I don't believe this! Who is she? RIKER (teasing) I think she's a governess. WESLEY (impatient) Not her. The girl. RIKER I doubt she'll have time for you, my friend. She's slated to rule an entire world. Off Wesley's look of determination, we: FADE OUT. END OF TEASER STAR TREK: "The Dauphin" - 12/23/88 - ACT ONE 8. ACT ONE FADE IN: 10 EXT. SPACE THE ENTERPRISE (OPTICAL) as the Enterprise leaves orbit and heads off at impulse speed. 10A INT. WESLEY'S QUARTERS Wesley is there alone. He is checking himself out in the mirror. The meeting with Salia has suddenly made him very aware of his appearance. The magnet he was sent for is on his desk. The door CHIMES. WESLEY Come in. The doors open and Data enters. DATA You wanted to see me. WESLEY Data -- the girl who just came on board. DATA Salia of Daled Four. WESLEY There's almost nothing in the computer about her. DATA Very little is known. WESLEY What can you tell me? DATA She was born on Daled Four. Her parents were from opposite sides of factions which have been feuding for centuries. They died shortly after her birth. A Federation ship brought her and her governess to Klavdia Three to be raised in a neutral environment. STAR TREK: "The Dauphin" - 12/23/88 - ACT ONE 9. 10A CONTINUED: WESLEY And now she's returning. DATA It is hoped she will unite the factions and bring peace. The conversation is interrupted. GEORDI'S COM VOICE Wesley, are you all right? WESLEY (surprised) Geordi. (then remembering the magnet) Oh... Yes.. I'm fine... I just... GEORDI We are waiting for the part. WESLEY I'm on my way. Wesley picks up the part and heads for the door. WESLEY Got to go. Thanks, Data. Off Data's reaction: 11 INT. MAIN BRIDGE (OPTICAL) Minimum bridge crew. Worf is at his Aft Station. Riker is in the Command Position. Picard enters from the captain's Ready Room. RIKER Captain, we've laid in a course for Daled Four. We will remain on impulse power until Lieutenant La Forge completes his adjustments. PICARD Status report on our passengers, Lieutenant Worf. Did the accommodations meet with their approval?  STAR TREK: "The Dauphin" - 12/23/88 - ACT ONE 10. 11 CONTINUED: Troi enters from the turbolift, crosses to Picard. WORF I doubt anything ever meets with that woman's approval, sir. TROI Captain, I'm concerned. PICARD About... ? TROI Our new passengers. Their emotions do not seem to fit... (puzzled) ... well, who they are and what they're doing. PICARD (alert) Are you suggesting they're not who they say they are? TROI Actually... no. It's more like they're not exactly what they seem to be. At least, not exactly. Picard puzzles on this a moment, then turns to his communications controls. PICARD Captain Picard to Salia's quarters. May I turn on the viewer? SALIA'S COM VOICE Yes, of course. Picard nods to Worf, who puts Salia's quarters on the Main Viewer. Both he and Troi watch intently as: 12 INT. SALIA'S QUARTERS (OPTICAL) at impulse speed. PICARD Are your quarters satisfactory? STAR TREK: "The Dauphin" - 12/23/88 - ACT ONE 11. 12 CONTINUED: SALIA Yes. Very. Anya enters from an adjoining room. SALIA (continuing) Thank you for checking on us, Captain. I only hope my quarters on Daled Four will be this luxurious. Picard quickly assesses the situation. PICARD Feel free to contact me if you need anything. Picard out. The Main Viewer goes blank. END INTERCUT: 13 INT. MAIN BRIDGE Picard turns to Troi. TROI What I sensed in that seems entirely normal. Emotionally, I judge her to be very drawn to our young ensign. DATA What puzzles me, Captain, is how she is expected to bring peace to Daled Four. The one thing we do know about it is that its inhabitants have been fighting throughout their recorded history. PICARD What do we know about the cause of their wars? DATA Only that it is the difference between night and day. RIKER Data, you just used a colloquialism. STAR TREK: "The Dauphin" - 12/23/88 - ACT ONE 12. 13 CONTINUED: DATA I did? I meant that Daled Four does not rotate. One side has constant night, the other constant daylight. One might surmise that the two hemispheres developed disparate cultures, which is a major cause of most wars. PICARD And yet somehow this child is supposed to bring them together. RIKER She looks too delicate for a task like that. WORF Do not be fooled by her looks. The body is just a shell. 14 OMITTED 15 INT. SALIA'S QUARTERS Salia is with an unusually dressed TEENAGE GIRL (definitely not a "normal" inhabitant of the Enterprise). SALIA How can I be a leader if I don't know anything about my people? TEENAGE GIRL You will lead because you are accepted by both sides. And because it is in your blood. SALIA What am I expected to do when I get there? TEENAGE GIRL You will know. SALIA How? STAR TREK: "The Dauphin" - 12/23/88 - ACT ONE 13. 15 CONTINUED: TEENAGE GIRL You just will. Salia, you must arrive with an open mind, without preconceived ideas about the world you will find or the people on either side. SALIA It's very frustrating. TEENAGE GIRL Yes -- I know. You feel the weight of so much responsibility. And you're not sure you can live up to everyone's expectations. SALIA It's not only that. Nobody's asked me if this is something I want. TEENAGE GIRL It is your duty. SALIA I have no choice. TEENAGE GIRL None. It won't be as bad as you think. In fact it could be quite wonderful. Besides... you are the last and only chance. Salia holds the teenage girl's eyes for a beat... then, steps to the window and stares out at the stars. After a moment, Salia looks down. 16 SALIA'S POV A cute FURRY ANIMAL rubs against Salia's leg. 17 ANOTHER ANGLE Salia sighs and pets it. SALIA (to animal, troubled) Don't you think I'm going to need more than instinct to do whatever is expected of me on Daled Four? STAR TREK: "The Dauphin" - 12/23/88 - ACT ONE 14. 18 INT. MAIN ENGINEERING (OPTICAL) Geordi observes unusual engine probe GRAPHICS at the control console. GEORDI Energy depletion level. COMPUTER VOICE Point oh-four percent and increasing. GEORDI Wesley? 19 WESLEY (OPTICAL) stands on the lower catwalk, at the Deuterium Control Conduit. He's daydreaming as he holds a fiber optics laser probe that looks like a screwdriver with a blade of pure VIOLET light. GEORDI (O.S.) (louder) Wesley! Haven't you found the defocused area yet? Wesley snaps out of his daydream. WESLEY I'm looking! 20 ANGLE TO INCLUDE GEORDI (OPTICAL) who is now leaning over the catwalk, staring down at Wesley. GEORDI I see the way you're looking. Wesley whirls and drops his instrument. 21 THE INSTRUMENT bounces, almost falling off the catwalk. 22 SCENE (OPTICAL) WESLEY Sorry. STAR TREK: "The Dauphin" - 12/23/88 - ACT ONE 15. 22 CONTINUED: He retrieves the probe. WESLEY (continuing) I've got my mind on something. There's a beat. Finally, Wesley explodes with excitement. WESLEY (continuing) Geordi, this girl they beamed up, she's... she's perfect! Perfect! Geordi shakes his head. GEORDI Now I understand why you can't concentrate. WESLEY I'll do better. Geordi starts back to his console as Wesley turns a dial on the probe and a GREEN stem of light appears. He touches it so that the blade of light penetrates the conduit. COMPUTER VOICE Warning -- resonant field applied! Warning! Wesley pulls the probe from the conduit as Geordi rushes back. GEORDI What is it? Wesley adjusts the probe so that the stem changes from GREEN to VIOLET. WESLEY (apologetic) I had it on the wrong setting. GEORDI (beat) I suppose it had to happen to you. It usually does at about this age. WESLEY What usually does? STAR TREK: "The Dauphin" - 12/23/88 - ACT ONE 16. 22 CONTINUED: (2) GEORDI Glands suddenly meshing together. It happens to all of us. WESLEY You've got to be joking. Just because I said she's interesting... GEORDI You said she's "perfect." (waves) Go. You're no use here for now. Go talk to her. Take the lift. Wesley ignores and hops down beside Geordi and starts for the exit. Suddenly he stops - insecure again. WESLEY That's silly, Geordi. (hesitates) Well, since you recommend it... If she'll talk to me, how should I approach her? What would I say? GEORDI Just say "Hi. I'm Wesley Crusher. I'd like to talk to you." WESLEY And then what? GEORDI Whatever occurs to you. WESLEY What if nothing occurs to me? GEORDI Wesley, I don't really have time for this. You're going to have to ask somebody else. WESLEY Okay. Wesley looks discouraged, turns and exits. 23 INT. MAIN BRIDGE - ON WORF as he ROARS. STAR TREK: "The Dauphin" - 12/23/88 - ACT ONE 17. 24 NEW ANGLE Data is at Command, an n.d. crewmember at Ops and ENSIGN GIBSON at Conn. They all look on in puzzlement as Worf stops in mid-roar and calmly continues speaking to Wesley, who stands beside him at Tactical. WORF That is how the Klingon lures a mate. WESLEY Are you telling me to go yell at Salia? WORF No. Men do not roar. Women roar. Then they hurl heavy objects. And claw at you. WESLEY What does the man do? WORF He reads love poetry. He ducks a lot. WESLEY Yes, well, that might work for Klingons, but I think I should try something less dangerous. WORF Then go to her door. Beg like a human. DATA It should be that simple, Wesley. Judging by her appearance it is likely you and Salia are biologically compatible. Of course, there may be a difference in the histocompatibility complex in the cell membrane. WESLEY Data! I want to meet her, not dissect her. Wesley walks to the turbolift just as Picard exits it. Hold on Picard as he crosses the bridge. STAR TREK: "The Dauphin" - 12/23/88 - ACT ONE 18. 24 CONTINUED: PICARD Captain Picard to Salia's quarters. SALIA'S COM VOICE Yes, Captain? 25 INT. SALIA'S QUARTERS (OPTICAL) Salia sits on her bed. The furry animal is nearby. PICARD'S COM VOICE May I activate the viewer? SALIA Certainly. Picard's image appears on the viewer in Salia's living room. PICARD (on viewscreen) I've arranged for Anya to have a tour of the ship. Maybe you'd like to go along. SALIA Very much. PICARD (on viewscreen) Your escort will be there shortly. Picard out. As the viewscreen goes blank, Salia immediately stands and looks for the animal, which quickly scurries into the open. SALIA I think I'll go on the tour. The animal races over. SALIA (continuing; to animal) Why can't I? The animal GROWLS. STAR TREK: "The Dauphin" - 12/23/88 - ACT ONE 19. 25 CONTINUED: SALIA (continuing) This is ridiculous! This will be the only chance I ever have to see a vessel like this. A look of anticipation crosses Salia's face as the animal begins to QUIVER, then SHAKE. 26 ON THE ANIMAL (OPTICAL) Its skin BULGES all over. It TRANSMUTES completely... into Anya, the governess! ANYA No -- you must remain here where it is safe. FADE OUT. END OF ACT ONE STAR TREK: "The Dauphin" - 12/23/88 - ACT TWO 20. ACT TWO FADE IN: 27 INT. SALIA'S QUARTERS Anya blocks Salia's path to the door. ANYA Salia, do an old woman a favor, and obey me for the rest of this trip. SALIA You're no more an old woman than I am a leader. The CHIME SOUNDS. SALIA (continuing) Yes. Come in. The door opens and Worf enters. WORF I am here to escort you on a tour of the Enterprise. ANYA I will be right there. (then to Salia) You are a leader. And I am older than you could ever imagine. 28 INT. TEN-FORWARD Wesley sits with Riker at the bar. GUINAN watches them from behind the bar. WESLEY But what do I say? How should I act? What do I do? Riker turns to Guinan and motions toward a nearby empty table. RIKER Guinan, I need your help. Could you sit over there? STAR TREK: "The Dauphin" - 12/23/88 - ACT TWO 21. 28 CONTINUED: GUINAN That seems simple enough. Guinan walks around the bar and heads for a table. Riker and Wesley follow. Guinan sits. Riker sits beside her. Wesley stands off to the side. RIKER (to Wesley) The first words out of your mouth are the most important. You could start by saying something like... (turns to Guinan) ... "you're the most beautiful woman in the galaxy." Riker holds the look for a moment, then turns back to Wesley. RIKER (continuing) But that might not work. GUINAN Yes it would. Riker is relieved and amused. This is going to be fun. He turns to Guinan. RIKER If you only knew how much I wanted to tell you that. GUINAN But you were afraid. RIKER Yes. GUINAN Of me? RIKER Of us. Of what we could become... WESLEY Commander Riker... They ignore him. STAR TREK: "The Dauphin" - 12/23/88 - ACT TWO 22. 28 CONTINUED: (2) RIKER ... and that you might have thought it was a line. GUINAN Maybe I do think it's a line. RIKER Then you think I'm not sincere? GUINAN I didn't say that. There's nothing wrong with a line. It's like a knock on the door. RIKER Then you're inviting me in? GUINAN I'm not sending you away. RIKER That's more than I expected. GUINAN But is it more than you hoped? RIKER To hope is to recognize the possibility. I had only dreams. GUINAN Dreams can be dangerous. RIKER Not these dreams. He looks into her eyes. RIKER (continuing) I dream of a galaxy where your eyes are stars... And all the universe worships night. GUINAN Careful, if you place me too high on a pedestal, you won't be able to reach me. STAR TREK: "The Dauphin" - 12/23/88 - ACT TWO 23. 28 CONTINUED: (3) RIKER Then I'll learn to fly. You are the heart in my day and the soul of my night. Wesley taps Guinan on the arm. WESLEY I don't think this is my style. GUINAN Shut up, kid. (to Riker, dreamily) Now tell me more about my eyes. 29 ON WESLEY as he turns and exits, still unsure of how to approach Salia. 30 INT. MAIN ENGINEERING (OPTICAL) Anya stands on the lower catwalk with Geordi, who is still probing the Deuterium Control Conduit with his violet laser probe. Worf stands behind them, watching. ANYA (suspicious) What is that? What are you doing? GEORDI This is the Deuterium Control Conduit. I'm probing it to find a defocused area. ANYA Is there a problem with the ship? Geordi responds to the seriousness of her tone. GEORDI There's nothing to be concerned about. I'm just making routine adjustments. There's a pause as Anya assesses Geordi. ANYA I understand. STAR TREK: "The Dauphin" - 12/23/88 - ACT TWO 24. 30 CONTINUED: Anya turns to exit. 31 INT. CORRIDOR Wesley confidently rounds the corner on his way to Salia's quarters. He slows down, a little less confident, as he spots a guard, ARON, outside her door. The closer he gets, the more uneasy he becomes. ARON Ensign Crusher, what are you doing here? WESLEY Nothing. There's an awkward moment as Wesley tries to build the courage to call on Salia... but he can't go through with it. Suddenly Salia's door slides open. Salia and he lock eyes. Wesley's jaw drops. Again, he's thunderstruck. ARON Is there a problem? SALIA (eyes still on Wesley) Can you show me how to work the food dispenser? ARON Sure. As Aron starts to enter her quarters, Salia motions toward Wesley. SALIA (to Aron) No, I meant him. 32 INT. SALIA'S QUARTERS (OPTICAL) Wesley and Salia stand in front of the food dispenser. He's nervous in her presence and glad to have something mundane to talk about. WESLEY Actually all you have to do is tell the computer what you want and it will prepare it for you. STAR TREK: "The Dauphin" - 12/23/88 - ACT TWO 25. 32 CONTINUED: SALIA Oh... what should I order? WESLEY I don't know. what do you like? Salia thinks for a moment. A smile crosses her face. SALIA I'd like something sweet. WESLEY I know... Computer, Thalian chocolate mousse. A dish of mousse is provided. Salia dips her finger into the mousse and slowly licks it off. She closes her eyes and concentrates on the taste. SALIA It's a wonderful sensation. WESLEY On Thalos Seven they age the cocoa beans four hundred years. SALIA You've been there? WESLEY It's one of my favorite places. SALIA It must have been fun to visit a planet like that! WESLEY It's the best part of being on the Enterprise. SALIA I have learned about some of them, but to see them -- that would be wonderful. (excitedly) Tell me about some of the other places you've been. WESLEY There's too many! STAR TREK: "The Dauphin" - 12/23/88 - ACT TWO 26. 32 CONTINUED: (2) SALIA The only world I've known is Klavdia Three. Wesley thinks for a beat. WESLEY It's time we changed that. SALIA How? WESLEY Come with me. Salia's intrigued. 33 INT. SICKBAY - PATIENTS' QUARTERS - ON ANYA with a suspicious scowl on her face. 34 SCENE PULASKI is scanning HENNESEY, an unconscious patient as Anya and Worf look on. PULASKI (continuing the scan) I'll be with you in a moment. ANYA What's wrong with him? PULASKI Andronesian Encephalitis. He contracted it when our transporter filter was disrupted by a cosmic ray burst. ANYA That disease is contagious. PULASKI Yes it is. ANYA Then we could all be infected. STAR TREK: "The Dauphin" - 12/23/88 - ACT TWO 27. 34 CONTINUED: PULASKI Very unlikely. The air filtering system can handle -- ANYA But there is a chance. PULASKI If you mean mathematically... Yes, the probability is not zero. ANYA I cannot rely on your primitive technologies. Kill the patient! Worf and Pulaski stare incredulously at Anya. PULASKI What? ANYA Destroy the patient immediately! PULASKI Calm down -- really there's no risk. ANYA If you won't take action, then I will! Filled with fury, Anya moves toward Hennesey. Worf takes her arm to restrain her. She spins away from him with surprising power. 35 ON ANYA (OPTICAL) as she TRANSMUTES into a RAGING MONSTER! 36 SCENE The monster ROARS and steps toward Hennesey! Pulaski SCREAMS. FADE OUT. END OF ACT TWO STAR TREK: "The Dauphin" - 12/23/88 - ACT THREE 28. ACT THREE FADE IN: 37 INT. SICKBAY Worf pulls his phaser fast. The monster grabs it before he can fire and holds Worf in its powerful grip. They struggle. 38 ON PULASKI her eyes filled with terror. She stands in front of Hennesey, shielding him from the monster. PULASKI Security to Sickbay! Hurry! 39 SERIES OF CUTS: Worf and the monster push against each other's power. Worf is surprised by the monster's increasing strength, it ever so slightly gaining the advantage. Pulaski anxiously pushes the bed away from the battle. The monster begins to pull Worf to the side. Soon there will be nothing in its path to Hennesey. Suddenly, doors on both sides slide open. THREE SECURITY PERSONNEL rush in -- phasers ready. They train their weapons at the monster. Worf is in their line of fire. Picard enters. After a tense moment, the monster slowly releases Worf. PICARD (to guards) Hold your fire. 40 THE MONSTER (OPTICAL) TRANSMUTES to its governess form, Anya. 41 SCENE Reactions around the room. Everyone's stunned at the spectacle. Pulaski moves to check her patient. STAR TREK: "The Dauphin" - 12/23/88 - ACT THREE 29. 41 CONTINUED: PICARD Anya! PULASKI (frantic) What is she? Keep her away! ANYA (to Picard, yelling) Do not interfere! PULASKI She wants to kill Hennesey! ANYA His disease threatens Salia! PULASKI Captain, there is no chance of contagion. PICARD (to Anya) The situation is under control. ANYA That's not good enough! Picard barely contains his rage. PICARD It will have to be. Anya moves close to Picard. Her eyes are filled with fury. ANYA Your powers are infinitesimal compared to mine! PICARD Nevertheless, you will obey my orders. You are to remain in your quarters and in your present form for the remainder of this voyage. Is that clear? Anya glares at Picard for a long moment. ANYA Very. STAR TREK: "The Dauphin" - 12/23/88 - ACT THREE 30. 41 CONTINUED: (2) Picard turns to Worf. PICARD Keep her under guard. Worf motions to the two security personnel, who lead Anya out of the room. WORF What kind of creature is she? PICARD I've never seen anything like her. PULASKI There are no such life-forms in the galactic zoological catalog. There have been rumors of a species called allasomorphs which are supposed to possess the power to alter their molecular structure into that of other life-forms. WORF Such a species would make a perfect "protector." Picard turns to Worf. PICARD I want a security team stationed outside Sickbay, Mister Worf. WORF Aye, sir. Captain... if Anya transforms? PICARD Stop her. 42 INT. CORRIDOR - OUTSIDE SALIA'S QUARTERS Anya and the guards approach Salia's quarters. The guards remain outside. Anya enters. STAR TREK: "The Dauphin" - 12/23/88 - ACT THREE 31. 42 CONTINUED: WORF (to Guards) Remain here. (to Anya) You are restricted to these quarters for the remainder of this voyage. Anya enters. There is an exchange of looks between Worf and Anya as the doors close. 43 INT. SALIA'S QUARTERS Anya steps in, anxiously glances around for Salia. 44 INT. HOLODECK (OPTICAL) Wesley and Salia stand watching a spectacular display of shooting stars. Both are mesmerized. SALIA Can a place so remarkable truly exist? WESLEY Oh, yes. And there are so many more -- all special - -all so different. And all the different kinds of life-forms. SALIA I have learned about them. That is all I did on Klavdia Three... was learn. I know so much, but I've seen so little. WESLEY Then, think of what you have to look forward to. This is the best time to be alive. SALIA For you. STAR TREK: "The Dauphin" - 12/23/88 - ACT THREE 32. 44 CONTINUED: WESLEY For us both. Everything is just beginning. We've only charted nineteen percent of our galaxy... the rest is out there -- waiting for us. And already, look at what we've discovered. SALIA I have never seen anything so wondrous. WESLEY Wait. Computer -- Rosseau Five. SUDDENLY, they are standing on a tiny point of land, which seems to drop off to infinity. Salia is startled, and quickly moves closer to Wesley. Around them spin little brightly lighted moons, which splash color on their faces. It's breathtaking. SALIA I can't believe a place like this really exists. WESLEY Oh, yes. SALIA And you have been there? WESLEY And one day you'll visit Rosseau Five... and other places and more spectacular than this. SALIA If only that were possible. WESLEY Now, listen. In a moment the orbits of the moons will become synchronous. And as they watch the orbits of the moons close, and slowly a wondrous sound begins... a single note which builds to a chord. SALIA It is so beautiful -- like this place has a voice and is trying to talk with us. STAR TREK: "The Dauphin" - 12/23/88 - ACT THREE 33. 44 CONTINUED: (2) WESLEY I never thought of it that way. SALIA Thank you for sharing all of this with me. WESLEY Soon you'll see it for yourself. Salia is suddenly pensive. SALIA I don't think so. (pause) Maybe we should go. WESLEY How about something to drink? SALIA (brightens) How about some more of that Thalian chocolate? Wesley smiles. He has never been happier. 45 INT. CAPTAIN'S READY ROOM - PICARD sits at his desk, talking to Troi. PICARD We have obviously brought a very dangerous life-form aboard this ship. I want to minimize the chances of another incident. TROI Captain, whatever kind of life-form Anya may be, emotionally she is really Salia's mother. PICARD And the most dangerous animal is a mother protecting her young. TROI Exactly. STAR TREK: "The Dauphin" - 12/23/88 - ACT THREE 34. 45 CONTINUED: ANYA'S COM VOICE Captain, this is Anya. PICARD Yes? ANYA'S COM VOICE (furious) Salia is gone. Where is she? 46 INT. TEN-FORWARD - ON WESLEY AND SALIA sitting face to face. A backdrop of stars adds to the romantic mood, but they're oblivious to everything except the enchantment of each other's eyes. SALIA This has all been so wonderful. I'm not sure it's real. WESLEY Believe me, the Ten-Forward room is not an illusion. SALIA Not that. I mean the way I feel. Wesley's heart quickens. Suddenly he's dizzy and confused with excitement. GUINAN (sotto to Wesley) Tell her about her eyes. Wesley and Salia look toward the voice. Wesley's embarrassed. 47 NEW ANGLE Guinan stands at the table with two dishes of Thalian chocolate mousse. She winks at Wesley and hands them each a dish. GUINAN You won't find a better dish of chocolate on Thalos or Daled Four. Guinan smiles and walks away. STAR TREK: "The Dauphin" - 12/23/88 - ACT THREE 35. 47 CONTINUED: SALIA (voice trails off) I'm sure I won't... WESLEY Is something wrong? SALIA I've had a great time being with you, Wesley. WESLEY That makes you sad? SALIA When I was on Klavdia Three all I could think of was leaving that isolation. Wesley is surprised. WESLEY Is that what awaits you on Daled Four? SALIA Yes. WESLEY But I thought you were going there to unite two groups which have been fighting. SALIA (a little surprised that he knew that) What else do you know? WESLEY Very little. There is almost nothing in the ship's computer about Daled Four. What will you do there? SALIA Your language has no word for the position I will hold. I only know I will have a lot of duties when I get there. In many ways I'll have even less freedom than I did on Klavdia Three. STAR TREK: "The Dauphin" - 12/23/88 - ACT THREE 36. 47 CONTINUED: (2) It takes Wesley a long moment to absorb this. Then he steels himself and blurts out his greatest hope. WESLEY You could stay. SALIA On the Enterprise? WESLEY Why not? Another pause -- this is a big emotional risk for Wesley. SALIA Because... Salia's confused. He's offering her a possibility she never dreamed of. She looks deep into his eyes, stands up and rushes out the door, leaving Wesley feeling bewildered and rejected. Guinan approaches. GUINAN Just because a girl runs out, doesn't mean she's not hoping you'll follow. 48 INT. CORRIDOR Salia walks down the corridor, weeping. She wipes at her tears and stares with confusion at her wet hand as if she's never cried before. She increases her pace. Wesley catches up to her. WESLEY (as they walk) What is it? What happened? Salia doesn't respond. WESLEY (continuing) Salia! Salia stops and turns to Wesley. SALIA Stay away from me! STAR TREK: "The Dauphin" - 12/23/88 - ACT THREE 37. 48 CONTINUED: Salia continues down the corridor, leaving Wesley frozen. An inner turbulence of rejection, upset and confusion makes it impossible for him to move. After several steps, Salia again stops and turns to face him. She fights to hold back the tears. SALIA (continuing) I'm sorry. Only the glimmer of hope makes it possible for Wesley to speak. WESLEY I don't understand. SALIA Wesley, I can't stay here! I can't have this life! I want it more than anything, but I can't have it! Wesley walks toward her, suddenly radiant with hope and enthusiasm -- she wants to stay! WESLEY Salia, nothing is impossible! SALIA Not for you. WESLEY There's a way. I know there is! He takes her hands in his. She stiffens her arms for a moment, then relaxes. They lock eyes. She's beginning to believe he might be right and he feels it. ANYA (O.S.) (harsh) Leave her alone! 49 NEW ANGLE Wesley and Salia turn with a start to see Picard and Anya outside the turbolift a few feet away. Behind them are Anya's two guards. Anya eyes Wesley with a burning glare. STAR TREK: "The Dauphin" - 12/23/88 - ACT THREE 38. 49 CONTINUED: PICARD (stern, a hint of tension) Wesley, step away from her. Wesley reluctantly complies. ANYA (to Salia) Come with me. Salia shoots Wesley a glance of despair, then walks toward Anya. On Wesley's disturbed look, we: FADE OUT. END OF ACT THREE STAR TREK: "The Dauphin" - 12/23/88 - ACT FOUR 39. ACT FOUR FADE IN: A50 INT. MAIN ENGINEERING Geordi observes a normal engine probe GRAPHIC at the control console. GEORDI Energy depletion level. COMPUTER VOICE Zero. Geordi smiles. GEORDI La Forge to bridge. PICARD'S COM VOICE Yes, Lieutenant? GEORDI I have just completed the final adjustments. Thank you for giving me the time. You now have warp engines available. PICARD'S COM VOICE Very good. AA50 INT. MAIN BRIDGE Picard and Riker are at Command. Data is at Ops, Worf at Tactical and Ensign Gibson is at Conn. PICARD (to Riker) Get us there as quickly as possible, Number One. Riker nods agreement, then: RIKER Ensign Gibson, warp eight point eight. Ensign Gibson punches in her adjustments. GIBSON Warp eight point eight, sir. STAR TREK: "The Dauphin" - 12/23/88 - ACT FOUR 40. AA50 CONTINUED: RIKER Estimated time to Daled Four? GIBSON (as she checks the console) Three hours -- nine minutes. PICARD Ensign Crusher, when you have completed your duties in Engineering... report to my Ready Room. WESLEY'S COM VOICE Yes, sir. Picard rises and leaves the bridge. AB50 OMITTED 50 INT. CAPTAIN'S READY ROOM (OPTICAL) Picard and Wesley. PICARD The woman Anya is not what she appears to be. She is an allasomorph. WESLEY A shape shifter? PICARD Yes. She is not just the governess, she is also the girl's protector. I don't like to interfere in personal relationships of anyone under my command, but... WESLEY You want me to stay away from Salia. PICARD Yes, I do. For the good of the ship and the safety of everyone on board. STAR TREK: "The Dauphin" - 12/23/88 - ACT FOUR 41. 50 CONTINUED: WESLEY I will do as you ask. Picard nods... Wesley turns and exits. Off Picard's reaction: 51 INT. SALIA'S QUARTERS Salia and Anya are present. Salia is agitated. SALIA Why won't you let me have a friend? The door SWISHES shut behind them. ANYA It's my duty to protect you from danger. SALIA There's no danger here! ANYA There's always danger from one who is not your kind. Salia, he's confusing you. He'll lead you from your duties. SALIA Whether I see Wesley is for me to decide! ANYA (anger building) It is not! I raised you, I protected you... and I intend to deliver you to Daled Four! SALIA Maybe what you want doesn't matter any more! ANYA (pause; softens) Please Salia, I know it's difficult. But you must do what you are destined to do. Salia is unsure where her destiny lies. STAR TREK: "The Dauphin" - 12/23/88 - ACT FOUR 42. 52 EXT. SPACE - THE ENTERPRISE (OPTICAL) as it COMES OUT OF WARP SPEED and continues toward the planet Daled Four. 53 INT. MAIN BRIDGE (OPTICAL) Riker and Troi flank Picard at his Command Station. Data at Ops, Worf at Tactical and ENSIGN GIBSON is at Conn. Daled Four is on the Main Viewer. PICARD Standard orbit. GIBSON Aye, sir. PICARD Open hailing frequencies, Mister Worf. WORF Hailing frequencies open. Data adjusts his instruments. DATA Sir, it is unlikely that Daled Four will respond. Picard turns to Data. PICARD Explain. DATA The troposphere appears to be absorbing our signals. It is fascinating, Captain. Klavdia Three and Daled Four have almost identical atmospheres. PICARD Magnify. Times twenty. 54 MAIN VIEWER (OPTICAL) Yellow, swirling clouds fill the screen. STAR TREK: "The Dauphin" - 12/23/88 - ACT FOUR 43. 55 SCENE (OPTICAL) Picard and Riker exchange a look. An unwelcome feeling of deja vu all around. PICARD The physical resemblance to Klavdia Three is striking. RIKER Remarkable... How could anyone live in an environment so totally hostile to human life? Riker stares at the planet's image on the viewscreen. DATA Apparently Klavdia Three was chosen for Salia because these conditions are important for their species's survival. PICARD Possible, Mister Data. RIKER Or else... they just wanted her to feel at home. 56 INT. WESLEY'S QUARTERS (OPTICAL) After a long moment, he walks to the food dispenser. Wesley just stares at it, lost in thoughts of Salia. The DOOR CHIME SOUNDS. WESLEY Come in. The doors open. 57 ANOTHER ANGLE Salia stands in the doorway. She smiles uncertainly. 58 SCENE Wesley's heart quickens. WESLEY Salia! (pause) You shouldn't have come. STAR TREK: "The Dauphin" - 12/23/88 - ACT FOUR 44. 58 CONTINUED: SALIA Do you want me to leave? WESLEY I didn't say that. Salia enters. SALIA Then you want me to stay. WESLEY Does Anya know you're here? SALIA That doesn't matter. WESLEY (pause) I'm glad you came. I thought Anya would have kept you with her. SALIA I have certain rights. WESLEY In other words, you slipped away. SALIA While Anya was asleep. Wesley laughs. SALIA (continuing) I'm sorry if you got in trouble with your captain. WESLEY I'm not in trouble... yet. SALIA Anya was afraid you would corrupt me. Wesley smiles. WESLEY With my wild way of life? Salia moves close. STAR TREK: "The Dauphin" - 12/23/88 - ACT FOUR 45. 58 CONTINUED: (2) SALIA Maybe... with the normal things people do... when they like each other. She pushes a lock of hair from his forehead. Wesley can feel himself coming apart. He slowly moves his lips to hers. They kiss. 58A CLOSE ON WESLEY AND SALIA lost in deep, passionate kisses. Finally, they come up for air. 59 OMITTED 60 ANOTHER ANGLE SUDDENLY there is a roar... Wesley looks up to see a monster in the doorway. Anya (as the monster) moves into the room. 61 WESLEY Startled... jumps back. He instinctively places his body between the monster and Salia. 62 SCENE In a frenzy, her eyes full of fire and fury, the monster advances. WESLEY (touches his communicator) Security to crew quarters! SALIA (O.S.) No... Anya... NO! The monster continues to advance. From behind Wesley hears a ROAR. He turns... the sound is coming from deep within Salia -- SUDDENLY, she transforms into a monster even more frightening than Anya. STAR TREK: "The Dauphin" - 12/23/88 - ACT FOUR 46. 62 CONTINUED: Wesley jumps back. For a beat the two fearsome creatures face each other. 63 OMITTED 64 OMITTED 65 WESLEY He is stunned. Salia -- the girl of his dreams is a -- shape shifter. 66 thru OMITTED 69 70 SCENE (OPTICAL) SUDDENLY, they both transform back to human form. ANYA You should not have disobeyed me. SALIA I had to. ANYA (to Wesley) I warned you to leave her alone. Before Wesley can respond, the security team, led by Worf, arrives. WORF You are not supposed to be here. ANYA We are leaving. WORF Escort them both to their quarters. And secure it with a forcefield. As they leave Salia turns back and she and Wesley hold a look. STAR TREK: "The Dauphin" - 12/23/88 - ACT FOUR 47. 71 ON WESLEY Where a few moments ago there was so much love... now there is only confusion and sadness. FADE OUT. END OF ACT FOUR STAR TREK: "The Dauphin" - 12/23/88 - ACT FIVE 48. ACT FIVE FADE IN: 72 EXT. SPACE - THE ENTERPRISE (OPTICAL) as it orbits the yellow planet Daled Four. PICARD (V.O.) Captain's log, supplemental. Since Anya's powers of transformation apparently gave her the ability to escape her guards unnoticed, we have sealed her quarters with a forcefield that will contain her no matter how small a form she may take. 73 INT. MAIN BRIDGE Picard and Riker are at their forward stations. Worf is at Tactical, Data has Ops and Ensign Gibson mans Conn. PICARD (V.O.) (continuing) Meanwhile we remain unable to communicate with Daled Four. Worf adjusts a control at his Tactical Station. WORF Captain -- I'm receiving an audio signal. PICARD Audio on. VOICE (crackling with static) Come in... (static) This is... (static) of Daled Four. DATA Sir, sensors indicate the communication originated from a gigawatt source on the planet. RIKER That's more power than our entire ship can generate. STAR TREK: "The Dauphin" - 12/23/88 - ACT FIVE 49. 73 CONTINUED: DATA It is what is needed to penetrate the atmosphere. RIKER Which means we lack the ability to respond... WORF Captain, there are beam-down coordinates encoded within the carrier signal. Picard and Riker exchange a look. They're relieved that they'll finally be able to get rid of their troublesome passengers. PICARD Splendid. RIKER I'll arrange for our guests to beam down. 74 thru OMITTED 78 78A EXT. CORRIDOR - OUTSIDE SALIA'S QUARTERS Two guards flank the doorway. There is a bluish tinge indicating a forcefield. Worf approaches. 78B INT. SALIA'S QUARTERS Salia hears the CHIME. SALIA Come in. The door opens. WORF We have arrived. Anya appears from the other room ANYA Salia will be with you in just a moment. STAR TREK: "The Dauphin" - 12/23/88 - ACT FIVE 50. 78B CONTINUED: Worf nods and steps back. SALIA You're not going? ANYA No. My duties have been completed. I have done all that I could. I hope it's been enough and that I did not fail you. SALIA You raised me well, and I thank you for that. ANYA Don't be angry at me. I would not have harmed the boy, I only wanted to frighten him. SALIA I know. ANYA You are ready for what awaits you and you will do well. I know that I have been tough on you, but it's because I want you to be prepared for whatever you may be required to do. SALIA Will I ever be able to leave Daled Four? ANYA Probably not. But, anything is possible. SALIA That's what Wes said. ANYA I hope he is right. SALIA Where will you go? ANYA The third moon is within range of this ship's transporter, I will go there. STAR TREK: "The Dauphin" - 12/23/88 - ACT FIVE 51. 78B CONTINUED: (2) SALIA I am going to miss you. ANYA I know. There is a long pause. Salia turns and walks to the exit. The door opens. SALIA (to the guard) I am ready. ARON Computer - field off. The field disappears. Salia exits her quarters. 78C INT. CORRIDOR As Salia and Aron near the Transporter Room, she sees Wesley standing off to the side. SALIA Wesley. For a moment he does not respond. Then: WESLEY Was it fun? She moves toward him. The guard stays a discreet distance away. SALIA What do you mean? WESLEY Playing humanoid. Was it fun? SALIA (hurt) Wesley, look at me. Right now -- this moment -- this is what I am. A humanoid girl. WESLEY But what are you really? SALIA Does it matter? STAR TREK: "The Dauphin" - 12/23/88 - ACT FIVE 52. 78C CONTINUED: WESLEY Yes. SALIA I'm sorry I hurt your feelings -- I didn't mean to. WESLEY I loved you. SALIA I love you, too. WESLEY Can you? SALIA Yes, oh... yes. I have the same feeling -- the same emotions as you. It's time for me to go. Wesley holds her look for a moment -- then she turns and walks toward the Transporter Room. 79 INT. TRANSPORTER ROOM THREE Riker stands with Salia. The Transporter Chief attends the controls. RIKER Prepare to beam Salia to the specified coordinates. TRANSPORTER CHIEF Aye, sir. SALIA Our world is grateful for the courtesy which you have extended us. RIKER I hope some day Daled Four and the Federation will have formal contact. SALIA That is my wish as well. TRANSPORTER CHIEF Coordinates set, sir. STAR TREK: "The Dauphin" - 12/23/88 - ACT FIVE 53. 79 CONTINUED: Salia takes her place on the pad. RIKER (to Transporter Chief) Proceed. The doors SWOOSH open and Wesley steps into the room. He has a dish of Thalian chocolate mousse. WESLEY Wait! Salia's face brightens. The transporter chief looks to Riker. Riker gestures for him to wait with the transport. Wesley steps to the pad. 80 ANGLE ON WESLEY, SALIA (OPTICAL) as Wesley hands her the bowl of mousse. WESLEY A taste to remember me by. Salia dips her finger in the mousse and gazes at it as if this is the last time she will experience the sensation of taste. She slowly licks it off, then hands the bowl to her escort. SALIA I wish there were something I could give you. WESLEY You already have. She steps forward and gives him an embrace. SALIA I'm glad you came to say good-bye. Thank you... for everything. They separate. SALIA (continuing) I want you to leave now. WESLEY Why? STAR TREK: "The Dauphin" - 12/23/88 - ACT FIVE 54. 80 CONTINUED: SALIA Because I cannot arrive on my planet in this form and I want you to remember me as I am now. WESLEY We have had enough disguises between us. It's time for the truth. Salia nods, then steps up on the transporter pad. After a moment, she raises her arms. Then TRANSMUTES -- not in the violent, quivering manner as before, but gracefully and sensually -- into a luminous form of such beauty and elegance that it takes Wesley's breath away. The glow from this creature lights his face and he smiles... totally enraptured. For a moment it is only Wesley and this creature. Then: WESLEY (continuing) Energize. And the transporter chief hits the controls and they all watch transfixed as the form BEAMS OUT. 81 OMITTED 82 ON WESLEY knowing Salia is gone from his life forever. 83 INT. TEN-FORWARD Wesley sits at a table, staring into its light. 84 ON GUINAN as she enters, regards Wesley. 85 SCENE Guinan slowly walks over to Wesley's table and sits. STAR TREK: "The Dauphin" - 12/23/88 - ACT FIVE 55. 85 CONTINUED: WESLEY Seeing her on the transporter pad was like seeing pure light. (he pauses) I miss her. I feel so empty. GUINAN I know that sensation. WESLEY I'm never going to feel this way about anyone else. GUINAN You're right. Wesley looks up. WESLEY I didn't expect you to say that. GUINAN Oh, there will be others -- but, the next time you feel love will be different. Each time is different. WESLEY Knowing that doesn't make it any easier. GUINAN It isn't supposed to. Wesley nods -- then rises. WESLEY I better get back to my duties. GUINAN Me too. Guinan smiles. 86 INT. MAIN BRIDGE (OPTICAL) Wesley exits the turbolift. Riker is at his Command Position. Data's at Ops, Worf at Tactical. Wesley goes to Conn and takes over from Ensign Gibson. A wedge of Daled Four, surrounded by a field of stars, is visible on the Main Viewer. STAR TREK: "The Dauphin" - 12/23/88 - ACT FIVE 56. 86 CONTINUED: RIKER We have the course set for Aldebaran Zeta, Sir. PICARD Mister Crusher, set speed -- warp six point five. WESLEY Done, Captain. Picard pauses a moment as Wesley looks at the Main Viewer. To Wesley, the heavenly bodies symbolize discovery, excitement and love. For now, there is also sadness. PICARD Engage. Wesley engages the warp drive and watches Daled Four disappear from the Main Viewer. 87 EXT. SPACE - THE ENTERPRISE (OPTICAL) goes into warp drive and shoots into space as we: FADE OUT. END OF ACT FIVE THE END STAR TREK: THE NEXT GENERATION "Contagion" #40272-137 Written by Steve Gerber & Beth Woods Directed by Joseph L. Scanlan THE WRITING CREDITS MAY NOT BE FINAL AND SHOULD NOT BE USED FOR PUBLICITY OR ADVERTISING PURPOSES WITHOUT FIRST CHECKING WITH THE TELEVISION LEGAL DEPARTMENT. Copyright 1989 Paramount Pictures Corporation. All Rights Reserved. This script is not for publication or reproduction. No one is authorized to dispose of same. If lost or destroyed, please notify the Script Department. 2ND REV. FINAL DRAFT JANUARY 4, 1989 STAR TREK: "Contagion" - REV. 01/10/89 - CAST STAR TREK: THE NEXT GENERATION "Contagion" CAST PICARD CAPTAIN DONALD VARLEY RIKER ROMULAN SUB-COMMANDER TARIS DATA PULASKI Non-Speaking TROI YAMATO CREWMEMBERS GEORDI ROMULAN CREWMEMBERS WORF WESLEY Voice-Over ICONIAN COMPUTER VOICE O'BRIEN ROMULAN COMPUTER VOICE WILLIAMS DOCTOR Non-Speaking CREWMEMBERS Voice-Over COMPUTER VOICE STAR TREK: "Contagion" - 01/04/89 - SETS STAR TREK: THE NEXT GENERATION "Contagion" SETS INTERIORS EXTERIORS USS ENTERPRISE USS ENTERPRISE CAPTAIN'S READY ROOM MAIN BRIDGE USS YAMATO OBSERVATION LOUNGE MAIN ENGINEERING PLANET ICONIA CORRIDOR TURBOLIFT ROMULAN BIRD OF PREY "HAAKONA" ACCESS TUNNEL TRANSPORTER ROOM PLANET ICONIA CONTROL CENTER ROMULAN BIRD OF PREY "HAAKONA" MAIN BRIDGE STAR TREK: "Contagion" - REV. 01/06/89 - TEASER 1. STAR TREK: THE NEXT GENERATION "Contagion" TEASER FADE IN: 1 EXT. SPACE - THE ENTERPRISE (OPTICAL) slows to sub-warp speed, moving forward on impulse. PICARD (V.O.) Captain's log, stardate 42609.1. In response to a desperate plea for aid by my old friend, Captain Donald Varley of the USS Yamato, I am running a grave risk and taking the Enterprise into the Neutral Zone. 2 INT. CAPTAIN'S READY ROOM PICARD at his desk, scanning a screen of data, schematics of the Galaxy Class starships, as: PICARD (V.O.) (continuing) This rendezvous is necessitated by dangerous malfunctions which are plaguing our sister ship. Perhaps with both crews working together we will be able to eliminate the problem -- before we are detected by the Romulans. He taps a touchpad, turning off the screen. 3 INT. MAIN BRIDGE The Ready Room doors open and Picard steps onto the bridge. PICARD Mister Crusher -- how long to rendezvous? STAR TREK: "Contagion" - 01/04/89 - TEASER 2. 4 VARIOUS ANGLES AS NEEDED WESLEY, WORF, and TROI are at their stations. RIKER is at Science One with DATA. Picard crosses to his seat. WESLEY Four minutes, thirty-three seconds, sir. PICARD Status of download, Mister Data? DATA Entire Yamato log will be in our computer by rendezvous. RIKER (to Data) Have you nailed down our little hiccup yet? DATA Sir? RIKER The odd reading. DATA No. It might be due to the problems currently being experienced by the Yamato. PICARD Trouble, Number One? RIKER I'm not sure, sir. (to Worf) We are alone out here? WORF Yes, sir. There are no other vessels in the area except the Yamato. (checks his panel) Which is coming into viewer range now. Riker takes his seat next to Picard. Data moves back to his station. STAR TREK: "Contagion" - REV. 01/10/89 - TEASER 3. 5 COMMAND AREA AND VIEWSCREEN - ANGLES AS NEEDED (OPTICAL) The screen displays a majestic view of the approaching USS Yamato, a twin of the Enterprise. Picard and Riker rise and move toward the viewscreen. WORF Transmission from the Yamato, Captain -- on visual. On screen is CAPTAIN DONALD VARLEY, about Picard's age, but brawnier and white-haired. He is standing near the executive officer's chair. To either side of him are two crewmembers who are inspecting an open panel which shows scorch marks and scattered isolinear chips. A third crewmember crosses in the foreground. PICARD Donald, what's a nice Starfleet Captain like you doing in a place like this? VARLEY It's good to see you, Jean-Luc, despite your antique humor. I only hope your people can help us. The malfunctions are becoming serious. We lost an engineering team when the computer shut down the forcefield in an open shuttle bay. Eighteen people. Picard and Riker exchange a look of shock. RIKER And no idea what's causing these problems? VARLEY None. They are affecting every system simultaneously. It's like the ship has suddenly decided to fall apart. (a forced little laugh) It's beginning to make me think we should have run these Galaxy Class ships across a few more drawing boards before we built one. PICARD Are you suggesting it's a design flaw? STAR TREK: "Contagion" - REV. 01/10/89 - TEASER 3A. 5 CONTINUED: Varley is a man under intense pressure who is burying it deep. He's had to call on an old friend for help. He feels helpless and frightened. He has also committed a major offense by entering the Neutral Zone. He's talking a little off the top of his head. STAR TREK: "Contagion" - REV. 01/10/89 - TEASER 4. 5 CONTINUED: (2) VARLEY I don't know. I'm grasping at straws here. All I know is that we've got to get it fixed, and before I lose more than an engineering team. RIKER (urgently) Do you wish to evacuate non-essential personnel to the Enterprise? VARLEY No... that would be premature. PICARD Donald, we'll get our teams to work. I'm sure neither of us feels too comfortable sitting around the Neutral Zone. VARLEY I know what you're thinking, what the hell am I doing here? Well, I had heard rumors about a couple of archaeological digs that started making the Iconians sound a lot less like legend. I did a little investigating, and I located their homeworld. PICARD In the Neutral Zone. VARLEY In the Neutral Zone. PICARD Don, this was quite a risk to run just to satisfy an archaeological curiosity. VARLEY No, the risk would be in allowing the Romulans to locate Iconia. The viewer image of Varley breaks up in STATIC, fading for a beat, then returns. STAR TREK: "Contagion" - REV. 01/10/89 - TEASER 5. 5 CONTINUED: (3) VARLEY (continuing) Fortunately, I got there first. It's a virtually dead planet, but enough of the technology remains to give the Romulans an edge if they were ever to find it. During Varley's speech, more break-up occurs. PICARD Don, your transmission is breaking up. (rising, then to Data) Clean that up. WORF (tensely) Sir, there is an energy build-up in the Yamato's engineering section. Picard whirls back to face the screen. PICARD Yamato, this is the Enterprise, come in Yamato. More STATIC. WORF Magnetic seals in the antimatter chamber decaying! PICARD Captain. Don! The viewer image of Varley BURSTS INTO A BLINDING WHITE FLASH. PULL BACK to show the Yamato exploding. PICARD (continuing) Shields up! STAR TREK: "Contagion" - 01/04/89 - TEASER 6. 6 INT. MAIN BRIDGE AND VIEWSCREEN - VARIOUS ANGLES (OPTICAL) The bridge crew reflexively shield their eyes. The flash subsides, and the viewscreen defaults to a forward view of space and a barrage of fiery objects, hurtling toward the ship. KLAXONS SIGNAL RED ALERT as the objects batter the Enterprise. The ship is pounded (SFX) and shakes violently. WORF Sir! Worf is staring at the viewscreen. Picard and Riker follow his gaze and stared, stunned, as the Yamato's saucer section, engulfed in flames and explosions, sails past, narrowly missing the Enterprise. DATA (quietly) Sensors indicate no life readings from the Yamato's saucer section. WORF (looks up from his instruments) Captain! Another vessel coming into sensor range. (ominously) It is Romulan. FADE OUT. END OF TEASER STAR TREK: "Contagion" - REV. 01/09/89 - ACT ONE 7. ACT ONE FADE IN: 7 INT. MAIN BRIDGE (OPTICAL) On the Main Viewer is the Romulan battle cruiser. PICARD (V.O.) Captain's log, supplemental. The Yamato's entire crew and their families, more than a thousand people, have been lost. Data is at Ops. Wesley is at the Conn station. Riker is seated at his normal position. End on Picard as he finishes the log. PICARD (V.O.) (continuing) Circumstances, unfortunately, permit us no pause for grief. WORF No response from the Romulan vessel. RIKER Arm phasers and prepare to lock on target. PICARD (to Data) Did they attack the Yamato? DATA Unknown, sir. WORF All their weapons systems have been fully activated. Still no response. PICARD (upward glance; then, sternly) Romulan vessel, this is Captain Picard of the USS Enterprise. Explain your illegal presence in the Neutral Zone -- STAR TREK: "Contagion" - 01/04/89 - ACT ONE 8. 8 VIEWSCREEN (OPTICAL) He is interrupted by an UNFAMILIAR FEMALE VOICE. Picard faces the image of the SUB-COMMANDER. She is seated in what we assume to be her command position on the Romulan bridge. TARIS Explain yours! PICARD Are you responsible for the destruction of the Yamato? TARIS No. And believe me, Captain, had we chosen to exercise our right to defend the Neutral Zone, we would not have stopped with one starship. You will leave at once. Picard makes a slashing gesture to Worf who cuts the com. PICARD (looking to his bridge crew) Comments? TROI She is extremely anxious -- WORF Understandable if she just destroyed a Federation starship. RIKER Your scan was inconclusive. We can't be sure of what happened to the Yamato. TROI Our presence in the Neutral Zone is provocative. It could force her to respond. STAR TREK: "Contagion" - 01/04/89 - ACT ONE 9. 8 CONTINUED: PICARD (to Worf) Open com. We will comply when we have determined the cause of the Yamato's destruction. And when we are fully satisfied that you were not responsible. Picard out. The Romulan response is to disappear. WORF They are engaging their cloaking device. RIKER Good. They can't fire when they're cloaked. WORF Unless they have overcome that deficiency. The Yamato was destroyed while they were cloaked. PICARD Forget the Romulans. I want to know what happened to the Yamato. Number One, assemble the staff for a conference in one hour. And I want answers. RIKER Aye, sir. 9 EXT. SPACE - THE ENTERPRISE (OPTICAL) stationary, holding in space. 10 INT. OBSERVATION LOUNGE Riker, Data, Worf, and GEORDI are present. Geordi stands by a screen containing a schematic of the Yamato and a blow-up of the affected engineering section. There is a pulsing red dot in the engine area. STAR TREK: "Contagion" - REV. 01/06/89 - ACT ONE 10. 10 CONTINUED: GEORDI (pointing) Sensor recordings reveal that what we witnessed was an uncontrolled and catastrophic matter/antimatter mix. The magnetic seals between the chambers collapsed -- PICARD That's not possible. GEORDI Yes, sir, it is, but a highly improbable series of events has to take place before such an occurrence can result. PICARD Explain. GEORDI In the event of a breach of seal integrity there is an emergency release system which dumps the antimatter. DATA Apparently such a dump began, was then halted, and the containment seals were dropped. There was still sufficient antimatter present to lead to the result we observed. They all look back to the schematic where that deadly red dot is still pulsing. PICARD Then there is no evidence that a weapon was used? Troi enters and moves to a chair. Seats herself. TROI I'm sorry I'm late. I was with the children. They have been deeply affected by the Yamato's destruction. There is a beat while they consider the cost in human terms of this tragedy. STAR TREK: "Contagion" - REV. 01/06/89 - ACT ONE 11. 10 CONTINUED: (2) PICARD Mister Data. DATA Evidence of a weapon? No, sir, none. GEORDI However it happened, the Yamato did it to herself. PICARD Theorize. What do you think caused this catastrophic malfunction? GEORDI (looking very grim) I think Captain Varley may have been correct. There could be a design flaw. RIKER In a Galaxy Class starship? Murmurs and physical reactions of consternation from the officers. Picard is stone faced, unmoved. GEORDI Yes, sir. It's the most complicated piece of machinery ever built. Something could have been overlooked. PICARD Knowing where the flaw is located, do you think you can isolate and solve the problem? GEORDI We're working on it now. PICARD Pull any and all personnel who might be useful to your task. They rise, ready to scatter to their assigned tasks. STAR TREK: "Contagion" - REV. 01/06/89 - ACT ONE 12. 10 CONTINUED: (3) TROI (to Picard) If we have established that the Romulans were not responsible for the destruction of the Yamato, would it not be prudent for us to withdraw? PICARD If this is a design flaw, we better stay where we are and give Geordi time to work. Or what happened to the Yamato could happen to us. 10A EXT. SPACE - THE ENTERPRISE (OPTICAL) remaining stationary. 11 INT. CAPTAIN'S READY ROOM Picard is standing near his desk, staring at his unactivated console. This is a duty he'd like to skip. He sits down. PICARD Computer, access Captain Donald Varley's personal log. Search parameter, locate entries containing the words Romulan and Iconia. COMPUTER VOICE Working. 12 COMPUTER VIEWSCREEN (OPTICAL) Top of the screen shows a date and time code. Varley is slowly turning an alien-looking device in his hands. It is corroded and appears to be very old. STAR TREK: "Contagion" - REV. 01/10/89 - ACT ONE 13. 12 CONTINUED: VARLEY Personal log. It was kind of Doctor Ramsey to allow me to carry away my own little piece of legend from the archaeological dig on Denius Three. My engineers have examined it, but are completely baffled by the technology. What was its purpose? I'm like a caveman confronted by a tricorder. I'm certain this device is Iconian. But how far had it travelled before it was abandoned on an alien world? A new image appears. Varley: elated. VARLEY (continuing) Personal log. A galactic Rosetta stone. The starfield shown on the artifact was unintelligible until I took into account two hundred millenia of stellar drift. After that it was easy to pinpoint Iconia. Screen blips. New image. Varley: thoughtful. VARLEY (continuing) My first officer is questioning the wisdom of my order to violate the Neutral Zone, but I am convinced I have taken the only proper course. Should this advanced technology fall into the hands of the Romulans, we might as well dock our ships and defend ourselves with sticks. Screen blips. New image. Varley: grim faced. VARLEY (continuing) Personal log. We've been spotted by a Romulan cruiser, but after playing hide and seek through several solar systems, I think I've managed to elude them. STAR TREK: "Contagion" - 01/04/89 - ACT ONE 14. 12 CONTINUED: (2) Screen blips. New image. VARLEY (continuing) The Iconian probe scan -- was it an attempt at communication? If only I knew what we were dealing with here. Screen blips. New image. Varley: worried and angry. VARLEY (continuing) Personal log. I am unable to send an away team to the surface of Iconia, nor can I scan the energy source on the planet because of these maddening system failures. It is infuriating to be stopped at the threshold of a dream by one's own ship. We are leaving orbit to rendezvous with Picard. If his people can't help us repair the Yamato, I must convince him to continue this exploration. The future well being of the Federation may depend upon it. The image blips out. COMPUTER VOICE No further entries conforming to search parameters. For a long, grim moment, Picard stares at the blank screen. He then rises and starts to exit. But the doors fail to open. He steps back, giving the doors a quizzical look, then steps forward again. This time the doors open normally. He exits. 13 INT. MAIN BRIDGE (OPTICAL) Riker is in the Command Chair. Data is at Science One. Picard crosses to the android. PICARD Mister Data, there is a reference in Captain Varley's personal log to a probe which scanned the Yamato. STAR TREK: "Contagion" - REV. 01/09/89 - ACT ONE 15. 13 CONTINUED: DATA Yes, sir. We have a visual record. PICARD Put it on Main Viewer. 14 ANOTHER ANGLE (OPTICAL) The image does not fill the entire screen. Next to it are a series of read-outs and a reference to the fact that this is from the Yamato log. Rising into view from the surface of a planet comes the probe. It is spherical, about the size of a beachball. It has a hard, transparent shell and, within it, a deep, translucent blue gel, flecked with bits of reflective material. It stops at "eye-level" and emits a BURST OF CRACKLING, SPIDERY ENERGY directly INTO CAMERA. RIKER What the devil is that? PICARD (to Data) Have you ever seen anything like that before? DATA No, sir, but it appears to be a scanner. Possibly a transmitter. RIKER Transmitting what? DATA Unknown, sir. Picard crosses to his Command Chair. PICARD Engineering. GEORDI'S COM VOICE La Forge. PICARD Progress on your matter/antimatter scan? STAR TREK: "Contagion" - 01/04/89 - ACT ONE 16. 14 CONTINUED: GEORDI'S COM VOICE Everything continues to check out. I'm starting an analysis of the magnetic coils. PICARD Data, when the Yamato was probed, where was she? DATA In orbit around a planet at coordinates two two seven mark three five nine. PICARD Estimated time of arrival at warp factor eight? DATA Twelve hours, sixteen minutes. WORF Sir, that would put us substantially closer to the Romulan side of the Neutral Zone. PICARD It can't be helped. Ensign Crusher, lay in a course. Warp factor eight. Riker is staring at him. PICARD (continuing) We are going to assume the Yamato's mission. RIKER And risk a war? PICARD If that's what it takes to get some answers. As we: FADE OUT. END OF ACT ONE STAR TREK: "Contagion" - REV. 01/09/89 - ACT TWO 17. ACT TWO FADE IN: 15 INT. CAPTAIN'S READY ROOM (OPTICAL) Picard is seated at his desk. There is a CHIME. PICARD Come. Wesley enters a little hesitantly. Picard eyes him, a little surprised by the intrusion. WESLEY Sir, may I talk to you for a minute? PICARD Yes. Wesley crosses to him. Picard studies the boy's serious face. WESLEY It's about the Iconians, sir. I'd always heard that they were just a myth. PICARD China was thought to be only a myth until Marco Polo travelled there. No, the Iconians were real. We know that three systems in this sector have a number of cultural similarities. Similarities which can be explained only if there had been a single unifying force. WESLEY The Iconians colonized those worlds? PICARD Probably conquered. WESLEY So they were warlike? STAR TREK: "Contagion" - 01/04/89 - ACT TWO 18. 15 CONTINUED: PICARD Perhaps. Ancient texts refer to them as the Demons of Air and Darkness, but that could have so many different interpretations. WESLEY Air and darkness? PICARD Legend has it that they travelled without the benefit of spaceships. Merely appearing from thin air on distant planets. WESLEY That sounds like magic. PICARD Wouldn't we seem magical to a stone-age people? WESLEY (responding to Picard's enthusiasm and echoing it) How did you find out about all this? PICARD Archaeology has been a hobby since my Academy days. But why don't we talk about what really brought you here? WESLEY I can't stop thinking about the Yamato. All those people -- dead. I just don't know how you do it. You, Commander Riker, Geordi, you all handle it so easily. PICARD Easily. No, not easily. Picard rises and crosses to the food unit. Keys for a cup of tea. STAR TREK: "Contagion" - REV. 01/10/89 - ACT TWO 19. 15 CONTINUED: (2) PICARD (continuing) Darjeeling tea, hot. We handle it because we are trained to, as you will be. But if the time ever comes when the death of even a single individual fails to move us -- Sitting smugly on the shelf of the food unit is a single flower in a pot. Picard takes a step back, eyes it, points. PICARD (continuing) That should not have happened. 16 OMITTED 17 EXT. SPACE - THE ENTERPRISE (OPTICAL) in route to Iconia. PICARD (V.O.) Captain's log, supplemental. As happened with her sister, the Enterprise is being plagued by a series of system failures. 18 INT. MAIN ENGINEERING (Log entry will conclude over the fade-in to Engineering.) PICARD (V.O.) (continuing) So far they are random, but perhaps early symptoms of what happened to the Yamato. Geordi is hurrying from station to station. He holds a PADD and is making notes. Five other crewmembers hurry about. The com SOUNDS. With a mutter, he lunges to answer. GEORDI La Forge! STAR TREK: "Contagion" - 01/04/89 - ACT TWO 20. 18 CONTINUED: PICARD'S COM VOICE Lieutenant, are you making any progress toward a solution to our problems? GEORDI A solution, no sir, but I can eliminate one worry. It is not a design flaw. I've been reviewing the Yamato's log, and I think maybe that alien probe had something to do with her problems. PICARD'S COM VOICE How? GEORDI I'd need to see the thing. PICARD'S COM VOICE If it was the probe, that explains the Yamato; but how do you account for the difficulties the Enterprise is experiencing? GEORDI I can't. PICARD'S COM VOICE Are our problems likely to attain the seriousness experienced by the Yamato? GEORDI If you want speculation, yes sir, I think they are. I need time. PICARD'S COM VOICE Lieutenant, time is the one thing which we do not have in abundance. 19 EXT. SPACE - PLANET ICONIA (OPTICAL) as the Enterprise ENTERS SHOT and assumes orbit. Iconia is a brown and red world. There are few bodies of water. It looks like a dead world. STAR TREK: "Contagion" - REV. 01/06/89 - ACT TWO 21. 20 INT. MAIN BRIDGE - VARIOUS ANGLES (OPTICAL) Picard, Riker, Data, Wesley and Worf are at their stations. DATA Scanning. Picard stands and moves between Wesley and Data. Examines the viewscreen, looking for anything that will tell him more about this place. PICARD (impatiently) Mister Data. DATA No life-form readings. WORF All major cities have been heavily damaged, and the pattern of destruction is consistent with large-scale orbital bombardment. PICARD How long ago? DATA Approximately two hundred thousand years. WORF There is an energy source in the mountains of the smaller continent. PICARD Magnify. STAR TREK: "Contagion" - REV. 01/06/89 - ACT TWO 22. 20 CONTINUED: RIKER Is this Iconia? PICARD Donald Varley died believing that it was. Suddenly, we SEE a tiny bright FLASH OF LIGHT on the planet's surface. WORF Captain! Projectile launched from the planet's surface! DATA (checking readings) Its size and composition match the probe which scanned the Yamato. PICARD Shields up. Ready the tractor beam. Lieutenant La Forge, I'm about to assist you in your research. A probe has been launched from Iconia. I intend to capture it. 21 INT. MAIN ENGINEERING Geordi is studying his notes. He has the expression of a man who has made the final leap of logic and put together the puzzle. GEORDI No, sir, wait! There is a SQUEAL OF STATIC from the com, causing everyone in Engineering to cover their ears. The communications system goes dead. GEORDI (continuing) Captain! Captain! (no response) Damn! He races for the door. STAR TREK: "Contagion" - 01/04/89 - ACT TWO 23. 22 INT. CORRIDOR Geordi runs down the corridor heading for the turbolift. 23 INT. TURBOLIFT Geordi enters the turbolift. GEORDI Bridge! The turbolift lurches into motion at an incredible speed, SCREAMING along its shaft, decks FLASHING by almost stroboscopically. The sudden acceleration pins Geordi to the ceiling and knocks off his VISOR. GEORDI (continuing; shouts) Emergency stop! 24 ANOTHER ANGLE The turbolift comes to a sudden, complete halt. The SCREAMING of the air in the shaft STOPS, and Geordi falls to the floor. Barely a beat... then the lift SCREAMS off in another direction, pinning him against a wall. GEORDI Emergency stop! Stop dammit! Another sudden halt -- and Geordi rolls toward the doors. He rolls across his VISOR, but manages to get a grip on the VISOR. 25 INT. MAIN BRIDGE - ANGLE ON THE PROBE (OPTICAL) Picard and Riker stand in front of their command positions watching the viewscreen as the probe approaches. Worf leans in tensely over his console ready to key the tractor beam. WORF Tractor beam ready, sir. PICARD Prepare to lower shields, Mister Crusher. STAR TREK: "Contagion" - 01/04/89 - ACT TWO 24. 25 CONTINUED: Suddenly the turbolift doors WHOOSH open, and Geordi tumbles out. He jams on his VISOR. Riker moves to assist him. Geordi looks up and sees the probe now dangerously near to the Enterprise. RIKER Geordi, are you -- Shrugging off the helping hands: GEORDI Destroy it, sir, quickly! Picard is not a man to waste words when one of his top officers is so obviously in distress. PICARD Worf, target phasers! Worf quickly punches several touchpads on his console. WORF Phasers locked on target. 26 ANGLE -- PAST PICARD TO VIEWSCREEN (OPTICAL) The probe almost on top of the Enterprise. It begins to spit its energy. PICARD Fire! PHASERS FIRE, striking the probe. It EXPLODES. PICARD (continuing; cool as ice) Mister La Forge, are you all right? GEORDI Yes, sir, and thank you for trusting me. If that thing had managed to scan us, we would have had no hope of saving the Enterprise. Various reaction shots from the bridge crew as we: FADE OUT. END OF ACT TWO STAR TREK: "Contagion" - REV. 01/06/89 - ACT THREE 25. ACT THREE FADE IN: 27 OMITTED 28 INT. OBSERVATION LOUNGE Present are Picard, Riker, Geordi, and Data. GEORDI That probe was a transmitter sending an alien computer program. The same program that is currently aboard the Enterprise and trying to rewrite our software in its own image. We have two completely incompatible computer systems trying to interact. RIKER So that's why the ship's instruments have become so erratic. GEORDI Yes. PICARD What can you do? GEORDI Not very much. The Iconian program is so sophisticated I don't think I'll ever understand it. DATA Consider, Captain, this program has entered an alien data base -- ours -- and in less than seven hours it has managed to not only learn our system, but has also begun to reprogram our computer. PICARD (to Geordi) So the earlier probe was responsible for the Yamato's destruction. STAR TREK: "Contagion" - REV. 01/06/89 - ACT THREE 26. 28 CONTINUED: GEORDI Only insofar as the probe transmitted the program. RIKER But we weren't scanned by the probe. So how did this thing get aboard the Enterprise? DATA We downloaded the Yamato log, and contained in the log was the program. PICARD So why haven't we suffered their fate? GEORDI The program affected all systems on the Yamato simultaneously. But with us, the program was deposited in a specific section of our mainframe. It's having to work its way out from that location. That gives us a little breathing space. RIKER Not much. Reports of injuries are mounting. DATA Doctor Pulaski is unwilling to trust the turbolifts. She is sending medical teams through the access tunnels. GEORDI Sir, the Enterprise computer system is a lot like our bodies with a voluntary and involuntary system. Probably ninety percent of what happens on this ship is done automatically, completely beyond our control. We're sitting on a bomb that could go any second -- or never. STAR TREK: "Contagion" - REV. 01/06/89 - ACT THREE 26A. 28 CONTINUED: (2) RIKER Can you stop this thing? GEORDI I'll give it my best shot. STAR TREK: "Contagion" - REV. 01/12/89 - ACT THREE 27. 29 OMITTED 29A INT. SICKBAY PULASKI chews out one of her medical staff. Sickbay is a scene of orderly chaos. The single remaining doctor is bouncing between three patients, the readouts on the biobeds are going crazy. PULASKI The biobeds aren't working. The ship's falling apart and you're wasting my time about biobeds? I've got thirty-five emergency calls scattered across twelve decks and my trauma teams are being run ragged trying to respond. (almost to herself, flinging up her hands) Biobeds! The doctor is trying to work with a patient with a broken arm. Frustrated, he calls for Pulaski: DOCTOR Doctor Pulaski. PULASKI What? DOCTOR I've got a problem here. Pulaski storms past the chastised nurse to where the harried doctor is staring at the broken arm and a shell that isn't doing its job. DOCTOR (continuing) The knitter isn't working. PULASKI Use a splint. A beat as the doctor stares uncomprehendingly at Pulaski. PULASKI (continuing) Splint. It's a very ancient concept -- two flat pieces of wood or plastic, a bandage. The broken limb is kept immobile. STAR TREK: "Contagion" - REV. 01/12/89 - ACT THREE 27A-28. 29A CONTINUED: DOCTOR That's crazy, that's not practicing medicine. PULASKI Oh yes it is. A time-honored way of practicing medicine -- by using your head and your heart and your hands. So jump to it. The doctor jumps to it. STAR TREK: "Contagion" - REV. 01/12/89 - ACT THREE 28AA. 30 INT. MAIN ENGINEERING (OPTICAL) Geordi and Data (mood lighting if desired). GEORDI Dammit! DATA Try a bypass on the shield control interface. GEORDI No go. Let me see if I can directly access the master program. STAR TREK: "Contagion" - REV. 01/09/89 - ACT THREE 28A. 30 CONTINUED: His fingers fly across the key pads. Suddenly the console passes a powerful electric shock into Geordi, freezing him to the console. Data pulls Geordi off the console. Feels for a throat pulse. Geordi is already recovering and fends him off. GEORDI (continuing) What happened? STAR TREK: "Contagion" - REV. 01/09/89 - ACT THREE 29. 30 CONTINUED: (2) DATA Any answer would be mere speculation. This is just another example of how our actions have random results. GEORDI Thank you, Data, I noticed. 31 INT. CAPTAIN'S READY ROOM Present are Picard, Riker (mood lighting if desired). RIKER Life support has failed on Decks Seven and Thirteen. Picard gives no reaction to this report. RIKER (continuing) Suppose this thing manages to rewrite our entire system? It's so far beyond us that we don't have a hope of understanding it, much less controlling it. Our ignorance could kill us. PICARD We may never reach that point. A variation of what happened to the Yamato may destroy us first. RIKER So we just sit here while the ship disintegrates around us? PICARD The probe was launched from Iconia, probably by an automated system. There may be records near the launch site which could help us find a solution. RIKER I'll form an away team. PICARD I will lead it. STAR TREK: "Contagion" - REV. 01/11/89 - ACT THREE 30. 31 CONTINUED: RIKER You will lead it? PICARD Yes. RIKER We've had this discussion a hundred times before. PICARD Will, ever since I was a cadet I've studied the Iconians. I have to be the one to go. Riker slowly nods. PICARD (continuing) The Enterprise is yours. RIKER For as long as she lasts. 32 INT. TRANSPORTER ROOM (OPTICAL) O'Brien behind the console. Tools lie scattered around the transporter, isolinear chips, etc. Picard, Data, and Worf on the platform (mood lighting if desired). O'BRIEN I've got a fix on the energy source, and for the moment this baby... (points to the transporter console) ... is working, but that could change in an instant. PICARD We're aware of the risks. Energize. They DEMATERIALIZE. STAR TREK: "Contagion" - 01/09/89 - ACT THREE 31. 33 INT. MAIN BRIDGE (OPTICAL) Riker in the Command Chair with Troi at his side. Wesley is at his station. WILLIAMS is at Tactical, supernumeraries at the other positions (mood lighting if desired). O'BRIEN'S COM VOICE Transport complete. RIKER Stay sharp, Mister O'Brien, I want to be able to pull them out at a moment's notice. WESLEY Commander, Romulan vessel! At Wesley's call Riker's focus is jerked to the viewscreen where a Romulan vessel is appearing. Following dialogue must proceed very quickly. RIKER Open hailing frequencies. WILLIAMS They're arming photon torpedoes! RIKER Shields up! Go to Red Alert! WESLEY Shields not responding. WILLIAMS They are preparing to fire photon torpedoes! RIKER Ensign Crusher, we need those shields! WESLEY I'm trying, sir! WILLIAMS Firing. Everybody turns to face the viewscreen and tenses as they prepare to die. Nothing happens. RIKER What happened? STAR TREK: "Contagion" - 01/09/89 - ACT THREE 32. 33 CONTINUED: WILLIAMS (confused) Instead of firing they suddenly disarmed and cancelled. RIKER Fate protects fools, little children and ships called Enterprise. (to Williams) Lock phasers on the Romulan, but hold your fire. WESLEY Sir, the shields are up. RIKER (almost to himself) Impeccable timing. WESLEY Uh, shields are back down. WILLIAMS Phaser banks are down. WESLEY The shields are back up. TROI In another time and another place this could be funny. RIKER Status of the torpedo banks? WILLIAMS They're down too. RIKER In case it should become necessary to fight, do you suppose you could find me some rocks to throw at them? Williams just shrugs and looks helpless. She returns to tinkering with the console. WILLIAMS Sir, the Romulan torpedoes are continuing to arm and disarm. STAR TREK: "Contagion" - REV. 01/10/89 - ACT THREE 33. 33 CONTINUED: (2) RIKER Maybe their attempt to fire was not intentional. (to Williams) Open hailing frequencies. WILLIAMS Open. The viewscreen comes up revealing the Romulan sub-commander. RIKER Romulan vessel, this is Commander William Riker, first officer of the USS Enterprise. Why did you attempt to fire on us? TARIS This is Sub-Commander Taris of the Haakona. Why have you penetrated deeper into the Neutral Zone? RIKER Why are you still here? TARIS I have claimed this planet for the Romulan Empire. RIKER This is the Neutral Zone. Nobody can claim anything. TARIS You will withdraw or I will be forced to destroy your ship and your away team. She is interrupted mid-speech. There is break-up on Taris's face. CUT TO a view of the Romulan ship as it cloaks and uncloaks, cloaks and uncloaks. As it cloaks, communication is lost. Then returns when the ship reappears. Taris is looking rattled as she appears and disappears. RIKER What the hell? Taris is back on viewscreen. She is once again fully in control. STAR TREK: "Contagion" - 01/09/89 - ACT THREE 33A. 33 CONTINUED: (3) TARIS This is your final warning, I will not -- STAR TREK: "Contagion" - REV. 01/09/89 - ACT THREE 34. 33 CONTINUED: (4) RIKER (interrupting) Having a little trouble with your systems, Commander? Maybe we could consider postponing the war until we solve our more immediate problem? TARIS You're stalling for time. WESLEY Sir, another probe launched from the planet, heading for the Romulan. RIKER (to Williams) Have we got our phasers back? WILLIAMS No, sir. RIKER Taris, if you've got phaser capability, you better use it now! TARIS What? RIKER Destroy that probe! Taris blips out, and we have a view of the cruiser with the incoming probe. The probe reaches eye level and is destroyed by phaser fire. Taris does not return. RIKER (continuing) And not even a thank you. TROI Sub-Commander Taris is deeply frustrated, probably because her ship is as crippled as the Enterprise. WESLEY Why would the Romulans be having problems? They haven't been probed. STAR TREK: "Contagion" - 01/09/89 - ACT THREE 35. 33 CONTINUED: (5) RIKER They must have tapped into the Yamato log. Taris got a whole lot more than she bargained for. WILLIAMS Commander, sensors indicate the Romulans are attempting to transport a team. (a beat) They lost them, complete molecular break-up. TROI So the captain is safe for the moment. RIKER Safe from the Romulans. (rises) Maintain Red Alert, and try to keep those shields up just in case Taris feels she has to act on her threat. WESLEY (slewing around in his chair) Sir, what about the away team? With our shields up we can't beam them back. Riker looks to the viewscreen at the ominous image of the Romulan cruiser. To the empty captain's chair. We can see his dilemma as we: FADE OUT. END OF ACT THREE STAR TREK: "Contagion" - REV. 01/09/89 - ACT FOUR 36. ACT FOUR FADE IN: 34 INT. ICONIAN CONTROL ROOM The away team is exploring. They have beamed into a dimly lit room. The walls are covered with controls and conduits. Directly across from them is a wall which contains three silver gateways. In the center of the room is a pentagon-shaped "table" about waist high. At the center of the table is a large, softly glowing, translucent blue dome. It is flecked with the same bits of reflective material as the probe. Around the dome, extending to the edge of the table, are countless colored keys. There are also flat screens set in each of the five angles of the table. Each screen is a different geometric shape -- a square, a triangle, an octagon, a pentagon and a rectangle. There is alien script beneath the screens and on certain parts of the control walls. Data is scanning with his tricorder. Worf has his phaser out. Picard just roams the room. WORF (touching his insignia) Enterprise. Come in Enterprise. Still no response, sir. PICARD Keep trying them. Communication is going to be erratic. WORF I do not want to become a permanent resident of this planet. PICARD Nor do I, Mister Worf. DATA Scans indicate no other life-forms on the planet. PICARD I would not expect any. Judging from the severity of bombardment, I doubt any Iconians survived. Picard claps his hands and briskly rubs them together as he approaches the console. STAR TREK: "Contagion" - REV. 01/11/89 - ACT FOUR 37. 34 CONTINUED: PICARD (continuing) Well, Mister Data, let us see if we can make sense of this. DATA Aye, sir. Picard studies the alien writing as Data joins him. PICARD This is very reminiscent of Dinasian. DATA Yes, sir. There are also similarities to Dewan and Iccobar. PICARD Is it possible that they are all branches of a language family beginning with Iconian? DATA Yes. PICARD Run a comparison between simple, basic words in Dinasian, Dewan and Iccobar. Let's see if we can't reconstruct a common root language. Data goes into his analysis mode. DATA Accessing. 34A INT. MAIN BRIDGE Troi and Riker are in the Command Chairs. Williams stands tensely at Tactical. Wesley is at Ops. A supernumerary mans Conn. RIKER You're jumpy. TROI The tension on the ship is very high. STAR TREK: "Contagion" - REV. 01/10/89 - ACT FOUR 38-40. 34A CONTINUED: RIKER What's your recommendation? TROI Give everyone something else to think about, some place to focus their attention. RIKER All right, let's consider evacuation. TROI (surprised) To the planet? RIKER It's risky with Taris sitting out there -- it's probably impossible to pull off, but it will give everyone something to do. You go and start organizing it. TROI But you will need me if you have to negotiate with Taris again. RIKER I'll manage. Right now they're more important. Troi exits. 35 OMITTED 36 INT. ICONIAN CONTROL ROOM (OPTICAL) Picard and Worf are studying the console. Data comes out of his analysis mode. DATA Captain, your original hypothesis was correct. Iconian is the parent tongue for a language family consisting of Dewan, Iccobar and Dinasian. I have constructed a basic working understanding through a comparison of common root words such as mother, father, food, death, child, home, tribe, pain, love, mine, yours, ours -- STAR TREK: "Contagion" - REV. 01/11/89 - ACT FOUR 40A. 36 CONTINUED: PICARD Data, Data, Data -- the point. DATA You do understand that my interpretation of the symbols will not be exact? PICARD Yes, let's get on with it. DATA (pointing to a set of symbols) This would appear to be the manual override. He touches the keys, and a LOW HUMMING fills the room. The light within the globe intensifies. Worf stiffens with hand on phaser. Suddenly rays lance out from the globe. Our people react. The rays strike the panels on the back wall and intersect in the room to form the gateway. It spins slowly. Each time it comes around, a new image appears through the opening. It makes one full revolution every couple of minutes. Appearing is a courtyard of a house with an alien-colored sky, a desert scene with a city in the distance, a street with iron balconies and pastel stucco walls, a grassy field (and eventually the Enterprise and the Romulan bridges). Picard walks forward and stares in wonder. DATA That was not manual override. PICARD (to himself) Demons of Air and Darkness, indeed. WORF What is that? PICARD A gateway. WORF The scenes could be holographic images. STAR TREK: "Contagion" - REV. 01/11/89 - ACT FOUR 40BB. 36 CONTINUED: (2) Data steps forward and thrusts his arm through the gate. From his elbow down, the arm is gone. Picard reacts quickly to this foolishness. Leaping forward, he grabs Data by the shoulders and pulls him back just as the scene changes. PICARD Data, that was very foolish. STAR TREK: "Contagion" - REV. 01/11/89 - ACT FOUR 40B. 36 CONTINUED: (3) DATA But we have established it is not a holograph. If I step through and investigate, we would determine whether it is truly a gateway. PICARD No, Data. You might not be able to get back, and I can't risk losing you. WORF If it's not illusion, this gate would seem to take you beyond the confines of this planet. PICARD Is this how the Iconians travelled? Stepping across light years as easily as we would cross a room? Those worlds might be in distant sectors of our galaxy. Picard takes a turn about the room, studying the gateway. PICARD (continuing; almost to himself) This is what Varley feared. What he lost his life for. WORF Sir? PICARD The Romulans could turn this technology into a weapon. WORF Like the Iconians did. DATA No, I believe that to be incorrect. Captain, there is nothing in this room to indicate it was used as a military command center. It is much more akin to a transporter room. STAR TREK: "Contagion" - REV. 01/12/89 - ACT FOUR 40C. 36 CONTINUED: (4) WORF But the probe was hostile. PICARD We can't make that assumption. The probe's effect on the Yamato was devastating, but I suspect that was by accident rather than design. WORF We do know that the Iconians were conquerors. PICARD Do we? The little we know was passed down by the descendants of the people who attacked this world. I'm beginning to think the Iconians may have been the victims of some very bad press. DATA Sir? PICARD There's an unfortunate tendency in most cultures to fear what they don't understand. It is possible that their enemies, when confronted with this technology, were driven to attack the Iconians out of fear. Worf turns back to the gate to contemplate Picard's words. Picard and Data return to the console. Occasionally Data runs scans with his tricorder. Suddenly the bridge of the Enterprise appears. WORF Sir! STAR TREK: "Contagion" - REV. 01/11/89 - ACT FOUR 41. 36 CONTINUED: (5) The other two whirl at the note of urgency in his voice and have a brief glimpse of the Enterprise before it is replaced by an alien landscape. The Romulan bridge appears, vanishes; and we again have an alien landscape. WORF Was that really the Enterprise? PICARD I believe that it was. Gentlemen, we have a way home. (a beat) I think the Iconians might have outfoxed their enemies. Perhaps they didn't all die in the bombardment; some may have passed through this. Data runs more scans with his tricorder. DATA Sir, there is a vast underground power source which is controlled by this console. He points to a bank of lights which had not been lit previously, but are now glowing brightly. DATA (continuing) My triggering of the gateway has caused a dramatic upsurge in power levels. (runs more scans) Ah, I have access. Symbols appear on one side of the screens. Data studies them. He begins to input using the keys on the console. WORF Sir, the Enterprise again. PICARD Time the rotation. STAR TREK: "Contagion" - REV. 01/09/89 - ACT FOUR 42. 36 CONTINUED: (6) Suddenly the globe emits a HIGH-PITCHED TONE followed by a beam of sickly green light. There is a SOUND OF CRACKLING as the ray envelops Data. It travels the length of his body, rendering him immobile. The energy flow stops, and Data -- stiff as a board -- starts to topple. He is caught by Worf who eases him to the floor. Data lies unmoving, eyes open but devoid of expression, staring at the ceiling. FADE OUT. END OF ACT FOUR STAR TREK: "Contagion" - REV. 01/10/89 - ACT FIVE 43. ACT FIVE FADE IN: 37 INT. ICONIAN CONTROL ROOM (OPTICAL) Picard, seated on the floor, cradles Data. PICARD Data, respond. Data shudders, a shiver running from his head to his feet. Blinks. DATA Captain. WORF Are you all right? DATA No, I am damaged. Worf and Picard have gotten Data to his feet, but he is swaying drunkenly and can barely stand. PICARD How bad is it? DATA The Iconian program is attempting a rewrite of my basic software. Physical manifestations -- Data abruptly cuts off and seems to go into analysis mode. WORF Sir, without him we have no hope of deciphering the program. We see Picard's terrible agony as he realizes that the Enterprise may be doomed. PICARD How long until the Enterprise reappears? WORF Six minutes if the cycle holds. STAR TREK: "Contagion" - REV. 01/09/89 - ACT FIVE 44. 37 CONTINUED: PICARD Stand ready, Mister Worf, and go through with Data. Geordi can learn from him. Maybe help him. WORF Sir, we have not yet established that that... (a gesture to the gate) ... is truly a gateway. PICARD This will be the test. WORF Aye, sir. PICARD (holding out a hand) Data, give me your tricorder. With a hand that shakes like a palsy victim, Data removes the tricorder. He then hesitates, moving his head like a questing stork. DATA Sir, what is your present location? PICARD I'm right in front of you... Data, what is it? DATA Please, take the tricorder. I am unable to sufficiently pinpoint your location to be able to hand it to you. PICARD You're blind. DATA Yes, sir. Picard takes the tricorder from Data's hand. He has to peel back the android's fingers because Data has such a grip on the device. Data's equilibrium is shot, and he walks in a tight circle around himself. He then collapses again. STAR TREK: "Contagion" - REV. 01/11/89 - ACT FIVE 45. 37 CONTINUED: (2) PICARD (handing the tricorder to Worf) Destroy this. WORF But, sir, it contains the record of all that we have discovered here. PICARD And that is precisely why it must be destroyed. Time? WORF Three minutes. PICARD (to himself) I am running out of time. We all are. Picard kneels beside Data and pulls him up until the android is supported against his shoulder. Worf lays the tricorder on the floor of the chamber and fires his phaser at it. The tricorder VANISHES. PICARD (continuing) This room and the technology contained in it must be destroyed. It cannot be allowed to fall into Romulan hands. DATA I understand... PICARD How! How do I do it? How can I destroy everything? Control room, the probes? All of it. DATA The... power... source. STAR TREK: "Contagion" - REV. 01/11/89 - ACT FIVE 46. 37 CONTINUED: (3) PICARD I detonate it? DATA Yes. PICARD (giving Data a shake) How? What do I do? DATA The... probes. PICARD Probes... the probes. Launch? Do I launch the probes? Data nods. PICARD (continuing; to Worf) What's that going to do? Nothing. DATA Doors. PICARD Doors? WORF Perhaps the probes are in a launch bay. Data nods energetically. PICARD The doors will open automatically when the launch begins. I'd have to override. DATA Yes. PICARD The power source! The backwash from the rockets will spill into the main power grids and cause an overload. DATA Cor... rect. STAR TREK: "Contagion" - REV. 01/09/89 - ACT FIVE 46A. 37 CONTINUED: (4) PICARD Which control keys? Damn, I forgot you can't see. DATA Help. Picard rightly assumes that Data wants to be helped to the console. With Worf's help they get the Android to his feet and over to the console. This dialogue has to fly. DATA (continuing) Describe. STAR TREK: "Contagion" - REV. 01/11/89 - ACT FIVE 47. 37 CONTINUED: (5) PICARD We're directly opposite the gateway. There is a rectangular screen. DATA (shakes his head) Left... one meter. PICARD Triangular screen. The lights directly above are solid amber. To the left red -- DATA Cor... rect. Key... blue, amber... amber... red. PICARD That's the launch sequence? Data nods. PICARD (continuing) How do I override the doors? DATA Blue, blue, blue. PICARD I hope you're not stuttering. (to Worf) I don't know how long a delay there will be between the launch and the detonation. I'll hold off keying the launch sequence until you're through the gate. How long until the Enterprise returns? WORF Almost time, sir. Captain, you will be killed. PICARD I'll go through the gate. WORF But where will you end up? STAR TREK: "Contagion" - REV. 01/09/89 - ACT FIVE 47A. 37 CONTINUED: (6) PICARD Any place is going to be better than this room. Worf, I'm depending on you. Get Data back to the Enterprise. He may be their last hope. Worf helps Data. At the time expected, the bridge of the Enterprise appears and the Klingon steps through. STAR TREK: "Contagion" - REV. 01/09/89 - ACT FIVE 48. 38 INT. MAIN BRIDGE (OPTICAL) Access panels are open. The bridge is a complete mess. Still mood lighting. People work at the various stations. Riker is overseeing this last-ditch effort. Worf and Data APPEAR. RIKER Worf! What happened? Where's the captain? Data makes small mewling little sounds, then falls silent. WORF We must take Data to Engineering. Worf shifts Data into a fireman's carry, and he and Riker start moving. 39 INT. MAIN ENGINEERING CLOSE UP on Geordi's hands as he runs scans on Data. PULL BACK to reveal Riker watching tensely. The scanner is emitting a steady beeping sound. GEORDI I don't know how to help him. But comparing recorded norms for Data to the current readings, it's clear that all his functions are going crazy. If we had an expert -- Maddox, or somebody -- The steady blip of the scanner suddenly becomes a flat, steady tone; and the line goes flat. GEORDI (continuing) He's gone. 40 INT. ICONIAN CONTROL ROOM Picard keys in the launch sequence. A LOW HEAVY RUMBLING fills the room. A MECHANICAL, ALIEN-SOUNDING VOICE begins what is obviously a countdown. COMPUTER VOICE Kandar se. Kandar ere. STAR TREK: "Contagion" - REV. 01/11/89 - ACT FIVE 49. 41 INT. MAIN ENGINEERING Only a few seconds have passed. Geordi reaches out and closes Data's eyes. Then abruptly the android's eyes reopen. Data sits up. GEORDI Data! RIKER What the hell? DATA Ah, I have access. Suddenly things begin to fall into place for Geordi. GEORDI The self-correcting mechanism -- DATA (looking for Picard) Captain? Captain? GEORDI It's constantly kicking in to make minute adjustments in the positronic brain. DATA This is the Enterprise. How did I get here? RIKER He cleared the Iconian program from his own system. How? DATA Iconia? I was on Iconia. Now I am on the Enterprise. RIKER Geordi, this is critical. How? STAR TREK: "Contagion" - REV. 01/12/89 - ACT FIVE 49A. 41 CONTINUED: GEORDI Let me think for a second. There was an incompatible program running through Data's system, so the mechanism started searching for a way to keep him alive. The solution must have been a shutdown and a total wipe of all affected memory. DATA Query. What have I forgotten? RIKER One question. Can we do the same thing with the Enterprise? STAR TREK: "Contagion" - REV. 01/09/89 - ACT FIVE 50. 41 CONTINUED: (2) GEORDI I don't see why not... but it will have to be a complete shutdown. We turn her off, effect a wipe of the Yamato log and every subsequent event since we downloaded it. I'll then reload all the ship's programs from the protected archives in the main core. RIKER Geordi, a shutdown means that the shields are going to be coming down too, and we're hanging nose to nose with a Romulan battle cruiser. GEORDI Hey, Commander, whether it's Romulan phasers or our own warp engines we're just as dead. RIKER Make it so. Geordi whirls to obey. Data is very confused, but he's still game and ready to be of help. DATA Can I help? 42 INT. ICONIAN CONTROL ROOM Picard is keying the override sequence. The RUMBLING becomes a ROAR. Suddenly the room is shaking. Steam erupts from the console. The countdown continues over this scene. COMPUTER VOICE Kandar more, kandar sete, kandar ne. 43 EXT. SPACE - THE ENTERPRISE (OPTICAL) A shot of the ship completely dark. Suddenly the lights come up on the vessel. STAR TREK: "Contagion" - REV. 01/11/89 - ACT FIVE 51. 44 INT. TRANSPORTER ROOM Riker walks in like a man with a purpose and hangs over the terminal. O'BRIEN All systems functioning. RIKER Lock on the captain and bring him back. O'BRIEN Scanning, sir. Got him. 45 INT. ICONIAN CONTROL ROOM (OPTICAL) Sparks are flying off the console. The room is shaking. Steam coming out of the walls. The gate is showing the bridge of the Enterprise. Picard runs for it, but at the last minute it switches to the bridge of the Romulan cruiser. Picard hesitates for an instant, then plunges through just as the globe shatters. Over all of this the countdown continues: COMPUTER VOICE Kandar qetar, Kandar jet, kandar piqe, kandar... 46 INT. ROMULAN MAIN BRIDGE (OPTICAL) Taris stands in astonishment as Picard APPEARS. Her bridge is a disaster. Sparks off some of the consoles, etc. Two Romulan crewmembers with phasers move in on Picard. Over all there is a HOWLING KLAXON and lights flashing. A MONOTONOUS VOICE announces: COMPUTER VOICE Setha-tri par trukatha. 47 INT. ENTERPRISE TRANSPORTER ROOM O'BRIEN I've lost him! RIKER Damn it! O'BRIEN Got him! Sir! He's on the Romulan ship. STAR TREK: "Contagion" - REV. 01/11/89 - ACT FIVE 52. 47 CONTINUED: RIKER How the hell... never mind. Energize! O'Brien's hands as he engages the transporter. 48 INT. ROMULAN MAIN BRIDGE (OPTICAL) TARIS (bitterly) You did this. COMPUTER VOICE Setha-ki par trukatha. PICARD Did what? TARIS Activated the auto-destruct. I at least have the satisfaction that you will die with us. COMPUTER VOICE Setha-mille par trukatha. PICARD (feeling the effects of the transporter kicking in) Not I think, today, Commander. He DEMATERIALIZES. 49 INT. ENTERPRISE TRANSPORTER ROOM (OPTICAL) Picard BEAMS IN and plunges off the platform. Reaches over the console and hits the com: PICARD Bridge. DATA'S COM VOICE Yes, sir. PICARD Get us out of here. The Romulan ship is set for auto-destruct and they can't deactivate it. STAR TREK: "Contagion" - REV. 01/11/89 - ACT FIVE 52A. 49 CONTINUED: RIKER Wait, sir. (to O'Brien) Open a hailing frequency. Picard steps back and regards his First Officer in puzzlement. STAR TREK: "Contagion" - REV. 01/11/89 - ACT FIVE 53. 49 CONTINUED: (2) O'BRIEN Open, sir. RIKER Commander Taris, prepare to receive a transmission from our chief engineer. He'll instruct you on how to purge your system. A beat. DATA'S COM VOICE Commander, your transmission has been received and acknowledged. RIKER Now, Mister Data, warp speed please -- just in case Taris's engineer is not as efficient as Lieutenant La Forge. DATA'S COM VOICE Yes, sir. (a beat) Captain, sensors picking up a large explosion on the surface of Iconia. It is equivalent to a force twelve hydrogen explosion. Blast radius is nine hundred kilometers. Picard and Riker begin walking toward the doors. Data continues to burble on over their dialogue: DATA'S COM VOICE (continuing) The dust particles entering the stratosphere will take an estimated seven months to fall back to the surface. The diminution in sunlight will have the effect of lowering average daily surface temperatures on Iconia by fifteen degrees Celsius. PICARD I see Data's back to normal. RIKER With a little touch of amnesia. STAR TREK: "Contagion" - REV. 01/11/89 - ACT FIVE 53A. 49 CONTINUED: (3) Picard pauses and surveys the lights, glances about the Transporter Room. PICARD It seems that everything is back to normal. Well done, Commander. RIKER (with a grin) Thank you, sir. STAR TREK: "Contagion" - 01/04/89 - ACT FIVE 54. 49 CONTINUED: (4) The two officers exit as we: FADE OUT. END OF ACT FIVE THE END STAR TREK: THE NEXT GENERATION "The Royale" #40272-138 Written by Keith Mills Directed by Cliff Bole THE WRITING CREDITS MAY NOT BE FINAL AND SHOULD NOT BE USED FOR PUBLICITY OR ADVERTISING PURPOSES WITHOUT FIRST CHECKING WITH THE TELEVISION LEGAL DEPARTMENT. Copyright 1989 Paramount Pictures Corporation. All Rights Reserved. This script is not for publication or reproduction. No one is authorized to dispose of same. If lost or destroyed, please notify the Script Department. FINAL DRAFT JANUARY 10, 1989 STAR TREK: "The Royale" - 01/10/89 - CAST STAR TREK: THE NEXT GENERATION "The Royale" CAST PICARD BELLBOY RIKER ASSISTANT MANAGER DATA TEXAS PULASKI VANESSA TROI DEALER GEORDI MIKEY D WORF CROUPIER WESLEY O'BRIEN Non-Speaking ROYALE HOTEL GUESTS Non-Speaking CREWMEMBERS STAR TREK: "The Royale" - 01/10/89 - SETS STAR TREK: THE NEXT GENERATION "The Royale" SETS INTERIORS EXTERIORS USS ENTERPRISE USS ENTERPRISE MAIN BRIDGE CAPTAIN'S READY ROOM PLANET THETA EIGHT TRANSPORTER ROOM SURFACE OBSERVATION LOUNGE THE ROYALE HOTEL LOBBY CASINO SEVENTH FLOOR HALLWAY RICHEY'S SUITE STAR TREK: "The Royale" - 01/10/89 - TEASER 1. STAR TREK: THE NEXT GENERATION "The Royale" TEASER FADE IN: 1 EXT. SPACE - THE ENTERPRISE (OPTICAL) in orbit around an ice-green planet with swirling white cloud patterns. RIKER (V.O.) Ship's log, stardate 42625.4, First Officer Riker reporting. We have achieved orbit around Theta Eight... 2 INT. MAIN BRIDGE - ON WESLEY at helm, DATA at Ops, WORF at his Tactical position. 3 MOVE PAST THEM SLOWLY as RIKER walks from Command to the Aft Science Station where GEORDI is studying a sensor readout screen of the planet's atmosphere and surface. RIKER (V.O.) (continuing) ... the planet furthest from its sun in this previously unmapped solar system. It is a world of ruthless realities: particularly harsh, barren, and inhospitable... 4 ANGLE UP ON GEORDI'S FACE reflecting the screen's amber light. Riker STEPS INTO FRAME behind him... RIKER (V.O.) (continuing) Our reason for being here -- a passing Klingon cruiser reported discovering pieces of a strange vessel in the upper atmosphere. We've come to investigate... STAR TREK: "The Royale" - 01/10/89 - TEASER 2. 4 CONTINUED: GEORDI (studying the screen) Nasty. Nitrogen... methane... liquid neon. Surface temperature minus two hundred and ninety-one degrees Fahrenheit. Winds up to three hundred and twelve meters per second. RIKER Not exactly a vacation planet, eh? GEORDI Uh uh. Not unless you like ammonia tornadoes. Or orange lightning bolts for that matter. RIKER (smiling) Not my cup of tea. Found anything artificial in the atmosphere? GEORDI Nothing so far. We're just coming around to the night side now. RIKER Keep me informed. The sooner we identify what the Klingons think they saw, the sooner we can get the hell out of here. GEORDI Sounds good to me. 5 STAY ON GEORDI as Riker walks away. He shakes his head as more data return from the surface of Theta Eight... GEORDI (to himself) Nasty. 6 INT. CAPTAIN'S READY ROOM PICARD sits on a chair staring at a tabletop viewer. It has a number of equations and theorems on it -- like a present-day blackboard. The door CHIMES. STAR TREK: "The Royale" - 01/10/89 - TEASER 3. 6 CONTINUED: PICARD Come. Riker ENTERS, looks at the viewscreen. PICARD (continuing) Fermat's last theorem. Familiar with it? RIKER No. I'm afraid I spent too many math classes daydreaming about being on a starship. PICARD It's intriguing. When Fermat died they found scrawled in the margin of his notes that he had found a "remarkable proof." (beat) Unfortunately he never lived to write it down. And for the last eight hundred years people have been trying to rediscover it. RIKER And that includes you? PICARD I find the process relaxing. RIKER (changing the subject) We've detected debris of some sort in a loose orbit. PICARD Can you identify? RIKER I suggest we beam a section aboard for analysis. PICARD Make it so, Number One. 7 INT. TRANSPORTER ROOM - PICARD (OPTICAL) ENTERS and goes to where Riker is standing by the platform. He nods to O'BRIEN standing at the console. STAR TREK: "The Royale" - 01/10/89 - TEASER 4. 7 CONTINUED: PICARD Energize. Riker explains as a piece of the debris begins to MATERIALIZE: RIKER We've locked onto something with markings on it. PICARD What sort of markings? RIKER Uncertain, sir. A large chunk of jagged metal MATERIALIZES on the platform. It seems featureless, the color of brushed aluminum. Picard is intrigued -- he touches it and spots something as he turns it over... PICARD There's something here. Riker goes to see what Picard has found. PICARD (continuing; frowning) That symbol... Do you recognize it? RIKER (quietly stunned) Yes sir. I -- I think I do. 8 REVERSE ANGLE to see what they're seeing. 9 MOVE IN ON THE SYMBOL a white five-pointed star on a dark blue circular background intersected by red and white horizontal lines on either side. It is the insignia of the United States Air Force... FADE OUT. END OF TEASER STAR TREK: "The Royale" - 01/10/89 - ACT ONE 5. ACT ONE FADE IN: 10 EXT. SPACE - THE ENTERPRISE (OPTICAL) seen from a different angle, still in orbit around Theta Eight. 11 INT. OBSERVATION LOUNGE - PICARD Riker, Data and TROI are gathered to discuss the debris... DATA Metallic analysis bears out that the object in question was terrestrial in origin. Most likely late twenty-first century. PICARD But that's not possible. No ship of that time period could have come this far. DATA Nevertheless, that is what our tests indicate. And the markings we discovered are consistent with this hypothesis. TROI Any idea what destroyed it? An explosion of some sort? DATA Unknown. PICARD The question is, how did it get here? Picard's train of thought is interrupted by the INTERCOM... WESLEY'S COM VOICE Captain. We've detected a large structure on the planet. STAR TREK: "The Royale" - 01/10/89 - ACT ONE 6. 12 INT. MAIN BRIDGE - CLOSE ON SCREEN Wesley and the others are studying the sensor readout screen. DATA It is a building of some sort, situated on a plane of frozen methane, smack in the middle of a tremendous storm belt. It is incongruous; it simply should not be there! PICARD Are you certain it's artificially constructed? DATA Absolutely. The structure is surrounded by breathable air. Picard steps back, taking it all in. RIKER It's hard to accept... PICARD Yet it does seem to be down there. Is there a connection between the structure and the ship? No one seems to have an answer to this. PICARD (continuing) Suggestions? RIKER (small smile) Only one, sir. Suggest we go down and have a look. PICARD Form an away team, minimal complement. 13 MOVE IN on a thoughtful, determined Picard. PICARD Let's see if we can find the architects. STAR TREK: "The Royale" - 01/10/89 - ACT ONE 7. 14 OMITTED 15 INT. TRANSPORTER ROOM - ON DATA AND WORF checking equipment, standing on the transporter platform. Over at the transporter panel, O'BRIEN looks up. O'BRIEN Give me a moment, gents. We're dealing with an extremely narrow access point. 16 OMITTED 17 RIKER (OPTICAL) steps on platform. RIKER We're ready when you are... (then to Worf) Phasers on stun. They adjust their phasers. Riker looks to O'Brien. O'Brien nods. RIKER (continuing) Energize. O'Brien complies, and the party of three is BEAMED AWAY. 18 EXT. PLANET SURFACE - DATA, WORF AND RIKER (OPTICAL) MATERIALIZE in a featureless black void. It is completely still, no sound, no movement. The calm is unnerving. RIKER (tense) Where are we? Data checks his tricorder. DATA Exactly where Geordi said we would be. The structure is directly behind us. STAR TREK: "The Royale" - 01/10/89 - ACT ONE 8. 18 CONTINUED: They all turn and look behind them. All they can see is blackness... DATA (continuing) I am detecting vast ammonia storms raging mere kilometers away. Yet they do not appear to penetrate this breathable zone. RIKER (soft, awed) It's like the eye of a hurricane. Data has wandered toward where he believes the structure to be. He looks up, as though sensing the hugeness of the thing. DATA It is here. It must be here, yet we cannot see it. 19 INTERCUT WITH PICARD ON THE MAIN BRIDGE RIKER'S COM VOICE Enterprise, this is Commander Riker. We have arrived in a very unusual place... it is like being in the eye of a hurricane. It is completely calm, no sound, no movement, yet a few meters away a storm, which we can neither see nor hear, is raging. PICARD'S COM VOICE Describe the structure. RIKER We can't see it. WORF Commander, over here. I see something! Data and Riker hurry over to Worf. The Klingon has discovered an old-fashioned revolving door, seemingly situated in the middle of nothing. It turns slowly, as though beckoning them... STAR TREK: "The Royale" - 01/10/89 - ACT ONE 9. 19 CONTINUED: WORF (continuing) What is this thing? PICARD'S COM VOICE What is it, Commander? RIKER (to Picard, amazed) I think it's a door. An antique. DATA Judging by its location, it may be an entrance to the structure we seek. The three of them exchange wary glances... RIKER Well... this is what we came here for. (to Picard) Captain, we are entering the structure. Riker cautiously steps in and the revolving door automatically turns to the right. Riker disappears into the darkness, and when the door stops revolving he is gone. Worf looks at Data and then follows suit. Data follows him... 20 INT. ROYALE LOBBY - DATA steps out of the revolving door and joins the others inside the structure. They are standing on a garish carpet, scarlet with gold trim. All are looking around incredulously as we HEAR THE SOUND OF A SLOT MACHINE hitting a jackpot and the tumult of a casino in full swing. 21 ANGLE TO REVEAL THEIR WHEREABOUTS inside the lobby of a small Vegas-style hotel, roughly our time period. To their right is a front desk beside some elevators. To the left is a modest casino with blackjack tables, crap tables and roulette wheels, all flanked by a row of slot machines and a lounge with a piano player. STAR TREK: "The Royale" - 01/10/89 - ACT ONE 10. 21 CONTINUED: There is a bustle of activity on all sides. People are gambling, hotel workers are scurrying about. No one is paying much attention to the three stunned strangers. Riker touches his communicator. RIKER Riker to Enterprise. We have entered the structure. (then, realizing) We're not getting through. 22 INT. MAIN BRIDGE - PICARD stands between Wesley and an n.d. crewmember at Conn and Ops. Troi can be seen sitting at the Command Section with Geordi still at the Aft Station. PICARD Where's that interference originating? GEORDI From the source, sir. Cause... unknown. PICARD Lock onto the landing party. Have the Transporter Room prepare to beam them up. Geordi shakes his head as he studies the screen... GEORDI We can't distinguish them as long as they're inside that structure. PICARD Can they hear us? GEORDI We've got to recalibrate all frequencies. PICARD Make it so. 23 INT. ROYALE LOBBY - RIKER is touching his communicator, frustrated. STAR TREK: "The Royale" - 01/10/89 - ACT ONE 11. 23 CONTINUED: DATA Without radio contact, we should leave immediately. RIKER Agreed. We'll make a preliminary sweep of this environment and then return. A BELLBOY, a Latino in his mid-twenties, nervously looks them over as if he is expecting someone else. BELLBOY Checking in, gentlemen? You'll have to go to the front desk. He indicates the front desk and then moves off before our people can respond. What follows plays off the point of view of Riker and the others. Riker thinks about what he said and then heads for the front desk. Worf and Data follow him, still looking around in wonder. A SLIGHTLY BUILT MAN WITH PERFECT HAIR stands behind the counter, underneath a sign that says REGISTRATION. The name tag on his lapel reads "ASSISTANT MANAGER." He's the type of assistant manager we've all met at one time or another: polite in a routine, impersonal and annoying way, fastidious and slightly effeminate. ASSISTANT MANAGER Welcome, gentlemen. Have a nice trip? Riker looks at Worf quizzically. RIKER Uh... Do you know us? ASSISTANT MANAGER We've been expecting you. A trio of foreign gentlemen. RIKER We're from the United Federation of Planets -- ASSISTANT MANAGER Of course. Welcome to The Hotel Royale... STAR TREK: "The Royale" - 01/10/89 - ACT ONE 12. 23 CONTINUED: (2) The Bellboy comes up beside the assistant manager, interrupting: BELLBOY (urgently) Did Rita call? ASSISTANT MANAGER No -- and for your own good you had better quit thinking about Rita. BELLBOY I'm not afraid of him. ASSISTANT MANAGER Then you're a fool. Everybody with any sense is afraid of Mikey D. BELLBOY (waves off the thought of Mikey D) If Rita calls -- you let me know. He then turns and walks away. ASSISTANT MANAGER (confidentially to Riker) The kid's just askin' for trouble -- Rita's too much for him to handle, and Mikey D will plant his face in the pavement. (then, handing them to Riker) Now, here are your room keys and some complimentary casino chips. Enjoy! Riker and Worf don't know what any of this means. WORF What is this place? How did a being like you get here? The assistant manager finally looks up. STAR TREK: "The Royale" - 01/10/89 - ACT ONE 13. 23 CONTINUED: (3) ASSISTANT MANAGER Why this is the Royale, of course. And my personal life is really none of your business, thank you. He looks back down again... RIKER What he means is, what planet is this? The assistant manager SIGHS and faces Riker... ASSISTANT MANAGER I beg your pardon? RIKER This planet. What do you call it? ASSISTANT MANAGER (rolling his eyes) Earth. (very dry) What do you call it? Riker and Worf are stunned to hear him mention Earth. WORF We call it Theta Eight. ASSISTANT MANAGER How charming. This time the assistant manager spins and begins to EXIT the area behind the desk. DATA Commander... RIKER Yes Data? DATA (reading from his tricorder) None of these people... are emitting life signs. WORF You mean they're not alive? STAR TREK: "The Royale" - 01/10/89 - ACT ONE 14. 24 OMITTED 25 MOVE IN ON RIKER looking around at the "people" moving about the lobby with more than a little concern. RIKER (more to himself) Then what are they?... FADE OUT. END OF ACT ONE STAR TREK: "The Royale" - 01/10/89 - ACT TWO 15. ACT TWO FADE IN: 26 INT. ROYALE LOBBY - THE AWAY TEAM are still examining their unexpected surroundings -- studying the movements of the hotel's seeming inhabitants. WORF (to Data) These beings... are they machines, (eyes narrow) or mere illusions, designed to deceive us? DATA (studying tricorder) Not illusions, Lieutenant. They do exist, but they do not register as either man or machine. Just then, a cheerful, burly, MIDDLE-AGED MAN wearing a huge tan-colored Stetson (we'll call him TEXAS) comes out of the elevator behind Data. The android turns his tricorder on him... DATA (continuing) For example, this creature exhibits no DNA structure. Texas overhears and replies in a Texas twang... TEXAS Look who's talkin'. (to Riker) He sounds just like my ex-wife. Texas shakes his head and mutters to himself as he hobbles OUT OF FRAME. We can hear him BELLOW OUT as he reaches the casino O.S. TEXAS (continuing) Aaaaall right!! Time to get back to business! DATA What sort of business do you suppose he is getting down to? STAR TREK: "The Royale" - 01/10/89 - ACT TWO 16. 26 CONTINUED: Curious, Data wanders toward the casino. Worf and Riker wander with him, as we: GO TO: 27 thru OMITTED 29 30 INT. MAIN BRIDGE Picard stands and walks to the Aft Station, where Wesley and Geordi are working on something together. PICARD Status report? WESLEY We're attempting to employ alternate encoding schemes. GEORDI There are hundreds of possible combinations, Captain. PICARD Is there an intelligence causing the interference? GEORDI Impossible to tell, Captain. Troi looks at Picard, concerned. 31 INT. ROYALE CASINO - ENTRANCE - THE AWAY TEAM are standing at the edge of the casino. We can hear occasional SHOUTS OF ENTHUSIASM AND DESPAIR from the gaming tables. Data quietly walks up to a table where TWO HIGH-ROLLERS are playing blackjack surrounded by onlookers and supporters. THE DEALER is a twenty-eight year old black man, cool and laid back. Texas sits to his right, while VANESSA sits to his left. Texas notices Data and motions him to come up beside him. The dealer shuffles his decks as Texas converses with the android, Data holding his complimentary chips in his hand. STAR TREK: "The Royale" - 01/10/89 - ACT TWO 17. 31 CONTINUED: TEXAS You're new around here, aren't you? DATA Yes. I have certainly never visited this place, or its true counterpart, before. TEXAS (re the game) Sit down, boy. I'll show you how this game is played. (re Data's chips) Go ahead. Ante up. Texas does just that; Data follow suit. The dealer has just finished shuffling. He slides the deck toward Data... and waits. DATA (to Texas, frowning) It seems he expects something of me. VANESSA He wants you to cut the cards. DATA Ah, is this poker? TEXAS No, it's blackjack. DATA Also known as twenty-one, a number which defines the object of the game. Tens and picture cards are worth ten, ace -- one or eleven -- the other cards face value. The dealer must hit seventeen -- five cards under pays double. TEXAS Not at this joint - (to dealer) Run 'em, boy. And make 'em friendly. There's no bread in the house. 32 thru OMITTED 37 STAR TREK: "The Royale" - 01/10/89 - ACT TWO 18. 38 WIDE ANGLE The dealer deals. The other players look at their two cards and the dealer shows a ten. TEXAS (to Vanessa) Aren't you going to look at your hand? (aside to Data) Poor girl needs to win. Vanessa has a ten and a five. VANESSA Fifteen - do I hit, Texas, or stand? TEXAS If you've got to win -- then you've got to hit. VANESSA Hit me. The Dealer slides her a new card -- a jack. VANESSA (continuing) Damn! She flips her cards toward the dealer; she's gone over. Vanessa's spirits sink. TEXAS Hit me. Dealer flips over a nine; Texas nonchalantly turns his cards - a ten and a deuce. TEXAS (continuing) Twenty-one -- a winner. RIKER (O.S.) Having fun, Data? 39 ANGLE TO INCLUDE RIKER now standing with Worf among the onlookers. Data is quickly self-conscious. STAR TREK: "The Royale" - 01/10/89 - ACT TWO 19. 39 CONTINUED: DATA Fun, sir? While there is a certain amount of enjoyment involved I was mainly conducting research into -- RIKER -- Save it, Data. We're getting out of here. DATA Understood, sir. DEALER Hey, you're holding up the game. RIKER Our apologies. Come on, Data. Riker and Worf turn to exit the casino. Data follows after, nodding at the other players and remembering to take his two chips. 40 INT. ROYALE LOBBY - THE AWAY TEAM approach the revolving door through which they came into the Royale. Riker enters it first, followed by Data and Worf. Much to their surprise, they find themselves exiting right back into the lobby. They are all disconcerted... RIKER Try it again. And they try again... and come back out in the lobby again. DATA Sir, there is no other exit point. Unless we can find another way... it seems we are trapped here. Worf reacts, frustrated, claustrophobic; Riker puts a steadying hand on his shoulder as he fights his own fears, as we: FADE OUT. END OF ACT TWO STAR TREK: "The Royale" - 01/10/89 - ACT TWO 20. 41 OMITTED STAR TREK: "The Royale" - 01/10/89 - ACT THREE 21. ACT THREE FADE IN: A42 EXT. SPACE - THE ENTERPRISE (OPTICAL) in orbit around the planet. PICARD (V.O.) Captain's log, supplemental. We remain in orbit around Theta Eight, still out of contact with the away team. 42 INT. ROYALE CASINO - RIKER AND DATA stand at the edge of the casino, watching the goings on from afar; Riker's concerned, Data's interested. Worf approaches, frustrated. WORF Phasers are totally ineffective on all surfaces. DATA (to Riker, showing his own variety of concern now) I am checking options... they seem quite limited -- RIKER We don't have any. If we're ever going to get out of here, we'll have to do it on our own. (then, heading off) I'm going to get some answers out of that desk clerk... Riker strides off toward the front desk, as we: GO TO: 43 INT. ROYALE LOBBY - FRONT DESK - THE BELLBOY is beside himself with anxiety, waiting for the proper moment before he does what he has to do. Finally, all eyes are diverted and he steps behind the bell captain's stand, opens a small drawer, and pulls out a snub-nosed .38. He checks the load, snaps the cylinder shut and slides the revolver into his waistband. STAR TREK: "The Royale" - 01/10/89 - ACT THREE 22. 43 CONTINUED: He sighs with satisfaction, suddenly starting as the assistant manager puts a hand on his shoulder. ASSISTANT MANAGER Are you crazy? BELLBOY Wrong. I'm finally getting some smarts -- Riker approaches, quickly intrigued by the obvious intensity of the conversation. ASSISTANT MANAGER You think you're gonna scare Mikey D with that thing? BELLBOY I'm gonna make him leave Rita alone. ASSISTANT MANAGER Kid, she's a big girl... and she's Mikey D's girl. BELLBOY Not any more. Not after tonight. ASSISTANT MANAGER Look. I like you. I don't want to see you get hurt... especially over some dame -- BELLBOY (bristling at that) Don't call her that! (then, eyes welling up with anger) You'll see! You'll see how tough Mikey D is! He's nothin'! With that, the bellboy stomps off; Riker seizes the moment, quickly steps up to the assistant manager. RIKER I want some answers! ASSISTANT MANAGER The concierge can help you with any -- STAR TREK: "The Royale" - 01/10/89 - ACT THREE 23. 43 CONTINUED: (2) RIKER We want out of here. Now. ASSISTANT MANAGER I'm afraid you've missed your check-out time. We do have our rules, you know. RIKER I mean out of the building. We want to get outside -- ASSISTANT MANAGER The Royale's exits are clearly marked. RIKER That's not good enough. ASSISTANT MANAGER If you have a complaint about the service you've received during your stay, you can always take it up with the manager. RIKER Fine! I'd like to see him immediately! ASSISTANT MANAGER (calm smile) I'm afraid the manager is very busy. Before the sssistant manager gives one of his typical non-answers, RIKER'S COMMUNICATOR UNEXPECTEDLY COMES ALIVE. PICARD'S COM VOICE (heavy static) ... Riker, can you read me? Riker hits his communicator: RIKER Yes, go ahead. Then, nothing. He tries again: RIKER (continuing) Enterprise?... Enterprise?... STAR TREK: "The Royale" - 01/10/89 - ACT THREE 24. 44 INT. MAIN BRIDGE - ON PICARD AND TROI standing behind Wesley and Geordi. RIKER'S COM VOICE (through static) ... Enterprise... PICARD (into com) Why haven't you left the building, Number One? RIKER'S COM VOICE (through static) ... Tried... Trapped here... No immediate danger... 45 INT. ROYALE LOBBY - NEAR ELEVATOR - RIKER is conversing with the Enterprise; behind him, the assistant manager is peering over, covertly listening in. PICARD'S COM VOICE Something at your location is interfering with our exchange... Working on the problem... Picard's voice is completely drowned out by the static. 46 INT. MAIN BRIDGE - PICARD is frustrated. WESLEY These frequencies aren't working. PICARD (sharply) Then find another. WESLEY Yes sir. Picard returns to Command -- sighing with exasperation as he sits down. PICARD (to himself) What is going on down there? STAR TREK: "The Royale" - 01/10/89 - ACT THREE 25. 47 INT. ROYALE LOBBY - NEAR REGISTRATION DESK Data is back at it with his tricorder, aiming it up toward the ceiling... DATA (studying tricorder) Commander... I am picking up something most unusual in another section of this structure. Indications of DNA. RIKER Where? DATA Thirty-one point nine meters above and to the right of us. WORF (indicates elevators) Perhaps those turbolifts could take us there. 48 INT. ROYALE - SEVENTH FLOOR HALLWAY - THE AWAY TEAM move down the hallway -- Data using his tricorder like a Geiger counter. He pauses in front of a door marked "727." DATA The reading I got is behind this door. 49 ANGLE ON THE DOOR TO ROOM 727 Riker's hand COMES INTO FRAME. It hesitates for a moment... and then knocks... and knocks again. There is no response, so he opens the door. 50 INT. ROYALE - RICHEY'S SUITE is typical of what you'd find in a Vegas hotel. The lights are on, the shades drawn, there is no sense of movement; however, there is someone apparently sleeping in the bed (we can see hair on a pillow as well as a body buried under the covers). DATA My reading is intensifying. STAR TREK: "The Royale" - 01/10/89 - ACT THREE 26. 50 CONTINUED: RIKER Life signs? DATA None. Riker moves forward and pulls the cover off the body. 51 CLOSE ON WHAT IS SHOCKINGLY REVEALED a skeletal figure -- long dead and decaying. Riker recoils... DATA Definitely human. Male. RIKER Looks like the poor devil died in its sleep. WORF What a terrible way to go. Worf has moved to the window... DATA He has been dead for two hundred eighty-three years. The lack of any advanced decomposition is attributable to the sterile environment. WORF Commander, look here. Worf pulls back the drapes, revealing a garish neon sign blinding us to anything beyond its surreal imagery of a long-legged cowgirl. Data crosses to a closet in b.g. WORF Is that... this "Las Vegas" you spoke about? RIKER I believe that's what the illusion is meant to be. STAR TREK: "The Royale" - 01/10/89 - ACT THREE 27. 51 CONTINUED: RIKER (moving, looking around the room) Why would anyone go to all this trouble? It's all just... window dressing for a dead man. Data pulls out a pale-blue, sleek, one-piece space suit. There's an American flag stitched on the right sleeve. DATA Is this significant, sir? RIKER American. Fifty-two stars -- that would date it between 2053 and 2079 A.D. Riker examines the suit and finds a name embroidered on the chest area. RIKER (continuing; reading name) Colonel S. Richey. Riker looks at the skeleton and somehow feels sad... RIKER (continuing; soft) Rest in peace, Colonel. Riker's communicator comes alive again and Picard can be heard clearly now. PICARD'S COM VOICE Picard to Riker. RIKER Finally. (touches communicator) Riker. Go ahead. 52 INT. MAIN BRIDGE Picard and Troi are standing behind Wesley and Geordi at Science Two. PICARD What's your situation? STAR TREK: "The Royale" - 01/10/89 - ACT THREE 28. 52 CONTINUED: RIKER We are locked in a structure made to resemble twentieth century Earth -- all efforts to exit have failed. PICARD We can't transport. RIKER I assumed as much. Captain, we have located the remains of a human. 53 INT. ROYALE - RICHEY'S SUITE - ON RIKER RIKER Request identity scan on a Colonel Richey, American, first initial S., roughly same time period. 54 INT. MAIN BRIDGE - SAME SETTING RIKER'S COM VOICE We also need a computer library check on hotel known as the Royale; possible location, Las Vegas, Nevada, circa twenty-first century. Static overwhelms Riker's voice, terminating communication. Picard turns to Geordi and Wesley... PICARD Get on it. 55 EXT. SPACE - THE ENTERPRISE (OPTICAL) in orbit. 56 INT. MAIN BRIDGE - WESLEY calls over to Picard: WESLEY Information retrieved, Captain -- STAR TREK: "The Royale" - 01/10/89 - ACT THREE 29. 56 CONTINUED: Picard steps over to a search/file screen which is sizzling with readout. He studies it for a beat, then intones: PICARD Colonel Stephen Richey was the commanding officer of the explorer ship Charybdis which had a terrestrial launch date of 7-23-2067. It was the first manned attempt to travel beyond the confines of the Euclidian solar system. Its telemetry system failed and it was never heard from again... (then, intrigued) Why is this of interest, Number One? There is no com response from Riker: GEORDI The frequency scramble remains unpredictable, sir... Picard sighs with the frustration of being out of touch with his away team while: 57 INT. ROYALE - RICHEY'S SUITE - RIKER AND DATA react to the information they just got on Richey as Worf steps up with something in his hands. WORF Commander? Some curiosities... RIKER (taking them from Worf) Books... A novel... (reading the cover) "The Royale Hotel"... (hands it to Data) Summarize. Data smiles, takes the paperback, stares down at it as he literally lets the pages fan past his eyes. That done, he looks up at Riker with: STAR TREK: "The Royale" - 01/10/89 - ACT THREE 30. 57 CONTINUED: DATA The story of a group of compulsive gamblers caught up in the web of crime, corruption and deceit spun by nefarious lothario Mikey D who appears only at the climax to be brought to his knees by a heartbroken bellboy. There is a subplot about an older man conspiring with a younger woman to murder her husband while squandering her inheritance. The writing is elementary, the plotting predictable, the characters one-dimensional. The only thing of interest, quite honestly, is the intriguing setting, that of a Las Vegas gambling casino-hotel -- RIKER (interrupting) This novel... and everyone in it you've just described... that's this hotel... Riker picks up the other small book now. RIKER (continuing) This... this appears to be a diary... but with only one entry... (reading from it with great interest now) "I write this in the hope that it will someday be read by human eyes... I can only surmise at this point, but apparently our exploratory shuttle was contaminated by an alien life-form which infected and killed all personnel except myself. I awakened to find myself here in The Royale Hotel... and for the last thirty-eight years I have survived here. (MORE) STAR TREK: "The Royale" - 01/10/89 - ACT THREE 31. 57 CONTINUED: (2) RIKER (Cont'd) "I have come to understand that this place was created for me out of some sense of guilt, presuming that the novel we had on board was in fact a guide to our preferred lifestyle and social habits. Obviously, they thought this was the world from which I came. I hold no malice toward my benefactors... they could not possibly know the hell they have put me through, for it was such a badly written book, filled with endless cliche and shallow characters. I shall welcome death when it comes... " Riker looks up at Data and Worf, who realize: RIKER Then that is why... all of this is here. But why can't we get out? And as they all react to that, we: FADE OUT. END OF ACT THREE STAR TREK: "The Royale" - 01/10/89 - ACT FOUR 32. ACT FOUR FADE IN: 58 EXT. SPACE - THE ENTERPRISE (OPTICAL) in orbit around the planet. 59 INT. OBSERVATION LOUNGE Picard is there with Geordi and PULASKI. PICARD Suppose we phaser a slice in the field which surrounds the structure? GEORDI Yes... PULASKI That would mean the atmosphere of the planet would instantly rush in. PICARD How long would they live under those conditions? PULASKI A minute -- maybe less. PICARD But you could revive them. PULASKI Well, that would depend on how long they were exposed, how soon I got to them, but Captain realistically... I wouldn't give them much of a chance. I'm a doctor -- not a magician. PICARD I understand the risk, but I will not warp off and leave them. (to Geordi) Make your preparations. GEORDI Yes, sir. Off Pulaski's reaction: STAR TREK: "The Royale" - 01/10/89 - ACT FOUR 33. 60 INT. ROYALE - RICHEY'S SUITE The away team is searching the room for any other clues when the PHONE RINGS. Worf looks to the others and then awkwardly picks it up after figuring out how to separate the receiver from the rest of the phone. WORF (into phone) Yes? (listens, frowns, turns to others) There is a female voice asking if we want... "room service." Data and Riker look at one another -- they have no idea how to answer that question. DATA I believe they are asking if we want the room cleaned. RIKER Tell them no. WORF (into phone) No. Worf listens to the response, shows surprise, and then hangs up. RIKER What'd she say? WORF She said... "The kitchen's open twenty-four hours if we change our minds." Data cocks his head, puzzled. RIKER I'm going to explore the other floors; you two go down to the lobby, see if we've missed anything. Talk to the other "guests" -- try and find out who and what they are. 61 EXT. SPACE - THE ENTERPRISE (OPTICAL) in orbit. STAR TREK: "The Royale" - 01/10/89 - ACT FOUR 34. 62 INT. ROYALE CASINO - BLACKJACK TABLE - THE DEALER looks up from his deal toward the entrance to the casino. 63 ANGLE ON DATA AND WORF just walking into the casino. Data turns to Worf... DATA I suggest we separate and blend in with these beings. Casual queries offered in an inconspicuous manner might prove most fruitful. WORF What? Data shrugs. DATA Mingle, Worf. Mingle. Data walks off into the casino leaving Worf to ponder just how he plans to mingle. 64 INT. ROYALE CASINO - DATA has wandered up to the "21" table where Vanessa and Texas are still playing. Data comes up beside Texas. Vanessa is looking more desperate, Texas more confident, just as the dealer reveals his hole card. Blackjack. Vanessa sags: VANESSA How much do I have left? TEXAS Honey, it's bad luck to count your chips at the table... Data sits beside Texas, cocks his head. DATA If I might inquire, where are you from, sir? TEXAS Lubbock, Texas. STAR TREK: "The Royale" - 01/10/89 - ACT FOUR 35. 64 CONTINUED: DATA How did you get here? TEXAS To Vegas? Drove. Got a ninety-six caddy with only eighty thousand miles on her. DATA And where is your automobile now? The Dealer deals a round. Comes to Vanessa. DEALER Hit? She slides her cards under her chips; she's pat. TEXAS It's out front, I suppose. What the hell difference does it make? DATA Could you take me there? The Dealer reveals his hole card. Blackjack again. VANESSA (to Texas) I'm losing my shirt here -- TEXAS (ignoring her; to Data) Now son, why would I wanna do that? Can't you see I'm tryin' to to help this little lady? DATA I do not believe you could go to your car, even if it truly exists. You are trapped inside the Royale, just as I am. STAR TREK: "The Royale" - 01/10/89 - ACT FOUR 36. 64 CONTINUED: (2) TEXAS (chuckling) Sure does feel that way when you're losin', doesn't it? But right now we're tryin' to turn this lady's wagon and win back some lost change. Otherwise she's goin' to be in a desperate situation with nowhere to turn. (with a wink to Data) Well, almost nowhere. The dealer deals again while Texas lets his hand run suggestively down her arm. 65 SCENE Vanessa looks at her cards. She's got thirteen. The dealer has a five showing. VANESSA I stay, right? TEXAS I wouldn't. The woman is so desperate now -- all her money -- what little that's left -- is on the line. DATA The odds favor standing pat. Texas is confused -- it's as though no one has ever interfered before. VANESSA What do I do? The dealer is getting impatient. DEALER You want a card or what? Vanessa looks from Data to Texas. Then she looks at the dealer and nods "yes." The dealer lays down a card -- it's a king. VANESSA Too many. She turns and looks at Texas. STAR TREK: "The Royale" - 01/10/89 - ACT FOUR 37. 65 CONTINUED: VANESSA (continuing) That's everything I had. I've lost it all. What am I going to do? Texas puts his arm around her shoulders and pats her gently. TEXAS There, there... Then he looks up at Data with another knowing wink. 66 INT. ROYALE LOBBY Worf joins Riker at the registration desk. The assistant manager is talking with the bellboy. Both are agitated -- nervous -- expectant. Suddenly both look at the door. Their eyes widen. 67 RIKER AND WORF turn to see: 68 DOORWAY Through the revolving door comes a hard-looking man -- MIKEY D -- it's obvious he's got murder on his mind. 69 RIKER AND WORF as they look from Mikey D to the bellboy. 70 SCENE The bellboy moves off to the side -- he's young and scared, but he's not the kind to back down. (All of this has to be played through the eyes of Riker and Worf.) MIKEY D You were told. The bellboy nods. STAR TREK: "The Royale" - 01/10/89 - ACT FOUR 38. 70 CONTINUED: BELLBOY It's not for you to make the call... it's for Rita. MIKEY D She sent me to tell you. Mikey moves slightly to the side -- a gunfighter looking for an edge. ASSISTANT MANAGER Boys -- we can't afford to have any trouble here -- take it outside. MIKEY D Yeah -- I like that... come on, baggage man... let's you and me take it outside. The bellboy hesitates. ASSISTANT MANAGER Watch yourself. BELLBOY Don't worry. The bellboy moves his hand back to where he has stashed his gun. 71 RIKER He looks from the bellboy to Mikey D. 72 MIKEY D He smiles. His hand also moves. 73 RIKER AND WORF Worf smells a firefight coming and his hand goes to his phaser. With a look, Riker tells Worf to stay out of this. RIKER It's all part of the novel. Don't interfere. STAR TREK: "The Royale" - 01/10/89 - ACT FOUR 39. 74 SCENE As the bellboy moves toward the door... Mikey D makes a little circling move -- just enough to get the angle. Without warning -- Mikey D pulls his gun and fires. It's loud and smoky. The bellboy falls. Mikey D quickly turns his attention on the room. 75 RIKER AND WORF Neither moves -- they are both mesmerized by what they are watching. 76 SCENE Mikey D looks over at the bellboy. MIKEY D You should have listened, kid no woman is worth dying for... killing for... but not dying for. Mikey D then turns and walks OUT of the hotel as Data walks up to: 77 RIKER AND WORF Riker reacts. RIKER (re Mikey D) How can he leave? DATA It is on page 244. Riker reacts, realizing: RIKER The book... Then... how does it end? DATA A bad love affair ends in a bloody shoot-out, the hotel gets bought out and life goes on... such as it is -- RIKER The hotel gets bought? By whom? STAR TREK: "The Royale" - 01/10/89 - ACT FOUR 40. 77 CONTINUED: DATA (re the book) It is not very specific. The acquiring party is simply referred to as "foreign investors." Sale price, twelve point five million. RIKER That's how we're getting out. We're buying this place. Riker leads Data and Worf off and we: FADE OUT. END OF ACT FOUR STAR TREK: "The Royale" - 01/10/89 - ACT FIVE 41. ACT FIVE FADE IN: 78 EXT. SPACE - THE ENTERPRISE (OPTICAL) in orbit around the mysterious Theta Eight. 79 INT. MAIN BRIDGE - PICARD is in his Command Chair, weighing the impossible situation. PICARD (sighs with frustration) Number One... If we don't take some action, make some attempt -- however dangerous it may be -- to rescue you, you may very well be lost to the confines of that conundrum for all eternity. That is certain death for you all... and that... (building angrily now) ... that is unacceptable! We have set phaser focus with energy ratios sufficient to penetrate the structure -- RIKER Hold on that. There may be another way. I'll keep you informed. 80 thru OMITTED 83 84 ANGLE - DATA, RIKER, AND WORF AT THE CRAP TABLES where Data studies the action with curious intensity, taking it all in: DATA It is a question of decimal percentages. Quite simple, really if one bets with any sequential consistency. STAR TREK: "The Royale" - 01/10/89 - ACT FIVE 42. 84 CONTINUED: RIKER Can you do it? DATA Certainly. Just then, someone moves aside to reveal Texas and Vanessa standing beside the away team. TEXAS C'mon, sugar, seven-come-eleven and we're on easy street -- Vanessa rolls the dice and a monotone tells us: CROUPIER (O.S.) Snake eyes. Texas sags; she shoots daggers at him. VANESSA I'm almost broke! TEXAS Baby, relax! It's only money -- VANESSA But if I lose it all, I won't even have a place to sleep. TEXAS (protective) Don't worry your pretty little head. I'd never let that happen. The croupier passes the dice to Data. CROUPIER It's your roll, sir... Riker urges him forward. RIKER Go to work. Data places one of his chips on the pass line. TEXAS Maybe this turkey'll change our luck -- STAR TREK: "The Royale" - 01/10/89 - ACT FIVE 43. 84 CONTINUED: (2) She sighs heavily; Texas shoves several chips out behind Data's and now Data picks up the dice and awkwardly rolls them down the length of the table. The croupier barks out: CROUPIER Six. The point is six -- TEXAS Six! Hell, my blind grandmother can make a six! Let 'er rip, boy! Data picks up the dice and rolls again, his face reflecting a sudden realization as we hear: CROUPIER Seven. Seven and out... Data's eyes widen as he sees his chips swept away by the croupier. At his side, Vanessa tries to pull away from Texas. VANESSA So much for your new turkey -- Texas pulls her back to the table. Data turns to Riker and Worf as he picks the dice up again: DATA These cubes are improperly balanced. I believe that their final resting position is adversely affected -- Riker reacts, realizing: RIKER Loaded dice. (then, to Data) Can you... "repair" them? DATA I believe so... 85 ANGLE - DATA'S FINGERS begin to apply android pressure to the dice. STAR TREK: "The Royale" - 01/10/89 - ACT FIVE 44. 86 DATA blows on the dice and rolls again and now his face lights up with the sound of: TEXAS (O.S.) Seven! A winner! Data's money is quickly doubled; so is Vanessa's. They both like it. TEXAS Attaboy! Just do that a few more times and everybody's gonna get well -- And as Data prepares to roll again now, we: GO TO: 87 THE ASSISTANT MANAGER as he walks to the table with a tray of $100,000 placques. Data has quite a crowd around him now as he continues his hot streak. ASSISTANT MANAGER (to croupier) Who has the dice? The croupier nods toward Data. At his side, Vanessa is doing just fine, with more money in front of her than she ever dreamed. Now, of course, Vanessa is all over Texas like a cheap suit. VANESSA Oh, Tex, darlin', you're brilliant! TEXAS Yeah. An' good lookin' too, huh? Worf studies the action, leans over to his comrades. WORF (to Riker) Isn't that enough? RIKER Almost. I don't want to be short, that's for sure... (then, to Data) You are keeping count? STAR TREK: "The Royale" - 01/10/89 - ACT FIVE 45. 87 CONTINUED: Data reaches down, touches the stack, pauses for a moment, then whispers: DATA Eleven point three million. (then, whimsically) Perhaps I will bet it all -- Riker leans in to him, whispering urgently: RIKER No! Simply reach twelve million. DATA As you wish... With that, Data rolls one last time and we hear: ASSISTANT MANAGER (O.S.) The man has the touch. The croupier shoves more chips over to Data; Riker leans in to Data with: RIKER Now. DATA (to the Croupier) I would like to cash out, please. The croupier blanches; he turns to the assistant manager who steps up. ASSISTANT MANAGER I'm afraid you've broken the bank. That's over twelve million -- RIKER Twelve point five million to be exact. The purchase price of this hotel. ASSISTANT MANAGER That's impossible -- Riker smiles, holds up the novel. STAR TREK: "The Royale" - 01/10/89 - ACT FIVE 46. 87 CONTINUED: (2) RIKER Wrong. We're the "foreign Investors" on page 244. We're buying you out, lock, stock, and barrel. (slides the chips toward the pit boss) Consider it a "done deal." The assistant manager reacts, stupefied, not knowing how to react. Texas turns to them, wide-eyed. TEXAS Hey, y'know what? Y'all got style! I like that! Let me buy y'all a drink -- Riker smiles at him, reaches into Texas's coat pocket and pulls out a big cigar. As he twirls it in his own mouth: RIKER Enjoy the game, friend. And don't let 'em change the dice on you. With that, Riker leads Worf and Data away through the crowd. The assistant manager, sweating nervously, shouts out: ASSISTANT MANAGER Wait! You can't leave! RIKER Oh yeah? Watch us. (then, wagging a finger at him) Don't forget, we own the joint. Riker leads them toward the revolving door in the distance. Worf looks a bit worried, puffs himself up, anticipating a struggle with strange physical elements beyond his ken. WORF You're confident about this, Commander? RIKER Focus. Concentrate. See only where we want to BE, not where we are. STAR TREK: "The Royale" - 01/10/89 - ACT FIVE 47. 87 CONTINUED: (3) DATA Ancient philosophical overtones of thought process... "Zen", I believe -- RIKER We own the place... and we're walking through that door... 88 thru OMITTED 91 91A ANGLE - THE REVOLVING DOOR And as they approach the door, we see each of our away team members steel himself for the impossible... and they step into the revolving door and we: GO TO: 92 EXT. PLANET SURFACE - THE BLACK VOID envelops them once again. Riker smiles confidently as he intones: RIKER I think it's time to go home... 93 INT. MAIN BRIDGE - PICARD smiles in relief as he hears those words. He turns to his crew. PICARD Transporter Room, we have a fix on our away team. Beam them up... and please be quick about it! Troi comes over to his side and shares his moment of relief as: 93A EXT. PLANET SURFACE - THE AWAY TEAM (OPTICAL) BEAMS UP and: STAR TREK: "The Royale" - 01/10/89 - ACT FIVE 48. 93B THE REVOLVING DOOR continues its perpetual motion as we: FADE OUT. END OF ACT FIVE THE END STAR TREK: THE NEXT GENERATION "Time Squared" #40272-139 Story by Kurt Michael Bensmiller Teleplay by Maurice Hurley Directed by Joseph L. Scanlan THE WRITING CREDITS MAY NOT BE FINAL AND SHOULD NOT BE USED FOR PUBLICITY OR ADVERTISING PURPOSES WITHOUT FIRST CHECKING WITH THE TELEVISION LEGAL DEPARTMENT. Copyright 1989 Paramount Pictures Corporation. All Rights Reserved. This script is not for publication or reproduction. No one is authorized to dispose of same. If lost or destroyed, please notify the Script Department. REVISED FINAL DRAFT JANUARY 25, 1989 STAR TREK: "Time Squared" - REV. 2/7/89 - CAST STAR TREK: THE NEXT GENERATION "Time Squared" CAST PICARD/P2 RIKER DATA PULASKI TROI GEORDI WORF O'BRIEN Non-Speaking CREWMEMBERS Voice-Over COMPUTER VOICE STAR TREK: "Time Squared" - REV. 2/7/89 - SETS STAR TREK: THE NEXT GENERATION "Time Squared" SETS INTERIORS EXTERIORS USS ENTERPRISE USS ENTERPRISE RIKER'S QUARTERS MAIN BRIDGE SHUTTLECRAFT GEORDI'S ENGINEERING STATION SHUTTLE BAY TWO CORRIDOR OUTSIDE SICKBAY SICKBAY OBSERVATION LOUNGE TURBOLIFT CAPTAIN'S READY ROOM MAIN ENGINEERING SHUTTLECRAFT STAR TREK: "Time Squared" - REV. 2/7/89 - TEASER 1. STAR TREK: THE NEXT GENERATION "Time Squared" TEASER FADE IN: 1 EXT. SPACE - THE ENTERPRISE (OPTICAL) moves along at warp speed. 2 INT. RIKER'S QUARTERS (OPTICAL) RIKER has cleared a space on his desk and set up a little work station. He has a bowl and several strange-looking eggs. Some smaller containers with other ingredients and condiments for what appears to be an omelet. He breaks the last egg into the bowl and whips them with a jerry-rigged whisk. He is obviously enjoying himself. The CHIME SOUNDS. RIKER Come in. The door opens; it's DATA and GEORDI carrying what look like a homemade Bunsen burner and a frying pan. RIKER (continuing) Excellent. Exactly what I need. Before the door closes, PULASKI appears, carrying something. RIKER (continuing) Well, Doctor, and bearing gifts? PULASKI Ale from Ennan Six... your omelets deserve no less. Again before the door can close, WORF appears and follows them into the room. 3 THE TABLE Riker sets up the "Bunsen-type burner," ignites it, heats the pan and pours in the beaten eggs, while Data watches. STAR TREK: "Time Squared" - REV. 2/7/89 - TEASER 2. 3 CONTINUED: DATA This is not an efficient method for the preparation of sustenance. RIKER You're right, Data. The ship's computer is much more efficient, but it lacks the subtlety needed for great cooking. It mixes the ingredients to precise measurements. There's no flair, no individuality, and Data, as we both know... inspiration and flair are the difference between artistry and mere competence. PULASKI For much of the history of mankind, the breaking of bread was a sign of friendship and community. Something we have gotten away from in the twenty-fourth century. (re: Riker and the whisk) You have a practiced hand, Commander. RIKER I have my father to thank for that. PULASKI Oh, your father liked to cook? RIKER No, he hated it. It was a chore left to me. WORF It is my understanding that in most human families, the woman shares in the cooking. RIKER There were only the two of us. I never knew my mother. She died when I was very young. 4 PULASKI as she pours the ale - STAR TREK: "Time Squared" - REV. 2/7/89 - TEASER 3. 5 DATA as he takes a sip. GEORDI Where did you get the eggs? RIKER During our last stop. GEORDI (with surprise) At Starbase seventy-three? RIKER Yes. 6 SCENE as Riker dishes up the food. And they all sit down to eat, all eager to enjoy the meal. Geordi is the first to taste it; it clearly does not suit his palate. GEORDI What kind of eggs did you say these are? As Riker takes a bite: RIKER 'Owon. From Geordi's expression it's apparent the eggs are lacking. Riker and Pulaski both react to the uneatable food. RIKER (continuing) A cook's only as good as his ingredients. Then they look over at Worf, who is enjoying it immensely. WORF Delicious. Something to end the scene. PICARD'S COM VOICE Commander Riker... STAR TREK: "Time Squared" - REV. 2/7/89 - TEASER 4. 6 CONTINUED: RIKER Yes, Captain. PICARD'S COM VOICE Would you join me on the bridge? RIKER On my way. Without having to be told, Data and Worf leave with him. Worf pausing to take one last forkful of omelet. 7 INT. MAIN BRIDGE Riker, Data and Worf ENTER and take their positions. PICARD We have picked up an automated signal from a Federation shuttlecraft. Riker looks surprised and confused. RIKER A shuttle? Out here?! How is that possible? We're the first manned Federation vessel to enter this area. PICARD Apparently not. RIKER So what's a shuttle doing out this far? And where's the mother ship? PICARD I don't know. WORF Sensors indicate there is at least one life-form on board the shuttle. Humanoid. PICARD Perhaps someone to answer your questions, Number One. Open hailing frequencies. STAR TREK: "Time Squared" - REV. 2/7/89 - TEASER 5. 7 CONTINUED: WORF Captain, the shuttle is without power. Communication is not possible. RIKER Set course to intercept. DATA Estimate intercept in three minutes. 8 OMITTED 9 EXT. SPACE - THE ENTERPRISE (OPTICAL) veers off course to intercept with the shuttlecraft. FADE OUT. END OF TEASER STAR TREK: "Time Squared" - REV. 2/7/89 - ACT ONE 6. ACT ONE FADE IN: 10 EXT. SPACE - THE ENTERPRISE (OPTICAL) comes out of warp. PICARD (V.O.) Captain's log, stardate 42679.2. While traversing an unexplored section of the galaxy en route to the Endicor system, a Federation shuttlecraft has quite suddenly appeared -- virtually out of nowhere. There are no other ships in the vicinity -- and no indications whence it came nor how it got out here. 11 INT. MAIN BRIDGE The bridge is as before. WORF We are closing on shuttlecraft. PICARD On screen. 12 ANGLE TO INCLUDE VIEWSCREEN (OPTICAL) as the image changes and the shuttle appears -- it is out of control -- cartwheeling through space. RIKER Magnify. The image changes again. The shuttle now appears in close-up. RIKER (continuing) Prepare to lock tractor beam. 13 OMITTED STAR TREK: "Time Squared" - REV. 2/7/89 - ACT ONE 7. 14 INT. MAIN BRIDGE as before. DATA Target vehicle -- we will be within tractor beam range in two zero seconds. RIKER Set automatic locking device. Alert Shuttle Bay Two. 15 INT. SHUTTLE BAY TWO (OPTICAL) as the Enterprise closes with the violently spinning shuttlecraft. 16 INT. MAIN BRIDGE as before... DATA Locking tractor beam. 17 INT. SHUTTLE BAY TWO (OPTICAL) as the tractor beam shoots out from the Enterprise and grabs the shuttlecraft and stabilizes it. 18 INT. MAIN BRIDGE as before... DATA The tractor beam has been locked. PICARD Number One. Riker is out of his chair and heading for the turbolift. STAR TREK: "Time Squared" - REV. 2/7/89 - ACT ONE 8. 18 CONTINUED: RIKER Worf -- you're with me. PICARD Doctor Pulaski, you are needed in Shuttle Bay Two. PULASKI'S COM VOICE I have been monitoring. I am on my way. 19 INT. SHUTTLE BAY TWO (OPTICAL) The doors have been opened. The shuttle, held firmly by the tractor beam, is being pulled toward the Enterprise, as Riker and Worf ENTER. 20 ANOTHER ANGLE (OPTICAL) as the shuttle moves closer. An n.d. crewmember, at a control panel near the door, attaches a second tractor beam, which automatically releases the first -- stronger one -- and transfers control to the n.d. operator. 21 RIKER AND WORF They move closer as the shuttlecraft is pulled on board. 22 SHUTTLECRAFT (OPTICAL) as it settles on the floor. The doors are closing as the tractor beam disengages. 23 SCENE As Riker and Worf move closer, Doctor Pulaski ENTERS the Shuttle Bay with an assistant. RIKER Well, it's a Federation shuttle all right. WORF Yet, there are no Federation vessels or bases in this area. Riker steps closer. STAR TREK: "Time Squared" - REV. 2/7/89 - ACT ONE 9. 24 RIKER AND SHUTTLE He reads the registration number. On the other side of the craft, Pulaski and two n.d. crewmembers are working to open the shuttle door. RIKER (reading) NCC one-seven-zero-one-D -- USS Enterprise, shuttle number five. He turns in shock and stares at Worf. Riker looks back at the registration number to be sure he read it correctly. Riker then looks to the other side of the Shuttle Bay... 25 SCENE (OPTICAL) ... to another shuttlecraft, identical in design to the one which was just brought on board, and carrying the exact same number. RIKER (reading) NCC one-seven-zero-one-D -- USS Enterprise shuttle number five. WORF How is this possible? 26 OTHER SIDE OF SHUTTLE The crewmembers get the door open. Pulaski starts to enter, then freezes. Pulaski calls out: PULASKI Commander! Come here! 27 RIKER AND WORF The urgency in her voice sends Riker and Worf quickly around to the other side of the shuttle where: 28 ANOTHER ANGLE Pulaski steps back to allow Riker to look in. STAR TREK: "Time Squared" - REV. 2/7/89 - ACT ONE 10. 29 RIKER Instantly he understands the reason for Pulaski's reaction. 30 SHUTTLECRAFT Slumped over the controls is CAPTAIN JEAN-LUC PICARD. Unconscious, but otherwise exactly the same as the man we just left on the bridge! RIKER (he touches his communicator) Captain? PICARD'S COM VOICE What is it, Number One? RIKER Captain, are you on the bridge? PICARD'S COM VOICE (irritated) Where else would I be? RIKER Right now, I think you had better be in Shuttle Bay Two. PICARD'S COM VOICE Why? What is it? RIKER This you had better see for yourself and, Captain, bring Commander Data. 31 ANOTHER ANGLE - SHUTTLE BAY TWO Picard and Data ENTER. Pulaski is in the shuttle checking P2's condition. The tension level in the room is very high. Without being called, TROI instinctively ENTERS the Shuttle Bay. 32 PICARD as he moves closer he sees what has them all so concerned. STAR TREK: "Time Squared" - REV. 2/7/89 - ACT ONE 11. 33 INTERCUT the others, all waiting to see how Picard is going to react. 34 PICARD moves closer, wanting to be certain his eyes are telling him the truth. Riker moves up next to him. For a beat they both watch Pulaski as she does her medical checks. 35 SCENE Data is nearby, waiting to enter the shuttle as soon as Pulaski is clear. RIKER We have been in a lot of bizarre situations, but nothing like this. Picard's response comes out as a grunt. Seeing a duplicate of himself, in a duplicate of an Enterprise shuttlecraft, has put Picard and the others under enormous strain, so much so that words come slowly. No one knows what to say, and all are waiting for some explanation about what's going on. This all plays off Picard, who is the most involved. In a strange way the crew avoids making eye contract with Picard. PICARD What's his condition? 36 SHUTTLE (OPTICAL) Pulaski completes her scan. PULASKI The life signs are confusing. I get a strong heartbeat, but the rhythm is off. PICARD Has he been injured? PULASKI No signs of trauma. PICARD Then why is he unconscious? What happened to him? STAR TREK: "Time Squared" - REV. 2/7/89 - ACT ONE 12. 36 CONTINUED: PULASKI I can't say. As she scans P2's head she gently touches his face, as if double checking her readings. PULASKI (continuing) The readings from his brain waves are very... strange. Little alarm bells go off for Picard. PICARD Strange? In what way? Non-human? Artificial? PULASKI No -- neither. They are just out of phase. PICARD Can you revive him? PULASKI I won't attempt it until he's in Sickbay. (she holds the look for a beat, then:) Let's get him there. Pulaski and her medical team remove P2. 37 PICARD AND TROI (OPTICAL) Both are confounded. PICARD Counselor. STAR TREK: "Time Squared" - REV. 2/7/89 - ACT ONE 13. 37 CONTINUED: TROI I have never felt anything quite like this so it is difficult to put into words. (she pauses to gather her thoughts) That person is you. What I mean, the person we are looking at is as much Jean-Luc Picard as the person I am standing next to; beyond that there's very little of which I am sure. I will have to wait until he is conscious before knowing more. 38 SCENE PICARD Data, we have to know what is on the shuttle's logs. DATA Yes, sir. Data enters the damaged shuttle. 39 INT./EXT. SHUTTLE Data takes the command position and attempts to activate the system. DATA Both primary and reserve power has been drained from the shuttle. I am going to have to connect to the Enterprise in order to activate the shuttle's systems. RIKER Lieutenant La Forge -- report to Shuttle Bay Two. GEORDI'S COM VOICE I'm on my way. PICARD Number One, I'll be in Sickbay. Keep me informed. STAR TREK: "Time Squared" - REV. 2/7/89 - ACT ONE 14. 39 CONTINUED: RIKER (indicating an unusual burn on the skin of the shuttle) Did you see this, Captain? Picard steps over to the shuttle and examines the burn. PICARD It looks like the kind of damage caused by an antimatter explosion. RIKER Yes, the shuttle must have been just out of range. PICARD (urgent) Data, I need those logs. (to Troi) Counselor. As Picard and Troi EXIT: RIKER We'll be on the bridge. He and Worf EXIT as Geordi ARRIVES. 39A INT. MAIN BRIDGE Riker and Worf ENTER and go to their stations. RIKER Resume course and speed. (to Worf) Scanners at maximum range. WORF Maximum range. 39B EXT. SPACE - THE ENTERPRISE (OPTICAL) as the Enterprise stretches to warp speed. 40 INT. SHUTTLE BAY TWO (OPTICAL) Geordi comes around to the shuttle door. Data is sitting at the controls. STAR TREK: "Time Squared" - REV. 2/7/89 - ACT ONE 15. 40 CONTINUED: GEORDI You should have power now. Data activates the shuttle's on-board computer. There is a SUDDEN EXPLOSION. Filling the shuttle with sparks. 41 DATA (OPTICAL) neither affected nor distracted by the chaos around him, calmly shuts down the unit. GEORDI What happened? DATA The polarity was not compatible. GEORDI Not possible, the connection is idiot proof. DATA The power requirements of the shuttle do not match the Enterprise. We are going to need a variable phase inverter, to align the power from the Enterprise to the circuits of the shuttle. GEORDI Data, what do you think is going on? I don't just mean about the shuttle, I mean about all of this? DATA I do not have enough information. GEORDI The captain here, the captain there. This shuttle -- that shuttle. Commander Riker is right -- this is very strange. 42 thru OMITTED 43 STAR TREK: "Time Squared" - REV. 2/7/89 - ACT ONE 16. 44 INT. CORRIDOR - OUTSIDE SICKBAY Picard and Troi are approaching Sickbay. PICARD This smells like a set-up. TROI A trap? PICARD (nods, yes) If it is me, me from where? And why in a shuttle? There is nothing about this which is random or happenstance. Look beneath the boards, Counselor; I expect something foul and familiar to crawl out. Picard holds her look for a beat, then turns and ENTERS Sickbay. 45 INT. SICKBAY (OPTICAL) They have placed P2 in the center of Sickbay. Pulaski is doing her medical work-ups. PULASKI We have just started doing a complete work-up. The vital signs are distorted. Some of the indicators are totally depressed, others are fluctuating wildly. I can't explain any of it. But he is alive, and I don't think he's in any immediate danger. She activates a forcefield, which briefly appears as a restraining device. PULASKI (continuing) The restraints are for his own protection. PICARD Have you been able to determine why he is still unconscious? STAR TREK: "Time Squared" - REV. 2/7/89 - ACT ONE 16A. 45 CONTINUED: PULASKI I have been able to rule out head injury -- otherwise there is no apparent cause. PICARD Wake him. STAR TREK: "Time Squared" - REV. 2/7/89 - ACT ONE 17. 45 CONTINUED: (2) She touches the hypospray to his neck. Suddenly all of the indicators fall to zero. Pulaski quickly adjusts her hypospray and gives P2 another injection. While they watch, the indicators return to their previous readings. PICARD (continuing) What happened? PULASKI Apparently a normal stimulant had the opposite effect. I'll have to try something else. She steps over to a counter to prepare a different injection. Picard moves slightly closer to himself. 46 INT. SHUTTLE BAY TWO Geordi and Data are working together to synchronize the power from the Enterprise with the circuits of the shuttlecraft. GEORDI There... that should give you something. Making this power adjustment is very tricky. By all rights, this connection should overload all the shuttle's circuits. Data steps over to the shuttle control position. DATA Perhaps you had better step back out of the way. Geordi responds. GEORDI Remember you're not indestructible yourself. Data again attempts to activate the systems. 47 SHUTTLE The lights on the control panel come on, then die out. STAR TREK: "Time Squared" - REV. 2/7/89 - ACT ONE 17A. 47 CONTINUED: DATA Increase the power. The lights come back. DATA (continuing) Adjust the invert two percent positive. The lights dim. GEORDI That's the correct decision, but it's having the opposite effect. DATA Yes. GEORDI There is nothing I can think of which could cause such a radical change in this circuit. DATA Adjust the invert two percent negative. The lights glow brighter and hold. GEORDI Got it. It shouldn't work, but it does. The lights glow brighter and hold. Geordi steps in beside Data. GEORDI (continuing; stunned) Data, take a look at the stardate. Data looks at the control panel. STAR TREK: "Time Squared" - REV. 2/7/89 - ACT ONE 18. 47 CONTINUED: (2) GEORDI (continuing) Four-two-six-seven-nine-point-five. (he touches his communicator) Captain. 48 INT. SICKBAY They are still gathered around P2. PICARD Go ahead. GEORDI'S COM VOICE Captain, we have been able to activate the shuttle; the on-board clock indicates that the shuttle is six hours ahead of us. Picard moves a step closer to P2... up until this time he has carefully kept his distance. GEORDI'S COM VOICE (continuing) Captain, did you read me? If the shuttle is from six hours into the future, so is the other Captain Picard. 49 PICARD He studies P2. Off his reaction: FADE OUT. END OF ACT ONE STAR TREK: "Time Squared" - REV. 2/7/89 - ACT TWO 19. ACT TWO FADE IN: 50 EXT. SPACE - THE ENTERPRISE (OPTICAL) at warp speed. PICARD (V.O.) Captain's log, supplemental. Part of the mystery has been solved. The reason there are two NCC one-seven-zero-one-D-five shuttlecrafts is because one of them is from the future... six hours to be exact. And, so presumably is the facsimile of me. 51 INT. SICKBAY Picard is there with Pulaski and Troi. PICARD Try to wake him, again. Pulaski gives Picard a little look, then adjusts her hypospray and touches it to P2's neck. 52 P2 ... he becomes conscious. His face is a mask of terror, pain and fear. His head rolls back and he tries to scream, but no sound comes. As he looks around, his movements have a strange stuttering quality. 53 PICARD He reacts to seeing himself as he has never felt, nor ever thought he would feel, out of control and impotent. 54 PULASKI She moves to comfort P2, but his flaying hands hold her off. His movements come in a series of stutters. He's here - in this Sickbay, on this ship, but if as though he were in another dimension as well. STAR TREK: "Time Squared" - REV. 2/7/89 - ACT TWO 20. 55 PICARD Troi is close beside him. They watch as: 56 P2 He pushes in his herky-jerky way against an unseen wall behind which he is imprisoned. His mouth is open -- but still there is no sound. 57 PICARD The terror of seeing himself in such a condition. A little sound comes from him... It's primal, in response to what he sees and the anguish he feels from his otherself's helpless condition. 58 SCENE Pulaski responds to seeing a patient in this condition, steps up to touch the hypospray to P2's neck. PICARD No! The word explodes from him. PULASKI It's a only a sedative. PICARD I know what it is... don't sedate him. Let him be! (then, changing his tone) Please... allow him to remain conscious. 59 P2 If P2 is aware of his surroundings, it would be impossible to tell. But clearly he is in some kind of horror chamber, from which he cannot escape. PULASKI I have never seen anything like this. Pulaski looks over at Picard. The color has been drained from his face. STAR TREK: "Time Squared" - REV. 2/7/89 - ACT TWO 21. 59 CONTINUED: PULASKI (continuing) Captain, you had better sit down. Picard waves her off. PICARD I'm fine, Doctor... Save your ministrations for the patient. I want a staff meeting in five minutes. Doctor, I assume you will want to remain here. She acknowledges with a nod. Picard turns and heads for the exit. PULASKI I will monitor the conference from here. PICARD Keep me informed, Doctor -- of any change no matter how small. 60 INT. OBSERVATION LOUNGE (OPTICAL) Riker is there with Picard, Data, Geordi, Worf and Troi. Pulaski is still in Sickbay with P2. GEORDI Captain, we have retrieved all we are going to get from the shuttle logs, including the last visual records. Everything before this is just a jumble. 61 ANOTHER ANGLE Picard stands. PICARD Proceed. 62 DATA He inputs the computer pad in front of him. 63 SCENE (OPTICAL) An image appears on the viewscreen. It's slightly distorted. STAR TREK: "Time Squared" - REV. 2/7/89 - ACT TWO 22. 63 CONTINUED: GEORDI The distortion is because we had to use a phase inverter to retrieve the logs. It will improve slightly. The image changes, but the quality does not noticeably improve. 64 PICARD watches transfixed. 65 SCREEN (OPTICAL) It's the shuttle's on-board camera. As the shuttle doors open, we see that the Enterprise is surrounded by a maelstrom of energy - a chaos of swirling, violent colors. The scene shifts, to a camera angle looking back at the Shuttle Bay. Riker is standing there. His expression is both pained and very concerned. He gives a little motion with his hand. It's difficult to tell the meaning of the motion. 66 RIKER Here in the Observation Lounge, his face shows the same concern. 67 THE SCREEN (OPTICAL) as the shuttle slowly leaves -- then quickly accelerates away until we see the Enterprise from the point of view of the shuttlecraft. It is surrounded by a swirling cacophony of energy and colors. It's like being on the edge of a great whirlpool. There is a lot of buffeting -- both the shuttle and the Enterprise are being thrown about. 68 PICARD He is very intent on the scene before him. STAR TREK: "Time Squared" - REV. 2/7/89 - ACT TWO 23. 69 SCREEN (OPTICAL) The turmoil around the Enterprise increases. Then, without a sound... the Enterprise is literally torn apart, by a great, yet unseen force. Right on the screen -- before their eyes -- the ship is destroyed. Then the screen goes blank. 70 REACTIONS FROM EVERYONE Picard turns away from the screen. DATA According to the shuttle log, the Enterprise was destroyed three hours, nineteen minutes from now. The room is silent for a beat, then: GEORDI Captain, we have a portion of your last log entry. PICARD Proceed. Data activates the control panel on the table in front of him. GEORDI It's audio only. There is a pause, then a strange phasing sound, followed by the distorted but understandable voice of Captain Picard. There is: PICARD (V.O.) Captain's personal log, supplemental. (there is a long pause) For the record... I have just witnessed the total destruction of the USS Enterprise with a loss of all hands, save one. Me. The entry ends with a very strange sound. DATA That last sound apparently occurred when the shuttle was thrown back in time. STAR TREK: "Time Squared" - REV. 2/7/89 - ACT TWO 24. 71 REACTIONS There is a long pause as those in the room try to absorb and comprehend what they have just seen. GEORDI All attempts to obtain additional information from the shuttle's logs have failed. Picard nods an acknowledgement. RIKER At least now we have something to go on. GEORDI I can't understand how you could end up in a shuttlecraft while the Enterprise is being destroyed. WORF Nor I, the last thing you would do is leave the bridge of the Enterprise during an emergency. PICARD Yes, but let's proceed on the premise that what we have just seen is factual and that somehow, in less than four hours, the Enterprise will be destroyed and somehow -- although this is unfathomable -- I, and I alone escaped. Discussion. RIKER Our destination is the Endicor system. We are not due to arrive for three days. The charts indicate nothing of consequence, certainly nothing which could threaten the Enterprise, between here and there. WORF Sensors indicated no other vessels -- Federation or otherwise -- in this area. PICARD Data? STAR TREK: "Time Squared" - REV. 2/7/89 - ACT TWO 24A. 71 CONTINUED: DATA I have nothing to offer. There is not enough information upon which I can base a hypothesis. GEORDI Well, the shuttle apparently came from somewhere up ahead. Rather than continuing on this course, perhaps we should stop here and let whatever is out there come and find us. RIKER I think it's already too late for that. GEORDI Are you saying that stopping, turning left, or right, or even reversing course, is pointless? RIKER When we brought the shuttle and the other Picard on board, we committed ourselves to a sequence of events which may be unalterable. PICARD Yes, this isn't a rock in the road which once seen can be avoided. It's much more complex. STAR TREK: "Time Squared" - REV. 2/7/89 - ACT TWO 25. 71 CONTINUED: (2) WORF There is the theory of the moebius, a twist in the fabric of space where time becomes a loop from which there is no escape. GEORDI So, when we reach that moment -- whatever happened will happen again... The Enterprise will be destroyed, the "other Picard" sent back to meet with us and do it all over again. (he shudders) That sounds like someone's definition of hell. RIKER I know this much -- we can't avoid the future. PICARD Agreed. So let's continue on course. Everyone return to your duty stations. Somewhere out there something will happen... a decision will be made which will cause me to become separated from the Enterprise -- at the time that decision will seem correct, but it won't be. We have to anticipate and not make the same mistake once. Something is waiting for us out there -- let's determine what it is as quickly as possible. Off their reactions: STAR TREK: "Time Squared" - REV. 2/7/89 - ACT TWO 26. 72 INT. MAIN BRIDGE Riker, Worf ENTER and take their positions. Riker sits in the Command Chair and stares at the Main Viewer. Worf is intent upon his console. The tension level on the bridge is very high. 73 INT. SHUTTLE BAY TWO Data is there with Geordi. GEORDI (he studies the shuttle) Data -- I think the molecular structure of the shuttle has changed! Data takes a tricorder and makes a scan. DATA Your assessment is accurate. GEORDI Why now? DATA Perhaps it always was unstable and it was only by leaving and coming back that you were able to see the change. 74 INT. SICKBAY Pulaski is doing further tests on P2, as Picard ENTERS with Troi. PICARD Doctor? PULASKI I am beginning to realize just how much of the body is held together by its own internal clock. You -- he was thrown out of time, which caused the body systems to change their rhythms. Slowly, as we move closer to the time he left, the internal body clocks are realigning. STAR TREK: "Time Squared" - REV. 2/7/89 - ACT TWO 27. 74 CONTINUED: PICARD You're saying, when our time intersects with the time he left, at that instant he will be functioning normally. And there will be two of us. PULASKI Right now, that would be my guess. PICARD I don't believe that is possible. Pulaski pauses as the thought hits her. Troi has moved over closer to P2. She is watching him intently. TROI Captain, I am able to feel more from him now. Much of his emotions are still a jumble, but... She steps even closer. Her eyes shut as she concentrates. P2 flinches in the same stuttering way. His body jerks back. His face contorts. His hands reach out and grab Troi. For a moment nothing -- then she screams, in agony. P2... throws back his head but no sound comes out. Pulaski rushes to Troi. As she touches her, Troi collapses. PICARD What did you feel? TROI Only that he wants desperately to leave this ship. FADE OUT. END OF ACT TWO STAR TREK: "Time Squared" - REV. 2/7/89 - ACT THREE 28. ACT THREE FADE IN: 75 EXT. SPACE - THE ENTERPRISE (OPTICAL) It continues on course. PICARD (V.O.) Captain's log, supplemental. We continue on course to Endicor. We are now less than two hours away from our rendezvous with ourselves. 76 INT. MAIN BRIDGE Everyone is at his station except for Data. RIKER Worf. WORF All sensors are on maximum scan. There is nothing unusual to report. The tension level on the bridge is very high. RIKER If the timetable is correct, we should get an indication of something very soon. PULASKI'S COM VOICE Bridge, this is Sickbay. PICARD Yes, Doctor. PULASKI'S COM VOICE Captain, my patient is more coherent. PICARD I'll be right there. Picard rises and goes to the turbolift. STAR TREK: "Time Squared" - REV. 2/7/89 - ACT THREE 29. 76 CONTINUED: PICARD (continuing) Number One, you have the bridge. Off Riker's concerned reaction: 77 thru OMITTED 78 79 INT. SICKBAY (OPTICAL) Picard ENTERS. (He pauses at the doorway and watches Pulaski and P2). PICARD How is he? PULASKI His vital signs are more normal -- which is to say, more like ours. He is calmer. Indeed as Picard approaches him, P2 becomes more agitated. PICARD He is now aware of me. PULASKI In some fashion. PICARD (sotto, almost to himself) But, does he know where he is, and who's here with him? PULASKI I doubt it. PICARD (then to P2) What went wrong? P2 turns away. Like a bizarre painting by Goya, a face frozen in agony. Picard moves a step closer. STAR TREK: "Time Squared" - REV. 2/7/89 - ACT THREE 30. 79 CONTINUED: PICARD (continuing) You know... don't you? P2 turns back and faces Picard -- but his eyes still do not make contact. It's impossible to tell whether he hears Picard or not. PICARD (continuing) What did you do? What happened? Why did you leave the ship? P2 -- just trying to orient himself as much as anything -- turns his head. PICARD (continuing) Don't turn away. Look at me. Without being summoned, but somehow knowing that she is needed, Troi appears in the doorway behind them and slowly approaches as Picard continues to try and make contact. PICARD (continuing) Picard! He speaks the name as if it belongs to another, and at this moment it does. PICARD (continuing) LOOK AT ME! TROI He doesn't understand you. PICARD He knows I'm here. TROI Yes, as part of a nightmare of disjointed images, half-heard voices. He is in another dimension -- seeing us across a great chasm -- and he's filled with remorse at what he has witnessed, and he's afraid. PICARD What is he afraid of? STAR TREK: "Time Squared" - REV. 2/7/89 - ACT THREE 31. 79 CONTINUED: (2) Troi doesn't have that specific answer. PICARD (continuing; back to P2) Damn you -- help me! Why did you leave the ship? Now, for the first time, P2 turns and looks Picard full in the face. Through what must be a blur of shifting and nightmarish images, P2 tries to focus. 80 P2 He leans forward. Like a sailor straining against the fog, then with a grimace made up of frustration and rage, he turns away. For the first time we hear a sound from his lips. It's strange -- otherworldish. 81 SCENE Picard takes a step forward. For a second it looks as if Picard is going to grab P2 and shake him. But he only glares at him. TROI It's no use, Captain. He can't answer. PULASKI As we get closer to the time he left, he may be able to. Picard steps back, frustration etched on his face. PICARD (to Troi) Are you still convinced he is me? TROI Yes -- but you're not. PICARD Not in the slightest. Except for his features there is nothing about him which I find familiar. He turns to leave. STAR TREK: "Time Squared" - REV. 2/7/89 - ACT THREE 31A. 81 CONTINUED: PICARD (continuing) I want you to stay with him. He will be able to communicate with you before any of the rest of us. Picard then turns and EXITS. PULASKI I don't know how long anyone can take this kind of schizophrenia. There has to be a breaking point. TROI He is handling it very well. PULASKI He has a lot of anger. TROI Yes. Because of what... (indicating P2) ... he represents. PULASKI And what is that? TROI Doubt. Seeing him here and knowing what happened to the Enterprise could make him timid or, worse, cause him to hesitate. PULASKI When he said -- that there is nothing familiar about him... (re P2) ... except his features. It sounded like a form of denial. TROI It's his accurate feelings. PULASKI Part of my job is to anticipate problems. I have a duty to the captain, but first to the ship and its crew. STAR TREK: "Time Squared" - REV. 2/7/89 - ACT THREE 31B. 81 CONTINUED: (2) TROI Doctor, the captain is fully capable of command decisions. Pulaski is pensive for a beat. PULASKI Yes... for now. But... this situation has put enormous pressure -- of a unique and very personal nature -- on Captain Picard. And we both know that pressure is going to increase. You said he already has doubt. TROI Yes, which is necessary and healthy. PULASKI But could potentially paralyze. If we begin to see signs that he is acting in an irrational manner, then I have the authority and the duty to relieve him. Troi nods. TROI I do not think that will be necessary. PULASKI I hope you're right. STAR TREK: "Time Squared" - REV. 2/7/89 - ACT THREE 32. 82 OMITTED 83 EXT. SPACE - THE ENTERPRISE (OPTICAL) as it continues along -- without so much as a hint of trouble. 84 thru OMITTED 87 88 INT. CAPTAIN'S READY ROOM (OPTICAL) Picard is behind his desk -- Riker is sitting across from him. PICARD What force or phenomenon could cause a shuttle to be thrown back in time? RIKER None that we have ever encountered. In theory, accelerating beyond warp ten. PICARD Using the gravitational pull of a star to "slingshot" back in time. Is that what happened here? RIKER The shuttle doesn't have warp capability. PICARD No. Some external force was needed. RIKER We have never encountered any natural force that powerful. And why only six hours? Why not a day? A year? STAR TREK: "Time Squared" - REV. 2/7/89 - ACT THREE 33. 88 CONTINUED: PICARD Are you suggesting there is a conscious mind at work here? RIKER There is no evidence either way. PICARD The Traveler moved through time with the power of his mind. RIKER I don't think that's the case here. PICARD (frustrated) No -- and Manheim's experiments with gravity and time were rudimentary, and uncontrollable. RIKER Captain, this is one instant where you must suppress your natural tendencies. PICARD Explain. RIKER (then more as a friend than a subordinate, or even a fellow officer) Your strength, Jean-Luc, is your ability to evaluate the dynamics of a situation, step in and make the definitive, preemptive move. You take charge. You're frustrated now because, not only can't you see the solution... you can't even define the problem. PICARD Go on. RIKER This is not place or person we are facing... at least not yet... it's time. STAR TREK: "Time Squared" - REV. 2/7/89 - ACT THREE 34. 88 CONTINUED: (2) PICARD Are you telling me to just sit down -- shut up and wait. Riker smiles. RIKER I wouldn't have used those exact words... but, yes. PICARD I don't do that well. RIKER It's your Persian Flaw. PICARD (thoughtfully) Yes -- perhaps it is. Sudden the Enterprise shudders. Both men are on their feet and heading for the door. WORF'S COM VOICE Captain to the bridge. 89 INT. MAIN BRIDGE (OPTICAL) Riker and Picard EXIT the captain's Ready Room. On the Main Viewer they see the swirling energy which they saw in the shuttle's view log. PICARD Report. WORF This energy vortex appeared out of nowhere. There was no warning. RIKER Well, now at least the waiting is over. 90 EXT. SPACE - THE ENTERPRISE (OPTICAL) is at the top of a great whirlpool of energy. STAR TREK: "Time Squared" - REV. 2/7/89 - ACT THREE 35. 91 INT. MAIN BRIDGE Off Picard's reaction -- almost relieved. FADE OUT. END OF ACT THREE STAR TREK: "Time Squared" - REV. 2/7/89 - ACT FOUR 36. ACT FOUR FADE IN: 92 EXT. SPACE - THE ENTERPRISE (OPTICAL) at the top of the whirlpool. PICARD (V.O.) Captain's log, supplemental. The waiting is over. We have apparently intersected with... something. 93 INT. MAIN BRIDGE Riker and Picard are back at Science One with Data. DATA It is similar to our tractor beam, only much more powerful. 94 INTERCUT WITH MAIN ENGINEERING GEORDI'S COM VOICE Bridge, this is Engineering. RIKER This is the bridge. GEORDI'S COM VOICE The pull on the Enterprise is steady. I am having to hold the warp engines at thirty percent, in order to maintain this position. PICARD Transfer engine control to the bridge. GEORDI Aye, sir. Everyone is watching Picard -- waiting for an indication of what he wants to do next. TROI There is a consciousness here, Captain. Not thought -- it is more like instinct. STAR TREK: "Time Squared" - REV. 2/7/89 - ACT FOUR 37. 94 CONTINUED: PICARD What do you make of it, Number One? RIKER I would say we're being probed. DATA The beam is coming directly from the center of the vortex. Sensors show only massive amounts of energy. PICARD What is it trying to learn? TROI I think it is trying to determine if we are a life force. PICARD (to Riker) We should stay and investigate. RIKER Agreed. PICARD But, was that the mistake? Riker looks at him. PICARD (continuing) ... staying too long. RIKER Possibly. PICARD We should go now. Riker is unsure of his response -- he has never seen Picard so indecisive. While this is going on, Geordi EXITS the turbolift and crosses to the bridge Engineering Station. RIKER Well... STAR TREK: "Time Squared" - REV. 2/7/89 - ACT FOUR 38. 94 CONTINUED: (2) PICARD It's the prudent move. Picard pauses. PICARD (continuing) I never thought I would hear myself say something like that. RIKER Under the circumstances -- I think you may be right. PICARD But you'd rather stay and find out what it is? What is its intent? Riker's silent hesitation is read as affirmation. 95 INT. BRIDGE ENGINEERING STATION Geordi steps up to the position. GEORDI Engineering, transfer to bridge. The panels light up in sequence. 96 thru OMITTED 99 100 INT. MAIN BRIDGE Picard returns to his Command Chair. PICARD Lieutenant La Forge. GEORDI Yes, sir. PICARD See if you can get us out of here, Mister La Forge. Maximum warp. GEORDI Aye, sir. STAR TREK: "Time Squared" - REV. 2/7/89 - ACT FOUR 39. 101 GEORDI as he inputs. GEORDI I have set velocity to warp nine. PICARD Engage. Geordi complies. 102 SCENE There is a surge of power as the Enterprise attempts to pull free. Then nothing. GEORDI The warp engines are at ninety-one percent. PICARD Put it to the wall. GEORDI Aye, sir. Geordi inputs. The ship shudders -- like a great shackled animal fighting to break free. SUDDENLY the Enterprise shakes -- those standing are thrown to the deck. And AGAIN the ship shakes. The computer automatically takes the ship to RED ALERT. GEORDI (continuing) I can't hold it. RIKER Captain! The engines can't take this strain. PICARD All stop. 103 EXT. SPACE - THE ENTERPRISE (OPTICAL) But the Enterprise doesn't stop -- it instantly seems to fall -- drawn along the beam of energy by an irresistible force. STAR TREK: "Time Squared" - REV. 2/7/89 - ACT FOUR 40. 104 INT. MAIN BRIDGE They have no control. Without having to be told, Geordi instantly tries to stop the Enterprise. His fingers fly over the controls. 105 EXT. SPACE - THE ENTERPRISE (OPTICAL) Warp engines re-engage. The Enterprise slows, then stops. 106 INT. MAIN BRIDGE It's a little calmer, but still very tense. PICARD Status. WORF All decks have reported... no damage -- no injuries. GEORDI The pull on the Enterprise is steady, but much stronger than before. I am at warp seven just to hold this position. PICARD Everything we do tightens its grip. Let's see what we can learn. Launch a Class One probe. WORF Aye, sir. 106A OMITTED STAR TREK: "Time Squared" - REV. 2/7/89 - ACT FOUR 40A. 107 thru OMITTED 108 109 EXT. SPACE - THE ENTERPRISE (OPTICAL) The probe leaves the Enterprise. 110 INT. MAIN BRIDGE (OPTICAL) As they watch the Main Viewer -- as it reaches the vortex -- it explodes. Nothing is left. STAR TREK: "Time Squared" - REV. 2/7/89 - ACT FOUR 41. 111 EXT. SPACE - THE ENTERPRISE (OPTICAL) A little tongue of energy speeds up toward the Enterprise. Then splits, with half going to separate parts of the ship. 112 INT. MAIN BRIDGE (OPTICAL) They see it racing toward them. The energy goes directly at Captain Picard and knocks him down. 113 INT. SICKBAY (OPTICAL) A similar piece of energy leaps into the room, directly at P2... only it does not slap him to the deck. As Pulaski watches it whirls around P2, like a wreath, then disappears. 114 INT. MAIN BRIDGE Riker helps Picard to his feet. There is fire in Picard's eyes. PICARD That was personal. GEORDI Captain -- the power drain needed to hold this position is enormous. PICARD How long can you maintain it? GEORDI A few minutes, then we are going to have to shut down again. PULASKI'S COM VOICE Captain -- some kind of energy has just surrounded my patient. PICARD Is he still alive? PULASKI'S COM VOICE Yes... RIKER Arm photons, Mister Worf, and lock them on the center of the vortex. STAR TREK: "Time Squared" - REV. 2/7/89 - ACT FOUR 42. 114 CONTINUED: WORF Photon torpedoes locked on target. PICARD Hold. 115 OMITTED 116 INT. MAIN BRIDGE (OPTICAL) Another sliver of energy slashes across the bridge and slams Picard up against the bulkhead. 117 PICARD ... dazed he struggles to his feet. RIKER We're like a rag in a dog's mouth. GEORDI I am now at maximum warp. The ship is hammered by another wave of energy. TROI It's you, Captain. It was the entire ship, but now it has turned its attention completely on you. GEORDI Captain, I can't hold it. If we don't shut down, we are going to explode. PICARD Counselor, what if I were to leave the Enterprise? Would its attention stay focused on me? TROI Yes. I think it would. 118 EXT. SPACE - THE ENTERPRISE (OPTICAL) is being pulled into the vortex. STAR TREK: "Time Squared" - REV. 2/7/89 - ACT FOUR 43. 119 INT. MAIN BRIDGE as before. RIKER You'd never survive. PICARD But, maybe in those few seconds -- the Enterprise could break free. In any case, that's what he... the other Picard... must have thought. 120 thru OMITTED 121 122 PICARD He is on his feet and heading for the turbolift. RIKER Captain, where are you going? PICARD Prepare a shuttle, Number One. RIKER You're leaving the ship?! PICARD I have to make a stop in Sickbay. We may be on a road which has no turns. Troi follows Picard to the turbolift. Off Riker's reaction, we: FADE OUT. END OF ACT FOUR STAR TREK: "Time Squared" - REV. 2/7/89 - ACT FIVE 44. ACT FIVE FADE IN: 123 EXT. SPACE - THE ENTERPRISE (OPTICAL) is slipping down into the energy whirlpool. 124 INT. SICKBAY (OPTICAL) Picard ENTERS -- Pulaski is there with Troi and P2. There is a moment of near recognition from P2, then he avoids eye contact with Picard. P2 now appears to be physically closer to normal. P2 is much closer to being in sync. PULASKI He's very agitated. P2's eyes dart around the room. Picard steps over in front of P2 to make and hold eye contact. P2 looks off. 125 ANOTHER ANGLE - P2 P2 I must get to the shuttle. 126 PICARD watches himself. PICARD I know. STAR TREK: "Time Squared" - REV. 2/7/89 - ACT FIVE 45. 127 SCENE (OPTICAL) PICARD Do you know where you are? P2 The Enterprise. Picard is relieved - PICARD But you're only vaguely aware of it. And me -- do you know who I am? P2 deflects the question. He's in a living nightmare. He has no answer. PICARD (continuing) No. You don't. P2 I must go. P2 tries to rise. PICARD Release him. PULASKI Do you know what you are doing? PICARD No -- release him! Pulaski deactivates the forcefield, which again appears briefly, and P2 is released. PULASKI (touching her communicator) Security to Sickbay. PICARD No. Security, this is the captain -- disregard that order. And clear all personnel -- repeat, all personnel -- from Shuttle Bay Two. I don't want any distractions. You... (meaning both Troi and Pulaski) ... stay here. P2 and Picard head for the door. STAR TREK: "Time Squared" - REV. 2/7/89 - ACT FIVE A45A. 127A INT. CORRIDOR Picard and P2 walk along. PICARD You have made the decision to leave the ship? STAR TREK: "Time Squared" - REV. 2/7/89 - ACT FIVE 45A. 127A CONTINUED: P2 I must. PICARD Why? P2 The energy in the vortex wants me. PICARD You're certain. P2 Yes... it's an entity -- a life-form which recognizes the Enterprise as an entity with me as the brain, and it wants me. P2's level of anxiety is rising, as they turn... 127B INT. TURBOLIFT ... and enter the turbolift. P2 Shuttle Bay Number Two. PICARD What's your other option? P2 This is our only chance. If I leave, it might be distracted long enough for the Enterprise to escape. PICARD You are wrong. Leaving won't save your ship. Don't you remember? It was destroyed -- you saw it happen. P2 If I don't leave the Enterprise, the ship will be destroyed. The turbolift comes to a stop and the doors open. EXITS, with Picard right behind him. STAR TREK: "Time Squared" - REV. 2/7/89 - ACT FIVE 45B. 127BB INT. CORRIDOR Picard and P2 continue heading toward Shuttle Bay Two. PICARD If that's true, then help me. We want the same thing. We want the Enterprise to be safe. There has to be a piece of information which I don't have. What is it? P2 It's me. PICARD You? They are interrupted by Riker's COM VOICE. RIKER Captain. PICARD Yes. RIKER We are about to lose warp drive. PICARD & P2 (in sync, they respond to Riker) Understood. Only Picard reacts to this bizarre occurrence. PICARD (continuing) When you say it's "you," do you mean it's still you? And it's not me -- just you. Has this entity singled you out -- somehow making a connection? P2 You're confusing me. We're almost out of time. 127C INT. SHUTTLE BAY TWO The doors open and the two Picards ENTER. P2 is heading directly for the shuttle. STAR TREK: "Time Squared" - REV. 2/7/89 - ACT FIVE 46. 127C CONTINUED: P2 I must get to the shuttle. PICARD Wait. You can -- I'll let you, hell, man, I'll go with you, but first tell me. What is -- what was, your other choice? P2 Stand aside. PICARD You don't know what I'm talking about. You're frozen with a single thought -- unable to change -- unable to alter any part of your previous actions. P2 I must leave -- there's no other way. PICARD There must be. P2 Only one -- but it would never work. PICARD What is it? What would never work? P2 Better to sacrifice myself than destroy the Enterprise. PICARD Destroy the Enterprise -- how? P2 I have to leave. PICARD Tell me -- what was your other choice? We can't escape it -- we can't fight it, we can't go forward. STAR TREK: "Time Squared" - REV. 2/7/89 - ACT FIVE 46A. 127C CONTINUED: (2) P2 No -- no... We can't go forward, it would destroy the Enterprise. PICARD (realizing) Was that it... Was that the other choice? P2 I must leave. STAR TREK: "Time Squared" - REV. 2/7/89 - ACT FIVE 47. 127C CONTINUED: (3) PICARD No. P2 is about to climb into the shuttle. Picard pulls his phaser. PICARD (continuing) I can't allow it. Before we have any chance of moving forward, the cycle must end. Then, without further comment, he fires the phaser. 128 OMITTED 129 P2 falls back. 130 OMITTED STAR TREK: "Time Squared" - REV. 2/7/89 - ACT FIVE 48. 130A INT. SHUTTLE BAY TWO PICARD (touching his communicator) Doctor Pulaski -- report to Shuttle Bay Two. Picard heads for the door. 131 INT. TURBOLIFT Picard steps on. PICARD Bridge. The doors close. 132 INT. MAIN BRIDGE Picard steps off the turbolift. PICARD Number One, we have been wasting our energy trying to escape. It only weakens us. (he moves to his Command Chair) Helm, set a course for the center of the vortex. Lieutenant La Forge, on my command -- I want all the power you can muster. GEORDI Yes, sir. RIKER We are going into it? PICARD Yes. DATA Course set. PICARD Everyone hold your position -- no matter what. ENGAGE! STAR TREK: "Time Squared" - REV. 2/7/89 - ACT FIVE 49. 133 EXT. SPACE - THE ENTERPRISE (OPTICAL) as the Enterprise turns and streaks toward the center of the vortex. 133A INT. SHUTTLE BAY TWO Pulaski, followed by TRANSPORTER CHIEF O'BRIEN, ENTERS and reacts to the body. 134 INT. MAIN BRIDGE They all tense for whatever is coming. 135 EXT. SPACE - THE ENTERPRISE (OPTICAL) rushes down. The funnel narrows. The swirling energy closes in on the ship. 136 EXT. SPACE - THE ENTERPRISE (OPTICAL) as the Enterprise rips into the center of the whirlpool. There is a SOUND -- almost like a SCREAM. 137 INT. MAIN BRIDGE Everyone braces. 138 EXT. SPACE - THE ENTERPRISE (OPTICAL) bursts through the core of pure energy, which triggers an implosion. 139 OMITTED 139A INT. SHUTTLE BAY TWO (OPTICAL) At this instant O'Brien watches as the body of P2 and the shuttle disappear. 140 EXT. SPACE - THE WHIRLPOOL (OPTICAL) collapses in upon itself. For a beat the Enterprise is alone in a great emptiness. STAR TREK: "Time Squared" - REV. 2/7/89 - ACT FIVE 49A. 141 INT. MAIN BRIDGE The reactions of everyone. Picard gets to his feet and looks around. PICARD What's our position? STAR TREK: "Time Squared" - REV. 2/7/89 - ACT FIVE 50. 141 CONTINUED: DATA We are back on course to Endicor. RIKER Stand down from Red Alert. O'BRIEN'S COM VOICE Bridge, this is Shuttle Bay Two. The other Picard and the shuttle are gone. PICARD Explain. O'BRIEN'S COM VOICE They just... vanished. WORF All decks have reported in. No damage -- no casualties. RIKER I want a complete check -- all systems. WORF Yes, sir. PICARD You have the bridge, Number One. Picard rises and heads for the Observation Lounge. Riker watches him leave. 142 INT. OBSERVATION LOUNGE (OPTICAL) Picard stares thoughtfully out at the stars streaking by. After a beat, the door opens and Riker ENTERS. For a long moment nothing is said. PICARD Lots of questions, Number One... Riker nods in agreement. STAR TREK: "Time Squared" - REV. 2/7/89 - ACT FIVE 51. 142 CONTINUED: PICARD (continuing) ... and damn few answers. There is a pause. RIKER Everything about it seemed a tick off. PICARD He certainly did not act like me, at least not the way I think I act. RIKER Maybe none of it was real... we could have just been part of a shared illusion. PICARD Or maybe "he" was thrown back in time so that we would be able to take another road... make another choice? RIKER That suggests a moral force, giving us the opportunity... or specifically giving you the opportunity to right a wrong. Picard is pensive for a moment. PICARD It's said... if you travel far enough you will eventually meet yourself. Picard turns and stares off at the stars. STAR TREK: "Time Squared" - REV. 2/7/89 - ACT FIVE 51A. 142 CONTINUED: (2) PICARD (continuing) I will tell you this... it's a very unnerving experience, one I hope never to repeat. Off Picard with: 142A INT. RIKER'S QUARTERS Riker has his cooking equipment in place. He has already placed all of the ingredients in a cooking utensil on the hot plate. The CHIME SOUNDS. RIKER Come. Worf ENTERS with Pulaski and Geordi. RIKER (continuing) I know you were all disappointed with my last culinary effort. WORF Not all. RIKER Thank you, Worf. Anyway, considering the stress of the last few days, I thought we could use a little diversion and at the same time I could make amends for the 'Owon omelet. PULASKI So what are you preparing? RIKER The specialty of the house, Alaskan stew. GEORDI Not with ingredients you picked up at Starbase seventy-three? RIKER No -- I had the computer fabricate everything. The potatoes, the onions, the flour, and the meat. STAR TREK: "Time Squared" - REV. 2/7/89 - ACT FIVE 51B. 142A CONTINUED: WORF Meat? What kind of meat? RIKER Ahh... Well, to be authentic I needed moose. But, I couldn't find the specific molecular pattern for moose, so I had to improvise. The computer came close... Riker fills their plates. RIKER (continuing) ... actually, it's somewhere between venison -- musk ox -- and Kobe beef. WORF I thought that humans had long ago given up the practice of raising animals for food. RIKER There were a couple of winters when it was either starve or hunt. WORF How fortunate. Pulaski looks down at her plate. PULASKI I'll give you this -- your stew smells a lot better than the eggs. They taste it. Reactions around. PULASKI (continuing) This is quite good. GEORDI Agreed. Worf's expression is one of revulsion. RIKER No good, Worf. STAR TREK: "Time Squared" - REV. 2/7/89 - ACT FIVE 51C. 142A CONTINUED: (2) WORF I appreciate the effort, I would have preferred another omelet. RIKER Sorry. I used the last of 'Owon eggs. GEORDI Thank goodness. Off their reactions: FADE OUT. END OF ACT FIVE THE END STAR TREK: THE NEXT GENERATION "The Icarus Factor" #40272-140 Written by David Assael Burton Armus Robert L. McCullough Directed by Robert Iscove THE WRITING CREDITS MAY NOT BE FINAL AND SHOULD NOT BE USED FOR PUBLICITY OR ADVERTISING PURPOSES WITHOUT FIRST CHECKING WITH THE TELEVISION LEGAL DEPARTMENT. Copyright 1989 Paramount Pictures Corporation. All Rights Reserved. This script is not for publication or reproduction. No one is authorized to dispose of same. If lost or destroyed, please notify the Script Department. 2ND REV. FINAL DRAFT FEBRUARY 2, 1989 STAR TREK: "The Icarus Factor" - REV. 2/8/89 - CAST STAR TREK: THE NEXT GENERATION "The Icarus Factor" CAST PICARD KYLE RIKER PIKER DATA PULASKI Non-Speaking TROI STARBASE TECHNICIANS GEORDI EIGHT KLINGON WARRIORS WORF WESLEY O'BRIEN ENSIGN HERBERT Non-Speaking CREWMEMBERS BOLISKA GRAHAM Voice-Over COMPUTER VOICE STAR TREK: "The Icarus Factor" - 2/2/89 - SETS STAR TREK: THE NEXT GENERATION "The Icarus Factor" SETS INTERIORS EXTERIORS USS ENTERPRISE USS ENTERPRISE MAIN ENGINEERING ENGINE ROOM STARBASE MONTGOMERY MAIN BRIDGE TRANSPORTER ROOM CORRIDORS OUTSIDE RIKER'S QUARTERS OUTSIDE HOLODECK OUTSIDE GYMNASIUM TEN-FORWARD OBSERVATION LOUNGE RIKER'S QUARTERS SICKBAY PULASKI'S OFFICE HOLODECK RITE OF ASCENSION CHAMBER TROI'S OFFICE GYMNASIUM CAPTAIN'S READY ROOM STAR TREK: "The Icarus Factor" - REV. 2/6/89 - PRONUNCIATION GUIDE STAR TREK: THE NEXT GENERATION "The Icarus Factor" PRONUNCIATION GUIDE NASRELDINE NAZ-rul-deen TRYPTOPHAN-LYSINE TRIP-toe-fane LIE-zeen MEGANUNDUN MEG-uh-NUN-dun DRAD ZINE KRYZUND DRAD ZINE KER-zund BRO TAH MAG PLONDARE SEPLICK BRO TAH MAG PLAWN-dair SEP-lick DAEDALUS DAY-duh-lus MATTA MOT-ta HACHIDAN KIRITSU HAH-chee-dawn Kee-RIT-soo ANBO-JYUTSU AN-bo JUT-su YOROSHIKU-ONEIGAISHIMASU Yo-ROW-shku O-neh-GOSH-u-mas STAR TREK: "... Icarus... " - REV. 2/6/89 - TEASER 1. STAR TREK: THE NEXT GENERATION "The Icarus Factor" TEASER FADE IN: 1 EXT. SPACE - THE ENTERPRISE (OPTICAL) cruises at warp speed as we hear: PICARD (V.O.) Captain's log, Stardate 42686.4. We are en route to Starbase Montgomery for engineering consultations prompted by minor readout anomalies... 2 INT. MAIN ENGINE ROOM - RIKER, DATA, AND GEORDI turn from a console station to observe the matter/antimatter blender. DATA I would consider them insignificant. RIKER What if you're wrong? Data looks at Riker. RIKER (continuing) Sorry. (then) But what if it's more than a mere discrepancy? PICARD ENTERS. GEORDI Then I'd say we have a problem. PICARD Agreed. We'll have Starbase Montgomery give us an independent reading. STAR TREK: "... Icarus... " - REV. 2/6/89 - TEASER 2. 2 CONTINUED: DATA Even if the molecular level controls failed, we could recrystallize the dilithium without outside help. GEORDI Data, don't worry. My ego isn't at stake here. DATA Perhaps we could reprogram the system to correct the readout variables -- PICARD That's certainly an option, but since we're stopping at Starbase Montgomery anyway, we'll let them do the analysis. RIKER Sir? I don't recall Starbase Montgomery on our mission itinerary -- PICARD I think we could all use a twelve-hour layover. Besides, I've just received some personnel transfer directives. Priority matters -- RIKER Boarding or disembarking? STAR TREK: "... Icarus... " - REV. 2/8/89 - TEASER 3. 2 CONTINUED: (2) WESLEY'S COM VOICE Captain Picard, we're within hailing range of Starbase Montgomery -- PICARD Reduce to impulse power -- (then, to Riker) Meet me in the Observation Lounge when you're done here. With that, Picard EXITS via the turbolift and we: GO TO: 2A INT. OBSERVATION LOUNGE - PICARD is gazing out the viewports as Riker ENTERS. RIKER Captain... PICARD Number One, I find myself recollecting the arrival of a new first officer to the Enterprise and a manual docking very confidently achieved. I suspect that I was somewhat miserly in offering congratulations then, so let me make up for it now. Congratulations. The captain of the Starship Ares is retiring. You've been selected as his replacement. RIKER The Ares... she is in Vega-Omicron sector. STAR TREK: "... Icarus... " - REV. 2/7/89 - TEASER 4. 2A CONTINUED: PICARD And she's picked up indications of an intelligent life-form... but nothing conclusive. RIKER Starfleet will want to know more. PICARD That's why they're asking you, Number One. Not for your military proficiency, but for your skill as an explorer and diplomat. RIKER Vega-Omicron. It'll take months at high warp just to get there. PICARD With no guarantee of finding anything once you arrive. Well, you have twelve hours to think it over. And maybe it's premature, but congratulations, "Captain." FADE OUT. END OF TEASER STAR TREK: "... Icarus... " - REV. 2/7/89 - ACT ONE 5. ACT ONE FADE IN: 3 EXT. STARBASE MONTGOMERY - THE ENTERPRISE (OPTICAL) moves into position above a well-established planetary outpost while: 4 INT. MAIN BRIDGE - PICARD sits in his Command Chair, Data at Ops, WORF at Tactical, WESLEY at Conn, as Riker ENTERS. PICARD Establish synchronous orbit. WESLEY Aye, sir. Picard turns to Riker as he approaches: PICARD Starbase Montgomery is sending a civilian advisor aboard to brief you on the Ares's mission. RIKER A personal briefing? PICARD Yes. Strategic attache with specialized knowledge of the frontier regions. I think you'll find the briefing... very interesting. RIKER I hope it's complete. Much of my decision will be based on it. HERBERT'S COM VOICE Commander Riker to the Transporter Room. Riker heads for the turbolift. STAR TREK: "... Icarus... " - REV. 2/6/89 - ACT ONE 6. 4 CONTINUED: PICARD Enjoy... Riker steps into the turbolift and we: GO TO: 5 INT. TRANSPORTER ROOM - RIKER ENTERS, steps up to ENSIGN HERBERT, who is monitoring his console. RIKER Ensign -- HERBERT Ah, you're right on time, Commander. He's on his way now... Herbert works his magic on the console and now he and Riker look up at: 6 THE TRANSPORTER PAD (OPTICAL) where the FORM OF A MAN MATERIALIZES, and as it starts to be more clearly defined: 7 RIKER realizes. RIKER Dad... ? 8 KYLE RIKER steps down from the Transporter Pad, walks right up to Riker, studies him just as Riker studies his father. Kyle's a jut-jawed, extremely fit, silver-haired civilian in his fifties. As they eyeball each other: STAR TREK: "... Icarus... " - REV. 2/6/89 - ACT ONE 7. 9 RIKER assumes Academy courtesy: Polite, detached, unemotional. RIKER You're the civilian advisor? The strategic attache? KYLE I asked Captain Picard to keep it quiet. I didn't want you to get nervous... excited. RIKER It's been fifteen years. Excitement is hardly the appropriate emotion. Kyle purses his lips, considers that, then counters: KYLE You've done well. First officer on the Enterprise is quite a feather in your cap. RIKER I've worked hard. KYLE Of course. I'm proud of you, Will -- RIKER If you'll excuse me, I've got my duties to attend to. After you've settled in, we'll complete the briefing. (then, to Herbert) Have security send an escort for this gentleman. With that, Riker about-faces and EXITS, leaving Kyle to share an awkward moment with Ensign Herbert as we: GO TO: 10 INT. CORRIDOR - WESLEY turns a corner, catches up with Worf and walks beside him as: STAR TREK: "... Icarus... " - REV. 2/6/89 - ACT ONE 8. 10 CONTINUED: WESLEY Did you hear about Commander Riker's promotion? Worf barely acknowledges Wesley, obviously upset by something. WORF Yes. WESLEY He didn't even know his father was coming. It was a complete surprise -- Worf stops in mid-stride, turning toward Wesley grimly. WORF So? WESLEY Well, can you imagine if it was your father? WORF I never knew my father. WESLEY And I didn't have one long enough -- WORF It is a waste of time to think about such things. WESLEY I'm not thinking about it, really, but everybody needs somebody, don't you think -- ? Worf glares at Wesley, fairly barking: WORF Enough! Worf drills Wesley with his intensity, then marches off, leaving Wesley a bit shaken as we: GO TO: STAR TREK: "... Icarus... " - REV. 2/8/89 - ACT ONE 9. 11 INT. MAIN ENGINE ROOM - GEORDI weaves through a TRIO OF STARBASE MONTGOMERY TECHS and a TRIO OF ENTERPRISE TECHS as they run their analysis. GEORDI Starbase Montgomery really didn't have to send me all this help, because we've already checked the entire dilithium spectrum for anomalous frequencies, so don't waste your time on that -- Just then, Wesley ENTERS, ashen faced. GEORDI (continuing) Wes... you okay? WESLEY I was just talking to Worf. (then) He's somewhat eccentric at times. GEORDI That's one word for it. WESLEY But he was so upset -- I must've said something wrong. GEORDI Maybe Worf's not too thrilled with the idea of losing Commander Riker to a new assignment. I'm sure not -- WESLEY Neither am I... But I think it's something else with Worf... something's really bothering him. Geordi considers that, exchanging a look of concern with Wesley now as we: GO TO: 12 INT. TEN-FORWARD - PULASKI sits at the bar with a couple of n.d. MEDICAL CREW STAFF, enjoying some down time. PULL BACK to reveal: STAR TREK: "... Icarus... " - REV. 2/6/89 - ACT ONE 10. 13 RIKER at a corner table with Chief O'Brien, with a cup of steaming tea. He sips the tea. O'BRIEN Female? Riker does not reply. O'BRIEN (continuing) Career? RIKER Family. O'BRIEN That is trouble. You choose your friends... you choose your enemies... But family... that's in the stars. RIKER So I've heard. As he sips: 14 KYLE RIKER ENTERS and immediately spots some people he knows. KYLE Boliska! What in the name of the Federation are you doing here -- ? He goes over and shakes hands with BOLISKA who is with a couple of other old n.d. friends, then spots: STAR TREK: "... Icarus... " - REV. 2/6/89 - ACT ONE 11. 15 PULASKI who visibly reacts at the sight of Kyle. She slowly rises, turning to her tablemates: PULASKI Excuse me... She crosses the room; he does the same, and as they come within whispering range: PULASKI (continuing) This is more than a surprise... it's total shock. KYLE You mean you didn't bake me a cake? PULASKI You're actually here. KYLE That makes two of us. (then, re an empty table) How about a drink? PULASKI How about a kiss? He smiles at that, kisses her lightly and then they exchange a warmly mutual embrace while: 16 RIKER turns to O'Brien with: RIKER They know each other... O'BRIEN I know her too, but we don't do that. And as they both react to Kyle's familiarity with Pulaski, we: GO TO: STAR TREK: "... Icarus... " - REV. 2/8/89 - ACT ONE 12. 17 INT. MAIN ENGINE ROOM - GEORDI, DATA, AND WESLEY move around the dilithium chamber, watching the starbase crew go about their analysis while: DATA And it has nothing to do with Commander Riker's new assignment? WESLEY No. His reaction to that was just the opposite of mine: Completely unaffected. GEORDI You see? With all that's going on, you might be overreacting. WESLEY Really? You try talking to Worf. I'm telling you, he's not... normal... for Worf. DATA There is, of course, a genetic predisposition toward hostility among all Klingons, although Worf does seem unusually out of sorts. GEORDI He's never been much on charm -- WESLEY Well, whatever troubles him, we should try to help. He is our friend. GEORDI And I'd like to keep him friendly. (then) Any suggestions? DATA Empirical study. Monitor the subject. WESLEY Right. We'll watch for any signs of unusual behavior -- GEORDI That shouldn't be difficult -- STAR TREK: "... Icarus... " - REV. 2/6/89 - ACT ONE 13. 17 CONTINUED: DATA Within the norms of Klingon patterns, of course. (then) Discretion will be required. WESLEY Fine. Where do we start? GEORDI (re himself and Data) We... will assist you as needed. (then) You found the problem... DATA And you must solve it. With that, Data and Geordi walk off, leaving Wesley wondering what he's gotten himself into now, as we: GO TO: 18 INT. TEN-FORWARD - RIKER downs the last of his tea, looks across the room at: 19 PULASKI AND KYLE who sit together at the bar, obviously enjoying each other's company. KYLE ... and after working out the Fuurinkazan battle strategies at the Tokyo Base, I was asked to go to work for Starfleet as a tactical advisor. PULASKI I'm surprised you stayed away from the action as long as you did -- Just then, Riker steps up, having overheard that last line. PULASKI Hi, Will -- join us? Your father and I were just catching up -- STAR TREK: "... Icarus... " - REV. 2/6/89 - ACT ONE 14. 19 CONTINUED: RIKER (ignoring that; to Pulaski) You never told me you knew him. PULASKI Well... it wasn't exactly a secret... but it never really came up -- Kyle looks up smiling, offering: KYLE Pull up a stool, son -- RIKER I'm ready for your briefing whenever you are, sir. And as he EXITS, Kyle looks after him, his concern growing, as we: 20 OMITTED FADE OUT. END OF ACT ONE STAR TREK: "... Icarus... " - REV. 2/13/89 - ACT TWO 15. ACT TWO FADE IN: A21 INT. CORRIDOR - DATA AND GEORDI are approaching the doors to Ten-Forward. GEORDI You think Worf is going to appreciate being observed like some laboratory specimen? DATA You are correct. He is not insensitive... particularly at this stage of his development. GEORDI Just remember, this is Wesley's operation, okay? DATA Wesley is quite competent. Just as they approach Ten-Forward, Wesley steps up, agitated. WESLEY You guys aren't going to believe this... GEORDI Believe what? WESLEY Commander Riker just caught me coming out of the turbolift. GEORDI So? This area isn't off limits to you. WESLEY I know, but I've been working on Paracelsian computations as part of my studies and he wants them right away. GEORDI What about Worf? STAR TREK: "... Icarus... " - REV. 2/12/89 - ACT TWO 15A. A21 CONTINUED: WESLEY When Commander Riker says right away he means right away. DATA Indeed. WESLEY (re Ten-Forward) You guys can cover for me, can't you? GEORDI Wait a minute. This whole thing -- WESLEY I've got to get my computations done. GEORDI You don't expect us to -- WESLEY Oh, come on. What are friends for? (to Data) Right? Data reacts, very much put on the spot; then: DATA Go ahead. Finish your work and We shall study Worf. WESLEY I knew I could count on you guys! With that, Wesley heads off down the corridor, leaving Data to face Geordi, as we: GO TO: 21 INT. TEN-FORWARD - PULASKI AND KYLE are at the bar, Kyle just shaking hands with an old acquaintance as Geordi and Data find a table in the b.g. KYLE ... good seeing you too, Graham -- As GRAHAM heads off, Pulaski smiles. STAR TREK: "... Icarus... " - REV. 2/10/89 - ACT TWO 15B. 21 CONTINUED: PULASKI You wouldn't be running for mayor, would you? KYLE Do pick-up work for the Federation long enough and it'll happen to you, too. (then) I thought about you a lot. PULASKI Kyle... I don't need to hear what you don't need to say. KYLE We could've been great together. PULASKI Possibly. KYLE Is it true you got married? PULASKI Again... and again. KYLE Doesn't that make you three for three? PULASKI I'm not complaining. They were each good men... and we're all still good friends. STAR TREK: "... Icarus... " - REV. 2/6/89 - ACT TWO 16. 21 CONTINUED: KYLE Like us? PULASKI Close... but different. (then) They were all a little more... in touch with themselves. KYLE Ouch. PULASKI Kyle, face facts. You're crusty. A reputation for being hard as nails and getting the job done. But underneath all that, you're not so bad. Some of us even love you. (then) And then there's Will. KYLE And then there's Will. And as he considers his feelings for his son, we: FOCUS ON: 22 WORF (OPTICAL) standing at the large viewport, staring out at the galaxy, very much alone with his thoughts. 23 GEORDI AND DATA study Worf from their vantage point in the b.g. GEORDI Wesley really should be doing this on his own -- DATA But he needs his study time -- GEORDI I can't believe you fell for that. (then, re Worf) I don't know... he looks pretty normal to me. STAR TREK: "The Icarus Factor" - 2/2/89 - ACT TWO 17. 23 CONTINUED: DATA In solitude there is nothing to trigger unusual behavior. GEORDI (shrugs) Good point. Let's not tamper with the status quo... DATA That would defeat the opportunity for our behavioral research. (then) The probabilities are that he's simply lonely. We can relieve his anxieties through socialization -- GEORDI (re Worf) Be my guest. Data approaches Worf from the rear. DATA Excuse me, Lieutenant -- Worf doesn't turn around or make the slightest reply. Data presses on. DATA (continuing) You seem to have lost the will to communicate with others. Still no response from Worf. Data persists. DATA (continuing) You have friends here. We care about you. Why, just awhile ago, Wesley, Geordi and I were saying how -- Worf suddenly wheels around, glaring down at Data with Klingon ferocity as he bellows in his deepest baritone: WORF Sir... with all due respect... BE GONE! STAR TREK: "... Icarus... " - REV. 2/6/89 - ACT TWO 18. 23 CONTINUED: (2) Data backs away and returns to Geordi's side. DATA He seems quite sincere in his desire for solitude. GEORDI (smugly, the pun intentional) Seeing is believing, huh? With that, Geordi and Data beat a hasty retreat, as we: GO TO: 24 INT. RIKER'S QUARTERS - RIKER (OPTICAL) stands at a viewing console, tapping the touchpad occasionally as he goes through a series of childhood "photos." A TONE is heard. RIKER Come in. The door slides open and Worf ENTERS. RIKER Yes, Worf? WORF May I have a moment, sir? RIKER What is it? WORF It is difficult to say... words are not always easy for me... (then, distracted by the pictures) Is that Earth? RIKER Yes. Alaska... I was nine there... WORF (intrigued; re the picture) That is a big fish you are holding. Riker considers that, then admits: STAR TREK: "... Icarus... " - REV. 2/6/89 - ACT TWO 19. 24 CONTINUED: RIKER (re the picture) I didn't even catch that fish. WORF You were holding it like -- RIKER I hooked it... but my father took the pole... wouldn't even let me reel it in... he said I might lose it. WORF You do not have good feelings for your father? RIKER I'm... not sure how I feel right now... WORF You have much on your mind. RIKER Yes. (then) What is on yours? STAR TREK: "... Icarus... " - REV. 2/7/89 - ACT TWO 20. 24 CONTINUED: (2 WORF The Enterprise has been good to me... RIKER To all of us. WORF It has been my home... but still, I am alone here. RIKER Not true. You have many friends here, just as I have -- WORF Then why do you make ready to leave the Enterprise? RIKER I've been offered my own command, something I've trained for... WORF And what of your friends? RIKER Friendship is something we carry in our hearts... We can feel it wherever we are. WORF Yes. On Kling we say, "Tez mrot weilz konpadam": One is always of his tribe. (then) I would like to join you on the Ares. RIKER Thank you, Worf. But I haven't accepted the assignment yet -- WORF But sir... it could be a dangerous mission. There may be the potential for combat. RIKER That's not the purpose of the mission. STAR TREK: "... Icarus... " - REV. 2/6/89 - ACT TWO 20A. 24 CONTINUED: (3) WORF Still -- to die a true hero -- Riker raises his hand. RIKER Worf. Your point is made. WORF Then I know you will do the right thing, sir. With that, Worf EXITS, as we: GO TO: 25 OMITTED 26 INT. OBSERVATION LOUNGE - LATER - KYLE (OPTICAL) turns to face Riker who ENTERS: STAR TREK: "... Icarus... " - REV. 2/6/89 - ACT TWO 21. 26 CONTINUED: KYLE Finally. We're alone. Maybe -- RIKER I'm here for the briefing, sir. Kyle reacts, sees that Riker is all business. Kyle hands him a message disk. KYLE All you need to know is here. RIKER The mission details could've been transmitted -- KYLE I've been hearing good things about you. RIKER Why didn't I ever hear from you? Kyle reacts to that, studies the floor for a beat; then: KYLE I know. Keeping in touch isn't my strong suit. (then) Funny thing about being a parent. There aren't any tech manuals, no quick readouts to get you to the next set of variables. You just kind of wing it from day to day... Will, when your mother died -- RIKER Excuse me, sir, but I need to study this briefing material... KYLE Will. I came to the Enterprise because... look, considering where you might be going, I wanted to... (then) I'm here with my hand out, son -- STAR TREK: "... Icarus... " - REV. 2/6/89 - ACT TWO 22. 26 CONTINUED: (2) With that, Riker studies his father for a beat, then steps around his father and strides away. Kyle watches him go with mounting concern, as we: 27 OMITTED FADE OUT. END OF ACT TWO STAR TREK: "... Icarus... " - REV. 2/9/89 - ACT THREE 23. ACT THREE FADE IN: 28 EXT. SPACE - THE ENTERPRISE (OPTICAL) establishing the great ship maintaining synchronous orbit over Starbase Montgomery. 29 INT. SICKBAY - PULASKI turns from comforting an isolated patient, and we PULL BACK to reveal: 30 KYLE watching her. She EXITS into his area. PULASKI (re the patient) Poor guy. Picked up a flu virus on our last stop at Nasreldine. KYLE Sounds nasty. What's the therapy? PULASKI Tryptophan-lysine distillates with generous doses of PCS. KYLE PCS? PULASKI "Pulaski's Chicken Soup." Kyle shares a laugh at her joke, then: KYLE (re the patient) You've still got the touch, haven't you? Just then, TROI ENTERS in the b.g., overhearing. PULASKI I like to help. When they hurt, I hurt. STAR TREK: "... Icarus... " - REV. 2/9/89 - ACT THREE 24. 30 CONTINUED: Troi steps up to them with: TROI Commander Pulaski's greatest medical skill is her empathy. (then, to Kyle) You must be Commander Riker's father. He reacts, smiles, a bit nonplussed. KYLE Yes, but how -- TROI We've all heard about you. (then) And I've felt certain things. Kyle reacts, glances at Pulaski, who smiles at his discomfort, then explains by way of introduction: PULASKI This is Deanna Troi, ship's counselor. KYLE (nods warily) Kyle Riker. PULASKI I thought you two should meet. (then) Troi's job is to keep us from deluding ourselves. KYLE (re Troi) Let me guess: Betazoid? TROI At your service. Pulaski smiles at that, makes her exit. PULASKI I've got some lab work to do, so if you'll excuse me... STAR TREK: "... Icarus... " - REV. 2/9/89 - ACT THREE 25. 30 CONTINUED: (2) Pulaski makes her EXIT, leaving Kyle to face Troi now, as she begins to "read" him. KYLE Why do I get the feeling this is a set-up? TROI Because you are intelligent, wise... and quite correct. KYLE (re Troi; appreciatively) I've been set up with worse, that's for sure -- TROI You're also anxious about something. It's your son, isn't it? You're not as close to him as you'd like to be... KYLE (wryly) Oh, I don't know. Wouldn't you say we both have pretty good taste in women? TROI I'd like to help if I can. If you allow me. KYLE Fine. What do you want from me? I came here to bury the hatchet with Will and I find out the ground is frozen solid. TROI You're not the kind of man who gives up so easily. KYLE I didn't say I was giving up. It would just be nice to get a little something from him. TROI What is it you want from him? STAR TREK: "... Icarus... " - REV. 2/9/89 - ACT THREE 25A. 30 CONTINUED: (3) KYLE I don't know. Acknowledgement, maybe... or -- TROI Respect is earned, not bestowed. KYLE Respect? I don't need that from him. TROI Perhaps you want him to be proud of you, for you carry great pride in his accomplishments -- KYLE Absolutely! Look at him! First officer on the Enterprise, just offered his first command -- TROI Yet... You covet his success -- KYLE Please. He'd be lucky to have the career I've had! TROI True. You are well respected in your field. STAR TREK: "... Icarus... " - REV. 2/9/89 - ACT THREE 26. 30 CONTINUED: (4) KYLE I may have something of a reputation for excellence -- TROI And false humility. Kyle reacts to that with a smile. Then: KYLE My guess is that Will finds you pretty fascinating. Candor seems to be a trait he admires. TROI Honesty is the trait he admires. (then) You're very competitive with him, aren't you? He reacts to that, considers it, then dismisses it. KYLE Maybe... in the past. But I'm here to help Will prepare for his first mission as captain. TROI Are you sure he'll accept such a dangerous assignment? KYLE (concerned) He'll take it just because it is so dangerous. TROI How can you be so sure? KYLE Because I would. And we aren't so different, Will and I... GO TO: 31 INT. RIKER'S QUARTERS - PICARD stands to one side, watching Riker. PICARD I've seen your mission briefing. STAR TREK: "... Icarus... " - REV. 2/9/89 - ACT THREE 26A. 31 CONTINUED: RIKER Yes, sir. PICARD Any questions? RIKER No sir. (then) Other than a mention of the Ares's first officer. PICARD His name is Flaherty, as I recall. RIKER That's right. The briefing said something about uncanny linguistic skills. PICARD Correct. The last time I saw him, Commander Flaherty spoke over forty languages. Klingon, Romulan, Giamon, and Stroyerian were among the more colorful, as I recall... RIKER He speaks alien dialects? PICARD He has the unique ability of instantaneously interpreting, collating, and extrapolating any verbal communication he hears. (then) You should find him helpful in Sector Vega-Omicron. RIKER I'm sure I will. STAR TREK: "... Icarus... " - REV. 2/6/89 - ACT THREE 27. 31 CONTINUED: (2) Suddenly, they're both distracted by the DOOR CHIME. RIKER Enter. Kyle ENTERS, all smiles as he greets Picard. KYLE Captain Picard. At last. (re Riker) I'd like to thank you for all the help you've been to my son -- STAR TREK: "... Icarus... " - REV. 2/7/89 - ACT THREE 28. 31 CONTINUED: (3) PICARD My only regret is that your reunion will mark Will's farewell. KYLE (re Riker) He's ready for this command. PICARD I have no doubt -- KYLE Captain? May I have a word with my son? PICARD Of course... excuse me, gentlemen... Picard EXITS; Riker turns to face his father. RIKER I won't be pushed into this. KYLE (smiling) Oh, come on, Willy. Don't you think you're ready for the Ares -- ? RIKER Starfleet does. KYLE Of course. You're the best candidate for this job. But I want you to know I'm here if you need me... RIKER I've been on my own since I was fifteen. I can take care of myself. Kyle reacts, begins to bristle. STAR TREK: "... Icarus... " - REV. 2/7/89 - ACT THREE 29. 31 CONTINUED: (4) KYLE Please! Spare me the "pain" of your childhood. I hung in there for thirteen years. If that wasn't enough, then that's just too bad. With that, Kyle turns to the door. It opens. He EXITS. The door closes, as we: GO TO: 32 INT. MAIN ENGINE ROOM - GEORDI AND DATA are observing the Starbase Montgomery crew as they continue their analysis of the situation. Geordi is beginning to feel the pressure. GEORDI Maybe I missed something -- DATA The ship's computer would have corrected immediately -- GEORDI My inputs could have been in error -- Just then, Wesley ENTERS with a sense of urgency. WESLEY Geordi! Data! I figured out Worf's problem -- GEORDI You spoke to him? WESLEY No, no. I accessed the complete Klingon cultural database. It took some time, but -- GEORDI Okay, Wesley. What is the problem? STAR TREK: "... Icarus... " - REV. 2/6/89 - ACT THREE 30. 32 CONTINUED: WESLEY It's the tenth anniversary of Worf's Age of Ascension. GEORDI His what? WESLEY The Age of Ascension is a Klingon ritual of great significance. A rite of initiation, marking a new level of Klingon spiritual attainment. DATA Of what significance is the anniversary of this event? WESLEY It's a day of ritual and celebration with one's fellow Klingons... and he doesn't have any Klingon friends. GEORDI But we're his friends -- WESLEY But we don't practice Klingon tradition. And we're not Klingons. (then) Worf's feeling socially... culturally isolated. GEORDI Well, what do you suggest? I'm not sure I'd like to invite a bunch of Klingons on board -- DATA We can program the ship's computer to provide us with simulations on the Holodeck -- GEORDI Holographic Klingons? Sure. Why not? STAR TREK: "... Icarus... " - REV. 2/8/89 - ACT THREE 30A. 32 CONTINUED: (2) DATA We need only to program the computer with details of the specific ceremony... WESLEY The cultural database said the initiate's family must be present -- STAR TREK: "... Icarus... " - REV. 2/9/89 - ACT THREE 31. 32 CONTINUED: (3) GEORDI So? We're his family. We'll go. (then) I just wonder what kind of party the Klingons had in mind... And as they all react to that consideration, we: GO TO: 33 INT. PULASKI'S OFFICE - PULASKI is working as Riker ENTERS. RIKER Do you have a minute? PULASKI Sure... RIKER I wanted to apologize for my remarks in Ten-Forward. Your past is none of my business. PULASKI Even if it involves your father? RIKER Yes. Even if it involves my father. Pulaski sits quietly for a moment, then asks: PULASKI Did he ever tell you why he never remarried? RIKER What woman would have him? With an ego like his -- STAR TREK: "... Icarus... " - REV. 2/7/89 - ACT THREE 32. 33 CONTINUED: PULASKI I would have. In a cold minute. (then) Twelve years ago, Kyle Riker was a civilian strategist advising Starfleet in its conflict with the Tholians. The starbase he was working from was attacked. None of the base crew was expected to live. And they all died... All except your father. (then, quietly) Your father alone had the will to endure, to face the pain, to live. RIKER I never knew that about him. PULASKI I never saw a man fight so hard in my life. RIKER And you fell in love? PULASKI Yes. And so did he. (then) But marriage was out of the question. He had other priorities... RIKER His career. She considers that, then offers: PULASKI You know, if I were you... going out on the Ares, I'd jettison the emotional baggage you're still carrying around. STAR TREK: "... Icarus... " - REV. 2/6/89 - ACT THREE 33. 33 CONTINUED: (2) Pulaski EXITS and we: FADE OUT. END OF ACT THREE STAR TREK: "... Icarus... " - REV. 2/8/89 - ACT FOUR 34. ACT FOUR FADE IN: 34 INT. ENGINEERING - DATA, WESLEY, AND GEORDI stand near Geordi's engineering station, the Starbase Montgomery techs working in the b.g. WESLEY Now the Klingon cultural database was very specific on the setting. GEORDI Let me guess: A twenty-piece orchestra in a magnificent ballroom. Everybody in formal wear -- WESLEY There's an unusual test of inner strength involved -- DATA I believe that will entail the use of Klingon "painstiks." GEORDI "Painstiks"? Sounds lovely -- DATA Enduring physical suffering is considered a Klingon spiritual test. GEORDI You mean... for Worf to celebrate the anniversary of his Ascension... he has to be hurt? And we have to witness this? STAR TREK: "... Icarus... " - REV. 2/8/89 - ACT FOUR 35. 34 CONTINUED: DATA We are his family. And as Geordi reacts to that, we: GO TO: 35 INT. CAPTAIN'S READY ROOM - PICARD is at his desk console. The CHIME SOUNDS. PICARD Come. The door slides open. Riker ENTERS. PICARD (continuing) Everything in order, Number One? RIKER I'd be a fool to turn this promotion down, wouldn't I? STAR TREK: "... Icarus... " - REV. 2/6/89 - ACT FOUR 36. 35 CONTINUED: PICARD I don't know, and if you're asking me what I think you should do, I don't know that either. But I can spell out, albeit crudely, what you are choosing between. (a beat) Your present position as first officer of the Enterprise brings you prestige, distinction, even glamour of a kind. You are the second in command of Starfleet's flagship -- but still, second in command. Your promotion will transfer you to a relatively insignificant ship in an obscure corner of the galaxy, but it will be your ship. Being who you are, that ship will vibrate with your authority, your style, your vision. There is no substitute for being in the center of the stage -- any stage. RIKER I'll need a little more time before I'll have a decision. PICARD Granted. Riker reacts to that, as we: GO TO: 36 INT. ENGINEERING - DATA AND GEORDI stand on the platform above the Starbase Montgomery team, watching them go through their painstaking analysis as O'Brien steps up. O'BRIEN They find anything yet? GEORDI Not yet... DATA There is nothing to find. STAR TREK: "... Icarus... " - REV. 2/8/89 - ACT FOUR 36A. 36 CONTINUED: O'BRIEN No harm in checking, I guess. GEORDI Really? How would you like them giving your transporter operation a little once-over? O'BRIEN No problem. We're totally ship-shape. GEORDI You miss the point. It's just the idea that they even suspect a malfunction. DATA Geordi, let them look. STAR TREK: "... Icarus... " - REV. 2/6/89 - ACT FOUR 37. 36 CONTINUED: (2) Wesley approaches, stepping up to O'Brien with: WESLEY Chief, will you be able to attend a little party for Worf at seventeen hundred hours? O'BRIEN A party for Worf? That sounds intriguing. I'd be delighted -- GEORDI It's a surprise, okay? O'BRIEN My lips are sealed. Data, Geordi, and Wesley respond enthusiastically to that, as we: GO TO: 37 OMITTED 38 INT. TROI'S OFFICE - RIKER has just entered. RIKER I didn't want to leave without saying good-bye. TROI I don't like good-byes. How about "until next time"? RIKER Until next time. She rises, trying to be tough, to keep this professional. TROI It's been a pleasure serving with you, Commander. RIKER That's mutual, Counselor. STAR TREK: "... Icarus... " - REV. 2/6/89 - ACT FOUR 37A. 38 CONTINUED: She stands there, biting her lip for a beat, then admits, almost embarrassed: STAR TREK: "... Icarus... " - REV. 2/6/89 - ACT FOUR 38. 38 CONTINUED: (2) TROI I'm supposed to know how everyone feels... but I... I can't read you right now. He takes a tentative step toward her, suggesting: RIKER Maybe your own feelings are getting in the way -- TROI My job is to help others sort out their emotions. My own feelings are beside the point -- RIKER Not to me. Feelings are what make us human -- TROI (then, hopefully) Are you feeling sadness? RIKER Yes. She looks at him, a tear slipping down her cheek now. TROI So am I. He takes the final step toward her, pulling her into a firm, caring embrace, as we: GO TO: 39 OMITTED 40 KYLE waiting outside Riker's doorway. Riker approaches. Their eyes meet. KYLE I'll be leaving at twenty-one hundred hours. May I have a minute? STAR TREK: "... Icarus... " - REV. 2/6/89 - ACT FOUR 39. 40 CONTINUED: Riker considers that, then steps into his quarters. Kyle follows, as we: GO TO: 41 INT. RIKER'S QUARTERS - RIKER turns to face his father. RIKER Look, I've been giving you my best Academy courtesy -- but it's really time for you to go. KYLE It's time for us to talk, so lower your shields and -- RIKER I'm asking you to leave, or I'll -- KYLE You'll what? (then, cocky) Y'know, it's really a shame there's no anbo-jyutsu ring nearby, because you need to be put in your place. RIKER Really? There is. Deck Twelve. The gymnasium. KYLE Why don't we clear the air once and for all -- ? RIKER You're on. Kyle and Riker eyeball each other, as we: FADE OUT. END OF ACT FOUR STAR TREK: "... Icarus... " - REV. 2/8/89 - ACT FIVE 40-40A. ACT FIVE FADE IN: 42 EXT. SPACE - THE ENTERPRISE (OPTICAL) establishing the great starship in its synchronous orbit. PICARD (V.O.) Captain's log, Stardate 42686.9. (TO BE DETERMINED) 43 OMITTED STAR TREK: "... Icarus... " - REV. 2/8/89 - ACT FIVE 41. 43A INT. PULASKI'S OFFICE (OR SICKBAY) looks up from her work as Kyle ENTERS. KYLE Ship's scuttlebutt has it that you wanted to see me. PULASKI That's right... (then) I thought I knew you, Kyle. KYLE You do. About as well as anyone -- PULASKI Then what's this about an anbo-jyutsu match with Will? KYLE (suppressing a smile) You heard. PULASKI Haven't we grown beyond the point where we resolve our problems through physical conflict? KYLE I think you're overreacting -- PULASKI I'm overreacting. You're the one who's going to fight his own son! KYLE It's not a fight, Kate. Think of it as more of a... "contest." PULASKI And suppose one of you is injured? He smiles, reaches out and tweaks her cheek playfully. KYLE I know where to find a good doctor. STAR TREK: "... Icarus... " - REV. 2/8/89 - ACT FIVE 41A. 43A CONTINUED: PULASKI Don't patronize me, Kyle. KYLE Look. Will and I started playing anbo-jyutsu when he was eight. He knows how to handle himself... and so do I. PULASKI (considers that; then) Well, don't take this the wrong way, but Will's in his prime, and -- KYLE -- And I'm no spring chicken, I know. (then, with a wink) Don't worry. He's never been able to beat me. With that, Kyle EXITS, as we: GO TO: 44 INT. HOLODECK - DATA, GEORDI, AND WESLEY (OPTICAL) stand before O'Brien and Pulaski, all of them reacting to the frightening sight in front of them: A true Klingon Rite of Ascension Chamber. It's a large, eerily-lighted room. The walls and floors are surfaced in polished stainless steel. STAR TREK: "... Icarus... " - REV. 2/13/89 - ACT FIVE 42. 44 CONTINUED: In the middle of the room is a wide stainless-steel trough that runs into a drain, on either side of which are long raised platforms. Data steps forward, filled with trepidation, while the others all study the room with silent awe. DATA Computer... Is this it? COMPUTER VOICE Correct. Klingon Rite of Ascension Chamber. Data looks to Geordi, who wonders: GEORDI Is this really necessary? WESLEY If we're going to get Worf through his problem, it is. Data steps back. Then: DATA Computer... may we please have Klingon personnel appropriate for this event? Suddenly, EIGHT FORMIDABLE KLINGONS appear along the sides of the trough. They each hold an exotic, cattle-prod-like "painstik." Everyone reacts to the sudden appearance of the Klingons. DATA These images are specifically programmed for Ascension rites. GEORDI Cute bunch. Wesley takes a step forward, studying them and the painstiks. WESLEY And they use those? STAR TREK: "... Icarus... " - REV. 2/8/89 - ACT FIVE 42A. 44 CONTINUED: (2) O'Brien reacts with caution. O'BRIEN Those are Klingon painstiks. I once saw one of them used against a two-ton Rectyne Monopod. Poor creature jumped five meters at the slightest touch. Finally died from excessive cephalic pressures -- STAR TREK: "... Icarus... " - REV. 2/13/89 - ACT FIVE 43. 44 CONTINUED: (3) GEORDI (wincing at that) You don't mean... ? O'BRIEN (nodding affirmatively) That's right. The animal's head exploded just like -- PULASKI I think that's enough, Chief O'Brien. DATA Are we ready? And as they all react, we: GO TO: 45 INT. CORRIDOR - OUTSIDE HOLODECK - WORF approaches impatiently, Troi at his side, reassuring him. WORF I do not enjoy riddles, Counselor. TROI You will enjoy this one. WORF I am in no mood for trifling or games! Not today! TROI I know what an important day this is for you: The anniversary of your Rite of Ascension. WORF You know about that? TROI Yes. All your friends on board do. STAR TREK: "... Icarus... " - REV. 2/13/89 - ACT FIVE 43A. 45 CONTINUED: WORF That is impossible. The Rite of Ascension is a secret known only to Klingons -- TROI -- And certain resourceful young Ensigns... WORF Wesley? What does he know about it -- ? TROI Enough. Now just bear with me. WORF Where are we going? TROI The Holodeck. WORF This truly tries my patience, Counselor. As they approach the entrance to the Holodeck, Worf stops, reacts. STAR TREK: "... Icarus... " - REV. 2/13/89 - ACT FIVE 44. 45 CONTINUED: (2) TROI I think you will approve. WORF You are not going in? TROI No. She heads off. He turns to the door, suddenly curious. WORF Open. The Holodeck doors open. Worf reacts, sucking his breath in with great glee as he sees: 46 INT. HOLODECK - THE RITE OF ASCENSION CHAMBER populated now by his Enterprise comrades who all stand off to one side, the eight Klingon holographs standing along the trough, forming a rather forbidding gauntlet as they hold their painstiks at the ready. Worf ENTERS, almost teary-eyed as he regards Data, Wesley, Pulaski, Geordi, and O'Brien. WORF An Ascension ceremony? For me? GEORDI Happy anniversary, Worf. WORF Thank you... oh, thank you! DATA Shall we begin? WORF Oh, yes. Please! STAR TREK: "... Icarus... " - REV. 2/13/89 - ACT FIVE 44A. 47 WORF moves to the head of the trough, looks at his audience, then intones: WORF DaHjaj SuvwI''e' jIH. tIgwIj Sa'angNIS. 'Iw bIQtIqDaq jIjaH. Today I am a Warrior. I must show you my heart. I travel the river of blood. Data leans over to Wesley and Geordi. STAR TREK: "... Icarus... " - REV. 2/13/89 - ACT FIVE 45. 47 CONTINUED: DATA The true test of Klingon strength is to admit one's most profound feelings... while under extreme duress. Geordi and Wesley nod, impressed as they turn now to see Worf step down into the trough. At a processional pace, he begins the walk down the channel, coming between two of the Klingons. He looks at them with great sincerity. WORF jIbechrup may' vIlos. Whereupon the first two Klingons jab painstiks at Worf, sparks flying off the end as Worf writhes in absolute, breathtaking agony. After a moment, they pull the painstiks from Worf. Worf's voice is weak as he growls: WORF (continuing) The battle is mine. I crave only the blood of the enemy. Worf staggers down the trough, stopping in front of the next pair of Klingons. WORF (continuing) HIHIvqa'. The Klingons strike out with the painstiks; and, as contact is made, sparks fly and Worf's body contorts in wretched agony. They break contact with the painstiks now and Worf fights for equilibrium, shuddering with the pain of this as he utters hoarsely: STAR TREK: "... Icarus... " - REV. 2/13/89 - ACT FIVE 46. 47 CONTINUED: (2) WORF (continuing) The bile of the vanquished flows over my hands. Then he steps down to the next pair of Klingons with: WORF (continuing) may'pequ' moH. Pulaski looks over to Data, who finds this difficult, reacting with a start as the Klingons nail Worf with their painstiks; he falls to his knees, twitching violently, and, as Worf fights for control, they remove the painstiks. Worf collapses at the end of the trough, rolls over, and... smiles at them all, whispering: WORF (continuing) Thank you, my friends. Thank you... You have my respect. My admiration. My eternal gratitude -- There is applause from them all now, as we: GO TO: 47A INT. OBSERVATION LOUNGE - TROI Pulaski ENTERS. TROI Is Worf all right? PULASKI He's never been happier. TROI Then it was a good ceremony? PULASKI Let's just say I wasn't about to stay for the refreshments. TROI Klingon culture is not to your taste? STAR TREK: "... Icarus... " - REV. 2/8/89 - ACT FIVE 46A. 47A CONTINUED: PULASKI I'm just glad humans have progressed beyond the need for such barbaric displays. TROI Have they? Commander Riker and his father are up on the Holodeck about to engage in barbarism of their own. PULASKI Don't remind me. It's not something of which I approve -- TROI In spite of human evolution, there seem to be certain traits endemic to gender. PULASKI You think they're going to knock each other's brains out just because... they're men? TROI Males are certainly unique. In adulthood, fathers continue to regard their sons as children... and sons continue to chafe against what they perceive as their fathers' expectations of them. Pulaski considers that for a beat; then: PULASKI It's almost as if they never really grow up at all, isn't it? TROI Perhaps that's why men remain so attractive. PULASKI Particularly men like Commander Riker? Troi reacts with a blush, but responds in kind. TROI (touche) As well as his father, I'm sure... STAR TREK: "... Icarus... " - REV. 2/8/89 - ACT FIVE 46B-47. 47A CONTINUED: (2) Pulaski smiles, acknowledging that; then, concerned: PULASKI (re the Holodeck) I just hope they don't hurt each other up there... They each consider that grave possibility, as we: GO TO: 48 OMITTED STAR TREK: "... Icarus... " - REV. 2/8/89 - ACT FIVE 48. 49 INT. GYMNASIUM - RIKER AND KYLE (OPTICAL) approach an exotic combat arena, wearing anbo-jyutsu gear which consists of snug face shield and helmet, abdomen shield, and slender pads on all other vital areas. They carry anbo-jyutsu staffs, tapered on one end, padded on the other, with a reostat twist-shaft in the center grip. The arena itself is a ring fourteen feet in diameter. KYLE Anbo-jyutsu. The ultimate evolution of the martial arts. RIKER I remember my early lessons. KYLE You could never get used to the sightless factor... or to losing. RIKER True. But I've had fifteen years of practice. KYLE Then let's see if you've learned anything... Riker considers that, accepts the challenge formally as he stiffens, then bows quickly and flips the blind-shield down in front of his face. Kyle does the same, as they shout in unison: RIKER KYLE Yoroshiku-onegaishimasu! Yoroshiku-onegaishimasu! And the battle begins as each man stalks the other with the tapered end of his staff. The closer the staff's tip comes to the opponent, the louder a series of BEEPS which are emitted. Kyle finds Riker's leg, swiftly swings his staff at Riker, but as he does, of course, the BEEPS cease as the tapered end moves away from the target, allowing Riker to dodge the blow. STAR TREK: "... Icarus... " - REV. 2/6/89 - ACT FIVE 49. 49 CONTINUED: (Silence from the opponent's staff means that he's taking a swing and cues a defensive move.) As Kyle recovers from the missed blow, Riker suddenly reverses direction, swings, and knocks Kyle's feet out from under him and, as he tumbles to the mat outside the ring, the POINT BUZZER SOUNDS. Both men flip up their blind-shields as Kyle regains his feet and re-enters the ring. KYLE You have been practicing. RIKER And remembering. (then) You never should've let her die. Riker flips his blind-shield down, quickly bowing, shouting: RIKER Yoroshiku-onegaishimasu. Kyle reacts, pleased; then: KYLE Good. Get it all out! Now Kyle flips his blind-shield down again, quickly bowing, shouting: KYLE Yoroshiku-onegaishimasu. They stalk one another again. Riker makes a brilliant move, but somehow Kyle artfully avoids his son's blow. Riker reacts, frustrated and amazed as he shouts: RIKER Matta! The action stops. They each flip up their blind-shields, Riker furrowing his brow curiously. RIKER I had you. KYLE Will, listen. You were too young to understand -- and I was too hurt to explain. STAR TREK: "... Icarus... " - REV. 2/6/89 - ACT FIVE 50. 49 CONTINUED: (2) RIKER You've never been hurt by anything. KYLE She was your mother, but she was my wife -- and when she died... all that kept me going was you. RIKER You had a strange way of showing it. KYLE Damnit, Will -- you were barely out of diapers. You hardly knew her. I loved her. Of course you've had the pain... and so have I. I should have tried to explain all of this long ago, but it hurt too much. Then a wall went up between us... and living there, just you and me... the wall got bigger. RIKER Why didn't we move away? Start over? KYLE I promised her. It was the life she wanted for you... so... (shrugs it off) I came here thinking we could talk this out. But maybe you're right. Maybe I'm no father at all... and you're no son. Maybe this... this fight is all we have left. Kyle flips his blind-shield down again; Riker hesitates, studying his father for a long beat. Then they bow and face off once again, as Riker calls upon all his stamina to avoid his father's clever blows, summoning an inner reserve of will and determination as he deftly parries Kyle's offensive move, suddenly freezing in his tracks with: RIKER Matta! STAR TREK: "... Icarus... " - REV. 2/6/89 - ACT FIVE 51. 49 CONTINUED: (3) They both flip up their blind-shields, Kyle looking confident, Riker appearing frustrated. KYLE What is it now? RIKER You can't do that! KYLE (feigning innocence) What? RIKER Hachidan kiritsu! That's illegal -- KYLE You're kidding. Riker studies his father for a long beat, his eyes suddenly twinkling with the realization. RIKER All those years... That's why I could never win... you were cheating! Kyle smiles guiltily, a bit embarrassed, as he removes his helmet and shrugs. KYLE Hey, it worked. Kept you coming back for more. Riker can't help himself as an incredible wave of relief washes over him and removes his helmet as he starts laughing with: RIKER I always hated that... and you were just cheating! Incredible! How'd you get away with it? KYLE You were just a kid. (then, admitting) Once you were twelve, I knew I couldn't take you... but I had to keep you interested... challenged... didn't I? (MORE) STAR TREK: "... Icarus... " - REV. 2/6/89 - ACT FIVE 52. 49 CONTINUED: (4) KYLE (Cont'd) (a pause, then) Y'know, I can talk to a roomful of admirals about anything in the galaxy... but why can't I talk to you about how I feel? RIKER How do you feel? KYLE How do you think, Will? (then) I love you, son. Riker is rocked by Kyle's candor, his facade crumbling. RIKER Really? KYLE Really. Now Riker and Kyle embrace in a gripping, passionately courageous and manful hug. There may or may not be tears; there is certainly mutual love, as Kyle looks his son squarely in the eye. KYLE (continuing) I've got to get back to Starbase Montgomery... RIKER I know. (then) I'm glad you came. KYLE You be careful, okay? With that, Kyle EXITS the gym, Riker watching his father go, as we: GO TO: 50 thru OMITTED 54 STAR TREK: "... Icarus... " - REV. 2/7/89 - ACT FIVE 52A. 55 OMITTED 56 OMMITTED 57 INT. MAIN BRIDGE - THE BRIDGE CREW is in place with the exception of Riker, who is absent. Troi is at Picard's left, Wesley at Conn, Data at Ops, Worf at Tactical, Geordi at Engineering as Worf turns to Picard with: WORF Starbase Montgomery briefing specialist and analytical team have beamed down, sir. PICARD (to Geordi) What were the analytical team's findings? STAR TREK: "... Icarus... " - REV. 2/8/89 - ACT FIVE 53-53A. 57 CONTINUED: GEORDI They suggested we reprogram the system to correct the readout variables. PICARD Precisely what Data recommended, as I recall. But it did give Commander Riker the time he needed to consider his promotion. Now that he's accepted it, we can leave him at Starbase Montgomery. STAR TREK: "... Icarus... " - REV. 2/7/89 - ACT FIVE 54-54A. 57 CONTINUED: (2) He's distracted as: 58 THE TURBOLIFT DOORS open and Riker steps out onto the bridge. PICARD Number One? RIKER Captain... with your permission, I've decided to remain on the Enterprise. PICARD ... granted. RIKER Thank you, sir. As Riker crosses and takes his seat: RIKER (continuing) Take us out of orbit, Mister Crusher. WESLEY Terminating synchronous orbit. Riker takes his position next to Picard. RIKER Set course for Beta Kupsic... That is still our next destination? Picard responds with an affirmative nod. RIKER (continuing) ... Velocity - warp factor five. WESLEY Course and speed set. PICARD (there is a pause) Any particular reason for this change of heart? STAR TREK: "... Icarus... " - REV. 2/7/89 - ACT FIVE 55. 58 CONTINUED: RIKER Motivated self-interest. Right now the best place for me to be is right here. Off Picard's reaction: PICARD (then to Conn) Engage. 59 EXT. SPACE - THE ENTERPRISE (OPTICAL) achieves warp speed and flashes past us into the galaxy and we: FADE OUT. END OF ACT FIVE THE END STAR TREK: THE NEXT GENERATION "Pen Pals" #40272-141 Story by Hannah Louise Shearer Teleplay by Melinda M. Snodgrass Directed by Winrich Kolbe THE WRITING CREDITS MAY NOT BE FINAL AND SHOULD NOT BE USED FOR PUBLICITY OR ADVERTISING PURPOSES WITHOUT FIRST CHECKING WITH THE TELEVISION LEGAL DEPARTMENT. Copyright 1989 Paramount Pictures Corporation. All Rights Reserved. This script is not for publication or reproduction. No one is authorized to dispose of same. If lost or destroyed, please notify the Script Department. REVISED FINAL DRAFT FEBRUARY 10, 1989 STAR TREK: "Pen Pals" - 2/10/89 - CAST STAR TREK: THE NEXT GENERATION "Pen Pals" CAST PICARD SARJENKA RIKER DATA PULASKI Voice-Over TROI OFFSTAGE DREMAN VOICES GEORDI WORF WESLEY ENSIGN DAVIES HILDEBRANT ALANS O'BRIEN Non-Speaking CREWMEMBERS BARTENDER Voice-Over COMPUTER VOICE STAR TREK: "Pen Pals" - 2/10/89 - SETS STAR TREK: THE NEXT GENERATION "Pen Pals" SETS INTERIORS EXTERIORS USS ENTERPRISE USS ENTERPRISE MAIN BRIDGE CORRIDORS MEADOW OUTSIDE HOLODECK DOORS OBSERVATION LOUNGE PLANET DREMA FOUR DATA'S QUARTERS GEOPHYSICAL LABORATORY TEN-FORWARD PICARD'S QUARTERS CAPTAIN'S READY ROOM TRANSPORTER ROOM SICKBAY PULASKI'S OFFICE PLANET DREMA FOUR SARJENKA'S ROOM STAR TREK: "Pen Pals" - 2/10/89 - PRONUNCIATION GUIDE STAR TREK: THE NEXT GENERATION "Pen Pals" PRONUNCIATION GUIDE ZABATHU Zah-BAH-thu SARJENKA Sahr-ZHEN-kah ICO-SPECTOGRAPH I-co SPEK-toh-graf SELCUNDI DREMA Sel-KUN-dee DRAY-mah PIEZO PI-zo STAR TREK: "Pen Pals" -- REV. 2/21/89 - TEASER 1 STAR TREK: THE NEXT GENERATION "Pen Pals" TEASER FADE IN: 1 EXT. SPACE - THE ENTERPRISE (OPTICAL) moving along at warp speed. PICARD (V.O.) Captain's log, Stardate 42680.3. We are the first manned vessel to enter the Selcundi Drema quadrant. Previous unmanned probes have recorded unusual levels of geological activity in all five planetary systems. I am hoping the Enterprise will find the answer to this engima. 2 INT. MAIN BRIDGE RIKER is in the command position. WORF and DATA are at their respective stations. Supernumeraries at other positions. DATA Commander, I have been reviewing the unmanned probe scans. In the past one hundred and fifty years, the fifth planet of Selcundi Drema has shattered, forming an asteroid belt. RIKER I'd call that geological instability. WORF Is there any indication that this is the work of an unknown intelligence? STAR TREK: "Pen Pals" - REV. 2/13/89 - TEASER 2. 2 CONTINUED: RIKER I think this is geology, not malevolence. These planets live fast and die hard. The question is why. 3 INT. CORRIDOR (OPTICAL) PICARD and TROI come walking down the corridor toward the Holodeck doors. He is dressed for riding in breeches, high boots, sweater. Hunt cap beneath his arm, gloves, whip. PICARD You're sure you won't reconsider? TROI No, I'll watch you and be impressed. PICARD An optimistic vote of confidence from the non-rider. TROI I've never thought of you as particularly an animal person. PICARD Small animals, no, but horses -- They reach the Holodeck doors, and he steps to the computer panel. PICARD (continuing) Computer, program Holodeck for a woodland setting with a bridle path and an appropriate mount. COMPUTER VOICE Type of mount? Andorian Zabathu, Klingon Sark -- PICARD (impatiently) A horse, an Earth horse. COMPUTER VOICE Breed? STAR TREK: "Pen Pals" -- REV. 2/21/89 - TEASER 3. 3 CONTINUED: PICARD Arabian. (to Troi) The Arabs believed that Allah gathered the south wind and made the horse. TROI On the Holodeck we've made that legend come true. PICARD I like that. Oh yes, computer, English tack, and I will control the animal myself. COMPUTER VOICE Acknowledged. The doors open, and there is the scene. The horse, already saddled and bridled, stands quietly in a glade in the trees tethered to an old-fashioned horse head hitching post. Picard and Troi ENTER. 3A EXT. MEADOW Picard and Troi cross to the horse, and Picard allows it to smell his hand. He rubs her between the eyes, and straightens the forelock. PICARD Hello, my beauty. TROI So you like horses for the romance? PICARD It goes deeper than that. A fine war mare would sleep in a bedouin's tent, carry him into battle, feed his children with her milk. There is a bond which forms from mutual need. Picard inspects a forefoot. TROI Now I understand. You don't want the comfort of a pet. You want a companion. STAR TREK: "Pen Pals" - 2/10/89 - TEASER 4. 3A CONTINUED: She reflects for a moment, looks a little wistful. TROI (continuing) I had a Betazoid kitten once. My mother and the cat reacted... badly to one another. She pauses as if considering how to phrase the words. Then decides to just say it. TROI (continuing) Captain, my mother and I share a bond. She is going through a difficult time, and I may need to be with her. PICARD If you want leave, you need only ask. TROI Thank you, sir, I appreciate that. PICARD (indicating the horse) You're sure you won't try? It's a good way to relax. We can get you something quiet and gentle. TROI No, no. I prefer a mode of transportation that doesn't have a mind of its own. PICARD Strange. I should have thought that Betazoids would be outstanding animal trainers. TROI We become too involved in the thoughts and shifting passions of the beast. We lose our way and become swept up in emotionalism. Picard checks the girth and the length of the stirrups. STAR TREK: "Pen Pals" - 2/10/89 - TEASER 5. 3A CONTINUED: (2) PICARD I should think the shifting passions of... (he taps his chest) ... this beast would be far more terrifying. Picard gathers up the reins and prepares to mount. Then RIKER'S COM VOICE interrupts. RIKER'S COM VOICE Captain. PICARD Yes, Number One? RIKER We've entered the first system. I think you might want to come to the bridge. PICARD Something interesting? RIKER Spectacular and a little terrifying. PICARD On my way. (he pats the horse's neck) Later, old girl. 4 INT. MAIN BRIDGE (OPTICAL) Riker, Worf and Data at their stations. Picard ENTERS (back in uniform). On the main viewscreen is the image of a planet that is in the throes of a violent geological upheaval. The various tectonic plates are outlined in red as if the planet is literally tearing itself apart. RIKER This is our first long-range reading, extremely high magnification. PICARD Quite impressive. STAR TREK: "Pen Pals" - 2/10/89 - TEASER 6. 4 CONTINUED: RIKER And deadly. The last unmanned probe showed a thriving ecosystem. Now there's nothing. FADE OUT. END OF TEASER STAR TREK: "Pen Pals" - REV. 2/13/89 - ACT ONE 7. ACT ONE FADE IN: 5 EXT. SPACE - THE ENTERPRISE (OPTICAL) moving on impulse power. 6 INT. OBSERVATION LOUNGE Present are Picard, Riker, and GEORDI. Troi and PULASKI ENTER and look to Picard. PICARD This is Commander Riker's meeting. RIKER I need your advice and recommendations. I was given the responsibility of overseeing Wesley's education. To further that goal I want to put him in command of the planetary mineral surveys. PULASKI This is a big job with a lot of responsibility. RIKER The game's not big enough if it doesn't scare you a little. GEORDI To do the job, Wesley's going to need a team. It takes command presence to lead. Is he ready for that? TROI Leadership grows from self-confidence which is also part of a Starfleet officer's education. PICARD All of this is true, but there is an old horse trainer's adage about putting too much weight on a young back -- we don't want him to break under the pressure. STAR TREK: "Pen Pals" - REV. 2/13/89 - ACT ONE 8. 6 CONTINUED: PULASKI We seem to be shifting the focus here. Are we talking about a young officer on the fast track to the Academy or are we talking about guiding a young man through adolescence and into adulthood? RIKER Both. TROI You can't guide someone into adulthood. The experiences are unique to each person. Whether Wes succeeds or fails, he will learn from the experience. PULASKI I agree. I'm just questioning the speed at which we're moving. GEORDI You think we're pushing him too hard? PULASKI It's a valid concern. PICARD Tempering is done in extremes. PULASKI He's a boy, not a sword. PICARD Who will someday be a man and need a fine edge that will hold, that won't dull at the first touch of resistance. RIKER Sooner or later he's got to feel the burden of command. 6A INT. MAIN BRIDGE Worf has the bridge; he is seated in the captain's chair. WESLEY is at Ops. STAR TREK: "Pen Pals" - 2/10/89 - ACT ONE 9. 6A CONTINUED: RIKER'S COM VOICE Mister Crusher to the Observation Lounge. Wesley rises, and we follow him up the ramp toward the Observation Lounge doors. 6B INT. OBSERVATION LOUNGE Wesley ENTERS. He checks slightly when he sees this array of brass all staring at him. RIKER Wesley, I'm placing you in command of the planetary mineral surveys. WESLEY Sir! Um... thank you, sir. RIKER You may not thank me once you see how much work it entails. Assemble your team, and take a look at the records on the Drema quadrant. We've got a mystery to solve here. WESLEY Yes, sir. A team, sir? Riker just nods. PICARD Ensign, this is a serious responsibility. WESLEY I know, sir. PICARD These officers are here to assist you. Not judge, but help. I suggest you use them; they are a valuable resource. And by the way, I have more respect for an officer who knows when to admit ignorance and ask a question than one who, out of pride, will blunder blindly forward. STAR TREK: "Pen Pals" - REV. 2/14/89 - ACT ONE 10. 6B CONTINUED: WESLEY I understand. RIKER You're dismissed, Mister Crusher. Wesley starts to leave, then turns back and looks from Riker to Picard. WESLEY I'll try not to disappoint you Picard merely grunts noncommittally. 7 INT. MAIN BRIDGE Data is running scans at Science One. The area around his feet is cluttered with a CRT screen, a panel at his feet is open, and a circuit board is out. Worf steps gingerly through the mess. WORF Is this part of your regular duties? DATA No, a personal project. I have just reset the sensors to scan for frequencies outside their usual range. WORF Such as? DATA The dips and peaks of the galaxy's magnetic field, organic molecules in nebular clouds, energetic cosmic rays. WORF Interesting. Would these scans also detect artificial transmissions as well as naturally occurring signals? DATA Of course. WORF Good. STAR TREK: "Pen Pals" - Rev. 2/22/89 - ACT ONE 11. 7 CONTINUED: DATA Those signals are very faint and difficult to distinguish from background noise, which is why I am boosting the power. Worf starts back to his station, crashes into a pile of isolinear chips, and almost takes a header over the control board. DATA (continuing) I will be removing this equipment to my quarters. Worf is not happy. He glowers, and snarls out: WORF Good! 8 INT. CORRIDOR Troi and Riker are walking together. They cross an intersection, and Wesley spots them. He runs to catch up, a PADD gripped hard in one hand. WESLEY Hi, may I walk with you? I need a little advice. TROI Yes. RIKER And it's free. WESLEY Walking or advice? RIKER Both. WESLEY It's about my team. I'm considering so many factors I'm confusing myself. TROI What have you done so far? STAR TREK: "Pen Pals" - Rev. 2/22/89 - ACT ONE 12. 8 CONTINUED: WESLEY Broken down the task and picked the best people in those disciplines. RIKER Who have you got so far? WESLEY Prixus for mineralogy and metallurgy, Alans and Hildebrant, volcanology and geo-mechanics, and I want Davies for geo-chemistry, but -- Wesley breaks off. They stop walking, and Riker and Troi wait for a beat. TROI But they're all older than you? WESLEY Yeah, it makes me feel awkward. And what about compatibility -- RIKER (interrupting) Completely irrelevant. They're professionals. And if there are personality conflicts, you resolve them. You're in charge. WESLEY So you not only have to understand the job, you have to be a ship's counselor. TROI Sometimes. Wesley looks at them both for an instant, then nods. WESLEY Well, thanks. He walks away and they watch him go. STAR TREK: "Pen PALS" -- REV. 2/15/89 - ACT ONE 13. 9 EXT. SPACE - THE ENTERPRISE (OPTICAL) At impulse. There is a solar system ahead. PICARD (V.O.) Captain's log, Stardate 42680.7. We are entering the second Selcundi star system. I believe the volatility of these planets originated in the primordial gas cloud which formed them five billion years ago. 10 INT. DATA'S QUARTERS (OPTICAL) Data's desk is cluttered with the black boxes which are boosting and filtering his experimental scans. There is a keyboard. Data is fiddling with his equipment when suddenly there is a signal. DATA Computer, identify. COMPUTER VOICE Sensors indicate low-level R.F. waves. DATA Is there a pattern? COMPUTER VOICE Affirmative. There is a SOUND OF STATIC and under it all a repeating tonal pattern. DATA Naturally occurring? COMPUTER VOICE Negative. DATA Key universal translator. COMPUTER VOICE Unable to comply. Weak signal. DATA Lock on com link and boost. STAR TREK: "Pen Pals" - REV. 2/21/89 - ACT ONE 14. 10 CONTINUED: COMPUTER VOICE Lock on complete. DATA Read. COMPUTER VOICE Working. Data settles back to wait. 11 INT. GEOPHYSICAL LABORATORY (OPTICAL) High tables filled with rocks and crystals of various sizes, shapes and colors. Screens on the walls showing the molecular structure of various minerals, cross sections of volcanos, rock strata, etc., computer consoles. DAVIES, a man of some thirty years, sits in a chair and examines a rock sample, runs one of our ever-useful black boxes across it. It VANISHES in a flare of rainbow colors. The doors open, and Wesley ENTERS. He is brisk and confident. WESLEY Ensign Davies? DAVIES You got him. WESLEY Wesley Crusher. They shake hands. STAR TREK: "Pen Pals" - 2/21/89 - ACT ONE 15. 11 CONTINUED WESLEY (continuing) I've been put in charge of the planetary survey, and I'd like to have you on the team. DAVIES Sounds great. Who else is on it? WESLEY Prixus and Hildebrant and Alans. DAVIES It's a shame you didn't talk to me first. Personal opinion, but I like to break up married teams. WESLEY Oh, I hadn't thought about that. DAVIES Don't worry, they'll probably work out fine. Wesley starts for the door. DAVIES (continuing) And if you need any help, just give me a signal and I'll take over for you. We don't want you getting too beat up on your first command. The tone is kindly, but Wesley's confidence is being slowly eroded by all the good advice and kindly protection. He sounds much younger now than when he entered the room. WESLEY Uh... thanks, but I think I'll be okay. He EXITS. 12 INT. DATA'S QUARTERS Data seated at his desk. COMPUTER VOICE Analysis complete. STAR TREK: "Pen Pals" - REV. 2/14/89 - ACT ONE 16. 12 CONTINUED: STATIC fills the room, and under it a sense of a VOICE SPEAKING. DATA Enhance. Coming in clearly is a LITTLE GIRL'S VOICE. SARJENKA (V.O.) Is anybody out there? There is a look of excitement and great interest on Data's face. Hits some keys to activate. DATA Yes. Off Data, as we: FADE OUT. END OF ACT ONE STAR TREK: "Pen Pals" - REV. 2/21/89 - ACT TWO 17. ACT TWO FADE IN: 13 EXT. SPACE - THE ENTERPRISE (OPTICAL) at impulse. Off in the distance is a sun; one planet is visible. 14 INT. CORRIDOR Wesley is dithering near a doorway. Pulaski comes by, takes a look at that taut young face and stops. PULASKI Wes. WESLEY Hi, Doctor Pulaski. His eyes keep sliding to the door. PULASKI Is there trouble behind that door? WESLEY My team's in there. I've got to assign planets, set a schedule. PULASKI Sounds like you've got everything under control. WESLEY But I haven't had to deal with them. Not all together. Not professionally. PULASKI Wes, the minute you walk through that door they're your team. You don't have to prove a thing. You've got the authority. STAR TREK: "Pen Pals" - REV. 2/21/89 - ACT TWO 18. 14 CONTINUED: WESLEY Only because Commander Riker says I do. PULASKI It's up to you to hang on to it. (a head jerk toward the door) You better get in there. She pauses. PULASKI (continuing) And for whatever it's worth, I think you're going to do just fine. (a beat) Or not. She walks away, with Wesley staring after her. 14A EXT. SPACE - THE ENTERPRISE (OPTICAL) on impulse power. PICARD (V.O.) It has been six weeks since our entrance into the Selcundi Drema quadrant. Each system has revealed the same disturbing geological upheavals on every planet. 15 INT. CORRIDOR (OPTICAL) Picard is keying the Holodeck panel. COMPUTER VOICE Program complete. Enter when ready. The doors open and we see the woodland scene with the Arab mare patiently waiting. Picard ENTERS. STAR TREK: "Pen Pals" - REV. 2/13/89 - ACT TWO 18A. 16 EXT. MEADOW Picard crosses to the already saddled horse and strokes her neck, straightens the mane, scratches her neck. PICARD Feels good, doesn't it? You're a lovely darling. STAR TREK: "Pen Pals" - REV. 2/13/89 - ACT TWO 19. 16 CONTINUED: Picard mounts. Disappears into the trees. There is a flash of horse and rider through the trees. Picard rides toward the camera at the trot. He cues the horse and rocks into a canter. Cantering away from the camera, slowing to a walk. Picard leans forward and pats the horse on the neck. There should be no pass-by's because he is functionally on a treadmill; or, if there is a ride-by, the horse should be bent around Patrick's leg as if they are in an arena. 17 INT. GEOPHYSICAL LABORATORY Davies is busy at a table. Wesley and HILDEBRANT stand before a screen. WESLEY I agree. Nice job. Hildebrant nods and moves away. Davies rises and crosses to Wesley carrying a PADD. He's friendly but a little off-handed. DAVIES Here are the results of my scan of the third Selcundi system. Just the same old song. Wesley takes the PADD and checks the information. WESLEY Didn't you tell me that U.V. absorption readings like these are indicative of traker deposits? DAVIES And where there's traker there's generally dilithium? Yeah, I did. WESLEY Then don't you think we ought to run an Ico-spectrogram? STAR TREK: "Pen Pals" - REV. 2/21/89 - ACT TWO 20. 17 CONTINUED: DAVIES Those tanker readings are really faint. It's probably a fool's echo. WESLEY (hesitantly) I think I'd still run the Ico-gram. Hildebrant has been drawn by the discussion. HILDEBRANT Wesley, it's a major undertaking to set up that scanner. DAVIES We're looking at five hours -- minimum. WESLEY I know, I just don't want to do the job halfway. DAVIES Wes, there's being thorough and then there's wasting time. It's also the mark of a good officer to recognize the difference. WESLEY Well, maybe you're right. Davies and Hildebrant move away. And OUT OF CAMERA RANGE. BACK ON Wesley looking uncomfortable with the implication that he's picking nits and not really in command. We see him struggle with himself; Wesley has the expression of a man who doesn't feel good about a decision, but can't figure out what to do about it. STAR TREK: "Pen Pals" - REV. 2/13/89 - ACT TWO 20A. 18 INT. MAIN BRIDGE Riker has the bridge. Worf at Tactical. Supernumeraries at other stations. Data is at Science One. On the screen we see a diagrammatic of continental plates grinding past each other. STAR TREK: "Pen Pals" - 2/10/89 - ACT TWO 21. 18 CONTINUED: DATA Access all volcanic and tectonic plate activity of Drema Four. COMPUTER VOICE Accessing. Information hits the screen, and Data executes a fast read. DATA Computer, locate Captain Picard. COMPUTER VOICE Captain Picard is on Holodeck Three. Data crosses and enters the turbolift. His expression is very serious. 19 EXT. MEADOW Picard riding. Data ENTERS. He stands very quietly until Picard notices him. Picard trots up and reins in directly in front of the android. DATA I am sorry to disturb you, Captain. Picard dismounts and flips the reins over the horse's head. Steps up to Data. PICARD Quite all right. It must be important, or you wouldn't be here. DATA Yes, Captain, it is important. Very. Eight weeks ago I received a transmission -- a simple four word message: "Is anybody out there?" I answered it. He looks at Picard, but the captain is impassive just waiting to hear the rest. DATA (continuing) I could not help myself. STAR TREK: "Pen Pals" - REV. 2/13/89 - ACT TWO 22. 19 CONTINUED: Picard softly strokes the horse's neck. Evaluating what he has heard. PICARD There is a loneliness inherent in that whisper in the darkness. DATA Yes, I am glad that you understand. They begin walking slowly side by side. Picard leading the mare. PICARD (gently) But it didn't stop there. DATA (sighs) No. I have been drawn into her life. PICARD To what degree is this involvement? DATA We have been communicating regularly. PICARD Dear heaven, you've got a pen pal. Does this society have any idea that there is interstellar life? DATA No. PICARD Merde. Just where does she think you're calling from? DATA I have kept that somewhat vague. But Sarjenka has been quite specific, telling me detailed stories of her family and friends. It was fascinating, but among these confidences were interspersed alarming references. STAR TREK: "Pen Pals" - 2/10/89 - ACT TWO 23. 19 CONTINUED: (2) Picard's expression is beginning to look a little "alarming." His crop is beating out a very light tattoo against his boot. PICARD Go on. DATA Captain, Drema Four is enduring the same geological stresses we have found in the other systems. PICARD Then your pen pal is in trouble. DATA Yes, sir. PICARD What are you proposing? DATA If we can determine the cause of the geological instability, we might be able to reverse the process. PICARD And violate the Prime Directive. DATA I was hoping that you might have an option. Despite Data's cool tones this is a cry for help, and Picard knows it. His frustration is evident on his face. PICARD (almost to himself) We don't even know if this catastrophe is preventable. (a beat) Call a conference in my quarters. All senior staff. DATA Yes, sir. STAR TREK: "Pen Pals" - 2/10/89 - ACT TWO 24. 19 CONTINUED: (3) PICARD And Data, all communication with this life-form must stop. DATA (softly) Yes, sir. I understand. Data turns smartly on his heel, and heads for the door. Off Picard's face, as we: 20 OMITTED FADE OUT. END OF ACT TWO STAR TREK: "Pen Pals" - REV. 2/13/89 - ACT THREE 25. ACT THREE FADE IN: 21 INT. TEN-FORWARD Riker is seated with an attractive woman. Their heads are close together, and they are laughing together. In the background a pair of crewwomen play three-dimensional chess. The BARTENDER waits on a customer at the bar. Wesley ENTERS and scans the room. He then crosses to Riker. Riker studies the boy's serious face, rises. RIKER (to the woman) Will you excuse me? He puts an arm around Wesley's shoulder, and they cross to another table. Dialogue is over the move. RIKER (continuing) You have the look of someone who didn't come up here to relax. WESLEY No, sir, I need your advice. Wesley and Riker seat themselves. WESLEY (continuing) Yesterday Ensign Davies turned in his survey results. I thought he should run an Ico-spectrogram. He didn't agree. RIKER Did you think you were right? WESLEY Well, yeah, I guess. Or I could have just been picking nits. RIKER Or perhaps intimidated? It's tough to tell people what to do. STAR TREK: "Pen Pals" - REV. 2/13/89 - ACT THREE 26. 21 CONTINUED: WESLEY I suppose I could have made it an order, but that's the hard part. How do I give orders to somebody older and more experienced then me? RIKER Your and Davies's relative ages aren't the issue here. Are they? WESLEY I guess not. RIKER Do you think it might have something to do with ego? WESLEY Maybe the opposite of ego. Every time I give an order, there's this part of me that's asking what makes my judgment so superior to this other person's. RIKER Wes, authority and responsibility go hand in hand. I know you're responsible, now you have to learn to handle authority. You've been put in command so you can make a few right decisions. That will establish a pattern of success and build your self-confidence. That's why I said this was about ego. If you don't trust your own judgment, you don't belong in the command chair. WESLEY But what if I'm wrong? RIKER Then you're wrong. It's arrogant to think you'll never make a mistake. WESLEY But what if it's something really important -- not just a mineral survey, and what if someone ends up dead because of my mistake? STAR TREK: "Pen Pals" -- REV. 2/15/89 - ACT THREE 27. 21 CONTINUED: (2) RIKER In your situation you only have to do one thing: Ask yourself, what would Picard do? WESLEY He'd listen to all the opinions, then make the decision. But he's Picard. RIKER Doesn't matter. Would anyone argue with the captain once his decision was made? Wesley gives a bark of incredulous laughter. WESLEY No way. RIKER Why not? WESLEY I'm not sure. DATA'S COM VOICE Commander Riker, report to the captain's quarters. RIKER When you've worked it out, you'll understand command. Riker taps his insignia. RIKER (continuing) On my way. He starts for the doors, then pauses and adds. RIKER (continuing) I hope I've helped. Let me know what you decide. WESLEY I've already decided. I'm going to have Davies run that Ico-gram. (he smiles) And thank you, sir. STAR TREK: "Pen Pals" - REV. 2/13/89 - ACT THREE 28. 21 CONTINUED: (3) RIKER You're welcome. 22 EXT. SPACE - THE ENTERPRISE (OPTICAL) moving on impulse power. 23 INT. GEOPHYSICAL LABORATORY Davies is studying some test results on a screen. Wesley ENTERS. DAVIES Hey, Wes, hi. Wesley holds himself a little stiffly. WESLEY Ensign Davies, I want that Ico-spectrogram run on the Selcundi Drema system. DAVIES (very light) You got it. He moves away to obey, and Wesley stands in stunned amazement. 24 INT. PICARD'S QUARTERS Present are Picard, Riker, Pulaski, Troi, Geordi, Worf and Data. As we come in, Picard has outlined the problem. Data is staring tensely at Picard, waiting for the miracle to happen. Everyone else is very serious. There should be growing passion in this scene. It's not just another cool discussion. Confusion manifesting in physical action. PICARD You see the dilemma? WORF There are no options. The Prime Directive is not a matter of degree. It is an absolute. STAR TREK: "Pen Pals" - 2/10/89 - ACT THREE 29. 24 CONTINUED: PULASKI (a little sharply) I've always had a problem with that kind of abstract intellectualizing. It seems very callous and even a little cowardly. Worf reacts to the "cowardly," and Picard holds out a quelling hand. PICARD Doctor, I'm sure the lieutenant did not intend it in that way. In this situation we must use caution. Our actions could have a profound effect upon the future. If we could see all possible outcomes -- Picard pauses searching for the right words. Riker jumps in. RIKER We would be gods, but we're not. If there is some cosmic plan, isn't it the height of hubris to presume that we can, or should, interfere? GEORDI So what are you saying? That the Dremans are fated to die? RIKER It's something that needs to be considered. GEORDI (with heat) Well, consider it considered, and rejected. TROI If there is a cosmic plan, are we not part of it? Our presence at this place at this moment in time might be part of that fate. STAR TREK: "Pen Pals" -- REV. 2/14/89 - ACT THREE 30. 24 CONTINUED: (2) GEORDI (eagerly) So it might be part of the plan that we interfere. RIKER I think that eliminates the idea of "fate." PULASKI Commander, remember "Human reason needs only to will more strongly than fate, and she is fate." DATA Doctor, you quote Thomas Mann, and Commander Riker could no doubt cite Euripides to support his position, but all of this is just philosophy. Sarjenka is not a subject for philosophical debate, she is a person. PULASKI (to Picard) He's got a point. The Prime Directive was designed to protect, not destroy. PICARD So Doctor, you draw the line at the death of millions. PULASKI Yes. PICARD Same situation if it's an epidemic rather than a geological catastrophe? PULASKI Absolutely. PICARD How about a war? A generations-long conflict that is killing millions. Do we interfere? There is an uncomfortable silence. STAR TREK: "Pen Pals" -- REV. 2/16/89 - ACT THREE 31. 24 CONTINUED: (3) PICARD (continuing) Now we're less secure in our moral certitude. And what if it's not death. What if it's an oppressive government which is enslaving millions? He scans the faces of his officers. PICARD (continuing) The Prime Directive serves many purposes. Not the least of which is to protect us. It keeps us from allowing our emotions to overrule our judgement. PULASKI My emotions are involved. Data's friend is going to die. That means something. WORF To Data. PULASKI Does that invalidate the emotion? They all look at Data, who is busy looking from Worf to Pulaski and back to Worf again as they attribute emotions and reactions to him. Picard with profound pity. This is really the problem. Not some unknown life-form on an unknown planet. GEORDI If the Dremans asked for our help? DATA (eagerly) Yes, Sarjenka's transmission could be viewed as a call for help. PICARD That's sophistry and you know it. STAR TREK: "Pen Pals" - REV. 2/16/89 - ACT THREE 32. 24 CONTINUED: (4) PULASKI Hell, I'll buy that excuse. We're all jigging madly on the head of a pin anyway. WORF She cannot ask for help from people she does not know. DATA She knows me. RIKER What a perfectly vicious little circle. PICARD (to Data) I want you to sever the remaining com link with Drema Four. DATA Captain, to maintain contact without subspace radio capability required the computer to remotely scan all subspace resonance in her area. If I break that link the probability of relocating her signal falls to one in twenty-three million... Picard is sitting very still, eyes lowered, head bowed. Everyone becomes aware of his silence, and they focus on him. It is very, very quiet, and suddenly it hits Data. DATA (continuing) We are going to allow her to die, are we not? Troi, who is seated next to Data, gives a tiny shiver and looks quickly over at him. Then looks puzzled and shakes her head slightly. Did she or didn't she feel something out of him for the first time? Her attention is then drawn by Picard. Data touches whatever panels necessary. There is the SOUND OF STATIC, a VOICE slowly becoming clear. A FRIGHTENED CHILD'S voice. STAR TREK: "Pen Pals" -- REV. 2/16/89 - ACT THREE 33. 24 CONTINUED: (5) SARJENKA (V.O.) Data, Data! Where are you? Why won't you answer? Are you angry me? Please, please, I'm so afraid! Don't leave me! Now suddenly it's real. There's a person at the end of those words who is going to die. Data reaches out to sever the link. PICARD Wait. A long beat. PICARD (continuing; very weary) Oh, Data. Another beat. PICARD (continuing) That whisper in the dark has become a plea. We cannot turn our backs. Off Picard's face, as we: FADE OUT. END OF ACT THREE STAR TREK: "Pen Pals" - REV. 2/13/89 - ACT FOUR 34. ACT FOUR FADE IN: 25 EXT. SPACE - THE ENTERPRISE (OPTICAL) coming into orbit around Drema Four. 26 OMITTED 27 INT. OBSERVATION LOUNGE Present are Picard, Riker, Wesley, Davies, ALANS and Hildebrant. RIKER We've found the reason for the geological instability. PICARD Excellent. DAVIES We would have missed it if Ensign Crusher hadn't requested an Ico-gram, but he did, and... Davies indicates Wesley, clearly deferring to his commander. WESLEY Drema Four has the largest deposit of dilithium ore ever recorded. It's also laid down in a very unusual pattern. The crystals are growing to form perfectly aligned lattices. Alans and Hildebrant are playing off each other. Finishing each other's sentences, interrupting. They're excited because they've discovered something new and fascinating, so they're teasing each other. HILDEBRANT The ore is forming generator strata. ALANS Which creates a piezoelectric effect. STAR TREK: "Pen Pals" -- REV. 2/14/89 - ACT FOUR 35. 27 CONTINUED: PICARD In plain English this means that the dilithium is causing the geological catastrophe? ALANS Right, the crystals take the natural radiant heat of the planet -- HILDEBRANT Focus it, and turn it into mechanical energy. ALANS That increases tectonic stresses -- HILDEBRANT (tapping him on the shoulder) Excuse me, those plates are mine. Stick to your volcanos. Anyway the stress tears the planet apart. DAVIES Then the crystals break down, which is why we found all these traces of Illium-629. PICARD All right, we know the why. Now what can we do? RIKER That's going to take a little more work. PICARD Can we reverse the process? Davies, Wesley, Hildebrant and Alans all exchange glances. WESLEY (cautiously) We think so. PICARD No theories or half answers. Yes or no. STAR TREK: "Pen Pals" -- REV. 2/14/89 - ACT FOUR 36. 27 CONTINUED: (2) HILDEBRANT We'll get to work on it. ALANS (as an afterthought) Sir. Wesley, Davies, Alans and Hildebrant EXIT. RIKER Data's out there... (indicates the bridge with a head jerk) ... monitoring conditions on Drema Four. The situation's becoming pretty desperate for his friend. He's calculated the safest locations on the planet's surface. You can guess why. PICARD We just keep getting in deeper and deeper, don't we? Riker sits down. Leans his head back. RIKER She's going to die. They're all going to die. PICARD Unless. RIKER Yes... unless. Picard studies his hands. PICARD You may tell Commander Data that he has my permission to contact his friend and guide her to a safer location. Riker rises and starts for the doors. STAR TREK: "Pen Pals" -- REV. 2/15/89 - ACT FOUR 37. 27 CONTINUED: (3) PICARD (continuing) Do you know where we are now, Number One? RIKER Sir? PICARD Up to our necks. 28 EXT. SPACE - THE ENTERPRISE (OPTICAL) In orbit around Drema Four. 29 INT. DATA'S QUARTERS Data is seated at his desk. He makes adjustments to his transmitter, reopening communication. DATA Sarjenka, this is Data. Respond please. COMPUTER VOICE Unable to complete transmission. DATA Reason for failure? COMPUTER VOICE Damage to remote receiver on planet's surface. Data rises, and heads briskly out the door. 30 INT. CAPTAIN'S READY ROOM (OPTICAL) Present are Picard, Riker, Worf, and Hildebrant. WORF We are modifying Class One probes so they become resonators. We will then use torpedo casings to protect the probes once they begin burrowing beneath the surface. STAR TREK: "Pen Pals" -- REV. 2/16/89 - ACT FOUR 37AA. 30 CONTINUED: PICARD How do these resonators destroy the crystals? STAR TREK: "Pen Pals" -- REV. 2/15/89 - ACT FOUR 37A. 30 CONTINUED: HILDEBRANT By emitting harmonic vibrations which will shatter the lattices. STAR TREK: "Pen Pals" -- REV. 2/15/89 - ACT FOUR 38. 30 CONTINUED: (2) WORF The Enterprise will monitor and adjust the frequency of the resonators. RIKER (to Hildebrant and Worf) It sounds like a plan. Get started on it. The two officers start to EXIT and meet Data on his way in. Picard rises and crosses to the food unit. PICARD Tea, Earl Grey, hot. DATA Captain, permission to beam down to Drema Four. Picard almost spills his tea. PICARD What? DATA I have been unable to contact Sarjenka. PICARD I know you're worried, but transporting to the surface is only going to make a bad situation worse. DATA I feel it is important to determine the reason for -- RIKER (interrupting) Come on, Data! DATA (to Picard) Sir, your orders were to deliver the message, correct? PICARD Yes. STAR TREK: "Pen Pals" -- REV. 2/15/89 - ACT FOUR 38AA. 30 CONTINUED: (3) DATA So what is the difference whether I send the message or deliver it personally? STAR TREK: "Pen Pals" -- REV. 2/15/89 - ACT FOUR 38A. 30 CONTINUED: (4) Picard is a little stunned by the chutzpah and remains silent. Riker bursts out: RIKER A whopping big one, and you know it. STAR TREK: "Pen Pals" - 2/10/89 - ACT FOUR 39. 30 CONTINUED: (2) DATA (to Picard) We have come this far. PICARD In for a penny, in for a pound, is that what you're saying, Mister Data? Data just stares at him. Picard stares into those too-wide eyes. It's like kicking a dog. He drops his head into his hand. PICARD (continuing) Oh hell. He jerks his thumb toward the door. PICARD (continuing) Go. DATA (not quite believing it) Sir? PICARD Go. Handle the transport, Number One. Riker and Data start for the doors. Riker looks back with an ironic smile. RIKER Now where would you say we are? With a hand Picard indicates someplace way over his head. Data and Riker EXIT. 30A OMITTED 31 INT. TRANSPORTER ROOM (OPTICAL) O'BRIEN is behind the console as Data and Riker ENTER. RIKER O'Brien, take a nap. You didn't see this, you're not involved. STAR TREK: "Pen Pals" - 2/10/89 - ACT FOUR 40. 31 CONTINUED: O'BRIEN Right sir, just standing here dozing off. He folds his arms across his chest and leans up against a wall. Data climbs onto the transporter. RIKER Ten minutes, Data, that's it, and if you meet anybody but Sarjenka -- DATA I will signal for immediate beam out. Data DEMATERIALIZES. PICARD'S COM VOICE Commander Riker to the bridge. RIKER Damn! O'BRIEN I just woke up, sir. RIKER You know what to do? O'BRIEN No problem. I'll have him out of there as smooth as ice. Riker EXITS. 32 INT. SARJENKA'S ROOM (OPTICAL) Data MATERIALIZES. A lurid red light is filtering through the hexagonal cells of the comb-like room. The transmitter lies on the floor. Occasional tremors shake the room. On one side of the room is a raised platform covered with tumbled furs. In one corner is propped a lute-like instrument. Brightly colored ribbons hang from the neck. On one wall hang a number of pictures. They are all of improbable ships sailing through the stars or winged creatures flying through stars, ringed planets, etc. All the detritus of childhood, but no child. STAR TREK: "Pen Pals" -- REV. 2/16/89 - ACT FOUR 41. 32 CONTINUED: Data unlimbers his tricorder and takes readings. The tricorder is emitting HIGH-PITCHED BEEPS which DROP IN TONE as it scans across the door areas of the walls. Data approaches a doorway and runs a hand across it. The wall VANISHES, and he is looking out at a volcano which is spurting molten lava high into the sky. A river of the viscous rock crawls toward the house. Ash is raining down outside. Data closes the wall. Slowly he crosses and picks up the lute. An earth tremor shakes the room. Data steadies himself. He thoughtfully draws his fingers across the strings. The SOUND of the strings hang in the room. Suddenly the wall VANISHES, and... SARJENKA rushes in. The wall remains open. She is an eerie but beautiful child between ten and twelve. Her skin has a luminous gold color; her eyebrows have a metallic quality as if gemstones and precious metals had been crushed and brushed across the hairs. From above each brow spring delicate antennae which curve back over the top of her head. The hair which hangs to her waist is of the same metallic multicolored strands as the brows. The quality is as if a dragonfly developed bipedally. Eyes can be faceted or not. She is coughing. Data turns. She freezes when she sees the Android, then shrinks back in terror. She bolts for the exit. Data leaps after her and grabs her by the shoulders. DATA Sarjenka, wait! She struggles violently in his grasp. DATA (continuing) Do not be afraid. I am Data. She stares at him in dawning wonder. Slowly she reaches out and touches his cheek with her fingertips. SARJENKA (breathing the word) Data. (a beat) Data, you came. STAR TREK: "Pen Pals" - REV. 2/13/89 - ACT FOUR 41A. 32 CONTINUED: (2) Then to his vast confusion the child throws herself into his arms. His arms hang limply at his sides. STAR TREK: "Pen Pals" -- REV. 2/14/89 - ACT FOUR 42. 32 CONTINUED: (3) SARJENKA (continuing) Data, where have you been? DATA There is no time for explanations. You and your family must leave. SARJENKA We already have. We ran when the tremors began. DATA (confused) Then why are you here? SARJENKA My father wouldn't let us take anything, but I had to have my transmitter. I knew you would come back, and I didn't want you to find only silence -- the way I did. DATA (distractedly) Yes, well, I am sorry about that, but it is very complicated -- Does your family know where you are? SARJENKA No. DATA (looking outside) You cannot survive in this. Data closes the wall, and suddenly the little girl begins to realize that she is in danger. Fright washes across her face. SARJENKA What are we going to do? Data considers. There is another tremor, and Sarjenka almost loses her footing. Data steadies her. He has evaluated all the available information and there is only one alternative. He taps his insignia. DATA Enterprise, two to beam up. STAR TREK: "Pen Pals" - 2/10/89 - ACT FOUR 43. 32 CONTINUED: (3) SARJENKA Where are we going? Data points upward. SARJENKA (continuing; thrilled) To the stars? DATA Yes. He positions the child, and they DEMATERIALIZE, as we: FADE OUT. END OF ACT FOUR STAR TREK: "Pen Pals" - 2/10/89 - ACT FIVE 44. ACT FIVE FADE IN: 33 INT. TRANSPORTER ROOM (OPTICAL) Data and Sarjenka MATERIALIZE. O'Brien gapes at the alien. Sarjenka edges nervously sideways and slides her hand into Data's. O'BRIEN (sotto voce) There's gonna be hell to pay. DATA Where is Commander Riker? O'BRIEN On the bridge. Data, with Sarjenka in tow, steps down off the platform and heads for the doors. O'BRIEN (continuing) Where are you going? DATA To the bridge. O'BRIEN You're going to take that? Data pauses to consider. DATA Leave her here? Sarjenka seizes his arm, stares in fear at O'Brien and in a frenzied whisper: SARJENKA Don't leave me here. Please don't leave me. DATA (to O'Brien) Quite impossible. They EXIT, the child's hand still locked in Data's. Off O'Brien's completely befuddled expression: STAR TREK: "Pen Pals" -- REV. 2/21/89 - ACT FIVE 45. 34 INT. MAIN BRIDGE (OPTICAL) Riker, Picard, Troi, Wesley and Worf are all at their accustomed places. A supernumerary at Ops. The planet is on the main viewscreen. WORF Sir, we are three minutes from resonator launch. PICARD (to Riker) Where is he? RIKER He'll be here. Right on cue the doors of the aft turbolift open. Picard and Riker rise and turn. Riker's expression of relief turns to consternation as he and Picard stare at the child with Data. Picard very slowly turns his head to regard his first officer. There is a world of frustration in the glance. PICARD He has brought that child aboard my ship and onto my bridge. RIKER I'm sure Data will have a very good explanation. DATA She was frightened and did not want to be left alone PICARD Mister Data, would you kindly assume your station. Picard nods to Troi and gestures toward Sarjenka. PICARD (continuing) Counselor, escort her to Sickbay. Troi starts up the ramp, and Sarjenka shrinks even closer to Data. She is in a very strange place, among strangers who look hideously ugly to her, and there is this gruff man who is angry with her and angry with her friend Data. STAR TREK: "Pen Pals" -- REV. 2/21/89 - ACT FIVE 46. 34 CONTINUED: (2) TROI (reaching the pair) It's all right, nobody's going to hurt you. Troi holds out her hand to Sarjenka. TROI (continuing) We'll go and get a treat, and -- SARJENKA NO! DATA Captain, I will not allow her to be in the way. Sarjenka is beating at Troi's hand as Troi reaches for her and twining around Data like vines on a tree. Data is very rattled by this. Everyone's attention is on this little psychodrama and not on their stations. WORF Two minutes to resonator launch. TROI Little one, hush, it's all right. SARJENKA (interrupting, very shrill) NO! Leave me alone! I want Data! Troi catches one of Sarjenka's flailing hands. Troi continues murmuring soothing endearments, but Sarjenka is having none of it. She bursts into wild sobs. DATA Counselor, allow me. Please. Troi drops Sarjenka's hand and steps back, watching with great interest. Data drops to one knee. The little girl wraps her arms around his neck, rests her head on his shoulder, and sobs. Data's eyes are flicking from side to side, his head is cocking as waves of confusion break over him. Suddenly his arms go around her, and he hugs her close. With one hand he strokes her long hair. STAR TREK: "Pen Pals" -- REV. 2/21/89 - ACT FIVE 47. 34 CONTINUED: (3) DATA (continuing) Hush, it is all right now. No one will harm you. These are my friends. Sarjenka's sobs subside. The bridge is completely silent. PICARD Take your station, Mister Data, and keep her with you. This does directly concern her. Data and Sarjenka move down to Ops. She is still holding his hand. She settles between the two stations. Still hanging on. WORF Thirty seconds to resonator launch. DATA (to Sarjenka) I require my hand now. WORF Firing torpedoes. 34A EXT. SPACE - THE ENTERPRISE (OPTICAL) We see the lights of the six racing torpedos heading for the planet like a flight of birds. 34B INT. MAIN BRIDGE (OPTICAL) DATA Sensors locked on probes. WORF Torpedos have reached their targets... A beat. A thermographic image appears on the main viewscreen. DATA Resonators activated. Harmonic sequences have begun. STAR TREK: "Pen Pals" -- REV. 2/15/89 - ACT FIVE 47AA. 34B CONTINUED: SARJENKA What are you doing? STAR TREK: "Pen Pals" -- REV. 2/16/89 - ACT FIVE 47A. 34B CONTINUED: (2) DATA We are attempting to quiet your planet. If we succeed, there will be no more quakes, no more volcanos. PICARD (to Wesley) When should the results become evident? WESLEY Very quickly, sir. SARJENKA And my parents and brothers? DATA If our experiment... He breaks off, realizing that what Sarjenka needs is reassurance. DATA (continuing) They will soon be safe. Data looks at his panel DATA (continuing) Captain, sensors indicate a planetwide reduction in tectonic stress levels. STAR TREK: "Pen Pals" -- REV. 2/21/89 - ACT FIVE 48 - 49* 34B CONTINUED: (3) WESLEY It's working. We did it! People shift in their chairs as the tension now eases on the bridge. SARJENKA (to Data) You did this for me? Data reacts. Sarjenka slowly turns and studies the bridge. DATA Sarjenka, look. Data taps the console. DATA (continuing) Starboard view. The view of Drema Four on the Main Viewer is replaced with a view of the stars. DATA (continuing) There, there are your stars. Absolute wonder. Sarjenka approaches the Main Viewer. DATA (continuing) What are you thinking? SARJENKA Someday, I'm going to be here. STAR TREK: "Pen Pals" -- REV. 2/16/89 - ACT FIVE 50. 34B CONTINUED: (5) PICARD Data, take Sarjenka to Sickbay. DATA Sir, must we? PICARD Yes. Data holds out his hand to Sarjenka. She runs to him. Trustingly takes his hand, and they EXIT. Picard rises, crosses to the Ready Room, and ENTERS. 34C INT. PULASKI'S OFFICE (OPTICAL) Pulaski is seated at her desk talking to Picard on the com screen. PICARD'S COM VOICE Data and the alien are on their way down. What would be involved in removing all memory of her communication with Data and her visit to this ship? PULASKI Assuming her brain structure is similar to ours the memories will be stored chemically on the neurons of the cerebral cortex. They are also time dependent. I'll have to scan for age of the chemical links, and try to find the relevant neurons. To be sure I may have to go back weeks before the initial contact with Data. PICARD'S COM VOICE Well, do your best. His image vanishes as he cuts the com. 34D INT. CORRIDOR Data and Sarjenka walking toward Sickbay. STAR TREK: "Pen Pals" -- REV. 2/14/89 - ACT FIVE 50A. 34D CONTINUED: SARJENKA You have many different kinds of people here. STAR TREK: "Pen Pals" -- REV. 2/21/89 - ACT FIVE 51. 34D CONTINUED: (2) DATA Yes. SARJENKA When I'm bigger can I be on your ship? DATA I am certain you could. SARJENKA (with a sigh) I wish I could come with you now. DATA There are many things in life which we desire but will never receive. This is one of them. SARJENKA I know, but I can still wish for it. The doors of Sickbay open and they ENTER. 35 INT. PULASKI'S OFFICE Data and Sarjenka cross the room and enter. Pulaski is seated at her desk. On the desk are some collectibles, among them the Elanin Singer Stone. DATA Sarjenka, this is Doctor Pulaski. PULASKI Hello, dear. SARJENKA Hello. Her eye is caught by the Singer Stone, and she picks it up. It begins to sing, and her eyes widen in wonder. She smiles. STAR TREK: "Pen Pals" -- REV. 2/14/89 - ACT FIVE 52. 35 CONTINUED: SARJENKA (continuing) What is this? PULASKI An Elanin Singer Stone. It sings a different song for each person. Sarjenka thrusts the crystal at Data. SARJENKA What does it sing for you? He folds her fingers back around the stone and pushes it away gently. DATA It does not sing for me. SARJENKA Why not? DATA Because I am a machine. SARJENKA Oh Data, I'm sorry. She touches his cheek. PULASKI Sarjenka, we're going to run a few scans just to make sure you're all right. An expression of alarm crosses the child's face. PULASKI (continuing) Data's going to be right with you. Don't worry. 35A INT. SICKBAY (OPTICAL) Data and Pulaski lead Sarjenka to the biobed, and Data boosts her up. Pulaski gives her a hypospray, and the little girl is out. Pulaski begins studying the readouts over the bed. STAR TREK: "Pen Pals" -- REV. 2/14/89 - ACT FIVE 52A. 35A CONTINUED: PULASKI (continuing) You did a good thing, Data. He looks down at Sarjenka. STAR TREK: "Pen Pals" -- REV. 2/16/89 - ACT FIVE 53. 35A CONTINUED: (2) DATA But are we doing a good thing now? PULASKI Data, this is to protect her as much as us. DATA By robbing her of her memories? PULASKI To remember you and this ship would complicate her future. She has to be the person she was born to be. And you'll remember. Pulaski sets up a complex machine. It emits a beam of blue light across the child's head. 36 INT. SARJENKA'S ROOM (OPTICAL) Data MATERIALIZES. He is carrying Sarjenka. (Stunt double if necessary.) Data carries the sleeping child to her bed and tucks her in. He then opens his hand, revealing the Elanin stone. It is silent. He then presses it into her hand, gently folding the fingers around the crystal. It begins to sing. He crosses to the wall and opens it, revealing the now quiet volcano. There are anxious VOICES OFF STAGE. Data quickly closes the wall, hurries to the center of the room, touches his insignia and DEMATERIALIZES. 37 EXT. SPACE - THE ENTERPRISE (OPTICAL) at warp speed. 38 INT. MAIN BRIDGE Riker is in the command position. Worf is at his station. Supernumeraries at Conn and Ops. Wesley ENTERS and starts to cross to his station. Riker motions to him, and Wesley joins him at the command station. He nods toward the first officer's chair. RIKER Sit down. STAR TREK: "Pen Pals" -- REV. 2/21/89 - ACT FIVE 54. 38 CONTINUED: WESLEY No thank you sir. It's going to be a long time before I'm really qualified to sit here. RIKER You did a good job, Wes. I'm proud of you. WESLEY Thank you, sir. Wesley starts for Conn, then pauses and looks back. WESLEY (continuing) Does it get any easier? RIKER No. 39 INT. PICARD'S QUARTERS There is a CHIME. Picard looks up from book. In the background music is softly playing. PICARD Come. Data ENTERS. Picard closes the book on a finger. DATA I came to thank you. PICARD No thanks are necessary. You reminded us that there are obligations beyond duty. STAR TREK: "Pen Pals" -- REV. 2/16/89 - ACT FIVE 55. 39 CONTINUED: DATA You did not have to hold that conference. Your decision could have been unilateral. PICARD One of my officers... He stops, and sets aside the book. PICARD (continuing) ... One of my friends was in trouble. I had to help him. DATA I am going to miss her, Captain. PICARD That too is part of friendship, remembrance and regrets. DATA Yes, sir. PICARD And understanding that has taken you a step closer to humanity. Off Data's quizzical look. 39A EXT SPACE - THE ENTERPRISE (OPTICAL) Moving away at ways speed FADE OUT. END OF ACT FIVE THE END STAR TREK: THE NEXT GENERATION "Q Who?" #40272-142 Written by Maurice Hurley Directed by Rob Bowman THE WRITING CREDITS MAY NOT BE FINAL AND SHOULD NOT BE USED FOR PUBLICITY OR ADVERTISING PURPOSES WITHOUT FIRST CHECKING WITH THE TELEVISION LEGAL DEPARTMENT. Copyright 1989 Paramount Pictures Corporation. All Rights Reserved. This script is not for publication or reproduction. No one is authorized to dispose of same. If lost or destroyed, please notify the Script Department. REVISED FINAL DRAFT FEBRUARY 24, 1989 STAR TREK: "Q Who?" - 2/24/89 - CAST STAR TREK: THE NEXT GENERATION "Q Who?" CAST PICARD Q RIKER DATA Non-Speaking TROI BORG ONE GEORDI BORG TWO WORF BORG THREE WESLEY GUINAN O'BRIEN SONYA Non-Speaking CREWMEMBERS SECURITY MAN STAR TREK: "Q Who?" - 2/24/89 - SETS STAR TREK: THE NEXT GENERATION "Q Who?" SETS INTERIORS EXTERIORS USS ENTERPRISE USS ENTERPRISE CORRIDOR MAIN BRIDGE BORG SHIP OBSERVATION LOUNGE TURBOLIFT MAIN ENGINEERING TRANSPORTER ROOM TEN-FORWARD GUINAN'S OFFICE SHUTTLECRAFT BORG SHIP STAR TREK: THE NEXT GENERATION "Q Who?" TEASER FADE IN: 1 EXT. SPACE - THE ENTERPRISE (OPTICAL) The Enterprise as it is traveling at impulse speed. 2 INT. CORRIDOR OUTSIDE MAIN ENGINEERING (OPTICAL) GEORDI is coming down the corridor, he sees a young twenty five to twenty eight year old ensign -- who has newly arrived on the Enterprise. She is very energetic, and enthusiastic in an open and ingenuous way, which is both appealing and refreshing. Her name is SONYA. She is standing in front of a food dispenser panel. SONYA Hot chocolate, please. The hot chocolate appears. GEORDI We don't ordinarily say "please" to food dispensers. SONYA (amused) Since it's listed as "intelligent Circuitry", why not? After all, working as much with artificial intelligence as we do, can be dehumanizing -- right? So, maybe we can combat that tendency with a little simple courtesy. She removes the cup of hot chocolate. SONYA (continuing) Thank you. They walk toward Main Engineering. STAR TREK: "Q Who?"-2/28/89 - TEASER 1A. 2 CONTINUED: GEORDI For someone who has just arrived, you certainly aren't shy with your opinions. SONYA Ooops -- have I been talking too much? GEORDI No. STAR TREK: "Q Who?" - 2/24/89 - TEASER 2. 2 CONTINUED: (2) SONYA (the words come out in a rush) I do tend to be a motor mouth, especially when I get excited... and you don't know how exciting it is to get this assignment. Everyone in class -- and I mean everyone -- wants the Enterprise. I mean, it would have been all right to spend some time on Ranuos Six to do phase work with anti-matter... that's my speciality. GEORDI I know -- that's why you got this assignment. SONYA (off Geordi's smile) Did it again. It's just that... GEORDI I know, you're excited. Sonya. SONYA Yes. GEORDI I don't think you want to bring that hot chocolate around these control stations. SONYA Sorry. I shouldn't even have this in engineering. We were talking and I just forgot I had it in my hand... And as she turns to take it out of the room. SONYA (continuing) I'll finish it over here. (looks back, and seriously) Lieutenant La Forge, it won't happen again. Then as she turns around she crashes right into CAPTAIN PICARD. STAR TREK: "Q Who?" - 2/24/89 - TEASER 3. 2A PICARD The cup full of chocolate hits him right in the chest. 2B SCENE For a moment everyone freezes. Geordi starts forward. GEORDI Actually it's my fault, sir... He looks down at his soiled uniform. PICARD Yes, I'm aware of how often you order picnics to be held in here. Sonya is about to die from embarassment. SONYA Oh no. Oh, Captain... I'm sorry... oh.. (she tries to brush it off) ... I wasn't looking and... (she pulls her hand away) Oh.. It's all over you. PICARD Yes, Ensign. It's all over me. SONYA At least let me... In trying to brush it off, she just makes it worse. She looks up at Picard, who through it all is maintaining as much of his dignity as possible. PICARD Ensign... ah... SONYA (she straightens up to her best military posture) Ensign Sonya Gomez. STAR TREK "Q Who?"-2/28/89 - TEASER 4. 2B CONTINUED: GEORDI Ensign Gomez is a recent Academy graduate. She transferred on at Starbase one seventy three. Picard's attention is on the widening chocolate stain that Sonya is creating. PICARD Ensign... (restraining her) I think it would be simpler if you let me change my uniform? GEORDI Captain, I really have to accept responsibility for this. Picard has been looking from one to the other, beginning to understand what is happening between Geordi and Sonya. PICARD Yes, Chief Engineer. I believe I do understand now. SONYA I'm very excited about this assignment Captain, and I promise I'll... (she looks at the chocolate stain on Picard's uniform) ... try very hard to serve you and this ship to the best of my ability. PICARD I'm sure you will. Carry on. STAR TREK: "Q Who?" - 3/2/89 - TEASER 5. 2B CONTINUED: (2) Picard then turns and strides off. 2C SONYA AND GEORDI SONYA First impressions right. Isn't that what they say -- first impressions are the most important. GEORDI I'll give you this... it's a meeting the captain won't soon forget. SONYA What a way to start my first assignment. Off Geordi's reaction: 3 OMMITTED (3) 4 INT. CORRIDOR Picard walks past a crewman -- who notices the stain on his uniform, but quickly averts his eyes so as not to embarrass the captain. Picard turns and enters the turbolift. 4A INT. TURBOLIFT The doors close. PICARD Deck nine. Officers' quarters. The turbolift moves off. Then stops. The doors open, and while still looking down at the stain on his uniform, Picard steps off. 4B INT. SHUTTLE Picard is not in a corridor of the Enterprise -- he's on a shuttle! He turns around and the turbolift doors are gone. STAR TREK: "Q Who?" - 2/24/89 - TEASER 5A. 4C SCENE He looks up. There is a crewman at the controls. PICARD Crewman? What's going on? The crewman turns. STAR TREK: "Q Who?"-2/27/89 - TEASER 6. 4D CREWMAN It's Q. Q There, there, my dear captain. 4E PICARD Reacts. PICARD Q. 4F SCENE (OPTICAL) Picard moves closer to Q. Q (re: the stain) My, my -- haven't we been careless. Q passes his hand over the stain on Picard's uniform and the stain disappears. Q There -- a little cleaning service. I am more than happy to provide. PICARD We agreed you would never trouble my ship again! Q I always keep my arrangements, sir. We are nowhere near your vessel. Picard looks out and sees a field of stars. Then back to Q. FADE OUT. END OF TEASER STAR TREK: "Q Who?" - 3/2/89 - ACT ONE 7. ACT ONE FADE IN: 5 EXT. SPACE - THE ENTERPRISE (OPTICAL) The Enterprise moving along at impulse speed. 5A INT. CORRIDOR Geordi and Sonya are walking to Ten-Forward. She is in a clean uniform. GEORDI I read your graduating thesis. I wouldn't have requested you if you weren't the best. She's uncomfortable with the compliment and shrugs it off, changes the subject. SONYA Where are we going? GEORDI To Ten-Forward. We're going to forget about work. We are going to sit, talk, relax, look at the stars. You're going to learn to slow down. SONYA (very intense) No, that's the one thing I can't do. GEORDI (gently) You're awfully young to be so driven. STAR TREK: "Q Who?" - 3/2/89 - ACT ONE 7A. 5A CONTINUED: SONYA Yes, I am. I had to be. I had to be the best because only the best get to be here. Out here on the edge. (gripping his arm and giving it a shake) Geordi, Geordi . . .uh . . (dropping the arm abruptly) Lieutenant -- GEORDI (grinning) Geordi SONYA Geordi. Whatever is out here we're going to be the first humans ever to see it. And is it here because we believe in it and have therefore created it, or has it created us? GEORDI The Grand Unified Theory and Supersymmetry hasn't been seriously discussed for years. SONYA They also haven't been disproved. I don't know if it's true or not, but I've got to try and find out. GEORDI You're more than a scientist you're a philospher. SONYA No, no, I'm not. Oh, God, don't make me sound profound. There's just so much out there ... here. She is gesturing broadly as if somehow she can pull in and embrace the whole universe. SONYA (continuing) I have to see it all. To understand it all, and we haven't got much time. STAR TREK: "Q Who?" - 3/2/89 - ACT ONE 7B. 5A CONTINUED: (2) GEORDI Sonya, it's going to be there for you. Believe me. (a beat) I promise, I won't let anything exciting slip past without letting you know. 6 INT. TEN-FORWARD GUINAN is behind the bar. There are a few n.d. crewmembers scattered around the room. The only one of our regulars in Ten-Forward is Geordi, who is sitting at a table by the window with Sonya they are engaged in a very animated conversation. 6A GUINAN Something gives her pause -- like a whisper only she can hear. She is thoughtful for a beat... 6B SCENE Guinan steps out from behind the bar and crosses to the center of the room. 6C ANOTHER ANGLE She stands near Geordi's table for a beat and gazing out at space. In the background Geordi continues his conversation with Sonya. GEORDI (O.S.) I understand that you're excited -- so was I. This is your first assignment, everything is new, you are eager and that's great, but... STAR TREK: "Q Who?" - 3/2/89 - ACT ONE 7C. 6C CONTINUED: SONYA (O.S.) I've always been an enthusiastic person, but... He holds up his hand. GEORDI (O.S). Do me a favor... for a minute, just listen. STAR TREK: "Q Who?" - 2/24/89 - ACT ONE 8. 6C CONTINUED: SONYA (O.S.) I always do that. Someone nice -- and you are nice I can tell, goes out of their way to give me some helpful advice... and I'm so busy talking... In the b.g. we see Geordi quiet her with a gesture. SONYA (O.S.) Not another word. Go ahead... talk. 6D GUINAN Her brow knits -- like she has just seen the first indications of a coming storm. She steps to a communications panel. GUINAN Bridge, this is Ten-Forward. 7 INT. BRIDGE - EMPHASIZING RIKER Who reacts to the unusual call. RIKER Guinan?! I don't believe you've ever called the bridge before. GUINAN I've never felt the need. Is everything alright? RIKER How do you mean? GUINAN Is there... anything... unusual happening? RIKER (looks around) Anyone notice anything unusual? (waits, then) No Guinan, nothing out of the ordinary. Why do you ask? STAR TREK: "Q Who?" - 2/24/89 - ACT ONE 8A. 7A ANGLE IN TEN-FORWARD A thoughtful Guinan responding. STAR TREK: "Q Who?" - 3/1/89 - ACT ONE 9. 7A CONTINUED: GUINAN I'm... I'm not certain. Just a feeling -- something that happened once before. Probably nothing. (beat) Please forget I called. Ten- Forward out. She turns and stares out into space. 8 OMITTED 9 INT. SHUTTLECRAFT Picard is in the shuttlecraft -- with Q. Picard adjusts a control; Q smiles. Q The locator beacon won't help. They'll never look for you this far away. Picard turns to the com controls. PICARD Enterprise -- this is Picard. There's no response. PICARD Stop this foolishness, Q. Return me to the Enterprise. Q I'd suggest you change your attitude. Petulance does not become you. We have business. PICARD Keeping me a prisoner out here will not force me to discuss anything with you. STAR TREK: "Q Who?" - 2/24/89 - ACT ONE 9A. 9 CONTINUED: Q It will in time, my dear Captain. STAR TREK "Q Who?"-2/28/89 - ACT ONE 10. 10 INT. TEN-FORWARD Guinan steps up to near the table occupied by Geordi and Sonya and looks out at the stars. SONYA I appreciate your advice, Lieutenant. And, I'll take it to heart. Geordi notices Guinan's distraction. GEORDI Guinan? She turns. GUINAN Can I get you something? GEORDI No -- we're fine. Is everything all right? She looks over at Geordi for a beat then. GUINAN I don't know. But her expression belies the answer. Geordi nods, but something about her reaction causes him to: GEORDI (gets up) I think I'll go check out Engineering. SONYA I'll go with you. Guinan watches them leave then turns and once again looks out at the stars. 10A INT. MAIN BRIDGE The turbolift doors open and TROI enters. There is a sense of foreboding in the timing of her arrival. Reaction from Riker. Troi crosses to her position. STAR TREK: "Q Who?" - 2/24/89 - ACT ONE 11. 10A CONTINUED: TROI Where's the captain? RIKER In his Ready Room. Troi touches a com control. TROI Captain -- this is Counselor Troi. There is no response. 11 INT. ANOTHER ANGLE RIKER Computer -- locate Captain Picard. COMPUTER The captain is not on the ship. Before they can react. 11A WORF Runs a check on his security panel. WORF Commander, there is a shuttle missing from Shuttle Bay Two. RIKER All stop. WESLEY Answering all stop. 12 EXT. SPACE - THE ENTERPRISE (OPTICAL) The Enterprise comes to a complete stop. 13 INT. MAIN BRIDGE For a beat everyone is silent... waiting. STAR TREK: "Q Who?" - 2/24/89 - ACT ONE 11A. 13 CONTINUED: WORF I have hailed the shuttle on all frequencies -- no response. STAR TREK: "Q Who?" - 2/24/89 - ACT ONE 12. 13 CONTINUED: (2) DATA Sensors indicate no shuttle or other ships in this sector. RIKER We must assume the captain is onboard the shuttle. WESLEY But, how could he get to the shuttle bay, how could he leave the Enterprise without us knowing? It's not possible. RIKER Take it easy, Wes. We'll find him. I want to begin a methodical search. Sensors on maximum scan We'll use our present location as the center. Data plot a search pattern from our present coordinates which will cover the most area in the shortest time. Riker slowly moves back to his chair. 13A DATA He makes some rapid calculations. DATA The search pattern has been input. RIKER Engage, Mister Crusher. 14 EXT. SPACE - THE ENTERPRISE (OPTICAL) The Enterprise pulls out of frame. 15 EXT. SPACE - THE ENTERPRISE (OPTICAL) Another angle as the Enterprise approaches from a long distance. STAR TREK: "Q Who?"-2/28/89 - ACT ONE 13. 15 CONTINUED: RIKER (V.O.) First officer's log. Stardate (xx). We have not been able to determine why, or how, Captain Picard left the Enterprise. We can't even be certain he is in the missing shuttle, although that is the assumption on which we are proceeding. For the last six hours we have been searching without success. 16 INT. MAIN BRIDGE The situation has gone from tense to desperate. DATA We have covered the area in a spherical pattern which a vessel without warp drive could traverse in the time allotted. RIKER Widen the area... 16A DATA He inputs the necessary information. 17 INT. SHUTTLE As before with Picard and Q. Picard attempts to power up the shuttle. All systems are inoperative. Q Do we stay out here years? Decades? Picard, I am ageless -- you are not. PICARD Then the Enterprise will continue on with Riker as captain. Return me to my ship. Q You are an impossibly stubborn human. STAR TREK: "Q Who?" - 3/1/89 - ACT ONE 13A. 17 CONTINUED: Q (continuing) If I return you to your ship, you will agree to give my request a full hearing? Picard studies Q for a beat, then nods. 17A INT. TEN-FORWARD We pull back to reveal Picard and Q, now sitting in Ten- Forward. Q You're right Picard. This is the proper venue for our discussion. 17B GUINAN She reacts to the sudden appearance of Q and the captain. 18 INT. MAIN BRIDGE - EMPHASIZING WORF Who is studying his board. STAR TREK: "Q Who?" - 2/24/89 - ACT ONE 14. 18 CONTINUED: WORF Commander. My status board indicates that the shuttle is back in Shuttle Bay Two. Riker reacts. RIKER Computer -- locate Captain Picard. COMPUTER Captain Picard is in Ten-Forward. Off Riker's reactions we: FADE OUT. END OF ACT ONE STAR TREK: "Q Who?" - 2/24/89 - ACT TWO 15. ACT TWO FADE IN: 19 EXT. SPACE - THE ENTERPRISE (OPTICAL) The Enterprise is at a dead stop. 20 OMMITTED 21 INT. TEN-FORWARD Picard and Q are seated by one of the front windows. Guinan comes over. Q immediately stands and backs off like a man about to be physically attacked. Q You! GUINAN None other. Q Picard, if you had half the sense you pretend to have, you would get her off your ship immediately -- and if you like I will be more than pleased to expedite her departure. Picard looks to Guinan. PICARD You know him. GUINAN We had some dealings. Q Those dealings were two centuries ago. This creature is not what she appears to be. She's an imp -- where she goes trouble always follows. STAR TREK: "Q Who?" - 2/24/89 - ACT TWO 16. 21 CONTINUED: PICARD You're speaking of yourself, Q -- not Guinan. Q Guinan? Is that your name now? PICARD Guinan's not the issue here -- you are... We had an agreement that you would stop meddling with us. Q And so I have. PICARD What do you want, Q? State your business and let's get on with it. Q I agree Captain, enough about this creature -- she's diverting us from the purpose of my being here. RIKER (O.S.) Which is? Q looks up. 21A SCENE Riker and Worf stride across Ten-Forward, to join them. Q Ahh, the redoubtable Commander Riker. And micro-brain. (to Worf) Growl for me -- let me know you still care. Worf reacts. Q (returning to the point) My purpose? Why to join you. RIKER To join us as what? STAR TREK: "Q Who?" - REV. 3/7/89 - ACT TWO 17. 21A CONTINUED: Q A member of the crew. Willing and able -- ready to serve. Before Riker can react. Q (to Picard) This ship is already home for the indigent, the unwanted and the unworthy -- so why not a homeless entity. RIKER Homeless? Q Yes. RIKER So, the other members of the Q continuum kicked you out. GUINAN Not all of the Q are like this one. Some are almost respectable. PICARD Join us as what? To do what? Would you start as an ordinary crewman -- what task is too menial for an entity? Q Do you mock me? PICARD Not at all. That is the last thing I would do. You, by definition are part of our charter. Our mission is to go forth -- to seek out new and different life forms, and you certainly qualify as one of the most unique life forms I have ever encountered. To learn more about you is frankly quite provocative, but you are next of kin to chaos. STAR TREK: "Q Who?" - 3/2/89 - ACT TWO 17A. 21A CONTINUED: (2) Q Captain, at least allow me to present my argument. Q takes Picard's silence as permission to continue. Q (continuing) After our last encounter, (a look to Riker) I was asked to leave the Q continuum. Since then, I have been wandering vaguely -- bored really -- my existence without purpose. Then, I remembered the good times I had with you... RIKER The good times!? The first time we met you put us on trial for the "crimes of humanity"... Q Of which you were exonerated. STAR TREK: "Q Who?" - 3/2/89 - ACT TWO 18. 21A CONTINUED: (3) RIKER The next time we saw you, you asked me to join the Q continuum. Q You made a large mistake in not accepting my offer. PICARD ... and now you say you want to join us. Q Yes, more and more I realize that here -- here is where I want to be. Think of the advantages. Now, I neither expect nor require any special treatment. If necessary, although I can't imagine why, I will renounce my powers and become as weak and incompetent as all of you. PICARD No. Q Oh, come on, Captain, in fairness... let me try, I deserve at least that much. RIKER Fairness?! You disrupt this ship -- kidnap the captain! Q I add a little excitement, a little spice to your lives and all you do is complain. Where's your adventurous spirit -- your imagination. Think, Picard, of the possibilities. STAR TREK "Q Who?"-2/28/89 - ACT TWO 19. 21A CONTINUED: (3) PICARD Simply stated -- we don't trust you. Q Oh, you may not trust me, but you do need me. You're not prepared for what awaits you. PICARD I don't know that we are prepared, but I do know that we are ready to confront it. Q Really? PICARD Absolutely. That's why we are out here. Q Oh, the arrogance. (to Guinan) They don't have a clue about what's "out here". GUINAN They will learn -- adapt. That's their great advantage. Q They are moving faster than expected -- farther than they should. PICARD By whose calculation? Q You judge yourselves against the pitiful adversaries you have so far encountered -- the Klingons, the Romulans, are nothing compared to what's waiting. (MORE) STAR TREK "Q Who?"-2/28/89 - ACT TWO 20. 21A CONTINUED: (4) Q (continuing) Picard, you are about to move into areas of the galaxy containing wonders more incredible than you can possibly imagine... and terrors to freeze your soul. I offer myself as guide -- only to be rejected out-of-hand. RIKER I guess we'll just have to get along the best we can without you. Q What justifies this smugness? PICARD We're not smug -- nor arrogant. We are resolute and we are willing. But more than that we are determined. Your help is not required. Q Well, let's just see how ready you are. GUINAN Q -- don't do this! He makes a move of his hand: 22 EXT. SPACE - THE ENTERPRISE (OPTICAL) The Enterprise is struck by a great surge of energy and streaks off. 23 INT. TEN-FORWARD (OPTICAL) Picard and the others react to the blur of stars streaking past. It's a velocity beyond the capabilities of the Enterprise. 24 INT. MAIN BRIDGE Data has command of the bridge. Everyone reacts to the sudden burst of speed. STAR TREK: "Q Who?" - 3/2/89 - ACT TWO 21. 25 EXT. SPACE (OPTICAL) The Enterprise comes out of the spin and stops. 26 INT. TEN-FORWARD (OPTICAL) The motion has stopped. (INTERCUT MAIN BRIDGE AS NEEDED) PICARD Bridge this is the captain -- all stop. WESLEY COM VOICE Answering all stop. PICARD Status. DATA COM VOICE According to these coordinates we have traveled seven thousand light years, and are located near system J-two-five. RIKER Estimate travel time to the closest starbase. DATA COM VOICE At maximum warp, in two years, seven months, three days, eighteen hours we would reach Starbase one eight five. Guinan looks out the window. RIKER Why? STAR TREK "Q Who?"-2/28/89 - ACT TWO 21A. 26 CONTINUED: Q Why? Why, to give you a taste of your future. This is a preview of things to come, because if you continue at your present rate of exploration -- very soon you will reach this part of the galaxy. (to Picard) Con permiso, Capitan. The hall has been rented -- the orchestra engaged -- it's time to see if you can dance. With a flash Q disappears. STAR TREK "Q Who?"-2/28/89 - ACT TWO 22. 26 CONTINUED: (2) PICARD Guinan, have your people been in this part of the galaxy? GUINAN Yes. RIKER What can you tell us? GUINAN Only that if I were you, I'd start back right now. Off their look... 27 EXT. SPACE - THE ENTERPRISE (OPTICAL) The Enterprise is moving through this new section of the galaxy. PICARD (V.O.) Captain's log, supplemental. The entity Q has flung the Enterprise to a distant part of the galaxy, which we are going to take the opportunity to explore. 28 INT. MAIN BRIDGE Everyone is in their place. WORF Captain, the sixth planet in the system is Class M. DATA There is a system of roads on the planet which indicate a highly industrialized civilization. But where there should be cities there are only great rips in the surface. WORF It is as though some great force just scooped all machine elements off the face of the planet. STAR TREK: "Q Who?" - 2/24/89 - ACT TWO 23. 28 CONTINUED: DATA It is identical to what happened to the outposts along the Neutral Zone. WORF We are being probed. RIKER What's the source of the probe? Worf checks his console. WORF A ship. It is on an intercept course. PICARD On screen. 28A VIEWSCREEN (OPTICAL) A strange ship approaches -- it's unlike anything we have seen. PICARD Magnify. The image on the screen enlarges. The shape of the ship is more apparent. It's box like, with none of the aerodynamic qualities associated with most spaceships including the Enterprise. This is a case of form following function. We are about to have our first encounter with the BORG. RIKER Full scan. Go to Yellow Alert. WORF Going to Yellow Alert. RIKER Keep the shields down -- we don't want to appear provocative. Worf responds with a nod. 29 EXT. SPACE - THE ENTERPRISE (OPTICAL) As the great Borg ship approaches the Enterprise. Then stops. STAR TREK: "Q Who?" - 2/24/89 - ACT TWO 24. 30 INT. TEN-FORWARD (OPTICAL) Guinan is looking out at the Borg ship. 31 INT. MAIN BRIDGE (OPTICAL) As before -- everyone watching the viewscreen. PICARD Data, what can you tell us? DATA The ship is strangely generalized in design. There is no specific bridge or central control area, no specific engineering section -- I can identify no living quarters. RIKER Life signs? DATA There is no indication of specific life. RIKER Lieutenant Worf, what is its alert status? WORF I detect no shields, no weapons of any known design. PICARD Hailing frequencies. WORF Open. PICARD This is Captain Jean-Luc Picard of the USS Enterprise. WORF No response. PICARD Guinan. STAR TREK: "Q Who?"-2/27/89 - ACT TWO 25. 32 INT. GUINAN OFFICE (OPTICAL) Guinan moves into her small office. PICARD Activate your viewscreen -- I want you to monitor what's going on up here. I may need your input. Guinan reaches out and activates her viewscreen. The image is the same as that on the the MAIN VIEWER. GUINAN I'm here. I can see the other ship. PICARD You are acquainted with this life form? GUINAN Yes. My people encountered them a century ago. Our cities were destroyed -- our people scattered across the galaxy. They are called the Borg -- protect yourself or they will destroy you. Picard looks at Riker. RIKER Shields up. WORF Yes, sir. 33 INT. MAIN ENGINEERING (OPTICAL) SUDDENLY a strange creature appears -- it's a BORG. It is a biped -- a cyborg. Part organic and part artificial. There is a metal like device implanted in its head. One arm is artificial with a tool like contraption instead of a hand. The other organic except for the hand. Its eyes are artificial. Its presence triggers RED ALERT. GEORDI Security to Main Engineering -- we have an intruder. STAR TREK: "Q Who?"-2/27/89 - ACT TWO 26. 34 INT. MAIN BRIDGE Off Picard's reaction as he and Worf exit. FADE OUT. END OF ACT TWO STAR TREK: "Q Who?"-2/28/89 - ACT THREE 27. ACT THREE FADE IN: 35 EXT. SPACE - THE ENTERPRISE (OPTICAL) The Enterprise in this new section of the galaxy -- with the Borg ship nearby. 36 INT. MAIN ENGINEERING Picard, Worf, and security team enter. The Borg is still making a visual survey of the room. It seems to look right through or pass the people as if they are of no consequence. WORF He came right through the shields! Picard approaches. Q appears behind Picard -- to offer sotto voice observations. Q Interesting isn't it? Not a he -- not a she. Not like anything you've ever seen. An enhanced humanoid. PICARD What do you want? 36A PICARD (OPTICAL) He steps closer to the Borg. He holds up his open hand. PICARD We mean you no harm. Do you understand me? The Borg strides toward one of the com panels. Q Understand you? You are nothing to him. He has no interest in your life form. He's just a scout -- the first of many. He's here to analyze as much about you as he can -- that's how they always start. (MORE) STAR TREK: "Q Who?" - 2/24/89 - ACT THREE 27A. 36A CONTINUED: Q (continuing) He may attempt to gain control of the ship. I wouldn't let him. STAR TREK: "Q Who?" - 2/24/89 - ACT THREE 28. 36A CONTINUED: (2) Q leaves. 36B SCENE Picard tries to defuse this situation. PICARD Stop -- we cannot allow you to interfere with the operation of this ship. The Borg continues to move toward the com panel. PICARD Lieutenant Worf. Worf motions for one of his security team to intercept the Borg. The security man steps in front of the Borg. The Borg knocks the security man on his ass. 36C WORF (OPTICAL) Worf pulls out his phaser. Worf fires -- the stun setting means nothing. 36D SCENE (OPTICAL) The phaser hit has no affect on the Borg. He, or it, steps to the com panel and affixes the apparatus on his arm to the computer. SUDDENLY there is a drain on all systems. The lights dim. PICARD Worf -- use whatever means to neutralize the intruder. 36E WORF (OPTICAL) Worf adjusts his phaser and fires again. 36F SCENE (OPTICAL) This phaser hit rips into the Borg knocking him away. Before anyone can react -- another Borg materializes. Worf and the others assume a defensive posture. The second Borg picks up where the first one left off. STAR TREK: "Q Who?" - REV. 3/7/89 - ACT THREE 29. 36G WORF (OPTICAL) fires his phaser. 36H SCENE (OPTICAL) This Borg responds differently. The hit is absorbed. He is apparently surrounded with a force field of some kind. This Borg goes to the back panel. He accesses the computer -- drains it. Then walks over to the first Borg -- removes some parts from his body and de-materializes. After a beat the dead Borg withers into a line of ash -- which then disappears. Off Picard reaction. 37 INT. OBSERVATION LOUNGE (OPTICAL) An abbreviated staff has been assembled; Riker, Data, Picard and Troi. PICARD Because her people had contact with the Borg, I have requested that Guinan participate in this conference. You are aware of what just occurred in Main Engineering. She nods. PICARD Tell, us exactly what happened between your people and the Borg. STAR TREK: "Q Who?" - 3/2/89 - ACT THREE 29A. 37 CONTINUED: GUINAN I was not personally invloved, but -- from what I have been told they came through our system like a storm of Jaradan Aser beatles -- and by the time they left, there wasn't much left of our society. RIKER Guinan, if they are that aggressive, then I wonder why neither Borg attacked? They could have -- but they didn't. GUINAN They never do that as individuals. It's just not their way. When they decide to come, they will come in force. They do nothing piecemeal. DATA Then the initial encounter was solely for the purpose of gathering information. GUINAN Yes. STAR TREK: "Q Who?" - 3/2/89 - ACT THREE 30. 37 CONTINUED: PICARD How do we reason with them? Let them know that we are not a threat? GUINAN You don't, at least to my knowledge nobody has so far. WORF COM VOICE Captain, we are being hailed. PICARD On screen. 37A SCENE - TO INCLUDE VIEWSCREEN (OPTICAL) The image on the viewscreen is of the interior of the Borg ship. Not the bridge, because they don't have one. It is a great chamber with stacks and stacks of slots in which are individual Borg. We can see over a thousand of them, but the ship probably holds more. Some of them are making small controlled movements, otherwise they would appear to be at rest. 37B REACTIONS (OPTICAL) Picard steps forward. PICARD This is Captain Jean-Luc Picard of the... BORG (interrupting) We have analyzed your defensive capabilities as being unable to withstand us. If you defend yourselves, you will be punished. Viewscreen repaints to exterior Borg ship. PICARD Counselor. TROI You are not dealing with an individual mind. They do not have a single leader. It is the collective minds of all of them. STAR TREK: "Q Who?" - 3/2/89 - ACT THREE 31. 37B CONTINUED: PICARD That would have some definite advantages. TROI Yes. A single leader can make errors. It is less likely for the combined whole. Q (O.S.) Picard. Picard turns. 37B-A VIEWSCREEN (OPTICAL) Q is now on the viewscreen. Q Are you certain you still don't want me as a member of your crew? This would be the time to ask, before everything goes too far beyond your control. Before Picard can answer... WORF COM VOICE Captain -- they have locked onto us with some form of tractor beam. PICARD We're on our way. Picard and the others exit. 37C EXT. SPACE - THE ENTERPRISE (OPTICAL) An energy beam from the Borg ship holds the Enterprise. 38 INT. MAIN BRIDGE Picard and the others take their positions. DATA Whatever this beam is, Captain, it is draining our shields. STAR TREK: "Q Who?"-2/28/89 - ACT THREE 31A. 38 CONTINUED: RIKER If they pull down our shields we're helpless. PICARD On any heading -- warp eight engage. 38A WESLEY As he inputs the information and attempts to take the Enterprise out of danger. WESLEY It's holding us here! RIKER Increase power! STAR TREK: "Q Who?" - 3/3/89 - ACT THREE 32. 38A CONTINUED: WORF The shields are weakening. DATA In eighteen seconds the shields will be down. PICARD Locate the exact source of the tractor beam -- lock on phasers. WORF Phasers locked on target. PICARD Fire. 39 EXT. SPACE - THE ENTERPRISE (OPTICAL) The pin-point phasers from the Enterprise hit into the Borg ship. But the force holding the Enterprise does not release. 40 INT. MAIN BRIDGE As before. WORF They still have us. DATA Shields are down. 41 EXT. SPACE - THE ENTERPRISE (OPTICAL) The Enterprise and the Borg ship. Another beam leaves the Borg ship and makes contact with the Enterprise. 41A EXT. SPACE - THE ENTERPRISE (OPTICAL) A CLOSER ANGLE as the Borg ship cores out a piece of the Enterprise hull. STAR TREK: "Q Who?" - 2/24/89 - ACT THREE 33. 42 OMMITTED 43 INT. MAIN BRIDGE As before. WORF A type of laser beam is slicing into the Saucer Section. RIKER They are carving us up like a roast. PICARD With whatever force you need terminate that beam. 44 EXT. SPACE - THE ENTERPRISE (OPTICAL) The beam has cut away a section of the Enterprise and is now taking it back to the Borg ship. 45 INT. MAIN BRIDGE As before. PICARD Fire! Worf releases a series of blasts from the phaser bank. 46 EXT. SPACE - THE ENTERPRISE (OPTICAL) The phaser blasts rip again and again into the Borg ship - the beam holding the section of the Enterprise disappears into the Borg ship. Another volley from the Enterprise pounds the Borg ship. STAR TREK: "Q Who?"-2/27/89 - ACT THREE 33A. 47 INT. MAIN BRIDGE (OPTICAL) On the screen we see the battered image of the Borg ship. RED ALERT ends. DATA The tractor beam has released. STAR TREK: "Q Who?" - 3/1/89 - ACT THREE 34. 47 CONTINUED: RIKER Damage report. WORF Sections twenty-seven, twenty-eight and twenty- nine on Decks four, five and six destroyed. PICARD Casualties? WORF Eighteen were in those sections and are missing. RIKER They couldn't have survived it. DATA A force field is maintaining hull integrity. PICARD What is the condition of their ship? WORF They have sustained damage to twenty percent of their vessel. Life support minimal. RIKER (angry) Why?! For a beat everyone is in stunned silence. PICARD Conference. RIKER Worf -- you had better remain at your station. Worf watches them go. STAR TREK: "Q Who?" - 3/1/89 - ACT THREE 34A. 48 INT. OBSERVATION LOUNGE (OPTICAL) Guinan is still there as they enter. Riker -- Data - Picard -- Troi. GUINAN I am so sorry, Captain. Picard nods. PICARD Guinan -- what else can you tell us about these creatures? GUINAN I only know bits and pieces. PICARD Anything would be helpful. GUINAN They are a mixture of organic and artificial life that has been developed over a thousand centuries. Behind them Q is revealed (no Q Flash). STAR TREK: "Q Who?" - 3/1/89 - ACT THREE 34AA. 47A INT MAIN ENGINEERING The tension level is high. Sonya is a little dazed, but at her duties like any well trained Academy graduate. She and Geordi. SONYA (urgent) I can't get the shields up. GEORGI Divert power from wherever you need it. Anywhere except life support. SONYA It wouldn't help. The circuits which control the shields have been fused. GEORDI If you can't reprogram them... reroute. Her hands fly across the panels. Then stops. SONYA Eighteen people. Dead -- just like that. GEORDI Push it out of your head. SONYA I can't. I keep seeing them. GEORGI Stop it. We'll grieve later. Right now... let's get those shields operative. She shakes it off and they both return to reprograming the shield circuits. STAR TREK: "Q Who?" - 3/2/89 - ACT THREE 35. 48 CONTINUED: Q The Borg is the ultimate user, with the result that they are unlike any threat your Federation has ever faced. They have no interest in political conquest -- or wealth or power as you know it. They simply want your ship -- its technology. They have identified it as something they can consume and use. RIKER And you brought us here, exposed us to it, cost us the lives of shipmates... Riker's calm breaks -- he physically moves to assault Q. Q Stop -- or you will surely die. PICARD Number One. Riker stops; Picard turns to Q. PICARD (continuing) Eighteen of our people have died. Please tell us that this is one of your illusions. Q Oh, no. This is as real as your "so called" life gets. A FLASH OF LIGHT and Q is gone. GEORDI'S COM VOICE This is Lieutenant La Forge, Captain. We have been able to restore power to the shields. PICARD Very good. WORF'S COM VOICE Captain, I have the casuality list coming on screen. PICARD Cancel -- time for that later. STAR TREK: "Q Who?" - 3/2/89 - ACT THREE 35A. 48A SCENE They are quiet for a beat. RIKER If there's a chance we are going to have further dealings with the Borg -- now or in the future -- we had better find out as much about them as we can. PICARD Visit their ship? RIKER In my opinion, we have no choice, sir. PICARD (considers it; nods) Agreed. Assemble a minimal away team and take a look at what's over there. GUINAN What? RIKER (to com) Mister Worf. Report to Transporter Room 3. (to Data) Data. Riker and Data stand. GUINAN It's not my business but I wouldn't go over there if I were you. RIKER Oh, I don't know, Guinan. They visited us... seems only fair that we return the courtesy. Off Guinan as she watches them exit. FADE OUT END OF ACT THREE STAR TREK: "Q Who?" - 3/2/89 - ACT FOUR 36. ACT FOUR FADE IN: 49 EXT. SPACE - THE ENTERPRISE (OPTICAL) The Enterprise, still near the severely damaged Borg ship. PICARD (V.O.) Captain's log, supplemental. We have been attacked without provocation by an alien race which Guinan calls the Borg. Hopefully, we have neutralized their vessel. Commander Riker is leading an away team in an attempt to learn more about them. 50 INT. TRANSPORTER ROOM - (OPTICAL) Riker, Worf and Data enter. All are wearing phasers. WORF There are no life sign readings. O'BRIEN I have laid in coordinates which should set you down in the least damaged section of the Borg ship. RIKER Set phasers on stun, but let's be ready to increase the power if we need it. They climb on the transporter pad. RIKER Energize. The away team dematerializes. 51 INT. BORG SHIP - (OPTICAL) The away team materializes in the great open center of the Borg ship. All around there is some evidence of battle damage. The design of the interior is as functional as the exterior. There is no attempt at eye pleasing colors. STAR TREK: "Q Who?"- 2/28/89 - ACT FOUR 37. 51 CONTINUED: Interspersed with the grey equipment racks are slots, which go floor to ceiling and are occupied by individual Borg. 51A ANOTHER ANGLE The away team looks around. The Borg closest to them are alive. The away team instantly assumes a defensive position -- expecting the Borg to repel them. But the Borg do not move. Data takes a tricorder scan of the area. They step closer to one of the Borg. RIKER I wonder why they don't react to us, and why the Enterprise did not read any life signs, especially when there are this many. DATA Perhaps because this ship was scanned for individual life signs. Apparently when they are in these slots, they become part of the whole and no longer read as separate life forms. RIKER (touches his communicator) Captain. 52 INT. MAIN BRIDGE (INTERCUT AS NEEDED) PICARD Go ahead, Number One. STAR TREK: "Q Who?" - REV. 3/8/89 - ACT FOUR 38. 52 CONTINUED: RIKER Our readings were incorrect... the Borg crew survived, but they are in a kind of stasis. PICARD Explain. RIKER There are slots along the wall, kind of like compartments. There are two Borg in each. DATA Captain, I would theorize that the Borg are somehow interconnected through these slots and are working collectively. RIKER We are going to look for some way to access their main computer. 52A ANOTHER ANGLE As the away team moves down the corridor they pass strange pieces of equipment but nothing which is familiar. 52B DATA Steps over to examine an empty Borg slot. DATA Each slot is designed for a specific Borg. Here is where the connection is made. (he indicates a type of arm rest) 52C SCENE Riker moves over to join Data -- while Worf stands guard. They are very tense -- at any moment the Borg could leave the slots. STAR TREK: "Q Who?" - REV. 3/8/89 - ACT FOUR 38A. 52C CONTINUED: RIKER Like a juggernaut which could start moving at any moment. DATA The technology required to achieve this biological and artificial interface is far beyond our capabilities. There are many advantages. STAR TREK: "Q Who?" - REV. 3/8/89 - ACT FOUR 39. 52C CONTINUED: (2) RIKER Speed being the obvious one. This ship literally thinks what it wants to do and it happens. SUDDENLY a nearby Borg leaves its slot. The away team assumes a defensive posture expecting an attack. Instead the Borg moves to a panel, executes a program, the purpose of which we do not know. Then, as the away team watches, the Borg returns to its slot. DATA Fascinating. Obviously they also function individually. RIKER And either they don't see us, or don't see us as a threat. They move off down the corridor. 52D ANOTHER ANGLE (OPTICAL) To show the relationship between the away team, and the immense ship. 53 INT. MAIN BRIDGE - ENTERPRISE Picard is watching the Borg ship on the Main Viewer. PICARD Transporter room, this is the Captain. O'BRIEN'S COM VOICE O'Brien here Captain. PICARD If your lock on the away team wavers in the slightest -- beam them back. O'BRIEN'S COM VOICE Count on it, Captain. STAR TREK: "Q Who?" - 2/24/89 - ACT FOUR 39A. 54 INT. BORG SHIP As the away team comes into another chamber. There are no walls, or doors as such. This ship lacks the compartmentalization which we are used to. The corridor will simply open onto a wider area. STAR TREK: "Q Who?" - 2/24/89 - ACT FOUR 40. 54 CONTINUED: Off to the side, part of the ship has been twisted in the phaser attack. Something about it catches Data's eye. 54A ANOTHER ANGLE Riker moves to the other side of the room. Here are smaller horizontal slots which contain smaller -- younger -- Borg. The "children" are in various stages of "assembly". RIKER Captain -- this is incredible. I have just entered what appears to be the nursery. PICARD Describe it. RIKER From the looks of it the Borg are born as biological life form. Almost immediately after birth they begin getting artificial implants. They have apparently developed the technology to link artificial intelligence directly into a humanoid brain. Pretty astounding. Something else -- I haven't seen any females. DATA Commander. Riker turns from looking at the half put together child. RIKER What is it? DATA The ship appears to be regenerating. 54B SCENE Riker and Worf quickly cross to Data. They look at a damaged portion of the ship. STAR TREK: "Q Who?" - 3/2/89 - ACT FOUR 41. 54B CONTINUED: DATA Perhaps this explains why they have not taken notice of our presence. Their collective effort is directed at repairing their vessel. RIKER Captain, the Borg are using their combined power to repair the ship. PICARD COM VOICE Transporter Chief, beam the away team directly to the bridge. 55 INT. MAIN BRIDGE (OPTICAL) As the away team stacks up. PICARD Now, Mister Crusher -- engage. 56 EXT. SPACE - THE ENTERPRISE (OPTICAL) The Enterprise streaks away -- leaving the visibly battered Borg vessel in its wake. 56A INT. MAIN BRIDGE There is relief that they are putting some distance between themselves and the Borg. STAR TREK: "Q Who?" - 2/28/89 - ACT FOUR 41A. 56B OMITTED 57 INT. MAIN BRIDGE As before. DATA Captain -- the Borg ship is in pursuit. PICARD On screen. STAR TREK: "Q Who?" - 3/2/89 - ACT FOUR 42. 57A SCREEN (OPTICAL) We can see the Borg ship coming toward us. PICARD Magnify. The screen changes -- the Borg ship fills more of the screen. RIKER Increase by ten to the third. Now the Borg ship fills the screen -- we can see the hull of the Borg ship change. RIKER It's continuing to regenerate itself. PICARD Let's see if we can outrun it. (to com) Lietenant La Forge, I want maximum warp for as long as you can hold it. 58 INT MAIN ENGINEERING Geordi is by the pool table. Sonya is in the b.g. GEORDI Yes, sir. He's on the board -- increasing the speed. GEORDI We are passing warp eight point five. 58A SCENE The great engine is moving toward maximum output. GEORDI ... warp nine. He looks over and sees a very intense look on Sonya's face as she stares at the engine. STAR TREK: "Q Who?" - 3/2/89 - ACT FOUR 42A. 59 CONTINUED: The Borg ship is gaining. RIKER Arm the photon torpedoes. Recommend we try to slow them down. PICARD Agreed. WORF Torpedoes armed. PICARD Fire. STAR TREK: "Q Who?" - 3/2/89 - ACT FOUR 42AA. 58A CONTINUED: GEORDI What is it? Is there something the matter? She turns toward him. SONYA No. You can study the theory -- read the books -- analyze schematics... but nothing of it prepares you for this. I have just never see or felt anything so awesome. GEORDI Well let's see if we can't raise the level a few more knotches. Geordi moves to another position on the pool table. Sonya steps over across from him and watches with admiration as he fine tunes the warp drive. 59 INT. MAIN BRIDGE As before. STAR TREK "Q Who?"-2/28/89 - ACT FOUR 43. 60 EXT. SPACE - THE PHOTONS (OPTICAL) As the photon leaves the Enterprise. 61 INT. MAIN BRIDGE (OPTICAL) All eyes are locked on the main viewer as the photon torpedoes head for the Borg vessel... and explodes in a blinding flash of light. WORF They had no effect. GEORDI COM VOICE Bridge, this is Engineering. We are at warp nine point six five. WORF The Borg ship is still gaining. The crewman at Science One turns -- it's Q. Q They will follow this ship until you exhaust your fuel. They will wear down your defenses. Then you will be theirs. Picard looks from Q to the main viewscreen and the Borg ship which continues its relentless pursuit. Q (continuing) You're out of your league, Picard. You should have stayed where you belonged. Off Picard's reaction. FADE OUT. END OF ACT FOUR STAR TREK: "Q Who?"-2/27/89 - ACT FIVE 44. ACT FIVE FADE IN: 62 EXT. SPACE - THE ENTERPRISE (OPTICAL) The Enterprise is moving at maximum warp followed by the Borg ship. PICARD (V.O.) Captain's log supplemental. We are unable to maintain the gap between the Enterprise and the Borg ship. 63 INT. MAIN ENGINEERING Engine is pounding. Geordi moves from the pool table. Sonya is beside him -- now under pressure she is very calm. SONYA We are at the design limit. GEORDI Agreed. Bridge this is Engineering. PICARD COM VOICE Go ahead. GEORDI You've got all we can give you. 64 INT. MAIN BRIDGE Picard, Riker, Data, Troi, and off to the side is Q. PICARD I understand, Lieutenant La Forge. STAR TREK: "Q Who?"-2/27/89 - ACT FIVE 45. 64 CONTINUED: WORF Captain -- the enemy vessel is firing on us. The ship goes to RED ALERT. 65 EXT. SPACE - THE ENTERPRISE (OPTICAL) The Enterprise at maximum warp. As the missile arrives -- but instead of striking the ship, it forms a kind of umbrella which engulfs the Enterprise. 66 INT. MAIN BRIDGE As before. WORF There are no reports of any damage to the Enterprise. DATA The target was not the ship. The weapon was designed to drain the shields. WORF Shield effectiveness has been reduced twelve percent. WESLEY The Borg ship is closing. WORF They are firing again. 67 EXT. SPACE - THE ENTERPRISE (OPTICAL) A similiar missle leaves the Borg ship and streaks toward the Enterprise. 68 INT. MAIN BRIDGE As before. STAR TREK "Q Who?"-2/28/89 - ACT FIVE 46. 68 CONTINUED: WORF Shields have been reduced by forty one percent. Another hit and we will be defenseless. Q They are wearing you down. Soon you will be helpless. RIKER Arm the photon torpedoes. WORF Torpedoes armed. PICARD Fire the photons. 69 EXT. SPACE - THE PHOTONS (OPTICAL) As the photons leave the Enterprise en route to the Borg ship. The tordedoes explode, but the Borg ship is undamaged. 70 INT. BRIDGE As before. WORF The Borg ship was not damaged. Q You can't outrun them. You can't destroy them. If you damage them, the essence of what they are remains -- they regenerate and keep coming... eventually you will weaken -- your reserves will be gone... they are relentless. WORF The Borg ship is firing. STAR TREK: "Q Who?"-2/28/89 - ACT FIVE 47. 71 EXT. SPACE - THE ENTERPRISE (OPTICAL) As the missile from the Borg ship hits the Enterprise. 72 INT. MAIN BRIDGE This time the ship is rocked. WORF We have again lost the shields. 73 EXT. SPACE - THE ENTERPRISE (OPTICAL) The Borg ship closes on the Enterprise. It fires a beam at the Enterprise. Which hits in the area of the nacelles. The Enterprise comes out of warp. 74 INT. MAIN ENGINEERING Geordi is at the pool table. GEORDI Bridge -- we have lost the warp engines. 74A OMITTED 75 INT. MAIN BRIDGE As before. Q Now where's your smugness -- your arrogance? Do you still believe you are prepared for what awaits you? I tried to tell you but listening has never been one of your laudable attributes. It makes me quite happy to now say -- I told you so. WORF The Borg ship is re-establishing its tractor beam. RIKER Lock on photon torpedoes. STAR TREK: "Q Who?"-2/28/89 - ACT FIVE 47A. 75 CONTINUED: WORF Yes, sir. STAR TREK: "Q WHO?" -3/2/89 - ACT FIVE 48. 75 CONTINUED: (2) DATA Without our shields -- at this range there is a high degree of probability that a photon detonation could destroy the Enterprise. Riker and Picard exchange looks. RIKER Prepare to fire. Q I'll be leaving now. You thought you could handle it -- so handle it. PICARD Q. End this. Q What makes you think I am either inclined or capable to terminate this encounter? PICARD If we all die, here and now -- you will never be able to gloat. You wanted to frighten us -- we're frightened. You wanted to show that we are inadequate -- for the moment I will grant that. You want me to say that I need you. Right now -- I need you. We would expect Q to smirk, but he doesn't. He gives Picard a steady look. And with a little motion. 76 EXT. SPACE - THE ENTERPRISE (OPTICAL) With the same explosion of speed which got us here -- the Enterprise is flung back to where it started. 76A INT. MAIN BRIDGE (OPTICAL) Picard and the others react to the streaking stars on the viewscreen as they spin. STAR TREK: "Q WHO?" - 3/2/89 - ACT FIVE 48A. 76B EXT. SPACE - THE ENTERPRISE (OPTICAL) comes to a stop. 77 INT. MAIN BRIDGE (OPTICAL) RED ALERT ends. RIKER Position. STAR TREK: "Q Who?" - 3/2/89 - ACT FIVE 49. 77 CONTINUED: WESLEY Zero-seven-six mark two- two-five -- back where we started. Q That was a difficult admission. Another man would be humiliated to say those words. Another man would die before asking for help. Picard gives Q a steady look. PICARD I understand what you have done here Q, but the lesson could have been learned without the loss of eighteen members of my crew. Q If you can't take a little bloody nose -- maybe you had better go back home and crawl under your bed. It's not safe out here. It's wondrous -- with treasures to satiate desires both subtle and gross -- but it is not for the timid. Q leaves in a Q Flash. PICARD Set a course for the closest starbase. WESLEY Course set for Starbase eight three. 78 EXT. SPACE - THE ENTERPRISE (OPTICAL) As the Enterprise moves off to the starbase. 79 INT. TEN-FORWARD Picard is there with Guinan. STAR TREK "Q Who?"-2/28/89 - ACT FIVE 50. 79 CONTINUED: GUINAN Q has set a series of events in motion. Your contact with the Borg came long before it should. When you're ready, it might be possible to establish a relationship with them, but now -- now, you are only raw material to them. And since they are aware of your existence... PICARD They will be coming. GUINAN You can depend on it. PICARD Q might have done the right thing for the wrong reason. GUINAN Meaning? PICARD Perhaps we needed a good kick in our complacency to get us ready for what's ahead. Picard leaves Ten-Forward. Off Guinan reaction: FADE OUT. END OF ACT FIVE THE END STAR TREK: THE NEXT GENERATION "Samaritan Snare" #40272-143 Written by Robert L. McCullough Directed by Les Landau THE WRITING CREDITS MAY NOT BE FINAL AND SHOULD NOT BE USED FOR PUBLICITY OR ADVERTISING PURPOSES WITHOUT FIRST CHECKING WITH THE TELEVISION LEGAL DEPARTMENT. Copyright 1989 Paramount Pictures Corporation. All Rights Reserved. This script is not for publication or reproduction. No one is authorized to dispose of same. If lost or destroyed, please notify the Script Department. 3RD REVISED FINAL DRAFT MARCH 8, 1989 STAR TREK: "Samaritan Snare" - 3/7/89 - CAST STAR TREK: THE NEXT GENERATION "Samaritan Snare" CAST PICARD GREBNEDLOG RIKER REGINOD DATA PULASKI SURGEON TROI BIOMOLECULAR PHYSIOLOGIST GEORDI WORF WESLEY Non-Speaking SONYA SEVERAL PAKLEDS TRANSPORTER CHIEF (V.O.) NURSES MEDICAL TEAM Non-Speaking ANESTHESIOLOGIST N.D. CREWMEMBERS ORDERLIES STAR TREK: "Samaritan Snare" - 3/7/89 - SETS STAR TREK: THE NEXT GENERATION "Samaritan Snare" SETS INTERIORS EXTERIORS USS ENTERPRISE USS ENTERPRISE MAIN BRIDGE SICKBAY/PULASKI'S OFFICE SHUTTLE TWO SHUTTLE BAY TWO CORRIDOR MONDOR TRANSPORTER ROOM OBSERVATION LOUNGE STARBASE 515 MAIN ENGINEERING MEDICAL COMPLEX MONDOR BRIDGE WEAPONS BAY SHUTTLE TWO STARBASE SCYLLA 515 SURGICAL SUITE STAR TREK: "Samaritan Snare - 3/7/89 - PRONUNCIATION GUIDE STAR TREK: THE NEXT GENERATION "Samaritan Snare" PRONUNCIATION GUIDE RHOMBOID DRONEGAR SECTOR Romboyd DRAWN-i-gar PAKLED PACK-led GREBNEDLOG Greb-NED-log REGINOD REGG-in-odd BONESTELL BONE-stel NAUSICAAN NAW-sik-can THORACIC POLYCHROMATICS thu-RAS-ik poly-kro-MAT-iks HETEROCYCLIC DECLINATION het-ah-row-SYK-lik dek-lah-NAY-shun MYOCARDIAL ENZYME my-ah-CARD-ee-el EN-zime STAR TREK: THE NEXT GENERATION "Samaritan Snare" TEASER FADE IN: 1 EXT. SPACE - THE ENTERPRISE (OPTICAL) Cruises at warp speed as we hear: PICARD (V.O.) Captain's log, Stardate 42723.8. The Enterprise is en route to the Epsilon Nine Sector for astronomical survey of a new pulsar cluster. In the meantime, Ensign Crusher will be diverting to Starbase five one five for progressive Starfleet exams... 2 INT. MAIN BRIDGE - THE TURBOLIFT DOORS open and WESLEY enters the bridge, where RIKER, DATA, and WORF are at their usual stations, supernumeraries filling in as needed. Wesley steps up to Riker, who hands him a Starfleet communications rectangle. RIKER This just came in from Starfleet-- WESLEY (taking the disk) The testing parameters? Data steps up to them: DATA Do not be apprehensive. I found the Academy examinations quite elementary. WESLEY You would. STAR TREK: "Samaritan Snare" - 3/8/89 - TEASER 2. 2 CONTINUED: RIKER Your earlier test results were good enough to get you Academy credit for your work here. I don't think you have anything to worry about. WESLEY But those Academy cadets are pretty competitive, you know. RIKER They don't have your practical experience, Wes. DATA Commander Riker is correct. While the information imparted to cadets at the Academy is unquestionably vital for prospective Starfleet officers, it nevertheless requires a significant period of supplementary systems training and situational disciplines. RIKER Data... isn't that what I just said? DATA Yes, Commander. But not quite as perspicuously. Riker and Wesley react to that as we GO TO: 3 INT. SICKBAY/PULASKI'S OFFICE - PICARD paces in front of PULASKI, obviously being evasive: PICARD I won't have you telling me what course to set! PULASKI As chief medical officer, I am ordering you to report to Starbase five one five immediately! PICARD Oh, please. I feel fine. STAR TREK: "Samaritan Snare" - 3/8/89 - TEASER 3. 3 CONTINUED: PULASKI The truth is, you've neglected this far too long. PICARD This ship has a mission to carry out. PULASKI An astronomical survey to be conducted by the science officers, I believe. PICARD I've been looking forward to seeing the Epsilon Pulsar Cluster for myself. PULASKI Then we'll perform the procedure right here. PICARD Absolutely not. PULASKI My staff and I are perfectly capable of giving you the replacement. PICARD That's not the point. Not only am I in splendid health, but it would be inappropriate for you to perform the procedure. PULASKI Why Captain Picard, I had no idea. You do have an ego, don't you? PICARD Clarify. PULASKI You're concerned about your image. PICARD I never said that. STAR TREK: "Samaritan Snare" - 3/8/89 - TEASER 4. 3 CONTINUED: (2) PULASKI Don't worry. Get yourself down to Starbase five one five and your image will be safe with me. He reacts to that, exiting as we GO TO: 4 INT. MAIN BRIDGE - THE TURBOLIFT DOORS open and Picard steps out, nearly bumping into Wesley who was about to enter the turbolift: WESLEY Captain... excuse me. PICARD I understand you're heading for Starbase five one five. WESLEY Yes, sir. I was just on my way to Shuttle Bay Two. PICARD Good. I have some business of my own there. I shall accompany. you. Wesley reacts, eyes widening, his voice cracking: WESLEY You will? (then, composing himself) I mean, yessir! PICARD Prepare the shuttle for immediate departure. WESLEY Aye, sir. Wesley exits via the turbolift; Riker reacts to all of this, steps up to Picard. RIKER Is there something I can take care of for you at Starbase five one five? STAR TREK: "Samaritan Snare" - 3/8/89 - TEASER 5. 4 CONTINUED: PICARD I'm afraid not, Number One. RIKER But you'll miss the Epsilon Pulsar survey. PICARD I'm very well aware of that. You have the bridge. Carry on. With that, Picard turns and exits into the Ready Room. Riker considers all of this, shares a concerned glance with the other bridge officers and then follows Picard into the Ready Room as we GO TO: 4A INT. CAPTAIN'S READY ROOM - PICARD turns to face Riker, as the door slides shut behind them: PICARD What is it, Number One? RIKER Is something wrong? This trip to Starbase five one five seems rather unexpected. Picard smiles awkwardly, goes about the business of picking up some reading material for his journey: PICARD Not to worry. Ensign Crusher and I will rendezvous with you on your return from the Epsilon Pulsar Cluster. RIKER Forgive my saying so, sir, but you're being rather enigmatic. PICARD Consider it captain's privilege. RIKER As first officer, I have complete security clearance-- STAR TREK: "Samaritan Snare" - 3/8/89 - TEASER 6. 4A CONTINUED: PICARD This has nothing to do with ship's business. (then, with a sigh) Suffice it to say that this is strictly a matter of ...vanity. Picard heads for the door with his books and exits as we GO TO: 5 INT. CORRIDOR - GEORDI is on his way to Engineering with SONYA, walking with Wesley, who is obviously worried about something: GEORDI Starbase five one five's not exactly around the corner, Wes. You have quite a trip ahead of you. WESLEY Yeah. I know. GEORDI Relax. You'll do fine on your exams. WESLEY It's not the exams I'm worried about. It's Captain Picard. SONYA Why? He's not taking the exams. WESLEY He's coming with me to starbase. Just the two of us. Nearly a six-hour transit. What am I going to talk to him about for six hours? SONYA Archaeology...semantics... literature... art... you can learn a lot from Captain Picard. Just then, Picard approaches: STAR TREK: "Samaritan Snare" - 3/8/89 - TEASER 7. 5 CONTINUED: GEORDI Nice day for a little trip, Captain? PICARD Hardly. Picard and Wesley head off down another corridor as Geordi and Sonya react to Picard's mood as we GO TO: 5A EXT. SPACE - THE ENTERPRISE (OPTICAL) comes out of warp, decelerating to impulse speed while 6 OMITTED 7 INT. MAIN BRIDGE - DATA is in his "Ops" chair as he hears: PICARD (V.O.) Shuttle Number Two ready for departure. DATA We are at impulse speed and you are cleared for departure. 8 EXT. SPACE (OPTICAL) the shuttle exits the Shuttle Bay. 9 INT. MAIN BRIDGE - CONTINUOUS (OPTICAL) - RIKER enters from the Ready Room, looking up at the viewscreen now to see the shuttle streaking away. He crosses to Data: RIKER Data... wasn't the captain looking forward to this mission to the Epsilon Pulsar Cluster? DATA So he had said. STAR TREK: "Samaritan Snare" - 3/8/89 - TEASER 8. 9 CONTINUED: RIKER Then what would make him change his mind? Why would he leave the ship now? Data reacts to that, exchanging a concerned glance with Riker. Suddenly, Worf pipes up with: WORF Receiving a Mayday on all frequencies, sir! RIKER Source? WORF Rhomboid Dronegar Sector zero-zero-six-- RIKER Detail. WORF Ship...unidentified...distress. Nothing more. RIKER Set course for Rhomboid Dronegar zero-zero-six at warp seven. Data looks to Riker, quietly concerned: DATA Sir... Rhomboid Dronegar sector will put us at considerable distance from Captain Picard. RIKER I know, Data. I know. FADE OUT. END OF TEASER STAR TREK: "Samaritan Snare" - 3/8/89 - ACT ONE 9. ACT ONE FADE IN: 9A EXT. SPACE - THE ENTERPRISE (OPTICAL) flashes past at warp seven while 10 INT. THE BRIDGE - RIKER is in his chair while Data and Worf man their stations as: DATA Entering Rhomboid Dronegar Sector zero-zero-six. WORF I have a ship on target path. RIKER Slow to impulse speed. 10A EXT. SPACE - THE ENTERPRISE (OPTICAL) decelerates 10B INT. THE BRIDGE - RIKER rises now: RIKER Viewer. Data taps his console appropriately and 11 THE MAIN VIEWER (OPTICAL) comes alive with the image of an unusual alien ship. Hardly aerodynamic, this craft appears to be something of a throwback when contrasted to the Enterprise. It's dead in the water. Riker approaches the screen, curious while Worf remains cautious: STAR TREK: "Samaritan Snare" - 3/8/89 - ACT ONE 10. 11 CONTINUED: WORF Deploy shields, sir? RIKER Hold fast. (then) Data? DATA (re: the ship) Basic early design capable of sub-light travel only. WORF Commander, we are being hailed. RIKER On screen. The VIEWSCREEN image glitches for a split-second and then comes alive with the interior of the Pakled ship. It looks like an analog throwback to the late twenty-first century. A number of slothful, droopy-eyed humanoids appear to be working with great confusion on some engineering control panels in the b.g., as their commander, GREBNEDLOG, steps into foreground. RIKER I am First Officer William Riker. This is the USS Enterprise, responding to your distress signal-- Grebnedlog arches his massive brow, his eyes opening just a bit wider as he responds with typically wistful Pakled hypoplastic speech, almost a sense of hopeful longing in their every word: GREBNEDLOG Uh-hunh. Riker exchanges a curious glance with Data, then back to screen: RIKER What is your problem? GREBNEDLOG We are far from home. STAR TREK: "Samaritan Snare" - 3/8/89 - ACT ONE 11. 11 CONTINUED: (2) RIKER So are we, but you sent out a Mayday-- GREBNEDLOG Uh-hunh RIKER Do you need help? GREBNEDLOG We are Pakleds. Our ship is the Mondor. (re the work in the b.g.) It is broken. Riker sighs impatiently, turns to Data: DATA Sensors indicate engineering problems. RIKER Lieutentant La Forge to bridge... DATA They have experienced total guidance system failure and they have less than twenty-four hours' reserve power. RIKER (to viewscreen) What brings you so far from home? GREBNEDLOG (wistfully) We look for things. RIKER What were you looking for? GREBNEDLOG Things we need. RIKER Can you be more specific? GREBNEDLOG Uh-hunh. STAR TREK: "Samaritan Snare" - 3/8/89 - ACT ONE 12. 11 CONTINUED: (3) RIKER Then please do so. GREBNEDLOG Things that make us go. We need help. In the b.g., the turbolift doors open and Geordi steps onto the bridge, spots the viewscreen. He looks at the Pakleds, grins wryly: GEORDI Let me guess: their rubber band broke, right? RIKER (to viewscreen) What is the nature of your mission? GREBNEDLOG (nodding slowly) We look for things. RIKER (aside; to Data) Do you hear an echo? (then, back to viewscreen) Understood. Our chief engineer will beam aboard to help you-- (to Worf) Out. Geordi reacts to that as all eyes turn toward him: GEORDI Wait a minute... me? And as Riker pats him reassuringly on the back, Worf turns from his station, concern etched all over his Klingon countenance: WORF (re: the viewscreen) Do we truly need to send our chief engineer over to them? RIKER They obviously need our help. STAR TREK: "Samaritan Snare" - 3/8/89 - ACT ONE 13. 11 CONTINUED: (4) WORF Why do we not simply give them the information they need to make their repairs? RIKER Do you honestly think they could handle our technical specifications? WORF We don't know that much about them. I urge caution. RIKER Acknowledged, Worf... but we have an obligation to render aid. (turns to Geordi). Report to the Transporter Room with all necessary gear. GEORDI Aye, sir. With that, Geordi exits. Worf remains concerned, leans in to Riker with: WORF We need more information. Riker turns to Data: RIKER Do you have anything else on them? DATA They are a relatively benign species. RIKER Don't they seem a little... slow? DATA They may merely have poorly-developed language skills. Worf leans in with: WORF What about weapons? STAR TREK: "Samaritan Snare" - 3/8/89 - ACT ONE 14. 11 CONTINUED: (5) DATA Our scan shows very limited armaments. RIKER I think we can relax, Worf. They can't even get their ship moving without our help, and we certainly have them outmanned and outgunned. Worf can't argue with that as we GO TO: 12 EXT. SPACE - PICARD'S SHUTTLE (OPTICAL) hurtling past us at impulse speed while: 13 INT. THE SHUTTLE - WESLEY handles the controls with confidence and aplomb. Picard checks the instruments with a scowl: PICARD E.t.a. thirteen-thirty hours. WESLEY Not exactly warp speed, sir. PICARD More like a late twenty-second century interplanetary journey. WESLEY Sir? PICARD You should read more history, Ensign. WESLEY Yes sir. PICARD (mumbling to himself) Complete waste of time... WESLEY Pardon, sir? STAR TREK: "Samaritan Snare" - 3/8/89 - ACT ONE 15. 13 CONTINUED: PICARD I shouldn't be taking this trip at all. I belong back on the Enterprise. WESLEY Why are you going with me to Starbase five one five, Captain? PICARD (snappish) It's certainly not my idea! Wesley reacts, afraid to probe further. Picard glances over at: PICARD (continuing) I'm sorry. I don't mean to take it out on you. (then) I just hate going through another damned cardiac replacement. WESLEY Cardiac replacement? I didn't know... PICARD Now you do. WESLEY A parthenogenetic implant? PICARD What else would it be? (then, a bit softer) My own heart was injured and a replacement was necessary. That would have been it except that the replacement is flawed and must now be put right. WESLEY Why would anyone use a flawed replacement? Picard ices over at that, glaring out at the stars ahead now: PICARD Just pilot the shuttle, Ensign. And on Picard's obdurate countenance, we GO TO: STAR TREK: "Samaritan Snare" - 3/8/89 - ACT ONE 16. 14 EXT. SPACE - THE ENTERPRISE (OPTICAL) as it maintains its position near the Mondor while 15 INT. THE BRIDGE - RIKER turns his attention to the viewscreen where the Pakleds continue with their inefectual attempts at repair. RIKER All right. Let's get these repairs made so we can all be on our way. (then) First officer to La Forge... 16 INT. TRANSPORTER ROOM (OPTICAL) - GEORDI is on the transporter platform, "tool kit" in hand: GEORDI Aye, Commander. Ready for transport. RIKER (V.O.) Proceed. GEORDI Energize... And as Geordi DEMATERIALIZES, we GO TO: 17 INT. THE PAKLED SHIP "MONDOR" (OPTICAL) - GEORDI MATERIALIZES, startling the Pakleds who react with their own brand of anxiety: GEORDI Hey, hey, it's okay. I'm here to help. Take it easy. Grebnedlog approaches tentatively with what appears to be profound, heartfelt sincerity: GREBNEDLOG We are far from home. Geordi reacts to that non-sequitur, eager to get down to business: STAR TREK: "Samaritan Snare" - 3/8/89 - ACT ONE 17. 17 CONTINUED: GEORDI What seems to be the problem? GREBNEDLOG Our ship is the Mondor. GEORDI Right. I got that already. (then, looking around) Who's in charge of engineering? GREBNEDLOG My friend. His name is Reginod. GEORDI (looking around) Think I could meet him? Another Pakled steps up. Grebnedlog makes the "introduction": GREBNEDLOG We have an engineer. GEORDI Great... GREBNEDLOG He is Reginod. GEORDI Yes, I think you mentioned that. REGINOD We look for things. GEORDI So I've heard. REGINOD (re the ship) It is broken. GEORDI Well... maybe I can fix it. GREBNEDLOG Can you make our ship go? GEORDI I think so. STAR TREK: "Samaritan Snare" - 3/8/89 - ACT ONE 18. 17 CONTINUED: (2) GREBNEDLOG (to Geordi) We look for things to make us go. Geordi reacts, feeling like somebody's "got their needle stuck". He smiles patiently: GEORDI Fellas... why don't you show me where your guidance system is? Geordi starts wandering toward the back of the ship. Reginod turns to Grebnedlog, smiling: REGINOD He is smart. Grebnedlog returns the salivary smile as we GO TO: 18 INT. ENTERPRISE'S MAIN BRIDGE-TURBOLIFT DOORS (OPTICAL) open and Troi enters the scene, immediately riveted by what she sees up on the viewscreen. She steps over to Riker and Data, who regard the scene with Geordi with bemusement: TROI Commander... Lieutenant La Forge is on an alien ship? RIKER Yes. We're rendering assistance to some curious throwbacks. DATA How they ever mastered the rudiments of space travel is a genuine curiosity. TROI Commander... Those aliens... what they feel is not helplessness ... Lieutenant La Forge is in great danger! Riker and Data react to that new input as STAR TREK: "Samaritan Snare" - 3/8/89 - ACT ONE 19. 18A GEORDI goes about his work, unaware of any hazard as we FADE OUT. END ACT ONE STAR TREK: "Samaritan Snare" - 3/8/89 - ACT TWO 20. ACT TWO FADE IN: 19 EXT. SPACE - THE ENTERPRISE (OPTICAL) remains in position, in some proximity to the Mondor. 20 INT. THE MAIN BRIDGE (OPTICAL) - TROI remains transfixed, Riker, Data and Worf reacting as she stands there, staring at the viewscreen: TROI Danger... great danger... RIKER Can you be more specific, Counselor? TROI They are insincere... It is not our help they want. RIKER Help is all they're going to get. They certainly can't force anything upon us, can they? TROI You feel they are weak. RIKER (re: the viewscreen) Look at them. Not exactly Jarada or Romulans. Data looks over at Riker, shares her concerns now: DATA Our Betazoid counselor is often aware of things beyond our perceptive abilities. Riker reacts to this, exchanges a glance of concern with Worf as we GO TO: STAR TREK: "Samaritan Snare" - 3/8/89 - ACT TWO 21. 21 EXT. SPACE - PICARD'S SHUTTLE (OPTICAL) continues on its journey while 22 INT. THE SHUTTLE - PICARD appears to be reading, ignoring Wesley. Then, putting his reading down for a moment: PICARD Van Doren's technique has been perfected to two point four percent. WESLEY Sir? PICARD The cardiac replacement procedure. It has a very low mortality rate. Two point four percent. WESLEY Those are pretty good odds. He considers that for a beat, then admits: PICARD The fact is, I'm not interested in having my innards become the subject of Starfleet gossip. WESLEY Of course, sir. But why didn't you have Doctor Pulaski perform the operation? You could've trusted her to keep it quiet. PICARD Let's just say I have personal reasons and leave it at that, shall we? Picard returns to his "reading". Wesley reacts, his curiosity stifled now as we GO TO: 23 INT. THE MONDOR - GEORDI is hard at work on the Pakled guidance system, really enjoying himself. Several Pakleds including Grebnedlog and Reginod hover nearby, observing him as he explains: STAR TREK: "Samaritan Snare" - 3/8/89 - ACT TWO 22. 23 CONTINUED: GEORDI The power needs to be rerouted through this venturi chamber before it can be channeled through the engine coils. REGINOD It is broken. GEORDI But not for long. See? We're going to reconfigure these separators here... Reginod looks to Grebnedlog, who nods in agreement: GREBNEDLOG It is broken. REGINOD (to Geordi) You are brilliant. Geordi reacts, flattered, but realistic: GEORDI Actually, any first year engineering intern could do the same thing-- Just then, Geordi reacts to his communicator as he hears: RIKER (V.O.) Lieutenant La Forge, this is Commander Riker... Geordi taps his communicator and responds: GEORDI Yes, Commander. Go ahead. 24 INT. THE ENTERPRISE MAIN BRIDGE (OPTICAL) Riker and Troi stand before the viewscreen, observing Geordi aboard the Mondor: RIKER Are you all right? STAR TREK: "Samaritan Snare" - 3/8/89 - ACT TWO 23. 24 CONTINUED: GEORDI Sure. Why do you ask? RIKER Counselor Troi has expressed misgivings about your absence from The Enterprise. In the b.g., Grebnedlog and Reginod exchange an uncharacteristically alert glance by way of response to that while: GEORDI I don't think there's much to worry about. RIKER Understood. But as soon as the repairs are completed, I want you back here. GEORDI Aye, sir, I should be done momentarily. Riker looks to Troi who remains unshaken in her convictions while: 25 INT. THE MONDOR - GEORDI twists the last framiss on the final spigot, looks up with a smile: GEORDI There. Guidance is up and running. Suddenly, the lights flicker, dim, and go dark. A GROAN is heard as reserve power kicks in, lights come up one-half and Geordi smiles: GEORDI Main power failure? GREBNEDLOG Will our ship go now? GEORDI The guidance system's repaired, but you're not going anywhere without main power. STAR TREK: "Samaritan Snare" - 3/8/89 - ACT TWO 24. 25 CONTINUED: GREBNEDLOG (to Reginod) It is broken. REGINOD (to Geordi) Can you make it go? Geordi looks at the Pakleds, sighs heavily, then taps his communicator: GEORDI Commander Riker, it looks like this might take a little longer than I anticipated... And as Geordi returns to this new problem... 25A INT. ENTERPRISE BRIDGE - RIKER AND TROI react to that with mutually mounting concern as we go to... 26 EXT. SPACE - PICARD'S SHUTTLE (OPTICAL) continues its impulse-speed journey while 27 INT. THE SHUTTLE - PICARD finally puts his reading down. Rubs his eyes. It's a long trip. He seems lost in his thoughts, somewhat unfocused as he studies the passing starfields. At his side, Wesley checks his instruments carefully, takes a deep breath as all seems well. Then, building his courage for a beat, he turns to Picard: WESLEY You don't really care much for people, do you? PICARD What? WESLEY It's okay. You can just do without most people. I can understand that -- STAR TREK: "Samaritan Snare" - 3/8/89 - ACT TWO 25. 27 CONTINUED: PICARD Ensign...Wesley. That's not true. I have great regard for you, for example. You're a fine young man. WESLEY You don't have to say that. PICARD I do not say what I do not mean. WESLEY Well, it's pretty obvious how you feel. PICARD Is it? How so? WESLEY Well, everyone knows. You don't like kids. PICARD I simply have... other priorities. WESLEY That's too bad. (then) You might've made a pretty good father. PICARD Thank you. WESLEY Didn't you ever wish you had kids of your own? A moment of silence as Picard considers that. Then: PICARD Wishing for a thing does not make it so. Wesley ponders that reality as we GO TO: 28 EXT. SPACE - THE ENTERPRISE (OPTICAL) remains positioned near the Pakled ship Mondor while STAR TREK: "Samaritan Snare" - 3/8/89 - ACT TWO 26. 29 INT. THE MAIN BRIDGE (OPTICAL) Worf, Data, Troi and Riker are all in position. Riker is beginning to lose his patience as he turns to Data: RIKER We send him over there for one set of repairs and now they need him for more. DATA Their ship is apparently quite fragile. Riker steps forward to the viewscreen where he can see the Pakleds working on their ship, Geordi in the distant b.g., hard at work in a console panel: RIKER This is Riker on board the Enterprise. The Pakleds ignore Riker's summons, continue milling around looking for the solution to their myriad problems: RIKER (continuing) I repeat. This is Commander Riker of the Enterprise. Geordi looks up from his work briefly, calling to Riker from the b.g.: GEORDI Almost got it, Commander-- He returns to his work as Grebnedlog turns to face the viewscreen now, his eyes almost completely disinterested: GREBNEDLOG We look for things. RIKER Apparently your ship is in need of more than minor repairs. GREBNEDLOG Things to make it go. RIKER We will use our tractor beam to tow you to your nearest base. STAR TREK: "Samaritan Snare" - 3/8/89 - ACT TWO 27. 29 CONTINUED: GREBNEDLOG (re: Geordi) He can make it go. RIKER Yes, but we need our chief engineer back on board our ship-- Just then, all power is restored to the Pakled ship, and as lights come full-up, Geordi pulls himself out of the console panel in the b.g. to hear: GREBNEDLOG He is smart. Geordi steps up beside Grebnedlog. GEORDI All done, Commander. RIKER Prepare to beam over. 29A INT. MONDOR BRIDGE (OPTICAL) GEORDI Yes, sir. Reginod steps up behind Geordi with: REGINOD You are good. GEORDI Thanks. We aim to please. REGINOD We need you. GEORDI I'm flattered. Now I hate to repair and run, but if you'll excuse me... And Geordi steps away from the others, announcing to Riker: GEORDI One to beam aboard-- STAR TREK: "Samaritan Snare" - 3/8/89 - ACT TWO 28. 29A CONTINUED: Suddenly, Grebnedlog reaches over and with surprising sleight-of-hand, deftly snatches Geordi's small phaser away from him. GEORDI Hey! And as Geordi reaches to take the phaser back, Grebnedlog fires with the stun setting, knocking Geordi back, slamming him into a bulkhead, knocking his VISOR off: 29B RIKER (OPTICAL) reacts immediately, calling out: RIKER Transporter room, beam La Forge over immediately. TRANSPORTER CHIEF (V.O.) Aye... negative response, sir! RIKER Try again! TRANSPORTER CHIEF (V.O.) Negative response! DATA The Pakled ship has a shield up, sir! RIKER A shield? What kind? DATA It appears to be beyond their technology... similar to Romulan shields! Riker clenches his jaw, commands the Pakleds now: RIKER Do not interfere with our transporter beam. Repeat. Drop your shield-- Suddenly, the viewscreen glitches and goes to exterior view of the Mondor. STAR TREK: "Samaritan Snare" - 3/8/89 - ACT TWO 29. 29B CONTINUED: RIKER Status! WORF Viewer transmission terminated and blocked. Riker shares a look of mounting concern with his crew as we, FADE OUT: END ACT TWO STAR TREK: "Samaritan Snare" - 3/8/89 - ACT THREE 30. ACT THREE FADE IN: 30 EXT. SPACE - THE ENTERPRISE (OPTICAL) remains in view of the Pakled's Mondor. 31 INT. THE MAIN BRIDGE - RIKER, DATA, WORF, TROI are all in position as Riker commands his crew: RIKER Hail on all frequencies. DATA Running frequency search... negative response. RIKER They're ignoring us! DATA Apparently so, sir. WORF Phasers ready, sir. RIKER Shields up. Worf responds, activating his security station console, reporting: WORF Shields up. RIKER Sensors at maximum sensitivity. Data responds with precision, then reports: DATA Sensors at maximum. WORF Phasers ready, sir. STAR TREK: "Samaritan Snare" - 3/8/89 - ACT THREE 31. 31 CONTINUED: RIKER Hold fire. Lieutenant La Forge is on that ship. And as Riker and his crew contemplate that grim reality, we GO TO: 32 EXT. SPACE - PICARD'S SHUTTLE (OPTICAL) continues cruising at impulse speed while 33 INT. PICARD'S SHUTTLE - WESLEY carefully probes, eager to learn more about Picard: WESLEY Were you ever married? PICARD My career always came first. I never had time. WESLEY Don't you ever get lonely? PICARD There have been certain costs involved. WESLEY Well, I'll bet you've broken your fair share of hearts along the way... PICARD A man needs to be careful about that sort of thing. WESLEY Don't worry about me. Where women are concerned, I'm in complete control. PICARD Really? I've always had to work at it. WESLEY Have you always known what you've wanted... been so disciplined? STAR TREK: "Samaritan Snare" - 3/8/89 - ACT THREE 32. 33 CONTINUED: PICARD No. (re his chest) That's why I'm going in to get this thing replaced. WESLEY I don't understand. PICARD Well... I was a young Starfleet officer. Just a few years older than you are now. Green as hell. Top of my Academy Class, and oh, so proud. Too proud, as it turned out. WESLEY What happened? PICARD Several of us were on leave at Far Space Starbase Earhart... something of a galactic outpost in those days-- WESLEY Before the Klingons joined the Federation? PICARD That's right. My mates and I were at the Bonestell Recreation Facility, which was nothing more than a crossroads at the time. A trio of Nausicaans came in. They were spoiling for a confrontation with some fresh-faced young Starfleet officers like ourselves. Everyone in our group had the good sense to back away and give these Nausicaans wide berth. Everyone but me, that is. I stood toe-to-toe with the nastiest of the three and let him know what I thought of him, his partners, and his planet. I probably even made some passing reference to his questionable parentage. (MORE) STAR TREK: "Samaritan Snare" - 3/8/89 - ACT THREE 33. 33 CONTINUED: (2) PICARD (Cont'd) The next thing I knew, I had all three of them on me and I was fighting for my life. Acquitted myself quite well for several furious exchanges, I'm proud to say. WESLEY You fought them? And won? PICARD I had this one Nausicaan down on the floor in a particularly devious joint-lock when before I knew what was happening, one of his cohorts drew his weapon and impaled me through the back. Strange sensation, actually. Not much pain. Shock, certainly, at the sight of serrated metal coming out of one's chest, and then a certain giddy warmth. As I recall, I actually laughed aloud. It pierced my heart, of course, and if we hadn't been so near a medical facility I would surely have died. WESLEY Really? Really? Then what? PICARD Then nothing. I was no hero. I was an undisciplined, opinionated, loud-mouthed young man who was far out of his league. It was a great and painful lesson, but I learned it well. I only hope you won't need to learn it as I did... Wesley reacts with a gulp, realizing that he does indeed have a lot to learn as we GO TO: 34 EXT. SPACE - THE ENTERPRISE AND THE MONDOR (OPTICAL) are as before while STAR TREK: "Samaritan Snare" - 3/8/89 - ACT THREE 34. 35 INT. MAIN BRIDGE - RIKER paces, doing his best to keep his temper in check as he looks to Data: RIKER Data, come on... DATA I am programming the comm system to scan the interference patterns, but a full analysis will take time. Data reacts, his hands dexterously flying over his console like nothing we've ever seen him do before as we GO TO: 36 INT. THE MONDOR - GEORDI (OPTICAL) is hit by yet another phaser stun, slams back into a bulkhead and then struggles to his feet, shaking off his phaser's stun effects: GEORDI Please... no more. GREBNEDLOG This is fun. Geordi reaches out, groping for his VISOR: GEORDI My VISOR... Reginod picks it up, studies it: REGINOD This does something. Geordi reacts, realizes the Pakled has the VISOR now: GEORDI Yes. It allows me to see. Reginod and Grebnedlog react curiously. They wave their digits in front of Geordi's face. He doesn't react, reaching out for the VISOR as they keep it away from him: GEORDI Where is it? Give it to me-- STAR TREK: "Samaritan Snare" - 3/8/89 - ACT THREE 35. 36 CONTINUED: GREBNEDLOG Can you make us go now? Geordi lunges for him, stumbling. Reginod realizes: REGINOD He cannot make us go. GREBNEDLOG He is not smart. (re: the VISOR) This is smart. He hands the VISOR back to Geordi, and he clicks it back into place, reacting now at the sight of his phaser in Grebnedlog's mitt: GEORDI (re: the phaser) Be careful with that thing. GREBNEDLOG You want to hurt us. GEORDI What? I came here to help you. (re: the ship) I fixed your guidance system and the main power generator, didn't I? REGINOD (re: the phaser) We can make more. Geordi reacts, realizing: GEORDI You have a replicator? GREBNEDLOG (with pride) It is not broken. GEORDI I didn't come here to give you weapons. GREBNEDLOG (re: the phaser, points it at Geordi) You will make more. STAR TREK: "Samaritan Snare" - 3/8/89 - ACT THREE 36. 36 CONTINUED: (2) Geordi reacts to that threat, considering his options now as we GO TO: 37 INT. THE ENTERPRISE - MAIN BRIDGE - WORF crosses to Riker with: WORF Commander, a photon torpedo may penetrate their shield. RIKER Any hostile move on our part would only jeopardize Geordi. WORF But what do the Pakleds want? Riker glances over at Troi, hoping she has an answer: RIKER Counselor? TROI They have what they want... for now. Riker reacts to that as we GO TO: 38 INT. PICARD'S SHUTTLE - PICARD (OPTICAL) thumbs through one of the books he's brought along. Then, turning to Wesley: PICARD Did you read that book I gave you? Wesley reacts, barely concealing a grimace as he recalls: WESLEY Some of it. PICARD That's reassuring. WESLEY I just don't have much time. STAR TREK: "Samaritan Snare" - 3/8/89 - ACT THREE 37. 38 CONTINUED: PICARD (re the book in his hand) There is no greater challenge than the study of philosophy. Wesley glances over at Picard's book: WESLEY William James sure won't be on my Starfleet exams. PICARD The important things never will be. Anyone can be trained to deal with technology, and the mechanics of piloting a starship. WESLEY But Starfleet Academy-- PICARD It takes more than just that. Open your mind to the past... to history, art, philosophy. And then... (re: the stars) ... this will mean something. Wesley considers this, almost embarrassed as he realizes Picard does truly care about him. Then: PICARD (continuing) Just consider James' wisdom: "Philosophy... is not a technical matter... it is our sense of what life honestly means... our individual way of feeling the total push and pressure of the cosmos." (then) That's what I want for you. Wesley reacts to that and as they move closer to starbase, we GO TO: 39 EXT. SPACE - THE ENTERPRISE (OPTICAL) hasn't moved, still in sight of the Mondor while STAR TREK: "Samaritan Snare" - 3/8/89 - ACT THREE 38. 40 INT. MAIN BRIDGE - TROI steps up to Riker as she reports her feelings: TROI It is all deception. Lies. RIKER Everything? What about the distress call? TROI Nothing the Pakleds have said or done has been sincere. Data looks up from his console: DATA Intensified scan shows their guidance system is perfectly intact, as is their power generator. RIKER Then what was Geordi repairing? DATA Apparently, the putative malfunctions were carefully programmed into their ship's computer. RIKER I didn't think the Pakleds had that kind of technology. DATA They seem to have made some technological leaps forward, Commander. RIKER But why would they go through the charade of needing our help? TROI For the sole purpose of making Lieutenant La Forge their prisoner. RIKER Options? STAR TREK: "Samaritan Snare" - 3/8/89 - ACT THREE 39. 40 CONTINUED: WORF Tactically speaking, we have three choices: we can negotiate, attack, or simply abandon Lieutenant La Forge. Riker reacts to these uncomfortable options as we GO TO: 41 EXT./INT. STARBASE 515 MEDICAL COMPLEX Picard and Wesley approach the entrance to this high-tech Starfleet facility: PICARD You don't want to be late for your exams, Ensign. WESLEY I've still got some time, sir. PICARD Why do I get the feeling you're acting like some kind of escort? WESLEY Doctor Pulaski asked me to make sure you actually went inside. PICARD That woman. She would. WESLEY Sir? PICARD What is it? WESLEY I enjoyed our trip together. Picard's momentarily taken aback; the young man actually cares about him. PICARD So did I. After a brief, moment of mutual feeling, Picard turns and heads into the medical facility as we GO TO: STAR TREK: "Samaritan Snare" - 3/8/89 - ACT THREE 40. 41A EXT. SPACE - THE ENTERPRISE (OPTICAL) hovers squarely in front of the Mondor. 42 INT. THE ENTERPRISE - MAIN BRIDGE (OPTICAL) Riker and the others react as Data monitors his panel: DATA They are initiating visual contact-- RIKER Maybe we'll find out what the hell they really want. The viewscreen comes alive with the image of Grebnedlog holding Geordi's phaser in his mitt. Reginod and the other Pakleds all hold replicated versions of the original now. Geordi is in the background, slowly struggling to his feet once again, propped up by Reginod as other Pakleds play recklessly with their phasers. One of them takes a shot at his comrade, missing him, like children playing with dangerous toys. Grebnedlog turns to face the viewscreen: GREBNEDLOG Enterprise. RIKER We demand the immediate return of our crewmember. GREBNEDLOG Request denied. RIKER Lower your shield! GREBNEDLOG Request denied. With that, he turns back toward Geordi, gives him a quick stun blast from the phaser, and as Geordi is slammed back into the bulkhead again, he collapses in a heap. 42A RIKER (OPTICAL) reacts, truly beside himself with anger now: STAR TREK: "Samaritan Snare" - 3/8/89 - ACT THREE 41. 42A CONTINUED: RIKER Stop it! What do you want? GREBNEDLOG (re: the phaser) Your ship has bigger ones. RIKER For defense against attack. GREBNEDLOG Your ship is strong. Smart. RIKER Our strength contributes to peace in this region of the galaxy. We mean no one harm. GREBNEDLOG You think we are not smart. RIKER I think you need to continue to develop -- GREBNEDLOG We are smart. RIKER Prove it. Return our man to us. GREBNEDLOG (re: Geordi) You want him? RIKER Yes, dammit! GREBNEDLOG Good. We want all computer information from your ship. (aims the phaser at Geordi again) Now. Riker and the others react to this frightening demand as we FADE OUT: END OF ACT THREE STAR TREK: "Samaritan Snare" - 3/8/89 - ACT FOUR 42. ACT FOUR FADE IN: 43 EXT. SPACE - THE ENTERPRISE (OPTICAL) maintains its position within sight of the Mondor while 44 INT. OBSERVATION LOUNGE Riker, Data, Worf, Troi and Pulaski are gathered around the table. All are grim, tense: RIKER We've got a man held hostage by alien forces and all I have are non-option options! I'd like some input... PULASKI Is Geordi all right? WORF (bristling) They've already hit him with multiple phaser stuns. PULASKI (to Riker) He could need medical attention. WORF Security team stands ready to take the initiative, sir. RIKER Data? DATA Our options have not changed. We can either respond to the Pakled demand or not. We can either use force or not. RIKER I've already answered their demand. Allowing access to the Enterprise computers by alien forces would be a complete breech of Starfleet security. STAR TREK: "Samaritan Snare" - 3/8/89 - ACT FOUR 43. 44 CONTINUED: WORF Then force it must be. Riker reacts, considering that more seriously than ever before now as we GO TO: 45 INT. STARBASE 515 SURGICAL SUITE - (OPTICAL) Picard lies on an operating table, surrounded by twenty-fourth century surgical equipment as NURSES prepare him for his procedure. Off to one side, a MEDICAL TEAM preps the replacement heart. The SURGEON steps up to PICARD, reassures him: SURGEON Ready? PICARD Get on with it, Doctor. I've got work to do. The surgeon nods to the ANESTHESIOLOGIST: SURGEON Activate Sterile Field. Neural calipers. The anesthesiologist places a silver wire caliper to Picard's head. The caliper receives a signal from a small console, which the anesthesiologist now attends to. A beat later, Picard calmly closes his eyes in perfect repose. The surgeon looks to his team: SURGEON This will be a secondary cardiac procedure with mid-line entry and excision of the early model unit. I anticipate no complications as the patient has had positive primary results and exhibits extraordinary physical condition. (then) We'll all be home in time for dinner. (holds his hand out, palm up) Tissue mitigator. A nurse responds by slapping a small, glowing glass rod in his hand as we GO TO: STAR TREK: "Samaritan Snare" - 3/8/89 - ACT FOUR 44. 46 INT. THE ENTERPRISE OBSERVATION LOUNGE - RIKER and his crew are still between the proverbial rock and a hard place as Data informs them: DATA There is very little information available on Pakled culture, but the eclectic range of their equipment would suggest that everything they have has been stolen from others. TROI And now they have become militant. DATA So it would seem. RIKER Rationale? TROI They are unwilling to wait for the timely evolution of their species' intellectual capacity. They seek instant knowledge, instant power and gratification. PULASKI You make them sound like petulant children. TROI Yes. Infantile humans are known for responses of a similar nature. RIKER Then suppose we treat them like children. DATA Sir? RIKER It's time we set some limits. DATA To what effect, sir? We are faced with an impossible conundrum. STAR TREK: "Samaritan Snare" - 3/8/89 - ACT FOUR 45. 46 CONTINUED: RIKER Not if we let Geordi give them something they want... and then create the right moment for him to take it away. TROI Would you be suggesting a ruse of some sort? RIKER I would. PULASKI And what if it fails? What'll happen to Geordi then? RIKER We don't have any choice. We have to try. 47 INT. STARBASE 515 SURGICAL SUITE - PICARD lies in repose, the surgical team calmly carrying out the cardiac replacement procedure. Hovering over Picard now is a large praying mantis-like piece of equipment that seems to reach down into his chest cavity: SURGEON There has been some capillary reaction here... let's proceed carefully... we'll need sharper focus on the thoracic polychromatics and verification of myocardial enzyme balance. The team attends to the equipment as the Surgeon continues his delicate work and now we GO TO: 48 INT. THE PAKLED MONDOR BRIDGE - GEORDI steels himself against the effects of the phaser shots he's already endured, looks up at the Pakleds: GEORDI Let me talk to them. I'll get you their computer banks. STAR TREK: "Samaritan Snare" - 3/8/89 - ACT FOUR 46. 48 CONTINUED: GREBNEDLOG We want to be smart. GEORDI So open the hailing frequency. They'll listen to me. GREBNEDLOG (to Reginod) We are smart. REGINOD We need their computer things. GREBNEDLOG Yes. (then, to Geordi) Yes. Grebnedlog turns an analog dial on a console and now 49 INT. THE ENTERPRISE BRIDGE - THE VIEWSCREEN (OPTICAL) comes to life with the image of the Mondor bridge. Riker steps up, flanked by Data, Worf, Pulaski, and Troi, reacting to: GEORDI Commander Riker? RIKER Yes, Lieutenant. We're here. GEORDI The Pakleds seem pretty sincere. GREBNEDLOG We want what we want. RIKER Our computer banks are non-negotiable. GEORDI Excuse me, Commander, but let's consider that for a minute. The Enterprise's protected memory storage is so extensive that it would take well over twenty-four hours just to access. (MORE) STAR TREK: "Samaritan Snare" - 3/8/89 - ACT FOUR 47. 49 CONTINUED: GEORDI (Cont'd) In that time, maybe we could all reach a more acceptable resolution to our little misunderstanding here. GREBNEDLOG We want to be smart. GEORDI (to Riker) Belive me, they're nothing if not persistent. GREBNEDLOG We want to be nothing if not persistent. GEORDI (to Riker) Nobody ever said they were great conversationalists. RIKER Where did they get their shields? GREBNEDLOG Yes. We like shields. GEORDI From what I've seen, half the systems on this ship have been stolen from Romulans, Jarada, Klingons, just about anybody they ever came in contact with. GREBNEDLOG We like to be smart. RIKER Confirmed, Lieutenant La Forge. They steal technology. DATA But they lack the ability to use it properly. Riker considers that, exchanges a conspiratorial glance with his crew, then clears his throat and intones: STAR TREK: "Samaritan Snare" - 3/8/89 - ACT FOUR 48. 49 CONTINUED: (2) RIKER (back to Geordi) You're an excellent chief engineer, Lieutenant. GEORDI Thank you, sir. RIKER And of course, your knowledge of phaser and photon weaponry is unmatched. GREBNEDLOG (chiming in mindlessly) We like phasers. GEORDI That's kind of you to say, sir, but Lieutenant Worf -- RIKER (cutting him off) Our missions are always inherently dangerous. Any of us could be called upon to make the ultimate sacrifice at any time. GEORDI Uh... yes, sir, but -- RIKER Speaking of time, Lieutenant, this may be your time. I shall personally miss you. Geordi reacts to that with confusion. Grebnedlog and Reginod glance at each other, concerned as Data steps up to speak to Geordi: DATA You will always be in my memory. GEORDI Data... wait a minute. Can't we.. ? DATA I shall miss you at weapons systems analysis. STAR TREK: "Samaritan Snare" - 3/8/89 - ACT FOUR 49. 49 CONTINUED: (3) Geordi wrinkles his brow as he considers that for a beat, then something begins to dawn upon him: GEORDI Weapons system analysis? (then, tentative, trying it out) I guess you'll just have to carry out the photon torpedo countdowns without me. DATA Exactly. Fond farewell. GREBNEDLOG (to Reginod) He knows about weapons. REGINOD He is smart. GREBNEDLOG (to Geordi) You can make us strong. GEORDI (with "humility") It's not something I like to talk about -- Just then, Worf steps up to face the viewscreen: WORF Lieutenant La Forge. GEORDI Worf... my old friend. WORF Any classified weapons knowledge you share with your captors will be considered treason. GEORDI (re the Pakleds) I may have no choice. WORF You will die without honor. GEORDI I know. Just my luck. STAR TREK: "Samaritan Snare" - 3/8/89 - ACT FOUR 50. 49 CONTINUED: (4) WORF You will never attain the twenty-four levels of awareness. Geordi reacts to that, making specific mental notes: GEORDI Twenty-four? That's quite a challenge. WORF Indeed. Twenty-four is the gateway to heroic salvation. With that, Grebnedlog reaches over to the console, twists the analog switch and cuts off further communication and the viewscreen goes black. Pulaski steps to Riker: PULASKI Do you think he understands? RIKER He'd better. TROI He is afraid. RIKER We all are, Counselor. 50 INT. THE MONDOR BRIDGE - GREBNEDLOG now turns to Geordi with new appreciation: GREBNEDLOG You are smart. GEORDI Not smart enough. I'm still here. GREBNEDLOG Make us strong. GEORDI I thought you wanted me to help you... "go". Why don't we work on that guidance system, okay? Grebnedlog levels Geordi's phaser at him: STAR TREK: "Samaritan Snare" - 3/8/89 - ACT FOUR 51. 50 CONTINUED: GREBNEDLOG Make us strong. Or die. Geordi reacts to that, suppressing a mischievous smile as he surrenders to their commands while we GO TO 51 INT. STARBASE 515 SURGICAL SUITE - (OPTICAL) Picard remains motionless, even more awesomely technological gear in the room now. The surgeon perspires heavily; tension hangs in the air: SURGEON The metabilation occlusions aren't holding. A nurse hands him another set of metabilators; these have even more contractile expediators on them. The surgeon tries them, reacts angrily: SURGEON Damnit! I can't stop the heterocyclic declination! Fuse! A sharp BEAM flashes down from overhead, sending up a puff of smoke from Picard's thorax,. It doesn't work. The surgeon looks up, commanding now: SURGEON Again! The BEAM flashes again. Another puff of smoke. The surgeon sags as he realizes: SURGEON We need a Biomolecular Physiologist in here! This man is dying! With that, one of the nurses reacts, bolts for the doors and we FADE OUT: END OF ACT FOUR STAR TREK: "Samaritan Snare" - 3/8/89 - ACT FIVE 52. ACT FIVE FADE IN: 52 EXT. SPACE - THE MONDOR (OPTICAL) remains in position. The Enterprise in proximity while 53 INT. THE MONDOR ARMAMENT BAY - GEORDI is ushered to their relatively primitive "gun turrets" by Grebnedlog and Reginod. Geordi reacts: GEORDI You've gotta be kidding. GREBNEDLOG Make us strong. GEORDI (re: the armaments) There isn't enough juice in these to blow off a passing asteroid. GREBNEDLOG Do it. Make us strong. Geordi studies the situation carefully, finally acknowledging: GEORDI I suppose we could increase the anti-matter charges. REGINOD Yes. We like power. Grebnedlog points to a set of weapon-force meters and lights: GREBNEDLOG Do not try to trick us. We can tell. STAR TREK: "Samaritan Snare" - 3/8/89 - ACT FIVE 53. 53 CONTINUED: And as Geordi starts to work, we GO TO 54 INT. STARBASE 515 SURGICAL SUITE - PICARD appears to be losing his battle for life, his face increasingly ashen now as the surgeon and a BIOMOLECULAR PHYSIOLOGIST crowd around the patient: BIOMOLECULAR PHYSIOLOGIST Metabilation? SURGEON Negative. BIOMOLECULAR PHYSIOLOGIST Heterocyclics? SURGEON Failing. And capillary integrity too unpredictable to attempt a resect. BIOMOLECULAR PHYSIOLOGIST You're unwilling to make the attempt?? SURGEON I'm not qualified. BIOMOLECULAR PHYSIOLOGIST I know someone who is. With that, the biomolecular physiologist touches a communications panel on the wall and we GO TO: 55 EXT. SPACE - THE ENTERPRISE (OPTICAL) hangs close to the Mondor while 56 INT. MAIN ENGINEERING - SONYA looks up from the glow of the pool table to look incredulously at Riker and Data: SONYA Are you sure he can do it? He's an engineer, not a weapons specialist. STAR TREK: "Samaritan Snare" - 3/8/89 - ACT FIVE 54. 56 CONTINUED: RIKER True. But if anyone can improvise, it's Geordi. SONYA What makes you think the Pakleds even have that kind of gear on board? DATA Ongoing scanning indicates progressive weapons potential. (then, to Riker) The timing will be crucial. He must correctly interpret our intentions. RIKER Geordi's up to speed. I trust his instincts. DATA The Pakleds did hear our little fiction about Geordi's "weapons knowledge." RIKER Exactly. And since they obviously equate intelligence with strength, they won't pass up this chance to use that knowledge. (then, to Sonya) Can you do it? SONYA Count on it. Suddenly, Sonya's interrupted by the urgency of WORF (V.O.) Bridge to Commander Riker! RIKER Go ahead, bridge -- WORF (V.O.) I am receiving an emergency summons from Starbase five one five... Captain Picard is close to death! Riker reacts, stunned as he looks to Data: STAR TREK: "Samaritan Snare" - 3/8/89 - ACT FIVE 55. 56 CONTINUED: (2) RIKER (to Sonya) Be ready! Riker and Data exit and Sonya goes to work on the anti-matter blender as we GO TO: 57 INT. THE MONDOR - GEORDI crawls out from the weapons bay. He's had better days, and he dusts himself off as he turns to Grebnedlog and Reginod who react with delight as their weapons-force meters and lights surge with new life: REGINOD (re the meters) We are strong. GEORDI You're now armed to the teeth. GREBNEDLOG Teeth are for chewing. GEORDI (with a patient sigh) You have photon torpedoes. You are strong. Grebnedlog "smiles" at Reginod now: GREBNEDLOG We are strong. We have power. And as the two Pakleds contemplate how to use their newfound might, we GO TO: 58 INT. THE ENTERPRISE MAIN BRIDGE - RIKER is in command position, Pulaski at his side, Worf at his station, Troi nearby as Data looks up from his scanner console, announcing: DATA Positive indication of armed photon torpedoes, Commander. RIKER Geordi did it. STAR TREK: "Samaritan Snare" - 3/8/89 - ACT FIVE 56. 58 CONTINUED: Worf turns from his security station, calling out: WORF Starbase requests we proceed to base at warp nine -- PULASKI We've got to go! TROI Yes. Captain Picard needs our help. RIKER We can't leave Geordi behind -- (then, to Data) I want the Pakleds on that screen and I want them now! DATA Forced spectrum communications are spotty at best, sir. RIKER Do it. 58A THE VIEWSCREEN (OPTICAL) comes alive with the very fuzzy, forced-spectrum image of the Mondor bridge where Grebnedlog and Reginod are settling into their command chairs as Geordi stands in the b.g. and now 58B RIKER (OPTICAL) quickly steps before the viewscreen: RIKER This is the Enterprise. Return our personnel or face immediate reprisal. GREBNEDLOG We are strong now. We have better weapons. RIKER Are you prepared to use them? STAR TREK: "Samaritan Snare" - 3/8/89 - ACT FIVE 57. 58B CONTINUED: REGINOD We are a force now. We will have respect. Power. TROI They feel confident. RIKER We don't have time for this. You want power? This is power... (to computer) Bridge to Ensign Gomez... 59 INT. ENGINEERING - SONYA reacts, responds as she works furiously at some heavy-duty anti-matter work: SONYA Ready, Commander Riker -- RIKER (V.O.) Initiate sequencing. Sonya hits some new panels and now the engine core begins to react with a massive ROAR while 60 INT. MAIN BRIDGE - RIKER glares at the Pakleds and calls their bluff with: RIKER Begin firing sequence countdown from twenty-four. 60AA THE VIEWSCREEN (OPTICAL) The Pakleds react, startled at Riker's aggressiveness as Geordi takes his cue, leans back into the weapons bay to make some "adjustments," assuring Grebnedlog: GEORDI They mean business. Let me just check something. STAR TREK: "Samaritan Snare" - 3/8/89 - ACT FIVE 58. 60A INT. ENTERPRISE - MAIN ENGINEERING - SONYA moves quickly, efficiently, as she works to boost hydrogen output, as we hear: COMPUTER (V.O.) Twenty-one... twenty... nineteen... eighteen... 60B INT. MAIN BRIDGE - RIKER stands before the viewscreen, Worf ready at his station as they hear: COMPUTER (V.O.) Seventeen... sixteen... fifteen... fourteen... WORF Firing sequence proceeding, sir. RIKER Hold fast. COMPUTER (V.O.) Eleven... ten... nine... 60C INT. THE MONDOR BRIDGE The Pakleds debate the wisdom of their choices now, then turning to face Riker while Geordi works in the b.g. furiously making his "adjustments." GREBNEDLOG We will attack. (re the weapons meters) We are strong. REGINOD (to Grebnedlog) We should attack now. GEORDI Just another second here... GREBNEDLOG Hurry. STAR TREK: "Samaritan Snare" - 3/8/89 - ACT FIVE 59. 60D INT. THE ENTERPRISE - MAIN BRIDGE - RIKER reacts to what he sees on the viewscreen, looks to Worf as they listen to: COMPUTER (V.O.) six... five... four... three... Tension mounts as 60E OMITTED 60F INT. ENGINEERING - SONYA is taut, poised over her console waiting: COMPUTER (V.O) ...two... one... RIKER Fire! she hits the appropriate controls now and 61 EXT. SPACE - THE ENTERPRISE (OPTICAL) fires a heretofore unseen, unimagined blast of crimson energy field from the leading edge of the nacelles, fairly enveloping the Mondor in a huge, daunting shaft of red light, accompanied by a ghostly ROAR and now 62 INT. THE MONDOR BRIDGE - GEORDI looks up from his work in the weapons bay, shouts at Grebnedlog: GEORDI Now! Grebnedlog pulls the weapons lever but suddenly, the entire bridge is awash with a BRIGHT RED LIGHT. GEORDI Oh no! Too late! REGINOD We have fired! They will be destroyed. STAR TREK: "Samaritan Snare" - 3/8/89 - ACT FIVE 60. 62 CONTINUED: GEORDI But they used the crimson force-field -- He looks toward the weapons bay and now it emits a low GROAN. Grebnedlog looks at the weapons meters, reacts with a sag as he realizes: GREBNEDLOG It did not shoot. GEORDI Their crimson force-field disarmed us. REGINOD (re the Enterprise; awed) They are smart. GEBNEDLOG We are not strong. 63 INT. THE ENTERPRISE BRIDGE - RIKER (OPTICAL) gives the final warning as he stands before the viewscreen: RIKER Drop your shields and let us transport Lieutenant La Forge immediately. Grebnedlog waves a trembling hand to a minion who pulls a switch. DATA Shields are down. RIKER Transporter Room. One to beam to the bridge. Geordi immediately DEMATERIALIZES on the viewscreen. A beat later, he MATERIALIZES beside Riker, turns to his officer at CONN: RIKER Set heading for Starbase five one five. Warp nine. STAR TREK: "Samaritan Snare" - 3/8/89 - ACT FIVE 61. 64 EXT. SPACE - THE ENTERPRISE (OPTICAL) streaks off at warp nine as we GO TO 64A INT. THE ENTERPRISE BRIDGE - RIKER stands before the viewscreen where Grebnedleg appears, truly humbled.: RIKER We leave you in peace. GREBNEDLOG We want to be strong. RIKER Weapons alone do not create strength. You must learn restraint. GREBNEDLOG Yes. We will learn restraint. Then we will be strong. Riker reacts to that with a sigh. RIKER Off. The viewscreen goes dark as Geordi steps up: GEORDI What was that red blast? RIKER Hydrogen exhaust through the Bussard collectors. Harmless, but a nice light show. GEORDI Very impressive. RIKER Did you disable their photons? GEORDI Just in time. That's why you're all standing here... 64B EXT. STARBASE FIVE-ONE-FIVE - ESTABLISHING The medical center STAR TREK: "Samaritan Snare" - 3/8/89 - ACT FIVE 62. 65 INT. STARBASE FIVE-ONE-FIVE SURGICAL SUITE - PICARD stirs now, his eyes slowly fluttering open. A beat. He's alive. And then he scowls as he grumbles: PICARD What in the hell are you doing here? 65A ANGLE - PULASKI stands over him, pulling her surgical mask down, snapping her gloves off smartly with: PULASKI Saving your life. PICARD Oh come on. This is a routine procedure. Quite commonplace. PULASKI True. But you are not a commonplace man. You'll be out of recovery in four hours. PICARD I didn't want you involved in this. PULASKI You're welcome. He regards her obliquely. Then: PICARD If you're here... the entire crew must know... PULASKI You're still the captain. Invincible. PICARD Thank you. She gives him a reassuring wink now as we GO TO: 66 EXT. SPACE - THE ENTERPRISE (OPTICAL) cruises in orbit above Starbase five one five while STAR TREK: "Samaritan Snare" - 3/8/89 - ACT FIVE 63. 67 INT. THE MAIN BRIDGE - RIKER is in command position, Data, Worf, Geordi, Troi, and Wesley all in their respective positions; the engineering station is up. The turbolift doors open and Picard steps out. A round of applause erupts, and Picard glares at them gruffly: PICARD I beg your pardon. They fall silent. Geordi looks at Worf, comments: GEORDI Looks like things are back to normal... Picard walks down to his chair, stands before it. A beat. Then he announces: PICARD I'm pleased to report that Ensign Crusher's Starfleet exam results will enable him to continue with his studies on board the Enterprise. Furthermore, any rumors of my brush with death are greatly exaggerated. Is that clear? RIKER Yes, sir. PICARD Good. Set the course for Epsilon Sector. (to Wesley) Warp five, Ensign. Picard assumes his command position now and PICARD (continuing) Engage. 68 EXT. SPACE - THE ENTERPRISE (OPTICAL) warps out of orbit as we FADE OUT: END OF ACT FIVE THE END STAR TREK: THE NEXT GENERATION "Up the Long Ladder" "f.k.a. 'Send in the Clones'" #40272-144 Written by Melinda M. Snodgrass Directed by Winrich Kolbe THE WRITING CREDITS MAY NOT BE FINAL AND SHOULD NOT BE USED FOR PUBLICITY OR ADVERTISING PURPOSES WITHOUT FIRST CHECKING WITH THE TELEVISION LEGAL DEPARTMENT. Copyright 1989 Paramount Pictures Corporation. All Rights Reserved. This script is not for publication or reproduction. No one is authorized to dispose of same. If lost or destroyed, please notify the Script Department. 4TH REVISED FINAL DRAFT MARCH 17, 1989 STAR TREK: "Send in the Clones" - 3/17/89 - CAST STAR TREK: THE NEXT GENERATION "Send in the Clones" CAST PICARD DANILO ODELL RIKER BRENNA ODELL DATA OLD MAN PULASKI TROI WILSON GRANGER GEORDI (1A, 1B) WORF O'BRIEN Non-Speaking Non-Speaking N. D. CREWMEMBERS SMALL CHILD TWO SECURITY MEN CROWD OF BRINGLOIDI ATHLETIC BLACK MEN (2A, 2B, 2C) ELIZABETH VALLIS/ BEAUTIFUL WOMAN (3A / 3B & 3C) ANOTHER BEAUTIFUL WOMAN (4A, 4B) AIDES/NURSES (5A, 5B) STAR TREK: "Send in the Clones" - 3/17/89 - SETS STAR TREK: THE NEXT GENERATION "Send in the Clones" SETS INTERIORS EXTERIORS USS ENTERPRISE USS ENTERPRISE CORRIDOR MAIN BRIDGE STARBASE TURBOLIFT TRANSPORTER ROOM OBSERVATION LOUNGE CARGO HOLD SEVEN SICKBAY/PULASKI'S OFFICE RIKER'S QUARTERS CAPTAIN'S READY ROOM MARIPOSA GRANGER'S OFFICE CLONING LABORATORY HALL STAR TREK: THE NEXT GENERATION "Send in the Clones" TEASER FADE IN: 1 EXT. SPACE - THE ENTERPRISE (OPTICAL) docked at a starbase. (stock shot) PICARD (V.O.) Captain's log, Stardate 42823.2. My meeting with Admiral James Moore has offered me an interesting proposal. We have completed our repairs, and are preparing to warp out. 2 OMITTED 3 INT. CAPTAIN'S READY ROOM (OPTICAL) PICARD is listening to the raspy, static filled TONES of an SOS code. RIKER enters. RIKER Yes, sir? PICARD Recognize that? RIKER No, sir, I'm sorry, I don't. Picard turns off the signal. PICARD It's an old style Terran distress beacon. It kicked in last month, and was detected by the starbase. RIKER What's its origin point? PICARD The Ficus quadrant. STAR TREK: "Send In The Clones" - 3/17/89 - TEASER 2. 3 CONTINUED: RIKER (thinks for a moment) Captain, there are no records of an Earth colony in that area. PICARD Admiral Moore has offered us the task of investigating the signal. RIKER (with a grin) And of course we've accepted. PICARD Am I so transparent? RIKER You've got that look in your eye. PICARD (a little uncomfortable) Oh? RIKER The lure of a mystery. PICARD A lost Earth colony. That is an exciting idea. RIKER They may not have survived. PICARD They're calling for help, aren't they? RIKER You're an optimist. PICARD Always. Suddenly, the oscillations of the sound appear on the screen, then a page of print. COMPUTER VOICE Signal analysis complete. Distress beacon used by the European Hegemony. STAR TREK: "Send In The Clones" - 3/17/89 - TEASER 3. 3 CONTINUED: (2) RIKER The European Hegemony? PICARD A loose alliance that formed in the early twenty-second century. It was the first step toward a world government. You should read more history, Number One. Computer, bracket exact dates when this beacon was in general use. COMPUTER VOICE Old Earth calendar, 2123 until 2190. RIKER No extraterrestrial source has ever used this beacon? COMPUTER VOICE Negative. PICARD Locate all Earth deep space launches from 2123 until 2190, and list their destinations. COMPUTER VOICE Working. A neat two column list appears on the screen. Picard scans it eagerly. Then leans back in disappointment. PICARD Nothing for the Ficus quadrant. Damn it, who's out there? RIKER Guess we'll have to wait and ask them. Riker EXITS, and Picard stares thoughtfully off into space, contemplating the mystery. 3A EXT. SPACE - THE ENTERPRISE (OPTICAL) pulling back from the starbase, pivoting slowly to a new heading and warping out. FADE OUT. END OF THE TEASER STAR TREK: "Send In The Clones" - 3/17/89 - ACT ONE 4. ACT ONE FADE IN: 4 EXT. SPACE (OPTICAL) The Enterprise travelling at warp. 5 INT. MAIN BRIDGE Riker has the bridge. Data is at OPS, Worf at Tactical. Supernumeraries at the other stations. Worf is not feeling well, but trying to hide it. Klingons don't get sick. But as Riker and Data continue their casual desultory conversation, Worf's faintness increases. RIKER How could a spaceship leave Earth without some kind of a record? DATA Perhaps it was deliberate. They may have wished to escape detection. RIKER You're suggesting they were fugitives? DATA During the Eugenics Wars a group of genetically superior humans ruled the world. After their defeat some did escape. Riker is becoming aware of Worf's silence. Riker stands and looks back at the Klingon. (This is light, just shoot the breeze conversation.) RIKER What do you think, Worf. Can we handle supermen? The Klingon lets out a long growling groan, and faints dead away. Data and Riker rush up the ramp. RIKER Medical emergency! Doctor Pulaski to the bridge. STAR TREK: "Send In The Clones" - 3/17/89 - ACT ONE 5. 5 CONTINUED: The android and the first officer stare in amazement and concern at the unconscious Worf as we GO TO: 6 INT. SICKBAY Worf is on a biobed. Pulaski is running a tricorder over him, and comparing the hand held readouts to the overhead display. WORF I am fine. PULASKI You are not fine, you fainted. WORF I did not faint. Klingons do not faint. PULASKI Excuse me, I'll rephrase. This Klingon suffered a dramatic drop in blood pressure, his blood glucose level dropped, there was deficient blood flow resulting from perpheral circulatory failure, in other words he curled up his toes and laid unconscious on the floor. WORF Doctor, there is no need to insult me. PULASKI Worf, I'm worried. Something's wrong. Klingons don't faint -- forgive me, but I can't think of another word which applies -- for no reason. You're sick. WORF Klingons don't get sick. PULASKI (tartly) They sure do get stupid. Stay there! I need to check something with the computer. STAR TREK: "Send In The Clones" - 3/17/89 - ACT ONE 6. 6 CONTINUED: She crosses to a computer console. Checks some medical texts. Crosses back to Worf. She is trying vainly to suppress a smile. PULASKI Lieutenant, you've got rop'ngor. Worf looks horrified. WORF Doctor, no one must learn that I am suffering from a childhood ailment! PULASKI I have to file a report. WORF But it is so humiliating! 7 thru OMITTED 10 11 INT. READY ROOM (OPTICAL) Picard is seated at his desk thoughtfully knuckling his chin as he studies the computer screen. This thing has gotten under his skin, and all his scholarly instincts are engaged. He is going to find the answer. PULASKI'S COM VOICE Captain Picard. PICARD Ah, Doctor, how is Worf? 11A INT. SICKBAY PULASKI He's in no danger. Worf was observing a Klingon ritual involving fasting, and he didn't take into account that you need to decrease physical activity as you decrease caloric intake. Pulaski out. STAR TREK: "Send In The Clones" - 3/17/89 - ACT ONE 7. 11B INT. CAPTAIN'S READY ROOM Picard resumes his research. There is a CHIME. PICARD Come. Data ENTERS, and crosses to Picard. DATA Sir, there is a discrepancy between our requisition order for display panels and the number actually tendered by the starbase. PICARD How can something so simple become so complicated? DATA Such is the nature of a bureaucracy? Suddenly Picard reacts. He leans eagerly into the computer, and touches a pad. PICARD (to himself and cutting off Data) There's more than one way to skin a bureaucratic cat. DATA Sir? PICARD There's no record of a launch to the Ficus quadrant. Not unusual if you consider the chaos of the early twenty-second century, but someone had to load that ship. DATA Ah, yes, the manifest. A page appears on the screen. PICARD There it is. The Mariposa, launch date November 27, 2123. Captain Walter Granger, commanding. STAR TREK: "Send In The Clones" - 3/17/89 - ACT ONE 8. 11B CONTINUED: DATA Mariposa is the Spanish word for butterfly. PICARD Thank you, Data. DATA I thought it might be significant. PICARD It doesn't appear to be. Ah... and here is the cargo list. (in an aside to Data) You can tell a lot about people from their luggage. Let's see, two hundred and twenty five Yoshimitsu computers, five monitor beacon satellites, seven hundred cellular commlinks, fifty spinning wheels -- Data is confused. (Data and Picard's dialogue should proceed simultaneously.) DATA Spinning wheels? Accessing. A device for spinning yarn or thread that consists of a large foot or hand driven wheel and one spindle. PICARD Cattle, chickens, pigs. . . . not DNA, the actual livestock. (to Data) Incredible. Why would anyone carry such an insane mix of cargo? DATA Spindle -- a thin rounded tapering rod -- PICARD (exasperated) Data! The android jerks himself back to the present, but very coolly responds. STAR TREK: "Send In The Clones" - 3/17/89 - ACT ONE 9. 11B CONTINUED: (2) DATA Perhaps they were planning for the worst. (Data goes into analysis mode) In the early twenty-second century Earth was recovering from World War III. A major philosopher of the period was Liam Dieghan, the founder of the Neo-Transcendentalists. He advocated a return to a simpler life in which one lived in harmony with nature, and learned under her gentle tutelage -- PICARD Thank you, Data. But if this was a ship full of utopians, why carry the technological baggage? DATA Sir, I have insufficient information from which to form a cogent theory. PICARD I hate a mystery. DATA (confused) But, sir what about Dixon Hill, and your penchant for detective fiction -- PICARD (interrupting) Allow me to correct myself. I hate a mystery I cannot solve. Off Data's thoughtful expression as we GO TO: 12 EXT. SPACE - THE ENTERPRISE (OPTICAL) booting along at warp speed. STAR TREK: "Send In The Clones" - 3/17/89 - ACT ONE 10. 12A INT. SICKBAY - PULASKI'S OFFICE She is working. Suddenly Worf is in the doorway carrying a tray set with two delicate, yet spartan cups, a stone tea pot and a thorn-covered branch with a single blossom midway up the branch. (The thorns need to look like curving hooks.) WORF I wished to thank you for protecting my -- PULASKI Your secret is safe with me. He sets down the tray, strips several of the thorns from the branch and tosses them into the steaming pot. PULASKI (continuing) Worf, I'm honored. No one has ever made the Tea for me. She plucks off the white blossom, and places it in one of the cups so the tea pours through its petals. Worf looks at her in surprise. WORF You know the ceremony? PULASKI I understand the externals. Not the mysteries. I'm not a Klingon. WORF You must not drink the tea. It is deadly to humans. PULASKI And none too good for Klingons. WORF It is a test of bravery, of one's ability to look at the face of mortality. It is also a reminder that death is an experience best shared -- like the tea. PULASKI Worf, you're a romantic. STAR TREK: "Send In The Clones" - 3/17/89 - ACT ONE 11. 12A CONTINUED: WORF It is among the Klingons that love poetry achieves its fullest flower. PULASKI Hold that thought. Pulaski leaves the office. Quickly returns with a hypospray. She pours out Worf's cup, hands it to him. Gives herself an injection. Picks up her cup, and drinks. Worf starts to react. She holds him off with an upraised hand. PULASKI Antidote. If we're going to share, let's share. Now, quote me a little of that poetry. Off his expression as we GO TO: 13 EXT. SPACE - A SUN (OPTICAL) Throwing out spectacular flares. We trace one of these tongues of fire as it seems to almost touch a planet. 13A INT. MAIN BRIDGE Present are Picard, TROI, Riker, Worf and Data. Supernumerary at CONN. DATA Scans indicate human life form readings thirty meters below the planet's surface. WORF Hailing on all frequencies, Captain. So far no response. DATA There is no evidence of an advanced communication network. PICARD But the comlinks? WORF There is no artifical power source on the planet. STAR TREK: "Send In The Clones" - 3/17/89 - ACT ONE 12. 13A CONTINUED: RIKER But they've got a monitoring satellite. TROI A good thing, too. Without it we would never have known they needed help. DATA Captain, the stellar flares are increasing in intensity and frequency. Computer projections indicate they will envelope the planet in three point six hours. PICARD Mister Worf, prepare for immediate evacuation. WORF Evacuation will be difficult. Our shields can be lowered for transport only between the flares. TROI Captain, these people have been isolated for three hundred years. We cannot beam them to the Enterprise without warning. RIKER And if they have slipped back into barbarism the experience would scare them to death. PICARD You'll have to go down there, Number One. RIKER On my way. 14 EXT. SPACE - THE ENTERPRISE (OPTICAL) In orbit around the planet. STAR TREK: "Send In The Clones" - 3/17/89 - ACT ONE 13. 14 CONTINUED: PICARD (V.O.) Captain's log, supplemental. Commander Riker has reached the caverns, but we are still waiting to begin the evacuation. 15 INT. MAIN BRIDGE Present are Picard, Troi, Worf and Data. Supernumerary at CONN. PICARD What's the situation, Number One? RIKER'S COM VOICE There are roughly two hundred people down here. PICARD Their condition? RIKER'S COM VOICE Surprisingly good. PICARD Are they willing to leave? RIKER'S COM VOICE Yes, but -- PICARD (interrupting) Well, get them up here. RIKER'S COM VOICE I'm having a little altercation with the colony's leader. PICARD I'm not interested, Commander. Initiate the transport. RIKER'S COM VOICE But, sir -- PICARD No arguments. RIKER'S COM VOICE Aye, aye, sir, we're on our way. All of us. Riker out. STAR TREK: "Send In The Clones" - 3/17/89 - ACT ONE 14. 15 CONTINUED: Picard exchanges a quizzical glance with Troi who merely shrugs. In the background we hear the SOUNDS of people, the bleat of goats, the cackle of chickens, the squealing of pigs. O'BRIEN'S COM VOICE (continuing) Uh... Captain, you better get down here. Picard gives Troi an incredulous glance, and she stifles a giggle. Off Picard's expression as we GO TO: 15A INT. TRANSPORTER ROOM O'BRIEN, his eyes bugging out of his head regards the Bringloidi refugees, and DANILO complete with their livestock, who are climbing off the transporter platform. O'BRIEN Right away! 15B OMITTED FADE OUT. END OF ACT ONE STAR TREK: "Send In The Clones" - 3/17/89 - ACT TWO 15. ACT TWO FADE IN: 16 OMITTED 17 INT. CORRIDOR Picard and Worf are hustling down the corridor. The Transporter Room doors open, and a terrified chicken comes clucking and weaving its way into the corridor. (Worf presses himself against the corridor wall. It's the elephant and the mouse.) The doors open again, and out comes a SMALL GIRL who gathers up the hen, and carries her back into the Transporter Room. Worf and Picard exchange glances, and follow the child and the livestock into the Transporter Room. 18 INT. TRANSPORTER ROOM It is a scene of chaos. Straw, feathers and animal droppings litter the platform, and spill out onto the floor. An older man, DANILO ODELL, dressed in boots, homespun pants and a handknit sweater, and holding a flask, is directing traffic and bending O'Brien's ear. People, all holding some kind of livestock (crates of chickens, a lamb, a piglet), are milling around the Transporter Room. (A second wave of Bringloidi, with Riker among them, are climbing off the transporter platform.) O'Brien stares in consternation at a goat on a lead which is sniffing at his pants, and tries to respond to Danilo. DANILO Ah, O'Brien, I should have known that a good Irishman would be running this ship, and not some Frenchy. O'BRIEN (to the goat) Shoo! Shoo, damn you! Danilo reacts to this, because he's not sure who O'Brien is addressing. PICARD What the devil is going on here?! STAR TREK: "Send In The Clones" - 3/17/89 - ACT TWO 16. 18 CONTINUED: Danilo saunters toward Picard. Riker notices and starts pushing through the crowd. DANILO Oh, Picard is it. The man who makes decisions for me and mine without so much as a by-your- leave. Worf doesn't like the man's tone to the captain. He lets out a low throated rumble. Danilo stares at the flask, at Worf, gives his head a shake, and carefully pockets the flask. DANILO (re Worf) Do you generally have him on a leash? Worf snarls, but he is a little taken aback by this insouciance. Riker finally pushes through the crowd. PICARD My security chief, Lieutenant Worf. DANILO Danilo Odell, at your service. He extends his hand to Picard. Picard ignores it. PICARD I don't want your service, Mister Odell. I want this damn livestock off my ship. RIKER (sotto voce to Picard) You said you didn't want to waste time arguing. DANILO Captain, this damn livestock has fed our children, been company to the old and sick and playmates to the young... RIKER And can this man ever argue. STAR TREK: "Send In The Clones" - 3/17/89 - ACT TWO 17. 18 CONTINUED: (2) DANILO ... I couldn't leave them to die. Besides, how can we rebuild without our animals? This is beginning to appeal to Picard's sense of the absurd. PICARD Alright. Chief O'Brien, kindly transport this group to Cargo Hold Seven, and the remaining refugees on the planet should go directly into the hold so we can stop dirtying my ship. O'BRIEN Yes, sir. Danilo turns and bellows to the assembled Bringloidi. DANILO Back onto the infernal machine. RIKER We're taking another little ride. The Bringloidi and Riker cram onto the platform. DANILO We've got to have a little talk. Picard finds himself propelled into the corridor by Danilo. Worf follows. 18A INT. CORRIDOR PICARD Er... fine, and then Mister Worf can show you the ship. DANILO That would be grand. And Captain, it was grand of you to resue us from out troubles. PICARD (very dry) My pleasure. STAR TREK: "Send In The Clones" - 3/17/89 - ACT TWO 18. 18A CONTINUED: The threesome walk together, Picard a little hunched shouldered. He is really intent on getting to that turbolift. DANILO You must be worth quite a bit to own a ship like this. PICARD I don't own the Enterprise, I command her. DANILO Whatever. Would you happen to be married? PICARD No. Why? DANILO I have a daughter. PICARD (very dry) I felicitate you. They have reached the turbolift, and Picard steps in. DANILO Would you be interested? PICARD (explosively) No! The doors start to shut, and Danilo squeezes quickly into the turbolift. 18B INT. TURBOLIFT DANILO You're sure? PICARD Yes! Danilo holds up his hands placatingly, and backs out of the turbolift. Off Picard's reactions as we GO TO: STAR TREK: "Send In The Clones" - 3/17/89 - ACT TWO 19. 19 INT. OBSERVATION LOUNGE Present are Picard, Riker, Worf and Pulaski. PICARD (to Pulaski) What is the colonists' overall condition? PULASKI They're a little hungry, a little scared, but hiding it well. They were suffering from an amazing variety of preventable diseases -- but the transporter handled that. They're also tough, determined and fun. Overall, I'd say they're charming examples of homo sapiens at their best. Worf ENTERS. PICARD (to Worf) What's the total? WORF Two hundred and twenty-three. PULASKI Count on four more in the next few days. PICARD Next question, what to do with them? Take them to a starbase? They were anachronistic in 2123. How will they cope? RIKER There's no question they could learn and adapt, but it would be dislocating, and the colony would probably be splintered. Maybe we should be looking for a new home for them? Suddenly there is a strident klaxon as an internal alarm goes off. Worf taps his insignia. WORF Lieutenant Worf, report! STAR TREK: "Send In The Clones" - 3/17/89 - ACT TWO 20. 19 CONTINUED: COMPUTER VOICE Fire in Cargo Hold Seven. RIKER The Bringloidi! Everyone is heading for the door. PICARD (to Riker) I wonder what they've done to my ship now. And despite his concern Riker has to grin. 20 INT. CORRIDOR Outside of the cargo hold. TWO SECURITY MEN are already there as Worf, Picard and Riker arrive. PICARD Unseal the doors. Worf punches in the override code into the computer and the doors open. Danilo staggers out. He is drenched, clutching his heart, really playing this to the hilt. DANILO My God, Picard, the place is a bloody death trap! Lightning bolts falling from the ceiling! Picard, Riker and Worf follow Danilo back into the cargo hold. 20A INT. CARGO HOLD People are milling about, subdued, frightened chatter fills the hold. DANILO (continuing) What the hell was that thing? WORF Automated fire system. A force field contains the flames until the available oxygen within the field has been consumed. STAR TREK: "Send In The Clones" - 3/17/89 - ACT TWO 21. 20A CONTINUED: DANILO What if I had been under that thing? WORF You would have been standing in the fire. Danilo glares at the Klingon, not sure if he's being made the butt of a joke, but that dark, impassive face gives away nothing. DANILO Well, ignoring that for the moment. What would have happened to me? WORF You would have suffocated and died. DANILO Sweet mercy. Danilo has led the officers to a corner where a few slightly charred sticks are surrounded by a wide pool of spilled soup. A large iron cauldron is tipped on its side, obviously the source of this mess. Standing near this mess like an outraged goddess is Danilo's daughter BRENNA. She is a stunningly beautiful young woman, and her soaked gown is revealing every lovely curve. Arms militantly akimbo she eyes Picard. BRENNA Your hospitality leaves a hell of a lot to be desired! You don't offer us a bite or a sup, and when we build a fire to cook a little something, the place goes mad! She flings aside the ladel she is holding. Riker is staring in wonder at Brenna. PICARD My apologies, ma'am, I was unaware that you had not been instructed in the use of the food dispensers. BRENNA (truculently to Riker) And what are you staring at? Have you never seen a woman before? STAR TREK: "Send In The Clones" - 3/17/89 - ACT TWO 22. 20A CONTINUED: (2) RIKER (smiling) I thought I had. Danilo slops forward with an incredibly ingratiating smile. DANILO Commander, may I present my daughter, Brenna Odell. RIKER Very pleased to meet you, ma'am. They shake hands, and Riker keeps holding hers. She glances pointedly down at his hand, up at him. BRENNA You may have all the time in the world, but I've dozens of frightened and hungry women and children to care for. RIKER What about the men? BRENNA (with asperity) I'm sure they'll find their comfort as they always do -- in the bottom of a mug of home brew! She disappears around some cargo containers and hung blankets. DANILO (to Riker with an ingratiating smile) Pay her no heed, she's a grand girl. And not usually so... er... (he coughs) ... sharp tongued. BRENNA (V.O.) (like a Banshee) Father! Danilo darts away at Brenna's bellow. Picard throws back his head, and begins to laugh. Riker stares at him. STAR TREK: "Send In The Clones" - 3/17/89 - ACT TWO 23. 20A CONTINUED: (3) RIKER Of all the reactions that's not the one I expected. PICARD Number One, there are times in life when you have to simply bow to the absurd. Danilo returns from around a cargo container. DANILO How did the ship sense the fire? The three officers exchange glances. How do you explain something as complex as the Enterprise to a nineteenth century man? PICARD (clearing his throat) The... ah... ship's computers sense a localized increase in -- Brenna emerges from behind the cargo containers with an armful of blankets. BRENNA Men! Always talking when there's work to be done. She throws them down on the spilled soup. BRENNA (continuing to Picard) Shouldn't you be flying this ship, or whatever it is you do? So powerful and driving is her personality that the Enterprise officers find themselves heading for the doors. Riker suddenly pauses and says a little too casually. RIKER I think I'll go give her some help, Captain. Worf and Picard EXIT the shot, and Riker walks back to Brenna. She is fastidiously picking up the sodden blankets. STAR TREK: "Send In The Clones" - 3/17/89 - ACT TWO 24. 20A CONTINUED: (4) RIKER That wasn't necessary. The ship will clean itself. BRENNA Well, good for the bloody ship! For the first time, she actually looks at Riker and realizes how handsome he is. She gives him a speculative glance from beneath her eyelashes. Then lifts the sodden hem of her skirt, and inspects her feet. BRENNA (continuing, cooing like a dove) Where does a girl go to wash her feet on this ship? RIKER I think it's the responsibility of the ship's first officer to show that girl all the amenities. Riker holds out a hand to her. She lays her hand in his, and gives him a heart-stopping smile. Off their faces as we GO TO: 21 OMITTED 22 INT. CORRIDOR WORF She is very like a Klingon woman, Captain. PICARD My condolences, Mister Worf. Danilo hurries up to them. DANILO Ah, Captain, there's just one other thing. It slipped my mind in all the hustle and bustle -- PICARD The point, Mister Odell? STAR TREK: "Send In The Clones" - 3/17/89 - ACT TWO 25. 22 CONTINUED: DANILO What are you going to do about the other colony? PICARD Other colony? Off everyone's reactions as we: FADE OUT. END OF ACT TWO STAR TREK: "Send In The Clones" - 3/17/89 - ACT THREE 26. ACT THREE FADE IN: 23 EXT. SPACE - THE ENTERPRISE (OPTICAL) racing along at warp speed. PICARD (V.O.) Captain's log, supplemental. A review of stellar charts has revealed a Class M planet, NB2323 only half a light year from the Bringloid system. I am gambling it was the destination of the second colony. 24 INT. SICKBAY Pulaski is treating an ancient Bringloidi. Riker and Brenna ENTER. Pulaski runs a device over the OLD MAN'S arm, and cures his crippling rheumatoid arthritis. His claw-like hand relaxes and he experimentally wiggles the fingers. Brenna is amazed. This is magic. The old man is so pleased with this new mobility that as Pulaski turns away to replace the device he leans off the biobed, and pinches her on the ass. Pulaski calmly swats his hand. PULASKI Behave yourself. OLD MAN You're a fine woman, and you've made a young man of me. PULASKI No, I've cured your arthritis, and if you try anything more energetic you'll probably drop dead. STAR TREK: "Send In The Clones" - 3/17/89 - ACT THREE 27. 24 CONTINUED: OLD MAN (with a leer) I'd die happy. PULASKI Out. He hobbles past Brenna and Riker with a wink and another leer. Pulaski crosses to the couple. BRENNA You know how to handle men. PULASKI Yes, first you have to get their attention. Riker chuckles. He doesn't mind being made the butt of a joke. Brenna crosses to Pulaski. BRENNA How did you give Joey back his hand? PULASKI (picking up the instrument) Oh dear, that would be difficult to explain. BRENNA (frustrated) Like everything else aboard this ship. I'm too ignorant to understand. And this is the one thing that looks useful. The frustration is evident in her voice. Pulaski says very gently -- PULASKI You're interested in medicine? BRENNA I'm healer and midwife. Or I thought I was. Pulaski tries to comfort her. STAR TREK: "Send In The Clones" - 3/17/89 - ACT THREE 28. 24 CONTINUED: (2) PULASKI All I've every wanted is to take away the hurt. These wonderful tools help me do that, but sometimes I feel more like a mechanic than a doctor. Now the situation's reversed. Brenna takes Pulaski's hand in both of hers, closes her eyes as she searches for the healing power. BRENNA You've the hands of a healer. You can't put that in a machine. Suddenly there's a hell of a bond between these women. Riker knows when he's a fifth wheel. RIKER I'll leave you ladies to your discussions. Dinner, Brenna? I'll cook. Brenna glances at Pulaski and raises her eyebrows. Leans in close, keeping it private between the two of them. BRENNA Is he real? Both of the women are eyeing Riker thoughtfully. PULASKI (sotto voce to Brenna) Oh, yes, very real. The message is subtle -- when life offers you something... take it. Riker knows female bonding when he sees it. He gets the hell out of the way. Riker EXITS. 24A INT. RIKER'S QUARTERS (FORMERLY SCENE 26) Brenna and Riker ENTER. The first officer has left books spilled across his desk. Brenna surveys the disorder. BRENNA William Riker, you're a mess. STAR TREK: "Send In The Clones" - 3/17/89 - ACT THREE 29. 24A CONTINUED: She moves to the desk, and begins stacking the books. Riker catches her by the shoulders, and turns her around. They are very close. RIKER You don't have to do that. BRENNA And if I don't, who will? RIKER I can see why your father wants to marry you off. BRENNA Oh, and why is that? RIKER (imitating the patois) So he can have a pipe, and mug of beer in peace. Brenna is eyeing him speculatively. BRENNA You've shown me so many wonders on your great ship, but there is still one thing you haven't shown me. RIKER What's that? Brenna lifts the floor length heavy skirt revealing her feet and a pair of gorgeous legs. BRENNA I'm still waiting to wash my feet. RIKER Through there. Glass of wine while I cook? Riker keys a wall panel and soft, romantic music fills the room. He pours out two glasses of wine from the carafe. Brenna is staring at him in confusion. We have two people from completely different cultures trying to seduce each other, but they don't have the proper cues. BRENNA William, is something wrong? STAR TREK: "Send In The Clones" - 3/17/89 - ACT THREE 30. 24A CONTINUED: (2) RIKER What do you mean? BRENNA Do you not like girls? RIKER Of course I like... Oh... is there a technique to this foot washing? Brenna approaches him. Unhooks her skirt. It puddles about her feet, and she steps out of it wearing a pretty petticoat. BRENNA You generally start low... and work your way up. Riker reaches up pulls the pins from her long hair. It cascades over her shoulders. RIKER I think I can handle that. They are in each other's arms now. BRENNA I was hoping you might. They embrace as we GO TO 24B EXT. SPACE - THE ENTERPRISE (OPTICAL) Booting along at warp speed. 24C INT. MAIN BRIDGE Data has the bridge. Supernumeraries at all other stations. Worf is heading for the forward turbolift as Riker emerges from the forward lift. The first officer looks very content. RIKER Feeling better, Worf? WORF Yes. And you, Commander? RIKER Couldn't be better. STAR TREK: "Send In The Clones" - 3/17/89 - ACT THREE 31. 24C CONTINUED: Worf enters the turbolift. Data stands and yields the command chaair to Riker. RIKER (continuing) Status, Mister Data? DATA Warp factor five, continuing on course for NB2323. E.t.a. eighteen hours. RIKER Excellent. 24D INT. CARGO BAY Brenna, also looking very content, is tatting lace (or sewing). Suddenly she notices movement behind some cargo containers. 25 INT. CARGO BAY - ANOTHER ANGLE (OPTICAL) A secluded corner behind some cargo containers. Danilo and two other men are working about a still. Worf comes around the containers. WORF You sent for me? DANILO We're brewing poteen, but we need a way to heat it without this bloody ship firing bloody lightning bolts at us. WORF You can obtain spiritous liquors from the food dispensers. DANILO (suspicious) It's not that synthehol bilge O'Brien offered me, is it? WORF No, if you wish it can be real alcohol. STAR TREK: "Send In The Clones" - 3/17/89 - ACT THREE 32. 25 CONTINUED: DANILO Good. WORF (warningly) With all of the deleterious effects intact. DANILO As it should be. In the b.g. a group of Bringloidi cluster about a food dispenser. Danilo leads Worf to the wall unit and pushes past the waiting tinkerers. DANILO (continuing) You see, lad, every moment of pleasure has to be purchased by an equal moment of pain. (to the wall unit) Whiskey. A glass MATERIALIZES. Danilo tries a belt. Makes a face. After a lifetime of drinking potato whiskey this is really poor stuff -- far too refined. DANILO (continuing) Terrible. He passes the glass to the other men who sip then nod in agreement. DANILO (continuing) It's got no bite. WORF (to the unit) Chech'tluth. A glass of the potent Klingon brew MATERIALIZES. Worf hands it to Danilo. The human knocks back a slug. It feels as if his lungs and stomach have been vaporized. DANILO (almost unable to speak) Now that's what I call a wee drop of the creature. STAR TREK: "Send In The Clones" - 3/17/89 - ACT THREE 33. 25 CONTINUED: (2) BRENNA (V.O.) (screaming the word like a banshee) Father!! DANILO (continuing to Worf) You remember that moment of pain? Well, it's about to begin. Brenna comes roaring up to join them. Danilo stares at her in comic dismay, with a big ingratiating grin. DANILO (continuing) Hello, darling. She snatches away the glass. BRENNA Darling is it! I might have known! (re the glass) Are you drunk yet, or can you talk with Doctor Pulaski about the children? DANILO What about them? BRENNA She wants to send them to school with the ship's children. DANILO What do you think? BRENNA I think it's a good idea. Danilo nods thoughtfully, pulls out his pipe and starts to fill it. BRENNA (continuing) So go handle it! He jumps like a startled deer, and EXITS. Brenna turns her gaze on the two cronies. They visibly wilt. STAR TREK: "Send In The Clones" - 3/17/89 - ACT THREE 34. 25 CONTINUED: (3) BRENNA (continuing) And I'm sure there's something you can be doing with your time. They fade back into the other Bringloidi, but they're still visible. Brenna turns on Worf. BRENNA And as for you... WORF What! Brenna is unimpressed. BRENNA Why did you have to tell them that this magic wall can give them more than meat and potatoes? Now we'll never get a lick of work out of them. She's appealed to Worf's sense of humor. Dryly he asks. WORF Madam, have you considered a career in security? BRENNA If it's anything like babysitting (she jerks thumb toward the men) -- I'm an authority. Off Worf's expression as we GO TO: 26 OMITTED 27 EXT. SPACE - THE ENTERPRISE (OPTICAL) Coming into orbit around a ringed planet. 28 INT. MAIN BRIDGE (OPTICAL) Present are Picard, Riker, Data, Worf and Troi. There is a supernumerary at CONN. STAR TREK: "Send In The Clones" - 3/17/89 - ACT THREE 35. 28 CONTINUED: WORF Signal from the planet, Captain. PICARD On screen. On the screen APPEARS the face of a handsome older man. Picard stands. PICARD (continuing) This is Jean-Luc Picard of the United Federation vessel USS Enterprise. GRANGER This is tremendous! Welcome, Captain, I'm Wilson Granger, prime minister of Mariposa. DATA No doubt a descendant of Captain Walter Granger. Granger has an odd expression. GRANGER Not quite a descendant. (forces a laugh) We feared that Earth had suffered a catastrophe when no one came to check on us. PICARD I'm afraid you were lost in the bureaucracy, but despite the lateness of our arrival we are here now, and eager to renew ties. GRANGER Splendid! Please, come down, and allow us to extend our hospitality to you and your crew. The screen goes blank. PICARD Number One, form an away team. TROI I would urge caution. Mister Granger is hiding something. STAR TREK: "Send In The Clones" - 3/17/89 - ACT THREE 36. 28 CONTINUED: (2) RIKER We'll check it out. Mister Worf. (he looks up) Doctor Pulaski join me in Transporter Room Three for an away detail. 29 INT. RECEPTION AREA (OPTICAL) The away team MATERIALIZES. Granger (1B) dressed in black diplomat clothes is waiting for them. Riker stares because he looks a lot like Granger, but... Nearby an athletic BLACK MAN (2A) is seated behind a curving desk. A BEAUTIFUL WOMAN (3B) emerges from a doorway behind him, and they confer over some papers. Behind the away team an athletic black man (2B) ENTERS. The man behind the desk and the man entering are identical. (Please cast a racial mix for the clone society.) GRANGER 1B Welcome to Mariposa. Victor Granger, minister of health. RIKER William Riker, Doctor Pulaski, Lieutenant Worf. They shake hands all around. GRANGER 1B I'll escort you to the prime minister. This way please. Pulaski and Granger 1B start walking. Riker and Worf are side by side. RIKER (sotto voce) A brother? Worf merely lets out a low growl to show he's disturbed. 30 OMITTED STAR TREK: "Send In The Clones" - 3/17/89 - ACT THREE 37. 30A HALLWAY Granger 1B leads the team down a hallway. Another door opens, and an athletic black man (2C) steps out, and walks toward the front doors. Worf does a double take, but can't quite get a look at the man. GRANGER 1B Your arrival really is serendipitous. PULASKI Oh, how so? GRANGER 1B Well, perhaps I should leave that for the prime minister to explain. The away team walks past the open door of an office. Seated at a desk is the ANOTHER BEAUTIFUL WOMAN (4A) working at a computer. Another woman (4B) comes down the hall, and enters the office with 4A. Riker stops and stares in at these twins, then hurries to catch up. Riker catches Worf and says in a low tone. RIKER Worf, stand by for immediate beam out. There's something damn odd down here. WORF Aye, Commander. Riker steps back up with Pulaski and Granger 1B who are chatting in a friendly, desultory fashion. GRANGER 1B Is your title scientific or medical? PULASKI Medical. Pulaski casually keys the tricorder on her belt. GRANGER 1B Ah, excellent. PULASKI Is there some medical problem we should know about? STAR TREK: "Send In The Clones" - 3/17/89 - ACT THREE 38. 30A CONTINUED: Riker spots the athletic black man (2A) walking down the hall toward them. Pulaski subtly glances down at her readout. GRANGER 1B I think it best if the -- PULASKI Prime minister explains that. Somehow I thought you might. The team has reached another set of doors. The aide throws them open. 31 INT. GRANGER'S OFFICE Granger stands, and leans over his desk, hand extended, a broad smile of welcome. Riker and Worf are spooked, they're not responding well to this situation. GRANGER Welcome to Mariposa. Another door into the office opens, and in walk two women (3A and 3C) -- (NOTE: 3C is 3B with a hair change). 3C carries a laptop computer. Riker and Worf exchange glances. Pulaski calmly crosses to Granger, and shakes hands. PULASKI Doctor Katherine Pulaski. GRANGER My chief of staff, Elizabeth Vallis. PULASKI So, is your entire population made up of clones, Prime Minister? RIKER Clones? WORF Clones? GRANGER Clones. STAR TREK: "Send In The Clones" - 3/17/89 - ACT THREE 39. 31 CONTINUED: Off Riker and Worf's stunned expressions as we FADE OUT. END OF ACT THREE STAR TREK: "Send In The Clones" - 3/17/89 - ACT FOUR 40. ACT FOUR FADE IN: 32 EXT. SPACE - THE ENTERPRISE (OPTICAL) In orbit around Mariposa. PICARD (V.O.) Captain's log, supplemental. Prime Minister Granger has requested an urgent meeting to discuss the future of the Mariposan colony. 33 INT. GRANGER'S OFFICE Present are Picard, Riker, Pulaski and Granger. There is a coffee service on the desk, and they are each holding a glass. Pulaski has her tricorder in her lap. GRANGER Captain, we need your help. Three hundred years ago during our landing on Mariposa, the skin of the ship was breached. Only five colonists survived. The progenitors weren't willing to just give up and die, and they were scientists -- PICARD So they used that expertise and turned to cloning. GRANGER Yes. They had no other option. Two women and three men were an insufficient gene pool from which to build a society. PULASKI How did you suppress the natural sexual drive? Drugs? Punitive laws? STAR TREK: "Send In The Clones" - 3/17/89 - ACT FOUR 41. 33 CONTINUED: GRANGER In the beginning we used a little of both. Now three hundred years later the entire concept of sexual reproduction is a little repugnant to us. PICARD A culture with no children. GRANGER It's economically more viable to accelerate clone growth. Some basic learning can be chemically imprinted on the developing clone, the rest we do after emergence. PULASKI How did you overcome the problem of replicative fading? GRANGER We didn't. PULASKI You have got a problem. RIKER Wait. I don't understand. Replecative fading? PULASKI Each time you clone you're making a copy of a copy. Subtle errors creep into the chromosomes, and eventually you end up with a non-viable clone. GRANGER Yes. We're developing a sort of mental hardening of the arteries. It's increasingly difficult to respond to new situations. PICARD How can we help? STAR TREK: "Send In The Clones" - 3/17/89 - ACT FOUR 42. 33 CONTINUED: (2) GRANGER We need an infusion of fresh DNA. I was hoping that you would be willing to share tissue samples from your crew. RIKER You want to clone us? GRANGER Yes. RIKER No way. Not me. GRANGER How can you possibly be harmed? RIKER It's not a question of harm. A single William Riker is unique, maybe even special. Hundreds or thousands of them diminish me in a way I can't explain. GRANGER You would be preserving yourself. RIKER Human beings have another way of doing that. We have children. Granger looks to Pulaski. She shakes her head, refusing. To Picard who also shakes his head. PICARD I think you will find this to be the attitude of a predominate number of Enterprise people. GRANGER I see. Well, if you will not help us by sharing your DNA will you at least send people to repair our malfunctioning equipment? PICARD Yes, of course. Number One, form away teams, and get the repairs underway. STAR TREK: "Send In The Clones" - 3/17/89 - ACT FOUR 43. 33 CONTINUED: (3) RIKER Yes, sir. The Enterprise people rise. PULASKI Repairing the equipment is not going to solve your problems. GRANGER What other solution do we have? Remember, Doctor, there are only five of us. 33A INT. HALLWAY - MARIPOSA Riker Pulaski, Geordi and three n.d. crewmembers. Geordi has his tool kit. The three officers, each accompanied by a crewperson move off in opposite directions. 34 thru OMITTED 36 37 INT. GRANGER'S OFFICE (OPTICAL) Riker and Pulaski ENTER. Granger is seated at his desk. A couple of AIDES (5A and 5B) stand beside the door. Two athletic clones flank the desk (2A, 2B and 2C). RIKER You sent for us? The clones by the door draw phaser-like weapons, and fire at Riker and Pulaski. They collapse. The two athletic clones heft Riker by the shoulders and feet, clones 5A and 5B take Pulaski. They start to carry the officers out a side door. There is a knock, clone 2A opens the door. Geordi ENTERS. GEORDI Excuse me, sir, I was looking for Commander Riker. GRANGER I'm afraid I haven't seen him. STAR TREK: "Send In The Clones" - 3/17/89 - ACT FOUR 44. 37 CONTINUED: GEORDI Doctor Pulaski? GRANGER Sorry, I can't help you. Geordi's expression is incredibly neutral, his voice light as he says -- GEORDI Guess I'll just have to hunt for them. Sorry to disturb you. Geordi EXITS. 38 OMITTED 39 INT. CLONING LABORATORY Riker and Pulaski are unconscious on surgical tables. Using long hand-held needles, two clones (4A and 4B) in surgical gear penetrate the officers' sternums to remove tissue samples. Two NURSES (5A and 5B) assist. In the b.g. is the cloning equipment open and empty. 39A EXT. SPACE - THE ENTERPRISE (OPTICAL) In orbit around Mariposa. 39B INT. CARGO HOLD (PREVIOUSLY SCENE 34) As many extras as can possibly be squeezed into the hold, all dressed in scruffy immigrant clothes. An occasional cry from a baby, chickens clucking. Accompanied by traditionally Irish instruments, Danilo, the colony's Shan'a'kee, imparts the history. Worf is seated with Brenna, Picard ENTERS, and leans against a wall just listening. DANILO And after a long and gentle sleep we awoke and there was Bringloid, our dream world. Our companions in the butterfly ship left us off, and said they would leave a guard in heaven to look out for us. (MORE) STAR TREK: "Send In The Clones" - 3/17/89 - ACT FOUR 45. 39B CONTINUED: DANILO (Cont'd) They flew on in the darkness -- their search was not yet over -- but we had found the sun, a world, a home. BRENNA And now we have lost it. DANILO We'll find another. BRENNA When? How long must we wait and journey? Picard's expression has been shifting as various emotions and realizations strike him. He crosses swiftly to Worf, leans in. PICARD I finally understand. That distress satellite was left by the Mariposans as a way to protect the Bringloidi. There were two colonies on that ship. WORF Interesting, Captain. PICARD And not terribly relevant, I know. Still, it gives one pause for thought.... Picard's voice trails away, and he EXITS. 40 OMITTED 40A INT. PULASKI'S OFFICE - SICKBAY (FROM SCENE 40) Riker and Pulaski are seated and talking quietly as Geordi ENTERS. GEORDI What happened on Mariposa? Are you all right? STAR TREK: "Send In The Clones" - 3/17/89 - ACT FOUR 46. 40A CONTINUED: RIKER Is there some reason why we shouldn't be? GEORDI Yeah, every time I asked where you were, some clone lied to me. RIKER (very grim) Lied to you? GEORDI (removes his VISOR) Commander, with this I can see a lot more than your average person. When people lie there are certain physical manifestations; variations in blush response, pupil dilation, pulse and breath rate. I can't use the VISOR on aliens, but humans -- I've got them nailed. PULASKI And the clones lied about our whereabouts? GEORDI Yes. PULASKI I don't remember anything happening. I was working in their medical facility when I got a call to report to Granger's office. I ran into Will on the way and -- GEORDI Granger said he hadn't seen either of you. Did you get to his office? Riker and Pulaski exchange a look. RIKER I don't remember. Pulaski suddenly unlimbers her tricorder. Runs it over Geordi, over Riker, over herself. STAR TREK: "Send In The Clones" - 3/17/89 - ACT FOUR 47. 40A CONTINUED: (2) GEORDI So what's the prognosis, Doc? Will I ever play the piano again? PULASKI (ignoring the quip) Geordi, you'll be pleased to know that you aren't missing any epithelial cells. GEORDI Great. PULASKI Will and I, however, are. RIKER (grimly) Meaning? PULASKI Although you can clone from any cell in the human body the cells lining the stomach are the best choice because they're relatively undifferentiated. Riker whirls, and heads toward the door. He is furiously angry. GEORDI Where are you going? RIKER To that cloning lab. Pulaski and Geordi exchange glances, and plunge after Riker. 41 INT. CLONING LABORATORY (OPTICAL) Riker, Pulaski and Geordi beam into the chamber. At last we see two of the cloning units. Riker approaches one of the smoke filled artificial wombs. He opens the door, and the smoke vents into the lab. Inside is a half-formed clone, but it is still recognizably the first officer. He recoils. We see his anger and disgust as he gropes for his phaser. STAR TREK: "Send In The Clones" - 3/17/89 - ACT FOUR 48. 41 CONTINUED: Riker blasts the developing clone. It vanishes. Riker steps to the second cloning unit. Opens the door; the smoke vents. He looks inside, looks back to Pulaski and cocks his head toward the clone. Pulaski nods. Riker blasts that clone, and it vanishes. The doors open, and Granger with three identical armed clones (2A, 2B, 2C) rush into the laboratory. Off various reactions as we: FADE OUT. END OF ACT FOUR STAR TREK: "Send In The Clones" - 3/17/89 - ACT FIVE 49. ACT FIVE FADE IN: 42 INT. CLONING LABORATORY (OPTICAL) There is a moment of complete dislocation as Geordi and Pulaski look from Riker to the armed clones, and back again. Geordi stares from the first officer with his phaser in hand to the empty space which used to hold the cloning equipment. GEORDI I don't suppose you'd believe this was an accident? GRANGER Murderers! RIKER Like hell! You're a damn thief! PULASKI (stepping between them) Gentlemen, please. The armed clones lower their weapons. GRANGER What else could we do? We asked for your help and you refused! We're desperate. Desperate! RIKER So that gives you the right to assault us, and rob us, and -- GRANGER We have a right to survive! Off everyone's frustrated, angry expressions as we GO TO: 43 OMITTED 43A INT. CAPTAIN'S READY ROOM (FROM SCENE 43) Present are Picard, Riker, Pulaski, and Troi. STAR TREK: "Send In The Clones" - 3/17/89 - ACT FIVE 50. 43A CONTINUED: PICARD Doctor, how desperate is the colony's situation? PULASKI They've got two maybe three more generations, then the fading will become terminal. They're the walking dead now, they just haven't been buried. RIKER I want that cloning equipment inspected. Who knows how many tissue samples they've stolen. I have the right to exercise control over my own body. PULASKI You'll get no argument from me. TROI I know the Mariposan culture seems alien, even frightening, but we really do have much in common. They're human beings fighting to survive. Would we do any less? PICARD Are you saying we should give them the DNA samples they require? PULASKI (stepping in) That's just postponing the inevitable. So they get an infusion of fresh DNA -- fifteen generations and they're back to the same problem. Cloning isn't the answer. They need breeding stock. Suddenly all the pieces of the puzzle come together. PICARD The Bringloidi. STAR TREK: "Send In The Clones" - 3/17/89 - ACT FIVE 51. 43A CONTINUED: (2) TROI (excited, seeing the possibilities) The Bringloidi have energy and drive, a sense of wonder. The clones possess emotional maturity, and technological know-how. PICARD They started out together. It does seem only fitting that they end up together. PULASKI (ironically) It's a match made in heaven. RIKER Unfortunately it's going to be a shotgun wedding. 44 OMITTED 44A INT. OBSERVATION LOUNGE (FROM SCENE 44) Picard, Pulaski, Danilo, and Granger hunkered down for some hard bargaining. GRANGER I'm sorry, Captain, but it's out of the question. You're trying to dump your problem off on us. (wearily) And we've got problems of our own. PICARD Can't you understand? The Bringloidi can help you. GRANGER (indicating Danilo) Look at him. How could we ever integrate that into our society? DANILO (growls) You're no prize yourself. STAR TREK: "Send In The Clones" - 3/17/89 - ACT FIVE 52. 44A CONTINUED: GRANGER Primitive, hostile, disruptive. It would require enormous effort to even educate them. DANILO (standing) Forget it, Captain Picard. I'm not coming with my hat in my hand to beg charity from this bastard. PICARD Sit down! I am not going to allow brag... (a look to Danilo) ... and bigotry... (a look to Granger) ... to destroy this meeting. Danilo sinks back into his chair. PICARD (to Granger) Commander Riker wants your laboratories inspected for any stolen tissue. I can understnad his concern, and I think we're going to have to transport all of your equipment to the Enterprise. GRANGER (bitterly) I see, when reason fails you'll resort to blackmail. PICARD (angry) All right, die! PULASKI (musing) It's not so bad, Captain. In fifty years we'll have a new Class M planet, complete with cities, all ready for colonization. Granger looks stricken. STAR TREK: "Send In The Clones" - 3/17/89 - ACT FIVE 53. 44A CONTINUED: (2) PICARD (gentler now) The end is closer than you'd like to think. GRANGER I don't know. The difficulties involved... DANILO Look, man, we're decent, hard working people. We're willing to learn. GRANGER They're so different. PICARD Yes. But it's differences which have made us strong. PULASKI An open society is a healthy society. When you allow your culture to become a melting pot it grows in exciting directions. GRANGER For three hundred years we've denied the carnal side of our nature. How can we learn to put that aside? DANILO You put a couple of young people together and you let nature take its course. PULASKI (to Danilo) To make this work you're going to have to alter your society, too. Monogamous marriage won't be possible for several generations. DANILO I'm not sure I follow. STAR TREK: "Send In The Clones" - 3/17/89 - ACT FIVE 54. 44A CONTINUED: (3) PULASKI Thirty couples are enough to create a viable genetic base. But the broader the base the safer and healthier the society. It would be best if each woman -- Mariposan and Bringloidi -- had at least three children by three different men. DANILO (preening slightly) I think I could handle that. GRANGER God, this is so... so... PICARD Frightening? GRANGER Repugnant. PULASKI The normal drives are still there. You're just going to have to alter your attitudes. DANILO So, it's a done deal? Granger slowly, reluctantly nods. DANILO (continuing) My hand on it. Granger offers his hand. Danilo spits into his palm, and clasps Granger's hand. There is the expected reaction from the clone. DANILO (continuing) Now come on, I want to stake out my three ladies. Send in the clones. PICARD (sotto voce) I must be out of my mind. STAR TREK: "Send In The Clones" - 3/17/89 - ACT FIVE 55. 44A CONTINUED: (4) PULASKI (sotto voce) Starfleet's probably going to agree. 45 OMITTED 46 OMITTED 46A INT. CARGO BAY Picard, Granger and Danilo step into the Cargo Hold. Danilo crosses quickly to Brenna, and they begin talking. Granger stares at this mass of humanity. Little boys playing marbles, a young girl skipping rope. Men and women mending clothes, sharpening knives, trying to keep busy as they wait to get out of this metal bottle. Granger gives Picard a look of "Oh, God, help!" Picard puts a hand on the clone's shoulder, and urges him deeper into the hold. Suddenly Brenna roars over, and confronts Picard. BRENNA Isn't that just like a man! You make these grandiose decisions, but you never stop to consider the poor women. PICARD Miss Odell, I am -- BRENNA You men draw a mug, and solve all the world's problems while the beer goes down. But when it comes to the practical matters it always falls to the women to make your grand dreams come true. PICARD Miss Odell, you're the one who wanted a new home. STAR TREK: "Send In The Clones" - 3/17/89 - ACT FIVE 56. 46A CONTINUED: BRENNA But I don't know if I want to be Eve! PICARD That is your choice. If you wish to stay aboard the Enterprise we will drop you at a starbase, and you can go where you will. BRENNA Leave my dad? PICARD Brenna, you've always been the mothering force for your people. If this is going to work they'll need your wisdom and guidance. BRENNA But my life has just gotten very narrow. PICARD We have to make choices. BRENNA Oh, damn. She pauses, and stares thoughtfully at Granger, who is picking his way like a fastidious crane through the crowd of Bringloidi. BRENNA (continuing) (indicating Granger with a head jerk) What does he do again? PICARD He's the prime minister. BRENNA Sounds important. PICARD It is. BRENNA Sounds like he might have more than two coins to rub together. (MORE) STAR TREK: "Send In The Clones" - 3/17/89 - ACT FIVE 57. 46A CONTINUED: (2) BRENNA (Cont'd) (a beat) Three husbands? Picard nods. Brenna walks over to Granger. Speaks to him. Then lifts the hem of her skirt, smiles up at him. As we GO TO: 46B EXT. SPACE - THE ENTERPRISE (OPTICAL) 47 OMITTED 48 INT. MAIN BRIDGE Picard in the command chair, Troi is at his side. Worf is at Tactical. Data at OPS. Supernumerary at CONN. Riker and Pulaski ENTER from the aft turbolift. PICARD All squared away? RIKER The Bringloidi have reached their new home. DATA It is unfortunate that we cannot remain for several months, and observe the integration of the two colonies. PULASKI They're going to do just fine. They're survivors, both of them. PICARD We've done what we could. We've put the cats in the same sack, and given it a good shake. DATA But what is occurring on Mariposa is a demonstration of sociobiology, and the concept of the selfish gene. (MORE) STAR TREK: "Send In The Clones" - 3/17/89 - ACT FIVE 58. 48 CONTINUED: DATA (Cont'd) Males and females are each pursuing their respective reproductive strategies in an effort to maximize their contribution to the gene pool of the next generation. RIKER Data, I liked the captain's analogy better. DATA Why? PULASKI It was more romantic. Troi is laughing. Riker is struggling to suppress a smile. Data is bewildered. DATA How are cats in a sack romantic? They would fight and scratch and... Everyone is laughing now. WORF Very romantic. I hunt in darkness. The stars my guide. The memory of you sings in my blood. I seize the gift. The bridge crew is really entranced. Wow, Klingon poetry. This is really building to something. What is the gift? WORF (continuing) Carry it to your bower. And lay at your feet the hearts of my enemies. The silence is deafening. Picard turns slowly back to face the main viewscreen. Points at CONN. PICARD Engage. STAR TREK: "Send In The Clones" - 3/17/89 - ACT FIVE 59. 48 CONTINUED: (2) WORF (sotto voce) Perhaps it does not translate well. 49 OMITTED 50 EXT. SPACE - THE ENTERPRISE (OPTICAL) Leaving orbit and the rubber band effect as they warp out. FADE OUT. END OF ACT FIVE THE END STAR TREK: THE NEXT GENERATION "Manhunt" #40272-145 Written by Tracy Torme Directed by Rob Bowman THE WRITING CREDITS MAY NOT BE FINAL AND SHOULD NOT BE USED FOR PUBLICITY OR ADVERTISING PURPOSES WITHOUT FIRST CHECKING WITH THE TELEVISION LEGAL DEPARTMENT. Copyright 1989 Paramount Pictures Corporation. All Rights Reserved. This script is not for publication or reproduction. No one is authorized to dispose of same. If lost or destroyed, please notify the Script Department. 2ND REVISED FINAL DRAFT MARCH 29, 1989 STAR TREK: "Manhunt" - 3/29/89 - CAST STAR TREK: THE NEXT GENERATION "Manhunt" CAST PICARD ANTEDIAN DIGNITARY RIKER MRS. TROI DATA MR. HOMN PULASKI TRANSPORT PILOT TROI SECRETARY GEORDI SLADE BENDER WORF TOUGHGUY WESLEY REX O'BRIEN Non-speaking Non-Speaking SECURITY GUARD ANTEDIAN DIGNITARY BAR CROWD Voice-over SAILOR COMPUTER VOICE BLEACHED BLOND HARD DRINKERS CHINESE-AMERICAN MISC. PATRONS STAR TREK: "Manhunt" - 3/29/89 - SETS STAR TREK: THE NEXT GENERATION "Manhunt" SETS INTERIORS EXTERIORS USS ENTERPRISE USS ENTERPRISE MAIN BRIDGE TRANSPORTER ROOM ANTEDE THREE CORRIDORS CAPTAIN'S READY ROOM PACIFICA TURBOLIFT MRS. TROI'S QUARTERS HOLODECK THREE SICKBAY CHANDLERLAND (HOLODECK) HALLWAY DIXON HILL'S OFFICE OFFICE RECEPTION REX'S BAR STAR TREK: "Manhunt" - 3/29/89 - PRONUNCIATION GUIDE STAR TREK: THE NEXT GENERATION "Manhunt" PRONUCIATION GUIDE ANTEDE THREE an-TEE-DEE ANTEDIANS an-TEE-DEE-ans TONY PALERMO pah-LAIR-mo HOMN hom STAR TREK: THE NEXT GENERATION "Manhunt" TEASER FADE IN: 1 EXT. SPACE - THE ENTERPRISE (OPTICAL) in orbit around a planet. PICARD (V.O.) Captain's log, Stardate 42881.5. We are in orbit around Antede Three, awaiting the arrival of two dignitaries from this world. 2 INT. CORRIDOR - ON PICARD walking toward us, wearing a full-dress uniform. PICARD (V.O.) (continuing) Our mission is to carry them to a conference on planet Pacifica... 3 TRANSPORTER ROOM - PICARD (OPTICAL) as he the Transporter Room with DOCTOR PULASKI, WESLEY and WORF, all of whom wear work uniforms. PICARD (V.O.) (continuing) ... where their race will be given the opportunity to join the Federation. PICARD I thought you might find this interesting, Mister Crusher. Few humans have ever seen an Antedian in the flesh. Picard nods at TRANSPORTER CHIEF O'BRIEN who begins the energizing process. The two delegates begin to MATERIZLIZE on the platform... STAR TREK: "Manhunt" - 3/29/89 - TEASER 2. 4 REVERSE ANGLE ON ANTEDIANS as seen from behind. They are dressed in flowing, red robe-like garments with an attached hood which keeps us from seeing their heads from here. PICARD Welcome. I'm Jean-Luc Picard, captain of the Enterprise. WESLEY (hesitates, then) Are they alright, Captain? Doctor Pulaski moves toward them with a medical instrument in hand. She grimaces as she gets near their faces. PICARD No, this is their preferred way of space travel. 5 ANGLE TO INCLUDE THE ANTEDIANS seen from the front for the first time. It is not a pretty sight. Each mottled face resembles an oversized catfish: huge gaping mouth, spindly whiskers, big fish eyes, and a skeletal structure that gives them a grotesque, unhealthy appearance. Their hooded, crimson robes only emphasize their eerie, menacing appearance. But what is really bizarre is that they're completely motionless -- catatonic. A medium-sized container arrives with them. Pulaski methodically runs her medical instruments along the Antedian's necks. PULASKI Their physical condition appears good enough, considering the circumstances. PICARD (to Welsey) It is a self-induced catatonic state. Their way of dealing with the trauma of spaceflight. WESLEY Will we try to revive them? STAR TREK: "Manhunt" - 3/29/89 - TEASER 3. 5 CONTINUED: PICARD Not until we reach the Pacifica conference. It's three days away. (to Pulaski) You've prepared Sickbay facilities for holding them, Doctor? PULASKI As soon as we make some adjustments. Their physiology is unusual. (to O'Brien) Can you store them for a few hours? O'BRIEN Aye. I'll have them kept out of the way here. WESLEY What's in this container? PULASKI Their food. When they come out of stasis, they will be very hungry. 5A ANOTHER ANGLE Wesley steps over to the container and lifts the cover. It's filled with a writhing, squirming mass of worm-like creatures. WESLEY This is what they eat? PULASKI In great quantities. 5B SCENE PICARD (to Worf) Provide security. WORF Understood, sir. Worf steps forward and looks at the Antedians admiringly. STAR TREK: "Manhunt" - 3/29/89 - TEASER 3A. 5B CONTINUED: WORF (continuing) What a handsome race. The others look at Worf, wondering if he could possibly be serious. And of course, he is. 5C EXT. SPACE - THE ENTERPRISE (OPTICAL) as she leaves orbit. 6 INT. BRIDGE The normal bridge crew are in their positions. Troi is also there. RIKER What did you think of the Antedians, Wesley? WESLEY Well, they are rather strange-looking, Commander. Picard ENTERS and walks to his position. STAR TREK: "Manhunt" - 3/29/89 - TEASER 4. 6 CONTINUED: DATA Judging a being by its physical appearance is the last great human prejudice, Wesley. PICARD A point well taken. I'm sure that to the Antedians, we're equally unattractive. RIKER It is interesting to consider just how subjective "beauty" truly is... WORF Captain... we're being hailed by a small transport vessel just coming into range. 7 ANGLE EMPHASIZING TROI As she suddenly stiffens. TROI Oh, my God! PICARD What is the problem? TROI What can she be doing here? WESLEY On the screen, Captain. 8 ANGLE INCLUDING MAIN VIEWER (OPTICAL) where the pilot of the shuttle is seen. He appears to be a bit weary and nervous. TRANSPORT PILOT Starship Enterprise, come in! RIKER We have you on our viewer, Pilot. STAR TREK: "Manhunt" - 3/29/89 - TEASER 5. 8 CONTINUED: TRANSPORT PILOT Enterprise... I have a passenger -- a V.I.P. passenger -- who I'm ordered to -- MRS. TROI (V.O.) Let me talk to them, Pilot. I'm much more articulate. The transport pilot seems relieved to step aside and let the woman speak for herself. 9 MOVE IN ON THE VIEWSCREEN (OPTICAL) as MRS. TROI slides into the picture. TROI Mother! DATA Captain, we are now receiving Starfleet orders granting a Lwaxana.... MRS. TROI (overlapping) Lwaxana Troi, daughter of the Fifth House, Holder of the Sacred Chalice of Riix, heir to the Holy Rings of Betazed. DATA ... full ambassadorial status, sir. RIKER I'm afraid it's back into your formal uniform, Captain. DATA And yours too, Commander. She is listed as representing the Betazed government at the conference. TROI Mother, please don't do this to me. STAR TREK: "Manhunt" - 3/29/89 - TEASER 6. 9 CONTINUED: MRS. TROI Do what to you, Little One? (to Picard) Oh, what naughty thoughts, Jean-Luc. How wonderful you still think of me in that way. 10 ANGLE EMPHASIZING PICARD AND RIKER looking at one another resignedly, preparing for the worst. FADE OUT. END OF TEASER STAR TREK: "Manhunt" - 3/29/89 - ACT ONE 7. ACT ONE FADE IN: 11 INT. TRANSPORTER ROOM - PICARD, RIKER AND TROI as they ENTER, Picard and Riker now in formal full dress. The Antedians, still catatonic, have been moved to the side where a SECURITY GUARD stands with them. TROI It's so like my mother to do the unexpected. She's famous for it. PICARD It will be nice to have her as a guest of the Enterprise again. Riker exchanges a look with Picard signifying some reservations. Picard turns to Transporter Chief O'Brien. PICARD Energize. 12 ANGLE ON THE TRANSPORTER PLATFORM (OPTICAL) as Mrs. Troi beams in. She is apparently kneeling on the platform, hunched over and facing backwards... 13 CLOSE ON MRS. TROI MRS. TROI (opening her eyes) Aaagh! Where are my legs?! TROI Where they belong, Mother, Right under you. Mrs. Troi begins standing up. MRS. TROI (offhand) Oh, wonderful. So they are! (turning to Picard) But I'll never completely trust this device, Jean-Luc... STAR TREK: "Manhunt" - 3/29/89 - ACT ONE 8. 13 CONTINUED: TROI He's "Captain Picard," Mother... Mrs. Troi has turned to where she suddenly sees the "frozen" Antedians. MRS. TROI Aaagh! PICARD (to Riker, resignedly) Explain. RIKER Sorry they startled you, Mrs. Troi. These are Antedian delegates... ah, temporarily being stored here, I believe... MRS. TROI "Delegates?" The last time I saw something like this, it was being served on a plate. Picard has to turn away to hide his smile at this. But Riker enjoys it openly, especially her next line. MRS. TROI (continuing) But you, Jean-Luc, I was not aware you had such handsome legs. My valet is waiting. You may beam him aboard now. Picard nods at the Chief O'Brien and in a second, a larger figure MATERIALIZES. MISTER HOMN arrives carrying Mrs. Troi's "suitcase". He breaks into that easy, enigmatic smile of his as he looks around the room. MRS. TROI You remember Mister Homn, of course. PICARD It would be hard to forget Mister Homn. Welcome back to the Enterprise. Homn nods toward Picard. STAR TREK: "Manhunt" - 3/29/89 - ACT ONE 9. 13 CONTINUED: (2) MRS. TROI I've retained his services despite the outlandishly lustful thoughts he spews in my direction. I suppose the poor fellow just can't help himself. It's hard to believe Homn would lust after anyone. MRS. TROI (continuing; to Picard) Perhaps you could show me to my suite now? PICARD Certainly. Mister Homn starts to pick up her luggage... MRS. TROI Put that down, Homn. We can't deny the captain the honor of carrying my belongings. Picard looks at the beehive-shaped carrying-case. He remembers the last time... PICARD I won't interfere with Homn's duties this time. MRS. TROI That's not the real reason, Jean-Luc. You forget I'm a telepath. Picard looks from Mrs. Troi to Deanna as Homn picks up the luggage... RIKER Look, since this apparently has some meaning to you, Mrs. Troi, I'll... Riker reaches in to take the luggage from Homn. RIKER (continuing) ...carry...it. STAR TREK: "Manhunt" - 3/29/89 - ACT ONE 10. 13 CONTINUED: (3) Homn has released the luggage and the full weight of it (with a MUFFLED CLANKING SOUND) is taken by Riker, whose words have come out in a surprised GROAN. 14 INT. ENTERPRISE CORRIDOR The others follow Riker who is trying his best to "casually" carry the heavy bag down the hallway. Picard, the Trois and Homn follow closely behind. RIKER (trying not to sound labored) It's... just down this hall. 15 EMPHASIZING THE TROI WOMEN Deanna is glaring at her mother who is looking at Riker's legs. MRS. TROI (telepathic) He has nice legs too, Little One. Is he still yours? TROI (telepathic) Humans no longer own each other that way, Mother. MRS. TROI Oh really? (looks at Picard) That's a custom we may have to introduce again. 16 INT. MRS. TROI'S QUARTERS - PICARD (OPTICAL) as the Group ENTERS and Riker puts down the baggage, SIGHS with relief. MRS. TROI Thank you. RIKER Glad I could help out. Riker and the others EXIT, leaving Picard to face Mrs. Troi alone. STAR TREK: "Manhunt" - 3/29/89 - ACT ONE 11. 16 CONTINUED: PICARD I trust you'll be comfortable here, Mrs. Troi. Now if you'll excuse me, I must get back to my duties. MRS. TROI Captain, I will be serving a Betazoid dinner of greeting tonight. It is an ambassadorial function. PICARD (after a hesitation) Of course. It, uh, sounds delightful. Picard EXITS. Mrs. Troi speaks of him as she flutters about, checking out the intricacies of her quarters... MRS. TROI He's a fine man. Solid. Earnest. Reliable. Perhaps a little on the dull side, but all in all he's not bad. TROI I cannot believe you! You sound like you're sizing up a commodity. MRS. TROI But that's exactly what men are, darling. Especially human men. (chuckles, strokes Deanna's face) Was your father ever unhappy with me? TROI No, he worshipped you, Mother. But I'll never learn to see men the way you do. STAR TREK: "Manhunt" - 3/29/89 - ACT ONE 12. 16 CONTINUED: (2) MRS. TROI You will as you mature, darling. And the males in your life will bless you for it. 17 INT. MAIN BRIDGE - RIKER, WESLEY, WORF, DATA Most of them are LAUGHING, except Data who is smiling slightly. Even Worf seems almost amused. WESLEY ... but it's true she complimented Captain Picard on his legs? Riker nods affirmative. DATA I would have thought a telepath would be more discreet. RIKER No, it's just the opposite. She knows what's in your mind and she lets you know what's on hers. More LAUGHTER -- which is suddenly stilled as they realize that Picard ENTERED the bridge. Picard takes his seat at command and speaks in a tone that's polite, yet gets the point across -- enough of this conversation. PICARD We must not lose sight of the fact that we're talking about someone who has been granted ambassadorial rank. Even if she appears a bit eccentric, Lwaxana Troi must be treated with appropriate respect. Is that understood? The others make it clear that it is. STAR TREK: "Manhunt" - 3/29/89 - ACT ONE 13. 17 CONTINUED: DATA Our orders on her mentioned nothing specific except... PICARD (waits) Except what, Mister Data? DATA We are to cooperate with her as fully as possible, deliver her there untroubled, rested... (seeing Picard's expression) I assume those were merely courtesies due her rank, sir. PICARD (to Riker) See that every bridge officer and supervisor has the full text of that transmission. RIKER Aye, sir. 18 EXT. SPACE - ENTERPRISE IN WARP TRAVEL (OPTICAL) 19 INT. MAIN BRIDGE - FAVORING PICARD PICARD Picard to Pulaski. When was the last time you looked in on our Antedian guests? STAR TREK: "Manhunt" - 3/29/89 - ACT ONE 14. 20 INT. TRANSPORTER ROOM - CLOSE ON PULASKI intently concentrating on reexamining the Antedians. PULASKI I'm doing so right now, Captain. PICARD (V.O.) Are they still catatonic? PULASKI Status of the beings is unchanged. Pulse still steady -- respiration normal for them. 21 INT. MAIN BRIDGE - SAME SETTING PICARD Understood. Keep me informed -- Picard out. Picard leans back in his chair, takes a deep breath, and then rises. PICARD I believe I'll get some rest. (exiting; to Riker) It will be a dress uniform dinner, gentlemen. RIKER Sir? But PICARD EXITS. DATA Inquiry, Commander: to which dinner was the captain referring? Riker ponders the question. RIKER Nothing I've been invited to. Have any of you? Apparently no one has. RIKER (continuing) Very interesting! STAR TREK: "Manhunt" - 3/29/89 - ACT ONE 15. 22 EXT. THE ENTERPRISE - FLYING BY AT WARP SPEED (OPTICAL) 23 INT. ENTERPRISE CORRIDOR - PICARD (back in formal dress) walks down the hallway with a bottle of ice-blue Altairian brandy in his right hand. As he rounds a corner he comes face to face with Doctor Pulaski, going the other way. PICARD You're not attending the dinner with us this evening, Doctor? PULASKI I've already eaten, Captain. But thanks anyway. We HEAR A CHIME. MRS. TROI (V.O.) (sing-song) Come in! The expression on Pulaski's face is interesting. 24 INT. MRS. TROI'S QUARTERS - PICARD ENTERS to find romantic lighting, with candle-like objects spread about the room, and a small table made up for two. Mrs. Troi is out of sight in an adjoining room; Mister Homn is filling expensive-looking glasses with what looks like wine. Picard holds out the bottle -- Homn accepts it... and then to Picard's surprise, he unscrews the top and begins to drink straight from the bottle. Picard starts to say something, but thinks better of it. In a matter of moments, Homn drains the entire bottle! The giant smiles at Picard and bows regally -- his way of saying thanks. PICARD Tell me Mister Homn, when will the others be arriving? Homn stares back blankly. STAR TREK: "Manhunt" - 3/29/89 - ACT ONE 16. 24 CONTINUED: PICARD (continuing) The other officers? (pause) Commander Riker? Deanna? Homn shakes his head from side to side and smiles mischievously. He points a long finger at Picard and then points behind the Captain. Picard turns to see... 25 MRS. TROI leaning against the wall, wearing a sexy dress and a provocative look. MRS. TROI (purring) Hello, Jean-Luc. So glad you could come. 26 MOVE IN ON THE CAPTAIN this is not what he expected... FADE OUT. END OF ACT ONE STAR TREK: "Manhunt" - 3/29/89 - ACT TWO 17. ACT TWO FADE IN: 27 INT. MRS TROI'S QUARTERS (OPTICAL) Mrs. Troi and the captain are seated at the little table, about to begin their meal. Their glasses are full and Homn is serving them a colorful Betazoid salad. MRS. TROI (raising glass) A toast: to Earthmen... who despite their faults, have a unique ability to charm women of all races, in all corners of the galaxy. PICARD (clinks glass) Speaking for the men of Earth, which is an awesome responsibility indeed, I thank you. Picard is attempting to be light and uncaring, but underneath the surface, this candlelight dinner is making him uncomfortable. MRS. TROI (teasing, flirting) I know what you're thinking, Captain. PICARD (a bit worried) You do? MRS. TROI You're wondering if I've been seeing any other man on a serious basis. PICARD (shaking head) Well actually I wasn't -- MRS. TROI -- I wouldn't worry about it, Jean-Luc. (MORE) STAR TREK: "Manhunt" - 3/29/89 - ACT TWO 18. 27 CONTINUED: MRS. TROI (Cont'd) (reaches out, touches his hand) Competition seems to bring out the best in the human male. Picard smiles weakly and subtly withdraws his hand to lift his glass to his lips. PICARD I must admit, I wasn't expecting this... setting. I assumed that my high-ranking officers would also be attending. MRS. TROI Never assume anything when it comes to Lwaxana Troi. A Betazoid woman is full of surprises. Not knowing just what to say, Picard begins to pick at his food, but Mrs. Troi seems to be waiting for something. Behind her, Mister Homn, sipping a drink, has just taken his place next to a big, circular chime near the far wall. MRS. TROI (continuing) Strange, I'm not that hungry tonight. (leans forward, coy) I wonder what's making me lose my appetite? Any ideas? She smiles and extends a utensil toward her blue salad. Homn downs his drink and makes ready. She takes a bite, Homn STRIKES THE CHIME. Picard jumps at the SOUND. PICARD Oh yes, you're giving thanks for your food. I'd forgotten about that. (pause) I wonder how many other cultures have similar customs. MRS. TROI I don't know. STAR TREK: "Manhunt" - 3/29/89 - ACT TWO 19. 27 CONTINUED: (2) PICARD Let's find out. (touches his communicator) Commander Data. 28 thru OMITTED 30 30A INT. BRIDGE - SCIENCE ONE - DATA (INTERCUT AS NEEEDED) DATA Yes, Captain. PICARD Mrs. Troi and I are having a very interesting discussion about the various ways by which societies give thanks. For instance, the Betazoids use of the chime. DATA The use of the chime is unique, but not at all dissimilar to the Ooolans of Marejaretus Six, who use two large stones which are continuously struck during the meal. Those at the dinner must eat until the stones are broken. Or, the oligarchy on Atifs Four, which require a young male to... PICARD (overlapping) Commander, this is absolutely fascinating, don't you agree, Mrs. Troi? Data, if your duties permit, why don't you join us for dessert? DATA You are forgetting sir -- I do not digest foodstuffs, therefore I cannot participate in the consumption of your post-main course edibles. MRS. TROI What'd he just say? STAR TREK: "Manhunt" - 3/29/89 - ACT TWO 19A. 30A CONTINUED: PICARD You don't have to eat to join us, Commander. I'm sure Mrs. Troi would simply enjoy the pleasure of your company. Data is pleased to hear it... DATA Indeed, sir. I am on my way; Data out. STAR TREK: "Manhunt" - 3/29/89 - ACT TWO 20. 30A CONTINUED: (2) MRS. TROI (annoyed) How could you possibly think I'd want to share our special time together, with that robot of yours? PICARD Because... because of his wonderful after-dinner conversation. His anecdotes are the stuff of legends aboard this ship. CUT TO: 31 INT. MRS. TROI'S QUARTERS (OPTICAL) CLOSE on Data, now sitting at their table, eagerly concluding an "anecdote". DATA -- So by using the square root of pi and then multiplying it by nine to the third power, I was able to accurately calculate the distance between the Omicron galaxy and the Crab Nebula. 32 PULL BACK TO INCLUDE PICARD AND MRS TROI (OPTICAL) She is literally bored stiff by Data's stories. In the b.g. we see Mister Homn break into a slow, cat-like yawn. PICARD Fascinating, Data. I'm sure Mrs. Troi would love to hear the one about the, uh, anomalous chemical composition of... say... brown dwarf stars. MRS. TROI Well, not really -- DATA (enthused) -- Yes Captain, that is a particularly spellbinding subject. STAR TREK: "Manhunt" - 3/29/89 - ACT TWO 21. 32 CONTINUED: Data turns to Mrs. Troi with a pleased, eager look on his face. DATA (continuing) For most stars, the rare-Earth element Europium is enriched relative to samarium and gadolinium... MRS. TROI (flat, bored) Is that so? DATA It is! However in brown dwarf stars, the element Europium is anomalously depleted. MRS. TROI (sarcastic) Fascinating. DATA But that is only the beginning. If the abundances of the elements terbium, dysprosium, holmium and erbium are also factored into the analysis... 33 INT. ENTERPRISE CORRIDOR - TROI AND PULASKI are walking together. PULASKI Your mother seems quite an interesting woman, Deanna. TROI Doctor, perhaps I should tell you something about my mother's condition at this time. PULASKI Condition at this time?! TROI Something that occurs to Betazoid females at mid-life. We call it the Phase. STAR TREK: "Manhunt" - 3/29/89 - ACT TWO 22. 33 CONTINUED: PULASKI At mid-life as in the human female's menopause? TROI (laughing) Almost the exact opposite. It is only at mid-life that Betazed females become... well, fully sexual, if you know what I mean. PULASKI Yes, perhaps I do. I just heard her voice fairly singing when she called the captain into her room. TROI I wonder if I shouldn't warn the captain? Pulaski considers it. Is there a gleam of amusement in her eyes? PULASKI Nooo. As ship's doctor I'd consider it excellent exercise for his reflexes and agility. TROI (somewhat shocked) Doctor... ! PULASKI In staying ahead of your mother. Troi suddenly understands, smiling. TROI Yes. An animal is always at its best when hunted... PULASKI Or when hunting. 34 STAY ON DEANNA as she walks on, turns and ENTERS her mother's quarters... STAR TREK: "Manhunt" - 3/29/89 - ACT TWO 23. 35 INT. MRS. TROI'S QUARTERS - DATA (OPTICAL) has activated a computer screen and is now pointing out various moving objects, as Deanna ENTERS... DATA ... and at this point, the second co-orbital satellite avoids a collision with the first. MRS TROI (looking up) -- Deanna, darling! Thank the Four Dieties you're here. TROI I hope I'm not interrupting. PICARD (rising) No, as a matter of fact, I need to get back to the bridge myself. DATA Perhaps I should stay here and further entertain our guest. MRS. TROI -- No! I mean, I think you're needed on the bridge as well. Data frowns... then nods, realizing she's probably right. PICARD (a bit stiff) Thank you for a delicious meal. Let's uh, do it again sometime. MRS. TROI (purring) Oh, I know we will. Picard EXITS (followed by Data) a little embarrassed. Deanna looks at her mother with hard, accusing eyes. MRS. TROI Little One, the captain is every bit as charming as your father was. Mrs. Troi innocently takes a bite of her Betazoid dessert and Homn RINGS THE CHIME... STAR TREK: "Manhunt" - 3/29/89 - ACT TWO 24. 36 INT. ENTERPRISE CORRIDOR, OUTSIDE MRS. TROI'S QUARTERS Data and Picard walking together. PICARD (exhaling) Data, you'll never know just how much I owe you for that. DATA Indeed, Captain? I know many more interesting anecdotes as well. 37 INT. MAIN BRIDGE - THE CAPTAIN AND DATA EXIT the turbolift and ENTER the bridge. Riker swivels from his position at Command, and addresses Picard, still in dress uniform, who is moving toward the Ready Room... RIKER Status of the Antedian delegates unchanged, Captain. PICARD What's our e.t.a. to the conference? RIKER Forty five point three hours, sir. PICARD Very good, Number One. I'll be in my Ready Room. Picard ENTERS his Ready Room while Data crosses to Ops. 38 INT. MRS. TROI'S QUARTERS - HOMN bottle in hand, is cleaning up the table -- Mrs Troi is HUMMING to herself as she throws on a Betazoid shawl. TROI Why would you come aboard at a time like this? STAR TREK: "Manhunt" - 3/29/89 - ACT TWO 24A. 38 CONTINUED: MRS. TROI (shrugging) I had no choice. I was going to Pacifica, you were going to Pacifica, it seemed the appropriate thing to do. TROI Don't be absurd -- you knew what this would lead to... Deanna trails off as she looks at Homn (she doesn't want to continue this conversation in front of anyone). She takes her mother by the arm and leads her out of the room. STAR TREK: "Manhunt" - 3/29/89 - ACT TWO 25. 39 INT. ENTERPRISE CORRIDOR - ON THE TROIS Deanna is animated and concerned while her mother is smiling and relaxed, nodding hello to passers-by... TROI What stage is it in? MRS. TROI I have it completely under control. TROI (demanding) What stage is it in? MRS. TROI (smiles) Well, far enough along for me to enjoy it, Little One. TROI (worried) Now I know why you wore that dress. MRS. TROI (laughing) Don't be ridiculous. It's just a simple little dress -- there's nothing provocative about it. TROI (more to herself) What are we going to do? MRS. TROI I'm going to do the only honorable thing there is to do. (smiles) And I'd say the captain has the inside track. TROI Don't even think it! MRS. TROI Why not? He was thinking about it all through dinner. STAR TREK: "Manhunt" - 3/29/89 - ACT TWO 26. 40 INT. CAPTAIN'S READY ROOM - TIGHT ON PICARD'S FACE He's in his regular uniform. PICARD I was what?! 41 PULL BACK TO INCLUDE RIKER AND TROI (OPTICAL) PICARD (continuing) I tell you Deanna, for a telepath, your mother's accuracy leaves much to be desired. TROI Actually, her telepathic prowess is quite advanced. Except for now. RIKER "Except for now?" PICARD Don't misunderstand me, Counselor. Your mother is a beautiful person... TROI (continuing) My mother is just beginning a physiological phase... one that all Betazoid women must deal with as they enter mid-life. Troi stops talking and looks at the men. The men look at each other... STAR TREK: "Manhunt" - 3/29/89 - ACT TWO 27. 41 CONTINUED: RIKER It's something Troi warned me about when we were first seeing each other. (looks at Troi) When a Betazoid female goes through "the Phase," it quadruples her sex drive. TROI Or more... Picard looks worried, Riker WHISTLES. RIKER (to Troi) ... "or more?" I didn't know that. TROI I didn't want to frighten you. (to Picard) My mother has opted for the only dignified course of action open to her. RIKER Isolation? TROI She has chosen to focus all of her sexual energy on one male. This man will eventually become her husband, of course. (with difficulty) It seems Captain, that you are the early favorite. RIKER Congratulations, sir! PICARD I am not amused, Number One. (starts pacing again) There must be a way to convince her that it's quite impossible -- without offending her. TROI You cannot apply human style logic to this, Captain. (MORE) STAR TREK: "Manhunt" - 3/29/89 - ACT TWO 28-29. 41 CONTINUED: (2) TROI (Cont'd) Mother would be shocked and deeply resentful, should you spurn her advances. She would naturally take it very personally. PICARD Well, considering Starfleet's orders not to get her upset, I think it might be prudent for me to make myself less available for the duration of this journey. RIKER Agreed. Off this decision we GO TO: 42 INT. ENTRANCE TO HOLODECK - ANGLING ON THE COMPUTER PICARD (V.O.) Setting: San Francisco California, United States Of America, the year 1945 A.D., program to fit the novel, "The Long Dark Tunnel". COMPUTER VOICE You may enter when ready. 43 PULL BACK TO SEE PICARD (OPTICAL) decked out in trenchcoat and fedora, re-entering Chandlerland as private-eye Dixon Hill... FADE OUT. END OF ACT TWO STAR TREK: "Manhunt" - 3/29/89 - ACT THREE 30. ACT THREE FADE IN: 44 EXT. SPACE - ENTERPRISE IN FLYBY (OPTICAL) PICARD (V.O.) Dixon Hill's memoirs: date, the 1940's... 45 INT. HALLWAY LEADING TO DIXON HILL'S OFFICE - DAY Picard walks toward the glass door with "his" name on it. He moves slowly, relishing the detail in the decrepit hallway. PICARD (V.O.) (continuing) It was a grey day in the city by the bay. My pockets were as empty as a press agent's heart. I needed a case, that's for sure, but the private dick racket was as slow as the horse I just blew my last two bucks on. 46 INT. DIXON HILL'S RECEPTION ROOM - PICARD ENTERS and finds his SECRETARY behind the desk... PICARD (pleased) Hello, it's good to see you again. SECRETARY (chuckling) You're too much, Dix. You make it sound like you ain't seen me in a year. Picard smiles to himself, she's close to right. He removes his hat and coat, as she pulls out a small notepad... SECRETARY You got two calls... PICARD New cases? STAR TREK: "Manhunt" - 3/29/89 - ACT THREE 31. 46 CONTINUED: SECRETARY Are you kiddin'? The last time we got a new case, Hitler wasn't running Germany. (checks pad) Your tailor called -- he wants his dough for cleaning your other suit -- and your landlord called -- you can guess what he wants. PICARD (thoughtful) I see... Well, pay the tailor and stall the landlord. He walks into his office. The secretary swivels her chair and picks up the phone... SECRETARY (to herself) Pay the tailor... (laughs, hangs up) Pay the tailor? With what? 47 INT. HILL'S OFFICE - ON PICARD MOVING AROUND THE ROOM, happy to be back in Chandlerland. 48 INT. MRS. TROI'S QUARTERS (OPTICAL) Close on Mrs. Troi. MRS. TROI Unavailable? Ship's business? PULL BACK to reveal Deanna, standing across from her. Mrs. Troi seems more surprised than angry... MRS. TROI (continuing) Ship's business takes precedence over me? TROI I'm afraid so. STAR TREK: "Manhunt" - 3/29/89 - ACT THREE 32. 48 CONTINUED: MRS. TROI Hmmm... Oh well, he was too old for me anyway. Still thinking, she moves over to where Homn is happily sampling several tall glasses of multi-colored liquids. MRS. TROI (to Homn) Homn, let's consider my alternate plan. Homn bows deeply -- his way of saying "good idea." TROI Alternate plan? MRS. TROI You worry too much, Little One. Your mother has the situation well in hand. 49 INT. DIXON HILL'S OFFICE - ON PICARD (OPTICAL) sitting with his back to the door, hands clasped behind his head, staring out the window at the San Francisco street scene. He doesn't turn as WE HEAR THE DOOR OPEN behind him... SECRETARY (V.O.) (a little nervous) There's a gentleman here to see you, Mister Hill. PICARD Thank you, Madeline. The secretary steps aside and then EXITS as SLADE BENDER, a huge, bull-necked, square-shouldered tough guy in an expensive gangster suit ENTERS. Finally, Picard swivels his chair around and faces his visitor. He rises slowly, awkwardly lights a cigarette (chokes on it), and deliberately sizes up Slade Bender... PICARD Yes, as the book said, everything about you is big: big shoulders... big neck... big fists... STAR TREK: "Manhunt" - 3/29/89 - ACT THREE 33. 49 CONTINUED: Slade interrpts, speaking with little emotion, slurring his words in a half-whisper. He's the dumb, silent type. SLADE You a private dick? PICARD Says so on my door, doesn't it? SLADE I want you should do a job for me. PICARD Let me guess -- you want dance lessons. Slade grabs Picard by the arm. SLADE (sincere) You're not trying to be funny are you? I don't like funny things. Picard is feeling some pain from Slade's crushing grip. PICARD Yes... yes, I understand that. No funny things. Slade releases Picard's arm and the captain flexes and unflexes cramped muscles. SLADE I want you to find a missing person. PICARD Alva? Let's see -- I'll bet she's your sister... Picard reacts to Slade's expression. SLADE Yes. She's my sister, and I want you to find her! STAR TREK: "Manhunt" - 3/29/89 - ACT THREE 34. 49 CONTINUED: (2) Slade's gotten all worked up again -- he's grabbing Picard by the shirt to get his point across. PICARD Take it easy, Mac! I can't take the job of finding Alva if you break me like a matchstick. Slade seems to think that over and ultimately agrees. He releases his vice-like grip. PICARD (continuing; straightening tie) As a matter of fact, I knew who Alva was all along. I've read the book. Slade hovers over Picard again. SLADE Read what book? Are you being funny again? PICARD (to Slade) You got a picture? SLADE Of Alva? PICARD Of course of Alva! The novel wasn't illustrated. Slade is again puzzled but reaches into his shirt pocket, and hands Picard a photograph. 50 CIRCLING PICARD as he studies the photo STAR TREK: "Manhunt" - 3/29/89 - ACT THREE 35. 50 CONTINUED: PICARD I believe the 1940 expression was "hubbah, hubbah, hubbah." SLADE And I still say you talk funny. I don't like funny talk. PICARD That's part of the cost of hiring a private eye like me, Slade. I'm very different from most you could get. Picard looks up at Slade, then back at the photo. SLADE I want you to find Alva. I'll pay you. PICARD (nods) Okay. I'll find Alva for you; but you might not like what I find. Slade simply nods, and then turns and walks out the door. Picard calls after him and follows. Slade continues out the reception door and into the hallway. As Picard passes his startled secretary, he comments to her with a smile: PICARD (CONT'D) This is so much fun. 51 INT. TRANSPORTER ROOM - WESLEY AND WORF are standing before the platform, looking up at the still motionless Antedian delegates. WORF Even in this state, they possess a certain dignity, a graceful countenance. STAR TREK: "Manhunt" - 3/29/89 - ACT THREE 36. 51 CONTINUED: Wes takes a good look at the scaly, grotesque faces under the red hoods. WESLEY If you say so, Lieutenant. WORF (peers at him) I see. Is this how you felt when you first saw me? WESLEY (pause, guiltily) Well... maybe at first. (brightening) But now that I've seen a few more Klingons, I know that you're real handsome, for... for a Klingon. Worf GRUNTS, not sure he likes that compliment. WESLEY That uh, didn't come out quite right. The door opens and Mrs. Troi ENTERS, followed of course by Mister Homn. She looks up at the Antedians and shudders... MRS. TROI I still say they'd look better in sauce. (moves closer; concentrating) No, nothing. (to Welsey) When will the good captain revive them? WESLEY Not until we reach Pacifica, ma'am. Mrs. Troi turns her attention from the Antedians to Worf and Wesley. She walks around them in a slow circle -- Homn follows, two steps behind. MRS. TROI You seem a fine boy. One day you will grow up to be a big, strong man. STAR TREK: "Manhunt" - 3/29/89 - ACT THREE 37. 51 CONTINUED: (2) Wesley looks over at Worf, wondering what she's getting at. MRS. TROI (continuing) But even though humans age far more rapidly than Betazoids, I cannot afford to wait for you to mature. This confuses Wesley even more. Mrs. Troi eyes Worf... MRS. TROI (smiling) But you... your innermost thoughts are primal, savage. I like that in a man. WORF I am not a man. MRS. TROI Which is in your favor, men so often being irrational and egotistical. (eyes him, then sighs) But I'm afraid I've grown accustomed to human companionship. It's nothing personal, you would have made a fine choice. Worf frowns -- he is about to ask her what she's talking about when she turns to her valet... MRS. TROI Who's next, Mister Homn? Homn puts his hands to his eyes and pantomimes the structure of a VISOR. MRS. TROI Ah yes. Let's get to it, I'm not getting any younger. Mrs. Troi EXITS, Homn bows to Wesley and Worf, then follows. WESLEY What was that all about? Worf has no idea. STAR TREK: "Manhunt" - 3/29/89 - ACT THREE 38. 52 INT. ENGINEERING - GEORDI is at his station. The matter/anti matter core is throbbing as Mrs. Troi and Mister Homn approach... MRS. TROI Lieutenant La Forge, I wish to be direct with you. GEORDI (turning to see her) I prefer it that way. Now what are you being direct about? MRS. TROI I have decided to give all the bridge officers an equal opportunity to gain my favor. GEORDI I see. MRS. TROI Ah, but you don't, and that's the problem. I wonder whether a sightless man could ever appreciate great beauty. GEORDI That's funny... I've always had the same doubts about the sighted. MRS. TROI Odd. How so? GEORDI Because my eyes don't seduce my mind, I'm driven to find beauty in other things -- things sighted people tend to ignore. The lovely temperature gradiations of bodies, the moisture patterns, the indications of inner peace and harmony... STAR TREK: "Manhunt" - 3/29/89 - ACT THREE 39. 53 ANGLE ON HOMN nodding slowly, agreeing completely. 54 BACK TO SHOT MRS. TROI (thoughtful) Very interesting, Lieutenant. But I'm not sure if that's good or bad. A less perceptive man could be easier to live with. 55 STAY ON A PUZZLED GEORDI watching Mrs. Troi and Homn as they EXIT. 56 EXT. SPACE - ENTERPRISE FLYBY (OPTICAL) 57 INT. END OF HALLWAY OUTSIDE HILL'S OFFICE - PICARD stands with Slade Bender before the door marked "Exit." PICARD Twenty dollars a day, plus expenses. Fifty when I find her. Slade pulls out several crisp hundred dollar bills and hands one to Picard. Picard runs the bill between his fingers. PICARD You know it's wonderful to need money. SLADE (poking Picard's chest) You'll get more when you find Alva. He EXITS through the door -- WE CAN HEAR his heavy feet thundering off. Picard pivots and starts to walk back toward his office. STAR TREK: "Manhunt" - 3/29/89 - ACT THREE 40. 58 ANGLE TO REVEAL A MYSTERIOUS MAN IN A GREY SUIT leaning against the wall between Picard and the office. A fedora is tilted down over one eye making his face hard to see. He's looking down, lighting a cigarette. Picard pauses. PICARD Let's see... I must have been skimming pages about here. What part did you play? The man doesn't look up. Picard shrugs, saunters past; the man immediately moves up behind him, sticking a concealed gun against his back. TOUGHGUY Freeze. PICARD Ah, yes, of course. TOUGHGUY I'm looking for Slade Bender, Hill. I understand he was here yesterday. PICARD My, my, time does fly in the Holodeck. Hands up, Picard turns slowly and gets a look at his assailant. The Toughguy has olive skin, a jagged scar on his cheek and oddly pale eyes... PICARD (continuing) Even if I happen to know a Slade Bender, why should I help you? TOUGHGUY Because he owes me money. And because if you don't, I'll blow your head off. A slow, cool smile spreads across Picard's face... PICARD I knew you'd say something like that. Marvelous. The Toughguy is really ticked off by Picard's unfathomable (to him) remark. He jams the gun against Picard's ribs... STAR TREK: "Manhunt" - 3/29/89 - ACT THREE 41. 58 CONTINUED: TOUGHGUY Cut the crap, Hill! Tell me where he is or so help me, I'll plug ya! PICARD I don't think so. With lightning quickness, Picard throws a classic punch, knocking his adversary reeling. The Toughguy swings about, shoves his gun into Picard's belly, FIRES. On Picard's look of astonishment: FADE OUT. END OF ACT THREE STAR TREK: "Manhunt" - 3/29/89 - ACT FOUR 42. ACT FOUR FADE IN: 59 INT. CHANDLERLAND HALLWAY - PICARD AND TOUGHGUY The hood is staring in disbelief at Picard. TOUGHGUY Come on, drop! I shot ya. PICARD No, the gun misfired. Thankfully the Holodeck is handling it correctly and the mortality failsafe is functional. The Toughguy suddenly swings his gun, catches Picard on the side of the head. It is a real blow which hurts. But Picard pulls the hood up by his tie, and knocks him out with a chopping overhand right. 60 CLOSER - PICARD He rubs the side of his head, finds blood there. PICARD (continuing) But in some ways, the program is almost too accurate. Dixon Hill's secretary has come running out, having heard the shot. She immediately spots the blood on the side of Picard's head. SECRETARY Dixon, you're hurt! Picard grimaces in fine fashion... PICARD Don't worry about it. (shrugs) I'm going out for a drink. Dixon Hill's secretary looks on admiringly as her boss literally shrugs off his wound and EXITS the hallway. STAR TREK: "Manhunt" - 3/29/89 - ACT FOUR 43. 61 INT. REX'S BAR - ON REX the tough-eyed Bartender who owns this dark, moody bar. The place is almost empty: a SAILOR sits next to a BLEACHED BLOND at the bar, a COUPLE OF HARD DRINKERS are at tables in the back. The jukebox is playing A MOURNFUL FORTIES TORCH SONG, and Rex is pouring scotch into the glass of a CHINESE-AMERICAN CUSTOMER... 62 ANGLE ON THE DOOR as Picard ENTERS. He looks around, affection in his eyes. 63 WIDE ANGLE as Rex spots Picard at the door. REX Well hello, Dixon. Haven't seen you in a while. Picard approaches the bar... REX (continuing) What's it been, four hours? Picard sticks out his hand and smiles... PICARD You must be Rex. Am I right? REX If you gotta ask me that pal, you need a drink. PICARD (sitting at bar) You're right, I do need a drink. REX The usual? PICARD (smiling, nodding) Let's see... Scotch, neat? STAR TREK: "Manhunt" - 3/29/89 - ACT FOUR 44. 63 CONTINUED: REX (chuckling) What else? (pours, notices wound) I hate to be the bearer of bad news old buddy, but you're leakin' blood. PICARD (macho) So? I've got plenty more where that came from. REX (sincere) Geez, Dix. You're tough as nails. Picard belts down his drink and almost turns green. PICARD Uggh, I'm going to have to get used to that. REX (dry) Yeah, it's only your third one today. Picard is still reeling from the drink. He closes his eyes and raps his fist on the bar. PICARD What the hell... make it four. The stoic Bartender pours... REX I'll put it on your tab. PICARD (pulls out a bill) Cash! I just took on a case. 64 INT. MAIN BRIDGE - RIKER is at Command with Troi beside him. Wesley and Data are at Conn and Ops. STAR TREK: "Manhunt" - 3/29/89 - ACT FOUR 44A. 64 CONTINUED: PULASKI COM VOICE Bridge this is Doctor Pulaski. We have completed the transfer. The Antedians are now in Sickbay. STAR TREK: "Manhunt" - 3/29/89 - ACT FOUR 45. 64 CONTINUED: (2) RIKER Acknowledged, Doctor. (to Wesley) E.t.a. to Pacifica, Mister Crusher? WESLEY (checking instruments) Twelve point four hours, sir. That will get us there approximately two hours before the conference begins. The turbolift doors open and Mrs. Troi and Mister Homn ENTER the bridge. Deanna immediately reacts, going to her. TROI Mother, what are you doing here? You can't just stroll up to the bridge whenever you feel like it. MRS. TROI (looking around) I didn't just stroll up, dear. I took the turbotube, or whatever you call it. (to Riker) The captain's not here? RIKER He's busy elsewhere, ma'am. MRS. TROI (beat; shrugs) Well, no matter. I have other interests as well. Mrs. Troi has begun to slowly circle the bridge, pausing briefly before the bridge officers she has been considering... TROI (telepathic) You're scheming something, Mother. I can tell. MRS. TROI (telepathic) You're always so melodramatic, Little One. I'm not scheming, I'm deciding. STAR TREK: "Manhunt" - 3/29/89 - ACT FOUR 46. 64 CONTINUED: (3) Mrs. Troi ends up in the command area, next to Riker. MRS. TROI Tell me Commander... what is your opinion of Betazoid women? RIKER Well... I've only your daughter and you. But judging from that, I'd have to say they're the fairest in the galaxy. 65 EMPHASIZING MRS. TROI AND TROI MRS. TROI (telepathic) He has excellent taste, Little One. TROI (telepathic) That's enough! This is getting embarrassing. MRS. TROI (to Riker) My lovely daughter has always found it difficult to accept compliments from male admirers. I however, long ago learned to accept them. 66 REACTION SHOTS OF WESLEY AND DATA (OPTICAL) MRS. TROI (O.S.) (continuing) The key is learning how to endure constant flattery without letting it go to your head. Don't you agree, Commander? 67 WIDE ANGLE RIKER If you say so, ma'am. STAR TREK: "Manhunt" - 3/29/89 - ACT FOUR 47. 67 CONTINUED: MRS. TROI (to all on bridge) I like that answer! Now here's a man who knows how to defer to a lady. I only hope the rest of you men are listening. Deanna puts her hands to her head -- and for the first time, Riker wonders if he made a mistake. 68 INT. REX'S BAR - PICARD is making love to his scotch. Rex is straight across from him, leaning against the bar; the classic bartender/customer scene. The bar has a few more PATRONS now... REX ... So she says "Rex, when are you gonna sell the bar and get a real job? Make a shoe, mend a fence, do something useful?" Can you believe that, Dix? PICARD It's hard to believe, Rex. REX She just doesn't understand the service I perform here. My regulars depend on me to pour and listen, listen and pour. I'm like some kind'a psychologist to you guys, am I right? Both men are looking down now and shaking their heads. Rex starts to pour again, but stops as he sees someone coming up behind Picard. Soon the captain is also aware of a presence behind him... PICARD I recognize the size of the shadow. (MORE) STAR TREK: "Manhunt" - 3/29/89 - ACT FOUR 48. 68 CONTINUED: PICARD (Cont'd) (speaking, without turning around) Hello Slade. Buy you a drink? Slade violently spins Picard around and speaks to him, nose to nose... SLADE Where's my Alva? PICARD I'm working on it. SLADE (grabbing Picard's shoulders) You're not working hard enough. REX Hey pal, that's my buddy you're manhandling there! Maybe you oughta -- Rex cuts off as Slade moves up to the bar and fixes a murderous gaze upon him. REX -- Oughta go right ahead with what you were saying. Rex shoots Picard a look that says "sorry, you're on your own", and busies himself with drying glasses. Slade grabs Picard again... SLADE I paid you money, Hill. Where is she? 69 INT. SICKBAY - DR. PULASKI (OPTICAL) is examining the Antedians, who are laid out in beds now. Worf stands alongside her, with one of his security guards in the b.g.... PULASKI The blood chemistry and brain organization of these creatures is completely outside of my experience... But it seems their metabolic rates are increasing. STAR TREK: "Manhunt" - 3/29/89 - ACT FOUR 49. 69 CONTINUED: WORF Is that good or bad? PULASKI It's good, I think. Pulaski moves right up to one of the creatures and runs a tricorder alongside an unseeing eye... She stops with a start, jerking backwards involuntarily. The Antedian's eye just blinked. 70 INT. BRIDGE - FAVORING RIKER PULASKI (V.O.) Pulaski to bridge. RIKER Riker here. PULASKI (V.O.) The Antedians are coming around. They're currently in the early stages of post-hibernation. RIKER How long before they're fully conscious? PULASKI I'd guess it to be a matter of hours now. RIKER Very good, Doctor, I'll notify the captain. Riker out. (to Mrs. Troi) If you'll excuse me, ma'am. MRS. TROI Are you going to see the captain? I thought he was tied up on ship's business. STAR TREK: "Manhunt" - 3/29/89 - ACT FOUR 50. 70 CONTINUED: RIKER In a manner of speaking... he is. I'm uh, not going to interrupt him, I'm simply going to inform him. MRS. TROI What excellent timing! You can also inform him about us. RIKER Us? Mrs. Troi affectionately strokes the bottom of Riker's chin. MRS. TROI You don't mind if I let your bridge crew know first, do you William? Riker is caught off-guard -- he doesn't know what to say. MRS. TROI (continuing, to everyone) Dear friends... you're all invited to a prestigious occasion on the planet Pacifica. TROI (to herself) Oh no. MRS. TROI (dabs her eyes) There, on the shores of the western sea... in a traditional Betazoid ceremony... your Commander Riker and I will be joined in the union of holy wedlock. WESLEY Married? MRS. TROI (smiling at Riker) 'Till death do us part. STAR TREK: "Manhunt" - 3/29/89 - ACT FOUR 51. 71 SHOCKED REACTION SHOTS OF ALL ending with a dazed William T. Riker, as we... FADE OUT. END OF ACT FOUR STAR TREK: "Manhunt" - 3/29/89 - ACT FIVE 52. ACT FIVE FADE IN: 72 INT. MAIN BRIDGE - SAME SETTING Mrs. Troi is beaming -- everyone else is speechless. RIKER Mrs. Troi... I don't know how to put this -- MRS. TROI -- I know just how you feel, dear. (moves to turbolift) Overwhelmed with excitement. Believe me, I understand. Mrs. Troi is about to enter the turbolift. Angry, Deanna starts to go after her but Riker subtly stops her. MRS. TROI (continued) We'll talk about the details later. Right now, there are preparations to be made. She EXITS into the turbolift. TROI Why did you stop me? Someone needs to set her straight! RIKER I'd rather let the captain handle that. TROI Coward! RIKER Simply following Starfleet's orders. Keep her mind untroubled until the conference. DATA Are you planing on going into the Holodeck, Commander? RIKER Thought I might, Data. Want to come along? STAR TREK: "Manhunt" - 3/29/89 - ACT FIVE 53. 73 CLOSE ON DATA a trace of a smile spreading across his face 74 INT. HALLWAY LEADING TO HOLODECK - MATCHING CUT on Data the same little smile on his face. 75 PULL BACK TO REVEAL that he is now decked out in his pin-stripe suit and fedora. Riker steps INTO FRAME beside him, still in his uniform. DATA I have mastered the language, or "lingo" of the period, sir. Also, the mannerisms and body language. Data stops for a moment and demonstrates a tough/cool mannerism -- a classic "Cagney hitch". DATA For example, this is a gesture denoting confidence and physical prowess. It is effective in attracting females and frightening off would-be adversaries. They have reached the Holodeck entrance. DATA Should anything in there confuse you sir, do not hesitate to ask. RIKER It's comforting to know I'm with an expert Data, but we're really not going to be there that long. (to computer) Computer... STAR TREK: "Manhunt" - 3/29/89 - ACT FIVE 54. 76 INT. REX'S BAR - SAME SETTING AS BEFORE only now, Slade Bender has taken a seat at the bar, beside the captain. Rex stands bottle in hand, directly in between them on the other side of the bar. PICARD She could be anywhere, Slade. You can't expect me to find her in one afternoon. SLADE It's been three days. PICARD (surprised) Has it really? What I mean is -- you gotta have patience. I'll find her; I guarantee it. SLADE (earnest, almost child-like) She'd contact me if she knew I was lookin' for her. Rex breaks into A CACKLING LAUGH... REX Come on, pal! So she told you that? So what? If I had a dime for every time a dame's said that to a guy -- Rex cuts off as Slade gets to his feet, steamed, and looking at Rex like a bull about to charge. Rex quickly changes course in mid-stream... REX (continuing) -- I'd... probably have less than a dollar. Cuz a girl never says that unless she really means it. The big fella buys it hook, line and sinker. STAR TREK: "Manhunt" - 3/29/89 - ACT FIVE 55. 76 CONTINUED: SLADE (to Picard) See? I want you to find my sister! Behind them, Riker and Data ENTER the bar. As they walk inside, Data speaks to Riker in a hushed voice... DATA In the last program here, we said I was from South America. It seemed to explain my unorthodox appearance. As they approach the bar, Picard spots them. Slade instantly rises and reaches under his coat. Picard grasps his arm... PICARD Easy Slade. They're friends of mine. Slade doesn't pull his gun, but he doesn't relax either. RIKER Sorry to bother you, Captain. PICARD -- Call me Dixon. RIKER -- Sorry to bother you, Dixon, but our two "passengers" are awakening. PICARD Well then, it's time to go. REX Your friends've got time for one drink, haven't they Dix? Riker nods to Picard -- there is still some time. Picard smiles and pushes his hat back. STAR TREK: "Manhunt" - 3/29/89 - ACT FIVE 56. 76 CONTINUED: (2) PICARD Sure, I can afford another round. As Rex pours, Picard does the introductions. Data reaches out, examines the money. DATA Very accurate. Fascinating. PICARD These are my associates... (indicates Riker) "Nails", from Chicago. (indicates Data) And -- DATA Carlos, from South America. Rex opens a new bottle... REX Sit right down fellas, and tell me your troubles. RIKER (to Picard) Troubles I've got, sir. There's a certain woman, a wealthy and beautiful woman, who suddenly says she's going to marry me. Picard looks at Riker -- he gets the point. REX She's got looks and bucks? Sounds like you've got yourself a heck of a deal. 77 INT. MRS. TROI'S QUARTERS - MRS. TROI (OPTICAL) is looking at her reflection in the mirror, making final adjustments on a flowing, outlandish new dress. MRS. TROI (to Homn) My fiance just has to see how I look in this. Come along, Homn. STAR TREK: "Manhunt" - 3/29/89 - ACT FIVE 57. 78 INT. ENTERPRISE CORRIDOR - MRS. TROI and Mister Homn stop at a computer wall panel just outside her quarters. MRS. TROI Tell me, computer, is Commander Riker still on the bridge? COMPUTER VOICE Negative. Riker is currently in Holodeck Three. MRS. TROI Holodeck? Where is that? COMPUTER VOICE Follow the com panel lights. They will lead you there. The panels begin to light up, pointing the way to the Holodeck. 79 INT. REX'S BAR - SAME SETTING Rex leans across the bar, a shocked look on his face... REX Good God, what's that? All eyes turn to see the amazing sight he's referring to: 80 ANGLE TO INCLUDE MRS. TROI AND MR. HOMN who have just entered the bar. The wildly-dressed Betazoid and her giant valet look incredibly out of place in Chandlerland. REX I'll bet that's the broad with the big bucks! (to Mrs. Troi) Come on over here, darlin'. I got the best stool in the house saved for ya. Mrs. Troi saunters over and sits down -- still looking around the room with clear distaste. STAR TREK: "Manhunt" - 3/29/89 - ACT FIVE 58. 80 CONTINUED: MRS. TROI (to Picard) I'm surprised you let this part of the ship get this dirty. PICARD (indicating Riker) Actually, that's the first officer's job. RIKER (nodding) Well, as a matter of fact... MRS. TROI Relax, Commander. You have begun making your true feelings clear. Obviously you feel unable to handle me. REX Anyway, why would a beautiful high-class lady like yourself... (indicates Riker) ... want to hook up with a mug like that? You're too good for him, if you ask me. She leans across the bar and smiles... MRS. TROI I couldn't agree more. REX So... what'llitbe, Doll? Her attention is completely on the bartender. Something about him interests, then fascinates her. MRS. TROI You are a most interesting person. REX You're not so bad yourself. In fact, you're as much class as this joint's ever seen. He pulls out an opened bottle of house wine. STAR TREK: "Manhunt" - 3/29/89 - ACT FIVE 59. 80 CONTINUED: (2) REX Here -- on the house. It's French... well, almost. She turns to Picard. MRS. TROI This is the most remarkable man. I have never met anyone quite like him. PICARD I don't suppose you have. MRS. TROI He's strong. I feel no thoughts from him... nothing. I've never known a man so able to keep his true feelings completely hidden. PICARD That's because... MRS. TROI No man has ever been such a mystery to me. I usually know their thoughts before they do. REX But not me, huh? MRS. TROI No. And I never realized how erotic that could be. Carry my beverage to that table... we have some things to talk about. 81 ANOTHER ANGLE as they watch Mrs. Troi walk over to the table. Rex picks up the glass of wine, gives Riker and Picard a little knowing wink, and heads for the table. 82 RIKER AND PICARD watch with amusement as Rex joins Mrs. Troi at the table and they begin a very intimate conversation. RIKER Should we tell her? STAR TREK: "Manhunt" - 3/29/89 - ACT FIVE 60. 82 CONTINUED: PICARD I think it's only fair, but let's allow her the moment. Riker has to smile. As we GO TO: 83 INT. SICKBAY - PULASKI AND WORF react with completely different expressions as 83A THE ANTEDIANS awake, quite agitated, trembling as they squeak with: ANTEDIANS Food-food-food-food-food-- 83B PULASKI quickly realizes what must be done: PULASKI Worf! The vermicula! Worf picks up the scoop net, and digs into the tank, coming up with a load of writhing vermicula. The Antedians see it, and tremble with joy as Worf holds the net out for them and they gobble it up while... PULASKI (touching communicator) Pulaski to Captain Picard. 84 INT. REX'S BAR Picard is still with Riker PICARD Go ahead, Doctor. PULASKI COM VOICE Our passengers are on their feet. PICARD Understood. RIKER I had better get to the bridge. STAR TREK: "Manhunt" - 3/29/89 - ACT FIVE 60A. 84 CONTINUED: PICARD What's their condition? PULASKI COM VOICE Hungry. Picard acknowledges with a nod. Riker EXITS. 85 ANOTHER ANGLE BAR Picard crosses to the table occupied by Rex and Mrs. Troi. PICARD Coming, Mrs. Troi? MRS. TROI Not just yet. Tell William I'm sorry... but Rex and I are getting married. STAR TREK: "Manhunt" - 3/29/89 - ACT FIVE 61. 85 CONTINUED: PICARD Mrs. Troi, your government expects us to deliver you to the conference and I intend to do that! Mrs. Troi considers it, nods and rises, patting Rex on the cheek. MRS. TROI Duty calls, darling. I'll be back for you later. 86 ANOTHER ANGLE As Picard and Mrs. Troi walk toward the exit. PICARD There is something about Rex I think you had better know... The rest of the conversation is lost as the doors close behind them. 87 EXT. SPACE - THE ENTERPRISE (OPTICAL) in orbit around blue Pacifica. 88 INT. CORRIDOR AT THE TURBOLIFT as it opens and Mrs. Troi EXITS, followed closely by Deanna and Mister Homn (who is effortlessly carrying her suitcase). Mrs. Troi leads the way down the corridor at a brisk pace, in a bad mood. MRS. TROI Imagine -- allowing me to go on like that with a simple bartender who doesn't even exist! TROI (amused) Mother, you always say you like new experiences. STAR TREK: "Manhunt" - 3/29/89 - ACT FIVE 62. 89 INT. TRANSPORTER ROOM - THE TROI ENTOURAGE (OPTICAL) arrives to find the Antedians on the platform and Picard, Riker, Data and Worf there to see them off. She indicates the Antedians... MRS. TROI Why are they still here? RIKER We thought that since you're going to the same conference, you might like to beam down with the other delegates. MRS. TROI (casually) They're not delegates. Those two are assassins. ANTEDIAN FEMALE That is... an outrage!... Lies! We demand you... transport at once! MRS. TROI Oh honey, don't bother to deny it. Your minds are so unsophisticated -- I can read your thoughts in my sleep. (to Picard, offhand) The inside of their robes are lined with ultritium. Highly explosive and virtually undetectable by your transporter. Data is already aiming his tri-corder at their robes... DATA (surprised) She is correct, sir. I am detecting large amounts of ultritium. MRS. TROI Of course you are. They planned to blow up the entire conference. Worf has drawn his phaser. PICARD Take them to level five. Disarm them and hold for questioning. STAR TREK: "Manhunt" - 3/29/89 - ACT FIVE 63. 89 CONTINUED: Worf leads the angry Antedians away -- they hiss at Mrs. Troi as they pass by. Mrs. Troi gives Deanna a hug and steps onto the platform, followed of course by Homn. MRS. TROI (sighing) Oh well, I didn't find a mate but I saved the conference as well as your reputations. All in a day's work I suppose. PICARD Good-bye Mrs. Troi... and thank you. She closes her eyes and nods her head, showing she's ready. Picard signals the transporter chief and Homn and Mrs. Troi begin to DEMATERIALIZE. Suddenly she opens her eyes and looks right at Picard. MRS. TROI (scolding, excited) Jean-Luc! Shame on you for thinking such a thing! And they're gone. All eyes turn to Picard... FADE OUT. END OF ACT FIVE STAR TREK: THE NEXT GENERATION "The Emissary" #40272-146 Participating Writers: Thomas H. Calder Richard Manning & Hans Beimler Directed by Cliff Bole THE WRITING CREDITS MAY NOT BE FINAL AND SHOULD NOT BE USED FOR PUBLICITY OR ADVERTISING PURPOSES WITHOUT FIRST CHECKING WITH THE TELEVISION LEGAL DEPARTMENT. Copyright 1989 Paramount Pictures Corporation. All Rights Reserved. This script is not for publication or reproduction. No one is authorized to dispose of same. If it is lost or destroyed, please notify the Script Department. 3RD REVISED FINAL DRAFT APRIL 10, 1989 STAR TREK: "The Emissary" - 4/10/89 - CAST STAR TREK: THE NEXT GENERATION "The Emissary" CAST PICARD K'EHLEYR RIKER K'TEMOC DATA PULASKI ADMIRAL GROMEK TROI GEORDI WORF O'BRIEN ENSIGN CLANCEY TACTICAL CREWMAN Voice-over COMPUTER VOICE FEMALE COM VOICE Non-Speaking Non-Speaking N.D. CREWMEMBERS THREE ALIEN WARRIORS KLINGON CREWMEMBERS STAR TREK: "The Emissary" - 4/10/89 - SETS STAR TREK: THE NEXT GENERATION "The Emissary" SETS INTERIORS EXTERIORS USS ENTERPRISE USS ENTERPRISE MAIN BRIDGE TRANSPORTER ROOM TACTICAL ROOM OBSERVATION LOUNGE DATA'S QUARTERS GUEST QUARTERS CORRIDOR OUTSIDE HOLODECK HOLODECK BATTLEGROUND T'ONG BRIDGE T'ONG (KLINGON SHIP) STAR TREK: "The Emissary" - 4/10/89 - PRONUNCIATION GUIDE STAR TREK: THE NEXT GENERATION "The Emissary" PRONUNCIATION GUIDE BORADIS bo-RAD-iss K'EHLEYR kay-LAHR K'TEMOC kuh-TEM-och* T'ONG TOONG P'RANG PRANG nuqneH nook-NECH* tlhIngan jIH tettle-eeng-GAHN JEECH* *"ch" as in "Bach" qaleghneS kah-LEG-nesh (guttural "g") STAR TREK: "The Emissary" - 4/10/89 - TEASER 1. STAR TREK: THE NEXT GENERATION "The Emissary" TEASER FADE IN: 1 INT. DATA'S QUARTERS RIKER, PULASKI, GEORDI, DATA, and WORF, in that order, sit around the table playing poker. By far, Worf has the biggest stack of chips. RIKER (eyeing his cards) Lookin' good. I say... five. Riker throws in five chips. Pulaski meets the bet. PULASKI Five here. GEORDI (adding chips) And five more. DATA (evaluating) I believe the wiser course of action here is to bend. GEORDI You mean fold. DATA That is correct. Fold -- to bend, make compact or give in. Data lays his cards on the table. All eyes on Worf. Worf calmly counts the right amount of chips and puts them in the pile. Then he adds two more large stacks of chips. WORF I raise fifty. Everyone is taken aback. DATA I do not believe Lieutenant Worf understands all the nuances of this betting procedure. STAR TREK: "The Emissary" - 4/14/89 - TEASER 2. 1 CONTINUED: RIKER Don't be too quick to judge, Data. His pile's a lot bigger than yours. PULASKI Than all of ours. DATA The cards have been favoring the Lieutenant, but that is the result of random chance... hence it is a temporary condition. GEORDI You hope. WORF Talk or play. Not both. Riker thinks it over. RIKER Fifty, right? PULASKI Fifty is the bet. What's the matter -- are your feet getting cold? RIKER No, just my cards... He bets, somewhat less sure of himself. PULASKI Thanks for staying in -- I need the chips. RIKER Got to earn them first. PULASKI Oh, I will. This pot has my name on it. GEORDI Talk, talk, talk... Pulaski bets. STAR TREK: "The Emissary" - 4/14/89 - TEASER 2A. 1 CONTINUED: (2) PULASKI Here's some action. Fifty... (adds more) ... and another fifty. GEORDI (backpedalling) Fold, fold, fold... Geordi throws in his hand. Worf pushes out four stacks of chips and adds another two. WORF Your fifty, and fifty more. Riker looks at Worf and at Pulaski -- who stare at each other. Pulaski smiles but Worf is deadpan. RIKER Love to stay in -- but not with these cards. Riker folds. PULASKI (to Worf) Looks like it's just you and me, handsome. Worf is a statue. Pulaski gathers up the needed amount. It takes every last chip she has, but -- PULASKI (cont'd) I'll see you. Pulaski pushes in the needed amount. Everyone stares at Worf as he slowly puts down his cards. A full house -- aces over queens. PULASKI (cont'd) Beats my straight. Everyone except Worf SIGHS as the tension is released. STAR TREK: "The Emissary" - 4/10/89 - TEASER 3. 1 CONTINUED: (2) RIKER The Iceman wins again. PULASKI You took my last chip. You could at least smile, Worf. Worf says nothing; he simply pulls in all the chips and stacks them, preparing for the next hand. GEORDI Smiling might break his concentration. PULASKI If you don't enjoy winning -- what do you enjoy? Losing? RIKER We'd be happy to accommodate you. Worf, unruffled, collects the cards and hands them to Data. WORF Your deal. Data takes the cards, shuffles them like an old pro, and deals. DATA The game is seven card stud; after the queen, one-eyed jacks and low card in the hole are wild. GEORDI Let me write this down. RIKER Just deal. I'd like to get some of my losings back before the next century. Pulaski and Geordi CHUCKLE. WORF I open with fifty. 1A NEW ANGLE A moment of stunned silence -- broken by: STAR TREK: "The Emissary" - REV. 4/12/89 - TEASER 4. 1A CONTINUED: FEMALE COM VOICE Bridge to Commander Riker. We are receiving a class eleven emergency signal from Starfleet Command. Instantly, the players throw their cards onto the table, get to their feet -- RIKER On my way. -- and head for the door. As they cross: GEORDI (to Worf) Fifty? You were bluffing. WORF Klingons never bluff. Geordi gives Worf a look of uncertainty -- is Worf kidding? -- as the group EXITS. 2 OMITTED 3 INT. MAIN BRIDGE PICARD ENTERS from the Ready Room. At Conn is a young female: ENSIGN CLANCEY. Riker, Data, and Worf ENTER and take their stations; Data relieves the supernumerary at Ops, examines readouts. PICARD Mister Data? DATA Emergency signal reads as follows: Enterprise to divert to coordinates four-two-three by one-one-two by five-one immediately. Further orders forthcoming. RIKER That's it? What's the emergency? DATA The message does not elaborate. STAR TREK: "The Emissary" - 4/10/89 - TEASER 5. 3 CONTINUED: RIKER (to Picard) You'd think they'd at least give us a hint. CLANCEY Course laid in, Captain. PICARD Warp eight. (to Riker) Whenever Starfleet gets enigmatic, I know we're about to face a challenge. PICARD (cont'd) Engage. 4 EXT. SPACE - THE ENTERPRISE (OPTICAL) changing course and then blasting into high warp... FADE OUT. END OF TEASER STAR TREK: "The Emissary" - 4/10/89 - ACT ONE 6. ACT ONE FADE IN: 5 EXT. SPACE - THE ENTERPRISE (OPTICAL) moving at high warp. 6 INT. MAIN BRIDGE Picard, Riker, Worf, Data, and Ensign Clancey as before. DATA Our destination is a point near the Boradis system. PICARD That area was colonized fairly recently, as I recall. DATA (nods) The first Federation outpost was established thirty-four years ago on Boradis Three. RIKER And since then, the Federation has colonized several planets in that sector. DATA Yet we are not headed for a specific colony. The coordinates given are outside the Boradis system. PICARD Any problems reported in that area? DATA None. PICARD Then what the devil's going on? WORF Captain, Starfleet Command is hailing us. PICARD It's about time. On screen. STAR TREK: "The Emissary" - 4/10/89 - ACT ONE 7. 6A ANGLE TO INCLUDE MAIN VIEWER (OPTICAL) as ADMIRAL GROMEK appears on the viewscreen. ADMIRAL GROMEK Greetings, Captain Picard. PICARD My compliments, Admiral Gromek. ADMIRAL GROMEK Captain, you'll soon be joined by a Federation special emissary from Starbase one five three. We're now transmitting the specifics. Picard looks to Data, who's checking readouts. DATA (nods to Picard) We are receiving. ADMIRAL GROMEK The rendezvous will be a bit tricky, so it's imperative you reach the intercept point on schedule. PICARD Understood. And -- the mission? ADMIRAL GROMEK The envoy will fill you in. You are to cooperate fully. PICARD Can you give me any details? ADMIRAL GROMEK Negative. PICARD Admiral, I find it difficult to prepare for a mission I know nothing about. ADMIRAL GROMEK (softening) I sympathize, Jean-Luc, but Starfleet Command considers this a top-security matter. The admiral permits herself a thin smile. STAR TREK: "The Emissary" - 4/10/89 - ACT ONE 8. 6A CONTINUED: ADMIRAL GROMEK (cont'd) After the envoy's briefed you, I think you'll understand our caution. Gromek out. Gromek's image VANISHES from the viewscreen. 7 OMITTED 8 NEW ANGLE RIKER Data, what ship is carrying the envoy? DATA The envoy is not aboard a starship. PICARD Indeed? DATA Apparently there were no starships available at Starbase one five three. The emissary is aboard a class eight probe. Surprised reactions from the group. RIKER A class eight probe is just over two meters long! PICARD (thinking) True, Number One. But if the sensors and transmitters were removed and life-support installed, there would be just enough space for one person. RIKER And those probes are designed to go warp nine. STAR TREK: "The Emissary" - 4/10/89 - ACT ONE 9. 8 CONTINUED: DATA (nods) By sending the probe to meet us rather than diverting the Enterprise to the starbase, they have saved us six point one hours. PICARD Obviously Starfleet feels that time is of the essence. RIKER Yes, but still... to seal someone up inside a Class Eight Probe and then just launch it off... (shakes his head) Hell of a way to transport a Federation dignitary. PICARD (to Clancey) We'll need an intercept course with pin-point accuracy. The probe carrying the emissary has no means of navigation... RIKER (finishing the thought) ... so if we don't catch it on the first try, we'll have to chase it. 9 EXT. SPACE - THE ENTERPRISE (OPTICAL) zooming along at high warp. 10 INT. MAIN BRIDGE As before. Geordi is now at his bridge Engineering Station; O'BRIEN is looking over Geordi's shoulder. The two of them study readouts. RIKER Data -- if we project our course past the rendezvous coordinates, what lies ahead? STAR TREK: "The Emissary" - 4/10/89 - ACT ONE 10. 10 CONTINUED: DATA As far as I can determine, sir -- very little. There are four colonies in the Boradis system, and nine other outposts scattered throughout the sector. Geordi turns to Picard. GEORDI Captain, we have a way to save you some time. PICARD Proceed. O'BRIEN I believe we can beam the probe aboard while we're still travelling at Warp Nine. RIKER (a low whistle) Quite a trick. GEORDI Right -- at warp speed it's nearly impossible to get a solid transporter lock. But if we caught the probe with a tractor beam... RIKER (catching on) We could use the tractor beam to focus the transporter. GEORDI Exactly. PICARD Risks? GEORDI None to the emissary. There's a chance the probe could break free... then we'd have to find it and start over. STAR TREK: "The Emissary" - 4/10/89 - ACT ONE 11. 10 CONTINUED: (2) PICARD So it's a gamble. (a beat) Odds, gentlemen? GEORDI Twenty to one it'll work. O'Brien nods agreement. Picard makes up his mind: PICARD Make it so. CUT TO: 11 EXT. SPACE - THE ENTERPRISE (OPTICAL) moving at high warp. 12 INT. MAIN BRIDGE As before, except that Geordi and O'Brien are no longer present. CLANCEY Coming to three-one mark one-one-three. DATA We should now be on a precisely parallel course with the probe. PICARD Increase to warp eight point nine. CLANCEY Eight point nine -- aye. PICARD Full sensors, aft. WORF Scanning... 13 EXT. SPACE - THE ENTERPRISE (OPTICAL) moving at just under Warp Nine. STAR TREK: "The Emissary" - 4/10/89 - ACT ONE 12. 14 INT. MAIN BRIDGE WORF I have it, sir. Bearing zero-five mark two-three-one; velocity warp nine. Clancey has it on her console as well: CLANCEY I see it. PICARD Adjust speed to intercept. 15 EXT. SPACE - THE ENTERPRISE (OPTICAL) Still at warp nine. In the distance behind the Enterprise, a point of light -- the probe -- appears and gains on the Enterprise. 16 INT. MAIN BRIDGE Clancey's intent on her helm maneuvers. WORF Probe coming up to starboard, range eighty-two hundred. Tractor beam ready. PICARD (to com panel) Mister La Forge? 16A INT. TRANSPORTER ROOM O'Brien makes a final adjustment on the transporter panel. Geordi checks readouts on a wall panel. GEORDI Transporter ready, Captain. 17 EXT. SPACE - THE ENTERPRISE (OPTICAL) as the probe "pulls up alongside" to starboard as the stars streak past at warp nine. STAR TREK: "The Emissary" - 4/10/89 - ACT ONE 13. 18 INT. MAIN BRIDGE WORF Range now seventy-five hundred. PICARD Steady as she goes... 19 EXT. SPACE - THE ENTERPRISE (OPTICAL) as the probe draws closer, slowing up relative to the Enterprise -- until they are both moving at warp nine in perfect tandem, as if joined by an invisible rod. 20 INT. MAIN BRIDGE WORF Probe is standing abeam. PICARD Engage tractor. 21 EXT. SPACE - THE ENTERPRISE (OPTICAL) as a TRACTOR BEAM reaches out and grabs the probe. 22 OMITTED 23 INT. TRANSPORTER ROOM Geordi and O'Brien as before. In b.g., Pulaski ENTERS, stands by with her medical scanner. GEORDI Okay, O'Brien, they've hooked it -- let's reel it in. O'BRIEN Will do. (to com panel) Transporter beam locked, Captain. PICARD'S COM VOICE Energize. O'Brien does so -- STAR TREK: "The Emissary" - 4/10/89 - ACT ONE 14. 24 ANGLE ON THE TRANSPORTER (OPTICAL) as a gleaming silver probe casing MATERIALIZES. 25 thru OMITTED 26 27 INT. MAIN BRIDGE O'BRIEN'S COM VOICE Probe aboard, Captain. PICARD Acknowledged. Number One? Riker's already heading for the turbolift. RIKER I'll welcome our visitor. Riker EXITS into the turbolift. PICARD (to Clancey) Resume original course and speed. CLANCEY Aye, sir. The bridge crew relaxes just a bit. The tension's off. Picard smiles: PICARD Well done, everyone. 28 INT. TRANSPORTER ROOM CLOSE on O'Brien as he touches a panel on the probe. The latches on the probe pop open. 29 WIDER to reveal Riker and Pulaski looking on as the casing opens automatically. (Geordi is no longer present.) Inside the probe is a person whose face we cannot see -- the head is fully covered by an oxygen helmet. Pulaski does a medical scan, is surprised at the readings. STAR TREK: "The Emissary" - REV. 4/14/89 - ACT ONE 15. 29 CONTINUED: RIKER Something wrong, Doctor? PULASKI I'm not sure. The readings are quite... interesting. Pulaski is about to help the envoy sit up -- but the envoy, not needing help, waves Pulaski aside, sits up, removes the oxygen helmet, and emerges from the probe casing. 30 NEW ANGLE on the envoy -- K'EHLEYR, a lovely, exotic woman, half-Klingon, half-human, with the appearance and physical strength of the former and the sardonic wit of the latter. K'EHLEYR I greet you. I am K'Ehleyr. RIKER (a Klingon greeting) nuqneH. qaleghneS. K'EHLEYR (surprised) You speak Klingon. RIKER A little. I am Commander Riker, and this is our chief medical officer, Katherine Pulaski. K'Ehleyr nods greeting. RIKER (cont'd) I hope your voyage wasn't too unpleasant. K'EHLEYR Klingons are not supposed to mind hardship. (breaks into a smile) Nonetheless -- I'm delighted to be out of that damned coffin. Riker can't help smiling in return. STAR TREK: "The Emissary" - REV. 4/17/89 - ACT ONE 16. 30 CONTINUED: RIKER I don't blame you. (re the probe) Not the most luxurious accommodations Starfleet has to offer... K'EHLEYR Whoever said that getting there is half the fun never rode in a class eight probe. Under this, Pulaski has repeated the medical scan. PULASKI How are you feeling? Your vital signs are rather atypical for a Klingon. K'EHLEYR No doubt because I am only half Klingon. PULASKI Oh? K'EHLEYR Yes. My father was Klingon; my mother was human. Riker and Pulaski react. This is one interesting lady... CUT TO: 31 INT. OBSERVATION LOUNGE Picard, TROI, Worf, and Data. The turbolift doors OPEN and Riker leads K'Ehleyr into the lounge. RIKER Captain, I'd like to present Special Federation Emissary K'Ehleyr. PICARD Welcome aboard. I'm Jean-Luc Picard. (introducing) Counselor Troi, Lieutenant Commander Data, and -- STAR TREK: "The Emissary" - REV. 4/14/89 - ACT ONE 16A. 31 CONTINUED: Picard turns to introduce Worf -- and a big grin spreads across K'Ehleyr's face. K'EHLEYR Worf! So this is where you've been hiding. I told you we'd meet again! Worf is anything but pleased to see K'Ehleyr. His surprise turns to resentment. K'EHLEYR (cont'd) Aren't you going to greet me? STAR TREK: "The Emissary" - 4/10/89 - ACT ONE 17. 31 CONTINUED: WORF I have nothing to say to you. K'EHLEYR Haven't changed a bit, eh? Well, I missed you, too. On the surprised faces of our crew -- and the indignant face of Worf, we: FADE OUT. END OF ACT ONE STAR TREK: "The Emissary" - 4/10/89 - ACT TWO 18. ACT TWO FADE IN: 32 EXT. SPACE - THE ENTERPRISE (OPTICAL) Streaking across space at warp eight. 33 INT. OBSERVATION LOUNGE (OPTICAL) Picard, Riker, Troi, Worf, and Data are at the conference table. K'Ehleyr is all business. K'EHLEYR Two days ago, Starbase three three six received an automated transmission from a Klingon ship, the T'Ong. (a beat) That ship was sent out over seventy-five years ago. RIKER When the Federation and the Klingon Empire were still at war... K'EHLEYR The message was directed to the Klingon High Command. It said only that the T'Ong was returning home and was about to reach the "awakening point." PICARD Which suggests that the crew was in cryogenic sleep for most of the long voyage. K'EHLEYR Exactly. RIKER And when the crew is revived... K'EHLEYR (nods) ... we'll have a ship full of Klingons who think the war is still going on. STAR TREK: "The Emissary" - REV. 4/12/89 - ACT TWO 19. 33 CONTINUED: PICARD So our task is to find the ship, and tell the Klingons we are no longer at war. RIKER Why us? A Klingon ship would have been a better choice. K'EHLEYR A Klingon ship -- the P'rang -- is on its way, but it's two days behind us. That may be too late. TROI Why too late? RIKER Because the T'Ong's crew is about to awaken within striking range of a dozen Federation outposts. DATA There are thirteen colonies with minimal defenses in that sector... K'EHLEYR (nods) Nice ripe targets for a Klingon warship. TROI And you believe you can convince these Klingons that humans are now their allies? K'EHLEYR No. Not a chance. Everyone is surprised. K'EHLEYR (cont'd) If you ask me, talking will be a waste of time. Klingons of that era were raised to despise humans. (shrugs) We'll try diplomacy. But I promise you -- it won't work. And then you'll have to destroy them. STAR TREK: "The Emissary" - 4/10/89 - ACT TWO 20. 33 CONTINUED: (2) Everyone is taken aback -- except Worf. PICARD (calmly) No. K'EHLEYR No? Captain, these Klingons are killers. You'll have no choice. PICARD Find me another choice. I want some options -- and I want them before we encounter the Klingon ship. (to Worf) Lieutenant, I'm assigning you to help the emissary. Dismissed. K'Ehleyr smiles, but Worf is anything but pleased. 34 OMITTED 35 NEW ANGLE as Riker, Troi, K'Ehleyr, and Data get to their feet. TROI (to K'Ehleyr) I'll escort you to the guest quarters. Troi and K'Ehleyr EXIT, followed by Data and Riker. Worf and Picard are the last ones to leave. Worf is uncharacteristically hesitant. Picard picks this up. PICARD Lieutenant? WORF Sir... I suggest Commander Riker or Data would better serve Special Emissary K'Ehleyr. PICARD Are there personal reasons you don't want the assignment? WORF Yes. STAR TREK: "The Emissary" - 4/10/89 - ACT TWO 21. 35 CONTINUED: PICARD Any professional reasons? WORF (after a beat) No. Picard gives Worf a measured look: "need I say more?" Worf thinks it over, then: WORF (cont'd) I withdraw my request, Captain. PICARD Good. Worf EXITS. 36 INT. CORRIDOR Troi and K'Ehleyr walk, deep in conversation. TROI I didn't know it was possible for a human and a Klingon to produce a child. K'EHLEYR Actually, the DNA is compatible -- with a fair amount of help. (a grin) Rather like my parents. Troi smiles. TROI I know exactly what you mean. My father was human... and my mother was Betazoid. K'EHLEYR (brightens) Really! It was the other way around for me -- my mother was human. (a beat) You must've grown up like I did -- trapped between cultures. STAR TREK: "The Emissary" - REV. 4/14/89 - ACT TWO 22. 36 CONTINUED: TROI I never felt trapped -- I felt fortunate. I experienced the richness and diversity of two worlds. K'EHLEYR (shakes her head in wonder) Perhaps you got the best of each... They reach the guest quarters. 37 INT. GUEST QUARTERS Troi leads K'Ehleyr into the chamber. K'EHLEYR Myself, I think I got the worst of each. TROI (with a smile) I doubt that. K'EHLEYR Oh, yes. Having my mother's sense of humor is bad enough -- it's gotten me into plenty of trouble. TROI And your Klingon side? K'EHLEYR That, I keep under tight control. It's like a terrible temper -- it's not something I want people to see. TROI Why hide it? We all have tempers... K'EHLEYR Not like mine. Sometimes I feel there's a monster inside me, fighting to get out. TROI And that frightens you. STAR TREK: "The Emissary" - REV. 4/14/89 - ACT TWO 22A. 37 CONTINUED: K'EHLEYR Of course it does. My Klingon side can be terrifying... even to me. TROI Yet it gives you strength. It's part of you. K'EHLEYR (smiles) That doesn't mean I have to like it. Troi smiles in return. STAR TREK: "The Emissary" - 4/10/89 - ACT TWO 23. 38 INT. TACTICAL ROOM Worf is alone, sitting at a library computer. K'Ehleyr breezes in. She's freshened up, changed clothes, and is even more attractive than before. Worf, all business, doesn't even look at her. WORF You are late. K'EHLEYR Sorry. Had to make myself beautiful. WORF I fail to understand why. K'EHLEYR Worf, we're alone now. You don't have to act like a Klingon glacier. I don't bite... (teasing) ... well, that's wrong; I do bite. WORF (ignoring) Shall we proceed with our assigned duties? K'EHLEYR (moving closer) I haven't even had a proper welcome. WORF I would prefer to keep this professional. K'EHLEYR (gives it right back) "I fail to understand why." WORF And I feel no need to explain. K'EHLEYR (needling) Oh, go ahead. Tell me. It's because you find me irresistible, isn't it? You always have. STAR TREK: "The Emissary" - 4/10/89 - ACT TWO 24. 38 CONTINUED: WORF Did you come on board the Enterprise to work, or to discuss your pointless fantasies? K'Ehleyr smiles. She's getting under his skin. K'EHLEYR You just won't open up, will you? Come on -- what happened to the Worf I met on Samrin's Planet? WORF He became a Starfleet lieutenant. K'EHLEYR Oh, is that it? Starfleet Academy turned you into a robot? You won't make me believe that. WORF I have no wish to make you believe anything. K'EHLEYR Perhaps you have changed. You weren't this aloof six years ago... or don't you remember? WORF There is nothing wrong with my memory. K'EHLEYR Well, there's something wrong with the rest of you. You're not even looking at me. WORF I am familiar with your appearance. K'EHLEYR And it gives you no pleasure to see me again? Worf is silent. K'EHLEYR (cont'd) It isn't as if we tried it and it didn't work, you know. You never gave it a chance. STAR TREK: "The Emissary" - REV. 4/17/89 - ACT TWO 25. 38 CONTINUED: (2) WORF I never? K'EHLEYR (sly) I mean, as I see it, we have some... unfinished business, you and I. Worf turns, looks her full in the face. WORF Not as far as I'm concerned. 39 ON K'EHLEYR It's as if he slapped her face. Worf turns back to the console, punches up a screen: WORF According to the library computer, the captain of the T'Ong is K'Temoc. But there is nothing regarding the ship's mission. K'EHLEYR (indifferent) So? WORF You're not interested in why the ship was sent out? K'EHLEYR (shrugs) Probably some secret military objective. WORF Perhaps, but we have no evidence of that -- K'EHLEYR Why else would there be no record of the mission? WORF The records may simply have been lost. STAR TREK: "The Emissary" - REV. 4/17/89 - ACT TWO 25A. 39 CONTINUED: K'EHLEYR In any case, what does it matter? Our concern is the present -- the possible threat. WORF And to contend with that threat, we need information. They're both getting irritated with one another. K'EHLEYR We have all the information we need. WORF That is foolish. Knowing their mission might help us understand them -- K'EHLEYR (cutting him) There's nothing to understand! They're Klingons! They'll attack! In their minds, we're the enemy -- and there's no way we're going to talk them out of that! WORF I do not appreciate being interrupted. K'EHLEYR (getting angry) And I don't appreciate wasting my time. STAR TREK: "The Emissary" - 4/10/89 - ACT TWO 26. 39 CONTINUED: WORF We were instructed to come up with options -- K'EHLEYR There aren't any! The assignment's hopeless! WORF (strained patience) There are always options. K'EHLEYR Oh, are there? Tell me: whatever happened to that wonderful Klingon fatalism of yours? WORF My experience aboard this ship has taught me that most problems have more than one solution. K'EHLEYR Starfleet hasn't improved you one bit. You're as stubborn as ever! WORF (losing his temper) Are you going to carry out your duties or aren't you? K'EHLEYR (also exploding) All right! I will! She puts her fingers to her temples, closes her eyes as if "thinking," holds that pose for two seconds, then: K'EHLEYR (cont'd) Upon due consideration of the problem and careful examination of all possible "options" -- my original recommendation stands. She SLAPS the tabletop -- K'EHLEYR (cont'd) Meeting adjourned. -- and storms out. STAR TREK: "The Emissary" - 4/10/89 - ACT TWO 27. 40 CLOSE ON WORF as mad as we've ever seen him, but holding it under tight control... FADE OUT. END OF ACT TWO STAR TREK: "The Emissary" - 4/10/89 - ACT THREE 28. ACT THREE FADE IN: 41 INT. GUEST QUARTERS K'Ehleyr storms into the chamber, boiling with frustration. She stops in the center of the room, tries to regain control over herself -- clenching her fists and tensing all her muscles. But her Klingon half needs release -- and with one sudden blow, K'Ehleyr smashes her fist through a glass-topped table. 42 NEW ANGLE DOOR CHIME. K'EHLEYR Come. Troi ENTERS. K'Ehleyr gives her an impatient look -- "Well?" TROI You're upset. K'EHLEYR (heavy sarcasm) Really! Your finely-honed Betazoid sense tells you that? TROI Well -- that, and the table. K'Ehleyr can't help a CHUCKLE. K'EHLEYR I warned you about my Klingon half. TROI May I make a suggestion? K'EHLEYR I thank you, Counselor. But I don't want any counseling. TROI Actually, I was going to suggest something else. STAR TREK: "The Emissary" - 4/10/89 - ACT THREE 29. 42 CONTINUED: K'EHLEYR Oh? TROI I find the Holodeck exercise programs rigorous enough to put my mind off most frustrations. K'Ehleyr smiles. K'EHLEYR And it'll keep me from wrecking the ship. TROI That, too... CUT TO: 43 INT. CORRIDOR OUTSIDE HOLODECK as K'Ehleyr approaches. She touches the Holodeck panel; it lights up. COMPUTER VOICE Enter program. K'EHLEYR Show me the exercise menu. 44 ANGLE ON THE HOLODECK PANEL (OPTICAL) as text appears: a long LIST OF PROGRAMS, including a line "CALISTHENICS -- LT. WORF." 45 ON K'EHLEYR A small, humorless smile. K'EHLEYR Calisthenics program of Lieutenant Worf. After a beat: COMPUTER VOICE Program complete. You may enter when ready. STAR TREK: "The Emissary" - REV. 4/12/89 - ACT THREE 30. 45 CONTINUED: The Holodeck DOOR OPENS, revealing a ruined, desolate BATTLEFIELD beyond. K'Ehleyr ENTERS the Holodeck. CUT TO: 46 INT. MAIN BRIDGE Picard, Riker, Data, Clancey, a TACTICAL CREWMAN, and other supernumerary CREW. PICARD Status. DATA Based on the last assumed position of the Klingon vessel, its apparent trajectory, and our estimates of their cruising speed, we should be in scanner range in fifteen hours, eight minutes. Under Data's speech, Worf has ENTERED and moved to Tactical. The tactical crewman yields the position to him. Worf begins operating Tactical in a flurry of activity. Picard is surprised to see Worf on the bridge. PICARD Lieutenant? WORF Special Emissary K'Ehleyr has... declared a short recess, sir. I wish to run a full diagnostic test on all tactical back-up equipment. RIKER (puzzled) We just ran a full test of those systems. WORF (testy) I feel it necessary to check them again. Picard leads Worf aside for a private moment. STAR TREK: "The Emissary" - 4/10/89 - ACT THREE 31. 46 CONTINUED: PICARD Lieutenant, I commend your diligence. However, I'm concerned that you're working yourself too hard. WORF Sir, considering the unknown elements we are about to face -- PICARD (cuts him off) Lieutenant -- I order you to relax. WORF (tense) I am relaxed. (on his look) Yes, sir. Worf EXITS. The tactical crewman takes over the station. Picard crosses to Riker. PICARD I've never seen the Lieutenant so... unsettled. RIKER (nods) The Iceman's finally melting. CUT TO: 47 INT. CORRIDOR OUTSIDE HOLODECK as Worf approaches the Holodeck and sees from the Holodeck panel that it's already in use. 47A INSERT - HOLODECK PANEL displaying the line: "CALISTHENICS -- LT. WORF." 47B BACK TO SCENE Worf is intrigued. STAR TREK: "The Emissary" - 4/10/89 - ACT THREE 32. 48 INT. HOLODECK - BATTLEGROUND Twilight. A shattered, desolate terrain. Rocks, ruins, shadows. K'Ehleyr, cat-like, moves silently through it. She's alert, coiled, ready for anything. She's wearing a Klingon glove/weapon similar to the one worn by Worf in "Where Silence Has Lease." Then, seemingly from nowhere, a massive ALIEN WARRIOR springs into view, charges at K'Ehleyr. 49 ON K'EHLEYR calmly dodging the alien's blow and smashing the side of her fist into the alien's face. The alien SNARLS and attacks again. 50 ANGLE ON WORF standing on the sidelines and watching with interest. 51 ON K'EHLEYR as the alien tries to get an arm around her throat. K'Ehleyr slams an elbow into its midriff, follows up with a lightning punch. The alien, unfazed, catches K'Ehleyr with a blow to her side. 52 thru OMITTED 53 54 WIDER as K'Ehleyr goes berserk. Her speed doubles; her blows become less "scientific" and more brutal. The Klingon warrior in her has taken over. K'Ehleyr dodges an alien blow, jabs with all her strength -- her fist SMASHES the alien in the face. The alien topples like a tall tree. 55 thru OMITTED 56 57 ANGLE TO INCLUDE WORF as K'Ehleyr, breathing hard, slowly turns to face him. Worf doesn't react, stares impassively back at her. STAR TREK: "The Emissary" - 4/10/89 - ACT THREE 33. 58 ON K'EHLEYR A long beat as she and Worf gaze at each other. He's seen a side of her -- her Klingon side -- that she lets no one see, and she's uncomfortable. Then, K'Ehleyr breaks the eye contact, shrugs with indifference: K'EHLEYR It's not much of a program. 59 ON WORF The barest hint of a smile. WORF Computer. Level Two. 60 WIDER as suddenly the "dead" alien Warrior is back on its feet, joined by TWO MORE ALIEN WARRIORS; all three are brandishing gleaming, razor-edged swords. On a nearby rock are two swords; Worf and K'Ehleyr pick up the swords as the aliens ROAR and attack -- 61 ANGLE ON THE FIGHT Everything we've seen is tame compared to what follows. Worf and K'Ehleyr turn into fighting machines -- vicious, snarling animals whose only goal is survival. 62 NEW ANGLE (OPTICAL) Worf and K'Ehleyr are a blur. Blades flash and CLANG. The aliens drop, unable to withstand the dual onslaught. One alien is literally sliced in half. And, almost before it's begun, it's over -- Worf and K'Ehleyr are the only ones left standing. 63 ON WORF AND K'EHLEYR sweaty, breathing hard, covered with grime -- but triumphant. Slowly, swords still in hand, Worf and K'Ehleyr turn toward one another -- eyes hard, expressions ferocious, blood still boiling. STAR TREK: "The Emissary" - 4/10/89 - ACT THREE 34. 64 WIDER as Worf quite deliberately tosses his sword aside. K'Ehleyr raises hers in defense -- but Worf is already upon her, gripping her sword-arm. K'Ehleyr struggles, but Worf is stronger -- inexorably bending her arm back and making her drop the sword. 65 OMITTED 66 ON K'EHLEYR eyes ablaze in challenge and defiance. Worf locks his gaze to hers. They're almost nose to nose. A long beat of tense, silent communication. Then, Worf shoves her away. Her eyes never leaving his, K'Ehleyr slowly removes her glove, extends her naked hand to Worf. 66A ON WORF Worf takes her wrist, raises her hand to his face, sniffs at it. 66B thru OMITTED 66C 66D WIDER as Worf raises his hand. K'Ehleyr caresses his forearm, raises his palm to her face, and sniffs his hand and his wrist. 66E OMITTED 66F NEW ANGLE as they move closer. Except for their hands on each other's wrists, they have not touched, nor do they now... instead, they sniff at each other's hair, their ears, their necks. It's slow, ritualized -- and also instinctive, primal, animal behavior. Their passion mounting, Worf and K'Ehleyr release their grips, then extend their hands to one another. STAR TREK: "The Emissary" - 4/10/89 - ACT THREE 35. 66G CLOSE ON THEIR HANDS as they touch their wrists, then the heels of their hands together. Their fingers intertwine -- their palms touch -- their grips tighten -- and they savagely clasp hands... so tightly that their nails dig in and draw blood. 66H WIDER Worf and K'Ehleyr violently draw each other close. With a low GROWL, Worf buries his face in K'Ehleyr's neck -- and as they fall together into the mist, we: FADE OUT. END OF ACT THREE STAR TREK: "The Emissary" - REV. 4/17/89 - ACT FOUR 36. ACT FOUR FADE IN: 67 INT. HOLODECK - BATTLEGROUND Stillness. The distant KEENING of some alien catcreature. PAN to reveal Worf and K'Ehleyr, spent. Worf, eyes closed, is sitting cross-legged at the base of a low, flat rock. K'Ehleyr, sitting atop the rock, smiles contentedly. K'EHLEYR Some calisthenics programs are better than others. Worf, mildly surprised, opens one eye. WORF You can still make jokes? K'EHLEYR Of course I can. I still have enough energy for that... (a beat) You're not laughing. WORF You are most observant. K'EHLEYR You don't like people with a sense of humor? WORF I did not say that. K'Ehleyr waits, but nothing else is forthcoming. K'EHLEYR (exasperated) Worf, you're the perfect Klingon -- the ultimate minimalist. Talk to me! After a beat, Worf grudgingly elaborates: WORF I've noted that some people use humor as a shield... they talk much yet say little. STAR TREK: "The Emissary" - REV. 4/17/89 - ACT FOUR 36A. 67 CONTINUED: K'Ehleyr concedes the point. K'EHLEYR Whereas others take a simpler approach -- say nothing. WORF (almost apologetic) When one does not have the words... STAR TREK: "The Emissary" - REV. 4/17/89 - ACT FOUR 37. 67 CONTINUED: (2) K'EHLEYR (nods) Or is loath to speak them... K'Ehleyr stretches languidly. K'EHLEYR (cont'd) Fortunately, there are other ways to communicate. (a beat) Why didn't we do this six years ago? WORF We were not ready. K'EHLEYR I was... WORF (shakes his head) We were both too young -- too unaware. We lacked commitment. K'Ehleyr thinks this over, nods. K'EHLEYR Perhaps we lacked courage as well. WORF No longer. 68 OMITTED 69 WIDER Worf gets to his feet, steps atop the rock, looks skyward, spreads his arms, and proclaims: WORF tlhIngan jIH. Suddenly alarmed, K'Ehleyr stands, gets off the rock as if it were a hot griddle. K'EHLEYR Wait. You can't mean -- You're not -- STAR TREK: "The Emissary" - REV. 4/17/89 - ACT FOUR 37A. 69 CONTINUED: WORF (simply) We have mated. K'EHLEYR Yes, I know -- I was there. But... WORF And now we must solemnize our union with the oath -- K'EHLEYR (aghast) Like hell we must! STAR TREK: "The Emissary" - 4/10/89 - ACT FOUR 38. 69 CONTINUED: WORF -- and pledge that we are one forever. Worf steps off the rock, moves toward K'Ehleyr, who backs off. K'EHLEYR I'm not going to become your wife... WORF You already are. K'EHLYR Don't give me that Klingon nonsense. WORF You would dishonor our sacred traditions? K'EHLEYR They're not sacred -- they're absurd! Marrying you is out of the question for a million reasons... WORF None of which stopped you earlier. K'EHLEYR Worf, it was what it was! Glorious and wonderful and all that, but it doesn't mean anything. WORF (with disdain) That is a human attitude. K'EHLEYR I am human! WORF You are also Klingon! K'EHLEYR And that means we should bond for life? STAR TREK: "The Emissary" - 4/10/89 - ACT FOUR 39. 69 CONTINUED: (2) WORF It is our way! K'EHLEYR Yours -- not mine! 70 ANGLE ON WORF Worf's had enough debate. He steps back atop the rock, spreads his arms, and restarts the ritual: WORF tlhIngan jIH! Worf waits. Obviously K'Ehleyr is supposed to climb up next to him, say the same thing. She doesn't move. K'EHLEYR I will not take the oath! WORF (a roar) Then this night had no meaning! (then, softer) And that, I will not believe. K'Ehleyr sees Worf's pain, feels his need. She's moved. But -- K'EHLEYR Believe what you will... K'Ehleyr turns away from Worf and dashes off -- K'EHLEYR (O.S., cont'd) Exit. 71 OMITTED 72 ON WORF standing alone on the rock. SOUND of the HOLODECK DOOR OPENING AND CLOSING O.S. Worf's expression is as impassive as ever. But the pain shows in his eyes... CUT TO: STAR TREK: "The Emissary" - REV. 4/17/89 - ACT FOUR 40. 73 EXT. SPACE - THE ENTERPRISE (OPTICAL) Zipping right along at high warp. 74 INT. MAIN BRIDGE Picard, Riker, Clancey, the tactical crewman, supernumerary at Ops. CLANCEY Approaching the coordinates. PICARD Slow to impulse. TACTICAL CREWMAN Short and long-range sensor scans negative, Captain. PICARD Lay in a standard search pattern. CLANCEY Search pattern laid in. PICARD Full impulse. Engage. RIKER I just hope we find them before they come out of their nap. PICARD Agreed. No outpost in this sector could defend itself against a Klingon warship. 75 INT. TACTICAL ROOM This time, it's K'Ehleyr who's working alone at the library computer. The DOOR OPENS, revealing Worf. An awkward silence. K'EHLEYR I've been working on our assignment... trying a few computer simulations. WORF Your devotion to duty is commendable... if belated. STAR TREK: "The Emissary" - REV. 4/17/89 - ACT FOUR 40A. 75 CONTINUED: K'EHLEYR (ignoring the dig) So far, I'm having no success. (a beat) I could use some help. WORF (stiffly) I am here to assist you. Worf steps in, revealing Data behind him. K'Ehleyr smiles, almost sadly. STAR TREK: "The Emissary" - REV. 4/10/89 - ACT FOUR 41. 75 CONTINUED: K'EHLEYR Unwilling to be alone with me? WORF I've asked Lieutenant Commander Data to help us analyze the alternatives. K'EHLEYR ("oh, sure") An android chaperone? DATA "Android" is, of course, correct, but I fail to see how "chaperone" is applicable in this situation... K'EHLEYR Never mind. Come on in. (to Worf) I guess I can't blame you. Worf says nothing. He and Data take seats on either side of K'Ehleyr. K'EHLEYR (cont'd) (impulsively) Tell me one thing. Worf looks at her -- "go ahead." K'EHLEYR (cont'd) You would have gone through with the oath, wouldn't you? Regardless of the consequences to our careers -- to our lives? WORF Honor demanded no less. K'EHLEYR (sighs) I'm sick to death of Klingon "honor." What do you want? Is honor all you care about? Don't you feel anything else? 76 ON WORF Silent and stonefaced. Maybe he doesn't know the answer; maybe he does and isn't telling. K'Ehleyr sees she's going to get nothing out of him. STAR TREK: "The Emissary" - 4/10/89 - ACT FOUR 42. 76 CONTINUED: K'EHLEYR No comment, huh? She shrugs -- "be that way." Data, mystified by all this, looks from one to the other. K'Ehleyr picks up on Data's confusion. K'EHLEYR (cont'd) (to Data) Poor android. Which behavior do you find more perplexing -- human or Klingon? DATA At the moment, I would be hard pressed to choose. K'EHLEYR (sardonic) So would I. K'Ehleyr takes a breath, gets businesslike. K'EHLEYR (cont'd) Okay. When we locate the T'Ong, there are two possibilities. First -- MATCH CUT TO: 77 INT. OBSERVATION LOUNGE Same ANGLE on K'Ehleyr, with Worf nearby -- but now Picard, Riker, Troi, and Geordi are present, listening. (Data is not present.) K'EHLEYR -- we find the ship before it reaches the "awakening point." In that case, we could simply keep the crew asleep. PICARD (to Geordi) Is that feasible? GEORDI (nods) We can beam an away team onto the T'Ong and override the cryogenic controls. STAR TREK: "The Emissary" - 4/10/89 - ACT FOUR 43. 77 CONTINUED: K'EHLEYR Then we await the arrival of the Klingon ship P'rang... TROI ... so that when the T'Ong's crew awakens, they're surrounded by their fellow Klingons. RIKER That would be ideal. K'EHLEYR But there's the second possibility... that the crew of the T'Ong has already revived. GEORDI They discover they're in Federation territory -- and they attack the nearest outpost. TROI Are we sure they'll attack? RIKER We don't even know what the T'Ong's mission was. TROI It may have been a scientific voyage. K'EHLEYR (with a smile) Klingons of that period -- doing research for its own sake? RIKER The point is, they may not be warlike. K'EHLEYR The point is that this is beside the point. These are Klingons... at war with us. Whatever their mission was -- once they see a Federation target, they'll attack. PICARD Could the T'Ong be disabled rather than destroyed? STAR TREK: "The Emissary" - REV. 4/12/89 - ACT FOUR 44. 77 CONTINUED: (2) GEORDI We could probably knock out their warp engines without damaging the rest of their ship... K'EHLEYR (shaking her head) That would gain you nothing. Disable the ship, and K'Temoc will destroy it himself. Picard looks to Worf for confirmation. WORF (nods) Klingons do not surrender. K'EHLEYR Face it -- if we don't reach the T'Ong before its crew wakes up, you have no alternatives. 78 ON PICARD getting to his feet. PICARD I will not accept that. There must be a way to make the Klingons listen. If we can only convince them -- Picard is interrupted by a HALL from the bridge: DATA'S COM VOICE Captain, we have detected a ship, bearing three-one-six mark forty-two, extreme sensor range. PICARD Plot an intercept course. And go to Yellow Alert. Picard and the group EXIT the Observation Lounge. Geordi EXITS out the far door. 79 INT. MAIN BRIDGE Clancey's at Conn; N.D. CREW, including the tactical crewman, at other stations. STAR TREK: "The Emissary" - 4/10/89 - ACT FOUR 45. 79 CONTINUED: K'Ehleyr, Riker, and Worf ENTER and take their stations. Data yields the center chair to Picard, sits down at Ops. WORF Shields are up. K'EHLEYR Better lock on phasers. This may be the only chance you get. Picard ignores her. CLANCEY Intercept course laid in. PICARD Hold this position. Let's see if they've spotted us. (to Data) Magnification one hundred. 80 ANGLE TO INCLUDE MAIN VIEWER (OPTICAL) upon which is a vision from the past -- the eighty-year-old KLINGON BATTLE CRUISER T'ONG. PICARD Mister Data? DATA Sensors show lifeforms aboard, sir, but I am unable to ascertain if they are awake or dormant. (checks a reading) However, the vessel's propulsion systems are inactive, so I would hypothesize that the crew is asleep -- And without warning, the T'Ong FIRES upon us -- 81 NEW ANGLE as the bridge is SHAKEN by the attack. RED ALERT comes on automatically. DATA However, I could be in error. STAR TREK: "The Emissary" - 4/10/89 - ACT FOUR 46. 81 CONTINUED: WORF Shields holding. 82 ANGLE TO INCLUDE MAIN VIEWER (OPTICAL) as the T'Ong SHIMMERS and DISAPPEARS from the screen. RIKER They've cloaked themselves. 83 NEW ANGLE as K'Ehleyr matter-of-factly turns to Picard. K'EHLEYR Well, Captain -- you had your chance. PUSH IN on Picard's grave expression as we: FADE OUT. END OF ACT FOUR STAR TREK: "The Emissary" - 4/10/89 - ACT FIVE 47. ACT FIVE FADE IN: 84 INT. MAIN BRIDGE Picard, Riker, Worf, Data, Clancey as before. RED ALERT continues. Geordi is now present; he TURNS ON his bridge Engineering Station. GEORDI Transfer Engineering to bridge. PICARD Can you find them? GEORDI (working at the station) I think so. Those old shields weren't a hundred percent efficient at blocking gamma-ray output. If I can tune the sensors to a particular band of... (jubilant) There! Got 'em! Transferring coordinates to helm... PICARD (to Clancey) Intercept. Warp two. CLANCEY Warp two, sir. K'EHLEYR Captain -- let them die like Klingons... in battle. They deserve that much. Worf steps forward. WORF Captain... I have another option. Picard and the others react to Worf's calm assertion. 85 OMITTED 86 EXT. SPACE - THE ENTERPRISE (OPTICAL) moving at warp two. STAR TREK: "The Emissary" - 4/10/89 - ACT FIVE 48. 87 INT. MAIN BRIDGE As before, except that Worf and K'Ehleyr are no longer present. The tactical crewman is at Worf's station. DATA The T'Ong has changed course to three-two mark eight-one. They are increasing to warp three. RIKER Standard evasive maneuver. PICARD Helm -- stay with them. Clancey makes a helm adjustment. CLANCEY Yes, sir. DATA The T'Ong is now on a heading of four-one mark one-one-three... accelerating to warp five. RIKER They're making a break for it. PICARD Overtake. Warp eight. CLANCEY Aye. PICARD Put us right in their path and come to a full stop. (to Tactical) Full power to shields. TACTICAL CREWMAN Full power, sir. 87A EXT. SPACE - THE ENTERPRISE (OPTICAL) coming out of warp and stopping. STAR TREK: "The Emissary" - 4/10/89 - ACT FIVE 49. 87B INT. MAIN BRIDGE PICARD We've thrown down the gauntlet... let's see if they pick it up. DATA They are slowing to impulse -- 88 ANGLE TO INCLUDE MAIN VIEWER (OPTICAL) On the screen, the star field SHIMMERS -- and the T'Ong APPEARS as it drops its cloaking. It FIRES phasers at us -- 89 NEW ANGLE as the bridge is SHAKEN slightly by the attack. TACTICAL CREWMAN Phaser hit on forward shields. No damage. DATA The T'Ong is attempting to flank us. PICARD Compensate. 90 ANGLE TO INCLUDE MAIN VIEWER (OPTICAL) as the T'Ong FIRES a photon torpedo -- 91 NEW ANGLE as the torpedo hits, SHAKING the ship a bit more. TACTICAL CREWMAN Photon torpedo hit. Shield number two weakened... firming up now... No damage. RIKER I think we've piqued their curiosity by now... STAR TREK: "The Emissary" - REV. 4/14/89 - ACT FIVE 50. 91 CONTINUED: PICARD Agreed. Let's give them the chance to look their enemy in the face. Picard turns to look offscreen. We don't see who he's addressing: PICARD (cont'd) Ready, Lieutenant? (then to Tactical) Open a hailing frequency. TACTICAL CREWMAN Hailing frequency open, sir. 92 OMITTED 93 EXT. SPACE - THE ENTERPRISE (OPTICAL) motionless, facing the T'Ong. 94 INT. MAIN BRIDGE - CLOSE ON MAIN VIEWER (OPTICAL) as the image of the T'Ong is replaced by a view of the T'ONG BRIDGE. K'TEMOC, the captain, is a formidable warrior who commands his ship with a typical Klingon iron first. A FIRST OFFICER and another KLINGON CREWMAN are in the b.g. The Klingons all react with surprise. K'Temoc leaps to his feet -- K'TEMOC What -- 95 ANGLE ON THE ENTERPRISE COMMAND CHAIR The captain of the Enterprise is a Klingon! Worf, in full Klingon captain regalia, sits in the command chair glaring at K'Temoc. Next to Worf is K'Ehleyr, similarly in full Klingon uniform. Picard and Riker are not visible, but Data, Clancey, Geordi, and the tactical crewman are at their stations. STAR TREK: "The Emissary" - REV. 4/14/89 - ACT FIVE 50A. 95 CONTINUED: WORF (imperious) Captain K'Temoc -- have you lost your mind? Halt your ship and drop your shields. STAR TREK: "The Emissary" - 4/10/89 - ACT FIVE 51. 96 ANGLE ON MAIN VIEWER (OPTICAL) The Klingon crewmen are stunned. So is K'Temoc, but he keeps a lid on it and blusters back to Worf: K'TEMOC What treachery is this? By whose authority? 97 ANGLE ON WORF (OPTICAL) Worf gives K'Temoc a look as if K'Temoc were a two-year-old challenging a parent. WORF I am Worf, commanding the Enterprise. It is you who have committed an act of treason -- by firing upon this ship. 98 INTERCUTS -- WORF AND VIEWSCREEN (OPTICAL) K'TEMOC I have standing orders to fire on all Federation ships. We are at war. WORF You fool. Did it not occur to you that the war would be over by now? K'TEMOC I have no proof of that. WORF Trust your eyes! Or is your brain still stuck in its long slumber? K'TEMOC How can I be sure this is not a Federation trick? Worf SIGHS. Why must underlings make life difficult? WORF Captain, as you are new to this century, I have tried to be patient. But I will tolerate no further insubordination. Drop your shields immediately. STAR TREK: "The Emissary" - 4/10/89 - ACT FIVE 52. 98 CONTINUED: K'TEMOC (still belligerent) And if I refuse? WORF Then die in ignorance. I can waste no more time on you. (to Tactical) Phasers to full power. TACTICAL CREWMAN Aye, sir. (does so) Phasers ready. Target locked. 99 NEW ANGLE (OPTICAL) On the screen, K'Temoc plays his last card: K'TEMOC You dare not destroy us. We have been on a crucial mission by order of the Klingon High Command... Worf, the Iceman, impassively raises his hand as a signal to fire. WORF Has the T'Ong dropped its shields? TACTICAL CREWMAN No, sir. WORF (with a shrug) Very well. Fire all phasers -- K'TEMOC Wait! K'Temoc crosses his arms and gently bows his head. K'TEMOC (cont'd) (to first officer) Lower the shields. (to Worf) I yield command of the T'Ong to you, Captain Worf. Long live the Klingon Empire. Worf is deadpan, indifferent. STAR TREK: "The Emissary" - REV. 4/14/89 - ACT FIVE 53. 99 CONTINUED: WORF A wise decision, Captain. Commander K'Ehleyr will board your ship and take command. The Klingon cruiser P'rang will soon arrive and escort you home. (almost an afterthought) And, Captain -- K'TEMOC Yes? WORF Welcome to the twenty-fourth century. And with that, the Enterprise viewscreen returns to the exterior view of the T'Ong. RED ALERT ENDS. 100 ANGLE ON WORF (OPTICAL) As Picard and Riker approach from o.s. The mood is jubilant. Worf stands. WORF (to Picard) I return command of the ship to you, Captain. PICARD Thank you and congratulations, Lieutenant. A very fine first command. Well done. Worf nods a silent acknowledgement. GEORDI That's all, Worf? Just a nod? Worf is again unflappable. RIKER How did you like command? Worf looks at the crew, then back at the captain's chair. WORF Comfortable chair. STAR TREK: "The Emissary" - REV. 4/14/89 - ACT FIVE 54. 100 CONTINUED: Everyone but Worf smiles. CUT TO: 101 INT. TRANSPORTER ROOM K'Ehleyr and Worf ENTER. WORF (to O'Brien) One to beam aboard the T'Ong. O'Brien acknowledges with a nod and punches in the coordinates. O'BRIEN All set. WORF I relieve you. O'Brien opens his mouth to say something, changes his mind -- Worf's expression makes it clear he wants to be alone. O'BRIEN Yes, Lieutenant. And O'Brien exits. STAR TREK: "The Emissary" - 4/10/89 - ACT FIVE 55. 102 NEW ANGLE Worf turns to face K'Ehleyr. They treat each other in the most formal manner -- perhaps as a way of easing the separation. WORF The Klingon vessel P'rang will rendezvous with you in three days. K'EHLEYR In the meantime, I'll begin the assimilation of these Klingons to our era. A silent look. Is that all? WORF Is there anything else you require? K'EHLEYR No. Nothing else. K'Ehleyr takes a step towards the transporter, stops and turns back to face Worf. K'EHLEYR Damn you, Worf. You'd let me go without saying another word, wouldn't you? WORF What needs to be said? K'EHLEYR Nothing. Everything. We're about to go our separate ways again. WORF And that disturbs you? K'EHLEYR (takes a breath) Yes, it does. She moves closer to him. STAR TREK: "The Emissary" - REV. 4/12/89 - ACT FIVE 56. 102 CONTINUED: K'EHLEYR (cont'd) I hid the truth from you. Last night did have meaning. (a beat) I was tempted to take the oath with you. That scared me. I've never had such strong feelings toward anyone. WORF (after a beat) Nor have I. K'Ehleyr's stunned. From Worf, that's quite an admission. K'EHLEYR Then it was more than just a point of honor. Worf's silence is eloquent. K'EHLEYR (cont'd) Maybe someday, when our paths cross again, I won't be as easy to get rid of. K'Ehleyr and Worf extend their hands, touch palms, and clasp -- a gentle version of the passionate handclasp they shared in the Holodeck. WORF K'Ehleyr... I will not be complete without you. A long beat. Then, K'Ehleyr steps onto the transporter pad. 103 ON WORF Perhaps to cover his sorrow, his face bears something with a close resemblance to a smile... 104 ON THE TRANSPORTER PAD (OPTICAL) as K'Ehleyr DEMATERIALIZES. STAR TREK: "The Emissary" - 4/10/89 - ACT FIVE 57. 105 CLOSE ON WORF as his face returns to the more familiar unemotional expression of -- the Iceman. FADE OUT. END OF ACT FIVE THE END STAR TREK: THE NEXT GENERATION "Peak Performance" #40272-147 Written by David Kemper Directed by Robert Scheerer THE WRITING CREDITS MAY NOT BE FINAL AND SHOULD NOT BE USED FOR PUBLICITY OR ADVERTISING PURPOSES WITHOUT FIRST CHECKING WITH THE TELEVISION LEGAL DEPARTMENT. Copyright 1989 Paramount Pictures Corporation. All Rights Reserved. This script is not for publication or reproduction. No one is authorized to dispose of same. If lost or destroyed, please notify the Script Department. 2ND REVISED FINAL DRAFT APRIL 17, 1989 STAR TREK: "Peak Performance" - 4/17/89 - CAST STAR TREK: THE NEXT GENERATION "Peak Performance" CAST PICARD SIRNA KOLRAMI RIKER DATA PULASKI FERENGI-TSA TROI BRACTOR GEORDI TACTICIAN WORF WESLEY ENSIGN BURKE ENSIGN NAGEL N.D. CREWMEMBERS STAR TREK: "Peak Performance" - 4/17/89 - SETS STAR TREK: THE NEXT GENERATION "Peak Performance" SETS INTERIORS EXTERIORS USS ENTERPRISE USS ENTERPRISE MAIN BRIDGE OBSERVATION LOUNGE USS HATHAWAY MAIN ENGINEERING KREECHTA CORRIDOR WORF'S QUARTERS BRASLOTA IV DATA'S QUARTERS CAPTAIN'S READY ROOM TEN-FORWARD USS HATHAWAY BRIDGE ENGINE ROOM KREECHTA (VIEWSCREEN P.O.V. ONLY) STAR TREK: "Peak Performance" - REV. 4/20/89 - PRONUNCIATION STAR TREK: THE NEXT GENERATION "Peak Performance" PRONUNCIATION GUIDE KOLRAMI cole-ROM-ee ZAKDORN ZACK-dorn KREECHTA CREECH-tah NAGEL NAY-gull BRASLOTA brass-LOW-tah TARLOW tar-low YAROOPA yah-RUE-pah KUMEH koo-mah STRATEGEMA strata-JAY-mah GRENTHEMEN grenth-ah-men STAR TREK: THE NEXT GENERATION "Peak Performance" TEASER FADE IN: 1 EXT. SPACE - THE ENTERPRISE (OPTICAL) Shuttle coming in. PICARD (V.O.) Captain's log, Stardate 42923.7. We are en route to the Braslota System, site of the first Starfleet battle simulation. Joining the Enterprise as observer and mediator is the Zakdorn Master Strategist, Sirna Kolrami. Despite misgivings, I have agreed to Starfleet's request that we take part in these wargame exercises. 2 OMITTED 3 INT. ENTERPRISE - MAIN BRIDGE DATA is at Command, supernumeraries at Conn and OPS, and WORF and ENSIGN BURKE confer at Tactical. All heads turn as the forward turbolift opens and RIKER and KOLRAMI, a slender weasel-like creature, ENTER and cross to the Observation Lounge. 3A INT. OBSERVATION LOUNGE PICARD (rising, extending his hand) Mister Kolrami -- Captain Jean-Luc Picard. Welcome aboard. KOLRAMI Captain. I bring greetings from those at Starfleet Command. STAR TREK: "Peak Performance" - REV. 4/21/89 - TEASER 2. 3A CONTINUED: PICARD Would you care to be shown to your quarters? KOLRAMI I require little rest, Captain. I would prefer to commence our mission. Picard and Riker share a glance -- "pushy little guy, isn't he?" 3B INT. BRIDGE Worf crosses to Data. WORF Despite their reputations, this Zakdorn does not appear to be a very formidable warrior. DATA In the game of military brinksmanship, individual physical prowess is less important than the perception of a species as a whole. For over nine millennia potential foes have regarded the Zakdorns as having the greatest innately strategic minds in the galaxy. WORF And no one is willing to test that perception in combat. DATA Exactly. WORF Then the reputation means nothing. 4 INT. OBSERVATION LOUNGE A magnificent view of the galaxy surrounds them as they take their seats at one end of the table. Kolrami keys the screen, and the DIAGRAM of a solar system appears. STAR TREK: "Peak Performance" - 4/18/89 - TEASER 3. 4 CONTINUED: KOLRAMI The Braslota System. In orbit around the second planet is the eighty-year old Starcruiser, Hathaway. (nodding at Riker) He is still your choice? PICARD Commander Riker will captain the Hathaway. KOLRAMI (to Riker) You will have forty-eight hours to ready the vessel before the Enterprise attacks. RIKER And we'll be experiencing actual battle conditions? KOLRAMI Correct. Engineering will disconnect the Enterprise's weapons and link the system with the modified laser-pulse beam. All "hits" will be recorded electronically. If the computer registers "damage," it will react accordingly -- shutting down the affected areas for the appropriate "repair" time. Additional questions? Riker and Picard share a look and shake their heads. KOLRAMI Captain Picard, I understand that you initially resisted Starfleet's request for this simulation. PICARD Yes. KOLRAMI May I know why? STAR TREK: "Peak Performance" - REV. 4/25/89 - TEASER 3A. 4 CONTINUED: (2) PICARD Starfleet is not a military organization. Our purpose is exploration. KOLRAMI Then why am I here? PICARD Because with the Borg threat, I have decided that my officers and I need to hone our tactical skills. (MORE) STAR TREK: "Peak Performance" - REV. 4/21/89 - TEASER 4. 4 CONTINUED: (3) PICARD (Cont'd) In a crisis situation, it is prudent to have several options. RIKER I still prefer brains over brawn. (to Kolrami) I think it's a waste of effort to test our combat skills -- it's a minor province in the make-up of a starship captain. KOLRAMI Your objection is noted. Let us hope your distaste for the exercise will not affect your strategic abilities. There is a moment as Riker absorbs the words and the underlying contempt with which they were delivered. RIKER Mister Kolrami, when I agree to do a thing. I do it. (to Picard, lighter) Care to surrender now, Captain? Picard gives Riker a warm, small smile, then looks to Kolrami as if to say, "see what a hell of a fellow he is?" Off their various expressions -- FADE OUT. END OF TEASER STAR TREK: "Peak Performance" - 4/17/89 - ACT ONE 5. ACT ONE FADE IN: 5 EXT. SPACE - THE ENTERPRISE (OPTICAL) Plying deep space at impulse. 6 INT. ENTERPRISE - MAIN BRIDGE Picard, Riker, Data, PULASKI, and Kolrami are present. Supernumeraries at Conn and Ops. Burke at Tactical. PICARD Well, Number One, you are allowed a complement of forty. Select whom you will. Save Data, who will serve as my first officer in your absence. Before Riker can respond, Kolrami jumps in -- leaving Pulaski slightly taken aback by his rudeness. KOLRAMI (to Picard) I had envisioned you defining the crew. PICARD On my ship, the leader of an away team has total control of the mission. If you want to judge "leadership" -- why not start at the beginning? Kolrami sagaciously nods his assent, eyeing Picard as if he, too, were under scrutiny. KOLRAMI Very well, Captain. With a curt bow, he glides to the turbolift and disappears. PULASKI My, what a charmer. PICARD (admonishingly) Now, Doctor... STAR TREK: "Peak Performance" - REV. 4/20/89 - ACT ONE 6. 6 CONTINUED: PULASKI Captain, he needs an attitude adjustment. DATA The Zakdornian culture is replete with self-assuredness and confidence. It is seldom undeserved. For example, Kolrami is a third level grand master at the game of Strategema. Fine, but it doesn't make Pulaski feel any better. 7 INT. ENTERPRISE - MAIN ENGINEERING Geordi and an ASSISTANT toil at aligning the warp engine's dilithium chamber. GEORDI (giving directions) Another millimeter... little more... there! Excellent. RIKER (O.S.) Lieutenant. Geordi straightens to find Riker looking on. GEORDI Commander. RIKER You've heard of the simulation aboard the Hathaway? As they talk, Goerdi takes Riker on a walking tour of Engineering, checking "this" here, tweaking "that" there. GEORDI Yes, sir, and the best of luck to you. I've researched the old Avidyne engines -- archaic by our standards, very touchy. RIKER Anticipating the worst, do you think it can be whipped into shape in forty-eight hours? STAR TREK: "Peak Performance" - 4/18/89 - ACT ONE 7. 7 CONTINUED: Geordi stops walking and hefts a tool kit. GEORDI (smiling broadly) I've taken the liberty of packing a few necessities. At this, Riker breaks into a grin, also. 8 INT. ENTERPRISE - WORF'S QUARTERS The room has been modified into a Klingon haven. The lighting is subdued with a ruddy overtones. There is a powerful scupture of a Klingon man, bare to the waist taming a horse-like beast with a long snaking neck, and two twisted horns springing from above each eye. Worf is seated at his desk working on a model of an antique Klingon sailing vessel. A CHIME signals someone is at the door. It startles Worf, and he breaks the masts on his ship. A rumble of fury. WORF Enter! The door opens and Riker steps in, looking around curiously. This is his first time in here. RIKER Am I disturbing you? WORF Just finishing, Commander. Worf opens a drawer, and sweeps the ship into it. Shuts it firmly. RIKER "Interesting" quarters. WORF Thank you. STAR TREK: "Peak Performance" - 4/17/89 - ACT ONE 8. 8 CONTINUED: RIKER You know of the simulation. What do you think? WORF Waste of time. RIKER It's just designed to be an exercise. WORF Useless. If there is nothing to lose -- no sacrifice -- then there is nothing to gain. RIKER (playing him) You mean -- besides "pride." (caught his attention) Well, it's a good thing in this case, because I probably don't have a chance. WORF (alien concept) There is always a chance. RIKER Slim. The Hathaway's most sophisticated weapon-systems -- even in a computer mock-up -- can't hope to defeat the Enterprise. WORF Still... RIKER Worf... when you're out-gunned, out-manned, and out-equipped -- what else do you have left? WORF (long beat) Guile. RIKER Join me. STAR TREK: "Peak Performance" - 4/17/89 - ACT ONE 9. 8 CONTINUED: (2) WORF The honor is to serve. Riker allows himself another smile -- this crew is pulling together nicely. 9 EXT. SPACE - THE ENTERPRISE (OPTICAL) Zooming along at impulse. 10 INT. ENTERPRISE - MAIN BRIDGE Riker ENTERS to find Picard in the Command Chair, Data to his right, Pulaski on his left, Wesley at Conn, Burke at Tactical, and Kolrami examining Science One. PICARD Begin long-range scanning of all sectors within three light years of Braslota. (seeing Riker) How is your crew shaping up? RIKER It's complete, but I would like to request an addition. PICARD (playing along) Anyone in mind? RIKER With your permission, I would like Acting Ensign Crusher aboard for educational observation. Picard nods. Riker, in turn, gives Wesley a "c'mon" head move. Wesley's enthusiasm can hardly be muted as he leaps from the Conn -- to be quickly replaced by a CREWPERSON. RIKER (as if an afterthought) Oh... since we have some time before reaching Braslota -- (deferentially to Kolrami) I was hoping that you would agree to play me in a game of Strategema. STAR TREK: "Peak Performance" - REV. 4/24/89 - ACT ONE 10. 10 CONTINUED: KOLRAMI Although I am intrigued by the audacity of your request, I can't fathom why you wish the encounter. RIKER I enjoy a challenge. KOLRAMI Very well, an opponent of "limited dimensions" can often be quite diverting. RIKER Thank you. 11 INT. ENTERPRISE - CORRIDOR - TRACKING Geordi and Riker on their way to Ten-Forward. GEORDI So you're going to beat him? RIKER Nope. GEORDI Oh, then it's going to be a close one. RIKER No. GEORDI But you have got a chance? RIKER Nah. GEORDI (a little sarcastic) Are you planning to show up? RIKER Sure, Kolrami is the best at Strategema. To even get to play him is a privilege. STAR TREK: "Peak Performance" - REV. 4/25/89 - ACT ONE 11. 11 CONTINUED: GEORDI Other than you being privileged, is there anything else I can look forward to? RIKER Nope. GEORDI This is going to be exciting. 12 INT. ENTERPRISE - TEN-FORWARD Riker and Kolrami are seated at opposite ends of a large table. Worf helps Riker prepare for the game while Troi performs the same function for the Zakdorn. 13 ANGLE - GEORDI, DATA AND PULASKI PULASKI Against an opponent of approximate skill -- Strategema can last well over one thousand moves. GEORDI I wouldn't bet on us being here that long. 13A ANGLE ON WORF AND RIKER WORF (confiding to Riker) I have wagered heavily in the ship's pool that you will take him past the sixth plateau. STAR TREK: "Peak Performance" - REV. 4/21/89 - ACT ONE 12. 13A CONTINUED: RIKER What if I don't? WORF I will be... irritated. During the above, each contestant inserts his fingertips into METALLIC RECEPTACLES (think overly-long thimbles). 14 DATA, GEORDI AND PULASKI - TROI JOINS THEM DATA Forever curious, this urge to "compete." PULASKI It's a human response, that inborn craving to gauge your capabilities through conflict. DATA Doctor, there are other ways to challenge oneself. PULASKI Perhaps... but they all lack a certain -- thrill! TROI Data, sometimes humans find it helpful to have an outsider set the standard by which they're judged. DATA (catching on) To avoid deceiving oneself. PULASKI Maybe you should challenge Kolrami to Strategema. DATA (surprised) Why? STAR TREK: "Peak Performance" - REV. 4/21/89 - ACT ONE 13. 14 CONTINUED: PULASKI Because when someone is that smug, you occasionally have to deflate them just a little. GEORDI Yeah, Data, I'd like to see your neural-flecks tear him down a peg. DATA To what end? Reactions from the humans. Once again the toaster isn't "getting" it. 15 WORF (OPTICAL) presiding over the contest. WORF Computer -- actuation positions for Strategema. A base containing the digital counter sits on the table. WORF Ready? Riker nods. Kolrami nods. WORF (continuing) Begin! Wow! "Thimble"-encased fingers twitch and goggled-eyes shift. Correspondingly, the holographic cone springs to incredible life. Breathtaking! Impossible to follow or explain, Strategema nonetheless presents an awesome spectacle even to those who have seen it before. Wondrous! Gases swirl, pinpoints move, grids bend and sway, sparks and "lightning" streaks fly! And above, the counter begins to register: 001, 002, 003, 004, 005... VARIOUS ANGLES show the crew reacting to the unfolding marvel... 016, 017, 018, 019... STAR TREK: "Peak Performance" - REV. 4/20/89 - ACT ONE 14. 15 CONTINUED: ... 021, 022, 023, ... Suddenly, startlingly abrupt, the images freeze! It's as if Strategema died. No one moves, no one breathes, no one reacts. Stunned silence. PULASKI That's it? Riker slowly removes the goggles from his head. RIKER (numb admiration) I'm afraid so. PULASKI But... but you only made twenty-three moves. RIKER Yes. (to Kolrami) Congratulations. Off Kolrami's smug smile and Riker's expression -- FADE OUT. END OF ACT ONE STAR TREK: "Peak Performance" - REV. 4/20/89 - ACT TWO 15. ACT TWO FADE IN: 16 EXT. SPACE - THE ENTERPRISE (OPTICAL) Moving in synchronous orbit with an unlit, eighty year-old starship around a dusty orange planet. 17 INT. ENTERPRISE - MAIN BRIDGE (OPTICAL) The dark, lifeless Hathaway dominates the Main Viewer. Picard, Riker, Data, Burke at Tactical, supernumeraries at all other stations, and Kolrami are in attendance. The Zakdorn periodically makes notes on a PADD. PICARD (keeping it light) Commander Riker -- (re: Hathaway) There is your next challenge. WORF'S COM VOICE Away team assembled and ready to transport, Commander. PICARD (playful) Until we test our mettle on the field of honor. He extends a hand, and Picard and Riker shake. RIKER (with a grin) I may get over there and want to come right home. Kolrami sniffs at this display of levity. PICARD (chuckles) Good luck, Number One... Captain. KOLRAMI The simulation will commence in forty-eight hours. As Riker EXITS. STAR TREK: "Peak Performance" - REV. 4/21/89 - ACT TWO 16. 18 INT. U.S.S. HATHAWAY - BRIDGE - DARK As Riker, Worf, Geordi, Wesley, and Ensign Nagel (female) ENTER. They take a moment to familiarize themselves with the surroundings as Geordi moves to an old style panel, studies it for a moment, and presses. AUXILIARY LIGHTS snap on, revealing -- 19 AN UNHOLY MESS Panels have been ripped out, science stations gutted, etc. This ship does not look like it will fly. Riker steps down to the captain's chair in the DIM LIGHT as the others move to check out various stations. WORF Not good. RIKER Oh, Mister Worf, you're wrong. It's fantastic... and it's ours -- Riker sits and indicates the seat beside him. RIKER (continuing) Mister Worf. Worf reacts and glances at Geordi. WORF Sir, Lieutenant La Forge is a superior officer. The honor should be his. RIKER Worf, this is a battle simulation, and you're our tactical officer. Mister La Forge and I agreed, you need to be at my side. GEORDI And if the engine room is anything like the bridge, I'm going to have my hands full. Worf nods and sits. Riker scans the instrument arm of his chair for the proper panel. STAR TREK: "Peak Performance" - 4/25/89 - ACT TWO 16A. 19 CONTINUED: RIKER Attention crew of the USS Hathaway -- this is your captain. (boy, he likes the sound of that) I can promise you that two days from now we will have missed a lot of sleep. But with your skill and your stamina, we'll have this old lady ready to fly. (hard beat) I want hourly progress reports from every station. Riker out. 20 INT. HATHAWAY - POV - ENGINE ROOM - DIM LIGHTING A disaster area of proportions as to make the bridge look comfy. STAR TREK: "Peak Performance" - REV. 4/20/89 - ACT TWO 17. 20 CONTINUED: The impulse engines have several main pieces disconnected, and the warp drives are virtually terminal -- having been raped of dilithium crystals. 21 REVERSE of the open-mouthed Wesley, and the deeply concerned Geordi, who slowly lowers his tool-carrier to the floor. 21A INT. HATHAWAY - BRIDGE GEORDI'S COM VOICE It's a real mess down here, but we'll get to work on it. RIKER I'm sure you'll perform your usual miracle. 22 thru OMITTED 24 25 INT. HATHAWAY - ENGINE ROOM - DIM LIGHTING - CONTINUOUS Wesley toils in the empty dilithium crystal chamber, Geordi puts the finishing touches on the patched-together impulse engines. Geordi presses a panel and the impulse engines SPRING TO LIFE, filling the ship with a healthy HUMM and THROB. CUT TO: 25A EXT. SPACE - THE ENTERPRISE AND THE HATHAWAY (OPTICAL) establishing the two in proximity. Suddenly the Hathaway's lights come up. 26 INT. HATHAWAY - BRIDGE (INTERCUT AS NEEDED) RIKER (continuing) Nice work, Geordi, now what's the possibility for warp drive? STAR TREK: "Peak Performance" - REV. 4/25/89 - ACT TWO 18. 26A INT. HATHAWAY - ENGINEERING (INTERCUT AS NECESSARY) GEORDI There are only minute dilithium fragments left in the holding clamps. And even if we had intact crystals, there's no anti-matter to fuel the drive. RIKER Any recommendations? GEORDI No, sir. WESLEY We don't have a prayer. RIKER (thoughtful beat) Would you care to transfer back to the Enterprise, Mister Crusher? WESLEY (quickly) No, Sir! RIKER (gentler) Remember Wes, the purpose here is to improvise. It's the effort that counts. Geordi gives Wesley a playful "have you learned your lesson" look. STAR TREK: "Peak Performance" - REV. 4/20/89 - ACT TWO 18A. 27 OMITTED 28 INT. ENTERPRISE - MAIN BRIDGE Picard and Data are seated. Pulaski ENTERS from the aft turbolift. Burke is at Tactical, supernumeraries at Conn and Ops. PICARD Open. 29 THE MAIN VIEWSCREEN (OPTICAL) Switches from an exterior of the Hathaway to Riker on the bridge of the Hathaway. Worf and Nagel are effecting repairs in the background. STAR TREK: "Peak Performance" - REV. 4/20/89 - ACT TWO 19. 29 CONTINUED: KOLRAMI (to Picard and Riker) I believe the rules are understood by all. PICARD The weapons conversion, Lieutenant Burke? BURKE (pressing a panel) Complete, Captain. WORF (on viewer) Signal received... locked on. RIKER She's really been stripped down, Captain. KOLRAMI The only offensive systems you need will be simulated by computer. RIKER What's the Zakdornian word for "mismatch?" KOLRAMI Challenge! We do not whine about the inequities of life. (off taken-aback looks) And how you perform in a "mismatch" is precisely what interests Starfleet. After all -- (a look to Picard) -- when one is in the superior position, one is expected to win. PICARD Screen off. Data, you have the bridge. Picard EXITS to his Ready Room as Kolrami moves to Data. STAR TREK: "Peak Performance" - 4/18/89 - ACT TWO 20. 29 CONTINUED: (2) KOLRAMI Lieutenant Commander Data -- I am intrigued by your challenge. Data turns, puzzled. KOLRAMI (continuing) Doctor Pulaski informed me of your desire to play a game of Strategema. Data becomes aware of all other eyes on the bridge waiting for his reaction. DATA But I have expressed no such interest. Pulaski hurries down to join them. She knows that Data's honesty is about to blow her beautiful plan. PULASKI What Commander Data means is that he would never have had the nerve to ask you himself, but I know he is very interested in pitting his skill against yours. Data has learned enough about humans to know this is a moment to keep his mouth shut. KOLRAMI Play a machine? Why should I wish to? PULASKI I don't blame you. It's no fun going into a game when you know you're going to lose. KOLRAMI But I wouldn't lose, and now you're no doubt going to make me prove it to you. She turns to Data who is standing like he's been stuffed. PULASKI Come on, Data, you can't let that pass. STAR TREK: "Peak Performance" - REV. 4/20/89 - ACT TWO 21. 29 CONTINUED: (3) DATA Indeed I... He eyes Pulaski's expression. He also hasn't lived among humans this long, and not developed a strong sense of self-preservation. DATA (continuing lamely) ...Cannot. KOLRAMI Then you will play for the honor of your ship. Kolrami EXITS. PULASKI Honor of the ship. It's your reputation that's on the line. HOLD ON Data's expression. STAR TREK: "Peak Performance" - 4/25/89 - ACT TWO 22. 30 thru OMITTED 31 32 INT. HATHAWAY - BRIDGE Riker and Worf confer. Nagel works in the b.g. WORF With my knowledge of the Enterprise's security override, we may be able to convince the sensors that an enemy ship is approaching. Their instruments would "lie" to them. RIKER If you can pull that off, Mister Worf, it might just give us the edge we're looking for. NAGEL But what about the viewscreen? WORF If I am successful, the computer will project a false image of the enemy ship on the main viewscreen. RIKER And unless they run to a window and look out.... NAGEL (jovially) ... They're going to fall for it! 33 thru OMITTED 34 35 INT. HATHAWAY - ENGINEERING Wesley and Geordi are on their stomachs, peering into the currently empty anti-matter warp drive chamber. WESLEY The lining is still smooth, and we ought to be able to do something with the dilithium chips we scavenged. (looks at Geordi) STAR TREK: "Peak Performance" - REV. 4/25/89 - ACT TWO 22A. 35 CONTINUED: GEORDI Sure the system is functional, but without antimatter what difference does it make? STAR TREK: "Peak Performance" - 4/25/89 - ACT TWO 23. 35 CONTINUED: (2) Wesley's face goes tight with concentration. WESLEY (continuing) Geordi, I have to return to the Enterprise. GEORDI Wes, we've only got thirty-two hours. WESLEY (as he exits) This is important. GEORDI This isn't? (re the engines) 36 INT. HATHAWAY - BRIDGE Wesley ENTERS from the turbolift, Worf is pointing out a section of science station to Nagel. WORF Attempt the routing bypass here! If it works, they will be surprised. NAGEL Where'm I gonna get the opti-cable? Worf reaches a giant hand upwards and grabs several fiber-wires dangling from the ceiling. With a mighty YANK, they come free amidst showering dust and material. WORF Anywhere. Wes crosses to Riker at the command chair. WESLEY Sir, I left an experiment running on the Enterprise. May I go back and shut it down? RIKER (a little distracted) It's that important? STAR TREK: "Peak Performance" - 4/17/89 - ACT TWO 24. 36 CONTINUED: WESLEY It has to be monitored. And it is my final grade in plasma physics. Off Riker's frown, and Wesley's too casual expression: 37 INT. ENTERPRISE - TEN-FORWARD (OPTICAL) Troi helps Data prepare for Strategema. Opposite, Kolrami is set, waiting. Pulaski smiles with match-maker satisfaction while other CREWMEMBERS look on. DATA (re: Pulaski) In the present context, what did she mean by, "Bust him up?" TROI Doctor Pulaski, in her own way, is instructing you to take the shortest route to victory. DATA As opposed to what? Lieutenant Burke stands before the participants, who both signal their readiness. BURKE Begin! As before, Strategema unfolds in shimmering glory! The counter registers 001, 002, 003, 004, 005 -- Troi, Pulaski and the others watch with interest as the pace accelerates -- Data and Kolrami build to a furious crescendo of jerking fingers and head feints. 096, 097, 098, 099, 100, 101, 102, 103, 104, 105, 106, 107, 108, 109, 110, 111, 112, 113, 114115116117118119 120121122123124125126127128129130131132133 -- The counter suddenly stalls at 133! Without a word being spoken, it quickly becomes unambiguous to all that Data has been defeated! STAR TREK: "Peak Performance" - 4/18/89 - ACT TWO 25. 37 CONTINUED: PULASKI (stepping forward, awed) I can't believe it. The "computer" was beaten by flesh and blood. TROI (delicate) You advanced quite far against such a worthy opponent. KOLRAMI (overly gracious) Thoroughly enjoyable, Mister Data. I am at your disposal for a rematch. Data rises and shakes his outstretched hand. DATA Thank you, but there would be no point. PULASKI How can you lose? You're supposed to be infallible! DATA Obviously I am not. Off Data's expression -- FADE OUT. END OF ACT TWO STAR TREK: "Peak Performance" - 4/17/89 - ACT THREE 26. ACT THREE FADE IN: 38 INT. ENTERPRISE - MAIN BRIDGE (OPTICAL) Picard is in the Command Chair, while Kolrami sits to his left. Burke is at Tactical, supernumeraries at Conn and Ops. Data is conspicuously absent. BURKE Message from the Hathaway, sir. PICARD On screen. The Main Viewer reveals Riker on the older ship's bridge. RIKER I'd like to request permission for Ensign Crusher to reboard the Enterprise, Captain. PICARD Why? RIKER Apparently he was in such a hurry to be part of the away team, he left several critical experiments unattended. Picard looks to Kolrami, since this concerns the simulation. PICARD Have you any objection? KOLRAMI He should be escorted, and have no contact with anything save his research. PICARD (to Riker) Permission granted. (to Burke) Mister Burke, handle that. Burke EXITS -- STAR TREK: "Peak Performance" - 4/17/89 - ACT THREE 27. 38 CONTINUED: KOLRAMI (an aside to himself, but loud enough for Picard to hear) I saw no sense in Riker choosing him anyway -- he is just a non-commissioned child. Though irritated, Picard holds his tongue -- 39 INT. ENTERPRISE - ENGINEERING - TIGHT ON ANTI-MATTER CONTAINMENT DEVICE The magnetic chamber is round, about the size of a human head -- a clear orb with a snowball-sized piece of anti-matter suspended in the center. Long, intricately-cabled pieces of clear tubing extend out from opposite sides of the orb -- generating the force which keeps the anti-matter from escaping and wreaking havoc. Attached to the end of the tubes are finger-friendly handles. TWO VERY CAREFUL HANDS now wrap themselves around these grips. WIDEN to reveal Wesley -- in the company of Ensign Burke -- delicately maneuvering the orb from his personal experimental station. Throughout this scene Wesley is talking just a little too much. Nervous chatter as he tries to cover that he's doing a naughty. Burke is equally anxious to be back on the bridge. WESLEY I can't believe I forgot about this. Good lesson not to let excitement cloud your thinking. BURKE Yeah. WESLEY This is really delicate ... I spent six weeks setting it up. BURKE Lot of work. A beat as Wes studies the gizmo. STAR TREK: "Peak Performance" - REV. 4/21/89 - ACT THREE 28. 39 CONTINUED: WESLEY Oh, no. It's ruined. BURKE That's too bad. Look, is this going to take much longer? WESLEY I have to dispose of it safely... This is really volatile... I better beam it off the Enterprise and leave it particalized. BURKE Fine, let's just do it. Wesley crosses to a panel WESLEY I'll transfer the coordinates to the Transporter Room. Off Wesley's secret little smile as we CUT TO: 39A INT. HATHAWAY - ENGINEERING (OPTICAL) Geordi is hard at work with his back to the gizmo as it MATERIALIZES. It falls onto its side with a CLUNK. Geordi looks over his shoulder and gapes at the gizmo. 40 OMITTED 41 INT. ENTERPRISE - MAIN BRIDGE The crew is hard at work, watched over by Picard and Kolrami. PICARD Where is Commander Data? BURKE He has temporarily removed himself from bridge duty, sir. STAR TREK: "Peak Performance" - 4/17/89 - ACT THREE 28A. 41 CONTINUED: KOLRAMI (admiration) Your crew is excellently trained, Captain. A tribute to your leadership. Though I doubt their extensive preparation will be needed. PICARD How so? KOLRAMI I do not expect "Captain" Riker to present much of a challenge. STAR TREK: "Peak Performance" - REV. 4/25/89 - ACT THREE 29. 41 CONTINUED: (2) PICARD Mister Kolrami -- may I speak with you in private? Kolrami's look is of acquiescence and genuine innocence. 42 INT. ENTERPRISE - PICARD'S READY ROOM No sooner has the door closed behind Kolrami when -- PICARD I would like to know the root of your prejudice for my second-in-command. KOLRAMI Captain, I don't -- Picard's upraised hand ends that bit of bull-stuff. PICARD Mister Kolrami -- you have been nothing but denigrating and abusive of Commander Riker since boarding this ship. I should like an explanation. KOLRAMI Having studied William Riker's file prior to this assignment -- I have found him wanting. PICARD In what regard? KOLRAMI His record is exemplary, but as you well know, a starship captain is not manufactured -- he, or she, is born from inside -- from the character of the individual. (beat) My interviews have revealed a man who displays circumstantially inappropriate joviality, belying the seriousness of his station. STAR TREK: "Peak Performance" - REV. 4/20/89 - ACT THREE 30. 42 CONTINUED: PICARD (ice frosting the words) Don't confuse style with intent. Only a fool would question Commander Riker's dedication to Starfleet and the men and women under his command. Riker is the finest officer I have ever served with. KOLRAMI We shall see if your faith is well founded. PICARD The test is if a crew will follow where Commander Riker leads. His joviality is the way he creates that loyalty. And I'll match his command style against your statistics anytime. Off their cold stares -- 42A INT. ENTERPRISE - DATA'S QUARTERS (FROM SCENE 47) Data is viewing the wall monitor on which incalculable amounts of technical information fly by at incredible rates of speed. There is a CHIME. DATA Come in, please. Troi ENTERS. TROI (softly) Data? Data freezes the computer screens. DATA Counselor. Is something wrong? TROI That was going to be my question. There is a moment of silence. If he were human, Data would try and wriggle off the hook. But he's not. STAR TREK: "Peak Performance" - REV. 4/20/89 - ACT THREE 30A. 42A CONTINUED: DATA With my repository of knowledge, I expected to perform better against a humanoid life-form. TROI Some of our greatest advances have come from analyzing failure. While it can be ego-bruising -- DATA Counselor -- I do not have an "ego." Troi is floundering. She uses her empathy to counsel, and she can read nothing of Data, and she knows intellectually that he doesn't really "feel" anything. She tries again. TROI Yes... well, a loss... can be disheartening -- DATA Counselor -- I do not have a -- TROI Data! There are two ways to handle defeat. You can lose confidence or you can learn from your mistakes. DATA That is what troubles me. I made no mistakes. (beat; very matter of fact) Hence, I have conducted a diagnostic check of all of my programs, and now I am cross-checking with the ship's computer. TROI Is all of that necessary? STAR TREK: "Peak Performance" - REV. 4/21/89 - ACT THREE 30B. 42A CONTINUED: (2) DATA I believe so. I have proven to be vulnerable, and at the present time, skepticism must be awarded my deductions. TROI That is why you haven't been on the bridge. DATA Yes, the captain would be ill advised to rely upon my judgement. TROI Data, I think you're really overreacting. I'm sure you're all right. DATA I, however, am not sure. He resumes his research and Troi EXITS. 43 OMITTED 44 INT. HATHAWAY - ENGINEERING Riker ENTERS to find Geordi and Wesley hard at work installing the orb in the anti-matter chamber. RIKER What's that? WESLEY My experiment from the Enterprise. RIKER (a little suspicious) Wes? WESLEY It dealt with high-energy plasma reactions -- (points to the globe) -- with anti-matter. It's clicked for Riker. STAR TREK: "Peak Performance" - 4/17/89 - ACT THREE 31. 44 CONTINUED: RIKER You went back to the Enterprise just to get this... Wes, you cheated. WESLEY No, sir. You told me to improvise. Riker struggles to hold the stern fatherly mien, but it cracks, and he breaks into a broad grin. GEORDI (grinning) The hard part's gonna be calibrating the thermal curve required to start a controlled reaction. RIKER Assuming you can -- can you regulate the reaction? Wesley steps over to -- 45 INSERT - DILITHIUM CRYSTAL CLAMPS Just barely visible -- wedged into the fingers of the clamps -- are MINUTE CHIPS of the valuable mineral. WESLEY (O.S.) There's just enough crystal to do it. 46 BACK TO SCENE WESLEY We plan to channel the reaction through the chips. GEORDI (smiling broadly) Are we good? RIKER (impressed) Better than good. Great. Brilliant. (MORE) STAR TREK: "Peak Performance" - REV. 4/20/89 - ACT THREE 32. 46 CONTINUED: RIKER (Cont'd) (almost to himself) This is going to be fun. (back to business) Carry on. Riker EXITS. 47 OMITTED 47A INT. ENTERPRISE - DATA'S QUARTERS Data is still viewing the wall monitor. There is a chime. DATA Come in, please. Pulaski ENTERS. PULASKI All right, Data, enough of this. DATA Doctor? PULASKI How long are you going to sit sulking like Achilles in his tent? DATA I am running diagnostic -- STAR TREK: "Peak Performance" - REV. 4/21/89 - ACT THREE 33-34. 47A CONTINUED: PULASKI You might be able to sell Troi with that story, but not me. You're smarting because you got beat. Well, it happens. DATA No, Doctor, this is not ego. I am concerned about giving the captain unsound advice. Pulaski looks at his earnest expression, and softens. She realizes he really is deeply confused. PULASKI I wish I'd never maneuvered you into playing that damn game. I'm sorry. DATA For what? It is done, and perhaps just as well. This has indicated that I am damaged in some fashion. I must find the malfunction. He returns to his analysis, and Pulaski, after a last look at him, EXITS. STAR TREK: "Peak Performance" - 4/17/89 - ACT THREE 35. 48 OMITTED 49 INT. HATHAWAY - ENGINEERING - CONTINUOUS Geordi, Wesley and their TEAM are hard at work. Riker ENTERS. RIKER The simulation begins in one hour. GEORDI You'll have warp drive, Captain, though it may not be what you expected. RIKER I'd say that calls for an explanation. GEORDI Sir, we'll be able to give you warp one... (a glance to Wesley) WESLEY -- for just under two seconds. RIKER (making the best) Well, not enough for an escape but used as a surprise, sufficient for gaining a strategic advantage. GEORDI Sir, all of this is "theoretical." RIKER And if the theory fails to pay off? STAR TREK: "Peak Performance" - 4/19/89 - ACT THREE 36. 49 CONTINUED: GEORDI Ever driven a Grenthemen Water Hopper? RIKER Yes. GEORDI Ever popped the clutch? RIKER You're telling me we'll stall the Hathaway. WESLEY ... and the Enterprise will waltz over and pulverize us. FADE OUT. END OF ACT THREE STAR TREK: "Peak Performance" - REV. 4/25/89 - ACT FOUR 37. ACT FOUR FADE IN: 50 OMITTED 50A INT. CAPTAIN'S READY ROOM Picard, seated at his desk, stares in frowning amazement at Troi and Pulaski. Their expressions are serious and intent. PICARD Now, let me see if I fully understand this. You're suggesting that Commander Data is suffering from a profound loss of confidence, and you feel that only I can restore the balance. TROI Yes, sir. PULASKI Both Deanna and I have tried, Captain, and we're not getting through to him. PICARD Don't you think you both might be overreacting? Data is not capable of the emotions you are assigning to him. PULASKI The effect is the same whether it's caused by human emotions or android algorithms. Data's not on the bridge, and I don't think he's going to be on the bridge until we find some way to address his problem. PICARD I am less than an hour away from a battle simulation, and I must handhold an android? PULASKI The burdens of command. Off Picard's expression as we CUT TO: STAR TREK: "Peak Performance" - REV. 4/20/89 - ACT FOUR 37A. 50B INT. DATA'S QUARTERS As before -- Data hard at work. There is a CHIME. DATA Come in, please. Picard ENTERS. PICARD Commander, I require your presence on the bridge. DATA Captain, with all due respect, perhaps it would be better if you choose another to serve as your first -- PICARD (interrupting) Data, you are my first officer. DATA I have not been able to isolate the problem. I might make a mistake. PICARD Yes, you might. But that does not alter your duty -- to this ship, and to me. (a beat) Do you know how to formulate a premise? DATA Yes. PICARD Then formulate one now: How do I handle Riker and the Hathaway? I'll await your answer on the bridge. Picard starts to exit then looks back. PICARD (continuing) Commander, it is possible to commit no mistakes -- and still lose. (MORE) STAR TREK: "Peak Performance" - REV. 4/25/89 - ACT FOUR 37B. 50B CONTINUED: PICARD (Cont'd) (strong beat) That is not a weakness. That is "life". DATA Thank you, Captain, I believe I understand. PICARD And Data, leave the hesitation and self-doubt in your quarters. Data shuts off the monitor, rises, and follows Picard as they EXIT. 50BA EXT. SPACE - THE ENTERPRISE (OPTICAL) 50C INT. OBSERVATION LOUNGE Troi and Data. DATA I have several examples of Commander Riker's battle technique. At the Academy, he calculated a sensory blind spot on a Tholian vessel and hid within it during a battle simulation. And as a lieutenant aboard the Potemkin, his solution to a crisis was to shut down all power, and hang over a planet's magnetic pole, thus confusing his opponent's sensors. TROI And from these specifics, what general conclusion can you extrapolate? DATA Only twenty-one percent of the time does he rely upon traditional tactics. Data is up, pacing slowly. STAR TREK: "Peak Performance" - REV. 4/25/89 - ACT FOUR 37C. 50C CONTINUED: DATA (continuing) So the captain must be prepared for extreme cunning. (pausing as a new thought intrudes) Counselor, Commander Riker will assume that we have made this analysis, and knowing that we know his methods, he will alter them. (a new equally bad thought) But knowing that we know that he knows that we know he might choose to return to his usual pattern. TROI You're over-analyzing. Human nature cannot be denied. (a beat) What kind of man is Commander Riker? DATA He is a fighter. TROI Yes. DATA The weaker his position, the more aggressive will be his posture. TROI And he won't give up. DATA Then despite whatever logical choices he is offered, he must be -- TROI -- The man that he is. Yes. DATA Is that a failing in humans? TROI (rising) You'll have to decide that for yourself. They EXIT. STAR TREK: "Peak Performance" - 4/25/89 - ACT FOUR 37D. 51 INT. ENTERPRISE - MAIN BRIDGE (OPTICAL) Picard stands in front of his chair, Data seated at his side, Kolrami hovering nearby. Burke is at Tactical, supernumeraries at Conn, Ops, and other stations. PICARD Screen on. The Main Viewer shows Riker resplendent on his bridge. PICARD The hunt begins, Number One. RIKER (playful bravado) We're ready -- just remember, Enterprise -- Captain Riker has never lost. The two leaders smile and nod affectionately as Kolrami presses a button on his computer. KOLRAMI Begin! PICARD (to Conn) Screen off. Set course two-two-three mark two-five-seven, full impulse power. Initiate Kumeh maneuver. 51A thru OMITTED 53 54 INT. HATHAWAY - BRIDGE (OPTICAL) as they monitor, on a screen, a graphic simulation of the Enterprise moving behind a planet. GEORDI The Kumeh maneuver -- why are they starting out with such a recognizable ploy? RIKER He's teasing -- wants us to reveal our tactics on his terms. Worf? STAR TREK: "Peak Performance" - 4/17/89 - ACT FOUR 38. 54 CONTINUED: WORF Counter with Talupian stratagem on instrument sighting. RIKER Agreed. Three-quarters impulse, full on my command. Ensign Nagel, maximum shields. (to Worf) Mister Worf, prepare your little surprise. Worf moves swiftly to join Nagel at the rear station. 55 thru OMITTED 57 58 INT. ENTERPRISE - MAIN BRIDGE (OPTICAL) - CONTINUOUS PICARD Course three-one-seven mark seven-three. Present minimal aspect. Ready warp one, optimal spread on simulated torpedoes. The Hathaway is on the main screen. BURKE (urgent alarm) Captain -- Romulan warship approaching fast from astern! PICARD What the -- ?! BURKE He came from nowhere, sir! PICARD (standing; to Conn) Bring us about, Ensign -- maximum shields! DATA Disengage modified beams. We go to Red Alert. As we swing around, a ROMULAN WARSHIP fills the viewscreen. STAR TREK: "Peak Performance" - 4/19/89 - ACT FOUR 39. 58 CONTINUED: PICARD Weapon-systems full -- lock on! Open a hailing frequency. BURKE I can't, sir. (chagrined) There's nothing there. In that instant, we hear the incessant SQUEAL of electronic "hit" after electronic "hit." 59 EXT. SPACE (OPTICAL) - CONTINUOUS The Hathaway (spatially "behind" Enterprise) is firing beam after beam at the bigger ship. 60 INT. ENTERPRISE - MAIN BRIDGE - CONTINUOUS Picard realizes he's been had! Picard presses a button and Red Alert is cancelled. PICARD Warp three, evasive! (the "scores" stop) Disengage weapons, re-engage modified beam. KOLRAMI He is quite good. PICARD He is the best! DATA Computer reports simulated damage to several aft decks. Repair time three-point-six days. BURKE How did he do that? PICARD Mister Worf must have overridden our sensor codes and played some holographic games. Data, input a new code. (MORE) STAR TREK: "Peak Performance" - 4/19/89 - ACT FOUR 40. 60 CONTINUED: PICARD (Cont'd) (beat) Attack posture, circumvental attitude. Prepare beams for photon mode. BURKE (to himself) Bye-bye, Hathaway. 61 INT. HATHAWAY - BRIDGE - CONTINUOUS Their delight is infectious, it leaps off the screen. WORF Computers report heavy damage to Enterprise, sir. WESLEY They're moving off. Why not go after them? RIKER (not buying it) Because they're not through coming after us! Geordi, Wesley -- prepare warp jump. GEORDI (nervous) There are no guarantees here, sir. RIKER There never are, Lieutenant. I'm going to trust your expertise. Geordi and Wesley glance at one another -- what the hell! RIKER (continuing; a true captain) Secure your stations, gentlemen. Stand by for my signal. 62 INT. ENTERPRISE - MAIN BRIDGE - CONTINUOUS PICARD Ready photon torpedoes. STAR TREK: "Peak Performance" - 4/19/89 - ACT FOUR 41. 62 CONTINUED: BURKE Captain, sensors picking up a Ferengi warship closing at warp five. PICARD Did you input that new code? BURKE Yes, sir! PICARD Mister Worf -- I didn't give you enough credit, continue the simulation. ALL HELL BREAKS LOOSE! Wham! Wham! Wham! Wham! The Enterprise is jolted off her gyroscope by massive hits from the real Ferengi craft. The INTERCOM EXPLODES in a tangle of crosstalk as the ship goes to Red Alert. PICARD Divert all power to shields! DATA Sever modified beams, engage phasers and target! PICARD Stay between the Hathaway and the Ferengi! 63 INT. HATHAWAY - BRIDGE - CONTINUOUS Incredible tension. NAGEL That's no ghost attacking the Enterprise. That's real! WORF We must assist, sir! RIKER With what?! We have no offensive weapons! STAR TREK: "Peak Performance" - REV. 4/20/89 - ACT FOUR 42. 63 CONTINUED: The chilling reality of their situation is reflected in the faces of the crew. 64 INT. ENTERPRISE - MAIN BRIDGE (OPTICAL) - CONTINUOUS On viewer, a vicious Ferengi warship hurls attack after attack at our perspective. Picard tries to maintain order while the Red Alert continues. The pace quickens, overlaps! PICARD Where are my weapons? BURKE (taut) Unavailable, sir! We cannot disengage the modified beams -- the connections have been fused! KOLRAMI We must retreat! PICARD Unacceptable! I have crew on the Hathaway. On the Main Viewer, the Ferengi have stopped firing. DATA Captain, the Ferengi have broken off their attack. (to Burke) Drop shields. Transport the away team aboard. BURKE Transporter functions gone, sir! DATA Shields reduced to one-fifth intensity. KOLRAMI Use their moment of indecision to escape! PICARD I have forty crewmembers -- STAR TREK: "Peak Performance" - 4/19/89 - ACT FOUR 43. 64 CONTINUED: KOLRAMI -- Who should be sacrificed to save a thousand! Acceptable tactical losses, considering the circumstances. PICARD Not to me! (to Burke) Notify Starfleet -- priority. Hail Ferengi on my command. (to Data) Formulate alternatives. KOLRAMI (objecting) As the Starfleet observer I am ordering you to withdraw! PICARD (thundering) I am the captain of this vessel! Your order is nullified! Stunned by the force of Picard's directive, Kolrami falls silent and moves away. PICARD (continuing) Ferengi on Main Viewer. 65 MAIN VIEWSCREEN (OPTICAL) The image of the looming Ferengi craft is replaced by the visage of TWO ENEMY OFFICERS. PICARD I am Jean-Luc Picard, Captain of the Federation Starship, USS Enterprise. Why have you attacked my ship? STAR TREK: "Peak Performance" - REV. 4/20/89 - ACT FOUR 44. 65 CONTINUED: BRACTOR Why was your ship combative with another Federation vessel of "lesser" design? Why do you now protect your former target? What is its value to you? TACTICIAN Our probes indicate you were aware of our approach, yet took no action. BRACTOR Your answers will dictate our response. PICARD I have refrained from launching a counter-attack in the hope that we can resolve this peacefully. BRACTOR ("liar") Our probes indicate that you are crippled, and the ship you protect has no weaponry, no light-speed drive, and only scarce crew. TACTICIAN This makes no sense to us. (a beat) Unless it contains something very valuable? BRACTOR I am Bractor, leader of the Ferengi attack vessel Kreechta. I shall have the secret of the other Federation ship. If you surrender it to me, I will allow your Enterprise to leave unharmed. (beat) You have ten of your minutes. The screen returns to exterior of Ferengi ship. STAR TREK: "Peak Performance" - 4/17/89 - ACT FOUR 45. 65 CONTINUED: (2) BURKE Sir, they're massing a surge of power. We're being scanned... they've locked on! PICARD Data? DATA Our shields will not withstand another assault. The tension is palpable. KOLRAMI Then there are no options. Retreat or die. FADE OUT. END OF ACT FOUR STAR TREK: "Peak Performance" - REV. 4/20/89 - ACT FIVE 46. ACT FIVE FADE IN: 66 EXT. SPACE (OPTICAL) - CONTINUOUS showing the relationship of the three ships -- the Enterprise between the Hathaway and the Ferengi craft. PICARD (V.O.) Captain's log, supplemental. Due to a grave miscalculation on my part, the Enterprise has been subjected to a withering attack by the Ferengi. I find myself with little time to decide the fate of forty of my crew stranded aboard the derelict Hathaway. 67 INT. ENTERPRISE - MAIN BRIDGE (OPTICAL) - CONTINUOUS (FROM SCENE 68) Picking up where we left off -- incredible tension. STAR TREK: "Peak Performance" - REV. 4/21/89 - ACT FIVE 47. 67 CONTINUED: PICARD I'm open to suggestions. BURKE Captain, we are now capable of launching a limited number of photon torpedoes. KOLRAMI I have given you my advice, Captain. The Hathaway is expendable. BURKE Commander Riker is hailing, sir. PICARD On screen. Have you been monitoring communications, Number One? The Main Viewer switches from the other ships to Riker on the Hathaway bridge. RIKER Yes, sir. And Kolrami's right. You must save the Enterprise. PICARD You will be left defenseless. STAR TREK: "Peak Performance" - REV. 4/20/89 - ACT FIVE 48. 67 CONTINUED: (2) RIKER When Bractor closes in, we'll hit our warp drive and take our chances. PICARD Your what?! RIKER (with pride) We have a limited, two-second warp capability. KOLRAMI (stunned) Impossible! That ship was rendered warp inactive! PICARD (formulating an idea) I told you he was the best. (to Riker) I should wish to hear about this later, but now I need to work something out with Data. CUT TO: 68 OMITTED 69 INT. OBSERVATION LOUNGE (INTERUCT AS NEEDED) Picard, Data, and Kolrami -- STAR TREK: "Peak Performance" - REV. 4/20/89 - ACT FIVE 49. 69 CONTINUED: DATA Premise: The Ferengi wish to capture the Hathaway believing it to be of value. Therefore, we must remove the ship from their field of interest. KOLRAMI (scornful) They will soon relocate it after a two-second warp and -- PICARD (cutting him off) There is a way. Are you with us, Number One? RIKER Yes, sir. We're all here -- anxiously waiting for you to pull another rabbit out of your hat. PICARD Data. DATA At the captain's signal, we will fire four photon torpedoes directly at the Hathaway. A millisecond before detonation, the computer will trigger your warp jump. GEORDI (lightly) I think I hate this plan. (sobering) Data, we don't even know for sure if our warp jump will work. DATA If the warp engines should fail to function, the result could be... unfortunate. WORF Very unfortunate... we will be dead. STAR TREK: "Peak Performance" - REV. 4/21/89 - ACT FIVE 50-50A. 69 CONTINUED: (2) PICARD Captain Riker, I can't order you to do this... RIKER (a beat) What the hell. Nobody said life was safe. PICARD The advantage is that it will appear from the Kreechta's perspective -- as though you were destroyed in the explosion. WORF That will only deceive them for a few minutes. Their sensors will soon locate us. RIKER A few minutes is all we need, Mister Worf, because you're going to prepare a surprise for them. PICARD Then we are agreed; on my mark in four minutes. DATA Remember, Geordi, if the implementation is off by a millisecond, the Hathaway will not survive. GEORDI Data, that's the one part of this plan that we're all absolutely sure about. Linger for a moment on the concerned faces. 70 EXT. SPACE (OPTICAL) As the three ships continue to hold position. STAR TREK: "Peak Performance" - REV. 4/20/89 - ACT FIVE 51. 71 OMITTED 72 OMITTED 73 INT. ENTERPRISE - MAIN BRIDGE (OPTICAL) (INTERCUT AS NECESSARY) Everybody has settled down into their positions. PICARD Are we ready, Number One? Both Data, to Picard's right, and Riker respond. DATA RIKER'S COM VOICE Ready, Captain. Ready, Captain. Everybody pauses to smile. PICARD Good luck to both of you. (beat; to Burke) Bractor. The viewscreen fills with the sneering Bractor and tactician. BRACTOR I will wait no longer, Picard. PICARD You needn't, Bractor. The answer -- is "no." (beat) Your actions have been wholly criminal, and you will not profit by them. BRACTOR You are a fool. TACTICIAN How can you stop us? PICARD You feel the Hathaway has value? Well, I deny you your prize. (MORE) STAR TREK: "Peak Performance" - REV. 4/20/89 - ACT FIVE 52. 73 CONTINUED: PICARD (Cont'd) (to Burke) Fire! 74 EXT. SPACE (OPTICAL) - CONTINUOUS The Enterprise fires FOUR PHOTON TORPEDOES directly at the Hathaway. The torpedoes EXPLODE violently. 75 INT. ENTERPRISE - MAIN BRIDGE (OPTICAL) - CONTINUOUS - (INTERCUT AS NECESSARY) Bractor is barely-controlled raw fury on the viewer. TACTICIAN Destroy your own rather than endure the ignominy of defeat and capture? BRACTOR I did not think the Federation had such iron. PICARD You had no claim to that ship -- it was ours to destroy. BRACTOR As you are ours to destroy! PICARD (unperturbed) You can try. TACTICIAN Enterprise targeted, Leader. (a long beat then with stunned alarm) Leader! There is another Federation ship closing -- a starship! BRACTOR Maximum shields! We've been outmaneuvered. Retreat! The image of Bractor on the Main Viewer is replaced by the Kreechta, which almost instantly bolts into the Ferengi version of warp nine, and is absolutely gone! STAR TREK: "Peak Performance" - REV. 4/21/89 - ACT FIVE 53. 75 CONTINUED: BURKE Captain, our sensors show no Federation starship nearby. RIKER'S COM VOICE Of course not, Mister Burke. That was Klingon guile. Great relief as the Main Viewer reveals Riker on the Hathaway bridge. PICARD You made it, Number One. Smooth ride? On the screen, Riker, Worf, Geordi, Wesley and Nagel share a look -- it was obviously a bitch! RIKER (wryly) Different! PICARD We'll lock on and pick you up. RIKER With pleasure. The viewscreen returns to the Hathaway in space. Picard turns to Kolrami. KOLRAMI (begrudgingly) I must admit -- your Commander Riker has acquitted himself quite... admirably. Picard's look and silence is all "I-told-you-so." STAR TREK: "Peak Performance" - 4/19/89 - ACT FIVE 53A. 75 CONTINUED: (2) KOLRAMI (continuing) And Captain... so have you. My report to Starfleet will be quite favorable. PICARD Thank you, Mister Kolrami. (to the crew) Initiate recovery procedures, continue repairs, plot a course for the nearest starbase. STAR TREK: "Peak Performance" - REV. 4/20/89 - ACT FIVE 54. 75 CONTINUED: (3) With a self-satisfied smile, Picard ENTERS the turbolift. 76 thru OMITTED 78 79 EXT. SPACE - THE ENTERPRISE (OPTICAL) with the now dark Hathaway IN TOW VIA TRACTOR-BEAM. PICARD (V.O.) Captain's log, supplemental. With the transporter repaired and my crew safely back aboard, we have officially ended the first Starfleet battle simulation. 80 OMITTED 81 RIKER AND PULASKI AS THEY ENTER TEN-FORWARD where the atmosphere is anything but relaxed -- the place is near bedlam. It takes Riker and Pulaski a moment to absorb what is happening. 82 DATA AND KOLRAMI (OPTICAL) are once again playing Strategema surrounded by a surging VOCAL CROWD -- including Worf, Geordi, Wesley, Troi and Burke. Riker does a double-take as he gapes at the -- 83 DIGITAL COUNTER (OPTICAL) which now rips through the 26,000 mark! Before Riker can blink, 27,000 rolls over! Even Pulaski can sense the magic of the moment. 84 THE ANDROID AND THE ALIEN (OPTICAL) sit ramrod-straight as their fingers and heads twitch and rock with incredible speed. 33,000. 34,000. 35,000. The counter stops at 35,693! Kolrami tears his fingers free and goggles off. STAR TREK: "Peak Performance" - 4/19/89 - ACT FIVE 55. 85 SCENE DATA Why have you suspended the game? Kolrami is beside himself with anger, humiliation, self-doubt and confusion. He doesn't know whether to drop dead or order pizza. KOLRAMI (shaking with rage) Because this is not a rematch -- you have made a mockery of me. He storms out of Ten-Forward with an urgency that could only be borne of public disgrace. 86 DATA is swarmed by the CHEERING CREW. Riker and Pulaski push their way through to join Worf, Geordi, Wesley and Troi in the inner-circle. RIKER Data, you beat him! DATA No, sir -- it is a stalemate. WORF No game of Strategema has ever gone this high. GEORDI What did you do? DATA I simply altered my "premise" for playing. RIKER Explain. DATA Working under the assumption that Kolrami is attempting to win, it is reasonable to assume that he expects me to play for the same goal. WESLEY You weren't? STAR TREK: "Peak Performance" - 4/19/89 - ACT FIVE 56. 86 CONTINUED: DATA No. I was playing only for a standoff -- a "draw." While Kolrami was dedicated to winning, I was able to pass up obvious avenues of advancement and settle for a balance. (android pride) Theoretically, I should be able to challenge him indefinitely. PULASKI Then you have beaten him. Data demurring, but with a little preen. DATA A matter of perspective. In the strictest sense I did not win. Troi and Pulaski lean in close with a "Come on, cut the bull-stuff" attitude. TROI/PULASKI Data! DATA I busted him up. The CROWDED ROOM ERUPTS once again, and amidst the congratulatory noise and the outstretched hands of patting approval, PUSH IN on Data's satisfied expression as he absorbs this new sensation, and -- FADE OUT. END OF ACT FIVE THE END STAR TREK: THE NEXT GENERATION "Shades of Gray" #40272-148 Story by Maurice Hurley Teleplay by Maurice Hurley and Richard Manning & Hans Beimler Directed by Rob Bowman THE WRITING CREDITS MAY NOT BE FINAL AND SHOULD NOT BE USED FOR PUBLICITY OR ADVERTISING PURPOSES WITHOUT FIRST CHECKING WITH THE TELEVISION LEGAL DEPARTMENT. Copyright 1989 Paramount Pictures Corporation. All Rights Reserved. This script is not for publication or reproduction. No one is authorized to dispose of same. If lost or destroyed, please notify the Script Department. REVISED FINAL DRAFT MAY 1, 1989 STAR TREK: "Shades of Gray" - 5/1/89 - CAST STAR TREK: THE NEXT GENERATION "Shades of Gray" CAST PICARD RIKER DATA PULASKI TROI GEORDI O'BRIEN Non-Speaking MEDICAL TEAM (2) STAR TREK: "Shades of Gray" - 5/1/89 - SETS STAR TREK: THE NEXT GENERATION "Shades of Gray" SETS INTERIORS EXTERIORS USS ENTERPRISE PLANET SURFACE TRANSPORTER ROOM SICKBAY PULASKI'S OFFICE STOCK OPTICALS USS ENTERPRISE PLANET STAR TREK: "Shades of Gray" - REV. 5/2/89 - TEASER 1. STAR TREK: THE NEXT GENERATION "Shades of Gray" TEASER FADE IN: 1 EXT. SPACE - THE ENTERPRISE (STOCK OPTICAL) in orbit around a planet. 2 EXT. PLANET SURFACE - DAY GEORDI is moving through some underbrush. GEORDI Commander? RIKER (O.S.) I'm over here, Geordi. 3 ANOTHER ANGLE As Geordi rounds a bend and comes upon RIKER who is frowning. GEORDI What's wrong? RIKER Something jabbed me in the calf... Riker inspects his leg. There's a spot of blood. GEORDI (touches his communicator) O'Brien -- Commander Riker's been injured -- lock on and bring him up. O'BRIEN'S COM VOICE Stand by. Riker protests: RIKER Geordi, it's just -- STAR TREK: "Shades of Gray" - REV. 5/1/89 - TEASER 2. 3 CONTINUED: GEORDI (finishes it) A scratch. Right. Sorry, Commander, but we can't take any chances. We're the first survey team to set foot on this planet... we don't know what the risks are. 4 INT. TRANSPORTER ROOM O'BRIEN inputs the coordinates but when he attempts to beam them up, an ALARM SOUNDS on the console. 5 EXT. PLANET SURFACE - DAY Geordi impatiently touches his communicator. GEORDI What's the hold up, O'Brien? 6 INT. TRANSPORTER ROOM O'Brien is working on his control panel. O'BRIEN The transporter has detected unidentified microbes in Commander Riker's body. GEORDI'S COM VOICE Can't the biofilters screen them out? O'BRIEN Apparently not. 7 EXT. PLANET SURFACE - DAY As Geordi and Riker listen. O'BRIEN'S COM VOICE Doctor Pulaski has been notified. GEORDI Acknowledged. Riker treats it lightly. STAR TREK: "Shades of Gray" - REV. 5/3/89 - TEASER 3. 7 CONTINUED: RIKER I didn't want to leave just yet, anyway. 8 INT. TRANSPORTER ROOM PULASKI is now present with full medical kit. O'Brien is filling her in, showing her a readout on the console. O'BRIEN Here's the biofilter's analysis of the microbes. PULASKI Not much to go on... O'BRIEN I can override and beam Commander Riker aboard... Pulaski gives it thought, shakes her head. PULASKI No. I'd better go down and make an evaluation there. Pulaski strides to the transporter pad, steps onto it, looks around at the transporter with distaste. O'Brien picks up on this, feigns uncertainty as he sets the coordinates: O'BRIEN Hmm... I hope these are the right coordinates... Pulaski gives him a sharp look. O'Brien grins. O'BRIEN (cont'd) Just kidding, Doctor. I know how much you love the transporter... PULASKI About as much as I love comical transporter chiefs... 9 OMITTED STAR TREK: "Shades of Gray" - REV. 5/3/89 - TEASER 3A. 10 EXT. PLANET SURFACE - DAY (OPTICAL) Riker and Geordi as before. Pulaski MATERIALIZES, takes a beat to check that she's still in one piece, takes out her medical tricorder, and steps over to Riker. PULASKI Fill me in. RIKER I was walking along, minding my own business, making a simple geological sweep... and something stuck me in the leg. PULASKI Any pain? STAR TREK: "Shades of Gray" - 5/1/89 - TEASER 4. 10 CONTINUED: RIKER No -- a little numb, that's all. PULASKI Do you know what it was that stuck you? Riker shakes his head. GEORDI We've been looking for it, but no luck. Pulaski continues her scan. PULASKI Well, whatever it was, it left something behind... I'm going to bring you up to Sickbay. 11 OMITTED 12 NEW ANGLE Pulaski rises and touches her communicator. PULASKI O'Brien, this is Doctor Pulaski. Medical override is authorized. Beam us directly to Sickbay. O'BRIEN'S COM VOICE Acknowledged. 13 thru OMITTED 15 15A INT. SICKBAY (OPTICAL) Two MEDICAL CREWMEN are standing by. Geordi, Riker, and Pulaski MATERIALIZE. The medical crewmen cross to Riker's side to help him over to a medical table. Riker waves them away. RIKER I can walk to the table, thank you. STAR TREK: "Shades of Gray" - REV. 5/1/89 - TEASER 5. 15A CONTINUED: PULASKI Commander, don't start acting heroic. RIKER Doctor, for personal reasons, I'll walk. PULASKI May I ask why? RIKER I've always had the notion that if I was ever so injured that I couldn't make it on my own two feet... it would be over. PULASKI Medically speaking, that's ridiculous. RIKER You'll get no argument from me, but... that's how I feel. Riker takes a step toward the bed. His leg gives out on him; he falls. Riker's more surprised than anything else. RIKER (cont'd) Whoa -- The medical crewmen pick Riker up and put him on the table. RIKER (cont'd) This is the strangest feeling. My whole leg just went -- dead. Off Pulaski's concerned reaction: FADE OUT. END OF TEASER STAR TREK: "Shades of Gray" - REV. 5/2/89 - ACT ONE 6. ACT ONE FADE IN: 16 EXT. SPACE - THE ENTERPRISE (STOCK OPTICAL) The ship is still in orbit. PICARD (V.O.) Captain's log, Stardate 42976.1. During a geological survey of Surata Four, Commander Riker has become infected by an unidentified microbe. 17 thru OMITTED 19 20 INT. SICKBAY Riker is on the center table. Pulaski is off to the side studying her instruments. PICARD ENTERS. Through all of this there is a great deal of tension even though those in the room maintain a detached, scientific demeanor. Picard approaches the center examining table. PICARD Number One. RIKER Captain. PICARD Put your foot where it didn't belong, did you? RIKER (nods) The doctor's been getting bored lately. I thought I'd find her a challenge... PULASKI That you did. 21 ANOTHER ANGLE Pulaski leaves a work station and steps over to the wall panel. STAR TREK: "Shades of Gray" - REV. 5/1/89 - ACT ONE 7. 21 CONTINUED: PULASKI The commander's nervous system has been invaded by an unknown microorganism. Not a bacteria, not a virus -- but with elements of both. She activates the wall panel. 22 PULASKI AND WALL PANEL (OPTICAL) Displayed on the wall panel is a rendering of Riker's body. Pulaski touches the panel, and the injury to Riker's leg becomes highlighted. PULASKI (indicates) There's the point of entry... 23 thru OMITTED 24 25 SCENE (OPTICAL) Pulaski turns back to the examination table. She holds a sophisticated scanner. PULASKI The microbes have infected the great sciatic nerve... they're multiplying at an incredible rate. She moves the scanner near his leg. PULASKI (cont'd) (indicating the screen) There. The nerves in Riker's injured leg are now highlighted. The highlighting extends up the major nerves into Riker's thigh. PICARD Can you remove it? PULASKI Not surgically. The organisms fuse to the nerve, intertwining at the molecular level. STAR TREK: "Shades of Gray" - REV. 5/1/89 - ACT ONE 8. 25 CONTINUED: RIKER That's why the transporter's biofilters couldn't extract them. PULASKI There's no evidence of nerve damage, but the organisms are impeding nervous function. RIKER (nods) My leg's still asleep. PICARD (to Pulaski) Your prognosis? PULASKI The infection is spreading. It will eventually reach the brain. PICARD And if it interfered with neural activity there... PULASKI Commander Riker could die. Riker takes it stoically. PICARD How can I help? PULASKI I need to know more about its composition. PICARD And for that, you need a sample. PULASKI Exactly. Picard touches a com panel: STAR TREK: "Shades of Gray" - 5/1/89 - ACT ONE 9. 25 CONTINUED: (2) PICARD Mister Data, Mister La Forge -- prepare to beam down to the planet. 26 OMITTED 27 INT. TRANSPORTER ROOM DATA and Geordi are preparing to mount the platform. Each carries a tricorder and a large phaser. O'Brien is behind the console. DATA I must reiterate that it would be better if I went alone. GEORDI Don't like my company? DATA Your company is not at issue. Your vulnerability to this microorganism is. GEORDI I'll watch where I step. Besides, how do we know that this bug doesn't like androids even more than it likes humans? DATA Possible, but highly unlikely. In any event, why risk both of us? GEORDI Because I know exactly where Commander Riker was when it happened. Data accepts the logic, and they climb onto the transporter pad. 28 OMITTED STAR TREK: "Shades of Gray" - REV. 5/4/89 - ACT ONE 10. 28 OMITTED 29 EXT. PLANET SURFACE - DAY (OPTICAL) Data and Geordi MATERIALIZE. Because of what happened to Riker this place is ominous. GEORDI He was right over here. Geordi is very careful where he steps as -- 30 ANOTHER ANGLE -- he and Data move to the spot and hunker down. Geordi examines the area with his VISOR while Data begins a meticulous scan with his tricorder. DATA I detect no animal life within fifty kilometers. Merely vegetation. (a beat) However, I am reading extensive animal remains -- mostly fossilized. GEORDI A graveyard? DATA I do not know. They keep looking. GEORDI Look at this. Geordi indicates an unusual-looking vine. Data turns his attention to the vine. DATA The structure is rhizomatous. Data reaches down to touch the vine. GEORDI Be careful. DATA I am always careful. STAR TREK: "Shades of Gray" - REV. 5/3/89 - ACT ONE 10A. 31 ANOTHER ANGLE As Data lifts the vine up off the ground. The vine looks dead -- harmless. DATA It appears to be dead. Geordi examines the vine with his VISOR. GEORDI I'm not so sure. I can see thermal variations... (gets an idea) Data, set it down. Let's try something. Data does so. STAR TREK: "Shades of Gray" - REV. 5/3/89 - ACT ONE 11. 31 CONTINUED: GEORDI (cont'd) Perhaps it likes humans more than androids. Geordi slowly extends his hand to the vine, inviting it to "strike." DATA If you are correct, you are placing yourself in grave danger. GEORDI I'm counting on those great android reflexes of yours... 32 CLOSER ANGLE as Geordi's hand nears the vine. All at once, the vine moves -- springing toward Geordi's hand. But Data moves faster, grabs the vine and holds it. 33 THE VINE Data turns the vine over -- and we can now see a meanlooking thorn protruding from the underside of the vine. 34 DATA AND GEORDI As they study it. GEORDI I'd say that's what we're looking for. DATA I would tend to agree. Geordi makes an adjustment to his phaser as Data holds the vine. 35 thru OMITTED 36 36A CLOSE ON THE THORN (OPTICAL) as Geordi fires up a pinpoint phaser beam to cut loose the thorn. But the moment the beam touches the vine: STAR TREK: "Shades of Gray" - REV. 5/4/89 - ACT ONE 12. 36B WIDER The area around Geordi and Data begins to move. Large clumps of vines vibrate. It is as if they are standing on a great living thing, which has just awoken, and is very angry. GEORDI (touches communicator) O'Brien! Stand by! (to Data) Hold it still. Data has to make an effort to keep the vine in his hands from moving as the vines around them continue their frantic oscillation. Geordi finishes his task, slaps his communicator: GEORDI (cont'd) Got it. Energize! 36C INT. TRANSPORTER ROOM (OPTICAL) O'Brien is behind the console. Picard ENTERS as O'Brien hits the button. Geordi and Data MATERIALIZE on the platform. 36D NEW ANGLE as Geordi looks himself over. No blood anywhere. GEORDI Thanks, O'Brien. Another minute, and we'd've been fossils ourselves. DATA Not precisely, Geordi. True fossilization requires several millennia. Geordi strides off the platform, shows Picard the thorn he's carefully holding. GEORDI Captain, here's your sample. PICARD Get it to Sickbay right away. Geordi EXITS with the thorn. Picard crosses to Data. STAR TREK: "Shades of Gray" - REV. 5/4/89 - ACT ONE 13. 36D CONTINUED: PICARD (cont'd) Report. DATA Captain, the commander's injury was not accidental. Certain vines on the planet evidently seek out warm-blooded beings and deliberately infect them. PICARD To what end? DATA Unknown. It is conceivable that there is a symbiotic relationship involved... Data hesitates. Picard prompts him: PICARD Go on. DATA There were numerous animal remains in the area, leading me to hypothesize that the vines could be predatory. PICARD Then they infect animals in order to kill them. DATA It is possible. (a beat) For Commander Riker's sake, I hope my hypothesis is in error. PICARD Unfortunately, Mister Data, your hypotheses rarely are. Off Picard's concern: 37 OMITTED FADE OUT. END OF ACT ONE STAR TREK: "Shades of Gray" - REV. 5/1/89 - ACT TWO 14. ACT TWO FADE IN: 38 OMITTED 38A INT. PULASKI'S OFFICE Pulaski is at a library console, entering data. Picard is looking over her shoulder. One of the medical crewmen enters, hands Pulaski a chip which she inserts into the console. She's not pleased with what is displayed. PULASKI All negative. PICARD There's nothing that will cure this infection? PULASKI This microorganism is very mysterious. I can't even figure out what's keeping it alive. PICARD Or how to kill it. PULASKI Oh, I can kill it... but not without destroying the nerves it's inhabiting. Pulaski takes a breath. Her frustration is evident. PICARD I know you're doing your best... PULASKI My best may not be good enough. 39 INT. SICKBAY Riker, lying on the bed as before, flexes his right arm by making a fist and then spreading his fingers wide. His look of concern tells us the numbness is spreading. Picard ENTERS from Pulaski's office. Riker relaxes his hand and covers his anguish with a smile. STAR TREK: "Shades of Gray" - REV. 5/1/89 - ACT TWO 15. 39 CONTINUED: PICARD Comfortable? RIKER How could I not be comfortable? I'm being waited on hand and foot. Riker puts his left hand behind his head -- a "kickback-and-relax" gesture. RIKER (cont'd) My only worry is that they'll find out I'm faking it. But, of course, Picard knows this is no charade. PICARD I wish you were faking it. I've seen the thorn, Number One. RIKER The doctor showed it to me, too. Harmless-looking thing, isn't it? Picard can't help but feel pride at the stoic, almost cheerful outlook of his subordinate. PICARD But deadly. (a beat) I'm sorry. RIKER These things happen. PICARD When you least expect them. RIKER I'm surprised they don't happen more often. After all, we are exploring the unknown. Picard's frustration begins to show: PICARD And now and then we are humbled... reminded that the universe contains much that is beautiful... and much that is malevolent. STAR TREK: "Shades of Gray" - REV. 5/1/89 - ACT TWO 16. 39 CONTINUED: (2) RIKER Captain, I hardly think the vine that struck me did so out of malice. (a beat) If I've learned anything aboard this ship... from our voyages... from you... it's that most life forms act out of an instinct for survival -- not out of evil. Picard smiles at his protege. PICARD A worthy lesson. I admire your lack of rancor, Number One. RIKER Captain, if you drop a hammer on your foot, it's rather useless to get mad at the hammer. Picard looks at his friend with admiration, then EXITS into Pulaski's office. 39A INT. PULASKI'S OFFICE Pulaski is still working away at her console as Picard ENTERS. PICARD Anything? PULASKI Not yet. PICARD Doctor, we're running out of time. STAR TREK: "Shades of Gray" - 5/1/89 - ACT TWO 17. 39A CONTINUED: Pulaski turns, gives Picard a glare. Picard backs off. PICARD (cont'd) You're right. I don't need to remind you of your duties. I didn't mean to give offense. PULASKI (smiles) None taken. Pulaski turns back to her work. PULASKI (cont'd) Now get out of my hair. PICARD Aye aye, Doctor. And Picard EXITS. 40 EXT. SPACE - THE ENTERPRISE (STOCK OPTICAL) in orbit around the planet. 41 OMITTED 42 INT. SICKBAY One of the medical crewmen is running the scanner over Riker's body. Riker's weak; his arms and legs are so much dead weight, and it's a bit of an effort for him to speak. Still, he's at his most charming: RIKER This bug's persistent, I'll admit. But I'm not worried. We Rikers are ornery, too... The crewman can't help cracking a smile. In b.g., TROI ENTERS. Riker doesn't see her. RIKER (cont'd) In fact, my great-grandfather was once bitten by a rattlesnake. After three days of intense pain -- the snake died. The crewman's smile widens. STAR TREK: "Shades of Gray" - REV. 5/1/89 - ACT TWO 18. 43 ANOTHER ANGLE as Troi steps forward. Riker sees her, doesn't change expression -- but falls silent. The crewman completes the scan, puts away the scanner, EXITS... leaving Troi and Riker alone in the room. A long beat. Troi crosses to Riker's side. TROI You're a very entertaining patient. RIKER I try. TROI Yes. You're making quite an effort to be cheerful. It's almost an accusation. Riker stares at her, drops all pretense. RIKER You of all people should know... TROI You feel what anyone in your place would feel. RIKER But I'm the first officer of this ship. I have to set an example. TROI Even now? RIKER Now most of all. Deanna, facing death is the ultimate test of character. I don't want to die -- but if I have to, I want to do it with a little pride. TROI And a lot of impudence. RIKER (smiles) You bet. Dying is bad enough -- but losing my sense of humor? Forget it. STAR TREK: "Shades of Gray" - REV. 5/1/89 - ACT TWO 19. 43 CONTINUED: Troi looks at him with love and compassion, gently reaches out, touches his face. TROI Imzadi... 43A NEW ANGLE A shared moment. Then Riker's devil-may-care manner returns: RIKER I haven't given up yet. The best medical team in Starfleet is on the case... I'm sure they'll... And suddenly, Riker's voice trails off -- and he loses consciousness. Alarmed, Troi looks at the diagnostic readouts -- Riker's vital signs are falling fast. 44 PULASKI ENTERS quickly and examines Riker. 45 ANGLE ON THE WALL PANEL (OPTICAL) as Pulaski punches up the display of Riker's nervous system. The highlighting has expanded and now reaches the spinal column. PULASKI It's spread to the spinal column. It's weakening his autonomic nervous system. 45A ON PULASKI as she picks up a hypospray, gives Riker a shot. Riker doesn't respond, but his vital signs stabilize -- still quite low. STAR TREK: "Shades of Gray" - REV. 5/3/89 - ACT TWO 20. 45A CONTINUED: PULASKI Judging by its present rate of growth and infiltration pattern, the infection will reach his brain within an hour. On Troi's reaction: CUT TO: 46 thru OMITTED 56 57 EXT. SPACE - THE ENTERPRISE (STOCK OPTICAL) Orbiting the planet. PULASKI (V.O.) Medical log, Stardate 42976.2. I can't keep the alien infection from spreading to Commander Riker's brain. 58 INT. SICKBAY Riker is unconscious. At the head of Riker's bed is a strange device -- a tunnel-shaped apparatus designed to encircle the patient. On one side is a binocular eyepiece somewhat like an electron microscope's. Troi looks on as Pulaski and the two medical crewmen position the device. Over this: PULASKI (V.O., cont'd) Once there, it will kill him by dampening neural impulses. The only way I can keep him alive is to force the neurons to stay active -- by stimulating them directly with electrical impulses. 59 NEW ANGLE as the crewmen prepare the device. PULASKI Let's proceed. STAR TREK: "Shades of Gray" - REV. 5/3/89 - ACT TWO 20A 60 ON RIKER His head has been clamped to the table to keep it perfectly motionless. The device slides slowly into place, surrounding his head. STAR TREK: "Shades of Gray" - REV. 5/1/89 - ACT TWO 21. 61 ON PULASKI as she puts her eyes to the eyepiece and operates the controls of the device. 62 ON RIKER as his head is bathed in light. Two thin, needletipped probes extend from the device. The probes break the skin of Riker's temple, keep moving until about three inches of the needle tips have been inserted into Riker's head. 63 ON PULASKI keeping her eyes to the eyepiece and making fine adjustments to the device. 64 OMITTED 65 ON RIKER as two more probes appears, insert themselves into Riker's forehead. 66 ON PULASKI nodding with satisfaction. PULASKI Good... She makes more adjustments. 67 ON RIKER as two more probes insert themselves into Riker's head from underneath, entering at a point underneath the ear. Once those probes are in place, two more probes appear and insert -- making a total of eight. 68 ON PULASKI taking her eyes from the device's eyepiece, checking Riker's vital signs monitor, and turning to one of the medical crewmen: STAR TREK: "Shades of Gray" - REV. 5/1/89 - ACT TWO 22. 68 CONTINUED: PULASKI Stand by with five milligrams of tricordrazine in case of seizure. (takes a breath) Here goes... She presses a panel on the device. 68A thru OMITTED 70 71 A SLOW PUSH IN on Riker's face as Pulaski activates the current. Riker's face twitches involuntarily as current is applied to the probes -- and then he is motionless. Then a variation of the ripple dissolve... DISSOLVE TO: 71A EXT. PLANET SURFACE (STOCK FROM #107 SCENES 34 TO 37) Dimly lit, a twilight world of overcast, turbulent skies hanging heavily over a strange landscape of coral-like "trees." LIGHTNING explodes above, as a dull THUNDER echoes through this eerie labyrinth. In a relatively clear area, Riker suddenly materializes... alone! He's woozy, but in one piece. He looks around, perplexed, worried. RIKER Tasha? Data? Geordi? Worf?! No answer. Riker scrambles toward a nearby rise, through the "forest," and up the incline... reaching the top. He surveys the surrounding area, with no luck. Landscape. No sign of anything lifelike. More THUNDER o.s. RIKER Anybody?! DISSOLVE BACK TO: STAR TREK: "Shades of Gray" - REV. 5/2/89 - ACT TWO 22A. 71B INT. SICKBAY (OPTICAL) CLOSE on Riker's sweating, tormented face. WIDEN to include Troi and Pulaski. Pulaski punches up the view of Riker's nervous system. The highlighting now includes part of the brain. Pulaski then examines the vital signs monitor: PULASKI We've stimulated random wave activity, but the patterns are dangerously erratic. TROI (under her breath) Hang on, Will... On Troi's expression of concern, we -- FADE OUT. END OF ACT TWO STAR TREK: "Shades of Gray" - REV. 5/2/89 - ACT THREE 23. ACT THREE FADE IN: 72 thru OMITTED 74 74A INT. SICKBAY CLOSE on an unconscious but highly agitated Riker. WIDEN to include Troi and Pulaski. Pulaski makes a series of adjustments to the device. PULASKI The wave patterns are still too irregular. TROI Why won't they stabilize? PULASKI Wait -- I've found the proper amplitude -- Pulaski makes a small adjustment. After a beat: PULASKI (cont'd) There. The patterns are steadier. TROI Is the stimulation preventing the infection from taking hold? PULASKI For now. Pulaski studies the monitor. PULASKI (cont'd) The vertex waves indicate a K-complex corresponding to an R.E.M. state. TROI He's dreaming. 74B ON RIKER his expression less agitated than before... DISSOLVE TO: STAR TREK: "Shades of Gray" - REV. 5/2/89 - ACT THREE 23A. 74C INT. HOLODECK CORRIDOR (STOCK, #102 SC. 133-140) The Parkland hidden at this moment by a WILD SECTION OF CORRIDOR WALL AND HATCHWAY which, when the hatch is opened, will REVEAL PARKLAND. COMPUTER VOICE (continuing; without delay) And if you care to enter, Commander... RIKER (snaps; interrupting) I do. Immediately, the hatch slides open and WE SEE THE PARKLAND (LOCATION). It looks (and is) real, including land contours, trees, and even a small stream nearby. Beyond that the Parkland stretches off for what appears to be miles and miles away to the horizon. STAR TREK: "Shades of Gray" - REV. 5/2/89 - ACT THREE 24. 74D ANGLE BACK TOWARD HATCHWAY as Riker ENTERS through it and stands inspecting the Parkland scene with genuine appreciation and then HEARS SOMEONE WHISTLING A MELODY, but doing it rather badly and laboriously. 74E ANGLE PAST RIKER INTO PARKLAND as he MOVES AWAY, seeking the source of the WHISTLING which will begin to grow LOUDER now. 74F ANGLE AT STREAM as Riker crosses, stepping from rock to rock. He makes a misstep, almost falls, then recovers and gets across. He looks back at the stone which caused it. 74G CLOSER ON RIKER As he walks, the WHISTLING is nearby now. He stops, calls: RIKER Hello! The WHISTLING has continued without pause. Riker cocks his ear, corrects his direction slightly. 74H EXT. WOODLAND GLEN Riker ENTERS SHOT through shrubbery, sees something and stops. 74I ANGLE ON DATA Lying there, cushioned by deep grass. He's totally absorbed in certain melody notes he's attempting -- and keeps missing. 74J PANNING RIKER Moving onto TWO SHOT where he stops, and WHISTLES the same melody, hitting the correct notes. A startled Data looks up blankly, then comes quickly to his feet, but Riker waves him back down, sits beside him. STAR TREK: "Shades of Gray" - REV. 5/2/89 - ACT THREE 25. 74J CONTINUED: DATA Marvelous how easily humans do that, sir. I still need much practice. Riker hesitates, then: RIKER There are some puzzles down on the planet that Captain Picard wants answered. He suggests I take you on the away team I'll be leading. DATA I shall endeavor to function adequately, sir. Riker hesitates, wanting to say something but not sure how to begin. RIKER Uh, yes. And when the captain suggested you I, uh, looked up your record... (hesitates) DATA Yes sir, a wise procedure always. RIKER Then, your rank of lieutenant commander is honorary. DATA No, sir. Starfleet Class of '78; honors in probability mechanics and exobiology. RIKER But your files... they say you're a... DATA (waits; then) Machine? Correct, sir. Does that trouble you? RIKER (hesitates) To be honest... yes, a little. STAR TREK: "Shades of Gray" - REV. 5/2/89 - ACT THREE 26. 74J CONTINUED: (2) DATA Understood, sir. Prejudice is very human. RIKER Now that troubles me. Do you consider yourself superior to us? DATA I am superior in many ways. But I would gladly give it up to be human. RIKER (studies Data; then) Nice to meet you, Pinocchio. Data seems uncomprehending. RIKER (continuing; explains) A joke. DATA (straight-faced) Ah! Intriguing. RIKER (big grin) You're going to be an interesting companion, Mister Data. 75 thru OMITTED 78 79 INT. MAIN BRIDGE (STOCK FROM #128 SCENE 45) Riker looks up from a panel. RIKER All stations have reported, Captain. There seems to be no immediate threat to our ship or crew. As Riker stands looking at the dark Viewscreen, Picard moves up to stand beside him. STAR TREK: "Shades of Gray" - REV. 5/3/89 - ACT THREE 27. 79 CONTINUED: PICARD In which case, let's hold position for a while, Number One. This is worth studying. RIKER Incredible. It's like looking off into... infinity, sir. (turns to Picard) Remember the course in ancient history at Starfleet Academy? Back to the time when men still believed the Earth was flat? PICARD (smiles) And that the sun revolved around the Earth... RIKER And if a ship sailed too far out into the ocean it would fall off the edge of the world... Riker turns back to look at the empty void on the viewscreen. PICARD "Beyond this place there be dragons... " It was even said that crews would threaten to hang their captain from the yardarm if they refused to turn back. RIKER I'm sure no one here has that in mind, sir. PICARD How comforting, Number One. 79A thru OMITTED 80 80A INT. TEN-FORWARD (STOCK FROM #136 SCENE 28) Wesley sits with Riker at the bar. Guinan watches them from behind the bar. STAR TREK: "Shades of Gray" - REV. 5/2/89 - ACT THREE 28. 80A CONTINUED: WESLEY But what do I say? How should I act? What do I do? Riker turns to Guinan and motions toward a nearby empty table. RIKER Guinan, I need your help. Could you sit over there? GUINAN That seems simple enough. Guinan walks around the bar and heads for a table. Riker and Wesley follow. Guinan sits. Riker sits beside her. Wesley stands off to one side. RIKER (to Wesley) The first words out of your mouth are the most important. You could start by saying something like... (turns to Guinan) ... "you're the most beautiful woman in the galaxy." Riker holds the look for a moment, then turns back to Wesley. RIKER (continuing) But that might not work. GUINAN Yes it would. Riker is relieved and amused. This is going to be fun. He turns to Guinan. RIKER If you only knew how much I wanted to tell you that. GUINAN But you were afraid. RIKER Yes. GUINAN Of me? STAR TREK: "Shades of Gray" - REV. 5/2/89 - ACT THREE 29. 80A CONTINUED: (2) RIKER Of us. Of what we could become... WESLEY Commander Riker... They ignore him. RIKER ... and that you might have thought it was a line. GUINAN Maybe I do think it's a line. RIKER Then you think I'm not sincere? GUINAN I didn't say that. There's nothing wrong with a line. It's like a knock on the door. RIKER Then you're inviting me in? GUINAN I'm not sending you away. RIKER That's more than I expected. GUINAN But is it more than you hoped? RIKER To hope is to recognize the possibility. I had only dreams. GUINAN Dreams can be dangerous. RIKER Not these dreams. He looks into her eyes. RIKER (continuing) I dream of a galaxy where your eyes are stars... And all the universe worships night. STAR TREK: "Shades of Gray" - REV. 5/3/89 - ACT THREE 30. 80A CONTINUED: (3) GUINAN Careful, if you place me too high on a pedestal, you won't be able to reach me. RIKER Then I'll learn to fly. You are the heart in my day and the soul in my night. Wesley taps Guinan on the arm. WESLEY I don't think this is my style. GUINAN Shut up, kid. (to Riker, dreamily) Now, tell me more about my eyes. DISSOLVE BACK TO: 81 INT. SICKBAY (OPTICAL) Riker's face is calmer. WIDEN to reveal Pulaski and Troi. Troi is concentrating. TROI He's relaxed... experiencing feelings of warmth. Friendship. PULASKI He's reliving memories. That's a natural side effect of the neural stimulation. Pulaski punches up the diagram of Riker's body with the organism highlighted. To her surprise: PULASKI (cont'd) Look at this! The organisms' metabolism has changed. I wonder if the stimulation is affecting them somehow... Pulaski again adjusts the device. PULASKI (cont'd) I'm going to refocus the impulse pattern on the interpretative cortex. STAR TREK: "Shades of Gray" - REV. 5/2/89 - ACT THREE 31. 81 CONTINUED: TROI Will that intensify the commander's memories? PULASKI Exactly. And we'll see if that has an effect on the microbes... Pulaski activates the device -- 81A ON RIKER as we PUSH IN again and DISSOLVE TO: 81B OMITTED 81C INT. COUNCIL CHAMBERS (STOCK FROM #109 SCENES 12-13)) The kind of place you'd like to visit. No particularly formalized furnishing plan -- it includes just about any way anyone would like to sit or loll. The same sort of revealing but sensible garb here too -- along with good humor. In fact, joy is what is mainly present here. Lots of fruit, nuts, food and drink selections. A MUSIC GROUP of harpists in sight -- admittedly strange looking harps on which they compose, and now and then PLAY LILTING MUSIC which, like everything else, is not taken too seriously here either. RIVAN Everyone! We've brought the visitors! LIATOR (gesturing to away team) Please enjoy what we have! 81D EMPHASIZING ENTERPRISE PEOPLE as they are taken charge of with great hospitality. STAR TREK: "Shades of Gray" - REV. 5/2/89 - ACT THREE 32. 81E INT. COUNCIL CHAMBERS (STOCK FROM #109 SCENES 31-31A) TRUCKING WITH RIKER as he passes through the Council Chamber bemused at the sight of the Edo of all ages and both sexes enjoying music, food, and each other. He comes to three who are playing a game with what appear to be marbles, each holding one to five of them hidden in the hand, then all of them simultaneously revealing how many each of them holds. We don't have to know the rules -- they know them and two of them will LAUGH delightedly at the total of marbles exposed. One will HANG HIS/HER HEAD in mock despair. Then when they look up to find Riker watching, they extend marbles to him, an offer to let him play too. EDO MARBLE PLAYER This will please you. Join us! RIKER (grins; shakes head) Another time. Thanks. Riker moves on a couple of steps to where an Edo man and woman, partially unclothed, are laying on a couch locked in an embrace. If they're not actually making love now, it is clear they will be doing it any moment now. As Riker pauses a female EDO SPECTATOR passes through, patting him on the backside. EDO SPECTATOR Joy and happiness! RIKER Certainly is. Riker smiles again, moving on through the room. 81F ANGLE ON WORF as Riker moves into TWO SHOT with him. RIKER The good life, Worf. WORF I am not concerned with pleasure, Commander. I am a warrior. RIKER Even Klingons must need love now and then. STAR TREK: "Shades of Gray" - REV. 5/3/89 - ACT THREE 33. 81F CONTINUED: WORF For what we consider love, sir, I would need a Klingon woman. RIKER (eyes Worf curiously) How about plain old basic sex? You must have some need for that. WORF Of course. But with the females who are available to me... Earth females... I must restrain myself too much. They are quite fragile, sir. RIKER (eyes him again) Worf, if anyone else said that, I'd suspect he was bragging. WORF (puzzled) "Bragging," sir? 81G INT. HOLODECK (STOCK FROM #116 SCENES 21 THRU 27) This three-dimensional, computer-generated image is so beautiful it takes Riker's breath. STAR TREK: "Shades of Gray" - REV. 5/2/89 - ACT THREE 34. 81G CONTINUED: RIKER (to the Bynars) Gentlemen, if this is what you call "enhancement" you have a gift for understatement. He CROSSES to the beautiful WOMAN. 81H ANGLE ON WOMAN'S TABLE As Riker sits down, the IMAGES COME TO LIFE. The combo BEGINS TO PLAY, the woman (Minuet) MOVES. 81I RIKER AND WOMAN He looks at her with interest. RIKER What's your name, and tell me you love jazz. MINUET My name is Minuet. I love all jazz except Dixieland. RIKER Why not Dixieland? MINUET Because you can't dance to it. RIKER My girl. 81J ANGLE ON TABLE WITH RIKER AND MINUET (OPTICAL) A slight change occurs in Minuet. The way she looks at Riker is more personal. RIKER (slyly) What's a knockout like you doing in a computer-generated joint like this? MINUET Waiting for you. STAR TREK: "Shades of Gray" - REV. 5/2/89 - ACT THREE 35. 81J CONTINUED: Her voice is deeper, sexier. Her eyes are warm, liquid, inviting. RIKER Waiting for me?!! You can't be serious? MINUET Oh yes, Will -- I've never been more serious in my life. Riker is knocked a little off balance by her look and her directness. DISSOLVE TO: 81K INT. HOLODECK (STOCK FROM #116 SCENES 41 THRU 42) Riker APPROACHES the table. Minuet smiles a greeting. RIKER I am going to have to leave you for a while and see to my duties. MINUET Your work is very important to you. RIKER It is me -- it's what I am. MINUET Can we dance once before you leave? The invitation is so effortlessly offered -- and the woman so appealing -- who could resist? RIKER Sure, why not. She rises. He leads her to the little dance floor. 81L ON THE DANCE FLOOR As they STEP ONTO the dance floor, Minuet turns and folds herself into his arms. They dance. It's slow and sexy. STAR TREK: "Shades of Gray" - REV. 5/2/89 - ACT THREE 36. 81L CONTINUED: RIKER How did you learn to dance so well? MINUET From following you. Riker is puzzled and amused at the same time. MINUET I can anticipate your lead. Tell me more about your work -- what is it about it that consumes and enthralls you? RIKER What an interesting choice of words. That's exactly what it does. MINUET You are very fortunate. RIKER I know that. MINUET At this point in your life to be exactly where you want to be... And it's wonderful that you realize it. RIKER I'd be a fool not to know how lucky I am to be on this ship serving with this group of people. It's a dream come true. She snuggles in a little closer. RIKER (continuing) Just like this. MINUET A dream? Is that what this is? Is that what I am? She fills up his senses. He holds her away, to look at her. Her fragrance -- the lightness of her touch. Her movement. Riker is becoming captivated by her. STAR TREK: "Shades of Gray" - REV. 5/2/89 - ACT THREE 37. 81L CONTINUED: (2) As a woman can, she senses what he's feeling and leans back to look in his eyes. RIKER I know you are a computer-generated image... but your smell, the way you feel, your touch, even the way you talk and think is so real. MINUET Thank you. RIKER How far can this relationship go? I mean, how real are you? MINUET As real as you need me to be. Then a look. To underline her words, she molds herself against him. DISSOLVE BACK TO: 82 thru OMITTED 82A 82AA INT. SICKBAY CLOSE on Riker's face. PAN up to Troi's face -- which is a bit flushed. Pulaski notices. PULASKI Something wrong? TROI No... it's just that... Commander Riker's emotions are rather... passionate. PULASKI As in -- erotic? TROI (nods) Very much so. Pulaski smiles. PAN back to Riker's face and DISSOLVE TO: STAR TREK: "Shades of Gray" - REV. 5/2/89 - ACT THREE 38. 82B INT. RIKER'S QUARTERS (STOCK FROM #144 SCENE 24A) BRENNA William, is something wrong? RIKER What do you mean? BRENNA Do you not like girls? RIKER Of course I like... Oh... is there a technique to this foot washing? Brenna approaches him. Unhooks her skirt. It puddles about her feet, and she steps out of it wearing a pretty petticoat. BRENNA You generally start at the top... and work your way down. Riker reaches up and pulls the pins from her long hair. It cascades over her shoulders. RIKER I think I can handle that. They are in each other's arms now. BRENNA I was hoping you might. They embrace... 83 INT. EXECUTIVE OFFICE (STOCK FROM #115 SCENE 42) Beata touches his chest. BEATA I like the way your eyes pick up the color of your tunic. He shifts his body to avoid her hand. RIKER It's not our place to interfere in the domestic affairs of other societies. She reaches across him to pick up the bottle of liquor and freshen his drink. STAR TREK: "Shades of Gray" - REV. 5/2/89 - ACT THREE 39. 83 CONTINUED: BEATA But you can interact, can't you? RIKER Of course. Otherwise, how can we learn? BEATA And that's why you're here, tonight, with me... to learn? RIKER Yes. BEATA ... About our society. RIKER Yes. BEATA In our society, it's men who are the fortunate ones, enjoying all that life has to offer, while we women devote ourselves to the obligations of making life work. RIKER In our society we share the responsibilities and the pleasures equally. BEATA Don't be defensive. I'd be the last to imply that men are inferior. RIKER Or I, that women are. That's why I can be here with you while the women on the away team go to find Ramsey. BEATA I must remember to thank them when they return for giving us this time. She moves closer. She touches him and kisses him softly on the cheek. STAR TREK: "Shades of Gray" - REV. 5/2/89 - ACT THREE 40. 83 CONTINUED: (2) BEATA You resist... Why? Do you not find me attractive? RIKER Oh... Yes I find you very attractive. BEATA Don't you feel you know me well enough? Riker hesitates, bemused. BEATA You attract me like no man ever has. RIKER I'm flattered. I don't know what to say. DISSOLVE BACK TO: 84 thru OMITTED 85 86 INT. SICKBAY (OPTICAL) CLOSE on Riker. WIDEN to reveal Troi composing herself as Pulaski punches up the highlighted view of Riker's body and nervous system. To Pulaski and Troi's dismay, the highlighting is stronger than ever. PULASKI The organisms responded, all right. Their growth rate has doubled. Troi's frustration surfaces as she looks from Riker back to the wall panel. TROI Then all we've done is make things worse... On Pulaski's grim expression: FADE OUT. END OF ACT THREE STAR TREK: "Shades of Gray" - REV. 5/2/89 - ACT FOUR 41. ACT FOUR FADE IN: 87 OMITTED 88 INT. SICKBAY Pulaski moves from the monitor to Troi's side. PULASKI Now we know the organism's growth rate is related to the memories he's experiencing. TROI Or the emotions they produce. PULASKI Different mental processes generate different chemicals. Perhaps the organisms are sensitive to brain endorphins. TROI And if some types of endorphins attract them... PULASKI (nods) ... others will repel them. Pulaski's fingers fly over the controls of the device. PULASKI (cont'd) I'm going to change the differential current pattern and see what happens. The device is activated -- 89 CLOSE ON RIKER - PUSH IN DISSOLVE TO: 89A thru OMITTED 89B STAR TREK: "Shades of Gray" - REV. 5/2/89 - ACT FOUR 42. 89C EXT. PLANET SURFACE (STOCK FROM #122 SCENE C21-22) Riker moves a STEP CLOSER to the slime creature. RIKER I am Commander William Riker of the USS Enterprise. ARMUS I am ARMUS. You are in my space. RIKER We mean you no harm. We have an injured crew in that shuttlecraft. We need to get to them. May we pass? ARMUS You haven't given me a good enough reason yet. RIKER Preserving life -- all life -- is very important to us. ARMUS Why? RIKER We believe that everything in the Universe has a right to exist. ARMUS An interesting notion which I do not share. You may now leave if you wish. Riker and the crew are startled. TASHA We won't go without the shuttle crew. The Shroud REMAINS SILENT as Tasha makes a slight MOVE TO GO AROUND IT. ARMUS I warn you. You will not like it here. TASHA What are you saying -- that you are going to deny us access to our comrades? STAR TREK: "Shades of Gray" - REV. 5/2/89 - ACT FOUR 43. 89C CONTINUED: ARMUS I told you what you can do. You can leave. I have no interest in any further discussion or argument. Tasha has had enough of this and starts to move toward the narrowest strip of slime. TASHA Enough. We have people who need attention. We will not harm you, but we must help them. ARMUS FLICKS HIS FINGER, sending an ENERGY FORCE towards Tasha, JERKING HER BACK and SLAMMING HER DOWN to the ground. Everything from here on must happen in a blur of action. Beverly jumps to Tasha's side. Riker and Data MOVE BETWEEN the others and BLAST ARMUS with their phasers. 89D EXT. PLANET SURFACE (STOCK FROM #122 SCENE 24C) Angle on Tasha's body and the others around her. Beverly quickly takes a reading. She can't believe the instruments. BEVERLY She's dead. 89E INT. SICKBAY (STOCK FROM #122 SCENES 30 THRU 34) The medical team is easing Tasha onto the operating table as Picard ENTERS. Beverly barely glances up at him. He MOVES OFF TO THE SIDE and watches silently, with Data and Riker, as: PICARD Status, Doctor? BEVERLY Unchanged. The diagnostic screen shows her bodily readings to be totally askew. Beverly and the nurse work together as if they'd done this a hundred times before, attaching the clamshell device onto the bed, over Tasha's body. STAR TREK: "Shades of Gray" - REV. 5/2/89 - ACT FOUR 44. 89E CONTINUED: PICARD Can you bring her back? BEVERLY I'm trying. RIKER (hopeful) You've saved people before. You can save her. BEVERLY Neural stimulator. The nurse immediately helps her attach the device, which clips onto the bed and slips over Tasha's head like a loose headband. As soon as both devices are activated, Beverly and the Nurse anxiously watch the diagnostic screen. A FEW KEY INDICATORS APPROACH NORMALITY. Picard is anxious and impatient. RIKER There. You did it. BEVERLY No. I've got her on total support. There's no independent brain activity. Beverly grimly and quickly works the neural stimulator. She pushes programming keys furiously, then hits the start button. No reaction. NURSE She's not responding, Doctor. Her synaptic network is breaking down. BEVERLY No! Inject norep. The nurse complies as Beverly reprograms the stimulator. Nothing happens. BEVERLY (continuing) We're going for direct reticular stimulation. The nurse looks at her sharply. It's risky. STAR TREK: "Shades of Gray" - REV. 5/2/89 - ACT FOUR 45. 89E CONTINUED: (2) BEVERLY (continuing) Doesn't matter! Do it! The nurse punches it in, and Tasha's body TWITCHES SLIGHTLY. Picard looks hopefully at Riker. NURSE Neurons are beginning to depolarize. Beverly is desperate, but calm. BEVERLY Increase to seventy microvolts. The nurse complies. Beverly pushes the button. Tasha MOVES SLIGHTLY -- VERY SLIGHTLY. Beverly checks the readout. Data and Riker look at each other -- it's not good. RIKER (urgently) Doctor? BEVERLY Eighty-five microvolts. They quickly try again. And again. Finally, there is NO MOVEMENT in Tasha at all. Beverly slowly turns to Picard. BEVERLY She's gone. PICARD Gone? BEVERLY There's too much synaptic damage. That thing just sucked all the life out of her. There's nothing I can do... Picard, Riker and Data seem rooted to the spot. Beverly reluctantly pushes in a code on the overbed life support clamshell. She and the others look up at the big diagnostic wall screen and watch all the LIFE FUNCTION INDICATORS FALL TO ZERO. They REACT to the finality of this. STAR TREK: "Shades of Gray" - REV. 5/2/89 - ACT FOUR 46. 89F INT. PLANET DISASTER AREA (STOCK, #111 SC. 70 TO 84) The away reserve team MATERIALIZES. They are in a passageway which has been severely damaged by explosions. Water SPRAYS from the ceiling and is already ankle deep on the floor. Data scans the area with his tricorder. DATA This way. They push ahead. 89G ANOTHER ANGLE - CORRIDOR as they ARRIVE at a doorway. The door has been jammed by the explosion. Data steps over and with his great strength -- rips the door off its hinges and clears the opening. The survivors are here. ABOUT A DOZEN of them, huddled together on the far side. Beverly and her teams wade through the water to them. 89H ANGLE ON BEVERLY AND SURVIVORS As she kneels beside an injured WOMAN. BEVERLY You are going to be all right, now. RIKER Where are the others? The woman shakes her head. WOMAN Gone. It's just us. GEORDI (urgent) Commander! Riker turns. 89I ANGLE ON GEORDI CAMERA MOVES IN TO E.C.U. Geordi is staring at a pile of rubble. GEORDI There's someone there! STAR TREK: "Shades of Gray" - REV. 5/2/89 - ACT FOUR 47. 89J ANGLE ON DATA With great strength he moves huge rocks with remarkable rapidity. 89K ANGLE ON GEORDI AND RIKER They stand and look for a beat, then: 89L ANGLE ON DATA as he lifts and carries the limp body of a child. 89M ANOTHER ANGLE Beverly rushes over and while Data holds the child, she quickly examines him. 89N ANGLE ON BEVERLY AND CHILD From her expression it is clear the child is dead. All of her skill will not help. BEVERLY She's dead. If we'd only gotten here a little sooner... ! 89O ANGLE ON RIKER He steps closer. A dead child. A moment of truth. DATA Sir, if you indeed have "Q"'s power... 89P ANGLE ON RIKER He is fighting his emotions. 89Q ANGLE INCLUDING BEVERLY Puzzled. BEVERLY (to Riker) I don't understand. Certainly you can't bring her back to life? STAR TREK: "Shades of Gray" - REV. 5/2/89 - ACT FOUR 48. 89Q CONTINUED: RIKER (long beat) I'm prevented from that by a promise. Beverly is surprised and puzzled; Riker is very troubled. 89R INT. TROI'S QUARTERS (STOCK, #127 SC. 81 THRU 84) as Pulaski leads the others to Troi's quarters. TROI It's Ian. Please... please hurry. Pulaski moves quickly to the unconscious child, pulls back the covers. She removes an instrument from her smock and makes a scan of the child's body. In the b.g., Picard enters with Riker and Data. TROI (continuing) Save him, you must save him. PULASKI What happened? Did he eat anything? Did he fall? TROI No. Data, using his tricorder, confirms with a nod to Riker. DATA The child is the source of the unusual radiation. TROI He said he's the reason the ship is in danger. DATA That analysis is correct. Pulaski injects the child with hypospray. PULASKI I'm losing life signs. STAR TREK: "Shades of Gray" - REV. 5/2/89 - ACT FOUR 49. 89R CONTINUED: Troi stands by helplessly. Like any mother in this situation, she is beyond grief. Tears streak her face. TROI Oh, please. Please save him. 89S PULASKI resets the injector and again she administers a dose of hypospray. She waits for a reaction. There is none. 89T ANOTHER ANGLE (OPTICAL) The room is very quiet. Pulaski stands. PULASKI I'm sorry. Troi moves next to the cot on which the child is lying. She is beyond despair. Her heart has completely broken. The others allow her a moment alone, then as Riker is about to move to Troi's side, a LIGHT -- the glowing energy which we saw at the beginning -- gathers from within the child and slowly rises. As it does, the body that was Ian fades away until there is only the LIGHT. 89U INTERCUT REACTIONS (OPTICAL) Troi reaches out and with cupped hands she collects the LIGHT, cradles it gently and brings it to her. As she holds it close, it makes her face all aglow. Slowly the pain and despair drain away, and through the tears she smiles. The joy she now feels shines from her eyes. The Betazoid within her, embraces the essence of the entity before her and she knows now why he came and what he wanted. Then, in an act of pure love, she releases the glowing energy as she would a dove. For a beat the LIGHT seems reluctant to leave. Then it does. It passes effortlessly through the wall of the ship and away. Troi stares after it for a beat. GEORDI'S COM VOICE (excited -- relieved) Captain. The containment field has stabilized. STAR TREK: "Shades of Gray" - REV. 5/2/89 - ACT FOUR 50. 89U CONTINUED: PICARD Thank you, Lieutenant. Troi turns and looks at her captain and shipmates. TROI Then Ian was right. He was the cause. PICARD Apparently so. Troi pauses, gathering her feelings and picking her words carefully. She settles her emotions. TROI He is a life-force entity... as we passed each other in space he was curious and wanted to know about us, and he thought the best way to learn was to go through the process. To be born, to live as one of us and in that way to understand us. She pauses, then: TROI (continuing) Captain, he never meant any harm. Picard nods -- he knows that is true. RIKER There was a moment when you smiled. TROI (she smiles again) He said thank you. (she pauses) I told him we will miss him -- and I will. The others will also miss him. DISSOLVE BACK TO: STAR TREK: "Shades of Gray" - REV. 5/3/89 - ACT FOUR 51. 90 thru OMITTED 94 95 INT. SICKBAY (OPTICAL) CLOSE on Riker; WIDEN to include Troi and Pulaski, who are encouraged as they observe the panel showing Riker's nervous system. The highlighting has dimmed just a bit. PULASKI The growth rate has definitely slowed. What is he feeling? Can you tell? TROI Sadness. PULASKI Just the opposite of before -- and it's having the opposite effect on the infection. TROI Then your theory is correct. The organisms are sensitive to different types of endorphins. PULASKI And negative emotions... TROI Such as sadness... PULASKI ... produce endorphins that inhibit the organisms' growth. TROI Then we've found a way to repel the infection. PULASKI Assuming we're not already too late. TROI How much time do we have? PULASKI I'm not sure. His vital signs are getting weaker. I don't want to risk another dose of tricordrazine unless I have to... STAR TREK: "Shades of Gray" - REV. 5/3/89 - ACT FOUR 51A. 95 CONTINUED: Pulaski watches the vital signs for another beat, makes a decision. She adjusts the device. PULASKI (cont'd) I'm refocusing the pattern again. We need to isolate memories that generate stronger negative emotions. 95A ON RIKER A quick, reflexive movement as the pattern of current changes -- DISSOLVE TO: STAR TREK: "Shades of Gray" - REV. 5/2/89 - ACT FOUR 52. 95B thru OMITTED 95D 95E INT. PAGH - MAIN BRIDGE (STOCK, #134 SC. 33-33E) Riker and his escort enter onto the bridge. The same sparse but functional look. The bridge is manned by FIVE CREWMEMBERS at varying stations. Captain Kargan is seated in the Command Chair. SECOND OFFICER KLAG stands next to him. They are businesslike in their appraisal of Riker. Firm but not harsh. Riker steps forward. RIKER I am Commander William Riker of the Starship Enterprise. KARGAN That is incorrect. RIKER (beat) I don't understand. KARGAN You are Commander Riker, first officer of the Klingon Cruiser Pagh, or do you intend to disobey Federation orders? RIKER I have no such intentions, Captain. KARGAN Exactly where are your loyalties, Commander? RIKER I'm afraid I still don't understand. Kargan explains carefully in a low, calm voice. KARGAN This ship is equipped with our best weapons and our finest warriors. Although we are on a peaceful mission we are prepared to go into battle instantly. (more) STAR TREK: "Shades of Gray" - REV. 5/2/89 - ACT FOUR 53. 95E CONTINUED: KARGAN (cont'd) I know I can count on every Klingon warrior in this crew to serve and die in that battle. So I ask again Commander Riker, (beat) where are your loyalties? RIKER I have been assigned here to serve this ship and to obey your orders. I will do exactly that. KARGAN Will you take an oath to that effect? RIKER (meets his gaze) I just did. Klag interjects firmly to Captain Kargan. KLAG yI-Har-Qo! nep-we' ghaH! (Do not believe him! He lies!) KARGAN (to Klag) Hol-chaj yI-jatlh. (Speak in their language.) (to Riker) This is your second officer, Lieutenant Klag. RIKER Was there something you wanted to say to me, Lieutenant? KLAG Yes sir. (beat) I don't believe you. RIKER Then I take it you challenge my authority over you. KLAG Correct. STAR TREK: "Shades of Gray" - REV. 5/2/89 - ACT FOUR 54. 95E CONTINUED: (2) RIKER (to Kargan) And your position in this, Captain? KARGAN (with disdain) I would call it your first command decision. Riker looks around the Main Bridge at the other crewmembers. 95F RIKER'S POV The Klingon crewmembers watch him, waiting to see his reaction to this challenge. 95G SCENE Riker eyes the arrogant stance and size of Klag who gives him an insubordinate snort. Riker realizes he has no choice. He deftly, with no advance warning or aggressive motion, swings a two-handed blow with his full strength and lands a monstrous blow across the chest of Klag. 95H SERIES OF CUTS The sound of the blow against Klag's chest armor echoes through the bridge and is followed by the roar of his breath leaving his body, and then his bulk smashing against the bulkhead and slipping to the ground. Riker calmly steps around the still-seated captain and steps in front of Klag who is struggling to his feet. Klag is almost to his feet when Riker swings again, this time taking the legs out from under Klag who drops to the ground again. The crewmembers are animated and watch the fight with relish, not caring who wins or loses but that there is combat. Riker looks over to the captain. Captain Kargan simply sits back and allows it to continue. STAR TREK: "Shades of Gray" - REV. 5/2/89 - ACT FOUR 55. 95H CONTINUED: Riker turns back to the dazed but still active Klag who is once more attempting to get to his feet. Riker eyes the combatant with a calculated but astonished eye. Klag can barely stand but bravely fights for balance. Riker shrugs, and rams his fist into Klag's stomach, then drops him with another double-handed blow over the head. 95I SCENE Kargan applauds with a grunt and a motion of his head. Klag is awake but prone. He struggles to his feet, manages to prop himself against the wall. Klag gives Riker as much a look of respect as he is able... 95J ON RIKER RIKER My oath is between Captain Kargan and myself. Your only concern is how to obey my orders. (beat) Or do you prefer the rank of prisoner over that of lieutenant? Klag calculates Riker carefully, then: KLAG I will take your orders. Riker nods his acceptance. Klag returns it. Kargan interjects: KARGAN And you, Commander Riker, will obey my orders. RIKER Agreed, Captain Kargan. Riker turns away from the captain, and when no one can see him he lets his breath out. 95K INT. QUINN'S GUEST QUARTERS (STOCK, #125 SC. 71) Quinn is sitting on the sofa, blankly staring into his slightly opened briefcase. Riker ENTERS, catching him off guard... STAR TREK: "Shades of Gray" - REV. 5/2/89 - ACT FOUR 56. 95K CONTINUED: RIKER Ready for your tour, Admiral? Quinn quickly stands, but Riker has seen the briefcase... QUINN Quite ready, Commander. RIKER What's in the case? From where he stands, Riker can barely see a few delicate-looking tendrils coming out of its opening... He looks at the admiral somewhat suspiciously... QUINN (thoughtful) Actually... I brought this for Doctor Crusher. But perhaps you'd like you to see it first? RIKER (slowly moving closer) What is it? QUINN A form of life. Discovered quite accidentally by a survey team on a distant uncharted planet. RIKER Why haven't we heard anything about that? QUINN Oh, you'll be hearing more about it shortly. But first there is much scientific study to be done. After all, this is a superior life-form. RIKER Superior? QUINN Totally. (voice grows hard) Now come, Riker. Take a good look. Riker stands where he is, uncertain of what to do. STAR TREK: "Shades of Gray" - REV. 5/2/89 - ACT FOUR 57. 95K CONTINUED: (2) RIKER I think I'll summon our science officer -- QUINN It won't like your science officer. It likes you. (rises, grabs Riker's arm) Now look! Riker looks down at his arm and grimaces; Quinn is squeezing it with tremendous force. Riker grasps the old man's wrist and tries to pull it off him... he can't. QUINN (dark smile) Vitamins. They do wonders for the body. RIKER CRIES OUT -- it feels like Quinn is crushing his arm. Unable to break free, HE RAISES HIS OTHER ARM TO STRIKE the admiral. Riker's BLOW IS BLOCKED and QUINN responds by effortlessly THROWING HIM backwards toward the wall. The FIRST OFFICER hits it at breakneck speed and CRUMPLES TO THE FLOOR, severely dazed... QUINN (dry -- evil smile) Ahh, your life is so painful now. But soon you'll be one of us. Before Riker can clear his head, QUINN ATTACKS again -- rapping him across the chin WITH A KARATE KICK. Riker staggers to his feet -- Quinn swings from the heels with a sure knockout blow... RIKER DUCKS under it and puts all his weight behind a powerful PUNCH to THE ADMIRAL'S solar plexus. For a moment, Quinn seems effected, sucking in his stomach and gasping for air... But it quickly passes and he straightens and smiles at a disbelieving Riker, before DEALING HIM A vicious double fisted BACKHAND. Riker hits his communicator. RIKER (pained, weak) Riker to security. Emergency -- QUINN'S final blow KNOCKS RIKER OUT before he can say another word... STAR TREK: "Shades of Gray" - REV. 5/2/89 - ACT FOUR 58. 95L EXT. PLANET SURFACE (STOCK FROM #122 SCENE 51C) ARMUS HAS MOVED OFF THE SHUTTLE AND as it APPROACHES THE GROUP, Riker suddenly feels a great force pull him. He calls out. Data MOVES to help him. ARMUS (as slime) Touch him and he dies. As the away team watches, Riker -- fighting with all his might -- is pulled inexorably toward the slime. From the other direction, Armus also MOVES toward the hole. As the creature's SHRIEK joins RIKER'S SCREAM, the two SLIP INTO THE SLIME HOLE and DISAPPEAR. For a beat there is nothing. Then: WE CAN SEE only RIKER'S FACE PRESSED AGAINST THE SKIN. DATA Enterprise, ARMUS has enveloped Commander Riker. PICARD'S COM VOICE I'm beaming you up! ARMUS If any of you leave now, he dies. And so do the survivors of the crash. The team REACTS. DISSOLVE BACK TO: 96 thru OMITTED 106 107 INT. SICKBAY CLOSE on the unconscious Riker, under terrific stress -- his muscles tensed, his face sweating. 108 WIDER (OPTICAL) to include Pulaski and Troi. On the wall panel, the highlighting showing the organism's presence has remained the same. PULASKI We've reduced the growth rate even further... but not enough. STAR TREK: "Shades of Gray" - REV. 5/3/89 - ACT FOUR 59. 109 ON PULASKI checking the monitor. She's concerned about Riker's low and erratic vital signs. PULASKI And his vital signs are deteriorating. TROI But we've isolated the specific areas to stimulate. The feelings were very primal... survival emotions. PULASKI They must be producing a type of endorphin that's poisonous to the organisms. TROI Can you intensify those emotions? PULASKI (nods) I can refocus the impulse pattern even tighter. She glances again at the vital signs monitor. PULASKI (cont'd) But I don't know if he can withstand it. He's extremely weak. TROI Do we have a choice? Pulaski moves to the device, prepares to activate it once again. PULASKI No. If we don't neutralize the infection within half an hour, he'll be dead. FADE OUT. END OF ACT FOUR STAR TREK: "Shades of Gray" - REV. 5/4/89 - ACT FIVE 60. ACT FIVE FADE IN: 109A EXT. SPACE - THE ENTERPRISE (STOCK OPTICAL) In orbit. PULASKI (V.O.) Medical log, supplemental. Commander Riker's condition is still critical. 110 INT. SICKBAY Pulaski is preparing to give Riker another zap from the device. PULASKI (V.O., cont'd) I've discovered a way to reverse the infection's growth rate -- but I may be too late. Everything's ready. Pulaski glances at the monitor as she works. Troi can see that Pulaski isn't pleased with Riker's vital signs: TROI He's getting weaker, isn't he? PULASKI (nods) Respiration shallow, heartbeat extremely irregular. She shakes her head. PULASKI (cont'd) But we can't delay any longer... Troi nods agreement. Pulaski activates the device. 111 PUSH IN ON RIKER unconscious, but growing rigid as the current is applied. DISSOLVE TO: STAR TREK: "Shades of Gray" - REV. 5/3/89 - ACT FIVE 60A. 111A thru OMITTED 111B 111C INT. GUEST QUARTERS (STOCK FROM #123 SCENE 56B) T'Jon then turns and grabs Riker's shoulder in a death grip. WE SEE Riker immobilized by an ELECTRICAL CHARGE. T'JON Take us to our planet -- leave us there with our medicine or this person dies. Picard takes a STEP FORWARD, then STOPS. STAR TREK: "Shades of Gray" - REV. 5/2/89 - ACT FIVE 61. 111C CONTINUED: T'JON (continuing) Don't you see -- I have no choice. We were sent to bring back the Felicium. The suffering on my planet is too great. People are dying. It doesn't matter any more whether we are entitled to the Felicium... we have to have it. PICARD Let him go. T'JON Take us there now -- or give us a shuttle -- but we must have the medicine... if you refuse, this person dies. PICARD I will not be coerced. T'JON I'll do it. I'll kill him. The strain of the pressure is all over T'Jon. PICARD (calmly) No you won't. You're not a killer. T'Jon releases Riker, who sags a little, then catches his balance. Beverly goes to his assistance. 111D EXT. PLANET SURFACE (STOCK, #121 SC. 13A-22) Riker and Captain Rice. RICE Commander Riker, those answers make no sense. RIKER You haven't used my first name once, Paul. There is a slight hesitation. STAR TREK: "Shades of Gray" - REV. 5/2/89 - ACT FIVE 62. 111D CONTINUED: RIKER (continuing) You remember it, don't you? No response. Rice looks confused. RIKER (continuing) You don't, because you don't even exist. You're a fake -- an image of the original! Aren't you?... Answer me! Rice twitches -- a slight REACTION, then SUDDENLY: 111E NEW ANGLE (OPTICAL) The image of Captain Rice DISAPPEARS and is REPLACED BY A WEAPON-LIKE OBJECT. IT QUICKLY MOVES several meters away. PICARD'S COM VOICE Report, Number One. RIKER The image of Rice has been replaced by something which is hovering several meters away. 111F EXT. PLANET SURFACE (OPTICAL) Riker and the others set to beam up. RIKER Prepare to beam up. TASHA Commander. He looks as she indicates a direction. The WEAPON IS MOVING toward them. Before anyone can answer, THE WEAPON FIRES. 111G CLOSE ON RIKER (OPTICAL) The BEAM HITS HIM. He STIFFENS -- and BECOMES ENCASED IN AN ENERGY FIELD. STAR TREK: "Shades of Gray" - REV. 5/2/89 - ACT FIVE 63. 111H EXT. PLANET SURFACE - ANGLE ON TASHA (OPTICAL) She FIRES ON THE WEAPON AND DESTROYS IT. 111I FULL SHOT - AWAY TEAM Picard's VOICE is heard. PICARD'S COM VOICE (tense, tight) What just happened down there? Number One! Report! 111J EXT. PLANET SURFACE (OPTICAL) Tasha and Data APPROACH him. They monitor the energy field with their tricorders. PICARD'S COM VOICE Report! Report! Tasha and Data examine the energy field. TASHA He can't answer you, Captain. DATA Commander Riker has been encased in some kind of energy field. PICARD'S COM VOICE Is he alive? Data and Tasha continue to examine the energy field containing the inert form of Commander William T. Riker. DATA Unknown. 111K POV (STOCK, #107 SC. 42-43) Backlit by LIGHTNING, THREE SMALL, HAIRLESS HUMANOIDS with protruding cupped ears, dressed in strange clothing. They are armed with odd whip-like weapons. RIKER (V.O.) Who are you? At that, the leader snaps his whip toward them, unleashing a rippling electro-plasmic WAVE that races TOWARD CAMERA (OPTICAL). STAR TREK: "Shades of Gray" - REV. 5/3/89 - ACT FIVE 64. 111L CLOSE - OUR TEAM Riker, Data and lucky-day Geordi are whacked with the WAVE all together... putting Geordi back to sleep. Data falls unconscious, too. Riker fights it but is hit again, and falls, unconscious. DISSOLVE BACK TO: 112 thru OMITTED 114 115 INT. SICKBAY - ON RIKER his every muscle taut. 116 WIDER (OPTICAL) Pulaski examines the wall panel. The highlighting showing the organisms' progress hasn't changed. PULASKI The growth rate's down to seven percent. She checks the monitor. The vital signs are going crazy. PULASKI (cont'd) But the organisms are still impairing his neural functions. Respiration is erratic, pulse grossly irregular, blood pressure almost nil. She makes a decision, turns to a medical crewman: PULASKI (cont'd) Tricordrazine. The medical crewman hands her the hypospray. Pulaski injects Riker, looks at the monitor, shakes her head -- vital signs are better, but still not good. TROI Can we tighten the pattern further? Pulaski considers, nods, and makes an adjustment to the device, intensifying the pattern of current. STAR TREK: "Shades of Gray" - REV. 5/2/89 - ACT FIVE 65. 117 ON RIKER sweating more profusely. DISSOLVE TO: 117A INT. ENGINEERING (STOCK FROM #116 SCENE 70) The destruct computer is separate from the main computer and is used for this type of emergency only. COMPUTER Recognize Picard, Jean-Luc, Captain... (pause) Recognize Riker, William T., Commander. PICARD Set auto-destruct sequence. COMPUTER Does the first officer concur? RIKER ... Yes. Set auto-destruct sequence -- now! A small sign ILLUMINATES "AUTO-DESTRUCT IN (TIME)." COMPUTER Auto-destruct will detonate in four minutes and fifty-nine seconds... four minutes and fifty-eight seconds... four minutes and fifty-seven seconds... PICARD Let's go. The only place we can stop the count is from the bridge. 117B INT. MAIN BRIDGE (STOCK FROM #128 SCENE 117A) There is the familiar starfield on the viewscreen as Picard enters from the turbolift. Geordi and Pulaski are not present. The AFT PANELS FLASH that AUTO-DESTRUCT is ENGAGED. COMPUTER VOICE Thirty seconds to auto-destruct. STAR TREK: "Shades of Gray" - REV. 5/2/89 - ACT FIVE 66. 117B CONTINUED: DATA Captain, we are clear of the void. You may stop the auto-destruct. PICARD Data, on any heading -- warp six -- now! 117C EXT. SPACE - THE ENTERPRISE (STOCK OPTICAL) stretches into warp. 117D INT. MAIN BRIDGE (STOCK FROM #128 SCENE 117E) Picard's resolve is undiminished. RIKER Captain. PICARD I don't believe it, Number One. It could still be part of the illusion. Data, report. DATA All navigational systems confirm -- we are at warp six -- on course... No one even breathes for a long moment... 117E INT. MAIN BRIDGE - (STOCK FROM #143 SCENE 60B & 60D) Riker stands before the viewscreen, Worf ready at his station as they hear: COMPUTER (V.O.) Seventeen... sixteen... fifteen... fourteen... WORF Firing sequence proceeding, sir. RIKER Hold fast. COMPUTER (V.O.) Eleven... ten... nine... STAR TREK: "Shades of Gray" - REV. 5/2/89 - ACT FIVE 67. 117E CONTINUED: Riker reacts to what he sees on the viewscreen, looks to Worf as they listen to: COMPUTER (V.O.) six... five... four... three... Tension mounts as: QUICK CUT TO: 117F INT. BATRIS - ENGINEERING (STOCK, #120 SC. 47-56) The Klingon, KORRIS, moves forward to begin formalized greetings. KORRIS I am Korris. RIKER We'll handle the formalities later -- right now we have to get off this ship. Are there any others still alive? KORRIS No. Data APPEARS in the torn hatchway. DATA I believe there is a quicker way out of here. GEORDI Let's go. Riker indicates a third figure on the floor. RIKER Check him Data. Data steps over and scans the figure with his tricorder. DATA He is alive -- but just barely. RIKER Pick him up and let's get out of here. STAR TREK: "Shades of Gray" - REV. 5/2/89 - ACT FIVE 68. 117F CONTINUED: Data starts to lift the stricken man. Korris steps up beside Data. KORRIS No. I will carry him. DATA As you wish. INT. BATRIS - CORRIDOR as the group hurries through the debris. There is a BOILING, RUMBLING EFFECT on the ship. GEORDI We're out of time, Commander -- the ship's going to blow. RIKER Transporter Room, have you got a lock on us? TASHA'S COM VOICE Not yet. Too much interference. You have to get farther away from the Engineering section. Behind them there is an ominous change in the GAS BUILDUP. INT. BATRIS - CORRIDOR They come to a bend in the corridor, turn the corner and bump into a solid wall of debris. RIKER End of the line. Transporter Room, we've gone as far as we can. Get us off -- now! The away team and the Klingons stand ready to beam. INT. BATRIS - CORRIDOR (OPTICAL) The BEAM OUT BEGINS, then STOPS, then TRIES TO START again. INT. TRANSPORTER ROOM Tasha shakes her head in frustration, makes an attempt to fine-tune her equipment and tries again. STAR TREK: "Shades of Gray" - REV. 5/2/89 - ACT FIVE 69. 117F CONTINUED: (2) INT. BATRIS - CORRIDOR A CLOUD BOILS up at the end of the corridor. There is a CRACKLING SOUND, followed by a RUMBLE. ANGLE ON THE AWAY TEAM They REACT. EXT. SPACE - THE BATRIS (OPTICAL) As it BLOWS UP. QUICK CUT TO: 117G EXT. SPACE (STOCK, #103 SC. 108-130) The Enterprise and the Tsiolkovsky are still tied by the tractor beam, motionless. Riker's voice reveals the strain he is under. RIKER'S VOICE Ship's log, First Officer Riker. The star has begun disintegrating. Enterprise will be destroyed unless it can be moved out of the path of the star material hurtling... EXT. SPACE - EXPLODED MASS OF MATERIAL (OPTICAL) It is large, irregularly shaped, moving very fast as it was hurled off the star's surface with more power than a hydrogen bomb. To gain a sense of size, it should BLOCK OUT A WHOLE SECTION OF THE STARFIELD as it PASSES CAMERA. RIKER'S VOICE (continuing) ... toward us. Our only hope is for Lieutenant Commander Data in the time we have left, to regain his senses and reconnect engine power to the bridge. INT. ENGINEER'S OFFICE - ON MACDOUGAL She is on her knees on the floor, vainly trying to sort out which optical chips belong where. STAR TREK: "Shades of Gray" - REV. 5/2/89 - ACT FIVE 70. 117G CONTINUED: ANGLE ON RIKER AND DATA as they ENTER FAST. MacDougal looks up at Riker, helplessly indicates the chip chaos. Data smiles at Wesley, who grins back cheerfully. Both are still smashed. WESLEY Hi, Mister Data. DATA Nice to see you, Wesley. What... ? RIKER (overlapping; urgently indicating) Data! We need the engines on-line in a hurry, remember? Meanwhile, Riker is now beginning to perspire like others who have been "infected." WESLEY Oh yes, I remember too. (to Data) So, Data, if you don't mind... RIKER (fast; to Wesley) We've no time for courtesy! (fast; to Data) Get those damned control chips back in place, Data! In the correct order! Data hesitates, surprised at Riker shouting at him. RIKER (continuing) NOW! WESLEY (to Data) It's like a game of "how fast can you do it?" DATA Ah, a game! Data begins selecting chips, beginning to move more and more rapidly. Wesley moves to the Engineering Room viewer, adjusts the controls there. STAR TREK: "Shades of Gray" - REV. 5/2/89 - ACT FIVE 71. 117G CONTINUED: (2) WESLEY I think I can switch this to the Main Viewer, sir... ANOTHER ANGLE - VIEWER (OPTICAL) as it switches to a SHOT OF THE STAR MATERIAL IN DISTANCE BUT RACING TOWARD THEM. ANGLE EMPHASIZING RIKER turning from viewer to Data. RIKER We've got eight or nine minutes, at most, Data. Can you finish by then? ANGLE EMPHASIZING DATA If necessary, UNDERCRANK CAMERA now to show Data's hands are moving very fast. He seems to be calculating Riker's questions, then shakes his head without looking up: DATA No. This will take slightly more time than we have, sir. Riker becomes aware that his hand is wet, realizes he is "infected" too. RIKER Dammit, NO! I can't afford to get it! He stands, sways, grabs for support. EXT. SPACE - MASS OF MATERIAL FROM STAR (OPTICAL) hurtling through space -- too fast. CLOSE ON DATA AND HIS HANDS UNDERCRANK CAMERA. His hands are flying -- almost a blur. More and and more of the isolinear optical chips are set in the command computer board. DATA If we had just a minute more, sir... STAR TREK: "Shades of Gray" - REV. 5/2/89 - ACT FIVE 72. 117G CONTINUED: (3) ANGLE ON WESLEY He looks up toward Engineering Room viewer. CLOSE ON VIEWSCREEN (OPTICAL) The mass of star material closer, hurtling toward them. WIDER ANGLE as Picard bursts in, presses his hypo against MacDougal, then Riker, then another person, etc. RIKER We didn't make it, Captain. If we had just a minute or so more... EXT. SPACE - ENTERPRISE, TSIOLKOVSKY (OPTICAL) with the star material looming large as it rushes down upon them. INT. ENGINEER'S OFFICE - ON WESLEY His fingers begin to dance on the panel. WESLEY Yes, then reversing power leads, back through the force activator... repulser beam hard against the Tsiolkovsky... EXT. SPACE - ENTERPRISE, TSIOLKOVSKY (OPTICAL) The Tsiolkovsky now begins drifting to one side, beginning to spin clear with the Enterprise moving away from it. INT. ENGINEER'S OFFICE - WIDE ANGLE Riker eyes the viewer in surprise. RIKER We're pushing away! Data lifts his hands from the command computer board. The isolinear optical chips GLOW on the board. RIKER (continuing; into communicator) Bridge, engage engines! STAR TREK: "Shades of Gray" - REV. 5/3/89 - ACT FIVE 73. 117G CONTINUED: (4) EXT. SPACE - TSIOLKOVSKY AND MASS OF MATERIAL The mass of material crashes into the Tsiolkovsky. Her warp and impulse engines EXPLODE SIMULTANEOUSLY on impact in a mighty BLAZE OF LIGHT. But Enterprise is accelerating out of trouble. CUT TO: 117H EXT. SPACE (STOCK OPTICAL FROM #137 SCENES 5 & 6) as a galaxy class starship (USS Yamato) explodes in a blinding flash. When the flash subsides, we have a forward view of space and a barrage of fiery objects hurtling toward us. Suddenly the saucer section, engulfed in flames and explosions, sails past us... DISSOLVE BACK TO: 118 thru OMITTED 120 121 INT. SICKBAY (OPTICAL) CLOSE on Riker, pale and deathly. WIDEN to reveal Troi and Pulaski. Troi looks at the wall panel: TROI (optimistic) The growth rate's almost zero. Pulaski shakes her head with determination -- PULASKI That's not good enough. -- and makes one more adjustment to the device. 122 RIKER He looks like a fighter after a series of hard jabs, and the memories now rush at him. DISSOLVE TO: STAR TREK: "Shades of Gray" - REV. 5/3/89 - ACT FIVE 73A. 123 RIKER'S MENTAL POV A BLINDING CACOPHONY of juxtaposed IMAGES -- VOICES -- PIECES OF SCENES. The tempo quickens, builds to a climax, and -- SMASH CUT TO: STAR TREK: "Shades of Gray" - REV. 5/4/89 - ACT FIVE 74. 124 INT. SICKBAY - CLOSE ON RIKER as his body jerks in a massive convulsion -- 125 WIDER ANGLE as Riker's vital signs jump -- then slowly begin returning to normal levels. Pulaski, surprised, turns to the wall panel -- 126 CLOSE ON THE WALL DISPLAY (OPTICAL) The highlighting is gone. 127 ON PULASKI AND TROI astounded. Pulaski runs the scanner over Riker's body to confirm. She taps a com panel: PULASKI Sickbay to bridge. PICARD'S COM VOICE Go ahead, Doctor. PULASKI We've eradicated the infection. PICARD'S COM VOICE I'm on my way. 127A EXT. SPACE - THE ENTERPRISE (STOCK OPTICAL) Yes, still in orbit. 128 INT. SICKBAY - CLOSE ON RIKER as the device is rolled away. His eyes open. He's exhausted, but aware. 129 OMITTED 130 WIDER as Riker sees Troi looking at him with concern. He smiles at her to reassure her. STAR TREK: "Shades of Gray" - REV. 5/4/89 - ACT FIVE 74A. 130 CONTINUED: RIKER You still here? TROI (relieved) I could ask you the same question. STAR TREK: "Shades of Gray" - REV. 5/4/89 - ACT FIVE 75. 130 CONTINUED: (2) Pulaski steps up. PULASKI How do you feel? RIKER Beat. You wouldn't believe the dreams I've been having... TROI Yes, we would. PULASKI You'll be pleased to know that we've terminated the infection. RIKER Great work, Doctor. Riker tries to move, realizes his head is nailed down. RIKER (cont'd) Now, if you'll let me get out of here and back to work... PULASKI Lie still. I have a few dozen tests to run first. In b.g., Picard and Data ENTER. RIKER Why? I feel fine. PULASKI There may be some residual memory loss. I just want to make sure you still know who you are. RIKER Of course I know who I am. I'm Captain Jean-Luc Picard of the USS Enterprise. 131 ON PICARD AND DATA stepping up to Riker. STAR TREK: "Shades of Gray" - REV. 5/4/89 - ACT FIVE 76. 131 CONTINUED: PICARD Delighted you're feeling better, Captain. (re: Data) The admiral and I were worried about you. Data gives Picard a confused look. DATA Sir, I do not believe you have the authority to promote me to the rank of admiral. As Picard and Riker exchange a smile, we -- FADE OUT. END OF ACT FIVE THE END STAR TREK: THE NEXT GENERATION "The Ensigns of Command" #40273-149 Written by H. B. Savage Directed by Cliff Bole THE WRITING CREDITS MAY NOT BE FINAL AND SHOULD NOT BE USED FOR PUBLICITY OR ADVERTISING PURPOSES WITHOUT FIRST CHECKING WITH THE TELEVISION LEGAL DEPARTMENT. Copyright 1989 Paramount Pictures Corporation. All Rights Reserved. This script is not for publication or reproduction. No one is authorized to dispose of same. If lost or destroyed, please notify the Script Department. 3RD REVISED FINAL DRAFT JULY 13, 1989 STAR TREK: "The Ensigns of Command" - REV. 7/14/89 - CAST STAR TREK: THE NEXT GENERATION "The Ensigns of Command" CAST PICARD SHELIAK RIKER DATA ARD'RIAN BEVERLY GOSHEVEN TROI HARITATH GEORDI KENTOR WORF WESLEY Non-Speaking ENGINEERS (2) O'BRIEN OTHER LOCALS (26) Non-Speaking A VULCAN VIOLINIST YOUNG BOY (age 12) A WOMAN VIOLIST BOY'S MOTHER N.D. CREWMEMBERS (12) SUPERNUMERARIES (CONN & OPS) STAR TREK: "The Ensigns of Command" - REV. 7/14/89 - SETS STAR TREK: THE NEXT GENERATION "The Ensigns of Command" SETS INTERIORS EXTERIORS USS ENTERPRISE USS ENTERPRISE MAIN BRIDGE TEN FORWARD TAU CYGNA FIVE OBSERVATION LOUNGE FRONTIER TOWN TRANSPORTER ROOM CAPTAIN'S READY ROOM TOWN SQUARE AQUEDUCT PUMPING STATION TAU CYGNA FIVE DATA'S SHUTTLE ARD'RIAN'S FRONT ROOM SHELIAK WARSHIP SHELIAK WARSHIP STAR TREK: "Ensigns of Command" - REV. 7/14/89 PRONUNCIATION STAR TREK: THE NEXT GENERATION "The Ensigns of Command" PRONUNCIATION GUIDE ARD'RIAN ARD-ree-an ARMENS ARE-mens ARTEMIS ARE-tih-mus GOSHEVEN GO-sheh-ven HARITATH HAH-ree-tath KENTOR KEN-tor SHELIA Shell-LEE-ah SHELIAK SHELL-lee-awk S'SMARITH Ss-sa-MAH-rith TEREMI-BOSONS Teh-REH-mee-BOH-suns STAR TREK: "Ensigns of Command" - REV. 7/13/89 - TEASER 1. STAR TREK: THE NEXT GENERATION "The Ensigns of Command" TEASER FADE IN: 1 EXT. SPACE - THE ENTERPRISE (OPTICAL) Moving at impulse near some extraordinarily interesting astronomical object. 2 INT. TEN-FORWARD Present are PICARD, BEVERLY, and TWELVE N.D. CREWMEMBERS. A VULCAN and ONE WOMAN are seated, holding their instruments -- a violin and a viola. O'BRIEN tunes his cello. DATA ENTERS carrying a violin. He checks at the door, startled to see the captain. Picard beckons, and Data crosses to him. DATA Captain, Doctor, I am honored by your presence, but may I suggest you attend the second concert. BEVERLY Why, Data? DATA Ensign Ortiz will perform the violin part. My rendition will be less enjoyable. PICARD Oh? DATA While I am quite proficient Technically, according to my fellow performers, I lack soul. BEVERLY Data, telling us why you're going to fail before you make the attempt is never wise. DATA But is not honesty always the preferred choice? STAR TREK: "Ensigns of Command" - REV. 7/14/89 - TEASER 2. 2 CONTINUED: PICARD Excessive honesty can be disastrous... particularly in a commander. DATA (very intrigued) Indeed? PICARD Knowing your limitations is one thing. Advertising them to a crew can damage your ability to lead. DATA Because you lose their respect? BEVERLY No, because you may begin to believe in those limitations yourself. Data considers this, then moves to take his place with the other performers. 2A ANGLE ON PICARD AND BEVERLY O.s., the string quartet TUNES. There is the SOUND of the communicator hail. RIKER'S COM VOICE Captain, we're receiving a message from the Sheliak Corporate. Picard reacts with surprise, stands and EXITS. As he leaves, the quartet starts to PLAY. CUT TO: 3 INT. MAIN BRIDGE Picard ENTERS. RIKER and WORF at their usual stations. Supernumeraries at CONN and OPS. STAR TREK: "Ensigns of Command" - REV. 7/14/89 - TEASER 3. 3 CONTINUED: WORF Origin point of the message confirmed. It is from the Shelia star system. RIKER The Sheliak have not attempted to communicate with the Federation for a hundred and eleven years. PICARD On screen. 4 ANGLE ON VIEWSCREEN (OPTICAL) What appears is the text of a treaty. English on one side, Sheliak on the other. Sheliak is not symbols as we know them, but rather a pattern of lights. A recorded message begins. SHELIAK VOICE Federation creatures, there are humans on the fifth planet of Tau Cygna. This planet was ceded to the corporate in section one hundred and thirty-three, paragraph seventy-seven of the Treaty of Armens. We will begin settlement of this world in four days. Remove the humans. Riker is up, and heading for Science One. PICARD What the devil -- SHELIAK VOICE Federation creatures, there are humans on the fifth planet -- PICARD Cancel message. Inquiring look to Riker. RIKER Tau Cygna Five is in the de Laure belt -- heavy concentrations of hyperonic radiation. STAR TREK: "Ensigns of Command" - REV. 7/14/89 - TEASER 4. 4 CONTINUED: PICARD Humans can't survive in such an environment. Exposure to hyperonic radiation is fatal. RIKER Then the Sheliak are asking us to chase ghosts. PICARD No, Number One. The Sheliak haven't broken a century of silence to send us after phantoms. An investigation is in order. Set course for Tau Cygna Five. Off Picard's expression: FADE OUT. END OF THE TEASER STAR TREK: "Ensigns of Command" REV. 7/19/89 - ACT ONE 5. ACT ONE FADE IN: 5 EXT. SPACE - THE ENTERPRISE (OPTICAL) entering orbit around a planet. 6 INT. MAIN BRIDGE Picard, Riker, Data, Beverly and Worf. Supernumerary at CONN. WORF Human life form readings from the planet. RIKER So, the Sheliak weren't hallucinating. PICARD Numbers? WORF Impossible to get an accurate reading, Captain. The high radiation levels are disrupting our sensors. DATA Hyperonic radiation also interferes with ship's transporters; they are now inoperable. WORF So are the ship's phasers. RIKER How can humans survive down there? BEVERLY They must have found a way to adapt. (thinks it over) Milan's work in radiation sensitivity suggests it's possible. Perhaps with extensive virotherapy... (grimly) Until they found the answer, their mortality rate must have been staggering. STAR TREK: "Ensigns of Command" - REV. 7/18/79 - ACT ONE 6. 6 CONTINUED: PICARD Well, whoever they are and however they've survived, we've got to get them off the planet. RIKER By treaty, this world does belong to the Sheliak... PICARD ... who are within their rights to demand the removal of these "trespassers." RIKER And if we don't remove them, the Sheliak will. BEVERLY How forcefully? RIKER To the Sheliak, humans are a lower life form. They'd have no compunctions about exterminating the intruders. Beverly is taken aback. Riker's dead serious. PICARD Mister Data. As you are unaffected by hyperonic radiation, you will go to the planet via shuttlecraft and commence evacuation procedures. DATA Aye, sir. Without a word wasted the android is out of his chair, and EXITS the bridge. PICARD Any speculation as to what he'll find, Number One? RIKER A lost survey ship would be my guess. A dozen or so survivors at most. CUT TO: STAR TREK: "Ensigns of Command" - REV. 7/17/89 - ACT ONE 6A. 7 EXT. PLANET SURFACE - SHUTTLE LANDING SITE - DAY Data is outside the shuttle, scanning with his tricorder. 7A NEW ANGLE as HARITATH and KENTOR (two male humans) and TWO N.D. WORKERS cautiously approach the shuttle from the other side (the shuttle blocks their view of Data). HARITATH (in wonder) A shuttlecraft! KENTOR Where's it from? HARITATH Look at the markings. I think it's from the Federation. Data steps into their view from around the shuttle. DATA Hello. The four humans jump, startled. HARITATH We saw your ship... You're the first visitor we've had in... STAR TREK: "Ensigns of Command" - REV. 7/14/89 - ACT ONE 7. 7A CONTINUED: (2) KENTOR The first visitor we've ever had. They take a closer look at Data. HARITATH You're -- not human. DATA That is correct. I am an android. I am Lieutenant Commander Data of the Federation Starship Enterprise. HARITATH (excited) Our great-grandparents were citizens of the Federation. (realizing) But you don't want to waste time talking to us... KENTOR You'll want to speak with Gosheven. We'll take you to him. DATA Excellent. HARITATH I'm sure the Federation will be very proud of us. Wait until you see all we've accomplished. DATA And who, precisely, is "we?" HARITATH You don't know? No, I guess you wouldn't, would you? We are the descendants of the original settlers -- from the colony ship Artemis. CUT TO: 8 INT. ENTERPRISE - MAIN BRIDGE Picard and Worf in their usual places. Riker at Science One. Supernumeraries at Conn and Ops. STAR TREK: "Ensigns of Command" REV. 7/19/89 - ACT ONE 8. 8 CONTINUED: RIKER Got it. The Artemis, launched one hundred forty-two years ago, destination Septimis Minor. When they failed to check in, Starfleet began an extensive search. PICARD What carried the Artemis so far off course? 9 EXT. PLANET SURFACE - SHUTTLE LANDING SITE - DAY Haritath and Kentor wait patiently for Data to finish him communication. DATA My local informant does not know. In the early days survival on Tau Cygna Five was more important than history. 10 INTERCUTS PICARD Understood. How many are there? DATA Approximately fifteen thousand. Reactions from the bridge crew. Now they really have got a problem. RIKER (to Picard) We've only got three days. Without working transporters, we couldn't have them out in time. PICARD Shuttles? Worf does some figuring on his console. WORF Loading all the Enterprise shuttlecraft to capacity -- evacuation would take four weeks, four days. STAR TREK: "Ensigns of Command" REV. 7/24/89 - ACT ONE 9. 10 CONTINUED: PICARD Then we need more time. Mister Data, prepare the colonists for an evacuation. DATA'S COM VOICE Aye, sir. Picard closes the com line. PICARD (continuing) Mister Worf, get me the Sheliak. WORF Their home world is quite distant, Captain. This will take some time. CUT TO: 11 EXT. PLANET SURFACE - MAIN STREET - DAY The main pumping station of Tau Cygna V. In the distance are mountains. A thin white line descends from the mountains, and as it comes closer we realize it is an aqueduct. Along the line of the aqueduct are lush fields, a veritable Garden of Eden, which ends like a knife-cut and the desert returns. It culminates in a strange cubistic-shaped purifying station. In a pool, the water churns into a white froth. GOSHEVEN, the leader, supervises TWO WORKERS testing the water in the pool. Data, Haritath, and Kentor approach. HARITATH Gosheven, look what's come -- Gosheven sees Data, looks him up and down very carefully. Gosheven's as surprised as Haritath was, but keeps a lid on it -- Data may represent a threat, so Gosheven's attempting a poker face. DATA Lieutenant Commander Data of the Starship Enterprise. STAR TREK: "Ensigns of Command" REV. 7/20/89 - ACT ONE 10. 11 CONTINUED: KENTOR He's an android. GOSHEVEN So he is. (a beat) Well, you're here -- what do you want? DATA My mission is to prepare this colony for evacuation. Reactions from the men. Gosheven is calm, almost amused: GOSHEVEN Why? DATA Because this planet belongs to the Sheliak. GOSHEVEN And just who is this Sheliak? DATA The term is plural. The Sheliak are an intelligent, non-humanoid life form, classification R-3 -- GOSHEVEN (interrupting) This colony's been here for a hundred and forty years -- and no one's ever seen a Sheliak. I'd say that makes Tau Cygna Five our planet. (ALTERNATE: ninety years) DATA But the original destination of the Artemis was Septimis Minor. GOSHEVEN The guidance systems on the Artemis failed -- and sent them off course. Far off course. Our ancestors were lucky to find any place to land. STAR TREK: "Ensigns of Command" REV. 7/24/89 - ACT ONE 11. 11 CONTINUED: (2) HARITATH And when they did, the radiation started killing them. GOSHEVEN Hyperonic radiation took the lives of a third of the colonists before they learned they could adapt to it. KENTOR But the colony survived -- and prospered. GOSHEVEN (with pride) Look around. We've brought water to the desert, built a community. DATA Your accomplishments are indeed remarkable. However, the Sheliak and the Federation have a treaty that clearly makes this planet Sheliak domain. GOSHEVEN Then change the treaty. DATA That may not be possible. The Sheliak wish to colonize this planet, and they are unwilling to share it with humans. (MORE) STAR TREK: "Ensigns of Command" REV. 7/24/89 - ACT ONE 12. 11 CONTINUED: (3) DATA (cont'd) If you are still here when the Sheliak colony ship arrives, they will eradicate you. Haritath and Kentor exchange a worried glance, but Gosheven is unfazed. HARITATH They would kill us all? DATA They have little regard for human life. Thus, our most sensible course is to prepare a contingency plan for the evacuation of your people. GOSHEVEN We're not evacuating. Data is taken aback. STAR TREK: "Ensigns of Command" - REV. 7/18/79 - ACT ONE 12A. 11 CONTINUED: (4) DATA Perhaps I have not made myself clear. GOSHEVEN Yes, you have. Now let me be equally clear. There's going to be no evacuation. (a beat) You've delivered your message -- so go back to your ship. I have work to do. Gosheven returns to his work on the pumping station. STAR TREK: "Ensigns of Command" - REV. 7/18/89 - ACT ONE 13. 11A ON DATA as he considers his next move. Then -- an object comes flying at Data. With android speed and reflexes, Data catches the object and examines it. It is an iron bar. ARD'RIAN (O.S.) Nice catch. Wonderful reflexes. Data turns to see -- 11B WIDER ARD'RIAN, an attractive female, approaches. ARD'RIAN Sorry to test you like that -- but I was curious. GOSHEVEN (amused) Found a new toy, have we, Ardy? ARD'RIAN Toy? This is the most incredible android I've ever seen. DATA Have you seen many? ARD'RIAN Actually, no. You're the first. GOSHEVEN (to Ard'rian) Only you would get this excited over a walking calculator. ARD'RIAN (bridling) He's more interesting than anything else walking around here... Gosheven CHUCKLES -- he's succeeded in getting under her skin. GOSHEVEN Depends on what you find interesting. STAR TREK: "Ensigns of Command" REV. 7/24/89 - ACT ONE 13A. 11B CONTINUED: Ard'rian's had enough of Gosheven's male conceit. She moves away, motions for Data to follow. Data does. ARD'RIAN (to Data) Cybernetic intelligence fascinates me. Are your neural pathways duotronic? DATA No -- they are positronic. ARD'RIAN I didn't know that was possible! What's your memory capacity? How many operations per second? I have a million questions... DATA I am afraid I have no time to answer one million questions. I have a mission to accomplish. (MORE) STAR TREK: "Ensigns of Command" REV. 7/24/89 - ACT ONE 14. 11B CONTINUED: (2) DATA (cont'd) I need to know more about your people, and Gosheven seems unwilling to talk to me further. ARD'RIAN (extending a hand) I'm Ard'rian McKenzie. Perhaps I can help you. As Data shakes her hand, we: CUT TO: 12 INT. OBSERVATION LOUNGE Picard, Riker and TROI are seated as GEORDI, O'Brien ENTER. RIKER Gentlemen, we're giving you an assignment, and the one thing we don't want to hear is that it is impossible. Riker defers to Picard. Geordi and O'Brien cast wary glances at Picard. Now what the hell is he going to want? PICARD I need the transporters to function despite the hyperonic radiation. GEORDI Impossi -- Yes, sir. Geordi and O'Brien EXIT. Riker, Troi and Picard study each other seriously. RIKER Even if we can get the Sheliak to talk to us, they're not likely to be accommodating. STAR TREK: "Ensigns of Command" - REV. 7/13/89 - ACT ONE 15. 12 CONTINUED: TROI Captain, when the treaty was negotiated the Federation sent three hundred and seventy-two legal experts. What have we got? PICARD Thee... and me. Off Troi's very dubious expression as we: FADE OUT. END OF ACT ONE STAR TREK: "Ensigns of Command" - REV. 7/14/89 - ACT TWO 16. ACT TWO FADE IN: 13 EXT. SPACE - THE ENTERPRISE (OPTICAL) in orbit around Tau Cygna V. 14 INT. MAIN BRIDGE Picard pacing, Troi seated as they wait for the call. Worf at his station. Supernumeraries at Conn and Ops. WORF No response. PICARD Try again. Boost signal strength. Worf makes adjustments. WORF Sheliak Corporate. This is the Starship Enterprise. Respond please. 15 ANGLE ON VIEWSCREEN - (OPTICAL) as it changes from a view of stars to -- someplace? a bridge? Wherever the SHELIAK are calling from it is a disturbing place for humans. Darkness, mirrored surfaces, and hidden in the shadows a creature who is decidedly unsettling for the crew. Its shape is constantly shifting like oozing sludge, and there is a hint of flickering eyes -- too many eyes. SHELIAK Conversation is neither required nor desired. Picard schools his features into an expression of polite interest. PICARD Conversation is necessary if we are to find a solution to our mutual problem. SHELIAK Our involvement in Federation illegality is not indicated. STAR TREK: "Ensigns of Command" - REV. 7/14/89 - ACT TWO 17. 15 CONTINUED: PICARD Both parties are involved, sir. SHELIAK Remove the humans from the Tau Cygna system. Three Earth days remain. Troi leans in, and whispers: TROI Their culture is extremely formal, almost ritualistic. An apology might smooth matters. PICARD I apologize for our inadvertent violation of the treaty. SHELIAK Acknowledged and accepted. Now remove the human creatures. PICARD Let us negotiate in good faith... SHELIAK Negotiate to what purpose? The treaty is signed. PICARD There is a thriving colony on the planet. Rather than uproot these people may I offer a compromise? SHELIAK Denied. PICARD Why?! SHELIAK The law is paramount. We are entitled. PICARD This is not a law. It is a treaty. It is designed to smooth relations between peoples. Not to act as a strait... STAR TREK: "Ensigns of Command" REV. 7/20/89 - ACT TWO 18. 15 CONTINUED: (2) But Picard's talking to a blank screen. The Sheliak have hung up on him. PICARD ... jacket. Off Picard's annoyed expression. CUT TO: 16 OMITTED 17 INT. ARD'RIAN'S FRONT ROOM - DAY A comfortable room constructed of stone with a heavy beamed ceiling. The furniture is hand hewn, durable but comfortable. Contrasting with this are various computer parts and consoles, both assembled and in pieces, strewn about. Ard'rian and Data ENTER. ARD'RIAN ... you really think we'll have to leave Tau Cygna Five? DATA The possibility exists, and Gosheven appears unwilling to prepare for it. Why? STAR TREK: "Ensigns of Command" REV. 7/20/89 - ACT TWO 19. 17 CONTINUED: ARD'RIAN Maybe because you're an android. I don't think Gosheven likes the idea of machines ordering him around. DATA I am not ordering him to do anything; I am merely trying to persuade him that his people should prepare to evacuate. (thinks) Do you believe my suggested course of action should be followed? ARD'RIAN Of course. DATA In spite of the fact that I am an android? ARD'RIAN Because of that fact. I don't have any silly prejudices against computers -- I like them. SHe gestures around the room, a bit apologetically: ARD'RIAN (cont'd) Not that any computer we have is half as sophisticated as you... Data looks at a particularly "primitive" computer: DATA No, I would say not. STAR TREK: "Ensigns of Command" REV. 7/20/89 - ACT TWO 20. 17 CONTINUED: (2) ARD'RIAN (cont'd) People can be selfish, irrational, stubborn, malicious -- you name it. But computers don't have those failings. Data follows her logic: DATA You conclude from this that I am impartial... hence you accept my recommendations. She nods. DATA (cont'd) Yet Gosheven does not. (thinks) Perhaps he might reconsider his position if someone other than myself were to present the arguments. ARD'RIAN Well, I'm willing to talk to him, but I don't think he'll take me seriously. (with distaste) He finds me attractive -- but I'm not interested in him at all. So he belittles me to protect his ego -- 18 OMITTED 19 NEW ANGLE as Data's communicator TRILLS. He touches the insignia. DATA Data, here. PICARD'S COM VOICE The Sheliak won't bargain. DATA Understood. STAR TREK: "Ensigns of Command" - REV. 7/18/89 - ACT TWO 20A. 19 CONTINUED: PICARD'S COM VOICE I'm contacting Starfleet to arrange for transport. Get those people prepared for evacuation. We may have to move very quickly. STAR TREK: "Ensigns of Command" - REV. 7/13/89 - ACT TWO 21. 19 CONTINUED: DATA Yes, sir. Data cuts the communication, turns to Ard'rian. DATA We must speak with Gosheven immediately. Ard'rian grabs a coat, and they EXIT. CUT TO: 19A INT. TRANSPORTER ROOM (OPTICAL) (FORMERLY SC. 16) Geordi, O'Brien and WESLEY have the panels removed from the wall behind the transporter console. Geordi's tool box is nearby. Sophisticated tools litter the floor. Off to the left side of the transporter are six test objects. The trio is watching tensely as O'Brien touches the console. A test object MATERIALIZES looking like swiss cheese. Geordi picks it up. Riker ENTERS. RIKER Gentlemen, how are you coming? (spots the object) What the hell is that? Geordi sets aside the mutilated object. GEORDI Our first attempt. O'BRIEN We recalibrated the transporter setting for the tightest possible beam. WESLEY But we've got plenty of things left to try. Geordi is studying the test object again. GEORDI There's some really interesting residue . . . reminds me of -- (a beat) There's that damn pulsar in the neighborhood. STAR TREK: "Ensigns of Command" REV. 7/20/89 - ACT TWO 22. 19A CONTINUED: WESLEY Teremi-thorons. O'BRIEN This just got a lot harder. WESLEY They're one of the most elusive sub-atomic particles known, and they really shred a transporter signal. RIKER Thank you, Ensign, I passed physics. (to Geordi) Keep at it. We need those transporters. Riker EXITS. GEORDI We're going to have a lot of fun cracking this one. CUT TO: 20 thru OMITTED 21 22 EXT. PLANET SURFACE - MAIN STREET - DAY Gosheven, Data, and Ard'rian are standing near the pool of water. Gosheven cups some water in a hand. GOSHEVEN See that? Do you have any idea what it is? What it means? DATA It is water, a substance composed of two atoms of hydrogen -- GOSHEVEN It's not water. It's blood and sweat -- the result of a hundred and forty years of combined effort. (ALTERNATE: ninety years) This isn't a town. (MORE) STAR TREK: "Ensigns of Command" REV. 7/24/89 - ACT TWO 23. 22 CONTINUED: GOSHEVEN (Cont'd) It's a monument to every man, woman, and child who has lived and died on Tau Cygna Five. ARD'RIAN Gosheven, you're talking nonsense. GOSHEVEN Am I? My grandfather's buried on that mountain. (points to the distant line of hills) He died in a rock slide surveying the route for this aqueduct. This colony exists because of his sacrifice, and the sacrifices of thousands of others. No, we're not leaving. DATA The Sheliak will not accept humans on their planet. And they will not hesitate to use force to remove you. GOSHEVEN (calmly) And we will not hesitate to fight back. DATA You cannot win. GOSHEVEN You just don't understand, do you? We will not be bullied off our land... not by you, and not by the Sheliak. Gosheven whirls and walks away. End of conversation. STAR TREK: "Ensigns of Command" - REV. 7/18/89 - ACT TWO 24. 22 CONTINUED: (2) ARD'RIAN (re Gosheven; bitter) Stubborn and irrational. Now what do we do? DATA Are his sentiments typical among the colonists? ARD'RIAN I hope not. Are you thinking of bypassing Gosheven and taking your case directly to the people? DATA (nods) I see no other course of action. If I can convince enough people of the necessity of leaving -- ARD'RIAN (a smile) Don't you mean "if we can convince?" DATA You are offering assistance? Ard'rian nods, extends her arm -- c'mon, let's get going. As they move off: CUT TO: 22A EXT. SPACE - ENTERPRISE (OPTICAL) (FORMERLY SC. 20) In orbit around Tau Cygna V. 22B INT. CAPTAIN'S READY ROOM (FORMERLY SC. 21) Picard is pacing rapidly about the office. Riker ENTERS. RIKER Yes, sir? STAR TREK: "Ensigns of Command" - REV. 7/18/89 - ACT TWO 25. 22B CONTINUED: PICARD Three weeks. Starfleet is profuse in their apologies, but it will still be three weeks. RIKER Until? PICARD Until the arrival of a colony transport ship equipped with dedicated personnel shuttles. RIKER We can't wait three weeks. PICARD The Sheliak must agree to extend our deadline. Picard sits in silence for a beat. PICARD (cont'd) If they plan to settle Tau Cygna Five two days from now... RIKER ... one of their ships must already be en route. PICARD (decides) We're going to intercept that ship. RIKER The Sheliak may interpret that as a hostile act. PICARD We have to take the risk. Off Picard's determined expression as we: FADE OUT. END OF ACT TWO STAR TREK: "Ensigns of Command" - REV. 7/18/89 - ACT THREE 26. ACT THREE FADE IN: 23 INT. OBSERVATION LOUNGE Riker pacing slowly, looking out at the stars. RIKER The Enterprise is going to try to intercept the Sheliak colony ship. Your job ... well, you know your job. CUT TO: 24 EXT. PLANET SURFACE - MAIN STREET - DAY Data standing alone in an archway. DATA Commander, in human parlance, I do not believe I can "get the job done." My training has prepared me for starship command duties. As a cultural contact I am proving to be less than exemplary. 25 INTERCUTS RIKER What's the situation? DATA Their leader has rejected my counsel. He denies the logic of my arguments and talks of structures they have built. RIKER Then try something else. DATA I have. In the last three hours and eight minutes, I have spoken to fifty-six colonists. Ten refused to believe a threat exists. Twenty-two favored staying and fighting the Sheliak. STAR TREK: "Ensigns of Command" - REV. 7/14/89 - ACT THREE26A. 25 CONTINUED: RIKER (more to himself) I don't have time for this. DATA Sixteen preferred negotiation or some form of passive resistance. Only eight were willing to consider evacuation. And of those eight -- STAR TREK: "Ensigns of Command" REV. 7/20/89 - ACT THREE 27. 25 CONTINUED: (2) RIKER (cutting him) Data, I can't help you -- I don't know these people; I haven't talked to them. You have. Use that fancy positronic brain of yours -- and carry out your mission. Ard'rian walks up to join the android, politely keeps a few paces away to let him complete his "phone call" with privacy. DATA If I do not succeed, how violent is the Sheliak reaction likely to be? RIKER The treaty is the only thing which kept them from eradicating the colony the moment they discovered it. DATA Ah. RIKER "Ah" is right. The lives of fifteen thousand people are riding on you. You'd better get innovative. Riker out. Data gazes into space, thinking. Ard'rian steps up. Her mood is upbeat. ARD'RIAN Data -- we're having an effect. So many people are asking questions about the Sheliak that Gosheven's called a public meeting. STAR TREK: "Ensigns of Command" REV. 7/20/89 - ACT THREE 28. 25 CONTINUED: (3) DATA Is there any indication that Gosheven has changed his position? ARD'RIAN No. But a meeting will give you the chance to present your recommendations. DATA First, will Gosheven allow me to speak? Second, even if he does, what good will it do? So far, my attempts at persuasion have been ineffective. Ard'rian looks at him with compassion for a beat -- then suddenly gives Data a quick kiss on the lips. DATA (cont'd) Why did you do that? ARD'RIAN You appeared to need it. DATA Among humans, a kiss normally serves to seal a friendship or to indicate support, attraction, affection. Ard'rian nods. STAR TREK: "Ensigns of Command" REV. 7/20/89 - ACT THREE 29. 25 CONTINUED: (4) DATA (cont'd) In this context, I would assume your intention was to express support. ARD'RIAN That was my primary motivation. The implication being that there were secondary motivations. But if Data is aware of the implication, he makes no sign. ARD'RIAN (cont'd) You don't really understand human behavior, do you? DATA That is something of an understatement. ARD'RIAN (sighs) Sometimes I don't either. androids are a lot more rational. DATA Thus far, that quality has not helped me accomplish my mission. ARD'RIAN A rational argument isn't always enough. Maybe to be more persuasive, you need to use a little reverse psychology. DATA (accessing) Elicit a desired behavior by advocating its opposite? (a beat) That implies deception, does it not? ARD'RIAN A little. But if it helps us get our point across... STAR TREK: "Ensigns of Command" REV. 7/20/89 - ACT THREE 30. 25 CONTINUED: (5) DATA (considers) Perhaps this is a situation in which excessive honesty is detrimental. As they walk off: CUT TO: 26 EXT. SPACE - THE ENTERPRISE (OPTICAL) Travelling at warp speed. 27 INT. TRANSPORTER ROOM As before, except there are more high tech tools and equipment lying about. Geordi is lifting yet another trashed test object off the platform. He holds it mutely out to Wesley and O'Brien who stare dully at this latest failure. There are now four intact objects and three blasted ones. Picard ENTERS. PICARD (you will get it done) How are we progressing, Mister La Forge? GEORDI (it's impossible) About like you'd expect. PICARD (get it done) Splendid. Picard EXITS. WESLEY (wearily) He wants the impossible. STAR TREK: "Ensigns of Command" - REV. 7/14/89 - ACT THREE 31. 27 CONTINUED: GEORDI (with a grin) That's the short definition for "captain." Geordi and O'Brien have already returned to work. Wes looks at them bemused, then shrugs and pitches in. CUT TO: 28 EXT. PLANET SURFACE - MAIN STREET - DAY A large horseshoe-shaped amphitheater with a place for the engineers and Gosheven. A number of citizens -- including Haritath and Kentor -- have turned out for the debate so the place is filled. In the b.g. is the aqueduct purifying plant. GOSHEVEN You've all heard about the android Starfleet sent here, and you've been discussing why he's come. Data and Ard'rian ENTER. Gosheven ignores them. GOSHEVEN (cont'd) I called this meeting to replace misinformation with cold, hard fact. The colonists are craning their necks to look at Data. Gosheven realizes Data's presence can't be ignored. He strides over to confront Data. GOSHEVEN Leave. Immediately. DATA I wish to speak. GOSHEVEN No. DATA (loud, for the crowd's benefit) You deny me the opportunity to address the assemblage? STAR TREK: "Ensigns of Command" REV. 7/20/89 - ACT THREE 32. 28 CONTINUED: GOSHEVEN This meeting is not for outsiders. DATA Do you consider your position so weak that it cannot withstand debate? HARITATH Let him talk. MURMURS of assent from the crowd. Gosheven gives a terse nod. In a sense Data's called him a coward and he has to stand up to this city slicker, this outsider. Data steps front and center. In an effort to pull this off, he attempts to use human rhetorical devices (timing, dynamics, inflection, gestures, etc.) -- but, as there's no real passion behind them, they come off as studied and not quite sincere. A good performance, but still a performance. DATA You know of the Sheliak threat. Starfleet wishes to evacuate you for your own protection. Gosheven has decided otherwise. That is his right. And I will not waste time trying to reverse that decision. Surprised reactions from the crowd. This is not what they expected to hear. DATA (cont'd) I admire your conviction in the face of certain defeat. Your effort will be valiant, though doomed. Still, when you die, you will die for land and honor. 29 ANGLE ON The crowd. Data's starting to get a reaction. People are beginning to eye each other nervously. It's one thing to thumb your nose at a distant enemy, quite another to talk about dying. STAR TREK: "Ensigns of Command" REV. 7/20/89 - ACT THREE 33. 30 ANGLE ON DATA As he reaches down, and takes a YOUNG BOY (twelve or so) by the arm, and pulls the child up next to him. DATA Your children will understand that they are dying for a worthy cause. Big crowd reaction here. Murmurs from various people. Mothers pull their children closer to them. Data steals a glance at Ard'rian -- "how am I doing?" Ard'rian nods encouragingly back -- "fine." DATA (continuing) Long after the battle is over, their courage will be remembered and extolled. Ard'rian jumps in to support him. ARD'RIAN Remembered by who? DATA (as if he hadn't considered that) Ah, that is true. There will be no one left alive to remember. 31 ANGLE ON GOSHEVEN as he begins to applaud slowly. GOSHEVEN A valiant try, android, but what a low opinion you must have of us. The boy's MOTHER snatches her son back from Data, and pulls him down in her lap. DATA I was simply attempting to describe your inevitable destruction in a manner that would have an emotional effect. STAR TREK: "Ensigns of Command" REV. 7/20/89 - ACT THREE 34. 31 CONTINUED: HARITATH (standing) And he did it pretty damned well. MURMURS of agreement from the crowd. GOSHEVEN Are you ready to follow this machine, Haritath? Give up everything? Without a fight? He says we're going to lose, I think that's his own cowardice talking! Kentor stands. He has a calm but commanding presence. KENTOR And what if he's right, and you're wrong? Shouldn't we consider that possibility? More crowd reaction. Sympathy is swinging away from Gosheven. HARITATH We may be sacrificing ourselves for nothing -- GOSHEVEN Last winter we buried your little girl -- laid her to rest next to your mother, and you dare speak of sacrifice? Gosheven whirls and nails Kentor with a look. GOSHEVEN (continuing) And you, Kentor, we built you a new house after the fire wiped you out. Can you simply walk away from that? KENTOR Better to walk away than to be annihilated. STAR TREK: "Ensigns of Command" - REV. 7/18/89 - ACT THREE 35. 31 CONTINUED: (2) GOSHEVEN (addressing them all) This colony exists because generations gave their lives for it. Many people died before we found a way to adapt to the radiation. Many more died bringing water to the desert. My father -- ARD'RIAN (interrupting) -- is buried on that mountain. Well, who's going to be left to bury you? A vote of confidence is about to take place, and Gosheven realizes he's about to lose it. He falls back on the innate authority of an elected leader. GOSHEVEN Have you considered what this evacuation means? Everything we have, we abandon. Everything we've built turns into dust. Everything we've accomplished means nothing. (shakes head) Well, I say NO! You elected me to be your leader -- follow me now! I don't think our chances are as hopeless as he says. And I'm willing to stake our lives on it. Any objections? He rakes the crowd with a look. Some mutterings, but nobody's quite ready to lead the revolution. GOSHEVEN (continuing) Good, because here... we... stand. A few people step up to pound Gosheven on the back, but most of the crowd remains huddled, glancing from Data to Gosheven and back again. Haritath and Kentor step away to talk in private. STAR TREK: "Ensigns of Command" - REV. 7/13/89 - ACT THREE 36. 32 ANGLE ON DATA standing with Ard'rian. DATA (almost to himself) Then here you die. FADE OUT. END OF ACT THREE STAR TREK: "Ensigns of Command" - REV. 7/18/89 - ACT THREE 37. ACT FOUR FADE IN: 33 INT. TRANSPORTER ROOM (OPTICAL) Wesley, Geordi and O'Brien. There are now three intact test object and four trashed ones. These are three exhausted people. They've been working round the clock. WESLEY Maybe if we bypassed the autosequence and decompiled the pattern buffer... ? GEORDI (shrugs) It's no crazier than anything else we've tried. Wesley drops down by the panel, and begins to tinker while Geordi places the last test object on the platform. Suddenly the transporter console blows a fuse. Electricity races across the panel, and the console goes dark. O'Brien is not a happy man. Wesley slowly stands up. O'Brien struggles with himself, but can't master it. O'BRIEN Ensign Crusher. WESLEY Yes, sir. O'BRIEN If you ever touch my transporter again... I'll kill you. WESLEY Sorry, sir. CUT TO: 33A EXT. PLANET SURFACE - MAIN STREET - DAY Data watches the town meeting break up into small groups of people TALKING among themselves. Ard'rian approaches. STAR TREK: "Ensigns of Command" REV. 7/20/89 - ACT THREE 38. 33A CONTINUED: Haritath and Kentor step up furtively. HARITATH Mister Data -- I want to tell you that... well, Gosheven doesn't speak for all of us. Ard'rian looks at Data hopefully -- maybe the early returns aren't so bad after all. HARITATH (cont'd) I see no point in dying needlessly. DATA And you, Kentor? KENTOR I'm not sure. Gosheven has done well for us. But I'd like to hear more of what you have to say. HARITATH There are many others that feel the same way but are uneasy about confronting Gosheven. ARD'RIAN Get them together. We'll meet at my house. Haritath and Kentor nod agreement then slip away. STAR TREK: "Ensigns of Command" REV. 7/24/89 - ACT FOUR 39. 33A CONTINUED: (2) Ard'rian leads Data toward her house. They EXIT. 34 thru OMITTED 35 36 EXT. SPACE - THE ENTERPRISE (OPTICAL) Traveling at warp speed. 37 INT. CAPTAIN'S READY ROOM (OPTICAL) Picard has brought Troi in for consultation. TROI In our dealings with other non-humanoid races there has been some point of reference; not so with the Sheliak. PICARD We must have something in common. We communicate. TROI Barely. The Sheliak have learned several Federation languages, but theirs continues to elude us. STAR TREK: "Ensions of Command" - REV. 7/13/89 - ACT FOUR 40. 37 CONTINUED: PICARD (have we tried?) Telepaths? TROI Attempted and failed. PICARD This is ludicrous! TROI No, sir, the fact that any alien race communicates with another is quite remarkable. She lifts Picard's tea cup from the desk. TROI (continuing) We are stranded on a planet. No language in common, but I want to teach you mine. Troi points to the cup. TROI (continuing) S'smarith. What did I just say? PICARD Cup? Glass? TROI Are you sure? I might have meant liquid, clear, brown, hot. And we conceptualize the universe in relatively the same way. PICARD Point taken. TROI During your talks you must be extremely accurate. The treaty is 500,000 words. The length was to accommodate the Sheliak. They consider our language irrational, and demanded this level of complexity to avoid any future misunderstandings. STAR TREK: "Ensigns of Command" - REV. 7/17/89 - ACT FOUR 41. 37 CONTINUED: (2) RIKER'S COM VOICE Captain, we have the vessel carrying the Sheliak colonists on visual. PICARD On my way. (to Troi) So it begins. They EXIT onto: 38 INT. MAIN BRIDGE The tension on the bridge is palpable. Picard moves swiftly to the command station. Riker relinquishes command. 39 ANGLE ON VIEWSCREEN (OPTICAL) Where a Sheliak ship hangs ominously. PICARD Open hailing frequencies. This is Captain Jean-Luc Picard of the Starship Enterprise. We again have a vision of the mirrored, shadowed, shifting place. A hint of a watcher in the shadows. SHELIAK Your purpose, Enterprise? PICARD We desire face-to-face negotiation to settle the crisis on Tau Cygna Five. Troi hands him a PADD. PICARD (continuing) We are entitled to consultation under paragraph five hundred and sixty-three subparagraph nine. A beat as the Sheliak look it up. SHELIAK Granted. STAR TREK: "Ensigns of Command" REV. 7/20/89 - ACT FOUR 42. 39 CONTINUED: The screen again shows the Sheliak vessel. RIKER Was that an invitation? PICARD I'm going to take it as such. Number One, you have the bridge. Troi and Picard EXIT. HOLD on Riker. RIKER Helm, maintain relative position. Mister Worf, have Transporter Room Two stand by. WORF Aye, sir. CUT TO: 40 INT. ARD'RIAN'S LIVING ROOM - DAY Haritath, Kentor, and a group of other colonists are gathered around Data and Ard'rian. KENTOR ... and once the Federation resettles us, we'll be left alone? DATA If you so desire. HARITATH We do. We like doing things on our own. DATA The Federation will offer as little or as much help as you dictate. STAR TREK: "Ensigns of Command" REV. 7/20/89 - ACT FOUR 42A. 40 CONTINUED: Nods all around; they are impressed. Data is the perfect no-pressure salesman; he simply presents the facts. Ard'rian looks expectantly to Kentor; Kentor's still uncertain. ARD'RIAN Kentor -- are you with us? Kentor makes up his mind: KENTOR Yes. (a beat) The question is, how do we convince Gosheven? STAR TREK: "Ensigns of Command" REV. 7/20/89 - ACT FOUR 43. 40 CONTINUED: (2) HARITATH Why do we need to? KENTOR Because he's respected. Most people will do as he says. ARD'RIAN The people respect you, too. If you take a stand, they'll fall in line. KENTOR I don't know. Gosheven's got a lot of supporters... GOSHEVEN (O.S.) Don't forget that, Kentor. Everyone turns to see -- 40A OMITTED 40B NEW ANGLE (OPTICAL) Gosheven fills the doorway. He ENTERS and looks around the room. GOSHEVEN I'm disappointed. I thought we had settled this. DATA Apparently, that is not correct. Gosheven steps up to Data. GOSHEVEN (to Data) Still stirring up trouble? STAR TREK: "Ensigns of Command" REV. 7/20/89 - ACT FOUR 44. 40B CONTINUED: ARD'RIAN Since when is talk trouble? Gosheven ignores her -- looking only at Data. GOSHEVEN It's over. Don't you get it? You had your say, and you lost. DATA I appear to be reversing that defeat. GOSHEVEN No, you're not -- you're just stubborn. (getting closer) Well, let me tell you something... Gosheven touches Data with an electronic prod -- BLUE SPARKS dance over Data. Data's whole body stiffens -- then goes limp and falls. GOSHEVEN (completes his thought) ... so am I. ARD'RIAN Damn you, Gosheven -- Ard'rian rushes to Data's aid. HARITATH You killed him? GOSHEVEN I've killed no one. (to Ard'rian) I've merely shut down a machine. Ard'rian looks daggers at Gosheven, who turns his attention to the gathering. GOSHEVEN (cont'd) That's it, everyone. Time to go home. The momentum has changed. A few sheepish glances as one or two of the group head for the door. STAR TREK: "Ensigns of Command" REV. 7/20/89 - ACT FOUR 45. 40C ON ARD'RIAN She's pulled out an electronic scanner from her piles of computer junk and is checking out the fallen Data. 40D WIDER to include Gosheven. GOSHEVEN (to Ard'rian) You'll see I'm right. He EXITS. We hold on Ard'rian and Data. CUT TO: 41 INT. SHELIAK SHIP (OPTICAL) Picard and Troi MATERIALIZE. What surrounds them bears little resemblance to a ship. Darkness hangs like bats in the corners. What little light there is filters through swirling mist. As they look down the effect is as if they are walking on black ice, and tiny lights, like flickering eyes twinkle beneath the floor's surface. SHELIAK Advance and speak. Troi and Picard exchange glances for they can see no sign of the creature they are speaking with. They step forward, and are pinned in a bright light. PICARD Director, we will comply with your request to remove the colony on Tau Cygna Five, but we need time. SHELIAK The given time has elapsed. We carry the membership and we will proceed with their debarkation. TROI The temporary presence of these humans should not interfere with your plans. STAR TREK: "Ensigns of Command" REV. 7/19/89 - ACT FOUR 46. 41 CONTINUED: SHELIAK Unacceptable. You must remove the creatures. PICARD I'm trying! But the needed ship won't be available for three weeks. SHELIAK Then you are in violation. PICARD I have admitted that! I'm only asking for a little tolerance. SHELIAK Section five hundred and one, paragraph seven hundred and sixteen, subparagraph five -- unwanted lifeforms inhabiting H class worlds may be removed at the discretion of the Sheliak corporate. PICARD We will remove them. But you must grant us the time we require. SHELIAK You need time, Picard of the Enterprise, we will save you time. We will eradicate the human infestation. PICARD (outraged) They are not vermin! They are citizens of the Federation and I will not permit this travesty! STAR TREK: "Ensigns of Command" REV. 7/13/89 - ACT FOUR 47. 41 CONTINUED: (2) SHELIAK Intelligent converse is impossible. You do not discuss, you gibber. PICARD Between intelligent species of good will -- Suddenly the Sheliak transporter kicks in, and slams Picard and Troi back to the Enterprise. They have been rudely thrown out on their ears. 42 INT. MAIN BRIDGE (OPTICAL) The startling EFFECT of the Sheliak transporter and Picard and Troi APPEAR. Riker, Worf, and the supernumeraries at Conn and Ops react. Picard and Troi are both very disoriented, staggering slightly. Riker steadies them both. RIKER I take it the Sheliak just hung up on us. Again. FADE OUT. END OF ACT FOUR STAR TREK: "Ensigns of Command" REV. 7/19/89 - ACT FIVE 48. ACT FIVE FADE IN: 42A INT. ARD'RIAN'S LIVING ROOM Ard'rian worriedly inspects the unmoving Data with an electronic scanner. Data twitches, "reboots," comes back to life, and sits up. Ard'rian SIGHS, relieved. ARD'RIAN I was afraid your neural pathways were scrambled beyond repair. DATA I am equipped with diagnostic circuits and can correct many malfunctions. Data moves his head, arms, and legs, testing his responses. ARD'RIAN I'm not surprised at Gosheven's behavior. But Kentor and the others... they said they were on our side. (bitter) I guess words don't mean very much. Data mulls this over carefully. DATA Perhaps that has been part of our difficulty. Words are all we have been using. (thinking) Humans seem to take much stronger notice of actions. Data makes a decision, gets to his feet. DATA (cont'd) I require a phaser. ARD'RIAN What's a phaser? DATA A type of weapon. Unfortunately it will not function in the presence of hyperonic radiation. STAR TREK: "Ensigns of Command" REV. 7/24/89 - ACT FIVE 49. 42A CONTINUED: Data ponders this new problem for a beat, then shrugs it off: DATA (cont'd) I will have to be innovative. CUT TO: 42B INT. SHUTTLECRAFT - CYGNA FIVE - DAY Data has opened up a phaser and is adapting it. His forearm is opened, revealing his arm's inner workings; Data is "cannibalizing" his arm for parts to modify the phaser. Ard'rian looks on in fascination. DATA Hyperonic radiation randomizes phaser beams. But I believe I can improvise a servocircuit which will compensate by continuously recollimating the output. ARD'RIAN You're using your own neural subprocessors to build a smarter phaser. DATA Essentially correct. Ard'rian's impressed. Data completes his work. DATA (cont'd) Get word to Gosheven. Tell him I am coming to the pumping station. Tell him I am going to destroy the aqueduct. Ard'rian is gaping like a carp over this, doesn't know what to say. Finally manages: ARD'RIAN He'll try to stop you -- DATA I sincerely hope so. Off Ard'rian's expression: CUT TO: STAR TREK: "Ensigns of Command" - REV. 7/19/89 - ACT FIVE 49A. 43 EXT. SPACE - THE ENTERPRISE (OPTICAL) The Enterprise hanging motionless in space with the Sheliak ship. 44 INT. MAIN BRIDGE As before. PICARD (to Worf) Go to Yellow Alert. Shields up. WORF Aye, sir. PICARD Mister Riker, put us nose to nose with the Sheliak ship. If she makes a move, match it. RIKER Aye, sir. PICARD Open a hailing frequency. STAR TREK: "Ensigns of Command" REV. 7/17/89 - ACT FIVE 50. 44 CONTINUED: WORF They're not responding, sir. PICARD (tight control) They don't have to answer. They just have to listen! Sheliak vessel, you will have to go through me to get at the colony on Tau Cygna Five! 45 thru OMITTED 46 47 INT. MAIN BRIDGE - CONTINUOUS WORF No response. PICARD Close channel -- and get me that treaty! They've been beating us over the head with it for three days. Let's see if we can't find something in it that can be turned to our advantage. RIKER We're going to try to beat them at their own game? WORF The treaty is how long? TROI Five hundred thousand words. WORF (glumly) We are going to regret Data's absence. CUT TO: 48 EXT. PLANET SURFACE - MAIN STREET - DAY (OPTICAL) The square. FOUR MEN armed with rifles stand shoulder to shoulder in front of the plant and aqueduct. Standing defiant and unarmed, save for the probe at his belt, on an upper level is Gosheven. STAR TREK: "Ensigns of Command" REV. 7/20/89 - ACT FIVE 51. 48 CONTINUED: Off to one side are a number of colonists (including Ard'rian, Haritath, and Kentor), nervously awaiting the outcome. Then a PHASER STUN hits one of the armed men; he drops. As the others whirl to take aim -- 48A NEW ANGLE (OPTICAL) A PHASER BEAM sweeps across the line of armed men, STUNNING them instantly. No one even gets a shot off. Gosheven, astonished, reaches for the probe at his belt. Data calmly stands up from his hiding place, aims his phaser. Gosheven freezes -- it's futile; obviously Data could stun him before he could get anywhere near Data. 48B WIDER (OPTICAL) as Data steps out into the street, holds his phaser up for all to see. DATA That was the "stun" setting. Data switches the setting on the phaser -- DATA (cont'd) This is not. Data turns, BLASTS the control panel on the aqueduct. A shower of SPARKS. EFFECT as the reaction races up the aqueduct. The water stops flowing. Gosheven is speechless. Data addresses the colonists: DATA (cont'd) I could reduce this pumping station to a pile of debris... but I trust my point is clear. I am one android with a single weapon. There are hundreds of Sheliak on the way... and their weapons are far more powerful. Data pauses. The colonists are dead silent. STAR TREK: "Ensigns of Command" REV. 7/24/89 - ACT FIVE 52. 48B CONTINUED: DATA (cont'd) And the Sheliak may not even offer you a target. They can obliterate this colony from orbit. You will die never having seen the faces of your killers. Data walks deliberately to one of the stunned defenders, picks up the rifle with his free hand, holds it out to the group of colonists. DATA (cont'd) The choice is yours. The colonists look at one another. Finally: KENTOR There are other places -- other challenges. It's time to move on. And Kentor EXITS. One by one, the colonists follow him. The mantle of leadership has passed. 48C NEW ANGLE Gosheven, slump shouldered, bends and scoops up a handful of dirt at the base of the silent pool. Data moves to join him. GOSHEVEN I really was willing to stay and die for this. DATA I know that, but it is just a thing, and things can be replaced. Lives cannot. Live, rebuild and be remembered. A long beat. Then Gosheven wipes his hand on his pants, and walks back to join his people. 49 OMITTED STAR TREK: "Ensigns of Command" REV. 7/13/89 - ACT FIVE 53. 50 ANGLE ON DATA watching Gosheven go. Data looks down at the phaser for several moments, then holsters it. He looks up to find Ard'rian gazing at him with an expression of pride and love. 51 OMITTED 52 INT. MAIN BRIDGE (OPTICAL) Troi is seated at Science One with Picard hanging over her shoulder. Riker and Worf are at Science Two. Pages of treaty crawl past on both screens. WORF This is hopeless. Fighting would be preferable. A look from Riker. PICARD That's it. He indicates a clause. TROI I don't follow you, sir. PICARD Worf, get me the Sheliak. WORF (just heard the reprieve) Yes, sir! Picard, Riker and Troi return to the command station. The strange Sheliak scene replaces a view of the ship. PICARD Pursuant to paragraph one thousand two hundred and ninety I formally request third party arbitration of our dispute. A beat while they look it up. SHELIAK Agreed. STAR TREK: "Ensigns of Command" REV. 7/13/89 - ACT FIVE 54. 52 CONTINUED: PICARD And further, pursuant to subsection D, three, I name the Grizzelas to arbitrate. SHELIAK Grizzelas? Riker glances, puzzled, at Troi. RIKER (mouths) Grizzelas? Troi quells him with a look. PICARD Unfortunately they are currently in their hibernation cycle, but they'll awaken in six months, and then we'll get this matter settled. Now, do you want to wait... or give me my three weeks? SHELIAK Absurd. We carry the membership! We can brook no delay! PICARD Then I declare the treaty in abeyance! SHELIAK Wait! Negotiation is -- Picard gestures to Worf -- cut the transmission. Worf obeys. A long beat. RIKER (smiling) You enjoyed that. PICARD You're damn right. WORF Captain, they are hailing us. Picard studies his nails. Takes a turn around the bridge. Settles himself back in the command chair. STAR TREK: "Ensigns of Command" REV. 7/13/89 - ACT FIVE 55. 52 CONTINUED: (2) WORF (continuing) Sir? PICARD (a beat) On screen. The Sheliak reappear. SHELIAK You may have your three weeks, Picard of the Enterprise. PICARD (with careful enunciation) Thank you. The screen returns to a view of the Sheliak ship pulling away. Instant release of tension. Suddenly the turbolift doors open, and Geordi ENTERS. He is looking frazzled. People's expressions reflect the thought that "dear God, he did it." GEORDI Captain, we can do it! We can modify the transporters. PICARD Excellent. GEORDI It'll take fifteen years, and a research team of a hundred -- PICARD (dryly) Mister La Forge, I believe we will postpone. GEORDI (with a grin) Yes, sir. Geordi EXITS. CUT TO: STAR TREK: "Ensigns of Command" REV. 7/14/89 - ACT FIVE 56. 53 EXT. PLANET SURFACE - SHUTTLE LANDING SITE - DAY Data is inside the shuttle making preparations for departure. DATA Commander Data to Enterprise. I am preparing to leave Tau Cygna Five and await rendezvous instructions. WORF'S COM VOICE Acknowledged. Stand by. Outside the shuttle, Ard'rian approaches. Data sees her, emerges from the shuttle to meet her. ARD'RIAN Hi. DATA Hello, Ard'rian. ARD'RIAN The evacuation plan is going well. When the transport ship arrives, we'll be ready. (a beat) You succeeded. DATA I would not have succeeded without your support and insight, and I appreciate your assistance. ARD'RIAN Good. Then you won't forget me? DATA I am incapable of forgetting. I will remember every detail of my visit with perfect clarity. ARD'RIAN But nothing more? DATA I do not understand. STAR TREK: "Ensigns of Command" REV. 7/14/89 - ACT FIVE 57. 53 CONTINUED: Ard'rian bites the bullet: ARD'RIAN I guess what I really want to know is -- do you have any feelings for me? DATA I have no feelings of any kind. Ard'rian is silent. ARD'RIAN No. Of course you don't. Data studies her. She's downcast. Mimicking her behavior earlier, he gives her a quick kiss on the lips, startling her. ARD'RIAN (cont'd) What was that for? DATA You appeared to require it. ARD'RIAN You observed I was unhappy and did what you concluded would make me feel better. A purely rational deduction. She's still downcast. DATA Have I disappointed you? ARD'RIAN No, I'm disappointed in myself -- for wanting something I know I can't have. (a beat) Data, in so many ways you're superior to humans. But you are still a machine... without emotion. DATA Yes. STAR TREK: "Ensigns of Command" REV. 7/14/89 - ACT FIVE 57A. 53 CONTINUED: (2) ARD'RIAN It's so easy to believe otherwise. It's so easy to read things into your behavior... and perceive feelings where none exist. (a beat) Well, I am human and I do have feelings... silly though they may be at times. I like you, Data. You're my favorite android. DATA But I am the only android you have ever met. ARD'RIAN Rational to the last. STAR TREK: "Ensigns of Command" REV. 7/17/89 - ACT FIVE 58. 53 CONTINUED: (3) And with a smile, Ard'rian EXITS. Data climbs into the shuttle, and the door closes. CUT TO: 54 OMITTED 55 INT. CAPTAIN'S READY ROOM Picard is listening to a recording of Data's string quartet concert in Ten Forward. DOOR CHIME. PICARD Come. Data ENTERS. PICARD (cont'd) Welcome home, Mister Data. Well done. DATA Thank you, sir. PICARD The good doctor was kind enough to provide me with a recording of your concert. Your performance shows a good deal of feeling. DATA As I have lately had to remind others, I have no feelings. PICARD That's hard to believe; your playing is quite beautiful. DATA Strictly speaking, it is not "my" playing. It is a precise imitation of the techniques of Jascha Heifetz and Trenka Bron-Ken. STAR TREK: "Ensigns of Command" REV. 7/17/89 - ACT FIVE 59. 55 CONTINUED: PICARD And is there nothing of Data in what I'm hearing? Data ponders this. PICARD (cont'd) You chose the violinists. Heifetz and Bron-Ken had radically different styles, but you combined them -- successfully. DATA I suppose I have learned to be innovative... when necessary, sir. Picard nods. He's made his point. PICARD Mister Data... I look forward to your next concert. On Data's thoughtful expression, we: 56 OMITTED FADE OUT. END OF ACT FIVE THE END STAR TREK: THE NEXT GENERATION "Evolution" #40273-150 Story by Michael Piller & Michael Wagner Teleplay by Michael Piller Directed by Ric Kolbe THE WRITING CREDITS MAY NOT BE FINAL AND SHOULD NOT BE USED FOR PUBLICITY OR ADVERTISING PURPOSES WITHOUT FIRST CHECKING WITH THE TELEVISION LEGAL DEPARTMENT. Copyright 1989 Paramount Pictures Corporation. All Rights Reserved. This script is not for publication or reproduction. No one is authorized to dispose of same. If lost or destroyed, please notify the Script Department. REVISED FINAL DRAFT JULY 24, 1989 STAR TREK: "Evolution" - 7/25/89 - CAST STAR TREK: THE NEXT GENERATION "Evolution" CAST PICARD STUBBS RIKER (DATA/NANITE) DATA WORF BEVERLY TROI Non-Speaking GEORDI ERIC'S GIRLFRIEND WESLEY GUARD GUINAN CREW OF ENGINEERS SUPERNUMERARIES WORK CREWMEMBER #1 COMPUTER VOICE ERIC ANNETTE MALE NURSE STAR TREK: "Evolution" - REV. 7/25/89 - SETS STAR TREK: THE NEXT GENERATION "Evolution" SETS INTERIORS EXTERIORS USS ENTERPRISE USS ENTERPRISE MAIN BRIDGE SHUTTLE BAY CORRIDOR SICKBAY SICKBAY LAB SICKBAY WAITING ROOM ENGINEERING CAPTAIN'S READY ROOM OBSERVATION LOUNGE WESLEY'S QUARTERS TEN FORWARD COMPUTER ROOM STUBB'S QUARTERS STAR TREK: "Evolution" - 7/24/89 - TEASER 1. STAR TREK: THE NEXT GENERATION "Evolution" TEASER FADE IN: 1 EXT. SPACE - THE ENTERPRISE (OPTICAL) at impulse speed entering a double star system composed of a small neutron star orbiting a red giant star. 2 INT. SICKBAY LAB - CLOSE ON A TEXTBOOK something in advanced genetics... lying flat on a lab tabletop. The camera moves slowly along the table to see the paraphernalia of a long night of studying -- containers, microscope, some half-eaten new generation pizza and an almost finished glass of milk... finding a still hand... and moving up the arm to find WESLEY; face flat on the table, eyes closed... and for a beat we may wonder what's happened to him... but then -- RIKER'S COM VOICE Commander Riker to Ensign Crusher. Wesley's eyes jerk open... head turns -- where am I, omigod, I fell asleep.... WESLEY (hoarse) Go ahead.... INTERCUT: 3 INT. MAIN BRIDGE On RIKER. DATA and WORF are at their stations. RIKER Forget to set your alarm, Wesley? 4 INT. SICKBAY LAB Wesley scurrying around to clean up the lab top... put away his experiment and equipment... STAR TREK: "Evolution" - REV. 7/25/89 - TEASER 2. 4 CONTINUED: he notices one of the containers is open, briefly reacts, quickly closes it... it's barely noted and buried in the humor of the moment. WESLEY Uh, yessir. I'm... very sorry. I'll be right there. RIKER'S COM VOICE I didn't think you'd want to miss this. Wesley takes one more last look around the room... exits quickly, brushing his hair into some semblance of neatness. 5 INT. MAIN BRIDGE - VIEWSCREEN - THE DOUBLE STARS (OPTICAL) PICARD (V.O.) Captain's log, Stardate 43102.8. We have entered a spectacular double star system in the Kavis Alpha sector on a most critical mission of astro-physical research. Finding a slightly disheveled man in his sixties (DOCTOR STUBBS) in casual clothes observing data processing on the bridge. The sparkle in his eye is the only hint of his excitement and anticipation... otherwise, he has the confidence of a man who already knows the answer to a question about to be posed. PICARD (V.O.) (continuing) Our eminent guest, Doctor Paul Stubbs, will attempt to study the decay of globules of neutronium expelled at relativistic speeds by a massive stellar explosion which will occur here in a matter of hours. Wesley ENTERS the bridge, looking embarrassed, glances at Stubbs who smiles at him. Wesley sits at his station. STAR TREK: "Evolution" - 7/24/89 - TEASER 3. 5 CONTINUED: PICARD (V.O.) (continuing) It is virtually a once-in-a-lifetime opportunity as dictated by the forces of nature. But frankly, Doctor Stubbs seems much calmer about it all than those of us who are simply charged with the responsibility of delivery and observation. RIKER Ensign, our position.... WESLEY Approaching ten million kilometers from the neutron star... RIKER Slow to one third impulse power... Stubbs stands by Wesley as the viewscreen shows a stream of hydrogen and helium torn from the red giant spiraling toward the neutron star. STUBBS Spectacular, isn't it, my young friend? His voice is as warm as a grandfather's. WESLEY Yessir. And he might as well be in his classroom, the professor sharing the excitement with a young student. STUBBS Over and over again, the intense gravitational pull of the little neutron star sucks up the star material from the red giant, and it builds up on the surface until it explodes... every one hundred and ninety six years. Like clockwork. And it is but eighteen hours away. DATA Eighteen hours, seven minutes, and ... ten seconds, Doctor. STAR TREK: "Evolution" - REV. 7/25/89 - TEASER 4. 5 CONTINUED: (2) STUBBS (acknowledges) The interstellar counterpart to Earth's "Old Faithful". The only predictable burst of energy in the universe that can accomplish our goal. PICARD ENTERS from the Ready Room. PICARD Doctor Stubbs, if you want to make a final inspection of the unit... STUBBS Captain, I've been inspecting the egg for twenty years... you may lay it when ready. Picard and Riker react to his offhanded confidence... PICARD Begin launch sequence. RIKER Shuttle Bay Two, stand-by to launch the uh, "egg"... 6 INT. SHUTTLE BAY - THE UNIT looks likes an egg... it's about the size of a Buick... sitting aboard a small launch pad. In a control booth, a TEAM OF OFFICERS acknowledge the command. CREWMEMBER #1 Standing by, Commander... 7 INT. MAIN BRIDGE STUBBS Do you know how long the experiment will last, Wesley... ? WESLEY One billionth of a second. STUBBS (reacts) Now, how would you know that? STAR TREK: "Evolution" - REV. 7/25/89 - TEASER 5. 7 CONTINUED: WESLEY When I heard we were going to be part of your experiment, I read all your published works. Stubbs reacts, impressed. RIKER Begin pre-launch sequence. INTERCUT: 8 INT. SHUTTLE BAY (OPTICAL) Crewmember #1 touches a panel. A wide door behind the egg slides open to reveal the spectacular star system. 9 INT. MAIN BRIDGE DATA Five minutes to launch site. Then, suddenly without warning... the Enterprise jolts sharply... Doctor Stubbs is thrown down to the floor... The jolts continue... PICARD Stabilize. WESLEY The ship is not responding. 10 INT. ENGINEERING - GEORDI Working furiously at his controls -- GEORDI Checking for failure of inertia dampeners... Instruments say they're working... 11 THE UNIT rattles unstable on its launch pad... STAR TREK: "Evolution" - 7/24/89 - TEASER 6. 12 THE MAIN VIEWSCREEN (OPTICAL) The stellar-material roars from the red giant across space in front of us... The jolts continue... WORF Captain, we're heading straight into the path of that stellar matter.... PICARD Shields up. WORF Negative. The shields won't respond. On reactions -- 13 EXT. SPACE - THE ENTERPRISE (OPTICAL) hurtles toward the fire arc across space and... FADE OUT. END OF TEASER STAR TREK: "Evolution" - REV. 7/25/89 - ACT ONE 7. ACT ONE FADE IN: 14 EXT. SPACE - THE ENTERPRISE (OPTICAL) As before, the ship is flying out of control. 15 INT. MAIN BRIDGE DATA Impact thirty seconds. PICARD Go to manual override to raise shields. WORF Shields are rising. RIKER Reset dampeners. INTERCUT: 16 INT. ENGINEERING GEORDI Dampeners not responding. Unable to reset. PICARD'S COM VOICE Reverse impulse engines. GEORDI Initiating reverse sequence. 17 EXT. SPACE - THE ENTERPRISE (OPTICAL) The engines reverse. The ship stabilizes. 18 INT. MAIN BRIDGE Stubbs looks up dazed, from the floor... DATA Impact twenty seconds. STAR TREK: "Evolution" - REV. 7/27/89 - ACT ONE 8. 18 CONTINUED: PICARD The momentum is still taking us into the path of the stellar matter. RIKER Close the shuttle bay door... Prepare for impact. CREWMEMBER#1'S COM VOICE Door is frozen, Commander... 19 ANGLE ON VIEWSCREEN (OPTICAL) as the stellar matter gently deflects off the shields... 20 INT. SHUTTLE BAY - THE UNIT shakes. 21 thru OMITTED 22 23 INT. MAIN BRIDGE (OPTICAL) The shaking from the collison stops. RIKER Commander Data, check all systems... Medical personnel to the bridge. Riker goes to help Doctor Stubbs... his back is hurt. DATA All systems functioning normally again. PICARD Computer, explanation for control malfunction. COMPUTER VOICE No control malfunction has been recorded. Off their reactions... 24 EXT. SPACE - THE ENTERPRISE (OPTICAL) in a holding pattern. STAR TREK: "Evolution" - REV. 7/25/89 - ACT ONE 9. 25 INT. CORRIDOR Wesley moving... sees a trio of other teenagers, two attractive girls and one boy, dressed in ski clothes... ERIC (friendly) Hey, Wesley, you need some work on your right turns... Wesley pauses, responding a little too seriously for a teenager. WESLEY They're running a check to find out what happened. Everything's okay now... One of the girls, ANNETTE, is clearly interested in Wes. ANNETTE We're going into the Holodeck to ski in Switzerland, Wes... want to come? WESLEY Oh... I can't... I have to check on Doctor Stubbs. He's in Sickbay... Annette looks disappointed. Eric takes him aside out of earshot... puts his arm around his shoulder. ERIC Wesley, I have this awkward situation... Two gorgeous ladies, only one of me and a terrific program where we get snowed in at the ski lodge... just the fire and each other to keep us warm... (looks for a reaction) I can hold the storm for you... meet us at the lodge later on. WESLEY I can't, Eric. There's just too much to do... ERIC (strained) Yeah, okay... next time. Annette glances at him as they split up. STAR TREK: "Evolution" - REV. 7/25/89 - ACT ONE 10. 26 INT. SICKBAY Several bruises from the incident are being treated... DOCTOR CRUSHER treats Stubbs' back as Wesley ENTERS. WESLEY The captain asked me to tell you that our systems are back to normal and we can make another launch attempt as soon as you're ready. Stubbs nods with a deceptively amiable grin. Beverly uses a medical tricorder. STUBBS Quite a dynamic family team, you Crushers.... BEVERLY (smiles at her son) It's nice to be back together. I was at Starfleet Medical for a year... I missed about two inches of him. And a lot more. We may sense here that as she listens, Beverly is considering her relationship with her son... STUBBS I'm not sure I'd want my mother to be flying through space with me... no, I take that back. I am sure. I wouldn't want her. I love her dearly you understand. BEVERLY (poking) Does that hurt? He acknowledges. She treats it as Stubbs says to Wesley-- STUBBS My mother's a formidable woman too. A woman of letters. (with many layers) A great critic. WESLEY I know. STAR TREK: "Evolution" - REV. 7/25/89 - ACT ONE 11. 26 CONTINUED: STUBBS Good Lord, son. You didn't read that unauthorized biography too... (off his acknowledgment) I totally deny the story about the consulate's wife on Beldoron. We were only good friends. Is that all the boy does, Doctor, fly the ship and read? Doesn't he have any fun? BEVERLY Sure he does... WESLEY (interrupting) My studies keep me pretty busy. I'm trying to get into the Academy... I earn credits for my work on the Enterprise... but it's not the same as being there... Doctor Crusher finishes the treatment, nods to the nurse. NURSE Ready to sit up? Doctor Stubbs pulls himself up. STUBBS I am whole again, thank you, Doctor. (he stands) Come along, Wesley, let's make sure Humpty Dumpty is still in one piece. Beverly thinks about the conversation as Wes follows Stubbs out. The doctor's attention is drawn to: 27 INT. SICKBAY WAITING ROOM (OPTICAL) The refreshment dispenser is serving continuous cups of drinks, food to no one... spilling over, falling on the floor... BEVERLY Computer, fix the food slot... STAR TREK: "Evolution" - REV. 7/25/89 - ACT ONE 11A. 27 CONTINUED: COMPUTER VOICE The food slot is functioning properly. BEVERLY Well, check it again... STAR TREK: "Evolution" - REV. 7/25/89 - ACT ONE 12. 27 CONTINUED: (2) COMPUTER VOICE The food slot is functioning properly. BEVERLY Deactivate food slot. It finally stops. Off her reaction... 28 INT. ENGINEERING Geordi on a com panel talking to the Captain... a CREW OF ENGINEERS are working in the background... GEORDI We're analyzing the engineering systems data, Captain... so far nothing unusual in the computer log for that time period... 29 INT. CAPTAIN'S READY ROOM Picard on the com line as Beverly ENTERS. He motions her to come in. PICARD Run a level one diagnostic series. We need a computer that's one hundred percent to run Doctor Stubbs' experiment. He signs off. For Beverly's benefit -- PICARD (continuing) ... As well as the food slots in Sickbay. BEVERLY It seems to be working again. For the moment anyway... PICARD (sitting) What can I do for you, Doctor? She sits down, concerned, not sure how to express it yet. But she's come to him as her old friend, not just the captain -- STAR TREK: "Evolution" - REV. 7/26/89 - ACT ONE 13. 29 CONTINUED: BEVERLY Jean-Luc, how would you feel if you were a seventeen year old and the only starship officer whose mother was on board... ? Picard takes a moment... he's less comfortable in dealing with her on a personal level... but tries his best. PICARD If you're concerned about Wesley, I see no evidence that there's a problem. BEVERLY I know. In a funny kind of way... that's exactly my point. We talk. We smile. It's almost too polite. PICARD Beverly, this is simply a matter of time. I know how difficult it was to be away. BEVERLY (vulnerable) Tell me about him. A beat as Picard is somewhat nonplussed at how to respond to a mother who wants to know her son. PICARD He's... become a fine officer. He works as hard as any member of the crew... Riker says his studies... BEVERLY No, tell me about him. And this is way out of Picard's comfort zone. PICARD He seems well adjusted... BEVERLY Does he have many friends... has he been in love... ? STAR TREK: "Evolution" - REV. 8/2/89 - ACT ONE 14. 29 CONTINUED: (2) Picard taps a finger, realizes this is important stuff... but he hasn't a clue what to tell her. BEVERLY (continuing) Jean-Luc, he's come so far, so fast. And since I've been back I don't feel... PICARD His dependence? (beat, as she considers) He is seventeen, Beverly. BEVERLY What were you doing when you were seventeen? PICARD Getting into a lot more trouble than Wesley is, I can assure you. BEVERLY So was I. They exchange a smile. BEVERLY (continuing) Isn't that what seventeen is supposed to be? Off Picard's reaction... 30 INT. SHUTTLE BAY Wesley and Doctor Stubbs inspecting the unit. STUBBS No cracks in the armor... we'll be just fine... WESLEY How can you be so calm about everything? If I was about to make this kind of breakthrough... STAR TREK: "Evolution" - REV. 8/2/89 - ACT ONE 15. 30 CONTINUED: STUBBS I've never doubted for a moment that this day would come, Wesley. And I suspect some day it will come for you as well. I see a lot of me in you. (Wesley reacts, proud) In my youth, they called me a vunderkind... do you understand vunderkind... ? WESLEY It's German, isn't it? STUBBS (nodding) It means wonder child. It is reserved for those of us who achieve early in life. Now the burden is yours. WESLEY The burden? STUBBS To fulfill your potential. (looking inward) You will never come up against a greater adversary than your own potential, my young friend. Suddenly Red Alert alarms go off... Wesley reacts. WESLEY Red Alert. You should return to your quarters immediately. 31 INT. MAIN BRIDGE - CLOSE ON PICARD (OPTICAL) PICARD (urgent) Still no visual contact? Impossible... Mister Worf, same magnification. Fifty degrees starboard. Find Riker before the Main Viewer ... it shows only space -- nothing else... STAR TREK: "Evolution" - REV. 7/25/89 - ACT ONE 15A. 31 CONTINUED: he moves to join Worf at his station... Geordi and Data are also on the bridge. STAR TREK: "Evolution" - REV. 7/25/89 - ACT ONE 16. 31 CONTINUED: (2) RIKER Worf, you're absolutely sure... 32 INSERT - SENSOR SCREEN (OPTICAL) WORF (O.S.) The sensors clearly indicate the approach of a Borg vessel. 33 INT. MAIN BRIDGE RIKER Shields up. WORF Shields are not responding. GEORDI Manual overide is jammed. It's not gonna work this time... we don't have shields, Captain. He keeps at it. 34 INSERT - SENSOR SCREEN (OPTICAL) WORF (O.S.) Captain, they've fired energy weapons at us... 35 INT. MAIN BRIDGE (OPTICAL) PICARD Evasive action. RIKER Bring about to two-eight-five mark three. PICARD Predict current vector of the Borg ship. WORF Vector... is gone. (beat, reacts) And so is the Borg vessel. STAR TREK: "Evolution" - REV. 7/25/89 - ACT ONE 17. 35 CONTINUED: PICARD You're telling me this was another computer glitch? DATA It is conceivable that we were viewing a synthetically generated image... although there is no precedent for it. RIKER (incredulous) Our computer was daydreaming... ? Suddenly, the Enterprise jolts hard... out of control again... PICARD Computer, identify malfunction immediately. In the back, the turbolift doors start opening and closing repeatedly as the computer babbles -- COMPUTER VOICE Pawn to King Three... Knight to Rook Four... Queen to Bishop Three... DATA Controls are not responding. Suddenly, the engines die. GEORDI Impulse engines are down. Geordi tries to fire up the engine. Nothing. RIKER Try warp engines. Geordi tries... nothing. GEORDI Sorry, Commander... I better get back to engineering... Picard at the viewscreen is frustrated beyond description. On the move -- STAR TREK: "Evolution" - REV. 7/24/89 - ACT ONE 18. 35 CONTINUED: (2) PICARD Lieutenant Worf, you will accompany Commander La Forge. I want a full report on the prospects for getting our shields back. Commanders Data and Riker will join me in the conference room to consider the future of this mission... if there is one. FADE OUT. END OF ACT ONE STAR TREK: "Evolution" - REV. 7/25/89 - ACT TWO 19. ACT TWO FADE IN: 36 INT. OBSERVATION LOUNGE Picard, Riker and Data... PICARD The fact of the matter is we're dealing with a potential breakdown of our main computer... RIKER That's hard to accept. DATA The system automatically provides for self-correction, Captain. There has not been a system-wide technological failure on a starship in seventy-nine years. The door slides open and TROI ENTERS, already concerned.... TROI Excuse me, Captain, Doctor Stubbs has been waiting to see you. I think it might be wise if... Without waiting for an invitation, Stubbs ENTERS, interrupting. His casual devil-may-care shell is a little shaky, but he still employs it. STUBBS Captain, I'm sure you have everything under control, I'd just like to know what's going on. PICARD Of course, Doctor. Sit down. (join us) Counselor... Picard and Troi exchange a concerned glance. PICARD (continuing) Commander La Forge is attempting repairs as we speak... STAR TREK: "Evolution" - REV. 7/26/89 - ACT TWO 20. 36 CONTINUED: STUBBS "Attempting" ... that doesn't sound particularly reassuring. PICARD Doctor, if it is at all possible, we will continue this mission as planned. STUBBS Captain, if we miss our chance now we don't get another for two centuries. There will be many questions asked by Starfleet if the Enterprise fails in its duty... PICARD (sharp) Nevertheless, my first and foremost concern will be to insure the safety of this ship and its crew... With that same charming smile -- STUBBS Insure the safety, Captain or are you really talking about playing it safe? PICARD My dear Doctor, in our current position, when that star explodes, you'll get to watch your experiment from the inside out. STUBBS (shrugs, casual) I would rather die than leave. PICARD I don't believe you speak for the majority, Doctor. And Picard and Stubbs lock eyes as Troi studies Stubbs, leans forward caringly -- STAR TREK: "Evolution" - REV. 7/25/89 - ACT TWO 20A. 36 CONTINUED: (2) TROI Doctor Stubbs, I know how much this means to you... STAR TREK: "Evolution" - REV. 7/25/89 - ACT TWO 21. 36 CONTINUED: (2) And this is said with a smile and charm -- STUBBS My dear Counselor, no insult intended but please turn off your beam into my soul. I will share the feelings I wish to share... She reacts, stunned by the anger she feels from him. WORF'S COM VOICE Lieutenant Worf to Captain Picard. INTERCUT: 37 INT. ENGINEERING Geordi and Worf at the pool table... many workers in the background. WORF Captain, all weapons systems are down. Reactions. RIKER'S COM VOICE Estimated time for repairs? GEORDI Commander, I don't even know what to repair yet. 38 INT. OBSERVATION LOUNGE Signing off -- PICARD Continue to advise. STUBBS Well, if we do not take our leave in time, so be it... it's one sure way into the history books, eh? He EXITS. The others exchange a look. TROI His nonchalance is studied and practiced... STAR TREK: "Evolution" - REV. 7/25/89 - ACT TWO 22. 38 CONTINUED: PICARD Even my sensory perception picked that up today... TROI In fact, he's put his entire self-worth on the line with this experiment. He is telling the truth when he says he'd rather die than leave. (reactions) And one more thing... he doesn't like women very much. DATA Odd. The research material on Doctor Stubbs includes not a few references from gossip columns. It suggests females find him quite attractive. TROI Not this one. 39 INT. SICKBAY Eric helping in Annette, looking cold and shaken, she has a broken leg.... BEVERLY What happened to you? ERIC We had a little accident on the Holodeck.... NURSE (glances at Beverly) On the Holodeck... but it's programmed to prevent injuries... The nurse helps get her on a table... ANNETTE I was making a great run down a deserted slope when the ground just seemed to fall away.... Beverly hits her com panel. STAR TREK: "Evolution" - REV. 7/25/89 - ACT TWO 23. 39 CONTINUED: BEVERLY Engineering, this is Doctor Crusher. The Holodecks are to be closed by my order until further notice. As she examines the girl's leg... BEVERLY (continuing) We've been having control problems today. There's a small fracture here... this'll just take a minute... The nurse hands her an instrument. NURSE You look like you could use something warm inside you... hot chocolate, maybe? Eric and Annette smile, nod yes enthusiastically. The nurse moves away... ANNETTE (to Beverly) Wes almost came along. It's probably a good thing he didn't. BEVERLY I didn't know he was going skiing with you... ERIC It was one of those last minute things... we tried to grab him on the way... ANNETTE We don't see much of him now that he's been assigned to the bridge. And that disturbs Beverly but she doesn't display it. 40 INT. SICKBAY WAITING ROOM (OPTICAL) The nurse is at the food slot... preparing to remove two cups of hot chocolate and as he reaches in... STAR TREK: "Evolution" - 7/24/89 - ACT TWO 24. 40 CONTINUED: a red arc of electricity snaps over his body... and he slumps to the ground. Rushing to him... BEVERLY Omigod.... ERIC What happened... BEVERLY He's not breathing... She feels the pulse... uses all her resources to ressucitate him... finally he begins to breathe... she feels the pulse again, it's better... 41 INT. MAIN BRIDGE Picard, standing, reacts to the news delivered by Doctor Crusher. All the regulars except Geordi are present. BEVERLY If he had been alone, he would have died. PICARD Advise everyone to remain in their quarters when not on duty. Protocol "B" access to all power components. Nobody else uses them unless it's cleared by Commander Riker. WORF Sir, is it possible this is not a computer breakdown? (off Picard's look) What if it is some form of attack? RIKER Our sensors showed no sign of life in this stellar system. PICARD They also showed a Borg vessel that did not exist. Counselor Troi? STAR TREK: "Evolution" - REV. 7/26/89 - ACT TWO 25. 41 CONTINUED: TROI I perceive no life force, Captain... no feelings of ill will. But I am not attuned to every form of life. Wesley begins to consider a terrible possibility... PICARD Data, stay on the sensors... see if we can't pick up something out there. A beat as he sits down, thinking hard.... RIKER It does almost seem as if something... or someone is trying to render the Enterprise helpless. PICARD They're not just trying, Number One. If it's true, they're doing a damn good job of it. And Wesley is more than a little worried about what he's thinking. 42 INT. ENGINEERING Geordi behind an open panel of components... 43 ANGLE - WESLEY (OPTICAL) outside the panel... the control systems come on. Wesley reacts... several other engineers are working as well. WESLEY You got it. Nice going, Geordi... As he comes around, to an engineer. GEORDI Call up the cross-section of computer core processor four-five-one, elements zero-two-hundred through zero-three-hundred. STAR TREK: "Evolution" - REV. 7/25/89 - ACT TWO 26. 43 CONTINUED: As the engineer works at the computer board... various graphs and circuit board construction flashes across a terminal screen... GEORDI (continuing) In order to get some power, I had to by-pass the computer core and essentially hotwire the connection. 44 THE MONITOR (OPTICAL) stops at a cross-section of connections labeled "Core Processor 451, Element 0299" and there is a clear lesion visible there. Geordi points it out. GEORDI (O.S.) Look at that lesion. No wonder we're coming apart at the seams. 45 INT. ENGINEERING (OPTICAL) GEORDI It's some kind of continuing disintegration. But from what... I can't tell ya. And I haven't the slightest idea how to stop it. Wesley's face shows continued concern... something he's hiding... hoping against hope it isn't true. WESLEY But it's just a mechanical problem, right? GEORDI Increase magnification, factor fifty. The image grows fifty times. GEORDI I don't know, Wesley. Looking at it... if it weren't... impossible... I'd say someone had climbed in there and started taking it apart. And that's the worst thing that Wesley could hear. STAR TREK: "Evolution" - REV. 8/1/89 - ACT TWO 27. 46 INT. SICKBAY LAB Wesley ENTERS with urgency... gets out the materials he was studying earlier. He opens the container that he had discovered when he awakened and checks it with a scanner. There is no response. He sighs deeply. Something horrible has happened. 47 OMITTED 48 INT. TEN-FORWARD The room is deserted due to the captain's order to remain in quarters. Wesley moves around a corner down on his knees... setting down a high tech trap... 49 ANGLE - WIDE to reveal GUINAN sitting on a barstool, calmly watching. Wesley's back is to her. He feels her presence... turns... WESLEY Guinan... I didn't think anyone would be here. GUINAN I've never been very good at being confined to quarters. Any of my husbands would testify to that. She rises, comes over slowly to see what he's doing... GUINAN What are these things? Feeling a little foolish -- WESLEY I'm just setting... traps. STAR TREK: "Evolution" - REV. 7/25/89 - ACT TWO 28. 49 CONTINUED: GUINAN I run a clean place here. WESLEY I know. It's not that. I just... He's obviously in trouble... their eyes meet. He can't lie to her. Can anyone? WESLEY (continuing) Guinan, I'm scared. Everything that's been going wrong may be my fault. GUINAN Pull up a stool, Wesley. They sit. WESLEY I've been working on my final project for Advanced Genetics. It's on nanotechnology. And I've been studying the nanites we have in the Sickbay genetic supplies. They're just like tiny little robots with gigabytes of mechanical computer memory, tiny enough to enter living cells and conduct repairs. They're supposed to be strictly confined to the lab. GUINAN Are you trying to say some nanites are on the loose? WESLEY (sighs) Two of them. That's all. See, I just wanted to see how they would interact and function in tandem. In my project, I had proposed a theory that they could actually combine their skills to improve their usefulness. And it was working. GUINAN You made a better nanite. STAR TREK: "Evolution" - REV. 7/27/89 - ACT TWO 29. 49 CONTINUED: (2) WESLEY I was pulling an all-nighter to get my final data... and I fell asleep. When I woke up, I realized the container was still open... (off her look) It was just a science project. GUINAN A doctor once said the very same thing to me... what was his name... Frankenstein, I think. WESLEY They're really harmless. They only have the most basic skills. It's almost impossible that they could be responsible... GUINAN Almost. BEVERLY'S COM VOICE Doctor Crusher to Wesley Crusher. WESLEY (reacts) Go ahead. BEVERLY'S COM VOICE I stopped by your quarters, Wes. I assumed you'd be there, since you're off duty. WESLEY I was just... I had some things to do... BEVERLY'S COM VOICE Orders are orders, Mister Crusher. Wesley sighs, glances at Guinan. WESLEY You won't tell anybody... A beat as Guinan looks at him. WESLEY I know. I will. If it's true. STAR TREK: "Evolution" - REV. 7/25/89 - ACT TWO 30. 49 CONTINUED: (3) He starts to leave. GUINAN Wesley... (he stops) Think you'll get a good grade? WESLEY (glum) I always get an A. He EXITS. GUINAN (to herself) So did Doctor Frankenstein. FADE OUT. END OF ACT TWO STAR TREK: "Evolution" - REV. 7/25/89 - ACT THREE 31. ACT THREE FADE IN: 50 EXT. SPACE - THE ENTERPRISE (OPTICAL) PICARD (V.O.) Captain's log, supplemental. Our computer core has clearly been tampered with and yet there is no sign of a breach of security on board. 51 INT. MAIN BRIDGE Everyone at their stations... Troi is also on the bridge. PICARD (V.O.) We have even considered sabotage, but Counselor Troi has not detected any such sentiments. We have engines back and will attempt to complete our mission... but without a reliable computer, Doctor Stubbs' experiment is in serious jeopardy. Stubbs watches this time with greater intensity. RIKER Manual restart sequence? GEORDI Manual restart successful... impulse engine functions appear normal. Riker glances at Picard for orders. PICARD Proceed. RIKER Shuttle Bay Two, open hangar doors. STAR TREK: "Evolution" - 7/24/89 - ACT THREE 32. 52 INT. SHUTTLE BAY The crew tries, but the doors do not open. CREWMEMBER #1 Doors did not respond. Repeating sequence. As he does, 53 INT. MAIN BRIDGE Suddenly over the loudspeakers, blasting music -- Sousa's "Stars and Stripes Forever".... PICARD What in heaven's name... ? DATA It is "Stars and Stripes Forever" by John Phillip Sousa, a popular American composer of band music in the early twentieth century... PICARD Yes... yes... I know... RIKER Computer, shut off the music.... The music plays on. DATA The music is on all communications channels, Captain. RIKER Power... weapons... communications. We're being stripped one system at a time... PICARD Shut off the power to the bridge. The music stops and the lights go out... after a beat, emergency lighting comes on. Picard looks at Troi... TROI I feel no hostile emotions present. No friendly feelings either. Nothing. STAR TREK: "Evolution" - REV. 7/25/89 - ACT THREE 33. 53 CONTINUED: WORF Only an enemy without honor refuses to show himself in battle. PICARD We may be fighting a different kind of enemy than we've ever known... an enemy that fights a war of nerves. (beat) Resume power to the bridge. The main power does not return. Picard has no alternative. PICARD (continuing) Commander La Forge, can you get us out of this star system safely... Moving forward to confront Picard... STUBBS No... ... intercepted by Riker. RIKER Not now, Doctor. GEORDI I'll try, Captain. I don't want to overload the engines... PICARD Do it gently. But do it. Geordi EXITS. Doctor Stubbs does not even look at Picard. RIKER We'll circuit in auxiliary power to the bridge... and find some way to silence Sousa if he tries an encore. Picard acknowledges, to Riker -- PICARD The priority is to find out who or what is doing this and why. (MORE) STAR TREK: "Evolution" - REV. 7/25/89 - ACT THREE 34. 53 CONTINUED: (2) PICARD (Cont'd) (Riker acknowledges, EXITS) Those of us not involved in that detail should get a few minutes rest. Commander Data, the bridge, or what's left of it, is yours. He EXITS. Wesley glances at Doctor Stubbs who looks away and EXITS. 54 INT. SHUTTLE BAY Stubbs stands with his egg in a stark shot of a man considering the meaning of his life. Moving to find Wesley entering behind him... STUBBS The egg that Stubbs laid. WESLEY Nobody will say that... STUBBS Nobody will say... anything, Wesley. We will not even be mentioned. Wesley can't speak, feeling guilty. STUBBS (continuing; sighs) I could live with failure. ... Well, maybe not. But never even to try. To miss your one chance at bat. Do you know baseball? STAR TREK: "Evolution" - REV. 7/24/89 - ACT THREE 35. 54 CONTINUED: WESLEY My dad taught it to me when I was little. STUBBS Once, centuries ago, it was the beloved national pastime of the Americas, Wesley. Abandoned by a society that prized fast food and faster games. Lost to impatience. But I have seen the great players make the great plays. WESLEY Do you recreate them on a Holodeck? STUBBS No, in here... (his mind) With the knowledge of statistics... runs, hits and errors... times at bat... box scores. Men like us do not need Holodecks, Wesley. I have played seasons in my mind. It was my reward to myself. For patience. Knowing my turn would come. Call your shot. Point to a star. One great blast and the crowd rises. A brand new era in astro-physics. Postponed one hundred and ninety-six years on account of rain. 55 INT. SICKBAY LAB Wes has collected his traps. He's scanning a few with no results... but then there's an audio response from his scanner on one. Before he can make a visual check, the door slides open and his mother ENTERS. BEVERLY We have to talk. He glances up at her -- does she know? Did Guinan tell her? She sits by him. STAR TREK: "Evolution" - REV. 7/27/89 - ACT THREE 36. 55 CONTINUED: BEVERLY You really look like you could use some rest... Relieved, moving ahead with his work -- WESLEY I know. It's okay. Really. BEVERLY (gentle) No, it's not. Really. She takes his hand, stops him from the work. WESLEY I'm just checking some traps that I set... to see if I can find out what's happening to the ship. BEVERLY On someone's orders... ? WESLEY We're running out of time for Doctor Stubbs... BEVERLY Wesley, you can't put everything on your own shoulders. Even when you're off duty, you're on duty... WESLEY Mom, you don't understand... BEVERLY You're a seventeen year old boy... He looks at her... not used to be treated as a child. WESLEY I'm an acting officer... I have responsibilities.... BEVERLY (cautiously) I'm beginning to think... maybe we're all expecting too much of you. STAR TREK: "Evolution" - 7/24/89 - ACT THREE 37. 55 CONTINUED: (2) WESLEY (reacts) I've done everything anyone has asked of me and more. You don't know... you haven't even been here. That pretty well gets down to it. And Beverly understands that conflicts come with being a real parent... and is ready to resume that role. BEVERLY I'm here now, Wesley. Wesley, like any normal teenager, does not seem to get it at all, but somewhere deep inside, a part of him may begin to feel her love and concern. This is not going to be resolved soon. BEVERLY C'mon, I'll help you finish this up... what are you looking for? He looks at her with guilty eyes, sighs... BEVERLY Wesley... ? WESLEY Mom, I think I've made a horrible mistake. She reacts, curious, but puts a comforting hand on his shoulder as he focuses a microscopic camera on his trap... they look together at -- 56 A MONITOR - (OPTICAL) an electronicly reproduced image -- six tiny, startingly busy, mechanical devices in constant motion... From the next scene -- BEVERLY (O.S.) Nanites. Tiny machines built from the atom up. STAR TREK: "Evolution" - REV. 7/31/89 - ACT THREE 38. 57 INT. OBSERVATION LOUNGE (OPTICAL) The image is patched to a monitor. Picard, Riker, Data, Beverly, Wesley and Doctor Stubbs are present. BEVERLY Designed to have exposure only to the inside of nucleii during celluar surgeries. Until then, they are kept tightly confined in a non-functional state. DATA (studying them) These are not ordinary nanites. BEVERLY No, these have... evolved. STUBBS (cynical) Evolved... how does a machine evolve... WESLEY It's true. I'm reponsible. I allowed two of the nanites to interact for my school project to increase their capabilities. And... they escaped. PICARD School... project... STAR TREK: "Evolution" - REV. 7/31/89 - ACT THREE 39. 57 CONTINUED: PICARD (continuing) Just how far have these things... evolved? Beverly glances at Wesley who puts some microscopic raw material into the device... INTERCUT: 58 MONITOR - (OPTICAL) As the material is added to picture, the nanite gets even busier, apparently devouring it.... WESLEY This is a sample of linear memory crystal from our computer core. RIKER (reacts) It's like candy to them... But in a second, it's clear -- suddenly there are twelve of the nanites. 59 INT. OBSERVATION LOUNGE (OPTICAL) Reactions. BEVERLY They're now capable of mechanically replicating themselves. And who knows what else.... DATA It is conceivable that with each new generation they enhance their own design. The rate of evolution would be...extraordinary. PICARD How many generations are we dealing with here? DATA Engineering, display computer core processor four-five-one, element zero-two-nine-nine. STAR TREK: "Evolution" - REV. 7/25/89 - ACT THREE 39A. 59 CONTINUED: The monitor makes the patch to the lesion... STAR TREK: "Evolution" - REV. 7/25/89 - ACT THREE 40. 59 CONTINUED: (2) DATA Increase magnification, factor one thousand. 60 THE ENLARGED IMAGE - (OPTICAL) reveals scores, millions of little nanite flecks... 61 INT. OBSERVATION LOUNGE (OPTICAL) Reactions. PICARD (understatement) A few. (beat) Can it be possible that they know what they're doing... RIKER Why would they attack us? STUBBS Why does a mosquito bite your ear and who cares? The answer is simple. Call an exterminator. BEVERLY Doctor Stubbs, these nanites are apparently operating with a new collective intelligence... working together, teaching each other skills... Data considers that, moves to examine... he is processing all the facts before taking a position. DATA Doctor, are you suggesting they are becoming a... civilization? Beverly looks at him... if the shoe fits.... STUBBS Oh really. I'm sorry but this is nonsense. You can't have a civilization of computer chips. They're made in a plant in Dakar Senegal. I've watched the construction. STAR TREK: "Evolution" - REV. 7/31/89 - ACT THREE 41. 61 CONTINUED: BEVERLY Then how do you explain what you've seen here? STUBBS It's no more mysterious than watching a strain of the Leutscher virus reproduce itself. And that at least is a bona fide lifeform. How many disease germs and viruses have you destroyed in your time, Doctor Crusher? She is forced to acknowledge. PICARD I cannot exterminate... something that "may or may not" be intelligent. STUBBS (unbelievable) My good Captain... PICARD (sharp) There is still time. (beat) Ensign Crusher, work with Data to find some way to remove them safely. If things get worse, we'll take stronger measures. STAR TREK: "Evolution" - REV. 7/31/89 - ACT THREE 42. 61 CONTINUED: (2) Picard, Riker move out. Doctor Stubbs glares after Picard. 62 EXT. SPACE - THE ENTERPRISE (OPTICAL) holding outside the double star system. 63 INT. COMPUTER ROOM (OPTICAL) Data and Geordi make further studies of the core infestation as Wesley assists. Over the section in which they are working, we read "Processor 451" with various element numbers. Doctor Stubbs ENTERS. Apparently calmer. STUBBS Gentlemen. I need a computer functioning perfectly in less than eight hours... and we still have core reconstruction to consider... WESLEY We're testing a low level gamma field that might reduce their processing speed. STUBBS Have you considered a high level charge? DATA (reacts) High level gamma radiation would kill them, Doctor Stubbs. STAR TREK: "Evolution" - REV. 7/25/89 - ACT THREE 43. 63 CONTINUED: STUBBS I know. And without warning, he calmly pulls a scanner from his pocket... aims it at processor four-five-one. Wesley reacts -- WESLEY Doctor Stubbs... Doctor Stubbs turns back to processor four-five-one and fires the gamma charge... 64 INT. CAPTAIN'S READY ROOM Picard and Riker. PICARD I can't get the story of David and Goliath out of my head. How long do we wait, Number One? RIKER We can continue to bypass parts of the computer that are affected... but if these nanites are spreading all over the ship... As if in answer to the question, he detects an odd scent in the airflow... PICARD Do you smell a change in... And suddenly both of them are racked with coughing, struggling to breathe... they move quickly out to: STAR TREK: "Evolution" - REV. 7/26/89 - ACT THREE 44. 65 INT. MAIN BRIDGE (OPTICAL) Where the SUPERNUMERARIES are also suffering from the air, choking... PICARD (to com) Picard to La Forge... enviromental system malfunction on the bridge... acknowledge... No response. Riker moves into position at a console... reading data display... struggling to stay conscious... RIKER Nitrogen oxide... toxic levels... Riker keys in several commands... finally, moves to a manual override.... there is a WHOOSH sound as a change occurs in the air supply system... RIKER I've switched to manual control of the air handling system... Breathing becomes easier, but then the ship shudders... the power goes on and off... a small electrical explosion pops out of one control panel... someone is trapped in the turbolift, pounding... finally, pulls the door open and it's Worf holding Doctor Stubbs... Data behind them. WORF He entered a computer access room and sterilized one of the processors with gamma radiation. DATA The nanites in the upper core are all dead, Captain. On Picard's reaction, as the chaos continues... FADE OUT. END OF ACT THREE STAR TREK: "Evolution" - REV. 7/25/89 - ACT FOUR 45. ACT FOUR FADE IN: 66 INT. MAIN BRIDGE As before. The shuddering... light failures... turbolift opening and closing... it all continues. Troi and Doctor Crusher have joined the others on the bridge. STUBBS You have no choice now... it is a matter of survival. PICARD If you were a member of my crew, sir, I would... STUBBS (over-lapping) But I am not a member of your crew, sir... I am a representative of the highest command of the Federation... which has directed you to perform my experiment... PICARD If one man, woman or child on my ship dies because of your experiment... I will have your head before the highest command of the Federation... STUBBS Good Lord, you are talking about machines with a screw loose. Simply turn them off. And be done with them. Troi studies Doctor Stubbs carefully, is worried about what she feels. And then she suddenly feels something else... she isn't sure at first what it is... DATA Doctor Stubbs, your own actions have provided evidence to the contrary. After you destroyed the nanites in the core, they immediately responded by interfering with our life-support systems. (MORE) STAR TREK: "Evolution" - REV. 7/25/89 - ACT FOUR 46. 66 CONTINUED: DATA (Cont'd) It is hard to accept these as random actions by machines with "loose screws". In effect, you may have proven that the nanites do have a collective intelligence. TROI Captain, I'm feeling a vague presence. It wasn't there before. It is not hostility... More like a primitive sense of self-preservation. BEVERLY If they have evolved this far... into emotional growth... how can we destroy them now? WORF The ship is at risk. Extermination may be the only alternative left. STUBBS A good point... PICARD Lieutenant Worf, Doctor Stubbs is to be restricted to his quarters until further notice. Worf nods to a GUARD who takes Stubbs by the arm and escorts him out. Suddenly, the chaos ends. The ship is eerily still. (Note: it is because Stubbs is on the move that the attack has subsided but our crew doesn't know that yet.) PICARD Data, can you find me a way to communicate with these things? DATA With intelligence, they have the capacity for language. (MORE) STAR TREK: "Evolution" - REV. 7/31/89 - ACT FOUR 47. 66 CONTINUED: (2) DATA (Cont'd) But it will depend on how far their evolution has brought them. We could modify the circuits in the universal translator to make it capable of communications with them... PICARD Proceed. 67 INT. STUBBS' QUARTERS He's inside as the door slides open and Troi stands there. The guard is visible outside. TROI May I come in? He gives her his best casual shrug. STUBBS You just can't resist, can you, Counselor? TROI I only want to help. STUBBS ("bored") Yes, yes... to break the shell... to get in touch with my true feelings. What is this preoccupation women have with de-mystifying me? It must be the challenge. Climb me. Because I'm there. TROI I am only worried about your state of mind, Doctor. STAR TREK: "Evolution" - REV. 7/31/89 - ACT FOUR 48. 67 CONTINUED: STUBBS All right, Counselor... what is it that has you so worried? TROI Your single-mindedness, your need to have this experiment work... STUBBS But it will. Picard has no choice now. He must defend the Enterprise. (tossing it all off with a grin) Counselor, when this is over, I will show you New Manhattan on Beth Delta-One as you've never seen it and we will laugh over glasses of champagne. TROI (beat) Your self portrait is so practiced, so polished.... STUBBS (smiles) Yes, isn't it, though? TROI It is stretched so tight that the tension fills this room. And if you finally... fail... I fear it will snap. A long beat as she studies him sadly. She has failed and they both know it. She prepares to leave. STAR TREK: "Evolution" - REV. 7/25/89 - ACT FOUR 49. 67 CONTINUED: (2) STUBBS A good try, Counselor. But sometimes when you reach beneath a man's self portrait, as you so eloquently put it, deep down, inside... what you find... is nothing at all. She reacts and EXITS. Alone, we may see that, in a way, he too is sorry she failed. 68 INT. MAIN BRIDGE - SCIENCE ONE (OPTICAL) has now become a montage of symbols, numbers, letters... a pause where a response might be... but there is none... INTERCUT: 69 DATA - CU (OPTICAL) types at a keyboard at his station... broadcasting these messages... waiting for a response... nothing. 70 thru OMITTED 71 72 INT. STUBBS' CABIN As he lays alone... studying the ceiling... the sound of a cheering crowd fills his head... STUBBS Lockman on first, Dark on second... Thompson at the plate... Branca on the mound... Stubbs closes his eyes... and watches the game in his mind as we move off to find... starting at the far corner of the room... a computer terminal goes blank... and then moving across the room toward Stubbs... a light on a com panel goes dark... and any other power components fall dead as though a plague were sweeping across the room sapping the energy from everywhere... STAR TREK: "Evolution" - REV. 7/25/89 - ACT FOUR 50. 73 STUBBS lays unaware and... 74 THE LIGHTS OVERHEAD are swallowed one by one by the "plague"... 75 HIS EYES open with a start... and he sees 76 HIS POV - THE LAST LIGHT GOES OUT and... 76A IN THE DARK (OPTICAL) an arc of electricity surges from the lights above, virtually raising him and as he screams... 77 EXT. STUBBS' CABIN The guard hears... moves to the door... but it doesn't open... and as the yelling continues... the guard forces the door open and Stubbs staggers out, falls unconscious. 78 INT. SICKBAY Picard ENTERS as Beverly works on Doctor Stubbs. BEVERLY He's coming around... His face is flushed and sweaty as though he has a fever... he mumbles fearful groans... PICARD I have to believe this was not an arbitrary attack... BEVERLY Has Data made any progress in contacting them? Picard shakes his head. Suddenly, Doctor Stubbs' hand moves out and grabs Picard's wrist. In a hoarse voice: STAR TREK: "Evolution" - REV. 7/25/89 - ACT FOUR 51. 78 CONTINUED: STUBBS You must protect me. Kill them. The ship shudders... the lights go off and on... the attacks have begun again (as the nanites realize Stubbs is still alive.) And Picard looks at the man, realizes he has come to the end of his alternatives. 79 INT. MAIN BRIDGE - SCIENCE ONE (OPTICAL) the montage of symbols, numbers and letters... no response. 80 DATA - CU (OPTICAL) at his station... intense, wanting a response... getting nothing. Pull back to include Riker and Worf watching the exercise. Geordi and Wesley are not there. The attacks continue. Picard ENTERS. PICARD Commander Riker, on my signal, we will gamma-irradiate all computer systems throughout the Enterprise to end this conflict. RIKER Worf, prepare to activate gamma pulse generators. Data continues to watch the screen. WORF Electromagnetic scanners ready, Captain. Picard pats Data on the shoulder -- nice try. Data will not give up. As Picard takes a deep reluctant breath... 81 ON SCIENCE ONE (OPTICAL) A symbol appears in the pause space... DATA Captain... Data types again... Picard watches... Worf and Riker stop their sequence, watch... again the same symbol... STAR TREK: "Evolution" - 7/24/89 - ACT FOUR 52. 81 CONTINUED: DATA I have established contact. FADE OUT. END OF ACT FOUR STAR TREK: "Evolution" - REV. 7/25/89 - ACT FIVE 53. ACT FIVE FADE IN: 82 INT. SICKBAY Doctor Stubbs looks better as he awakens, looks around, sits up... 83 ANGLE - HIS POV - THE SICKBAY GENETICS LAB where Wesley continues to study the nanites. 84 WESLEY turns to see Stubbs standing at the doorway. WESLEY Are you okay? STUBBS I will be. As soon as we finish off these pests. Wesley looks at him with different eyes... and he's not disrepectful but Stubbs can feel it... STUBBS Wesley, do not be too harsh in your judgment of me... until you've walked a lifetime in my shoes. Stubbs puts his hand on Wesley's shoulder. Wisely -- STUBBS (continuing) We are no different, you and I. For you right now, it's getting into the Academy. For me, it's the egg. Others will never understand how important our work is to us. It's everything we live for. WESLEY (a beat) Doctor Stubbs, I want to go the Academy. But if I don't, I have other things to live for. STAR TREK: "Evolution" - REV. 7/25/89 - ACT FIVE 54. 84 CONTINUED: And it is clear and honest and now there is no one for Stubbs to share his game with. Softly -- STUBBS Of course you do. And Wesley looks away and Stubbs stands there, a lonely old man who knows exactly who he is. 85 INT. MAIN BRIDGE Data is at Science One working the keyboard as the others, including Troi, watch as we... INTERCUT: 86 ON SCIENCE ONE (OPTICAL) where now Data's long "sentences" are answered by a few symbols from the nanites... and a few more each time... DATA They are virtually learning the concept of communication as we continue, Captain... each new generation is making modifications. PICARD Can we actually talk to them yet? DATA I think it is worth an attempt... PICARD Ask them for a cease-fire... put it in whatever words you think they'll understand. Data types in his symbols... a response on the screen... DATA (surprised) Captain, their answer is... no. PICARD Tell them it is critical to their survival as well as our own. STAR TREK: "Evolution" - REV. 7/25/89 - ACT FIVE 55. 86 CONTINUED: Data sends the message and receives a response. DATA Their answer is no. The captain thinks hard, looking for the opening. TROI I sense that after the incident in the computer core, there is very little trust... A thoughtful beat. PICARD Bring Doctor Stubbs to the bridge. Riker EXITS to handle it personally. WORF The universal translator has its limits. I prefer to negotiate eye to eye with my enemy... PICARD I don't think there's much chance of that here. Data hears that... and an idea begins to form.... 87 INT. CORRIDOR Moving to the bridge... Riker escorting Doctor Stubbs... STUBBS (fearful) But they have already tried to kill me once... RIKER "One sure way into the history books", Doctor... And they ENTER... STAR TREK: "Evolution" - REV. 7/25/89 - ACT FIVE 56. 88 INT. MAIN BRIDGE (OPTICAL) Picard looks at Stubbs with ice in his eyes. PICARD Tell them the human who destroyed their comrades is here and wishes to address them... STUBBS (reluctant) Captain, if I might... PICARD And you, sir will explain your error and apologize and pray that we can negotiate a peace we can all live with... is that clear? Stubbs acknowledges. Before relaying the message... DATA Captain, if a face to face negotiation would be helpful, I would like to volunteer myself as a conduit. RIKER Yourself, Data? DATA I can easily furnish the nanites with a schematic design of my neurological structure. Entering my neural network would require only their most basic skills. BEVERLY That's what they were designed for. DATA They could easily penetrate the molecular fabric of my hand-covering into the nerve circuitry and interface with my verbal programs. A beat. Incredible reactions all around. STAR TREK: "Evolution" - REV. 7/25/89 - ACT FIVE 57. 88 CONTINUED: WORF If they have control of a Starfleet commander, they become an even greater threat. PICARD How do we know we'll ever get them out of you, Data... DATA There are considerable risks. But it would also represent a gesture of trust on our part. It could be an important step toward peace. A long beat. PICARD All right. Propose it to the nanites. Data types it in... we see the code go out over the viewscreen... followed by a quick set of schematic designs of Data. After a long beat there is a short response. DATA The answer is yes. Off reactions -- TIME CUT TO: 89 INT. COMPUTER ROOM - ON DATA (OPTICAL) Data is at the computer terminal, as before, communicating with the nanites. Picard, Worf and Stubbs are present. 90 WIDE ANGLE (OPTICAL) DATA They are ready, Captain. PICARD Proceed. STAR TREK: "Evolution" - REV. 7/25/89 - ACT FIVE 58. 90 CONTINUED: Data puts his hand under a magnification device. 91 DATA'S FINGER (OPTICAL) appears on the screen of the magnification device. Data touches a control; the image magnifies, and we see glimmers of light passing into the skin. 92 INT. COMPUTER ROOM After a beat, Data reacts to the invasion and his movements become the slightest bit mechanical as though he is being operated by remote control... he stands. His eyes become less innocent, more curious. Data moves to Picard and Riker, looks them over. DATA/NANITE You are very strange looking creatures. Picard and Riker exchange a look... it's worked. PICARD In our travels, we have encountered many other creatures... even stranger-looking than we are... and all of us try to co-exist peacefully. DATA/NANITE The urge among us to destroy all of your kind is intense. Why did you attack us? PICARD We misinterpreted your actions as an attack against us. STAR TREK: "Evolution" - REV. 8/2/89 - ACT FIVE 59. 92 CONTINUED: DATA/NANITE We were only seeking raw materials for our replication process. PICARD Yes, but you endangered the vessel in which we all travel. Data looks around at the room like he's seeing it for the first time... PICARD You almost killed a crewmember. DATA/NANITE We meant no harm. We were only exploring. PICARD We understand. We are also explorers and we mean no harm to any life-form. Data stares at Doctor Stubbs. He knows his time has come. STUBBS I am the one responsible for the deaths in the computer core. DATA/NANITE We know who you are. Stubbs blinks a bit, a lump wells up in his throat. STUBBS I... deeply regret the incident. I am a scientist on an important mission. Your... your colleagues' exploration of the core memory put our mission at risk. I only meant to protect a lifetime of work from being destroyed. STAR TREK: "Evolution" - REV. 8/2/89 - ACT FIVE 60. 92 CONTINUED: (2) STUBBS (continuing; beat, for once lost for words) I am at your mercy. A beat. To Picard -- DATA/NANITE What is "mercy"? PICARD He asks you to forgive him. This conflict was started by mistakes... on both sides. Let us end it here and now. DATA/NANITE (a beat) We agree. PICARD I pledge to you that we will provide any assistance you need for your continued survival. DATA/NANITE Thank you, but we have evolved beyond any need for your assistance. This vessel has become too confining. We require relocation. Reactions. 93 EXT. SPACE - THE ENTERPRISE (OPTICAL) Back in the dual star system. PICARD (V.O.) Captain's log, Stardate 43104.7. Doctor Stubbs has generously used his influence to arrange the designation of planet Kavis-Alpha-Four as the new home of the Nanite Civilization. Plans to negotiate a treaty are underway. (MORE) STAR TREK: "Evolution" - REV. 7/25/89 - ACT FIVE 61. 93 CONTINUED: PICARD (Cont'd) Commander Data's neural network has been vacated... He has been returned to us, unharmed, and with the help of the nanites, our computer core has been reconstructed in time for the experiment... 93A INT. SHUTTLE BAY (OPTICAL) The unit is launched into space... 94 INT. MAIN BRIDGE (OPTICAL) All the main crew... Stubbs is at a back science station. Data is Data again and at his post. DATA Ten seconds to stellar blast. WESLEY We're at forty million kilometers from the neutron star. RIKER Hold your position. On the viewscreen, the neutron star explodes in a dazzling fireworks show... swallowing the unit in blinding light. 95 STUBBS at Science One, completely enthralled in his work... collecting data as it pours into the computer... 96 INT. MAIN BRIDGE PICARD Doctor? Doctor Stubbs doesn't hear Picard or at least doesn't acknowledge... we don't know if the experiment has been successful or not... he is awash with numbers, facts figures. Picard and Riker exchange a glance. STAR TREK: "Evolution" - REV. 7/25/89 - ACT FIVE 61A. 96 CONTINUED: But the last look is Wesley's who watches the doctor alone in his own world, obsessed with the moment he's given his life for. STAR TREK: "Evolution" - REV. 8/2/89 - ACT FIVE 62. 96A EXT. SPACE - THE ENTERPRISE (OPTICAL) leaving the neutron star. 97 INT. TEN-FORWARD Beverly sits at the bar with Guinan. BEVERLY Do you have any children, Guinan? GUINAN A lot. BEVERLY Ever have any trouble relating to them? GUINAN Just one. BEVERLY One? GUINAN He wouldn't listen. BEVERLY Well, they all go through that. GUINAN Not in a species of listeners. BEVERLY Did he grow out of it? GUINAN Well, it's taken a few hundred years or so but I've brought him around. BEVERLY How? GUINAN A mother shapes her child in ways she doesn't even realize. Sometimes just by listening. She motions Beverly to see -- STAR TREK: "Evolution" - REV. 7/25/89 - ACT FIVE 63. 98 ANGLE - WESLEY AND ANNETTE entering. Beverly exchanges a glance with Guinan, pleased. GUINAN Cute couple. BEVERLY Now, see, that's healthy for a boy his age. I mean that as a doctor not just a mother. It's good to see him having fun... with an attractive young woman... who obviously looks at him with extraordinary affection... Raised eyebrow... BEVERLY (continuing) What do you know about this girl? Off Guinan's reaction... 99 EXT. SPACE - THE ENTERPRISE (OPTICAL) Moving away at warp speed and... FADE OUT. THE END STAR TREK: THE NEXT GENERATION "The Survivors" (f.k.a. "The Veiled Planet") #40273-151 Written by Michael Wagner Directed by Les Landau THE WRITING CREDITS MAY NOT BE FINAL AND SHOULD NOT BE USED FOR PUBLICITY OR ADVERTISING PURPOSES WITHOUT FIRST CHECKING WITH THE TELEVISION LEGAL DEPARTMENT. Copyright 1989 Paramount Pictures Corporation. All Rights Reserved. This script is not for publication or reproduction. No one is authorized to dispose of same. If lost or destroyed, please notify the Script Department. REVISED FINAL DRAFT JULY 31, 1989 STAR TREK: "The Survivors" - 7/31/89 - CAST STAR TREK: THE NEXT GENERATION "The Survivors" CAST PICARD KEVIN UXBRIDGE RIKER RISHON UXBRIDGE DATA BEVERLY TROI GEORDI WORF WESLEY Non-Speaking SUPERNUMERARIES MEDICAL ASSISTANTS STAR TREK: "The Survivors" - 7/31/89 - SETS STAR TREK: THE NEXT GENERATION "The Survivors" SETS INTERIORS EXTERIORS USS ENTERPRISE USS ENTERPRISE MAIN BRIDGE CAPTAIN'S READY ROOM WARSHIP SICKBAY TRANSPORTER ROOM PHOBOS IX TROI'S QUARTERS UXBRIDGE HOUSE CORRIDOR TURBOLIFT OBSERVATION LOUNGE UXBRIDGE HOUSE LIVING ROOM STAR TREK: "The Survivors" - 8/3/89 - PRONUNCIATION STAR TREK: THE NEXT GENERATION "The Survivors" PRONUNCIATION GUIDE RANA FOUR RAW-nuh HUSNOCK huss-KNOCK STAR TREK: "The Survivors" - REV. 8/3/89 - TEASER 1. STAR TREK: THE NEXT GENERATION "The Survivors" TEASER FADE IN: 1 EXT. SPACE - THE ENTERPRISE (OPTICAL) The Enterprise is entering a star system at impulse speed. PICARD (V.O.) Captain's log, Stardate 43042.3. We are cautiously entering the Delta Rana star system three days after receiving a distress call from the Federation colony on its ninth planet. 2 INT. MAIN BRIDGE WORF, DATA and WESLEY are at their stations. PICARD and RIKER have their eyes on the Main Viewer. BEVERLY and TROI are present as advisors. The entire ship is on alert, ready for anything. PICARD (V.O.) The garbled transmission reported the colony under attack from an unidentified spacecraft. Our mission is one of rescue and -- if necessary -- confrontation with a hostile force. RIKER Shields up, maximum strength. WORF Shields up. (studying) Sensors do not indicate the presence of any armed space vehicles operating in the Rana system. PICARD They could be cloaked or otherwise shielded. (MORE) STAR TREK: "The Survivors" - REV. 8/4/89 - TEASER 2. 2 CONTINUED: PICARD (Cont'd) Mister Crusher, bring us in well clear of the planet's three moons. WESLEY Aye, sir. DATA Commander, I am not receiving Rana Four's call sign. RIKER Open a frequency to Colony Operations. Data does as told. The results are negative. DATA There is no response. Rana Four is emissions quiet. Troi is also having trouble with her specialty. TROI Captain, there are eleven thousand inhabitants in the colony. At this range I should be feeling something.... I'm not. PICARD Mister Data, put the planet on the Main Viewer. 3 ANGLE - MAIN VIEWER (OPTICAL) The planet of Rana IV slowly grows into being on the Main Viewer. PICARD Magnify. The screen magnifies. It is immediately obvious that the planet has sustained catastrophic damage. The crew of the Enterprise is mortified. BEVERLY My God... RIKER Helm, put us in a high equatorial orbit. Scan for survivors. STAR TREK: "The Survivors" - REV. 8/4/89 - TEASER 3. 3 CONTINUED: BEVERLY Survivors? Down there? DATA Sensors are scanning ninety degrees of longitude as we orbit. I am detecting no artificial structures, no vegetation, no bodies of water... WORF Lifeform readings are negative. TROI Could the colonists have escaped? DATA That is unlikely. Rana Four possessed no interstellar spacecraft. RIKER Who could cause devastation on such a scale? Suddenly Wesley is calling out in great excitement -- WESLEY Hold it -- hold it! I'm getting something at thirty-seven degrees north, sixty-two degrees east -- a structure! PICARD (hopeful) Life? WORF Two lifeforms. Possibly human. PICARD Put the area on the Main Viewer and magnify. STAR TREK: "The Survivors" - REV. 8/2/89 - TEASER 4. 4 ANGLE - MAIN VIEWER (OPTICAL) The Main Viewer shows an incredible sight: an extreme aerial SHOT of a six square acre plot of unscathed land; an incongruous patch of green surrounded by a sea of devastation. The crew of the Enterprise is stunned. DATA The structure is located at the center of the vegetation. RIKER (disbelieving) An entire planet obliterated... except for a few acres of trees and grass... and one building? BEVERLY It's some kind of illusion... DATA Negative. It is as you see it. Picard takes a beat to think about this. But he can't explain it. PICARD Number One, I think you had better see who's home... FADE OUT. END OF TEASER STAR TREK: "The Survivors" - REV. 8/3/89 - ACT ONE 5. ACT ONE FADE IN: 5 EXT. SPACE - THE ENTERPRISE AND RANA (OPTICAL) The Enterprise orbits Rana IV. 6 INT. CORRIDOR Picard with Troi and Beverly walk toward the Transporter Room. He is consulting with them on the two occupants of the structure on Rana IV. BEVERLY If they're the only survivors of a global holocaust, they can't be in very good shape. PICARD (to Troi) Counselor... ? They pause at the entrance to the Transporter Room. Troi is vague and uncomfortable with her reading. TROI What I sense of them is human... PICARD And something else... ? TROI (hesitates) It's difficult to explain... I feel these two people are somehow... different. (apologetic) I'm sorry. I cannot be any clearer than that. Riker EXITS the Transporter Room and joins them. Says to Picard, indicating the room -- RIKER We're ready. STAR TREK: "The Survivors" - REV. 8/4/89 - ACT ONE 6. 7 INT. TRANSPORTER ROOM (OPTICAL) Data, Worf and GEORDI are in position on the pad. Riker and Beverly join them. Picard and Troi observe. PICARD Good luck, Number One. RIKER Energize... The away team DEMATERIALIZES. CUT TO: 8 EXT. RANA IV - ESTABLISHING SHOT - HOUSE - DAY (OPTICAL) The house, a typical twenty-fourth century colonial structure, stands alone on its plot of trees and grass surrounded on all sides by scorched earth. There is no sign of life, inside or out. 9 ANGLE ON FRONT OF HOUSE (OPTICAL) As the away team MATERIALIZES in the protection of a grove of trees near the house's front door. Riker wants an instant survey. RIKER What can you tell me? GEORDI The house is a typical settlement structure with adaptations. Its thermal properties all seem to conform to known materials. DATA If there are indicators as to why this particular area has remained intact, I cannot detect them. RIKER Worf, the interior of the house. Worf is already scanning it with his tricorder. (NOTE: The interior of the house is dark.) STAR TREK: "The Survivors" - 7/31/89 - ACT ONE 7. 9 CONTINUED: WORF One individual is located at the south end of the house, the other toward the north. There is a weapon -- a low-yield phaser, nonfunctional -- in proximity to the front-room individual. Riker considers all of this. RIKER I guess a frontal assault is unwarranted. Stay here. I'm going to try an old-fashioned knock on the door. 10 NEW ANGLE - RIKER Riker leaves the cover of the trees and moves toward the house. Suddenly Geordi sees something -- GEORDI Commander, there's a -- Too late. Riker steps into a concealed snare that hauls him up into a tree by one foot. The others leave cover to help him. The noise and confusion is considerable. 11 ANGLE - FRONT DOOR OF HOUSE An elderly man, KEVIN UXBRIDGE, comes cautiously out of the house, holding the phaser. KEVIN Who's there? Who are you people? The away team stops in its effort to get Riker down and faces the threat. Riker, still hanging, has the presence to respond. RIKER Commander William Riker, USS Enterprise, and crewmembers. May I get down and approach you, sir? Data and Geordi go back to helping Riker. KEVIN You leave him right where he is. STAR TREK: "The Survivors" - 7/31/89 - ACT ONE 8. 11 CONTINUED: WORF (to Riker) Commander, shall I incapacitate him? RIKER No. (to Kevin) We're a rescue party. We picked up your colony's distress call and came as fast as we could. Just then an elderly woman, RISHON UXBRIDGE, appears at the front door. While Kevin is a naturally suspicious person, she is naturally trustful. She is thrilled to see the rescuers. She gently scolds Kevin. RISHON Kevin, what are you doing? Can't you see they're here to help us? Can't you see they're human? KEVIN (to Rishon) Stay in the house, Rishon. It could be some kind of trick. 12 ANGLE - AWAY TEAM As Rishon ignores Kevin and approaches the away team. There are tears of joy in her eyes. Riker slips down out of the tree. RISHON We'd just about given up hope. We thought maybe the whole Federation had been attacked. BEVERLY Do you know of any other survivors? Rishon looks at her with desperate eyes. RISHON It's been days since we've seen or heard anybody else... (off Beverly's look) Please, no -- don't tell me we're the only ones... STAR TREK: "The Survivors" - REV. 8/3/89 - ACT ONE 9. 12 CONTINUED: Kevin tries to comfort Rishon. He says to Riker in a shaky tone of voice -- KEVIN They came in a spaceship so big you could see it up in orbit. They took our world apart piece by piece. RIKER Who? KEVIN We don't know. We never saw their faces. RIKER You don't know where they came from -- where they are now? KEVIN (shakes head) I guess they've gone away. Beverly takes out her medical tricorder and scans the couple. They react. Beverly is apologetic. BEVERLY I'm sorry. I'm only performing a physical. Could I have your names please -- for the record. RISHON I'm Rishon Uxbridge... and this is my husband Kevin. Data joins them with -- DATA Botanists. Originally from the aquatic city New Martim Vaz in the Atlantic Ocean on Earth. Residents of the Rana Four colony for five years. (to Rishon; a smile) You, ma'am, are eighty-two years of age and a composer of Tao-classical music. (MORE) STAR TREK: "The Survivors" - REV. 8/3/89 - ACT ONE 10. 12 CONTINUED: (2) DATA (Cont'd) (to Kevin) You, sir, are eighty-five years of age and a specialist in symbiotic plantlife. You have been married fifty-three years. The couple stare at Data in amazement. So does the rest of the away team. He explains -- DATA (continuing) I memorized the colony register on the way to Rana in the event such information was needed. 13 ANGLE - RIKER Riker moves away from the others to study the house up close. Kevin leaves Rishon to follow him. KEVIN Is something wrong? RIKER Your house -- with your permission I'd like to look inside. KEVIN Why? What could interest you in there? RIKER Mister Uxbridge, as far as we've been able to determine, you and your wife -- and this house -- are all that survived the attack. It was either a bizarre coincidence or by design. I don't favor the coincidence theory. KEVIN (confused) Are you saying we were left alive intentionally? RIKER (hesitant) Yes. STAR TREK: "The Survivors" - REV. 8/3/89 - ACT ONE 11. 13 CONTINUED: KEVIN I don't understand. You don't think Rishon and I did something to merit our survival, do you? I mean, betrayed the others... ? RIKER I'm not accusing you of anything, Mister Uxbridge. The attacking force spared you for some reason. We're only trying to find out why. (indicates house) May I look inside... ? KEVIN (numb; bewildered) I said you could. 14 INT. HOUSE - LIVING ROOM As Riker ENTERS. The interior is as normal as a twenty- fourth century colonial interior can be. There are elements of Rishon, elements of Kevin. Nothing to indicate that they are bad people. The rest of the away team follows Riker in. They spread out. 15 ANGLE - RISHON AND KEVIN Rishon and Kevin ENTER the house. Rishon is determined to make her rescuers welcome. She heads for the kitchen with -- RISHON I'll make a cup of tea for everyone. We have wonderful tea on Rana. It grows wild nearly everywhere... She suddenly realizes Rana IV and its tea are gone forever; she can't finish. She hurries away to the kitchen. Kevin watches her go. Worf approaches him and makes an honest attempt to cheer him up. WORF Sir, may I say that your attempt to hold our away team at bay with a nonfunctioning weapon was an act of unmitigated gall. Kevin looks at the phaser that he's still holding. STAR TREK: "The Survivors" - REV. 8/10/89 - ACT ONE 12. 15 CONTINUED: KEVIN Didn't fool you, huh? WORF (rare smile) I admire gall. Geordi joins them. He too is interested in Kevin. GEORDI Excuse me. Out front -- that was about the best job of concealing a snare that I've ever seen. Could you tell me what it was for? KEVIN Got a local critter that's developed a taste for what's in the garden. (sad realization) Guess I should've dismantled it. Guess I don't have to worry about him anymore. He happens to look across the room and see -- 16 ANGLE - DATA Data has wandered to a small table where an ornate MUSIC BOX sits. He studies the music box. Just then Rishon emerges from the kitchen and moves toward a cupboard where her tea service is stored. She sees Data looking at the music box. RISHON Go ahead. Pick it up. It's a music box. It's been in my family for generations. 17 TIGHT ON MUSIC BOX Data carefully lifts the box. (NOTE: any convenient waltz music will do for the music.) A few bars and we: SMASH CUT TO: STAR TREK: "The Survivors" - REV. 8/3/89 - ACT ONE 13. 18 INT. ENTERPRISE - TROI'S QUARTERS - CLOSE ON TROI Troi is going about her normal daily routine inside her quarters. Suddenly she comes alert as if hearing something. We realize she is hearing the music from the music box in her head (although she doesn't know this)! And it stays, playing over and over... 19 BACK TO LIVING ROOM - RIKER AND BEVERLY Riker and Beverly are consulting with each other near the front door. Riker is at a lost to explain the riddle of the house and Kevin and Rishon. RIKER I've been in every room. There's nothing unusual about this house except that it's here. What about them? BEVERLY They're in reasonably good health. Both show signs of mental stress. Understandable considering what they've been through. RIKER (mystified) But somehow they're different. Riker looks o.s. in the direction of Rishon (with Data). RIKER (continuing) Let's get back to the ship. We'll take them with us. 20 ANGLE - RISHON AND DATA As the music in the music box runs down. Data smiles. Just then, Riker interrupts them. RIKER (continuing) Excuse, Mrs. Uxbridge. We have to return to the ship now. RISHON Commander, I haven't finished fixing your tea -- STAR TREK: "The Survivors" - REV. 8/3/89 - ACT ONE 14. 20 CONTINUED: RIKER I'm sorry, but we're finished here. We can give you and Kevin time to pack. You can bring as much as you want. Rishon gives him a look of astonishment. Kevin appears at her side and give Riker the same look. RISHON What do you mean pack? KEVIN You're not thinking of taking us with you, are you? RIKER (surprised) Surely you don't want to remain here. How will you take care of yourselves? RISHON (to Kevin; frightened) Kevin, I can't leave my home! Don't let them do this to us. KEVIN No one's going to make us leave. RIKER You'll be protected on the ship. You could still be in danger on Rana. KEVIN Commander, we appreciate your concern but we're not going anywhere. We'll manage. We always have. Riker thinks for a beat. These two people are beyond his understanding. And he's concerned about them. RIKER All right. I can't make you come with us. Are you familiar with one of these... ? Riker hands Rishon his communicator. She nods. STAR TREK: "The Survivors" - 7/31/89 - ACT ONE 15. 20 CONTINUED: (2) RIKER (continuing) We'll remain in this system for the next several days at least. If you should reconsider, please contact us. RISHON We'll be fine, Commander. We have each other... We HOLD a moment on Riker's troubled expression before we -- FADE OUT. END OF ACT ONE STAR TREK: "The Survivors" - REV. 8/3/89 - ACT TWO 16. ACT TWO FADE IN: 21 EXT. SPACE - THE ENTERPRISE AND RANA IV (OPTICAL) The Enterprise keeps orbit around the shattered planet. 22 INT. OBSERVATION LOUNGE - FAVORING PICARD Picard is in the middle of debriefing Riker, Beverly, Geordi and Data. Troi is there as a consultant -- but she seems distant, lost in thought, troubled (because the song is still playing in her mind). All are seated at the table except Picard who paces with controlled energy. PICARD Are they collaborators? Did they in fact provide their colony's assailants with something that abetted the total destruction of Rana Four in order to protect their own lives? Beverly is skeptical. BEVERLY What could two botanists in their eighties possess that could possibly aid whoever attacked this planet? PICARD We have no idea what the enemy needed, Doctor. Love, fear, hope -- a cup of tea. It is a strange universe we live in. GEORDI Maybe they're being held hostage in some fashion. BEVERLY Nothing in the tricorder readings indicated emotional stress. PICARD (looks to Troi) Counselor... ? STAR TREK: "The Survivors" - REV. 8/3/89 - ACT TWO 17. 22 CONTINUED: All eyes turn to Troi. But she hasn't heard Picard. She is lost in her own thoughts. Picard has to repeat -- PICARD (continuing) Counselor Troi... ? TROI (coming awake) I'm sorry... I can't sense them well enough... Picard gives her a quizzical look. Suddenly from Geordi -- GEORDI Specimens... (off their looks) Maybe they've been preserved as specimens... pets... trophies... exhibits in a zoo... PICARD (thinks) No. The assailants would have picked someone younger for that, someone who would have given them a proper show for their money. STAR TREK: "The Survivors" - REV. 8/3/89 - ACT TWO 18. 22 CONTINUED: (2) Picard looks at Riker -- PICARD (continuing) Number One, you say the couple is incapable of sustaining themselves? RIKER There's a fusion reactor in the house, probably good for another five years of power. But their watertable is tainted and they have no way of feeding themselves other than a small garden. PICARD They won't come to the ship? RIKER They were adamant. Picard considers all that he's heard for a beat. PICARD We'll do all that we can to help them... but in the meantime I want them kept under surveillance. Suddenly Troi, looking pale and drawn, stands up to leave. PICARD (continuing) Counselor, is something wrong? TROI I'm sorry... I don't feel well. I would like to go to my quarters... PICARD By all means. BEVERLY Is there anything I can do? Troi shakes her head and leaves the room without another word. Picard watches her go, concerned. The others too. CUT TO: STAR TREK: "The Survivors" - REV. 8/3/89 - ACT TWO 19. 23 INT. CORRIDOR - ON PICARD Picard walks alone, moving toward a turbolift. He is intercepted by Worf. WORF Captain, a search of the Ranian system has determined that the hostile force that attacked this planet is no longer present. PICARD I remember a Starfleet admiral saying the same thing about some renegade Andorians in the Triangulum system once. The truth was they'd dismantled their ship and hidden it. WORF (chest out) Those Andorians did not have to contend with someone of my thoroughness. I will stake my reputation. Picard believes him. The turbolift arrives and Picard steps in. CUT TO: 24 INT. TROI'S QUARTERS - TROI Troi is on her bed, fully clothed, trying to sleep. She looks strained, tired. From her actions we know the song is still playing in her head. She tosses and turns. Sleep is impossible. She sits on the bed and rubs her face. She stands and paces. She puts her hands over her ears as if the song could be stopped that way. Nothing works. She talks to herself. TROI Don't listen... think of something else... Nothing works. She sits in a chair and pulls at her hair. She stands again. TROI (continuing) Stop... please stop! STAR TREK: "The Survivors" - REV. 8/3/89 - ACT TWO 20. 24 CONTINUED: Suddenly there is a soft knock (chimes?) at her door. She jumps at the sound. Collects herself -- TROI (continuing) Yes -- 25 INCLUDE PICARD Picard ENTERS the room. He sees Troi's condition and knows something must be wrong. PICARD I was concerned. I came to see if I could be of any help. TROI I'm fine. There's nothing wrong. I'm tired, that's all. Picard doesn't believe her. He goes up to her for a closer look. She shies away. PICARD I don't have your gift for reading emotions, Counselor, but I can tell when someone is in pain and hiding it. Troi starts to lie to him again, then decides to tell the truth. TROI It's silly... I... I hear music. Music that won't stop. In my mind. PICARD (thinks he understands) Perhaps it's a symptom of fatigue. We've all been inflicted one time or another with the song that wouldn't quit. TROI No... it's deeper than that. The song never stops for an instant. It plays in perfect clarity from beginning to end over and over again. (MORE) STAR TREK: "The Survivors" - REV. 8/3/89 - ACT TWO 20A. 25 CONTINUED: TROI (Cont'd) I don't even know what song it is -- I've never heard it before! STAR TREK: "The Survivors" - REV. 8/3/89 - ACT TWO 21. 25 CONTINUED: (2) PICARD When did this start? TROI A few hours ago. While the away team was on the surface. I was trying to... I was thinking of Rishon and Kevin... PICARD Rishon and Kevin... And? TROI (shakes head) I can't explain. They're elusive. They're... I'm sorry... Picard doesn't want to push her. PICARD Get some rest. Take the necessary sleep inducements if you have to. Troi gives him a weak nod. She'll try... but she isn't hopeful. And suddenly Red Alert is sounding through the ship. CUT TO: 26 INT. MAIN BRIDGE Riker is manning the bridge along with Data, Worf, Wesley and various SUPERNUMERARIES. RIKER Data, give us a visual. Magnfication factor fifty. 27 INCLUDE MAIN VIEWER (OPTICAL) We see the gleaming hull of an immense and deadly-looking spaceship approaching Rana IV. We don't need to be told it's the ship that attacked the planet only weeks ago. 28 INCLUDE PICARD (OPTICAL) Picard ENTERS the bridge and takes one look at the approaching warship. STAR TREK: "The Survivors" - REV. 8/4/89 - ACT TWO 22. 28 CONTINUED: PICARD Where did that come from? RIKER Apparently it was riding a Lagrange point behind Rana Four's furthest moon. DATA Our vehicle classification index can put no identity to it. Its design is completely foreign. RIKER But it's our boy -- roughly five times our mass and carrying enough armament to pulverize a planet. PICARD Lieutenant Worf... ? WORF (deeply ashamed) I... cannot explain this, Captain. RIKER It's moving toward the planet. PICARD Open a hailing frequency, Data. Ask them to identify themselves and to match orbit with us. Data goes through the routine. DATA They have received the message, Captain, but are chosing to ignore it. PICARD Worf, maximum shields, ready all weapon systems. WORF Aye, sir. STAR TREK: "The Survivors" - REV. 8/3/89 - ACT TWO 23. 29 OMITTED 30 INT. MAIN BRIDGE (OPTICAL) On the Main Viewer, the warship is seen making a course change to bring it to bear on the Enterprise. RIKER It's assuming an attack posture. Don't be surprised if -- Riker doesn't have the chance to finish "if it fires on us" because that's exactly what the warship does, unleashing a wave of matter/anti-matter that strikes the outer shields and shakes the Enterprise -- but without causing any damage. WORF The vessel is firing jacketed streams of positrons and antiprotons, equivalent firepower of forty megawatts. Shields are holding. The warship fires again. The Enterprise rocks again. WORF (continuing) Again forty megawatts. No damage. RIKER (confident) If that's as good as they can do, this'll be over in five minutes. PICARD Worf, fire phasers... Just a warning shot. Data, repeat the order to stand to. 31 EXT. SPACE - THE ENTERPRISE AND WARSHIP (OPTICAL) The Enterprise fires across the warship's nose. It responds by moving into a higher orbit and heading quickly away from the Enterprise and Rana IV. STAR TREK: "The Survivors" - REV. 8/3/89 - ACT TWO 24. 32 INT. MAIN BRIDGE The bridge crew is pleased to see the enemy turning tail and running. DATA The vessel has assumed a course out of the Rana system and is rapidly increasing velocity. PICARD Helm, initiate pursuit. WESLEY (happily) Aye, sir. 33 EXT. SPACE - THE ENTERPRISE AND WARSHIP (OPTICAL) The Enterprise follows the warship away from Rana IV, their velocities increasing. 34 INT. MAIN BRIDGE (OPTICAL) All eyes are on the Main Viewer and the unknown warship. WESLEY The vessel has reached warp two and continues on a steady acceleration curve. We aren't getting any closer, Commander. RIKER Give us a superior curve, Mister Crusher. WESLEY Warp three... warp four... The warship is simultaneously matching our curve point per point. Warp four point five... warp five... warp five point five... RIKER (glancing up) Riker to La Forge. Give us everything you can to close the gap, Geordi. STAR TREK: "The Survivors" - REV. 8/4/89 - ACT TWO 25. 34 CONTINUED: GEORDI'S COM VOICE Yes, sir. I'll get you to Nine point three seven in fifteen seconds. 35 EXT. SPACE - ENTERPRISE AND WARSHIP (OPTICAL) The pursuit continues at a faster and faster pace... still the Enterprise does not seem to be gaining. 36 INT. MAIN BRIDGE (OPTICAL) It's obvious to everyone that the Enterprise isn't gaining. WESLEY Warp eight point five... warp eight point seven five... warp nine... the warship continues to match our acceleration curve perfectly. PICARD I get the impression we're being toyed with, Number One. The idea of an endless chase doesn't appeal to Picard in the slightest. PICARD (continuing) This ship will not chase a pony on a merry-go-round. Number One, take us back to Rana Four. STAR TREK: "The Survivors" - 7/31/89 - ACT TWO 26. 36 CONTINUED: RIKER Back? PICARD We have unfinished business there. I need to have a talk with those two people. Picard EXITS the bridge leaving Riker to guess exactly what he means. Riker says to Wesley -- RIKER Reduce speed. Bring us around on a return course. (under his breath) This one's getting away... 37 OMITTED FADE OUT. END OF ACT TWO STAR TREK: "The Survivors" - REV. 8/3/89 - ACT THREE 27. ACT THREE FADE IN: 38 EXT. SPACE - THE ENTERPRISE AND RANA IV (OPTICALL) The Enterprise is once again in orbit around Rana IV. 39 OMITTED 40 EXT. RANA IV - FRONT OF HOUSE - DAY (OPTICAL) Picard, Worf and a MATTER REPLICATOR MATERIALIZE in front of the Uxbridge house. Rishon and Kevin are both doing yard work. Both are naturally surprised at Picard's appearance. Kevin looks genuinely upset. Picard takes the initiative -- PICARD Good afternoon. I apologize if I startled you. I'm Jean-Luc Picard, captain of the Enterprise. (indicates replicator) I've brought you something you badly need if you're going to stay on Rana -- a matter replicator. It has limited capabilities, but... Kevin and Rishon glance at the replicator without much interest. Kevin interrupts -- KEVIN Thank you. But we have no use for such a thing. PICARD It will provide you with food and clothing -- clean water. Lieutenant Worf can instruct you in its operation. KEVIN (to Worf; less polite) We don't need it. RISHON Kevin, you know we do. (to Picard) Thank you, Captain. (MORE) STAR TREK: "The Survivors" - REV. 8/3/89 - ACT THREE 28. 40 CONTINUED: RISHON (Cont'd) Kevin and I were about to have our afternoon tea. You and Mister Worf must stay and have some with us. PICARD We'd like that very much. KEVIN Rishon, they only want to spy on us like this morning. RISHON Kevin, I've never turned away a visitor to this house and I'm not starting today. (to Picard and Worf) Please come in, both of you. And excuse the mess... HOLD ON Kevin's glare as Picard and Worf follow Rishon to the house. CUT TO: 41 INT. ENTERPRISE - TROI'S QUARTERS Troi is nearly hysterical. Two of Beverly's MEDICAL ASSISTANTS try to help. TROI Stop -- make it stop! Please, I'll do anything -- make it stop! Beverly ENTERS the room and is shocked and distressed at Troi's appearance. Beverly goes to her, tries to calm her. BEVERLY Deanna, please. I'm here to help. TROI It's getting louder! So loud... I can't stand it -- make it stop! STAR TREK: "The Survivors" - REV. 8/3/89 - ACT THREE 29. 41 CONTINUED: BEVERLY Move her to the bed. Troi settles down enough to allow the assistants to put her down on the bed. Beverly takes out her medical hypo and attempts to administer a sedative. Troi shakes her head at the sight of the hypo. BEVERLY This will relax you. Beverly injects her. Troi never relaxes for a second. TROI I hear it! It's still there! It's so loud -- BEVERLY (to assistants) Move her to Sickbay. Troi reacts with fright at this idea. TROI No! I want to stay in my quarters. BEVERLY I can get you to sleep there. TROI I don't want to sleep! The music will only follow me! BEVERLY I can induce delta sleep... Tune out even your deepest dreams. TROI But it's not a dream! You've got to understand that! It's not a dream -- it's real! CUT TO: 42 INT. HOUSE - LIVING ROOM - DAY Picard and Worf are having tea with the Uxbridges. Kevin is silent, moody, wishing they were gone. Rishon is radiant, full of energy and love of life. Worf looks uncomfortable, out of place. STAR TREK: "The Survivors" - 7/31/89 - ACT THREE 30. 42 CONTINUED: Picard is relaxed, taking it all in. Rishon is in the middle of a story. RISHON Kevin and I first saw each other on a ship at sea. He was a starving student in a threadbare suit and mismatched shoes. I was traveling with my parents who didn't like the way he was hanging around. I asked him to marry me two hours after we met and he knew I was serious. I don't think he's ever recovered from that day. Rishon and Kevin exchange an intimate smile. Rishon looks at Worf who is cautiously sampling his tea. RISHON Mister Worf, what do you think? WORF (trying hard) Good tea. Nice house. PICARD (to Rishon) Why did you leave Earth and move to a brand new world when you did? RISHON You mean at our age? We thought it would make us fall in love all over again. (looks at Kevin) It worked. Picard takes a sip of tea. It's time to get at the heart of the matter. PICARD It must've been terrible... when the colony was fighting for its life. Kevin looks away. Rishon is in complete agreement with Picard. STAR TREK: "The Survivors" - REV. 8/3/89 - ACT THREE 31. 42 CONTINUED: (2) RISHON Yes, it was. Fire lit the sky... the ground never stopped shaking... there was thunder, unbelievable thunder... PICARD But you survived... RISHON We don't know why we did and the others didn't. I've tried to put some purpose to it, but I can't. Kevin decides it's time to push Picard a little. KEVIN I was wondering, Captain, when you and your ship would be leaving... PICARD I don't have an answer for that. A few hours ago we had an encounter with a warship... Possibly the one which attacked you. We forced it to leave the system but were unable to affect it otherwise. It could return. Rishon reacts with fear. She turns to Kevin -- RISHON Kevin -- you said it'd gone away. KEVIN I guess I was wrong. Don't worry. It didn't hurt us before, it won't hurt us now. PICARD (fully alert) Do you know that for a fact, Kevin? KEVIN No. But I don't enjoy seeing my wife frightened. As we've told you time and time again, Captain, we don't know why we were spared. STAR TREK: "The Survivors" - REV. 8/2/89 - ACT THREE 32. 42 CONTINUED: (3) PICARD But there had to have been a reason. In some way you and Rishon were "different" from the other colonists. Your geographical location, your philosophical beliefs, the color of your eyes -- somehow you stood apart from them. Now it's Rishon's turn to look away. Kevin, with some difficulty, tries to explain. KEVIN There was a difference... I am a man of special conscience. While the others were doing what they could, I chose not to fight. Picard nods. He may not agree with Kevin's views but he accepts them as they are. PICARD That is your protected right. KEVIN But I assure you the attacking ship had no way of realizing this. I expected to die like all the others. Picard reacts to Kevin's unconscious choice of words. Kevin, uncomfortable with what he has just said, stands up. KEVIN (continuing) There's no reason for you and your ship to remain, Captain. We can manage without you. Kevin leaves the room. Rishon is distraught. RISHON Kevin grieved for the others but he did nothing. He's a very gentle man. Please understand that. From Picard's expression he doesn't understand. STAR TREK: "The Survivors" - REV. 8/3/89 - ACT THREE 33. 42 CONTINUED: (4) PICARD What about you, Rishon? Did you feel the same way? RISHON (difficult) I wanted to fight... but I stayed with my husband. Thank you again for the replicator, Captain. I had better clean up now... Picard gets the message. He and Worf stand to leave. PICARD Before we go I ask you one more time to come to the ship. For your own safety. RISHON I'm frightened, Captain. But I can't leave Rana. Even if it means my life. CUT TO: 43 INT. ENTERPRISE - TROI'S QUARTERS (NOTE: Troi's quarters have been adapted for medical treatment.) Troi is on her bed, sleeping; but it is not a peaceful sleep. From the way her lips move and from her tortured expression we know the song is still playing in her mind. Beverly is watching, deeply distressed and mystified. She says to one of her medical assistants -- BEVERLY I don't understand it. I've inhibited almost all the activity of the neocortex and she continues to behave as if she's hearing the music... (a beat) We're going to have to shield her from all outside stimuli by inducing coma... The assistant goes through the procedure. Beverly watches Troi as she slips into coma. There is still a slight indication of continuing anguish on Troi's face. Beverly is at a loss as to what to do next. STAR TREK: "The Survivors" - REV. 8/3/89 - ACT THREE 34. 43 CONTINUED: Suddenly Red Alert is blasting through the ship -- CUT TO: 44 INT. MAIN BRIDGE Riker is on the bridge along with Wesley, Data and various supernumeraries. DATA I have positive identification, Commander. It is the vessel that attacked us earlier. It is reentering the system at high velocity and is approaching Rana Four. RIKER Give us a tight visual, Data. 45 ANGLE - MAIN VIEWER (OPTICAL) The unknown warship appears in all its horrible glory. RIKER (continuing) Is it my imagination or does it look a lot meaner this time? (a beat) Shields up. Weapons ready. Just then Picard and Worf come onto the bridge. They see the picture on the Main Viewer and take their positions. RIKER (to Picard) Our friend is back. PICARD I am not surprised. Lieutenant Worf, open a hailing frequency. Warn the vessel to stay clear of the planet. WORF Aye, sir. But they are already within firing range. STAR TREK: "The Survivors" - REV. 8/3/89 - ACT THREE 35. 46 INCLUDE MAIN VIEWER (OPTICAL) As the warship lets fly with an awesome barrage of electro-magnetic and particle death. The Enterprise rocks. The bridge lights flicker. It's a heavy hit -- WORF (continuing) Shields down! Captain, they hit us with four hundred gigawatts of particle energy! PICARD Damage? WORF Superficial -- but I am having trouble reassembling the shields! The warship fires again. The Enterprise rocks again. WORF (continuing) Shields down! There is thermal damage to the hull! DATA The warship is in possession of enormous energy reserves. It is capable of striking us with far more powerful bursts. WESLEY They're maneuvering to come between the Enterprise and Rana Four. PICARD Number One, we have been exemplary in our patience. RIKER (with pleasure) Lieutenant Worf, fire phasers on full with a simultaneous spread of torpedoes. 47 EXT. SPACE - THE ENTERPRISE AND WARSHIP (OPTICAL) The Enterprise lets fly. The warship is hit -- but it might as well have been with a feather pillow. STAR TREK: "The Survivors" - REV. 8/3/89 - ACT THREE 36. 48 INT. MAIN BRIDGE (OPTICAL) DATA The vessel appears undamaged. Its defenses are apparently able to absorb incoming matter and energy. RIKER Commence rapid fire with all weapons on full! The Enterprise lets loose with everything it's got in a sustained barrage. The warship is unaffected. It fires back with one awesome burst. The Enterprise is knocked head over heels (so to speak). The entire bridge crew is knocked down. There is damage to the bridge -- and injuries to one of the supernumeraries. WORF Shields are down! There is internal damage -- weapon systems control has been lost! RIKER Riker to Sickbay. Medical assistance to the bridge! PICARD Mister Crusher, move the Enterprise out of range of the attacking vessel! 49 thru OMITTED 50 51 EXT. SPACE - THE ENTERPRISE (OPTICAL) The Enterprise limps for deep space as fast as it is able. The warship hangs back, now in complete possession of Rana IV. 52 INT. MAIN BRIDGE Worf is bitter -- but understanding -- about fleeing the battle. WORF The vessel has terminated its pursuit. It is assuming an orbit around Rana Four. STAR TREK: "The Survivors" - 7/31/89 - ACT THREE 37. 52 CONTINUED: RIKER (suddenly remembering) Rishon and Kevin... PICARD We can't help them... But it's my guess they're in no danger. Medical assistance arrives for the injured on the bridge. FADE OUT. END OF ACT THREE STAR TREK: "The Survivors" - REV. 8/11/89 - ACT FOUR 38. ACT FOUR FADE IN: 53 EXT. SPACE - THE ENTERPRISE (OPTICAL) The Enterprise moves away from the Rana system at impulse speed. 54 OMITTED 55 INT. CORRIDOR - PICARD AND BEVERLY Picard and Beverly move quickly for Troi's quarters. PICARD Number of casualties? BEVERLY Sixty-six. PICARD Fatalities? BEVERLY None. We've been able to treat everyone. 55A INT. TROI'S QUARTERS - FAVORING TROI Picard and Beverly ENTER. Move to where Troi is sleeping. She is still in induced coma, but showing subtle signs that indicate the music is still in her head. Picard is concerned. PICARD Can you help her? BEVERLY I've done everything I can. I don't understand the nature of this music she says she's hearing, or where it's coming from. STAR TREK: "The Survivors" - REV. 8/3/89 - ACT FOUR 39. 55A CONTINUED: PICARD Could it be telepathic? BEVERLY (a shrug) Yes. But I'm no expert at determining that. PICARD (controlled anger) They're blocking her sensitivity ... keeping her from "seeing" the truth. BEVERLY Who? PICARD Rishon and Kevin. BEVERLY What? PICARD They wanted us to leave Rana... and that's exactly what we're doing. A beat as Picard comes to a difficult but necessary decision. PICARD (continuing) Picard to bridge. RIKER'S COM VOICE Yes, Captain. PICARD Number One, I want you to maintain the present course for another hour, then turn the Enterprise around and take it back to Rana Four. Beverly gives Picard a shocked look. Riker is puzzled too. RIKER'S COM VOICE Sir? We still won't have our shields restored by then. STAR TREK: "The Survivors" - REV. 8/3/89 - ACT FOUR 40. 55A CONTINUED: (2) PICARD We're going back, Commander -- and this time nothing is going to lure us away. CUT TO: 56 EXT. SPACE - THE ENTERPRISE (OPTICAL) A couple of hours have passed. The ship cautiously limps back into orbit around Rana IV. 57 INT. MAIN BRIDGE Riker, Worf, Wesley and Data are at their stations with various supernumeraries. Picard is pacing in front of his chair. WORF Sensors indicate no spacecraft in the vicinity of Rana Four. (remembering his previous failure) But Captain -- PICARD Forget your previous error, Lieutenant. There was no way you could have prevented it. Worf is mystified as to why. DATA Captain, the Uxbridge house is coming into transporter range. PICARD Lieutenant Worf. If you will accompany me to the Transporter Room... Picard starts to leave the bridge. Riker stops him with -- RIKER I think you should reconsider this, Captain. The warship has come after us twice, it could come back. STAR TREK: "The Survivors" - REV. 8/3/89 - ACT FOUR 41. 57 CONTINUED: PICARD I disagree, Commander. I don't think it knows we're here. I think it believes it's run us off for good. That, however, will change once I'm back on board. RIKER (doesn't follow) Sir? PICARD It's protecting Rishon and Kevin. It responds to their wishes -- directly or indirectly, I'm not sure. That's what I'm going to put to the test. Picard and Worf EXIT the bridge leaving Riker (figuratively) scratching his head. CUT TO: 58 EXT. RANA IV - ESTABLISHING SHOT - HOUSE - DAY (OPTICAL) The house looks as it always has. 59 INT. HOUSE - LIVING ROOM - KEVIN AND RISHON Kevin and Rishon are waltzing to music from the music box. They seem very happy; not a care in the world. They are lost in each others gaze. Suddenly the front door opens and Picard, followed by Worf, walks in unannounced. The couple stop dancing. The music box runs down and dies... PICARD Celebrating? Kevin is aghast. For the first time we see him show a measure of fear. KEVIN What are you doing here? What do you want? Picard ENTERS the room and faces Kevin. What he is about to say and do has an ulterior purpose. STAR TREK: "The Survivors" - 7/31/89 - ACT FOUR 42. 59 CONTINUED: PICARD This is the second time you've shown surprise at my appearance, Kevin. The first time was understandable, but why now? -- unless you expected never to see me again. KEVIN Why do you keep interfering with our lives, Captain? PICARD It isn't my intention to interfere, Kevin... only to help you and Rishon. KEVIN Then please leave us alone. PICARD I promise you that once I leave this house I will never set foot in it again. The Enterprise, however, will remain in orbit over this planet. Both Kevin and Rishon find this piece of news shocking. RISHON Why? PICARD To protect you. KEVIN That isn't necessary, Captain. I thought you understood. PICARD But it is necessary, Kevin. Your lives are in great danger. The warship has returned. RISHON (frightened) Kevin -- KEVIN He's lying, Rishon. STAR TREK: "The Survivors" - 7/31/89 - ACT FOUR 43. 59 CONTINUED: (2) PICARD (in Kevin's face) We fought a pitched battle with it and lost. Many of my crew have been injured -- including a woman who's mind is slowly being destroyed by a telepathic aberration. RISHON (horrified) No! Oh please no! KEVIN This is a form of intimidation. I have my rights -- PICARD You, Kevin? What about Rishon? Is she in favor of being left at the mercy of a homicidal spaceship? Rishon avoids Picard's look... supports her husband. RISHON (a mumble) I think you'd better go, Captain... PICARD Come to the Enterprise, Rishon. Let me take you where you'll be safe. RISHON No. I can't leave Kevin... KEVIN And I'm staying. She's safe here with me in this house. PICARD (at Kevin) Then explain to me why you're safe, Kevin. Why is this house a sanctuary from a destructive force that otherwise has no conscience? Does it have to do with you -- with your refusal to fight? STAR TREK: "The Survivors" - REV. 8/3/89 - ACT FOUR 44. 59 CONTINUED: (3) A look of guilt covers Kevin's face. He turns away from the others. Picard speaks to the back of his head. PICARD (continuing) Tell me this, Kevin. If Rishon were in danger, would you kill to save her life? KEVIN (vehement) No! Not for her, not for anyone! I will not kill! RISHON (angry at Picard) Stop hurting him! Leave our house! A beat as Picard considers them both. Rishon is comforting Kevin, protecting him. Picard repeats his reason for coming -- PICARD It is my sworn duty to protect you. The Enterprise will remain in orbit around Rana Four as long as the two of you are alive. He turns to leave. Worf follows him out of the house. CUT TO: 60 EXT. SPACE - THE ENTERPRISE AND RANA IV (OPTICAL)) A time lapse. The Enterprise orbits without interference. 61 INT. MAIN BRIDGE Riker and Data are there as well as the supernumeraries. Picard and Worf ENTER. Picard takes his chair. He is calm; a man of infinite patience. PICARD Number One -- an update, please. STAR TREK: "The Survivors" - REV. 8/3/89 - ACT FOUR 45. 61 CONTINUED: RIKER Little change, Captain. The shields are still inoperable. We have partial control of our weapons. I've doubled the repair crews. Suddenly from Data -- DATA Commander. The warship is approaching from high orbit. It is very close -- three hundred thousand kilometers distance. RIKER How is that possible? Is something wrong with the sensors? PICARD That's of no concern, Number One. It's here. And precisely on schedule. DATA The vessel has altered its course to a direct intercept with the Enterprise. RIKER Worf, arm phasers and photon torpedos, prepare to fire. PICARD Belay those orders, Mister Worf. Riker and the rest of the bridge crew look at Picard with surprise. STAR TREK: "The Survivors" - REV. 8/3/89 - ACT FOUR 46. 61 CONTINUED: (2) DATA (concerned) The vessel is now within twenty thousand kilometers of the Enterprise and closing. PICARD Let it come, Commander. Activate the Main Viewer. 62 INCLUDE MAIN VIEWER (OPTICAL) The warship is approaching rapidly. Picard seems unbothered. He watches it come. WORF Evasive action, sir? PICARD The Enterprise will stand its ground, Lieutenant. WORF Weapons, sir? PICARD When I give the order. Not before. The warship comes closer. It's at point-blank range. 63 EXT. SPACE - THE ENTERPRISE AND WARSHIP (OPTICAL) Astonishingly, the warship cruises right past the Enterprise and continues on toward Rana IV. 64 INT. MAIN BRIDGE (OPTICAL) The bridge crew, Picard excluded, are astonished. DATA The vessel is entering a low orbit around Rana Four. (a beat) Captain, it appears it is preparing to fire at the planet. PICARD Understood. STAR TREK: "The Survivors" - REV. 8/3/89 - ACT FOUR 47. 64 CONTINUED: DATA My calculations indicate that its target may be the house of Rishon and Kevin Uxbridge. PICARD There will be no interference from us, Mister Data. They watch as the warship lets loose a single, compressed burst of energy that streaks down to the surface of Rana IV and erupts in a geyser of flame that becomes a dull, glowing crater. The bridge crew, Picard excluded, are mortified. WORF The house has been obliterated! PICARD Scan for survivors, Lieutenant. Worf does as instructed. WORF There are no survivors. PICARD Ready a photon torpedo. Fire at the vessel when ready. WORF Aye, sir. 65 EXT. SPACE - THE ENTERPRISE AND WARSHIP (OPTICAL) The Enterprise fires the torpedo at the warship. It strikes home. The warship goes up in a spectacular explosion! 66 BACK TO MAIN BRIDGE The bridge crew looks to Picard to explain all this. But he doesn't. PICARD Commander Riker. What reason does the Enterprise have to remain at Rana? STAR TREK: "The Survivors" - 7/31/89 - ACT FOUR 48. 66 CONTINUED: RIKER (trying to figure it) The unknown vessel has been destroyed. The Uxbridges have been destroyed. There is no reason for the Enterprise to remain. PICARD Good. Helm, move us to a higher orbit so that we may keep the surface of the planet under surveillance. WESLEY Aye, sir. But, Captain, what do we watch for? PICARD Anything. If I'm needed I will be in my Ready Room. That is all for now. Picard exits the bridge to his Ready Room. The bridge crew watches him go, trying to figure out what the hell's just happened. FADE OUT. END OF ACT FOUR STAR TREK: "The Survivors" - REV. 8/3/89 - ACT FIVE 49. ACT FIVE FADE IN: 67 EXT. SPACE - THE ENTERPRISE (OPTICAL) The Enterprise continues its high orbit over Rana IV. 68 INT. CAPTAIN'S READY ROOM - ON PICARD Picard sits at his desk, lost in thought. His doorbell chimes. PICARD Come. Riker ENTERS the room. RIKER Captain, may I speak with you? PICARD (a smile) The pleasure is mine, Number One. RIKER We've been observing the planet very carefully for three hours. We've seen nothing. I have the feeling you're waiting for something to happen. Picard nods. He realizes it's time to tell Riker all that he suspects. STAR TREK: "The Survivors" - REV. 8/3/89 - ACT FIVE 50. 68 CONTINUED: PICARD I have acted on an assumption, Commander. I am not sure what the result will be -- or even that my assumption is correct. (beat) We found two people alive in a house on a devastated planet. But there was only one survivor of the war on Rana Four HOLD ON Riker's perplexed expression as we... CUT TO: 69 INT. MAIN BRIDGE Data is in charge. Geordi has joined the bridge crew. The supernumeraries are at their stations. The shattered face of Rana IV rolls by on the Main Viewer. WORF Why is it we maintain watch on a planet that is now totally dead? Geordi checks his instruments just in time to catch something totally beyond belief. It's a moment before he can respond. GEORDI Bridge to Captain Picard. You had better come see this. 70 ANGLE - PICARD AND RIKER (OPTICAL) As they EXIT the Ready Room in a hurry. Geordi is excited -- STAR TREK: "The Survivors" - REV. 8/3/89 - ACT FIVE 51. 70 CONTINUED: GEORDI (continuing) Captain, Commander, it's back -- the house! And the trees and the grass! It happened right in front of us. On the Main Viewer, the tiny green patch of vegetation is again visible on the planet surface. PICARD (a smile) Worf, do you see survivors? WORF I detect two life-forms inside the house. It appears Kevin and Rishon were not destroyed. But how... ? Picard looks to Riker. Riker's look of acknowledgement indicates that Picard has told him all he suspects. PICARD Helm, bring us into transporter range. I want them beamed aboard -- directly to the bridge. DATA Captain, will they not protest? PICARD Let them. 71 ANGLE - KEVIN AND RISHON (OPTICAL) As Rishon and Kevin MATERIALIZE on the bridge. The couple is surprised to say the least -- and worried. Picard addresses them with strained politeness. PICARD (continuing) My apologies if I interrupted a waltz... Kevin hangs back timidly. It is Rishon who is the aggressive one now. STAR TREK: "The Survivors" - REV. 8/3/89 - ACT FIVE 52. 71 CONTINUED: RISHON Why have you brought us here against our will? PICARD To end the suffering of one of my crewmembers. RISHON I don't understand -- PICARD Kevin does. He's the cause. Kevin avoids Rishon's look, says nothing, implying some sort of guilt. Picard centers on Kevin. PICARD (continuing) At first I couldn't figure out why your house had survived the holocaust while all the others hadn't. And then it occurred to me that it had been destroyed. The dwelling where you served me tea and danced your waltzes was a reproduction, something real to the touch but capable of being created and destroyed and recreated at whim. Rishon sees that Kevin is crumbling. Her desire to protect him is strong. She doesn't believe anything Picard has said and lashes back at him verbally -- RISHON Now you're joking with us, Captain. Can't you see it's hurting my husband? KEVIN (suddenly; fatalistically) Rishon... hear what he has to say. PICARD (to Kevin) More than anything, you wanted the Enterprise away from Rana. Why? (MORE) STAR TREK: "The Survivors" - 7/31/89 - ACT FIVE 53. 71 CONTINUED: (2) PICARD (Cont'd) Because the house, the plot of land, your very own existence, were riddles you were helpless to explain. The warship -- another recreation -- twice tried to chase us away but failed. When I came to the house a second time I provided you with the only condition that would make the Enterprise leave -- your deaths -- and you did your best to satisfy me. Rishon looks at Kevin, quizzically. He avoids her; looks deeply at Picard. KEVIN I am deeply sorry about the woman. I will help her. But I must know what you intend to do with me afterwards... PICARD Take you to the nearest starbase where you will be held accountable for the attack on this ship... and perhaps the deaths of eleven thousand people. RISHON No! He hasn't killed anyone! KEVIN The destruction of the planet happened just as I told you. PICARD But you haven't told us the whole story, Kevin -- how it ended... the part about Rishon. Kevin reacts as if in pain. Rishon's concern for him is outweighed by her sudden need for answers. RISON What is he saying... ? Kevin can't answer her. He turns away. Picard goes to Rishon. Touches her. STAR TREK: "The Survivors" - REV. 8/3/89 - ACT FIVE 54. 71 CONTINUED: (3) PICARD I can touch you, Rishon. Hear your voice. Smell your perfume. In every respect you are a real person with your own mind and your own beliefs... but you do not exist. You died with the others, defending the colony. He has recreated you just as he has recreated the house. There is a look of disbelief on Rishon's face... even as she vanishes from sight. The bridge crew is stunned. Kevin just stands there, expressionless, frozen in time. Picard turns to him. PICARD (continuing) You're the only living thing that really exists on Rana Four, Kevin. And though you look human, you're not. 72 ANGLE - LIGHT (OPTICAL) Suddenly the bridge is filled with a brilliant, burning LIGHT coming from no particular source. The light grows to such intensity that all those present must turn away and cover their eyes. There is confusion, shouting. And then the light is gone as suddenly as it came... and so is Kevin. GEORDI He's in the turbolift! Worf takes action to stop the turbolift. Picard stops him. PICARD Let him go. WORF Captain -- he is dangerous! PICARD So dangerous, Lieutenant, he could have destroyed us at any instant he wished. Track him. Alert the crew to keep out of his way. I want him to know we mean him no harm... STAR TREK: "The Survivors" - REV. 8/3/89 - ACT FIVE 55. 72 CONTINUED: RIKER (to Picard) Will he try to get back to the planet? PICARD Not if he's the creature of conscience I think he is. He has someone to help first... CUT TO: 73 EXT. SPACE - THE ENTERPRISE AND RANA IV (OPTICAL) Indicating a passage of time. 74 OMITTED 75 INT. TROI'S QUARTERS - ON BEVERLY Beverly ENTERS from the corridor. She stops dead at the sight of -- ANGLE - KEVIN AND TROI Kevin is standing over the now peaceful form of Troi. He seems very sad, tired, guilty. He sees Beverly. KEVIN I have taken the music from her mind. She's alright now. She's sleeping. Beverly rushes to Troi. Sees that she is all right. She stands away from Kevin, uncertain. KEVIN (continuing; deeply sorry) She was beginning to sense who I really was. I've been living as a human for over fifty years but I couldn't hide from her. (beat) She has suffered because of my pride and selfishness. It will not happen again. STAR TREK: "The Survivors" - REV. 8/3/89 - ACT FIVE 56. 76 CONTINUED: PICARD (O.S.) What happened on Rana Four, Kevin? The truth this time -- all of it. Kevin and Beverly turn to see Picard ENTERING the room. He's come alone. Kevin has no will to fight or flee. It's time to face the music. KEVIN Very well. For what it's worth. (beat) I am a Douwd... an immortal being of disguises and false surroundings. I have lived in this galaxy for many thousands of years although until today no one has known my true identity. Once while traveling in human form I chanced to fall in love with an Earth woman. I put aside my powers and became her husband. Our life was happy and rich. Eventually we came to this planet to live our final years. Now she is dead. She never knew what I really was... Kevin falls silent. Picard pushes him on -- PICARD Your colony was attacked by a warship... KEVIN Belonging to the Husnock, a species of hideous intelligence that knew only aggression and destruction. I could have destroyed them with a mere thought, but this I did not do. BEVERLY (appalled) You had the power to stop them and you didn't? KEVIN I refused to for the same reason I refused to stop the Enterprise. I will not kill! STAR TREK: "The Survivors" - REV. 8/3/89 - ACT FIVE 57. 76 CONTINUED: (2) PICARD So you let the colonists fight a hopeless battle. KEVIN I tried to fool the Husnock as I tried to fool you, but it only made them angrier and more cruel. PICARD And then what you feared most happened. Rishon went to fight with the others -- and she died with them. KEVIN How I wish I could have died with her... Kevin has hit bottom. Whatever is weighing on his conscience is gnawing at him full force. Picard senses as much as sees the sudden, horrible truth. PICARD But you couldn't. You did the unthinkable instead. You took revenge. KEVIN (breaking down) Yes! I saw her broken body. I went insane! My hatred exploded and in an instant of grief I destroyed the Husnock! A beat. Beverly struggles to understand Kevin. BEVERLY Why did you try to hide this from us? Was it out of guilt for not helping Rishon and the others when they were alive? KEVIN No. You don't understand the scope of my crime. I didn't kill just one Husnock, or a hundred, or a thousand -- I killed them all. All! The mothers, the babies, all the Husnock everywhere! (MORE) STAR TREK: "The Survivors" - REV. 8/3/89 - ACT FIVE 58. 76 CONTINUED: (3) KEVIN (Cont'd) Are eleven thousand people worth fifty billion? Is the love of a woman worth the destruction of an entire species... ? This is the sin I tried so hard to keep you from learning. This is why I wanted to chase you from Rana. A beat. Picard and Beverly understand at last. They are sympathetic... and appalled. PICARD We are not qualified to be your judges. We have no law to fit your crime. You're free to return to the planet... and to make Rishon live again. 76A ANGLE - LIGHT (OPTICAL) Kevin and Picard exchange a long look. Kevin nods to Picard. The room suddenly fills with the blinding LIGHT (similar to what happened on the bridge). When it is gone, so is Kevin. CUT TO: 77 OMITTED 78 INT. MAIN BRIDGE (OPTICAL) Our bridge regulars are present including Geordi, Troi (looking well) and Beverly. They all want a last look at the planet. Its scarred and ruined face is on the Main Viewer. STAR TREK: "The Survivors" - REV. 8/3/89 - ACT FIVE 59. 78 CONTINUED: RIKER Helm... break orbit. Full impulse. Rana IV immediately begins to shrink as the Enterprise pulls away. Picard can't take his eyes off it. PICARD (V.O.) Captain's log, Stardate 43043.5. We are departing the Rana system for Starbase one three three. We leave behind a being of extraordinary power... and conscience. I am not certain if he should be praised or condemned. Only that he should be left alone... FADE OUT. END ACT FIVE THE END STAR TREK: THE NEXT GENERATION "Who Watches the Watchers" #40273-152 Written by Richard Manning & Hans Beimler Directed by Robert Wiemer THE WRITING CREDITS MAY NOT BE FINAL AND SHOULD NOT BE USED FOR PUBLICITY OR ADVERTISING PURPOSES WITHOUT FIRST CHECKING WITH THE TELEVISION LEGAL DEPARTMENT. Copyright 1989 Paramount Pictures Corporation. All Rights Reserved. This script is not for publication or reproduction. No one is authorized to dispose of same. If it is lost or destroyed, please notify the Script Department. 2ND REVISED FINAL DRAFT AUGUST 7, 1989 STAR TREK: "Who Watches... " - 8/7/89 - CAST STAR TREK: THE NEXT GENERATION "Who Watches the Watchers" CAST PICARD Mintakans RIKER NURIA DATA LIKO BEVERLY OJI TROI FENTO GEORDI HALI WORF BARRON Non-Speaking PALMER WARREN MEDICS ENTERPRISE CREW MINTAKANS STAR TREK: "Who Watches... " - 8/9/89 - SETS STAR TREK: THE NEXT GENERATION "Who Watches the Watchers" SETS INTERIORS EXTERIORS USS ENTERPRISE MINTAKA THREE MAIN BRIDGE ASSEMBLY HALL OBSERVATION LOUNGE DUCK BLIND READY ROOM PATH SICKBAY SECLUDED AREA TRANSPORTER ROOM TEN FORWARD CORRIDOR DUCK BLIND ASSEMBLY HALL STAR TREK: "Who Watches... " 8/7/89 - TEASER 1. STAR TREK: THE NEXT GENERATION "Who Watches the Watchers" TEASER FADE IN: 1 EXT. SPACE - THE ENTERPRISE (OPTICAL) Cruising at warp speed. PICARD (V.O.) Captain's log, Stardate 43125.2. We are en route to Mintaka Three, where a three-man Federation anthropological field team has been studying the inhabitants. 2 INT. MAIN BRIDGE (OPTICAL) PICARD is flanked by RIKER and TROI. WORF and DATA are at their stations; SUPERNUMERARIES as needed. PICARD (V.O.) Our mission is to resupply the outpost and repair their malfunctioning reactor. TURBOLIFT DOORS OPEN and GEORDI ENTERS. PICARD Report, Mister La Forge. GEORDI We've finished replicating the parts they need. (a beat) What I don't understand is why a three-man station needs a reactor that can produce four-point-two gigawatts. Riker knows, but wants to see if Geordi can figure it out for himself: RIKER That's enough to power a small phaser bank, a subspace relay station, or... STAR TREK: "Who Watches... " REV. 8/14/89 - TEASER 2. 2 CONTINUED: GEORDI (putting it together) ... a hologram generator. Right -- a "duck blind." PICARD (nods) The anthropologists are studying an extended family of Mintakans at close range... from a camouflaged observation post. TROI According to Doctor Barron's preliminary reports, the Mintakans are proto-Vulcan humanoids at the Bronze Age level. Quite peaceful and highly rational. PICARD (nods) Not surprising, considering how closely their evolution has paralleled Vulcan. WORF Captain, incoming transmission from Mintaka Three. PICARD On screen. On the MAIN VIEWER appears the fuzzy image of BARRON, intermittently broken up by LINES AND SWIRLS of STATIC INTERFERENCE. Barron is a middle-aged human; he's in a small cave-like room -- the "DUCK BLIND" -- which is both scientific laboratory and living quarters for the three members of the field team. One wall contains ports looking out onto the planet. Behind Barron, two more scientists -- PALMER (a young human male) and WARREN (an older human female) -- work on the malfunctioning reactor. Barron's mood is calm, unhurried -- the situation is not desperate. BARRON Barron to Enterprise. Our temporary repairs have failed. The reactor is now inoperative. STAR TREK: "Who Watches... " REV. 8/9/89 - TEASER 2A. 2 CONTINUED: (2) PICARD Do you have battery backup? BARRON Three hours' worth at best. STAR TREK: "Who Watches... " REV. 8/11/89 - TEASER 3. 2 CONTINUED: (3) DATA Captain, if we increase to warp seven we can be there in twenty-three minutes. PICARD Make it so. (to Barron) We're on our way -- On the Main Viewer, an EXPLOSION rocks the outpost. Haywire ELECTRICAL BOLTS cascade everywhere. A console a few feet from the reactor SHORTS OUT. STATIC and INTERFERENCE obscure the image. Barron and Warren are STRUCK by the BOLTS and knocked unconscious. Palmer, also ZAPPED, covers his eyes, temporarily blinded, and gropes randomly. 3 EXT. MINTAKA THREE - DUCK BLIND - DAY (OPTICAL) A hillside with sheer rock walls and outcroppings. About three meters up a nearly sheer rockface is a narrow path. A large section of the rockface above the path SHIMMERS and FADES AWAY -- revealing the exterior ported wall of the "duck blind" (the interior of which is built inside the rockface). BLUE SPARKS dance about the metal structure of the duck blind. 3A INT. MINTAKA THREE - DUCK BLIND - DAY (OPTICAL) Palmer stumbles to a port, falls through it to the outside -- 3B EXT. MINTAKA THREE - DUCK BLIND - DAY (OPTICAL) Palmer has fallen clear of the duck blind. Dazed and disoriented, he makes his way down the path and EXITS the area. STAR TREK: "Who Watches... " REV. 8/11/89 - TEASER 4. 4 INT. MAIN BRIDGE (OPTICAL) Picard watches the Main Viewer helplessly as the image from Mintaka -- with Barron lying on the floor -- BREAKS UP completely and DISAPPEARS. WORF We've lost contact, sir. PICARD Increase to warp nine. 5 EXT. SPACE - THE ENTERPRISE (OPTICAL) streaking to the rescue. FADE OUT. END OF TEASER STAR TREK: "Who Watches... " REV. 8/14/89 - ACT ONE 5. ACT ONE FADE IN: 6 EXT. SPACE - THE ENTERPRISE (OPTICAL) in orbit around Mintaka Three. 7 INT. DUCK BLIND - DAY (OPTICAL) Riker, Data, Geordi, BEVERLY, and A MEDIC MATERIALIZE inside the duck blind. SPARKS and CORONA EFFECTS are coursing through all metal parts of the structure. Riker and Geordi start working on the damaged reactor while Data begins repairs on the shorted-out console. Beverly and the medic tend to the injured Barron and Warren. 8 EXT. MINTAKA THREE - PATH - DAY Two Mintakans -- middle-aged LIKO and his teenaged daughter OJI -- are walking. Mintakans look very similar to Vulcans -- they have the same pointed ears and arched eyebrows. Note: Though Mintakans are a cool-headed, rational people, they are not as stoic and emotionless as Vulcans. LIKO Why did we have to come so early? OJI When the sun reaches its zenith, I have to be ready to take the measurements. LIKO (amused) You'll be ready. You've read the sundial hundreds of times. STAR TREK: "Who Watches... " REV. 8/14/89 - ACT ONE 6. 8 CONTINUED: OJI Yes, father -- but never as the appointed recordkeeper. LIKO (smiles) You're taking your duties quite seriously. Your mother would have been proud of you. 8A EXT. MINTAKA THREE - ASSEMBLY HALL - DAY Liko and Oji ENTER the area, which is presently unoccupied. Outside the "assembly hall" is a large bronze sundial/astrolabe. Oji steps up to the astrolabe, takes a preliminary sighting. In doing so, she notices something o.s.: 9 REVERSE ANGLE (OPTICAL) On a distant hillside, the exterior of the duck blind is visible. Oji points it out to Liko: OJI What is that? LIKO I don't know... Curious, they quickly head off toward the hillside. 10 INT. DUCK BLIND - DAY (OPTICAL) The medic works on Warren as Beverly tends to Barron, who is semi-conscious. BARRON (delirious) Keep work... Palmer... Warren... Beverly applies a hypo. 10A ON RIKER AND GEORDI (OPTICAL) still working on the reactor; Data is finishing up on the console nearby. STAR TREK: "Who Watches... " REV. 8/16/89 - ACT ONE 6A. 10A CONTINUED: DATA The hologram generator is now functional. RIKER Or would be, if we had power... GEORDI Almost there... 10AA EXT. MINTAKA THREE - DUCK BLIND - DAY (OPTICAL) Liko and Oji ENTER the area around the duck blind and stop in amazement. Liko gestures for Oji to stay hidden as he cautiously approaches the path leading to the duck blind. 10B WIDER ANGLE (OPTICAL) The medic working on Warren nods to Beverly -- ready. Beverly taps her communicator: BEVERLY Enterprise -- beam Martinez and his patient directly to Sickbay. Warren and the medic attending her DEMATERIALIZE. Data looks up: DATA Doctor -- Beverly also looks up -- 11 ANGLE ON THE PORT (OPTICAL) Peeking in one of the ports is Liko -- stunned at the sight of these strangers magically disappearing. Curious, Liko pokes his head further into the port, and places a hand on the metal frame. STAR TREK: "Who Watches... " REV. 8/11/89 - ACT ONE 7. 11 CONTINUED: A furious ELECTRICAL DISCHARGE ZAPS Liko; dazed and disoriented, he stumbles back. 12 EXT. MINTAKA THREE - DUCK BLIND - DAY (OPTICAL) Liko has fallen away from the duck blind. He slips off the narrow path, falls three meters, and lands hard on a section of jagged rock, severely gashing his head. He GROANS. 13 ANGLE ON OJI Oji is at the bottom of the path. She's about to come to her father's aid, but holds back as she sees: 14 ON BEVERLY (OPTICAL) Beverly has already emerged from the duck blind and is heading down the path to Liko's side. 15 ANGLE ON LIKO (OPTICAL) in intense pain. Beverly approaches, administers a hypo. A moment later, Liko is out cold. Beverly examines him, then touches her communicator: BEVERLY Crusher to Enterprise. Medical emergency. Two to beam directly to Sickbay. Beverly and Liko DEMATERIALIZE. 15A ANGLE ON OJI emerging from her hiding place and moving toward the spot where her father disappeared. 16 INT. DUCK BLIND - DAY Riker and Geordi at the reactor. Geordi finishes up: GEORDI That should do it. STAR TREK: "Who Watches... " REV. 8/23/89 - ACT ONE 8. 16 CONTINUED: Geordi makes an adjustment. The reactor HUMS to life. 17 EXT. MINTAKA THREE - DUCK BLIND - DAY (OPTICAL) As the camouflage unit kicks in, the duck blind DISAPPEARS; the rockface is now, to all appearances, solid rock. 18 ANGLE ON OJI gazing bewildered at the wall of rock. She's overwhelmed by the inexplicable wonders she has witnessed. CUT TO: 19 INT. SICKBAY Busy. MEDICAL PERSONNEL are performing surgery on Liko and applying various forms of burn and anti-radiation treatment to Warren and Barron. Beverly moves from one station to another, giving orders. She crosses to Liko's biobed. The medic is finishing up with Liko. 20 NEW ANGLE as Picard ENTERS, crosses to Liko's biobed, and reacts to the sight of a Mintakan aboard the Enterprise. Picard glowers at Beverly, but before he can speak: STAR TREK: "Who Watches... " REV. 8/23/89 - ACT ONE 9. 20 CONTINUED: BEVERLY Before you start quoting the Prime Directive -- he'd already seen us; the damage was done. It was bring him aboard or let him die. PICARD Then why didn't you let him die? BEVERLY Because we were responsible for his injuries! PICARD I don't know if I concur with that reasoning, Doctor. But now that he's here, you must remove all memory of his encounter with the away team. BEVERLY By erasing short-term recall? PICARD It's been accomplished before. BEVERLY Yes, I'm familiar with Doctor Pulaski's technique. (studies Liko) Though I can't guarantee it will be effective on Mintakan brain chemistry -- Beverly is interrupted by a COMMOTION O.S. -- 21 ANGLE ON BARRON Barron has regained consciousness, but he's half-delirious and agitated. He struggles wildly with a medic who's trying to restrain him: BARRON No! We must evacuate -- Picard, Beverly, and other medics run to Barron's biobed and hold him back. Beverly zaps Barron with a hypospray; Barron's struggles weaken. STAR TREK: "Who Watches... " REV. 8/23/89 - ACT ONE 9A. 21 CONTINUED: BEVERLY (forceful) Doctor Barron! You're on the Enterprise. You're safe now. Barron gazes at her; reason slowly returns. STAR TREK: "Who Watches... " REV. 8/23/89 - ACT ONE 10. 22 ANGLE ON LIKO CLOSE on Liko's face -- after a beat, Liko's eyes open. BARRON (O.S.) The others? PICARD (O.S.) Doctor Warren is here. We're doing all we can. Liko, not daring to move a muscle, looks to the source of the voices: 23 ANGLE - WHAT LIKO SEES Medical personnel, Beverly, and Picard are gathered around Barron's biobed. Picard is the only one in a red uniform; he stands out dramatically. BARRON And Palmer? Where is Palmer? PICARD Still on Mintaka Three. BARRON Picard -- you have to find him. PICARD We will. BARRON He may be hurt -- PICARD Rest assured -- we will not leave until we locate Palmer. Picard's strength and conviction mollify Barron. STAR TREK: "Who Watches... " REV. 8/23/89 - ACT ONE 11. 23 CONTINUED: BARRON Thank you, Picard. Beverly helps Barron lie back and relax. Picard moves away from the biobed, taps his communicator: PICARD Picard to bridge. Report. WORF'S COM VOICE Scans of the planet detect no humans, Captain. PICARD Very well. Take us into a close orbit. WORF'S COM VOICE Sir, a close orbit will increase sensor efficiency by only four percent. PICARD I want that four percent, Lieutenant. WORF'S COM VOICE Aye, sir. PICARD Picard out. 24 NEW ANGLE as Picard turns, finds himself looking at Liko -- who's looking right back at him. Picard's speechless. After a beat: LIKO (tentative) Picard? Liko's voice catches everyone's attention. Beverly moves instantly to Liko's side, knocks Liko out with a hypospray. STAR TREK: "Who Watches... " REV. 8/23/89 - ACT ONE 12. 24 CONTINUED: BEVERLY Damn -- PICARD Doctor, your next task is clear. Beverly nods as she looks at her troublesome patient: CUT TO: 25 EXT. SPACE - THE ENTERPRISE (OPTICAL) in orbit around Mintaka Three. 26 EXT. MINTAKA THREE - DUCK BLIND - DAY Oji is atop a bluff, finishing her reconnaissance. No luck. She returns to the duck blind rockface, touches it once more. Nothing happens. The hologram generator's doing its job; the rockface looks and feels authentic. 27 EXT. MINTAKA THREE - SECLUDED AREA - DAY (OPTICAL) In a location not visible from the duck blind area, the sleeping body of Liko MATERIALIZES. Slowly, Liko awakens. 28 EXT. MINTAKA THREE - DUCK BLIND - DAY as Oji starts to walk back down the path. LIKO (O.S.) (weak) Oji? STAR TREK: "Who Watches... " REV. 8/9/89 - ACT ONE 13. 28 CONTINUED: Startled, Oji turns, looks about, tries to place which direction the voice came from -- OJI Father? 29 EXT. MINTAKA THREE - SECLUDED AREA - DAY as Liko sits up, examines himself. LIKO Here... After a beat, Oji ENTERS, rushes to her father's side -- and is amazed to see that her father's wounds have disappeared. OJI I thought I'd never see you again. When you and the woman vanished, I was sure you were dead. LIKO I think I was... but I was brought back to life. I awoke in an incredible place -- and my wounds were gone. I had been healed. OJI How is that possible? Liko ponders this gravely. LIKO Long ago, our people believed in beings with great powers. These beings made the rains come, told the sun when to rise, and caused all life to be born, to grow, to die. OJI But those are just tales -- old superstitions. STAR TREK: "Who Watches... " REV. 8/14/89 - ACT ONE 14. 29 CONTINUED: LIKO Perhaps the beliefs of our ancestors are true. Nothing else can explain what's happened. (a beat) Everything's changed now, Oji. We must tell the others... On Liko's resolute expression, we: FADE OUT. END OF ACT ONE STAR TREK: "Who Watches... " REV. 8/16/89 - ACT TWO 15. ACT TWO FADE IN: 30 INT. OBSERVATION LOUNGE Picard, Riker, Troi, Data, and Beverly. Beverly is in mid-report. BEVERLY ... Barron is stable, but Warren is still critical. RIKER Palmer is missing, and scans of the planet pick up Mintakan life forms only -- no humans. However... Riker looks to Data. DATA The area around the duck blind exhibits Karst topography -- sinkholes, underground rivers, and caverns. And the rock strata contain a high concentration of thallium compounds, which may be obstructing our sensor beams. PICARD So if Palmer, in his delirium, fled into a cave, we might be unable to detect his life signs. DATA Correct. BEVERLY Captain, if he is still alive, he probably needs medical attention. We must send an away team to locate him. TROI But our presence mustn't interfere with the cultural development of the Mintakans. PICARD Agreed. Further contamination must be prevented. STAR TREK: "Who Watches... " REV. 8/9/89 - ACT TWO 16. 30 CONTINUED: RIKER Sir, I have a suggestion. CUT TO: 31 EXT. SPACE - THE ENTERPRISE (OPTICAL) Orbiting Mintaka Three. RIKER (V.O.) First officer's log, Stardate 43125.3. Counselor Troi and I are beaming down to Mintaka Three to locate Doctor Palmer and determine the extent of the cultural contamination. 32 EXT. MINTAKA THREE - SECLUDED AREA - DAY (OPTICAL) The same spot where Liko was beamed down. Riker and Troi MATERIALIZE, along with two bundles of woven cloth. Riker and Troi have been made up as Mintakans, complete with angled eyebrows and pointed ears. They're wearing typical Mintakan garb: austere, mannerly outfits of woven cloth. RIKER (V.O.) Doctor Crusher has temporarily altered our features and skin color. She's also implanted subcutaneous communicators so that any transmissions we receive will be inaudible to the Mintakans. Riker and Troi look around. No one's in sight. RIKER Riker to Enterprise -- do you read? Riker hears Data's com voice via direct bone conduction, so it sounds unusually thin and faint: DATA'S COM VOICE (filtered) Perfectly, Commander. I will be monitoring you continuously. STAR TREK: "Who Watches... " REV. 8/14/89 - ACT TWO 17. 32 CONTINUED: Riker and Troi pick up their bundles of woven cloth. TROI Mintakan emotions are quite interesting. Like the Vulcans, they have highly ordered minds... A very sensible people. They start to walk. Riker automatically takes the lead. Troi stops him, moves in front of him. MOVE with them as they walk. TROI (cont'd) (enjoying this) For example, Mintakan women precede their mates. It's a signal to other women. RIKER "This man's taken; get your own?" TROI Not precisely... More like, "if you want his services, I'm the one to negotiate with." RIKER What kinds of "services?" TROI All kinds. RIKER (amused) Ah. They are a sensible race. Riker and Troi come around a rock formation and find themselves on a path leading to the assembly hall area. 32A EXT. MINTAKA THREE - ASSEMBLY HALL - DAY A few MINTAKANS are entering the area. Riker and Troi ENTER and follow the Mintakans toward the assembly hall. STAR TREK: "Who Watches... " REV. 8/9/89 - ACT TWO 17A. 33 INT. MINTAKA THREE - ASSEMBLY HALL - DAY Assorted MINTAKANS are gathered around Liko and Oji. This is the "town hall" where Mintakans meet daily -- both to barter and to talk, philosophize, exchange information, and debate ideas. Among the listeners is NURIA, an attractive, middle-aged Mintakan woman who's the leader of this community; the Mintakans respect her calm, clear-headed intelligence and give extra weight to her opinions. STAR TREK: "Who Watches... " REV. 8/14/89 - ACT TWO 18. 33 CONTINUED: Next to Liko and Oji is FENTO, an elderly Mintakan man who's the community's "storyteller" -- its oral historian. LIKO I understand your skepticism. Had it not happened to me, I would find it difficult to accept as well. 34 ANGLE ON RIKER AND TROI as they enter the assembly hall. OJI (O.S.) But it did happen, just as we've told you. Riker and Troi stay on the outskirts of the group. 35 WIDER as Liko turns to a skeptical Fento. LIKO Fento -- you know the legends better than anyone. Don't they speak of beings like the ones I've seen -- OJI -- who could vanish like smoke? FENTO (dubious) There are the stories of the Overseer... who could appear and disappear at will... To Liko, this is confirmation. Fento's tone, however, indicates that though he's aware of the legend, he doesn't believe it. LIKO And couldn't this Overseer heal the dead? STAR TREK: "Who Watches... " REV. 8/14/89 - ACT TWO 18A. 35 CONTINUED: FENTO (nods) He had supreme power -- or so our ancestors believed. Liko nods. That's more confirmation. STAR TREK: "Who Watches... " REV. 8/18/89 - ACT TWO 19. 35 CONTINUED: (2) LIKO I believe I've seen the Overseer... RIKER (sotto) Uh-oh... LIKO He is called the Picard. MURMURS from the Mintakans. This is heady stuff. Riker and Troi exchange an "oh, hell... " glance and speak in low tones: TROI His memory is intact. RIKER The procedure didn't work. 36 NEW ANGLE as Nuria steps forward. NURIA Liko -- all this talk of a supernatural being... No one's believed that for countless generations. Just as we no longer believe the stars control our fates, or that the spirits of the dead haunt the living. LIKO I'm not saying all the old beliefs are true. But I did see the Picard, and I was restored to life. More MURMURS from the Mintakans. 37 OMITTED STAR TREK: "Who Watches... " REV. 8/21/89 - ACT TWO 20-22. 38 WIDER as Riker and Troi step forward and address Liko. TROI We are visitors; we've come to trade our cloth. May we speak? NURIA Please do -- we welcome outsiders. I am Nuria. TROI I am Troi; this is Riker. (to Liko) You've had a very interesting dream. LIKO (scoffs) Dream? It was real! OJI My father and I both witnessed these beings. TROI If you are father and daughter, you may have shared the same dream. LIKO That is not reasonable. RIKER Is it any less reasonable than being magically propelled to a strange place by "the Picard?" The Mintakans exchange looks. Riker makes a good point. Then: HALI (O.S.) Nuria! The Mintakans turn -- 39 thru OMITTED 41 STAR TREK: "Who Watches... " REV. 8/21/89 - ACT TWO 23-23A. 42 NEW ANGLE as HALI and one more MINTAKAN HUNTER (both with elaborately-designed crossbows) come into view at the entrance to the assembly hall -- carrying a bedraggled and unconscious Palmer. Surprised reactions from the Mintakans. Liko and Oji are triumphant. LIKO It has to be -- Palmer -- the one the Picard wished to find. The Mintakans rush as one to gather around Palmer, peer at him, touch his skin and clothing. They're not aggressive -- merely curious about the stranger. NURIA (examining Picard) Remarkable. You were speaking the truth. LIKO The Picard will be pleased. STAR TREK: "Who Watches... " REV. 8/21/89 - ACT TWO 24. 43 thru OMITTED 44 45 ON RIKER AND TROI exchanging a look. So much for their cogent arguments. RIKER Riker to Picard. 46 INT. SICKBAY Picard and Beverly in f.g. Warren lies motionless on her biobed, her vital signs dangerously low. STAR TREK: "Who Watches... " REV. 8/21/89 - ACT TWO 25. 46 CONTINUED: Barron, in a hospital gown, is standing next to Warren. PICARD Go ahead, Number One. 47 INTERCUTS - SICKBAY AND MINTAKA THREE RIKER We have a problem. PICARD The contamination? RIKER It's worse than we suspected. The Mintakans are beginning to believe in a god -- and the one they've chosen... is you. PUSH IN on Picard's appalled reaction, and -- FADE OUT. END OF ACT TWO STAR TREK: "Who Watches... " REV. 8/14/89 - ACT THREE 26. ACT THREE FADE IN: 48 INT. SICKBAY As before. BARRON Picard -- you must beam Palmer aboard immediately. Without medical attention -- PICARD It's not that simple. He's surrounded by Mintakans. If he dematerializes before their eyes... BARRON ... it will slightly increase the cultural contamination which already exists. A small price for saving Palmer's life. Picard thinks it over, addresses the com panel: PICARD Number One -- is there any chance of your freeing Palmer and transporting up unseen? 49 INTERCUTS - SICKBAY AND MINTAKA THREE Riker and Troi, still out of earshot of the Mintakans, survey the area. RIKER We can try... PICARD Try hard. Picard out. 50 ANGLE ON BARRON scowling at Picard. STAR TREK: "Who Watches... " REV. 8/21/89 - ACT THREE 27. 50 CONTINUED: BARRON Picard, I must protest. You're endangering Palmer with this delay. PICARD I'm aware of that. But each of us -- including Doctor Palmer -- took an oath to uphold the Prime Directive... if necessary, with our lives. 51 INT. MINTAKA THREE - ASSEMBLY HALL - DAY Nuria, Liko, Oji, Hali, Fento, and the other Mintakans are still gazing at the unconscious Palmer. Riker stands nearby; Troi is not present. Hali explains: HALI We followed a hornbuck into a cave. The stranger was there -- asleep. NURIA This Palmer is one of the Overseer's servants? LIKO Yes -- the Picard has many servants. (to Fento) Isn't that true? FENTO (still skeptical) According to the legends. But if Palmer is a servant of the Overseer, what was he doing in the cave? OJI Perhaps he ran away. HALI Or he failed the Picard somehow and was hiding from him. LIKO We should bind him in case he wakes and tries to escape. STAR TREK: "Who Watches... " REV. 8/21/89 - ACT THREE 27A. 51 CONTINUED: RIKER It's senseless to hold this stranger captive. This Overseer talk is nothing more than an old superstition. Fento nods agreement. NURIA I disagree. All the evidence suggests the Overseer does exist. STAR TREK: "Who Watches... " REV. 8/15/89 - ACT THREE 28. 51 CONTINUED: (2) LIKO And I heard the Picard say he wanted to find Palmer. OJI Then by keeping Palmer safe, we will please the Picard. LIKO And he'll grant us favors in return. NURIA Favors? Nuria raises an eyebrow, looks to Fento for elaboration. Fento shrugs: FENTO The Overseer was said to be all-powerful. He could provide gentle winters, plentiful hunting, fertile crops... anything. LIKO (quiet intensity) He could even bring back those who have died. Oji looks at Liko as Liko's meaning dawns. Is it possible... ? Liko smiles warmly back at Oji: yes, it is. The Mintakans look to Nuria, who reaches a decision: NURIA We will keep Palmer for the Picard. A BUZZ of approval from the Mintakans -- good decision. STAR TREK: "Who Watches... " REV. 8/14/89 - ACT THREE 29. 52 NEW ANGLE Troi ENTERS. TROI I've seen another one -- like Palmer! LIKO Another servant of the Picard? TROI (nods) He's headed toward the caves! NURIA Fento -- stay and bind Palmer. Troi, Nuria, Liko, Oji, Hali, and the others EXIT the assembly hall. 53 EXT. MINTAKA THREE - ASSEMBLY HALL - DAY Troi leads Nuria, Liko, Oji, Hali, and the others off toward the hills. 54 INT. MINTAKA THREE - ASSEMBLY HALL - DAY Fento leans over Palmer, starts tying him up with a length of woven rope. Riker steps up next to Fento. RIKER Excuse me... that knot won't hold. If I may assist... FENTO Please do. As Riker unties the rope: RIKER The trick is to make a knot that tightens under pressure. Here, I'll show you... STAR TREK: "Who Watches... " REV. 8/11/89 - ACT THREE 30. 55 EXT. MINTAKA THREE - PATH - DAY Nuria, Liko, Oji, Hali, and the others are following Troi. Oji suddenly notices the sun's position, stops: OJI Father -- the sun's reaching its zenith. If I don't go to measure... LIKO Go. Oji turns around, rushes back the way she came. 56 INT. MINTAKA THREE - ASSEMBLY HALL - DAY Fento has been bound and gagged by Riker. RIKER Forgive me, friend... but the stranger must be set free. Riker picks up Palmer in a fireman's carry and starts off. 57 EXT. MINTAKA THREE - ASSEMBLY HALL - DAY Riker EMERGES from the assembly hall, carrying Palmer, and heads for a path out of the area (not the same path Troi took). STAR TREK: "Who Watches... " REV. 8/14/89 - ACT THREE 30A. 57 CONTINUED: Riker sees Oji ENTER the area at the far end. RIKER Riker to Enterprise. Lock on and prepare to beam us directly to Sickbay, but wait for my signal. DATA'S COM VOICE (filtered) Acknowledged, Commander. Oji sees Riker -- OJI Riker? Riker ignores her, keeps heading out. STAR TREK: "Who Watches... " REV. 8/11/89 - ACT THREE 31. 58 EXT. MINTAKA THREE - PATH - DAY Troi leading the others as before. OJI (O.S.) (distant) Riker! Stop! NURIA Oji? OJI (O.S.) (distant) It's Riker -- he's taking Palmer! Nuria puts it together instantly, whirls to face Troi: NURIA Yari -- don't let her escape. The Mintakan hunter levels his crossbow at Troi, takes her captive. The others follow Nuria as she charges back toward the assembly hall area. 59 OMITTED 60 EXT. MINTAKA THREE - ASSEMBLY HALL - DAY Riker is about to reach a path through the rocks surrounding the assembly hall area. Nuria and the others ENTER the area at the other end. Hali levels his crossbow to take a shot at Riker, but Riker ducks between the rocks, EXITS the area. The Mintakans pursue. STAR TREK: "Who Watches... " REV. 8/24/89 - ACT THREE 32. 61 OMITTED 62 EXT. MINTAKA THREE - ANOTHER PATH - DAY (OPTICAL) Riker carrying Palmer; Nuria and the Mintakans in pursuit. Finally, Riker finds what he's been looking for: a spot where he's momentarily out of sight of the Mintakans. RIKER I'm clear. Energize! Riker and Palmer DEMATERIALIZE. A moment after they're gone, Nuria and the others ENTER, rush down the path past where Riker disappeared, and keep going. 63 OMITTED 64 INT. SICKBAY (OPTICAL) as Riker and Palmer MATERIALIZE in Sickbay. Beverly and a medic help Riker put Palmer on a biobed. Riker stretches his aching muscles. RIKER Data. Has Counselor Troi beamed up? DATA'S COM VOICE Negative, Commander. Sensors show she's in the midst of a group of Mintakans. RIKER Damn. Riker EXITS. 65 INT. MINTAKA THREE - ASSEMBLY HALL - DAY Hali uses a knife to cut Fento's ropes. Nuria, Liko, Oji, and other Mintakans surround Troi. Liko's concerned; Troi is calm. NURIA Hali -- find Riker and Palmer. Hali motions for the hunter and other Mintakans to accompany him; they EXIT. Liko accosts Troi: STAR TREK: "Who Watches... " REV. 8/10/89 - ACT THREE 32A. 65 CONTINUED: LIKO Why? Why did you and Riker take Palmer from us? STAR TREK: "Who Watches... " REV. 8/14/89 - ACT THREE 33. 65 CONTINUED: (2) TROI We did not "take" Palmer... 66 INT. MAIN BRIDGE Picard, Data, and Worf are silent, listening to Troi's communicator. Riker ENTERS. TROI'S COM VOICE ... we set him free. Riker and I don't believe these fables about the Overseer. LIKO'S COM VOICE Don't you realize what you've done? 67 INTERCUTS - BRIDGE AND MINTAKA THREE LIKO You've angered the Picard -- and we may all suffer for it! (to Fento) Weren't there stories of the Overseer destroying those who offended him? FENTO Stories. Nothing more. NURIA Liko, we'll get Palmer back. Riker was carrying him -- they can't have gone far. LIKO Still, the Picard may blame us for Palmer's escape. (points to Troi) Perhaps we should punish her -- to let the Overseer know that she and Riker acted alone. NURIA We'll keep Troi captive. STAR TREK: "Who Watches... " REV. 8/11/89 - ACT THREE 34. 67 CONTINUED: LIKO That's not enough. NURIA You would have us harm her? Liko looks sadly at Troi. He's not a zealot out for blood -- he's concerned for the future of his people. This isn't an easy thing to suggest, but -- in Liko's eyes -- it's imperative. LIKO If it will hold off the Picard's anger -- yes. I've seen how powerful he is... 68 ON NURIA weighing Liko's argument as the anxious Mintakans look to her for orders. Sometimes being the leader is a hell of a burden. NURIA (slowly) I am unwilling to hurt Troi needlessly. (a beat) We will wait for Hali and the others to return. OJI And if they don't find Palmer? NURIA (looking at Troi) Then we may have to do as Liko suggests. 69 INT. OBSERVATION LOUNGE Picard, Riker, and Barron. PICARD (to Barron) You believe the Mintakans are capable of harming Troi? STAR TREK: "Who Watches... " REV. 8/14/89 - ACT THREE 34A. 69 CONTINUED: BARRON (nods) They are not normally a violent people... but these are extraordinary circumstances. They're trying to comprehend what they believe to be a god. STAR TREK: "Who Watches... " REV. 8/14/89 - ACT THREE 35. 69 CONTINUED: (2) PICARD Recommendations? BARRON The Mintakans wish to please the Overseer, but they can only guess what he wants. They need a sign. PICARD Are you suggesting... BARRON (nods) You must go down to Mintaka Three. RIKER Masquerading as a god? PICARD Out of the question. The Prime Directive -- BARRON Has already been violated. The damage is done; all we can do now is minimize it. PICARD By sanctioning their false beliefs? BARRON By giving them guidelines... letting them know what the Overseer expects of them. PICARD I cannot -- I will not impose a set of commandments on these people. To do so violates the essence of the Prime Directive. BARRON Like it or not, we've rekindled the Mintakans' belief in the Overseer. RIKER (to Barron) And you're saying that belief will eventually develop into a religion. STAR TREK: "Who Watches... " REV. 8/14/89 - ACT THREE 35A. 69 CONTINUED: (3) BARRON It's inevitable. And without guidance, that religion could degenerate into inquisitions... holy wars... chaos. STAR TREK: "Who Watches... " REV. 8/14/89 - ACT THREE 36. 69 CONTINUED: (4) PICARD Your own reports describe how rational these people are. Millennia ago, they abandoned all belief in the supernatural. And now you're asking me to sabotage that achievement... send them back into the Dark Ages of fear and superstition. (adamant) No. We must undo the damage we've caused. (turning to Riker) Number One -- tell me about the group's leader. RIKER Nuria is exceptionally fair-minded and sensible... the Mintakans trust her judgment. If we could convince her we're not gods... PICARD ... she might be able to persuade the others. BARRON And how do you propose to convince her? PICARD She sees the Picard as a magical figure. I'm going to show her how the magic works. (a beat) Bring her aboard. STAR TREK: "Who Watches... " REV. 8/10/89 - ACT THREE 36A. 70 INT. MINTAKA THREE - ASSEMBLY HALL - DAY Troi is being guarded by two Mintakans. Liko and Oji are standing nearby. Nuria is walking away, toward the exit. 71 ON TROI Troi doesn't react as Data's voice pops into her ear: DATA'S COM VOICE (filtered) Counselor, sensors indicate five Mintakans in your immediate vicinity. (MORE) STAR TREK: "Who Watches... " REV. 8/14/89 - ACT THREE 37. 71 CONTINUED: DATA'S COM VOICE (cont'd) Four are motionless; the fifth is eight meters away, proceeding south. Is Nuria one of these five? TROI ("yes") Mmm-hmm. 72 INT. MAIN BRIDGE Picard, Riker, Worf, supernumeraries. Data reacts to the odd sound Troi just made. DATA Was that intended to be an affirmative? RIKER (a smile) Yes, Data, it was. 73 INTERCUTS - BRIDGE AND MINTAKA THREE DATA Is Nuria the closest of the five? TROI ("nope") Mmm-mmm. Data reacts, puzzled again. Riker "translates": RIKER Negative. DATA Is Nuria the one in motion? TROI ("yes") Mmm-hmm. RIKER Lock sensors on Nuria. DATA Locked on, Commander. We can beam Nuria aboard at will. STAR TREK: "Who Watches... " REV. 8/16/89 - ACT THREE 38. 73 CONTINUED: Picard gets to his feet. PICARD Data, when sensors indicate she's alone, beam her to Transporter Room One. DATA Aye, sir. Picard EXITS into a turbolift. 74 EXT. SPACE - THE ENTERPRISE (OPTICAL) In close orbit to Mintaka Three. 75 INT. TRANSPORTER ROOM Picard ENTERS, approaches the ENSIGN at the console. PICARD Ensign Hoy, I'll handle this. The Ensign EXITS and Picard takes his place behind the console. Picard energizes. 76 ANGLE ON THE TRANSPORTER PAD (OPTICAL) as Nuria MATERIALIZES -- and GASPS in shock. What's happened? Where the hell is she? PICARD (O.S.) Nuria -- don't be afraid. Nuria turns to face -- 77 WIDER Picard steps forward, nods reassuringly. PICARD No one's going to harm you. Nuria can barely speak: NURIA Who... ? PICARD My name is Jean-Luc Picard. STAR TREK: "Who Watches... " REV. 8/7/89 - ACT THREE 39. 78 ON NURIA astonished. She sinks to her knees in fear and reverence, and we -- FADE OUT. END OF ACT THREE STAR TREK: "Who Watches... " REV. 8/10/89 - ACT FOUR 40. ACT FOUR FADE IN: 79 INT. TRANSPORTER ROOM Nuria is still on her knees on the transporter pad. Picard takes another step. She averts her eyes. PICARD Please -- get up. No response. PICARD (cont'd) Get up! You don't kneel to me. NURIA You do not wish it? PICARD I do not deserve it. Picard extends a hand. Slowly, timidly, Nuria takes it. Picard lifts her to her feet, stands eye-to-eye with her, clasps her hand. PICARD (cont'd) Look at me. Feel the warmth of my hand, the rhythm of my pulse. I am not a supreme being -- I am flesh and blood, like you. Nuria shakes her head -- inconceivable. NURIA Not like me... PICARD Like you! Different in appearance, yes. But we are both living beings -- we are born, we grow, we live, we die. In all the ways that matter, we are alike. NURIA But -- you are the Picard! Nuria gazes at him, uncomprehending. Picard smiles. STAR TREK: "Who Watches... " REV. 8/23/89 - ACT FOUR 41-41A. 79 CONTINUED: PICARD Let me show you my people. (ALTERNATE:) Let me show you something. Picard leads Nuria to the door, which OPENS. Nuria jumps back, startled -- then looks at Picard, gathers courage from his presence. In the corridor, a CREWMEMBER passes. NURIA What a wondrous place this is. Even the doors obey your commands. PICARD It is wondrous -- but not miraculous. The doors merely work differently from the ones you know. Picard and Nuria EXIT into the corridor. 80 thru OMITTED 81 STAR TREK: "Who Watches... " REV. 8/10/89 - ACT FOUR 42. 82 OMITTED 83 INT. OBSERVATION LOUNGE (OPTICAL) Picard and Nuria are at a window, looking at the magnificent sight of Mintaka Three set amid thousands of stars. Nuria is overwhelmed. So many wonders... NURIA That is my home? PICARD Seen from far, far above. NURIA Yet we don't fall. (a beat) I never imagined I would see the clouds... from the other side. Your powers are truly boundless. She looks like she's ready to drop to her knees again, and that's not the attitude Picard is trying to inspire. He SIGHS, tries again: PICARD Nuria -- your people live in huts. Was it always so? NURIA No. We have found remnants of tools in caves. Our ancestors must have lived there. PICARD Why do you now live in huts? NURIA Huts are better. Caves are dark and wet -- PICARD If huts are better, why did your people ever live in caves? NURIA The most reasonable explanation is that at one time we didn't know how to make huts. STAR TREK: "Who Watches... " REV. 8/11/89 - ACT FOUR 43. 83 CONTINUED: PICARD (nods) Just as there was a time when you didn't know how to make cloth -- or bows. NURIA That is reasonable. PICARD Someone invented huts. Someone invented the bow. And they taught others, who taught their children, who taught their children's children... Nuria mulls it over. Makes sense. She nods. PICARD (cont'd) Now suppose one of your cave-dwelling ancestors could see you as you are today. What would she think? NURIA I don't know. PICARD Put yourself in her place. You have a power she lacks. You can kill a hornbuck from a great distance. NURIA Only because I have a bow. PICARD She has never seen a bow -- it doesn't yet exist in her world. To you, it's a simple tool. To her, it's magic. NURIA (musing) I suppose she might think so. PICARD And how would she react to you? NURIA I think... she would fear me. STAR TREK: "Who Watches... " REV. 8/21/89 - ACT FOUR 44-44A. 83 CONTINUED: (2) PICARD Just as you fear me. Nuria nods slowly. Picard's made his point. After a long beat: NURIA (matter-of-fact) I do not fear you any longer. PICARD Good. My people once lived in caves, too. We learned to build huts... and, later, to build ships such as this one. NURIA Perhaps some day my people will travel above the sky... PICARD Of that, I have absolutely no doubt. 84 INT. MINTAKA THREE - ASSEMBLY HALL - NIGHT A fire has been lit in a fire pit. Flashes of LIGHTNING outside are followed by distant THUNDER. Liko, Oji, and Fento are worried. LIKO It's not the season for lightning. It must be a warning... FENTO (protests) We've had storms at this time of year before. ANOTHER BOLT FRACTURES the night outside. The Mintakans react. OJI Not like this one... STAR TREK: "Who Watches... " REV. 8/21/89 - ACT FOUR 45. 84 CONTINUED: LIKO It must mean something! (mounting anxiety) The Picard is angry with us. He blames us for Palmer's escape. FENTO Liko -- we don't know that the Overseer is responsible for this storm... LIKO (interrupts, panicking) Will he also send floods? My wife died in last year's floods -- will we all die now? Still more THUNDER. Liko makes a decision: LIKO (cont'd) We must find Nuria. As Liko, Oji, and Fento EXIT, the THUNDER CRASHES ever closer. 85 INT. READY ROOM Nuria and Picard are looking at the model of the Stargazer. NURIA Picard... you have shown me wonders I could never have imagined... and I am grateful beyond words... but might I request something for my people? Picard is moved by her devotion to her people. STAR TREK: "Who Watches... " REV. 8/11/89 - ACT FOUR 45A. 85 CONTINUED: PICARD You are indeed a leader. STAR TREK: "Who Watches... " REV. 8/14/89 - ACT FOUR 46. 85 CONTINUED: (2) NURIA You have shown me such generosity; I wish my people could share in it. (a beat) Six Mintakans died in a flood last winter. Four of them were children. Picard grows wary as he sees what's coming: NURIA (cont'd) Would you bring them back to life? Picard takes a long beat before replying: PICARD That is beyond my power. NURIA Why? You restored Liko's life. Did the six who died offend you in some way? (a new thought) Or have I offended you? Should I have ordered the death of Troi? Please -- if there is anything I can do to change your mind... 86 ON PICARD A sobering realization. PICARD (almost to himself) I've failed to get through to you, haven't I? Despite all my efforts... Nuria looks at Picard, her expression pleading for him to do her people this simple favor. And all Picard can do is look helplessly back at her... 87 INT. MINTAKA THREE - ASSEMBLY HALL - NIGHT Oji and Fento ENTER, rush up to a desperate Liko as LIGHTNING CRACKLES outside. STAR TREK: "Who Watches... " REV. 8/11/89 - ACT FOUR 47. 87 CONTINUED: OJI Nuria can't be found. No one knows where she's gone. Hali and the Mintakan hunter ENTER, out of breath. LIKO Hali! Any sign of Palmer or Riker? HALI (shaking his head) They've escaped us. We searched everywhere. The LOUDEST THUNDER CRASH; this time, directly overhead. OJI What do we do now? After a moment of indecision: LIKO As the Picard wishes. Punish those responsible. Liko holds out his hand to Hali -- "give me your crossbow." The Mintakans are astonished. FENTO Nuria would not allow -- LIKO Nuria isn't here -- and we can't wait. More ear-splitting THUNDER. Hali looks from Liko to the others, reluctantly makes up his mind, hands his crossbow to Liko. Liko marches off toward the captive Troi. 88 CLOSE ON TROI watching impassively as Liko strides purposefully toward her, crossbow in hand... FADE OUT. END OF ACT FOUR STAR TREK: "Who Watches... " REV. 8/24/89 - ACT FIVE 48-48A. ACT FIVE FADE IN: 89 thru OMITTED 90 91 INT. SICKBAY Warren has started to spasm. A medic is at Warren's side. Barron looks on helplessly. Beverly ENTERS, tapping her communicator as she crosses -- BEVERLY Crusher to Picard. I think we're going to lose Warren. PICARD'S COM VOICE On my way. Warren's spasms worsen. Beverly looks at the monitor. Not good. The medic has a hypo ready; Beverly glances at it, shakes her head. A massive convulsion shakes Warren's body. The vital signs are dropping. Beverly and the medic can do little more than wipe the sweat from Warren's brow and keep Warren restrained. It's any doctor's nightmare -- being forced to watch from the sidelines as the patient fights the final battle. Picard ENTERS. Nuria is right behind him. STAR TREK: "Who Watches... " REV. 8/21/89 - ACT FIVE 49. 92 ON WARREN Another spasm. Her eyes open. She tries to speak, but hasn't the strength. Beverly motions for Barron to stand near so Warren can see him. Warren can barely focus -- but she recognizes Barron, tries to take his hand. Barron clasps her tiny, frail hand and holds on. STAR TREK: "Who Watches... " REV. 8/10/89 - ACT FIVE 50. 92 CONTINUED: BARRON I'm here, Mary. Beverly watches the vital signs. Almost nil. BEVERLY (to Medic) Prepare two cc's of norep. The medic readies a hypo. Warren is hit with a seizure; her eyes close as a wave of pain racks her body. Again she tries to speak -- nothing. With a last effort of will, she forces her eyes open, looks up at Barron -- -- and then, mercifully, it's over; Warren goes limp; her vital signs drop to zero. Beverly takes the hypo, injects Warren's carotid artery, but it's futile and she knows it. BEVERLY (cont'd) (to Barron) I'm sorry. Barron sits down, bows his head in grief. 93 ON PICARD AND NURIA Picard lowers his head, grieves over their loss. Nuria, profoundly moved, looks from Picard to Barron to Beverly -- their remorse is palpable. NURIA (quietly) Picard? Picard doesn't respond. NURIA (cont'd) You could not save her. PICARD No. NURIA You do have limits. You are not masters of life and death. STAR TREK: "Who Watches... " REV. 8/21/89 - ACT FIVE 51. 93 CONTINUED: PICARD No, we are not. (a beat) We can cure many diseases and repair many injuries. We can extend life... but despite all our knowledge -- all our advances -- we are just as mortal as you are... just as powerless to prevent the inevitable. Nuria gazes at Picard as if seeing him for the first time -- empathizing with his remorse, his helplessness, his humanity. NURIA You are a remarkable people. But you are not superior beings. (a beat) My people must be made to understand that. Picard nods agreement. 94 INT. MINTAKA THREE - ASSEMBLY HALL - NIGHT As before. The THUNDER continues. Liko steps up to the captive Troi, followed by Oji, Fento, and Hali. TROI Liko -- you don't want to kill me. LIKO I have no choice. I must do as the Picard wishes. TROI Are you sure you know what he wants? Liko is torn. No, he's not sure. TROI (cont'd) (after a beat; to the others) That's one problem with believing in a supernatural being... trying to determine what he wants. A PEAL of THUNDER. STAR TREK: "Who Watches... " REV. 8/21/89 - ACT FIVE 51A. 94 CONTINUED: LIKO We must do something. OJI But what if we do the wrong thing? 95 NEW ANGLE Liko, agonized, picks up the crossbow and moves toward Troi. STAR TREK: "Who Watches... " REV. 8/10/89 - ACT FIVE 52. 95 CONTINUED: As the Mintakans part, clearing the way, Liko makes an invocation: LIKO Picard. We need your guidance. Is it your wish that this woman should die? (a beat) Answer us! Speak! PICARD (O.S.) Liko! Everyone turns to see -- 96 ANGLE ON PICARD ENTERING, accompanied by Nuria. Note: This is no grand entrance of a god. Quite the opposite -- they simply walk in the entrance. 97 WIDER Liko sighs with relief. LIKO The Picard! The Overseer has come! Picard steps up. PICARD No, Liko -- I am not the Overseer. I am a man... a traveller from a faraway land. Nothing more. Strange talk from a god. Liko's confused. LIKO But you restored my life! I am your servant. PICARD You are no one's servant. I deserve neither your obedience nor your worship. STAR TREK: "Who Watches... " REV. 8/11/89 - ACT FIVE 53. 97 CONTINUED: LIKO Why are you trying to deceive me? NURIA Picard speaks the truth. I've visited his people... I've seen how they live... how they die. When death takes their loved ones, they are as helpless as we are. LIKO Then how was I brought back to life? NURIA You were not dead. Picard's people have knowledge we lack -- they can heal wounds that we cannot. Liko whirls upon Picard. LIKO You can bring people back from the dead. Show them, Picard. You can bring my wife back to me. PICARD I can't. LIKO Why? Why won't you do this for me? Have I failed you somehow? Are you angry with me? PICARD I am not angry. LIKO Then I beg you -- bring her back to life! Picard answers with silence. LIKO (cont'd) I will give you my life in exchange! Please -- take back what you've given me -- and give it to her! Let her live! STAR TREK: "Who Watches... " REV. 8/10/89 - ACT FIVE 54. 97 CONTINUED: (2) PICARD It is beyond my power. LIKO Nothing is beyond your power! You are the Overseer -- I'll prove it! Liko raises the crossbow, aims it at Picard. Nuria, shocked, starts toward Liko -- NURIA Liko! 98 ON PICARD as he blocks Nuria with his arm. PICARD Go ahead, Liko. If I am all-powerful, you can't hurt me. (a beat) If, however, I am telling the truth and I am mortal... you will kill me. Picard lets that sink in. PICARD (cont'd) But if the only proof you will believe is my life -- then shoot. Liko doesn't respond, keeps the crossbow aimed at Picard's heart. NURIA Don't do it, Liko! Picard remains unflinching. 99 CLOSE ON LIKO A jumble of emotions -- anger, frustration, fear, and doubt swirl in Liko's mind. OJI Father -- no! Oji grabs Liko's arm to stop him. The crossbow fires. STAR TREK: "Who Watches... " REV. 8/16/89 - ACT FIVE 55. 100 ON PICARD as the bolt strikes him in the shoulder -- hurling him to the ground. 101 WIDER as Nuria rushes to Picard's side. Picard writhes in pain. Nuria touches his wound and holds up her bloody hand for all to see. Liko drops his crossbow and steps up to Picard. Liko's shock gives way to grief as he stares at the wounded man lying in agony. 102 NEW ANGLE The Mintakans approach Picard with curiosity. The fear and reverence are gone. 102A EXT. SPACE - THE ENTERPRISE (OPTICAL) Orbiting Mintaka Three. PICARD (V.O.) Captain's log, supplemental. Before we dismantle the observation post and depart, I must make one last visit to Mintaka Three. 103 EXT. MINTAKA THREE - DUCK BLIND - DAY (OPTICAL) Picard, wearing a sling on his arm, stands before the rockface. (His wounded shoulder has been healed in Sickbay.) Above and behind Picard is the (camouflaged) rockface. Gathered are Nuria, Liko, Oji, Hali, Fento, and several other Mintakans. One of the children hands Picard some woven cloth. Picard nods his appreciation, then taps his communicator. PICARD Now, Mister La Forge. The rockface camouflage DISAPPEARS, REVEALING the duck blind. The natives are surprised -- but not overwhelmed. STAR TREK: "Who Watches... " REV. 8/10/89 - ACT FIVE 56. 103 CONTINUED: NURIA What is it? PICARD A place where we could watch your people. FENTO Why? PICARD To study you. To understand your ways. NURIA Why should a people so advanced want to learn about us? PICARD Because we were once as you are. To study you is to understand ourselves. FENTO But why did you have to hide from us? LIKO (realizing) Because their presence would affect us... as it affected me. Picard is pleased that Liko has made this leap. PICARD It is our highest law that we shall not interfere with other cultures. OJI Then revealing yourselves was an accident. PICARD Yes. And now we must leave. OJI Why? There's so much you could teach us... STAR TREK: "Who Watches... " REV. 8/11/89 - ACT FIVE 57. 103 CONTINUED: (2) PICARD (gently) But that would also be interfering. You must progress on your own. NURIA As we will. You've shown us that nothing is beyond our reach. PICARD Not even the stars. NURIA I wish you good journeys, Picard. Remember my people. PICARD Always. 104 EXT. SPACE - THE ENTERPRISE (OPTICAL) as she breaks orbit and leaves Mintaka Three behind. FADE OUT. END OF ACT FIVE THE END STAR TREK: THE NEXT GENERATION "The Bonding" #40273-153 Written by Ronald D. Moore Directed by Winrich Kolbe THE WRITING CREDITS MAY NOT BE FINAL AND SHOULD NOT BE USED FOR PUBLICITY OR ADVERTISING PURPOSES WITHOUT FIRST CHECKING WITH THE TELEVISION LEGAL DEPARTMENT. Copyright 1989 Paramount Pictures Corporation. All Rights Reserved. This script is not for publication or reproduction. No one is authorized to dispose of same. If lost or destroyed, please notify the Script Department. 3RD REVISED FINAL DRAFT AUGUST 23, 1989 STAR TREK: "The Bonding" - REV. 8/23/89 - CAST STAR TREK: THE NEXT GENERATION "The Bonding" CAST PICARD RIKER MARLA ASTER DATA BEVERLY TROI GEORDI WORF WESLEY O'BRIEN JEREMY ASTER (age 10) TEACHER Non-Speaking SECOND TEACHER SIX N.D. CREWMEMBERS TWO SECURITY GUARDS TWO ARCHEOLOGICAL OFFICERS TWO TECHNICIANS SEVERAL STUDENTS (ages 8 to 13) MEDICAL ENSIGN BARTENDER STAR TREK: "The Bonding" - REV. 8/23/89 - SETS STAR TREK: THE NEXT GENERATION "The Bonding" SETS INTERIORS EXTERIORS USS ENTERPRISE USS ENTERPRISE MAIN BRIDGE TRANSPORTER ROOM PLANET CORRIDOR SICKBAY CAPTAIN'S READY ROOM ENGINEERING TEN FORWARD WORF'S QUARTERS ASTER QUARTERS CLASSROOM TEACHER'S OFFIC COMPUTER ROOM TURBOLIFT ASTER HOME LIVING/DINING ROOM STAR TREK: "The Bonding" - REV. 8/23/89 - PRONUNCIATION STAR TREK: THE NEXT GENERATION "The Bonding" PRONUNCIATION GUIDE R'uustai ROOSE-tie STAR TREK: "The Bonding" - REV. 8/24/89 - TEASER 1. STAR TREK: THE NEXT GENERATION "The Bonding" TEASER FADE IN: 1 EXT. SPACE - THE ENTERPRISE (OPTICAL) The ship is in standard orbit over an old and scarred planet. The world is predominantly gray with overtones of flecked green and brown and conveys an impression of an old battlefield coming back to life. CUT TO: 2 INT. MAIN BRIDGE PICARD and RIKER are standing near an access station observing the play of information across one of the monitors. WESLEY is at the Conn, DATA is at Ops and TROI is in the command area, while SEVERAL N.D. CREWMEMBERS are at duty stations or passing through the Bridge. DATA Away Team reporting in, Commander. Lieutenant Worf standing by. RIKER This is Riker, report Lieutenant. WORF'S COM VOICE The archeologists have identified the markings in these caverns. This planet was apparently once home to a race known as the Koinonians. PICARD What do we know about them, Data? DATA The Koinonians were an intelligent culture which became embroiled in a war that lasted several generations. Our best evidence indicates they destroyed themselves. STAR TREK: "The Bonding" - REV. 8/23/89 - TEASER 2. 2 CONTINUED: WORF'S COM VOICE We have completed our survey of the third tunnel and will proceed into the ceremonial chamber. RIKER Affirmative. Enterprise out. PICARD Destroyed themselves, Data? DATA According to historical records. This will be the first opportunity for a Federation team... At this point, Troi's eyes suddenly go wide. TROI Captain! Beam them up quickly! They--- Before she can complete her warning, the voice of Worf breaks in over the COM channel. WORF'S COM VOICE Emergency beam-up! Enterprise, emergency! Injuries. Away--- PICARD Transporter Room! O'BRIEN'S COM VOICE I've got them, Captain. PICARD Beam them straight to Sickbay. Doctor Crusher, incoming wounded. There is a tense pause while they wait for word. Troi senses what has happened and shakes her head sadly when Riker looks at her. CUT TO: 2A INT. SICKBAY (OPTICAL) DOCTOR CRUSHER and a MEDICAL ENSIGN move to the Away Team as four people MATERIALIZE. STAR TREK: "The Bonding" - REV. 8/23/89 - TEASER 3. 2A CONTINUED: WORF is crouched in a defensive position over the prone and motionless form of LIEUTENANT MARLA ASTER, a woman in her early thirties. Worf's phaser is out and at the ready while his uniform is singed and slightly torn, blood flows from a small wound in his shoulder. Behind him are TWO N.D. CREWMEMBERS, who are archeological officers. Beverly and Medical Supernumeraries move into action... CUT TO: 3 OMITTED 4 INT. MAIN BRIDGE While Troi is already sure of the result, the rest of the Bridge crew waits for word from Sickbay. BEVERLY'S COM VOICE Away Team is aboard, Captain. (beat) One dead on arrival. Picard and the Bridge crew react. FADE OUT. END OF TEASER STAR TREK: "The Bonding" - REV. 9/1/89 - ACT ONE 4. ACT ONE FADE IN: 5 EXT. SPACE - THE ENTERPRISE (OPTICAL) in orbit. PICARD (V.O.) Captain's Log: Stardate 43506.5 The Enterprise remains in standard orbit while we investigate the tragedy which has struck the Away Team. CUT TO: 6 INT. SICKBAY Picard is standing in the doorway. Beverly stands over the bed holding Marla Aster's body. Worf stands nearby. His uniform bears the evidence of the recent violent encounter, blood still seeps from his wound. PICARD (V.O) (continuing) Lieutenant Marla Aster, ship's archaeologist has been killed in what should have been a routine mission. Whatever the explanation, it will not bring back a valued and trusted officer. A MEDICAL SUPERNUMERARY moves the bed Aster's body is resting on into an isolated area of Sickbay. Another member of the Away Team is being examined by Beverly in the background, as Worf makes his report to Picard. STAR TREK: "The Bonding" - REV. 9/1/89 - ACT ONE 5. 6 CONTINUED: WORF We had completed our investigation of the third tunnel. Our scans had indicated no weapons or traps of any kind. Lieutenant Aster was three meters behind me. An explosive device went off. There was no warning. Lieutenant Aster bore the full brunt of the detonation. (pause) I was in command. I bear full responsibility. PICARD Lieutenant. I have the utmost faith that you acted properly and in the best traditions of Starfleet. Beverly moves over to Worf. BEVERLY Let's take a look at that shoulder... Troi ENTERS the Sickbay. STAR TREK: "The Bonding" - REV. 9/1/89 - ACT ONE 6. 6 CONTINUED: (2) TROI Lieutenant Aster is survived by a son, Jeremy. Twelve years old. PICARD What about his father? TROI He is also deceased, Captain. Picard and Beverly exchange a glance. TROI (continuing) His only living relatives are an aunt and uncle residing on Earth. PICARD Where is the boy now? TROI In class. I've alerted the teacher to expect us. Picard acknowledges. He glances at Beverly, who is still troubled by the loss of a patient, but can identify with the Captain's unpleasant task. Picard and Troi then turn and prepare to leave the Sickbay. WORF Captain. Worf swings off the biobed. WORF (continuing) I must accompany you. I commanded the Away Team. PICARD I appreciate the offer but this is my responsibility. Worf acknowledges, unhappily... STAR TREK: "The Bonding" - REV. 8/23/89 - ACT ONE 7. 6 CONTINUED: (3) BEVERLY Go to your quarters. Rest. You're relieved of duty for twenty-four hours. Worf opens his mouth. BEVERLY (continuing) That's an order. Worf EXITS. Picard keys his insignia on their way out. 6A INT. CORRIDOR PICARD Picard to Bridge. RIKER'S COM VOICE Yes, Captain. PICARD Assign Commander La Forge to lead another Away Team to the digsite. I want to know why this happened... 7 INT. MAIN BRIDGE Riker at Command. Wesley at Conn, Data at Ops, Supernumerary at tactical. RIKER Yes, Captain. And pull back to include Wes in the foreground. PICARD'S COM VOICE I will be with Counselor Troi and young Jeremy Aster. RIKER (with sympathy) I understand. Riker out. Wes exchanges a glance with Riker. A sad memory -- WESLEY He had to do the same thing for me. STAR TREK: "The Bonding" - REV. 8/23/89 - ACT ONE 8. 7 CONTINUED: Riker nods, he knows. RIKER Do you know Jeremy well? WESLEY (shakes his head) But I know what it'll be like for him. RIKER It's part of life in Starfleet, Wesley. WESLEY (acknowledges) They're very careful to prepare us for... anything. Still... RIKER I know. WESLEY How can you ever get used to it... to telling them... ? RIKER (softly) You hope you never do. Data has been listening with interest to this exchange. CUT TO: 8 thru OMITTED 9 10 INT. WORF'S QUARTERS The room is very dark. Worf is dressed in an elaborate Klingon robe and sash. A strange, twisted, massive candle burns on the desk before him. He studies the candle with painful eyes for several beats and then hangs his head with shame. He reaches out very deliberately, and snuffs the candle with the flat side of a knife blade. Darkness. CUT TO: STAR TREK: "The Bonding" - REV. 8/25/89 - ACT ONE 9. 10A INT. TURBOLIFT Troi and Picard. She senses his frustration. TROI I sense the weight of this duty on you, Captain... Picard begins to deny it, but then, frustrated -- PICARD I really wonder... He's almost letting his feelings show, which is not at all comfortable for him. He stops the Turbolift in mid-trip... PICARD (to computer) Halt. The Turbolift stops... PICARD I've always believed that carrying children on a starship... it's a questionable policy. She listens, gives him room... PICARD (continuing) Serving on a starship means accepting certain risks and dangers. But did Jeremy Aster make that choice? TROI Death and loss are an integral part of life everywhere. Leaving the boy on Earth would not have protected him from that. PICARD No, but Earth is not likely to be ordered to the Neutral Zone to repel a Romulan attack... (beat, softer) It was my command which sent his mother to her death. She understood her mission and my duty. Will he? STAR TREK: "The Bonding" - REV. 8/25/89 - ACT ONE 10. 10A CONTINUED: TROI In time. With help. (beat) Ensign Crusher does. A beat. He glances at her and perhaps we sense that Picard wonders if Wesley really ever has come to an understanding since they have both avoided the subject. In response to that feeling, re-emphasizing -- TROI (continuing) Yes, he does. And so will Jeremy. And she is doing her job for the Captain now... easing, but not closing, a lingering issue for him. PICARD (to computer) Resume. 11 OMITTED 12 INT. CLASSROOM Picard and Troi ENTER. The classroom is warm, inviting and is crammed with plants, computers, antique books, and myriad games from across the Federation. TWO TEACHERS are working with SEVERAL STUDENTS in two study groups. In one group, the age of the students run from roughly 8 to 13, and they are discussing a particular problem on a computer display screen around which they are all clustered. In the B.G., is the other study group studying other instruction devices. As Picard and Troi enter, the students look up in surprise and several point at the seldom-seen Captain of their ship. Conversation dies to a whisper. The nearest teacher hates like hell what his student is about to endure, but he stands and crosses to JEREMY ASTER. TEACHER Jeremy, the Captain needs to talk with you. The boy's eyes go wide at this summons from the Captain. He is about twelve years old and has a quiet, sensitive look about him, with tousled black hair and deep-set eyes. STAR TREK: "The Bonding" - REV. 8/25/89 - ACT ONE 10A. 12 CONTINUED: The other children look at him with reactions ranging from jealousy to fear. He walks forward with his teacher's arm around his shoulders. JEREMY I'm Jeremy, sir. STAR TREK: "The Bonding" - REV. 8/25/89 - ACT ONE 11. 12 CONTINUED: (3) Picard looks down at this innocent young face... the eyes of a twelve year old. TEACHER (indicates) My office is over there, Captain... Picard acknowledges. The teacher indicates the way. Troi puts her arm around the boy and the trio walks out of the room. 13 OMITTED 13A INT. TEACHER'S OFFICE (FROM SCENE 13) Troi has her hands on Jeremy's shoulders to offer the support of physical contact. PICARD Jeremy, it is my sad duty to tell you that your mother has died. And whatever our expectations might have been, we can throw them away. This is a 24th century child. He is a good soldier, uniquely mature. Prepared by experts to cope with the worst circumstances. There is no tear shed. JEREMY How, sir? PICARD An explosive device at the mission site. She died instantly. JEREMY I understand. Troi drops to one knee to be at his level... TROI I know your mother loved you very much, Jeremy. He nods. A silence. STAR TREK: "The Bonding" - REV. 8/23/89 - ACT ONE 12 13A CONTINUED: PICARD I've been told... you've also lost your father. JEREMY Yessir. Five years ago. From a Rushton Infection. I'm alone now, sir. And Picard may wonder just how 'mature' any of us could be in this circumstance. But whatever is going on inside, the boy does not reveal it. PICARD (softly) No one is alone on the starship Enterprise, Jeremy. No one. As the boy and Picard look in each other's eyes... FADE OUT. END OF ACT ONE STAR TREK: "The Bonding" - REV. 8/25/89 - ACT TWO 13. ACT TWO FADE IN: 14 EXT. SPACE - THE ENTERPRISE (OPTICAL) The Enterprise in orbit around the planet. 15 OMITTED 16 INT. ASTER QUARTERS Troi and Jeremy. Troi is seated, watching Jeremy with that cool serenity which is so much a part of her nature. He doesn't quite know what to do with himself. But throughout the scene there is a repressed anger in the boy. (NOTE: This is a significant change... Even though the dialogue may be similar, the attitude behind must reflect unfocused anger that he is unwilling to touch.) JEREMY I really ought to get back to class... if I get behind... Bringing the focus back -- TROI I'm sure your mom wanted you to do well in school. Wasn't she a teacher on Earth? JEREMY (acknowledges) She taught exo-archeology. TROI Why did she sign on the Enterprise? JEREMY She said she wanted to see the galaxy with her own eyes. TROI Was she happy doing that? JEREMY (trace of bitterness.) Yeah. Real happy. STAR TREK: "The Bonding" - REV. 8/25/89 - ACT TWO 14. 16 CONTINUED: TROI Did she ever tell you there was a chance this might happen someday? JEREMY Yes. He moves away from her, seems drawn to the computer terminal on his desk. He is completely unaware he is doing this, but Troi has spotted the motion. TROI It might help if we talked about how you're feeling. Curt -- JEREMY You're a Betazoid. You know how I feel. TROI (conversationally) When my father died we were living on Betazed. My mother and all her people are telepathic. I kept wanting to talk about my father, and they kept pulling my thoughts out of my head before I could say the words. It made me very angry. JEREMY (curious despite himself) Why? TROI I needed to say them out loud. I was confused about why he went away. Was it me -- something I had done. I felt that if I could just say the words he would somehow know how much I loved him and missed him. She looks at him. STAR TREK: "The Bonding" - REV. 8/25/89 - ACT TWO 15. 16 CONTINUED: (2) TROI (continuing) I thought you might feel the same way. JEREMY (avoiding his feelings) She just had to do her job. I understand that. TROI Did she talk to you about her mission before she left? JEREMY She told me about the ruins. (a beat, softer) She always made it like a story book. He's back at the computer. TROI Why do you keep going over to the terminal? JEREMY (beat) No reason. A long beat. JEREMY (continuing) It's nothing. I broke it yesterday. TROI (studies him a beat) Was your mother angry when you broke it? He nods. TROI (continuing) Was she still angry when she left? He doesn't acknowledge, but obviously she was. STAR TREK: "The Bonding" - REV. 8/25/89 - ACT TWO 16. 16 CONTINUED: (3) TROI (continuing) Jeremy, did that broken terminal cause the accident? JEREMY No. TROI Did you cause the accident? JEREMY No. I just never had a chance to tell her I fixed it. TROI Jeremy, if your mother were here right now, would she forgive you? Jeremy swallows hard. Still no tears. He nods his head, yes, sighs a deep breath. Troi knows that's a big step for now. TROI (standing; continuing) I want you to have some time alone for a little while. I'll come back when you're ready to talk again. JEREMY How will you know? Troi crosses to the boy, hugs him lightly, then still holding him in the circle of her arms she smiles down at him and says, TROI This time I will use my Betazoid sense, and I'll know. His eyes say he's beginning to appreciate her. Troi EXITS. 17 thru OMITTED 17B 17C INT. TEN-FORWARD Riker is seated at a table. He stares out at the stars. There is a drink in front of him. STAR TREK: "The Bonding" - REV. 8/24/89 - ACT TWO 17. 17C CONTINUED: SIX OTHER PEOPLE and a BARTENDER are also present. Data crosses to Riker. The Commander looks up. DATA Excuse me. Am I intruding? RIKER No, sit down. There is a curious subtext to his question -- DATA How well did you know Lieutenant Aster? RIKER We spent some time together. Not very well. A beat, Data waits for more... his face is very inquisitive. Off his look -- RIKER How well did you know her? DATA Why do you ask? RIKER (reacts) Well... I mean you just asked me... DATA But why do you ask the question? I have been asked several times to define 'how well I knew Lieutenant Aster' since her death. And I heard you ask Wesley on the Bridge if he knew Jeremy well. (beat) Does the question of familiarity have some bearing on death? RIKER (a beat) Do you remember how we all felt when Tasha died? STAR TREK: "The Bonding" - REV. 8/24/89 - ACT TWO 18. 17C CONTINUED: (2) DATA I do not sense the same feelings of... absence... that I associate with Lieutenant Yar... although I cannot say precisely why... RIKER That's just human nature, Data. DATA Human nature, sir? RIKER We feel a loss more intensely when it's a friend. DATA But should not the feelings be just as deep regardless of who has died? Riker thinks this over before answering. RIKER Maybe they should, Data. Maybe if we felt the loss of any life as keenly as we felt the death of those close to us, our history would've been a lot less bloody. Data considers this as... GEORDI'S COM VOICE La Forge to Riker... RIKER You're back, Geordi... GEORDI'S COM VOICE Yessir, and we've brought back a souvenier... 17D INT. CAPTAIN'S READY ROOM Geordi giving his report to Picard and Riker. He has brought back another explosive device... Data studies it. STAR TREK: "The Bonding" - REV. 8/24/89 - ACT TWO 18A. 17D CONTINUED: GEORDI Five more just like it... all identical to the one that killed Lieutenant Aster... DATA They employ a subspace proximity detonator. A normal tricorder would never detect it. STAR TREK: "The Bonding" - REV. 8/23/89 - ACT TWO 19. 17D CONTINUED: PICARD How long would you say they've been there, Data? DATA It comes from the time of the Koinonian Wars, Captain... RIKER Did you find them all, Geordi? GEORDI Yeah. But... (off their looks) Well, they were all sort of... left there to be found. PICARD Left by whom? There are no indications of life on this planet. GEORDI I don't know, Captain... but it was pretty obvious that they'd been recently pulled out of the ground and defused. Off their reactions... CUT TO: 18 INT. CORRIDOR Troi is walking, head down, very thoughtful. Worf is coming from the other direction. He sees her, checks, and almost heads down another branching corridor. But Troi senses him and looks up. TROI Worf! The Klingon stops, but he's clearly uncomfortable. WORF (formally) Counselor. There is an uneasy silence. STAR TREK: "The Bonding" - REV. 8/23/89 - ACT TWO 20. 18 CONTINUED: TROI I can understand that you don't want to talk about what happened. Worf glances around the corridor, and Troi understands his reticence in such a public place. She looks around and motions to a small room. Worf, with great dignity, follows her inside. 19 INT. COMPUTER ROOM The room is dimly lit and only Worf and Troi are here at present. WORF I have made my report to the Captain. TROI I'm more interested in how you feel about what happened. (a beat) And right now I sense great anger. Worf stiffens and only confirms Troi's perception. WORF I cannot seek revenge against an enemy who turned to dust centuries ago. Troi merely waits. Her attitude is clam and quiet. She is making no judgments. WORF (continuing) Her death was senseless. The last victim of a forgotten war. TROI Go on. Her eyes are locked with Worf's, she is very still, helping him to speak, but applying no pressure. WORF There is no more to be said. STAR TREK: "The Bonding" - REV. 8/24/89 - ACT TWO 21. 19 CONTINUED: TROI A person has died while under your command. It may happen again. If you cannot learn to release the anger and the guilt, to talk about it... WORF A leader must stand alone. As Captain Picard does. TROI (a little sharply) Captain Picard talks to me. A beat. Worf realizes he cannot get off the hook here. But this "sharing feelings" is as alien a concept as he will ever encounter. Reluctantly -- WORF Then may I seek your counsel about my plan to make the R'uustai with the boy... And she's caught off guard by something so... well, Klingon-intense... TROI The Bonding. And her reaction is exactly what he feared. Already he hates this -- WORF It is my right. TROI It's a very generous offer, but he's not a Klingon child. He has different sensibilities. WORF He is an orphan. I am an orphan. He will understand. A long beat. And that is as close as Worf gets to exposing his feelings. And she appreciates that. STAR TREK: "The Bonding" - REV. 8/25/89 - ACT TWO 21A. 19 CONTINUED: (2) TROI Right now, there isn't much he can understand, Worf. He's holding all his feelings inside... (beat) Children often feel they must be true to the memory of a lost parent. (MORE) STAR TREK: "The Bonding" - REV. 8/28/89 - ACT TWO 22. 19 CONTINUED: (3) TROI (Cont'd) If you offer affection to them too soon they can feel guilty returning that affection. As if they're betraying the love they feel for the parent. WORF I only wish to honor his mother. TROI I know. And I understand this means a great deal to you. But you must be prepared, Worf... he is very angry too, but his anger is deep inside him... When he finally touches it, it will strike out in many directions... including yours. (a beat) Talk with him. Be with him. But do not rush this. When he is ready, we will know. Worf acknowleges and proceeds on his way, and Troi watches him. CUT TO: 20 thru OMITTED 22 22A INT. ASTER QUARTERS (OPTICAL) Jeremy is curled up on the sofa looking at a hand held screen with a home video of him and his mother together at home on Earth... his face is thoughtful, reflective, not in pain. There is a CHIME. He goes to the door, touches the panel and it opens to reveal Worf. WORF Jeremy Aster, I am Lieutenant Worf. May I enter? Worf ENTERS... he wants desperately to do the right thing... but is now aware of Troi's concerns. The boy stares coldly at him... But the anger is all repressed, not overt. STAR TREK: "The Bonding" - REV. 8/25/89 - ACT TWO 22A. 22A CONTINUED: JEREMY You were in command of the Away Team. STAR TREK: "The Bonding" - REV. 8/25/89 - ACT TWO 23. 22A CONTINUED: (2) WORF Yes. I was with Lieutenant Aster, your mother, when she died. (guilty) Her death lies between us. It is my hope...that...someday... it can also bind us. Jeremy doesn't know what that means, it's just another nice sounding 'I'm sorry.' JEREMY (with an attitude) You're a Klingon, aren't you? Worf doesn't know how to take that exactly... WORF Yes. JEREMY We studied Klingons in school. WORF What do they teach you about us? JEREMY You used to be our enemies. Worf acknowledges, tries to say something meaningful to the boy... WORF Do they teach you that every Klingon hopes to die in the line of duty as your mother did? Jeremy just looks at him, refusing to connect. WORF In my tradition, we do not grieve the loss of the body... we celebrate the releasing of the spirit. Jeremy looks at the imposing figure... confident, you can't tell me anything I don't already know -- STAR TREK: "The Bonding" - REV. 8/25/89 - ACT TWO 23A. 22A CONTINUED: (3) JEREMY I understand death. They teach us all about it. Worf studies the twelve-year-old for a long beat. STAR TREK: "The Bonding" - REV. 8/28/89 - ACT TWO 24. 22A CONTINUED: (4) WORF Jeremy Aster, we may both understand it, but we must bring meaning to your mother's death. (beat) Perhaps we can do it together. Jeremy's reaction suggests he doesn't see how... 22B thru OMITTED 22C 22D INT. CAPTAIN'S READY ROOM The Captain is going over status reports on the computer screen as the DOORBELL RINGS. PICARD Come. The door slides open and Troi stands there... PICARD Counselor. How is the boy? TROI He is being very brave. PICARD Good. TROI No. He'll have to get past brave. He is a very angry boy... He must learn to express that anger before he can really say good-bye to his mother. She sits. PICARD How can we help? TROI I've asked Beverly if we might get Wesley to talk to Jeremy about his father's death... Picard acknowledges. STAR TREK: "The Bonding" - REV. 8/28/89 - ACT TWO 24A. 22D CONTINUED: TROI The one unusual element is Worf. PICARD Oh? TROI In many ways he is suffering as badly as the boy. He wishes to involve Jeremy in a Klingon ceremony called the R'uustai... the bonding... STAR TREK: "The Bonding" - REV. 8/28/89 - ACT TWO 25. 22D CONTINUED: (2) PICARD I know it. (thoughtful) Perhaps it would be a comfort to both your patients, Counselor. TROI I don't think the boy would accept Worf right now. Later, perhaps. But it will have to be handled most delicately. PICARD As you always do. Picard pauses, and looks at Troi with appreciation. PICARD (continuing) I break the unpleasant news and my responsibility ends. You have to stay with them through the entire grieving process. TROI We find many different ways to deal with our pain, but over the years, I've discovered it is in our joy that the uniqueness of each individual is revealed. If I can help a person back to a state of joy... well, my role has its rewards. RIKER'S COM VOICE Captain, we're picking up an energy field on the planet's surface... 22E INT. MAIN BRIDGE - CONTINUOUS As Picard and Troi ENTER... PICARD Location? RIKER Two kilometers north of the Away Team's beamdown point. STAR TREK: "The Bonding" - REV. 8/23/89 - ACT TWO 26. 22E CONTINUED: PICARD Indeed. (to Data) Full scan. Data works his console. DATA Inconclusive, Captain. TROI Sir, I sense a... presence on the planet. Very vague. PICARD A life form? TROI I can't be sure... the emotions of the crew are particularly strong right now and it's difficult to filter them out. PICARD Data, scan analysis on Main Viewer... As Data works... 22F INT. DOCTOR CRUSHER'S OFFICE Wesley ENTERS. Beverly is at her desk, working. BEVERLY Hi. WESLEY (a litle glum) Hi. He sort of plops down... something on his mind, not necessarily about to talk about it. She continues her work, talks without making eye contact... BEVERLY Troi stopped by a little while ago. She was wondering if you might be willing to talk to Jeremy Aster at some point. STAR TREK: "The Bonding" - REV. 8/28/89 - ACT TWO 27. 2F CONTINUED: WESLEY (uncomfortable) Me? What for? She looks up. BEVERLY Because of your Dad. Wesley frowns... he's already been revisiting those memories today. WESLEY What would I tell him? BEVERLY It would help him to talk with someone who's gone through this. Wesley sighs, would rather not... how do I get out of this? BEVERLY We had each other, Wes... he doesn't have anyone to lean on now... and he might be more comfortable talking about it with someone who's not much older... WESLEY (interrupting, don't bug me) Okay. Let me think about it. BEVERLY (beat) Okay. A long beat. WESLEY You ever think about him, Mom? BEVERLY Your father? (she nods) Sure, I do. A long beat. And this is hard on Wesley... STAR TREK: "The Bonding" - REV. 8/23/89 - ACT TWO 28. 22F CONTINUED: (2) WESLEY Sometimes I can't quite remember his face... it scares me. Beverly studies him... BEVERLY That happens to all of us, Wes... (beat; honest) Sometimes I can't get his face out of my mind. WESLEY (nods) Today... it's like I can see it all as clearly as if it were yesterday... the way he looked when he hugged me good-bye... Captain Picard's eyes when he came to tell us... Their eyes meet. A tear slides down his cheek. She comes over and they hold each other. CUT TO: 22G INT. MAIN BRIDGE - (OPTICAL) (PREVIOUSLY 22A) As before. On the viewscreen is a graphic analysis of the energy form they're tracking on the planet... RIKER Data, run comparison with known phenomena. DATA (works his station) The pattern has no exact match in Federation records. PICARD Is it alive? DATA A possibility. And Troi just watches it... slow push in on her.... STAR TREK: "The Bonding" - REV. 8/25/89 - ACT TWO 29. 22G CONTINUED: GEORDI'S COM VOICE Captain, I'm getting an unusual magnetic flux reading from the anti-matter containment pods. ... to an extreme closeup of Troi ending as she senses something new, something extreme as she murmers... TROI My God. CUT TO: 23 INT. ASTER QUARTERS (OPTICAL) Jeremy is seated at the desk once again studying the moving picture of him and his mother. He senses movement from a hallway behind him, turns to see the arrival of MARLA ASTER. Jeremy's eyes go wide. JEREMY Mom! FADE OUT. END OF ACT TWO STAR TREK: "The Bonding" - REV. 8/23/89 - ACT THREE 30. ACT THREE FADE IN: 24 EXT. SPACE - THE ENTERPRISE (OPTICAL) The starship is still cruising serenely in orbit. 25 thru OMITTED 30 31 INT. MAIN BRIDGE (OPTICAL) As before. Riker and Picard have moved to join Geordi at the Engineering station, studying the odd readings... GEORDI All systems are functioning normally -- still, there's a fluctuation in the containment field. I can't account for it. RIKER Data, is it related in some way to the energy field on the planet? And Troi is still getting those radical vibes... TROI (sotto voce) Captain... DATA There is a beam of highly charged particles emanating from the planet... TROI Captain, there is a presence aboard the Enterprise. Reactions. PICARD An alien presence... ? She doesn't know... RIKER No intruder noted by the ship's sensors, Captain... STAR TREK: "The Bonding" - REV. 8/25/89 - ACT THREE 31. 31 CONTINUED: TROI A presence... Beginning behind the above -- RIKER Security, all decks... yellow alert... possible intruder... On Troi trying to come to grips with her senses... CUT TO: 31A INT. ASTER QUARTERS Jeremy stares with bewilderment up at his mother. Marla Aster reaches out to brush a hand across Jeremy's hair. Jeremy reflexively backs away. JEREMY They said you were dead. MARLA There was a mistake. It's okay. Jeremy is confused. He's yearning to accept this, but still he holds back. JEREMY But there was an explosion... you were hurt. MARLA Jeremy, I'm not hurt. I'm fine. You mustn't think any more about it. She moves to him. He backs away from her. MARLA The important thing is, I'll never leave you again. She smiles at him, crosses to the desk. MARLA (continuing) Oh, I see you fixed the terminal. JEREMY Just after you. you left. STAR TREK: "The Bonding" - REV. 8/25/89 - ACT THREE 32. 31A CONTINUED: MARLA I'm sorry I got so angry about that. I'm really proud of you -- you fixed it without even being asked. This woman is damned convincing. But Jeremy is still reluctant to accept her. Marla extends her hand. Slowly, cautiously, Jeremy reaches out, touches Marla's hand. It's warm and real. Jeremy's surprised. He gazes at Marla -- he desperately wants this to be his mother. MARLA (warm smile) I think somebody needs a hug. And that does it. Jeremy gives himself up to the fantasy, buries himself in his mother's arms, and for the first time since the accident, SOBS softly. Marla comforts him, strokes his head. Everything's all right now. After a long beat, Marla pulls back, takes Jeremy's hand. MARLA We have to go now. JEREMY Where? MARLA To the planet. That's where we're going to live now. JEREMY (confused again) We're not going to stay on the Enterprise any more? MARLA No. (a beat) We're going to live in a home just like we used to on Earth. Jeremy's not sure about this, but Marla's warmth and serenity allay his doubts: STAR TREK: "The Bonding" - REV. 8/25/89 - ACT THREE 33. 31A CONTINUED: (2) MARLA (continuing) You'll see. I promise. There is a CHIME. Jeremy moves to the door, opens it to reveal Worf... Jeremy is excited. (There is no repressed anger any more.) JEREMY Lieutenant Worf... did they tell you? It was a mistake. Worf reacts to the boy's glee, then as he steps in, is blown away as ?? sees Marla smiling at him... JEREMY (continuing) She didn't die. She's alive. As the boy moves to her... WORF Jeremy, come here... MARLA Lieutenant Worf, it's all right. I'm here for the boy. Worf starts to pull his phaser, and doesn't know what the hell to do with it... even he has to wonder a moment - is it Marla Aster? He touches his insignia. WORF Lieutenant Worf to Captain Picard. CUT TO: 32 OMITTED 33 INT. MAIN BRIDGE As before. PICARD Go ahead. WORF'S COM VOICE Lieutenant Aster is in her quarters. Exchanged looks. STAR TREK: "The Bonding" - REV. 8/24/89 - ACT THREE 34. 33 CONTINUED: RIKER Repeat, Worf... ? WORF'S COM VOICE Lieutenant Aster. She's here. In her quarters. With the boy. Reactions. Picard and Troi exchange a look. PICARD Do not provoke her or interfere in any way until I arrive. Picard out. (to Riker) Have security moving that way but tell them to keep their distance. You have the Bridge. Counselor... Troi's already out of her chair. She and Picard EXIT. CUT TO: 33A INT. ASTER QUARTERS Marla looks calmly at Worf. MARLA There's nothing to worry about. I'm going to take care of Jeremy and make him happy. (to Jeremy) It's time to go. WORF Where are you taking the child? JEREMY To the planet. Marla smiles a winning smile at Jeremy: MARLA Come on, Jeremy. Jeremy dutifully leaves Worf, joins Marla, takes her hand. Together they EXIT followed by Worf, who keys his insignia... WORF Worf to Picard, they're leaving their quarters... STAR TREK: "The Bonding" - REV. 8/24/89 - ACT THREE 35. 34 thru OMITTED 35 36 INT. CORRIDOR Worf follows Marla and Jeremy down the corridor. Security men arriving do not interfere, exchange glances with Worf, trail... WORF (keys insignia) Captain, I believe we're headed for Transporter Room Three. 36A INT. TURBOLIFT Picard and Troi moving quickly... PICARD We're on our way. CUT TO: 37 OMITTED 38 INT. TRANSPORTER ROOM (OPTICAL) O'Brien is making adjustments to the transporter side panels. He is running a monitor over the circuits and comparing readings. The DOOR OPENS and Marla, Jeremy, and Worf ENTER. O'Brien reacts to the presence of a dead woman in his transporter room. Looks to Worf. Marla smiles sunnily at the Transporter Chief. MARLA Chief O'Brien, Jeremy and I are going down to the surface. Marla and Jeremy cross to the platform. Jeremy lets go of Marla's hand so they can stand on separate pads. The DOORS OPEN. In the corridor are Picard, Troi, and two SECURITY PERSONNEL; Picard motions for the Security Personnel to remain in the corridor as he and Troi ENTER. Picard gives Marla a hard look. PICARD Who are you? STAR TREK: "The Bonding" - REV. 9/1/89 - ACT THREE 36. 38 CONTINUED: MARLA I'm Marla Aster... JEREMY (you know) It's my mother, Captain... She's alive. Picard glances with concern at Jeremy. PICARD (to Marla) What do you want? MARLA To take my child down to the planet. PICARD I cannot permit that. This child is my responsibility. Marla truly can't fathom why these people are making such a big deal out of nothing. Jeremy is confused and not at all clear what is going on... MARLA I'm here to care for him. He needs me. Why do you resist? PICARD Because I don't know who -- or what -- you are. JEREMY Can't you see who she is? STAR TREK: "The Bonding" - REV. 8/24/89 - ACT THREE 36A. 38 CONTINUED: (2) PICARD Jeremy, she appears to be your mother, but she is not. JEREMY What do you mean? STAR TREK: "The Bonding" - REV. 8/23/89 - ACT THREE 37. 38 CONTINUED: (2) Jeremy looks to his mother... MARLA You're confusing the boy... Picard glances at Worf, who has moved casually towards the Transporter pads... He takes the boy and pulls him away from his mother... JEREMY Wait... He struggles, behind him, Marla's at a total loss... JEREMY (continuing) No...stop... Behind him, she suddenly VANISHES. Jeremy turns and she's gone... JEREMY Mon...Mom... TROI Jeremy... JEREMY NO... As Troi escorts him out... off Picard and Worf's expressions: 39 thru OMITTED 40 FADE OUT. END OF ACT THREE STAR TREK: "The Bonding" - REV. 8/24/89 - ACT FOUR 38. ACT FOUR FADE IN: 41 OMITTED 42 INT. CORRIDOR Troi and Jeremy walking together. The boy is angry, frightened and sad, completely disoriented. JEREMY What did you do to her? TROI Jeremy, I don't know what that was, but it was not your mother. JEREMY You saw her... She was here... TROI Your mother is dead. JEREMY I touched her. She was real. TROI Why would your real mother want you to go to the planet. There's nothing there but rocks and dust... And Jeremy knows his real mother wouldn't do that... but still, it was her... they have reached the Aster quarters. Troi keys the door, and they ENTER. 43 INT. EARTH HOME (OPTICAL) And Troi takes an involuntary step back for it is no longer the Enterprise stateroom. They are standing in the front room of the Aster home on Earth... as we saw it in the video... Outside, through an open window, they HEAR the shouts and laughter of children, the barking of a dog. A cat sleeps on the sofa. There's a grandfather clock. STAR TREK: "The Bonding" - REV. 8/24/89 - ACT FOUR 39. 43 CONTINUED: JEREMY It's my house. My house on Earth. Marla ENTERS from the back of the house. MARLA Exactly the way it was... remember, Jeremy? JEREMY But how did you do it? Marla smiles... MARLA Does it matter? TROI Yes. It matters. She looks at Troi. Marla is very friendly -- MARLA I am trying to understand your resistance. You spoke of rocks and dust on the planet? I decided to show what awaits us there. TROI Why would you create this fantasy? MARLA (can't you understand?) It's his home. (holding out a hand to Jeremy) And it makes you happy, doesn't it? Jeremy is beyond words. Is she for real or not... He knows now, in his heart, she isn't... But it's so nice to be "home." TROI But it's not real. MARLA Isn't it? Jeremy, isn't that really Patches? Jeremy moves to the cat who looks up and meows at him... climbs into his arms. Jeremy reacts. STAR TREK: "The Bonding" - REV. 8/25/89 - ACT FOUR 40. 43 CONTINUED: (2) JEREMY He knows me. It's him. The cat was sleeping on a blanket on the sofa. MARLA Look -- your blanket... Jeremy looks at it, touches it. It is his blanket. He reacts as the grandfather clock strikes a chime twice... clearly he recognizes the sound of the clock. JEREMY It's real. It's all real. TROI Jeremy, it's not. Could your real mother make all this appear? He knows she could not, but he wants so much to believe. TROI (continuing) You must not stay here. Troi holds out her hand. TROI Come with me. Jeremy looks at the Betazoid, at Marla, at the room. Shakes his head. JEREMY (very softly) I can't. TIME CUT TO: 43A INT. MAIN BRIDGE - CLOSE ON PICARD PICARD Is the boy in any danger? TROI'S COM VOICE I don't think so. She seems to want to help Jeremy. STAR TREK: "The Bonding" - REV. 8/24/89 - ACT FOUR 40A. 43A CONTINUED: And WIDEN to see Riker, Worf, Data, Beverly, Wesley and Geordi at their various stations. PICARD Help him? INTERCUT: STAR TREK: "The Bonding" - REV. 8/25/89 - ACT FOUR 41. 44 OMITTED 44A INT. EARTH HOME (INTERCUT WITH SCENE 44B) Troi off to the side... in the background, the mother doll and Jeremy are dangling a piece of string for the cat... playing with it... TROI MARLA By easing his pain. She (background) seems very confused by Look at him. Look how our resistance, Captain. he tries to catch it... JEREMY (background) Maybe he thinks it's a mouse's tail. PICARD Troi, would it be wise to remove Jeremy from his quarters? TROI He does not want to leave. I would not recommend taking him by force. RIKER She offers him everything. All we offer is the cold reality of his mother's death. BEVERLY What would you choose? If someone came along and offered to give you back your mother... (toware Wesley) ... your father... (MORE) STAR TREK: "The Bonding" - REV. 8/24/89 - ACT FOUR 42. 44A CONTINUED: BEVERLY (Cont'd) ... your... husband... would any of us say no so easily? A beat. Picard sighs. To Troi -- PICARD Remain in the cabin with them, Counselor. We're going to try to put an end to this from here... TROI Understood. He signs off. 44B INT. MAIN BRIDGE PICARD Mister Data, can we determine for certain the energy source from the planet is powering this creation? DATA The beam from the planet is clearly tapping into the ship's anti-matter, Captain... GEORDI I'd say it's running the manifestation off our own energy. PICARD So there are limits to her power... RIKER (nods) That's why she needs the Transporter to get the boy off the ship. Picard pauses and considers. PICARD So how do we cut the puppet's strings? STAR TREK: "The Bonding" - REV. 8/24/89 - ACT FOUR 43. 44B CONTINUED: GEORDI By increasing the shield harmonics to match our antimatter containment fields, it is almost certain that the beam would be severed. PICARD Proceed. RIKER (to com) Troi, stand by... CUT TO: 44C thru OMITTED 45 46 INT. EARTH HOME (OPTICAL) The fantasy is up and running. Marla and Jeremy are still seated with the cat... Troi moves to them... TROI Jeremy, it's time for this to end... You know it's not real and it is over now... MARLA I'm not going to leave you, Jeremy. Ever again. Jeremy looks with hurt and confusion from one woman to the other. TROI Jeremy, I won't lie to you or trick you. MARLA Jeremy we'll be happy together as soon as... She and the fantasy VANISH. Jeremy looks at the space where she was and knows that his mother and the wonderful dream is really gone. He says very softly, JEREMY No... STAR TREK: "The Bonding" - REV. 8/24/89 - ACT FOUR 44. 46 CONTINUED: As Troi moves to comfort him... CUT TO: 47 INT. MAIN BRIDGE As before. GEORDI Anti-matter containment pods reading nominal... DATA The shields have severed the beam. Data studies something on his console. DATA Captain, the energy field... 48 ANGLE ON VIEWSCREEN - (OPTICAL) The ghost-like blanket has gathered into a glowing circular mass. PICARD Mister Crusher, take us out of... Before he can finish... 49 OMITTED 50 EXT. SPACE - THE ENTERPRISE (OPTICAL) The energy form flashes across space and instantly penetrates the ship. CUT TO: 51 thru OMITTED 52 53 INT. MAIN BRIDGE The ship is rocked by the explosive arrival of the energy. Red alert begins to sound. CUT TO: STAR TREK: "The Bonding" - REV. 9/5/89 - ACT FOUR 45. 53AA INT. CORRIDOR - NEAR TRANSPORTER ROOM (OPTICAL) The energy mass move down the hallway and into 53A INT. TRANSPORTER ROOM - (OPTICAL) O'Brien goggles at the glowing energy form which has appeared in the room. After a beat... O'BRIEN Alien intruder. Transporter Room Three. Security alert. Alien... The form zaps at him, forcing him away from the console. INTERCUT: 53B OMITTED 53C INT. MAIN BRIDGE WORF (to com) Security to Transporter Room Three... Picard on the move... PICARD Lieutenant Worf, Commander La Forge with me... Number One you have the Bridge. 53D INT. TRANSPORTER ROOM/CORRIDOR - (OPTICAL) O'Brien is being driven out of the room by the force. Two security guards arrive. They are flung back. One of them fires his phaser, but it has no effect. The energy force zips back into the Transporter Room. CUT TO: 53E INT. ASTER QUARTERS/EARTH HOME (OPTICAL) Troi is comforting Jeremy when Marla and the Earth Home MATERIALIZE, and judging from ??e expression with which she favors Troi she is not happy. STAR TREK: "The Bonding" - REV. 8/24/89 - ACT FOUR 46. 53E CONTINUED: She brushes past the Betazoid, moves to Jeremy and takes his hand. He's scared, confused... MARLA Come, Jeremy, we will not let them separate us again. We are going home. Off Troi's reaction as we: FADE OUT. END OF ACT FOUR STAR TREK: "The Bonding" - REV. 8/24/89 - ACT FIVE 47. ACT FIVE FADE IN: 54 thru OMITTED 66 67 INT. TURBOLIFT with Picard, Geordi and Worf... red alert sounding. TROI'S COM VOICE (urgently) Captain, the image is back -- she's trying to take Jeremy off the ship again. PICARD (keys insignia) Acknowledged. GEORDI (keys insignia) Engineering, this is La Forge. Shut down power to all Transporters. I'm on my way... PICARD Lieutenant Worf, to Transporter Room Three. They split up as they EXIT the Turbolift. PICARD (keys insignia) Bridge, seal off deck eight, corridors A and B. 68 INT. MAIN BRIDGE Data working the console... DATA Engaging force fields, Captain. Transporters are down. 69 INT. TRANSPORTER ROOM (OPTICAL) The energy force is still there reacting as the power goes off, -- darting from component to component -- as Worf arrives, it bolts past him... STAR TREK: "The Bonding" - REV. 8/25/89 - ACT FIVE 48. 69 CONTINUED: Worf checks on O'Brien and the security men who are okay. WORF Energy force has left Transporter Room Three... security alert, all decks... 69A INT. MAIN BRIDGE RIKER La Forge, the intruder may try to reinstate Transporter power. GEORDI'S COM VOICE Understood, Commander... 70 INT. CORRIDOR (OPTICAL) Just outside Aster's quarters, Marla leads Jeremy out as Troi watches by the door. A force field is blocking the corridor. She turns to look in the another direction. Another force field at the other end of the hall is up and has them trapped. 71 ANGLE - PICARD (OPTICAL) arrives at the forcefield... touches his insignia. PICARD Bridge, release security forcefield eight - B. The forcefield in front of him disappears. For a moment, he and the alien Marla study each other. PICARD How are you, Jeremy? Are you frightened? JEREMY -- no. (off his look) A little, sir. STAR TREK: "The Bonding" - REV. 8/28/89 - ACT FIVE 49. 71 CONTINUED: PICARD Of course. These are frightening things that are happening. We won't let anyone harm you. (off-handedly) Counselor, why don't you take the child to my quarters. Troi takes a step toward Jeremy. Marla puts her arm around Jeremy's shoulder. Tightly. Possessively. MARLA No. Troi backs off. Ma leads him back into their quarters. Picard a?? Troi follow. 72 INT. ENGINEERING (OPTICAL) Geordi follows the energy form as it moves from console to console... GEORDI (keys insignia) It's looking over everything, Commander... going to school... Let's hope it doesn't blow us to Kingdom Come while it's figuring out how to blow us to Kingdom Come. The energy zips into a console... INTERCUT: 73 INT. TRANSPORTER ROOM The power returns... WORF Power's back in Transporter Room Three... 73A INT. ENGINEERING Geordi moves quickly to the controls... GEORDI By-passing to manual override... shutting it down... STAR TREK: "The Bonding" - REV. 8/28/89 - ACT FIVE 50. 73AB INT. TRANSPORTER ROOM The Transporter goes down again. WORF Transporter is down again. 73A INT. MAIN BRIDGE RIKER Keep it down, Geordi... for as long as you can... 74 INT. EARTH HOME (OPTICAL) Picard, Troi, Jeremy and Marla. MARLA It is only a matter of time, Captain, before we can power the Transporters ourselves... PICARD We? For whom else do you speak? Marla takes a beat to determine how much must be explained to these people... finally -- MARLA The accident on the surface was caused by a remnant of an old and tragic era. Two species once shared this world... one of energy... and one of matter. The physical beings you call the Koinonians destroyed themselves in unending, bitter wars. The surviving lifeforms on this world will not tolerate any further suffering from that dishonorable past. So they have made this possible... they have made me possible. PICARD I appreciate your motives. But his mother is dead. He must learn to live with that. MARLA I will be every bit his mother. STAR TREK: "The Bonding" - REV. 8/28/89 - ACT FIVE 50A. 74 CONTINUED: PICARD But not his mother. Jeremy watches them both... confused, trying to choose between what he wants and what is real. Picard's mind works... he keys his insignia... PICARD Picard to Lieutenant Worf. WORF Go ahead, Captain. PICARD Please escort Ensign Crusher to the Aster quarters. Picard out. He exchanges a glance with Troi. STAR TREK: "The Bonding" - REV. 8/28/89 - ACT FIVE 51. 74 CONTINUED: (2) MARLA Your philosophy is curious, Captain. What is so noble about sorrow? I can provide him an existance where he will feel no pain, no anguish... PICARD It is at the heart of our very nature... to feel pain... and joy... that is what makes us what we are. MARLA He is alone now in your world. A child alone. How can you know he won't be happier with me? Picard glances at Jeremy with compassion. PICARD For a brief moment in time... he surely would be. Any of us in his place would be. TROI What would Jeremy do for friends in your world? Marla glances at Jeremy, considering this... MARLA He will have any friends he needs. STAR TREK: "The Bonding" - REV. 8/28/89 - ACT FIVE 52. 74 CONTINUED: (3) TROI And then will you provide for his education, his health, his growth? A career? A wife? Marla considers all this... obviously for the first time. PICARD Yes, it is quite an undertaking you're proposing, isn't it? MARLA It is our duty to make him happy again. PICARD Do you honestly believe he will be happy in this total fiction you wish to create? Off her look which is beginning to show doubt... PICARD What will be his reason to live? And she cannot answer that. PICARD What you offer is a memory... to cherish... but not to live in. (beat) It is part of our life cycle to accept the death of those we love. He must deal with grief, not cover it or hide from it. We are mortal. Our time in this universe is finite. It is the lesson every human must learn. The door opens to reveal Worf and Wesley. Wesley is nervous, concerned. WESLEY Ensign Crusher reporting as ordered, sir. PICARD Come in, Wesley. Worf begins to leave... casually -- STAR TREK: "The Bonding" - REV. 9/1/89 - ACT FIVE 53. 74 CONTINUED: (4) PICARD ... No, stay, Lieutenant. Worf comes in and stands at attention in the background. PICARD Wesley lost his father on a Starfleet mission when he was even younger than you are. Jeremy reacts. Marla looks at him with compassion. TROI Your mother told me you were finding it difficult to talk to Jeremy. Why? WESLEY I don't know. I guess... I just didn't want to think about it any more, you know... all this has reminded me so much of that day... He shrugs, very uncomfortable. Troi glances at Picard... he moves toward Wesley. Playing a role -- PICARD The day I told you your father had been killed. Wesley acknowledges... PICARD As I recall, you handled the news very well. WESLEY My parents taught me about the dangers of starfleet missions. I knew it could happen. PICARD (probing) So you were prepared. WESLEY (a beat, introspective) No, I don't think I was. Not really. How could anyone be... prepared to hear that his dad is... never coming home again. STAR TREK: "The Bonding" - REV. 8/28/89 - ACT FIVE 54. 74 CONTINUED: (5) Picard acknowledges, of course. To Jeremy -- WESLEY I just tried to be what everybody expected me to be. Brave. Mature. PICARD Are you saying you didn't want anybody to see how you really felt, Wesley? And Wesley looks down as the memories sweep across him... he looks down, nods. Softly -- PICARD So how did you really feel? WESLEY (whispers) Like somebody kicked me right in the brain. PICARD (gently) Somebody? Wesley shrugs. Doesn't look at Picard. TROI Go ahead, Wesley. You've wanted to tell him for a long time... He looks up at Picard with a tear in his eye. WESLEY I was angry. (long beat) At you. Of course, Picard knows this... but it's important for them as well as Jeremy to get it all out now... PICARD Why, Wesley? Why were you angry with me? Wesley backs away from the feelings... he's gone as far as he's comfortable... he shrugs... but that's not enough... STAR TREK: "The Bonding" - REV. 8/28/89 - ACT FIVE 55. 74 CONTINUED: (6) PICARD Were you angry because I was the one who told you he was dead? WESLEY (pause) No. PICARD Then why? Softly, painfully, outloud for the first time... WESLEY Because you led the mission. You came back. My father didn't. Picard acknowledges... moves away as Troi moves in with great compassion... TROI How long were you angry with Captain Picard, Wesley? WESLEY A long time. (turns to Picard) But not any more. Not even a little, sir. Picard's eyes close for a moment. He bows his head, almost imperceptively. That wound is forever closed. To Jeremy -- TROI And you Jeremy... must be very angry with Lieutenant Worf. And Worf is caught off guard as the attention turns to him. Jeremy looks at him. TROI He was in charge of your mother's mission. Just as Captain Picard was in command when Wesley's father was killed. Isn't that right, Jeremy Jeremy looks at Worf. WORF She was my responsibility. STAR TREK: "The Bonding" - REV. 8/28/89 - ACT FIVE 55A. 74 CONTINUED: (7) TROI Worf came back. Your mother didn't. And a long beat... as Jeremy is about to face the reality. His eyes are angry, a tear rolls down his cheek as he accuses Worf -- JEREMY Why? Why weren't you the one who died? Why did it have to be her? A long beat as they look at each other... Jeremy's tears come more easily now... TROI He can't answer that, Jeremy. (to Marla) None of us can. PICARD Lieutenant Worf also lost his parents, Jeremy. Jeremy reacts. WORF (to Jeremy) They were killed in battle when I was six. He and Worf look at each other. The bonding has begun. Worf glances at Picard and Troi. Troi nods... Worf moves toward the boy. WORF When I was alone, humans helped me. Let me help you. STAR TREK: "The Bonding" - REV. 8/25/89 - ACT FIVE 55B. 74 CONTINUED: (8) Jeremy looks back at Marla for one last hold on the fantasy... off that moment -- STAR TREK: "The Bonding" - REV. 8/28/89 - ACT FIVE 56. 74 CONTINUED: (8) WORF The Marla Aster I knew and honored is not in this room. Nor does she await you on the planet. Now she lives only here... (touches his chest) And here. Jeremy looks up to him through his tears. He cannot speak. WORF (to Jeremy) Join with me in the R'uustai, the Bonding. You will become part of my family now and for all time. We will be brothers. Worf offers his hand. Jeremy never looks back again at Marla... he stretches out a hand ??ndly to grasp for Worf's hand. The Klingon is the ?? From a simple handclasp he pulls the boy to him. Marla and Picard regard each other for a long moment. She understands she is no longer needed. She nods to Picard. She lowers her head. She disappears. The room goes back to normal -- the Aster quarters. 75 thru OMITTED 80 81 INT. WORF'S QUARTERS Worf in full Klingon regalia. Jeremy is dressed in a child's version of the Klingon robe. Jeremy and Worf are framed by the window of the stateroom. The room is dark. Five of the intricate candles are on various tables in the B.G. One is lit. Worf removes his sash, and places it across Jeremy's shoulders. He and Jeremy take a candle, and walk to the lit candle. They light theirs. They go through the room lighting the other candles. Worf finishes. Watches Jeremy. He stands looking out at the stars. WORF SoS jIH batlh SoH. Jeremy has come up behind the Klingon. STAR TREK: "The Bonding" - REV. 8/25/89 - ACT FIVE 57. 81 CONTINUED: JEREMY What does that mean? WORF It honors the memory of our mothers. We have bonded and our families are stronger. Jeremy looks where Worf is looking. JEREMY (softly) SoS jIH balth SoH. 82 EXT. SPACE - THE ENTERPRISE (OPTICAL) Moving at warp speed as we FADE OUT. END OF ACT FIVE THE END STAR TREK: THE NEXT GENERATION "Booby Trap" #40273-154 Story by Ron Roman & Michael Wagner Teleplay by Ron Roman Directed by Gabrielle Beaumont THE WRITING CREDITS MAY NOT BE FINAL AND SHOULD NOT BE USED FOR PUBLICITY OR ADVERTISING PURPOSES WITHOUT FIRST CHECKING WITH THE TELEVISION LEGAL DEPARTMENT. Copyright 1989 Paramount Pictures Corporation. All Rights Reserved. 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REVISED FINAL DRAFT AUGUST 31, 1989 STAR TREK: "Booby Trap" - REV. 9/5/89 - CAST STAR TREK: THE NEXT GENERATION "Booby Trap" CAST PICARD GOLEK SAR RIKER DATA BEVERLY TROI GEORDI WORF WESLEY O'BRIEN GUINAN CHRISTY LEAH BRAHMS COMPUTER VOICE Non-Speaking CREWMEMBERS GYPSY VIOLIN PLAYER STAR TREK: "Booby Trap" - REV. 9/1/89 - SETS STAR TREK: THE NEXT GENERATION "Booby Trap" SETS INTERIORS EXTERIORS USS ENTERPRISE USS ENTERPRISE MAIN BRIDGE TEN-FORWARD PROMELLIAN WARSHIP CORRIDOR TRANSPORTER ROOM ENGINEERING HOLODECK THREE OBSERVATION LOUNGE READY ROOM HOLODECK UTOPIA PLANITIA YARDS/ DRAFTING ROOM TROPICAL BEACH PROMELLIAN WARSHIP CORRIDOR BRIDGE COMMUNICATIONS ROOM STAR TREK: "Booby Trap" - 8/31/89 - PRONUNCIATION STAR TREK: THE NEXT GENERATION "Booby Trap" PRONUNCIATION GUIDE ORELIOUS NINE Oar-LEE-us 9 CLEPONJI Klep-ON-gee MENTHAR MEN-thar KAVIS TEKE KAY-vis Tee-Key ACETON ASS-ah-tawn STAR TREK: "Booby Trap" - REV. 9/7/89 - TEASER 1. STAR TREK: THE NEXT GENERATION "Booby Trap" TEASER FADE IN: 1 thru OMITTED 3 3A EXT. BEACH - NIGHT (OPTICAL) Pounding waves. A full amber moon. A tropical breeze. 3B A PAIR OF HANDS (OPTICAL) pick up two half coconuts with two straws in them. As it moves... pull back to reveal GEORDI's the one holding them and he's sitting on a blanket on the sand with a very attractive young woman (CHRISTY) ... a decided tension in the air. GEORDI Another Coco-no-no? CHRISTY No thanks, I think I've had enough already. GEORDI Yeah, me too. And he has these two coconuts in his hand... looks around with what to do with them. Finally, just sort of drops them off to the side. He snaps his finger and a GYPSY VIOLIN PLAYER MATERIALIZES beside them... startling Christy. Geordi desperately wants to find the courage to make his move. The gypsy begins to play romantic music. Finally, awkwardly, attempting to be casual, he moves closer to her... raises... 4 HIS ARM toward her shoulder... he hasn't touched her yet... 5 GEORDI has the stiff smile of someone who wants to look comfortable but isn't. Slowly... STAR TREK: "Booby Trap" - REV. 9/1/89 - TEASER 1A. 6 HIS HAND comes to rest on her shoulder... and now's the moment... and the instant he touches her... CHRISTY (O.S.) Geordi... STAR TREK: "Booby Trap" - REV. 9/5/89 - TEASER 2. 7 GEORDI AND CHRISTY GEORDI (tense) What? CHRISTY I'm sorry. I think I better go back now. GEORDI You're chilly... ? I can turn down the breeze... CHRISTY No, it's been a lovely program, and you're a terrific guy... GEORDI (knows what's coming) Yeah... CHRISTY I just don't feel that way about you... GEORDI Yeah... The gypsy violinist plays his soul out... irritatingly loud. GEORDI Knock it off. The music continues. COMPUTER VOICE Do you require full termination of the Holodeck program or just the audio portion? On Geordi's frustrated sigh... 8 INT. TEN-FORWARD (OPTICAL) WESLEY and DATA standing at the window looking out the windows at a field of immense flotsam and jetsam moving by, the remains of a planet destroyed in a battle long ago... STAR TREK: "Booby Trap" - REV. 8/31/89 - TEASER 2A. 8 CONTINUED: WESLEY This was the final battle, wasn't it? STAR TREK: "Booby Trap" - 8/31/89 - TEASER 3. 8 CONTINUED: DATA (acknowledges) Neither side intended Orelious Nine to be the decisive conflict. WESLEY Not much of it left, is there... DATA The destruction is remarkable considering the primitive weapons of the period. In the background, Geordi ENTERS looking forlorn, sits at the bar... GUINAN moves to him... Wesley reacts. WESLEY Uh oh... DATA I beg your pardon, Wesley? WESLEY (off his look) "Uh oh"... it's an expression, Data. It just means, you know, uh oh, something's wrong... DATA There is something wrong? WESLEY Commander La Forge had a big date with Christy tonight. He's been working on the perfect program for days. Looks like it ended kinda early. DATA Uh oh. RIKER'S COM VOICE Commander Data to the bridge immediately. DATA Acknowledged. STAR TREK: "Booby Trap" - REV. 8/31/89 - TEASER 4. 9 INT. MAIN BRIDGE PICARD, RIKER, WORF are already at their stations as Data ENTERS. Riker fills them in... RIKER We're picking up a signal, coordinates two-one-one mark six-one. Data sits in his position, immediately engages his computer. The sound of the signal is on the main speaker... it is a series of rapid "blips" of sound. DATA (reacting to the signal) It is an ancient interplanetary code. RIKER Survivors on Orelious Nine after all this time... not possible. PICARD Not at all possible. Lay in a course to the source of the signal. 10 EXT. SPACE - THE ENTERPRISE (OPTICAL) as the Enterprise alters course. The space debris speeds by -- some fragments dangerously close. 11 INT. MAIN BRIDGE DATA Approaching the source, Captain... PICARD Put it on the viewer, Mister Data. 12 MAIN VIEWER - CREW'S POV (OPTICAL) An ancient warship lying dead in space. 13 REVERSE - ON THE CREW WORF A Promellian battle cruiser. STAR TREK: "Booby Trap" - REV. 9/5/89 - TEASER 5. 13 CONTINUED: PICARD (enthusiastic) And with its Lang Cycle fusion engines intact. DATA Scanners indicate no life signs aboard. PICARD I should hope not. That ship belongs in a museum. (moving closer) Gentlemen, I'm afraid we're a little late. This call for help was very likely initiated over a thousand years ago. FADE OUT. END OF TEASER STAR TREK: "Booby Trap" - REV. 9/1/89 - ACT ONE 6. ACT ONE FADE IN: 14 EXT. SPACE - THE ENTERPRISE AND THE ANCIENT WARSHIP (OPTICAL) PICARD (V.O.) Captain's log, Stardate 43799.1. We have arrived at Orelious Nine, to chart the battle in which the Menthars and Promellians fought to their mutual extinction. Among the ruins we have found a relic: a Promellian battle cruiser that has withstood the centuries. 15 INT. CORRIDOR Picard and Riker walking toward the Transporter Room; Picard enthused with a spring in his step, Riker concerned... PICARD Indulge me, Number One... RIKER I'd prefer Lieutenant Worf and I did a security sweep of the vessel first... PICARD (frowns) No. Captain's prerogative, here. This one's mine. We've examined every conceivable risk... RIKER The risks aboard a vessel this old and fragile are inconceivable, Captain... PICARD Ghosts, perhaps? (beat) Haven't you ever dreamed of climbing inside the bottle... ? RIKER Sir... ? STAR TREK: "Booby Trap" - REV. 9/5/89 - ACT ONE 7. 15 CONTINUED: PICARD The ship in the bottle, Number One. Model air ships... I used to build them as a child. By God, I'll bet I even had a Promellian battle cruiser too. 16 INT. TRANSPORTER ROOM (OPTICAL) As they arrive... Worf is already waiting along with Data. PICARD Ready to beam the away team to the vessel... O'BRIEN Locked on to the Main Bridge, Captain... RIKER You're certain about the atmospheric conditions, Data... ? DATA There is adequate oxygen for life support, Commander... PICARD It is exactly as they left it, Number One. In the bottle. (off their looks) Good Lord, didn't anyone else here build ships in bottles when they were boys? WORF I did not play with toys. DATA I was never a boy. O'BRIEN (speaking up, filling the breach) I did, sir. PICARD (to a compatriot) Thank you, Mister O'Brien. Proceed. STAR TREK: "Booby Trap" - REV. 9/14/89 - ACT ONE 8. 16 CONTINUED: And the child in the man has taken over his face as his eyes shine with anticipation. The away team DEMATERIALIZES. Riker looks at O'Brien with a cocked eyebrow, suggesting he was stroking the captain for points. O'BRIEN I did. I really did. Ships in bottles. Great fun. Riker gives him a little smirk and as he starts to exit, there is a notable, brief dip in the power of the components -- a brown out. Neither Riker or O'Brien are overly alarmed. RIKER What's that? O'BRIEN Not sure. The secondary power bus may need adjusting. RIKER Let me know. Riker leaves the Transporter Room. O'Brien adjusts some switches on the console. 17 INT. DARKENED ANCIENT WARSHIP BRIDGE Picard, Worf and Data move around a corner. It is eerily still and dark... Worf lights a powerful flashlamp. PICARD Extraordinary. You would expect the layout of a bridge from this era to be clumsy, awkward... but see this -- it is a model of simplicity. They built the same craft for generations. And it worked. Picard wants to see everything, looks around like a kid in a candy store. Something catches Worf's attention, he turns... STAR TREK: "Booby Trap" - REV. 9/13/89 - ACT ONE 8A. 17 CONTINUED: WORF Admirable. They died at their posts. And Picard and Data look at Worf's discovery -- the skeletal remains of an ancient crewman still in his chair, head cocked to the side in the final throes of death. STAR TREK: "Booby Trap" - 8/31/89 - ACT ONE 9. 18 INT. TEN-FORWARD His head cocked to the side, rather like the skeleton, Geordi downs another glass of synthehol. And he can't quite get drunk, no matter how hard he tries... GEORDI Don't you have anything stronger than this, Guinan? GUINAN Yes. GEORDI Would it help? GUINAN No. GEORDI Can you tell me something, Guinan? You're a woman, right? GUINAN Yes, I can tell you that. GEORDI What is it that... you want in a man? GUINAN Me personally? GEORDI As a woman. What's the first thing you look at? GUINAN His head. GEORDI Uh huh... his mind, of course. GUINAN No, his head. I'm attracted to bald men. GEORDI Seriously? GUINAN Seriously. STAR TREK: "Booby Trap" - REV. 9/8/89 - ACT ONE 10. 18 CONTINUED: GEORDI Why? GUINAN Maybe because a bald man was very kind to me once... when I was hurting. Took care of me. GEORDI I'd like to do that. GUINAN (not serious) I'm taking care of myself these days. GEORDI I mean take care of somebody. (beat) Guinan, I just don't get it... I can field strip a fusion reactor... I can realign a power transfer tunnel... why can't I make anything work with a woman like Christy? I don't know what to do, what to say... GUINAN I never noticed... as a woman. GEORDI You're different. GUINAN No, you're different. GEORDI But I'm not trying now. GUINAN Exactly. Another customer signals Guinan and she moves away. A beat. He shakes his head sadly. He takes another drink. STAR TREK: "Booby Trap" - REV. 9/14/89 - ACT ONE 11. 19 INT. ANCIENT WARSHIP Data is patching in a small power pack... takes a few calculations, then turns it on... dim emergency lighting comes on. They continue their exploration... the sound of the electronic distress signal is coming closer as they work their way down a corridor... Worf is recording images with a tricorder. DATA The source of the distress signal is twenty meters ahead... PICARD Mister Worf, be sure we get tricorder images of their tactical display... WORF Yes, sir. PICARD Look here, Worf... how well laid out it is. We went through how many different designs before we reached this kind of sophistication... ? DATA I believe it was four, sir. We did not have a fully integrated tactical command until the twenty-third century. In fact, several of the Promellian innovations served as inspiration for early Federation starship design... PICARD As well they should have. Moving along, observing the large ducts... PICARD Positron ducts. These channeled power from one end of the ship to the other. STAR TREK: "Booby Trap" - REV. 9/14/89 - ACT ONE 11A. 20 INT. ANCIENT WARSHIP COMMUNICATIONS ROOM They ENTER. It is a room with several visual monitors as well as radio and electronic equipment. The signal beeps from a console where another skeleton has died... Worf scans the room... WORF It is safe to enter. PICARD Let's put an end to their last cry for help. Worf moves to a switch on the console where a light blinks and turns it off. DATA Captain... Data has found a device that may vaguely suggest a playback apparatus... he examines a round wire coil that is in playback position... DATA I believe this is an information storage device... a crude analogue of our own iso-linear optical chip. PICARD Crude by our standards today, Data. When this ship was built, humans on Earth had just perfected the mechanical clock... and were using steel crossbows in battle. (examining it) Is there any way to see what's on this? Data looks it over. STAR TREK: "Booby Trap" - REV. 9/5/89 - ACT ONE 12. 20 CONTINUED: DATA Questionable. I can supply power to the playback unit, Captain... but the components are quite old... I will attempt to amplify its image with a tricorder... As he goes to work... 21 INT. MAIN BRIDGE Riker at command. Wes reacts to something on his console... tries to make adjustments... RIKER What is it, Wes? WESLEY The main power return is acting a little weird... RIKER Define "weird". WESLEY I'm getting fluctuating waveguide readings... RIKER Run a maintenance sweep. WESLEY Right. 22 INT. ANCIENT WARSHIP (OPTICAL) Data has patched in the power. A monitor lights up... and the wire coil begins to turn... the picture is poor and the sound is distorted... but the image of a Promellian commander fades in... he begins to speak.... GALEK SAR I am Galek Sar, Captain of the Promellian cruiser, Cleponji. I wish anyone who finds this record to know my crew has behaved courageously. (MORE) STAR TREK: "Booby Trap" - REV. 9/14/89 - ACT ONE 13. 22 CONTINUED: GALEK SAR (Cont'd) I want it recorded for all time that I, alone, am responsible for the fate that befell us. (a beat) I have failed -- as a captain. And as the man responsible for all the souls aboard my ship. PICARD Indeed, sir. (keys insignia) Picard to Enterprise. RIKER'S COM VOICE Go ahead, Captain. PICARD I think we've seen just about all there is to see here. At Mister O'Brien's convenience... we are ready to return... RIKER Aye, sir. On Picard's reaction... 23 INT. BRIDGE As the away team ENTERS from the turbolift... Picard is still enthused... Riker, Wesley and TROI are on the bridge... PICARD You were absolutely right, Number One. There were ghosts aboard the old ship after all... one of them even spoke to us. RIKER A friendly one, I hope. PICARD My own counterpart. The ship captain's final message... praising his crew. STAR TREK: "Booby Trap" - REV. 9/13/89 - ACT ONE 13A. 23 CONTINUED: RIKER I hope you'll be as thoughtful when the time comes. PICARD Data, advise the Astral-Five annex of the Smithsonian... This should be catalogued and scheduled for retrieval... He catches Troi smiling at him... a look, what? TROI I'm sorry... it's just a rare pleasure to meet this side of your personality, Captain. Picard grunts, doesn't like allowing his feelings to show. Sits in his command post. Tries to pull it in. STAR TREK: "Booby Trap" - REV. 9/5/89 - ACT ONE 14. 23 CONTINUED: PICARD (gruff) Mister Crusher, set our course for the original coordinates. WESLEY Yessir. People move quickly... there is a slight dip of energy and a flutter in the light panels... they react... DATA Captain, we are experiencing a two percent drop in our energy reserves. Compensating. RIKER (to Picard) We were having a few problems while... An alarm goes off on Worf's panel. WORF (concerned) Readouts indicate we are being bombarded with a field of high intensity radiation. RIKER Shields up. Another dip in energy. Picard and Riker exchange a curious look. DATA Captain, energy loss increasing to five percent. I am unable to correct. PICARD Yellow Alert. 24 INT. TEN-FORWARD Geordi with Guinan... STAR TREK: "Booby Trap" - REV. 9/5/89 - ACT ONE 15. 24 CONTINUED: GEORDI Maybe I should've gone with the Mardi Gras program... something a little livelier... GUINAN You ever consider doing it without a program? Geordi lets that sink in a beat... GUINAN You're a pilot... Try flying without instruments for a change... you might surprise yourself. RIKER'S COM VOICE Mister La Forge, report to Engineering... And Geordi sits up, focuses... GEORDI On my way, Commander. He's on his feet, alive again, clears his head... GEORDI Save my seat, Guinan. He's gone. GUINAN (to herself) Always room at the bar for another broken heart. 25 INT. MAIN BRIDGE As before. DATA Energy loss increasing. PICARD Mister Crusher, reverse course. Full impulse power. WESLEY Sir, there's no response. STAR TREK: "Booby Trap" - REV. 9/1/89 - ACT ONE 15A. 25 CONTINUED: PICARD Increase speed to warp one. WESLEY Engines are not responding, sir. RIKER Mister La Forge, I need warp power now! STAR TREK: "Booby Trap" - REV. 9/5/89 - ACT ONE 16. 26 INT. ENGINEERING As Geordi arrives, taking stock of the situation... on the move -- a sweeping track shot... here's a man in charge, vast talent on display... moving from console to console, monitoring the instruments, making adjustments. GEORDI Matter/anti-matter mixture ratio settings at optimum balance... Reaction sequence corresponding to specified norms... Magnetic plasma transfer to warp field generators per program specs. Commander, we should be going like a bat out of hell. 27 INT. BRIDGE - CONTINUOUS (OPTICAL) DATA Power loss now at twelve percent. PICARD Red Alert. Red Alert sounds. WORF Radiation intensity increasing. GEORDI'S COM VOICE We better slow these engines down before we burn out the reaction chamber. Riker looks to Picard who acknowledges... RIKER Slow to idle, Geordi. CAMERA CLOSES IN on Picard's face as warning lights continue to flash and klaxon continues blaring. Faced with the image on the view screen of the dead battle cruiser. STAR TREK: "Booby Trap" - REV. 8/31/89 - ACT ONE 16A. 27 CONTINUED: PICARD Is it possible... have we stumbled into the same snare that killed them? A thousand-year-old... booby trap? FADE OUT: END OF ACT ONE STAR TREK: "Booby Trap" - REV. 9/5/89 - ACT TWO 17. ACT TWO FADE IN: 28 EXT. SPACE - ENTERPRISE (OPTICAL) The two vessels lie motionless in close proximity to one another. 29 INT. OBSERVATION LOUNGE (OPTICAL) Picard, Riker, Data, Worf, BEVERLY and Geordi. GEORDI With the engines idling, the energy loss has been limited. But our reserves will be depleted in less than three hours. We won't be able to hold our shields in place. BEVERLY If we lose shields, the radiation will kill everyone on board, Captain. DATA Not everyone, Doctor. BEVERLY I stand corrected. PICARD Have you identified the source of the radiation, Mister Worf? WORF No, sir. The radiation field is too strong -- it interferes with our sensors. PICARD And no apparent explanation for the loss of energy... ? Geordi shakes his head, no. STAR TREK: "Booby Trap" - REV. 8/31/89 - ACT TWO 18. 29 CONTINUED: RIKER Anything in the history books, Data that might give us a clue... ? DATA There are many fascinating records of Menthar battle strategy... they were exceptionally innovative. In fact, they were the first to devise the Kavis Teke elusive maneuver as well as a Passive Lure stratagem that is comparable to Napoleon's... RIKER (interrupting) Any mention of a situation like this? DATA No. RIKER Recommend I lead an away team to the cruiser. GEORDI They didn't have much success with this problem, Commander... RIKER But at least they knew their enemy better than we do. Maybe they even knew how they got into trouble... they just didn't know how to get out. PICARD Agreed. Worf, what would be the impact of lowering shields long enough to get an away team out... ? WORF Negligible, sir. GEORDI It won't help our energy conservation any, Captain. STAR TREK: "Booby Trap" - REV. 9/1/89 - ACT TWO 19. 29 CONTINUED: (2) PICARD That's your job, Commander La Forge. Determine a way to keep the Enterprise up and running. Data, you will join Commander Riker on the away team. Find out what happened to that ship. 30 EXT. SPACE - ANCIENT WARSHIP (OPTICAL) 31 INT. ANCIENT WARSHIP (OPTICAL) As Data MATERIALIZES on the bridge... takes a reading with the tricorder. To his communicator -- DATA (keys insignia) Radiation factor is within safe human limits, Commander. Riker MATERIALIZES. They move to begin exploration. RIKER Why isn't this ship being hit with radiation? DATA That is curious, Commander. The radiation field must be directional in nature... aimed only at the Enterprise. RIKER Maybe our own engines triggered it somehow... (beat) Data, see if you can determine what kind of defenses the Promellians tried to employ... I don't want to waste time trying them again... DATA Understood. STAR TREK: "Booby Trap" - 8/31/89 - ACT TWO 20. 31 CONTINUED: RIKER What'd really help us is a ship's log... any kind of record of their last battle. He moves off to look for one... 32 INT. ENGINEERING - A MONITOR Circuits being tested one after another... a red line signifies working condition... 33 GEORDI - CU watches... enters another command... 34 HIS FINGERS working a keyboard... 35 INT. ENGINEERING Another test is completed successfully. Geordi frowns... GEORDI (to himself) So why can't we move? A beat. Drums his fingers, mind working hard. GEORDI Computer, as we increased our power levels, was there any counter-reaction? COMPUTER VOICE Affirmative. The opposing force grew in direct proportion to the power output of the Enterprise. GEORDI So it kept us from forming a subspace field for the warp drive? COMPUTER VOICE That is correct. STAR TREK: "Booby Trap" - REV. 9/12/89 - ACT TWO 21. 35 CONTINUED: He is satisfied that he is at last making progress as he gets down to work at the computer keypad. INTERCUT: 36 COMPUTER SCREEN (OPTICAL) Typing: "Access data bank. Enterprise. Galaxy class. Subspace field." Geordi watches as the screen fills up with a "Subspace Field Menu"... revealing line by line a long list of notes, entrees, chapters... your basic intimidating owners manual index. What we want to notice... and want Geordi to notice is next to each file -- the stardate (ranging from 40000 to 41000) and name of the person who entered it... and it is the same name each time... 37 CLOSER (OPTICAL) The name -- "L. Brahms... L. Brahms... L. Brahms... " at the end of each line... GEORDI (reacts) Computer, who is this L. Brahms? The computer screen uses a digital insert to show a Starfleet identification card with a photograph of an attractive woman. COMPUTER VOICE Doctor Leah Brahms. Engineer. Graduate of the Daystrom Institute. Theoretical Propulsion Group, Galaxy class starships. Team seven, junior member. GEORDI Junior member, huh. Looks like she wrote the book on propulsion. (beat, considering) Call up subspace design logs... COMPUTER VOICE Select menu, visual records or L. Brahms' voice entries. STAR TREK: "Booby Trap" - REV. 9/6/89 - ACT TWO 22. 37 CONTINUED: GEORDI (a beat, why not?) Voice entries. A neutral, "dictating" tone of voice -- LEAH'S VOICE Theoretical propulsion logs, Federation Starship Enterprise, Galaxy class. Heading: Subspace. Author: Leah Brahms. GEORDI Geordi La Forge. How ya doin, Doc... There is no programmed response in this file, so there is no answer. And Geordi knows this, it's just tongue-in-cheek, understands he's just talking to himself... GEORDI Yeah, down to work. You're absolutely right. 38 INT. MAIN BRIDGE (OPTICAL) Picard, Beverly, Wesley, Worf. Somber mood. BEVERLY I recommend we evacuate and seal off all non-operational areas and group the families and crew on odd-numbered decks. PICARD Proceed. BEVERLY I'd also like to set up an assembly area for treating radiation in case we need it. A beat. STAR TREK: "Booby Trap" - REV. 9/5/89 - ACT TWO 22A. 38 CONTINUED: PICARD (to Beverly) After the shields fall, how long for a fatal exposure? STAR TREK: "Booby Trap" - REV. 9/5/89 - ACT TWO 23. 38 CONTINUED: BEVERLY Thirty minutes. After that, there's nothing that can be done. Picard nods, stares at the ghost ship on the viewer. RIKER'S COM VOICE Away team to bridge. Captain, we may have found something... Picard's expression changes and... INTERCUT: 39 INT. ANCIENT WARSHIP - A DIFFERENT AREA Close on a filed collection of tightly coiled wire. RIKER (continuing) We're in the Promellian communications area... PULL BACK to show Data examining the coils from a small, isolated locker. Another skeleton's remains nearby. RIKER There's a file of memory coils here... DATA They are identical to the coil we found earlier, Captain... PICARD Their captain's log, perhaps? RIKER That's what we were thinking. STAR TREK: "Booby Trap" - REV. 9/5/89 - ACT TWO 24. 39 CONTINUED: PICARD Data, are the coils in working condition? DATA I believe so. We can enhance them through the image processor in the ship's computer. PICARD Good. Return at once. 40 INT. ENGINEERING (OPTICAL) Geordi pacing, talking, thinking... GEORDI What about the dilithium crystal control? LEAH'S VOICE It should be possible to fine tune the frequency ranges... GEORDI (hopeful) Yes? STAR TREK: "Booby Trap" - REV. 9/5/89 - ACT TWO 25. 40 CONTINUED: LEAH'S VOICE And the propulsion group is investigating numerous theories to determine how. GEORDI (frowns) Great. Thanks a lot. Computer, generate a cross section image of the dilithium crystal chamber. On the monitor -- a multi-colored wire-frame image of the chamber. Geordi works the keyboard... the image rotates and changes shape. GEORDI What about reorienting the crystal? LEAH'S VOICE It is possible to reorient the crystal. The key lies in adjusting the lattice structure direction. This modification will be integrated into the next class starship. GEORDI Sorry, can't wait. You and me, Leah. We have two hours to figure this out. Silence. Studying it -- GEORDI You know what I need to do -- I need to get inside there. I need to turn that thing inside out... (standing) Computer, is there a cross section of the engines we can replicate on a Holodeck? COMPUTER VOICE Select menu: design specifications or prototype schematic. GEORDI Prototype? Elaborate... STAR TREK: "Booby Trap" - REV. 9/12/89 - ACT TWO 25A. 40 CONTINUED: (2) COMPUTER VOICE A development stage prototype schematic at Utopia Planitia, drafting room five, of the Mars Station, Stardate 40174. GEORDI Perfect. Recreate it in Holodeck Three. Stay with me, Doc. He goes to the door. STAR TREK: "Booby Trap" - REV. 9/12/89 - ACT TWO 26. 41 INT. CORRIDOR Geordi arrives, presses a panel outside Holodeck Three. GEORDI Ready computer? COMPUTER VOICE Holodeck Three program is ready. Geordi ENTERS the Holodeck. 42 INT. HOLODECK/DRAFTING ROOM (OPTICAL) A recreation of drafting room five. Banks of computers working, propulsion equipment in various modes of completion. (Through a window can be seen other forms of starship equipment). In the center of the room is the schematic display of the engines. Geordi moves to the display, circles it, greatly impressed by the room, its contents and purposes. To him, it's beautiful. GEORDI Damn. Right back where it all started. This is incredible... He moves to the cross section of the engine. GEORDI Leah, did you design this? LEAH'S VOICE The dilithium crystal chamber was designed at outpost designated Seran-T-one, Stardate 40052... Some of the Federation's best engineering minds participated in its development. GEORDI Sure, that's visiting dignitary talk, what's the inside story... off-the-record? COMPUTER Access denied. Personal logs are restricted. GEORDI Another woman who won't get personal with me in the Holodeck. STAR TREK: "Booby Trap" - 8/31/89 - ACT TWO 27. 42 CONTINUED: GEORDI Leah, I want to find a way to supplement the energy supply to the ship and to the engines. Could we alter the matter/anti-matter paths? Close -- he studies a maze of systems... LEAH'S VOICE Theoretically, yes. The system should be able to accept more reactants at a faster rate of injection. GEORDI Well, this is your baby, show me which ones... And, focused on the wall of connections, he may not have realized exactly what he said... for over his shoulder, a female hand reaches in and points to the path configuration... and slowly Geordi reacts and turns to see the image of Leah Brahms standing there... FADE OUT. END OF ACT TWO STAR TREK: "Booby Trap" - REV. 9/1/89 - ACT THREE 28. ACT THREE FADE IN: 43 EXT. SPACE - THE ENTERPRISE (OPTICAL) As before. 44 INT. HOLODECK/DRAFTING ROOM (OPTICAL) Geordi still reacting to the image of Leah. (And he's seen her face before on her ID card.) GEORDI Computer, did I ask for a simulation? COMPUTER VOICE Affirmative. You asked Doctor Brahms to show you which system could accept reactants at a faster rate. By accessing available imagery, an adequate facsimile was possible. GEORDI I did do that, didn't I? He shakes his head, smiles at himself. GEORDI Okay... Leah... good to see you... A beat as he realizes how attractive she is. GEORDI Real good. There is no response from the image. GEORDI Continue your analysis. LEAH Systems L-452 through L-575 will accept reactants, providing all other systems are calibrated to an equal factor. STAR TREK: "Booby Trap" - REV. 9/5/89 - ACT THREE 29. 44 CONTINUED: Geordi puts it together in his head, senses a breakthrough... GEORDI Then, if we use multiple injector streams, hitting more than one crystal facet, we could do it... we could hold our own. Leah, you're beautiful. (keying insignia) La Forge to Picard.... 45 INT. MAIN BRIDGE - SCIENCE ONE AND TWO (OPTICAL)) The array of equipment, operated full bore by SUPERNUMERARIES, glow in front of Picard and Riker. The coils retrieved from the alien ship are being analyzed and decoded... an operator opens a panel and inserts a coil. PICARD Go ahead. GEORDI'S COM VOICE Captain, we've found a way to extend the matter/anti-matter energy supplies. PICARD Well done, Mister La Forge. RIKER Geordi, can you give us enough energy to get us out of here? INTERCUT: 46 INT. HOLODECK/DRAFTING ROOM (OPTICAL) GEORDI Sorry, Commander... we haven't addressed that one yet. First priority was to maintain shields. RIKER Acknowledged. STAR TREK: "Booby Trap" - REV. 9/1/89 - ACT THREE 30. 46 CONTINUED: GEORDI We'll get on it, right away, though... PICARD Pass on my congratulations to your team, Commander. Geordi glances at the impassive face of the Leah facsimile. GEORDI Thanks, Captain. We're... all smiles down here. 47 INT. MAIN BRIDGE - SCIENCE ONE PICARD Picard out. Data moves over with an update on their progress. DATA We have been able to verify that these coils are logs of the Promellian captain... but most of them have decayed and cannot be repaired... RIKER They're beyond any sort of playback... ? DATA On most there are brief sections that may yield some information. RIKER Do the best you can, Data. Let's just hope we have the brief section we need... Data moves back to the supernumeraries... PICARD (to Riker) He must have logged the cause of his ship's death. What captain wouldn't? STAR TREK: "Booby Trap" - REV. 9/1/89 - ACT THREE 31. 47 CONTINUED: They stop to look at a console. On its screen the image is fuzz and static. One of the supernumeraries shakes his head, puts the coil into a pile of others... RIKER They were all in an open locker. I don't think he was too concerned with security. 48 INT. HOLODECK/DRAFTING ROOM GEORDI (to computer) ... 452 through system L-575. COMPUTER VOICE Adjustments to dilithium crystal chamber complete. GEORDI Impact analysis, computer. COMPUTER VOICE Warp energy has increased fourteen percent. Reactants per unit time remaining steady. GEORDI All right. It worked. Geordi turns to share the moment with Leah. There is of course nothing to share with a blank wall. He looks at her. Frowns. GEORDI Computer, do you have any... you know... personality... on file for Doctor Brahms? COMPUTER VOICE Starfleet personality profile analysis, stardate 37650... Moves to her, thinking, what else does he need... GEORDI Did she ever debate at the intergalactic caucuses on Chaya-seven? STAR TREK: "Booby Trap" - REV. 8/31/89 - ACT THREE 32. 48 CONTINUED: COMPUTER VOICE Doctor Brahms attended Chaya-seven caucuses on the following stardates... GEORDI Never mind the dates... (beat) Computer, if you add all data from these sources, could you synthesize a true representation of Doctor Brahms? COMPUTER VOICE There would be a nine-point-three percent margin of error in the interactive responses from the facsimile. GEORDI I can live with that. Make it happen. The image of Leah warms up, turns and smiles at Geordi. There's a feisty spirit in her eyes. GEORDI Doctor Brahms? LEAH Geordi, it's me, Leah. Don't start calling me "Doctor Brahms" or I'll call you "Commander" La Forge. GEORDI (smiles) Right. LEAH Now, we've managed to maintain energy but we can't leave it in this realignment forever without burning out components so we need to move quickly... He's a little slow on the uptake, still a bit mesmerized with her... noticing, with a curl of a smile -- LEAH Are you with me? STAR TREK: "Booby Trap" - REV. 9/6/89 - ACT THREE 33. 48 CONTINUED: (2) GEORDI Right. And back to work.... 49 INT. MAIN BRIDGE - CLOSE ON MONITOR (OPTICAL) On screen is the fuzzy, distorted image of the Promellian captain, GALEK SAR. There is no audio at first, just hiss and static and isolated words... when it clears up -- GALEK SAR (MONITOR) ... have been stripped of all propulsion, and our weapons are useless. We can't move -- and we can't fight. The ship is being lashed with lethal radiation from the Aceton assimilators concealed in the rubble surrounding.... More hiss and static.... the image freezes. 50 NEW ANGLE Picard, Riker standing behind Data who is seated. PICARD Aceton assimilators -- ? DATA An Aceton assimilator is a primitive generator which can drain power from distant sources. RIKER Generator... DATA It would not be difficult to modify them to convert energy into radiation. STAR TREK: "Booby Trap" - REV. 9/1/89 - ACT THREE 34. 50 CONTINUED: RIKER (theorizing) The Menthars hide them in the floating debris... and an unsuspecting enemy ship flies in... instant booby trap. PICARD And now we're supplying the devices with the energy to kill us. 51 INT. HOLODECK/DRAFTING ROOM (OPTICAL) Geordi with Leah... in an argument. Voice on top of voice... they're working on the cross-section of the crystal chamber... GEORDI No... no... no... LEAH Will you listen to me... GEORDI You can't boost the warp power that way... LEAH If you can just increase the speed of the parallel subspace field processor to gain a quicker response time... GEORDI I want to give us enough power to strengthen the shields and barrel out of here... not blow us up... LEAH This is my design we're talking about. I did all the calculations myself. GEORDI I don't care if you built it with your bare hands out of an old Ferengi cargo ship, it's going to go -- STAR TREK: "Booby Trap" - REV. 8/31/89 - ACT THREE 34A. 51 CONTINUED: He whistles and makes a flying away gesture with his hand. STAR TREK: "Booby Trap" - REV. 9/1/89 - ACT THREE 35. 51 CONTINUED: (2) GEORDI -- and we're going with it. LEAH I'm not used to having people question my judgment. GEORDI And I'm not used to dying. (beat) You worked in a lab on a static model. This is a working machine, it has tens of thousands of light years on it. Leah thinks about it. LEAH True. GEORDI Damn right. (calmer) We'd never be certain the circuit paths are sealed. She frowns, forced to agree, looks at him with interest. LEAH You're good. Very good. GEORDI (shrugs) I know my ship. Inside and out. LEAH (grins) Then I guess you know me. Inside and out. Cause a lot of me is in here. GEORDI I always wished the chief engineer could be present when a ship is being built. LEAH And that's what's wrong with designers -- we never get out in space. STAR TREK: "Booby Trap" - REV. 9/6/89 - ACT THREE 36. 51 CONTINUED: (3) GEORDI You're there now. And it's a unique intimate moment between them... she smiles at him. RIKER'S COM VOICE Commander La Forge to the bridge. GEORDI On my way, Commander. (to Leah) Don't go anywhere. (beat, second thought) I mean, computer -- save program. He EXITS. TIME CUT: 52 INT. MAIN BRIDGE Picard, Riker, Worf, Data and Geordi. PICARD How many of these devices do we think we're dealing with? DATA To create the radiation field we are experiencing, it would take several hundred thousand, Captain... STAR TREK: "Booby Trap" - REV. 9/1/89 - ACT THREE 37. 52 CONTINUED: RIKER They've been out there a long time, Data... there must be some deterioration.... DATA There is no way to calculate that precisely, Commander... but it is likely... PICARD Is there any indication of a weakness in a specific part of the field... Worf checks indications at his station. WORF Nothing substantial, Captain. PICARD Of any kind. WORF A point-one percent dip in the strength of the radiation field at two-one mark eight by four-two mark zero... PICARD I'll take that point-one percent. RIKER Recommend we fire a directional phaser pattern at those coordinates... GEORDI We won't be able to maintain energy reserves... we might even lose some circuits in the new configuration... PICARD How critical would the losses be? GEORDI Not enough to shut down our engines... but if we don't make it... I don't know if we could hold shields. STAR TREK: "Booby Trap" - REV. 8/31/89 - ACT THREE 38. 52 CONTINUED: (2) DATA There is also the possibility the phasers will supply the assimilators with what they need most -- energy. PICARD Mister La Forge, alternative suggestions? GEORDI (shakes his head) Maybe down the road, Captain... But we can't overload the dilithium crystals much longer. The focus turns to Picard... who must make the extraordinarily difficult decision. He agonizes over it a moment. PICARD I imagine a discussion very much like this took place on our neighbor's ship a thousand years ago. May our decisions meet with more success than theirs. (decides) Mister La Forge, you will return to Engineering and continue your efforts without delay. Mister Worf, prepare the phasers. And Geordi EXITS... and as everyone else moves into their positions... WORF Phasers locked on coordinates. Picard nods to Riker RIKER Fire. STAR TREK: "Booby Trap" - REV. 8/31/89 - ACT THREE 39. 53 EXT. SPACE - THE ENTERPRISE (OPTICAL) A multiple stream of phaser fire fans out in one direction. 54 ANGLE ON MAIN VIEWER (OPTICAL) Phaser fire strikes the debris. The debris absorbs the fire. 55 INT. MAIN BRIDGE Slow push in on Picard's face as he realizes the gamble has failed. RIKER (O.S.) Nothing. WORF (O.S.) Radiation levels increasing, Captain. Eight percent. Ten percent. DATA (O.S.) Energy reserves on board dropping rapidly... Extreme close-up... to an enemy dead a thousand years, he says, under his breath -- PICARD Damn you. 56 INT. HOLODECK/DRAFTING ROOM (OPTICAL) Geordi and Leah huddle over a computer graphic. GEORDI Wouldn't that increase the output of the parallel subspace processors to gain a quicker response time... ? LEAH The processors can handle the extra input. GEORDI Yeah, but how do we reconfigure... ? STAR TREK: "Booby Trap" - REV. 9/5/89 - ACT THREE 40. 56 CONTINUED: The drafting room begins to fade. COMPUTER VOICE Energy reserves reaching critical stage. Standard procedure requires termination of all simulations. GEORDI Computer, override standard procedure... COMPUTER VOICE Override authority restricted. GEORDI What? -- computer -- The drafting room and Leah disappear. Geordi is in the empty Holodeck. A few lights pulsate on the walls. FADE OUT. END ACT THREE STAR TREK: "Booby Trap" - REV. 9/1/89 - ACT FOUR 41. ACT FOUR FADE IN: 57 EXT. SPACE - THE ENTERPRISE (OPTICAL) In space. The Promellian cruiser lying dead near it. 58 INT. OBSERVATION LOUNGE (OPTICAL) Picard, Riker, Data, Worf and Beverly. Faces are grim. GEORDI'S COM VOICE The crystal lattice is breaking down... INTERCUT: 59 INT. ENGINEERING Geordi checking over readouts. GEORDI (continuing) We'll have to pick up repairs when we can reach a starbase.... RIKER The optimist in the group. PICARD How long do we have shields based on current calculations... ? WORF Under two hours, Captain. And the radiation field has increased by seventeen percent. PICARD (to Beverly) Impact on fatal exposure? BEVERLY Down to twenty-six minutes. STAR TREK: "Booby Trap" - REV. 9/5/89 - ACT FOUR 42. 59 CONTINUED: RIKER If we resist, we die. If we don't resist, we die. PICARD Mister La Forge, have we shut down all non-essential energy usage? GEORDI Yes, Captain. In fact, I need to get some back... I'm running a program on Holodeck Three... PICARD For what purpose? GEORDI I've gone back to the beginning... to the earliest construction entries of the Enterprise. I've created... a... propulsion design model to assist me. I believe we're... making progress... PICARD Computer, reinstate Holodeck Three program. COMPUTER VOICE Holodeck Three program is reinstated. PICARD Your best suggestion in an hour, Mister La Forge. Picard out. 59A INT. CORRIDOR Geordi arrives at the Holodeck... GEORDI Computer, resume Holodeck Three program. COMPUTER Enter when ready. STAR TREK: "Booby Trap" - REV. 9/5/89 - ACT FOUR 42A. 60 INT. HOLODECK/DRAFTING ROOM Geordi ENTERS. He and Leah share a look of concern. LEAH There isn't much time left. Geordi acknowledges... his mind working. STAR TREK: "Booby Trap" - REV. 8/31/89 - ACT FOUR 43. 60 CONTINUED: GEORDI Somehow, we have to generate enough energy to get out of here... but we've got a booby-trap that eats energy for breakfast... how do we fool it, block it, shut it down, anything... He moves to the computer terminal... GEORDI Okay, we know for every movement the Enterprise makes, there's a counter-movement from the energy field... could we use that to our advantage somehow... LEAH Maybe. There must be a time differential between the force and counter-force response... He makes an entry into the terminal... feels Leah moving up behind him, her body brushes against the back of his neck as she looks over his shoulder... LEAH If we could make quick, continuing adjustments in the linkups before the counterforce reacts, we might just be able to move this bucket... And he nods, GEORDI Yes... He turns and looks at her with enthusiasm... and her face is terribly close to his and it's that moment when two people have been locked up together for hours on end working toward a common goal and it moves into personal, sexual feelings... he feels it inside, but there's no time for this now... and her face acknowledges it... he turns away, types furiously... GEORDI Leah, you like Italian food? She looks at him and smiles at him from behind... lays a hand on his shoulder... STAR TREK: "Booby Trap" - REV. 9/1/89 - ACT FOUR 44. 60 CONTINUED: (2) LEAH Like it? Wait til I make you my fungilli. As they look at the computer display coming up... GEORDI (re: computer) Okay, fusion reactor uplink to navigation processor... 60A EXT. SPACE - THE ENTERPRISE (OPTICAL) Time transition. 61 INT. HOLODECK/DRAFTING ROOM - ON SCREEN DISPLAY (OPTICAL) Showing connections between the master computer and other controls... changing rapidly... GEORDI (O.S.) But then we have to adjust the drive coils... and the vector processor... it's impossible.. Pulling back to see him tired in his chair, posture suggests he's been sitting for awhile now... she's massaging his shoulders... GEORDI Don't do that... LEAH Sorry... I thought it might feel good. GEORDI I don't want to feel that good right now. What time is it? LEAH Coming up on sixteen hundred hours. GEORDI God, what am I supposed to tell the Captain? He stands, frustrated... STAR TREK: "Booby Trap" - REV. 9/1/89 - ACT FOUR 45. 61 CONTINUED: GEORDI It's possible and yet it's impossible... everything we've done says we can't adjust fast enough... but if we could, it might work... LEAH (quietly) I could do it. GEORDI Data couldn't even do it. It'll take a hundred... maybe even a thousand adjustments every second... how are you gonna do it? It's humanly impossible. LEAH I'm not human. And that hits Geordi and after a beat he laughs at himself for getting so caught up in his program... but it is a little sad too... GEORDI You mean the computer could do it. She acknowledges. The door slides open and Picard ENTERS, reacts to Leah... GEORDI (almost introducing) Captain, this is... a holographic simulation of one of the propulsion experts who designed the Enterprise engines... Leah Brahms. Doctor Leah Brahms. STAR TREK: "Booby Trap" - REV. 9/1/89 - ACT FOUR 46. 61 CONTINUED: (2) Picard looks at her without acknowledging her... there's an awkward beat. He turns and waits to hear from Geordi... GEORDI We... I've been examining the force and counter-force response time... and trying to see if we could create linkage at maximum power... PICARD The bottom line, Commander. GEORDI There's a chance we could manuever out of the trap... if we turn the ship over to the computer. And he feels awkward as he says it. And Picard's eyes tell us he loathes the idea. But his feelings aren't relevant right now. PICARD What kind of chance? GEORDI I don't know yet. But we can program it and try it out on a few simulated runs. PICARD Proceed. He starts to exit... pauses. PICARD This is the only way... GEORDI I think so, Captain. Picard acknowledges, leaves without glancing again at Leah. Geordi exchanges a look with her. 62 INT. CAPTAIN'S READY ROOM Picard is sitting, staring into the middle distance. There is a chime. He pauses before -- STAR TREK: "Booby Trap" - REV. 9/1/89 - ACT FOUR 47. 62 CONTINUED: PICARD Come. Riker ENTERS. RIKER Any word from La Forge? PICARD He's come up with something that might give us a chance. If we agree to stay out of it. RIKER Sir? PICARD He proposes to turn control of the ship over to the computer because it is capable of making quicker adjustments than any human being. They exchange a look. RIKER Computers have always impressed me by their ability to take orders; I'm not at all as certain about their ability to give them. PICARD Especially with a thousand lives at stake. (frowns) What choice do I have? (MORE) STAR TREK: "Booby Trap" - REV. 9/5/89 - ACT FOUR 48. 62 CONTINUED: (2) PICARD (Cont'd) (beat) You missed something by not playing with model ships. They were the source of one boy's imaginary voyages, each holding a treasure of adventures. Manning the earliest space craft. Or flying a plane with only one propeller to keep you in the sky. Imagine that. (beat) Now, the machines are flying us. Off Riker's reaction... 63 INT. HOLODECK/DRAFTING ROOM Geordi and Leah watching a viewer... INTERCUT: 64 CLOSER - THE VIEWER (OPTICAL) seems like a super sophisticated graphic arcade game... a ship moving through the asteroid field... when it gets too close to one, there is a brilliant beam of energy that covers the ship... the image freezes... COMPUTER VOICE Fatal radiation exposure. GEORDI Computer, reduce thrust levels another four percent... adjust trajectory angle to compensate... begin simulation again... The image of the ship moves cautiously through the asteroid field... and this time it gets through. LEAH There you go. We got out. Geordi isn't satisfied... GEORDI Repeat simulation, same levels. STAR TREK: "Booby Trap" - REV. 9/6/89 - ACT FOUR 49. 64 CONTINUED: The image of the ship just begins to move when radiation wipes it out. COMPUTER VOICE Fatal radiation exposure. GEORDI Swell. Same variables. Only this time the computer didn't quite make it... The console screen goes to static. The Red Alert sounds. COMPUTER VOICE (so calmly) Deflector shield failure. Lethal radiation levels. Fatal exposure in twenty-six minutes. Geordi exchanges a glance with Leah. The Red Alert continues. FADE OUT. END ACT FOUR STAR TREK: "Booby Trap" - REV. 9/6/89 - ACT FIVE 50. ACT FIVE FADE IN: 65 INT. HOLODECK/DRAFTING ROOM As before. COMPUTER VOICE Deflector shield failure. Lethal radiation levels. Fatal exposure in twenty-three minutes. Pushing in to Geordi's face... looking at the static viewer. GEORDI I can't do it. LEAH It might work, Geordi. GEORDI And it might not. I can't ask the captain to turn the ship over to a computer. LEAH It's all we've got. PICARD'S COM VOICE Picard to La Forge. GEORDI Captain... two minutes... give me just two minutes.... 66 INT. MAIN BRIDGE All hands in place except Geordi. GEORDI'S COM VOICE There is another way, Captain... two minutes... PICARD Two minutes. Picard out. STAR TREK: "Booby Trap" - REV. 9/1/89 - ACT FIVE 51. 67 INT. HOLODECK/DRAFTING ROOM LEAH Geordi, there's no other way... GEORDI (interrupting) No..no... wait, listen... turn it upside down, literally... come at it from the opposite direction... God, it's so simple... it might even work... She shakes her head... COMPUTER VOICE Lethal levels of radiation... GEORDI Computer, shut up... at least in Holodeck Three... The computer shuts up... Geordi sits down at the console... GEORDI Computer, new simulation... Push into his face... TIME CUT: 68 INT. MAIN BRIDGE Full cast. GEORDI Everything we've been trying to do is based on overpowering the trap... more energy, faster adjustments... but that's exactly what we can't do, because that's what we're supposed to do. That's the booby trap. (beat) The answer is in our own computer... the mind -- the best piece of engineering we'll ever need. STAR TREK: "Booby Trap" - REV. 9/6/89 - ACT FIVE 52. 68 CONTINUED: PICARD Didn't your research suggest thousands of adjustments would be required per second? GEORDI Not if we turn everything off. Reactions. Turn everything off. Whoa, Geordi... GEORDI One blast of everything we've got left for a microsecond to beat the inertia and then we shut it all down except minimal life support and two thrusters. No impulse engines. No computer. Riker looks at Picard... RIKER One propeller, Captain... COMPUTER VOICE Deflector shield failure. Lethal radiation levels. Fatal exposure in twelve minutes. PICARD Have you analyzed the risk factor? GEORDI The numbers say it's even money. No better than handing it over to the computer. No worse either. But I say forget the numbers. There's no way for a computer to compensate for the human factor... the intuition, the experience... Picard nods... PICARD Make it ready. People move into positions... GEORDI I've run the simulations... If you want me to take Conn... STAR TREK: "Booby Trap" - REV. 9/5/89 - ACT FIVE 52A. 68 CONTINUED: (2) PICARD No, Mister La Forge. You've done your job. Now I must do mine. Picard crosses to Conn. STAR TREK: "Booby Trap" - REV. 9/6/89 - ACT FIVE 53. 68 CONTINUED: (3) PICARD I relieve you, Mister Crusher. Wesley yields his station to Picard. WESLEY Yes, sir. Wesley moves to the command area, stands to Riker's side. 69 ON PICARD Picard sits down at Conn, looks over the controls. RIKER (to com) All hands, this is Commander Riker. We are about to engage impulse engines for a short burst. Inertial dampers are on manual. They may not fully compensate for acceleration. Brace yourselves. COMPUTER VOICE Deflector shield failure. Lethal radiation levels. Fatal -- RIKER Computer, discontinue radiation warning till further notice. Riker nods to Picard: "all yours, Captain." PICARD Firing impulse engines. Picard makes it so. 70 EXT. SPACE - THE ENTERPRISE (OPTICAL) as the impulse engines flare to life and almost immediately shut down. The ship slowly starts to move. STAR TREK: "Booby Trap" - REV. 9/7/89 - ACT FIVE 54. 71 INT. MAIN BRIDGE Crew reacting to the force of breaking free. Picard touches the helm panel. DATA Impulse engines are now down. GEORDI Shutting down all systems. The bridge lights go out. DATA Velocity is one hundred thirty two meters per second. WORF We will enter the debris field in eight seconds. 72 ANGLE TO INCLUDE MAIN VIEWER (OPTICAL) as Picard stares intently at the asteroid fragments and other debris ahead, decides on the course he wishes to take, and touches his panel. DATA Starboard thruster firing. 73 EXT. SPACE - THE ENTERPRISE (OPTICAL) as a tiny lateral thruster fires and the ship gently shifts course. A large chunk of asteroid looms ahead. 74 INT. MAIN BRIDGE RIKER Coming to heading three-four-zero mark one-zero. Picard, intent on the viewscreen, kills the thruster. RIKER Captain, that large mass to port may contain an assimilator. STAR TREK: "Booby Trap" - REV. 9/7/89 - ACT FIVE 55. 74 CONTINUED: Picard fires another thruster -- a quick burst this time. DATA Port thruster firing... 75 EXT. SPACE - THE ENTERPRISE (OPTICAL) gradually adjusting course and gliding silently past the asteroid. 76 INT. MAIN BRIDGE WORF No reaction from the assimilator. RIKER We're past the first hurdle. Wesley shakes his head in wonder at Picard's coolness. WORF Sir! Object to port -- Picard, imperturbable, is already firing a thruster. DATA Starboard thruster. Picard, watching the viewer, sees the object sail past the ship... Reactions... Picard's eyes move on to the next problem. DATA Sir, the gravitational attraction of the various masses has reduced our velocity by eight percent. By my calculations, we no longer possess sufficient momentum to clear the debris field -- Picard quietly interrupts; he doesn't need to hear this. PICARD Thank you, Mister Data. Picard fires a thruster -- STAR TREK: "Booby Trap" - REV. 9/7/89 - ACT FIVE 55A. 76 CONTINUED: DATA Port thruster... 77 OMITTED 78 ANGLE TO INCLUDE MAIN VIEWER (OPTICAL) as a monstrous asteroid glides into view, dead ahead. STAR TREK: "Booby Trap" - REV. 9/7/89 - ACT FIVE 56. 79 ON WESLEY AND RIKER Wesley's eyes widen. He looks to Riker. 80 ON PICARD AND DATA Picard watches the viewscreen -- but makes no move to fire a thruster. DATA The asteroid's gravity is drawing us closer. Velocity increasing. Picard doesn't react. 81 EXT. SPACE - THE ENTERPRISE (OPTICAL) heading straight for the massive asteroid and picking up speed. 82 INT. MAIN BRIDGE Everyone's watching the viewscreen. Geordi and Worf exchange a look -- "I hope he knows what he's doing." Still Picard waits... and waits. DATA Velocity still increasing... now two hundred and nineteen meters per second. Picard remains impassive. 83 ANGLE TO INCLUDE MAIN VIEWER (OPTICAL) as the bulk of the asteroid fills the screen. Picard poises a hand over the helm, waits a beat, then fires a thruster -- DATA Starboard thruster. STAR TREK: "Booby Trap" - REV. 9/7/89 - ACT FIVE 57. 84 EXT. SPACE - THE ENTERPRISE (OPTICAL) as a thruster BLASTS to life. The ship, still gaining speed, slowly changes course -- and instead of colliding with the asteroid, it whips around it -- the slingshot effect flinging the Enterprise on a new course, completely out of the debris field. 85 INT. MAIN BRIDGE Picard, as impassive as before, shuts down the thruster. DATA (to Picard) You have used the asteroid's gravitational pull as a slingshot. Excellent. RIKER We're out. We beat it. Picard stands, the crew looks at him with awe. PICARD Mister Crusher, the conn is yours. WESLEY (with great respect) Yes, sir! Wesley takes his station. Picard returns to the command chair. PICARD Initiate full restart. Bring all systems back on-line. GEORDI With pleasure, sir. And with a victorious jab, Geordi turns his Engineering Station back on, starts to work. BRIDGE LIGHTS come back on full. PICARD Number One... make sure the booby trap won't bother anyone again. STAR TREK: "Booby Trap" - REV. 9/13/89 - ACT FIVE 58. 85 CONTINUED: RIKER Mister Worf, ready photon torpedoes, all bays... set to detonate upon impact with the Promellian vessel. WORF Aye, sir. 86 EXT. SPACE - THE ENTERPRISE (OPTICAL) FIRING a spread of torpedoes that explodes at the ancient vessel... and the entire area goes white with the explosive force obliterating the entire asteroid field. TIME CUT: 87 INT. HOLODECK/DRAFTING ROOM (OPTICAL) Geordi with Leah. A quiet moment. GEORDI I've always thought that technology could solve any problem. It enhances our quality of life... It lets us travel across the galaxy... It even gave me my vision. (beat) But sometimes you just need to trust yourself and turn it all off. Even the gypsy violins. LEAH Violins? GEORDI Different program. Sorry. They look at each other for a beat. LEAH We made a good team. GEORDI Maybe we could do it again some time. STAR TREK: "Booby Trap" - REV. 9/5/89 - ACT FIVE 58A. 87 CONTINUED: LEAH I'm with you every day, Geordi. Every time you look at this engine, you're looking at me. Every time you touch it, it's me. STAR TREK: "Booby Trap" - REV. 9/5/89 - ACT FIVE 59. 87 CONTINUED: (2) He acknowledges. They smile at each other. He moves to her and kisses her on the lips... a soft gentle, goodbye kiss. A last look and... GEORDI Computer, exit Holodeck. Save program. The door opens. The program ends. He leaves. 88 EXT. SPACE - THE ENTERPRISE (OPTICAL) As it moves off to explore other worlds... FADE OUT. END OF ACT FIVE THE END STAR TREK: THE NEXT GENERATION "The Enemy" (f.k.a. "The Mettle of Man") #40273-155 Written by Michael Piller Directed by David Carson THE WRITING CREDITS MAY NOT BE FINAL AND SHOULD NOT BE USED FOR PUBLICITY OR ADVERTISING PURPOSES WITHOUT FIRST CHECKING WITH THE TELEVISION LEGAL DEPARTMENT. Copyright 1989 Paramount Pictures Corporation. All Rights Reserved. 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FINAL DRAFT SEPTEMBER 11, 1989 STAR TREK: "The Enemy" - 9/11/89 - CAST STAR TREK: THE NEXT GENERATION "The Enemy" CAST PICARD PATAHK RIKER TOMALAK DATA BOCHRA BEVERLY TROI GEORDI WORF WESLEY O'BRIEN Non-Speaking MEDICAL SUPERNUMERARIES SECURITY GUARDS TWO CREWMEMBERS STAR TREK: "The Enemy" - REV. 9/12/89 - SETS STAR TREK: THE NEXT GENERATION "The Enemy" SETS INTERIORS EXTERIORS USS ENTERPRISE USS ENTERPRISE MAIN BRIDGE CAPTAIN'S READY ROOM ROMULAN WARSHIP TRANSPORTER ROOM CORRIDOR GALORNDON CORE SICKBAY SURFACE BEVERLY'S OFFICE OBSERVATION LOUNGE RIKER'S QUARTERS ROMULAN WARSHIP CAPTAIN'S READY ROOM GALORNDON CORE PIT CAVE STAR TREK: "The Enemy" - REV. 9/14/89 - PRONUNCIATION STAR TREK: THE NEXT GENERATION "The Enemy" PRONUNCIATION GUIDE RIBOSOME RYE-bo-zome PATAHK Pah-tock TOMALAK TOM-uh-lack BOCHRA BAH-kruh STAR TREK: "The Enemy" - 9/11/89 - TEASER 1. STAR TREK: THE NEXT GENERATION "The Enemy" TEASER FADE IN: 1 thru OMITTED 4 5 EXT. GALORNDON SURFACE (OPTICAL) A hellish environment bathed in a BLUE-HUED light. Cold and dusty (it is always night), the planet is whipped by gale force winds. Visibility is only a few feet. Crackling blue ARCS of electricity slash across the sky. RIKER, WORF and GEORDI MATERIALIZE. It is an immediate struggle to see. Riker lays a marker down on the ground where they beamed in. RIKER Marking beam-out position. Return transport: fourteen minutes, forty seconds. Worf and Riker light their palm beacons... beams of light shoot out... it doesn't help a lot. RIKER Your view any better, Geordi? GEORDI (adjusting his VISOR) Not too bad, sir. A lot of charged-particle precipitation, but I can compensate. WORF Communicators are dysfunctional. RIKER Tricorders? WORF Readings only valid within five meters. GEORDI (re: his tricorder) I'm not so sure of that... I'm reading Worf as an unintelligent life form. STAR TREK: "The Enemy" - REV. 9/15/89 - TEASER 2. 5 CONTINUED: Worf shoots Geordi a look. RIKER Good thing we didn't bring Data... we would've been unscrambling his circuits for a week... As they move from the beam down position... Geordi reacts to something he sees... 6. GEORDI'S VISOR POV - (OPTICAL) picking up objects that have a different molecular reading than the ground cover... GEORDI (O.S.) Picking up something on the positron scan, Commander. 7 EXT. GALORNDON SURFACE Geordi takes the point... GEORDI Over here. Some electrically conductive objects. Moving with them as they begin to encounter pieces of wreckage from a small landing craft, badly destroyed... Riker looks down at some, reacts as he sees familiar markings. RIKER Recognize the markings, Worf? WORF Yessir. Romulan. RIKER I wonder what the hell they were doing in a Federation sector. GEORDI I'm picking up traces of ultritium residue with my VISOR, Commander. An explosive device must've been used to destroy the craft after it crashed. STAR TREK: "The Enemy" - REV. 9/14/89 - TEASER 2A. 7 CONTINUED: They exchange a look. That means survivors. They draw phasers. RIKER Spread out... twenty five meter radius... our window back closes in nine minutes... STAR TREK: "The Enemy" - REV. 9/12/89 - TEASER 3. 7 CONTINUED: They spread out. Moving with Geordi as he continues to follow -- 8 ANOTHER ANGLE as the distance between them increases, there is no longer visual contact... Geordi disappears into the storm as Worf comes across a seriously hurt Romulan (PATAHK). WORF Commander... Riker is not visible... likely out of earshot in the wind... Worf bends down, rolls the Romulan on his back. Patahk is MOANING, delirious. WORF Commander Riker... Patahk opens his eyes and sees Worf. He lunges up from the ground, and tries to close his hands around Worf's throat. Worf struggles with the Romulan and succeeds easily in immobilizing the injured man. A moment later, Riker appears, reacts to the sight of the Romulan. 9 WITH GEORDI moving along the terrain... suddenly without warning, the earth beneath him collapses and... 10 INT. PIT Geordi falls hard to the ground, splashing in muddy water... his VISOR is flung from his face on impact... he groans, stunned... reaches out, trying to find the VISOR in the puddle, finally touches it... puts it on... wipes it off... sees that he's in a deep pit... NEW ANGLE The sky raging in a small opening many feet overhead... The walls are slick and muddy -- not rocky... there's no way back up. STAR TREK: "The Enemy" - REV. 9/13/89 - TEASER 4. 11 CONTINUED: GEORDI (yelling) COMMANDER RIKER... WORF... HEY UP THERE... 12 RIKER AND WORF can't hear him. They are supporting the Romulan... moving him back to the beam-out spot. WORF Four minutes to beam-up, sir. Riker tries to see through the storm... it's impossible... RIKER Where is he? Wait here... He moves into the storm, quickly disappearing... 13 GEORDI trying his communicator, knowing it doesn't work... GEORDI La Forge to Riker... La Forge to Worf... (yelling up again) HEY... He tries to climb... the walls are wet and slippery... he only succeeds in bringing more mud sliding down on top of him... 14 RIKER moving through the storm... it's getting worse... RIKER GEORDI... 15 WORF AND PATAHK (OPTICAL) Worf kneeling on one leg... the Romulan is barely clinging to consciousness. STAR TREK: "The Enemy" - 9/11/89 - TEASER 5. 15 CONTINUED: Worf, knowing time is running out, looks out into the fog... sees Riker returning alone... they exchange a look that says Geordi's lost. With a burst of determination, Worf rises and starts to move away into the storm to find Geordi... RIKER (sharply) Lieutenant Worf, maintain your position. Worf reluctantly obeys. A moment later all three DEMATERIALIZE. HOLD on the wind-swept wasteland as the fierce electrical storm takes hold. 16 INT. CAVERN Geordi looks up and no longer bothers yelling. He knows it's useless. As we push into his face... FADE OUT. END OF TEASER STAR TREK: "The Enemy" - REV. 9/12/89 - ACT ONE 6. ACT ONE FADE IN: 16A EXT. SPACE - THE ENTERPRISE (OPTICAL) In orbit around Galorndon Core, an electromagnetically shrouded planet, obscured by fierce storms and wildly erratic arcs of jagged electricity. PICARD (V.O.) Captain's log, Stardate 43349.2. An unidentified distress signal has led to the discovery of a crashed Romulan vessel on the surface of Galorndon Core, a Federation planet. 17 INT. TRANSPORTER ROOM Much activity... the Romulan being examined by BEVERLY... MEDICAL SUPERNUMERARIES arriving with a gurney... PICARD (V.O.) (continuing) We have recovered one survivor. Lieutenant Commander La Forge did not report back with the away team and is still missing on the surface. BEVERLY Get him to Sickbay. Worf observes... ordering SECURITY GUARDS to follow -- WORF Secure Sickbay. Post guards in visual contact at all times. Reacting, on the move -- BEVERLY He's not going anywhere, Lieutenant. Worf doesn't waver, nods to the security personnel to follow the medical team... as they do, they pass PICARD who arrives... moves to Riker who is with O'BRIEN at his console... STAR TREK: "The Enemy" - REV. 9/12/89 - ACT ONE 7. 17 CONTINUED: O'Brien trying in vain to find some trace of Geordi in the transporter scan. O'BRIEN I'm sorry, Commander... There's just no way to lock in on anything down there... RIKER (controlled) Keep trying, Mister O'Brien. O'BRIEN (shakes his head, useless) The electrical storms are creating thousands of ghosts... RIKER (sharp) Then beam some of the ghosts up here... one of them may be La Forge. (sees Picard) Request permission to lead another away team... PICARD Denied. (off his look) When we get another window in the storms. Riker acknowledges, collects himself. PICARD The crash site? Moving out into... 18. INT. CORRIDOR - CONTINUOUS Walking... RIKER The Romulan craft's a total loss. There's nothing there to salvage -- unless we do it with tweezers. STAR TREK: "The Enemy" - REV. 9/15/89 - ACT ONE 8. 18 CONTINUED: PICARD No sign of others... RIKER (shakes his head) We could barely see two meters in front of us down there... PICARD It certainly is the last place one would expect a Romulan encroachment. (speculating) On the other hand, Galorndon Core would provide ideal cover for an opening move of a new offensive. RIKER (agrees) I doubt they were there for the climate. 19 EXT. GALORNDON SURFACE Emphasizing his point... the storm is continuing to build. 20 INT. PIT Geordi is closely examining the muddy walls around him... 21 HIS VISOR/POV (OPTICAL) His scan reveals a substance buried in the wall that has a different quality to it than the surrounding soil... 22 INT. PIT Geordi reacts, burrows the mud away to reveal -- STAR TREK: "The Enemy" - REV. 9/15/89 - ACT ONE 9. 23 INSERT - A SILVER ORE-LIKE SUBSTANCE 24 INT. PIT (OPTICAL) Geordi examines it... begins to pull more dirt off the wall, giving himself something of a work-table... using the mud to shape a rough mold... he takes small bits of ore out of the vein, puts them into his mold, uses his phaser to melt them... steam erupts as it turns into hot liquid in the cold mud... and as it collects in the mold, we can see he is creating a short, sharp pole... 25 INT. SICKBAY Beverly is with Picard and Riker... as they observe life-saving measures being taken with the Romulan. BEVERLY We thought it would be like working on a Vulcan, but there are subtle differences... too many of them... PICARD Can you treat him? BEVERLY He has cell damage in vital areas... He's going to need a transfusion of compatible ribosomes in order to recover. I'm setting up a schedule to test every member of the crew. RIKER Will he survive? BEVERLY I can't answer that yet. RIKER Let me put it another way -- will he survive long enough to tell us what he was doing here? Beverly reacts. PICARD It is an important consideration, Doctor. STAR TREK: "The Enemy" - REV. 9/14/89 - ACT ONE 9A. 25 CONTINUED: BEVERLY I can't put his life in any additional jeopardy... STAR TREK: "The Enemy" - REV. 9/15/89 - ACT ONE 10. 25 CONTINUED: (2) PICARD Nor would we ask you to. BEVERLY I can bring him around for a few minutes... As she prepares an injection... BEVERLY There is one serious complication. His brainwaves indicate early neural-pathway degeneration. RIKER A head injury? BEVERLY (shakes her head, no) There was no obvious cranial trauma. I'm guessing the exposure to the magnetic fields on the surface was slowly breaking down his synaptic connections. Picard and Riker exchange a glance. RIKER Will it affect Geordi the same way? She nods, concerned... Gives the injection to Patahk who stirs. As he awakens, Picard observes as Riker moves closer to the Romulan. Patahk is in clear discomfort. RIKER You are aboard the Federation Starship Enterprise. (Patahk reacts) We are treating your injuries. How long were you on Galorndon Core? (he does not answer) Do you understand me? PATAHK I will not answer questions. RIKER We must know if there are any other survivors on the surface. STAR TREK: "The Enemy" - REV. 9/12/89 - ACT ONE 11. 25 CONTINUED: (3) PATAHK I am alone. I will not answer any questions. RIKER Is there a mother ship we should advise of your condition? The Romulan closes his eyes and drifts back into unconsciousness. Beverly signals that's it... Riker joins Picard who has heard... PICARD The only answer he offers is that he was alone... RIKER ... which suggests he wasn't. 26 INT. PIT - GEORDI'S FACE STRAINING and then... 27 NEW ANGLE to see he is halfway up the side of the pit... using two of his "spike" tools in each hand to poke into the earth, pulling himself up, inch by inch... the howling of the wind above... crashing thunder... flickering of lightning... 28 HIS FEET are almost useless, slipping on the sides... 29 INT. PIT - GEORDI as he grits his teeth and raises himself another notch and... 30 EXT. GALORNDON SURFACE Geordi's arm reaches over and drives a stake in the ground... pulls himself up and out, exhausted... STAR TREK: "The Enemy" - REV. 9/13/89 - ACT ONE 12. 31 OMITTED 32 INT. MAIN BRIDGE Picard, Riker, Worf, Beverly, TROI, WESLEY and DATA. Picking up in mid-conversation... RIKER Something that can cut through the storm... to give us some way to signal him... Wesley has an idea... WESLEY A neutrino pulse... They turn to him... WESLEY We could build a portable neutrino source and send it in a probe to the surface. It would be like a beacon. Picard glances at Data for a reaction. DATA A neutrino pulse would send non-charged particles back up through the atmosphere... and would be detectable by Geordi's VISOR. WESLEY He'll be able to show us that he's found it by modifying the pulse... PICARD (nods to Wesley) Make it so. Wesley moves from his position and EXITS. Data has something new on his sensors... STAR TREK: "The Enemy" - REV. 9/14/89 - ACT ONE 13. 32 CONTINUED: DATA Captain, I have a new transmission on a parallel frequency to the distress call... PICARD From the planet? DATA No sir... from inside the Romulan Zone. We should be able to view the transmission. PICARD On screen. 33 ANGLE ON MAIN VIEWER - ROMULAN READY ROOM (OPTICAL) as the image of TOMALAK, a Romulan commander, appears. TOMALAK Tomalak to Pi. (a beat) We have received your distress signal. Respond. (a beat) If you can hear me, we are entering the Neutral Zone now... We will reach you in six hours. The transmission ends. The viewscreen goes back to the starfield. On reactions... FADE OUT. END OF ACT ONE STAR TREK: "The Enemy" - REV. 9/13/89 - ACT TWO 14. ACT TWO FADE IN: 34 EXT. SPACE - THE ENTERPRISE (OPTICAL) 35 INT. MAIN BRIDGE (OPTICAL) As before. PICARD Mister Worf, hail the Romulan vessel. WORF Frequency open, sir. Picard addresses the viewscreen. PICARD Romulan vessel. This is Captain Jean-Luc Picard of the Federation Starship Enterprise. There is a long beat and no response. WORF The frequency is open, sir. PICARD Commander Tomalak, we have intercepted your transmission. You are not to enter Federation space. Finally, the screen comes to life and Tomalak appears... he is cool, almost cordial. TOMALAK Captain Picard, my apologies. If I had known you were in this sector, I certainly would have advised you before crossing the Neutral Zone. PICARD (dry) Really... STAR TREK: "The Enemy" - REV. 9/13/89 - ACT TWO 15. 35 CONTINUED: TOMALAK I'm sure you'll understand when I explain. Simply, one of our ships had a slight navigational error and apparently crashed on Galorndon Core. PICARD A "slight" navigational error. Nearly half a light year past the Neutral Zone. TOMALAK I assure you, Captain, no aggression was intended. PICARD Commander, we have recovered one of your survivors. Tomalak's poker face barely reacts... but there's a blink if you catch it. TOMALAK He is on board your ship? PICARD We are treating him for severe injuries. TOMALAK And his craft? PICARD (pointed) Destroyed... deliberately... after the crash. TOMALAK (shrugs) Standard procedure for all Romulan crews. PICARD For all Romulan crews in enemy space... which would suggest they knew where they were, Commander. STAR TREK: "The Enemy" - REV. 9/13/89 - ACT TWO 16. 35 CONTINUED: (2) TOMALAK (disagrees) If I were lost and uncertain, I would not take any chances. Nor I suspect would you, Captain. May I speak to him? PICARD He is not conscious... and not well enough to leave Sickbay. BEVERLY Captain, with your permission... Picard nods. She looks to the viewscreen -- BEVERLY I am Doctor Crusher, the medical officer. We are doing everything we can for him and it still may not be enough. Any medical guidance your ship's doctor can offer... TOMALAK (patronizing) My dear, there is no way to talk you through the intricacies of Romulan medicine. His life is in your hands. And it is clear that Tomalak is using this "responsibility" as a diplomatic weapon. TOMALAK (to Picard) I assume that you are prepared to leave at once and rendezvous with me in the Neutral Zone. STAR TREK: "The Enemy" - REV. 9/14/89 - ACT TWO 17. 35 CONTINUED: (3) PICARD I have an away team on the surface. We are waiting for a window in the storm to beam them back. Tomalak considers that... TOMALAK And then you will return my officer? Picard is not yet prepared to discuss that issue. Instead... PICARD Are there any other Romulans we should be looking to recover from Galorndon Core... ? TOMALAK No. It was a one-man craft. (beat, cool) Captain, we will be at the Federation border of the Neutral Zone in roughly five hours. We will expect you to rendezvous at that time. The Main Viewer switches back to the starfield. 36 ON PICARD turning to Troi. PICARD Counselor? TROI There is great hostility behind his smile, Captain. To complete his mission, he will stop at nothing. RIKER Including the Neutral Zone border? STAR TREK: "The Enemy" - REV. 9/14/89 - ACT TWO 18. 36 CONTINUED: WORF Sir, I see no reason to return the Romulan to his ship. He should be held and interrogated. RIKER We do have a right to detain him, Captain. PICARD Without clear evidence of intent, it would not be a simple matter. RIKER (disagreeing) This was obviously not pilot's error, Captain... it requires a response from us. PICARD (acknowledges) We must measure the response carefully, Number One. Or history may remember Galorndon Core alongside Pearl Harbor and Station Salem-One... as the stage for a bloody preamble to war. 37 EXT. SHELTERED AREA (OPTICAL) Geordi pushes into a crevice offering slim protection from the furious storm... rests out of breath... He is cold and hungry... rubbing his hands together for heat... sees some (basketball-sized) rocks on the ground... leans down to pick one up... and misses it off to the left. He reacts... GEORDI What the hell... ? He tries it again, comes down wrong again. Geordi removes his VISOR, presses a tiny button on the inside of it. After a beat, the VISOR BEEPS softly. Geordi shrugs, puts it back on. As he tries again, this time he methodically adjusts... STAR TREK: "The Enemy" - REV. 9/15/89 - ACT TWO 19. 37 CONTINUED: GEORDI About five degrees off... huh. The water maybe... ? He shakes his head -- nothing to be done here and now. He rolls a few rocks into a pile... uses his phaser to heat them up... sits next to the rocks to get warm. 38 INT. SICKBAY Medical supernumeraries are taking DNA (TECH) samples from several crew members who have reported for testing... moving to find Beverly examining the Romulan's life signs and is not encouraged... to a medical supernumerary -- BEVERLY I want him off all the drugs... they aren't doing anything... (keys insignia) Doctor Crusher to Picard. INTERCUT: 39 INT. MAIN BRIDGE Picard, Riker, Worf, Data and supernumeraries... PICARD Go ahead. BEVERLY My patient is not responding to treatment. PICARD You haven't found a compatible ribosome donor? BEVERLY The lab is still processing the tests... early results indicate humans have far too many biorejection factors. I've also ruled out the Vulcans we've tested. In the background, Wesley ENTERS the bridge. STAR TREK: "The Enemy" - REV. 9/15/89 - ACT TWO 20. 39 CONTINUED: BEVERLY (continuing) We'll try a little old-fashioned country medicine... keep the fever down, try to let the body heal itself... PICARD Keep me advised. Picard out. Staying on the bridge... WESLEY Captain, the neutrino beacon is operational. We've placed it aboard a class three probe. PICARD Well done, Ensign. (to Worf) Launch the probe. Worf makes it march -- 40 EXT. SPACE - THE ENTERPRISE (OPTICAL) FIRING the probe. (STOCK photon torpedo) 41 OMITTED 42 INT. MAIN BRIDGE As before. Wesley has returned to Conn. WORF Probe has entered the atmosphere, sir. DATA The neutrino stream is coming in strongly. Sensors are tracking the probe despite the interference. STAR TREK: "The Enemy" - REV. 9/14/89 - ACT TWO 21. 43 EXT. SHELTERED AREA Geordi is sitting by the hot rocks when he senses something in the distance... something we can't see... 44 ANGLE - INCLUDE THE HORIZON To our naked eye, there's nothing there. But... 45 GEORDI reacts to something he sees, stands... GEORDI This better not be another malfunction... 46 HIS POV - (OPTICAL) His VISOR reveals the staccato beacon of light from the neutrino beam... quite a distance away. GEORDI (O.S.) A stationary neutrino source... 47 GEORDI Hope fills his face... GEORDI (smiles) Wesley Crusher. He moves out into the muck... 48 EXT. GALORNDON SURFACE Geordi moving through the storm along the rocky hillside toward the neutrino beam... as he moves forward... STAR TREK: "The Enemy" - 9/11/89 - ACT TWO 22. 49 ANGLE to find two feet moving out from cover... coming up quickly behind him and a HARD THUD sound... and Geordi falls into frame unconscious by the feet... and tilt up to see another Romulan (BOCHRA) looking down at him. FADE OUT. END OF ACT TWO STAR TREK: "The Enemy" - REV. 9/12/89 - ACT THREE 23. ACT THREE FADE IN: 50 EXT. GALORNDON SURFACE The wind is getting stronger. Geordi, dazed, gets to his knees, shakes his head to clear it. As sense returns, he instinctively reaches for his phaser. It's gone -- as are his tricorder and communicator. Geordi looks up: 51 ON THE ROMULAN BOCHRA is standing a few meters away, holding Geordi's tricorder and insignia in one hand -- and training a phaser on him with the other. The wind grows more furious. The Romulan does not look entirely well. BOCHRA You are my prisoner. Geordi looks at him -- big deal. GEORDI Right. Congratulations. Certainly, a strategic triumph for the Romulan Empire. Geordi starts to stand. Bochra waves the phaser. BOCHRA Stay there. GEORDI My shoes are getting full of sand... I just hate that, don't you? You think we could just maybe move outta the... BOCHRA (interrupting) How many other Federation troops are with you? FLASH of lightning. Wind stronger still. Geordi will not offer any "military" information, sidesteps the question. STAR TREK: "The Enemy" - REV. 9/12/89 - ACT THREE 23A. 51 CONTINUED: GEORDI We just stopped by to rescue you, big fella... which I'm still willing to do if you'll put that down... STAR TREK: "The Enemy" - REV. 9/13/89 - ACT THREE 24. 51 CONTINUED: (2) Bochra holds it steady... GEORDI Or we can just stand here and take in the view... BOCHRA Your name and rank. GEORDI Lieutenant Commander Geordi La Forge. I don't believe I caught yours... ? BOCHRA A Romulan ship will arrive shortly... you will accompany me on board... GEORDI Uh, I really don't think that's gonna happen, Ensign... or is it Commodore... (a beat, Bochra doesn't react) Yeah, see... we heard your message too... and well, the fleet's in, Commodore. Sky's full of Federation ships. BOCHRA You're lying. GEORDI I never lie when I've got sand in my shoes, Commodore. BOCHRA Get up. The wind is swirling dangerously now. Bochra gestures for Geordi to start walking toward a cave (where he was hiding). Geordi stands, but doesn't move. GEORDI Seriously. There's only one way out of here. Put that down and I'll take you back to my ship as soon as there's a window in the storm... STAR TREK: "The Enemy" - REV. 9/12/89 - ACT THREE 25. 51 CONTINUED: (3) But now a hurricane force gust of blinding wind virtually knocks them down... Geordi scrambles to his feet, sees Bochra still struggling on the ground... as rocks, loosened by the wind, start falling from the cliff above all around them... one strikes the Romulan's leg... Geordi doesn't hesitate, he pulls the Romulan to safety. 52 thru OMITTED 53 54 INT. GALORNDON CAVE as Geordi and Bochra ENTER. Bochra raises a hand -- "I can manage" -- limps over to a rock, sits down. Geordi looks out at the storm, then turns to see Bochra is once again levelling a phaser at him. GEORDI You gotta be kidding. Bochra isn't kidding. BOCHRA Sit. Bochra motions for Geordi to move away from the cave mouth and cross to a spot where Bochra's between Geordi and the cave mouth. As Geordi complies, sits down and takes the shoe off... GEORDI (to himself) Welcome to Galorndon Core, where no good deed goes unpunished... ... and lets the sand fall out. STAR TREK: "The Enemy" - REV. 9/15/89 - ACT THREE 26. 55 INT. SICKBAY - BEVERLY'S OFFICE Beverly is at her desk as Worf ENTERS, having been summoned... WORF Yes, Doctor... She looks up, pleased to see him. BEVERLY Lieutenant. Good. Come in. Please, sit down... He does. Stiffly. She smiles at him. BEVERLY We've finally found a compatible ribosome match for the Romulan. But only one. You. WORF That is impossible. I am a Klingon. BEVERLY Different species, yes. But Humans, Romulans, Vulcans, Klingons, Betazoids -- we're all genetically similar. We have comparable cell structures. And you have what this Romulan needs. There's absolutely no risk to you... Worf frowns, looks away. She reacts. BEVERLY You did understand that was the purpose of all the testing... WORF I have no objection to tests. BEVELRY (beat) You have an objection to being a donor. WORF Yes. STAR TREK: "The Enemy" - REV. 9/14/89 - ACT THREE 27. 55 CONTINUED: BEVERLY Lieutenant, I understand your feelings about the Romulans. But this is not the time or place... WORF If you had seen them kill your parents, you would understand, Doctor. It is always the time and place for those feelings. BEVERLY This Romulan did not kill your parents. And you are the only one who can save his life. WORF (beat) Then he will die. He stands and EXITS. Beverly is flabbergasted. TIME CUT: 56 INT. READY ROOM Beverly sits with Picard trying to enlist his aid. BEVERLY I don't need him to like the idea, Captain... just to do it. PICARD There is no alternative? BEVERLY The alternative is the Romulan will die. Worf is quite correct on that point. Picard stands, thoughtful. PICARD We need him alive... (beat) It is easy to forget that our Lieutenant Worf is not human. His values are very different from yours and mine. STAR TREK: "The Enemy" - REV. 9/15/89 - ACT THREE 28. 56 CONTINUED: BEVERLY Of course they are. But he is also an officer of Starfleet... and this is... PICARD ... this is a personal matter... BEVERLY It's very personal, Captain. Especially to the Romulan who's dying in my Sickbay. Maybe he has a family waiting for him to come home. Picard studies her. BEVERLY Worf is a good man. I know with a word of encouragement from you he will do the right thing. A long beat. PICARD (you mean) Order him. BEVERLY Encourage him. PICARD (uncomfortable) A captain's encouragement is difficult to refuse, Doctor. (beat) And difficult to offer to a man whose feelings run so deep. BEVERLY Even if it means the life of the Romulan? Picard's expression is pained. He is torn by his respect for this woman, his need to respect Worf's beliefs, his own personal feelings. Slowly, regretfully, he shakes his head. PICARD I must respect his personal views... even if I do not share them. He will have to live with the consequences of his decision. STAR TREK: "The Enemy" - REV. 9/14/89 - ACT THREE 28A. 56 CONTINUED: (2) BEVERLY We will all have to. STAR TREK: "The Enemy" - REV. 9/12/89 - ACT THREE 29. 56 CONTINUED: (2) He and Beverly share a last long look. She is not happy. She EXITS. Picard looks somberly after her. 57 INT. GALORNDON CAVE Bochra and Geordi sit facing one another. Bochra's posture is ramrod-straight as he keeps his phaser levelled at Geordi. But he seems oddly overheated for the cold environment. Geordi, however, has made himself as comfortable as possible, reclining and putting his feet up -- a small show of rebellion. GEORDI I wish you'd put that away. BOCHRA (smug) You're afraid of dying. GEORDI ("are you stupid?") You bet I am. Who isn't? BOCHRA I'm not. GEORDI Right. BOCHRA To die in the service of my people... GEORDI Ah, the Romulan path to glory. Such irreverence. Bochra starts to boil, then gets control of himself. No sense letting a lowly human get your goat. BOCHRA You can be sarcastic -- now. But in a few millennia, when humans are extinct and the Romulan Empire spans the galaxy... GEORDI (genuinely curious) You really believe that stuff, don't you, Commodore? STAR TREK: "The Enemy" - REV. 9/14/89 - ACT THREE 30. 57 CONTINUED: BOCHRA Our culture is far older and wiser than yours. It's inevitable that we will prevail. GEORDI Well, if you're that sure of yourselves, why be so tight-lipped? You won't even tell me your name. BOCHRA I see no need to tell you. GEORDI Why? Is it a military secret or something? I've told you mine. (shrugs) Okay, Commodore... whatever you say. Bochra bristles. Geordi pretends not to notice. BOCHRA You may address me as Centurion Bochra. GEORDI Ahh. Bochra. Good, solid Romulan name. And you're a centurion. Well, stay with it, you'll be a commodore someday. Bochra starts to react, realizes Geordi's deliberately trying to get a rise out of him, decides two can play at this game. Unruffled, Bochra replies: BOCHRA I'm not certain of the equivalent Federation rank... but I do know it's higher than lieutenant commander. Geordi can't help a grin. Good shot. Bochra's head weaves momentarily as though he's dizzy. GEORDI What's the matter? BOCHRA Nothing. STAR TREK: "The Enemy" - REV. 9/15/89 - ACT THREE 31. 57 CONTINUED: (2) GEORDI Wrong. Your heart rate just shot way up. Bochra can't help his curiosity, looks at Geordi -- How can you tell? Geordi taps his VISOR in response. GEORDI It translates a wide range of radiation into neural impulses. Allows me to see. BOCHRA Without it, you are blind? GEORDI Yes... BOCHRA How did this happen? GEORDI I was born that way. BOCHRA (honestly doesn't understand) And your parents let you live? Geordi's stunned. GEORDI What kind of question is that? Of course they let me live. Bochra shakes his head. Humans are strange. BOCHRA No wonder your race is weak. You waste time and resources on defective children... That pushes Geordi's button. GEORDI Defective? Listen, Commodore -- I'm a chief engineer in Starfleet. You don't get there by being defective. STAR TREK: "The Enemy" - REV. 9/14/89 - ACT THREE 31A. 57 CONTINUED: (3) BOCHRA But if you can't see... GEORDI I can see things you can't even imagine. STAR TREK: "The Enemy" - REV. 9/13/89 - ACT THREE 32. 57 CONTINUED: (3) Geordi turns to look out in the direction of the neutrino beacon... 57A HIS POV (OPTICAL) He sees the neutrino beam through the storm... but suddenly the vision goes haywire. 57B GEORDI reacts... GEORDI Whoa... Bochra looks on with fascination as Geordi removes his VISOR and presses the tiny button inside. The VISOR BEEPS back. GEORDI (to Bochra) I'm having some sort of polarity shift. The diagnostic insists everything's fine... Geordi replaces his VISOR over his eyes, looks at Bochra with concern. GEORDI (continuing) Your body temperature's gone up another full degree... BOCHRA (giving nothing away) What are you saying? GEORDI It's this place... All that electromagnetic soup is playing hell with our nervous systems. Your metabolism's messed up... so's my interface with the VISOR. Geordi starts to get to his feet. STAR TREK: "The Enemy" - REV. 9/14/89 - ACT THREE 33. 57B CONTINUED: GEORDI (continuing) We've got to get out of here while we still can. Bochra raises the phaser -- "don't move." Geordi freezes. BOCHRA Sit down. GEORDI Bochra... Bochra wavers. He's feeling dizzy, short of breath, feverish -- but is trying not to let it show. Maybe Geordi's telling the truth -- but Bochra can't bring himself to trust him. BOCHRA (deliberate) Sit down. Reluctantly, Geordi sits down... 58 INT. MAIN BRIDGE Picard, Riker, Troi, Worf, Wesley, Data. Wesley is monitoring the neutrino probe... a concerned look on his face. Riker, impatient for a sign, glances over Wes' shoulder, sighs... a shiver in the signal makes him react... he looks at Wesley who shakes his head... RIKER What's that? WESLEY Just a background fluctuation, Commander... he hasn't found it yet. RIKER Then he must be hurt... or dead. (beat) How long before another window, Data? DATA There are none indicated, Commander. I have no way to predict. STAR TREK: "The Enemy" - REV. 9/12/89 - ACT THREE 33A. 58 CONTINUED: WORF Incoming Romulan transmission, Captain. Picard and Riker exchange a look. RIKER They're early. DATA (agrees) The Romulan warbird should still be twenty-nine minutes away from the edge of the Neutral Zone. PICARD Close enough, however, to see we're not there. (to Worf) On screen. STAR TREK: "The Enemy" - REV. 9/14/89 - ACT THREE 34. 59 ANGLE ON MAIN VIEWER - ROMULAN READY ROOM (OPTICAL) Tomalak speaks from his command chair. TOMALAK Picard, I'm approaching the Federation border and the Enterprise is not to be found. Why? Picard doesn't like Tomalak's attitude, but he maintains his composure. PICARD My away team has not been able to leave the surface because of the storms. TOMALAK And my officer? PICARD He is alive. TOMALAK His life remains in jeopardy? PICARD Yes. Include Worf. TOMALAK And yet you will still not permit me to cross into your precious Federation space to retrieve him... Picard feels himself being manuevered into a defensive position. He knows he's escalating the stakes when he responds... PICARD If the point hasn't been made clearly, Commander, let me make it again. (MORE) STAR TREK: "The Enemy" - REV. 9/14/89 - ACT THREE 34A. 59 CONTINUED: PICARD (Cont'd) Romulan warships do not enter Federation space unless they are prepared to do battle. TOMALAK But a mission of mercy... PICARD A mission to recover one of your officers who was caught on a Federation planet. For reasons still unknown... TOMALAK I have already explained that. PICARD And I have rejected your explanation. TOMALAK Territories... you would measure territories against a man's life? Picard does not at all like being in this position. He takes the only posture he can. PICARD Commander, your singular concern for a life is impressive. Do not risk any more lives by leaving the Neutral Zone. Picard out. The screen returns to starfield. Picard is really furious with the way this is going. He turns and cannot help exchanging a glance with Worf. As he EXITS to the Ready Room. STAR TREK: "The Enemy" - REV. 9/14/89 - ACT THREE 35. 60 OMITTED 61 INT. GALORNDON CAVE The SOUND of the storm outside has abated. Bochra's definitely not a well Romulan; he's sweating, and his hands have developed a slight tremble. He is clearly much further along in his deterioration than Geordi. But he never takes his eyes -- or the phaser -- off Geordi. GEORDI Bochra, you're in bad shape. Bochra doesn't respond. GEORDI My vision's getting worse. There's a beacon out there... it'll get us back to my ship... but not if I can't find it. Bochra shakes his head. BOCHRA I can't surrender to the Federation. GEORDI Then stay here and die. Bochra looks inquisitively at Geordi, trying to understand this human. STAR TREK: "The Enemy" - REV. 9/13/89 - ACT THREE 36. 61 CONTINUED: BOCHRA If the situation were reversed... would you not die to avoid capture? Geordi takes a beat to consider. GEORDI I don't know. I might... if I thought it was necessary. If the stakes were high enough. (a beat) But they'd have to be pretty damn high. Bochra thinks this over. Maybe he's considering just how high -- or low -- the stakes are in his case. GEORDI (continuing) Guess I'd make a pretty lousy Romulan, huh... ? BOCHRA I no more wish to die than you do. GEORDI (a smile) You mean Romulans aren't always ready to sacrifice themselves on command? BOCHRA No more than humans are frail, weak-willed children without any conception of loyalty or duty. They exchange a weak grin. Geordi tests his vision; it's getting worse. GEORDI Bochra -- there are times when dying for one's ideals is necessary. (a beat) Do you believe this is one of those times? Bochra agonizes, makes up his mind, gets to his feet -- and lowers the phaser. Geordi nods in acknowledgement of what that cost Bochra. STAR TREK: "The Enemy" - 9/11/89 - ACT THREE 37. 61 CONTINUED: (2) GEORDI Let's find that beacon. They start toward the entrance. 62 NEW ANGLE as Geordi stumbles over a rock, gropes for the walls of the cave. BOCHRA What is it? Geordi holds his VISOR to his forehead with both hands. GEORDI Everything's gone blank. (a beat) I'm blind. Geordi takes off the VISOR, revealing his white, sightless eyes. FADE OUT. END OF ACT THREE STAR TREK: "The Enemy" - REV. 9/14/89 - ACT FOUR 38. ACT FOUR FADE IN: 62A INT. CORRIDOR Worf approaches a cabin door, considers a beat, then rings the bell. RIKER'S VOICE Come. The door opens to Riker's quarters and Worf ENTERS. 63 INT. RIKER'S QUARTERS - CONTINUOUS Riker is in his quarters studying territorial maps on his computer screen. Worf ENTERS, stops... WORF You are busy. Forgive my intrusion. He starts to leave... Riker stops him with... STAR TREK: "The Enemy" - REV. 9/14/89 - ACT FOUR 39. 63 CONTINUED: RIKER For what it's worth, I understand your bitterness. Worf stops, turns... WORF With respect, sir... you cannot. (beat) I am asked to give up the very lifeblood of my mother, of my father, to those who murdered them. RIKER Must you blame all Romulans for that? WORF Yes. RIKER Forever, Worf? (Worf thinks deeply) What if the Federation should make peace with the Romulans someday... WORF Impossible. RIKER Not long ago, your people said the same thing about humans. Worf reacts. RIKER And so many on both sides died in that war. How could you and I be here now... like this... if we were unable to let go of the anger, the blame. (beat) When does it end, Worf? If the Romulan dies, does his family carry the bitterness forward another generation? WORF Then you believe I should. STAR TREK: "The Enemy" - REV. 9/14/89 - ACT FOUR 39A. 63 CONTINUED: (2) RIKER What I believe doesn't matter. WORF My Starfleet training tells me one thing. Everything I am tells me another. BEVERLY'S COM VOICE Lieutenant Worf, report to Sickbay. STAR TREK: "The Enemy" - REV. 9/15/89 - ACT FOUR 40. 63 CONTINUED: (3) WORF Acknowledged. Worf and Riker exchange a look. Then he EXITS. 64 INT. SICKBAY CLOSE on Patahk in the biobed, MUTTERING in semiconsciousness. 65 ANGLE ON THE DOOR as Worf ENTERS and stays at the door. Beverly crosses to him. Worf looks suspiciously over at Patahk, then at Beverly. Calmly, softly -- BEVERLY Lieutenant, his life is coming to an end. I thought it important for you to see him again. Worf studies him... perhaps begins to turn... BEVERLY It is not too late to change your mind. They exchange a long look and she leaves him with the Romulan... 66 ANGLE - OVER HIS SHOULDER Patahk's eyes open slightly and sees Worf. Hatred succeeds in awakening him even more. PATAHK Come close to me, Klingon. Let me die with my hands at your throat. Worf just stares at him. Patahk trembles, has to force his body back under his control. STAR TREK: "The Enemy" - REV. 9/13/89 - ACT FOUR 41. 66 CONTINUED: Worf pulls away from his instinctive reaction, desperately wants to find a way to make this okay. We should see the two sides of him pulling back and forth. WORF I am the only one who can keep you alive. PATAHK You? WORF There is a substance within my cells which you need to survive... Patahk grins weakly... with irony. PATAHK You have come to hear me beg for my life. WORF (beat) No. Is an appreciation of warriors who can respect each other as enemies beginning here? Patahk looks up at him through weakening eyes... reaches up with a wavering hand and takes Worf by the wrist, tries to speak, pull himself up, cannot... Worf leans over to hear what he has to say. PATAHK (whispers) I would rather die than pollute my body with Klingon filth. Worf reacts as the Romulan grins, leans back. Worf EXITS past Beverly without looking at her. STAR TREK: "The Enemy" - REV. 9/13/89 - ACT FOUR 41A. 67 INT. GALORNDON CAVE A dejected Geordi examines his VISOR with his touch. Bochra is lying back now, weaker... The diagnostic BEEP is emitted, signalling all is okay with the VISOR itself. BOCHRA I have lost almost all feeling in my legs. Geordi looks at him with concern... GEORDI My synapses must be turning to jelly. The VISOR's fine, but I can't see a thing. BOCHRA How do we locate the beacon? GEORDI We don't. Another thin smile from Bochra. BOCHRA Do all humans give up so easily? Geordi smiles in return. STAR TREK: "The Enemy" - REV. 9/13/89 - ACT FOUR 42. 67 CONTINUED: GEORDI Are all Romulans so pushy? Bochra, we're lost... unless you've got something that can smell neutrinos. Bochra picks up Geordi's tricorder. BOCHRA We have the sensor device you were carrying. GEORDI My tricorder? It isn't set up to detect neutrinos. BOCHRA But your eye device does. Connect them. GEORDI That's crazy. They don't speak the same language. I'd never get an accurate sampling... (stops; maybe it's not so crazy) But, then, I don't need an accurate sampling. I just need a pointer... a neutrino Geiger counter. Geordi considers the problem, then sinks back into dejection. GEORDI (continuing) Still not possible. BOCHRA You cannot do it? GEORDI Under normal circumstances, maybe. Here, no way. BOCHRA Why? STAR TREK: "The Enemy" - REV. 9/15/89 - ACT FOUR 43. 67 CONTINUED: (2) GEORDI Because I can't see. Adapting the neural output pods of the VISOR is tricky work. It can't be done by "touch." Bochra is not to be dissuaded: BOCHRA Then I'll be your eyes. On Geordi's reaction... 68 INT. MAIN BRIDGE Picard, Riker, Data, Worf. DATA The storm is beginning to subside, Captain... we should have a window in less than an hour... RIKER Still no indication he's found the beacon, sir... PICARD (to Riker) Assemble an away team... RIKER (moving with purpose) Yes, sir... But before Riker can leave... WORF (interrupting) Captain... the Romulan warship has crossed the Neutral Zone border. It is in Federation space and heading toward us. PICARD Stand by, Number One. (quietly) Red Alert. STAR TREK: "The Enemy" - REV. 9/13/89 - ACT FOUR 43A. 68 CONTINUED: As RED ALERT SOUNDS, we -- 69 OMITTED FADE OUT. END OF ACT FOUR STAR TREK: "The Enemy" - REV. 9/13/89 - ACT FIVE 44. ACT FIVE FADE IN: 70 INT. GALORNDON CAVE CLOSE ON Bochra's hand shaking badly as he tries to make some final delicate adjustments on the tricorder/VISOR. GEORDI (V.O.) ... make sure the scan select limiter matches the VISOR output range. BOCHRA Not so fast... 71 WIDER to see Bochra, exhausted, complete the task. Geordi is behind him, guiding him through the operation. BOCHRA Done. GEORDI Now close the case and place the neural output pods in contact with the tricorder scanner heads. Bochra closes up the tricorder then places the VISOR around it. BOCHRA Ready. GEORDI Let her rip. Bochra pans the area with the unit. As he scans, the tricorder/VISOR suddenly emits a series of faint BEEPS. BOCHRA (excited) Bearing three-five-zero. GEORDI We did it! The first Federation-Romulan co-venture. STAR TREK: "The Enemy" - REV. 9/13/89 - ACT FIVE 44A. 71 CONTINUED: A brief moment of shared jubilation -- then they remember they're supposed to be enemies, and return to the task at hand. More somber: STAR TREK: "The Enemy" - REV. 9/14/89 - ACT FIVE 45. 71 CONTINUED: (2) BOCHRA The storm may be breaking. GEORDI With any luck an electromagnetic window will be opening up and we can get out of here. BOCHRA At which point I'll be your prisoner. They exchange a look -- best not to look too far ahead. Geordi puts his hand on Bochra's shoulder. GEORDI Can you walk? BOCHRA I don't know... Geordi helps him to his feet... Bochra leans on him for support... Bochra provides the vision for them both. BOCHRA Straight ahead... 72 INT. READY ROOM Picard seated. Worf ENTERS. WORF You wished to see me, Captain. PICARD Yes, Lieutenant. (a beat) I assume you know what this is about... Worf nods. PICARD The Romulan ship will reach us within the hour, Lieutenant. If our patient dies... it may be just the excuse the Romulan commander needs to start an incident. The death of a Romulan officer at the hands of the Federation! Think of it. STAR TREK: "The Enemy" - REV. 9/14/89 - ACT FIVE 45A. 72 CONTINUED: WORF I have, Captain. PICARD (acknowledges) There is no question that this Romulan is more valuable to us alive than dead, Lieutenant. STAR TREK: "The Enemy" - REV. 9/15/89 - ACT FIVE 46. 72 CONTINUED: (2) WORF I understand. Picard chooses his next words carefully. PICARD Sometimes the moral obligations of command are less than clear. I weigh the good of the many against the needs of the individual... and try to balance them as realistically as possible. God knows I don't always succeed. WORF I have not had cause to complain, Captain. PICARD (with appreciation) You wouldn't complain even if you had cause, Lieutenant. WORF If you order me to agree to the transfusion, I will, of course, obey. Picard turns to him. PICARD I cannot order you. I will not order you, Lieutenant. But I ask you. I beg you to volunteer. WORF (a beat) I cannot, Captain. STAR TREK: "The Enemy" - REV. 9/15/89 - ACT FIVE 47. ON PICARD PICARD Lieutenant... WORF Sir? A long beat. Picard nods evenly. PICARD Dismissed. Worf nods, EXITS. After a beat... PICARD (keys insignia) Picard to Doctor Crusher. BEVERLY'S COM VOICE Go ahead. PICARD Do not continue to enlist Lieutenant Worf's assistance. BEVERLY'S COM VOICE I won't have to, Captain. The Romulan has died. On Picard's reaction... 74 EXT. GALORNDON SURFACE The hellish winds have died down and electrical ARCS are few and far between. Vision is still difficult. Geordi supports Bochra as they walk, Bochra holding the BEEPING tricorder/VISOR before him, Geordi shielding his VISORless eyes. 75 NEW ANGLE as they come to the probe... barely sticking out of a crater (virtually impossible to see with the naked eye). STAR TREK: "The Enemy" - REV. 9/14/89 - ACT FIVE 47A. 75 CONTINUED: Bochra points the tricorder/VISOR down into the crater; the BEEPS speed up. Pay dirt. BOCHRA We've found it. GEORDI Now we have to change its signal pattern so the Enterprise knows we've found it. BOCHRA Will that be difficult? GEORDI Not with your help. STAR TREK: "The Enemy" - REV. 9/13/89 - ACT FIVE 48. 75 CONTINUED: (2) They start down into the crater. 76 INT. MAIN BRIDGE Picard ENTERS; Riker, Troi, Worf, Data, and Wesley at their stations. RED ALERT continues. DATA Scanners show a window, Captain. PICARD Estimated duration? DATA Nine minutes, forty seconds. Picard turns to Wesley, who anticipates his question with: WESLEY No change in the neutrino beacon signal, sir. Worf interrupts: WORF Romulan ship approaching. Bearing three-fifty-four mark two-eight-seven. PICARD On screen. 77 ANGLE ON MAIN VIEWER - ROMULAN WARSHIP (OPTICAL) A Romulan warbird majestically cruises into view. WORF (O.S.) Romulan is entering phaser range. 78 CLOSE as Picard stares at the screen. STAR TREK: "The Enemy" - REV. 9/14/89 - ACT FIVE 49. 78 CONTINUED: WORF We are being hailed, sir. PICARD On screen. 79 ANGLE ON MAIN SCREEN - ROMULAN READY ROOM (OPTICAL) Tomalak glares at Picard. Icy formality. TOMALAK You have one chance to escape destruction, Picard. Return my officer at once. PICARD (equally hard) You have entered Federation space despite my warning, Commander. TOMALAK You forced this situation. I will not leave without him. A long beat. PICARD He is dead. Tomalak reacts, controls his rage. TOMALAK Then he is but the first to fall, Picard. Tomalak cuts off transmission; the starfield with the Romulan warbird returns to the viewscreen. WORF The Romulan ship is routing power to its forward disruptor array. STAR TREK: "The Enemy" - REV. 9/14/89 - ACT FIVE 50. 79 CONTINUED: PICARD All shields to maximum. WORF Aye, sir. PICARD Lock phasers on target. WORF Phasers locked and ready. A tense silence as everyone braces for a hit. 80 INT. MAIN BRIDGE - CONTINUOUS Wesley reacts to something on his panel. WESLEY Captain -- the signal pattern from the neutrino beacon is modulating. TROI Geordi! RIKER We can't transport him with our shields up. WORF If we lower our shields, the Romulan will strike. DATA The electromagnetic window on the planet is closing. Three minutes remain. PICARD Transporter Room. Lock onto the coordinates of the neutrino beacon and stand by. O'BRIEN'S COM VOICE Standing by, Captain. STAR TREK: "The Enemy" - REV. 9/14/89 - ACT FIVE 51. 80 CONTINUED: DATA Captain, the window is allowing intermittant sensor readings... There are still numerous ghost images, but I believe we are picking up two life forms near the beacon... RIKER Another Romulan? DATA I cannot say. The electromagnetic interference prevents an accurate reading. PICARD (mind racing) But it is a likely hypothesis, Number One. If Mister La Forge located a second survivor... (to Worf) Hail the Romulan ship, Lieutenant. WORF Aye, sir. (does so) They're ignoring our hail, sir. PICARD Repeat the hail -- all channels. (to Riker) He has no way of knowing how accurate our sensors are... put on your poker face, Number One... (to Worf) Open frequency. 81 ON PICARD (OPTICAL) as he rises, faces the viewscreen. PICARD Commander Tomalak. It would appear our away team has rescued a second man from your one man ship. STAR TREK: "The Enemy" - REV. 9/14/89 - ACT FIVE 52. 81 CONTINUED: A long beat. PICARD They are on the surface, ready to beam up. We are preparing to do so. (beat, a decision) After which we will return the survivor to you. A beat. WORF No acknowledgement, Captain. Slow push to Picard. PICARD Commander, both our ships are ready to fight. We have two supremely powerful, destructive arsenals at our command. Our next actions will have serious repercussions for both sides. (a beat) We have good reason to mistrust one another, Commander, but we have better reasons to set our differences aside. The question, of course, is who will show vulnerability first. (a beat) The answer is -- I will. I must lower my shields to transport these men off the planet surface. Picard crosses and stares at the warbird on the viewscreen. PICARD Once the shields are down, you will have an opportunity to open fire. If you do, you will not only destroy the Enterprise and its crew -- but also the cease-fire that the Romulans and the Federation now enjoy. Picard looks back at Worf. STAR TREK: "The Enemy" - REV. 9/14/89 - ACT FIVE 52A. 81 CONTINUED: (2) PICARD Lieutenant, lower the shields. Leave hailing frequencies open. Worf takes a deep breath. WORF Yes, sir. Worf then executes the order on his panel. STAR TREK: "The Enemy" - REV. 9/14/89 - ACT FIVE 53. 82 ANOTHER ANGLE (OPTICAL) as everyone -- even Picard -- half expects a phaser blast at any moment. PICARD Mister O'Brien. Transport Mister La Forge and the Romulan directly to the bridge. O'BRIEN'S COM VOICE Aye, sir. Energizing. Geordi and Bochra MATERIALIZE. (Note: Geordi's VISOR is back on his face.) The sight of a Romulan on the bridge sends Worf reaching for his phaser. Riker and Picard exchange a glance. It's like drawing to fill a straight flush. WORF Security team to bridge. PICARD Belay that order, Lieutenant. Shields up. (to Bochra) No one is going to harm you. Bochra isn't so convinced; his eyes looking around the room full of enemies. GEORDI (to Bochra) You have my word. Bochra relaxes a notch. Picard takes this all in, then faces the viewscreen. PICARD Well, Commander? 83 ANGLE ON THE VIEWSCREEN - ROMULAN READY ROOM (OPTICAL) Sure enough, the view of the warbird is replaced with the image of Tomalak. Bochra immediately salutes his Commander. Still looks pretty bad, though he will improve during the scene... TOMALAK If he has been in any way mistreated... STAR TREK: "The Enemy" - REV. 9/14/89 - ACT FIVE 54. 83 CONTINUED: BOCHRA I have given them no information, Commander -- but I have not been mistreated. (after a look to Geordi) In fact, this human saved my life. Picard nods acknowledgment, then turns his attention back to the screen. PICARD Commander, how is it possible you didn't know of this second Romulan on Galorndon Core? Having been caught with his pants down, Tomalak reverts to his earlier manner -- the unctuous commander worming his way out of trouble. TOMALAK A simple misunderstanding, Captain Picard. I was obviously misinformed as to the size of the craft. I assure you, I intended no deception. PICARD Of course not. TOMALAK You doubt my good faith? PICARD Let's just say my faith would be strengthened with a gesture -- such as powering down your disruptors. Tomalak nods, pushes a button. A moment later: STAR TREK: "The Enemy" - REV. 9/15/89 - ACT FIVE 55. 83 CONTINUED: (2) WORF Disruptors powering down, Captain. PICARD Thank you. Cancel Red Alert, Lieutenant. As the ship goes off Red Alert, the relief is almost palpable. Picard returns his attention to Tomalak: PICARD (continuing) We will return your officer and escort your ship back to the Neutral Zone, Commander. TOMALAK That is acceptable. The view of the warbird returns as Tomalak ceases transmitting. 84 ANOTHER ANGLE as Picard returns to his chair. PICARD Mister La Forge, it's good to have you back. GEORDI (looking at him) I have Centurion Bochra to thank, sir. BOCHRA Your vision is returning... GEORDI Yeah, gradually. Your heart rate's slowing down. Bochra and Geordi exchange a we-made-it look. STAR TREK: "The Enemy" - REV. 9/14/89 - ACT FIVE 55A. 84 CONTINUED: PICARD Mister La Forge, Mister Worf -- escort our guest to Transporter Room One. GEORDI Aye, sir. Worf and Geordi lead Bochra to the turbolift, EXIT. STAR TREK: "The Enemy" - REV. 9/14/89 - ACT FIVE 56. 84 CONTINUED: (2) Riker lets out a sigh of relief. RIKER Close call. PICARD Too close, Number One. Brinksmanship is a dangerous game... 85 OMITTED 86 INT. TRANSPORTER ROOM O'Brien is behind the console. Beverly supervises two CREWMEMBERS who are placing a coffin on the transporter pad. Worf, Geordi, and Bochra ENTER. Bochra sees the pallet, looks at Beverly. And she says this to Bochra, but all the while gives Worf a scathing look: BEVERLY It was not in my power to save him. Perhaps a slight stress on the "my" for Worf's benefit. Worf is stiffly silent as Beverly and the two crewmembers EXIT. 87 ON BOCHRA crossing to the transporter pad -- and his fallen comrade. BOCHRA He was a loyal officer. STAR TREK: "The Enemy" - REV. 9/15/89 - ACT FIVE 57. 87 CONTINUED: Bochra somberly takes his place on the pad, nods in salute and farewell to Geordi. BOCHRA (continuing) Lieutenant Commander La Forge. GEORDI (returns the nod) Centurion Bochra. BOCHRA You're not what I expected of a Federation officer. GEORDI That's okay; you're not what I expected of a Romulan, either. (with a grin) That's a compliment. Bochra manages a thin smile. Geordi nods a final goodbye and... 88 NEW ANGLE (OPTICAL) Geordi signals O'Brien, who energizes; Bochra and the pallet DEMATERIALIZE. 88A GEORDI AND O'BRIEN GEORDI That's the way to fight all the wars from now on. Two guys on a planet with no one else to talk to and nowhere to go. Things get settled in a hurry. Exiting with O'Brien past Worf... GEORDI (leaving) I'm gonna sleep for four days... The doors hiss closed. Staying a beat on Worf as he remains there a long beat, stands quietly, deadpanned... and we can only speculate what he's thinking. He EXITS and... FADE OUT. END OF ACT FIVE THE END STAR TREK: THE NEXT GENERATION "The Price" (f.k.a. "A Price Far Above Rubies") #40273-156 Written by Hannah Louise Shearer Directed by Robert Scheerer THE WRITING CREDITS MAY NOT BE FINAL AND SHOULD NOT BE USED FOR PUBLICITY OR ADVERTISING PURPOSES WITHOUT FIRST CHECKING WITH THE TELEVISION LEGAL DEPARTMENT. Copyright 1989 Paramount Pictures Corporation. All Rights Reserved. This script is not for publication or reproduction. No one is authorized to dispose of same. If lost or destroyed, please notify the Script Department. REVISED FINAL DRAFT SEPTEMBER 25, 1989 STAR TREK: "The Price" - 9/25/89 - CAST STAR TREK: THE NEXT GENERATION "The Price" CAST PICARD SETH MENDOZA RIKER DEVINONI RAL DATA BEVERLY Barzan TROI PREMIER BHAVANI GEORDI WORF WESLEY Caldonian COMPUTER VOICE LEYOR Ferengi DAIMON GOSS DOCTOR ARRIDOR Non-speaking TWO MEDICAL ASSISTANTS non-speaking WAITERS ROJAY FIVE OFF-DUTY CREWMEMBERS KOL TECHNICIAN STAR TREK: "The Price" - 9/25/89 - SETS STAR TREK: THE NEXT GENERATION "The Price" SETS INTERIORS EXTERIORS USS ENTERPRISE USS ENTERPRISE MAIN BRIDGE SHUTTLECRAFT CAPTAIN'S READY ROOM OBSERVATION LOUNGE FERENGI SHIP TURBOLIFT FERENGI POD CORRIDOR TRANSPORTER ROOM WORMHOLE EFFECT TEN-FORWARD SICKBAY EXERCISE ROOM TROI'S QUARTERS FERENGI GUEST QUARTERS SHUTTLECRAFT INTERIOR FERENGI POD INTERIOR STAR TREK: "The Price - REV. 9/28/89 - PRONUNCIATION GUIDE STAR TREK: THE NEXT GENERATION "The Price" PRONUNCIATION GUIDE MENDOZA men-DOE-zah DEVINONI RAL DEV-in-on-ee Raal BHAVANI bah-VON-ee LEYOR LAY-or DAIMON GOSS DAY-maun GOSS KOL COAL ARRIDOR ARE-eh-door ROJAY ROE-jay FERENGI fir-ENG-ee BARZAN BAR-zan CALDONIANS cal-DOAN-ians CHRYSALIANS chris-AL-ians WORMHOLE WORM-HOLE MESON MAY-zahn LEPTON LEP-tahn 11:[5,#b],18:[1,#b],57:[1,#b] STAR TREK: "The Price" - REV. 10/2/89 - TEASER 1. STAR TREK: THE NEXT GENERATION "The Price" TEASER FADE IN: 1 CLOSEUP OF O'BRIEN Sitting. O'BRIEN The truth is I'm a career man... you know, married to my job... Mitzi doesn't understand that... I like her a lot... but I just don't think I'm ready for two marriages if you know what I mean... 2 REVERSE OF TROI - TROI'S OFFICE She's placid as usual, listening, or perhaps on automatic pilot. O'BRIEN (continuing) But at the same time, you know I wouldn't want to lose her... TROI Maybe you should come in with her and talk about it together. O'BRIEN Oh, I couldn't ask her to do that... TROI Sure you could. Why don't I make another appointment for you... And as she calls up her schedule on a PADD. STAR TREK: "The Price" - REV. 9/27/89 - TEASER 2. 3 INT. CORRIDOR Troi walking, looking very tired... Wes sees her, calls... moves down another corridor to her... WESLEY Counselor Troi... ? She takes the fatigue off her face, stops and turns... TROI Yes, Wesley... WESLEY Can I talk to you a minute... I have a real problem with my mother. 4 ON TROI who listens patiently as Wesley continues... WESLEY (O.S.) She's being completely unreasonable... see there's a party on Holodeck Four tonight... and all the other kids are staying overnight... well, most of them and... As she nods... 5 INT. TROI'S QUARTERS Troi ENTERS, exhausted, starts to take off her jacket... TROI Computer, dispatches... COMPUTER A research inquiry from the Manitoba Journal of Interplanetary Psychology and three communiques from your mother... TROI (reacts, three?) Transfer my mother's letters to my viewer... (MORE) STAR TREK: "The Price" - REV. 9/27/89 - TEASER 3. 5 CONTINUED: TROI (Cont'd) (beat) ... and computer, I'd like a... a real chocolate sundae. COMPUTER (beat) Define "real" in context, please. TROI Real... not one of your perfectly synthesized, ingeniously enhanced imitations... real chocolate ice cream, real whipped cream... COMPUTER This unit is programmed to provide sources of nutritional value. Your request does not fall within current guidelines. Losing patience... TROI Listen, computer... COMPUTER (continuing) Do you wish to override program? PICARD'S COM VOICE Picard to Counselor Troi. TROI (frowns, to herself) Now what? (keys insignia) Yes, Captain? INTERCUT: 6 INT. TEN FORWARD A casual party in progress... PICARD, WORF, RIKER, DATA. STAR TREK: "The Price" - REV. 9/25/89 - TEASER 4. 6 CONTINUED: In the background, MENDOZA, a Federation negotiator, chats with several aliens including BHAVANI, the leader of Barzan, and LEYOR, the Caldonian representative. PICARD is smiling, jovial. A WAITER refills his champagne glass and not for the first time. PICARD The pleasure of your company is requested, Counselor. We're having an impromptu reception for the arriving delegates. TROI (reacts, not tonight) Captain, I'm not dressed for a reception... PICARD Oh, just throw on any old thing. We're about to get our first look at the wormhole. BACK TO: 7 INT. TROI'S QUARTERS TROI Of course, Captain. I'm on my way. Troi out. EXITING, frowns... TROI (to herself) God forbid, I should miss the first look at the wormhole. 8 INT. TEN FORWARD (OPTICAL) GEORDI and BEVERLY have joined the fun now too... waiters serve hors d'ouevres... Troi ENTERS, smiling, serene, our Troi... Riker goes to meet her... offers an arm... RIKER May I escort you in, Miss Troi... Moving with them... STAR TREK: "The Price" - 9/25/89 - TEASER 5. 8 CONTINUED: TROI Just tell me there's some chocolate here... PICARD Ah, Counselor Troi... allow me to do the introductions... Premier Bhavani of the Barzan... Bhavani is a strong, no-nonsense, elderly woman; an able judge of people. She wears a breathing device. TROI Your discovery has certainly produced a great deal of excitement, Premier. BHAVANI Hopefully, it will also produce a new era of prosperity for my people. MENDOZA We'll see to that... PICARD You know Mister Mendoza, the Federation negotiator... MENDOZA A pleasure to see you again, Counselor Troi. Mendoza is a middle-aged man with intelligent eyes and confidence. PICARD One of the Federation's worthy competitors in the bidding, Leyor of the Caldonians. LEYOR Madame. The Caldonian is more reserved -- with a quietness that comes more from academia than from shyness. Joining them is DEVINONI RAL, a well-dressed, strikingly attractive man with a disarming smile. On his arm is a stunning woman, an accessory. DEVINONI And I am Devinoni Ral. STAR TREK: "The Price" - REV. 9/27/89 - TEASER 6. 8 CONTINUED: (2) TROI Ship's Counselor Deanna Troi. And it's already there between them in the moment, they both feel it. Introducing his lady friend as a pro forma aside -- DEVINONI My traveling companion, Rojay. The woman, bored, barely acknowledges. MENDOZA My good friend, Ral, is the best hired gun in the business. TROI Hired gun? DEVINONI My "good friend", Mendoza means that I am a negotiator who serves a variety of clients... on this occasion I represent the Chrysalians. BHAVANI I believe it's almost time, isn't it Captain? PICARD Indeed. It will be visible directly ahead... The crowd moves to the windows... MENDOZA Is it always on time, Bhavani? BHAVANI Always. We see it every two hundred and thirty-three minutes... our scientists say it's due to radiation buildup in the acretion disk. The visible burst is very brief.. On her last line... the sky lights up with a dramatic revelation... a wormhole... reactions. STAR TREK: "The Price" - 9/25/89 - TEASER 7. 8 CONTINUED: (3) BHAVANI There it is, ladies and gentlemen. The Barzan Wormhole. The first and only stable wormhole known to exist. It's yours... for the right price. The group is overwhelmed at the spectacular sight before their eyes... except as we see Troi, she senses something else and as she turns, she sees Devinoni is not looking at the wormhole, but at her. Her eyes meet his... and he grins... and as the rest of the room sees stars... they see only each other as we... FADE OUT. END OF TEASER STAR TREK: "The Price" - REV. 10/2/89 - ACT ONE 8. ACT ONE FADE IN: 9 EXT. SPACE - THE ENTERPRISE (OPTICAL) in orbit around the Barzan planet. PICARD (V.O.) Captain's log, Stardate 43385.7. We are in orbit around Barzan, a planet which is entertaining bids for control of what appears to be a most unique, stable wormhole. It could conceivably provide a permanent shortcut within our galaxy. 10 INT. OBSERVATION DECK (OPTICAL) Picard, Worf, Bhavani, Mendoza, Leyor, Devinoni. Bhavani is at the head of the table, addressing the others... BHAVANI And as you all know, the environment on my planet is completely inhospitable to most other life forms. So I'd like to express my appreciation to you, Captain Picard, and your fine crew for hosting these negotiations aboard the Enterprise. (Picard acknowledges) Remember, Mister Mendoza, it doesn't give the Federation an advantage. Chuckles around the table. Mendoza acknowledges. Devinoni studies his competition around the table. He deliberately plays back throughout the scene. But he's working. STAR TREK: "The Price" - REV. 9/29/89 - ACT ONE 9. 10 CONTINUED: BHAVANI (getting serious) The Barzan has been a society dependent on others for generations. We want that to end. The appearance of this stable wormhole in our space provides us with our first true natural resource. We have neither the experience nor technology to exploit it. You do. Riker ENTERS, with some concern on his face... RIKER Excuse me, a delegation of... Ferengi... wishes to be beamed aboard... PICARD You were not expecting the Ferengi, Premier... ? BHAVANI No, but I do not wish to create ill will, Captain. If they are interested in bidding, I have no objection. Picard thinks about saying he does... but realizes it's not his place. Very well... PICARD (keys insignia) Chief O'Brien, this is Picard. Beam the Ferengi directly to the observation lounge. O'BRIEN'S COM VOICE Aye, Captain... Three Ferengi MATERIALIZE near Riker. Their leader is GOSS. The others are KOL AND ARRIDOR. GOSS On behalf of all Ferengi, I protest... why were we not invited to these negotiations... STAR TREK: "The Price" - REV. 9/25/89 - ACT ONE 10. 10 CONTINUED: (2) Riker exchanges a glance with Picard... BHAVANI My apologies. We did not anticipate your interest. You are welcome to join us. GOSS I am DaiMon Goss. These are my consuls... Kol and Doctor Arridor. (to Riker) We'll need chairs... Standing... and this must all be a quick exchange -- PICARD DaiMon, I am Captain Jean-Luc Picard of the Enterprise... I'm serving as host for these proceedings... GOSS Good, then see to it that we get chairs at once. PICARD (with an edge) Perhaps you misunderstood... GOSS Fine, fine, just have your Klingon servant... WORF (pointed) I am in charge of security. GOSS Then who gets the chairs? PICARD DaiMon, due to the intimate nature of these negotiations, all parties agreed that one representative would suffice. I will be happy to provide your consuls with accommodations... and you may have my chair... GOSS Very well. Kol, the bag... STAR TREK: "The Price" - REV. 9/29/89 - ACT ONE 11. 10 CONTINUED: (3) Kol hands Goss a sack... Riker leads Kol and Arridor out. They EXIT. Picard moves toward the door as Goss exchanges places with him. GOSS We can handle all the pleasantries later. I'm sure I'll never remember your names anyway, eh? (laughs) Enough of this foolishness. Let's get down to business. He turns the sack upside down and a pile of gold bars spills out across the tabletop. GOSS I'll match anyone's best offer... and add the gold on top of it. He holds out his hands in a fait accomplit motion. Sits back in his chair, with a confident grin. Bhavani reacts, nonplussed. Picard EXITS... 11 OUTSIDE THE DOOR - CLOSEUP a beat as the doors slide closed behind him and his eyes look skyward with a my-God reaction... 12 INT. TROI'S OFFICE (OPTICAL) She is studying personnel files of O'Brien and his girlfriend... but her mind drifts for a moment and she smiles to herself... TROI Computer... show me the file on delegate Devinoni Ral... On her screen, a very good picture of Ral appears with a read out... STAR TREK: "The Price" - REV. 9/26/89 - ACT ONE 12. 12 CONTINUED: COMPUTER Devinoni Ral, human, age forty-one, born Brussels, European Alliance, relocated at age nineteen to Hurkos Three, a non-aligned planet... There is a chime at the door... she presses a button to pause the readout... TROI Come in. The doors slide open to reveal Devinoni... she reacts. He ENTERS, smiles... DEVINONI Should I call for an appointment... ? TROI No... I... was just looking over some personnel files... Which she casually clears off the screen... DEVINONI Too bad. I had hoped you might be thinking about... me. Which of course she was. She smiles... TROI I thought you'd be deep into negotiations by now... DEVINONI In recess. I never play the opening rounds, anyway. Inconsequential. He sits on her desk, looking down at her. DEVINONI Besides there are more interesting things to negotiate on this ship. Like dinner tonight? TROI What about your... traveling companion? STAR TREK: "The Price" - REV. 9/25/89 - ACT ONE 13. 12 CONTINUED: (2) DEVINONI My traveling companion... is traveling. (off her look) I sent her home. TROI Why? DEVINONI You know why. She does. Almost as a defense mechanism... TROI Weren't you getting along? DEVINONI Don't do that. TROI What? DEVINONI Don't do "Counselor" Troi. TROI Was I? DEVINONI (nods, beat) When you leave this office, who are you? She reacts. How do you answer a question like that? DEVINONI (an insight about her) Oh. So that's how it is. He stands... studying her... moving around her chair... DEVINONI You never do. You never leave the office. He hits home. Uncannily. He's behind her now... his hands are in her hair... what the hell? TROI What are you... STAR TREK: "The Price" - REV. 9/26/89 - ACT ONE 14. 12 CONTINUED: (3) DEVINONI Ssshh... His fingers begin to unpin her hair... and we begin a ballet of long hair and fingers and hands in constant motion -- 13 HER HAIR cascading free... 14 HIS HAND guiding the long strands down the back of her neck... stroking it... moving it... 15 HER HAND moving hair out of her eyes... finding his hand which takes hers... and turns her in... 16 THE SWIVEL CHAIR - REAR ANGLE long hair flowing over the back of the chair to face... 17 HER FACE twisting to meet... 18 HIS FACE and he takes her hair in both hands and moves it away from her mouth... and everything says he's going to kiss her but he doesn't... DEVINONI Dinner at eight? A quick gentle grin... and he's gone... we stay on Troi's face... we can hear the doors hiss open and closed... and Troi suddenly looks down and we move to find as she realizes her hands are gripping the arms of her chair as though she's on a perilous ride. And she is. FADE OUT. END OF ACT ONE STAR TREK: "The Price" - REV. 9/27/89 - ACT TWO 15. ACT TWO FADE IN: 18A EXT. SPACE - THE ENTERPRISE (OPTICAL) 19 INT. CAPTAIN'S READY ROOM Picard, Riker, Data and Mendoza are studying the viewscreen where charts and graphs of the wormhole are displayed. DATA The data from the Barzan's probe into the wormhole is impressive, Captain. The wormhole delivered the probe beyond the Denkiri Arm, in the Gamma Quadrant. PICARD It would take us nearly a century at warp nine to cross that distance... DATA The same distance could be achieved in a matter of seconds through the wormhole. Riker groans. Off their looks... RIKER I was just imagining the Ferengi collecting tolls in front if we lose to them... MENDOZA I don't think the Ferengi are the greatest threat at the table... with all of DaiMon Goss' bluster, they don't have the resources the Barzans need. RIKER I'd say that fellow Devinoni's the one to watch out for... MENDOZA (reacts) An accurate observation... what made you recognize that? STAR TREK: "The Price" - REV. 9/27/89 - ACT TWO 16. 19 CONTINUED: RIKER He's the most comfortable man in the group... MENDOZA (appreciating) You must play poker, Commander... RIKER (grin) Poker, isn't that a game of some sort? PICARD Commander Riker teaches poker. MENDOZA Our skills are not dissimilar, Commander. PICARD Mister Mendoza, if this lives up to its billing... it is a discovery of extraordinary value... but it is a big "if"... RIKER Wormholes are here one moment, gone the next... a stable wormhole is unheard of. MENDOZA (reacts) Are you saying this may not be what it seems? DATA The Barzans do not have manned space travel, so they had to resort to an automated probe. Its findings are limited. It cannot be determined from these charts how stable the wormhole really is or how long it will remain intact. STAR TREK: "The Price" - REV. 9/27/89 - ACT TWO 16A. 19 CONTINUED: (2) PICARD The Federation could wind up "buying" itself the proverbial lemon, Mister Mendoza. MENDOZA And once the contract is negotiated and closed, we would be obliged to fulfill the terms. STAR TREK: "The Price" - REV. 9/27/89 - ACT TWO 17. 19 CONTINUED: (3) RIKER We really ought to see for ourselves. MENDOZA I don't think Bhavani could object to that... RIKER Geordi has continuous visual contact with the wormhole, Captain. He's the logical choice... DATA I would also like to volunteer, Captain... PICARD (acknowledges) Before anyone goes in there, we're going to conduct a full sensor analysis. I want to do everything possible to determine that it's safe. (beat) If we're satisfied, Data, you and Commander La Forge will enter the wormhole tommorrow. 20 INT. GUEST QUARTERS Goss and his aides, Kol and Arridor are huddled together, up to no good. Arridor has a syringe and is extracting from Goss's neck (with considerable pain to Goss) some fluid. ARRIDOR Just a moment of discomfort for a good cause, DaiMon. Arridor takes his fluid and does some quick work with it in a dish... ARRIDOR You understand this will not be lethal. STAR TREK: "The Price" - REV. 9/27/89 - ACT TWO 17A. 20 CONTINUED: GOSS Doctor, you surprise me. I have no wish to kill anyone. A short term crippling will suffice. ARRIDOR Then, this will be just fine. He moves over and takes from his work a small (silver?) drop of fluid and squeezes a drop on Goss's left palm... it immediately changes color. ARRIDOR A distillation of your own blood pyrocytes... harmless to you... (MORE) STAR TREK: "The Price" - REV. 9/27/89 - ACT TWO 18. 20 CONTINUED: (2) ARRIDOR (Cont'd) undetectable by the ship's bio-filters... but when absorbed through your victim's skin, it will provoke an extreme allergic reaction. GOSS I'd say it is time to extend the hand of the Ferengi to the representative of the Federation. STAR TREK: "The Price" - REV. 9/27/89 - ACT TWO 19. 21 OMITTED 22 INT. CORRIDOR - AT TROI'S DOOR Devinoni rings the chime. The door slides open to reveal a very sexy lady... Deanna Troi, her hair still down, a lovely dress... DEVINONI Much... better. TROI Thank you. Come in for a drink? He ENTERS. 23 INT. TROI'S QUARTERS (OPTICAL) Looking around with a critical eye. DEVINONI Ah, Federation decor... TROI Not your style? DEVINONI Conformity is not my style. At the food dispenser... TROI What would you like? He considers that for a moment... then leans in and kisses her gently on the lips. DEVINONI I'd even like another. She turns slightly with a "hold on"... takes a deep breath... STAR TREK: "The Price" - REV. 9/27/89 - ACT TWO 20. 23 CONTINUED: DEVINONI (teasing) There she is again... Counselor Troi... TROI I am not... computer, champagne... DEVINONI ... for two... A beat. The champagne arrives. He looks at her. She doesn't quite meet his eyes. DEVINONI (tongue-in-cheek) Am I moving too fast for you? TROI No, I'm moving too fast for me. DEVINONI Mmm, I like that better... TROI (and now she looks at him) I haven't been able to stop thinking about you all day... Upon which she kisses him... passionately. Afterwards... DEVINONI You must've had a nice day. TROI Anticipation is fun. They kiss again. TROI We'll be late for dinner. DEVINONI Very late. And as he picks her up in his arms and moves toward the bedroom... STAR TREK: "The Price" - REV. 10/2/89 - ACT TWO 21. 23A INT. SICKBAY (FORMERLY 29) Mendoza ENTERS, walking unsteadily... sweating, looks a bit dizzy. Beverly notices, steps up. BEVERLY Mister Mendoza? MENDOZA I seem to be a bit warm... He stumbles -- and passes out. Beverly's right there; holding him, calling to a near-by MEDICAL SUPERNUMERARY... BEVERLY I need some help here... And as the assistant rushes to help her, supporting Mendoza to a bed... 23B INT. CAPT. READY ROOM (FROM SCENE 32) Picard and Riker are with the three Ferengi. GOSS You attempt to gain every unfair advantage, Picard... PICARD Premier Bhavani has no objection... GOSS Well, I most certainly do... First, you conveniently arrange to play host... now you plan to send your own manned probe into the wormhole... the Federation thinks it can do anything it wants to. And I will not tolerate it any longer... STAR TREK: "The Price" - REV. 9/27/89 - ACT TWO 22. 23B CONTINUED: PICARD We will gladly share the results of our exploration with all the delegates... GOSS And you expect us to believe what you report? RIKER Then send in your own probe, Goss. GOSS That's exactly what I intend to do. And I strongly suggest you stay out of our way. They EXIT in a huff. PICARD Tell Data and La Forge to do themselves a favor and stay out of their way. Riker acknowledges. BEVERLY'S COM VOICE Captain Picard, please come to Sickbay... PICARD (keys insignia) Acknowledged, Doctor. STAR TREK: "The Price" - REV. 9/27/89 - ACT TWO 23. 24 thru OMITTED 32 33 INT. SICKBAY Mendoza is unconscious on a diagnostic bed. Two MEDICAL ASSISTANTS tend to him. BEVERLY is working a computer, and not getting satisfaction from its readout. Picard and Riker stand over Mendoza's bed. Picard shakes his head at what seems an unfortunate turn of events. BEVERLY Whatever he's got is obviously not life threatening -- it's some kind of system-wide histaminic reaction. He certainly can't go back to the negotiations for several days. STAR TREK: "The Price" - REV. 10/2/89 - ACT TWO 24. 33 CONTINUED: PICARD (a beat) Keep us advised. Moving with Picard and Riker out of Sickbay... PICARD The Federation's top negotiator taken out by a mysterious ailment. Suspicions? RIKER With the Ferengi around, always. 34 INT. CORRIDOR - CONTINUOUS PICARD Well, I guess you'll have to fill in for him, Number One. RIKER Me? PICARD I am the designated host. It would be a most awkward transition. The next likely choice is you. Mister Mendoza would agree. He was quite impressed with your natural instincts. RIKER Excuse me, sir, but those weren't natural instincts... they're poker instincts... A parlor game doesn't exactly prepare me for this... PICARD Yes, the stakes are higher. But then... that's when the game gets interesting, doesn't it, Commander. STAR TREK: "The Price" - 9/25/89 - ACT TWO 25-27. 34 CONTINUED: He pats Riker on the back... and on the commander's reaction... FADE OUT. END ACT TWO STAR TREK: "The Price" - REV. 9/27/89 - ACT THREE 28. ACT THREE FADE IN: 35 INT. MAIN BRIDGE Picard, Worf, Wesley at their usual stations. Supernumerary at OPS. WESLEY The wormhole will reappear in thirty seconds. PICARD Shuttle nine, stand by... WORF Ferengi pod is moving into position, Captain... 36 EXT. SPACE (OPTICAL) The Ferengi pod moves into position beside the Enterprise shuttle. 37 INT. SHUTTLE Data and Geordi. Data is piloting. Looking out the window... GEORDI (transmitting) Ferengi pod, this is Lieutenant Commander La Forge in the Enterprise shuttle. INTERCUT: 38 INT. FERENGI POD Kol is the pilot... Arridor beside him. ARRIDOR This is Doctor Arridor, go ahead. STAR TREK: "The Price" - REV. 9/28/89 - ACT THREE 29. 38 CONTINUED: GEORDI Would you care to take the point, Doctor? ARRIDOR We will gladly yield that honor to you, Lieutenant Commander. 39 EXT. SPACE - THE WORMHOLE (OPTICAL) As it suddenly blinks into existence in the center of the accretion disk. The subspace anomaly is itself a reflective half-sphere. It is rather like a soap bubble resting on the surface of a table, and can be entered from three planes. 40 INT. MAIN BRIDGE PICARD Proceed when ready. 41 EXT. SPACE - (OPTICAL) As the Enterprise shuttle noses into the bubble and VANISHES. The Ferengi pod follows a beat later. 42 EXT. SHUTTLE AND FERENGI POD (OPTICAL) The spectacular ride through the light show. A spectrum of primary colors are flowing in waves at the shuttle. There is a beautiful symmetry to these effects. A sense of something perfectly in balance. STAR TREK: "The Price" - REV. 9/27/89 - ACT THREE 30. 43 OMITTED 44 INT. MAIN BRIDGE WORF Contact with the shuttle, sir. PICARD Pipe it in, Lieutenant. Data's voice comes over the speakers, but it is gradually getting very slow, finally so distorted that he cannot be understood... until it is mere broken sounds, no longer even connected. DATA'S COM VOICE Captain, we have penetrated the outer event horizon of the wormhole. Sensors read severe doppler shifts... (distorted) What the bridge crew is hearing is gibberish. Picard frowns. WESLEY It's the relativistic time dilation, sir. Time is moving more slowly inside their part of the wormhole. I can process the audio to compensate... PICARD Make it so. STAR TREK: "The Price" - REV. 9/29/89 - ACT THREE 31. 44 CONTINUED: Wesley makes his adjustments, and now as Data's message becomes understandable... although it comes out with gaps between words, as though the computer is storing up and processing material and then playing it back. DATA'S COM VOICE ... and intense energy fields which appear to be stabilizing the wormhole. It is not clear why... Now approaching the singularity... The voice fades out... static... WESLEY They've passed beyond our communication capabilities, sir... Picard acknowledges and... 45 INT. OBSERVATION LOUNGE Riker is at the table with the delegates, settling in... Devinoni studies Riker, senses his discomfort, decides to exploit it... but very, very cordially. DEVINONI Commander, I appreciate what a difficult position this is for you. If you don't understand something, I hope you won't be embarrassed to ask me... Riker recognizes the ploy... responds to it. STAR TREK: "The Price" - REV. 9/29/89 - ACT THREE 32. 45 CONTINUED: RIKER I think I have an idea what the rules are. DEVINONI That's what makes it so interesting... the rules of the game change to fit the moment. RIKER In that regard, it's not unlike commanding a starship, Mister Ral. They nod to each other, formal adversaries. BHAVANI Commander, Mister Mendoza has already presented many of the details of the Federation proposal. Is there anything you would like to add? RIKER A complete analysis of our bid is available on the ship's computer for your consideration, Premier... If I may summarize... Riker rises, goes to the viewscreen, calls up, a complex graph showing the specifics of the proposal... we don't need to see it in detail, but Riker will refer to it for illustration... RIKER Our proposal includes technology that will enhance your food production, your mining capabilities, and space travel. 46 DEVINONI watches Bhavani's reaction STAR TREK: "The Price" - REV. 9/29/89 - ACT THREE 33. 46 CONTINUED: RIKER (O.S.) (continuing) We offer scholars and scientists to investigate the wormhole's potential. And perhaps most critical of all, we offer Starfleet. The security of this passage must never be compromised. We offer protection of the wormhole in perpetuity. Riker sits, feeling he's done pretty well for the first time up. Devinoni stays seated... his eyes still on Bhavani. Her eyes meet his... BHAVANI Mister Ral... ? DEVINONI (a beat, as though reluctant) Mister Riker's placed a great deal of emphasis on defense... a subject he obviously knows well, having served Starfleet in many a conflict. And Bhavani unconsciously barely nods... a tell... Devinoni catches it... stands... DEVINONI (continuing) The Chrysalians are enemies of no one... and choose to remain that way. Neutral. RIKER Neutral. And uninvolved, sir, in virtually all interstellar matters of consequence. Devinoni moves over to Riker's chart on the viewscreen as though to study it... STAR TREK: "The Price" - REV. 9/28/89 - ACT THREE 33A. 46 CONTINUED: (2) DEVINONI (interrupting) No one would claim that the Chrysalians are as powerful as the mighty Federation, but we have resources and technology and scientists too. We have also had peace for ten generations. Riker reacts. Devinoni nods to him. STAR TREK: "The Price" - REV. 9/26/89 - ACT THREE 34. 46 CONTINUED: (2) DEVINONI This is a fine proposal, Commander. He turns off the viewscreen. Overlapping... the groan of Deanna Troi... 47 INT. TROI'S QUARTERS - CLOSE ON HER FOOT is shiny with oil... as his hands work, slowly, methodically massaging it... DEVINONI (O.S.) I was just thinking... TROI (O.S.) Mmmm? DEVINONI (O.S.) Maybe I could stretch out these negotiations a few extra days. TROI (O.S.) Mmmm. DEVINONI (O.S.) Would you like that? TROI (O.S.) (yes) Mmm-hmmm. His hands continue to work... then her foot pulls away and after a beat, Troi's face lies in the same spot... (the camera can be locked)... his hands begin to massage oil into her fingers... looking up off camera... TROI Devinoni Ral, who are you? 48 NEW ANGLE - WIDER as he continues to massage her fingers... they are dressed in sexy nightclothes... his pajama top is off. STAR TREK: "The Price" - 9/25/89 - ACT THREE 35. 48 CONTINUED: DEVINONI What do your Betazoid senses tell you about me? TROI Not very much... (smiles) My human physical response must be blocking them out. DEVINONI Good. TROI It's never happened before. DEVINONI I rather like it that I'm more difficult to read than your other men... TROI I don't have any others... currently. DEVINONI How about Commander Riker? Mood breaker. She sits up. TROI Who have you been talking to... ? DEVINONI No one. I just sensed something when I saw the two of you together. TROI (reinstates the mood) Will Riker and I are good friends. DEVINONI Uh huh... She sort of pushes him playfully down on the bed, he rolls on his stomach and she climbs on his back... begins to knead oil across his back... TROI It was once a little more than that. STAR TREK: "The Price" - REV. 9/27/89 - ACT THREE 36. 48 CONTINUED: (2) DEVINONI Mmmm-hmm... TROI And how come we're talking about me and not you? DEVINONI Don't you have enough people telling you about their lives? Who counsels the counselor? She smiles, he has a point. TROI Uh uh, I want to know about you now... He turns over. She's sitting on his lower chest. DEVINONI I am a man of commerce. And I'm what you see right now. No games, no strategies. Just me, wanting to run away with you. (she reacts) And knowing that if I asked you, you'd never leave this damned ship. Yes she would... right now, in this moment, she would... but she knows better than to trust the moment and avoids responding. TROI When I first saw you, I felt as if I'd been waiting for you. I've been trying to understand why or how that's possible. DEVINONI Does it matter? STAR TREK: "The Price" - REV. 9/25/89 - ACT THREE 37. 48 CONTINUED: (3) She shakes her head, no. DEVINONI It will... when I tell you. But you must promise never to tell anyone else. TROI What? DEVINONI I am partly Betazoid too. (she reacts) My mother was half... I am one quarter. TROI You're empathic? DEVINONI The only one of five children. I must admit I was never as comfortable sensing emotions as you seem to be... TROI That's why you left Earth... He acknowledges. DEVINONI I've learned to live with it, use it... as you have... but still, it isolates us, doesn't it... ? (she acknowledges) I thought it would always be that way for me. Now, all of a sudden the rules I live by don't mean anything any more. I had tucked my heart away... didn't need it, didn't want it. At the negotiating table it can be fatal to have a heart... but I never realized how much I missed it until I looked at you. And as she stretches out on top of him, leans down to be with him... STAR TREK: "The Price" - REV. 9/28/89 - ACT THREE 37A. 48A EXT. WORMHOLE (OPTICAL) The shuttle continues to move through the light show. 49 INT. SHUTTLE (OPTICAL) GEORDI I'm picking up an increase in accretion matter filtering in from the terminus. 50 thru OMITTED 51 51A EXT. SPACE - WORMHOLE EXIT (OPTICAL) Calm. Quiet. A sharp contrast to the excitement of the last shot. No visible sign of the wormhole... and then suddenly the shuttle bursts out of "nowhere" ... a beat later, the Ferengi pod follows... 51B EXT. SHUTTLE (OPTICAL) As it stabilizes. GEORDI We made it... DATA Monitors are functioning normally again. GEORDI (to com) Ferengi pod, everybody in one piece over there? 51C INT. FERENGI POD ARRIDOR Our condition is no concern of yours, Enterprise shuttle. We are competitors in this venture, not partners. Ferengi pod, out. STAR TREK: "The Price" - REV. 9/28/89 - ACT THREE 38. 51D INT. SHUTTLE GEORDI (to himself) Happy landings to you too. DATA (re: readings) Curious. GEORDI Huh? DATA We are not where we are supposed to be. GEORDI What do you mean... we're on the other side of the wormhole, aren't we... ? DATA According to the Barzan probe, we should be in the Gamma Quadrant... but the readings clearly indicate we are nearly two hundred light years away. In sector three-five-five-six of the Delta Quadrant. GEORDI Maybe the Barzan's readings were wrong... DATA Maybe their readings were correct. Their probe could have exited the wormhole at a different location. 51E ANGLE - WINDOW (OPTICAL) to see outside... the wormhole is still invisible. Geordi adjusts his VISOR, reacts to something he sees... GEORDI Data, I'm picking up a subatomic fluctuation... meson and lepton activity is increasing... STAR TREK: "The Price" - REV. 9/28/89 - ACT THREE 39. 51E CONTINUED: As Data reacts, runs a check of the monitors... DATA Gravitational acceleration is also increasing... Push in on Geordi staring out... GEORDI Something very strange is happening to this wormhole. As his concern grows... FADE OUT. END OF ACT THREE STAR TREK: "The Price" - REV. 10/2/89 - ACT FOUR 40. ACT FOUR FADE IN: 52 INT. EXERCISE ROOM The room is mirrored, set up for exercising. Beverly is stretching as Troi ENTERS late... TROI Sorry. She's clearly up and bouncy, does a liberating stretch, and shakes with good feelings... and Beverly has to notice... BEVERLY You're unusually "limber" this morning. TROI (smiles) I'll say. BEVERLY Uh huh... ? TROI Devinoni Ral. They begin dance stretching. Off Beverly's look -- STAR TREK: "The Price" - REV. 9/25/89 - ACT FOUR 41. 52 CONTINUED: TROI It's ridiculous. And wonderful. I feel... completely out of control. Happy. Terrified. There's nothing rational about this. BEVERLY Who needs rational when your toes curl up... ? TROI I'm afraid I'm going to lose myself... I can't get enough of him. Is it possible to fall in love in one day? BEVERLY I did. They change into another stretch. TROI It was like this for you and Jack? BEVERLY No, it was another fellow. Fell in love in a day. It lasted a week. But what a week. (beat, remembers) Then I met Jack... took months to figure it out with Jack. TROI Maybe I should slow down... catch my breath, not let this get out of control... They look at each other a beat. Both shake their heads at the same time... BEVERLY & TROI Nah. 53 INT. TEN-FORWARD A few off-duty crew members are scattered throughout. Goss is putting a few moves on a good-looking woman at the bar... she finally tires of him, walks out. STAR TREK: "The Price" - REV. 9/25/89 - ACT FOUR 42. 54 DEVINONI AND LEYOR SIT by themselves. Leyor sips juice. DEVINONI To be honest, I was surprised to see the Caldonians here at all, Leyor... LEYOR You must think Caldonia very insular, Mister Ral. DEVINONI Not at all... on the contrary, I've respected your world's commitment to pure research. It's just that, well... (maybe I shouldn't) LEYOR Go ahead, please... DEVINONI Well, scholars don't always enjoy administrative demands... Leyor takes a beat... his eyes give Devinoni the tell... he feels the rest... DEVINONI And certainly we've seen here that the administration of the wormhole... LEYOR Yes... I must admit I have begun to feel some trepidation about that... DEVINONI (he's got him) I'm sure you have. I'm sure we all have, Leyor... (beat) Do you realize that during the next century, the number of ships... 55 INT. OBSERVATION LOUNGE All parties are seated with distance between them around the table. Bhavani brings the meeting to order. STAR TREK: "The Price" - REV. 9/26/89 - ACT FOUR 43. 55 CONTINUED: BHAVANI Gentlemen, this open session is called by request of the Caldonian delegation. She nods to Leyor, who stands. LEYOR Madame Bhavani, Caldonia withdraws from these proceedings. Riker's eyes narrow... mind working... BHAVANI For what reasons, Leyor? LEYOR It has been made very clear that the maintenance and administrative requirements are beyond our ability... RIKER Leyor, the Federation would like to negotiate a trade agreement to acquire your planet's rich deposits of Trillium 323 which we will add to our bid, Premier Bhavani... LEYOR My apologies. We have already reached an agreement with the Chrysalians... As Leyor exits, Riker exchanges a look with Devinoni... who nods as the baron who just shot down a Federation bi-plane. RIKER Mister Ral, you either had very good instincts -- or foreknowledge of the Caldonian withdrawal. DEVINONI Some people just don't wish to transact business with the Federation, Commander. (to Bhavani) The Chrysalians hereby add the Caldonian Trillium 323 to its bid, Premier... Off Riker's reaction... STAR TREK: "The Price" - REV. 10/2/89 - ACT FOUR 44. 56 EXT. SPACE - THE TWO SHUTTLECRAFT (OPTICAL) At the other side of the wormhole... which is still not visible... 56A INT. FERENGI POD Picking up in the middle of an argument... ARRIDOR I have no intention of leaving yet. We are not finished taking our readings... INTERCUT: 57 INT. SHUTTLE GEORDI I'm telling you, it's changing... Look, your readings must be showing you the same things we're getting... this is not the Gamma Quadrant. ARRIDOR I will not confirm your speculations... DATA It is not a speculation, Doctor. We are not where the Barzans said we should be... which would indicate that this side of the wormhole is not stable. GEORDI There are meson and lepton fluctuations... local gravitational fields are increasing exponentially... everything says we better get the hell out of here... ARRIDOR It will be visible again in forty seconds... we will make our own judgments then... STAR TREK: "The Price" - REV. 9/28/89 - ACT FOUR 44A. 57 CONTINUED: GEORDI I can see it now... and I'm telling you that you don't have time to wait... not even forty seconds... STAR TREK: "The Price" - REV. 9/28/89 - ACT FOUR 45. 57 CONTINUED: (2) ARRIDOR Ferengi pod, out. GEORDI Dammit, Arridor, we're seventy thousand light years away from our ships... follow us... we'll lead you in... No response. GEORDI Idiots. 57A ANGLE - (OPTICAL) to include the windows. Geordi takes the controls... GEORDI It's getting worse. I'm taking us in, Data... with or without them... Increasing speed... DATA Thrusters at half power... three-quarters... GEORDI Entering outer event horizon... Outside the windows, the light show begins... they're back inside the wormhole... 58 thru OMITTED 59 59A EXT. FERENGI POD - SPACE (OPTICAL) Alone in space. 60 INT. FERENGI POD (OPTICAL) ARRIDOR They panic quickly under pressure. STAR TREK: "The Price" - REV. 9/28/89 - ACT FOUR 45A. 60 CONTINUED: The wormhole appears outside. ARRIDOR There, precisely as scheduled, right where I expected it to be. And a beat later, the hole suddenly twists into an odd shape and cracks away at super-warp speed... and disappears. On the Ferengis' open-mouth reaction... STAR TREK: "The Price" - REV. 9/27/89 - ACT FOUR 46. 61 INT. TROI'S QUARTERS A romantic candlelight dinner alone. They are dressed in nightclothes... he wears a robe, she is in her sexy nightgown... there is a little tension from Troi... TROI Everyone's talking about the way you absorbed the Caldonian bid today... DEVINONI It was there for the taking... (shrugs) So I took it... TROI Commander Riker didn't know how you managed it... DEVINONI Let me tell you something, Will Riker's good... the most dangerous man in the room to me... he has every instinct of a fine negotiator... TROI ... he just doesn't have an edge. Your edge. DEVINONI Our edge... and you make it sound unethical. TROI Isn't it? Devinoni smiles, this is not a conversation he wants to have. STAR TREK: "The Price" - REV. 9/27/89 - ACT FOUR 47. 61 CONTINUED: DEVINONI Deanna, it's just business... TROI (beat) Why haven't you told anyone that you're an empath? Disturbed that she won't let it go. DEVINONI I find it makes people uncomfortable. TROI I think you don't tell them... so you can gain an advantage. Trying to joke it away -- DEVINONI I used it to gain an advantage with you... and you didn't mind... But she won't be had... she looks at him. He puts down his fork. Okay, you want it? You got it -- DEVINONI The point of negotiating is to take advantage, Deanna. I don't know what the other side is offering, they don't know what I'm offering. We dance around each other until someone wins. I never cry foul when I lose. TROI But you're reading their emotional states, their inner selves, then using that to manipulate them. He becomes slightly impatient. DEVINONI Deanna, people have been doing that for thousands of years, by listening carefully, by watching body language. I just happen to be better at it. You do it. STAR TREK: "The Price" - REV. 9/25/89 - ACT FOUR 48. 61 CONTINUED: (3) TROI I do it to help my crew, not outmanueuver them. And I don't hide that I'm an empath. DEVINONI You announce it to every alien culture you encounter? Or do you use it to give your side an advantage. Do you tell the Romulan in the ship about to attack that you can feel that he's bluffing or do you just tell it to your captain? Troi reacts, on the defensive... TROI That's different. It's a matter of protection... DEVINONI Your protection... your captain, your crew... your edge. (beat) Yes. It's a matter of life and death when you take the advantage. Me, I deal in property, in exchange... no one gets hurt. (beat) Which of us would you say has the greater problem of ethics? He rises from the table... leaving Troi alone to think about his question. She has no easy answers. FADE OUT. END ACT FOUR STAR TREK: "The Price" - REV. 9/27/89 - ACT FIVE 49. ACT FIVE FADE IN: 62 EXT. SPACE - THE ENTERPRISE (OPTICAL) 63 OMITTED 64 INT. TEN-FORWARD Riker is at a table alone, making some notes for his next round... Devinoni arrives with a drink in his hand. STAR TREK: "The Price" - REV. 9/25/89 - ACT FIVE 50. 64 CONTINUED: DEVINONI May I join you, Commander? Riker motions to him to sit. RIKER Bought out the Ferengi yet, Ral? DEVINONI Think I should try? RIKER No. But I think you will. One way or another, it'll come down to you and me. Devinoni smiles. DEVINONI You know, you're very good at this... better than you realize. RIKER I hope I'm better than you realize, Ral. DEVINONI (smiles) The last mile of the marathon is always the toughest. That's when the winners are willing to take the big risks... are you ready to do that? RIKER We'll see, won't we... DEVINONI Well, let's see right now... I'm prepared to reach a firm agreement with Bhavani before we learn the results of your probe's expedition. Are you? Riker hesitates... DEVINONI Mmmm, that would not be looked upon favorably by the Federation, I'd imagine. (MORE) STAR TREK: "The Price" - REV. 9/25/89 - ACT FIVE 50A. 64 CONTINUED: (2) DEVINONI (Cont'd) See, you have to be willing to take that last step alone... or it isn't worth playing. STAR TREK: "The Price" - REV. 9/25/89 - ACT FIVE 51. 64 CONTINUED: (2) RIKER Your point of view, not mine. DEVINONI Oh, I see that, Commander... otherwise you wouldn't be second in command of this ship. Devinoni gives Riker no time to react. DEVINONI You know, I feel responsible for you in a way... related. (smiles) Deanna. We both love Deanna... in different ways, of course. RIKER I'll remove the burden of that responsibility right now. My relationship with Deanna stands on its own. Without help from you. DEVINONI Of course it does. She's an extraordinary woman. Lovely, brilliant --- very passionate. He leans closer to Riker, still smiling. DEVINONI She could have been yours, Will. But you didn't do enough to keep her, and now, I'm here and I'm going to take her too. Riker really looks at Devinoni, as if he's seeing him for the first time. He relaxes back into his seat and smiles. RIKER You know, I think this is the first bad play I've seen you make... Devinoni reacts. STAR TREK: "The Price" - REV. 9/27/89 - ACT FIVE 52. 64 CONTINUED: (4) RIKER If you bring happiness into Deanna's life, nothing would please me more. You're not really a bad sort, Ral, you just don't have any values... beyond the value of today's bid, that is. She's just the one to give some meaning to your sorry existence... if you're smart enough to take it. I doubt that you are. Standing, toasting him -- RIKER To the last mile. Riker leaves, feeling better than he has in days. Devinoni watches him unhappily. Glances over to see... 65 ANGLE - GOSS at a table trying to pick up a couple of sexy crew women... but as he sits, they exchange a look and leave. Goss is disappointed. 66 DEVINONI gets up, and joins Goss at his table... DEVINONI Federation women have a game they call "playing hard to get". GOSS Yes, I do not at all find it amusing. DEVINONI On Chrysalia, the women outnumber the men four to one. They virtually throw themselves at your feet... As Goss' interest perks up considerably... STAR TREK: "The Price" - REV. 10/2/89 - ACT FIVE 53-55. 67 thru OMITTED 74 75 INT. MAIN BRIDGE As before. WORF Sir, the Ferengi vessel is moving out of orbit, impulse power... (beat) They are approaching the entry to the wormhole, sir. PICARD (to com) Computer, is the Ferengi Goss still aboard the Enterprise? COMPUTER DaiMon Goss departed the Enterprise at fourteen hundred hours. WORF Ferengi are powering forward missile launchers... PICARD Yellow Alert. Hail the Ferengi. WORF DaiMon Goss responding. PICARD On screen. 76 ANGLE - VIEWSCREEN (OPTICAL) Goss is in the Ferengi captain's Ready Room. PICARD Request an explanation for your actions, DaiMon Goss. GOSS I have learned from informed sources that the Federation has manipulated these negotiations from the very beginning... and has already signed a secret agreement with the Barzans. STAR TREK: "The Price" - REV. 9/26/89 - ACT FIVE 55A. 76 CONTINUED: PICARD That is not true... GOSS The Ferengi offer was never seriously considered. STAR TREK: "The Price" - REV. 10/2/89 - ACT FIVE 56. 76 CONTINUED: (2) PICARD Premier Bhavani welcomed you to these proceedings, Goss... despite my better judgment... GOSS We will be ignored no longer. WORF They've fired a missile directly at the opening, sir! PICARD Destroy it. WORF Firing phasers. 77 ANGLE - VIEWSCREEN (OPTICAL) Seeing the Ferengi torpedo... as the Enterprise phaser hits it. It EXPLODES. 78 INT. OBSERVATION LOUNGE Riker with Bhavani and Devinoni... BHAVANI Your offers both have merit, gentlemen... if I could find a deciding factor... Red Alert. Riker reacts, keys his insignia... RIKER Riker to Picard. What's happening, Captain? PICARD'S COM VOICE Goss has fired a missile at the wormhole... I need you on the bridge, Number One... RIKER (on the move) Excuse me. STAR TREK: "The Price" - REV. 9/27/89 - ACT FIVE 57. 78 CONTINUED: He EXITS. Bhavani and Devinoni exchange a concerned glance... DEVINONI Excuse me for saying so under the circumstances, Premier... But this fight is really between the Federation and the Ferengi... it is unconscionable that your wormhole is being used as a pawn in their power struggle. Off her reaction... 79 INT. MAIN BRIDGE (OPTICAL) Riker arrives as does Troi... PICARD (to viewscreen) You must know we will not allow you to do this, Goss. GOSS If the Ferengi cannot have the wormhole, no one will... Picard signals Worf to mute the viewscreen. PICARD Can he possibly believe that a missile will have any destructive effect on a wormhole? And focus on Troi... as she begins to realize something is dreadfully wrong... RIKER One of those missiles would have a destructive effect if it exploded near our shuttle... Riker steps forward, signalling Worf to resume voice contact. RIKER Goss... don't you realize we both have shuttlecraft in there? STAR TREK: "The Price" - REV. 9/27/89 - ACT FIVE 57A. 79 CONTINUED: GOSS Casualties of war, Commander. My men are prepared to die. Are yours? TROI Captain... PICARD (off her look) Viewscreen off. TROI He's lying. I'm almost sure of it. He does not mean what he says. STAR TREK: "The Price" - REV. 9/27/89 - ACT FIVE 58. 79 CONTINUED: (2) RIKER Why... what is he doing it for then? Push in on Troi, realizing... 80 ANGLE at the turbolift... Bhavani and Devinoni... BHAVANI Permission to enter the bridge, Captain... PICARD Premier, with all due respect... DEVINONI Captain, I believe I am in a better position to settle this with DaiMon Goss than you are... (Picard reacts) May I address him? Picard motions for them to come forward... 81 ANGLE - VIEWSCREEN (OPTICAL) DEVINONI DaiMon Goss, this is Devinoni Ral... Goss reappears on the viewscreen. GOSS I have nothing to say to you, Ral. DEVINONI Then, just listen. The planet of Barzan has reached an agreement with the Chrysalians for long term control of the wormhole. (Riker reacts) On behalf of the Chrysalians, I am prepared to offer the Ferengi free access to the wormhole in perpetuity... And stay on Troi as she follows this... GOSS I have your word on this? STAR TREK: "The Price" - REV. 9/27/89 - ACT FIVE 59. 81 CONTINUED: DEVINONI My word, sir. In return for some Ferengi convoy privileges to be negotiated in good faith. GOSS This is an acceptable offer. WORF Ferengi vessel has shut down forward missile launchers. PICARD Stand down, Red Alert. BHAVANI Commander Riker, I'm sorry you had to learn about my decision this way. You represented the Federation well. But I have come to believe that the Chrysalians' neutrality and tradition of peace is more desirable to my planet. TROI Excuse me, Premier. There is something you should know... And Devinoni flashes a look at Troi... who reacts... TROI I'm sorry, was there something you wanted to say, Mister Ral? DEVINONI No... not at all... TROI I sense you are uncomfortable suddenly... DEVINONI Well, after all, this was a tense situation... TROI But that's what is so odd about it... it was not tense at all... I sensed no tension from DaiMon Goss... or you... STAR TREK: "The Price" - REV. 9/27/89 - ACT FIVE 60. 81 CONTINUED: (2) GOSS I was tense... I was ready to blow it up... I strongly protest... PICARD (enough already) Off screen. Goss' image disappears... TROI It was almost as though... you both were performing a scene for all of us... DEVINONI Excuse me, Captain, I think there's a slight conflict of interest here... TROI I agree. Entirely. Devinoni asked me not to tell anyone about his empathic powers... which he uses to manipulate competitors in a negotiation. Reactions. TROI Certainly, that put me in a conflict of interest which I hope I have now resolved. Premier, I believe Ral has used your fear of continuing aggression between the Federation and its enemies to undermine our position. I also believe this incident was staged by Ral and Goss to provide you with a reason to decide in favor of the Chrysalians. And Troi and Ral exchange a long look... and he finally grins at her... shrugs, well, it's just another deal. Wesley, who has been monitoring the sensors... reacts to something he hears. WESLEY (excited) Captain... STAR TREK: "The Price" - REV. 9/27/89 - ACT FIVE 60A. 81 CONTINUED: (3) PICARD (knows by the sound in his voice) On speaker. At first, it's just broken phrases and hiss, slowly coming together... GEORDI'S COM VOICE Shuttle nine to Enterprise... Shuttle nine to Enterprise... PICARD Shuttle, this is Picard... do you read... (no response) On screen... STAR TREK: "The Price" - REV. 10/2/89 - ACT FIVE 61. 82 ANGLE - VIEWSCREEN (OPTICAL) The wormhole is not visible... but a tiny image of the shuttle suddenly appears out of nowhere... 83 OMITTED INTERCUT: 84 INT. SHUTTLE GEORDI This is Shuttle nine... reporting back... barely. PICARD The Ferengi pod? GEORDI They're trapped on the other side, sir. In the Delta Quadrant. We tried to warn them. They wouldn't follow us. PICARD Elaborate. DATA Captain, this end of the wormhole is currently stable but the other end apparently shifts position periodically. The Barzan probe had no way to recognize this. Eventually, both sides will be unstable. GEORDI It's a dry well, Captain. Worthless. 84A INT. MAIN BRIDGE PICARD Acknowledged, Shuttle nine. Main Shuttlebay, prepare for final approach. STAR TREK: "The Price" - REV. 9/27/89 - ACT FIVE 61A. 84A CONTINUED: WORF Captain, DaiMon Goss is demanding to know where his men are. PICARD Advise him to set his coordinates for the Delta Quadrant, Lieutenant... He might run into them in eighty years or so. Riker crosses to Devinoni. RIKER Mister Ral, I congratulate you on winning the rights to the Barzan wormhole... DEVINONI (tight) I take the risks. I stand by my agreements. Off Riker's half grin... STAR TREK: "The Price" - REV. 9/27/89 - ACT FIVE 62. 85 OMITTED 86 INT. CORRIDOR - AT TROI'S QUARTERS As the door opens to reveal Troi. She reacts as she sees... 87 REVERSE - DEVINONI A look. TROI Come in... 88 INT. TROI'S QUARTERS TROI When do you leave? DEVINONI Soon. I've... been recalled by the Chrysalians... explanations demanded and so forth. TROI I'm sorry. DEVINONI (shrugs) I've done all right for them over the years... they know the stakes. It'll be fine. They look at each other a long beat. "Fine" is not in their faces. DEVINONI I had to do it, Troi... Troi looks at him... can't accept that... STAR TREK: "The Price" - REV. 9/27/89 - ACT FIVE 63. 88 CONTINUED: DEVINONI Bhavani was ready to go with the the Federation. I sensed it. And I'd used up every card in the deck... I had to change the rules. TROI You must have known that I couldn't allow you to do that... DEVINONI (beat, grins) My human physical response must have blocked out my Betazoid senses. She knows, acknowledges. DEVINONI (beat) In a way, I'm glad you did it. It's made me take a hard look at who I am. I don't like what I see. He moves to her... she allows it. DEVINONI Deanna... I once asked you to run away with me. I'm asking you again. I need you. You could help me change. You could be my conscience. He kisses her. After they break... TROI I already have a job as a counselor. STAR TREK: "The Price" - REV. 9/26/89 - ACT FIVE 64. 88 CONTINUED: (2) He reacts. He slowly retreats to the door, shrugs... and EXITS. On her expression, with no regrets, we... FADE OUT. END OF ACT FIVE THE END STAR TREK: THE NEXT GENERATION "The Vengeance Factor" (f.k.a. "The Human Factor," "The Vengeance," "The Weapon") #40273-157 Written by Sam Rolfe Directed by Timothy Bond THE WRITING CREDITS MAY NOT BE FINAL AND SHOULD NOT BE USED FOR PUBLICITY OR ADVERTISING PURPOSES WITHOUT FIRST CHECKING WITH THE TELEVISION LEGAL DEPARTMENT. Copyright 1989 Paramount Pictures Corporation. All Rights Reserved. This script is not for publication or reproduction. No one is authorized to dispose of same. 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FINAL DRAFT SEPTEMBER 29, 1989 STAR TREK: "The Vengeance Factor" - REV. 10/11/89 - CAST STAR TREK: THE NEXT GENERATION "The Vengeance Factor" CAST PICARD Acamarians RIKER SOVEREIGN MAROUK DATA YUTA BEVERLY TROI Gatherers GEORDI BRULL WORF TEMAREK WESLEY CHORGAN VOLNOTH Non-speaking Non-speaking Acamarians SUPERNUMERARIES BODYGUARD MEDICS TWO FEDERATION SCIENTISTS FEMALE MAID SERVANTS STAR TREK: "The Vengeance Factor" - REV. 10/08/89 - SETS STAR TREK: THE NEXT GENERATION "The Vengeance Factor" SETS INTERIORS EXTERIORS USS ENTERPRISE USS ENTERPRISE MAIN BRIDGE SICKBAY GAMMA HROMI TWO OBSERVATION LOUNGE GATHERER CAMP GUEST QUARTERS RIKER'S QUARTERS TEN FORWARD FEDERATION OUTPOST GATHERER SHIP STAR TREK: "Vengeance Factor" REV. 10/6/89 - PRONUNCIATION STAR TREK: THE NEXT GENERATION "The Vengeance Factor" PRONUNCIATION GUIDE ACAMAR AWK-uh-mahr ACAMARIANS awk-uh-MAHR-ee-uns ARTONIAN are-TONE-ians BRULL BROOL CHORGAN CHORE-gun HROMI huh-ROM-ee LORNACK LORE-nack MALLON MAL-lon MAROUK mar-RUKE NORANIUM nor-RAY-knee-um PENTHOR PEN-thor RIGELLIAN rye-JELL-ee-un TEMAREK TEM-ah-reck TOLMAN TOLL-man TONKIAN TAHN-key-in TRALESTA tra-LESS-tah VOLNOTH VOLL-noth YUTA YOU-tah STAR TREK: "Vengeance Factor" - REV. 10/10/89 - TEASER 1. STAR TREK: THE NEXT GENERATION "The Vengeance Factor" TEASER FADE IN: 1 thru OMITTED 2 3 INT. FEDERATION OUTPOST (OPTICAL) The two-man Federation scientific outpost has been looted -- stripped of all equipment. Instrumentation panels have been ripped from the walls; wave guides dangle aimlessly. Piles of crates, shelves and shattered scientific equipment are all over the floor, blocking easy movement... RIKER, WORF, BEVERLY, and DATA MATERIALIZE and survey the damage. RIKER Someone sure stripped this place. Worf examines an empty slab where a piece of equipment undoubtedly rested. WORF The reactor is gone. Riker examines a gaping hole in the wall. RIKER That's why no one answered our hail for two days -- they had nothing to answer it with. Data scans with a tricorder. DATA Life signs five meters straight ahead, Commander. But straight ahead is blocked by all the garbage left behind... on the other side is a door. Riker, Worf and Data begin to move the stuff out of the way... STAR TREK: "Vengeance Factor" - REV. 10/10/89 - TEASER 2-3. 3A ON BEVERLY detecting something else with her tricorder. She looks over a smashed piece of equipment scattered on the floor then picks up a small jagged piece of metal. A drop of blood-like substance coats a sharp edge. Riker glances over... RIKER Blood? BEVERLY Yes, but not human. I'll have to do some analysis on it. 4 ON WORF AND DATA finally reaching the closed door. Worf tries the manual override -- the door remains closed. WORF It's jammed. He glances at Data who steps forward, grabs the door. A quick yank and the door slides open -- revealing TWO FEDERATION SCIENTISTS lying motionless on the floor. 5 thru OMITTED 5A FADE OUT. END OF TEASER STAR TREK: "Vengeance Factor" - REV. 10/5/89 - ACT ONE 4. ACT ONE FADE IN: 6 INT. SICKBAY MEDICS are tending to the two scientists. Beverly's analyzing the bloody piece of metal. Picard, Riker and Data ENTER. Beverly reports: BEVERLY The two scientists are suffering from phaser stuns... I'd guess several hits each. PICARD Several... when one would surely have sufficed. BEVERLY It'll take us a while to bring them around, but they'll recover. She indicates the sample she's analyzing. BEVERLY (cont'd) We found a sample of blood. It's a rare iron-copper composite, unique to one humanoid species: the Acamarians. PICARD Acamarians. (a beat) That would suggest... the Gatherers. DATA A likely hypothesis. The nomadic marauders who refer to themselves as Gatherers have raided other outposts in neighboring sectors. RIKER But they've never ventured this far before. STAR TREK: "Vengeance Factor" - REV. 10/9/89 - ACT ONE 5. 6 CONTINUED: PICARD And we cannot permit them to spread their violent ways further. (keys insignia) Mister Crusher, set course for the Acamar system. WESLEY'S COM VOICE Aye, sir. CUT TO: 7 EXT. SPACE - THE ENTERPRISE (OPTICAL) Assuming orbit around a planet -- Acamar Three. PICARD (V.O.) Captain's log, Stardate 43562.9. In an effort to put an end to the Gatherer raids, we have come to the Acamar System to enlist the aid of Marouk, the sovereign of Acamar Three. 8 INT. OBSERVATION LOUNGE Picard, Riker, TROI. At the head of the table sits an imposing, aristocratic middle-aged woman: MAROUK, sovereign of Acamar. Standing unobtrusively behind Marouk is a beefy male BODYGUARD. Acamarians are humanoid, perhaps a bit unkempt and primitive (in appearance, not in intelligence) by our standards. STAR TREK: "Vengeance Factor" - REV. 10/6/89 - ACT ONE 6. 8 CONTINUED: PICARD Their raids have made this sector unsafe. Our research facilities have been ransacked; trade routes disrupted... MAROUK The Gatherers are elusive; we've only managed to capture a handful of them. However, with Starfleet's help... She's got the wrong idea. Picard interrupts sharply: PICARD Hunting them down is not what I'm proposing. MAROUK Reconciliation with the Gatherers is impossible. It's been tried. Every time we've offered amnesty, they've rejected it. TROI When was the last attempt made? MAROUK Eighteen years ago. PICARD (surprised) Eighteen years? MAROUK Yes. We gave up trying. RIKER Why? MAROUK Because the Gatherers aren't willing to change! For almost a century, they've been parasites... moving from star system to star system, living on what they could find... or steal. They're little more than barbarians. PICARD They are still your people. STAR TREK: "Vengeance Factor" - REV. 10/6/89 - ACT ONE 7. 8 CONTINUED: (2) MAROUK No. Captain, you have to understand our history. A hundred years ago, before the Gatherers split off from our culture, we were a savage, violent race. Clans battled clans... bloody, vengeful feuds that lasted for generations. (a beat) But we overcame those ways... broke the cycle of fighting and revenge. All except the Gatherers. TROI After a century of wandering, they may be ready to come home. PICARD Despite all your progress, your society is still divided. And it will remain so until the Gatherers return to Acamar. Picard's words have had an effect. Marouk thinks it over. MAROUK The attempt may be futile. Picard stands. PICARD You have much to gain and little to lose in making the effort. The problem affects us all... it cannot be ignored. Marouk looks at Picard, grudgingly nods. She knows he's right. STAR TREK: "The Vengeance Factor" - REV. 10/2/89 - ACT ONE 8. 9 INT. MAIN BRIDGE Data, Wesley, Worf, supernumeraries. Picard, Riker, Troi, Marouk, and the bodyguard ENTER from the Observation Lounge. PICARD Sovereign Marouk, how soon will you be ready to leave Acamar? MAROUK I am ready now, Captain. I need only bring aboard two more servants... RIKER I'll see to that... and to your accommodations, Sovereign. Marouk nods a thank you to Riker, turns to Picard: MAROUK I have reason to believe there is a Gatherer encampment somewhere in the Hromi Cluster. PICARD Mister Data? DATA The Federation has charted but not explored several Class M planets in that area. Any of those planets might well serve as a base. PICARD Mister Crusher, set course for the Hromi Cluster. WESLEY Aye, sir. 10 EXT. SPACE - THE ENTERPRISE (OPTICAL) leaving its orbit of Acamar Three. 11 INT. GUEST QUARTERS (OPTICAL) as Marouk ENTERS, followed by Riker. She crosses to the port, looks out at the stars as the ship goes into Warp. An impressive sight. Marouk turns to Riker: STAR TREK: "Vengeance Factor" - REV. 10/9/89 - ACT ONE 9. 11 CONTINUED: MAROUK A fine ship, Commander. RIKER We're very proud of her. In b.g., the bodyguard and two more servants ENTER, carrying suitcases. One new arrival is a middle-aged female MAID. The other is YUTA, a fragile girl in her early twenties; pretty, with a delicate, quiet manner. Like all Marouk's servants, if she has a personality it's invisible. 12 NEW ANGLE as Yuta sets down the suitcase, looks up. Her eyes happen to meet Riker's. A friendly smile from Riker. Some women would turn away, blushing shyly; some would smile back in friendship -- or invitation. Yuta does neither -- just looks incuriously at Riker. No reaction at all. MAROUK (O.S.) Yuta -- 13 WIDER (OPTICAL) as Yuta turns to Marouk. MAROUK A light meal in twenty minutes. Yuta nods in obedience, but Marouk has already turned away to look out the port at the stars streaking by. 14 ON YUTA (OPTICAL) approaching Riker. In b.g., the other servants are unpacking the suitcases. YUTA May I be shown to the kitchen, Commander? STAR TREK: "Vengeance Factor" - REV. 10/9/89 - ACT ONE 10. 14 CONTINUED: RIKER You're the chef? YUTA Yes. I'll prepare all meals for the sovereign and her servants. RIKER We can provide you with a kitchen if you wish... but it's not really necessary. The food dispensers can synthesize anything you want. Yuta absorbs this without reaction. Riker leads Yuta to a food slot. RIKER (cont'd) I'll show you. (to Marouk) Sovereign, may I offer you a drink? Marouk doesn't turn from the port: MAROUK Yes, thank you. Cold water. RIKER (to food slot) A glass of water... five degrees. A glass of water MATERIALIZES in the food slot. Yuta shows mild interest. Riker takes the glass, starts to deliver it to Marouk. Yuta politely blocks him, extends her hand for the glass. YUTA Please. Riker's about to say "it's all right, I'll do it" -- but there's something immovable about her stance. He hands her the glass. She sniffs it, calmly takes a sip. Riker doesn't know whether to be amused or horrified. RIKER You're also the food taster? Yuta looks at him -- what's so odd about that? STAR TREK: "Vengeance Factor" - REV. 10/9/89 - ACT ONE 11. 14 CONTINUED: (2) YUTA That's part of the cook's duties. Satisfied she hasn't been poisoned, Yuta takes the glass to Marouk, who accepts it without comment. Yuta returns to Riker. YUTA (cont'd) I'm sure the sovereign will wish to sample many of the cuisines your ship has to offer, but there are certain Acamarian dishes she will insist upon. RIKER I'll arrange for a technician to help you program your recipes into the computer. I'd like to try some myself. What's your specialty? YUTA I have none. A simple statement of fact. Riker smiles at her. His natural good will and charm would melt an ice cap. RIKER Don't be modest. You can't tell me you haven't come up with a few original triumphs... And, wonder of wonders, Yuta smiles back. Not much of a smile... but it's a start. YUTA There is a spiced parthus dish... RIKER "Parthus?" YUTA A green vegetable with fleshy roots. RIKER Ah. Parthus... a la Yuta. I look forward to tasting it. (MORE) STAR TREK: "Vengeance Factor" - REV. 10/6/89 - ACT ONE 12. 14 CONTINUED: (3) RIKER (Cont'd) (to Marouk, taking his leave) Sovereign... But Marouk's still gazing with fascination out the port, doesn't hear him. Riker turns back to Yuta, gives her a respectful nod: RIKER (cont'd) Chef... Riker exits. Yuta's small smile increases a bit. Servants don't get this sort of attention; she's not quite sure how to respond... but she likes Riker. 15 EXT. SPACE - THE ENTERPRISE (OPTICAL) Arriving in orbit around Gamma Hromi Two. 16 INT. MAIN BRIDGE Picard, Riker, Troi, Data, Wesley, Worf. WESLEY Entering standard orbit of Gamma Hromi Two, sir. DATA I am detecting life readings on the surface, sir... and several small areas of heat and carbon dioxide emission indicative of combustion. WESLEY Campfires, Data. RIKER (to Picard) It's worth a look. PICARD Make it so. 17 EXT. GATHERER CAMP - NIGHT (OPTICAL) Riker, Worf, GEORDI, and Data MATERIALIZE in the midst of a "junkyard" of high-tech equipment scattered about. STAR TREK: "Vengeance Factor" - REV. 10/10/89 - ACT ONE 13. 17 CONTINUED: Worf scans the area with his tricorder as Geordi, Data and Riker inspect the various piles of stuff. GEORDI Artonian lasers, Tonkian homing beacons... quite a collection. Data looks at a pile of scrap metal. DATA Noranium alloys. Their salvage value is low. RIKER Looks like the Gatherers aren't very discriminating in what they steal. Worf looks over the array, then announces with disgust: WORF The spoils of animals without honor. Worf lifts a tarp on another pile. WORF (cont'd) Commander. Riker, Data, and Geordi step up to examine Worf's find -- a small reactor. 18 CLOSE ON WORF frowning suddenly. He sniffs the air, then grabs Riker, Data, and Geordi, pulls them to the ground -- WORF Ambush! 19 NEW ANGLE (OPTICAL) as THREE GATHERERS (BRULL, TEMAREK, and one n.d.) -- armed with phaser rifles -- pop out from behind a ridge and take aim at the away team. (Like their Acamarian cousins, the Gatherers are muscular humanoids with a "primitive" appearance -- belied by their sophisticated weapons.) They FIRE. STAR TREK: "Vengeance Factor" - REV. 10/9/89 - ACT ONE 14. 20 ON RIKER, WORF, GEORDI, AND DATA (OPTICAL) as a PHASER BLAST just misses them. 21 WIDER (OPTICAL) Data, Riker, and Geordi scramble behind some rocks as Worf provides a BLAST of cover FIRE, then he too finds cover. 22 ON RIKER (OPTICAL) his back against a rock, and phaser in hand. DATA Rigellian phaser rifles. Not very powerful. Another BLAST scorches the rock nearby. RIKER Powerful enough... FADE OUT. END OF ACT ONE STAR TREK: "Vengeance Factor" - REV. 10/10/89 - ACT TWO 15. ACT TWO FADE IN: 23 EXT. GATHERER CAMP - NIGHT (OPTICAL) As before. The three Gatherers have positioned themselves well -- Riker, Data, and Geordi are pinned behind a cluster of equipment while Worf is behind another. Riker yells to the Gatherers: RIKER We want to talk -- A phaser BLAST from the Gatherers confirms they aren't interested in chatter. 24 NEW ANGLE (OPTICAL) as Worf moves closer to Riker, Data, and Geordi -- his adroit maneuvering sparing him from a phaser HIT. WORF Your words are wasted, Commander. (holding up his phaser) They understand only this. RIKER (convincing himself as well) We're here to establish a dialogue. A phaser bolt STREAKS OVERHEAD. Then Riker has a thought: 24A RIKER'S POV of the pile of scrap metal Data looked at earlier. 24B ON RIKER as he turns to Data. RIKER Data... noranium vaporizes at... ? STAR TREK: "Vengeance Factor" - REV. 10/10/89 - ACT TWO 16. 24B CONTINUED: DATA Two thousand three hundred fourteen degrees. Of course, noranium carbide alloys vaporize at a slightly higher temperature. Riker indicates the pile of alloys -- Worf, Data, and Geordi catch on. GEORDI Phaser setting seven ought to do it... Riker nods; all four adjust their phasers. 25 ANOTHER ANGLE (OPTICAL) as Riker, Data, Geordi, and Worf FIRE at the pile of noranium. The noranium quickly bellows huge clouds of SMOKE -- filling the area almost immediately. RIKER Now! 25A ANGLE In a quick moment, Riker gives the others sotto voce instructions, then using the smoke as cover, the four make a break for it. 26 ON THE GATHERERS (OPTICAL) trying to peer through the smoke. We hear: RIKER (O.S.) Enterprise -- four to beam up! Energize! Brull, the Gatherer leader, sneers with contempt. BRULL Cowards. Brull turns his attention to the rising smoke. He grabs a bucket of sand and pours it on the noranium. The two others Gatherers follow suit. After a beat, the smoke ceases. STAR TREK: "Vengeance Factor" - REV. 10/11/89 - ACT TWO 17. 27 ON BRULL as he breathes a sigh of relief -- his precious loot not completely lost. As the smoke clears -- 28 ANGLE ON RIKER, WORF, DATA, AND GEORDI emerging from the smoke -- phasers aimed at Brull and the two Gatherers. WORF (to Brull) Your ambushes would be more successful if you bathed more often. Brull GRUMBLES, but he knows there is nothing he or his Gatherers can do. RIKER We've brought the sovereign of Acamar... BRULL (surprised) Marouk... here? RIKER (nods) With an offer of amnesty. Brull and the other two Gatherers are curious, but suspicious. CUT TO: 29 OMITTED 30 EXT. GATHERER CAMP - NIGHT CLOSE on Yuta taking a sip of wine. WIDEN to reveal Marouk, her bodyguard, Picard, Riker, Troi, Worf, Brull, and other Gatherers (including VOLNOTH, a old man, and Temarek) sitting in a circle around a FIRE. STAR TREK: "Vengeance Factor" - REV. 10/11/89 - ACT TWO 18. 30 CONTINUED: MAROUK (O.S.) Full dispensation will be extended to all Gatherers who are willing to return to Acamar Three. After a beat, Yuta nods -- "it's okay" -- and hands the chalice to Marouk, who drinks. Brull frowns BRULL You don't trust me. MAROUK Should I? Marouk passes the chalice to Brull. BRULL Oh, but you expect me to trust you. Perhaps you just poisoned it yourself. He gruffly hands the chalice to Temarek... all this for show... BRULL Taste it. Temarek looks and says who me? Brull finally grabs his hair, and pours the wine down his throat, laughs... Marouk is furious, insulted, standing, looks to Picard... MAROUK Barbarians... this is futile... PICARD Sovereign... Rising voices upon voices -- BRULL (standing) Go home, old woman... PICARD Brull... MAROUK You people haven't changed in a hundred years. STAR TREK: "Vengeance Factor" - REV. 10/11/89 - ACT TWO 19. 30 CONTINUED: (2) BRULL You were there. You should know. PICARD Sit down. They both stop and look at Picard. PICARD We are here to talk. MAROUK It is a waste of time, Captain... they don't care how they live... BRULL And I am supposed to believe that you do care how we live? MAROUK Yes. PICARD She is here, isn't she, Brull? BRULL Perhaps you forced her... MAROUK Nobody forces me anywhere, Brull... nobody. Brull looks at her, believes it, grins, sits down. Picard looks at Marouk, she sits. BRULL (feigning disinterest) What is there for us on Acamar Three? MAROUK A life. A home. You can end your wandering, your miserable existence... BRULL Do I look miserable? Marouk's first instinct is to go back at him... but Picard looks her off. STAR TREK: "Vengeance Factor" - REV. 10/11/89 - ACT TWO 20. 30 CONTINUED: (3) MAROUK The clan wars are over, Brull. It is a past we are ashamed of. It is why you had to leave. (beat) Now it is time to come home. Brull thinks it over. Maybe it's a worthwhile offer. But being a good poker player, he keeps a gruff face as he commands: BRULL I want to talk privately with Picard and Marouk. Everyone else -- leave. The other Gatherers get to their feet. Yuta and Marouk's bodyguard look to Marouk. She nods to them -- "go." Picard indicates to Riker, Worf, and Troi that they should go, too. 30A NEW ANGLE As everyone -- including Riker, Troi, and Worf -- leave Picard, Marouk, and Brull to negotiate. Riker looks to Troi: RIKER Any insights, Counselor? TROI Brull's ready to negotiate. He wants privacy so he won't appear weak in the presence of the other Gatherers. Riker nods agreement. They look back at Picard, Marouk, and Brull in the b.g. STAR TREK: "Vengeance Factor" REV. 10/10/89 - ACT TWO 21. 30B ANOTHER ANGLE A few yards away, Volnoth passes Yuta, taking a second look at her, as if she's vaguely familiar. Yuta looks calmly back at him. Volnoth walks off. FOLLOW Yuta as she follows Volnoth. 31 NEW ANGLE as Yuta turns a corner, is out of sight of Riker and the others. She continues walking until she comes upon: 32 ANGLE ON VOLNOTH alone, warming his hands over a fire pit. YUTA (O.S.) You are of the clan Lornack. VOLNOTH (crossly) So? Volnoth looks up as Yuta steps into the firelight. He scowls. VOLNOTH (cont'd) I've seen you before. YUTA Yes. STAR TREK: "Vengeance Factor" REV. 10/10/89 - ACT TWO 22. 32 CONTINUED: VOLNOTH But it's impossible. YUTA No. Look closer. Yuta moves closer. She's absolutely calm. Volnoth squints at her, confused. YUTA (cont'd) I am Yuta -- Yuta reaches out to touch Volnoth's face -- YUTA (cont'd) -- of the clan Tralesta. 33 CLOSE ON VOLNOTH as Yuta's fingertips come in contact with his skin. It's a feather-light touch -- but Volnoth's suddenly in horrible pain. He opens his mouth to scream -- nothing comes out but a desperate GASP. 34 WIDER as Volnoth's legs give out; he collapses, writhing in pain. YUTA I am the last of my line. But my clan will outlive yours. Volnoth stiffens in agony and dies. 35 CLOSE ON YUTA looking down at the dead man. She displays neither satisfaction nor remorse... no emotion whatever. FADE OUT. END OF ACT TWO STAR TREK: "Vengeance Factor" - REV. 10/11/89 - ACT THREE 23. ACT THREE FADE IN: 36 EXT. GATHERER CAMP - NIGHT Picard, Brull and Marouk are standing. Riker returns to the edge of the group, stands by awaiting orders from Picard. BRULL (grudgingly) Marouk's offer has value... still, I'm not sure... In the b.g., Yuta rejoins the bodyguard, Riker, Troi, Worf, and the other Gatherers. PICARD (trying to pin him down) But you agree it's worth presenting to your leader. BRULL (more decisive) Chorgan is a better judge of such things... I will go to him... you will hear from me in twenty days. PICARD Brull, in twenty days, I hope to be... very far away from here. That has a couple levels of meaning... MAROUK With all due respect, Brull, I would like to make the offer to Chorgan myself. Brull grunts, well, maybe... Picard seizes it and motions for Riker and the others to join him. STAR TREK: "Vengeance Factor" - REV. 10/11/89 - ACT THREE 23A. 36 CONTINUED: PICARD We will gladly take you with us aboard the Enterprise. It will give you a chance to enjoy Federation hospitality. How many of your men do you want to accompany you? BRULL I'll come alone. If this is a trap -- MAROUK It isn't. Brull nods sourly as if he's not a hundred percent convinced. He turns to the other Gatherers: BRULL Mallon -- you'll take charge while I'm gone. If I don't return in ten days -- TEMAREK (O.S.) Brull! Everyone turns -- STAR TREK: "Vengeance Factor" - REV. 10/12/89 - ACT THREE 24. 37 ANGLE - THE SECLUDED AREA where Volnoth was killed. Temarek is leaning over the corpse of Volnoth. Brull ENTERS, followed by Picard, Riker, and Marouk. Troi, Worf, and the others approach, but keep in the b.g. 37A ON RIKER touching his insignia. RIKER Away team to Enterprise. Medical Emergency. 37B WIDER Brull looks at Riker curiously -- BRULL Volnoth was an old man. There's nothing to be done. RIKER There's a chance our doctors can do something... Brull shrugs -- "why bother?" BRULL (to Temarek) You found him? TEMAREK Yes. And there are no other members of the Lornack clan here... so I claim his possessions. BRULL (a formality) Granted. Brull turns away in indifference as Temarek starts to pull off one of Volnoth's boots. 37C MAROUK (OPTICAL) looks from Temarek stripping the corpse to Brull, can't conceal her distaste. STAR TREK: "Vengeance Factor" - REV. 10/13/89 - ACT THREE 24A. 37C CONTINUED: MAROUK Have you no respect for the dead? BRULL What's there to respect about a corpse? Marouk looks helplessly to Picard -- how can you deal with such barbarians? She walks away. Beverly MATERIALIZES. Moves quickly to scan the body... Riker has to push Temarak, who is stripping the corpse, out of the way. She shakes her head. BEVERLY He's been dead too long. RIKER How? BEVERLY Cardiac arrest... But there's a look, an edge to her voice... she stands and Temerek goes back at the body... Riker moves with out of earshot of the others... RIKER You don't sound convinced. BEVERLY No, it was a heart attack, all right. But I can't figure out what caused it. Cardiac muscle is strong... no sign of arterial occlusion... Off Riker's curiosity... 37D PICARD AND BRULL (OPTICAL) PICARD Is there anything you need to bring with you, Brull? BRULL Like what? PICARD Anything... a change of clothes, perhaps... STAR TREK: "Vengeance Factor" - REV. 10/12/89 - ACT THREE 25. 37D CONTINUED: BRULL No, I just changed into these... recently. PICARD Very well then... (keys insignia) Picard to Enterprise... two... BRULL My quarters are to be just as big as hers... PICARD (acknowledges, naturally) Two to beam up... As they DEMATERIALIZE... STAR TREK: "Vengeance Factor" - REV. 10/13/89 - ACT THREE 25A. 38 EXT. SPACE - THE ENTERPRISE (OPTICAL) Orbiting Gamma Hromi Two. 39 INT. MAIN BRIDGE Picard, Riker, Troi, Data, Wesley, Worf. Brull ENTERS, escorted by Worf. All eyes are on Brull, who in turn eyes the crew with suspicion and curiosity. STAR TREK: "Vengeance Factor" - REV. 10/5/89 - ACT THREE 26. 39 CONTINUED: PICARD Brull -- show Mister Crusher the course to plot. As Picard indicates Wesley, Brull reacts: BRULL A child? PICARD (pointedly) That "child" is one of the finest ensigns under my command. He also happens to pilot this ship. BRULL That does not inspire my confidence. But if you want me to show him, I'll show him. 40 NEW ANGLE as Brull crosses to helm, looks over Wesley's shoulder. Wesley indicates the panel. WESLEY This is our present position. BRULL Then set a heading of three-four- three mark seven-two. WESLEY That'll take us through the center of an asteroid belt. BRULL What's the matter -- can't you fly your way around a couple of rocks? WESLEY (mildly) Sure I can. But if we take this heading... (punches it in) (MORE) STAR TREK: "Vengeance Factor" REV. 10/9/89 - ACT THREE 27. 40 CONTINUED: WESLEY (Cont'd) ... we avoid the belt entirely, and we only lose twelve point one minutes at warp seven. BRULL Have it your way. And Brull marches away from the helm. 41 OMITTED 42 INT. TEN-FORWARD (OPTICAL) Relaxing at a table are Picard and Marouk, with Yuta and the bodyguard close by. Alone at a secluded table in b.g. is Wesley, doing homework on a PADD. He's got his feet up, has a goodly supply of snack food at hand (can't study without munchies). Yuta pours a bit more Acamarian brandy for Marouk and Picard. MAROUK For centuries, my planet was in chaos. Loyalty to one's clan was absolute, and the slightest injury to one member demanded violent retaliation. PICARD And these blood feuds could last for decades? MAROUK (acknowledges) The obsession for vengeance would be passed on from generation to generation. And with each act of retribution, the violence would escalate... STAR TREK: "Vengeance Factor" REV. 10/9/89 - ACT THREE 28. 42 CONTINUED: PICARD It's not unlike the history of my own planet, Marouk. In b.g., Riker and Troi ENTER, cross to a table. Yuta sees, politely approaches Marouk: YUTA Your pardon, Sovereign; may I be excused briefly? Commander Riker requested I prepare him an Acamarian dish. MAROUK Of course, Yuta. Yuta moves off, EXITS -- just as Brull ENTERS. Brull crosses toward the bar. 42A ANGLE ON THE BAR as a bartender hands Brull a drink. Brull takes a slug, looks around, sees Wesley in the corner, starts toward him. 43 ANOTHER ANGLE As Brull steps up to Wesley's table, sits down, helps himself to some of Wesley's snacks. Wesley's taken aback, but tries to be polite. BRULL What are you doing? STAR TREK: "Vengeance Factor" REV. 10/9/89 - ACT THREE 29. 43 CONTINUED: WESLEY My studies. Brull picks the PADD out of Wesley's hands, inspects it. It's covered with complex equations. BRULL What is this? WESLEY Math. BRULL I can see that. What's it mean? WESLEY It's the locally Euclidean metrization of a k-fold contravariant Riemannian tensor field. Brull nods as if he knows what Wesley's talking about. BRULL You good at it? Wesley shrugs noncommittally. He's getting impatient with Brull. Brull picks up on it: BRULL (cont'd) You don't like me. WESLEY I didn't say -- BRULL (cutting him) That's no problem. I have many friends that don't like me. (a beat) What do you know about me? STAR TREK: "Vengeance Factor" REV. 10/9/89 - ACT THREE 30. 43 CONTINUED: (2) WESLEY You're a thief. BRULL I do it to survive -- not because I enjoy it. Brull looks challengingly at Wesley. Wesley, not wanting to get into an argument, avoids Brull's gaze. BRULL (cont'd) And we Gatherers value freedom. We do as we want and answer to no creature. WESLEY (curious) But you're helping Sovereign Marouk to change all that... STAR TREK: "Vengeance Factor" REV. 10/9/89 - ACT THREE 31. 43 CONTINUED: (3) BRULL Maybe I just want something better... for me, and for my children. Wesley's surprised. Brull doesn't exactly look like a father figure. WESLEY You have children? BRULL (nods) Two sons. One's almost your age. (a beat) He's not so good at math. Wesley smiles; maybe this guy isn't such a bad guy. 43A ANGLE ON RIKER AND TROI in quiet conversation. Yuta steps up, carrying a tray with a covered plate. Riker smiles. RIKER Parthus a la Yuta? Yuta nods modestly. YUTA With the help of one of your food stations. Yuta sets the tray on a table, unveils the dish, hands forks to Riker and Troi. They taste the dish and are impressed. TROI It's wonderful. STAR TREK: "Vengeance Factor" REV. 10/9/89 - ACT THREE 32. 43A CONTINUED: RIKER Truly excellent. YUTA Thank you. RIKER Will you join us? YUTA I don't want to intrude... Troi gets to her feet, offers Yuta her chair. TROI Not at all; I was just about to leave. Please -- sit down. Yuta takes Troi's seat. Troi smiles a knowing smile at Riker, then EXITS. Riker takes another forkful. RIKER It really is delicious. YUTA I am glad it pleases you, Commander. RIKER I'm not your commander. My name is William. YUTA I will call you William if you prefer. RIKER I do. You say "Commander" to me the same way you say "Sovereign" to Marouk. YUTA (understands) As a servant. Riker nods as he takes another bite. STAR TREK: "Vengeance Factor" REV. 10/9/89 - ACT THREE 33. 43A CONTINUED: (2) YUTA (cont'd) You're an excellent commander, but you'd make a poor sovereign. RIKER Why's that? Not that I disagree... YUTA You're not comfortable with servants. RIKER No. I prefer the company of equals. YUTA So you treat me as an equal. RIKER And you're not comfortable with that? YUTA I'm not used to it. I've always been a servant. I'm not complaining -- the sovereign treats me well. I have all that I could want. RIKER What about freedom? A long beat. Yuta's expression turns melancholy, fatalistic. YUTA I can never have that. RIKER You're the property of the sovereign? YUTA No. I'm not her slave. I can leave whenever I wish. RIKER (a guess) But you have no place to go? STAR TREK: "Vengeance Factor" REV. 10/9/89 - ACT THREE 34. 43A CONTINUED: (3) YUTA Just the opposite. My path is all too clear. Yuta falls silent. Riker attempts to lighten the moment: RIKER Yuta, you're an excellent cook, but you talk in riddles. Yuta smiles without humor. YUTA I've never been very good at conversation. Yuta looks over at Marouk in the b.g. Marouk's smiling as she watches Yuta. It makes Yuta self-conscious. YUTA (cont'd) I think the sovereign wants me to return. Enjoy the Parthus. Yuta crosses back to Marouk's table. Riker watches her go, then returns to his meal. After a beat, his communicator BEEPS. BEVERLY'S COM VOICE Sickbay to Commander Riker. I've discovered something interesting, Will... RIKER I'll be right there... STAR TREK: "Vengeance Factor" REV. 10/9/89 - ACT THREE 35. 44 OMITTED 44A INT. SICKBAY Beverly is frowning with concentration as she works at a computer station. Riker ENTERS. RIKER Doctor, you're scowling. BEVERLY I'm thinking. RIKER And? BEVERLY The old Gatherer on the planet? I've found what caused his heart attack. Beverly indicates the computer monitor. BEVERLY (cont'd) The medical tricorder almost missed it, but there was a microvirus in his body... it attached to parasympathetic nerves and acted as a cholinesterase inhibitor, blocking autonomic nerve impulses. STAR TREK: "Vengeance Factor" - REV. 10/3/89 - ACT THREE 36. 44A CONTINUED: RIKER And that stopped his heart? BEVERLY (nods) But here's the interesting part. The microvirus will only attach to cells which contain a very specific DNA sequence. RIKER How specific? BEVERLY Without knowing more about their genetic makeup, I can't be sure... but my guess is, this virus would only kill one Acamarian in a million. Riker WHISTLES. RIKER That's an awfully single-minded bug. BEVERLY Too single-minded. I can't believe it's a naturally occurring virus. Riker sees where this is leading: RIKER Meaning somebody engineered it... BEVERLY Meaning Volnoth was murdered. Riker ponders this gravely as we: 45 thru OMITTED 47 FADE OUT. END OF ACT THREE STAR TREK: "Vengeance Factor" - REV. 10/9/89 - ACT FOUR 37. ACT FOUR FADE IN: A47A EXT. SPACE - THE ENTERPRISE (OPTICAL) Coming out of warp. 47A INT. RIKER'S QUARTERS (FORMERLY SCENE 52) Riker's alone, in the midst of a conversation with Data who's on the bridge. DATA'S COM VOICE Sir, Acamar Three has agreed to your request for access to its databases. They are now transmitting them to our computer over subspace link. RIKER Good. Notify Doctor Crusher when Acamar's medical database is online. Riker out. SOUND of DOOR CHIME. RIKER (cont'd) Come in. Yuta ENTERS, stops just inside the door. YUTA I'm disturbing you. RIKER Not at all. Yuta steps forward. The door closes. YUTA As the sovereign has no further need of my services this evening, she suggested I might spend some time with you. RIKER What a charming suggestion... STAR TREK: "Vengeance Factor" - REV. 10/9/89 - ACT FOUR 38. 47A CONTINUED: YUTA She appreciates the... affection ... you have shown me. RIKER Was it so obvious... YUTA (smiles gently) Yes. RIKER (joking) Well, I've already dined... but, maybe you know a good Acamarian dessert recipe. Yuta leans forward and kisses Riker. YUTA Does that please you? He answers by kissing her back. As they break, as he holds her, whispering to him... YUTA Tell me what you want, William. I will do anything you wish... Riker takes pause at the servitude sound of that... looks at her... still intimate -- RIKER You've got the night off, remember? YUTA I don't understand. Riker's more uncomfortable now... she notices. YUTA You don't want me to give you pleasure? RIKER (pulling away) Not as a servant. I told you... I prefer equals. STAR TREK: "Vengeance Factor" - REV. 10/9/89 - ACT FOUR 39. 47A CONTINUED: (3) YUTA Even in matters of love? RIKER Especially in matters of love. YUTA (beat) I've offended you. RIKER No. He takes her hand. RIKER I only want to make you as happy as you want to make me. You're entitled to that... She looks at him, then draws completely away. Sighs. YUTA No. I'm not. RIKER (reacts) Yuta... YUTA I do not feel pleasure. Or passion. I haven't been able to... for a long time. RIKER I don't know who did this to you or why... but it can change. YUTA (regret) I wish it could. Tonight most of all. (beat) I'm sorry... He takes her arm as she starts to leave... but then the insistent sound of the RED ALERT KLAXON. He looks at her... wishing they could finish the conversation... but she pulls away and leaves as... the ship is ROCKED by a phaser hit and Riker EXITS on the double. STAR TREK: "Vengeance Factor" - REV. 10/6/89 - ACT FOUR 39A. 48 INT. MAIN BRIDGE Picard, Troi, Data, Wesley, and Worf are at their stations. Brull ENTERS from the aft turbolift, occupied by a security officer, looks at the viewscreen. PICARD Your people have provided a warm welcome. BRULL That's Chorgan's ship. STAR TREK: "Vengeance Factor" - REV. 10/6/89 - ACT FOUR 40. A48A ANGLE ON MAIN VIEWER (OPTICAL) On the viewscreen, a small Gatherer ship FIRES at us. B48A ON PICARD As the HIT shakes the ship. WORF Shields holding. PICARD (indicating Worf's station) Worf -- contact Chorgan and tell him Brull has brought us here to talk. Worf opens a channel as Brull crosses to Worf's station. Riker ENTERS from the turbolift as yet another HIT shakes the ship. WORF Chorgan's not responding. A third HIT. Picard's patience is waning. PICARD Mister Worf, can we knock out their shields without seriously damaging their ship? WORF I believe we can, sir. PICARD Prepare phasers and open channel... Worf works his station. WORF Phasers locked. Channel open, Captain. PICARD This is Jean-Luc Picard... Interrupted by another HIT. Picard's patience is exhausted: STAR TREK: "Vengeance Factor" - REV. 10/6/89 - ACT FOUR 40A. B48A CONTINUED: PICARD (to himself) Let's focus their attention. (to Worf) Fire. 48A EXT. SPACE - THE ENTERPRISE (OPTICAL) The Enterprise's phasers BLAST away, making a direct HIT on the Gatherer ship's shields. 48B INT. MAIN BRIDGE As before. STAR TREK: "Vengeance Factor" - REV. 10/6/89 - ACT FOUR 41. 48B CONTINUED: WORF Their forward shields are inoperative. PICARD Well done, Lieutenant. Brull speaks from Worf's station: WORF They're hailing us, sir. PICARD That's better. (to Worf) On screen. 49 ANGLE ON VIEWSCREEN (OPTICAL) as the image of CHORGAN fills the screen. Like all Gatherers, Chorgan has a brutish, rough presence --but he also has an indisputable air of command... CHORGAN Brull -- you traitor! You led them here to destroy me -- PICARD Chorgan, if I had wanted you destroyed, you wouldn't be talking now. STAR TREK: "Vengeance Factor" - REV. 10/6/89 - ACT FOUR 42. 49 CONTINUED: Enough of the stick -- now for the carrot. PICARD (cont'd) Obviously, I want something else. CHORGAN And what is that? PICARD I have on board Sovereign Marouk of Acamar Three. I want you to hear what she and Brull have to say. BRULL It's worth listening to her, Chorgan. CHORGAN I don't wish to hear either of you. PICARD (with finality) You have no choice. Prepare to receive us -- we're coming aboard your ship. Picard out. Picard motions to Worf and the image of Chorgan disappears from the screen, replaced by the Gatherer ship in the starfield. PICARD (cont'd) Cancel Red Alert. Have Sovereign Marouk meet me in Transporter Three. WORF Aye, sir. Riker approaches the captain. RIKER You're going alone, Captain? PICARD The danger is minimal, Number One. Chorgan's not likely to do anything rash while the Enterprise's phasers are trained upon his ship. STAR TREK: "Vengeance Factor" - REV. 10/6/89 - ACT FOUR 42A. 49 CONTINUED: (2) RIKER It's still a risk. PICARD For these negotiations to succeed, I must be a mediator -- not an enforcer. STAR TREK: "Vengeance Factor" - REV. 10/11/89 - ACT FOUR 43. 49 CONTINUED: (3) Picard leads Brull to the turbolift. PICARD (cont'd) You have the bridge, Number One. Picard and Brull EXIT. 50 OMITTED 51 EXT. SPACE - THE ENTERPRISE (OPTICAL) motionless relative to the small Gatherer ship. 52 OMITTED 53 INT. GATHERER SHIP Chorgan sits behind a large table, his Gatherer guard standing protectively behind him. There are two empty seats on the other side of the table. Marouk, her bodyguard, Yuta, and Picard are led in by Brull. Picard sets the tone with: PICARD Chorgan. May I introduce Sovereign Marouk. The two leaders acknowledge each other with a slight nod. Chorgan wants to control the meeting. CHORGAN You may sit. Marouk waits for her bodyguard to pull the chair for her, then sits as if she owned the chair. Picard waits for her to sit, then takes the other chair. Brull stands to one side while Yuta, carrying a small bag, remains in the b.g. PICARD (to Chorgan) I think you will find Marouk's proposal -- CHORGAN You know, Picard -- I could take you prisoner. STAR TREK: "Vengeance Factor" - REV. 10/12/89 - ACT FOUR 44. 53 CONTINUED: Picard looks at him evenly, is determined to get on with the business at hand. Chorgan smiles, backing down. CHORGAN Don't worry, I've no intention of doing so. You've gone to a lot of trouble to get here -- I'm curious why. Picard was never worried. Shrewdly, he allows Chorgan to save face: PICARD Then let's proceed. Marouk smiles, having not missed a beat of the dynamics. MAROUK Quite simply, I propose amnesty for every Gatherer... CHORGAN Amnesty. You mean slavery. BRULL Chorgan, if you want to know what I think... CHORGAN (interrupting) I don't. (to Marouk) Say what you came to say. But I tell you right now I doubt that I'll believe it. MAROUK (beat) I didn't believe this very persuasive Federation captain when he suggested that we could reconcile our differences. But I am convinced now it is the right thing not just for you, but for us too. We need you back. And Picard looks at Marouk with appreciation... as Chorgan grumps. STAR TREK: "Vengeance Factor" - REV. 10/12/89 - ACT FOUR 44A. 53 CONTINUED: (2) Marouk turns, indicates Yuta: 53A ANGLE ON YUTA quietly opening her bag, withdrawing a decanter of brandy, and moving toward Chorgan. MAROUK I've brought some Acamarian brandy... I'm sure it's been a long time... 53B NEW ANGLE Chorgan barely looks at Yuta and the brandy, waves her off rudely. Yuta patiently returns to her place near Marouk. There will be other opportunities. CHORGAN You have spent a century hunting us down -- PICARD She's trying to put an end to that. CHORGAN By luring us back and putting us in prisons. MAROUK No -- by accepting you back as free men. CHORGAN (sarcastic) And will you feed and clothe us, too? MAROUK (sharply) No, of course I won't! (gaining control) What I will do is give you the means to feed and clothe yourselves. We've already set aside land you can... CHORGAN Do we look like farmers to you? STAR TREK: "Vengeance Factor" - REV. 10/12/89 - ACT FOUR 45. 53B CONTINUED: MAROUK Then don't farm. Use the land as you wish. It is yours. And the moment you set foot on it, you'll be better off than you are today. You won't be running any longer... CHORGAN (beat) We would need autonomy... MAROUK Autonomy... 53BA PICARD breaking in... PICARD Let us acknowledge, Sovereign, that Chorgan appears willing to discuss your offer... 53C ON YUTA In the b.g., biding her time. MAROUK (O.S.) There are many levels of autonomy, certainly your region would have home rights... CHORGAN (O.S.) Those rights will be spelled out before I agree to anything... CUT TO: STAR TREK: "Vengeance Factor" - REV. 10/6/89 - ACT FOUR 46. 54 thru OMITTED 55 55A INT. MAIN BRIDGE Riker, Troi, Data, Worf, supernumeraries. Riker is with Data at an aft station, scanning databases. Text and pictures FLASH over the monitor. DATA Commander, I'm afraid the only entry on Volnoth in the Acamarian database is a birth record. RIKER (studying the screen) Probably one of the last of the Gatherers to be born on their planet. Beverly ENTERS... moves to the aft station beside Data. BEVERLY I've been digging through the medical database from Acamar Three for hours and I've found another victim of the microvirus that killed Volnoth. But just one. Riker joins her as she punches up the record. Text appears on a monitor. BEVERLY Fifty-three years ago. A Gatherer named Penthor-Mul. Riker looks it over... RIKER Data -- got anything in your files on this Penthor-Mul? Data running a check... reading -- DATA Yes. He was captured while leading a Gatherer raid on an Acamarian outpost. He died of a heart attack before his trial ended. (reacts) Commander, he was a member of the Lornack Clan. STAR TREK: "Vengeance Factor" - REV. 10/6/89 - ACT FOUR 47. 55A CONTINUED: Riker reacts. RIKER (realizing) Display Volnoth's birth record again. Data calls it up again on the viewer... As she sees it... BEVERLY (reacts) Lornack... the same clan.... RIKER The only two recorded deaths from this microvirus... members of the same clan... what does that tell us, Doctor? BEVERLY If these microbes were engineered for murder, I'd say somebody's going after the whole family. DATA (noting new information) Commander, Chorgan, the present leader of the Gatherers, is also from the Lornack clan. Beverly and Riker react. RIKER (to Data) I want to know just how this clan was involved in the Acamarian blood feuds... any clues to their enemies you can find... (to Beverly) How could this virus be transmitted? BEVERLY More ways than I can count. And it's perfectly safe to the carrier... as long as he doesn't have the same DNA patterns. RIKER Tailor made for their victims... STAR TREK: "Vengeance Factor" - REV. 10/6/89 - ACT FOUR 47A. 55A CONTINUED: (2) Data finds what he's looking for... DATA Sir, eighty years ago, the Lornacks massacred a rival clan, the Tralestas. It ended a feud that had lasted for two hundred years. RIKER Ended it? STAR TREK: "Vengeance Factor" - REV. 10/6/89 - ACT FOUR 48. 55A CONTINUED: (3) DATA According to these records, there were no survivors. The Tralesta clan was annihilated. BEVERLY Something tells me they may not have all been wiped out. RIKER There's got to be a missing link here... Data continues his scan... whirring through pictures and text... BEVERLY Computer, any members of the Acamarian delegation in the Tralesta clan? COMPUTER Clan affiliation is not within provided records. Data halts the scan. DATA Commander, I believe I have found a correlation between the two deaths... your "missing link" ... Riker and Beverly look at Data's monitor... 55B INSERT - THE MONITOR SCREEN (OPTICAL) A still photo of the Gatherer PENTHOR and a few Acamarians leaving the courthouse. Half hidden by one of the Acamarians is a familiar face. DATA (O.S.) That is Penthor-Mul being led from his trial. RIKER I don't see the connection... DATA Behind him to the left, sir... STAR TREK: "Vengeance Factor" - REV. 10/6/89 - ACT FOUR 49. 55B CONTINUED: RIKER Computer, scan left and magnify. The photo magnifies until the half-hidden face fills the screen. It's a young woman's face. 55C RIKER reacts, beginning to suspect, gives Data a look... DATA The computer can extrapolate and reconstruct the rest of the face, sir. RIKER (tight) Do it. 55D INSERT - THE MONITOR SCREEN (OPTICAL) as the computer "draws in" the other half of the face... and it's plain now that face is Yuta's. Her hair is a different color and style -- but there's no mistaking her. 55E RIKER reacts. BEVERLY But the photograph was taken over fifty years ago. RIKER Fifty-three years... and she hasn't aged a day. 56 thru OMITTED 58 FADE OUT. END OF ACT FOUR STAR TREK: "Vengeance Factor" - REV. 10/13/89 - ACT FIVE 50. ACT FIVE FADE IN: 59 thru OMITTED 64 65 INT. GATHERER SHIP Starting on Yuta who stands nearby as the negotiations continue... pulling back to reveal Marouk at one end of the table, and then on the far opposite side, Chorgan with his Gatherer guard and Brull standing behind him. Picard is at the middle of the table. The discussion is heated: MAROUK Three seats on the ruling council? CHORGAN If we're going to be subject to your laws, we want a part in making them. MAROUK I agree you're entitled to representation... but not on the ruling council. CHORGAN Unacceptable. The real power is in the council. You're trying to shut us out already -- MAROUK No -- you're trying to take too much! No group has three seats on the council. CHORGAN (heating up) I don't care what others have -- MAROUK (exploding) Yes -- you only care about what you can take. Picard steps in to cool things down: STAR TREK: "Vengeance Factor" - REV. 10/13/89 - ACT FIVE 51. 65 CONTINUED: PICARD Sovereign -- were the situation reversed, you would be demanding the same levels of representation. Marouk cools down. MAROUK You're right, Captain. (to Chorgan) I apologize for my temper. Chorgan, still fuming, forces a nod. PICARD Perhaps a short pause would be helpful. CHORGAN I agree. (gruffly trying to make amends) Maybe a taste of that brandy... MAROUK Excellent thought. Yuta... 65A ANGLE ON YUTA obediently pours brandy. Picard takes a conversational tone, both to give the combatants a respite and to melt some of the ice that still exists between them: PICARD (O.S.) It's quite remarkable how much alike the two of you actually are... MAROUK (O.S.) CHORGAN (O.S.) (no way) Foolishness... Really, Captain... PICARD (O.S.) I'm being quite honest... both able negotiators... strong leaders. STAR TREK: "Vengeance Factor" - REV. 10/13/89 - ACT FIVE 52. 65A CONTINUED: BRULL We don't obey weak leaders. Chorgan glances sharply at Brull... CHORGAN We have nothing at all in common... we have agreed to nothing... Yuta hands a glass of brandy to Marouk, starts toward Chorgan with another glass. PICARD Wrong, Chorgan... we've agreed to have some brandy together. Chorgan smiles as Yuta moves within striking distance of Chorgan. 66 NEW ANGLE (OPTICAL) Riker MATERIALIZES, phaser in hand. Everyone's astounded. The Gatherer guard goes for his phaser rifle. Riker FIRES, stunning the guard. Chorgan, bellowing, starts to get to his feet. CHORGAN Treachery! A Federation trap -- RIKER Don't move! Riker aims the phaser at Chorgan, who freezes, glares at Riker. The guard is already starting to shake off the effects of the stun. Riker and Picard exchange a look. PICARD Chorgan, I assure you Commander Riker has a good reason for his actions... (beat) ... you do, Number One? Everyone's motionless -- including Yuta, who's a yard behind Chorgan. STAR TREK: "Vengeance Factor" - REV. 10/13/89 - ACT FIVE 53. 66 CONTINUED: RIKER Yuta. Move away from Chorgan. Yuta looks unemotionally at Riker, doesn't move. RIKER (cont'd) Do it. YUTA Why? RIKER Because of a man you once knew... Penthor-Mul. Reactions. CHORGAN Penthar-Mul? How do you know Penthar-Mul? RIKER He was murdered fifty years ago... CHORGAN Murdered... ? That's not so... he died of... RIKER He was killed just as Volnoth was... by a deadly virus designed to attack your clan... CHORGAN What do you mean? Designed by whom... ? RIKER Tell him, Yuta... YUTA I don't understand. RIKER You were with Penthor-Mul when he died... YUTA If it was fifty years ago... how could I... STAR TREK: "Vengeance Factor" - REV. 10/13/89 - ACT FIVE 54. 66 CONTINUED: (2) RIKER I know, Yuta... Chorgan starts to make a move. Yuta makes a small move toward Chorgan -- RIKER Stop! Chorgan -- keep perfectly still. Your life is in danger. Shocked reactions from everyone but Yuta. RIKER (cont'd) Yuta -- step back. YUTA William, this is not your concern. RIKER It is now. You're about to commit murder. Yuta realizes Riker's on to her and there's no point in pretending further. YUTA (very calm) It isn't murder. It's justice. CHORGAN Who are you? YUTA Yuta... of the clan Tralesta. CHORGAN There are no more Tralestas. 67 ANOTHER ANGLE Chorgan and Marouk are stunned. Yuta calmly explains: YUTA Five survived the last Lornack raid... but on that day a century ago, my life ended and my search began. I was the one chosen... transformed... my cells were altered... my aging slowed... enough to finish my task. STAR TREK: "Vengeance Factor" - REV. 10/13/89 - ACT FIVE 55. 67 CONTINUED: RIKER Murdering innocent people -- is that your task? YUTA He's not innocent. He's a Lornack. MAROUK You used me in order to get to the last few you couldn't reach. YUTA Yes, Sovereign. CHORGAN You'll never leave this ship. If I don't kill you myself, my men will. YUTA You are the last. Once you're dead, what happens to me doesn't matter. RIKER Yuta... the wars are over. YUTA You cannot understand... RIKER No, I can't. You're right. Because I've seen the part of you that regrets what you have become... Yuta, listen to me... you don't have to do this any more. 68 ON YUTA as the first signs of regret cross her face. STAR TREK: "Vengeance Factor" - REV. 10/12/89 - ACT FIVE 56. 68 CONTINUED: YUTA I have no choice. RIKER You do... And now the regret really shows through on Yuta's face. Haltingly, she extends a hand in Riker's direction -- YUTA William... I -- Riker lowers the phaser, extends his other hand toward Yuta -- "come on... " Yuta pauses -- YUTA (cont'd) I'm... sorry. 69 NEW ANGLE (OPTICAL) as Yuta whirls, reaches to touch Chorgan -- and Riker FIRES. The stun charge shakes Yuta up -- but she remains conscious, recovers her footing. Riker changes the phaser setting, FIRES again. It knocks Yuta back. But she keeps coming. Riker has no choice. He adjusts the phaser -- RIKER Don't -- Yuta reaches for Chorgan again -- And Riker FIRES. Setting eight. Vaporize. And Yuta's gone. 70 WIDER Silence. No one moves. Slowly, Chorgan stands. CHORGAN Commander, I'm in your debt... STAR TREK: "Vengeance Factor" - REV. 10/13/89 - ACT FIVE 57. 71 CLOSE ON RIKER His haunted expression tells us he hasn't heard a word of Chorgan's... 72 thru OMITTED 73 74 INT. TEN-FORWARD Riker's sitting alone at the bar, gazing into an untouched drink in front of him. Picard ENTERS. takes a beat to study him, then proceeds to sit down next to him. After a beat, Riker glances up, knows why the captain is there, nods an acknowledgement... there's not a lot of eye contact. PICARD New orders from Starfleet. Riker cocks his brow. PICARD The rendezvous with the Goddard has been postponed. RIKER And in the meantime? PICARD Starbase three four three. We're to take on medical supplies for the Alpha Leonis system. RIKER Sounds pretty routine. PICARD With the Gatherer truce in effect, it should be. (a beat) We won't require a full ship's complement. I'm going to extend shore leave on the starbase to anyone who wants it. Riker gives Picard a long look, appreciating what Picard's taking pains not to say... RIKER I'll pass that along to the crew, Captain. Picard nods, takes his leave of Riker, EXITS. STAR TREK: "Vengeance Factor" - REV. 10/13/89 - ACT FIVE 58. 75 ON RIKER (OPTICAL) a beat as he stands, crosses to a food slot. RIKER Parthus. A la Yuta. As the dish MATERIALIZES, we: FADE OUT. END OF ACT FIVE THE END STAR TREK: THE NEXT GENERATION "The Defector" (f.k.a. "A Question of Trust") #40273-158 Written by Ronald D. Moore Directed by Robert Scheerer THE WRITING CREDITS MAY NOT BE FINAL AND SHOULD NOT BE USED FOR PUBLICITY OR ADVERTISING PURPOSES WITHOUT FIRST CHECKING WITH THE TELEVISION LEGAL DEPARTMENT. Copyright 1989 Paramount Pictures Corporation. All Rights Reserved. This script is not for publication or reproduction. No one is authorized to dispose of same. If lost or destroyed, please notify the Script Department. REVISED FINAL DRAFT OCTOBER 16, 1989 STAR TREK: "The Defector" - 10/16/89 - CAST STAR TREK: THE NEXT GENERATION "The Defector" CAST PICARD Romulans RIKER SETAL/ADMIRAL JAROK DATA TOMALAK BEVERLY TROI GEORDI WORF COMPUTER VOICE JOHN BATES MICHAEL WILLIAMS ADMIRAL HADEN (STARFLEET) Non-Speaking TWO SECURITY OFFICERS SUPERNUMERARIES STAR TREK: "The Defector" - 10/16/89 - SETS STAR TREK: THE NEXT GENERATION "The Defector" SETS INTERIORS EXTERIORS USS ENTERPRISE USS ENTERPRISE MAIN BRIDGE CAPTAIN'S READY ROOM ROMULAN SCOUT SHIP OBSERVATION LOUNGE ENGINEERING 3 ROMULAN WARBIRDS TRANSPORTER ROOM GUEST QUARTERS 3 KLINGON SHIPS DEBRIEFING ROOM RELAXATION CENTER SICKBAY TEN-FORWARD CORRIDOR (NEAR HOLODECK) HOLODECK ENGLISH CAMP ROMULAN PLANET EMPTY HOLODECK ROMULAN SCOUT SHIP ROMULAN WARBIRD CAPTAIN'S READY ROOM STAR TREK: "The Defector" - 10/16/89 - PRONUNCIATION STAR TREK: THE NEXT GENERATION "The Defector" PRONUNCIATION GUIDE SETAL see-TALL JAROK JAH-rock TOMALAK TOM-uh-lack STAR TREK: "The Defector" - REV. 10/20/89 - TEASER 1. STAR TREK: THE NEXT GENERATION "The Defector" TEASER FADE IN: 1 EXT. THE ENGLISH CAMP AT AGINCOURT - NIGHT (HOLODECK) Two soldiers: JOHN BATES and MICHAEL WILLIAMS.. WILLIAMS Brother John Bates, is not that the morning which breaks yonder? BATES I think it be. But we have no great cause to desire the approach of the day. WILLIAMS Who goes there? King Henry ENTERS... his back to us... so we cannot see who is playing him... DATA (KING HENRY) A friend. WILLIAMS Under what captain serve you? DATA (KING HENRY) Under Sir Thomas Erpingham. WILLIAMS I pray you, what thinks he of our estate? Reveal DATA... DATA (KING HENRY) Even as men wrecked upon a sand, that look to be washed off the next tide. BATES He hath not told his thought to the king? STAR TREK: "The Defector" - REV. 10/20/89 - TEASER 2. 1 CONTINUED: DATA (KING HENRY) No, nor it is not meet he should. For though I speak it to you, I think the king is but a man, as I am. The violet smells to him as it doth to me, in his nakedness he appears but a man. Therefore, his fears, out of doubt, be of the same relish as ours are. Yet, no man should possess him with any appearance of fear, lest he, by showing it, should dishearten his army. 2 ANGLE PICARD (OPTICAL) observing... delighted... BATES He may show what outward courage he will, but I believe, as cold a night as 'tis, he could wish himself in Thames up to the neck. DATA (KING HENRY) Methinks I could not die anywhere so contented as in the king's company, his cause being just and his quarrel honorable. WILLIAMS That's more than we know. BATES Aye, or more than we should seek after. If his cause be wrong, our obedience to the king wipes the crime of it out of us. STAR TREK: "The Defector" - REV. 10/20/89 - TEASER 2A. 2 CONTINUED: WILLIAMS But if the cause be not good, the king himself hath a heavy reckoning to make when all those legs and arms and heads chopped off in a battle shall join together at the latter day and cry all "We died at such a place" -- some swearing, some crying for a surgeon, some upon their wives left poor behind them. I am afeared there are few die well that die in a battle. DATA (KING HENRY) The king is not bound to answer the particular endings of his soldiers, the father of his son, nor the master of his servant. PICARD Delightful... you're getting better and better, Data... Stepping out of character... DATA Freeze program. The characters freeze. DATA (continuing) Thank you, sir. I plan to study the performances of Olivier, Branagh, Shapiro, Kullnark... PICARD (frowns) Data, you are here to learn about the human condition... and there's no better way than embracing Shakespeare... but you must discover it through your own performance, not by imitating... STAR TREK: "The Defector" - REV. 10/19/89 - TEASER 3. 2 CONTINUED: (2) RIKER'S COM VOICE Riker to Picard... PICARD Yes, Number One. RIKER'S COM VOICE Sensors are picking up an unidentified craft in the Neutral Zone... It's heading toward Federation space... PICARD On our way... Picard out. We'll get to the next act later, Data... computer, end program. The other characters DISAPPEAR and shortly thereafter, the set disappears, too... Data begins to take off his costume. DATA It is interesting that a king could pass as a commoner, but why should he wish to? If he is the leader... should he not be leading... ? 3 ANGLE The door slides open and they EXIT... PICARD But listen to what Shakespeare is telling you about the man, Data... a king who has a true feeling for his soldiers must share their fears on the day of battle. 3A INT. CORRIDOR Walking... perhaps a passerby reacts to Data's costume... DATA Sir, will I be able to schedule a performance for the crew in the near future? STAR TREK: "The Defector" - REV. 10/19/89 - TEASER 3A. 3A CONTINUED: PICARD Let's... not rush it, shall we... ? As they move away... 4 INT. MAIN BRIDGE RIKER at an aft station. WORF at tactical. SUPERNUMERARIES at Ops and Conn. Picard ENTERS the bridge. Monitors at the stations show a SCHEMATIC DISPLAY of the Neutral Zone. RIKER Outpost Sierra Six confirms our readings, sir. They identify it as a Romulan scout ship... bearing two-seven-zero mark one-four. STAR TREK: "The Defector" - REV. 10/16/89 - TEASER 4. 5 CLOSER ON ONE MONITOR (OPTICAL) As Picard, Riker and Data huddle over it... The Enterprise is clearly labeled and shown as a steady dot, and a flashing point of light in the Zone shows the Romulan vessel. PICARD A scout ship? Curious. What would bring a scout ship into the Neutral Zone? WORF Shall we transmit a warning to withdraw, sir... ? A beat. Picard studies the... 6 FLASHING DOT - CU (OPTICAL) 7 RESUME MAIN BRIDGE (OPTICAL) PICARD Open hailing frequencies. WORF Aye, sir. (stops and looks up in surprise) Captain, the Romulan is hailing us. PICARD Visual... ? WORF Not within range yet... PICARD Open channel... Much interference, static... SETAL'S COM VOICE Federation ship... do you read... I require urgent assistance... PICARD This is Captain Jean-Luc Picard of the... STAR TREK: "The Defector" - REV. 10/16/89 - TEASER 5. 7 CONTINUED: SETAL'S COM VOICE (interrupting) Federation ship... please help me... requesting asylum... under pursuit... RIKER Pursuit... ? WORF Visual contact. On screen, Captain... They turn to see... 8 ANGLE ON MAIN VIEWER - (OPTICAL) A ROMULAN SCOUT SHIP is moving toward us. In the b.g. a ROMULAN WARSHIP suddenly DECLOAKS. 9 REACTIONS FADE OUT. END OF TEASER STAR TREK: "The Defector" - REV. 10/16/89 - ACT ONE 6. ACT ONE FADE IN: 10 EXT. SPACE - ROMULAN SHIPS (OPTICAL) The Romulan scout ship is overmatched... the warship is relentless and it FIRES TORPEDOES at the smaller craft. One of the torpedoes finds its mark. 11 INT. MAIN BRIDGE (OPTICAL) As before... watching the viewscreen. Data has moved to ops. PICARD Red Alert. Open a channel to the warship. RIKER (to conn) Come to intercept course. Keep us out of the Neutral Zone. WORF Channel is open. RIKER (to Data) When will the scout cross into Federation territory? DATA Forty-one seconds... PICARD Romulan warbird, you have crossed into the Neutral Zone, and are engaged in hostile action. Explain yourself and your intent. Beat. WORF No reply, sir. STAR TREK: "The Defector" - REV. 10/17/89 - ACT ONE 7. 11 CONTINUED: PICARD Hail the scout. WORF Responding. PICARD On screen. 12 ANGLE - THE VIEWSCREEN (OPTICAL) SETAL, a Romulan male of about fifty (human) years of age is sitting at the controls of his small ship. There is evident damage in his bridge. SETAL Please, you must help me... PICARD We are moving to intercept... maintain your course and power... Suddenly, a muffled EXPLOSION and Setal's ship is rocked violently. The transmission is abruptly cut off and replaced with the starfield. The damaged scout ship is clearly visible. DATA Scout ship is severely damaged, Captain. Engines inoperative, shields down. RIKER Position? DATA (works) Coordinates one-four-zero by two-zero-five. RIKER (quietly to Picard) Federation space. PICARD Bring us to within five kilometers of the scout. Mister La Forge, prepare to extend our shields around that ship. INTERCUT: STAR TREK: "The Defector" - REV. 10/16/89 - ACT ONE 8. 13 INT. ENGINEERING Geordi at the console... supernumeraries in the b.g. GEORDI Captain, at that range, the shields won't be able to take much punishment. DATA Five kilometers, Commander. RIKER All stop. PICARD Extend shields. GEORDI Shields in place... we've got the scout ship, Captain... 14 EXT. SPACE - THE ENTERPRISE AND ROMULANS (OPTICAL) The Enterprise is near the scout ship, which is drifting. 15 ANOTHER ANGLE (OPTICAL) The Romulan warship slows as it approaches the Enterprise and the scout ship, and then stops. The ships face each other. 16 INT. MAIN BRIDGE - (OPTICAL) On the viewscreen, the Romulan warship sits facing the Enterprise. WORF Weapons on the warbird are fully powered, sir. RIKER Lock phasers... PICARD Open a channel. WORF Ready. STAR TREK: "The Defector" - REV. 10/16/89 - ACT ONE 9. 16 CONTINUED: PICARD Romulan warbird, you are now in Federation territory... if you do not immediately withdraw... Picard stops as he sees something on viewscreen. 17 ANGLE ON MAIN VIEWER (OPTICAL) The Romulan warship turns and goes back the way it came... CLOAKING as it goes... RIKER No argument? WORF Warbird has re-entered the Neutral Zone, Captain. Heading for Romulan territory. (under his breath) Cowards. DATA Massive power failure on the scout ship, sir. All systems are going off-line. (beat) Including life-support. PICARD (to Com) Transporter Room Two, prepare to beam the occupant of the Romulan ship aboard. Riker heads toward the turbolift. RIKER (indicating he should follow) Mister Worf. Riker and Worf then EXIT bridge. PICARD Data, lock onto the scout ship and take it in tow... cancel Red Alert. STAR TREK: "The Defector" - REV. 10/16/89 - ACT ONE 10. 18 INT. TRANSPORTER ROOM A supernumerary is at the controls as Riker and Worf arrive. RIKER Energize. Worf stands with his hand on his phaser. The supernumerary manipulates the controls. 19 ANGLE ON TRANSPORTER STAGE - (OPTICAL) The figure of Setal MATERIALIZES on the platform. He wears a Romulan uniform with no insignia. His neck is injured, but he appears otherwise unhurt. Setal looks about for a second. SETAL I must see your captain immediately. Riker steps forward. Worf, behind Riker, watches Setal with great distrust. RIKER (notices injured arm) We'll take you to Sickbay, after that... SETAL (urgently) This cannot wait. I have information vital to your survival. On their reactions... FADE OUT. END OF ACT ONE STAR TREK: "The Defector" - REV. 10/19/89 - ACT TWO 11. ACT TWO FADE IN: 20 EXT. SPACE - THE ENTERPRISE WITH SCOUT SHIP IN TOW The two crafts in space. PICARD (V.O.) Captain's log, Stardate 43462.5. We have beamed aboard an apparent Romulan defector. He claims to be a low ranking logistics officer with extraordinary information about a new secret offensive. 21 INT. OBSERVATION LOUNGE (OPTICAL) A guard stands behind Setal as he tells his story to Picard, Riker, Data, Worf, Geordi. The Romulan is nearing the end of his account. He speaks with great fervency. A man demanding to be heard. Picard listens with a decidedly even expression. SETAL The humiliating defeat at the Battle of Cheron has not been forgotten. The new leaders have vowed to discard the treaty and claim the Neutral Zone. Nelvana Three is only the first step. RIKER (skeptical) And you're saying a whole base is already established there... ? SETAL (acknowledges) In forty-eight hours, the reactor core will be on line. RIKER (impossible) The Federation sensors that monitor the Neutral Zone just... missed it... ? STAR TREK: "The Defector" - REV. 10/19/89 - ACT TWO 12. 21 CONTINUED: Setal looks straight at Riker... eye to eye, doesn't blink. In a way, there's almost pride, a hint of smile, as he says -- SETAL It would seem so. WORF Unlikely. Setal glances at Worf with distaste. Then back to Picard... SETAL In two days, you will have a fleet of Romulan warbirds... within striking distance of fifteen Federation sectors... WORF The Federation will not permit it... SETAL (sharp) Then it is war we're talking about, isn't it? (beat, to Picard) Destroy the base now and the threat is over. Picard takes a long beat to study him... and nods. PICARD I'm sure you're tired from your ordeal... and could use some medical attention. Mister Worf, accompany Sublieutenant Setal to sickbay. We'll arrange for your quarters. SETAL (to Picard) No doubt you will wish to question me further. PICARD No doubt. STAR TREK: "The Defector" - REV. 10/19/89 - ACT TWO 12A. 21 CONTINUED: (2) Picard nods, that's all. Setal looks at him, frustrated, that's not what he wanted to hear. Picard looks back evenly. After a beat, Setal leaves. The tension level drops considerably as the officers lean back in their chairs, glance at each other. STAR TREK: "The Defector" - REV. 10/19/89 - ACT TWO 13. 21 CONTINUED: (3) RIKER He tells a hell of a story. PICARD You don't believe it... RIKER The empire knows we'd never allow them to maintain a base within the Neutral Zone. DATA Commander, it would not be an atypical Romulan ploy. In their long history of war, the Romulans have rarely attacked first... they prefer to test their enemy's resolve. RIKER And how many times in their history has there been a Romulan defector? DATA (beat, checking his files) Never, sir. RIKER (point made) Because loyalty is fundamental to their culture. GEORDI (unconvinced) You really think he's a spy, Commander? RIKER (nods) I think he's been planted to draw us into the Neutral Zone... we'd look like the aggressors... PICARD ... and the Romulans would have a legitimate excuse to respond with force. RIKER Exactly. STAR TREK: "The Defector" - REV. 10/19/89 - ACT TWO 14. 21 CONTINUED: (4) DATA That would also not be an atypical Romulan ploy, sir. PICARD (thoughtful) It is always a chess game with them, isn't it? Geordi looks out the viewport at the craft. GEORDI Well at least he's given us the chance to get a look at some Romulan technology. PICARD (acknowledges) Mister La Forge, you will head the away team over to the scout. (to Riker) Commander, you and Counselor Troi will conduct Setal's interrogation. DATA Permission to observe the interrogation, sir... PICARD No, I need you with me on the bridge, Data... there's much to be done. (beat) We have less than forty-eight hours to prevent a war... or perhaps start one. That depends on establishing the truth of... Suddenly the Scout Ship EXPLODES. As all react: 22 INT. SICKBAY BEVERLY administers to Setal's neck as Riker questions him. Worf and the security guard stand nearby. STAR TREK: "The Defector" - REV. 10/19/89 - ACT TWO 15. 22 CONTINUED: SETAL (of course) I set the auto-destruct sequencer before I left the ship. RIKER Why? SETAL (smiles, incredulous) Wouldn't you? To prevent your ship from being captured? RIKER Excuse me for being a little confused, Setal, but I thought you were defecting... SETAL I am not a traitor. (beat) All you can see is the opportunity to exploit me. The Federation credo, exploitation. You couldn't get aboard my ship fast enough -- strip it down, "what secrets might it reveal that we can use... ?" You are a short sighted people... can't you understand I came to stop a war. Setal winces with pain... BEVERLY If you could just hold still for a moment... She sprays something on his would that clearly brings relief... BEVERLY With your metabolism, it will take a couple of days to heal... SETAL Thank you, Doctor... I am fortunate that you know something of Romulan medicine. 52:[1,#b],88:[1,#b] STAR TREK: "The Defector" - REV. 10/19/89 - ACT TWO 16. 22 CONTINUED: (2) BEVERLY (glancing at Worf) I've had a chance to gain some experience recently. SETAL Ah yes... the incident at Galorndon Core, our two officers... WORF (instantly suspicious) You are aware of a great deal for a logistics clerk. SETAL It was common knowledge. (weary, to Riker) I can show you my rating code. WORF Forged credentials are a simple matter for a spy. SETAL (eyes never leaving Riker) How can you allow Klingon Pahtk to walk around in a Starfleet uniform? Worf steps forward... rising confrontation... WORF You are lucky this is not a Klingon ship. We know how to deal with spies... SETAL Remove this tohzah from my sight... Riker freezes Worf with a look and then replies to Setal calmly. RIKER (calmly, to Setal) Your knowledge of Klingon curses is impressive. (MORE) STAR TREK: "The Defector" - REV. 10/18/89 - ACT TWO 17. 22 CONTINUED: (3) RIKER (Cont'd) (beat) But, as the Romulans might say, only a Veruul would use such language in public. Setal is surprised by Riker's use of the Romulan word. He gives him a grudging smile of respect. Riker doesn't return the smile, but is determined to avoid a confrontation, looking at Setal -- RIKER Mister Worf, please see to the security arrangements for our guest's stay... Worf takes a beat, glances at Riker who doesn't look back and then EXITS. A beat and then Setal erupts in LAUGHTER. RIKER You find something amusing? SETAL (nodding) Lieutenant Worf, I like him. Or, to be more accurate, I understand him. He's a warrior. Proud, fearless, living only for combat. (the smile fading) Exactly the type who will get us all killed if we're not careful. As Riker reacts to this: 23 INT. GUEST QUARTERS (OPTICAL) The doors open and Setal is escorted in by Riker... an n.d. security guard remains outside the door. Setal looks over his new home, unimpressed by what he sees. Riker shows him the food slot. RIKER This is the food station... you can reach me through the com panel. (at the door) Later, there are a few more questions we'd like to ask you... STAR TREK: "The Defector" - REV. 10/19/89 - ACT TWO 18. 23 CONTINUED: Setal sighs in frustration. Riker gives him a look and EXITS. Setal looks out the window and thinks about what he's doing. The look on his face is tortured. SETAL Computer, water. COMPUTER Temperature? SETAL Twelve onkians. COMPUTER This system is calibrated to the Celsius metric system. Setal frowns, what the hell is that? Frustrated, he can't even order a glass of water in this new environment. Finally... SETAL Any temperature at all. On the cold side of your system, whatever that is. The water MATERIALIZES. He takes it. Drinks. He sits down on his bed. He pulls off his boot, removes his wristband, flips it open to reveal a... 24 TINY COMPARTMENT containing a thin blue chip -- (NOTE: Not obviously for ingestion, we shouldn't know what the hell it is... something that could destroy the Enterprise? What is his plot?) 25 SETAL stares at it, then snaps the wristband closed. 26 INT. MAIN BRIDGE - CLOSE ON MONITOR Graphic. A look at the scanners' interpretation of the Neutral Zone... DATA (O.C.) There is no unusual activity in the Nelvana System... STAR TREK: "The Defector" - REV. 10/19/89 - ACT TWO 19. 26 CONTINUED: Pulling back to reveal Picard standing behind Data at an aft station... PICARD Isolate and magnify the Nelvana star system. Data does so... and we get a computer graphic look at the focus of this mystery. DATA Nothing on the sensors, sir. PICARD It is hard to believe what we cannot see, Data. And yet, with their cloaking technology, a fleet of Romulan warships could conceivably be passing right before our eyes. (thoughtfully) There must be a way we can neutralize that advantage... COMPUTER Captain Picard, priority one message from Starfleet coming in on secured channel. On the move -- PICARD In my Ready Room. Delay time, computer... ? COMPUTER Two hours, twenty-two minute delay from time of transmission at Starfleet Command on Lya Three. 27 INT. READY ROOM He ENTERS. On his viewer, a series of colors... virtually a rainbow of lines intersecting like some kind of computer art... STAR TREK: "The Defector" - REV. 10/17/89 - ACT TWO 20. 27 CONTINUED: PICARD Computer, key access four-one-two mark eight-zero. Picard. Jean- Luc. Starfleet priority code Gamma. Decode. As he sits, the colors zip around and form a Federation logo with the text: EYES ONLY - CAPTAIN J.L. PICARD emblazoned across it. In the corner of the screen: a digital time of transmission as well as the real time... is indicated throughout the message... 28 ANGLE - VIEWER PICARD Begin message. The logo fades out to be replaced by ADMIRAL HADEN, a stocky command officer. Because of the distance between the Enterprise and Starfleet, static both visual and auditory interfere with the playback. ADMIRAL HADEN Captain, we have received an official protest from the Romulan Empire demanding the return of your defector. We are obviously refusing to comply. I join in your skepticism, but if it is a deception, the Romulans are certainly going all out to make a good show of it. The Federation Council has convened in emergency session. (more personal) There's no doubt in my mind this will eventually fall on your shoulders, Jean-Luc. You've got him. You must decide if he's telling the truth. For now, I suggest you proceed along the Neutral Zone border toward a Federation position proximate to Nelvana Three. The admiral's picture disappears, leaving only the real time clock running on the blank screen. STAR TREK: "The Defector" - REV. 10/17/89 - ACT TWO 20A. 28A PICARD considers thoughtfully for a long beat. To com panel -- PICARD Picard to Lieutenant Worf. Please come to my Ready Room. STAR TREK: "The Defector" - REV. 10/20/89 - ACT TWO 21. 29 INT. DEBRIEFING ROOM The debriefing takes place on a raised platform in the middle of the room. Setal sits across from Riker and Troi. An n.d. security guard (the same one we've seen before) stands nearby. A flashing light on his chair indicates the conversation is being recorded. Riker has a PADD with notes that he refers to occasionally. RIKER You've never actually stepped foot on Nelvana Three. SETAL That's right. RIKER (referring to PADD) You were a logistics officer assigned to sector eight-one-five... SETAL (recognizing ploy) Eight-one-four. RIKER Eight-one-four, yes. So your conclusions about the secret base are solely based on a few files you happened to see in a computer. SETAL Massive files, Commander... transport schedules, troop movements... construction reports... RIKER And where are they? (off his look) All these files? Why not bring the files to prove what you're saying? STAR TREK: "The Defector" - REV. 10/20/89 - ACT TWO 22. 29 CONTINUED: SETAL It was not a simple matter of just taking them... Romulan security is unmatched... RIKER Yet you managed to get all the way across the Neutral Zone in a one man ship... quite an achievement... SETAL I saw an opportunity... I took it... by the time they realized I had the scout ship... it was too late... RIKER Are all logistics officers taught to pilot scout ships? SETAL I depended a great deal on the computer to navigate. I have rudimentary knowledge, that's all... TROI Do you expect anything out of this for yourself? SETAL (reacts) The idea of a Romulan pursuing a noble cause is impossible, I suppose. STAR TREK: "The Defector" - REV. 10/20/89 - ACT TWO 23. 29 CONTINUED: (2) TROI It was only a question. SETAL (getting angry) Do you realize I have given up my life for this? I can never go back. Do you think I did this for wealth, a new home, what? RIKER We're trying to get to the truth here, Sublieutenant. SETAL You have the truth before you. You are too blind to see it. (softly) I have seen enough bloodshed for one lifetime. RIKER (still not buying it) So have we all. SETAL (with sudden passion) Then do as I ask! I know how difficult it is for you to believe me. I feel the same suspicions toward you. But we must look beyond our long-standing animosity and work toward the good of both our people. He reaches out with both hands, palms upward in a gesture of supplication. 30 THE ROMULAN WARBIRD CHASING THE SCOUT SHIP (OPTICAL) With time code. GEORDI (V.O.) Slow playback... display engine logs and power data of both vessels... STAR TREK: "The Defector" - REV. 10/17/89 - ACT TWO 24. 30 CONTINUED: The picture slows... the computer adds a graphic overlay that identifies the speed and power of both Romulan vessels... the camera pulls back to reveal it's a monitor at... 31 INT. MAIN BRIDGE - ENGINEERING STATION Geordi with Picard, Data and Beverly at a monitor. GEORDI Now... look what happens at zero-nine-five-four-three-three on the clock... 32 THE MONITOR (OPTICAL) GEORDI (O.S.) The scout has sustained engine damage... forcing it to drop to point-six-one-five impulse power... for all intents and purposes he's finished, dead... the warship should overtake him... only it doesn't. Point two-six seconds later, the warbird slows to precisely the same speed... 33 RESUME - ENGINEERING STATION GEORDI Three times... three speed fluctuations... the warship always kept its distance... I don't think they wanted to catch up. BEVERLY And yet they fired at the scout ship... they could have killed him... DATA Not necessarily, Doctor... the Romulans have the same capability to direct the impact of their weapons as we do. STAR TREK: "The Defector" - REV. 10/17/89 - ACT TWO 25. 33 CONTINUED: PICARD Doctor, is there any possibility his wound was self-inflicted? BEVERLY It was a bad burn... I hardly think... PICARD A possibility... Beverly sighs, forced to acknowledge the possibility. Looking at the monitor again... on Picard, realizing the import of this... 34 OMITTED FADE OUT. END OF ACT TWO STAR TREK: "The Defector" - REV. 10/20/89 - ACT THREE 26. ACT THREE FADE IN: 35 EXT. SPACE - THE ENTERPRISE (OPTICAL) Holding position. PICARD (V.O.) Captain's log, Stardate 43463.7. We are holding a position at the Neutral Zone border proximate to Nelvana Three. 36 INT. SETAL'S GUEST QUARTERS Feeling trapped, Setal paces around the room. PICARD (V.O.) There are twenty one hours left before the Romulan base becomes functional, if our guest is telling the truth. Counselor Troi, however, feels Sublieutenant Setal is being deliberately deceptive. 37 INT. CAPTAIN'S READY ROOM Picard is drinking tea as he plays back another communique from Starfleet. (It is likely that Picard got little rest the night before and he looks a bit tired.) 38 ANGLE THE COMPUTER SCREEN A grim-faced Admiral Haden. ADMIRAL HADEN The Monitor and the Hood are headed in your direction though they will arrive too late to be of assistance. Warnings have gone out to all outposts along the border... as well as several independent vessels in nearby sectors. (a beat) No one here wants a war, Captain. (MORE) STAR TREK: "The Defector" - REV. 10/20/89 - ACT THREE 26A. 38 CONTINUED: ADMIRAL HADEN (Cont'd) But we're prepared to take them on if that's what they want. All Federation starships have been placed on Yellow Alert. STAR TREK: "The Defector" - REV. 10/17/89 - ACT THREE 27. 39 ANGLE PICARD HOLD a beat on his reaction, aware the Enterprise has moved closer to war. There is a chime. PICARD Come. The door opens and Data ENTERS. DATA You wanted to see me, Captain? PICARD Data, prepare a class one probe. Set sensors for maximum scan. I want every meter of Nelvana Three monitored. DATA I will start my calibrations, sir. He turns to leave. PICARD One moment. Data stops, waits patiently to hear what Picard has to say. The captain points to a chair. PICARD (continuing) Sit down. DATA Do you require something else from me, sir? PICARD Yes. Your clarity of thought, your objectivity... as always... (a beat) We're very possibly about to go to war, Data. The repercussions of what we do during the next twenty-four hours may be felt for years to come. I'd like you to keep the official record of these events, so we may give history the benefit of a dispassionate view. STAR TREK: "The Defector" - REV. 10/17/89 - ACT THREE 28. 39 CONTINUED: DATA I will begin immediately, sir. Is that all? No. Picard looks at him thoughtfully. PICARD How are the crew's spirits? DATA They are concerned, Captain, of course. But confident. Can you not see that yourself? PICARD Unlike King Henry, it's not so easy for me to disguise myself and walk among my troops. (beat) That's all, Data. Data EXITS. Picard sits there a beat... to himself -- PICARD "Now if these men do not die well, it will be a black matter for the King that led them to it." STAR TREK: "The Defector" - REV. 10/20/89 - ACT THREE 29. 40 INT. DEBRIEFING ROOM Setal is tired of answering questions. SETAL Why must we waste time playing this ridiculous game? TROI (ignoring the insult) I sense there is more here you wish to tell us, yet you force yourself to hold back. SETAL I've told you all you need to know about Nelvana Three. TROI I am not speaking of the base. Setal definitely doesn't like the turn the conversation has taken. SETAL The base is all that matters. RIKER You're lying, Setal. SETAL If you'll go to Nelvana Three, you will see... RIKER We're not going anywhere til we get to the truth... Setal glares at Riker.... RIKER You're a spy, aren't you? STAR TREK: "The Defector" - REV. 10/20/89 - ACT THREE 30. 40 CONTINUED: SETAL No. RIKER Then prove it. You can start by telling me something about the location and strength of the Romulan fleet... SETAL I don't know it... Quick -- RIKER (why not?) You're a logistics officer... SETAL For only one sector... RIKER Who's your commanding officer? SETAL Admiral Alidar Jarok. RIKER The position of Romulan bases along the Neutral Zone... Setal slams the table with his palm. SETAL I don't know... RIKER In your sector then... Setal pounds the table again. SETAL Irrelevant. RIKER Strength of troops under your admiral's command... STAR TREK: "The Defector" - REV. 10/20/89 - ACT THREE 31. 40 CONTINUED: (2) SETAL (pounding) Irrelevant. (pounding) Irrelevant. Riker continues on the attack. RIKER I agree with you... it's not worth playing this game. Setal slumps back in his seat. Tired and defeated. SETAL What a fool I've been. To have come looking for courage in a lair of cowards. On Riker and Troi's reaction. 41 INT. MAIN BRIDGE Which is now at full crew. Picard standing at command, Data at Ops, Worf at Tactical and supernumeraries at Conn and other stations. The atmosphere is tense. COMPUTER Captain Picard, priority message from security officer, Klingon vessel Patakt... STAR TREK: "The Defector" - REV. 10/17/89 - ACT THREE 32. 41 CONTINUED: PICARD Lieutenant Worf, handle this at security station, deck nine... WORF Aye, sir... Picard watches Worf EXIT into turbolift then moves closer to ops. DATA Sensors are configured for planetary probe, sir... ready for launch. PICARD Proceed. 42 EXT. ENTERPRISE (OPTICAL) Stock shot of probe being fired off. 43 INT. MAIN BRIDGE (OPTICAL) The probe moving away on the Main Viewer. Data checks panel. DATA Probe on course. Sensors are functioning... Picard moves toward his Ready Room... PICARD Coordinate your analysis with Mister La Forge... I want your report with dispatch... He EXITS. STAR TREK: "The Defector" - REV. 10/20/89 - ACT THREE 33. 44 INT. MAIN ENGINEERING Data and Geordi. Geordi is working at the console as if the first readings from the probe are sent back and analyzed. We see a computerized rendering of Nelvana Three, a grid is placed over it, graphs of raw data appear and disappear... as they work... GEORDI I don't know, Data... my gut tells me we oughta believe what this guy is trying to tell us... DATA Your gut? GEORDI It's just a... a feeling, you know? Instinct, emotions... DATA It seems to me those qualities interfere with rational judgment. GEORDI You're right. They do sometimes. STAR TREK: "The Defector" - REV. 10/20/89 - ACT THREE 34. 44 CONTINUED: DATA Then why not rely strictly on fact? GEORDI You can't always trust the plain and simple facts... they lie sometimes... DATA They can lead to wrong conclusions, but they cannot lie. Geordi doesn't know exactly how to explain. GEORDI What do you think? Is he a defector or not? DATA The facts to date would lead to an objective conclusion that he is not. GEORDI (shakes his head) Somehow I think we're gonna catch the Romulans with their pants down on Nelvana Three... Just like he says. Data blinks. Almost impossible to accept this. Processing. DATA "With their pants down." A metaphor, catching them in the act... because your "gut" tells you so... GEORDI But of course you can't just go with your gut either. It's a combination, Data... let me put it this way... all these feelings that get in the way of human judgment... that confuse the hell out of us... that make us second guess ourselves. We need them. We need them to help fill in the missing pieces... because we almost never have all the facts. STAR TREK: "The Defector" - REV. 10/20/89 - ACT THREE 35. 44 CONTINUED: (2) DATA So a person fills in missing pieces of the puzzle with his own personality... resulting in a conclusion based as much on instinct and emotion as on fact. GEORDI Now you're getting it. DATA What does one do if he has no instinct and emotion? Geordi reacts a beat, then, noticing on his console... GEORDI Data... look at this... the facts just took a left turn... 45 INT. CAPTAIN'S READY ROOM Picard, Geordi, Data. They are revealing the surprising results of their probe analysis. DATA As the probe went into orbit around Nelvana Three, it began to pick up low level subspace radio emissions... PICARD Could they be naturally occuring? DATA The patterns are clearly artificial, Captain... GEORDI The signal is so faint our ship sensors can't read it from this distance. PICARD Can we decode it? GEORDI (shakes his head) We've tried. It's probably Romulan... but we can't be sure. (MORE) STAR TREK: "The Defector" - REV. 10/18/89 - ACT THREE 36. 45 CONTINUED: DATA Cloaked Romulan ships could produce this effect. PICARD What about the planet surface? GEORDI Reading nothing but barren rock. They might be able to hide a base from the probe... its capabilities are limited. The only way we'll know for sure is if we go and take a look for ourselves. PICARD (acknowledges) That will be all, gentlemen. Data and Geordi EXIT. Picard weighs his options. 46 INT. TEN-FORWARD Setal, alone at a table nursing some exotic alien concoction and mournfully contemplating the starfield out the viewport. The n.d. security guard sits nearby. Setal feels himself being stared at. Looks up to find: 47 DATA observing him from the next table. SETAL I take it you've never seen a Romulan before. DATA That would be an incorrect assumption. SETAL Then why do you invade my privacy? DATA I am attempting to ascertain what my guts tell me about you. SETAL (a beat) You're the android. STAR TREK: "The Defector" - REV. 10/16/89 - ACT THREE 37. 47 CONTINUED: SETAL (continuing) I know a host of Romulan cyberneticists who would love to be this close to you. DATA I do not find the concept particularly appealing. SETAL Nor should you. Setal goes back to brooding. Data is determined to reach a deeper understanding of this man. He notices Setal has gone back to studying the view. DATA I am told by various crewmembers that this viewport is their favorite on the ship. SETAL I thought it would bring me comfort. But these are not my stars. Even the heavens are denied to me here. Setal takes a sip of his drink. SETAL (makes a face) Synthetic swill... He pushes it away. SETAL (continuing) I don't suppose your food terminals are capable of preparing a Romulan ale. DATA I am afraid they would require the molecular structure of the beverage in question. And, as you are no doubt aware, our knowledge of your planet is quite limited. STAR TREK: "The Defector" - REV. 10/16/89 - ACT THREE 38. 47 CONTINUED: (2) SETAL The loss is yours. For I have visited over a hundred different worlds and none possessed the awesome beauty of Romulus. DATA Am I correct in assuming you regret your decision to come here? Setal shakes his head. SETAL No, what I did had to be done. (melancholy) But to never again see the firefalls of Gath Gal'thong, or the spires of my home rising above the Apnex Sea. To be exiled from your home is a bitter thing. DATA It does appear unlikely that you will ever be allowed to return to your world again. Data's seeming indifference is a blow to Setal. SETAL The cold reaction of an android. DATA But perhaps we can bring Romulus to you. Off Setal's surprised reaction. 48 INT. CORRIDOR OUTSIDE HOLODECK Data is rapidly keying a program into the Holodeck's Com panel. A skeptical Setal watches closely. The security guard remains in the b.g. He steps away from the com panel. COMPUTER VOICE Program complete. DATA Run program. STAR TREK: "The Defector" - REV. 10/20/89 - ACT THREE 39. 48 CONTINUED: The door slides open. Data gestures Setal inside. DATA (continuing) After you. Setal hesitates a moment before his curiosity gets the better of him. He ENTERS. 49 INT. HOLODECK (OPTICAL) CLOSE ON Setal and Data as they stare at the Holodeck's recreation of Romulus. (An exotic vision to be determined later.) Setal reacts, pleased with what he sees. SETAL The valley of Chula. I know it well. For a moment, Setal is almost convinced he's back on Romulus. Then slowly the smile fades from his face as a grim realization takes hold. DATA You are free to stay here as long as you wish. SETAL Turn it off. I no longer live here. Data realizes Setal is in no mood to be contradicted. DATA Cancel program. The landscape disappears. We are now inside the bare set of the Holodeck. A huge empty place. SETAL (looking around) This is my home now. My future. Setal comes to a decision. STAR TREK: "The Defector" - 10/16/89 - ACT THREE 40. 49 CONTINUED: SETAL (continuing) I've sacrificed everything. It must not be in vain. He appears to stand a little taller as he turns to Data. SETAL (continuing; an order) Arrange a meeting between myself and Captain Picard. (a beat) Tell him Admiral Jarok wants to see him. And as Jarok (Setal) stares defiantly at Data, we: FADE OUT. END OF ACT THREE STAR TREK: "The Defector" - REV. 10/18/89 - ACT FOUR 41. ACT FOUR FADE IN: 50 INT. CAPT. READY ROOM - CLOSEUP - COMPUTER SCREEN Federation logo. "EYES ONLY, CAPTAIN J.L. PICARD." The clock ticking in digital display. The image of Admiral Haden appears... ADMIRAL HADEN Captain, we have confirmed that you are holding Admiral Alidar Jarok... INTERCUTTING: 51 CLOSEUPS OF PICARD WATCHING ADMIRAL HADEN He's been identified as the commander at the massacre of the Norkan outposts. The council strongly advises you to consider Jarok an unreliable source of information. His picture fades away... the clock continues. 52 WIDE Keying his insignia -- PICARD Show him in. Picard deliberately makes himself busy, does not look up when a security ensign escorts Jarok (Setal) in. PICARD Wait outside, Ensign. Have a seat... Admiral Jarok. The guard EXITS. Jarok doesn't sit, waits impatiently for the captain to finish what he's doing. JAROK Captain... there is no more time... STAR TREK: "The Defector" - REV. 10/18/89 - ACT FOUR 42. 52 CONTINUED: PICARD (casual, you do not give orders here) Have a seat, Admiral. Jarok sits, frustrated. Picard finally looks up. PICARD I am not convinced you are telling the truth. JAROK (extreme frustration) What must I do... PICARD (shrugs) You must convince me. Picard stands... moves around the room... PICARD If I had irrefutable evidence... (beat) ... but you did not bring irrefutable evidence. You brought no evidence at all. In fact, this entire escape stretched your credibility beyond belief. Now we hear that you are not even who you claimed to be. (beat) A Romulan defector is virtually a contradiction in terms. But Admiral Jarok crossing the lines... JAROK I have explained my motives to your interrogators... PICARD Yes, peace in our galaxy. (beat) Except you are not a man of peace, Admiral. Your military record, what we know of it, is clear... JAROK (overlapping) ... which is precisely why I chose an alternate identity here... STAR TREK: "The Defector" - REV. 10/18/89 - ACT FOUR 42A. 52 CONTINUED: (2) PICARD (overlapping) ... the massacre at the Norkan Outposts, for example... JAROK (beat, quietly) Your "massacre" was called the Norkan Campaign on my world, Captain. One world's hero is another world's madman. Perhaps I am neither one. STAR TREK: "The Defector" - REV. 10/18/89 - ACT FOUR 43. 52 CONTINUED: (3) Picard is willing to acknowledge that. PICARD On what basis shall I decide, Admiral? Your good word? Are you willing to reveal ways to overpower the Romulan B-type warbirds we may encounter? Are you prepared to help us detect them through their cloaking shields? A long beat. Jarok does not want to answer. Picard uses it... PICARD You see my problem, Admiral. You ask us for faith in circumstances not only difficult to believe but compounded by your own lies, and your own reluctance to tell us all you know... JAROK I cannot betray my people... PICARD You have already betrayed your people. You have made your choices. You are a traitor, sir. If the bitter taste of it disagrees with you, I am truly sorry. But I will not risk the lives of my crew because you think you can dance on the edge of the Neutral Zone. You have crossed over, Admiral. I suggest you make yourself comfortable. Jarok swallows hard, he knows he cannot ride the fence much longer. He jumps off it in an odd direction... JAROK Do you have children, Captain Picard? A family? PICARD No. JAROK Then you have sacrificed too much for your career. STAR TREK: "The Defector" - REV. 10/18/89 - ACT FOUR 43A. 52 CONTINUED: (4) PICARD (no interest in this) Yes, this is all very interesting, but... STAR TREK: "The Defector" - REV. 10/18/89 - ACT FOUR 44. 52 CONTINUED: (5) But Jarok continues... JAROK There's a moment in a man's life, Captain, that you cannot know... when he looks down at the first smile of his baby girl and he knows that he must change the world for her... for all children. It is for her that I am here. Not to betray the Romulan Empire, but to save it. He grows silent, downcast, shakes his head. JAROK For months, I tried to persuade the high command that another war would destroy the empire. They grew tired of my arguments, and finally censored me, sent me off to command a distant sector. This was my only recourse. I will never see my child smile again, Captain. She will grow up believing her father was a traitor. But she will grow up. (beat) If you act, Picard. If we stop the war before it begins... Picard studies him a beat, unmoved... PICARD (softly, the obvious) I cannot. And will not. Unless I have your unequivocal assistance. Off Jarok's look... 53 INT. OBSERVATION LOUNGE All principals except Wesley and Picard. Picard ENTERS. STAR TREK: "The Defector" - REV. 10/20/89 - ACT FOUR 44A. 53 CONTINUED: PICARD Admiral Jarok has provided me with the strength, location and tactical plans for the Romulan fleet. (reactions) Mister La Forge, he is prepared to give you data regarding engines, weapons and cloaking systems on the warbird class starship. But I believe we'll find his experience as a field commander more valuable in a strategic sense than in the technical areas. GEORDI (blown away) Any edge'll help, Captain. PICARD Don't depend on it. For all we know, he may still be lying. (beat) We'll find out soon enough. Number One, set a course for Nelvana Three. STAR TREK: "The Defector" - REV. 10/20/89 - ACT FOUR 45. 54 thru OMITTED 56 57 EXT. SPACE - THE ENTERPRISE (OPTICAL) Holding at the Neutral Zone border. DATA (V.O.) Second officer's log, supplemental. We are prepared to enter the Neutral Zone in direct violation of the Treaty of Algeron. 58 INT. MAIN BRIDGE Picard in command... Data at Ops... Worf at Tactical... Riker is conferring with supernumerary at Conn... DATA (V.O.) We must presume Romulan warships are cloaked and monitoring us. We expect swift and heavy resistance as we approach Nelvana Three. 59 RIKER - ECU RIKER Course plotted and laid in. 60 DATA - ECU DATA All decks showing condition red. 61 INT. ENGINEERING - GEORDI ECU GEORDI Engineering ready, sir. 62 INT. MAIN BRIDGE - WORF ECU WORF Defensive systems standing by. STAR TREK: "The Defector" - REV. 10/20/89 - ACT FOUR 46-49. 63 PICARD - ECU A beat. PICARD Engage. FADE OUT. END OF ACT FOUR STAR TREK: "The Defector" - REV. 10/20/89 - ACT FIVE 50. ACT FIVE FADE IN: 64 EXT. SPACE - THE ENTERPRISE (OPTICAL) The ship at warp speed. 65 INT. GUEST QUARTERS (OPTICAL) Jarok, sitting on his bed, lost in his personal agony... glances out his window... 66 INT. MAIN BRIDGE RIKER Tactical? WORF Nothing on sensors. Riker reacts surprised, concerned... moves to Picard... RIKER I don't like it... I would have expected a greeting party... PICARD Number One, you echo another noteworthy commander in a similar circumstance. One of your countrymen... (off his look) George Armstrong Custer when his Seventh Cavalry arrived at the Little Big Horn. RIKER May we have better luck. DATA Approaching Nelvana system. RIKER Engage impulse engines. STAR TREK: "The Defector" - REV. 10/16/89 - ACT FIVE 51. 67 EXT. SPACE - THE ENTERPRISE (OPTICAL) Entering the Nelvana system, the ship drops out of warp... a stellar light revealed from a planet crossing in front of the star suggests a dawning to this day of battle... and the thoughtful viewer may remember Shakespeare's words from the teaser. 68 INT. GUEST QUARTERS Jarok waits and wonders. 69 INT. MAIN BRIDGE Riker moves to look over Worf's shoulder as he continues to monitor the tactical sensors. RIKER Nelvana Three on screen. 70 ANGLE - MAIN VIEW SCREEN - NELVANA THREE a dull, uninteresting rock... slowly approaches. Riker moves back to Picard... RIKER Still no sign of them on sensors... (beat, trace of discomfort) In a way, I'd rather be fighting my way there... it's too damned easy. PICARD Prepare to enter standard orbit. 71 EXT. SPACE - THE ENTERPRISE (OPTICAL) The ship moves into orbit Nelvana Three. 72 INT. MAIN BRIDGE (OPTICAL) Picard and Riker on their feet now, standing between conn and ops studying Nelvana III. STAR TREK: "The Defector" - REV. 10/18/89 - ACT FIVE 52. 72 CONTINUED: PICARD Data? DATA Scanning the planet. No life forms. No power sources. No weapons systems. RIKER No indication of a base at all? DATA No sir. PICARD The subspace signal the probe detected? The ionization disturbances? DATA I am picking them up, sir... but I cannot identify the source... They... seem to be moving in an orbital path with an eight hundred kilometer apogee. PICARD (to Worf) Have Jarok brought to the bridge. RIKER It's possible they abandoned the base after he defected. DATA There is no scarring on the planet surface that would denote heavy construction of any kind. RIKER A cloaking device, perhaps... something to hide the whole base... DATA A cloaking device operating on the surface would be given away by visible distortion effects. STAR TREK: "The Defector" - REV. 10/18/89 - ACT FIVE 52A. 72 CONTINUED: (2) A security guard arrives with Jarok. They look at him a beat as he ENTERS... as though he will now reveal the truth. He doesn't. PICARD Perhaps you'd like to tell us why we're here, Admiral. Off his reaction... RIKER There doesn't seem to be a base. STAR TREK: "The Defector" - REV. 10/18/89 - ACT FIVE 53. 72 CONTINUED: (3) JAROK (honestly confused) I don't understand... Motioning to the viewscreen -- PICARD Nelvana Three, Admiral... no base, no weapons, no sign of life at all. Stunned, moving toward the screen... JAROK But I saw the tactical communiques... records... timetables for completion... an entire legion was assigned to the mission... Picard studies the face of the Romulan. PICARD Could they have been feeding you disinformation? Slow push to Jarok. PICARD (continuing) You said you had been censored. Reassigned four months ago. They knew of your dissatisfaction... could this have been a test of your loyalty? JAROK (uncertain) No... no, that's impossible... PICARD They let you escape with an arsenal of worthless secrets... what other explanation is there? RIKER Captain, permission to withdraw from the Neutral Zone. PICARD Proceed. STAR TREK: "The Defector" - REV. 10/18/89 - ACT FIVE 54. 72 CONTINUED: (4) RIKER Helm a hundred eighty degrees about. Get us out of here, Geordi... GEORDI'S COM VOICE I hear you, Commander... As Jarok continues to stare at the planet with his mouth open in confusion... 73 EXT. SPACE - THE ENTERPRISE (OPTICAL) Turning course... but as it turns suddenly three Romulan warbirds UNCLOAK... 74 INT. MAIN BRIDGE WORF Three Romulan warships uncloaking... coordinates... (no time for that) They're firing photon torpedoes... 75 EXT. SPACE - THE ENTERPRISE (OPTICAL) The Enterprise is struck by the torpedoes from all three ships.... 76 INT. MAIN BRIDGE Shaking from the impact... WORF Shields holding... RIKER Damage... GEORDI'S COM VOICE Minor damage in the secondary hull... power transfer fields may be pinched off... working on it... More hits rock them... WORF Captain... ? STAR TREK: "The Defector" - REV. 10/18/89 - ACT FIVE 55. 76 CONTINUED: PICARD Not yet, Mister Worf. (beat) This is just a tap on the shoulder. Or we wouldn't be here talking about it. And we may wonder for the moment what that is about... then the assault ends and... WORF They're hailing us, Captain... PICARD On screen... 77 ANGLE - THE VIEWSCREEN (OPTICAL) Reveals the same Romulan commander (TOMALAK), the smug bastard who confronted Picard at Galorndon Core. TOMALAK Captain Picard, I hardly expected to see you again so soon. It seems this time you are the one who has made an aggressive move across the Neutral Zone... PICARD Commander Tomalak, as I suspect you already know, we have responded to a warning of a Romulan incursion on Nelvana Three... TOMALAK But, Captain, as you can see, there is no incursion... PICARD There is the matter of an unidentified subspace radio emission... and ionization distubrances... TOMALAK Ah, you must mean our orbiting probe... we are studying Nelvana Three for... (lying) archaeological research... STAR TREK: "The Defector" - REV. 10/18/89 - ACT FIVE 55A. 77 CONTINUED: PICARD With a cloaked satellite... TOMALAK Really, Captain, would you have us believe this satellite is an excuse for your aggressive charge across the Neutral Zone? PICARD Believe whatever you wish, Tomalak. We will be on our way. TOMALAK Without even an apology, Captain? Picard is furious. PICARD If an apology will do, I will offer it. STAR TREK: "The Defector" - REV. 10/20/89 - ACT FIVE 56. 77 CONTINUED: (2) TOMALAK I'm afraid it won't. So I will save you the humiliation. PICARD Get to it, Tomalak. TOMALAK You see, Picard, after we dissect your Enterprise for every precious bit of information, I plan to display its broken hull in the center of the Romulan capitol as a symbol of our victory. It will inspire our armies for generations to come and serve as a warning to any other traitor who would create ripples of disloyalty. Jarok now understands what has happened... cannot hold it in any longer... moving forward to confront Tomalak... JAROK All the communiques, the records, the timetables... they were fiction, written for my benefit... it was all a... a test... a test of my loyalty... and you used me to lure the Enterprise into the Neutral Zone. TOMALAK (bored, interrupting) First, Captain, you will return the traitor, Jarok... then you will surrender as prisoners of war... PICARD Do you seriously expect me to agree to those terms? TOMALAK No, Captain Picard, I expect you won't. (beat) You have thirty seconds to decide. PICARD I do not require one second. STAR TREK: "The Defector" - REV. 10/18/89 - ACT FIVE 57. 77 CONTINUED: (3) TOMALAK Captain Picard, I urge you. Surrender. Consider the men and women you would lead into a lost cause. PICARD If the cause is just and honorable, they are prepared to give their lives. Are you prepared to die today, Tomalak? TOMALAK I expected more from you than an idle threat, Picard. PICARD And so you shall have it. Now, Mister Worf. Prearranged signal -- WORF Aye, Captain... Worf presses a panel on the tactical command sending a signal that results in -- 78 EXT. SPACE - THE ENTERPRISE (OPTICAL) Surrounded by the three Romulan ships... and suddenly the Romulan ships are surrounded as three Klingon Birds of Prey MATERIALIZE. 79 INT. MAIN BRIDGE (OPTICAL) WORF Klingon vessels are armed and ready, Captain. Tomalak blinks. PICARD What shall it be, Tomalak? Tomalak looks long and hard at Picard... TOMALAK You will still not survive our assault... STAR TREK: "The Defector" - REV. 10/18/89 - ACT FIVE 58. 79 CONTINUED: PICARD Nor will you survive ours, Commander. Shall we die together... ? A long look at Picard and then Tomalak slowly grins. TOMALAK I look forward to our next meeting, Captain. He nods a nod of respect a la the Red Baron... and the transmission disappears, returns to starfield, showing the six ships. WORF Romulan disruptors powering down, Captain. 80 EXT. SPACE - THE ENTERPRISE (OPTICAL) The Romulan warships DISAPPEAR. Klingon ships remain. 81 INT. MAIN BRIDGE PICARD Mister Worf, extend the appreciation of the Federation... and my personal gratitude... to the Klingons. WORF Aye, sir. PICARD Take us home, Number One. Riker acknowledges, pausing to note Jarok, the man who cannot go home again. Slow push to him... JAROK I did it... for nothing. My home, my family. For nothing. HARD CUT TO: STAR TREK: "The Defector" - REV. 10/18/89 - ACT FIVE 59. 82 INT. CORRIDOR Data and Picard urgently on the move... reaching an doorway where a guard stands... several medical technicians, Beverly and Riker are already inside.... 83 INT. GUEST QUARTERS - CONTINUOUS (OPTICAL) Jarok is on the bed, dead, lying face up, eyes closed at peace. To Picard as he ENTERS -- BEVERLY He ingested a Felodesine chip. He must have brought it with him. I'm sorry, Captain... there was no antidote. Riker hands him a letter on a PADD. RIKER A letter to his wife and daughter. DATA Sir, he must have known it would be impossible for us to deliver this. Picard gives it to him, nods. A last look as they take him away. PICARD Today, perhaps... but if there are others as courageous as Admiral Jarok... there is hope for a day of peace when we can take his letter home. As they EXIT... FADE OUT. END OF ACT FIVE THE END STAR TREK: THE NEXT GENERATION "The Hunted" #40273-159 Written by Robin Bernheim Directed by Cliff Bole THE WRITING CREDITS MAY NOT BE FINAL AND SHOULD NOT BE USED FOR PUBLICITY OR ADVERTISING PURPOSES WITHOUT FIRST CHECKING WITH THE TELEVISION LEGAL DEPARTMENT. Copyright 1989 Paramount Pictures Corporation. All Rights Reserved. This script is not for publication or reproduction. No one is authorized to dispose of same. If lost or destroyed, please notify the Script Department. FINAL DRAFT OCTOBER 25, 1989 STAR TREK: "The Hunted" - 10/25/89 - CAST STAR TREK: THE NEXT GENERATION "The Hunted" CAST PICARD Angosians RIKER PRIME MINISTER NAYROK DATA ZAYNAR BEVERLY ROGA DANAR TROI GEORDI WORF WESLEY Non-Speaking SEVERAL ATTRACTIVE WOMEN O'BRIEN 12 PRISONERS/VETERANS 10 GOVERNMENT OFFICIALS Non-Speaking SEVERAL SECURITY GUARDS TRANSPORTER ENGINEER OTHER ENGINEERING PERSONNEL STAR TREK: "The Hunted" - REV. 10/27/89 - SETS STAR TREK: THE NEXT GENERATION "The Hunted" SETS INTERIORS EXTERIORS USS ENTERPRISE USS ENTERPRISE MAIN BRIDGE SHUTTLECRAFT CAPTAIN'S READY ROOM OBSERVATION LOUNGE ANGOSIA SICKBAY TRANSPORTER ROOM CORRIDOR ANGOSIAN TRANSPORT TURBOLIFT SHIP ENGINEERING JEFFERIES TUBE CARGO BAY SHUTTLE BAY DETENTION CELL ANGOSIAN SENATE ANGOSIAN TRANSPORT SHIP STAR TREK: "The Hunted" - 10/25/89 - PRONUNCIATION STAR TREK: THE NEXT GENERATION "The Hunted" PRONUNCIATION GUIDE ANGOSIA ang-GO-sha ROGA ROE-gah DANAR DAY-nar STAR TREK: "The Hunted" - 10/25/89 - TEASER 1. STAR TREK: THE NEXT GENERATION "The Hunted" TEASER FADE IN: 1 EXT. ANGOSIAN CAPITOL - ESTABLISHING (MATTE) A cluster of low buildings, a bud of civilization whose outlying roadways vein a vast plain. PICARD (V.O.) Captain's log, Stardate 43489.2. We have arrived at Angosia, a planet that is eager for membership in the Federation. 2 EXT. ANGOSIAN SENATE PICARD and RIKER are with NAYROK, the Angosian leader, in the rotunda of the senate building. The Angosians take their civic duty very seriously and the senate is considered a repository of wisdom and law. Various government officials and petitioners pass by, either in deep discussion or thoughtful meditation. PICARD I'm greatly impressed with what I've seen so far, Prime Minister. NAYROK Then I hope it will reflect favorably in your report, Captain. RIKER It's a tribute to your people to have recovered so rapidly from the Tarsian War. NAYROK It is indeed. (sadly) We are not warriors. We believe reason can settle disputes. But not every culture agrees with our position. PICARD An unfortunate reality. STAR TREK: "The Hunted" - REV. 10/27/89 - TEASER 2. 2 CONTINUED: NAYROK The development of the mind, the cultivation of the intellect -- these are the pursuits to which the Angosians have dedicated themselves for centuries. Nayrok nods and is about to respond... but is interrupted by ZAYNAR, an aide who casually interrupts. ZAYNAR I'm sorry to interrupt, Prime Minister. There's a problem. May I see you a moment? NAYROK Excuse me, gentlemen. 3 ANGLE -- on Picard and Riker. PICARD I think they'll make a fine addition to the Federation, Number One... Riker acknowledges, but without enthusiasm. Off Picard's look... RIKER I'm not sure I'd want to live here. A little stuffy for my taste. Picard thinks it over, nods slightly. It's a little dry for his taste, too. 4 ANOTHER ANGLE -- Nayrok returns, his face has a look of concern... NAYROK A prisoner has escaped from the penal colony on Lunar Five. (shaking his head) Two guards are dead. The prisoner has taken a transport vessel. STAR TREK: "The Hunted" - REV. 10/27/89 - TEASER 2A. 4 CONTINUED: RIKER Do you have means of pursuit? STAR TREK: "The Hunted" - 10/25/89 - TEASER 3. 4 CONTINUED: NAYROK The tracking station was sabotaged. The entire base is in chaos. We have ordered ships from the surface to follow him, but to be honest, our civilian pilots are not trained to handle this... RIKER With your permission, sir... ? Picard acknowledges. RIKER (keying his insignia) Mister Data, a stolen transport vessel has departed from Lunar Five. Have you picked it up on sensors? INTERCUT: 5 INT. MAIN BRIDGE DATA is in command. GEORDI, WORF, and WESLEY are on the bridge. Supernumeraries. DATA (checking sensors) Yes, Commander. RIKER Good. Detain the vessel and quarantine the pilot. (to Nayrok) Is he armed? NAYROK Yes. And he's very dangerous, Captain. Lunar Five is our maximum security facility. RIKER Did you hear that, Data? DATA Yes, Commander, we will use extreme caution. STAR TREK: "The Hunted" - 10/25/89 - TEASER 4. 5 CONTINUED: RIKER Keep us informed. Riker out. WORF On screen, sir... END INTERCUT: 6 ANGLE ON THE MAIN VIEWER (OPTICAL) A small ship, as well as an asteroid, are visible in front of the planet. DATA Specifications on the vessel, Mister Worf. WORF No warp drive. Minimal weaponry. DATA Heading, Ensign Crusher. WESLEY Three-one-nine mark two-five-zero. GEORDI Vessel's speed increasing to point-two impulse. He's seen us, Data. 7 EXT. SPACE - THE ENTERPRISE (OPTICAL) Moving toward the transport vessel... which disappears behind the asteroid. 8 INT. MAIN BRIDGE (OPTICAL) On the main viewscreen, we see that only a small piece of the ship appears on the other side of the asteroid. GEORDI (reacts) The ship's drive section... WESLEY What happened to the rest of his ship? STAR TREK: "The Hunted" - 10/25/89 - TEASER 5. 8 CONTINUED: DATA Scan the drive section for life form readings. WORF None. DATA Mister Crusher, bring us around to the back side of the asteroid. A beat. GEORDI Sensors indicate wreckage on the asteroid's surface. WORF No life signs. DATA Apparently, he did not survive. Wesley, puzzled, is checking his console... and he looks surprised. WESLEY Data, the drive section... where'd it go? 8A ANGLE - MAIN VIEW SCREEN (OPTICAL) Only the asteroid remains on screen. The ship is gone. Data reacts... looks at his sensors... looks at the screen. WESLEY There's no sign of it on its previous heading. Someone must be at the helm. RIKER'S COM VOICE Status report, Mister Data? There's no beating around this bush. STAR TREK: "The Hunted" - 10/25/89 - TEASER 6. 8A CONTINUED: DATA (simply) I am afraid the prisoner has eluded us, sir. FADE OUT. END OF TEASER STAR TREK: "The Hunted" - 10/25/89 - ACT ONE 7. ACT ONE FADE IN: 9 INT. MAIN BRIDGE Picard and Riker have returned, are listening to Data's explanation. Other personnel are there as before. DATA We followed procedures precisely. Scanners indicated no life forms present in the drive section. I cannot explain how he escaped. WORF Incoming message from the Angosian prime minister. PICARD (settling into the Command Chair) On screen. 10 ANGLE ON THE MAIN VIEWER (OPTICAL) The planet's surface is replaced by an image of Nayrok, seated in his office. NAYROK We've identified the prisoner, Captain. His name is Roga Danar. His criminal record is too long to go into. But you must be aware that he is given to bouts of uncontrollable violence. PICARD We appreciate the warning, Prime Minister. We will keep you posted on our progress. The image on the viewscreen returns to planet. RIKER Mister La Forge, how far and how fast can that transport ship travel? STAR TREK: "The Hunted" - 10/25/89 - ACT ONE 8. 10 CONTINUED: GEORDI Without warp drive, there's no way it could be outside our range by now. WESLEY We've been sweeping the area constantly, Commander. There's nothing within sensor range. Picard frowns, frustrated. This annoying little space gnat is turning out to be more than they bargained for. PICARD A cloaking device? WORF The Angosians have no cloaking technology... RIKER (it dawns on him) Unless he's borrowing one... (off Picard's look) If he's hanging over the planet's pole, its magnetic field could confuse the sensors. DATA I believe I can recalibrate our sensors to read through the electromagnetic interference over the poles, Commander. RIKER (to Wesley) Realign for polar orbit. WESLEY Aye, sir. Data sits, his fingers dance over the keys on the console. He looks at 11 HIS MONITOR - COMPUTER GRAPHIC of the planet, over the north pole, we can see magnetic interference which Data tunes out, revealing an image of a craft hovering there, hiding... STAR TREK: "The Hunted" - 10/25/89 - ACT ONE 9. 12 ANGLE DATA There he is, Commander. You were correct. RIKER The fellow knows all the tricks, doesn't he... Data studies his console, confused. DATA There are still no life form readings coming from the vessel. GEORDI It could be the magnetic interference, Data. DATA I have compensated. There are no readings. PICARD We'll have our answer shortly. Lock on tractor beam, Mister La Forge. GEORDI Tractor beam locking on. 13 EXT. SPACE - THE ENTERPRISE (OPTICAL) The tractor beam shoots out from the Enterprise towards the tiny half-ship, which begins to turn to face the Enterprise. 14 INT. MAIN BRIDGE Data checks his instruments. DATA Sir, the vessel is coming about. RIKER (looking over his shoulder) Is he out of his mind? STAR TREK: "The Hunted" - 10/25/89 - ACT ONE 10. 14 CONTINUED: WORF Sensors detect a massive power build up in his aft thrusters. PICARD On Main Viewer, Mister Worf. 15 ANGLE - VIEWSCREEN (OPTICAL) The tiny ship is now facing the Enteprise. It is slowly approaching within the tractor beam. GEORDI He's making a suicide run. DATA Shields have been automatically activated. Tractor beam disengaged. 16 EXT. SPACE - THE TRANSPORT VESSEL (OPTICAL) No longer enveloped in the tractor beam, the transport vessel hurtles head on towards the Enterprise, then skids off the invisible shield, away from the ship. 17 INT. MAIN BRIDGE WESLEY (reacts) He's bounced off our shields. RIKER That's one trick I didn't even know about... PICARD Ensign Crusher, fix coordinates of that vessel. We'll transport the whole thing to a shuttlebay if we have to. Data has been working hard the whole time. DATA I do not think that will be necessary, Captain. He is no longer in the drive section. (MORE) STAR TREK: "The Hunted" - 10/25/89 - ACT ONE 11. 17 CONTINUED: DATA (Cont'd) (reactions) I anticipated this diversionary tactic based on his pattern to date. We are picking up a cylindrical object approximately seven meters in length and three meters in diameter. WORF On screen, Captain. 18 ANGLE ON THE MAIN VIEWER (OPTICAL) A tiny, cylindrical object is just visible. WESLEY An escape pod. GEORDI This guy is incredible. 19 INT. MAIN BRIDGE DATA (puzzled) Yet there are still no life form readings. PICARD Transporter Room Four, prepare to beam aboard anything that's large enough to be a humanoid adult from inside that pod. WORF Security to Transporter Room Four. O'BRIEN'S VOICE We are holding the contents in stasis pending arrival of security. An illicit weapon has been detected in the transport beam, sir. It's been rendered inoperable. RIKER (to Worf) Let's greet our guest. STAR TREK: "The Hunted" - REV. 10/27/89 - ACT ONE 12. 19 CONTINUED: Riker and Worf disappear into the turbolift. 20 INT. TRANSPORTER ROOM TWO ARMED SECURITY OFFICERS wait with the transporter engineer. All eyes and weapons are trained on 21 THE TRANSPORTER PAD (OPTICAL) It glitters to life. An image begins to materialize. ROGA DANAR stands before them. Haggard. On the edge. A dangerous gleam to his eye, like a frightened, trapped animal. Without wasting a second, Roga aims his rifle and pulls the trigger. Nothing happens. SECURITY MAN Just stay where you are. Roga barely reacts... with the quickness of a snake striking, he lunges off the transporter pad... 22 WIDE - THE SECURITY MEN (OPTICAL) fire their phasers... he's so quick, one shot misses him... the other connects with him in mid-air but he still lands on the security guard, takes him out, rolling off him, hit by another phaser shot, growls with pain, sags, then pulls himself back up and leaps at the second guard... 23 INT. TRANSPORTER CORRIDOR They come crashing through from the Transporter Room... Roga and the guard wrapped up together, fighting for control of the guard's phaser... the transporter engineer comes from behind, grabs Roga... who throws him backwards hard against the wall... 24 WORF AND RIKER arrive... RIKER What the hell... STAR TREK: "The Hunted" - REV. 10/27/89 - ACT ONE 13. 24 CONTINUED: Riker and Worf charge Roga... it's like two linebackers trying to bring down a powerful running back... and then the other two guards are on him too and O'Brien... and it's a gang tackle... and finally with all of their force, Roga goes down... pinned to the floor. 25 ANGLE - RIKER He looks down at the enraged face of Roga still struggling, helpless now. RIKER Take him to the detention cell. Set phasers on kill. FADE OUT. END OF ACT ONE STAR TREK: "The Hunted" - 10/25/89 - ACT TWO 14. ACT TWO FADE IN: 26 EXT. SPACE - THE ENTERPRISE (OPTICAL) continuing to orbit the planet. 26A INT. MAIN BRIDGE (OPTICAL) Picard at command, Worf at Tactical, Data at Ops, Supernumerary at Conn. The prime minister on the main viewscreen... Riker ENTERS during the conversation... his arm repaired. NAYROK We need a few hours to get the containment field on Lunar Five operational before we pick him up. The damage he caused during his escape was considerable. PICARD We will await your signal. NAYROK I appreciate your patience. Our prison psychologist has recommended you keep Danar fully sedated until he's ready for transport. PICARD He's in our highest security detention area... there shouldn't be any more problems... NAYROK Do not relax your security for one moment, Captain. He is extremely violent and cunning, as you already know, Commander Riker. I'm so pleased to learn your injuries are not serious. My most sincere apologies... RIKER None required, Prime Minister. Nayrok acknowledges. STAR TREK: "The Hunted" - 10/25/89 - ACT TWO 15. 26A CONTINUED: NAYROK I will send a transport vessel to retrieve him as soon as possible. Nayrok out. The screen returns to a view of the planet. 26B ANGLE Riker moves to Data... RIKER Have you run a diagnostic on the sensors, Data? DATA Yes, Commander. There is nothing wrong with the ship's sensors. The reason that we did not sense any life signs aboard the escape vessel is because the prisoner has no life signs. Picard and Riker exchange a glance. RIKER Computer, identify the occupant in the detention cell. COMPUTER The detention cell is vacant at this time. PICARD Can he be some sort of android? DATA Our sensors can identify artificial lifeforms, Captain. Apparently, he is capable of deceiving the sensors. 27 OMITTED 28 INT. DETENTION CELL High security is evident. A guard is stationed outside the cell. The room is divided by a glowing rim, indicating an activated invisible forcefield. STAR TREK: "The Hunted" - 10/25/89 - ACT TWO 16. 28A CLOSE ON ROGA Lying on a bed, Roga borders between consciousness and unconsciousness. He tosses from side to side, tortured by a nightmare. 28B INT. CORRIDOR (FORMERLY SCENE 27) Troi walks down the corridor towards her quarters, slows as she senses something. 29 INT. DETENTION CELL Roga's mental pain has intensified. His face is beaded with sweat. He moans in anguish. 30 INT. CORRIDOR - TROI reacts, turns around and heads back in the direction from which she came. 31 INT. DETENTION CELL Roga's eyes open, he sits up abruptly on the edge of his bed, recuperating from the demons of his subconscious, turns to see Troi standing there outside the divider. For a beat, he has to shake himself back to reality... their eyes meet. TROI Are you all right? He stares at her, considers the question... and may not be entirely sure of the answer. Surprisingly, Roga's manner is calm and circumspect, the antithesis of the labels he has been given. There is no sign of the violent nature he displayed in the Transporter Room. If anything, he is detatched and cerebral. He stands, looks around, disoriented. ROGA What is this ship? TROI You are on board the USS Enterprise. ROGA A war vessel? STAR TREK: "The Hunted" - 10/25/89 - ACT TWO 17. 31 CONTINUED: TROI A Federation starship. ROGA (reacts) Federation... TROI We were orbiting Angosia when you escaped from Lunar Five. He examines the force field around him, sticks his hand out... the force field reacts. ROGA It seems I am a victim of my own bad timing. (examines her) And you are the keeper of this jail? TROI I am Deanna Troi. Ship's counselor. He reacts negatively to her profession. ROGA "Counselor". Too bad. I'd rather you were a jailer to keep me company during my return trip. He moves to a sink and washes his face. ROGA (casually probing) I assume that we are returning to Lunar Five... TROI That terrifies you, doesn't it? ROGA I have just killed two men to get out of there, Counselor. (sad, almost apologetic) I am fully capable of killing you too. A terrifying thought, isn't it? Even to me. A line which says a lot about his inner turmoil. She is sensing extraordinary things from this man. STAR TREK: "The Hunted" - 10/25/89 - ACT TWO 18. 31 CONTINUED: (2) TROI Do they mistreat you there? ROGA Not at all. I am comfortable, well fed and housed. (bitter) The Angosians take good care of their... prisoners. I am simply not allowed to ever leave. Beat. He moves toward her... ROGA (continuing) Do you visit all the prisoners, Counselor? Are you a specialist in criminal behavior? Or am I just an interesting specimen that landed on your ship like an insect to be studied under your microscope... TROI Why do you have such anger toward me? ROGA (seriously) A girl with long dark hair broke my heart long ago... out of bitterness and rejection, I turned to crime... She looks at him until he breaks into a grin... ROGA How about this one -- my mother abandoned me when I was born and I never had the guidance a wild young man needs... TROI Why are you doing this? ROGA Playing games? Isn't that what you do, Counselor? Isn't that what all of you mind control experts do? STAR TREK: "The Hunted" - REV. 10/26/89 - ACT TWO 19. 31 CONTINUED: (3) TROI I am not a mind control expert. I came because I sensed you were in pain. ROGA And now, what do you sense? TROI (beat, reacts) The pain is gone. ROGA Interesting, isn't it? Off her reaction... 31A INT. CAPTAIN'S READY ROOM Troi and Picard. TROI There is a duality in the man... hard to describe... he is aware of his crimes... in fact, they deeply trouble him... PICARD (sensing a problem) Counselor... TROI He is intelligent... a thoughtful man. Typically Angosian. I know what he's done, but when I am with him, I cannot believe he is randomly and deliberately violent... in fact, inherantly, he has a non-violent personality... PICARD Counselor, it took five men to restrain him... and he took apart half of the Transporter Room in the process. TROI I am not opening the door for him, Captain. STAR TREK: "The Hunted" - 10/25/89 - ACT TWO 20. 31A CONTINUED: A beat as they look at each other and pull away from the moment's conflict. TROI I can only tell you I sense something very unusual about this man. Something that is not inherent to a criminal personality... PICARD Your dedication to helping others in pain is admirable, Counselor. But in a few hours, I will turn him over to the Angosians... and be glad to do so. TROI I understand. She exits. Stay a beat on Picard. 31B OMITTED 32 INT. MAIN BRIDGE (OPTICAL) Troi ENTERS, goes to Data who is working at an Aft Station. Worf is at his station. Otherwise supernumeraries fill the posts. TROI Data, do we have a link up to the Angosian central computer? DATA Yes, Counselor... we are copying records for Federation inspection pursuant to their application for admittance. TROI Can I see a police record on Roga Danar? Data presses the keys on the console. The screen flashes information, which Data quickly scans. DATA There is no police record, Counselor. STAR TREK: "The Hunted" - 10/25/89 - ACT TWO 21. 32 CONTINUED: TROI But that's impossible. He's been in prison. Data makes a few other entries... DATA Lunar Five is a military prison facility... TROI Military... he's a soldier... ? DATA That may provide an explanation for the tactics he was able to use against us when we tried to capture him... TROI (looking over his shoulder) It doesn't say what he was arrested for. Call up his military record. Data goes to work... 33 ANGLE - INCLUDE THE MONITOR (OPTICAL) A military file... including a list of campaigns in which he fought... DATA (V.O.) He served in many campaigns during the Tarsian War, received two promotions, to the rank of Subhadar... a very honorable tour of duty... 34 RESUME - TROI studying the screen... TROI What was this man's crime? STAR TREK: "The Hunted" - 10/25/89 - ACT TWO 22. 35 thru OMITTED 37 38 INT. DETENTION CELL Danar looks up to see Troi arriving... he is even calmer than before. TROI I've learned you are a soldier. ROGA I was a soldier. TROI Why were you put in prison? ROGA Obviously, because I am a threat to society. TROI There is no police record. What did you do? ROGA (calmly) Everything they asked me to do. That's why I became such a threat. TROI I don't understand. ROGA Why are you bothering to try, Counselor? TROI I want to help if I can. ROGA (if you really want to help) Unlock the door. A beat. TROI Why does a non-violent man commit acts of excessive violence? STAR TREK: "The Hunted" - 10/25/89 - ACT TWO 23. 38 CONTINUED: ROGA You can learn to do it if you have to. TROI Did you have to? ROGA It was war. TROI This started in the war... ROGA It started the day I volunteered, Counselor... the day training began... the day I met my first instructor. He called himself a "counselor" too. Off her reaction... FADE OUT. END OF ACT TWO STAR TREK: "The Hunted" - REV. 10/26/89 - ACT THREE 24. ACT THREE FADE IN: 39 INT. OBSERVATION LOUNGE Picard, Riker, Troi, Data, Beverly. TROI Roga Danar was an idealistic young man who answered his people's call to service. He joined the military to fight for the Angosian way of life. He didn't realize that by doing so... he would forever have to give up that way of life. He's not the same man who left home to go to war. He's been through intense psychological manipulation as well as biochemical modifications. BEVERLY At Troi's request I examined him... his cellular structure has been been significantly altered... They used a combination of cryptobiolin, triclenidil, macrospentol... and a few things I don't even recognize. RIKER Was he a prisoner of war? Who did this to him? TROI His own government. Riker exchanges a glance with Picard who is growing more uncomfortable by the moment. TROI He has been programmed to be the perfect soldier. He can be absolutely normal, but whenever a danger is perceived, the programming clicks in and takes over. Intelligence, memory, strength, reflexes -- all become enhanced. He is conditioned to survive at any cost. STAR TREK: "The Hunted" - REV. 10/26/89 - ACT THREE 25. 39 CONTINUED: BEVERLY One of the new substances in his cellular structure even shields electrical impulses. DATA That would explain why our sensors did not detect him. Picard is holding a building rage. PICARD Why was this man assigned to the Lunar Five facility? TROI He committed no crime. He says he was ordered there... with others like him. The first soldiers who had returned to Angosia had trouble. The rules changed too quickly. A lost temper could result in murder. DATA Counselor, did no one try to adjust their progam? TROI (shakes her head) They were simply exiled to Lunar Five. A beat. They look to their captain for a reaction. His look registers his outrage. 40 INT. DETENTION CELL Roga is on his bunk, eyes open, looking up... glances over and sees Data looking at him. ROGA What do you want... DATA Am I disturbing you? ROGA Yes. STAR TREK: "The Hunted" - REV. 10/27/89 - ACT THREE 26. 40 CONTINUED: DATA Then I will leave. As Data begins to go, Roga stands... ROGA Wait. I'd rather talk to someone. I'm sorry. Data returns. Roga reacts as he gets a closer look ROGA Why do you have yellow eyes? DATA Simply a lack of pigmentation. I am an android. You and I have something in common. ROGA We do? DATA Yes. We have both been programmed. ROGA (reacts) Ah, you have been talking with Counselor Troi. (beat) It is not at all the same, android. DATA I do not mean to belittle your condition. I understand your dilemma. But I am curious. My program can be altered and changed. Yours cannot? ROGA The man I once was is still inside me... but this conditioning has been imposed... woven together with my thoughts and feelings and responses. How do you separate the program from the man? STAR TREK: "The Hunted" - REV. 10/27/89 - ACT THREE 26A. 40 CONTINUED: (2) DATA Without further analysis of your condition by Counselor Troi or Doctor Crusher, I cannot say. But it would seem possible. STAR TREK: "The Hunted" - REV. 10/26/89 - ACT THREE 27. 40 CONTINUED: (2) ROGA (scorn) Doctors. Angosian doctors did this to me. If it could be undone, wouldn't they undo it? DATA I cannot answer that. ROGA Nor can I... and I ask the question every moment of every day. 41 thru OMITTED 42 43 INT. READY ROOM (OPTICAL) Picard, controlling his displeasure, talks to Prime Minister Nayrok on the viewscreen. Troi observes. NAYROK Captain, what he is telling you is full of half-truths... he is a prisoner, what do you expect him to say about us? PICARD Then, perhaps you'd clarify it for me... NAYROK These soldiers were resettled on Lunar Five... it was to be their colony... PICARD Their Gulag... NAYROK I beg your pardon? PICARD Was it a forced "resettlement"? NAYROK It was for their own protection as well as that of others. Most of them are quite happy there... (MORE) STAR TREK: "The Hunted" - REV. 10/26/89 - ACT THREE 27A. 43 CONTINUED: NAYROK (Cont'd) we have gone to great lengths to give them a fine quality of life... PICARD Even the most comfortable prison is a prison, Prime Minister. STAR TREK: "The Hunted" - REV. 10/26/89 - ACT THREE 28. 43 CONTINUED: (2) NAYROK A few agitators like Danar forced us to add security... PICARD Prime Minister, my medical team has suggested there may be treatment alternatives... NAYROK Captain, I assure you all alternatives have been explored. And this discussion is now treading upon matters of Angosian security. This is not your concern. Picard cannot argue. NAYROK (continuing) I have dispatched a ship to rendezvous with you and transport the prisoner back to Lunar Five. On behalf of Angosia, I thank the Federation for its assistance in retrieving our citizen. The viewscreen goes blank as the image of Nayrok disappears and Picard looks to Troi with frustration. 44 INT. DETENTION CELL Roga and Data are still talking, the atmosphere more relaxed than before... ROGA Were you built for combat, android? DATA No. But my program does include military strategy... that is how I was finally able to anticipate your last tactic and capture you. ROGA You did that? Perhaps you would be better at combat than you think. STAR TREK: "The Hunted" - REV. 10/27/89 - ACT THREE 29. 44 CONTINUED: DATA I am not programmed to kill. ROGA My improved reflexes have allowed me to kill eighty-four times. And my improved memory lets me remember the face of each of those eighty-four. Can you understand how that feels? DATA I am incapable of any feeling. ROGA (beat) Then I envy you. Data reacts as Picard and Troi ENTER. He rises. Picard acknowledges him... looks at Roga who puts his food down as he senses his time has come. TROI Roga, this is Captain Picard ROGA Captain... PICARD Mister Danar, I am going to transfer you back to Angosian security. They are en route and will arrive shortly. I came to tell you that I have no choice. The prime minister has insisted and we have no right to refuse. ROGA (sympathetic) And you would be foolish if you even considered it, Captain... because they are very correct. I am dangerous. I have no place in a civilized society. TROI I do not believe that. DATA Nor do I. STAR TREK: "The Hunted" - REV. 10/27/89 - ACT THREE 30. 44 CONTINUED: (2) PICARD I respect my officers' judgement, Danar. I wish I could help further. If a way appears to me, I will. ROGA I appreciate your telling me face-to-face. PICARD I felt you deserved that much. ROGA (nods, not a threat) You deserve to know that I must use whatever means I can to escape. Picard studies him a beat. His insignia BEEPS. WORF'S COM VOICE Captain, the Angosian transport vessel has arrived. PICARD Inform them the transfer will take place shortly. Picard out. Mister Data, to the bridge please... Picard nods to Roga and EXITS. Data pauses as Roga smiles at him... ROGA Take care of yourself, android. I enjoyed our talk. DATA Good-bye, Roga. And he follows the captain out. Troi and Roga exchange a look. TROI Perhaps when this planet becomes a member of the Federation, we will be able... STAR TREK: "The Hunted" - REV. 10/27/89 - ACT THREE 30A. 44 CONTINUED: (3) ROGA I will not be here to see it, Counselor. Because even with this overwhelming demand to survive that they've built into my soul... I would rather die than return to Lunar Five. Off her reaction... 45 EXT. SPACE - THE ENTERPRISE (OPTICAL) An Angosian transport ship is now in proximity to the Enterprise. STAR TREK: "The Hunted" - REV. 10/26/89 - ACT THREE 31. 46 INT. MAIN BRIDGE (OPTICAL) Riker, Data, Wesley, Worf, supernumeraries. On the viewscreen are two Angosians -- WAGNOR and his first officer. Picard faces the viewscreen. WAGNOR Captain Picard, we're ready to receive the prisoner. Now transmitting the coordinates of our holding cell. DATA (to Picard) Coordinates received, sir. PICARD (to Wagnor) Stand by for transport. Picard out. The viewscreen returns to the starfield. Picard turns to Worf. PICARD (continuing) Mister Worf, have all security precautions been taken? WORF Release of the force field and activation of the transporter will be virtually simultaneous, Captain... There will only be a point-one second interval between them. RIKER Even Danar can't move that fast. WORF There will be a full security contingent present. Phasers will be set on kill. PICARD (acknowledges) Proceed. Worf EXITS... STAR TREK: "The Hunted" - REV. 10/27/89 - ACT THREE 32. 47 INT. DETENTION CELL (OPTICAL) Roga is on one side of the room; Troi, Worf, and three security guards are on the other, phasers ready for the least sign of trouble. Worf's insignia BEEPS. O'BRIEN'S COM VOICE Transporter Room One to Lieutenant Worf. We're ready. WORF Proceed. Troi and Roga exchange a look. O'BRIEN'S COM VOICE Energizing... The forcefield momentarily SHIMMERS into visibility and then VANISHES as it's powered down. Roga sees that the forcefield is gone the instant the transporter effect begins... With all his strength, he strains against the beam, trying to break free. TROI Roga, don't, you'll be killed... Worf and the others raise their phasers... 47A INT. TRANSPORTER ROOM as the transporter chief works the console. O'BRIEN (to com panel) I'm losing him... what the hell... ? 47B INT. DETENTION CELL (OPTICAL) Roga makes a final leap out of the beam and an EXPLOSION fills the room. When the smoke clears, Troi, Worf and security are on the floor, dazed... he is gone. 48 OMITTED FADE OUT. END OF ACT THREE STAR TREK: "The Hunted" - REV. 10/27/89 - ACT FOUR 33. ACT FOUR FADE IN: 49 INT. MAIN BRIDGE Picard, Riker, Data, supernumeraries. RIKER (to com panel) Security personnel, full alert. Shut down all shuttlebays, transporters, and turbolifts. 49A INT. DETENTION CELL Worf, Troi, and the security guards are picking themselves off the floor. Worf taps his insignia: WORF'S COM VOICE Captain, a phaser is missing. We must assume that he's armed. 49B INT. MAIN BRIDGE Picard and Riker exchange a look. PICARD (to Data) Sound general quarters. Clear corridors of all non-essential personnel. I don't want him taking any hostages. Data works his panel. DATA General quarters sounded, sir. PICARD Raise security containment fields immediately on decks thirty-four, thirty-five, and thirty-six. As Data complies, Riker gets an idea. RIKER Data... put the turbolifts back on line. If Danar sees they're operating, he may try to use one. (MORE) STAR TREK: "The Hunted" - REV. 10/27/89 - ACT FOUR 33A. 49B CONTINUED: RIKER (Cont'd) (to Picard) Soon as he does, we have him. Picard nods grimly. He wants this situation contained as soon as possible. STAR TREK: "The Hunted" - REV. 10/27/89 - ACT FOUR 34. 50 INT. CORRIDOR (OPTICAL) as Roga calmly moves through it, phaser in hand, senses alert. He peers around a corridor. A security guard stands nearby the glowing rim of a forcefield. Roga ducks back around the corner. What to do? He approaches a turbolift. Its door OPENS. Roga hesitates -- then enters the turbolift. 51 INT. MAIN BRIDGE Picard, Data, supernumeraries. DATA Sir, unauthorized access of turbolift dive on deck thirty-four. RIKER He took the bait. PICARD Data -- override its destination and divert that turbolift to a position near Lieutenant Worf's current location. Data works his panel. 52 INT. CORRIDOR (Not the same corridor we've just seen.) Worf and a security guard are facing a turbolift, standing well clear of the door with phasers levelled at it. Worf taps his insignia: WORF We're in position. DATA'S COM VOICE Four seconds to arrival. The door OPENS. The turbolift's empty -- except for a phaser on the floor. We HEAR the SHRIEK of a phaser set to overload. Worf immediately slaps his communicator -- STAR TREK: "The Hunted" - REV. 10/30/89 - ACT FOUR 35. 52 CONTINUED: WORF Phaser on overload! Seal this deck -- Worf swiftly drops to his knees, picks up the overloading phaser, opens it, makes a quick adjustment to it. The SHRIEK ENDS. WORF (cont'd) Captain, the overload's been averted. Worf inspects the phaser: WORF (cont'd) Ingenious. 52AA INT. CORRIDOR (OPTICAL) (Same one we saw Roga in before.) The security guard still at his post. He hears a sound, turns... it's Roga, who dispatches him quickly with a blow to the neck. The Security Guard crumbles. Roga quickly kneels beside him, grabs hold of one of the guard's hands and presses a finger to his communicator. ROGA (to computer) Drop force field on deck thirty-six. The force field SHIMMERS for an instant and then disappears. Roga is immediately up and running down the corridor. 52A INT. MAIN BRIDGE DATA Sir, containment field down on deck thirty-six. RIKER How the hell did he manage that? From Picard -- the simple statement. PICARD He's headed for Engineering. STAR TREK: "The Hunted" - REV. 10/27/89 - ACT FOUR 35A. 52A CONTINUED: RIKER (to Comm) Riker to La Forge. No response. Alarmed, Riker tries again: RIKER (cont'd) Engineering -- respond. Still no response. STAR TREK: "The Hunted" - REV. 10/27/89 - ACT FOUR 36. 53 INT. ENGINEERING Geordi and two engineering crewmembers are sprawled unconscious. PAN to reveal Roga standing by a wall display and looking at a "map" of the Enterprise. 54 ON ROGA crossing to the isolinear chips and going to work. 54A INT. MAIN BRIDGE DATA Sir -- someone in Engineering is attempting to override the security system lockout. RIKER Riker to Worf. He's in Engineering... WORF'S COM VOICE Acknowledged, Commander. PICARD Data -- I want you to stall Danar. Allow him to think he's succeeding. DATA (as he works) As he bypasses each subsystem, I can reroute it without his knowledge. PICARD Make it so. 54B INT. ENGINEERING as Danar moves isolinear chips around. 54C INT. MAIN BRIDGE as Data compensates on his console. With each "move," Data is more impressed with Danar's skills. STAR TREK: "The Hunted" - REV. 10/27/89 - ACT FOUR 37. 54C CONTINUED: DATA Danar is extremely adept, sir. I am not certain which security measure he is attempting to circumvent. (then, surprised) Sir, Danar has succeeded in restoring power to Shuttlebay Two. 54D INT. ENGINEERING as Danar crosses to the reactor core. 55 NEW ANGLE as Roga quickly ascends the reactor core, disappears. 55A INT. MAIN BRIDGE Data works his console. DATA I have overridden Danar's bypass; Shuttlebay Two is once again inactive. PICARD Very good, Mister Data. And now we know where he's headed. 56 ANGLE ON MAIN ENGINEERING Worf and two security guards ENTER. Geordi and the two engineering crewmembers are slowly coming around. 57 INT. JEFFERIES TUBE Roga is walking through a Jefferies Tube. STAR TREK: "The Hunted" - REV. 10/27/89 - ACT FOUR 38. 58 INT. ENGINEERING Geordi's sitting up, shaking off a phaser stun. GEORDI He surprised us... came out of nowhere. I didn't know anyone could move that fast... Worf's insignia BEEPS. DATA'S COM VOICE Lieutenant, I am reading an open access panel... K-twelve, deck thirty. WORF Acknowledged. GEORDI Danar must have climbed the reactor core and gotten into a Jefferies tube. He could be anywhere. WORF We believe he is attempting to reach Shuttlebay Two. GEORDI (surprised) That's twenty-five decks up from here... quite a climb... but I wouldn't put it past him... WORF There is a full contingent of security waiting at all shuttlebays. Geordi looks up the reactor core shaft. Having seen Roga in action, he's not about to underestimate him: GEORDI You want my advice... double it. 59 INT. JEFFERIES TUBE Roga continues walking through the tube. He reaches an intersection where many wave guides and conduits come together. STAR TREK: "The Hunted" - REV. 10/27/89 - ACT FOUR 39. 59 CONTINUED: Roga takes one of the two phasers he's carrying, opens it, adjusts it. We HEAR the faint first stage of a PHASER OVERLOAD WHINE. Roga jams the phaser into the mass of conduit and continues his walk. 60 OMITTED 61 INT. MAIN BRIDGE DATA Reading another open access panel... Picard looks over his shoulder. PICARD (to Comm) Security team to Jefferies tube J-four, deck fifteen. SECURITY GUARD COM VOICE Security acknowledges. On our way. RIKER Deck fifteen. Only a few decks below the shuttlebay. Data turns to Picard. DATA Captain, I find it highly unlikely that Danar is attempting to reach Shuttlebay Two. PICARD Explain. DATA In our previous encounter, Danar employed a strategy of misdirection in an attempt to gain his objective. PICARD And you believe he's using the same tactic now. STAR TREK: "The Hunted" - REV. 10/27/89 - ACT FOUR 39A. 61 CONTINUED: DATA He is aware that our sensors are unable to track him. Yet he seems to be purposely leaving a trail for us to follow. Riker remains somewhat skeptical. RIKER And where do you think he's headed. DATA I am afraid his true destination remains a mystery. 61A INT. JEFFRIES TUBE Roga making quick adjustments in one of the access panels. 61B INT. MAIN BRIDGE Data notices a new reading on his panel. DATA Captain, readings now indicate an open access panel... Jeffries tube N-eleven, deck thirty-eight. Picard and Riker exchange concerned looks. PICARD He doubled back on us. RIKER The cargo bays? Picard makes a quick decision. PICARD (to Data) Advise personnel on deck thirty-eight to stay out of all Cargo Bays. DATA (checking) They would appear to be empty, sir. STAR TREK: "The Hunted" - REV. 10/27/89 - ACT FOUR 40. 61B CONTINUED: PICARD Good. I want you to flood them with Anastazine. Now it's Riker and Data who exchange looks. 62 OMITTED 63 INT. CARGO BAY Roga is working at the transporter console when gas begins to rush out from the floor and ceiling. As he reacts -- 63A INT. MAIN BRIDGE DATA (reading off panel) Sensors show Anestazine concentration of seventy parts per million within the cargo bays. RIKER That should have put our boy to sleep. PICARD Restore normal environmental conditions, Mister Data. 63B INT. DECK THIRTY-EIGHT CORRIDOR Worf and two security guards stand outside the entrance to one of the cargo bays, phasers ready. PICARD'S COM VOICE Move in security teams, Mister Worf. WORF Acknowledged. The cargo doors open. 63C INT. CARGO BAY They enter and spread out, moving through the assorted cases, boxes and supplies piled all around the room. STAR TREK: "The Hunted" - REV. 10/27/89 - ACT FOUR 41. 64 CLOSE on an opened cargo box. Worf sees it, rushes over. Something's been taken. Worf taps his insignia. WORF Worf to bridge. We have found no sign of the intruder. But there is a pressure suit missing from Cargo Bay Three. 64A INT. MAIN BRIDGE as Picard and Riker react. PICARD A pressure suit... RIKER Could be he's planning to enter Shuttlebay Two from outside the Enterprise... bypassing the security guards. PICARD Mister Worf -- 65 thru OMITTED 68 69 INT. CARGO BAY as Worf and the two security guards listen. PICARD'S COM VOICE Post security guards at all emergency airlocks on decks thirty-seven through thirty-nine... 69A ANGLE ON ROGA hiding behind a crate. The discarded pressure suit at his feet. WORF (O.S.) Aye, sir. I'll also cover the photon torpedo launchers... Danar may attempt to leave the ship that way. Worf out. Roga listens. SOUND of the DOOR CLOSING. Roga peeks: STAR TREK: "The Hunted" - REV. 10/27/89 - ACT FOUR 42. 70 ON THE DOOR - ROGA'S POV As the door CLOSES, the two security guards can be seen EXITING into the corridor. 71 thru OMITTED 77 78 WIDER ANGLE as an unarmed Roga emerges from his hiding place -- and at the same moment, Worf emerges from his hiding place, phaser aimed at Roga. WORF You are cunning, Danar... you must have Klingon blood. But the battle is over. ROGA My battle is never over. WORF (taps insignia) Worf to bridge. I have Danar... SMASH CUT TO: 79 INT. JEFFERIES TUBE as the phaser reaches overload and EXPLODES. 80 INT. CARGO BAY as the lights FLICKER and the ship SHAKES. Worf's thrown off balance for a split-second -- and that's all Roga needs. With a lightning move, he disarms Worf -- the phaser goes skidding across the floor -- and the fight is on. 80A INT. MAIN BRIDGE DATA Explosion in Jefferies Tube section T-nine-five. All external sensors are inoperative. RIKER Go to backup systems. STAR TREK: "The Hunted" - REV. 10/27/89 - ACT FOUR 43. 80A CONTINUED: DATA Unable to transfer control... 80B INT. CARGO BAY as Roga and Worf battle. Roga fights like a cornered tiger, finally gets the upper hand, drops Worf with a massive two-handed blow. Worf sags, nearly unconscious. Instinctively, Roga prepares to deliver a death blow -- but stops himself at the last second, runs off toward the transporter console. 81 NEW ANGLE (OPTICAL) Roga taps the face of the transporter console as he runs past it; the console and the pad spring to life and energize. Roga jumps onto the pad and DEMATERIALIZES. 82 thru OMITTED 83 83A INT. ANGOSIAN TRANSPORT SHIP (OPTICAL) as Roga MATERIALIZES in a compartment aft of the cockpit, opens the door. In the cockpit, Wagnor and his first officer turn, are stunned to see Roga... 84 INT. CARGO BAY Two security guards have joined Worf, who is still staggering from his fight with Roga. Worf opens a panel on the transporter console, sees that a phaser has been jerry-rigged into the circuitry. He taps his insignia: WORF Worf to bridge. Danar has escaped. He used a phaser to power the cargo transporter. (checks console) Coordinates indicate he beamed aboard the Angosian transport ship. STAR TREK: "The Hunted" - REV. 10/27/89 - ACT FOUR 44. 84A INT. MAIN BRIDGE Data is working his console with little success. PICARD Data, can you verify that? DATA Negative. External sensors are still nonfunctioning. PICARD Then we have no way to track him. RIKER That was his plan all along. And as Riker looks at Picard, we, FADE OUT. END OF ACT FOUR STAR TREK: "The Hunted" - REV. 10/26/89 - ACT FIVE 45. ACT FIVE FADE IN: 85 thru OMITTED 90 91 EXT. SPACE - THE ENTERPRISE (OPTICAL) in orbit. RIKER (V.O.) First officer's log, supplemental. We are continuing to repair damage to the ship's sensors following the escape of the Angosian prisoner Danar. He is still at large. 91A INT. MAIN BRIDGE Hours later. Worf has returned to the bridge. Riker is with him at Tactical. Troi is there too. RIKER (keys insignia) Engineering, I'm getting readings at Tactical, are we back up... GEORDI'S COM VOICE That's affirmative, Commander. PICARD Sweep the area, Mister Worf... DATA Captain, the prime minister is hailing us, priority one... PICARD On screen. 91B ANGLE - MAIN VIEWER (OPTICAL) PICARD Yes, Prime Minister. NAYROK Captain, I've just been informed that Roga Danar has attacked the penal colony on Lunar Five... STAR TREK: "The Hunted" - REV. 10/26/89 - ACT FIVE 46. 91B CONTINUED: PICARD Attacked it... ? NAYROK (angry) In our own police shuttle. Several of my people are wounded. Hundreds of prisoners are rioting. Some of them have escaped with Danar. We have reports they are headed for the capitol city... (scared) Captain, we are not suited to handle situations like this... that's why we created them... Picard frowns. He has much to say to the prime minister, but this is not the time. PICARD We'll send an away team, Prime Minister... Picard out. 91C ANGLE -- Leading the way... PICARD Counselor Troi, Mister Data, Lieutenant Worf... you will accompany me to the planet... 91D INT. CORRIDOR Outside the transporter room... moving... Picard with Troi and Data... followed by Riker and Worf... PICARD My understanding is that these men were programmed to survive, is that correct? STAR TREK: "The Hunted" - 10/25/89 - ACT FIVE 47. 91D CONTINUED: TROI Yes, Captain. PICARD And they will not kill unless their survival is at stake? DATA It is against their nature to do so, Captain. PICARD (dry) Then let us hope they do not believe their survival is at stake. Moving back to center on Riker and Worf... RIKER Mister Worf, you are personally responsible for the captain's safety. WORF I understand, Commander. As they enter the Transporter Room... 92 thru OMITTED 93 94 INT. ANGOSIAN SENATE - NIGHT Nayrok and a group of TEN ANGOSIAN SENATORS have gathered in the rotunda... Zaynar is passing out phaser rifles... the men look at the weapons in their hands as though they've hardly seen them before. NAYROK (addressing the senators) I do not expect them to listen to reason... I loathe the idea of a violent confrontation, but we must be prepared... Picard, Data, Troi and Worf MATERIALIZE. STAR TREK: "The Hunted" - REV. 10/27/89 - ACT FIVE 48. 94 CONTINUED: NAYROK (reacts) This is all you've brought... ? Where are your security men... ? PICARD We're not here to fight your wars, Prime Minister... NAYROK They've been seen moving toward the center of the city... people are scared, Captain... don't you understand... ? They're dangerous. PICARD You are dangerous. They are only victims. (reactions) You made them what they are. You asked them to defend your way of life... then you discarded them. ZAYNAR They were not happy here... TROI They were not welcome here. ZAYNAR It was the will of the people to resettle them... NAYROK Nobody was pleased with the solution, Captain... but we had to act for the greater good... DATA Prime Minister, if you have the skills to create a master soldier, can you not contradict the effect... ? NAYROK The chemicals can be removed from their systems. But we're not convinced the psychological conditioning can be entirely reversed. STAR TREK: "The Hunted" - REV. 10/27/89 - ACT FIVE 49. 94 CONTINUED: (2) DATA Have you tried? NAYROK We've studied it thoroughly... even before the training began, we knew there would be problems reversing it. It was a risk we had to take. WORF Did you reveal that "risk" to the men who volunteered for service? And now the shame shows on the Prime Minister's face... we know the answer is no... he doesn't have to say it. NAYROK We were helping them to survive the, war, don't you understand? They needed these skills... PICARD They are your sons, your brothers. And you have turned your backs on them. TROI There are methods of treatment... until you try them, you can't know if they will work. Even a partial recovery would give them some peace... ZAYNAR (repeating) It was the will of the people... TROI (losing patience with this guy) To allow them to suffer? NAYROK There was a referendum. The people weighed the costs involved. They chose the resettlement solution. ZAYNAR Besides, we may need to use them again some day. STAR TREK: "The Hunted" - REV. 10/27/89 - ACT FIVE 49A. 95 VARIOUS ANGLES - THE ROTUNDA (OPTICAL) Roga comes bursting through the door... he carries a phaser weapon... he walks toward us... a few beats later, more figures appear, firing as they enter... entering through doors, from the roof, windows, until a dozen veterans, all armed, are in the building... some have been wounded in the prison break... bloodied arms and legs... bandages... INTERCUT: 96 THE SENATORS OF ANGOSIA, along with Picard and his officers, watch them cross the rotunda toward them... 97 ROGA has sustained a wound somewhere along the line, his arm is bloodied... STAR TREK: "The Hunted" - REV. 11/3/89 - ACT FIVE 50. 98 NAYROK watches them come... 99 PICARD glances over and sees... Zaynar lifting his weapon... PICARD Unless you are prepared to die, I'd suggest you put that down. NAYROK (to Zaynar) Do as he says. 100 THE VETERANS (OPTICAL) committing acts of mayhem and destruction. ROGA Shoot us. Destroy us. Do what you have to do. But, by God, you will no longer ignore us. He fires a shot over the prime minister's head blowing a piece of the wall up behind him. The officials begin to react... raise their weapons... the veterans raise their weapons and we are about to have death in the hallowed halls of government... Picard steps out between the two sides, intent on quelling the immediate crisis. PICARD Danar, it appears to me that you are deliberately attempting to provoke a response... so you may justify your own attack on men who do not wish to fight... ROGA Cowards... PICARD Yes... (beat) But you are not programmed to murder cowards... and if they will not fight back, what will you do? STAR TREK: "The Hunted" - REV. 11/3/89 - ACT FIVE 50A. 100 CONTINUED: ROGA We will not go back... STAR TREK: "The Hunted" - 10/25/89 - ACT FIVE 51. 100 CONTINUED: NAYROCK You are programmed to survive... you can survive at the Lunar Five settlement... ROGA Survival is not enough... to exist is not enough... TROI Roga, tell them what you want. A long beat as he looks at her and then Nayrok. ROGA We want our lives back. We want to come home. NAYROK (political) I'm not prepared to negotiate under a threat, Danar... but if you will put down your arms and return peacefully to Lunar Five... I would be willing... ROGA Mister Prime Minister. Our respects, sir. But you'll have to force us... or try to. A beat. Nayrok pales. NAYROK (sotto, to Picard) Captain, you must do something, call your ship... PICARD You're quite right, Prime Minister. (keys insignia) Enterprise, prepare to beam the away team back. RIKER'S COM VOICE At your command, Captain. NAYROK You can't leave us like this, Picard. STAR TREK: "The Hunted" - REV. 10/26/89 - ACT FIVE 52. 100 CONTINUED: (2) PICARD We have everything we need for our report. Your prisoner has been returned to you. You have a decision to make... either try to force them back or welcome them home. In your own words, this is not our affair. We cannot interfere with the natural course of your society's development and I'd say it's likely to develop significantly during the next several minutes. (beat) It's been an interesting stay. When you are ready for membership in the Federation, we will be pleased to reconsider your application. He keys his insignia... PICARD Four to beam up, Mister Riker. And as he stares at the Prime Minister... Troi exchanges a look with Roga and the away team DEMATERIALIZES. 101 EXT. SPACE - THE ENTERPRISE (OPTICAL) 102 INT. MAIN BRIDGE The away team enters... Wesley is at Conn. RIKER Success, Captain? PICARD Number One, note in your report that if the government of Angosia survives the night, we will offer Federation assistance in the efforts to reprogram their veterans. RIKER And if the government doesn't survive? STAR TREK: "The Hunted" - 10/25/89 - ACT FIVE 53. 102 CONTINUED: PICARD I have a feeling they will choose to. He sits in his command chair. PICARD Mister Crusher, set coordinates for the starbase at Lya Three. WESLEY Coordinates set, Captain. PICARD Engage. 103 EXT. SPACE - THE ENTERPRISE (OPTICAL) As it warps away to a new adventure. FADE OUT. END OF ACT FIVE THE END STAR TREK: THE NEXT GENERATION "The High Ground" #40273-160 Written by Melinda M. 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FINAL DRAFT NOVEMBER 3, 1989 STAR TREK: "The High Ground" - 11/03/89 - CAST STAR TREK: THE NEXT GENERATION "The High Ground" CAST PICARD KYRIL FINN RIKER ALEXANA DEVOS DATA POLICE OFFICER BEVERLY WAITER/KATIK TROI GEORDI WORF WESLEY Non-Speaking RUTIANS IN PLAZA RUTIAN POLICE ANSATA TERRORISTS Non-Speaking SUPERNUMERARIES STAR TREK: "The High Ground" - 11/03/89 - SETS STAR TREK: THE NEXT GENERATION "The High Ground" SETS INTERIORS EXTERIORS USS ENTERPRISE USS ENTERPRISE MAIN BRIDGE CAPTAIN'S READY ROOM RUTIAN PLAZA OBSERVATION LOUNGE TRANSPORTER ROOM INDOOR/OUTDOOR CAFE MAIN ENGINEERING SICKBAY CORRIDOR ALEXANA'S OFFICE CAVERN STAR TREK: "The High Ground" - 11/03/89 - PRONUNCIATION STAR TREK: THE NEXT GENERATION "The High Ground" PRONUNCIATION GUIDE ANSATA Ahn-SAH-tah ALEXANA Alex-AH-nah DEVOS DEH-vohs KYRIL KIH-rill KATIK KAH-tick RUTIA RUE-tee-ah STAR TREK: "The High Ground" - REV. 11/7/89 - TEASER 1. STAR TREK: THE NEXT GENERATION "The High Ground" TEASER FADE IN: 1 EXT. SPACE - THE ENTERPRISE (OPTICAL) The Enterprise in orbit around a planet. PICARD (V.O.) Captain's log, Stardate 43510.7. The Enterprise has put in at Rutia Four to deliver medical supplies following an outbreak of violent protests. 2 EXT. PLAZA - DAY - ESTABLISHING Shops, a cafe, people strolling. A modern community. Beverly, Data and Worf are walking through the plaza. PICARD (V.O.) Although non-aligned, the planet has enjoyed a long trading relationship with the Federation. Beverly spots the cafe, and stops. BEVERLY We've still got a few minutes before our next meeting... Worf scans the plaza. Everything seem calm. They ENTER, and seat themselves at a table. A WAITER stands by the door staring intently into the plaza. He does not acknowledge the presence of the Starfleet officers. Beverly is becoming annoyed, she lifts her hand, signalling for service. BEVERLY Excuse me -- STAR TREK: "The High Ground" - REV. 11/6/89 - TEASER 2. 2 CONTINUED: Suddenly, a bomb EXPLODES destroying a shop... wounding several passers-by... people react, scared, running... QUICK PAN TO: 3 INT. INDOOR/OUTDOOR CAFE DATA, WORF, BEVERLY at a table... already reacting, Beverly on her feet, moving to help... Worf concerned for her safety... WORF Doctor... She ignores him, moves into the plaza... From outside they HEAR SCREAMS and CRIES, and the WAILING of an alert. Worf and Data are moving after her... behind them, at the door, the waiter watches with interest, also moves outside... 4 EXT. PLAZA A scene of chaos. Shattered glass lies glittering on the pavement. Dust and debris from the explosion is settling. A jet of some escaping gas pours from a broken pipe. Three people are down, all of them showing blood. 5 ANGLE - TWO POLICEMEN ENTER. Beverly starts to move to the first victim, but an officer draws a phaser, and blocks her way. BEVERLY Put that thing away. I'm a doctor. Beverly isn't waiting for permission. She shoulders past him. Beverly drops down next to a casualty, pulls out her tricorder and examines him... BEVERLY Just lie still... don't try to move... Turning to Worf and Data -- STAR TREK: "The High Ground" - REV. 11/8/89 - TEASER 3. 5 CONTINUED: BEVERLY Lieutenant, I need bandages... Disinfectant... something with alcohol in it ... WORF Doctor, it is not safe... BEVERLY That's an order, Mister Worf... Worf hesitates only briefly, exchanging a glance with Data, goes toward the restaurant... as she moves to look at another victim... BEVERLY There's a lot of bleeding, but it's not as bad as it looks. Don't be afraid. The policeman looks at Data... POLICEMAN The Klingon is right. These Ansata... they're madmen... there could be another bomb. (to the others) Clear this area. Everyone out of the plaza. DATA Doctor, a return to the Enterprise would be prudent. She just looks at him, continues her work. DATA This planet does have physicians... BEVERLY Who aren't here yet. I am. Worf comes back out of the restaurant with some ripped-up tablecloths, some liquor bottles... he's helped by the waiter who crosses to Beverly... as she takes the materials, immediately begins to utilize them in emergency care... she barely glances up at the waiter who is interested in what she's doing... a throwaway line -- STAR TREK: "The High Ground" - REV. 11/8/89 - TEASER 3A. 5 CONTINUED: (2) BEVERLY Thank you. WAITER Not at all, Doctor. STAR TREK: "The High Ground" - 11/3/89 - TEASER 4. 5 CONTINUED: (2) He moves away... takes a beat at the entrance to the cafe to look back again, thoughtfully, then enters... 6 ANOTHER ANGLE - DATA DATA Captain, there has been an incident. INTERCUT TO: 7 INT. MAIN BRIDGE Picard and Riker at their usual stations. Supernumeraries at Conn and Ops. DATA (continuing) ... A bomb has been detonated by the Ansata terrorists. PICARD Your security status? DATA Vulnerable, sir. PICARD Transporter Room Three, lock onto the away team, prepare to beam them back... ENGINEER'S VOICE Yes, Captain. DATA Sir, I recommended such a course, but there are several wounded people and Doctor Crusher... PICARD (frowns, interrupting) Yes, I understand. Picard to Doctor Crusher... 8 ANGLE ON BEVERLY keys her insignia... continues to work... STAR TREK: "The High Ground" - REV. 11/6/89 - TEASER 5. 8 CONTINUED: BEVERLY Go ahead. PICARD I've been advised of your situation by Mister Data. BEVERLY I already know what you're going to say. PICARD (annoyed) Doctor, will you at least allow me to... BEVERLY The longer we argue, the longer... PICARD You are endangering yourself and the away team... BEVERLY Captain, right now, I'm trying to pull a life back into a wounded body with brandy and sleight of hand. I'm not going anywhere... Data and Worf don't have to stay. Crusher out. PICARD Transporter Room, do you have lock on the away team? ENGINEER'S VOICE Aye, sir. Shall I transport them? Picard looks in frustration to Riker. RIKER I wouldn't want to be in the Transporter Room to greet her. PICARD (a beat) Picard to Data. Hold your position until the Rutian medics arrive. STAR TREK: "The High Ground" - 11/3/89 - TEASER 6. 8 CONTINUED: (2) DATA Aye, Captain. END INTERCUT. 9 EXT. PLAZA The WAILING of emergency vehicles is much closer. Beverly continues to treat the wounded. Worf is running tricorder scans of the buildings. Data moves to him... WORF The tricorder is not reading any other explosive devices in this vicinity... 10 ANGLE - AN WOMAN IN AUTHORITY (ALEXANA) arrives, accompanied by security guards... glances at Data and Worf as she passes... examines the scene... 11 ANGLE - THE WAITER moves barely outside the door of the restaurant to watch... 12 THE SCENE (OPTICAL) as an extraordinary arc of light appears... simultaneous with his arrival is a SOUND like lighting finding ground. A CRACK of almost concussive proportions. A MAN who seems to literally appear out of the light. He wears a shoulder device. And he looks to be in definite pain as he arrives. People begin running ... because it is nothing new... in quick cuts -- 13 DATA AND WORF react... 14 ALEXANA is shielded by her guards... STAR TREK: "The High Ground" - REV. 11/6/89 - TEASER 7. 15 BEVERLY turns and finds the man inches away... she recoils, but the man catches her by the arm. 16 ANGLE - A GUARD (OPTICAL) goes for his weapon, and the terrorist shoots from the hip killing the guard. The terrorist strengthens his hold on Beverly as... 17 DATA AND WORF reach for their phasers... they don't have a clear shot through the crowd... and as they jockey forward for position... 18 BEVERLY AND THE TERRORIST (OPTICAL) BEVERLY You don't understand... I'm a doc... And then they're gone... VANISHING into a new burst of light. On Data and Worf's reaction... FADE OUT. END OF TEASER STAR TREK: "The High Ground" - REV. 11/10/89 - ACT ONE 8. ACT ONE FADE IN: 19 EXT. SPACE - THE ENTERPRISE (OPTICAL) In orbit. 20 INT. OBSERVATION LOUNGE Picard, Riker listen to Data and Worf's report... DATA A transporter would leave residual ionization in the air... but the tricorder readings found no trace after the incident... RIKER People don't just appear and disappear... there has to be some way to track her... DATA We have been unable to detect the signal from her communicator. It has either been deactivated or she is being held in a shielded location. A long beat... Picard angry, deep in thought. Then, softly -- PICARD Why... her? WORF Sir, I believe she was the intended target of the abduction. RIKER Why would they want a Federation hostage? Their fight doesn't involve us. WORF It does now. On reactions... STAR TREK: "The High Ground" - REV. 11/6/89 - ACT ONE 9. 21 INT. CAVERN A perimeter of light holds the stygian darkness at bay. In some places movable screens augment the natural stone wall which have formed to create a sense of privacy. Beverly is in a secluded area with rock walls on three sides. The alcove is furnished simply -- a cot, a small table, and a folding chair. Beverly is seated on the camp bed. Her hands and ankles have been bound, and she shifts uncomfortably. She is angry and afraid, and trying to hide it. A MAN, KYRIL FINN enters. Beverly swallows hard, lifts her chin, and tries to stare him down, but she ends up looking only anxious. Finn is an attractive man in his early thirties, but he has an air of shyness and awkwardness which seems out of place with his combat style clothing, and the phaser he wears. His hair's a little too long and wavy for serious bad-ass. In fact, with his hunch shouldered stance and one hand dug deep into his pocket he looks like a man trying to be overlooked. In his other hand, he has a plate of food. FINN Are you hungry? Do you want something to eat? She just stares at him. Scared, doing bravado. FINN I doesn't matter to me. You want to be hungry? Be hungry. He sits in front of her... picks at the food, eating with his hands... FINN What's your name? No response. FINN You're a doctor on a Federation starship? (beat) I always wondered what it would be like to travel across the galaxy. (MORE) STAR TREK: "The High Ground" - REV. 11/6/89 - ACT ONE 10. 21 CONTINUED: FINN (Cont'd) (rueful, self-deprecating) It's not something I've exactly had time for. Stonewalling him. He shrugs. FINN This isn't the best way to meet new people, is it? He stands. FINN If you want something, just ask for me -- Kyril Finn. (a beat) They know me. He EXITS and takes the plate of food with him. As he exits, she looks down, angry, helpless... 22 INT. CAPT. READY ROOM - CLOSE ON WESLEY who has just heard the news. Pulling back to reveal... TROI We have no reason to believe she's been hurt in any way... PICARD In fact, it's more likely that they will take good care of her... if they want to use her as a bargaining chip. WESLEY (beat) A bargaining chip? TROI The innocent become the pawns in a conflict like this, Wesley. Picard thinks a beat, stands... begins to move around the desk toward Wes. STAR TREK: "The High Ground" - 11/3/89 - ACT ONE 11. 22 CONTINUED: PICARD The Ansata separatists have been trying for generations to be freed from the rule of the Eastern Continent. If they can get the government to even acknowledge their demands, then kidnapping your mother will have served a purpose. He leans on his desk. PICARD (continuing) That may be what they are after. It may not. Frankly, I don't care. All I care about is getting her back, Wesley... In a few minutes, we're leaving to meet with the authorities... WESLEY (interrupting) Request permission to be on the away team, sir. PICARD No. You have an important job to do here. If we are to find your mother, we must have a way to trace the movements of these terrorists. I want you on the team that will investigate this new technology of theirs. WESLEY I understand. PICARD Report to Mister Data. Dismissed. He exits. Picard glances at Troi. They share a moment. She acknowledges his efforts. TROI He needs your strength right now. PICARD (beat) History has shown us that strength may be useless in the face of terrorism, Counselor. Off Troi's reaction... STAR TREK: "The High Ground" - REV. 11/7/89 - ACT ONE 12. 23 INT. ALEXANA'S OFFICE - DAY Alexana Devos, a striking woman in her late thirties, meets with Picard and Riker. (This is the same woman we saw in the teaser.) Tall and athletic, she is a natural born leader. But she is also a woman under great pressure, caught up in a struggle that she's no longer sure she can win. Trying to deal with a hundred problems at once has left her preoccupied and driven and almost burned out. She is sitting down at a desk littered with isolinear reader chips. On one wall are monitors that provide a running text of current police activity. She studies them intently. PICARD What exactly is Ansata policy in regard to hostages? ALEXANA I doubt they have one. They don't usually take hostages. The implications of such a strategy is not lost on Picard or Riker. She turns to face them... STAR TREK: "The High Ground" - REV. 11/6/89 - ACT ONE 13. 23 CONTINUED: ALEXANA These aren't people we're dealing with here. They're animals... (her anger rising) Fanatics, who kill without remorse or conscience... who think nothing of murdering innocent people. PICARD They could just as easily have shot her where she stood... ALEXANA (acknowledges) Don't ask me to explain them. I can't. The atrocities I've seen... A beat as Alexana forces herself to gain her composure. ALEXANA And now they have this new device that makes them even more deadly. How do I combat an enemy who fails to register on any scanner until they're literally standing in front of you with a phaser pointed at your head? RIKER What can you tell us about this device? Alexana removes an armband from a drawer, and tosses it onto the desk. ALEXANA Not much, really. Picard picks up the device, and inspects it, hands it to Riker. Over this Alexana continues. STAR TREK: "The High Ground" - REV. 11/5/89 - ACT ONE 14. 23 CONTINUED: (2) ALEXANA (cont'd) They first started using it two months ago. We've taken several of these off dead terrorists. Our people have looked at them... Nothing they can explain... RIKER You mind if we take this with us... give our people a chance to study it? ALEXANA Not at all. And I'll put you in touch with our research people, if you wish. PICARD I appreciate your help. ALEXANA (a wry smile) Perhaps if we found ourselves in possession of some of that advanced Federation weaponry of yours it would shift the balance of power back to our favor. PICARD That we cannot do for you. ALEXANA (as she expected) No, of course not. Picard rises. The others follow suit. PICARD I would like to leave Commander Riker to assist in your search for Doctor Crusher. As she walks them to the door: ALEXANA (it won't help) If you like... RIKER You don't sound very optimistic. STAR TREK: "The High Ground" - REV. 11/7/89 - ACT ONE 15. 23 CONTINUED: (3) ALEXANA I know my enemy, Commander... They don't leave much room for optimism. Off Picard and Riker's worried expressions. 24 INT. CAVERN As before, Finn enters with a plate of food. Same line -- FINN Are you hungry? Do you want something to eat? She's looking quite a bit more tired than before. But she's still not willing to respond... at least not on the first volley. He studies her... puts down the plate, moves to her... Beverly can't control the impulse. She shrinks back in fear. FINN Relax, I'm just going to... He indicates her bonds. He drops to one knee, and releases her ankles. (And note: that despite his rumpled, good guy attitude there is a side of this that could be considered torture, manipulation, setting up dependency.) FINN Come on. Eat something. What's the point of not eating? You're the only one who suffers. Do I look like it's bothering me? Okay, it's bothering me. He picks up the plate and holds it out in front of her. She finally takes it... begins to pick up the meat with her fingers, eats... FINN No forks. Sorry. STAR TREK: "The High Ground" - REV. 11/6/89 - ACT ONE 16. 24 CONTINUED: A beat as he watches her eat, pleased with this victory. FINN Did I mention my name is Finn? And you're... ? A beat. BEVERLY Why have you brought me here? FINN I need a doctor. BEVERLY There are doctors on Rutia. FINN I need someone better... I heard you were here from the Federation flagship and I knew you had to be... BEVERLY How did you know that? FINN I heard. (beat) Now you'll help me. Just like you help them... BEVERLY What are you talking about? STAR TREK: "The High Ground" - 11/3/89 - ACT ONE 17. 24 CONTINUED: (2) FINN (angry) Your ship carries medical supplies for them... for the other side... why does the Federation ally itself with the Rutians... BEVERLY We didn't... all we did was to bring... FINN Medical supplies... BEVERLY People were hurt... FINN I know. I hurt them. He grabs the food dish out of her hands. Stands. FINN You're finished eating. Get up. When she looks up at him, hesitating with fear... he reaches down and pulls her up roughly... FINN Get up. He indicates for her to precede him out of the alcove, and she begins to obey. They start out into the cave proper. Beverly suddenly pauses, and looks up at him. She is embarrassed by the non-sequitur, but can't control herself. BEVERLY I have... a son. FINN You'll be with him again, Doctor. I see no reason to kill you. The inference being if he did see a reason later, he might. As he waits for her to move by him, the perfect gentleman... she looks at him, finally moves forward and we... FADE OUT. END OF ACT ONE STAR TREK: "The High Ground" - 11/3/89 - ACT TWO 18. ACT TWO FADE IN: 25 INT. CAVERN For the first time, we see full breadth of the rebel camp... as Finn and Beverly move by, a pair of children, one watches while the other cleans a weapon... people look over at Beverly, exchange looks with Finn who nods confidently -- he's got this under control. He leads her to a section of the cave that has been set aside as an infirmary. A section of the cave has been set aside as an infirmary. Five patients rest on cots. A couple are bandaged, but don't seem to be in much distress. The other three are thrashing, delirious with pain. One of them is the man who kidnapped Beverly. He motions to her -- this is my problem... she looks at them with concern... gets down on her knees, runs a tricorder scan checks the readings... shakes her head... BEVERLY I need instruments from my ship to diagnose something like this... FINN (straight) You think if I allowed you to call your ship, they would transport your instruments... ? BEVERLY When I inform the captain how serious the situation is, I'm sure he'll agree. I've told you, Finn, the Federation is not allied with Rutians... we came on an errand of mercy... FINN (straight) And since the Federation does not wish to take sides, he will send you the medical supplies we need. BEVERLY Absolutely. A beat before he grins... signals a TERRORIST BOY about twelve who comes over, carrying a box... STAR TREK: "The High Ground" - REV. 11/6/89 - ACT TWO 19. 25 CONTINUED: FINN I anticipated your needs. The boy opens the box to reveal an impressive array of medical instruments. She reacts. BEVERLY These are Federation supplies... we just delivered them to the medical dispensary this morning... FINN (shrugs) I heard. Off her reaction, as she reaches in for an instrument... 26 INT. ALEXANA'S OFFICE - DAY Alexana and Riker are studying files on the wall monitors. A seemingly never-ending inventory of names, addresses and police records. RIKER You're telling me all these people belong to the Ansata? ALEXANA Not really. We suspect the organization itself only consists of some two hundred members. There are over five thousand names on this list. Citizens we know to be sympathetic to their cause. They pass along weaponry and information. March in pro-Ansata demonstrations... participate in general strikes.. or the occasional riot. Riker shakes his head in disbelief. RIKER How did all of this ever get started? STAR TREK: "The High Ground" - REV. 11/7/89 - ACT TWO 20. 26 CONTINUED: ALEXANA We denied them independence. That gave them a noble cause... seventy years ago. (bitterly) And now it's just an excuse for more violence. RIKER You hate them as much as they hate you. ALEXANA Believe it or not I always considered myself moderate. RIKER What changed your mind? ALEXANA (shrugging, take your pick) Being stationed here the last six months. Watching the body count grow. The three assassination attempts on my life. RIKER I can see where that could affect your point of view. ALEXANA But I guess the event that really opened my eyes took place only a few days after my arrival. A terrorist bomb destroyed a shuttlebus... sixty school children. There were no survivors. A beat as Riker absorbs this information. STAR TREK: "The High Ground" - REV. 11/9/89 - ACT TWO 21. 26 CONTINUED: (2) ALEXANA The Ansata claimed it was a mistake. That their intended target was a police transport. As if that made everything all right. (a beat) That day I vowed to put an end to terrorism in this city. And I will. A grim smile from Riker. It's not a smile of approval. Rather it's one of respect. This is clearly not a woman to be taken lightly. As she turns back to study the computer screen... CUT TO: 27 INT. CAVERN Beverly is finishing her examinations, as the terrorist boy assists her. BEVERLY (to the boy) Thank you. You're very helpful... you could learn to do this when you grow up... (beat) ... if you grow up. The boy just looks at her curiously. 27A ANGLE Finn is chatting off to the side with some of his friends... sees that she's finished, breaks off and moves toward her... She moves away from the patients... BEVERLY They're dying. He reacts... really quite stunned. BEVERLY I'm seeing a complicated set of conditions... their DNA is warped somehow; it's disrupting their entire cellular chemistry... STAR TREK: "The High Ground" - REV. 11/6/89 - ACT TWO 21A. 27A CONTINUED: FINN You can't do anything? BEVERLY I can make them more comfortable. That's all. The damage is too extensive. STAR TREK: "The High Ground" - REV. 11/7/89 - ACT TWO 22. 27A CONTINUED: (2) Finn's eyes grow dark... he looks sadly at his comrades, moves a step or two away from Beverly as he whispers something we don't hear, perhaps a prayer. Beverly studies him. He looks at her... begins to walk. BEVERLY If I could detect the condition earlier... FINN ... you would be able to reverse the damage? BEVERLY Perhaps. I don't know. (beat) What happened to them... FINN It's the inverter. They move to the equipment... the shoulder harnesses, generator, other tech equipment. FINN (irony) It has given our cause a new life. But asks for our lives in return. BEVERLY What does it do? FINN We transport through a dimensional shift that the Rutian sensors can't trace. BEVERLY Dimensional shifting? You can't do that with humanoid tissue. FINN There are risks... the designers warned us... but it works. She looks at him, finds this incredible. She uses her tricorder to examine him... STAR TREK: "The High Ground" - REV. 11/6/89 - ACT TWO 23. 27A CONTINUED: (3) BEVERLY You're showing the same distorted readings. Not as severe as the others but -- FINN (brushing it off) Doesn't matter. BEVERLY It does if it kills you. FINN (simply) Don't you know? A dead martyr's worth ten posturing leaders. On her reaction... 28 INT. MAIN ENGINEERING (OPTICAL) At the pool table, Wesley and Data are examining one of the Ansata armbands... that they have opened... DATA A subspace field coil with an isolated power source... curious... WESLEY How could something this small manage to get them anywhere? At the console, Geordi has seen something on a monitor, reacts... GEORDI Hey, guys... look at this... Wesley takes the Ansata armband, as they move to Geordi. GEORDI The Rutian team picked up a faint nuclear vibration during the terrorist movements... WESLEY (mind thinking) Nuclear vibration... STAR TREK: "The High Ground" - REV. 11/5/89 - ACT TWO 24. 28 CONTINUED: DATA That could possibly indicate subspace transition rebound during transport... WESLEY (coming to him) Wait a minute... computer, call up files on... what was it called... (excited, to Data and Geordi) We spent an hour on it in my astral physics course last year... folded space transport... GEORDI (connecting) Alternate dimensions... DATA Are you referring to the Elway Theorem? WESLEY Yes... computer, files on the Elway Theorem... what if they're moving inter-dimensionally? DATA But the Elway Theorem proved to be entirely inaccurate... all research was abandoned by the mid- twenty-third century... Looking at the monitors as the files come up... WESLEY Data, look at it... the faint nuclear vibration is consistent... and Elway used an isolated field coil just like this one. GEORDI It would be untraceable by any standard sensing device. DATA But it was proven to be fatal. To use this technology would be an irrational act. STAR TREK: "The High Ground" - REV. 11/6/89 - ACT TWO 25. 29 ANGLE - PICARD ENTERS, having overheard the last two speeches... PICARD We may well be dealing with irrational people, Data. Is there a way to trace this... ? GEORDI (checking with his colleagues) With an adaptive subspace echogram, maybe... ? DATA If anyone is willing to transport in this manner, Captain, they would suffer significant internal damage which could be detected. PICARD (adding it up) And it sounds as though they might require the services of... a doctor. Reactions. 30 EXT. PLAZA - DAY It's a round-up. Uniformed police officers have people stopped. The twenty-fourth century version of papers (a transparent triangle shaped card which is read by a light pen) are being checked. Alexana and Riker, in the company of her security guards watch the proceedings. STAR TREK: "The High Ground" - REV. 11/8/89 - ACT TWO 26. 31 thru OMITTED 32 33 NEW ANGLE As the waiter we saw in the teaser is taken into custody. He glares at Riker and Alexana as he's taken away. 34 BACK TO RIKER AND ALEXANA RIKER This is no way to live. ALEXANA For us or them? RIKER For both of you. ALEXANA I know it's not pretty, Riker. But this is what terrorism has done to this city. RIKER There must be a better way than this to deal with it. ALEXANA I know my methods seem harsh but believe me, they're gentle compared to my predecessors. Suspects would be brought into police headquarters and... mysteriously vanish. I put a stop to that. RIKER And what happened to this predecessor of yours? ALEXANA He was murdered. STAR TREK: "The High Ground" - REV. 11/6/89 - ACT TWO 27. 34 CONTINUED: As Riker reacts, a woman and her son -- a boy about Wesley's age -- are fettered with twenty-fourth century handcuffs are led away. For some reason, this arrest affects Riker more than the others, and his tone is sharp. RIKER Are you going to tell me that boy's a threat? ALEXANA It's possible. (a beat) That shuttlebus I told you about... the bomb was set by a teenager. Riker can only shake his head. He's getting fed up with the whole situation. ALEXANA And in a world where children blow up children... everyone's a threat. And as they watch the round-up continue: CUT TO: 35 INT. CAVERN The infirmary. Beverly is trying to ease the three patients who are suffering from the dimensional effect. She is suffering with them and for them, because there's nothing she can do except make them comfortable. She administers a hypo to the young woman, then sits next to her on the bed, and clasps the girl's hand. The terrorist boy is eager to assist. Finn is seated on a low rock wall which surrounds the infirmary. Beverly is unaware of him for she is intent on her patients. He is sketching, but periodically he looks up and studies Beverly. 36 ANGLE ON BEVERLY As she becomes aware of the scrutiny. She looks up, annoyed, and notices Finn. STAR TREK: "The High Ground" - REV. 11/6/89 - ACT TWO 28. 36 CONTINUED: He is the source of all her troubles, and so frowns, but then becomes puzzled at his actions. Beverly stands, and circles around the cots and the walls to come up behind him. 37 ANGLE ON - THE SKETCH PAD It is a very fine sketch of Beverly's hands clasping the girl's. BEVERLY You should be drawing, not killing people. FINN I can do both. And his attitude infuriates her. BEVERLY How can you have such a casual attitude toward killing? FINN (without humor) I take my killing very seriously, Doctor. She shakes her head, unable to understand this man. FINN (shrugs her off) You are an idealist... BEVERLY I live in an ideal culture... there is no need for your kind of violence... we've proven that. He looks at her, grunts. STAR TREK: "The High Ground" - REV. 11/6/89 - ACT TWO 29. 37 CONTINUED: FINN Your origins on Earth are from the American continent, are they not? BEVERLY North America. FINN I have read your history books. This is a war for independence. I am no different than your own George Washington... BEVERLY Washington was a military general. He was not a terrorist. FINN Doctor, the difference between a general and terrorist is only the difference between winners and losers. You win, you're called a general. You lose... BEVERLY You are killing innocent people... Can't you see the immorality of what you're doing... or have you killed so often, you've become blind to it? Finn looks at her, shakes his head at her naivete. FINN How much innocent blood has been spilled for the cause of freedom in the history of your Federation, Doctor? How many good and noble societies have bombed civilians in war? Wiped out whole cities. And now that you enjoy the comfort that has come from their battles, their killing... you frown on my immorality... ? Doctor, I am willing to die for my freedom. And, in the finest tradition of your own great civilization, I'm willing to kill for it too. And as he leaves her to think about that... FADE OUT. END OF ACT TWO STAR TREK: "The High Ground" - REV. 11/7/89 - ACT THREE 30. ACT THREE FADE IN: 38 INT. ALEXANA'S OFFICE Riker and Alexana have just finished interviewing one of the detainees from the round-up. He stares sullenly at them as Alexana dismisses him with: ALEXANA (curtly) All right you can go. She nods to one of her security guards who stands inside the doorway. The security guard waits for the detainee to get out of his chair and then escorts him out of the office. This has been going on a long time. Riker paces around, tense and frustrated. ALEXANA If you want, I could become more persuasive. Riker refuses to even consider it. RIKER No. Alexana nods, accepting, if not totally agreeing with his decision. The security guard enters with the waiter who is nervous but defiant. Seats him. Alexana consults her wall screen computer. ALEXANA You're Katik Shaw, the waiter from the Lumar Cafe. (he nods) You witnessed both the explosion and the kidnapping. STAR TREK: "The High Ground" - REV. 11/6/89 - ACT THREE 31. 38 CONTINUED: KATIK I saw nothing. Riker's impatience is growing. ALEXANA We are aware of your ties with the Ansata... For all we know you planted the bomb yourself... Where have they taken her? KATIK I don't know what you're talking about. RIKER I've had enough of this. Before Alexana can respond, Riker places himself between her and the prisoner. RIKER (to Katik) I want you to take a message back to your people. Tell them the Federation is willing to negotiate for the release of Doctor Crusher. ALEXANA Riker... ! Riker cuts her off. RIKER She's a Starfleet officer. That makes her my responsibility. Alexana's silence is a tacit agreement. RIKER (to Katik) Your side has demands, we're willing to listen to them. We want her back. It's as simple as that. STAR TREK: "The High Ground" - REV. 11/7/89 - ACT THREE 32. 38 CONTINUED: (2) Katik studies Riker trying to deceive whether there's any truth behind the officer's words. After a beat, Riker moves away. RIKER (continuing; to Alexana) I don't think it's necessary to detain this gentleman any longer. Katik looks over at Alexana, figures there's no way she'll let him go so easily. Alexana glances at Riker who is also waiting for her response. Finally she breaks the silence. ALEXANA (to Katik) Get out. Katik tries to hide his amazement. He hurries out of the room before she can change her mind. ALEXANA I should have him followed, but we'll try it your way. RIKER Is that what you want? She sits down at her desk. Suddenly she seems very weary. ALEXANA What I want is to go home. Back to my own country. To leave behind the roundups, the interrogations, the bodies lying in the street. To be able to walk without bodyguards, and not have to jump at every unexpected noise. That's what I want Riker. She leans back in her chair, angry. STAR TREK: "The High Ground" - REV. 11/6/89 - ACT THREE 33. 39 INT. MAIN BRIDGE Picard is standing by Data who is working at Science One. Supernumeraries at Conn, Ops and Tactical. DATA The dimensional jump creates a subspace pressure modulation, Captain. By setting up a magnetosphere faint echogram that can monitor each of their movements, we may be able to collect enough data to trace their power source. PICARD Can you estimate the number of jumps it will take? DATA Dimensional shifting is such an unstable procedure that I cannot say. Picard acknowledges... as he starts to move away, Data continues, stops him. DATA Captain, I am finding it difficult to understand many aspects of Ansata conduct. Much of their behavioral norm would be defined by my program as unnecessary and unacceptable. PICARD And by my... "program" as well, Data. DATA But, if that is so, Captain, why are their methods often successful? (MORE) STAR TREK: "The High Ground" - REV. 11/7/89 - ACT THREE 34. 39 CONTINUED: DATA (Cont'd) (off Picard's reaction) I have been reviewing the history of armed rebellion and it appears that terrorism is an effective way to promote political change. PICARD I have never subscribed to the theory that political power flows from the barrel of a gun, Data... DATA In most instances, you would be correct. But there are numerous examples where it was successful... the independence of the Mexican State from Spain, the Irish Unification of 2024, the Kenzie Rebellion... PICARD Yes, I'm aware of them... DATA Then, would it be accurate to say that terrorism is acceptable when the options for peaceful settlement have been foreclosed? PICARD Data, we cannot condone violence. DATA Even in response to violence? Picard looks at him. PICARD These are questions that mankind has been struggling with since creation. I am afraid your confusion, Data... is only human. On Data's reaction... 40 INT. CAVERN Finn is sketching again... studying Beverly as she works among the patients... STAR TREK: "The High Ground" - REV. 11/6/89 - ACT THREE 35. 40 CONTINUED: The FLASH (O.S.)... Finn turns to see the waiter coming toward him as the terrorist boy comes over and takes his shoulder harness from him... WAITER Everyone is being rounded up. He glances at Beverly who looks back curiously... FINN Because of her? WAITER (acknowledges) The Federation wants to negotiate her release... FINN ... while they arrange for the Rutian police to fill up the detention cells... WAITER (nods in agreement) A Starfleet officer is working with the director. He wants a meeting with you. FINN I'm sure he does. He shakes his head... looks at Beverly... looks at the sketch in his hand... 41 THE SKETCH is of Beverly... 42 FINN acknowledges away the waiter, moves toward her... FINN Your Federation colleagues have engineered mass arrests to pressure me into releasing you. BEVERLY I'm sure you've misunderstood... STAR TREK: "The High Ground" - REV. 11/8/89 - ACT THREE 36. 42 CONTINUED: FINN They are working with the police. He's seen it with his own eyes. BEVERLY All they want is to get me back safely. FINN I'm not going to release you. And he looks at her and perhaps there is a sexual tension here. FINN I need you here. BEVERLY To find a way to reverse the effects of the dimensional shift... ? I can do that right now. Stop using it. (beat, vulnerable) Finn, I have a life, a son who needs me. FINN He is on the ship? She nods. Finn looks uncomfortably down... and then back again with guilty eyes... FINN I am sorry he is on the ship. She realizes what he's thinking -- BEVERLY No... FINN (no choice) They have joined forces with the Rutians against us... BEVERLY We are not your enemy... FINN They are more valuable to me than an enemy. (MORE) STAR TREK: "The High Ground" - 11/3/89 - ACT THREE 37. 42 CONTINUED: (2) FINN (Cont'd) For seventy years we've been shouting, and no one's heard us. Destroy the Federation flagship... someone will listen. He starts away. Beverly rushes after him... BEVERLY Please... FINN They are the ones who interfered. They brought medical supplies. They organized mass arrests. They are killing your son, not me. BEVERLY Please, don't do this, Finn. I'll do anything you ask. He studies her a moment, contemplating all the things he could ask of her. FINN I had a son, too. He was thirteen when he died in detention. And he moves away. On her reaction... 43 INT. CORRIDOR - THE ENTERPRISE (OPTICAL) Two crewpersons walking down the corridor. The SOUND of the inter-dimensional transporter, and an armed Ansata terrorist APPEARS. She opens fire, and one crewperson goes down... she turns and runs... 44 INT. MAIN BRIDGE Picard and Troi at Command. Wesley at Science One. Worf at Tactical. Data at Ops. Supernumerary at Conn. WORF Intruder alert deck twelve... Almost simultaneously... WESLEY I've got a subspace reflection. It's a dimensional shift... STAR TREK: "The High Ground" - 11/3/89 - ACT THREE 38. 44 CONTINUED: PICARD Red Alert. Sound general quarters. The red alert begins to SOUND. 45 INT. MAIN ENGINEERING (OPTICAL) Geordi is in his little side office. Red Alert is sounding. Geordi leaps to his feet, and starts moving toward Engineering proper. A couple of techs in coveralls pause in their work on the main warp drive, and also react to the red alert. The SOUND, and a terrorist APPEARS on the upper catwalk, and another APPEARS on the lower level by the techs. GEORDI Security to Engineering. The terrorist on the lower level fires, and kills a tech. The terrorist then spins around and fires at Geordi who dives for cover. The other techs run out... 46 EXT. MAIN BRIDGE WORF Intruders in Engineering... DATA Casualties reported on deck twelve. Sickbay is responding. PICARD Seal off all decks... lock on transporters to intruder signals. ENGINEER'S COM VOICE Intruder signals unstable, Captain, I cannot lock on... DATA They are moving inter-dimensionally... neither the transporters nor forcefields will be able to contain them, sir. STAR TREK: "The High Ground" - REV. 11/6/89 - ACT THREE 39. 47 INT. ENGINEERING (OPTICAL) The man on the upper level tosses down a satchel charge. The second terrorist slaps it on the side of the warp chamber. It clings like a limpet, and the band on the edge LIGHTS. It is PULSING and emitting a BEEP in a climbing cadenza. The gunmen VANISH, and Geordi charges back into Engineering. 48 INT. MAIN BRIDGE As before. GEORDI'S COM VOICE Explosive charge on the main warp chamber... PICARD Transporter room three, lock on the explosive device and energize. ENGINEER'S COM VOICE It's scrambling the sensors, Captain... I can't pinpoint it. PICARD Begin emergency evacuation... prepare for saucer separation... Mister La Forge, can you remove the charge from the engine core... 49 INT. MAIN ENGINEERING (OPTICAL) GEORDI Stand by... I'm trying... He grabs the charge on the engine core, and yanks. It doesn't budge. GEORDI They've got it locked on somehow... hold on... Frenziedly he snatches a tool from a console, and surgically removes the charge with the laser. It drops into his hand. He moves quickly across the room to get it away from the engine core... on the move -- STAR TREK: "The High Ground" - REV. 11/7/89 - ACT THREE 40. 49 CONTINUED: GEORDI Got it. Transporter Room, stand by to lock on my signal and transport two kilometers off the starboard nacelle. 50 INT. MAIN BRIDGE TROI (reacts) His signal... ? Picard motions for her to be calm, Geordi knows what he's doing... 51 INT. ENGINEERING Geordi yanks off his communicator. He slaps it onto the device as he pushes it out of Engineering... and ducks back for cover... The sound of the bomb has become an almost frenzied SCREAM. GEORDI Transporter Room, now... 52 EXT. SPACE (OPTICAL) The bomb MATERIALIZES and EXPLODES. 53 INT. MAIN BRIDGE As before. The tension is palpable. Picard is on his feet. PICARD Commander La Forge. Report. 54 INT. MAIN ENGINEERING Geordi leans against the wall, and touches a companel. GEORDI Transport complete... STAR TREK: "The High Ground" - REV. 11/6/89 - ACT THREE 41. 54 CONTINUED: He moves to his fallen colleague.. GEORDI I have a man down. 55 INT. MAIN BRIDGE (OPTICAL) WESLEY More subspace reflections... Picard, his concentration broken by Wesley sudden exclamation, looks back. PICARD Can you calibrate their destination? WESLEY No, sir, the readings are -- The SOUND, the LIGHT and Finn and another terrorist APPEAR. They spray a few shots around the bridge... one hits Data's console which explodes in his face, he tries to see, attempting to keep the ship operational... other consoles explode... Troi and Wesley and other supernumeraries dive for cover... TROI (during action) Transporter Room. Code one evacuation: Picard. (no acknowledgment) Transporter Room... As Worf goes for his phaser and stuns the second terrorist... who groans and hits his shoulder pad as he goes down and VANISHES... at the same time, Finn wounds Worf... and turns to see 56 ANGLE - PICARD (OPTICAL) moving at him... the captain gets in a good hard lick before Finn grabs him in a bearhug... a major struggle ensues as Data leaves his post, charging... Finn keys the dimensional device. Finn and Picard VANISH as Data's hands close on nothing. FADE OUT. END OF ACT THREE STAR TREK: "The High Ground" - REV. 11/7/89 - ACT FOUR 42. ACT FOUR FADE IN: 57 INT. CAVERN Picard is led by two terrorists into the alcove... as Beverly looks up and their eyes meet... 58 INT. MAIN BRIDGE Riker stands at command, and bleakly surveys the bridge. Alexana and Troi are at his side. Geordi is at Engineering, and Wesley and Data look on from Science One. Supernumeraries at Conn and Ops. TROI Lieutenant Worf is recovering in Sickbay. The wound was not severe. RIKER Dead and injured? TROI Three dead, four wounded. GEORDI Another millisecond, and there would have been a big dust cloud orbiting Rutia instead of the Enterprise. Riker surveys the damage... feels the responsibility. STAR TREK: "The High Ground" - REV. 11/7/89 - ACT FOUR 43. 58 CONTINUED: RIKER Why. I just asked if they would talk... ALEXANA You have your answer, Riker. She gives him a sympathetic look -- we've all got to learn the hard way. The anger, the determination grows in his eyes. WESLEY Sir, the next time the Ansata use the dimensional jump we should be able to get a fix on their power source. Riker nods, impatient to move into action. 59 INT. CAVERN Picard is seated on the camp bed. His hands have been cuffed behind his back. Beverly is tending his battered face. Picard is stunned... impossible to believe all this... reliving the nightmare for her... PICARD Worf went down... I don't know if he's alive or dead... there were other casualties... BEVERLY Was... Wes... on the bridge... He looks at her, sorry he hadn't thought to anticipate a mother's fears... PICARD Yes... Her look asks if he's all right... he has no way to answer her... PICARD He took cover... I didn't see any more than that... (beat) Are you all right? STAR TREK: "The High Ground" - REV. 11/6/89 - ACT FOUR 44. 59 CONTINUED: BEVERLY (nods) They needed a doctor. PICARD Side effects of their transport? BEVERLY Yes... She looks at him... how did you know? PICARD We're getting closer to tracing their movements... actually, it was Wesley who put us onto this dimensional jumping of theirs... Their eyes meet... PICARD He's been extraordinary throughout this. He'll make a fine officer, Beverly. BEVERLY He's had good role models... An intimate beat. BEVERLY I'm sorry. (off his look) If I'd just returned to the ship... PICARD (shakes his head) I could have had you beamed up. BEVERLY (reacts) You wouldn't dare. PICARD (reacts back) I would and I should have. And this plays extremely casually, low key -- quick repartee, out of left field for this time and place... STAR TREK: "The High Ground" - REV. 11/6/89 - ACT FOUR 45. 59 CONTINUED: (2) BEVERLY Without my permission... PICARD If you won't follow orders... BEVERLY If you give reasonable orders, I'll obey reasonable orders... PICARD Doctor, I will be the judge of reason when it comes to my orders... He stops. They look at each other with affection. It's not comfortable for Picard... he begins to look around at his surroundings. BEVERLY There aren't any exits to the surface. PICARD Then the only way out is by transporter or the dimensional jump. BEVERLY A mode of travel I'd encourage you to avoid. It's killing them. PICARD They're mad. She doesn't answer right away. BEVERLY I don't know any more. The difference between a madman and a committed man willing to die for a cause... it's begun to blur over the last couple days... STAR TREK: "The High Ground" - REV. 11/6/89 - ACT FOUR 46. 59 CONTINUED: (3) PICARD (concerned) Beverly, I don't have to warn you about the psychological impact of being a hostage... BEVERLY I know. I understand that. But their leader, Finn, he's not what you'd expect... PICARD No, he's certainly not what I'd expect. Without cause or reason, his little band of outlaws has attacked my ship... BEVERLY But he did have reasons... the medical supplies, the arrests... Jean-Luc, if we really examine our role in this... PICARD Beverly, you are arguing for a man who may have murdered your son. And she has to swallow hard and feel where she is and she cannot quite touch the ground and it scares the hell out of her. FINN'S VOICE I didn't kill your son... Beverly. 60 ANGLE to see Finn has entered... hands shoved into his pockets. FINN We were not able to destroy the ship. We had to settle for him... (to Picard) She wouldn't even tell me her name. How many days? I call her "Doctor." Are you hungry? Do you want something to eat? STAR TREK: "The High Ground" - REV. 11/6/89 - ACT FOUR 47. 60 CONTINUED: PICARD You've made a grave miscalculation... FINN Oh? PICARD You've assaulted a Federation starship, killed and wounded members of her crew, kidnapped two officers... do you not expect a response? FINN On the contrary, I'm counting on it. PICARD You want Federation involvement? FINN Captain, there's a lot to admire in the Federation, but there's a hint of moral cowardice in your dealings with non-aligned planets. You do business with a government that's crushing us. And then you say you aren't involved. But of course you are. You just don't want to get dirty. PICARD You accuse us of cowardice while you plant bombs in shadows... FINN I've been fighting the only war I can against an intractable enemy. Now, I'm fighting a big war against a much more powerful adversary. Can't you see how that helps me? BEVERLY I'm afraid I don't. PICARD He has added a chair to the negotiating table. STAR TREK: "The High Ground" - REV. 11/6/89 - ACT FOUR 47A. 60 CONTINUED: (2) FINN You added the chair, Captain. I am simply forcing you to sit in it. The Federation will quickly tire of our little war... they will want you back... they will want to get as far away from Rutia as they can. And I will not make it easy. Eventually, the Federation will force the government to make concessions. And then a few more. And then a few more. (sardonic) Until we can finally reach an honorable agreement that saves face for all sides. (beat) Except we win. And Picard studies him... and realizes his scenario is very sound. And this is said leader to leader -- STAR TREK: "The High Ground" - REV. 11/7/89 - ACT FOUR 48. 60 CONTINUED: (3) PICARD You understand I will not cooperate in any way... FINN You have already cooperated, Captain... just by coming here. STAR TREK: "The High Ground" - REV. 11/7/89 - ACT FOUR 49. 61 INT. CORRIDOR (OPTICAL) Troi is on her way to her quarters when suddenly there is a SOUND, LIGHT, and Finn appears (O.S.). As Troi reacts, Finn lifts a hand, recovering a beat from the pain. FINN I'm not here to hurt you. Just hear what I have to say. Troi nods, forcing herself to remain calm. After a beat, Red Alert SOUNDS... they know he's there... FINN Your people are safe. How long they stay that way depends on you. We demand an embargo and trade sanctions levied against Rutia. The Federation will blockade the planet... allow no ships in or out. This will continue until the government of Rutia consents to talks mediated by a Federation counsel. You have twelve hours to make your decision. As two security men round the bend, Finn VANISHES. 62 INT. MAIN BRIDGE Wesley and Data check their readings at Science One. Then Wesley turns to Riker and Alexana who are at Command. STAR TREK: "The High Ground" - REV. 11/3/89 - ACT FOUR 50. 62 CONTINUED: WESLEY (grim faced) Got it. That's just what Riker was hoping to hear. Off his expression, as we: FADE OUT. END OF ACT FOUR STAR TREK: "The High Ground" - REV. 11/6/89 - ACT FOUR 51. ACT FIVE FADE IN: 63 EXT. SPACE - THE ENTERPRISE (OPTICAL) 64 OMITTED 65 INT. MAIN BRIDGE Wesley, Data, Riker and Alexana are gathered about Science One. WESLEY We've pinpointed the Ansata base some three hundred kilometers from the city, on the southern tip of the continent. DATA Sensors indicate it is located thirty meters below ground, implying a cave or cavern-like dwelling. RIKER Any passages leading to the surface? DATA Our readings show no evidence of any, Commander. RIKER Then whatever light they have must be artificially generated. ALEXANA If we can shut it down, you could use the confusion to find your people. STAR TREK: "The High Ground" - REV. 11/6/89 - ACT FIVE 52. 65 CONTINUED: Worf ENTERS from the aft turbolift. He looks drawn but determined as he approaches Riker. WORF Request permission to join the rescue party, sir. (a beat) I owe it to the captain. Riker knows how much this means to Worf. The Klingon's intensity is almost palpable. RIKER Permission granted. Worf's condition has just improved a hundred percent. Riker looks over at Alexana. It's time. Alexana nods. She's ready. RIKER Mister Data... You have the bridge. Riker and Alexana head toward the turbolift. WESLEY Commander Riker? Riker turns. WESLEY (continuing; summing it up for all) Good luck. Riker is all too aware of the boy's concerns. RIKER We'll bring them home, Wes. They enter the turbolift. CUT TO: STAR TREK: "The High Ground" - REV. 11/7/89 - ACT FIVE 53. 65A INT. CAVERN Finn walks over as Beverly treats the wounded... he's carrying his sketch pad. FINN You're glad to see your captain... BEVERLY Yes. Beat. He looks at her... almost a jealous look. FINN I may have to kill him. She just freezes... FINN I just wanted to warn you. BEVERLY Finn, he can help you... he is very influential... FINN He will not help us... BEVERLY If you could convince him that your cause is... FINN You could convince him perhaps. Not I. At her weakest... BEVERLY I've talked to him. I'll... try... STAR TREK: "The High Ground" - REV. 11/7/89 - ACT FIVE 54. 65A CONTINUED: FINN (shrugs) If our places were reversed, I would expect to die... And that statement is an error of judgement by Finn. Right here Beverly begins to regain some of her power... because she knows exactly what the circumstance would be like if the places were reversed... BEVERLY (a beat) Your places would never be reversed. He wouldn't forcibly abduct you... or play games with your life. He would treat you with respect... FINN I have treated you with respect... BEVERLY You've scared the hell out of me, Finn. (he reacts) You've controlled me through fear... just like you've tried to control this whole continent. FINN You haven't tasted real fear yet, Doctor... BEVERLY Is that the best you can do? Is fear the only weapon you have... FINN (beat, thinks) No, but it's a good one. A beat. He's pleased with his response. BEVERLY You know what scares me the most, Finn? It scares me to think that you might win this fight and gain real power. That hurts him. She begins to leave. STAR TREK: "The High Ground" - REV. 11/6/89 - ACT FIVE 55. 65A CONTINUED: (2) FINN Doctor... I don't want you to fear me. Without words to express his feelings, he gives her his pad... and walks away... she opens it to see her face sketched on a number of pages... on her reaction... 66 INT. CAVERN A secluded area, somewhat shielded from the main camp. Riker, Worf and Alexana... and three policemen... begin to move quickly forward... 66A ANGLE - TWO TERRORISTS standing by the entrance to the main cavern... Worf and one of the policemen move quickly up behind them... slap tiny hyposprays against their necks. There is a quiet HISS, and the rebels slump. Worf and the policeman quickly pull the unconscious rebels into cover. While this is occurring Riker crawls forward using all available cover, to get a look at the camp proper. 67 ANOTHER ANGLE The camp. People going about their business. 68 ANOTHER ANGLE As Riker scrambles back to his companions. Using hand signals he indicates where he believes the generator is located. Alexana nods, and draws her phaser. Leads her men into the darkness. Riker and Worf move back... they see -- 68A HIS POV - BEVERLY moving into the alcove... STAR TREK: "The High Ground" - REV. 11/7/89 - ACT FIVE 56. 69 INT. THE ALCOVE Beverly returns... PICARD How dangerous would another ride through the inverter be to us? BEVERLY I'm not sure. But I don't want you to start thinking... PICARD It is our obligation to think of escape... BEVERLY He's prepared to kill you. PICARD A fine reason to escape... (beat) Do you think you've gained his confidence? She reacts, shows Picard the sketchbook... he reacts as he sees it. PICARD Indeed, you have... and a bit more... this might prove to be an advantage, Doctor... BEVERLY (interrupting) Jean-Luc, there are some things... I want to say... just in case we don't get out of this... And he looks at her and we can only speculate on what she might say... because suddenly the lights go. For an instant they are in total blackness then emergency back-up comes on. The cave is now heavily shadowed, and eerie in the red lit gloom. PICARD Have they found us... ? 69A ANGLE ON - FINN (FORMERLY SCENE 71) He is looking about wildly. He seems to make a decision, and he starts running for the alcove. STAR TREK: "The High Ground" - REV. 11/6/89 - ACT FIVE 57. 70 ANOTHER ANGLE - RIKER AND WORF Moving swiftly through the darkness. They are seen by a pair of terrorists and must overpower them on their way to the rescue... quietly, quickly... they take them down... 70A WEAPONS CACHE Several terrorists run to get access to their phaser rifles... but as they do, Rutian police move out and cover them... 71 OMITTED 72 ANGLE ON - ALEXANA She spots Finn. She moves after him... 73 ANGLE ON - THE ALCOVE Finn ENTERS. Finn raises a phaser at Picard. BEVERLY Finn... STAR TREK: "The High Ground" - REV. 11/7/89 - ACT FIVE 58. 73A ANGLE - ALEXANA (OPTICAL) At the mouth of the alcove... FIRES her phaser and Finn goes down... Riker and Worf arrive, move to Picard... the terrorists are all covered... Worf frees the captain from his cuffs... 73B BEVERLY moves to Finn's body, checks his vital signs. BEVERLY He's dead. 73C INT. CAVERN - OUTSIDE THE ALCOVE As they come out. Riker exchanges a look with Alexana. And he is not harsh in this because he has shared her frustration, but still -- RIKER You didn't have to kill him. ALEXANA As a prisoner he would have been a focus for violence as his followers tried to free him. Now, he's a martyr, but the death toll may be lower -- at least in the short term. (beat) An imperfect solution for an imperfect world. WORF Captain... They turn to see... STAR TREK: "The High Ground" - REV. 11/7/89 - ACT FIVE 59. 73D OMITTED 73E THE TWELVE YEAR OLD TERRORIST BOY standing there, holding a phaser rifle pointed at Alexana... hate burning in his eyes. A long beat. 73F ANGLE - BEVERLY turns to the boy, she implores him with her eyes to give her the gun... BEVERLY No more killing. He finally, slowly gives up the gun... and Rutians rush him and take him away. ALEXANA Already another one to take his place... it never ends. RIKER (not so sure) He could have killed you. He didn't. Maybe the end begins with one boy putting down a gun. Off her look. 74 thru OMITTED 76 77 INT. MAIN BRIDGE C.U. on Wesley at Conn. Anxiously waiting. 78 NEW ANGLE to include Data at Command. Troi and Geordi nearby. Supernumeraries at all other posts. The turbolift doors open and in come Picard and Beverly, followed by Riker and Worf. Wesley and Beverly share a long, loving smile across the room. He hurries over. A tight hug. BEVERLY I hear I owe my rescue to you. STAR TREK: "The High Ground" - REV. 11/6/89 - ACT FIVE 59A. 78 CONTINUED: WESLEY I was just part of the team. (a real kid) It's good to have you back. (smiling at Picard) Both of you. Sir. Picard glances around the bridge... it's good to be back. PICARD (a beat) Take us out of orbit, Mister Crusher. Then noticing mother and son are not quite ready to let go of one another. PICARD (continuing) At your convenience. On our reunited crew... STAR TREK: "The High Ground" - REV. 11/5/89 - ACT FIVE 60. 78A EXT. SPACE - THE ENTERPRISE (OPTICAL) As it leaves orbit, we: FADE OUT. END OF ACT FIVE THE END STAR TREK: THE NEXT GENERATION "Deja Q" #40273-161 Written by Richard Danus Directed by Les Landau THE WRITING CREDITS MAY NOT BE FINAL AND SHOULD NOT BE USED FOR PUBLICITY OR ADVERTISING PURPOSES WITHOUT FIRST CHECKING WITH THE TELEVISION LEGAL DEPARTMENT. Copyright 1989 Paramount Pictures Corporation. All Rights Reserved. This script is not for publication or reproduction. No one is authorized to dispose of same. If lost or destroyed, please notify the Script Department. FINAL DRAFT NOVEMBER 14, 1989 STAR TREK: "Deja Q" - 11/14/89 - CAST STAR TREK: THE NEXT GENERATION "Deja Q" CAST PICARD Q RIKER Q2 DATA DOCTOR GARIN BEVERLY SCIENTIST TROI GEORDI WORF Non-Speaking GUINAN TECHNICIANS ENGINEER'S VOICE Non-Speaking SECURITY GUARDS SUPERNUMERARIES STAR TREK: "Deja Q" - 11/14/89 - SETS STAR TREK: THE NEXT GENERATION "Deja Q" SETS INTERIORS EXTERIORS USS ENTERPRISE USS ENTERPRISE MAIN BRIDGE ENGINEERING SHUTTLCRAFT CORRIDOR DETENTION CELL CAPTAIN'S READY ROOM TEN FORWARD TURBOLIFT SHUTTLECRAFT STAR TREK: "Deja Q" - 11/14/89 - PRONUNCIATION STAR TREK: THE NEXT GENERATION "Deja Q" PRONUNCIATION GUIDE BRE'EL bree-EL CALAMARAIN kal-ah-mah-REIGN DELTIVED DEL-tih-ved STAR TREK: "Deja Q" - REV. 11/17/89 - TEASER 1. STAR TREK: THE NEXT GENERATION "Deja Q" TEASER FADE IN: 1 EXT. SPACE - THE ENTERPRISE (OPTICAL) The ship orbits Bre'el, a small, verdant planet orbited by a single moon, irregularly shaped. PICARD (V.O.) Captain's log, Stardate 43539.1. We have moved into orbit around Bre'el Four to investigate a potentially catastrophic threat to the population from a descending asteroidal moon... 2 INT. MAIN BRIDGE (OPTICAL) To include MAIN VIEWER. PICARD, TROI and RIKER in the Command Chairs. DATA and WORF at their stations. SUPERNUMERARY at Conn. On the Main Viewer is DOCTOR GARIN, a middle-aged man. He is obviously very troubled. Another SCIENTIST is at his side. In the b.g. various TECHNICIANS check monitors. It has the look of controlled chaos that fills a hurricane center during a big storm. DATA The satellite's trajectory continues to deteriorate, Captain... This orbit will bring it to within five hundred kilometers of the planet's surface. GARIN We're predicting the atmospheric drag will bring it down on the next orbit. SCIENTIST Have you been able to find any explanation for this? DATA No, Doctor... it is a most unusual phenomenon. STAR TREK: "Deja Q" - REV. 11/17/89 - TEASER 1A. 2 CONTINUED: PICARD Won't the moon disintegrate prior to impact? SCIENTIST No, it has a ferrous crystaline structure and will be able to withstand tidal forces, Captain... RIKER Couldn't we just blow it into harmless chunks? DATA The total mass of the moon would remain the same, Commander. And the impact of thousands of fragments would spread destruction over an even wider area. STAR TREK: "Deja Q" - REV. 11/16/89 - TEASER 2. 2 CONTINUED: PICARD How long before impact... DATA Twenty-nine hours... projected somewhere on the western continent. It would destroy an area eight hundred kilometers in radius. SCIENTIST That damage would be insignificant, Captain, compared to the seismic repercussions... massive landquakes, and tsunami... GARIN The force would raise a cloud of dust around the planet, leading to a significant temperature reduction. We could be looking at our own ice age. PICARD (keying insignia) Commander La Forge, is there any way the Enterprise might be able to coax this satellite back where it belongs... ? INTERCUT: 3 INT. ENGINEERING GEORDI's at a console. SUPERNUMERARIES at various positions. The matter/anti-matter blender bubbling with power. GEORDI We'd need to apply a delta-vee of at least four kilometers per second. Even with warp power to the tractor beam, it would mean exceeding recommended impulse engine output by at least forty-seven percent. It'd be like an ant pushing a tricycle... a slim chance at best... STAR TREK: "Deja Q" - REV. 11/17/89 - TEASER 3. 3 CONTINUED: RIKER (to Picard) Given a choice between slim and none, I'll take slim any day... PICARD Make it so. RIKER Lieutenant Worf, signal all ships in this sector to rendezvous and join us in relief efforts. WORF Aye, sir. PICARD (to Main Viewer) We'll keep you informed of our progress. Picard out. 4 thru OMITTED 8 9 EXT. SPACE - THE ENTERPRISE (OPTICAL) The tractor beam flares out of the ship and grabs onto the small moon. The warp engines flare brighter as we apply power. The ship is trying to "plow" the moon into a higher orbit. 10 INT. BRIDGE (OPTICAL) As before. Picard and Riker looking at the viewer. The tractor beam holds the small moon. The moon does not move. Picard gets up and walks closer to the viewer. RIKER Can you give us any more, Geordi... ? GEORDI'S COM VOICE Not without burning out the tractor beam emitter... the circuits are already beyond their thermal limit. STAR TREK: "Deja Q" - REV. 11/17/89 - TEASER 4. 10 CONTINUED: DATA Delta-vee is ninety-two meters per second. The mass is too great. We are having an effect but it is negligible. In the background, a strange noise... it begins low... more like a million voices than a million machines... RIKER What is that... DATA Unable to identify source... It gets louder... GEORDI'S COM VOICE Impulse engines passing saftey limits. We're seconds from automatic shutdown. PICARD Reduce engines... tractor beam off... The sound continues to grow... and seems to surround the ship... they react... almost deafening now... RIKER Worf, what the hell do the sensors show... ? WORF The sound is not registering, Commander... The sound swirling inside and all around... ends with a slight POP. Q APPEARS, naked, suspended above everyone, as though held by an invisible puppet. Q Red Alert. PICARD Q. And Q promptly crashes to the floor. On reactions... 11 thru OMITTED 16 FADE OUT. END TEASER STAR TREK: "Deja Q" - REV. 11/21/89 - ACT ONE 5. ACT ONE FADE IN: 17 EXT. SPACE - THE ENTERPRISE (OPTICAL) As it orbits Bre'el, maintaining its distance to the moon, Klyo. PICARD (V.O.) Captain's log, supplemental. We are no closer to finding a solution to the deteriorating orbit of the Bre'el Four moon... but with the arrival of Q, we now have a good idea of the cause. 18 INT. BRIDGE Starting with Q putting on his jump suit... GEORDI (O.S.) We couldn't drive the tractor emitters hard enough, Captain... Panning to find Picard is getting a debriefing on the failed moon attempt from Geordi... GEORDI The beam was flexing, and it was impossible to transfer enough kinetic energy to the moon... PICARD Our options? GEORDI We did everything by the book and a little extra... we need more time or more power and we're short on both. I'll take a look and see if there are any rules I haven't broken. STAR TREK: "Deja Q" - REV. 11/20/89 - ACT ONE 5A. 18 CONTINUED: PICARD Keep me advised. Geordi EXITS. Picard turns toward Q with loathing in his eyes... RIKER We know you're behind this, Q... Q (re: the jumpsuit) It's not at all my best color... Behind what... what are you blathering about, Riker... Picard moves to confront him... PICARD What kind of twisted pleasure does it give you to bring terror into their lives... ? Q What? Whose lives? PICARD The millions of people down there who are watching as their moon falls out of the sky... Q I haven't the vaguest idea what you're talking about... and I have a much more serious problem... I am no longer a member of the continuum. My superiors have decided to punish me. Picard frowns... refusing to participate with this game of Q's... PICARD And punish us as well, it seems... He ignores Q, moves away... STAR TREK: "Deja Q" - REV. 11/20/89 - ACT ONE 6. 18 CONTINUED: (2) Q They said I've spread too much chaos through the universe and they have stripped me of all my powers. They look at him with disbelieving eyes. Off their reaction -- Q You do not believe me... ? Would I humiliate myself like this? RIKER If it served your purposes, yes. Q It is the truth. I stand before you, defrocked. I'm condemned to be a member of this lowest of species. A normal, imperfect, lumpen human being. TROI Turning you into a human was part of their punishment... ? Q No, it was my request. I could have chosen to exist as a Markoffian fire lizard or a Belzoidian flea, anything I wished... so long as it was mortal, but I only had a fraction of a second to mull and I chose... "this"... and asked them to bring me here... TROI Why? STAR TREK: "Deja Q" - REV. 11/20/89 - ACT ONE 7. 18 CONTINUED: (3) Q (moving to Picard) Because in all the universe you are the closest thing I have to a friend, Jean-Luc. Q smiles to Picard... Picard's look says it all. Data aims a tricorder at Q. DATA He is reading as fully human. Q (looks around the bridge) Is there an echo in here? TROI I'm even sensing an emotional presence in him. I would normally describe it as being terrified. Q How rude. Enough of this... Picard rises, moves back into the fray. PICARD Q, what is it you want... Q Your compassion... (a beat, off Picard's look) All right... Sanctuary on your ship... dreary as that may sound to both of us... PICARD Return the moon to its orbit. Q I have no powers. Q the ordinary. PICARD Q, the liar. Q, the misanthrope. STAR TREK: "Deja Q" - REV. 11/20/89 - ACT ONE 7A. 18 CONTINUED: (4) Q Q, the miserable. Q, the desperate. What must I do to convince you people... WORF Die. STAR TREK: "Deja Q" - REV. 11/20/89 - ACT ONE 8. 18 CONTINUED: (5) Q Very clever, Worf. Eat any good books lately? PICARD Fine. You wish to be treated as a human? Q Absolutely. PICARD Mister Worf, throw him in the brig. WORF Delighted, Captain. Q Jean-Luc... you can't do this... Worf moves to him... WORF You will walk or I will carry you. Q Given the options -- I'll walk. As they EXIT... Q (to Picard) You've disappointed me, Jean- Luc... I'm very disa... And Worf closes the turbolift doors... Riker and Picard exchange a glance. 18A INT. TURBOLIFT (FORMERLY SCENE 19) Worf and Q. Q It was a mistake... I never should have picked human... I knew it the minute I said it. (MORE) STAR TREK: "Deja Q" - 11/14/89 - ACT ONE 9. 18A CONTINUED: Q (Cont'd) To think of the future in this shell... forced to cover myself with fabric because of outdated human morality, to say nothing of being too hot or too cold, growing feeble as the years pass, losing my hair, catching a disease, being ticklish, sneezing, having an itch, a pimple, bad breath, having to bathe... WORF (acknowledges) Too bad. 19 INT. CORRIDOR (FORMERLY SCENE 20) Q and Worf exit the turbolift and walk down the corridor. Q "Klingon"... I should have said "Klingon". In my heart, I am a Klingon, Worf... So you understand I could never survive in confinement... The universe has been my back yard... this is cruel and unusual punishment. As a fellow Klingon, if you would speak to the captain on my behalf, I would be eternally grateful... which doesn't mean as much as it used to, I admit. 19A INT. DETENTION CELL (OPTICAL) WORF Be quiet or disappear back where you came from. Worf ushers him in. Q I can't disappear any more than you can win a beauty contest. (MORE) STAR TREK: "Deja Q" - 11/14/89 - ACT ONE 10. 19A CONTINUED: Q (Cont'd) If I ask a very simple question, do you think you can grasp it without troubling your intellect too much... ready? If I still had powers, would I permit you to lock me away? WORF You have fooled us too often, Q. Q Perspicacity incarnate. Please don't feel compelled to tell me the story of "the boy who cried Worf"? WORF Computer, activate forcefield. The room is now divided by a rim of lights. Q tests the force field. We see the EFFECT. Worf leaves. A security guard holds position... Q (yelling at Worf) I demand to be let out of here, do you hear me? You will deactivate this cell immediately. (no answer) "Romulan". I should have said "Romulan", you Klingon goat! And he sits down in frustration. 20 OMITTED 21 INT. READY ROOM Picard and Riker seated at the desk. PICARD The question is -- what sort of jaded game is he playing this time? STAR TREK: "Deja Q" - REV. 11/17/89 - ACT ONE 11. 21 CONTINUED: RIKER Maybe he just wants a big laugh. He'll take Bre'el Four to the edge of disaster, then pull the moon back. PICARD (thoughtful) Or he may have nothing to do with it at all. RIKER Do you honestly believe Q is telling the truth? PICARD Oh, I agree that is highly unlikely. But we have to proceed with our current dilemma as though Q is powerless to prevent it, don't we? RIKER As he sits, and watches us struggle... PICARD I don't see much choice. (speaking to com) Mister Worf, hail the Bre'el Four science station... WORF'S COM VOICE They're standing by, Captain... Picard turns on his monitor to reveal Garin and the Scientist. PICARD I'm sorry to report that our first attempt to restore the moon to its proper orbit has failed. GARIN We have less than twenty-five hours before impact... STAR TREK: "Deja Q" - REV. 11/17/89 - ACT ONE 11A. 21 CONTINUED: (2) RIKER Our chief engineer is working on ways to reinforce our tractor beam. PICARD There is hope... but if you have an evacuation plan... GARIN We have already started moving people from the coastal areas of the western continent... PICARD (acknowledges) We will make another attempt shortly... Picard out. He turns off the monitor... RIKER I gotta tell you Geordi is not optimistic... Suddenly, the room begins to glow... Picard and Riker exchange glances and head for the door. PICARD What the devil... ? As they exit... 22 INT. MAIN BRIDGE the EFFECT continues... Picard and Riker ENTER from the Ready Room... Data and supernumeraries are reacting. STAR TREK: "Deja Q" - REV. 11/17/89 - ACT ONE 12. 22 CONTINUED: RIKER Data... ? DATA Sensors are showing broad band emissions... including Berthold rays... RIKER Lethal? DATA No, Commander. Overall exposure is under seventy-five rems. Very low intensity. More like a soft medical scan... I would speculate that we are being probed... PICARD By whom? DATA The sensors cannot identify point of origin. It seems to be coming from all around us... Off their reactions... 22A INT. ENGINEERING Geordi reacts as the EFFECT rolls by... 22B INT. DETENTION (OPTICAL) Q is asleep with a rather pleasant expression on his face as the EFFECT zips right through the forcefields holding him prisoner... As the probe penetrates the field there is an additional EFFECT. The probe finds him and lingers on his face... and as it suddenly zips away... FADE OUT. END ACT ONE STAR TREK: "Deja Q" - 11/14/89 - ACT TWO 13. ACT TWO FADE IN: 22C EXT. SPACE - THE ENTERPRISE (OPTICAL) in orbit. 23 INT. DETENTION (OPTICAL) Picard ENTERS... Q, lying on his bunk, opens an eye... Q Ah, you've come to apologize... how nice... no offense taken... all is forgiven... He rises. PICARD Enough. I want to know exactly what is going on, Q... Q But Jean-Luc, how can I know what is going on? I have been in this dungeon of yours, helpless and alone... bored to tears... PICARD We have a moon that is inexplicably falling out of orbit... and now the ship has been probed with Berthold radiation... Q (covering up some concern) When? I wasn't aware of it. (off Picard's look) Truthfully, Jean-Luc. I have been entirely preoccupied by a most frightening experience of my own. A couple of hours ago, I started realizing this body was no longer functioning properly... I felt weak, the life oozing out of me... I could no longer stand... and then I lost consciousness... STAR TREK: "Deja Q" - 11/14/89 - ACT TWO 14. 23 CONTINUED: PICARD You fell asleep... Q It's terrifying... how can you stand it day after day... PICARD One gets used to it... Q What other dangers are in store for me... I am totally unprepared for this... I need guidance... Picard frowns, getting nowhere. PICARD I am unwilling to play along, Q. If you must keep up the charade, you will do it alone... As he starts to leave... Q Jean-Luc... wait... He walks into the FORCEFIELD... bounces back... Q This is getting on my nerves... now that I have nerves... Picard pauses at the door... Q You have a moon with a deteriorating orbit... I've known moons across the universe... big ones, small ones... I'm an expert... I can help you with this one... if you let me out of here. Picard reacts. PICARD Q, we're dealing with millions of lives... if you have the power to... STAR TREK: "Deja Q" - REV. 11/17/89 - ACT TWO 15. 23 CONTINUED: (2) Q I have no power... But I still have the knowledge... locked in this puny brain. You cannot afford to dismiss that advantage, can you? Picard must hold himself back... finally keys his insignia... PICARD Mister Data, please report to Detention Cell Three. Computer, remove the forcefield. (to Q) If this is what I must do to save those lives, I will. The field is removed. Q tentatively crosses past the barrier... PICARD (continuing) You will not be left alone for one moment while you are on this ship, Q. If you are human, which I seriously doubt, I suggest you work hard to earn our welcome. Q Oh, I'll earn your welcome. You only dislike me. There are others in the cosmos that truly despise me. Data ENTERS. PICARD You are hereby assigned to Q for the remainder of his stay... escort him to Mister La Forge in Engineering... Q Can I have a Starfleet uniform... That does not require an answer... Picard EXITS... Data studies Q. Q What are you looking at? STAR TREK: "Deja Q" - REV. 11/22/89 - ACT TWO 16. 23 CONTINUED: (3) DATA I was considering the possibility that you are telling the truth... and really are human. Q It's the ghastly truth, Mister Data... I can now stub my toe with the best of them. DATA (recognizing) An irony. (off Q's reaction) It would mean you have achieved in disgrace what I have always aspired to be. A beat on Data, then... 23A INT. CORRIDOR Q accompanying Data to Engineering. Q Humans are such commonplace little creatures. They roam the galaxy looking for something, and they don't even know what it is. DATA The human race has an enduring desire for knowledge, and for new opportunities to improve itself... Q There is certainly room for improvement. The truth is, Data, they are a minor species in the grand scheme. Not worth your envy... DATA Oh, I do not feel envy. Q Good. STAR TREK: "Deja Q" - REV. 11/22/89 - ACT TWO 16A. 23A CONTINUED: DATA I feel nothing at all. That is part of my dilemma. I have the curiosity of the human... but there are some questions I will never be able to answer... what is it like to laugh or to cry or to experience any human emotion... ? Q Believe me, life's a lot simpler without feelings... a lot simpler... And as they proceed down the hall... 24 INT. ENGINEERING (OPTICAL) Q is with Data and Geordi, bending over, studying data, photographs at the pool table... GEORDI The moon will hit its perigee in ten hours... we match its trajectory... increase emitter coolant rate so we can apply continuous warp-equivalent power nine to the tractor beam. We can keep pushing it for nearly seven hours and I think that might do it... but there's a problem... DATA The Enterprise will be dangerously close to the atmosphere. GEORDI That's the problem. Q This is incredible. STAR TREK: "Deja Q" - REV. 11/17/89 - ACT TWO 17. 24 CONTINUED: GEORDI You see something here, Q? Q I think I just hurt my back. I'm feeling pain. I don't think I like it. What's the right thing to say... "ow"? GEORDI (frustrated) Yeah... Q Ow. I don't think I can straighten up... DATA (keying insignia) Medical assistance to Engineering... GEORDI Q, I've got a few people down on Bre'el Four who are gonna be hurt if we don't... Q (interrupting) Yes, with your marvelous plan, you will not only tear the moon to pieces... but your precious ship as well. GEORDI You have a better idea... ? Q I would certainly begin by examining the cause and not the symptom. GEORDI We've done that, Q... and there's no way to determine... STAR TREK: "Deja Q" - REV. 11/17/89 - ACT TWO 18. 24 CONTINUED: (2) Q This is obviously the result of a large celestial object passing through at near right angles to the plane of the star system... probably a black hole... DATA Can you recommend a way to counter the effect? Q Simple. Change the gravitational constant of the universe. GEORDI (reacts) What... ? Q Change the gravitational constant of the universe. And thereby alter the mass of the asteroid... GEORDI Redefine gravity. How am I supposed to do that? Q You just do it. Where is that doctor anyway... ? DATA Geordi is trying to say that changing the gravitational constant of the universe is beyond our capabilities. Q Oh. In that case, never mind. Beverly ENTERS from the Engineering turbolift. Q Ah, Doctor Crusher, Starfleet shipped you back into exile, I see... DATA Q says he has hurt his back... STAR TREK: "Deja Q" - REV. 11/15/89 - ACT TWO 19. 24 CONTINUED: (3) BEVERLY (disbelieving) Uh huh. Geordi's mind is working now... as Beverly examines Q's back, he goes to the computer, starts working on something... BEVERLY Well, I wouldn't believe it if I didn't see it with my own eyes, ... and I still don't believe it... according to this, you have classic back trauma, muscle spasms... Q I've been under a lot of stress. Family problems... BEVERLY You won't get any sympathy from me. You've been a pain in our backside often enough... Q Your bedside manner is admirable, Doctor. I'm sure your patients recover quickly just to get away from you. She gives him a hypospray and he immediately feels better... at the computer -- GEORDI You know, it might work... Data moves to Geordi... GEORDI We can't change the gravitational constant of the universe but if we wrap a low level warp field around that moon, we could reduce its gravitational constant... make it lighter so we can push it. Q Glad I could help. (reacts) Ow... I think. STAR TREK: "Deja Q" - 11/14/89 - ACT TWO 20. 24 CONTINUED: (4) BEVERLY Now what? Q Something's wrong with my stomach... BEVERLY It hurts? Q It's making noise. BEVERLY Maybe you're hungry. 25 thru OMITTED 28 29 INT. TEN FORWARD Q and Data ENTER... Q What do I ask for? I've never eaten before. DATA The choice of meal is determined by individual tastes. Q What do you like? DATA Although I do not require sustenance, I occasionally ingest a semi-organic nutrient suspension in a silicon-based liquid medium. They sit at the bar. Q Is it good? DATA It would be more accurate to say it is "good for me" as it lubricates my bio-functions. STAR TREK: "Deja Q" - 11/14/89 - ACT TWO 21. 29 CONTINUED: Q It doesn't sound too appealing. What else is there? DATA A wide variety of items... the replicator can make anything you desire. Q How am I supposed to know what I desire? DATA I have observed that many food selections are influenced by the mood of the person ordering... Q I'm in a dreadful mood... get me something appropriate... DATA (considers) When Counselor Troi is in an unhappy mood, she often has something chocolate... Q Chocolate... DATA For example, a hot fudge sundae. I cannot speak from personal experience, but I have seen it often has a profound psychological impact. A waiter comes over. Q I'll have ten hot fudge sundaes. The waiter reacts. DATA I have never seen anyone eat ten. Q I'm in a really bad mood. And since I've never eaten before, I should be very hungry. STAR TREK: "Deja Q" - 11/14/89 - ACT TWO 22. 29 CONTINUED: (2) The waiter shrugs and moves off. Q reacts as he sees -- 29A ANGLE - GUINAN down the bar, coming out from the back... she sees him, reacts... Q frowns... Q (sotto, to Data) This... is not a moment I've been looking forward to. She slowly comes over... with a controlled grin, a long beat as they look each other. Finally... GUINAN I heard you were drummed out of the continuum. Q I prefer to look at it as a significant career change. GUINAN Just one of the boys, huh? Q One of the boys with an IQ of two thousand and five. DATA The Captain and much of the crew are not yet convinced that he is truly human. GUINAN Is that right? Guinan never takes her eyes off Q as she casually picks up a fork from behind the counter... and sharply stabs Q's hand... Q AAAH... GUINAN He's human. STAR TREK: "Deja Q" - REV. 11/15/89 - ACT TWO 23. 29A CONTINUED: Q (to Data) This is a dangerous creature. You have no idea... how could Picard allow her to join the crew and not me... GUINAN It must be frightening... totally defenseless... after being omnipotent all those centuries... Q (intimidated) I'm warning you... I still have friends in high places... GUINAN ... terrorizing one race after another... teasing them like helpless animals... delighting at the fear of your victims... Q (sarcastic) From now on, I'll do missionary work... DATA That would be a very noble cause, Q. GUINAN (re: Data) You could learn a few things from this one. Q Sure, the robot who teaches the course in humanities. DATA I am an android, not a robot. Q I beg your pardon. GUINAN Get used to it, Q. Q What? STAR TREK: "Deja Q" - REV. 11/17/89 - ACT TWO 24. 29A CONTINUED: (2) GUINAN Begging. You're a pitiful excuse for a human and the only way you're going to survive is by the charity of others. She moves down the bar. Two waiters bring Q's ten hot fudge sundaes... he's depressed, turns to Data, sighs -- Q I'm not hungry. On Data's reaction... 30 INT. MAIN BRIDGE Picard, Riker, Worf, supernumeraries. WORF Captain, sensors are picking up a cloud of energetic plasma... bearing three-four-one mark two-zero... range twelve kilometers and closing... PICARD On screen. 30A ANGLE - INCLUDE MAIN VIEWER (OPTICAL) An amorphous mass, shapeless and changing. WORF Energy patterns are reading as highly organized... RIKER (to Picard) A lifeform? PICARD Mister Worf, attempt to make contact... WORF Receiving a signal, sir... on speaker... STAR TREK: "Deja Q" - REV. 11/17/89 - ACT TWO 25. 30A CONTINUED: Worf puts it on speaker... it sounds like a series of computer modem signals... hurts the ears... RIKER Computer, analysis of signal... COMPUTER Signal patterns indicate intelligence. Unable to derive necessary referants to establish translation matrix. 30B INT. TEN FORWARD (OPTICAL) As people react to the cloud in view out the windows... Guinan reacts more than the others... GUINAN Calamarain... ... and as she glances at Q who hasn't seen it yet... there is a shot of light from the cloud which shoots through the window... and immediately isolates Q... he yells... avoids them briefly... but they move after him... as Data reacts... 30C INT. MAIN BRIDGE As before. WORF We're being hit by a field of energetic tachyons... penetrating the hull... location... deck ten... forward... PICARD Red alert. RIKER Increase power to shields... GEORDI'S COM VOICE Increasing power by twenty percent... WORF No effect... STAR TREK: "Deja Q" - REV. 11/17/89 - ACT TWO 26. 30C CONTINUED: GEORDI'S COM VOICE Increasing to forty percent... WORF Still no effect... 30D INT. TEN FORWARD (OPTICAL) The light EFFECT has wrapped up Q's legs as he scrambles helplessly to escape... Data tries to assist but the light EFFECT effectively blocks him off... 30E INT. ENGINEERING Geordi working feverishly... GEORDI Adjusting shield harmonics... Diverting power to the forward grids. 30EA INT. MAIN BRIDGE As before. WORF The added harmonics are blocking the tachyon field. 30F INT. TEN FORWARD (OPTICAL) The light EFFECT is cut off... Q is freed... still terrified... rolling on the ground... Q HELP ME. SOMEBODY HELP ME... On Guinan's reaction... GUINAN How the mighty have fallen. FADE OUT. END OF ACT TWO STAR TREK: "Deja Q" - REV. 11/20/89 - ACT THREE 27. ACT THREE FADE IN: 31 EXT. SPACE - THE ENTERPRISE (OPTICAL) Orbiting Bre'el. The plasma cloud is still ominously present. PICARD (V.O.) Captain's log, supplemental. We have sustained light damage from an attack by an alien species known as the Calamarain. They apparently have a grievance with Q... no doubt one of many lifeforms that do. 32 INT. BRIDGE Picard, Riker, Data, Worf, Troi are on the bridge. Q paces nervously. His rhetoric remains, but there is an underlying fear that we've never seen from him. Q The Calamarain are not very hospitable creatures. They exist as swirls of ionized gas. PICARD What did you do to them to motivate such a vengeance? Q Nothing bizarre. Nothing grotesque. RIKER You tormented them -- Q A subjective term, Riker. One creature's torment, is another creature's delight. They simply have no sense of humor... a character flaw with which you can personally identify. RIKER I say we turn him over to them. STAR TREK: "Deja Q" - REV. 11/20/89 - ACT THREE 27A. 32 CONTINUED: Q Oh, my mistake... you do have a sense of humor... a dreadful one. RIKER I'm serious. Picard is adding things up... realizing... STAR TREK: "Deja Q" - REV. 11/17/89 - ACT THREE 28. 32 CONTINUED: PICARD Of course. You knew this would happen, didn't you? Q I assure you one cannot anticipate the Calamarain, Picard... they're intelligent, yes... but undependable... very flighty... PICARD But you have so many enemies, Q, of various shapes and sizes... certainly you must have been concerned that once you became mortal... some of them might try to look you up... Q It occurred to me. PICARD With all your chatter about "friendship", the real reason you're here is for protection, isn't it? Q You're so bright, Jean-Luc. Yes, of course, you're correct. I know human beings. You are all sopping over with compassion and forgiveness. The human race can't wait to absolve almost any offense. It's an inherent weakness in the breed. PICARD What you call weakness, some of us would call strength. Q Call it what you want, Picard. I know you'll protect me even though I've tortured you now and again... RIKER Fighting off every species you've insulted would be a full time mission. And it's not the one I signed up for. STAR TREK: "Deja Q" - REV. 11/15/89 - ACT THREE 28A. 32 CONTINUED: (2) PICARD Indeed. Human or not, I want no part of you. We will deposit you at the first starbase. Let them deal with you... Q But I can be a valuable member of your team, Picard... PICARD As though you have the faintest notion about team-work or cooperation... STAR TREK: "Deja Q" - REV. 11/15/89 - ACT THREE 29. 32 CONTINUED: (3) Q I can learn. I'm human. PICARD Then I suggest you apply to Starfleet Academy... RIKER Don't use me as a reference. DATA He has provided important theoretical guidance for Geordi's analysis of the Bre'el satellite, Captain. Reactions. Surprise at Data speaking up on his behalf. TROI It seems you have an advocate, Q. DATA I am only stating a fact, Counselor. Picard reluctantly acknowledges that fact... keys his insignia... PICARD Mister La Forge, your status? 33 thru OMITTED 34 INTERCUT: 35 INT. ENGINEERING At the console... GEORDI I've been putting together a program to extend the forward lobe of our warp field. The field coils are not designed to envelop such a large volume. But I'm attempting to modify their alignment parameters. STAR TREK: "Deja Q" - REV. 11/17/89 - ACT THREE 29A. 35 CONTINUED: DATA Maintaining field integrity will be difficult, Geordi. GEORDI I think we can do it manually. The moon's reaching its perigee in fourteen minutes... STAR TREK: "Deja Q" - REV. 11/15/89 - ACT THREE 30. 36 INT. MAIN BRIDGE PICARD Mister Data, escort Q to Engineering... (to Q) You will assist Mister La Forge. Data and Q EXIT. PICARD Mister Worf, hail the Bre'el Four science station. 36A INT. TURBOLIFT Data and Q... Q fuming... Q Picard really thinks I can't cut it on his starship... I can do anything his little trained minions can do. DATA I do not perceive that your skills are doubted, Q. I believe the captain is more concerned with your ability to interact successfully with... his "little trained minions". The turbolift opens... they EXIT... 36B INT. CORRIDOR - CONTINUOUS Leading to Engineering. DATA Human interpersonal relationships are most complex... your experiences may not have adequately prepared you. STAR TREK: "Deja Q" - REV. 11/17/89 - ACT THREE 31. 36B CONTINUED: Q I don't want human interpersonal relationships. I just want to prove to Picard that I'm indispensable. DATA To function aboard a starship, or in any human activity, you will have to form relationships. Q Why does this have to be so hard... DATA Of more immediate importance is your ability to work within groups... Q I've never been any good in groups... it's difficult working in a group when you're omnipotent... Moving down the corridor toward Engineering... 37 thru OMITTED 38 39 INT. MAIN BRIDGE (OPTICAL) Doctor Garin and the scientist are on the Main Viewer... Troi has left the bridge. GARIN The tides reached ten meters on the last orbit. They are already beginning to swell again. We have a lot of frightened people down here, Captain... PICARD Your moon has begun moving toward its perigee, Doctor... we are prepared to make our attempt... STAR TREK: "Deja Q" - REV. 11/15/89 - ACT THREE 31A. 39 CONTINUED: SCIENTIST (acknowledges) Our population has already taken shelter... but I'm afraid no shelter will be adequate if you fail... Especially for the people on the western continent. GARIN Whatever the results, we know you've done your best, Picard. It's appreciated. STAR TREK: "Deja Q" - REV. 11/20/89 - ACT THREE 32. 39 CONTINUED: (2) PICARD I'll keep you advised, Doctor. Picard out. WORF Captain, sensors are reading increased energy output from the Calamarain... 39A PICARD reacts... GEORDI'S COM VOICE La Forge to bridge. The moon has reached its minimum orbital distance... it's time, Captain... RIKER We'll have to lower shields... PICARD (knowing the risks) Proceed. (beat) Mister Worf, keep a close eye on Q's friends out there... WORF Understood. 40 INT. ENGINEERING Geordi and supernumeraries are working the controls as Data and Q ENTER... Q, the "camp director"... Q Okay, everyone, here's what we're going to do... Geordi reacts... STAR TREK: "Deja Q" - REV. 11/17/89 - ACT THREE 33. 40 CONTINUED: GEORDI Q, everybody already knows what they're going to do, except for you... now here's what I need... Q La Forge, obviously my knowledge and experience exceed yours... by about a billion times... so if you'll just step aside gracefully... GEORDI (impatient) Your experience will be most valuable to me if you can manually control the field integrity... Q (reacts) Don't be foolish. That's a waste of my talents... GEORDI Get to the controls or get the hell out of here... And he moves off to serious business... GEORDI Data, you're my liason to the bridge... I'll need you with me... Q (to Data) Who does he think he is to give me orders... DATA Geordi thinks he is in command here... and he is correct. Q swallows hard... moves to the controls... as Data moves to Geordi... 40A INT. MAIN BRIDGE RIKER Engineering, holding at station keeping, range six hundred and forty meters. STAR TREK: "Deja Q" - REV. 11/16/89 - ACT THREE 33A. 40A CONTINUED: DATA'S COM VOICE Containment fields to flight tolerance. 40B INT. ENGINEERING Q running the controls... moving to find Data monitoring sensors with Geordi... DATA Warp core to ninety percent. GEORDI Engage field coils. Tractor beam to stand-by. Field output... ? Field output... ? Q (reacts, bored) Two-seventeen... GEORDI Impulse engines to full. Ready to engage tractor beam. RIKER'S COM VOICE Lowering shields. Engage tractor beam. STAR TREK: "Deja Q" - REV. 11/17/89 - ACT THREE 34. 41 OMITTED 42 EXT. SPACE - THE ENTERPRISE (OPTICAL) As in the tease, the tractor beam locks onto the moon. 42A INT. ENGINEERING GEORDI Extending warp field forward. 42B ANGLE - MONITOR (OPTICAL) A computer graphic shows the field extending from the ship and embracing the moon... only it doesn't quite get it all... PICARD'S COM VOICE Engineering, is that the forward limit? DATA Yes, Captain... we are unable to encompass the entire moon... PICARD'S COM VOICE Do you recommend we proceed... ? A beat as they look to Geordi... Q (shakes his head) The two parts of the moon will have different inertial densities... 42C ANGLE - MOVING WITH GEORDI GEORDI I can adjust the field symmetry to compensate... Q I doubt it. GEORDI You don't know what this ship can do, Mister... (keying insignia) (MORE) STAR TREK: "Deja Q" - REV. 11/16/89 - ACT THREE 34A. 42C CONTINUED: GEORDI (Cont'd) Yes, Captain... I think it still might work... increasing power to tractor beam and warp field... Q (to LaForge) And if you're wrong, the moon will crumble due to subspace stress... don't say I didn't warn... GEORDI Shut up, Q. Leaving his post... Q I will not be spoken to in this manner... STAR TREK: "Deja Q" - REV. 11/17/89 - ACT THREE 35. 42C CONTINUED: (2) GEORDI (do something about him) Data... DATA Q, I strongly advise that you return to your post. Q reacts, listens to Data, hangs his head, returns to his post... DATA (checking readings) Inertial mass of the moon has decreased to approximately two-point-five million metric tons... GEORDI It's working. We can move it. Firing impulse engines... 42D EXT. SPACE - THE ENTERPRISE (OPTICAL) As the impulse engines provide thrust... 43 INT. MAIN BRIDGE (OPTICAL) As before. The computer graphic is on the main viewer. DATA'S COM VOICE The moon's trajectory has moved point-three percent... point-four percent... Worf reacts to something he sees on sensors... WORF Emergency... shields up... RIKER Disengage tractor beam... WORF Calamarain attacking... He's interrupted as the Enterprise suffers a massive impact... STAR TREK: "Deja Q" - REV. 11/16/89 - ACT THREE 35A. 43 CONTINUED: WORF Shields holding... tachyon field repelled... GEORDI'S COM VOICE Captain, the impact of the blast is pushing us into the upper atmosphere... STAR TREK: "Deja Q" - REV. 11/17/89 - ACT THREE 36. 44 thru OMITTED 45A 45B EXT. SPACE - THE ENTERPRISE (OPTICAL) glows as it hits the atmosphere... 45C INT. ENGINEERING DATA Hull temperature rising... two thousand degrees... two thousand five hundred degrees. GEORDI Moving to full impulse power... we've gotta get out of here... 45D INT. MAIN BRIDGE WORF Calamarain are resuming attack... Suddenly, the ship is shaken again... and now the light EFFECT invades the bridge... WORF They've overpowered the shields... hull penetration... deck thirty-six... Engineering... RIKER Geordi, can you direct any more power to the shields... ? 45E INT. ENGINEERING GEORDI We need all the power we have to get out of the atmosphere, Commander. The LIGHT EFFECT reaches and grabs Q who yells... Data is on his feet on his way to help Q... who is being wrapped up in the EFFECT like a caterpillar in a cocoon... being raised up in the air... STAR TREK: "Deja Q" - REV. 11/17/89 - ACT THREE 37. 45E CONTINUED: Geordi gets an idea to repel the attack... GEORDI (to a supernumerary) Try activating the structural integrity field. As Q is lifted, Data grabs him in a tug of war... when suddenly Data is enveloped by the EFFECT... Geordi reacts... GEORDI (yelling orders) It's not working. Structural field harmonics on manual. He moves to the console, begins making manual adjustments... RIKER'S COM VOICE Hull temperature falling, Geordi... we're in the clear... GEORDI Diverting power to forward section. Now. The light disappears... Data and Q fall to the ground... Geordi rushes to Data who isn't moving... others join him... GEORDI Data... Data... ? Q, not getting any attention... Q What about me? FADE OUT. END OF ACT THREE STAR TREK: "Deja Q" - REV. 11/22/89 - ACT FOUR 38. ACT FOUR FADE IN: 46 OMITTED 46A EXT. SPACE - THE ENTERPRISE (OPTICAL) In orbit. 46B OMITTED 46C INT. SICKBAY (FORMERLY SCENE 46B) Data is unconscious. Geordi and Beverly are both working on him... Picard, Riker and Q watching. Q seems confused, unsure of how to act or what to do. GEORDI The charge nearly knocked out his positronic net. RIKER What can you do for him? GEORDI We'll try to discharge and reset the motor pathways, recouple autonomic nodes... BEVERLY There's overpressure in his fluidic systems, thermal shock... If he was mortal, he'd be dead. Q (with a subtext of guilt) Let us not overstate matters here, Doctor... I am mortal and I survived... They stare at him... Q (off their reaction) The cheers are overwhelming. STAR TREK: "Deja Q" - REV. 11/22/89 - ACT FOUR 38A. 46C CONTINUED: PICARD (quietly seething) You exceed your own standards of selfish preoccupation. Have you no concern for the officer who very probably saved your life? Q does, but this is hard for him to admit... STAR TREK: "Deja Q" - REV. 11/17/89 - ACT FOUR 39. 46C CONTINUED: Q (more hope than conviction) He's strong, he'll survive. GEORDI Osmotic pressure still negative. Maybe if we by-passed the flow regulator... BEVERLY It would be helpful if everybody just got out of here now... GEORDI We'll let you know as soon as there's anything to tell you. Picard and Q EXIT... Riker lingers for business... RIKER Geordi, the moon's trajectory... ? GEORDI All we did was buy ourselves another orbit at most... we can try again when it comes back to the perigee... RIKER And when we drop our shields, the Calamarains go after Q again... GEORDI (bitter about Data) He's not worth it, Commander. Riker acknowledges... EXITS. 47 INT. READY ROOM Picard sits at his desk, doing some busy work... sipping tea... a chime at the door... STAR TREK: "Deja Q" - REV. 11/15/89 - ACT FOUR 40. 47 CONTINUED: PICARD Come... Q ENTERS... they take a beat to look at each other... and Q is in an unusually somber mood... Q You're right, of course. I am extraordinarily selfish. It's served me so well in the past... PICARD It will not serve you here. Q Don't be so hard on me, Jean-Luc. You've been mortal all your life. You know all about dying. I've never given it a second thought. Or a first thought for that matter. (beat) I could have been killed. If not for Data... that one, brief delay he created, I would have been gone. No more me. And nobody would have missed me, would they? Picard looks across at Q for a long, long beat... no compassion from our captain here... Q And yet Data may have sacrificed himself for me. Why? Why would he risk his own life for mine? PICARD That is his special nature. He has learned the lessons of humanity well... Q I ask myself if I would have done the same for him. And I am forced to realize the answer is no. And I feel... I feel ashamed. STAR TREK: "Deja Q" - REV. 11/15/89 - ACT FOUR 41. 47 CONTINUED: (2) PICARD I am not your father confessor. You will not receive absolution from me, Q. You have brought nothing but pain and suffering to my crew. And to this very moment, I am not entirely convinced that this is still not your latest attempt at a bad joke. Q It is a bad joke. On me. I am the joke of the universe. The king who would be man. (beat) As I learn more and more about what it is to be human, I am more and more convinced that I will never make a good one. I just don't have what it takes, Jean-Luc. Without my powers, I'm frightened of everything. I'm a coward. I'm miserable. (beat) And I don't think I can go on this way. And he is clearly broken... he EXITS... on Picard's reaction... STAR TREK: "Deja Q" - REV. 11/15/89 - ACT FOUR 42-43. 47A thru OMITTED 48A 49 INT. SICKBAY Geordi and Beverly are still working on Data who is conscious, but has not regained full use of his program... Q ENTERS... BEVERLY He's going to be all right. STAR TREK: "Deja Q" - REV. 11/20/89 - ACT FOUR 44. 49 CONTINUED: GEORDI We're recalibrating his language circuits... he can't talk to us yet. Q goes to Data's side. Data looks up at him. Q There are creatures in the universe who consider you the ultimate achievement, android. No feelings, no emotions -- no pain. And yet you covet those qualities of humanity. Believe me, you are not missing anything. (beat) But if it means anything to you, Data... you are a better human than I. He goes out and the doors close on him. Data looks at Beverly and Geordi... 49A INT. TURBOLIFT Q ENTERS, morose... Q Where's the Main Shuttlebay? COMPUTER VOICE Main Shuttlebay is located on deck four. Q Take me there... 50 thru OMITTED 55 56 INT. BRIDGE Picard, Riker and Worf. WORF An unscheduled shuttlecraft has just been launched. PICARD On Main Viewer. STAR TREK: "Deja Q" - REV. 11/20/89 - ACT FOUR 44A. 56A ANGLE - VIEWER (OPTICAL) The shuttlecraft moves away from the ship. PICARD Opening hailing frequency. WORF Frequency open. PICARD Shuttle occupant. Identify yourself. STAR TREK: "Deja Q" - REV. 11/16/89 - ACT FOUR 45. 56A CONTINUED: The screen changes to reveal Q in the shuttle cabin. Q Don't try to talk me out of it, Jean-Luc. PICARD Q? Return to the ship at once. Q I just can't get used to following orders. WORF Captain, the plasma cloud is moving toward the shuttle. Q It's easier this way. They won't bother you after I'm gone. RIKER Engineering, prepare to extend shields... Q Please, do not fall back on your tired cliche of charging to the rescue in the nick of time... I do not wish to be rescued... My life as a human being is a dismal failure. Maybe my death can have a little dignity. PICARD There is no dignity in suicide... Q Yes, I suppose you're quite right. The death of a coward. So be it. (beat) Anyway, as a human, I'd die of boredom. He pushes a button, goes off line and the starfield with shuttlecraft returns... on reactions... STAR TREK: "Deja Q" - 11/14/89 - ACT FOUR 46. 57 thru OMITTED 59 60 EXT. SPACE (OPTICAL) The Calamarain in the distance... closing on the shuttlecraft. 61 thru OMITTED 67 FADE OUT. END ACT FOUR STAR TREK: "Deja Q" - REV. 11/17/89 - ACT FIVE 47. ACT FIVE FADE IN: 68 EXT. SPACE (OPTICAL) As before, the Calamarain moves toward the shuttlecraft. 69 INT. MAIN BRIDGE Picard frowns... PICARD This goes against all my better judgment... (keys insignia) Transporter Room Three, lock on to Shuttle One... beam it back to it's bay. ENGINEER'S VOICE Aye, Captain... PICARD Well, it's a perfectly good shuttlecraft... ENGINEER'S VOICE Captain, unable to transport... For some reason, I can't lock on... RIKER Worf, are you sensing any sort of interference from the Calamarain? STAR TREK: "Deja Q" - REV. 11/16/89 - ACT FIVE 47A. 69 CONTINUED: WORF No, Commander, but they are continuing to move toward the shuttle. RIKER Geordi, extend shields around Shuttle One... 69A INT. ENGINEERING Geordi moving to action... STAR TREK: "Deja Q" - 11/14/89 - ACT FIVE 48. 69A CONTINUED: GEORDI Extending shields ... (reacts) Commander... the shields are frozen... RIKER'S COM VOICE Cause... GEORDI Unknown. 69B INT. MAIN BRIDGE RIKER Lock on tractor beam... GEORDI'S COM VOICE Tractor beam is not functioning either... RIKER What the hell is going on? 70 INT. SHUTTLECRAFT (OPTICAL) Q, at the controls. Suddenly beside him, APPEARS a man dressed in the same clothes as Q's. Q reacts. Q2 Not bad, Q. Not great. But not bad. Q (surprised) Q... Q2 Sacrificing yourself for these humans... ? Do I detect a selfless act... ? Q You flatter me. I'm only trying to put a quick end to a miserable existence. Q2 (re: the suit) What a dreadful color. STAR TREK: "Deja Q" - 11/14/89 - ACT FIVE 49. 70 CONTINUED: Q What are you doing here? Q2 I've been keeping track of you. Q reacts, pleasantly surprised... Q Really? I always felt you were in my corner... Q2 Actually, I was the one who got you kicked out... (off Q's look) You're incorrigible, Q, a lost cause. I can't go to a single solar system without apologizing for you... and I'm tired of it... Q I wasn't the one who misplaced the entire Deltived asteroid belt... Q2 This is not about me. (beat) I have better places to be. But, somebody had to keep an eye on you in case you still found a way to cause trouble... even as a member of this limited species... Q2 (sarcastic) I hope I've kept you amused. Q2 Barely. But these humans are rather interesting... I'm beginning to understand what you see in them. After all the things you've done, they're still intent on keeping you safe. Q A genetic weakness of the race. STAR TREK: "Deja Q" - 11/14/89 - ACT FIVE 50. 70 CONTINUED: (2) Q2 And they're still at it. They just tried to beam you back or whatever they call it... I stopped them... Q (gallows humor) Well then, if the Calamarain will just hurry up and finish this, we'll get you on your way... Q2 No, I put them on hold too. There's still this matter of the selfless act... Q reacts... Q2 You and I both know that the Calamarain would have eventually destroyed the Enterprise to get to you... and that's really why you left... Q (sensing hope) It was... a tiny bit selfless... wasn't it... Q2 And there's my problem. I get back to the continuum and tell them you committed a selfless act just before the end... I'm gonna be tied up with questions and explanations for centuries... Q Q, I've learned my lesson... Q2 (bull-stuff) Remember who you're talking to here... all knowing, all seeing... (sighs) Fine. You have your powers back. Try to stay out of trouble... STAR TREK: "Deja Q" - 11/14/89 - ACT FIVE 51. 70 CONTINUED: (3) He DISAPPEARS. Q smiles, rises... tries on his powers by snapping his fingers, immediately CHANGING his jump suit into a Starfleet uniform... Q And they wanted to destroy me, did they? He holds out the palm of his hand. 71 thru OMITTED 79 80 EXT. SPACE (OPTICAL) The Calamarain disappear. 81 INT. SHUTTLE (OPTICAL) Q holding out the palm of his hand. There is now a glow on it. Q If you think I tormented you in the past, my little friends -- wait until you see what I do with you now. Q2's head comes down through the hull... Q2 (V.O.) (a warning) Q --? He stops. Q I was just seeing if you were still watching He blows on the palm of his hand. The glow is blown away. Q2 reacts, nods okay. 82 INT. BRIDGE (OPTICAL) Picard, Riker, Troi, Worf, Data, Geordi on the bridge. STAR TREK: "Deja Q" - 11/14/89 - ACT FIVE 52. 82 CONTINUED: DATA Sir, the aliens have disappeared. (beat) And so has the shuttle. RIKER Scan the sector... DATA I have, sir. PICARD (reacts) Well, I guess that's the end of Q. A cue for the APPEARANCE of a Mexican Mariachi Band... Q as the lead trumpet... Q Au contraire, mon capitaine... heee's back... And as they blare into a song... Q waves his arms and confetti is falling out of nowhere... and the crew finds fat cigars in their mouths... which they promptly discard... Q I have been forgiven, embraced by my brothers and sisters of the continuum... I am immortal again, omnipotent again... RIKER Swell. Q Don't fret, Riker... my good fortune is your good fortune. Two beautiful babes APPEAR in bikinis with their arms around Riker... RIKER I don't need your fantasy women, Q... Q You've become so stolid, Commander... you weren't like this before the beard... (MORE) STAR TREK: "Deja Q" - REV. 11/17/89 - ACT FIVE 53. 82 CONTINUED: (4) Q (Cont'd) (off Riker's look) Very well... He snaps his fingers and the girls are now caressing Worf... who reacts... PICARD Q... Q But I feel like celebrating... PICARD I don't. Q frowns, snaps his fingers... and the girls DISAPPEAR... PICARD All of it. Q snaps his fingers and the band DISAPPEARS and Q is dressed again in the Starfleet uniform. PICARD Now, at the risk of being rude... Q Yes, I have once again overstayed my welcome. As a human, I was ill-equipped to thank you, Picard. But as myself, you have my everlasting gratitude. (beat) Until next time, of course. But before I go, there is a debt I must repay... And he moves to Data... Q ... to my professor of the humanities... I have decided my dear Data to give you something very, very special... DATA (reacts) If your intention is to make me human, Q... STAR TREK: "Deja Q" - REV. 11/15/89 - ACT FIVE 54. 82 CONTINUED: (3) Q No no no no no... don't be foolish... I would never curse you by making you human... Let's just call it a going away present. Data reacts and Q grins at him and suddenly Q disappears and Data bursts into a belly laugh... reactions... GEORDI Uh, Data... Data? Why are you laughing? Data collects himself. DATA I do not know. But it was a wonderful... feeling. WORF Bre'el Four hailing us, Captain. PICARD On screen, Lieutenant. 82A thru OMITTED 89 90 ANGLE - INCLUDE MAIN VIEWER (OPTICAL) Garin and the scientist are all smiles... GARIN Captain Picard... you've done it... PICARD I'm sorry... ? SCIENTIST The moon is back in its normal orbit. How did you manage it? PICARD (reacts) I didn't. Stand by, Bre'el Four... RIKER Let's see it, Worf... STAR TREK: "Deja Q" - REV. 11/22/89 - ACT FIVE 55. 90 CONTINUED: The viewscreen changes to the moon in orbit around the planet... PICARD Mister Data, your analysis... DATA The moon's altitude is fifty-five thousand kilometers, projected orbit is nearly circular. There is no further danger to the planet. Picard and Riker exchange a look. Picard acknowledges, relieved... PICARD Good. Ensign, set a course for Station Nigala-Four. (sitting) Perhaps there's a little humanity left in Q after all. As he raises his hand to "engage", a cigar appears in it... Q (V.O.) (whispered so only he can hear it) Don't bet on it, Picard. 91 OMITTED 92 EXT. SPACE - THE ENTERPRISE (OPTICAL) It warps away to continue its journey. FADE OUT. END OF ACT FIVE THE END STAR TREK: THE NEXT GENERATION "A Matter of Perspective" #40273-162 Written by Ed Zuckerman Directed by Cliff Bole THE WRITING CREDITS MAY NOT BE FINAL AND SHOULD NOT BE USED FOR PUBLICITY OR ADVERTISING PURPOSES WITHOUT FIRST CHECKING WITH THE TELEVISION LEGAL DEPARTMENT. Copyright 1989 Paramount Pictures Corporation. All Rights Reserved. This script is not for publication or reproduction. No one is authorized to dispose of same. If lost or destroyed, please notify the Script Department. FINAL DRAFT NOVEMBER 27, 1989 STAR TREK: "A Matter of Perspective" - 11/27/89 - CAST STAR TREK: THE NEXT GENERATION "A Matter of Perspective" CAST PICARD KRAG RIKER APGAR DATA MANUA BEVERLY TAYNA TROI GEORDI WORF WESLEY O'BRIEN Non-Speaking TWO ART STUDENTS ENSIGN WILLIAMS LIEUTENANT WRIGHT NUDE FEMALE MODEL NURSE CREWWOMAN SUPERNUMERARIES STAR TREK: "A Matter of Perspective" - 11/27/89 - SETS STAR TREK: THE NEXT GENERATION "A Matter of Perspective" SETS INTERIORS EXTERIORS USS ENTERPRISE USS ENTERPRISE MAIN BRIDGE CAPTAIN'S READY ROOM SPACE STATION CORRIDOR TRANSPORTER ROOM TURBOLIFT SICKBAY HOLODECK HOLODECK EMPTY ART CLASS SPACE STATION SPACE STATION LABORATORY LIVING AREA GUEST QUARTERS STAR TREK: "A Matter of Perspective" - 11/30/89 STAR TREK: THE NEXT GENERATION "A Matter of Perspective" PRONUNCIATION GUIDE APGAR AP-garr DICOSILIUM dye-co-SIL-lee-uhm MANUA MAN-you-ah TANUGA TAN-ooh-guh TANUGAN TAN-ooh-gun TAYNA TAY-nah EMILA em-EEL-ah STAR TREK: "Perspective" - REV. 11/28/89 - TEASER 1. STAR TREK: THE NEXT GENERATION "A Matter of Perspective" TEASER FADE IN: 1 INT. HOLODECK/ART CLASS Open on side view of painting canvas. PICARD'S hand comes into picture from o.s. with paintbrush and works on the as-yet-unseen painting. PULL BACK to reveal PICARD sitting in an art class along with TWO SUPERNUMERARIES. They are all painting something that is presently o.s. 2 ANOTHER ANGLE shows that the class is painting a NUDE FEMALE MODEL. 3 ON HOLODECK DOORS The doors OPEN and DATA ENTERS. He walks over to address Picard. DATA (sotto voce) We have arrived at Tanuga Four, Captain. The away team has completed its survey of Doctor Apgar's work and is ready to return to the ship. PICARD (putting aside paintbrush) Good. Data is curious about Picard's artwork and is trying to get a better look at it when Picard notices his interest. PICARD (cont'd) (gestures) Please... and examine the work of the other students as well. Data moves in front of all three paintings as the other students move aside. STAR TREK: "Perspective" - REV. 11/30/89 - TEASER 2. 4 DATA AT PICTURE #1 Woman with flowers. DATA Ensign Williams' striking style is heavily influenced by geometric constructivism. Moving to... 4A DATA AT PICTURE #2 Woman with violin. DATA Lieutenant Wright has effectively fused the incongruities of the surrealists with the irrationality of Dadaism. Returning to... 5 PICARD'S PAINTING Picard tries not to betray his feelings as Data prepares to pronounce judgment. DATA Interesting. PICARD How so? DATA While suggesting the free treatment of form usually attributed to Fauvism, this quite inappropriately attempts to juxtapose the disparate cubistic styles of Picasso and Leger. In addition, the use of color suggests a haphazard melange of clashing styles. (MORE) STAR TREK: "Perspective" - REV. 11/30/89 - TEASER 3. 5 CONTINUED: DATA (Cont'd) Furthermore, the unsettling overtones of proto-Vulcan influences... Picard's features have become progressively clouded during this speech and finally he's had enough. PICARD (strained) Thank you... Mister Data. DATA You are welcome, sir. If I may be of any further assistance -- PICARD No... thank you. Data turns and EXITS. Off Picards reaction... 5A ALTERNATE Picard slowly walks toward his painting; picks up a jar full of paint brushes, removes the brushes and proceeds to throw the bright red liquid onto his canvas. 6 OMITTED 7 EXT. SPACE - ENTERPRISE AND SPACE STATION (OPTICAL) The ship is in orbit around a planet along with a small space station. PICARD (V.O.) Captain's log, Stardate 43610.4. After completing a delivery of dicosilium to the Tanuga Four research station, our away team is receiving an update from Doctor Nel Apgar on his efforts to create Krieger Waves, a potentially valuable new power source. STAR TREK: "Perspective" - REV. 11/28/89 - TEASER 3A. 8 INT. MAIN BRIDGE Picard and Data ENTER from the turbolift. WORF at Tactical. GEORDI is at an Aft Science Station going over some information on the console. Data goes to Ops. PICARD Welcome back, Mister La Forge. Where's Commander Riker? And Geordi answers evenly, but there is a trace of tension in his voice... STAR TREK: "Perspective" - REV. 11/28/89 - TEASER 4. 8 CONTINUED: GEORDI Still on the station, sir. Doctor Apgar wanted a word with him. Picard notices... PICARD Any problems... ? Hesitating, this is really something Riker should tell Picard about... GEORDI Not... with the scientific part of the mission, sir... Picard's curiosity is raised even further by Geordi's evasiveness, but before he can pursue it, Riker's voice breaks in over the com line. RIKER'S COM VOICE (a little stiffly) Riker to Enterprise. I'm ready to leave now. Saved by the bell... to Picard's unspoken question -- GEORDI I'm sure Commander Riker will explain, sir... What is going on, wonders Picard. As... 9 INT. TRANSPORTER ROOM O'BRIEN Stand by, Commander. Engaging transport. O'BRIEN energizes the transporter console. Nothing happens. O'Brien frowns at his console: O'BRIEN (to com panel) Transporter Room to Engineering. I have a power drain... STAR TREK: "Perspective" - REV. 12/4/89 - TEASER 5. 9A EXT. SPACE - THE ENTERPRISE (OPTICAL) Near the space station... which suddenly EXPLODES. 10 INT. MAIN BRIDGE - ON PICARD AND MAIN VIEWER (OPTICAAL) Picard is moving toward the command center. In the b.g. the aftermath of the explosion is clearly visible on the Main Viewer. Data at Ops. Supernumerary at Conn. PICARD (urgently) Transporter Room! Is Commander Riker aboard? 11 INT. TRANSPORTER ROOM (OPTICAL) O'Brien working furiously at the console. O'BRIEN Not yet, Captain. I'm having trouble clearing the signal... He continues to fight to bring Riker aboard. On the transporter pad, the TRANSPORTER EFFECT shimmers, weakens, shimmers again... finally RIKER begins to take shape. The EFFECT ENDS and Riker steps off the pad. O'BRIEN (cont'd) Transporter Room to bridge. He's aboard. RIKER You sound surprised, Mister O'Brien... O'BRIEN For a moment, we weren't sure you left the space station in time... RIKER In time for what... ? O'BRIEN It just exploded, sir. On Riker's reaction -- FADE OUT. END OF TEASER STAR TREK: "Perspective" - REV. 11/28/89 - ACT ONE 6. ACT ONE FADE IN: 12 EXT. SPACE - THE ENTERPRISE (OPTICAL) The ship is in orbit as before. The space station is gone, but perhaps there is a faint cloud of particles or debris left over from the explosion seen earlier. PICARD (V.O.) Captain's log, supplemental: Commander Riker has informed me that Doctor Apgar was the only one aboard the space station when it exploded. We remain in orbit investigating the accident... 13 INT. MAIN BRIDGE Picard, Riker, Geordi... WESLEY is at Conn, Worf at Tactical, Data at Ops... O'BRIEN'S COM VOICE I've gone through the whole system, sir... I can't find any malfunction in the transporter, nothing that would cause an explosion like that... INTERCUT: 13A INT. TRANSPORTER ROOM PICARD'S COM VOICE Why was there a power drain before transport? O'BRIEN I don't know, Captain. PICARD'S COM VOICE I want an answer to that question... I'm sure the Tanugans will too... O'BRIEN Yessir. END INTERCUT: STAR TREK: "Perspective" - REV. 11/28/89 - ACT ONE 6A. 13B INT. MAIN BRIDGE DATA Captain, the radiation and debris are consistent with an overload of the station's reactor core. STAR TREK: "Perspective" - REV. 11/29/89 - ACT ONE 7. 13B CONTINUED: Picard turns to Riker and Geordi... PICARD Any indications of reactor core problems while you were on the station? GEORDI No, sir. Riker's brow is wrinkled... his mind is not in the room. Picard notices... PICARD Number One... ? Riker looks up, shakes his head, no. PICARD (to Riker) Commander La Forge suggested this was not an entirely routine mission... RIKER (sighs) It's a long story, Captain... (beat) ... but I'm sure it doesn't have anything to do with this accident. His voice sounds uncertain. WORF Captain, Chief Investigator Krag of the Tanugan security force requests permission to beam aboard. Picard reacts, stares at Riker. PICARD Granted, Lieutenant, please escort our guest to the bridge. (beat) ...slowly. WORF Aye, sir. Worf EXITS... STAR TREK: "Perspective" - REV. 11/28/89 - ACT ONE 7A. 13B CONTINUED: (2) PICARD (to Riker) Perhaps you should tell me as much as possible prior to his arrival, Number One. STAR TREK: "Perspective" - REV. 11/28/89 - ACT ONE 8. 13B CONTINUED: (3) Riker sighs, acknowledges. 14 thru OMITTED 17 17A INT. TRANSPORTER ROOM (OPTICAL) As Inspector Krag MATERIALIZES. His curious eyes examine his surroundings, study the Klingon who greets him, and O'Brien behind the console. WORF I am Lieutenant Worf, head of ship's security. I will take you to the captain. Krag nods and follows; he could be intimidated here, away from his usual turf, but he isn't... 18 INT. MAIN BRIDGE As before. Worf ENTERS from the turbolift along with Krag. Geordi is at the science station. Data and Wesley are at their accustomed stations. Krag is at all times soft-spoken, calm, rather British in nature (no accent)... qualities of the men of his race... but also fine qualities for an investigator. He is also quite relentless and determined to get to the truth. PICARD Chief Investigator, welcome to the Enterprise. I'm Captain Picard... my first officer, Commander William Riker. Krag all but ignores Picard at the mention of Riker's name. KRAG Commander Riker, I am here to take you into custody... RIKER On what charge? KRAG Suspicion of murder. All over the bridge, heads turn in shock. STAR TREK: "Perspective" - REV. 11/29/89 - ACT ONE 9. 18 CONTINUED: RIKER (reacts) Murder... now wait a minute... PICARD (interrupting) Chief Investigator... we are more than willing to cooperate fully with you, but... KRAG Then you will release the prisoner for transportation to the planet. Picard holds up a hand: "just wait a second", realizes the bridge is no place to have this discussion... PICARD (to Krag) Why don't we discuss this in private... Indicating the way... Riker moves to join them, but Picard, as his captain, looks him back with purpose... PICARD You have the bridge, Number One. Riker is about to protest, but instead says nothing and remains on the bridge as Picard and Krag EXIT into the Ready Room. The rest of the bridge crew can't help but steal glances at Riker. 19 INT. READY ROOM Picard indicates a chair for Krag as he seats himself at the desk. Krag remains standing and is waiting for Picard to make the first move. PICARD Just what is your evidence against my officer? KRAG Two witnesses have come forward to describe Commander Riker's threats against Doctor Apgar... STAR TREK: "Perspective" - REV. 11/28/89 - ACT ONE 10. 19 CONTINUED: PICARD Threats... ? I am aware of an altercation between the two of them... KRAG It apparently was much more than just an altercation, Captain... but he will have a chance to prove his innocence... PICARD In our system of legal jurisprudence, a man is innocent until proved guilty. KRAG In ours, he is guilty until he is proved innocent. And you are in our jurisdiction. If I understand the Federation regulations on these matters, and I just happened to look them up before I... PICARD (interrupting) I'm aware of the Federation regulations, sir... and if you will check further, they say the captain will decide if extradition is warranted... KRAG Are you saying it is not? PICARD I'm saying... ... backing off the conflict, knowing it does not help matters. PICARD (continuing) If I find that there is sufficient cause to warrant a trial, I will... release Commander Riker to your custody. STAR TREK: "Perspective" - REV. 11/28/89 - ACT ONE 10A. 19 CONTINUED: (2) KRAG (thoughtful beat) Would you say you're close to your first officer, Captain? STAR TREK: "Perspective" - REV. 11/29/89 - ACT ONE 11. 19 CONTINUED: (3) PICARD That's irrelevant here... KRAG Really, Captain, you cannot believe that. And how can I expect a fair and impartial decision? PICARD I will protect the rights of my officer... KRAG I appreciate that. But you'll have to do it on the planet, not here. After all, what if you were suddenly to decide to leave this star system... ? PICARD You have my word as an officer of Starfleet that I will not. KRAG Unacceptable. You must turn him over to me for interrogation. PICARD Interrogate him here. KRAG Captain, we must recreate step-by-step, moment-by-moment, the events leading to the explosion... we need immediate access to all the witnesses, as well as the data from the lab's ground computers. It would be impossible to accomplish here. A beat. Looking for a compromise -- PICARD Perhaps not. (keys insignia) Mister Data, please report to my Ready Room. (to Krag) In fact, I may be able to assist you in recreating the events. STAR TREK: "Perspective" - REV. 11/28/89 - ACT ONE 11A. 19 CONTINUED: (4) Data ENTERS. PICARD Commander Data, Chief Inspector Krag. They bow to each other... Krag looks curiously at the android... STAR TREK: "Perspective" - REV. 11/29/89 - ACT ONE 12. 19 CONTINUED: (5) PICARD Data, by taking testimony from both the away team and from witnesses provided by Investigator Krag, would it be possible to program the Holodeck to recreate what happened aboard the science station? DATA It would require construction and design specifications, full orthographic representations of the Krieger equipment, as well as visual representations and voice analyses of the persons involved... but yes, it is possible. Krag considers this. Picard is clearly unmovable on releasing Riker. He nods. KRAG Very well. Arrangements will be made to provide you with all available information. I shall return shortly with our witnesses. PICARD Data, escort the chief inspector to Transporter Room Three. As they EXIT, stay on Picard a beat, see his frown as he considers the situation... STAR TREK: "Perspective" - REV. 11/27/89 - ACT ONE 13. 20 INT. MAIN BRIDGE As before. Riker is sitting in command and trying not to throw glances at the Ready Room door. Picard ENTERS from the Ready Room. TROI is now on the bridge. PICARD Mister La Forge, Ensign Crusher, we are going to recreate the research station on the Holodeck. I want you to work with Mister Data on the preparations. In addition, Mister La Forge, you and Commander Riker will give the computer detailed depositions on everything you heard and saw while aboard. Counselor, you will assist me during this inquiry. Picard pauses for a second as he considers the impact of his next words on his trusted first officer. PICARD (cont'd) (quiet yet firm) My decision on extradition will be based upon the evidence presented in these re-creations. Riker can't really believe all this is happening, but Picard's expression is set. RIKER Captain, may I have a word with you? PICARD Under these circumstances, I believe it would be inappropriate, Number One. Picard exits. PUSH IN on Riker's reaction... FADE OUT. END OF ACT ONE STAR TREK: "Perspective" - REV. 12/3/89 - ACT TWO 14-14A. ACT TWO FADE IN: 20A EXT. SPACE - THE ENTERPRISE (OPTICAL) As before. DATA (V.O.) Second officer's log, Stardate 43611.6. Programming of the Holodeck has taken eighteen hours and is now complete. 21 INT. CORRIDOR as Picard, Riker, Troi, and Krag approach the Holodeck doors. DATA (V.O.) All participants have entered their depositions. Technical schematics, and complete records from the lab's ground computers, as well as Doctor Apgar's personal logs, have been included. The recreation has a nominal eight-point-seven percent margin of error. The participants ENTER the Holodeck. 22 INT. HOLODECK/SPACE STATION LABORATORY (OPTICAL) This is the main laboratory of the space station. The walls are lined with consoles, readouts, and computer equipment, most of which is inactive at the moment. Dominating the room is a large array of energy-focusing condensers, field coils, refractors, and so forth. Nearby is a medium-sized power reactor. Picard and Krag step into the center of the simulation. Picard nods approval. Even the normally poker-faced Krag is impressed. STAR TREK: "Perspective" - REV. 12/3/89 - ACT TWO 15. 22 CONTINUED: (2) PICARD Is there anything you'd like to say before we begin, Number One? To Krag -- RIKER Just this. I'm not a murderer. I went to the Tanugan lab as an official representative of Starfleet. And I acted accordingly. I was there to evaluate Apgar's progress on development of a Krieger Wave converter. That's all I was interested in. Computer. Load deposition program, Riker One. 23 ANGLE ON THE LAB (OPTICAL) The holograms of APGAR and TAYNA APPEAR, frozen in position. Apgar is male, older than Riker, cold, intelligent, antisocial... and like Krag, he is soft-spoken, reserved. Tayna is female, early twenties, the deferential assistant. RIKER Run the simulation. STAR TREK: "Perspective" - REV. 12/3/89 - ACT TWO 16. 24 ANOTHER ANGLE (OPTICAL) The Apgar and Tayna holograms "come to life" just as (holograms of) Geordi, and Riker MATERIALIZE in the lab (the away team beaming onto the station). (It's important to note that in Riker's presentation of the story, he is extremely business-like, almost flat in character... he is not as charming or personable as we know he can be. Nevertheless, for him, this is the truth.) RIKER Doctor Apgar? I'm Commander William Riker; Lieutenant Commander Geordi La Forge. Apgar's making an effort to be polite, but he's plainly less than overjoyed to see them. And impatient to get it over with. APGAR My assistant Tayna... well, let's get on with it, shall we? From off camera, heads turning to the voice of -- MANUA (O.S.) Don't be in such a hurry, dear... 24A ANGLE - MANUA entering... and it's a moment... like that first look that Bacall gave Bogart in "To Have and Have Not", she gives that look to Riker... female, thirties, strong, outgoing -- she takes your breath away. But Riker's hologram is quite unmoved. MANUA (continuing) Perhaps our guests would like some refreshment... STAR TREK: "Perspective" - REV. 12/3/89 - ACT TWO 17. 24A CONTINUED: She moves to Riker, looks him in the eyes... APGAR My wife, Manua... RIKER (pleasant but routine) Pleasure to meet you, Mrs. Apgar. His attention is on Apgar... RIKER Doctor, if you're prepared to get started, so are we... APGAR (defensive) Prepared? Of course I'm prepared... RIKER (reacts) All right... then why don't you give me the overview of your research while Mister La Forge and your assistant look at the experimental data... APGAR Fine. Whatever. I must say, Commander, I resent your early arrival. Starfleet will get its converter... I've had a few setbacks, that's all... STAR TREK: "Perspective" - REV. 12/4/89 - ACT TWO 17A. 24A CONTINUED: (2) RIKER (sympathetic) Doctor, we're not here to pressure you, we just want an update on your progress. Apgar grunts, disbelieving. Riker glances toward -- STAR TREK: "Perspective" - REV. 12/3/89 - ACT TWO 18. 24B ANGLE - MANUA revealing she is bored beyond description, leaning languidly against a counter with her elbows back, supporting her and her chest thrust out rather invitingly, her eyes undress Riker. APGAR Tayna -- show the commander's assistant whatever he wants to see. Give him full access to our records. TAYNA (to Geordi) If you'll come with me... Tayna leads Geordi over to the other side of the lab, shows him the large array of condensers. TAYNA Our Lambda Field generator is on the planet since it requires a minimum of five thousand kilometers for the field to collimate. ... And out of earshot. 25 ON MANUA turning to Riker and smiling warmly. MANUA (to her husband) Really, darling, you're being rude... after all, Commander Riker is willing to sit through all your prattle about Krieger Waves... Apgar bristles at his wife's digs... she takes Riker's arm... and Riker is embarrassed for Apgar, but it would be extraordinarily awkward for him to throw down her arm now that she has it... MANUA Commander, let me get you a drink... and we'll hear all about Krieger Waves... And Riker is clearly uncomfortable as she leads him to another room... Apgar follows as they exit. STAR TREK: "Perspective" - REV. 11/30/89 - ACT TWO 19. 26 INT. HOLODECK/SPACE STATION LIVING AREA CLOSE on champagne being poured into three flutes. WIDEN to reveal Manua doing the pouring. Riker and Apgar are seated. Manua hands a glass to Riker; as Riker takes it, their hands touch. Manua smiles. Almost as an afterthought, she hands Apgar his glass. Riker raises his glass in a friendly toast: RIKER To your success, Doctor. MANUA (pointed) ... and the rewards that come with it. Apgar scowls, makes a point of not joining in their toast. Apgar gets down to business, states his grievances: APGAR Riker -- what is Starfleet doing here anyway? My delivery wasn't scheduled for another three months. RIKER Actually, we're in this sector on another mission... and you had asked Starfleet for additional dicosilium.... it seemed like a good opportunity. MANUA How interesting. Tell us about this other mission. As though she's interested in anything other than her husband's work. RIKER It's just a study of a proto-star cloud. The Enterprise will be returning tomorrow. APGAR (even less pleased) The Enterprise just left you here? Riker can't understand why Apgar has such a negative attitude. He tries to placate Apgar: STAR TREK: "Perspective" - REV. 12/1/89 - ACT TWO 20. 26 CONTINUED: RIKER We have no wish to inconvenience you. We've arranged for quarters on the planet... MANUA (smoothly) I won't hear of such a thing. Commander, I insist you and Mister La Forge stay with us. Again the inviting smile from Manua. Apgar protests: APGAR I hardly think -- MANUA (to Apgar, firm) I know you'd prefer to be alone with your important work... but I, for one, am glad for the company. Apgar sullenly clams up. Manua beams at Riker. MANUA Good. (a beat) I must apologize for my husband's lack of social graces. He may be one of the great scientific minds in the galaxy... but he does come up a bit short in other areas. Riker doesn't know what to say to that, takes a sip of champagne. 27 WIDER ANGLE to reveal Picard, Troi, Krag, and Riker watching the holograms of Manua, Apgar, and Riker in the b.g. KRAG Stop. PICARD computer -- freeze program. The holograms freeze in their tracks. Krag turns to the real Riker: STAR TREK: "Perspective" - REV. 12/4/89 - ACT TWO 21. 27 CONTINUED: KRAG Then it's your testimony that it was Mrs. Apgar's idea for you to spend the night aboard the station. RIKER It's my testimony... and it's the truth. Krag nods noncommittally. PICARD Resume program. 28 OMITTED 29 INT. HOLODECK/SPACE STATION GUEST QUARTERS (OPTICAL)) The door OPENS; Manua and Riker ENTER the tight quarters. A bed which has been decorated with a definite feminine touch. MANUA Our guest quarters aren't luxurious... but I've tried to make this room warm... and inviting. RIKER I'll be very comfortable, thank you. Good night. But she doesn't leave... MANUA The environmental controls are here... Manua brushes past Riker to show him the controls -- no "accident." RIKER I'm sure I can find everything I need. MANUA And the door shuts by touching this panel. STAR TREK: "Perspective" - REV. 11/28/89 - ACT TWO 22. 29 CONTINUED: It closes. RIKER Mrs. Apgar... MANUA This is my sanctuary. Privacy is very important on a small station. I'm left alone here... ... often for hours. She looks directly at Riker -- Riker ignores her meaning. RIKER It's late. And I'm tired. Manua lets her garment fall off her shoulders. She is wearing a sexy undergarment. MANUA Are you still tired, Commander? Riker quickly reaches for her garment... RIKER Ma'am, excuse me, but I really think you ought to leave... And as he puts it back over her shoulders... his arms around her -- 30 ON THE DOOR as it OPENS to REVEAL Apgar. Seeing Riker's arms around his wife, he snaps: APGAR (to his wife) I knew I'd find you with him. Did you think I didn't notice how you looked at him? I'm not the fool you take me for... RIKER Doctor... STAR TREK: "Perspective" - REV. 11/29/89 - ACT TWO 22A. 31 NEW ANGLE Apgar slaps his wife hard across the cheek, she cries out, Riker is forced to intervene... Apgar takes a swing at him. Riker deflects the punch harmlessly. Apgar loses his balance and falls. STAR TREK: "Perspective" - REV. 12/3/89 - ACT TWO 23. 31 CONTINUED: Apgar stares at Riker with hatred and embarrassment. RIKER Doctor, believe me, this is all a terrible mistake... Apgar scrambles to his feet and as he storms out of the room he says -- APGAR (to Riker) You won't get away with this. I'll see to it. I swear I will, Riker. He EXITS... Manua in tears, rushes out after him without even a glance at Riker. The hologram program ends with Riker alone in the room. RIKER (O.S.) Freeze program. Riker's hologram FREEZES. 32 ANGLE ON RIKER (OPTICAL) RIKER I didn't see Doctor Apgar again until the following morning when he asked to see me alone. Commander La Forge returned to the Enterprise... (a beat) Resume program. An over the shoulder shot establishing our people watching. STAR TREK: "Perspective" - REV. 11/30/89 - ACT TWO 24. 33 ANGLE ON HOLODECK/SPACE STATION LABORATORY The holograms of Riker and Apgar stand in the main laboratory area. APGAR (fuming) I suppose if I make a formal complaint, your report on my work won't be very good... RIKER Doctor, this will have no impact on my report. It was a misunderstanding of the worst kind... and I feel I could straighten it out if you would ask Mrs. Apgar to join us... APGAR (curtly) My wife and my assistant have transported down to the planet. Apgar is a man under a great strain, looks away, shakes his head, then looks back at Riker. He can't let Riker leave without knowing where he stands... APGAR What are you going to put in your report, Riker? That there's no justification for all the extra dicosilium I've requested? That is why they sent you early, isn't it? RIKER Doctor... APGAR (too earnest) I can explain why I needed it. They have no idea what my problems are... there are explanations for all of it... RIKER (interrupts) I don't need explanations. A moment as they study each other. Apgar seems to understand where he stands now. STAR TREK: "Perspective" - REV. 12/3/89 - ACT TWO 24A. 33 CONTINUED: APGAR Then we have nothing further to say to each other. RIKER (nods, he tried) I will tell my captain to expect your grievance. APGAR Do that. Apgar seats himself at a console begins to work, entering commands. Riker taps his insignia... RIKER Riker to Enterprise. I'm ready to leave now. O'BRIEN'S COM VOICE Stand by, Commander. Engaging transport. 34 thru OMITTED 38 38A ANGLE - INCLUDE THE GALLERY RIKER Freeze program. As Apgar looks up one last time at Riker, it freezes. RIKER (cont'd) And then I returned to the Enterprise... STAR TREK: "Perspective" - REV. 12/4/89 - ACT TWO 25. 38A CONTINUED: KRAG And there's nothing you'd like to add... about firing a phaser, Commander? RIKER I fired no phaser aboard the science station. Krag's eyes look perplexed. KRAG That's very odd, Commander. Very odd. Captain Picard, isn't it true that your sensors picked up a power drain just before transport? PICARD That is correct. KRAG Have you been able to explain it? PICARD Not to my knowledge. KRAG (nods) We have. Our readings are quite clear about it. Information retrieved from the lab's ground computers show that a focused energy pulse was fired just as Commander Riker began transport. Furthermore, by analyzing the trajectory and angle, it is clear that it came from the very spot that Commander Riker was standing. In short, allow me to show you my own recreation of the end of this story, a speculation if you will... computer, play hypothetical Krag One. STAR TREK: "Perspective" - REV. 11/29/89 - ACT TWO 26. 39 ANGLE ON HOLODECK/SPACE STATION LABORATORY (OPTICAL) The holograms of Apgar and Riker VANISH, and reappear in the positions just prior to Riker's departure. Riker taps his insignia... RIKER Riker to Enterprise. I'm ready to leave now. O'BRIEN'S COM VOICE Stand by, Commander. Engaging transport. Just before the dematerialization effect begins on the hologram of Riker, he takes out his phaser and aims it behind Apgar. Riker FIRES the phaser at the reactor -- KRAG Freeze program... Program freezes. KRAG (cont'd) Three seconds later the station exploded. 39A ANGLE - RIKER reacts as we: 40 thru OMITTED 41 FADE OUT. END OF ACT TWO STAR TREK: "Perspective" - REV. 11/28/89 - ACT THREE 27. ACT THREE FADE IN: 41A INT. MAIN BRIDGE (FORMERLY SCENE 45) Data, Geordi and Wesley are gathered around Science One looking at monitors displaying information. Worf is at Tactical. Supernumeraries at Conn and Ops. GEORDI No question about it, the Tanugans are right... something was fired at the reactor core just before transport... DATA The energy signature would seem to indicate a phaser-like blast... WESLEY (strong) Well, it wasn't the commander's phaser. It couldn't be. There's gotta be another answer... we're just not seeing it yet... DATA Was there anything else in the lab capable of creating this kind of energy discharge... ? GEORDI Nothing I saw. And besides, how do you explain that it came from Commander's Riker's exact position... (beat) Dammit, I should have stayed with him... A small alarm goes off on Worf's console. He reacts. STAR TREK: "Perspective" - REV. 11/29/89 - ACT THREE 28. 41A CONTINUED: WORF Sensors indicate a radiation burst on Deck Thirty-Nine. Outside Cargo Bay Twelve. DATA Source? WORF Unknown. DATA Computer identify type of radiation. COMPUTER Emission is not consistent with any known radiation. WORF It is subsiding, sir. They all exchange glances. 41B ANGLE ON - WALL (FORMERLY SCENE 46) A section of wall about the size of a quarter has melted. A tricorder is run across the spot. Pull back to reveal -- 41C INT. CORRIDOR (FORMERLY SCENE 47) Geordi, and Wesley in the deserted corridor, checking tricorder readings. WESLEY Make any sense to you? GEORDI (using the VISOR) I don't recognize it. Even the main deflector doesn't put out that kind of spillage. WESLEY Where would it be coming from... STAR TREK: "Perspective" - REV. 11/30/89 - ACT THREE 29. 41C CONTINUED: GEORDI I don't know, Wesley... but whatever it is, it's capable of putting a hole in solid duranium. Off Wesley's reaction... 42 INT. HOLODECK/SPACE STATION LABORATORY (OPTICAL) The Holodeck doors open to reveal Krag escorting in Manua. She reacts, stops as she sees the lab recreation. She is as beautiful as Riker described, but is dressed quite conservatively and does not ooze sensuality. She is in fact a grieving widow. 43 OMITTED 44 ANOTHER ANGLE - THE GALLERY As she comes over -- KRAG In a sense we've all met Mrs. Apgar, so shall we dispense with the introductions? But Manua is ignoring him. Her attention is riveted on Riker. Riker half-rises from his chair... PICARD (holding up a hand) Mrs. Apgar, do you understand the purpose of this hearing? She nods. TROI We understand how difficult this will be for you. If you need a recess, please don't hesitate to ask. STAR TREK: "Perspective" - REV. 11/28/89 - ACT THREE 30. 44 CONTINUED: PICARD Would you like to make a statement before we begin? MANUA (unprepared) No. I just know he did it. He killed my husband. Riker reacts... KRAG Load Manua Simulation One. 45 thru OMITTED 47 48 INT. HOLODECK/SPACE STATION LIVING ROOM (OPTICAL) The witness, the accused and the observers at the table. Frozen on stage is Manua and Apgar alone... heading through the living area... she is straightening out his tie (or whatever accessory is appropriate)... 48A MANUA visibly gasps at this sight. Krag studies her, decides she's ready to proceed. KRAG Run program. 49 ANOTHER ANGLE (OPTICAL) The figures unfreeze... and Manua continues to adjust her husband's appearance, brushing off his suit, etc... he is impatient, bitter and defeated. As she speaks she punctuates her words with encouraging little touches to his hand, cheek, etc. STAR TREK: "Perspective" - REV. 12/3/89 - ACT THREE 31. 49 CONTINUED: MANUA If you greet them with such a long face they're going to assume something is wrong with the experiment. APGAR I just need time... A little more time. MANUA (smiles at him) I'm certain they'll give you the time you need if you just show a little charm. APGAR (kisses her lightly) You do that so much better than I. He catches her as she starts to walk away. APGAR (cont'd) Manua, someday I'll be able to reward you... for all your patience. I'll get you everything you ever dreamed of. MANUA I have all the reward I need. Manua smiles at him, a warm, loving glance. This is a very supportive woman who's charming and in love with life. MANUA (cont'd) Go on, I'll be right in... He EXITS and she takes a deep breath, smiles a hopeful smile to herself... and as she takes a beat to look in a mirror and adjust her hair... from the other room, we can hear the materialization sound... and... STAR TREK: "Perspective" - REV. 12/3/89 - ACT THREE 32. 49 CONTINUED: (2) RIKER (O.S.) Doctor Apgar? I'm Commander William Riker; Lieutenant Commander Geordi La Forge. She moves toward the door... APGAR (O.S.) My assistant Tayna... well, let's get on with it, shall we? 49A INT. HOLODECK/SPACE STATION LABORATORY MANUA ENTERS. MANUA Don't be in such a hurry, dear. Perhaps our guests would like some refreshment... APGAR My wife, Manua... And she is Donna Reed here... the happy homemaker... but still there is that moment... because now Riker gives her that look... the look that John Garfield gave Lana Turner in "The Postman Always Rings Twice"... and she feels it and is immediately uncomfortable... RIKER (warm) It's a... pleasure... to meet you, Manua. (And it's important to note that in this take on the story, Riker's attitude is less aloof and formal. He's relaxed and charming. In fact, in some ways he is more like the Riker we know and love.) APGAR I'm anxious to get started... Reluctantly, bringing back his attention to Apgar -- RIKER If you wish. STAR TREK: "Perspective" - REV. 11/29/89 - ACT THREE 32A. 49A CONTINUED: APGAR I must say I resent your early arrival, Commander... I have much work to do... RIKER I'll try to make this as painless as possible. For both of us. (smiles to Manua) Do you assist your husband in his work? MANUA Oh, dear, no. I'm no scientist. RIKER Frankly, neither am I. MANUA (uncomfortable) But I find this all fascinating, don't you? Riker grins as though they share a secret boredom. RIKER Mister La Forge, why don't you go over the doctor's experimental data... (to Apgar) Later on, you can give me an overview... APGAR (defensive) Fine. Whatever. Starfleet will get its Krieger Wave converter... These things take time. I've had a few setbacks, that's all... Manua gives Apgar a warning glance... don't be rude, dear. Apgar pulls it in... RIKER Doctor, I'm not here to put pressure on you. And this is said to Manua -- STAR TREK: "Perspective" - REV. 12/3/89 - ACT THREE 33. 49A CONTINUED: (2) RIKER (continuing) I'm sure my report will only underscore the need for continued support of your research. And as nice as that sounds, the fact that it is said to Manua could carry with it a tinge of sexual leverage. Apgar grunts, disbelieving... moving away with Geordi and Tayna -- APGAR Tayna, I'll call up the records... show the commander's assistant whatever he wants to see. TAYNA (to Geordi) If you'll come with me... (moving across the lab) Our field generator is on the planet, since it requires a minimum of five thousand kilometers for the field to collimate. Manua suddenly finds herself alone with Riker and his eyes are undressing her... their eyes meet, she quickly moves to her husband at a computer bank... MANUA Darling, let Tayna take care of that... I'm sure Commander Riker wants to hear how close you are to a breakthrough... And it's her husband's arm she takes... MANUA I'll make the two of you a drink and you can talk all about Krieger Waves... And she leads them out... 50 INT. HOLODECK/SPACE STATION LIVING AREA Manua handing a glass of champagne to Riker who is standing close at her side. She crosses to her husband, who is seated on the couch, and gives him a glass. STAR TREK: "Perspective" - REV. 12/3/89 - ACT THREE 34. 50 CONTINUED: APGAR To success. RIKER (glance to Manua) Success. They drink. Manua looks at Apgar with encouraging eyes. Apgar gets the message, clears his throat... APGAR Well, in a way, I suppose it's good you're early. Manua's right -- it gives me a chance to show you the progress we've been making. Riker is paying no to attention to the babbling scientist. He is watching Manua. RIKER I'd appreciate it if Commander La Forge and I could stay here until the Enterprise returns. MANUA (uncomfortable) It's a little inconvenient -- RIKER It might help accelerate the process... Apgar feels the pressure... APGAR If you wish, Commander... Apgar stands, and begins to pace as he warms to his topic. APGAR Now, where shall I start... well, first of all, you should know that I'm very close to being able to collimate a Krieger field... Manua looks up from an abstracted study of her glass, and finds Riker staring at her intently. A long beat as they stare at each other. CUT TO: STAR TREK: "Perspective" - REV. 12/4/89 - ACT THREE 35. 51 INT. HOLODECK/SPACE STATION - GUEST QUARTERS (OPTICAL) Riker is surveying the tiny room. Manua, who stands behind him, and very close to the door, is uncomfortable. RIKER Very... charming. (smiles at her) It has your touch. MANUA (embarrassed) The station is very small, and we don't often have guests. So I use this as my sanctuary. RIKER Who do you need sanctuary from? She smiles off the question uncomfortably... MANUA The environmental controls are here... While she is talking Riker moves to the control panel and CLOSES the door, blocks the exit. Manua starts, and looks back at him. MANUA Commander... it's late and I'm tired. RIKER A husband more interested in Krieger Waves than in a woman like you... how is it possible... MANUA (angry) My husband is one of the great minds in the galaxy... and we love each other very much... She moves toward the door but he stops her, puts his hands on her shoulders... MANUA (softly pleading) Please... don't... STAR TREK: "Perspective" - REV. 12/4/89 - ACT THREE 35A. 51 CONTINUED: RIKER It must get very lonely for you up here... a princess in a very high tower... MANUA My husband will be looking for me... RIKER Your sanctuary, remember... ? He slips the garment over her shoulders... she covers herself... RIKER (O.S.) She's lying... this never happened... PICARD (O.S.) Freeze program... It freezes. 51A ANOTHER ANGLE - THE WATCHERS (OPTICAL) As Riker can't take this anymore, and he stands. RIKER Captain, you know I would never act like this. PICARD Commander Riker... He crosses into the Holodeck quarters, goes up to his image. RIKER (cont'd) This isn't me. I wasn't the one who closed the door... I didn't proposition her... I certainly didn't try to rape her... (turning to Manua) Why are you doing this? Manua reacts... MANUA It's exactly what happened... STAR TREK: "Perspective" - REV. 11/28/89 - ACT THREE 35B. 51A CONTINUED: Troi moves out to Riker... STAR TREK: "Perspective" - REV. 12/3/89 - ACT THREE 36. 51A CONTINUED: (2) Riker looks again at the frozen image... TROI Come on, Will. Sit down. Riker returns to the table. Krag watches it all curiously. KRAG Resume program. 51B INT. HOLODECK/SPACE STATION GUEST QUARTERS (OPTICAL) (FORMERLY SCENE 51A) The door OPENS to REVEAL Apgar. Seeing his wife in Riker's arms he snaps: APGAR (to Riker) I knew you'd try this, Riker. Do you think I didn't notice how you looked at her? I'm not the fool you take me for... In a rage he rushes Riker. Riker blocks Apgar's wild punch, and follows with two hard jabs to the scientist's gut. Apgar doubles over, and falls to the floor. Manua runs to her husband, and drops down protectively at his side. APGAR You won't get away with this. Your career is over. I'll see to it. I swear I will, Riker. RIKER (threatening) If you report this, you'll be making a terrible mistake, Doctor. A terrible mistake. Manua is terrified of Riker. She gets Apgar to his feet, and helps him from the room. STAR TREK: "Perspective" - REV. 12/1/89 - ACT THREE 37. 52 OMITTED 53 ANGLE ON - KRAG (OPTICAL) in the gallery. KRAG Freeze program. MANUA (to Riker) Your career was safe. He was a scientist. In another day some fascinating bit of technical trivia would have distracted him. He would have forgotten about you and his complaint to Starfleet. Riker reacts. MANUA (cont'd) (she begins to cry) Excuse me. She heads for the Holodeck doors, followed by Krag. Picard is deeply troubled by the charges... not that he believes them, but the mounting evidence is forcing him to see extradition may be unavoidable. After a beat, he glances at Troi and Riker... softly -- PICARD We'll, uh... take a short recess. Picard EXITS. Troi and Riker are alone. Riker is stunned. RIKER Why would she lie like that... ? Troi doesn't immediately answer... in fact, she's uncomfortable with what she's feeling and he notices it. RIKER She was lying. You must have felt it. STAR TREK: "Perspective" - REV. 11/30/89 - ACT THREE 38. 53 CONTINUED: TROI Will, I sensed no deception from her... RIKER (reacts) Then you must think that I... TROI No, of course not. I know you. You don't have to convince me of anything. RIKER We can't both be telling the truth. TROI It is the truth... as you each remember it. Riker tries to lighten the mood, but there is an undercurrent of seriousness and truth to his words. RIKER Yes, but her version is going to put a noose around my neck. Off Troi's reaction. CUT TO: 54 OMITTED 55 INT. SICKBAY Beverly, assisted by a NURSE, is examining a CREWWOMAN'S arm. BEVERLY This is healing beautifully. I think you can begin to work on strengthening these muscles again... STAR TREK: "Perspective" - REV. 11/30/89 - ACT THREE 39. 55 CONTINUED: WORF'S COM VOICE Security to Doctor Crusher... evacuate, repeat evacuate... radiation emissions are indicated in Sickbay... 55A ANGLE (OPTICAL) As Beverly guides the others out, move to find the wall is melting... 55B thru OMITTED 56 FADE OUT. END OF ACT THREE STAR TREK: "Perspective" - REV. 11/29/89 - ACT FOUR 40. ACT FOUR FADE IN: 57 INT. SICKBAY Geordi and Wesley are examining the melted spot in the wall, (which is about the size of a basketball) with tricorders. Picard, Riker, and Beverly are listening to Data's report. DATA It is definitely the same radiation that penetrated deck thirty-nine... highly focused, very powerful... but of unknown origin. GEORDI If this should happen in the engine core or the anti-matter containment tanks, we'll be in trouble, Captain... PICARD Do you have any theories? WESLEY Data noticed something too strange to be a coincidence... DATA The two radiation events aboard the Enterprise occurred five hours, twenty minutes and three seconds apart. The science station exploded yesterday at almost exactly four times that interval. WESLEY There's a point-zero-zero-one-four second variance we haven't been able to explain yet. RIKER (reacts) Are you saying there's a connection between the radiation bursts and the explosion? STAR TREK: "Perspective" - REV. 11/29/89 - ACT FOUR 41. 57 CONTINUED: DATA We do not have the evidence to support that conclusion at this time, Commander. He glances at Picard... BEVERLY If they're right, we should be able to predict the next event... GEORDI We expect it in just over five hours. PICARD Take every precaution you can to protect the ship's vital areas... if you haven't identified the source before the time interval is up, we will leave orbit. If you perceive any further danger, advise me immediately. He leaves... Riker gives his colleagues a look that says my life may be in your hands... WESLEY We'll figure it out, Commander. Riker nods with silent appreciation, moves quickly off to join the captain... 58 INT. TURBOLIFT Picard is already inside as Riker ENTERS. PICARD Deck eleven. They begin to move. Riker glances at Picard... thinks for a second, and then... STAR TREK: "Perspective" - REV. 11/28/89 - ACT FOUR 42. 58 CONTINUED: RIKER (to computer) Halt. Turbolift STOPS. Picard looks at Riker with surprise. PICARD (about to warn Riker) Number One... RIKER I'm not going to try to influence your decision, Captain. I know you may have to turn me over to Krag. I can accept that. PICARD It hasn't come to that yet. RIKER But it might... and it's more important to me that you know I didn't do it. Picard's looks at his first officer. Lets his guard down. Not serious -- PICARD If you could just keep your trousers buckled... things like this wouldn't happen to you... RIKER (not realizing he's joking) I never even gave her a second glance... PICARD Number One, even I gave her a second glance. Picard gives him a half grin... and Riker relaxes... PICARD Did I ever tell you about the mayor's wife in Brussels... RIKER The one who collected Starfleet cadets... STAR TREK: "Perspective" - REV. 11/28/89 - ACT FOUR 42A. 58 CONTINUED: (2) PICARD I did tell you... RIKER No, you didn't... Picard does a take. Not you too... RIKER Brussels is lovely this time of the year. Isn't it? Picard and Riker nod in unison. RIKER All things considered right now, I'd rather be in Brussels. PICARD As would I, Number One. As would I. A long beat. Picard searches for the right thing to say without looking at him. PICARD Will, giving you to them would be like handing over a part of myself. Riker gives Picard a long look until Picard is so uncomfortable that he must ends this... PICARD (to computer) Resume. Hold a beat as they don't look at each other. 59 INT. HOLODECK/SPACE STATION LABORATORY Close on Tayna while Picard, Riker, Krag and Troi look on. TAYNA After the... the fight, Doctor Apgar came to find me... he was very upset... STAR TREK: "Perspective" - REV. 11/30/89 - ACT FOUR 43-45. 59 CONTINUED: KRAG And he told you what happened? TAYNA Yes, he told me everything that happened... KRAG (to Picard) Based on Tayna's deposition, we have reconstructed the incident in Commander Riker's quarters as Doctor Apgar described it to her... computer... PICARD (interrupting) Inspector, this is hearsay... She wasn't a witness to this incident... KRAG Doctor Apgar is dead. Tayna's statement is admissible under Tanugan law... and I insist you consider it. PICARD (beat, frowns) We will... watch this evidence. And I will weigh it accordingly. Krag moves out of the lab. KRAG Computer, run Tayna Simulation Three. 60 thru OMITTED 63 64 INT. HOLODECK/SPACE STATION GUEST QUARTERS - (OPTICAL) As the door opens to reveal Apgar, we can see Riker and Manua in the same basic position that they have been in the other flashbacks... her dress is off, Riker's arms around her... here, though, they are fully embracing in a passionate kiss, both on fire... they react as... STAR TREK: "Perspective" - REV. 12/3/89 - ACT FOUR 46. 64A OMITTED 64B NEW ANGLE - APGAR in a rage... APGAR I knew I'd find the two of you together. Do you think I didn't notice how you were looking at each other? I'm not the fool you take me for... Apgar moves quickly at Riker... Riker throws a wild PUNCH at Apgar, who quickly ducks out of the way. Apgar smoothly moves under Riker's swing and sends him to the ground with a flurry several quick PUNCHES to Riker's stomach and jaw. APGAR I'm going to report this, Riker. You can count on that. From the floor -- RIKER You're a dead man, Apgar. A dead man. 64C ON RIKER IN THE GALLERY shaking his head... KRAG (O.S.) Freeze program. Program freezes. 64D ANGLE - THE GALLERY KRAG And then Doctor Apgar came to find you... STAR TREK: "Perspective" - REV. 11/30/89 - ACT FOUR 47. 64D CONTINUED: KRAG Run Tayna Simulation Four. 65 INT. HOLODECK/SPACE STATION LAB (OPTICAL) Apgar and Tayna are alone in the lab. Apgar is very distraught and upset. APGAR I want you to take Manua and beam down to Tanuga immediately. TAYNA Doctor, if he threatened you, you shouldn't stay... APGAR I'm not leaving him here alone. He's capable of anything. I've got to protect our work... TAYNA I'll contact the authorities. Apgar thinks about that... after a beat... APGAR No, I'll take care of that. She reluctantly moves to exit... as Apgar, his mind working, moves across the room and touches a panel (that will become meaningful later)... Tayna pauses at the door... TAYNA Doctor, be careful... APGAR It'll be all right. Go on... She EXITS. 65A ON TAYNA AND KRAG KRAG Computer, freeze program. (to Tayna) What happened next? STAR TREK: "Perspective" - REV. 11/29/89 - ACT FOUR 48. 65A CONTINUED: TAYNA I left the station with Manua. The next morning when I heard that the station had exploded... I knew what had happened. He'd killed Doctor Apgar. KRAG Thank you. You're excused. She exits off camera. 66 ON KRAG AND PICARD KRAG (to Picard) Captain, I have established motive, method and opportunity. In any court in the Federation, it is enough to warrant the extradition of the accused. I await your decision forthwith. Push in on Picard... FADE OUT. END OF ACT FOUR STAR TREK: "Perspective" - REV. 11/28/89 - ACT FIVE 49. ACT FIVE FADE IN: 67 INT. READY ROOM Picard and Troi. PICARD I don't see any alternative, do you? TROI We both know Will is innocent... PICARD Of course he is. But as a Starfleet captain, I don't have the luxury of yielding to my personal feelings. (beat) The evidence certainly warrants a trial... I will have to allow extradition. TROI Do you think there's enough evidence to prove his innocence? A long beat. PICARD Frankly... no. DATA'S COM VOICE Captain, we have discovered the source of the radiation... can you join us on the bridge? PICARD Acknowledged. (pausing, to Troi) Why don't you spend some time with Commander Riker... TROI I'd like that. Picard acknowledges and EXITS. STAR TREK: "Perspective" - REV. 12/1/89 - ACT FIVE 50. 67A OMITTED 67B INT. MAIN BRIDGE - CONTINUOUS (OPTICAL) Geordi, Data, and Wesley are at one of the aft science stations. Picard ENTERS from the Ready Room. DATA Captain, as you know, we have been looking for a phenomenon that reoccurs every five hours, twenty minutes and three seconds... PICARD (nods) The interval between radiation bursts... DATA We have found one such phenomenon on the planet's surface. GEORDI It's the field generator that Apgar used in his research. When it's fully charged, it emits an energy pulse and then requires five hours, twenty minutes and three seconds to recharge itself. WESLEY It must have been left on after the explosion of the lab. PICARD But why would the generator be affecting the Enterprise this way... ? DATA It should not be. It is a harmless Lambda Field generator. GEORDI But we knew that somehow it was related to our radiation bursts ... and that's when the pieces started falling together... STAR TREK: "Perspective" - REV. 11/29/89 - ACT FIVE 50A. 67B CONTINUED: DATA We now know what is causing the bursts, sir, and why the science station exploded. WESLEY We also know who killed Doctor Apgar. Off Picard's reaction... 67C thru OMITTED 67E 69 EXT. SPACE - THE ENTERPRISE (OPTICAL) Still in orbit. STAR TREK: "Perspective" - REV. 12/4/89 - ACT FIVE 51. 70 INT. HOLODECK/SPACE STATION LABORATORY Picard, Riker, Troi, Geordi, Krag, Manua and Tayna. (NOTE: Troi has already heard the explanation and should not be perplexed at what she hears.) PICARD Chief Inspector, we've watched the events replayed over and over again... I've been impressed... and admittedly dismayed... by the body of evidence you've prepared against Commander Riker. Krag acknowledges. PICARD But isn't it remarkable that with all the witnesses, all the different points of view of the events aboard the space station... that we've never seen what really happened at all? KRAG (reacts) I don't understand. PICARD Allow me, with the help of Mister La Forge, to explain. computer, load Manua Program One, time code fourteen-four-one... 70A ANGLE The holograms of Riker, Manua, Apgar, Geordi and Tayna appear frozen as they did in Manua's version of the first lab scene... PICARD Play program. APGAR (defensive) Fine. Whatever. Starfleet will get its Krieger Wave converter. These things take time. I've had a few setbacks, that's all... PICARD Freeze. STAR TREK: "Perspective" - REV. 11/29/89 - ACT FIVE 52. 70A CONTINUED: The holograms freeze. PICARD Mrs. Apgar, this was from your deposition. It would suggest that your husband had failed to create Krieger Waves... MANUA Yes. But he was very close to a breakthrough. PICARD (acknowledges) He says here he needed more time... and he was upset by our early arrival. In fact, I maintain he already had made a breakthrough... and that he was lying to us... KRAG On what basis... ? Picard glances to Geordi... GEORDI For the last several hours, the Enterprise has been experiencing unusual radiation bursts. We've identified them as Krieger Waves. STAR TREK: "Perspective" - REV. 12/3/89 - ACT FIVE 53. 70A CONTINUED: (2) Reactions... TAYNA Krieger Waves... but that's impossible. From where? GEORDI From right here. In the Holodeck. PICARD We recreated your science lab in every conceivable detail... from all technical sources available including Doctor Apgar's own personal records... There is a slight margin of error, but essentially whatever was in the original lab is here... GEORDI (moving to the experimental display) Including the Krieger Wave converter that Doctor Apgar claimed didn't work... except it does work. PICARD Your field generator on the planet surface has been sending out harmless energy charges... and this facsimile has been converting them into Krieger Waves. RIKER (confused) But the Holodeck can't create anything dangerous... GEORDI (acknowledges) It didn't. When you get down to basics, the converter is nothing more than a complex series of mirrors and reflective coils. The energy from the field generator on the planet simply reflects off elements in the convertor which turns it into highly focused Krieger Waves... STAR TREK: "Perspective" - REV. 11/30/89 - ACT FIVE 54. 70A CONTINUED: (3) PICARD And those waves have been randomly striking different areas of our ship as we orbit the planet and our angle to the generator changes. KRAG Why would Apgar lie about his own success... ? PICARD (nods, yes, good question) Computer, run Manua Program One, time code, fourteen three-eight. The set changes to -- 70B OMITTED 70C ANGLE - SPACE STATION LIVING ROOM (OPTICAL) From Manua's story -- APGAR Manua, someday I'll reward you for all your patience. I'll get you everything you ever dreamed of. MANUA I have all the reward I need. PICARD Freeze. The Holodeck figures freeze. PICARD (continuing) Run Riker Program Two, time code, sixteen-one-zero. The Apgar/Manua holograms DISAPPEAR and REAPPEAR with Riker, from Riker's story, the champagne toast: RIKER To your success, doctor. STAR TREK: "Perspective" - REV. 12/4/89 - ACT FIVE 55. 70C CONTINUED: MANUA (pointed) And the rewards that come with it. PICARD Freeze. The Holodeck figures freeze. MANUA I never said that. PICARD Nevertheless, it seems clear that your husband was motivated to earn the kind of rewards that would please you, Mrs. Apgar. MANUA (defensive) What's wrong with that? TROI He wouldn't have earned great profits from his dealings with Starfleet... We were only interested in a new power source... GEORDI But if he could turn this into a weapon... it would be worth a lot to the Ferengi or the Romulans or a few others. Doctor Apgar had been ordering extra dicosilium for months... that's a pretty good indication he was trying to create larger reflective coils. PICARD When the away team arrived early he must have been worried that Starfleet was getting suspicious. He needed more time to finish his work. Apgar said that in all three versions. No doubt, he was afraid that Commander Riker might learn the truth and cut off his support prematurely. (MORE) STAR TREK: "Perspective" - REV. 12/4/89 - ACT FIVE 56. 70C CONTINUED: (2) PICARD (Cont'd) Discovering Commander Riker with his wife did not improve matters. (dramatic pause) And, I submit, that he decided to murder Commander Riker. Reactions. MANUA Ridiculous. PICARD Is it? Computer, run Tayna Program Four, time code eighteen-one-four. The set changes back to... 71 OMITTED 71A ANGLE - SPACE STATION LABORATORY (OPTICAL) From Tayna's story, Apgar and Tayna -- TAYNA I'll contact the authorities. APGAR No, I'll take care of that. She reluctantly moves to exit... as Apgar, his mind working, moves across the room and touches a panel... PICARD Freeze. The holograms freeze. PICARD (nods) Tayna, what is it that he's doing here... ? STAR TREK: "Perspective" - REV. 12/1/89 - ACT FIVE 57. 71A CONTINUED: Apgar's hologram has been frozen as he touches the panel. TAYNA (realizing) Activating the generator on the planet. PICARD Why would he do that? TAYNA (shrugs) Maybe he was going to work on the converter, I don't know. PICARD Or he might have already been thinking ahead to his next confrontation with Commander Riker... Computer, play Riker Program Four, time code twenty-four-one. 72 NEW ANGLE The holograms of Apgar and Tayna disappear and are replaced by Apgar and Riker... as described by Riker... APGAR What are you going to put in your report, Riker? That there's no justification for all the extra discosilium I've requested? That is why they sent you early, isn't it? RIKER (shakes his head) Doctor... APGAR (too earnest) I can explain why I needed it. They have no idea what my problems are... there are explanations for all of it... RIKER (interrupts) I don't need explanations. STAR TREK: "Perspective" - REV. 12/3/89 - ACT FIVE 58. 72 CONTINUED: A moment as they study each other. Apgar seems to understand where he stands now. PICARD Freeze. The holograms freeze. PICARD To Apgar, that must have seemed as though Commander Riker was confirming his worst fears. And I believe this is when Apgar decided finally to kill him. KRAG You forget, Picard... we know the energy pulse which blew up the reactor was fired from Commander Riker's position not Doctor Apgar's. Picard glances to Geordi. GEORDI We are hypothesizing that Doctor Apgar energized the converter at the moment of Commander Riker's beam-out hoping to make his death look like a transporter accident. But something went wrong... the energy pulse hit the Transporter beam and reflected back to the lab's reactor which caused the explosion. KRAG An interesting hypothesis. But impossible to prove. GEORDI Not really. We know that the field generator on the planet has been repeating a discharge command ever since the explosion. (MORE) STAR TREK: "Perspective" - REV. 12/1/89 - ACT FIVE 59. 72 CONTINUED: (2) GEORDI (Cont'd) The intervals are like clockwork... except the explosion occurred point-zero-zero-one-four seconds after the first discharge... the only explanation for that variance is the time it would take the energy pulse to bounce back from the transporter beam to the reactor. MANUA I haven't the slightest idea what anyone's talking about. PICARD Nor should you, Mrs. Apgar. We have arranged a demonstration to illustrate. Mister La Forge, I believe it is almost time is it not? GEORDI (acknowledges) Computer, load program, La Forge One... coordinate auto-engage time sequence. 73 ANGLE The holograms of Riker and Apgar disappear and reappear in different positions... GEORDI (beat) The next discharge from the field generator is scheduled to occur in a few moments. We have aligned the Holodeck program to recreate the final events as Commander Riker described them... only this time our facsimile will automatically process the energy charge from the planet and reflect it just as the original convertor did before the explosion. PICARD If we're correct, we'll know it instantly. STAR TREK: "Perspective" - REV. 12/1/89 - ACT FIVE 60. 73 CONTINUED: The program begins automatically... the holograms begin to move and talk -- RIKER I will tell my captain to expect your grievance. APGAR Do that. Apgar seats himself at a console, begins to work, entering commands... 74 ANGLE - INCLUDE THE GALLERY (OPTICAL) Riker's hologram taps his insignia... RIKER Riker to Enterprise. I'm ready to leave now. O'BRIEN'S COM VOICE Stand by, Commander. Engaging transport. Riker begins to DEMATERIALIZE... Apgar glances up... suddenly an energy beam shoots from the converter hits the transport effect and reflects back past Apgar into the reactor... and then there is a huge explosion that wipes out everything except of course the gallery... when it clears, we are in: 75 INT. HOLODECK -- the empty Holodeck. Picard, Riker, Troi, Geordi, Krag, Manua, and Tayna are unharmed. PICARD Doctor Apgar killed himself... during his attempt to kill Commander Riker. A long beat. KRAG Captain... I withdraw my request for Commander Riker's extradition. Troi smiles. Riker relaxes. STAR TREK: "Perspective" - REV. 11/30/89 - ACT FIVE 61. 76 INT. MAIN BRIDGE Picard and Riker at their command stations. Everyone else in their usual positions. Troi is ENTERING from the aft turbolift. As she walks down to her chair she takes the long way so she can pass by Riker, and lay a hand briefly on his shoulder. He looks up at her, and a glance is exchanged. "I'm glad you're safe." "I'm glad you were there." She takes her chair. PICARD Well, Number One... have we any "further business" in the Tanuga system? RIKER Not that I know of, sir. I'm more than willing to put it behind me. PICARD Then perhaps you'd be so good as to get this ship underway? RIKER With pleasure, sir. They exchange a glance. Riker then turns toward Wesley. RIKER Mister Crusher, set a course for Emila-Two. WESLEY Course laid in, sir. RIKER Engage. FADE OUT. END OF ACT FIVE THE END STAR TREK: THE NEXT GENERATION "Yesterday's Enterprise" #40273-163 Story by Trent Christopher Ganino & Eric A. Stillwell Teleplay by Ira Steven Behr & Richard Manning & Hans Beimler & Ronald D. Moore Directed by David Carson THE WRITING CREDITS MAY NOT BE FINAL AND SHOULD NOT BE USED FOR PUBLICITY OR ADVERTISING PURPOSES WITHOUT FIRST CHECKING WITH THE TELEVISION LEGAL DEPARTMENT. Copyright 1989 Paramount Pictures Corporation. All Rights Reserved. This script is not for publication or reproduction. No one is authorized to dispose of same. If lost or destroyed, please notify the Script Department. FINAL DRAFT DECEMBER 8, 1989 STAR TREK: "Yesterday's Enterprise" - 12/08/89 - CAST STAR TREK: THE NEXT GENERATION "Yesterday's Enterprise" CAST PICARD RACHEL GARRETT RIKER RICHARD CASTILLO DATA BEVERLY TROI GEORDI WORF WESLEY Non-Speaking GUINAN SUPERNUMERARIES TASHA Non-Speaking SUPERNUMERARIES STAR TREK: "Yesterday's Enterprise" 12/08/89 - SETS STAR TREK: THE NEXT GENERATION "Yesterday's Enterprise" SETS INTERIORS EXTERIORS USS ENTERPRISE-D USS ENTERPRISE-D MAIN BRIDGE CAPTAIN'S READY ROOM USS ENTERPRISE-C OBSERVATION LOUNGE SICKBAY 3 KLINGON SHIPS TEN-FORWARD CORRIDOR TURBOLIFT ENGINEERING TRANSPORTER ROOM TASHA'S QUARTERS USS ENTERPRISE-C MAIN BRIDGE STAR TREK: "Yesterday's Enterprise" - 12/11/89 STAR TREK: THE NEXT GENERATION "Yesterday's Enterprise" PRONUNCIATION GUIDE NARENDRA nah-REN-dra SARAJEVO sar-ah-YEH-voh STAR TREK: "Yesterday's... " - 12/8/89 - TEASER 1. STAR TREK: THE NEXT GENERATION "Yesterday's Enterprise" TEASER FADE IN: 1 INT. TEN-FORWARD (OPTICAL) WORF is seated at a table near one of the windows. The ship is traveling at WARP SPEED and the stars STREAK by. GUINAN comes over to Worf's table and delivers a drink to him. GUINAN Try this. WORF (looks at drink with suspicion) What is it? GUINAN Just try it. Worf takes a cautious sip, then reacts with pleasure. He looks at her with surprise. GUINAN (smiles) It's an Earth drink... prune juice. Worf takes another belt of this marvelous concoction and nods with pleasure. WORF A warrior's drink. Guinan sits down at the table. GUINAN You're always drinking alone. It wouldn't hurt you to look for a little... (glances at a YOUNG COUPLE at nearby table) ...companionship. Worf looks at her with vague irritation. This conversation is venturing into areas he'd rather avoid. STAR TREK: "Yesterday's... " - REV. 12/11/89 - TEASER 2. 1 CONTINUED: WORF (measured) I would require a Klingon woman for... companionship. Human females are too fragile. GUINAN Not all of them... I know one or two on board who might find you a bit tame... WORF Impossible. GUINAN You never know until you try... WORF Then I will never know. GUINAN Coward... WORF I am merely concerned for the safety of my crewmates. Guinan nods -- "oh, right." GUINAN Drink your prune juice. The view out the window abruptly changes as the ship DROPS OUT OF WARP. The stars cease to streak by, and far out in front of the ship, a RIFT can be seen in space. The rift resembles a large jagged tear in space within which can be seen a maelstrom of changing colors and patterns. 2 ON GUINAN AND WORF (OPTICAL) who both react to the view and the rift. Worf is already starting to rise when he hears... RIKER'S COM VOICE Lieutenant Worf, report to the bridge. WORF (heading out) On my way, sir. STAR TREK: "Yesterday's... " - REV. 12/11/89 - TEASER 3. 2 CONTINUED: Guinan steps toward the window with a look of concern on her face. She can sense something... confusion, dread, possibly a trace of fear cross her face. Linger on her expression then... CUT TO: 3 EXT. SPACE - ENTERPRISE AND RIFT (OPTICAL) The ship hangs before the gaping rift in space. 4 INT. MAIN BRIDGE (OPTICAL) PICARD, RIKER, TROI in Command, WESLEY at Con, DATA at Ops. Worf ENTERS and goes to Tactical. PICARD Analysis, Mister Data. DATA Sensors are reading gravimetric fluctuations... most unusual ones. RIKER "Unusual" how? Specify? DATA Nothing I have seen before. PICARD Is it a wormhole? DATA Yes... and no. Like a... time displacement, but it does not have a discernible event horizon. WESLEY Sir, navigational subsystems are unable to give coordinates on the object. STAR TREK: "Yesterday's... " - REV. 12/11/89 - TEASER 4. 4 CONTINUED: DATA (checks console) Confirmed. The phenomenon does not have a definable center or outer edge. RIKER Are you saying it is... and yet it isn't there? DATA I do not have sufficient information to make an analysis as yet, Commander. The dynamics of the radiation patterns--- 5 ON WORF He sees something on his tactical display and interrupts Data. WORF Something's happening, Captain. A new change in sensor readings. 6 INT. TEN-FORWARD Guinan is still looking out the window. Her puzzlement turns to alarm. GUINAN (almost a whisper) No... 7 EXT. SPACE - THE RIFT (OPTICAL) The colors within the rift change, swirl, shift... a SHIP suddenly appears. It is barely visible and no identification of design or type is possible yet. 8 INT. MAIN BRIDGE - CLOSE ON PICARD His eyes fixed on the viewscreen... his voice strangely echoing... PICARD Mister Data? STAR TREK: "Yesterday's... " - REV. 12/11/89 - TEASER 5. 8 CONTINUED: PULL BACK to reveal the rest of the bridge except for the Tactical station. (NOTE: history has just been changed although none of our characters realize it) The bridge has now been ALTERED to suggest a more militaristic atmosphere. The mood is darker, more somber... our comfortable bridge is more like the nerve center of a battleship than of an explorer. Even our uniforms have been slightly altered to emphasize rank and status. Troi is gone. Wesley now wears a regular Ensign's uniform... what were once science stations are now damage control centers... SECURITY SUPERNUMERARIES with sidearms are posted near all turbolifts... Picard's chair is larger and more impressive... patches and scars on the bulkheads attest to the action the ship has seen recently. The attitudes of our characters are more military and formal. These people have been hardened slightly and are not the relaxed, at ease people we've come to know. PICARD Can you identify the ship, Lieutenant? Is it an enemy vessel? MOVE TO TACTICAL and now reveal TASHA at station. The Tactical station itself has been expanded and enhanced with more panels and displays. Tasha replies crisply and efficiently... as if she had never been anywhere else. TASHA (shakes head) I'm getting too much interference, Captain. 8A EXT. SPACE - THE RIFT (OPTICAL) The ship within the rift is more clearly visible. It is unmistakably a starship of an earlier design than our own. It is very battered and beaten and looks as though it's been to hell and back. 8B INT. MAIN BRIDGE As before. TASHA It's clearing, Captain. Definitely a Federation starship... accessing registry... STAR TREK: "Yesterday's... " - 12/8/89 - TEASER 6. 8C ON MAIN VIEWER (OPTICAL) The other ship, hereafter called Enterprise-C, can be seen and the heavy damage is apparent. RIKER (O.S.) Looks like they had a rough ride. 8D NEW ANGLE TASHA (reading display with surprise) N, C, C, one-seven-oh-one... C. U.S.S.... Enterprise. On reactions... FADE OUT. END OF TEASER STAR TREK: "Yesterday's... " - REV. 12/11/89 - ACT ONE 7. ACT ONE FADE IN: 9 EXT. SPACE - THE TWO ENTERPRISES (OPTICAL) Enterprise-C in f.g. with name and designation number clearly visible. Enterprise-D in b.g. PICARD (V.O.) Military log, Combat-date 43625.2. While investigating an unusual radiation anomaly reported by Starbase one oh five, the Enterprise has encountered what could almost be called a ghost from its own past... The Enterprise-C, the immediate predecessor of this battleship. 10 INT. MAIN BRIDGE As before. DATA Sensors confirm design and specifications, Captain. Analysis of hull and engine materials conform to engineering patterns and methods of that time period. WESLEY But that cruiser was destroyed with all hands about twenty years ago. DATA Presumed destroyed. The Enterprise-C was last seen near the Klingon outpost on Narendra Three exactly twenty-two years, four months and three days ago. RIKER And now it's here. PICARD Mister Data, is it possible... that it has... traveled through time? STAR TREK: "Yesterday's... " - REV. 12/11/89 - ACT ONE 8. 10 CONTINUED: Everyone's been thinking the same thing, but hearing it actually said out loud makes them all take another look at the ship sitting in front of them. DATA It is a possibility, Captain. If that is the correct hypothesis, then the phenomenon we just enountered was a temporal rift in space. PICARD A rift? DATA Possibly the formation of a Kerr loop from superstring material... it would require high-energy interactions occuring in the vicinity for such a structure to form. The rift is certainly not stable, Captain. It could collapse at any time. TASHA (eyes on tactical display) I'm able to scan the interior of the ship now, sir... heavy damage to warp field nacelles and hull bearing struts... internal space frame -- (shock at new reading) Life-signs, Captain! Picard and Riker react. TASHA Readings are sporadic... looks like they have massive casualties, but some are still alive. RIKER (to com) Bridge to Sickbay. Emergency teams, stand by Transporter Rooms. BEVERLY'S COM VOICE Understood. Picard gives Riker a look: STAR TREK: "Yesterday's... " - REV. 12/11/89 - ACT ONE 9. 10 CONTINUED: (2) PICARD Belay that order, Doctor. RIKER I respectfully suggest that regardless of how they did it, they are here now and they need our help. PICARD That ship has traveled into its own future. We are dealing with variables that could alter the flow of our own history. RIKER But their influence on history has ended, sir. That ship disappeared from the past twenty-two years ago and never returned. Before Picard can reply, Tasha interrupts them. TASHA Captain, the Enterprise... C is sending out a distress call, sir. Audio only. Picard nods. GARRETT'S COM VOICE (strained as if in pain) This... is Captain Garrett... of the Starship Enterprise, to any Federation ship. We... have been attacked by Romulan warships and require... immediate assistance. We have lost warp drive... life-support is failing. RIKER We have no record of a Romulan assault on the Enterprise-C... TASHA Voice message has ended, Captain. All I'm receiving now is their automated distress signal. All eyes turn to Picard. He looks at the Main Viewer as he makes his decision... a long tense moment. STAR TREK: "Yesterday's... " - REV. 12/11/89 - ACT ONE 10. 10 CONTINUED: (3) PICARD Hailing frequency, Lieutenant. This is Captain Picard of... a Federation starship. Standby to receive emergency teams. The only response is STATIC. PICARD (to Riker) We'll handle this one step at a time. Stabilize power systems and attend to their casualties. Avoid discussions of where and when they are. RIKER Aye, sir. (heads to turbolift) Lieutenant. SUPERNUMERARY goes to Tactical. Tasha and Riker EXIT. WESLEY (reading console) Message coming in from Starfleet monitor stations, Captain. Klingon battlecruisers have been reported moving toward this sector. This is not welcome news. PICARD (grimly) Battle alert, Mister Crusher. Condition Yellow. bridge alert status goes to YELLOW and we hear a new ALERT SOUND. WESLEY Aye, sir. (works console) All decks report Condition Yellow. STAR TREK: "Yesterday's... " - REV. 12/11/89 - ACT ONE 11. 11 thru OMITTED 12 12A INT. TEN-FORWARD Which is somewhat different than we last saw it... no civilians... about twenty UNIFORMED CREWMEN and WAITERS all carrying sidearms. Not as casual... more a military canteen/mess hall than a lounge. Guinan's expression is puzzled. She's walking around. She frowns and shakes her head. GUINAN (to no one in particular) It's changed... it's all changed... A customer overhears, gives her an odd look... she moves quickly to EXIT. 13 EXT. SPACE - ENTERPRISE-C (OPTICAL) The battered starship drifts in space. 14 INT. ENTERPRISE-C BRIDGE (OPTICAL) The bridge has been heavily damaged. RED ALERT is in effect. FOUR SUPERNUMERARIES are lying dead on the deck plates or at their consoles. Smoke lingers in the air and burning panels add their own eerie lighting. Slumped in the captain's chair is RACHEL GARRETT, a tall, handsome woman that commands respect instantly. She is injured and barely holding on to consciousness. Riker, GEORDI, BEVERLY, and Tasha BEAM onto the bridge. Beverly moves to a crewman lying on the deck, Geordi goes to what's left of the engineering console, and Riker and Tasha go to Garrett. RIKER Captain Garrett? GARRETT (through fog of pain) Yes. RIKER I'm Commander Riker. We have emergency teams boarding your ship. (MORE) STAR TREK: "Yesterday's... " - REV. 12/11/89 - ACT ONE 11A. 14 CONTINUED: RIKER (Cont'd) (to Beverly) Doctor. Beverly goes to Garrett and runs a tricorder over her. BEVERLY (quietly to Riker) The rest of the bridge crew is dead. (reading tricorder) Her leg is fractured and she has serious internal injuries. (MORE) STAR TREK: "Yesterday's... " - 12/8/89 - ACT ONE 12. 14 CONTINUED: BEVERLY (Cont'd) I'll have to get her back to the Enterprise, it's more than I can do here. GARRETT (fighting to make sense of it all) To where? RIKER We'll explain later, Captain. GARRETT (summons some steel) You'll explain now, Commander. RIKER We're from a Federation starship. We've answered your distress call. Your ship is in good hands, but we need to get you to our Sickbay. GARRETT (reluctantly) Very well. BEVERLY (activates com badge) Crusher to Transporter Room. Two to beam directly to Sickbay. Riker stands back as Beverly and Garrett BEAM out. He goes over to Geordi. GEORDI (shaking his head at console) Pretty bad, Commander. Looks like they were in a hell of a fight. RIKER If you can't stabilize life-support, we'll have to evacuate the ship. GEORDI I think we can do it. I'll have to get to Engineering... Riker gives him a curt nod and Geordi moves toward emergency exit. STAR TREK: "Yesterday's... " - REV. 12/11/89 - ACT ONE 13. 14 CONTINUED: (3) GEORDI (activates com badge) La Forge to damage control team alpha. Meet me on Engineering level three. Geordi EXITS. A RASPING OF METAL is heard coming from one of the collapsed bulkheads. Tasha moves quickly to the wall and manages to move some of the material with Riker's help. 15 NEW ANGLE on Tasha and RICHARD CASTILLO, who is lying under the rubble. Castillo is ruggedly handsome, with jet black hair and fiery eyes. He is apparently just regaining consciousness, but otherwise does not look injured. CASTILLO Thanks... Castillo gets up, he's still a bit wobbly on his feet. He looks at Tasha and Riker and tries to put his memories in order. Riker wants to head off this discussion for now. RIKER I'm Commander Riker. CASTILLO Lieutenant Castillo. Helmsman. RIKER Your Captain has been sent back to the Ent--... back to our ship. (glance around bridge) You would appear to be the senior officer left aboard. Castillo looks around the shattered bridge. The destruction, though no surprise to him, is still shocking. His gaze travels over the bodies of his former shipmates. CASTILLO (quietly) So it would appear. As Tasha and Riker exchange a look... CUT TO: STAR TREK: "Yesterday's... " - 12/8/89 - ACT ONE 14. 16 thru OMITTED 17 18 INT. ENTERPRISE-D MAIN BRIDGE As before. DATA Away team reporting in, sir. PICARD On screen, Mister Data. 19 ON VIEWSCREEN (OPTICAL) Riker appears on the viewscreen. He is standing on the bridge of the Enterprise-C. PICARD (O.S.) Go ahead, Commander RIKER We've stabilized life support, Captain. Mister La Forge is working on restoring the main power couplings but it'll take time. Things are a real mess over here. 20 NEW ANGLE PICARD Survivors? RIKER One hundred twenty-five, sir WESLEY (softly) Out of seven hundred. PICARD Recommendation? RIKER I'd hate to scrap her, sir. Starfleet could certainly use another ship, even if it is a little old. STAR TREK: "Yesterday's... " - 12/8/89 - ACT ONE 15. 20 CONTINUED: PICARD Agreed. But we can't stay in this area too long. (makes decision) You have nine hours. If you can get her underway in that time, we'll escort her back to Starbase one oh five. If not, we'll evacuate the survivors and destroy the ship. RIKER Understood, sir. 21 ON TURBOLIFT Guinan ENTERS. She looks around the bridge. It looks familiar, yet somehow wrong to her... just like everything else aboard. 21A NEW ANGLE PICARD Keep me posted, Picard out. Picard turns away from the viewscreen and sees Guinan for the first time. Her appearance on the bridge is somewhat unprecedented and Picard is very surprised. PICARD Guinan... ? GUINAN (quiet yet urgent) We need to talk. Now. It's all wrong, Captain. This is not the way it's supposed to be. PUSH IN on Picard's reaction.... 22 thru OMITTED 23 FADE OUT. END OF ACT ONE STAR TREK: "Yesterday's... " - REV. 12/15/89 - ACT TWO 16. ACT TWO FADE IN: 23A EXT. SPACE - THE TWO ENTERPRISES (OPTICAL) As before. 24 INT. READY ROOM Guinan and Picard talking. GUINAN I don't know... PICARD You must have some idea how things have changed... GUINAN I look at things... at people... and they don't feel right. PICARD What things? What people? Guinan looks around helplessly for an example, settles on Picard himself: GUINAN The bridge... PICARD What's the matter with it? GUINAN It's not right. PICARD It's the same bridge, Guinan. It hasn't changed. Worried, confused -- she sits. Knowing but being unable to explain... her placid nature cannot mask her frustration... it's more frightening than anything she's ever known. GUINAN I know that. And I also know... it's wrong. STAR TREK: "Yesterday's... " - REV. 12/11/89 - ACT TWO 16A. 24 CONTINUED: Her eyes look to Picard almost apologizing, needing to be believed... Picard takes a deep breath, sits. PICARD What else? Feelings... reaching inside for feelings... almost to herself -- STAR TREK: "Yesterday's... " - REV. 12/11/89 - ACT TWO 17. 24 CONTINUED: (2) GUINAN Families. There should be children here... PICARD Children? On the Enterprise... ? (she nods) We're at war, Guinan. GUINAN (quick) No, we're not. (beat, thoughtful) I mean, we shouldn't be. This is a ship of peace. Not of war. PICARD (beat) Guinan, what you're suggesting... GUINAN It's not a suggestion, Captain. And that ship from the past... it was not supposed to come here. It's got to go back. On his reaction... 24A INT. ENTERPRISE-D SICKBAY (FORMERLY SCENE 17) Garrett is lying on a table while Beverly and a MEDICAL SUPERNUMERARY work on her. In b.g., TWO MORE SUPERNUMERARIES tend to FOUR INJURED ENTERPRISE-C CREWMEMBERS. Garrett is awakening, looks around the Sickbay. She's beginning to realize that this isn't just another starship. She looks at the instruments that Beverly is using with curiosity... they don't seem quite familiar to her. She looks over as Picard ENTERS. PICARD (to Garrett) I'm Captain Picard. GARRETT (tries to sit up) Rachel Garrett. How's my ship? PICARD Life support systems have been restored. Repairs are continuing. STAR TREK: "Yesterday's... " - 12/8/89 - ACT TWO 18. 24A CONTINUED: She leans back, relaxes... GARRETT Where did you come from? We weren't picking up any other Federation ships in this sector... Picard and Beverly exchange a glance... PICARD (avoiding her question) What is the last thing you remember? GARRETT We were answering the distress signal... PICARD Distress signal... ? GARRETT You must have heard it. From the Klingon outpost, Narendra Three. (off his look) But you didn't... did you? Garrett looks around the Sickbay again. GARRETT I've never seen a Sickbay like this... not even on a starbase. And your uniforms... (firmly) What ship is this, Captain? BEVERLY Please... try to keep still... Picard struggles with the decision for a moment. GARRETT I insist on an answer. PICARD You are aboard the Enterprise, Captain... one-seven-oh-one-D. He lets that sink in for a second. Garrett grasps the implication after a moment and her expression is shocked. Picard nods... STAR TREK: "Yesterday's... " - 12/8/89 - ACT TWO 19. 24A CONTINUED: (2) PICARD You have come twenty-two years into the future. GARRETT Twenty-two years. It's a difficult realization for even a starship captain. GARRETT Does my crew know yet? PICARD No. GARRETT I must tell them... I owe them that, Picard... PICARD (reluctantly) If you wish, I will see to it that they're informed... Garrett is puzzled by Picard's reticence. GARRETT Is there a reason they should not be told? PICARD I am concerned that if you return to your own time with knowledge of the future... GARRETT Return? To the battle? We barely escaped with our lives. If we return, we'll be destroyed. A beat. Picard nods, this is not the time to discuss Guinan's feelings. PICARD Have you any idea how this happened? STAR TREK: "Yesterday's... " - REV. 12/11/89 - ACT TWO 20. 24A CONTINUED: (3) GARRETT (shakes her head) There was a fierce volley of photon torpedoes... we were hit... there was a bright light and then... here. PICARD It is possible your exchange of fire was the catalyst for the formation of a temporal rift. (beat) History never recorded your battle with the Romulans. GARRETT (weary) We were responding to a distress call from the Klingon outpost on Narendra Three... the Romulans were attacking it... we engaged them... but there were four warbirds. PICARD The Narendra Three outpost was wiped out. Remembering what Guinan said -- PICARD It is regrettable you did not succeed, Captain. If a Federation starship had rescued a Klingon outpost... it might have averted twenty years of war. Off her reaction... 25 thru OMITTED 30 30A INT. ENTERPRISE-C BRIDGE Angle favoring Riker working at a forward Ops console... other supernumeraries are repairing damage. STAR TREK: "Yesterday's... " - REV. 12/11/89 - ACT TWO 21. 30A CONTINUED: RIKER I'm not getting any kind of ready condition on the impulse engines, La Forge... GEORDI'S COM VOICE Acknowledged, Commander... some of the engine control processors went off-line. And there's probably damage to the accelerator coils... stand by... Moving to find Tasha and Castillo are next to each other at aft stations... testing panels... CASTILLO I just can't quite make myself believe it. (trying to grasp it) Twenty-two years... Tasha is all business... TASHA I'm reading forty percent on forward shields... what do you have on aft... CASTILLO (checking data, nods) Forty percent... TASHA That's not going to do... Commander, advise Lieutenant La Forge that shields are below minimum... RIKER Acknowledged... CASTILLO We'll never see our families again. Our homes... TASHA How do you know your family's not still alive? STAR TREK: "Yesterday's... " - REV. 12/11/89 - ACT TWO 22. 30A CONTINUED: (2) CASTILLO You're right... I don't... but imagine coming home after twenty-two years... Would I even recognize them? Tasha is more tuned to her panels and monitors... not into real personal things here... TASHA What are the status readouts on main phaser banks? CASTILLO Emitters available -- sixty percent forward, fifty-two percent aft. TASHA (acknowledges) Let's take a look at the torpedo launchers... CASTILLO (still lost in thought) I guess I'm lucky to be alive at all. TASHA You may not like the future. It's been a long war. The Federation's lost more than half of Starfleet to the Klingons. CASTILLO (reacts) We were negotiating a peace treaty with the Klingons when I left... TASHA A lot of changes, Lieutenant. A lot of changes. He nods. A beat. STAR TREK: "Yesterday's... " - 12/8/89 - ACT TWO 23. 30A CONTINUED: (3) CASTILLO When we get a break, maybe you could fill me in on some of them. They exchange a look... she acknowledges, maybe. TASHA Photon banks are depleted... auxiliary fusion generators are down... 30B INT. MAIN BRIDGE - ENTERPRISE-D At an aft science station... Picard looks over Data's shoulder as he studies a computer graphic on a monitor... DATA The probability is high that the temporal rift is symmetrical, Captain. PICARD If that is the case, what would happen if the Enterprise-C were to fly back through it? DATA (reacts) Back, sir? The Enterprise-C would emerge in her own time period at almost the same instant she left. PICARD Right in the middle of her battle with the Romulans. DATA Yes, sir. PICARD Based on the logs of the Enterprise-C, is there any possibility she could survive that battle? DATA None, sir. Picard sighs, a beat. STAR TREK: "Yesterday's... " - 12/8/89 - ACT TWO 24. 30B CONTINUED: PICARD Then sending them back would be condemning them to death. FADE OUT. END OF ACT TWO STAR TREK: "Yesterday's... " - REV. 12/11/89 - ACT THREE 25. ACT THREE FADE IN: 31 EXT. SPACE - THE TWO ENTERPRISES (OPTICAL) As before... 32 INT. TRANSPORTER ROOM (OPTICAL) (FORMERLY 25A) A Transporter CREWMAN is present as Tasha and Castillo MATERIALIZE. Castillo takes his first look at the Enterprise-D. CASTILLO Unbelievable. TASHA Lieutenant... ? Castillo realizes Tasha's waiting for him. They EXIT. 33 INT. CORRIDOR - CONTINUOUS (FORMERLY 25B) as Tasha leads Castillo. Castillo's fascinated by everything around him. They pass several people in the corridor, some acknowledge Tasha. TASHA (re: the new Enterprise) She was the first Galaxy Class warship built by the Federation... forty-two decks... capable of transporting over six thousand troops... CASTILLO How long have you been on board? TASHA Four years. Straight out of the Academy. I was lucky to get the Enterprise. CASTILLO Yeah, me too. I mean... my Enterprise. STAR TREK: "Yesterday's... " - REV. 12/11/89 - ACT THREE 25A. 34 INT. SICKBAY (FORMERLY 26) Captain Garrett convalesces on a biobed. She is awake, but remains weak. Beverly checks her patient's vital signs. Beverly moves off as Castillo and Tasha ENTER. STAR TREK: "Yesterday's... " - 12/8/89 - ACT THREE 26. 34 CONTINUED: Castillo nods to Garrett. It's their first meeting since Garrett left the Enterprise-C. GARRETT Lieutenant, how's the ship? CASTILLO We've restored minimal shields and the forward phaser banks. Still no photon launchers or warp drive. GARRETT Concentrate on the weapon systems. From what Captain Picard has told me, the Federation can use all the help it can get. TASHA And soon. Our sensors have picked up Klingon warships in this sector, Captain. Garrett reacts... GARRETT Why wasn't I informed, Mister Castillo... ? She begins to rise... CASTILLO Captain, you shouldn't -- GARRETT (cutting him off) As senior officer, I want you to be my liaison to the Enterprise- D... coordinate with Tactical... TASHA That's me, Captain. Beverly rushes up, forces the Captain back on the bed. BEVERLY Where do you think you're going? GARRETT I'm ready to resume my duties. STAR TREK: "Yesterday's... " - REV. 12/13/89 - ACT THREE 27. 34 CONTINUED: (2) BEVERLY Captain, you need at least another twenty-four hours... GARRETT Nonsense. Doctors always over-protect their patients. BEVERLY (equally stubborn) And captains always push themselves too hard. Garrett stubbornly gets back on her feet. GARRETT Doctor, my ship and crew need me -- now. Twenty-four hours might as well be twenty-four years. And she EXITS to Crusher's chagrin. 35 INT. OBSERVATION LOUNGE Which has been converted into a war room atmosphere. The door slides open and Guinan ENTERS, pauses at the door, looking at -- 36 NEW ANGLE - PICARD alone at the far end of the table filled with wartime displays and charts... they look at each other a beat. Picard is quite tense, a man who needs answers to make a difficult judgment. PICARD I need more. Guinan looks at him. She can't help him. GUINAN There is no more. I wish there was, Captain. I wish I could prove it. I can't. STAR TREK: "Yesterday's... " - REV. 12/13/89 - ACT THREE 27A. 36 CONTINUED: PICARD Then I can't send them back. GUINAN You must. PICARD Dammit, Guinan, they will die moments after they return... how can I ask them to sacrifice their lives based solely on your... intuition? GUINAN I don't know. And it is torture for her... not to be able to give him more... with uncharacteristic emotion -- GUINAN This is a mistake. Every cell in my body knows this is a mistake. I cannot explain it to myself so I cannot explain it to you. I... just know. STAR TREK: "Yesterday's... " - REV. 12/13/89 - ACT THREE 28. 36 CONTINUED: (2) PICARD Who is to say this history is any less proper than the other? GUINAN I guess I am. PICARD Not good enough. (softly agonizing) Not good enough. I will not ask them to die. GUINAN (beat, softly) Forty billion have died in the war... PICARD I cannot justify readjusting history on the basis of saving lives in war... shall I return to Sarajevo and stop the assassination of Archduke Ferdinand... or go back to warn Station-Salem Four of the Bel-zon raid... GUINAN This war was never meant to be. They must return to their own time to correct that. PICARD And what is the guarantee that by going back they will succeed... ? She gives him a look -- there is none. PICARD In fact, they could conceivably create a third time line. GUINAN Yes. PICARD Every instinct tells me it's wrong and dangerous and futile. STAR TREK: "Yesterday's... " - REV. 12/13/89 - ACT THREE 29. 36 CONTINUED: (3) She moves closer to him... and if there is a sense of quiet power from Guinan that seems almost evangelical, it is intended. GUINAN Picard, we have been together for twenty-two years. I have been your advisor, your confidant, your friend and in all those twenty-two years, I have never led you astray. This time line cannot be allowed to continue. I've told you what you must do. You have only your faith in me to help you decide. On his reaction... 37 INT. TEN-FORWARD - WITH TASHA AND CASTILLO at the bar... TASHA Deflector shield technology has advanced considerably during the war... our heat-dissipation rates are probably double those of the Enterprise-C, so we can hang in a firefight longer... Move to find Guinan returning... moving behind the bar... she glances over and reacts as she sees -- 38 OMITTED 39 EMPHASIZE GUINAN'S POV - TASHA talking away to Castillo, hasn't seen Guinan yet... 40 GUINAN - CLOSEUP As she feels there's something really wrong with Tasha... we can see it in Guinan's eyes... and then... STAR TREK: "Yesterday's... " - REV. 12/13/89 - ACT THREE 29A. 41 RESUME PREVIOUS ANGLE as Tasha turns and makes eye contact with Guinan... and she begins to smile, then reacts as... 42 GUINAN Guinan's eyes avoid hers... and it's only a moment but still... STAR TREK: "Yesterday's... " - 12/8/89 - ACT THREE 30. 43 TASHA - CU wonders what's wrong... TASHA Guinan... ? 44 WIDER as Guinan moves to them... trying to be casual. GUINAN Have you ordered yet, Tasha? TASHA Not yet... Is something wrong, Guinan? GUINAN Not a thing. What can I get you? Slightest beat. Tasha knows something's wrong. TASHA Just a couple of T-K-L meal rations... we're in a hurry. (barely hesitates) Oh, this is, Lieutenant Castillo... Guinan nods. Moves away quickly. TASHA (curious) First time for everything. CASTILLO First time? TASHA (confused chuckle) It's just that I've never seen anything bother her before... CASTILLO (grins) What's a T-K-L? TASHA Standard rations. Food replicators are on minimum power... (MORE) STAR TREK: "Yesterday's... " - 12/8/89 - ACT THREE 31. 44 CONTINUED: TASHA (Cont'd) Everything else is diverted to defensive systems. (beat) So where was I... CASTILLO You've told me more about tactical in an hour than I learned my last year in the Academy... TASHA You're gonna need it, Lieutenant... CASTILLO Hey, I've known you a whole day now, Lieutenant. I won't salute if you won't. What did she call you... Tasha? TASHA Yeah. CASTILLO Most everybody just calls me Castillo. My mother calls me Richard. TASHA (smiles) Okay, Castillo. CASTILLO (beat, a little shy) Naw, I think maybe I'd like it better if you called me Richard... And there's a charming boyish look in his eye that makes her fell warm... it's a feeling Tasha Yar has never had an easy time with and it's not easy for her to acknowledge here... but it's kinda nice nevertheless... there may be something between them and they both know it. She nods... tries it on... TASHA Richard. PICARD'S COM VOICE This is the captain. Senior officers will report to my Ready Room immediately. STAR TREK: "Yesterday's... " - REV. 12/15/89 - ACT THREE 32. 44 CONTINUED: (2) TASHA So much for lunch. 45 ANGLE - GUINAN cleans behind the bar, going out of her way not to look at Tasha until she passes... 46 INT. READY ROOM Picard, Riker, Geordi, Data, Beverly, Tasha. Picard has been briefing the others for the first time on Guinan's feelings... in measured words. BEVERLY Captain, are you suggesting they should return and attempt to complete their mission? PICARD I am, Doctor. BEVERLY Based on Guinan's intuition... ? Looks of incredulous reactions around the table. Crusher and Riker, as senior officers, are the loudest voices of disagreement... RIKER But it won't accomplish anything. There's no way they can save Narendra Three... TASHA Captain Garrett says there were four Romulan warbirds. The Enterprise-C would be outmanned and outgunned... STAR TREK: "Yesterday's... " - REV. 12/14/89 - ACT THREE 33. 46 CONTINUED: GEORDI Unless we were to re-arm them with modern... PICARD We can't do that. If we send this ship back with new technology... we would be altering the past... RIKER But that's what you're talking about doing anyway, isn't it? Altering the past. PICARD We're talking about restoring the past. GEORDI How could Guinan know that history has been altered... if she's been altered along with the rest of us? DATA Perhaps her species has a perception that goes beyond linear time. PICARD (acknowledges) There are many things about her species that cannot be easily explained. Even she cannot explain how or why she senses that history has been altered. And yet it is very possible she is correct. A ship from the past has traveled through time. Who among us could know what effect that event has had on the present. Indeed, we will never know for certain if Guinan is correct. But I, for one, have decided the consequences of that possibility are too grave to ignore. RIKER Sir, if you wish my opinion... STAR TREK: "Yesterday's... " - REV. 12/13/89 - ACT THREE 33A. 46 CONTINUED: (2) PICARD I think I know your opinion, Commander. This is a briefing. I'm not seeking your consent. Riker refusing to back off, challenging Picard -- RIKER With all due respect, Captain, we'd be asking one hundred and twenty-five people to die a meaningless death. DATA Not necessarily meaningless, Commander. Klingons place honor above all else. (MORE) STAR TREK: "Yesterday's... " - REV. 12/13/89 - ACT THREE 34. 46 CONTINUED: (3) DATA (Cont'd) If the crew of the Enterprise-C had died fighting for the survival of a Klingon outpost, that would have been considered a meaningful act of honor by the Klingon Empire. PICARD Even their deaths... might have prevented the war. The officers consider that a beat. PICARD If the Enterprise-C returns to the battle and its mission is a success, history will be irrevocably changed. This time line will cease to exist... and a new future will have been created. (beat) I've weighed the alternatives. I will follow Guinan's recommendations. (beat) Dismissed. 47 OMITTED 47A INT. BRIDGE As they EXIT the Ready Room... favoring Tasha as she hears -- BEVERLY If she's right... we may not even be in the alternate time line... GEORDI Yeah, who knows if we're dead or alive... STAR TREK: "Yesterday's... " - 12/8/89 - ACT THREE 35. 48 ANGLE ON TASHA as she processes this... and the quick memory of the way Guinan was acting toward her, passes across her face... She pushes it away. The group splits up and we find... 49 INT. TURBOLIFT Data and Tasha ENTER. She is troubled by this turn of the events. Data notices. DATA Engineering. Tasha doesn't order a destination. DATA Is Engineering your destination as well? She glances up... realizing... TASHA Oh... Deck six... sorry... DATA If I interpret your facial expression correctly, you were preoccupied with something unpleasant. TASHA I was just thinking... a lot of things... (short sigh) I've been working with one of the officers from the Enterprise-C... he's nice, you know? I like him. I'm worried about what's going to happen to him. DATA We may never know what happens, Tasha. If they succeed, we will not even realize any of these events occurred. The turbolift stops and the door opens... STAR TREK: "Yesterday's... " - REV. 12/13/89 - ACT THREE 36. 49A INT. TURBOLIFT At corridor. Tasha pauses in the doorway. TASHA Data, how different do you think your life would be in the other time line? DATA (considers a beat) The possibilities are too numerous even for me to calculate, Tasha. TASHA (thinking to herself) Kind of scary, isn't it? DATA Scary? I would not know. She EXITS, the door closes and on Data's reaction... 50 EXT. SPACE - THE TWO ENTERPRISES (OPTICAL) 51 EXT. ENTERPRISE-C BRIDGE Tasha and Castillo work at the aft stations, doing additional checks... CASTILLO Shields are up to seventy-two percent... That's better... Moving to find Garrett and Picard, alone. He has just informed Captain Garrett of his feelings. She is thoughtful, not hostile, looking for solutions as is everyone else... GARRETT You believe this woman... STAR TREK: "Yesterday's... " - REV. 12/14/89 - ACT THREE 37. 51 CONTINUED: PICARD (nods) I discovered long ago that she has a special wisdom... I've learned to trust it. (beat) If you wish, I can arrange for you to speak with her... GARRETT Captain, I'd be lying to you if I told you there was a chance in hell of coming out of this alive. And my crew means a lot to me. Picard solemnly acknowledges, he knows. GARRETT Why doesn't your ship come back with us? The Romulans would be no match for your weaponry... PICARD I can't do that. GARRETT (beat, agrees on closer examination) No, I suppose not. You don't belong in our time... any more than we belong in yours. (beat) To be honest, Picard, there are some members of my crew who have expressed a desire to return... even knowing the odds. Some because they can't bear to live without their loved ones... some who don't like the idea that we slipped out in the middle of a fight. But I've told them... that in the here and now, the Federation needs another ship against the Klingons... and we better get used to being in the here and now... STAR TREK: "Yesterday's... " - REV. 12/13/89 - ACT THREE 37A. 51 CONTINUED: (2) PICARD By going back, you may be a great deal more helpful. The war is going badly for the Federation. Much worse than is generally known. Forcing himself to say it. PICARD Starfleet Command believes defeat is inevitable... that within six months we will have no choice but to surrender... This hits home to Garrett. For a moment, she's too stunned to speak. GARRETT (softly) And you're saying all this may be a result of our arrival here. PICARD One more ship will make no difference in the here and now, Captain. But twenty-two years ago, one ship could have stopped this war before it ever started. STAR TREK: "Yesterday's... " - REV. 12/13/89 - ACT THREE 38. 51 CONTINUED: (3) A long beat. She glances at Castillo, nods. GARRETT Mister Castillo, inform the crew that we're going back. CASTILLO Yes, Captain. He exchanges a glance with Tasha, moves to an aft station. GARRETT The Romulans'll get a good fight. We'll make it one for the history books. PICARD I know you will, Captain. Picard nods with admiration for his counterpart. And as he takes his leave... PICARD Lieutenant Yar... TASHA Permission to remain for a moment, sir... Picard sees that she wants to say good-bye to Castillo... PICARD Granted. They EXIT to go the Transporter Room... Tasha goes to the aft station... Now that she's there, she doesn't know exactly what to say to him. Other supernumeraries are near-by -- what they might have said is forced into the most formal language. TASHA I just wanted to say good luck... STAR TREK: "Yesterday's... " - REV. 12/11/89 - ACT THREE 39. 51 CONTINUED: (3) CASTILLO I'll try to put some of your tactical briefing to good use when we get back... TASHA Your ship has a lot more maneuverability than the Romulan counterparts of that era... in fact, if you could isolate... She stops in mid-sentence, knowing she doesn't want to be talking techno right now... TASHA You'll do fine. CASTILLO If you get back to Earth... and you see a man, oh, in his late fifties taking a hard look at you across a crowded room... (she smiles) Hey, you never know. And she nods, forcing back her emotions... she puts out her hand... TASHA Good-bye, Lieutenant. As Castillo reaches for it... suddenly an EXPLOSION rocks the ship, throwing them off balance. 52 NEW ANGLE (OPTICAL) A Klingon bird of prey has appeared on the Main Viewer. Castillo rushes over to the helm... Tasha to tactical. Over this: GARRETT Red Alert. Full power to shields. Red Alert sounds. TASHA Shields are up. Functioning. STAR TREK: "Yesterday's... " - REV. 12/11/89 - ACT THREE 40. 52 CONTINUED: CASTILLO Initiating evasive maneuvers... Gamma sequence. GARRETT Ready phasers... (to comm) Enterprise-D, has your captain returned safely... 53 INT. ENTERPRISE-D MAIN BRIDGE Red Alert. Riker at command... RIKER (to comm) Acknowledged, Enterprise-C. Captain Picard is safely aboard... (to Data) Fire phasers. DATA (overlapping) Firing phasers... Behind him, Picard moves onto the bridge from the turbolift with a purpose... PICARD Situation report... RIKER One Klingon bird of prey... off the starboard bow... 54 INT. ENTERPRISE-C BRIDGE TASHA Firing phasers... GARRETT Load torpedo bays... Suddenly they're hit by a massive EXPLOSION. Garrett is caught by flying debris. She goes down. STAR TREK: "Yesterday's... " - 12/8/89 - ACT THREE 41. 55 EXT. SPACE (OPTICAL) As the Enterprise-D fires a barrage, a shimmering EFFECT surrounds the bird of prey and it disappears. 56 INT. ENTERPRISE-D BRIDGE DATA The Klingon vessel has re-cloaked, sir. I have no readings. PICARD Captain Garrett -- damage report. (no answer) Captain Garrett... TASHA (com) This is Lieutenant Yar, sir. 57 INT. ENTERPRISE-C BRIDGE Castillo is kneeling beside the body of Captain Garrett. Tasha stands helplessly beside him. TASHA Captain Garrett is dead. 58 INT. ENTERPRISE-D BRIDGE On their stunned reactions. FADE OUT. END OF ACT THREE STAR TREK: "Yesterday's... " - REV. 12/11/89 - ACT FOUR 42. ACT FOUR FADE IN: 59 thru OMITTED 61 61A EXT. SPACE - THE TWO ENTERPRISES (OPTICAL) As before. 61B INT. OBSERVATION LOUNGE Picard, Riker, Castillo, Tasha. CASTILLO I'm prepared to lead the Enterprise back myself, Captain Picard. RIKER (to Picard) Sir, Lieutenant Castillo is the last senior officer alive... he will have limited support from Ops, no Tactical, reduced staff in Engineering... CASTILLO I have good people willing to do their best... RIKER (to Castillo) But certainly, history never meant this ship to be led into battle without your captain. CASTILLO I can't speak to that point, sir... but I can get us back to where we're supposed to be. I believe that's what Captain Garrett would want me to do. DATA'S COM VOICE Commander Data to Captain Picard. PICARD Go ahead. STAR TREK: "Yesterday's... " - 12/8/89 - ACT FOUR 43. 61B CONTINUED: DATA'S COM VOICE Sir, sensors are showing additional instability in the time rift. Possibly the result of the battle with the Klingons. PICARD Any signs of other Klingon vessels? DATA'S COM VOICE No, sir. TASHA I'm sure our coordinates have been transmitted to the Klingon command... we must not remain here. Picard studies the helmsman... CASTILLO Sir, it is my intention to return, unless you order me not to. Picard's eyes glow with admiration for the young lieutenant... Tasha watches with renewed concern, but she too respects him enormously. PICARD How soon will your ship be ready? CASTILLO We sustained moderate damage in the attack... I think we can get underway in a few hours... PICARD (to Riker) We will maintain position to provide cover. (to Castillo) Make it so. Castillo salutes the captain, Picard gives him a good tough salute in return... and he EXITS, followed by Tasha. STAR TREK: "Yesterday's... " - 12/8/89 - ACT FOUR 44. 61C INT. TRANSPORTER ROOM (OPTICAL) Tasha and Castillo ENTER. A supernumerary mans the console. CASTILLO One to beam to the Enterprise-C. The engineer acknowledges... he turns to Tasha. CASTILLO We keep saying good-bye... don't we? TASHA I wish there was more time. CASTILLO More time... I think we have all the time we can handle as it is. They look at each other and damn the engineer, they move together into a warm and tender kiss. When they break... CASTILLO (good-bye... ) Lieutenant. And she watches as he moves to the transporter pad... and they look at each other with a love that might have been... and he DEMATERIALIZES... and as we push into her face, her thoughts racing... SMASH CUT TO: 61D INT. TEN-FORWARD - GUINAN CLOSE UP She's behind the bar... and as she turns and looks up, reacts as she sees -- 61E NEW ANGLE - TASHA alone... looking at her... GUINAN What would you like? TASHA Guinan, I have to know something. Guinan looks at her evenly. STAR TREK: "Yesterday's... " - REV. 12/11/89 - ACT FOUR 45. 61E CONTINUED: TASHA What happens to me in the other time line? A long beat. GUINAN I don't have alternate biographies of the crew, Tasha. I told the captain... it's just a feeling... TASHA But there's something more when you look at me, isn't there... A long beat. TASHA I've seen it in your eyes, Guinan. We've known each other too long... GUINAN (beat) We weren't meant to know each other at all. (off Tasha's look) Or that's what I sense when I look at you. Tasha looks at her with a curious smile... GUINAN You're not supposed to be here, Tasha. TASHA Where am I supposed to be? GUINAN Dead. Tasha is shaken as any of us would be... she tries to cover it. A beat. TASHA Do you know how? GUINAN No. (beat) But I know that it was an empty death. A death without purpose. STAR TREK: "Yesterday's... " - REV. 12/11/89 - ACT FOUR 46. 61E CONTINUED: (2) As Tasha considers this revelation, her mind begins to work. 62 INT. READY ROOM Picard at his desk, working... a chime. PICARD Come. The door slides open and Tasha ENTERS. PICARD Yes, Lieutenant. TASHA Captain, I request a transfer to the Enterprise-C. Picard is taken by surprise. PICARD For what reason? TASHA They need someone at Tactical. PICARD You're needed here. TASHA Sir, I don't belong here. PICARD (reacts) Sit down. (she does) What did she tell you? TASHA I'm not supposed to be here. I'm not supposed to be alive. Picard is shaken by the revelation... PICARD (rather aghast) She felt it was necessary to disclose this to you? TASHA I felt it was necessary. STAR TREK: "Yesterday's... " - 12/10/89 - ACT FOUR 47. 62 CONTINUED: PICARD I see. (beat) You realize that it is very possible that the Enterprise-C could fail. We may be forced to remain in this time line... in which case your life would go on, hopefully for a long while. TASHA I know how important it is that they don't fail, Captain. That's why I'm requesting this transfer. PICARD Lieutenant, you don't belong on that ship... TASHA No. Captain Garrett belongs on that ship. But now that she's dead, there's a certain logic in this request. PICARD There's no logic in it at all. (beat) Tasha, whether they succeed or not, the Enterprise-C will be destroyed... TASHA At least, with a tactical officer on board, they will have a chance to defend themselves well, Captain... it may be a matter of seconds or minutes... but those could be the minutes that change history... (beat) Guinan says I died a senseless death in the other time line. I didn't like the sound of that, sir. I've always known the risks that come with a Starfleet uniform. If I am to die in one, I'd like my death to count for something. PICARD Lieutenant... STAR TREK: "Yesterday's... " - 12/8/89 - ACT FOUR 48. 62 CONTINUED: (2) A long look, many feelings... PICARD Permission granted. She rises. Salutes him. TASHA Thank you, sir. And EXITS. A long beat on Picard and... 63 INT. ENTERPRISE-C MAIN BRIDGE The CREW is busy at work, closing up patched-together consoles. Castillo is in command. CASTILLO (to com) I'm showing phaser banks up to seventy percent efficiency... we've got an hour left... see if you can get them up to ninety... COM VOICE Aye, sir... 64 NEW ANGLE as Castillo steps up to two of his young CREWMEN. CASTILLO Parker, you've got Ops. Fredericks, you take the Conn... TASHA (O.S.) I'll handle Tactical. 65 ON TASHA stepping up to Castillo. TASHA Lieutenant Tasha Yar reporting for duty, sir. Castillo reacts with surprise. STAR TREK: "Yesterday's... " - REV. 12/11/89 - ACT FOUR 49. 65 CONTINUED: CASTILLO You're not part of my crew. TASHA I am now. Captain Picard approved my request for transfer. 66 NEW ANGLE as Castillo leads Tasha to one side -- not wanting to continue this discussion in front of the crew. CASTILLO This isn't a joke, Tasha. We're going back in the rift -- into battle -- and we're not coming back. TASHA I know the mission. These are my orders, Lieutenant. CASTILLO But I don't want you here. TASHA You need me. Show me someone on your crew that can do the job better than I can. Castillo knows he can't; there is no one as qualified. He looks at her with appreciation. CASTILLO (quietly) Welcome aboard. (then, louder, for the crew) Take your station, Lieutenant. Tasha, all business, moves to her station. TASHA Aye, sir. As she runs a check on Tactical, we: FADE OUT. END OF ACT FOUR STAR TREK: "Yesterday's... " - REV. 12/11/89 - ACT FIVE 50. ACT FIVE FADE IN: 67 INT. ENTERPRISE-D MAIN BRIDGE (OPTICAL) Picard in command, studying the image of the Enterprise-C on the viewer. Riker at one of the aft consoles, Data at Ops, Wes at Conn. Tactical is vacant. Tasha ENTERS from turbolift. TASHA We've finished the transfer of equipment, Captain. The new converters should be able to compensate for the damaged units on the Enterprise-C. Picard stands, nods. Riker moves a couple of steps closer, while Wes and Data turn to look at Tasha. An awkward moment... too much to say... this is neither the time nor the place. Picard clears his throat, but before he can say anything there is a SOUND from the Ops panel. Data turns to his console. WESLEY Long-range scans have picked up Klingon battlecruisers, Captain. They are on an intercept course. This is it and everyone knows it. No time at all for whatever they might have tried to say to Tasha. RIKER E.t.a.? WESLEY Fourteen minutes, thirty-one seconds. PICARD Red Alert. All hands to battle stations. Bridge status goes to RED and we hear a new ALERT KLAXON. Picard turns to Tasha but she anticipates him. TASHA I'm on my way, sir. (beat) Good-bye, Captain. STAR TREK: "Yesterday's... " - REV. 12/11/89 - ACT FIVE 51. 67 CONTINUED: PICARD Good-bye, Lieutenant. Tasha looks around the bridge. Wesley manages a halfhearted smile which Tasha returns. Tasha heads to the turbolift and pauses for a second near the Tactical station. A SUPERNUMERARY ENTERS from turbolift and takes up the station. Tasha touches the panel for a second -- a quick farewell to her station and her ship -- then EXITS. 68 EXT. SPACE - ENTERPRISE-C (OPTICAL) The ship motionless in space. 69 INT. ENTERPRISE-C MAIN BRIDGE Tasha ENTERS from turbolift. Alert status is RED. Castillo in Command, supernumeraries at their posts. TASHA Damage control teams have all returned to the Enterprise-D... Captain. Castillo reacts slightly to his new title, then down to business. Tasha moves to Tactical station. She checks a few readings. CASTILLO Raise shields. TASHA Shields up. Charging weapon systems. STAR TREK: "Yesterday's... " - REV. 12/11/89 - ACT FIVE 52. ANGLE ON MAIN VIEWER (OPTICAL) (FORMERLY SCENE 67) The main viewer shows the Enterprise-D. CASTILLO (quietly) Good luck, Enterprise. 71 ON TASHA (FORMERLY SCENE 68) as she also looks at the viewer. Her ship, her friends are about to make their final stand... without her. Linger on her look of concern then... CUT TO: 72 EXT. SPACE - THE TWO ENTERPRISES (OPTICAL) Enterprise-C in b.g. The Enterprise-D begins to wheel around to face the imminent Klingon attack. The rift can now be seen in the b.g. 73 INT. ENTERPRISE-D MAIN BRIDGE The mood is tense. These are seasoned professionals getting ready for another round of combat in a long and hard war. RIKER Number and type of ships, Mister Crusher? WESLEY Three K'vort class battlecruisers. RIKER (to Picard) Not bothering to cloak themselves. PICARD They shouldn't be so confident... after the pasting we gave them at Archer Four. Picard studies the display and calculates the odds against them. RIKER (quietly) We won't last long against that many. STAR TREK: "Yesterday's... " - 12/8/89 - ACT FIVE 53. 73 CONTINUED: Picard already knows that. He looks at Riker and a silent beat of understanding passes between them. Picard stands and addresses his bridge crew. PICARD We could, of course, outrun the Klingons, but we must protect the Enterprise-C until she can enter the temporal rift. (beat) We may not survive... but we must succeed... Let's make sure they don't forget the name Enterprise. The mood of the bridge crew is determined... if this were a few centuries earlier, a cheer would go up. 74 EXT. SPACE - THE KLINGONS (OPTICAL) THREE KLINGON BATTLECRUISERS in attack formation head for the Enterprise. The lead ship FIRES phasers. 75 INT. ENTERPRISE-D MAIN BRIDGE The ship ROCKS with the impact. DATA Shields holding. PICARD (coolly) Hold your fire. Mister Crusher, come about to one-four-eight mark zero-zero-three, on my command. WES Aye sir. RIKER Ready photon torpedoes. Dispersal pattern: Sierra. PICARD Ready... and... now! CUT TO: 76 EXT. SPACE - ENTERPRISE-D (OPTICAL) The Enterprise-D FIRES TORPEDOES. STAR TREK: "Yesterday's... " - REV. 12/11/89 - ACT FIVE 54. 77 INT. ENTERPRISE-D MAIN BRIDGE As before. DATA One enemy target hit, sir. Moderate damage to their forward shields. The ship is ROCKED as another Klingon shot hits the ship. DATA Our shields still holding. Minor damage to secondary hull. RIKER Course one-seven-zero, mark zero-one-four. WESLEY One ship has broken off and is heading toward the Enterprise-C. Moment of decision. Picard knows what he must do. PICARD Mister Crusher. Belay previous course change... keep us within two hundred kilometers of the Enterprise-C. WES Aye, sir. Coming to two-one-seven mark one-one-five... increasing to two-thirds impulse. 78 EXT. SPACE - THE TWO ENTERPRISES (OPTICAL) The Enterprise-D moves closer to the Enterprise-C in order to protect it from the Klingons. 79 INT. ENTERPRISE-D MAIN BRIDGE The ship is ROCKED by several hits. Riker works the Tactical console. RIKER Damage control teams to deck fourteen. STAR TREK: "Yesterday's... " - REV. 12/11/89 - ACT FIVE 55. 79 CONTINUED: GEORDI'S COM VOICE Engineering to bridge. Starboard power coupling is down. Containment field generator three is damaged -- attempting to bypass. RIKER If we lose anti-matter containment... Picard nods grimly. PICARD Acknowledged, Engineer. WESLEY The Klingons are flanking us... trying to draw us away from the Enterprise-C. PICARD Hold your course. (to Tactical) Continual fire, all phasers. 80 ON WESLEY as he works his console. Another HIT. Wesley struggles to maintain helm control. 81 EXT. SPACE - ENTERPRISE-D (OPTICAL) The ship sends out a firestorm of PHASER fire. 82 ON KLINGON SHIP (OPTICAL) The phasers punch through the Klingon shields and the ship EXPLODES. 83 INT. ENTERPRISE-D MAIN BRIDGE DATA One enemy target destroyed. The bridge is ROCKED again and again as the Klingons pound the Enterprise. STAR TREK: "Yesterday's... " - 12/8/89 - ACT FIVE 56. 83 CONTINUED: PICARD Damage report! RIKER Heavy casualties in the secondary hull. Navigational sensor array inoperative. GEORDI'S COM VOICE Anti-matter containment fields failing... if I can't stabilize them, we'll have to eject the reactor core or she'll blow... DATA (sees new reading on console) Shields buckling, Captain. They will not -- Another HIT ROCKS the bridge. INTERCUT: 84 INT. ENTERPRISE-D MAIN ENGINEERING The room is filled with smoke and crackling consoles. SUPERNUMERARIES, some wounded or dead are in b.g. Geordi is trying to make his report through the confusion and damage. GEORDI Engineer to bridge. Can't hold the antimatter containment fields... Initiating emergency shutdown... TWO EXPLOSIONS go off in the Engine Core. An ALARM sounds just as a CLOUD OF GAS starts to pour out of the Engine Core. Geordi reacts with horror. (NOTE: computer registers a "force field failure" and the emergency isolation door descends to close off the engine core.) GEORDI Coolant leak! bridge, we have a coolant leak in the engine core! I can't shut it down -- estimate two minutes to warp core breach... STAR TREK: "Yesterday's... " - 12/8/89 - ACT FIVE 57. 85 INT. ENTERPRISE-D MAIN BRIDGE Geordi is cut off in mid-sentence as the bridge is ROCKED again. PICARD How long until the Enterprise-C enters the rift? DATA Fifty-two seconds. 86 EXT. SPACE - ENTERPRISE-C AND RIFT (OPTICAL) The ship is just about to enter the rift. 87 INT. ENTERPRISE-D MAIN BRIDGE PICARD All remaining power to defense systems. DATA Power couplings severed in forward phaser banks. Attempting to by-pass. (works console) Controls not responding. A SHAKE as the ship is hit again. An EXPLOSION at Tactical. Riker goes down. Picard's face is grim. This is the end and he knows it. A Klingon voice is heard on the com (possibly Worf). KLINGON COM VOICE Federation ship Enterprise... surrender and prepare to be boarded! Picard looks defiantly at the ships on the viewer. He goes to the Tactical station and works the controls himself. He looks at the Klingons with steel in his eyes. PICARD (softly) Like hell. Picard fires the phasers. STAR TREK: "Yesterday's... " - 12/8/89 - ACT FIVE 58. 88 CLOSE ON PICARD holding on to the Tactical console as the ship is hit by phaser fire... 89 ON KLINGONS (OPTICAL) They press in closer for the kill and continue to FIRE at the Enterprise-D. 90 ON ENTERPRISE-C AND RIFT (OPTICAL) The ship enters the rift and disappears. CUT TO: 91 INT. ENTERPRISE-D MAIN BRIDGE - CLOSE ON PICARD Match shot on Picard as we last saw him. It is not immediately apparent whether or not anything has changed or if the battle is still raging. PICARD Report, Lieutenant. 92 NEW ANGLE which reveals the bridge of the Enterprise as seen in the Teaser. Everyone is back at their normal stations. The uniforms, the bridge itself and the people have returned to normal. Worf is back at Tactical; Troi is in her chair. WORF Readings fluctuated momentarily, Captain. It appeared to be a ship, but then it vanished. Picard takes this information in stride. DATA The rift is closing in on itself, Captain. PICARD Very well. Prepare a class-one sensor probe. We'll leave it behind to monitor the final closure. Mister Crusher, lay in a course for Archer Four. STAR TREK: "Yesterday's... " - REV. 12/11/89 - ACT FIVE 59. 92 CONTINUED: Business as usual. As if nothing ever happened... and to them it hasn't. GUINAN'S COM VOICE Guinan to Captain Picard... is everything all right up there? Picard is a little puzzled by this unusual communication from Guinan. PICARD Guinan?... Yes... everything's fine. Is something wrong? 93 INT. TEN-FORWARD Guinan is behind the bar, holding a drink she's just made. GUINAN No, sir. Sorry to bother you. She looks around. Everything is right. A sad smile crosses her features. She nods her head with satisfaction. FOLLOW her as she moves down the bar and hands the drink to Geordi. GEORDI Thanks, Guinan. Guinan nods, leans on the bar: GUINAN Geordi... tell me about Tasha Yar. FADE OUT. END OF ACT FIVE THE END STAR TREK: THE NEXT GENERATION "The Offspring" (f.k.a. "Bloodlines") #40273-164 Written by Rene Echevarria Directed by Jonathan Frakes THE WRITING CREDITS MAY NOT BE FINAL AND SHOULD NOT BE USED FOR PUBLICITY OR ADVERTISING PURPOSES WITHOUT FIRST CHECKING WITH THE TELEVISION LEGAL DEPARTMENT. Copyright 1989 Paramount Pictures Corporation. All Rights Reserved. This script is not for publication or reproduction. No one is authorized to dispose of same. If lost or destroyed, please notify the Script Department. REVISED FINAL DRAFT DECEMBER 19, 1989 STAR TREK: "The Offspring" - 12/19/89 - CAST STAR TREK: THE NEXT GENERATION "The Offspring" CAST PICARD LAL RIKER LIEUTENANT BALLARD DATA ADMIRAL ANTHONY HAFTEL BEVERLY TROI GEORDI WORF WESLEY GUINAN Non-Speaking VARIOUS SUPERNUMERARIES ANDORIAN FEMALE MUSCLEBOUND MALE HUNK A KLINGON WARRIOR STAR TREK: "The Offspring" - REV. 12/20/89 - SETS STAR TREK: THE NEXT GENERATION "The Offspring" SETS INTERIORS EXTERIORS USS ENTERPRISE USS ENTERPRISE MAIN BRIDGE READY ROOM OBSERVATION LOUNGE TURBOLIFT CORRIDOR TEN FORWARD LABORATORY TEACHER'S OFFICE HOLODECK DATA'S QUARTERS TROI'S QUARTERS PICARD'S QUARTERS BEVERLY'S OFFICE STAR TREK: "Offspring" - REV. 12/20/89 - TEASER 1. STAR TREK: THE NEXT GENERATION "The Offspring" TEASER FADE IN: 1 EXT. SPACE - THE ENTERPRISE (OPTICAL) standing stationary in space. PICARD (V.O.) Captain's log, Stardate 43657.0 We have arrived at sector four-eight-seven to begin charting this region of the galaxy. Commander Riker has been spared this sometimes tedious duty by virtue of a long overdue personal leave. 2 INT. CORRIDOR GEORDI and WESLEY walking swiftly down the corridor. At a connecting juncture TROI joins them. They are surprised when they realize they are all headed in the same direction. GEORDI Did he send for you too? TROI Yes... he was very mysterious about it. WESLEY Does anyone have any idea what this is all about? They all exchange a long look, "nope, not a clue", and continue walking. GEORDI Something happened at that cybernetics conference. Since he's come back he's spent every off duty minute in that lab. TROI It is very unlike Data to be secretive. STAR TREK: "Offspring" - 12/19/89 - TEASER 2. 2 CONTINUED: WESLEY And cautious. He kept the lab locked. GEORDI Now how would you know that? Wesley reacts with a shrug and a grin. He's been caught. They continue walking until they reach the door to Data's lab. Ring the chime. After a beat, the door slides open and Data stands there, holding a "human" foot in his hand... 3 INT. LABORATORY - REVERSE ANGLE The trio react to the foot... DATA Oh, you are early. Just a moment please. And the door slides closed in their faces... moving with Data as he takes his foot... and without ever going wide enough to see exactly what he's doing... 3A ANGLE Data kneels down and attaches the foot to the bottom of a leg. The toes begin to wiggle. Data's face is satisfied. He stands. DATA You may enter now. The door slides open and Data's curious crewmates ENTER. 3B NEW ANGLE (and the lab must be arranged so we can have a reveal here... we don't want them to see it as soon as they walk in -- perhaps the biobed set-up is faced away from the door, allows us to screen off line of sight to Lal as they enter.) GEORDI C'mon, Data, what is this... STAR TREK: "Offspring" - REV. 12/28/89 - TEASER 3. 3B CONTINUED: WESLEY Yeah, what's going on? DATA I have invited you here to meet someone. And now he reveals... an android, but it has no face, metallic eyes, and no hair. It is a primitive mannequin. When it speaks, its voice is computer-like, neither male nor female. DATA This is Lal. Lal, say hello to Counselor Deanna Troi... LAL Hello... Counselor Deanna Troi... TROI How do you do, Lal. LAL I am functioning... within normal parameters. DATA And this is Geordi La Forge and Wesley Crusher. Lal examines them. LAL Purpose for... exterior drapings, Father? WESLEY (sotto, to Geordi) Father? STAR TREK: "Offspring" - REV. 12/20/89 - TEASER 4. 3B CONTINUED: (2) DATA It is the custom that we wear clothing. WESLEY It called you "Father", Data. DATA Yes, Wesley. Lal is my child. On reactions... FADE OUT. END OF TEASER STAR TREK: "Offspring" - REV. 12/21/89 - ACT ONE 5. ACT ONE FADE IN: 4 INT. LABORATORY Picard, has joined them, slowly circles the android while Troi, Geordi, Wesley and Data watch. The android shows nothing. It stands ramrod straight and perfectly still, and it displays no curiosity about the human which is inspecting it. DATA It has a positronic brain... one very similar to my own... I began to program it at the cybernetics conference... GEORDI But nobody's ever been able to do that... at least not since you were programmed Data... DATA There was a new submicron matrix-transfer technology introduced at the conference which I discovered could be used to lay down complex neural net pathways... WESLEY (understanding) You mean a transfer... from your your brain to Lal's... DATA Exactly, Wesley. I realized for the very first time it was possible to continue Doctor Soong's work. My initial transfers have produced very encouraging results... so I brought Lal's brain back with me to continue. PICARD (unhappy) Data... He pauses as he realizes this is not the time and place to confont him. Suppresses his anger... STAR TREK: "Offspring" - REV. 12/28/89 - ACT ONE 5A. 4 CONTINUED: PICARD I would like to have been consulted. DATA I have not observed anyone else on board consult with you about their procreation, Captain. STAR TREK: "Offspring" - REV. 12/20/89 - ACT ONE 6. 4 CONTINUED: (2) PICARD No, but... He exchanges a look with Troi... PICARD ... in your case... it's not quite the same. DATA The intention is the same. A beat... he sees Picard is not convinced. DATA Lal's creation is entirely dependent on me. I am giving it knowledge and skills that are stored in my brain... its programming reflects mine in the same way a human child's genes reflect its parent's genes... GEORDI It's true, Captain, this technology requires another positronic brain that's fully programmed... WESLEY And Data's the only person around who has one. That does kind of makes him Lal's dad. Picard looks around... this is obviously a popular decision. But not with him. DATA Of course, it is not complete. We have only made two transfers. TROI Why didn't you give it a more human look, Data? DATA I decided to allow Lal to choose its own appearance and sex. STAR TREK: "Offspring" - REV. 1/2/90 - ACT ONE 7. 4 CONTINUED: (3) Picard acknowledges, but has had enough... PICARD Mister Data, at your convenience, I'd like to talk to you in my Ready Room. Counselor... (please join me) Troi and Picard start to leave... DATA Captain... Have a cigar. He picks up a box of cigars and holds it out... Picard reacts. DATA I believe it is customary. Picard takes a cigar, EXITS, so does Troi as she follows Picard, the others follow suit... 4A OMITTED 4B INT. CORRIDOR Picard and Troi as they leave the lab. Picard is obviously disturbed. PICARD I would suggest we do whatever we can to discourage this perception of the new android as a "child"... STAR TREK: "Offspring" - REV. 1/2/90 - ACT ONE 7A. 4B CONTINUED: Waits for Troi's concurrence which doesn't come. Looks at her -- PICARD Counselor, it is not a child. It is an invention, albeit an extraordinary one. TROI Why should biology or technology determine whether it is a child? I see a man who has created an offspring... a new life out of his own being. That suggests a child to me. If Data wishes to call Lal his child, who are we to argue? PICARD (frowns) If he must, fine. But I don't understand how he can call a five foot android, with heuristic learning systems and the strength of a ten men a "child". TROI You've never been a parent. Picard does a take as they turn a corner. 5 INT. READY ROOM Data sits on the sofa... pull back to reveal Picard. PICARD Data, what you have done has very serious ramifications and I am dismayed that you did not inform anyone of what you were doing. STAR TREK: "Offspring" - REV. 12/22/89 - ACT ONE 8. 5 CONTINUED: DATA I am sorry I did not anticipate your objections, Captain. Do you wish me to deactivate Lal? PICARD It is a life, Data. It cannot be activated or de-activated simply. It is a stupendous undertaking. Have you any idea what will happen when Starfleet learns of this? DATA I have followed all Starfleet regulations to the best of my ability, Captain... I expected they would be pleased... PICARD We'll see. (beat) My foremost concern is for the safety of this ship and crew. You are faster, stronger, and far more knowledgeable than any human... DATA I can assure you Lal's programming includes psychological inhibitor safeguards to prevent any threat to the Enterprise. STAR TREK: "Offspring" - REV. 12/22/89 - ACT ONE 9. 5 CONTINUED: (2) PICARD And in the event of a malfunction? DATA A malfunction is of course a possibility, Captain. But Lal's program is equipped like mine -- it will shut down before deleterious behavior can begin. Picard shakes his head, still fuming... PICARD You've taken on quite a responsibility, Mister Data... DATA (acknowledges) To prepare, I have scanned all the available literature on parenting. There seems to be much confusion on the issue. One traditional doctrine insists "spare the rod and spoil the child", suggesting a punitive approach... another more liberal attitude would allow a child enormous freedom... PICARD (trying to interrupt) Data... DATA And what the Klingons do to their children... PICARD (interrupting) I'm not talking about parenting. (beat) I'm talking about the extraordinary consequences of creating new life. DATA (confused) Does that not describe becoming a parent, sir? Not wanting to get into this -- STAR TREK: "Offspring" - REV. 12/28/89 - ACT ONE 10. 5 CONTINUED: (3) PICARD You are seeking to achieve what no one, other than your own creator, has been able to achieve -- to make another sentient, functional android. To make another Data. DATA That is why I must attempt this, Captain. I have observed that in most species, there is a primal instinct to perpetuate themselves. And while I have not been programmed with instinctive behavior patterns, I do understand that I have been, until now, the last of my kind. If I were damaged or destroyed, I would be lost forever. But if I am successful with the creation of Lal, my continuance is assured. I believe I understand the consequences. And I am prepared to accept the responsibility. On Picard's reaction... STAR TREK: "Offspring" - REV. 12/28/89 - ACT ONE 11. 5A thru OMITTED 7 8 INT. CORRIDOR Moving slowly down the hallway, passers-by react at the sight of the naked android... as a woman walks by, Lal studies her... LAL Gender female. STAR TREK: "Offspring" - REV. 12/28/89 - ACT ONE 12. 8 CONTINUED: TROI That's right, Lal. Just like me. As a pair of men walk by... LAL Gender male. DATA Correct. LAL I am... gender neuter. Inadequate. DATA That is why you must choose a gender, Lal. And complete your appearance. LAL What are... criteria? DATA Access your data bank on sexuality, level two. That will define the parameters. TROI Whatever you choose will be yours for your lifetime, Lal... It is a decision that will affect how people interrelate with you. LAL (turning to Troi) I choose... your sex... and appearance. Troi reacts. STAR TREK: "Offspring" - 12/19/89 - ACT ONE 13. 8 CONTINUED: (2) DATA No, Lal... that would be confusing. We are taking you to the Holodeck to show you several thousand composites which I have programmed. You may choose from them. TROI Several thousand... ? DATA This is a big decision... 9 INT. HOLODECK Starting on Troi who has fallen asleep, sitting on the floor against a wall... DATA Counselor... (her eyes open) Lal has narrowed the choices to four... would you like to see? TROI Yes... yes, of course, Data... 9A ANGLE (OPTICAL) to see Data has created a modest set with a mirror... in front of which stands Lal... DATA Computer, Lal -- gender sequence finalists... begin... Superimposing with a wipe (necessary I think to distinguish that she is not actually changing into these beings)... 9B AN ANDORIAN FEMALE (OPTICAL) DATA An Andorian female... STAR TREK: "Offspring" - 12/19/89 - ACT ONE 14. 9B CONTINUED: TROI Interesting. You'd be the only one on board the Enterprise, Lal... DATA That could make socialization more difficult. Wiping back to Lal and then wiping into -- 9C A MUSCLEBOUND HUMAN MALE HUNK (OPTICAL) DATA A human male... TROI Very attractive... no problem with socialization here... Wiping back to Lal and then wiping into -- 9D AN ATTRACTIVE HUMAN WOMAN (OPTICAL) DATA The human female. TROI I like her. Wiping back to Lal and then wiping into -- 9E A KLINGON WARRIOR (OPTICAL) DATA A Klingon male. TROI A friend for Worf. Wiping back to: 10 OMITTED STAR TREK: "Offspring" - REV. 12/21/89 - ACT ONE 15. 10 OMITTED 11 LAL (OPTICAL) TROI They are all very interesting, Lal. Do you have a favorite? LAL (beat) Yes. I have... chosen. As Data and Troi react... 11A INT. LABORATORY As Data puts the finishing touches on Lal... unseen in the biobed... studies his work... Troi ENTERS. DATA Come in, Counselor. I have completed the assembly of the replicated anatomy. I was able to provide Lal with even more realistic skin and eye color than my own. He helps Lal out of the tube... she's the human female, dressed in a flattering outfit. Troi reacts. TROI (softly) Congratulations, Data, it's a girl. As we: FADE OUT. END OF ACT ONE STAR TREK: "Offspring" - 12/19/89 - ACT TWO 16. ACT TWO FADE IN: 12 EXT. SPACE - THE ENTERPRISE (OPTICAL) Holding stationary in space. 13 INT. DATA'S QUARTERS Data escorts Lal. DATA This is home. LAL Home. Place of residence. Social unit formed by a family living together. DATA Correct, Lal. We are a family. She moves cautiously around the room... examining... as she looks at things for the first time... DATA A chair... to sit in. Moving to a painting on the wall... DATA A painting. LAL Painting. Colors produced on a surface by applying a pigment. DATA I will teach you how to recognize the artistry of paintings. A short attention span... she is already moving onto something else... she runs her fingers across it... LAL Soft. DATA Yes, very good, Lal. You have correctly processed the sense of touch. STAR TREK: "Offspring" - 12/19/89 - ACT TWO 17. 13 CONTINUED: Data leads her to a flower in a vase. DATA (cont'd) There are many fascinating experiences I wish to share with you. LAL Painting. DATA No, Lal, this is a flower. He lifts it, holds it to Lal's nose. DATA Inhale. LAL (reacts) Smell. DATA Yes. LAL Show me more, Father. And Data nods approvingly, pleased by her curiosity and eagerness. 13A thru OMITTED 17 18 INT. TEN-FORWARD Data and Lal seated at a table. Food is put in front of her... she picks it up with her hands... pauses as Data shakes his head no, shows her the fork in his hand... she imitates it. DATA (V.O.) Second officer, science log supplemental, copy: Starfleet research, Daystrom Institute, Galor Four annex. Reference: development, android designate Lal. STAR TREK: "Offspring" - REV. 12/20/89 - ACT TWO 18. 18 CONTINUED: Data lifts a glass, and takes a large swallow. Lal quickly imitates but the beverage seeps out through the sides of her mouth... DATA (V.O.) Training in social skills at the most elementary level has begun. Lal is progressing very slowly but is not deterred by early setbacks. 18A INT. HOLODECK (OR ANY GENERAL AREA) Wesley and Data throw and catch a ball as Lal observes. Data hands the ball to Lal who throws it gently to Wesley. He catches it and everybody is pleased... DATA (V.O.) Motor coordination has improved by twelve-point-four percent... this reflects the adaptation of second level neural transfers... ... and Wesley throws the ball back... she doesn't move as the ball bounces off the wall behind her and then she reacts to try and catch it... DATA (V.O.) Reflexes still need to develop. The integration of hand/eye coordination seems to be proceeding at a slower developmental rate. 19 INT. DATA'S QUARTERS (OPTICAL) Lal studies the desk top viewer... her eyes staring at it... as Data points out words and pictures flashing quickly by. DATA (V.O.) Visual comprehension is especially difficult for Lal. Translating her vast data banks into recognizable applications may improve with additional transfers. STAR TREK: "Offspring" - 12/19/89 - ACT TWO 18A. 19 CONTINUED: He stops as he notices Lal is not blinking... he points to his own eyes, watch my eyes... he blinks... she imitates... good and then he orchestrates another blink at another time interval... nods. STAR TREK: "Offspring" - REV. 12/20/89 - ACT TWO 19. 19 CONTINUED: (2) DATA (V.O.) She is also learning to supplement innate android behavior with human responses. 19A INT. MAIN BRIDGE Picard, Worf, Wesley, Troi... Data is at Ops, doesn't see as Lal ENTERS... DATA (V.O.) Most encouraging is her commitment to master the skills necessary to live successfully among humans. Her curiosity is insatiable... although it sometimes creates inappropriate behavior... Reactions to her arrival prompt Data to turn and react with concern... especially when she sits in the captain's Command Chair... Data exchanges a look with Picard and escorts her out... 19B INT. TEN FORWARD A similar setting to their first time here... she eats with a fork carefully but successfully and drinks without the beverage spilling out. Data observes and nods in satisfaction. DATA (V.O.) And I have been interested to note that as I observe Lal learning about her world... I share in her experience, almost as though I am learning things over again... 19C INT. LABORATORY Starting on Lal who is in the apparatus... pulling back to see that she is attached by the neural transfer equipment to Data. Wesley is observing. DATA (to Wesley) The transfer itself is fairly simple. (MORE) STAR TREK: "Offspring" - REV. 12/20/89 - ACT TWO 20. 19C CONTINUED: DATA (Cont'd) Each neural pathway in my brain has been duplicated precisely in hers... WESLEY One advantage of a brain like yours, Data is that we can replicate it. DATA (acknowledges) Theoretically, the duplicate brains should be able to store and process the same information... but until all the transfers are complete, we will not know for certain. This transfer is complete. Data begins to disconnect it. WESLEY What does Lal do while you're on duty? DATA She studies in our quarters. She does not require much supervision, Wesley. Lal is quite self-sufficient. WESLEY You could send her to school. DATA Lal already has access to the sum of human knowledge. WESLEY There are a lot of things you can learn just by being with kids your own age, Data. DATA She is only two weeks old. WESLEY Well, closer to her own age. STAR TREK: "Offspring" - REV. 12/20/89 - ACT TWO 21. 19C CONTINUED: (2) BEVERLY'S COM VOICE Doctor Crusher to Ensign Crusher. Aren't you supposed to be getting a hair cut, Wesley? WESLEY Yes, Mom. I'm on my way. (frowns) Parents. (beat) Nothing personal. He EXITS. Data moves to Lal, completes his work... DATA Lal, the third crosslink transfer series is complete. She becomes animated. And there is a more active brain at work now... LAL Father, what is my purpose? DATA Purpose? LAL My function, my reason for being? DATA It is a complex question, Lal. I can only begin to answer it by telling you that our function is to contribute in a positive way to the world in which we live. LAL Why am I me instead of someone else? DATA Because you are my child. LAL Where did I come from? STAR TREK: "Offspring" - REV. 12/22/89 - ACT TWO 22. 19C CONTINUED: (3) DATA Your questions suggest we have made a successful transfer of the heuristic associative pathways. You will now begin to process information on logic, aesthetics, metaphysics, and epistemology. You are truly becoming sentient, Lal. LAL How? DATA By developing the awareness to examine and question your perceptions. LAL Why do we have two hands... why not three or four... Why is the sky black... why do... DATA (interrupting) Lal, did you know that tomorrow will be your first day of school? 19D INT. READY ROOM (OPTICAL) Picard is speaking to ADMIRAL ANTHONY HAFTEL on the viewscreen... PICARD I assure you, Admiral, there's no better guide into this life for Lal than Data... He's doing an excellent job with her... STAR TREK: "Offspring" - REV. 12/22/89 - ACT THREE 23. 19D CONTINUED: ADMIRAL HAFTEL We all have enormous admiration for what Commander Data has achieved already. But we have superior facilities and personnel here at Galor Four. And a starship is hardly a proper setting... PICARD This starship's mission is to seek out new life and that is what Commander Data is doing. Under my direction. ADMIRAL HAFTEL We only want what's best for the new android. PICARD As do I. (beat, conciliatory) I would be willing to consider releasing Lal and Data to join you... so he may continue his work with her. ADMIRAL HAFTEL I anticipated this suggestion. Frankly, as extraordinary as he is, Data's an imperfect role model. In many ways, he's still developing. PICARD (dry) Aren't we all, Admiral... ADMIRAL HAFTEL His presence would undoubtedly retard the the new android's progress. PICARD Admiral, to you Lal is a new android. But to Data, she is his child. ADMIRAL HAFTEL His child. STAR TREK: "Offspring" - REV. 12/22/89 - ACT TWO 23A. 19D CONTINUED: (2) PICARD Yes, Admiral. It may not be easy for you and I to see her that way. But he does. And I respect that. They will remain here for now. ADMIRAL HAFTEL (reacts, beat) Starfleet's policy on research is clear... you're making your stand on very uncertain ground... I do hope it doesn't fall out from under you... Haftel out. The screen returns to starfield. Picard frowns. STAR TREK: "Offspring" - REV. 12/22/89 - ACT TWO 24. 19E OMITTED 20 INT. TEACHER'S OFFICE Data and LIEUTENANT BALLARD. Ballard is seated behind her desk, there is a window with a twenty-fourth century shutter closed behind her. BALLARD She achieved a very high score on a test of academic achievement... DATA A perfect score. BALLARD Yes. Which is why we started her with the older children. But Lal couldn't understand the nuances of how they related to each other. DATA I see. BALLARD We decided the best thing to do would be to put her with younger children. STAR TREK: "Offspring" - 12/19/89 - ACT TWO 25. 20 CONTINUED: DATA That would seem to be reasonable. BALLARD It isn't working out that way. She presses a panel and the shutter slides open to reveal an adjacent classroom. A group of toddlers are playing together with some sort of geometric building blocks. Lal is playing by herself in a corner. BALLARD The children are afraid of her. 20A INT. TURBOLIFT Data and Lal ENTER. After a beat... LAL Father, what is the significance of laughter? DATA It is a human physiological response to humor. LAL Then judging from their laughter the children at school found my remarks humorous. (thoughtful) So without understanding humor I have somehow mastered it. Data realizes she doesn't understand what has happened. To the computer -- DATA Deck fifteen. The door closes. After a beat. DATA Lal... LAL Yes, Father? STAR TREK: "Offspring" - 12/19/89 - ACT TWO 25A. 20A CONTINUED: DATA The children were not laughing with you... they were laughing at you. LAL Explain. STAR TREK: "Offspring" - REV. 12/20/89 - ACT TWO 26. 20A CONTINUED: (2) DATA One is meant kindly... the other is not. LAL Why did they wish to be unkind? DATA Because you are different. And sometimes differences scare people. I have learned that some of them use humor to hide their fears. LAL (beat) I do not want to be different, Father. And Data's face reflects the helplessness that has afflicted millions of parents as they try to solve their children's most difficult problems. 21 thru OMITTED 25 25A INT. BEVERLY'S OFFICE BEVERLY is at her desk, working. Data ENTERS. DATA Doctor, I require your advice as a successful parent. BEVERLY (reacts) Well, thank you, Data. I'd like to think I am. Sit down. How's Lal? DATA Lal is realizing that she is not the same as the other children. BEVERLY Is it lonely for her? STAR TREK: "Offspring" - REV. 12/20/89 - ACT TWO 27. 25A CONTINUED: DATA She does not feel the emotion of loneliness, but she can observe how isolated she is from the others. She wants to be more like them. Beverly looks at Data... BEVERLY Sounds familiar. DATA Yes, Doctor. It is an experience I know too well. But I do not know how to help her. Lal is passing into sentience. It is perhaps the most difficult stage of development for her. BEVERLY It's also a very human development, Data. As our minds and bodies grow, sometimes quite rapidly, we get confused too... we look around and try to see how we fit in... (a beat) When Wesley was growing up, he was an extraordinarily bright boy... but he had a hard time making friends. The other children were a little intimidated by him. DATA (interested) That is precisely what happened to Lal at school. How did you help him? BEVERLY Well, first I had to go back into my own childhood and remember how painful it was for me. Because there was a time when I didn't feel very popular either. When I told that to Wesley, it made him feel a little better. He knew I understood what he was going through. STAR TREK: "Offspring" - REV. 12/20/89 - ACT TWO 28. 25A CONTINUED: (2) DATA (beat) I have not told Lal how difficult it was for me to assimilate. I did not want it to discourage her. Perhaps this was an error of judgement. BEVERLY You had no one with experience to help you through sentience. At least, she has you. Just help her realize that she's not alone. Be there to nurture her when she needs love and attention. DATA I can give her attention, doctor. But I am incapable of giving her love. BEVERLY (smiles) Why do I find that so hard to believe? 26 thru OMITTED 30 30A INT. PICARD'S QUARTERS (OPTICAL) The lights are out... Picard is in bed... a signal wakes him up... WORF'S COM VOICE Captain, incoming signal. Starfleet priority one. Admiral Haftel. PICARD On my monitor, Lieutenant. STAR TREK: "Offspring" - REV. 12/20/89 - ACT TWO 29. 30A CONTINUED: Picard puts on a robe, turns on his monitor to reveal the admiral. PICARD Admiral. ADMIRAL HAFTEL (lying) Captain, I hope I didn't disturb you. PICARD Not at all. ADMIRAL HAFTEL I've discussed my concerns with Starfleet Command. You are to hold your position until I join you. Then I shall personally review the android's development. PICARD Understood. ADMIRAL HAFTEL Good. I should advise you, Captain, that if I am not satisfied with what I see... I am empowered to take the android back with me. Haftel out. And off Picard's concerned expression we, FADE OUT. END OF ACT TWO STAR TREK: "Offspring" - REV. 12/20/89 - ACT THREE 30. ACT THREE FADE IN: 31 EXT. SPACE - THE ENTERPRISE (OPTICAL) Holding stationary in space. PICARD (V.O.) Captain's log, supplemental: We are holding position pending the arrival of Admiral Haftel from Starfleet Research. 31A INT. LABORATORY Data and Lal. Lal is back in the transfer device. They each wear small patches on their foreheads. LED's blink as the transfer is made. Over this the captain's log continues. PICARD (V.O.) Commander Data is completing his final neural transfers to the android he has named Lal... Which I have learned, in the language of Hindi, means "beloved". 31B INT. TEN-FORWARD Guinan is behind the bar. A few couples scattered around the tables. Data and Lal ENTER. Cross to the bar. GUINAN Hello, Commander. Lal, how are you? LAL I am functioning within normal -- (stops herself) I am fine, thank you... Lal looks to Data. A nod of approval from the older android. DATA Guinan, Lal needs to observe human behavior. STAR TREK: "Offspring" - REV. 12/20/89 - ACT THREE 31. 31B CONTINUED: GUINAN You've come to the right place, Lal. There are all sorts of human behavior in here. DATA In return for this opportunity, Lal is willing to provide services to assist you. GUINAN Sort of a work-study program... LAL Father says I would learn a great deal from working with someone as old as you. Guinan reacts, looks at Data, who realizes the faux pas. DATA I believe what I said was that Guinan had much life experience, Lal... LAL No, the exact words you used were... GUINAN (interrupting, to Lal) You're hired. The most important part of this job is listening... People need a friendly ear to talk to... Happens to be my specialty... There's an art to it and I'll teach it to you, Lal. DATA That would be very beneficial. GUINAN How much do you know about food and beverages? STAR TREK: "Offspring" - REV. 12/28/89 - ACT THREE 32. 31B CONTINUED: (2) LAL I've been programmed with a listing of fourteen hundred and twelve known beverages as well as recipes for... Data and Guinan react... GUINAN What'd did you just say... LAL I've been programmed with... GUINAN "I've"... ? DATA Lal, you used a verbal contraction. GUINAN You said I've instead of I have. DATA It is a skill my program has never mastered. LAL Then I will desist. DATA No. You have exceeded my abilities. I do not object. I just do not understand why it has happened. But Data remains curious. PICARD'S COM VOICE Picard to Data. Please report to my Ready Room. STAR TREK: "Offspring" - REV. 12/28/89 - ACT THREE 33. 31B CONTINUED: (3) DATA (to comm) Yes, Captain. Data EXITS. 32 INT. READY ROOM Picard is seated at his desk. Data on the sofa. DATA I am sure the admiral is anxious to meet Lal... I have been sending him regular status reports on her development... PICARD His visit, Data, is not just an inspection of Lal's progress. He has expressed a concern for her environment. DATA Her environment, sir? PICARD He believes the Daystrom annex on Galor Four would be more suitable. DATA He wishes to relocate us? PICARD Not you, Data. Just Lal. And now Data understands. A beat. STAR TREK: "Offspring" - REV. 12/21/89 - ACT THREE 33A. 32 CONTINUED: DATA I would not be in favor of that, Captain. (MORE) STAR TREK: "Offspring" - REV. 12/22/89 - ACT THREE 34. 32 CONTINUED: (2) DATA (Cont'd) There are many things she can learn only from me. My lifetime of experiences, the mistakes I have made and what I have learned from them... WORF'S COM VOICE Captain, Commander Riker's shuttle has just returned. PICARD (to comm) Acknowledged, Lieutenant. Advise Mister Riker I'll want to meet with him in one hour. Picard out. (to Data) The admiral is taking the position that Lal's development should be overseen by the most experienced personnel available. DATA Then he is questioning my ability as a parent. PICARD In a manner of speaking... DATA Does the admiral have children, sir? PICARD I believe he does... why? DATA I am forced to wonder how much experience he had as a parent when his first child was born. Off Picard's look... 33 thru OMITTED 34 STAR TREK: "Offspring" - REV. 12/28/89 - ACT THREE 35. 35 INT. TEN-FORWARD A scene that has taken place thousands of times in thousands of bars in the galaxy... a YOUNG ENSIGN is talking to SOME BUDDIES at the bar... he looks over the shoulder of one of the men at... 35A A TABLE with TWO ATTRACTIVE YOUNG WOMEN... one of them, a blonde catches him looking, smiles at him... GUINAN (O.S.) There, you see? 35B ANGLE - INCLUDING GUINAN AND LAL watching from behind the bar... LAL Visual reconnaissance. GUINAN It's called flirting. LAL They seem to be communicating telepathically. GUINAN Well, they're both thinking the same thing if that's what you mean. The ensign excuses himself from his friends, goes to join her. STAR TREK: "Offspring" - REV. 12/28/89 - ACT THREE 36. 35C ANGLE - ANOTHER YOUNG COUPLE holding hands... Lal sees it... LAL Guinan, is the joining of hands a symbolic act for humans? GUINAN It shows affection. Humans like to touch each other. They start with the hands and move on from there. As this second couple kiss... LAL (reacts) He's biting that female. GUINAN No, they're touching lips. Kissing. The second couple get up and leave... LAL Why are they leaving? GUINAN Lal, there are some things your dad'll have to tell you... when he thinks you're ready. Down the bar, some people sit down and Guinan goes off to serve them... Lal watches the couple in love with curiosity... STAR TREK: "Offspring" - REV. 12/28/89 - ACT THREE 37. 35D ANGLE - RIKER ENTERS. He checks the room for any friends. Spots Lal, takes a second look, and likes what he sees. Lal notices his interest. It parallels what we just saw. She glances at the flirting couple at their table, we see the decision made, and when she looks back to Riker it is with the same encouragement she saw the girl at the table give the ensign. He is drawn across the room like iron to a magnet. Riker slides onto a stool at the bar. RIKER You're new around here, aren't you? LAL Yes. She looks up, and as she takes his hand... 35E ANGLE - INCLUDE DATA entering... reacts as he sees Lal pull Riker sharply toward her and kisses him to his great shock. Guinan sees it at the same time as Data does... they exchange a look... as Guinan moves to them... GUINAN Lal, put him down... Lal reacts, puts down Riker... as Data arrives... DATA Commander, what are your intentions toward my daughter? RIKER I'm not... what... who... your daughter? As Riker looks from one to the other to see if this is a gag... realizing it isn't... to Lal, sheepishly -- RIKER Nice to meet'cha... STAR TREK: "Offspring" - 12/19/89 - ACT THREE 38. 36 OMITTED 37 INT. DATA'S QUARTERS Data and Lal ENTER. LAL I watch them and I can do the things they do... but I'll never feel the emotions. I'll never know love. DATA That is a limitation we must learn to accept, Lal. LAL Then why do you still try to emulate humans? What purpose does it serve except to remind you that you are incomplete? DATA I have asked myself that many times as I have struggled to be more human, Lal. Until I finally realized that it is the struggle itself that is most important. We must strive to be better than we are. It does not matter that we will never reach our ultimate goal. The effort yields its own rewards. STAR TREK: "Offspring" - 12/19/89 - ACT THREE 39. 37 CONTINUED: She looks at him with a better understanding. LAL You are wise, Father. DATA It is only the difference between knowledge and experience. Lal studies her father, slowly reaches out her hand. LAL I learned today that humans like to hold hands. It is a symbolic gesture of affection. Data considers this and knows it is impossible to "feel" affection but holds out his hand anyway and as they hold hands, awkwardly, without feeling anything... 37A thru OMITTED 38 33A INT. MAIN BRIDGE - CLOSE ON THE MAIN VIEWER Admiral Haftel on his ship. ADMIRAL HAFTEL Prepare to beam me aboard, Captain. 38B ANGLE ON MAIN VIEWER (OPTICAL) As it the image of the admiral is replaced by a view of his ship. 38C ANGLE ON - PICARD His face in CU, before he orders transport... FADE OUT END OF ACT THREE STAR TREK: "Offspring" - REV. 12/20/89 - ACT FOUR 40. ACT FOUR FADE IN: 40 thru OMITTED 42 43 INT. READY ROOM Haftel, seated on the sofa, is accepting a cup of tea from Picard. His duties as host met, Picard settles on the corner of his desk. Haftel will surprise us, by his charm and by the strength of his arguments. ADMIRAL HAFTEL No objective viewpoint could see it any other way... PICARD I beg your pardon, Admiral, but I thought you were sent here to form an opinion... not to justify one. ADMIRAL HAFTEL Captain, do not make this more difficult than it needs to be. And Picard is at his most conciliatory here, seeking a solution that satisfies all. PICARD It need not be difficult at all. I understand your concerns. What I'm asking for is time, patience. If you keep an open mind, I know you'll see it is imperative to keep Data and Lal together. At least for the formative stages of her development. After that, I'm sure that Commander Data will be delighted to deliver her to Starfleet Research. ADMIRAL HAFTEL Not satisfactory. If mistakes are made during the formative stages, the damage might be irreparable. STAR TREK: "Offspring" - REV. 12/21/89 - ACT FOUR 41. 43 CONTINUED: PICARD I'm convinced the damage would be irreparable if you separate them. Cordially, the swords are drawn. ADMIRAL HAFTEL Really, Captain... is this about breaking up a family... Rather a sentimental attitude to take toward androids, isn't it? And now Picard begins to put an edge into his voice. PICARD They are living, sentient beings. Their rights and privileges in our society have been defined. I helped define them. ADMIRAL HAFTEL Yes, yes... I'm more than willing to acknowledge that. And you must acknowledge that Lal may be a technological step forward in the development of artificial intelligence. PICARD A most significant step. ADMIRAL HAFTEL And work like this demands strictly controlled procedures. PICARD Which Commander Data is following. ADMIRAL HAFTEL In effective isolation. And that is unacceptable to Starfleet Research. STAR TREK: "Offspring" - REV. 12/20/89 - ACT FOUR 41A. 43 CONTINUED: (2) A beat as they study each other. Haftel stands, moves off the conflict back into reason. ADMIRAL HAFTEL This is not personal, Captain. There are very real dangers here. Without peer review, Starfleet feels we're risking another M-5 catastrophe. PICARD That is a forced parallel, Admiral. M-5 was a battle computer. HAFTEL With an artificial intelligence, that led to disaster. (MORE) STAR TREK: "Offspring" - REV. 12/20/89 - ACT FOUR 42. 43 CONTINUED: (3) ADMIRAL HAFTEL (Cont'd) Does this new android have the same dangerous potential? I don't know. And that is my point. The blame of the M-5 catastrophe can be laid entirely on the fact that Doctor Daystrom was working in effective isolation. And that cannot be permitted to happen again. It is a strong argument. Picard is willing to acknowledge that. PICARD I respect the need for peer review and control precautions. I would submit that you will find them here aboard the Enterprise. My crew has served for years with Data. Unlike your research people, we have enough such experience to reliably judge what is "normal" and "abnormal" behavior for Soong-type androids. We are uniquely qualified to assist in guiding Lal's development. ADMIRAL HAFTEL (beat) That is what I'm here to decide, Captain. On Picard's look... 43A INT. LABORATORY Picard, Data and Haftel. Data is demonstrating the transfer device. As he sets it aside he concludes, DATA So Lal now possesses the sum of my programming. ADMIRAL HAFTEL Her neural nets are laid down identically to yours? Data hesitates for a moment. STAR TREK: "Offspring" - REV. 12/28/89 - ACT FOUR 43. 43A CONTINUED: DATA There do seem to be variations on the quantum level. Lal can use contractions... I cannot. Haftel throws Picard a look... ADMIRAL HAFTEL An aberration... what have you done about it? DATA I have maintained records on positronic matrix activity, behavioral norms, and all verbal patterns... I have seen no evidence of other aberrations... PICARD It would seem that you have actually improved upon yourself, Data. DATA Is that not the goal of every parent, sir? Data's reference to himself as a parent obviously throws the admiral. ADMIRAL HAFTEL But... as a good... father... don't you think it would be better, especially in light of this aberration, if Lal could be close to the best possible equipment and the best-trained minds to perform diagnostic, evaluative and repair procedures? STAR TREK: "Offspring" - REV. 12/28/89 - ACT FOUR 44. 43A CONTINUED: (2) DATA I have been programmed with all the procedures you have mentioned. And in any meaningful evaluation of Lal, you would require a model for a basis of comparison. I am the only model available, Admiral. Picard reacts, nice try, Admiral. ADMIRAL HAFTEL You haven't mastered human cultural and behavioral norms yourself yet, have you? DATA Nosir. ADMIRAL HAFTEL Then, if the object of Lal's existence is for her to understand human behavior, wouldn't you admit that you are an imperfect teacher... in fact, she may choose to emulate you rather than humans... even if you instruct her otherwise. PICARD (cutting off a chance for Data to reply) On the other hand, Admiral, how many of your researchers are androids? None. And I would suggest that many aspects of Lal's existence and development may be so alien to human experience that your people simply could not be made to comprehend them. STAR TREK: "Offspring" - REV. 1/3/90 - ACT FOUR 45. 43A CONTINUED: (3) ADMIRAL HAFTEL Where is Lal now? 44 OMITTED 44A INT. TEN-FORWARD Guinan is behind the bar, while Lal serves customers. Picard, Data and the Admiral ENTER. The Admiral is obviously taken aback by their location. ADMIRAL HAFTEL This is your idea of appropriate guidance... DATA It is an opportunity for her to observe human behavior and more importantly to interact with her crewmates. ADMIRAL HAFTEL She's capable of running over sixty trillion calculations per second and you have her working as a cocktail waitress. PICARD Admiral, she is working under the strict guidance of a woman in whom I have absolute trust. Ten-Forward is the center of the ship's social activity. Everyone on board comes here... STAR TREK: "Offspring" - REV. 12/21/89 - ACT FOUR 46. 44A CONTINUED: ADMIRAL HAFTEL I'm not convinced the sort of behavior she observes here will be a positive influence. GUINAN (O.S.) My customers usually behave themselves... if not, they're asked to leave. There's something to learn from that as well, wouldn't you say? 44B ANGLE to reveal Guinan. PICARD Admiral Haftel, Guinan. She runs Ten-Forward. He nods to her. PICARD How is Lal doing, Guinan? GUINAN She spills a few drinks like the rest of us. But she's learning a lot. Some raucous laughter from a table that Lal is serving... ADMIRAL HAFTEL (to Picard) I'm sorry, this is just outrageous. GUINAN Come now, Admiral, I'm sure you've been in a few bars in your day... The admiral looks cooly to Picard... ADMIRAL HAFTEL I want the android out of here... have her report to me immediately for an interview. STAR TREK: "Offspring" - 12/19/89 - ACT FOUR 47. 44B CONTINUED: Data acknowledges, crosses the room to Lal as Haftel EXITS... Picard gives Guinan a look... she shrugs, what can you do... he finally shakes his head and EXITS. 45 OMITTED 45A INT. OBSERVATION LOUNGE Picard, Lal and Haftel. Haftel deceptively cordial. He smiles warmly to Lal. Lal is uncomfortable... this is rather like being called to the principal's office. ADMIRAL HAFTEL Well, I've been looking forward to meeting you, Lal. LAL Why? ADMIRAL HAFTEL You're very important to us at Starfleet Research. We've got quite a facility at Galor Four. I'd like to show it to you. PICARD The Admiral is in fact suggesting you be moved to Galor Four, Lal. LAL Have I done something wrong? ADMIRAL HAFTEL Not at all. But it is important to broaden your experiences. And there's just so much you can learn aboard a starship, wouldn't you agree? LAL Yes, I'd agree. ADMIRAL HAFTEL Good. LAL Thus, the natural conclusion would be when I have learned all there is to learn aboard the starship, I would relocate to Galor Four. STAR TREK: "Offspring" - REV. 12/20/89 - ACT FOUR 48. 45A CONTINUED: ADMIRAL HAFTEL I don't agree. That is not the natural conclusion here. LAL I believe it is. Turning to Picard as though she were not in the room. ADMIRAL HAFTEL You see, she resists alternative suggestions to her own father's wishes. That's not a good sign. LAL Excuse me, sir, I do not know my father's wishes. ADMIRAL HAFTEL He did not "warn" you about this conversation? LAL Warn me? No, Admiral. He told me to answer your questions. PICARD The admiral is concerned that you need more guidance than your father can provide here on the Enterprise. ADMIRAL HAFTEL Do not misunderstand. I have great respect for your... father. LAL You do not speak with respect. ADMIRAL HAFTEL (to Picard) I find her very adversarial. STAR TREK: "Offspring" - REV. 12/28/89 - ACT FOUR 49. 45A CONTINUED: (2) LAL I am only stating a fact, Admiral. ADMIRAL HAFTEL Apparently, your father has not taught you about selective judgment in verbalizing your thoughts. This is a skill we can help you develop. LAL My father is already helping me, sir. ADMIRAL HAFTEL Yes, well, the question is whether he's helping you enough. LAL Are you asking me, sir? ADMIRAL HAFTEL No, I didn't mean... PICARD Why don't we, Admiral? In all these discussions, we've never once mentioned Lal's wishes. She's a free, sentient being. What are your wishes, Lal? LAL I wish to remain here, Captain Picard. PICARD Thank you. You're excused. The admiral glances sternly at Picard and then nods, fine, the interview is over. Lal looks quite concerned as she EXITS. STAR TREK: "Offspring" - 12/19/89 - ACT FOUR 50. 46 thru OMITTED 47 47A INT. TROI'S QUARTERS Troi is working. A chime. STAR TREK: "Offspring" - REV. 12/20/89 - ACT FOUR 51. 47A CONTINUED: TROI Come in. Lal ENTERS. Her movements are subtly but noticeably a little hyper. A little extra head movement. Some additional eye jumps. TROI Hello, Lal. How are you? LAL An admiral from Starfleet has come to take me away, Troi. I'm scared. A beat... as Troi reacts and stands... realizing -- TROI You are scared, aren't you? And it takes Lal a beat to realize too... she exchanges a look with Troi, stunned to realize -- LAL I... feel it. How is that possible? TROI I don't know. Lal sits. A little shaky. Troi moves to her... puts a calming hand on her shoulder. LAL This is what it means to feel. (beat) This is what it means to feel. FADE OUT. END OF ACT FOUR STAR TREK: "Offspring" - REV. 12/20/89 - ACT FIVE 52. ACT FIVE FADE IN: 48 thru OMITTED 48B 48C INT. OBSERVATION LOUNGE Data has joined Picard and Haftel. ADMIRAL HAFTEL Commander, you have Lal off to a wonderful start in life. And that's what being a parent is all about. But I have decided I must ask you to release her to me. DATA May I know why, sir? ADMIRAL HAFTEL All the other arguments aside, there is one that is irrefutable. There are only two Soong-type androids in existence. It is far too dangerous to have the two of you in one place. Especially on a starship. One lucky shot by some Romulan and we lose you both. PICARD That's a fine argument, Admiral. But it doesn't change my feeling that the proper place for Lal to develop is by Data's side. ADMIRAL HAFTEL You're not a parent, Captain. I am. I've learned, with difficulty, that there's a time when... (including himself with Data) ... all parents have to let go of our children... for their own good. STAR TREK: "Offspring" - REV. 12/21/89 - ACT FIVE 53. 48C CONTINUED: PICARD This is not that time. The umbilical cord is virtually uncut. The child... (and this is the first time that Picard uses the word "child" comfortably, and he realizes it). ... the child depends on him. Haftel looks at Picard -- the decision has been made. ADMIRAL HAFTEL Mister Data, it would be much better for Lal if she left knowing you had voluntarily decided this was the best course of action. He looks expectantly to Data. DATA Admiral, when I created Lal, it was with the hope that someday she would choose to enter the Academy and become a member of Starfleet. I wanted to give something back in return for all Starfleet has given me. I still do. But Lal is my child. You ask that I volunteer to give her up. I cannot. That would violate every lesson I have learned about human parenting. (beat) As Captain Picard told me after he first met her, I have taken on "quite a responsibility." I have brought a new life into this world. It is my duty, not Starfleet's, to guide her through these first difficult steps to maturity, to support her as she learns, to prepare her to be a contributing member of society. No one can relieve me of that obligation. And I cannot ignore it. I am her father. Picard looks at Data with extraordinary respect. STAR TREK: "Offspring" - REV. 12/20/89 - ACT FIVE 53A. 48C CONTINUED: (2) ADMIRAL HAFTEL Then, Mister Data, I regret that I must order you to transport Lal aboard my ship. Data rises to comply. STAR TREK: "Offspring" - REV. 12/20/89 - ACT FIVE 54. 48C CONTINUED: (3) PICARD Belay that order, Commander. Haftel reacts, turns to Picard... ADMIRAL HAFTEL (icy) I beg... your pardon? PICARD I'll take the matter to Starfleet myself. ADMIRAL HAFTEL I am Starfleet, Captain... and this is an order. Proceed, Commander. PICARD Hold your ground, Mister Data. ADMIRAL HAFTEL Do you understand you're risking your command and your career, Captain? PICARD There are times, sir, when men of good conscience cannot blindly follow orders. You acknowledge they are sentient, but ignore their personal liberty and freedom. Order a man to turn his child over to the state? Not while I am his captain. If you wish, the Enterprise is prepared to accompany you to Starfleet Command and then we'll see what... He is interrupted by a hail. TROI'S COM VOICE Troi to Commander Data. Report to your lab at once. Data reacts... looks to his two superiors. Picard nods to Data who EXITS, answers for him... PICARD Acknowledged, Counselor. He's on his way. Is there a problem? STAR TREK: "Offspring" - REV. 12/20/89 - ACT FIVE 54A. 48C CONTINUED: (4) TROI Yes, Captain, something is terribly wrong with Lal. As they react... STAR TREK: "Offspring" - REV. 12/20/89 - ACT FIVE 55. 49 INT. LABORATORY Starting on Lal's face who has regressed dramatically... she is more like the first mannequin we saw... slow, measured movements, loss of comprehension... TROI (O.S.) It lasted barely a moment. She experienced an extraordinary range of feelings... fear, excitement, pleasure... she could barely catch her breath... and then... Pulling back to see Data and Haftel are beginning to examine her as Picard stands with Troi. TROI For no apparent reason she got up and walked out of my quarters... she didn't say another word, she just started walking here... and each step became more and more difficult... DATA Lal is programmed to return to the lab in the event of a malfunction. Only now, at the sound of his voice, does Lal show recognition. LAL Father. DATA Yes, Lal. I am here. PICARD (reacts, to Troi with sad irony) A malfunction. Emotional awareness. DATA (to Haftel) It would appear to be a symptom of cascade failure. It will require reinitializing the base matrix without wiping out the higher functions. STAR TREK: "Offspring" - REV. 12/20/89 - ACT FIVE 56. 49 CONTINUED: ADMIRAL HAFTEL I agree. (beat) May I assist, Commander? DATA Thank you, Admiral. ADMIRAL HAFTEL (to Picard and Troi) If you'll excuse us, Commander Data and I have much to do. Picard and Troi acknowledge... EXIT... and all arguments are on hold as the two men, both of whom care greatly about Lal, prepare to "operate" (TECH: DESCRIBE APPROPRIATE INITIAL ACTIVITY). 49A EXT. SPACE - THE ENTERPRISE (OPTICAL) Haftel's ship nearby. 49B INT. CORRIDOR Outside the lab. Wesley, Geordi, Troi, have been waiting a long time for news. Idle conversation has long ago ended. They react as the door slides open and Haftel comes out of the lab. His face is weary... he looks at the others and shakes his head. ADMIRAL HAFTEL (softly) She won't survive much longer. There was nothing anyone could have done. We'd repolarize one pathway and another would collapse. And then another. And his hands started moving faster than I could see, trying to stay ahead of each breakdown. He refused to give up. He was remarkable. (beat) It just wasn't meant to be. He EXITS. STAR TREK: "Offspring" - REV. 12/20/89 - ACT FIVE 57. 50 OMITTED 51 INT. LABORATORY Data looks at Lal with an impassive face... and yet we must sense the extraordinary weight of his failure on his shoulders... she looks as beautiful as ever, standing here before him. And yet she barely can move or talk. There is very little left of her. After a beat... DATA Lal, I am unable to correct the system failure. LAL I... know. DATA We must say good-bye now. With great difficulty, slowly her hand rises and he sees it, takes it. LAL I... feel... DATA What do you feel, Lal? LAL I... love... you... Father. And Data just stares at her... unable to say it back. DATA I wish I could feel it with you. LAL I... will... feel... it... for... both... of... us. With great urgency in her eyes... she clutches his hand harder... as though clutching to life itself. LAL Thank you... for... my... life. On Data's face... the sound of her voice edging slowly into the voice of the mannequin, not male, not female (but do not slow speed down) -- STAR TREK: "Offspring" - REV. 12/20/89 - ACT FIVE 58. 51 CONTINUED: LAL (O.S.) Flirt-ing... laugh-ter... fam-ily... paint-ing... fe-male... hu-man. And there is no more. A beat. ` 52 INT. MAIN BRIDGE Picard, Riker, Troi, Worf, Beverly, Geordi, Wesley. Data ENTERS from the forward turbolift. DATA Lal suffered complete neural system failure at thirteen hundred hours. I have deactivated the unit. PICARD The crew grieves for your loss, Mister Data. Data studies the sad faces of his "family", never has, never will entirely understand "grieving". DATA I thank you for your sympathy. But she is here. (indicates his head) Her presence so enriched my life that I could not allow her to pass into oblivion. So I incorporated her programs back into my own... I transferred her memories to me. Picard acknowledges. PICARD Mister Data, take your position. He does. And we stay on Data's face as we hear... PICARD (O.S.) Mister Crusher, set course for the starbase on Otar Two. WESLEY (O.S.) Course set, sir. PICARD (O.S.) Engage. STAR TREK: "Offspring" - 12/19/89 - ACT FIVE 59. 53 EXT. SPACE - THE ENTERPRISE (OPTICAL) warping out. FADE OUT. END OF ACT FIVE THE END STAR TREK: THE NEXT GENERATION "Sins of the Father" #40273-165 Based on a script by Drew Deighan Teleplay by Ronald D. Moore & Reed Moran Directed by Les Landau THE WRITING CREDITS MAY NOT BE FINAL AND SHOULD NOT BE USED FOR PUBLICITY OR ADVERTISING PURPOSES WITHOUT FIRST CHECKING WITH THE TELEVISION LEGAL DEPARTMENT. Copyright 1990 Paramount Pictures Corporation. All Rights Reserved. This script is not for publication or reproduction. No one is authorized to dispose of same. If lost or destroyed, please notify the Script Department. FINAL DRAFT JANUARY 5, 1990 STAR TREK: "Sins of the Father" - 1/5/90 - CAST STAR TREK: THE NEXT GENERATION "Sins of the Father" CAST PICARD KURN RIKER K'MPEC DATA DURAS BEVERLY KAHLEST TROI GEORDI WORF WESLEY Non-Speaking KLINGON SUPERNUMERARIES TRANSPORTER TECH KLINGON COUNCIL MEMBERS TWO KLINGON ASSASSINS Non-Speaking KLINGON GUARD SUPERNUMERARIES KLINGON WOMAN CLERK STAR TREK: "Sins of the Father" 1/5/90 - SETS STAR TREK: THE NEXT GENERATION "Sins of the Father" SETS INTERIORS EXTERIORS USS ENTERPRISE USS ENTERPRISE MAIN BRIDGE CAPTAIN'S READY ROOM KLINGON SHIP (STOCK) TURBOLIFT CORRIDOR KLINGON CITY (MATTE) TRANSPORTER ROOM OLD CITY STREET TEN FORWARD KLINGON HOME SICKBAY CAPTAIN'S DINING ROOM KURN'S QUARTERS KLINGON CITY ANTE ROOM GREAT HALL PEDESTRIAN TUNNEL KLINGON HOME K'MPEC'S CHAMBERS STAR TREK: "Sins of the Father" - 1/8/90 - PRONUNCIATION STAR TREK: THE NEXT GENERATION "Sins of the Father" PRONUNCIATION GUIDE biHnuch bekh-NOOCH* cha'DIch cha-DICH* DURAS DYUR-as 'el L ghIj qet jaghmeyjaj geej ket JAG-mee-jaj ghojmoK GOJ-mok Ha'DIbah KHA-di-bakh JA'ROD JAH-rod jIlaj jil-LAZH jIlajneS jil-LAZH-nesh KAHLEST KAY-lest K'MPEC KIM-peck KHITOMER KIT-to-mur KURN KURN kut'luch cut-LUCH* len'mat LIN-mat LORGH LORG Mek'ba MICK-bah mev yap MIV-yap MOGH MOHG STAR TREK: "Sins of the Father" - 1/8/90 - PRONUNCIATION CONTINUED: nuqneH nook-NEKH nuqneHneS nook-NEKH-nesh PAGH PAH patahk PAH-tock Qapla' khap-LA seloh SEE-low tam TOM tlhIH ghIj jIHyoj te-LIKH gizh jikh-YOZH tuHmoH tookh-MOKH * ch as in chew or artichoke. NOTE: Many Klingon words are pronounced with guttural or vibrating vocal cord sounds. See reference by Marc Okrand (provided separately). STAR TREK: "Sins of the Father" - REV. 1/7/90 - TEASER 1. STAR TREK: THE NEXT GENERATION "Sins of the Father" TEASER FADE IN: 1 EXT. SPACE - THE ENTERPRISE AND KLINGON SHIP (OPTICAL) The two ships facing each other (STOCK FOOTAGE). PICARD (V.O.) Captain's log, Stardate 43685.2 As part of a continuing exchange program, the Enterprise is taking aboard a Klingon officer to return the recent visit of Commander Riker to the cruiser Pagh. 2 INT. CORRIDOR PICARD and RIKER are walking along the corridor toward the Transporter Room. PICARD We must take care that while he is with us, Commander Kurn is accorded all the rights and responsibilities due the first officer of this ship. If he should feel patronized in any way... RIKER We'd know about it, sir. One does not patronize a Klingon warrior. PICARD I'm quite sure your experience aboard the Pagh will prove invaluable during the commander's tour. Be sure that the crew is prepared for any... unusual orders. RIKER The Klingons are very thorough, Captain. I'm sure Commander Kurn has studied for his assignment with us just as I studied to serve with them. STAR TREK: "Sins of the Father" - 1/5/90 - TEASER 2. 2 CONTINUED: PICARD (acknowledges) I understand that he specifically requested the Enterprise... Moving into -- 3 INT. TRANSPORTER ROOM (OPTICAL) Picard and Riker ENTER. TRANSPORTER TECHNICIAN is waiting at the console. TECHNICIAN Commander Kurn is ready for transport, Captain. PICARD Energize. The Technician works the console and the Transporter EFFECT begins. Kurn materializes on the stage. Kurn is clad in full Klingon regalia... he bears a striking resemblance to Worf and is about the same age. Picard and Riker step forward in greeting. PICARD Welcome aboard the Enterprise, Commander. I am Captain Picard. Kurn steps off the stage. There is a slightly awkward moment as Kurn remembers the human custom of greeting. He hesitates only briefly and then extends his hand. Picard smiles and shakes his hand. Kurn responds politely, but it sounds rehearsed and stilted. KURN Thank... you, Captain. I am ready for duty. PICARD This is Commander William Riker who will be yielding the first officer's position to you during your tour... KURN (to Riker) You are relieved. (to Picard) May I take my station, Captain? STAR TREK: "Sins of the Father" - 1/5/90 - TEASER 3. 3 CONTINUED: Picard and Riker react to the Klingon's impatience. RIKER I thought that I might show you your quarters... Riker stops as he sees fire come to Kurn's eyes struggling to keep his temper. KURN (to Picard) I am ready for duty, sir. I ask that I be allowed to take my station. Picard and Riker exchange a glance. PICARD Very well... If you will accompany us to the bridge... They head for the door. There is a slight moment of awkwardness as Riker almost goes through the door ahead of Kurn. Riker catches himself and allows Kurn to go first. Kurn glares at this near-breach of protocol, but says nothing. 4 INT. MAIN BRIDGE WESLEY at Conn, WORF at Tactical, DATA in Command. Picard, Riker and Kurn ENTER from the turbolift. Picard leads Kurn down into the Command area. Everyone watches to see the reaction as Worf and Kurn see each other for the first time. Worf is uncomfortable. Kurn runs his eyes over him... silently taking his measure of Worf... then looks away as if he'd seen nothing worth his time. PICARD May I present your bridge crew... And it is a question, so Kurn feels free to answer -- KURN Unnecessary, Captain. I am prepared to take command. PICARD (reacts) Proceed. STAR TREK: "Sins of the Father" - 1/5/90 - TEASER 4. 4 CONTINUED: KURN (to the crew) I am Kurn, commander rank, Klingon Defense Force. You will address me as "Commander" or "sir" at all times. Moving about the bridge... making strong, challenging eye contact... bellicose... KURN I am fully aware of all Starfleet regulations. They will be strictly adhered to by all personnel while I am in command. It is my intention to bring a sense of discipline that you may not be accustomed to. The last is said at Worf... then to Picard -- KURN (continuing) With your permission, of course, Captain. Picard rather enjoys this, covers it. PICARD By all means, Commander. Wesley throws a do-you-believe-this glance to Riker. Kurn notices, moves face to face with Wesley... KURN Do you wish to speak, Acting Ensign Wesley Crusher? Wesley is surprised that he knows his name. WESLEY Nosir, Commander, sir. KURN (to the crew) I have studied all your service records. Impressive. We shall see if you live up to your reputations. The crew awaits your orders, Captain. STAR TREK: "Sins of the Father" - REV. 1/8/90 - TEASER 5. 4 CONTINUED: (2) Picard looks around the bridge and sees his crew sitting straight, alert, indeed ready. Picard swallows a grin and sits in the captain's chair. It takes Kurn a couple seconds to realize where his place is, but then sits down with confidence in Riker's accustomed seat. Riker moves to the seat on the other side of Picard. PICARD (casually) Take us into the outer cometary cloud, Commander. KURN (booming) Set course one-one-four, mark two-three-zero, one-third impulse power! WESLEY (works console) Aye sir. KURN Execute! (Wesley works furiously) Execute! WESLEY (a little rattled) Engaged. Increasing to one-third impulse power, sir. Kurn grunts and shakes his head. As Picard sits back, even faced, knowing we're in for an interesting ride... CUT TO: 5 EXT. SPACE - THE ENTERPRISE (OPTICAL) The ship accelerates to full impulse power. FADE OUT. END OF TEASER STAR TREK: "Sins of the Father" - 1/5/90 - ACT ONE 6. ACT ONE FADE IN: 7 INT. TEN FORWARD Riker ENTERS, sees Wesley at a table and goes over to him. Wesley is staring into space with a look of unhappiness on his face. RIKER Mind if I join you? WESLEY No, sir. RIKER (sits down) Something wrong, Wesley? WESLEY No, sir. RIKER (beat) Commander Kurn perhaps? WESLEY He... just doesn't seem to like me, sir. I can't do anything right for him. Every time I respond to one of his orders... he jumps down my throat. I'm not sure what I'm doing wrong. RIKER He's just... Riker's voice trails off as he notices that GEORDI has just come up to the table looking outraged. RIKER Problem, Geordi? Geordi hesitates slightly, he doesn't really want to bother Riker with his problems, but he's clearly at the end of his rope. GEORDI Well, sir... it's our new first officer. STAR TREK: "Sins of the Father" - 1/5/90 - ACT ONE 7. 7 CONTINUED: RIKER (can't help but smile) I take it he found something wrong in Engineering? GEORDI (exasperated) Just the entire section. He made a surprise inspection in the middle of a maintenance cycle! I tried to explain to him, but... RIKER He wouldn't listen. GEORDI We're all going to be doing double shifts to get things ready for the next inspection. RIKER (to both of them) His style of command is just different. Klingons believe in a strict formality of command and obedience. GEORDI But this isn't a Klingon ship. He's got to loosen up a little, Commander. WESLEY It's not just us. He's leaning pretty hard on everybody except... (hesitates) Off Riker's look... GEORDI Except the one guy who wouldn't mind it... 8 INT. MAIN BRIDGE - ANGLE ON WORF Kurn in Command, Worf at his station. WORF Sensors picking up asteroidal debris ahead, Commander. STAR TREK: "Sins of the Father" - REV. 1/7/90 - ACT ONE 8. 8 CONTINUED: KURN Can you identify the coordinates, Mister Worf? Kurn stands up and moves up the ramp to the Tactical station. WORF Bearing zero-zero-one, mark point-oh-three, range three hundred thousand kilometers. KURN Excellent. Please scan the asteroid field for me, Lieutenant, and report. WORF Approximately two thousand small objects, none in our direct flight path, sir. Kurn is now standing near Worf. Kurn's attitude is easy, gentle, almost as if he thinks he might bruise Worf if he isn't careful. As Kurn's manner becomes more soothing and polite, Worf slowly begins to overheat at this treatment. KURN So, no course correction is necessary, is that what you're saying? WORF (tightly) It should not be needed, Commander. KURN Very good, Lieutenant. You handled that well. This is too much for Worf. He looks sharply at Kurn. Kurn notices... challenging -- KURN Yes? Worf looks away from Kurn... stares straight ahead. Kurn studies him for a moment. STAR TREK: "Sins of the Father" - REV. 1/8/90 - ACT ONE 9. 8AA EXT. SPACE - THE ENTERPRISE (OPTICAL) Cruising at one-third impulse. 8A INT. TURBOLIFT Riker is inside as the door opens and Kurn ENTERS. RIKER (greeting) Commander. Kurn nods an acknowledgement... RIKER Captain's mess... ? KURN Yes. RIKER (to computer) Resume. The doors shut and they proceed. A beat of silence for a few steps before Riker decides to bring up what's been on his mind. RIKER Your knowledge of our systems and procedures is very impressive... (off his look) ...Sir. Getting a little tired of this... RIKER I would like to make one suggestion, sir. KURN A suggestion... Friendly, charming -- RIKER When I served aboard the Pagh, the hardest part for me was in recognizing and adapting to the demands of the crew. They needed an iron hand. They wanted it. (MORE) STAR TREK: "Sins of the Father" - REV. 1/8/90 - ACT ONE 10. 8A CONTINUED: RIKER (Cont'd) I can imagine how difficult it must be for you to work with a crew that is so different. I'd be happy to guide you in this regard if it would be helpful. KURN (beat) No. It wouldn't. The door opens. As Kurn begins to exit... RIKER (a little burned) This is not a Klingon ship, sir. Kurn pauses, glances threateningly back at Riker -- KURN No, Commander, it is not. If it were a Klingon ship, I would have killed you for offering your... "suggestion". And EXITS. Riker reacts... 8B INT. CAPTAIN'S DINING ROOM - CLOSE ON A ROASTED TURKEY (REPLICATED) As a hand puts a carving knife to work... and pull back to see Picard in a chef's apron, carving at the head of an elaborate buffet table. Kurn observes, in line near Geordi. KURN (concerned) How long has the bird been dead? It appears to have been lying in the sun for some time. GEORDI (reacts) It's not really dead, it's replicated. But you do understand we... cook many of our foods... STAR TREK: "Sins of the Father" - REV. 1/8/90 - ACT ONE 10A. 8B CONTINUED: KURN Ah yes... I was told to prepare for that... I will try some of your burned replicated bird meat. STAR TREK: "Sins of the Father" - REV. 1/7/90 - ACT ONE 11. 8B CONTINUED: (2) Picard puts a slice on his plate. PICARD I have attempted to select a menu that will allow you to sample a variety of dishes, Commander. And indeed, the table is filled with a variety of foods... and garnished with a beautiful flower centerpiece... all the senior officers are there, filling up their plates... Riker, Geordi, Worf, BEVERLY, TROI, Data. Mozart is playing in the background. BEVERLY Try some caviar... KURN The odor is not palatable. What is it? DATA The unhatched eggs of a large scaleless fish. Kurn reacts, are you serious... ? PICARD It is from the Caspian Sea on Earth, Commander. A delicacy and a personal favorite of mine. Our replicators have never done it justice. I managed to store a few cases aboard for special occasions... Kurn reluctantly takes some. KURN (dubious) I am honored, Captain. And as he decides to finish this process of collecting the Earth foods, he takes a good sampling of the flowers from the centerpiece and puts them on his plate. 8C ANGLE - THE DINNER TABLE As Kurn sits opposite Troi... the others follow to the table... Worf chooses not to be too close to Kurn. STAR TREK: "Sins of the Father" - REV. 1/7/90 - ACT ONE 12. 8C CONTINUED: TROI Are you adjusting to your new environment, Commander? KURN I find the constraints quite difficult to conform to... I'm sure any Klingon warrior would... Worf reacts... as Kurn continues, casually -- KURN ... just a short time ago, I had to stop myself from killing Commander Riker. Troi laughs before realizing Kurn is not joking. During all this, Kurn eats with much gusto and noise and with his hands... then slowly realizes the others are waiting for the others to sit before they begin to eat... KURN I believe he was trying to communicate the crew's discomfort with my style of command... under different circumstances, I would take that as a challenge to my authority. Picard now joins them at the table... and everyone starts to eat with their knifes and fork, quite daintily... Kurn watches tries awkwardly to imitate... PICARD One of the goals of the exchange program is for all of us to learn tolerance, Commander. As for my crew, it may be healthy to shake up the status quo occasionally. Feel free to disagree, Mister Riker... Picard is deliberately displaying a casual example of starship command by welcoming disagreement... RIKER Well, I'd say the commander certainly has the crew on their toes... STAR TREK: "Sins of the Father" - REV. 1/7/90 - ACT ONE 13. 8C CONTINUED: (2) GEORDI ... And then some. (quickly realizing his error, to Kurn) No offense meant, sir... KURN None taken. I never kill anyone at the supper table, Mister La Forge. Kurn has struggled the best he can with his dinner, cannot eat any more... BEVERLY Don't you like it, Commander? KURN (trying to be tactful) Our food has much more... taste to it. While I'm sure this is... well prepared, it is far too bland for the stomach of a Klingon... And the natural glance in the room has to be at Worf who is enjoying his meal when he hears Kurn say this... GEORDI It seems to agree with Worf. KURN Yes. And Worf feels extremely self-conscious, promptly losing his appetite... and Kurn glances at him out of the corner of his eye to put a little punctuation into the moment... 9 thru OMITTED 10 11 INT. KURN'S QUARTERS Kurn is standing near the table, looking over some information on a computer terminal. The door CHIMES. KURN Enter. STAR TREK: "Sins of the Father" - 1/5/90 - ACT ONE 14. 11 CONTINUED: He turns around and the door opens, revealing Worf standing in the corridor. Worf does not enter right away. KURN 'el (Enter.) Worf steps into the room, stands stiffly at attention. WORF Permission to speak freely, sir? KURN For what purpose? WORF I have questions I wish to pose. Kurn looks around his cabin with disdain and ignores Worf's request for the moment. KURN Are your quarters so... comfortable? WORF They serve me. KURN This entire ship seems built for... comfort, relaxation, being at ease. It is not the ship for a warrior... not the ship for a Klingon. Worf says nothing, and after a beat Kurn returns to Worf's request. KURN You cannot ask these questions within the boundaries of protocol? Worf is definitely agitated. Kurn's attitude is really getting under his skin. WORF They are... of a personal nature, sir. Kurn thinks for a second and then sits down. STAR TREK: "Sins of the Father" - 1/5/90 - ACT ONE 15. 11 CONTINUED: (2) KURN Permission granted. Pose your questions. Now we can see a little more of the fires that are burning within Worf. His entire demeanor now changes and he cannot prevent the anger he feels from rising to the surface. WORF I wish to know if I have given you offense. KURN I am not a human... if you had given offense, you would not need to ask. WORF Perhaps I have not performed my duties to your satisfaction? KURN I find you to be a capable Starfleet officer. A credit to your ship. WORF Yet you dishonor me at every opportunity. KURN Have I? I was not aware that being polite to a Starfleet officer would bring dishonor on him. WORF (very tight) I am a Klingon. Kurn looks at him almost with amusement. He decides to push a little harder. Kurn stands and casually turns away from Worf. KURN Really? (beat) Perhaps your blood has thinned in this environment. I simply don't want to... hurt you. STAR TREK: "Sins of the Father" - 1/5/90 - ACT ONE 16. 11 CONTINUED: (3) This too much. Worf explodes with rage. He snarls a roar of challenge and moves to Kurn, knocking over a chair and small table in the process. Kurn whirls, ready for anything, but brings Worf up short before they can actually exchange blows. KURN mev yap! (That is enough!) Worf stops, but it is a struggle. Kurn relaxes a bit, but is still ready in case Worf should move on him. Kurn looks over Worf with satisfaction... "that's more like it!" KURN So... your blood is not so thin after all. WORF I am Klingon... if you doubt it, a demonstration can be arranged. KURN That is the response of a Klingon. The response I would expect... from my... older brother. Push in on Worf's reaction to this news. FADE OUT. END OF ACT ONE STAR TREK: "Sins of the Father" - 1/5/90 - ACT TWO 17. ACT TWO FADE IN: 12 EXT. SPACE - THE ENTERPRISE (OPTICAL) The ship is cruising at impulse speed. 13 INT. KURN'S QUARTERS A short time later. Kurn is acting less like Worf's superior and more like his brother. But there is still tension between them. He goes to a window, looks out. He is thinking back over the early years of his life and we can see the shadows pass before his eyes. KURN I was barely a year old when you went to the Khitomer Outpost. The outpost was new... unfinished. You... our mother and father were not going to stay long. It was decided that I did not need to go. I was left with our father's friend, Lorgh, until you returned. (beat) You never did. WORF The Starfleet officer that rescued me was told by the Klingon High Command that I had no living relatives. KURN They assumed I was killed with the family at Khitomer. Moving to Worf... KURN Lorgh had no sons. He took me into his family. It was not until I had reached the Age of Ascension that I was told the truth. WORF So you asked to serve aboard the Enterprise... to watch me. STAR TREK: "Sins of the Father" - 1/5/90 - ACT TWO 18. 13 CONTINUED: KURN It was an excellent opportunity to find out what kind of Klingon you were... or if you were Klingon at all. WORF Your deception offends me, brother. KURN (pleased) It should. But it was required. WORF To satisfy your curiosity. KURN No. Much more. You are the eldest son. The challenge is yours to make. WORF Challenge... ? KURN The Klingon High Council has judged our father a traitor to the empire. On Worf's reaction... 14 INT. READY ROOM Picard and Worf. Picard has just learned the news, reacts with concern. PICARD What are the allegations, Worf? WORF My father is accused of aiding and abetting the Romulan attack on the Khitomer outpost. PICARD The attack in which he himself was killed... ? WORF It is a lie. STAR TREK: "Sins of the Father" - 1/5/90 - ACT TWO 19. 14 CONTINUED: PICARD But why now... after twenty years? WORF I do not know, Captain. I will hear the evidence when I arrive. The charge has been made by Duras, the son of my father's greatest rival. (beat) Our family name will be disgraced for seven generations. It is my responsibility to clear his name or answer for his crimes. PICARD Answer for them? WORF The family of a Klingon warrior is responsible for his actions and he is responsible for theirs. If I fail in my challenge, I will be executed. (beat) Will you grant my leave, Captain? A long beat as Picard mulls this with great concern. Then... PICARD No. Worf reacts. PICARD If I understand correctly, a Starfleet officer, a respected member of my crew could stand accused of a capital crime. Your actions in this matter reflect on this ship and the Federation. (beat, personal) Therefore, it seems only appropriate for your captain to be at your side as you make your challenge, Lieutenant. I'm sure you would do no less for me. On Worf's reaction... STAR TREK: "Sins of the Father" - 1/5/90 - ACT TWO 20. 15 INT. MAIN BRIDGE Kurn, Riker, Troi in Command. Data, and Wes at their stations. Picard and Worf ENTER from Ready Room. PICARD Commander Kurn... KURN Sir. PICARD We are changing course. Set coordinates for the First City of the Klingon Imperial Empire. Kurn reacts with surprise. He had not expected the Enterprise itself to change course. Kurn looks over at Worf and we can see respect forming in their relationship. KURN Mister Crusher... WES (instantly) Sir! KURN Lay in a course for the Klingon System. Bearing one-four-five by two-four-oh... WES (overlapping Kurn) Ready sir! Kurn is pleased. Quite calmly -- KURN Execute. 16 EXT. SPACE - THE ENTERPRISE (OPTICAL) The ship makes a sweeping turn and accelerates to warp speed. 17 INT. TEN-FORWARD (OPTICAL) Worf is seated by the forward windows, lost in thought. Kurn ENTERS, sees Worf and then goes over to him. STAR TREK: "Sins of the Father" - REV. 1/8/90 - ACT TWO 21. 17 CONTINUED: KURN We arrive within the hour. WORF Yes. KURN The Council will receive you at high sun in the Great Hall of-- WORF I know the procedures of the challenge. Kurn nods. He's beginning to look at Worf in a different way... as his older brother rather than as a Klingon in a Starfleet uniform. KURN You'll need a cha'DIch to defend you. While you are accused, you will not be allowed combat. Pause a beat as Kurn decides to take the next step. KURN I would be honored if you chose me. Worf looks at Kurn and can see that his brother's opinion of him has started to change. Worf himself is starting to think of this as their fight rather than just his. WORF (formally) I ask you to stand with me... to be my cha'DIch. KURN jIlajneS. ghIj qet jaghmeyjaj. (I accept. May your enemies run with fear.) The two sons of Mogh -- together, we shall restore the family honor. WORF No. For the proceeding, you will not reveal your true father. STAR TREK: "Sins of the Father" - REV. 1/8/90 - ACT TWO 22. 17 CONTINUED: (2) KURN (reacts) I must... WORF (firm) You will not. KURN (understands) Because it would mean my death as well if you fail. A Klingon's honor means more than his life. Perhaps your human values cloud your judgment. I insist... WORF On this ship, you are my commander. And I obey. In the council chamber, you are my cha'DIch. You do not insist. You obey. And now the reversal of roles is complete. KURN (with due respect) Yes, brother. 18 EXT. SPACE - THE ENTERPRISE AND KLINGON HOME WORLD (OPTICAL) The ship enters orbit. The planet has a single large land mass, and the world is dominated by a vast ocean. The tilt of the planet's axis has created wild seasonal changes and the atmosphere should appear turbulent and showing extremes of both warm and frigid weather on the planet. 19 EXT. THE FIRST CITY (MATTE SHOT) A large, sprawling city that was once an enormous fortress. The architecture should reflect a soldier's sensibilities for ease of defense and Spartan decoration. The city is dominated by the Great Hall. CUT TO: STAR TREK: "Sins of the Father" - REV. 1/7/90 - ACT TWO 23. 20 INT. ANTE ROOM (OPTICAL) A spare, simple room adjacent to the Great Hall, which can be entered through an ornate door. There is a table, chairs and a few decorations. It is basically a waiting room for the Great Hall. Picard, Troi, Riker, Worf, and Kurn BEAM IN. Taking in their surroundings -- RIKER (quietly to Picard) There was a time... when just standing here would have been a death sentence for us. WORF Captain, I am honored that you... Commander Riker... Counselor Troi... have chosen to accompany me. Your presence will surely impress the council. PICARD We're here as long as you need us, Worf. WORF Once I make the challenge, I assume the sins of my father. I will be in disgrace until his innocence is proven. I would request that you not remain for the entire proceeding. TROI You will never be a disgrace to us, Worf. KURN It is a matter of personal honor to my brother. PICARD I understand. (to Kurn) You will advise us when it is appropriate to depart. WORF (somber) It will be clear. STAR TREK: "Sins of the Father" - 1/5/90 - ACT TWO 24. 20 CONTINUED: He moves toward door and they follow him to... 21 INT. GREAT HALL Worf, Kurn, Picard, Troi, Riker, ENTER. The hall is a parliament/supreme court/public square. One end of the room is dominated by a raised dais with chairs for the High Council. There is a large, open floor area and the floor itself is emblazoned with the triangular Klingon insignia. There should be small partitions to suggest that the room is used for a variety of functions. Several KLINGON SUPERNUMERARIES are present. There is a general buzz of noise which builds as our characters enter the hall. The COUNCIL MEMBERS, including K'MPEC and DURAS ENTER the Hall and take their seats at the dais. The council members are mostly older Klingons, with one or two young upstarts. Worf and Kurn lead the way to the center of the room. Worf stands squarely in the center of the insignia on the floor, Kurn at his side, the others behind them. The crowd moves back and stands at the edges of the insignia. A hushed silence falls over the hall. People glare at Worf and the others from the Enterprise. Worf faces the council squarely. WORF I am Worf, son of Mogh. I have come to challenge the lies that have been spoken of my father. A buzz goes around the room as we... 22 OMITTED FADE OUT. END OF ACT TWO STAR TREK: "Sins of the Father" - 1/5/90 - ACT THREE 25. ACT THREE FADE IN: 22A EXT. KLINGON FIRST CITY - MATTE SHOT - DAY 23 INT. GREAT HALL As before. Worf still facing the council. K'mpec now stands and addresses Worf. K'MPEC Worf, son of Mogh, you have challenged the judgment of the council. Are you prepared to answer for this if you fail? WORF With my life, K'mpec. K'mpec now turns his attention to Kurn. K'MPEC Why do you come before us, Commander? KURN I am Kurn, son of... Lorgh. I will stand by Worf's side. I am cha'DIch. K'mpec nods to a GUARD, who steps forward and hands Kurn a ceremonial scabbard and short sword which Kurn will wear from now on. Duras stands and walks down to Worf and Kurn. His attitude is hostile. DURAS (to Worf) You claim a birthright you have forsaken. WORF I have not forsaken my heritage. I am Klingon. My heart is of this world... my blood is as yours. DURAS Yet you come to us wearing a child's uniform... (looks at Picard) And you bring outsiders to our hall. STAR TREK: "Sins of the Father" - 1/5/90 - ACT THREE 26. 23 CONTINUED: Picard steps forward. PICARD I am here at my own request. (moving forward, to council) I am Captain Picard of the Enterprise. I extend greetings on behalf of the Federation. DURAS Your words have no meaning here. K'mpec raises a hand, silencing Duras, and waits for Picard to continue. PICARD Lieutenant Worf has served under my command with distinction. He has earned my admiration and my respect. It is my greatest wish that this council in its wisdom will clear his family name and return him to duty. K'MPEC (nods with satisfaction) The trust of a commanding officer is admirable... the council has noted it. Picard glances at Worf, then moves off to the side with Troi and Riker. That done, K'mpec turns his attention back to Worf. K'MPEC Speak the accusation. Duras moves forward again. DURAS (to council) For many turns, the truth about Khitomer has lain dormant... unknown. Now the truth is revealed. The traitor, Mogh, sent the defense access code to the Romulan patrol ships and allowed them to destroy the outpost. (MORE) STAR TREK: "Sins of the Father" - REV. 1/12/90 - ACT THREE 27. 23 CONTINUED: (2) DURAS (Cont'd) (to crowd) Thousands died on Khitomer... my father died on Khitomer. Their deaths must be avenged! The crowd grumbles for a moment. 23A OMITTED 23B ANGLE ON DURAS AND WORF DURAS (steps close to Worf) Your father was a traitor! By posing this challenge, you are a traitor! Duras slaps Worf hard. 23C PICARD, RIKER, TROI react. 23D ANGLE ON DURAS AND WORF Duras grabs the sash on Worf's chest. DURAS You will not wear the emblems of our people! Duras rips the sash from Worf as the crowd look on. STAR TREK: "Sins of the Father" - REV. 1/7/90 - ACT THREE 28. 24 PICARD - CLOSEUP (OPTICAL) His eyes deeply troubled for his officer... knows it is time to leave. PICARD (activates com badge) Picard to Enterprise. Three to beam up. The away team BEAMS OUT. 25 OMITTED 26 INT. MAIN BRIDGE Picard, Riker, and Troi ENTER from turbolift. PICARD (quietly) Mister Data... I want you to find out everything you can about the destruction of the Khitomer outpost. Cross reference with Romulan tactics and strategic information on the region. Request access to the Klingon central information net. (on the move to Ready Room) Computer. Presentation overview of Klingon custom and law pertaining to familial accountability. COMPUTER VOICE Acknowledged. PICARD In my Ready Room. Picard heads toward his Ready Room, and Data moves to one of the Aft Science Stations. CUT TO: 27 INT. GREAT HALL As before. Duras and Worf still face each other in the Hall. Worf's sash lies on the ground in tatters. STAR TREK: "Sins of the Father" - REV. 1/12/90 - ACT THREE 29. 27 CONTINUED: DURAS You are a fool. Your challenge will only result in a fool's death. WORF (coolly) It is a good day to die, Duras... and the day is not yet over. Duras returns to his place, and K'mpec stands. K'MPEC The council stands in recess. We will return for the mek'ba, when the evidence will be presented. Qapla' (Success! -- a traditional Klingon parting) The crowd begins to break up and the council adjourns. Duras and Worf scowl at each other, but they move off in different directions. 28 ON WORF AND KURN They move off to one side of the hall where they can plan their strategy, but before they can speak, K'mpec approaches them. Worf and Kurn straighten up at the sight of him. K'MPEC (to Worf) I would speak with you alone. A glance passes between Worf and Kurn, but one does not turn down such a request by a member of the council. Kurn bows his head briefly and moves a few feet away to give them privacy. 29 ON WORF AND K'MPEC as they move into a small cul de sac in the hall. STAR TREK: "Sins of the Father" - REV. 1/12/90 - ACT THREE 30. 30 ON KURN he is watching for any move against him or Worf. A KLINGON WOMAN CLERK is routinely distributing PADDs to members of the council... laying them on desks, etc. As she comes to Kurn, she puts it on his desk and gives him a special look that points him toward the PADD, then moves off. He discovers a note underneath it... He reads it... glances at Worf... then heads out of the hall. 31 ON WORF AND K'MPEC As before. K'MPEC You should not have brought the challenge... there was no risk to you... what does it matter... ? WORF (not understanding) I am Klingon... K'MPEC Of that I have no question. But your life in the Federation would not be affected by this judgment. WORF My father... K'MPEC Is dead. He died long ago. (beat) I knew your father, served with him... this is not the way I wanted to remember him. But we must let the past be and protect what we have now. Worf gives him an enigmatic look. STAR TREK: "Sins of the Father" - REV. 1/12/90 - ACT THREE 31. 31 CONTINUED: K'MPEC If you leave before the mek'ba... no shame will fall on you. Return to your ship... go back to your life. The challenge will be forgotten. WORF Why would you ask me to lay aside the honor of my father... my family... Are these the words of the council... ? K'mpec considers Worf. He is angry, but there is a trace of sadness in his voice. K'MPEC (draws himself up) I will not be questioned by you! Leave now or you too will be condemned as a traitor. K'mpec leaves. Worf reacts, wonders what the hell that was about... CUT TO: 32 thru OMITTED 36 36A INT. MAIN BRIDGE (FORMERLY SCENE 40) Data and Riker are at one of the Aft Science Stations looking at INFORMATION scrolling across one of the screens. Geordi stands nearby, watching their work with curiosity. DATA The Klingon council is refusing to allow us access to their information net, Commander. Riker lets out a breath in irritation. STAR TREK: "Sins of the Father" - REV. 1/7/90 - ACT THREE 32. 36A CONTINUED: RIKER On what basis? DATA Orders of a member of the council. RIKER Duras... 36B ANGLE - GEORDI overhears... begins to get an idea and moves quietly over to another station to begin work. 36C BACK TO DATA AND RIKER RIKER What Federation starship was closest to Khitomer at the time of the attack? DATA The USS Intrepid, sir. They were the first ship on the scene. RIKER Contact Starfleet, request all logs of the Intrepid... (to Com) Riker to Doctor Crusher. BEVERLY Crusher here... RIKER Doctor, I want you to look over the medical records of all rescue vessels that responded to the Khitomer massacre... see if there is any information on the aftermath that could help us. STAR TREK: "Sins of the Father" - REV. 1/7/90 - ACT THREE 33. 36C CONTINUED: BEVERLY'S COM VOICE Understood. GEORDI Uh, Commander, could I see you a moment... Riker moves to Geordi's station... GEORDI (lying) I was just making a few routine entries... and somehow, by accident, I just happened to... access the Klingon information net. Data and Riker react. DATA How could you obtain access without the proper authorization codes? RIKER I don't think we want to know, Data. As he exchanges a glance with Geordi, they begin investigation of the files. CUT TO: 37 INT. PEDESTRIAN TUNNEL Kurn is waiting... after a few seconds, Duras approaches him in the tunnel. Kurn prepares for an attack. KURN I should have known... come then Duras. Worf was right... it is a good day to die. DURAS That time has not yet come. (beat, then conspiratorially) It does not have to come for many turns. I know who you are, Kurn... son of Mogh. STAR TREK: "Sins of the Father" - REV. 1/8/90 - ACT THREE 34. 37 CONTINUED: KURN (taken off-guard) What? DURAS A strange decision to serve as his cha'DIch. I was curious to know why. Nothing can be hidden from me, Kurn. (beat) It was a wise choice to hide your family name -- do not err by embracing it again... for you only embrace death. KURN We will see. DURAS Worf has made his choice and he will die for it. But you are still safe. Let him stand alone. He is no longer your brother... he is not one of us. I promise you no one will learn of your family line. You'll have your rank... maybe even a command of your own. KURN He is my brother. I will not betray him! We can see the rage boil up in Duras, but he just manages to keep control of it. DURAS Then you will die for him. Duras turns quickly and leaves. Kurn watches him go... looks around the empty tunnel and is about to leave when TWO KLINGON ASSASSINS suddenly attack him from behind. Kurn is caught off guard, but he manages to shake off the first attack. The assassins are wielding vicious-looking, yet ornate weapons. Kurn pulls his own knife and tries to keep them at bay... the fight is brutal and no quarter will be given by either side. STAR TREK: "Sins of the Father" - 1/5/90 - ACT THREE 35. 37 CONTINUED: (2) Kurn manages to disable one of the assassins, but the other slips under his guard and drives the weapon deep into Kurn's side. Kurn falls to the ground. The assassin twists the weapon viciously and then takes his companion and flees. Kurn is seriously injured and passes out. Linger on his prone form... FADE OUT. END OF ACT THREE STAR TREK: "Sins of the Father" - REV. 1/8/90 - ACT FOUR 36. ACT FOUR FADE IN: 38 EXT. SPACE - THE ENTERPRISE (OPTICAL) The ship is cruising in orbit. 39 INT. SICKBAY Kurn is lying on the operating table, post op. A MEDICAL SUPERNUMERARY is checking on him using the surgical clamshell. Beverly moves to Worf nearby. Worf's spirits are beginning to sag. BEVERLY What kind of vicious weapon makes a wound like that... ? WORF A kut'luch... the ceremonial weapon of an assassin. BEVERLY Fortunately, his metabolic recovery is phenomenal... he'll be all right... WORF It does not matter. We should have let him die. Beverly reacts with shock, but Worf ignores her look. WORF Now that Duras knows his bloodline, we will both be executed. BEVERLY You sound like you've already lost, Worf. Worf just looks at her, that's how he feels, and EXITS. 40 INT. MAIN BRIDGE (OPTICAL) Data, Riker and Geordi are still looking through the Klingon computer files at two science stations. Data calls Riker to join him... STAR TREK: "Sins of the Father" - REV. 1/8/90 - ACT FOUR 37. 40 CONTINUED: DATA Commander, I have discovered the basis of the charges against Worf's father. They move to look over his shoulder... DATA Apparently the Klingons recently captured a Romulan ship with logs that provided new information on the Khitomer attack. They clearly indicate a transmission from the outpost to the Romulans moments before the shields dropped. GEORDI From Worf's father? DATA (calling something up) It does correspond to Mogh's personal security code. Riker and Geordi frown. RIKER How can we be sure these records haven't been falsified? GEORDI We can cross check them against the Intrepid's sensor logs... DATA (operating controls) I will try... but the Intrepid was at the edge of sensor range during the attack and we cannot be sure if the scans are complete. Data works the console and the screen shows the resulting information. GEORDI Looks like a pretty good match-up, Data... INTERCUT: STAR TREK: "Sins of the Father" - REV. 1/10/90 - ACT FOUR 38. 40A THE MONITOR (OPTICAL) shows a split screen of parallel lines scrolling with various coded signals displayed (Okudagrams). Both sides match exactly. DATA Both the Intrepid and Romulan logs show a series of distress signals from Khitomer... When gaps appear on the left split screen... RIKER What happens here... GEORDI Gaps in the Intrepid logs, missing information because of the range... Data pauses the scroll. DATA This is where Mogh's alleged transmission should be. RIKER (frowns) Right in the middle of a gap. GEORDI Wait a second, Data. Back up. Geordi leans in and presses a few panels... GEORDI Look at this... just before the Intrepid gap begins, the timebase of both files are in perfect sync... but look at the signals just after the shields dropped. Now on the monitor, the split screens clearly don't match. DATA They are no longer synchronous. GEORDI Commander, somebody's been rewriting history. STAR TREK: "Sins of the Father" - REV. 1/8/90 - ACT FOUR 39. 40A CONTINUED: Off Riker's reaction...... 41 thru OMITTED 44 45 INT. READY ROOM Picard and Worf. Picard is quite animated. PICARD I will not pretend to fully understand the nuances of your world's law or culture, Mister Worf. But I do understand when somebody is trying to hide something... WORF (considering this) K'mpec urged me to drop my challenge, abandon my family honor... it was impossible to believe I was hearing a Klingon speak... PICARD Obviously, they did not expect and never wanted this challenge... you're getting close to something, Lieutenant... something they care a great deal about protecting... WORF If it is true, it is not just Duras but the High Council itself that is my enemy. (beat) Captain, I must choose a new cha'DIch. I would like your permission to ask a member of the crew. PICARD Of course, Lieutenant. Ask whomever you wish. Worf hesitates, not sure what Picard's reaction will be. Picard waits for him to go on. STAR TREK: "Sins of the Father" - REV. 1/8/90 - ACT FOUR 39A. 45 CONTINUED: WORF Sir, I would ask that you stand with me. STAR TREK: "Sins of the Father" - REV. 1/8/90 - ACT FOUR 40. 45 CONTINUED: (2) Picard reacts, very surprised. WORF (quickly) You may refuse... with no dishonor. PICARD I appreciate the gesture, Lieutenant. But I know there are stronger, younger men from which to choose... This is a difficult moment for Worf. He must actually voice some of his inner feelings and motivations, and it doesn't come easily. WORF A Klingon warrior knows that brute strength is not the most important asset in a fight. I have served under you in many conflicts... and know you to be a shrewd and forceful opponent. I can think of no one I would rather have at my side. Picard is moved by this expression of admiration by his officer. There is a brief pause. Picard walks over to Worf, looks him in the eye. PICARD (perfectly pronounced) jIlajneS. ghIj qet jaghmeyjaj. I accept. Worf straightens up and his face again hardens with determination. 46 INT. GREAT HALL Duras is standing in a cul de sac, talking with the two assassins seen earlier. 47 NEW ANGLE (OPTICAL) The council ENTERS and sits in session. Picard and Worf BEAM IN. STAR TREK: "Sins of the Father" - REV. 1/8/90 - ACT FOUR 41. 47 CONTINUED: Duras reacts to them and moves away from the assassins. Worf moves forward to address the council and Duras. WORF (to Hall) My challenge will proceed. No threat, no treachery will stop it. (to Duras) Not even a trap for my cha'DIch set by a coward. Duras boils over and moves forward. K'MPEC (warning) Duras... DURAS I will not listen to this filth from the son of a traitor... Picard moves quickly in front of Worf in a defensive move and Duras is brought up short by this unexpected action. Duras is dumbfounded, and unsure just what the hell Picard thinks he's doing. DURAS Keep your place, Picard! PICARD This is my place. WORF He is now my cha'DIch. The crowd REACTS to this news. Duras is outraged. DURAS (to K'mpec) No! This cannot be allowed. (to Picard) This is not your world, human. You do not command here. PICARD I am not here to command. STAR TREK: "Sins of the Father" - REV. 1/8/90 - ACT FOUR 41A. 47 CONTINUED: (2) DURAS Then you must be ready to fight... something that Starfleet doesn't teach you. STAR TREK: "Sins of the Father" - REV. 1/7/90 - ACT FOUR 42. 47 CONTINUED: (2) Picard confronts Duras directly. He's not taking any crap from this guy. Picard's voice is low and deadly. PICARD You may test that assumption... at your convenience. Duras's eyes narrow and they stand toe to toe for a few seconds before K'mpec intervenes. K'MPEC The cha'DIch is accepted. DURAS No! Duras has stepped over the line and K'mpec's tone calls him on it. K'MPEC You challenge my authority? Duras looks chastened at K'mpec, backs down. Picard gives Worf a look: "How was that?" Worf nods his head in approval. K'mpec motions to the guard, who then brings over a ceremonial scabbard and sword identical to the one that was given to Kurn. K'MPEC Mek'ba will begin. 48 thru OMITTED 49 50 INT. MAIN BRIDGE Riker, Data, Wesley, Geordi... Beverly ENTERS... BEVERLY I've got something... She moves to a science station, sits at a position... calling up a file... Riker joins her... BEVERLY Worf was not the only survivor of the Khitomer massacre. RIKER Another child? STAR TREK: "Sins of the Father" - REV. 1/8/90 - ACT FOUR 43. 50 CONTINUED: BEVERLY No. A Klingon woman was found with Worf. The file is on the screen. RIKER Kahlest... who was she? BEVERLY I don't know. Just says here she had severe injuries... transferred to Starbase twenty-four for treatment. That's when she was separated from Worf. After she recovered, she returned home. RIKER We've got to find her if she's still alive. Data, scan the Klingon central net... see if there's any record of her... As Data goes to work... 51 thru OMITTED 52 53 INT. GREAT HALL Duras is at the apex of the insignia on the floor, addressing the entire hall. There is much noise and frequent interruptions by angry reactions. DURAS ... The Romulans lowered the outpost shields themselves. They were given the defense access code! The records clearly show the Romulan patrol ships receiving a personal transmission from Mogh just before they lowered the outpost shields. Mogh betrayed us. Four thousand Klingons died on Khitomer... and only the son of Mogh survived. STAR TREK: "Sins of the Father" - REV. 1/10/90 - ACT FOUR 44. 53A OMITTED 53B ON PICARD His com badge BEEPS. RIKER'S COM VOICE Riker to Captain Picard. PICARD (hits com badge) Stand by. Picard moves over to a cul de sac in the Hall. Duras continues his presentation in the b.g. DURAS The Khitomer commander noted in his log that Mogh had been acting suspiciously... that he was often away from his post for long periods of time. The commander found that Mogh was sending coded neutrino pulses to a sector within Romulan territory. A formal charge would have been made, but Mogh betrayed them and thousands were killed. Over the above -- PICARD (sotto voce) Go ahead, Number One. INTERCUT: 54 INT. MAIN BRIDGE Riker standing near science station. RIKER We've located another survivor of the Khitomer massacre, Captain... a woman who was found with Worf. Her name is Kahlest... she resides in the Old Quarter of the First City. PICARD Well done. Picard out. STAR TREK: "Sins of the Father" - REV. 1/8/90 - ACT FOUR 44A. 54A NEW ANGLE including Worf and the council. Duras is still going through his evidence. STAR TREK: "Sins of the Father" - REV. 1/8/90 - ACT FOUR 45. 54A CONTINUED: DURAS ... another witness has testified that Mogh often spoke of his admiration for the Romulans... Their culture... their women. Jeers from the crowd. PICARD K'mpec. K'mpec nods to Picard. PICARD May we have a... short recess? K'MPEC (nods) Len'mat. (recess) Picard and Worf move off to one side. PICARD Have you heard of a woman named Kahlest? WORF She was my ghojmoK... my nurse. PICARD Then it's possible she was an eyewitness to your father's activities at Khitomer... WORF But she died in the attack--- PICARD She survived. She's living in the Old Quarter. I'm going to find her. WORF It is too dangerous. You cannot go alone. STAR TREK: "Sins of the Father" - REV. 1/7/90 - ACT FOUR 46. 54A CONTINUED: (2) PICARD I am your cha'DIch. Worf knows he's right and nods in agreement. Picard EXITS. 55 ANGLE ON DURAS who is watching Worf and Picard from a hidden vantage. The two assassins stand behind Duras. As Duras leans over and whispers to the two assassins... FADE OUT. END OF ACT FOUR STAR TREK: "Sins of the Father" - 1/5/90 - ACT FIVE 47. ACT FIVE FADE IN: 56 EXT OLD CITY STREET A narrow, gloomy street in the oldest section of the capital city. A hooded figure in a cape moves down the street. The figure stops in front of a simple door, above which is a unique symbol (possibly a bigger representation of the emblem worn on Worf's sash?). 56A ON PICARD as he moves the hood enough so we can see him. He looks around and then sounds the door CHIME. After a few seconds, the door slides aside and Picard goes in. CUT TO: 57 INT. KLINGON HOME Picard ENTERS from the street. The home is small, yet comfortable. The furnishings should be in contrast to the martial decor of the rest of the planet... this is the home of an old woman with no need to proclaim power or strength. Picard looks around for a few seconds, lets his eyes adjust to the dimmer light. PICARD Kahlest? KAHLEST moves in the shadows. She does not step into the light yet, but answers from the safety of the darkness. KAHLEST What do you want? PICARD (toward direction of voice) Your help. KAHLEST No. Kahlest moves out of the shadows and we can see that she is quite old by Klingon standards. She barely looks at Picard as they talk. STAR TREK: "Sins of the Father" - REV. 1/8/90 - ACT FIVE 48. 57 CONTINUED: PICARD You don't even know what I want. KAHLEST You are cha'Dich. I know. PICARD Then you know that Worf's life is at stake. KAHLEST I cannot help. I am dead. (a whisper) A long time dead. PICARD Were you with Worf's father just before the attack on Khitomer? The the mention of Khitomer, Kahlest moves away from Picard and her face becomes even more tired and haggard. Her eyes are haunted. KAHLEST (vehemently) I am dead! (beat) My... life ended on Khitomer. I served a proud family... a strong house. All that is gone. PICARD Worf is not gone, Kahlest. The family you served needs you again. KAHLEST I cannot help. PICARD (quietly) Was his father a traitor? KAHLEST (defensively) No! (proudly) Mogh was loyal... to the emperor. Mogh suspected someone of plotting with the Romulans and followed them to Khitomer. Hope rising -- STAR TREK: "Sins of the Father" - REV. 1/8/90 - ACT FIVE 49. 57 CONTINUED: (2) PICARD Who? Who was the traitor? KAHLEST I do not know. Disappointment. A beat. Thinking... PICARD We know a signal was sent to the Romulans just before the attack... if you were with Mogh and his family... KAHLEST I was not. I was with Worf only. PICARD (sighs, concluding) Then, there is no way to prove Mogh's innocence, and Worf will die as the son of a traitor. KAHLEST You must leave, cha'DIch. I am dead. Picard cannot think of anything else, EXITS. 58 EXT. OLD CITY STREET Picard has left the house and is heading back up the street when the two assassins suddenly burst out of a recess in the wall and attack Picard. They are wielding the same ornate weapons seen earlier. Picard is not the easy mark they had taken him for, however. The captain is able to move out of the way before they can land a blow on him. He brings Assassin #1 to the ground by whipping off his cape and throwing it with a flourish in Assassin #1's face. Assassin #2 lunges forward with his weapon, but Picard has now pulled his own ceremonial sword and parries the thrust. Assassin #2 makes a hard thrust. Picard grabs the Klingon's hand and falls backward, yanking the Klingon off balance and bringing them both down. Picard holds his own sword steady and the Klingon falls directly on the point as he falls on top of Picard. STAR TREK: "Sins of the Father" - REV. 1/15/90 - ACT FIVE 50. 58 CONTINUED: Assassin #1 is back on his feet and prepares to kill Picard as he's trapped under the fallen Klingon... when he suddenly grimaces in pain... as he falls we can see a knife sticking out of his back. 59 ON KAHLEST standing in her doorway watching. 60 NEW ANGLE including Picard and the Klingons. The first assassin is lying on the ground with knife that Kahlest had thrown sticking out of his back. Picard gets up and rubs his shoulder. PICARD My appreciation, madam. KAHLEST You are brave, cha'DIch. Worf chose well. Lessons hold. She starts to return inside. Picard gets an idea. PICARD Kahlest, would they know who you are? Would they recognize you? She pauses. KAHLEST K'mpec would remember Kahlest. I caught his eye back then. I had many suitors once. He wanted seloh (sex) with me. He was too fat. PICARD Then, come back with me. They do not know how much you know. Perhaps it will shake loose the truth. STAR TREK: "Sins of the Father" - REV. 1/15/90 - ACT FIVE 51. 60 CONTINUED: Kahlest considers a beat... nods. KAHLEST I will come. As Picard begins to hope again... they move past the fallen Klingons and... 61 INT. GREAT HALL As before. Duras is finishing his presentation of evidence. DURAS The mek'ba is complete. The evidence is clear. I ask that the judgment stand... and that Worf be condemned as the son of a traitor to the Empire. The crowd growls in agreement. Worf shows no reaction. K'MPEC Worf, son of Mogh... K'mpec trails off as he notices something happening in the hall. 62 NEW ANGLE Someone is making their way through the crowd to the Council... Picard and Kahlest finally step forward. Worf reacts to the sight of the woman from his childhood. STAR TREK: "Sins of the Father" - REV. 1/8/90 - ACT FIVE 52. 62 CONTINUED: K'MPEC tam (Be quiet!) The crowd settles down and Picard and Kahlest move onto the insignia with Worf. K'mpec and Kahlest clearly know each other. Duras looks at K'mpec -- what the hell is this? K'mpec knows he has a problem. PICARD The mek'ba is not complete. I bring an eyewitness to the Khitomer massacre... with new evidence, K'mpec. K'mpec struggles a beat with how to handle this... KAHLEST Mogh was innocent. There is no way K'mpec is going to let her continue. He gruffly calls a recess. K'MPEC Len'mat. The crowd begins to buzz with confusion. The council breaks up and K'mpec indicates that Picard, Worf and Kahlest should follow him. Duras goes with them toward a side door. 63 INT. K'MPEC'S CHAMBERS A small, private room with a few decorations and furnishings. It is the Klingon version of a judge's chambers. K'mpec, Duras, Picard, Worf, and Kahlest ENTER. DURAS What is it you think you know, old woman? PICARD (to Kahlest) Do not answer. (to K'mpec) Rules of the mek'ba require that her evidence be presented in open council. STAR TREK: "Sins of the Father" - REV. 1/8/90 - ACT FIVE 52A. 63 CONTINUED: DURAS (to Kahlest) You will die before giving evidence. STAR TREK: "Sins of the Father" - REV. 1/15/90 - ACT FIVE 53. 63 CONTINUED: (2) KAHLEST (to K'mpec) You stand there while this patahk threatens an old woman? K'mpec realizes that things have gone too far and there is no alternative. K'MPEC (to Duras) Be silent, Duras. Would you kill old women to cover your dishonor? And Duras backs away... and Picard realizes he has the lead he needs. Pulling the string... PICARD Yes, Duras, it is your dishonor we are protecting here, isn't it? DURAS I have no reluctance to kill you, human. PICARD Are you prepared to hear her evidence in open council, Duras? Duras glares at K'mpec... who hates all of this. K'MPEC Obviously, we are not. Kahlest, you will go now. STAR TREK: "Sins of the Father" - REV. 1/8/90 - ACT FIVE 53A. 63 CONTINUED: (3) She acknowledges... at the door -- STAR TREK: "Sins of the Father" - REV. 1/8/90 - ACT FIVE 54. 63 CONTINUED: (4) K'MPEC It is good to see you again. KAHLEST You are still fat, K'mpec. And with a brief twinkle in her for Picard, she EXITS. K'mpec regards Worf with regret. Shakes his head. K'MPEC I asked you to leave, to let this judgment go unanswered... but you did not hear my words, and now it has come to this. WORF Why did you judge my father guilty when you knew he was not? K'MPEC (apologetic) Someone had to be blamed. The warriors who captured the Romulan ship had learned of the treachery. But only the council knew whose security code had been transmitted. Ja'rod, father of Duras. WORF (indicates Duras) This Ha'DIbaH (animal) should have been fed to the dogs! K'MPEC His family is powerful. If the truth were known, it would shatter the council... almost certainly plunge us into civil war. (looks at Worf) You were in Starfleet... we did not expect you to challenge the judgment. Nor did we know that there was another son of Mogh. STAR TREK: "Sins of the Father" - REV. 1/15/90 - ACT FIVE 55. 63 CONTINUED: (5) PICARD Worf's challenge is successful. His family honor must be restored, K'mpec. K'MPEC (regret) You don't understand. His challenge was defeated before he ever made it. You will not be allowed to present this evidence. The judgment will stand and you will be condemned... as will your brother. PICARD You admit the truth and still expect him to accept punishment. What does this say of an empire that holds honor so dear? K'MPEC The empire will not be destroyed for one family's honor. PICARD This is unacceptable, K'mpec. DURAS You have no say in this, cha'DIch! PICARD I speak now as the captain of the USS Enterprise and Lieutenant Worf's commanding officer. You will not execute a member of my crew, sir. Nor will I turn his brother over to you. K'MPEC You risk much. This is not the Federation, Picard. If you defy the orders of the High Council in an affair of the empire, the alliance with the Federation could fall to dust. STAR TREK: "Sins of the Father" - REV. 1/8/90 - ACT FIVE 56. 63 CONTINUED: (6) PICARD The alliance with the Federation is not based on lies! Protect your secrets if you must, but do not sacrifice these men. DURAS A true Klingon will not run from his judgment, Captain. No matter what you would have them do. K'MPEC What will you do with Kurn? Make him a Starfleet officer? He is a Klingon. When his tour aboard your ship is complete he will have no place to go. He would rather die. WORF I will die for the empire. PICARD Lieutenant... Worf gives him a hard look -- WORF The cha'DIch will be silent. Picard blinks, shuts up. WORF Allow my brother to return to his life. Only you need know his true bloodline. DURAS Not acceptable. His honor would demand revenge. He is too dangerous. WORF If you allow him to live, I will give you something that will serve your purpose far more than my death. I will accept... discommendation. K'mpec and Duras exchange a glance -- this is pretty good for them. STAR TREK: "Sins of the Father" - REV. 1/8/90 - ACT FIVE 57. 63 CONTINUED: (7) DURAS You would do this in open council? Worf acknowledges. K'MPEC It would be the same as admitting your father's guilt, Worf. WORF So be it. K'MPEC (with respect) Your heart is Klingon. It will be done. (to others) What has been said here will never be spoken of again. Worf steps to Duras... one last thing to do. WORF You... are the son of a traitor. And he slaps Duras just as hard as Duras hit him earlier. Duras burns with the shame of it. WORF I am ready. 64 INT. GREAT HALL (OPTICAL) Picard is waiting off to one side for something. The transporter EFFECT begins and Kurn beams in along with a MEDICAL SUPERNUMERARY who is helping him. Kurn is recovering from his injuries, but is still a little unsteady on his feet. KURN (to supernumerary) Enough! I will stand alone in the hall. Picard nods to the ensign and Kurn steps forward on his own. He and Picard move slowly toward the other end of the hall. STAR TREK: "Sins of the Father" - REV. 1/8/90 - ACT FIVE 58. 64 CONTINUED: KURN Why is he doing this? I was ready to die. PICARD Worf wants you to live... the name of your father must someday be cleared. He needs you alive... with your honor intact. KURN But to do this... PICARD There will be another day, Commander. Do not forget what he does here today... do not let your children forget. Kurn nods in agreement and they go through the crowd. 64A NEW ANGLE The council in session. Worf facing them as Picard and Kurn move to stand on either side of him. K'mpec faces Worf. WORF tlhIH ghIj jIHyoj. (I fear your judgment) K'MPEC biHnuch (Coward) The crowd REACTS with disgust. The council rises as one and turn their backs on Worf. The assembled crowd does the same. Worf turns to Kurn. WORF You must also... KURN (beat, then sotto voce) May you stand here again someday and roar over the fallen bodies of your enemies. WORF We will stand together... (sotto) ...brother. STAR TREK: "Sins of the Father" - REV. 1/9/90 - ACT FIVE 59. 64A CONTINUED: They share a moment of silent promise, then Kurn reluctantly turns his back on his brother. Picard moves to Worf and they walk side by side, heads held high through the crowd and EXIT. The double doors close behind with a LOUD CLANG as we... 65 OMITTED FADE OUT. END OF ACT FIVE THE END STAR TREK: THE NEXT GENERATION "Allegiance" #40273-166 Written by Richard Manning & Hans Beimler Directed by Rick Kolbe THE WRITING CREDITS MAY NOT BE FINAL AND SHOULD NOT BE USED FOR PUBLICITY OR ADVERTISING PURPOSES WITHOUT FIRST CHECKING WITH THE TELEVISION LEGAL DEPARTMENT. Copyright 1990 Paramount Pictures Corporation. All Rights Reserved. This script is not for publication or reproduction. No one is authorized to dispose of same. If lost or destroyed, please notify the Script Department. FINAL DRAFT JANUARY 15, 1990 STAR TREK: "Allegiance" - 1/15/90 - CAST STAR TREK: THE NEXT GENERATION "Allegiance" CAST PICARD FALSE PICARD RIKER HARO DATA THOLL BEVERLY ESOQQ TROI ALIEN #1 GEORDI ALIEN #2 WORF WESLEY Non-Speaking SUPERNUMERARIES STAR TREK: "Allegiance" 1/15/90 - SETS STAR TREK: THE NEXT GENERATION "Allegiance" SETS INTERIORS EXTERIORS USS ENTERPRISE USS ENTERPRISE MAIN BRIDGE READY ROOM SICKBAY TEN FORWARD CORRIDOR CAPTAIN'S QUARTERS RIKER'S QUARTERS DATA'S QUARTERS HOLDING BAY STAR TREK: "Allegiance" - REV. 1/22/90 - TEASER 1. STAR TREK: THE NEXT GENERATION "Allegiance" TEASER FADE IN: 1 EXT. SPACE - THE ENTERPRISE (STOCK OPTICAL) in orbit around a blue-green planet. PICARD (V.O.) Captain's log, Stardate 43714.1. We have finally succeeded in eradicating the plague on Cor Caroli Five, and are now preparing to leave orbit and proceed to our next mission -- 2 OMITTED 3 INT. CAPTAIN'S QUARTERS (OPTICAL) PICARD is relaxing on a recliner-type chair, reading an antique leather-bound book. An empty brandy snifter is nearby. CLASSICAL MUSIC plays softly. PICARD (V.O.) -- a rendezvous with the USS Hood to assist their terraforming efforts on Browder Four. After a moment, Picard lays the book over his chest and closes his eyes. Almost immediately, a body-length metallic slab MATERIALIZES directly over the sleeping Picard. The slab emits a BEAM which scans the captain from head to toe. Once the scan is complete, the beam stops and Picard DEMATERIALIZES in a new, ALIEN TRANSPORTER EFFECT. 4 INT. MAIN BRIDGE RIKER, WORF, DATA, and supernumeraries are at their posts. Data reacts to something on his console. STAR TREK: "Allegiance" - 1/15/90 - TEASER 2. 4 CONTINUED: DATA Commander, ship's sensors detect an abnormal energy reading in the captain's quarters. RIKER Type? DATA Undetermined. RIKER (to com) Riker to Captain Picard. No answer; after a beat, Riker turns to Worf who is already on the move toward the turbolift. WORF Security team to captain's quarters -- 5 INT. HOLDING BAY CLOSE on Picard as he slowly awakens and looks around -- and is stunned to see he's no longer on the Enterprise. Instead, he's in a large square, empty, windowless, rather featureless room. One door -- which is solidly shut. Each corner of the room contains a "bunk" (a small padded area slightly raised from floor level); in the center of the room is a "feeder" (a simple dispenser filled with what looks like hockey pucks). Picard's on one "bunk," another is vacant. The remaining two are occupied by unconscious -- or possibly dead -- humanoids: MITENA HARO (a "Bolian" -- young, female Starfleet cadet) and KOVA THOLL (a "Mizarian" -- middle-aged male civilian). 6 ON PICARD as he gets to his feet, taps his insignia: PICARD Picard to Enterprise. No response; not even the beep to indicate the communicator's working. Picard suspects it's futile, but tries again; STAR TREK: "Allegiance" - 1/15/90 - TEASER 3. 6 CONTINUED: PICARD (cont'd) Anyone receiving this transmission, please respond. Nothing. Picard scowls. 7 INT. CORRIDOR OUTSIDE CAPTAIN'S QUARTERS Worf and security team are at the captain's door. Worf touches the CHIME. No response. WORF Security override. Priority one. but before he can finish the door OPENS to reveal Picard -- actually a perfect replica of Picard -- staring back at Worf and the security team. FALSE PICARD Is something the matter, Lieutenant? On Worf's relieved and embarrassed expression: FADE OUT. END OF TEASER STAR TREK: "Allegiance" - REV. 1/19/90 - ACT ONE 4. ACT ONE FADE IN: 8 INT. HOLDING BAY Picard crosses to the motionless Haro, kneels at her side, touches her carotid artery to check for pulse. Haro stirs, awakens -- realizes someone's close, and panics, reflexively swinging an arm at the stranger. Picard's ready for it, blocks the blow by seizing Haro's wrist, whispers to calm her: PICARD It's all right. I'm not going to hurt you. HARO Who -- ? Haro slowly relaxes. Picard lets her go; she sits up, notices Picard's rank. HARO (cont'd) Captain... PICARD (nods) Jean-Luc Picard of the Enterprise. HARO Captain Picard! We've studied your missions at the Academy... Haro realizes she's being less than professional, straightens up: HARO (cont'd) Mitena Haro, first year cadet, Starfleet Academy. Picard nods acknowledgement, but before he can respond: THOLL (O.S.) Perhaps you can explain what this is all about. 9 NEW ANGLE Tholl is sitting up, regarding Picard with a mixture of suspicion and disdain. STAR TREK: "Allegiance" - REV. 1/22/90 - ACT ONE 5. 9 CONTINUED: PICARD Unfortunately, I can't, Mister... THOLL Tholl. Kova Tholl, of Mizar Two. PICARD Well, Mister Tholl, all I know is that I've been brought here against my will. (gestures) Wherever "here" is... HARO The same thing happened to me, sir. I was alone, studying... and I fainted. When I came to... (gestures) That was about three days ago. PICARD (to Tholl) And you, sir? THOLL I've been here twelve days, possibly more. I had been meditating privately -- and for no reason whatever, I lost consciousness. PICARD What can you tell me about our captors? THOLL Nothing. They've never shown themselves. STAR TREK: "Allegiance" - REV. 1/22/90 - ACT ONE 6. 10 ON PICARD as he moves around, inspecting the walls. Haro follows Picard, keeping a respectful distance. PICARD Four sleeping areas... that implies we'll be joined by another captive... Picard stops at the feeder, pulls out a "hockey puck" -- it's a dark, translucent disk of solid but malleable material, sort of a gigantic gumdrop. Not very appealing. Picard pulls off a small hunk, examines it. PICARD Food? THOLL (making a face) It's edible... but I wouldn't call it food. 11 NEW ANGLE as Picard moves to the door, examines it. Next to the door is a small panel flush with the wall -- a key panel? It appears to be -- it's divided into a grid of sub-panels, each with an alien symbol upon it. Picard presses one; it lights up briefly and makes a short, annoying BEEP SOUND. He tries another -- same result. THOLL I wouldn't touch that. PICARD Why not? STAR TREK: "Allegiance" - REV. 1/22/90 - ACT ONE 7. 11 CONTINUED: THOLL If it's the door lock, the combination is too complex to hit at random -- I tried it, and was punished. PICARD Punished -- how? THOLL Severe pain... some sort of energy beam. (shudders at the memory) I won't get near that panel again... Picard leaves the panel alone for the moment, inspects the door itself. Haro steps up -- and a little of her insecurity and fear show through: STAR TREK: "Allegiance" - REV. 1/22/90 - ACT ONE 8. 11 CONTINUED: (2) HARO The Enterprise will find us, won't it, sir? As soon as they discover you're missing, they'll start to search... Won't they? Picard realizes Haro needs a dose of morale-building: PICARD Of course they will. They'll do everything they can. In the meantime, we keep our heads... (wryly indicating the room) ... and enjoy the hospitality. Haro takes courage from Picard's words, manages a smile. HARO Yes, sir. 12 thru OMITTED 14 15 INT. MAIN BRIDGE (OPTICAL) Riker, Data, WESLEY, Worf, supernumeraries. False Picard ENTERS from the turbolift. WORF Sir, the Hood has arrived at the rendezvous point. They are expecting us in thirty-six hours. FALSE PICARD Thank you, Lieutenant. (a beat) Mister Data. The nearest pulsar is in the Lonka cluster, is it not? DATA Correct, sir. Everyone is a bit surprised: why has the captain brought this up? Unfortunately for them, he's keeping his reasons to himself. STAR TREK: "Allegiance" - REV. 1/17/90 - ACT ONE 8A. 15 CONTINUED: FALSE PICARD And what do we know about that pulsar? STAR TREK: "Allegiance" - REV. 1/17/90 - ACT ONE 9. 15 CONTINUED: (2) DATA A great deal, sir. It is a rotating neutron star of approximately four point three five six solar masses. False Picard considers this for a moment, then: FALSE PICARD Mister Crusher -- how long would it take us to get there? WESLEY At warp seven... thirty-four minutes. False Picard takes another moment to consider this. FALSE PICARD Mister Crusher -- make it so. WESLEY Sir? Wesley is a bit surprised. FALSE PICARD Set course for the Lonka pulsar. Warp two. WESLEY Aye, sir. Wesley hesitates before adding: WESLEY (cont'd) Sir, at warp two -- we'll arrive at the pulsar in thirty-one hours... FALSE PICARD Thank you, Ensign. Engage. The stars on the viewscreen STREAK into warp. Riker is slightly puzzled; he half-expects the captain to elaborate or explain the change in plans. After a beat, it's clear no explanation is forthcoming. RIKER Captain, are we delaying our rendezvous with the Hood? STAR TREK: "Allegiance" - REV. 1/17/90 - ACT ONE 9A. 15 CONTINUED: (3) FALSE PICARD We may have to. STAR TREK: "Allegiance" - REV. 1/18/90 - ACT ONE 10. 15 CONTINUED: (4) That's all False Picard offers. Riker takes it from there: RIKER Mister Worf, contact the Hood and inform them of our delay. WORF Aye, Commander. FALSE PICARD Belay that. (firm, not angry) There'll be no further communications off this ship without my prior authorization. False Picard turns to Riker. FALSE PICARD (cont'd) Commander -- I'd like a word with you. False Picard gets up and heads for the Ready Room. Riker is right behind. FALSE PICARD (cont'd) (to Data) Mister Data -- you have the bridge. DATA Aye, sir. False Picard and Riker EXIT. 15A ON WESLEY glancing over towards Data. WESLEY Data -- any guesses as to what this is all about? DATA I see no point in randomly selecting alternative motivations for the captain's actions considering that not enough information has been offered to make any one "guess" superior to another. STAR TREK: "Allegiance" - REV. 1/17/90 - ACT ONE 11. 15A CONTINUED: WESLEY In other words, you don't know either. Wesley returns his attention to his console. 15B INT. READY ROOM (OPTICAL) False Picard is leaning on his desk; Riker stands before him. FALSE PICARD Number One... You know I like to keep you well informed as to the nature of our missions. RIKER Yes, sir. FALSE PICARD And if I don't inform you -- there's a reason. Riker nods. FALSE PICARD (cont'd) I don't like keeping you in the dark, Commander... but for the next few days I won't be able to be as communicative as usual. It may make things difficult for you... RIKER Don't worry about me, sir. I can handle it. FALSE PICARD And the crew? RIKER You can count on us all, sir. False Picard eyes Riker carefully. Riker has complete faith in the captain. FALSE PICARD I appreciate that, Number One. CUT TO: STAR TREK: "Allegiance" - 1/15/90 - ACT ONE 12. 16 OMITTED 17 INT. HOLDING BAY Picard, Haro, Tholl. Picard is again examining the keypad next to the door. He thinks it over, starts pushing just one of the panels in a repeating sequence of numbers -- 2, 3, 5, 7, 11, 13. Haro looks on with interest, Tholl with ill-concealed skepticism. THOLL Picard -- what are you doing? PICARD Attempting to show our captors that we possess intelligence. THOLL You don't think they know that already? They can hear us talking... PICARD They may not realize we are communicating through language. HARO Captain Picard's letting them know that we comprehend mathematics... by tapping out the first six prime numbers. Tholl gives Haro a look -- "you think I'm stupid?" THOLL I know what he's doing. I'm trying to understand why. PICARD To get their attention. THOLL Oh, you may get their attention, all right... and they'll give you a dose of agony for using the keypad. PICARD I'll take the chance. It's imperative that we communicate with our abductors... find out what they want. STAR TREK: "Allegiance" - REV. 1/22/90 - ACT ONE 13. 17 CONTINUED: THOLL Obviously, they want us. PICARD Obviously. But why? What made our captors choose us? What makes us special? Picard looks from Tholl to Haro. Haro's at a loss. Her -- "special?" HARO I couldn't say, Captain. I'm certainly not special -- I'm just one cadet. PICARD (points out) You're a Bolian. There are very few Bolians in Starfleet. HARO I am one of three in the Academy. The other two have academic records much better than mine... PICARD What's your best area of study? HARO Impulse propulsion systems. I'm really good with field coils... PICARD Good enough to be useful to our abductors? HARO (it's a new thought) I don't know. Maybe. (a beat) But if they needed an engineer, sir, why didn't they take a "real" one? Why pick a Starfleet cadet? PICARD That, I can't answer. (a beat) The Bolians are maintaining an uneasy truce with the Moropa, are they not? STAR TREK: "Allegiance" - REV. 1/22/90 - ACT ONE 14. 17 CONTINUED: (2) HARO That's right. (looks around) But this doesn't look like Moropa technology... and, even assuming the Moropa wanted me, why would they want either of you? 18 NEW ANGLE as Picard turns to Tholl, who anticipates his question. THOLL I've never even heard of the Moropa. My race has no enemies. PICARD (surprised) None? In the last three hundred years of Mizarian history, your planet has been conquered six times! THOLL And we've survived by not resisting. Mizarians value peace above confrontation. PICARD Then you have no idea who might have done this. THOLL No. I don't know of anyone who bears malice toward my race. PICARD Or against you personally? THOLL You can't mean to suggest that someone with a personal grudge against me has gone to all this trouble... PICARD I'm not suggesting anything. I'm merely trying to come up with an explanation for your abduction. STAR TREK: "Allegiance" - REV. 1/22/90 - ACT ONE 15. 18 CONTINUED: THOLL I'm sorry, Picard -- I can't give you one. I am neither important enough to hold for ransom nor radical enough to be dangerous. I'm a simple public servant... assistant to the regent of Pozaron, our third-largest city. PICARD Nonetheless, Mister Tholl -- Picard stops as an odd SOUND catches everyone's attention. They turn to see: 19 ANGLE TO INCLUDE THE EMPTY BUNK (OPTICAL) as a FORM begins to APPEAR (ALIEN TRANSPORTER EFFECT). PICARD It would seem a new arrival is imminent... The FORM COALESCES -- revealing ESOQQ (of the Chalnoth race) -- a large, hairy, nasty-looking brute of an alien. Bad-tempered... and if his sharp teeth are any indication, a meat-eater. 20 NEW ANGLE as Esoqq looks around with surprise -- plainly he has no idea what's happening to him. He sees the three others in the room -- and his face contorts with rage. He draws a weapon -- a mean-looking dagger or blade of some sort. PICARD Stop! We mean you no harm... Picard spreads his hands in a gesture of peace. Esoqq warily takes a step back -- and assumes an attack posture. Picard motions for Tholl and Haro to stand absolutely still. On the tense standoff, we -- FADE OUT. END OF ACT ONE STAR TREK: "Allegiance" - REV. 1/22/90 - ACT TWO 16. ACT TWO FADE IN: 21 INT. HOLDING BAY Esoqq holds the knife threateningly. Tholl and Haro remain motionless as Picard tries to calm Esoqq: PICARD We are prisoners, like yourself! We are not the enemy! The command in Picard's voice is compelling. Gradually, Esoqq lowers the knife, eyes Picard darkly. ESOQQ Who has done this? PICARD We don't know. We were brought here the same way you were. Our captors refuse to show themselves. Esoqq, unsure whether to believe Picard or not, looks as if he may attack at any second. ESOQQ I don't trust you... PICARD You must trust us. We wish only to return to our worlds. Were you abducted from Chalna? ESOQQ (surprised) You know my planet? STAR TREK: "Allegiance" - REV. 1/23/90 - ACT TWO 17. 21 CONTINUED: PICARD Yes. I visited there twelve years ago. A long beat as it hangs in the balance. Then Esoqq makes up his mind, sheathes his knife. Haro closes her eyes, relieved. Picard merely nods acceptance. 22 INT. DATA'S QUARTERS The poker game is on; Riker, Geordi, Worf, Troi, and Data are seated at the table, enjoying the game as well as the drinks and snacks. Troi has the largest pile of chips. Riker tosses chips into the pot. RIKER Your five... and twenty more. GEORDI Ouch. TROI If it's too rich, fold. GEORDI I'm thinking, I'm thinking... WORF Think less, play more. Geordi looks at his cards again. Riker, looking at Geordi, makes a CLUCKING sound -- "chicken!" RIKER I say he folds. DATA I believe you are incorrect, Commander. STAR TREK: "Allegiance" - REV. 1/16/90 - ACT TWO 18. 22 CONTINUED: DATA (Cont'd) In situations where more than two players have asked for three cards and the minimum raise was ten, Geordi has stayed in the game seventy-three percent of the time. RIKER I still say he folds. They all look at Geordi: "Well?" Geordi puts in his chips. GEORDI I don't want to hurt my average. As everyone CHUCKLES, the CHIME SOUNDS. DATA Enter. The doors OPEN and the False Picard ENTERS. The CHUCKLES die down -- everyone's surprised to see the captain. FALSE PICARD Counselor, gentlemen. Forgive the intrusion... I was just passing by. DATA You are always welcome, Captain. FALSE PICARD Don't let me interrupt... please continue. The mood of the table has shifted somewhat with the captain's presence. The play continues but the frivolity and banter are muted. RIKER Bet is twenty-five to you, Lieutenant. Worf scowls at his cards, locks eyes with Riker. WORF You are bluffing. Riker's expression is unreadable. Worf gives in: STAR TREK: "Allegiance" - REV. 1/17/90 - ACT TWO 18A. 22 CONTINUED: (2) WORF (cont'd) So was I. Worf folds. Riker turns to Troi, but before he can speak: FALSE PICARD I was wondering, Mister La Forge... what's our engine efficiency status? GEORDI Operating at ninety-three percent, sir. False Picard considers this information, then: FALSE PICARD That's good, but I'd like to increase that efficiency to ninety-five percent. STAR TREK: "Allegiance" - REV. 1/16/90 - ACT TWO 19. 22 CONTINUED: (3) GEORDI I'll get on it right away, sir. FALSE PICARD It wasn't an order, Mister La Forge. You can get to it later. An awkward moment -- Geordi's not quite sure if the captain is kidding. FALSE PICARD (cont'd) I don't wish to disrupt your recreation. Geordi decides the captain is just being considerate. GEORDI No problem, sir. (regarding the game) Lady Luck left me long ago. Geordi tosses in his hand, EXITS. TROI Would you care to join us, sir? We have an opening. FALSE PICARD I'd rather just observe, if you don't mind. RIKER Of course not. (to Troi) Your bet, Counselor. All eyes go to Troi, who matches the bet. Data does also. RIKER Pair of threes. STAR TREK: "Allegiance" - REV. 1/16/90 - ACT TWO 20. 22 CONTINUED: (4) TROI Flush. Queen high. DATA That beats my three fours. As Troi takes the pile of chips: FALSE PICARD Well played, Counselor. (a beat) May I have a word with you? TROI Certainly, sir. As Worf shuffles and deals, Troi gets up and follows False Picard. FALSE PICARD Forgive me, gentlemen. I'll return your player in a moment. RIKER (in fun) Take your time, sir... she's won almost every hand. False Picard smiles and EXITS with Troi. 23 OMITTED 23A INT. CORRIDOR OUTSIDE DATA'S QUARTERS False Picard and Troi stand outside Data's quarters. STAR TREK: "Allegiance" - REV. 1/16/90 - ACT TWO 21. 23A CONTINUED: FALSE PICARD I wanted to ask you about the crew... how are they reacting to our sudden change in course? TROI I've sensed no unusual reaction, Captain. Troi is curious about the captain's question; there hardly seems a reason to be concerned. TROI (cont'd) After all -- such a change is hardly out of the ordinary. FALSE PICARD Aren't they curious or concerned as to why? TROI Curious, yes -- concerned, no. They trust you. FALSE PICARD And how far do you think that trust goes? That's an odd question from Picard. Troi is taken aback. TROI Sir? False Picard realizes he's pushing it. He backs off: STAR TREK: "Allegiance" - REV. 1/16/90 - ACT TWO 22. 23A CONTINUED: (2) FALSE PICARD I know... the crew has always had full confidence in me. (a beat) But if that were to change... TROI I'd inform you, sir... of course. False Picard nods, then prepares to exit. FALSE PICARD Thank you, Counselor. The captain EXITS. We hold on Counselor Troi, left to ponder her thoughts. CUT TO: 24 INT. HOLDING BAY Picard, Haro, Tholl, Esoqq. ESOQQ My given name is Esoqq. PICARD Has it a meaning? ESOQQ Yes... it means "fighter." THOLL (with disdain) I'll bet half the names in the Chalnoth language mean "fighter." STAR TREK: "Allegiance" - REV. 1/22/90 - ACT TWO 23. 24 CONTINUED: Esoqq looks disparagingly at Tholl. ESOQQ Mizarians. Your names all mean "surrender." THOLL (taking umbrage) We are a peaceful race, a race of thinkers -- ESOQQ A race of cowards. (looks to Haro) And you? I don't know your people. Haro doesn't know how to deal with Esoqq, looks nervously to Picard for guidance. Picard nods to her -- go ahead and answer. HARO I am Mitena Haro, of Bolarus Nine. (then adds) I'm a Bolian. THOLL (dry) Yes, that would follow. ESOQQ (re Haro) Who would want to imprison a child? HARO I'm not a "child" -- PICARD (intervenes) Esoqq -- I've been trying to determine if we have a common enemy... someone who'd have reason to confine us here. Esoqq gives it thought. STAR TREK: "Allegiance" - REV. 1/22/90 - ACT TWO 24. 24 CONTINUED: (2) ESOQQ There are Chalnoth who would kill me if they could... but kidnap? There is no reason. PICARD You have many enemies? ESOQQ None of consequence. I've slain all the ones who mattered. Haro can't help a GASP. Esoqq hears it. ESOQQ (cont'd) That shocks you, Bolian? HARO A little... Esoqq looks to Tholl -- "and you?" THOLL I'm not surprised... I've heard about your race. You're uncivilized -- you have no laws, no system of government -- ESOQQ The Chalnoth have no use for laws or governments! We are strong -- we obey no one. THOLL You live in anarchy, murdering one another -- that mentality may get us all killed. ESOQQ (dangerous) And you may be the first... Esoqq's heating up again. Picard steps in: PICARD Both of you -- this is getting us nowhere. STAR TREK: "Allegiance" - REV. 1/23/90 - ACT TWO 25-26. 24 CONTINUED: (3) THOLL Neither is asking us useless questions, Picard. (a thought) But if you must pursue the topic, answer this: who are your enemies? The Federation's in conflict with half the galaxy. Haro jumps to the Federation's defense: HARO That's not true -- Picard signals Haro to calm down and let Tholl speak. THOLL Isn't it? How long have you and the Romulans been adversaries? PICARD (unruffled) Quite a while, Mister Tholl. And I'm perfectly willing to entertain the hypothesis that our captors are Romulans. (a beat) But what would Romulans want with you? THOLL My brainpower, perhaps. It's well known that my species possesses superior intelligence... and I am considered among the smartest of my people. HARO (sotto; with disgust) And the least modest. STAR TREK: "Allegiance" - REV. 1/22/90 - ACT TWO 27. 24A OMITTED 25 ANGLE ON ESOQQ stepping up to one of the food dispensers and glaring at it. ESOQQ What is this? PICARD Food. Esoqq pulls a "hockey puck" from the dispenser. ESOQQ The only food? PICARD It would seem so. Esoqq tastes it -- spits it out, and whirls angrily upon Picard. ESOQQ Poison! THOLL (with a dread foreboding) Then there's nothing here for you to eat? ESOQQ (looking at Tholl) You. STAR TREK: "Allegiance" - REV. 1/16/90 - ACT TWO 28. 25 CONTINUED: THOLL (shrinking back) Don't even think that! Picard -- you won't let him... PICARD Esoqq -- how long can you go without food? ESOQQ Three days. Perhaps four. PICARD No longer? ESOQQ (with determination) No longer. Haro and Tholl are seriously worried. Picard is grim. Now the clock's ticking... 26 INT. SICKBAY False Picard is concluding the physical examination being conducted by Beverly. BEVERLY All tests indicate the same result -- you're in great shape. FALSE PICARD I've never felt better. BEVERLY I see. (a beat) Then why did you come in? Your annual physical wasn't due for another month. STAR TREK: "Allegiance" - REV. 1/16/90 - ACT TWO 29. 26 CONTINUED: FALSE PICARD You usually have to remind me, then badger me, and finally order me to report. For once, I thought I'd save you the trouble. Beverly doesn't quite buy it; her logical conclusion is that there is something wrong that Picard isn't telling her. With genuine concern and openness, Beverly looks False Picard in the eye: BEVERLY Jean-Luc -- be honest with your doctor. Were there any symptoms or warning signs you haven't told me about? FALSE PICARD (equally open) As far as I know, I'm in perfect health. Beverly accepts that, smiles. BEVERLY Well, then... return to your post. False Picard smiles back at Beverly's jest, prepares to exit. Casually: FALSE PICARD Will you dine with me tonight? Beverly takes this as no big deal -- just friends dining together. BEVERLY In Ten-Forward? FALSE PICARD How about my quarters? More intimate. This puts a different complexion on things. STAR TREK: "Allegiance" - REV. 1/22/90 - ACT TWO 30. 26 CONTINUED: (2) BEVERLY You're full of surprises today, Jean-Luc. False Picard heads for the door. FALSE PICARD I take that to be a yes. He EXITS. Hold on Beverly's expression -- the captain is definitely a complicated man. CUT TO: 27 INT. HOLDING BAY Picard, Haro, and Esoqq are examining the door and the inert locking panel next to it. Tholl looks on from his "bunk." THOLL Picard -- is it wise to attempt an escape? PICARD It's imperative. THOLL Why? So far, our captors haven't mistreated us. HARO We've been kidnapped, locked in a room -- you don't think that's mistreatment? THOLL They haven't hurt us, have they? I think we should just be patient until we find out what they want. PICARD We can no longer afford to be patient. If we don't act soon, Esoqq will starve... "... or eat us" is the unspoken alternative. STAR TREK: "Allegiance" - REV. 1/22/90 - ACT TWO 31. 27 CONTINUED: THOLL If we antagonize them, they may decide we're more trouble than we're worth... kill us, and go capture another four. PICARD I agree we're taking a risk. But I see no alternative. THOLL Well, I refuse to help. PICARD As you wish, Mister Tholl. (eyeing the wall) We must open this panel. ESOQQ (inspects it) Not very sturdy... Esoqq looks to Picard, who nods. PICARD Haro -- stand back. Esoqq hauls off and SMASHES the panel with one blow. 28 ON THE PANEL Behind the smashed panel is a mass of circuitry and wave guides. Haro inspects it. HARO The design is simple... crosscircuiting the door mechanism should be easy. Haro looks to Picard for instructions. Picard reflexively replies: PICARD Make it so. HARO Yes, sir. STAR TREK: "Allegiance" - REV. 1/22/90 - ACT TWO 32. 29 ON HARO (OPTICAL) making progress. HARO I think I've got it... The DOOR HUMS to life and very slowly opens about one inch. Then, quickly and suddenly, it closes -- and glowing BEAMS spring from a spot above the door and strike Picard, Haro, and Esoqq. Whatever the BEAMS are, they're intensely painful. Picard, Haro, and Esoqq drop to the ground. 30 NEW ANGLE Tholl, clear of the beams and unhurt, gets to his feet, concerned but helpless. THOLL I warned you... On the dazed Picard, Haro, and Esoqq -- FADE OUT. END OF ACT TWO STAR TREK: "Allegiance" - REV. 1/17/90 - ACT THREE 33. ACT THREE FADE IN: 31 INT. CAPTAIN'S QUARTERS (OPTICAL) False Picard, dressed in formal evening attire, sits across a table from Beverly -- looking lovelier than ever in her evening dress. Soft MUSIC and candlelight set the atmosphere. The captain and Beverly have finished their meal and are enjoying the last few sips of a dessert champagne. Beverly smiles. BEVERLY Out with it, Jean-Luc. FALSE PICARD Out with what? BEVERLY Whatever's been on your mind all evening long. FALSE PICARD Has it been that apparent? Beverly nods. False Picard smiles. FALSE PICARD (cont'd) You know me well, don't you? BEVERLY After all this time, I ought to. False Picard gazes at the candles for a beat, then turns to Beverly: FALSE PICARD I have been preoccupied. I've been thinking about us... and the choices I've made. BEVERLY We've both made choices... FALSE PICARD And I've been wondering if they've been the right ones. (a beat) Sometimes I feel we've allowed our positions to isolate us... STAR TREK: "Allegiance" - REV. 1/17/90 - ACT THREE 34. 31 CONTINUED: BEVERLY (nods understanding) Our positions necessitate a degree of professional detachment... FALSE PICARD But there's a danger in becoming too detached... in never allowing ourselves to get closer. BEVERLY (direct) Is that what you want, Jean-Luc? To get closer? FALSE PICARD You're a very attractive woman. BEVERLY And you're a very attractive man. But we both know it's not as simple as that. FALSE PICARD Would it be simpler if I weren't your commanding officer? BEVERLY Simpler, perhaps, but... that's not the only issue. (beat) Right now, I guess, I'm comfortable with our relationship the way it is. False Picard nods, understanding her position. FALSE PICARD Then I'll respect that. Beverly smiles -- "you're a good friend." False Picard smiles back. FALSE PICARD (cont'd) Would you care to dance? Beverly holds out her hand. BEVERLY All right. STAR TREK: "Allegiance" - REV. 1/17/90 - ACT THREE 34A. 32 NEW ANGLE (OPTICAL) as False Picard leads Beverly to the middle of the room. He takes Beverly in his arms and they begin a slow dance. After a beat: FALSE PICARD I don't know if I've ever told you... but I'm glad you're back on the Enterprise. I missed our... friendship. BEVERLY So did I... 33 CLOSER (OPTICAL) as the captain holds her near... His arm curls around hers... They get closer... cheek-to-cheek. As they dance, the mood changes -- the sexual tension becomes undeniable. False Picard's arm tightens around her waist... STAR TREK: "Allegiance" - REV. 1/17/90 - ACT THREE 35. 33 CONTINUED: They continue to dance... the captain and Beverly look at one another -- their lips almost touching... and then False Picard kisses her. Immediately, Beverly pulls away. BEVERLY Jean-Luc, if I didn't know you better... I'd think you were playing games with me. FALSE PICARD Are you sorry you came here tonight? BEVERLY I didn't say that. FALSE PICARD Good. Because I'm delighted you did. But perhaps we should call it a night. And with that, the captain leads Beverly to the door; it OPENS. Beverly is momentarily bewildered -- she didn't expect to be ushered out. FALSE PICARD Good night. She EXITS and the door CLOSES. 34 INT. CORRIDOR OUTSIDE CAPTAIN'S QUARTERS Beverly stands in the corridor, confused. For a moment she hesitates, considers ringing the bell... then changes her mind, EXITS down the corridor. STAR TREK: "Allegiance" - REV. 1/25/90 - ACT THREE 36. 35 INT. HOLDING BAY Picard, Haro, and Esoqq are back on their feet. Esoqq glares accusingly at Tholl, who's watching from several feet away. THOLL I warned you not to provoke our captors. The next beams might be lethal. Esoqq's kept staring at Tholl throughout. ESOQQ Not to you. You moved far from the door... THOLL Of course I did! Being stunned once was enough. ESOQQ You claim you were hit by the stun beam... before the rest of us arrived. You could be lying. Maybe our enemy is watching us... from inside. THOLL (indignant) You accuse me of collaborating with our abductors? ESOQQ Collaboration is what your species does best! STAR TREK: "Allegiance" - REV. 1/22/90 - ACT THREE 37. 35 CONTINUED: HARO (dawning suspicion) You did try to talk us out of attempting to escape... ESOQQ For all we know, you may be our captor. THOLL Impossible. I'm a Mizarian. My people are not agressive -- ESOQQ How can we be sure you're a Mizarian? What if you're an impostor? 36 ANGLE ON ESOQQ Getting steadily angrier, Esoqq advances toward Tholl. Even Haro is looking at Tholl with new eyes. Tholl's getting desperate: THOLL This is nonsense! What if you're an impostor? (to Picard and Haro) Esoqq was the last one to appear... and he is the only one with a weapon... ESOQQ Which I may still use... PICARD Tholl -- our captors have transporters and stun beams. I hardly think they'd try to keep us at bay with a knife. Tholl looks about for a new scapegoat: THOLL (re Haro) Then maybe she's an impostor. She could have triggered the stun beams deliberately. HARO I was hit, too... STAR TREK: "Allegiance" - REV. 1/22/90 - ACT THREE 37A. 36 CONTINUED: THOLL To forestall suspicion! You were very quick to volunteer... PICARD Tholl -- I asked her to open the door. STAR TREK: "Allegiance" - REV. 1/22/90 - ACT THREE 38. 36 CONTINUED: (2) THOLL You mean ordered her. You've been giving orders from the moment you got here... trying to make everyone do what you want. 37 ON PICARD frowning at Tholl's wild accusations. PICARD What I want is for all of us to escape. ESOQQ Why should we believe you? HARO Captain Picard's put his life at stake for others many times... the primitive culture on Mintaka Three, the Wogneer creatures in the Ordek Nebula... Haro looks to Picard to provide another example. PICARD Cor Caroli Five... HARO Right -- helping to cure the Phyrox Plague. ESOQQ And how do we know this is the heroic Captain Picard? We have no proof of his identity... Haro, despite herself, takes a second look at Picard: is it possible? Might he be a double? THOLL You've wasted our time with failed attempts to communicate with them or escape. Is that your task -- to keep us busy so we're off-guard? STAR TREK: "Allegiance" - REV. 1/17/90 - ACT THREE 39. 37 CONTINUED: ESOQQ What have you to say, Picard? Tholl, Esoqq, and even Haro are all staring at Picard, waiting for an answer. As Picard looks from one accusing face to another -- CUT TO: 38 thru OMITTED 39 39A EXT. SPACE - THE ENTERPRISE (STOCK OPTICAL) as it slows from warp to impulse. RIKER (V.O.) First officer's log, supplemental. Although we're still two hundred million kilometers from the Lonka pulsar, the Captain has ordered us to slow to one-half impulse. 40 INT. TEN-FORWARD Medium busy. Geordi and Worf are having a drink at the bar. RIKER (V.O.) He has offered no explanation. PAN TO Riker and Troi at a table, deep in conversation. RIKER I don't understand why we're going to this pulsar. And creeping up on it at half impulse makes even less sense... TROI The captain's given unusual orders before... RIKER I know... but this time it's different. He's different. I can't put my finger on it... but I'm worried. STAR TREK: "Allegiance" - REV. 1/17/90 - ACT THREE 40. 40 CONTINUED: Troi looks out the window for a moment; she isn't sure whether she should confide her worries. Finally: TROI The captain does seem... detached from his emotions. False Picard ENTERS, moves toward the bar, nods greeting to Geordi, Worf, and supernumeraries. FALSE PICARD Mister La Forge -- we are operating at ninety-six percent engine efficiency. Well done. GEORDI Thank you, sir. To the crowd -- FALSE PICARD When we arrive at the pulsar, I'm going to need everyone at their best. I know I can count on you all. False Picard looks to Worf for response. WORF Of course, Captain. FALSE PICARD Excellent. (to the bartender) An ale for me, please... (re: Geordi and Worf) ... and for my officers... (then, expansive) In fact, ales for everyone. 40A ANGLE ON RIKER AND TROI exchanging a look of incredulity. 40B ON THE BAR as the ales are delivered. False Picard picks up his drink, raises it high. STAR TREK: "Allegiance" - REV. 1/17/90 - ACT THREE 40A. 40B CONTINUED: FALSE PICARD Here's to the finest crew in Starfleet. The others raise their glasses, join the toast. False Picard takes a slug of ale. FALSE PICARD (cont'd) You know, back when I was in the Academy, we would follow each toast with a song. WORF An unusual tradition. FALSE PICARD Let's see if I can remember one... No one is quite sure how to react -- least of all when the captain starts SINGING: FALSE PICARD (cont'd) (Insert old English or Irish drinking song -- i.e., "Garry Owen") The captain SINGS a few bars, then motions for others to join in. A captain's suggestion is almost an order, so Worf, Geordi, and others start SINGING. 41 ANGLE ON RIKER AND TROI looking incredulously at the captain leading the SINGING. Geordi subtly detaches himself from the group at the bar, crosses to Riker. GEORDI Commander... What's the captain up to? Riker shakes his head in amazement. RIKER That's not the captain I know... FADE OUT. END OF ACT THREE STAR TREK: "Allegiance" - REV. 1/18/90 - ACT FOUR 41. ACT FOUR FADE IN: 42 INT. RIKER'S QUARTERS Starting on Data entering... reacts as he sees, and we reveal, Riker, Troi, Worf, Geordi and Beverly are gathered in Riker's living quarters. And implicitly we understand that this is a secret meeting, that the participants are uncomfortable being here... RIKER ... We have a mission that has no apparent purpose... by itself, I can accept that, all of us can... because the captain says it is important and we trust him... Then he runs the crew through efficiency drills for the first time in my tour of duty... but if he says we need them, we need them... because we trust the captain. But we also have a captain singing drinking songs with his men... GEORDI ... a captain who's come to the poker game for the first time... TROI And he was very odd with me afterwards... he asked me to warn him if the crew started to lose confidence in him... RIKER (to Troi) Any signs of mental stress or trauma? She shakes her head, no. BEVERLY He came in for a physical without a word from me... WORF Anything unusual, doctor? STAR TREK: "Allegiance" - REV. 1/18/90 - ACT FOUR 42. 42 CONTINUED: BEVERLY (shakes her head) He was in perfect health... every test result identical to his last physical... that's kind of unusual in itself, actually... RIKER It's almost as though he wanted to establish that there was nothing wrong with him. BEVERLY There was one... other... thing... A little embarrassed, off their looks -- BEVERLY He asked me to his cabin for dinner... I think he tried to seduce me. Reactions. RIKER Which brings us to a most serious possibility -- is there an outside influence at work here... TROI I can detect no evidence of telepathic coercion. DATA Commander, there is one other fact we have not considered. The abnormal energy reading in the captain's quarters that was never explained. More reactions. WORF It is not enough evidence to justify mutiny. RIKER Worf -- nobody has suggested removing the captain from command. STAR TREK: "Allegiance" - REV. 1/18/90 - ACT FOUR 42A. 42 CONTINUED: (2) WORF Nobody has yet. BEVERLY And nobody will -- unless we have solid evidence that the captain is unfit for duty. RIKER Right now, all we have are suspicions... not enough to act upon. The next move is his. On Riker's frustration: CUT TO: 43 thru OMITTED 45 45A INT. HOLDING BAY Tholl, Esoqq, and Haro are confronting Picard. THOLL Well, Picard? Prove to us you're not the enemy. PICARD I can't. STAR TREK: "Allegiance" - REV. 1/25/90 - ACT FOUR 43. 45A CONTINUED: The simplicity of that statement catches the group by surprise. Picard calmly elaborates: PICARD (cont'd) You're right, Tholl. Any of us could be the enemy. And there's no way to prove we aren't. A beat as Picard lets that sink in. Everyone's now looking suspiciously at everyone else. PICARD (cont'd) But unless we set aside our mutual fears and trust one another, we have no hope of escape. HARO (after a beat) Sir... how can we trust each other? THOLL She's right. There may be an enemy among us. PICARD And what if there is, Mister Tholl? Shall we continue accusing one another until hostility leads to violence? Shall we allow our suspicions to destroy us? 45B NEW ANGLE as Tholl, Esoqq, and Haro sheepishly weigh Picard's words. Picard doesn't wait for an answer, turns his attention to the hole in the wall. STAR TREK: "Allegiance" - REV. 1/18/90 - ACT FOUR 44. 45B CONTINUED: PICARD Let's see if we can deactivate that stun mechanism... Haro moves to Picard's side; they examine the circuitry within the bulkhead. 46 EXT. SPACE - THE ENTERPRISE (OPTICAL) in high orbit around the pulsar. 47 INT. MAIN BRIDGE (OPTICAL) False Picard, Riker, Data, Wesley, and Worf watch the pulsar which fills the viewscreen. WESLEY Orbiting the pulsar at fifty million kilometers, sir. DATA The pulsar is exactly as our records indicate. There appear to be no anomalies or significant changes since the last scan by a Federation ship. FALSE PICARD Helm -- take us in to twenty million kilometers. WESLEY Aye, sir. RIKER Mister Worf, divert enough power to the shields to offset the increased radiation and magnetic fields. DATA Sir, at twenty million kilometers our shields will be effective for only eighteen minutes -- FALSE PICARD (interrupts) Noted, Mister Data. STAR TREK: "Allegiance" - REV. 1/18/90 - ACT FOUR 44A. 47 CONTINUED: False Picard falls silent, stares at the viewscreen. Riker studies False Picard, makes up his mind: RIKER Captain, may I have a word with you? False Picard considers Riker's request for a moment, then moves toward the Ready Room. STAR TREK: "Allegiance" - REV. 1/18/90 - ACT FOUR 45. 47 CONTINUED: (2) FALSE PICARD You have the bridge, Mister Data. DATA Aye, sir. Riker looks over to Worf, then follows the captain into the Ready Room. 48 INT. READY ROOM False Picard waits for Riker to speak first. RIKER What is our mission? FALSE PICARD I'm under no obligation to tell you that. RIKER If you don't -- you force me to take command of this vessel. FALSE PICARD On what grounds? RIKER You're endangering this ship... for no reason. FALSE PICARD No reason you're aware of. RIKER That's not good enough. Your behavior has been erratic -- FALSE PICARD Erratic enough to justify mutiny? Do you honestly believe you have sufficient evidence to convince a board of inquiry? RIKER No, I don't. But I can't let you risk the lives of the crew. False Picard moves closer to Riker. STAR TREK: "Allegiance" - REV. 1/25/90 - ACT FOUR 46-46A. 48 CONTINUED: FALSE PICARD Number One... has it occurred to you that you might be the one with the problem? I realize you've been under stress, and I'm willing to let the matter drop if you report to Sickbay for a full examination. Otherwise... I'll have to relieve you from duty. (a beat) Think about it. False Picard EXITS. Riker stares after him impassively. CUT TO: 49 thru OMITTED 56 5656A INT. HOLDING BAY (OPTICAL) Picard and Haro examine the circuitry in the bulkhead as Esoqq looks on. Tholl also watches, from a few feet away. Picard indicates a thick cable inside the bulkhead. PICARD That would appear to be the power lead to the stun device. HARO It may be "live." Cutting it could be dangerous. Picard almost smiles, as if he knows something no one else does. PICARD I don't think it will be. Esoqq -- your knife, please. Picard holds out his hand. Esoqq warily moves away. PICARD (cont'd) You assured me you'd cooperate. Slowly, not liking it, Esoqq hands over his knife. STAR TREK: "Allegiance" - REV. 1/25/90 - ACT FOUR 47. 56A CONTINUED: Picard carefully sticks his hand through the opening and cuts the cable with Esoqq's knife. A sharp ARCING sound and a FLASH OF LIGHT -- that's all. Picard nods as if he expected exactly that, hands the knife back. Haro reaches into the bulkhead, manipulates circuitry as before. The door opens half an inch -- and stops. Haro's further efforts produce no results. HARO I may have overloaded it, sir. Picard crosses to the door, wedges his fingers into the crack. He, Haro, and Esoqq strain to pull the door open. It doesn't budge. PICARD Mister Tholl... THOLL Picard, I still think this is a mistake -- But Tholl crosses to the door, wordlessly adds his muscle to the effort. Still nothing. Then, without warning, the door slides open as if it had never been jammed. Everyone's surprised... and even more surprised to see what the open door reveals: 56B ON THE DOORWAY Behind the open door is a solid, blank wall. Tholl, Esoqq, and Haro are astounded, then turn accusingly to Picard: THOLL Now what? We're no better off than when we started! Picard betrays no reaction. CUT TO: STAR TREK: "Allegiance" - REV. 1/18/90 - ACT FOUR 48. 57 INT. MAIN BRIDGE (OPTICAL) As before. The pulsar's intense pulsating light bathes the area intermittently, adding to the tension. False Picard stands near his chair. Riker ENTERS from the Ready Room. False Picard watches Riker -- will Riker leave the bridge, or not? DATA Captain -- number four shield has failed. Increasing power to number three shield to compensate. FALSE PICARD Helm -- move us closer. Ten million kilometers. The looks on everyone's faces confirm that they don't believe the captain knows what he's doing. DATA Sir -- at that distance, the ship will not withstand the magnetic fields and radiation. FALSE PICARD Take us in, Mister Crusher. RIKER Belay that order. FALSE PICARD You're relieved of duty, Commander. (to Worf) Confine Mister Riker to his quarters. No one moves. A tense moment: all eyes are on Riker. 58 OMITTED FADE OUT. END OF ACT FOUR STAR TREK: "Allegiance" - REV. 1/18/90 - ACT FIVE 49. ACT FIVE FADE IN: 58A EXT. SPACE - THE ENTERPRISE (OPTICAL) orbiting the pulsar. 59 INT. MAIN BRIDGE As before. FALSE PICARD Mister Worf, I gave you an order. A moment of hesitation. Riker looks at Worf: RIKER Maintain your position, Lieutenant. False Picard turns to face Riker. A beat of tension as False Picard and Riker stare at one another and wonder who the crew will follow. FALSE PICARD You're destroying yourself and anyone who is foolish enough to listen to you. Starfleet will never sanction this. RIKER I'll take that chance. FALSE PICARD You're making a terrible mistake, Will. Listen to me... as your captain... as your friend... RIKER You've shown none of the concerns that Captain Picard would show... the safety of this ship, the welfare of its crew... False Picard stares at Riker, then: STAR TREK: "Allegiance" - REV. 1/19/90 - ACT FIVE 50. 59 CONTINUED: FALSE PICARD Mister Worf -- remove Commander Riker from the bridge. RIKER Mister Crusher -- take us away from the pulsar, heading one-eight-five mark three-two, full impulse. This is it -- the moment... Which way is the crew going to go? After a long beat, it's clear Worf isn't going to move. Wesley works his console. WESLEY Full impulse -- aye, Commander. It's clear the crew is on Riker's side. RIKER Engage. False Picard says nothing, merely stares at Riker and the bridge crew. They ignore him. CUT TO: 60 OMITTED 60A INT. HOLDING BAY as Picard gazes thoughtfully at the second door their efforts have revealed. Tholl, Esoqq, and Haro look to Picard for reaction, get none. THOLL I hope you're satisfied, Picard. You've accomplished nothing. ESOQQ (to Tholl) The sound of your voice is beginning to anger me. Picard looks at Tholl and Esoqq for a beat, then turns to address Haro: STAR TREK: "Allegiance" - REV. 1/19/90 - ACT FIVE 51. 60A CONTINUED: PICARD I think this charade has gone far enough, don't you? Esoqq and Tholl have no idea what Picard is talking about. Haro is also at a loss. HARO I don't understand... PICARD Yes, you do. This isn't a holding cell; it's a laboratory maze -- and we're the white rats. A carefully concocted test... an experiment to see how we'd react under pressure. ESOQQ How do you know? PICARD It's the only explanation. Look at the four of us... we do have something in common: we all react differently to authority. (to Esoqq) You, the anarchist, reject authority in any form... (to Tholl) ... you, the collaborator, defer to whoever's in control... (re himself) ... I, a Starfleet Captain, am trained to command... (to Haro) ... and you, a cadet, have sworn to obey a superior officer's authority. (a beat) Our captors put us here and devised obstacles for us to overcome. We were given food Esoqq couldn't eat -- to make him a threat. We were given a door that wouldn't open -- until all four of us cooperated. And each time we succeeded, we were dealt a reversal -- to set us against each other again. (to Haro) While you observed our reactions. STAR TREK: "Allegiance" - REV. 1/22/90 - ACT FIVE 51A. 60A CONTINUED: (2) HARO Sir, I've been trying to help -- PICARD I found it unlikely that a first-year cadet would know of the Enterprise's visit to Mintaka Three... so I tested you. Starfleet has classified the Cor Caroli Five plague "secret." No cadet would have knowledge of the incident. HARO (helpless) Captain -- STAR TREK: "Allegiance" - REV. 1/22/90 - ACT FIVE 52. 60A CONTINUED: (3) PICARD You may as well drop the pretense. I refuse to play along any further -- I'm quitting the game. As far as I'm concerned, this experiment is over. 61 ANGLE ON HARO (OPTICAL) regarding Picard carefully... and reaching a decision. HARO You are correct, Captain Picard. And Haro METAMORPHOSES into THREE IDENTICAL ALIEN CREATURES (a species we've never seen before). Esoqq and Tholl are flabbergasted. ALIEN #1 To further our knowledge of alien interaction, we borrowed you, Tholl, and Esoqq, and replaced you with replicas. ESOQQ Replicas? ALIEN #2 Our transporter is able to replicate living matter -- including the brain's many trillion dendritic connections where memory is stored. THOLL You mean there's a copy of me on Mizar Two? PICARD (nods grimly) And an impostor running my ship. ALIEN #2 No longer. Commander Riker has taken charge of the Enterprise. ALIEN #1 Our species is telepathically linked; we are all in continual contact. STAR TREK: "Allegiance" - REV. 1/19/90 - ACT FIVE 52A. 61 CONTINUED: ALIEN #2 Much more efficient than your primitive vocal communications. STAR TREK: "Allegiance" - REV. 1/19/90 - ACT FIVE 53. 61 CONTINUED: (2) ALIEN #1 We would like to pursue this study... but, of course, your awareness of it would taint the results. ALIEN #2 We will therefore return you to your places of origin. Picard, Tholl, and Esoqq are each joined by one alien -- and everyone VANISHES in the same ALIEN TRANSPORTER EFFECT we saw when Esoqq materialized. 62 INT. MAIN BRIDGE (OPTICAL) False Picard, Riker, Data, Wesley, Worf as before. Alien #1 and the real Picard MATERIALIZE (ALIEN TRANSPORTER EFFECT) on the bridge. RIKER Captain! Riker and Worf start to approach Alien #1, Worf drawing his phaser. Picard stops them: PICARD Hold your positions. Take no action. Alien #1 joins False Picard -- and False Picard METAMORPHOSES into Alien #4. Surreptitiously, Picard signals Riker with a look. Riker nods, almost imperceptibly. Picard addresses the twin aliens: PICARD (cont'd) Why did you choose to study the concepts of authority and leadership? While the aliens' attentions are focused on Picard, Riker catches Data's eye. Data nods, works his console. STAR TREK: "Allegiance" - REV. 1/18/90 - ACT FIVE 53A. 62 CONTINUED: ALIEN #4 Because our species has no such concepts. STAR TREK: "Allegiance" - REV. 1/19/90 - ACT FIVE 54. 62 CONTINUED: (2) ALIEN #1 As we are all identical, distinctions among ourselves are meaningless. Hence we have no leaders -- no followers. Riker catches Worf's eye; they exchange a meaningful look. The aliens, busy chatting with Picard, don't notice. ALIEN #4 We wanted to examine the nature of command. Under what conditions will authority be obeyed -- or disobeyed? ALIEN #1 Our replicas of Tholl and Esoqq explored this issue on Mizar Two and on Chalna... just as our Picard replica did on the Enterprise. Data works his panel, turns, nods to Worf, who then works his panel. ALIEN #4 Your responses were most intriguing. PICARD You had no right to put us through this just to satisfy your curiosity. STAR TREK: "Allegiance" - REV. 1/19/90 - ACT FIVE 54A. 62 CONTINUED: (3) In b.g., Worf nods to Riker -- all is ready. Riker silently acknowledges. ALIEN #1 Why not? PICARD Because kidnapping is immoral. The lives of other races must be respected. STAR TREK: "Allegiance" - REV. 1/19/90 - ACT FIVE 55. 62 CONTINUED: (4) ALIEN #4 This concept of morality is a very interesting human characteristic. We shall have to study it sometime. Until then, Picard -- PICARD (turning to Riker) Number One? RIKER Now, Mister Worf. Worf taps his console -- and a cylindrical FORCEFIELD appears around the two aliens. 63 NEW ANGLE (OPTICAL) The aliens look puzzled -- "you think this will hold us?" Their puzzlement turns to apprehension when they try to move outside of the forcefield -- and can't. ALIEN #1 What is this? ALIEN #4 Why do you hold us? PICARD Because there's something more you can learn from us. With an alert crew, even our "primitive vocal communications" are unnecessary. Commander Riker understood I wished to hold you here... (indicates Data) ... he had Mister Data scan you and pass the information to our security officer... (indicates Worf) ... who devised a forcefield that would entrap you. STAR TREK: "Allegiance" - REV. 1/19/90 - ACT FIVE 56. 63 CONTINUED: ALIEN #4 But why? PICARD I've decided to perform an experiment of my own. I want to see how you react to being imprisoned. ALIEN #4 Captain -- our species cannot bear captivity. ALIEN #1 We were merely curious. We meant no harm. ALIEN #4 We did not, after all, injure you in any way. STAR TREK: "Allegiance" - REV. 1/19/90 - ACT FIVE 57. 63 CONTINUED: (2) PICARD Captivity is an injury, regardless of how it's justified. Picard lets them sweat for another beat, then nods to Worf. The FORCEFIELD VANISHES. PICARD (cont'd) And now that you've had a taste of captivity, perhaps you'll reconsider the morality of inflicting it upon others. (shrugs) In any event, we now know about your race -- and we know how to imprison you. Bear that in mind. (a beat) Now get off my ship. A beat later, the two relieved aliens DEMATERIALIZE (the ALIEN TRANSPORTER EFFECT). 64 ON PICARD crossing to the command chair and settling comfortably in. PICARD Mister Crusher. Set course for our rendezvous with the Hood... Warp eight. Everyone's delighted to have the real captain back. WESLEY Aye aye, sir. (a beat) It's good to have you back. STAR TREK: "Allegiance" - REV. 1/19/90 - ACT FIVE 58. 64 CONTINUED: Smiles of agreement from the rest of the bridge crew. Picard permits himself the tiniest of smiles in acknowledgement, turns to Riker: PICARD Status, Number One? RIKER Ship and crew functioning normally, Captain. PICARD Then my doppelganger caused no serious damage. (a beat) Was the replica convincing? RIKER Very convincing, sir -- but not perfect. PICARD Not perfect in what way? RIKER Well, sir... (a beat) ... for one, I simply cannot believe you're that good a singer. PICARD A singer? Riker can't hide his grin. Picard looks at him suspiciously, decides not to pursue it for the moment. In b.g. Beverly ENTERS. PICARD (cont'd) I look forward to reading your report, Commander. At least, I think I do. Picard notices that Beverly's on the bridge. They nod in greeting: BEVERLY Captain. PICARD Doctor... Their eyes meet for a moment. STAR TREK: "Allegiance" - REV. 1/19/90 - ACT FIVE 59. 64 CONTINUED: (2) WESLEY Course laid in, Captain. PICARD Engage. 65 EXT. SPACE - THE ENTERPRISE (OPTICAL) turning to its new heading... and blasting into warp. FADE OUT. END OF ACT FIVE THE END STAR TREK: THE NEXT GENERATION "Captain's Holiday" #40273-167 Written by Ira Steven Behr Directed by Chip Chalmers THE WRITING CREDITS MAY NOT BE FINAL AND SHOULD NOT BE USED FOR PUBLICITY OR ADVERTISING PURPOSES WITHOUT FIRST CHECKING WITH THE TELEVISION LEGAL DEPARTMENT. Copyright 1990 Paramount Pictures Corporation. All Rights Reserved. This script is not for publication or reproduction. No one is authorized to dispose of same. If lost or destroyed, please notify the Script Department. FINAL DRAFT JANUARY 21, 1990 STAR TREK: "Captain's Holiday" - REV. 1/24/90 - CAST STAR TREK: THE NEXT GENERATION "Captain's Holiday" CAST PICARD VASH RIKER SOVAK DATA AJUR BEVERLY BORATUS TROI JOVAL GEORDI WORF COMPUTER VOICE Non-Speaking RESORT SUPERNUMERARIES Non-Speaking MALE COMPANION SUPERNUMERARIES ENSIGN BENNETT STAR TREK: "Captain's Holiday" - REV. 1/24/90 - SETS STAR TREK: THE NEXT GENERATION "Captain's Holiday" SETS INTERIORS EXTERIORS USS ENTERPRISE USS ENTERPRISE MAIN BRIDGE USS ENTERPRISE CAPTAIN'S READY ROOM RISIAN LANAI TURBOLIFT CAPTAIN'S QUARTERS CORRIDOR (VARIOUS) RISIAN RESORT LOBBY PICARD'S ROOM VASH'S ROOM CAVERN STAR TREK: "Captain's Holiday" - 01/24/90 - PRONUNCIATION STAR TREK: THE NEXT GENERATION "Captain's Holiday" PRONUNCIATION GUIDE AJUR AY-zure BORATUS bur-A-tus ESTRAGON EST-ra-gone HORGA'HN HOR-gone JAMAHAROHN JAH-ma-ha-ron JOVAL JOE-val KAL DANO CAL DAY-no SOVAK SOE-vauk VASH VASH STAR TREK: "Captain's Holiday" - REV. 1/24/90 - TEASER 1. STAR TREK: THE NEXT GENERATION "Captain's Holiday" TEASER 1 INT. RISIAN PLEASURE HAVEN - THE LOBBY Imagine a twenty-fourth century Hawaiian resort. The indoor/outdoor open-sided lobby (one end leads off to a sun drenched lanai) has a simple grace and beauty that is immediately apparent. In the center of the lobby is a stone shrine. Residing on the alter is a large rotund idol (also made of stone) called a Horga'hn. Smaller, wooden Horga'hns circle the main figure. As for the guests, they all appear rested and happy. Clothing is loose, casual and extremely revealing. Couples predominate, with the spectrum of sexual preferences being evident. 2 NEW ANGLE (OPTICAL) Two sleek and well dressed aliens (Vorgons -- one male, BORATUS, the other female, AJUR) MATERIALIZE by one of the entranceways. The Vorgons glance curiously around the lobby then make their way over to a nearby wall grid. Ajur places her palm on an adjoining sensor panel which glows at her touch. COMPUTER (V.O.) Welcome to Risa. All that is ours is yours. AJUR We are looking for the lodging chamber of Captain Jean-Luc Picard. A beat as the computer accesses the data. STAR TREK: "Captain's Holiday" - REV. 1/29/90 - TEASER 2. 2 CONTINUED: COMPUTER (V.O.) A file scan reveals no record of a Captain Picard currently visiting Risa. The Vorgons exchange a look of concern. AJUR When is he expected to arrive? COMPUTER (V.O.) Where is no arrival date on file for any such individual. Ajur removes her hand from the panel. It goes dark. BORATUS Could we have been mistaken? And when Ajur speaks, it is without the slightest hint of doubt. AJUR He will come. HOLD ON the Vorgons. They look confident and slightly ominous. 3 EXT. SPACE - THE ENTERPRISE (OPTICAL) Slowly circling a cloud shrouded planet. RIKER (V.O.) First officer's log, Stardate 43745.2. We are in orbit of Gemaris Five where, for the past two weeks, Captain Picard has been serving as mediator in a trade dispute between the Gemarians and their nearest neighbor, the Dachlyds. 4 INT. BRIDGE DATA at Ops, ENSIGN BENNETT at Conn, WORF at Tactical. RIKER standing by Command. STAR TREK: "Captain's Holiday" - REV. 1/24/90 - TEASER 3. 4 CONTINUED: He greets TROI who has just entered from the aft turbolift. RIKER Welcome back, Counselor. TROI It's good to be back. It's been a grueling two weeks. RIKER I take it the captain was able to negotiate an agreement mutually beneficial to both parties. TROI He did. Though I don't know how he managed it. Both the Gemarians and the Dachlyds are incredibly stubborn people. RIKER The more difficult the task, the sweeter the victory. The turbolift doors re-open and out steps PICARD. Though he moves with his usual determination, there is a slight edge of weariness to his gestures. He definitely does not act like a man who has just won a "sweet" victory. PICARD Break us out of orbit, Mister Bennett. Set a course for Starbase twelve. Picard approaches the Command area. PICARD (continuing) Report, Number One. STAR TREK: "Captain's Holiday" - REV. 1/24/90 - TEASER 4. 4 CONTINUED: (2) RIKER Everything status quo, sir. PICARD Very well... He glances around the bridge. Then abruptly: PICARD (continuing) If anyone needs me, I'll be in my Ready Room. RIKER Sir... Picard turns back in the doorway. RIKER (continuing) Congratulations. PICARD About what? PIKER About the trade agreement. A beat, then Picard gives a brief nod of acknowledgement before disappearing into his office. A puzzled Riker stares after him. RIKER (continuing) Counselor, is it my imagination or is something bothering the captain? TROI He has been under a great deal of strain lately. While on Gemaris he ate sparingly... and slept even less. RIKER Is there anything we can do? TROI I have a solution in mind, but I doubt he'll agree to it. STAR TREK: "Captain's Holiday" - REV. 1/24/90 - TEASER 5. 4 CONTINUED: (3) RIKER And what would that be? TROI (simply) Our captain needs a vacation. An amused Riker smiles sympathetically. Troi is absolutely right. The captain will never agree to it. FADE OUT. END OF TEASER STAR TREK: "Captain's Holiday" - REV. 1/24/90 - ACT ONE 6. ACT ONE FADE IN: 5 INT. READY ROOM (OPTICAL) Picard at his desk studying a stack of reports. He leans forward to stretch out a stiff back. The DOOR CHIME SOUNDS. Picard is too distracted to respond. The CHIME SOUNDS again. PICARD Come. BEVERLY ENTERS. A woman with a mission. BEVERLY Sir, it's come to my attention one of the crew has been neglecting his health again. A warning light goes off in Picard's head. He sits up a little straighter in his chair. PICARD How so? BEVERLY He suffers from a classic case of stress related ailments brought about by overwork. Exhaustion, irritability... muscle spasms. Yet he insists on ignoring them. Picard, who was just about to rub his aching back, halts in mid-gesture. He's now certain he's the object of Beverly's report. PICARD It doesn't sound all that serious. BEVERLY And I plan to keep it that way. PICARD Recommended treatment. BEVERLY A week's shore leave. Picard shakes his head, dismissing the notion entirely. STAR TREK: "Captain's Holiday" - REV. 1/25/90 - ACT ONE 7. 5 CONTINUED: PICARD Impossible. But Beverly comes right back at him. BEVERLY Jean-Luc... I could make it an order. PICARD But you won't... Beverly you know I loathe vacations. BEVERLY You loathe going on vacation. Once you're there you have a marvelous time. You told me you loved the four days you spent on Zytchin Three. PICARD I lied. (an idea) The Enterprise is scheduled to spend a week undergoing a maintenance overhaul at Starbase twelve. While there, I promise to make full use of all available recreation activities. BEVERLY Watching some technician fill deuterium tanks is not my idea of fun. It doesn't sound like much fun to Picard either. PICARD I suppose I could find a few hours to spend on the Holodeck. BEVERLY Forget about the Holodeck. There must be someplace you'd like to go. PICARD The Astrophysics Center on Icor Nine is holding a symposium on rogue star clusters. I had given serious thought to attending. STAR TREK: "Captain's Holiday" - REV. 1/25/90 - ACT ONE 7A. 5 CONTINUED: (2) BEVERLY Serious thought is the last thing you need. Why not go some place beautiful? Where you can relax and be pampered. You deserve it. STAR TREK: "Captain's Holiday" - REV. 1/25/90 - ACT ONE 8. 5 CONTINUED: (3) But Picard isn't ready to commit. PICARD I'll give it serious thought. BEVERLY (insistent) Captain... PICARD Beverly... enough. Beverly sighs and backs off. Picard returns to his reports, confident that he's dodged that particular bullet. 5A EXT. SPACE - THE ENTERPRISE (OPTICAL) The ship cruising at warp speed. 5B INT. CORRIDOR Picard and Riker are headed towards a turbolift. RIKER So have you decided where you're going yet? The turbolift doors open. Picard and Riker ENTER. 6 INT. TURBOLIFT Continuous. PICARD Yes Number One, I have. (to computer) The bridge. RIKER I meant for your shore leave. Picard glares at his first officer. STAR TREK: "Captain's Holiday" - REV. 1/24/90 - ACT ONE 8A. 6 CONTINUED: PICARD Not you too. RIKER (to computer) Halt. The turbolift stops. A smiling Riker launches into his sales pitch. STAR TREK: "Captain's Holiday" - REV. 1/25/90 - ACT ONE 9. 6 CONTINUED: (2) RIKER (continuing) I know this perfect little vacation spot... In fact, its co-ordinates lie within this sector. PICARD How convenient. Except I have absolutely no intention of taking a holiday. Do I make myself clear? RIKER Very clear... PICARD Good. I'm glad we've got that straightened out. (to computer) Resume. The turbolift continues on its way. Riker, realizing he doesn't have much time left, presses on. RIKER It's called Risa. And believe me Captain, it's paradise. Warm tropical breezes... exotic food... and nothing to do but sit back and enjoy the quiet. (a beat) And then there's -- Picard anticipates Riker's next thought. PICARD & RIKER (together) ... the women... PICARD ... of course. RIKER I'm sure you'd find their sybaritic outlook on life very appealing. STAR TREK: "Captain's Holiday" - REV. 1/24/90 - ACT ONE 10. 6 CONTINUED: (3) PICARD I'm sure I would. Riker thinks he has the captain sold. The turbolift doors open. RIKER I'm glad to hear you say so, sir. 7 thru OMITTED 9 9A INT. BRIDGE As Picard and Riker EXIT the aft turbolift. PICARD Unfortunately, this vessel is about to undergo extensive repairs requiring my personal supervision. RIKER But what about Risa? PICARD Some other time, Number One. Troi is on her way over to the turbolift. Perhaps a brief conspiratorial look passes between her and Riker before she speaks. TROI Will, I've just received some delightful news. RIKER Really? And we get the feeling that what follows is said more for Picard's benefit than for Riker's. TROI There's an excellent chance my mother may be meeting us at Starbase twelve. To Picard this sounds anything but "delightful." PICARD Your mother? STAR TREK: "Captain's Holiday" - REV. 1/26/90 - ACT ONE 11. 9A CONTINUED: TROI Yes, she's returning home from a conference on Achrady Seven. She's going to try to rearrange her schedule so she can spend some time visiting with us. RIKER That's wonderful, Deanna. TROI She mentioned how much she's looking forward to seeing you again, Captain. PICARD Did she? Troi ENTERS the turbolift. The turbolift doors close. Picard is only too well aware of how "fond" Lwaxana can be. PICARD Commander, I'd like a word with you. In private. Picard ENTERS the Ready Room. Riker follows. 9B INT. READY ROOM (OPTICAL) Continuous. RIKER Is something wrong, Captain? PICARD Tell me, Number One, is the entire crew aware of this little scheme to send me off on holiday? STAR TREK: "Captain's Holiday" - REV. 1/25/90 - ACT ONE 12. 9B CONTINUED: RIKER (fighting back a smile) I believe there are two ensigns stationed on deck thirty-nine who know nothing about it. PICARD I suppose this means I can look forward to a week of continual harassment on the subject. Riker's look says he wouldn't be at all surprised. A beat as Picard decides it's not really worth the fight. PICARD I admit I have been feeling a bit fatigued. Hold on Picard having made his decision. STAR TREK: "Captain's Holiday" - REV. 1/25/90 - ACT ONE13-13A. 9BA EXT. SPACE - THE ENTERPRISE (OPTICAL) coming out of warp and approaching Risa. 9C INT. CAPTAIN'S QUARTERS The ship is out of warp. Picard, dressed in casual clothing, is packing up some books to take with him on his trip. Riker and Troi are there to see him off. RIKER I'll see to it that these bags are beamed directly to your room. STAR TREK: "Captain's Holiday" - REV. 1/26/90 - ACT ONE 14. 9C CONTINUED: Troi leans over and unbuttons the top button of the Captain's shirt. That feels better. TROI You look very handsome, Captain... If you don't mind my saying so. Riker looks over at the stack of books lying atop a travel bag. RIKER You're not really bringing all these books with you? STAR TREK: "Captain's Holiday" - REV. 1/25/90 - ACT ONE 15. 9C CONTINUED: (3) PICARD I thought I'd take along some light reading... in case I got bored. Riker checks out some of the titles. RIKER Ulysses by James Joyce? Ethics, Sophistry and the Alternate Universe by Ving Kuda -- You call this light reading? PICARD To each his own, Number One. Picard closes up the bag. As he starts out of the room: RIKER Did I ever mention how imaginative Risian women are? TROI Too often, Commander. Riker looks over at Troi. Could there have been a slight trace of jealousy in the counselor's remark? 9D INT. CORRIDOR LEADING TO TRANSPORTER ROOM Picard, Troi and Riker. RIKER Captain, I do have one request. PICARD You want me to bring you back a souvenir? How did he know? RIKER It's called a Horga'hn. You won't have any trouble finding one. PICARD Consider it done. STAR TREK: "Captain's Holiday" - REV. 1/25/90 - ACT ONE 15A. 9E NEW ANGLE WORF and a security guard are waiting outside the Transporter Room. WORF Sir, I would feel better if you would allow me to assign a security officer to accompany you. We will be out of communication range as soon as we leave orbit. PICARD I don't think that will be necessary, Lieutenant. Risa has a reputation of being a most peaceful planet. WORF Aye, sir. STAR TREK: "Captain's Holiday" - REV. 1/24/90 - ACT ONE 16. 9E CONTINUED: Picard realizes there's no use in putting it off any longer. PICARD The ship is yours, Number One. TROI Enjoy your trip, Captain. PICARD I'll try, Counselor. Picard ENTERS the Transporter Room. As the doors close, Riker turns to Troi. RIKER He's going to have a great time. 10 OMITTED 11 INT. RISIAN PLEASURE HAVEN - THE LOBBY (OPTICAL) Picard MATERIALIZES. A glance at the blissful faces of the other guests only serves to convince him that it's going to be a long week. 12 NEW ANGLE A woman, VASH, mid-thirties, striking good looks, moves away from the pond, where she has stood admiring the shrine of the Horga'hn. She casts a backward glance at the idols. STAR TREK: "Captain's Holiday" - REV. 1/24/90 - ACT ONE 17. 12 CONTINUED: She and Picard are on a collision course, and sure enough, they come together with a jolt. PICARD Pardon me. Vash is about to answer back when something catches her eye in the entranceway behind Picard. What happens next is quite fast. 13 VASH'S P.O.V. SOVAK, a Ferengi has just arrived at the Haven. His eyes search the room. 14 BACK TO SCENE Vash moves slightly to the side so that Picard's body will block her from Sovak's sightline. Her eyes light up as she suddenly "recognizes" Picard. VASH It's so good to see you again. Before Picard can react, she throws her arms around his neck and gives him an enthusiastic kiss. Her eyes remain open and she sees that Sovak has spotted her anyway. At first the Ferengi looks as if he's going to approach her, but he thinks better of it and with an ugly grin, moves away. A relieved Vash then gazes over at Picard whose eyes have stayed open as well. For a beat, they stare at one another, lips pressed together. Then Picard breaks the embrace. PICARD I think you've mistaken me for someone else. Vash studies Picard's face closely and then reacts. VASH You know, I believe you're right. She shrugs, and then flashes a very provocative smile. STAR TREK: "Captain's Holiday" - REV. 1/24/90 - ACT ONE 18. 14 CONTINUED: VASH (continuing) Welcome to Risa. She strolls away. PICARD (to himself) A simple handshake would have sufficed. He walks off. The CAMERA follows him only to stop when he reaches: 15 THE VORGONS who study him closely as he walks by. A meaningful look passes between them, as we: FADE OUT. END OF ACT ONE STAR TREK: "Captain's Holiday" - REV. 1/24/90 - ACT TWO 19. ACT TWO FADE IN: 16 INT. LANAI (OPTICAL) Another perfect day at the Pleasure Haven. The temperature is the equivalent of a balmy eighty-three degrees Fahrenheit; a warm breeze prevents the heat from becoming oppressive, and the water (you'll have to take my word for it because we never get to see the ocean) is as clear and calm as a lake. The CAMERA OPENS on a happy couple, lying asleep on the veranda. CAMERA PANS over to a second couple, kissing passionately. CAMERA PANS again to REVEAL: 17 PICARD Sitting in a lounge chair, trying to concentrate on the thick tome he's reading. It's not as simple as it would appear. First of all, it's not easy to relax with a couple locked in the throes of lust only a few feet away. For a private man like Jean-Luc Picard, such public behavior is distasteful at best. Then another couple comes running up from the unseen beach. The water from their still dripping bodies sprays over him. Annoyed, he carefully wipes dry his book. 18 NEW ANGLE (OPTICAL) As he settles back down, a hoverball glides over to him and stops dead in the air only inches from his face. Picard tries to ignore it but the sphere emits an aggravating low level HUM. He casually tries to swat it away but it avoids his hand and darts away. Picard reopens his book... just as the hoverball makes an abrupt reappearance above his head. As he looks up: JOVAL (V.O.) Return. The hoverball zips away. STAR TREK: "Captain's Holiday" - REV. 1/25/90 - ACT TWO 20. 19 NEW ANGLE to include Joval, a delicate beauty wearing an eye catching bathing outfit. She grabs hold of the hoverball. JOVAL My apologies. I fear I have yet to master the art of hoverball. PICARD So it would seem. Joval sits beside him. JOVAL My name is Joval. I am employed here. Is there anything you require to make your stay a more pleasant one? A small smile from Picard. He shakes his head as if he's heard it all before. JOVAL You find me amusing. PICARD No. It's just that you're the fifth woman to ask me that this morning... All I require is to sit here in the sun and read my book. Alone. JOVAL And afterward? The question catches Picard by surprise. PICARD I really haven't thought that far ahead. STAR TREK: "Captain's Holiday" - REV. 1/24/90 - ACT TWO 21. 19 CONTINUED: JOVAL Then may I suggest a swim to be followed by a massage? This is all said very matter of fact, without any hint of salaciousness and no trace of servitude. PICARD Some other time perhaps. Picard was hoping this would end matters right there, but Joval only looks perplexed. JOVAL I don't understand. You say you wish to be alone yet you carry the Horga'hn. She holds up a small wooden copy of the idol which is on a table next to Picard. PICARD I just purchased that. (suddenly suspicious) Why? Are you implying it holds some special meaning? Joval looks at him like he has got to be kidding. JOVAL The Horga'hn is the Risian symbol of sexuality. To own one is to call forth it powers. To display it is to announce you are seeking Jamaharohn. Picard glares at the Horga'hn. PICARD (softly but emphatically) Riker! JOVAL Do you seek Jamaharohn? PICARD I don't even know what it means. (quickly) Nor do I want to. The Horga'hn is for a friend. STAR TREK: "Captain's Holiday" - REV. 1/24/90 - ACT TWO 22. 19 CONTINUED: (2) JOVAL I see. Someone close to you. PICARD That's right. JOVAL Someone you love. PICARD I wouldn't go that far. Joval stands. JOVAL Your attitude is most puzzling. I will leave you now to your book. PICARD That's all I ask. And with a final look of disapproval, Joval leaves. As for Picard, the conversation has done nothing to improve his mood. Once again, he opens the book, tries to make himself comfortable. After a beat, an ominous shadow falls over him. He looks up to see: 20 PICARD'S P.O.V. A dark figure who stands backlit before him. PICARD (V.O.) You're blocking the sun. The figure leans forward into the CAMERA and now we realize it's Sovak, the Ferengi, looking rather absurd in a Risian resort outfit. SOVAK I know you're working with her. I warn you, it's a mistake. 21 NEW ANGLE as Picard looks around, convinced that Sovak must be speaking to someone else. But no one's there. STAR TREK: "Captain's Holiday" - REV. 1/24/90 - ACT TWO 23. 21 CONTINUED: PICARD Are you addressing me? SOVAK Don't bother to deny it. I've seen the two of you together. PICARD I don't know what the devil you're talking about. But whatever it is, I assure you it's no concern of mine. Picard goes back to his book, trying his best to ignore the Ferengi. SOVAK Tell her I want the disc returned to me immediately. PICARD Perhaps I haven't made myself clear. You have the wrong man. 22 ANGLE ON VASH who is seated in a lounge chair at the edge of the lobby. A male companion is giving her a backrub as she watches Picard and Sovak. 23 BACK TO SCENE SOVAK I am rapidly losing patience with you. I demand you talk business. Picard has had about enough of this guy. PICARD You'll find Ferengi demands carry little weight with me. SOVAK Obviously you've never dealt with my people before. PICARD On the contrary, I have. All too often. STAR TREK: "Captain's Holiday" - REV. 1/24/90 - ACT TWO 24. 23 CONTINUED: SOVAK Then you know the Ferengi are not to be trifled with. PICARD Or trusted. Sovak looks threateningly over him. SOVAK You dare to insult me! Picard rises to his feet. The Ferengi stands his ground. PICARD I advise you to listen closely for I will not say this again. I came to Risa for a holiday, nothing more. I have no knowledge of this woman you refer to, nor have I laid eyes on any disc. SOVAK You expect me to believe such feeble lies? PICARD (with an edge) I don't particularly care what you believe. A long beat as Picard stares down Sovak. Finally the Ferengi backs away. SOVAK This is not over yet, human. The disc is mine... And so is the woman. Remember that. The Ferengi EXITS into the lobby. Picard takes a deep breath, allowing the tension to drain out of him. He sits back down and once again opens the book. VASH (V.O.) Hello! Picard slams the book shut. STAR TREK: "Captain's Holiday" - REV. 1/25/90 - ACT TWO 25. 23 CONTINUED: (2) He turns, sees Vash standing by the doorway of the lanai. Her outfit leaves little to the imagination. PICARD Oh, it's you. VASH That's not much of a greeting. Undeterred, she sits down beside him. PICARD Look, I don't mean to appear rude, but I am not seeking Jamaharohn. At first Vash appears perplexed, but then she smiles and nods philosophically. VASH All right. But you really should try it some time. And it's clear that Vash knows of what she speaks. PICARD If I "try it", it will be at a time of my own choosing. VASH That's fine with me. It's not as though I was offering to help you find it. And now it's Picard who's a bit taken back. PICARD I assumed by the way you welcomed me the other day... VASH I'm sorry if I embarrassed you. PICARD I don't recall saying I was embarrassed. VASH Do public displays of affection normally make you uncomfortable? STAR TREK: "Captain's Holiday" - REV. 1/24/90 - ACT TWO 26. 23 CONTINUED: (3) PICARD Let's just say I prefer to be acquainted with the women I kiss. VASH That's understandable. The name's Vash. She holds out her hand. And for a brief moment before Picard takes it, they stare at each other in an undeniable beat of sexual tension. PICARD Jean-Luc Picard. VASH So tell me about yourself, Jean-Luc. PICARD (scowling) Is that really necessary? VASH Would you rather I guess? I can be very persistent. Picard sees she means it. If only to get it over with... PICARD I'm captain of a Federation starship. Vash is impressed. VASH Well then that explains it. PICARD Explains what? VASH I noticed you arguing with that Ferengi. For a moment there it looked like it was going to come to blows. And suddenly it all clicks into place for Picard. STAR TREK: "Captain's Holiday" - REV. 1/24/90 - ACT TWO 26A. 23 CONTINUED: (4) PICARD You're the woman he was talking about? STAR TREK: "Captain's Holiday" - REV. 1/24/90 - ACT TWO 27. 23 CONTINUED: (5) Vash tries to keep it light but there's a hint of worry in her voice. VASH I hope your disagreement wasn't over me. Picard gets up. PICARD For the answer to that I suggest you ask him. He reaches down and picks up his book and Riker's Horga'hn. VASH Where are you going? PICARD To find some privacy. He walks off towards the lobby. Vash gets up to follow. VASH Wait a second. 24 INT. LOBBY Picard and Vash ENTER from the lanai. VASH What did he tell you? I'm sure there wasn't a bit of truth to any of it. 25 NEW ANGLE As a triumphant Sovak appears from behind a plant and blocks their path. SOVAK (to Picard) And you said you didn't know her. PICARD I don't. And I don't want to. STAR TREK: "Captain's Holiday" - REV. 1/24/90 - ACT TWO 28. 25 CONTINUED: SOVAK (to Vash) Return the disc to me and all will be forgiven. VASH The disc doesn't belong to you, Sovak. It never did. Picard has no intention of staying around to hear them argue. PICARD It would seem you two have a lot to discuss. If you'll excuse me... He starts to go, but Vash stops him. VASH I'm sorry, Jean-Luc. Perhaps one day I can explain this all to you. 26 INSERT As she slips an optical disc into his coat pocket. 27 BACK TO SCENE PICARD Perhaps you can. And with that, he leaves. Vash watches him go. Sovak appears at her shoulder. SOVAK I have a proposal I believe you'll find most interesting. VASH Save your breath. SOVAK I am willing to pay you your weight in gold in exchange for the disc. Is that not a generous offer? STAR TREK: "Captain's Holiday" - REV. 1/24/90 - ACT TWO 29. 27 CONTINUED: Vash dismisses the offer with a look and then walks off. SOVAK (admiring) I must have that woman. 28 INT PICARD'S ROOM Picard ENTERS. We do not reveal the interior of the room until Picard reacts to: 29 NEW ANGLE (OPTICAL) Boratus and Ajur, who are busy using some kind of hand held tracking device to scan the area. PICARD What are you doing in my room? The Vorgons stop their scan. AJUR We are Vorgons. I am Ajur. This is Boratus. BORATUS We come from the twenty-seventh century. We've traveled three hundred years into the past to find you. And off Picard's reaction, we: FADE OUT. END OF ACT TWO STAR TREK: "Captain's Holiday" - REV. 1/25/90 - ACT THREE 30. ACT THREE FADE IN: 30 INT. PICARD'S ROOM (OPTICAL) Picard and the Vorgons as before. PICARD Let's assume for the moment I believe you. That you are indeed from the future. What is it that you want from me? AJUR Have you heard of the Tox Uthat? The question surprises Picard. PICARD I'm aware of the legend. It tells of a visitor from the future who left behind a mysterious device known as the Tox Uthat. AJUR Essentially that story is correct. PICARD Then the Uthat actually exists. BORATUS (nodding) It was invented by a scientist named Kal Dano in the mid-twenty-seventh century. The Uthat is a quantum phase inhibitor... capable of halting all nuclear reaction within a star. PICARD But why bring such a powerful weapon into the past? BORATUS Criminals attempted to steal the device from Dano. He was determined to keep it out of their hands, so he fled back to the twenty-second century... where he hid it. STAR TREK: "Captain's Holiday" - REV. 1/26/90 - ACT THREE 31. 30 CONTINUED: BORATUS (nodding) Ajur and I were the security team assigned to protect the Uthat. Having failed in our duty, we followed Dano into the past, hoping to return him and the weapon safely to our own time. One look at the aliens tells Picard all he needs to know. PICARD I gather you were unsuccessful. AJUR Though we searched for many years, we were unable to find any trace of it. BORATUS Returning home in defeat we began to search through the historical records for some clue to the Uthat's fate. AJUR For years we looked through the archives of the many cultures that reside in this part of the galaxy. PICARD And the search led you to me? AJUR We came upon a brief account stating you had discovered an object of unknown origin while vacationing on Risa. From its description -- a crystal cube that fits in the palm of the hand -- we surmised it could very well be the Uthat. PICARD I'm sorry to disappoint you, but I haven't found a thing -- including peace, which is the only thing I'm looking for. STAR TREK: "Captain's Holiday" - REV. 1/25/90 - ACT THREE 32. 30 CONTINUED: (2) BORATUS You will find such a device, Captain -- to us it's already part of history. It's a difficult argument for Picard to refute. PICARD And if I do find it, what then? AJUR You will give it to us immediately so that we may return with it. BORATUS Can we expect your cooperation, Picard? Picard hesitates before replying. There is no way to verify the Vorgon's story -- and his instincts are whispering caution. His answer is subtly ambiguous. PICARD The Uthat belongs to your time -- not mine. Upon hearing Picard's answer, the aliens seem to relax for the first time. AJUR (pleased) It would appear that history is correct in its assessment of you, Captain. You are a very wise man. And with that, the Vorgons touch their transporter belts and DEMATERIALIZE (VORGON TRANSPORTER EFFECT). Picard reacts to their abrupt departure, not sure whether Ajur's last remark was a compliment or a subtly veiled threat. He takes off his jacket and as he does, Vash's optical disc drops to the floor. He picks it up and examines it closely. 31 INT. VASH'S ROOM (A REDRESS OF PICARD'S) Vash is busy gathering up her belongings which have been tossed helter-skelter around the room. STAR TREK: "Captain's Holiday" - REV. 1/24/90 - ACT THREE 32A. 31 CONTINUED: PICARD (V.O.) May I come in? She turns quickly. STAR TREK: "Captain's Holiday" - REV. 1/24/90 - ACT THREE 33. 32 NEW ANGLE Picard is standing in the doorway. VASH Excuse the mess. She returns to her work. VASH Sovak has taken to searching my room periodically. Picard holds up the disc. PICARD Is this what he's looking for? An apologetic Vash reacts to the sight of the disc. VASH I'm sorry I had to hide it like that, but I was afraid he'd start searching me next. PICARD This disc must contain some very valuable information. Vash reaches out her hand, waits for Picard to give it back. VASH I doubt it's anything you'd be interested in. But Picard holds on to the disc. PICARD That depends. And now Vash isn't as calm as she was a moment before. VASH On what? PICARD On whether or not this has anything to do with the Tox Uthat. VASH (a flash of anger) Did Sovak tell you that? STAR TREK: "Captain's Holiday" - REV. 1/25/90 - ACT THREE 34. 32 CONTINUED: PICARD Let's just say I've heard... rumors that the Uthat is located somewhere on Risa. Vash tries to gauge just how much Picard knows. But he's a hard man to read. VASH Look, the last thing I need is a partner. PICARD Then it's true. Vash sees that Picard is not about to let go of this. VASH I don't suppose you ever heard of Professor Samuel Estragon? PICARD As a matter of fact, I have. He spent half his life searching for the Uthat. (off her reaction) Archaeology is a hobby of mine. VASH I served as his personal assistant for the past five years. Shortly before he died, he uncovered new data pinpointing its location. That disc contains his research notes and maps. PICARD So you're continuing his work? VASH Exactly. PICARD With a Ferengi as an associate. VASH Sovak and I are definitely not working together. PICARD But the two of you are well acquainted. STAR TREK: "Captain's Holiday" - REV. 1/25/90 - ACT THREE 34A. 32 CONTINUED: (2) VASH At times he aided the professor in his explorations. Especially in situations that weren't quite ethical. PICARD And now with typical Ferengi logic, he's convinced that the Uthat belongs to him. VASH All he cares about is selling it to the highest bidder. PICARD I take it you have a more noble purpose in mind. VASH I told the professor I'd present it to the Daystrom Institute. (with a hint of anxiety) But first I have to find it. And that won't be easy with Sovak watching me every minute. STAR TREK: "Captain's Holiday" - REV. 1/25/90 - ACT THREE 35. 32 CONTINUED: (3) And to Picard it's as if fate itself has brought him to this moment. PICARD Then I'll go in your place. Vash reacts. Not so fast buddy. VASH And what about me? PICARD You'll remain here. It's safer. VASH This isn't a starship, Jean-Luc. And I don't follow orders. A beat as they stare at each other. VASH You'd never find it without me. The professor's notes are in code. She smiles triumphantly. Picard grudgingly accepts the inevitable. STAR TREK: "Captain's Holiday" - REV. 1/29/90 - ACT THREE 36. 32 CONTINUED: (4) In spite of himself, Picard is beginning to admire this brash woman. PICARD From the moment we met I knew you were going to be trouble. VASH You look like a man who could handle trouble. PICARD How far is it to our destination? VASH According to the professor's notes, a series of subterranrean caves lie twenty-nine kilometers due east. That's where we'll find the Uthat. PICARD I'll meet you in the lobby in fifteen minutes. Be punctual. (a beat) I advise you to change clothing. He heads for the door. VASH Jean-Luc... He turns. VASH ... We're going to make a wonderful team. Picard isn't quite so confident. He EXITS. 33 INT. LOBBY Picard and Vash move quickly through the lobby. Vash is carrying a back pack. STAR TREK: "Captain's Holiday" - REV. 1/29/90 - ACT THREE 37. 34 NEW ANGLE As Sovak appears at their side. SOVAK I expected such treachery. Did you think you could sneak away from me so easily? 35 INSERT A small phaser is pressed against Picard's back. 36 BACK TO SCENE As Picard and Vash react. 37 INT. LOBBY - THE LANAI (OPTICAL) Picard and Vash ENTER, followed by Sovak. As they turn to face him: SOVAK The disc -- where is it? STAR TREK: "Captain's Holiday" - REV. 1/25/90 - ACT THREE 38. 37 CONTINUED: PICARD Didn't anyone tell you weapons aren't allowed on Risa? SOVAK You're making a grave mistake putting your trust in this woman. VASH It would be a worse mistake to trust you. SOVAK Silence! (to Picard) Do you know how she acquired the disc in the first place? Vash starts toward the Ferengi. VASH (a warning) Sovak! He points the phaser in her direction, effectively stopping her in her tracks. Sovak smiles. He's enjoying this. SOVAK (to Picard) I paid her to steal it. But instead she betrayed me, and used my money to make her way here. VASH That's not the way it happened. SOVAK (relishing it) She's a greedy and unscrupulous woman. (drooling over Vash) A perfect mate for a Ferengi. PICARD You are becoming quite an annoyance, Sovak. STAR TREK: "Captain's Holiday" - REV. 1/25/90 - ACT THREE 39. 37 CONTINUED: (2) SOVAK As are you, human. Perhaps I should kill you and then take the disc. Vash moves forward, holding out the back pack. VASH No wait... you can have it. A greedy Sovak, anticipating victory, reaches for the bag. Vash tosses it to him. A surprised Sovak catches it. Picard uses the opportunity to grab for the phaser. The Ferengi FIRES it, the beam passing between Picard and Vash. A solid punch from the captain and Sovak crumples to the ground. Picard takes the phaser and tosses it in the bushes. He picks up the back pack. VASH You see, I told you we'd make a good team. Picard still isn't totally convinced. He leads her away. PICARD We have a long trip ahead of us. They EXIT the lanai. Hold a beat, and then the Vorgons MATERIALIZE (VORGON TRANSPORTER EFFECT). AJUR So it finally begins. BORATUS Picard must not be allowed to destroy the Uthat. AJUR He will surrender it to us... or die. And on two very grim and determined Vorgons, we: FADE OUT. END OF ACT THREE STAR TREK: "Captain's Holiday" - REV. 1/25/90 - ACT FOUR 40. ACT FOUR FADE IN: 38 INT. CAVERN (OPTICAL) A dark, primeval place. Shafts of moonlight emanating from natural fissures in the ceiling provide the only illumination. Picard is finishing up some dinner as he stands gazing off into the shadows. Behind him is a small, grassy chamber. He turns and ENTERS -- revealing a weary Vash resting on the ground. She holds a tricorder-like device (the disc is inside) as she checks the professor's maps. PICARD Have you calculated how much further we have to go? VASH Another eleven kilometers. Picard is well aware they both could use a rest. PICARD We'll remain here for the night. VASH I was hoping you'd say that. She flops onto her back, arms outstretched. Picard sits with his back to the cave wall. PICARD We made better time than I expected. Vash leans up on her elbows. VASH I'll take that as a compliment. Picard acknowledges. PICARD As it was intended. Vash sits up -- moves closer to Picard. She hesitates -- looking for the right words... Totally serious for a change. STAR TREK: "Captain's Holiday" - REV. 1/25/90 - ACT FOUR 41. 38 CONTINUED: VASH Jean-Luc... I'm afraid I haven't been totally honest with you. PICARD Forgive me if I don't act surprised. VASH Sovak did pay me to hand over the disc. PICARD Then you did steal it. VASH It wasn't stealing. The professor was dead... Someone had to continue his work. I had already devoted five years of my life to tracking down the Uthat. PICARD But you took Sovak's money. VASH It was the only way I could afford to get to Risa. As for Sovak, he got exactly what he deserved. Picard gives a wry grin. PICARD Well, any woman who can beat a Ferengi at his own game, bears watching. Vash is delighted to return Picard's smile. VASH I'll take that as another compliment. I am flattered. A silent moment passes between them. Then: PICARD (gruffly) We should get some sleep. Vash turns and rummages through the pack. She pulls out a blanket (perhaps some kind of sleeping bag.) STAR TREK: "Captain's Holiday" - REV. 1/29/90 - ACT FOUR 42. 38 CONTINUED: (2) VASH You know Jean-Luc, it's lucky for you we met. Picard flashes Vash a dubious look as he helps her spread out the blanket. VASH If it wasn't for me, you'd still be back there sitting in the sun... relaxing. PICARD That happens to be why I came to Risa. They both slip under the blanket. Settle in. VASH I'm sure you hated every minute of it. That kind of vacation isn't for a man like you. You need excitement. PICARD Excitement? Sleeping in a damp cave... chasing after something we'll probably never find? VASH (confident) You are enjoying yourself, aren't you? A beat and then Picard allows himself a small grin. There's no use denying it. PICARD I suppose I am. VASH (victory) I just wanted to hear you say it. PICARD Good. Now go to sleep. A beat. Picard closes his eyes. Vash looks over at him. STAR TREK: "Captain's Holiday" - REV. 1/29/90 - ACT FOUR 43. 38 CONTINUED: (3) VASH I'll never forget that look on your face when you thought I was offering you Jamaharon. Picard's eyes open. PICARD That was a simple misunderstanding. VASH (a beat) You did seem a little disappointed when I turned you down. Picard rises up on an elbow, leans towards Vash. PICARD You can be the most irritating woman sometimes. VASH (smiling) You're kind of prickly yourself. (a beat) Don't you see, we're a lot alike. That's probably why we get along so well. PICARD You call this getting along? VASH All right. We don't get along. She moves up into a reclining position alongside Picard... and now their faces are only inches apart. STAR TREK: "Captain's Holiday" - REV. 1/26/90 - ACT FOUR 44. 38 CONTINUED: (4) VASH (softly) But you do admit we're attracted to one another. A long beat of sexual tension and Picard's response is more an admission than a denial. PICARD Do I? VASH If you want to pretend otherwise, that's fine with me, but... But before she can continue, Picard moves forward that last inch and kisses her. VASH You still think I'm trouble? PICARD I'm sure of it. They kiss again... and it grows more passionate. She lowers him down over her. DISSOLVE TO: 39 OMITTED 39A INT. CAVERNS Picard and Vash hiking along. Picard wears the back pack. 40 INT. CAVERNS (OPTICAL) A vaulted cul-de-sac. Picard and Vash ENTER. Look around. Vash can barely contain her excitement as she consults her tricorder. VASH This is it. We've reached the end of our journey. PICARD Do you have an exact location? STAR TREK: "Captain's Holiday" - REV. 1/26/90 - ACT FOUR 44A. 40 CONTINUED: VASH (reading off the disc) Six meters in from the large outcropping. Picard and Vash find the outcropping. Picard paces off the distance. PICARD That should put it right about here. Vash scans the spot with her tricorder. A frown slips across her face. She scans the rest of the chamber, her frown deepening. PICARD Is something wrong? STAR TREK: "Captain's Holiday" - REV. 1/26/90 - ACT FOUR 45. 40 CONTINUED: (2) VASH I can't get a reading. There must be Starithium ore in these rocks. PICARD That leaves us but one alternative. He reaches into the pack and pulls out a collapsible shovel -- hands it to Vash. Then takes out another for himself. PICARD Shall we? Vash nods. Picard buries the shovel into the ground. At the moment of impact, the Vorgons MATERIALIZE into the chamber. (VORGON MATERIALIZATION EFFECT.) Vash reacts to the intrusion -- what new enemy is this? VASH (wielding her shovel; help) Picard! PICARD (seeing it's the Vorgons) A bit early, aren't you? AJUR We are here to witness a great moment, Picard. Vash looks over at Picard, demanding an explanation. VASH Who the hell are they? PICARD They're security officers from the twenty-seventh century. They're here to take back the Uthat. STAR TREK: "Captain's Holiday" - REV. 1/29/90 - ACT FOUR 46. 40 CONTINUED: (3) Vash is torn between amazement and anger. VASH You knew about this and didn't tell me? PICARD My apologies Vash... But if I had told you, would you have brought me here? VASH Probably not. PICARD My point exactly. SOVAK (O.S.) So the betrayer is herself betrayed. 41 NEW ANGLE (OPTICAL) Sovak ENTERS the vault carrying a phaser rifle at the ready. He reacts to the Vorgons. SOVAK (to Vash) You've put together quite a little team. Ajur advances towards Sovak. AJUR You must not interrupt Captain Picard... Sovak points the rifle at the Vorgon. SOVAK Quiet. Move back with the others. Ajur and Boratus comply and move closer to Picard and Vash. PICARD (coldly to Sovak) How did you get here? STAR TREK: "Captain's Holiday" - REV. 1/26/90 - ACT FOUR 47. 41 CONTINUED: SOVAK (proudly) I found the disc in her room. Picard looks over at Vash. Can this be true? VASH That's impossible. I made a copy as a precaution. But I burned it before we left. SOVAK Only the outer casing was incinerated. Now, I had no intention of interrupting you. Please... (harshly) Continue digging. A beat. Neither Picard or Vash move. Sovak FIRES the phaser rifle into the air. A defiant Vash drives her shovel into the dirt. Picard looks over at the Vorgons. No help there. For the time being, there's only one thing to do. And as Picard begins to dig, we: FADE OUT. END OF ACT FOUR STAR TREK: "Captain's Holiday" - REV. 1/29/90 - ACT FIVE 48. ACT FIVE FADE IN: 42 INT. CAVERN (OPTICAL) Picard climbs out of a hole that has grown waist deep and five feet wide. Vash continues to shovel away -- under the watchful eyes of the Vorgons and an increasingly anxious Sovak. SOVAK No one told you to stop digging, human. PICARD I see no reason to continue. Now Vash has stopped digging as well. Sovak fires a shot from the phaser rifle. SOVAK You will do as I say. Now pick up that shovel! PICARD Look around Sovak, by now it must be obvious even to you... the Uthat is not here. SOVAK Is this some pathetic attempt at trickery? Of course it's here. We simply haven't found it yet. Vash approaches Picard. VASH Are you saying the professor's findings were wrong? PICARD It would appear so. Picard's words seem to be making a strong impact on Vash. It's as if she's struggling to accept the truth. VASH (bewildered) But how could that be? His evidence was overwhelming. Sovak's rage and panic is building. STAR TREK: "Captain's Holiday" - REV. 1/26/90 - ACT FIVE 49. 42 CONTINUED: SOVAK Enough with this foolishness. (to Vash) Can't you see he's trying to deceive us? (to Picard) Return to work this instant! 43 NEW ANGLE (OPTICAL) Vash gives Sovak a sympathetic look. VASH I'm afraid he's right, Sovak. According to the disc we should have reached it hours ago. SOVAK (panic rising) Lies! Treachery! This cannot be happening. Not another failure. Not after having come so close. AJUR It is most puzzling. And with that, the Vorgons beam out. (VORGON TRANSPORTER EFFECT.) PICARD (firmly) It's over, Sovak. SOVAK No, I will not be cheated out of my prize. (to Vash) Tell him. Tell him the professor's research is irrefutable. VASH (her doubt's growing) I... I don't know anymore... SOVAK Then step aside... He grabs the shovel from Vash. STAR TREK: "Captain's Holiday" - REV. 1/26/90 - ACT FIVE 50. 43 CONTINUED: He throws away the phaser rifle and lowers himself into the hole. He begins digging frantically. SOVAK (continuing) The Uthat is here... somewhere... Just waiting to be found... It can't hide from me forever. He continues digging. 44 NEW ANGLE Picard and Vash watch this sorry spectacle for a beat and then turn to leave. 45 INT. LOBBY - EVENING It is nearly deserted. 45A INT. VASH'S ROOM Picard and Vash ENTER. Vash looks like a tired and defeated woman. VASH Five years of my life... wasted. PICARD There are other treasures to be found, Vash. Vash nods. She is trying to put up a brave front, but she is clearly devastated. VASH Not like the Uthat. (a beat) I hope you won't mind... but I need to be alone for awhile. PICARD I quite understand. Vash manages a smile. She kisses Picard on the cheek and he EXITS. STAR TREK: "Captain's Holiday" - REV. 1/26/90 - ACT FIVE 51. 46 INT. PICARD'S ROOM - NIGHT Picard, back in the clothes he wore when he first came to the Haven, is packing his travel bags. (NOTE: He is now wearing his communicator.) RIKER (COM VOICE) Enterprise to Picard. Picard keys his insignia. PICARD Picard here. INTERCUT TO: 47 INT. MAIN BRIDGE Riker at Command. Data and Worf at their usual stations. Supernumerary (Bennett) at Conn. RIKER I hope we're not interrupting anything important, Captain. I just wanted to inform you that we have achieved orbit around Risa and are ready to beam you up at your convenience. PICARD I will be returning shortly, Commander. In the interim, stand ready to initiate Transporter Code Fourteen at my signal. Riker reacts -- perhaps he misunderstood Picard. RIKER Transporter Code Fourteen? PICARD You heard me, Number One. RIKER Yes, sir. PICARD Picard out. END INTERCUT. STAR TREK: "Captain's Holiday" - REV. 1/26/90 - ACT FIVE 52. 48 INT. LOBBY - NIGHT Deserted, except for Vash who is dressed as in the teaser. She carries the back pack as she hurries toward the Horga'hn Shrine. PICARD (V.O.) Leaving so soon? A startled Vash whirls around to see: 49 VASH'S P.O.V. On Picard who has been waiting in a secluded area for just this moment. 50 BACK TO SCENE As Picard approaches, Vash manages to recover her poise. VASH Jean-Luc -- I was just about to come say good-bye. Picard plays it nonchalant, but he is carefully scrutinizing her reactions. PICARD Well then, I've saved you the bother. VASH I want to put all this behind me as soon as possible. You understand. PICARD Of course. However, there is one last thing you can do for me. VASH Anything. Picard leans forward in a confidential manner. STAR TREK: "Captain's Holiday" - REV. 1/29/90 - ACT FIVE 53. 50 CONTINUED: PICARD Show me where you've hidden the Tox Uthat. Vash stares back at him with a look of outraged innocence. VASH That's not funny, Jean-Luc. But Picard isn't interested in denials. PICARD You never intended to burn that second disc. If you had, you wouldn't have been so careless as to allow Sovak to salvage any of it. You wanted him to follow us so he could see for himself that the Uthat wasn't at the cave site. It was the only way to convince him your quest had been futile. VASH But how could I have known the Uthat wasn't there? PICARD Because you had gone there once before. Probably the moment you arrived on the planet. That's when you found it. A long beat before Vash finally answers. VASH (a reluctant smile) You're a man of many talents, Jean-Luc. She reaches over to the shrine and picks up one of the smaller Horga'hns. She hands the figure over to Picard. VASH Open it. Picard finds a hinge in the belly of the idol. He lifts up the top half. STAR TREK: "Captain's Holiday" - REV. 1/26/90 - ACT FIVE 53A. 51 HORGA'HN - E.C.U. As it splits open, we REVEAL the Tox Uthat, a gleaming crystal cube sitting in the belly of the statue. STAR TREK: "Captain's Holiday" - REV. 1/29/90 - ACT FIVE 54. 52 BACK TO SCENE VASH (admiring it) A piece of the future. PICARD A very dangerous piece. Were you really going to give it to the Daystom Institute? VASH Well, maybe not give it. (off his look) Five years is a huge investment, Jean-Luc. I deserve to make a reasonable profit. 53 NEW ANGLE (OPTICAL) As Boratus and Ajur MATERIALIZE (VORGON TRANSPORTER EFFECT). AJUR Congratulations Picard. We knew you would not fail us. Vash grabs hold of Picard's arm. VASH You're not going to just hand it over are you? (a beat) You didn't trust me... what makes you think you can trust them? PICARD I assume the Vorgons have proof to back up their claims. Picard's words are clearly intended as much for the Vorgons as for Vash. BORATUS Our being here is proof enough. And as Vash makes the connection -- VASH Wait a second, Vorgons? (MORE) STAR TREK: "Captain's Holiday" - REV. 1/29/90 - ACT FIVE 54A. 53 CONTINUED: VASH (Cont'd) According to the professor's notes, it was two Vorgons... a male and a female... who tried to steal the Uthat in the first place. For all we know it could be them. STAR TREK: "Captain's Holiday" - REV. 1/29/90 - ACT FIVE 55. 53 CONTINUED: (2) Picard confronts the Vorgons. His earlier suspicions now seemingly confirmed. PICARD You're going to have to prove you are who you say you are. Both Vorgons make no move to comply. AJUR As you yourself said, the Uthat belongs to the future. PICARD But not necessarily to you. Boratus points a weapon at Picard. BORATUS You will return what is ours, Picard. VASH No! Vash moves towards Boratus. The beam from the weapon hits her in the chest, pushing her backwards. Picard moves quickly -- placing the Uthat on the floor as he keys his communicator. PICARD Enterprise... Code Fourteen... Lock on present coordinates... three second delay... Mark! Picard moves away from the Uthat as Ajur runs towards it. And as Ajur reaches toward the Uthat it suddenly SHIMMERS in the TRANSPORTER EFFECT and then EXPLODES. 54 NEW ANGLE (OPTICAL) Picard helps a shaky Vash to her feet. PICARD Are you all right? STAR TREK: "Captain's Holiday" - REV. 1/26/90 - ACT FIVE 56. 54 CONTINUED: Picard, relieved to see she's not seriously injured, turns his attention to the Vorgons. PICARD (forcefully) Go. Return to your own time. There's nothing for you here. BORATUS History recorded that you destroyed the Uthat. AJUR You have fulfilled your destiny all too well, Picard. The Vorgons DEMATERIALIZE (VORGON TRANSPORTER EFFECT.) HOLD ON Picard and Vash. 55 INT. PICARD'S ROOM - NIGHT (OPTICAL) Vash is helping Picard pack his travel bags. VASH I don't suppose there are any openings for an archaeologist aboard the Enterprise. PICARD (smiling) Somehow I doubt you'd find life aboard a starship suitable to your taste. VASH Probably not. I could never tolerate all that discipline. PICARD What are your plans? VASH I thought I'd explore the ruins on Sarthong Five. No telling what I might find there. PICARD But the Sarthongians deal harshly with trespassers. STAR TREK: "Captain's Holiday" - REV. 1/26/90 - ACT FIVE 56A. 55 CONTINUED: VASH Why Jean-Luc, you really do care about me. STAR TREK: "Captain's Holiday" - REV. 1/29/90 - ACT FIVE 57. 55 CONTINUED: (2) Picard closes up his bags. And she's right. He is somewhat concerned. PICARD You will try and stay out of trouble. VASH I always try. But they both know she's not going to try very hard. And now there's nothing left to do but say good-bye. And it seems only natural for Picard to take her in his arms for a farewell kiss. Afterward -- VASH I wish we had more time together. PICARD (smiling) Perhaps we do. (off her questioning look) The Vorgons are time travelers. Now that they know where and when the Uthat can be found, they may very well come back and try for it again. VASH So we may be doing this all over again. A beat... Picard smiles... and Vash returns it. VASH Good-bye Jean-Luc. Picard nods in farewell. He keys his insignia. PICARD Picard to Transporter Room. One to beam up. Picard and Vash exchange a final glance before the TRANSPORTER EFFECT beams Picard away. STAR TREK: "Captain's Holiday" - REV. 1/29/90 - ACT FIVE 57A. 56 INT BRIDGE Riker and Troi greet Picard as he ENTERS from the turbolift. He is back in uniform and in a far better mood than when he returned from Gemaris. RIKER Welcome aboard, Captain. STAR TREK: "Captain's Holiday" - REV. 1/26/90 - ACT FIVE 58. 56 CONTINUED: PICARD Thank you, Commander. Status report. RIKER All went well on Starbase twelve. I think you'll find the ship to be in splendid condition. PICARD I'll present my compliments to the crew. Oh yes... and Number One... about that Horga'hn you requested. RIKER (feigning innocence) Yes, sir... PICARD We need to have a little chat about that. Riker tries unsuccessfully to suppress his grin. Picard heads for his Ready Room. TROI Was it a relaxing trip, Captain? He gives Troi a look that says -- you don't know the half of it. As the doors close behind him: RIKER (beaming) I knew he'd have a great time. 57 EXT. SPACE - THE ENTERPRISE (OPTICAL) Warps out of orbit. STAR TREK: "Captain's Holiday" - REV. 1/29/90 - ACT FIVE 59. 58 INT. RISIAN LOBBY (RE-DO OF SCENE 1) We are back in time to the opening of the show. Everything is exactly like it was in the first shot of the Teaser. 59 NEW ANGLE (RE-DO OF SCENE 2) (OPTICAL) As before, the Vorgons MATERIALIZE by one of the entranceways. The Vorgons glance curiously around the lobby then make their way over to a nearby wall grid. Ajur places her palm on an adjoining sensor panel which glows at her touch. COMPUTER (V.O.) Welcome to Risa. All that is ours is yours. AJUR We are looking for the lodging chamber of Captain Jean-Luc Picard. COMPUTER (V.O.) A file scan reveals no record of a Captain Picard currently visiting Risa. Boratus turns to Ajur. BORATUS We're early. AJUR Again. And their look implies that this time they are determined to be successful. FADE OUT. END OF ACT FIVE THE END STAR TREK: THE NEXT GENERATION "Tin Man" #40273-168 Written by Dennis Putman Bailey & David Bischoff Directed by Robert Scheerer THE WRITING CREDITS MAY NOT BE FINAL AND SHOULD NOT BE USED FOR PUBLICITY OR ADVERTISING PURPOSES WITHOUT FIRST CHECKING WITH THE TELEVISION LEGAL DEPARTMENT. Copyright 1990 Paramount Pictures Corporation. All Rights Reserved. This script is not for publication or reproduction. No one is authorized to dispose of same. If lost or destroyed, please notify the Script Department. FINAL DRAFT JANUARY 31, 1990 STAR TREK: "Tin Man" - 1/31/90 - CAST STAR TREK: THE NEXT GENERATION "Tin Man" CAST PICARD TAM ELBRUN RIKER CAPTAIN JONATHAN DESOTO DATA ROMULAN COMMANDER BEVERLY TROI GEORDI WORF WESLEY O'BRIEN COMPUTER VOICE Non-Speaking SUPERNUMERARIES ENGINEERING TECHNICIANS STAR TREK: "Tin Man" 1/31/90 - SETS STAR TREK: THE NEXT GENERATION "Tin Man" SETS INTERIORS EXTERIORS USS ENTERPRISE USS ENTERPRISE MAIN BRIDGE CAPTAIN'S READY ROOM USS HOOD TRANSPORTER ROOM CORRIDOR ROMULAN WARBIRDS TURBOLIFT OBSERVATION LOUNGE TIN MAN SICKBAY/CRUSHER'S OFFICE TAM'S GUEST QUARTERS DATA'S QUARTERS MAIN ENGINEERING TEN-FORWARD TIN MAN ("GOMTUU") PILOT'S CHAMBER CORRIDOR USS HOOD CAPTAIN'S READY ROOM ROMULAN WARBIRD CAPTAIN'S READY ROOM STAR TREK: "Tin Man" - 1/31/90 - PRONUNCIATION STAR TREK: THE NEXT GENERATION "Tin Man" PRONUNCIATION GUIDE HAYASHI NEBULA ha-YAH-she TAM ELBRUN TAM EL-brun GHORUSDA gor-OOSH-dah BETA STROMGREN STRUM-gren CHANDRA FIVE CHON-druh GOMTUU GOM-too STAR TREK: "Tin Man" - REV. 2/6/90 - TEASER 1-2. STAR TREK: THE NEXT GENERATION "Tin Man" TEASER FADE IN: 1 EXT. SPACE - THE ENTERPRISE (OPTICAL) moving at warp. PICARD (V.O.) Captain's log, Stardate 43779.3. The Enterprise is preparing detailed atmospheric charts of the Hayashi system. Although tedious, this endeavor is the first step toward planet colonization. 2 INT. ENTERPRISE - MAIN BRIDGE - WIDE ANGLE PICARD and RIKER at Command. WORF and TROI are at their stations. DATA and WESLEY are at Ops and Conn. Data reacts to something on the Ops panel. DATA Sensors report the USS Hood closing on an intercept course at high warp. PICARD That's odd... I wasn't notified of a rendezvous. RIKER They seem to be in an awful hurry. WORF Sir, we are being hailed on a secured channel by Captain DeSoto. PICARD On screen. STAR TREK: "Tin Man" - REV. 2/6/90 - TEASER 3. 3 thru OMITTED 5 6 WIDE ANGLE FAVORING MAIN VIEWER (OPTICAL) TIGHT ANGLE ON DESOTO in the Hood's Ready Room. DESOTO Sorry to sneak up on you like that, Jean-Luc -- PICARD Robert, why didn't you inform us -- DESOTO -- Out here, you never know who's listening. Keeps you on your toes, anyway. Hey, Will, you getting soft on that luxury liner? Riker grins. Picard is still puzzled. PICARD So, old friend. How are you? DESOTO Ah, you know, they send you Galaxy-Class boys out here to the far reaches. Me, I'm hauling my butt back and forth between starbases -- STAR TREK: "Tin Man" - REV. 2/6/90 - TEASER 4. 7 ANGLE ON PICARD Smiling to Riker and Troi; DeSoto's put-on griping is an old song going back to when he and Picard served together as lieutenants. PICARD But not today. 8 CROSSCUTTING FROM BRIDGE TO MAIN VIEWER AS NECESSARYY (OPTICAL) DESOTO Nope. Starfleet's got new orders for you. This is top priority. They need the fastest ship in the fleet -- and the best people. That's you. PICARD If time is so important, why didn't they transmit the orders by subspace? DESOTO They're worried about Romulan eavesdropping on this one. And we've got a passenger for you. Hard to send by subspace. PICARD What sort of passenger? DESOTO Mission specialist. He'll bring your orders aboard with him. Name's Tam Elbrun. RIKER (startled) Elbrun? You mean Tam Elbrun as in the Ghorusda disaster? STAR TREK: "Tin Man" - REV. 2/7/90 - TEASER 5. 8 CONTINUED: DESOTO The same. (sighing) What can I say? Your orders are to cooperate fully with him. 9 REACTION SHOT OF TROI clearly distressed at the discussion of Elbrun. DESOTO (continuing) Best of luck, folks. Hood out. 10 BACK TO SHOT A view of space replaces DeSoto's image. DATA Sir, the Hood is slowing to impulse. Picard rises, looks dubiously at the others. Most of whom clearly know the name Elbrun. PICARD Mister Data, come with me -- 11 ANGLE ON TROI who steps anxiously toward Picard. TROI Captain, let me come with you to greet Tam -- PICARD You know him? 12 CLOSE ON TROI TROI I do... He was at the university on Betazed when I studied psychology there. PICARD Ah, I see. He was a colleague, then. STAR TREK: "Tin Man" - REV. 2/6/90 - TEASER 6. 12 CONTINUED: TROI No, sir. He was a patient... Off Picard's reaction. FADE OUT. END OF TEASER STAR TREK: "Tin Man" - REV. 2/2/90 - ACT ONE 7. ACT ONE FADE IN: 13 EXT. SPACE - THE ENTERPRISE AND U.S.S. HOOD (OPTICAL) running at impulse speed. 14 INT. CORRIDOR - TRACKING SHOT - PICARD, TROI AND DATA ENTERING the Transporter Room. TROI Tam is a telepath of extraordinary talent, even for a Betazoid. He's a specialist in first contact with new life-forms, and... a rather unique person. (a beat) He's not what you might expect, Captain. Troi and Picard EXIT into Transporter Room. Off Data's puzzled expression as he follows them. 15 INT. TRANSPORTER ROOM (OPTICAL) O'Brien behind console, as Tam Elbrun MATERIALIZES on the transporter. He's a mid-thirties Betazoid, with wide, dark eyes. He appears nervous. Informally dressed, not at all officious. STAR TREK: "Tin Man" - REV. 2/7/90 - ACT ONE 8. 15 CONTINUED: PICARD Welcome aboard the Enterprise. I'm -- TAM Captain Picard. Here -- Tam reaches into his pocket and produces a data cassette. He flips it casually to Picard as he steps down. Picard catches it, annoyed. Tam's attitude is abrupt and rude. TAM (continuing) You want to know all about your mission. Everything's on there. Orders and briefings. Destination and heading, all that. 16 ANGLE ON PICARD AND DATA standing by transporter console. Picard is visibly annoyed. He hands the cassette to Data, who accepts it and steps toward Tam as if to ask a question. TAM (to Troi) I sensed you were out here. How've you been? 17 ANGLE ON TROI TROI (embarrassed by Tam's tactlessness, she still can't help smiling) Fine, but Tam, I... TAM TROI Thought you were on ... thought you were on Chandra Five. Chandra Five. They laugh -- this is a familiar routine to them both. Data now has come to stand behind Tam, unnoticed. STAR TREK: "Tin Man" - REV. 2/2/90 - ACT ONE 9. 17 CONTINUED: DATA Sir -- Tam whirls on Data as if a rocket just went off behind him. NO ONE has EVER approached Tam Elbrun without his awareness. Until now. TAM Who -- what are you? DATA (puzzled) My name is Data. Tam locks gazes with Troi, READING the answers he wants from HER MIND. Then he looks back at Data, fascinated as a child with a new toy. TAM Incredible, an android. I can't read you at all. It's like you're not there. Data frowns, puzzled. Tam notices the cassette in the android's hand. TAM Oh. You better hurry up to the bridge with that. Captain wants you to run the orders, scan the technical schematics, and be ready to brief him in ten minutes. (to Picard) Right? Picard activates his communicator. PICARD Number One? RIKER'S COM VOICE Riker here. PICARD Meet Mister Data on the bridge. He has our orders and new heading. RIKER Aye, sir. Picard nods to Data. Data EXITS. STAR TREK: "Tin Man" - REV. 2/2/90 - ACT ONE 10. 17 CONTINUED: (2) PICARD (continuing) And assemble the bridge staff for a mission briefing in -- fifteen minutes. Picard out. (to Tam) Mister Elbrun. Would you -- TAM (flatly) Like to see my quarters. No. I'd rather get this briefing over with. Then be left alone until I'm needed. Tam EXITS. Troi looks apologetically at Picard, who is severe. They exit together after Tam. 18 EXT. SPACE - THE ENTERPRISE AND U.S.S HOOD (OPTICAL) as the Hood veers away to starboard, leaving the Enterprise. The Enterprise turns. 19 INT. CORRIDOR - TRACKING SHOT - RIKER AND GEORDI are walking to turbolift. GEORDI I've heard something about Ghorusda. Weren't about forty people killed -- RIKER Forty-seven, including the captain of the Adelphi -- and two friends from my class at the Academy. GEORDI Sorry. What happened? Riker and Geordi step into turbolift. The doors close. 20 INT. TURBOLIFT - RIKER AND GEORDI RIKER It was a first contact situation. STAR TREK: "Tin Man" - REV. 2/6/90 - ACT ONE 11. 20 CONTINUED: RIKER The Ghorusdans values are so complex, and so different, that the Federation sent along a specialist. To prevent misunderstanding. GEORDI That was Tam Elbrun? And what happened was his fault? Riker considers a moment, before answering. RIKER Not directly. Board of inquiry blamed Captain Darson's carelessness about Ghorusdan cultural taboos. (pause) But if Elbrun's so good, why didn't he warn Darson? What was he there for, if he couldn't sense that much hostility? 21 INT. MAIN BRIDGE (OPTICAL) Data is at Science One. Worf at Tactical. Supernumeraries at all other stations. Data is loading the data chip. Geordi and Riker stand at Data's shoulder. DATA Commander, Geordi... do you ever feel as if I am not "there?" That is to say... not "here." Reactions from others. Geordi clasps Data's shoulders as if testing his solidness. GEORDI You seem to be all here. Data considers this, then turns his attention to the screen where the information is appearing. STAR TREK: "Tin Man" - REV. 2/6/90 - ACT ONE 12. 21 CONTINUED: DATA Our destination is the Beta Stromgren system, following the path of the Vega Nine probe. RIKER That's twenty-three parsecs beyond our furthest manned explorations. DATA That is correct, Commander. Apparently the probe has discovered... (a beat, reacting to something he sees on the screen) ...Astonishing. 22 INT. OBSERVATION LOUNGE Present are Picard, Riker, Geordi, Troi, Data, Worf and Tam Elbrun. Tam is seated next to Data. NOTE: throughout this scene Tam should appear distracted by pain, as from a bad headache. STAR TREK: "Tin Man" - REV. 2/2/90 - ACT ONE 13. 23 CLOSE ON SCREEN (OPTICAL) of a RED SUPERGIANT STAR. Flashing around it in close orbit is a TINY, BRILLIANT WHITE light. DATA This is the star Beta Stromgren... 24 PULL BACK TO SHOW OUR PEOPLE AND TAM SEATED AROUND TABLE DATA (continuing) Scientists have discovered that it is in the final stages of an alternating cycle of expansion and collapse, which will soon result in a supernova. (beat) However, the long-range unmanned probe which Starfleet sent to observe the process has discovered something much more -- TAM (exasperated) Oh, Data -- don't waste time. Tam reaches past a startled Data and PUNCHES the projector CONTROLS. The screen FREEZES its motion. A FRAME APPEARS around the star's tiny companion, and the framed area is MAGNIFIED to REPLACE the star image. 25 CLOSE ON SCREEN (OPTICAL) The new image is a SLENDER OBJECT which PULSES WITH LIGHT, of organic appearance. At the aft end of the object are two GLOWING ORANGE GRIDS -- clearly ENGINES. The whole surface of the thing is NETWORKED by faintly pulsing pale white ENERGY PATHS, suggesting something between lightning charges and a human circulatory system. TAM They call it "Tin Man". The Vega Probe found it orbiting Stromgren. STAR TREK: "Tin Man" - REV. 2/2/90 - ACT ONE 14. 26 BACK TO SHOT (OPTICAL) GEORDI Looks like a ship of some kind. TAM Its energy source is unknown. The people who've studied the transmissions think it's a starship. And they're sure it's alive. PICARD (immediately fascinated) Alive? How so? GEORDI A cybernetic organism -- like the Borg? TAM No, no, NO! Here -- Tam manipulates the projector controls again. Data looks on, bemused, as the image on the screen is replaced by rotating multi-plane artwork representing interior diagrams and schematics of Tin Man. TAM Starfleet believes it's an organic creature, born in space, living its life in the wastes between stars. Tam RISES, WINCING slightly, and PACES the room, growing more excited as he speaks. Troi notices his discomfort. TAM (continuing) No one knows where it came from, or why it's here now. And we're going to meet it. We're going to talk to it. (softly, as if to himself) I'm going to talk to it. Riker regards Tam dubiously. RIKER Have attempts been made -- STAR TREK: "Tin Man" - REV. 2/6/90 - ACT ONE 15. 26 CONTINUED: TAM To communicate with it by subspace. Of course -- linguacode, universal translation, all that. It won't work. Tin Man is too different. Direct mind-to-mind contact is our only hope. TROI The opportunity for discovery is extraordinary -- but I don't yet understand Starfleet's urgency -- Tam turns to Troi, a little blankly -- the telepath is lost in imagination. PICARD The Romulans -- TAM Hell, I forgot -- the Romulans... PICARD They claim the sector of space in which Beta Stromgren is located. WORF The Romulans claim all that is within their field of vision. DATA And they routinely monitor the telemetry of our deep-space probes. PICARD So it's quite certain they'll be sending a ship of their own to investigate this Tin Man. STAR TREK: "Tin Man" - REV. 2/6/90 - ACT ONE 16. 26 CONTINUED: (2) TAM No... Actually, they're sending two. Uh, Data -- Riker reacts -- concerned. DATA That is correct. Starbase one twenty-three detected two D'daridex class cruisers on an intercept course. (to Picard) The top speed of this class vessel is known to be less than our own, sir. We therefore have some advantage. PICARD So, it's a race? (thoughtfully) An alien intelligence -- a new life-form -- representing a technology far beyond that of either the Romulans or ourselves. The Romulans will take whatever measures -- military or otherwise -- are required to secure the creature for study. GEORDI Study as in dissect, I'd bet. STAR TREK: "Tin Man" - REV. 2/2/90 - ACT ONE 17. 27 ANGLE ON PICARD PICARD Data, you're our resident honor student in exobiology. I'm assigning you to head up life sciences on this mission. DATA Yes, sir. TAM Excellent. PICARD Meeting adjourned, then. Everyone but Picard, Tam, Data and Riker EXIT. TAM So, Data -- I guess you're the brains of this outfit, huh? PICARD Mister Elbrun -- one reason I want you to work closely with a member of my staff is to avoid any further... omissions. The possibility of an encounter with Romulans on this mission is hardly trivial. Yet you -- TAM (interrupting) All right, all right... I should have brought up the Romulans earlier, but I was distracted. Riker looks annoyed. Tam reads his thoughts, and turns to glare at him. TAM (to Riker) And no, Billy boy, I wasn't "distracted" on Ghorusda. (MORE) STAR TREK: "Tin Man" - REV. 2/2/90 - ACT ONE 18. 27 CONTINUED: TAM (Cont'd) If Darson had listened to me, no one would have died. And I don't care whether you believe that or not. Tam EXITS angrily, leaving Riker, Picard and Data doubtful and concerned. FADE OUT. END OF ACT ONE STAR TREK: "Tin Man" - REV. 2/6/90 - ACT TWO 19. ACT TWO FADE IN: 29 EXT. SPACE - THE ENTERPRISE (OPTICAL) Traveling at warp speed. PICARD (V.O.) Captain's log, Stardate 43782.6. Travelling at top warp, we are still several days from rendezvous with the mysterious entity which Starfleet has christened Tin Man. 30 INT. SICKBAY - BEVERLY'S OFFICE - WIDE SHOT Picard and Troi are present. BEVERLY is at her desk, consulting the computer terminal. PICARD (V.O.) (continuing) My immediate concern is with Tam Elbrun. Starfleet considers his unique abilities crucial to our mission. Yet he seems to me... unstable. BEVERLY Well, according to his medical records and psych profile, he's very high on the ESP scale. A sort of prodigy. PICARD A prodigy? In what sense? TROI In most Betazoids their telepathic gifts develop at adolescence. PICARD They're not born reading minds? STAR TREK: "Tin Man" - REV. 2/6/90 - ACT TWO 20. 30 CONTINUED: TROI No. Except... for some reason that no one understands, occasionally a Betazoid child is born different. PICARD How "different?" TROI Born with their telepathic abilities "switched on." Most Betazoids born like that never lead a normal life. BEVERLY (understanding now) The noise of other people's thoughts and feelings must be... overwhelming. Incomprehensible... especially for a child. TROI And painful. Early diagnosis and special training helped Tam adjust -- but he has some problems. PICARD (to Troi) You mentioned a hospitalization -- STAR TREK: "Tin Man" - REV. 2/6/90 - ACT TWO 21. 30 CONTINUED: (2) TROI (nodding) For stress. Repeatedly, throughout his life. BEVERLY I always wonder... what holds one person together through that kind of struggle, while another goes under? PICARD Yes, well, he's evidently done more than "hold together". He's the indispensable man -- the Federation's finest specialist in communication with unknown life-forms. BEVERLY It looks like the more unusual a life form is, the better he likes it. His personnel file shows that he's gravitated toward assignments that isolate him from other humanoids. 31 INT. MAIN BRIDGE - WIDE ANGLE Data at Command, Worf at Security, Wesley Crusher at Conn. Geordi is monitoring the bridge Engineering Aft Station. Supernumeraries at all other stations. WESLEY Commander Data, I'm picking up an unusual echo from my navigational sensors. Worf looks up from his security board. WORF There is something there, sir, tracking us -- matching our speed and heading. Something which doesn't fully register on our instruments. STAR TREK: "Tin Man" - REV. 2/6/90 - ACT TWO 22. 32 ANGLE ON DATA as he consults the back-up Conn panel on his command chair. DATA Since there is no known natural phenomenon capable of travel at warp velocities, there are but two possibilities: either it is a sensor malfunction, or it is another ship, following us covertly. WORF It is not a sensor malfunction. 33 BACK TO SHOT as Data RISES and WALKS toward the MAIN VIEWER, concerned. DATA Agreed. WESLEY A Romulan ship? With their cloaking device, we shouldn't pick them up at all. GEORDI Unless they're pulling so much power for something else that they can't fully cloak. WESLEY Like what? GEORDI (shrugging) Ask the Romulans... if it is the Romulans. DATA Lieutenant, continue monitoring the precise position of the echo -- at any sudden change in its behavior, initiate Yellow Alert. WORF Aye, sir. STAR TREK: "Tin Man" - REV. 2/6/90 - ACT TWO 23. 34 INT. TAM ELBRUN'S GUEST QUARTERS (OPTICAL) - TAM is STANDING by the long WINDOW, face half-away from the camera, watching the STARS STREAK BY at warp. Lights in his cabin are low; he is lost in the depths until: TAM Come in. He says this a moment BEFORE the DOOR CHIME SOUNDS and Deanna Troi ENTERS. Tam does NOT look to see who it is. TAM How're things in the land of the living? Now he turns to look at her, smiling. TROI I thought you might be lonely. No one sees you, except Data. TAM Lonely? I can hear everything that everyone on this ship thinks. (a beat) No one besides you seems to be missing my charming -- TROI (interrupting, annoyed) You want them to dislike you. Why? Tam TURNS away. TAM (sarcastic) Because I'm not a nice guy? (a beat) Okay -- because they scare me. STAR TREK: "Tin Man" - REV. 2/6/90 - ACT TWO 24. 35 ANGLE ON TAM as he crosses and SLUMPS wearily into a chair. TAM (continuing) Too many minds, Deanna. I can't shut them out -- never could learn. All their loves, their hates, their fears, their... needs. It's like a tide that never ebbs. (pause) I could drown. Troi walks to Tam and places a sympathetic hand on his shoulder -- TROI I remember. TAM (smiling in remembrance.) You understood -- at least a little -- how I felt. (indicates the ship) I see you finally found a place to fit... people to care about... TROI And you're still looking. TAM (he stands and begins to pace) Then there's Ghorusda. I've got enough doubts about my... reliability... without having to listen to Riker's, and Picard's -- TROI What happened there? TAM I thought everyone knew -- TROI No. What happened to you? STAR TREK: "Tin Man" - REV. 2/2/90 - ACT TWO 24A. 35 CONTINUED: TAM Maybe... I got too involved with the Ghorusdans, with their point of view. It happens to me. I wanted everyone to get along. I could have warned Darson more forcefully. TROI So after that, you ran away? The last I heard, you were the only Federation delegate assigned to Chandra Five. STAR TREK: "Tin Man" - REV. 2/2/90 - ACT TWO 25. 35 CONTINUED: (2) TAM Beautiful creatures, the Chandrans. Their minds are glacial. They have a lovely three-day ritual for saying "hello." Peaceful, untroubled people... TROI Unlike humanoids? TAM Well, except for your friend Data. I like him. He's... restful. Troi tries vainly to suppress a smile. TROI I believe your impression of Data is probably unique. TAM Yeah? Well, having to get to know someone, just once, has its appeal. I mean, talking to them, instead of getting it all at once up here -- (Tam taps his forehead) -- whether I want it or not. TROI But you accepted this mission. You could have stayed on Chandra Five. You willingly came aboard a ship of over a thousand people -- TAM How could I not? Think of it, Dee. This intelligence that swims naked through space like a fish in the sea. Totally alien, mysterious -- not like us at all. Ancient. And alone. (quietly, as if to himself) So lonely, for so long. TROI (concerned) How can you know that? Tam? STAR TREK: "Tin Man" - REV. 2/2/90 - ACT TWO 26. 35 CONTINUED: (3) Tam LOOKS AWAY toward the cabin WINDOWS, where the stars stream by. Troi's eyes widen as she senses the TRUTH, from his silence and his mind. TROI You're in contact with it. With Tin Man. Aren't you? TAM No -- well... yes. A little. Not quite on a conscious level. TROI But we're still light-years away. That must be impossible -- even for you. 36 CLOSE ON TAM TAM (shrugging) Impossible for me. Maybe not impossible for Tin Man. 37 EXT. SPACE - THE ENTERPRISE (OPTICAL) coming out of warp. 38 INT. MAIN BRIDGE - WIDE ANGLE High activity - Wesley Crusher and Data at CONN and OPS, Worf at Security, Riker at Command. Supernumeraries monitor Science I and Science II as the crew prepares for its first contact with the Alien. Picard ENTERS from his Ready Room. PICARD Status, Number One? Riker STANDS and yields command chair to Picard. RIKER We've reached the outer regions of the Beta Stromgren system, sir. On course for orbital intercept of Tin Man, e.t.a. eighteen minutes. PICARD Grand. STAR TREK: "Tin Man" - REV. 2/8/90 - ACT TWO 27. 38 CONTINUED: RIKER Not altogether. Astrophysics reports that the star's rate of collapse is increasing -- it could go supernova within the next few days. DATA Captain, we are receiving relayed sensor data, from the Vega Probe -- including visuals. PICARD On screen, Mister Data. 39 ANGLE ON MAIN VIEWER (OPTICAL) where the curve of the SUPERGIANT STAR fills half of the screen. TIN MAN sweeps majestically into view, shimmering with the silver iridescence of an otherworldly fish. As it sails past the viewer POV, the fire of its engines can be seen. Tin Man is at least the size of the Enterprise. Picard RISES, gazing transfixed at the alien image on the Main Viewer. PICARD Magnify. The image of Tin Man becomes larger. PICARD Remarkable. Computer -- locate Tam Elbrun. COMPUTER VOICE Tam Elbrun is in Turbolift One, en route to the Main Bridge. PICARD Of course. 40 ANGLE FAVORING AFT STATIONS as Worf, in foreground, FROWNS over his security board. In background, Tam and Troi ENTER from aft turbolift. WORF Commander... Riker WALKS UP ramp to stand by Worf. STAR TREK: "Tin Man" - REV. 2/7/90 - ACT TWO 28. 40 CONTINUED: RIKER Problem, Worf? WORF Sir, I am reading a wave front of ionized particles preceding the object which is tracking us. RIKER (nodding) Go to Yellow Alert. PICARD On screen. 41 thru OMITTED 42 43 ANGLE ON MAIN VIEWER (OPTICAL) as a ROMULAN WARBIRD UNCLOAKS. 43A INT. MAIN BRIDGE Off the shocked reactions of the crew. FADE OUT. END OF ACT TWO STAR TREK: "Tin Man" - REV. 2/6/90 - ACT THREE 29. ACT THREE FADE IN: 44 EXT. SPACE - THE ENTERPRISE AND ROMULAN SHIP (OPTICAL) The Romulan warbird comes up behind the Enterprise. 45 INT. MAIN BRIDGE - WIDE ANGLE as before. WORF Romulan warbird, closing. (pause) They're arming main distruptors, Captain. PICARD Go to Red Alert -- shields at maximum. KLAXONS SOUND and red alarm lights flash. RIKER Worf, arm photon torpedoes and stand by. WORF Aye, sir. RIKER (to Data) I thought you said the Enterprise was faster than this Romulan -- DATA In fact, we are, Commander. However -- Tam is INTENT upon the viewer. PICARD Evasive, Mister Worf. Data, open hailing frequencies -- TAM I guarantee that they don't want to talk to you, Captain. STAR TREK: "Tin Man" - REV. 2/6/90 - ACT THREE 30. 46 thru OMITTED 47 48 INT. MAIN BRIDGE - WIDE ANGLE The crew is SHAKEN -- main LIGHTING FAILS as the TORPEDOES EXPLODE against the ship's shields. 48A EXT. SPACE - ENTERPRISE AND ROMULAN VESSEL (OPTIZCAL) as the Romulan fires another spread of photon torpedoes at the Enterprise. It then flies over the Enterprise, away from us and towards the Tin Man, recloaking as it goes. 49 thru OMITTED 51 52 REVERSE WIDE ANGLE ON BRIDGE WORF The Romulan has passed us, sir, and recloaked. PICARD Damage report. WORF No casualties reported. Seventy percent loss to main shields, sir. Tam approaches Picard again. TAM Captain, their attack on us was incidental. PICARD Incidental? TAM Yes. To delay us. DATA Captain, it would appear that the Romulan's intent is to contact Tin Man first, at any cost. (MORE) STAR TREK: "Tin Man" - REV. 2/6/90 - ACT THREE 31. 52 CONTINUED: DATA (Cont'd) (pause) According to my sensor readings, the warbird exceeded maximum engine output by nearly thirty percent... They appear to have suffered irreparable damage to their warp coils. Riker takes his chair. RIKER So -- they kept up with us by sacrificing their ability to return to Romulan space. PICARD A one-way trip. Tam paces nervously between the Main Viewer and Picard. TAM There is one more trailing us, Captain -- a day or two behind. Data's right -- this one's job is to beat us to Tin Man at any cost. Picard eyes Tam skeptically. PICARD You read all this, telepathically -- TAM -- In the mind of the Romulan commander, during the attack. Picard exchanges looks with Riker -- can Tam be that good? Evidently so. PICARD Very well, then. Mister Crusher all stop. WESLEY Aye, sir. PICARD Commander La Forge. STAR TREK: "Tin Man" - REV. 2/9/90 - ACT THREE 32. 52 CONTINUED: (2) GEORDI'S COM VOICE La Forge here. 53 INT. MAIN ENGINEERING Geordi is leaning over a console, locating a burnout. PICARD'S COM VOICE Geordi -- how long to restore shields? GEORDI Working on it. Computer, reconfigure structural integrity power to feed inner deflector grid. COMPUTER VOICE Unable to comply. Requested reroute would compromise operational safety limits. GEORDI To hell with the limits. Override. Authorization La Forge theta two-nine-nine-seven. COMPUTER VOICE Rerouting structural integrity power supply. GEORDI (yells to supernumerary in next room) Russell! Watch the lateral grid balance. (looks at panel) Nope, too much. We gotta do it manually. (keys insignia) La Forge to bridge. PICARD'S COM VOICE Go ahead. GEORDI Captain, I'm trying to feed the inner grid by stealing some power from the structural integrity field. You should have partial shielding in thirty minutes. STAR TREK: "Tin Man" - REV. 2/9/90 - ACT THREE 32A. 53 CONTINUED: PICARD'S COM VOICE You have ten. 54 INT. MAIN BRIDGE - WIDE ANGLE PICARD Picard out. (to the group in general) The Romulans wish the honor of the first contact, let them have it. The others REACT in various STARTLED ways. Tam is almost in a panic. TAM You're out of your mind, Picard! What if the Romulans find a way to persuade Tin Man -- PICARD I think the chances of that are remote. And, Mister Elbrun, if you'll be still you may learn -- TAM What? PICARD That being first, at any cost, is not always the point. (MORE) STAR TREK: "Tin Man" - REV. 2/6/90 - ACT THREE 33. 54 CONTINUED: PICARD (Cont'd) (pause) Data, while we await repairs, I want Life Sciences and Engineering to continue collecting information on the alien. Query the Vega Nine probe, and the long-range sensors. DATA Yes, sir. 55 INT. DATA'S QUARTERS - WIDE ANGLE (OPTICAL) as Data and Tam ENTER together. Data SITS at his large computer workstation and ACTIVATES it. Tam WANDERS around the room CURIOUSLY. TAM You do a lot of your work here? Data, in ANALYSIS mode, ABSORBS INFORMATION as it FLASHES on screen before him. DATA Yes. I have configured these instruments to display information with greater speed and efficiency than stations used by the others. TAM Nice. A little Spartan. DATA Spartan? TAM Lots of work space, not much room to live. I don't guess you sleep? DATA (still working) I have tried it, from time to time. But you are correct. I do not require rest. Tam walks over to an easel with a COVERED PAINTING on it, and lifts one corner of the cloth appraisingly. STAR TREK: "Tin Man" - REV. 2/6/90 - ACT THREE 34. 55 CONTINUED: TAM But you paint. Data has an uncomfortable sense of being EVALUATED. He changes the subject. DATA The creature's anatomy appears most peculiar. TAM In what way? DATA It is indeed laid out as a vessel, with what appear to be corridors and chambers. An internal environment suitable for carbon based life forms is being maintained. Yet there is no evidence of a crew aboard. (thoughtful) Tin Man is a living being yet it was bred or adapted itself to serve a purpose. I find that very interesting. Tam LEANS across the work station, to regard Data intently. TAM Why? Must living beings have a purpose? Or do we exist for no reason but to exist? DATA I do not believe I am qualified to express an opinion. TAM Ah, Data -- you're uniquely qualified. You think a great deal about humanity -- and you're an honest researcher. You don't treat anything as trivial, or irrelevant. You want to try it all. STAR TREK: "Tin Man" - REV. 2/4/90 - ACT THREE 35. 55 CONTINUED: (2) Data shuts off his computer and RISES, INTRIGUED by Tam. DATA You said in the Transporter Room that you could not read my mind. TAM True enough. But I think I understand you pretty well. (pause) It worries you -- that I can't read your mind? DATA (quietly) Perhaps there is nothing to read. Nothing other than mechanism and algorithmic response -- TAM Perhaps you're just different. Not a sin, you know -- though you may have heard otherwise. 56 CLOSE ON DATA considering Tam's words. STAR TREK: "Tin Man" - REV. 2/7/90 - ACT THREE 36. 57 thru OMITTED 58 59 INT. MAIN BRIDGE Picard at Command. Troi, Riker, Wesley, Data, and Worf at their stations. Supernumeraries at Science Aft Stations. Tam Elbrun standing on ramp near Troi. DATA Captain, the Romulan ship is hailing the alien using their equivalent of linguacode. RIKER Response? DATA None so far, Commander. TAM Why should it answer? What can it have in common with them? RIKER But you're so sure it'll "talk" to you. TAM (smug) Well, I -- WORF (interrupting) Captain, the Romulans are arming all disruptors. 60 ANGLE ON PICARD PICARD Yellow Alert. Prepare for evasive action at the first change in the Romulans' course. STAR TREK: "Tin Man" - REV. 2/6/90 - ACT THREE 37. 61 ANGLE ON RIKER RIKER With our shields in their present condition, we can't risk -- 62 ANGLE ON TAM TAM No! EYES WIDE, he steps toward the Main Viewer, FRANTIC. TAM We're not the target. It's Tin Man -- PICARD What do you mean? They intend to destroy it? TAM (acknowledges) Those are their orders if they can't secure the alien. 63 ANGLE ON PICARD PICARD (to Wesley) Increase speed to intercept the Romulans. 64 ANGLE ON WESLEY as he consults his instruments, then looks to Picard with a shake of his head. WESLEY Their lead is too great. 65 CLOSE ON PICARD PICARD Worf, hail them. I cannot allow -- STAR TREK: "Tin Man" - REV. 2/4/90 - ACT THREE 38. 66 BACK TO WIDE ANGLE TAM (interrupting, panicked) They won't listen to you! Tam LOOKS from Picard to the Main Viewer, like a TRAPPED ANIMAL looking for a place to FLEE -- or to MAKE A STAND. With sudden resolution he steps past the forward stations and stands directly before the Main Viewer. 67 EXTREME CLOSE-UP ON TAM EYES CLOSED; a look of pained CONCENTRATION on his face. TAM (low) Danger... Gom-tuu... Do not allow! 68 OMITTED 69 EXT. SPACE - TIN MAN (OPTICAL) The ENERGY traces on its surface FLARE BRILLIANT WHITE, the first sign of response from the creature since its discovery. A NARROW RING OF WHITE ENERGY, like a SHOCK WAVE, RADIATES away from its surface in ALL DIRECTIONS. 70 EXT. SPACE - ROMULAN WARBIRD (OPTICAL) The white energy of the SHOCK WAVE weapon PASSES OVER THE ROMULAN, WHICH EXPLODES INSTANTLY INTO A MILLION SHARDS OF METAL AND DUST. 71 OMITTED 72 INT. MAIN BRIDGE as our crew reacts. STAR TREK: "Tin Man" - REV. 2/7/90 - ACT THREE 39. 73 EXT. SPACE - THE ENTERPRISE (OPTICAL) The Enterprise and the oncoming wall of energy. The energy begins to WAVER, FADE, and only the ghost of it is left to PASS OVER THE BOW of the Enterprise. 74 INT. MAIN BRIDGE - WIDE ANGLE as lights fail and the crewpeople are SHAKEN about. RED ALERT SOUNDS -- this is a MAJOR SYSTEMS FAILURE, brought about by Tin Man's DEFENSIVE use of its weapon. PICARD Worf! Damage report! 75 ANGLE ON WORF WORF Not yet available, Captain. We have partial failure of the main computer. 76 ANGLE ON PICARD as he ADVANCES on Tam Elbrun, who still STANDS swaying with weakness by the Main Viewer. Picard is livid, and HE IS SCARED. 77 CLOSE ON PICARD AND TAM Picard is INCHES from Tam's face. PICARD You did this. You woke your Tin Man. 78 EXTREME CLOSE-UP ON TAM'S FACE His eyes open slowly, but he is a million miles away as we: FADE OUT. END OF ACT THREE STAR TREK: "Tin Man" - REV. 2/4/90 - ACT FOUR 40. ACT FOUR FADE IN: 79 EXT. SPACE - THE ENTERPRISE (OPTICAL) In orbit around Beta Stromgren with Tin Man in the distance. 80 INT. MAIN ENGINEERING - WIDE ANGLE Geordi SUPERVISING several Engineering technicians as RIKER LOOKS ON. A technician hands Geordi a PADD, which he READS with consternation. GEORDI We've got impulse power, but I've got to take the warp engines off line while we recalibrate the intermix regulators. RIKER How long? GEORDI For just the warp drive, or for everything? RIKER All of it. GEORDI We're looking at twenty hours work, double shifts. RIKER Geordi, we don't know that we have twenty hours. The star could explode at any time -- GEORDI I know. Okay, first we need to get the main computer working right -- RIKER No -- fix the shields first. STAR TREK: "Tin Man" - REV. 2/4/90 - ACT FOUR 41. 80 CONTINUED: GEORDI Commander, whatever Tin Man hit us with, it fried circuits I thought were unfryable. RIKER It's not Tin Man I'm worried about. It's more Romulans showing up. GEORDI Right. First priority, get the shields up. Only, let's not have any more surprises till I'm done. RIKER (bitterly) Don't ask me about surprises. Ask Tam Elbrun. 81 INT. SICK BAY - ANGLE ON TAM ELBRUN sitting up on a biobed as Beverly Crusher scans him. Picard and Troi are present. BEVERLY Brain activity suggests that you're coming out of a sort of fugue, or seizure... blood pressure and glucose indicative of general systemic stress -- TAM (lightly) But I'm gonna live? BEVERLY (very dry) No doubt about it. Picard, unamused, ADVANCES on Tam. PICARD Good. I want to know exactly what you did. I want to know how closely you are in communication with the alien, and what you've learned about it. Now. STAR TREK: "Tin Man" - REV. 2/4/90 - ACT FOUR 42. 81 CONTINUED: Tam steps off the biobed and faces Picard. TAM I... just warned it, that's all. I've been in contact with it... sensing impressions from it... (pause) It calls itself Gomtuu. It's old, Captain. It's roamed the universe for many thousands of years. PICARD Where did it come from? How many... TAM Far away, I think. Maybe beyond the galaxy. Once there were millions of them. PICARD Once? TAM It hasn't seen another of its kind for millennia. It's alone. It may be the last of its species. Picard is reflective, saddened by the thought. PICARD Perhaps we can help it in some way. Can you ask it to return with us to Federation space? Or at least to remove itself from the vicinity of Beta Stromgren, before the star explodes? TAM Captain, Gomtuu knows that the star will go nova soon. That's why it came here. It wants to die. BEVERLY Why? Tam begins very matter of fact, but becomes more and more distant as he relives what he read in Tin Man's mind. STAR TREK: "Tin Man" - REV. 2/6/90 - ACT FOUR 43. 81 CONTINUED: (2) TAM There was... an explosion, in space... radiation penetrated the outer layers. The crew... the crew died. Such loss... empty pain... Hollowness. Troi LUNGES forward and grips Tam by both arms. TROI Stop this! Tam -- Tam, you're losing yourself in this -- this merging. TAM I -- I know. (sits up. To Picard) Tin Man hurts... and wants to die. (a beat) I can't do any more from here. If you want me to really reach Tin Man, I've got to be in physical contact. I've got to go aboard. STAR TREK: "Tin Man" - REV. 2/6/90 - ACT FOUR 44. 81 CONTINUED: (3) PICARD No. Absolutely out of the question. TAM You don't trust me. 82 CLOSE ON PICARD PICARD No. I don't believe that I do. 83 BACK TO SHOT PICARD (continuing) Tam -- when you reached out to the alien, to warn it -- did you give any thought to this vessel? To the danger, however inadvertent, the creature might pose to our crew? Or did you simply react out of instinct? 84 ANGLE TO INCLUDE TROI TROI Captain -- TAM Deanna -- he's right... I don't know what might happen -- but if you don't let me go, we fail in our mission. 85 BACK TO SHOT as Tam WALKS uncertainly to door -- STOPS in the open doorway and TURNS BACK to Picard. STAR TREK: "Tin Man" - REV. 2/9/90 - ACT FOUR 45. 85 CONTINUED: TAM (continuing) Besides, at this point, you need all the help you can get -- even Tin Man's. Tam EXITS. 86 INT. MAIN ENGINEERING - ANGLE ON GEORDI as he reseals the hatch on a wall display, and hands a tool to an assisting Engineering technician. GEORDI Russell -- reactivate the sensor assemblies. 87 ANGLE TO INCLUDE POOL TABLE (OPTICAL) Geordi and Russell move to the pool table. Russell makes adjustments to a panel. Nothing happens. GEORDI Okay, let's do a program reload on the port array only. Russell makes more adjustments. GEORDI (continuing) Good. Computer, run level two diagnostic. COMPUTER VOICE Port sensor array remains offline. GEORDI Damn. Geordi starts pulling isolinear chips from an unseen access panel on the underside of the pool table. RIKER'S COM VOICE Riker to La Forge. How's it coming? Geordi doesn't even look up from his work. STAR TREK: "Tin Man" - REV. 2/12/90 - ACT FOUR 45A. 87 CONTINUED: GEORDI Not great... I think all the control processors are shot. Maybe if I swap the chips from the secondary array, I can give you a minimum EM scan. RIKER'S COM VOICE Do it. Geordi motions to one of his assistants, who starts pulling chips from another unseen access panel, and hands them to Geordi, who picks three of them and inserts them carefully into the first unseen access panel. GEORDI Russell -- try restarting sensor element thirty-two only. As the display comes alive to show a schematic of the Stromgren system. A MOVING BLIP representing an approaching ship appears near the outer edges of the system. 88 REVERSE ANGLE ON GEORDI GEORDI Well, the good news is that we have partial long range sensors. (he taps his communicator) La Forge to bridge. RIKER'S COM VOICE Riker here. 89 INT. MAIN BRIDGE - WIDE ANGLE Riker at Command, other stations manned by Supernumeraries. Worf is assisting several engineering technicians, who have the circuitry access panels open and are replacing circuit boards. GEORDI'S COM VOICE I'm picking up another echo on the long-range sensor display here. You getting that on your panel? STAR TREK: "Tin Man" - REV. 2/6/90 - ACT FOUR 46. 89 CONTINUED: RIKER Worf? WORF One moment, Commander. One technician closes an access panel and nods to Worf, who goes to his Tactical Console and reactivates it, satisfied at last that it is now working properly. WORF Confirmed. Sir, the other Romulan ship... on an intercept course. 90 ANGLE ON RIKER RIKER (very discouraged) Geordi, are we gonna have shields anytime soon? GEORDI'S COM VOICE I'm doing the best I can... But shields won't help if that star explodes. 91 INT. CAPTAIN'S READY ROOM - WIDE ANGLE FAVORING PICARD who is standing. Troi and Data are present. PICARD Data, you and Tam Elbrun seem to have developed an affinity. Troi, you've known him for years. How far can he be trusted? TROI Captain, the issue isn't one of trust in Tam's intentions, but in his judgment. I would trust him to do what he believes is right -- PICARD Yes, of course. But his judgment... STAR TREK: "Tin Man" - REV. 2/6/90 - ACT FOUR 47. 91 CONTINUED: TROI ... Is precarious. The stress of exposure to so many minds on the ship has been bad enough. Now he's strongly drawn to this creature. I'm afraid for him. PICARD Afraid of what? TROI I sense that the alien is somehow calling him. If we allow him to do as he insists -- to beam over -- I'm afraid that we'll lose him to it. (pause) That he will lose himself. DATA Captain, I agree that Tam's motives are trustworthy. I do not believe it is possible that he might act against us, or cause Tin Man to act against us out of malice. 92 OMITTED 93 ANGLE ON TROI TROI If Tam breaks down over there, we'll be no closer to accomplishing our mission, Captain. It would be a grave mistake. 94 BACK TO SHOT PICARD Thank you both. STAR TREK: "Tin Man" - REV. 2/7/90 - ACT FOUR 48A. 97 CONTINUED: WORF Captain, the Romulan has uncloaked. Picard and Data ENTER from the Ready Room and head for their seats. STAR TREK: "Tin Man" - REV. 2/6/90 - ACT FOUR 48. 94 CONTINUED: Troi EXITS. Data stands waiting, as if to add something. PICARD Data? DATA I am puzzled, sir. We have come this far. But you may not allow Tam to fulfill his mission. 95 ANGLE ON PICARD PICARD Data -- Elbrun warned Tin Man, and the first thing it did was to destroy a space vessel. DATA I think I understand, sir. (pause) If you feel that the risk is too great to send Tam Elbrun, alone, then send me with him. PICARD Counselor Troi understands him better. DATA (acknowledging) But I distress him less. (a beat) It is humanity he is fleeing. I can serve as an intermediary... a bridge back, and a reminder of his obligations... both to us and to Tin Man. 96 EXT. SPACE - THE ENTERPRISE (OPTICAL) as a Romulan warbird MATERIALIZES in foreground. 97 INT. MAIN BRIDGE - WIDE ANGLE Riker, Worf. Supernumeraries at all other stations. As they react to the warbird. STAR TREK: "Tin Man" - REV. 2/6/90 - ACT FOUR 49. 97 CONTINUED: PICARD Status Number One? RIKER Shields at forty percent, Captain. We can maneuver on impulse. WORF Phasers available on manual, sir. computer target lock not functioning. PICARD Well, let's hope they're in a mood to talk. Open hailing frequencies. 98 CROSSCUTTING FROM BRIDGE TO MAIN VIEWER (OPTICAL) where a Romulan warbird hovers close. PICARD Romulan vessel -- this is Captain Jean-Luc Picard of the USS Enterprise. On viewer, the warbird is replaced by TIGHT ANGLE: The Romulan commander in his Ready Room. ROMULAN COMMANDER Enterprise -- your presence here is a violation of Romulan space. You will leave immediately. PICARD We are not familiar with the terms of your claim on this sector, Commander. We are here engaged in scientific research. Do you wish to participate -- ROMULAN COMMANDER We have monitored the destruction of our sister ship by the star creature. We claim right of vengeance. We will destroy the alien. (pause) If you interfere, we will destroy you as well. STAR TREK: "Tin Man" - REV. 2/4/90 - ACT FOUR 50. 99 REACTION SHOT OF PICARD considering his limited options as we: FADE OUT. END OF ACT FOUR STAR TREK: "Tin Man" - REV. 2/5/90 - ACT FIVE 51. ACT FIVE FADE IN: 100 EXT. SPACE - THE ENTERPRISE AND THE ROMULAN SHIP (OPTICAL) facing one another down. PICARD (V. O.) Captain's log, Supplemental. Light-years beyond the edges of explored space, and virtually disabled, our survival may now depend upon Tam Elbrun's telepathic rapport with an alien intelligence. 101 OMITTED 102 INT. MAIN BRIDGE Picard, Riker, Troi, Worf, and Wesley at their stations. Supernumerary at Ops. Picard is grim. PICARD Picard to Tam Elbrun. A beat before Tam comes on com-link. TAM'S COM VOICE Captain? PICARD Report to Transporter Room Six immediately. Troi RISES. TROI Captain, I don't -- Picard signals silence. PICARD (to Tam) Commander Data will meet you there. Picard nods to Data, who acknowledges, rises from his station and EXITS. STAR TREK: "Tin Man" - REV. 2/5/90 - ACT FIVE 52. 102 CONTINUED: Picard approaches Troi. PICARD Counselor, we no longer have a choice. Troi nods reluctant agreement, but turns away distressed. 103 thru OMITTED 105 106 EXT. SPACE - TIN MAN (OPTICAL) orbiting Beta Stromgren. Enterprise and the Romulan in distance. STAR TREK: "Tin Man" - REV. 2/12/90 - ACT FIVE 53. 107 INT. TIN MAN CORRIDOR - WIDE ANGLE (OPTICAL) as Data and Tam MATERIALIZE. The corridor is ROUNDED, organic-looking, with dim ENERGY-VEINS resembling Tin Man's exterior. The interior is very dark, shadows broken only by the lights behind the glistening walls. 107A ANGLE ON TAM His eyes are closed. He shakes with tension, struggling against fear and the strange closeness of the alien which surrounds him. He spins away from Data, his hands clutching at his head. TAM No... Too much. Too much. Data moves to Tam. DATA (concerned) Tam? TAM I can't. Data reacts, keying his insignia. DATA Data to Enterprise. Come in Enterprise. Tam, struggling against his pain, turns back to Data. TAM (to Data) No... No, don't. DATA If it is harming you, we must return. Again Data keys his insignia. DATA (continuing) Enterprise, respond. A beat. There is no response. But we see that Tam is slowly beginning to assimilate the flood of information from Tin Man. STAR TREK: "Tin Man" - REV. 2/9/90 - ACT FIVE 53A. 107A CONTINUED: DATA (continuing) I cannot contact the ship. Tam relaxes, smiles peacefully. In this moment, two fantastically different life forms have made contact. Information has been exchanged and a bond is forming. TAM It's alright... Gomtuu tried to communicate a lifetime of experiences to me in a few seconds. (a beat) It's alright now. 108 OMITTED 109 INT. TRANSPORTER ROOM - ANGLE ON O'BRIEN who looks at his console, disturbed. He adjusts a readout. Unsatisfied, he activates his communicator. O'BRIEN O'Brien to bridge. 110 INT. MAIN BRIDGE - ANGLE ON PICARD PICARD Go ahead, Chief. O'BRIEN'S COM VOICE I lost the transporter lock on them. Some kind of force field went up. STAR TREK: "Tin Man" - REV. 2/9/90 - ACT FIVE 54. 111 WIDE ANGLE WORF Confirmed. The alien has thrown up a shield -- it's blocking all our sensors. Picard is greatly concerned by this. 112 ANGLE ON MAIN VIEWER (OPTICAL) as the Romulan ship moves away from the Enterprise. Beyond it in the distance the red star, and Tin Man, are visible. WORF The Romulans' weapons systems are now at full power. 113 OMITTED 114 INT. MAIN BRIDGE - WIDE ANGLE Picard, Riker, Worf. Troi and Wesley at their stations. Supernumerary at Ops. PICARD Red Alert... Mister Worf... arm photon torpedos. 115 INT. TIN MAN CORRIDOR - ANGLE ON TAM Data watches as Tam is now totally focussed on his communication with Tin Man. He approaches a glowing light panel on the corridor wall. He places his palm on the panel and it GLOWS BRIGHTER. Tam LAUGHS softly as if Tin Man just told him something wonderful. TAM Yes... As Tam removes his hand, the panel FADES to its original intensity. Data, puzzled, approaches the panel, touches it. There is no response. Data scans the corridor. STAR TREK: "Tin Man" - REV. 2/8/90 - ACT FIVE 54A. 116 ANGLE TO INCLUDE DATA DATA There is a large chamber twenty meters ahead. TAM Yeah, I know. STAR TREK: "Tin Man" - REV. 2/8/90 - ACT FIVE 55. 117 WIDE ANGLE Tam smiles. TAM I know everything, now. Come on. 118 REVERSE ANGLE (OPTICAL) As Data and Tam round a curve in the corridor, but they are brought up short by the ribbed and membraned wall. Tam stands for a moment. His eyes are blank, the stare wide-eyed. Suddenly the wall OPENS to admit the Betazoid and the android. Data looks in wonder at Tam who smiles. 119 OMITTED 120 INT. TIN MAN PILOT'S CHAMBER - (OPTICAL) A small room narrowing at one end -- again, organic in appearance. The narrow end of the chamber the walls pulse and writhe. Darkness, shadows, and lights which brighten and ebb behind the flesh-like walls. DATA Intriguing. TAM This is the control center where Gomtuu's crew guided their journeys. The ship and the crew existed symbiotically. Tam continues to explore the softly pulsing room. STAR TREK: "Tin Man" - REV. 2/8/90 - ACT FIVE 56. 120 CONTINUED: Tam moves down the room to the pulsing walls, and softly strokes it. The pulsing forms respond by straining toward him. Data experimentally touches the ship's wall. It does not respond. A small frown from Data. Obviously the ship has no interest in him. TAM (cont'd) They needed one another. When Gomtuu had no one left to care for, it no longer had a reason to exist. DATA (recalling their earlier talk) And is that the purpose of existence? To care for someone? TAM It is for me. (pause) Deanna was right. I'll lose myself here. AGAIN, Tam REACHES out, and strokes the ship. Suddenly Tin Man extrudes a portion of itself. It is clearly a chair being formed from the floor, and it is also clearly a signal to Tam. He rests a hand lightly on the back of the chair. TAM (lightly) An invitation. Data is troubled. DATA I must remind you that our objective is to bring Tin Man out of danger and report our findings to Starfleet. Tam settles into the pilot's chair. TAM I'm not going back, Data. I'm staying here. Off Data's puzzled expression. STAR TREK: "Tin Man" - REV. 2/6/90 - ACT FIVE 57. 121 thru OMITTED 122 123 INT. MAIN BRIDGE - ANGLE FAVORING MAIN VIEWER (OPTICAL) as the Romulan commander reappears on the viewer. Picard, Riker, Worf, Troi and Wesley at their stations. Supernumeraries at Conn and Ops. ROMULAN COMMANDER Captain Picard, if you interfere with us, we will fire upon you as well -- 124 CROSS-CUTTING BETWEEN PICARD AND VIEWER AS NECESSARY (OPTICAL) PICARD Commander -- we are prepared to defend the life of the alien. (to Worf) Shields up. STAR TREK: "Tin Man" - REV. 2/7/90 - ACT FIVE 58. 124 CONTINUED: WORF (urgently) Power levels aboard the alien are increasing, sir. WESLEY (stepping on Worf's line in his urgency) Captain, the diameter of the star has decreased by one hundred thousand kilometers. PICARD (to Riker) It's beginning. 125 EXT. SPACE - TIN MAN (OPTICAL) Enterprise and Romulans in background -- as Tin Man's lights and engines BLAZE ON FULL. 126 INT. TIN MAN PILOT'S CHAMBER - (OPTICAL) Tam settles into the chair, and the ship with an EFFECT similar to that which opened the doorway to the pilot's chamber, creates a viewport with a view of the stars for the Betazoid. TAM (turning to look at Data) Explain to them... make them understand. DATA (forcefully) But our mission... TAM ... is to save Tin Man and I will... but he's going to save me as well. All my life I've waited for this. A chance to find peace. Finally all the the voices are silent. Only Tin Man speaks to me now. (a beat) Don't you see, Data? This is where I belong. Off Data's expression. STAR TREK: "Tin Man" - REV. 2/6/90 - ACT FIVE 58A. 127 thru OMITTED 131 132 INT. MAIN BRIDGE Riker checking his com panel. RIKER The star is gonna go any minute, sir. PICARD The Romulans know that as well as we do. STAR TREK: "Tin Man" - REV. 2/7/90 - ACT FIVE 59. 132 CONTINUED: WORF Power levels aboard Tin Man increasing beyond our sensor range. 133 OMITTED 134 EXT. SPACE (OPTICAL) Tin Man glowing brightly, as another energy pulse halos the ship, and rushes toward the Enterprise and the Romulan ship. It strikes, and both ships TUMBLE out of frame. 135 OMITTED 136 EXT. SPACE - THE ENTERPRISE (OPTICAL) Tumbling wildly. 137 INT. MAIN BRIDGE Picard, Riker, Worf, Troi and Wesley. SHAKES, the SOUND of warp engines WHINING under the stress. 138 EXT. SPACE - THE ENTERPRISE (OPTICAL) coming finally to a stop in starlit, empty space. Alone. 139 INT. MAIN BRIDGE - WIDE ANGLE as things return to normal and RED ALERT ENDS. PICARD Conn -- report. STAR TREK: "Tin Man" - REV. 2/7/90 - ACT FIVE 60. 139 CONTINUED: WESLEY Dead stop, Captain. Sir-- (pause as he double-checks readings) We've been thrown clear of Beta Stromgren. Distance -- three point eight billion kilometers. WORF There is no sign of Tin Man or the Romulans, sir. (checks his panel) Captain -- on screen! 140 ANGLE ON MAIN VIEWER (OPTICAL) the EXPLOSION and flowering of Beta Stromgren as it goes SUPERNOVA. 141 ANGLE ON PICARD (OPTICAL) standing midway between his seat and Conn, STUNNED. PICARD Data. Behind Picard, Data MATERIALIZES. NOT the transporter effect -- Tin Man has returned him. DATA Sir? Picard, startled, does a take on Data. The android is unperturbed. PICARD Data -- what happened, over there? DATA Difficult to explain, Captain. 142 CLOSE ON TROI Looking at Data. TROI Tam? STAR TREK: "Tin Man" - REV. 2/7/90 - ACT FIVE 61. 142 CONTINUED: DATA I believe he has found what he was looking for, Counselor. As Troi reacts -- 143 EXT. SPACE - THE ENTERPRISE (OPTICAL) through space at impulse. PICARD (V.O.) Captain's log, supplemental. With all main systems at least temporarily restored, we are proceeding to Starbase one fifty-two for inspection and additional repairs. 144 OMITTED 145 INT. OBSERVATION LOUNGE Data standing by the windows gazing out at the stars. His expression is thoughtful. Troi ENTERS. PICARD (V.O.) (continuing) We have had no further encounter with the Romulans. As for the whereabouts of Tin Man, and Tam Elbrun -- we can only speculate. TROI You sent for me? DATA (turning to face her) Tam's final request was for me to explain his decision to the crew. But I believe his hope was that you would understand. Troi nods. A beat. STAR TREK: "Tin Man" - REV. 2/7/90 - ACT FIVE 62. 145 CONTINUED: TROI What did happen, Data? DATA I witnessed something remarkable. (considers a moment) Individually they were both so... TROI Wounded? Incomplete? DATA Yes. But no longer. Through their joining they have been healed. Grief was transmuted to joy. Loneliness to belonging. Troi is hearing an echo of something new in Data's voice. TROI Data, you do understand... DATA Yes, Counselor, when Tin Man returned me to the Enterprise I realized that this was where I belong. A long look. Troi steps to his side, and lightly lays a hand on his shoulder. They gaze out at the passing stars. 146 OMITTED 147 EXT. SPACE - THE ENTERPRISE (OPTICAL) snapping off into warp. FADE OUT. END OF ACT FIVE THE END STAR TREK: THE NEXT GENERATION "Hollow Pursuits" #40273-169 Written by Sally Caves Directed by Cliff Bole THE WRITING CREDITS MAY NOT BE FINAL AND SHOULD NOT BE USED FOR PUBLICITY OR ADVERTISING PURPOSES WITHOUT FIRST CHECKING WITH THE TELEVISION LEGAL DEPARTMENT. Copyright 1990 Paramount Pictures Corporation. All Rights Reserved. This script is not for publication or reproduction. No one is authorized to dispose of same. 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FINAL DRAFT FEBRUARY 9, 1990 STAR TREK: "Hollow Pursuits" 2/15/90 - CAST STAR TREK: THE NEXT GENERATION "Hollow Pursuits" CAST PICARD BARCLAY RIKER DATA BEVERLY TROI GEORDI WORF WESLEY GUINAN O'BRIEN DUFFY COMPUTER VOICE Non-Speaking SUPERNUMERARIES ENGINEERING TECHNICIANS SECURITY GUARD COSTA STAR TREK: "Hollow Pursuits" 2/9/90 - SETS STAR TREK: THE NEXT GENERATION "Hollow Pursuits" SETS INTERIORS EXTERIORS USS ENTERPRISE USS ENTERPRISE MAIN BRIDGE CAPTAIN'S READY ROOM MAIN ENGINEERING CARGO BAY TEN-FORWARD TROI'S OFFICE CORRIDOR TURBOLIFT TRANSPORTER HOLODECK ENTRANCE HOLODECK MAIN BRIDGE TEN-FORWARD TROI'S OFFICE GLADE PICNIC SETTING A HILL STAR TREK: "Hollow Pursuits" - 2/14/90 - PRONUNCIATION STAR TREK: THE NEXT GENERATION "Hollow Pursuits" PRONUNCIATION GUIDE CORRELLIUM kor-REL-lee-um INVIDIUM in-VID-ee-um JAKMANITE JACK-man-nite LUCROVEXITRIN loo-kro-VEX-ah-tren METALLURGY MEH-tahl-urj-ee MIKULAKS MICK-ah-lacks NAHMI NAH-me NUCLEO-SYNTHESIS NEW-kleo SIN-thee-sis SALTZGADUM SALTS-gad-um SELGNINAEM selg-nen-NAY-um ZHUKOV ZOO-kov STAR TREK: "Hollow Pursuits" - REV. 2/14/90 - TEASER 1. STAR TREK: THE NEXT GENERATION "Hollow Pursuits" TEASER FADE IN: 1 INT. TEN FORWARD/HOLODECK (OPTICAL) Lieutenant ENDICOTT REGINALD BARCLAY THE THIRD slouches at the bar. Scattered around the room are HOLO-TROI, who sits provocatively at a table in her off the shoulder dress; HOLO-RIKER seated at the end of the bar and mumbling into his drink, OTHERS. There should be the suggestion of something bogus about the scene, like a bad John Wayne movie, rife with cliches and over-acting. Holo-Guinan walks over to Barclay... with a bottle of whisky and a shot glass. HOLO-GUINAN I don't want any trouble, Barlcay... BARCLAY Trouble? Why would there be trouble? HOLO-GUINAN There's always trouble when you come in here. Barclay just grins. As he opens the bottle and pours a shot... HOLO-GEORDI ENTERS, comes up behind Barclay. HOLO-GEORDI You're on duty, Lieutenant. BARCLAY Is that a fact? HOLO-GEORDI It is, and you'll observe it. Get back to your post. BARCLAY Look, pal. Do me a favor. Take yourself and your holier-than-thou attitude and get out of my life. During the above, Holo-Riker looks up from his position at the bar, stands, moves over. STAR TREK: "Hollow Pursuits" - REV. 2/14/90 - TEASER 1A. 1 CONTINUED: HOLO-RIKER This is insubordination, Mister Barclay. BARCLAY So punish me. HOLO-RIKER (keys insignia) Security to Ten-Forward! A SECURITY CREWMAN ENTERS and heads for Barclay. In a blur of a movement, Barclay manages to flip him neatly onto the floor. All stare at him, stunned. STAR TREK: "Hollow Pursuits" - REV. 2/13/90 - TEASER 2. 1 CONTINUED: The Holo-Guard groans, Barclay smirks, takes a gulp of synthehol and gestures with the glass at Holo-Riker. BARCLAY "Insubordination." Holo-Riker seizes his arm and slops the drink; Barclay turns quickly, gets a half-Nelson on Holo-Riker and strains him painfully against the counter. BARCLAY Riker, you're nothing but a pretty mannequin dressed up in a fancy uniform. You're full of hot air, and if Picard has a problem with me, he can come and tell me himself... Barclay gives him one last hard push before releasing him. Defeated, Holo-Riker slips wearily down and leans against the bar. Barclay moves threateningly at Holo-Geordi, who retreats, runs out of the room, scared to death. Barclay saunters over to the table where Holo-Troi is seated. He picks up her willing hand. HOLO-TROI I feel your confidence, your arrogant resolve. It excites me. COM VOICE OF THE REAL GEORDI -- GEORDI'S COM VOICE Lieutenant Barclay, report to Cargo Bay Five now. BARCLAY (to Troi) This will have to wait, darling. (to com) Um... Be right there. (to the room) Freeze program. Exit. All the human figures FREEZE. Barclay heads toward the o.s. Holodeck doors. BARCLAY Save program. Ten Forward vanishes... he EXITS. STAR TREK: "Hollow Pursuits" - REV. 2/13/90 - TEASER 3. 2 INT. CORRIDOR Barclay steps into the corridor, a much altered man. The hero of the hour has been replaced with a shy individual with a perpetual frown born of stress and unhappiness between his brows. He is hustling because he's late. Troi comes briskly around a corner. She's headed straight for him. He steps aside for her. Troi nods in greeting, gives him a kindly but perfunctory smile and moves on. We barely notice Barclay sigh as he moves on. 3 INT. CARGO BAY (OPTICAL) O'BRIEN is operating the transporter console... several canisters MATERIALIZE. A couple of ENGINEERING TECHNICIANS (named DUFFY and COSTA) move the canisters from the transporter pad to an antigrav unit. Geordi is studying an open panel on the unit which is out of service... Riker is listening to him gripe about Barclay. GEORDI I just don't know what to do with him. He's always late, never gives his best effort, always slides by... I can't deal with it anymore. How does a guy like him ever make it through the Academy... RIKER (agrees) I think it's time we talked to the captain about Broccoli. (off Geordi's look) That's what Wesley calls him. Keep it to yourself. GEORDI It fits. 3A ANGLE as they see Barclay ENTER... moving to him... a throw-away piece of business -- Duffy discovers a canister with a trace of GASEOUS NITROGEN leaking from it. DUFFY A broken seal, Commander. STAR TREK: "Hollow Pursuits" - REV. 2/14/90 - TEASER 3A. 3A CONTINUED: GEORDI You better destroy it. Those samples will be tainted. Duffy and the other supernumerary take the canister away. Barclay tries to slither past Riker and Geordi. What we notice most about him is that he is uncomfortable around other people to the point of agony... he rarely makes eye contact... when he speaks, he hesitates, desperately afraid of saying the wrong thing... which he occasionally does. GEORDI Is it a problem for you to report to duty on time, Lieutenant? STAR TREK: "Hollow Pursuits" - REV. 2/19/90 - TEASER 4. 3A CONTINUED: (2) BARCLAY Problem? Nossir. I'm... I'm very sorry, sir... it's just... I had a very important communique... it required my immediate response and... GEORDI (tired of excuses) I don't want to hear it... we're having intermittent problems with the anti-grav unit, see what you can do... Barclay acknowledges and as he moves to the unit... RIKER Mister Barclay, I'm tired of seeing your name on report. (a beat) I don't know what you got away with on your last posting, but this is the Enterprise. We set a different standard here. Understood? And for a beat, Barclay looks at Riker and it is quite a different moment than the Holodeck. BARCLAY Understood... sir. Riker exchanges a glance with Geordi then EXITS as Barclay meekly goes to work... FADE OUT. END OF THE TEASER STAR TREK: "Hollow Pursuits" - REV. 2/13/90 - ACT ONE 5. ACT ONE FADE IN: 4 EXT. SPACE - THE ENTERPRISE (OPTICAL) In orbit around a PLANET. PICARD (V.O.) Captain's log, Stardate 43807.4. We are taking on a load of special tissue samples donated by the Mikulaks for shipment to Nahmi Four. The samples could prove vital to the containment of an outbreak of Correllium Fever on that world. 5 INT. CARGO BAY (OPTICAL) Barclay closes up the anti-grav panels, looks up at Geordi... BARCLAY (shrugs) Everything looks... it looks normal to me... He turns it on and the antigrav unit comes to life... rises a few feet off the floor. Duffy starts to move the unit toward the other end of the cargo bay. Almost immediately, the antigrav field fails and there is a CRASH as the pallet falls. O'BRIEN Dammit.. Barclay reacts, Geordi turns, looks at him impatiently... BARCLAY I... I don't understand... Barclay looks guilty, tongue-tied... rushes back to the anti-grav unit to check it out again. STAR TREK: "Hollow Pursuits" - REV. 2/16/90 - ACT ONE 6. 5A ANGLE GEORDI (to com) La Forge to Engineering... I'll need more people in Cargo Bay Five... anyone you can spare. Out. He moves to the anti-grav unit, begins to lift a canister... Geordi looks at Barclay who is still trying to solve the mystery in the anti-grav unit panel... GEORDI We could use a hand, Mister Barclay... Barclay looks up awkwardly at Geordi... moves quickly to help... and as he takes hold of the canister, facing Geordi... BARCLAY I'll... I'll disassemble it later, Commander... it shouldn't do that... well, of course, it shouldn't do that... I mean... well, it shouldn't do that. Two beats as they carry the canister in silence across the room... Barclay avoids Geordi's glare. 6 INT. CAPTAIN'S READY ROOM Picard behind his desk. Riker and Geordi. There is a report on the computer screen on Picard's desk. Picard indicates the screen. STAR TREK: "Hollow Pursuits" - REV. 2/14/90 - ACT ONE 7. 6 CONTINUED: PICARD I'm not accustomed to seeing an unsatisfactory rating for one of my crew. RIKER I guess the issue is whether Mister Barclay is Enterprise material. PICARD (to Geordi) I assume from your request for his transfer that you don't think he is, Commander... Geordi takes a beat -- he's aware of the impact of this answer... GEORDI I hate to say it... I always thought I could work with anyone... but I just can't stand the guy. Broccoli makes me nervous... he makes everyone nervous... PICARD Broccoli? RIKER Young Mister Crusher started it. I'm afraid it's caught on. PICARD Let's get it uncaught, shall we? They acknowledge. PICARD By all indications, Barclay has served honorably in Starfleet for many years. His rating aboard the Zhukov was satisfactory... I recall Captain Gleason speaking quite highly of him before his transfer... RIKER In retrospect, I wonder if Captain Gleason wasn't buttering our bread a little... (MORE) STAR TREK: "Hollow Pursuits" - REV. 2/13/90 - ACT ONE 8. 6 CONTINUED: (2) RIKER (Cont'd) He knew we were looking for a diagnostic engineer. Picard glances at him. A beat. Frowns. RIKER I've reviewed Barclay's psychological profile. He's always had seclusive tendencies... it was noted at the Academy more than once... PICARD And yet he chose this way of life; he's made the same commitment to Starfleet that we all have... (beat) It's easy to transfer our problem to someone else. Too easy. GEORDI Captain, it's not like I haven't tried... PICARD Try harder. The captain studies La Forge... there is an issue of command to be examined here... PICARD He's on your team. Manage him. Pull him in. Find ways to help him make a positive contribution. Get to know the man. Make him your best friend. Geordi smiles with a bit of incredulity... GEORDI With all respect, sir... my best friend? I can barely tolerate being in the same room with the man... PICARD I suggest you put your personal discomfort with him aside, Commander. Dismissed. STAR TREK: "Hollow Pursuits" - REV. 2/14/90 - ACT ONE 9. 6 CONTINUED: (3) Geordi exchanges a depressed glance at Riker and they EXIT... 6A INT. CARGO BAY Geordi ENTERS... the room is deserted now except for Barclay who is off to one side looking over the disassembled antigrav unit. It's open, the guts exposed as he traces circuits with a sensor. Geordi frowns to himself as he looks over to Barclay, whose back is to him. GEORDI (muttering, to himself) My best friend. He sighs, knows what he has to do, crosses to... 6B ANGLE - BARCLAY wrapped up in his mystery... Geordi moves up behind him, and as he pats him on the back... GEORDI Hey, Reg... And Barclay nearly jumps out of his shoes at the unexpected physical contact... Geordi reacts, covers... GEORDI Uh, how's it going? BARCLAY Oh, it's... I still haven't traced the problem, Commander... GEORDI (smile, "warm") That's okay. No rush. Take your time. Barclay notes this new tone of voice from Geordi... glances at him suspiciously... a beat. Doesn't trust the moment... rushes to fill the gap... BARCLAY I've... I've been planning to run diagnostics on the graviton invertor circuits... STAR TREK: "Hollow Pursuits" - REV. 2/9/90 - ACT ONE 10. 6B CONTINUED: GEORDI Smart plan... well, I'd say we're in good hands here... BARCLAY (still suspicious) I'll get a preliminary report to you... GEORDI ...whenever. BARCLAY (beat) Before the end of the day. GEORDI Fine. And say, Reg, how about sitting in on the mission briefing with my senior officers in the morning... BARCLAY The briefing? Me? GEORDI I'd just like your input... BARCLAY On what? I mean, should I prepare something... GEORDI No... no... just be there. Eight hundred hours. BARCLAY I'll be on time, sir. GEORDI Good. And he's about to pat Barclay on the back once more, thinks better of it... as he turns to leave, an exasperated expression fills his face... and Barclay sighs, glad this is over. 6C EXT. SPACE - THE ENTERPRISE (OPTICAL) At warp. STAR TREK: "Hollow Pursuits" - REV. 2/14/90 - ACT ONE 11. 7 INT. MAIN ENGINEERING Geordi ENTERS with WESLEY... GEORDI Morning. Start your brains, and let's do it. They all gather around the pool table for the morning briefing. After a beat, Barclay rushes in late, out of breath... Geordi nods to him. GEORDI (points to injectors on schematic) Okay, this trip to Nahmi Four is pretty routine. We'll have plenty of time to realign the magnetic capacitors in both the matter and anti-matter injectors. (light hearted groans) Duffy, Costa, that'll be your assignment. DUFFY We probably ought to do the flow regulator maintenance at the same time, Commander. GEORDI Good idea. (moving on) Ensign Crusher is putting in some hours with us this week as part of his training duties... he'll be assigned to assist you, Mister Myers. Be sure and teach him the difference between impulse and warp drive. (chuckles all around) Lieutenant Barclay is working on the mystery of the anti-grav failure we had yesterday... your preliminary report had a couple of interesting theories, Reg... Geordi waits a beat for Barclay to pick it up and run with it. He doesn't. After an awkward beat... STAR TREK: "Hollow Pursuits" - REV. 2/19/90 - ACT ONE 12. 7 CONTINUED: GEORDI Why don't you summarize your findings so far, Reg... As Barclay begins to answer, we can see him growing more and more uncomfortable under the gaze of his fellow engineers. BARCLAY Yes. (clears his throat) It wasn't a maintenance problem... everything checked out. I... I'm going to check for... a surge in... the transfer coils. WESLEY (certain) A coil surge wouldn't have resulted in a field dissipation. Attention now focuses on Wesley. Barclay flushes slightly as Wesley inadvertently steals his thunder. BARCLAY I... I... I realize that... GEORDI (trying to rescue the the situation) But we shouldn't ignore the possibility, Wes... WESLEY You ought to take a look at the flow capacitor. That could have forced a chain collapse of the antigrav field. Everyone looks at Barclay again. BARCLAY I... was going to. And it looks like Barclay is just jumping on Wesley's idea... Geordi wants to bail out of this... GEORDI Good. Okay, then... let's go over the realignment procedure... STAR TREK: "Hollow Pursuits" - REV. 2/19/90 - ACT ONE 13. 7 CONTINUED: (2) As Geordi starts to go on with the rest of the meeting, we PUSH IN on Barclay's terribly uncomfortable expression... 8 INT. TROI'S OFFICE (HOLODECK) It appears that Barclay is in therapy with Troi. She sits, listening intently... Barclay pacing the office in front of her. When he speaks, it is forceful, without hesitation. BARCLAY I just didn't know what to say. HOLO-TROI What do you wish you had said? BARCLAY I should have told him to mind his own damned business... I knew about the flow capacitor... I didn't need to hear about it from a seventeen year old kid. HOLO-TROI You're letting it get you much too upset. BARCLAY You think so? Holo-Troi gives him a very sympathetic look, gets up and stands closer to him. HOLO-TROI Why are you so hard on yourself? BARCLAY You don't know... it's hard out there. HOLO-TROI I understand, but let go of it. You're here now. BARCLAY (beat) You're right, of course. STAR TREK: "Hollow Pursuits" - REV. 2/13/90 - ACT ONE 14. 8 CONTINUED: HOLO-TROI (a small smile) Of course. She reaches out for him as if to comfort him, but instead begins to caress his arms and shoulders while her stance and expression take on a smoldering sexuality. HOLO-TROI Let me help you relax. BARCLAY I'd like that. HOLO-TROI I knew you would. And she leans into him, puts her arms around him and kisses him passionately... 8A NEW ANGLE (OPTICAL) BARCLAY Mmm, nice... but I'm in the mood for someplace a little more... unusual... (beat) Computer. Run Barclay Program Fifteen. We stay on Barclay, but lose Holo-Troi, as the surroundings change to -- 9 EXT. GLADE (HOLODECK) A glade with a few small hills, rock formations, some trees, grass, a pond. As different as can be from the world Barclay lives in... peaceful, green, remote... a warm breeze flutters through the trees... Barclay takes a deep, cleansing breath... turns to see --- 9A ANGLE - HOLO-TROI dressed in flowing Grecian robes which reveal a good deal of her anatomy, atop a part of a crumbling wall or section of ruins, stunning... as the breeze lifts her hair, her robes... and she reaches out to Barclay... STAR TREK: "Hollow Pursuits" - REV. 2/13/90 - ACT ONE 15. 9A CONTINUED: HOLO-TROI I am the Goddess of Empathy. Cast off your inhibitions and embrace love, truth, joy... And he runs up the hill to her as they dissolve in each others' arms... we boom to a dramatic rising shot against the wondrous landscape and... 10 INT. TEN-FORWARD Data, Wesley, Geordi, Duffy seated at a table. All except Data are drinking various beverages. WESLEY But I thought that's the point of the briefing... to discuss different approaches... GEORDI I'm not saying you did anything wrong, Wes... it's just that Barclay's... well, my new project. DUFFY (shakes his head) Yeah, Broccoli's a real project all right... GEORDI (frowns, hates the job) I just gotta draw him out more... WESLEY And I shut him down. (with pity) Poor Broccoli. DATA Pardon me, but why is Lieutenant Barclay being referred to clandestinely as a vegetable? WESLEY It's a joke, Data... you know, a nickname. STAR TREK: "Hollow Pursuits" - REV. 2/9/90 - ACT ONE 16. 10 CONTINUED: DATA Nicknames generally denote fondness, a diminutive shared between friends. This does not sound friendly. He's got them there. Wesley and Duffy look a little uncomfortable. GEORDI Data's absolutely right. The nickname stops here and now. Captain's orders. Suddenly, the glass in Duffy's hand begins leaking badly... the drink spilling on the table... DUFFY What the hell... ? He stands and puts the glass down... and the others react, and Geordi throws a napkin on the table to catch the liquid... WESLEY What happened to your glass? And push in as Data picks it up... the glass has been mangled in the shape of Duffy's hand. On reactions... FADE OUT. END OF ACT ONE STAR TREK: "Hollow Pursuits" - REV. 2/13/90 - ACT TWO 17. ACT TWO FADE IN: 11 EXT SPACE - THE ENTERPRISE (OPTICAL) Moving at warp speed. 12 INT. MAIN ENGINEERING Data and Geordi are examining the glass from Ten Forward with a tricorder and one of the consoles on the bulkhead. Barclay is in the b.g. working on some console. DATA Nucleo-synthesis. The structure of the glass has been altered at the atomic level. GEORDI A problem with the replicator? DATA Unlikely. A problem with the replicator would have affected the contents as well as the glass. But the liquid in the glass was a perfect replication of a dark ale of Earth origin which I believe is what Lieutenant Duffy ordered. GEORDI I can't detect any residual radiation or unusual chemical compounds that would have caused this. DATA The most probable explanation is that the glass came into contact with an unshielded power source. GEORDI (slightly dismayed) That means a complete diagnostic check of the Enterprise power systems. All four thousand of them. Beat as he turns toward Barclay... STAR TREK: "Hollow Pursuits" - REV. 2/13/90 - ACT TWO 18. 12 CONTINUED: GEORDI Have I got the man for this job... (calling) Hey, Reg... Barclay looks up with a start... me again? Moving to him -- GEORDI Busy? BARCLAY Well, I was just... no, not really... what? GEORDI (handing him the cup) Got another mystery for you... somehow the molecular structure of this cup from Ten-Forward has been altered... As Barclay studies it, to Data... GEORDI Mister Barclay is the Sherlock Holmes of the technical support crew... Data knows Geordi's assignment, wishes to be supportive of Barclay. DATA A fascinating vocation, Mister Barclay. I am a student of Sherlock Holmes mysteries and I would enjoy discussing some of your cases at your leisure. Barclay looks at them both curiously. BARCLAY My cases... ? GEORDI (to Barclay, indicating glass) Uh, Reg, we're gonna have to run through the power systems, to see if there's some kind of leak that caused this. STAR TREK: "Hollow Pursuits" - REV. 2/14/90 - ACT TWO 19. 12 CONTINUED: (2) BARCLAY I had to... I was going to do it anyway... GEORDI You were? BARCLAY To... to try and explain the anti-grav unit failure... I still can't... nothing about it makes sense. DATA Then it is possible these two very disparate incidents could be related. Data and Geordi exchange a glance... 13 OMITTED 14 INT. MAIN BRIDGE At the science station, starting close on the mangled glass... pulling back to find Riker listening to Geordi who has deliberately brought Barclay along. Data is there too. WORF is at his station. Picard is ENTERING from the Ready Room in the background. GEORDI I wouldn't bother you with something this minor, Commander... but it may be a symptom of a more serious problem... RIKER You think we'll need to put in to a starbase? GEORDI We'll have a better idea after Mister Barclay runs a check of the power systems... DATA It was Lieutenant Barclay who first suggested the link between the two incidents, sir. STAR TREK: "Hollow Pursuits" - REV. 2/14/90 - ACT TWO 20. 14 CONTINUED: BARCLAY No, it wasn't. Not really. Picard hears this... and wanting to throw his support behind Barclay, comes over, examines the glass... PICARD Will your investigation affect our available power during the mission, Lieutenant? BARCLAY No... nossir... we'll have to shut off some systems... they'll be down a few at a time... it shouldn't... I don't think so. PICARD Good. I look forward to your report, Mister Broccoli. A brief, poisonous silence. PICARD Barclay. Barclay's face turns red... BARCLAY If you'll excuse me. He moves quickly to the turbolift, EXITS. A beat. Then Data offers... DATA Metathesis is one of the most common of pronunciation errors, sir... a reversal of vowel and consonant, "bark" to "broc"... A sharp look from Picard shuts him up. Picard sits in command. Off Geordi's look... 14A INT. TEN FORWARD (OPTICAL) Guinan looks across the bar at Geordi. GUINAN Yes, I know him... comes in here, stands at the bar, doesn't say much... always orders a warm milk. STAR TREK: "Hollow Pursuits" - REV. 2/14/90 - ACT TWO 20A. 14A CONTINUED: GEORDI Figures. GUINAN Warm milk helps you sleep, La Forge. You should try it. What's that got to do with Barclay? GEORDI (frowns) I don't know. I'm just trying to figure the man out, that's all. You ever talk to him? GUINAN He's not much for talking. GEORDI Does he have any friends? GUINAN Not that I've seen. GEORDI (shakes his head) What do you do with a guy like that? GUINAN I give him his warm milk and let him be. GEORDI Yeah, well, I'm not so lucky. I can't let him be. He's my problem. GUINAN (beat) He's imaginative. GEORDI How do you know that? GUINAN I just do. GEORDI Well, then maybe he's in the wrong line of work. STAR TREK: "Hollow Pursuits" - REV. 2/14/90 - ACT TWO 20B. 14A CONTINUED: (2) GUINAN You engineering types don't appreciate imagination... ? GEORDI That's not it, Guinan... he just doesn't fit in here... GUINAN Terkim. GEORDI What? GUINAN Reminds me of Terkim. My mother's brother. A kind of family misfit. Everybody told me to stay away from him. Bad influence. GEORDI Did you? GUINAN Are you kidding? He was the only member of the family with a sense of humor. But no one ever stayed around him long enough to realize it... except me. My mother says I take after him. I probably do. Because the idea of "fitting in" repels me, too. She looks challengingly at Geordi. GEORDI Maybe I didn't make myself clear... Barclay, he's always late... he's nervous... nobody wants to be around him... GUINAN If I had the feeling that nobody wanted to be around me, I'd probably be late and nervous too. Geordi frowns. GEORDI Guinan, that's not the point... STAR TREK: "Hollow Pursuits" - REV. 2/16/90 - ACT TWO 21. 14A CONTINUED: (3) GUINAN Are you sure? GEORDI (beat, exasperated) I'll take another one of these. GUINAN Get it yourself. And she walks away. He reacts. GEORDI (sighs, keys insignia) Computer, where is Lieutenant Barclay? 15 thru OMITTED 16 16A EXT. GLADE/HOLODECK Close on the arch as it slides open to reveal Geordi who ENTERS and reacts as he sees the glade... GEORDI Reg... ? But as we move with him to reveal the setting, there is no sign of Barclay... then as he moves in further he sees -- 16B ANGLE -- A PICNIC SETTING as exquisite as a Gainsborough canvas... a swing suspended from a tree branch on which the image of a woman is swinging in flowing petticoats, a silent garment draped on the grass and spread with delicacies... a boy dressed as "Blue Boy" eating messily with his hands... as Geordi moves closer, he reacts as we reveal the woman and child to be Holo-Beverly and Holo-Wesley... GEORDI Beverly? Holo-Beverly looks up and smiles. STAR TREK: "Hollow Pursuits" - REV. 2/9/90 - ACT TWO 22. 16B CONTINUED: HOLO-BEVERLY Good morning, Mi-lord. (looks at Wesley) Manners, my son. Manners. You embarrass me before our guest. Holo-Wesley ignores his mother, lifts a whole blueberry pie with his hands and bites into, leaving a blue stain around his mouth... HOLO-BEVERLY Master Barclay will spank you if you don't behave. HOLO-WESLEY (sullen) I don't care. He takes another bite of pie. Geordi can't believe his eyes... GEORDI (to himself) Wesley... ? And he suppresses a laugh... HOLO-WESLEY (to Geordi) What do you want? GEORDI Ah, well, I guess I want... Master Barclay. HOLO-BEVERLY The boys got into another little scrap, I'm afraid. But boys will be boys. The sound of a sword fight turns Geordi's attention to-- 16C ANGLE - A HILL Coming over the rise, backing toward him is Barclay (in uniform) ... in classic swordsmanship stance, his sword moving with lightning speed fighting off unseen adversaries... STAR TREK: "Hollow Pursuits" - REV. 2/9/90 - ACT TWO 23. 16C CONTINUED: and then as he moves backwards and they follow, we see whom he's fighting -- Holo-Picard, Holo-Data and Holo-Geordi dressed as the three musketeers... HOLO-GEORDI You cannot withstand our assault forever, Barclay. HOLO-DATA Say you will yield and it ends here... BARCLAY (smiles, confident) I will speak with my sword, sir... A flourish of extraordinary moves and Barclay disarms both Holo-Data and Holo-Geordi... booting them both off the hill as... 16D THE REAL GEORDI below reacts and... 16E THE FIGHT between Holo-Picard Musketeer and Barclay continues up the rocks... Holo-Picard backing up now, fighting for his life, breathing heavily... HOLO-PICARD Where in God's name did you learn to fight like this, man? BARCLAY Self-taught, my good capitaine. Shall I give you a few lessons? An acrobatic move and Holo-Picard's sword goes flying... and as Holo-Picard stands there, the tip of Barclay's sword at his chest, shivering in his boots, he sees the real Geordi below, watching... HOLO-PICARD Who is that? One of your allies? BARCLAY Jean-Luc. Not that old trick. I'm disappointed in you. STAR TREK: "Hollow Pursuits" - REV. 2/14/90 - ACT TWO 24. 16E CONTINUED: Geordi coughs from o.s... Barclay reacts... follows Holo-Picard's look and goes pale as he sees -- 16F ANGLE - THE REAL GEORDI looking up at him. 17 INT. TEN FORWARD (OPTICAL) Barclay and Geordi at a table. BARCLAY I'll... I'll make it easy for you, Commander. I'll just request reassignment... GEORDI Now, wait a minute... BARCLAY Look, we both know... the whole ship knows... I can't cut it here. GEORDI Hey, Barclay... I've spent a few hours in the Holodeck myself, you know. Barclay gives him a look... and this is the first real compassion that Geordi has had for Barclay. GEORDI Far as I'm concerned... what you do in the Holodeck is your own business... as long as it doesn't affect your work. BARCLAY (reacts) You're... you're not going to tell anyone about this? Guinan arrives with a tray of warm milk for two. She makes eye contact with Geordi. GEORDI (no) I'm not sure everyone would appreciate your... imagination... like I do. STAR TREK: "Hollow Pursuits" - REV. 2/14/90 - ACT TWO 25. 17 CONTINUED: He glances at Guinan who leaves. GEORDI (curious) It is kind of unusual... recreating people you already know... The unspoken question is why? BARCLAY (sighs) I was just kind of really... well, it was just... I needed to blow off some steam... because one... one of the officers had been on my back... GEORDI Let me guess... BARCLAY Okay, it was you. And I couldn't tell you what I wanted to, to your face... and it just sort of... I guess it got out of control. GEORDI (warm, smiles) I don't know... sounds like maybe there's a side to this that's kind of therapeutic... we ought to tell Counselor Troi about it. BARCLAY It's... it's just more comfortable... when I'm in there. (looks down) You don't know what a struggle it is for me, Commander. GEORDI I'd like to help if I can. BARCLAY (shakes his head, you can't) Being afraid all the time that I'll forget somebody's name. Or not knowing what to do with my hands... (MORE) STAR TREK: "Hollow Pursuits" - REV. 2/9/90 - ACT TWO 26. 17 CONTINUED: (2) BARCLAY (Cont'd) I mean, I'm the guy who writes down things to remember to say when there's a party. And when I get there, I'll wind up alone in a corner trying to look comfortable examining a potted plant. (sighs) Sometimes, I just don't want to get out of bed in the morning. GEORDI Sometimes, neither do I. BARCLAY No, but you're good. You were born to be in Starfleet. Me... GEORDI You're just shy, Barclay. BARCLAY (nods, painful) "Just shy"... sounds like nothing serious, doesn't it... You can't know. Geordi studies him, concerned. O'BRIEN'S COM VOICE O'Brien to La Forge. Keying his insignia -- GEORDI Go ahead. O'BRIEN'S COM VOICE I need you in Transporter Room Three, Commander. GEORDI On my way, Chief. Geordi looks at Barclay once more... GEORDI I really do want you to talk to Counselor Troi, Reg. STAR TREK: "Hollow Pursuits" - REV. 2/13/90 - ACT TWO 27. 17 CONTINUED: (3) BARCLAY (reacts) Troi? No, no, I couldn't. GEORDI I mean it. As your friend and as your commanding officer. He EXITS... Barclay thinks about what this will be like... and a dreaded shiver sweeps across his body. 18 thru OMITTED 20 20A INT. TRANSPORTER ROOM THREE (OPTICAL) O'Brien is setting a transporter test object, a cylinder three feet tall, six inches in diameter, on a transporter pad... O'BRIEN I was synchronizing the phase transition coils... I didn't do anything I haven't done a hundred times before... Pull back to see Geordi watching. O'Brien moves to the console... O'BRIEN The test object is made of pure duranium. Geordi touches it... GEORDI Seems normal enough... O'BRIEN Watch this... As he powers up the transporter, the object DEMATERIALIZES from one position, MATERIALIZES under an adjacent transport pad, DEMATERIALIZES again, MATERIALIZES on the next pad over only this time as it does, it turns into a flash, burns brightly and disappears. As Geordi reacts... GEORDI I'm glad I don't have anywhere to go. FADE OUT. END OF ACT TWO STAR TREK: "Hollow Pursuits" - REV. 2/13/90 - ACT THREE 28. ACT THREE FADE IN: 21 EXT. SPACE - THE ENTERPRISE (OPTICAL) at warp. GEORDI (V.O.) Chief engineer's log, Stardate 43808.2. A systems analysis of Transporter Room Three has yielded no suggestion of a cause for the latest malfunction aboard the Enterprise. 21A INT. TRANSPORTER ROOM THREE Picard, Riker and Geordi are examining the residue of the test object. PICARD Is this part of the same pattern? GEORDI We don't know, Captain. And we don't know why only Transporter Room Three is affected... None of the other Transporter Rooms are malfunctioning... RIKER Yet. PICARD (to Riker) We have twenty-two hours before we reach Nahmi Four. We'll need the transporters operational by then. I want a level one diagnostic across the board. (TECH) RIKER (acknowledges, to Geordi) Advise Mister Barclay to meet us on the bridge immediately... STAR TREK: "Hollow Pursuits" - REV. 2/13/90 - ACT THREE 29. 21A CONTINUED: GEORDI Ah, could we push that back, just to fourteen hundred hours, Commander... I've got him doing something... RIKER (nods) Fourteen hundred hours. (as they exit) Mister O'Brien, no maintenance on the Transporters until further notice. O'BRIEN Aye, sir. 21B thru OMITTED 22 23 INT. TROI'S OFFICE Troi is sitting, very much the way she was (and dressed the same way she was) in Barclay's fantasy. Barclay, on the other hand, is entirely a different man from his dreams... dreadfully uncomfortable sitting on the far end of the couch from her. Troi studies him sympathetically... TROI I can tell this is difficult for you. Barclay is just able to nod. TROI Is there anything I can do to make you more comfortable? BARCLAY (quick) No! She smiles her best therapeutic smile at him. TROI Have you ever been with a counselor before? STAR TREK: "Hollow Pursuits" - REV. 2/9/90 - ACT THREE 30. 23 CONTINUED: BARCLAY (swallowing) Yes. No. TROI (smiles) Which one? BARCLAY Yes. But she... it wasn't real... really a counselor. TROI Most people find a counselor intimidating at first. It's okay if you feel that way toward me. BARCLAY Not... at all. TROI Good. Close your eyes... Lean back. BARCLAY Why? TROI (standing) I just want to help you relax. BARCLAY (reacts) You do? She walks by him... to a light panel... turns the lights down... TROI Put your feet up... it's okay. And close your eyes... He puts his feet up... closes his eyes... tight... BARCLAY What are you going to do? TROI Just listen to the sound of my voice... (MORE) STAR TREK: "Hollow Pursuits" - REV. 2/13/90 - ACT THREE 31. 23 CONTINUED: (2) TROI (Cont'd) Take a slow deep breath through your nose... and let it out through your mouth just as slowly... good... there, that's better, isn't it... BARCLAY Oh, yes. Oh, yes, much better. This has been... extremely helpful... (standing) Well, thank-you for your time. TROI But... Backing out... BARCLAY Really... very helpful... in through the nose, out through the mouth... I'll practice and let you know... thank you again... And he's out. Off Troi's puzzled reaction... 24 thru OMITTED 25 25A INT. MAIN BRIDGE A short time later. Geordi is working at one of the aft stations along with Data. Wes at Conn, supernumerary at Ops. Troi ENTERS from turbolift and goes over to Geordi. TROI I had a very strange visit from one of your officers today. GEORDI Barclay. Yes, I can imagine. Were you able to do anything for him? TROI To be honest, I'm not exactly sure what happened... STAR TREK: "Hollow Pursuits" - REV. 2/9/90 - ACT THREE 32. 25A CONTINUED: RIKER (entering from Picard's Ready Room) Where is Mister Barclay... it's past fourteen hundred hours... Geordi shakes his head, doesn't know. GEORDI (touches combadge) Lieutenant Barclay to the bridge. (beat of silence) Lieutenant Barclay report. There is another awkward silence as Geordi begins to suspect the worst. Riker's features harden. RIKER Computer. Locate Lieutenant Barclay. COMPUTER VOICE Lieutenant Barclay is in Holodeck Two. Geordi face falls, glances at Troi... Riker is really peeved. GEORDI I'll get him... RIKER No, I'll handle this. I've had it with him. He charges toward the turbolift... GEORDI Counselor, you better come along... They follow... 26 INT. CORRIDOR Geordi, Riker, and Troi turn a corner, head for the Holdeck. STAR TREK: "Hollow Pursuits" - REV. 2/9/90 - ACT THREE 33. 26 CONTINUED: GEORDI I think you should know that Barclay's been running some... unique programs. RIKER I don't care what he's been running. My patience just ran out. Riker operates the panel outside the Holodeck doors. The doors slide aside. 27 EXT. GLADE (HOLODECK) Continuous. Geordi, Riker, and Troi standing in Glade. 27A POV RIKER - THE PICNIC SCENE Holo-Picard, Holo-Data and Holo-Geordi as the three musketeers sitting on the ground, eating... Holo-Wesley as Blue Boy with another blueberry pie... The Holo-characters look over at our real characters' entrance. 27B RIKER, TROI AND GEORDI react, Riker ready to blow... 27C OMITTED FADE OUT. END OF ACT THREE STAR TREK: "Hollow Pursuits" - REV. 2/13/90 - ACT FOUR 34. ACT FOUR FADE IN: 28 EXT. GLADE (HOLODECK) Riker, Geordi, and Troi, as before, staring at the Holo-characters. GEORDI Like I said Commander, Barclay's been running some... unusual programs. Riker's furious... RIKER This is a violation of protocol. Crewmembers should not be simulated in the Holodeck... GEORDI Ah, Commander... I don't think there's any regulation... RIKER Then there should be... computer, discontinue program and erase... TROI (interrupting) Computer, belay that order! RIKER Counselor... TROI If Barclay is having a difficult time facing reality, to suddenly destroy his only means of escape would be brutal and could do considerable damage. 28A ANGLE - ON THE PICNIC (OPTICAL) Holo-Picard musketeer glances at his cohorts. HOLO-PICARD They are quite disagreeable, aren't they... shall we have a go at them? STAR TREK: "Hollow Pursuits" - REV. 2/13/90 - ACT FOUR 35. 28A CONTINUED: HOLO-DATA Delighted. HOLO-GEORDI We shall thrash them. They stand, draw their swords... move to the real people... HOLO-PICARD En garde. RIKER Stop it. Put that down. HOLO-DATA Your sword, sir... RIKER (impatient) I don't have a sword. HOLO-GEORDI (puzzled) How do expect to fight without your sword? RIKER I don't expect to fight. Holo-Picard exchanges a glance with his fellows, grins. HOLO-PICARD Do I detect a streak of yellow along the good fellow's back? The holograms laugh. 28B HOLO-WESLEY laughs, eats his blueberry pie. 28C RESUME SCENE (OPTICAL) HOLO-PICARD Perhaps we can supply a more appropriate adversary for him. (calling) Number One... STAR TREK: "Hollow Pursuits" - REV. 2/15/90 - ACT FOUR 36. 28C CONTINUED: HOLO-WESLEY (calling) Number One... Holo-Riker as the fourth Musketeer rushes in... HOLO-RIKER Am I late? Did I miss the fight? He's a foot shorter than his real counterpart... and the difference is not lost on Troi. HOLO-RIKER En garde... (looks closely at Riker, reacts) Sir... you have a familiar bearing... is it possible we have crossed swords somewhere before? RIKER (furious) Where is he? Where is Barclay? HOLO-RIKER Ah, a personal grudge. I warn you... you would be wise to put your affairs in final order before you meet him in combat. You challenge the greatest sword in all the... RIKER ... in all the Holodeck. Troi suppresses a laugh. RIKER (to Troi) You think this is funny? TROI You are very tall. It could be very threatening to some people. RIKER Barclay'll find out what it means to be threatened. Computer, discontinue image of Riker. The hologram of Riker disappears. The other musketeers react. To Riker -- STAR TREK: "Hollow Pursuits" - REV. 2/14/90 - ACT FOUR 37. 28C CONTINUED: (2) HOLO-PICARD Sir, you have no sense of fair play. GEORDI Just tell us where to find Barclay. The holograms shrug, they don't know... shake their heads at Riker's foolishness... move back to their picnic... RIKER (to Troi) You're gonna make us search through this to find him? TROI It could provide us with valuable information about what's troubling him. On the move... TROI There's nothing wrong with a healthy fantasy life, as long as it doesn't take over. RIKER You call this healthy? TROI You're taking it so seriously. This is not without its element of humor... 29 ANGLE - HIGH ATOP A HILL - THE GODDESS OF EMPATHY (OPTICAL) as before, her robes flowing in the warm breeze, her arms out... very revealing... HOLO-TROI I am the Goddess of Empathy! Cast off your inhibitions and embrace love, truth, joy... GEORDI Oh my God... Troi snaps a look at Geordi... who looks away... STAR TREK: "Hollow Pursuits" - REV. 2/13/90 - ACT FOUR 38. 29 CONTINUED: HOLO-TROI Discard your facades and reveal your true being to me. TROI Computer, discontinue -- RIKER (delighted) Belay that order, computer! (to Troi) We want to get more insight into what's troubling the poor man. Remember? (to Geordi) Quite a healthy fantasy life, wouldn't you agree? Off Troi's burn... 30 thru OMITTED 33 34 INT. MAIN BRIDGE The ship is ROCKED and alarms start to go off on the bridge. Picard ENTERS from his Ready Room... Worf is at Tactical, Data at Ops, supernumberary at Conn. PICARD Report... WORF Sir, our velocity increased to warp seven point two five. DATA Compensating, sir. WORF (reading console) Confirmed. Velocity now warp seven. PICARD Maintain that. What the hell happened? STAR TREK: "Hollow Pursuits" - REV. 2/13/90 - ACT FOUR 39. 34 CONTINUED: DATA (still working) The matter/anti-matter injectors locked for a split second, Captain. I am not certain why. They seem to be working properly now. PICARD (pressing insignia) Picard to La Forge. INTERCUT: 35 EXT. GLADE/HOLODECK (OPTICAL) As before. GEORDI (to com) Go ahead, Captain. PICARD Any explanation for the injector problem? GEORDI I'm not in Engineering, sir. I'm in Holodeck Two. PICARD Another malfunction? GEORDI Not exactly, sir. I'll return to Engineering immediately. PICARD Yes, I would say you should, Commander. Your Holodeck activities can wait until later. And Commander... GEORDI Yessir? PICARD It would be wise to consult Lieutenant Barclay on this latest incident. STAR TREK: "Hollow Pursuits" - 2/9/90 - ACT FOUR 40. 35 CONTINUED: GEORDI I'd like to, very much, sir. La Forge out. END INTERCUT: GEORDI (to the Goddess) We need to find Barclay. Now. She motions to the other side of the hill... as they climb... HOLO-TROI Cast aside your masks and let me slip into your minds... TROI Muzzle it. The Goddess reacts, shocked. As they reach the top of the hill, they discover, on a little plateau... 36 NEW ANGLE Under a tree sits Holo-Beverly in a very pastoral scene, skirts and petticoats billowing out. Troi, Geordi, and Riker approach. Holo-Beverly looks up at them coquettishly, and puts a finger to her lips. Barclay is asleep in her lap, snoring away. HOLO-BEVERLY Shhhhh! 37 INT. CORRIDOR Riker, Geordi, Troi, and Barclay ENTER from the Holodeck. Riker's expression is furious. Troi looks sympathetic, but resigned, while Barclay looks incredibly embarrassed. He hangs his head slightly. TROI We have a lot to talk about. Barclay nods silently, humiliated. GEORDI (to Riker) Sir, Barclay and I better get to Engineering. STAR TREK: "Hollow Pursuits" - REV. 2/14/90 - ACT FOUR 41. 37 CONTINUED: RIKER (acknowledges) Dismissed. Riker and Troi go one direction... Barclay and Geordi move off the opposite way... 37A INT. CORRIDOR - MOVING BARCLAY I just couldn't keep my eyes open... I'd worked twelve hours on the power systems and then the transporter went down and... GEORDI Reg... you had a chance to get some help from the real Counselor Troi... but instead you went back in there... BARCLAY I know... I didn't want to... I just couldn't help myself... GEORDI You're gonna be able to write the book on holodiction. (they exchange a look) Look, I know how easy it is to get caught up in it. I... fell in love in there once. BARCLAY Really? GEORDI (nods) But I knew when it was time to turn it off and say goodbye... Wasn't easy. But I did it. BARCLAY You know... the people I create in there have started to become more real to me... than anyone out here. (beat) Except maybe for you, Commander. STAR TREK: "Hollow Pursuits" - 2/9/90 - ACT FOUR 42. 37A CONTINUED: GEORDI I need you out here, Reg... right now, more than ever. Barclay looks at Geordi, appreciates his continuing faith. 38 INT. ENGINEERING (OPTICAL) At a console... looking at an Okudagram on the monitor... showing read-outs, graphic representation of the injectors (TECH?)... pulling back to see Barclay working the console... trying several commands... his expression concerned. Geordi watches over his shoulder. GEORDI The injectors aren't responding to the diagnostic commands. BARCLAY (acknowledges) I... think we should drop out of warp. GEORDI (hits combadge) La Forge to bridge. INTERCUT: 39 thru OMITTED 40 41 INT. MAIN BRIDGE As before. Riker and Troi ENTER. PICARD Go ahead, Commander. GEORDI Recommend we go to impulse power sir. PICARD Take us out of warp. STAR TREK: "Hollow Pursuits" - REV. 2/13/90 - ACT FOUR 43. 41 CONTINUED: DATA Controls are not responding, Captain. Barclay works controls. BARCLAY It's the injectors. GEORDI Override. BARCLAY It's not a computer problem. The mechanism is physically jammed. (shakes head) I can't clear it. DATA Speed increasing, Captain. Warp seven point six... seven point six five... seven point seven... GEORDI We can't shut it down, Captain. The anti-matter flow is increasing. She's accelerating out of control. Off reactions... FADE OUT. END OF ACT FOUR STAR TREK: "Hollow Pursuits" - REV. 2/13/90 - ACT FIVE 44. ACT FIVE FADE IN: 42 EXT. SPACE - THE ENTERPRISE (OPTICAL) The ship is racing along. 42A INT. MAIN BRIDGE Picard, Riker, Data, Worf. Supernumerary at Con. WORF Approaching warp nine sir... PICARD Red Alert. The ship goes to Red Alert. RIKER Data, estimated time to structural failure. DATA (working panels) At this rate of acceleration, fifteen minutes, forty seconds, Commander... RIKER Geordi, did you copy? INTERCUT: 42B INT. ENGINEERING Geordi, Wesley, Barclay, Duffy and the other senior officers are around the pool table... it is a parallel scene to the first act mission briefing. GEORDI Aye, Commander... RIKER Recommendations. STAR TREK: "Hollow Pursuits" - REV. 2/13/90 - ACT FIVE 44A. 42B CONTINUED: GEORDI (under great pressure) I'll let you know as soon as we have some. La Forge out. (MORE) STAR TREK: "Hollow Pursuits" - REV. 2/14/90 - ACT FIVE 45. 42B CONTINUED: (2) GEORDI (Cont'd) (to his men) Okay, this ship will start tearing itself apart in fifteen minutes... I want every idea on the table... I don't care how outrageous... DUFFY What about attempting a magnetic quench on the fusion pre-burners? GEORDI No, I tried that already... the magnetic fields won't reset. WESLEY Could the fuel inlet servos be caught in cycle? GEORDI (shakes his head) If they were, the swirl dampers would be frozen too... and they aren't... DUFFY (looking to Barclay) Nothing showed up in the diagnostic sweep... at all? All eyes turn to Barclay and he blanches slightly under their scrutiny. BARCLAY The tests... uh, showed problems... I mean no problems with the flow... the flow of the... Geordi doesn't want to step on Barclay, but this is a crisis and time is slipping away. GEORDI There's nothing wrong with the computer control protocols or the power transfer systems. As far as we can determine, the injectors are just physically jammed... STAR TREK: "Hollow Pursuits" - REV. 2/14/90 - ACT FIVE 46. 42B CONTINUED: (3) DUFFY (trying to add it up) Injectors freeze... antigrav unit goes down... transporter malfunctions... WESLEY And a twisted glass... GEORDI What's the connection? The ship shudders for the first time... the men react... 43 OMITTED 43A INT. MAIN BRIDGE As before. They're reacting to the first shudders too. WORF Exceeding warp nine point four. PICARD Begin evacuation of secondary hull. Prepare for emergency saucer separation. WORF (reading console) Standing by to release docking clamps. RIKER Re-route systems to primary hull power sources. DATA Captain, the plasma flow to the nacelles is uneven due to the injector lock. An emergency saucer separation could rupture the warp field. Another shudder. Reactions. DATA Twelve minutes to structural failure. STAR TREK: "Hollow Pursuits" - REV. 2/13/90 - ACT FIVE 46A. 44 EXT. SPACE - THE ENTERPRISE (OPTICAL) faster and faster. 44A INT. ENGINEERING As before... emphasizing Barclay thinking hard... gets an idea, shakes his head, suppresses it... the ship is vibrating and it continues to shake more noticeably. STAR TREK: "Hollow Pursuits" - REV. 2/13/90 - ACT FIVE 47. 44A CONTINUED: GEORDI None of the systems involved interact directly with each other... I don't see anything in common... A beat of silence... and then Barclay does the most difficult thing he's ever done in his life -- he takes a chance, he speaks up, well almost, he clears his throat... it's enough to get everyone's attention... BARCLAY What if... what if... (beat) what if one of us is the connection? DUFFY Us? How? BARCLAY I don't know. But we're looking for... a, a systemic explanation and there isn't one. We work with all the systems that are affected ... what if we're transmitting something ourselves... by touching it, or something... WESLEY The computer sensors would've picked up anything dangerous. Everyone reacts "yes, of course" and Barclay begins to retreat back into silence... but then he speaks up again, actually disputes Wesley's analysis. BARCLAY But... if it were something... something that we couldn't scan... (to Duffy and Costa) You might've passed it to the injectors when you were realigning the magnetic capacitors. GEORDI It was your glass, Duffy... and both of you were in the cargo bay when the anti-grav failed... DUFFY So was O'Brien. STAR TREK: "Hollow Pursuits" - REV. 2/16/90 - ACT FIVE 48. 44A CONTINUED: (2) WESLEY The transporter malfunction. That's a connection too. Alarm klaxons. COMPUTER VOICE Danger. Approaching safety limits of engine containment field. GEORDI Computer, list all physical substances that wouldn't normally be picked up by internal scans. COMPUTER VOICE There are fifteen thousand five hundred twenty-five known substances that cannot be detected by standard scans. GEORDI (sarcastically) Great. How many of those can exist in an oxygen atmosphere? COMPUTER VOICE Five hundred thirty-two. GEORDI (irritated) And could alter molecular structure when it comes in contact with... (a beat) ... with glass. COMPUTER VOICE Five. GEORDI (touches pool table button) On screen at this station. 44B INSERT POOL TABLE MONITOR (OPTICAL) The screen shows five names and a small graphic representation of the molecular structure of each chemical. STAR TREK: "Hollow Pursuits" - REV. 2/15/90 - ACT FIVE 48A. 44C RETURN TO SCENE Geordi, Wesley, Barclay and the others study the list on the various screens. BARCLAY Jakmanite has a half life of about fifteen seconds. There wouldn't be enough time to spread it around the ship. Geordi touches the panel and the chemical name and graphic for Jakmanite disappear. GEORDI Right. WESLEY Selgninaem and Lucrovexitrin are extremely toxic. GEORDI (acknowledges, touches panel again) We'd all be dead by now. That leaves Saltzgadum and Invidium. Neither of which has been used for decades. WESLEY Could either one be causing all these malfunctions? DUFFY Most of the affected systems weren't even invented when those substances were in use. Who knows what they could do to a transporter or a magnetic capacitor... ? STAR TREK: "Hollow Pursuits" - REV. 2/14/90 - ACT FIVE 48B. 44C CONTINUED: GEORDI (beat) Wasn't Invidium used in... medical containment fields? WESLEY Not for over a century. BARCLAY But the Mikulaks might still be using it. DUFFY (nods) And one of those canisters was broken. Geordi and Barclay on the move... GEORDI (hits combadge) La Forge to bridge. We have a working theory, Captain... INTERCUT: 45 INT. MAIN BRIDGE As before. Riker and Picard react to this new information. GEORDI'S COM VOICE There's a chance we picked up some Invidium from a broken canister in the cargo bay... and have been spreading it around the ship... INTERCUT: 45AA INT. CORRIDOR Geordi and Barclay moving quickly to the cargo bay. RIKER'S COM VOICE Working theories are fine, Geordi. But we need a working solution in about five minutes... GEORDI Understood, Commander. We're on our way to Cargo Bay Five for confirmation. STAR TREK: "Hollow Pursuits" - REV. 2/16/90 - ACT FIVE 48C. 45A EXT. SPACE - THE ENTERPRISE (OPTICAL) Faster still. 46 INT. CARGO BAY (OPTICAL) Barclay and Geordi have one of the canisters sitting on the deck and are wearing protective gloves. STAR TREK: "Hollow Pursuits" - REV. 2/16/90 - ACT FIVE 49. 46 CONTINUED: They pick up small tools and carefully open the canister. Nitrogen escapes. Geordi scans the contents with a tricorder. GEORDI Nothing from the tricorder... Geordi uses a flashlight-like device that projects a light... aims it into the canister (we don't need to see inside)... Barclay reaches in with his glove and as he pulls his glove out, Geordi shines the light on it... COMPUTER VOICE Danger. Exceeding safety limits of engine containment field. At current acceleration, structural failure will occur in three minutes, thirty seconds. ... making adjustments in the flashlight three times as he tries different tests... a substance is revealed on the glove's fingers... BARCLAY There it is... STAR TREK: "Hollow Pursuits" - REV. 2/16/90 - ACT FIVE 50. 46 CONTINUED: (2) GEORDI Duffy and O'Brien picked up the broken canister and became contaminated.. BARCLAY If we can get it... the invidium... down to minus two hundred degrees Celsius, it'll become inert. Geordi hits combadge. GEORDI La Forge to bridge. Invidium is confirmed. INTERCUT: 46AA INT. MAIN BRIDGE Riker and Picard listening to Geordi's report. GEORDI'S COM VOICE (continuing) Recommend we flood the injector pathway conduit with liquid nitrogen. That should neutralize it. PICARD The question is, will the injectors come back on-line? GEORDI The injectors have sustained considerable damage, sir. I can't guarantee we'll be able to regain control... RIKER We don't have much choice, do we? GEORDI Nossir. PICARD Make it so. STAR TREK: "Hollow Pursuits" - REV. 2/15/90 - ACT FIVE 50A. 46A INT. ENGINEERING Wesley and Duffy work the consoles. DUFFY (to Wesley) Route primary coupling through starboard transfer conduit. WESLEY Routing... ready for engine core injection. COMPUTER VOICE At current acceleration, structural failure will occur in forty-five seconds. STAR TREK: "Hollow Pursuits" - REV. 2/16/90 - ACT FIVE 51. 46B thru OMITTED 47 48 INT. ENGINEERING The engine core is flooded with liquid nitrogen. The RACING LIGHTS in the core SLOW as GASEOUS NITROGEN leaks from a few spots on the engine core. 49 INT. MAIN BRIDGE As before. DATA (working console) Injector conduit temperature minus one hundred degrees Celsius. PICARD Transfer injector control to manual. DATA Ready... temperature now minus one hundred ninety degrees... minus two hundred degrees, sir. RIKER Injector status? DATA Matter injector... is on-line. Anti-matter injector... still locked. COMPUTER VOICE At current acceleration, structural failure will occur in thirty seconds. PICARD Cycle power through ventral relay. DATA (works console) Anti-matter injector... on-line. Reducing flow capacity. Commencing warp engine shut-down. 50 EXT. SPACE - THE ENTERPRISE (OPTICAL) Dropping out of warp. STAR TREK: "Hollow Pursuits" - REV. 2/16/90 - ACT FIVE 51A. 50AA INT. MAIN BRIDGE As before. PICARD Stand down from Red Alert. Red alert ENDS. RIKER (to com) Nice work, Geordi. INTERCUT: 50A INT. CARGO DECK GEORDI Mister Barclay and I thank you, sir. RIKER'S COM VOICE (beat) Acknowledged. GEORDI The ship is seriously contaminated with Invidium, sir. Recommend we set course for Starbase one-two-one for a complete systems and bio-decontamination. END INTERCUT: PICARD'S COM VOICE Understood. Geordi and Barclay exchange a look. GEORDI Glad you were with us out here in the real world today, Mister Barclay. Barclay grins, shrugs and... STAR TREK: "Hollow Pursuits" - REV. 2/13/90 - ACT FIVE 52. 51 thru OMITTED 53 53A INT. MAIN BRIDGE/HOLODECK (OPTICAL) Holo-Picard, Holo-Data, Holo-Worf, Holo-Wesley, Holo-Riker, Holo-Troi, Holo-Beverly all present and at their stations. Barclay ENTERS from turbolift. He walks to center of bridge and addresses everyone. He seems a little changed now. There is a little more confidence in his demeanor, a slight change in his bearing. BARCLAY It has been most difficult to reach this decision to leave you... but after thinking it over, discussing it at length with Counselor Troi... I think it is for the best... I just wanted to thank you all for your support... HOLO-GEORDI You'll always be welcome here, Barclay. BARCLAY I know. That's what makes it hard to go. HOLO-PICARD It was a pleasure to serve with you, Mister Barclay. HOLO-TROI Good luck, Reg. BARCLAY It's been fun. (looks at them) Computer, end program. The bridge VANISHES and is replaced by the empty Holodeck. BARCLAY (cont'd) Erase all programs filed under Reginald Barclay. Barclay heads toward doors... pauses... BARCLAY Except... Program Nine... STAR TREK: "Hollow Pursuits" - REV. 2/13/90 - ACT FIVE 53. 53A CONTINUED: He smiles to himself... and EXITS. CUT TO: 54 OMITTED 55 EXT. SPACE - THE ENTERPRISE (OPTICAL) as it moves on to its next destination. FADE OUT. END OF ACT FIVE THE END STAR TREK: THE NEXT GENERATION "The Most Toys" #40273-170 Written by Shari Goodhartz Directed by Timothy Bond THE WRITING CREDITS MAY NOT BE FINAL AND SHOULD NOT BE USED FOR PUBLICITY OR ADVERTISING PURPOSES WITHOUT FIRST CHECKING WITH THE TELEVISION LEGAL DEPARTMENT. Copyright 1990 Paramount Pictures Corporation. All Rights Reserved. This script is not for publication or reproduction. No one is authorized to dispose of same. If lost or destroyed, please notify the Script Department. FINAL DRAFT FEBRUARY 25, 1990 STAR TREK: "The Most Toys" - 2/26/90 - CAST STAR TREK: THE NEXT GENERATION "The Most Toys" CAST PICARD Zibalians RIKER KIVAS FAJO DATA VARRIA BEVERLY PALOR TOFF TROI GEORDI Non-Speaking WORF TECHNICIANS WESLEY TRANSPORTER CHIEF CELESIA Non-Speaking SUPERNUMERARIES Voice Over ENTERPRISE COMPUTER VOICE STAR TREK: "The Most Toys" 2/25/90 - SETS STAR TREK: THE NEXT GENERATION "The Most Toys" SETS INTERIORS EXTERIORS USS ENTERPRISE USS ENTERPRISE MAIN BRIDGE CAPTAIN'S READY ROOM THE JOVIS OBSERVATION LOUNGE TRANSPORTER ROOM DATA'S QUARTERS GEORDI'S QUARTERS CORRIDORS TURBOLIFT MAIN ENGINEERING DETENTION CELL BETA AGNI TWO CAVE THE JOVIS CARGO BAY FAJO'S DEN STAR TREK: "The Most Toys" - 2/25/90 - PRONUNCIATION STAR TREK: THE NEXT GENERATION "The Most Toys" PRONUNCIATION GUIDE ANDORIAN an-DOHR-ree-an BASOTILE BASS-oh-tile CAYVIS FIVE KAY-vus 5 DENKIRS DEHN-kers FINOPLAK FIN-no-plack HYTRITIUM hi-TRI-tee-um IRAATAN eye-RAY-tan JOVIS JOE-vis KIVAS FAJO KEE-vas FAH-zho LAWMIN GALACTOPEDIA LAW-men ga-lack-toe-PEE-dee-uh MOLYBDENUM-COBALT mah-LIB-den-um CO-balt PALOR TOFF PAY-lor TOFF REJAC RE-jack RODULANS ROD-u-lans SIGMA ERANI SIGMA eh-RAN-ee STACIUS STAY-cee-us TELLURIAN tell-OORR-ee-an TRICYANATE try-SIGH-a-nate VARRIA var (rhymes with far)-REE-a VELTAN VEL-tan ZIBALIAN zih-BAY-lee-on STAR TREK: "The Most Toys" - REV. 2/25/90 - TEASER 1. STAR TREK: THE NEXT GENERATION "The Most Toys" TEASER FADE IN: 1 EXT. SPACE - THE ENTERPRISE (OPTICAL) hangs motionless near a small spacecraft, the Jovis. PICARD (V.O.) Captain's log, Stardate 43872.2. In order to neutralize a sudden contamination of the water supply at the Federation colony on Beta Agni Two, we are procuring one hundred and eight kilos of hytritium from the Zibalian trader, Kivas Fajo. Move in closer on the smaller vessel. 2 INT. JOVIS CARGO BAY The Enterprise shuttlepod has docked and DATA emerges from the pilot seat. PICARD (V.O.) Because pure hytritium is too unstable for our transporters, Lieutenant Commander Data has been shuttling the material to the Enterprise. VARRIA, a female humanoid, supervises THREE TECHNICIANS who are moving a shipping case. The care and precision with which they handle the case underlines the danger involved. Data opens the cargo door of the shuttlepod. The technicians proceed to load the case onto the pod -- again with utmost care. DATA (touching his communicator) Data to Enterprise. PICARD (V.O.) Go ahead, Mister Data. STAR TREK: "The Most Toys" - REV. 2/25/90 - TEASER 2. 2 CONTINUED: DATA This will be the last trip... the remaining cases of hytritium are now being loaded. 3 INT. MAIN BRIDGE GEORDI is monitoring the situation from the Engineering Station. PICARD, RIKER, WORF, and WESLEY are at their stations. PICARD Acknowledged. Mister Worf, advise Beta Agni Two that our departure is imminent. WORF Aye, Captain. RIKER (to Picard) At warp six, we should be there in just over sixteen hours. Picard acknowledges. 4 OMITTED 4A INT. JOVIS CARGO BAY The Technicians have completed loading the shuttlepod and closed the hatch. Through the window, we can see a containment field (F/X -- nitrogen) promptly fill the trunk. Data heads for the pilot seat. DATA (to comm) Loading is complete. I am proceeding with departure. (protocol) Enterprise Shuttlebay Two, prepare for docking, level one precautions for incoming material remain in effect. 5 ANGLE ON DATA (OPTICAL) Varria approaches Data and hands him a padd. STAR TREK: "The Most Toys" - REV. 2/25/90 - TEASER 3. 5 CONTINUED: VARRIA If you'll just acknowledge this last load, Commander... Data takes the Padd and presses his thumb on an ID panel... and BLUE SPARKS spring from the padd and dance over Data. Data stiffens, goes limp, and falls. 6 ON VARRIA taking out a tricorder-like device and scanning Data's body. She reads the information to one of the technicians, who enters it into a padd. The other technicians are hurrying about in the b.g. VARRIA Twenty-four point six kilos of tripolymer composites... eleven point eight kilos of molybdenumcobalt alloys... one point three kilos Bioplast sheeting... 7 OMITTED 8 EXT. SPACE - THE ENTERPRISE AND THE JOVIS (OPTICAL) A brief passage of time. 9 INT. MAIN BRIDGE (OPTICAL) As before. Geordi reads his console: GEORDI Shuttle twelve containment field reads nominal... Now leaving the Jovis. Picard steps forward. PICARD On viewer. The shuttlepod moves away from the Jovis... moves slowly through space on the Viewscreen. STAR TREK: "The Most Toys" - REV. 2/25/90 - TEASER 4. 9 CONTINUED: GEORDI (reading his console) Containment field stable... gravitational fluctuations within acceptable parameters... flight pattern... Before Geordi can finish, the shuttlepod on the viewscreen EXPLODES in a BALL OF FIRE. 10 CLOSE UPS - VARIOUS Riker, Worf, Wesley, Geordi and finally Picard... shocked expressions accented by the light from the viewscreen. FADE OUT. END OF TEASER STAR TREK: "The Most Toys" - REV. 2/25/90 - ACT ONE 5. ACT ONE FADE IN: 11 INT. MAIN BRIDGE (OPTICAL) Picard, Riker, Worf, Geordi, Wesley; moments later. The debris from the destroyed shuttle is still visible on the viewscreen. RIKER Why didn't the containment field hold? GEORDI (checking readings) Unknown, Commander. PICARD (to Worf) Hail the Jovis -- I want to speak with Kivas Fajo. Geordi and Worf work their consoles. WORF Sir, Mister Fajo is hailing us. PICARD On screen. 12 ANGLE TO INCLUDE MAIN VIEWER (OPTICAL) as the image of KIVAS FAJO fills the screen. Fajo is a male Zibalian with a commanding presence; a man of the world -- or rather the galaxy -- with undeniable personal charm and grace and yet someone not to be trifled with. FAJO Captain Picard -- what happened? PICARD It is unclear at this time; we're running a full analysis. FAJO We detected no malfunctions before the explosion. Everything seemed to be proceeding as smoothly as the other flights. Were you able to save the pilot? STAR TREK: "The Most Toys" - REV. 2/25/90 - ACT ONE 6. 12 CONTINUED: PICARD No. Fajo looks as if he lost his best friend. FAJO I'm sorry. Picard nods his thanks but, having a mission, cannot dwell on the moment. PICARD Mister Fajo, I would like to analyze your sensor readings of the explosion. FAJO Compared to the Enterprise's, our sensors are rather primitive -- I doubt they contain any information yours have overlooked. PICARD Perhaps, but I want to leave no avenue unexplored. FAJO I understand. We'll transmit the information. Fajo nods to someone off screen. WORF Link established... Receiving. FAJO Can we be of any further assistance? PICARD (to Riker) How much hytritium did we manage to bring on board? RIKER Eighty-one kilos. GEORDI That might be barely enough to complete our mission, Captain... but it's not leaving us any margin for error. STAR TREK: "The Most Toys" - REV. 2/25/90 - ACT ONE 7. 12 CONTINUED: (2) Picard considers this, then: PICARD (to Fajo) I realize we have acquired your complete supply of hytritium. Do you know where we could obtain more? FAJO That may be difficult. The only source I know is in the Sigma Erani System. RIKER (to Picard) Three weeks away. FAJO And I can't guarantee they'll have any -- for obvious reasons, no one wants to keep it around. In fact, even I may stop selling it -- it's just too dangerous. RIKER I guess we're fortunate you had any at all, sir. WORF (to Picard) Transfer of information is complete, Captain. PICARD Mister Fajo, thank you for your help. Fajo nods as his image disappears, replaced by the Jovis and starfield and wreckage of the shuttlecraft. 13 NEW ANGLE as Picard considers his options. PICARD Mister Crusher, lay in a course for Beta Agni Two, warp six. WESLEY Aye, sir. STAR TREK: "The Most Toys" - REV. 2/26/90 - ACT ONE 8. 13 CONTINUED: RIKER (to Picard) The Grissom is currently near the Sigma Erani system... I'll have them stand by in case we need more hytritium. PICARD Very good, Number One. WESLEY Course laid in, sir. A beat as Picard looks out to his lost comrade. PICARD Engage. 14 EXT. SPACE - THE ENTERPRISE (OPTICAL) As the Enterprise BLASTS into warp, we hold on the Jovis. 15 INT. FAJO'S DEN Data is "unconscious" on the floor. With a jolt, he snaps back to functional status, sits up, runs a quick re-calibration. DATA (ad lib) Gibberish... (self-adjusting) ...Starfleet... gibberish... Enterprise. That accomplished, he attempts to contact the Enterprise -- but his insignia's missing. Data gets to his feet, examines his environment. He's in a windowless room filled with rare and beautiful objects: paintings, sculpture, books, alien artifacts and devices, perhaps even an exotic animal in a cage. In the middle of the room is a large sofa -- a comfortable place to sit and appreciate these treasures. STAR TREK: "The Most Toys" - REV. 2/26/90 - ACT ONE 8A. 16 ON DATA as he studies the collection. Right in its center -- the focal point of the room -- is a piece of simple, unobtrusive framework in the rough shape of a chair. Functional rather than comfortable, it's what you'd set up if you had a seated statue you wanted to display. But there's no statue there. Data turns at the SOUND of a door opening -- STAR TREK: "The Most Toys" - REV. 2/27/90 - ACT ONE 9. 17 NEW ANGLE as the massive, vault-like door opens and Fajo and Varria ENTER. The door immediately shuts and locks behind them. Varria stays in the b.g. as Fajo crosses to Data, looks him over with great interest and delight. (Note: Fajo and Varria are wearing a small device on their belts... and they never get closer to Data than one meter.) FAJO Wondrous. The detail... the balance. A remarkable piece of work. DATA Why have I been brought here? FAJO (ignores the question) The voice simulation is perfect. Inflections, timing... Fajo shakes his head in admiration, speaks "to" Data for the first time: FAJO (cont'd) It took a lot of effort to get you here... but I was sure it would be worth it. I was right. DATA (patiently tries again) I have been delivered here against my wishes. I would like to know the reason. FAJO Certainly. You're here for my enjoyment and appreciation. DATA Am I to infer that you intend to keep me captive? FAJO Captive? A most inappropriate description, my good android. May I call you Data? DATA It is my name. STAR TREK: "The Most Toys" - REV. 2/25/90 - ACT ONE 10. 17 CONTINUED: FAJO I know. (beat, confident) Data, you will be catered to, fawned over... you will be cared for as never before... every wish will be fulfilled... DATA I wish to leave. FAJO Almost every wish. Data's puzzled. DATA This is unacceptable. I have no desire to remain here... and even if I did, my Starfleet duties would not permit it. Fajo grins at Varria, like an amused parent whose child has said something precious. FAJO Single-minded, isn't it? VARRIA (nods) Very persistent... FAJO But polite. A nice touch. (to Data) I decline to allow you to leave. DATA Then I am forced to attempt escape. Fajo indicates the door -- "go ahead." Data crosses to the door, inspects it. It's solid. Data braces himself against the frame, gives the door a shove. It doesn't budge. FAJO Ten androids like you might be able to force it open. (shrugs) But there aren't any other androids like you, are there? STAR TREK: "The Most Toys" - REV. 2/26/90 - ACT ONE 11. 17 CONTINUED: (2) Data keeps inspecting the door, looking for access. There's no visible keypad or opening device. FAJO (cont'd) It's keyed to the touch... reads galvanic skin response, DNA patterns, and two or three other things. Trust me... you can't open it. DATA Then you will have to open it for me. 18 ON FAJO (OPTICAL) Fajo doesn't move a muscle as Data advances toward him. The instant Data comes within two meters of Fajo, a GLOWING AURA appears around Fajo's body... Data stiffens, nearly loses control of his movements. It's all Data can do to stagger back from Fajo. Once Data's backed off, the AURA DISAPPEARS, and Data slowly recovers. Fajo smiles at him. Data starts to turn away -- then with all his android speed makes a leap-and-grab for Fajo. No good -- the AURA appears again, knocking Data backwards. As he does, the AURA DISAPPEARS. It takes several beats for Data to recuperate. FAJO I wouldn't try that again. (indicates belt device) It's a proximity-actuated field that impedes positron flow. Not good for your brainpaths in the long term. 19 ON DATA trying another tack with Fajo. DATA I fail to understand the value you place upon my presence. STAR TREK: "The Most Toys" - REV. 2/26/90 - ACT ONE 12. 19 CONTINUED: FAJO Do you? Look around. This room contains items gathered from half the galaxy. And he handles them with great fastidiousness... carefully arranging a display when he replaces it. FAJO The very first Basotile ever created by the Rodulans... centuries old. Priceless. A vase carved by the late Mark Off-Zel on Sirrie Four. The only known Roger Maris trading card from Earth circa 1962... smell it... Data does, reacts... FAJO (cont'd) Bubblegum... I've preserved the scent... (the animal) A Lapling... DATA (reacts) But I thought they were extinct... FAJO Yes, that is the general belief. She's the last surviving member of her species... defenseless little creature, pity. (beat) Everything you see -- the only one of its kind. Unique. An original. Just as you are. (at the chair) Here, this is for you... your place of honor... sit... if it is not comfortable... but of course, you have no thought of comfort, do you... Data does not sit and Fajo does not press the point for now. STAR TREK: "The Most Toys" - REV. 2/25/90 - ACT ONE 13. 19 CONTINUED: (2) FAJO (to Varria) When Palor Toff learns of this, he will swallow his tongue with envy... I cannot wait to see his face... (to Data) You are the crown jewel of my collection. A treasure beyond comparison. Data stares at him. In b.g., a wall com panel BEEPS; Varria answers it, speaking in a voice too low for us to hear. Fajo continues: FAJO (a smile) You should be flattered. DATA I am not. Most intelligent lifeforms find involuntary confinement offensive and inequitable. Moreover, you have violated Federation law -- FAJO (waves it off) Yes, I know. What I've done is evil, selfish, immoral, illegal, and unprincipled. (a grin) I've learned to live with it. Data's mystified by Fajo's lack of concern. Fajo turns to Varria. VARRIA The Andorians wish to bid for the shipment of Tellurian spices you offered. FAJO They've had four days... they would have to make up their minds now. Ah, well... Fajo and Varria start for the door. Data makes one more attempt to reason with Fajo: STAR TREK: "The Most Toys" - REV. 2/25/90 - ACT ONE 14. 19 CONTINUED: (3) DATA I must emphasize, Mister Fajo, that I consider this captivity a hostile act on your part. FAJO (shrugs) You'll get used to it. And Fajo and Varria EXIT, leaving Data to ponder his situation. FADE OUT. END OF ACT ONE STAR TREK: "The Most Toys" - REV. 2/25/90 - ACT TWO 15. ACT TWO FADE IN: 19A EXT. SPACE - THE ENTERPRISE (OPTICAL) At warp. 20 INT. DATA'S QUARTERS Geordi and Wesley ENTER. A silent beat as they look over the room. The violin on a shelf. The covered easel. WESLEY I can't believe he's gone. GEORDI I always thought he'd outlive us -- by centuries. Wesley and Geordi are uncomfortable with the task they must perform. They move to the easel and Wes uncovers Data's last painting... WESLEY He'd been working on this for months... never felt it was quite finished... GEORDI You know what a critic Data was... especially about his own work. Geordi steps up to the desk, opens the top drawer. 21 INSERT - DATA'S DESK DRAWER Everything is neatly arranged: an old leather-bound book, a pack of playing cards, a set of poker chips, the hologram base of Tasha Yar, and Data's medal case. 22 WIDER (OPTICAL) as Geordi takes out the leather-bound book. WESLEY It was a gift from the captain. STAR TREK: "The Most Toys" - REV. 2/27/90 - ACT TWO 16. 22 CONTINUED: GEORDI Then he should have it back. Geordi takes out the pack of cards and poker chips. WESLEY Those should go to Commander Riker. Geordi smiles, recollecting. GEORDI Data always fell for Riker's bluffs... Wesley extracts the medal case from the drawer, examining it reverently. WESLEY These are some of Starfleet's highest honors. GEORDI Not bad for a walking pile of circuitry and memory cells. Geordi takes the hologram of Tasha from the drawer. Sits. Turns it on. He looks at it silently, then puts it down on the desk... turns it off... shakes his head, softly -- GEORDI I keep going over and over the accident in my mind. Trying to figure out what went wrong. I can see him in the shuttle... almost like I'm sitting next to him... going through the departure sequence... What the hell happened? Why didn't I see it coming? Did I miss something... As we push into him... 22A EXT. SPACE - THE JOVIS (OPTICAL) Moving through space at low warp. STAR TREK: "The Most Toys" - REV. 2/27/90 - ACT TWO 17. 23 OMITTED 24 INT. FAJO'S DEN - DAY Data is examining Fajo's collection, looking for something which might be of use to him. SOUND of door opening. Data whirls, braces himself -- this may be a chance to escape. 25 ANGLE ON THE DOOR as Varria ENTERS. She's wearing the same proximity field device on her belt that she and Fajo wore earlier. 26 WIDER as Data realizes it's futile to make a break for it. Varria closes the door behind her. She's carrying a set of "civilian" clothes for Data. VARRIA Kivas wishes you to wear this set of clothes. And sit in your chair. DATA I have no reason to accede to Mister Fajo's wishes. VARRIA He will give you reasons if you force him to. DATA He is deluding himself if he believes he can keep me here. The Enterprise is certain to find me -- VARRIA They're not even looking for you... they believe you're destroyed. Your shuttle blew up... a hytritium explosion. DATA They will scan the debris and discover I was not aboard... STAR TREK: "The Most Toys" - REV. 2/25/90 - ACT TWO 18. 26 CONTINUED: VARRIA They'll find exactly what they expect to find: traces of your component elements. We placed them aboard the shuttle in just the right proportions. Data studies her. DATA Plainly Mister Fajo has no moral difficulties with my imprisonment here. VARRIA "Mister Fajo" has no moral difficulties. At all. And it is said with the barest trace of her own personal regret... DATA Do you? VARRIA Clever, android... Is it part of your program to seek out vulnerabilities in your enemies? DATA Yes. (beat) Are you my enemy? And his simple, straightforward attitude kind of throws her off balance. VARRIA I obey Fajo. And so does everyone on this ship. DATA Why? VARRIA You are a curious... thing... aren't you... ? DATA Do you object to the question? STAR TREK: "The Most Toys" - REV. 2/25/90 - ACT TWO 19. 26 CONTINUED: (2) VARRIA Kivas finds a way to get what he wants from his people. His rewards for loyalty are lavish. His punishments for disloyalty are equally lavish. You won't find anyone here who'll help you escape. (shakes head) Face it, android. He has you. DATA It appears he has us both. That hits Varria close to home. She cooly pushes the clothes into Data's arms and exits. 26A EXT. SPACE - THE ENTERPRISE (OPTICAL) At warp. 26B INT. ENGINEERING (OPTICAL) Geordi is alone studying a monitor... he's tired, back hurts, been working for a long time... stands, stretches... GEORDI Computer, did the containment power supply or the backups fail prior to the explosion? COMPUTER VOICE Telemetry indicates no interruption in containment field power supply. Backup safety field and reserve power was available up until the instant of explosion. GEORDI Analyze telemetry from gravity generator, impulse vents, fuel cells, inertial dampers, and related subsystems. COMPUTER VOICE All readings negative. STAR TREK: "The Most Toys" - REV. 2/25/90 - ACT TWO 20. 26B CONTINUED: GEORDI What about external factors? Local stellar phenomena? COMPUTER VOICE Negative. Interstellar radiation and EM spikes all within normal tolerances. GEORDI Was the shuttle close enough to the Enterprise to have been affected by our warp fields? COMPUTER VOICE Negative. Warp systems were operating at twelve percent idle, insufficient to disrupt containment fields. Geordi frowns... drops his head in frustration, then picks it up again... GEORDI Return file to start... Let's go through it all again... And he resumes his position at the monitor as the screen changes to suggest a return to the start of the file... we push into the monitor full of Okudagram readings, complex beyond our vaguest understanding... 27 INT. CAPT. READY ROOM (OPTICAL) Picard, Riker listen to Geordi... GEORDI The reason I can't find anything is there's nothing there to find. I've run the analysis a dozen times over... there's no indication of a malfunction... RIKER No possible explanation at all... ? GEORDI Well, yeah, there's one, but I don't believe it. Pilot error. STAR TREK: "The Most Toys" - REV. 2/25/90 - ACT TWO 21. 27 CONTINUED: PICARD (a beat, sighs) I know it's hard to accept, but even the best... And Geordi interrupts the captain in mid-sentence, which he would never normally do -- an indication of how tired he is, how consumed he is, how frustrated he is. GEORDI Captain, it's not hard to accept... with Data, it's almost impossible. I can't even begin to calculate the odds. If Data were here, we could ask him... PICARD What are you suggesting, Commander? GEORDI I don't really know, sir. It just doesn't make sense. I like things to make sense... that's all. Geordi stops, frowns. Picard and Riker exchange a look. RIKER Geordi, if you got a little rest, came at it with a fresh mind... GEORDI A little rest isn't going to change the computer analysis, Commander. PICARD (stands) I'm sure you've done a complete investigation. If you wish to continue it, you have my support of course. But we'll be reaching the Beta Agni system shortly. I expect you to be rested. GEORDI I understand, Captain. STAR TREK: "The Most Toys" - REV. 2/26/90 - ACT TWO 22. 27 CONTINUED: (2) PICARD Dismissed. Geordi begins to leave... as the door slides open, Picard has a second thought -- PICARD Geordi... I understand how much we want... even need to explain an accident like this. Sometimes there just aren't any explanations. Geordi acknowledges and exits. Riker looks at Picard. RIKER For an android without feelings... he sure managed to evoke them in others. And Picard looks down, picks up the leather-bound book Geordi found in Data's room... and has feelings of his own which he will not share. PICARD We must select an officer to replace Data at Ops. Recommendations? RIKER My first choice would be Lieutenant Worf, sir. PICARD Mine as well. Make it so. Riker EXITS... a beat on Picard as he opens the book, closes it and says softly to himself... PICARD (One line of Shakespeare that provides the perfect epitaph to Data.) 28 OMITTED 29 INT. FAJO'S DEN - DAY Fajo ENTERS. Fajo looks to his collection: STAR TREK: "The Most Toys" - REV. 3/7/90 - ACT TWO 23. 30 ANGLE ON DATA Data's studying one of the recognizable artworks. He's wearing his Starfleet uniform; the clothes Varria provided are still folded upon the display chair, untouched. Fajo moves to him. FAJO You're still wearing your uniform. Why? DATA I am a Starfleet officer. FAJO You're not in Starfleet any longer. It's time you adjusted your program to accept reality. DATA Even if I chose to do so, it is doubtful whether my programming could be sufficiently altered to accede to your wishes. FAJO Oh? DATA I have been designed with a fundamental respect for life in all its forms... and a strong inhibition against causing harm to living beings. STAR TREK: "The Most Toys" - REV. 3/7/90 - ACT TWO 24. 30 CONTINUED: FAJO A military pacifist. What a marvelous paradox. Tell me -- whose dreadful decision was it to enlist you in Starfleet? DATA It was ultimately my own decision. My skills seemed appropriate... FAJO My dear Data, it was a mistake. A grievous error. You no more belong in Starfleet than I belong in a verbal contract. Have you killed yet, Data? DATA No, but I am programmed with the ability to use deadly force in a cause of defense. FAJO Shame on you. A beat as Data reacts. FAJO Shame on you. How neatly you rationalize your capabilities. How can you casually accept your role in murder? DATA I would not participate in murder. Perhaps you misunderstand... FAJO Can't you see how much better it will be for you here... the intellectual rewards, our own personal exploration of the galaxy... I am at war with no one... I have liberated you. A beat. STAR TREK: "The Most Toys" - REV. 3/7/90 - ACT TWO 25. 30 CONTINUED: (2) DATA You are a fine debater, sir. It is a shame you have used your verbal gifts for mere hucksterism and the advancement of your own greed. FAJO (smiles) You're going to be more of a challenge than I thought. Put on the new clothes and sit in your chair. DATA I must decline. Fajo shakes his head, moves to a replicator unit on the wall. 30A ANGLE - CLOSER (OPTICAL) As he pushes a panel... FAJO (to com) Finoplak. One hundred denkirs. The replicator produces a container of a clear liquid. He takes it out moves to Data... FAJO Here's something for your logic circuits to analyze. (MORE) STAR TREK: "The Most Toys" - REV. 2/28/90 - ACT TWO 26. 30A CONTINUED: And Fajo dashes the contents of the container onto Data's chest. Where the liquid touches it, Data's uniform starts to dissolve. Data's surprised -- what was the point of that? FAJO (cont'd) Don't worry -- the solvent won't damage your skin. But in minutes it will completely dissolve your uniform. (shrugs) I'd be delighted to have you go naked... I assume you have no vanity. But I would guess that decency is the rule of your Starfleet training. Fajo indicates the clothes on the display chair. FAJO So, decide which alternative you dislike the least. He moves toward the door... pauses, looks back... FAJO Decide by dinnertime tonight. I have invited a guest to meet you. I expect you to be as entertaining with him as you have been with me. And Fajo casually EXITS. Data looks at his chest -- his uniform is now a sticky mess and getting worse by the second... 31 thru OMITTED 33 FADE OUT. END OF ACT TWO STAR TREK: "The Most Toys" - REV. 2/25/90 - ACT THREE 27. ACT THREE FADE IN: 34 EXT. SPACE - THE ENTERPRISE (OPTICAL) Cruising at warp. 34A OMITTED 34B INT. GEORDI'S CABIN Tight shot... he's asleep (napping in uniform) on his bunk... the lights are out. Slow push in... as we hear from the past -- DATA'S VOICE (V.O.) Proceeding with departure. Enterprise Shuttlebay Two, prepare for docking, level one precautions remain in effect. A beat. Then, suddenly Geordi sits up, eyes open, blinking in the dark. GEORDI I did miss something. As he gets up, puts on his VISOR and quickly EXITS... 35 INT. CORRIDOR Troi catches up to Worf, who's walking towards a turbolift. TROI Your first watch on Ops? WORF I've served at the position before. They stop at a turbolift door. TROI I've been concerned about you. Worf is uncomfortable with the counselor whenever she starts to talk about his feelings. STAR TREK: "The Most Toys" - REV. 2/25/90 - ACT THREE 28. 35 CONTINUED: WORF About me? Why? TROI Because I know how I'd feel if I were asked to replace Data at his station. Worf gives her a look. The turbolift arrives. They ENTER. 36 INT. TURBOLIFT WORF (to lift) Bridge. (to Troi) Promotion due to the death of a crewmate is commonplace on Klingon ships. TROI I know... but this isn't a Klingon ship... and Data was your friend. (beat) And it is the second time you've replaced a crewmate who's died. WORF I honor Data's memory as I did Lieutenant Yar's by attempting to perform their duties as well as they did. Troi accepts that he's okay. TROI (with respect) In true Klingon fashion. The turbolift arrives at the bridge and the door OPENS. WORF (softly) I appreciate your... concern. Worf then EXITS the lift and moves past the counselor as if he's admitted nothing. Troi smiles to herself, follows. STAR TREK: "The Most Toys" - REV. 2/26/90 - ACT THREE 29. 36A INT. MAIN ENGINEERING Geordi and Wesley working at a console. GEORDI Okay, computer, now replay shuttle audio transmission... time index zero-four-two-three... (to Wesley) Data's second trip... They listen as -- DATA'S VOICE (RECORDED) Proceeding with departure. Enterprise Shuttlebay Two, prepare for docking, level one precautions remain in effect. (a long beat) Shuttle has cleared Jovis cargo bay. Wesley reacts, puzzled at what Geordi's going for... WESLEY It sounds the same as the first trip... GEORDI Exactly the same. That's protocol. And that's Data. Following protocol to the letter. Computer, replay shuttle audio transmission, time index zero-four-three-nine... (to Wes) Third and final trip. DATA'S VOICE (RECORDED) Loading is complete. I am proceeding with departure. Enterprise Shuttlebay Two, prepare for docking, level one precautions remain in effect. Silence. GEORDI That's it. The last communication. STAR TREK: "The Most Toys" - REV. 2/26/90 - ACT THREE 29A. 36A CONTINUED: WESLEY He didn't report when the shuttle had cleared the cargo bay of the Jovis. STAR TREK: "The Most Toys" - REV. 2/25/90 - ACT THREE 30. 36A CONTINUED: GEORDI (devil's advocate) Of course, there really wasn't any reason for him to make voice contact. He knew we'd be monitoring his position... and any other pilot might not bother. But Data... not following standard procedures? WESLEY What do you think it means? GEORDI I'm not sure, Wes. I suppose he could've been too busy... maybe he saw something was wrong... WESLEY Without communicating it? That doesn't sound like Data either. GEORDI (acknowledges) Which means maybe something was wrong with him. But there's no other indication of that. In anything he said or did during the mission. None. (beat) I'd sure like to talk to the last people who saw him alive. 36B EXT. SPACE - THE JOVIS (OPTICAL) In orbit around a planet. 36C INT. FAJO'S DEN Data is now wearing the clothes that Fajo provided. He reacts as he hears the door begin to slide open laughter and voices... TOFF (O.S.) Did I mention that I've added a Veltan sex idol to my collection... FAJO (O.S.) (casual) I have four of them. STAR TREK: "The Most Toys" - REV. 2/25/90 - ACT FIVE 31. 36D NEW ANGLE on the door, losing Data, as they ENTER. Toff is patrician, well-tailored. TOFF With the pearls intact? FAJO (scoffs) The pearls were added by the Ferengi agents to increase the value. Veltans would never dishonor their gods with garish jewelry. Toff grunts... at just about the same time he sees Data... who is not looking at them... standing across the room rather stiffly by a wall. TOFF What... is that? (glances at Fajo) Something new? And you didn't tell me... Fajo suppresses his glee, moves toward Data... FAJO Mister Data, I'm delighted to see you have dressed for the occasion. Say hello to my very good friend Palor Toff... Data does not respond or even move a muscle. Eyes are frozen open. Varria reacts, what's he doing? Fajo has the barest first sign of irritation in his eyes... FAJO Come now, don't be shy... as if you could be shy... Nothing from Data. TOFF A mannequin of some sort? FAJO It is not a mannequin. It is Data... formerly Lieutenant Commander Data of the Federation Starfleet. The only sentient android in existence. STAR TREK: "The Most Toys" - REV. 2/27/90 - ACT THREE 32. 36D CONTINUED: TOFF It doesn't look particularly sentient right now... FAJO I fear he's playing a little game with us... TOFF Well, someone certainly has played a game on you, Fajo. FAJO I assure you it is the real thing. (to Varria) Tell him. Varria cannot help but be impressed with Data's passive resistance. She covers. VARRIA It is an android. (with a respectful subtext) A most unusual one. TOFF Perhaps its batteries have run down. Did it come with a guarantee? I hope. 36DA ANGLE (OPTICAL) FAJO (to Data) I am not amused. I demand you behave normally. (beat) Dammit, I know you can hear me! As he gets too close in his anger, the aura is briefly activated and from the impact, Data tips over and falls with a hard clank to the floor, like a suit of armor. TOFF He falls well. FAJO I apologize for this. STAR TREK: "The Most Toys" - REV. 2/26/90 - ACT THREE 33. 36DA CONTINUED: TOFF Don't be silly, my friend. I'm having a delightful visit. He takes Varria's arm and moves toward the door. TOFF (sexual innuendo) Come along, Varria. You're much more fun to play with than Fajo's new toy. 36E ANGLE - DATA'S FACE IN THE FOREGROUND Fajo leans down to Data. FAJO You will regret it. As they EXIT... and the door slides shut... and Data raises an eyebrow... 37 INT. MAIN BRIDGE Riker, Wesley at Conn, Worf at Ops, supernumerary at tactical. WESLEY Entering the Beta Agni system, Commander. RIKER Slow to impulse, Mister Crusher. Picard ENTERS from his Ready Room. GEORDI'S COM VOICE La Forge to bridge. PICARD Go ahead, Commander. INTERCUT: 37A INT. MAIN ENGINEERING Geordi working at one of the consoles. STAR TREK: "The Most Toys" - REV. 2/26/90 - ACT THREE 34. 37A CONTINUED: GEORDI Captain, a class two probe has been loaded with the hytritium compound and is ready to launch. PICARD Acknowledged. WESLEY Approaching Beta Agni Two. PICARD Mister Crusher, take us into a close orbit. Mister Data, scan the -- A hush falls over the bridge as everyone reacts to this. PICARD My apologies, Mister Worf. Scan the colony's subsurface water. WORF Scanning... Tricyanate contamination is confirmed. Levels approaching forty-two parts per million. RIKER Area affected? WORF Thirty square kilometers. PICARD Any indication of the source? WORF Highest concentration is eight kilometers west of the colony. RIKER Adjust target coordinates. WESLEY Aye, Commander. STAR TREK: "The Most Toys" - REV. 2/26/90 - ACT THREE 35. 37A CONTINUED: (2) GEORDI Captain, based on these figures, the eighty kilos of hytritium we have should be enough to neutralize the contamination. WESLEY We're approaching the target coordinates. PICARD Launch probe. 38 OMITTED 39 EXT. SPACE - THE ENTERPRISE (OPTICAL) orbiting a blue-green planet. The HYTRITIUM PROBE is jettisoned from the aft launcher like a photon torpedo. It arcs to the surface and is lost in the clouds. 40 INT. MAIN BRIDGE Worf checks his console. WORF Probe on target. Hytritium entering water table... disbursement slightly faster than expected. (frowning) Sir... something unusual. PICARD Specify. WORF I'm getting concentrated tricyanate readings of seventy grams per cubic centimeter at the source coordinates. Much higher than would normally occur. RIKER Any theories, Mister Worf... ? STAR TREK: "The Most Toys" - REV. 2/27/90 - ACT THREE 36. 40 CONTINUED: WORF Possibly the result of seismic activity. PICARD Computer, report on geologic instability on Beta Agni Two. COMPUTER VOICE No significant geological activity has been recorded on Beta Agni Two since the settlement of the Federation colony. RIKER Another theory, Mister Worf? Worf shakes his head. PICARD Number One, perhaps you should take an away team down and have a closer look. RIKER Yes, sir. (to Com) Doctor Crusher, report to Transporter Room Three. BEVERLY'S COM VOICE On my way. RIKER Mister Worf... ? Riker and Worf EXIT. 41 INT. FAJO'S DEN Fajo ENTERS, controlled seething. Data is standing, sees that Fajo is alone, resumes his animation. FAJO Our relationship is about to change. DATA You may expect me to use every means at my disposal to resist your wishes. STAR TREK: "The Most Toys" - REV. 2/26/90 - ACT THREE 36A. 41 CONTINUED: FAJO No, from now on, you will comply. You will not argue. You will begin by sitting in your chair. Data does not move. FAJO Sit! STAR TREK: "The Most Toys" - REV. 2/25/90 - ACT THREE 37. 41 CONTINUED: DATA I do not intend to sit in the chair. FAJO You will. You don't believe it yet. But you will. He goes to a wall safe with a combination lock... and opens it... takes out a nasty looking hand weapon which we will call a disruptor. FAJO Have you ever seen one of these, Data? DATA I do not recognize it. FAJO I'm not surprised. This is the prototype of the Varon-T disruptor. DATA (reacts) The Varon-T disruptor is banned in the Federation. FAJO Yes. Only five were ever manufactured. I own four. I sleep with one under my pillow. I sleep very well knowing it's there. DATA It is a most lethal weapon. FAJO Oh, it's much more than lethal, Data. It's vicious. It tears a body from the inside out, quite slowly by phaser standards, a tortuous, painful death. (beat, pointed) I've always wanted to try it. STAR TREK: "The Most Toys" - REV. 2/25/90 - ACT THREE 38. 41 CONTINUED: (2) DATA I am prepared to die. However, I doubt very much that you would destroy me since you assign so much value to possessing me. FAJO That goes without saying. He walks to the com panel. FAJO (to com) Please. Come in. The door opens and Varria ENTERS, awaits her orders. FAJO Sit down, my dear. Right here on the sofa. She does. FAJO How long have you been with me, Varria? VARRIA Fourteen years. FAJO Fourteen wonderful years. She was barely an adult when I found her. Idealistic. Naive. Full of dreams. And I made all her dreams come true. Didn't I? At a slight cost of course. She had to lose all those pesky ideals. But then maybe that was what made these years so wonderful, watching her lose them one by one until none were left. She stares at Fajo. Why are you doing this? FAJO I'm going to miss you. He raises the disruptor and aims it at her. Fear fills her face. STAR TREK: "The Most Toys" - REV. 2/25/90 - ACT THREE 39. 42 OMITTED 42A DATA reacts. 43 FAJO determined. DATA (O.S.) Fajo... Fajo turns to see -- 44 thru OMITTED 45 46 ANGLE - DATA for the first time is sitting in his chair. Fajo drops his aim. On his pleased look at Data... FADE OUT. END OF ACT THREE STAR TREK: "The Most Toys" - REV. 2/27/90 - ACT FOUR 40. ACT FOUR FADE IN: 47 EXT. SPACE - THE ENTERPRISE (OPTICAL) orbiting Beta Agni Two. 47A INT. BETA AGNI TWO CAVE (OPTICAL) The walls shimmer slightly from reflective mineral deposits... there are purple crystals scattered around the cave (golf ball size) ... a stream of water runs through. Riker, Beverly and Worf MATERIALIZE. Worf and Beverly take out their tricorders and scan the water. BEVERLY The contamination has been neutralized. Water's clean. WORF Most curious. (off Riker's look) The process of neutralization should have taken several hours. Naturally occuring tricyanate doesn't respond this quickly. RIKER Are you saying this was not naturally occuring? WORF (adjusts tricorder) There are no natural trace elements present in these tricyanate crystals. They react. STAR TREK: "The Most Toys" - REV. 2/26/90 - ACT FOUR 41. 47A CONTINUED: RIKER If it's artificial, then we're talking about sabotage. BEVERLY With tricyanate? That's hard to believe. (off Riker's look) It's slow to assimilate, difficult to replicate, and hard to transport. There are a lot easier ways to poison a water supply. A lot more effective ways too. Toxins that can't be neutralized. Bacteriologic agents with no cures at all. RIKER Can you think of any reason why a saboteur might choose tricyanate? BEVERLY Not really. (beat; well, maybe... ) It might pass for a natural disaster. And since there's only one way to treat it... with hytritium, maybe someone figured we wouldn't locate any... it is hard to come by. STAR TREK: "The Most Toys" - REV. 2/26/90 - ACT FOUR 41A. 47A CONTINUED: (2) A long pause. RIKER You know it really was lucky, wasn't it... ? (off their look) That we were able to find hytritium when we did. Just enough hytritium for this crisis. Off their reactions... 48 INT. OBSERVATION LOUNGE Picard, Riker, Worf, Beverly and Geordi. STAR TREK: "The Most Toys" - REV. 2/27/90 - ACT FOUR 42. 48 CONTINUED: RIKER Fajo showed up in the right place at the right time... just when we needed him the most... PICARD You're suggesting he created the problem just to solve it? RIKER Possibly. GEORDI To make a profit from his sale of hytritium... ? BEVERLY That doesn't add up. The cost of producing tricyanate is too expensive. He wouldn't make a profit... quite the contrary. WORF Then, why would he do it? RIKER What could he want? Geordi is the first to suspect... he looks at Riker... the silent communication passes through the room. PICARD Computer, biographical file on trader Kivas Fajo. COMPUTER VOICE Accessing file... Kivas Fajo: A Zibalian trader of the Stacius trade guild... a noted collector... 48A FACES - REACTIONS COMPUTER VOICE (continuing) ... of rare and valuable objects including the Rejac Crystal, The Starry Night by Van Gogh and the Lawmim Galactopedia... educated on Iraatan Five... STAR TREK: "The Most Toys" - REV. 2/27/90 - ACT FOUR 43. 48A CONTINUED: And Picard is calmly furious... PICARD Computer, that will suffice. RIKER A rare and valuable object... GEORDI If Data wasn't on the shuttle... PICARD (keys insignia) Mister Crusher... WESLEY'S COM VOICE Aye, sir... PICARD Set course for the site of the shuttlepod explosion. Warp eight. Reactions around the table and... 49 INT. FAJO'S DEN - NIGHT Data sits on the framework chair in the center of the collection. Varria ENTERS alone. She pauses at the door, looks at Data. VARRIA He would have killed me. DATA It seemed a distinct possibility. VARRIA I'm sorry I did this to you. And it's awkward for her, because she is here on an assignment... a beat as she crosses to him. VARRIA You can stand up if you want to. He doesn't. VARRIA You're... you're not what I thought you'd be... STAR TREK: "The Most Toys" - REV. 2/26/90 - ACT FOUR 44. 49 CONTINUED: DATA What did you expect? VARRIA A machine. A robot, I guess. Not anything so... well almost human. DATA Thank you. She moves closer to him, attempts to smile... and there's a beginning of sexual tension here... She looks down at the floor... looks back up like she's having hard time with this. DATA Is something troubling you, Varria? A beat as she switches off the belt protector, leans over and kisses Data on the lips. Data never closes his eyes of course. Her lip trembles. VARRIA Your lips. They're warm. DATA Thirty-seven degrees Celsius. Adjustable. I chose this temperature to approximate human skin texture. VARRIA How human are you? DATA Physically, I am capable of performing many human functions. However, I have no emotional responses. VARRIA You're not the first man I've known like that. A beat. VARRIA Have you ever made love, Data? STAR TREK: "The Most Toys" - REV. 2/25/90 - ACT FOUR 45. 49 CONTINUED: (2) DATA I have had one sexual encounter. But I am incapable of making love as you describe it since I cannot feel love. She looks hard at him... with a dramatic motion, she removes her safety belt. It drops to the floor. VARRIA Would you... do it with me? Another beat. DATA Why? VARRIA (embarrassed) Why not? DATA It is an act that symbolizes the highest level of intimacy between beings. I have told you that I am unable to feel intimacy. I find it difficult to accept that you could have intimate feelings toward me under these conditions. Therefore you are either simply curious. Or you have been sent by Kivas Fajo to test my sexual abilities. FAJO'S COM VOICE You are just too smart for your own good, android. They react. FAJO'S COM VOICE I was hoping to see a little spontaneity but obviously neither one of you is capable of it. This mating dance is really quite dull. We'll try it again tomorrow. You may leave, Varria. Varria is completely humiliated. She exchanges a look with Data. A tear rolls down her cheek. She EXITS. On Data's reaction... STAR TREK: "The Most Toys" - REV. 2/26/90 - ACT FOUR 46. 50 EXT. SPACE - THE ENTERPRISE (OPTICAL) At warp. 51 INT. MAIN BRIDGE - SCIENCE STATION (OPTICAL) Wesley, Picard, Riker at a monitor with an Okudagram graphic of the sector... WESLEY The Jovis has a maximum speed of warp three. He's had twenty-three hours... so we can define a perimeter of point-one-oh-two light years as his possible range... RIKER And Fajo doesn't know we're onto him, so he probably isn't taxing his engines by going at top speed. WESLEY He could have made it to the Nel Bato system... maybe even the Giles Belt... PICARD He's a trader... he doesn't attract customers by being hard to find... RIKER We could put out a coded level two query to all Federation ouposts within the perimeter... PICARD Make it so. 51A EXT. SPACE - THE JOVIS (OPTICAL) Moving through space at impulse. STAR TREK: "The Most Toys" - REV. 2/26/90 - ACT FOUR 46A. 52 thru OMITTED 56 57 INT. FAJO'S DEN Data is at the safe... his fingers moving beyond belief through varied combination attempts... reacts as the door slides open... STAR TREK: "The Most Toys" - REV. 2/26/90 - ACT FOUR 47. 57 CONTINUED: (2) Varria ENTERS... not wearing the belt... checks behind her, makes sure she hasn't been seen. She moves to Data... a beat. VARRIA If I help you escape... will you take me with you? Data hesitates, studies her... VARRIA (continuing) This is not another test. He's asleep. And there isn't much time... Data stands. DATA The consequences to you if we're caught... VARRIA I know the consequences. She moves purposefully to the safe... opening the combination -- VARRIA (continuing; re: the combination) Fourteen years... you learn a few things... She takes out the disruptor. VARRIA (continuing) There's an escape pod in the aft cargo bay... And as she leads him out... 58 thru OMITTED 59 FADE OUT. END OF ACT FOUR STAR TREK: "The Most Toys" - REV. 2/26/90 - ACT FIVE 48. ACT FIVE FADE IN: 59A EXT. SPACE - THE ENTERPRISE (OPTICAL) At warp. 59B INT. MAIN BRIDGE Picard, Riker, Worf, Wesley at their stations... supernumerary at tactical. WORF Sir, affirmative response from station Lya Four... Riker and Picard move to a console... Riker punches up a monitor... a message prints out quickly on the monitor... RIKER Fajo spent almost half a day in orbit... departed just over seven hours ago. PICARD Mister Crusher, new coordinates... set a course for Lya Four... WESLEY Coordinates already laid in, sir... PICARD Engage. 59C EXT. SPACE - THE ENTERPRISE (OPTICAL) Changing course. STAR TREK: "The Most Toys" - REV. 2/27/90 - ACT FIVE 49. 60 INT. JOVIS CARGO BAY Deserted... the door slides open and Varria and Data enter... cross quickly across the bay... DATA Perhaps if I attempted to communicate with the Enterprise... VARRIA You can't... Fajo has communications access restricted to the bridge. Once we're out, the shuttlepod will emit an emergency beacon. We'll have to hope somebody responds before Fajo is able to destroy us. DATA I have been trained in evasive maneuvers... VARRIA We'll need a few. (points to the shuttle) Get ready... As soon as I initiate the escape sequence, an alarm will sound... we won't have much time... Data acknowledges... and they split up. He goes to the pod and gets in the pilot seat... we move with her to the computer-control terminal... punches in a series of commands... saves one for last, looks at Data -- He nods he's ready. She punches in the last command and all hell breaks loose... alarms sound, lights flash... she barely moves away from the computer port when the door slides open and TECH #1 runs in... she raises the disruptor, points it at him... he reacts, freezes in his tracks. She moves quickly toward the pod... keeping an eye on him as she does... 61 ANGLE to see a SECOND TECHNICIAN entering from her blind side... he reacts... STAR TREK: "The Most Toys" - REV. 2/26/90 - ACT FIVE 50. 61A DATA sees him... DATA (warning) Varria... But before he can say anything else... 62 VARRIA is blind-sided by the technician... She struggles with him... he easily disarms her... 62A THE DISRUPTOR falls to the floor... 62B DATA jumps out of the pod... 63 TECHNICIAN #1 runs to the computer bay to stop the launch sequence... STAR TREK: "The Most Toys" - REV. 2/27/90 - ACT FIVE 51. 64 thru OMITTED 64B 65 DATA moves swiftly to aide Varria... grabs Technician #2, separating him from Varria, picks him up in the air easily... tosses him aside. 66 OMITTED 66A TECH #1 at the computer, reacts, picks up a heavy tool, rushes Data... swings the tool which Data simply catches in one hand, pulls it free, tosses it away... pushes him out of the way. 66B ANGLE Tech #1 slides way across the floor from Data's push. 66C VARRIA runs back toward the computer to reset the escape sequence, but as she does... 67 FAJO appears... and it all happens so quickly: 67A VARRIA - QUICK CUT reacts as she sees Fajo... looks over to see -- 67B THE DISRUPTOR - QUICK CUT she dropped on the floor... several yards away... and maybe she has one chance at it... 67C HER EYES - QUICK CUT dart back at Fajo. STAR TREK: "The Most Toys" - REV. 2/26/90 - ACT FIVE 51A. 67D FAJO'S EYES - QUICK CUT narrow. 67E HIS HAND - QUICK CUT holding another disruptor, starting to raise... 68 DATA - QUICK CUT reaching out to... 68A VARRIA who's already beyond his grasp... diving to the floor for her disruptor... and she comes up short... scrambles to get to it... but with each move realizes she's too late... and finally stops, looks back at Fajo... almost a resigned smile on her face... and then oddly everything just seems to stop for a long beat... STAR TREK: "The Most Toys" - REV. 2/27/90 - ACT FIVE 52. 69 WIDE (OPTICAL) Fajo holds the disruptor on Varria... they look at each other... he sighs, shrugs, fires. She screams a horrible scream... slowly DEMATERIALIZES... the scream echoes after she's gone. Data is stunned. Stares at Fajo. Fajo himself is a little shaken by what he's done. FAJO This is your fault. You knew the price for disobedience. And so did she. Fajo tosses his weapon away, repulsed by the violence he has committed... trying to walk away from it. Calming himself down. Nods to himself. Yes, it was the right thing to do. FAJO Well, there's always another Varria. 70 ANGLE ON DATA (OPTICAL) looking at Fajo for a beat. Then, Data moves to the disruptor and picks it up. The trader is surprised for a moment... perhaps there is even an instant of fear, but then he smiles. FAJO (cont'd) You can't hurt me. Data aims the disruptor at Fajo. FAJO (cont'd) A fundamental respect for all living beings. That is what you said. I'm a living being... therefore you cannot harm me. Data moves toward Fajo. DATA You will surrender yourself to the authorities. Fajo laughs. FAJO Or what? You'll fire? STAR TREK: "The Most Toys" - REV. 2/27/90 - ACT FIVE 53. 70 CONTINUED: Data continues to approach Fajo. FAJO (cont'd) An empty threat and we both know it. Data holds his aim true. FAJO (cont'd) Accept your fate. You will return to your chair and you will sit there. You will entertain me and you will entertain my guests. And if you do not, I will simply kill somebody else... (re: the dazed techs, watching) Him or him maybe... anyone, it does not matter... and their blood will be on your hands too... just like poor Varria's. Data continues to move toward Fajo. Who smiles confidently. FAJO (cont'd) Your only alternative, Data, is to fire. Murder me. That's all you have to do. Go ahead. All your troubles are over. Fire. Are you searching through your program for a loophole, perhaps? Is there one? If only you could feel rage over Varria's death... feel the need for revenge... then maybe you could fire. But you're only an android. You don't feel anything, do you? It's just another interesting intellectual puzzle for you. Another of life's curiosities. Data stops before him... DATA I cannot permit this to continue. He raises the weapon. Fajo's eyes open with unexpected fear... He suddenly realizes he's about to die. STAR TREK: "The Most Toys" - REV. 2/27/90 - ACT FIVE 53A. 70 CONTINUED: (2) FAJO You can't. Your program won't allow it. You cannot fire. You will not... Suddenly Data DEMATERIALIZES. 70A thru OMITTED 70B 71 INT. TRANSPORTER ROOM (OPTICAL) Riker and O'Brien await Data's arrival. O'Brien frowns at his console; it's reading something odd. O'BRIEN I'm reading a weapon in transit with Commander Data. It seems to have discharged, sir. RIKER Discharged... ? O'BRIEN I'm deactivating the weapon. His hands play over the controls. Finally Data MATERIALIZES, holding the disruptor. He looks at it. RIKER Welcome back, Mister Data. Are you all right? STAR TREK: "The Most Toys" - REV. 2/27/90 - ACT FIVE 54. 71 CONTINUED: Walks off the transporter pad. DATA Yes, Commander. Please arrange to take Kivas Fajo into custody for murder, kidnapping, theft... RIKER (interrupting) Arrangements have already been made. Data hands the disruptor to Riker... DATA A Varon-T disruptor. It belongs to Fajo. RIKER (curious) Mister O'Brien says the weapon was in a state of discharge... STAR TREK: "The Most Toys" - REV. 2/26/90 - ACT FIVE 54A. 71 CONTINUED: DATA (beat) Perhaps something happened during transport, Commander. Riker gives Data a look -- during transport? Data gives Riker a look right back... that's all I'm going to say. STAR TREK: "The Most Toys" - REV. 2/26/90 - ACT FIVE 55. 72 OMITTED 73 EXT. SPACE - THE ENTERPRISE (OPTICAL) by the Jovis. 74 INT. ENTERPRISE DETENTION CELL (OPTICAL) Kivas Fajo, in the cell, paces the floor. He seems more annoyed than angry. Data ENTERS, once again in uniform. FAJO So. Have you come for your final satisfaction? You wish me to repent? Beg for mercy? You'll have none of it from me. DATA I expected none. FAJO It seems our roles are reversed... aren't they, Data... you are now the collector... and I... He puts his hand to the forcefield and activates it. FAJO ... am in your cage. DATA So it seems. FAJO Do not count me out so quickly. I had you once. I may have you back in my collection again. DATA Unlikely. Your collection has been confiscated pending your trial. All of your stolen possessions are being returned to their rightful owners. (MORE) STAR TREK: "The Most Toys" - REV. 2/26/90 - ACT FIVE 56-57. 74 CONTINUED: DATA (Cont'd) You have lost everything you value. And, as Data said, as a man who defines himself by what he can possess, this news is hard to endure. FAJO (bitterly) I'm sure that gives you great pleasure. DATA No, sir, it does not. I do not feel pleasure. I am only an android. Data EXITS. On Fajo's expression... 75 thru OMITTED 80 FADE OUT. END OF ACT FIVE THE END STAR TREK: THE NEXT GENERATION "Sarek" #40273-171 From an unpublished story by Marc Cushman & Jake Jacobs Television Story & Teleplay by Peter S. 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FINAL DRAFT MARCH 5, 1990 STAR TREK: "Sarek" - 3/5/90 - CAST STAR TREK: THE NEXT GENERATION "Sarek" CAST PICARD SAREK RIKER PERRIN DATA SAKKATH BEVERLY KI MENDROSSEN TROI GEORDI WORF WESLEY O'BRIEN SCIENCE CREWMEMBER Non-Speaking SUPERNUMERARIES SEVERAL CREWMEMBERS MUSICIANS MEDICAL TECHNICIAN INJURED CREWPERSON HONOR GUARD (4) STAR TREK: "Sarek" 3/5/90 - SETS STAR TREK: THE NEXT GENERATION "Sarek" SETS INTERIORS EXTERIORS USS ENTERPRISE USS ENTERPRISE MAIN BRIDGE CAPTAIN'S READY ROOM OBSERVATION LOUNGE CONFERENCE ROOM TRANSPORTER ROOM CORRIDOR TURBOLIFT TEN-FORWARD BEVERLY'S OFFICE PICARD'S QUARTERS SAREK'S GUEST QUARTERS SHIP'S THEATRE STAR TREK: "Sarek" - REV. 3/8/90 - PRONUNCIATION STAR TREK: THE NEXT GENERATION "Sarek" PRONUNCIATION GUIDE BENDII BEN-die CORIDAN CORE-ah-don KI MENDROSSEN KEY men-DROH-zhen LEGARANS leh-GAIR-uns PERRIN PER-in SAKKATH SAK-uth SAREK SAR (rhymes with FAR)-eck STAR TREK: "Sarek" - REV. 3/15/90 - TEASER 1. STAR TREK: THE NEXT GENERATION "Sarek" TEASER FADE IN: 1 EXT. SPACE - THE ENTERPRISE (OPTICAL) The ship is in orbit around a red/brown planet. PICARD (V.O.) Captain's log, Stardate 43917.4 The Enterprise has been given the singular honor of hosting the first face to face meeting between the Federation and the mysterious race of beings known as the Legarans. We are in orbit around Vulcan preparing to welcome aboard the Federation ambassador that has made this historic event possible. 2 INT. CORRIDOR PICARD and RIKER are walking to the Transporter Room. They are in dress uniforms. RIKER (slightly awed) I can remember studying his career in school... the treaty of Alpha Cygnus Nine, the Coridan admission to the Federation, the Klingon Alliance... PICARD I met him once... Many years ago, just briefly at his son's wedding. (smiles at memory) But I'll tell you it was quite a moment for a young lieutenant. Standing in the presence of such history... I was a little tongue-tied to be quite frank... RIKER You... tongue-tied? STAR TREK: "Sarek" - REV. 3/15/90 - TEASER 2. 2 CONTINUED: PICARD Indeed. After all, how does one make small talk with a man who has virtually shaped the Federation... RIKER Is it true that he'll be retiring after this mission? PICARD Unofficially, that's what I hear. And what a crowning achievement this will be to his career. The benefits of relations with the Legarans are incalculable. They have arrived at the Transporter Room. 3 INT. TRANSPORTER ROOM (OPTICAL) There are FOUR CREWMEMBERS forming an honor guard on either side of the transporter stage. They stand at attention. O'BRIEN is at the console, as KI MENDROSSEN (a human -- fifty-five, stocky, comp), and SAKKATH (A Vulcan, early twenties) MATERIALIZE on the pads. They step off. MENDROSSEN Ah... Captain Picard. I am Ki Mendrossen, the ambassador's chief of staff. This is Sakkath, his personal assistant. PICARD Has the ambassador been delayed? STAR TREK: "Sarek" - 3/5/90 - TEASER 3. 3 CONTINUED: MENDROSSEN He will be joining us momentarily. But first we must discuss some matters of the utmost delicacy. Picard and Riker exchange a quick look. What's going on? PICARD By all means. MENDROSSEN To be frank Captain, the ambassador is not a young man. He tires easily. SAKKATH He is going to need a great deal of rest to prepare himself for the difficult job that awaits him. MENDROSSEN Which is why it's imperative that he be allowed to conserve his strength. I must request that you dispense with any official ceremonies you would normally accord a visitor of his rank. RIKER We had planned for a ship's concert this evening. PICARD Yes, I believe that the ambassador is extremely fond of Mozart. Mendrossen reluctantly shakes his head. MENDROSSEN I'm afraid it would be impossible for him to attend. Upon his arrival he will be taken directly to his quarters where he will remain in seclusion until we reach Legara Four. PICARD You have my assurance that the ambassador will not be disturbed during our voyage. STAR TREK: "Sarek" - REV. 3/6/90 - TEASER 4. 3 CONTINUED: (2) Mendrossen relaxes, an ingratiating smile. MENDROSSEN That's all we ask. Well, now... that's settled. The ambassador is waiting. Picard nods to O'Brien who works his controls. 4 TRANSPORTER (OPTICAL) SAREK and his wife, PERRIN (a human) MATERIALIZE. Sarek is indeed old, but immensely commanding. A genuinely regal figure. Perrin is much younger -- about Picard's age -- poised and charming, with an immediate warmth about her. PICARD Welcome aboard the Enterprise Ambassador Sarek. SAREK We come to serve. PICARD Your service honors us. SAREK Allow me to present she who is my wife. PICARD Mrs. Sarek. PERRIN Please call me Perrin, Captain. PICARD This is my first officer, Commander Riker. Riker and Sarek exchange nods. PERRIN Captain, if you'd be so kind as to show us to our quarters. SAREK I prefer to view the conference room first. STAR TREK: "Sarek" - REV. 3/6/90 - TEASER 5. 4 CONTINUED: Mendrossen moves closer to Sarek. MENDROSSEN Ambassador, I'm sure Sakkath and I can handle all the necessary details... SAREK I will examine it for myself. An awkward moment as Mendrossen and Perrin exchange a brief glance. PERRIN Dear, perhaps it would be best if we settled in first. Sarek silences her with a look. SAREK They worry about my health, Captain. Too much. (a beat) You will take me to the conference room, please. And there's no doubt that he means it. RIKER If you'll follow me, sir. Mendrossen and Sakkath close in behind Sarek as Riker leads them out of the Transporter Room. Perrin looks back and smiles at Picard in gracious apology. 5 CLOSE ON PICARD Things haven't gone at all the way he expected. He doesn't look troubled, exactly -- only wondering... FADE OUT. END OF TEASER STAR TREK: "Sarek" - 3/5/90 - ACT ONE 6. ACT ONE FADE IN: 6 INT. CONFERENCE ROOM The room is currently dominated by a large bulky tank about chest high containing a gaseous/liquid revolting mixture. GEORDI, WESLEY, and a few SUPERNUMERARIES are busily connecting a complicated series of pipes and cables around the tank. There are a few pictures on the walls and a generic table with chairs. Wesley peers into the tank with disgust. WESLEY Are the Legarans really going to sit in this stuff? GEORDI Well, I'm sure not. WESLEY Can you believe this smell? GEORDI What smell? Wesley looks up in surprise. Geordi laughs and Wesley gives him an abashed grin. GEORDI What can I say... to us it's a slime pit, to them it's home. WESLEY (a little eager) The environmental controls are ready. What's next? GEORDI Why? Are you in some kind of hurry? WESLEY I have... sort of a date. GEORDI (surprised) With who? WESLEY (shy, but proud) Ensign Dumont. STAR TREK: "Sarek" - 3/5/90 - ACT ONE 7. 6 CONTINUED: GEORDI (whistles) That is one attractive lady. I've got to admit I'm surprised. WESLEY (grinning) What, that she'd go out with me? GEORDI No, that you had the nerve to ask her. Way to go Wesley. Sarek, Sakkath, Perrin, Picard and Riker ENTER. Sarek walks to the center of the room, looks things over and is immediately displeased. Sarek's attitude is irritated and he seems to grow more agitated by the moment. SAREK The room is not ready. PICARD No Ambassador. Commander La Forge and Ensign Crusher are--- SAREK The Legarans are very sensitive in matters of protocol. You will remove all furniture from the room. The walls must be bare. MENDROSSEN I'm sure that by the time the Legarans arrive, everything will be set up according to our specifications. Isn't that right, Captain? PICARD Ambassador, please be assured that everything will be ready by the time the conference begins. PERRIN My husband and I have every confidence in you, Captain. Sarek continues to look over the room. STAR TREK: "Sarek" - REV. 3/15/90 - ACT ONE 8. 6 CONTINUED: (2) SAREK (voice rises slightly) I have worked for ninety-three years in preparation for this meeting. It is vital that no detail be overlooked. Sakkath moves next to Sarek. As Sakkath looks at Sarek, there is a subtle change in Sarek's demeanor. He becomes more impassive, less irritated. The interaction between Sakkath and Sarek should not be immediately obvious. SAKKATH Perhaps we should allow these gentlemen to return to their work, Ambassador. SAREK That will be acceptable. Sarek leads the way back out of the room with Sakkath and Mendrossen. As he reaches the doorway Sarek pauses and looks at the wall. SAREK These walls are too bright. Sarek, Sakkath and Mendrossen EXIT. STAR TREK: "Sarek" - REV. 3/15/90 - ACT ONE 9. 7 OMITTED 8 EXT. SPACE - THE ENTERPRISE (OPTICAL) The ship goes into warp. 9 INT. MAIN BRIDGE Picard and Riker (now in standard uniforms) at Command along with TROI. WORF at his station. TROI So what was the ambassador like? RIKER The way Mendrossen described him, I expected him to be a frail old man. PICARD I hope I'm that frail when I'm two hundred and two. His aides did seem a little overprotective, didn't they? RIKER From what I could see, the ambassador doesn't need to be protected from anything. PICARD Nevertheless, we will honor Mister Mendrossen's request and allow Ambassador Sarek his privacy. (beat, sighs) I suppose they were foolish and vain, my expectations of this voyage. Sharing his thoughts, his memories, his unique understanding of the history he has made... TROI Does this mean you're going to cancel the concert this evening? PICARD No, the concert will go on as scheduled. But it is a pity that the guest of honor will be absent. STAR TREK: "Sarek" - REV. 3/15/90 - ACT ONE 9A. 9 CONTINUED: RIKER For all we know, the ambassador might enjoy an evening's entertainment... TROI (to Picard) Why not ask his wife if she'd like to attend? Picard considers this for a beat. He nods. STAR TREK: "Sarek" - 3/5/90 - ACT ONE 10. 9 CONTINUED: PICARD I think that's an excellent idea. Riker smiles in approval. Picard stands. PICARD The bridge is yours, Number One. Picard heads for the turbolift. 10 INT. GUEST QUARTERS The door CHIMES. The blinds over the windows are closed. As Perrin moves toward the door, we can see that she looks very tired, almost exhausted. She presses the control panel and the door slides open, revealing Picard. PERRIN Come in, Captain. PICARD I hope I'm not intruding. PERRIN Not at all. But I'm afraid that Sarek is in meditation at the moment. PICARD Actually, I came to see you. Perrin leads him into the room. PERRIN (lightly) Why, how nice Captain. I so rarely get visitors of my own. Usually everyone wants to see the ambassador. PICARD I find that hard to believe. Perrin smiles at him warmly. She indicates a seat for the captain and they both sit down. STAR TREK: "Sarek" - REV. 3/7/90 - ACT ONE 11. 10 CONTINUED: PERRIN These quarters are lovely. (beat) The ambassador and I were both very pleased when we heard that the negotiations would take place aboard the flagship of the Federation. PICARD The honor is ours. PERRIN My husband has followed your career with interest. He finds it to be satisfactory. PICARD (reacts with pleasure) High praise from a Vulcan. PERRIN Ah, then you have had experience with Vulcans, Captain. Some people who expect an emotional response often find Vulcans quite cold when they are merely being... PICARD Logical. PERRIN Exactly. PICARD I have come to extend my personal invitation to you... and your husband, if he is available, to attend a Mozart recital this evening. And now Perrin's face really brightens in anticipation. PERRIN Mozart? That would be wonderful. Any chance that they will be performing the string quartet number six? PICARD I'm sure it could be arranged. STAR TREK: "Sarek" - 3/5/90 - ACT ONE 12. 10 CONTINUED: (2) PERRIN It's a very tempting offer... (looks over at door to adjacent room) I doubt that the ambassador will be able to attend, but I will make it a point to ask him. Picard stands and Perrin escorts him to the door. PICARD Well, then I hope to see you tonight. PERRIN As do I. Picard EXITS. 11 CLOSE ON PERRIN as she turns away from the door. Her face clouds slightly as she moves toward the closed door to the adjacent room. 12 INT. SLEEPING QUARTERS Sarek is kneeling on a angled stool (like a computer stool). His eyes are wide open, and his expression is not calm and distant, but conscious and troubled. 13 ANGLE ON DOOR The door slides aside and Perrin ENTERS. The easy, light manner that she showed to Picard is gone. This is a deeply worried woman. She goes over to Sarek and puts her hand on his shoulder. Sarek looks up at her. PERRIN You are still unable to meditate? SAREK It is of no importance. PERRIN It has eluded you for many weeks. Sarek gets up, towers over his wife with a vague air of threat. STAR TREK: "Sarek" - 3/5/90 - ACT ONE 13. 13 CONTINUED: SAREK (low) I said, it is of no importance. PERRIN (not backing down) You know I am right. SAREK My wife, you will leave me now. I require solitude. There is a beat of silence as Perrin considers refusing. She thinks better of it, then EXITS. PUSH IN on Sarek... and we see a flicker of turmoil within. 14 INT. CONFERENCE ROOM Geordi and Wesley are still working on the tanks. The supernumeraries are no longer present. The pictures and furnishings seen earlier have been removed. WESLEY The temperature in the tank is now one hundred fifty degrees Celsius. GEORDI Okay, lock it off. Wesley works the control on the tank. He turns back to Geordi and his tone of voice suddenly becomes somewhat surly. WESLEY Is that it? Can I get out of here? And at first it just seems like kidding around... GEORDI What's your hurry? You don't really think something's gonna happen between you and Suzanne Dumont... WESLEY At least I'm not spending the night with a good book like some people... STAR TREK: "Sarek" - 3/5/90 - ACT ONE 14. 14 CONTINUED: And now slowly it begins to turn into something more... with just an edge -- GEORDI What's that supposed to mean? WESLEY Just what it sounds like. GEORDI You'd get more action out of a good book than you'll ever see on this date, I guarantee it... she's not going to waste her time with someone like you. And now this is really getting nasty... WESLEY Someone like me? GEORDI She's way out of your league. WESLEY Since when did you become an expert on women? GEORDI Compared to you, every man on this ship is an expert on women. WESLEY At least I don't have to find my women in the Holodeck! GEORDI (deadly) What did you say? WESLEY You heard me! Wesley shoves Geordi hard. Geordi looks like he's going to take Wesley apart when... 15 NEW ANGLE Riker ENTERS. He looks at the two of them as they glare at each other. STAR TREK: "Sarek" - 3/5/90 - ACT ONE 15. 15 CONTINUED: RIKER Something wrong? They don't respond, but continue to stare at each other. RIKER (edge of command in voice) I asked a question. GEORDI No, sir. Nothing wrong here. WESLEY (to Riker) May I be excused, Commander? Riker nods and Wesley EXITS. Riker looks at Geordi and his voice is a little less official. RIKER Anything you want to talk about, Geordi? GEORDI No, sir. Geordi returns to the tanks. On Riker's puzzled expression... FADE OUT. END OF ACT ONE STAR TREK: "Sarek" - REV. 3/8/90 - ACT TWO 16. ACT TWO FADE IN: 16 INT. SHIP'S THEATER The ship's concert has not yet begun, but SUPERNUMERARIES are filing into the room. On stage, a string quartet with DATA prominent among them, is tuning up. 17 OMITTED 18 ON PICARD AND RIKER as they ENTER and move to their seats. PICARD I noticed that Lieutenant Worf put Ensign D'Amato on report... for insubordination. RIKER D'Amato's been an exemplary officer. They sit. BEVERLY and TROI are seated nearby. PICARD Indeed he has. Look into it, Number One. (beat) I assume work has been progressing in the conference room? RIKER Yes, sir. I checked on Geordi and Wesley a few hours ago. (beat while he wonders whether to mention it) For a moment there... I thought that the two of them were actually going to... hit one another. STAR TREK: "Sarek" - REV. 3/6/90 - ACT TWO 17. 18 CONTINUED: Picard notices something o.s. and stands up. 19 NEW ANGLE including doorway. Sarek and Perrin have entered. Mendrossen is behind them and Sakkath is close by Sarek. Everyone in the theater stands. FOLLOW THEM as they walk over to where Picard and Riker are waiting. PICARD Ambassador Sarek, Perrin... on behalf of my entire crew, welcome. Picard and Perrin exchange a smile. Sarek notices this. SAREK It was my wife's suggestion that we attend... and it seemed an ideal diversion. My wife can be quite logical when she so chooses. Perrin only smiles wider. MENDROSSEN (jovially) It seems the ambassador had more free time than I anticipated. Picard waves over Data who walks over carrying his violin. PICARD This is Commander Data. He will be the featured soloist this evening. DATA (to Perrin) We will start the evening with Mozart's string quartet number six. I am programmed to reproduce the individual musical styles of over three hundred concert violinists, including Heifitz, Menuhin, Grak-tay and Tataglia. Do you have a preference? STAR TREK: "Sarek" - REV. 3/6/90 - ACT TWO 18. 19 CONTINUED: Both Perrin and Sarek are impressed. Perrin looks to Sarek and he indicates that the choice is hers. PERRIN Tataglia would be lovely. DATA I hope you find the performance pleasing. PERRIN I look forward to it. Picard indicates their seats and turns to Data. PICARD At your convenience, Commander. 20 NEW ANGLE Data walks over to stage, nods to the other musicians and begins to play. 21 NEW ANGLE Perrin and Sarek appear to be concentrating on the music while Mendrossen and Sakkath keep stealing glances at Sarek. TIME CUT: 22 ANGLE ON STAGE The musicians are playing a new piece of music. Data is giving a perfect performance. This piece must be very emotional. (Note: it is the beauty of the music which creates the emotional response in the audience... a perhaps familiar melody that stirs memories.) 23 ANGLE ON CROWD We PAN across the gathered crewmen and we can see that they are caught up in the lovely music. END PAN on Sarek, who seems surprisingly moved. STAR TREK: "Sarek" - REV. 3/6/90 - ACT TWO 19. 23A ON TROI She is listening to the music. She suddenly senses something odd and looks around the room in puzzlement. 23B NEW ANGLE on Mendrossen and Sakkath. Sakkath has noticed Sarek's change of mood and is leaning over to whisper something to Mendrossen. They look at Sarek with alarm. Mendrossen tries to get Perrin's attention in front of him, cannot do it... 23C ON SAREK getting very caught up in the moment. 23D thru OMITTED 23H 23I ECU - SAREK'S EYE as a tear begins to form. 23J SAKKATH - CU straining with his mind, trying to reach out telepathically to Sarek. 23K ANGLE - SAREK in the foreground, Picard behind him... Picard (or for that matter any other member of the crew) cannot see Sarek's face from his angle, so he is unaware of what's happening... although he may respond to some movement in Sarek's party. 23L THE TEAR rolls slowly down Sarek's cheek. 23M ON PERRIN who glances over and sees the tear... a second of panic crosses her eyes, then she quickly leans over and whispers something to her husband, using the excuse to try and wipe... STAR TREK: "Sarek" - REV. 3/15/90 - ACT TWO 20. 23N CLOSE - SAREK'S CHEEK but the tear just escapes her touch and... 23O PICARD'S EYES glance toward Sarek and Perrin whispering... 23P ANGLE - PICARD'S POV - SAREK'S PROFILE backlit by the stage lights... as the tear drop glistens. 23Q PICARD - CLOSE reacts. 23R ANGLE as Perrin and Sarek stand and leave. 23S ON TROI as she watches them leave. 23T ON PICARD thinking about what's just happened. 24 thru OMITTED 25 25A EXT. SPACE - THE ENTERPRISE (OPTICAL) The ship still at warp. 26 OMITTED 27 INT. BEVERLY'S OFFICE Wesley ENTERS. Beverly is drinking tea and reading a medical journal on the terminal. STAR TREK: "Sarek" - REV. 3/15/90 - ACT TWO 21. 27 CONTINUED: WESLEY Hi Mom. I got a message you wanted to see me? BEVERLY I thought you were going to be at the concert last night. WESLEY I said I might be going. Suzanne wanted to go to the arboretum. Wesley is unconcerned at this point. Beverly, however, is starting a slow burn. BEVERLY Captain Picard asked where you were. I don't like having to make excuses for you. WESLEY (surprised) Excuses? Come on, Mom... it wasn't an official function. Wesley picks up some small art object from a table and starts to absently toy with it. Beverly grabs it from him. BEVERLY You have responsibilities young man and I expect you to live up to them! STAR TREK: "Sarek" - 3/5/90 - ACT TWO 22. 27 CONTINUED: (2) WESLEY Don't you think you're overreacting a little? BEVERLY Don't talk back to me! WESLEY (hurt) Okay, I won't. Wesley turns and tries to leave. Beverly grabs him and yanks him back. BEVERLY Where do you think you're going? WESLEY (strong) Away from you. Beverly slaps him hard. Wesley is clearly shocked. WESLEY Mom! There is a long beat as Beverly realizes what she's done. As they stand there in silence, staring at each other, it is hard to say which one is more hurt or shocked. 28 OMITTED 28A INT. TROI'S OFFICE Troi and Beverly are discussing the incident in Beverly's quarters. Beverly is extremely upset and is pacing around the room. BEVERLY ... and then I just slapped him. Really hard. (incredulous) I slapped Wesley. TROI Do you know why you did it? STAR TREK: "Sarek" - REV. 3/8/90 - ACT TWO 23. 28A CONTINUED: BEVERLY (on the verge of tears) I never hit my son in his life. TROI (soothing, yet with trace of urgency) Beverly, this is important. What were you thinking when you hit Wes? BEVERLY (thinks for a beat) That's just it... I wasn't thinking about anything. I was... just angry... so angry. TROI And Wesley didn't provoke you in any way? It wasn't anything he said, anything he did? BEVERLY No. It was a sudden... burst of anger. I still can't believe I did it. Beverly sits on the couch and puts her head in her hands. Troi comes over to her and tries to comfort her. TROI I don't know why you did it either, Beverly. But I can tell you that I've heard the same kind of story from ten different people in the past two days. Off Beverly's reaction. 29 INT. MAIN BRIDGE A few hours later. Data is giving Sakkath a tour of the bridge. STAR TREK: "Sarek" - REV. 3/6/90 - ACT TWO 24. 29 CONTINUED: SAKKATH (looks at center stations) This is your Command Center. DATA Yes. It is normally occupied by Captain Picard, Commander Riker, and Counselor Troi. SAKKATH Counselor Troi is Betazoid? STAR TREK: "Sarek" - 3/5/90 - ACT TWO 25. 29 CONTINUED: (2) DATA Half-Betazoid. Her father was human. A slight frown crosses Sakkath's features. SAKKATH Then she is not a true telepath? DATA Her skills are empathic in nature. She can sense the emotions of other beings. Sakkath's frown deepens slightly at this news. He seems troubled by something, but his Vulcan reserve makes even this observation difficult. Sakkath continues after a momentary pause. SAKKATH What is Captain Picard's background in diplomacy? DATA (surprised) Extensive. The captain's first diplomatic contact dates back to Stardate--- SAKKATH And what of his knowledge of the Legarans? Would he be able to conduct negotiations with the Legarans should the need arise? DATA (puzzled) Do you foresee such a circumstance occurring? Is Ambassador Sarek unable to -- SAKKATH (smoothly) Forgive me. I was merely exploring various possible permutations of our mission. (beat) Your tour of the bridge has been most informative. Sakkath heads for the turbolift and then EXITS. STAR TREK: "Sarek" - REV. 3/6/90 - ACT TWO 26. 30 INT. TEN-FORWARD (OPTICAL) O'Brien and TWO TRANSPORTER TECHNICIANS get drinks from the bar and head over to a table which is currently occupied by THREE CREWMEN wearing science uniforms. O'Brien gives the science crewmen a friendly grin. O'BRIEN Excuse me, we were sitting here. SCIENCE CREWMAN (shrugging) Well, we're sitting here now. O'BRIEN (smiles with edge) Come on fella... this is our table. SCIENCE CREWMAN (unimpressed) Really? (looks over table) Funny... I don't see your name on it. O'BRIEN (forcing his voice to be light) Didn't your mother teach you manners? The science crewman and his companions stand up. The tension level has just risen several notches. 31 NEW ANGLE (OPTICAL) as Geordi smoothly intercedes between O'Brien and the science crewman. GEORDI Hey guys, some kind of problem here? O'BRIEN There seems to be a question of who's table this is. GEORDI (light) There are plenty of other tables. STAR TREK: "Sarek" - REV. 3/6/90 - ACT TWO 27. 31 CONTINUED: O'BRIEN (trying to lighten up) I suppose you're right. GEORDI Why don't I get everyone another round of drinks? Everyone relaxes and smiles. It appears that Geordi has defused the situation. 32 INT. CORRIDOR/TEN-FORWARD (OPTICAL) Outside Ten-Forward. Riker and Worf are walking to Ten-Forward doors. RIKER I don't need to tell you that insubordination is a serious charge to level against any officer. WORF I am aware of that Commander. However, Ensign D'Amato directly challenged my authority. RIKER Is it my imagination, or have tempers aboard this ship been getting a little frayed lately? WORF I hadn't noticed. The doors to Ten-Forward OPEN. Inside a full scale bar fight has broken out. O'Brien and the science crewman are grappling with each other while other crewmembers are hitting each other at random. There are clearly no sides here, just absolute chaos. WORF I see what you mean. Riker spots Geordi trying to pull some combatants apart. RIKER Geordi, what the hell is going on here? STAR TREK: "Sarek" - 3/5/90 - ACT TWO 28. 32 CONTINUED: GEORDI I wish I knew. WORF (hits combadge) Security team to Ten-Forward. Riker grabs a fighting crewman and pulls him off someone else. RIKER All right, that's enough! The crewman reacts by decking Riker with a punch. Worf growls and wades into the fight to protect Riker. FADE OUT. END OF ACT TWO STAR TREK: "Sarek" - REV. 3/7/90 - ACT THREE 29. ACT THREE FADE IN: 33 INT. TEN-FORWARD (OPTICAL) Starting on Beverly treating a cut on Geordi's mouth... GEORDI ... and the next thing I know somebody's left hook is on its way to my chin. Pulling back to see Picard, Riker, Worf, Troi surveying the damage. SEVERAL CREWMEMBERS are clearing away some of the debris. TROI Captain, this is not an isolated incident. There have been reports of random violence all over the ship... PICARD (reacts) Are you suggesting it is somehow contagious? BEVERLY There's no indication of a virus or bacteria... I've run every test I know... I've checked the water, the food replicators, airborne samples... PICARD This is one hell of a time... (beat, to Riker) Whatever it is, I don't want it to affect the ambassador... I want his quarters isolated from the rest of the crew until we can identify the cause. TROI It's not that simple, Captain. Off Picard's look -- STAR TREK: "Sarek" - REV. 3/7/90 - ACT THREE 30. 33 CONTINUED: BEVERLY We've been able to determine that these outbreaks of violence started... at virtually the same time Sarek's party beamed aboard the ship. Picard reacts and... 33A INT. BEVERLY'S OFFICE Picard, Beverly and Troi. Picard is quite shaken by this turn of events. BEVERLY We do have a working theory... Glancing with import at Troi. A deep breath and... BEVERLY We believe it's possible that Ambassador Sarek himself is responsible for these incidents. PICARD Sarek? TROI I felt something from him during the concert... it was vague and undefined... but very disturbing... PICARD (a small realization) He cried. I saw that. I didn't believe it. A Vulcan moved to tears by music... ? TROI Vulcans have the same basic emotions that we do. But they have learned to repress them. At the concert, I was sensing that Sarek had lost control... PICARD What would cause such a loss of control? STAR TREK: "Sarek" - REV. 3/7/90 - ACT THREE 31. 33A CONTINUED: BEVERLY There is a very rare condition that sometimes affects Vulcans over the age of two hundred. Bendii Syndrome. TROI The early symptoms include sudden bursts of emotion, mostly irrational anger. Eventually, all emotional control is lost. PICARD I can't imagine anything that would be more offensive to a Vulcan. Their emotional detachment is the very core of their being. (beat) But why would it affect others aboard the ship? TROI Vulcans possess telepathic ability. Sarek could be unintentionally projecting these intense emotions onto other people... at random. Picard's expression becomes more grim as he realizes the broader implications. PICARD And when the Legarans beam aboard... BEVERLY They could very well be affected too. PICARD Is there a treatment? BEVERLY (shakes her head, no) Can't anyone take his place? PICARD Sarek has built a personal relationship with them. They will accept no one else. (MORE) STAR TREK: "Sarek" - REV. 3/7/90 - ACT THREE 32. 33A CONTINUED: (2) PICARD (Cont'd) (beat) How can we confirm your diagnosis? BEVERLY We grow a culture from the tissue of the metathalamus... but the results will take several days. PICARD I have twelve hours. She shakes her head. Can't do it. 34 INT. READY ROOM (OPTICAL) Mendrossen is sitting in the chair before Picard. Mendrossen is sincere and easy-going. MENDROSSEN That's impossible, Captain Picard. I cannot delay the conference... not for a day, not for an hour. The schedule itself required three months of negotiations. PICARD Nevertheless, I believe we are facing a potentially far worse... MENDROSSEN I give you my word of honor that the ambassador is in perfect health. Is that not enough? PICARD Mister Mendrossen... MENDROSSEN You are dealing with a theory full of holes, Captain. Why am I not affected by Sarek's supposed condition? And Perrin, how could his wife function normally if this theory of yours is correct? STAR TREK: "Sarek" - REV. 3/7/90 - ACT THREE 32A. 34 CONTINUED: PICARD I cannot explain that. Hundreds of others on board have not been affected either. I have not. The effects appear to be random. Proximity apparently has no bearing on the phenomenon. STAR TREK: "Sarek" - REV. 3/15/90 - ACT THREE 33. 34 CONTINUED: (2) MENDROSSEN You are accusing the greatest man of his time of losing his mind. On the eve of his greatest triumph. And you cannot explain why... ? Beat. Stands. MENDROSSEN I won't report this to the ambassador. For the moment. I do not want to divert his attention from the mission. ("friendly") And I don't want to jeopardize your career unnecessarily. But if I were you, in the interests of your career, I'd be very concerned about finding the real cause of these outbursts before the Legarans arrive. He EXITS. A beat on Picard. Picard taps his fingers on his desk, muses. PICARD (to comm) Mister Data, please report to my Ready Room. 35 INT. CONFERENCE ROOM Sakkath stands near the Legaran tanks. And this is a man in turmoil. Logic tells him he cannot allow what is occurring to continue. He fears what will happen at the conference. Yet, he is dedicated to Sarek. These matters weigh on his mind as the doors slide open and Data ENTERS. There is a beat of silence as they glance at each other. DATA Captain Picard is not satisfied with Ki Mendrossen's assurances that the ambassador is in good health. Do you consider Sarek capable of carrying out his mission? STAR TREK: "Sarek" - REV. 3/6/90 - ACT THREE 34. 35 CONTINUED: SAKKATH Have I given you cause to think otherwise? DATA You have voiced certain reservations about his abilities to me. SAKKATH (carefully) I do not recall making such a statement. DATA Directly, no. However, you did question me on the diplomatic capabilities of both Captain Picard and Counselor Troi. SAKKATH I am honor bound to help Sarek carry out his mission. That is the only answer I can give. DATA Then you must decide which is your greater obligation: your loyalty to Sarek or your duty to the Federation. Sakkath remains impassive and Data continues after a beat. DATA Can you accept the logic of continuing the mission? And this touches Sakkath at his most vulnerable core. His eyes leave Data's as he weighs his loyalties. In a soft, almost hoarse voice -- SAKKATH Tell your captain... the mission is in jeopardy. On Data's reaction... STAR TREK: "Sarek" - REV. 3/6/90 - ACT THREE 35. 36 thru OMITTED 37 37A INT. BRIDGE Picard, Data, Riker at command. Wesley and Worf at their posts. DATA Sakkath has been able, until very recently, to use his telepathic skills to reinforce Sarek's emotional control and thus protect others from the effects of his deterioration. RIKER He hasn't been doing a very good job... DATA The strain of this mission on Sarek has made it impossible. Picard frowns, stands. PICARD Ironic isn't it? Despite our magnificent technology, we find ourselves still susceptible to the ravages of old age. The loss of dignity, the slow betrayal of our bodies by forces we cannot master. He inadvertently winds up saying this to Data. PICARD (a beat) Still want to be one of us, Data? DATA Sir, it is conceivable that even for me, time will eventually lead to a irreparable circuit failure. But there is one thing I do not understand... PICARD Yes... ? STAR TREK: "Sarek" - REV. 3/7/90 - ACT THREE 36. 37A CONTINUED: DATA Sarek is a logical, intelligent being. The effects of Bendii Syndrome are apparent. Why would such a man choose to ignore them? A beat as Picard considers his answer... PICARD Logic fails us sometimes, Data. This is one of those times. I can only guess that he does not see or does not wish to see the truth. And he is being insulated from that truth by those who love him the most. Riker steps forward, doesn't want to say anything, but realizes that he must. RIKER Someone has to confront him. PICARD (quietly) It is not a task I look forward to. Riker's voice starts to steadily rise and his temper begins to show through. RIKER I don't understand this... everyone's protecting Sarek... his wife, Mendrossen, even you. Picard's voice rises too... PICARD What would you have me do... march down there and destroy the man? RIKER The mission with the Legarans cannot go forward with Sarek in this condition. PICARD I know -- STAR TREK: "Sarek" - REV. 3/6/90 - ACT THREE 37. 37A CONTINUED: (2) RIKER (hits table) Then tell him that there is no--- PICARD Don't you tell me... Data who is unaffected, steps between them... DATA Captain... Commander... 37B ANGLE - REACTIONS from the bridge crew to this most unusual shouting match. They both realize what's happening and the anger dissipates. Picard nods in understanding. PICARD (nodding with grim resignation) You're right of course, Number One. But I am loathe to do what I must do. Picard thinks for only a few seconds longer. He heads for the door. 38 OMITTED 39 INT. GUEST QUARTERS Perrin is reacting to what Picard has told her... she is cold and imperious. PERRIN I don't think I really understand what you're telling me, Captain. My husband is responsible for your crew assaulting one another... ? Picard studies her a beat... he cannot be sure if she knows the truth and is hiding it... or does not know at all. PICARD He is very ill, Perrin. STAR TREK: "Sarek" - REV. 3/6/90 - ACT THREE 38. 39 CONTINUED: PERRIN (shakes her head) Bendii Syndrome is more a folk tale than a disease. There hasn't been a true case in my husband's lifetime. PICARD There is one now. Sakkath knows. For an instant, Perrin is taken aback. She recovers quickly. PERRIN Sakkath? Sakkath knows nothing my husband didn't teach him. PICARD He knows. More than that, he has been consciously holding Sarek's mind together on this mission as well as he could... PERRIN That is not true! PICARD I must see Sarek. He moves deeper into the room. PERRIN Captain, I know a good deal about the Vulcan mind and I know a good deal about the heart of one particular Vulcan. (with great strength) I am his wife and I tell you he is fine. He does not have Bendii Syndrome. And that shall be the end of it. PICARD I'm sorry. He moves around her. She grabs Picard's arm, pleading now... panic fills her eyes. PERRIN Please... you must not do this to him. STAR TREK: "Sarek" - REV. 3/6/90 - ACT THREE 39. 40 ON SAREK He is standing in the doorway on the far side of the room. Mendrossen and Sakkath can be seen behind him, their faces grim. SAREK Must not do what, my wife? 41 NEW ANGLE including Picard and Perrin. She looks away from Sarek's gaze... cannot answer. SAREK (continuing) If Captain Picard wishes to see me, he may do so. Sarek's voice is strong and commanding. He seems to be completely in charge of the situation. Picard begins to realize just how difficult a task he has set before himself. Push in on Picard's determination... FADE OUT. END OF ACT THREE STAR TREK: "Sarek" - 3/5/90 - ACT FOUR 40. ACT FOUR FADE IN: 42 INT. GUEST QUARTERS As before. Picard and Sarek facing off in the room. For all outward appearances, Sarek looks like the imposing figure of legend. Sakkath is standing very close to Sarek and is almost physically propping him up throughout the scene. SAREK I regret that we have seen so little of each other on this voyage, Captain. PICARD The loss is mine, Ambassador. Mendrossen coolly steps forward to take charge of the situation before it gets out of hand. MENDROSSEN Captain, may I talk to you in private -- Sarek interrupts Mendrossen. SAREK (to Picard) You were speaking of your belief that I suffer from Bendii Syndrome. (dryly) I have been accused of many things in my life... but never an excess of emotion. PERRIN (with obvious concern) Sarek, I see no reason to continue this discussion... SAREK On the contrary, I wish to assuage any fears that the captain may have regarding my capabilities. (to Picard) I believe there is a test for Bendii Syndrome, I will take it immediately. STAR TREK: "Sarek" - REV. 3/7/90 - ACT FOUR 41. 42 CONTINUED: PICARD Unfortunately the results would not be available for several days... which is why I must ask for a postponement of the conference. SAREK That would be a mistake. Captain I give you my word that I am in perfect health. PICARD Then why must Sakkath help you contain your emotions? Sarek now looks at Sakkath, who lowers his eyes. There is a beat of silence. Sarek turns to Mendrossen. SAREK Is what the captain says true? MENDROSSEN (without hesitation) No, Ambassador, absolutely not. SAREK Perrin were you aware of this? Perrin cannot answer. When Sarek speaks again, his voice is still cool and calm, but it is tinged with a slight tone of irritation SAREK Sakkath, I await an answer. SAKKATH (finally) I have used my limited abilities to strengthen... your mental discipline. A beat as Sarek takes this in. SAREK Your efforts will no longer be required. SAKKATH That would not be wise. STAR TREK: "Sarek" - 3/5/90 - ACT FOUR 42. 42 CONTINUED: (2) SAREK It may not be wise... but it is necessary. Sakkath bows his head in acceptance and EXITS. Sarek looks to Perrin and Mendrossen. SAREK Leave us. I wish to speak with Captain Picard. Perrin and Mendrossen exchange alarmed looks. PERRIN Sarek, I ask you to reconsider. SAREK Obey my wishes. (softer) There is nothing to fear. A beat and then Perrin and Mendrossen reluctantly EXIT. 43 NEW ANGLE As Sarek and Picard square off alone. Sarek will remain immobile throughout as Picard moves and paces. Picard is clearly unhappy at the prospect of the task before him. PICARD I hope I have not embarrassed you, Ambassador. SAREK You seem to forget I am a Vulcan, Captain. I am not affected by emotional considerations. PICARD I believe you are affected, sir... far more than you realize. SAREK I am a logical being. Present your arguments. I will listen. Picard remains deferential, but there is a growing urgency to his arguments. STAR TREK: "Sarek" - REV. 3/7/90 - ACT FOUR 43. 43 CONTINUED: PICARD There has been an epidemic of violent incidents aboard the Enterprise. As we speak, the situation is worsening. SAREK And it is your hypothesis that I am the cause of these incidents? PICARD My chief medical officer has explored all other probable causes. SAREK I share your concern for your crew. However, you must agree it is not unusual for a starship to encounter unexplained phenomena. PICARD That is correct. SAREK Therefore, since I can assure you that I am not the cause of your difficulties, the logical course of action is for your doctor to continue her search. Picard is looking for an opening. He will not be so easily sidetracked. PICARD She is... but the fact remains that these incidents began shortly after your arrival. Sarek is starting to get a little irritated despite himself. SAREK Is your entire argument to be based on mere coincidence? PICARD Is it also coincidence, that your wife and chief of staff have been carefully isolating you? STAR TREK: "Sarek" - REV. 3/7/90 - ACT FOUR 43A. 43 CONTINUED: (2) SAREK (with understanding) I believe I now see the flaw in your logic. You are reacting to their overprotective attitudes towards me. (MORE) STAR TREK: "Sarek" - REV. 3/7/90 - ACT FOUR 44. 43 CONTINUED: (3) SAREK (Cont'd) They are both somewhat emotional regarding my... age. PICARD Surely Sakkath is not influenced by emotions. Sarek cannot keep the annoyance out of his voice any longer. SAREK Am I to be branded by the judgment of a child? Sakkath is young and inexperienced. He erred in his assumption that I needed help. Picard has decided that the only way to get Sarek to admit to his condition is to force him into an emotional response. Picard would rather avoid this, but he sees that he has no other choice. PICARD (starting to press) But you did need his help at the concert. Sarek is a little shocked and doesn't respond. Picard presses him harder. PICARD (continuing) Or perhaps you have a logical explanation for what happened that night? For the first time we see a hesitation in Sarek's responses. He is not as sure of himself as the moment before. SAREK What... happened? PICARD I saw you crying. SAREK I did not... cry. PICARD I was there... I saw the tears. STAR TREK: "Sarek" - REV. 3/7/90 - ACT FOUR 44A. 43 CONTINUED: (4) Sarek answers quickly, as if anxious to prove a point. SAREK You exaggerate, Captain. I recall... only one tear. STAR TREK: "Sarek" - REV. 3/7/90 - ACT FOUR 45. 43 CONTINUED: (5) PICARD (forceful) Then you were emotionally affected by the music. SAREK (edge creeping into voice) That is not possible. PICARD You still have not answered me, Sarek. Is it logical for a Vulcan to cry? Sarek is cornered and he knows it. He desperately searches for an answer. SAREK It was late... I was fatigued. Nothing more. Picard simply stares at him, allows the false response to hang in the air. Sarek tries to regain control of the situation. SAREK The Legarans trust only me. They will not meet with any other representative of the Federation. I must be allowed to complete my mission. There are no other logical solutions. PICARD (pressing) No other logical solutions? But Ambassador, there are always other solutions. You have said so yourself many times. SAREK What I meant was... (pauses) PICARD Sarek of Vulcan was never afraid to look straight at something he did not want to see. Sarek is having a hard time remaining impassive. STAR TREK: "Sarek" - REV. 3/7/90 - ACT FOUR 45A. 43 CONTINUED: (6) SAREK I warn you Captain, your efforts to discredit me will not succeed. PICARD Sarek of Vulcan never confused what he wanted with the truth. Sarek's hands are tightly clenched into fists. His voice is now clearly enraged. SAREK I will not be spoken to in such a manner. PICARD Is that anger I hear in your voice? SAREK (struggling to maintain control) It would be illogical for a Vulcan to show anger... it would be illogical... illogical... STAR TREK: "Sarek" - REV. 3/7/90 - ACT FOUR 46. 44 ON SAREK AND PICARD as they stare at each other. Sarek turns away... a defeated man. He begins to weep. 45 ON PICARD realizing that he has destroyed a hero. Hold on his anguished face... FADE OUT. END OF ACT FOUR STAR TREK: "Sarek" - REV. 3/7/90 - ACT FOUR 47. ACT FIVE 46 EXT. SPACE - THE ENTERPRISE (OPTICAL) The ship drops out of warp. PICARD (V.O.) Captain's log, supplemental. In three hours time we are scheduled to meet with the Legaran delegation. However it is now all too evident that Ambassador Sarek is in no condition to proceed with the conference. 47 INT. READY ROOM Picard is looking out the window, deep in thought. Riker has just entered. RIKER We're entering the Legaran system, Captain. Shall I have Mister Worf contact their ambassador? PICARD (turns) No. (off Riker's look) I will present our regrets to the Legarans personally. It is vital that they understand our reasons for cancelling the negotiations. Picard is still haunted by what happened with Sarek. Riker can see that the captain is still troubled. RIKER (quietly) Captain, with all due respect... I think you did the right thing. PICARD But at what cost, Number One? A moment as they reflect on the fall of a great man. The door CHIMES. STAR TREK: "Sarek" - REV. 3/6/90 - ACT FIVE 47A. 47 CONTINUED: PICARD Come. The door opens and an emotional Perrin ENTERS. PICARD (surprised) Perrin? PERRIN I must speak with you, Captain. She glances at Riker, who takes the hint. STAR TREK: "Sarek" - REV. 3/7/90 - ACT FIVE 48. 47 CONTINUED: (2) RIKER I'll be on the bridge, sir. Riker EXITS. PICARD (with concern) How is the ambassador? PERRIN Resting. (beat) I've come to ask you to reconsider your position. PICARD You know that's impossible. But Perrin is not to be denied. She continues to plead her case... PERRIN Sarek is a... good man, Captain. He has given the Federation a lifetime of service. I beg you, let him keep the respect he has earned. PICARD He will never lose that respect. PERRIN If you need to blame someone, blame Mendrossen and me. (beat) But we never wanted to deceive you. My husband's... condition... came on him so... gradually. It was so easy to... delude ourselves, to pretend that nothing was wrong. We convinced ourselves that he could complete this one last task... and end his career... the way it began... with dignity. PICARD I'm not blaming anyone. PERRIN Then help him, Captain, please. Help him regain his pride... his honor. STAR TREK: "Sarek" - REV. 3/7/90 - ACT FIVE 48A. 47 CONTINUED: (3) PICARD Believe me, nothing would give me greater pleasure. But there's nothing I can do. PERRIN The mission can be saved. (off Picard's look) But he needs your help to do it. On Picard's expression, wondering what she means... STAR TREK: "Sarek" - REV. 3/12/90 - ACT FIVE 49. 48 thru OMITTED 50 51 INT. CONFERENCE ROOM Picard and Sarek are standing near the Legaran tank. Sarek is a little surprised. SAREK A mind-meld... between the two of us? Do you realize the dangers involved in what you are proposing? PICARD Yes, Ambassador, I do. But I also realize the potential benefits. SAREK We would be telepathically linked... exchanging our thoughts... becoming in essence one mind. PICARD Which, for a few hours, should provide you with the emotional control you need. Enough time for you to meet with the Legarans and conclude the treaty. Sarek is tempted... but he hesitates. SAREK It is a generous offer. But I must warn you that while I would gain your stability, you would experience the fierce onslaught of emotions unleashed by my... condition. Vulcan emotions are extremely intense... we have learned to suppress them. No human would be able to control them. They would overwhelm you... the mind-meld can be a terrible intimacy. (beat) I cannot allow it. PICARD I am aware of the risks, Sarek. But I believe it is the only... logical solution. STAR TREK: "Sarek" - REV. 3/8/90 - ACT FIVE 49A. 51 CONTINUED: A long beat as Sarek slowly realizes that Picard is right. SAREK Your courage honors me, Captain. STAR TREK: "Sarek" - REV. 3/7/90 - ACT FIVE 50. 51 CONTINUED: (2) They share a silent beat of respect. 52 OMITTED 53 INT. PICARD'S QUARTERS Picard is placing two chairs face to face in the center of the room. Beverly is standing next to him, holding a tricorder. She is obviously worried. BEVERLY I can't say I approve of this, Jean-Luc. PICARD I didn't expect you would, Beverly. BEVERLY Is there some way I can talk you out of it? PICARD I'm afraid not. Though I do admit to a certain... trepidation. (beat, then smiling) Your company is appreciated. A warm moment passes between them. The door CHIMES. Beverly and Picard exchange a look... this is it. STAR TREK: "Sarek" - REV. 3/7/90 - ACT FIVE 51. 53 CONTINUED: PICARD Come. The door opens and Sarek ENTERS. He looks at the chairs. SAREK I see you are ready, Captain. PICARD Doctor Crusher will be monitoring our responses. SAREK A sensible precaution. They take their seats. Beverly moves to an unobtrusive position nearby. 53A ANGLE ON SAREK AND PICARD Sarek slowly reaches out with his hand and places his fingertips on Picard's face. Picard's eyes close briefly then open again. SAREK (whispering) My mind to your mind... your thoughts to my thoughts... PUSH IN closer until their faces fill the screen... 54 thru OMITTED 56 57 EXT. SPACE - ENTERPRISE IN ORBIT (OPTICAL) Legara Four is visible below... 58 INT. BRIDGE Riker at Command, Wesley, Worf and Data at their stations. DATA Commander, the Legarans are ready to beam aboard. STAR TREK: "Sarek" - REV. 3/7/90 - ACT FIVE 52. 58 CONTINUED: RIKER Very well... SAREK (V.O.) Number One, please inform the Legaran delegation that Ambassador Sarek is on his way to welcome them. The entire bridge crew turns to see... 59 ON SAREK He has just emerged from the turbolift. He looks strong, confident, imposing. He is Sarek... yet he is Picard too. RIKER Yes... Ambassador. STAR TREK: "Sarek" - REV. 3/15/90 - ACT FIVE 53. 60 thru OMITTED 61 62 INT. PICARD'S QUARTERS CLOSE ON a table as Picard's hands come slamming down on the surface. PULL BACK as he lets out a strangled cry of rage. PICARD NO!!! Beverly is nearby, not sure how to help. Picard supports himself against the table. Throughout this scene, Picard physically struggles to withstand the onslaught of raw emotion unleashed by Sarek. PICARD It is wrong. A lifetime of discipline washed away, and in its place... bedlam... (MORE) STAR TREK: "Sarek" - REV. 3/9/90 - ACT FIVE 54. 62 CONTINUED: PICARD (Cont'd) Nothing but bedlam. (angry) And I am helpless to prevent it! I am old! Nothing left but dry bones and dead friends. (exhausted) Weary, so weary. Beverly goes over and tries to lead Picard to a couch. BEVERLY It will pass. All of it. Another hour or so at most. You're doing fine... Just hold on. He escapes her grasp. PICARD No! This weakness disgusts me! I hate it! Where is the logic? I am betrayed by desires... I want to... feel... to feel everything! (a whisper) But I am Vulcan. (voice rising) I must feel nothing. Give me back control... Beverly approaches him... staring, searching his face for any signs of recognition. BEVERLY Jean-Luc... He looks at her, but he doesn't fully recognize her. PICARD Perrin... (tears begin to stream down his face) Amanda... I could have given you so much more. I wanted to show you tenderness. But it is not our way. Spock... Amanda did you know... ? Perrin, can you know... how much I... love you? (anguished cry) I do love you! STAR TREK: "Sarek" - REV. 3/12/90 - ACT FIVE 54A. 62 CONTINUED: Then, suddenly as if with tremendous effort, the tears still streaming down his face... Sarek is gone. STAR TREK: "Sarek" - REV. 3/9/90 - ACT FIVE 55. 62 CONTINUED: (3) PICARD (a hoarse whisper) Beverly... BEVERLY I'm here... I'm not going to leave you. PICARD It's so... difficult. She puts her arm around him and leads him to the couch. Picard is stunned. PICARD The anguish in the man... despair... pouring out... so many... feelings... regrets... Picard is now weeping openly. PICARD I can't stop them... He buries his head into her shoulder. She cradles his head. BEVERLY (whispers) Don't even try. As Picard weeps... 63 EXT. SPACE - THE ENTERPRISE (OPTICAL) in orbit around Legara Four. We hear Riker's VOICE OVER. RIKER First officer's log, Stardate 43920.7. Ambassador Sarek has successfully concluded the negotiations with the Legarans. The USS Merrimac has arrived and will transport the ambassador and his party back to Vulcan. 64 INT. TRANSPORTER ROOM Perrin, Sakkath, and Mendrossen are talking with Picard and Riker. They are in dress uniforms again. STAR TREK: "Sarek" - REV. 3/8/90 - ACT FIVE 56. 64 CONTINUED: The honor guard seen in the teaser are again present in the b.g. PICARD I hope your journey aboard the Merrimac will be uneventful. SAKKATH With the pressures of the conference behind him, I believe I can help maintain his control until we return to Vulcan. RIKER What will happen to him then? MENDROSSEN The effects of Bendii syndrome are irreversible. (beat) Medical research is always continuing, of course... Sakkath and Mendrossen move to the transporter stage along with Riker, giving Perrin and Picard a moment of privacy. PERRIN (with deep gratitude) Thank you, Captain. PICARD He... loves you... very much. PERRIN (smiles and nods) I know. I've always known. STAR TREK: "Sarek" - REV. 3/7/90 - ACT FIVE 57. 64 CONTINUED: (2) Picard smiles in return. Sarek ENTERS. The honor guard comes to attention. SAREK (to Picard) I will take my leave of you now, Captain. I do not think we shall meet again. PICARD I hope you are wrong, Ambassador. SAREK We shall always retain the best part of the other inside us. PICARD I believe I got the best part of that bargain, Ambassador. A silent moment between them. Picard raises his hand and gives him the Vulcan salute. PICARD Peace and long life, Sarek. SAREK (returning salute) Live long and prosper. Sarek now steps up on the transporter stage with Perrin. Picard nods to O'Brien, who works his console. 64A ON SAREK AND PERRIN (OPTICAL) Just before they start to beam out, Sarek reaches out for Perrin's hand. She clasps it and they DEMATERIALIZE. 64B ON PICARD AND RIKER as they watch the beam out. STAR TREK: "Sarek" - REV. 3/6/90 - ACT FIVE 58. 65 OMITTED 66 EXT. SPACE - THE ENTERPRISE (OPTICAL) as it swings away from Legara Four into the vastness of the galaxy. FADE OUT. END OF ACT FIVE THE END STAR TREK: THE NEXT GENERATION "Menage a Troi" (f.k.a. "Piece of Mind") #40273-172 Written by Fred Bronson & Susan Sackett Directed by Rob Legato THE WRITING CREDITS MAY NOT BE FINAL AND SHOULD NOT BE USED FOR PUBLICITY OR ADVERTISING PURPOSES WITHOUT FIRST CHECKING WITH THE TELEVISION LEGAL DEPARTMENT. Copyright 1990 Paramount Pictures Corporation. All Rights Reserved. This script is not for publication or reproduction. No one is authorized to dispose of same. If lost or destroyed, please notify the Script Department. FINAL DRAFT MARCH 9, 1990 STAR TREK: "Menage a Troi" - REV. 3/19/90 - CAST STAR TREK: THE NEXT GENERATION "Menage a Troi" CAST PICARD Betazoids RIKER LWAXANA TROI DATA MR. HOMN BEVERLY REITTAN GRAX TROI GEORDI Ferengi WORF DAIMON TOG WESLEY DOCTOR FAREK NIBOR Non-Speaking Non-Speaking SUPERNUMERARIES ALIEN DELEGATES 3 AWAY TEAM MEMBERS FERENGI CREWMAN Voice-overs FERENGI COMPUTER VOICE FERENGI CREWMAN STAR TREK: "Menage a Troi" REV. 3/16/90 - SETS STAR TREK: THE NEXT GENERATION "Menage a Troi" SETS INTERIORS EXTERIORS USS ENTERPRISE USS ENTERPRISE MAIN BRIDGE CAPTAIN'S READY ROOM FERENGI SHIP KRAYTON TEN-FORWARD BETAZED CITY MAIN ENGINEERING TROI'S QUARTERS BETAZED CLEARING CRUSHER QUARTERS TRANSPORTER ROOM CORRIDORS FERENGI SHIP KRAYTON HOLDING TANK LABORATORY STAR TREK: "Menage a Troi" - REV. 3/19/90 - PRONUNCIATION STAR TREK: THE NEXT GENERATION "Menage a Troi" PRONUNCIATION GUIDE DAIMON TOG DAY-mon TOG FAREK FAR-ehk HOMN HAHM LWAXANA L'-WOKS-anna NIBOR NYE-bore REITTAN GRAX RITE-n GRAX STAR TREK: "Menage a Troi" - REV. 3/19/90 - TEASER 1. STAR TREK: THE NEXT GENERATION "Menage a Troi" TEASER FADE IN: 1 EXT. SPACE - THE ENTERPRISE (OPTICAL) in orbit around a bright green planet. PICARD (V.O.) Captain's Log, Stardate 43980.7. The Enterprise has been in attendance at the biennial Trade Agreements Conference on Betazed. 2 INT. TEN FORWARD A busy place. Conference delegates from different worlds are here, including three Ferengi: TOG, FAREK, and NIBOR. In b.g., a MUSICIAN entertains the gathering, playing a complex RHYTHM on a strange percussion instrument. RIKER plays three-dimensional chess with Nibor as WESLEY looks on. PICARD, TROI, and DATA socialize with their guests as Log is completed: PICARD (V.O.) For the first time, the Ferengi are present, and I have reluctantly consented to their boarding the Enterprise for the closing reception. 2A ANGLE ON RIKER AND NIBOR It is clear they are near the end of their game, and the Ferengi is in trouble. Captured pieces litter the table at Riker's elbow. Nibor makes a move, he is confident. Riker smiles, moves his piece. RIKER Check... and mate. Nibor falls back flabbergasted in his chair. Wesley is enjoying the moment. STAR TREK: "Menage a Troi" - REV. 3/19/90 - TEASER 2. 2A CONTINUED: WESLEY Perfect. A queen's gambit... finished off with the Aldabren Exchange. The Ferengi is still stunned by his defeat. NIBOR (re: the musician) Unfair. I couldn't concentrate with all that noise... WESLEY It's Algolian ceremonial rhythms. Riker and Wesley nod. Nibor shakes his head. NIBOR Hyoo-mans... 2B ANGLE ON PICARD AND DATA talking with REITTAN GRAX, the Betazoid conference director. PICARD (lifting glass) A toast to the success of the trade conference, Reittan. I must admit, I had some doubts when you invited the Ferengi. REITTAN GRAX They made a profit and behaved themselves. What more could one ask? Still, they trouble me. We Betazeds are uncomfortable with species like the Ferengi... whose minds we can't read. DATA (ever the scientist) Perhaps your telepathic abilities are ineffective owing to the anomalous construction of the Ferengi brain, which is composed of four different... STAR TREK: "Menage a Troi" - REV. 3/13/90 - TEASER 2A. 2B CONTINUED: PICARD (not now, Data) Thank you, Data. (to Reittan Grax) It was thoughtful of you to include Lwaxana Troi as part of the Betazed delegation. STAR TREK: "Menage a Troi" - REV. 3/19/90 - TEASER 3. 2B CONTINUED: (2) REITTAN GRAX Her first husband and I were old friends. And I've known Deanna since she was a child. PICARD I'm sure Counselor Troi appreciates this opportunity to spend time with her mother. 3 ANGLE ON TROI AND LWAXANA Lwaxana's plate is piled with food, her synthehol glass is refilled continually as she gives new meaning to the old Auntie Mame adage, "Life is a banquet." Between bites and sips, she plies her daughter with thought transmissions. LWAXANA (TELEPATHIC V.O.) It's so marvelous to see you, Deanna, darling. (a beat) At least pretend you're happy to see me. TROI (aloud) Mother, we're among non-telepaths... it's impolite not to speak aloud. LWAXANA (TELEPATHIC V.O.) You mean talk with my mouth full? Deanna, please! She does manage to laugh with her mouth full, but Deanna doesn't think it's especially funny. LWAXANA (aloud) All right, I will say something aloud. Have you considered if you had stayed on Betazed just where your life might have... They've had this conversation before. STAR TREK: "Menage a Troi" - REV. 3/19/90 - TEASER 3A. 3 CONTINUED: TROI (interrupting) Let's not guess what I might have done. I love my work aboard the Enterprise... STAR TREK: "Menage a Troi" - REV. 3/19/90 - TEASER 4. 3 CONTINUED: (2) LWAXANA I know. But all business and no play? You should enjoy life more, like I do. Find the right man, think of your future. Think of my future... Interrupted by Riker; his timing couldn't be better. RIKER Deanna, Lwaxana. Anything I can do for you? Troi throws her mother a look. Don't answer that! 4 ANGLE ON BAR as the other two Ferengi watch Mrs. Troi. Daimon Tog, the Captain, seems fascinated by this Betazoid female. Tog is tall for a Ferengi, although not by human standards, and Ferengi women probably find him as close to a "hunk" as their men ever get. He's talking with his companion and ship's doctor, Farek. In b.g., Lwaxana LAUGHS. Farek winces at the sound. FAREK (re: Lwaxana) She is as repulsive as the rest of them. TOG Repulsive? I find her exotic! (a beat) And what an advantage their telepathy would be in negotiations... FAREK To read our competitors' minds... yes, that would be valuable. Tog can't take his eyes off Lwaxana. Farek notices, gives Tog a look -- "be serious." FAREK (cont'd) She'd never agree to use her powers to help us... TOG I'm not so sure. STAR TREK: "Menage a Troi" - REV. 3/19/90 - TEASER 5. 4 CONTINUED: In b.g., Riker and Troi move on. This is the moment Tog's been waiting for. He moves quickly off. 5 ANGLE ON TOG AND LWAXANA as he seats himself at her table. TOG Lwaxana Troi of Betazed, I believe. (with pride) I am Daimon Tog of the Ferengi vessel Krayton. May I join you? LWAXANA (coolly) I was just going to see Captain Picard. Excuse me. She rises, maneuvering past Tog to where Picard is still conversing with Data and Reittan Grax. She interrupts: LWAXANA Jean-Luc! Come have a drink and tell me what you've been up to. PICARD (thinking fast) Uh... perhaps later, Lwaxana. Data and I were just about to show Reittan Grax the new door mechanisms on the aft Turbolifts. Would you excuse us? STAR TREK: "Menage a Troi" - REV. 3/20/90 - TEASER 6. 5 CONTINUED: And off they go, leaving Lwaxana standing alone in the middle of Ten Forward. And, oh God, here comes that nasty little Ferengi again... oops, too late. TOG Lwaxana Troi, I desire you. LWAXANA Wha... what? TOG Your Betazed skills would be very useful to me... and I find you attractive. I'm willing to pay handsomely for you. LWAXANA (growing angrier) I don't believe this... TOG You must be aware that every female has her price. Lwaxana is now infuriated. Almost without realizing it, her voice will rise during the next speech until all other activity in Ten Forward comes to a halt as everyone's attention focuses on her: LWAXANA Let's get one thing straight. I am not for sale. And I'd rather eat Orion wing-slugs than deal with a toad-faced troll like you. Go find someone else to become your property. 6 WIDER ANGLE to include a horrified Deanna. There is a pause as everyone waits to see what Tog will do. He is silent for a moment, then: TOG (oddly reserved) As you wish. STAR TREK: "Menage a Troi" - REV. 3/19/90 - TEASER 6A. 6 CONTINUED: As everyone else resumes their activities, Tog retreats to the bar where Farek is tossing down another synthehol. FAREK Now that you've totally humiliated us, may we return to our vessel? STAR TREK: "Menage a Troi" - REV. 3/19/90 - TEASER 7. 6 CONTINUED: (2) TOG (ignoring him) She's exhilarating, isn't she? Farek gives him a look. Is he kidding? TOG (cont'd) Now I want her more than ever. Lwaxana Troi will be mine. FADE OUT. END OF TEASER STAR TREK: "Menage a Troi" - REV. 3/19/90 - ACT ONE 8. ACT ONE FADE IN: 7 OMITTED 8 INT. ENTERPRISE CORRIDOR - PERSONAL QUARTERS On the way to her cabin, Troi encounters WORF. They walk together as Deanna continues to her quarters. TROI (lightly) Are we at war with the Ferengi yet? WORF Daimon Tog has returned to his vessel and the Ferengi have left orbit. TROI I'm sure Mother will be relieved. WORF I hear she handled the situation quite skillfully. An admirable woman. TROI I'll be sure to tell her you said so. Worf leaves Deanna at her door, continues on his way. Before her door opens, she hears a voice in her head: LWAXANA (TELEPATHIC V.O.) Come in, Little One. Troi reacts and enters. 9 INT. TROI'S QUARTERS (OPTICAL) Lwaxana lies with her eyes open as if unseeing. Unusual Betazed candles burn at each side of her head. The room lighting adds to the effect of her appearing dead, but actually she's in a meditative state. Betazed is visible through the window. STAR TREK: "Menage a Troi" - REV. 3/20/90 - ACT ONE 9. 9 CONTINUED: TROI Mother. (more firmly) Mother, please. LWAXANA (TELEPATHIC V.O.) Just a moment, Little One. I'm at one with All Being. Troi is silent for a beat, then Lwaxana's eyes flutter, and she returns to her familiar feisty self. LWAXANA After that horrible little Ferengi insulted me, I needed to center myself. (a beat) Can you imagine that creature talking to me like that? Didn't he realize I am the Daughter of the Fifth House of Betazed, keeper of the Chalice of Rixx? TROI Mother, the Chalice of Rixx is an old clay pot with mold growing inside it! LWAXANA My dear, when you become old enough and wise enough, you'll understand. Now sit down and talk to me. We don't spend enough time together. TROI (sincerely) That's true. I'm sorry, and I didn't mean to be upset with you at the reception. LWAXANA Deanna... you must understand, you're all I've got. My only concern is for your happiness. TROI (a tad irritated) I am happy. Why can't you believe that? STAR TREK: "Menage a Troi" - REV. 3/16/90 - ACT ONE 10. 9 CONTINUED: (2) LWAXANA I wish I could. How much happiness is there in always being there for someone else, but never being there for yourself? Troi feels the anger heating up inside her, fights to control it. After all, she's a trained psychologist. TROI I get great satisfaction out of my work. LWAXANA I'm sure it's rewarding, in its way. But what about a family? TROI This is my family -- my friends -- here on the Enterprise. LWAXANA (hurt) I am your family, or have you forgotten? And if I have to spell it out for you, I'm talking about finding a husband, having a child. That's what made me happy. At least until now. Troi suppresses her growing anger, hoping to avoid a fight. TROI Look, Mother. Perhaps some day I'll marry. But you've got to let me make my own choices... live my own life, not the life you'd choose for me. STAR TREK: "Menage a Troi" - REV. 3/13/90 - ACT ONE 11. 9 CONTINUED: (3) LWAXANA (driving it home) You had a chance... with Commander Riker. And look how you ruined that. That does it. TROI (angry now) I did not ruin anything. We became very good friends. LWAXANA All the better. You certainly wouldn't want to marry an enemy. (on Troi's look:) But I see we can't discuss this. So have it your way, Little One. That really does it. TROI Little One? When I was five you called me that. Stop demeaning me and address me as an adult. Troi storms out. 10 INT. CORRIDOR Troi's not even sure where she's going; she just had to get out of there. And as she walks, she hears: LWAXANA (TELEPATHIC V.O.) I'll be home on Betazed if you need me, Lit -- (a beat) Deanna. 11 INT. READY ROOM Picard and Riker have been listening to a briefing from Data, Geordi and Wesley on equipment to be used in the next mission. Wesley is concluding his report. STAR TREK: "Menage a Troi" - REV. 3/20/90 - ACT ONE 12. 11 CONTINUED: WESLEY Adding preprocessors to the neutrino counters boosted efficiency by eleven percent. Of course, Commander La Forge and Commander Data did most of the work... GEORDI Not so fast, Wesley. Preprocessing the data with an optical chip was your idea. DATA Correct, sir. Although Commander La Forge and I designed the chip, Ensign Crusher derived the equations governing its operation. RIKER The point is, you've completed our upgrade well ahead of schedule. Most impressive. PICARD Indeed, Number One. Fine work -- especially you, Mister Crusher. We're going to miss you. Wesley can't help it. He knows what's coming and the grin just grows until he's all smiles. PICARD (cont'd) As you might guess, your final entrance examination scores for Starfleet Academy have arrived. (a beat) Congratulations. As soon as you complete the oral exam, you'll be formally admitted. STAR TREK: "Menage a Troi" - REV. 3/20/90 - ACT ONE 13. 11 CONTINUED: (2) RIKER We'll have you back at Betazed in plenty of time to meet the Academy transport ship. WESLEY Thank you, sir. PICARD That will be all. They begin to EXIT. PICARD (cont'd) A moment, Number One. RIKER Yes, Captain? PICARD Your science team is very efficient. How many days would you say they managed to shave off our mission? RIKER Approximately three. Thanks to the equipment upgrade, we'll be able to complete our survey in less than twenty-four hours. PICARD Splendid, Number One. (a beat) You'd agree that this is a rather routine mapping mission? RIKER (what's he getting at?) Yes, sir... PICARD Counselor Troi had the good sense to request shore leave. I see I'm going to have to suggest it to you. STAR TREK: "Menage a Troi" - REV. 3/14/90 - ACT ONE 14. 11 CONTINUED: (3) Riker opens his mouth to protest, then begins to think it over. Maybe it wouldn't be so bad. At his slight smile: PICARD (cont'd) Have a good time, Number One. 12 EXT. BETAZED - DAY - MATTE (OPTICAL) A 24th-century "city" -- technologically advanced yet so well blended in with nature so that the effect is relaxing and pastoral. 13 EXT. BETAZED CLEARING - DAY A secluded spot in the greenbelt. Lush plants surround this open area, and a dirt path leads off into dense foliage. Riker and Troi are looking for something in the greenery. Their mood is light as they enjoy this brief shore leave. RIKER I'm sure it was around here somewhere... TROI It's been a few years. Maybe it died. RIKER You know Muktok plants live for hundreds of years... Riker brushes aside some leaves to reveal an exotic-looking plant with bluish foliage and eight silver flowers. RIKER (cont'd) Here it is... Troi joins Riker as he touches the blooms. SOUND of MUSICAL NOTES, an alien melody. TROI It's lovely. I remember this music... and all the good times we had. STAR TREK: "Menage a Troi" - REV. 3/19/90 - ACT ONE 15. 13 CONTINUED: RIKER A certain junior lieutenant will always remember meeting a very serious psychology student. It was the best thing about being assigned to Betazed. It's a rare moment of closeness for them, and it seems quite natural for Riker to put his arm around her and give her a warm kiss. The moment is interrupted by the sound of a voice. LWAXANA (O.S.) Put the food down over there, Mister Homn. Startled, Troi pulls away from Riker. She gives him a look: It can't be her! Riker and Troi step out of the greenery to see Lwaxana supervising Mister Homn as he empties the contents of a metal container onto a silvery blanket. Lwaxana looks up, sees Riker and her daughter. LWAXANA Isn't it a beautiful day for a picnic? TROI (irritated) Mother! How did you know about this place? LWAXANA Your father used to bring me here. STAR TREK: "Menage a Troi" - REV. 3/13/90 - ACT ONE 16. 13 CONTINUED: (2) Mr. Homn pours glasses of some mead-colored liquid, passes it around and begins imbibing at an incredibly fast pace. Riker and Troi realize they have no choice but to make the best of it. RIKER (keeping it light) And you even brought provisions. Very thoughtful. Lwaxana passes him something yellow with purple veins. LWAXANA Try this oskoid. The sap keeps it deliciously warm. RIKER (trying it) Very, very tasty. (he eyes her) Tell me, Lwaxana, the last time we met, you were searching for a husband. Did you have any luck? LWAXANA Alas, no, but what happens to me isn't important. I'm more concerned about other people getting on with their lives. TROI Mother, this isn't the time or the place... LWAXANA (who me?) Did I mention any names? TROI (angry) You didn't have to. STAR TREK: "Menage a Troi" - REV. 3/16/90 - ACT ONE 17. 13 CONTINUED: (3) LWAXANA Can I help it if all my friends are becoming grandparents? (to Riker) How about you, Will. Have you ever thought of having children? RIKER (an honest answer) There was a time when I thought having children and a career in Starfleet were incompatible. But with Galaxy class starships having families aboard, I've considered that possibility... LWAXANA Yes, the Enterprise would be a perfect environment to raise a family... with someone... TROI (warning) Mother! LWAXANA (ignoring her) Mister Homn, I saw some uttaberries along the path. Be a dear and pick some for dessert... He nods, goes off down the path with the metal container. LWAXANA (cont'd) Mister Homn and I can go back home if you two want to be alone. It's such a romantic setting... TROI (furious now) Mother, stop it! LWAXANA Darling, you're so excitable these days. Have you thought about a leave of absence? I could talk to Jean-Luc... STAR TREK: "Menage a Troi" - REV. 3/19/90 - ACT ONE 18. 13 CONTINUED: (4) RIKER (to keep peace) Deanna, try one of the oskoids. They're different. But now their attention is diverted by the SOUND of an alien transporter beam. RIKER (cont'd) What the... ? 14 ANGLE ON DAIMON TOG (OPTICAL) as his image COALESCES in a Ferengi TRANSPORTER BEAM. 15 BACK TO SHOT (OPTICAL) Riker jumps to attention. The others are equally surprised. Tog extends a bunch of sorrowful Ferengi daisies to Lwaxana. TOG A gift for one whose beauty surpasses even these pericules. RIKER Daimon Tog! I thought the Krayton left orbit hours ago. TOG It did. But when I tried to put the image of Lwaxana Troi out of my mind... I could not succeed. Lwaxana tosses the flowers into the pond. LWAXANA This is ludicrous! You came back to Betazed -- for me? TOG Why continue to search for perfection once you've found it? And when I considered how useful you would be... TROI I don't believe this... STAR TREK: "Menage a Troi" - REV. 3/19/90 - ACT ONE 19. 15 CONTINUED: LWAXANA (to Tog) Look, Demon Tog, or whatever you call yourself, I am the Daughter of the Fifth House of Betazed, Keeper of the Holy Rings. And unless you want to create an interstellar incident, you had better beam back to your ship. TOG Returning to my ship is exactly what I had in mind. (using communicator) Krayton, transport four immediately. RIKER No, Tog! Riker goes for his phaser, realizes he hasn't brought it to this usually peaceful place. He moves toward the Ferengi when the four of them DISAPPEAR in the Ferengi TRANSPORTER BEAM, leaving only an empty clearing. 16 ANGLE ON PATH as Mister Homn returns, his container full of green berries. His lips are stained dark green -- he's been eating much of what he's picked. He looks around at the empty clearing -- where is everyone? Probably off playing a game, so he pops another uttaberry into his mouth while he waits for them to return. FADE OUT. END OF ACT ONE STAR TREK: "Menage a Troi" - REV. 3/19/90 - ACT TWO 20. ACT TWO FADE IN: 17 EXT. SPACE - FERENGI VESSEL KRAYTON (OPTICAL) traveling at warp speed. 18 INT. FERENGI HOLDING TANK (OPTICAL) Typical of a Ferengi ship: an ill-designed, unattractive room. The furnishings are sparse. One end of the room opens into an area where a companel station is staffed by Nibor. A three-dimensional chess board is on the console. Separating this holding tank from Nibor is a lighted arch, suggesting a forcefield. Riker, Troi, and Lwaxana are unconscious. Riker is the first to come to, immediately going to Deanna and her mother. RIKER Deanna? Lwaxana? He rouses them to consciousness. LWAXANA Where are we? RIKER (indicating Nibor) From the smell of things, I'd say we're aboard a Ferengi vessel. LWAXANA The Ferengi can't do this! You're Starfleet officers! RIKER Tog must have missed that chapter in the Ferengi Book of Etiquette. Riker tries his communicator. Nothing happens. He adjusts, tries again. RIKER The Enterprise is too far out of range. He moves to the arch, tests it, gets repelled hard by the forcefield. STAR TREK: "Menage a Troi" - REV. 3/19/90 - ACT TWO 21. 18 CONTINUED: Nibor touches a lighted area on his companel. NIBOR Daimon... they have regained consciousness. TOG'S COM VOICE Very good. Riker turns to Lwaxana in time to see both the women DISAPPEAR in a FERENGI TRANSPORTER EFFECT. Oddly, their clothing has not travelled with them! Riker picks up Troi's uniform, turns to Nibor: RIKER (angry) What have you done with them? But Nibor doesn't answer, leaving Riker to ponder the fate of the Trois. 19 INT. FERENGI LAB (OPTICAL) Another example of tasteful Ferengi interior decorating. Not a pleasant setting. Various pieces of strange and dangerous-looking equipment are everywhere. Compounds have spilled over and crusted on table surfaces. It's the kind of place you'd like to scrub down with Lysol. Troi and Lwaxana MATERIALIZE here, completely naked. Lwaxana reacts to this. LWAXANA I should have known. Even their transporters can't be trusted. Dr. Farek ENTERS from a side room. TROI Why have you removed our clothing? FAREK Females do not deserve the honor of clothing. STAR TREK: "Menage a Troi" - REV. 3/19/90 - ACT TWO 22. 19 CONTINUED: LWAXANA (to Farek) We are not Ferengi females. (to Troi) They're as bad as humans. Look at the leer on his face. 20 ANGLE TO INCLUDE TOG (OPTICAL) who ENTERS as Lwaxana is speaking. TOG No, his is an expression of revulsion. But it is a feeling I do not share, Lwaxana. Lwaxana and Troi have found something with which to partially cover themselves. Lwaxana throws a quick look at Tog. LWAXANA It's cold in here. Do you want me to become ill? TOG No, I don't. Farek, please arrange for their clothing to be returned. LWAXANA Thank you, Daimon Tog. TOG (so charming) You must forgive the Doctor. He is not accustomed to dealing with Betazoid females. (eyeing Lwaxana) I have a business proposition for you... LWAXANA Thanks, but I'm not interested in any of your propositions. TOG Hear me out. Your telepathic powers could bring us both great profit. STAR TREK: "Menage a Troi" - REV. 3/19/90 - ACT TWO 22A. 20 CONTINUED: LWAXANA And why would I want to bring you profit? STAR TREK: "Menage a Troi" - REV. 3/19/90 - ACT TWO 23. 20 CONTINUED: (2) FAREK In order to keep your daughter alive and healthy, for one... TOG (sharp) Farek! There's no need for threats. (smiles at Lwaxana) Lwaxana is a sensible female... TROI (TELEPATHIC V.O.) I don't like the sound of this, mother. LWAXANA (TELEPATHIC V.O.) (to Troi) I believe I can control him, Little One. LWAXANA (to Tog; seductive) I'm sure we can talk about this. Just the two of us. TOG A wise choice. Farek, leave us. (to Troi) And you may rejoin your friend. Farek EXITS. Tog goes to a companel, hits a specific series of lighted areas. Troi DEMATERIALIZES in the FERENGI TRANSPORTER EFFECT. TOG (hot to trot) And now, Lwaxana Troi, let us "talk"... Tog leers at Lwaxana. This is the moment he's been waiting for. Tog presses another panel, and a bed slides out from a wall. 21 EXT. SPACE - ENTERPRISE (OPTICAL) travelling at warp speed, on its way to Gamma Erandi. STAR TREK: "Menage a Troi" - REV. 3/13/90 - ACT TWO 23A. 22 INT. ENGINEERING Geordi, Data and Wesley are working at a console near the large wall schematic of the Enterprise. STAR TREK: "Menage a Troi" - REV. 3/13/90 - ACT TWO 24. 22 CONTINUED: GEORDI Fifteen hours from Gamma Erandi, and the subspace static is already playing hell with communications... WESLEY Just what we might expect in a stellar nursery. DATA Wesley, my congratulations on passing your Starfleet written examinations. An excellent achievement. WESLEY Thanks, Data. Now if I can just do well on the oral exam... GEORDI You will. And when you return, we'll be gaining the best ensign in the fleet. DATA Actually, there is no guarantee Wesley will be reassigned to the Enterprise. Eighty-four per cent of Starfleet graduates are not posted to Galaxy class starships for their first assignment. Wesley reacts to this unexpected bit of news. WESLEY I never thought about that... I always assumed I'd be coming back to the Enterprise. GEORDI I'm sure Captain Picard will request you... if he's still commanding the Enterprise when you graduate. WESLEY I hadn't thought about that, either. (MORE) STAR TREK: "Menage a Troi" - REV. 3/19/90 - ACT TWO 25. 22 CONTINUED: (2) WESLEY (Cont'd) (thinks) I never thought I'd feel this way about leaving the Enterprise... and all of you. DATA Is that not a part of the human experience -- growth and change? WESLEY (considers it) I suppose so... GEORDI I felt the same way when I left my family to go to the Academy. But it was one of the best times of my life. You're going to meet new friends, have adventures you can't even imagine yet... Wesley is beginning to feel some mixed emotions now. WESLEY (unconvinced) I hope you're right, Geordi. 23 OMITTED 24 INT. HOLDING TANK Troi has returned and is again wearing her clothes. In b.g., Nibor is playing 3-D chess with an N.D. Ferengi crewman. LWAXANA (TELEPATHIC V.O.) Little One -- Troi reacts as she "hears" her mother -- LWAXANA (TELEPATHIC V.O., cont'd) -- Tog's given me something perfectly hideous to wear... he says it flatters my beauty. STAR TREK: "Menage a Troi" - REV. 3/19/90 - ACT TWO 26. 24 CONTINUED: TROI (low, to Riker) So far, mother's in no danger. (a beat) I hope she knows what she's doing... RIKER She's bought us some time... let's make the most of it. Riker stands, crosses to the arch, studies the chessboard for a beat. Nibor's scowling -- the Ferengi crewman's got Nibor in a tough spot. Nibor reaches for a piece: RIKER (cont'd) I wouldn't do that... NIBOR (scowls at Riker) I don't need your help. RIKER The hell you don't. You're two moves away from being mated. Nibor ignores Riker, makes the move anyway. The Ferengi crewman promptly makes his move -- and Nibor winces; he didn't see the response coming. RIKER (cont'd) Hey, I warned you. Now you've only got one possible escape... Nibor waves Riker off, makes a move. RIKER (cont'd) ... and that wasn't it. The Ferengi crewman smiles, makes his move, then stands up. The end. The crewman EXITS, smirking. Nibor sullenly starts setting up the chessboard. RIKER (cont'd) See? You should've moved the bishop -- NIBOR (snaps at him) Ridiculous! The bishop was pinned... STAR TREK: "Menage a Troi" - REV. 3/19/90 - ACT TWO 26A. 24 CONTINUED: (2) RIKER (shrugs) Okay, don't listen. Forget that I beat you in thirty moves... NIBOR Pure luck. RIKER I was being polite. I could've won in twenty moves. Nibor glares at Riker. NIBOR Then prove it. STAR TREK: "Menage a Troi" - REV. 3/19/90 - ACT TWO 27. 24 CONTINUED: (3) Nibor makes an opening move. NIBOR Pawn to Queen Four, King's Level. Riker locks eyes with Nibor. RIKER Pawn to King's Bishop Three, Queen's Level. Nibor sneers at Riker, makes Riker's move, studies the board. 25 INT. FERENGI LAB The lighting has been changed. It's softer now. Tog and Lwaxana are alone. he has just poured something liquid into a glass for her. She is wearing a sexy gown, and feeling rather seductive. They are sitting close together on the edge of the bed. LWAXANA I must admit, when you first approached me on the Enterprise, I was intrigued. TOG You mean revolted. LWAXANA (laughs) Maybe a little. Do you forgive me? He continues to move even closer to her as they talk. TOG Yes. With your powers we could be a formidable team. He puts his hand on her shoulder. She does not resist. LWAXANA You have great strength in your hands. STAR TREK: "Menage a Troi" - REV. 3/19/90 - ACT TWO 28. 25 CONTINUED: TOG (pleased) And you like that? LWAXANA I have always admired strong males. TOG You are beautiful... it is impossible to resist you... LWAXANA Then don't. And he moves even closer. She bends slightly forward to meet him, and as they kiss, we: CUT TO: 25A INT. HOLDING TANK Riker's in b.g., looking at Nibor and the chessboard on the other side of the archway. CLOSE on Troi -- reacting to what's coming across her telepathic link to Lwaxana... FADE OUT. END OF ACT TWO STAR TREK: "Menage a Troi" - REV. 3/19/90 - ACT THREE 29. ACT THREE FADE IN: 26 EXT. SPACE - ENTERPRISE (OPTICAL) In the Gamma Erandi Nebula, a gaseous interstellar cloud aglow with brilliant light reflected back from its ionized particles. Within are nests of hundreds of embryonic stars, dense globules of nuclear fusion pouring forth light and heat, on the most massive scale imaginable. 27 INT. MAIN BRIDGE (OPTICAL) Picard in command chair, Worf at Tactical, Data at Ops. Other supernumeraries staff the Bridge stations. On screen is a breathtaking view of Gamma Erandi. DATA Initial scans of ionization patterns complete, sir. Now correlating sensor readings. PICARD (indicating screen) It's almost incomprehensible, the amount of energy being expended... DATA Actually, it is five point three four times ten to the forty-first watts... well within the norm for phenomena of this type. PICARD Perhaps... but that takes away none of the wonder. Data nods, watches the screen, trying to comprehend the emotions Picard and the others must feel viewing this. 28 INT. WESLEY'S QUARTERS Wesley is deciding which personal items to take with him. As he surveys his possessions, he will discard some and place others in a "keep" pile. DOOR CHIME. STAR TREK: "Menage a Troi" - REV. 3/19/90 - ACT THREE 30. 28 CONTINUED: Wesley's looking intently upon an unusual piece of equipment, doesn't turn around to face the door. WESLEY Come in. SOUND of DOOR OPENING O.S. BEVERLY (O.S.) Hi. I brought you something... WESLEY I hope it's small, because I'm taking way too much as it is... Wesley turns as Beverly ENTERS FRAME carrying a tray with a decanter and two glasses. BEVERLY Your friend Guinan sent this up from Ten Forward. It's not to pack -- it's for me to propose a toast with. Beverly pours. BEVERLY (cont'd) To a future Starfleet officer. Wesley's surprised --and touched. WESLEY Mom -- thanks. Beverly hands Wesley a glass, raises hers in a toast. BEVERLY I won't say "give it your best" because I know you will. I won't say "make me proud"... because you already have. So I'll just say... here's to your future. They clink glasses and drink. Wesley picks up the piece of equipment: WESLEY This was Dad's... STAR TREK: "Menage a Troi" - REV. 3/19/90 - ACT THREE 30A. 28 CONTINUED: (2) BEVERLY (nods) From the Stargazer. Do you have room for it? STAR TREK: "Menage a Troi" - REV. 3/19/90 - ACT THREE 31. 28 CONTINUED: (3) WESLEY No... but I'm taking it anyway. Beverly nods -- "he'd be pleased." 29 OMITTED 30 INT. HOLDING TANK (OPTICAL) Riker and Troi are still in the cell; Nibor smugly makes a move on the chessboard. NIBOR Check. Riker frowns, turns away from the arch. RIKER I'm sick of this game. NIBOR Of course -- now that you're losing. Riker sits down, away from the archway. RIKER Who's losing? I'm just tired of standing up. NIBOR You can't resign now. RIKER It's too hard to play from in here. I can't even see the whole board. NIBOR (catches on) Ah, then you'll finish the game if I let you out of the cell. RIKER I might... NIBOR Clever, hyoo-man, but I'm not that foolish. STAR TREK: "Menage a Troi" - REV. 3/20/90 - ACT THREE 31A. 30 CONTINUED: RIKER (with disdain) What -- you're afraid I'd try to escape? What would that get me? You'd still have her. And besides... where would I go? NIBOR (unsure) I do not trust you... Riker puts his feet up, makes himself comfortable. RIKER Fine. Thanks for the game. Nibor thinks it over -- then picks up his phaser, and lowers the forcefield. Gestures to Riker. NIBOR Come out here. STAR TREK: "Menage a Troi" - REV. 3/19/90 - ACT THREE 32. 30 CONTINUED: (2) Riker crosses through the archway, steps up to the chessboard. Nibor restores the forcefield, keeping Troi captive in the cell. NIBOR (cont'd) Now save your rook... if you can. As Riker thoughtfully circles the board: CUT TO: 31 INT. FERENGI LAB Tog sits on the floor at Lwaxana's feet, his head resting against her lap. LWAXANA ... and that was my first husband. Not much of a conversationalist, but what a lover. Then I met -- TOG (interrupting) I do not want to hear about your other romances. It makes me jealous. She wants to keep control of the situation, so she changes tactics, begins rubbing his ears. LWAXANA My, what big ears you have. Has anyone ever told you how attractive they are? TOG (melting) Some females think they are my best feature. Lwaxana begins massaging his ears, and he relaxes into some sort of alpha state. STAR TREK: "Menage a Troi" - REV. 3/19/90 - ACT THREE 33. 31 CONTINUED: TOG (continuing) No one has ever given me oo-mox like this before. LWAXANA Oo-mox? TOG There is no translation. But the ear is one of our most erogenous zones. LWAXANA (hesitates, then) Then you shall have as much oo-mox as you desire. He relaxes into the alpha state even more, turning in worshipful gaze toward her. 32 INT. HOLDING TANK CLOSE on Nibor, unconscious on the floor. WIDEN to reveal Riker standing above Nibor, rubbing his sore knuckles. RIKER Those Ferengi have iron jaws... Riker works the console. 32A ANGLE ON THE ARCHWAY (OPTICAL) as the FORCEFIELD shimmers and disappears. Troi crosses to Riker's side. LWAXANA (TELEPATHIC V.O.) Little One -- Troi reacts to "hearing" her mother. LWAXANA (TELEPATHIC V.O., cont'd) -- if Tog were a kitten, he'd be purring. TROI Good work, Mother. STAR TREK: "Menage a Troi" - REV. 3/19/90 - ACT THREE 33A. 32A CONTINUED: Riker reacts, gives Troi an inquiring look. Troi explains: TROI (cont'd) According to mother, Daimon Tog is... extremely relaxed at the moment. RIKER Tell Lwaxana to keep him relaxed while we call the cavalry... Riker crosses to the computer terminal and taps keys, but: STAR TREK: "Menage a Troi" - REV. 3/19/90 - ACT THREE 34. 32A CONTINUED: (2) COMPUTER VOICE Access to communications denied. All transmissions to be authorized by Daimon Tog. Riker and Troi exchange a look -- "are you thinking what I'm thinking?" TROI Let's see just how relaxed Daimon Tog is... 33 INT. FERENGI LAB Tog is gazing lovingly up at Lwaxana. TROI (TELEPATHIC V.O.) Mother -- we're out of the cell and we're trying to contact the Enterprise... but we can't do it without Tog's access code. Do you think -- LWAXANA (TELEPATHIC V.O.) Say no more, Little One. TOG Lwaxana... you and I are going to make such a wonderful team... With your telepathy and my cunning, I foresee -- LWAXANA (finishes it) -- a very profitable future. Tog is in ecstasy. 34 EXT. SPACE - ENTERPRISE (OPTICAL) at warp speed. STAR TREK: "Menage a Troi" - REV. 3/19/90 - ACT THREE 35. 35 INT. MAIN BRIDGE (OPTICAL) Picard, Worf, and Data still at their stations; various supernumeraries staff other positions. WORF Subspace interference is subsiding... communications have been restored... PICARD Good. Contact Commander Riker on Betazed. WORF (observing panel) Message coming in from Betazed, sir. Priority One. PICARD (concerned) On screen. The image of Reittan Grax, the Betazed conference director, fills the screen. REITTAN GRAX Captain Picard, at last. We've been trying to reach you for two days. PICARD Our communications were blocked by the nebula, Reittan. Is there a problem? REITTAN GRAX I'm afraid so, Captain. Lwaxana, Deanna and Commander Riker have disappeared. On Picard's reaction... CUT TO: 36 OMITTED 37 INT. FERENGI LAB Lwaxana has been "oo-moxing" Tog into a deeper alpha state and he's now on the verge of sleep. STAR TREK: "Menage a Troi" - REV. 3/27/90 - ACT THREE 36. 37 CONTINUED: TOG I knew I wanted you the moment I saw you... you have fulfilled all my expectations. LWAXANA How sweet. TOG (sleepily) Farek thought it was a bad idea... but I knew better... LWAXANA How clever. TOG I knew best... I always know best... LWAXANA (to herself) How repugnant. TOG (didn't catch it) What? LWAXANA I said, "how romantic." I can't resist a man who knows what he wants... and goes after it. TOG That's me. And that's why I'm Daimon of this ship... I take charge of every situation. (demonstrating; a command) More to the left, woman. LWAXANA Whatever you say... Lwaxana obediently favors Tog's left ear. Tog happily drifts off again. LWAXANA (cont'd) My darling, would you like something to drink? STAR TREK: "Menage a Troi" - REV. 3/27/90 - ACT THREE 36A. 37 CONTINUED: (2) TOG (murmuring, half-asleep) You're so attentive. LWAXANA Does your food synthesizer know how to make an Arcturian Fizz? TOG I don't think so... LWAXANA They have certain pleasure-enhancing qualities. TOG (sounds good) Mmmm... LWAXANA Let me teach the computer how to make one. (a beat) I'll need your access code... STAR TREK: "Menage a Troi" - REV. 3/19/90 - ACT THREE 37. 37 CONTINUED: (2) Tog's practically in Ferengi lala land, about to slip into slumber. Dreamily: TOG Yes, beloved... Computer -- access code Keh-ee Yoor-ee Dah-teh-ee -- FAREK (O.S.) Tog! Be silent! Lwaxana, startled, turns to see -- 38 NEW ANGLE An angry Farek is standing in the doorway. FAREK I knew you were not to be trusted. LWAXANA Doctor Farek! I was... going to make Daimon Tog a drink... FAREK Save your lies for this fool... Farek indicates Tog, who's slowly regaining alertness. LWAXANA Daimon Tog, he's misunderstood... Don't listen to him. FAREK (to Tog) No -- you've misunderstood. You've been tricked by a sly female who finds you repulsive. TOG She was only trying to serve... FAREK You almost gave her complete access to the ship's computer... (pointed) ... a security breach severe enough to cost you your command! STAR TREK: "Menage a Troi" - REV. 3/19/90 - ACT THREE 38. 38 CONTINUED: Tog falls silent, realizing Farek's got him by the short hairs. FAREK (cont'd) It's time you took my advice. Let me study her. TOG Study her? Your mind probes could kill her. FAREK (unconcerned) You brought her aboard for her telepathic powers. If I can determine what neural configuration gives her those powers, we may be able to duplicate them. We could still profit from this. TOG I don't know... FAREK A true Daimon would not be blinded by lust. Give her to me or I will be forced to report your transgression. Tog is devastated. His darling may have betrayed him, and now he's locked in a power struggle with his first officer. Rather weakly he agrees. TOG Very well... take her. On Lwaxana's reaction: FADE OUT. END OF ACT THREE STAR TREK: "Menage a Troi" - REV. 3/23/90 - ACT FOUR 39. ACT FOUR FADE IN: 39 EXT. SPACE - THE ENTERPRISE (OPTICAL) In orbit around Betazed. 40 thru OMITTED 42 43 EXT. BETAZED CLEARING Worf and three supernumeraries are inspecting the scene with tricorders. 44 NEW ANGLE to include Reittan Grax. REITTAN GRAX I wish I had some answers for you, Lieutenant Worf. WORF Mister Homn was no help? REITTAN GRAX None. He last saw them as he was leaving this clearing. When he returned, all three of them were gone. Data returns, holding the bunch of wilted flowers we saw earlier. DATA Lieutenant Foley found these in the pond. The species is Zan Periculi. It is not indigenous to Betazed, but to Lappa IV... a Ferengi world. STAR TREK: "Menage a Troi" - REV. 3/20/90 - ACT FOUR 40. 44A INT. CAPTAIN'S READY ROOM Picard, Geordi, Data, and Worf. The flowers are on the Captain's desk. PICARD We now have a reasonable hypothesis as to whom. WORF The difficult question is where. GEORDI The Ferengi ship is almost as fast as the Enterprise... she could be just about anywhere by now. Picard considers for a beat. PICARD Commander Riker will assume that we'll be searching for them... he'll find some way to send us a message. (a beat) Mister Worf, I want continual monitoring of all Ferengi subspace frequencies. Mister La Forge, can you extend our sensor range? GEORDI (thinking) If I narrow the band and tie in long-range sensors to the subspace scanners, I can boost the gain... PICARD Make it so. DATA Do you wish to leave orbit? PICARD Not until we have someplace to go. 45 EXT. SPACE - THE KRAYTON (OPTICAL) travelling at warp speed. STAR TREK: "Menage a Troi" - REV. 3/19/90 - ACT FOUR 40A. 46 INT. HOLDING TANK (OPTICAL) As before: Nibor unconscious on the floor, Riker working at the computer terminal, Troi looking on. STAR TREK: "Menage a Troi" - REV. 3/20/90 - ACT FOUR 41. 46 CONTINUED: RIKER (shakes his head) I've tried everything I know... and it's no use. Without Tog's security code, I can't get near the communication system. TROI We're running out of time... Farek's about to begin the neural scan on mother. Riker's doing everything he can at the computer terminal. RIKER (thinking) Maybe I'm going about this the wrong way. If I pick a minor subsystem... something non-essential... Riker works the console, brings up a control schematic. RIKER (cont'd) Like this... the warp field phase adjustment. All this does is suppress the subspace interference generated by the warp engines. TROI Meaning what? RIKER Meaning if I set up a simple oscillation, I can send out a signal. (studying schematic) The trick is to create a message that the Enterprise will understand... but that the Ferengi will think is just normal subspace static. Riker punches in a complex set of computer instructions. Troi flinches at a sudden pain. Riker notices. STAR TREK: "Menage a Troi" - REV. 3/19/90 - ACT FOUR 41A. 46 CONTINUED: (2) RIKER (cont'd) What's wrong? TROI Mother... 46A INT. FERENGI LAB (OPTICAL) Lwaxana on the Ferengi operating table. A strange device is probing the Betazoid's mind. Lwaxana is writhing in agony. A monitor shows the woman's brain, changes in color indicating the manipulations Farek is putting her through. STAR TREK: "Menage a Troi" - REV. 3/20/90 - ACT FOUR 42-42A. 46B INT. HOLDING TANK (OPTICAL) Riker holding Troi. She is really suffering, but trying to be a good soldier and handle it. TROI Will... (again a cry of pain quickly suppressed) ... we've got to help her... Riker makes a decision, picks up Nibor's phaser. RIKER Come on. Riker and Troi EXIT. 47 EXT. SPACE - THE ENTERPRISE (OPTICAL) orbiting Betazed. 48 INT. MAIN BRIDGE (OPTICAL) A flurry of activity. Data at Science One; Geordi at Engineering; Wesley assisting Geordi; Worf at Tactical. Supernumeraries are at other stations. They are examining all possible information to discover where the Ferengi have taken their hostages. GEORDI (to Wesley) Thanks for the help, but you'd better get aboard the Bradbury -- they were ready to leave orbit an hour ago. WESLEY (nods) Soon as we're sure this works... GEORDI (to Picard) Initiating scans now, sir. We HEAR a succession of CODED RADIO SIGNALS -- all weak, scrambled, unintelligible, and covered with layers of HISS, rhythmic POPS, and STATIC. Each scanned sample lasts about five seconds. STAR TREK: "Menage a Troi" - REV. 3/19/90 - ACT FOUR 43. 48 CONTINUED: PICARD Can we locate the Krayton? Data and Wesley work at Science One. DATA Ferengi transmissions are routinely scrambled and encoded, sir. Without breaking the code, we will be unable to identify any specific Ferengi vessel. GEORDI (as he works) And Ferengi codes are damn near impossible to break... PICARD Gentlemen, I have the utmost confidence in your ability to perform the impossible. Geordi, Wesley, and Data keep working as the various scanned SIGNALS continue. One signal contains a particular pattern of rhythmic POPPING that catches Wesley's attention for a moment -- though Wesley can't put his finger on why. Then another SIGNAL in the scan replaces it. WORF Captain, the Bradbury is hailing us. They can no longer delay their departure. Picard turns to Wesley. PICARD Mister Crusher -- now. We have no time for lengthy farewells. Good luck. WESLEY Thank you, sir. Wesley would like to say goodbye to everyone else, but there's no more time. He takes one last look around the Bridge as the rest of the Bridge crew resumes their tasks: STAR TREK: "Menage a Troi" - REV. 3/19/90 - ACT FOUR 43A. 48 CONTINUED: (2) DATA The repetitive nature of the subcarrier pattern would imply a modified Greenlaw-Huffman encoding scheme... GEORDI Okay, I'll reverse-engineer the algorithm using a Pileggi sequence... Wesley EXITS into the Turbolift. The doors close. STAR TREK: "Menage a Troi" - REV. 3/16/90 - ACT FOUR 44. 49 INT. TRANSPORTER ROOM An n.d. crewmember is at the Transporter console. Beverly is near the pad, waiting with a travel case. Wesley ENTERS, his manner thoughtful and preoccupied. Beverly smiles proudly. BEVERLY Wesley... take care. WESLEY You too, Mom. Beverly gives him a farewell hug. Wesley smiles at her... but he just can't get his train of thought away from the problem on the Bridge. Lost in thought, Wesley steps onto the pad. BEVERLY Something the matter? WESLEY We've been scanning Ferengi transmissions, trying to find the Krayton. One of the signals was... I don't know... familiar somehow... BEVERLY Something in the message? WESLEY No -- the message was scrambled... (suddenly it clicks) It was the static. Wesley steps off the pad, heads for the door. STAR TREK: "Menage a Troi" - REV. 3/16/90 - ACT FOUR 45. 49 CONTINUED: BEVERLY Where are you going? Too late; Wesley's already EXITED. On Beverly's expression: FADE OUT. END OF ACT FOUR STAR TREK: "Menage a Troi" - REV. 3/19/90 - ACT FIVE 46. ACT FIVE FADE IN: 50 EXT. SPACE - THE ENTERPRISE (OPTICAL) orbiting Betazed. 51 INT. MAIN BRIDGE Picard, Data, Worf, Geordi, supernumeraries. WORF Sir, the Bradbury informs us they can wait no longer for Mister Crusher to come aboard. Picard is surprised, but before he can respond, Wesley ENTERS from the Turbolift. Everyone reacts. WESLEY Captain, I think there's a pattern to the subspace interference I heard on one of the Ferengi messages. PICARD Wesley, unless you leave immediately, you'll miss -- Wesley nods -- he knows what he's doing -- and continues: WESLEY The interference itself could be a message. If I could just hear a replay of the subspace scans... Picard studies Wesley, nods. PICARD (to Worf) Signal the Bradbury they may depart. (to Data) Play back the Ferengi transmissions... STAR TREK: "Menage a Troi" - REV. 3/20/90 - ACT FIVE 47. 51 CONTINUED: We HEAR the various CODED RADIO SIGNALS as before. Wesley listens intently until he hears the SIGNAL with the pattern of INTERFERENCE POPPING that caught his attention before. WESLEY Wait -- repeat that one. Put it on a continuous replay. Data does so. The SIGNAL keeps playing. WESLEY (cont'd) Hear that popping noise? Data, can you filter out everything but that sound? Data works the console. We now HEAR only the rhythmic POPPING. Now that it's isolated, it's easier to identify -- GEORDI That's Cochrane distortion... a fluctuation in the phase of the subspace field. All warp engines generate that kind of interference. WESLEY But listen to the pattern... it's the Algolian ceremonial rhythm the musician was playing at the reception. DATA Mister Crusher is correct, sir. There is a temporal correlation. PICARD Then it is a signal from Commander Riker. (with admiration) Ingenious. He selected a signal we'd recognize... but one the Ferengi would dismiss as static. Wesley moves to Conn, relieves the crewman there. Worf's been working the Tactical console under all this, now reports: WORF Signal source located, Captain. STAR TREK: "Menage a Troi" - REV. 3/19/90 - ACT FIVE 47A-48. 51 CONTINUED: (2) PICARD Plot an intercept course. Wesley's already punching it in at the helm. WESLEY Course plotted and laid in, sir. PICARD Well done, Mister Crusher. Warp Eight. WESLEY Aye, sir. PICARD Engage. 52 OMITTED 53 INT. FERENGI LAB (OPTICAL) Lwaxana Troi is restrained on a biobed. Farek is making adjustments to his mind probe. Riker and Troi ENTER. Riker FIRES a single shot, destroying the probe. Farek and Lwaxana react. Riker gestures with the phaser. RIKER Get away from her. Farek moves quickly to obey. Troi crosses to her mother, and unfastens the restraints. The stress of her ordeal shows on her face as Lwaxana sits up. Tog ENTERS, from behind Riker. He too holds a phaser. TOG Standoff, Commander. Riker whirls to face this new threat. STAR TREK: "Menage a Troi" - REV. 3/19/90 - ACT FIVE 49. 53 CONTINUED: LWAXANA Tog, can't we strike a bargain? All I'm concerned about is my daughter's safety... what happens to me isn't important. TOG What are you suggesting? She sees an opening and takes full advantage. LWAXANA Let me be candid, Daimon Tog. Deanna is of no use to you. She's only half Betazoid. And if you keep Riker, Starfleet will never stop searching for you. Tog nods judiciously -- "go on." LWAXANA (cont'd) If you release them, I'll stay with you willingly... and use my telepathy to aid you in your negotiations. Tog is wavering. Lwaxana clinches the deal: LWAXANA (cont'd) I will also show you some of my other exotic skills... Lwaxana does a strutting dance for Tog. TOG A tempting offer. I would like to believe you. She extends a hand. LWAXANA The offer is genuine. I give you my word as a Daughter of the Fifth House of Betazed. RIKER Lwaxana, don't. STAR TREK: "Menage a Troi" - REV. 3/27/90 - ACT FIVE 49A. 53 CONTINUED: (2) LWAXANA I've made up my mind. RIKER I can't let you do this... LWAXANA William, I'm a grown woman. I can make my own decisions, and I'm fully capable of entering into a contract. TROI Mother -- we can't just leave you here -- Lwaxana turns to Troi, silences her with a look and a thought: LWAXANA (TELEPATHIC V.O.) Yes, you can -- before he changes his mind. (then, smiling) Please, Little One. Do as I say... just this once... Lwaxana turns back to Tog before Troi can reply: LWAXANA Do we have an agreement? Tog nods. Th deal is done. TOG You have my word. I will release your daughter and the Commander. STAR TREK: "Menage a Troi" - REV. 3/19/90 - ACT FIVE 50. 53 CONTINUED: (3) Tog holsters his phaser; he's reached a bargain. He shrugs, and moves to Lwaxana's side. She smiles. LWAXANA Oo-mox is only the beginning... 54 thru OMITTED 56 57 NEW ANGLE as Riker and Troi react. Farek is frankly disgusted. STAR TREK: "Menage a Troi" - REV. 3/19/90 - ACT FIVE 51. 57 CONTINUED: FERENGI CREWMAN (V.O.) Daimon -- we are being hailed by the Enterprise -- they demand the return of the captives -- Reactions. Farek panics, but Tog is calm. FAREK The Enterprise has found us -- TOG (cutting Farek off) Slow to impulse... raise shields. Inform the Enterprise that two of our guests are ready to return. The other will be staying with us -- at her request. FAREK Daimon, I must protest -- TOG There is nothing to protest. Lwaxana will cooperate... therefore we have gained what we set out to gain. FAREK But you cannot trust her -- TOG (firm) Lwaxana has given her word. Now leave us. 58 EXT. SPACE - THE ENTERPRISE AND THE KRAYTON (OPTICAL) motionless relative to one another. STAR TREK: "Menage a Troi" - REV. 3/19/90 - ACT FIVE 52. 59 thru OMITTED 60 61 INT. MAIN BRIDGE (OPTICAL) Riker and Troi BEAM IN (FERENGI TRANSPORTER EFFECT). The viewscreen shows the Krayton. PICARD You're both all right? RIKER None the worse for wear. TROI My mother bought our freedom, Captain. But believe me, she doesn't want to stay with Tog. PICARD (to Worf) Hail the Krayton. WORF (works the panel) Sir, Daimon Tog responding. On the screen, the image of the Krayton is replaced by Tog.  STAR TREK: "Menage a Troi" - REV. 3/19/90 - ACT FIVE 53. 61 CONTINUED: TOG Captain Picard, so good of you to meet us. We were on our way to Betazed to return our guests. PICARD Of course you were. But you're still holding Lwaxana Troi. Lwaxana suddenly ENTERS FRAME next to Tog. LWAXANA When will you get it through your thick head that it's over between us, Jean-Luc? Picard reacts to this bizarre statement. Troi suddenly smiles, she sees where her mother's going. Troi indicates to Worf to mute the transmission. TROI I think I know what she's doing. You must fight to get her back, Captain. Bluffing a Ferengi on behalf of Lwaxana Troi? Picard shakes his head -- why me? But it might work, so Picard bites the bullet, turns to the Main Viewer: PICARD It's not over, Lwaxana. You're mine and I refuse to let you go. Return to my side immediately. LWAXANA (hopeful) You mean... you still care? Words fail Picard. He searches his memory for something -- anything -- to say, finally hits upon Shakespeare: PICARD "My love is a fever, longing still For that which longer nurseth the disease." Reactions all around. LWAXANA (melting) Tell me more... STAR TREK: "Menage a Troi" - REV. 3/19/90 - ACT FIVE 53A. 61 CONTINUED: (2) PICARD "In faith, I do not love thee with mine eyes, For they in thee a thousand errors note; But 'tis my heart that loves what they despise; Who in despite of view is pleas'd to dote." Under this: TOG (to Lwaxana) You didn't tell me that you and Captain Picard were -- LWAXANA (interrupting Tog) You said you didn't want to hear about all my romances. (to Picard) I have a new love, Jean-Luc. And you can't keep killing all my lovers. That simply has to stop. TOG Killing? LWAXANA He's insanely jealous. STAR TREK: "Menage a Troi" - REV. 3/19/90 - ACT FIVE 54. 61 CONTINUED: (3) PICARD Listen, Tog, no one possesses Lwaxana but me. And if I have to destroy your ship in the process, so be it. TOG Captain, I had no idea Lwaxana was your woman. LWAXANA (to Tog) Don't let him threaten you. You can defeat him. (to Picard) The only way you'll get me back is over Tog's dead body! PICARD That can be arranged. Mister Worf, arm all phaser banks and photon torpedoes. If my beloved is not in my arms in ten seconds, throw everything you've got at the Krayton. TOG But you'll destroy Lwaxana! PICARD (shrugs) 'Tis better to have loved and lost than never to have loved at all... Eight, seven... TOG No, wait! PICARD Six... five... TOG (hits companel) Beam her to their Bridge... now! PICARD Three... two... And Lwaxana MATERIALIZES on the Bridge. Playing her part in the charade, she rushes to Picard, throws her arms around him. STAR TREK: "Menage a Troi" - REV. 3/20/90 - ACT FIVE 55. 61 CONTINUED: (4) LWAXANA You wonderfully jealous fool. TOG I trust there will be no further action taken against us? PICARD Such as reporting this incident to your superiors who may question your competency as Daimon? I'll think about it. (to Worf) Screen off. And Picard cuts the communication. He looks to Lwaxana -- "charade's over." Lwaxana, however, doesn't let go. LWAXANA (amorously) Thank you, Jean-Luc. You were most convincing. (purring) You certainly convinced me... Picard has some difficulty extricating himself from Lwaxana's arms. PICARD Mrs. Troi, I'm truly grateful that you risked your life for my... (breaks free) ...people. I'll have you home within hours. LWAXANA Really, that isn't necessary, Captain... (provocatively) I'd love to hear more of that poetry... PICARD Perhaps another time. Mister Crusher, set course for Betazed. (glancing at Lwaxana) Warp Nine. Lwaxana turns to Troi: STAR TREK: "Menage a Troi" - REV. 3/20/90 - ACT FIVE 55A. 61 CONTINUED: (5) LWAXANA (TELEPATHIC V.O.) There's so much to talk about, Little One... such as your future. Reittan Grax was telling me the other day that he has the nicest nephew... Deanna gives her a look of "Oh Lord, here we go again." 62 EXT. SPACE - THE ENTERPRISE (OPTICAL) streaking at top speed for Betazed. STAR TREK: "Menage a Troi" - REV. 3/20/90 - ACT FIVE 56. 63 OMITTED 64 INT. READY ROOM (OPTICAL) Picard is reading something on his PADD as Wesley enters. WESLEY You asked to see me, Captain? Picard barely looks up. PICARD I've been in touch with Admiral Hahn at Starfleet Academy. Wesley's expression turns hopeful. Maybe there's still a chance somehow... STAR TREK: "Menage a Troi" - REV. 3/20/90 - ACT FIVE 57. 64 CONTINUED: PICARD (cont'd) The Admiral regrets your missing the oral examination and hopes you'll reapply next year. Wesley hides his disappointment. No loopholes here. WESLEY I understand, sir. (a beat) I do intend to reapply. Picard nods -- good. PICARD In the interim... the Academy's loss is our gain. I'm gratified the Enterprise will continue to benefit from your talents for another year. WESLEY Thank you, Captain. Picard returns his attention to the PADD. Wesley stands, waits to be dismissed. Nothing. Wesley's beginning to feel awkward. Finally: WESLEY (cont'd) Is that all, sir? PICARD There is one more thing. Picard looks up. PICARD (cont'd) For some time now I have been contemplating a certain action. Your conduct today has convinced me to take that action. Wesley stands mute, wondering if he's in trouble. PICARD (cont'd) I've reviewed your service record thoroughly... and I've decided upon the appropriate course. Is there a twinkle in Picard's eye? STAR TREK: "Menage a Troi" - REV. 3/20/90 - ACT FIVE 57A. 64 CONTINUED: (2) PICARD (cont'd) I am granting you a field promotion to full Ensign. Wesley's face lights up. Before Wesley can speak: PICARD (cont'd) Congratulations. (a beat) You're dismissed. CUT TO: STAR TREK: "Menage a Troi" - REV. 3/16/90 - ACT FIVE 58. 65 EXT. SPACE - THE ENTERPRISE (OPTICAL) orbiting Betazed. 66 INT. MAIN BRIDGE Picard, Riker, Troi, Worf, Data, Geordi, Beverly are all here. N.D. Crewmember at Conn. WORF Lwaxana Troi has beamed down to Betazed, Captain. Wesley ENTERS, now in the crimson Starfleet uniform of an Ensign, and takes his station. PICARD (to Worf) Notify Starfleet we are en route to the Xanthras system for our rendezvous with the Zapata. WORF Aye, sir. PICARD Ensign Crusher, take us out of orbit and set course for Xanthras Three, Warp Factor Six. WESLEY Aye, sir. (works the helm) Course set. PICARD Engage. Beverly looks proudly over at Wesley, who takes a moment to relish his new status. Yes! This is going to be all right! FADE OUT. END OF ACT FIVE THE END STAR TREK: THE NEXT GENERATION "Transfigurations" #40273-173 Written by Rene Echevarria Directed by Tom Benko THE WRITING CREDITS MAY NOT BE FINAL AND SHOULD NOT BE USED FOR PUBLICITY OR ADVERTISING PURPOSES WITHOUT FIRST CHECKING WITH THE TELEVISION LEGAL DEPARTMENT. Copyright 1990 Paramount Pictures Corporation. All Rights Reserved. This script is not for publication or reproduction. No one is authorized to dispose of same. If lost or destroyed, please notify the Script Department. REVISED FINAL DRAFT MARCH 27, 1990 STAR TREK: "Transfigurations" - 3/27/90 - CAST STAR TREK: THE NEXT GENERATION "Transfigurations" CAST PICARD Zalkonians RIKER JOHN DOE DATA SUNAD BEVERLY TROI GEORDI WORF WESLEY O'BRIEN CHRISTY NURSE TEMPLE COMPUTER VOICE Non-Speaking SUPERNUMERARIES TWO SHUTTLE TECHNICIANS SEVERAL MEDICAL CREWPERSONS STAR TREK: "Transfigurations" 3/27/90 - SETS STAR TREK: THE NEXT GENERATION "Transfigurations" SETS INTERIORS EXTERIORS USS ENTERPRISE USS ENTERPRISE MAIN BRIDGE READY ROOM PLANET SURFACE OBSERVATIONS LOUNGE CRASH SITE TEN FORWARD SICKBAY ZALKONIAN SHIP JOHN'S SICKBAY ROOM ENGINEERING CORRIDORS CRUSHER QUARTERS TURBOLIFT SHUTTLBAY CONTROL BOOTH CATWALK STAR TREK: "Transfigurations" - REV. 3/28/90 - TEASER 1. STAR TREK: THE NEXT GENERATION "Transfigurations" TEASER FADE IN: 1 EXT. SPACE (OPTICAL) The Enterprise in orbit around a small planetoid. PICARD (V.O.) Captain's Log, Stardate 43957.2. We are presently charting an unknown star system located in the Zeta Gelis cluster. This rather routine assignment has made for a refreshingly quiet time aboard the Enterprise. 2 INT. TEN FORWARD GEORDI and WORF are at the bar. Geordi discreetly indicates a young woman sitting with a friend (it is CHRISTY, whom we last saw in "Booby Trap" telling Geordi that she wasn't interested in him "that way"). GEORDI That's her. Worf takes a look. GEORDI Don't stare. WORF Why not? GEORDI Because she'll see. WORF Good. You must let her see the fire in your eyes. GEORDI But what would I say... ? STAR TREK: "Transfigurations" - REV. 3/28/90 - TEASER 1A. 2 CONTINUED: WORF (acting the wise Lothario) Words come later, it is the scent that first speaks of love. STAR TREK: "Transfigurations" - REV. 3/27/90 - TEASER 2. 2 CONTINUED: GEORDI Thanks Worf, that really helps me a lot. Geordi sees Christy get up with a couple empty glasses and head toward the bar. He quickly turns toward Worf and tries to blend into the woodwork, but she ends up standing right behind him as she waits for her refills. She recognizes him: CHRISTY Hi, Geordi. GEORDI (turning around) Hi, Christy. A long silence. Christy waits for Geordi to continue, but Geordi doesn't know what to say. She knows he has a crush on her and tries to draw him out. CHRISTY So... how have you been? GEORDI Good. Another long silence. Christy tries again. CHRISTY How are things down in Engineering? GEORDI Fine... uh really... fine. Another long silence. Christy finally gives up. CHRISTY Well, see you around. Geordi nods and she EXITS. Worf turns to Geordi. WORF I have much to teach you about women. RIKER'S COM VOICE Mister La Forge, report to Transporter Room three. As Geordi reacts... STAR TREK: "Transfigurations" - REV. 3/28/90 - TEASER 3. 3 thru OMITTED 3A 3B INT. CORRIDOR RIKER, BEVERLY, and DATA are moving rapidly down the corridor towards the Transporter Room. A Turbolift OPENS and Geordi ENTERS. He quickly falls in step with the others. GEORDI What's this all about, Commander? RIKER (to Geordi) Sensors have discovered a small one-man ship crashed on the planet. BEVERLY We're picked up life-signs... humanoid, very faint and fading. They EXIT into the Transporter Room. 4 EXT. THE PLANET'S SURFACE (OPTICAL) The Away Team MATERIALIZES in front of the shattered hull of the wrecked escape pod. DATA (using tricorder) Radiation levels within acceptable limits. As they get closer, we see the injured humanoid. He is unconscious, in a state of shock. Half his body is trapped under a mass of bent steel; he has a nasty head wound. His right arm is severed. Beverly moves quickly to him and uses her medical tricorder. GEORDI We can beam him out from under there, get him up to Sickbay. BEVERLY He's not stable enough for transport. There's damage to his brain stem, his autonomic functions are failing. STAR TREK: "Transfigurations" - REV. 3/27/90 - TEASER 4. 4 CONTINUED: BEVERLY His heart needs active neural feedback, it can't regulate itself. I need a volunteer. GEORDI I'm here. BEVERLY I'm going to hook your nervous systems together through my tricorder -- your brain will regulate both systems. That should stabilize him long enough to get him up to the ship. The following takes a matter of seconds... she affixes a neural pad to the base of each of her patient's skulls. Thin fiber optic cables lead out from these pads and connect to her tricorder. She flips a switch and the tricorder starts beeping in synch with Geordi's heartbeat. BEVERLY Take deep, regular breaths. If anything goes wrong I'll break the connection. Geordi nods. She activates the device. Two heartbeats can now be heard. Suddenly, a strange COLOR WASH moves along the fiber from the humanoid to Geordi. BEVERLY (ready to break connection) Geordi! GEORDI I'm fine... no problem. BEVERLY (nods and hits combadge) Transporter Room, three to beam directly to Sickbay. As they DEMATERIALIZE, we... FADE OUT. END OF TEASER STAR TREK: "Transfigurations" - REV. 3/30/90 - ACT ONE 5. ACT ONE FADE IN: 5 INT. JOHN'S SICKBAY ROOM Patient "John Doe" has just been placed in a special emergency surgical bed. Electrodes are feverishly being attached to his head and chest. Beverly, NURSE TEMPLE, and SEVERAL MEDICAL CREWPERSONS are working on John. BEVERLY (to a nurse) Autonomic responses are still low... begin cardiostimulation... (to another nurse) Sixty cc's of inoprovaline... massive infection is setting in... use the protodynoplaser to stabilize his immune system. (looking at monitor) We need to design a virus that can infiltrate his cell structure and boost his ATP production. The team moves into action. TEMPLE What about Commander La Forge... he's waiting in the diagnostic center. BEVERLY I want you to give him a full bioscan. See if there are any residual effects from that energy discharge during the neuro-link. Temple nods and EXITS. BEVERLY (to another nurse) Keep his arm in cryogenic stasis until his vital signs are strong enough to begin surgical procedures. Beverly leans over her patient as if trying to gauge his chances for survival... at the moment they don't look good... STAR TREK: "Transfigurations" - REV. 3/28/90 - ACT ONE 6. 6 INT. BRIDGE PICARD, Riker, Data, and Worf are on the Bridge. RIKER From the size and shape of the wreckage, it appeared to be some kind of escape pod. The control system had been heavily damaged, that's probably what caused the crash. PICARD (thoughtfully) An escape pod... then it couldn't have travelled very far. Mister Data, any signs of other ships in this area? DATA (works console) I am picking up a scattering of debris in extended orbit around the planet. It reads as refined metals and other synthetic compounds. PICARD The remains of a larger vessel. He must have left in the pod before the ship was destroyed. WORF (works console) Sensors show trace elements in the debris that would indicate phaser fire was recently exchanged. PICARD Were you able to salvage anything from the escape pod? Data holds up a small gel-filled capsule. DATA This is all that is left of the pod's computer system. PICARD Can you access it? STAR TREK: "Transfigurations" - REV. 4/3/90 - ACT ONE 7. 6 CONTINUED: DATA It will take time. Downloading it into our system will require fabrication of a matrix translator to emulate the alien's computer system. PICARD Keep me apprised of your progress. DATA Aye, sir. Data moves to the aft science station. 7 EXT. SPACE - THE ENTERPRISE (OPTICAL) in orbit. 8 INT. JOHN'S SICKBAY ROOM (OPTICAL) Two hours later. Doctor Crusher has successfully reattached her patient's arm and high-tech bandages now cover the wound. Beverly looks fatigued. Temple is monitoring some equipment. TEMPLE Limb re-fusion appears to have been successful, Doctor. Tissue oxygenation is within norms. BEVERLY That's all we can do for now. We won't be able to test neuromuscular function for a few days. Geordi ENTERS. GEORDI Can I go now, Doc? Beverly picks up a padd and examines the results of Geordi's examination. BEVERLY No need to keep you here. Your bioscan came out negative. STAR TREK: "Transfigurations" - REV. 3/28/90 - ACT ONE 7A. 8 CONTINUED: GEORDI I could have told you that. I feel great. As Geordi turns to leave, Picard ENTERS. STAR TREK: "Transfigurations" - REV. 3/28/90 - ACT ONE 8. 8 CONTINUED: (2) PICARD (indicating John) How's your patient, Beverly? BEVERLY I never thought he'd make it this far. There was major trauma to the head and chest cavity, massive plasma loss, and severe damage to most of his organs. PICARD What are his chances? BEVERLY I believe he'll live... but I'm afraid I can't take the credit for it. His body is showing amazing recuperative powers. The damaged tissue is repairing itself at a phenomenal rate. (beat) There's only one thing that troubles me. PICARD Go on. BEVERLY Take a look at this. Beverly goes to a wall monitor and taps it. A graphic display of cells undergoing rapid transformation comes up. PICARD Cell regeneration? BEVERLY Yes... the thing is that it has nothing to do with his injuries. These are undamaged cells, but they seem to be mutating. PICARD Any theory as to what's causing it? STAR TREK: "Transfigurations" - REV. 3/30/90 - ACT ONE 9. 8 CONTINUED: (3) BEVERLY (shaking head) No. I've never seen anything like it. It's possible this could be part of his natural healing process. I hope it is... because there's nothing I can do to stop it. On display as the cells rapidly mutate... 9 OMITTED 9A INT. TEN FORWARD (FORMERLY SCENES 17-20) Geordi, Worf, and Data are seated at one of the tables. Geordi and Data are deep in conversation, while Worf looks a little bored. Geordi is holding the storage capsule. GEORDI I'm telling you Data, there's got to be some way to decode the information in this thing. DATA I agree Geordi. But the data matrix within the capsule does not correspond to any standard format. All we have been able to determine is that the device uses a chemically based system for molecular energy encoding. GEORDI Yeah, and the computer still can't analyze the specific chemical elements involved. It's got to be part of the data processing system... (a beat as he thinks) What if it's a feedback loop controller? Data is very interested in this new line of pursuit. DATA The compact shape does suggest a rapid chemical processing and storage capacity. STAR TREK: "Transfigurations" - REV. 3/30/90 - ACT ONE 9A. 9A CONTINUED: GEORDI We found it close to the escape pod instrumentation assemblage... this capsule might process the ship's dynamic motions and augment the manual control inputs. (getting a little excited) We could send it a few test signals... make it think the entire assemblage was awake and operating. DATA An intriguing experiment. The capsule might provide us with information without the need to decode the storage medium itself. Perhaps we could examine your theory immediately. WORF (with usual Klingon intensity) Less talk, more synthehol. (beat) We came here to relax. GEORDI I am relaxed. In fact, I've never felt better. STAR TREK: "Transfigurations" - REV. 3/30/90 - ACT ONE 10. 9A CONTINUED: (2) Geordi turns and waves over a WAITER for another round. As he turns, he sees Christy at the bar talking with a FEMALE CREWPERSON. She sees him and gives him a friendly wave. 9B ON GEORDI His attitude and demeanor are in marked contrast to the first scene with Christy in the Teaser. A smile breaks out on his face and he confidently gets up from the table and starts to head for the bar. GEORDI But you know, Worf you do have a point. (to Data) I think the storage capsule can wait awhile. They watch in surprise as he heads for the bar. 9C NEW ANGLE on Christy and Geordi. Christy has just said good-bye to her friend and is on her way out when Geordi smoothly intercepts her. She is a little surprised by Geordi's change in attitude, but welcomes it. GEORDI Hi. Not leaving, are you? CHRISTY Oh hi, Geordi... I was just on my way down to the arboretum. GEORDI Care for some company? CHRISTY (warm smile) I'd love some. But I didn't think you were interested... in that kind of thing. GEORDI (taking her arm) There are a lot of things you don't know about me. Geordi matches her smile with one of his own and they EXIT arm in arm. STAR TREK: "Transfigurations" - REV. 3/30/90 - ACT ONE 10A. 9D ON WORF AND DATA as they watch Geordi and Christy leave. Worf nods his head in approval. WORF I have been tutoring him. (proudly) He learns quickly. On Data's reaction... 9E EXT. SPACE - THE ENTERPRISE (OPTICAL) Travelling on impulse power. 10 INT. JOHN'S SICKBAY ROOM We see that the patient has been removed from the emergency surgical bed and is now lying on an ordinary sickbay bed. BEVERLY (V.O.) Medical Log, Stardate 43958.8. I have removed patient "John Doe" from the emergency bio-support unit. In just thirty-six hours most of his major organ systems have regenerated themselves to the point where they can now function on their own. Beverly crosses over to John's side. She is leaning against the bed and looking up at a diagnostic monitor... she turns to move away from the bed when suddenly... his arm stabs out and grasps her wrist. Beverly is startled, and whirls around in fear. 10A ANGLE ON JOHN as his eyes open. He looks around in momentary bewilderment... then looks up at Beverly... he breaks into a smile so rich and deep that her fear evaporates and she finds herself smiling back. JOHN (gratified) I am... alive. BEVERLY You certainly are. STAR TREK: "Transfigurations" - REV. 3/27/90 - ACT ONE 11. 10A CONTINUED: JOHN Thank you... for my life. Tell me... who am I? On Beverly's reaction... 11 thru OMITTED 12 FADE OUT. END OF ACT ONE STAR TREK: "Transfigurations" - REV. 3/30/90 - ACT TWO 12. ACT TWO FADE IN: 13 EXT. SPACE - THE ENTERPRISE (OPTICAL) Cruising on impulse power. PICARD (V.O.) Captain's Log: Stardate 43960.6. Our mission to map the Zeta Gelis star cluster is proceeding on schedule. Meanwhile, Doctor Crusher reports that the recovery of the patient she has named John Doe continues at a remarkable pace. 14 INT. JOHN'S SICKBAY ROOM (OPTICAL) The room has several devices designed for physical rehabilitation scattered around it. The circular disc that hangs over the operating table in Sickbay now hangs here and dominates the room. There are a few subtle changes in the disc to suggest small devices and sensors. John is reclining in a chair beneath the disc. Small BEAMS OF LIGHT lance down from the disc and move along John's limbs. Beverly is standing at a nearby console monitoring the therapy. John's attitude is bright, positive. He is vibrant and full of confidence as he goes through his rehabilitation. BEVERLY Are you experiencing any discomfort? JOHN None. I can feel the life returning to my body. BEVERLY (impressed) Your neurofibrowaves are functioning almost normally again. (beat) That puts you... about six weeks ahead of my original schedule. STAR TREK: "Transfigurations" - REV. 3/28/90 - ACT TWO 13. 15 NEW ANGLE (OPTICAL) Beverly works the console and the beams STOP. She picks up some medical bands about the size and shape of dog collars and begins to attach them to John's arms and legs. JOHN (smiling) That should give you and your colleagues something to talk about. BEVERLY You're all we've talked about since your arrival. John is pleased and enthusiastic. JOHN (pleased) I believe I'm ready for the next phase of my treatment. BEVERLY (light) You're right... I think it's time you stopped taking up valuable bedspace. John smiles. BEVERLY Now remember... you've been off your feet for almost a month. These motor assist bands will provide electrical stimulation to your arms and legs. They'll help you re-learn to control your muscles. (beat) Now, don't be disappointed if your mobility is restricted at first... your limbs are still weak. John is clearly excited at the prospect of getting up. Beverly completes the process of attaching the bands and then stands up. She pulls out a tricorder to monitor him. STAR TREK: "Transfigurations" - REV. 3/27/90 - ACT TWO 14. 15 CONTINUED: (2) JOHN I appreciate your concern Doctor. But I think I'm going to surprise you again. I feel strong enough to fly. John slowly gets up. He smiles, glad to be on his feet. He takes a few confident steps and then loses his balance and collapses on the floor. Beverly moves over to him quickly. John smiles ruefully. JOHN But perhaps I should concentrate on walking first. Beverly returns his smile and helps him to his feet. BEVERLY Let's try again. But this time... a little more slowly. JOHN (grins) Much more slowly. John hesitantly begins to walk, stiff-limbed. Beverly close at his side. He totters a moment and has to lean on her for support. John starts to walk again without her help. As he walks, we can see his strength starting to return. John begins to flex his arms and hands... his face shows sheer joy as life returns to his limbs. Beverly is sharing in his infectious joy. 16 NEW ANGLE As Picard ENTERS. Picard, who has met John before, realizes that he is witnessing a key moment in John's recuperation and watches without interrupting. John begins to walk a little too fast once more and loses his balance near Picard, who quickly catches him before he falls. Picard helps John to regain his balance and then lets him go. JOHN I envy your reflexes, Captain. PICARD And I envy your strength of will. Doctor Crusher has kept me informed of your progress. It's quite extraordinary. STAR TREK: "Transfigurations" - REV. 3/28/90 - ACT TWO 15. 16 CONTINUED: JOHN I have an extraordinary doctor. She gave me back my life. I hope that I'm worthy of her efforts. Beverly beams as she and John share a moment of pride over what they've accomplished together. John girds himself and starts walking again. Beverly monitors him closely as he slowly moves around the room. PICARD Tell me John, are you still unable to recall anything at all about your past? At the mention of his past, John's expression clouds. His bright and vibrant personality seems dimmed. JOHN No... my memories begin the moment I woke up in Sickbay. (beat) Doctor Crusher told me... you think I was in some kind of battle. PICARD We're quite certain of that. But you have no idea how you came to be in that escape pod, or what happened to your ship? JOHN (shaking his head) No. Believe me, Captain it's a horrible feeling. Not knowing who you are, where you're from... PICARD (to Beverly) Have you tried synaptic induction? BEVERLY His neural nets don't conform to any known patterns. Conventional neurotherapy has proven ineffective. Hopefully, in time, his memory pathways will reestablish themselves naturally. STAR TREK: "Transfigurations" - REV. 3/28/90 - ACT TWO 16. 16 CONTINUED: (2) Suddenly John puts a hand to his stomach and his face contorts in momentary agony. Beverly moves to him. BEVERLY That same pain again? JOHN (tight) Yes. The pain ends and his features relax. JOHN (with shaky smile) I think I've made enough progress for one day. Beverly is scanning him, but doesn't know what to make of the readings. PICARD (to Beverly) Not a relapse I hope. BEVERLY (concerned) This has nothing to do with his wounds. I think it's related to the continuing mutation of his cell structure. PICARD Still no theory as to what's causing it? BEVERLY (shaking her head) None. I've run every test I could think of... it just doesn't make any sense. JOHN (smiles but troubled) I seem to be a mystery, Doctor. To you... and to myself. On Beverly's concerned reaction... STAR TREK: "Transfigurations" - REV. 4/3/90 - ACT TWO 17. 17 thru OMITTED 20 20A INT.CORRIDOR/TURBOLIFT (FORMERLY SCENE 29) Riker waiting for Turbolift. The doors open and reveal Geordi and Christy kissing inside. Christy pulls away and smiles at Geordi. CHRISTY This is where I get off. See you tonight in Ten Forward? GEORDI I'll be there. Christy heads out into corridor. She smiles at Riker. CHRISTY Hello Commander. RIKER Miss Henshaw. Riker ENTERS the Turbolift. The doors shut. RIKER Bridge. Riker looks a question at Geordi. GEORDI Deck six. RIKER (light, easy) So... you and Miss Henshaw have certainly been seeing a lot of each other. GEORDI Every night this week. RIKER Is that all? Seems like you've been walking around with a smile on your face for a lot longer than that. GEORDI I guess I have. This last month or so... everything seems to be going my way. (MORE) STAR TREK: "Transfigurations" - REV. 3/28/90 - ACT TWO 18. 20A CONTINUED: GEORDI (Cont'd) (beat) I don't know what it is, but something's changed around here. RIKER The only thing that's changed is you. GEORDI Me? I'm the same guy I've always been. RIKER If you say so... but I don't remember the old Geordi having much success with Christy Henshaw. GEORDI Maybe I am a little more confident than I used to be. The doors open and Geordi EXITS. Riker smiles in approval. STAR TREK: "Transfigurations" - REV. 3/28/90 - ACT TWO 19. 21 INT. SICKBAY John is sitting on the operating table with bands on his arms and legs. Beverly is working at a console while John practices flexing and stretching his muscles. The door to Sickbay OPENS and O'BRIEN ENTERS wearing a kayaking outfit. He is holding his shoulder and has a rueful expression on his face. BEVERLY What happened to you? O'BRIEN I was... uh... kayaking on the Holodeck again. Beverly quickly scans his shoulder. BEVERLY And now you've dislocated your shoulder. Sit down, I'll get the osteotractor frame. O'Brien sits down and WESLEY ENTERS. WESLEY Hi mom. We still on for dinner tonight? BEVERLY Seven-thirty sharp. I'll be right back. Beverly EXITS to lab. Wesley sees O'Brien and smiles. WESLEY Kayaking again? O'Brien grunts in pain. Wesley shakes his head. He smiles in greeting to John. They've obviously met before. STAR TREK: "Transfigurations" - REV. 3/27/90 - ACT TWO 20. 21 CONTINUED: WESLEY So how's my mom's favorite patient? JOHN Judge for yourself. John gets off the table and starts to gingerly walk around the room. His movements are confident and sure. WESLEY Hey... not bad. JOHN Your mother promised me a tour of the ship tomorrow. (confidentially) You may find this hard to believe, but Sickbay can be an incredibly boring place. O'BRIEN (toward lab) Hey Doc... I'm dying here. 22 ON JOHN (OPTICAL) John looks at O'Brien... sees his discomfort... a look of gentle compassion comes over his features. John goes over to O'Brien and puts his hand on his injured shoulder just as Beverly ENTERS from the lab in the b.g. JOHN Don't worry my friend... you'll be alright. There is a brief COLOR WASH on O'Brien's shoulder (like the light that hit Geordi in the Teaser). O'Brien is surprised. He moves his arm around experimentally. O'BRIEN (to Beverly) The pain's gone. Beverly pulls out her scanner and runs it over his arm. STAR TREK: "Transfigurations" - REV. 3/27/90 - ACT TWO 21. 22 CONTINUED: BEVERLY (amazed) It's completely healed. I don't understand... what did you do, John? JOHN I... don't know. It was... instinct. (holds out hand) I just... touched him. Beverly reaches out and takes his hand. She looks at it in wonder and then looks up into his face. The look on his face is surprised and bewildered. 23 EXT. SPACE - THE ENTERPRISE (OPTICAL) Cruising along. 24 INT. BEVERLY'S QUARTERS Wesley at the table. He and Beverly have just finished dinner. Beverly is returning to the table with a couple of drinks. She sets the drinks down and then sits. BEVERLY I've run every test and scan that I can think of... there's no physiological evidence that would indicate he would possess such powers. But then, there's so much about John that's a mystery... Wesley takes a drink and thinks for a beat. WESLEY You know... I really like him. BEVERLY (pleased) He does have a certain charm doesn't he? The whole medical staff has commented on it. Wesley studies his mom for a second. He can tell there's more to this than Beverly is letting on. He is genuinely interested in her feelings without being threatened by them. STAR TREK: "Transfigurations" - REV. 3/28/90 - ACT TWO 22. 24 CONTINUED: WESLEY You seem pretty taken with him yourself. BEVERLY I guess I am... taken with him. There's a strength and serenity about him that's very attractive. Yet, he's filled with such pain and turmoil... he's so vulnerable. I find him... very intriguing. WESLEY (with a smile) Sounds like there's more to it than that. BEVERLY Is that your way of asking if I'm getting romantically involved with him? WESLEY You said it, I didn't. Beverly searches to explain her confused feelings. BEVERLY My feelings toward him aren't romantic... exactly. I mean... I know that the... doctor/patient relationship can sometimes create a... false sense of intimacy... but this is different. There's an almost... spiritual connection. (beat) I guess I'm not making much sense, am I? WESLEY (gently) I think I understand. A beat. Beverly is appreciative and touched by Wesley's support. STAR TREK: "Transfigurations" - REV. 3/29/90 - ACT TWO 23. 25 INT. MAIN BRIDGE (OPTICAL) Data is working at the aft science station as Geordi ENTERS the Bridge from the aft Turbolift. He carries the storage capsule in his hand. GEORDI Data, I was thinking about the storage capsule last night. (he places the capsule on to the console) And I was wondering... what if we've been going about it the wrong way. We've been trying to analyze its mechanical properties. What if it is a biochemical storage medium? DATA Are you suggesting that it employes memory RNA like an organic cell? GEORDI Well, it does contain quantities of nucleic acids. DATA Perhaps the information sequences are encoded in the molecular patterns themselves. GEORDI Computer, scan the storage capsule. Analyze molecular sequences on nucleic acid chains. Suddenly the random information on the science screen coalesces into starmap coordinates. GEORDI (triumphant) Well what do you know. A navigational chart. DATA It appears that your hypothesis was correct, Geordi. GEORDI (very pleased) I knew it. (to Picard) Captain? STAR TREK: "Transfigurations" - REV. 3/29/90 - ACT TWO 23A. 25 CONTINUED: Picard comes over. PICARD You found something? DATA We have determined that the storage cube from John Doe's escape pod contains navigational information. PICARD Can you match these stars to our charts? DATA Computer, run transformational matrix calculations. Match navigational referents to known stars in this sector. COMPUTER VOICE Information on this sector is incomplete. No correlation. GEORDI (determined) I'm not giving up yet. Not after coming so close to cracking this thing. (MORE) STAR TREK: "Transfigurations" - REV. 3/29/90 - ACT TWO 24. 25 CONTINUED: GEORDI (Cont'd) (examines screen) That might be flight path information from John's ship, but without a frame of reference, I can't determine the origin points. They all think for a beat. DATA Computer, assume those points are course corrections and derive gravitational values for stellar objects near the flight path. The information on the screen starts to be converted. DATA Most of these are ordinary G-type stars... (indicates point on screen) But this would appear to be a neutron star, possibly a pulsar. GEORDI (indicates markings next to the pulsar) Which means this might be a rotational time reference. DATA Computer, assume these symbols are pulsars. Translate associated values into standard temporal notations. The display changes again. DATA (continuing) Computer, is there a pulsar with a rotational period of... one-point-five-two-four-four seconds within sensor range? COMPUTER VOICE Affirmative. STAR TREK: "Transfigurations" - REV. 3/29/90 - ACT TWO 24A. 25 CONTINUED: (2) GEORDI Bingo! Overlay navigational chart using referenced pulsars and project a flight path back to origin. COMPUTER VOICE Flight path originated at bearing zero-zero-three, mark zero-one-five. Distance, two-point-three parsecs. GEORDI That's it, Captain. That's where John Doe came from. DATA That bearing is almost directly along our planned course. PICARD Good. Then we can continue our mission without significant interruption. As they look at the starchart on the screen... STAR TREK: "Transfigurations" - REV. 3/28/90 - ACT TWO 25. 26 INT. JOHN'S ROOM IN SICKBAY John is shocked. JOHN Home? MOVE to reveal Beverly and Picard in the room. PICARD Yes... using the information we found in your escape pod, we may be able to return you to your people. It takes John a few moments to sort out his feelings. His expression changes for a moment... his words slip out, without conscious thought. JOHN (almost a whisper) I... cannot go back. Picard and Beverly exchange a look. PICARD And why is that? There is a beat as John thinks. Then with a shock of realization... JOHN (certain) You must not take me home, Captain. BEVERLY John, your memory... has it returned? John is trying desperately to remember, but specific memories stay tantalizingly out of reach. STAR TREK: "Transfigurations" - REV. 3/27/90 - ACT TWO 26. 26 CONTINUED: JOHN All I know is that we came out here to escape. PICARD Escape what? BEVERLY There were others with you? JOHN (searching) Yes... I was not... alone. But what happened to the others or what we were escaping from... I cannot remember. (to Picard with passion) But I do know that I cannot go back... not yet. Picard and Beverly are a little taken aback by the conviction and determination of John. PICARD We will not arrive in your star system for at least three weeks. That gives us plenty of time to discuss this matter further. BEVERLY Hopefully by then, you'll have regained more of your memory. JOHN (relieved) You're right of course. I apologize for my outburst, Captain. PICARD It is... understandable. Picard nods and EXITS. Beverly smiles at John with reassurance and then EXITS. John gets up and moves over to a cup of water sitting on a table. STAR TREK: "Transfigurations" - REV. 3/28/90 - ACT TWO 27. 27 ON JOHN (OPTICAL) as he reaches for the cup. He doubles over in more intense pain that we saw earlier... the spasm lasts longer this time. With great effort, he tries to release the pain by sheer will. The pain subsides after a final spasm and a BRIGHT YELLOWISH GLOW moves quickly from his chest to along his arms and then disappears. Hold on John... bewildered and frightened. FADE OUT. END OF ACT TWO STAR TREK: "Transfigurations" - REV. 3/27/90 - ACT THREE 28. ACT THREE FADE IN: 28 INT. TEN FORWARD Beverly and John ENTER. The room is filled with SUPERNUMERARIES... a busy, lively atmosphere. John and Beverly pause near the bar. JOHN This ship is astounding. It seems to stretch on without end. BEVERLY We can see the rest of it some other time. This is your first day out of Sickbay... I don't want you to overexert yourself. JOHN (glancing around) This looks like an ideal place to rest. BEVERLY My thoughts exactly. They walk over to an empty table and sit down. John looks around the room at the activity surrounding them. JOHN Truly remarkable. BEVERLY What is? JOHN These people... they're all so different from one another... yet they work together freely. BEVERLY Is it that surprising? John thinks this over. JOHN It is... new to me. STAR TREK: "Transfigurations" - REV. 3/28/90 - ACT THREE 29. 28 CONTINUED: JOHN (frustrated) My people are different... somehow. If only I could remember! (beat) Yesterday... for one terrifying moment, there was clarity. BEVERLY You mean that energy pulse... ? JOHN Yes. For that moment, my purpose seemed clear... but then it was gone. BEVERLY The pain... the energy pulse... they must all be linked to the cell mutation in your body. (beat) I wish there was some way I could help you get to the truth. John gives her a warm smile. His own pain forgotten... only looking to reassure her. JOHN Thank you... Beverly, you've done so much for me already. I only wish there was some way I could repay you. BEVERLY But you have... John gives her a gentle but questioning look. Beverly is a little embarrassed, yet she feels compelled to tell him her personal feelings. BEVERLY The... friendship... that we've developed has made me... very happy. John thinks this over for a few seconds. They both realize that each has strong feelings towards the other, but both know that they cannot take their relationship any further. STAR TREK: "Transfigurations" - REV. 3/28/90 - ACT THREE 30. 28 CONTINUED: (2) JOHN The rapport that exists between us... also means a great deal to me. (beat with deep conviction) But I believe that I am on some kind of journey. Whatever brought me here... whatever is happening to my body... it's all part of that journey... and I must complete it... before any other consideration. Beverly knows that John is right, but nevertheless there is still that strong attraction between them. A solemn bittersweet moment as they both reflect on what might have been. STAR TREK: "Transfigurations" - REV. 3/28/90 - ACT THREE 31. 29 OMITTED 30 INT. MAIN BRIDGE Data and Worf at their stations, Picard and Riker at Command. STAR TREK: "Transfigurations" - REV. 3/28/90 - ACT THREE 32. 30 CONTINUED: WORF Sir, I am reading a vessel on long-range scanners... it is coming from sector nine five six nine. PICARD What configuration? WORF Impossible to identify at this distance. However, it is on an intercept course. DATA Captain, the ship is traveling at warp nine point seven two. RIKER Nine point seven two? PICARD Time to intercept? DATA At present course and speed... ten hours fifty-three minutes. PICARD Try to hail them, Mister Worf. A beat as Worf works his console. WORF No response, Captain. Picard is a little disturbed by this. PICARD Monitor their approach... repeat hail every half hour. WORF Aye sir. RIKER Whoever they are, they're in a big hurry to get here. Picard and Riker exchange a look... who is out there? STAR TREK: "Transfigurations" - REV. 3/28/90 - ACT THREE 33. 31 INT. JOHN'S SICKBAY ROOM John is reading about Federation history on a computer terminal. Suddenly a spasm of pain shoots through his body, doubling him over in agony. 32 CLOSE ON MEDICAL MONITOR (OPTICAL) The screen is monitoring the lifesigns of John, when a RED WARNING LIGHT comes on along with a BEEPING SOUND. 33 INT. JOHN'S SICKBAY ROOM (OPTICAL) The doors open and Nurse Temple ENTERS. She goes over to John, who is clearly in torment. TEMPLE (hits combadge) Doctor Crusher, medical emergency, room four. JOHN (struggling) Can't... make it... stop... Beverly RUSHES IN with a tricorder and goes to John. BEVERLY (scanning him) John tell me... is it worse than before? JOHN Much... worse. TEMPLE Should I get something for the pain? BEVERLY (reading tricorder) No. The readings are fluctuating too wildly... it wouldn't do any good, his entire cell structure... is transforming. His face contorts and he grabs her arm. JOHN Beverly! I have to... leave! STAR TREK: "Transfigurations" - REV. 3/30/90 - ACT THREE 34. 33 CONTINUED: BEVERLY Where do you want to go? JOHN I must... get off... this ship. BEVERLY John, that's impossible. In your condition--- John moves away from her and backs towards the door. JOHN I must... ! A brief GLOW OF YELLOWISH LIGHT emanates from his chest again, this time the effect is a little longer and the light is more intense. It startles Beverly and the Nurse. The glow subsides and a look of determination comes over his face. John bolts OUT THE DOOR. 34 INT. SICKBAY/CORRIDOR Moving with Beverly as she follows John. He goes into the corridor and Beverly stops in the doorway. She hesitates for a moment. She doesn't want to do anything to hurt John, but realizes her duty to the ship outweighs her personal feelings. She hits her combadge. BEVERLY Security... STAR TREK: "Transfigurations" - REV. 3/30/90 - ACT THREE 34A. 35 thru OMITTED 36 37 INT. SHUTTLE BAY CONTROL BOOTH Looking down into the shuttle bay. TWO SHUTTLE TECHNICIANS are working on a shuttlecraft along with Geordi. He steps back from the shuttle. STAR TREK: "Transfigurations" - REV. 3/30/90 - ACT THREE 35. 37 CONTINUED: GEORDI (to technicians) Okay, let's realign the magnetic inducers on the starboard nacelle. 38 NEW ANGLE looking out from the control booth, along the catwalk toward the door. The door opens and John ENTERS. He hesitates a moment, gets his bearings... looks down and sees the shuttlecraft... then heads for the control booth. 39 ON CONTROL BOOTH (OPTICAL) John goes into the booth, GLOWS again. 40 INT. CONTROL BOOTH John trying to figure out how to open shuttle bay doors... 41 INT. SHUTTLE BAY Worf, SECURITY TEAM, and Beverly ENTER the bay on the main level. They see John up in the booth. BEVERLY John! WORF Leave the control booth immediately! John continues to work the console. The HANGAR DOOR STARTS TO OPEN. 41A INT. SHUTTLE BAY (OPTICAL) as shuttle bay doors open. STAR TREK: "Transfigurations" - REV. 3/30/90 - ACT THREE 36. 42 MOVING WITH WORF as he goes back out into the corridor and ENTERS the Turbolift. 43 ON BEVERLY BEVERLY John! Listen to me! You must come down! 44 ON BOOTH AND CATWALK (OPTICAL) as Worf ENTERS from the door and moves carefully along catwalk toward booth. His phaser is drawn. WORF Step away from the controls. John is confused and frightened. He steps out of the booth towards Worf. JOHN Get back! Please... stay away! WORF I have no wish to harm you... but you must return to Sickbay immediately. Worf moves closer... trying to calm him. JOHN No! Do not come any closer! I have no control over what's happening to me. John is convulsed with pain... he crumples (no flare yet). Worf goes over to him and as he bends over him, John suddenly PULSES BRIEFLY INTO A FLARE. John returns almost immediately to humanoid form, but Worf is knocked over the railing and falls to the deck below. 45 ON WORF as he lands with a sickening thud. STAR TREK: "Transfigurations" - REV. 3/28/90 - ACT THREE 37. 46 ON JOHN He looks down and sees Worf... a horrified expression on his face. 47 NEW ANGLE as Beverly and the Security Team cluster around Worf. Beverly examines him. BEVERLY His neck is broken. No life signs. (hits combadge) Sickbay, form a resuscitation team, we have a code seven in shuttle bay two. Transporter room, standby... Beverly senses another presence in the room and she turns around. The others turn with her... 48 NEW ANGLE (OPTICAL) revealing John in the doorway to the shuttle bay... a look of compassion and pity on his face. He begins to move towards them... the Security team start to draw their phasers, but Beverly stops them. BEVERLY No... don't. The team hesitates... they move back warily. John continues over to Worf. Beverly searches his face to confirm her hope... there is a look of peaceful confidence on his face. He kneels down by Worf and slowly reaches out... and touches Worf's neck. The same COLOR WASH seen when John touched O'Brien now emanates from John's hand. A long beat... then Worf's eyes open. An audible gasp from the on-lookers. Worf's face shows his surprise... he's unsure of what has just happened. 49 NEW ANGLE Beverly scans Worf. BEVERLY There's no trace of injury. STAR TREK: "Transfigurations" - REV. 3/30/90 - ACT THREE 37A. 49A CLOSE ON GEORDI as he looks at John and realizes the extent of John's powers. He becomes aware of the effect John has had on him. 49B BACK TO SCENE Beverly looks at John with awe. He smiles... and for that moment he is serene and at peace with himself. All eyes on John as he helps Worf to his feet. On their reactions... FADE OUT. END OF ACT THREE STAR TREK: "Transfigurations" - REV. 3/28/90 - ACT FOUR 38. ACT FOUR FADE IN: 50 EXT. SPACE - THE ENTERPRISE (OPTICAL) Travelling at impulse. 51 INT. CAPTAIN'S READY ROOM Picard, Beverly, and John. Picard at his desk, his expression grim. Beverly watches with concern and compassion. PICARD You admit you were trying to steal a shuttlecraft. JOHN Yes. PICARD So I ask you again -- why? JOHN I don't know! PICARD Unacceptable. You had a reason -- I want to know what it was. No response from John. PICARD (cont'd) (sharply) Dammit, I'm entitled to an answer. You nearly killed a member of my crew. BEVERLY (defending) And healed him. PICARD I am not forgetting that. It's the only reason he's here, and not in the brig. JOHN I warned him... told him it was dangerous. STAR TREK: "Transfigurations" - REV. 3/27/90 - ACT FOUR 39. 51 CONTINUED: Picard leaps on that small admission. PICARD Why? Why is it dangerous? What is happening to you? JOHN (wearily) I don't know. Beverly responds to his pain and turmoil. She stands, runs a tricorder scan. BEVERLY The rate of metamorphosis is accelerating. Almost as if your body were generating an electrical field that's warping the tissue. (in answer to Picard's look) I can't explain what I don't understand. PICARD (frustrated and worried) Who are you? What are you? JOHN I am afraid... for myself... for all of you. I have to get away... isolate myself. Whatever is happening to me, it's dangerous. PICARD As Lieutenant Worf discovered. JOHN I don't want to hurt anyone. (a beat) Captain, for the sake of your crew, let me go before it happens again. BEVERLY John, I can't believe you're capable of harming any -- STAR TREK: "Transfigurations" - REV. 3/29/90 - ACT FOUR 40. 51 CONTINUED: (2) They are interrupted by a call from the Bridge. DATA'S COM VOICE Captain, the alien vessel is coming within weapons range. Its shields are up. PICARD On my way. (to Beverly and John) Take him back to Sickbay. I want him under constant surveillance. They all EXIT. 52 INT. MAIN BRIDGE Picard emerges from the Ready Room, followed by Beverly and John. As Picard goes to his chair, Geordi approaches John still near the door to the Ready Room. Geordi hesitates before speaking -- a hesitation born from admiration and wonder, not fear. GEORDI I want to thank you. JOHN For what? GEORDI I don't know how -- or why -- but down on the planet, you gave me something... a new confidence. John smiles. JOHN I doubt I can take credit for that... Perhaps I only helped you find something you already had. Geordi reacts... STAR TREK: "Transfigurations" - REV. 3/29/90 - ACT FOUR 41. 53 NEW ANGLE (OPTICAL) as Picard takes his seat, looks at the Main Viewer. On it is an alien spaceship -- very sleek, very military. DATA Alien vessel approaching at half-impulse, heading zero-five-one mark one-one-four. PICARD Raise shields. Slow to one-third impulse and bring us to one-zero-three mark zero-two-five. Mister Worf, hail the alien vessel. WORF They continue to ignore our hails, sir. Data reacts to a readout on his panel. DATA They are scanning us, Captain. John steps up to Picard and Beverly, his eyes on the Main Viewer. 54 WIDER as Picard notices John's cold, hard-edged expression; it's the expression John gets when thinking of his past. Picard gives John a look -- "do you recognize that ship? John shrugs helplessly -- he doesn't know. Worf works his panel: WORF They are answering our hail, Captain. PICARD On screen. 55 ANGLE TO INCLUDE THE MAIN VIEWER (OPTICAL) The image of the approaching ship is replaced with SUNAD, an imposing Zalkonian humanoid physiologically similar to John but whose attire and demeanor is much more military, more aggressive, almost Draconian. STAR TREK: "Transfigurations" - REV. 3/29/90 - ACT FOUR 42. 55 CONTINUED: Sunad sees John, glares at him with hostility. John reacts to the sight of Sunad; Picard picks up on it: PICARD You know him? JOHN Yes... I don't know how, but... (a beat) He's dangerous... Picard nods and steps up toward the Viewer. SUNAD I am Commander Sunad, of Zalkon. You are trespassing into our space... and you are holding a Zalkonian citizen. Troi, standing near Picard, studies John's reaction to Sunad almost as intently as she studies Sunad. John appears confused, showing a mixture of fear and contempt. PICARD I am Captain Jean-Luc Picard, of the United Federation of Planets. We intend no transgression of -- Sunad, still eyeing John with loathing, interrupts: SUNAD You will return him to us immediately. Picard looks at John. John shakes his head -- he doesn't want to go. PICARD (re: John) Sunad -- this individual is our guest. We found him dying in a shipwreck and returned him to health. But Sunad is unappreciative: SUNAD Then you have aided a criminal. STAR TREK: "Transfigurations" - REV. 3/29/90 - ACT FOUR 43. 55 CONTINUED: (2) This is all new information to John -- yet he doesn't deny it. SUNAD (cont'd) He is one of four escaped prisoners. We eliminated the other three. John's expression betrays a flash of pain and anger. SUNAD (cont'd) We thought this one dead as well. Return him so we may complete our task. PICARD Of what is he accused? SUNAD He is a disruptive influence. He spreads lies... encourages dissent... disturbs the natural order of our society. PICARD In what way? SUNAD That is not your concern. (a beat) I will give you two hours to comply. Sunad ends his transmission as his image disappears, replaced with a view of the Zalkonian ship. 56 NEW ANGLE as Riker turns to Worf. RIKER Tactical analysis. WORF The Zalkonian ship has a formidable armament. Their weaponry is comparable to ours. STAR TREK: "Transfigurations" - REV. 3/29/90 - ACT FOUR 44. 56 CONTINUED: GEORDI They're just as fast -- and probably just as maneuverable. PICARD Counselor. Do they mean to carry out their threat? TROI I believe so. Sunad's hatred for John was evident... but there's something else. The Zalkonians fear John. Picard contemplates all this. After a beat, he heads for the Observation Lounge. PICARD Commander Riker, Counselor, Doctor. John, I'd like you to join us. Riker, Troi, Beverly, and John follow Picard. PICARD (cont'd) Mister Data, you have the Bridge. Mister Worf -- stay at Tactical. Counter any moves the Zalkonian makes. WORF Aye, sir. 57 INT. OBSERVATION LOUNGE Picard, Riker, Troi, Beverly, John. John is distressed, straining with all his might to be of help, to remember. JOHN I can neither confirm nor deny what the Zalkonians told you. Picard's expression gives no indication of whether he believes John or not. PICARD They make serious accusations against you... STAR TREK: "Transfigurations" - REV. 3/29/90 - ACT FOUR 45. 57 CONTINUED: JOHN Their accusations may be true. I don't know. I don't believe I am a criminal... PICARD You understand the difficult position in which I'm placed. Meaning Picard may have to turn John over. John locks eyes with Picard -- he understands. JOHN Completely. And I refuse to place your ship in danger. If necessary, I'll surrender to them. (a beat) But I'm convinced there's more at stake here than my life... there's something... important I must complete... my survival is vital. John realizes how vague that sounds; he's frustrated he can't be more specific. JOHN (cont'd) If I could explain it, I would... After a beat, Picard nods. PICARD I'll inform you of my decision shortly. It's a dismissal; John EXITS. Once he's gone: BEVERLY Captain, you can't seriously be considering -- PICARD (sharply) We must consider all options, Doctor, without letting our personal feelings impede our judgment. BEVERLY You're going to tell me it's irrelevant that we'd be sending him to his death... STAR TREK: "Transfigurations" - REV. 3/29/90 - ACT FOUR 46. 57 CONTINUED: (2) PICARD Exactly. Whether we approve of the Zalkonians' motives is not at issue. (a beat) For what it's worth, I suspect John may be correct that his existence has broader ramifications than that of a simple criminal. TROI Sunad thinks so. He feels personally threatened by John. BEVERLY (agreeing) Sunad called John a "disruptive influence." That's hardly a capital offense -- PICARD It is not up to us to judge their laws, Doctor. RIKER I know how I'd feel if the situation were reversed... if they were in our territory, holding a Federation citizen. TROI (nods) The Zalkonians truly don't understand our indecision about returning John. In their eyes, we shouldn't be involved. STAR TREK: "Transfigurations" - REV. 3/30/90 - ACT FOUR 47-48. 57 CONTINUED: (3) BEVERLY We are involved. I saved his life. For what? So they could chase him down and take that life away? Picard sees the worth of Beverly's arguments... but his hands may be tied... 57A EXT. SPACE - THE ENTERPRISE (OPTICAL) facing the Zalkonian ship. 58 OMITTED FADE OUT. END OF ACT FOUR STAR TREK: "Transfigurations" - REV. 3/28/90 - ACT FIVE 49. ACT FIVE FADE IN: 59 EXT. SPACE - THE ENTERPRISE (OPTICAL) and the Zalkonian ship. 60 OMITTED 61 INT. MAIN BRIDGE (OPTICAL) On the Main Viewer, Sunad stares down at Picard. Riker, Worf, and Data man their stations. SUNAD Picard -- we will not tolerate more delays. PICARD Commander, let me remind you we are on a mission of exploration... our purpose is to establish peaceful relations with the civilizations we encounter. SUNAD We do not want relations with you. PICARD If that is your wish -- we will respect it. SUNAD We simply want you to leave Zalkonian space as soon as you return the criminal. PICARD Commander, we will leave. It is not our policy to intervene in the affairs of other cultures. STAR TREK: "Transfigurations" - REV. 3/29/90 - ACT FIVE 50. 61 CONTINUED: Picard moves closer to the viewer -- time to say what he has to say. PICARD (cont'd) But before I return the survivor to you, I would appreciate a more detailed explanation of what he has done to merit a death sentence. SUNAD (bristling again) As I said -- it is not your concern. PICARD Agreed. However, there are circumstances of which you may be unaware. The survivor has suffered a memory loss -- he is, therefore, ill-equipped to defend himself against your accusations. SUNAD (getting angry) There is no defense. Our judgment is final. PICARD Since his recovery, he has manifested unusual abilities -- Sunad reacts, fearing the worst. SUNAD What kind of abilities? PICARD He apparently has the power to heal injuries with a simple touch... SUNAD (more and more agitated) Lies! STAR TREK: "Transfigurations" - REV. 3/29/90 - ACT FIVE 51. 61 CONTINUED: (2) PICARD -- and even to reverse death itself -- SUNAD (a shout) Obviously he has corrupted you as well. I see I am wasting my time -- Sunad nods to a subordinate offscreen. Before Picard can respond, he finds himself unable to breathe -- it's as if an invisible hand has him by the windpipe. 62 NEW ANGLE Everyone on the bridge is affected by the throat constriction. Worf manages to gasp out: WORF Shields ineffective... Picard struggles to speak, but his words are inaudible. Worf falls to his knees. Off Data's reaction (among those on the Bridge, he alone is unaffected by the throat constriction) -- 63 INT. MAIN ENGINEERING Geordi and two SUPERNUMERARIES working their stations are overwhelmed by the throat constriction. 64 OMITTED 65 INT. SICKBAY -- PRIVATE ROOM Beverly is on the ground, gasping for breath. BEVERLY I can't... breathe... STAR TREK: "Transfigurations" - REV. 4/1/90 - ACT FIVE 52. 65 CONTINUED: John rushes to her side. Though he's unaffected by the throat constriction, the sight of Beverly in trouble is almost too much for him. 66 ON JOHN (OPTICAL) John touches Beverly -- and a COLOR WASH flows from his hands through Beverly's body. As the COLOR WASH envelops Beverly, her throat constriction vanishes. John looks at his glowing hands. Realization sinks in -- his memory returns. John's attitude changes: gone from his eyes are the doubts and the confusion; replaced with a strength and a self assurance that comes from clarity of purpose. 67 ANGLE ON BEVERLY looking at John with wonder and surprise. 68 ON JOHN as he quickly rises to his feet. JOHN It's come back to me, Beverly... I know who I am -- what I am. Beverly reacts as John leads her out of Sickbay. 69 INT. CORRIDOR NEAR TURBOLIFT (OPTICAL) A CREWMAN lies on the ground, choking. Beverly and John ENTER. Beverly scans the crewman with her tricorder. John bends over the crewman and touches him. The same COLOR WASH shimmers through the crewman's body -- and the choking is gone. Beverly looks at John with ever-increasing awe. STAR TREK: "Transfigurations" - REV. 4/1/90 - ACT FIVE 53. 69A ON JOHN (OPTICAL) who moves away from the crewman and touches a wall panel. A COLOR WASH moves from his hands to the panel, spreads rapidly to evelop the corridor, keeps spreading... (70 thru 72 OMITTED) 73 EXT. SPACE - THE ENTERPRISE (OPTICAL) as the COLOR WASH permeates first the saucer section and then the entire ship, covering and protecting it. 74 INT. MAIN BRIDGE gone are the crippling effects of the Zalkonian attack. Picard (with Data's assistance), Riker, Worf, and the supernumeraries slowly get to their feet, unharmed, as John and Beverly ENTER from the Turbolift. 75 ANGLE ON JOHN (OPTICAL) A quick glance tells John that his efforts to save the crew have been successful. He moves to the center of the Bridge, faces the Main Viewer with an air of quiet command. On the Viewer, Sunad reacts -- the calm self assurance in John's manner frightens him, but he acts tough in a vain attempt to hide his terror. He barks orders to someone o.s.: SUNAD Ready all weapons. JOHN That will be futile. You will no longer harm these people, Sunad. STAR TREK: "Transfigurations" - REV. 3/29/90 - ACT FIVE 54. 75 CONTINUED: SUNAD (trying to ignore him) Fire upon that ship... John reaches toward the Main Viewer. A quick GLOW from John's hand -- 76 NEW ANGLE (OPTICAL) -- and suddenly Sunad is standing on the Bridge. Picard, Riker, Data, Worf, and Beverly react; Picard raises a hand to signal the Bridge crew not to interfere. John turns to face Sunad, who cowers. JOHN I won't hurt you. SUNAD (to Picard) Kill him, Captain -- he's evil... John sadly shakes his head, indicates Picard and the Bridge crew. JOHN You could learn from these people, Sunad. They don't fear me. SUNAD They don't realize how dangerous you are -- you and the others like you... JOHN That's what you and the other leaders have maintained for generations. But it's a lie. John turns to Picard and Beverly: JOHN (cont'd) Captain -- my species is on the verge of a wondrous evolutionary change... a transmutation beyond our physical being. I am the first of my kind to approach that metamorphosis. (MORE) STAR TREK: "Transfigurations" - REV. 3/29/90 - ACT FIVE 55. 76 CONTINUED: JOHN (Cont'd) They tried to convince us it was a sickness we'd never survive... that the pain and energy pulses would kill us. They claimed we were dangerous... so they destroyed anyone who exhibited signs of the transfiguration. SUNAD We were protecting our society... JOHN By murdering us? (shakes his head) You saw the mutations as a threat to your authority... you were terrified of something you couldn't understand. Sunad doesn't reply. JOHN (cont'd) (to Picard) Some suspected that what was happening to them was not evil. Four of us decided to flee Zalkon and let the metamorphosis take its course. (MORE) STAR TREK: "Transfigurations" - REV. 3/29/90 - ACT FIVE 56. 76 CONTINUED: (2) JOHN (Cont'd) (to Sunad) You hunted us down... killed the others. But I survived... (a look to Beverly) ... with the help of a kind and friendly people. 77 ANGLE ON JOHN (OPTICAL) as he TRANSFORMS -- and his body begins to GLOW in a hundred colors. John takes a step toward Sunad, who backs up. JOHN There is nothing to fear. You can join me. All Zalkonians can. Let me show you. John reaches out a hand to Sunad, who recoils. SUNAD Don't touch me! JOHN As you wish. But others will listen... now that you can no longer prevent me from telling them the truth. Those who are willing will follow me. John waves a hand -- and suddenly Sunad is no longer on our Bridge. WORF (reading his panel) Sunad is back aboard the Zalkonian vessel, Captain... On the Main Viewer, the Zalkonian ship departs. STAR TREK: "Transfigurations" - REV. 3/29/90 - ACT FIVE 57. 78 NEW ANGLE (OPTICAL) John approaches Picard. JOHN Captain... my people are about to embark upon a new realm, a new plane of existence... thanks to you. PICARD It is our mission to seek out life... in all its forms. We are privileged to have been present at the emergence of a new species. John crosses to Beverly. JOHN You gave me life... and more. I don't have the words for my gratitude... nor my sorrow at leaving you. They share a private, bittersweet moment. Then John begins to SHIMMER... becoming more and more incorporeal... 79 ON JOHN (OPTICAL) as his body dissolves completely into a GLOWING LIGHT... 80 EXT. SPACE - THE ENTERPRISE (OPTICAL) as a BEAM OF LIGHT emerges from the top of the saucer section, streaks off into the distance -- and disappears. 81 OMITTED FADE OUT. END OF ACT FIVE THE END STAR TREK: THE NEXT GENERATION "The Best of Both Worlds, Part I" #40273-174 Written by Michael Piller Directed by Cliff Bole THE WRITING CREDITS MAY NOT BE FINAL AND SHOULD NOT BE USED FOR PUBLICITY OR ADVERTISING PURPOSES WITHOUT FIRST CHECKING WITH THE TELEVISION LEGAL DEPARTMENT. Copyright 1990 Paramount Pictures Corporation. All Rights Reserved. This script is not for publication or reproduction. No one is authorized to dispose of same. If lost or destroyed, please notify the Script Department. FINAL DRAFT APRIL 6, 1990 STAR TREK: "Best of Both Worlds" - REV. 4/6/90 - CAST STAR TREK: THE NEXT GENERATION "The Best of Both Worlds" CAST PICARD ADMIRAL HANSON RIKER LT. COMMANDER SHELBY DATA BORG LEADER BEVERLY PICARD/BORG TROI GEORDI WORF WESLEY Non-Speaking SEVERAL BORG GUINAN O'BRIEN Non-Speaking SUPERNUMERARIES TECHNICIAN STAR TREK: "Best of Both Worlds" - REV. 4/6/90 - SETS STAR TREK: THE NEXT GENERATION "The Best of Both Worlds" SETS INTERIORS EXTERIORS USS ENTERPRISE USS ENTERPRISE MAIN BRIDGE CAPTAIN'S READY ROOM JOURET FOUR SURFACE OBSERVATION LOUNGE TURBOLIFT BORG SHIP CORRIDOR TRANSPORTER ROOM TEN-FORWARD MAIN ENGINEERING PICARD'S QUARTERS RIKER'S QUARTERS SHELBY'S QUARTERS BORG SHIP INTERIOR CHAMBER STAR TREK: "Best of Both Worlds" - REV. 4/6/90 - TEASER 1. STAR TREK: THE NEXT GENERATION "The Best of Both Worlds" TEASER FADE IN: 1 EXT. SPACE - THE ENTERPRISE (OPTICAL) Leaving warp as it approaches a planet. PICARD (V.O.) Captain's log, Stardate 43994.1. The Enterprise has arrived at Jouret Four in response to a distress signal from one of the Federation's outermost colonies. 2 INT. TRANSPORTER ROOM (OPTICAL) Riker enters, meets Geordi, Data and Worf. O'Brien at the console. RIKER (to Worf) Anything from the surface? WORF Nossir. There have been no communications from the colony for over twelve hours. RIKER Sensors picking up any signs of life? WORF None. Riker frowns. Anticipating the question -- O'BRIEN The surface environment is safe for transport, Commander. Riker acknowledges as they move into transport position... he nods to the technician and they DEMATERIALIZE. STAR TREK: "Best of Both Worlds" - REV. 4/6/90 - TEASER 2. 3 EXT. PLANET SURFACE - DAY Fairly close so we have no clear bearings yet... the away team reacts to what they see... pulling back slowly. RIKER (keying insignia) Mister O'Brien, verify these are accurate coordinates for New Providence colony. O'BRIEN'S COM VOICE Coordinates verified, sir. You're at the center of town. 4 EXT. PLANET SURFACE - WIDE - DAY (MATTE SHOT) To see the away team is standing on an empty site... where the colony should be, there is now a shallow depression... as though it has been scooped out and taken away. FADE OUT. END OF TEASER STAR TREK: "Best of Both Worlds" - REV. 4/6/90 - ACT ONE 3. ACT ONE FADE IN: 5 EXT. SPACE - THE ENTERPRISE (OPTICAL) In orbit. Another starship, transport class, has joined them. PICARD (V.O.) Captain's log, Stardate 43997.6. Admiral Hanson and Lieutenant Commander Shelby of Starfleet Tactical have arrived to review the disappearance of New Providence colony. No sign remains of the nine hundred inhabitants. 6 INT. CAPT. READY ROOM Picard, Riker, Hanson -- fifties, high ranking, hard driving -- and Shelby. She is late twenties, very beautiful, energetic, extremely motivated and ambitious. The mood is somber. HANSON The truth is... hell, we're not ready. We've known they were coming for over a year... we've thrown every resource we've got into this but still... RIKER Then, you're convinced it is the Borg... ? SHELBY That's what I'm here to find out. The initial descriptions of these surface conditions are almost identical to your reports from system J-two-five. PICARD (acknowledges) Mister Riker wrote those reports... he agrees with you. STAR TREK: "Best of Both Worlds" - REV. 4/6/90 - ACT ONE 4. 6 CONTINUED: HANSON (setting protocol) Commander Shelby took over Borg tactical analysis six months ago. I've learned to give her a wide latitude when I want to get things done... That's how I intend to operate here. It is clear that she's in charge as far as the admiral is concerned. SHELBY My priority has been to develop some kind, any kind of defense strategy... RIKER Obviously nothing we have now can stop them. SHELBY (acknowledges) We've been designing new weapons... but they're still on the drawing board. HANSON We expected much more lead time. Your encounter with the Borg was over seven thousand light years away... PICARD If this is the Borg, it would indicate they have a source of power far superior to our own... SHELBY I'd like to see the colony site as soon as possible, Captain. RIKER It'll be night at the site in thirty minutes. We've scheduled an away team for dawn. PICARD (to Riker) Why don't you show the commander to her quarters... STAR TREK: "Best of Both Worlds" - REV. 4/6/90 - ACT ONE 5. 6 CONTINUED: (2) Riker rises to escort her to the door... RIKER It's our poker night, Admiral. There's always an open seat for you... HANSON (would love to, but... ) Next time, Commander. Your captain and I have a lot to cover. But rumor has it that Commander Shelby's played a hand or two... Riker reacts, exchanges a look with Shelby who grins as they EXIT. Hanson smiles. After the door closes... HANSON Keep your eye on her, Jean-Luc. One impressive young lady... Picard grins, obviously has a special affection for this particular admiral. PICARD You seem rather taken with her, J.P. HANSON Just an old man's fantasies. When Shelby came into tactical, every damned admiral's uncle had a take on this Borg business... she cut through it, put us on track. Picard moves to a teapot, pouring... PICARD Earl Grey? HANSON Four sugars. (beat) She'd make you a hell of a first officer. Picard raises an eyebrow... PICARD I already have a hell of a first officer. STAR TREK: "Best of Both Worlds" - REV. 4/6/90 - ACT ONE 6. 6 CONTINUED: (3) HANSON Don't tell me he's gonna pass up another commission? PICARD One's available? HANSON The Melbourne. It's his if he wants it. Hasn't he told you? Picard sighs, shakes his head, no... resigned to the inevitable. PICARD Well, I guess I knew this day would have to come... he'll make a fine captain, J.P. HANSON You may want to tell him that. (off Picard's look) We're still waiting for his decision. Hell, this is the third time we've pulled out the captain's chair for Riker. He just won't sit down. And I'll tell you something -- there are a lot of young hotshots like Shelby on their way up. Riker could suddenly look like he's standing still next to them. He's hurting his career by staying put. If I were you, I'd kick him in the rear end for his own good. As he drinks again, Picard reacts and... 7 INT. CORRIDOR Riker moving with Shelby. SHELBY We know the Borg have no interest in power or political conquest... RIKER (acknowledges) They identify what's useful to them, then consume it. Or try to at least... STAR TREK: "Best of Both Worlds" - REV. 4/6/90 - ACT ONE 7. 7 CONTINUED: At her quarters, they pause... SHELBY But here's the question -- after they take what they want... what happens to the rest? (off his look) There has to be some evidence... residue... something that tells us they've been here. 8 INT. SHELBY'S QUARTERS - CONTINUOUS As the door slides open and they ENTER. SHELBY I don't know exactly what I'm looking for... but we've tested the sections of the Enterprise's hull that were damaged by the Borg. There were some unusual magnetic-resonance traces... RIKER A Borg footprint? SHELBY That's my theory. I'll see if it holds up tomorrow. (beat) I've reviewed your personnel... I'll be assigning Mister La Forge and Mister Data to accompany me on the away team... Riker barely reacts... isn't prepared to allow her to make crew assignments... RIKER I've... already assigned them to the away team, Commander. And I'll be with you as well. A quick awkwardness. SHELBY (smiles) Of course. I appreciate any assistance you can offer. She measures him for a beat. Examining the quarters--- STAR TREK: "Best of Both Worlds" - REV. 4/6/90 - ACT ONE 8. 8 CONTINUED: SHELBY Tell me, something, Commander... is serving aboard the Enterprise as extraordinary an experience as I've heard? RIKER Every bit of it. SHELBY Good. (intimately sharing a secret) Because I intend to convince Captain Picard that I'm the right choice for the job. RIKER (beat) Job? Which job... ? SHELBY Yours, of course. (off his look, "embarrassed") I'm sorry... I heard you were leaving. And she's very good -- it could be taken as an innocent faux pas by a lesser man, but Riker knows a fishing expedition when he sees one... their eyes connect, he won't bite... RIKER If I am... I'm sure you'll be the first to know, Commander. (beat) Poker's at seventeen hundred hours, my quarters, deck eight... He EXITS. Hold just a beat on her reaction and... 8A INT. RIKER'S QUARTERS - POKER TABLE Troi is the dealer, Wesley, Geordi, Riker, Data, Shelby... five card stud... four cards have been dealt. DATA I will buy another card, Counselor. STAR TREK: "Best of Both Worlds" - REV. 4/6/90 - ACT ONE 9. 8A CONTINUED: Throws a pair of chips in... WESLEY Got another king in the hole, Data? DATA I am afraid I cannot answer that Wesley. And as you are a newcomer to the game, may I say it is inappropriate to ask. Troi deals Data his last card. TROI No help there. GEORDI (bad night) Fold. Again. WESLEY I'm in. Throws in his chips. His card is a third jack. TROI Three jacks looking back for the handsome young ensign. Reactions around the table. Data folds. GEORDI Beginner's luck. Shelby puts her chips out... gets a worthless card. TROI Pair of deuces stands. Riker throws in his chips... gets a card that continues his straight flush... reactions. TROI Possible flush, possible straight flush. The bet is yours, Mister Crusher. Wes looks nervously at Riker. WESLEY I'm in for ten... STAR TREK: "Best of Both Worlds" - REV. 4/9/90 - ACT ONE 10. 8A CONTINUED: (2) He throws in a pair of chips. Shelby studies Wesley carefully... and then throws in her two chips to stay in. But the tension is clearly between Riker and Wesley. Riker gives him his best poker face. RIKER (to Wesley) Time to put on the long pants, Wes. I'll see your ten. And raise you a hundred. GEORDI He's got the straight flush. DATA Not necessarily. Commander Riker may be bluffing, Wesley. Wes studies Riker's face. Breaks... WESLEY I don't think so. I fold. GEORDI (groans) With three jacks? (shakes his head) Wesley, you may get straight A's in school, but you've still got a little to learn about poker... And so the attention turns to Shelby... who looks at Riker and they look at each other and after a long look beat... SHELBY I've only got two pair, Commander. But I've got to see that blind card. I'll call. She puts in her chips. Riker blinks... looks down at his card... turns it over. It busts his straight flush. He's bluffing. Reactions. Wesley groans, hangs his head. GEORDI (delighted) You got him! Riker and Shelby's eyes meet. She collects the winnings. STAR TREK: "Best of Both Worlds" - REV. 4/6/90 - ACT ONE 11. 9 OMITTED 10 EXT. SPACE - THE ENTERPRISE (OPTICAL) In orbit. The other ship alongside. 11 INT. TRANSPORTER ROOM O'Brien at the controls as Riker and Geordi arrive together... Geordi carrying a work kit... RIKER Mister Data and our guest appear to be tardy... O'BRIEN Sir, Commander Shelby and Data beamed down to the planet surface an hour ago... RIKER (reacts, angry) On whose authority? O'BRIEN (blinks) On... hers, sir. Riker exchanges a look with Geordi as they get in position on the transporter... 12 EXT. PLANET SURFACE - DAWN (OPTICAL) Shelby and Data are examining exposed rock strata with their tricorders as Riker and Geordi MATERIALIZE. SHELBY Morning. Early bird gets the worm, eh? We've had some interesting results... RIKER (interrupting, burning) Commander Shelby... (he pauses, will not do this in front of the other officers) Walk with me, Commander. It is an order. She obeys. Geordi and Data exchange a look... STAR TREK: "Best of Both Worlds" - REV. 4/6/90 - ACT ONE 12. 12 CONTINUED: DATA I believe Commander Shelby erred... there are no known avifaunal or crawling vermicular lifeforms on Jouret Four. GEORDI That's... not what she meant, Data... but, uh, you're right, she erred... On Data's reaction... 13 ANGLE - MOVING WITH RIKER AND SHELBY SHELBY (responding) I'm sorry... I woke up early and I saw a weather system was moving in... it could have affected the soil readings... RIKER So without any regard to the risk of coming down alone... SHELBY Really, Commander... if we ran into the Borg, two extra bodies wouldn't've made a hell of a difference, would they? We had three hours before the storm front hit, less than two hours now. Data was available. I took him. We came. I don't see your problem... RIKER My problem, Commander, is I expect to be notified before there's a change in my orders... SHELBY (tight) Noted for future reference. Do you wish to hear my report, sir? RIKER Go ahead. STAR TREK: "Best of Both Worlds" - REV. 4/10/90 - ACT ONE 13. 13 CONTINUED: SHELBY The soil contains the same magnetic-resonance traces... That's our footprint. There's no doubt any more. It's the Borg. On Riker's reaction... FADE OUT. END OF ACT ONE STAR TREK: "Best of Both Worlds" - REV. 4/6/90 - ACT TWO 14. ACT TWO FADE IN: 14 EXT. SPACE - THE ENTERPRISE (OPTICAL) In orbit. The transport ship is gone. PICARD (V.O.) Captain's log, Stardate 43998.5. With confirmation of the Borg's presence in Federation space, Admiral Hanson has returned to Starbase three two four to discuss strategy with Starfleet Command. Lieutenant Commander Shelby remains on board to continue tactical preparations. 15 INT. CAPT. READY ROOM Riker and Picard. RIKER ... a standing Yellow Alert... all Federation and allied outposts have been warned... Ops will continue to monitor long range sensors... I've assigned Data, La Forge and Mister Crusher to work with Commander Shelby. Picard nods... a beat. PICARD Very good, Number One. You've covered all the bases. As usual. (beat) What's your impression of Shelby? RIKER She knows her stuff, Captain. Picard notes a vague hesitation in his attitude. PICARD She has your full confidence... RIKER Well, I think she needs... supervision. (MORE) STAR TREK: "Best of Both Worlds" - REV. 4/6/90 - ACT TWO 15. 15 CONTINUED: RIKER (Cont'd) She takes the initiative a little too... easily. Sometimes with risks. Picard nods, smiles slightly... PICARD Sounds a little like a young lieutenant commander I once recruited as my first officer. RIKER (returns smile) Perhaps. And all this is played with great warmth and personal connection... PICARD You're the best officer I've ever served with, Will. Riker crinkles his forehead, nods, thanks. PICARD (most gentle) But what are you still doing here? RIKER (reacts) Sir? PICARD I hear you've been offered the Melbourne. Riker acknowledges, believes the captain will be pleased when he says -- RIKER I've decided not to pursue the commission at this time. But Picard surprises him by not showing pleasure, but rather discomfort with the decision. PICARD She's a fine ship, Will. STAR TREK: "Best of Both Worlds" - REV. 4/6/90 - ACT TWO 16. 15 CONTINUED: (2) RIKER She's not the Enterprise. (beat) With all due respect, sir, you need me. Particularly now. PICARD Starfleet needs good captains. Particularly now. I cannot keep you to myself forever. Picard takes a long beat... this is most difficult. PICARD I want you to reconsider your decision. RIKER (reacts) Are you asking me to leave, Captain? PICARD I'm asking you to look at your career objectively and make the best decision. (beat) I know it's hard to walk away. But you're ready to work without a net, my friend. You're ready to make the life and death decisions a captain must make. And, hard as it is to accept, if you choose to leave, the Enterprise will go on just fine without you. Riker looks hard at Picard and on that look... 15A INT. TEN-FORWARD Troi and Riker at a table. Riker is troubled, confused. RIKER What am I still doing here, Deanna? I've pushed myself hard to get this far... (glancing at her) ... sacrificed a lot. (MORE) STAR TREK: "Best of Both Worlds" - REV. 4/9/90 - ACT TWO 17. 15A CONTINUED: RIKER (Cont'd) I've always said I wanted my own command. And yet something's holding me back. Is it wrong to want to stay... ? TROI What do you think? RIKER (shakes his head, doesn't know) Maybe I'm just afraid of the big chair. TROI I don't think so. RIKER (unconvinced) The captain says Shelby reminds him of the way I used to be. And he's right. She comes in here, full of drive and ambition, impatient, taking risks... I look at her and I wonder whatever happened to those things in me? I I liked those things in me. (shakes his head) I've lost something. TROI (suppressing a smile) You mean you're older, more experienced... a little more seasoned... RIKER (grins) "Seasoned". What a horrible thing to say to a man. TROI I don't think you've lost a thing... and you've gained a lot more than you realize. You're much more comfortable with yourself than you used to be... STAR TREK: "Best of Both Worlds" - REV. 4/6/90 - ACT TWO 18. 15A CONTINUED: (2) RIKER Maybe that's the problem. Could be I'm too comfortable here. TROI I'm not sure I know what that means. (But I do know that.. ) You're happy here... happier than I've ever known you to be. It really comes down to a simple question -- what do you want, Will Riker? Riker laughs to himself. TROI What? RIKER Stupid. An old song I heard when I was a kid. Keeps running through my mind... (off her look, he begins to sing) "Didja ever have the feeling that you wanted to go... still had the feeling that you wanted to stay... You knew it was right... wasn't wrong... still you knew you wouldn't be very long... it's tough to have the feeling that you wanted to go... " 15B ANGLE - GUINAN moving by with a tray of drinks reacts as she hears Riker... RIKER (continuing) "... still had the feeling that you wanted to stay... start to go... change your mind... " He stops as he realizes Guinan is looking at him... GUINAN You start on Friday -- two shows a night, matinee on Wednesday. STAR TREK: "Best of Both Worlds" - REV. 4/6/90 - ACT TWO 19. 15B CONTINUED: RIKER I play the trombone too... She nods, and walks on... 16 INT. ENGINEERING - CLOSE ON MONITOR shows an Okudagram, a graphic representation of the Borg ship... SHELBY (O.S.) ... a manipulation effect in the Borg ship's subspace field... a definite pattern -- at four-point-eight minute intervals during your first confrontation with them. 17 ANGLE - AT THE POOL TABLE (OPTICAL) Shelby, Riker, Geordi, Wesley, Data and three other supernumeraries, at least one other woman in the group. It's been a long day... fatigue is clear on all faces... GEORDI Might indicate high-output auxiliary generators kicking in. SHELBY (acknowledges) One theory is that their systems are decentralized with redundant power sources located throughout the ship. DATA It is a reasonable conclusion. Borg technology has given each member of their society the ability to interface and function collectively. It is likely they would construct their ship with the same philosophy. WESLEY (shakes his head) Knock out one generator and another takes over without interruption. STAR TREK: "Best of Both Worlds" - REV. 4/6/90 - ACT TWO 20. 17 CONTINUED: RIKER What kind of damage would we have to do to shut them down... ? SHELBY Projections suggest a Borg ship like this one could continue to function effectively even if seventy-eight percent of it was inoperable. Reactions. WESLEY (grim) And our best shot barely scratched the surface. Geordi in particular is stumped... moves to a monitor, presses panels that put up several design schemes... GEORDI From what I've seen, I can't believe any of your new weapons systems can be ready in less than eighteen months, Commander. SHELBY (acknowledges) We've been projecting twenty-four. RIKER (looking at the designs) Is there anything here we can try to adapt to our current defense systems... ? GEORDI (studying them intently) We'll have to look through the specs again. (sighs, tired) I don't know. My mind's turned to clay. WESLEY Mine too. He inadvertently looks at Data... there's a beat of visual humor -- obviously Data's mind could run all night. Shelby intends to push them until they fall... moving to the computer, calling up specs... STAR TREK: "Best of Both Worlds" - REV. 4/6/90 - ACT TWO 21. 17 CONTINUED: (2) SHELBY I think we should look at modifying the plasma phaser design... Riker notices the excessive fatigue on everyone's faces... RIKER Commander, I think we should call it a night. A beat. Shelby reacts without eye contact... there's a crisis, how can he think about breaking for the night? She keeps on working at the computer... eyes on the screen. Restrained -- SHELBY All right. Anyone who's really that tired... if you want to leave... Overlapping -- WESLEY No, that's okay... GEORDI Go ahead, Commander... SHELBY (quickly back to work) What would happen if we take the frequency klystron from the existing unit... Riker interrupts, firm, but none of this ever gets loud -- RIKER We'll break here. That's an order. We'll reconvene at oh five hundred... SHELBY Sir, if you'll allow me to continue with Mister Data, who does not require rest... RIKER You need rest, Commander. STAR TREK: "Best of Both Worlds" - REV. 4/9/90 - ACT TWO 22. 17 CONTINUED: (3) SHELBY If we have a confrontation with the Borg without improving our defense systems... RIKER If we have a confrontation, I don't want a crew fighting the Borg at the same time they're fighting their own fatigue... Dismissed. Their eyes meet in conflict. She EXITS. 18 thru OMITTED 19 20 EXT. SPACE - THE ENTERPRISE (OPTICAL) In orbit. 21 INT. OBSERVATION LOUNGE (OPTICAL) Picard, Riker, Shelby, Data, Geordi, Worf, Beverly. On the monitor Admiral Hanson is addressing them. HANSON (MONITOR) At nineteen hundred hours yesterday, the USS Lalo departed Zeta Alpha Two on a freight run to Sentinel Minor Four. At twenty-two hundred hours and twelve minutes, a distress signal was received at Starbase one five seven. The Lalo reported contact with an alien vessel... (with emphasis) ... described as cube-shaped. The distress signal ended abruptly. She has not been heard from since. Reactions. PICARD How long to get there at warp nine, Mister Data? DATA One hour, seventeen minutes, sir. STAR TREK: "Best of Both Worlds" - REV. 4/6/90 - ACT TWO 23. 21 CONTINUED: PICARD Make it so. Data acknowledges, rises and EXITS. HANSON We're coming with every available starship to assist, Captain. But the closest help is six days away. PICARD (dry) We'll try to occupy them pending your arrival, Admiral. HANSON I know you will. Hanson out. RIKER All hands will stand to battle stations... PICARD Commander Shelby, status of defense preparations? SHELBY Mister La Forge has a plan to modulate shield nutation... hopefully, that'll hold them off for awhile. GEORDI At the same time, we're retuning phasers to higher EM-base emitting frequencies -- we'll try to disrupt their subspace field. PICARD Your assessment of our potential effectiveness? GEORDI Shot in the dark, Captain. Best we can do for now. PICARD (acknowledges) Dismissed. 22 OMITTED STAR TREK: "Best of Both Worlds" - REV. 4/6/90 - ACT TWO 24. 22A EXT. SPACE - THE ENTERPRISE (OPTICAL) at warp. 23 INT. MAIN BRIDGE Picard, Riker, Worf, Data, Wesley at their positions... Shelby is also on the bridge... WORF Sir, reading an unidentified vessel just entering sensor range, bearing two-one-zero mark one-five-one... PICARD Hail them, Mister Worf... WORF No response, sir... PICARD Move to intercept. WORF (beat, reacting to console) Sir, the vessel has already changed course to intercept us. Approaching at... warp nine point three... Entering visual range... PICARD On screen. 24 ANGLE - VIEW SCREEN (OPTICAL) Long range... a small dot... PICARD Magnify. The shot changes to a closer angle -- it is the Borg ship. PICARD Mister Worf, dispatch a subspace message to Admiral Hanson -- we have engaged the Borg. STAR TREK: "Best of Both Worlds" - REV. 4/6/90 - ACT TWO 25. 24 CONTINUED: And on reactions... FADE OUT. END OF ACT TWO STAR TREK: "Best of Both Worlds" - REV. 4/6/90 - ACT THREE 26. ACT THREE FADE IN: 25 EXT. SPACE - THE ENTERPRISE (OPTICAL) The Enterprise and the Borg ship face each other. Both ships have dropped out of warp. 26 INT. MAIN BRIDGE (OPTICAL) We are now at Red Alert. WORF Captain, you are being hailed. PICARD I am? WORF Yes, Captain. By name. RIKER Data, is it the same ship we faced at J-two-five? DATA Uncertain, Commander. However, dimensions are precisely the same. PICARD On screen. He takes a defiant pose. The interior of the Borg ship appears on the viewscreen -- a great chamber with stacks and stacks of thousands of slots in which are individual Borg. PICARD I am Jean-Luc... Speaking with a hundred voices -- BORG Jean-Luc Picard, captain of the Starship Enterprise, registry NCC-1701D, you will lower shields and prepare to transport yourself aboard our vessel. If you do not cooperate, we will destroy your ship. STAR TREK: "Best of Both Worlds" - REV. 4/6/90 - ACT THREE 27. 26 CONTINUED: Picard reacts, does not respond to the demand. PICARD You have committed acts of aggression against the United Federation of Planets. If you do not immediately withdraw... BORG You will surrender yourself or we will destroy your ship. Your defensive capabilities are unable to withstand us. Riker signals Worf to mute transmission. RIKER (to Picard) What the hell could they want with you? SHELBY I thought they weren't interested in human lifeforms... only our technology. PICARD Their priorities seem to have changed. Open channel. (to the viewscreen) We have developed new defense capabilities since our last meeting and we are prepared to use them if you do not withdraw from Federation space. If you do so immediately, I will agree to arrange a conference of our peoples at a neutral location. 27 INT. ENGINEERING On Geordi taking readings... GEORDI (to comm) Shields are being probed... I'm modulating nutation... STAR TREK: "Best of Both Worlds" - REV. 4/6/90 - ACT THREE 28. 28 EXT. SPACE - THE ENTERPRISE (OPTICAL) As the Borg ship sends out their tractor beam... the shields deflect it... 29 INT. MAIN BRIDGE WORF Sir, the Borg are attempting to lock on to us with their tractor beam... PICARD Load all torpedo bays... ready phasers... target coordinates on the source of the tractor beam... RIKER Status of shields... DATA Holding... SHELBY (encouraged) The nutation modulation has them confused... RIKER (cautious) They have the ability to analyze and adapt, Commander... Suddenly the ship shakes violently... INTERCUT: 29A INT. ENGINEERING Geordi scurrying around trying to make adjustments in vain... GEORDI Shield modulation has failed... they've locked on... WORF Shields are being drained... ninety per cent... eighty... STAR TREK: "Best of Both Worlds" - REV. 4/6/90 - ACT THREE 29. 29A CONTINUED: GEORDI Trying to recalibrate nutation... damn... WORF Shields have failed. PICARD Fire all weapons... 30 EXT. SPACE - THE ENTERPRISE (OPTICAL) An extraordinary sequence... as the Enterprise is grabbed by the tractor beam... we give them everything we've got... the Borg ship takes full impact and still the beam has us... 31 INT. ENGINEERING GEORDI Their subspace field is intact... new phaser frequencies had no impact... INTERCUT: 32 INT. MAIN BRIDGE RIKER Reverse engines... GEORDI Full reverse... we're not moving... PICARD Fire at will... WORF Launching torpedos... phaser spread continuing... DATA Still no damage to the Borg vessel, sir... 33 EXT. SPACE - THE ENTERPRISE (OPTICAL) The second Borg beam reaches out to the Enterprise... STAR TREK: "Best of Both Worlds" - REV. 4/6/90 - ACT THREE 30. 34 INT. ENGINEERING A deafening crack of thunder... the ship shakes... Geordi looks up... COMPUTER VOICE Warning. Outer hull breach. INTERCUT: 35 INT. MAIN BRIDGE WORF They're cutting into the hull... Engineering section... RIKER Geordi... evacuate Engineering... 36 INT. ENGINEERING People running... the thunder continuing... on the move -- GEORDI Computer. Evacuation sequence... COMPUTER VOICE Redirecting Engineering control to bridge. Sealing doors to core chamber... GEORDI Move it people! The door is sliding down... and as he runs the hell out of there... COMPUTER VOICE Warning. Inner hull failing. Decompression danger, deck thirty-six, section four. Sealing Main Engineering. 36A OMITTED STAR TREK: "Best of Both Worlds" - REV. 4/6/90 - ACT THREE 31. 37 INT. MAIN BRIDGE SHELBY Data, fluctuate phaser resonance frequencies... random settings... keep changing them... don't give them time to adapt... 38 EXT. SPACE - THE ENTERPRISE (OPTICAL) The Enterprise fires another furious round... this time with fluctuating laser frequencies... unlike our usual. Unbroken beam, the beam is divided into "dots and Dashes" with slight color changes... and finally the Borg tractor breaks off... 38A INT. MAIN BRIDGE The ship shakes with the release. WORF The tractor beam has been released. PICARD Warp nine. Course one-five-one mark three-three-zero... engage... 39 EXT. SPACE - THE ENTERPRISE (OPTICAL) warps away... the Borg ship follows quickly... 40 INT. MAIN BRIDGE WORF They are in pursuit, Captain. PICARD Maintain course. Geordi ENTERS from the turbolift... RIKER Damage report, Geordi. GEORDI (still in shock) Hull rupture in Main Engineering... damage is heavy... (MORE) STAR TREK: "Best of Both Worlds" - REV. 4/6/90 - ACT THREE 32. 40 CONTINUED: GEORDI (Cont'd) We lost a lot of good people down there. DATA Eleven dead... eight more unaccounted for, Captain. Moving to the Engineering station, taking readings... RIKER (to com) Repair teams to Engineering... seal hull breach... GEORDI They didn't get to the core... I can control functions from here... WESLEY Approaching the Paulson Nebula, sir... PICARD Drop to impulse... take us in, Ensign... 41 EXT. SPACE - THE ENTERPRISE (OPTICAL) Moving at impulse into the solar nebula, swirling clouds... 42 INT. MAIN BRIDGE - INCLUDE MAIN VIEWER (OPTICAL) as we whiz by large rocks and clumpy material... 43 ANGLE - WESLEY drawing on all of his navigational talents... Picard moves up next to him... WESLEY The field is getting too dense, sir... PICARD Steady... Mister Data, analysis of the nebula cloud... STAR TREK: "Best of Both Worlds" - REV. 4/6/90 - ACT THREE 33. 43 CONTINUED: DATA Eighty-two percent Dilithium hydroxyls... manganese, chromium. It should provide an effective screen against their sensors, sir... 44 PICARD PICARD Prepare to take us in, Mister Crusher. Now. Mister La Forge, prepare to reverse engines, full stop. 45 EXT. SPACE - THE ENTERPRISE (OPTICAL) The Enterprise moves into the spiral cloud and disappearing from view. 45A EXT. SPACE - THE BORG (OPTICAL) slows at the cloud's periphery, does not go in. 46 INT. MAIN BRIDGE WORF The Borg ship is continuing scans... attempting to locate us... PICARD Good. As long as they're looking for us... they can't hurt anyone else. RIKER Shut down all active sensors, passive scanners only. Deflectors to minimum emissions. PICARD We'll maintain position. (looks at Riker and Shelby) Until we have a better idea. STAR TREK: "Best of Both Worlds" - REV. 4/11/90 - ACT THREE34. 47 EXT. SPACE - THE ENTERPRISE (OPTICAL) Barely visible through the dense cloud. 48 INT. OBSERVATION LOUNGE - CLOSE ON MONITOR (OPTICAL) Showing a silent replay of the Borg ship as seen from the Enterprise... SHELBY (O.S.) Time index five-one-four... Data started to fluctuate phaser resonance frequencies... the Borg's beam breaks contact... Freeze picture. 49 ANGLE Riker is at the head of the table, Wesley, Geordi and Data are with Shelby. They are reporting progress to him. SHELBY Take a close look, Commander... Mister La Forge? (please narrate) 50 MONITOR - FREEZE FRAME (OPTICAL) The same shot in slow motion... there is a slight wobble in the entire Borg power system. GEORDI (O.S.) There's a two percent power drop, just for an instant... but it's system-wide... The phaser frequency spread was in a high narrow band. 51 ANGLE - WIDE DATA Conceivably, the ship's power distribution nodes are vulnerable to those frequencies. STAR TREK: "Best of Both Worlds" - REV. 4/6/90 - ACT THREE 35. 51 CONTINUED: GEORDI If we can generate a concentrated burst of energy with that same frequency distribution... I mean a lot more than anything our phasers or photon torpedos could provide... RIKER How do we do that? WESLEY The main deflector dish. GEORDI It's the only component of the Enterprise designed to channel that much power at controlled frequencies. SHELBY Unfortunately, there is one slight detail -- in the process, the blast completely destroys the Enterprise as well. RIKER (muses) But if we could get far enough away... increase the deflector range... SHELBY (nods) It could work. In the meantime, we should retune all phasers, including hand units, to the same frequency. RIKER (acknowledges) Proceed. I'll inform the Captain... SHELBY There's one other recommendation I'd like to make, Commander. Separate the saucer section... assign a skeleton crew to create a diversion... STAR TREK: "Best of Both Worlds" - REV. 4/9/90 - ACT THREE 36. 51 CONTINUED: (2) RIKER (shakes his head) We may need power from the saucer impulse engines... SHELBY But it would give them more than one target to worry about. RIKER (beat) No, it's too great a risk... SHELBY I'd like the captain to make that decision, sir. RIKER (cool) I bring all alternatives to the captain's attention, Commander. (dismissing them) That'll be all. As the others EXIT, Geordi lingers a moment... GEORDI I'll need to install higher-capacity power transfers to the deflector dish, Commander... RIKER How long... GEORDI Better part of a day. Riker acknowledges, stands, still bristling about Shelby... RIKER She gets a full head of steam up, doesn't she... GEORDI Yessir... she's... a formidable presence to say the least. But I'm convinced she can help us here, Commander... STAR TREK: "Best of Both Worlds" - REV. 4/6/90 - ACT THREE 37. 51 CONTINUED: (3) RIKER I am too, Geordi. Don't worry about it. I can handle Shelby. Riker nods and they EXIT. 52 INT. BRIDGE Riker walks to the Ready Room door and rings the chime... Worf in command. PICARD'S VOICE Come. 53 ANGLE - THE DOOR slides open and as Riker steps forward, he reacts as he sees Shelby with Picard. 54 INT. CAPT. READY ROOM - CONTINUOUS PICARD Come in, Number One... Commander Shelby was just telling me of your concerns about her plan... RIKER I'm sorry that she troubled you, sir... I already informed her... PICARD Yes, I entirely agree with you. It's not the time. But I am afraid the time may eventually come when greater risks are required. I'd like you to consider her plan as a fall-back position and make the necessary preparations. RIKER Very good, sir. 55 INT. MAIN BRIDGE Riker and Shelby EXIT the Ready Room and you can cut the tension with a knife... she moves to the turbolift and he's on her heels. STAR TREK: "Best of Both Worlds" - REV. 4/6/90 - ACT THREE 38. 56 INT. TURBOLIFT As they ENTER... SHELBY Deck eight. Battle bridge. The doors close. Shelby avoids his eyes. No guilt from her. Just unstoppable. RIKER (to comm) Halt. (to Shelby) You and I have to talk, Commander. SHELBY You never ordered me not to discuss this with the captain... RIKER You disagree with me, fine. You want to take it to the captain, fine. Through me. You do an end run around me again, I'll snap you back so hard, you'll think you're a first year cadet again. SHELBY May I speak frankly, sir? RIKER By all means. SHELBY You're in my way. RIKER Really? How terrible for you. SHELBY All you know how to do is play it safe... I guess that's why someone like you sits in the shadow of a great man for as long as you have, passing up one command after another. (to comm) Proceed to deck eight. RIKER When it comes to this ship, to this crew, you're damned right I'll play it safe. STAR TREK: "Best of Both Worlds" - REV. 4/6/90 - ACT THREE 39. 56 CONTINUED: SHELBY If you can't make the big decisions, Commander, I suggest you make room for someone who can. The door opens and she EXITS. On Riker's reaction... FADE OUT. END OF ACT THREE STAR TREK: "Best of Both Worlds" - REV. 4/6/90 - ACT FOUR 40. ACT FOUR FADE IN: 57 EXT. SPACE - THE ENTERPRISE (OPTICAL) hiding in the dust cloud in the nebula... moving back to find the Borg ship hovering over the swirl. PICARD (V.O.) Captain's log, supplemental. The Enterprise remains concealed in the dust cloud. And to my surprise, the Borg have maintained their position, waiting for us to come out of hiding. I have no explanation for their special interest in me or this ship. 57A INT. ENGINEERING Much activity. Repairs are continuing... supernumeraries working at the last patches in the breach area... at consoles, Geordi, Wesley, Shelby and Data huddle and compare notes... as Picard ENTERS, taking a slow, respectful inspection. The crew members look up to acknowledge Picard, who just nods, "carry-on" as he passes through... PICARD (V.O.) We continue to prepare our defenses for the inevitable confrontation. But, I must admit, on this night I contemplate the distinct possibility that no defense may be adequate against this enemy... 57B INT. TEN-FORWARD (OPTICAL) Dark and deserted. The view out the windows blinded by the nebula fog. Picard ENTERS, walking slowly... takes a long look... GUINAN (O.S.) Trouble sleeping? Picard turns... STAR TREK: "Best of Both Worlds" - REV. 4/9/90 - ACT FOUR 41. 57C ANGLE - GUINAN at the bar PICARD Something of a tradition, Guinan... touring the ship before a battle... GUINAN Before a hopeless battle, if I remember the tradition correctly. Picard moves to the bar. PICARD Not necessarily. Nelson toured the HMS Victory before Trafalgar... GUINAN But Nelson didn't come home from Trafalgar, did he? PICARD No, but the battle was won. GUINAN And you, Picard, do you expect this battle to be won? PICARD We may yet prevail. It is a conceit but a healthy one. (beat) I wonder if the Emperor Honorious watching the Visigoths coming over the seventh hill could truly realize that the Roman Empire was about to fall. This is really just another page of history, isn't it? Will this be the end of our civilization? (shrugs) ... Turn the page. GUINAN It is not the end. PICARD You say that with remarkable assuredness. STAR TREK: "Best of Both Worlds" - REV. 4/6/90 - ACT FOUR 42. 57C CONTINUED: GUINAN With experience. When the Borg destroyed my world, my people scattered throughout the universe. But we survived. And so will humanity. As long as there is a handful left to keep the spirit alive. You will prevail. Even if it takes a millennium. Picard nods with appreciation for her... and then the ship shakes and they react, turn to see -- 57D ANGLE - THE WINDOWS (OPTICAL) somewhere beyond the fog, bright explosions are visible... WORF'S COM VOICE Captain Picard, report to the bridge. On the move... PICARD (keys insignia) On my way, Lieutenant. And EXITS. 58 INT. MAIN BRIDGE (OPTICAL) Picard ENTERS... Riker, Worf watch the viewscreen as the explosions continue periodically. Supernumeraries at conn and ops. RIKER They're some kind of magnetometric-guided charges. As one "depth charge" explodes perilously close by... PICARD Status of shields. WORF Back to forty-eight percent, Captain. STAR TREK: "Best of Both Worlds" - REV. 4/6/90 - ACT FOUR 43. 58 CONTINUED: PICARD (to comm) Mister La Forge, I may have to take us out of the nebula... I'll need all the power you can give me. Another huge explosion rattles us... 59 INT. ENGINEERING Data, Wesley, Shelby working at stations in the background. GEORDI Engines are ready, Captain. Recommend you adjust shield harmonics to favor the upper EM band when you proceed... PICARD'S COM VOICE Acknowledged. And this time a direct hit... 60 INT. MAIN BRIDGE WORF Direct hit... deck nine... RIKER Damage report... WORF Structural latching system integrity breached... PICARD Take us out of here, Number One... RIKER Fire up the engines... half impulse until we clear the nebula... then punch it to warp nine. PICARD Ready phasers... load forward torpedo bays... RIKER Engage. STAR TREK: "Best of Both Worlds" - REV. 4/6/90 - ACT FOUR 44. 61 EXT. SPACE - THE ENTERPRISE (OPTICAL) moves out of the cloud... immediately the Borg ship follows... 62 INT. MAIN BRIDGE (OPTICAL) WORF Borg tractor beam is attempting to lock on... PICARD Fire at will. Continue rotating shield frequ... WORF Shields are failing... The ship is rocked as the tractor beam locks on... people are almost knocked down... WORF Tractor beam has locked on. RIKER They're holding us... A Borg MATERIALIZES... Borg #1 looks around, identifies Picard, moves calmly toward him... Worf fires his phaser... the Borg's force field is ineffective... it breaks down and the Borg is blown down... immediately two more Borg MATERIALIZE... one by the fallen Borg, another behind Picard... Worf fires at the Borg (#2) near Picard. But this time the Borg's force field has changed color and repels the phasers... RIKER It's no use... they've already adapted to the new frequencies... Riker charges Borg #2 going for Picard but the Borg easily sends Riker crashing against a far wall, and grabs Picard. Worf moves toward Picard as... 62A OMITTED 62B BORG #3 removes parts of the dead Borg #1... STAR TREK: "Best of Both Worlds" - REV. 4/9/90 - ACT FOUR 45. 62C ANGLE - PICARD (OPTICAL) Worf reaches him just as he DEMATERIALIZES along with Borg #2 and Borg #3... a beat later, dead Borg#1 withers away into dust... and... 62D WORF quickly moves back to Tactical... WORF The Borg ship is disengaging... leaving at warp speed... RIKER (to conn) Maintain pursuit... WORF Borg vessel has reached warp nine... nine-point-four... nine-point-six... RIKER Stay with them. (to comm) Riker to O'Brien. Can you get a fix on the captain? O'BRIEN'S COM VOICE Negative, sir. There's some kind of interference. I can't lock in on his signal. RIKER Senior officers report to the bridge. WORF Sir, the coordinates they've set... they're on a direct course... to sector zero-zero-one. The Terran system. RIKER (reacts) Earth. On Riker's reaction... 63 EXT. SPACE - THE ENTERPRISE (OPTICAL) in pursuit of the Borg ship. STAR TREK: "Best of Both Worlds" - REV. 4/17/90 - ACT FOUR 46. 64 INT. BORG SHIP Picard is escorted by two Borgs... he reacts as he sees -- 65 OMITTED 66 INT. BORG SHIP (MATTE SHOT) The same massive chamber we saw on the Main Viewer earlier... thousands of Borg lined up... as Picard ENTERS. They speak with a thousand deafening voices: BORG Captain Jean-Luc Picard, you lead the strongest ship of the Federation Starfleet. You speak for your people. PICARD I have nothing to say to you, and I will resist you with my last ounce of strength. BORG Strength is irrelevant. Resistance is futile. We wish to improve ourselves. We will add your biological and technological distinctiveness to our own. Your culture will adapt to service ours. PICARD Impossible. My culture is based on freedom and self-determination. BORG Freedom is irrelevant. Self-determination is irrelevant. You must comply. PICARD We would rather die. BORG Death is irrelevant. STAR TREK: "Best of Both Worlds" - REV. 4/6/90 - ACT FOUR 47. 66 CONTINUED: PICARD What is it you wish of me? BORG Your archaic cultures are authority driven. To facilitate our introduction into your societies, it has been decided that a human voice will speak for us in all communications. You have been chosen to be that voice. On Picard's reaction... 67 EXT. SPACE - THE ENTERPRISE (OPTICAL) in pursuit of the Borg vessel. 68 INT. MAIN BRIDGE Riker, Shelby, Geordi, Data, Troi, Worf, Beverly, Wesley. Supernumeraries are at Conn and Ops. WORF They're leading us into the heart of our own defenses... GEORDI So far, they haven't had any reason to worry about our defenses... WESLEY Commander, if the Borg stay at warp nine-point-six, we'll be forced to discontinue pursuit and power down in less than three hours. DATA Two hours, forty minutes and three seconds. RIKER (to Geordi) How soon before the deflector is ready? STAR TREK: "Best of Both Worlds" - REV. 4/9/90 - ACT FOUR 48. 68 CONTINUED: GEORDI We're close. Few hours maybe... (before Riker has to tell him) I know I'll get it done in two... somehow... but Commander, I need serious power from the warp engines to make this weapon work. We're using all we've got just to keep up with them... SHELBY We've got to get that ship down to impulse. RIKER I'm leading an away team over there to get the captain back. We'll find a way to bring them out of warp... (orders) Ensign Crusher... continue to assist Mister La Forge... Commander Shelby, you will take the bridge and coordinate with Starfleet... Data, Worf, Doctor Crusher, you're with me... SHELBY (protesting) Excuse me, sir... with my knowledge of the Borg... RIKER (not now) Those are my orders, Commander. Shelby blinks. Troi fills the breach. TROI Commander Riker... (beat) It is inappropriate for you to lead the away team. Until the return of Captain Picard, you are in command of the Enterprise. We are in a state of war. Your place is on the bridge. STAR TREK: "Best of Both Worlds" - REV. 4/6/90 - ACT FOUR 49. 68 CONTINUED: (2) Riker frowns... every bit of his soul wants to lead the charge to the rescue... and suddenly he feels what it takes to command... to delegate authority, to think of the greater needs... but it's frustrating as hell. RIKER (softer) Commander Shelby, you will lead the away team. And he sinks into the big chair... RIKER Make it so. The others scramble and... FADE OUT. END OF ACT FOUR STAR TREK: "Best of Both Worlds" - REV. 4/6/90 - ACT FIVE 50. ACT FIVE FADE IN: 69 EXT. SPACE - THE ENTERPRISE (OPTICAL) Still at warp... pursuing the Borg ship. RIKER (V.O.) First officer's log, supplemental. Our pursuit of the Borg continues at high warp on a course that will take us to the very core of the Federation. The devastation they could bring is beyond imagination. 70 INT. TRANSPORTER ROOM Shelby, Data and Beverly wait with O'Brien as Worf arrives, hands out phasers... WORF These phasers have been retuned. Each has a different frequency spanning the upper EM band. SHELBY All right... a reminder... we only get to use each of these once, maybe twice before the Borg learn to adapt. Don't fire until you have to... BEVERLY What kind of resistance can we expect? (Beverly wasn't around for the Borg last year.) DATA At our last encounter, the Borg virtually ignored us when we beamed aboard their vessel, Doctor. They clearly did not consider our being there a threat. SHELBY That could very well change, however, if we start interfering with their plans. STAR TREK: "Best of Both Worlds" - REV. 4/6/90 - ACT FIVE 51. 70 CONTINUED: They move to the transporter... SHELBY Shelby to bridge. Away team ready. INTERCUT: 71 INT. MAIN BRIDGE Riker, Troi and supernumeraries. RIKER (to com) We've got fifty-eight minutes before we have to power down and disengage. SHELBY Understood. RIKER Proceed. (quick) Commander, no unnecessary risks. If it becomes clear you can't succeed, I want you back here, alive... I don't want any dead heroes. Clear? SHELBY Very clear, sir. Shelby out. O'BRIEN We've matched warp velocity for transport, Commander. SHELBY Energize. 72 INT. BORG SHIP (OPTICAL) Shelby, Data, Worf and Beverly MATERIALIZE... 73 CLOSER assume a defensive posture. There is no resistance. Many of the Borg are in stasis. Occasionally, one walks by and ignores the away team. STAR TREK: "Best of Both Worlds" - REV. 4/9/90 - ACT FIVE 52. 73 CONTINUED: WORF (checking tricorder) Tricorder functions are minimal. SHELBY Any signs of human life? WORF Inconclusive. He continues to make adjustments on the tricorder. Beverly gets her first look at the Borg up close and personal... studying the gridwork structures... BEVERLY (awe) Look at this... this is extraordinary. DATA (acknowledges) These appear to be some kind of power waveguide conduits which allow them to work collectively as they perform ship functions. SHELBY There's no way to take out enough of these to slow them down. DATA (agreeing) The decentralized power system makes it virtually impossible. Cautiously moving forward... BEVERLY (studying the configuration) What about looking at it... from the mosquito's point of view. DATA (puzzled) An interesting metaphor, Doctor. What is your idea? BEVERLY If we sting them in a tender spot... at least we might get them to stop a minute to scratch. STAR TREK: "Best of Both Worlds" - REV. 4/6/90 - ACT FIVE 53. 73 CONTINUED: (2) Data and Shelby exchange a glance... not a bad plan. As they move into an intersection to see the awesome conduit box... DATA Distribution nodes. SHELBY If we take out a few of these, it just might make them scratch... Data acknowledges as Worf picks up something on his tricorder. WORF The captain's communicator... it is still activated. BEVERLY (keying insignia) Crusher to Picard, can you hear me, Captain... No response. SHELBY Can you locate it, Worf? WORF (checking) This way... He leads them down a corridor... 73A INT. READY ROOM (OPTICAL) Admiral Hanson on the monitor... Riker notably standing, not sitting in the captain's chair... RIKER I strongly recommend redeploying all available defenses to protect sector zero-zero-one, Admiral... HANSON (acknowledges) We're moving to intercept at Wolf three five nine. We'll make our stand there. How much longer can you maintain pursuit? STAR TREK: "Best of Both Worlds" - REV. 4/9/90 - ACT FIVE 54. 73A CONTINUED: RIKER Twenty-two minutes if they stay at current speed. If we can't bring them out of warp, we'll do as much damage as we can before we have to disengage. HANSON (nods) Picard? RIKER Nothing yet, sir. 74 OMITTED 74A INT. BORG SHIP Down another corridor, Worf leading the way with his tricorder... he stops... a series of large drawers line one wall... it might almost remind us of a morgue... WORF In here. An exchange of concerned glances... Data moves forward and pulls out the heavy drawer... they react as they see inside -- 75 ANGLE - PICARD'S UNIFORM folded neatly, the communicator is visible. His empty boots. 75A RESUME - SHELBY SHELBY Shelby to Enterprise. RIKER'S COM VOICE Go ahead. SHELBY We've found the captain's uniform. And his communicator. STAR TREK: "Best of Both Worlds" - REV. 4/6/90 - ACT FIVE 55. 75B INT. MAIN BRIDGE Riker frowns... exchanges a worried look with Troi... SHELBY'S COM VOICE We're resuming our search. Behind him Wesley and Geordi ENTER from the turbolift... as Riker sees them -- RIKER (to com) Stand by, Commander. WESLEY We're in business. GEORDI It'll burn out the main deflector... but it'll be one hell of a bang. RIKER Radiation danger? WESLEY We'll need to evacuate the entire forward half of the secondary hull. And the lower three decks of the saucer. TROI I'll see to that. She moves off the bridge. RIKER (to com) Commander Shelby... we have only seventeen minutes of warp power left. Do what you can to get them out of warp. 75C INT. BORG SHIP (OPTICAL) The away team continues to move cautiously into an intersection. STAR TREK: "Best of Both Worlds" - REV. 4/6/90 - ACT FIVE 56. 75C CONTINUED: SHELBY (to comm) Acknowledged. Shelby out. (to the team) Let's take out some of these distribution nodes and see what happens... (beat) Get ready. This may rile up our friends. Data fires his phaser at the top of the conduit box... nothing... then Worf and Data fire together... this time, the conduit box shorts out and sparks fly... they move quickly out... 76 INT. BORG SHIP The Borg are stirring. 77 thru OMITTED 79 80 ANGLE - THE AWAY TEAM reacts as the Borg begin to exit their shelves... as many as we can muster... they see our guys... and move calmly toward them... we retreat... 80A INTO ANOTHER INTERSECTION (OPTICAL) and Worf and Data shoot out another conduit box... more sparks... 81 ANGLE (OPTICAL) As more Borgs exit their shelves... see us... come at us... SHELBY Ready phasers... They raise their weapons... the Borg move in on them... SHELBY Fire. Shelby and Data fire one direction... Worf and Beverly the other... STAR TREK: "Best of Both Worlds" - REV. 4/6/90 - ACT FIVE 57. 82 ONE SET OF BORGS (OPTICAL) go down... 83 ANOTHER SET OF BORGS (OPTICAL) go down... but more come right behind, climbing over them... 84 THE AWAY TEAM (OPTICAL) moves down a clear corridor... SHELBY Enterprise, encountering resistance, prepare to beam us back on my signal... ... into another intersection... Data and Worf fire and destroy a third conduit box. 85 thru OMITTED 87 88 INT. BORG SHIP A portion of the lights fail... 89 THE AWAY TEAM (OPTICAL) is cloaked in shadows... the sparks creating almost a strobe effect... 89A ANGLE - MORE BORGS (OPTICAL) coming... the away team fire phasers... the Borg have adapted... none of the phasers affect them this time... we retreat again. SHELBY Enterprise... beam us... WORF Wait! Look -- He points... and 90 thru OMITTED 92 STAR TREK: "Best of Both Worlds" - REV. 4/9/90 - ACT FIVE 58. 93 ANGLE - ANOTHER ROW OF BORGS EMERGING FROM THEIR SLOTS in the strobe effect... and one of them at the far end... is Picard... seen in profile, he looks normal. 94 THE AWAY TEAM WORF Captain! 95 PICARD turns slowly, calmly... and push in as he does to see he has been turned into a Borg. Half his face is gone... replaced with machinery. 96 REACTIONS - CLOSEUPS of the away team... stunned. 97 PICARD moves toward them... with the Borg as they surround... 98 THE AWAY TEAM (OPTICAL) Worf bursts forward trying to get to his captain... is repelled violently by a Borg aura around Picard... falls to the floor. SHELBY Enterprise, get us out of here. As sparking effects continue from the damage to the distribution nodes, they DEMATERIALIZE. 99 INT. MAIN BRIDGE Riker, Troi, Wes at Conn... Geordi at Engineering station. WESLEY Sir, they did it... the Borg ship is dropping out of warp... RIKER Go to impulse. STAR TREK: "Best of Both Worlds" - REV. 4/11/90 - ACT FIVE 59. 99 CONTINUED: GEORDI Diverting warp energy to main deflector... RIKER Move us to within forty thousand kilometers, match velocity. Commence arming sequence... Increase deflector modulation to upper frequency band... The away team ENTERS from the turbolift... Worf moves to Tactical... RIKER The captain? DATA Sir, Captain Picard has been altered by the Borg. We were unable to retrieve him... RIKER Altered... ? WORF He is a Borg, sir. Riker reacts, stunned. SHELBY We'll go back... I need more people... we need to retune the phasers again... we'll get him out of there... GEORDI Commander, reading subspace field fluctuations within the Borg ship. Looks like they're regenerating... restoring power. They could be capable of warp any minute. Riker's mind working... covering the options... RIKER Is the deflector ready? GEORDI (registering import of the pending decision) Ready, sir. STAR TREK: "Best of Both Worlds" - REV. 4/9/90 - ACT FIVE 60. 99 CONTINUED: (2) BEVERLY Will, he's alive... if we get him back, I might be able to restore... Push in to Riker... RIKER This is our only chance to destroy them... if they get back into warp, our weapon becomes useless. SHELBY We'll go back... we'll sabotage them again if we have to... RIKER (shakes his head) We can't maintain pursuit. We don't have the power. (beat) Prepare to fire. SHELBY At least consult with Starfleet Command. (to Worf) Get Admiral Hanson on subspace... RIKER Belay that order, Lieutenant. There's no time... WORF Sir, we are being hailed by the Borg... RIKER On screen. 100 thru OMITTED 101 102 ANGLE (OPTICAL) - VIEWSCREEN Picard-Borg appears... he speaks with a single but metallic Borg voice... a version of his own... and during the speech we INTERCUT: STAR TREK: "Best of Both Worlds" - REV. 4/10/90 - ACT FIVE 61. 103 MATCHING PUSHES TO CLOSEUPS OF RIKER AND PICARD (OPTICAL) PICARD/BORG I am Locutus of Borg. Resistance is futile. Your life as it has been is over. From this time forward, you will service... us. And on an extreme closeup of Riker... a deep breath, then firm without raising his voice... RIKER Mister Worf... fire. FREEZE FRAME SUPER: TO BE CONTINUED FADE OUT. END OF ACT FIVE THE END STAR TREK: THE NEXT GENERATION "The Best of Both Worlds, Part II" #40274-175 Written by Michael Piller Directed by Cliff Bole WRITING CREDITS MAY NOT BE FINAL AND SHOULD NOT BE USED FOR PUBLICITY OR ADVERTISING PURPOSES WITHOUT FIRST CHECKING WITH THE TELEVISION LEGAL DEPARTMENT. Copyright 1990 Paramount Pictures Corporation. All Rights Reserved. This script is not for publication or reproduction. No one is authorized to dispose of same. If lost or destroyed, please notify the Script Department. FINAL DRAFT JULY 2, 1990 STAR TREK: "Worlds" Part Two - 7/9/90 - CAST STAR TREK: THE NEXT GENERATION "The Best of Both Worlds" Part Two CAST PICARD ADMIRAL HANSON RIKER LT. COMMANDER SHELBY DATA LOCUTUS (PICARD-BORG) BEVERLY TROI GEORDI WORF WESLEY Non-Speaking SEVERAL BORG GUINAN O'BRIEN GLEASON COMPUTER VOICE Non-Speaking SUPERNUMERARIES MISC. SECURITY PERSONNEL STAR TREK: "Worlds" Part Two - 7/10/90 - SETS STAR TREK: THE NEXT GENERATION "The Best of Both Worlds" Part Two SETS INTERIORS EXTERIORS USS ENTERPRISE USS ENTERPRISE MAIN BRIDGE BATTLE SECTION BATTLE BRIDGE SAUCER SECTION CAPTAIN'S READY ROOM MAIN ENGINEERING THE STARFLEET SHIPS SICKBAY USS CHEKHOV DATA'S LABRATORY USS KYUSHU CORRIDOR USS MELBOURNE TURBOLIFT ETC. OBSERVATION LOUNGE TRANSPORTER ROOM ENTERPRISE SHUTTLE ENTERPRISE SHUTTLE THE BORG SHIP THE BORG SHIP INTERIOR CHAMBER OPERATING ROOM SATURN (FROM SPACE) ADMIRAL HANSON'S SHIP MARS (FROM SPACE) (GALAXY CLASS STARSHIP) UNMANNED PODS READY ROOM BATTLE BRIDGE EARTH (FROM SPACE) STAR TREK: "Worlds" Part Two - REV. 7/3/90 - PRONUNCIATION STAR TREK: THE NEXT GENERATION "The Best of Both Worlds" Part Two PRONUNCIATION GUIDE LOCUTUS low-KEW-tus ITERATIVE IT-er-ah-tiv STAR TREK: "Worlds" Part Two - REV. 7/27/90 - TEASER 1. STAR TREK: THE NEXT GENERATION "The Best of Both Worlds" Part Two TEASER FADE IN: INT. MAIN BRIDGE (OPTICAL) - LOCUTUS ON SCREEN barely reacts to Riker's order to fire. Red alert continues. We hear a low rumbling, slowly growing... RIKER Eyes locked on Locutus. The rumbling grows. GEORDI at the Engineering Station... monitoring readings... GEORDI Deflector power approaching maximum limits. Energy discharge in... six seconds... As the rumble heightens to a roar... VARIOUS REACTIONS Beverly... Troi... Worf... Wesley... Shelby... finally back to Riker... EXT. SPACE - THE ENTERPRISE (OPTICAL) Close on the main deflector dish as it glows... pulses... and then erupts in a blinding beam that strikes -- EXT. SPACE - THE BORG SHIP (OPTICAL) A forcefield absorbing the continuing blast. INT. MAIN BRIDGE (OPTICAL) The ship shakes... STAR TREK: "Worlds" Part Two - REV. 7/27/90 - TEASER 2. CONTINUED: WORF The Borg ship is undamaged. SHELBY Impossible... COMPUTER VOICE Warning. Warp reactor core primary coolant failure. GEORDI Can't maintain it much longer, Commander... Riker never takes his eyes off Locutus... COMPUTER VOICE Warning. Exceeding reaction chamber thermal limit. RIKER Cease fire. Geordi runs through a series of commands on his panels... GEORDI Shutting down warp engines. The roar stops... the silence is eerie... The Bridge crew is stunned. RIKER (unbelievable) They couldn't have adapted that quickly... LOCUTUS (on the contrary) The knowledge and experience of the human Picard is part of... us... now. It has prepared us... for all possible courses of action. Your resistance is hopeless... (beat) ... Number One. STAR TREK: "Worlds" Part Two - REV. 7/2/90 - TEASER 3. 7 CONTINUED: (2) And on the frightening intimacy of the moment... on Riker's reaction... FADE OUT. END OF TEASER STAR TREK: "Worlds" Part Two - REV. 7/6/90 - ACT TWO 4. ACT ONE FADE IN: 8 EXT. SPACE - THE ENTERPRISE (OPTICAL) Alone... The Borg ship is gone. RIKER (V.O.) First Officer's Log, Stardate 43999.1. The Borg ship has resumed its course toward Earth. We are unable to pursue pending repairs to the Enterprise. 9 INT. OBSERVATION LOUNGE (OPTICAL) Riker, Geordi, Troi, Worf, Beverly and Shelby. Admiral Hanson is on the viewscreen; he is in his Ready Room on a Galaxy Starship. RIKER ... and as we anticipated, the blast burned out the main navigational deflector... we also have damage to shields and the reactor core. GEORDI We should be back up in eight to twelve hours, Admiral. Hanson frowns, acknowledges... HANSON Well, we'll miss you at the party. RIKER The Enterprise will be there, sir. Maybe a little late. But we'll be there. HANSON Your engagements gave us valuable time. We've mobilized a fleet of forty starships at Wolf 359 and that's just for starters... the Klingons are sending warships... Hell, we've even thought about opening communications with the Romulans... STAR TREK: "Worlds" Part Two - REV. 7/10/90 - ACT ONE 5. 9 CONTINUED: SHELBY You realize, Admiral, that with the assistance of Picard, the Borg will be prepared for your defenses. Hanson takes a long beat as though he's considering the dreadful ramifications of this fact. But that's not what he's thinking about at all. He finally speaks. HANSON Lieutenant... a few years ago, I watched a freshman cadet pass four upper classman on the last hill of the forty kilometer run on Danula Two... damndest thing I ever saw... only freshman to ever win the Academy marathon. I made it my business to get to know that young fellow... got to know him very very well... I'll tell ya, I've never known anyone with more drive, determination or more courage than Jean-Luc Picard. There's no way in hell he would assist the Borg. I want that clear. SHELBY Of course, Admiral... HANSON He is a casualty of war. BEVERLY Then... we have abandoned all hope of recovering him. HANSON (reluctantly acknowledges) In less than twenty-four hours, this armada's going to hit that Borg vessel with everything we can muster. Either they survive or we do. As for Picard... (beat) A great man has been lost. Your Captain. My friend. He sighs, looks down a beat and then up. STAR TREK: "Worlds" Part Two - REV. 7/3/90 - ACT ONE 6. 9 CONTINUED: (2) HANSON Commander Riker... I hereby promote you to the field commission of Captain. Push in on Riker... HANSON The Enterprise is your ship now. Congratulations. I wish the circumstances were different. RIKER Good luck, Admiral. HANSON To us all. He signs off. 10 EXT. SPACE - THE BORG SHIP (OPTICAL) warping toward Earth. 11 INT. BORG SHIP Moving down a row... no activity... the Borg are in their regenerative state, in their compartments... finding Locutus in a compartment, 'asleep'... a shudder crosses his face as though a nightmare has invaded his mind... suddenly his eyes open in a panic... 12 MATTE SHOT - THE BORG SHIP INTERIOR (OPTICAL) An agonizing human cry echoes through the chamber... 13 A BORG IN HIS COMPARTMENT reacts to the commotion... methodically EXITS and moves to Locutus, who resists his efforts to restrain him... another Borg joins them... together they escort him out of his compartment... 14 INT. BORG OPERATING ROOM - MONTAGE SEQUENCE (OPTICAL) Small and no different than any other area of the ship except there is a medical table... STAR TREK: "Worlds" Part Two - REV. 7/3/90 - ACT ONE 7. 14 CONTINUED: Locutus is lying on his back, conscious as one Borg prepares to use a long, probing implant device to add a bio-chip... another Borg prepares a huge mechanical arm to attach... and as we slowly push in to Locutus' face... and into his eye... a single tear is in one corner... and as the operation commences, his eyes close and after a beat, slowly, the color in his human face begins to drain further and further away until he is ashen white. 15 INT. CAPTAIN'S READY ROOM Riker stands at the window, now wearing a Captain's rank, looks around... moves closer to Picard's desk... and studies the empty chair... and it is a symbol of the man... and he cannot bring himself to sit there. So he sits in the chair he always sits in... facing the Captain's desk. A chime. He reacts... stands... RIKER Come. Troi ENTERS. Riker is glad to see her, smiles, warm. RIKER Hi. TROI You wanted to see me? And already it's different between them... he is the Captain now and that inherently creates an emotional barrier. RIKER How's the crew? TROI Throwing themselves into the work to be done... the emotional impact hasn't been fully realized yet... RIKER (understands) I guess Starfleet training kicks in and takes over... STAR TREK: "Worlds" Part Two - REV. 7/6/90 - ACT ONE 8. 15 CONTINUED: TROI (acknowledges) We know the risks, tell ourselves we're prepared for the consequences... and yet, something like this cuts deeper than we can admit at first. He was our Captain. It's like losing the leader of a nation or the head of a family. RIKER (a beat) He was more of a father to me than my own. Troi nods sympathetically... RIKER When I saw him like that... mutilated... TROI You did what you had to do... nobody doubts your love for him... RIKER Was there any part of him left, Deanna? TROI (slow) Yes. I can still sense his humanity RIKER (looks down) Then you must have sensed his pain... Her silence tells him she does. RIKER I don't envy your abilities. He cannot stay with the intensity of this moment... Breaking the tension -- STAR TREK: "Worlds" Part Two - REV. 7/6/90 - ACT ONE 9. 15 CONTINUED: (2) RIKER I'd better check on the progress of our repairs... (beat) There won't be any changes... as far as I'm concerned it's his ship, his crew... and everything we do, every battle we fight, it's for him. (beat, warm) I'm glad you're here to help me with this. TROI Thank you, Captain. And as they both realize their intimacy will be never quite the same again. RIKER (dismissed) Counselor... Their eyes say more than their words. And as she leaves, we stay a beat on him as he begins to realize it's lonely at the top and he glances once more at -- 16 THE DESK and the empty chair... where he still has not been seated. 17 INT. TURBOLIFT as it opens and Riker and Worf ENTER. RIKER ... and Mister Crusher has suggested a chip might be designed that will automatically retune phasers to a random setting after each discharge... WORF That would be a great advantage. STAR TREK: "Worlds" Part Two - REV. 7/13/90 - ACT ONE 10. 17 CONTINUED: RIKER We should also see if we can find some way to neutralize their forcefields, Worf... we've got to show them we can adapt too. (to com) Engineering. (continuing to Worf) We're not just fighting the Borg anymore... we're fighting the life experience they've stolen from Captain Picard... how the hell do we defeat an enemy that knows us better than we know ourselves... ? WORF The Borg have neither honor nor courage... that is our greatest advantage. RIKER I hope it's enough. STAR TREK: "Worlds" Part Two - REV. 7/13/90 - ACT ONE 11. 17 CONTINUED: (2) The doors open. They EXIT... 18 OMITTED 19 INT. ENGINEERING The warp reactor where Geordi and Shelby are supervising repairs, checking panels, sensors... GEORDI Engine control processors are back up... SHELBY Accelerator coils are responding normally... GEORDI Forward shields at fifty-eight percent... aft shields -- (reacts as he studies sensors) Sensors must be down... SHELBY Checking... sensors are fine... no, aft shields have completely failed... dammit... auxiliary generators are out again... Riker and Worf ENTER. Seeing Worf -- STAR TREK: "Worlds" Part Two - REV. 7/27/90 - ACT ONE 11A. CONTINUED: GEORDI Just the man I need. (to Riker) We're having problems with the aft shields... generators are going on and off line... I could use your help, Worf... Riker nods his approval. Geordi and Worf start to move... STAR TREK: "Worlds" Part Two - REV. 7/2/90 - ACT ONE 12. 19 CONTINUED: RIKER How soon do we get underway, Geordi? GEORDI Still a couple hours... Commander Shelby can fill you in... Geordi and Worf EXIT... Riker and Shelby are alone... the first time they've been alone since the big Turbolift argument... and the tension of their relationship hangs over the scene. SHELBY The main navigational deflector is functional again... Sherbourne and Barclay are running through the final testing sequence now... RIKER The warp reactor core? SHELBY Reconstruction is proceeding normally... it's slow work. If we can nail down this shield generator problem, I agree with La Forge... we should be at operating capacity in two or three hours... RIKER Good. An uncomfortable beat of silence as they study each other... SHELBY Anything else, sir? RIKER Yes. You did a good job on the Borg ship. SHELBY I didn't get Picard. RIKER You stopped them. You gave us our shot. STAR TREK: "Worlds" Part Two - REV. 7/2/90 - ACT ONE 13. 19 CONTINUED: (2) Shelby realizes that Riker is being extraordinarily generous and she appreciates it. About to apologize for her earlier attitude -- SHELBY Sir... RIKER Commander, we don't have to like each other to work well together. In fact, I expect you to continue to keep me on my toes. SHELBY (quick) Some might define that as the role of a first officer. Riker reacts, frowns... RIKER Damn, you are ambitious, aren't you, Shelby... SHELBY Yes. Riker shakes his head, almost smiles. She does have chutzpa. SHELBY (continuing) Captain Riker, based on our past relationship, there's no reason I should expect to become your first officer... except you need me. I know how to get things done. And I have the expertise in the Borg... RIKER You also have a lot to learn, Commander. SHELBY (beat, taking it as a rejection) Yessir. STAR TREK: "Worlds" Part Two - REV. 7/2/90 - ACT ONE 14. 19 CONTINUED: (3) RIKER (beat) Almost as much as I had to learn when I came aboard as Captain Picard's first officer. He reminded me of that fact when I commented on what a pain in the neck you are. SHELBY (relieved) Yessir. DATA'S COM VOICE Data to Riker. Message from Starfleet, Captain. RIKER Go ahead, Data. DATA'S COM VOICE Starfleet reports it has engaged the Borg at Wolf 359. On Riker's reaction... 20 thru OMITTED 25 26 INT. ENTERPRISE MAIN BRIDGE Riker ENTERING in a hurry from the Turbolift. Data, Wesley and supernumeraries. DATA Admiral Hanson on subspace, Captain... RIKER On screen. 27 ANGLE (OPTICAL) Hanson's image on screen... he's on a Battle Bridge at Red Alert... reception is breaking up... his ship is clearly in battle... some shaking... RIKER Admiral... STAR TREK: "Worlds" Part Two - REV. 7/2/90 - ACT ONE 15. 27 CONTINUED: HANSON (calm but worried) The fight does not go well, Enterprise... we're attempting to withdraw and regroup. Rendezvous with fleet... Transmission ends suddenly... subspace hiss and snow fills the screen... on Riker's reaction... FADE OUT. END OF ACT ONE STAR TREK: "Worlds" Part Two - REV. 7/6/90 - ACT TWO 16. ACT TWO FADE IN: 28 EXT. SPACE - THE ENTERPRISE (OPTICAL) warping. RIKER (V.O.) Captain's Log, Stardate 44000.3. Repairs are complete. The Enterprise is warping to rendezvous with Starfleet at Wolf 359. Subspace communications from the site of battle have been cut off possibly by Borg interference. 29 INT. OBSERVATION LOUNGE Riker, Data, Geordi, Beverly, Shelby, Worf, Troi. RIKER Lieutenant Worf, everyone at this table shares my respect for your service to this ship. But right now, I need your experience at tactical... Mister Data, I realize that your very nature omits ambition. Nevertheless, I want you to know I thought seriously about you as first officer as well... DATA Thank you, sir... RIKER But this is not a time for change. I need you all where you are, where Captain Picard always relied on you. (with some tongue-in-cheek) I have been... reluctantly... forced to conclude that Commander Shelby, our expert on the Borg, is the ideal choice at this time for first officer. STAR TREK: "Worlds" Part Two - REV. 7/2/90 - ACT TWO 17. 29 CONTINUED: Shelby has softened a bit by now, appreciates the humor at her expense... the staff nods congratulations. On to business... RIKER Based on our last communication, we have to assume the Borg have survived the fleet's attack... your thoughts on our next encounter... SHELBY What about the heavy graviton beam we were talking about... ? GEORDI I've gone over it four times... The local field distortion just wouldn't be strong enough to incapacitate them... DATA Doctor Crusher and I have been working on an interesting premise... BEVERLY With our recent experience in nanotechnology, we might be able to introduce a destructive breed of nanite to the Borg... SHELBY Nanites? DATA Robots small enough to enter living cells. RIKER How much time would it take to execute this... BEVERLY That's the problem. Two, three weeks. TROI In two or three weeks, nanites may be all that's left of the Federation. STAR TREK: "Worlds" Part Two - REV. 7/3/90 - ACT TWO 18. 29 CONTINUED: (2) There's an ominous silence as the ideas run out. WORF We have the new phaser adapters... GEORDI (grim) Perhaps in concert with photon torpedoes... we can slow them down... But this is a crew with little hope and ultimately all eyes turn to their Captain. A long beat as Riker feels the responsibility of command. RIKER I'm sure Captain Picard would have something meaningful and inspiring to say right now. And to tell you the truth, I wish he were here to say it, cause I'd like to hear it, too. 30 ANGLE - THE FACES around the table. RIKER (O.C.) (continuing) I know how difficult this transition is for all of you. I can take over for him, but I can never replace Captain Picard and would never hope to... 31 RIKER And in that moment, Riker wonders as he looks around the table whether he's reaching them... RIKER (a beat) Whatever the outcome, I know our efforts in the coming battle will justify the faith he had in all of us. (beat, bailing out) Dismissed. As they rise to leave... STAR TREK: "Worlds" Part Two - REV. 7/3/90 - ACT TWO 19. 32 INT. CAPTAIN'S READY ROOM Riker ENTERS, frustrated, not sure what the hell he's going to do, not pleased with the way he handled the meeting... once more he looks at -- 33 ANGLE - THE DESK with no one behind it... 34 RIKER RIKER What would you do? A chime. RIKER Come in. The door opens to reveal Guinan. She ENTERS. GUINAN May I speak to you, Captain? RIKER (reluctant) Well, actually Guinan... right now, I... GUINAN (will not be denied) Picard and I used to talk... now and again, when one of us needed to... I guess I'm just used to having the Captain's ear... And sacrilege as it might be, she sits behind the desk in the Captain's chair. Riker reacts. GUINAN I hope I'm not imposing. Riker studies her, let's get this over with. RIKER What's on your mind? STAR TREK: "Worlds" Part Two - REV. 7/3/90 - ACT TWO 20. 34 CONTINUED: GUINAN I've heard a lot of people talking down in Ten Forward... They expect to be dead in the next day or two. It is said casually, stating a fact... A beat as Riker studies her, wonders what she's getting at. GUINAN (continuing) They like you, Riker. They trust you. But they don't believe anyone can save them. RIKER (defensive) I'm not sure anyone can. GUINAN The way I see things, if a man is convinced he's gonna die tomorrow, he'll probably find some way to make it happen. (beat) The only one who can turn that around... is you. Riker has had just about enough of this tutoring session with the bartender... RIKER (with an edge) I'll do the best I can. GUINAN You'll have to do something you don't want to do. (off his look) Let go of Picard. RIKER (calmly angry) Maybe you didn't hear -- yesterday, I tried to kill him. GUINAN You tried to kill whatever that is on the Borg ship. Not Picard. Picard is still here, still in the room with us. (MORE) STAR TREK: "Worlds" Part Two - REV. 7/3/90 - ACT TWO 21. 34 CONTINUED: (2) GUINAN (Cont'd) (beat) If he had just died, it would be easier. But he's been taken from us a piece at a time. They study each other a long beat. Both feel the loss intensely. GUINAN Did he ever tell you why we were so close? RIKER No. GUINAN Then I'm not going to tell you either. But it was beyond friendship, beyond family... and I will let him go. You must, too. (beat) There can only be one Captain. RIKER It's not that simple... This was his crew... he wrote the book on this ship... GUINAN And the Borg know everything he knows... RIKER Yes... GUINAN Then, it's time to throw the book away. (beat) You must let him go, Riker. It's the only way to beat him... the only way to save him. He reacts. She stands. GUINAN This chair is yours. And she EXITS. After a beat, he slowly moves to the empty chair and sits down. STAR TREK: "Worlds" Part Two - REV. 7/9/90 - ACT TWO 22. 35 OMITTED 36 INT. MAIN BRIDGE Data, Wesley, Shelby, Worf and supernumeraries are on the Bridge. Shelby wears Commander rank pips. WESLEY (on com) Captain, we're approaching the Wolf system. RIKER'S COM VOICE On my way. Riker ENTERS from the Ready Room. RIKER Slow to impulse. Take us to the battle coordinates, Ensign... yellow alert... WORF Sensors are picking up several vessels, Captain... RIKER The fleet? DATA (checking) There are no active subspace fields... Negligible power readings... RIKER Lifesigns? DATA Negative, sir. WORF Visual contact. RIKER On screen. 37 ANGLE - VIEWSCREEN (OPTICAL) and the Bridge crew reacts with horror as they see the wreckage of the Starfleet armada... it is like Pearl Harbor. Passing by one dead ship after another... STAR TREK: "Worlds" Part Two - REV. 7/9/90 - ACT TWO 23. 38 TWO SHOT - RIKER AND SHELBY as she recognizes and calls out the names... and slow push to Riker... SHELBY The Chekhov... The Kyushu... The Melbourne... On Riker's face... 39 EXT. SPACE - THE ENTERPRISE (OPTICAL) as it passes through the cemetery of dead ships... FADE OUT. END OF ACT TWO STAR TREK: "Worlds" Part Two - REV. 7/9/90 - ACT THREE 24. ACT THREE FADE IN: 40 EXT. SPACE - THE ENTERPRISE (OPTICAL) at impulse, going through the devastation as before. 41 INT. MAIN BRIDGE WORF Sir, sensors are picking up unusually strong magnetic eddy currents, bearing two-zero-zero, mark two-one-one. RIKER Data, your analysis... DATA It could indicate the course of the Borg ship... RIKER Ensign Crusher, set a course that follows those currents... WESLEY Aye, Captain. RIKER Commander Shelby, you will prepare to initiate your plan of separating the saucer section when we find the Borg. SHELBY Sir. I must remind you that Captain Picard was briefed on that plan... the Borg will be prepared for it... RIKER I'm aware of that, Commander. In fact, I'm counting on it. She reacts... SHELBY Crusher, Cartaino, Gleason -- report to the Battle Bridge... STAR TREK: "Worlds" Part Two - REV. 7/3/90 - ACT THREE 25. 41 CONTINUED: As the regulars are replaced at their posts by supernumeraries... on the move... RIKER Mister Data and Mister Worf, I have a special mission for you... 42 EXT. SPACE - THE BORG SHIP (OPTICAL) at Warp. 43 INT. BORG SHIP (OPTICAL) Locutus is escorted, almost like a pet dog on a "heel" command, to the area near the center chamber where communication takes place... he is less Picard than he was before... more Borg... The facial color is gone... a huge Borg arm has been added... as he positions himself -- 43A ANGLE (OPTICAL) a wide viewscreen reveals a small image of a ship approaching... an effect magnifies the image to reveal it as The Enterprise. 44 LOCUTUS reacts... over his face -- RIKER'S VOICE Locutus of Borg, this is Captain William T. Riker of the U.S.S. Enterprise. 45 ANGLE - THE VIEWSCREEN - RIKER'S IMAGE (OPTICAL) from the Battle Bridge... LOCUTUS You may speak. INTERCUT: STAR TREK: "Worlds" Part Two - REV. 7/12/90 - ACT THREE 26. 46 INT. BATTLE BRIDGE (OPTICAL) Riker, Wesley at Conn, GLEASON at Ops, others as needed. Shelby, Data and Worf are notably absent. RIKER We wish to end the hostilities. LOCUTUS Then you must unconditionally surrender. RIKER We are prepared to meet to discuss your terms. LOCUTUS (a beat) It is unlikely that you are prepared to discuss terms. It is more likely that this is an attempt at deception. RIKER Come now, Locutus, if Picard's knowledge and experience is part of you, then you know I have never lied to him... in fact, you should implicitly trust me, is that not so? Locutus is having difficulty processing Riker's routine... LOCUTUS Picard implicitly trusted you. RIKER Then trust me now. Meet with me to discuss terms. The Borg influence takes over in Locutus. STAR TREK: "Worlds" Part Two - REV. 7/9/90 - ACT THREE 27. 46 CONTINUED: LOCUTUS Discussion is irrelevant. There are no terms. You will disarm all weapons and escort us to sector zero-zero-one where we will begin the assimilation of your culture and technology. Riker turns away from the screen... signals to cut off transmission... RIKER Mister Gleason, can you pinpoint the Borg's source of transmission? GLEASON (acknowledging) I can put you within thirty meters of it, sir... RIKER (to comm) Mister O'Brien, report... INTERCUT: 47 INT. TRANSPORTER ROOM O'Brien with Data and Worf... O'BRIEN The Borg have adapted their electromagnetic field to prevent main Transporter functions, sir... RIKER (to comm) As expected. Mister Data and Mister Worf, you will proceed as we discussed... DATA Aye, Captain... Data and Worf each don an armpack. 48 INT. BORG SHIP (OPTICAL) Locutus at the viewscreen. Riker turns back, reopens communications. STAR TREK: "Worlds" Part Two - REV. 7/9/90 - ACT THREE 28. 48 CONTINUED: RIKER We would like time to prepare our people for assimilation. LOCUTUS Preparation is irrelevant. Your people will be assimilated as easily as Picard has been. 49 INT. BATTLE BRIDGE (OPTICAL) RIKER Does it involve a lot of needles... because I just hate needles... LOCUTUS Your attempt at a delay will not be successful, Number One. We will proceed to Earth and if you attempt to intervene we will destroy you. RIKER Take your best shot, Locutus, cause we're about to intervene. Cuts off communication... Starfield and the Borg ship return to the viewscreen. RIKER Reset subspace communications to scrambler code Riker One... GLEASON Scrambler code Riker One, acknowledged. RIKER (to com) Commander Shelby, report... INTERCUT: 50 INT. MAIN BRIDGE Shelby at command with supernumeraries at other posts. STAR TREK: "Worlds" Part Two - REV. 7/9/90 - ACT THREE 29. 50 CONTINUED: SHELBY Ready for separation. RIKER Make it so. 51 EXT. SPACE - THE ENTERPRISE (OPTICAL) The separation begins... 51A INT. ENGINEERING GEORDI Docking latches clear, separation complete... 52 INT. BATTLE BRIDGE WESLEY Saucer velocity one hundred meters per second and increasing. RIKER Open fire... all weapons... 53 INT. MAIN BRIDGE SHELBY Fire... 54 INT. BORG SHIP (OPTICAL) Locutus watches the two separating parts of the Enterprise and this is nothing unexpected... the viewscreen scanners promptly focus on the battle section because Locutus knows that's where the power is... 55 EXT. SPACE - THE BORG SHIP (OPTICAL) reaches out its tractor beam toward the battle section... STAR TREK: "Worlds" Part Two - REV. 7/9/90 - ACT THREE 29A. 56 INT. BATTLE BRIDGE WESLEY Borg tractor beam attempting to lock on, Captain... 135:[1,#b] STAR TREK: "Worlds" Part Two - REV. 7/9/90 - ACT THREE 30. 56 CONTINUED: RIKER Evasive manuevers... pattern Riker Alpha... WESLEY Riker Alpha, confirmed... 57 EXT. SPACE - THE BATTLE SECTION (OPTICAL) moving quickly by... 58 INT. BATTLE BRIDGE WESLEY They're ignoring the saucer section completely... RIKER (murmering toward the Borg ship) Just as you should, Captain... Ensign, evasive pattern, Riker Beta... WESLEY Riker Beta, confirmed... RIKER (to comm) Commander Shelby, proceed with second phase... 59 INT. MAIN BRIDGE SHELBY Acknowledged. (to tactical officer) Fire antimatter spread... 60 EXT. SPACE - THE SAUCER SECTION (OPTICAL) Fires a spread of antimatter pellets exploding in a spectacular display toward the Borg ship... 61 INT. BORG SHIP (OPTICAL) As the viewscreen pans toward the saucer section, Locutus and other Borg look at the antimatter display... and this is unexpected... STAR TREK: "Worlds" Part Two - REV. 7/9/90 - ACT THREE 31. 62 INT. BATTLE BRIDGE Pushing to Riker... RIKER Launch shuttle... 63 INT. SHUTTLE Data and Worf inside... DATA Shuttle launch sequence confirmed... departing Enterprise in three seconds... 64 EXT. SPACE - THE ENTERPRISE SAUCER SECTION (OPTICAL) As the shuttle leaves the ship... becoming part of the forest of anti-matter pyrotechnics... 65 INT. BORG SHIP - LOCUTUS studies what's happening... Picard's mind working unwillingly... suggesting reponses... 66 EXT. SPACE - THE BORG SHIP (OPTICAL) The Borg ship terminates the tractor beam aimed at the battle section... initiates another beam in the other direction toward the anti-matter spread. 67 INT. BATTLE BRIDGE WESLEY The Borg tractor beam has moved toward the anti-matter spread. GLEASON They might be picking up engine ionization from the shuttle... RIKER (to com) Data, cut your engines... take her in unpowered... STAR TREK: "Worlds" Part Two - REV. 7/6/90 - ACT THREE 32. 67A EXT. SPACE - THE SHUTTLE (OPTICAL) to see the shuttle moving through the antimatter field toward the Borg ship... the tractor beam sweeps by, just barely missing the shuttle. 68 INT. SHUTTLE - OVER THE SHOULDER (OPTICAL) The shuttle shakes. 69 OMITTED 70 INT. BORG SHIP - LOCUTUS watches. 71 INT. BATTLE BRIDGE Favoring Riker... WESLEY They're gonna make it... INTERCUT: 72 INT. SHUTTLE - OVER THE SHOULDER (OPTICAL) As it moves up close and personal to the Borg ship... WORF Shuttle has penetrated the Borg electromagnetic field... Data is already out of his seat... DATA (checking sensors) The shuttle escape transporter should provide adequate power to beam us onto the Borg ship from here, sir... RIKER'S COM VOICE And back, Mister Data? DATA Yessir, there should be enough energy for two transports. STAR TREK: "Worlds" Part Two - REV. 7/6/90 - ACT THREE 33. 72 CONTINUED: RIKER'S COM VOICE Proceed. Worf moves out of his chair... and joins Data by the transport unit as he punches some overhead keys and they DEMATERIALIZE... 73 INT. BORG SHIP (OPTICAL) Locutus and the Borg react as Worf and Data MATERIALIZE several meters away... Worf and Data have phasers... blast away at the Borg near-by, several go down... Locutus turns and as Worf rushes him, his forcefield goes on, but Worf and Data together spray a wide, fan-shaped phaser blast that dissolves the forcefield and Worf tackles Locutus to the ground as Data continues to cover him with phaser shots at other Borg... 74 LOCUTUS AND WORF (OPTICAL) struggle on the ground as Data comes up and sedates Locutus with a hypo... and then he hits the arm band and they DEMATERIALIZE... 75 INT. SHUTTLE (OPTICAL) They MATERIALIZE... WORF Mission accomplished... we have him... Touching a control panel: DATA Firing shuttle thrusters... 76 INT. BATTLE BRIDGE RIKER Beam them out of there, Mister O'Brien... 77 INT. TRANSPORTER ROOM O'BRIEN Locked in... STAR TREK: "Worlds" Part Two - REV. 7/2/90 - ACT THREE 34. 78 EXT. SPACE - THE BORG SHIP (OPTICAL) fires their cutting beam and obliterates the shuttle. 79 INT. TRANSPORTER ROOM (OPTICAL) Data and Worf support the unconscious Locutus as they MATERIALIZE... O'BRIEN Transport successful, sir... 80 INT. BATTLE BRIDGE On a push in to Riker's reaction... FADE OUT. END OF ACT THREE STAR TREK: "Worlds" Part Two - REV. 7/9/90 - ACT FOUR 35. ACT FOUR FADE IN: 81 EXT. SPACE - THE ENTERPRISE (OPTICAL) Still in two sections... the Borg ship is taking no offensive action. 82 INT. BATTLE BRIDGE As before. GEORDI'S COM VOICE Captain, we've sustained damage to the impulse drive... the saucer section is disabled... GLEASON Reading subspace field fluctuations from the Borg ship... looks like they're getting ready to increase power... RIKER Stand-by, La Forge... WESLEY (to himself) The saucer section... it's a sitting duck... RIKER Prepare to draw their fire... WESLEY (surprised) Captain, the Borg ship... it's moving away... 83 ANGLE - THE VIEW SCREEN (OPTICAL) As the Borg ship warps away. STAR TREK: "Worlds" Part Two - REV. 7/9/90 - ACT FOUR 36. 83 CONTINUED: WESLEY It's resuming its course to Earth, sir... RIKER Rendezvous with the saucer section... lay in a course of pursuit... 84 EXT. SPACE - THE ENTERPRISE (OPTICAL) reconnects. 85 INT. SICKBAY Picard/Borg is on an emergency medical bed... Riker watches as Beverly examines him... BEVERLY There's extensive infiltration of microcircuit fibers into the surrounding tissues... his DNA is being rewritten... RIKER Can you revive him? BEVERLY (reluctant) I'd like more time to study the structural changes in the motor pathways... RIKER Doctor, we don't have more time. Once he was wired into the Borg, they knew everything he knew. I'm hoping it goes both ways. If we're lucky, he had access to everything we need to know about them... especially their vulnerabilities. Beverly understands... uses a hypo to begin to revive him... he stirs... STAR TREK: "Worlds" Part Two - REV. 7/10/90 - ACT FOUR 37. 85 CONTINUED: BEVERLY Jean Luc... it's Beverly... can you hear me... His eye opens... LOCUTUS Beverly... Crusher... BEVERLY Yes... don't try to move... LOCUTUS I am... on board the Enterprise. RIKER That's right. LOCUTUS A futile manuever. They react. He sits up. RIKER Locutus... LOCUTUS Incorrect strategy, Number One... to risk your ship and crew... to retrieve only one man... Picard would never have approved... BEVERLY (to comm) Security... LOCUTUS You underestimate... us... to believe this... abduction would be of any concern... Worf and two security men ENTER... LOCUTUS There is no need for apprehension... I intend no harm. There is a moment where the human Picard peeks through... seems to resist but he is helpless... Almost as a plea to his own alter ego -- STAR TREK: "Worlds" Part Two - REV. 7/10/90 - ACT FOUR 37A. 85 CONTINUED: (2) LOCUTUS/PICARD No harm. Locutus continues. STAR TREK: "Worlds" Part Two - REV. 7/9/90 - ACT FOUR 38. 85 CONTINUED: (2) LOCUTUS I will continue... aboard your ship... to speak for the Borg ... as they continue... without further diversion... to sector zero zero one... where they will force your unconditional surrender. On reactions... 86 INT. MAIN BRIDGE - SCIENCE STATION Riker and Beverly looking over Data's shoulder as he works at monitors... an Okudagram showing some signal measurements... Shelby at command... Wesley at Conn. DATA Using multimodal reflection sorting, I have been able to detect a complex series of subspace signals between Locutus and the Borg ship... BEVERLY That's how they're controlling him? DATA It is not just a matter of control, Doctor. The signals are interactive across a subspace domain similar to that of a Transporter beam. I would hypothesize that these frequencies form the basis of the Borg's collective consciousness. RIKER Can't we block them? DATA Possibly. But, as you will recall, on several occasions, we have witnessed the Borg removing key circuits from injured comrades... no doubt separating them from the group consciousness. RIKER The injured Borg immediately self-destructed. STAR TREK: "Worlds" Part Two - REV. 7/3/90 - ACT FOUR 39. 86 CONTINUED: DATA That is correct, sir. BEVERLY Cutting the link to Locutus might be fatal to Captain Picard. Riker frowns... thinks... RIKER We have to find a way to reach him... we must know what he knows... BEVERLY Without these interactive signals, it would only be a matter of microsurgery... I could do it... but as long as those Borg implants are functioning, there's no way I can separate the man from the machine. DATA (beat, an idea) Then perhaps... there is a way I can access the 'machine', Doctor. Riker reacts and... 87 INT. SICKBAY Worf and the two security men watch as Picard examines Sickbay... as though he is scanning the technology... satisfied, he comes to Worf and begins to scan him... LOCUTUS Worf. Worf silently studies him, mixed feelings. LOCUTUS Klingon species. A warrior race. (beat) You too will be assimilated. WORF The Klingon Empire will never yield. STAR TREK: "Worlds" Part Two - REV. 7/2/90 - ACT FOUR 40. 87 CONTINUED: LOCUTUS Why do you resist? We only wish to raise... quality of life... for all species... WORF I like my species the way it is. LOCUTUS A narrow vision. You will... become one with the Borg. You will... all... become one with the Borg. Riker, Data and Beverly ENTER... LOCUTUS The Android... Data... primitive artificial organism... you will be obsolete in the new order... As he scans Data, Beverly comes around and hypos him in the neck, he loses consciousness... Riker and Worf grab him as he falls... RIKER (to Security men) Take him to Data's lab... SHELBY'S COM VOICE Shelby to Riker... RIKER Go ahead... SHELBY'S COM VOICE Captain, the Borg have entered sector zero-zero-one... On Riker's reaction... 88 EXT. SPACE - THE BORG SHIP (OPTICAL) As it moves by us at impulse... we follow to reveal the familiar 'Monument Valley', if you will, of our own solar system... as the Borg ship passes by Saturn... FADE OUT. END OF ACT FOUR STAR TREK: "Worlds" Part Two - REV. 7/3/90 - ACT FIVE 41. ACT FIVE FADE IN: 89 EXT. SPACE - THE ENTERPRISE (OPTICAL) still at warp. 90 INT. MAIN BRIDGE Shelby at command, Wes at conn, Riker and Worf ENTER from the Turbolift. Supernumerary at Ops. SHELBY The Borg have dropped out of warp, sir... Jupiter Outpost Nine-Two reported visual contact at twelve hundred hours, thirteen minutes... RIKER Planetary defenses? SHELBY Responding. No reports on effectiveness... but I can't believe that against the Borg... RIKER (interrupting) Mister Crusher, at their current speed, when will they reach Earth? WESLEY Twenty-seven minutes... RIKER The soonest we can intercept? WESLEY (beat, grim) Forty-two minutes, sir. RIKER (to com) Riker to Data... your status? INTERCUT: STAR TREK: "Worlds" Part Two - REV. 7/13/90 - ACT FIVE 42. 91 INT. DATA'S LABORATORY This is the set up we had in "The Offspring"... the raised biobed, the impressive technical equipment... Troi, Beverly, O'Brien and the one security man observe... Picard is off-camera... Data is working at panels... checking monitors... he is seen in profile... DATA The initial cybernetic connection into Captain Picard's neural net pathways has been established... Mister O'Brien is ready to process the Borg signal through the transport pattern buffer. RIKER Make it so. And with dispatch, Mister Data... As Data turns, he reveals an open panel on his head... DATA Proceeding immediately, sir. Data out. Over the above, Data has hit a series of panels and now... STAR TREK: "Worlds" Part Two - REV. 7/13/90 - ACT FIVE 43. 92 ANGLE - THE BIOBED begins to lower... revealing Locutus, still unconscious, stripped of clothes, his hideous mutilation clearly exposed... transfers are patched to the Borg side of him... Data moves into position beside him and begins to attach himself to the biobed transfer device... DATA The neural link will be established in three stages... Doctor, I suggest you closely observe Captain Picard's lifesigns while Chief O'Brien monitors my positronic matrix activity at each stage... Counselor, hopefully you will be able to determine if I am reaching Captain Picard. O'BRIEN At what point should I shut it down if there's a problem? DATA I do not know. I have never done this before. (touching a series of panels) Initating first neural link... 93 BEVERLY at monitors with human lifesigns displayed... BEVERLY The Captain's vital signs are stable... 94 O'BRIEN looking at an Okudagram... O'BRIEN Positronic activity unchanged... STAR TREK: "Worlds" Part Two - REV. 7/2/90 - ACT FIVE 44. 95 RESUME - DATA DATA First neural connection is confirmed... I cannot report any significant access to the Borg consciousness... He glances at Troi who shakes her head, no... 96 EXT. SPACE - THE BORG SHIP (OPTICAL) moving by Mars... unmanned pods attack it... the Borg ship destroys them easily... moves on... and now we reveal their final destination... the familiar shape of Earth straight ahead... 97 INT. MAIN BRIDGE WORF It is confirmed... the Borg have broken through the Mars defense perimeter... WESLEY Enterprise approaching the Terran system, sir... RIKER Slow to impulse... time to intercept... WESLEY Twenty-three minutes, fourteen seconds, sir. 98 EXT. SPACE - THE ENTERPRISE (OPTICAL) at impulse power moving by Saturn... 99 INT. DATA'S LABORATORY DATA Second neural connection is confirmed... I still cannot report any significant access... proceeding with the final link... He pushes a series of panels... and this time the result is dramatic... there is a visible jolt to Picard... STAR TREK: "Worlds" Part Two - REV. 7/9/90 - ACT FIVE 45. 100 BEVERLY reacts... checking her monitor... BEVERLY Significant increase in premotor area and hypothalamus activity... his heartrate is accelerating rapidly... 101 O'BRIEN watching his sensors... O'BRIEN Sir, your submicron matrix activity is increasing exponentially. Data is absorbing information at an incredible rate... like an internal blastoff... DATA Neural connections are complete. I... have... access to the Borg subspace signals... Processing... processing... TROI Data... DATA Stand by... processing... O'Brien looks at Beverly with great concern... DATA Fascinating. The Borg group consciousness... is divided into subcommands... necessary to carry out all functions... communications, defense, navigation... they are all controlled... by a root command... implanted in each -- Suddenly... 102 THE BORG ARM on Picard rises and attempts to disengage the connections on the biobed... STAR TREK: "Worlds" Part Two - REV. 7/13/90 - ACT FIVE 46. 103 THE SECURITY MAN charges forward... and the arm pushes them easily off the biobed... it moves back toward the connections, but 104 DATA grabs the Borg hand and holds it back from the controls using his extraordinary strength... 105 THE TWO ARMS locked in a symbolic arm wrestle for control of Picard... and finally after straining at both ends, Data wins by breaking the arm off at the wrist joint... 105A THE BROKEN BORG 'HAND' continues to move in Data's hand... 106 RESUME SCENE BEVERLY Data, I'm picking up increased neural activity in Captain Picard... localized in the prefrontal and parietal lobes... O'BRIEN The Borg might be trying to terminate their link with him... DATA Negative... subspace signal configuration is unchanged. The cause of increased neural activity is unclear... TROI No, it's not... it's him... Slowly... STAR TREK: "Worlds" Part Two - REV. 7/9/90 - ACT FIVE 47. 107 PICARD'S HUMAN ARM is reaching out, his hand struggling to find -- finally grasping -- Data's wrist and holds it tightly... clinging to life... a first contact with the human... 108 REACTIONS from Data... Beverly... O'Brien... 109 INT. MAIN BRIDGE TROI'S COM VOICE Troi to Bridge. Data has made first contact with Captain Picard... RIKER Can you communicate with him, Data? DATA'S COM VOICE I have been unable to create a neural path around the Borg implants, sir... it is Captain Picard himself who has somehow managed to initiate contact... WORF Sir, the Borg have halted their approach to Earth... SHELBY I think we got their attention... RIKER Time to intercept... ? WESLEY Two minutes, four seconds... RIKER They're worried... they're worried that we've got access to Picard... we've got two minutes to figure out what we can do with it... INTERCUT: STAR TREK: "Worlds" Part Two - REV. 7/9/90 - ACT FIVE 48. 110 INT. DATA'S LABORATORY DATA Sir, it is clear the Borg are unable or unwilling to terminate their subspace links... BEVERLY That may be their achilles heel, Captain... their interdependency... RIKER What do you mean, Doctor? BEVERLY He's part of their collective consciousness... Cutting him off is like asking us to disconnect an arm or a foot... we can't do it. SHELBY (extrapolating) They operate as a single mind... RIKER If one jumps off the cliff... they all jump off the cliff... (to com) Data, is it possible to plant a command in the Borg collective consciousness... DATA It is conceivable, sir... it would require altering the pathways from the root command, to affect all iterative branchpoints in... RIKER (interrupting) Make every effort, Mister Data... DATA What command shall I try to plant, sir... ? RIKER Something straightforward... like 'disarm your weapons systems'... STAR TREK: "Worlds" Part Two - REV. 7/9/90 - ACT FIVE 49. 110 CONTINUED: WORF Visual contact with the Borg... SHELBY On screen. 111 ANGLE - THE VIEWSCREEN (OPTICAL) to see the Borg ship long range... Earth in the background. RIKER Magnify. The image is magnified... WORF Sensors reading increased power generation from the Borg... RIKER Red alert. Load all torpedo bays... ready phasers... WORF Aye, Captain... RIKER Status of the Borg weapons... WORF Borg weapon systems are fully charged... RIKER Data... ? INTERCUT: 112 INT. DATA'S LABORATORY DATA Attempting to reroute subcommand paths, Captain... defense systems are protected by access barriers... STAR TREK: "Worlds" Part Two - REV. 7/9/90 - ACT FIVE 50. 112 CONTINUED: Panning down to find Picard's hand still holding on to Data's wrist... 113 EXT. SPACE - THE ENTERPRISE (OPTICAL) and the Borg squaring off one last time with Earth as the backdrop... the Borg ship sends out their tractor beam... 114 INT. MAIN BRIDGE The ship shakes... WORF Borg attempting to lock on tractor beam... RIKER Rotate shield frequencies... (to com) Data, report... INTERCUT: 115 INT. DATA'S LABORATORY Shaking continuing... DATA I am unable to penetrate defense systems command structure, Captain... SHELBY Try the power systems, Data... see if you can get them to power down... DATA Acknowledged... attempting new power subcommand path... 116 ANGLE - PICARD shaking with the ship... stirring... STAR TREK: "Worlds" Part Two - REV. 7/27/90 - ACT FIVE 51. INT. ENGINEERING - GEORDI at a console... GEORDI Shields have failed... INT. MAIN BRIDGE RIKER Fire all weapons. EXT. SPACE - THE ENTERPRISE (OPTICAL) once again in the grips of the Borg tractor beam... firing at will... but it is a hopeless cause... INT. DATA'S LABORATORY DATA I cannot penetrate the Borg power subcommand structure... all critical subcommands are protected, Captain... INTERCUT: INT. MAIN BRIDGE Close on Riker as the truth sets in... SHELBY Then it's over. RIKER Mister Crusher, ready a collision course with the Borg ship... Wesley reacts, turns and looks for confirmation... Repeating -- RIKER (quietly) You heard me. A collision course. WESLEY Yessir. RIKER Mister La Forge, prepare to go to warp power... STAR TREK: "Worlds" Part Two - REV. 7/9/90 - ACT FIVE 51A. 122 INT. DATA'S LABORATORY Picard groans, whispers... PICARD Sleep. STAR TREK: "Worlds" Part Two - REV. 7/9/90 - ACT FIVE 52. 122 CONTINUED: And it is only by sheer force of will, the power of the man, that Picard is able to reach through the control of the Borg consciousness... and whisper this word... BEVERLY Data, he's regaining consciousness... PICARD Sleep. TROI (reacts) It is Captain Picard speaking, not Locutus. PICARD Sleep. Data. And then under extreme pressure, his will is suppressed and he loses consciousness... BEVERLY He's exhausted. DATA Yes, Doctor... but if I may make a supposition, I believe his message was not intended to express fatigue but to suggest a course of action. 123 INT. MAIN BRIDGE WORF Borg cutting beam activated... And Captain Riker prepares to give the last fateful order of his short but colorful career... RIKER Mister Crusher, en... DATA'S COM VOICE Data to Bridge... stand by... RIKER Stand by all stations... STAR TREK: "Worlds" Part Two - REV. 7/2/90 - ACT FIVE 53. 123 CONTINUED: DATA'S COM VOICE I am attempting to penetrate the Borg regenerative subcommand path... it is a low priority system and may be accessible... 124 EXT. SPACE - THE ENTERPRISE (OPTICAL) The Borg cutting beam reaches out to the Enterprise... 125 INT. MAIN BRIDGE Crack of impact... a dreadful shake... COMPUTER VOICE Warning. Outer hull breach. WORF Sir... shall I execute evacuation sequence... RIKER Negative, Mister Worf... Mister Data, your final report... DATA'S COM VOICE Stand by... RIKER I can't, Mister Data... COMPUTER VOICE Warning. Inner hull failure imminent on decks twenty-three, twenty-four, and twenty-five... Decompression danger... 126 EXT. SPACE - THE ENTERPRISE (OPTICAL) Suddenly, the attack simply ends. 127 INT. MAIN BRIDGE Reactions. STAR TREK: "Worlds" Part Two - REV. 7/3/90 - ACT FIVE 54. 127 CONTINUED: RIKER Data? What the hell happened? INTERCUT: 128 INT. DATA'S LABORATORY DATA I successfully planted a command in the Borg collective consciousness, sir. It misdirected them to believe it was time to regenerate. In effect, I put them all to sleep. 129 INT. MAIN BRIDGE Reactions. RIKER To... sleep. DATA Yessir. RIKER Status of Borg power drive... ? WORF Minimal power... RIKER Electromagnetic field? WORF Nonexistent. RIKER (reacts) Commander Shelby, take an away team and confirm that the Borg... are... asleep. SHELBY Delighted, sir. As she EXITS... STAR TREK: "Worlds" Part Two - REV. 7/9/90 - ACT FIVE 55. 130 INT. BORG SHIP (OPTICAL) Shelby, Worf and Gleason MATERIALIZE... They examine the Borg... who are all in their compartments... SHELBY (keys insignia) Shelby to Enterprise. It's true. They're all in their regeneration mode. INTERCUT: 131 INT. ENTERPRISE CORRIDOR Riker on the move... RIKER (keying insignia) Any indication to how long we can keep them like this... 132 INT. BORG SHIP SHELBY Checking... WORF (to Shelby) Commander, tricorder readings are fluctuating rapidly... Shelby comes over... reacts... SHELBY Enterprise... there are indications here that their entire power net's about to feed back on itself. I'd say we're looking at a self-destruct sequence activated by the Borg's malfunction... do you want us to attempt to disarm it... 133 INT. DATA'S LABORATORY Riker has just entered... Beverly has heard. Data is still tied up with Picard... STAR TREK: "Worlds" Part Two - REV. 7/10/90 - ACT FIVE 56. 133 CONTINUED: BEVERLY There's no way to know what the destruction of the Borg ship will do to him... DATA We should also consider the advantages of further examination of the Borg and their vessel, sir. RIKER (beat) I don't think so. Mister Data, separate yourself from Captain Picard. Data follows the order as -- RIKER (keys insignia) Away Team, get yourselves home. Mister Crusher, upon their return move us to a safe position. And as Beverly watches with a personal concern, Data gently removes Picard's hand from his wrist... 134 EXT. SPACE - THE ENTERPRISE (OPTICAL) The Enterprise moves away and... the Borg ship explodes... in several decentralized small bursts. INTERCUTTING: 135 INT. DATA'S LABORATORY Picard shudders... 135A THE BORG SHIP blows apart. 135B PICARD lies still... After a long beat, his eyes open... he smiles weakly... STAR TREK: "Worlds" Part Two - REV. 7/18/90 - ACT FIVE 57. 135B CONTINUED: BEVERLY Life signs are stable... the DNA around the microcircuit fiber implants is returning to normal... TROI How do you feel? With a voice hoarse from fatigue... PICARD Almost human. (smiles slightly) With a bit of a headache... BEVERLY We'll get you to Sickbay... (to Riker) We won't have any trouble getting these implants out now. RIKER (to Picard) How much do you remember? PICARD Everything. (beat) Including some brilliantly unorthodox strategy by a former first officer of mine. There's a special look between them and... 136 EXT. SPACE - THE ENTERPRISE (OPTICAL) Orbiting Earth. 137 INT. CAPTAIN'S READY ROOM Picard has had his surgery... his face is half-bandaged... he is back in uniform. With him is Riker, still wearing his Captain's pips. STAR TREK: "Worlds" Part Two - REV. 7/6/90 - ACT FIVE 58. 137 CONTINUED: RIKER ... and Earth Station McKinley has advised they're ready to begin refitting the Enterprise. PICARD Have they estimated the time for repairs... ? RIKER Five to six weeks... A chime. PICARD & RIKER Come. They glance at each other as Shelby ENTERS... slightly confused... moves to Riker... SHELBY Request permission to disembark, sir... Riker defers to Picard, thereby clearly relinquishing command. PICARD Permission granted. They picked a fine officer for the task force, Commander. SHELBY We'll have the fleet back up in less than a year... (to Riker) I... imagine you'll get your choice of any Starfleet command, sir... Riker grins, exuding confidence... RIKER Everyone's so concerned about my next job. With all due respect, Commander... sir... (with a nod in Picard's direction) ... my career plans are my own business, no one else's. (beat) But it's nice to know I'll have a few options. STAR TREK: "Worlds" Part Two - REV. 7/6/90 - ACT FIVE 59. 137 CONTINUED: (2) SHELBY I hope I'll have the fortune of serving with you again. (turning to Picard) Captain... Picard nods, dismissing her. And she EXITS. RIKER Course to Station McKinley is laid in and ready, sir... PICARD Make it so, Number One. Riker grins and EXITS and we stay a beat on Picard as he turns in his chair and looks out his window... and as he drinks his tea, there is a definite incomplete thought here, not an entirely happy ending... a man recovering but not recovered. FADE OUT. END OF ACT FIVE THE END DISTRIBUTION DATE JULY 2, 1990 FROM MICHAEL PILLER SUBJECT "THE BEST OF BOTH WORLDS" PART TWO Every effort is being made to preserve the cliffhanger ending of this script in order to maintain the element of surprise and anticipation for our television audience. Your cooperation is very much appreciated. Each script has been secretly coded and a number assigned to each person on the distribution. Therefore, this script is not to be reproduced, reprinted or otherwise duplicated, either manually or electronically, in whole or in part, for any reason what-so-ever, without express permission from the production office. Do not give the script away, throw the script away, or otherwise dispose of the script. 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FINAL DRAFT JULY 9, 1990 STAR TREK: "Suddenly Human" - REV. 7/18/90 - CAST STAR TREK: THE NEXT GENERATION "Suddenly Human" CAST PICARD JONO RIKER CAPTAIN ENDAR DATA BEVERLY Starfleet Personnel TROI ADMIRAL CONNAUGHT ROSSA GEORDI WORF WESLEY Non-Speaking FOUR TALARIAN YOUTHS TALARIAN MILITIA TRANSPORTER OFFICER'S VOICE Still Photos on Monitor CONNOR & MOIRA ROSSA Non-Speaking WITH INFANT CHILD SUPERNUMERARIES MEDICAL PERSONNEL Voices TWO SECURITY MEN CONNOR & MOIRA ROSSA JEREMIAH ROSSA (INFANT) STAR TREK: "Suddenly Human" - REV. 7/13/90 - SETS STAR TREK: THE NEXT GENERATION "Suddenly Human" SETS INTERIORS EXTERIORS USS ENTERPRISE USS ENTERPRISE MAIN BRIDGE CAPTAIN'S READY ROOM TALARIAN SHIPS TRANSPORTER ROOM OBSERVATION CRAFT OBSERVATION LOUNGE WARSHIP Q'MAIRE TEN FORWARD TWO ADDT'L WARSHIPS SICKBAY BEVERLY'S OFFICE CORRIDORS (VARIOUS) N.D. QUARTERS PICARD'S QUARTERS RACQUETBALL COURT TALARIAN OBSERVATION CRAFT TALARIAN WARSHIP Q'MAIRE ENDAR'S READY ROOM (ON MAIN VIEWER) STARFLEET ADMIRAL ROSSA'S ROOM (ON MONITOR) STAR TREK: "Suddenly Human" - 7/18/90 - PRONUNCIATION STAR TREK: THE NEXT GENERATION "Suddenly Human" PRONUNCIATION GUIDE CONNAUGHT cn-NAWT ENDAR EN-dar JONO JOHN-oh MOIRA MORE-ah Q'MAIRE kuh-MARE TALARIAN tah-LARE-ian ROSSA ROW-sa WODEN WOH-den STAR TREK: "Suddenly Human" - REV. 7/18/90 - TEASER 1. STAR TREK: THE NEXT GENERATION "Suddenly Human" TEASER FADE IN: 1 EXT. SPACE - THE ENTERPRISE (OPTICAL) The ship approaches a small Talarian vessel, adrift. PICARD (V.O.) Captain's log, Stardate 44085.7. We have moved into Sector Two-One-Nine-Four-Seven in response to a distress call from a Talarian observation craft. The alien vessel appears adrift, and our initial probe has detected a life-threatening radiation leak within its propulsion system. 2 INT. MAIN BRIDGE (OPTICAL) To include MAIN VIEWER. PICARD, TROI, and RIKER in the Command Chairs. DATA at Ops, WORF at Tactical, WESLEY at Conn. WORF Sir, I get no further response from the vessel. PICARD Maintain an open channel. RIKER Doctor Crusher and her assistants are waiting in Transporter Room Three, Captain. STAR TREK: "Suddenly Human" - REV. 7/18/90 - TEASER 2. 2 CONTINUED: DATA Sir, I must remind you that during the Galen border conflicts a common tactic of the Talarians was to abandon their observation craft, rig them to self-destruct... PICARD (nods) ... and issue a general distress call, yes, I know... DATA This particular guerilla maneuver resulted in two hundred and nineteen fatalities over a three- year period. Picard is silent, pondering his options. RIKER Data, is there any way to detect their self-destruct device? DATA Negative, Commander. The Talarians employ a subspace proximity detonator. It would not be detectable to our scans... RIKER (joining in) ... or the Away Team's tricorders. Right. WORF Captain, the Talarian warship Q'Maire is responding to the distress call. PICARD Position? WORF Halfway through the Woden sector. WESLEY It'll take them hours to get here, sir, even at maximum warp. STAR TREK: "Suddenly Human" - REV. 7/18/90 - TEASER 3. 2 CONTINUED: (2) Picard turns to Troi, who has been quiet during all this, concentrating on what forces might be emanating from the stricken vessel. PICARD Counselor? TROI There is life on board... but it's fading. That's it. Picard makes his decision. PICARD Number One, assemble the rest of your away team and prepare for immediate rescue operations. RIKER Yes, sir. They lock eyes for a moment. Picard doesn't need to add, "Be careful." Riker knows all too well what he may be heading into. 3 INT. TALARIAN OBSERVATION CRAFT (OPTICAL) Gaseous, dark, flickering neon lights accent the area as Riker, Worf and BEVERLY MATERIALIZE with TWO MEDICAL SUPERNUMERARIES carrying equipment. Riker, tricorder in hand, steps forward, wary and alert. They move into the interior of the ship, scanning constantly with his tricorder, the others following. WORF (checking tricorder) Ancilary power is failing, Commander. They move throught the cabin, and then spot -- 4 THEIR POV - AN ADJACENT AREA revealing FIVE TALARIANS, some with radiation burns, most too weak to stand. They wear a helmet-like head covering that is decidedly war-like in appearance, and all wear gloves. STAR TREK: "Suddenly Human" - REV. 7/18/90 - TEASER 4. 4 CONTINUED: They all look young -- like our teen-agers. BEVERLY They're nothing more than children! And they are broken and wounded. Riker steps forward. RIKER I am Commander Riker of the Federation Starship Enterprise. We will evacuate you and give you medical care. You will not be harmed. There is no resistance, and Beverly springs into action, scanning the victims with a medical tricorder. Worf move into an adjacent corridor to reconnoiter. BEVERLY (keying insignia) Enterprise, prepping five Talarian males for transport directly to Sickbay... Trauma Team, stand by to receive injured... we have radiation burns, possible respiratory distress... TRANSPORTER OFFICER'S COM VOICE Transport locked in and ready, Doctor. BEVERLY Stand by for my order. As she and the medical assistants continue triage, Riker keys his insignia. RIKER Captain, it looks like this was a basic training ship. Five boys... in their teens... all in uniform... PICARD'S COM VOICE Proceed with the evacuation, Number One. Worf returns from his inspection. STAR TREK: "Suddenly Human" - REV. 7/16/90 - TEASER 5. 4 CONTINUED: (2) WORF No other life signs on board, sir. BEVERLY'S (O.C.) Commander! Quickly! Riker rushes to Beverly's side: she's aiming her tricorder at a TALARIAN YOUTH, free hand removing his helmet. RIKER What is it? The helmet is removed, revealing a handsome young man of about fourteen -- looking not at all Talarian. BEVERLY (O.C.) Look... this boy... he's human! And on their stunned reaction... FADE OUT. END OF TEASER STAR TREK: "Suddenly Human" - REV. 7/13/90 - ACT ONE 6. ACT ONE FADE IN: 5 INT. SICKBAY One critical-status Talarian is being treated for radiation damage. Other survivors are whisked into the ward by MEDICAL SUPERNUMERARIES. PICARD (V.O.) Captain's log, supplemental: We have completed emergency evacuation of four Talarians -- and one human. How this young man found himself in the custody of these aliens remains a mystery. Across the ward, sitting cross-legged on a diagnostic bed, is JONO -- the human. He is ramrod straight, eyes fixed ahead, jaw clenched. With steely determination, he avoids any effort by Beverly to make contact with him. Troi observes. BEVERLY It's Jono, right? Is that what I heard them call you? She speaks casually, warmly, as she scans him with her tricorder. Jono ignores her. BEVERLY I'm Doctor Crusher. I'm examining you for radiation injuries. It won't hurt. (beat) I have a son not much older than you. Maybe you'd like to meet him. No response. BEVERLY (gamely) Well, Jono... you seem to have escaped radiation damage. Pretty lucky. (reacting to something on the tricorder) How did this happen -- ? STAR TREK: "Suddenly Human" - REV. 7/25/90 - ACT ONE 7. 5 CONTINUED: Suddenly, Jono covers his face and emits a high-pitched shriek -- a keening -- and begins rocking back and forth. Other Talarians, like babies responding with sympathetic crying, take up the awful screech. Startled, Beverly moves away from the boy. Instinctively, Troi moves forward, toward him. BEVERLY What is it? TROI He's -- terrified. 6 OMITTED 6A INT. SICKBAY - CONTINUOUS Picard and Riker ENTER; Beverly approaches them. BEVERLY They all just started up, Captain. STAR TREK: "Suddenly Human" - REV. 7/13/90 - ACT ONE 8. 6A CONTINUED: A roomful of shrieking teenagers does not sit well with Picard. PICARD May I have your attention, please? They continue the keening sound. PICARD Please -- may I have your attention? No response. Finally, frustrated, Picard walks toward Jono. PICARD Stop that immediately! The unmistakable voice of authority gets Jono's attention instantly. He breaks off in mid-cry, turns and stares at Picard in a mixture of awe and respect. The others stop the screech as soon as Jono does. PICARD Well. That's better. Now, what's your name, young man? Jono blinks, but doesn't answer. TROI He won't talk, Captain. We haven't been able to get through to him. JONO Captain -- ? Electrified by that word, Jono jumps off the bed and crosses to Picard, bows his head. JONO Captain... I am Jono. Take me home, to my Captain. Take me home to Endar! Picard stares awkwardly down at the young man at his feet. Then he looks up at Troi, who has observed this little scene. She is smiling slightly. Picard has made an instant connection with this troubled boy. STAR TREK: "Suddenly Human" - REV. 7/25/90 - ACT ONE 9. 7 INT. BEVERLY'S OFFICE - MINUTES LATER Picard ENTERS with Beverly. BEVERLY He managed to escape radiation trauma... but his scans showed something else... PICARD What? Beverly rises, paces. She is disturbed by what she has to say. BEVERLY Two previously fractured ribs... a broken arm... a low-grade concussion. There may be neurological impairment... I'll have to examine him further. Jean Luc -- the Talarians have always been ruthless to their enemies... I think there's a real possibility they may have brutalized the child. Picard is appalled, but wants, as always, to consider all possibilities. PICARD Isn't it possible he was injured prior to his captivity? BEVERLY Not likely. He's been with them a long time... long enough to assimilate their cultural traits... and calcium trace patterns indicate the injuries occurred during the past seven years. PICARD (frowns) But if they have... abused the boy... why would he devoutly wish to return to them? BEVERLY That's not uncommon. It was identified centuries ago as the "Stockholm syndrome." STAR TREK: "Suddenly Human" - REV. 7/13/90 - ACT ONE 10. 7 CONTINUED: Suddenly, there is commotion from the Sickbay and as Picard and Beverly react... 8 INT. SICKBAY - JONO - THEIR POV He is thrashing on the bed, resisting the efforts of two medical SUPERNUMERARIES and Troi to restrain him. Then, he bursts into that dreadful shriek. The other Talarians follow suit. 9 ON PICARD AND BEVERLY as they rush from the office. PICARD Now what? Jono has leapt from the table and is tearing around the room, shrieking. TROI I suggested he take off his gloves... Suddenly he went out of control. The medical personnel are still scrambling to grab Jono. BEVERLY (hits insignia) Security, we need some assistance in Sickbay... WORF'S COM VOICE Acknowledged, Doctor. PICARD Jono -- ! Seeing Picard, Jono stops shrieking, but keeps dancing away from his pursuers, agitated and hyperventilating. JONO She won't leave me alone! She keeps trying to dissect me! PICARD She was trying to help you! STAR TREK: "Suddenly Human" - REV. 7/13/90 - ACT ONE 10A. 9 CONTINUED: JONO I don't want her help! All I want is to be with my brothers! Send us back to Captain Endar! Jono may be confused, and he may have suffered, but at the moment he's a child throwing a tantrum. Worf ENTERS, takes in the scene... begins to move at Jono... Picard wants to de-escalate the incident... STAR TREK: "Suddenly Human" - REV. 7/13/90 - ACT ONE 11. 9 CONTINUED: (2) PICARD Jono -- I want you to stop this immediately! Jono stops short, responding almost involuntarily to the voice of authority. He lifts his head, then bows it again to Picard. JONO Yes, Captain. PICARD That's better. Now, if we're to accomplish anything -- DATA'S COM VOICE (interrupting) Data to Picard. PICARD Go ahead. DATA'S COM VOICE We have received a subspace communique from Starfleet Command, regarding the young human, sir. Jono's eyes flicker at this, but he does not move. PICARD Very well. Doctor, Counselor... (join me) Moving with Picard -- BEVERLY Mister Worf, escort this young man to quarters... he's to be confined there until further notice. STAR TREK: "Suddenly Human" - REV. 7/24/90 - ACT ONE 12. 9 CONTINUED: (3) WORF Yes, Doctor. Jono has listened to this interchange with interest. A beat as the boy and the Klingon measure one another. 10 OMITTED 10A INT. N.D. QUARTERS Worf and Jono ENTER. JONO Why are you here, Klingon -- with them? Did they capture you, too? WORF They are not my captors. They are my comrades. Jono snorts derisively, then -- STAR TREK: "Suddenly Human" - REV. 7/13/90 - ACT ONE 12A. 10A CONTINUED: JONO Why do you take orders from a female? WORF (reacts) Doctor Crusher? She is my superior officer. STAR TREK: "Suddenly Human" - REV. 7/18/90 - ACT ONE 13. 10A CONTINUED: (2) JONO (a snort of contempt) Among my people, a female could never outrank a man. WORF You are human, and among humans, females can achieve anything males can. Jono stares at him, clear-eyed and sure. JONO I am not human any more than you are. I am Talarian. Worf regards the boy with sadness, understanding his plight perhaps better than anyone. WORF You are confused... Suddenly, the boy launches into that ear-splitting wail again, jarring Worf from his sympathy. WORF Stop that! STAR TREK: "Suddenly Human" - REV. 7/18/90 - ACT ONE 14. 10A CONTINUED: (3) JONO I will make the B'Nar -- the mourning -- until I am back with my brothers! He starts up again and Worf backs away, covering his ears, then EXITS, shaking his head. 11 thru OMITTED 13 13A INT. OBSERVATION LOUNGE (OPTICAL) Picard, Riker, Beverly, Troi and Data. DATA By matching DNA gene types, Starfleet was able to identify the young man as Jeremiah Rossa... RIKER (recognizing the name) Rossa... PICARD ... as in Admiral Rossa, Data? DATA She is his grandmother, Captain. Riker whistles softly. Data calls up a still picture of the child with his parents on the monitor. DATA He was born fourteen years ago on the Federation Colony, Galen Four. His parents, Connor and Moira Rossa, were killed in a border skirmish three years, nine months later when the colony was overrun by Talarian forces. PICARD I remember. There were no survivors. DATA The child was listed as missing and presumed dead. STAR TREK: "Suddenly Human" - REV. 7/18/90 - ACT ONE 15. 13A CONTINUED: RIKER I knew another one of the Rossas who was killed in action at the Krasner outpost... PICARD (nods) Tragedy, it seems, follows the Rossa Family... the Admiral has lost both her sons... BEVERLY She'll have something to celebrate now... TROI Captain... if Jeremiah were returned to his family in his present condition... it would be a wrenching experience for everyone. Especially for him. He needs to re-discover his identity. He has to make some connection with his roots. PICARD I agree. Please take whatever means you need to accomplish that, Counselor. TROI I don't think I can do anything, Captain. PICARD Why not? BEVERLY Troi's right. It's very clear that the boy does not respond well to women. DATA The Talarians are a rigidly patriarchical society. STAR TREK: "Suddenly Human" - REV. 7/13/90 - ACT ONE 16. 13A CONTINUED: (2) TROI Jeremiah needs to build a relationship with a man... a father figure... with whom he can explore his origins... and I think it should be you, Captain. PICARD (over my dead body) Oh, no, Counselor! I don't think so. He needs someone who is -- trained in these things. TROI But you are the only person on board to whom he has shown any connection. If Jeremiah is to find his -- humanity -- then you are the only one who can help him. It's up to you, Captain. Picard stares at her, reflecting on both the enormity and the sheer awfulness of this responsibility. FADE OUT. END OF ACT ONE STAR TREK: "Suddenly Human" - REV. 7/18/90 - ACT TWO 17. ACT TWO FADE IN: 14 INT. N.D. LIVING QUARTERS - A LITTLE LATER Jono sits cross-legged, his high-pitched wail now having achieved a ritualistic, mournful rhythm. He keeps at it, indefatigably, then suddenly breaks off as he sees -- 15 PICARD who stands at the door, observing him. PICARD Jono... why do you make that noise? JONO It is the custom of my people when they are in distress. PICARD Is it not also the custom of your people to listen to the wishes of their Captain? JONO Yes. PICARD Then, as Captain of the Starship Enterprise, I ask you not to make that sound. JONO (nodding, obedient) Yes, sir. PICARD Good. Well. Now that we have that cleared up... (tries to look cheerful) Let's... get acquainted, shall we? Jono stares up at him, puzzled, and Picard smiles with what he hopes is sincerity. STAR TREK: "Suddenly Human" - REV. 7/13/90 - ACT TWO 18. 15 CONTINUED: PICARD (looking around) What do you think of your quarters? I know it's a bit -- sterile. But if there's anything you'd like... pictures, perhaps, or games... He trails off as Jono looks around the room, silently inspecting it. Then he turns to Picard. JONO This is a cage. I am still your captive. PICARD Not at all. I thought you would be comfortable here -- JONO Are you going to return me to my Captain? PICARD (temporizing) We will rendezvous with the warship Q'maire at Oh-seven-forty. We are preparing to transfer the Talarians to Captain Endar. JONO Including me? PICARD We will... discuss... your situation with Captain Endar. Jono eyes him briefly, then swings around to look at the living quarters. JONO I don't like this place. PICARD Well, we can find other quarters. JONO I have always lived with my Captain. STAR TREK: "Suddenly Human" - REV. 7/13/90 - ACT TWO 18A. 15 CONTINUED: (2) He turns to look in Picard's eyes, challenging. STAR TREK: "Suddenly Human" - REV. 7/18/90 - ACT TWO 19. 15 CONTINUED: (3) PICARD Ah. Yes, well... that won't work, here. 16 OMITTED 17 INT. PICARD'S QUARTERS - MINUTES LATER The door opens and Picard and Jono ENTER. PICARD I'm sure you'll see... there's nothing here that would appeal to a young person. Picard watches as Jono wanders the room, picking up things and putting them down in typical teen-age fashion. He picks up a Klingon dagger, inspects it curiously, turning it in his gloved hands. PICARD Put that down, please. JONO It's Klingon. PICARD Yes. Put it back where you got it. Jono flips the dagger onto the desk, flops down into a chair, sprawling. Picard places it exactly as it was before. Then he turns toward the boy. PICARD Well. Here we are, eh, Jono? Jono stares at him, not replying. Picard sits, trying to make conversation. PICARD I notice you haven't taken off your gloves... Jono sits straight, protectively puts his hands to his sides. JONO Not here. STAR TREK: "Suddenly Human" - REV. 7/18/90 - ACT TWO 20. 17 CONTINUED: PICARD Why not? JONO So that I don't have to touch an alien. Picard reacts. A beat. He leans toward the boy. PICARD Jono... your Captain, Endar? Has he ever hurt you? (off Jono) Inflicted pain? JONO (proudly) Pain is not a consideration. PICARD Then he has. JONO I did not say that. Can't you understand? Pain is not what matters. Passing the tests is everything. PICARD Is that what they are? Tests of pain? JONO (scornful) You don't understand anything. PICARD It's true I don't fully understand Talarians. But... you are not Talarian. At this, Jono stiffens and jumps to his feet. JONO I will not listen to this! I will not listen to your lies! Take me back to my cell! I'd rather be in prison than have you try to poison my mind! Picard sighs. This task is impossible. STAR TREK: "Suddenly Human" - REV. 7/13/90 - ACT TWO 21. 18 INT. CAPTAIN'S READY ROOM - LATER Picard sits, musing, distressed. The SOUND OF A CHIME. PICARD Come. The door opens and Troi stands there. TROI You wanted to see me, Captain? PICARD Ah, yes, Counselor. Please -- sit down. Troi sits opposite him. PICARD You may not be aware of this, but I have never been particularly comfortable around children. To Troi's credit, she does not laugh. TROI Really? PICARD For some reason, they just don't seem to respond to me. TROI I see... PICARD Frankly, I think my time is best served carrying out the duties and responsibilities of a Starfleet Captain. TROI Seldom have I heard an explanation so well rehearsed. He shoots her a look; she smiles. PICARD All right, Counselor... I just don't think I'm the right person for this job. STAR TREK: "Suddenly Human" - REV. 7/13/90 - ACT TWO 22. 18 CONTINUED: TROI Strange, isn't it? You'll travel light years, dodge asteroid storms, brave hostile aliens... but when asked to assume a parental role, you cringe. Why do you suppose that is? PICARD I'm not cringing... I am simply acknowledging my limitations. TROI (musing) When you were a child, did you have many friends? Other children you played with? Picard shifts; he's not entirely comfortable being probed. PICARD No, but I don't think that has anything to do with anything... (beat, pondering) Perhaps it's because... no, this is foolish. What does it matter? TROI What were you going to say? Picard hesitates; this is not easy territory for him. PICARD Just that... ever since I was a child... I knew exactly what I wanted -- to be a member of Starfleet. Nothing else mattered to me. Virtually my entire youth was spent pursuing that goal. In fact... (beat) I think... that I may have skipped my childhood. Touched, she gazes at him, knowing this self-exploration is difficult. TROI You know, Captain, almost no one is born being a good parent. (MORE) STAR TREK: "Suddenly Human" - REV. 7/13/90 - ACT TWO 22A. 18 CONTINUED: (2) TROI (Cont'd) Most people simply have to muddle through it, doing the best job they can. STAR TREK: "Suddenly Human" - REV. 7/18/90 - ACT TWO 23. 18 CONTINUED: (3) PICARD And... that's what I'm going to have to do? TROI Yes. And you might be surprised at how good you could be. Picard sighs. No getting off the hook here. 19 INT. CORRIDOR OUTSIDE PICARD'S QUARTERS Picard approaches his quarters, carrying a portable visual monitor; as he does, he hears the muffled sound of noise from within: a maelstrom of electronic sound, discordant and unstructured. Puzzled, he opens his door. The sound blasts forth, deafening. 20 INT. PICARD'S QUARTERS The volume of the noise is truly frightening. Picard looks around his room, noting that the furniture has been completely re-arranged. PICARD Computer, turn off that noise! Instantly, there is blissful silence. PICARD Computer, what was that? COMPUTER'S VOICE The "Alba Ra"... a contemporary Talarian musical form. PICARD Jono? Where are you? JONO'S VOICE Here. Drawn by the voice, Picard looks up, and discovers Jono suspended from the ceiling in a spider-web hammock. JONO You turned off my music. STAR TREK: "Suddenly Human" - REV. 7/13/90 - ACT TWO 24. 20 CONTINUED: PICARD Yes, I certainly did, and I expect it to stay turned off. Jono, would you come down from there? With graceful twists and turns, Jono unravels himself, and descends like a bat from the ceiling. PICARD (indicating room) I see you've made yourself at home. JONO (shrugs) I cannot rest on your beds. They hurt my back. Exasperated, Picard starts to reply, then stops himself. Nothing to be served by antagonizing him. He's going to try to do this thing as best he can. PICARD Right... Jono, I want to show you something. He beckons the boy toward the monitor, which he activates. 21 INTERCUTTING WITH VISUAL MONITOR (OPTICAL) The photographs of the Rossa family on Galen IV -- including the infant and child Jeremiah, seen earlier in the Observation Lounge. PICARD Those are Connor and Moira Rossa -- your parents. That baby is you... Jeremiah Rossa. JONO (frowns) My name is Jono. PICARD You were born Jeremiah, on Galen Four. Your colony was destroyed, later, during a border skirmish. STAR TREK: "Suddenly Human" - REV. 7/13/90 - ACT TWO 24A. 21 CONTINUED: A chubby-cheeked child gazes into camera, laughing merrily -- a happy boy. STAR TREK: "Suddenly Human" - REV. 7/13/90 - ACT TWO 25. 21 CONTINUED: (2) PICARD You knew how to laugh once. Jono shoots him a dark look, doesn't reply. PICARD Do you remember any of that? Your parents, your home? JONO No. I know that Endar rescued me. He told me so. PICARD Jono, your parents were killed by Talarians... JONO (shrugs) It was war. Death is part of war. Picard knows all about war, and yet he is shocked at the boy's absolute lack of emotion. Then -- RIKER'S COM VOICE Captain? PICARD What is it, Number One? RIKER'S COM VOICE We have visual contact with the warship Q'Maire. Jono rises. JONO Endar... PICARD (warning hand) You stay put. (to Riker) I'm on my way. He EXITS. Jono watches him leave, and then, almost against his will, as though being drawn by unseen forces, he turns back to the monitor. He moves to it, stares at a picture of his parents. His hand reaches toward the image of his mother. Softly, SOUNDS begin building in his head -- the zap of phaser fire, and then a woman's voice, calling. STAR TREK: "Suddenly Human" - REV. 7/18/90 - ACT TWO 26. 21 CONTINUED: (3) MOIRA'S VOICE Jeremiah... Jeremiah! The boy withdraws his hand, closes his eyes, and by dint of sheer effort, wills the sounds away. They fade, and he opens his eyes again. 22 INT. MAIN BRIDGE (OPTICAL) to include MAIN VIEWER. Data, Worf, and Wesley are at stations. Picard ENTERS, sits. PICARD Status, Mister Data. DATA Q'maire at station, holding steady at bearing zero-one-three, mark zero-one-five. Distance five-zero-six kilometers. PICARD Are its weapons systems active? DATA Negative. WORF Captain Endar requests an open channel. PICARD On screen. CAPTAIN ENDAR, a fierce but dignified presence, appears on the Main Viewer. ENDAR I am Captain Endar of the warship Q'Maire. To whom am I speaking? PICARD Captain Jean-Luc Picard of the Federation Starship Enterprise. We have rescued four crew members from your observation craft. They have received medical attention and are ready for transport. STAR TREK: "Suddenly Human" - REV. 7/13/90 - ACT TWO 26A. 22 CONTINUED: ENDAR Your actions are duly noted. We will forward coordinates for immediate transport. RIKER (sotto) You're welcome, I'm sure. STAR TREK: "Suddenly Human" - 7/9/90 - ACT TWO 27. 22 CONTINUED: PICARD One moment, Captain. We have also discovered a human among your crew. ENDAR (visibly relieved) Jono! PICARD Actually, his name is Jeremiah -- Jeremiah Rossa. ENDAR What is his condition? Is he injured? PICARD He was not wounded in the mishap... ENDAR A blessing... PICARD But as a representative of the Federation I demand an explanation. Why has this child been held in your custody all these years? ENDAR No explanation is warranted, Captain. He is my son! Off Picard and Riker's astonishment: FADE OUT. END OF ACT TWO STAR TREK: "Suddenly Human" - REV. 7/18/90 - ACT THREE 28. ACT THREE FADE IN: 23 EXT. SPACE - ENTERPRISE AND Q'MAIRE (OPTICAL) Both ships hold positions facing one another. PICARD (V.O.) Captain's log, supplemental: Endar's claim that Jeremiah Rossa is his son is clearly unacceptable. 24 INT. TRANSPORTER ROOM (OPTICAL) Endar and TWO TALARIAN MILITIA MATERIALIZE, and greet Riker and Worf. PICARD (V.O.) However, to avoid escalating tensions, I have extended an invitation to the Talarian leader to come aboard the Enterprise so that we may address the issue face-to-face. 25 INT. CAPTAIN'S READY ROOM Picard with Endar. ENDAR Yes... I was in charge of the force that repelled the trespassers on Galen Four. (beat) I must say your Federation troops fought tenaciously. PICARD Among them Connor and Moira Rossa. ENDAR I suppose. After the battle, I found this squalling child, huddled by the body of a young woman. His mother, presumably. An awful image. Picard is stirred. STAR TREK: "Suddenly Human" - REV. 7/18/90 - ACT THREE 29. 25 CONTINUED: PICARD And so, you -- kidnapped him. ENDAR A harsh term, Captain. I rescued the child. There was almost no one left alive on Galen Four... was I to leave him screaming by his mother's body? PICARD You should have notified Federation authorities. To conceal him was a clear violation of our agreement. ENDAR I took him in accordance with my peoples' traditions. PICARD What... tradition... is it that empowered you to capture a helpless child? ENDAR I lost my son at the hands of humans during the conflict over Castal One. Talarian custom allows me to claim the son of a slain enemy. PICARD (weighing this) I understand your tradition, Endar. May I ask... does it extend also to brutalizing the surrogate son? ENDAR What are you talking about? PICARD Our medical officer found evidence of injuries so severe that they might even be considered torture... STAR TREK: "Suddenly Human" - REV. 7/13/90 - ACT THREE 29A. 25 CONTINUED: (2) ENDAR No! I have never harmed Jono! STAR TREK: "Suddenly Human" - REV. 7/13/90 - ACT THREE 30. 25 CONTINUED: (3) PICARD Then explain the fractured ribs! The concussion... the broken arm... ENDAR Youth. The simplicity of this answer catches Picard. ENDAR Have you ever been a father, Picard? Have you ever had a son desperately try to win your approval? Your respect? Picard ponders this. ENDAR Jono broke his ribs riding a T'stayan -- six hooves, a very powerful animal. The arm? In a contest with other youths. He endured the pain -- and won the competition. (beat) He will be a great warrior one day. PICARD Doesn't he deserve to become more than that? Picard rises, pacing. PICARD His heritage is human, Endar. ENDAR A heritage long since forgotten. PICARD (an inner decision made) Captain Endar, while on board, you are welcome to supervise the return of your crew. But I cannot allow Jeremiah Rossa to be returned to your custody. His true family is waiting for him on Earth. STAR TREK: "Suddenly Human" - REV. 7/18/90 - ACT THREE 31. 25 CONTINUED: (4) Endar rises, too, a buried rage burning from his eyes. ENDAR Then under no circumstances will I allow your ship to leave our territory. PICARD I have already reported our position and the nature of this violation to Starfleet. ENDAR And I have already called our reserved forces into the sector. PICARD (amazed) Are you saying you would be willing to go to war over the boy? ENDAR Would you not for your only son? Picard stares at him. He realizes they are on the brink of catastrophe. PICARD We have been at peace for years. Let us not rush headlong toward war. ENDAR Then help me to avoid it! (beat) If you will allow me to see Jono, it will be clear to you -- I have been a good father. He has grown up happy in my keeping. Picard turns away, his mind roiling. What is the right decision? Is there a right decision? 26 INT. PICARD'S QUARTERS (OPTICAL) Jono still sits in front of the monitor, flipping through the various photographs, over and over. Troi is with him. STAR TREK: "Suddenly Human" - REV. 7/13/90 - ACT THREE 31A. 26 CONTINUED: TROI Those were your parents. Do you remember them? STAR TREK: "Suddenly Human" - REV. 7/19/90 - ACT THREE 32. 26 CONTINUED: (2) JONO That was long ago. Endar is my father. TROI And who is your mother? JONO We don't have mothers. Females are only for mating. And work. TROI And the men? What is their purpose? JONO Passing the tests. Becoming strong. TROI The tests... endurance, pain, determination... all so that you can excel at making war? JONO (scornful) Females understand nothing. (puts his face in hers) Life is not easy on our planet. If we do not test ourselves constantly, we become weak -- and the weak die quickly! TROI And the females? Surely they are weak. JONO Of course. But we protect them. He looks at her, fierce male pride burning in his eyes. TROI I see. Her gaze shifts toward the monitor, and Jono's look follows. TROI And when you look at this picture... of you and the human female who was your mother... how do you feel about her? STAR TREK: "Suddenly Human" - REV. 7/24/90 - ACT THREE 33. 27 OMITTED 28 INSERT - MONITOR SCREEN (OPTICAL) Moira Rossa holds her infant son, who snuggles securely at her breast. His tiny fingers are clasped around one of her fingers, and she is smiling at him with unashamed adoration. His baby smile returns that unqualified love. 29 JONO tears his eyes from the screen, agitated and disturbed. 30 OMITTED 31 INT. BEVERLY'S OFFICE Picard is with Beverly and Troi. PICARD Then you think it would be unwise to let Endar see Jono. BEVERLY I think it's dangerous. Abusers can have subtle but powerful influence over their victims. PICARD (a beat) I'm not convinced he was abused, Doctor. I've talked to the man, and if I am any judge of character... I'd say he deeply cares about the boy's welfare. BEVERLY Captain, we learned long ago always to err on the side of protecting the child. I think Endar should be kept away from Jono. TROI I'm not sure I agree, Captain. STAR TREK: "Suddenly Human" - REV. 7/13/90 - ACT THREE 34. 31 CONTINUED: (2) Picard looks to her... TROI I sense... awakening memories in the boy... this is a very fragile time for Jono, and if we send away the man he calls "father" without even letting them see each other -- how will we ever gain his trust? PICARD Yes... There is also something else we should keep in mind. We are deep in Talarian territory. A semblance of diplomacy is called for. (beat) I shall allow the visit. Beverly doesn't agree, but she understands. BEVERLY All I ask... is that the visit be supervised. Don't let them be alone together. Picard considers, nods. PICARD Agreed. He EXITS toward Endar. 32 INT. OBSERVATION LOUNGE - LATER Troi sits with Endar; they look up as the doors slide open. Picard ENTERS with Jono, who spots his "father" and rushes forward. JONO Endar! He bows his head to the Talarian Captain, just as he did with Picard. Endar extends his arms and Jono comes to him; then the two gently press their foreheads together. ENDAR Jono... my son... STAR TREK: "Suddenly Human" - 7/9/90 - ACT THREE 35. 32 CONTINUED: Their eyes close as they rock gently, heads pressed together. 33 PICARD AND TROI silently observing this moment of alien affection. They withdraw to a corner of the room so as not to intrude. They cannot hear Endar and Jono clearly. 34 RESUME ENDAR AND JONO They separate, Endar finding it difficult to hide concern. They sit, and speak in hushed voices, huddled together. ENDAR Have they treated you well? JONO Yes, Captain. Except... His eyes flicker over toward Picard. ENDAR Except? JONO I was forbidden to make the B'Nar. Endar's gaze darts toward Picard, also, but he doesn't seem too distressed by this "atrocity." ENDAR It's all right. I know that you mourned in your heart. (eyeing Jono) Well, Jono... what do you think of these humans? It's a charged question, and Jono hesitates, glances down, lifts his eyes again. JONO They... they look like me. This troubles Endar, and he leans forward. ENDAR They want to keep you, you know. STAR TREK: "Suddenly Human" - 7/9/90 - ACT THREE 36. 34 CONTINUED: JONO I know. ENDAR You are of the age of decision. What is your choice? Jono hesitates again, and Endar frowns. The boy is having a surprisingly difficult time with this. ENDAR Well? Do you want to stay? All children tend to tell their parents what they want to hear, and Jono is no exception. JONO No, of course not. And all parents want to believe their children when they say the comfortable thing. ENDAR Then you shall not. (rising) I am going back to the Q'Maire. I will leave the humans with a choice. If they do not make the one we know is right... it may lead to war. Endar again presses his forehead to Jono's. ENDAR You may die. Again, the slightest hesitation, before -- JONO I am ready to die. And as Endar and Jono stand together in the fleeting comfort of a shared lie -- FADE OUT. END OF ACT THREE STAR TREK: "Suddenly Human" - REV. 7/18/90 - ACT FOUR 37. ACT FOUR FADE IN: 35 INT. MAIN BRIDGE Picard, with Riker, Troi, Beverly, Worf and Data. WORF Captain, sensors indicate two warships approaching from opposite directions along the border. PICARD Their offensive potential? DATA Talarian warships are limited to neutral particle weapons, high-energy X-ray lasers and merculite rockets. No match for the Enterprise, Captain. PICARD The last thing I want is to be forced into destroying one of their ships. RIKER They won't back off. They've been willing to fight to the death in past encounters. PICARD (somber) The lines are being drawn... all this for a chosen son. WORF Is it worth it, Captain? To go to war -- over a child? Picard shoots him a glance. STAR TREK: "Suddenly Human" - REV. 7/18/90 - ACT FOUR 38. 35 CONTINUED: BEVERLY You might not ask that, Lieutenant, if he were your child. PICARD There must be a way to avoid this... He ponders a moment, then -- TROI If we can just reach Jono... help him to make some connection with his origins... then he may choose to come with us. RIKER Do you really think Endar would go along with that? DATA If Endar respects Talarian custom, he may have to. (off reactions) According to their tradition, a male child of fourteen has reached the age of decision. They undergo a ceremony of initiation and after that have the freedom to make their own choices. PICARD (with hope) Endar's entire claim on Jono is based on Talarian custom... he'd have a hard time backing away from it now... STAR TREK: "Suddenly Human" - REV. 7/18/90 - ACT FOUR 39. 35 CONTINUED: (2) WORF Captain -- there's a subspace communication from Starfleet Command. PICARD On screen. WORF Sir, the message is for Jeremiah Rossa. Curious, Picard rises. PICARD Have the boy brought to my Ready Room. And he EXITS to his Ready Room. 36 INT. READY ROOM - MINUTES LATER (OPTICAL) Picard sits with Jono as they view the visual monitor. Addressing them is CONNAUGHT ROSSA, a woman in her 60's, of regal bearing and gracious manner. She wears a Starfleet uniform. CONNAUGHT Jeremiah... my name is Connaught Rossa. I am your father's mother. I wish we could talk in person, but that will have to wait. When I heard the miracle that you were alive, I wanted to reach out to you as soon as possible. (beat) I find myself wondering what you look like... and all I can do is imagine your father at your age. (MORE) STAR TREK: "Suddenly Human" - REV. 7/19/90 - ACT FOUR 40. 36 CONTINUED: CONNAUGHT (Cont'd) You come from a family that would make you proud. Many of them have given their lives to bring peace to the galaxy. You are the last of the Rossas. I am so very thankful that you have been given back to us, to carry on the line. (beat) Your grandfather and I will greet you with all the love in our hearts. Have a safe journey home, Jeremiah. The screen goes blank. Jono stares at it. Then -- JONO She wears a Starfleet uniform. PICARD Yes. JONO What is her rank? PICARD She is an Admiral. Jono turns toward Picard. JONO She outranks you. PICARD Yes. Jono, overwhelmed, rises and begins pacing, agitated. JONO If I were home now, I would go to the brae, and run along the river... run as fast as I could! Picard lifts a hand, wanting to settle the frenzied young man. PICARD Jono... STAR TREK: "Suddenly Human" - REV. 7/18/90 - ACT FOUR 41. 36 CONTINUED: (2) JONO I can't do any of the things that calm me here! You won't let me have my music, you won't let me make the B'Nar! I feel if I have to hold still much longer I will die! PICARD Jono -- let me show you what I do when I get those feelings. Jono looks at him, curiosity aroused. 37 INT. RACQUETBALL COURT - LATER (OPTICAL) Picard is with Jono, giving him basic instruction in the game. It has changed over the centuries in about the way that tennis, say, changed from Henry VIII's day to the present. The basic principles are the same; the racquet is different -- sleeker, more streamlined -- and the ball is electronic: perhaps it glows from within. Most important, when it is hit, or hits a wall, there is an ELECTRONIC SOUND -- something that will begin to sound not unlike a phaser. PICARD (demonstrating) I serve from here... like this... (serves) And you must hit it back before it bounces twice. Let's try it. Picard lobs an easy serve into Jono's forehand; the boy with unerring instinct hits a kill shot about a foot off the ground. Picard turns to look at him. PICARD Not bad. JONO I win at all the games. PICARD I can believe it. Well, shall we give this a try? STAR TREK: "Suddenly Human" - REV. 7/16/90 - ACT FOUR 42. 38 SERIES OF SHOTS (OPTICAL) as Picard and Jono ENTER into a rousing and surprisingly close game. Jono has natural ability and the resilience of youth, and gives Picard a run for it. The electronic ZAP of the ball as it ricochets around the court becomes louder and louder, and gradually its presence changes, sounding more and more like a weapon. 39 JONO (OPTICAL) reacts to this, shaking his head as though to clear it. PICARD Jono? You all right? JONO Fine. He serves and they ENTER into a long rally... the SOUNDS becoming louder, now mixed with more sounds of WARFARE -- muffled explosions, people shouting, the rapid sound of phaser fire. Then, the sound of voices -- CONNOR'S VOICE Take him and get to cover! MOIRA'S VOICE I can't leave you! Jono stops, face twisted in anguish. He covers his ears, tries to blot out the sound. He will murmur, "No, no... " softly through the rest. Picard's voice will echo as though it's coming from far away. PICARD Jono -- what is it?! Jono flails on the ground as the vortex of sound increases. CONNOR'S VOICE Take Jeremiah... get to the forest! I'll hold them off! MOIRA'S VOICE No, come with us! CONNOR'S VOICE Go! STAR TREK: "Suddenly Human" - REV. 7/19/90 - ACT FOUR 43. 39 CONTINUED: Rapid sound of PHASERS, now, and many shouting voices, explosions. We hear a child's voice... "Mama... mama... " JONO (barely audible) Mama... MOIRA'S VOICE Jeremiah... Jeremiah... This way! A sudden explosion, louder than the rest, and a woman's dreadful scream. Jono sinks to the ground, head buried in his hands. The child's voice begins to cry in terror, calling out, "Mama... mama... mama... " 40 PICARD AND JONO as the sounds begin to fade. Picard kneels with him, puts his arm around the shaking boy's shoulders. Jono looks up at him, his face wet with tears. JONO She was... all red. I cried... but she didn't answer me... The boy breaks into sobs again and buries his head. Picard rubs his shoulder. He's not sure just what he should be doing, but he does know that an important breakthrough has been made. 41 INT. PICARD'S QUARTERS - LATER Jono sits talking with Picard. They are still in racquetball clothes. Jono is subdued, but talks freely. JONO ... she used to sing to me... I don't remember the melody, just the sound of her voice... He stops, shakes his head. JONO Before I remembered these things, I was strong. Now... (touches his chest) STAR TREK: "Suddenly Human" - REV. 7/16/90 - ACT FOUR 44. 41 CONTINUED: The boy draws a deep breath. JONO I have endured much pain. But this... I do not like. PICARD It is part of being human, Jono. But as deeply as you can feel hurt -- you can also feel joy. Jono looks up at him, sadly. JONO I do not think so. I think I will always feel like this. Picard is not sure where to go from here. PICARD Jono -- are you tired? JONO Yes. But I do not want to rest. I think -- (looks up, almost surprised) -- I think I am hungry. 42 INT. TEN FORWARD - MINUTES LATER Picard ENTERS with Jono, now both showered and dressed. Picard spots Riker at a table with Wesley and Data, steers the boy toward them. RIKER Well, how was racquetball? PICARD He gave me quite a game for his first time out. The flicker of a smile -- the first we've seen -- plays on Jono's lips. He is much more relaxed now, as though a great burden has fallen away. JONO I look forward to the next time, Captain. STAR TREK: "Suddenly Human" - REV. 7/16/90 - ACT FOUR 45. 42 CONTINUED: Picard grins, glad that Jono's cockiness is returning. PICARD I'm sure you do. sit down, Jono. What would you like? Jono and Picard sit. Jono looks around at the table, points to Wesley's banana split. JONO What's that? WESLEY That's called a banana split and it's maybe the best thing there is in the universe. (pushes it forward) Here -- give it a try. Jono stares at it for a second, unsure how to attack it. Riker slides a spoon toward him. Jono looks puzzled. DATA It is called a spoon. Jono nods, grabs the spoon, looks up at them questioningly. WESLEY Go ahead. Jono is holding the spoon in his fist, like a knife. Having received permission, he holds it over the banana split "boat" -- and then jabs down into it with all his force! This flips the opposite end of the "boat" up, flinging the contents out and right toward Wesley! 42A WESLEY has a spattering of whipped cream on his face and chest. 43 OMITTED 44 FULL SHOT Jono stares at him, at first shocked at what he has done. STAR TREK: "Suddenly Human" - REV. 7/19/90 - ACT FOUR 46. 44 CONTINUED: JONO Forgive me -- He glances around the table and sees Picard smiling -- and Riker trying to hold in a laugh. Finally Riker can't help it and he snorts with laughter. Wesley starts laughing. Then Jono looks back at Wesley and then he bursts into laughter. DATA I fail to see why this is amusing. RIKER (still chuckling) Check your data banks on humor... subheading "Slapstick"... DATA (inspecting Wesley) Comedy stressing farce and horseplay... ah, this no doubt is a variation on... "Pie in the Face"... RIKER Now do you see why it's funny? DATA No, I do not. But I will take your word. It is very amusing. Jono is still giggling. Wesley summons a waitress. WESLEY Let's start over. A fresh banana split for me, one for my friend here. STAR TREK: "Suddenly Human" - REV. 7/18/90 - ACT FOUR 47. 44A ON PICARD AND RIKER as they move off to the side, Jono, Wesley, and Data remain at the table. PICARD Look at him. He's like a different person. RIKER Who would ever have thought he could laugh out loud like that? PICARD And half an hour ago he was crying in my arms like a baby. Riker, not having realized this, looks at Picard in surprise and awe. Picard smiles, feeling content that things are going to work out just fine. 45 OMITTED 45A EXT. SPACE - THE ENTERPRISE AND Q'MAIRE (OPTICAL) 46 INT. PICARD'S QUARTERS - LATER The rooms are darkened, but we can see Jono, resting in his ceiling hammock. His eyes are open. He stares into the darkness for a few beats, and then he lifts up, descends from the ceiling. 47 INT. CAPTAIN'S BEDROOM Picard is asleep. Jono ENTERS, approaches Picard like a thief in the night. He gazes down at the sleeping Captain, struggling with his emotions. 48 CLOSE ON PICARD AND JONO Picard is groggy, but recognizing Jono, gives him a smile. Jono returns the smile -- then loses the smile to a terror within. STAR TREK: "Suddenly Human" - REV. 7/16/90 - ACT FOUR 48. 48 CONTINUED: Suddenly his gloved hand appears, raising the Klingon dagger! He sounds an anguished cry, then plunges the dagger down, straight into Picard's chest. FADE OUT. END OF ACT FOUR STAR TREK: "Suddenly Human" - REV. 7/18/90 - ACT FIVE 49. ACT FIVE FADE IN: 49 INT. SICKBAY Picard is on a bed with Beverly scanning him. Picard is unconscious and pale. BEVERLY Two bleeders... single-plane penetration... (calling out) I need the autosuture over here! Assistants move swiftly as she keeps scanning. BEVERLY (continuing) It looks like the blade hit the sternum and was deflected... it could have been a lot worse. 50 ON PICARD as he stirs, eyes fluttering open and sees Beverly, who has the autosuture and is using it on him. Picard looks around as though coming out of a fog, trying to get his bearings. PICARD Then it wasn't a dream... BEVERLY I'm afraid not... Beverly is using the autosuture to stop the bleeding and repair damaged tissue. BEVERLY No vital organs were pierced... no major arteries... PICARD Where is the boy now? BEVERLY Worf has him in security. Hold still... STAR TREK: "Suddenly Human" - REV. 7/18/90 - ACT FIVE 50. 50 CONTINUED: PICARD I want to see him. Here, now. BEVERLY (firmly) He'll wait until I'm finished. Picard acquiesces, puts his head back down and winces in pain. 51 OMITTED 52 INT. MAIN BRIDGE Riker in command, Worf at Tactical, Data at Ops, Wesley on the Conn. WORF Talarian warships converging, Commander, range five hundred kilometers. RIKER On screen. 53 thru OMITTED 54 55 ANGLE - MAIN VIEW (OPTICAL) The main viewer now shows the Q'Maire; two other warships are behind it, moving toward the Enterprise. RIKER Any communication, Lieutenant Worf? WORF No, sir. We have an open channel. WESLEY Commander, the warships' closing velocities are decreasing... staggered approach vectors bearing zero, one hundred twenty, and two hundred forty degrees. RIKER (to com) Riker to La Forge. STAR TREK: "Suddenly Human" - REV. 7/16/90 - ACT FIVE 51. 55A INT. ENGINEERING - CONTINUOUS - INTERCUTTING GEORDI La Forge here, sir. RIKER'S COM VOICE Geordi, the Talarians are moving into attack posture. Classic triangular envelopment. GEORDI I've tapped the impulse engines for additional power to shields, Commander. We're ready. 55B INT. MAIN BRIDGE - CONTINUOUS (OPTICAL) WORF Commander, Captain of the Q'Maire requests communication. RIKER Well, here we go. On screen. As Captain Endar looms on the viewer. ENDAR Captain Picard... have you made your decision? RIKER This is Commander Riker. What are your intentions, Captain Endar? ENDAR (puzzled, cautious) Where is Captain Picard? RIKER (beat) He has been injured. I am in command now. ENDAR Very well. Please prepare my son for immediate transport. RIKER I'm afraid that's not possible. Last night, Jono attacked Captain Picard and tried to murder him. We are holding him in custody. STAR TREK: "Suddenly Human" - REV. 7/18/90 - ACT FIVE 52. 55B CONTINUED: Endar is clearly taken aback by this, but swiftly re-groups. ENDAR If you had returned him with the others, this would never have happened! I hold you responsible for this incident. RIKER He'll have to come back with us now, Endar. It will be up to Starfleet to decide the consequences. Endar glowers darkly, rage building. ENDAR I do not accept that decision. I repeat, you will prepare my son for transport. If he is not on board in five minutes, you will suffer the consequences. The screen goes dark. RIKER Red alert. The red alert warning sounds. WORF Talarian vessels routing power to forward rockets... RIKER (frowns, sighs) Ready all weapons, Mister Worf... 56 INT. SICKBAY Two SECURITY MEN escort Jono into Picard's Sickbay cubicle. The boy stands before Picard, taut as a wire, staring straight ahead. PICARD Jono... why did you do it? JONO That doesn't matter. STAR TREK: "Suddenly Human" - REV. 7/19/90 - ACT FIVE 53. 56 CONTINUED: PICARD I think it does. It matters to me. JONO What matters is that I have attacked a Captain. I am ready to be put to death. Picard stares at him. Does he believe that? PICARD You think you are to be killed? Jono's eyes flicker toward him, briefly. JONO To attack a superior is the worst offense. I will die at your hands. PICARD Jono, you aren't going to die at my hands or anyone else's. JONO But... I committed a terrible crime... PICARD What I want to know is why? You seemed so happy just a few hours ago... The memories of happiness seem to bring Jono renewed anguish. JONO I was. The boys turn away, overwhelmed by the emotions that are battling within him. JONO But then... I thought about my father. I felt like I was betraying him. Picard studies the boy... sees his pain... STAR TREK: "Suddenly Human" - REV. 7/27/90 - ACT FIVE 53A. CONTINUED: (2) JONO (continuing) I'd be throwing away all that he's given me... all that I learned from him... my home... running along the river... playing in the games... sharing victory with my brothers... (a pause) ... all the things that are part of my life. The boy draws a breath, looks at Picard with infinite sadness. JONO As I grew closer to... you... I knew it meant leaving more and more of that life behind. Forgive me, Captain -- I could not allow myself to do that. Picard absorbs this. STAR TREK: "Suddenly Human" - REV. 7/18/90 - ACT FIVE 54. 57 INT. MAIN BRIDGE - CONTINUOUS Things are very tense. WORF Q'Maire is requesting communication on a secure channel, Commander. RIKER On screen. 58 ANGLE TO INCLUDE MAIN VIEWER (OPTICAL) Endar appears. ENDAR Commander Riker, you have failed to transport my son aboard the Q'Maire. RIKER Our position has not changed. We are returning him to Starfleet. ENDAR I regret your stubbornness. Much will be lost. PICARD (O.S.) One moment, Captain... 59 ANGLE - PICARD AND JONO (OPTICAL) ENTERING, the Captain, assisted by Jono into his chair. PICARD Captain Endar, last night Jono attacked me with a dagger. ENDAR Which he could not have done had he been returned to me with the others! STAR TREK: "Suddenly Human" - REV. 7/19/90 - ACT FIVE 55. 59 CONTINUED: PICARD (silencing hand) There was a crime committed on board this ship... but it was not Jono's -- it was mine. Puzzled, Endar waits to hear what Picard means. PICARD (continuing) When we found Jono, it seemed so clear what had to be done. We knew if he could only be persuaded to make the decision to stay... you would most likely let him. So with the best of intentions, we tried to convince him... and, in so doing, thoroughly failed to listen... to his feelings, his needs. Jono is staring at Picard, hanging on his every word. PICARD (continuing) That was the crime, and it has taken a huge toll on a strong and noble young man. It must be rectified. Picard looks around the bridge, where he has everyone's rapt attention. PICARD (continuing) Jono will return home -- to the only home he has ever known. To the father that he loves. To you, Endar. Endar is astonished, stupefied -- and achingly grateful. ENDAR Thank you, Captain... PICARD Please transmit coordinates for his immediate transport. STAR TREK: "Suddenly Human" - REV. 7/16/90 - ACT FIVE 56. 60 INT. TRANSPORTER ROOM - LATER (OPTICAL) Supernumerary at the controls. Picard motions Jono toward the transporter platform. PICARD Goodbye, Jono. JONO Goodbye, Captain. Jono starts for the platform, stops, turns, walks back to Picard. He hesitates, then removes his gloves. Stepping forward, he takes gentle hold of Picard's head, tilting it down until their foreheads are pressed together in affection and solidarity. JONO (softly) Thank you. He breaks the embrace and moves to the transporter platform. In seconds, he is gone. 61 CLOSE ON PICARD eyes on the empty pad, sure the right thing has been done. DISSOLVE TO: 62 INT. PICARD'S QUARTERS - LATER Picard ENTERS, finds the room still disheveled, his furniture still disarranged. He looks up, sees the hammock dangling from the ceiling. He smiles, remembering the antic child, but then feels a chill, realizing how empty the room now seems. He reaches up, plucks the hammock from its hooks, and cradles it in his hands. He knows he has been given something by knowing this boy. He begins to put his room back to its former orderliness. FADE OUT. END OF ACT FIVE THE END STAR TREK: THE NEXT GENERATION "Brothers" #40274-177 Written by Rick Berman Directed by Rob Bowman THE WRITING CREDITS MAY NOT BE FINAL AND SHOULD NOT BE USED FOR PUBLICITY OR ADVERTISING PURPOSES WITHOUT FIRST CHECKING WITH THE TELEVISION LEGAL DEPARTMENT. Copyright 1990 Paramount Pictures Corporation. All Rights Reserved. This script is not for publication or reproduction. No one is authorized to dispose of same. If lost or destroyed, please notify the Script Department. FINAL DRAFT JULY 13, 1990 STAR TREK: "Brothers" - 7/13/90 - CAST STAR TREK: THE NEXT GENERATION "Brothers" CAST PICARD DOCTOR NOONIAN SOONG RIKER LORE DATA JAKE POTTS BEVERLY WILLIE POTTS TROI GEORDI WORF WESLEY O'BRIEN ENSIGN KOPF COMPUTER VOICE Non-Speaking VARIOUS SECURITY TEAMS NURSE VARIOUS SUPERNUMERARIES STAR TREK: "Brothers" REV. 7/19/90 - SETS STAR TREK: THE NEXT GENERATION "Brothers" SETS INTERIORS EXTERIORS USS ENTERPRISE USS ENTERPRISE MAIN BRIDGE READY ROOM SOONG'S PLANET OBSERVATION LOUNGE FOREST TURBOLIFT MAIN ENGINEERING STARBASE 416 GEORDI'S OFFICE ENTERPRISE DOCKED SICKBAY QUARANTINE AREA CORRIDORS (VARIOUS) TRANSPORTER ROOM JEFFERIES TUBE SOONG'S PLANET DR. SOONG'S LAB STAR TREK: "Brothers" - REV. 7/19/90 - TEASER 1. STAR TREK: THE NEXT GENERATION "Brothers" TEASER FADE IN: 1 EXT. SPACE - THE ENTERPRISE (OPTICAL) traveling at warp speed. PICARD (V.O.) Captain's log, Stardate 44143.7. Due to a medical emergency, we have been forced to cut short a two-day liberty on Ogus Two and set course for Starbase Four-One-Six. 1A INT. CORRIDOR A turbolift door opens and TROI and a trembling twelve- year-old boy, JAKE POTTS, emerge and head down the corridor. PICARD (V.O.) (continuing) It seems a young man's practical joke has come dangerously close to a lethal conclusion. 2 thru OMITTED 3 3A INT. OBSERVATION LOUNGE (OPTICAL) RIKER is standing alone at the window (with the ship travelling at Warp speed) as Troi and Jake ENTER. Troi motions Jake to sit. RIKER Well Mister Potts, why don't we start at the beginning? JAKE (still trembling) It was a joke, sir. I just meant to scare him. STAR TREK: "Brothers" - REV. 7/19/90 - TEASER 2. 3A CONTINUED: RIKER From the beginning, please. JAKE (nervously and very quickly) We were at the arcade, sir. I brought this balloon with me, filled with red pillion dye. You see, Willie is always making fun of me. I figured I'd get him back. I only meant to scare him. TROI Slow down, Jake. JAKE (slower) We programmed the game for an ordinary laser duel. You know, twenty-one points. Four points for a... RIKER (interrupting) I'm familiar with the game. Go on. JAKE We went out to the forest behind the east arcade. I told Willie that his laser pistol looked kind of funny, almost like a real one. When I went behind the trees, I put the balloon into my vest, and then... STAR TREK: "Brothers" - REV. 7/24/90 - TEASER 3. 3A CONTINUED: (2) RIKER So you made your nine year-old brother think he killed you? JAKE Yes, sir. RIKER And then he ran away. JAKE Yes, sir. RIKER And while he was hiding he ate the fruit of a cove palm. JAKE It was just a joke. I didn't... RIKER I assume you are aware of the infectious nature of the parasites which inhabit cove palms? JAKE I am now, sir. RIKER Are you familiar with the condition upon which I agreed to allow you two boys to remain on the Enterprise when your parents went on sabbatical? JAKE That we'd stay out of trouble, sir. RIKER (keys insignia) Mister Data. (to Jake) Think about it Mister Potts. And while you're at it, think about what might have happened had we not been this close to a starbase medical facility. STAR TREK: "Brothers" - REV. 7/19/90 - TEASER 4. 3A CONTINUED: (3) Data ENTERS from the Bridge and moves over to stand next to Jake. RIKER Have you contacted the boy's parents? DATA (nodding) They are fully aware of the situation, sir. RIKER Good, escort this young man to the quarantine anteroom. Perhaps he'll be helpful in lifting his brother's spirits. DATA Yes, sir. The two begin to EXIT. RIKER (to Jake) Please don't think that you have heard the last of this, Mister Potts. JAKE No, sir. I mean yes, sir. Data and Jake EXIT. Troi looks to Riker. TROI He's very frightened. RIKER As well he should be. I've never been a proponent of practical jokes. More often than not, they have unfortunate results. TROI I wouldn't be surprised if this was his last practical joke for a long while. STAR TREK: "Brothers" - REV. 7/24/90 - TEASER 5. 3A CONTINUED: (4) RIKER I'm more concerned with his brother's future at the moment, Counselor. 4 INT. TURBOLIFT Moving downward. Data and Jake. DATA Our Sickbay does have the facility to isolate parasitic proto-viruses but not in a favorable time frame for your brother. JAKE (more to himself) He really could die. DATA Fortunately we are only two days from Starbase Four-One-Six, and their laboratory can... Data freezes. His head begins to jerk in a more pronounced fashion than usual. JAKE Can what sir? Data, not responding, continues to twitch. He raises his arm and touches the turbolift control panel twice. We hear the turbolift stop briefly and change directions. JAKE Their laboratory can do what, Commander? Data continues not to respond. JAKE (continuing) Sir, I know I made a mistake... I can tell you're angry... but if you're not going to talk to me... STAR TREK: "Brothers" - 7/13/90 - TEASER 6. 4 CONTINUED: The doors open to the Bridge and Data, silently EXITS. On Jake's confused expression -- FADE OUT. END OF TEASER STAR TREK: "Brothers" - REV. 7/19/90 - ACT ONE 7. ACT ONE FADE IN: 5 INT. MAIN BRIDGE PICARD, WORF, and WESLEY. SUPERNUMERARY at Ops. FOLLOW Riker and Troi, as they ENTER from the Observation Lounge and cross to the Command Center. DATA descends the ramp toward Ops. RIKER Back so soon, Mister Data? Data does not respond. He relieves a supernumerary at Ops and immediately begins programming something into his panel. Before Riker can react... GEORDI'S COM VOICE La Forge to bridge. PICARD Go ahead, Commander. 6 INT. ENGINEERING GEORDI We've completed our dilithium vector calibrations, sir. You're clear to increase to warp seven. 7 INT. MAIN BRIDGE (INTERCUT AS NEEDED) PICARD Very good, Geordi. Let me know if you... WORF (cutting in) Captain, did you request a course correction? Before Picard can respond... GEORDI'S COM VOICE Sir, I didn't say we could increase speed to warp nine-point- one. STAR TREK: "Brothers" - REV. 7/30/90 - ACT ONE 8. 7 CONTINUED: WESLEY (surprised) New course set for heading three-four-one mark two-two-one. RIKER Course set by whom? WESLEY Not me, Commander. PICARD (to Riker) What's going on? RIKER (notices Data calmly working his panel) Data, who programmed the new coordinates? Data calmly works on without responding. WESLEY Warp nine-point-three, sir. GEORDI'S COM VOICE I don't advise this, Captain. If we're going to maintain the realignment progression we shouldn't be pushing more than warp eight for at least an hour. Picard looks to Troi who hasn't got a clue. He rises and approaches Data. PICARD (to Data, calmly) Commander... STAR TREK: "Brothers" - REV. 7/30/90 - ACT ONE 9. 7 CONTINUED: (2) Data doesn't react. He pushes one last button which is followed by a loud KLAXON. COMPUTER VOICE Evacuate bridge. Deck one life support failure in fifteen seconds. PICARD Turbolifts Three and Four, gentlemen. (to com) Geordi, transfer helm to Engineering. GEORDI'S COM VOICE Aye, sir. Everyone hurries to the two stage-left turbolifts. COMPUTER VOICE Evacuate bridge. Deck one life support failure in ten seconds. RIKER Reassemble in Engineering. (to com) La Forge, let's get a diagnostic sweep underway... The turbolift doors close before he finishes. COMPUTER VOICE Evacuate bridge. Deck one life support failure in five seconds. All is silent but the beeps coming from Data's panel. The CAMERA PANS to find him busy at work. STAR TREK: "Brothers" - REV. 7/24/90 - ACT ONE 10. 7 CONTINUED: (3) COMPUTER VOICE Deck one life support has been terminated. Data continues at his panel. 8 INT. ENGINEERING Geordi, ENSIGN KOPF and TWO SUPERNUMERARIES are at the pool table. ENSIGN KOPF Our velocity is holding steady at warp nine-point-three. Do you wish to override, Commander? GEORDI Not yet. Computer, isolate cause of life support failure. COMPUTER VOICE Atmosphere conditioning pumps on Deck one are operating in negative mode. GEORDI (to Kopf) How could that be? There are seven independent safety interlocks to prevent that. Picard, Worf, and TWO MORE SUPERNUMERARIES ENTER from the Turbolift and head for the pool table. GEORDI Sir, I think we've found the problem, but it doesn't really make sense. PICARD (to Geordi) It seems we have more than one problem. Bring the Enterprise to a full stop, Commander. GEORDI Full stop, Ensign Kopf. STAR TREK: "Brothers" - REV. 7/19/90 - ACT ONE 11. 8 CONTINUED: KOPF (hits the panel) It's not responding, sir. Riker and Wesley ENTER from around the corner. PICARD I ordered all helm control transferred down here, damn it! GEORDI We did sir. We've been waiting for your instructions. Geordi tries the panel himself. GEORDI (continuing) I'm going to have to do this at the manual input level, sir. He motions to Wesley. GEORDI (continuing) Wes... Geordi and Wesley quickly step to a far panel. RIKER (reading a wall panel) We're still on the altered heading, Captain, holding at warp nine point three. WORF (at another panel) Force fields have been established on all Main Bridge turbolift doors and service crawlways, sir. PICARD (putting it all together) Computer, locate Lieutenant Commander Data. STAR TREK: "Brothers" - REV. 7/24/90 - ACT ONE 12. 8 CONTINUED: (2) COMPUTER VOICE Commander Data is on the Main Bridge. RIKER What the hell is he up to? PICARD Number One, take a security team up to Deck Two. See if you can break through from below. Riker eyes Worf and they EXIT. Geordi reappears with Wesley. GEORDI Everything's locked up, Captain. No control of impulse or warp engines down here. WESLEY Navigation doesn't respond either, sir. PICARD Picard to bridge. Commander Data do you hear me? 9 INT. MAIN BRIDGE Data is at Science One busy at work. PICARD'S COM VOICE I repeat. Data, do you hear... Data turns and presses a button on Worf's station, muting Picard. DATA Computer. Recognize Data, Lieutenant Commander. Alpha One clearance. COMPUTER VOICE Priority clearance recognition Alpha One. STAR TREK: "Brothers" - REV. 7/19/90 - ACT ONE 13. 9 CONTINUED: DATA Maintain minimum auxiliary power and disengage subspace communications. COMPUTER VOICE Acknowledged. 10 INT. ENGINEERING Picard, Geordi, Wesley, Ensign Kopf, and supernumerary, as before. WESLEY (studying a panel) He is on the Bridge, sir. PICARD Commander La Forge, prepare for saucer separation. WESLEY Sir, we're at Warp nine-three! PICARD I'm aware of the risks, Ensign. (to Geordi) When the umbilical splits, we should regain primary control... do you agree? GEORDI (getting the plan) Yes, sir. PICARD (to Worf) . Be prepared to sweep back and pull it in with a tractor beam. WORF Aye, sir. PICARD (to Geordi) Initiate auto sequence. STAR TREK: "Brothers" - REV. 7/18/90 - ACT ONE 14. 11 INT. MAIN BRIDGE Data, still at Science One, is reading something on the console. DATA (in Picard's voice) Computer, recognize Picard, Jean- Luc. Alpha Two clearance. COMPUTER VOICE Priority clearance recognition, Alpha Two. DATA (in Picard's voice) Cancel separation sequence. COMPUTER VOICE Sequence cancelled. DATA (in Picard's voice) Isolate all remaining command functions and accept related orders and inquiries from Main Bridge only. 12 INT. ENGINEERING As before -- a series of beeps from Geordi's panel. GEORDI The separation sequence has been aborted, Captain. PICARD Computer, recognize Jean-Luc Picard Alpha Two priority and re-establish separation procedures immediately. COMPUTER VOICE Orders regarding command functions are no longer accepted from your present location. PICARD And just what location are they accepted from? STAR TREK: "Brothers" - REV. 7/25/90 - ACT ONE 15. 12 CONTINUED: COMPUTER VOICE Interface terminals on Main Bridge only. WESLEY (to Picard) You're the only one who has clearance to localize command functions, sir. PICARD (disgusted) It seems Mister Data has acquired them, as well. Off Wesley's look... 13 INT. JEFFERIES TUBE Worf and a SECURITY OFFICER have opened a large ceiling panel. Riker climbs into it. WORF (studying a schematic on a panel below) The isolinear subprocessor extends three-point-five meters. RIKER (O.C.) I've got a clear path to panel J14-Baker. What's that going to do for us? Worf, still at the schematic. WORF J14-Baker backs onto Science Station Two, Commander. RIKER (O.C.) Have they reinverted the environmental control sequencer? WORF Yes, sir. Life support has been re-established. RIKER (O.C.) Then, you and Casey get up here. Let's get to it. STAR TREK: "Brothers" - REV. 7/25/90 - ACT ONE 16. 13 CONTINUED: Worf and the security guard climb the ladder into the ceiling. 14 INT. MAIN BRIDGE Data is seated in Picard's chair working his console when he hears a series of high-pitched beeps. He crosses to his Ops panel, sits, and presses a quick series of commands. DATA Computer. Configure a perimeter field charge, sections Nine-K through Twelve-T. 15 INT. JEFFERIES TUBE The ceiling panel is open. No one is visible in the tube itself. A bright flash appears from the opening above. RIKER (O.C.) What the hell was that? WORF (O.C.) He's activated a force field, sir. RIKER (O.C.) Great! Just great!! 16 INT. ENGINEERING Picard, Geordi, Wesley, Kopf, and supernumeraries. Picard is pacing near the pool table. PICARD (keys insignia) Chief O'Brien. O'BRIEN'S COM VOICE Yes, Captain. PICARD You had better disable the site- to-site transport function. When we get to wherever we're going, I don't want him beaming off the bridge. STAR TREK: "Brothers" - REV. 7/20/90 - ACT ONE 17. 16 CONTINUED: O'BRIEN'S COM VOICE I'll get right to it, sir. PICARD (keys insignia) Doctor Crusher. BEVERLY'S COM VOICE Yes, Captain. PICARD Is your quarantine intact, Doctor? BEVERLY'S COM VOICE Sickbay force fields don't seem to have been affected. PICARD The boy? INTERCUT: 17 INT. SICKBAY - QUARANTINE AREA Beverly watches Willie in the background. BEVERLY He's alright. But he's not going to stay alright. Sir, we need to get this ship to a starbase medical facility... 18 INT. ENGINEERING - CONTINUOUS PICARD It seems, Doctor, that Mister Data has other plans for the Enterprise right now. On Picard's concerned look, we -- FADE OUT. END OF ACT ONE STAR TREK: "Brothers" - REV. 7/24/90 - ACT TWO 18. ACT TWO FADE IN: 19 EXT. SPACE - THE ENTERPRISE (OPTICAL) is traveling at warp speed. 20 INT. SICKBAY - QUARANTINE AREA (OPTICAL) Beverly passes her hands through two holes in the glass wall. We see a brief blue flicker as her hands break through the invisible quarantine field. She gently holds WILLIE POTTS' head, examining him. BEVERLY C'mon, I can't believe that! Everybody's played a practical joke at one time or another. WILLIE Not me. BEVERLY (continuing exam) Not even a little one? How about April Fools'? Are you telling me you've never tried to pull something on April Fools' Day? WILLIE (shaking his head) What for? It's never funny to the one getting fooled. BEVERLY Well, I'm sure your brother didn't intend this to get out of hand. She pulls one hand out of the opening and we see the brief blue flicker. She picks up an instrument and passes it back through the opening. We again see the gentle flash. BEVERLY (continuing) Certainly not to the degree it has. Take a deep breath. Beverly raises the instrument to Willie's chest. STAR TREK: "Brothers" - REV. 7/19/90 - ACT TWO 19. 20 CONTINUED: WILLIE What's so funny about making someone think you killed them? BEVERLY A deep breath. Willie reluctantly does as he's told. Beverly passes the beeping device from side to side. BEVERLY Have you been drinking all the water I asked you to? WILLIE Yes. BEVERLY Well, keep it up. We may have a short delay in reaching the starbase and I want you... Willie sees something behind Beverly. He spins around and quickly walks to the far side of the quarantine area. Beverly turns to see Troi and Jake ENTERING. JAKE (to Troi) There! You see? How can I tell him if he's not going to listen to me? TROI Why don't you try, Jake? JAKE It's just a waste of time. He won't listen. Jake turns and storms out. Troi and Beverly share an understanding beat. STAR TREK: "Brothers" - REV. 7/18/90 - ACT TWO 20-22. 21 thru OMITTED 22 23 EXT. SPACE - THE ENTERPRISE (OPTICAL) The Enterprise comes out of warp and enters orbit of Soong's planet. STAR TREK: "Brothers" - REV. 7/19/90 - ACT TWO 23. 24 INT. MAIN BRIDGE (OPTICAL) Data is again seated at Science One, punching in coordinates. DATA Computer, prepare to transport me directly to the following coordinates. COMPUTER VOICE Site-to-site transport interlocks have been manually deactivated. DATA Can you override? COMPUTER VOICE Negative. DATA Show me the shortest route to Transporter Room One. The computer beeps and a route map appears in front of Data. DATA Computer, prepare to activate a cascade force field sequence in the following progression. Data types in his instructions at breathtaking speed. 25 INT. ENGINEERING Picard exits Geordi's office and strides out toward the pool table where Riker, Geordi, Wesley and Worf are working. GEORDI No matter what we try, the computer will only acknowledge commands from the bridge, sir. WORF (disgusted) He's blocked every subspace channel, Captain. We can't even call for help. STAR TREK: "Brothers" - REV. 7/24/90 - ACT TWO 24. 25 CONTINUED: PICARD (to Wesley) Have you tried tracing back navigation inputs? WESLEY (nodding his head) We don't even know what star system we're in, sir. RIKER The only way we knew we'd come out of warp was by looking out a window. O'BRIEN'S COM VOICE O'Brien to Captain Picard. PICARD Go ahead, Chief. O'BRIEN'S COM VOICE Captain, he's up to something. PICARD What now? INTERCUT: 26 INT. TRANSPORTER ROOM O'Brien is studying a panel. O'BRIEN He discovered the site-to-site lockout. I wouldn't be surprised if he tries to make it to a transporter room now. PICARD'S COM VOICE How much further can you safely disable the ransporters, Mister O'Brien? O'BRIEN I'm afraid I've done all I can, sir. As soon as he realized we had knocked out the primary power bus he put up force fields around the secondaries. I don't recommend anyone going near those circuits now. STAR TREK: "Brothers" - REV. 7/25/90 - ACT TWO 25. 27 INT. ENGINEERING - CONTINUOUS PICARD (to Worf) I want security teams along the main passageways and in every transporter oom, Lieutenant. See if the computer would be good enough to give you the specific stun setting to disable Mister Data. Worf EXITS. PICARD Computer, estimate time from this location to Starbase Four-One-Six at warp nine. COMPUTER VOICE Inquiries regarding command functions are no longer accepted from your present location. On Picard's frustration we... CUT TO: 28 INT. MAIN BRIDGE Data at Science One. DATA (in Picard's voice) Computer, establish a security code for access to all functions previously transferred to Bridge. COMPUTER VOICE Enter code. DATA (in Picard's voice speaking at a breakneck speed) Four, one, three, three, six, eight, Tango, one, eight, one, one, seven, one, Charlie, four, Victor, three... eight, eight, eight, zero, Foxtrot, six, one, five, three, three, five, nine, five, seven, lock. STAR TREK: "Brothers" - REV. 7/18/90 - ACT TWO 26. 28 CONTINUED: COMPUTER VOICE Security code intact for all specified inquiries and orders. Data walks to upstage left Turbolift. DATA (in Picard's voice) Computer, initiate cascade sequence, accepting instructions from Commander Data en route, now. The computer beeps as the Turbolift doors whoosh open and Data ENTERS. The doors close. STAR TREK: "Brothers" - REV. 7/18/90 - ACT TWO 27. 29 thru OMITTED 30 31 INT. ENGINEERING Geordi, Wesley, Riker and Picard as before. GEORDI He's out. Security team approaching location. NOTE: The following three corridor scenes take place very quickly. 32 INT. CORRIDOR "A" (OPTICAL) The Turbolift doors open as Data ENTERS, turns left and heads down the corridor. A SECURITY TEAM runs toward him from behind, but is stopped by a force field which appears across the corridor in front of them. NOTE: The force field only appears for an instant when the first member of the team runs into it. Force fields are only visible when they appear, disappear, or are touched by people or phaser fire. Another force field in front of Data vanishes when he reaches it, only to be replaced by another ten meters ahead. Immediately after Data passes through a force field in front of him, it reappears as a force field protecting his back. The force field, which previously protected his back, then vanishes. Data continues down the corridor and sees ANOTHER SECURITY TEAM coming toward him. DATA Intersection Eight-J. Aft-port. Establish. The force field in front of Data disappears only to be replaced by another further down the corridor. The new force field runs across the corridor at a point where it intersects with another corridor. The security team which is still on the far side of the force field cannot move forward. Data reaches the intersection and turns left. 33 INT. CORRIDOR "B" (OPTICAL) A new force field appears in front and behind Data as before. STAR TREK: "Brothers" - REV. 7/20/90 - ACT TWO 28. 33 CONTINUED: A THIRD SECURITY TEAM headed by Worf appears around the corner in front of Data. Unlike the previous encounter, Data has no intersecting corridor between himself and the security team. Unfazed, Data continues ahead as Worf raises his phaser. WORF I order you to stop. DATA Computer, begin scan-phase. The force field between Data and the security team becomes visible and starts to move in the same direction as Data. Seeing this, Worf stops and fires. The phaser fire disperses with a flash as it hits the force field. Worf fires again, with the same results, only now the flash is even closer. The security team is now backing away from the encroaching force field. A guard raises his phaser to fire. WORF No, it's too close. Data, his expression unchanged, walks forward only meters from the retreating security team! The creeping force field is all that separates them. When Data reaches the intersection, which Worf had earlier entered from, he turns right. The force field stops at the far side, sealing off Worf and his team. 34 INT. CORRIDOR "C" Data, now alone, walks to the entrance of the Transporter Room. 35 INT. TRANSPORTER ROOM (OPTICAL) The doors hiss open and Data ENTERS to find Riker, O'Brien and a N.D. SECURITY guard standing on the transporter pad, phasers raised. RIKER This has gone far enough, Data. DATA Computer, three-meter cross-seal. STAR TREK: "Brothers" - REV. 7/20/90 - ACT TWO 29. 35 CONTINUED: One of Data's force fields appears separating the pad from the rest of the transporter room. Riker aims his phaser. O'BRIEN I wouldn't advise that, sir. The phase coils don't take well to ricochets. Data has walked over to a wall panel, opened it, and has begun rearranging isolinear chips. RIKER What's he doing? O'BRIEN He's reactivating the site-to-site transport interlocks. RIKER Does that mean he'll be able to... Before Riker can finish his question, Data DEMATERIALIZES. Disgusted, Riker lifts his hand to reconfirm the force field. He is answered by a sharp zap to his raised hand. RIKER Great! O'Brien walks to the back of the transporter pad and carefully touches the wall. Nothing happens. O'BRIEN The force field only seems to go across the front of the pad, sir. Security should be able to cut through from behind. RIKER Great! On his frustrated look we CUT TO: 36 EXT. SOONG'S PLANET - NIGHT Data with the same glazed look trudges through a misty forest into a clearing where a small structure can be seen. STAR TREK: "Brothers" - REV. 7/24/90 - ACT TWO 30. 36 CONTINUED: As he approaches the structure the door whooshes open to reveal a dark, cavernous room within. 36A INT. SOONG'S LAB (OPTICAL) A cluttered, dark room filled with an odd mix of high tech equipment and everyday necessities. At one end is an elaborate panorama filled with dozens of model dinosaurs. Silhouetted by the misty outside light, Data ENTERS as the doors whoosh shut behind him. He purposefully walks to a central spot in the room and stops. A mumbling figure scuttles out of the shadows. DOCTOR NOONIAN SOONG is a ninety-year-old human dressed in an odd, somewhat oriental, lab jacket. He has more than a slight resemblance to Data. SOONG You're right on time. FADE OUT. END OF ACT TWO STAR TREK: "Brothers" - REV. 7/20/90 - ACT THREE 31. ACT THREE FADE IN: 37 INT. SOONG'S LAB (OPTICAL) (A note about Soong: like many of history's greatest minds, Noonian Soong is usually pre-occupied and often self-indulgent. He has few social graces and is rather inarticulate when discussing anything other than cybernetics. Behavior which could easily be attributed to an insensitive or arrogant nature is nothing more than a mixture of scatterbrained genius and playful whimsy.) Data is sitting in a chair not unlike a dentist's chair. His communicator has been opened, exposing micro-circuitry. Soong, using a small metallic tool, adjusts something inside the communicator and snaps it shut. Using the same tool, he begins working inside Data's mouth. SOONG Open. Data opens his mouth. SOONG One of these... He does something with the tool and we hear a click. SOONG (continuing) And one of these... Another click. SOONG (continuing) And... We hear a final click. SOONG (continuing) There we are. STAR TREK: "Brothers" - REV. 7/24/90 - ACT THREE 32. 37 CONTINUED: Data straightens up and looks around the room. He stands. He is quite confused. DATA I fail to recall how I arrived here. SOONG I sent for you... In a manner of speaking. Data reacts, no less confused. He hits his communicator. DATA Data to Enterprise. Silence. DATA Enterprise, do you read me? There is no reply. Soong looks closely at Data's face. SOONG I always loved that face. Please sit down. DATA (still standing) We were headed for a medical facility. I was taking the boy's brother to Sickbay and... SOONG (interrupting) I'm sure your starship will be back for you soon. Please, sit. Data remains standing. DATA I must find a way to contact the Enterprise. SOONG Tell me, do I look somewhat familiar to you? Data carefully studies Soong's face. STAR TREK: "Brothers" - REV. 7/18/90 - ACT THREE 33. 37 CONTINUED: (2) DATA You do bear a resemblance to Doctor Noonian Soong, the cyberneticist who constructed me. But, Doctor Soong was killed shortly afterward by the Crystalline Entity. SOONG (laughs softly to himself) It's your lucky day, Data. You've found your long lost father, and he's alive. What do you think of that? DATA But the colony was destroyed, there were no survivors. SOONG I've never felt too comfortable living anywhere without a prearranged route of escape. I admit, I wouldn't have guessed I'd be running from a giant snowflake, but... (he shrugs) Data studies Soong's face. DATA It is really you. SOONG Indulge an old man and stand on one leg for me. Data is truly confused. How did he get here? What should he say to Soong? Why is he being asked to stand on one leg? SOONG Please. Data obediently lifts one leg. Soong stares silently for a long beat. STAR TREK: "Brothers" - REV. 7/18/90 - ACT THREE 33A. 37 CONTINUED: (3) SOONG Excellent! You know before I activated your positronic net, I had the damnedest time working out those fluidic equilibrium circuits. STAR TREK: "Brothers" - REV. 7/30/90 - ACT THREE 34. 37 CONTINUED: (4) Data remains on one foot. DATA Perhaps you could help me contact my ship. SOONG If you can't raise them with your... (he points) communicator, what can I do? (re: Data's foot) It's alright. You can put it down. Data puts his foot down. SOONG (continuing) They'll be back for you. I'm certain. Trust me. (beat) Now, tell me. How are you at differentiating between a humid day and a dry one? DATA (a bit confused by the quick change in subject) The moisture content of the ship's atmosphere is maintained at a moderate thirty-seven percent. SOONG No, No. Not your ship. When you're on land, a planet. DATA I can differentiate between varying hygrometric levels. SOONG Without some sort of external sensor? DATA Yes, sir. SOONG What then? What's the difference? STAR TREK: "Brothers" - REV. 7/30/90 - ACT THREE 35. 37 CONTINUED: (5) Data's not sure what he's asking. SOONG (continuing) Between humid and dry? DATA Humid air feels different against my skin, sir. And it carries smells differently. I assume this is due to the fact that moisture... SOONG (interrupting) How wonderful. I tried so hard to get that right. It's very important you know. A delighted Soong walks to his dinosaur collection and begins fiddling with a very small model. DATA May I ask why you have brought me here? SOONG I incorporated an encoded homing circuit into your sublogic controller. DATA Your response refers to how you brought me here, not why. Soong continues to fiddle with his model, not looking up. SOONG (somewhat sarcastically) Haven't you missed me, Data? Answering his own question. SOONG (continuing) I suppose that's impossible. DATA I assumed you dead, sir. STAR TREK: "Brothers" - REV. 7/24/90 - ACT THREE 36. 37 CONTINUED: (6) Soong puts the tiny dinosaur back in place. SOONG Well, my longevity isn't the only surprise I have in store for you, Data. On Data's perplexed reaction we CUT TO: 38 EXT. SPACE - THE ENTERPRISE (OPTICAL) The Enterprise in orbit of Soong's planet. 39 INT. MAIN ENGINEERING Picard, Geordi, Riker and Wesley... GEORDI The quarantine field in Sickbay, sir. PICARD You have access to it? WESLEY (nodding) When he transferred force field control to the Bridge he must have only specified fields he was planning to initiate. The quarantine field was already operating. GEORDI Under normal circumstances, we could divert that field energy and use it to cancel the force field protecting the bridge... But we have to retain the medical quarantine. PICARD Determine the absolute minimum field energy that Doctor Crusher needs... and use the rest to get me onto my bridge. STAR TREK: "Brothers" - REV. 7/24/90 - ACT THREE 37. 40 INT. SICKBAY - QUARANTINE AREA (OPTICAL) CLOSE on a NURSE'S hand holding a hypospray as it passes through the quarantine field openings, causing the brief blue flicker. PULL BACK to see her deliver the injection into Willie's neck. Beverly ENTERS and sits in the chair the nurse has vacated. Willie doesn't look well. BEVERLY How are you feeling this morning? WILLIE Not so great. I'm having trouble standing up. I get sorta dizzy. BEVERLY You know the old story about the man who tells his doctor, "It hurts when I raise my arm like this?" Beverly raises her arm. Willie replies by shaking his head. BEVERLY (continues, lowering her arm) The doctor says, "Then don't raise your arm like that." Willie manages a hint of a smile. WILLIE (catching on) So, if I get dizzy standing up... BEVERLY Don't stand up. Geordi and a supernumerary ENTER carrying monitoring devices. GEORDI Okay Doc, we're ready. If all goes well you shouldn't notice a thing. BEVERLY Make sure all goes well, Commander. Geordi and the supernumerary EXIT as Beverly turns her attention back to Willie. STAR TREK: "Brothers" - REV. 7/24/90 - ACT THREE 38. 40 CONTINUED: BEVERLY Your brother says you still won't speak to him. WILLIE So? BEVERLY This is very hard on him, too. He feels very guilty about what happened. He's your brother. WILLIE (angry) Why is everybody so worried about him? I'm the one who's sick... I'm the one who's gonna die. Willie gets up and almost loses his footing, he's trembling. BEVERLY Nobody's going to die, Willie. Do you hear me? Nobody! Willie struggles to his bed within the quarantine area and buries his head in his hands. 41 INT. MAIN BRIDGE The Bridge is empty. After a beat, the turbolift doors open and a cautious Worf with two N.D. security guards ENTER, phasers drawn. After a quick look -- WORF (to com) Captain, we are in. PICARD'S COM VOICE We're on our way, Lieutenant. Worf walks to his station and hits a button. WORF Computer, restore Tactical Station. COMPUTER VOICE Deactivation of command function overrides requires Alpha Two clearance. STAR TREK: "Brothers" - REV. 7/18/90 - ACT THREE 39. 41 CONTINUED: Worf snarls in frustration as we CUT TO: 42 INT. TURBOLIFT Picard, Riker, and Geordi. The turbolift is moving upward. RIKER Beverly thinks its going to be tight. Let's hope he didn't take us too far off course. PICARD Let's hope. 43 INT. MAIN BRIDGE The turbolift doors open and Picard and Riker cross to Worf. Geordi goes to his aft station. WORF (to Picard) It won't answer to my clearance, sir. PICARD (to Computer) Computer, this is Captain Picard. Return all command functions to stations. COMPUTER VOICE Alpha Two clearance recognized. Please enter security code. PICARD (furious) Security code!? GEORDI I was afraid of something like that. A series of beeps is heard from Worf's station. WORF Sensors are operative. STAR TREK: "Brothers" - REV. 7/30/90 - ACT THREE 40. 43 CONTINUED: RIKER Well at least that's something. What have you got? WORF (checking his panel) No fix on Data. But I am picking up a single lifeform on the surface, sir. It appears human. PICARD That's one human who's got the answers to a lot of questions. WORF Something else, sir. PICARD What is it? Worf studies his board. WORF A small vessel... entering orbit. I detect no lifeforms aboard. On Picard's look we CUT TO: 44 INT. SOONG'S LAB (OPTICAL) CLOSE ON Data's face. One hand is patting his head rhythmically. PULL BACK to reveal his other hand, palm open, making circular movements on his stomach. Soong sits opposite, entranced. SOONG Good. Good. Keep it up. Ah huh... Soong giggles with delight. SOONG (continuing) Old Tom Handy swore you'd never master that. Whistle! Data, still patting and rubbing, begins to whistle "Pop Goes the Weasel"... poorly. Soong's face sinks. STAR TREK: "Brothers" - REV. 7/30/90 - ACT THREE 41. 44 CONTINUED: SOONG Ah, well. Enough Data, sit. Data stops whistling, patting and rubbing... and sits. SOONG I've been able to keep track of you from time to time. You've become somewhat of a celebrity in cybernetic circles. (after a beat) Why Starfleet? DATA Sir? SOONG I gave you the ability to choose whatever you wanted... to do whatever you wanted. Why Starfleet? DATA It was Starfleet officers who rescued me. SOONG Ah. So you decided to emulate your emancipators. How disappointing. DATA What choice of vocation would have met with your approval? SOONG I often hoped you might become a scientist... perhaps a cyberneticist. DATA To follow in your footsteps, as it were? SOONG I see -- nothing wrong with that. STAR TREK: "Brothers" - 7/13/90 - ACT THREE 42. 44 CONTINUED: (2) DATA May I ask you a question, sir? SOONG Certainly. Anything you'd like. DATA Why did you create me? SOONG (after a beat) Why does a painter paint? Why does a boxer box? You know what Michelangelo used to say? The sculptures he made were already there before he started, hidden in the marble. All he had to do was remove the unneeded bits. It wasn't quite that easy with you Data. But the need to do it, my need to do it, was no different than Michelangelo's need. (he rises) Now, let me ask you a question. Data cocks his head. SOONG (as if posing a riddle) Why are humans so fascinated with old things? DATA Old things? SOONG (nodding) Old buildings, churches, walls, ancient things, antique things... tables, clocks, knick knacks... Why? DATA There are many possible explanations. SOONG If you brought a Noophian to Earth he'd look around and say, "Tear that old village down. It's hanging in rags. (MORE) STAR TREK: "Brothers" - REV. 7/20/90 - ACT THREE 43. 44 CONTINUED: (3) SOONG (Cont'd) Build me something new, something efficient." But to a human, that ancient wall, that old house, is a shrine, something to cherish.... Again I ask you, why? DATA Perhaps, for humans, old things represent a tie to the past. SOONG And what's so important about the past? People needed money, they got sick. Why tie yourself to that? DATA Humans are mortal. They seem to need a sense of continuity. SOONG Ah hah!! Why? DATA To give their lives meaning... A sense of purpose. SOONG And does this continuity only run one way, back into the past? DATA I suppose it is a factor in the human desire to procreate. SOONG So you believe that having children gives humans a sense of immortality, do you? DATA It is a reasonable explanation to your query, sir. SOONG (smiling) And perhaps to yours, as well, Data. STAR TREK: "Brothers" - REV. 7/20/90 - ACT THREE 44. 44 CONTINUED: (4) A loud whoosh from offscreen causes Data and Soong to turn. In the now-open doorway, we see a figure lit from behind. The door whooshes closed as the figure walks toward us through the shadows. Data and Soong stand. SOONG It appears we have a visitor. The figure walks to the same central spot to which Data did when he first arrived. As he comes out of the shadows to a halting stop, we see that the intruder is LORE. Data's "brother" is dressed in an odd outfit reminiscent of the Pakleds. He is in the same dazed state in which Data appeared when he arrived. DATA Lore!! SOONG (equally surprised) Well, well, it seems we've got ourselves a family reunion. FADE OUT. END OF ACT THREE STAR TREK: "Brothers" - REV. 7/19/90 - ACT FOUR 45. ACT FOUR FADE IN: 45 INT. SOONG'S LAB (OPTICAL) Lore is now seated in the same "dentist" chair in which we found Data earlier. Soong is standing over him, arranging some tools. Data stands beside Soong. DATA Doctor, I implore you, please do not reactivate him. SOONG Don't be ridiculous, Data. (to Lore) Open. Lore obediently opens his mouth as Soong reaches in with an instrument. SOONG (continuing to Data) Lore is far from the maniacal android you have made him out to be. In any case, he'll obey me. He always did. DATA But he admitted to an alliance with the Crystal Entity. To gain its favor he betrayed the colonists and would have betrayed the Enterprise as well had I not... Soong is distracted by his work. He interrupts Data. SOONG (to Lore) Hold still... Soong does something with the tool and we hear a click. SOONG (continuing) There. One more. We hear another click and Soong continues working, not looking up as he speaks to Data. STAR TREK: "Brothers" - REV. 7/24/90 - ACT FOUR 46. 45 CONTINUED: SOONG (continuing) I'm well aware of Lore's shortcomings. Remember, it was I who deactivated him. DATA And, as I have explained, it was I who was responsible for his reactivation. But it serves no purpose to make the same mistake twice. SOONG (still working) In science, Data, making the same mistake twice is often not a mistake at all. Quite the contrary. The instrument makes a final click. SOONG (continuing) That should do it. Lore straightens up and looks around. He sees Data and then Soong. LORE (with sarcasm) So, you're still alive. I'm surprised you woke me. Why didn't you just take me apart and be done with it? That is why the two of you captured me? SOONG (patiently) Data had nothing to do with this, Lore. And no one captured you... not exactly, that is. You see, both of your brains contain a simple homing device. Data's was activated purposefully. Yours... well until you walked in that door I didn't know you had ever been reassembled. LORE (to Soong) No thanks to you. STAR TREK: "Brothers" - REV. 7/30/90 - ACT FOUR 47. 45 CONTINUED: (2) Lore turns to Data. LORE But thanks to you, dear brother, I spent nearly two years drifting in space. If it hadn't been for a fortunate encounter with a Pakled trade ship, I'd still be out there. DATA I had no alternative. You would have destroyed the Enterprise. Lore gives a disgusted smile. LORE (to Soong) Well, since I appear to be an uninvited guest at your little party, I'll leave you with your beloved son and be on my way. SOONG No, wait. Stay here... There are questions I can answer. You'll have no chance to ask them later. (very matter of factly) You see, I'm dying. STAR TREK: "Brothers" - REV. 7/24/90 - ACT FOUR 48. 45 CONTINUED: (3) DATA (after a beat) Dying from what, sir? LORE (pacing) Wait a minute. Wait a minute. What do you mean you're dying? You look fine. You're not that old. You look fine. What is this? Some kind of trick to see how we'd react? Lore is agitated, emotional. SOONG (gently) I wish it were. Lore stares at him, sees he's telling the truth and lowers his head, shaking it in disbelief. He is truly feeling grief. Data's face shows no emotion. He calmly repeats himself. DATA Dying from what, sir? Soong looks up at Data and smiles understandingly. STAR TREK: "Brothers" - REV. 7/19/90 - ACT FOUR 49. 46 EXT. SPACE - THE ENTERPRISE (OPTICAL) in around Soong's planet. 47 INT. OBSERVATION LOUNGE Picard, Riker, Beverly, Troi, Geordi and Worf. WORF We have control of sensors, life support and auxiliary power, Captain. Nothing more. PICARD The code, Mister La Forge? GEORDI (shaking his head) We can't even locate the file address. At least that would tell us how many digits we're talking about. Not that it would really help. PICARD I want something that will really help. BEVERLY And quickly. Willie Potts has twenty-four hours, thirty-six tops. If it goes longer than that, the only thing Starbase Four-One-Six will have left to do is a postmortem. RIKER (to Geordi) Geordi, if the computer's programmed to allow Data to transport down, it would figure that it would allow him to beam back up. Right? GEORDI It would figure. RIKER And Data left a trace imprint when he beamed down? STAR TREK: "Brothers" - REV. 7/19/90 - ACT FOUR 50. 47 CONTINUED: GEORDI (nodding) Everyone does. RIKER So what would be involved in pulling that trace and finding a way to make the computer think someone else is Data? Maybe a few someone elses? GEORDI We'd have to access the transport controller and reset it to a testing mode; convince it that it's back in school accepting simulated inputs. It's going to be tough without the main computer, but we could network a few tricorders together. PICARD Try, Mister La Forge. GEORDI Yes, sir. Geordi and Riker exchange a look and EXIT. 48 INT. SOONG'S LAB (OPTICAL) Soong is repositioning his model dinosaurs as Lore paces behind him, still visibly upset. Data is seated. LORE You did what you had to do? What kind of answer is that? SOONG The only one I can give you. You were not... (he thinks of the right word) ... "functioning" properly. DATA Lore told me the colonists became envious of him because you made him "so completely human." STAR TREK: "Brothers" - REV. 7/24/90 - ACT FOUR 51. 48 CONTINUED: SOONG (smiles sadly) I wouldn't exactly have used the word "envious." LORE (ignoring Data's line of thought) You disassembled me. Took me apart... and so soon after you had put me together. You gave me no chance. DATA Lore also said the colonists petitioned you to replace him with a "less perfect" android? Soong looks to Lore as if to say, "Did you really tell him that?" SOONG (to Data) The last thing you should think of yourself as Data is "less perfect." The two of you are virtually identical... except for a bit of programming. DATA (to himself) It was a lie. Another lie. LORE (to Soong) I would have proven to you that I was worthy, if you had given me the chance. But it was easier to turn your back and build your precious Data. Soong stands and turns to Lore. SOONG You were the first. You meant as much to me as Data ever did. But you were unstable. The colonists weren't envious of you, they were afraid of you. You were unstable. STAR TREK: "Brothers" - REV. 7/19/90 - ACT FOUR 51A. 48 CONTINUED: (2) DATA (to himself) I am not less perfect than Lore. STAR TREK: "Brothers" - REV. 7/19/90 - ACT FOUR 52. 48 CONTINUED: (3) LORE (to Soong, pleading) Why didn't you try to fix me? It was within your power to fix me! Soong sits back down at his dinosaur table. After a beat. SOONG It wasn't as easy as that. The next logical step was to construct Data. Afterward, I planned to get back to you... to "fix" you. But I never got that chance. LORE (angry and almost in tears) Next logical step?! DATA (to himself) I am not less perfect than Lore. SOONG Enough! Sit down, both of you. They both sit. SOONG For all these years I've been plagued by what went wrong. (to Lore) With all the complexities you possessed, the nuances... basic emotion seemed almost simple in comparison. But the emotion turned, and twisted, and became entangled with ambition... Lore, if I had known you were no longer sitting in pieces on a distant shelf... If I had known I could push a button and bring you here... I would have spent those years trying to make things right for you as well. But all I knew of was Data. (MORE) STAR TREK: "Brothers" - REV. 8/6/90 - ACT FOUR 53. 48 CONTINUED: (4) SOONG (Cont'd) (to Data) So I worked, long and hard, and now I believe I've succeeded. Soong pulls a little circuit chip from a small container and holds it up. SOONG (continuing) This is why I brought you here. Basic emotions, Data. Simple feelings. Your feelings. Data cocks his head, but says nothing. He steps closer to inspect the chip. SOONG (continuing) I've imagined how hard it's been for you... living amongst beings so moved by emotion. Lore crosses to Data. LORE (seemingly sincere, he whispers) I don't have to imagine. I know how hard it's been. But, you'll be surprised Data... feelings do funny things. You may even learn to understand your "evil" brother... to forgive him. We will be more alike, you and I. You'll see. I'm happy for you. DATA I question your sincerity, Lore. SOONG (re: the chip) Perhaps with this you'll learn to be more trusting, Data. Your brother has had good reason to be bitter. DATA But sir, Lore was responsible for... STAR TREK: "Brothers" - REV. 7/24/90 - ACT FOUR 53A. 48 CONTINUED: (5) SOONG (interrupting) He wasn't given the chance you and I were given... to live. (still talking to Data, he looks at Lore) But now I'm sure he understands why I had to do what I did. (to Lore) If there was only time left, I could help you as well... what a shame. (Soong turns) The procedure is quite simple, but I'll need to rest first, I'm tired. LORE And after the procedure, what then? STAR TREK: "Brothers" - 7/13/90 - ACT FOUR 54. 48 CONTINUED: (4) SOONG I assume Data will return to his ship, and you to yours. LORE No. You'll need someone to care for you. I will remain. Soong stares at Lore warmly, and then at Data. SOONG I need to rest now. Soong begins to leave the room. LORE May I assist you... with the procedure? Soong dismisses the offer with a wave of his hand. SOONG It's a simple insertion... no need. He EXITS. Lore and Data are alone. Lore smiles at Data. Data cocks his head but does not return his brother's smile, as we: FADE OUT. END OF ACT FOUR STAR TREK: "Brothers" - 7/13/90 - ACT FIVE 55. ACT FIVE FADE IN: 49 EXT. SPACE - THE ENTERPRISE (OPTICAL) in orbit of Soong's planet. 50 INT. CORRIDOR Picard and Riker are walking at a brisk pace. PICARD They're sure this is going to work? RIKER Nobody knows the Transporters better than O'Brien and La Forge. They tell me they've managed more than a little sleight of hand with our authorization codes. PICARD And they can insert them into the recall loop? RIKER (nodding) The computer should think all three of us are Data. 51 INT. TRANSPORTER ROOM (OPTICAL) The Transporter doors open as Picard and Riker ENTER, continuing their conversation. Worf and Geordi are already on the pad. O'Brien is behind his console. RIKER (continuing; joking) Let's just hope we don't all beam back looking like Data. Riker climbs onto the pad as Picard goes over to O'Brien. O'BRIEN Whenever you say, sir. STAR TREK: "Brothers" - 7/13/90 - ACT FIVE 56. 51 CONTINUED: PICARD (to Riker) Bring him home, Number One. Picard turns to O'Brien. PICARD (cont'd) Energize. The away team DEMATERIALIZES. 52 INT. SOONG'S LAB (OPTICAL) Lore is seated in the "dentist" chair, as before. He appears unconscious. Rather than working in his mouth, Soong is busy inside an open flap on Lore's neck. Finally, he runs a scanner over the area and carefully closes the flap. Soong reaches behind Lore and manipulates the on/off switch hidden in his back. Lore opens his eyes and looks around. SOONG (quietly) Data? Lore smiles and slowly begins to sing. LORE The sons of the prophet Were valiant and bold And quite unaccustomed to fear But of all the most reckless Or so I am told Was Abdul Abulbul Amir. Soong watches curiously. SOONG How do you feel? LORE I've always loved that ditty. I could never quite get the cadence down before. Thanks, Father. SOONG (smiling) You called me Father. STAR TREK: "Brothers" - REV. 7/24/90 - ACT FIVE 57. 52 CONTINUED: LORE Would you prefer I call you "Often- Wrong?" SOONG (puzzled) What did Lore tell you about that? LORE Often-Wrong Soong! That is what the colonists called you, isn't it? A very sloppy rhyme... Lore tries unsuccessfully to make the two words rhyme. LORE Wrong Soong. Wrong Soong. No, doesn't work. Let's see... He stands and struts about the room, thinking up a good rhyme. Soong watches. Something's obviously wrong. SOONG Data, tell me how you're feeling. Lore stops. He's got one. LORE (reciting) Often-Wrong's got a broken heart Can't even tell his boys apart. SOONG Lore! LORE Well, well, you're not quite as feeble as I thought. SOONG This won't work. Those circuits, they weren't designed for you. Soong looks around the room. SOONG (continuing) Where's Data? STAR TREK: "Brothers" - REV. 7/24/90 - ACT FIVE 58. 52 CONTINUED: (2) LORE (mimicking) "Where's Data?" You didn't fill Data with substandard parts! That honor was bestowed upon me, remember? You owe me, old man. Not him, me! Lore jerks and stiffens momentarily. He relaxes. SOONG You're not listening to me. It was not meant for you. It must be removed. LORE (laughing) Nice try, Often-Wrong. Lore stiffens again and relaxes. LORE I'm not quite sure what it's doing. But its doing something. Soong grabs Lore, a pleading look on his face. SOONG I didn't know you were alive. If I had... Lore savagely flings Soong across the room with his intense strength. Soong crumples to the floor. Lore turns unfazed, and lifts one of his fingernails. The hinged nail exposes a small button which Lore presses. Lore begins to DEMATERIALIZE in the fashion of a Pakled transporter. LORE (singing) There were brave men a plenty All well known to fame Who served in the ranks of the Czar... The song FADES and ECHOES eerily as Lore VANISHES. Soong lies motionless. 53 EXT. SOONG'S PLANET - NIGHT The Away Team is walking through the same misty forest we saw earlier. STAR TREK: "Brothers" - REV. 7/19/90 - ACT FIVE 59. 53 CONTINUED: Upon seeing the lights of Soong's dwelling, they stop. Worf reads his tricorder. WORF The human is there. RIKER And Data? WORF No way of knowing. Riker pulls out his phaser and the others follow suit. RIKER On stun. Worf and Geordi set their phasers and follow Riker toward the light. 54 INT. SOONG'S LAB (OPTICAL) Soong is still spread out on the smashed panorama. He has begun to stir. The door bursts open and Worf ENTERS, phaser raised. He scans the room as Riker and Geordi follow him in. Riker runs to the semi-conscious Soong and motions Worf to check out the rest of the dwelling. RIKER Worf. Worf cautiously EXITS through a door as Geordi joins Riker. RIKER (comforting Soong) It's all right, take it easy. GEORDI (stares at Soong and recognizes him) It's Noonian Soong. RIKER That's impossible. Soong's dead. (he continues to check out Soong) I think it's okay to move him. STAR TREK: "Brothers" - REV. 7/20/90 - ACT FIVE 60. 54 CONTINUED: Geordi has walked to a laboratory table and is glancing at the equipment. GEORDI (shaking his head) Look at this stuff. I'm telling you. It's Soong. He walks back and helps Riker carry Soong to a chair. Soong is in bad shape. RIKER I'm Commander William Riker of the Starship Enterprise. Worf appears through another door carrying the lifeless Data. He places him in the "dentist" chair. Data is wearing Lore's Pakled clothing. Silently, Geordi and Worf stare at Data. Is he dead? Riker leaves Soong and walks to Data. RIKER Here. Let me. Riker surreptitiously reaches behind Data and resets his on/off switch. Data's eyes open and he sits up and studies his surroundings. RIKER Do you mind telling me what's going on, here? Data, still booting up, ignores Riker's question. He sees Soong and goes to his side. DATA (to Soong) He surprised me. He rendered me unconscious. What happened? Soong is still too weak to respond. RIKER Who surprised you? Soong is disgusted with himself. SOONG (barely audible) So alike... I couldn't tell you apart... (MORE) STAR TREK: "Brothers" - REV. 7/19/90 - ACT FIVE 60A. 54 CONTINUED: (2) SOONG (Cont'd) He's gone.... back to his ship, I think... (MORE) STAR TREK: "Brothers" - REV. 7/24/90 - ACT FIVE 61. 54 CONTINUED: (3) SOONG (Cont'd) There was only one chip... yours... I tried to tell him... Not enough time to build another. RIKER Who went back to his ship? Damn it, Data, what's going on?! DATA (turning to Riker) Lore, sir. He was inadvertently summoned here by the same signal which activated my homing circuitry. It seems that after two years in interstellar space, he was... RIKER (interrupting) Mister Data. We've got a very sick boy on the Enterprise who's not getting any better. And we're dead in the water until you get us out of here. Data hasn't the slightest idea of what Riker's talking about. SOONG (weakly, to Data) It's all right. Access your third nested memory file and execute instruction five-one-five-five. It will clear your memory block. Data twitches slightly as he executes the instruction. His memory floods back and he recalls all he had missed. DATA (to Riker) I was unaware of the inconvenience I have caused, sir. RIKER We'll discuss it later. (turning to Soong) You're coming, too, Doctor. You need to get to Sickbay. STAR TREK: "Brothers" - REV. 7/19/90 - ACT FIVE 61A. 54 CONTINUED: (4) SOONG No, no, no. I'll be fine. GEORDI With all due respect, sir, you don't look fine to me. STAR TREK: "Brothers" - REV. 7/24/90 - ACT FIVE 62. 54 CONTINUED: (5) SOONG I've lived here a long time, young man. I have no plans of dying anywhere else. DATA But sir, our medical facility could most likely... SOONG (interrupting) Go, Data. Go with your friends. Data walks to Riker. DATA (whispers) May I say goodbye to Doctor Soong, sir? Riker nods, but stays put. DATA (whispering) Alone, sir? Riker motions to Worf and Geordi and they EXIT. Data kneels by Soong. SOONG Everybody dies, Data. Data cocks his head and Soong modifies his statement. SOONG (managing a slight smile) Well, almost everybody. DATA Do you believe... in some ways, we are alike? SOONG In many ways, I'd like to believe. DATA Then it is alright for you to die... because I will remain alive. Soong reaches out and touches Data's shoulder. STAR TREK: "Brothers" - REV. 7/25/90 - ACT FIVE 63. 54 CONTINUED: (6) DATA (continuing) You know I cannot grieve for you. SOONG (smiles softly) You will, in your own way. Goodbye Data. DATA Goodbye.....Father. 55 EXT. SPACE - THE ENTERPRISE (OPTICAL) The Enterprise is docked at Starbase Four-One-Six. PICARD (V.O.) Captain's Log, Stardate 44149.1. We have been at Starbase Four-One-Six for three days. Young Willie Potts is responding well to treatment and has been returned to the Enterprise. 55A INT. CORRIDOR Picard and Beverly walk through the corridor on their way to the quarantine area. PICARD The transfer went well? BEVERLY (nodding) He'll remain in quarantine for another week or two, but he's out of the woods. 56 INT. SICKBAY - QUARANTINE AREA As Picard and Beverly ENTER the quarantine area, they find Data watching Jake and Willie at a distance. Jake sits at the window with his hands through the openings. The brothers are playing with two model dinosaurs. They argue for a moment, but then smile. Picard and Beverly approach Data. STAR TREK: "Brothers" - 7/13/90 - ACT FIVE 64. 56 CONTINUED: DATA Yes, Captain. The boys appear to have reconciled their differences. BEVERLY They're brothers, Data. Brothers forgive. We PUSH IN on Data as he turns his gaze from the boys to Doctor Crusher, weighing her statement. He turns his eyes back to the boys, as we: FADE OUT. END OF ACT FIVE THE END STAR TREK: THE NEXT GENERATION "Family" #40274-178 Written by Ronald D. Moore Directed by Les Landau THE WRITING CREDITS MAY NOT BE FINAL AND SHOULD NOT BE USED FOR PUBLICITY OR ADVERTISING PURPOSES WITHOUT FIRST CHECKING WITH THE TELEVISION LEGAL DEPARTMENT. Copyright 1990 Paramount Pictures Corporation. All Rights Reserved. This script is not for publication or reproduction. No one is authorized to dispose of same. If lost or destroyed, please notify the Script Department. FINAL DRAFT AUGUST 2, 1990 STAR TREK: "Family" - 8/2/90 - CAST STAR TREK: THE NEXT GENERATION "Family" CAST PICARD ROBERT PICARD RIKER MARIE PICARD RENE PICARD BEVERLY LOUIS TROI GEORDI JACK CRUSHER WORF SERGEY ROZHENKO WESLEY HELENA ROZHENKO GUINAN FEMALE COM VOICE O'BRIEN COMPUTER VOICE Non-Speaking 2 STARFLEET TECHNICIANS 1 N.D. CREWMEMBER SUPERNUMERARIES STAR TREK: "Family" - 8/2/90 - SETS STAR TREK: THE NEXT GENERATION "Family" SETS INTERIORS EXTERIORS USS ENTERPRISE USS ENTERPRISE CORRIDOR SPACEDOCK TRANSPORTER ROOM TEN-FORWARD LABARRE (MATTE) HOLODECK BEVERLY'S OFFICE PICARD HOME BEVERLY'S QUARTERS VINYARD PICARD'S QUARTERS CEMETARY RIKER'S QUARTERS WORF'S QUARTERS PICARD HOME STAR TREK: "Family" - REV. 8/9/90 - PRONUNCIATION STAR TREK: THE NEXT GENERATION "Family" PRONUNCIATION GUIDE LABARRE la-bahr (no accent on either syllable) RENE re-NAY ROBERT row-BEAR ROZHENKO rah-ZHEN-koh SERGEY sir-GAY STAR TREK: "Family" - REV. 8/8/90 - TEASER 1. STAR TREK: THE NEXT GENERATION "Family" TEASER FADE IN: 1 EXT. SPACE - SPACEDOCK IN ORBIT (OPTICAL) The Spacedock in orbit around Earth. As Picard records his log, there is a subtle hint of finality in his voice and tone... a feeling that he's wrapping things up here. PICARD (V.O.) Captain's Log: Stardate 44009.3 2 EXT. SPACEDOCK - THE ENTERPRISE (OPTICAL) Revealing the Enterprise being worked on at the dock. PICARD (V.O.) (continuing) The Enterprise remains docked at McKinley Station, undergoing a major overhaul and refit. I am confident that the ship... and crew... will soon be ready to return to service. CUT TO: 3 INT. OBSERVATION LOUNGE (OPTICAL) RIKER is looking over a lot of reports and padds on the desk. The door CHIMES. RIKER Come in. The door OPENS and WORF ENTERS. WORF Phaser upgrades are complete, Commander... RIKER Already? STAR TREK: "Family" - 8/2/90 - TEASER 2. 3 CONTINUED: WORF (acknowledges) We have begun power supply calibration. RIKER You're just too damned efficient, Lieutenant... WORF Thank-you, sir. RIKER At this rate, the refit will be done a week early and you and I might even be forced to get in some R&R before we leave Earth... Worf doesn't crack a smile... Riker gives it up.. RIKER Proceed with the testing, Mister Worf... (hands him a padd) Here's the final schedule for shore leave and personnel transfers. By the way, I'm looking forward to meeting your parents. WORF Sir? RIKER They're on the visitors' list... Worf looks over the padd, finds their names... it's a surprise and not a pleasant one. RIKER (continuing) You didn't know? WORF No, sir. (beat as he struggles with answer) It is... inappropriate for a Klingon to receive his family while on duty. As humans, my parents do not understand. STAR TREK: "Family" - 8/2/90 - TEASER 3. 3 CONTINUED: (2) Riker looks at him, frowns, c'mon loosen up... RIKER Well, I'm not sure I would either, Worf... since this isn't a Klingon ship. If you don't want to see your parents, that's your business... but we don't get to Earth all that often. Worf frowns. Trying to help -- RIKER I'm sure we can arrange for you to have more off-duty time while they're here. WORF (too quickly) No... sir. That will not be necessary. RIKER (a beat) Dismissed. Worf turns to leave... Riker has a second thought... on a more personal level -- RIKER Worf, if you're worried they might learn about what happened on the Klingon planet... WORF Not at all, sir. I have already informed them in correspondence of my discommendation. I do not believe any human can truly understand my dishonor. Worf EXITS without waiting for a reaction. A beat as Riker thinks about it... and CUT TO: 4 INT. PICARD'S QUARTERS PICARD, in civilian clothes, is putting a few belongings into a small rucksack. STAR TREK: "Family" - REV. 8/8/90 - TEASER 4. 4 CONTINUED: The bandages have been removed from his face and he looks fully recovered from his Borg experience. TROI is with him. PICARD (responding) France. Labarre, my home village... TROI Really... PICARD First time in almost twenty years... TROI (beat) Interesting. Picard recognizes a therapeutic reaction when he hears it... PICARD (Don't... ) Counselor... TROI I just find it interesting... that Captain Jean-Luc Picard... the man who couldn't be pried out of his seat for a vacation for three years... PICARD It's Earth... it's home... do I need another reason? TROI I don't know. What do you think? PICARD Counselor, your help has been invaluable during my recovery. I'm better... the injuries have healed... TROI Those you can see in a mirror. STAR TREK: "Family" - REV. 8/6/90 - TEASER 5. 4 CONTINUED: (2) PICARD (insisting) The nightmares have ended. All I need is a little time to myself. TROI I agree. In fact, I'm delighted you're going. But perhaps the choice of where you're going could stand some scrutiny. PICARD If you wish to believe my going home is a direct result of being held captive by the Borg, be my guest... TROI Is that what you believe? PICARD I hate it when you do that. TROI (with great compassion) Captain, you do need time. You cannot achieve complete recovery so quickly. Don't expect so much of yourself. It is perfectly normal, after what you've been through, to spend a great deal of time trying to find... yourself again. PICARD (softly, finishing the thought) And what better place to find oneself than on the streets of one's home village. TROI (nods, smiles) Interesting. (beat) Have a good trip. STAR TREK: "Family" - 8/2/90 - TEASER 6. 4 CONTINUED: (3) She EXITS. Picard picks up his rucksack and moves for the door. He pauses on the threshold and takes a long look around the cabin... could this be a last look? Picard EXITS. FADE OUT. END OF TEASER STAR TREK: "Family" - 8/2/90 - ACT ONE 7. ACT ONE FADE IN: 5 EXT. SPACE DOCK (OPTICAL) The Enterprise still docked. CUT TO: 6 INT. TRANSPORTER ROOM (OPTICAL) O'BRIEN is working on the console as Worf ENTERS. WORF They still have not signalled? O'BRIEN Nossir. WORF (growls) My mother is never on time. It is so... human... of her. O'BRIEN (grins) Well, you know women. And there's a moment as Worf stares at him a beat... and this throwaway comment hangs in the air between the odd couple of O'Brien and Worf who may each know women but unlikely in the same way. WORF I am not looking forward to this... I wish they would come so it would begin and end sooner. O'BRIEN I know what you mean, Lieutenant. WORF Unlikely. O'BRIEN Last time my old man came on board I found him chasing Nurse Stanton around a biobed in Sickbay... STAR TREK: "Family" - 8/2/90 - ACT ONE 8. 6 CONTINUED: WORF I am not concerned about my father chasing nurses. O'BRIEN Yeah, but it's always something with parents, isn't it, sir... FEMALE COM VOICE Enterprise, this is Earth Station Bobruisk. Two to transport aboard. O'Brien glances at Worf... WORF What are you waiting for? O'BRIEN Acknowledged, Bobruisk. Energizing. SERGEY & HELENA ROZHENKO MATERIALIZE on the platform. They are of Russian descent, and carry themselves with pride and dignity. Sergey is compact, barrel-chested... a retired Starfleet Chief growing old gracefully. His wife is short of stature and yet there is an underlying strength to her which belies her slight appearance. 7 ANGLE - WORF sees them... and in this moment of reunion, there is nothing short of love in his face. Even he cannot suppress it... and there is even, god forbid, a smile that grows on his face. WORF Hello, mother... father. They come off the platform and smile at the sight of Worf. HELENA Worf!... Helena beams and unabashedly hugs him and reaches up to kiss his cheek... Worf stiffens, glances at O'Brien out of the corner of his eye... reluctantly leans down to accept the kiss... STAR TREK: "Family" - REV. 8/8/90 - ACT ONE 9. 7 CONTINUED: SERGEY You look good, son. They shake hands. SERGEY Put on a little weight, didn't you? WORF No. SERGEY Sure you have. Looks good on you. Still working out with those Holodeck monsters I bet... WORF Let me take you to... Sergey is already moving to O'Brien... friendly, outgoing -- SERGEY Always good to meet another chief petty officer. (sticks out hand) Sergey Rozhenko, formerly of the U.S.S. Intrepid. O'BRIEN Miles Edward O'Brien. Good to meet you, sir. SERGEY Don't call me "sir", I used to work for a living. They both laugh at the old joke. Worf is getting increasingly uncomfortable. HELENA He's joking. The proudest day of his life was when Worf earned his commission. SERGEY Chief, can you imagine an old enlisted man like me raising a boy to be an officer? He laughs with O'Brien... Worf wants out. STAR TREK: "Family" - REV. 8/6/90 - ACT ONE 10. 7 CONTINUED: (2) WORF I'll show you to your quarters. HELENA Come on, Sergey... there's plenty of time to chat with the "boys"... (to Worf) Your father's so been looking forward to this... She intimately takes Worf's arm in hers... he stiffens. Exiting... SERGEY I want to see everything... the whole ship... I've got all the specs and diagrams of the Galaxy- class starships at home... WORF We are in the midst of repair. I will not be able to give you a complete tour. SERGEY I'm sure if you asked the Captain... HELENA You agreed not to embarrass him, Sergey. Besides, we came to see Worf. Not the ship. SERGEY Fine. Fine. Okay. He leads the way out the door. The last thing we hear... HELENA (trying to be tactful) Your hair's a little longer, isn't it, Worf? CUT TO: STAR TREK: "Family" - REV. 8/6/90 - ACT ONE 11. 8 OMITTED 9 EXT. PATH NEAR HOUSE - DAY Picard walking up a dirt path, carrying the rucksack seen earlier as he passes by a vineyard. He is looking around, drinking in the sights, sounds, and smells of his home. He reacts as he hears movement in the adjoining field... he stops, looks... the sound stops too... he starts up again and the movement follows him. He cocks an eyebrow moves to the field... PICARD All right... whoever's there... I can hear you... The face of a seven year old boy (RENE) reveals itself from his hiding place. It is a face of pure innocence and freckles. A 24th century Opie. PICARD Good lord, a highwayman. RENE A what? PICARD A highwayman is a robber who attacks travelers, but to my knowledge, none have been reported in this vicinity for centuries. RENE I'm not a robber. PICARD I am much relieved, sir. Walking together... RENE I know who you are. PICARD Then, you have the advantage. STAR TREK: "Family" - REV. 8/9/90 - ACT ONE 12. 9 CONTINUED: RENE You're my nephew, Jean-Luc. From the starship Enterprise. PICARD Then you must be my uncle Rene. RENE (laughs) I'm not your uncle. It's the other way around. PICARD Too bad. I rather enjoyed the idea. RENE Why have you been away so long? PICARD Well, Starfleet keeps me very busy... RENE Father says you don't like it here. PICARD I'm sure you misunderstood... RENE No I didn't. He said so. PICARD Ah well, Robert and I... we... (beat) Perhaps it's time to change all that. RENE You don't seem so... so arrow... arrow... you know... PICARD Arrogant... RENE Yeah... arrogant... you don't seem that way to me. What does it mean anyway -- "arrogant son-of-a... " STAR TREK: "Family" - REV. 8/9/90 - ACT ONE 12A. 9 CONTINUED: (2) PICARD (overlapping) Let's talk about it later, shall we? STAR TREK: "Family" - REV. 8/6/90 - ACT ONE 13. 10 EXT. PICARD HOME - DAY The house sits adjacent to a small vineyard. The house itself is made of stone and wood, and there is a noticeable lack of 24th-century design or devices in the building and its surroundings. There is an aged historical plaque on the side of the house. The setting is rural, and looks much like a farmhouse in the French countryside would have looked in the 19th century. Rene runs down the path, ahead of Picard... RENE He's here! He's here! After a few seconds, MARIE PICARD comes out of the house. She is in her mid-forties, and is wearing a simple dress. Marie is very happy to see Picard and she quickly goes out to him. MARIE Jean-Luc! PICARD Marie... She gives him a warm hug and kiss and then looks him over. MARIE It's so good to finally meet you. How are you feeling? PICARD (nods) Just fine. That exchange comes with the slightest tension. MARIE Well, Robert and I are delighted you've come to stay with us. PICARD I was just thinking that I really might be imposing... I could easily stay in the village... MARIE I won't hear of it. It's your home. It will always be your home. Picard can't help glancing around at the house and grounds. STAR TREK: "Family" - REV. 8/8/90 - ACT ONE 14. 10 CONTINUED: MARIE Do things look that different? PICARD No. In fact, the amazing thing is how little it has changed. Everything is exactly as I remember it... the hills, the house, every rock and stone looks untouched by the passage of time. MARIE Robert's worked hard to keep it that way. It's very important to him. PICARD As it was to our father. RENE Someday I'm going to be a starship captain! PICARD (grins) Even you, Uncle... you look so much like Robert when he was your age... (and this is more to himself) ... I half expect to see myself as a boy run out the door to play... MARIE Robert can't wait to see you... PICARD (dry) Yes. Rene already told me. Marie reacts, glances at the boy worried what he might have said, but Picard makes it okay with an understanding grin... PICARD Where is he? STAR TREK: "Family" - REV. 8/9/90 - ACT ONE 15. 11 EXT. VINEYARD ROBERT is between two rows of grapevines, on his hands and knees. He is about six to eight years older than Picard, and manages to appear dignified even as he scrabbles about in the dirt working on the vines with his hands. We can see that he devotes the same careful attention to detail in his work as his brother does on the bridge of his ship. Picard walks down the row and stops in front of him. Robert looks up and sees Picard, but remains on his knees. There is no animosity on his face, but no welcome either, just recognition. ROBERT So, you've arrived all right. (beat) Welcome home, Captain. Picard tries very hard to be warm and brotherly and anything but arrogant. PICARD Hello, Robert. ROBERT Did you shuttle out from the village? PICARD No... I decided to walk. (long beat) I met Marie and Rene. ROBERT Good... good. They've run out of things to say very quickly. Picard tries his best to take a forward step. PICARD It's... good to see you. But it comes out as just another pleasantry. ROBERT (inclines head toward house) Make yourself at home. You know where everything is... we eat at eight. I'll be in in a minute. I've got to save this poor, sick vine. STAR TREK: "Family" - REV. 8/6/90 - ACT ONE 16. 11 CONTINUED: Picard nods as Robert returns to work and after a beat, Picard heads back to the house. 12 NEW ANGLE (MATTE SHOT) In the f.g. are fields of vineyards, punctuated by small farmhouses that reflect the architecture and design of the 19th century rather than that of the 24th century. On the horizon is the actual village of Labarre, a city whose roots stretch back for over a millennium. There is a feeling of old and new living side by side... the village itself is quite modern. On Picard and Robert as the distance between them grows... FADE OUT. END OF ACT ONE STAR TREK: "Family" - REV. 8/8/90 - ACT TWO 17. ACT TWO FADE IN: 13 INT. BEVERLY'S QUARTERS BEVERLY is getting a couple of drinks from the food replicator. Troi is sitting on the couch. BEVERLY Will you have a chance to get down to the surface? TROI Maybe. Will and I have been talking about going back to Angel Falls... BEVERLY Oh, Venezuela's beautiful... Beverly is about to sit down when the door CHIMES. BEVERLY Come in. A N.D. CREWMAN ENTERS carrying a large, old box. BEVERLY (continuing) Oh great! I'll take that. She takes the box and the crewman EXITS. Beverly puts the box on the table and Troi comes over. TROI Something from home? BEVERLY (nods and opens the box) I left it here in storage a long time ago. After Jack died. (takes out an old book) Odds and ends mostly... Troi picks up the book and reads the title with puzzlement. TROI "How to Advance Your Career through Marriage"? STAR TREK: "Family" - REV. 8/8/90 - ACT TWO 18. 13 CONTINUED: BEVERLY (smiling at memory) It's a joke. He sent me that while I was still in medical school. It was his way of proposing. They share a small laugh. Beverly continues to dig through the box, taking out various small momentos and items. She takes out an old-style computer disk, reads the label, reacts... and sits down. TROI What is it? BEVERLY It's for Wesley... from Jack. (beat) I'd forgotten about it... maybe I was trying to forget about it. TROI Why? BEVERLY Jack recorded a holographic message to Wesley just after he was born... it was a gift for when he grew up. Jack was going to make more of them... (beat) He never got the chance. TROI Are you afraid of what it might say? BEVERLY No... I just don't know if it will do more harm than good. He's managed to finally deal with his father's death, but... Troi's attitude is gentle, soothing... she's slipped easily from her role as friend into that of Counselor. TROI Wesley has a lot of questions about his father. Things that you can't answer for him. (MORE) STAR TREK: "Family" - 8/2/90 - ACT TWO 19. 13 CONTINUED: (2) TROI (Cont'd) Perhaps seeing this will help him to understand the kind of man that Jack Crusher really was. PUSH IN on disk as Beverly thinks this over... CUT TO: 14 INT. ENGINEERING Several panels are open, some boxes sitting around... this is a ship undergoing a major refit and it's a bit of a mess right now. Worf stands uncomfortably as his father tells a story to an enthralled Geordi... SERGEY ... So we walk into the school... and we don't know what to expect. Is Worf hurt? Is he in some kind of trouble? The door opens and we see our little seven-year- old... sitting in a chair... and glaring across the room at five teenage boys. (beat) All of them with bloody noses. Geordi laughs. HELENA The principal looked up and said, "Tell me he's an only child." WORF The older boys were... disrespectful. SERGEY And that was only the beginning... when he was ten... WORF We've taken enough of the Commander's time... GEORDI No... no... no, we're way ahead of schedule... STAR TREK: "Family" - REV. 8/8/90 - ACT TWO 20. 14 CONTINUED: SERGEY I just wanted to tell him the story about... HELENA Enough stories, Sergey... SERGEY Okay. Okay. Enough stories... Well, then how about giving me a look at the new engine core ... I used to be a warp field specialist on the old Excelsior class. GEORDI I'd be delighted... HELENA You two go ahead... (to Worf) Your father will be here for hours, why don't you show me the arboretum? WORF Commander La Forge, call me when you... when my father wishes to leave. SERGEY I can find my own way... Turbolift Four is just over there, right? (to Geordi moving away) I have all the specs and designs at home... Worf and his mother EXIT... 15 ANGLE - SERGEY AND GEORDI Sergey has noticed that Worf & Helena have left. GEORDI The theta-matrix compositer makes the recrystallization process ten times more efficient than on the Excelsior-class ships. STAR TREK: "Family" - REV. 8/8/90 - ACT TWO 21. 15 CONTINUED: SERGEY Amazing. (beat) Commander, if you have a couple of minutes there's something else I'd like to ask you. GEORDI Sure, Chief. SERGEY It's about... my son. CUT TO: 16 EXT. PICARD HOME/VINEYARD - NIGHT (OPTICAL) Lights are on inside the house. 17 INT. PICARD DINING ROOM - NIGHT The interior of the home should reflect the same preference for an earlier time and way of life as does the exterior. A single computer terminal is in evidence, along with one or two other hi-tech devices, but they should accent the fact that the house is a warm French country home from the early 19th century and just happens to exist in the 24th century. The small dining area is adjacent to the living room and there are doors to suggest other rooms. The dinner table has been set for a meal of onion soup, baguette, and wine. Picard, Robert, Marie, and Rene are just sitting down. The tone is deceptively cordial. MARIE And your friend Louis wants you to contact him as soon as you're settled... Picard smiles at the name and the memories it brings... PICARD Is he still trying to raise the ocean floor? MARIE Oh yes, he's very excited about it... he's been made a supervisor now... as his wife is constantly reminding anyone who'll listen... STAR TREK: "Family" - REV. 8/8/90 - ACT TWO 22. 17 CONTINUED: ROBERT I don't see why Earth needs another subcontinent. PICARD Oh, it's really quite exciting actually... when you understand the potential of exploring a new world on our own planet... ROBERT (low key) Well, I guess I just don't understand that potential. And Marie jumps in to move beyond the early tension... MARIE The Mayor wants to have a parade... PICARD A parade... ? MARIE And give you the keys to the city... PICARD No... no... ROBERT A little arm-twisting... a little coaxing, that's what he wants, Marie. PICARD (a little sharp) No. I don't. I just want... to rest and spend some time with my family. MARIE I've already warned the Mayor not to make any plans until we talked. PICARD Thank-you. Robert pours the wine. STAR TREK: "Family" - REV. 8/15/90 - ACT TWO 23. 17 CONTINUED: (2) PICARD (sampling the wine) Is this the forty-six? ROBERT Forty-seven. (trying to joke) Drinking all that artificial -- what do they call it? Synthehol? -- It's spoiled you. You used to have a very discriminating palate. But the remark slightly nettles Picard nevertheless. He tries not to sound defensive, but it still comes out that way. PICARD Not at all. I believe synthehol heightens one's appreciation for the genuine article. They eat. ROBERT Delicious, Marie. PICARD Leave it to Robert to find the best chef in France and marry her... ROBERT Cooking is becoming a lost art... thanks to your technology... MARIE Robert and I have had more than a few discussions about getting a replicator in the house... PICARD I can remember the same "discussions" between mother and father... ROBERT He understood the threat of losing what is precious to us. STAR TREK: "Family" - REV. 8/8/90 - ACT TWO 24. 17 CONTINUED: (3) PICARD I don't see that you have to lose anything... just by adding a convenience... ROBERT You wouldn't. I say life has become too convenient. MARIE And this sounds like a very old argument. ROBERT It is. MARIE (tongue-in-cheek) Fortunately, Jean-Luc, being the "greatest chef" in France, I enjoy traditional cooking... so I don't mind losing the replicator argument... especially since I used it to get a sonic shower. PICARD I was astonished to see it here... ROBERT I don't use it. Never will. Rene's been bursting to say something... and in a routine non-sequitur for a child -- RENE I wrote a report on starships for school. And Robert is aware of this... and isn't at all happy about it... MARIE And he won a ribbon for it, isn't that right, Rene... RENE The teacher said it was one of the best he'd ever heard. STAR TREK: "Family" - REV. 8/9/90 - ACT TWO 25. 17 CONTINUED: (4) PICARD Good for you, uncle. You know what? I wrote a report about starships when I was about your age... RENE Did you win a ribbon too? PICARD I don't recall... And now with the first true hostility in his eyes -- ROBERT Your modesty is unconvincing, Captain. Of course you won the ribbon. You always did... And Picard and Robert lock eyes as the boy continues... RENE Do you still have it? (off Picard's look) Your report. PICARD No, I don't think so. RENE I still have mine. MARIE Why don't you go get it, Rene... and read it to your uncle? Rene is out of his chair in a flash and EXITS. Robert looks hard at Picard and in a soft, dark voice -- ROBERT It is hard enough to protect him from all that's out there without your encouragement. MARIE Robert... PICARD I am not encouraging anything... but if you weren't so narrow-minded, if you allowed him to see the real world... STAR TREK: "Family" - REV. 8/8/90 - ACT TWO 26. 17 CONTINUED: (6) ROBERT (bitter cold) Raise your own sons as you would wish. Rene returns, running with a padd in his hand and getting into his chair as the two brothers look coldly at each other across the table... RENE (reading) "Starships... by Rene Picard. There are many kinds of starships that fly through space... but the biggest of them all is the Galaxy class-starship... It has over a thousand people on board... " FADE OUT. END OF ACT TWO STAR TREK: "Family" - REV. 8/6/90 - ACT THREE 27. ACT THREE FADE IN: 18 EXT. LABARRE - DAY (MATTE SHOT) The town as seen before. 19 EXT. VINEYARD - DAY Picard and LOUIS are walking along the vineyard. Louis is a large, gregarious man about Picard's age and should be very outgoing with a zest for life. Looking over the fields -- LOUIS One man's idea of paradise. PICARD Two men. Robert's. And my father's. LOUIS Never did I know anyone less interested in grapes than you, Jean-Luc. PICARD No, I was interested, Louis. And I was proud that my family helped to preserve the traditions. But I did not feel bound by those traditions... (beat) ... as they seemed to be. LOUIS You always reach for the future. Your brother for the past. PICARD There should be room for both in this life. A thoughtful beat as they walk on... PICARD And you, old rascal, you've made quite a shift toward the future yourself... STAR TREK: "Family" - REV. 8/8/90 - ACT THREE 28. 19 CONTINUED: LOUIS Well, hydroponics turned out to be so dull... PICARD (laughs) You should have listened to me from the beginning. LOUIS If I had listened to you I never would have gone on that cycling trip with the Bloom sisters... PICARD And broken your leg! LOUIS And got married. Twice. They laugh. PICARD I hear you've been promoted to supervisor of the Atlantis project... LOUIS (modestly) I'm one of two hundred supervisors... although my wife would have you believe I run the entire project. PICARD It's certainly exciting work. I've kept up with it in the journals... LOUIS Really? PICARD There's only one thing I don't understand... (off Louis' reaction) It's just that you were such a desperately poor swimmer... thinking of you working on the ocean floor... STAR TREK: "Family" - REV. 8/6/90 - ACT THREE 29. 19 CONTINUED: (2) LOUIS (grins) I guess we all find a way to confront our greatest fears. PICARD Seriously, how do you plan to accelerate the buildup on the underside of the mantle without increasing stress on the tectonic plates? LOUIS You really have kept up, haven't you? The truth is... we don't know yet... PICARD The Enterprise used harmonic resonators to relieve tectonic pressures on Drema Four... it's obviously not exactly the same problem but... LOUIS (interrupting) You know, it's a shame... (off Picard's look) The government's been looking for some one to take over the project... a real leader who can come in and get it moving... They're looking for you, Jean-Luc. (Picard reacts) But I know you'd never leave Starfleet. PICARD No, I'd never leave Starfleet. And he said it, but the words come out hollow, without conviction. And no one is more surprised than Picard. The revelation is extremely disconcerting and Louis is sharp enough to catch the subtle shading in Picard's voice. STAR TREK: "Family" - REV. 8/9/90 - ACT THREE 30. 19 CONTINUED: (3) LOUIS That's what I thought. (thinks for a second) Hey, if nothing else, why don't I send over some of the internal studies of the tectonic problem... since you're interested... We could use any thoughts you might have... PICARD (beat) All right. Louis smiles as he realizes that the subject is still alive... and anything is possible. They continue walking in the vineyard. CUT TO: 20 INT. TEN FORWARD Fewer people around than normal, a feeling of being somewhere after normal hours. Worf, Sergey and Helena are sitting down at a table. SERGEY It's a great crew, Worf... and they think the world of you... HELENA They really do... WORF Mother, Father... I wish you would be a little more... reserved... while you're aboard. HELENA Oh, I know we go too far sometimes... SERGEY We're just excited to be here. RIKER'S COM VOICE Riker to Lieutenant Worf. WORF Go ahead. STAR TREK: "Family" - REV. 8/9/90 - ACT THREE 30A. 20 CONTINUED: RIKER'S COM VOICE I need to talk to you about the phaser test results... WORF (rising) On my way, Commander. (to his parents) Have Guinan call me if you need anything... STAR TREK: "Family" - REV. 8/9/90 - ACT THREE 31. 20 CONTINUED: (2) He EXITS. Helena glances at Sergey -- what do you think? Sergey shrugs, worried, but doesn't know. (It's the shorthand communication of people who have been married a long time.) SERGEY Maybe we should just leave it alone. HELENA I can't leave it alone. I'm his mother. They look out at the stars. GUINAN (O.C.) Sooner or later, everyone comes in here, stands by the windows... stares out into space for a long time. 21 ANGLE to reveal Guinan. They look over and smile, hello. GUINAN (continuing) They all look for that one star, the one they call home... doesn't matter how far away it is... everyone still looks. (beat) You're Worf's parents? SERGEY (standing) Sergey... Helena Rozhenko She motions for him to sit... joins them... GUINAN Guinan. I've been wanting to ask you something. HELENA (go ahead) Please... STAR TREK: "Family" - 8/2/90 - ACT THREE 32. 21 CONTINUED: GUINAN (off their looks) How come you never gave him prune juice? HELENA I beg your pardon? GUINAN Worf... he never had prune juice until he came in here... now he can't get enough of it... HELENA (surprised) Worf? SERGEY He didn't want any human foods growing up... everything had to be Klingon... HELENA I learned to cook rokeg blood pie... SERGEY We never quite learned how to eat it though. HELENA It was a difficult adolescence. GUINAN You ought to write a book. SERGEY We didn't do anything special. GUINAN You don't think so? Look at him now... I think that's pretty special... HELENA We knew it wouldn't be easy for him... without other Klingons to look to for guidance... STAR TREK: "Family" - REV. 8/9/90 - ACT THREE 33. 21 CONTINUED: (2) SERGEY We let him discover and explore his heritage for himself... let him find his own path... GUINAN A lot of parents could learn a few things from the two of you... Helena and Sergey exchange a loving glance. HELENA I'm afraid Worf thinks we don't understand him... SERGEY Because we're human, you know, not Klingon. GUINAN Maybe a part of him believes that. But there's another part of him I've seen... the part that drinks prune juice... and comes here to the window... when he looks out for home, he doesn't look toward the Klingon Empire. He's looking toward you. Off their reactions... 22 INT. PICARD LIVING ROOM - DAY Picard is sitting at the table, lost in thought. The lights are low. The table monitor is on with some Okudagrams that Louis sent over about the underwater project. He is staring through rather than at it. Marie ENTERS carrying some jars and glasses. MARIE Jean-Luc? STAR TREK: "Family" - REV. 8/8/90 - ACT THREE 34. 22 CONTINUED: Picard glances up. MARIE Are you all right? PICARD Actually... I seem to have made a disturbing discovery... She looks at him with concern... PICARD Louis mentioned the Atlantis project needed a director... and I actually found myself thinking about it. Her face brightens considerably... MARIE But that would be wonderful, Jean-Luc... PICARD Do you think so? MARIE Having you back home... of course... PICARD Marie, I spent my youth doing everything I could to get away from home... MARIE You've been as narrow-minded as your brother... and it's time both of you began to appreciate each other's worlds... PICARD I can't argue with that. MARIE Given a little time, you might even get to like one another. Picard grins at her. STAR TREK: "Family" - 8/2/90 - ACT THREE 35. 22 CONTINUED: (2) PICARD Well, I already like his choice of wives. I haven't thanked you for your correspondence, it made me feel like part of the family. MARIE You're not like part of the family. You are part of the family, Jean-Luc Picard. He looks at her with appreciation. Robert ENTERS, drying his hands with a cloth, just as there is a knock at the door. Robert moves to open it... Louis ENTERS. LOUIS Robert... ROBERT Hello, Louis. MARIE Come in, Louis... I'll get you some wine... (subtle encouragement) The two of you can talk business... ROBERT Business? PICARD Well, there's really nothing to talk about... LOUIS I'm interested to know what you thought about our plans. PICARD I've just really had a chance to glance at them... I have a few ideas but... Robert observes with curiosity... LOUIS Wonderful. We should discuss them with the board of governors... I've set up a meeting... STAR TREK: "Family" - REV. 8/6/90 - ACT THREE 36. 22 CONTINUED: (3) PICARD A meeting... ? LOUIS Just a preliminary conversation... tomorrow morning... Picard begins a slow build... to contain his anger... PICARD Preliminary to what? Louis takes a breath... okay, I'm going for it -- LOUIS They want you. I mentioned your interest in the project, that's all. That's all I had to say. They jumped at the prospect... PICARD I never said there was a prospect... LOUIS At least, listen to them, Jean-Luc. Picard goes inside himself and turns away, shakes his head, trying to contain whatever is trying to get out... inside him is the anger and pain... feeling pulled between two worlds again... defeated... he never turns back to Louis as he says in his softest voice. PICARD Fine. Good. I'll listen to them. Marie - who misses the full import of this - smiles, glances at Robert who is not smiling at all. He studies his younger brother. LOUIS You won't regret it, Jean-Luc. I promise you. I'll see you in the morning... Hold on Picard... STAR TREK: "Family" - REV. 8/8/90 - ACT THREE 37. 23 EXT. PICARD HOME - DAY PULL BACK as Picard stands alone on the empty grounds... a lost man. On his expression... 24 thru OMITTED 25 FADE OUT. END OF ACT THREE STAR TREK: "Family" - 8/2/90 - ACT FOUR 38. ACT FOUR FADE IN: 26 INT. BEVERLY'S OFFICE WESLEY and Beverly sitting together. Beverly is keyed- up and trying not to let her feelings show too strongly. Beverly holds the disk in her hand, gripping it tightly. She is positive, trying to be cheerful, but there is an undertone of worry in her voice. Wesley is excited. WESLEY What kind of message? BEVERLY I don't know exactly. Your father made it a few weeks after you were born. WESLEY Why? BEVERLY (hesitates) He thought it was important to say certain things... to make sure that he didn't forget to tell you later. Wesley stares at the disk in Beverly's hand, eager to take it, but afraid to at the same time. He looks back at Beverly. WESLEY Do you know what it says? BEVERLY No. (smiles and gives him disk) He wanted you to have this when you turned eighteen... and I want you to have it too. Wesley looks at the disk in his hand for a few seconds, then stands up and gives his mother a brief hug before he EXITS. Hold on Beverly as she smiles... CUT TO: STAR TREK: "Family" - REV. 8/8/90 - ACT FOUR 39. 27 INT. WORF'S QUARTERS Worf's sash is sitting on a chair. He is looking in a mirror and examining the length of his hair. The door CHIMES. WORF Enter. Sergey and Helena ENTER... SERGEY Are we disturbing you? WORF No. I thought you were going to your quarters to sleep. HELENA We just came by to tuck you in. And Worf understands that they're not being literal... it's a way of saying "we care." Worf studies his parents, and drops his eyes as he feels more emotion than he'd care to admit. WORF When I heard you were on the visitors' list, I was... not sure I wanted you to come. (he looks up) I am glad you are here. HELENA We had to come. SERGEY Our boy was in trouble. Worf reacts... surprised... SERGEY (continuing) After we read your letter... about your discommendation from the Klingons... He shrugs -- "of course, we had to come." STAR TREK: "Family" - REV. 8/8/90 - ACT FOUR 40. 27 CONTINUED: HELENA We don't exactly understand it all... SERGEY We don't have to. We know what kind of man you are... HELENA Whatever you did, we know it was for a good reason. WORF My reasons can never be told. SERGEY Your crewmates... your friends... they tell us you're... upset, Worf. WORF I must bear my dishonor alone. SERGEY That's not true. HELENA I'm sorry if this is too human of us... but whenever you are suffering, you must remember... we are with you. SERGEY And that we're proud of you, and love you. HELENA You're our son. Worf reaches out with his huge arms and embraces both of them... and as they hold each other, as tight a family unit as the world has ever known... CUT TO: 28 INT. PICARD LIVING ROOM - DAY Picard is sitting at the table, drinking wine... he is as distressed as we've ever seen him... indeed, if this has been a trip to "find himself" as Troi suggested, then "he" seems only farther away than when the trip started... STAR TREK: "Family" - REV. 8/6/90 - ACT FOUR 40A. 29 ANGLE - ROBERT standing at the door, silhouetted by the light of fading day outside... studying his brother. He moves closer... as Picard pours himself some more wine from the half-empty bottle... STAR TREK: "Family" - REV. 8/6/90 - ACT FOUR 41. 29 CONTINUED: ROBERT Careful... you're not used to drinking the real thing. Picard glances at him. Robert sits down... pours himself some... ROBERT Your... synthenol... never leaves you out of control, isn't that so... PICARD That is so. ROBERT (re: the wine in his glass) This will. He drinks. So does Picard. ROBERT Now there's something I'd like to see. PICARD What's that? ROBERT Jean-Luc Picard out of control. Picard looks away, not wanting to spar. ROBERT I venture you've probably never been drunk in your entire life. PICARD I have nothing but pity for those who abuse any substance. ROBERT As do I. And yet see how you fill your glass Picard puts down his glass. Stands and moves away from the table and the wine... he is already a little unsteady... Robert follows him... ROBERT Mind if I make an observation? STAR TREK: "Family" - REV. 8/8/90 - ACT FOUR 42. 29 CONTINUED: (2) PICARD Yes. ROBERT I'll make it anyway. You've changed. (off Picard's look) What the devil happened to you up there? PICARD Is that "brotherly" concern? ROBERT No. I'm just curious what makes a man change so much... what did they do to you anyway? PICARD You know what happened. ROBERT Not everything... I gather you were hurt... humiliated... I always said you could use a little humiliation or was it humility, well, either one... PICARD I don't want to do this with you... He EXITS through the back. Robert follows. 30 EXT. PICARD HOUSE - DAY - CONTINUOUS Robert trails Picard... Picard tries to control himself throughout the scene... Robert continues to dig at him... ROBERT Why walk away? That was never your style... PICARD I'm tired of fighting with you, Robert... STAR TREK: "Family" - REV. 8/9/90 - ACT FOUR 43. 30 CONTINUED: ROBERT Pity. Tired... PICARD That's right. ROBERT Tired of the Enterprise too. Picard doesn't respond. ROBERT Captain Picard, icon of Starfleet, falls to Earth, ready to jump in the water with Louis. This is not the brother I remember... Robert waits for a retort, gets none, pushes on... ROBERT It seemed the ideal situation for you -- local boy makes good, returns home after twenty years for a hero's welcome. PICARD I am not a hero... ROBERT Certainly you are... you wouldn't settle for anything less... admit it, never could, and you never did. PICARD That isn't true. ROBERT Of course it is. Turn down a parade in your honor? You? PICARD I've never sought recognition... ROBERT Never? And what of the school president, the valedictorian, the athletic hero... arms raised in victory... STAR TREK: "Family" - REV. 8/9/90 - ACT FOUR 44. 30 CONTINUED: (2) PICARD Were you so jealous? ROBERT Dammit, I had a right to be. PICARD (scorn) A right... ROBERT I was always your brother... watching you get the cheers... watching you break every one of father's rules and getting away with it... PICARD Why didn't you break a few rules? ROBERT I was the older one, the responsible one. I had to look after you... PICARD You were a bully... ROBERT It was such a pleasure to bully you... PICARD Try it again. ROBERT Did you come back because you need me to look after you again... ? That's about all Picard can take... the rage he's been carrying... everything he's felt about the Borg... about missions gone awry... about lost crewmen... everything he's ever bottled up explodes in the face of his brother's verbal assault. He grabs his brother by the lapels... and swings at Robert, connecting on his jaw... Robert goes flying backwards, crashing into the brush. STAR TREK: "Family" - REV. 8/20/90 - ACT FOUR 45. 30A EXT. VINEYARD - DAY - CONTINUOUS Robert pulls himself out of the brush and grabs Picard and Picard grabs him and an awkward dance between two middle-aged men acting like children ensues... and slowly we may come to realize there's a slightly humorous edge to this. Robert pulls him to the wet ground and they roll over and over in the mud and as they make one final roll, they realize they're laughing... and the laughter consumes them as they lie side-by-side on the ground, as dirty as little kids, looking up at the sky. PICARD You were asking for it, you know. ROBERT Yes, but you needed it. You have been terribly hard on yourself. Still with residual laughter, betraying the seriousness of the revelations... PICARD You don't know, Robert. You don't know. They took everything I was. They used me to kill and destroy. And I could not stop them. I should have been able to stop them. And he still laughs as tears roll down his cheeks... PICARD I tried... I tried... so hard... but I just wasn't strong enough. Not good enough. I should have been able to stop them. I should have been able to... STAR TREK: "Family" - REV. 8/9/90 - ACT FOUR 46. 30A CONTINUED: His fist strikes the ground. A long beat. ROBERT So, Jean-Luc Picard is human after all. A beat. Picard sighs, knows it's true... it doesn't seem to help. ROBERT (continuing) This is going to be with you a long time, Jean-Luc. A long time. And you have to learn to live with that. You have a simple choice now -- living with it below the sea with Louis or above the clouds on your Enterprise. Picard looks at his brother with new warmth... as they crawl up to their feet, helping each other... PICARD You know, I think you were right. (off Robert's look) Maybe I did come back so you'd look after me. Robert smiles, puts his arm around his brother's shoulder and as they walk back toward the house... ROBERT I still don't like you. And as they walk away... FADE OUT. END OF ACT FOUR STAR TREK: "Family" - 8/2/90 - ACT FIVE 47. ACT FIVE FADE IN: 31 INT. PICARD HOME - DAY Marie enters the front door... reacts at what she sees -- MARIE What in the world... ? 32 ANGLE to see Picard and Robert still covered with mud, eating cheese and fruit at the table... they look up like children caught with their hands in the cookie jar... MARIE What happened here? And they follow her glance, as do we, to see a trail of mud tracked into the house... ROBERT Ah... PICARD It's entirely my fault, Marie... ROBERT Yes, you see, he fell... and then I fell... PICARD We both fell together... Marie comes over and examines the bruise on Robert's chin. MARIE Have you two been fighting? ROBERT Fighting? Oh, you mean this. There's a perfectly good explanation for this... MARIE Shame on you both. What would your father say if he saw you like this? STAR TREK: "Family" - REV. 8/9/90 - ACT FIVE 48. 32 CONTINUED: PICARD He'd probably send us to bed without our supper. They laugh together. Marie smiles, shakes her head. MARIE Well, perhaps it was good to get it out of your system. PICARD Perhaps it was, Marie. Perhaps it was. (beat) I'll contact Louis and cancel the meeting with the Board of Governors. It's time for me to be going... MARIE Already, Jean-Luc? PICARD The ship will be ready to leave orbit soon... and I belong on board. (beat, then to Robert) If I ever doubt that again... I know where to come. Robert smiles slightly and the brothers exchange a look. MARIE You can't leave yet. PICARD I'm sorry. I must. MARIE You're not leaving until you clean up this mess... both of you... As they rise quickly... ROBERT What mess? (off her expression) Yes, ma'am... CUT TO: STAR TREK: "Family" - 8/2/90 - ACT FIVE 49. 33 INT. CORRIDOR Near the Holodeck doors. Wes steps back, stands in front of the doors. His expression is excited, expectant... but there is a trace of apprehension here too. He hesitates long enough for us to realize that this is a big moment in his life. He clears his throat, then in an artificially calm and steady voice... WESLEY Computer, load program, Crusher One. COMPUTER Program loaded. The doors OPEN and Wes walks inside. 34 INT. HOLODECK Dark except for a brightly lit circle in the center of the room. Sitting on a chair in a limited set inside this circle of light is the frozen image of Jack Crusher. Not the towering figure of legend that Wesley (and we) expect to meet... Jack is of medium build, about Wesley's height, finely boned, and perhaps most shocking is that fact that Jack is about 24 years of age. He wears an older Starfleet uniform with lieutenant's insignia. His expression and attitude are cheerful, confident... a man with his entire future ahead of him. 35 ANGLE - CLOSER Wesley studies him... this is not what he expected. Jack doesn't look much older than he does. The man who was his father is more like a peer than a parent. Wesley expected to be awed by what he remembered only as a very big man who played with him as a child. As Jack speaks, Wesley tries not only to pay attention to what is being said, but also to try and get a feeling for who he was and what kind of man he might have been. WESLEY (softly) Run program. The figure comes to life. STAR TREK: "Family" - REV. 8/8/90 - ACT FIVE 50. 35 CONTINUED: JACK Hello, Wesley. As I make this recording, you're just ten weeks old. (beat) I want you to know who I am today. You see, this Jack Crusher won't exist by the time you're grown up... I'll be older, more experienced... hopefully a little wiser. But this person will be gone and I wanted you to know who I am now, who your father was when you came into this world. (thoughtful) I see you lying there in your crib... and I realize that I don't know the first thing about being a father. So let me just apologize for all the mistakes I'm about to make as you grow up. (disturbed by the thought) I hope you don't grow up... resenting the fact that I was gone so much. That comes with this uniform. Right now, I'm waiting for an assignment on the U.S.S. Stargazer. I don't know if I can explain why Starfleet is so important to me... maybe you'll understand when you get this... later on. (re: uniform) Maybe you'll even want to try one of these on. (thinks, gives up, laughs a little) You'll probably be a doctor like your mother. (beat) We named you after Richard Wesley Crusher, my grandfather, who gave me my first flying lesson as a boy. You come from a fine family... of scholars, explorers, artists... your great-great grandfather was a painter whose work once hung in the Prado... (MORE) STAR TREK: "Family" - REV. 8/8/90 - ACT FIVE 50A. 35 CONTINUED: (2) JACK (Cont'd) We've had a skeleton or two in our closet... someday, I'll tell you about the Crusher who was a horse thief on Nimbus Three... but we also had our share of family heroes... a Crusher fought for the Confederacy at Bull Run. One died at Station Salem One. It's a proud heritage, Wesley... one for you to pass on to your children. (MORE) STAR TREK: "Family" - REV. 8/9/90 - ACT FIVE 51. 35 CONTINUED: (3) JACK (Cont'd) (smiles) You're only a baby... but it's remarkable... I see in your face all the people I've loved in my lifetime... your mother... my father and mother... our family. I see me in you, too. I can feel that you're my son. I don't know how to describe it... There's this connection, this bond... I will always be a part of you, Wes... (beat) Well, I hope this made some sense to you... I'm not sure it does to me. Maybe I'll do better next time. I love you, Wesley. He smiles, finished. 36 NEW ANGLE (OPTICAL) Wesley hesitates... then moves toward his father, but just as reaches out... Jack FADES AWAY. Wesley stands alone in the darkness. WESLEY (a hoarse whisper) Good-bye, Dad. CUT TO: 37 EXT. LABARRE - DAY (MATTE SHOT) The town as seen before. 38 EXT. PICARD HOUSE - DAY Picard, Robert, Marie, Rene standing outside. Picard is now in uniform, carrying the rucksack. Robert has a small package. Marie gives Picard a hug. MARIE Be careful, Jean-Luc. Come back to us again. STAR TREK: "Family" - REV. 8/9/90 - ACT FIVE 51A. 38 CONTINUED: Picard smiles at her and then holds out his hand for Rene to shake. The boy stands tall, proud to be treated like an adult. STAR TREK: "Family" - REV. 8/13/90 - ACT FIVE 52. 38 CONTINUED: (2) PICARD Take care, Uncle. RENE Someday, I'll be leaving for my ship too. Picard glances at Robert, knows that this isn't his brother's first choice. PICARD (gently) There's plenty of time for that... keep your mind open... you may decide to do something else as you get older. (tinge of irony) Try not to be so... narrow-minded. Robert hands over the package to Picard. ROBERT Here, Jean-Luc. A little of the fifty-one. (beat) Do not drink it all at once. And try not to drink it alone. Picard puts it in his sack. They shake hands... and then Picard pulls him into a hug... they can bear the intimacy for only a moment. Picard glances one more time... and then walks back down the path he came. 39 EXT. SPACE - THE ENTERPRISE (OPTICAL) 40 INT. CORRIDOR Worf, Sergey, and Helena walking to transporter room. Worf is less stiff with them, more of a family feeling here at last. HELENA Is there anything you want us to send you from home? WORF No... He glances around quickly to make sure no one is listening. STAR TREK: "Family" - 8/2/90 - ACT FIVE 53. 40 CONTINUED: WORF (continuing) Perhaps some of your rokeg blood pie... HELENA (eyes twinkle) It's been a while, but I think I still remember how. They are near the transporter room, the doors OPEN and Picard ENTERS, still carrying his rucksack. WORF (surprised) Captain... welcome back. PICARD Thank you, Lieutenant. Picard looks at Worf's parents. Worf stands up straight... talks with a pride that was missing when he introduced them earlier. WORF Captain, these are my parents. Sergey and Helena Rozhenko. Picard smiles and shakes their hands. PICARD Delighted. SERGEY Quite a ship you have here, Captain. PICARD You got the full tour, I trust... SERGEY Well, actually, there are still a few areas because of the repairs... HELENA Sergey, it's time to go... STAR TREK: "Family" - REV. 8/9/90 - ACT FIVE 54. 40 CONTINUED: (2) SERGEY Yes. Yes. Okay. (to Picard, as she coaxes him away) I have all the specs and diagrams at home... Picard watches them for a minute and then shakes his head slightly and heads down the corridor. CUT TO: 40A INT. PICARD HOUSE - NIGHT Marie and Robert look out the window. MARIE He's still out there... dreaming about starships and adventures. She moves to go outside, but Robert gently stops her. MARIE It's getting late. ROBERT Yes... but let him dream. Marie is a little surprised, but she smiles at this change in Robert. They kiss and move away from the window. 41 EXT. VINEYARD - NIGHT (OPTICAL) Rene is lying on his back in the vineyard, looking up at the night sky. 42 thru OMITTED 43 44 NEW ANGLE (OPTICAL) including the night sky as a shooting star streaks across the heavens... FADE OUT. END OF ACT FIVE THE END STAR TREK: THE NEXT GENERATION "Remember Me" #40274-179 Written by Lee Sheldon Directed by Cliff Bole THE WRITING CREDITS MAY NOT BE FINAL AND SHOULD NOT BE USED FOR PUBLICITY OR ADVERTISING PURPOSES WITHOUT FIRST CHECKING WITH THE TELEVISION LEGAL DEPARTMENT. Copyright 1990 Paramount Pictures Corporation. All Rights Reserved. This script is not for publication or reproduction. No one is authorized to dispose of same. If lost or destroyed, please notify the Script Department. FINAL DRAFT AUGUST 9, 1990 STAR TREK: "Remember Me" - REV. 8/14/90 - CAST STAR TREK: THE NEXT GENERATION "Remember Me" CAST PICARD DOCTOR DALEN QUAICE RIKER TRAVELER DATA CARA HILL BEVERLY TROI GEORDI WORF WESLEY O'BRIEN NURSE COMPUTER VOICE Non-Speaking N.D. DOCTORS, NURSES & PATIENTS SECURITY OFFICER SUPERNUMERARIES STAR TREK: "Remember Me" - 8/9/90 - SETS STAR TREK: THE NEXT GENERATION "Remember Me" SETS INTERIORS EXTERIORS USS ENTERPRISE USS ENTERPRISE MAIN BRIDGE CAPTAIN'S READY ROOM STARBASE 133 OBSERVATION LOUNGE CORRIDORS TRANSPORTER ROOM MAIN ENGINEERING SICKBAY TURBOLIFT TROI'S OFFICE DR. QUAICE'S QUARTERS WESLEY'S QUARTERS CREW QUARTERS STAR TREK: "Remember Me" - REV. 8/14/90 - TEASER 1. STAR TREK: THE NEXT GENERATION "Remember Me" TEASER FADE IN: 1 EXT. STARBASE 133 - THE ENTERPRISE (OPTICAL) is docked at this starbase on the edge of a planetary system. A planet is clearly visible. BEVERLY (V.O.) Chief Medical Officer's log, Stardate 44161.2. We are docked at Starbase One-Three-Three for scheduled crew rotation. I look forward to welcoming aboard my mentor, and dear friend, Doctor Dalen Quaice, who will be traveling with us to his home planet, Kenda Two. 2 INT. TRANSPORTER ROOM (OPTICAL) BEVERLY stands waiting patiently. O'BRIEN is at the console. A quite elderly man in a Starfleet uniform MATERIALIZES on the Transporter pad: DALEN QUAICE. He carries a small bag. As he steps slowly off the pad, Beverly moves to embrace him. BEVERLY Dalen! QUAICE It's good to see you again, Beverly. BEVERLY You look wonderful. QUAICE (smiles) A lie I can live with. It's kind of your captain to ferry me home. BEVERLY It's on our way. (to O'Brien) Thank you, Chief. STAR TREK: "Remember Me" - REV. 8/21/90 - TEASER 2. 2 CONTINUED: O'BRIEN My pleasure, Doctor. Beverly and Quaice EXIT. 3 INT. CORRIDOR As Beverly and Quaice walk along. BEVERLY Dalen, I was sorry to hear about Patricia. QUAICE She'd been ill for some time. BEVERLY Is her death the reason you're giving up your post here? QUAICE (nods) We had a lifetime together, doing all the things we'd ever dreamed. And more. But when she was gone, I couldn't continue to work in that office, sleep in that bed without her... the absence of her was too... distracting... (shakes his head) I'm not sure I'm making any sense. BEVERLY Jack and I didn't have a lifetime, only a few short years. But I understand. When you realize someone you love is lost forever... She shakes her head. QUAICE You know what the worst part of growing old is? So many of the people you've known all your life are gone... and you realize you didn't take the time to appreciate them while you still could... (MORE) STAR TREK: "Remember Me" - REV. 8/21/90 - TEASER 3. 3 CONTINUED: QUAICE (Cont'd) (beat) I'm sorry. There was no reason to heap all this emotional baggage on you. (indicates bag) I usually travel light. She puts her arm through his, comforting him, as they walk on. Her face is reflective as she thinks about what he said. 4 INT. ENGINEERING (OPTICAL) WESLEY is immersed in work at a computer as GEORDI and a couple of SUPERNUMERARIES make final preparations for departure. GEORDI Wes, time for the experiment is over... I want my warp engines back. Now. Beverly ENTERS, stands near the warp drive, watching Wesley in silence, Quaice's words still fresh in her mind. WESLEY (working furiously) Almost done, Commander. On his computer screen is the CAD representation of his experiment: the warp drive and a network of shifting lines of energy forming a distinctively-shaped bubble within it. GEORDI Almost isn't good enough. You want to explain when the Captain says "Engage," and we just sit here? WESLEY Just a couple more minutes! I'm ready to try the new warp field! (sees Beverly) Mom? BEVERLY (pensive) Don't let me interrupt. STAR TREK: "Remember Me" - REV. 8/17/90 - TEASER 4. 4 CONTINUED: WESLEY (on the fly) Hi! GEORDI Wes! 4A EXCLUDE BEVERLY (OPTICAL) WESLEY Right! Okay! His fingers dance across the console. On the computer screen the bubble suddenly flares larger. There's an odd flash of light, almost subliminal, but everybody notices it. GEORDI Computer, level two diagnostic on warp drive systems. COMPUTER VOICE Antimatter containment positive. Warp drive within normal parameters. Geordi hurries over to Wesley. GEORDI Talk to me. WESLEY (stunned) That shouldn't have happened. GEORDI Ensign Crusher -- WESLEY Why would there be any visible phenomena outside the drive? RIKER'S COM VOICE Umbilical disconnect. GEORDI Are you done? WESLEY Uh, yeah... STAR TREK: "Remember Me" - REV. 8/17/90 - TEASER 5. 4A CONTINUED: Geordi quickly returns to his station. Wesley saves his work, shuts down the experiment, looks around for his mother. 4B ANGLE - FAVORING WESLEY'S P.O.V. Beverly has gone. 4C BACK TO SCENE RIKER'S COM VOICE Clear all moorings. Engineering, aft thrusters. Geordi stabs at his console, his team working quickly, but methodically around him. GEORDI Aft thrusters, aye. Impulse power to the helm. Wesley starts to go, stops, shoots a last concerned look around Engineering. 5 EXT. SPACE - THE ENTERPRISE (OPTICAL) moves away from the starbase. 6 OMITTED 7 INT. CORRIDOR - THE NEXT MORNING Beverly steps off a turbolift, heads for the door to some guest quarters, activates the door chimes. There is no acknowledgement. She tries again, then causes the door to open. 8 INT. QUAICE'S QUARTERS Beverly ENTERS, looks around the room. Nothing looks disturbed. BEVERLY Dalen? (no reply) Dalen, it's Beverly. STAR TREK: "Remember Me" - REV. 8/17/90 - TEASER 6. 8 CONTINUED: She keys her communicator. BEVERLY Computer, current location of Doctor Dalen Quaice. COMPUTER VOICE There is no Doctor Dalen Quaice aboard the Enterprise. As Beverly reacts, we: 9 OMITTED FADE OUT. END OF TEASER STAR TREK: "Remember Me" - REV. 8/17/90 - ACT ONE 7. ACT ONE FADE IN: 10 INT. QUAICE'S QUARTERS Beverly is waiting when the door opens. WORF ENTERS. WORF Doctor? BEVERLY Lieutenant Worf, yesterday, before we left starbase an old friend of mine came onboard: Doctor Dalen Quaice. I requested quarters for him. He was assigned here. WORF I was not aware of this passenger. BEVERLY I'm sorry. I thought it was standard procedure for you to be notified once Captain Picard approved passage. WORF It is. Please proceed. BEVERLY We were to meet for breakfast. But I can't seem to find him... or any of his things... WORF Computer, where is Doctor Dalen Quaice? COMPUTER VOICE There is no Doctor Dalen Quaice aboard the Enterprise. BEVERLY Lieutenant, Doctor Quaice is very old, and rather frail. If he fell somewhere... if his communicator were damaged... WORF I will order a search immediately. STAR TREK: "Remember Me" - REV. 8/21/90 - ACT ONE 8. 10 CONTINUED: BEVERLY Thank you. Worf pauses in the doorway, turns to look at Beverly. WORF Even if Doctor Quaice had been injured... why would his belongings be missing? She answers him with an equally puzzled look. Worf nods, EXITS, leaving Beverly alone in the empty room. 11 INT. READY ROOM PICARD is seated at his desk. Facing him are DATA, Worf and Beverly. WORF Sir, I have several teams conducting a deck-by-deck search. It is not yet complete. DATA I have scanned the entire ship, Captain. Other than the Enterprise's regular complement, I can find no one else onboard. BEVERLY (fearing the worst) Your sensors wouldn't detect him... if he were dead... DATA That is correct, Doctor. PICARD (to Beverly) Could your friend have returned to the starbase without telling you? An emergency of some sort? STAR TREK: "Remember Me" - REV. 8/17/90 - ACT ONE 9. 11 CONTINUED: BEVERLY There were a lot of people going back and forth between the ship and the starbase yesterday. DATA We can easily check the transporter I.D. traces. PICARD By all means check the trace log. But even if the results are negative, contact Starbase Command. We should leave nothing to chance. DATA Yes, sir. Picard nods, dismissed. Worf and Data EXIT. Beverly starts to go. PICARD Doctor, one moment please. (she turns back) I'm sure you are aware of procedures involving passengers. BEVERLY Of course. I don't know why Lieutenant Worf wasn't told about Doctor Quaice. PICARD I was not informed either. BEVERLY (startled) But I sent in a request weeks ago. PICARD I never received it. BEVERLY I'm sure I had a confirmation. Picard studies her for a moment, then: PICARD Computer, search passenger requests. Doctor Dalen Quaice. (MORE) STAR TREK: "Remember Me" - REV. 8/17/90 - ACT ONE 10. 11 CONTINUED: (2) PICARD (Cont'd) Point of embarkation: Starbase One-Three-Three. COMPUTER VOICE No listing. Picard looks at Beverly. BEVERLY Captain, I sent in that request. And it was approved. PICARD Then it must have been intercepted before it reached me. BEVERLY And someone else sent the approval? Why? PICARD Doctor Quaice had been stationed at the starbase for some time? BEVERLY Six years. PICARD It might be prudent to find out if he'd acquired any enemies there. He stands, follows Beverly out. 12 INT. BRIDGE Wesley is at the helm. Riker nods as Beverly and Picard emerge from the Ready Room. RIKER On course for Durenia Four, sir. PICARD Very good, Number One. Mister Data? STAR TREK: "Remember Me" - REV. 8/14/90 - ACT ONE 11. 12 CONTINUED: DATA Sir, Starbase One-Three-Three has no record at all of a Doctor Dalen Quaice. Picard exchanges a look with Beverly. PICARD I thought he was stationed there for six years. DATA Not according to their computer. I have also accessed Starfleet records. There is no doctor currently serving in Starfleet named Quaice. In fact I cannot find any service record whatsoever. There are no birth records with that name. I find no -- BEVERLY Data, I interned with him on Delos Four. I've known him for fifteen years. DATA I do not doubt you, Doctor. However I have tried one hundred seventy-three phonetic variations of the name, and -- BEVERLY His name is Dalen Quaice. Q-U-A-I-C-E. Whatever the records say, they're wrong. Turbolift doors open. Worf appears. PICARD Mister Worf? WORF Captain, we have completed our search. We cannot locate Doctor Quaice. RIKER You're not alone. STAR TREK: "Remember Me" - REV. 8/17/90 - ACT ONE 12. 12A ANGLE - TO INCLUDE WESLEY as he begins to realize a terrible possibility. BEVERLY He was onboard. I met him in Transporter Room Three myself. PICARD Then it appears, for reasons unknown, someone has gone to great pains to erase all traces of this man. RIKER (to Beverly) Who was on transporter duty when he came aboard? HARD CUT TO: 13 INT. TRANSPORTER ROOM - O'BRIEN overseeing an N.D. CREWMAN working at an exposed panel. PULL BACK to see Riker and Beverly with him. O'BRIEN (reacting) Doctor Quaice? Was he part of the regular crew rotation? RIKER No. He's a friend of Doctor Crusher's. STAR TREK: "Remember Me" - REV. 8/14/90 - ACT ONE 13. 13 CONTINUED: O'BRIEN When did he arrive? BEVERLY Sixteen hundred hours yesterday. O'BRIEN (startled) That was my watch. I beamed this man onboard? BEVERLY Yes. I was here to greet him. An elderly man? Not in the best of health? O'BRIEN I'm sorry. I do remember you were here for a short while. But you were alone. Beverly stares at him. BEVERLY Was he invisible? Did I carry on a conversation with thin air? O'Brien looks at her as if she's doing that right now. O'BRIEN No, Doctor. As far as I can recall, you came in, looked around for a few moments... I asked you if I could help you with anything... All you said was "Thank you." I said "My pleasure," or something. That was the end of it. There was no one else here. Beverly is stunned. She exchanges a glance with an equally astonished Riker. FADE OUT. END OF ACT ONE STAR TREK: "Remember Me" - REV. 8/14/90 - ACT TWO 14. ACT TWO FADE IN: 14 INT. TURBOLIFT Beverly and Riker on their way to the Bridge. BEVERLY I can't accept that Chief O'Brien might be lying... RIKER He believes what he says. And there is no trace imprint for Doctor Quaice. BEVERLY Will, I didn't conjure up one of my best friends from a test tube. RIKER If the ship's records have been tampered with, then the transporter records could have been changed as well. BEVERLY And with everybody coming and going yesterday, maybe O'Brien just doesn't remember, or... RIKER Or? BEVERLY It might be a good idea to run a diagnostic on him. RIKER To make sure he hasn't been tampered with? BEVERLY What do you think? RIKER It's worth a try. The door opens at the Bridge. STAR TREK: "Remember Me" - REV. 8/23/90 - ACT TWO 15. 14 CONTINUED: RIKER I'll check the replicator activity logs -- eighteen hours is a long time to go without food. Or without someone seeing him. He EXITS. 15 INT. SICKBAY O'Brien is waiting when she arrives. BEVERLY Chief, this examination should only take a few minutes. O'BRIEN But I feel fine. Only TWO NURSES are in sight. Beverly glances around, puzzled. BEVERLY (to Nurse) Things are awfully quiet around here. Is everybody really that healthy? NURSE (smiles) I'm not complaining. BEVERLY We should still have a full staff on duty. She turns back to O'Brien, not noticing the odd look the Nurse gives her. BEVERLY Sit down, over here... STAR TREK: "Remember Me" - REV. 8/21/90 - ACT TWO 16. 15 CONTINUED: O'BRIEN Doctor, it won't do any good to check my eyesight. I didn't see your friend. BEVERLY (indicates examination table) I'll be a little more comprehensive than that, Chief. (keys communicator) Crusher to Doctor Hill. (nothing) Respond please. Doctor Selar, what is your present location? (silence) Computer, current whereabouts of Doctors Hill and Selar. COMPUTER VOICE There is no Doctor Hill or Doctor Selar aboard the Enterprise. Beverly reacts. 15A INT. CREW QUARTERS (FORMERLY SCENE 19) A middle-aged woman, CARA HILL, frowns at Beverly. CARA I'm afraid I don't understand. BEVERLY Your husband: Doctor Richard Hill... CARA With all due respect, you're mistaken. I'm not married. Beverly stares at her. BEVERLY Of course you are. Your husband is my staff osteopath. You came onboard together six months ago. CARA I did report for duty six months ago. But I was alone. (MORE) STAR TREK: "Remember Me" - REV. 8/21/90 - ACT TWO 17. 15A CONTINUED: CARA (Cont'd) I am not married. I've never been married -- (a wry smile) -- except perhaps to exobiology. This shakes Beverly. 16 INT. READY ROOM Picard listens as Beverly explains. BEVERLY Doctors Hill and Selar, and four other members of my medical staff have all vanished. All record of their ever having been on the Enterprise has been excised from the computer's memory. PICARD Did they come aboard with Doctor Quaice? BEVERLY (shakes her head) No. They've been here for months. But the two duty nurses don't remember them. Their families don't even remember them... PICARD As O'Brien didn't remember Doctor Quaice... ? BEVERLY (nods) I checked O'Brien thoroughly. I found no physiological abnormalities. WESLEY'S COM VOICE Crusher to Captain Picard. PICARD Go ahead, Ensign. 16A INT. ENGINEERING Wesley and Geordi are at a computer. STAR TREK: "Remember Me" - REV. 8/17/90 - ACT TWO 17A. 16A CONTINUED: WESLEY I'm in Engineering, sir. I think there's something here you'd better see. It might be connected to Doctor Quaice's disappearance. PICARD'S COM VOICE On my way. Wes exchanges a glance with Geordi. STAR TREK: "Remember Me" - REV. 8/21/90 - ACT TWO 18. 17 INT. BRIDGE - CONTINUOUS As Beverly and Picard ENTER from the Ready Room, Riker is in his chair, Data at Ops, Worf at Tactical. On the move... PICARD (to Riker) Number One, any progress? RIKER (shakes his head) No one's seen him. The replicator in his quarters hasn't been used. PICARD (to Worf) Check shield and hull integrity for any sign of intruders... WORF Yessir... but I have been closely monitoring onboard sensors... there has been no indication... PICARD (interrupting) Then give me a Level One diagnostic of all onboard sensors, and run a manual sweep for any anomalous airborne or electromagnetic readings. I want some answers. Picard and Beverly get on the turbolift. 18 INT. ENGINEERING (OPTICAL) Wesley and Geordi are at a computer. PULL BACK to find Beverly and Picard behind them. WESLEY I've been experimenting with Kosinski's warp field equations... Trying to find a way to improve engine efficiency. PICARD (nods) I've read your reports. STAR TREK: "Remember Me" - REV. 8/21/90 - ACT TWO 19. 18 CONTINUED: GEORDI We did a test run while we were at the starbase. Geordi indicates the terminal where we can see the CAD diagram as before. GEORDI (continuing) Here's what the computer recorded. 18A THE MONITOR - OKUDAGRAM (OPTICAL) It is a very distinctive, twisting shape... unique enough to be recognized later. WESLEY This is the static warp field we created inside the warp drive. The experiment was designed to see if we could keep a bubble like this intact. GEORDI As you'll see in a moment, we couldn't. On the screen the bubble expands, then contracts again in the blink of an eye. 18B RESUME SCENE GEORDI There was a momentary flash of light. It was all over the spectrum. BEVERLY I remember that. PICARD Are you suggesting this bubble could have made Doctor Quaice disappear? WESLEY If he were caught in it... yessir, it would seem to us like he'd disappeared. STAR TREK: "Remember Me" - REV. 8/21/90 - ACT TWO 20. 18B CONTINUED: BEVERLY Where would he go? GEORDI (sighs) Who knows... he could even end up outside our space-time continuum... PICARD Was Doctor Quaice in Engineering during your experiment? GEORDI No, sir. PICARD And this bubble never expanded beyond Engineering? WESLEY Nossir. PICARD Then how could it have trapped Doctor Quaice or the others? WESLEY Other people are missing? BEVERLY Yes, and they weren't anywhere near Engineering either. WESLEY (shakes his head) It doesn't make sense. PICARD And I doubt warp bubbles could alter computer records, or erase memories. (beat) Keep at it, Ensign, Mister La Forge. It's the only working theory we have for now. They acknowledge. Picard and Beverly EXIT... STAR TREK: "Remember Me" - REV. 8/17/90 - ACT TWO 21. 19 OMITTED 20 INT. SICKBAY Beverly ENTERS. Sickbay is totally deserted. She stands frozen in the middle of the room, fighting off a rising panic. She turns and hurries out. 21 INT. BRIDGE Beverly ENTERS from the turbolift. Data is at Ops, Picard and Riker looking over his shoulder. Worf is at Tactical, a SUPERNUMERARY at Conn. There are no other crew members present. PICARD Has something else happened? BEVERLY Sickbay is totally empty. Apparently I no longer have any staff. Picard, Data and Riker exchange glances. RIKER And that surprises you, Doctor? BEVERLY (stares at him) Surprises me? I'll say it surprises me! There should be at least four members of my staff on duty at all times. DATA I am afraid the ship's records do not concur. BEVERLY What are you talking about? DATA You do not have a staff. Again the panic begins to rise. Again Beverly fights it off. STAR TREK: "Remember Me" - REV. 8/17/90 - ACT TWO 22. 21 CONTINUED: BEVERLY You're telling me I'm the sole medical officer on a ship with over a thousand people on board?! DATA Excuse me, Doctor, but the entire ship's complement is two hundred thirty. Beverly fights her emotions, trying to digest this. BEVERLY No. That's wrong! Whatever is happening is affecting your memories, too. Picard studies her... PICARD Doctor, may I see you in my Ready Room? Beverly looks at the others... who look at her... and follows Picard into the Ready Room. 21A INT. READY ROOM As they enter, sit. Picard takes a long beat. The tone is low-key... PICARD Beverly, you're saying this ship has lost nearly eight hundred of its personnel... ? BEVERLY I know how it must sound... PICARD None of the scans reveal any anomalies... there is no sign of an intruder... Wesley's experiment clearly did not have the scope to affect an entire starship... BEVERLY The Enterprise is in serious danger. You must believe me... STAR TREK: "Remember Me" - REV. 8/21/90 - ACT TWO 23. 21A CONTINUED: PICARD I have no choice but to believe you. The safety of my crew is at stake. But I want to be sure... BEVERLY That I haven't lost my mind? They look at each other in a very personal way. BEVERLY I just examined myself... being the only doctor on board, I had to do it myself... there is no sign of dysfunction... yes, there's an elevation of adrenalin which I think is understandable... A beat, she collects herself... PICARD Did you find anything that might suggest why you're apparently the only one among us unaffected by this... phenomenon? BEVERLY No. (meets his eyes) I'll talk to Troi. PICARD It wouldn't do any harm. They exchange a glance in which Picard reveals a deeper personal caring for her. BEVERLY Jean-Luc, please... return to Starbase One-Three-Three for a full diagnostic. I realize you have only my word to convince you... STAR TREK: "Remember Me" - REV. 8/17/90 - ACT TWO 24. 21A CONTINUED: (2) PICARD (keys insignia) Mister Riker, set a course to return to Starbase One-Three-Three immediately. RIKER'S COM VOICE Aye, sir. She looks at him gratefully PICARD Your word has always been good enough for me. On her reaction... 22 thru OMITTED 23 23A INT. BEVERLY'S OFFICE Beverly ENTERS. We TRACK with her. Suddenly she stops dead, her eyes trying to focus on something she sees before her. 24 BEVERLY'S POV (OPTICAL) Something is forming in the air: a swirling vortex of color and sound, spiraling larger, the sound a roar of white noise, growing in intensity. 25 BACK TO SCENE (OPTICAL) As the vortex grows, its wind begins to buffet her. She finds herself being drawn by its force. She braces herself against the wall. But the pull grows stronger and stronger. Before she knows it she's caught up in a whirling, blinding maelstrom. She grabs on to something as she finds herself being inexorably pulled into the vortex... Beverly screams. There's a blinding flash of light. The vortex is gone in a wink. She falls to the floor, and lies there, trying to catch her breath. FADE OUT. END OF ACT TWO STAR TREK: "Remember Me" - REV. 8/21/90 - ACT THREE 25. ACT THREE FADE IN: 26 thru OMITTED 29 30 INT. OBSERVATION LOUNGE Picard, Troi, Geordi, Riker and Beverly are present. GEORDI I've had a team in Sickbay for two hours. We've run the mass spectrometer on all particulates... we've scanned the EM spectrum in case a wave guide was somehow leaking radiation... we've even crawled into the life support ductwork... Captain, I don't know what this vortex was that Doctor Crusher saw... BEVERLY I didn't just see it. I felt it. I barely got away from it! And she realizes how paranoid this sounds... and the others look at her. GEORDI Well, there's nothing there now. And no sign there ever was. A silence. Picard frowns. PICARD Is there any possible connection to Mister Crusher's experiment... could this warp bubble be... floating around the ship perhaps... GEORDI No, sir. The bubble was definitely contained in Engineering. There's no way it could affect something up on Deck Twelve. STAR TREK: "Remember Me" - REV. 8/17/90 - ACT THREE 26. 30 CONTINUED: Data ENTERS. DATA Sir, I have completed level-1 computer diagnostics. There are no malfunctions. RIKER Any other ships respond to our queries, Data? DATA The Wellington is the only Federation vessel in this sector... it reports normal operations. A Ferengi ship within communications range also reports nothing unusual. RIKER Have external sensors detected anything out of the ordinary? DATA The interstellar medium in this sector is slightly denser than average. However, all readings are well within normal parameters. Picard mulls this over. Beverly asks the big question -- BEVERLY Are all members of the crew accounted for? DATA Yes, doctor. BEVERLY How many are there? DATA There are one hundred fourteen people on the Enterprise. Everyone turns to look at Beverly. STAR TREK: "Remember Me" - REV. 8/21/90 - ACT THREE 27. 30 CONTINUED: (2) DATA That is the exact number there should be. BEVERLY (shakes her head) There are now close to nine hundred missing. The others exchange glances... Picard's eyes stare at the table top. BEVERLY (explodes) Deck after deck of this ship is now deserted. How do you explain all the empty rooms? If only a hundred fourteen people are supposed to be on board, why all the extra space? DATA (rattling off logical explanations) Transportation of colonists... diplomatic missions... emergency evacuations... PICARD (enough) Thank you, Mister Data. He looks up for the first time. Calmly -- PICARD Have security confine all nonessential personnel to their quarters. Computer, Red Alert. The Red Alert lights begin to flash. BEVERLY Sir, I'd like Lieutenant Worf to program onboard sensors to monitor all personnel... if we can catch the exact moment someone disappears... This is met with absolute silence. She sees their reactions. STAR TREK: "Remember Me" - REV. 8/21/90 - ACT THREE 28. 30 CONTINUED: (3) PICARD (gives her a blank stare) Whom did you say? BEVERLY Worf... chief of security... the big guy who never smiles... Klingon? On Beverly as she looks at them, the Red Alert lights continue to flash and... 30A INT. CORRIDOR Troi moves down the hall. Beverly, trying to contain her frustration, hurries after her... BEVERLY Deanna? Troi stops, waits for Beverly. BEVERLY I need you to tell me if I've gone completely mad. TROI (smiles) If you can ask the question, I'd say no. BEVERLY Don't evade the question. TROI (sympathetically) Then ask me one I can answer. A beat. Moving... BEVERLY Deanna, I've delivered babies who no longer exist! No one else remembers them. But I can close my eyes, and see their faces as clearly as I can see yours! What if it isn't some huge conspiracy?! What if it's just me?! STAR TREK: "Remember Me" - REV. 8/23/90 - ACT THREE 29. 30A CONTINUED: TROI What if it is just you? BEVERLY Then, I've delayed a mission, scared a lot of people... including me... TROI So what? (beat) Beverly, you've acted in the best interests of your ship and crew. What more could you ask of yourself? If it turns out to be a... mistake... we'll be a little late to Durenia Four... that's all. BEVERLY It's not a mistake... I wish it were... TROI When we reach Starbase, I'll order a complete workup: both physical and psychological. BEVERLY If we reach Starbase. (beat) Wesley... where's Wesley... ? She doesn't finish, just turns and goes. On Troi's concerned reaction... 31 INT. ENGINEERING (OPTICAL) Only one supernumerary is working when Beverly rushes in. She goes to the computer station he was working at before. The same distinctive Okudagram is on the monitors, graphically illustrating the warp field bubble. But Wesley's not there. Red Alert continues. BEVERLY Wesley!! STAR TREK: "Remember Me" - REV. 8/21/90 - ACT THREE 30. 31 CONTINUED: Wes comes out from behind the drive. WESLEY Mom? You all right? Beverly brings herself under control. BEVERLY No. (beat) We may have very little time left... Wesley looks at her with concern... BEVERLY You don't believe me... WESLEY I don't know, Mom... BEVERLY I don't have time to convince you. Hundreds of people are gone and your experiment is the only possible explanation we have to work on right now... He indicates the monitor where we again see the CAD representation of the distinctively-shaped bubble. WESLEY There it is. I don't know what else to do... BEVERLY Then find someone who does... someone who knows more about... about warp bubbles... WESLEY (overlapping) I've already talked to Kosinski on subspace... he can't explain it either and it's all based on his equations. There is someone who might be able to help us, but I can't reach him. BEVERLY Who? STAR TREK: "Remember Me" - REV. 8/21/90 - ACT THREE 31. 31 CONTINUED: (2) WESLEY He was Kosinski's assistant... an alien from Tau Alpha C... He said he was a "Traveler"... somehow he combined warp technology with the energy of his own thoughts... BEVERLY (thoughtful) Yes, I remember... he took us where thoughts and reality became indistinguishable... (beat) Wesley, is it possible you've accidentally re-created something he did? Something that could alter reality? WESLEY I don't see how. But he's the only one who could tell us... I've sent a message by subspace, but Tau Alpha C is so far away, it'll take days to get there. BEVERLY (pulling him along) Maybe the Captain can help us... We've got to find him. Come on... WESLEY I don't even know if he's still alive. He was sick. BEVERLY Wesley, it's a chance, we have to... They turn a corner. 31A NEW ANGLE When Beverly comes around the corner, Wesley is gone. No optical. No sound effect. Just: no Wesley. BEVERLY (continuing) -- try it... She reacts as she realizes Wesley is gone. STAR TREK: "Remember Me" - REV. 8/20/90 - ACT THREE 32. 31B WIDE to show her completely alone in Engineering. BEVERLY Nooooo... ! 32 thru OMITTED 33 34 INT. BRIDGE Red Alert continues. Picard is in his chair. When Beverly gets off the turbolift, she sees there's no one else with Picard. BEVERLY (calm) They're all gone... ? Picard looks at her. BEVERLY (continuing) Riker, Troi, Data... let me guess -- you've never heard of any of them. PICARD (anger growing) Doctor, I believe I have been more than fair. I have done everything I can to substantiate your... your perceptions -- STAR TREK: "Remember Me" - REV. 8/20/90 - ACT THREE 32A. 34 CONTINUED: BEVERLY Will Riker! Your First Officer. He's very good at poker, likes to cook, listen to jazz, plays the trombone... PICARD I cannot find any evidence... BEVERLY (not to be interrupted) ... Commander Data, the android who sits here at Ops, dreams of being human, never gets the punch line to a joke... ? PICARD ... Beverly, we'll be arriving at Starbase One-Three-Three in a few hours... BEVERLY ... Deanna Troi, you ship's counselor, half-Betazoid, loves chocolate, the arrival of her mother makes you shudder? And Geordi, O'Brien, Worf... Wesley, my son -- They have been the living, breathing heart of this crew for over three years. They deserve better than to be shrugged off... brushed aside... to be pinched out of existence like this! (a deep breath) They all do. All nine hundred. They deserve so much more... 35 thru OMITTED 38 39 ANGLE - PICARD AND BEVERLY Picard goes to Beverly, touches her gently on the arm. PICARD Perhaps you should confine yourself to Sickbay until we arrive... STAR TREK: "Remember Me" - REV. 8/20/90 - ACT THREE 33. 39 CONTINUED: BEVERLY It's perfectly logical to you. The two of us roaming about the galaxy in the flagship of the Federation. No crew at all. PICARD We've never needed a crew before. She sits beside him. BEVERLY I don't suppose you remember an alien from Tau Alpha C who was once onboard... called himself a Traveler... ? Picard gives her a look of concern and sadness. BEVERLY Jean-Luc, I don't know how, but you and I must find this Traveler or another from his race... if anyone can help us... PICARD You have my word... as soon as we return to the starbase, I'll make every effort to find him. BEVERLY This isn't a delusion. It isn't a dream. There is a physical, measurable phenomenon at work. (beat, an idea) Maybe you can help me identify it... PICARD How? BEVERLY I'd like to use the ship's computer to monitor your life functions. PICARD Until I disappear. STAR TREK: "Remember Me" - REV. 8/20/90 - ACT THREE 34. 39 CONTINUED: (2) BEVERLY It will happen. PICARD Very well. Computer, continuous scan: Captain Jean-Luc Picard vital signs. Audible readout. Begin now. The computer begins a low volume recitation of Picard's vital signs. There are electronic EEG sounds and: COMPUTER VOICE One ten over seventy. One ten over seventy. The readouts run continuously in the b.g. BEVERLY I promise you I'll continue to do whatever I can to figure out what's happening, and to bring you all back. (beat) I'm sorry I lost my temper. You do remember that? PICARD Vividly. But if I have forgotten my closest friends and comrades, as you say, I deserved every word. BEVERLY For quite awhile now there's something I've been meaning to say to you. I may not get another chance. Jean-Luc, you and I -- The computer readout is gone in a wink. She is talking to empty air. She looks around the bridge, shakes her head. BEVERLY I won't forget. I won't forget any of you! She hears a faint roaring noise, rapidly growing in intensity. She turns. STAR TREK: "Remember Me" - REV. 8/21/90 - ACT THREE 35. 40 INCLUDE (OPTICAL) the vortex forming again in front of the viewscreen. She begins to feel herself being dragged towards it. She grabs on to Tactical, holds on for dear life, as the vortex tries to claim her. It pulls her horizontal to the floor. But she is successfully fighting it. As her struggle continues, the camera pans across the vortex, as it begins to collapse. It fills the screen and DISSOLVE TO: 40A THE VORTEX STILL FILLING THE SCREEN (OPTICAL) The pan continuing. The screaming heart of the maelstrom. Another place can be discerned in the distance. A VOICE becoming more distinct. VOICE (WESLEY) I'm losing it... The link isn't holding, Commander! 41 OMITTED 42 INT. ENGINEERING (OPTICAL) We are on the other side of the vortex. Wesley and Geordi sit at computers, rapidly executing commands. No Red Alert. The vortex is swiftly contracting. GEORDI I'll try the secondary equations! WESLEY No, it's too late. Look. The vortex contracts until only a minute point of energy hangs in space near the drive. Then this point, too, is gone. WESLEY I've lost it. GEORDI I'm sorry, Wesley. WESLEY It's over. We'll never get her back. STAR TREK: "Remember Me" - REV. 8/17/90 - ACT THREE 36. 42 CONTINUED: A beat. TRAVELER (O.C.) It's not over, Wesley. Wesley and Geordi turn in surprise. 43 WIDER ANGLE (OPTICAL) The Traveler phases in. TRAVELER (continuing) There's still a way. On their reactions... FADE OUT. END OF ACT THREE STAR TREK: "Remember Me" - REV. 8/24/90 - ACT FOUR 37. ACT FOUR FADE IN: 44 EXT. SPACE - THE ENTERPRISE (OPTICAL) Moving at impulse speed against a backdrop of stars. PICARD (V.O.) Captain's log, Stardate 44162.5. Two attempts to retrieve Doctor Crusher have failed. And now the Traveler, a mysterious visitor from our past, has reappeared. 45 INT. OBSERVATION LOUNGE Picard, Riker, Wesley, Geordi, Troi, Worf and the Traveler. He is friendly and wants to be helpful, at the same time he is a clearly superior being and is a bit smug in this knowledge. WESLEY And then I sent a message by subspace to Tau Alpha C asking for help... but I didn't think it would reach there for days... TRAVELER Actually, it didn't reach me... not by subspace... GEORDI Then how did you know about the warp bubble? The Traveler looks at him with a vaguely patronizing smile... a beat... TRAVELER It would take too long to explain... PICARD (impatient) Is she alive? TRAVELER (reassuring, authoritative) As long as she thinks she is alive, she is alive. STAR TREK: "Remember Me" - REV. 8/24/90 - ACT FOUR 38. 45 CONTINUED: RIKER What the hell does that mean? TRAVELER (sighs with controlled frustration) Your species have very narrow perceptions of time and space and thought. (beat, trying to make it simple) When Beverly Crusher was caught in the static warp bubble, she created her own reality. Her thoughts at the precise moment she was trapped determined its shape and form. TROI Can you go in and get her back? TRAVELER No, it is her reality. I cannot enter it... any more than I can enter her thoughts. WESLEY But you said there's still a way. The Traveler moves to Wesley - and there's an intensity between them... Clearly, in Wesley, the Traveler sees a being who can begin to reach beyond his limitations and is excited by that possibility. TRAVELER I can help, but I can't do it myself. Wesley, there is a power within each of us that most people haven't begun to realize... you have, or I would not have known to come here now... (beat, dramatically) Together, we may be able to open a gateway for her. But she must choose to walk through it. Off reactions... STAR TREK: "Remember Me" - REV. 8/23/90 - ACT FOUR 39. 45A INT. SICKBAY Red Alert continuing. Beverly walks slowly everywhere, examining everything, looking for something out of place, any clue that might help her... she's been doing a lot of thinking... takes a deep breath... (and there's a thread of gallows humor in all this for her now)... BEVERLY Computer, we're going to apply precise diagnostic methodology. Once we've cataloged the symptoms, we'll proceed to determine the illness, and find a cure. (considers) We'll start with the assumption that I'm not crazy... if I am, it won't matter one way or the other... She thinks about that a beat. Then... BEVERLY Computer, read the entire crew roster for the Enterprise. COMPUTER VOICE Doctor Beverly Crusher. BEVERLY Have I always been the only member of the crew on the Starship Enterprise? COMPUTER VOICE Affirmative. BEVERLY (not serious) If this was a bad dream, would you tell me? COMPUTER VOICE (beat) That information is not available. She walks into -- 45B INT. CORRIDOR Opening doors as she walks down the deserted hallway... glancing inside... STAR TREK: "Remember Me" - REV. 8/21/90 - ACT FOUR 40. 45B CONTINUED: BEVERLY What date did I report on board? COMPUTER VOICE Stardate 41154. Fourteen hundred hours, three minutes. BEVERLY That sounds about right. (beat) Computer, is there more than one U.S.S. Enterprise? COMPUTER VOICE This vessel is the fifth starship to bear the name U.S.S. Enterprise. It is currently the only one in service. BEVERLY What is the primary mission of the Starship Enterprise? COMPUTER VOICE To explore the galaxy. BEVERLY Do I have the necessary skills to complete that mission alone? COMPUTER VOICE Negative. BEVERLY Then why am I the only crew member? (a beat) Aha, gotcha there... COMPUTER VOICE That information is not available. She frowns. Enters a turbolift... STAR TREK: "Remember Me" - REV. 8/21/90 - ACT FOUR 41. 45C INT. BRIDGE Red Alert continuing. As she ENTERS from the turbolift... BEVERLY Computer, are you familiar with the inhabitants of Tau Alpha C? COMPUTER VOICE Affirmative. BEVERLY Are any presently located on a starbase or vessel within communication range? Beverly sits in the Captain's chair... COMPUTER VOICE Negative. BEVERLY Estimated time to Tau Alpha C at warp nine-point-five... COMPUTER VOICE One hundred twenty-three days. BEVERLY (beat, deciding) Lay in a new course for Tau Alpha C. And send them a subspace message advising our arrival. COMPUTER VOICE Acknowledged. BEVERLY Engage. Nothing happens. She reacts. STAR TREK: "Remember Me" - REV. 8/23/90 - ACT FOUR 42. 45C CONTINUED: BEVERLY Computer, did you change course? COMPUTER VOICE State new destination or coordinates. BEVERLY I stated it, dammit... Tau Alpha C... COMPUTER VOICE There is no Tau Alpha C listed on current star maps... On her reaction... 45D EXT. SPACE - THE ENTERPRISE (OPTICAL) At impulse. PICARD (V.O.) Captain's log, stardate 44162.8. At the direction of the Traveler, the Enterprise is returning to Starbase One-Three-Three and the precise position where the subspace bubble was formed. 46 OMITTED 47 INT. ENGINEERING Wes and the Traveler moving to the pool table. Geordi works in the b.g. Wesley is very task-oriented here... the Traveler patient, calm... TRAVELER Our goal will be to create a stable gateway between our reality and your mother's reality... WESLEY We've tried to stabilize it. The link won't hold. STAR TREK: "Remember Me" - REV. 8/17/90 - ACT FOUR 42A. 47 CONTINUED: TRAVELER Of course not. The equations are only the first step. We will be going beyond mathematics. WESLEY Just tell me what I have to do. The Traveler studies him... STAR TREK: "Remember Me" - REV. 8/17/90 - ACT FOUR 43. 47 CONTINUED: (2) TRAVELER It's nothing I can tell you, Wesley... WESLEY (frustrated) Then how am I supposed to do it? (off the Traveler's even stare) You said you'd help. TRAVELER You must allow me to help. WESLEY I don't know how. The Traveler takes a long look at the distressed boy... puts an arm on his shoulder. He motions for Wesley sit down at the pool table in front of a panel display... TRAVELER Begin by letting go of your guilt, Wesley. WESLEY It was my fault. I should never have tried... TRAVELER (interrupting) Focus on the present. You will have to be here... completely... to help her back. You must open yourself to time and space and the intricate threads that bind them. STAR TREK: "Remember Me" - REV. 8/20/90 - ACT FOUR 44. 47 CONTINUED: (3) The Traveler sits opposite him at another station. TRAVELER Begin entering your warp field equations... Wesley begins to enter data into the panel, eyes watching his hands, smoothly professional, determined to do it right... the Traveler begins to enter data at the same time, eyes on Wesley... TRAVELER Close your eyes. Wesley glances up curiously at the Traveler who nods encouragement... Wes closes his eyes... TRAVELER Continue to enter the equations... WESLEY I don't have any more equations. TRAVELER See past the numbers. Trust yourself... Wesley tries but he cannot go on... he opens his eyes... groans with frustration. WESLEY I can't. I can't do it. The Traveler looks calmly at him, supportive. TRAVELER When the time comes, you will, Wesley. You will. Now, begin again... Wesley is not convinced... but he takes a deep breath, begins to enter the equations. 48 OMITTED 49 INT. BRIDGE (OPTICAL) Beverly is at Tactical. Red Alert still on. STAR TREK: "Remember Me" - REV. 8/20/90 - ACT FOUR 45. 49 CONTINUED: BEVERLY Starbase One-Three-Three, this is the Enterprise. (no response) Starbase One-Three-Three, this is the Enterprise. Please acknowledge. (beat) Viewscreen on. There is nothing on the viewscreen but a gray, misty void. BEVERLY It's not just people... Everything is disappearing! She continues to stare at the viewscreen, trying to put it together. BEVERLY Computer, what is that... mist... I'm seeing? COMPUTER VOICE Sensors indicate it to be a mass-energy field seven hundred and five meters in diameter. BEVERLY It surrounds the ship? COMPUTER VOICE Affirmative. BEVERLY (to herself) If there isn't anything wrong with me... maybe there's something wrong with the universe... Computer, what is beyond the mass-energy field? COMPUTER VOICE Sensors cannot penetrate the field. STAR TREK: "Remember Me" - REV. 8/21/90 - ACT FOUR 46. 49 CONTINUED: (2) BEVERLY Computer, here's a question you shouldn't be able to answer... What is the nature of the universe? COMPUTER VOICE (without hesitation) The universe is a spherical region seven hundred and five meters in diameter. Beverly stares at the gray mist on the viewscreen in shock. 50 EXT. SPACE - THE ENTERPRISE (OPTICAL) nears Starbase One-Three-Three. 50A INT. MAIN BRIDGE Picard, Riker, Data, Worf. DATA Approaching Starbase One-Three- Three, Captain... PICARD Slow to ten meters per second. RIKER Mister La Forge, prepare for precision station-keeping. STAR TREK: "Remember Me" - REV. 8/17/90 - ACT FOUR 47. 51 INT. ENGINEERING (OPTICAL) Geordi at a console... A couple of SUPERNUMERARIES work in the b.g. GEORDI Acknowledged. Readying thrusters. Moving to find Wesley and the Traveler still at the pool table... Wesley is shaky as the moment approaches. The Traveler works his panel alone... closes his eyes... TRAVELER There... there it is... On the monitors, a moving graphic of the warp bubble appears... Wesley reacts... the Traveler opens his eyes... TRAVELER We're moving into phase now (tech)... there's your warp bubble, Wesley... But his eyes narrow as he takes a close look... and even his calm exterior shows some concern now... WESLEY What? What's wrong. TRAVELER It's collapsing. On Wesley's reaction... 52 thru OMITTED 56 FADE OUT. END OF ACT FOUR STAR TREK: "Remember Me" - REV. 8/20/90 - ACT FIVE 48. ACT FIVE FADE IN: 57 thru OMITTED 59 60 INT. BRIDGE (OPTICAL) Beverly paces, trying to put the pieces of the puzzle together, moves to a Science Station. BEVERLY Computer, give me a graphic representation of the universe. On a monitor a CAD diagram looks hauntingly familiar: the same distinctive shape as Wesley's CAD diagram. Pushing in on her as she recognizes it... BEVERLY (reacts) I've seen that before... (beat) Wesley's experiment... the bubble. Of course... But that would mean I'm the one trapped in the bubble... As she considers the implications, the ship suddenly shakes. BEVERLY Computer, what's happening? COMPUTER VOICE Explosive decompression: Decks Five through Fourteen. Sealing off forward sections. BEVERLY Cause? COMPUTER VOICE A flaw in the ship's design. BEVERLY (this is a new one) Show me. STAR TREK: "Remember Me" - REV. 8/20/90 - ACT FIVE 48A. 60 CONTINUED: The image on the monitor switches to a cross section of the Enterprise showing a part of the ship simply missing, the section where more of the ship should be is outlined in flashing red. BEVERLY Analysis... ? STAR TREK: "Remember Me" - REV. 8/20/90 - ACT FIVE 49. 60 CONTINUED: (2) COMPUTER VOICE No ship's structures exist forward of Bulkhead Three-Four-Two. BEVERLY Superimpose the previous image over this one. Same scale. And continue to monitor. On the monitor the bubble now appears around the Enterprise. The ship shakes again. On the monitor the bubble contracts, and at its edge more sections of the ship are missing. BEVERLY (realizing) It's collapsing... COMPUTER VOICE (continuing) Hull integrity now compromised on Decks Three through Fifteen. BEVERLY How long can life support be maintained? COMPUTER VOICE Four minutes, seventeen seconds. Again the ship shakes. On the monitor the bubble contracts, and another section is gone. 60A INT. BRIDGE Picard, Riker, Troi, Worf and Data. DATA Sir, we have reestablished the exact coordinates and attitude. STAR TREK: "Remember Me" - REV. 8/20/90 - ACT FIVE 50. 60A CONTINUED: RIKER (to com) Geordi, we're in position... your status? 61 INT. ENGINEERING Geordi examining the bubble on a monitor... GEORDI The warp bubble is contracting at a rate of fifteen meters per second... we'll lose it in about four minutes... He glances toward the pool table... the Traveler acknowledges, turns to Wesley... TRAVELER (calm) It's time, Wesley. Wesley swallows hard... sits back at his position... as the Traveler sits opposite him... GEORDI (to com) We're ready, Commander. 61A INT. MAIN BRIDGE Riker glances at Picard who nods, begins to move toward the Turbolift... RIKER Proceed. PICARD I'll be in Engineering. STAR TREK: "Remember Me" - REV. 8/20/90 - ACT FIVE 51. 61B INT. ENGINEERING As before the Traveler and Wesley punch equations into their computers. The Traveler never watches the computer, only Wesley... Wesley is concentrating, trying too hard... TRAVELER Let it go, Wesley... let go of the anticipation... the expectations... the demands upon yourself... let it all go... leave it behind. Wesley breathes deeply... lets go off tension in his face... TRAVELER Yes. The ability is there... inside you... you don't need to look for it... As Wesley closes his eyes, continuing to punch in equations... 62 INT. BRIDGE (OPTICAL) The Red Alert continues. Beverly is pacing, stops to stare at the diagram again as the ship shakes, then resumes pacing. COMPUTER VOICE Three minutes thirty seconds to life support failure. BEVERLY (to herself, quick pace, pressing herself to complete equation) The Traveler used his thoughts to alter warp fields... and thoughts became reality... Now I'm in a warp field... (beat) Could my thoughts have changed this reality? She's still not quite there, gives herself a pep talk: STAR TREK: "Remember Me" - REV. 8/20/90 - ACT FIVE 52. 62 CONTINUED: BEVERLY (continuing) Come on, Beverly! What's the next step?! (an idea) What was I thinking at the moment Wesley's bubble formed? Dalen Quaice... He said... all the people he'd known were gone... I thought of Jack... I went to see Wesley... the flash in Engineering... And that's when it started... when I started losing everybody! (lightbulb) My thoughts created this universe. Can they get me out of it again? COMPUTER That information is not available. BEVERLY I'm not talking to you. (beat) Click my heels together three times and I'm back in Kansas? Can it be that simple? She takes a deep breath and closes her eyes... PUSH IN to her face as she concentrates... a beat later, she opens her eyes. Nothing. BEVERLY (continuing; frowns) No, it can't be that simple. 62A INT. ENGINEERING (OPTICAL) No Red Alert. Picard ENTERS. Geordi and supernumeraries are nearby. Wesley's relaxing into the task... still entering equations with his eyes closed. The Traveler, satisfied, closes his eyes... after a beat, he begins to phase... 63 INT. BRIDGE The Red Alert continues. STAR TREK: "Remember Me" - REV. 8/20/90 - ACT FIVE 53. 63 CONTINUED: COMPUTER VOICE Two minutes thirty seconds to life support failure. BEVERLY Computer, hypothetical situation... a person is trapped inside a static warp bubble. Determine a means of escape... COMPUTER VOICE Escape would theoretically depend on establishing a stable threshold between the warp field and the outer environment. BEVERLY Can you describe this threshold? COMPUTER VOICE Negative. There are no known practical applications of this theory. BEVERLY Extrapolate from theoretical database. How might it manifest itself? COMPUTER VOICE A dynamic atmospheric disturbance of great intensity. BEVERLY Disturbance? The vortex! They must have been trying to reach me! But how do I find it... ? Wesley, where do I go? Help me... 63A INT. ENGINEERING Close on Wesley... as he goes deeper and deeper inside himself... using his extraordinary mental abilities, trying to reach out for his mother... 63B INT. BRIDGE Red Alert continuing. STAR TREK: "Remember Me" - REV. 8/20/90 - ACT FIVE 53A. 63B CONTINUED: BEVERLY Stable threshold... They've been trying to create a stable threshold. Where are they trying to do it? (the final piece of the puzzle) Where did they do it the first time? Engineering! She bolts for the turbolift... COMPUTER VOICE One minute thirty seconds to life support failure. STAR TREK: "Remember Me" - REV. 8/20/90 - ACT FIVE 54. 64 thru OMITTED 70 70A INT. TURBOLIFT Beverly waits. Suddenly the turbolift jars to a halt. BEVERLY Engineering! COMPUTER VOICE Failure in Turboshaft Four. Unable to proceed to Main Engineering. BEVERLY Just get me anywhere on Deck Thirty-Six! The Turbolift begins moving again. 70B INT. ENGINEERING (OPTICAL) No Red Alert. The Traveler is still phasing. His eyes and Wesley's eyes are still closed. And then, incredibly, Wesley begins to phase too... In the background, the vortex begin to form. Reactions. 71 INT. CORRIDOR (OPTICAL) Beverly steps off the turbolift. It vanishes behind her, revealing the gray, misty void. She sees it, takes off at a run. As she runs, pieces of the ship disappear behind her. She's only keeping a few steps ahead of it! 72 INT. ENGINEERING (OPTICAL) Picard and Geordi watch as Welsey's phasing begins to sync up with the Traveler. The vortex grows even brighter. But then Geordi glances at his readouts, shakes his head, looks at Picard, quietly -- STAR TREK: "Remember Me" - REV. 8/21/90 - ACT FIVE 55. 72 CONTINUED: GEORDI We're losing the bubble... 73 INT. ENGINEERING (OPTICAL) Red Alert. Beverly charges in. The vortex is there, but beginning to break up! She leaps through! 74 INT. ENGINEERING (OPTICAL) Beverly half falls, half tumbles out of the vortex. The vortex vanishes in a flash of light. Picard moves to her. Wesley and the Traveler stop phasing. Wesley collapses, exhausted. And the Traveler, too, looks drained. Picard helps Beverly to her feet. He smiles, embraces her. BEVERLY Jean-Luc... (sees the Traveler, reacts) You... He stares at her. BEVERLY Do I have you to thank for getting me back? TRAVELER No. He steps aside to reveal Wesley. Wesley stands slowly, uncertain. She holds out her arms. Wesley moves to hug her. They hold each other in silence. BEVERLY Captain, if I may ask: how many people are there onboard? STAR TREK: "Remember Me" - REV. 8/21/90 - ACT FIVE 56. 74 CONTINUED: PICARD (surprised) One thousand fourteen, including your guest, Doctor Quaice. She closes her eyes. GEORDI Is there something wrong with that count? BEVERLY (smiles) No. That's the exact number there should be. She holds Wesley even tighter. 75 EXT. SPACE - THE ENTERPRISE (OPTICAL) as it holds its position near the Starbase. FADE OUT. END OF ACT FIVE THE END STAR TREK: THE NEXT GENERATION "Legacy" #40274-180 Written by Joe Menosky Directed by Robert Scheerer THE WRITING CREDITS MAY NOT BE FINAL AND SHOULD NOT BE USED FOR PUBLICITY OR ADVERTISING PURPOSES WITHOUT FIRST CHECKING WITH THE TELEVISION LEGAL DEPARTMENT. Copyright 1990 Paramount Pictures Corporation. All Rights Reserved. This script is not for publication or reproduction. No one is authorized to dispose of same. If lost or destroyed, please notify the Script Department. FINAL DRAFT AUGUST 20, 1990 STAR TREK: "Legacy" - 8/20/90 - CAST STAR TREK: THE NEXT GENERATION "Legacy" CAST PICARD HAYNE RIKER ISHARA YAR DATA COALITION MAN #1 BEVERLY TAN TSU TROI GEORDI WORF Non-Speaking VARIOUS TURKANANS O'BRIEN COALITION MEMBERS ALLIANCE MEMBERS Non-Speaking SUPERNUMERARIES STAR TREK: "Legacy" - 8/20/90 - SETS STAR TREK: THE NEXT GENERATION "Legacy" SETS INTERIORS EXTERIORS USS ENTERPRISE USS ENTERPRISE MAIN BRIDGE OBSERVATION LOUNGE FREIGHTER ARCOS ENGINEERING TRANSPORTER ROOM TURKANA FOUR CORRIDORS CITY (MATTE) CAPTAIN'S READY ROOM PICARD'S QUARTERS TEN-FORWARD SICKBAY TURKANA FOUR TUNNEL ENTRANCE MISC. TUNNELS & ADJOINING CORRIDORS ALLIANCE POWER GENERATOR ALLIANCE CHAMBERS ARCOS ESCAPE POD STAR TREK: "Legacy" - REV. 8/30/90 - PRONUNCIATION STAR TREK: THE NEXT GENERATION "Legacy" PRONUNCIATION GUIDE CAMUS CAM-us CHROMOSOMES KROH-mah-sohms ISHARA ish-ARE-uh MYO-GRAPHIC SCANNER MY-oh graph-ic SOMATIC so-MAT-ic SYNTHALE SYNTH-ale TAN TSU tahn tsoo TELLURIDAN tel-LUR-i-done TURKANA tur-KAH-nuh VAGRA TWO VAY-gra 2 STAR TREK: "Legacy" - REV. 9/24/90 - TEASER 1. STAR TREK: THE NEXT GENERATION "Legacy" TEASER FADE IN: A1 EXT. SPACE - THE ENTERPRISE (OPTICAL) Travelling at standard warp. B1 INT. RIKER'S QUARTERS RIKER, DATA, TROI and WORF are playing five-card draw poker, Riker dealing. Riker and Data have similarly large piles of chips in front of them. It looks like Troi and Worf are down to mortgaging the farm. Worf stares at his hand -- his poker face leaves a lot to be desired. WORF (scowls) One. RIKER (baiting him) Worf. Are you trying to fill another inside straight? Worf grunts. RIKER (continuing) Don't say I didn't warn you. Riker deals him a card. Worf takes a look and folds. WORF Pah. TROI (to Riker) I fold. STAR TREK: "Legacy" - REV. 9/24/90 - TEASER 1A. B1 CONTINUED: Riker looks at Data, who carefully adds two chips, followed by three more. DATA I will raise you three. RIKER No cards? Riker reacts as Data answers with an utterly unreadable look. RIKER (to others) Best poker face I've ever seen. Riker stares at Data for a beat. RIKER Dealer takes two. Riker deals himself two cards. Stares at them for a moment. Adds five chips to the pile. Then five more. He looks at Data. RIKER (continuing) Raise you ten. Without hesitation, Data counts out ten chips, then twenty more. DATA I will see your bet, and raise you twenty. Riker smiles. RIKER Data. Are you sitting on a full house or a flush? DATA It will cost you twenty to make that determination, Sir. STAR TREK: "Legacy" - REV. 9/18/90 - TEASER 1B. B1 CONTINUED: (2) Riker stares at him for a few beats. Smiles and tosses in his cards. RIKER Dealer folds. Data calmly pulls in the chips. Both Troi and Worf push back from the table -- finished for the night. Troi looks at the chips in front of Riker and Data, now even more evenly matched. TROI (teasingly) You two have successfully split the evening between yourselves. WORF I suspect conspiracy. But far be it for me to accuse my superior officers. Riker laughs. Looks at Data. RIKER It's getting harder to bluff you, Data. You've learned this game well. DATA Yes sir, I believe I have. Riker reshuffles the deck of cards, considering Data as he does so. RIKER Tell you what. He fans out the cards on the table. Troi and Worf stick around to see what he's up to, as Riker pushes his entire pile of winnings towards Data. RIKER (continuing) I'll bet you I can find a card that you bury anywhere in this deck. And furthermore, I'll make you help me do it. Data considers the challenge for a moment. STAR TREK: "Legacy" - REV. 9/18/90 - TEASER 1C. B1 CONTINUED: (3) TROI Careful, Data. DATA Your guidance is much valued, Counsellor. However... Data pushes his chips into the betting pot. Troi laughs. Data selects a card. RIKER Don't let me see it. Data pulls it up towards his face. Troi and Worf adjust their positions to be behind Data, so that they too can see the card. C1 CLOSE UP THE CARD The Jack of Hearts. RIKER (O.S.) Now lose it in the deck. D1 RESUME Data does so, and Riker quickly shuffles and plops the deck right down in front of Data. RIKER Cut the deck into two halves. Data does so, making two halves. Riker takes one half away, discarding it. RIKER (continuing) Again. Data again makes two halves with what's left. Riker again takes one away. RIKER (continuing) Once more. Same procedure. STAR TREK: "Legacy" - REV. 9/18/90 - TEASER 1D. D1 CONTINUED: RIKER (continuing) How many cards are left? Data fans them slightly, counting as he does so. DATA Eleven. RIKER Pick five. Data does so. RIKER (continuing) Throw them away. Data puts them aside. Six remain in front of them. RIKER (continuing) Choose three. Data does so. RIKER (continuing) Now pick one of those. Data picks one. RIKER (continuing) Turn it over. Data does so -- it is the Jack of Hearts. Troi and Worf appear astonished. RIKER (knowing the answer) Is that your card? TROI Incredible. Riker smiles and moves to pull the large pile of chips towards his side of the table. STAR TREK: "Legacy" - REV. 9/18/90 - TEASER 1E. D1 CONTINUED: (2) DATA You surreptitiously placed the edge of your left thumb onto the card immediately after I inserted it back into the deck. When you divided the deck to reshuffle, you kept that card on top. You thus were able to have me either discard or save depending on the card's location, which you followed at each step. Until we were left with one -- the card I originally chose. Riker scowls, beaten. Data reaches his arms out and starts pulling the pile of chips towards his side. DATA Sir, I think under the circumstances... PICARD'S COM VOICE Picard to Riker. RIKER (to com) Captain? PICARD'S COM VOICE We've received a distress call. Changing course to intercept... 1 EXT. SPACE - THE ENTERPRISE (OPTICAL) Speeding at high warp through space. PICARD (V.O.) Captain's log, stardate 44215.2. The Enterprise has bypassed its scheduled archaelogical survey of Camus Two in response to a distress call from a Federation freighter. The Arcos has assumed an emergency orbit around Turkana Four, birthplace of our late comrade Tasha Yar. STAR TREK: "Legacy" - REV. 9/18/90 - TEASER 1F. 2 INT. BRIDGE PICARD, RIKER, DATA, WORF and TROI at their stations. A supernumerary is at the Conn. DATA We will enter the Turkana system in eleven minutes, Captain. PICARD Engine status. DATA Stable. But we have maintained warp factor nine for longer than is recommended. Picard notes Data's report with a nod. WORF Subspace message from the Arcos. Their transmitter is failing, sir. Audio only. PICARD Let's hear it. STAR TREK: "Legacy" - REV. 8/28/90 - TEASER 2. 2 CONTINUED: Worf touches a control and the voice of crewman TAN TSU is heard on audio, fuzzing in and out of a rough transmission. TAN TSU'S VOICE Enterprise, this is Tan Tsu, Arcos engineer. Estimate five minutes till warp drive containment breach. A small explosion can be heard in the background, momentarily disrupting the audio. It returns with even less quality than before. TAN TSU'S VOICE (continuing) Make that three minutes. Thanks for trying, Enterprise... The transmission fritzes out completely. Picard reacts, turns to the supernumerary. PICARD Warp nine-point-three, Ensign. The supernumerary works the controls. The ship hums around them. PICARD How much time? DATA Seven minutes and fifteen seconds will bring us within transporter range. PICARD Go to warp nine-point-six. The supernumerary touches the controls. 3 thru OMITTED 4 5 EXT. SPACE - THE ENTERPRISE (OPTICAL) Flashing at warp speed across a field of stars. STAR TREK: "Legacy" - REV. 8/28/90 - TEASER 3. 6 INT. BRIDGE Data at his instruments. DATA Entering the Turkana System, Captain. PICARD (to com) Mister O'Brien, prepare to lock onto the two crewmen. O'BRIEN'S COM VOICE Aye, Captain. 6A OMITTED 6B INT. BRIDGE Picard glances at the Conn. PICARD Drop to impulse. The ensign at Conn takes the ship out of warp. DATA Visual contact. RIKER (to com) Get them out of there, O'Brien. 7 INSERT VIEWSCREEN (OPTICAL) A field of stars and a reddish planet, Turkana Four. We're close enough to barely make out in the far distance, a ship in orbit around the planet. As we watch, the ship explodes in what from this distance, looks like a delicate, silent, flash of color. RIKER O'Brien, status! STAR TREK: "Legacy" - REV. 8/27/90 - TEASER 4. 7A INT. TRANSPORTER ROOM O'Brien at the instrument panel. O'BRIEN (to com) There's nothing to lock onto, Commander. 8 INT. BRIDGE (OPTICAL) The bridge crew reacts. DATA I am reading an ion trail characteristic of a freighter escape pod. Data continues working his instrument panel. Worf is working his controls as well. WORF (to Picard) Unable to establish contact. PICARD It could have been damaged by the explosion. They may have been incapable of maintaining orbit. RIKER Let's hope they stay clear of the colony. Data looks up from his instruments. DATA That is exactly where the ion trail leads, Commander. PICARD Hail the colony. STAR TREK: "Legacy" - REV. 8/28/90 - TEASER 5. 8 CONTINUED: A beat. Riker looks concerned. WORF I've been trying to, Captain... No response. RIKER (to Picard) There haven't been reliable communications since the government fell apart. DATA The last Federation vessel to attempt contact was the Potemkin six years ago. They were warned that anyone transporting down to the colony would be killed. A beat. PICARD Ready your away team, Number One. Picard stares with concern at the red planet on the viewscreen in front of him. FADE OUT. END OF TEASER STAR TREK: "Legacy" - REV. 9/5/90 - ACT ONE 6. ACT ONE FADE IN: 9 OMITTED 9A EXT. SPACE - THE ENTERPRISE (OPTICAL) in orbit. PICARD (V.O.) Captain's log, supplemental. We are in orbit above Turkana Four, an Earth colony that severed relations with the Federation nearly fifteen years ago. I am concerned about sending an away team, but if we are to discover the fate of the two missing Federation crewmen, I see no alternative. 10 INT. TRANSPORTER ROOM (OPTICAL) Riker, Data and Worf are entering the transporter room. O'Brien is at his controls. Beverly is waiting for them, medical kit in hand. Worf seems concerned with her presence. DATA The surface settlement appears to be all but destroyed. Sensors show that the colonists now live in structures that extend nearly three kilometers beneath the city. RIKER Have you located the escape pod's landing point, Chief? O'BRIEN Yessir... three hundred meters beyond the colony perimeter... Riker nods. Worf turns to him. WORF (re: Beverly) Sir, we can anticipate a violent response to our presence. (MORE) STAR TREK: "Legacy" - REV. 9/5/90 - ACT ONE 6A. 10 CONTINUED: WORF (Cont'd) Perhaps the Doctor should wait here for our signal. BEVERLY (an edge) I appreciate the concern. But I think it's exaggerated. WORF Doctor, the colony is completely lawless. Lieutenant Yar spoke of rape gangs... BEVERLY Mister Worf, I can handle myself. RIKER (a decision) She's coming. The Arcos crewmen may require immediate medical assistance. Worf nods. Riker pulls his phaser, adjusts the setting. RIKER Phasers on maximum stun. The away team members step onto the transporter pads and take out their phasers, adjusting the settings. When they are set, with phasers in firing position -- STAR TREK: "Legacy" - REV. 8/30/90 - ACT ONE 7. 10 CONTINUED: (2) RIKER (continuing) Energize. O'Brien works the controls and the away team DEMATERIALIZES. 11 EXT. TURKANA FOUR CITY - DAY - MATTE SHOT (OPTICAL) of a bombed-out 24th century version of the South Bronx. 12 INT. ENTRANCE TO TUNNEL A wide, partially fallen-in tunnel. The away team ENTERS cautiously from outside, phasers ready. Data is reading his tricorder. DATA The dispersion trail continues in this direction. He stops to double-check his readings. Then turns slightly with the tricorder, pointing with it. DATA (continuing) The concentration gradient definitely increases along this vector. He indicates a direction. DATA (continuing) The escape pod was apparently moved into the tunnels ahead of us. WORKMEN walk by carrying several cannisters. They give the away team half-a-look, avoid them, and go on with their business. Several CIVILIAN-LOOKING INDIVIDUALS approach from the other direction, again giving the away team a wide berth and attempting no contact. It suggests a city street. Pedestrian traffic. The Federation officers seem surprised, and lower their phasers. Riker glances towards Worf. STAR TREK: "Legacy" - REV. 8/30/90 - ACT ONE 8. 12 CONTINUED: RIKER Not the response we expected. BEVERLY Maybe things have changed here. Suddenly, all hell breaks loose around them. Alarms go off; the three workmen dive for cover; FOUR COALITION MEN and ONE COALITION WOMAN in their early to mid-twenties come hurrying around a corner. One is carrying a small crate in his arms, one of the others has a phaser, the remaining three carry nightstick-looking devices. The garments worn by three of them are torn in several places, as if in a fight that just happened. One of the men looks seriously injured, though still on his feet and moving; his shirt is torn across his chest. In the flurry of activity, we may notice a diamond-shaped bright orange/yellow solid glow, about an inch in diameter, on a spot under their garments just below the collar bone. They stop dead in their tracks, completely surprised at the sight of the away team directly in front of them, phasers now raised. The newcomers assume a ready stance with their weapons. The injured man slumps to his knees. Beverly goes to assist. She begins to examine the wounds. MAN #1 Identify yourselves. RIKER We're from the Federation Starship Enterprise. We tracked two crewmen to this area. Do you know anything about them? MAN #1 Possibly. The others in his group are glancing anxiously around. RIKER What do you mean? MAN #1 It depends on what you have to offer in return. STAR TREK: "Legacy" - REV. 8/24/90 - ACT ONE 9. 12A thru OMITTED 12B 12C ANGLE ON THE WOUNDED MAN as his diamond-shaped orange/yellow glow suddenly pulses beneath the skin -- right where his shirt has been ripped open. Almost as one body, the group suddenly turn towards a corridor opening. The other Coalition members are pulsing as well. MAN #1 They found us. 12D RIKER AND WORF react to the pulsing, glance at each other. WORF (to Riker, re: the glow) Proximity detectors. I've seen them used on Manu Three. A beat later we hear shouting and a couple of phasers firing from the corridor. MAN #1 (to Riker) Follow me. He and his group take off down an opposite corridor. Riker pauses for a moment, makes a decision. RIKER Come on. The away team follows quickly after them. (NOTE: re the detectors: whenever a gang member is in foreign territory, it glows. When an enemy begins to approach, it pulses.) 13 INT. TUNNEL INTERSECTION (OPTICAL) A spare, meeting ground area, with a few crates serving as objects to sit on or lean against -- a very casual guerrilla look. HAYNE, late-twenties, tough, charming and charismatic, is checking out the contents of the box his men just stole. STAR TREK: "Legacy" - REV. 8/23/90 - ACT ONE 9A. 13 CONTINUED: The away team stands in front of him, surrounded in the background by several male and female Coalition members who don't appear particularly threatened by their appearance. Since the members are back in their own territory, the orange/yellow glows are no longer activated, and are therefore invisible. Man #1 is near Hayne. STAR TREK: "Legacy" - REV. 8/28/90 - ACT ONE 10. 13 CONTINUED: (2) HAYNE (to Riker) The Alliance is holding your men hostage, Commander Riker, not us. You can expect a ransom demand... RIKER The Alliance? HAYNE Our good friends. Some of his comrades give a low laugh. Hayne pulls out of the box a bottle of what looks like liquor. HAYNE (to his gang) Our "good friends" are going to be upset when they realize we took their last crate of Telluridan synthale. More laughter. Riker looks impatient. RIKER Maybe it would be easier if I contacted the authorities. HAYNE (flash of anger) We are the "authorities." Hayne quickly recovers his cool. Sets down the bottle and picks up one of the nightstick weapons, called a STUNSTICK, pointing it at a schematic wall-hanging of the city below the ground. The city is shaped like a sunken pyramid with the base at the lowest depth. HAYNE (continuing) The Coalition -- our cadre -- runs this side of the city. The Alliance controls the other. Take your choice. RIKER Are you offering to help? STAR TREK: "Legacy" - REV. 8/30/90 - ACT ONE 11. 13 CONTINUED: (3) HAYNE (nodding) In return for some... consideration. Phasers are in short supply down here. A starship isn't going to miss a few. Worf grunts with distrust. WORF That is no better than a ransom demand. HAYNE No matter what you give the Alliance, they'll eventually kill your crewmen anyway. With our help there's at least a chance you'll get them back alive. A beat. Hayne senses their hesitation. HAYNE All we're asking for is help in maintaining our defense. We're trying to keep the peace. Riker glances at the stolen crate, looks doubtful. RIKER Everything we've seen suggests otherwise. Hayne indicates the crate with a dismissive gesture. HAYNE A prank. The proximity implants prevent either side from doing any serious damage. Hayne taps the spot just below the center of his collar bone. Then he indicates the map. HAYNE (continuing) They warn us when an enemy is approaching. STAR TREK: "Legacy" - REV. 8/30/90 - ACT ONE 12. 13 CONTINUED: (4) WORF Then why do you need more phasers? HAYNE The Alliance just discovered a large cache of weapons. I just want to make things even. Preserve the peace. BEVERLY You keep using the word "peace." We've heard a different version of life on Turkana Four. HAYNE (bristling) Ancient history. (a beat) Where did you hear that? DATA A former crewmember was born here. Hayne considers that for a moment. HAYNE Where's he now? DATA She was killed in the line of duty. HAYNE (shrugs) That's as good a way to die as any. Hayne has inadvertently hit a nerve, but Riker does his best to hide it. HAYNE (continuing) As I said -- ancient history. This is now. And your men are in trouble. STAR TREK: "Legacy" - REV. 8/23/90 - ACT ONE 13. 13 CONTINUED: (5) RIKER We'll return to the Enterprise and consider your proposal. Hayne nods his acceptance. Then steps over and hands the bottle of synthale to Riker. HAYNE A gift for your Captain. Data quickly scans it with the tricorder, finding nothing amiss. Riker touches his insignia. RIKER Riker to Enterprise. Energize. The away team DISAPPEARS into the transporter beam. When they're gone, Hayne turns to his second-in- command. HAYNE I want everything there is to know about the starship Enterprise. 14 INT. BRIDGE Picard is examining the bottle from the colony; the away team is back and standing nearby. Bridge crew consists of Riker, Data, Worf, Beverly, Troi, and a supernumerary at the Conn. RIKER (re: the bottle) According to Hayne, the Coalition and the Alliance raid each other for supplies -- much of it non-essential. PICARD Why? WORF A battle exercise. RIKER (nodding) Their defenses apparently prevent deep strikes into each other's territory. Minor skirmishes are all that's left. STAR TREK: "Legacy" - REV. 8/27/90 - ACT ONE 14. 14 CONTINUED: PICARD "Coalition", "Alliance" -- it all sounds so reasonable. But you've described the behavior of urban street thugs. We certainly won't trade weapons for the crewmen. (beat) How do you suggest we deal with them? Picard sets down the bottle. RIKER We have to tell them something. WORF No promises. No denials. PICARD (nods in agreement) For now, Hayne's Coalition is our only safe access to the colony. Let's keep the door open and see where it leads. Worf glances down at his instrument panel. WORF Captain. Transmission from Turkana Four. Coming in on a secure channel. PICARD (surprised) On screen. 15 INSERT VIEWSCREEN (OPTICAL) A close shot of Hayne in the same location. A young woman, ISHARA, is standing next to and slightly behind him. She is early to mid-twenties, blonde, slender, athletic and attractive. STAR TREK: "Legacy" - REV. 8/23/90 - ACT ONE 15. 15 CONTINUED: HAYNE Hello, Enterprise. Commander Riker, would you introduce me to your Captain? 16 INT. BRIDGE - CONTINUOUS Riker glances at Picard, then toward the viewscreen. PICARD (to Hayne) I'm Captain Jean-Luc Picard. 17 INCLUDE VIEWSCREEN (OPTICAL) Hayne nods acknowledgement -- as one equal to another. HAYNE I have someone here you might like to meet. Ishara steps forward. HAYNE (continuing) This is Ishara... Ishara Yar. A beat as Ishara stares straight out from the viewscreen. ISHARA Tasha was my sister. OFF the Bridge crew's stunned reaction. FADE OUT. END OF ACT ONE STAR TREK: "Legacy" - REV. 8/24/90 - ACT TWO 16. ACT TWO FADE IN: 18 INT. BRIDGE The crew is staring at the viewscreen. 19 ANGLE ON VIEWSCREEN (INTERCUT AS NEEDED) (OPTICAAL) Hayne and Ishara looking at the crew. HAYNE There's an old saying, Captain. "The enemy of my enemy is my friend." I've decided it's in my best interest to help you get your men back. PICARD With nothing from us in return? HAYNE You could be forced into paying my adversary a ransom in weapons. I'll do anything I can to avoid that possibility. PICARD What do you propose? HAYNE (indicating Ishara) Ishara will be our liaison. ISHARA I know Alliance territory. I can help you with a rescue plan. A beat. PICARD One moment. Picard signals Worf to mute the channel. WORF Mute. STAR TREK: "Legacy" - REV. 8/28/90 - ACT TWO 17. 20 RESUME BRIDGE As Picard turns to his officers. PICARD Reactions? WORF I do not trust him. RIKER She could be a fake. We mentioned that a former member of the crew had come from the colony. BEVERLY (nodding) All Hayne had to do was search through whatever their database had on Starfleet to come up with Tasha's name. PICARD Counsellor? TROI He's being deceptive, and he's clearly hoping to manipulate us. As for the young woman's identity, I can't tell. Picard considers for a moment, makes a decision. PICARD Regardless, this is an option we cannot neglect. We'll continue on other fronts as they present themselves. For now, let's see what she has to say. Picard turns to Worf, who touches his panel. WORF Open. 21 INSERT VIEWSCREEN (INTERCUT AS NEEDED) (OPTICAL) Hayne and Ishara. PICARD I've decided to accept your proposal. STAR TREK: "Legacy" - REV. 8/24/90 - ACT TWO 17A. 21 CONTINUED: HAYNE Thank you. He glances from Ishara back to Picard. HAYNE (continuing) Good luck. OFF Picard's stone serious face. STAR TREK: "Legacy" - REV. 8/30/90 - ACT TWO 18. 22 INT. TRANSPORTER ROOM (OPTICAL) CLOSE ON Ishara, MATERIALIZING on the transporter pad. Data is waiting for her when she steps off. She takes note of his appearance. DATA Welcome to the Enterprise, Ishara. I am Commander Data. ISHARA You're not human. DATA I am an android. Ishara glances at him. ISHARA Built for fighting... ? DATA (reacts) On what do you base that assumption? ISHARA A cybernetic device serving on a starship... DATA The Enterprise is not a ship of war. It is a ship of exploration. This doesn't particularly intrigue her -- in fact, she seems on the whole somewhat emotionally disconnected. NOT HARSH -- just missing something. Though there is an undercurrent of woundedness or vulnerability beneath it all that she does her best to hide. ISHARA The first thing to do is help you map the colony. (takes out chip) This is a general grid of the tunnel systems. I can fill in the specific details from memory. STAR TREK: "Legacy" - REV. 8/30/90 - ACT TWO 18A. 22 CONTINUED: DATA My orders are to escort you to the Observation Lounge. We will proceed from there. She nods assent, and they head for the door. 23 INT. CORRIDOR Data and Ishara are walking away from the transporter room. DATA Your sister never spoke of you. ISHARA That's not surprising. Data glances at her. STAR TREK: "Legacy" - REV. 8/24/90 - ACT TWO 19. 23 CONTINUED: DATA It is surprising to me. Tasha and I spent much time together in the course of our duties. We had a considerable number of conversations. Ishara studies him for a moment. ISHARA Did she talk at all about the colony? DATA Only to say that she was lucky to have escaped. ISHARA (matter of factly) It wasn't luck. It was cowardice. Data looks surprised. DATA "Cowardice" is a term that I have never heard applied to Tasha. She glances at him -- a shift of the head and a look in her eyes that Data seems to recognize. She picks up on it. ISHARA Is something wrong? DATA No. It is just that for a moment, the expression on your face was reminiscent of your sister. This seems to strike a place of vulnerability in her, but she covers it immediately, turning away from him, and speaking in her even, unemotional tone. ISHARA It's been fifteen years. I don't even remember what she looked like... 24 INT. OBSERVATION LOUNGE The door slides open and Data ENTERS with Ishara. STAR TREK: "Legacy" - REV. 8/24/90 - ACT TWO 20. 24A ANGLE ON THE SENIOR STAFF Waiting in the room. Picard, Riker, Troi, Geordi, Beverly. They can't help but stare at her for a couple of silent beats -- almost as if looking for some sign of Tasha. 24B RESUME Ishara reacts to their gaze. ISHARA You don't believe I'm Tasha's sister. PICARD We have considered that possibility. ISHARA I'm not surprised. You can sample my DNA if you like. BEVERLY Thank you, I will. Picard indicates a chair. PICARD Please. Sit down. Ishara takes a seat, Data does the same. Troi studies her carefully, trying to get a sense of her. PICARD Perhaps it would help if you gave us some idea of what we're dealing with on Turkana Four. Our last information describes a colony in complete disarray. ISHARA It started falling apart almost thirty years ago. There were dozens of factions. They fought until the city above ground was in ruins. RIKER The Coalition and the Alliance are all that's left? STAR TREK: "Legacy" - REV. 8/27/90 - ACT TWO 20A. 24B CONTINUED: ISHARA (nodding) We were the two strongest factions... When the government couldn't stop the violence, they gave us police powers. The proximity detectors were originally designed by the government to keep us under control. PICARD Apparently, that part of the plan didn't succeed very well. ISHARA No. After a few months, we didn't need the government any more. STAR TREK: "Legacy" - REV. 8/24/90 - ACT TWO 21. 24B CONTINUED: (2) GEORDI Tasha left you in the middle of all that? A beat. Ishara's voice grows quieter. ISHARA She didn't abandon me, if that's what you mean. Tasha asked me to go with her. But I had already joined the Coalition. They were my family. The group reacts to her admission. She looks at Picard, voice still quiet, doing her best to hide her difficulty with this subject. ISHARA (continuing, to Picard) Captain, we don't have a lot of time. Maybe we should get started. Before Picard can respond, the COM comes on. WORF'S COM VOICE Incoming transmission from the colony, Captain. PICARD On screen. 25 INSERT WALLSCREEN (OPTICAL) TAN TSU, one of the missing crewmen, is facing the viewer. He looks a bit bruised and battered from the crash. TAN TSU (strained) Enterprise, I'm being held by the Turkana Four Alliance. I've been instructed to say that you have twenty hours to make reparations for Federation intrusion into this colony. (a beat) Or my pilot and I will be killed. STAR TREK: "Legacy" - REV. 8/24/90 - ACT TWO 21A. 25 CONTINUED: BEVERLY (to screen) Ask them if we can at least send a medical -- The screen goes blank. STAR TREK: "Legacy" - REV. 8/29/90 - ACT TWO 22. 26 INT. OBSERVATION LOUNGE - CONTINUOUS ISHARA Take that threat seriously, Captain. They'll torture them and then they'll kill them. My cadre has never recovered a hostage alive from the Alliance. She has everyone's attention. ISHARA (continuing) Your crewmen could be held in any number of places. The Alliance has two main headquarters and thirteen ancillary bases of operation. All underground. All heavily guarded. GEORDI If I could get to the myographic scanner... ISHARA What's that? DATA A sensing device on the escape pod. It monitors the bio-electric signatures of the crew. In the event they get separated from the pod. GEORDI I could install a booster on the device that would relay its signals to the Enterprise. Then we could track the men from up here. PICARD Unfortunately, we don't know where the escape pod is. ISHARA Level Three-C, Section five-four-seven. (a smile off their surprise) We have our sources. STAR TREK: "Legacy" - REV. 8/27/90 - ACT TWO 23. 27 INT. ENGINEERING - C.U. ON TABLE MONITOR A schematic computer display version of the map we saw in Coalition headquarters. ISHARA (O.S) Access tunnels are here... 28 PULL BACK TO INCLUDE Riker, Data, Geordi, Worf and Ishara gathered around a large flat screen, as Ishara indicates various locations. She seems much more comfortable now that they are deep in "work" mode. ISHARA ... and here. They lean back from the table screen. RIKER (pointing) We could transport an away team right into this intersection... ISHARA Don't underestimate them, Commander. They'll be ready for that... I've seen them use this kind of strategy before. Riker gives her a questioning look. ISHARA (continuing) I know it looks isolated and easily accessible... But my guess is they have hundreds of men on the levels above and below waiting for you to make your move. STAR TREK: "Legacy" - REV. 8/24/90 - ACT TWO 24. 28 CONTINUED: A beat. WORF We'll need a diversion. GEORDI Transport a couple of photon grenades into the adjoining chambers. At minimum intensity it wouldn't kill anybody, just shake them up a lot. RIKER That won't give us enough time. We need something that'll occupy them long enough for you to install the relay. A beat. Ishara indicates the map. ISHARA Transport me into this corridor. My magnetic implant will set off the defense alarms. They'll think it's a raid by the Coalition. RIKER Too dangerous. We've seen what those tunnels look like. You could easily be cut off from the rest of us. (to Worf) Worf, if we -- ISHARA -- Commander Riker. (beat) I was ordered to assist you in any way possible. That doesn't mean "as long as it's safe, or convenient." Riker can't help but be impressed by her courage -- but he's still hesitant. ISHARA (continuing) If you had the time, we could come up with another plan. (MORE) STAR TREK: "Legacy" - REV. 8/30/90 - ACT TWO 25. 28 CONTINUED: (2) ISHARA (Cont'd) But you don't. Right now, I'm your best option. Riker glances at the others. DATA She would have to be armed, Commander. Riker considers. RIKER I want to discuss this with the Captain. (to Data) Mister Data, take Ishara to see Doctor Crusher. Ishara nods her assent. 28A INT. SICKBAY Ishara is sitting on a diagnostic bed as Beverly slowly brushes an instrument over the inside of the young woman's arm. (NOTE: The instrument does touch the skin) Data is standing nearby. ISHARA You have Tasha's DNA on file? BEVERLY The ship's computer does. (re: Ishara's arm) There's always some differentiation in the somatic chromosomes -- but it's not enough to affect the results. Beverly finishes with the instrument. BEVERLY (to Data) It'll take me a few hours to run the isomorphic comparison. Dr. Crusher steps away, heading towards the lab. ISHARA (to Data) That wasn't too bad. STAR TREK: "Legacy" - REV. 8/30/90 - ACT TWO 25A. 28A CONTINUED: A beat as Ishara glances around the Sickbay. ISHARA (continuing; evenly) So, all that's left of my sister is a file in a computer... DATA Tasha exists in our memories as well. ISHARA How did she die? DATA Lieutenant Yar was killed on Vagra Two by a malevolent entity. ISHARA In battle? DATA No... she was killed as a demonstration of the creature's power. Without provocation. ISHARA (sad laugh) That's not how I intend to die. The door opens and Riker ENTERS. RIKER The Captain approves. You're with us. Off her reaction. 29 INT. CHAMBER - ESCAPE POD A half-fallen down tunnel area similar to what the away team saw earlier. A slender, three-meter-long, heavily- damaged escape pod is in the center of the area, guarded by TWO ALLIANCE MEN AND ONE ALLIANCE WOMAN, mid-twenties, armed with one phaser and two stunsticks. 29A ANGLE ON RIKER, DATA, WORF, AND GEORDI Hidden behind a projection, having just transported down. STAR TREK: "Legacy" - REV. 8/30/90 - ACT TWO 25B. 29A CONTINUED: RIKER (touches insignia, quietly) Enterprise, we're in position. 29B INT. ADJOINING CORRIDOR (OPTICAL) A beat on a silent, deserted tunnel. Ishara suddenly MATERIALIZES, phaser drawn. As soon as the Transporter beam clears, the implant beneath her collar bone begins to glow its characteristic bright orange/yellow. Simultaneously, a piercing alarm goes off in the tunnel around her. 29C INT. CHAMBER - ESCAPE POD (OPTICAL) The Alliance guards at the pod appear dumbfounded at the alarm wailing distantly offscreen. It is followed by a second. And a third. Three more Alliance members come running in from adjoining tunnels, confused about what's happening. The female guard motions to them to follow her, and they all run toward the alarms, weapons ready, leaving the two male guards behind at the pod. Riker, Data and Worf simultaneously come out from behind a slight wall and stun the two remaining men. Geordi steps out carrying a toolkit-sized box of equipment. They all head straight for the escape pod. When they get there, Riker, Data, and Worf stand guard as Geordi reaches underneath with the equipment. 30 INT. ADJOINING CORRIDOR Alarms are blaring. Ishara moves around a projection, phaser at ready. STAR TREK: "Legacy" - REV. 9/5/90 - ACT TWO 26. 30 CONTINUED: She turns slightly to her left, sensing something as the orange/yellow diamond glow below her collar bone suddenly begins to pulse. She immediately runs in the opposite direction. As she disappears around a corner, the four Alliance members arrive from the left. They cautiously move forward. One of the Alliance members pauses at the corner and shifts towards the left -- a diamond shape below his collar bone suddenly pulses GREEN. (As with Ishara, his shirt is open enough at the neck to expose the spot. The other Alliance members are pulsing GREEN beneath their shirts.) He silently indicates the others to fan out as they head after her, splitting up behind the various low walls and projections and debris as they do so. 31 INT. CHAMBER - ESCAPE POD - ON GEORDI as he works beneath the pod. There is a sudden crackling noise. GEORDI Damn! RIKER (O.S.) Geordi -- what's taking so long? 32 INCLUDE RIKER, DATA AND WORF As Geordi looks up momentarily from the work. GEORDI There's a lot of damage here... The myographic scanner is operational, but the power source is fluctuating. RIKER Can you fix it? GEORDI I can try to run a shunt from the convertor. STAR TREK: "Legacy" - REV. 9/5/90 - ACT TWO 26A. 32 CONTINUED: RIKER How long will that take? GEORDI (shrugs) Ten minutes? RIKER Do it. Geordi gets back to work. Riker is aware of the distant alarms. RIKER (touches insignia) O'Brien! Lock onto Ishara and get her out of here! 33 INT. TRANSPORTER O'Brien is desperately working the controls. O'BRIEN (to com) There's a transformer substation directly above the chamber she just entered. It's masking her signal. STAR TREK: "Legacy" - REV. 8/28/90 - ACT TWO 27. 34 INT. CHAMBER - ESCAPE POD RIKER (touches insignia) Standby! (to others) Stay here and cover La Forge. WORF (concerned) Commander -- RIKER That's an order. Return to the ship when you're finished here. I'll signal for transport as soon as I can. Riker takes off for a corridor. 35 INT. ADJOINING CORRIDOR (OPTICAL) Ishara is creeping along behind a series of projections, the alarms